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Compelled to Read | Story Content |
Character Development
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Scene Elements |
Audience Engagement
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Technical Aspects |
1 - Deadpool's Return: A Snowy Reflection
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
9 / 7
| 5 / 5 |
7 |
2 | 6.5 |
6 |
0 | 5 | 1 | 1 | 0 | 0.5 | 1 | 7 | 3 |
8 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 3 |
2 - Deadpool's Grave Digger Blues
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 8 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 4 | 2 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 4 |
7 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 |
3 - Deadpool's Chaotic Farewell
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7.5 | 8 | 4 |
7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 9 | 6.5 |
4 - Bone-Breaking Mayhem
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Execution are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
7.2 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
9 |
6 | 8.5 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 4 |
7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
5 - A Job Interview with the Avengers
| Low on its ownDeliveryDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 4 / 6 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 6 |
8 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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6 - Wade 2.0: The Unlikely Salesman
| ReworkDeliveryDesign is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.2 |
9 / 8
| 4 / 6 |
8 |
4 | 7 |
7 |
1 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 8 | 4 |
7 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 5.5 |
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7 - A Suit in the Locker
| Low on its ownTransitionDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5.5 / 6 |
7 |
5 | 6.5 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 5 | 6 |
8 | 6 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
8 - A Birthday Masked in Sarcasm
| ReworkRitualRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
5 | 7 |
8 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
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9 - A Heartfelt Birthday Celebration
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
5 | 6 |
7 |
2 | 7.5 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 6 | 7 |
8 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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10 - Time-Traveling Tangles
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 4 |
8 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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11 - Awakening in the TVA
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 7
| 6 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 | 5 | 6 | 3 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 6 |
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12 - Wade's Marvelous Awakening
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 9
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 3 | 1 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 4 |
8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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13 - Deadpool's Dilemma: A Fashionable Escape
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
8.5 / 8
| 8.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8.5 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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14 - Deadpool's Clumsy Clash
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 4 |
8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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15 - Deadpool's Hairy Encounter
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.2 |
9 / 8
| 5.5 / 6.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
5 |
1 | 5 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 4 | 8 | 3 |
6 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
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16 - Deadpool's Casino Chaos
| ReworkPursuitDesign is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
6.5 / 6
| 6 / 6.5 |
8 |
6 | 8 |
6 |
2 | 4 | 8 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 9 | 4 |
7 | 7 | 6 | 6.5 | 5 |
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17 - Rescue Mission at the Bar
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5.5 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 4.5 | 5 | 7 | 5 |
8 | 6.5 | 6 | 9 | 6.5 |
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18 - Deadpool's Desperate Gamble
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 9
| 9 / 8.5 |
7 |
6 | 8 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 |
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19 - Desperate Alliances in The Void
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 7.5 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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20 - The Wasteland Showdown
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 7.5
| 8 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 4 |
8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6.5 |
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21 - Flames, Fights, and Funny Quips
| PolishContestNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
8.5 / 7.5
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
5 | 6.5 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5.5 | 7 | 3 |
7 | 6 | 6.5 | 8 | 5.5 |
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22 - Desert Duel and the Void's Threat
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 5 |
7 | 7.5 | 7 | 8.5 | 7 |
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23 - Chains of Fate
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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24 - Disintegration and Dark Humor
| PolishNegotiationNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
6 |
1 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 5.5 |
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25 - Buried Fears
| PolishInvestigationNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.7 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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26 - The Breaking Point
| PolishRelationship shiftNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
8.5 / 8
| 8.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7.5 |
8 |
2 | 8.5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 2 | 8 | 8 |
9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
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27 - Escape from the Skeletal Arena
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 7.5 | 6.5 | 7 | 6.5 |
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28 - Cliffside Antics
| PolishTransitionNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
6 |
7 | 5 |
7 |
1 | 4 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 7 | 5 | 2 |
8 | 7 | 7.5 | 9 | 6 |
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29 - Diner of Disillusionment
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 4.5 / 6.5 |
8 |
5 | 7.5 |
9 |
5 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 7 | 8 |
8 | 7 | 7 | 8.5 | 7.5 |
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30 - Navigating Tensions and Terrain
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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31 - A Canine Conundrum
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5.5 / 6.5 |
8 |
4 | 8 |
6 |
1 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 9 | 4 |
8 | 7 | 6 | 8.5 | 6 |
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32 - Minivan Mayhem
| PolishTransitionNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
9.5 / 8
| 4 / 6.5 |
7 |
3 | 7 |
6 |
1 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 5 | 4 |
7 | 6 | 5 | 9 | 6 |
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33 - Road Trip Tensions
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
5 | 6 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 3.5 | 3 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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34 - Clash in the Odyssey
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 9
| 8 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
8 |
5 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 |
9 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | 8 |
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35 - Minivan Mayhem: Wolverine vs. Deadpool
