the 5th element
Executive Summary
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USP: This imaginative sci-fi actioner, set across the sprawling expanse of time and space, tells a captivating tale of an impending cosmic evil, ancient prophecies, and the power of the human spirit to fight for the greater good. Equal parts thrilling and thought-provoking, this unique screenplay combines elements of science fiction, action, and philosophy to create a world where heroes emerge from unexpected places and the fate of humanity hangs in the balance. With its memorable characters, innovative storytelling techniques, and deeply resonant themes, this screenplay promises an unforgettable cinematic experience that will leave you questioning the nature of evil, the power of love, and the enduring resilience of the human will.
Overview
Genres: Science Fiction, Action, Adventure, Thriller, Comedy, Sci-Fi, Romance, Drama, Mystery, Fantasy
Setting: 1913, Nile River Valley in Egypt
Overview: The screenplay achieves a commendable overall score of 8.0, reflecting its strengths in character development, engaging dialogue, unique premise, and emotional impact. However, areas like premise clarity, pacing, and thematic depth present opportunities for further refinement to elevate the screenplay's quality and marketability.
Themes: Good vs. Evil, Love, Sacrifice, Identity, Environmentalism
Conflict and Stakes: There are no conflicts that arise in this scene.
Overall Mood: A mix of excitement, suspense, and awe as the characters unravel the ancient prophecy and face the impending evil.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: A sense of mystery and wonder as Omar enters the temple and discovers the ancient hieroglyphs.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: An ancient prophecy foretelling an impending evil that threatens to destroy the world.
- Plot Twist : The discovery that the ancient prophecy is real and the evil is already present on Earth.
- Unique Setting : An ancient Egyptian temple filled with secrets and dangers.
- Innovative Idea : The use of ancient hieroglyphs as a source of knowledge and power.
- Unique Characters : A diverse cast of characters with unique abilities and motivations.
- Genre Blend : A blend of science fiction, adventure, and action genres.
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Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$100 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-49, fans of science fiction, adventure, and action films.
Marketability: It has the potential to appeal to a wide audience and generate buzz due to its unique blend of genres and exploration of compelling themes. The presence of well-known actors would also likely increase its marketability.
The screenplay has a strong hook and unique concept, but the execution may be challenging and require a skilled director and cast to bring it to life successfully.
Profit Potential: High, due to its potential for strong box office returns and merchandising opportunities.
Scene Level Percentiles
This conceptually strong screenplay excels in plot and originality but could benefit from enhanced character development and emotional depth to fully engage the audience.
Screenplay Analysis
Key Strengths
Note: The ratings are the averages of all the scenes.
- The screenplay excels in concept and plot, ranking highly in 'conceptrating' (81.70%) and 'plotrating' (41.87%). This indicates a strong foundation for an engaging and well-structured story.
- The screenplay boasts a high 'originality_score' (87.5%), suggesting that it presents fresh and unique ideas that could set it apart from other works.
- With a 'stakes' score of 80.87% and a 'conflict_level' score of 75.20%, the screenplay effectively builds tension and drives the narrative forward, keeping the reader engaged and invested in the outcome.
- The screenplay's 'charactersrating' (3.25%) and 'dialoguerating' (24.79%) fall below the 50th percentile, indicating that character development and dialogue could benefit from further refinement.
- The 'emotional_impact' score of 30.08% suggests that the screenplay could explore emotional depth and resonance more effectively to connect with the audience on a deeper level.
The percentile patterns indicate a potentially conceptual writer, with high scores in concept and plot and lower scores in character and dialogue. This suggests a strength in crafting engaging stories with well-developed plots and concepts.
Balancing Elements- To balance the strong conceptual elements with character development, the writer could consider expanding character arcs, motivations, and relationships.
- Enhancing the emotional impact could involve deepening the emotional stakes for the characters and exploring their inner conflicts and growth.
Conceptual writer
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in concept, plot, and originality. By addressing the areas for improvement, particularly in character development and emotional impact, the writer has the potential to craft a well-rounded and engaging screenplay that captivates the audience.
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How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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Percentile | Before | After |
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| 9.50 | 97 | El Mariachi: 9.25 | fight Club: 9.50 | |
| Story Forward | 8.6 | 86 | Gladiator: 8.5 | the 5th element: 8.6 |
| Originality | 8.89 | 81 | The Fabelmans: 8.88 | the 5th element: 8.89 |
| Pacing | 8.55 | 79 | Fear and loathing in Las Vegas: 8.54 | the 5th element: 8.55 |
| Concept | 8.3 | 78 | Deep Cover: 8.2 | the 5th element: 8.3 |
| High Stakes | 8.4 | 77 | Memento: 8.3 | the 5th element: 8.4 |
| Engagement | 9.00 | 77 | Enemy of the State: 8.98 | fight Club: 9.00 |
| 8.25 | 75 | Battlefield Earth: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 | |
| 8.25 | 74 | KILLING ZOE: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 | |
| External Goal | 7.56 | 73 | The Good place release: 7.55 | the boys (TV): 7.56 |
| Conflict Level | 8.2 | 73 | Witness: 8.1 | the boys (TV): 8.2 |
| Unpredictability | 7.72 | 70 | Get Out: 7.71 | the boys (TV): 7.72 |
| 8.25 | 65 | Gladiator: 8.00 | Titanic: 8.25 | |
| Structure | 8.18 | 61 | Die Hard: 8.17 | the 5th element: 8.18 |
| Internal Goal | 8.05 | 57 | Passengers: 8.04 | the 5th element: 8.05 |
| Formatting | 8.19 | 52 | Narcos: 8.18 | the boys (TV): 8.19 |
| Overall | 8.3 | 47 | 2001: 8.2 | fight Club: 8.3 |
| Plot | 7.9 | 45 | 2001: 7.8 | the 5th element: 7.9 |
| 8.25 | 42 | The Hudsucker Proxy: 8.00 | Erin Brokovich: 8.25 | |
| 8.00 | 38 | Mo: 7.90 | fight Club: 8.00 | |
| 7.75 | 38 | The Hudsucker Proxy: 7.50 | fight Club: 7.75 | |
| Character Changes | 6.4 | 33 | 2001: 6.3 | the 5th element: 6.4 |
| 8.00 | 28 | Inside Out: 7.75 | Erin Brokovich: 8.00 | |
| 11344 | 27 | There's something about Mary: 11343 | the 5th element: 11344 | |
| Emotional Impact | 7.2 | 26 | House of cards pilot: 7.1 | the 5th element: 7.2 |
| Dialogue | 7.4 | 23 | Inside Out: 7.3 | face/off: 7.4 |
| 7.25 | 10 | Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog: 7.00 | the 5th element: 7.25 | |
| Characters | 7.7 | 4 | Ghostbusters: 7.6 | the 5th element: 7.7 |
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice in this screenplay is characterized by the blend of wit, imagination, and a touch of absurdity. The unique style of the writer manifests itself through sharp dialogue, paradoxes, dark humor, and a penchant for the unexpected.
Best representation: Scene Scene 17. Scene 17 effectively showcases the writer's unique voice through the intense confrontation between Zorg and Aknot. The scene is filled with sharp dialogue, dark humor, and a touch of the absurd. Zorg's manipulation and Aknot's stubbornness create a dynamic tension that highlights the writer's skill in crafting memorable and engaging confrontations.
