Ghostbusters
Three parapsychologists lose their university funding and start a ghost-catching business in New York City, only to find themselves facing a supernatural threat of apocalyptic proportions.
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Unique Selling Point
"Ghostbusters" is a supernatural comedy about a group of eccentric scientists who investigate and capture ghosts. The film's unique voice is characterized by its blend of humor, suspense, and action, and its fast-paced storytelling. The characters are well-developed and relatable, and the dialogue is witty and engaging. The film's special effects are also impressive, and they help to create a sense of realism and immersion. The film's themes are universal and timeless, and they resonate with audiences of all ages. "Ghostbusters" is a classic film that is sure to entertain and delight audiences for years to come.
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Story Facts
Genres: Comedy, Horror, Fantasy, Action, Sci-Fi, Science Fiction, Mystery, Thriller, Adventure, Romance
Setting: Present day, New York City
Themes: The Power of Science and Technology, The Importance of Teamwork, The Supernatural and the Unknown, The Battle Between Good and Evil, The Importance of Humor and Wit
Conflict & Stakes: The Ghostbusters' struggle to save New York City from supernatural threats, while balancing their business and personal lives.
Mood: Humorous and suspenseful
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The Ghostbusters' unique blend of science fiction and comedy
- Plot Twist: The revelation that Dana Barrett is the Gatekeeper
- Distinctive Setting: The dark and supernatural world of New York City
- Innovative Ideas: The Ghostbusters' unique gadgets and weapons
- Unique Characters: The Ghostbusters' quirky and memorable personalities
- Genre Blend: The screenplay's unique blend of science fiction, comedy, and horror
Comparable Scripts: Ghostbusters II, Beetlejuice, The Frighteners, 21 Jump Street, Men in Black, Stranger Things, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Doctor Who, Supernatural, The Conjuring
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Script Level Analysis
This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.
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Characters
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Emotional Analysis
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Goals and Philosophical Conflict
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Scene Analysis
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Analysis of the Scene Percentiles
- The screenplay's originality stands out with a high percentile of 86.54%, indicating a unique and inventive story.
- The concept of the screenplay is also a strength, ranking at 79.60%, suggesting a well-developed and engaging premise.
- Character development could be enhanced, with a low percentile of 1.6%. Focusing on crafting compelling and relatable characters would elevate the story.
- Emotional impact currently ranks low at 12.4%. Exploring deeper emotional connections and exploring character motivations could intensify the screenplay's resonance.
The percentile patterns suggest an intuitive writing style, with strengths in dialogue (51.6%) and story forward movement (67.89%). This intuitive approach could be complemented by developing more intricate plot structures and concepts.
Balancing Elements- Balancing the low character development percentile with stronger character-driven elements would enhance the emotional impact and overall engagement.
- Consider increasing the pacing to complement the high engagement score (76.44%), ensuring the screenplay maintains a captivating rhythm.
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Overall AssessmentWhile the screenplay has notable strengths in originality and concept, refining character development and intensifying emotional impact would elevate its potential.
