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EXT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - NIGHT SLOWLY PULL IN on the front door of a fashionable DC townhouse. Off-screen, we hear the SOUND OF SCREECHING TIRES followed by a LOUD COLLISION. A CAR ALARM blares.

INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - BATHROOM - A FEW MINUTES LATER Francis stands at his sink, methodically washing his hands. INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - BEDROOM - MOMENTS LATER CLOSE ON FRANCIS’ HANDS zipping up the back of a woman’s elegant evening gown.

INT. FRANCIS’S CAR - NIGHT Francis and Claire ride in the back the SUV. Steve drives. CLAIRE (she runs her hand through his hair)

INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - MORNING A bustling bull-pen of writers, editors and assistants. Mounted TVs blare with 24 hour news channels. The steady clacking of keyboards wafts from a sea of cubicles. ZOE BARNES (mid 20s) - a strong and hungry young reporter -

INT. RUSSO’S OFFICE - MORNING CHRISTINA MALONE (late 20s) - sexy and headstrong - ushers a humorless looking LOBBYIST into Rep. Peter Russo’s office. Christina is Russo’s Executive Assistant. Russo is smart and amiable, but a bit of rascal.

INT. BLAIR HOUSE - OFFICE - DAY As the Aide lets Francis into the office, we see that it’s Vasquez, not Walker, who is behind the desk. Francis registers a whiff of surprise. 11.

INT. CLEAN WATER FOR AMERICA (CWA) OFFICES - DAY TO ESTABLISH: A large polished steel sign above a reception desk that reads: CLEAN WATER FOR AMERICA We TRACK an older woman (50s) - EVELYN - carrying a folder

INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - NIGHT JANINE SKORSKY (late 30s) - hard-edged and ruthless - is punching away at her computer. Zoe leans over her cubicle partition, lingers for a moment. JANINE

INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT TIGHT on Claire sitting alone, stock still, face grim. We hear the front door open. In the background we see Francis enter the room. He looks weary, spent. He comes into the foreground, sits down across from her.

INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - BEDROOM - DAWN Claire is in bed as morning light seeps in through the window. The bed is empty beside her. Her eyes are open. She stares at the ceiling. The alarm beeps. She reaches over, turns it off.

INT. UNDERWOOD’S OFFICE - KAUFBERGER’S OFFICE - DAY TIGHT on screen. MICHAEL KERN (50s) - clean-cut and handsome - is speaking at a lectern, flanked by Walker and Vasquez. The ticker-tape reads: KERN NOMINATED FOR SEC. OF STATE. CUT TO DOUG STAMPER (early 40s) - Francis’s well-connected,

INT. FRANCIS’S (INNER) OFFICE - DAY Francis and Stamper behind closed doors. Stamper is trying to process it all. STAMPER How do we get there...?

INT. CAPITOL MESS HALL - LATER Francis waits at the checkout. Junk food heaped on his tray. We hear some commotion. Entering the mess hall is Michael Kern followed by a couple of AIDES. People are congratulating him. He’s smiling like a pig in shit.

INT. EPISCOPAL CHURCH - MORNING The service is chock full of DC’s political heavyweights, including Francis and Claire seated near the back. A MINISTER is in the midst of delivering a sermon. 24.

EXT. EPISCOPAL CHURCH - LATER We’re following Francis and Claire as everyone files out. FEMALE VOICE (O.S.) Claire... They’re approached by another power couple: the longtime

INT. RUSSO’S BEDROOM - NIGHT A cluttered high-rise apartment. Russo and his secretary Christina are having wild, wall-pounding sex. As soon as Russo climaxes with a primal yawp, he rolls over and pours himself a drink from the night stand. Takes a sip.

INT. KENNEDY CENTER - LOBBY - NIGHT A full lobby. OPERA-GOERS dressed to the hilt. A decidedly middle-aged crowd. Gray haired men, matronly women. We ZERO in on Francis and Claire. People seem to be parting subtly around them - a wide berth. Francis got snubbed for

EXT. KENNEDY CENTER - NIGHT. Franics stands outside, scrolling through his blackberry, more to look like he’s busy than because he is. 29. A cab pulls up. Zoe emerges. She’s in a strapless black dress

INT. KENNEDY CENTER - OPERA - NIGHT. Francis slips into the booth and takes his seat next to Claire. She doesn’t even look at him, but she reaches out and takes his hand. The SOUND of an orchestra tuning. The LIGHTS begin to fade.

INT. CAB - NIGHT. The cab pulls up in front of Zoe’s apartment. Zoe and Brian are in the back seat. Zoe’s got Brian’s jacket draped over her. She hands it to Brian. ZOE

INT. ZOE’S APARTMENT - NIGHT. The sound of keys, the bolt unlocking. The door opens and Zoe enters. Tosses her purse on the bed (just a mattress on the floor, no bed frame) and slips off her heels. Goes to the fridge. It’s pretty empty - just yogurt, some old

INT. UNDERWOOD’S (INNER) OFFICE - MORNING Underwood is working at his desk. Stamper knocks and peeks his head in the door. STAMPER She’s here.

INT. UNDERWOOD’S (OUTER) OFFICE - FRONT DOOR - DAY Francis opens the door for Vasquez. As she’s leaving -- VASQUEZ Keep me posted? FRANCIS

INT. FRANCIS’S OFFICE - AFTERNOON Francis and Stamper are having a brainstorming session. STAMPER Ferguson? FRANCIS

EXT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - FRONT DOOR TIGHT on a finger pushing the door bell. A moment later the door opens, revealing Francis. We CUT TO Zoe standing opposite, Steve right beside her. STEVE

INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - A FEW MINUTES LATER Francis pours drinks from the liquor cabinet. Hands one to Zoe, then sits across from her. Zoe takes a sip. ZOE It’s strong.

INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - FOYER - MOMENTS LATER Francis helps Zoe put her coat on. Steve is in the foyer with them. Zoe hands Francis a card. 42. ZOE

EXT. MICHIGAN AVENUE - LATE AT NIGHT A BMW slows to a halt by the curb with a POLICE CAR slowing to a stop behind it, lights flashing. CUT TO: A POLICE OFFICER ambles up to the stopped BMW and aims a flashlight at the driver. It’s Russo. He looks wasted.

INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - BEDROOM - LATER The phone rings. Francis groggily answers it. FRANCIS Hello...? Listens for a second. Sits up, suddenly alert.

INT. POLICE STATION - HOLDING CELL - MORNING Russo is sitting on a bench, head in hands. We hear footsteps. He looks up. A COP enters, unlocks the door, opens it. COP

INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - KITCHEN - MORNING Claire picks up two fresh cups of coffee from the espresso machine. Meanwhile Francis finishes slicing an apple, places half the slices on one plate, half on another. They meet at the kitchen table - Claire with the coffee, Francis with the

INT. BLYTHE’S OFFICE - DAY Francis holds up a document as HAROLD BLYTHE looks on. FRANCIS (holding up the document) This is the only hard copy?

INT. HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT TIGHT on the door. A knock. A moment later the door opens, revealing the CALL-GIRL we saw with Russo the night before. She’s wearing a long overcoat and heels. CUT TO to Stamper. STAMPER

INT. FRANCIS’S (INNER) OFFICE - LATE MORNING Francis sits across from CATHERINE DURANT (early 50s), another conservative Democrat from the South. 51. DURANT

INT. RAYBURN BLDG PARKING GARAGE - NIGHT A Black SUV rounds a corner on the bottom floor of the garage, pulls into an empty spot. We can see that Steve is driving. The back door opens. Stamper gets out. He heads toward a set of dumpsters in the far corner. Looks around.

INT. NATIONAL GALLERY - DAY Francis and Zoe sit side by side on a bench in front of a Thomas Eakins painting. It depicts two rowers in a skull. FRANCIS Do the math, Ms. Barnes.

INT. ZOE’S APARTMENT - AFTERNOON Zoe in her cramped, hopelessly messy apartment. She’s flipping through Blythe’s original draft. Making notes. Utterly focused. She has something no one else on the planet has. Her cell phone rings. She presses ignore without even

INT. FRANCIS’S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS Francis shuts the door as Russo takes a seat. FRANCIS Drink? RUSSO

INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - AFTERNOON Zoe makes a B-line for Lucas’s office. As she barges in... LUCAS Where have you been? I’ve been calling you.

EXT. THE MALL - MORNING A WIDE PAN of massive crowds gathered for the Inauguration Ceremony on a crystal clear, January morning. FRANCIS (V.O.) Power is like real estate. It’s

EXT. PENNSYLVANIA AVENUE - EARLY MORNING The streets are empty. Sanitation workers sweep up the ticker tape from the previous day’s celebration. Police crews load barricades into flatbed trucks. EXT. FREDDY’S BBQ JOINT - EARLY MORNING

EXT. FREDDY’S BBQ JOINT - MORNING Francis’ plate is empty. He wipes his hands and dabs his mouth with a napkin. Freddy starts to clear Francis’s plate. FREDDY You want seconds?

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A ruthless politician will stop at nothing to conquer Washington D.C., in this dark political drama.

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Overview

Unique Selling Point

**Unique Selling Proposition** Journey into the world of "House of Cards," an electrifying political drama that captivates with its unique blend of realism and ruthless ambition. Through its distinct elements, "House of Cards" sets itself apart as a gripping and thought-provoking series: * **Authentic Storytelling:** Experience the raw and intricate power dynamics within the halls of Congress as the series delves into the complexities of political maneuvering, corruption, and the insatiable hunger for power. * **Complex Characters:** Immerse yourself in a cast of morally ambiguous characters driven by ambition, deceit, and vulnerability. Their motivations are as murky as the corridors they navigate, making their every move unpredictable. * **Sharp Dialogue:** Engage with razor-sharp dialogue that cuts through the political jargon and exposes the underlying desires and manipulations of the characters. Each conversation is a masterclass in wit and strategy. * **Thrilling Plotlines:** Be on the edge of your seat as the series weaves intricate plotlines that intertwine personal ambition, political intrigue, and the quest for absolute power. The stakes are high, and the consequences are dire. * **Deep Exploration of Morality:** Challenge your own moral compass as the series forces you to confront the blurred lines between right and wrong, loyalty and betrayal, and the sacrifices one is willing to make in the pursuit of success. "House of Cards" is a captivating and unflinching exploration of the corridors of power, where ambition and morality collide in a relentless game of strategy and deception. Prepare to be engrossed in a world where every move carries weight and the price of success is as high as the stakes themselves.

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Recommend

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Story Facts

Genres: Thriller, Political Drama, Drama, Political, Romance, Political Thriller, Character Study, Comedy, Journalism

Setting: Modern day, Washington, D.C. and surrounding areas

Themes: Power and Corruption, Media and Influence, Ambition and Betrayal, Manipulation and Deception, Love and Relationships, Political Intrigue

Conflict & Stakes: Francis's ruthless pursuit of power and his willingness to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. The high stakes involved in the political game, where one wrong move can have disastrous consequences.

Mood: Dark, suspenseful, and cynical.

