Poor Things
Executive Summary
Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend
Promo
USP: This script stands out as a gripping and thought-provoking exploration of moral complexities, societal inequalities, and the boundaries of human relationships. It fearlessly delves into the harsh realities of poverty, prostitution, and the struggle for identity, offering a raw and unflinching perspective through its unique blend of compelling characters, evocative settings, and a distinct narrative voice characterized by raw emotions, incisive wit, and philosophical depth. The script's exploration of psychological conflicts and ethical dilemmas provides a rich source of material for actors, inviting them to dive deep into the complexities of the human condition.
Overview
Genres: Drama, Romance, Mystery, Adventure, Social Commentary, Erotic, Comedy, Tragedy, Psychological Thriller, Dark Comedy
Setting: Various time periods including modern day and historical settings, Primarily in Paris, London, and a brothel
Overview: The screenplay received a score of 7.8, indicating a well-crafted and engaging narrative with areas for further improvement. The score is influenced by strong character development, emotional depth, and unpredictable plot twists, while also highlighting opportunities to enhance dialogue, pacing, and secondary character exploration.
Themes: Identity and Self-Discovery, Power Struggles and Control, Emotional Manipulation, Social Injustice and Poverty, Forgiveness and Redemption
Conflict and Stakes: The primary conflicts revolve around Bella's struggle with her past, identity, and relationships, as well as the emotional manipulation she faces. The stakes include her autonomy, emotional well-being, and future decisions.
Overall Mood: Tense, emotional, reflective
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 4: Dark humor, surrealism, and melancholy as Bella navigates her encounters in the brothel
Standout Features:
- Complex Characters: Bella's evolution and struggles provide depth and emotional resonance to the story.
- Emotional Manipulation : The portrayal of manipulation and its impact on Bella adds tension and complexity to the narrative.
- Historical and Modern Blend : The mix of historical and modern settings offers a unique backdrop for the characters' journeys.
- Exploration of Identity : The theme of identity and self-discovery adds layers to the characters and their interactions.
- Twists and Turns : The screenplay includes unexpected plot developments that keep the audience engaged and guessing.
- Social Commentary : The exploration of societal norms and issues adds relevance and depth to the story.
- Character Relationships : The dynamics between characters, especially Bella and Alfie, provide emotional depth and conflict.
- Visual Contrast : The contrast between luxurious settings and poverty adds visual interest and thematic depth to the screenplay.
Comparable Scripts:
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$15-20 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-45, fans of drama, romance, and historical settings
Marketability: The screenplay offers a mix of drama, romance, and historical elements that can attract a diverse audience.
The unique blend of genres, complex characters, and emotional depth make it appealing to a wide range of viewers.
The exploration of societal issues, emotional conflicts, and character development adds depth and relatability to the story.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, depending on marketing and critical reception. The screenplay's unique elements and emotional depth can attract audiences and potentially lead to awards recognition.
Scene Level Percentiles
Emotions Elicited Percentiles
This is a rough estimate of how the average intensity of emotions elicited in this script compare to all scripts in the Vault (all genres).
Higher isn't necessarily better. This is FYI.
Screenplay Analysis
- **Character Development (80.95%):** The screenplay excels in crafting well-developed and relatable characters, potentially leading to strong emotional connections with the audience.
- **Dialogue (84.13%):** The screenplay features natural and engaging dialogue, effectively capturing the characters' personalities and driving the narrative forward.
- **Emotional Impact (87.30%):** The screenplay has a strong emotional resonance, evoking powerful feelings and leaving a lasting impact on the audience.
- **Unpredictability (96.39%):** The screenplay offers unexpected twists and turns, keeping the audience engaged and invested in the story's progression.
- **Concept (32.14%):** The screenplay's central idea or premise could be further developed and refined to make it more compelling and unique.
- **Plot (7.54%):** The plot structure and pacing may need reconsideration to enhance the overall flow and tension of the narrative.
- **Conflict Level (34.13%):** The screenplay could benefit from stronger and more engaging conflicts to drive the story forward and heighten the stakes for the characters.
The writer exhibits strengths in character development and dialogue, suggesting a focus on creating emotionally resonant and relatable characters. The high percentile in unpredictability further indicates a flair for surprising and engaging storytelling.
Balancing Elements- **Plot and Concept:** While the screenplay excels in character-driven elements, it could benefit from strengthening the plot structure and developing a more compelling central idea.
- **Emotional Impact and Conflict:** The screenplay effectively evokes emotions but could enhance the overall impact by incorporating more substantial conflicts that challenge the characters and drive the narrative.
- **Originality and Formatting:** The screenplay's high originality score is a strength, but it should be complemented by improved formatting to enhance readability and clarity for potential producers and readers.
