House of cards pilot
Executive Summary
Poster
Overview
Genres: Thriller, Political Drama, Drama, Political, Romance, Political Thriller, Character Study, Comedy, Journalism
Setting: Modern day, Washington, D.C. and surrounding areas
Overview: The pilot episode of House of Cards follows cunning politician Francis Underwood as he navigates the treacherous waters of Washington D.C. after being passed over for Secretary of State. Driven by ambition, he enlists the help of a young reporter, Zoe Barnes, to expose his enemies. Meanwhile, Zoe's ambitions clash with the old guard at her newspaper. This sets the stage for a gripping power struggle that questions morality, ambition, and the price of loyalty. The pilot ends with Francis coldly manipulating a situation to his advantage, leaving the audience eagerly anticipating the next chapter in his ruthless pursuit of power.
Themes: Power and Corruption, Media and Influence, Ambition and Betrayal, Manipulation and Deception, Love and Relationships, Political Intrigue
Conflict and Stakes: Francis's ruthless pursuit of power and his willingness to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. The high stakes involved in the political game, where one wrong move can have disastrous consequences.
Overall Mood: Dark, suspenseful, and cynical.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: The opening scene, in which Francis euthanizes a dog, sets the tone for the rest of the series. It is a cold and calculating scene that shows Francis's ruthless nature.
- Scene 7: The scene in which Francis confronts Zoe about her story is another key scene in terms of mood. It is a tense and confrontational scene that shows Francis's power and influence.
- Scene 10: The scene in which Claire confronts Francis about his ambition is a powerful and emotional scene. It shows the strain that Francis's ambition is putting on their relationship.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The show's unique and compelling premise: a behind-the-scenes look at the world of politics, told from the perspective of the ruthless and ambitious Francis Underwood.
- Plot Twist: The show's shocking and unexpected plot twists, which keep viewers on the edge of their seats.
- Distinctive Setting: The show's unique and distinctive setting: the world of politics in Washington, D.C.
- Innovative Ideas: The show's innovative use of technology, including social media and online streaming.
- Unique Characters: The show's unique and complex characters, who are both fascinating and flawed.
- Genre Blend: The show's unique blend of genres, including political drama, thriller, and black comedy.
Comparable Scripts:
- House of Cards
- The West Wing
- Scandal
- The Wire
- Breaking Bad
- The Godfather
- The Shawshank Redemption
- The Matrix
- Fight Club
- The Lord of the Rings
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a distinct writing style characterized by sharp and witty dialogue, compelling character dynamics, and a strong focus on political intrigue and power struggles. The scenes often delve into moral complexities, exploring the ethical dilemmas and personal motivations of the characters. The dialogue is particularly noteworthy, driving the narrative forward and revealing the underlying tensions and conflicts between the characters.
Style Similarities:
- Aaron Sorkin
- Beau Willimon
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Highly Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for 'House of Cards' pilot is a compelling introduction to a political drama centered around power, manipulation, and ambition. It effectively sets up the main character, Francis Underwood, as a complex anti-hero. The narrative is engaging, with well-paced political intrigue and strong character development. The use of direct camera addresses is a notable stylistic choice that enhances the storytelling.
USP: **Unique Selling Proposition** Journey into the world of "House of Cards," an electrifying political drama that captivates with its unique blend of realism and ruthless ambition. Through its distinct elements, "House of Cards" sets itself apart as a gripping and thought-provoking series: * **Authentic Storytelling:** Experience the raw and intricate power dynamics within the halls of Congress as the series delves into the complexities of political maneuvering, corruption, and the insatiable hunger for power. * **Complex Characters:** Immerse yourself in a cast of morally ambiguous characters driven by ambition, deceit, and vulnerability. Their motivations are as murky as the corridors they navigate, making their every move unpredictable. * **Sharp Dialogue:** Engage with razor-sharp dialogue that cuts through the political jargon and exposes the underlying desires and manipulations of the characters. Each conversation is a masterclass in wit and strategy. * **Thrilling Plotlines:** Be on the edge of your seat as the series weaves intricate plotlines that intertwine personal ambition, political intrigue, and the quest for absolute power. The stakes are high, and the consequences are dire. * **Deep Exploration of Morality:** Challenge your own moral compass as the series forces you to confront the blurred lines between right and wrong, loyalty and betrayal, and the sacrifices one is willing to make in the pursuit of success. "House of Cards" is a captivating and unflinching exploration of the corridors of power, where ambition and morality collide in a relentless game of strategy and deception. Prepare to be engrossed in a world where every move carries weight and the price of success is as high as the stakes themselves.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$100 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, fans of political dramas and thrillers
Marketability: It has all the ingredients for success: a strong cast, a compelling story, and a timely political message.
The show's dark and complex characters and its unflinching look at the world of politics could alienate some viewers.
The show's strong word-of-mouth and critical acclaim could help it overcome any potential obstacles to its success.
Profit Potential: Very high, due to its strong appeal to a wide adult audience and its potential for award nominations and international sales.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by sharp dialogue, introspective narration, and a focus on moral ambiguity. The writing is intelligent, suspenseful, and thought-provoking, with a hint of dark humor.
Best representation: Scene 11 - Strategic Planning Session. This scene is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively combines sharp dialogue, political intrigue, and moral ambiguity. The characters are complex and their motivations are unclear, which keeps the audience guessing. The scene also highlights the writer's ability to create tension and suspense.
Memorable Lines:
- Francis: Power is like real estate. It’s all about location, location, location. (Scene 40)
- FRANCIS: The nature of promises, Linda, is that they remain immune to changing circumstances. (Scene 6)
- Francis Underwood: There are two kinds of pain, but only one kind of pleasure - total, unstoppable, undeniable victory. (Scene 42)
- Francis: He’ll still be smiling when I slit his throat. (Scene 13)
- Francis: I love that woman. I love her more than sharks love the smell of blood. (Scene 10)
Characters
Francis Underwood:An ambitious and ruthless politician who will stop at nothing to achieve his goals.
Claire Underwood:Francis's strong-willed and equally ambitious wife who is fully involved in his political endeavors.
Zoe Barnes:A young and ambitious journalist who is determined to make a name for herself.
Doug Stamper:Francis's loyal and ruthless chief of staff.
Remy Danton:A lobbyist who is involved in Francis's political machinations.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - A Necessary Act | Intense, Sympathetic, Mysterious | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - Ambition and Power | Scheming, Calculating, Ambitious, Ominous | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
3 - Intimate Car Ride | Intimate, Sensual, Playful | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
4 - Clash of Vision | Serious, Tense, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Lobbying for Zoning Laws | Sarcastic, Intense, Manipulative | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Dashed Ambition | Serious, Tense, Resentful | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Staff Reorganization Discussion | Serious, Intense, Tense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
8 - A Cold Rejection | Ruthless, Humiliating, Frustrated | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
9 - Confrontation | Tense, Reflective, Intense | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
10 - Morning Aftermath | Intimate, Reflective, Resigned | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Unexpected Interruption | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - Strategic Planning Session | Intense, Strategic, Calculating | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
13 - Francis's Dark Ambition | Scheming, Calculating, Intense, Dark | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - The Dangers of Pride | Serious, Reflective, Inspirational | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
15 - An Uncomfortable Encounter | Serious, Tense, Resentful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Intimate Confessions | Intimate, Playful, Serious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - Francis' Discomfort at the Kennedy Center | Tension, Discomfort, Diplomacy, Pity | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - A Cold Night at the Kennedy Center | Tense, Dramatic, Intense, Emotional, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
19 - Francis's Gaming Obsession | Intense, Dark, Tense, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - A Bittersweet Goodbye | Bittersweet, Resigned, Polite | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
21 - Zoe's Witty Response | Intense, Suspenseful, Confrontational, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - The President's Meeting | Serious, Tense, Diplomatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - Francis's Strategic Approach | Intense, Calculating, Diplomatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
24 - Personnel and Budget | Serious, Intense, Resolute | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - Mutual Appreciation Club | Intense, Intriguing, Scheming | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Trust and Collaboration | Intense, Manipulative, Seductive | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - Francis Meets Zoe Barnes | Tense, Strategic, Witty, Polite | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
28 - Traffic Stop on Michigan Avenue | Humorous, Sarcastic, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - A Late Night Proposal | Intense, Strategic, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Argument in the Car | Tense, Confrontational, Serious | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
31 - Breakfast Negotiations | Serious, Strategic, Witty | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
32 - Francis's Ultimatum | Intense, Manipulative, Strategic | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - Hush Money | Intense, Dark, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
34 - A Proposal of Power | Strategic, Intense, Intriguing | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - Mysterious Call | Suspenseful, Intense, Mysterious | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
36 - A Delicate Dance | Strategic, Witty, Intense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
37 - Preparations and Requests | Intense, Strategic, Witty | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
38 - Francis Confronts Russo | Intense, Suspenseful, Confrontational | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
39 - The Bombshell Document | Serious, Intense, Determined | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - The Inauguration and Inaugural Ball | Formal, Intriguing, Elegant | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
41 - Freddy's BBQ Joint | Suspenseful, Intense, Serious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
42 - Francis' Triumph and Reflection | Intense, Serious, Reflective | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
Scene 1 - A Necessary Act
SLOWLY PULL IN on the front door of a fashionable DC
townhouse.
Off-screen, we hear the SOUND OF SCREECHING TIRES followed by
a LOUD COLLISION. A CAR ALARM blares.
After a moment, the door to the townhouse opens and A MAN
emerges, curious to see what the commotion is outside.
As the Man comes into the light we see he’s dressed in a
crisp TUXEDO with the collar unfastened, no tie. This is
FRANCIS UNDERWOOD - Richard III, Iago and Hannibal Lecter all
rolled into one. He has intelligent eyes, mischievous lips
and a deep baritone dripping with Southern charm.
Francis glances down the street. He see a CAR backing up
then PEELING AWAY from the parked car that it just hit. It
disappears around the block.
As Francis heads purposefully toward the scene of the
accident, we begin to hear a DOG WHIMPERING IN PAIN. Francis
looks down at the ground. Francis’ security detail guy STEVE
(40s) appears beside him.
FRANCIS
Did you get a good look?
STEVE
Blue Toyota Camry. First two
letters of the plate.
Francis and Steve gaze down at the suffering animal.
FRANCIS
The Warton’s dog.
STEVE
Looks like a broken back.
FRANCIS
It’s not gonna make it.
(to Steve)
Go next door and see if they’re
home.
Steve heads towards the neighbors’ townhouse.
Francis kneels down beside the dog. It’s in awful shape. He
tenderly strokes the dog’s head.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Shhhh. It’s okay...
2.
Francis looks up at us. The sound of CAR ALARM FADES.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(to the camera)
There are two kinds of pain. Good
pain - the sort of pain that
motivates, that makes you strong.
Then there’s bad pain - useless
pain, the sort of pain that’s only
suffering. I welcome the former.
I have no patience for the latter.
With cool-headed deliberateness, Francis calmly places a hand
around the dog’s neck and begins to put it out of its misery.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(to the camera)
Moments like this require someone
like me. Someone who will act.
Who will do what no one else has
the courage to do. The unpleasant
thing. The necessary thing.
The Dog’s muffled whimpers cease. Francis looks down.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(to the dog)
There. No more pain.
He lets go. The sound of the CAR ALARM RISES again.
Francis stands as Steve approaches. The shook-up neighbors,
JACK and BARBARA WARTON, follow several yards behind.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(aside, to Steve)
We need to leave in ten minutes.
STEVE
Car’s ready.
Francis turns his attention to the couple. He gently
approaches them with endless sympathy in his eyes.
FRANCIS
It was a hit and run.
JACK
(to his wife)
He must’ve jumped over the gate
again...
Barbara wells up. Francis lays a hand on her shoulder.
3.
FRANCIS
I’m so sorry. I’ll have Steve file
a report. We’ll track them down.
Ratings
Scene 2 - Ambition and Power
Francis stands at his sink, methodically washing his hands.
INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - BEDROOM - MOMENTS LATER
CLOSE ON FRANCIS’ HANDS zipping up the back of a woman’s
elegant evening gown.
We PULL BACK to see that the gown belongs to Francis’ wife -
CLAIRE UNDERWOOD. She’s the epitome of elegance and poise.
FRANCIS
(taking her in)
Stunning.
CLAIRE
(straightening his tie)
You too.
Francis looks composed, dignified. If we hadn’t known, we
never would have guessed what he was up to just moments
before. He offers his arm to Claire.
FRANCIS
Ready?
INT. GRAND BALLROOM - SECONDS UNTIL MIDNIGHT
A loud, raucous count-down. DC's Democratic Party elite are
watching the Times Square ball drop on massive monitors.
Three! Two! One! Noisemakers. Applause. People kiss and
hug. The sound fades as one face in the crowd, Francis, turns
to the camera.
We PAN to the stage to reveal a beaming GARRETT WALKER (late
40s), the apotheosis of leadership. He’s flanked by his
family - wife PATRICIA and two teenage sons. They lead the
crowd in “Auld Lang Syne.”