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Executive Summary
- Strong opening that sets the tone and introduces the characters and their personalities effectively. high ( Scene 1 (2) Scene 2 (9) )
- Well-developed and memorable characters with distinct personalities and comedic timing. high ( Scene 2 (9) Scene 5 (29) )
- Excellent pacing that balances humor, action, and suspenseful moments, keeping the audience engaged. high ( Scene 16 (79) Scene 32 (162) )
- Clever use of advertising and media to build the Ghostbusters brand and integrate it into the narrative. medium ( Scene 8 (39) )
- Unique blend of comedy, science fiction, and horror creates a fresh and entertaining experience. high
- Venkman's character, while humorous, could be seen as overly sexist and his advances towards Dana might need to be toned down for modern audiences. medium ( Scene 10 (53) Scene 28 (138) )
- The female characters, particularly Dana and Janine, could benefit from more agency and development beyond their roles as romantic interests or assistants. medium
- The conflict with the EPA feels somewhat underdeveloped and could be explored further with more nuanced motivations. low ( Scene 22 (108) )
- Stantz's encounter with the ghost in the Fort Detmerring barracks is suggestive and might require careful handling depending on the target audience. medium ( Scene 30 (148) )
- The scene in the St. Marks Playhouse demonstrates the potential for expanding the Ghostbusters universe with diverse paranormal encounters. low ( Scene 35 (182) )
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Executive Summary
- The climax of the screenplay is highly engaging and creatively combines humor with supernatural action, maintaining audience interest and providing a satisfying resolution. high ( Scene 42 (222) )
- The opening scene effectively sets up the supernatural premise and introduces the eerie atmosphere, hooking the audience early on. high ( Scene 1 (1) )
- Character development is strong, particularly with the transformation of Venkman from a skeptic to a committed Ghostbuster, which is pivotal for the narrative arc. medium ( Scene 9 (52) )
- The screenplay effectively uses humor to balance the darker, supernatural elements, making it accessible and enjoyable for a wider audience. medium ( Scene 7 (34) )
- The dialogue is sharp and memorable, contributing to character development and the screenplay's cultural impact. medium ( Scene 38 (190) )
- Some scenes, particularly the action sequences, could benefit from clearer descriptions to enhance visualization and directorial interpretation. medium ( Scene 14 (75) )
- The pacing in the middle part of the screenplay could be tightened to maintain momentum and keep the audience engaged throughout. medium
- The character arcs for supporting characters like Winston could be more developed to give them more depth and relevance to the plot. low
- The screenplay could explore more deeply the consequences of the Ghostbusters' actions on the city and its inhabitants to add layers to the narrative. low
- Introducing subplots or additional conflicts could provide more complexity and enrich the storyline, making it more compelling. low
- A deeper exploration of the historical and mythological elements could enhance the thematic depth of the screenplay. medium
- More scenes showing the public's reaction to the Ghostbusters could provide additional context and emotional impact. low
- Inclusion of more diverse character backgrounds could broaden the appeal and relatability of the story. low
- The creative use of the Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man as both a humorous and threatening antagonist is a unique and memorable aspect of the screenplay. high ( Scene 42 (222) )
- The screenplay's ability to blend science fiction, horror, and comedy genres is notably effective and innovative. high ( Scene 1 (1) )
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.6, The screenplay's character development is engaging and effective, with well-defined characters who undergo significant growth and transformation throughout the story. The interplay between character development and the screenplay's themes drives the narrative forward and deepens the emotional resonance of the story. See More
Premise: 8.9, The screenplay for "Ghostbusters" effectively establishes a compelling and clear premise, blending comedy, science fiction, and horror elements to create a unique and engaging narrative. The initial scenes quickly introduce the core characters, their scientific background, and their skeptical yet humorous approach to the supernatural. The premise's strength lies in its originality, combining elements of ghost hunting with witty dialogue and relatable characters. The clarity of the premise allows the audience to easily understand the central conflict and the Ghostbusters' mission to capture and contain supernatural entities. However, there's room for further exploration of the characters' backstories and motivations, particularly regarding their initial interest in the paranormal, to deepen audience engagement. See More
Structure: 8.0, The screenplay's structure effectively sets up the premise and character dynamics, leading to a thrilling climax and resolution. However, improvements to pacing and refining certain plot elements could enhance the overall narrative impact. See More
Theme: 8.0, The screenplay effectively explores and communicates its themes and messages, offering a blend of humor, suspense, and commentary on science versus the supernatural. While some themes are more fully developed and impactful than others, the screenplay manages to convey a coherent and engaging message about the importance of facing one's fears and embracing unconventional approaches to problem-solving. See More
Visual Impact: 6.8, The screenplay employs a mix of humor and visual effects, but its descriptions lack vividness and creativity, relying on conventional imagery. Revisiting the screenplay with a focus on crafting unique visual descriptions and incorporating innovative visual storytelling techniques could enhance its cinematic impact. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.3, The screenplay effectively elicits emotional responses through witty banter, supernatural tension, and personal growth. To enhance the emotional depth, consider incorporating moments of vulnerability, exploring the fears of secondary characters, and adding scenes that focus on the emotional complexities of the supernatural elements. See More
Conflict: 7.4, The screenplay effectively sets up a central conflict between the Ghostbusters, a group of scientists dedicated to catching and containing ghosts, and various supernatural forces threatening the safety of New York City. The stakes are personal for several characters, especially Dana Barrett, who becomes possessed by an ancient evil entity. While the screenplay succeeds in presenting an engaging conflict and escalating stakes, there are opportunities to deepen the emotional impact and heighten the narrative tension. See More
Originality: 8.3, The screenplay exhibits a delightful blend of nostalgia and innovation, capturing the essence of the original 'Ghostbusters' while introducing fresh elements that keep the story engaging and entertaining. The narrative deftly weaves supernatural thrills with comedic moments, creating a unique and immersive cinematic experience. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
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Character Dana Barrett
Description Dana, initially portrayed as a skeptic who doesn't believe in the supernatural, readily accepts the existence of a ghost in her refrigerator without much resistance. This contradicts her earlier skepticism.
