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Compelled to Read | Story Content |
Character Development
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Scene Elements |
Audience Engagement
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Technical Aspects |
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1 - Arrival in Paris
| ReworkOrientationRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 5 |
7 |
5 | 6 |
7 |
1 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 6 | 4 |
8 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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2 - Zed Checks into His Hotel Room
| ReworkOrientationRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 5.5 |
6 |
5 | 6 |
5 |
1 | 5 | 7 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
6 | 5 | 5 | 8 | 5 |
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3 - A Moment of Understanding
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 5.5 |
8 |
5 | 7 |
7 |
5 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 8.5 | 6.5 |
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4 - Unexpected Visitor
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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5 - Disrespectful Encounter
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8 / 7.5
| 7 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 6 | 7 | 6.5 |
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6 - Midnight Drive Through Paris
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 7.5
| 7 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 5.5 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 2 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5.5 |
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7 - Eric's Flat
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.2 |
8.5 / 8
| 6.8 / 7.2 |
7 |
5 | 6.5 |
6 |
1 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 5.5 | 6 | 5 |
6 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 7 | 6 |
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8 - Shenanigans at Eric's Flat
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.2 |
8.5 / 6
| 5 / 6 |
7 |
4 | 6 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 6 | 4 |
5 | 5.5 | 5 | 7 | 3.5 |
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9 - The Heist Plan
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 9
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
3 | 5 | 8 | 4 | 2 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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10 - Heroin Preparation
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 7.5
| 3.5 / 5.5 |
8 |
5 | 7 |
6 |
1 | 5 | 7 | 2 | 1 | 3.5 | 3 | 5 | 4 |
6 | 5.5 | 5 | 6.5 | 4 |
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11 - Temptation in Eric's Flat
| Low on its ownRitualDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
5 | 7 |
7 |
6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
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12 - Midnight Race Through Paris
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
5.5 |
7 / 7
| 7 / 6.5 |
6 |
5 | 6 |
4 |
1 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 5 |
5 | 5.5 | 6 | 7 | 5 |
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13 - Midnight Race
| Low on its ownPursuitDesign, Execution and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
5.5 |
4.5 / 4
| 5.5 / 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 6 |
5 |
2 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 5.5 | 7 | 5 |
6 | 6 | 5 | 5.5 | 4 |
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14 - Eric Performs at the Toy Jazz Club
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.2 |
8.5 / 6
| 4 / 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 7 |
8 |
2 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 7 | 4 |
7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 5 |
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15 - Midnight Conversations in Paris
| PolishRelationship shiftNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
5.8 |
9 / 7.5
| 5.5 / 6 |
7 |
5 | 6.5 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 1 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 4 |
7 | 6 | 5.5 | 8 | 5.5 |
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16 - Eric's Flat
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.2 |
8.5 / 7
| 5.5 / 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 6 |
5 |
1 | 4 | 6 | 2 | 0 | 2 | 4 | 7 | 4 |
5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5.5 |
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17 - The Uncle Sam Spider Monkey
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
5.5 |
8.5 / 6
| 5 / 6 |
7 |
4 | 6 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 8 | 4 |
5 | 6 | 6.5 | 8 | 3 |
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18 - Planning the Banque Internationale de Paris Heist
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
3 | 4 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 4 |
6 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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19 - Heroin Preparation in Eric's Bathroom
| ReworkRitualRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
9 / 7
| 3 / 6 |
6 |
3 | 5.5 |
5 |
0.5 | 5 | 7 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 1 | 4 | 4 |
5 | 5 | 4.5 | 8 | 4 |
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20 - Temptation in the Living Room
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.2 |
8.5 / 7
| 5.5 / 6 |
7 |
5 | 6.5 |
7 |
4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 5 |
6 | 6 | 5.5 | 8 | 5 |
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21 - Whirlwind Tour of Paris
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.2 |
8 / 7
| 6 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
5 |
1 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 5 |
5 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 | 5 |
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22 - Parisian Car Chase
| Low on its ownPursuitDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
5.5 |
6 / 6.5
| 7 / 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 6 |
6 |
2 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 8 | 4 |
5 | 6 | 5.5 | 7 | 4 |
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23 - Jazz Night Out
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 7
| 5 / 6 |
7 |
5 | 7 |
7 |
1.5 | 5 | 3 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 7 | 5 |
6 | 6 | 6.5 | 8 | 5.5 |
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24 - Bank Heist Takes Control
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 |
5 | 7 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 |
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25 - Vault Standoff
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 |
6 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 6.5 |
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26 - Bank Robbery Setup
| ReworkTransitionRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.2 |
8 / 7
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 5 |
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27 - Hostage Massacre
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
7 / 6.5
| 8 / 7 |
6 |
5 | 5.5 |
5 |
2 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
4 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 5.5 |
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28 - Bank Heist Chaos
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8 / 7.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 6.5 |
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29 - Vault Access
| ReworkPayload momentRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
6 |
1 | 6 | 8 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 5 |
5 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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30 - Preparations for the Heist
| ReworkPursuitRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 9
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
5 |
1 | 4 | 9 | 2 | 2 | 5 | 8 | 3 | 5 |
5 | 6.5 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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31 - Assault on the Poseidon Vault
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6.5 |
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32 - The Vault Breached
| Low on its ownDeliveryDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
6 |
6 | 4.5 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 7.5 | 7 | 5 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 7 | 6.5 |
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33 - The Gold Discovery
| ReworkDeliveryRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 |
6 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
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34 - Bank Robbery Chaos
| Low on its ownContestExecution and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 8
| 8 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
8 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 6.5 |
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35 - Vault Breakthrough and Lobby Rampage
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
7 / 7
| 7.5 / 6.5 |
6 |
5 | 4.5 |
5 |
2 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 |
4 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 6 | 5.5 |
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36 - Gold Theft and Hostage Crisis Escalate
| Low on its ownPursuitDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
6 / 7
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
6 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
5 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 6.5 |
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37 - Elevator Shootout
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
6 / 6
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
6 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
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38 - Bank Heist: Deadly Confrontation
| Low on its ownPursuitDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
5.5 |
4.5 / 5
| 7 / 6.5 |
6 |
5 | 4 |
5 |
2 | 4 | 5 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 5 |
4 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 4.5 |
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39 - Reunion in the Sub-Lobby
| Low on its ownRelationship shiftDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
6.5 / 7
| 7.5 / 7 |
6 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 7 | 5.5 |
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40 - Violent Confrontation in the Bank
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
6.5 / 7
| 8 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 5.5 |
7 |
5.5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 6 | 6.5 | 6 |
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41 - Violent Confrontation in the Bank Vault
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
6 |
4 | 5 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 |
6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
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42 - Aftermath of the Bank Robbery
| ReworkAftermathRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 5 / 6 |
7 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 7 |
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