FRANCIS (V.O.)
President-Elect Garrett Walker. I
might not like him, I might not
believe in him, but it doesn’t
matter...
4.
The camera finds Francis in the adoring crowd.
FRANCIS
(staring up at Walker)
Anyone who can get 70 million
Americans to vote for him deserves
my respect.
(to the camera)
I helped get him elected. After
twenty-five years in Congress I can
tell which way the wind is blowing.
We CUT TO to Walker’s soon-to-be V.P. JIM MATTHEWS (early
60s) and his large gaggle of a family.
FRANCIS (V.O.)
Jim Matthews - his Vice President.
Former Governor of Pennsylvania.
He did his duty delivering the
Keystone State. Now they’ll put
him pasture. He has four years of
obscurity and impotence ahead of
him.
CUT TO Walker’s recently appointed Chief of Staff LINDA
VASQUEZ. She’s in the back of the ballroom, being prepped
with make-up for a TV stand-up interview.
FRANCIS (V.O.)
Linda Vasquez - Walker’s Chief of
Staff. I like her even less than
Walker, but she’s the gate keeper
to the White House. If you don’t
want to be left standing out in the
cold, you can’t ignore the person
holding the keys.
The lights from the TV cam flip on, bathing her face in a
bright glow. She instantly flashes a toothy smile.
We CUT BACK TO Francis standing in the crowd, his arm around
Claire’s waist. She’s singing along with the crowd.
FRANCIS
As for me - I’m the House Majority
Whip. In other words - I get things
done. When it comes to legislation
I make the magic happen. I
transform the impossible into the
probable.
We ZOOM IN SLOWLY on Francis.
5.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
But it’s time to move up a rung.
I’ve paid my dues. I’ve backed the
right man. And now that he’s won
I’ll get my just reward. Give and
take, give and take, and so the
world spins.
TIGHT on Francis’ face, filling the frame.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Welcome to Washington.
TITLE AND CREDITS
Iconic shots of D.C. - the Capitol, the Washington Monument,
Lincoln Memorial, Reflecting Pool, etc. But we see them from
odd angles, cast in dark shadows or beneath moody skies. The
feeling should be ominous.
We shift to interiors - dark hallways and restaurant booths
where slow-motion, silhouetted figures conspire with one
another.
Interlaced with all of this are recurring shots of dextrous
hands expertly shuffling a deck of cards and dealing them
out. The FINAL IMAGE should be of the dealer unveiling his
hand to the camera: not four, but FIVE one-eyed jacks.
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Scene 3 - Intimate Car Ride
Francis and Claire ride in the back the SUV. Steve drives.
CLAIRE
(she runs her hand through
his hair)
You should get a hair cut.
FRANCIS
You think?
CLAIRE
Just a little trim maybe. What
suit are you going to wear?
FRANCIS
For the meeting, or for the -
CLAIRE
For the announcement.
6.
FRANCIS
My navy blue one, with the pin
stripes.
CLAIRE
Good. You look handsome in that
suit.
She leans into him, slips her hand between his thighs. She
starts to kiss his neck.
FRANCIS
(in a whisper)
We’re only five minutes from the
house.
CLARIE
You’re going to make me wait?
FRANCIS
(with a sly smile)
Patience is a virtue.
CLAIRE
I’m not feeling very virtuous
tonight.
He smiles, leans in and kisses her.
Ratings
Scene 4 - Clash of Vision
A bustling bull-pen of writers, editors and assistants.
Mounted TVs blare with 24 hour news channels. The steady
clacking of keyboards wafts from a sea of cubicles.
ZOE BARNES (mid 20s) - a strong and hungry young reporter -
weaves through the cubicles toward a corner office.
Inside LUCAS GOODWIN (mid to late 30s) - the Deputy Editor -
is talking to BOB HAMMERSCHMIDT (early 50s) - the paper’s
grizzled Editor-in-Chief.
Zoe waits by the open door and listens in.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
...Only a nine vote majority in the
House. Every bill that hits the
floor will be a cock-fight.
LUCAS
Yeah it’ll be ugly.
7.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
Any guess what’s on the legislative
agenda?
LUCAS
No idea. All my regular sources
won’t say a word.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
Keep digging.
Hammerschmidt gives him a slap on the back and exits,
brushing past Zoe, whom he barely notices.
ZOE
Morning Mr. Hammerschmidt.
He tries to place a name to the face.
ZOE (CONT’D)
Zoe Barnes.
HAMMERSHMIDT
Metro.
ZOE
That’s right.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
Keep up the good work.
He’s gone. Zoe leans against the doorway a tad provocatively.
ZOE
Did it take him over a year to
remember your name?
LUCAS
What can I do for you Zoe?
ZOE
I’m sick of the City Council.
LUCAS
I know you are. You tell me
everyday.
ZOE
Move me online.
LUCAS
You want to schlep for the twitter
feed? Be my guest.
8.
ZOE
No. My own blog. Five hundred
words. First person. Subjective.
LUCAS
Not gonna happen.
ZOE
Give me some freedom. I’ll go
underground. Win over staff members
on the Hill. Give them an outlet to
vent anonymously.
LUCAS
A glorified gossip column.
ZOE
A forum for the underpaid and
overworked. We’ll lift the veil.
Tap into what’s really going in.
LUCAS
This is the Washington Herald Zoe,
it’s not TMZ.
ZOE
You know how many people watch TMZ?
LUCAS
I couldn’t care less.
ZOE
Which is why print journalism is
dying.
LUCAS
If it’s gonna die, it’ll die with
dignity. At least at this paper.
ZOE
You’re stuck in the 20th century
Lucas. You lack imagination.
LUCAS
Maybe so, but right now I’m not
interested in imagination, I’m
interested in copy.
ZOE
You’re telling me to get back to
work.
LUCAS
I am.
9.
ZOE
But what you’re really telling me
is to fuck off.
LUCAS
I’m telling you both.
Zoe is brimming with frustration but she’s too cool of a
cucumber to let it show. She turns on her heels and departs
as quickly as she came.
Ratings
Scene 5 - Lobbying for Zoning Laws
CHRISTINA MALONE (late 20s) - sexy and headstrong - ushers a
humorless looking LOBBYIST into Rep. Peter Russo’s office.
Christina is Russo’s Executive Assistant. Russo is smart and
amiable, but a bit of rascal.
CHRISTINA
Mr. Chapman, from Horizon Trust...
RUSSO
Henry. Great to see you. Thanks
Christina.
She leaves, closing the door behind her. The two men sit.
RUSSO (CONT’D)
How long are you in town for?
Staying for the Inauguration? I
can hook you up if you -
CHAPMAN
I’m not interested in parties. I’m
interested in the zoning laws you
promised to get changed in your
district. We’ve got 12 million
sitting in escrow for an empty lot
we can’t build on.
RUSSO
Yes, I know. And believe me, I’m
on it. But you gotta understand,
that’s a local municipal issue. I
can’t just pick up the phone and -
CHAPMAN
You can’t? That’s not what you led
us to believe when you begged for
fifty grand in donations.
10.
RUSSO
(realizes what he’s up
against)
Right. Well...
The phone rings. Russo looks sympathetically to Chapman.
RUSSO (CONT’D)
One sec.
(picks up the phone)
Christina I told you - no calls.
Not while I’m meeting with Mr.
Chapman.
(pause)
The President-Elect?
Chapman’s eyes widen.
RUSSO (CONT’D)
Put him through Christina.
(short beat)
Mr. President-Elect...Thank you, we
were pleased to win by double
digits...Absolutely, anything you
need...
CUT TO Christina at her desk outside the office. She’s
whispering into a receiver.
CHRISTINA
I need you to put that long, wet,
talented tongue of yours between my
thighs and make me squeal like
Monica Lewinsky.
CUT BACK TO Russo on his phone. Laughs boisterously.
RUSSO
Me too, me too...Okay, thanks again
Mr. President-Elect.
And he hangs up. Chapman is impressed.
RUSSO (CONT’D)
I’m sorry - what were we
discussing?
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Scene 6 - Dashed Ambition
As the Aide lets Francis into the office, we see that it’s
Vasquez, not Walker, who is behind the desk. Francis
registers a whiff of surprise.
11.
VASQUEZ
Thanks for coming Frank.
(gestures at a chair)
Please...
FRANCIS
(as he sits)
Will the President-Elect be joining
us?
VASQUEZ
No. He told me to apologize on his
behalf. I’ll brief him though.
Francis has no other choice but to roll with the punches. He
hands Vasquez a manila folder.
FRANCIS
This is a memo I drafted on the
Middle East policy we’ve been
developing. I think we need a more
direct way to frame our approach.
We’ll steal from Reagan - trickle-
down diplomacy. If we tackle -
VASQUEZ
Frank - I’m going to stop you right
there.
(half beat)
We’re not nominating you for
Secretary of State.
A huge blow. Francis stares at Vasquez in stunned silence.
VASQUEZ (CONT’D)
I’m sorry, I know he made you a
promise, but circumstances have
changed.
FRANCIS
The nature of promises, Linda, is
that they remain immune to changing
circumstances.
VASQUEZ
Garrett has thought long and hard
about this, and he’s decided we
need you to stay in Congress.
FRANCIS
I built the campaign’s foreign
policy platform from the ground up.
(MORE)
12.
FRANCIS (CONT'D)
I briefed him, I prepped him for
debates. And the deal we agreed
upon was -
VASQUEZ
I’m sorry Frank. If it had been up
to me I would’ve handled this
differently. I wouldn’t have
waited this long to tell you.
FRANCIS
So you knew this was what you were
going to do.
VASQUEZ
It’s been an evolving discussion.
FRANCIS
(slowly)
An evolving discussion...
VASQUEZ
Frank...
FRANCIS
I got fourteen conservative
Democrats in key states to endorse
him. I was personally responsible
for raising over six million
dollars in contributions to the
campaign, seven million for House
races to keep hold of our majority
in -
VASQUEZ
You’re right. We wouldn’t have won
without your help. But now we have
to lead, and that means making
tough choices.
(half beat, now she has
the initiative)
Our first order of business is
Education Reform. A complete
federal overhaul. We want you in
the House, doing what you do best -
counting votes and delivering
legislation.
FRANCIS
I’ve paid my dues Linda. I deserve
this.
13.
VASQUEZ
There are lots of deserving people
Frank. We can’t nominate them all.
FRANCIS
I’d like to speak with Walker
personally.
VASQUEZ
The decision is made.
The two stare each other down like gunslingers.
VASQUEZ (CONT’D)
We need you Frank. Desperately.
Just not in the cabinet. I’m asking
for your help here. Are you going
to stand beside us?
It takes every ounce of will to swallow his pride.
FRANCIS
Yes. I will.
VASQUEZ
I’m very glad to hear that.
FRANCIS
May I ask - if not me, then who?
VASQUEZ
(hesitates, then...)
Michael Kern.
He says the following with a smile, but underneath the table
we can see Francis cracking his knuckles with rage.
FRANCIS
Michael Kern...That’s an excellent
choice.
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Scene 7 - Staff Reorganization Discussion
TO ESTABLISH: A large polished steel sign above a reception
desk that reads:
CLEAN WATER FOR AMERICA
We TRACK an older woman (50s) - EVELYN - carrying a folder
past side offices to CLAIRE’S OFFICE. She knocks on the
door, which is slightly ajar.
14.
CLAIRE (O.S.)
Come in.
INT. CWA OFFICES - CLAIRE’S OFFICE - DAY
Claire is behind her desk. Evelyn sits across from her.
EVELYN
Maybe we should do this in steps.
A couple people at first - see how
that goes, then if we decide --
CLAIRE
This isn’t about operational
efficiency, Eveyln. This is about
freeing up money. It’s a new year.
It’s time to clean house a little.
Spring cleaning, right?
EVELYN
It’s not spring - it’s January.
Claire just stares at her. That was a stupid thing to say.
EVELYN (CONT’D)
I just want to make sure we don’t
cripple our ability to function
properly in the process.
CLAIRE
I hear you, but if I thought that
was going to be an issue, I
wouldn’t be asking for this list in
the first place.
EVELYN
(shifts in her chair)
Okay...
Claire feels the needs to address Evelyn’s discomfort. She
leans forward, sympathetically.
CLAIRE
We went over this before the
holidays.
EVELYN
I know...
CLAIRE
You didn’t mention anything then.
15.
EVELYN
I know...
CLAIRE
We want CWA to maximize it’s
potential, don’t we?
EVELYN
Of course.
CLAIRE
So can we agree it’s time to
reorganize? To raise the bar?
EVELYN
Yes.
CLAIRE
Good. Put a proposal together.
Evelyn stands and exits, closing the door behind her. Claire
glances at her watch. Picks up her phone. Dials. Waits.
No answer. Leaves a message.
CLAIRE (CONT’D)
(into the phone)
It’s me. I feel like an idiot
leaving messages like this. Call
me back.