Memorable Lines:
- ZORG: A case with four stones in it. Not one! Not two or three! But four!!! Four stones!!! What the fuck am I supposed to do with an EMPTY case?!! (Scene 17)
- Diva: Leeloo is the Fifth Element, the Supreme Being. She is more than just your wife. (Scene 43)
- Cornelius: The goal of evil is to wipe out life! All forms of life. For all eternity...Life upsets it. (Scene 7)
- Zorg: Life, which you so nobly serve, comes from destruction. (Scene 18)
- ZORG: Never be ashamed of who you are... You're warriors... be proud... (Scene 16)
Writing Style:
The writing style of the screenplay is characterized by a blend of action, humor, suspense, and philosophical themes. It features fast-paced dialogue, complex character dynamics, and high-stakes situations set in futuristic or unique settings.
Style Similarities:
- Luc Besson
- Christopher Nolan
Story Shape
Engine: Gemini
Screenplay Rating:
Consider
Executive Summary
The Fifth Element is a visually imaginative and action-packed science fiction screenplay with a unique blend of humor and heart. While the world-building and central characters are compelling, the screenplay could benefit from further character development, tighter plotting, and a more nuanced exploration of its themes.
Strengths
- Vivid and imaginative world-building creates a unique and memorable setting. high
- Fast-paced action sequences and comedic elements keep the audience engaged. high
- Leeloo is a compelling and unique character with a fascinating arc. high
- The screenplay blends elements of science fiction, action, and comedy effectively, creating a distinct genre mashup. medium
- Zorg's character, while villainous, provides dark humor and moments of unexpected depth. medium ( Scene 17 Scene 30 Scene 34 )
Areas of Improvement
- Korben's character development is somewhat shallow compared to Leeloo and could benefit from more exploration of his motivations and internal conflicts. high
- The plot relies heavily on coincidences and convenient plot devices, which can weaken the narrative structure. medium
- Some of the humor, particularly surrounding gender and sexuality, can feel outdated or offensive to modern audiences. medium
- The ending feels somewhat rushed, leaving certain plot points and character relationships unresolved. medium
- The screenplay's dialogue can sometimes be overly expositional or clichéd. low
MissingElements
- Further exploration of the Mondoshawan culture and their connection to the Fifth Element would add depth to the story's mythology. medium
- A deeper exploration of the nature of evil and its motivations would provide greater thematic weight. medium
NotablePoints
- The visual style and special effects described in the screenplay are crucial to the overall experience and would require significant attention in production. high
- The screenplay's unique blend of humor and action could appeal to a broad audience. medium
Engine: Claude
Screenplay Rating:
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'The Fifth Element' is a highly imaginative and engaging science fiction story that blends action, humor, and drama to create a compelling narrative. The world-building and visual scope of the story are impressive, and the central relationship between the characters of Korben and Leeloo is strongly developed, driving the emotional core of the narrative. While the pacing and introduction of the various factions could be improved in some areas, the screenplay's strengths, particularly its thrilling action sequences and unique, quirky style, make it a strong candidate for further development and potential adaptation.
Strengths
- The screenplay has a strong, imaginative science fiction premise that blends elements of action, humor, and drama. The world-building and visual scope of the story are compelling. high
- The interaction and character development between Korben and Leeloo is well-executed, creating an engaging central relationship with genuine emotional stakes. high ( Scene 18 Scene 28 )
- The action sequences are thrilling and well-choreographed, propelling the story forward while showcasing the characters' skills and abilities. high ( Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 37 )
- The screenplay effectively balances humor and levity with the more serious, high-stakes narrative, providing a well-rounded tonal experience. medium ( Scene 6 Scene 13 Scene 14 )
- The screenplay has a unique, quirky style and voice that sets it apart from more conventional science fiction stories. medium
Areas of Improvement
- The introduction of the various factions and their motivations could be more clearly established, as it can be somewhat confusing for the audience to keep track of the different groups and their goals. medium ( Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 )
- The pacing in the middle section of the screenplay can feel a bit uneven, with some scenes dragging while others move too quickly. A more consistent flow would improve the overall narrative. medium ( Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 22 )
- While the screenplay has a unique voice, some of the humor and quirkiness could be further refined to ensure it resonates more consistently with the audience. low
MissingElements
- The screenplay could benefit from a more in-depth exploration of the broader societal and technological context of the story's world, which would provide additional depth and context for the events unfolding. medium
- While the central relationship between Korben and Leeloo is strong, the screenplay could delve deeper into the personal motivations and backstories of some of the supporting characters to further enhance the ensemble. low
NotablePoints
- The scenes featuring Korben and Leeloo's growing connection and understanding of each other are highly compelling and emotionally resonant. high ( Scene 13 Scene 18 Scene 28 )
- The action set pieces, particularly the battle sequences, are visually impressive and showcase the screenplay's creativity and cinematic potential. high ( Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 37 )
- The inclusion of humor and quirky elements, such as the interactions with Loc Rhod and Korben's mother, provide a welcome balance to the more serious sci-fi elements. medium ( Scene 6 Scene 14 )
Engine: GPT4
Screenplay Rating:
Consider
Executive Summary
The screenplay of 'The 5th Element' presents a visually rich and imaginative science fiction world with a fast-paced narrative and engaging characters. While it excels in creativity and entertainment value, it could benefit from enhanced character development, smoother transitions, and a clearer thematic focus to deepen its impact.
