Mr Robot
Executive Summary
Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend
Overview
Genres: Drama, Thriller, Mystery
Setting: Present day, New York City
Overview: The screenplay achieves a commendable overall score, demonstrating strong potential with its complex characters, intriguing premise, and exploration of relevant themes. However, opportunities for improvement exist in refining the central conflict, enhancing pacing, and further developing supporting characters to maximize impact and marketability.
Themes: Alienation and Loneliness, Identity and Reality, Technology and Power, Revolution and Rebellion, Mental Illness, Love and Loss
Conflict and Stakes: Elliot's struggle with mental illness and his mission to take down E Corp, a corrupt multinational corporation that controls the world economy.
Overall Mood: Dark and suspenseful, with moments of humor and social commentary
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Elliot's paranoia and hallucinations are introduced.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The protagonist is a mentally ill hacker who hallucinates his deceased father as a revolutionary figure.
- Plot Twist : The protagonist's therapist is revealed to be a member of the anarchist group he has joined.
- Distinctive Setting : The story is set in the world of technology and cybercrime.
- Innovative Idea : The story explores the dangers of technology and the power of individuals to make a difference.
- Unique Character : The protagonist is a complex and relatable character who struggles with mental illness and social alienation.
- Genre Blend : The story blends elements of psychological thrillers, technology-themed dramas, and social commentaries.
Comparable Scripts:
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$40-50 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-35, fans of psychological thrillers and technology-themed dramas
Marketability: It has a unique and timely premise, a well-developed and relatable protagonist, and a talented cast.
unique blend of genres and explores compelling themes with a diverse cast...
Compelling characters and a gripping storyline, relevant social themes...
Profit Potential: High, due to its strong appeal to a wide adult audience and potential for award nominations
Scene Level Percentiles
Emotions Elicited Percentiles
This is a rough estimate of how the average intensity of emotions elicited in this script compare to all scripts in the Vault (all genres).
Higher isn't necessarily better. This is FYI.
Screenplay Analysis
- **Originality (98.78%):** The screenplay presents a highly unique and innovative concept that sets it apart from the norm.
- **Emotional Impact (50%):** The screenplay effectively evokes emotions and resonates with the audience on a personal level.
- **Story Forward (72.38%):** The screenplay maintains a strong pace, propelling the narrative forward and keeping the audience engaged.
- **Internal Goal Score (78.66%):** The characters' internal motivations are well-developed and drive the plot in a meaningful way.
- **Plot (39.34%):** The plot structure could be refined to enhance pacing, create stronger narrative tension, and resolve conflicts more effectively.
- **Character Development (35.25%):** The characters would benefit from additional depth and complexity to make them more relatable and memorable.
- **Structure (64.02%):** The screenplay's overall structure could be improved by refining transitions, ensuring a logical flow of events, and clearly defining the screenplay's beginning, middle, and end.
- **Unpredictability (95.37%):** While the high unpredictability score is a strength, it is important to balance it with logical storytelling and avoid introducing twists solely for the sake of surprise.
The screenplay exhibits a balance between intuitive and conceptual elements. While dialogue and character development are strong, the writer also demonstrates proficiency in crafting a unique and engaging plot and concept.
Balancing Elements- While the screenplay has strong elements in originality and emotional impact, focusing on plot development and character depth would create a more compelling narrative.
- The screenplay's high unpredictability score should be complemented by a clear and logical structure to sustain the audience's engagement.
Integrated
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay has promising elements, particularly in originality and emotional impact. By addressing areas such as plot, character development, and structure, the writer can elevate the screenplay's overall potential.