Standout Features:

Unique Hook: The show's unique and compelling premise: a behind-the-scenes look at the world of politics, told from the perspective of the ruthless and ambitious Francis Underwood.
Plot Twist: The show's shocking and unexpected plot twists, which keep viewers on the edge of their seats.
Distinctive Setting: The show's unique and distinctive setting: the world of politics in Washington, D.C.
Innovative Ideas: The show's innovative use of technology, including social media and online streaming.
Unique Characters: The show's unique and complex characters, who are both fascinating and flawed.
Genre Blend: The show's unique blend of genres, including political drama, thriller, and black comedy.

Comparable Scripts: House of Cards, The West Wing, Scandal, The Wire, Breaking Bad, The Godfather, The Shawshank Redemption, The Matrix, Fight Club, The Lord of the Rings

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Character Development: The screenplay ranks high in characterization with an 80.89% percentile, indicating well-developed and engaging characters that drive the story.
Dialogue: With a percentile of 80.08%, the dialogue in the screenplay is another strong point. The characters' conversations are likely natural, engaging, and contribute to the overall narrative.
Structure: The structure of the screenplay, scoring at 76.96%, is another notable strength. This suggests a well-organized and coherent plot structure that keeps the audience engaged.

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Plot: The screenplay's plot rating of 29.27% suggests a need for improvement in crafting a compelling and engaging storyline. This could involve enhancing the conflict, adding twists and turns, or refining the overall narrative arc.
Emotional Impact: With a percentile of 22.76%, the screenplay could benefit from deepening the emotional connection with the audience. Exploring the characters' inner conflicts, motivations, and vulnerabilities can enhance the emotional resonance of the story.
Unpredictability: The screenplay's predictability score of 29.75% indicates that the plot may be lacking in surprises or unexpected turns. Introducing unexpected events, subverting expectations, or adding layers of mystery can increase the suspense and engagement for the audience.

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Concept and Plot: While the concept rating is at 70.73%, the plot rating is lower at 29.27%. The writer could consider refining the plot to match the strength of the concept, ensuring a cohesive and engaging narrative.
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Conflict and Character Changes: The conflict level is at 42.28%, while character changes are at 47.93%. Balancing these elements can create a more dynamic and engaging screenplay. Strengthening the conflicts and their impact on character development will add depth and tension to the story.

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The screenplay shows promise with strong characterization, dialogue, and structure. To elevate it further, the writer could focus on refining the plot, enhancing the emotional impact, and introducing more unpredictable elements. Balancing these aspects will create a more well-rounded and engaging screenplay.

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Title	Grade	Percentile	Before	After
Scene Overall	8.2	23	Erin Brokovich : 8.1	fight Club : 8.3
Scene Concept	8.2	52	Casablanca : 8.1	the 5th element : 8.3
Scene Plot	7.7	23	severance (TV) : 7.6	Erin Brokovich : 7.8
Scene Characters	8.6	68	fight Club : 8.5	Easy A : 8.7
Scene Emotional Impact	7.1	13	Sorry to bother you : 7.0	the 5th element : 7.2
Scene Conflict Level	7.5	44	Labyrinth : 7.4	Titanic : 7.6
Scene Dialogue	8.1	63	fight Club : 8.0	The good place draft : 8.2
Scene Story Forward	8.1	46	severance (TV) : 8.0	True Blood : 8.2
Scene Character Changes	6.7	27	glass Onion Knives Out : 6.6	True Blood : 6.8
Scene High Stakes	7.5	50	True Blood : 7.4	Erin Brokovich : 7.6
Scene Unpredictability	7.27	30	Leaving Las Vegas : 7.26	The whale : 7.28
Scene Internal Goal	8.14	75	Her : 8.13	The Trial of the Chicago 7 : 8.15
Scene External Goal	7.30	58	Gran Torino : 7.29	Being John Malkovich : 7.31
Scene Originality	8.49	27	Fargo Pilot : 8.48	American Fiction : 8.50
Scene Engagement	8.76	13	Women talking : 8.73	Back to the future : 8.77
Scene Pacing	8.25	49	The shining : 8.24	glass Onion Knives Out : 8.26
Scene Formatting	8.40	80	Rambo : 8.38	face/off : 8.42
Script Structure	8.38	85	Interstellar : 8.37	Baby Driver : 8.40
Script Characters	7.90	41	Easy A : 7.80	Casablanca : 8.00
Script Premise	8.80	88	the black list (TV) : 8.70	Titanic : 8.90
Script Structure	7.60	20	severance (TV) : 7.50	Hors de prix : 7.70
Script Theme	7.50	6	the pursuit of happyness : 7.40	Rambo : 7.60
Script Visual Impact	7.20	16	Labyrinth : 7.10	The Good place release : 7.30
Script Emotional Impact	7.50	23	severance (TV) : 7.40	Vice : 7.60
Script Conflict	7.80	66	severance (TV) : 7.70	Blade Runner : 7.90
Script Originality	7.00	5	Bonnie and Clyde : 6.90	Clerks : 7.10
Overall Script	7.78	18	No time to die : 7.76	LA confidential - draft : 7.79

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Executive Summary

The screenplay for 'House of Cards' pilot is a compelling introduction to a political drama centered around power, manipulation, and ambition. It effectively sets up the main character, Francis Underwood, as a complex anti-hero. The narrative is engaging, with well-paced political intrigue and strong character development. The use of direct camera addresses is a notable stylistic choice that enhances the storytelling.

Strengths

The opening scene effectively establishes Francis Underwood's complex character and sets the tone for the series. high ( Scene 1 )
The inauguration scene effectively uses Francis's internal monologue to reveal his ambitions and cunning, enhancing the narrative depth. high ( Scene 40 )
The strategic release of the Education Bill details through Zoe's article demonstrates the intricate political games played, highlighting the theme of power and manipulation. high ( Scene 42 )
The introduction of Zoe Barnes and her interaction with Francis showcases the dynamic between media and politics, adding a layer of intrigue. medium ( Scene 26 )
The final monologue by Francis at Freddy's BBQ Joint powerfully encapsulates his philosophy and foreshadows his relentless pursuit of power, providing a strong closing. high ( Scene 41 )

Areas of Improvement

Some interactions at social events could be tightened to enhance pacing and maintain tension. medium ( Scene 17 )
Character development for secondary characters like Russo could be deepened to provide more background and motivation. medium ( Scene 16 )

Missing Elements

More scenes illustrating the public's reaction to political events could enhance the realism and audience engagement. medium

Notable Points

The direct address to the camera is a unique narrative technique that effectively draws viewers into Francis's world and mindset. high ( Scene 1 )

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Executive Summary

The screenplay for the House of Cards pilot is a compelling and well-crafted political drama that effectively introduces the main character, Francis Underwood, and establishes the central narrative threads. The story is driven by Underwood's ruthless pursuit of power and influence, which is balanced by the nuanced portrayal of his relationship with his wife, Claire. The screenplay also effectively introduces the complex web of political maneuvering and intrigue that will likely be the focus of the series. While some storylines could benefit from further development, the overall narrative strength and character arcs make this a strong candidate for consideration.

Strengths

The opening sequence effectively introduces the main character, Francis Underwood, and establishes his dark and cunning nature. The juxtaposition of his calm, charming demeanor with his ruthless actions creates a compelling and ominous tone. high ( Scene 1 (EXT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - NIGHT) )
The scenes depicting Francis and Claire's relationship showcase their strong partnership and mutual understanding, despite the dark undercurrents in their personal and professional lives. high ( Scene 6 (INT. FRANCIS'S CAR - NIGHT) Scene 9 (INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT) )
The scenes highlighting Francis's manipulation of the political landscape and his ability to outmaneuver his opponents demonstrate his cunning and strategic intelligence, which are central to the narrative. high ( Scene 12 (INT. FRANCIS'S (INNER) OFFICE - DAY) Scene 22 (INT. FRANCIS'S (INNER) OFFICE - CONTINUOUS) )
The scenes showcasing the developing relationship between Francis and Zoe Barnes, and Zoe's investigation into the Education Bill, add an additional layer of intrigue and conflict to the story. medium ( Scene 36 (INT. NATIONAL GALLERY - DAY) Scene 39 (INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - AFTERNOON) )
The overall character development and arcs of Francis Underwood and his wife Claire are compelling and well-executed throughout the screenplay. high

Areas of Improvement

The storyline involving Peter Russo feels somewhat underdeveloped and could use more focus and depth to fully integrate it into the main narrative. medium ( Scene 5 (INT. RUSSO'S OFFICE - MORNING) Scene 16 (INT. RUSSO'S BEDROOM - NIGHT) )
The scenes involving the Washington Herald newsroom and Zoe's colleagues could be expanded to provide a more well-rounded portrayal of the journalistic environment and its dynamics. low ( Scene 4 (INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - MORNING) Scene 8 (INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - NIGHT) )

Missing Elements

While the screenplay effectively conveys the political machinations and power struggles, it could benefit from a deeper exploration of the broader societal and cultural implications of the events depicted. medium

Notable Points

The final sequences, depicting the Inauguration and its aftermath, provide a strong sense of closure and a glimpse into Francis's continued pursuit of power and influence. high ( Scene 40 (EXT. THE MALL - MORNING) Scene 41 (EXT. PENNSYLVANIA AVENUE - EARLY MORNING) )
The scenes showcasing Francis's personal moments and his inner thoughts provide valuable insights into his motivations and character development. medium ( Scene 17 (INT. KENNEDY CENTER - LOBBY - NIGHT) Scene 42 (EXT. FREDDY'S BBQ JOINT - MORNING) )

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The tv_pilot screenplay follows the ambitious and manipulative Majority Whip, Francis Underwood, as he navigates the ruthless world of Washington politics. Witnessing a hit-and-run accident prompts Francis to take decisive action, showcasing his philosophy on pain and power. As he prepares for a party with his wife Claire, Francis reflects on his position and his ambition for greater things. Meanwhile, reporter Zoe Barnes proposes a controversial blog idea at the newsroom, and politician Russo makes shady deals for donations.

However, Francis's hopes of becoming Secretary of State are dashed when he is passed over for the position. Determined to maintain his power and influence, Francis strategizes to capitalize on opportunities within the Education Bill. Tensions rise between Francis and Claire as their priorities clash, and Francis's manipulation tactics come to light as he orchestrates a plan to advance his own career at the expense of others.

The pilot sets the stage for a complex web of deceit, ambition, and power struggles, with key players like Zoe Barnes, Russo, and Claire entangled in Francis's scheming. The episode ends with Francis contemplating his next move while enjoying a moment of peace, hinting at the brewing chaos and power plays to come in the series.