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Character Peter Venkman
Description Venkman's character fluctuates between being a serious scientist and a comedic, womanizing figure. While this adds humor, it can occasionally feel inconsistent.
( Scene 10 (53) Scene 11 (57) )
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Description The Terror Dogs on Dana's rooftop are initially shown as stone statues, but they mysteriously disappear and reappear as living creatures without explanation. This sudden transformation creates a logical gap in the story.
( Scene 24 (112) Scene 25 (119) )
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Description The explosion of the storage facility releases all the captured ghosts, but their impact on the city and the Ghostbusters' efforts to recapture them are not addressed, leaving a significant plot hole.
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Description The Mayor's sudden trust in the Ghostbusters after initially dismissing them feels somewhat abrupt and convenient for the plot's progression.
( Scene 36 (185) )
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Description Venkman's flippant and sarcastic remarks towards Walter Peck, while humorous, might seem unprofessional for someone trying to defend their scientific credibility.
( Scene 22 (108) )
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Element Ghostbusters' exhaustion
( Scene 20 (97) Scene 26 (128) Scene 29 (153) )
Suggestion The repeated emphasis on the Ghostbusters' exhaustion could be streamlined to maintain pacing and avoid redundancy.
Venkman - Score: 81/100
Role
Protagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Stantz - Score: 82/100
Character Analysis Overview
Spengler - Score: 76/100
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Dana - Score: 83/100
Character Analysis Overview
Louis - Score: 72/100
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Supporting Character
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Identified Themes
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The Power of Science and Technology
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The Ghostbusters use their scientific knowledge and equipment to capture ghosts and defeat supernatural threats.
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The film highlights the importance of science and technology in solving problems and protecting society from the unknown. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening The Power of Science and Technology
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The Importance of Teamwork
25%
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The Ghostbusters work together as a team to overcome challenges and defeat the supernatural.
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The film shows that teamwork is essential for success and that we can achieve more when we work together. | ||||||||||||
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The Supernatural and the Unknown
20%
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The film explores the existence of the supernatural and the unknown, with the Ghostbusters facing a variety of ghosts, spirits, and other paranormal entities.
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The film taps into our fear of the unknown and the supernatural, while also exploring the possibility of coexistence between the natural and supernatural worlds. | ||||||||||||
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The Battle Between Good and Evil
15%
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The Ghostbusters represent the forces of good, while Gozer and his minions represent the forces of evil.
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The film presents a classic battle between good and evil, with the Ghostbusters fighting to protect the innocent and the city from supernatural threats. | ||||||||||||
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The Importance of Humor and Wit
10%
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The film incorporates humor and wit into its storytelling, with the Ghostbusters often using sarcasm and jokes to defuse tense situations.
