Knives Out
Executive Summary
Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend
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USP: This modern murder mystery with a unique voice that blends sharp dialogue, dark humor, and intricate plot twists offers a fresh take on the genre. Through its exploration of complex family dynamics, moral dilemmas, and unexpected revelations, this screenplay captivates the audience, keeping them engaged and guessing until the very end.
Overview
Genres: Mystery, Drama, Thriller, Comedy, Crime
Setting: Contemporary, Thrombey estate and various other locations in Boston
Overview: The screenplay for "Knives Out" exhibits strong potential, with a captivating premise, well-developed characters, and an engaging narrative. The overall score of 8.41 reflects its strengths in character development, dialogue, and unpredictability. However, opportunities exist to further enhance the emotional depth, pacing, and thematic exploration.
Themes: Family Dynamics, Immigration and Identity, Truth and Deception, Wealth and Privilege
Conflict and Stakes: The primary conflicts revolve around Marta's innocence in Harlan's death, the family's inheritance, and the truth behind the mysterious events at the Thrombey estate. The stakes include Marta's freedom, the family's fortune, and the reputation of the Thrombey family.
Overall Mood: Suspenseful and mysterious
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Somber and mysterious tone as the housemaid discovers Harlan Thrombey's body
Standout Features:
- Ensemble Cast: Featuring a talented ensemble cast of established and rising stars
- Twists and Turns : Intriguing plot twists and unexpected revelations keep the audience engaged
- Social Commentary : Explores relevant social themes such as class divide and immigration issues
Comparable Scripts:
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$30-40 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, fans of mystery thrillers, drama, and ensemble casts
Marketability: Strong ensemble cast, gripping storyline, and blend of mystery and drama make it highly marketable
Unique characters and unexpected plot twists make it appealing to a diverse audience
Relevant social themes, strong performances, and critical acclaim potential contribute to its marketability
Profit Potential: High, due to its wide appeal, potential for awards recognition, and strong word-of-mouth potential
Scene Level Percentiles
Emotions Elicited Percentiles
This is a rough estimate of how the average intensity of emotions elicited in this script compare to all scripts in the Vault (all genres).
Higher isn't necessarily better. This is FYI.
Screenplay Analysis
- High conflict level (84.55%) indicates compelling tension and drama.
- Strong story forward momentum (89.82%) suggests a captivating and engaging narrative.
- Lower character ratings (23.57%) suggest characters may need more development and depth.
- Formatting score (49.44%) could be improved to enhance readability and presentation.
The writer potentially leans towards conceptual writing, with higher percentiles in concept, plot, and structure.
Balancing Elements- Consider strengthening character development to balance the high conflict level.
- Explore ways to improve formatting without compromising narrative flow.
Conceptual
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay shows potential for a compelling narrative with strong conflict and forward momentum, but could benefit from enhanced character development and formatting.
