scream
A teenage girl is targeted by a violent killer who is harassing her with threatening phone calls and she must work with her friends and a police officer to stop the killer before they strike again.
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Story Facts
Genres: Horror, Thriller, Mystery, Teen, Drama, Romance
Themes: Terror and Suspense, The Power of Fear, The Importance of Trust
Comparable Scripts: Scream 2, I Know What You Did Last Summer, Urban Legend, The Faculty, Final Destination, Halloween, Friday the 13th, Psycho, The Silence of the Lambs, Seven
Script Level Analysis
This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.
Screenplay Insights
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Story Critique
Characters
Explores the depth, clarity, and arc of the main and supporting characters.
Emotional Analysis
Breaks down the emotional journey of the audience across the script.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Logic & Inconsistencies
Scene Analysis
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Unique Voice
Writer's Craft
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Writer's Craft
Memorable Lines
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Executive Summary
- The screenplay has a strong, compelling narrative that effectively blends horror, thriller, and mystery elements. The plot twists and character revelations keep the audience engaged and on the edge of their seats throughout. high ( Scene general )
- The characters are well-developed, with clear motivations and arcs that drive the story forward. The central conflict between Sidney and the killers is emotionally resonant and adds depth to the horror. high ( Scene general )
- The dialogue is sharp, witty, and true to the characters, with moments of humor that provide relief from the tension. medium ( Scene general )
- The screenplay effectively builds suspense and atmosphere, utilizing classic horror tropes and techniques to create a sense of dread and impending doom. high ( Scene general )
- The story has a strong, thematic backbone that explores relevant social and psychological issues, such as grief, trauma, and the impact of media and popular culture on the human psyche. high ( Scene general )
- Some of the plot points and character actions could be more tightly structured and logically consistent, as there are a few moments that feel a bit contrived or convenient. medium ( Scene general )
- While the dialogue is generally strong, there are a few instances where the characters' voices feel a bit too similar or the banter feels a bit forced. low ( Scene general )
- The screenplay could potentially benefit from a more distinct visual style or aesthetic, as the description of the settings and environments is somewhat generic at times. medium ( Scene general )
- The screenplay's exploration of the media's role in shaping public perception and perpetuating violence is a thought-provoking and timely element that adds depth to the story. high ( Scene general )
- The use of classic horror tropes and meta-references to the genre are effective in creating a sense of self-awareness and adding an extra layer of complexity to the narrative. high ( Scene general )
- The climactic showdown between Sidney and the killers is a well-executed and tension-filled sequence that delivers a satisfying and emotional payoff to the story. high ( Scene general )
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Executive Summary
- The screenplay effectively utilizes suspense and surprise, maintaining a high level of tension and engagement throughout. high ( Scene general )
- Character development, especially of Sidney, is well-executed, showing a clear arc from innocence to empowerment. high ( Scene 1 Scene 36 )
- Dialogue is sharp and often laced with meta-humor, which enriches the viewing experience by acknowledging horror movie tropes. medium ( Scene 12 Scene 30 )
- The twist ending is unexpected and subverts typical genre expectations, providing a fresh take on the slasher genre. high ( Scene 39 )
- The pacing is brisk and effective, with scenes transitioning smoothly to keep the story moving forward compellingly. medium ( Scene general )
- Some character motivations, particularly the killers', could be explored in more depth to enhance believability. medium ( Scene general )
- The screenplay occasionally relies too heavily on genre clichés which might be predictable for seasoned viewers of horror films. low ( Scene general )
- There are moments where the dialogue can feel forced or unnatural, particularly in scenes with high emotional tension. medium ( Scene general )
- The setting descriptions are sometimes vague, which could lead to inconsistencies in production design. low ( Scene general )
- The final act could benefit from a clearer setup of stakes to heighten the climax's impact. medium ( Scene general )
- Backstories for key characters like the killers could be more detailed to provide clearer motivations and richer character depth. high ( Scene general )
- There is a lack of strong secondary character arcs, which could be developed to enhance the story's depth and emotional impact. medium ( Scene general )
- The script could benefit from more varied settings to avoid the feeling of repetitiveness and to expand the narrative scope. medium ( Scene general )
- There is an opportunity to include more red herrings to maintain suspense and keep the audience guessing. medium ( Scene general )
- The emotional responses of characters to deaths and attacks could be more deeply explored to enhance realism and viewer empathy. medium ( Scene general )
- The screenplay cleverly uses self-awareness of horror tropes to engage the audience and comment on the genre itself. high ( Scene general )