Intuitive
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay shows promise in character development, dialogue, and emotional resonance. By addressing the lower-scoring elements, such as plot, concept, and conflict, the writer can elevate the screenplay's overall potential and appeal to a wider audience.
How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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Percentile | Before | After |
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Scene Originality | 9.00 | 98 | Beetlejuice: 8.98 | severance (TV): 9.00 |
Scene Character Changes | 7.7 | 97 | Gladiator: 7.6 | the black list (TV): 7.7 |
Scene Unpredictability | 8.05 | 97 | 12 Monkeys: 8.02 | Poor Things: 8.05 |
Scene Emotional Impact | 8.5 | 86 | Birdman: 8.4 | Black mirror 304: 8.5 |
Scene Dialogue | 8.2 | 85 | Cruel Intentions: 8.1 | The good place draft: 8.2 |
Scene Characters | 8.6 | 81 | The Greatest Showman: 8.5 | Casablanca: 8.6 |
Scene Engagement | 9.00 | 76 | Almost Famous: 8.98 | fight Club: 9.00 |
Script Visual Impact | 8.25 | 65 | KILLING ZOE: 8.00 | the pursuit of happyness: 8.25 |
Scene Internal Goal | 8.09 | 65 | Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde : 8.08 | Blade Runner: 8.09 |
Script Conflict | 7.75 | 51 | Inception: 7.50 | the pursuit of happyness: 7.75 |
1 | 50 | - | The Founder: 1 | |
Script Theme | 8.25 | 48 | Stranger Things: 8.00 | the dark knight rises: 8.25 |
Scene External Goal | 7.14 | 41 | Stranger Things: 7.13 | Psycho: 7.14 |
Scene High Stakes | 7.0 | 34 | Hot Fuzz: 6.9 | Bonnie and Clyde: 7.0 |
Scene Conflict Level | 7.3 | 33 | Beetlejuice: 7.2 | Back to the future: 7.3 |
Script Emotional Impact | 7.50 | 28 | Midsommar: 7.25 | the pursuit of happyness: 7.50 |
Scene Concept | 7.9 | 27 | 500 days of summer: 7.8 | The Wolf of Wall Street: 7.9 |
Overall Script | 7.80 | 22 | LA confidential - draft: 7.79 | True Blood: 7.80 |
Scene Story Forward | 7.6 | 22 | Almost Famous: 7.5 | Rear Window: 7.6 |
Script Structure | 7.50 | 20 | Memento: 7.25 | True Blood: 7.50 |
Scene Overall | 8.1 | 18 | Swingers: 8.0 | Erin Brokovich: 8.1 |
Scene Formatting | 8.00 | 16 | Wild Wild West: 7.98 | Arsenic and old lace : 8.00 |
Script Originality | 7.50 | 13 | 2001: 7.25 | scream : 7.50 |
Script Characters | 7.50 | 9 | 500 days of summer: 7.25 | severance (TV): 7.50 |
Scene Plot | 7.3 | 9 | 500 days of summer: 7.2 | Her: 7.3 |
Script Structure | 8.00 | 9 | Easy A: 7.99 | Requiem for a dream: 8.00 |
Scene Pacing | 8.05 | 4 | 500 days of summer: 8.00 | Poor Things: 8.05 |
Script Premise | 6.50 | 2 | Inside Out: 6.25 | Rear Window: 6.50 |
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by raw and emotional dialogue, vivid descriptions of contrasting settings, a focus on moral dilemmas, dark humor, and a blend of cynicism and idealism.
Best representation: Scene 4 - Dramatic Revelations and Independence. This scene is the best representation because it encapsulates the writer's unique voice through its intense and uncomfortable themes, raw and gritty dialogue, and vivid portrayal of the characters' interactions in a brothel setting.
Memorable Lines:
- Duncan: YOU ARE A MONSTER. A WHORE AND A MONSTER! You are a demon sent from hell to rip my spirit to shreds to punish my tiny sins with a tsunami of destruction. (Scene 2)
- Bella: I'd rather you shot me in the fucking heart. (Scene 10)
- Bella: A terrible thing has happened Swiney. I feel almost nothing, and my empathy is creeping towards something I would describe as contemptuous rage. (Scene 6)
- Bella: I arrived home and I smelt the formaldehyde and I knew what is next. I will be a doctor. (Scene 7)
- Bella: As God my father says, it is only the way it is until we discover the new way it is and then that is the way it is until we discover the new way it is and so it goes until the world is no longer flat, electricity lights the night and shoes no longer are tied with ribbons. You see. (Scene 3)
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a diverse array of writing styles, blending elements of drama, dark humor, and philosophical exploration. Complex character dynamics, unexpected twists, and emotionally resonant storytelling are prevalent throughout.