How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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Percentile | Before | After |
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Script Visual Impact | 9.25 | 98 | The whale: 9.00 | Knives Out: 9.25 |
Scene Engagement | 9.02 | 95 | V for Vendetta: 9.00 | the dark knight rises: 9.02 |
Script Characters | 8.75 | 88 | The Pianist: 8.50 | the dark knight rises: 8.75 |
Scene Unpredictability | 7.91 | 88 | the dark knight rises: 7.90 | Knives Out: 7.91 |
Scene Conflict Level | 8.5 | 87 | Sherlock Holmes: 8.4 | Rambo: 8.5 |
Scene Story Forward | 8.6 | 85 | Narcos Pilot: 8.5 | the 5th element: 8.6 |
Overall Script | 8.41 | 85 | Women talking: 8.40 | Knives Out: 8.41 |
Script Premise | 8.75 | 84 | Manchester by the sea: 8.50 | Erin Brokovich: 8.75 |
Scene Internal Goal | 8.18 | 80 | a few good men: 8.17 | Knives Out: 8.18 |
Script Conflict | 8.25 | 79 | KILLING ZOE: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 |
Script Originality | 8.75 | 74 | Inside Out: 8.50 | Casablanca: 8.75 |
Scene High Stakes | 8.2 | 73 | The imitation game: 8.1 | Titanic: 8.2 |
Script Structure | 8.22 | 71 | Gran Torino: 8.21 | Knives Out: 8.22 |
Scene Plot | 8.2 | 70 | Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon: 8.1 | Casablanca: 8.2 |
Script Structure | 8.25 | 64 | Gladiator: 8.00 | Titanic: 8.25 |
Scene Dialogue | 8.0 | 64 | Nickel Boys : 7.9 | fight Club: 8.0 |
Scene External Goal | 7.34 | 62 | scream : 7.33 | Knives Out: 7.34 |
Scene Originality | 8.78 | 61 | The big short: 8.77 | Casablanca: 8.78 |
Scene Formatting | 8.20 | 60 | Promising young woman: 8.19 | Knives Out: 8.20 |
Scene Concept | 8.2 | 59 | Coda: 8.1 | face/off: 8.2 |
Scene Character Changes | 7.1 | 55 | Triangle of sadness: 7.0 | Knives Out: 7.1 |
Scene Overall | 8.4 | 54 | Triangle of sadness: 8.3 | Knives Out: 8.4 |
Scene Pacing | 8.27 | 52 | glass Onion Knives Out : 8.26 | Knives Out: 8.27 |
Script Theme | 8.25 | 46 | Stranger Things: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 |
Scene Emotional Impact | 7.7 | 41 | Jack Reacher: 7.6 | severance (TV): 7.7 |
Script Emotional Impact | 7.75 | 39 | Inception: 7.50 | Erin Brokovich: 7.75 |
Scene Characters | 8.0 | 19 | Narcos Pilot: 7.9 | Knives Out: 8.0 |
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by sharp dialogue, dark humor, and intricate plot twists. It adds depth and complexity to the story, enhancing the mood and themes of the screenplay.
Best representation: Scene 7 - Confrontation in the Library. This scene effectively encapsulates the writer's unique voice through its blend of sharp dialogue, underlying tensions, and complex character dynamics.
Memorable Lines:
- Blanc: When good people get desperate, the knives come out. (Scene 26)
- Marta: I'm all just pure adrenaline now it's like I swallowed bees. (Scene 34)
- Fran: you... did this... won't... get away.. with this (Scene 36)
- Fran: you... did this... (Scene 43)
- Benoit Blanc: I want you to remember something very important: you won not by playing the game Harlan's way, but yours. (Scene 45)
Writing Style:
The overall writing style of the screenplay is characterized by dark and suspenseful narratives, intricate plots, and complex character dynamics. The dialogue is often sharp and witty, driving the plot forward and revealing the characters' motivations and conflicts. The scenes analyzed suggest that the screenplay draws inspiration from various writing styles, including those of Agatha Christie, Gillian Flynn, Rian Johnson, and Noah Baumbach.
Style Similarities:
- Gillian Flynn
- Christopher Nolan
- Aaron Sorkin
- Rian Johnson
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
Engine: Gemini
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
Knives Out is a highly engaging and well-crafted murder mystery with a unique premise, a diverse cast of characters, and witty dialogue. The screenplay masterfully constructs a complex plot with numerous twists and turns, keeping the audience guessing until the very end. While the motivations of some characters could be explored in greater depth, the overall narrative strength and pacing are excellent, making this screenplay a highly recommendable read.