- The use of technology, particularly the mobile phone, is effectively integrated into the plot, reflecting modern societal issues. medium ( Scene general )
- The script's blend of horror and comedy elements is notable, as it balances fear with humor effectively. high ( Scene general )
- The dynamic between the protagonist and the antagonist is well crafted, providing a compelling cat-and-mouse game. high ( Scene general )
- The narrative structure is tight and well-constructed, with each act clearly defined and contributing to the overall story arc. medium ( Scene general )
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.0, The screenplay's character development is commendable, featuring well-rounded and evolving characters, particularly Sidney and Dewey. However, the complexity of some supporting characters such as Stu and Randy could be further enhanced to deepen their impact on the story. See More
Premise: 8.0, The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a compelling and clear foundation for a slasher horror narrative, introducing a relatable and vulnerable protagonist, intriguing and diverse supporting characters, and a mysterious killer. While the premise offers a solid starting point, there are opportunities to refine and enhance its originality, clarity, and potential audience engagement. See More
Structure: 7.5, The screenplay exhibits a coherent and engaging structure, effectively building tension and suspense throughout the narrative. However, certain elements could be refined to enhance the pacing and strengthen the plot's overall impact. See More
Theme: 9.3, The screenplay effectively explores significant themes, including trauma, friendship, and the dangers of sensationalism, with a well-crafted narrative structure and compelling characters. It conveys its messages with clarity and impact, leaving a lasting impression on the audience. See More
Visual Impact: 6.0, The screenplay lacks visual flair and vivid descriptions. Most scenes rely on standard pacing and lack cinematic flair. The script could benefit from incorporating more dynamic visuals, creative angles, and exploration of abstract or symbolic imagery to enhance the storytelling experience and engage the audience on a visual level. See More
Emotional Impact: 7.4, The screenplay effectively evokes emotional responses through its relatable characters, intense moments, and exploration of the impact of violence. However, it has the potential to enhance its emotional depth by further developing certain plot points and character relationships. Expanding the exploration of trauma's long-term effects and investing more in the development of the supporting characters would elevate the emotional resonance of the story. See More
Conflict: 8.3, The screenplay capably establishes a central conflict with clear stakes, effectively driving the narrative and engaging the audience. However, there is room for enhancement in escalating stakes and refining the resolution to heighten tension and leave a lasting impact. See More
Originality: 7.3, This screenplay effectively utilizes the tropes of a classic slasher film while adding its own creative spin. It successfully captures the essence of the genre while introducing novel elements that set it apart from its predecessors. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
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Character Sidney Prescott
Description Sidney's initial reaction to the killer's call and attack seems inconsistent with her later bravery and resourcefulness. Her fear initially drives her to run upstairs, a classic horror movie mistake she criticizes earlier in the script.
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Character Billy Loomis
Description Billy's behavior switches abruptly from a caring boyfriend to a sadistic killer. While the reveal is intended as a surprise, there is little foreshadowing or explanation for his dark side, making the transition feel jarring and inconsistent.
( Scene 6 Scene 32 )
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Description The scene where Tatum gets trapped in the garage relies on the unlikely coincidence of the garage door closing automatically just as the killer appears. This feels more like a plot contrivance than a natural event.
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Description Gale and Dewey's encounter with the speeding cars feels like a forced attempt to separate them and make them vulnerable to the killer. It disrupts the narrative flow and feels unnecessary.
( Scene 33 )
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Description The script does not adequately explain how Billy survives the stabbing and returns to attack Sidney. This significant plot hole undermines the believability of the narrative and leaves a major question unanswered.
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Description The scene where Sidney sends a fax to 911 using her computer is technologically questionable, as fax machines typically require a phone line to operate. This detail might distract tech-savvy viewers and raise questions about the story's plausibility.
( Scene 12 )
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Description The dialogue during the lunch scene, particularly Stu's graphic descriptions of the murders and Randy's morbid jokes, might feel exaggerated and insensitive given the gravity of the situation.
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Description Randy's extensive knowledge of horror movie clichés and his constant references to them can sometimes feel forced and unnatural, even for a self-proclaimed movie geek.