How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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Percentile | Before | After |
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Scene Originality | 9.00 | 98 | Beetlejuice: 8.98 | severance (TV): 9.00 |
Script Characters | 9.00 | 92 | Zootopia: 8.75 | Black mirror 304: 9.00 |
Scene Unpredictability | 7.97 | 91 | Midsommar: 7.95 | Mr Robot: 7.97 |
Script Premise | 8.75 | 86 | Hot Fuzz: 8.50 | Erin Brokovich: 8.75 |
Script Visual Impact | 8.50 | 82 | Swingers: 8.25 | a few good men: 8.50 |
Scene Concept | 8.3 | 78 | Deep Cover: 8.2 | the 5th element: 8.3 |
Scene Engagement | 9.00 | 76 | Almost Famous: 8.98 | fight Club: 9.00 |
Scene Internal Goal | 8.13 | 72 | Midsommar: 8.12 | Her: 8.13 |
Scene External Goal | 7.53 | 72 | The Pianist: 7.49 | The usual suspects: 7.53 |
Script Structure | 8.25 | 71 | Schindler's List: 8.24 | Mr Robot: 8.25 |
Script Structure | 8.25 | 67 | Gladiator: 8.00 | Titanic: 8.25 |
Scene Story Forward | 8.3 | 64 | American Hustle: 8.2 | Titanic: 8.3 |
Script Originality | 8.50 | 64 | Swingers: 8.25 | face/off: 8.50 |
Scene Formatting | 8.25 | 62 | The Sweet Hereafter: 8.24 | Mr Robot: 8.25 |
Overall Script | 8.15 | 59 | Inside Out: 8.10 | Breaking bad: 8.15 |
Scene Pacing | 8.34 | 57 | Pawn sacrifice: 8.33 | the boys (TV): 8.34 |
Scene Conflict Level | 7.8 | 55 | Birdman: 7.7 | Spy kids: 7.8 |
Scene High Stakes | 7.7 | 54 | Stranger Things: 7.6 | Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde : 7.7 |
Scene Overall | 8.3 | 50 | Hot Fuzz: 8.2 | fight Club: 8.3 |
Scene Plot | 7.9 | 50 | 2001: 7.8 | the 5th element: 7.9 |
Script Theme | 8.25 | 48 | Stranger Things: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 |
Scene Character Changes | 6.8 | 45 | Enemy of the State: 6.7 | True Blood: 6.8 |
Scene Emotional Impact | 7.6 | 42 | Queens Gambit: 7.5 | True Blood: 7.6 |
Scene Characters | 8.1 | 33 | Memento: 8.0 | the pursuit of happyness: 8.1 |
Scene Dialogue | 7.5 | 33 | Witness: 7.4 | Titanic: 7.5 |
Script Emotional Impact | 7.25 | 14 | Charlie and The Choclate Factory: 7.00 | True Blood: 7.25 |
Script Conflict | 7.25 | 12 | Die Hard: 7.00 | fight Club: 7.25 |
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a blend of introspective voiceover narration, dark and mysterious atmosphere, and a focus on themes of technology, power, and conspiracy.
Best representation: Scene 1 - Elliot Confronts Phil. This scene is the best representation of the author's voice because it establishes the tone, themes, and character of the series.
Memorable Lines:
- Elliot: It's happening. It's happening. It's happening. It's happening. (Scene 16)
- Elliot: Fuck society. (Scene 5)
- Elliot: The key to doing morphine without turning into a junkie is to limit yourself to 30mg a day. (Scene 7)
- Mr. Robot: My dad was a petty thief. Never could hold down a job. So, he just robbed, convenience stores, shops, small-time stuff. (Scene 10)
- Elliot: Sometimes I dream of saving everyone from the invisible hand. (Scene 6)
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a blend of psychological depth, suspenseful storytelling, and exploration of complex moral dilemmas. It often delves into dark and introspective themes, capturing the internal struggles and external conflicts of its characters. The writing style is characterized by sharp dialogue, intense character dynamics, and an atmospheric setting that immerses the audience in the narrative's emotional depth.
Style Similarities:
- Christopher Nolan
- David Fincher
- Sam Esmail
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
Engine: GPT4
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay of 'Mr. Robot' is a compelling narrative that effectively combines elements of psychological drama and thriller with a strong focus on cybersecurity. The character development, particularly of Elliot, is well-executed, with a deep dive into his psychological state. The plot is engaging with several twists that maintain suspense. However, improvements could be made in pacing and clarity of some technical aspects.
- The scene where Elliot decides to swap the envelopes, choosing to frame Colby, showcases a pivotal moment of character development and plot progression. high ( Scene 14 )
- The introduction of the character Elliot and the mysterious Mr. Robot are intriguing and effectively set up the psychological and mysterious tone of the screenplay. high ( Scene 1 Scene 11 )
- The screenplay effectively uses voice-over narration to provide insight into Elliot's thoughts and motivations, enhancing the psychological depth of the character. medium
- The final scenes build suspense and intrigue, leaving the audience eager for more, effectively setting up for subsequent episodes or sequels. high ( Scene 16 )
- The dialogue is sharp and realistic, contributing to strong character development and maintaining a gripping narrative pace. medium
- Some scenes may benefit from a clearer connection to the main narrative to avoid confusion, particularly in the subplot involving Krista and Michael. medium
- The pacing in the middle sections could be tightened to maintain momentum and keep the audience engaged throughout. medium ( Scene 5 Scene 6 )
- The screenplay could explore more diverse backgrounds and motivations for the supporting characters to enhance depth and relatability. low
- Increase clarity around the technical aspects of hacking to ensure they are accessible and understandable to viewers without background knowledge. medium
- Some of the transitions between scenes are abrupt and could be smoothed to improve narrative flow. low
- There is a need for more explicit connections between Elliot's actions and the broader implications on the society, to enhance the thematic depth. medium
- The screenplay's portrayal of mental health through the protagonist provides a nuanced and compelling exploration of the subject. high
- The use of technology and cybersecurity as central themes is timely and relevant, appealing to contemporary audiences interested in these topics. high
Engine: Claude
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Mr. Robot' is a compelling and tightly-plotted narrative that follows the journey of Elliot, a socially-isolated cyber security engineer with a dark past. The story skillfully blends techno-thriller elements with psychological drama, exploring Elliot's complex relationship with technology, society, and his own demons. The screenplay features strong character development, particularly in Elliot's interactions with Mr. Robot and his close friend Angela, and showcases a strong grasp of hacking and cybersecurity concepts. While there are a few areas that could be further developed, such as the background of the fsociety group and Elliot's personal history, the screenplay overall demonstrates a high level of technical expertise and narrative sophistication. The unique premise, compelling protagonist, and timely themes make this screenplay a strong candidate for production and potential commercial success.