She hangs up. We linger on her for a moment. An expression
of frustration and concern.
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Scene 8 - A Cold Rejection
JANINE SKORSKY (late 30s) - hard-edged and ruthless - is
punching away at her computer. Zoe leans over her cubicle
partition, lingers for a moment.
JANINE
(not looking up)
What is it Zoe?
ZOE
I know you’re going to have your
hands full at the White House, with
the new administration and
everything, so if you need somebody
to do research, punch out
background -
JANINE
I think I’ll be fine.
16.
ZOE
But if things get hectic, if you
need any help or -
JANINE
So you can blog about rubbing
shoulders with the big boys?
ZOE
Lucas told you.
JANINE
No offense, Zoe, but I don’t have
time to ween you off your training
wheels.
Wham - a slap in the face. Zoe eats it.
ZOE
Okay. Just thought I’d ask.
She walks off, humiliated, fuming.
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Scene 9 - Confrontation
TIGHT on Claire sitting alone, stock still, face grim.
We hear the front door open. In the background we see Francis
enter the room. He looks weary, spent.
He comes into the foreground, sits down across from her.
Shame in his eyes. Disappointment in hers.
FRANCIS
Claire --
CLAIRE
You didn’t call me.
FRANCIS
I was --
CLAIRE
(harder this time)
You didn’t call me, Francis.
Before Francis can defend himself she’s on her feet, all the
pent-up energy from waiting bursting forth. She’s furious.
CLAIRE (CONT’D)
When you didn’t call me right after
I wondered. When I called and you
didn’t call back I knew.
(MORE)
17.
CLAIRE (CONT’D)
You don’t not call me. Not when
it’s this big.
FRANCIS
You’re right.
CLAIRE
When have we ever avoided each
other?
FRANCIS
I wanted to figure out a solution
first.
CLAIRE
Did you?
FRANCIS
No.
A long beat.
CLAIRE
So they lied to your face.
FRANCIS
For months.
CLAIRE
And you didn’t see it coming?
FRANCIS
It was always a possibility. My
mistake wasn’t in failing to
consider this scenario; it was in
miscalculating the risk. I thought
it was almost impossible.
CLAIRE
You’re usually good at sussing out
liars.
FRANCIS
I am. But this time...
(shakes his head)
Hubris. Ambition.
CLAIRE
Those aren’t bad things.
FRANCIS
They are when they blind you.
18.
CLAIRE
Aren’t you angry?
FRANCIS
Of course I am.
CLAIRE
Then where’s your anger?
FRANCIS
You want to me lash out at Walker?
At Vasquez? You want me to go to
the press and make mess of
something I can’t change?
CLAIRE
I want more than what I’m seeing.
FRANCIS
How kind of you.
CLAIRE
I’m not doling out sympathy.
FRANCIS
I didn’t ask for it.
CLAIRE
You’re better than this, Francis.
FRANCIS
(genuinely)
I’m sorry, Claire.
CLAIRE
No. That I won’t accept.
FRANCIS
What?
CLAIRE
Apologies.
Claire looks hard at him. A typical wife might smother him
with sympathy, but not Claire. She knows that’s the worst
thing she could do for a man like Francis.
CLAIRE (CONT’D)
My husband doesn’t apologize, even
to me.
Claire walks out of the room toward the stairs. We follow
her.
19.
As she ascend the stairs we hear a CRASH in the living room,
something SHATTERING. She pauses without turning, just a
fraction of a moment, then continues up the stairs.
BACK ON Francis in the living room. Rage in his eyes. We see
an overturned coffee table. Shards from a broken vase on the
floor. He rights the table. Bends down, picks up the larger
shards and places them on top.
He walks over to the side window. There’s a pack of
cigarettes and a lighter neatly placed on the sill. He
raises the window. Opens the pack. It’s nearly full. He
pulls out one of the cigarettes. Perches himself on the sill.
He turns to us, cooled down by now.
FRANCIS
(to the camera)
My wife and I don’t smoke. Once a
week maybe. Together at this
window. It’s our time to escape.
To be ourselves.
Lights the cigarette. Takes a long drag.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(looks out the window)
But I’m alone now.
(back to us)
She’s left me this way. To myself.
To my thoughts. It’s not a
punishment; it’s a challenge.
He looks back out the window. Takes another drag.
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Scene 10 - Morning Aftermath
Claire is in bed as morning light seeps in through the
window. The bed is empty beside her. Her eyes are open.
She stares at the ceiling. The alarm beeps. She reaches
over, turns it off.
INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - STAIRS - MORNING
Claire descends the stairs in her bathrobe, freshly showered.
When she gets to the bottom of the stairs she sees Francis
sitting beside the window just as he was when she left him
the night before. He doesn’t turn to her. She pauses for a
moment, taking in the tableau, then walks to the kitchen
without a word.
20.
INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - KITCHEN - MORNING
TIGHT on two cups in an espresso machine filling with
steaming coffee.
INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - MORNING
CLOSE ON Francis, taking a cigarette out of the pack. It’s
nearly empty now. He lights it. Inhales. Claire enters
with the espressos. Sits down beside him, places one of the
cups at his side. A moment. He turns to her.
FRANCIS
Did you sleep?
CLAIRE
No.
Claire waits for more. Francis takes a drag.
FRANCIS
I know what I have to do.
CLAIRE
Of course you do.
FRANCIS
We’ll have a lot of nights like
this.
CLAIRE
That doesn’t worry me.
FRANCIS
I’m not sure how yet.
CLAIRE
But you will.
Francis hands her the cigarette. Picks up the espresso and
downs it with one gulp.
FRANCIS
I should get to work.
CLAIRE
I laid a suit out for you upstairs.
The navy blue one.
He gives her a kiss on the forehead. Heads for the stairs.
We FOLLOW HIM as he ascends. He turns to us.
21.
FRANCIS
(to the camera)
I love that woman. I love her more
than sharks love the smell of
blood.
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Scene 11 - Unexpected Interruption
TIGHT on screen. MICHAEL KERN (50s) - clean-cut and handsome
- is speaking at a lectern, flanked by Walker and Vasquez.
The ticker-tape reads: KERN NOMINATED FOR SEC. OF STATE.
CUT TO DOUG STAMPER (early 40s) - Francis’s well-connected,
amoral and loyal Chief-of-Staff - with NANCY KAUFBERGER (50s)
- Francis’s Exec. Assistant. They’re watching the news on a
flat screen in Nancy’s Office.
NANCY
He’s had work done. A chin tuck.
Probably botox. He definitely dyes
his hair.
(after a beat)
Maybe the GOP won’t confirm him.
STAMPER
Oh no, they’ll confirm him. Walker
is riding high. It’s not worth the
political capital. They’ll save
the big guns for legislative
battles.
NANCY
Hey Doug...
He looks up to see Francis striding in from the main door.
Stamper grabs a folder. The boss is here. It’s work time.
Stamper and Nancy head out to intercept him.
STAMPER
(opening the folder)
At 9:30 you’re sitting down with -
FRANCIS
(in stride)
Cancel everything. Stamper, you’re
with me.
Stamper tosses a glance to Nancy. She’s on it. Francis
makes for his office. Stamper follows.
22.
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Scene 12 - Strategic Planning Session
Francis and Stamper behind closed doors. Stamper is trying to
process it all.
STAMPER
How do we get there...?
FRANCIS
We’ll seize opportunities. We’ll
make opportunities. React.
Respond. This is a time for broad
strokes.
STAMPER
I just don’t understand how’re
we’re going to -
FRANCIS
For now we keep focused on what’s
right in front of us.
STAMPER
Kern.
FRANCIS
Yes. And the Education Bill.
STAMPER
Who’s drafting it?
FRANCIS
Vasquez hasn’t told me yet. But
I’m guessing it’ll be Harry Blythe.
STAMPER
He’ll need to be handled.
FRANCIS
Which is exactly why she wants me
here instead of the State
Department.
STAMPER
I can start digging on Kern.
FRANCIS
Get me names first. Let’s have
somebody to give them once Kern is
gone. And we should have a front
man for that. In case we need to
distance ourselves.
23.
STAMPER
Who do you want?
FRANCIS
A lost child. Somebody we can save
from himself.
STAMPER
I’ll keep my ear to the ground.
FRANCIS
Okay, I’m going to get a bite to
eat. I haven’t eaten in two days.
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Scene 13 - Francis's Dark Ambition
Francis waits at the checkout. Junk food heaped on his tray.
We hear some commotion. Entering the mess hall is Michael
Kern followed by a couple of AIDES. People are
congratulating him. He’s smiling like a pig in shit.
Francis makes eye contact with Kern. Smiles. Gives him a
big thumbs up. Kern nods with appreciation. Gets
intercepted by another well-wisher.
Francis picks up his tray and turns to us, the smile on his
face instantly gone.
FRANCIS
(to the camera)
A wink, a nod, a little warmth and
grace - and with that one wraps
oneself in a cloak of civility.
Kern’s not the sharpest knife in
the rack, but he’s not dull either.
He knows I was up for the
nomination. He knows I must be
jealous. But he doesn’t need to
know the danger he’s in. Let him
bask in the limelight for now. I’ll
sharpen my blade in the dark. He’ll
still be smiling when I slit his
throat.
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Scene 14 - The Dangers of Pride
The service is chock full of DC’s political heavyweights,
including Francis and Claire seated near the back. A
MINISTER is in the midst of delivering a sermon.
24.
MINISTER
(reads from scripture)
“And whosoever shall exalt himself
shall be abased; and he that shall
humble himself shall be exalted.“
Matthew 23:12.
(looks up)
I’d like to speak today on the
subject of Humility. A lot of you
just won re-election. If you
hadn’t, you wouldn’t be sitting
here.
A smattering of chuckles among the congregation. CLOSE on
Francis as the minister continues.
MINISTER (O.S.) (CONT’D)
Of course you should be enjoy your
success, and be grateful for it.
But never let your gratitude sour
into pride. You’ll have many
challenges ahead over the next
couple of years. And a person’s
character is not determined by how
he or she enjoys victory, but
rather how he or she endures
defeat...
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Scene 15 - An Uncomfortable Encounter
We’re following Francis and Claire as everyone files out.
FEMALE VOICE (O.S.)
Claire...
They’re approached by another power couple: the longtime
Senator CHARLES HOLBURN and his socialite wife FELICITY, both
immaculately groomed, styled and outfitted.
CLAIRE
Hello Felicity.
Holburn gravitates toward Claire, Holburn toward Francis.
HOLBURN
Frank.
FRANCIS
(shaking his head)
Morning Charles.
We track Claire and Felicity, a few paces ahead of the men.
25.
FELICITY
(to Claire,
sympathetically)
How are you?
CLAIRE
Terrific.
FELCITY
I’m sorry about the...you know.
(nods back toward Francis)
CLAIRE
Oh, you mean the...
FELCITY
Just awful. Charles and I were so
upset when we heard.
CLAIRE
(smiling)
It’s nothing. Really. Between you
and me, I think Francis is
relieved. He feels much more at
home in Congress.
We JUMP OVER to Francis and Holburn.
HOLBURN
I would’ve bet a million dollars
Walker was going to choose you.
FRANCIS
(laughs it off)
Good thing you have a million
dollars to spare.
HOLBURN
But Kern - come on. That’s a real
insult, isn’t it? He’s got half
the experience you do, and less
than half the brain.
FRANCIS
He must’ve had his reasons.
HOLBURN
This is bad for business. We
needed a strong-man in the State
Department, not a straw man.
FRANCIS
We’ll make do.
26.
HOLBURN
You’re a bigger man than me. I’d
be pissed as hell.
Francis and Claire catch each other’s eyes. They appreciate
the sympathy of the Holburns, but they abhor sympathy as a
concept. It feels humiliating.
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Scene 16 - Intimate Confessions
A cluttered high-rise apartment. Russo and his secretary
Christina are having wild, wall-pounding sex.
As soon as Russo climaxes with a primal yawp, he rolls over
and pours himself a drink from the night stand. Takes a sip.
He hands her the glass. Grabs the bottle for himself. Takes
a swig. Regards the bottle.
RUSSO
This is nice, where’d you get it?
CHRISTINA
The Speaker’s holiday party. I
snuck into the V.I.P. room and
stole it.
RUSSO
‘92. Wow. Twenty years old.
CHRISTINA
Seems about right for you.
RUSSO
Funny.
CHRISTINA
(starts to dress)
I’m almost thirty. That’s ancient
in your book.
RUSSO
I don’t discriminate when it comes
to age.
CHRISTINA
When’s the last time you hired a
forty year old assistant?
RUSSO
That doesn’t mean I haven’t, or
that I wouldn’t.
27.
CHRISTINA
As long as they’re good in bed.
RUSSO
Oh come on.
CHRISTINA
You do have a reputation, Peter.
RUSSO
For being a good lover?
CHRISTINA
For fucking the help.
RUSSO
Where’s this coming from?
