Legally Blonde
Executive Summary
Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend
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USP: Discover a fresh and witty take on the romantic comedy genre with "Legally Blonde," a script that showcases the journey of Elle Woods, a sorority queen who transforms into a successful and empowered lawyer. This story offers a unique blend of humor, heartbreak, and determination, challenging societal norms and exploring themes of love, self-worth, and personal growth. With its authentic characters, sharp dialogue, and unexpected twists, "Legally Blonde" delivers a delightful and engaging narrative that will leave audiences cheering for Elle's success. This script stands out with its distinct voice, combining satire and wit to create a captivating and unforgettable experience.
Overview
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Romance, Legal Drama
Setting: Present day, Harvard Law School and surrounding areas in Boston, MA
Overview: The screenplay presents a fresh and original concept with a unique blend of legal drama, fashion, and humor. It effectively conveys emotions, character growth, and engaging dialogue. While there are opportunities to deepen secondary character development and enhance emotional transitions, the overall quality is strong and engaging.
Themes: Personal Growth, Love and Relationships, Female Empowerment
Conflict and Stakes: Elle's struggle to prove herself in a male-dominated field and win back her ex-boyfriend, Warner, while also dealing with her own insecurities and the expectations of those around her.
Overall Mood: Uplifting and empowering, with moments of humor and drama.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Joyful and lighthearted, with a sense of excitement and anticipation.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: A romantic comedy set in the world of law school, featuring a strong female lead who challenges stereotypes and expectations.
- Plot Twist : Elle's decision to attend law school to win back her ex-boyfriend, only to discover her own potential and passion for the law.
- Distinctive Setting : The world of Harvard Law School, which provides a unique backdrop for a romantic comedy.
Comparable Scripts:
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$30-40 million
Target Audience Demographics: Women aged 18-35, fans of romantic comedies and legal dramas.
Marketability: The film has a strong lead character, a unique premise, and a proven track record with the original Legally Blonde, making it appealing to a wide audience.
The film explores themes of female empowerment and self-discovery, which could attract a diverse audience, but the genre-blend of romantic comedy and legal drama may limit its appeal to some.
The film features a strong female lead, a unique premise, and a proven track record with the original Legally Blonde, making it appealing to a wide audience.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, due to its potential to attract a wide audience and generate positive word-of-mouth.
Scene Level Percentiles
Screenplay Analysis
- The screenplay excels in plot (94.74th percentile) and character development (93.42nd percentile), suggesting a strong narrative and well-developed characters.
- It also scores highly in originality (97th percentile), indicating a unique and fresh take on the story.
- The screenplay is engaging (88th percentile), maintaining the reader's interest throughout.
- The conflict level is relatively low (37.28th percentile), suggesting an opportunity to enhance the stakes and tension in the story.
- The external goal score is also low (18th percentile), which may indicate underdeveloped external goals or motivations for the characters.
- Formatting could be improved (2nd percentile), suggesting a need for better adherence to standard screenplay format.
The writer's style appears to be balanced, with strong character development and plot, but could benefit from more focus on conflict and external goals.
Balancing Elements- The writer could work on balancing the conflict and tension in the story to match the strong character development and plot.
- Developing clearer and more compelling external goals for the characters could enhance the overall story.
The writer appears to be integrated, with a balance of conceptual and intuitive elements in the screenplay.
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay has a strong foundation in plot and character development, with room for improvement in conflict, external goals, and formatting. With focused refinement, it has the potential to be a compelling and unique story.
How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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Scene Overall | 8.9 | 98 | Good Will Hunting: 8.8 | Silence of the lambs: 8.9 |
Scene Plot | 8.7 | 98 | Die Hard: 8.6 | Terminator 2: 8.7 |
Scene Characters | 8.8 | 94 | Swingers: 8.7 | Silence of the lambs: 8.8 |
Scene Character Changes | 7.5 | 90 | Inception: 7.4 | fight Club: 7.5 |
Scene Dialogue | 8.3 | 89 | Hot Fuzz: 8.2 | Casablanca: 8.3 |
Script Structure | 8.50 | 89 | Hot Fuzz: 8.25 | the dark knight rises: 8.50 |
Scene Story Forward | 8.5 | 77 | 2001: 8.4 | Casablanca: 8.5 |
Script Conflict | 8.25 | 76 | KILLING ZOE: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 |
Script Emotional Impact | 8.25 | 76 | Battlefield Earth: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 |
Overall Script | 8.25 | 70 | The Hudsucker Proxy: 8.20 | Black mirror 304: 8.25 |
Scene Originality | 8.83 | 63 | The usual suspects: 8.82 | Shaun of the Dead: 8.83 |
Scene Pacing | 8.36 | 61 | LA confidential - draft: 8.35 | Mo: 8.36 |
Script Premise | 8.25 | 58 | Avatar: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 |
Scene Engagement | 8.98 | 54 | Titanic: 8.97 | Mr. Smith goes to Washington: 8.98 |
Scene Emotional Impact | 7.7 | 49 | Enemy of the State: 7.6 | severance (TV): 7.7 |
Script Characters | 8.25 | 45 | The Hudsucker Proxy: 8.00 | Erin Brokovich: 8.25 |
Script Originality | 8.25 | 43 | House of cards pilot: 8.00 | Erin Brokovich: 8.25 |
Scene Concept | 8.0 | 39 | Poor Things: 7.9 | a few good men: 8.0 |
Scene Conflict Level | 7.4 | 37 | Hot Fuzz: 7.3 | Vice: 7.4 |
Scene High Stakes | 7.0 | 34 | Hot Fuzz: 6.9 | Bonnie and Clyde: 7.0 |
Scene Formatting | 8.07 | 33 | Witness: 8.06 | Breaking bad: 8.07 |
Script Visual Impact | 7.50 | 27 | Zootopia: 7.25 | Erin Brokovich: 7.50 |
Scene Internal Goal | 8.00 | 27 | KILLING ZOE: 7.98 | fight Club: 8.00 |
Script Structure | 8.02 | 15 | Poor Things: 8.00 | fight Club: 8.02 |
Scene Unpredictability | 7.12 | 12 | The Fabelmans: 7.10 | Baby Driver: 7.12 |
Script Theme | 7.50 | 11 | 2001: 7.25 | the pursuit of happyness: 7.50 |
Scene External Goal | 6.98 | 8 | Swingers: 6.94 | Arsenic and old lace : 6.98 |
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is witty, satirical, and uses humor to address serious themes. The dialogue is sharp and the scenes transition smoothly between comedic and dramatic moments.
Best representation: Scene 17 - Elle's Costume and Warner's Doubts. This scene is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively blends humor, drama, and social commentary in a compelling and engaging way.