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The humor and wit add a lighthearted and entertaining element to the film, making it more enjoyable and relatable. | ||||||||||||
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
| Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
| John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
| What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
| Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
| Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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| internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goal is to confront their fears, prove themselves as capable Ghostbusters, and maintain composure in the face of supernatural threats. |
| External Goals | The protagonist's external goal is to protect the city from supernatural threats, capture ghosts, and maintain their ghostbusting business's reputation |
| Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the clash between the known and the unknown, science vs. the supernatural, and skepticism vs. belief in the paranormal. |
Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals, along with the philosophical conflict, push them to confront their fears, prove themselves, and navigate the blurred lines between science and the unknown, leading to personal growth and courage.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflicts drive the protagonist's actions and decisions, creating tension, suspense, and building the narrative arc towards the resolution of the supernatural threat, ultimately contributing to the climax and resolution of the story.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflicts explore themes of bravery, belief in the unknown, science vs. the supernatural, and the importance of facing fears and working together to confront challenges, adding depth and complexity to the narrative.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
| Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
| Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
| Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
| Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
| 1 - Unseen Disturbance | Eerie, Suspenseful, Frightened | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 2 - Interrupted ESP Test | Suspenseful, Humorous, Excited | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 3 - The Library Investigation | Humorous, Suspenseful, Scientific | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 4 - Ghostly Encounter in the Stacks | Humorous, Suspenseful, Excited | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 5 - Confrontation at the Lab | Sarcastic, Excited, Confrontational, Shocked | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 6 - The Birth of Ghostbusters | Humorous, Excited, Desperate | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 7 - Awkward Neighborly Encounter | Humorous, Quirky, Light-hearted | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 8 - Supernatural Disturbances and Ghostbusting | Suspenseful, Humorous, Terrifying | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 9 - The Birth of Ghostbusters | Humorous, Suspenseful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 10 - Dana's Mysterious Encounter | Humorous, Suspenseful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 11 - A Night of Frustration and Horror | Humorous, Suspenseful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 12 - Hotel Disturbance | Humorous, Suspenseful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 13 - Ghostbusters Investigate the Apartment Building | Humorous, Suspenseful, Sarcastic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 14 - Ray Encounter | Suspenseful, Humorous, Supernatural | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 15 - Paranormal Hallway Encounter | Suspenseful, Humorous, Light-hearted | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 16 - The Banquet Room Battle | Suspenseful, Humorous, Action-packed | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 17 - Ghostbusting Success | Humorous, Suspenseful, Exciting | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 18 - Ghostbusters Capture and Controversy | Humorous, Exciting, Informative | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 4 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 19 - Ghostbusters on the Case | Humorous, Mysterious, Exciting | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 20 - Ghostly Encounters on the Airwaves | Humorous, Mysterious, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 21 - The Ghostbusters' Office | Humorous, Sarcastic, Fast-paced | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 22 - Confrontation with the EPA | Humorous, Sarcastic, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 23 - Storage Facility Concerns | Suspenseful, Humorous, Dark | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 24 - A Nightmarish Encounter | Suspense, Fear, Mystery | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 25 - Unleashed Terror | Humorous, Suspenseful, Eerie | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 26 - Louis Possessed | Suspense, Humor, Dark | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 27 - Unveiling the Gatekeeper | Suspenseful, Humorous, Sinister | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 28 - Dana's Possession | Supernatural, Humorous, Intense | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 29 - The Keymaster's Revelation | Humorous, Suspenseful, Supernatural | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 30 - Sensual Encounter | Suspense, Supernatural, Erotic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 31 - Confrontation at the Firehouse | Tense, Humorous, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 32 - The Iridescent Geyser | Tense, Sarcastic, Chaotic, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 33 - Night of Terror | Suspenseful, Humorous, Supernatural | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 34 - Unwelcome Encounter in the Dark | Suspenseful, Dark, Humorous | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 35 - Preparing for Gozer's Arrival | Suspenseful, Humorous, Mysterious | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 36 - Confrontation at City Hall | Humorous, Serious, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 37 - Explosive Encounter and Preparations Amidst Earthquake | Suspenseful, Dark, Humorous, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 38 - Arrival at Dana's Apartment Building | Tense, Exciting, Humorous, Surreal | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 39 - Confrontation with Gozer | Tense, Humorous, Surreal, Epic | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 40 - The Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man Arrives | Tense, Humorous, Surreal, Epic | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 41 - Confrontation and Triumph: The Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man's Defeat | Humorous, Tense, Surreal, Exciting | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 42 - Post-Victory Celebrations | Humorous, Exciting, Surreal | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
Tip: Click on criteria in the top row for detailed summaries.