Scene by Scene Summaries

Witnessing a hit-and-run accident, Francis Underwood euthanizes an injured dog, highlighting his philosophy on pain and decisive action. After instructing his aide to track down the driver, he offers condolences to the dog's distraught owners.
Francis Underwood, Majority Whip, prepares for a party with his wife Claire. As they get ready, Francis reflects on his position and the other politicians present. He is confident in his power and believes he is destined for greater things.
Francis and Claire are in the back of an SUV, discussing Francis's hair and outfit for an upcoming meeting. Claire becomes flirtatious and they share a moment of intimacy. The scene takes place inside Francis's car at night, with a tone that is intimate and flirtatious. The dialogue between them includes Claire suggesting Francis get a haircut and complimenting his suit. The scene ends with Francis and Claire sharing a kiss as they are five minutes away from their destination.
In the newsroom, ambitious reporter Zoe Barnes proposes an anonymous blog for Hill staffers to vent. However, Deputy Editor Lucas Goodwin rejects her idea, upholding traditional journalism standards. Frustrated, Zoe accuses Lucas of being unimaginative and stuck in the past.
Russo, a politician, promises Chapman, a lobbyist, that he will change zoning laws in exchange for a $50,000 donation. Chapman reminds Russo of the promise, and Russo apologizes and asks Chapman what they were discussing, indicating that the conversation will continue.
After being promised the Secretary of State position, Francis Underwood is informed by Linda Vasquez that he will not be nominated. Walker has decided to keep Francis in Congress to lead education reform efforts. Francis is disappointed but agrees to support the decision. Vasquez reveals that Michael Kern will be nominated instead.
Evelyn and Claire meet to discuss staffing reorganization and cost-cutting measures to bolster the organization's growth. Evelyn initially hesitates due to concerns about staff impact, but agrees to prepare a proposal. Claire's frustration with unresponsive communication is evident as she leaves a message for an unknown individual.
Janine rejects Zoe’s offer to help with work, leaving her humiliated.
Claire confronts Francis for neglecting to update her during a crisis. Francis apologizes, blaming his ambition, but Claire is disappointed in his lack of transparency and emotional response. Francis remains withdrawn, leading to a tense standoff as Claire departs, leaving Francis alone to ponder the consequences of his actions.
Claire wakes up and sees Francis by the window. She offers him coffee, and they silently acknowledge the previous night's events. Francis expresses his remorse and determination, while Claire provides support. He finishes his coffee and goes upstairs to prepare for work, leaving Claire alone with her thoughts.
While watching Kern's nomination on TV, Nancy and Stamper speculate about his surgeries. Francis arrives and abruptly cancels his appointments, asking Stamper to join him.
Francis sets forth a plan to capitalize on opportunities in the present, emphasizing the Education Bill and handling Harry Blythe. He delegates tasks to Stamper, who inquires about logistics and potential buffers. Their discussion reflects a sense of urgency and ambition.
At the mess hall, Francis smiles and congratulates Kern on his nomination. However, behind this facade, Francis harbors jealousy and plots to use the opportunity to undermine Kern's position in the dark.
Francis Underwood attends a church service where the minister delivers a sermon on the subject of humility. The sermon warns against the dangers of pride and encourages the congregation to be grateful for their success but not to let it turn into arrogance. Francis is shown listening intently to the sermon, his face revealing his determination to succeed despite the challenges ahead.
After a church service, Francis and Claire encounter Charles and Felicity Holburn. Charles expresses disappointment over Francis not being appointed Secretary of State, while Felicity offers sympathy for his recent political defeat. Francis remains diplomatic, but is clearly bothered by Holburn's assessment.
Russo and Christina have a playful and intimate conversation in Russo's cluttered high-rise apartment at night. They discuss their relationship and feelings for each other, with Russo eventually confessing his love for Christina. The scene ends with Christina pushing Russo down for round two of their intimate moment.
Francis and Claire attend the Kennedy Center surrounded by opera-goers. Francis is uncomfortable after being snubbed for a nomination. Claire notices his discomfort and offers to meet him at their seats.
Francis watches as Zoe arrives at the Kennedy Center in a dress that is not appropriate for the cold weather. She asks her date, Brian, for his jacket before rushing inside.
While at the Kennedy Center with Claire, Francis escapes to the basement to play video games. Claire confronts him about staying up late, but Francis ignores her and continues gaming. This disconnect highlights the tension between their priorities and interests.
Zoe and Brian return to Zoe's apartment in a cab after a night out. Zoe politely declines Brian's advances, stating she's not interested in pursuing anything romantic. Brian accepts her decision with disappointment. The scene ends with Zoe leaving the cab and Brian looking dejected.
Zoe returns to her messy apartment, grabs a yogurt and power bar, and checks her email. She receives a message with a photo of Frank Underwood checking out her ass, implying she needs to be taken more seriously. Zoe responds with a witty comment, 'He looks pretty serious to me,' before sending her reply and ending the scene.
In the aftermath of the election, President Underwood meets with Linda Vasquez, the new Chief of Staff for the House Majority Whip. They discuss the seating chart for the Inauguration and the Education bill that is being drafted by Representative Harry Blythe. Underwood agrees to advise Blythe on the bill, and Vasquez leaves confident that Underwood can bring it more in line with the President's agenda.
Francis bids farewell to Vasquez and observes her wariness towards him. Recognizing the political significance of the Bill, he aims to prove indispensable to Vasquez, ensuring she cannot disregard him. He contacts Blythe and requests Stamper to gather a list of names, strategizing to establish his worth and gain her trust.
Francis and Stamper discuss potential candidates for the position of director. Claire and Evelyn discuss layoffs at the CWA office and Claire's plans to bring in World Water Initiative.
Zoe Barnes and Steve visit Francis Underwood's house late at night, claiming to be part of a mutual appreciation club. Zoe shows Francis something on her phone that intrigues him, and he invites them in.
In this scene, Zoe meets with Francis in his living room to discuss a potential arrangement where she would protect his identity and print what he tells her in exchange for his trust. They engage in a witty and strategic conversation about trust, discretion, and potential collaboration. The main conflict revolves around whether Francis can trust Zoe with confidential information and if Zoe can convince him to collaborate with her. The emotional tone is tense, strategic, and slightly flirtatious as they navigate their conversation with caution and wit. The scene ends with Francis politely declining Zoe's proposal, leaving the potential collaboration between them unresolved.
Francis assists Zoe with her coat as she prepares to leave. Zoe discreetly provides Francis with her personal phone number. Upon the arrival of Claire, Zoe and Francis introduce themselves. Francis cautions Zoe to drive safely due to icy conditions. Francis and Claire witness Zoe's departure, and Claire inquires about Zoe's profession, which Francis confirms is a reporter.
Congressman Russo and a call-girl are pulled over by a police officer on Michigan Avenue. Despite Russo's attempts to avoid it, the officer demands that he step out of the car.
In the wee hours, Stamper and Hull meet in a diner. Stamper reveals his role as Underwood's aide and offers political support for Hull's mayoral campaign in exchange for cooperation. Hull remains skeptical but intrigued.
Russo is released from jail and tries to convince Christina that he was not drunk when he was arrested. Christina suspects otherwise, and the two argue about Russo's drinking and whether or not he was alone when he was pulled over. The argument is unresolved.
Francis and Claire discuss campaign funding and Claire's need for financial support for her non-profit organization. Claire suggests inviting the Holburns to a ball to secure their support, and Francis agrees to consider it. Despite Francis's assurances about his campaign's progress, Claire expresses a desire for more decisive action.
Francis confronts Blythe about the inadequate 600-page document. Despite Blythe's apologies, Francis demands a satisfactory bill before the inauguration. Blythe agrees to rewrite it, but Francis insists on a short-form draft bearing Blythe's name. Francis discards the old version and orders Blythe to erase all copies, acknowledging his intent to rewrite the bill himself and using it to advance his career.
In a clandestine hotel rendezvous, Stamper bribes a call-girl with a hefty sum to silence her about a staged arrest involving a Congressman. Despite initial hesitation, she accepts the money, resolving the tense exchange. Stamper proceeds with a more intimate encounter as the scene fades.
Amidst the backdrop of Francis's private office, a cunning political game unfolds. Representative Francis, driven by ambition, seeks to replace the incompetent nominee for Secretary of State with Senator Catherine Durant. Intrigued but cautious, Durant weighs her options. Francis's manipulation and Durant's initial reluctance set the stage for a potential alliance that could reshape the political landscape.
Zoe Barnes, feeling unmotivated at work, receives a mysterious phone call that piques her interest. She promptly leaves the newsroom to meet the caller at an undisclosed location.
Francis and Zoe, a politician and lobbyist, discuss the need for a bill sponsor and decide on Harold Blythe. Francis instructs Zoe to approach Blythe's office and provides an envelope of money for potential bribery. He warns her of their shared involvement and urges caution to avoid jeopardizing their partnership.
Zoe is diligently working on Blythe's draft, Francis and Vasquez emphasize the significance of a finalized bill. Francis requests Vasquez's assistance in accommodating additional guests at their Red and White Ball table.
Francis confronts Russo about his irresponsible behavior, including drunk driving, prostitution, and cocaine use. Russo initially denies everything but quickly realizes that Francis knows about his activities. Francis reveals that he was the one who got Russo off the hook for his arrest the previous night. Francis demands Russo's absolute loyalty in exchange for his continued protection. Russo agrees to do whatever Francis asks.
Zoe brings Lucas a large ream of paper, which she insists they get up on the website immediately. Lucas says he needs to run it past Bob, but Zoe insists. They go to Hammerschmidt's office, where Hammerschmidt insists this be run by legal before posting and asks Zoe who her source is. Zoe refuses to say, but Hammerschmidt agrees to post it after proper review. Hammerschmidt asks Zoe what the angle is. She says "Far left of center." Hamerschmidt asks if it is enough to put the president on his heels, and Zoe assures him it will "put him on his ass." Hammerschmidt puts Janine in charge of working with Zoe, who is absolutely furious at having to take orders from Zoe and having her byline pushed to "assisted" status, but leaves the room at Hammerschmidt's insistence.
Francis and Claire attend the Presidential Inauguration and Inaugural Ball. Francis gives a brief speech about location and watches Walker deliver his Inaugural Address, announcing an Education Reform Bill. They attend the Red and White Ball, where Francis schmoozes with attendees, including Blythe, Catherine Durant, and the Holburns. Francis and Catherine dance.
Francis enjoys a peaceful morning at Freddy's BBQ Joint, reading about Zoe's breaking story on the leaked Education Bill.
Francis contemplates pain, defeat, and victory in a monologue while basking in the sun. Rock music interrupts, and the scene cuts to black with 'THE END' on screen.

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7.78

What's Working

Premise 8.8

The opening scene with the dog is a masterstroke, immediately establishing Francis Underwood's character and the show's tone.

Characters 7.9

The character of Francis Underwood is exceptionally well-crafted. His complex motivations, ruthless ambition, and inner turmoil make him a compelling...

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Emotional Impact 7.5

The emotional impact of the screenplay could be deepened by exploring the characters' inner lives and motivations in more detail.

Conflict 7.8

While the conflict between Underwood and Walker over the Secretary of State position is a central part of the story, it could be further developed to...

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Characters

7.9

The tv_pilot exhibits promising character development, presenting complex and well-defined characters with clear motivat...

Analysis: The tv_pilot exhibits promising character development, presenting complex and well-defined characters with clear motivations and relatable struggles. However, there are opportunities to enhance character arcs and ensure consistency in character actions and decisions.