Memorable Lines:
- Elle: Exercise gives you endorphins, endorphins make you happy — happy people don't kill their husbands! (Scene 25)
- Sapphire: What, like it's that hard? (Scene 10)
- ELLE: You're an attractive man, but you need to take better care of yourself. (Scene 31)
- Elle: Forget it. I've already spent too many hours crying over you. (Scene 32)
- Professor Stromwell: The law leaves much room for interpretation — but very little for self-doubt. (Scene 12)
Writing Style:
The writing style across the screenplay is characterized by sharp dialogue, witty humor, and a strong focus on character-driven narratives. There is a blend of both comedy and drama, often used to explore complex themes and relationships.
Style Similarities:
- Aaron Sorkin
- Nora Ephron
- Tina Fey
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
The reasons might be more valuable than the rating.
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Legally Blonde' is a well-written and engaging piece with a strong central character, compelling narrative, and effective use of humor. While there are a few areas where improvements could be made, such as providing more depth to certain character motivations and smoothing out transitions between scenes, the screenplay overall delivers on its promise of a fun, heartwarming, and empowering story. Elle Woods' journey of self-discovery and growth is expertly crafted, and the screenplay provides ample opportunities for memorable and impactful scenes that showcase her determination, wit, and resilience.
- Scene 1: Introduces Elle Woods as a determined and ambitious character, effectively establishes the setting and tone of the movie.
- Scene 7: Provides insights into Elle's character and motivations through her admissions essay and interactions with others.
- Scene 17: Introduces the main conflict in a compelling way: Warner Humphrey dismisses Elle Woods as not smart enough to secure a prestigious internship.
- Scene 19: Cleverly uses humor to highlight Elle's resilience and determination to prove herself.
- Scene 21: Elle's victory is both a personal and professional triumph; Elle's argument is well-reasoned and persuasive.
- Scene 13: Could provide more context about Elle's current emotional state and her motivations for attending law school.
- Scene 24: The transition from Elle flirting with the UPS Guy to teaching the 'Bend & Snap' maneuver could be smoother to enhance the flow of the scene.
- Scene 28: The transition from Chutney's testimony to Enrique's testimony could be smoother to enhance the flow of the scene.
- Scene 3: The scene could be more concise and to the point.
- Scene 12: Could provide more context about the subject matter jurisdiction case being discussed.
- Scene 2: Introduces Elle's character as a fashion-conscious, confident, and ambitious individual.
- Scene 6: Provides background information on Elle's previous relationship with Warner and her determination to win him back.
- Scene 20: Elle Woods' growth and empowerment throughout the screenplay is effectively showcased.
- Scene 25: The scene effectively introduces Mrs. Windham Vandermark, who provides valuable information about Brooke and Heyworth's relationship.
- Scene 27: The dialogue between Emmett and Elle is engaging and reveals their dynamic relationship.
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 8.25, The screenplay's premise establishes a compelling foundation for an engaging and entertaining narrative, introducing Elle Woods, a determined and effervescent sorority queen whose journey to prove herself takes her to the halls of Harvard Law School. While the premise effectively balances humor and heart, certain aspects could be refined to further capitalize on its potential for originality and audience intrigue. See More
Structure: 8.5, Legally Blonde exhibits a strong narrative structure that effectively engages the audience through a compelling plot and well-developed characters. The screenplay adheres to the traditional three-act structure, providing familiarity and structure to the story's progression. The central conflict is introduced early on, setting the stage for Elle's journey and her determination to prove her worth. The plot unfolds at a steady pace, balancing humor, romance, and legal drama to maintain viewer interest. The resolution provides a satisfying conclusion while leaving room for character growth in future installments. See More
Theme: 7.5, The screenplay effectively conveys its themes and messages, showcasing the power of empowerment, perseverance, and the importance of embracing one's individuality. However, the film could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the legal profession and a tighter focus on its central themes. See More
Visual Impact: 7.5, The screenplay boasts creative and vivid visual imagery that effectively transports readers into its world. The descriptions are detailed and immersive, aiding the reader in visualizing the scenes and connecting emotionally with the narrative. However, there are areas where the screenplay can further enhance its visual storytelling to elevate the overall impact of its scenes. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.25, Legally Blonde presents a strong foundation for emotional storytelling, with a blend of humor, heart, and relatable characters. The screenplay effectively conveys emotions such as determination, self-discovery, and the power of friendship. However, it could benefit from exploring deeper emotional complexities and providing more nuanced emotional arcs for certain characters. See More
Conflict: 8.25, The screenplay effectively utilizes conflict and stakes to generate tension and drive audience engagement. The central conflict, Elle's pursuit of justice for her client while navigating societal expectations, is well-defined and compelling. The stakes are personal and significant to Elle, adding weight to her journey. However, some areas could benefit from further development to heighten the conflict and raise the stakes, ultimately increasing the screenplay's overall impact. See More
Originality: 8.25, The screenplay showcases a refreshing approach to the legal drama genre, offering a blend of humor, wit, and a feisty female protagonist. By injecting elements of fashion, pop culture, and a diverse cast of characters, the screenplay carves out a unique identity for itself. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- In a daytime scene at the pink-decorated Delta Gamma sorority house of USC, blonde Elle Woods collects signatures from her blonde sorority sisters on a handmade card for her boyfriend Warner. After they exchange well-wishes, Elle's dog, Underdog, delivers the card to Warner, foreshadowing Warner's upcoming proposal to Elle.
- In this light-hearted and exciting scene, Elle, accompanied by Serena and Margot, goes to the Sunset Plaza Boutique to find the perfect dress for her special date with Jason, where she expects a proposal. A saleswoman attempts to upsell Elle an expensive dress with false claims, but Elle, who has knowledge of fashion, quickly sees through the lies and rejects the dress. Elle finds and purchases a different dress that she likes, ending the scene as she prepares to leave the boutique.
- Amy summons Elle to meet Warner at The Ivy restaurant, where he surprises her with a romantic gesture. However, their conversation takes a devastating turn when Warner reveals his intention to discuss their future, leading to a heartbreaking breakup. Elle is left in tears, with Warner following her as she leaves the restaurant.
- Elle, devastated after being dumped by Warner, is driven home by him only to have him end the relationship. She tearfully confides in her sorority sisters, Serena and Margot, who console her and try to make sense of the situation. The scene takes place at night, transitioning from a street to the Delta Gamma sorority house, and is filled with emotional dialogue and visuals of Elle's distress. The conflict between Elle and Warner remains unresolved, and the scene concludes with Elle, distraught, holding a photo of Warner while her dog, Underdog, showers her with affection.