Style Similarities:
- Charlie Kaufman
- Quentin Tarantino
- David Mamet
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
Engine: Claude
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Poor Things' is a compelling and complex narrative that explores themes of identity, morality, and the human condition. The script demonstrates a strong understanding of character development, particularly in the portrayal of Bella's transformation from a naive, sheltered woman to a more worldly and self-assured individual. The introduction of the menacing character of Alfie adds a layer of suspense and tension to the story, while the unique premise of Bella's creation and her relationship with Baxter adds depth and complexity to the narrative. The screenplay could benefit from more consistent and grounded portrayals of Bella's experiences in the brothel, as well as more development and exploration of Alfie's backstory and motivations. Additionally, the screenplay could use more closure and coherence in the resolution of Duncan's storyline and the relationship between Bella, Prim, and Felicity. Overall, the screenplay for 'Poor Things' is a well-crafted and thought-provoking work that is recommended for consideration.
- The screenplay demonstrates a strong understanding of character development, particularly in the portrayal of Bella's transformation from a naive, sheltered woman to a more worldly and self-assured individual through her experiences in the Parisian brothel. high ( Scene 4 (111) )
- The screenplay effectively builds tension and suspense through the introduction of the menacing character of Alfie, who represents a significant threat to Bella's newfound independence and freedom. high ( Scene 9 (143) Scene 10 (151) )
- The script explores complex themes of identity, family, and morality through the unique premise of Bella's creation and her relationship with Baxter, which adds depth and complexity to the narrative. medium ( Scene 7 (133) Scene 8 (137) )
- The screenplay could benefit from a more consistent and grounded portrayal of Bella's experiences in the brothel, as some scenes feel a bit over-the-top or stylized in a way that detracts from the realism and emotional weight of her journey. medium ( Scene 4 (116) Scene 5 (120) )
- The screenplay could use more development and exploration of Alfie's backstory and motivations, as his sudden and extreme antagonism towards Bella feels a bit underbaked at times. medium ( Scene 9 (149) )
- The screenplay could benefit from more consistent and coherent resolution of Duncan's storyline, as his erratic behavior and sudden disappearance leave the audience wanting more closure. medium ( Scene 2 (110) )
- The screenplay could use more development and exploration of the relationship between Bella, Prim, and Felicity, as their dynamic feels underdeveloped and lacks the same depth as Bella's other relationships. medium ( Scene 7 (134) )
- The screenplay's opening sequence, in which Bella witnesses the stark contrast between the luxury of her hotel and the abject poverty of the surrounding slum, is a powerful and impactful moment that sets the tone for the story and Bella's emotional journey. high ( Scene 1 (97) )
- The screenplay's climactic sequence, in which Bella stays by Baxter's side as he passes away, is a poignant and emotionally resonant moment that ties together the various thematic threads of the story. high ( Scene 8 (157) )
Engine: GPT4
Consider
Executive Summary
The screenplay 'Poor Things' offers a rich narrative filled with complex characters, particularly Bella, whose journey from naivety to empowerment forms the crux of the story. The script effectively uses humor, emotional depth, and a touch of surrealism to explore themes of identity, autonomy, and transformation. While the screenplay is bold and innovative, it could benefit from tighter pacing, deeper character development, and a more nuanced exploration of its themes.
- The screenplay effectively portrays Bella's shock and empathy towards the impoverished, which drives her character development. high ( Scene 1 (97) )
- The introduction of Toinette and her socialist ideals adds depth to the narrative and influences Bella's worldview. medium ( Scene 3 (112) )
- The screenplay uses humor effectively to lighten the mood and enhance character interactions, particularly in the brothel scenes. medium ( Scene 5 (120) )
- The complex relationship between Bella and Baxter is well-explored, providing emotional depth and conflict. high ( Scene 7 (132) )
- The screenplay's climax with Alfie's confrontation provides a dramatic resolution to Bella's struggle for autonomy. high ( Scene 10 (141) )
- Some scenes, particularly in the brothel, might benefit from a more nuanced portrayal to avoid sensationalism. medium ( Scene 4 (115) )
- The pacing in the middle sections could be tightened to maintain narrative momentum. medium ( Scene 6 (125) )
- Character motivations, especially Alfie's, need clearer exposition to enhance believability and depth. high ( Scene 9 (141) )
- The screenplay could benefit from more diverse settings to broaden the scope and add visual interest. low
- Dialogue in some scenes comes across as overly expository; more show, less tell would enhance realism. medium
- There is a lack of strong supporting characters who could provide additional layers to the main narrative. medium
- The screenplay could explore more deeply the psychological impacts of Bella's transformations and experiences. medium
- Background information on secondary characters like Toinette and Swiney could enrich the story. low
- More scenes depicting Bella's internal conflicts would enhance audience connection with her character. medium
- The screenplay could benefit from a clearer thematic statement to unify the various plot elements. high