- The confrontation scene between Elliot and Phil is a standout, showcasing Elliot's technical prowess and manipulation skills, as well as highlighting his emotionally damaged backstory. high ( Scene 2 (INT. PHIL'S COFFEE (FLASHBACK) - NIGHT) )
- The Ferris wheel sequence is a powerful character moment that delves into Elliot's psyche and reveals his motivation for potentially joining Mr. Robot's plan, tying it to his past trauma with Evil Corp. high ( Scene 13 (EXT. CONEY ISLAND - FERRIS WHEEL - DAY) )
- The therapy scenes provide valuable insight into Elliot's mental state and his strained relationships, adding depth to his character arc. medium ( Scene 5 (INT. PSYCHOLOGIST'S OFFICE - DAY) )
- The scene in Angela's apartment showcases the strong bond between the two friends and sets up potential future conflict as Elliot's actions have unintended consequences. medium ( Scene 16 (INT. ANGELA'S APARTMENT) )
- Elliot's hacking into Michael's accounts and the subsequent blackmail sequence demonstrates his technical abilities and moral grey areas, adding complexity to his character. medium ( Scene 14 (INT. ELLIOT'S LOFT - NIGHT) )
- The introduction of the fsociety group and their mission could be fleshed out more to better establish their motivations and provide a clearer sense of their overall plan. medium ( Scene 11 (INT. FSOCIETY ARCADE - CONTINUOUS) )
- The conversation between Gideon and Elliot in the private jet could be expanded upon to further develop their relationship and Gideon's internal struggles, which are only briefly touched upon. medium ( Scene 10 (INT. PRIVATE JET (MOVING) - DAWN) )
- The brief scene with Tyrell Wellick could be expanded to provide more insight into his character and his potential motivations, as he seems to be an important figure in the larger narrative. medium ( Scene 9 (INT. TYRELL WELLICK'S SUBURBAN HOME - NIGHT) )
- The screenplay would benefit from more background information on the fsociety group and their past activities, as well as a clearer explanation of their overall plan and how Elliot fits into it. medium ( Scene 12 (EXT. CONEY ISLAND STREETS - LATER) )
- The screenplay could delve deeper into Elliot's past and his relationship with his father, as this appears to be a significant factor in his current mental state and motivations. medium ( Scene 7 (INT. ELLIOT'S LOFT - NIGHT) )
- The sequence depicting Elliot and the team's efforts to resolve the Evil Corp hack is a high-tension, technically-driven set piece that showcases the screenplay's attention to detail and Elliot's hacking expertise. high ( Scene 8 (INT. ALLSAFE OFFICES - NIGHT) )
- The revelation of Terry Colby's arrest at the end of the sequence is a compelling twist that sets up further developments in the overarching narrative and Elliot's potential involvement. high ( Scene 16 (INT. ANGELA'S APARTMENT) )
- The subtle shift in Elliot's mindset and emotional state as he witnesses the impact of the Evil Corp scandal is a well-executed character moment that sets the stage for his potential transformation. medium ( Scene 15 (INT. NYC SUBWAY (MOVING) - DAY) )
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 8.75, The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a compelling narrative centered around a morally conflicted hacker and his fight against a corrupt corporation. The blend of technological intrigue, social commentary, and psychological exploration promises strong audience engagement. However, further clarity regarding Elliot's mental state and the true nature of Mr. Robot could enhance the long-term intrigue and hook. See More
Structure: 8.25, The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in its structure and plot development, effectively engaging the audience through a blend of intrigue, conflict, and character dynamics. However, certain areas could be refined to enhance narrative clarity, pacing, and the resolution's impact. See More
Theme: 8.25, The screenplay effectively conveys its themes and messages, delving into topics such as the perils of unchecked capitalism, the importance of personal responsibility, and the power of collective action. It deftly explores these themes through its compelling narrative and well-developed characters, leaving a lasting impression on the audience. See More
Visual Impact: 8.5, The screenplay presents a compelling visual narrative, capturing the dark, mysterious, and introspective world of Elliot Alderson. Its visual descriptions effectively convey the film's gritty and psychological atmosphere, providing a strong foundation for visual storytelling. See More
Emotional Impact: 7.25, The screenplay has a strong foundation for emotional impact, effectively drawing the audience into Elliot's world of paranoia, social anxiety, and a desire for justice. However, there are opportunities to enhance the emotional depth and relatability of certain characters and delve deeper into the complexities of their inner struggles. See More
Conflict: 7.25, The screenplay presents compelling conflicts and stakes that drive the narrative and engage the audience. However, there are opportunities to enhance the clarity and integration of the central conflict, as well as further escalate the stakes to heighten tension. See More
Originality: 8.5, The screenplay demonstrates originality and creativity in its exploration of mental health, the shadowy world of hacking, and the complexities of human relationships. The protagonist's unique mental state, personal struggles, and journey towards self-discovery provide a refreshing and compelling narrative. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- Elliot, a young man struggling with insomnia, finds himself on a subway train with mysterious Men Dressed in Black. He questions his own sanity as he believes he may be followed by a shadowy group of elites. The scene ends with Elliot feeling regret over missing Angela's birthday party the night before.