CHRISTINA
You’re not just gonna get your
kicks, then toss me aside for some
slut straight out of college?
RUSSO
I can’t. You’d sue me for sexual
harassment.
CHRISTINA
I’m serious.
RUSSO
So we’re having that conversation
now?
CHRISTINA
It’s been six months. This isn’t
just a little office fling anymore.
RUSSO
You want me to say the three magic
words, don’t you? One of which
starts with an L. Okay, I’ll say
them.
Christina turns to him longingly. He takes her hand.
RUSSO (CONT’D)
Lick my balls.
She slaps him playfully. He wrestles her to the bed.
They’re both laughing. Now he’s sincere.
28.
RUSSO (CONT’D)
I love you. I do. I love you
Christina.
She smiles, rolls on top, kisses him.
CHRISTINA
I love you too.
A beat.
RUSSO
So will you lick my balls now?
She pushes him down for round two.
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Scene 17 - Francis' Discomfort at the Kennedy Center
A full lobby. OPERA-GOERS dressed to the hilt. A decidedly
middle-aged crowd. Gray haired men, matronly women.
We ZERO in on Francis and Claire. People seem to be parting
subtly around them - a wide berth. Francis got snubbed for
the nomination and everyone knows it.
And OLDER MAN and his wife pass by. The Older Man gives
Francis a little double-pat on the shoulder - a consolation.
As Francis turns the Older Man and his wife have already
moved on. The Older Man gives Francis a slight piteous nod.
From Francis’ POV we see the Older Man whisper into his
wife’s ear. She looks back at Francis and Claire. Francis’
gaze shifts to small GROUPING of couples, all stealing
glances his way and speaking in hushed tones to one another.
The gossip is palpable.
FRANCIS
I need some air.
Claire picks up immediately on his discomfort.
CLAIRE
I’ll see you at the seats.
She disappears through the doors to the auditorium as we
follow Francis toward the door.
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Scene 18 - A Cold Night at the Kennedy Center
Franics stands outside, scrolling through his blackberry,
more to look like he’s busy than because he is.
29.
A cab pulls up. Zoe emerges. She’s in a strapless black dress
that hugs every curve. It isn’t very fancy, but it sure gets
the job done.
It’s cold. She’s not dressed for the weather. Her
headlights are FULLY ON. She turns to her date, BRIAN, early
30s - a typical Capitol Hill climber. He’s getting out of
the cab behind her.
ZOE
Gimme your jacket.
He pulls off his jacket and hands it to her. She drapes it
over the front of her dress and starts hurrying to main
doors. She’s not going to be late for this.
As she climbs the steps Francis notices her - more out of
instinct than interest. He glances at her ass ever so
briefly as she passes. And it’s an exceptional ass. We can
tell from the form-fitting fabric that she’s wearing a thong.
Once Zoe has passed, Francis turns to his attention back to
the blackberry.
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Scene 19 - Francis's Gaming Obsession
Francis slips into the booth and takes his seat next to
Claire. She doesn’t even look at him, but she reaches out and
takes his hand.
The SOUND of an orchestra tuning. The LIGHTS begin to fade.
PUSH INTO Francis’ face as the first subtle strands of MUSIC
begin to play and we CUT TO:
INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - BASEMENT - NIGHT.
Still TIGHT on Francis’ face, the MUSIC carrying us into the
scene, we PULL BACK to reveal that he’s wearing a headset
with a microphone. It’s dim. Blue light flickers in his eyes.
As we PULL BACK MORE we see that he’s slumped in a chair,
still in his tuxedo (sans tie) with an Xbox controller in his
hands. His thumbs and fingers deftly fly back and forth, but
the rest of his body is totally motionless - the calm and
focus of a true gamer.
A silhouette enters the frame. It’s Claire. She places her
hand gently on Francis’s shoulder. He pulls the headset off.
The MUSIC cuts out abruptly. From the headphones, we HEAR the
distant, tinny SOUND of other online gamers.
30.
Things like a 12 year-old kid taunting: “Imma cap your ass
muthafucka” and some redneck retorting: “Suck it dickless”
The lowest of low culture, if you can even call it culture.
FRANCIS
Going to bed?
CLAIRE
Are you coming?
FRANCIS
I’ll be there in a bit.
CLAIRE
Don’t stay up all night.
Claire leans down and kisses him on the forehead. Leaves.
Francis puts his headset back on. The online TAUNTS and
EXCLAMATIONS resume, full-force.
CUT TO the flat-screen TV. It’s Grand Theft Auto - a
complete bloodbath. Francis’ avatar starts blowing people
away. Death. Carnage. Glorious vulgarity.
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Scene 20 - A Bittersweet Goodbye
The cab pulls up in front of Zoe’s apartment. Zoe and Brian
are in the back seat. Zoe’s got Brian’s jacket draped over
her. She hands it to Brian.
ZOE
Thanks so much. I’ll call you.
She gives him a platonic peck on the cheek. Opens the door.
BRIAN
Wait...
She turns back.
BRIAN (CONT’D)
I thought you had a good time.
ZOE
I did. I’ve never been to the
opera before. I loved it.
BRIAN
So...can I come up?
She just looks at him patiently.
31.
BRIAN (CONT’D)
I guess that’s a no.
ZOE
You’re really sweet, Brian. I’m
sorry if I gave you the wrong idea.
He looks dejected. She’s not going to let this turn into a
conversation.
ZOE (CONT’D)
Thanks again for inviting me. It
was wonderful.
(squeezes his hand)
Have a good night.
And she’s out of the cab. She throws one last glance back at
Brian, a pity glance. Then she’s off. Quick, clean,
relatively painless.
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Scene 21 - Zoe's Witty Response
The sound of keys, the bolt unlocking. The door opens and
Zoe enters. Tosses her purse on the bed (just a mattress on
the floor, no bed frame) and slips off her heels.
Goes to the fridge. It’s pretty empty - just yogurt, some old
take-out containers, an empty Britta. She grabs a yogurt.
Fishes a power bar out of a drawer. Heads over to her
computer - a laptop amidst of a sea of papers and notes. Her
desk is just a plywood board perched on cinder blocks.
She dips the power bar directly into the yogurt (no spoon) as
the computer screen jumps to life. Her fingers fly over the
keyboard. New window. Email. Password. Inbox. Mostly
work stuff. But there’s a new message at the very top:
FROM: Photogangsta@WashingtonHerald.com SUBJECT: Frank
Underwood ASS-WHIPPED.
She clicks on the message. A photo fills the screen: Francis
checking out Zoe’s ass when she passed him on the steps of
the Kennedy Center.
There’s text beneath the photo: If you want em to take you
seriously, maybe wear more than G-string?
Command N. New window. Keys punched at lightning speed.
Google Search. “Frank Underwood.” Wikipedia comes up.
Click. The words “House Majority Whip” stick out. Zoe
considers this for a moment. Clicks back to the other
screen. Looks at the photo. Hits reply. Types quickly:
32.
He looks pretty serious to me.
Send. Boom. Done.
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Scene 22 - The President's Meeting
Underwood is working at his desk. Stamper knocks and peeks
his head in the door.
STAMPER
She’s here.
FRANCIS
Show her in.
Stamper disappears. Francis turns to the camera.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Quite rare for a President’s Chief-
of-Staff to climb up the Hill. A
gesture of respect, no doubt -
which I appreciate, even if it
comes at a cost. Let’s see if I
was right about Harold Blythe.
He cranes his head to see her approaching down the hall.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Here she comes - my lesser but
necessary half.
Vasquez enters carrying a folder. Francis stands.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Good morning Linda. I appreciate
you making the trip over.
VASQUEZ
Of course. My pleasure.
FRANCIS
I assume we’re discussing
Education?
VASQUEZ
First things first...
She places the folder on his desk and opens it.
VASQUEZ (CONT’D)
The seating chart for the
Inauguration.
(MORE)
33.
VASQUEZ (CONT’D)
(points)
Do these work for you and Claire?
FRANCIS
Wow.
VASQUEZ
Which comes with a complimentary
set of tickets to the Red and White
Ball.
FRANCIS
Claire will be over the moon.
VASQUEZ
Good, I’m glad.
(closes the folder)
So - Education. We have Harry
Blythe drafting the legislation.
Francis tosses us a quick glance. His guess was correct.
VASQUEZ (CONT’D)
You can imagine the bind that puts
us in.
FRANCIS
The bill’s going to be too be two
steps to the left of Karl Marx.
VASQUEZ
Education’s been his baby for
twenty years. We have to let him
take the lead.
FRANCIS
It’ll be hard to drum up much
confidence.
VASQUEZ
Which is why I’m here.
FRANCIS
You want me to advise him. Bring
him toward the middle.
VASQUEZ
(relieved he gets it)
We need to this bill to pass
smoothly.
FRANCIS
Consider it done, Linda.
34.
VASQUEZ
I know it’s a lot to put on your
plate...
FRANCIS
You’ve got 100 days before the
honeymoon is over. Anything you
want to put on my plate, feel free.
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Scene 23 - Francis's Strategic Approach
Francis opens the door for Vasquez. As she’s leaving --
VASQUEZ
Keep me posted?
FRANCIS
Let me talk to Blythe. I’ll check
in with you later this week.
VASQUEZ
Terrific.
Vasquez leaves. Francis watches her go. He speaks to us --
FRANCIS
She’s wary. I can see it in her
eyes.
(and now to the camera)
Walker’s political capital rises or
falls with the success of this
Bill. And I need to be at the
center of it.
He closes the door, walks back toward his inner office.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Vasquez might not trust me as far
as she can throw me. But she
doesn’t have to. If I prove myself
indispensable, she can’t afford to
throw me very far.
He pops his head into Nancy Kaufberger’s office.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Nancy, set up a call with Harold
Blythe.
Continues toward his office.
35.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(calls out)
Doug?
Stamper pops out from his.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
You have a list for me?
STAMPER
Just finished.
FRANCIS
My office.
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Scene 24 - Personnel and Budget
Francis and Stamper are having a brainstorming session.
STAMPER
Ferguson?
FRANCIS
Too old.
STAMPER
Willis?
FRANCIS
Too stupid.
STAMPER
Boyd?
FRANCIS
Queer.
STAMPER
Really?
Francis gives him a look.
STAMPER (CONT’D)
He’s married with two kids.
FRANCIS
Come on.
STAMPER
What about Catherine Durant?
A beat. Francis leans back in his chair.
36.
FRANCIS
Interesting. Catherine Durant.
INT. CWA OFFICE - CLAIRE’S OFFICE - DAY
Claire at her desk. Evelyn sits across from her. Claire
peruses a document.
CLAIRE
Can we do any better?
EVELYN
Not without totally crippling our
day to day. And we might have to
pull out of some of our impact
studies.
CLAIRE
(hands back the document)
Okay, we’ll go with this.
EVELYN
We’re losing some very good people.
Folks who have been with us from
the beginning...
CLAIRE
This is a charity, but not for our
employees. I can’t keep people on
just because they’ve been with us a
long time.
EVELYN
Do you mind if I ask what we’re
going to use the money for?
CLAIRE
An organization I want to bring in -
World Water Initiative. They’ve
done nice work overseas - Big
projects. Very little budget.
EVELYN
Do we need to bring in a new
organization? If you want to
expand overseas can’t we just -
CLAIRE
Evelyn - you’re the office manager.
EVELYN
I know.
37.
CLAIRE
And you’re an excellent one. But I
need you trust that I know what I’m
doing here.
EVELYN
I do. I think.
CLAIRE
You have friends - I understand.
People you’ve spent years working
with. It’s hard to see them go.
Evelyn nods.
CLAIRE (CONT’D)
Should I bring somebody else in
handle this?
EVELYN
No. I’m good. I can do it.
Evelyn offers a resigned smile.
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Scene 25 - Mutual Appreciation Club
TIGHT on a finger pushing the door bell. A moment later the
door opens, revealing Francis. We CUT TO Zoe standing
opposite, Steve right beside her.
STEVE
Sir, I’m sorry to bother you. This
woman said you were expecting her.
FRANCIS
Who are you?
ZOE
My name is Zoe Barnes. I’m a
reporter at the Washington Herald.
FRANCIS
It’s almost ten at night. This is
my home. I don’t -
ZOE
We’re part of a mutual appreciation
club.
She holds out her phone. We can’t see what’s on it, but
Francis can. He smiles.
38.
FRANCIS
You’re a fan of the opera.
ZOE
More for the people watching than
the music. Same as you.
Francis is impressed by her brassiness.
FRANCIS
(opens the door wider)
Come in, Ms. Barnes.
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Scene 26 - Trust and Collaboration
Francis pours drinks from the liquor cabinet. Hands one to
Zoe, then sits across from her. Zoe takes a sip.
ZOE
It’s strong.
FRANCIS
You like it weak?
ZOE
No - the stronger the better.
She unwraps her scarf, revealing some impressive cleavage
Francis takes a quick glance, then finds her eyes again.
ZOE (CONT’D)
There’s no harm in looking.