- The scene opens with Amy finding Elle, a Delta Gamma sister, distraught over her breakup with Warner. Serena and Margot arrive with Jamba Juice to console Elle, who laments about her future plans centered around Warner. The setting transitions to an upscale manicure shop where Elle learns about Warner's older brother's engagement, prompting her to focus on self-improvement. The main conflict lies in Elle's struggle to cope with her breakup and the uncertainty of her future. The emotional tone is primarily sad and melancholic, with moments of hope as the characters try to help Elle move forward.
- Elle meets with her advisor to discuss applying to Harvard Law School, despite her major being Fashion Merchandising. The advisor tells her she needs excellent recommendations, a great admissions essay, and a high LSAT score. Back at her sorority house, Elle tells her friends she's going to Harvard, but they don't understand why. Elle explains it's to win Warner back, and Margot gives her a lucky scrunchie for good luck. The scene is lighthearted and humorous, but there's also a sense of uncertainty and confusion as Elle's friends struggle to understand her motivations.
- In this scene, Elle Woods records her Harvard admissions essay while studying for the LSAT, reviewing flashcards, and taking practice tests. She also participates in sorority activities as president of Delta Gamma, multitasks by studying during a horror movie night with Kappa Sigmas, and interacts with her sorority sisters, studies with her classmates, and addresses her Kappa Sig sisters during the movie night. The scene takes place in various locations, including Woods' backyard Jacuzzi and pool, Delta Gamma house living room, an LSAT prep course classroom, and a beach, during the day or night as indicated. The tone is light-hearted and humorous, with Elle's voiceover providing a satirical take on her experiences and abilities. The scene ends with Elle growing frustrated after receiving a low score on her practice LSAT exam.
- In this scene, Elle studies for the LSAT with Amy in a library study room but gets distracted by Warner and fraternity boys carrying a keg. She closes the shades and continues studying, records video messages about her confidence, and takes the LSAT exam. Later, Elle and her friends follow Dylan McDermott's car and scream at him, and Elle jogs with Serena and criticizes Calvin Klein's spring line. The main conflict is Elle's struggle to focus on studying, while another conflict is her aggressive behavior towards Dylan McDermott. The tone is lighthearted and playful, with some moments of determination and frustration.
- Amy bursts into the Delta Gamma house with Elle's LSAT envelope, revealing a score of 175 and sparking a celebration. Simultaneously, the Harvard Law Admissions Office discusses Elle's unique application, highlighting her unconventional background and achievements. The scene concludes with the Dean of Admissions welcoming Elle to Harvard Law School, resolving the conflict between her unique qualities and traditional expectations.
- In this scene, Elle meets with her parents to discuss her plans to attend law school at Harvard, facing their doubts and revealing her motivation to win back her ex-boyfriend. Arriving on campus, she is met with surprise and skepticism from other students. Despite the conflicts, Elle remains determined to pursue her goals, asking about her ex-boyfriend's whereabouts at orientation and being directed to the Lido deck.
- In this light-hearted and positive scene, Elle, a former beauty queen and now law student, attends a welcome event for new law students, introducing herself with her past achievements and a story about Cameron Diaz. She then goes to her first law class, where she runs into Warner. They have a surprised but happy reunion, with Warner learning that Elle also attends Harvard Law School. The scene ends with Elle and Warner making plans to meet after class.
- In the first civil procedures class of law school, Elle enters nervously and takes a seat in the front row. However, she is the only student without a laptop and is surrounded by unshowered brainiacs. The tough professor, Stromwell, lectures on the importance of legal education and tests the class's knowledge, calling on Elle who admits to being unprepared. This leads to a conflict between Elle and prim classmate Sarah, who supports Stromwell's decision to ask Elle to leave. The scene ends with Elle leaving the class in shame.
- Emmett and Elle have a friendly conversation on a bench outside the law school quad, discussing her first day of classes and the Socratic method. Emmett offers advice on her professors and shares his own experience of being moved to tears by Professor Stromwell. However, the mood turns tense and awkward with the arrival of Warner and his fiancée Sarah, who is revealed to be the 'horrible girl' who humiliated Elle in class. Elle looks stricken and rushes off as the scene ends.
- Elle, a law student, visits a blue-collar salon in distress over her ex-boyfriend Warner's engagement. She confides in Paulette, the manicurist, who shares her own heartbreaking past. Through their conversation, Paulette encourages Elle to fight for Warner, helping Elle regain her confidence and overcome her internal conflict.
- Elle Woods attempts to reconnect with her ex-boyfriend, Warner, by leaving a message and wine bottle at his door, then spying on him playing football. In Criminal Law class, she confronts Sarah over internship preferences, showcasing her newfound confidence and determination to win the competition and Warner back. The scene is filled with playful competition, tension, and a hint of determination.
- In the study lounge, Elle passes a note to Underdog to give to Warner, inviting him to dinner. However, Warner doesn't show up at the Cask & Flagon restaurant. Elle then brings muffins to Warner's study group at the library, but they reject her. Elle is hurt and leaves, passing by the Raging Feminist Study Group and getting muffins knocked out of her hands by a group of nerds. The scene ends with Elle feeling even more depressed than before.
- Elle, feeling left out after being excluded from a party, calls her friends Serena and Margot, learning about Margot's engagement and Josh's proposal. Elle lies about having a date with The Rock. Deciding to attend the party in a Playboy Bunny costume, she faces indifference from the partygoers and a rude comment from Enid, dressed as Lizzie Borden, highlighting the exclusivity and lack of welcome she experiences.
- Elle, dressed as a Playboy Bunny, joins Sarah and Claire at the bar. Warner, dressed as O.J., flirts with Elle but later dismisses her chances of getting a prestigious internship, causing a conflict. Elle, hurt by Warner's lack of faith in her abilities, walks back into the house, ending the scene.
- In this scene, Elle overhears a group of Ils, including Enid, Dorky David, Sarah, and Arrogant Aaron, betting on how long she will last at Harvard. Hurt by their comments, Elle decides to prove her worth by purchasing a laptop and starting to study. She interacts with supportive characters like Emmett, Paulette, and Professor Donovan, showing her determination to succeed in law school. The scene highlights the conflict between Elle and the Ils, who doubt her ability to succeed, and ends with Elle resolute in proving them wrong.
- In this scene, Elle struggles to reach a book and is helped by Dorky David. She playfully marks 'Eat Me' on Arrogant Aaron's forehead while he sleeps in the library, which is later highlighted in class, causing amusement among the students. The scene takes place in various indoor settings, including the law library, study lounge, Elle's dorm room, and Civil Procedures class, during the day and night. The tone is light-hearted and humorous, with a touch of sarcasm and playfulness.
- Elle Woods celebrates a small victory at the Beauty Oasis salon with Paulette before attending her Criminal Law class. During the class, Elle, now with less makeup and a ponytail, confronts Warner and another student's argument that a sperm donor has visitation rights. Elle challenges their stance by questioning the defendant's records and intent, transforming the academic and serious tone of the class into a lively debate. The professor ultimately sides with Elle, ending the scene with her triumphant victory.