- The screenplay masterfully constructs a complex and engaging mystery with numerous twists and turns, keeping the audience guessing until the very end. high
- The initial scene effectively sets the stage for the mystery, introducing the intriguing setting and the central event of Harlan's death. The subsequent flashbacks further deepen the mystery and reveal the complexities of Harlan's relationships with his family. high ( Scene 1 Scene 13 Scene 14 )
- The screenplay boasts a diverse and well-developed cast of characters, each with their own unique motivations and flaws. high
- The dialogue is sharp, witty, and often humorous, adding to the entertainment value of the screenplay. medium
- The pacing of the screenplay is excellent, balancing moments of suspense with character development and humor, keeping the audience engaged throughout. medium
- The motivations of some characters, particularly the Thrombey family members, could be explored in greater depth to provide a more nuanced understanding of their actions. medium
- The screenplay cleverly subverts typical mystery tropes, creating a unique and unexpected narrative. high
- The theme of wealth and privilege is subtly woven into the narrative, adding depth and social commentary to the story. medium
- The unexpected alliance between Marta and Ransom adds an interesting dynamic to the story and further complicates the mystery. medium ( Scene 27 Scene 30 )
Engine: Claude
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Knives Out' is a well-crafted, engaging, and thematically rich murder mystery that keeps the audience guessing and entertains throughout. The strong narrative structure, exceptional character development, and sharp dialogue make it a highly recommended work. While a few minor pacing issues and a slightly understated protagonist's arc could be improved, the screenplay's overall strengths, innovative storytelling, and exploration of complex themes make it a compelling and distinctive piece that would appeal to a wide audience.
- The screenplay has a strong narrative structure that keeps the audience engaged throughout the story. The plot twists and reveals are well-paced and effectively executed. high
- The characterization is exceptional, with each character being well-developed and having a distinct personality and motivations. The relationships between the characters are complex and nuanced. high
- The dialogue is sharp, witty, and natural, capturing the unique voices of the characters. It serves to further the plot and deepen the characters' relationships. high
- The screenplay masterfully blends elements of mystery, suspense, and dark humor, creating a compelling and entertaining viewing experience. high
- The screenplay explores complex themes of inheritance, family dynamics, and moral ambiguity in a nuanced and thought-provoking manner. high
- While the overall pacing is strong, there are a few instances where the narrative slows down or drags, which could be tightened to maintain the momentum. medium
- The screenplay could benefit from a more explicit exploration of the protagonist's (Marta's) internal journey and character arc, as her transformation and growth are somewhat understated. medium
- The screenplay's innovative use of unreliable narration and shifting perspectives is a highlight, keeping the audience guessing and engaged throughout the story. high
- The screenplay's thematic exploration of inheritance, privilege, and moral responsibility is nuanced and thought-provoking, adding depth to the narrative. high
- The screenplay's stylistic elements, such as the use of symbolism (e.g., the GO board, Harlan's baseball) and visual storytelling, are effective in conveying the story's themes and character arcs. high
Engine: GPT4
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay 'Knives Out' presents a compelling murder mystery with a richly woven plot full of twists and character depth. It balances humor, suspense, and drama effectively, making it a standout script that should attract audiences who enjoy clever storytelling and complex characters.