Strengths
- The screenplay features a richly imaginative world with a unique blend of science fiction and fantasy elements that are visually compelling. high
- Strong opening and closing scenes that bookend the film with a sense of mystery and resolution, effectively capturing the audience's attention and providing a satisfying conclusion. high ( Scene 1 Scene 44 )
- Dynamic character development, particularly for Korben and Leeloo, whose relationship evolves meaningfully throughout the narrative. high ( Scene 14 Scene 34 )
- Effective use of humor and comedic elements that provide relief and balance to the high-stakes action and drama. medium ( Scene 27 Scene 36 )
- The screenplay maintains a fast-paced narrative that keeps the story engaging and exciting, with well-timed action sequences. high
Areas of Improvement
- Some plot points and character motivations could be clarified to enhance the story's coherence and emotional impact. medium
- Dialogue can sometimes feel forced or unnatural, detracting from character development and believability. medium
- The antagonist's motives and backstory could be more developed to provide a stronger narrative conflict and depth. medium
- Some scenes transition abruptly, which can be jarring and confusing, suggesting a need for smoother narrative transitions. low
- The screenplay could benefit from more quiet, introspective moments to allow character depth and thematic elements to resonate more with the audience. medium
MissingElements
- Lacks a strong thematic statement, which could tie the narrative elements together more cohesively and offer deeper commentary. medium
NotablePoints
- The screenplay's imaginative setting and detailed world-building are notable and provide a strong foundation for visual storytelling. high
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.25, The screenplay effectively develops its characters, showcasing depth, complexity, and transformation. The characters' arcs intertwine with the screenplay's themes, driving the narrative forward and enhancing the emotional resonance. However, there are areas where character development could be refined to increase audience connection and narrative impact. See More
Premise: 7.25, The screenplay's premise, while initially engaging with its blend of science fiction, adventure, and prophecy, suffers from a lack of clarity and focus in its early stages. The connection between the ancient Egyptian prophecy and the futuristic space opera setting needs to be more explicitly established, and the motivations of certain characters, like Zorg, require further development. However, the potential for intrigue and audience engagement is high due to its unique blend of genres and charismatic characters like Korben and Leeloo. Refining the premise's clarity and strengthening the link between the ancient and futuristic elements would significantly enhance the screenplay's overall appeal. See More
Structure: 8.25, **Strengths**: - The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling conflict between good and evil and gradually raises the stakes, maintaining audience engagement. - The plot progression is well-paced and alternating between action-packed sequences and moments of development. - The rich and imaginative world-building adds depth to the narrative and enhances the audience's immersion in the story. **Areas for Improvement**: - The motivations and backstories of several main characters, including Leeloo and Mangalore warriors, could be further developed to enhance their depth and relatability. - The resolution of the main conflict, while visually stunning, could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the characters' inner struggles and choices. See More
Theme: 8.0, The screenplay effectively explores several important themes through its engaging storyline, compelling characters, and thought-provoking dialogue. It conveys a clear message about the power of good over evil and the importance of unity and perseverance. However, it could be improved by deepening the exploration of the themes, particularly in terms of their relevance to current issues and the human experience, and by clarifying the motivations of some characters. See More
Visual Impact: 7.75, The screenplay offers a visually rich and engaging storytelling experience, creating immersive worlds and compelling imagery that captures both the grand scale of space opera and the intimate moments of human connection. Its innovative visual approaches, such as vibrant natural landscapes and intricate alien architectures, leave a lasting impression on the reader's mind. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.25, The screenplay shows a solid foundation for emotional storytelling, effectively utilizing various techniques to evoke a range of emotions from the audience. However, there are opportunities to enhance the emotional depth and resonance of the narrative by exploring the complexities of character motivations, providing more nuanced emotional reactions, and integrating moments of quiet reflection and introspection. By refining these elements, the screenplay can leave a lasting impact and create a more profoundly emotional experience for viewers. See More
Conflict: 8.25, The screenplay has a strong foundation for conflict and stakes, creating a compelling narrative that draws the audience in. However, there are a few areas where enhancements could deepen the conflict, elevate the stakes, and increase overall tension. See More
Originality: 9.5, The screenplay demonstrates a high degree of originality and creativity in its storytelling approach, character development, and exploration of themes. It introduces fresh ideas, employs unique storytelling techniques, and creates a distinct and engaging world that captivates the reader's imagination. See More
Premise: 7.25, The screenplay's premise, while initially engaging with its blend of science fiction, adventure, and prophecy, suffers from a lack of clarity and focus in its early stages. The connection between the ancient Egyptian prophecy and the futuristic space opera setting needs to be more explicitly established, and the motivations of certain characters, like Zorg, require further development. However, the potential for intrigue and audience engagement is high due to its unique blend of genres and charismatic characters like Korben and Leeloo. Refining the premise's clarity and strengthening the link between the ancient and futuristic elements would significantly enhance the screenplay's overall appeal. See More
Structure: 8.25, **Strengths**: - The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling conflict between good and evil and gradually raises the stakes, maintaining audience engagement. - The plot progression is well-paced and alternating between action-packed sequences and moments of development. - The rich and imaginative world-building adds depth to the narrative and enhances the audience's immersion in the story. **Areas for Improvement**: - The motivations and backstories of several main characters, including Leeloo and Mangalore warriors, could be further developed to enhance their depth and relatability. - The resolution of the main conflict, while visually stunning, could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the characters' inner struggles and choices. See More
Theme: 8.0, The screenplay effectively explores several important themes through its engaging storyline, compelling characters, and thought-provoking dialogue. It conveys a clear message about the power of good over evil and the importance of unity and perseverance. However, it could be improved by deepening the exploration of the themes, particularly in terms of their relevance to current issues and the human experience, and by clarifying the motivations of some characters. See More
Visual Impact: 7.75, The screenplay offers a visually rich and engaging storytelling experience, creating immersive worlds and compelling imagery that captures both the grand scale of space opera and the intimate moments of human connection. Its innovative visual approaches, such as vibrant natural landscapes and intricate alien architectures, leave a lasting impression on the reader's mind. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.25, The screenplay shows a solid foundation for emotional storytelling, effectively utilizing various techniques to evoke a range of emotions from the audience. However, there are opportunities to enhance the emotional depth and resonance of the narrative by exploring the complexities of character motivations, providing more nuanced emotional reactions, and integrating moments of quiet reflection and introspection. By refining these elements, the screenplay can leave a lasting impact and create a more profoundly emotional experience for viewers. See More
Conflict: 8.25, The screenplay has a strong foundation for conflict and stakes, creating a compelling narrative that draws the audience in. However, there are a few areas where enhancements could deepen the conflict, elevate the stakes, and increase overall tension. See More
Originality: 9.5, The screenplay demonstrates a high degree of originality and creativity in its storytelling approach, character development, and exploration of themes. It introduces fresh ideas, employs unique storytelling techniques, and creates a distinct and engaging world that captivates the reader's imagination. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
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Summaries
- Omar, a young boy, arrives at a deserted excavation camp in the Nile River Valley. He enters a large temple with two goatskins while children reflect sunlight into it with mirrors. The scene ends with Omar entering the temple.
- Omar enters the temple and delivers water to Professor Pacoli and Billy Masterson, who are studying ancient hieroglyphs. The Professor discovers a prophecy about an impending evil, while Billy finds a machine pistol and part of a spaceship. The Priest poisons the water supply and Aziz's falling asleep causes a mirror to fall. The team faces threats from the impending evil, the poisoned water, and the unknown forces represented by the spaceship.
- While Billy sketches in the shadows, the Professor questions the nature of divine light within the temple. Aziz's mirror reflects again, revealing Mondoshawans who kidnap the Professor and pursue the elemental stones. The Kommander and Priest retrieve the stones, but Billy intervenes and wounds them. The wall closes, crushing the Kommander and separating Billy from the aliens. The Clerk escapes with the elemental stones, leaving Omar with Billy's drawings.
- The scene opens with a buried Priest in a Temple Room as a spaceship takes off. 500 years later, another spaceship encounters a mysterious mass in space, prompting concern. Meanwhile, President Lindberg prepares for a broadcast in Manhattan.
- President debates options for dealing with enigmatic, rapidly growing planet. Despite scientific advice for caution, President initially favors military strike. However, a priest's warning about evil nature of the planet gives him pause. As ship prepares to fire, planet abruptly goes dormant, leaving President and his advisors uncertain about next steps.
- The planet has solidified and is exhibiting signs of intelligence. The President hesitates to attack, but General Staedert insists. A missile is fired and explodes on the planet, but it grows larger instead of being destroyed. Staedert orders a series of missiles to be fired, but they are all absorbed by the planet, which continues to grow. The President orders Staedert to retreat, but it's too late. A giant flame erupts from the planet and engulfs Staedert's spaceship.
- Korben awakens from a nightmare and prepares for his day. In the President's office, Cornelius alerts him to an impending threat with a 48-hour deadline, fostering a mix of humor, suspense, and foreboding.
- President reviews the manuscript on his desk and Cornelius explains the significance of the four elements and the supreme being and their ability to defeat evil. The President questions what happens if evil occupies the space of the supreme being and Cornelius explains the consequences. The President has to decide whether to allow the Mondoshawan ship to enter after hearing about the ship approaching. The Mondoshawan ship being pursued by two black warships, is ultimately attacked and crash lands on a nearby planet.