Key Strengths

The character of Francis Underwood is exceptionally well-crafted. His complex motivations, ruthless ambition, and inner turmoil make him a compelling and unpredictable protagonist.

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Premise

8.8

The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a compelling and clear foundation for a political drama, showcasing the...

Analysis: The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a compelling and clear foundation for a political drama, showcasing the ruthless ambition of Francis Underwood and the complex web of power, manipulation, and betrayal within Washington D.C. The premise's strength lies in its exploration of moral ambiguity, the dynamics of power, and the human cost of ambition. However, there's potential to further enhance the uniqueness of the premise by delving deeper into the psychological complexities of the characters and exploring the ethical dilemmas they face.

Key Strengths

The opening scene with the dog is a masterstroke, immediately establishing Francis Underwood's character and the show's tone.
The power dynamics and political maneuvering within Washington D.C. are portrayed in a realistic and engaging manner.
The morally ambiguous characters and their complex relationships add depth and intrigue to the story.

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Structure

7.6

The screenplay effectively establishes its political premise and introduces a complex and ambitious lead character. Howe...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively establishes its political premise and introduces a complex and ambitious lead character. However, the plot's pacing and narrative structure could benefit from refinement to enhance audience engagement and narrative clarity.

Key Strengths

The introduction effectively establishes Francis Underwood as a complex and ambitious protagonist, immediately drawing the audience into his world and motivations.

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Theme

7.5

This screenplay presents a nuanced exploration of themes related to power, ambition, and morality, effectively weaving t...

Analysis: This screenplay presents a nuanced exploration of themes related to power, ambition, and morality, effectively weaving them into the narrative and character arcs. While some aspects could be refined for greater clarity and impact, the screenplay's exploration of its central themes demonstrates thoughtfulness and potential for engaging audiences.

Key Strengths

The exploration of power dynamics through Francis Underwood's character is particularly well-crafted, showcasing both his ruthless ambition and moments of vulnerability.

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Visual Impact

7.2

The screenplay excels in its realistic portrayal of political machinations, relying on strong dialogue and character dev...

Analysis: The screenplay excels in its realistic portrayal of political machinations, relying on strong dialogue and character development rather than elaborate visual spectacle. While the visual descriptions are generally clear, there are opportunities to enhance the visual storytelling and create a more immersive and emotionally impactful experience for the audience.

Key Strengths

The screenplay effectively captures the subtle nuances and complexities of political life, providing a realistic and engaging portrayal of the characters' motivations and interactions. The visual descriptions, while not overly elaborate, provide a solid foundation for visualization and character development.

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Emotional Impact

7.5

The screenplay showcases strong potential for emotional impact through its complex characters, thought-provoking themes,...

Analysis: The screenplay showcases strong potential for emotional impact through its complex characters, thought-provoking themes, and intense narrative. However, certain elements could be enhanced to deepen the emotional resonance and create a more profound and lasting impact on the audience.

Key Strengths

The screenplay's exploration of the interplay between power and emotion is a major strength.

Areas to Improve

The emotional impact of the screenplay could be deepened by exploring the characters' inner lives and motivations in more detail.

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Conflict

7.8

The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes, but several areas could be enhanced to deepen tension and engag...

Analysis: The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes, but several areas could be enhanced to deepen tension and engage the audience more fully.

Key Strengths

The screenplay effectively depicts the consequences of Francis Underwood's ruthless behavior, exploring the moral dilemmas and personal sacrifices he makes in his pursuit of power.

Areas to Improve

While the conflict between Underwood and Walker over the Secretary of State position is a central part of the story, it could be further developed to increase the stakes and heighten the tension.

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Originality

7.0

The screenplay demonstrates originality and creativity in its exploration of ambition, power dynamics in political lands...

Analysis: The screenplay demonstrates originality and creativity in its exploration of ambition, power dynamics in political landscapes, and the consequences of ruthless actions. While some aspects of the storytelling techniques and character developments align with established norms, the screenplay's overall execution and exploration of political themes provide a fresh perspective.

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Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The plot of the tv_pilot screenplay is engaging and well-developed, showcasing the complex world of politics and power dynamics. The character of Francis Underwood is intriguing, with his manipulative nature and ambitious drive adding depth to the story. The interactions between characters are compelling, especially the dynamic between Francis and Claire Underwood. The use of multiple storylines and character arcs keeps the audience invested in the narrative. However, there are moments where the pacing feels a bit slow, and some scenes could benefit from tighter editing to maintain the momentum of the plot. Additionally, the resolution of certain conflicts could be more impactful to heighten the tension and emotional stakes of the story.

Suggestions: To improve the screenplay, consider tightening the pacing in certain scenes to maintain the audience's engagement. Focus on enhancing the resolution of conflicts to increase the emotional impact and create more tension. Additionally, explore opportunities to delve deeper into the characters' motivations and internal struggles to add complexity and depth to the story.

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Beginning The beginning of the screenplay sets up the political intrigue and power dynamics effectively, drawing the audience into the world of Francis Underwood. The opening scene with the hit-and-run incident establishes Francis's character and philosophy on pain, setting the tone for the rest of the story. The introduction of key characters like Claire and Zoe Barnes adds layers to the narrative, creating a sense of anticipation for their arcs to unfold. However, there are moments where the exposition feels slightly heavy-handed, and certain character introductions could be more seamlessly integrated into the plot.

Suggestions: To enhance the beginning of the screenplay, consider streamlining the exposition to avoid overwhelming the audience with information. Focus on integrating character introductions more organically into the narrative to maintain the flow of the story. Explore opportunities to build tension and intrigue from the start to hook the audience's attention and set up the conflicts that will drive the plot forward.

Middle The middle part of the screenplay delves deeper into the political machinations and personal relationships of the characters, adding layers of complexity to the story. The interactions between Francis and other key players like Vasquez and Russo create compelling dynamics that drive the narrative forward. The introduction of new conflicts and obstacles keeps the audience engaged, building anticipation for the resolution of key storylines. However, there are moments where the pacing feels slightly uneven, and certain scenes could benefit from more focused development to maintain the momentum of the plot.

Suggestions: To improve the middle part of the screenplay, consider refining the pacing to ensure a consistent flow of the narrative. Focus on developing key conflicts and character dynamics to heighten the tension and emotional stakes of the story. Explore opportunities to deepen the relationships between characters and introduce new obstacles that challenge their motivations and beliefs, driving the plot towards a compelling climax.

Ending The ending of the screenplay delivers a satisfying resolution to key storylines while setting up new conflicts and character arcs for future episodes. The culmination of Francis's manipulation and power plays adds a sense of closure to the pilot, leaving the audience intrigued about what will happen next. The final scenes with Zoe and Russo hint at the consequences of their actions, setting the stage for further exploration in subsequent episodes. However, there are moments where the resolution feels slightly rushed, and certain character arcs could be more fully realized to provide a more satisfying conclusion.

Suggestions: To enhance the ending of the screenplay, consider pacing the resolution of key storylines to ensure a satisfying payoff for the audience. Focus on providing closure to character arcs while setting up new conflicts and challenges to propel the narrative forward. Explore opportunities to deepen the emotional impact of the conclusion and leave the audience eager to see what happens next in the series.

CharacterInconsistencies

Character Zoe Barnes
Description Zoe's attire and behavior when arriving at the Kennedy Center seem out of character for a serious journalist. The focus on her physical appearance and flirtatious manner with her date suggest a level of vanity and self-interest that doesn't align with her stated professional ambitions.
( Scene 18 )

StoryInconsistencies

Description The arrest of Congressman Russo for drunk driving and soliciting a prostitute feels abrupt and disconnected from the main narrative. It's unclear how this incident ties into the larger story or impacts the other characters, suggesting it may have been included without a clear purpose.
( Scene 28 (EXT. MICHIGAN AVENUE - LATE AT NIGHT) )

PlotHoles

Description The scene with Stamper and the call girl raises significant questions about the motivation and logistics behind Stamper's actions. It's unclear why he is so intent on keeping the arrest of Russo quiet, or how he is able to so easily arrange for the call girl's silence. This sequence feels contrived and raises concerns about the overall plausibility of the narrative.
( Scene 33 (INT. HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT) )

DialogueAuthenticity

Description The dialogue between Zoe and Lucas, the Deputy Editor, feels overly theatrical and antagonistic, with Zoe's lines in particular sounding more like a caricature of an ambitious young reporter than authentic conversation.
( Scene 6 (INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - MORNING) )
Description The exchange between Francis and Russo has an air of melodrama, with Francis delivering lengthy, almost monologue-like speeches that seem more suited to a theatrical performance than a natural conversation between two politicians. The dialogue feels contrived and not entirely believable in the context of the scene.
( Scene 38 (INT. FRANCIS'S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS) )

Redundancies

Element dialogue
( Scene 1 (EXT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - NIGHT) Scene 42 (EXT. FREDDY'S BBQ JOINT - MORNING) )
Suggestion The opening monologue where Francis discusses the two kinds of pain feels a bit repetitive, as a similar sentiment is expressed again in the final scene. Streamlining or rearranging these moments could help avoid redundancy and strengthen the narrative flow.

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Francis - Score: 82/100

Role

Protagonist

Personality

MBTI: ENTJ
Enneagram: Three

Scenes

Strongest: #40
Weakest: #13

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 9/10

Ambitious and cunning political strategist.

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Hubris and desire for validation drive internal conflicts.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 7/10

Ambition drives Francis's actions, with potential for transformation stunted by his hubris.

Dialogue And Voice 9/10

Francis's dialogue is persuasive, tactical, and often laced with double meanings.

Behavior And Choices 8/10

Francis's choices stem from a primal desire for power accompanied by ruthless behavior.

Relationship Dynamics 7/10

Francis’s relationships are often exploitative, embodying a mentor-mentee dynamic mixed with manipulation.

Scene Impact 9/10

Francis's presence often escalates tension and drives pivotal plot developments.

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Francis fulfills the role of ambitious and manipulative protagonist.

Thematic Plot Integration 8/10

Francis's personal ambitions are interwoven with themes of power and betrayal.

Emotional Resonance 8/10

Engenders tension, dark curiosity, appealing complexity.

Foundational Definition

Score: 9

Francis Underwood is a cunning and ambitious political figure, skilled in manipulation and strategy. He values power and control above all else, viewing politics as a game of chess where every move matters. His Southern charm masks deep-seated ruthlessness, as he is willing to eliminate obstacles—both personal and professional—that stand in his way.

Values And Beliefs: Power, control, ambition, manipulation.

Strengths And Skills: Strategic thinking, persuasion, manipulation of public perception.

Suggestions

Explore more of his motivations behind his ruthless actions to add depth.
Consider his background and how it shapes his approach to power.

Follow-up Questions

How did Francis's upbringing in South Carolina influence his views on power?
What specific past experiences shaped his lack of empathy towards others?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 8

Francis carries emotional wounds linked to a desire for validation and an insatiable ambition that often leads to isolation. His hubris makes him blind to risks, creating internal conflict as he balances personal desires with moral ambiguity. His flaws include narcissism and a patronizing attitude towards others, which can invoke distrust.