- The screenplay features a complex and engaging plot with multiple twists that maintain suspense and intrigue throughout. high
- Character development, especially of Marta and Ransom, is well-executed, showing depth and evolution in their personalities and motives. high ( Scene 38 Scene 44 )
- The dialogue is sharp and witty, contributing to character development and the overall tone of the screenplay. medium ( Scene 44 )
- The use of settings and props (like the fake knife and the toxicology report) are cleverly integrated into the plot, enhancing the storytelling. medium ( Scene 45 )
- The screenplay maintains a good pace, balancing slower, more introspective sections with fast-paced, dramatic moments. medium
- Some scenes may benefit from slight trimming to enhance pacing and maintain tension without over-explaining scenarios. medium
- The motivations behind some secondary characters' actions could be clarified to enhance the plot's believability. low
- A deeper exploration of the emotional impact of Harlan's death on the family could add depth to the characters' reactions and decisions. medium
- The screenplay effectively uses humor and irony, particularly through Blanc's character, which adds a unique flavor to the murder mystery genre. high
- The twist where Marta is revealed to have unknowingly corrected her medication mistake adds a brilliant layer of irony and suspense. high ( Scene 44 )
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 8.75, The screenplay for "Knives Out" boasts a captivating and clear premise, skillfully blending elements of classic whodunit mysteries with contemporary social commentary. The setup effectively intrigues the audience with its intricate family dynamics, suspicious characters, and the enigmatic presence of Benoit Blanc. However, the initial focus on Marta's vulnerability could be further enhanced by highlighting her unique skills and connection to Harlan, providing a stronger hook for her central role in unraveling the mystery. See More
Structure: 8.25, The screenplay demonstrates a solid narrative foundation with an intriguing murder mystery and a diverse cast of characters. However, its pacing could be tightened, and certain plot points benefit from further development. Overall, the screenplay holds promise but may require some fine-tuning to enhance its storytelling effectiveness. See More
Theme: 8.25, The screenplay effectively explores themes of family dynamics, morality, and the clash between tradition and modernity. The themes are interwoven into the narrative seamlessly, providing depth and resonance to the story. While the exploration of some themes could be further refined, the screenplay successfully conveys its messages and engages the audience on multiple levels. See More
Visual Impact: 9.25, This screenplay features detailed and creative visual descriptions that successfully immerse readers in the film's world, enhance the emotional tone, and support the narrative effectively. However, there are opportunities to further elevate the visual storytelling by exploring lighting techniques and integrating more symbolism. See More
Emotional Impact: 7.75, The screenplay showcases strong emotional depth by eliciting empathy for its nuanced characters and their struggles. It effectively employs emotional variety and consistency, immersing the audience in a range of feelings. However, opportunities exist to further enhance emotional resonance by deepening character connections and exploring transformative emotional arcs. See More
Conflict: 8.25, The screenplay effectively employs conflict and stakes to generate tension and engage the audience. The central conflict, revolving around the circumstances of Harlan Thrombey's death and the subsequent investigation, is well-defined and compelling. The stakes are significant, encompassing not only the fate of Marta Cabrera but also the dynamics and secrets within the Thrombey family. However, the narrative could benefit from further escalation of stakes, particularly in the second and third acts, to maintain a consistently high level of audience engagement. See More
Originality: 8.75, The screenplay showcases originality and creative approaches through its exploration of the nuances of family relationships and the complexities of human nature. The writer effectively utilizes a non-linear narrative structure, compelling characters, and the subversion of genre expectations, resulting in a fresh and engaging cinematic experience. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- In the wake of wealthy mystery novelist Harlan Thrombey's murder, housemaid Fran stumbles upon his lifeless body. As the investigation commences a week later, immigrant caretaker Marta Cabrera learns of his demise and heads to the Thrombey estate. Marta's grief over her friend's recent suicide adds to her distress as she becomes a suspect in Thrombey's murder, prompting concerns from her family.
- Nurse Marta and her friend Meg arrive at the Thrombey estate to find the funeral has already taken place. Marta is upset and Mrs. Thrombey apologizes for the exclusion. Marta meets with police detectives to give her statement about the events leading up to the patriarch's death.
- The Thrombey family is gathered for a party at their home. Guests mingle and enjoy each other's company. Lieutenant Elliott interviews family members, including Linda, Richard, Walt, and Greatnana, about Harlan and their relationships with him. The scene ends with Walt being interviewed about his involvement in the family business.
- Amidst the celebration, Donna is startled by Richard's clumsy accident. Walt, oblivious, introduces his pensive son, Jacob. Family members share mixed views on Harlan. Joni dances and praises his philosophy. Meg reveals his financial support. Linda's frustration with Meg's absence lingers.
- Lieutenant Elliott introduces renowned private investigator Benoit Blanc to the Thrombey family during their questioning about Harlan's death. Blanc reveals his presence is at the request of an anonymous client and assures he will serve as a passive observer. Despite initial skepticism, the family agrees to his participation. Blanc begins by inquiring about Marta, Harlan's nurse, described by the family as a valued member of their household.