- In his apartment, Korben outwits and disarms a mugger, discovering hidden weapons. Simultaneously, in the President's office, an attack by unregistered warships triggers a state of alert, escalating tensions.
- Professor MacTilburgh reveals to General Munro that the sole intact cell from the crash site exhibits a remarkable number of DNA memo groups, indicating possible genetic engineering. MacTilburgh expresses enthusiasm about investigating further.
- In a cylindrical laboratory, Mactilburgh and Munro witness the reconstruction of a human body from a DNA chain into a beautiful woman. The woman reacts with hostility and flees through an air vent.
- A young woman evades police pursuit by leaping from a skyscraper and landing on a flying cab driven by Korben Dallas. Despite police orders, Korben shelters the woman, who whispers "Priest" before fainting.
- Unconscious girl, Leeloo, arrives with Korben. Cornelius, who turns out to be the girl's cousin, faints after identifying a metal handle with Egyptian suns on it as the fifth element. Korben awakens Leeloo with a kiss, causing her to become hostile. Cornelius frantically searches for a robe while Leeloo points a gun at Korben, demanding his business card.
- Korben meets Leeloo and learns her full name. He convinces her to go by the nickname Leeloo. Cornelius interrupts their conversation and Leeloo playfully interacts with him. Korben expresses concern for Leeloo's well-being and learns the meaning of 'Akta Gamat'. Korben returns home to his apartment and receives a call from Finger.
- Leeloo studies history while Cornelius worries about the stolen sacred stones. Zorg fires employees while Leeloo reveals she knows where the stones are.
- Aknot's warriors present Zorg with the sacred case, unaware of its empty interior. Zorg exposes Aknot's Mangalore head and showcases the ZF1 weapon. Leeloo reveals the Guardians' placement of the stones with an individual on Fhloston, creating tension due to the empty case. Cornelius's realization offers hope for their mission's success.
- Zorg confronts Aknot over missing stones, demanding compensation. Korben learns of his dismissal. Cornelius is summoned by Zorg.
- Zorg demands the location of the Stones from Cornelius, who refuses. Zorg argues destruction creates jobs, but Cornelius counters his weapons kill. Zorg chokes on a cherry, and Cornelius saves him. Zorg spares Cornelius and orders his guards to torture others for the Stones' location.
- President Munro reports to the President that the Mondoshawan have accepted the humans' apology, but the Stones were not found on their ship. Munro informs the President that the Stones were given to Plavalaguna, a Diva on Fhloston Paradise, and that she will have the Stones with her at a charity ball. The President orders Munro to send his best man to retrieve the Stones. Munro assures the President he has the perfect candidate. Zorg's Right Arm eavesdrops on the conversation and is delighted to learn the Stones' location.
- Korben faces a life-altering decision when he receives a visit from General Munro and his team. While trying to enjoy a disgusting dessert, he gets a call from his berating mother. A message arrives with trip details, prompting him to hang up on his mother. General Munro informs him of a mission to retrieve four stones from Diva Plavalaguna on Fhloston Paradise. He learns he's the sole survivor of his unit and that Major Iceborg will accompany him as his wife. Korben initially refuses the mission but ultimately agrees.
- Korben, Leeloo, and Cornelius confront each other in Korben's apartment. Korben attempts to conceal his companions from Leeloo, who arrives with Cornelius. Amidst the chaos, Cornelius reveals their mission to save the world. As the police approach, Korben chooses to hide Leeloo and Cornelius, leaving their fate uncertain.
- Korben's building is surrounded by police who mistake him for a uranium smuggler. They arrest his neighbor instead, while Korben hides in his apartment. Zorg's henchman, Right Arm, poses as Korben to retrieve the Stones.
- Korben helps Leeloo warm up after her shower, leading to an intimate moment between them. However, their moment is interrupted by Cornelius, causing an awkward situation. Meanwhile, the police are attacked by Mangalore warriors outside Korben's building, resulting in their capture.
- Korben agrees to take a mission despite being injured. Cornelius and Leeloo arrive at the chaotic Manhattan Intergalactic Airport. David gives them passports, and Cornelius convinces Leeloo to accept Korben's. Korben arrives at the airport to meet them.
- David and Leeloo arrive at the airport and are checking in for their flight to Fhloston Paradise. Korben arrives and pretends to be David's cousin to get his boarding pass. Leeloo is delighted and panicked to see Korben. Korben grabs Leeloo's boarding card and pretends they are newlyweds. A police patrol with a pig on a leash walks by. Cornelius feels guilty for sending Leeloo on a dangerous mission. The nasty neighbor and his wife are revealed to be Mangalores and try to escape, but are stopped by a police patrol. Cornelius gives David the Temple Key and tells him to prepare for their arrival. Cornelius crawls through a trapdoor for pigs, leaving David alone.
- Korben is reluctantly forced to participate in Loc Rhod's live show, but becomes irritated by Rhod's behavior and grabs him by the collar, demanding respect.
- Right Arm of Zorg attempts to check in at the airport using Korben Dallas's ID but is informed he is already checked in. He becomes agitated and demands to see the boss, but the window between them closes, and gun barrels protrude from the wall, targeting him. The scene ends with Right Arm being targeted by police weapons and ordered to comply.
- Korben tries to explain their mission to Leeloo on a shuttle to Fhloston, but she becomes fixated on learning about human intimacy instead. Meanwhile, other passengers struggle with the sleep regulation system and a ground crew discovers parasites in the landing gear, leading to a chaotic and humorous journey.
- The scene begins with ground crew disinfecting a plane at the airport. Zorg's Right Arm informs Zorg that Korben Dallas has taken his place. Loc Rhod tries to seduce a stewardess using his powers. Zorg discovers the truth and explodes Right Arm along with the phone. The spaceship takes off with Korben and Leeloo sleeping soundly. The nefarious planet becomes gray and cold as the spaceship vanishes into space.
- Scientists detect radio signals from the mysterious planet, suggesting communication attempts. Zorg receives an ominous inquiry from Shadow about the four pieces. Amidst the arrival at Fhloston Paradise, Korben frantically searches for Leeloo, while passengers marvel at the planet's beauty.
- Leeloo's jealousy leads to an escape attempt, Korben contends with Loc Rhod's clingy behavior, and Cornelius faces interrogation while beaten-up cops hint at new information.
- Leeloo witnesses the Diva's arrival and receives a mysterious message. When Korben opens his door, Leeloo intends to leave. Despite her objections, Korben impulsively traps her with a bracelet. When Loc Rhod misinterprets the situation, Korben throws him out, leaving Leeloo furious as Korben departs for work.
- Amidst the splendor of an opera performance, sinister forces converge on Fhloston Paradise. Mangalores plot an assault, Leeloo escapes her confinement, and Zorg's ship looms overhead. Cornelius and the Chief of Police join forces to thwart the impending threat.
- Leeloo fends off the Mangalores, who have invaded Diva's suite and discovered the case containing the four elements. She fights gracefully, disarming a Warrior and dancing while the Diva sings. Zorg enters, demanding the Stones, but Leeloo tricks him and escapes. Meanwhile, the Mangalores attack the police station and concert hall, resulting in a shootout and the tragic death of the Diva.