- In a tense coffee shop confrontation, Elliot accuses Phil of running the illegal website Lolita City. Elliot threatens to expose Phil's activities unless he pays up, revealing his true motive: setting Phil up for the FBI. As the FBI arrives to arrest Phil, Elliot walks away, leaving Phil facing the consequences.
- Elliot awakens from a nap on a crowded subway and notices he's being followed. Despite his unease, he ignores a disheveled man, Mr. Robot, who tries to introduce himself. At work, Gideon assigns Elliot to investigate a RUDY attack, but Elliot's casual attire and aloofness draw criticism from Gideon and Angela, respectively. Angela confronts him about his absence at a bar the previous night, revealing her disappointment and financial struggles. As they exit, Angela's smoking habits concern Elliot, but she dismisses his question. Ali, who's dating Angela, confronts Elliot about his behavior and expresses his dislike for him.
- At Angela's birthday party at work, Elliot overhears a news report emphasizing cybersecurity, which heightens his paranoia. Despite initially declining Ali's lunch invitation, he later agrees to meet. As he walks through the streets, he experiences intense feelings of paranoia while snacking on McDonald's fries.
- Elliot meets with his psychologist Krista to discuss his anger issues and feelings towards society. Despite Krista's efforts to get him to address his emotions, Elliot remains closed off. The scene includes a flashback to a party where Elliot struggles to socialize and ends with a tense encounter between Elliot and Ali.
- Ali and Elliot reconcile, but Elliot remains annoyed. Elliot spots suits including Angela and sees Tyrell from *BEEP* Corp, who compliments his Linux skills, but Elliot finds him socially awkward. Elliot reflects on societal control.
- Elliot's struggles with loneliness and addiction lead him to use drugs and stalk Michael and Krista. He discovers Michael's abusive nature and obtains his personal information. The scene ends with Elliot receiving a call from Angela while smoking a joint in the subway.
- In the middle of the night, Angela calls Elliot to Allsafe because Evil Corp, their client, is under a DoS attack. Elliot quickly realizes the attack is more sophisticated than a simple DoS and that the attackers have installed a rootkit on Evil Corp's firewall, giving them complete control over their network. Elliot warns the Allsafe team, and they realize it will be difficult to stop.
- Tyrell Wellick ignores a major outage on Evil Corp's network. At Allsafe, Angela reports the outage leading Gideon to order a firewall swap. Elliot discovers the rootkit is self-defending and proposes crashing the system. Tyrell and Gideon find fsociety's message instructing them to leave the rootkit, and Elliot hesitates to delete it.
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- Elliot meets Mr. Robot's elusive hacking crew, learning about their strict anonymity rules and the mysterious 'project' they're working on. Angela's unexpected visit complicates his life, while Elliot's investigation into Fsociety raises suspicions. Despite gathering evidence to report them, he ultimately succumbs to the allure of joining the group, setting the stage for future conflicts.
- Elliot walks through the slums of Coney Island back to the fsociety arcade where Marlene sits outside and asks him for the password. Confused, Elliot is unsure what she is referring to. Marlene, frustrated, reveals she wrote the rootkit and needs to trace back to Colby's laptop. She calls Elliot a dickhead and leaves. Mr. Robot enters, offering Elliot a twinkie and asking about Ferris wheels, leaving Elliot questioning Marlene's insult.