- In the library, Blanc questions Linda and Richard about Walt. Richard belittles Walt's career, while Linda dismisses his intelligence. A flashback reveals Walt arguing with Harlan at the party, resulting in his dismissal from the publishing house.
- Walt deceives Blanc about his conversation with Harlan, divulging information about Ransom's argument with him. Blanc interrogates Richard about a potential altercation with Harlan, prompting a flashback revealing Harlan's confrontation with Richard over an affair.
- In the library, Richard reveals Harlan's decision to put his mother in a nursing home, causing tension with Linda. Joni arrives and explains a tuition payment mix-up. Blanc questions her, triggering a flashback where Harlan accuses Joni of embezzling tuition payments. Joni dismisses it as a wiring issue, and Blanc ends the interview for a break. The scene ends with Joni leaving the library rattled and Richard searching Harlan's desk.
- Lieutenant Elliott expresses disappointment in the investigation's lack of progress while Blanc examines a baseball. Marta, Harlan's nurse, overhears their conversation and is startled when Blanc appears beside her. He invites her to join them and questions her about her relationship with Harlan. She reveals her care for him and her inability to lie. Blanc confronts her with knowledge of Richard's affair, shocking her.
- Marta denies her affair with Richard, followed by vomiting. Blanc proposes that Richard's father-in-law confronted him about the affair, threatening to reveal it to Marta. Elliott expresses doubt about the motive's strength. Blanc introduces Joni, a lifestyle guru supported by Harlan, and suggests Harlan's plans to terminate her stipend. The scene concludes with Marta attempting to re-enter the house.
- In this scene, Detective Blanc questions Marta, Elliott, and Wagner about Joni's financial situation and Walter's potential involvement. Blanc reveals that he was hired anonymously to investigate Harlan's death and asks for everyone's whereabouts at the time of death. Elliott provides details about the family's whereabouts, while Wagner expresses skepticism about Joni's motive. Blanc confronts Elliott and Wagner about the weak alibis and motives presented by the family members and suggests that someone deliberately withheld information about Harlan's intentions to fire Walter.
- During the night of Harlan Thrombey's murder, Linda hears creaking noises that disturb her sleep. She initially dismisses them but later believes they indicate someone's presence in the house. Harlan is seen coming down the stairs twice, once at midnight and again at 12:15 AM, which is after the estimated time of death. Meg arrives home around 12:30 AM and retires to bed. Marta is observed leaving the house at midnight, and Joni visits Harlan in his office before departing. The scene raises questions about the events surrounding Harlan's death and the involvement of the individuals present.
- Marta leads Harlan up the creaky stairs to his bedroom, but he ignores her and continues to his office. Marta grabs a med kit and follows him, exasperated.
- Marta reluctantly plays a game of GO with Harlan to earn the right to give him his medicine. As they play, Marta realizes she has given him the wrong dosage and must help him frame her for his murder to protect her mother.
- In a flashback, Marta follows Harlan's elaborate instructions to create an alibi for his murder, successfully deceiving Walt and Jacob.
- Marta climbs to Harlan's bedroom, hides her disguise, but encounters Greatnana's watchful gaze. Harlan instructs Marta to tell a specific story to the police, which she does. Despite the stress, Marta endures the questioning and vomits afterward. A flashback reveals Fran's suspicions about Harlan's death.
- Marta faces questions from Richard about her immigration status. Meanwhile, Harlan and Ransom clash over escalating tensions. Marta finds solace in a secret smoke session with Meg.
- Walt and Meg offer financial support to Marta, while Detective Blanc investigates Harlan's death and seeks Marta's assistance.
- Marta witnesses Harlan Thrombey's suicide and keeps it a secret. She retrieves the security tape from the night of his death, which shows Harlan instructing her to avoid the security cameras.