- Korben reveals his mission to protect Diva. Amidst the battle with Mangalores, Diva confesses Leeloo as the Fifth Element and Supreme Being, urging Korben's love and support for her. As tension with Zorg intensifies, the scene concludes with Diva's demise and the threat of an impending explosion.
- Korben slaps the Diva, who dies revealing the Stones are in her. Korben retrieves the Stones from her stomach, and the Mangalores take control of the theater. Korben fights off the Mangalores and escapes with the Stones.
- Amidst chaos, Korben and Roy von Bacon engage in a fierce battle against Mangalores, liberating the hall. Korben retrieves the Elemental Balls and subdues the Mangalores. As the bomb timer dwindles, Korben and Loc Rhod escape. Leeloo lies injured, while Akanit threatens Cornelius in the police station hallway with Mangalores holding out against the police.
- Korben kills Akanit and searches for Leeloo with Cornelius. Loc Rhod finds a bomb in the Diva's suite. Zorg enters the main hall and shoots everyone in sight.
- Leeloo escapes the bomb shelter through an airshaft and Korben comes to her aid. Zorg resets the bomb, but Korben defeats him in a fight. They escape in the ZFX200 spaceship with just minutes to spare.
- After their life-threatening escape from Fhloston Paradise, Korben, Leeloo, Cornelius, and Loc Rhod find themselves aboard the ZFX200. Loc Rhod shares the news of their survival on his radio show as Cornelius notifies Korben of a call from General Mambo. Korben comforts Leeloo, who remains distressed and remorseful about humanity's destructive actions. The scene concludes with the revelation of General Mambo's communication, hinting at impending challenges.
- As a celestial body threatens to collide with Earth, Major Korben and a team of experts race against time to find a solution. They must activate the elemental Stones and the Fifth Element to protect the planet. With limited knowledge and time running out, they face an uncertain fate as Earth's fate hangs in the balance.
- Korben and Loc Rhod struggle to find a way to unlock the Stones of Power, which are necessary to stop the Dark Planet from destroying Earth. Leeloo attempts to activate the fifth Stone but collapses from exhaustion, leaving the team in a desperate race against time.
- As the Dark Planet approaches Earth, Leeloo and Korben share a poignant moment. The Divine Light beam emerges, solidifying the Evil Planet and saving Earth. Within the chaos, Cornelius and Loc Rhod find solace in a shared laugh.
- President Finger visits the laboratory where Leeloo was created, eager to see the heroes Korben and Leeloo, but they are still recovering. Despite being pressed for time, the President is informed that they need five more minutes, causing frustration. Meanwhile, a phone call from Korben's mother adds tension, as she scolds the President for ignoring her and her son.
CharacterInconsistencies
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Character Leeloo
Description Leeloo's transition from a fierce warrior to a naive, almost childlike character seeking affection from Korben seems inconsistent and abrupt, especially considering her initial distrust and survival instincts.
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Character Korben Dallas
Description Korben's sudden shift from a cynical and reluctant ex-soldier to someone willing to risk his life for a cause and a woman he barely knows feels somewhat forced.
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StoryInconsistencies
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Description The advanced technology and societal structure depicted in the film seem inconsistent with the lack of basic security measures, like bomb detectors, in a luxury hotel like Fhloston Paradise.
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PlotHoles
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Description The explanation of the Mondoshawans entrusting the stones to the Diva Plavalaguna feels like a convenient plot device to move the story forward and introduce Fhloston Paradise.
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Description The Diva's cryptic statement, "They are... with me," leading Korben to discover the stones inside her body feels like a forced and implausible way to resolve the plot point of the missing stones.
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DialogueAuthenticity
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Description Zorg's philosophical monologue about destruction and creation feels out of place and overly expository, serving more as a plot device to explain his motivations rather than authentic dialogue.
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Description Korben's mother's constant verbal abuse and over-the-top reactions, while comedic, stretch the boundaries of believable dialogue.
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Redundancies
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Element Scenes of Leeloo consuming large quantities of food
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Element Chase sequences involving Korben's taxi
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Suggestion While visually engaging, the extended chase sequences could be streamlined to focus on key moments and avoid redundancy.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
| Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
|---|---|---|---|
| General Staedert | General Staedert starts off as a strict and no-nonsense leader, but as he faces greater challenges and threats, he learns to adapt and take risks for the greater good. He goes from being solely focused on the mission at hand to considering the well-being of his people and the bigger picture. | The character arc for General Staedert is well-developed, but it could benefit from more internal conflict and emotional depth. Adding moments of vulnerability or doubt could make his transformation more impactful and relatable to the audience. | To improve the character arc, consider adding scenes where General Staedert grapples with the moral implications of his decisions or struggles with the weight of his responsibilities. This will add layers to his character and make his growth more compelling. |
| President | The President starts off as a pragmatic leader focused on protecting his people and making tough decisions. As the story progresses, he is faced with a difficult decision regarding the strange planet and must weigh the advice of his advisors against the potential risks. Through his interactions with Cornelius and his determination to retrieve the Stones, he showcases leadership qualities and a sense of urgency. By the end of the screenplay, the President learns to balance his decisive nature with a willingness to listen to alternative perspectives, ultimately becoming a more well-rounded and effective leader. | The character arc for the President is well-developed, showing growth and development throughout the screenplay. However, it could benefit from more internal conflict or moments of vulnerability to make the character more relatable and dynamic. Additionally, adding a subplot or personal stakes for the President could further enhance the depth of his character. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating moments where the President struggles with his decisions or faces internal conflict. This could add depth to his character and make his journey more compelling for the audience. Additionally, introducing a personal stake or subplot for the President could provide a more emotional connection for the audience and further develop his character arc. |
| Korben Dallas | Korben Dallas starts off as a reluctant hero, resistant to accepting the mission but ultimately showing bravery and loyalty when faced with high stakes. Throughout the screenplay, he undergoes a transformation from a practical and down-to-earth individual to a determined and protective protagonist who is willing to take risks to save Leeloo. He learns to balance his personal feelings with his sense of duty, ultimately embracing his role as a hero and finding true love in the process. | The character arc for Korben Dallas is well-developed, showing a clear progression from reluctance to acceptance of his role as a hero. However, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and emotional growth throughout the screenplay. Additionally, his relationship with Leeloo could be further explored to add depth to his character development. | To improve the character arc, consider adding more scenes that delve into Korben's internal conflicts and emotional journey. Show moments of vulnerability and self-reflection to highlight his growth as a character. Additionally, explore the dynamics of his relationship with Leeloo in more depth, showcasing how it impacts his decisions and actions throughout the story. |