Character Wound: Insatiable need for power and validation.

Character Flaws: Narcissism, manipulation, sociopathy.

Suggestions

Deepen the exploration of his relationships to reveal vulnerability.
Introduce moments of self-reflection that could lead to vulnerability.

Follow-up Questions

What moments in his past contribute to his emotional wounds?
How do his flaws prevent him from forming genuine relationships?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 7

Throughout the screenplay, Francis experiences a rise in power, but his refusal to adapt his morally dubious methods leads to increased isolation. Key events, such as the Premier's snub and the betrayal by Walker, serve as reminders of his vulnerability, yet he resists changing his unscrupulous ways.

Polarity Changes: Rising to a powerful position but facing backlash from betrayal.

Transformation Triggers: Receiving the news of being passed over for Secretary of State.

Suggestions

Highlight pivotal moments that test his morality further.
Incorporate scenes that force him to confront the consequences of his actions.

Follow-up Questions

What pivotal decisions will force Francis to confront his moral compass?
How might relationships impact his willingness to change?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 9

His speech patterns reflect his intelligence and strategic mindset. He often speaks directly to the camera, breaking the fourth wall, which draws the audience into his manipulative world. The use of charm obscures his darker motives, making his words carry an undercurrent of menace.

Unique Voice: Clever wordplay, Southern charm, authoritative tone.

Suggestions

Incorporate more varied tones, showing emotional vulnerability.
Add scenes where his language reflects a disconnect with others' emotions.

Follow-up Questions

How can his dialogue evolve as he faces increasing challenges?
What rhetorical strategies can he employ to manipulate key decisions?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 8

His decisions often showcase a strategic mindset, weighing advantages and consequences. The manipulation of others is a frequent behavior, revealing a pattern of choices that prioritize personal gain over ethical dilemmas.

Motivations: Desire for higher political power and control.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires external power; needs inner validation and emotional connection.

Suggestions

Create scenarios where his choices lead to unintended consequences.
Explore what happens to his other relationships as he pursues his ambitions.

Follow-up Questions

What internal conflicts emerge from his choices throughout the screenplay?
How might Francis's choices isolate him from his allies?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 7

His interactions with others reveal a pattern of strategic manipulation. With his wife, Claire, he appears to share a partnership based on ambition, while with colleagues, he adopts a patronizing stance. His relationship with Zoe embodies a possible upcoming alliance tinged with ambition and settlement for mutual benefit.

Suggestions

Develop the complexity of his relationship with Claire as it evolves.
Introduce conflicts in his alliances to reinforce his manipulative nature.

Follow-up Questions

How does Francis view loyalty, given his manipulative nature?
What does his dynamic with Claire reveal about his emotional needs?

Scene Impact

Score: 9

In scenes where he interacts with key figures, his calculated, often cold decisions lead to significant consequences. His actions not only affect his trajectory but also ripple through the lives of others, underscoring the broader implications of political ambition.

Suggestions

Maximize his interactions to heighten stakes and conflict.
Explore quieter, more introspective moments that reveal his internal conflicts.

Follow-up Questions

Which scenes could showcase the full breadth of his manipulative power?
How can his actions lead to more significant ramifications for others?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 9

His central role is to drive the story forward through ambition and betrayal, serving as both protagonist and antagonist in his journey. He exudes the traits of an archetypal political manipulator who challenges traditional power structures.

Symbolic Role: The archetype of a Machiavellian politician.

Suggestions

Reinforce his symbolic role through contrasting characters.
Introduce clear stakes regarding his ambitions to heighten the conflict.

Follow-up Questions

What does Francis’s story symbolize about ambition in politics?
How does he defy traditional political archetypes in unexpected ways?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 8

His journey is closely linked to the central themes of power, ambition, and moral decay in politics. By exploring the lengths he goes to achieve his goals, the screenplay can raise questions about the moral implications of political ambition.

Suggestions

Make thematic connections more explicit through dialogue.
Focus on how Francis's actions mirror broader societal issues.

Follow-up Questions

What overarching themes does Francis embody in relation to politics?
How can his narrative arc highlight the consequences of unchecked ambition?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 8

Francis’s character evokes a complex emotional response, where viewers can feel both admiration and revulsion for his actions. His manipulative strategies create suspense, while his darker motives produce tension and ethical questions.

Emotional Impact: Tension and intrigue, mixed with dark curiosity.

Suggestions

Incorporate layers of vulnerability to enhance audience empathy.
Use reactions from other characters to amplify emotional beats.

Follow-up Questions

How does Francis's complexity foster both tension and sympathy?
What emotional stakes can be introduced to deepen the audience's connection to him?

Personality Types

MBTI: entj

Reflects his strategic thinking, leadership qualities, and preference for control.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: intj (75%)

Suggestions

Integrate more interactions showing his leadership style.
Highlight moments of emotional decision-making to explore the INTJ side.

Follow-up Questions

How do his ENTJ traits influence his relationships with others?
What INTJ qualities can be revealed to show depth at key moments?

Enneagram: three

A Type Three's focus on achievement and success is evident in Francis's ambition.

Confidence: 80%

Possible Alternative Type: eight (65%)

Suggestions

Show instances of vulnerability that contrast with his Type Three traits.
Introduce Eight-related conflicts to heighten power struggles.

Follow-up Questions

What aspects of his personality align with the Type Three pursuit of success?
How might Francis's Type Eight tendencies reveal underlying vulnerabilities?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (40)

The Inauguration and subsequent interactions encapsulate Francis's ambition and the lengths he will go to maintain power.

Why: It showcases his charisma, strategic mindset, and impact on the political landscape.

Weakest Scene (13)

Francis's low moment is seen when he confronts the reality of his ambitions being thwarted.

Why: The scene lacks tension and does not showcase his typical manipulative nature.

Suggestions:

Heighten emotional stakes to create a more impactful confrontation.
Incorporate interactions that emphasize his strategic thinking.

Claire - Score: 83/100

Personality

MBTI: ENTJ
Enneagram: Three (The Achiever)

Scenes

Strongest: #9
Weakest: #7

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 9/10

Ambitious and strategic partner to Francis.

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Navigates pains of ambition and partnership.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 7/10

Maintains a steady ambition while navigating her relationship.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Elegant yet confrontational in communication.

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Deliberate and strategic in intent.

Relationship Dynamics 8/10

Complicated balance of power with Francis.

Scene Impact 8/10

Introduces tension and highlights emotional stakes.

Role Fulfillment 8/10

Strategic player in a political drama.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Reflects the core themes of ambition and power.

Emotional Resonance 9/10

Creates tension while forging emotional connections.

Foundational Definition

Score: 9

Claire Underwood appears as a poised and ambitious woman, embodying traits of elegance and strength. She is the wife of Francis Underwood and works as the head of a nonprofit organization. Her character is established as someone who is not just a supportive partner but also a strategic player in the political landscape. Claire's actions and decisions highlight her desire for power, influence, and control, making her a significant figure in the narrative.

Values And Beliefs: Empowerment, ambition, and maintaining control over her environment.

Strengths And Skills: Strong leadership abilities, strategic thinking, and emotional intelligence.

Suggestions

Develop her backstory to clarify her motivations further.
Show more of her influence in political matters outside her relationship with Francis.

Follow-up Questions

What specific experiences shaped Claire's ambition and drive?
How does Claire's role in her organization reflect her values?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 8

Claire struggles with the public perception of her role as a supportive wife versus her own ambitions. She possesses an emotional wound connected to feelings of neglect or being overshadowed by Francis's ambitions. This duality adds depth to her character—she is torn between partnership and personal ambition, leading to tension in her relationship.

Character Wound: Her desire for recognition and fear of being seen as secondary.

Character Flaws: Impatience, ruthlessness when pursuing her goals, and emotional distance.

Suggestions

Explore her feelings of jealousy or frustration toward Francis's political maneuvering.
Introduce moments that reveal her vulnerabilities to create sympathy.

Follow-up Questions

What circumstances have led Claire to feel undervalued?
How does her emotional distance affect her interactions with others?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 7

Claire’s journey largely revolves around her ambition, balancing her role as the supportive partner while striving for her own identity and influence. Her reactions to Francis's setbacks reveal her determination to assert herself more, but she largely maintains her purpose and directional focus throughout the narrative.

Polarity Changes: None observed; Claire's ambition and relationship dynamics remain consistent.

Transformation Triggers: Receiving news about Francis's political status or her organization’s challenges.

Suggestions

Incorporate moments that challenge her motivations directly.
Show her making choices that either align with or counter Francis's decisions.

Follow-up Questions

What specific events could challenge Claire's current state of being?
How does Claire perceive failure in the context of her relationship with Francis?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Claire's dialogue is characterized by its clarity and conciseness. She communicates with confidence and force, often carrying an underlying tension that hints at her deeper ambitions and dissatisfaction. This makes her interactions impactful, resonating with her complex nature.

Unique Voice: Direct, assertive, often laced with subtext that reflects her intelligence and ambition.

Suggestions

Weave in more inner monologues that reflect her personal thoughts.
Use dialogue with Francis to showcase her shifting emotional dynamics.

Follow-up Questions

How do Claire's words reflect her emotional state in different scenes?
What specific lines showcase her ambitions effectively?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 9

Claire often chooses actions that propel her agenda, whether in her organization or at home. Her ability to navigate complex relationships and situations reflects her strategic mindset, which often places her in positions of both support and conflict relative to Francis.

Motivations: The pursuit of power and control within her personal and professional life.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires recognition and influence; needs to balance her identity with her image as Francis's wife.

Suggestions

Highlight key decisions that exemplify her strategic thinking.
Introduce scenarios where she has to choose between her ambitions and her relationship.

Follow-up Questions

What choices has Claire made that had unexpected consequences?
How does she justify her decisions to herself and others?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 8

Claire's relationship with Francis is marked by mutual ambition, yet also competition. While they support each other, there's an underlying tension stemming from their individual pursuits of power. Their interactions reveal deeper complexities as they navigate their partnership amidst political maneuverings.

Suggestions

Focus on building interactions that reveal Claire's deep-seated feelings.
Introduce conflicts that test their relationship dynamics.

Follow-up Questions

How does Claire’s ambition affect her relationship with Francis over time?
What does she ultimately want from their partnership?

Scene Impact

Score: 8

Claire's presence often acts as a catalyst for conflict and emotional depth in scenes, particularly when dealing with Francis. Her calculated approach can defuse or escalate tension based on her decisions, emphasizing her role in the narrative as both supportive and confrontational.

Suggestions

Maximize her entrance and exits to shift scene dynamics.
Aim for scenes where her actions decisively change the emotional landscape.

Follow-up Questions

What scenes best showcase Claire’s ability to influence the mood and direction?
In which scenes does she have the most meaningful impact?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 8

Claire's role transcends that of a mere supportive spouse; she embodies ambition and the fight for recognition in a male-dominated hierarchy. By navigating the political landscape alongside Francis, she challenges traditional gender roles and reflects the overarching themes of power and progression.

Symbolic Role: Represents ambition and the complex role of women in power.