- As Lieutenant Elliott, Trooper Wagner, Blanc, and Marta search the Thrombey estate woods, Marta's footprints from the night before are discovered. Blanc notices her attempts to cover her tracks, causing tension and suspicion. Marta hides a broken trellis under bushes, while Blanc and Greatnana exchange an intense stare. The scene builds suspense and mystery surrounding Marta's actions and Blanc's growing belief in her involvement in Harlan's death.
- In the study, Blanc questions Marta about her medical bag and the overturned GO board. As he ponders, barking dogs outside announce the arrival of Hugh Drysdale (Ransom), who limps into the house uninvited.
- In a tense family gathering, uninvited Ransom arrives, causing chaos when he reveals Jacob overheard Harlan and Ransom discussing the will while hiding in the bathroom. Walt and Richard confront Jacob, while Linda and Joni try to calm the situation. Alan Stevens, the family attorney, then arrives to prepare for the will reading, leaving the family in anticipation.
- Amidst the escalating argument sparked by Harlan's decision to remove Ransom from his will, detective Blanc and Marta uncover a curious clue—a broken trellis piece and a boarded window. While the family clash intensifies, Blanc and Marta quietly embark on their investigation, leaving the unresolved conflict simmering.
- Blanc and Marta uncover evidence of a break-in on the third floor landing, suggesting foul play in Harlan Thrombey's death.
- Upon reading Harlan Thrombey's will, the Thrombey family is shocked to discover that Marta Cabrera has inherited everything. Outrage ensues, leading to an altercation between Linda Thrombey and Marta Cabrera. Detective Blanc intervenes to calm the situation and escorts Marta out of the room.
- Marta flees the Thrombey estate with Ransom, leaving behind a shattered family. Linda discovers her father's notes, while Joni faces Blanc's accusations of financial deception, leaving her fate uncertain.
- In a shadowy restaurant booth, Ransom grills Marta, suspecting her of foul play in his grandfather's death. Pressure mounts as he accuses her of lying and scrutinizes her reactions. Marta's resolve shatters, and she pleads with Ransom not to expose her. Ransom, torn between suspicion and empathy, offers comfort and urges her to reveal the truth.
- The family grapples with the implications of Harlan's revised will, with Alan clarifying legal aspects. Joni questions the validity, while Blanc suggests foul play, leading to suspicion and conflict among the family members. Meg remains emotionally invested in the inheritance.
- Initially dismissive, Ransom recognizes Marta's cunning and agrees to aid her secret-keeping. Meanwhile, Marta comforts Meg, promising financial support amidst Meg's mother's struggles and her own academic concerns. As the scene concludes, Marta resolutely faces the challenge ahead.
- Marta is awakened by news of a suspicious man and belongings at her apartment. Amidst a flurry of missed calls, she discovers a shocking news report about herself and the deceased Harlan Thrombey. Reporters swarm outside, while Donna Thrombey encounters a shadowy figure and faces uncomfortable questions from Detective Blanc. Marta's family grapples with legal documents and advises her to flee.
- Marta and Walt discuss the inheritance and potential legal issues. Walt warns Marta of her mother's illegal status being revealed if she accepts it. Marta refuses, prompting threats from Walt but remaining defiant. She discovers an envelope with a medical document and a handwritten message revealing someone knows her secret. Blanc warns Marta to be cautious, suggesting an impending danger.
- Benoit Blanc offers condolences to Greatnana, reflecting on age and grief. Ransom receives a call from Marta about a medical bag tag with a blood analysis header showing Harlan's morphine overdose, leading to speculation about blackmail.
- Blanc rushes to the medical examiner's office after receiving news of a call from Lieutenant Elliott. Before leaving, Greatnana whispers something mysterious to Blanc. Upon arriving at the office, Blanc finds it destroyed in an explosion. The blood work report that could prove Marta's guilt is pending. Marta and Ransom discuss the potential connection between the explosion and a blackmail email Marta received. The scene ends with Marta fleeing in her car, evading pursuit from Blanc and the police.