| Cornelius | Cornelius starts off as a wise and knowledgeable priest who believes in ancient prophecies and the power of good over evil. As the story progresses, he becomes more eccentric and passionate, showing vulnerability and uncertainty in the face of danger. Despite his struggles, he remains dedicated to his mission and willing to resort to extreme measures to achieve his goals. By the end of the screenplay, Cornelius has grown into a more confident and assertive character, still maintaining his wisdom and knowledge but with a newfound sense of urgency and determination. | The character arc for Cornelius is well-developed, showing a clear progression from a cautious and thoughtful priest to a more eccentric and passionate character. However, there could be more consistency in his character traits throughout the screenplay. Additionally, his struggle to remember details in high-pressure situations could be further explored to add depth to his character. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more moments of internal conflict for Cornelius as he grapples with his beliefs and the challenges he faces. Show his growth through subtle changes in his speaking style and behavior, reflecting his evolving mindset. Additionally, provide more opportunities for Cornelius to showcase his deep knowledge and expertise, reinforcing his role as a valuable asset to the team. |
| Korben | Korben starts as a reluctant taxi driver who is thrust into a dangerous mission to save the world. Initially skeptical and sarcastic, he gradually grows to care deeply for Leeloo and accepts his role as her protector. Through challenges and sacrifices, he transforms into a brave and determined leader, willing to risk everything for the ones he loves. | The character arc for Korben is well-developed, showcasing his growth from a reluctant hero to a courageous leader. However, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and emotional depth throughout the journey. Additionally, his interactions with other characters could be further explored to enhance his development. | To improve the character arc, consider adding more internal conflict and emotional moments for Korben to showcase his vulnerability and growth. Explore his relationships with other characters, especially Leeloo, to deepen his connection and motivations. Allow for moments of introspection and self-discovery to highlight his transformation into a true hero. |
| Leeloo | Leeloo's character arc in the screenplay follows her journey from a detached and focused being on a mission to a compassionate and connected individual. Through her interactions with Korben, she learns about love and connection, ultimately embracing her role in saving Earth with immense strength and courage. | The character arc for Leeloo is well-developed, showcasing her growth and transformation throughout the story. However, there could be more emphasis on her internal struggles and conflicts as she navigates her emotions and relationships with humans. This would add depth to her character and make her journey even more compelling. | To improve the character arc for Leeloo, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into her internal struggles and conflicts. Show her grappling with her identity as the Fifth Element and the Supreme Being, as well as her evolving understanding of human emotions. This will add complexity to her character and make her transformation more impactful. |
| Zorg | Zorg starts off as a powerful and ambitious antagonist who is driven by his desire for control and wealth. However, as the story progresses, he faces challenges that test his resolve and power. These challenges force him to confront his ruthless nature and the consequences of his actions, ultimately leading to a downfall where he loses everything he has worked so hard to achieve. | The character arc for Zorg is well-developed, showcasing his evolution from a powerful antagonist to a downfall. However, it could benefit from more internal conflict and moments of vulnerability to make his character more complex and relatable to the audience. | To improve the character arc for Zorg, consider adding scenes that delve into his backstory and motivations, showing the audience why he is driven by power and control. Additionally, explore moments of internal conflict where Zorg questions his actions and the impact they have on others, adding depth to his character and making his downfall more impactful. |
| Loc Rhod | Loc Rhod starts off as a self-serving and cowardly character, prioritizing his own safety and survival. However, as the story progresses, he is influenced by stronger personalities like Korben and begins to show moments of bravery and loyalty. He ultimately proves his worth through his actions, overcoming his self-doubt and insecurities. | The character arc for Loc Rhod is well-developed, showing growth and development throughout the screenplay. However, there could be more consistency in his character traits and actions to make the transformation more believable. | To improve the character arc for Loc Rhod, consider establishing clearer motivations for his self-serving behavior at the beginning of the story. This will make his transformation into a more brave and loyal character more impactful and believable. Additionally, ensure that his comedic relief and light-hearted moments are balanced with his moments of bravery and loyalty to create a more well-rounded character. |
| Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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| Good vs. Evil | The film is centered around the fight between the forces of good, led by Leeloo, and the forces of evil, led by Zorg. | This is a classic theme that is found in many stories. It explores the nature of good and evil, and the importance of fighting for what is right. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening Good vs. Evil:
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| Love | The film features a love story between Korben and Leeloo. Their love is tested by the challenges they face, but it ultimately triumphs. | Love is a powerful force that can overcome even the greatest challenges. It is a theme that is found in many stories, and it is always a popular one with audiences. | ||||||||||||
| Sacrifice | The film features several characters who sacrifice themselves for the greater good. Korben sacrifices his life to save Leeloo, and Leeloo sacrifices her life to save Earth. | Sacrifice is a noble act that can inspire others to do great things. It is a theme that is found in many stories, and it is always a powerful one. | ||||||||||||
| Identity | The film explores the theme of identity through the character of Leeloo. Leeloo is a unique individual who is trying to find her place in the world. | Identity is a complex and important theme. It is something that everyone struggles with at some point in their lives. The film explores this theme in a thoughtful and insightful way. | ||||||||||||
| Environmentalism | The film touches on the theme of environmentalism through the character of Professor Pacoli. Pacoli is a scientist who is concerned about the impact of human activity on the environment. | Environmentalism is an increasingly important theme in today's world. The film raises awareness of this issue in a subtle and effective way. | ||||||||||||
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
| Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
| John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
| What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
| Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
| Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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| internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goal was to understand the significance of the symbols and hieroglyphs on the wall and to uncover the secrets of the ancient prophecy. This evolved into a deeper desire for knowledge and discovery. |
| External Goals | The protagonist's external goal was to assist in deciphering the inscription and to ensure the safety of the temple and its secrets. This evolved into a mission to protect the elements from falling into the wrong hands. |
| Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in the screenplay revolves around the battle between good versus evil and the struggle to prevent the ultimate evil from destroying the world. |
Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's goals and conflicts contribute to their development by challenging their beliefs, values, and morals. They are forced to confront their fears, make difficult decisions, and grow as a person throughout the screenplay.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflicts drive the narrative forward, creating tension, suspense, and drama. They provide a sense of urgency and stakes that keep the audience engaged and invested in the protagonist's journey.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflicts add depth to the screenplay by exploring themes of destiny, sacrifice, redemption, and the power of knowledge. They raise philosophical questions about morality, ethics, and the nature of good and evil, enriching the overall thematic exploration of the story.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
| Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
| Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
| Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \
It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.
| Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | ||||
| 1 - Omar's Arrival at the Temple | Mysterious, Desolate, Intriguing | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 3 | 8 | 7.5 | 3 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 9 | 8.5 | 8.5 | 8 | |
| 2 - Discovery and Danger in the Ancient Temple | Mysterious, Exciting, Intriguing | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 3 - Chaos in the Temple | Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense, Mysterious | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 4 - Cosmic Encounters | Mysterious, Epic, Suspenseful | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 5 - Planet X: Attack or Study? | Tense, Serious, Mysterious | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 6 - Attack on the Intelligent Planet | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 7 - Morning Routine and Impending Doom | Tense, Mysterious, Foreboding, Intense, Serious | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 8 - The President's Decision | Tense, Dramatic, Suspenseful, Serious | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 9 - Korben's Encounter and Presidential Crisis | Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 10 - The Engineered Cell | Mysterious, Intense, Foreboding | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 11 - The Creation and Escape of the Supreme Being | Fascinated, Worried, Disgusted, Angry, Hypnotized, Impressed | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 12 - The Ledge | Suspenseful, Mysterious, Thrilling, Intense | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 13 - The Fifth Element Arrives | Excitement, Mystery, Suspense | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 14 - Korben Meets Leeloo | Mysterious, Exciting, Romantic, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 15 - Leeloo's History Lesson and Stone Search | Serious, Playful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 16 - Zorg's Reveal | Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 17 - Confrontation and Dismissal | Tense, Humorous, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 18 - The Stones' Refusal | Intense, Philosophical, Confrontational | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 19 - Stones Located | Suspense, Dramatic, Intense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 20 - Korben's Dilemma | Sarcastic, Resigned, Bewildered | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 21 - The Apartment Panic | Suspenseful, Humorous, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 22 - Mistaken Identity | Suspenseful, Humorous, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 23 - Awkward Interruption | Intense, Suspenseful, Emotional, Playful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 24 - Arrival at the Airport | Suspenseful, Intense, Playful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 25 - Boarding the Flight to Fhloston Paradise | Humorous, Suspenseful, Action-packed | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 26 - Korben's Encounter with Loc Rhod | Humorous, Sarcastic, Energetic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 27 - Airport Confrontation | Tense, Humorous, Suspenseful | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 28 - Lost in Translation | Playful, Romantic, Light-hearted | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 29 - Explosive Revelation | Suspenseful, Humorous, Exciting | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 30 - Cosmic Convergence and Desperate Search | Tense, Exciting, Suspenseful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 31 - Arrivals and Departures | Playful, Tense, Exciting | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 32 - Leeloo's Encounter with the Diva and Korben | Suspenseful, Intense, Mysterious, Romantic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 33 - Interlude on Fhloston Paradise | Tense, Exciting, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 34 - Chaos at Fhloston Paradise | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 35 - The Diva's Revelation | Intense, Emotional, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 36 - Korben Retrieves the Stones | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 37 - Escape from the Police Station | Intense, Exciting, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 38 - Confrontation at the Palace | Tense, Suspenseful, Action-packed, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 39 - Escape from Fhloston Paradise | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Action-packed | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 40 - Aftermath and Contact | Tense, Dramatic, Intense, Emotional, Action-packed | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 41 - The Earth's Last Hope | Tense, Urgent, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 42 - The Stones of Power | Desperate, Tense, Hopeful, Intense | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 43 - Sacrifice and Salvation: Earth's Destiny | Intense, Emotional, Romantic, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 44 - The President's Visit | Tense, Emotional, Exciting, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Engaging concept of the four elements and the Supreme Being
- Effective blend of suspense, humor, and drama
- Intense action sequences with emotional depth and character development
- Engaging character interactions with high stakes and tension
- Engaging plot progression with well-developed characters
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited character development
- Some cliched elements and dialogue
- Limited emotional depth in certain moments
- Some confusion and inconsistencies in action sequences and character reactions
- Some elements may be confusing or too intense for viewers
Suggestions
- Focus on developing secondary characters and exploring their motivations
- Avoid using cliched elements and language, strive for more nuanced and impactful dialogue
- Pay attention to emotional depth and character development in every scene
- Ensure consistency in action sequences and character reactions, avoid confusion for the audience
- Consider the potential impact of intense or confusing elements on viewers and adjust accordingly
World Building
- Physical environment: The world depicted in the screenplay is a diverse and fantastical one, with ancient Egyptian elements blended with futuristic technology. The physical environment is often used to create a sense of wonder and awe, as well as to foreshadow the impending danger. For example, the discovery of the temple in the desert and the appearance of the alien spaceship create a sense of mystery and intrigue, while the impending collision with the dark planet creates a sense of urgency and danger.
- Culture: The screenplay also explores a variety of cultural elements, including ancient Egyptian rituals, futuristic technology, and intergalactic travel. This mix of cultures creates a sense of diversity and richness, and it also allows the screenplay to explore themes of identity and belonging. For example, Leeloo's struggle to understand her own identity and her place in the world is a central theme of the screenplay.
- Society: The screenplay depicts a complex and hierarchical society, with a President, military generals, and different alien races. This social structure creates a sense of tension and conflict, as the different factions vie for power and control. For example, the conflict between Korben and Zorg is a central plot point in the screenplay, and it reflects the larger social conflict between the forces of good and evil.
- Technology: The screenplay also features a variety of advanced technologies, including spaceships, weapons, and robots. This technology is used to create a sense of wonder and awe, as well as to foreshadow the impending danger. For example, the appearance of the alien spaceship and the use of advanced weapons create a sense of mystery and intrigue, while the impending collision with the dark planet creates a sense of urgency and danger.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology of the world depicted in the screenplay shape the characters' experiences and actions in a variety of ways. For example, the desert setting creates a sense of isolation and danger, which forces the characters to rely on each other for survival. The mix of cultures creates a sense of diversity and richness, which allows the characters to learn from each other and grow. The hierarchical society creates a sense of tension and conflict, which forces the characters to make difficult choices. The advanced technology creates a sense of wonder and awe, which inspires the characters to dream big.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative of the screenplay by creating a sense of wonder, awe, danger, and urgency. The physical environment, culture, society, and technology all play a role in driving the plot forward and creating a sense of suspense. For example, the discovery of the temple in the desert leads to the discovery of the alien spaceship and the impending collision with the dark planet. The mix of cultures creates a sense of diversity and richness, which allows the characters to learn from each other and grow. The hierarchical society creates a sense of tension and conflict, which forces the characters to make difficult choices. The advanced technology creates a sense of wonder and awe, which inspires the characters to dream big.
- Thematic depth contribution: The physical environment, culture, society, and technology all contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay. For example, the desert setting reinforces the themes of isolation and survival. The mix of cultures reinforces the themes of diversity and inclusion. The hierarchical society reinforces the themes of power and control. The advanced technology reinforces the themes of progress and innovation. These themes are all explored in depth throughout the screenplay, and they give the film a rich and meaningful message.
| Voice Analysis | |
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| Summary: | The writer's voice in this screenplay is characterized by the blend of wit, imagination, and a touch of absurdity. The unique style of the writer manifests itself through sharp dialogue, paradoxes, dark humor, and a penchant for the unexpected. |
| Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a distinctive atmosphere, where the absurd and the ordinary intertwine. The blend of wit, imagination, and dark humor keeps the audience engaged and intrigued, adding depth and complexity to the narrative. |
| Best Representation Scene | Scene 17 - |
| Best Scene Explanation | Scene 17 effectively showcases the writer's unique voice through the intense confrontation between Zorg and Aknot. The scene is filled with sharp dialogue, dark humor, and a touch of the absurd. Zorg's manipulation and Aknot's stubbornness create a dynamic tension that highlights the writer's skill in crafting memorable and engaging confrontations. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
| Pattern | Explanation |
|---|---|
| High Scores in Plot and Concept Coincide with High Emotional Impact | Scenes with higher scores in the Plot and Concept categories tend to also receive higher scores in Emotional Impact. This suggests that the screenplay effectively uses plot and concept to create scenes that resonate emotionally with the audience. |
| Suspenseful Scenes are Often the Most Intense and Dramatic | Scenes tagged as Suspenseful often receive high scores in Intensity and Drama. This indicates that the screenplay successfully builds tension and excitement through suspenseful situations. |
| Scenes with High Character Change Often Move the Story Forward | Scenes with notable Character Changes tend to also receive higher scores in the Move Story Forward category. This suggests that the screenplay effectively uses character development to drive the plot and create meaningful story progression. |
| Scenes with a Mix of Suspenseful, Dramatic, and Humorous Elements are Well-Received | Scenes that blend Suspenseful, Dramatic, and Humorous elements often receive high overall scores. This indicates that the screenplay successfully creates scenes that are both engaging and emotionally resonant. |
| High Scores in Action-Packed Scenes Coincide with High Stakes | Scenes tagged as Action-Packed tend to also receive higher scores in High Stakes. This suggests that the screenplay effectively uses action sequences to create a sense of urgency and heightened stakes for the characters. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
Based on the analysis of multiple scenes from the screenplay, it showcases strong writing skills in terms of character development, dialogue, pacing, and tension-building. The writer effectively creates engaging and immersive scenes that drive the narrative forward and keep the audience invested in the story. However, there are a few key areas where further improvement can enhance the overall quality and impact of the screenplay.