( Scene 24 )
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Element Ghostface appearances and disappearances
( Scene 3 Scene 11 Scene 29 Scene 34 )
Suggestion The repeated instances of the killer appearing and disappearing suddenly, especially when Sidney escapes, could be streamlined for better pacing and to maintain tension. -
Element Horror movie references and meta-commentary
Suggestion
Sidney - Score: 86/100
Role
Protagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Tatum - Score: 76/100
Character Analysis Overview
Stu - Score: 76/100
Character Analysis Overview
Randy - Score: 74/100
Character Analysis Overview
Billy - Score: 85/100
Role
Antagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Dewey - Score: 57/100
Character Analysis Overview
Gale - Score: 80/100
Role
Protagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Identified Themes
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Terror and Suspense
65%
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The film is a horror movie, so it is full of suspenseful and terrifying moments. The killer is a masked figure who stalks and murders the teenagers, and there are many scenes of violence and gore. The film also has a lot of jump scares, which helps to keep the audience on the edge of their seats.
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The theme of terror and suspense is essential to the film, as it is what makes the film so effective at scaring the audience. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening Terror and Suspense
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The Power of Fear
30%
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The film explores the power of fear, and how it can be used to control people. The killer uses fear to terrorize the teenagers, and he is able to manipulate them into doing what he wants. The film also shows how fear can be used to divide people, as the teenagers turn against each other in order to survive.
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The theme of the power of fear is a complex one, and it is one of the things that makes the film so thought-provoking. | ||||||||||||
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The Importance of Trust
15%
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The film also explores the importance of trust. The teenagers are initially suspicious of each other, but they eventually learn to trust each other in order to survive. The film shows how trust is essential for survival, and how it can help people to overcome even the most difficult challenges.
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The theme of the importance of trust is a positive one, and it is one of the things that makes the film so heartwarming. | ||||||||||||
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
| Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
| John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
| What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
| Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
| Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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| internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goal in the screenplay is to survive and protect herself and her loved ones from the killers. This reflects her deep need for safety and security. |
| External Goals | The protagonist's external goal in the screenplay is to defeat the killers and escape the dangerous situation she is in. This reflects the immediate challenge she faces of staying alive and outsmarting her attackers. |
| Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in the screenplay is the clash between good and evil, sanity and madness, justice and revenge. The protagonist's struggle with the ongoing threats and the unresolved trauma from her mother's murder highlight these conflicting values. |
Character Development Contribution: The internal goals and philosophical conflicts contribute to the protagonist's development by challenging her beliefs, values, and perceptions. Through these challenges, she is forced to confront her fears, trauma, and insecurities, ultimately leading to growth and resilience.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The internal and external goals drive the narrative structure of the screenplay, creating tension, suspense, and emotional depth. The philosophical conflicts add depth to the plot by exploring complex themes of morality, justice, and the human psyche.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and philosophical conflicts contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring fundamental questions about good and evil, survival and justice, trust and betrayal. These themes resonate throughout the story, culminating in a powerful exploration of human nature and resilience.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
| Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
| Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
| Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
| Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
| 1 - Strange Phone Call | Suspenseful, Mysterious, Tense | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 2 - Unsettling Phone Call | Suspenseful, Menacing, Intense, Terrifying | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 3 - Deadly Trivia | Terrifying, Intense, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 4 - Casey's Desperate Escape | Intense, Terrifying, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 5 - Casey's Tragic Discovery | Terror, Suspense, Shock | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 6 - Midnight Rendezvous | Tense, Suspenseful, Romantic, Playful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 7 - A Nightmare Begins | Disturbing, Suspenseful, Shocking | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 8 - Police Question Sidney | Suspenseful, Tense, Serious | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 9 - Schoolyard Accusations | Suspenseful, Dark, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 10 - A Night of Comfort and Fear | Suspenseful, Tense, Dark | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 11 - Terrifying Phone Call and Closet Attack | Suspenseful, Terrifying, Intense | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 12 - Scream: Home Invasion Nightmare | Terror, Suspense, Fear, Anxiety | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 13 - Aftermath of the Attack | Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 14 - Interrogation and Confrontation | Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic, Dark | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 15 - The Threatening Call | Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic, Terrifying | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 16 - Morning Mayhem | Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic, Dark | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 17 - Sidney Confronts Gale | Suspenseful, Intense, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 18 - Campus Chaos | Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic, Dark | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 19 - Tension in the Hallway | Tense, Emotional, Confrontational | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 20 - Bathroom Encounter | Suspenseful, Terrifying, Intense, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 21 - Flirting with Danger | Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic, Mysterious | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 22 - Tense Hallways and Hidden Horrors | Suspenseful, Tense, Dark, Mysterious | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 23 - Rumors and Revelations | Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic, Dark | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 24 - Horror and Suspicion at Blockbuster | Suspenseful, Dark, Tense, Mysterious, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 25 - Unveiling the Prime Suspect | Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic, Dark | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 26 - Pre-Party Banter and a Sinister Sight | Suspenseful, Dark, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 27 - Pre-Movie Preparations | Suspenseful, Tense, Dark, Mysterious, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 28 - Party Interrupted | Suspenseful, Dramatic, Dark, Tense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 29 - Tatum's Fatal Garage Encounter | Suspense, Fear, Darkness, Violence | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 30 - Heartfelt Conversation in Stu's Bedroom | Tense, Intimate, Playful, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 31 - Horror Movie Rules | Suspenseful, Dark, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 32 - Ghostface Attacks | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 33 - Danger Lurks in the Dark | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Terrifying | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 34 - Terrifying Escape and Deadly Ambush | Tense, Terrifying, Frantic, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 35 - Attack at Stu's House | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 36 - The Unmasking of the Ghostface Killers | Suspenseful, Menacing, Twisted, Sinister | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 37 - Confrontation and Revelation | Dark, Intense, Sinister, Twisted | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 38 - Confrontation and Attack | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Violent | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 39 - Post-Kill Resolution | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Dark, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
Tip: Click on criteria in the top row for detailed summaries.
Scene Strengths
- Intense suspense
- Engaging dialogue
- Strong emotional impact
- Effective tension-building
- Strong character dynamics
Scene Weaknesses
- Some cliched horror tropes
- Limited character development
- Some predictable elements
- Minimal dialogue
- Graphic violence
Suggestions
- Avoid using too many cliched horror tropes and aim to subvert expectations
- Develop characters further to create more empathy and investment from the audience
- Try to balance predictable elements with unexpected twists and turns
- Explore ways to increase the impact of dialogue, even in scenes with minimal dialogue
- Consider the impact of violent or disturbing scenes on the viewer and weigh this against the intended effect
Scene 1 - Strange Phone Call
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 2 - Unsettling Phone Call
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 3 - Deadly Trivia
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 4 - Casey's Desperate Escape
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 5 - Casey's Tragic Discovery
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 6 - Midnight Rendezvous
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 7 - A Nightmare Begins
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 8 - Police Question Sidney
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 9 - Schoolyard Accusations
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 10 - A Night of Comfort and Fear
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 11 - Terrifying Phone Call and Closet Attack
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 12 - Scream: Home Invasion Nightmare
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 13 - Aftermath of the Attack
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 14 - Interrogation and Confrontation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 15 - The Threatening Call
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 16 - Morning Mayhem
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 17 - Sidney Confronts Gale
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 18 - Campus Chaos
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 19 - Tension in the Hallway
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 20 - Bathroom Encounter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 21 - Flirting with Danger
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 22 - Tense Hallways and Hidden Horrors
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 23 - Rumors and Revelations
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 24 - Horror and Suspicion at Blockbuster
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 25 - Unveiling the Prime Suspect
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 26 - Pre-Party Banter and a Sinister Sight
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 27 - Pre-Movie Preparations
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 28 - Party Interrupted
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 29 - Tatum's Fatal Garage Encounter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 30 - Heartfelt Conversation in Stu's Bedroom
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 31 - Horror Movie Rules
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 32 - Ghostface Attacks
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 33 - Danger Lurks in the Dark
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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Scene 34 - Terrifying Escape and Deadly Ambush
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 35 - Attack at Stu's House
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 36 - The Unmasking of the Ghostface Killers
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 37 - Confrontation and Revelation
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 38 - Confrontation and Attack
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 39 - Post-Kill Resolution
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
- Physical environment: The screenplay is set in a suburban town, with a focus on a group of teenagers. The physical environment is characterized by spacious homes, large yards, and a sense of isolation. This setting creates a sense of vulnerability for the characters, and adds to the suspense and fear of the film.