Scene Strengths
- Engaging dialogue
- Effective blending of horror, comedy, and fantasy elements
- Witty dialogue
- Engaging concept
- Suspenseful and entertaining atmosphere
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited emotional depth
- Limited character development
- Some cliched elements
- Some predictable outcome
- Some elements may be too chaotic for some viewers
Suggestions
- Focus on developing deeper emotional connections with the characters to increase the audience's investment in the story
- Explore secondary character development to create a more well-rounded and dynamic ensemble cast
- Avoid relying on cliched elements that may feel predictable to the audience
- Consider adding surprising plot twists or unexpected character reactions to challenge the audience's expectations
- Strive for clarity in intense or chaotic scenes to prevent confusion or disorientation for viewers
Scene 1 - Unseen Disturbance
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 2 - Interrupted ESP Test
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 3 - The Library Investigation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 4 - Ghostly Encounter in the Stacks
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 5 - Confrontation at the Lab
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 6 - The Birth of Ghostbusters
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 7 - Awkward Neighborly Encounter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 8 - Supernatural Disturbances and Ghostbusting
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 9 - The Birth of Ghostbusters
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 10 - Dana's Mysterious Encounter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 11 - A Night of Frustration and Horror
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Scene 12 - Hotel Disturbance
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Scene 13 - Ghostbusters Investigate the Apartment Building
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Scene 14 - Ray Encounter
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Scene 15 - Paranormal Hallway Encounter
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Scene 16 - The Banquet Room Battle
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Scene 17 - Ghostbusting Success
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Scene 18 - Ghostbusters Capture and Controversy
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Scene 19 - Ghostbusters on the Case
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Scene 20 - Ghostly Encounters on the Airwaves
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Scene 21 - The Ghostbusters' Office
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Scene 22 - Confrontation with the EPA
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Scene 23 - Storage Facility Concerns
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Scene 24 - A Nightmarish Encounter
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Scene 25 - Unleashed Terror
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Scene 26 - Louis Possessed
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Scene 27 - Unveiling the Gatekeeper
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Scene 28 - Dana's Possession
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Scene 29 - The Keymaster's Revelation
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Scene 30 - Sensual Encounter
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Scene 31 - Confrontation at the Firehouse
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Scene 32 - The Iridescent Geyser
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Scene 33 - Night of Terror
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Scene 34 - Unwelcome Encounter in the Dark
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Scene 35 - Preparing for Gozer's Arrival
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Scene 36 - Confrontation at City Hall
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Scene 37 - Explosive Encounter and Preparations Amidst Earthquake
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Scene 38 - Arrival at Dana's Apartment Building
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Scene 39 - Confrontation with Gozer
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Scene 40 - The Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man Arrives
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Scene 41 - Confrontation and Triumph: The Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man's Defeat
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Scene 42 - Post-Victory Celebrations
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- Physical environment: The world depicted in this screenplay is a blend of modern urban settings and supernatural elements. Libraries, universities, offices, hotels, fire stations, apartments, and public spaces are all featured, creating a sense of realism and relatability. However, the presence of ghosts, paranormal activities, ancient temples, and otherworldly entities adds a layer of mystery and wonder to the world.
- Culture: The screenplay incorporates various cultural elements, including the scientific and rational perspective of the Ghostbusters, the skepticism and fear of the general public, and the ancient mythology surrounding Gozer and the Sumerian deities. This blend of cultures adds depth and complexity to the world.
- Society: The society depicted in the screenplay reflects a modern urban environment with a mix of social groups, beliefs, and attitudes. The Ghostbusters operate as a unique and somewhat marginalized group, often facing skepticism from authorities and the general public. The film also touches on themes of media sensationalism, scientific ethics, and the role of individuals in shaping the society they live in.
- Technology: The screenplay heavily features advanced technology, including proton packs, ghost traps, PKE meters, and various scientific equipment used by the Ghostbusters. This technology plays a crucial role in the team's investigations and confrontations with the supernatural. The film also incorporates elements of science fiction and fantasy, such as the gateway to another dimension and the appearance of the Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology of the world in the screenplay shape the characters' experiences and actions in several ways. - The presence of ghosts and paranormal activities forces the Ghostbusters to adapt and develop specialized skills and equipment to deal with the unknown. - The skepticism and fear of the general public create challenges for the Ghostbusters in gaining acceptance and support for their work. - The ancient mythology surrounding Gozer and the Sumerian deities adds a sense of danger and urgency to the Ghostbusters' mission, as they must confront powerful and enigmatic forces. - The advanced technology available to the Ghostbusters gives them an edge in their investigations and confrontations with the supernatural, but it also raises ethical questions and the potential for misuse.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative of the screenplay in several ways: - The modern urban setting provides a familiar and relatable backdrop for the supernatural events that unfold, making the story feel more grounded and immersive. - The blend of cultures adds complexity to the narrative, as the Ghostbusters must navigate different perspectives, beliefs, and motivations while investigating paranormal activities. - The societal structure influences the obstacles and challenges that the Ghostbusters face, as they operate as a somewhat marginalized group often facing skepticism and resistance. - The advanced technology plays a crucial role in the Ghostbusters' investigations and confrontations with the supernatural, driving the action and suspense of the narrative.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring various themes and ideas: - The conflict between science and the supernatural challenges traditional notions of reality and the limits of human understanding. - The ethical implications of using advanced technology for paranormal investigations raise questions about responsibility and the potential consequences of tampering with unknown forces. - The societal reaction to the supernatural highlights the power of fear, superstition, and the search for meaning in the face of the unknown. - The film's exploration of ancient mythology and Sumerian deities adds a timeless and mythological dimension to the narrative, connecting it to broader themes of good versus evil and the battle between order and chaos.