- The innovative use of medical and scientific themes as metaphors for personal transformation is a standout element. high ( Scene 11 (155) )
- The screenplay's bold approach to discussing themes of sexuality and power dynamics is noteworthy. high ( Scene 2 (108) )
- The dynamic and evolving relationship between Bella and Max offers a compelling subplot that enriches the main story. medium ( Scene 8 (138) )
- The portrayal of Baxter's complex character and his ambiguous morality adds depth and intrigue. high ( Scene 7 (137) )
- The screenplay's climax and resolution provide a satisfying conclusion to Bella's journey, emphasizing themes of freedom and self-determination. high ( Scene 10 (150) )
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 6.5, The screenplay's premise is intriguing and original, but its clarity and potential for audience engagement could be improved. The narrative offers a unique perspective on the struggles of a young woman in 19th-century Paris, with a focus on the harsh realities of the brothel industry. However, the premise could benefit from a stronger hook and more deliberate development of themes and character arcs. See More
Structure: 7.5, The screenplay's structure and plot showcase a well-developed narrative with a strong focus on character growth and thematic exploration. While the plot is intriguing and engaging, there are opportunities to refine pacing and improve the clarity of certain plot points. See More
Theme: 8.25, The screenplay effectively explores complex themes of personal identity, morality, and the human condition, though there is room for further thematic depth and integration. The narrative skillfully weaves these themes through the character arcs and conflicts, creating a thought-provoking exploration of the human experience. However, some areas could be strengthened to enhance the overall thematic resonance and impact on the audience. See More
Visual Impact: 8.25, The screenplay showcases a range of compelling visual imagery, from the stark contrast between luxury and poverty in Alexandria to the surreal and unsettling scenes within the Paris brothel. The creative use of visual elements, such as the physical transformations of characters and the integration of symbolic motifs, contribute to the screenplay's overall immersive and emotionally impactful storytelling. While there are opportunities to enhance the consistency and practical feasibility of the visual elements, the screenplay's strong foundation in vivid, original, and dynamic imagery sets it up for successful visual translation to the screen. See More
Emotional Impact: 7.5, The screenplay effectively conveys emotional depth through its complex characters and thought-provoking themes, but there is room for improvement in emotional pacing and consistency. The story explores challenging topics with sensitivity and nuance, offering a unique perspective on self-discovery, redemption, and the human condition. See More
Conflict: 7.75, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes, with opportunities to deepen character motivations and heighten emotional engagement. While the central conflicts are clear, there is room to elevate the stakes and enhance the resolution's satisfaction. See More
Originality: 7.5, The screenplay showcases strong originality and creativity in its character development and thematic exploration, offering a unique and immersive experience that challenges societal norms and expectations. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- Bella and Harry arrive in Alexandria, witness poverty and suffering, Bella gives away Duncan's money to the poor. Duncan confronts Bella about the missing money, leading to a tense situation. Bella decides to leave the ship with Harry, and they face financial difficulties upon arriving in Paris. The scene ends with Bella considering engaging in sexual activities for money to overcome their financial struggles.
- Bella visits a Paris brothel seeking employment but ends up being chosen by a butcher as a client. Tension arises as she follows him upstairs, passing another girl named Toinette, indicating her new role at the brothel.
- Bella is taken to a Paris brothel where she questions the practices and interacts with Swiney, Toinette, and Mersault. Swiney manipulates Bella with emotional tactics, using her sick grandchild to gain control. The scene ends with Bella smiling in response to Swiney's manipulation.
- Bella engages in various sexual encounters with clients at a Paris brothel, including a quirky quiz, a strange encounter with a crab-like man, and a session with a priest. The scene showcases Bella's adaptability and professionalism in her line of work, as she navigates the demands of her job with a mix of dark humor, surrealism, and a hint of melancholy. The scene ends with Bella participating in a demonstration for two young boys, highlighting her skills in handling different situations in the brothel.
- In this scene, Bella engages in sexual activities with two boys while one takes notes. Meanwhile, she witnesses Duncan pulling clumps of hair out in an alley below. Toinette and Bella discuss their desires as Duncan appears dusty and torn, forgiving Bella and booking their berths home. Bella rejects Duncan and asserts her independence. Felicity is seen finger painting on the walls as Max operates on Baxter, who reveals he is dying. The scene ends with Swiney entering the brothel bedroom with hot chocolate and pain au chocolat for Bella.
- Bella grapples with emotional numbness and Swiney offers guidance. Toinette claims Bella has a baby, prompting confusion. Max confronts Duncan about Bella's whereabouts but encounters resistance. The scene culminates with Bella receiving a postcard bearing a sketch of Baxter on his deathbed and a cryptic message.