- In this scene, Elle receives praise from Professor Donovan for her class performance, which leads to a conversation about an internship opportunity. Elle presents her unique resume, and Donovan questions her decision to attend law school. Meanwhile, Emmett observes the conversation, and Elle shares her excitement with Paulette, encouraging her to approach Dewey. The scene takes place in Donovan's class, Elle's car, and Dewey's trailer, with a positive and uplifting tone. Key pieces of dialogue include Donovan's praise and comment about Elle's pink resume, and Elle's encouragement of Paulette. Visual elements include Elle's pink resume, Paulette's nervous demeanor, and Dewey's beer gut. The scene ends with Paulette hesitantly making her way to Dewey's trailer.
- Elle Woods, assertive and professional, visits Dewey's trailer to discuss legal matters regarding the common law marriage of Paulette and her dog Rufus. Initially confused, Dewey eventually understands and hands over Rufus. Paulette, surprised and empowered, takes back her beloved pet, ending the conflict. The scene takes place in the afternoon, in Dewey's trailer's exterior and Elle's car's interior, and is serious in tone with a hint of triumph and relief for Paulette.
- Elle, Paulette, and Rufus celebrate their victory and head off in Elle's car. At her Civil Procedures class, Elle correctly answers a question posed by Professor Stromwell, which leaves her classmates in awe. After class, Elle learns that she has been chosen as an intern for a major murder case, much to her surprise and the shock of her classmates. The scene is filled with joy, tension, and surprise as Elle navigates this new development in her law school journey.
- In this serious-toned scene, Elle starts her new job at a law firm with a confident transformation, impressing her ex-boyfriend Warner. The group, including Donovan, Emmett, and other associates, discuss their case defending Brooke Windham, accused of murdering her husband. Elle's passionate defense of Brooke sparks a new perspective, leaving the group in anticipation as Emmett hints at having a case.
- In a tense scene at the Boston Jail, lawyer Donovan interviews his client Brooke, who is accused of murdering her husband. Donovan tries to get Brooke to reveal her alibi, but she refuses, getting defensive and angry. Amidst this tension, Donovan's intern Elle recognizes Brooke from a dance class they both attended in LA, providing a brief moment of levity. The scene ends with Brooke expressing gratitude towards Elle, indicating a potential connection between the two characters. The main conflict, Donovan's attempt to get Brooke to reveal her alibi, remains unresolved.
- Rufus sleeps on the floor while Elle and Paulette discuss Brooke's situation. A UPS guy delivers a package, and Elle flirts with him to boost Paulette's confidence. Elle then teaches the 'Bend & Snap' maneuver to Paulette and the other clients in the beauty salon, ending with everyone practicing it together.
- In this scene, Chutney, the victim's daughter, gives a conflicting account of the defendant's actions at the time of the murder compared to an intern named Enrique. The group discusses the case, and the main character, Elle, decides to visit the defendant, Brooke Windham, in jail to get her alibi. The scene ends with Elle visiting Brooke in jail, where she reveals she was getting liposuction on the day of the murder.
- In the library, Donovan assigns interviews and inquires about a prison communique. The main conflict arises when Elle refuses to disclose a promised alibi, causing tension with Donovan and the associates. Despite their attempts to persuade her, Elle remains firm. The scene ends with Donovan sending Elle to the spa to get the alibi from the ex-wife, while the tension remains unresolved.
- Emmett and Elle drive to a spa to meet Katherine Windham Vandermark for a Pilates class. During the car ride, they discuss Emmett's dislike for Brooke, with Elle defending her. At the spa, they find Katherine covered in mud for a treatment and discuss the case. Katherine reveals that Brooke was having an affair with Heyworth, shocking Emmett and Elle. This revelation adds a new layer to the case and causes tension between Emmett and Elle, as Emmett had previously defended Brooke's character. The scene ends with Katherine's revelation, leaving the audience eager to find out how this new information will impact the case.
- Emmett drives while Elle rants about her suspicion of Brooke's innocence and her idea for a Blonde Legal Defense Fund to combat blonde discrimination. Emmett is initially skeptical, but Elle's enthusiasm wins him over. Elle also offers Emmett seaweed cream for his eye bags, which he initially declines. The scene ends with Emmett asking Elle if she really thinks he's attractive, and Elle responding with a backhanded compliment.
- In this light-hearted and humorous scene, Elle walks to her dorm on the Harvard campus at night and sees Dorky David being rejected by a Freshman Girl. To help him out, Elle pretends they had a date and slaps David, implying he stood her up. The Freshman Girl is impressed by David's 'confidence' and asks him out. Elle overhears this and smiles, resolving the conflict and ending the scene on a positive note.
- The scene takes place in a courthouse during the day, where a trial is in session with Judge William R. Ptak presiding. DA Joyce Rafferty interrogates witnesses, including Mrs. Windham Vandermark, Chutney, and Enrique, revealing key information about the case. The main conflict arises when DA Rafferty questions Enrique about his affair with the defendant, Brooke Windham, which he initially denies but eventually admits. This revelation shocks the courtroom and outrages Brooke Windham. The scene ends with Enrique admitting to his affair, causing a gasp in the courtroom.
- Brooke is accused of having an affair and led away, while Elle stays behind to discuss Brooke's alibi with Sarah. Margot and Serena invite Elle out, but she declines. The scene takes place in Elle's dorm room at night, and the main conflict is whether or not to tell Donovan about Brooke's alibi. The tone is serious and tense at the beginning, but lightens up with the arrival of Margot and Serena. Key pieces of dialogue include Brooke's denial of the affair, Sarah's belief in Brooke's alibi, and the revelation about Warner being wait-listed. The scene ends with Sarah and Elle staying behind to drink champagne after they win the case.
- Paulette tries to use the Bend & Snap move to impress the UPS Guy, but accidentally hits him in the nose, causing it to bleed. UPS Guy is taken away by paramedics while Elle, who is waiting in line for a water fountain, consoles Paulette over the phone. The scene takes place in the morning, inside Beauty Oasis, a beauty shop, and at a courthouse hallway during the day. The main conflict is Paulette's desire to attract the UPS Guy's attention, which results in an accident. The tone is lighthearted and humorous, despite the accident, with a touch of drama and concern for the UPS Guy's well-being.
- Elle reveals Enrique's sexuality to Emmett and Donovan, then questions Warner about her shoes to prove her point. Brooke is skeptical, and Donovan dismisses Elle's theory. Enrique takes the stand, denying the affair with Brooke, but Emmett's questioning reveals the truth. Chuck stands up, confirming their relationship, causing an uproar in the courtroom. The scene ends with the courtroom erupting in chaos as Chuck confirms his relationship with Enrique, and Elle smiling victoriously.