| Voice Analysis | |
|---|---|
| Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by witty dialogue, fast-paced action, and a blend of humor and suspense. |
| Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a dynamic and engaging atmosphere. It balances humor with tension and adds depth to the characters and their relationships. |
| Best Representation Scene | 4 - Ghostly Encounter in the Stacks |
| Best Scene Explanation | Scene 4 best showcases the writer's unique voice because it effectively combines humor, suspense, and supernatural elements. The dialogue is witty and engaging, the action is fast-paced, and the overall tone is one of excitement and anticipation. |
Style and Similarities
The screenplay exhibits a diverse and multifaceted writing style, encompassing elements of humor, supernatural themes, action, suspense, and drama. It blends various genres and narratives, creating a unique and engaging storytelling experience.
Style Similarities:
| Writer | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Dan Aykroyd | His influence is evident throughout the screenplay, particularly in scenes that blend humor and supernatural elements, creating a distinct and memorable tone. |
| Harold Ramis | His comedic sensibilities and penchant for witty dialogue are prominent in several scenes, adding a layer of humor and character development. |
| Joss Whedon | His writing style is discernible in scenes that combine humor, action, and supernatural themes, showcasing his ability to craft engaging and entertaining narratives. |
| Shane Black | Elements of his style, such as fast-paced storytelling and witty banter, can be observed in scenes that blend humor with action and suspense. |
| Guillermo del Toro | His ability to merge supernatural elements with realistic settings and relatable characters is evident in scenes that create a sense of unease and mystery. |
Other Similarities: The screenplay also incorporates the styles of other notable writers, such as Ivan Reitman, Neil Gaiman, and Edgar Wright, contributing to its diverse and rich storytelling landscape.
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
| Pattern | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Frequent High Tone Scores | Most scenes in this screenplay have a high tone score, indicating a consistent level of suspense, excitement, or humor throughout the narrative. |
| Suspense and Humor | Suspenseful scenes are often complemented by humor, creating a blend of紧张and lighthearted moments. This combination adds depth and keeps the audience engaged. |
| Humor and Character Changes | Scenes with high humor scores tend to have less character changes, suggesting that comedic moments may take precedence over character development in those instances. |
| High Stakes Scenes | High stakes scenes, those with significant consequences for the characters, are often accompanied by intense dialogue and emotional impact, enhancing the overall tension and drama. |
| Mysterious and Suspenseful | Scenes that combine mystery and suspense tend to have higher overall grades, indicating that the combination of intrigue and tension is particularly effective in engaging the audience. |
| Supernatural and Suspenseful | The combination of supernatural elements and suspenseful tones consistently results in high grades, suggesting that this blend of the otherworldly and the thrilling resonates well with the audience. |
| Surrealism and Excitement | Scenes with surreal elements are often accompanied by high excitement scores, indicating that the unexpected and imaginative can effectively elevate the intensity and engagement of the narrative. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates strong writing craft with a blend of humor, suspense, and supernatural elements. The writer effectively creates engaging narratives, develops compelling characters, and keeps the audience entertained with a unique voice and style. However, there are areas that could benefit from further refinement to elevate the overall impact and consistency of the writing.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
| Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Book | Read 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder to study in-depth character development and story structuring techniques. | This book provides valuable insights into creating compelling characters, building character arcs, and structuring a screenplay for maximum impact. |
| Screenplay | Study screenplays by Aaron Sorkin for exceptional dialogue writing and fast-paced storytelling. | Analyzing Sorkin's screenplays will help improve the writer's ability to create sharp, witty, and engaging dialogue that drives the narrative forward. |