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 6.5 |
7 |
3 | 7.5 |
7 |
1 | 4 | 5 | 9 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 7 | 3 |
8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 5 |
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36 - Unlikely Allies in the Void
| PolishRecruitmentNo lens is broken, but Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 4 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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37 - Flickering Shadows of Regret
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
5 | 6 |
8 |
2 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 7 | 8 |
7 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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38 - Cassandra's Gambit
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 6.5 |
6 |
6 | 5 |
5 |
1 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 3 |
7 | 6 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
|
39 - Wasteland Assault
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
6 |
1 | 2 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 6.5 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 7.5 | 8 | 8.5 | 7 |
|
40 - Final Stand in the Arena
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7.5 | 8 | 4 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
|
41 - Chaos in the Arena
| PolishContestNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
7 / 7
| 8 / 7.5 |
6 |
5 | 5.5 |
5 |
2 | 3 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7.5 | 7 | 6 | 5 |
3 | 6.5 | 6 | 7 | 5 |
|
42 - Confronting Shadows
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 9
| 8 / 8.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
8 |
7 | 9 | 2 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 4.5 | 8 | 8 |
8 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8.5 | 7 |
|
43 - Chaos and Confrontation
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
|
44 - The Dilemma of Mercy
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
8 |
7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 7.5 |
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45 - Race Against Oblivion
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
6 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
|
46 - Superhero Shenanigans and Dark Betrayal
| PolishInvestigationNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 4 / 7 |
7 |
4 | 7 |
7 |
1 | 5 | 3 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 8 | 4 |
8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
|
47 - Chaos at the TVA Outpost
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9.5 / 8.5
| 8.5 / 8 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
1 | 2 | 6 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8.5 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
|
48 - Manipulation of Time
| ReworkPursuitRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 7
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | 7 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
|
49 - Deadpool Variants Assemble
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7.5 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 4 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 |
|
50 - A Shield of Absurdity
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 6.5 |
7 |
4 | 7 |
6 |
1 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 7 | 3 |
7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
|
51 - Deadpool vs. Deadpool: A Hilarious Showdown
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
4 | 5 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 4 |
7 | 7.5 | 8 | 6 | 7 |
|
52 - Peterpool's Triumph
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 8.5 |
7 |
3 | 2 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 8 | 5 |
7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
|
53 - Sacrifice and Shenanigans
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 8.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
1 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 3 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 5 |
6 | 6 | 5.5 | 7.5 | 5.5 |
|
54 - Sacrifice on the Subway Tracks
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 9
| 9 / 8.5 |
8 |
7 | 8 |
9 |
8 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 |
55 - Circuit of Destiny
| PolishPayload momentNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 8.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
56 - Resurrection and Accountability
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
8.5 / 8
| 5 / 6 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 7.5 |
57 - Bittersweet Farewell Over Shawarma
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
7.5 |
9.5 / 9
| 3 / 5 |
7 |
5 | 6 |
8 |
4 | 7.5 | 6 | 2 | 0 | 4 | 2 | 5 | 8 |
8 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
|
58 - A Day of Friends and Laughter
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 3 / 4 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 7 |
8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8.5 | 7 |
|
59 - Moments of Connection
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 2 / 3 |
7 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 8 | 7 | 1 | 0 | 2 | 1 | 8 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
|
60 - Rants and Revenge
| ReworkDeliveryDesign is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 4 / 6.5 |
7 |
3 | 8 |
7 |
0 | 6 | 7 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 7 | 3 |
8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 |
Scene by Scene Emotions
suspense Analysis
Executive Summary
Suspense is effectively woven throughout the screenplay, particularly in scenes where Deadpool and Wolverine face imminent threats, such as the confrontation with the TVA Minutemen and the looming danger of Cassandra Nova. The stakes are consistently high, creating a palpable tension that keeps the audience engaged. However, the comedic tone often diffuses the suspense, leading to a unique blend of humor and tension that characterizes the narrative.
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fear Analysis
Executive Summary
Fear is portrayed in a nuanced manner throughout the screenplay, often intertwined with humor. The characters face significant threats, such as the TVA Minutemen and Cassandra Nova, which evoke a sense of dread. However, the comedic tone frequently mitigates the fear, creating a unique dynamic that reflects Deadpool's character. This blend can be effective but may also dilute the emotional impact of fear in certain scenes.
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joy Analysis
Executive Summary
Joy is a prominent emotion in the screenplay, often manifested through Deadpool's humor and playful interactions with other characters. The comedic elements provide a refreshing contrast to the darker themes of loss and sacrifice, allowing the audience to engage with the characters on a lighter level. However, the juxtaposition of joy with moments of sadness and tension creates a complex emotional landscape that enhances the narrative.
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sadness Analysis
Executive Summary
Sadness is a recurring theme in the screenplay, often intertwined with moments of joy and humor. The characters grapple with loss, regret, and emotional turmoil, particularly in relation to their pasts and relationships. This emotional depth adds complexity to the narrative, allowing the audience to connect with the characters on a more profound level. However, the balance between sadness and humor can sometimes feel uneven, impacting the overall emotional flow.
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surprise Analysis
Executive Summary
Surprise plays a significant role in the screenplay, often manifesting through unexpected character interactions and plot twists. The use of surprise keeps the audience engaged and adds an element of unpredictability to the narrative. However, the effectiveness of surprise can vary depending on the context, with some moments feeling more impactful than others.
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empathy Analysis
Executive Summary
Empathy is a crucial emotional element in the screenplay, allowing viewers to connect with the characters' struggles, desires, and relationships. The emotional depth of the narrative is enriched by moments of vulnerability and reflection, particularly in scenes where characters confront their pasts or grapple with loss. However, the balance between humor and emotional weight can sometimes feel uneven, impacting the overall effectiveness of empathy in the story.
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