- Culture: The culture of the town is depicted as being fairly typical of a small town in the United States. The teenagers are interested in popular culture, such as horror movies and music, and they spend their time hanging out at the local mall or movie theater. This sense of normalcy makes the events of the film even more shocking and terrifying.
- Society: The society of the town is depicted as being fairly close-knit, with everyone knowing everyone else. This sense of community adds to the tension of the film, as it makes it more difficult for the characters to escape their pursuers.
- Technology: The screenplay makes use of several technological elements, such as telephones, radios, and televisions. These elements are used to create a sense of suspense and fear, as the characters are constantly being reminded of the danger that they are in.
- Characters influence: The world elements in the screenplay have a significant impact on the characters' experiences and actions. The physical environment, for example, creates a sense of isolation and vulnerability for the characters, which makes them more susceptible to fear and panic. The culture of the town also plays a role in shaping the characters' behavior, as they are influenced by the values and norms of their community.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements in the screenplay also contribute to the narrative of the film. The physical environment, for example, is used to create a sense of suspense and fear, as the characters are constantly being reminded of the danger that they are in. The culture of the town also plays a role in shaping the narrative, as it influences the characters' decisions and actions.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements in the screenplay also contribute to the thematic depth of the film. The physical environment, for example, can be seen as a symbol of the characters' inner turmoil. The culture of the town can also be seen as a symbol of the characters' search for belonging. The technology in the screenplay can be seen as a symbol of the characters' attempts to control their environment.
| Voice Analysis | |
|---|---|
| Summary: | The writer's original voice throughout the screenplay is characterized by its balance of suspense, sharp dialogue, and emotional depth, which effectively captures the mood, themes, and depth of the story. |
| Voice Contribution | The writer's unique voice contributes to the script by creating a distinct and engaging atmosphere that immerses the reader in the narrative and enhances the overall impact of the screenplay. |
| Best Representation Scene | 10 - A Night of Comfort and Fear |
| Best Scene Explanation | Scene 10 effectively encapsulates the writer's unique voice through its intense dialogue, sharp pacing, and blend of suspense and humor. It showcases the writer's ability to create a compelling and engaging narrative that captivates the reader. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
| Pattern | Explanation |
|---|---|
| High Stakes Scenes Drive Emotional Impact | Scenes with high stakes consistently receive higher scores for emotional impact, indicating that a sense of urgency and consequences amplifies the audience's emotional engagement. |
| Suspense and Intensity Enhance Character Changes | Scenes with elevated levels of suspense and intensity often facilitate more significant character changes, suggesting that these elements provide a fertile ground for personal growth and transformation. |
| Dark and Dramatic Scenes Strengthen Character Development | Scenes characterized by darkness and drama tend to receive higher scores for character development, implying that these elements create a backdrop that encourages complex and nuanced character portrayals. |
| Varied Tones Add Depth to the Narrative | Scenes with diverse tones, such as humorous moments amidst tension, contribute to a more engaging and dynamic narrative, preventing the story from becoming monotonous or predictable. |
| High Concept Scenes Enhance Overall Impact | Scenes with strong conceptual elements, such as introducing unique premises or plot twists, often elevate the overall grade, suggesting that innovative ideas can captivate the audience and leave a lasting impression. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|---|---|
| Final Girl | Sidney Prescott emerges as the final girl who survives the attacks and confronts the killers. | The Final Girl trope is a common horror movie trope where a female character, often portrayed as innocent and resourceful, is the last one standing and confronts the killer. An example of this trope is Laurie Strode in 'Halloween.' |
| Phone Call from the Killer | The killer makes threatening phone calls to the victims, creating tension and fear. | The Phone Call from the Killer trope is a classic horror movie trope where the killer taunts and threatens their victims over the phone. An example of this trope is the movie 'Scream.' |
| Masked Killer | The killer wears a mask to conceal their identity and create a sense of mystery and fear. | The Masked Killer trope is a common horror movie trope where the antagonist wears a mask to hide their face and add an element of suspense. An example of this trope is the character of Ghostface in the 'Scream' franchise. |