Suggestions

Highlight how Claire resists or embraces her role in different contexts.
Explore ways she might challenge or redefine gender dynamics.

Follow-up Questions

How does Claire’s character subvert traditional gender roles in politics?
What are other characters’ perceptions of her role?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

Claire's journey parallels key themes surrounding ambition, power struggles, and gender dynamics within politics. Her actions relate back to the overarching narrative about manipulation and control, acting as both a support and foil to Francis’s maneuvers.

Suggestions

Deepen her engagement with thematic issues in pivotal scenes.
Introduce conflicts that resonate with the broader themes.

Follow-up Questions

How does Claire's ambition directly impact major plot points?
What themes are best highlighted through her character?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 9

Claire effectively engages the audience’s emotions by balancing vulnerability with strength. Her struggles and ambitions create a complex emotional landscape that invites the audience to root for her while being wary of her methods.

Emotional Impact: Elicits both sympathy and tension regarding her ambitions.

Suggestions

Enhance emotional beats by exploring her interactions with Francis.
Utilize moments of reflection or conflict to evoke greater audience empathy.

Follow-up Questions

What moments have the strongest emotional impact related to Claire?
How does the audience perceive her ambitions throughout the narrative?

Personality Types

MBTI: entj

Claire embodies traits characterized by strategic thinking, decisiveness, and a natural inclination towards leadership and influence.

Confidence: 75%

Possible Alternative Type: intj (25%)

Suggestions

Leverage her ENTJ characteristics to reinforce her ambition in future scenes.
Explore how her potential INTJ traits could influence her strategic planning.

Follow-up Questions

How does her dominant personality type manifest in decision-making?
In what ways could her personality contribute to conflicts?

Enneagram: three (the achiever)

Claire’s behaviors reflect a strong desire for accomplishment and recognition, focused on achieving her goals in both her personal and professional life.

Confidence: 80%

Possible Alternative Type: eight (the challenger) (20%)

Suggestions

Utilize her Enneagram type to deepen her dialogue and motivations.
Introduce scenarios that play off her competitive nature.

Follow-up Questions

What drives Claire’s need for recognition?
How do her Achiever traits affect her relationships?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (9)

Claire confronts Francis about his lack of communication and expresses dissatisfaction.

Why: This scene stands out due to its emotional intensity and the clear demonstration of her character's complexities and the stakes involved.

Weakest Scene (7)

Claire in a meeting with Evelyn discusses organizational changes without much involvement.

Why: This scene feels weak as it does not display Claire's strategic mind or ambition as vividly as other interactions.

Suggestions:

Integrate a moment where Claire asserts more control or discusses her vision.
Provide her with a larger role in decision-making processes.

Zoe - Score: 79/100

Role

Protagonist

Personality

MBTI: ENTP
Enneagram: Three (3)

Scenes

Strongest: #41
Weakest: #28

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Ambitious young reporter seeking influence.

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Internal conflict between ambition and morality.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 8/10

Zoe evolves from an ambitious reporter to a key player in political journalism.

Dialogue And Voice 9/10

Witty, sharp, and assertive dialogue denotes confidence.

Behavior And Choices 8/10

Zoe's choices reveal her ambition and willingness to compromise morals.

Relationship Dynamics 7/10

Zoe's relationships are primarily driven by ambition and mutual benefit.

Scene Impact 8/10

Zoe’s presence often catalyzes turning points in key scenes.

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Zoe fulfills the role of a driven journalist seeking truth.

Thematic Plot Integration 8/10

Zoe’s journey mirrors themes of ambition, power, and ethical boundaries.

Emotional Resonance 7/10

Creates tension and admiration through ambition-driven actions.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Zoe Barnes is an ambitious, young reporter at the Washington Herald, eager to make her mark in the competitive world of journalism. She possesses a strong appetite for power and influence, believing that exposing political truths can elevate her career. Her foundational traits include a blend of determination and a willingness to cross ethical lines for the sake of a story. These traits shape her actions throughout the screenplay, revealing her as an unapologetic seeker of success in a male-dominated field.

Values And Beliefs: Truth, ambition, career advancement.

Strengths And Skills: Strong writing skills, persuasive conversationalist, ability to manipulate narratives.

Suggestions

Explore Zoe's background further to provide insight into her drive.
Show more instances where her ambition conflicts with her ethical boundaries.

Follow-up Questions

What experiences in Zoe's past may have influenced her ambition?
How does she define success beyond career advancement?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Zoe's primary internal conflict stems from her aggressive pursuit of a journalistic scoop against the backdrop of moral ambiguity. While she is driven by a fierce need to succeed, she grapples with the implications of her choices on her relationships and her integrity as a journalist. This tension adds a layer of vulnerability to her character, as her ambition sometimes blinds her to the consequences of her actions, leading to potential self-destructive behavior.

Character Wound: Fear of being overlooked or underappreciated.

Character Flaws: Overly ambitious, lacks discretion.

Suggestions

Dive deeper into her backstory to highlight her fears and flaws.
Introduce moments of self-reflection where she questions her choices.

Follow-up Questions

What would happen if Zoe faced the consequences of her actions?
How does she justify her decisions to herself?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 8

Throughout the screenplay, Zoe transitions from a hopeful reporter seeking a break to someone who plays a pivotal role in revealing political truths. Her ambition leads her to act with increasing boldness, especially as she realizes the power she holds with the information she possesses. The transformation she undergoes is marked by her willingness to blur the lines between professional ethics and personal ambition. However, the potential ramifications of her sink-or-swim mentality could lead her to a dangerous path, and viewers question whether her trajectory is one of upward mobility or impending downfall.

Polarity Changes: Initial eagerness shifts towards calculated risk-taking.

Transformation Triggers: Her interactions with Francis Underwood and her successful leak of the Education Bill.

Suggestions

Highlight pivotal moments that push Zoe towards her final transformation.
Clarify moments of hesitation to show her internal struggle.

Follow-up Questions

How does Zoe’s sense of identity change as she gains power?
What are the risks she faces in her journey towards greater ambition?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 9

Zoe's dialogue reflects her assertive personality and ambition. She often employs quick-witted remarks, creating a sense of urgency in conversations that underline her determination. Her speech is grounded in a specific understanding of the journalism field, reflecting her aspirations and her frustrations with existing hierarchies. As the story progresses, her conversations grow bolder as she aligns herself with Francis, indicating her increasing confidence and willingness to take risks.

Unique Voice: Direct and unapologetic tone with clever phrasing.

Suggestions

Consider infusing more moments where Zoe reveals vulnerability through dialogue.
Create interactions where her dialogue conflicts with her inner doubts.

Follow-up Questions

How do her words impact the perceptions others have of her?
In what ways does her dialogue evolve when she interacts with different characters?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 8

Zoe's actions across the screenplay display a clear pattern of seeking advantageous narratives, often at the cost of personal ethics. Early choices underscore her ambition, such as pitching the idea of an underground blog to Lucas and subsequently utilizing her connection with Francis. Yet, as she stabilizes her footing in the world of journalism, her decisions become increasingly bold, indicating a hunger for influence that could lead to her potential undoing.

Motivations: To break into impactful journalism and gain recognition.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires success and story exclusivity; needs validation and respect.

Suggestions

Add scenes where Zoe reflects on the consequences of her actions.
Create situations that challenge her moral boundaries and force tough choices.

Follow-up Questions

What pivotal decision could serve as a turning point for her character?
How does Zoe reconcile ambition with ethical implications in her choices?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 7

Zoe's interactions with established characters like Francis and Lucas emphasize her desire to navigate the power structures in journalism. She sees Francis as a means to an end, an influential ally in her quest for a breakout story. Conversely, her competition with Janine reveals the fierce nature of the industry and how potential allies can quickly morph into rivals. These dynamics not only fuel her ambition but also show the loneliness that can accompany such driven behavior.

Suggestions

Explore the emotional undercurrents in her relationship with Francis.
Show how competition with peers affects her morale and decisions.

Follow-up Questions

How does her relationship with Francis influence her journalistic integrity?
What internal struggles arise from her competition with Janine?

Scene Impact

Score: 8

Zoe's character introduces tension and urgency in her scenes, driving the narrative forward with her bold actions. Notably, her confrontation with Lucas showcases her desperation to break free from traditional journalism roles while highlighting systemic issues in the press. Moreover, her interactions with Francis inject a blend of flirtation and ambition, creating a compelling push-and-pull dynamic that raises stakes in political commentary.

Suggestions

Increase her involvement in scenes that reflect her internal struggle.
Craft her scenes to highlight the emotional tension surrounding her choices.

Follow-up Questions

What specific scenes could further showcase her ambition and drive?
How does her impact in scenes reflect her values and beliefs?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 9

Zoe embodies the archetype of the ambitious journalist, striving to prove herself in a male-dominated field. Her role emphasizes the tension between ethical journalism and the seductive nature of political alliances. By revealing truths that others may hide, she serves as both an ally and a potential threat to those around her, particularly Francis. Her choices often blur the lines between personal ambition and societal responsibility, setting her up as a contemporary figure reflecting real-world issues of journalistic integrity.

Symbolic Role: Represents the new wave of journalism merging ambition with ethics.

Suggestions

Enhance the ethical dilemmas she faces to enrich her narrative role.
Showcase how her story influences the larger theme of ambition in journalism.

Follow-up Questions

In what ways could she subvert her role to challenge expectations?
How does her character influence the overarching narrative of the series?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 8

Zoe's character trajectory intertwines with the central theme of ambition and its moral implications. In her quest to uncover the truth and gain power, she navigates complex relationships that reflect both the dark and illuminating potential of her journalism. Her actions serve as a microcosm of the broader societal struggle in balancing ambition with ethics, making her journey critical to understanding the screenplay's thematic depth.

Suggestions

Deepen her connections to the main themes by confronting key moral dilemmas.
Showcase moments where her decisions challenge the viewers' perception of journalistic integrity.

Follow-up Questions

What thematic questions arise from Zoe’s interactions with political figures?
How might her journey inspire discussions on the role of journalism in society?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 7

Zoe engages the audience by evoking a mix of admiration and concern. Her fearless approach to journalism inspires viewers to root for her success while simultaneously questioning the moral cost of her ambition. The emotional weight of her experiences underscores the relentless pursuit of success in a challenging landscape, tapping into themes of aspiration and ethical conflict that resonate with contemporary societal issues. Additionally, her interactions with male counterparts create a nuanced exploration of gender dynamics in power.

Emotional Impact: Evokes tension and intrigue regarding ambition.

Suggestions

Focus on moments of vulnerability to create empathy.
Incorporate scenes that illustrate the emotional toll of her choices.

Follow-up Questions

What emotions should the audience feel in critical moments with Zoe?
How can her character arc deepen emotional investments from viewers?

Personality Types

MBTI: entp

Zoe exhibits characteristics of an ENTP through her quick thinking, adaptability, and strong verbal communication skills. She thrives on challenges and debates, unafraid to question authority, which is common among ENTP types.

Confidence: 80%

Suggestions

Leverage her ENTP characteristics to craft more engaging dialogue.
Utilize her adaptability in plot developments that challenge her ethics further.