- Elle and Emmett celebrate a successful day in court, followed by Elle sharing her excitement with Paulette at the salon. However, the tone turns tense when Elle meets with Donovan, who compliments her performance but then makes an inappropriate advance. This is witnessed by Sarah, potentially sowing conflict in the office.
- Elle finds out about Donovan's inappropriate intentions and quits her internship in anger and disappointment. Emmett tries to convince her to stay, but she is determined to return to LA. The scene takes place in Donovan's office, an elevator, and the building lobby at night, and highlights the sexism Elle faces in her internship. The tone is emotional, with a mix of anger, disappointment, and sadness.
- In this emotional and intense scene, Elle, feeling like a joke, plans to leave law school after Donovan's disdainful behavior. However, Professor Stromwell's encouragement helps her regain her confidence. Meanwhile, Brooke fires Donovan and hires Elle, who confidently asserts her right to represent Brooke in court under Emmett's supervision. The scene takes place in various locations, including the Beauty Oasis salon, jail waiting room, TV room, courthouse hallway, and courtroom. The main conflicts include Elle's lack of confidence and Brooke hiring Elle as her lawyer, which Donovan opposes. The scene ends with Elle confidently walking back to the defense table after being approved by the judge to represent Brooke in court.
- In this courtroom scene from Legally Blonde, Elle Woods interrogates Chutney Windham, who is defending her father's killer. Elle notices Chutney's curly hair and questions her about her recent perm. Chutney admits she hadn't wet her hair for at least twenty-four hours, which Elle uses to deduce that Chutney must have heard the gunshot and lied about finding Brooke with the gun. Under pressure, Chutney confesses that she intended to shoot Brooke but accidentally killed her father instead, resolving the conflict and exonerating Brooke. The scene ends with the crowd erupting in pandemonium.
- Elle Woods and Brooke Taylor-Windham exit the courtroom after winning a case, greeted by reporters. Elle's father and stepmother watch her on TV. Elle reunites with her friends Serena and Margot, but is confronted by Enid about being products of the patriarchy. Warner apologizes and proposes to Elle, but she rejects him and walks away with Sarah, who decides to pawn her engagement ring. Emmett asks Elle on a date, and she ultimately chooses to embrace her new beginning with him.
- During Harvard Law School's orientation, Elle, a second year law student and co-founder of the 'Blonde Legal Defense Club,' stands behind the club's table with Emmett. A nervous first year girl inquires if blonde hair is a requirement to join. Elle kindly explains that one only needs to be blonde at heart, gesturing towards their newly blonde friend Sarah. The first year girl's hesitation is quickly set aside, and she joins the growing crowd of first year students eagerly signing up for the club. The scene exudes a lighthearted and welcoming atmosphere, reflecting the excitement and sense of community among the incoming law students.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
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Elle | Elle's character arc in the screenplay begins with her being a bubbly sorority queen who is devastated by a breakup but shows resilience and determination to prove herself. As the story progresses, Elle undergoes significant growth and self-discovery, challenging traditional norms and stereotypes. She transforms into a confident and empowered law student who stands up against discrimination and harassment, ultimately becoming a standout intern in Donovan's team. Elle's journey culminates in her defying expectations and fighting for justice, showcasing her unwavering belief in herself and her ability to make a difference. | The character arc for Elle is well-developed, showcasing her growth and empowerment throughout the screenplay. However, there could be more emphasis on her internal struggles and vulnerabilities to make her transformation even more impactful. Additionally, providing more depth to her relationships with other characters could enhance the emotional resonance of her journey. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating moments of introspection and vulnerability for Elle to highlight her internal struggles and growth. Develop her relationships with other characters, particularly her friends and colleagues, to add emotional depth and complexity to her journey. Additionally, explore themes of self-discovery and empowerment further to showcase Elle's transformation in a more nuanced and compelling way. |
Serena | Serena starts off as a confident and assertive friend who provides comic relief and support to Elle. As the story progresses, she becomes more aware of her naivety and cluelessness, leading to personal growth and self-discovery. Serena learns to balance her bold personality with a more thoughtful and understanding approach towards her friends, ultimately becoming a more well-rounded and empathetic individual. | The character arc for Serena is well-developed, showcasing her growth and evolution throughout the story. However, there could be more specific challenges or conflicts that Serena faces to further highlight her development. Additionally, incorporating moments of vulnerability or introspection could add depth to her character and make her arc even more compelling. | To improve Serena's character arc, consider introducing a specific event or dilemma that challenges her confidence and forces her to confront her naivety. This could be a personal struggle or a conflict within the group that tests her loyalty and friendship. Additionally, adding moments of introspection where Serena reflects on her actions and learns from her mistakes can enhance her character development and make her arc more impactful. |
Margot | Margot starts off as a carefree and slightly naive friend who brings levity to Elle's life. As the story progresses, she becomes more supportive and practical, offering advice and comfort during Elle's breakup. Margot's character arc culminates in her being a loyal and protective friend, providing emotional support and understanding to Elle in her time of need. | While Margot's character arc is well-developed and provides a good balance of humor and emotional support, there could be more depth added to her backstory or personal struggles to make her character more dynamic and relatable. Additionally, her transition from carefree to supportive friend could be more clearly defined and explored throughout the screenplay. | To improve Margot's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that reveal more about her past experiences or motivations. This could add depth to her character and make her more relatable to the audience. Additionally, focus on the gradual shift in Margot's personality from carefree to supportive, showing the reasons behind this change and how it impacts her relationships with Elle and the other characters. |
Warner | Warner starts off as a charming but shallow character who prioritizes societal expectations over personal relationships. As the story progresses, he realizes the importance of authenticity and genuine connections, leading to a conflict between his desire for societal approval and his true feelings for Elle. Ultimately, Warner undergoes a transformation where he learns to prioritize love and personal growth over external validation. | The character arc for Warner is well-developed, showcasing his internal conflict and growth throughout the story. However, to enhance the arc, it would be beneficial to delve deeper into Warner's motivations and backstory to provide a clearer understanding of his actions and decisions. Additionally, adding more nuanced interactions between Warner and Elle could further highlight the complexity of their relationship. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating flashback scenes or dialogue that reveal Warner's upbringing and how it has shaped his beliefs and values. This can add depth to his character and provide insight into his struggles with societal expectations. Furthermore, exploring Warner's vulnerabilities and insecurities could humanize him and make his transformation more impactful for the audience. |
Elle Woods | Elle's character arc in the screenplay starts with her as a fashion major who is underestimated and judged based on her appearance and interests. Through determination, optimism, and quirky charm, she defies expectations and gains acceptance into Harvard Law School. Throughout her journey, she faces challenges that test her resilience and wit, ultimately leading to personal growth and a successful career as a compassionate and dedicated lawyer. | The character arc for Elle Woods is well-developed, showcasing her transformation from a fashion major to a successful lawyer. However, there could be more depth added to her internal struggles and conflicts to make her character more relatable and multidimensional. Additionally, more emphasis could be placed on the societal barriers she faces as a woman in a male-dominated field to add complexity to her character arc. | To improve the character arc for Elle Woods, consider incorporating more internal conflicts and emotional depth to showcase her vulnerabilities and growth. Explore the challenges she faces as a woman in a male-dominated field and how she overcomes them with determination and wit. This will add layers to her character and make her journey more compelling and relatable to the audience. |