FRANCIS
That’s a cheap ploy, Ms. Barnes.
ZOE
Cheap but effective.
FRANCIS
If your goal is to distract me -
which you haven’t.
ZOE
I don’t want you distracted. I
want you focused.
FRANCIS
You certainly have my undivided
attention.
39.
ZOE
Good, then I’ll get straight to the
point...
FRANCIS
(amused)
Foreplay is over?
ZOE
I read somewhere that JFK never
lasted more than three minutes.
FRANCIS
The point being?
ZOE
That time is precious. Powerful
people don’t have the luxury of
foreplay.
He smiles, eyes narrowing.
FRANCIS
Why are you here Ms. Barnes?
ZOE
Because I need somebody I can
trust, and someone who trusts me.
FRANCIS
You’re in the wrong zip code for
that.
ZOE
Maybe trust isn’t the right word.
An arrangement perhaps.
FRANCIS
As in...
ZOE
You confide in me, to the extent
that you’re comfortable...
FRANCIS
And in return...
ZOE
I protect your identity and print
what you tell me. I serve you. I
communicate what you can’t publicly
say yourself.
40.
FRANCIS
What makes you think I don’t
already have such an arrangement
with one of your colleagues?
ZOE
Because if you did, you wouldn’t
have let me in the door.
Francis smiles. He’s enjoying the repartee.
FRANCIS
I’ve had a very long, very
successful career avoiding this
sort of intrigue with the press. I
don’t see any particular advantage
in starting now.
ZOE
Is there any disadvantage?
FRANCIS
Sloppiness, for one.
ZOE
I promise you absolute discretion.
FRANCIS
So we are talking about trust.
ZOE
Use whatever word you like. I
don’t care.
FRANCIS
Words matter very much, Ms. Barnes.
You should care more, given your
profession.
ZOE
Then yes, your trust. Because if I
were to betray it I stand far less
of a chance surviving the
consequences.
FRANCIS
Metro is killing you, huh?
She looks at him, impressed he knows this.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Don’t be flattered that I’m
familiar with your work. I read
everything.
41.
ZOE
I don’t doubt it. And yes, Metro
is killing me.
FRANCIS
(considers for a moment)
How exactly can I help you?
ZOE
The Administration’s legislative
agenda.
FRANCIS
I see.
ZOE
You must know.
FRANCIS
I may.
ZOE
Immigration is too controversial.
Tax-reform isn’t sexy enough. I’m
thinking Education.
FRANCIS
You very well might think that.
I couldn’t possibly comment.
ZOE
All I need is a nod or a wink.
FRANCIS
It’s late Ms. Barnes, and it’s been
a long day.
ZOE
Can we speak again?
FRANCIS
A prudent man never makes a rash
decision unless forced by
necessity. And my only necessity
at the moment is a pillow beneath
my head. I hope you’ll understand
if I’d prefer to sleep on all of
this.
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Scene 27 - Francis Meets Zoe Barnes
Francis helps Zoe put her coat on. Steve is in the foyer
with them. Zoe hands Francis a card.
42.
ZOE
My cell phone’s on the back.
Personal, not work.
Francis pockets the card without looking at it.
FRANCIS
(to Steve)
Did you put Ms. Barnes in the
visitors leger?
STEVE
Not yet.
FRANCIS
Don’t.
(to Zoe)
Needless to say...
ZOE
Needless. I get it.
Francis smiles. She smiles back. His desire to make her
visit “disappear” is a good sign. He opens the door for her.
Claire is coming up the steps.
CLAIRE
Oh...hello...
FRANCIS
Claire, this is Ms. Zoe Barnes,
from the Washington Herald.
ZOE
Very nice to meet you Mrs.
Underwood.
They shake hands. Claire offers a polite smile.
FRANCIS
(to Zoe)
Drive safe. There’s lots of ice on
the road.
ZOE
I will. Goodnight. And thank you.
Francis and Claire watch Zoe walk off.
CLAIRE
A reporter?
FRANCIS
A hungry reporter.
43.
CLAIRE
Aren’t they all?
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Scene 28 - Traffic Stop on Michigan Avenue
A BMW slows to a halt by the curb with a POLICE CAR slowing
to a stop behind it, lights flashing.
CUT TO: A POLICE OFFICER ambles up to the stopped BMW and
aims a flashlight at the driver. It’s Russo. He looks wasted.
POLICE OFFICER
License and registration.
RUSSO
The glove compartment sweetheart.
We see that there’s a CALL-GIRL in the passenger seat. She
gets the registration out of the glove compartment while
Russo pulls out his license and hands it to the cop.
RUSSO (CONT’D)
Here you go.
POLICE OFFICER
This isn’t your license. It’s a
Starbucks card.
RUSSO
Oh...sorry about that.
POLICE OFFICER
Sir - have you been drinking?
RUSSO
No, I don’t drink coffee at this
hour.
POLICE OFFICER
(not amused)
I’m going to need you to step out
of the car.
RUSSO
If I was speeding just write me a
ticket and I’ll -
POLICE OFFICER
Sir, out of the car. Right now.
44.
RUSSO
Alright listen, I don’t want to
sound like a prick, but I’m a
member of Congress...
POLICE OFFICER
I don’t care if you’re the King of
China.
RUSSO
China doesn’t have a King. It’s a
communist oligwock - ola -
communist oligarchy. Man, that’s
hard to say.
The cop opens the door.
POLICE OFFICER
Let’s go. Out.
(to the Call-Girl)
You too.
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Scene 29 - A Late Night Proposal
The phone rings. Francis groggily answers it.
FRANCIS
Hello...?
Listens for a second. Sits up, suddenly alert.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Good - let’s think this through for
a second...
INT. DINER - 4 AM
The door swings open, jangling a bell. In walks D.C. Police
Commissioner BARNEY HULL - a square-jawed career law
enforcer. He glances around, doesn’t see who he’s looking
for. Takes a seat in one of the booths.
A figure slowly spins around on one of the stools at the
counters and faces Hull. It’s Stamper.
STAMPER
Mind if I join you?
Hull looks at him, perplexed. Stamper gets off the booth and
slides into the booth across from Hull.
45.
STAMPER (CONT’D)
Doug Stamper - the Congressman’s
Chief-of-Staff.
HULL
I thought I was meeting someone
else...
STAMPER
No. You’re meeting me.
HULL
What the fuck is going on? It’s
the four in the goddamn morning and
I’ve got a City Council meeting
in...
(glances at his watch)
Less than five hours.
STAMPER
(leans in close)
You’ve been Police Commissioner for
what - almost a decade now?
HULL
We here to talk about my resume?
STAMPER
Mayor of D.C. would look good on
that resume, wouldn’t it?
Hull sits up straighter. He’s listening now.
STAMPER (CONT’D)
We know you’ve been angling to run
for some time. Experience is your
strong suit. Endorsements and fund-
raising aren’t. But we can help
with that.
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Scene 30 - Argument in the Car
Russo is sitting on a bench, head in hands. We hear
footsteps. He looks up. A COP enters, unlocks the door,
opens it.
COP
You’re free to go.
Russo stands. He’s puzzled, but he’s not about to ask
questions. He exits the holding cell.
46.
INT. CHRISTINA’S CAR - LATE MORNING
Christina is driving, Russo’s riding shotgun.
RUSSO
It was just a few drinks.
CHRISTINA
It was enough to get pulled over.
RUSSO
But I was in control. I wasn’t
drunk drunk.
CHRISTINA
Were you alone?
RUSSO
Yes.
CHRISTINA
Say it to my face.
RUSSO
Watch the road.
CHRISTINA
Say it to my face!
RUSSO
Yes - I was alone!
CHRISTINA
You can’t keep doing this Peter.
It’s gonna catch up with you.
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Scene 31 - Breakfast Negotiations
Claire picks up two fresh cups of coffee from the espresso
machine. Meanwhile Francis finishes slicing an apple, places
half the slices on one plate, half on another. They meet at
the kitchen table - Claire with the coffee, Francis with the
apple. Sit down. Their morning routine.
CLAIRE
Do you think we can arrange two
more at our table for the Red and
White Ball?
FRANCIS
For whom?
47.
CLAIRE
The Holburns.
FRANCIS
Why on earth would we want them
there?
CLAIRE
I’m going to need her money for the
CWA at some point.
FRANCIS
The expansion?
CLAIRE
The staff cuts will only get us
halfway there. We’ll need to fund
new projects.
FRANCIS
I’ll talk to Vasquez.
A beat.
CLAIRE
(checking in)
How’re we doing?
FRANCIS
Good.
CLAIRE
Just good?
FRANCIS
Progress. Irons in the fire.
CLAIRE
(smiles)
I like irons. But I love fire.
He downs his espresso. Stands. Gives her a peck on the
forehead. And he’s out the door.
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Scene 32 - Francis's Ultimatum
Francis holds up a document as HAROLD BLYTHE looks on.
FRANCIS
(holding up the document)
This is the only hard copy?
48.
BLYTHE
Yes.
Francis goes over to the shredder, starts feeding in pages.
BLYTHE (CONT’D)
What are you...
Francis has put too many pages in. The shredder jams. He
yanks out the half devoured sheets and tosses them in the
waste basket with the rest of the 600 page document.
FRANCIS
The bill is garbage, Harry, and you
know it. You’ve wasted your time
and mine. I’m not happy.
BLYTHE
I’m sorry Frank...
FRANCIS
I don’t want apologies, I want a
passable bill. Tax increases? The
ban on vouchers? A Federal
Oversight Commission? How am I
supposed to work with that? You
have to help me help you.
BLYTHE
I’ll rewrite it.
FRANCIS
By the inauguration.
BLYTHE
If you want something from scratch
that’s going to be -
FRANCIS
You have less than a week.
BLYTHE
That was years worth of work.
FRANCIS
Then get me a short-form draft.
Get me something I can put your
name on. We can flesh out the long-
form later.
Francis points to the waste basket.
49.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
That version is dead. Erase every
copy on every computer.
Blythe nods.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(as he goes)
Call me if you need anything.
And Francis is out the door. We follow him. He turns to us.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(to the camera)
Busy work for poor old Blythe.
Eventually I’ll have to re-write
the bill myself. Not because I
care what’s in it. I only care
about where it gets me. And if it
gets me rubbing shoulders with
Walker again, it’s served its
purpose. But to do that I need a
bill I can pass. Ideology is for
standing still on a soapbox. I
never stand still. I want
momentum.
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Scene 33 - Hush Money
TIGHT on the door. A knock. A moment later the door opens,
revealing the CALL-GIRL we saw with Russo the night before.
She’s wearing a long overcoat and heels. CUT TO to Stamper.
STAMPER
Come on in.
The Call-Girl takes a look around the room, impressed. She
unzips her overcoat. Let’s it fall to the ground. She’s
only wearing panties underneath.
Stamper pulls an enormous wad out of his jacket pocket.
Tosses it to her. She starts to flip through the wad.
STAMPER (CONT’D)
Ten thousand dollars. What will
that get me?
She eyes him, a little frightened.
CALL-GIRL
I mean I’m kinky, but I don’t know
if I’m the girl you’re looking for.
50.
STAMPER
Oh you’re definitely the girl I’m
looking for.
CALL-GIRL
(stands)
This doesn’t feel right...
STAMPER
All I want for that money is your
silence.
CALL-GIRL
My silence...?
STAMPER
The guy you were with last night,
the one who was arrested. Do you
know who he was?
CALL-GIRL
You mean the Congressman?
STAMPER
There was no Congressman. There
was no arrest. None of it exists.
All that exists is the money you’re
holding. You understand?
CALL-GIRL
Yeah.
STAMPER
Good.
Stamper pulls out some more money from his jacket. Folds it.
STAMPER (CONT’D)
Open your mouth.
She does, he gently slides the bills between her teeth.
STAMPER (CONT’D)
Here’s four hundred more. This
last bit is for me.
He takes off his jacket and starts to unbutton his shirt.
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Scene 34 - A Proposal of Power
Francis sits across from CATHERINE DURANT (early 50s),
another conservative Democrat from the South.
51.
DURANT
Secretary of State?
FRANCIS
That’s right.
DURANT
(puzzled)
Walker just nominated Kern.
FRANCIS
It’s a long road to confirmation.
DURANT
Kern is a boy scout.
FRANCIS
No one’s a boy scout. Not even boy
scouts.
Durant is intrigued by Francis’s tone. She presses.
DURANT
What do you have?
FRANCIS
Absolutely nothing.
DURANT
So what are we talking about here?
FRANCIS
I’m just asking a simple question -
does the job interest you?
DURANT
Wouldn’t you want it for yourself?
FRANCIS
I turned it down.
DURANT
Really? I heard that Walker passed
you over.
FRANCIS
I’ve let that story ride so he
could save face. I haven’t spent
twenty years in Congress to toss it
aside for a four-year cabinet post.
DURANT
So why do you want Kern gone?
52.
FRANCIS
I want him gone because he’s a
pretty face with an empty skull.