- Bella confronts Baxter about her past and discovers she is his creation, a mix of anger, confusion, sadness, and hope ensues. Bella is angry and hurt by Baxter's lies, but she is also grateful for his creation. She is confused about her identity and her place in the world, but she is also hopeful for the future.
- Bella and Max's wedding is interrupted by Bella's father, Baxter, and her estranged husband, Alfie. Baxter objects to Max, while Alfie claims Bella is his wife and doesn't remember him. The scene ends with Alfie objecting to the wedding.
- Bella arrives at Alfie's mansion, greeted by strange servants. Exploring her bedroom, she finds disturbing writings. At dinner, Alfie reminisces about their past, revealing Bella's lack of maternal instinct. The scene creates an eerie atmosphere, hinting at darker truths about Bella's past and her relationship with Alfie.
- Alfie confronts Bella, accusing her of wrongdoing and threatening to shoot her if she leaves. Bella reveals her true identity and backstory. Alfie plans to subject Bella to a procedure against her will, but Bella resists his threats and asserts her autonomy.
- Bella and Alfie's struggle over a gun leaves Alfie wounded. Max operates on him while Bella reads to Baxter as he dies. Alfie's animalistic transformation manifests as he eats grass in the garden.
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Character Bella
Description Bella's quick change in attitude towards Duncan, from compassionate to harsh, seems out of character given her earlier concern for the impoverished people.
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Character Bella
Description Bella's behavior and statements towards Alfie are inconsistent with her previously established moral compass and desire to help others. Her willingness to accept his abusive and controlling behavior is a significant departure from her character.
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Character Alfie
Description Alfie's sudden shift from being a charming and affable host to a violent and controlling captor is abrupt and not well-supported by the narrative. His extreme actions and plans to mutilate Bella seem out of character for the persona he has presented thus far.
( Scene 10 (146) Scene 10 (151) )
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Description The sudden appearance of Alfie during the wedding scene feels contrived and interrupts the flow of the narrative. His claims about his relationship with Bella are not sufficiently established earlier in the story.
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Description The sequence of events involving Bella's confrontation with Alfie and her subsequent actions to save him feel rushed and lack cohesion. The narrative would benefit from a more gradual build-up and clearer motivation for Bella's decisions.
( Scene 10 (151) Scene 11 (154) )
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Description It's unclear how Bella was able to acquire the large amount of money from Duncan's cabin, and why the stewards were so readily willing to take it and distribute it to the poor. This plot point is not sufficiently explained.
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Description The revelation of Alfie as Bella's supposed husband is not sufficiently foreshadowed or supported by the earlier events in the narrative. This sudden plot twist feels contrived and creates significant gaps in the story's logic.
( Scene 9 (139) )
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Description Bella's dialogue with Alfie, particularly her acceptance of his controlling and abusive behavior, does not fully align with her previously established character and values. The language used feels overly formal and at odds with her typical manner of speaking.
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Description Duncan's overly aggressive and profane outburst towards Bella feels exaggerated and not entirely authentic to his character, given the previous interactions between them.
( Scene 2 (110) )
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Element Repeated references to Bella's scar/operation
( Scene 5 (125) Scene 6 (145) )
Suggestion Consider consolidating these references into a single, more impactful scene or mention to avoid repetition. -
Element Bella's interactions with Alfie
( Scene 6 (146) Scene 10 (151) Scene 10 (152) Scene 10 (153) )
Suggestion The multiple scenes featuring Bella and Alfie could be streamlined or condensed to avoid repetition and maintain narrative momentum.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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Bella | Bella starts as a compassionate and idealistic young woman driven by a desire to help others but struggling with the harsh realities of the world. As she confronts the Paris brothel industry, she becomes bold, unapologetic, and determined to assert her independence. Throughout her journey, she grapples with inner turmoil, past traumas, mortality, regret, and forgiveness, ultimately seeking self-discovery and redemption. Bella's arc culminates in a moment of defiance and empowerment as she confronts Alfie and stands up for herself, showcasing her growth and resilience. | The character arc for Bella is well-developed and showcases a deep exploration of her inner struggles and growth. However, there could be more clarity in connecting her past traumas and inner turmoil to her ultimate moment of empowerment. Additionally, the transition between her different speaking styles could be smoother to provide a more cohesive portrayal of her character. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating specific events or interactions that trigger Bella's journey of self-discovery and redemption more explicitly. Show how her past traumas and inner turmoil shape her decisions and actions throughout the screenplay, leading up to her moment of empowerment. Additionally, work on seamlessly integrating her various speaking styles to create a more consistent and nuanced portrayal of her character. |