Emmett | Emmett starts off as a skeptical and logical law student who doubts Elle's abilities but is won over by her enthusiasm and unique insights. Throughout the feature, he evolves into a supportive and caring character who becomes impressed by Elle's dedication and passion for the case. Emmett's arc culminates in him serving as a voice of reason and encouragement for Elle, showcasing his growth and deepening relationship with her. | The character arc for Emmett is well-developed and shows a clear progression from skepticism to supportiveness. However, to enhance the arc further, it would be beneficial to delve deeper into Emmett's personal motivations and backstory. This would add more depth to his character and provide a stronger foundation for his evolving relationship with Elle. | To improve the character arc for Emmett, consider incorporating scenes that reveal more about his background, such as his reasons for studying law and his personal connection to the case. Additionally, explore moments of internal conflict for Emmett as he grapples with his initial doubts about Elle and his growing admiration for her. This will add complexity to his character and make his transformation more impactful. |
Paulette | Paulette starts off as a flustered and slightly clumsy manicurist who befriends Elle and gains confidence and assertiveness through their friendship. As the story progresses, she becomes a supportive and empathetic friend who finds empowerment and gratitude through Elle's legal assistance. Paulette's character arc culminates in her expressing admiration and loyalty towards Elle, showcasing her growth and emotional depth. | While Paulette's character arc is well-developed and adds emotional depth to the screenplay, there could be more focus on her personal growth and development outside of her interactions with Elle. It would be beneficial to explore her backstory, motivations, and struggles in more detail to make her character more well-rounded and relatable to the audience. | To improve Paulette's character arc, consider incorporating scenes that delve deeper into her past experiences, challenges, and aspirations. This will help the audience connect with her on a deeper level and understand the reasons behind her blunt and humorous personality. Additionally, explore her relationships with other characters besides Elle to showcase different facets of her personality and further enrich her character development. |
Sarah | Sarah's character arc involves a transformation from being competitive and dismissive to becoming a supportive and understanding ally to Elle. Through their interactions, Sarah learns to appreciate Elle's unconventional approach and creativity, ultimately leading to a mutual respect and collaboration between the two characters. | The character arc for Sarah is well-developed and adds depth to her character. However, it could benefit from more subtle hints early on about her true nature to create a more gradual and believable transformation. Additionally, exploring the reasons behind Sarah's initial behavior could provide further insight into her character development. | To improve the character arc, consider adding scenes that delve into Sarah's background and motivations, shedding light on why she initially behaves the way she does. This will make her transformation more impactful and provide a deeper understanding of her character. Additionally, incorporating moments of vulnerability or self-reflection for Sarah can further enhance her arc and make her journey more compelling for the audience. |
Professor Donovan | Throughout the screenplay, Professor Donovan starts off as a strict and intimidating figure, setting the tone for the murder case discussion. As he interacts more with Elle and witnesses her growth and determination, he begins to soften his approach and becomes more supportive and encouraging. By the end of the feature, he has developed a strong bond with Elle and sees her as a promising legal mind, proud of her achievements and growth. | The character arc for Professor Donovan is well-developed, showing a clear progression from a strict mentor to a supportive figure for Elle. However, it could benefit from more internal conflict or personal stakes for Professor Donovan to make his transformation even more impactful and engaging for the audience. | To improve the character arc, consider adding a subplot or backstory for Professor Donovan that reveals his own struggles or challenges in the legal field. This could create more depth for his character and make his evolution more compelling. Additionally, explore moments of vulnerability or doubt for Professor Donovan to show a more nuanced and human side to his character. |
Brooke | Brooke starts off as a vulnerable and conflicted character with a shameful secret that could ruin her reputation. As the story progresses, she becomes more determined and defiant, fighting to prove her innocence and facing her fears head-on. Ultimately, Brooke finds strength in her vulnerability and learns to accept herself, flaws and all, leading to a resolution where she is able to overcome her past and move forward with a sense of empowerment. | The character arc for Brooke is well-developed and engaging, showcasing her growth and transformation throughout the story. However, there could be more depth added to her internal struggles and conflicts to make her journey even more compelling. Additionally, exploring her relationships with other characters in more depth could provide further insight into her motivations and actions. | To improve the character arc for Brooke, consider delving deeper into her past traumas and how they have shaped her present actions. Show more internal monologues or flashbacks to give the audience a better understanding of her emotional turmoil. Additionally, explore her relationships with Elle and Donovan in more detail to add layers to her character and showcase different facets of her personality. |
Donovan | Donovan starts off as dismissive of Elle's capabilities but as the trial progresses, he begins to see her worth and eventually forms a begrudging respect for her. However, his betrayal of Elle leads to a confrontation where he must confront his own moral compass and decide between loyalty to his client or doing what is right. | The character arc for Donovan is compelling and adds depth to his character. However, the betrayal of Elle feels somewhat forced and could be developed more organically throughout the story. Additionally, Donovan's internal struggle could be further explored to make his decision at the climax more impactful. | To improve the character arc, consider foreshadowing Donovan's betrayal earlier in the story through subtle hints or interactions. Develop his internal conflict more explicitly to show the audience the moral dilemma he faces. Allow for moments of vulnerability to humanize Donovan and make his eventual decision more emotionally resonant. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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Personal Growth | Elle's journey from a fashion merchandising major to a law student, her determination to get into Harvard Law School, and her transformation into a successful lawyer show her personal growth. | The screenplay focuses on the main character's development and transformation, highlighting her determination, resilience, and ability to overcome challenges. | ||||||||||||
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Love and Relationships | The story revolves around Elle's relationship with Warner, her ex-boyfriend, and her interactions with other characters like Emmett, Paulette, and her friends. These relationships shape her character and influence her decisions. | Love and relationships are significant themes in the screenplay, illustrating the importance of human connections and the impact they have on our lives. | ||||||||||||
Female Empowerment | Elle's journey to becoming a successful lawyer, her fight against discrimination, and her support for other women show the theme of female empowerment. | The screenplay emphasizes the power of women, their ability to succeed in male-dominated fields, and the importance of supporting one another. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist, Elle Woods, evolves from seeking validation and acceptance from others to proving her worth and intelligence in a competitive environment. |