- Elliot and Mr. Robot confront each other on a Ferris Wheel, with Mr. Robot threatening to jump unless Elliot agrees to join his plan to take down Evil Corp. Elliot reluctantly agrees, and Mr. Robot instructs him to put the IP trace in the diagnostic report tomorrow.
- Elliot presents the diagnostics to the FBI and Evil Corp executives, hoping to help Angela with her student loan debt. Gideon moves Angela off the Evil Corp account, resolving the conflict between her and Terry Colby.
- Elliot searches for Mr. Robot in various locations in NYC, including the subway and an abandoned arcade. He then goes to Allsafe offices where he sees Angela with black hair. Unable to crack a password, he confronts Michael about cheating and blackmails him into breaking up with Krista. The scene ends with Elliot knocking on Angela's door and entering her apartment.
- Elliot visits Angela to confront her about their embarrassing incident at the Evil Corp meeting, but she refuses to engage. She asks him to let her lose without intervening, and he agrees. As they hug, Angela expresses regret, and they share an almost-kiss. However, Elliot sees Terry Colby's arrest on TV, implicating him in the hack. He then goes outside and sees news reports about Evil Corp's downfall. As he celebrates in Times Square, he is apprehended by Men in Black and taken to a top-floor conference room, where he is met with silence from shadowy figures.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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Elliot | Elliot starts off as a socially isolated hacker with insomnia and paranoid delusions, using his hacking abilities to navigate the world of cybersecurity. As he delves deeper into exposing corruption and protecting others, he grapples with his own personal demons and inner struggles. Through a series of challenges and moral dilemmas, Elliot learns to confront his fears, trust others, and find a balance between his desire for justice and his own well-being. Ultimately, he emerges as a reluctant hero, using his skills for good and making a difference in the world. | The character arc for Elliot is well-developed, showcasing his growth from a troubled loner to a reluctant hero. However, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and emotional journey, providing a deeper exploration of his motivations and conflicts. Additionally, the arc could benefit from more nuanced interactions with other characters, allowing Elliot to form meaningful relationships and confront his vulnerabilities. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more moments of vulnerability and emotional depth for Elliot. Show his internal struggles more explicitly, highlighting the impact of his insomnia, paranoia, and addiction on his actions and relationships. Develop his interactions with other characters to provide a contrast to his isolated nature, allowing for growth and connection. Additionally, explore his moral ambiguity and conflicting desires in greater detail, adding complexity to his journey towards becoming a hero. |
Angela | Angela starts as a frustrated girl-next-door trapped in the corporate world, seeking recognition and validation. As she transitions into a cybersecurity professional, she faces challenges in a male-dominated industry but remains loyal to her colleagues and committed to her work. Despite setbacks and manipulation, Angela learns to balance her vulnerability with her strength, ultimately finding empowerment and success in her career. | The character arc for Angela is well-developed, showcasing her growth from a conflicted individual to a resilient professional. However, there could be more clarity in depicting her internal struggles and how they shape her decisions and relationships throughout the screenplay. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into Angela's emotional journey and the impact of her vulnerabilities on her interactions with others. Show her growth through meaningful dialogue and actions that highlight her resilience and determination, ultimately leading to a satisfying resolution in her personal and professional life. |
Gideon | Gideon starts off as a boss concerned about cybersecurity breaches and the future of his company. As the story progresses, he becomes more involved in crisis situations, showcasing his leadership qualities and expertise. Eventually, he opens up to Elliot about his personal struggles, showing vulnerability and a desire for connection. | The character arc for Gideon is well-developed, showing a progression from a stressed boss to a more open and vulnerable individual. However, there could be more depth added to his personal struggles and how they impact his decisions and interactions with other characters. | To improve the character arc, consider delving deeper into Gideon's personal challenges and how they affect his relationships with other characters. Show more of his internal struggles and growth throughout the story to make his character more dynamic and relatable. |
Mr. Robot | Mr. Robot starts off as a mysterious figure who guides Elliot in his hacking endeavors, pushing him to challenge the system and question his beliefs. As the story progresses, it is revealed that Mr. Robot is actually a manifestation of Elliot's subconscious, representing his desire for change and rebellion against societal norms. This realization leads to a conflict within Elliot as he grapples with his own identity and struggles to come to terms with his past. Ultimately, Mr. Robot serves as a catalyst for Elliot's growth and transformation, pushing him to confront his fears and embrace his power. | The character arc for Mr. Robot is well-developed and provides a compelling journey for both him and Elliot. However, there could be more clarity in the transition from Mr. Robot being a separate entity to being a part of Elliot's subconscious. This shift could be more clearly foreshadowed throughout the story to make the revelation more impactful. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating subtle hints and clues early on that suggest Mr. Robot's true nature as a manifestation of Elliot's subconscious. This could create a sense of mystery and intrigue for the audience, leading to a more satisfying payoff when the truth is revealed. Additionally, exploring the internal conflict within Elliot as he grapples with his dual identity could add depth to both characters and enhance the emotional resonance of the story. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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Alienation and Loneliness | - Elliot is isolated and alone, with few close relationships. - He struggles to connect with others and often feels like an outsider. - His only true companion is his cat, Qwerty. | Elliot's sense of alienation and loneliness is a key part of his character. It drives him to seek out connections with others, even if those connections are ultimately unsatisfying. | ||||||||||||