The Foreign Relations Committee
needs a Secretary I can work with.
Somebody brilliant. Somebody
tough. Somebody who isn’t afraid
to stand up to Walker when he’s
wrong. We need you Catherine.
DURANT
(slight beat)
Let’s assume I’m interested...
FRANCIS
I don’t want to assume - I want to
know.
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Scene 35 - Mysterious Call
A Black SUV rounds a corner on the bottom floor of the
garage, pulls into an empty spot. We can see that Steve is
driving. The back door opens. Stamper gets out. He heads
toward a set of dumpsters in the far corner. Looks around.
Sees no one. Opens the lid to one of the dumpsters.
INT. NEWSROOM - DAY
ZOE is seated at her desk, looking miserable - trapped, under-
appreciated, creativity stifled. She’s got her land line
phone to one ear and is taking notes she clearly doesn’t give
a rat’s ass about.
ZOE
Uh-huh...uh-huh...
Her cell phone vibrates. She glances at it. “Unknown
Number.”
ZOE (CONT’D)
(into the land line)
Hold on.
She answers the cell phone.
ZOE (CONT’D)
Zoe Barnes.
After a beat she stiffens, suddenly alert.
53.
ZOE (CONT’D)
Yes, anywhere you want.
(listens)
On my way.
She ends the call.
ZOE (CONT’D)
(into the land line)
I’ll call you back.
She hastily grabs her purse and coat, heads for the elevator.
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Scene 36 - A Delicate Dance
Francis and Zoe sit side by side on a bench in front of a
Thomas Eakins painting. It depicts two rowers in a skull.
FRANCIS
Do the math, Ms. Barnes.
ZOE
He needs a bill...
FRANCIS
Sponsored by?
ZOE
Somebody with legitimacy...
Zoe thinks for a moment, then shakes her head.
ZOE (CONT’D)
But the person with the most
experience...
FRANCIS
(finishing her thought)
Harold Blythe.
ZOE
...is an old school tax and spend
Democrat. Walker ran as a
moderate. He’s almost Republican.
FRANCIS
Exactly, which is why he needs me.
ZOE
To steer the bill to the center.
54.
FRANCIS
You were right about why Walker
kept me in Congress.
ZOE
Do you think Blythe would talk to
me?
FRANCIS
Be smarter than that. He can’t
speak to the press about this.
ZOE
Maybe somebody in his office, if I
butter them up. All I need is a
few crumbs.
Francis flips open a brief case. Pulls out a bulky manila
envelop and places it in Zoe’s lap.
FRANCIS
How about a five-course dinner?
She peeks inside the envelope.
ZOE
Is this what I think it is?
Francis points to the painting.
FRANCIS
I just love this painting, don’t
you?
Zoe looks up. TIGHT on the two rowers in the painting. Then
BACK TO the pair on the bench. Francis turns to Zoe.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
We’re in the same boat now, Zoe.
Take care not to tip it over. If
you do, I can only save one of us
from drowning.
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Scene 37 - Preparations and Requests
Zoe in her cramped, hopelessly messy apartment. She’s
flipping through Blythe’s original draft. Making notes.
Utterly focused. She has something no one else on the planet
has. Her cell phone rings. She presses ignore without even
looking at the number. A moment later it rings again. She
presses ignore. Nothing is going to distract her.
55.
INT. BLAIR HOUSE - VASQUEZ’S OFFICE - DAY
Francis and Vasquez across a desk from one another.
VASQUEZ
We need a passable bill.
FRANCIS
And you’ll have one.
VASQUEZ
Before the inauguration.
FRANCIS
I didn’t choose Harold Blythe. You
did. And that’s fine. I had to
send him back to the starting
gates, but I can work with him.
You don’t have to micro-manage
this, Linda.
VASQUEZ
The President-Elect is concerned.
FRANCIS
He shouldn’t be. And you shouldn’t
either. You’re asking me to work a
miracle. I understand that. And I’m
telling you - I’ll work the
miracle.
VASQUEZ
Alright, Frank...
FRANCIS
I have a favor to ask, though.
Can you fit two more guests at our
table? For the Red and White Ball?
VASQUEZ
Of course. I can make that happen.
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Scene 38 - Francis Confronts Russo
Francis shuts the door as Russo takes a seat.
FRANCIS
Drink?
RUSSO
Sure...what do you got?
56.
FRANCIS
Whiskey. Bush Mills.
RUSSO
If you’re offering.
As Francis pours him a drink.
FRANCIS
How are things in the city of
brotherly love?
RUSSO
We’re getting by.
FRANCIS
Good, good.
Francis hands him the drink.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
So it seems you’ve been a
bit...irresponsible.
RUSSO
What...?
FRANCIS
Don’t play dumb with me Peter.
Save it for the House Ethics
Committee.
Russo freezes - a deer caught in headlights.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Drink up, you could use some
courage right now.
RUSSO
You’re not having any?
FRANCIS
It’s a bit early in the day for me.
Russo sets his drink down.
RUSSO
Is this about last night?
Francis simply stares at him. A stare which says “yes.”
RUSSO (CONT’D)
How do you know about that?
57.
FRANCIS
Because it’s my job to know.
RUSSO
Look - they let me off. There’s no
charges. It’s all taken care of.
FRANCIS
Honestly Peter, do you really think
these things take care of
themselves?
Russo suddenly realizes Francis was behind his release.
RUSSO
It was just that once, Frank. I
swear to God.
FRANCIS
Then you must hold God in very low
esteem, because we both know that’s
a lie. Drunk driving, prostitutes,
cocaine - you’ve got quite a long
list of hobbies. I’m surprised you
can find the time to represent your
constituents. What I should really
have done is hang you out to dry.
But then you’d be of no use to me,
would you?
RUSSO
What is it that you want?
FRANCIS
Your absolute, unquestioning
loyalty.
RUSSO
(after a beat)
Anything. You name it, Frank.
FRANCIS
Not now - but soon. There will be
no shortage of things you’ll be
able to do for me.
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Scene 39 - The Bombshell Document
Zoe makes a B-line for Lucas’s office. As she barges in...
LUCAS
Where have you been? I’ve been
calling you.
(MORE)
58.
LUCAS (CONT'D)
Everybody’s working double-time on
the Inauguration and you decide to
just up and disapp --
She plops a large ream of paper on his desk. He picks it up,
starts to flip through.
LUCAS (CONT’D)
Where did you get this?
ZOE
Wrong question. The right question
is how quickly can we get it up on
the site?
LUCAS
This is page one. I have to run it
past Bob.
ZOE
Then let’s run it past Bob.
INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - HAMMERSCHMIDT’S OFFICE - AFTERNOON
Hammerschmidt, Zoe and Lucas - serious shit going down.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
(to Lucas)
Get legal on this - make sure we’re
not breaking any laws. And I want
a litigation assessment.
(to Zoe)
You won’t tell me your source?
ZOE
I can’t do that.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
Fine. But if legal -
ZOE
I understand. How long do you
think that will take? We should
get this online right away.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
I’m not just going to scan a 600
page document and put it up before
we’ve gone through every --
ZOE
I did that already.
59.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
You read the whole thing?
ZOE
Cover to cover. I’ve got excerpts.
Analysis. Three thousand words
ready for editing.
Hammerschmidt glances at Lucas. They’re impressed.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
(to Lucas)
You start going over that. And
let’s get the online staff pitching
in, working on graphs, charts, the
whole nine yards.
(opens door, calls out)
Janine!
(to Zoe)
What’s the angle, five words or
less?
ZOE
Far left of center.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
How far?
ZOE
Very.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
Enough to put Walker on his heels?
ZOE
Forget his heels. This will put
him on his ass.
Janine enters. She doesn’t see Zoe in the corner.
HAMMERSCHMIDT
(to Janine)
We’ve got a draft of the
administration’s Education Bill.
You’re going to work with Zoe, do
background copy.
JANINE
(incredulous)
Zoe Barnes?
HAMMERSCHMIDT
That’s right. Whatever she needs.
60.
Hammerschmidt nods in Zoe’s direction. Janine sees Zoe for
the first time.
JANINE
(as if it’s disgusting)
Share a byline with her?
HAMMERSCMIDT
No sharing. The byline is Zoe’s.
JANINE
But she’s Metro. I’m your chief
political correspondent...
HAMMERSCHMIDT
Then you should’ve brought in the
story yourself.
(to Lucas)
Zoe gets the byline. Janine gets
assisted credit.
JANINE
Assisted? Come on. You can’t -
HAMMERSCHMIDT
Go. We’ve got 18 hours before
tomorrow’s print deadline.
Janine glares at Zoe.
ZOE
(to Janine, triumphant)
I’ll see you at my desk.
Zoe walks out. Janine reluctantly follows.
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Scene 40 - The Inauguration and Inaugural Ball
A WIDE PAN of massive crowds gathered for the Inauguration
Ceremony on a crystal clear, January morning.
FRANCIS (V.O.)
Power is like real estate. It’s
all about location, location,
location.
CUT TO the rostrum on the Capitol steps. Walker has his hand
raised as CHIEF JUSTICE conducts the oath of office.
FRANCIS (V.O.)
The closer you are to the source,
the higher your property value.
61.
We ZOOM IN on Francis and Claire sitting in the first row
behind the lectern.
FRANCIS (V.O.)
A hundred years from now, when
people watch this footage, who will
they see smiling just at the edge
of the frame?
Francis gives a little wave to the camera.
CHIEF JUSTICE
So help you God.
WALKER
So help me God.
EXT. THE ROSTRUM - TEN MINUTES LATER
TIGHT on Walker in the midst of his Inaugural Address.
WALKER
...Today is not simply about the
next four years. It’s about the
next four decades. You’ve placed
your faith in me, and I, in turn,
choose to place that faith in our
children. Our children are the key
to this nation’s future, and that’s
why the first order of business for
this administration will be a
comprehensive Education Reform Bill
to properly fix, finance and
strengthen our nation’s schools.
Huge cheers from the audience. QUICK CUT TO Francis,
clapping vigorously, staring right at us.
INT. RED AND WHITE BALL - NIGHT
A huge reception hall decorated to the hilt. The mood is
festive. Francis and Claire are seated next to Charles and
Felicity Holburn at the Vice-President’s table.
FELICITY
(leaning into Claire)
It was so nice of you to make this
possible. When you called and -
CLAIRE
Not another word.
62.
SHIFT TO Secretary of State nominee Michael Kern.
KERN
...”Your dog must be a genius,” the
guy says. “Nah,” says the other
guy, “He’s pretty stupid. Every
time he’s got a good hand he sniffs
his ass.”
Everyone at the table laughs at the punch line, Kern most of
all. Francis forces a laugh. Claire leans into Francis.
CLAIRE
Go do your thing.
He squeezes her hand. Gets up.
CUT TO Blythe standing awkwardly alone eating a crab cake at
the hors d’oeuvres table. Francis approaches.
FRANCIS
Maestro, I’ve been looking all over
for you.
Blythe fumbles with the crab cake, accidently spilling it on
his lapel.
BLYTHE
Shit.
In an instant Francis has grabbed a napkin and begins dabbing
the stain.
BLYTHE (CONT’D)
Oh thanks...
FRANCIS
Truly outstanding work on the new
draft. You’re going to make history
with that bill Harry.
BLYTHE
Thanks for all your help Frank.
Couldn’t have done it without you.
Out of the corner of his eye, Francis spots Catherine Durant
near the dance floor.
FRANCIS
Catherine!
(to Blythe)
Excuse me Harry.
And Francis glides over to Catherine.
63.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Don’t you look stunning.
DURANT
We Southern girls clean up well
when you get us out of the trailer
park and into some Vera Wang.
FRANCIS
And we Southern boys may be slow
with our words, but we’re fast on
our feet.
He half bows, takes her hand and kisses it.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
May I have the honor?
DURANT
You most certainly may.
He leads her onto the dance floor and they waltz beautifully.
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Scene 41 - Freddy's BBQ Joint
The streets are empty. Sanitation workers sweep up the
ticker tape from the previous day’s celebration. Police
crews load barricades into flatbed trucks.
EXT. FREDDY’S BBQ JOINT - EARLY MORNING
It’s a bitterly cold, bright sunny day. Francis arrives at
the restaurant with a newspaper tucked under his arm. FREDDY
- the husky African American proprietor - sees him
approaching and opens the door for him.
FREDDY
Mornin’ Frank.
FRANCIS
Morning Freddy. How are you?
FREDDY
Can’t kick. Come on in.
FRANCIS
Actually, would you mind setting up
a table for me outside?
FREDDY
Outside? It’s freezing.
64.
FRANCIS
I’ll be fine. A little cold never
hurt anyone.
Freddy nods and heads inside. Francis turns to the camera.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
My one guilty pleasure is a good
racks of ribs. Even at 7:30 in the
morning. I have the whole place to
myself. Freddy opens up just for
me...
CUT TO:
Francis at a table, breath condensing in the cold air.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Where I grew up in South Carolina
nobody had two pennies to rub
together. A rack of ribs was a
luxury, like Christmas in July.