Duncan | Duncan starts off as a character consumed by anger, entitlement, and bitterness towards Bella. As the story progresses, he begins to confront his insecurities and feelings for Bella, leading to a realization of his manipulative and vindictive behavior. Through a series of confrontations and self-reflection, Duncan learns to let go of his resentment and bitterness, ultimately finding a sense of redemption and inner peace. | The character arc for Duncan is well-developed, but it could benefit from more nuanced exploration of his inner turmoil and insecurities. The transition from anger and entitlement to redemption and inner peace could be more gradual and believable. Additionally, Duncan's manipulative behavior could be further explored to provide a deeper understanding of his motivations and actions. | To improve the character arc for Duncan, consider adding more scenes that delve into his past experiences and relationships that have shaped his behavior. This will provide a more comprehensive understanding of his character and motivations. Additionally, focus on developing his relationships with other characters, particularly Bella, to showcase his growth and transformation throughout the story. |
Alfie | Alfie starts off as a charming yet manipulative character who uses intimidation and coercion to control Bella. As the story progresses, his vulnerability and inner conflict are revealed, leading to a moment of redemption where he confronts his troubled past and seeks to make amends for his actions. Ultimately, Alfie learns to let go of his need for power and control, finding peace and redemption in the process. | The character arc for Alfie is well-developed, showcasing his complexity and inner turmoil. However, the redemption arc could be further strengthened by providing more depth to his backstory and motivations. Additionally, exploring his relationships with other characters could add layers to his development. | To improve the character arc, consider delving deeper into Alfie's past traumas and how they have shaped his manipulative behavior. Show more interactions between Alfie and other characters to highlight his vulnerabilities and inner struggles. Allow Alfie to have moments of genuine connection and growth, showcasing his journey towards redemption in a more nuanced and impactful way. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||
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Identity and Self-Discovery | Bella discovers her true identity and struggles with her past as a prostitute, her relationship with her husband Alfie, and her creation by Baxter. | The theme of identity and self-discovery is prevalent throughout the screenplay as Bella navigates her past, relationships, and the revelations about her true self. | ||
Strengthening Identity and Self-Discovery:
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Power Struggles and Control | Alfie tries to control Bella, Bella asserts her autonomy, and conflicts arise from power struggles between characters. | The theme of power struggles and control is evident in the screenplay through the manipulation, threats, and conflicts between characters vying for dominance and authority. | ||
Emotional Manipulation | Swiney manipulates Bella emotionally, creating tension and conflict in their interactions. | The theme of emotional manipulation is present in the screenplay as characters use emotional tactics to control, influence, or deceive others, leading to tense and manipulative situations. | ||
Social Injustice and Poverty | Bella witnesses poverty and suffering in Alexandria, leading her to give away money to the poor. | The theme of social injustice and poverty is depicted in the screenplay through Bella's encounter with poverty in Alexandria and her act of generosity towards the less fortunate. | ||
Forgiveness and Redemption | Bella forgives Baxter for creating her but not for the lies and trapping that followed. | The theme of forgiveness and redemption is explored in the screenplay as characters grapple with forgiving past wrongs and seeking redemption for their actions. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goal is to navigate her past experiences and seek understanding and closure. |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goal is to navigate her surroundings and relationships, seeking freedom and justice. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around power dynamics, identity, and moral choices. |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflicts push the protagonist to confront her past, assert her agency, and seek justice, leading to profound personal growth and self-discovery.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflicts drive the narrative forward by creating tension, challenges, and obstacles for the protagonist to overcome, shaping the plot and character arcs.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflicts deepen the thematic exploration of identity, agency, power dynamics, morality, and the search for meaning and justice, adding layers of complexity and resonance to the story.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Generosity and Financial Struggles | Shocking, Desperate, Hopeful, Cynical | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - Bella's Uncomfortable Encounter | Intense, Emotional, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Manipulation in the Paris Brothel | Dark, Cynical, Satirical | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - Bella's Adventures in a Paris Brothel | Dark, Sensual, Cynical | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Dramatic Revelations and Independence | Dark, Sarcastic, Satirical | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Emotional Turmoil and Hidden Truths | Dark, Intense, Mysterious, Emotional | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - The Confrontation | Melancholic, Reflective, Intimate | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - A Wedding Interrupted | Intense, Emotional, Dramatic, Reflective | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Awkward Reunion and Unsettling Revelations | Awkward, Confused, Dark, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Confrontation and Threat | Intense, Dark, Disturbing, Confrontational | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Confrontation and Aftermath | Dark, Intense, Emotional, Surreal | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Emotional depth
- Complex character development
- Sharp dialogue
- Exploration of dark themes
- Engaging dialogue
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited external conflict
- Some elements may be too surreal for some audiences
- Potentially disturbing content
- Slow pacing in some parts
- Some dialogue may be too verbose or philosophical
Suggestions
- Add more external conflict to increase the stakes and create a stronger sense of tension
- Consider toning down potentially disturbing or triggering content to make the story more accessible to a wider audience.
- Trim the dialogue to create a more concise and impactful script.