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Identity and Reality | - Elliot's perception of reality is often unreliable. - He suffers from delusions and hallucinations. - He is unsure of who he is and what his purpose is. | Elliot's struggles with identity and reality are a central part of the series. They raise questions about the nature of truth and the limits of human understanding. | ||||||||||||
Technology and Power | - Technology is a powerful force in Elliot's life. - He uses it to hack into systems and manipulate people. - He is aware of the dangers of technology, but he is also drawn to its power. | Technology is a double-edged sword in Mr. Robot. It can be used for good or for evil, and it is up to the individual to decide how to use it. | ||||||||||||
Revolution and Rebellion | - Elliot is a revolutionary who wants to change the world. - He is part of fsociety, a group of hackers who are trying to take down Evil Corp. - He believes that violence is sometimes necessary to achieve change. | Revolution and rebellion are important themes in Mr. Robot. The series explores the different ways that people can fight against oppression and injustice. | ||||||||||||
Mental Illness | - Elliot suffers from mental illness, including depression and anxiety. - He takes medication and sees a therapist, but he struggles to control his symptoms. - His mental illness affects his relationships and his ability to function. | Mental illness is a serious issue that affects many people. Mr. Robot does not shy away from depicting the challenges that people with mental illness face. | ||||||||||||
Love and Loss | - Elliot has lost many people in his life, including his father and his sister. - He has difficulty forming close relationships. - He is drawn to people who are damaged and vulnerable. | Love and loss are powerful forces in human life. Mr. Robot explores the different ways that people deal with loss and how it can shape their lives. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals revolve around navigating his mental health, confronting illegal activities, maintaining a dual identity, managing relationships, and seeking justice and understanding. |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goals include protecting himself, exposing illegal activities, handling cybersecurity threats, maintaining professional reputation, and uncovering the truth behind a hack. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around power and control, morality of hacking and vigilantism, and the balance between personal relationships and professional obligations. |
Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's evolving goals and internal conflicts shape his journey towards self-discovery, growth, and a deeper understanding of the world around him.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals drive the plot forward, creating tension, conflict, and resolution within the narrative structure of the screenplay.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The protagonist's goals and philosophical conflicts contribute to the exploration of themes such as power, morality, justice, identity, and the human connection, adding depth and complexity to the screenplay's narrative.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Elliot's Paranoid Awakening | Dark, Introspective, Paranoid | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - Elliot Confronts Phil | Tense, Suspenseful, Emotional, Confrontational | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
3 - Subway Paranoia and Workplace Tensions | Suspenseful, Intense, Serious, Tense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - Birthday and Cybersecurity Concerns | Paranoia, Suspense, Tension, Anxiety | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Elliot's Therapy Session | Suspenseful, Introspective, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Unwelcome Reconciliation | Anxious, Paranoid, Reflective | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Elliot's Descent and Michael's True Colors | Loneliness, Drug use, Paranoia, Emotional turmoil | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - The DoS Attack | Tense, Suspenseful, Serious | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
9 - Network Meltdown | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
10 - Uneasy Alliance | Tense, Mysterious, Intense, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Introducing Fsociety | Suspenseful, Intense, Mysterious, Reflective | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - Confusion and Tension at the Arcade | Suspenseful, Mysterious, Tense | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - The Ferris Wheel Confrontation | Intense, Conspiratorial, Emotional, Philosophical | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - Elliot's Plan for Angela's Debt | Anxiety, Tension, Suspense, Disappointment, Dread | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
15 - Elliot's Manipulative Confrontation | Suspenseful, Intense, Emotional, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Unresolved Confrontation and Mysterious Arrest | Tense, Suspenseful, Emotional | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Intriguing concept
- Deep exploration of character
- Effective tension-building
- Emotional depth
- Well-developed characters and relationships
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited external conflict
- Some dialogue may feel forced or cliched
- Limited character development
- Potential for stronger emotional impact
- Some ambiguity in character motivations
Suggestions
- Consider adding more external conflict to elevate stakes
- Work on refining and naturalizing dialogue to avoid feeling forced or cliched
- Focus on character development to create more well-rounded and relatable characters
- Continuously strive for stronger emotional impact throughout the screenplay
- Clarify character motivations to avoid any ambiguity or confusion
- Physical environment: The screenplay presents a modern, urban environment, with scenes set in bustling city streets, high-rise office buildings, and seedy establishments, reflecting the complex and multifaceted nature of the world portrayed.