I’ve had a weakness for them ever
since.
Freddy comes outside with a steaming plate of ribs. Places
them before Francis. Before digging in, Francis glances at
the newspaper he brought with him.
Zoe’s breaking story, detailing the contents of the leaked
Education Bill, occupies a huge swath of the front page. The
headline reads:
EDUCATION BILL FAR LEFT OF CENTER
We PAN DOWN to see Zoe’s byline in bold above the article.
QUICK MONTAGE
-- Blythe in his office staring at the article on his
computer. Complete horror.
-- Vasquez in the back of an SUV scrolling through her
blackberry in even more horror.
-- Zoe, Lucas and Hammerschmidt gathered around a computer
where a TECH GUY is monitoring a graph.
TECH GUY
The web traffic is crazy.
-- Janine watching Zoe, Hammer and Lucas from a distance,
eyes narrowed - jealous.
65.
-- A COP CAR with its lights flashing beside a dented BLUE
TOYOTA CAMRY - the same car that hit the dog in the opening
scene. Two COPS cuffing the mangy 20 year-old CULPRIT.
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Scene 42 - Francis' Triumph and Reflection
Francis’ plate is empty. He wipes his hands and dabs his
mouth with a napkin. Freddy starts to clear Francis’s plate.
FREDDY
You want seconds?
FRANCIS
I better not.
Freddy starts off. Scarcely a moment later...
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
Actually, yes. I’m feeling hungry
today.
Freddy goes inside. Francis stares right at us, piercingly.
FRANCIS (CONT’D)
(to the camera)
There are two kinds of pain, but
only one kind of pleasure - total,
unstoppable, undeniable victory.
(leans toward us)
The minister was wrong about
defeat. I wasn’t put on this planet
to endure. I was put on this
planet to win.
He closes his eyes again and leans back. Basks in the sun
and exhales a long, deep breath into the cold air.
The serenity is shattered by sudden, thumping ROCK MUSIC.
Black out.
THE END
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Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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francis underwood | In the tv_pilot, Francis Underwood starts off as a cunning and ambitious politician who is willing to do whatever it takes to achieve power. As the story progresses, his vulnerabilities and inner turmoil are revealed, showing a more human side to his character. This leads to a conflict between his ruthless ambition and his hidden insecurities, ultimately forcing him to confront his own flaws and make difficult choices that challenge his moral compass. | The character arc for Francis Underwood is compelling and sets up an interesting conflict between his ambition and vulnerabilities. However, there could be more depth added to his internal struggles and moral dilemmas to make his character more relatable and multidimensional. Additionally, the transition from his calculated and manipulative nature to a more vulnerable and conflicted state could be smoother to enhance the emotional impact of his character development. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into Francis Underwood's past traumas or personal relationships to provide a deeper understanding of his motivations and inner conflicts. Show more moments of moral ambiguity and ethical dilemmas that challenge his beliefs and values, forcing him to confront his own humanity. Additionally, focus on building stronger connections between Francis and other characters to create more dynamic and engaging relationships that drive his character growth throughout the series. |
claire underwood | In the tv_pilot, Claire Underwood starts off as a loyal and supportive partner to Francis, playing a crucial role in his political career. As the story progresses, she begins to assert her own desires and ambitions, challenging Francis and holding him accountable for his actions. Claire's arc culminates in her realizing her own power and influence, carving her path in the political world while maintaining her integrity and values. | The character arc for Claire Underwood is well-developed and engaging, showcasing her evolution from a supportive partner to a strong and independent woman. However, there could be more emphasis on her vulnerabilities and inner conflicts to add depth to her character. Additionally, exploring her backstory and motivations further could help the audience connect with her on a deeper level. | To improve the character arc for Claire Underwood in the tv_pilot, consider incorporating flashback scenes or moments of introspection that reveal her vulnerabilities and inner struggles. This will add complexity to her character and make her more relatable to the audience. Additionally, exploring her relationships with other characters outside of Francis could provide more insight into her motivations and desires. |
zoe barnes | In the tv_pilot, Zoe Barnes starts off as a determined and ambitious journalist, willing to do whatever it takes to get the story. As the pilot progresses, Zoe faces unexpected challenges that test her adventurous and bold nature. She is forced to make a difficult decision that ultimately leads her to leave the newsroom abruptly, hinting at a transformation in her character as she embarks on a new path towards uncovering exclusive stories and making a name for herself in the journalism world. | The character arc for Zoe Barnes in the tv_pilot is well-developed and sets up an intriguing journey for her character. However, there could be more clarity in showcasing the internal struggles and motivations that drive Zoe to make the decisions she does. This would add depth to her character and make her arc even more compelling for the audience. | To improve the character arc for Zoe Barnes in the tv_pilot, consider incorporating more moments of vulnerability and introspection for her character. Show the audience the internal conflicts she faces as she navigates the challenges of the journalism world. This will make her transformation more impactful and relatable to viewers, ultimately enhancing the emotional resonance of her character arc. |
francis | In the tv_pilot, Francis starts off as a ruthless and ambitious politician who is willing to betray those close to him to achieve his goals. As the series progresses, his vulnerabilities and inner turmoil begin to surface, leading to moments of self-reflection and doubt. Francis is forced to confront the consequences of his actions and the impact they have on his relationships and career. Ultimately, he must decide whether to continue down his current path of manipulation and power-seeking or to seek redemption and change his ways. | The character arc for Francis is compelling and sets up interesting conflicts and internal struggles for the series. However, there could be more nuance added to his character development to make his transformation more believable and impactful. Additionally, it would be beneficial to explore his relationships with other characters in more depth to provide a richer understanding of his motivations and actions. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or backstory episodes to provide insight into Francis's past and the events that shaped him into the manipulative politician he is today. This will add depth to his character and help viewers empathize with his struggles. Additionally, focus on developing his relationships with key characters to create more dynamic and emotionally resonant storylines. |
vasquez | In the tv_pilot, Vasquez starts off as a loyal and pragmatic political aide to the President-Elect, navigating the complex political landscape with ease. As she transitions into the role of Chief of Staff, she becomes more focused on achieving legislative goals and maintaining political alliances. Throughout the pilot, Vasquez learns the importance of collaboration and strategic planning in order to effectively lead her team and achieve her goals. | The character arc for Vasquez is well-developed and shows her growth and evolution as a leader. However, it could benefit from more internal conflict or personal stakes to make her journey more compelling and relatable to the audience. Additionally, providing more backstory or insight into Vasquez's motivations and personal life could add depth to her character. | To improve the character arc for Vasquez, consider adding moments of vulnerability or internal struggle that humanize her character and make her more relatable to the audience. Explore her personal relationships or past experiences that have shaped her leadership style and motivations. Additionally, consider incorporating more obstacles or challenges that force Vasquez to confront her beliefs and values, leading to further growth and development throughout the series. |
zoe | In the tv_pilot, Zoe starts off as an ambitious and eager journalist looking to prove herself in the newsroom. As she faces humiliation and frustration, she becomes more determined and assertive, unafraid to challenge authority and push for transparency. Throughout the pilot, Zoe's character arc showcases her growth from a hopeful yet frustrated journalist to a confident and resourceful truth-seeker. | The character arc for Zoe in the tv_pilot is well-developed, showing a clear progression in her personality and actions. However, to enhance the arc, it could be beneficial to delve deeper into Zoe's backstory or personal motivations that drive her relentless pursuit of the truth. This would add more depth to her character and provide a stronger emotional connection for the audience. | To improve Zoe's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that reveal her past experiences or personal struggles that fuel her determination. This could help the audience understand her motivations better and create a more compelling narrative arc for Zoe throughout the tv series. Additionally, exploring Zoe's relationships with other characters in more depth could add layers to her character development and provide opportunities for growth and conflict. |
russo | In the tv_pilot, Peter Russo starts off as a charismatic and ambitious politician with a dark side of personal vices and insecurities. As the pilot progresses, he faces challenges that force him to confront his flaws and make difficult decisions. By the end of the pilot, Russo begins to realize the consequences of his actions and starts on a path towards redemption and self-discovery. | The character arc for Peter Russo is compelling and sets up an interesting journey for the character. However, it may benefit from more clarity and focus on specific events or conflicts that drive Russo's transformation. Additionally, there could be more emphasis on his internal struggles and emotional growth to make his arc more impactful and relatable to the audience. | To improve the character arc for Peter Russo in the tv_pilot, consider delving deeper into his backstory and motivations to provide a stronger foundation for his transformation. Introduce more nuanced conflicts and challenges that push Russo to confront his flaws and make difficult choices. Focus on his internal struggles and emotional journey to create a more compelling and relatable character arc. |
stamper | In the tv_pilot, Doug Stamper starts off as a loyal and efficient Chief of Staff who supports Francis in his political endeavors. As the pilot progresses, his manipulative and calculating nature becomes more apparent as he uses money and power to control situations and protect his interests. By the end of the pilot, Stamper's loyalty to Francis is tested as he is faced with a moral dilemma that forces him to choose between his loyalty to Francis and his own conscience. | The character arc for Doug Stamper in the tv_pilot is well-developed, showcasing his loyalty, efficiency, and manipulative nature. However, the arc could benefit from more subtle hints at Stamper's calculating nature earlier on in the pilot to build up to the moral dilemma he faces at the end. Additionally, more insight into Stamper's backstory and motivations could add depth to his character and make his actions more understandable to the audience. | To improve the character arc for Doug Stamper in the tv_pilot, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that provide insight into his past experiences and motivations. This will help the audience understand why he is willing to go to such lengths to support Francis and protect his own interests. Additionally, foreshadowing his manipulative nature earlier on in the pilot can build tension and anticipation for the moral dilemma he faces later on. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Tense and Intense Tones | Scenes with a 'Tense' tone often also have an 'Intense' tone. This combination creates a sense of urgency and high stakes, keeping the reader engaged. |
High Stakes and Emotional Impact | Scenes with 'High Stakes' tend to have a stronger 'Emotional Impact' on the reader. This is because the consequences of the characters' actions are more significant and emotionally resonant. |
Strategic and Witty Dialogue | Scenes with 'Strategic' dialogue often also have 'Witty' dialogue. This combination creates a sense of intellectual sparring and adds depth to the conversations between characters. |
Character Changes and Emotional Impact | Scenes with significant 'Character Changes' often have a stronger 'Emotional Impact' on the reader. This is because the reader can witness the characters' growth and development firsthand. |
Intense and Suspenseful Scenes Move the Story Forward | Scenes with an 'Intense' and 'Suspenseful' tone are more likely to 'Move the Story Forward.' This is because these scenes often contain important plot developments or revelations. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay's writing style showcases a strong ability to create tension, conflict, and character dynamics through sharp dialogue and well-crafted interactions. The writer effectively establishes character goals, motivations, and internal struggles, setting up future conflicts and character development. Additionally, the writer demonstrates skill in creating complex power dynamics and exploring themes of desire, responsibility, and moral ambiguity.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | Read 'Screenplay: The Foundations of Screenwriting' by Syd Field | This book provides a comprehensive foundation in screenplay structure, character development, and formatting. |
Exercise | Practice writing dialogue-heavy scenes with subtext, hidden agendas, and conflicting motivationsPractice In SceneProv | This exercise will enhance the writer's ability to create tension, reveal character depth, and drive the narrative forward. |
Course | Take a course on character development for film and television | A structured course will provide the writer with tools and techniques to create compelling and well-rounded characters. |
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Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Anti-Hero | Francis Underwood is a complex and morally ambiguous character. He is ambitious, ruthless, and willing to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. However, he also has a sense of justice and a deep love for his wife, Claire. | The anti-hero is a protagonist who is not a traditional hero in the sense that they are not purely good or altruistic, but they are still rooted for by the audience. |
Power Corrupts | As Francis Underwood rises to power, he becomes increasingly corrupt and ruthless. He is willing to betray his friends, lie to his wife, and even commit murder in order to achieve his goals. | This trope explores the idea that power corrupts even the most well-intentioned people. |
Ambition | Francis Underwood is driven by his ambition to become President of the United States. He is willing to do anything to achieve his goals, even if it means hurting others. | This trope explores the theme of ambition and its potential consequences. |
Love Triangle | Francis Underwood is caught in a love triangle between his wife, Claire, and Zoe Barnes, a young reporter. He loves Claire, but he is attracted to Zoe's intelligence and ambition. | This trope involves a romantic relationship between three characters. |
The Power of Manipulation | Francis Underwood is a master manipulator. He is able to get people to do what he wants, even if they don't realize it. He uses his charm, intelligence, and ruthlessness to achieve his goals. | This trope involves a character who is able to control or influence others through manipulation. |
Breaking the Fourth Wall | Francis Underwood often breaks the fourth wall and speaks directly to the audience. This gives the audience a sense of intimacy with the character and allows him to share his thoughts and feelings directly. | This trope involves a character who speaks directly to the audience, breaking the illusion of the fourth wall. |
The Chessmaster | Francis Underwood is a master strategist. He is always thinking several steps ahead and is able to anticipate the moves of his opponents. He is able to outmaneuver his enemies and achieve his goals. | This trope involves a character who is a brilliant strategist. |
The Ruthless Politician | Francis Underwood is a ruthless politician. He is willing to do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, even if it means breaking the law or hurting others. | This trope involves a character who is a ruthless politician. |
The Fallen Hero | Francis Underwood is a fallen hero. He was once a respected politician, but he has become corrupt and ruthless in his pursuit of power. | This trope involves a character who falls from grace or becomes corrupted. |
The Upper Class Villain | Francis Underwood is an upper class villain. He is a wealthy and powerful man who uses his position to hurt others. | This trope involves a villain who is wealthy and powerful. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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Power and Corruption | Francis Underwood, a ruthless and ambitious politician, manipulates and controls those around him to achieve his goals. | The theme explores the corrupting influence of power and the willingness of individuals to compromise their morals for personal gain. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening Power and Corruption:
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Media and Influence | The media plays a significant role in shaping public opinion and uncovering political scandals. | The theme highlights the power of the media to influence events and scrutinize those in power. | ||||||||||||
Ambition and Betrayal | Francis's relentless pursuit of power leads him to betray those closest to him, including his wife, Claire. | The theme examines the destructive nature of ambition and the sacrifices individuals make to achieve their goals. | ||||||||||||
Manipulation and Deception | Francis and others use various forms of manipulation and deception to achieve their objectives. | The theme explores the tactics used by individuals to gain an advantage and the consequences of these actions. | ||||||||||||
Love and Relationships | Francis and Claire's complex and strained relationship serves as a backdrop to the political machinations. | The theme examines the challenges and sacrifices faced by individuals in relationships, particularly in the context of power and ambition. | ||||||||||||
Political Intrigue | The behind-the-scenes maneuvers and power struggles within the political arena. | The theme provides a glimpse into the complexities of political life and the lengths to which individuals will go to gain influence. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by sharp dialogue, introspective narration, and a focus on moral ambiguity. The writing is intelligent, suspenseful, and thought-provoking, with a hint of dark humor. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a sense of tension, suspense, and moral complexity. The sharp dialogue and introspective narration add depth to the characters and their motivations, while the focus on moral ambiguity keeps the audience guessing. |
Best Representation Scene | 11 - Unexpected Interruption |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively combines sharp dialogue, political intrigue, and moral ambiguity. The characters are complex and their motivations are unclear, which keeps the audience guessing. The scene also highlights the writer's ability to create tension and suspense. |
- Overall originality score: 10
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay presents a highly original and unconventional narrative that breaks away from traditional storytelling formulas. It introduces fresh perspectives on political drama, character development, and the exploration of morality and power dynamics.