External Goals | Elle's external goals evolve from preparing for a potential engagement to excelling in law school and defending her client in court. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in 'Legally Blonde' is Elle's belief in authenticity and self-worth versus societal expectations and judgments based on appearance. |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to Elle's growth from a superficial, appearance-focused individual to a confident, intelligent, and determined lawyer who values authenticity and self-worth.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict drive the narrative forward by creating tension, conflict, and character development within Elle's journey from a heartbroken fashion major to a successful law student and defender of justice.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict deepen the thematic exploration of authenticity, self-worth, societal expectations, and the importance of staying true to oneself in the face of judgment and stereotypes.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Elle Woods' Card Signing and Dog Delivery in the Delta Gamma Sorority House | Light-hearted, Playful, Excited | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
2 - Elle's Proposal Preparations: A Dress Fitting Adventure | Light-hearted, Excited, Sassy | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - The Breakup at The Ivy | Romantic, Heartbreaking, Serious, Embarrassing | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - A Night of Heartbreak and Support | Heartbreak, Humor, Shock | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Elle's Melancholy: Navigating a Breakup and Uncertain Future | Heartbreak, Humor, Sadness | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Elle's Surprising Ambition: A Step Closer to Winning Warner Back | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Elle Woods' Multi-tasking and Frustration: Balancing Sorority Life and LSAT Preparation | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Dramatic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - Elle's LSAT Study Session and Dylan McDermott Encounter | Humorous, Heartfelt, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Elle's LSAT Triumph and Unconventional Acceptance into Harvard Law | Humorous, Heartfelt, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Elle's Arrival at Harvard: Doubts and Determination | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Elle's Law School Beginning and Warner Reunion | Humorous, Light-hearted, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - Elle's Unpreparedness Leads to Embarrassment in Civil Procedures Class | Humorous, Serious, Embarrassing | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Elle's First Day of Classes: Revelations and Heartbreak | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Surprising | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - Heartbreak and Hope at Beauty Oasis | Humorous, Heartfelt, Reflective | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
15 - Elle's Challenge: Reconnecting with Warner and Rising above Sarah | Humorous, Sarcastic, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Elle's Failed Attempt to Join Warner's Study Group | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Defiant | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - Elle's Night of Exclusion and Rejection | Humorous, Heartfelt, Defeated | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Elle's Costume and Warner's Doubts | Sarcastic, Flirty, Heartbroken, Defiant | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - Elle's Determination: Overcoming Doubts and Proving Worth | Humorous, Sarcastic, Defiant | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Elle's Playful Prank on Arrogant Aaron | Humorous, Determined, Sarcastic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
21 - Elle's Legal Victory: Challenging Sperm Donor Rights | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - Elle's Empowerment: Impressing Professors and Encouraging Friends | Humorous, Determined, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - Elle Woods Secures Rufus's Return for Paulette | Humorous, Dramatic, Confrontational | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - Elle's Surprising Internship Offer | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - Elle's New Beginning: A Case of Innocence | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Tense Jail Interview and Unexpected Connection | Serious, Humorous, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - Elle Teaches the 'Bend & Snap' | Light-hearted, Humorous, Upbeat | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - Differing Accounts and a Jailhouse Visit | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Donovan's Frustration: The Unrevealed Alibi | Serious, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Pilates, Mud Treatments, and a Surprising Revelation | Light-hearted, Sarcastic, Conversational | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - Elle's Blonde Legal Defense Fund | Humorous, Sarcastic, Light-hearted | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
32 - Elle Helps Dorky David Win Over a Freshman Girl | Humorous, Sarcastic, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - Revelation of an Affair in the Courtroom | Serious, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | |
34 - Brooke's Alibi and a Night In | Light-hearted, Sarcastic, Supportive | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - Paulette's Failed Attempt at Impressing the UPS Guy | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - Elle Exposes Enrique's Affair and Sexuality in Court | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
37 - Elle's Success Turns Sour: Donovan's Unwanted Advance | Excitement, Gratitude, Professionalism, Intrigue, Disgust | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
38 - Elle's Decision to Quit | Upset, Defiant, Resigned, Disillusioned, Empowered | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - Elle's Confidence Restored: From Quitting Law School to Representing Brooke in Court | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - Chutney's Perm Leads to Confession | Dramatic, Humorous, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
41 - Elle's Courtroom Victory and New Beginnings | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
42 - Blonde Legal Defense Club's Popular Orientation Debut | Light-hearted, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Engaging plot
- Strong character development
- Witty dialogue
- Emotional depth
- Humorous moments
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited diversity in characters
- Stereotypical portrayal of characters
- Some cliched elements in character interactions
- Some predictable plot points
- Lack of significant conflict
Suggestions
- Explore more diverse character representation to avoid stereotypical portrayals.
- Consider reducing the number of cliched elements and predictable plot points to increase the element of surprise and keep the audience engaged.
- Focus on creating more significant conflict in the story to create tension and overall higher stakes for the characters.
- Work on crafting impactful dialogue that avoids being too on-the-nose or overly dramatic.
- Consider incorporating more emotional impact throughout the story to keep the audience invested in the characters and their journey.
- Physical environment: The physical environment in the screenplay is primarily set in a college campus, specifically at USC and Harvard Law School, with various locations including sorority houses, dorm rooms, classrooms, law libraries, courthouses, and social events. There are also scenes in a beauty salon, a spa, and a suburban backyard.
- Culture: The cultural elements in the screenplay revolve around legal education, sorority life, and societal expectations of success. There is also a focus on beauty, fashion, and relationships, with characters often discussing their appearances and social status.
- Society: The societal structure in the screenplay is hierarchical, with a strong emphasis on academic achievement, particularly in prestigious institutions like Harvard Law School. There are also power dynamics present in relationships, both romantic and professional.
- Technology: The technological elements in the screenplay are minimal, with the occasional use of laptops, cell phones, and a video camera. The focus is more on the characters' interactions and experiences rather than advanced technology.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology shape the characters' experiences and actions by creating a sense of pressure and competition, particularly in the academic setting. Characters are often influenced by societal expectations and their desire to succeed, leading them to make choices that reflect their ambitions and values.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative by providing a backdrop for the characters' personal and professional growth. The college campus and legal setting create a high-stakes environment where characters must navigate challenges and make important decisions that impact their futures.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes of ambition, identity, and societal expectations. Characters must confront their own values and beliefs as they navigate the complexities of academia, relationships, and personal growth.