- Marta and Lieutenant Elliott engage in a car chase with Ransom Drysdale, a possible murder suspect. Marta skillfully evades the police while Blanc learns of Ransom's presence on the night of the party. After Ransom's arrest, Marta realizes the mistaken identification but feigns obedience to Blanc.
- Blanc's interrogation continues, probing Richard's potential ulterior motives. Marta becomes increasingly tense and requests a stop at Columbus Road. She enters a hair salon before disappearing into a vacant building through the back door, leaving Blanc with suspicions as to her involvement.
- Marta, entering an empty retail space, finds Fran, the housekeeper, seemingly lifeless in a chair. Discovering an empty envelope in Fran's hand, Marta is met with cryptic whispers about a hidden copy and the accusation of responsibility before Fran's final breaths. Struggling with hesitation, Marta decides to call 911 and perform CPR, as an ambulance arrives outside.
- Marta confesses her fateful mistake to Blanc, who reveals Ransom's cooperation with the police. Suspecting Fran's blackmail, Marta urges Blanc to support her in revealing the truth to the Thrombey family. Together, they gather the family at the Thrombey estate, where Marta's suspicion leads to the discovery of the toxicology report hidden within a clock.
- In the living room, the family, officers, and Marta gather. Marta refuses to renounce the inheritance. Blanc reveals Harlan's death as a suicide, leaving the family in shock. Linda spots her father's baseball, hinting at further mysteries.
- In the library, Blanc accuses Ransom of knowing about the crime and hiring him for a specific reason. Ransom confesses to knowing everything Harlan told him, leading to further revelations in the case.
- Ransom confronts Harlan about the will, discovering Harlan's fortune is left to Marta. Despite Harlan's insistence of sanity, Ransom threatens him. Returning later, he switches Harlan's medications, taking the antidote, and leaves undetected.
- Marta discovers that Harlan's death was a suicide due to her accidental medication switch. Blanc suspects Ransom's involvement but faces a lack of evidence, leaving the case unresolved.
- Benoit Blanc exposes Ransom Drysdale's involvement in Harlan Thrombey's murder. Ransom had retrieved incriminating vials from Harlan's medical bag, and Marta Cabrera blackmailed him with a copy of the toxicology report. Ransom attempted to destroy the report by setting fire to the medical examiner's office. Blanc confronts Ransom, who confesses to the crime.
- Ransom tears the blackmail note, emails Marta a rendezvous, and frames Marta for Fran's murder. However, Marta realizes Fran meant Hugh, calls 911, and saves Fran, foiling Ransom's plan.
- Ransom is enraged to learn that Fran is alive and confronts Marta, accusing her of trying to steal the family home. Marta stands her ground, and Ransom confesses to murdering Fran before revealing the knife is a fake. He is arrested by Trooper Wagner, leaving Marta on the ground holding the fake knife.
- Officer Blanc questions Marta about her possible involvement in Harlan's murder. The discovery of a bloodstain on her shoe implicates her. Blanc advises Marta to follow her instincts and consider assisting the Thrombey family, who have gathered outside the house in uncertainty. Marta stands in the doorway, observing them, contemplating her decision.
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Character Greatnana
Description Greatnana's mental state and level of awareness seem to fluctuate throughout the script. In some scenes, she appears senile and disoriented, while in others, she is surprisingly perceptive and observant, as evidenced by her recognizing Ransom and whispering crucial information to Blanc.
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Character Ransom
Description Ransom's motivations and actions seem to shift abruptly. Initially, he appears genuinely affected by Harlan's decision to cut him out of the will, but then he quickly transitions to a manipulative and cunning demeanor, plotting with Marta and ultimately resorting to violence.
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Description The ease with which Marta retrieves the security tape from the guard house seems unrealistic, given the importance of such evidence in a criminal investigation.
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Description The lack of thorough investigation in Harlan's study, particularly regarding the medical bag and potential evidence, seems inconsistent with standard police procedure, especially considering the presence of Benoit Blanc.