| False Death | Characters are thought to be dead but later reveal they are alive, leading to surprise and suspense. | The False Death trope is a common plot device in horror movies where a character is believed to be dead, only to later reveal they are alive. An example of this trope is the character of Billy in 'Scream.' |
| Survival Game | The characters are forced to play a deadly game to survive, adding tension and stakes to the story. | The Survival Game trope is a common horror movie trope where characters must participate in a game or challenge to avoid being killed. An example of this trope is the movie 'Saw.' |
| Unmasking the Killer | The identity of the masked killer is revealed, often leading to a climactic confrontation. | The Unmasking the Killer trope is a common horror movie trope where the true identity of the antagonist is unveiled, usually in a dramatic and suspenseful moment. An example of this trope is the movie 'Friday the 13th.' |
| Red Herring | A character or plot element that is intended to mislead the audience and divert suspicion away from the true killer. | The Red Herring trope is a storytelling device used to create suspense and misdirect the audience by introducing false clues or suspects. An example of this trope is the character of Cotton Weary in 'Scream.' |
| Final Confrontation | The protagonist faces off against the killer in a climactic showdown, often leading to a resolution of the conflict. | The Final Confrontation trope is a common horror movie trope where the hero confronts the antagonist in a dramatic and intense battle. An example of this trope is the final showdown between Laurie Strode and Michael Myers in 'Halloween.' |
| Character Arc | The protagonist undergoes a transformation or growth throughout the story, leading to a change in their character. | The Character Arc trope is a common storytelling device where a character experiences personal development or change over the course of the narrative. An example of this trope is the character of Sidney Prescott in the 'Scream' franchise. |
| Jump Scare | Sudden and unexpected moments of fright designed to startle the audience. | The Jump Scare trope is a horror movie staple where a sudden loud noise or visual shock is used to scare the audience. An example of this trope is the jump scare in the movie 'The Conjuring.' |
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 37 | Billy: Movies don't create psychos. Movies just make psychos more creative. |
| 36 | Billy: We all go a little mad sometimes. |
| 39 | Sidney: This is for my Mom, asshole. |
| 31 | Randy: There are certain rules that one must abide by in order to successfully survive a horror movie. For instance: 1. You can never have sex. The minute you get a little nookie – you're as good as gone. Sex always equals death. 2. Never drink or do drugs. The sin factor. It's an extension of number one. And 3. Never, ever, ever, under any circumstances, say 'I'll be right back.' |
| 38 | Sidney: Gotta find me first, you pansy-assed Mama's boy. |
Some Loglines to consider:
| Array ( [0] => A teenage girl is targeted by a violent killer who is harassing her with threatening phone calls and she must work with her friends and a police officer to stop the killer before they strike again. [1] => As the body count rises, a teenage girl becomes more and more determined to uncover the identity of a mysterious killer who is stalking her and her community. [2] => A high school student and her friends must stay one step ahead of a deadly killer who is targeting them and unravel the mystery surrounding their identity. [3] => Suspense and terror abound as a teenage girl and her friends try to survive a deadly game of cat and mouse with a mysterious and violent killer. [4] => When a teenage girl is targeted by a violent killer, she must use all her wits and resources to uncover the killer's identity and put an end to the terror before it's too late. ) |
| When a series of brutal murders terrorize a small town, a high school student must confront her past and uncover the truth about her mother's death in order to survive. |
| A young woman becomes the target of a twisted game played by two high school friends, forcing her to fight for her life and confront the dark secrets of her past. |
| In a town haunted by a tragic murder, a group of teenagers must outsmart a relentless killer who is using their love of horror movies against them. |
| After a string of gruesome killings, a small-town reporter teams up with a resilient high school student to uncover the truth and stop a deranged killer bent on revenge. |
| A high school student's quiet life is shattered when she becomes the focus of a deadly game orchestrated by her boyfriend and his best friend, who are using classic horror tropes to terrorize her. |
| When a masked killer begins murdering her friends, a young woman must uncover the truth behind her mother's death to survive. |
| A killer targets a group of teenagers with a horror movie-inspired rampage, but the final girl fights back with more than just screams. |
| In a small town where everyone loves horror films, life imitates art as students try to survive a real-life slasher. |
| A clever killer uses horror movie rules to terrorize a group of friends, who must use their knowledge of horror tropes to outsmart him. |
| As the anniversary of her mother's murder approaches, a teenager must distinguish between movie fantasy and reality to catch a killer. |
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