- Play with the pacing to create a more balanced flow of tension and release.
- Simplify the philosophical elements to make them more accessible and understandable to the audience.
- Physical environment: The world depicted in the screenplay is a mix of luxurious settings like a hotel balcony in Alexandria and dark, seedy environments like a Paris brothel. There are stark contrasts between the rich and the poor, as well as elements of desperation and exploitation.
- Culture: The cultural elements in the screenplay include prostitution, power dynamics, and societal structures that objectify and exploit women. There are also references to faith, family dynamics, and historical societal norms.
- Society: The societal structure in the screenplay is hierarchical and oppressive, with characters exerting control over others through manipulation, exploitation, and violence. There are elements of patriarchy, exploitation, and dehumanization present.
- Technology: The technological aspect in the screenplay is minimal, with basic items like medical equipment, carriages, and surgical tools. The focus is more on interpersonal dynamics and power struggles rather than advanced technology.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology shape the characters' experiences and actions by creating tension, desperation, and power dynamics. Characters are influenced by their surroundings, societal norms, and the oppressive atmosphere of the world depicted.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative by setting the tone, establishing conflicts, and creating a sense of urgency and drama. The physical environment, culture, society, and technology shape the characters' interactions and drive the plot forward.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes of power, control, exploitation, and identity. The contrast between the rich and the poor, the objectification of women, and the oppressive societal structures add layers of complexity and depth to the themes explored in the screenplay.
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by raw and emotional dialogue, vivid descriptions of contrasting settings, a focus on moral dilemmas, dark humor, and a blend of cynicism and idealism. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice enhances the emotional depth, moral complexity, and thematic exploration of the screenplay, adding layers of complexity, nuance, and tension to the characters' interactions and conflicts. |
Best Representation Scene | 4 - Bella's Adventures in a Paris Brothel |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representation because it encapsulates the writer's unique voice through its intense and uncomfortable themes, raw and gritty dialogue, and vivid portrayal of the characters' interactions in a brothel setting. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Dialogue Drives Emotional Impact | Scenes with higher dialogue scores also tend to have higher emotional impact scores, indicating that the quality of the dialogue significantly influences the audience's emotional connection to the story. |
Balanced Elements Enhance Scene Quality | Scenes with a balanced distribution of high scores across various elements (Concept, Plot, Characters, etc.) generally receive higher overall grades, suggesting that a holistic approach to scene writing leads to more impactful and engaging moments. |
Shocking Moments Elevate Scene Scores | Scenes incorporating 'Shocking' elements consistently score higher in overall grade and emotional impact, highlighting the effectiveness of unexpected or surprising moments in capturing the audience's attention and evoking strong reactions. |
Dark and Intense Tones Dominate | A majority of the scenes are characterized by 'Dark' and 'Intense' tones, suggesting that the screenplay explores themes of conflict, mystery, and emotional turmoil. This consistent tone may create a cohesive and immersive experience for the audience, but it could also benefit from incorporating a wider range of tones to provide contrast and emotional variety. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The writer demonstrates a strong command of creating tension, emotional depth, and complex character dynamics in their scenes. The dialogue is sharp and impactful, driving the narrative forward and effectively conveying internal and external conflicts. There is a consistent exploration of dark themes, power dynamics, and nuanced relationships throughout the scenes.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | Read 'Save the Cat' by Blake Snyder to enhance understanding of screenplay structure and character development. | This book offers practical tips and insights on crafting compelling screenplays, with a focus on character arcs, plot progression, and engaging storytelling. It can help the writer refine their character development and narrative structure. |
Screenplay | Study 'Gone Girl' or 'No Country for Old Men' for strong character conflicts and power dynamics. | These screenplays showcase intense confrontations, power struggles, and suspenseful dialogue that can inspire the writer to further develop their skills in creating tension and conflict. |
Exercise | Practice writing dialogue-heavy scenes with conflicting emotions and power struggles.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise can help the writer sharpen their skills in creating tension and depth in character interactions, enhancing the emotional impact of the scenes. |
Exercise | Write scenes with morally ambiguous characters and challenging situations.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will push the writer to explore complex themes, deepen character motivations, and create thought-provoking narratives that engage audiences on a deeper level. |
Exercise | Craft scenes with high stakes and emotional depth to develop tension and conflict.Practice In SceneProv | By practicing scenes with heightened emotional stakes, the writer can further hone their craft in creating compelling storytelling that keeps the audience invested in the characters' journeys. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Damsel in Distress | Bella is portrayed as a vulnerable young woman who requires protection from men. | A young, innocent woman placed in danger in order to be rescued by a hero. In TV shows, this can be used repeatedly to create tension or prolong a storyline. |