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Description The overly dramatic and expository dialogue between Marta's mother and sister feels forced and unnatural, serving primarily to convey information about Marta's emotional state and the family's background.
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Description Ransom's frequent use of vulgar language and insults towards his family, even in moments of supposed sincerity or vulnerability, seems excessive and detracts from the authenticity of his character's emotional journey.
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Marta - Score: 89/100
Role
Protagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Blanc - Score: 87/100
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Ransom - Score: 83/100
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Linda - Score: 67/100
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Walt - Score: 70/100
Role
Antagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Richard - Score: 56/100
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Benoit - Score: 78/100
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Joni - Score: 55/100
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Theme | Theme Details | Theme Explanation | ||||||||||||
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Family Dynamics (45%) | The film explores the complex relationships within the Thrombey family, marked by rivalry, jealousy, and secrets, unraveling the tensions and conflicts that drive the characters' actions. | Family Dynamics serves as a foundational theme, shaping the motivations and interactions of the characters as they grapple with the aftermath of Harlan's death. | ||||||||||||
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Immigration and Identity (30%) | The film delves into the struggles and challenges faced by Marta, an undocumented immigrant, as she navigates the complex social dynamics of the Thrombey family while trying to protect her own identity. | Immigration and Identity play a significant role in shaping Marta's character and her experiences, highlighting the intersection of societal prejudices and personal aspirations. | ||||||||||||
Truth and Deception (20%) | The narrative hinges on the manipulation of truth and the blurring of reality, as characters deceive each other, conceal their motives, and construct elaborate falsehoods to protect their interests. | Truth and Deception serve as driving forces, propelling the plot forward and challenging the audience's perception of events and the characters' true intentions. | ||||||||||||
Wealth and Privilege (15%) | The film examines the corrupting influence of wealth and privilege, highlighting the moral dilemmas it creates and the ways in which it can distort relationships and cloud judgment. | Wealth and Privilege are explored as both a catalyst for the characters' desires and a source of their downfalls, exposing the darker underbelly of the Thrombey family's lavish lifestyle. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goal is to navigate the complex family dynamics and navigate the truth behind Harlan's death |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goal is to maintain composure and protect herself from suspicion while dealing with the investigation |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the themes of truth, loyalty, and justice as the protagonist grapples with deception, family loyalty, and personal integrity |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to the character's development by challenging their beliefs, values, and moral compass, leading to growth and self-discovery
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict drive the narrative structure by creating tension, suspense, and intrigue as the protagonist navigates the complex web of family secrets and deception
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes of loyalty, truth, morality, and justice, adding layers of complexity and depth to the story
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - The Discovery | Suspenseful, Emotional, Dark | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
2 - The Aftermath | Dry, Sarcastic, Emotional, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Family Gathering at the Thrombey Home | Serious, Reflective, Informative | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - Family Gathering at Harlan's Birthday | Sarcastic, Satirical, Informative | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - The Arrival of Benoit Blanc | Suspenseful, Sarcastic, Inquisitive, Informative | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
6 - Walt's Dismissal | Tense, Confrontational, Revealing | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Secrets and Confrontations | Tense, Dramatic, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - Confrontation in the Library | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Curiosity and Hesitation | Intriguing, Suspenseful, Intense, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Marta's Confession and Joni's Involvement | Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
Engine: Gemini
Highly Recommend
Explanation: Knives Out is a highly engaging and well-crafted murder mystery with a unique premise, a diverse cast of characters, and witty dialogue. The screenplay masterfully constructs a complex plot with numerous twists and turns, keeping the audience guessing until the very end. While the motivations of some characters could be explored in greater depth, the overall narrative strength and pacing are excellent, making this screenplay a highly recommendable read.
Engine: GPT4
Highly Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay 'Knives Out' presents a compelling murder mystery with a richly woven plot full of twists and character depth. It balances humor, suspense, and drama effectively, making it a standout script that should attract audiences who enjoy clever storytelling and complex characters.