Follow-up Questions

How can Zoe's personality traits affect her decision-making in crunch time?
What situations could reveal her underlying fears as an ENTP?

Enneagram: three (3)

Zoe aligns with type Three as she is driven, success-oriented, and often seeks validation through her accomplishments, showcasing traits typical of a Three. Her competitive nature and desire for recognition are prominent throughout the screenplay.

Confidence: 75%

Suggestions

Explore how her enneagram type influences her relationships with others.
Describe the internal conflict that arises when her public persona conflicts with her true self.

Follow-up Questions

How does Zoe navigate situations where her ambition is challenged?
What would undermine her confidence as a type Three?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (41)

Zoe's interactions during the introduction of the Education Bill are powerful.

Why: This scene showcases her intelligence and ambition, reflecting her ability to impact larger political narratives.

Weakest Scene (28)

Zoe's encounter with Brian in the cab lacks depth.

Why: The scene feels superficial and reveals little of her character beyond typical flirting.

Suggestions:

Enhance the scene with dialogue that reveals her perspective on casual relationships.
Introduce a moment where Zoe's frustration with her ambition leaks into her interactions.

Identified Themes

Theme

Theme Details

Theme Explanation

Power and Corruption

25%

Francis Underwood, a ruthless and ambitious politician, manipulates and controls those around him to achieve his goals.

The theme explores the corrupting influence of power and the willingness of individuals to compromise their morals for personal gain.

Strengthening Power and Corruption

Suggestion Type	How to Strengthen the Theme
Dialogue Scene 1	Emphasize Francis's ruthless pragmatism and disdain for sentimentality by expanding on his monologue about euthanizing the dog. Explore how this incident serves as a microcosm of his approach to power and decision-making.
Action Scene 5	Heighten the tension in Russo's interaction with Chapman by showing him physically intimidate Chapman to secure his support. This action would convey the extent of Russo's corrupt and unethical nature.
Visual Scene 11	Use a symbolic image, such as a bird's-eye view of Francis's vehicle pulling away from Nancy's house, to visually convey his cold and calculating response to her disappointment.
Character Arc	Enhance Francis's descent into ruthless ambition by adding a scene where he secretly undermines a rival politician, revealing the lengths he is willing to go to achieve his goals.
Story Arc Scene 27	Create a turning point in Zoe's arc by having her discover a piece of incriminating information that forces her to confront the moral implications of her alliance with Francis. This could deepen her character and add a layer of suspense to the narrative.

Media and Influence

20%

The media plays a significant role in shaping public opinion and uncovering political scandals.

The theme highlights the power of the media to influence events and scrutinize those in power.

Ambition and Betrayal

18%

Francis's relentless pursuit of power leads him to betray those closest to him, including his wife, Claire.

The theme examines the destructive nature of ambition and the sacrifices individuals make to achieve their goals.

Manipulation and Deception

15%

Francis and others use various forms of manipulation and deception to achieve their objectives.

The theme explores the tactics used by individuals to gain an advantage and the consequences of these actions.

Love and Relationships

12%

Francis and Claire's complex and strained relationship serves as a backdrop to the political machinations.

The theme examines the challenges and sacrifices faced by individuals in relationships, particularly in the context of power and ambition.

Political Intrigue

10%

The behind-the-scenes maneuvers and power struggles within the political arena.

The theme provides a glimpse into the complexities of political life and the lengths to which individuals will go to gain influence.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Robert McKee: "The audience doesn’t go to the movies to see plot; they go to feel emotion, to be moved."

Scene by Scene Emotions

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	The protagonist's internal goals focus on power, influence, and control in various situations, reflecting his ambition and desire for success.
External Goals	The protagonist's external goals revolve around navigating the political landscape, securing positions of influence, and managing relationships with key figures.
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict in the screenplay revolves around the tension between power, ambition, and morality, as the protagonist navigates the complexities of politics and personal relationships.

Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals drive his character development, showcasing his ambition, struggles with power and influence, and moral dilemmas. The philosophical conflict challenges his beliefs and values, leading to introspection and growth.

Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to the narrative structure by providing motivation for the protagonist's actions, creating tension and conflict in key scenes, and driving the plot forward. They help establish the protagonist's arc and interactions with other characters.

Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict add depth to the themes of power, ambition, morality, and integrity in the screenplay. They explore the complexities of political relationships, personal desires, and ethical dilemmas, enriching the story with layers of meaning and complexity.

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

Scene Analysis

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Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Character Changes	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Opposition	High stakes	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - A Necessary Act	Intense, Sympathetic, Mysterious	9	9	8	9	9	8	9	8	8	8	8	9	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
2 - Ambition and Power	Scheming, Calculating, Ambitious, Ominous	8	9	8	9	9	6	9	8	7	8	8	9	8	6	8	9	9	9	9
3 - Intimate Car Ride	Intimate, Sensual, Playful	8	7	6	8	9	6	8	7	4	6	3	5	6	7	8	9	9	9	9
4 - Clash of Vision	Serious, Tense, Confrontational	8	8	7	8	9	7	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	6	9	9	8	8	8
5 - Lobbying for Zoning Laws	Sarcastic, Intense, Manipulative	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	8	8	8	9	8	6	8	9	8	8	8
6 - Dashed Ambition	Serious, Tense, Resentful	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7.5	9	8	9	9	8	8	9	9	8	8	8
7 - Staff Reorganization Discussion	Serious, Intense, Tense	8	8	8	7	7	6	8	7	8	7	7	8	6	8	8	8	8	9	9
8 - A Cold Rejection	Ruthless, Humiliating, Frustrated	8	8	8	8	9	7	8	7	8	8	7	8	7	6	8	8	8	9	9
9 - Confrontation	Tense, Reflective, Intense	9	9	8	8	9	8	9	8	8	8	7	8	8	9	9	9	9	9	9
10 - Morning Aftermath	Intimate, Reflective, Resigned	8	8	7	9	9	7	9	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
11 - Unexpected Interruption	Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic	8	8	8	8	9	7	8	7.5	8	7	8	9	8	7	8	9	8	8	8
12 - Strategic Planning Session	Intense, Strategic, Calculating	9	9	9	8	9	7	9	8	8	8	8	9	7	7	8	8	8	9	9
13 - Francis's Dark Ambition	Scheming, Calculating, Intense, Dark	9	9	9	8.5	9	8	8	7.5	9	8	9	9	8	8	8	9	8.5	8	8
14 - The Dangers of Pride	Serious, Reflective, Inspirational	8	9	7	8	8	6	8	7	3	7	4	5	7	7	7	8	8	9	9
15 - An Uncomfortable Encounter	Serious, Tense, Resentful	8	8	7	9	9	6	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
16 - Intimate Confessions	Intimate, Playful, Serious	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	5	6	7	8	8	9	8	8	8
17 - Francis' Discomfort at the Kennedy Center	Tension, Discomfort, Diplomacy, Pity	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	7	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
18 - A Cold Night at the Kennedy Center	Tense, Dramatic, Intense, Emotional, Suspenseful	8	8	7	7	9	7	8	7	8	7	8	8	7	8	8	8	8	9	9
19 - Francis's Gaming Obsession	Intense, Dark, Tense, Emotional	8	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	8	7	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
20 - A Bittersweet Goodbye	Bittersweet, Resigned, Polite	8	8	7	8	9	6	8	7	6	7	5	6	7	8	8	8	8	9	9
21 - Zoe's Witty Response	Intense, Suspenseful, Confrontational, Emotional	8	8	7	9	9	8	8	7	9	7	8	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
22 - The President's Meeting	Serious, Tense, Diplomatic	8	8	8	8	7	6	8	7.5	7	8	8	8	7	6	8	9	8	8	8
23 - Francis's Strategic Approach	Intense, Calculating, Diplomatic	8	8	8	8	8	7	8	7	8	7	8	8	7	7	7	9	8	9	9
24 - Personnel and Budget	Serious, Intense, Resolute	8	8	8	9	8	6	8	7	7	7	8	8	7	6	8	9	8	8	8
25 - Mutual Appreciation Club	Intense, Intriguing, Scheming	8	8	8	9	9	6	8	7.5	8	8	7	8	8	7	9	9	8	8	8
26 - Trust and Collaboration	Intense, Manipulative, Seductive	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	7	10	9	8	8	8
27 - Francis Meets Zoe Barnes	Tense, Strategic, Witty, Polite	8	8	7	8	9	5	8	7	6	7	6	8	7	6	9	8	9	9	9
28 - Traffic Stop on Michigan Avenue	Humorous, Sarcastic, Confrontational	8	8	8	9	9	6	8	7	8	7	7	8	8	7	9	9	8	8	8
29 - A Late Night Proposal	Intense, Strategic, Suspenseful	8	8	8	9	8	7	8	9	8	8	9	9	8	6	9	9	9	8	8
30 - Argument in the Car	Tense, Confrontational, Serious	8	7	8	8	9	7	7	8	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	9	8	9	9
31 - Breakfast Negotiations	Serious, Strategic, Witty	8	8	7	9	9	5	8	7	5	7	6	8	7	6	8	9	8	8	8
32 - Francis's Ultimatum	Intense, Manipulative, Strategic	8	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	9	8	9	9	7	6	9	9	9	8	8
33 - Hush Money	Intense, Dark, Suspenseful	8	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	8	7	8	8	8	7	8	9	8	8	8
34 - A Proposal of Power	Strategic, Intense, Intriguing	8	9	8	9	9	7	9	8	8	8	8	9	8	7	9	9	8	8	8
35 - Mysterious Call	Suspenseful, Intense, Mysterious	8	7	8	8	7	6	8	7	7	7	8	8	7	6	6	8	8	9	9
36 - A Delicate Dance	Strategic, Witty, Intense	8	8	8	8	8	7	8	7	8	8	8	9	8	7	9	9	9	9	9
37 - Preparations and Requests	Intense, Strategic, Witty	8	8	8	8	8	7	8	9	8	8	9	9	8	6	9	9	9	9	9
38 - Francis Confronts Russo	Intense, Suspenseful, Confrontational	9	9	9	8	9	8	9	8	9	8	9	9	8	8	9	9	9	9	9
39 - The Bombshell Document	Serious, Intense, Determined	8	8	9	9	8	6	8	7	8	8	8	9	7	6	7	9	9	8	8
40 - The Inauguration and Inaugural Ball	Formal, Intriguing, Elegant	8	8	7	8	8	5	8	7	6	7	8	8	7	6	8	8	8	9	9
41 - Freddy's BBQ Joint	Suspenseful, Intense, Serious	8	8	8	9	7	6	8	7	9	7	9	9	7	7	7	9	8	8	8
42 - Francis' Triumph and Reflection	Intense, Serious, Reflective	8	8	7	9	9	6	8	6	7	7	8	8	6	7	8	8	8	8	7

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
Tip: Click on criteria in the top row for detailed summaries.