Heart of Gold | Bella gives away Duncan's money to the poor, despite her own financial need. | A character who is good at heart, even if their actions are sometimes misguided. |
Love Triangle | Bella is torn between her love for Duncan and her attraction to Harry. | A situation in which one character is romantically interested in two or more other characters. |
Prostitute with a Heart of Gold | Bella is a prostitute who is kind and compassionate, despite her circumstances. | A prostitute who is depicted as having a good heart, despite her profession. |
Stockholm Syndrome | Bella begins to develop feelings for Duncan after he kidnaps her. | A psychological phenomenon in which a hostage or captive develops a psychological bond with their captor. |
Tragic Hero | Duncan is a tragic hero who is ultimately destroyed by his own flaws. | A character who is destined for greatness but is ultimately destroyed by their own flaws. |
Villain with a Heart of Gold | Baxter is a villain who creates Bella and Felicity, but ultimately comes to care for them. | A villain who is not entirely evil, and who may even have some redeeming qualities. |
Whodunit | The identity of Bella's attacker is not revealed until the end of the screenplay. | A mystery in which the identity of the perpetrator is not revealed until the end. |
The Mad Scientist | Baxter is a mad scientist who creates Bella and Felicity. | A scientist who is willing to go to any lengths to achieve their goals, often with disastrous consequences. |
The Unreliable Narrator | Bella is an unreliable narrator who is not always truthful about her experiences. | A narrator who is not entirely trustworthy, and whose account of events may be unreliable. |
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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2 | Duncan: YOU ARE A MONSTER. A WHORE AND A MONSTER! You are a demon sent from hell to rip my spirit to shreds to punish my tiny sins with a tsunami of destruction. |
10 | Bella: I'd rather you shot me in the fucking heart. |
6 | Bella: A terrible thing has happened Swiney. I feel almost nothing, and my empathy is creeping towards something I would describe as contemptuous rage. |
7 | Bella: I arrived home and I smelt the formaldehyde and I knew what is next. I will be a doctor. |
3 | Bella: As God my father says, it is only the way it is until we discover the new way it is and then that is the way it is until we discover the new way it is and so it goes until the world is no longer flat, electricity lights the night and shoes no longer are tied with ribbons. You see. |
Some Loglines to consider:
When a naive, sheltered woman named Bella discovers the dark realities of the world, she embarks on a transformative journey of self-discovery, confronting her own morality and the nature of identity in the process. |
Bella's life takes an unexpected turn when she becomes entangled in a web of secrets and power struggles, forced to navigate the treacherous world of a mysterious and menacing suitor who will stop at nothing to keep her under his control. |
After a traumatic incident, Bella finds herself at the center of a complex medical experiment, becoming a living embodiment of the human condition and the fragility of identity. |
Bella, a woman with a troubled past, is drawn into a world of moral ambiguity and self-discovery, grappling with the nature of her own existence and the boundaries of what it means to be human. |
In a tale of identity, morality, and the human condition, Bella's journey of self-discovery takes her through the darkest corners of the human experience, forcing her to confront the complexities of her own existence and the power of choice. |
A woman's quest for identity leads her through a surreal journey of transformation and self-discovery. |
After being reanimated with a new brain, Bella must navigate a world that seeks to control her destiny. |
From the depths of poverty to the complexities of wealth, Bella's journey is a testament to the human spirit's resilience. |
Caught between past identities and a new self, Bella fights to forge her own path in a world that refuses to acknowledge her autonomy. |
In a narrative rich with dark humor and surreal twists, Bella's struggle for self-determination unfolds against a backdrop of societal expectations and personal revelations. |
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Engine: Claude
Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for 'Poor Things' is a compelling and complex narrative that explores themes of identity, morality, and the human condition. The script demonstrates a strong understanding of character development, particularly in the portrayal of Bella's transformation from a naive, sheltered woman to a more worldly and self-assured individual. The introduction of the menacing character of Alfie adds a layer of suspense and tension to the story, while the unique premise of Bella's creation and her relationship with Baxter adds depth and complexity to the narrative. The screenplay could benefit from more consistent and grounded portrayals of Bella's experiences in the brothel, as well as more development and exploration of Alfie's backstory and motivations. Additionally, the screenplay could use more closure and coherence in the resolution of Duncan's storyline and the relationship between Bella, Prim, and Felicity. Overall, the screenplay for 'Poor Things' is a well-crafted and thought-provoking work that is recommended for consideration.
Engine: GPT4
Consider
Explanation: The screenplay 'Poor Things' offers a rich narrative filled with complex characters, particularly Bella, whose journey from naivety to empowerment forms the crux of the story. The script effectively uses humor, emotional depth, and a touch of surrealism to explore themes of identity, autonomy, and transformation. While the screenplay is bold and innovative, it could benefit from tighter pacing, deeper character development, and a more nuanced exploration of its themes.