| Video | Watch behind-the-scenes footage of films with similar tone and pacing to understand how directors and writers achieve the desired effect. | Observing how successful films handle tone and rhythm visually can provide valuable practical insights into storytelling techniques. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|---|---|
| Damsel in Distress | Dana Barrett is frequently rescued by the Ghostbusters, particularly from Gozer and the Terror Dogs. | A female character who is constantly in need of rescue by a male character, often portrayed as weak and helpless. |
| The Chosen One | The Ghostbusters are tasked with defeating Gozer, an ancient deity, implying that they are the only ones who can save the world. | A character who is destined to save the day, often due to some special power or ability. |
| MacGuffin | The Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man is summoned by Gozer as a physical manifestation of the Ghostbusters' fear, but it ultimately serves no real purpose in the plot. | An object or device that is important to the plot, but has no real value or purpose beyond its symbolic meaning. |
| Supernatural Scare | The film features a number of supernatural scares, including ghosts, demons, and other paranormal entities. | A sudden and unexpected event that is designed to scare the audience. |
| Comic Relief | Winston Zeddemore is often used as a source of comic relief, providing humor and levity in tense situations. | A character who provides humor and lightens the mood in a serious or dramatic situation. |
| The Power of Love | Dana Barrett's love for Peter Venkman helps to save the day, as it weakens Gozer and allows the Ghostbusters to defeat him. | The idea that love can overcome all obstacles, even supernatural ones. |
| The Chosen One | Louis Tully, the Keymaster, and Dana Barrett, the Gatekeeper, are chosen to aid in the summoning of Gozer. They are not necessarily evil, but they are destined to play a role in the apocalypse. | A character who is destined to save the day, often due to some special power or ability. |
| The Hero's Journey | The Ghostbusters go on a journey to defeat Gozer, facing many challenges and obstacles along the way. | A story structure that follows a hero on a journey to achieve a goal, often involving a transformation or growth in character. |
| The Chosen One | The Ghostbusters are the only ones who can defeat Gozer, as they are the only ones with the knowledge and experience to do so. | A character who is destined to save the day, often due to some special power or ability. |
| The Power of Love | Dana Barrett's love for Louis Tully helps to save the day, as it weakens Gozer and allows the Ghostbusters to defeat him. | The idea that love can overcome all obstacles, even supernatural ones. |
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 16 | Venkman: He slimed me! He slimed me! |
| 18 | Stantz: We got one! |
| 8 | Stantz: Are you troubled by strange noises in the night? Do you experience feelings of dread in your basement or attic? Have you or your family actually seen a spook, specter or ghost? If the answer is yes, then don't wait another minute. Just pick up the phone and call the professionals -- Ghostbusters. |
| 40 | Stantz: It's the Stay-Puft Marshmallow Man! He was on all the packages we used to buy when I was a kid. We used to roast Stay-Puft marshmallows at Camp Waconda! |
| 38 | Venkman: Ghostbusters! |
Some Loglines to consider:
| Three parapsychologists lose their university funding and start a ghost-catching business in New York City, only to find themselves facing a supernatural threat of apocalyptic proportions. |
| When ghosts invade Manhattan, a team of eccentric scientists with high-tech gadgets and a knack for the supernatural become the city's only hope. |
| A group of unlikely heroes must overcome their personal differences and bureaucratic obstacles to save New York City from a Sumerian god and his marshmallow minion. |
| A team of eccentric scientists turned ghost hunters face the ultimate supernatural threat in a battle to save New York City from a gooey, gigantic marshmallow man. |
| When ghosts start popping up all over New York, only three professors and a streetwise newcomer can save the day in this supernatural comedy. |
| Science meets the supernatural as a ghost-catching squad wrangles spirits across New York, culminating in a showdown with an ancient deity looking to remodel the city. |
| It's a race against time as four ghostbusters put their paranormal prowess to the test against an apocalyptic threat in the heart of New York City. |
| Who you gonna call? A ragtag team of ghostbusters faces off against a marshmallow mascot turned malevolent god in this action-packed supernatural comedy. |
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