Key Improvement Areas
Character Development
While the characters are well-introduced and their motivations are clear, there is room for deeper exploration of their backstories, inner conflicts, and emotional journeys. This will help create more complex and relatable characters that resonate with the audience.
Dialogue
The dialogue is generally engaging and natural, but it could benefit from more depth and nuance. By adding subtext, varying the sentence structure, and incorporating more active verbs, the writer can elevate the dialogue and make it more memorable.
Pacing
The pacing is well-managed overall, but certain scenes could benefit from tighter editing to maintain a brisk and engaging rhythm. This involves trimming unnecessary dialogue or action, streamlining transitions, and ensuring that each scene contributes significantly to the plot or character development.
Suggestions
| Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Book | Read 'Story Engineering' by Larry Brooks | This book provides a comprehensive framework for developing compelling characters, crafting effective dialogue, and structuring a well-paced screenplay. |
| Video | Watch 'Masterclass: Writing for Television' by Aaron Sorkin | Sorkin is renowned for his sharp dialogue and engaging character interactions, and this masterclass offers valuable insights into his writing process and techniques. |
| Screenplay | Read 'The Social Network' screenplay by Aaron Sorkin | This screenplay is an excellent example of how to craft engaging dialogue, develop complex characters, and maintain a brisk and impactful pacing. |
| Exercise | Character Backstory Exercise: Write a detailed backstory for one of the main characters, exploring their childhood, formative experiences, and relationships.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will help you develop a deeper understanding of your character's motivations and inner conflicts. |
| Exercise | Dialogue Enhancement Exercise: Take a scene with existing dialogue and rewrite it, focusing on adding subtext, varying the sentence structure, and incorporating more active verbs.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will help you improve the quality and impact of your dialogue. |
| Exercise | Pacing Analysis Exercise: Choose a scene that you feel could benefit from tighter pacing and analyze it carefully. Identify areas where dialogue or action can be trimmed, transitions can be streamlined, or the pacing can be adjusted to maintain a brisk and engaging rhythm.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will help you develop a better sense of pacing and how to effectively manage the flow of your scenes. |
Additional Notes:
Overall, the screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation and the writer has a clear understanding of the craft. By focusing on the areas identified for improvement, the writer can elevate their storytelling abilities and create even more engaging and impactful screenplays.
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|---|---|
| Chosen One | Omar is chosen to find the elemental stones and protect the world from an impending evil. | The Chosen One is a common trope in fantasy and science fiction, where a specific individual is destined to save the day. Examples include Harry Potter, Luke Skywalker, and Neo from The Matrix. |
| Ancient Prophecies | The Professor discovers an ancient prophecy that foretells the impending evil and the need to arrange the elements around a human form for protection. | Ancient Prophecies are used to create a sense of mystery and foreshadowing. They often reveal a hidden destiny or a future event that will shape the story. Examples include the prophecy of the Chosen One in Harry Potter and the prophecy of the One Ring in Lord of the Rings. |
| Elemental Powers | The Professor theorizes that arranging the elements of life (water, fire, earth, and air) around a fifth element (a human form) will protect against the impending evil. | Elemental Powers are often used to create a sense of wonder and awe. They allow characters to manipulate and control different aspects of the natural world. Examples include the X-Men, who have a variety of elemental powers, and the Avatar, who can control all four elements. |
| Spaceship | A spaceship appears at the temple entrance and carries the Professor away. | Spaceships are often used to create a sense of adventure and excitement. They allow characters to travel to different planets and explore the unknown. Examples include the Millennium Falcon in Star Wars and the Enterprise in Star Trek. |
| Action Sequence | Billy, armed with a machine pistol, enters the chamber and fires, wounding the Kommander and Priest. | Action sequences are used to create a sense of excitement and suspense. They often involve fighting, explosions, and other forms of physical conflict. Examples include the action sequences in the Die Hard and Mission Impossible franchises. |
| Doomed Planet | The strange planet continues to grow and absorb missiles, and the President ultimately decides to attack it. | Doomed planets are often used to create a sense of urgency and hopelessness. They represent a threat to the world and must be destroyed to prevent further harm. Examples include the planet Krypton in Superman and the planet Alderaan in Star Wars. |
| Chosen One's Journey | Korben is chosen to retrieve the four stones from the Diva on Fhloston Paradise. | Chosen One's Journey is a common trope in fantasy and science fiction, where the Chosen One must go on a quest to fulfill their destiny. Examples include Luke Skywalker's journey to become a Jedi in Star Wars and Harry Potter's journey to defeat Voldemort. |
| MacGuffin | The four stones are the MacGuffin that the heroes must find to save the world. | The MacGuffin is an object or goal that the characters must quest for. It is often a source of conflict and intrigue. Examples include the Holy Grail in Indiana Jones and the One Ring in Lord of the Rings. |
| Damsel in Distress | Leeloo is rescued by Korben after she escapes from Zorg's clutches. | The Damsel in Distress is a common trope in fiction, where a female character is rescued by a male hero. Examples include Princess Peach in Super Mario Bros. and Lois Lane in Superman. |
| Final Battle | Korben and Leeloo must use the four stones to activate a protective beam and save Earth from the Dark Planet. | The Final Battle is a common trope in action and adventure stories, where the heroes must face off against a powerful villain or threat. Examples include the Battle of Helm's Deep in Lord of the Rings and the Battle of Endor in Star Wars. |
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 17 | ZORG: A case with four stones in it. Not one! Not two or three! But four!!! Four stones!!! What the fuck am I supposed to do with an EMPTY case?!! |
| 43 | Diva: Leeloo is the Fifth Element, the Supreme Being. She is more than just your wife. |
| 7 | Cornelius: The goal of evil is to wipe out life! All forms of life. For all eternity...Life upsets it. |
| 18 | Zorg: Life, which you so nobly serve, comes from destruction. |
| 16 | ZORG: Never be ashamed of who you are... You're warriors... be proud... |
Some Loglines to consider:
| A retired special forces major must retrieve four sacred stones to stop an evil force threatening to destroy the universe. |
| Love blossoms as a retired special forces major and the fifth element meet on a mission to save the universe. |
| When a major evil force threatens the universe, it's up to Korben Dallas and Leeloo to retrieve the sacred stones and stop the destruction. |
| Korben Dallas must battle evil forces and retrieve four sacred stones with the help of Leeloo, the fifth element, to prevent the end of the world. |
| The fate of the universe rests in the hands of Korben Dallas and Leeloo, as they race against time to retrieve the sacred stones and prevent total destruction. |
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Explanation: The Fifth Element is a visually imaginative and action-packed science fiction screenplay with a unique blend of humor and heart. While the world-building and central characters are compelling, the screenplay could benefit from further character development, tighter plotting, and a more nuanced exploration of its themes.
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Explanation: The screenplay of 'The 5th Element' presents a visually rich and imaginative science fiction world with a fast-paced narrative and engaging characters. While it excels in creativity and entertainment value, it could benefit from enhanced character development, smoother transitions, and a clearer thematic focus to deepen its impact.