- Most unique situations: Some of the most unique situations in the screenplay include: Francis euthanizing the dog after it was hit by a car, Zoe confronting Lucas about the need for a more progressive blog within the newspaper, and Francis's calculated manipulation of Russo after discovering his reckless behavior.
- Overall unpredictability score: 10
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay is highly unpredictable, keeping the audience constantly guessing about the intentions and actions of the characters. It subverts expectations and defies conventional plotlines, creating a sense of tension and intrigue that keeps the viewer engaged throughout.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals focus on power, influence, and control in various situations, reflecting his ambition and desire for success. |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goals revolve around navigating the political landscape, securing positions of influence, and managing relationships with key figures. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in the screenplay revolves around the tension between power, ambition, and morality, as the protagonist navigates the complexities of politics and personal relationships. |
Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals drive his character development, showcasing his ambition, struggles with power and influence, and moral dilemmas. The philosophical conflict challenges his beliefs and values, leading to introspection and growth.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to the narrative structure by providing motivation for the protagonist's actions, creating tension and conflict in key scenes, and driving the plot forward. They help establish the protagonist's arc and interactions with other characters.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict add depth to the themes of power, ambition, morality, and integrity in the screenplay. They explore the complexities of political relationships, personal desires, and ethical dilemmas, enriching the story with layers of meaning and complexity.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay presents a modern, urban environment that depicts the political landscape of Washington D.C. The characters inhabit offices, attend fancy parties, and navigate the bustling streets of the city. The upscale settings, such as the townhouse, the Kennedy Center, and the Red and White Ball, reflect the affluence and power of the characters. The political atmosphere is palpable, with scenes taking place in the Capitol building, newsrooms, and campaign headquarters. The world depicted is one of ambition, power struggles, and moral ambiguity.
- Culture: The screenplay portrays a culture of power and ambition in the political sphere. The characters are driven by their desire for influence, position, and control. Manipulation, deceit, and backstabbing are prevalent as characters seek to advance their agendas. The news media plays a significant role in shaping the narratives and influencing public opinion. The world reflects a society where success is often measured by political power, media attention, and financial wealth.
- Society: The societal structure depicted in the screenplay is hierarchical, with power concentrated among a select few. The characters belong to the political elite, who wield significant influence and privilege. The relationships between characters are often dictated by their positions of power or mutual interests. The screenplay also highlights the gap between the powerful elite and the general public.
- Technology: Technology plays a noticeable role in the screenplay, reflecting a modern society heavily reliant on communication, media, and information technology. Cell phones, computers, laptops, and news websites are frequently used by characters to stay connected, access information, and manipulate the narrative. The use of technology highlights the fast-paced and competitive environment of the political world.
- Characters influence: The world of power and ambition significantly shapes the experiences and actions of the characters. The characters' aspirations, motivations, and decisions are driven by their desire to gain or maintain power. Francis Underwood, the protagonist, is a master manipulator who constantly calculates and plans his moves to achieve his goals. He embodies the cutthroat nature of the political arena, where morality is often compromised in the pursuit of success. Other characters, such as Zoe Barnes and Doug Stamper, also navigate the political landscape, facing moral dilemmas and making difficult choices.
- Narrative contribution: The world of power and ambition serves as the backdrop for the complex narrative of the screenplay. It sets the stage for the political machinations, conflicts, and betrayals that unfold. The physical environment, cultural elements, and societal structure contribute to the development of the plot. The narrative explores the consequences of ambition and the lengths people will go to achieve their goals.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world of power and ambition adds depth to the screenplay's themes. It highlights the clash between personal ambition and moral values. The characters' struggles and choices raise questions about the nature of power, the cost of success, and the limits of morality. The screenplay delves into the consequences of unchecked ambition, showing how the pursuit of power can corrupt and destroy individuals.
central conflict
Francis Underwood's relentless pursuit of power and his willingness to manipulate and ruthlessly eliminate anyone who stands in his way.
primary motivations
- Francis's insatiable ambition and desire for ultimate control.
- Claire's ambition for political gain and status.
- Zoe's quest for recognition and a desire to expose the truth.
- Russo's desperate need for Francis's protection and approval.
catalysts
- The hit-and-run incident that sparks Francis's reflective moment on power and pain.
- Zoe's persistent pursuit of Francis and her determination to expose his secrets.
- Vasquez's decision to pass over Francis for Secretary of State, fueling his determination for revenge.
barriers
- Francis's own moral compromises and the consequences of his ruthless actions.
- Claire's conflicting desires for power and personal fulfillment.
- Zoe's lack of experience and her vulnerability in the cutthroat political world.
- Russo's self-destructive tendencies and his inability to escape Francis's control.
themes
- The corrupting nature of power and the lengths people will go to achieve it.
- The fragility of human morality and the consequences of ruthless ambition.
- The tension between personal relationships and political alliances.
- The role of the media in exposing corruption and holding the powerful accountable.
stakes
The highest stakes are the preservation of democracy and the rule of law, as Francis's actions threaten to undermine the integrity of the political system.
uniqueness factor
The story's exploration of the dark underbelly of politics, showcasing the ruthless and Machiavellian tactics employed by its characters.
audience hook
The intricate web of power dynamics, moral dilemmas, and shocking betrayals keeps viewers on the edge of their seats.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradoxical engine lies in the fact that Francis's ruthless pursuit of power ultimately leads to his own downfall, as his actions alienate those around him and destroy the very system he seeks to control.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another paradoxical engine is the tension between Francis's desire for power and his need for human connection, as his ambition isolates him from those he cares about.
Engine: GPT4
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'House of Cards' pilot is a compelling introduction to a political drama centered around power, manipulation, and ambition. It effectively sets up the main character, Francis Underwood, as a complex anti-hero. The narrative is engaging, with well-paced political intrigue and strong character development. The use of direct camera addresses is a notable stylistic choice that enhances the storytelling.
- The opening scene effectively establishes Francis Underwood's complex character and sets the tone for the series. high ( Scene 1 )
- The inauguration scene effectively uses Francis's internal monologue to reveal his ambitions and cunning, enhancing the narrative depth. high ( Scene 40 )
- The strategic release of the Education Bill details through Zoe's article demonstrates the intricate political games played, highlighting the theme of power and manipulation. high ( Scene 42 )
- The introduction of Zoe Barnes and her interaction with Francis showcases the dynamic between media and politics, adding a layer of intrigue. medium ( Scene 26 )
- The final monologue by Francis at Freddy's BBQ Joint powerfully encapsulates his philosophy and foreshadows his relentless pursuit of power, providing a strong closing. high ( Scene 41 )
- More scenes illustrating the public's reaction to political events could enhance the realism and audience engagement. medium
- The direct address to the camera is a unique narrative technique that effectively draws viewers into Francis's world and mindset. high ( Scene 1 )
Engine: Claude
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for the House of Cards pilot is a compelling and well-crafted political drama that effectively introduces the main character, Francis Underwood, and establishes the central narrative threads. The story is driven by Underwood's ruthless pursuit of power and influence, which is balanced by the nuanced portrayal of his relationship with his wife, Claire. The screenplay also effectively introduces the complex web of political maneuvering and intrigue that will likely be the focus of the series. While some storylines could benefit from further development, the overall narrative strength and character arcs make this a strong candidate for consideration.
- The opening sequence effectively introduces the main character, Francis Underwood, and establishes his dark and cunning nature. The juxtaposition of his calm, charming demeanor with his ruthless actions creates a compelling and ominous tone. high ( Scene 1 (EXT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - NIGHT) )
- The scenes depicting Francis and Claire's relationship showcase their strong partnership and mutual understanding, despite the dark undercurrents in their personal and professional lives. high ( Scene 6 (INT. FRANCIS'S CAR - NIGHT) Scene 9 (INT. UNDERWOOD RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT) )
- The scenes highlighting Francis's manipulation of the political landscape and his ability to outmaneuver his opponents demonstrate his cunning and strategic intelligence, which are central to the narrative. high ( Scene 12 (INT. FRANCIS'S (INNER) OFFICE - DAY) Scene 22 (INT. FRANCIS'S (INNER) OFFICE - CONTINUOUS) )
- The scenes showcasing the developing relationship between Francis and Zoe Barnes, and Zoe's investigation into the Education Bill, add an additional layer of intrigue and conflict to the story. medium ( Scene 36 (INT. NATIONAL GALLERY - DAY) Scene 39 (INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - AFTERNOON) )
- The overall character development and arcs of Francis Underwood and his wife Claire are compelling and well-executed throughout the screenplay. high
- The storyline involving Peter Russo feels somewhat underdeveloped and could use more focus and depth to fully integrate it into the main narrative. medium ( Scene 5 (INT. RUSSO'S OFFICE - MORNING) Scene 16 (INT. RUSSO'S BEDROOM - NIGHT) )
- The scenes involving the Washington Herald newsroom and Zoe's colleagues could be expanded to provide a more well-rounded portrayal of the journalistic environment and its dynamics. low ( Scene 4 (INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - MORNING) Scene 8 (INT. WASHINGTON HERALD - NEWSROOM - NIGHT) )
- While the screenplay effectively conveys the political machinations and power struggles, it could benefit from a deeper exploration of the broader societal and cultural implications of the events depicted. medium
- The final sequences, depicting the Inauguration and its aftermath, provide a strong sense of closure and a glimpse into Francis's continued pursuit of power and influence. high ( Scene 40 (EXT. THE MALL - MORNING) Scene 41 (EXT. PENNSYLVANIA AVENUE - EARLY MORNING) )
- The scenes showcasing Francis's personal moments and his inner thoughts provide valuable insights into his motivations and character development. medium ( Scene 17 (INT. KENNEDY CENTER - LOBBY - NIGHT) Scene 42 (EXT. FREDDY'S BBQ JOINT - MORNING) )
Memorable lines in the script:
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40 | Francis: Power is like real estate. It’s all about location, location, location. |
6 | FRANCIS: The nature of promises, Linda, is that they remain immune to changing circumstances. |
42 | Francis Underwood: There are two kinds of pain, but only one kind of pleasure - total, unstoppable, undeniable victory. |
13 | Francis: He’ll still be smiling when I slit his throat. |
10 | Francis: I love that woman. I love her more than sharks love the smell of blood. |