Scene Strengths

Sharp dialogue
Complex characters
Intriguing plot development
Intense character dynamics
Emotional depth

Scene Weaknesses

Limited emotional depth
Limited external conflict
Limited character development
Lack of overt emotional impact
Some cliched elements

Suggestions

Consider adding more external conflict to increase tension and excitement
Work on developing characters further to create more emotional depth and impact
Avoid using cliches and predictable dynamics to keep the story fresh and engaging
Incorporate more visual action and description to vary the pacing and create a more dynamic experience for the viewer
Ensure character motivations are clear and well-defined to avoid ambiguity and confusion

World Building

Physical environment: The screenplay presents a modern, urban environment that depicts the political landscape of Washington D.C. The characters inhabit offices, attend fancy parties, and navigate the bustling streets of the city. The upscale settings, such as the townhouse, the Kennedy Center, and the Red and White Ball, reflect the affluence and power of the characters. The political atmosphere is palpable, with scenes taking place in the Capitol building, newsrooms, and campaign headquarters. The world depicted is one of ambition, power struggles, and moral ambiguity.
Culture: The screenplay portrays a culture of power and ambition in the political sphere. The characters are driven by their desire for influence, position, and control. Manipulation, deceit, and backstabbing are prevalent as characters seek to advance their agendas. The news media plays a significant role in shaping the narratives and influencing public opinion. The world reflects a society where success is often measured by political power, media attention, and financial wealth.
Society: The societal structure depicted in the screenplay is hierarchical, with power concentrated among a select few. The characters belong to the political elite, who wield significant influence and privilege. The relationships between characters are often dictated by their positions of power or mutual interests. The screenplay also highlights the gap between the powerful elite and the general public.
Technology: Technology plays a noticeable role in the screenplay, reflecting a modern society heavily reliant on communication, media, and information technology. Cell phones, computers, laptops, and news websites are frequently used by characters to stay connected, access information, and manipulate the narrative. The use of technology highlights the fast-paced and competitive environment of the political world.
Characters influence: The world of power and ambition significantly shapes the experiences and actions of the characters. The characters' aspirations, motivations, and decisions are driven by their desire to gain or maintain power. Francis Underwood, the protagonist, is a master manipulator who constantly calculates and plans his moves to achieve his goals. He embodies the cutthroat nature of the political arena, where morality is often compromised in the pursuit of success. Other characters, such as Zoe Barnes and Doug Stamper, also navigate the political landscape, facing moral dilemmas and making difficult choices.
Narrative contribution: The world of power and ambition serves as the backdrop for the complex narrative of the screenplay. It sets the stage for the political machinations, conflicts, and betrayals that unfold. The physical environment, cultural elements, and societal structure contribute to the development of the plot. The narrative explores the consequences of ambition and the lengths people will go to achieve their goals.
Thematic depth contribution: The world of power and ambition adds depth to the screenplay's themes. It highlights the clash between personal ambition and moral values. The characters' struggles and choices raise questions about the nature of power, the cost of success, and the limits of morality. The screenplay delves into the consequences of unchecked ambition, showing how the pursuit of power can corrupt and destroy individuals.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	The writer's voice is characterized by sharp dialogue, introspective narration, and a focus on moral ambiguity. The writing is intelligent, suspenseful, and thought-provoking, with a hint of dark humor.
Voice Contribution	The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a sense of tension, suspense, and moral complexity. The sharp dialogue and introspective narration add depth to the characters and their motivations, while the focus on moral ambiguity keeps the audience guessing.
Best Representation Scene	11 - Unexpected Interruption
Best Scene Explanation	This scene is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively combines sharp dialogue, political intrigue, and moral ambiguity. The characters are complex and their motivations are unclear, which keeps the audience guessing. The scene also highlights the writer's ability to create tension and suspense.

Style and Similarities

The screenplay exhibits a distinct writing style characterized by sharp and witty dialogue, compelling character dynamics, and a strong focus on political intrigue and power struggles. The scenes often delve into moral complexities, exploring the ethical dilemmas and personal motivations of the characters. The dialogue is particularly noteworthy, driving the narrative forward and revealing the underlying tensions and conflicts between the characters.

Style Similarities:

Writer	Explanation
Aaron Sorkin	Aaron Sorkin's influence is evident throughout the screenplay. His trademark style of rapid-fire, intelligent dialogue, coupled with his ability to craft complex and engaging characters, is showcased in numerous scenes. Many of the scenes analyzed draw comparisons to Sorkin's works, highlighting the influence of his writing on the screenplay's overall style.
Beau Willimon	Beau Willimon's contributions are also significant. His expertise in political drama and his exploration of power dynamics and manipulation are reflected in several scenes. The screenplay's focus on political intrigue, power struggles, and the moral dilemmas faced by characters aligns with Willimon's writing style.

Other Similarities: While Sorkin and Willimon's styles are dominant, the screenplay also incorporates elements from other notable writers, such as David Mamet, Nora Ephron, and David Fincher. This blend of influences contributes to the screenplay's richness and depth.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
Tense and Intense Tones	Scenes with a 'Tense' tone often also have an 'Intense' tone. This combination creates a sense of urgency and high stakes, keeping the reader engaged.
High Stakes and Emotional Impact	Scenes with 'High Stakes' tend to have a stronger 'Emotional Impact' on the reader. This is because the consequences of the characters' actions are more significant and emotionally resonant.
Strategic and Witty Dialogue	Scenes with 'Strategic' dialogue often also have 'Witty' dialogue. This combination creates a sense of intellectual sparring and adds depth to the conversations between characters.
Character Changes and Emotional Impact	Scenes with significant 'Character Changes' often have a stronger 'Emotional Impact' on the reader. This is because the reader can witness the characters' growth and development firsthand.
Intense and Suspenseful Scenes Move the Story Forward	Scenes with an 'Intense' and 'Suspenseful' tone are more likely to 'Move the Story Forward.' This is because these scenes often contain important plot developments or revelations.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

The screenplay's writing style showcases a strong ability to create tension, conflict, and character dynamics through sharp dialogue and well-crafted interactions. The writer effectively establishes character goals, motivations, and internal struggles, setting up future conflicts and character development. Additionally, the writer demonstrates skill in creating complex power dynamics and exploring themes of desire, responsibility, and moral ambiguity.

Key Improvement Areas

Dialogue

Consistently, multiple scenes received suggestions for improving dialogue, either through exercises or screenplay recommendations.

Scene Structure

Several scenes provided suggestions for improving scene structure, formatting, and pacing.

Character Development

Many scenes included suggestions for deepening character development and motivations.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Book	Read 'Screenplay: The Foundations of Screenwriting' by Syd Field	This book provides a comprehensive foundation in screenplay structure, character development, and formatting.
Exercise	Practice writing dialogue-heavy scenes with subtext, hidden agendas, and conflicting motivationsPractice In SceneProv	This exercise will enhance the writer's ability to create tension, reveal character depth, and drive the narrative forward.
Course	Take a course on character development for film and television	A structured course will provide the writer with tools and techniques to create compelling and well-rounded characters.

Additional Notes: The writer has a strong foundation in creating engaging scenes with compelling characters and conflicts. By focusing on improving dialogue, scene structure, and character development, the writer can elevate their craft and create even more impactful and memorable screenplays.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
Anti-Hero	Francis Underwood is a complex and morally ambiguous character. He is ambitious, ruthless, and willing to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. However, he also has a sense of justice and a deep love for his wife, Claire.	The anti-hero is a protagonist who is not a traditional hero in the sense that they are not purely good or altruistic, but they are still rooted for by the audience.
Power Corrupts	As Francis Underwood rises to power, he becomes increasingly corrupt and ruthless. He is willing to betray his friends, lie to his wife, and even commit murder in order to achieve his goals.	This trope explores the idea that power corrupts even the most well-intentioned people.
Ambition	Francis Underwood is driven by his ambition to become President of the United States. He is willing to do anything to achieve his goals, even if it means hurting others.	This trope explores the theme of ambition and its potential consequences.
Love Triangle	Francis Underwood is caught in a love triangle between his wife, Claire, and Zoe Barnes, a young reporter. He loves Claire, but he is attracted to Zoe's intelligence and ambition.	This trope involves a romantic relationship between three characters.
The Power of Manipulation	Francis Underwood is a master manipulator. He is able to get people to do what he wants, even if they don't realize it. He uses his charm, intelligence, and ruthlessness to achieve his goals.	This trope involves a character who is able to control or influence others through manipulation.
Breaking the Fourth Wall	Francis Underwood often breaks the fourth wall and speaks directly to the audience. This gives the audience a sense of intimacy with the character and allows him to share his thoughts and feelings directly.	This trope involves a character who speaks directly to the audience, breaking the illusion of the fourth wall.
The Chessmaster	Francis Underwood is a master strategist. He is always thinking several steps ahead and is able to anticipate the moves of his opponents. He is able to outmaneuver his enemies and achieve his goals.	This trope involves a character who is a brilliant strategist.
The Ruthless Politician	Francis Underwood is a ruthless politician. He is willing to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, even if it means breaking the law or hurting others.	This trope involves a character who is a ruthless politician.
The Fallen Hero	Francis Underwood is a fallen hero. He was once a respected politician, but he has become corrupt and ruthless in his pursuit of power.	This trope involves a character who falls from grace or becomes corrupted.
The Upper Class Villain	Francis Underwood is an upper class villain. He is a wealthy and powerful man who uses his position to hurt others.	This trope involves a villain who is wealthy and powerful.

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
40	Francis: Power is like real estate. It’s all about location, location, location.
6	FRANCIS: The nature of promises, Linda, is that they remain immune to changing circumstances.
42	Francis Underwood: There are two kinds of pain, but only one kind of pleasure - total, unstoppable, undeniable victory.
13	Francis: He’ll still be smiling when I slit his throat.
10	Francis: I love that woman. I love her more than sharks love the smell of blood.

Some Loglines to consider:

A ruthless politician will stop at nothing to conquer Washington D.C., in this dark political drama.
Under the guise of a charming Southern gentleman, a congressman orchestrates his rise to power one scandal at a time.
Behind every great politician lies a greater, darker ambition, as Francis Underwood is ready to manipulate, betray, and commit the unthinkable to achieve his goals.
In the high stakes game of political power, betrayal is just the beginning.
Welcome to Washington D.C., where the stakes are high and the morals are low.
A ruthless and ambitious Congressman, Francis Underwood, navigates the treacherous world of Washington politics, using his cunning and manipulation to climb the ladder of power, even if it means betraying those closest to him.
When a rising political star, Garrett Walker, reneges on a promise to make Francis Underwood the Secretary of State, Underwood embarks on a relentless quest to regain control and reshape the political landscape to his own benefit.
In the cutthroat world of Washington, D.C., a House Majority Whip, Francis Underwood, must navigate a web of lies, deception, and power plays to maintain his influence and secure his place at the top of the political hierarchy.
A Southern Democratic Congressman, Francis Underwood, uses his cunning and manipulation to outmaneuver his political rivals and climb the ranks of power, even if it means sacrificing his principles and betraying those he once trusted.
Driven by an insatiable ambition, a House Majority Whip, Francis Underwood, embarks on a calculated and ruthless campaign to consolidate power and reshape the political landscape, putting his personal relationships and moral compass to the test.

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