- Culture: The screenplay explores themes of conspiracy, wealth, power, and disillusionment, with the presence of secret groups controlling the world and characters questioning societal values and heroes. It reflects a culture of distrust and paranoia, as well as a yearning for rebellion and change.
- Society: The societal structure depicted is one of inequality, with a wealthy elite holding immense power and influence while the masses struggle with debt, alienation, and a lack of control over their lives. The screenplay highlights the tensions between the privileged and the marginalized, as well as the ways in which technology and power dynamics shape societal interactions.
- Technology: Technology plays a pivotal role in the screenplay, with hacking and cybersecurity serving as central themes. The characters navigate a world where digital information and networks are constantly under threat, and the line between the real and the virtual becomes increasingly blurred. Technology empowers characters to disrupt the established order but also raises ethical questions about surveillance, privacy, and control.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology of the screenplay shape the characters' experiences and actions in profound ways. The urban landscape provides a backdrop for their struggles and ambitions, while the pervasive atmosphere of conspiracy and distrust influences their decision-making and interactions. The societal inequalities and power dynamics create tensions and conflicts that drive the characters' actions, and the technological advancements both empower and challenge them.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative of the screenplay by providing a rich and immersive setting for the characters and their conflicts. The physical environment, culture, society, and technology are not merely backdrops but active forces that drive the plot and shape the characters' journeys. The exploration of conspiracy, wealth, power, and technology creates a sense of urgency and suspense, as the characters navigate a world where nothing is as it seems.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring the complex relationship between power, control, and freedom. The themes of conspiracy and wealth highlight the ways in which hidden agendas and socioeconomic disparities can shape individual lives and societal structures. The exploration of technology raises questions about the nature of reality, the ethics of surveillance, and the potential for both liberation and oppression in a digital age. Ultimately, the screenplay delves into the human desire for connection, control, and the search for meaning in a world that is both fascinating and deeply flawed.
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a blend of introspective voiceover narration, dark and mysterious atmosphere, and a focus on themes of technology, power, and conspiracy. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a sense of unease and mystery that draws the audience in and sets the stage for the unfolding narrative. |
Best Representation Scene | 1 - Elliot's Paranoid Awakening |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representation of the author's voice because it establishes the tone, themes, and character of the series. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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High Overall Grade Scenes | Scenes with an overall grade of 9 or above tend to have a higher score in the Emotional Impact and Conflict categories. |
Dialogue and Character Scores | Scenes with higher Dialogue scores generally have higher Character scores as well. |
Tense and Suspenseful Scenes | Scenes with tones that are classified as Tense or Suspenseful often receive high scores in the Plot, Conflict, and Move Story Forward categories. |
Introspective and Paranoid Scenes | Scenes with tones that are classified as Introspective and Paranoid tend to have lower scores in the High Stakes category. |
Character Changes and Emotional Impact | Scenes that feature significant Character Changes often have higher scores in the Emotional Impact category. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenwriter showcases a strong command of storytelling techniques, effectively crafting scenes that draw the audience into the narrative and establish tension, character dynamics, and thematic depth. The dialogue is sharp and engaging, driving the plot forward while revealing the characters' motivations and conflicts. However, there are opportunities for further refinement and development to enhance the screenplay's overall impact.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Screenplay | Read 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder | This book provides valuable insights into screenplay structure, character development, and scene pacing, addressing key improvement areas identified in the analysis. |
Exercise | Practice writing character biographies and conducting character interviews to dive deeper into their motivations and backstories.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will aid in developing well-rounded characters with compelling emotional journeys. |
Video | Watch films with distinct character voices and analyze how dialogue contributes to characterization. | Studying effective dialogue in films helps refine the writer's ear for authentic and engaging character voices. |
Screenplay | Study screenplays known for their tight pacing and masterful scene transitions. | Analyzing successful examples of scene pacing and transitions will enhance the writer's ability to create a smooth and captivating flow in their own work. |
Course | Enroll in a screenwriting course or workshop focused on character development and dialogue writing. | Structured learning and feedback from experienced instructors can accelerate the writer's progress in these areas. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Unreliable Narrator | Elliot refers to himself as having chronic insomnia, believing in aliens, and a shadowy group of rich people secretly running the world. | The trope of an unreliable narrator is a character whose point of view is not considered reliable by the audience. This can be due to the character being mentally ill, delusional, or simply lying. |