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is witty, satirical, and uses humor to address serious themes. The dialogue is sharp and the scenes transition smoothly between comedic and dramatic moments. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by adding depth and complexity to the characters and themes, highlighting the contrast between superficial beauty standards and genuine ambition. |
Best Representation Scene | 17 - Elle's Night of Exclusion and Rejection |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively blends humor, drama, and social commentary in a compelling and engaging way. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Predominance of Humor and Drama | The screenplay has a strong emphasis on humor and drama, with 36 out of 42 scenes (86%) containing one or both of these elements. This combination may create a rollercoaster effect for the audience, keeping them engaged with the story. |
High Dialogue Scores | The dialogue in the screenplay is consistently strong, with 37 out of 42 scenes (88%) scoring 8 or higher. This suggests that the characters have distinct voices and that the conversations are engaging and meaningful to the story. |
Scene Tone vs. Emotional Impact | There seems to be a correlation between scene tone and emotional impact. Scenes with a lighter tone, such as 'Light-hearted', 'Playful', or 'Upbeat', tend to have lower emotional impact scores. In contrast, scenes with heavier tones, such as 'Heartbreaking', 'Serious', or 'Humorous', have higher emotional impact scores. This pattern suggests that the screenplay effectively uses tone to convey emotion. |
Character Changes and High Stakes | Scenes with character changes also tend to have higher stakes, as indicated by the 'High stakes' category. This correlation implies that the character development is closely tied to the progression of the plot and the challenges the characters face. |
Inconsistent Conflict Scores | Conflict scores are somewhat inconsistent, ranging from 4 to 10. This variability might indicate an opportunity to evenly distribute conflict throughout the screenplay, ensuring that each scene contributes to the overall tension and progression of the story. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay showcases the writer's ability to create engaging dialogue, dynamic characters, and compelling conflicts. The blend of humor, drama, and unique themes creates a rich and entertaining narrative. The writer's original voice and storytelling skills are evident throughout the scenes.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | Save the Cat! Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody | This book provides practical tips and techniques for improving storytelling, character development, and structure, which can help enhance the overall pacing and flow of the screenplay. |
Exercise | Write a scene with a strong focus on subtext and nonverbal communication.Practice In SceneProv | Practicing subtext and nonverbal communication in scenes can help deepen character interactions and emotional arcs, as well as improve visual storytelling. |
Screenplay | Study the screenplay for 'Spotlight' by Tom McCarthy and Josh Singer | This screenplay is an excellent example of strong pacing, structure, and character development, which can provide valuable insights for improving the overall quality of the screenplay. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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The Protagonist's Journey | Elle Woods, the protagonist, goes through a transformation from a fashion merchandising major to a Harvard Law School student to win back her ex-boyfriend. | This is a common trope in romantic comedies where the protagonist undergoes significant changes to achieve their goal, often involving personal growth and self-realization. An example of this trope can be found in 'Julie & Julia' (2009), where Julie Powell transforms from an unfulfilled administrative assistant to a successful food blogger. |
Love Triangle | Elle Woods is caught in a love triangle between her ex-boyfriend Warner and her new love interest Emmett. | A love triangle is a common trope in romantic comedies and dramas where a character has to choose between two romantic interests. An example of this trope can be found in 'Pride and Prejudice' (2005), where Elizabeth Bennet has to choose between Mr. Darcy and Mr. Wickham. |
The Makeover | Elle Woods undergoes a makeover to fit in at Harvard Law School, trading her pink outfits for conservative suits. | The makeover is a common trope in romantic comedies where the protagonist changes their appearance to fit in or attract a romantic interest. An example of this trope can be found in 'She's All That' (1999), where Laney Boggs undergoes a makeover to win the heart of Zack Siler. |
The Mentor | Professor Stromwell and Emmett serve as mentors to Elle Woods, guiding her through her journey at Harvard Law School. | The mentor is a common trope in coming-of-age stories and adventures, where an experienced character guides the protagonist through their journey. An example of this trope can be found in 'The Karate Kid' (1984), where Mr. Miyagi serves as a mentor to Daniel LaRusso. |
The Bet | A group of students bet on how long Elle Woods will last at Harvard Law School. | The bet is a common trope in underdog stories, where a character is underestimated by their peers and has to prove themselves. An example of this trope can be found in 'Back to the Future' (1985), where Biff Tannen bets George McFly that he can't date Lorraine Baines. |
The Rival | Sarah, Warner's fiancée, serves as a rival to Elle Woods throughout the film. | The rival is a common trope in romantic comedies and adventures, where a character competes with another character for a goal or a romantic interest. An example of this trope can be found in 'Mean Girls' (2004), where Cady Heron competes with Regina George for the title of Spring Fling Queen. |
The Transformation | Elle Woods transforms from a fashion merchandising major to a successful lawyer. | The transformation is a common trope in coming-of-age stories and adventures, where a character undergoes significant changes to achieve their goals. An example of this trope can be found in 'My Fair Lady' (1964), where Eliza Doolittle transforms from a flower girl to a lady. |
The Break-Up | Elle Woods breaks up with her ex-boyfriend Warner and moves on with her life. | The break-up is a common trope in romantic comedies and dramas, where a character ends a relationship and pursues a new path. An example of this trope can be found in 'Eat Pray Love' (2010), where Elizabeth Gilbert breaks up with her husband and travels the world. |
The Fish Out of Water | Elle Woods feels out of place at Harvard Law School, struggling to fit in with her peers. | The fish out of water is a common trope in comedies and adventures, where a character finds themselves in a new environment and struggles to adapt. An example of this trope can be found in 'Legally Blonde' (2001), where Elle Woods struggles to fit in at Harvard Law School. |
The Underdog | Elle Woods, a fashion merchandising major, defies expectations and becomes a successful lawyer. | The underdog is a common trope in coming-of-age stories and adventures, where a character overcomes obstacles and achieves their goals despite the odds. An example of this trope can be found in 'Rocky' (1976), where Rocky Balboa, a small-time boxer, gets a shot at the heavyweight championship. |
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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25 | Elle: Exercise gives you endorphins, endorphins make you happy — happy people don't kill their husbands! |
10 | Sapphire: What, like it's that hard? |
31 | ELLE: You're an attractive man, but you need to take better care of yourself. |
32 | Elle: Forget it. I've already spent too many hours crying over you. |
12 | Professor Stromwell: The law leaves much room for interpretation — but very little for self-doubt. |
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Explanation: The screenplay for 'Legally Blonde' is a well-written and engaging piece with a strong central character, compelling narrative, and effective use of humor. While there are a few areas where improvements could be made, such as providing more depth to certain character motivations and smoothing out transitions between scenes, the screenplay overall delivers on its promise of a fun, heartwarming, and empowering story. Elle Woods' journey of self-discovery and growth is expertly crafted, and the screenplay provides ample opportunities for memorable and impactful scenes that showcase her determination, wit, and resilience.