Deus Ex Machina | Elliot's meeting with Mr. Robot on the subway and his subsequent recruitment into fsociety. | Deus ex machina is a plot device whereby a seemingly unsolvable problem is suddenly and unexpectedly resolved by an outside force. |
Anti-Hero | Elliot is a morally ambiguous character who is willing to break the law and hurt others to achieve his goals. | An anti-hero is a protagonist who lacks the traditional heroic qualities of courage, nobility, and selflessness. |
Paranoia | Elliot's belief that he is being followed and that a shadowy group is out to get him. | Paranoia is a mental state characterized by excessive fear and suspicion. |
Hackers as Heroes | Elliot and Mr. Robot are portrayed as skilled hackers who use their abilities to take down the corrupt Evil Corp. | Hackers as heroes is a trope where hackers are depicted as positive figures who use their skills to fight for good. |
Vigilante Justice | Elliot's decision to take down Evil Corp by hacking into their systems and erasing all the debt records. | Vigilante justice is the act of taking the law into one's own hands. |
Guyliner | Elliot's use of eyeliner, which is often associated with emo culture. | Guyliner is the use of eyeliner by men. |
The Fourth Wall | Elliot's direct address to the audience through voiceover. | The fourth wall is the invisible barrier between the actors and the audience. |
Red Herring | The film's suggestion that Mr. Robot is Elliot's imaginary friend, only to later reveal that he is real. | A red herring is a clue that is intentionally misleading. |
Unresolved Sexual Tension | The tension between Elliot and Angela, which is hinted at throughout the film but never fully resolved. | Unresolved sexual tension is a situation in which two characters have a strong attraction to each other but do not act on it. |
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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16 | Elliot: It's happening. It's happening. It's happening. It's happening. |
5 | Elliot: Fuck society. |
7 | Elliot: The key to doing morphine without turning into a junkie is to limit yourself to 30mg a day. |
10 | Mr. Robot: My dad was a petty thief. Never could hold down a job. So, he just robbed, convenience stores, shops, small-time stuff. |
6 | Elliot: Sometimes I dream of saving everyone from the invisible hand. |
Some Loglines to consider:
A brilliant but troubled hacker finds himself pulled into a shadowy anarchist group planning to bring down corporate America. |
A cybersecurity engineer by day, vigilante hacker by night, is recruited by a mysterious underground group to destroy the firm he is paid to protect. |
A young programmer leads a double life as he navigates through the dangerous territories of his own mind and the real world of corporate espionage. |
Under the influence of a charismatic leader, a socially anxious hacker becomes the key player in a game that could topple an empire. |
Caught between his principles and his past, a hacker battles the moral complexities of bringing down the corporation responsible for his personal tragedies. |
A brilliant but socially-isolated cyber security engineer is recruited by a mysterious hacker collective to take down the world's largest conglomerate, leading him on a dangerous journey of self-discovery and the possibility of true liberation. |
When a brilliant hacker is recruited by a clandestine group to orchestrate the downfall of the world's largest corporation, he must confront his own demons and the consequences of his actions as he navigates a high-stakes game of power and control. |
Trapped in a world he despises, a gifted but troubled hacker is presented with the opportunity to change the system from within, but must decide whether the cost is worth the potential reward of true freedom. |
A cyber security expert's life is upended when a charismatic stranger recruits him to join a covert hacker collective targeting the world's most powerful corporation, forcing him to choose between his comfortable existence and the chance to take down the system. |
In a world dominated by corporate greed and technological control, a brilliant but socially-withdrawn hacker is presented with the chance to spark a revolution, but must confront his own demons and the risk of losing everything to succeed. |
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Engine: GPT4
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Explanation: The screenplay of 'Mr. Robot' is a compelling narrative that effectively combines elements of psychological drama and thriller with a strong focus on cybersecurity. The character development, particularly of Elliot, is well-executed, with a deep dive into his psychological state. The plot is engaging with several twists that maintain suspense. However, improvements could be made in pacing and clarity of some technical aspects.
Engine: Claude
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Explanation: The screenplay for 'Mr. Robot' is a compelling and tightly-plotted narrative that follows the journey of Elliot, a socially-isolated cyber security engineer with a dark past. The story skillfully blends techno-thriller elements with psychological drama, exploring Elliot's complex relationship with technology, society, and his own demons. The screenplay features strong character development, particularly in Elliot's interactions with Mr. Robot and his close friend Angela, and showcases a strong grasp of hacking and cybersecurity concepts. While there are a few areas that could be further developed, such as the background of the fsociety group and Elliot's personal history, the screenplay overall demonstrates a high level of technical expertise and narrative sophistication. The unique premise, compelling protagonist, and timely themes make this screenplay a strong candidate for production and potential commercial success.