The Lastlight

A young Air Force intelligence officer is pulled into a parallel universe where he must harness the power of an ancient artifact, the Lastlight, to close a rift between dimensions and stop a powerful evil from destroying both worlds.

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Unique Selling Point

The unique fusion of a military espionage plot with a high-fantasy narrative, involving parallel universes and a mystical artifact, sets 'The Lastlight' apart. Its appeal lies in the intriguing premise of a modern-day Air Force lieutenant entangled in an ancient prophecy, offering a fresh take on both genres.

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Story Facts

Genres: Fantasy, Drama, Mystery, Thriller, Sci-Fi, Romance, Adventure, Action, Military, Horror, War

Setting: Early 2000s and a mystical past, Dystopian world, Kovali, Turkey, and the Kingdom of Lurr

Themes: The Search for the Lastlight and the Confrontation with Mordak, Duty and Sacrifice, Love, Loss, and Longing, Betrayal and Trust, Self-Discovery and the Supernatural

Conflict & Stakes: The struggle against the evil entity Mordak and the quest for the Lastlight, which holds the key to saving their worlds.

Mood: Tense and foreboding with moments of hope and nostalgia.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The concept of 'Lastlight' as a precious resource in a world where light is scarce, driving the narrative.
  • Plot Twist: The revelation of Peter's true lineage and the implications it has for his identity and destiny.
  • Distinctive Setting: The juxtaposition of a dystopian world with a mystical kingdom, creating a rich backdrop for the story.
  • Innovative Ideas: The integration of supernatural elements with military and political intrigue, offering a unique narrative experience.

Comparable Scripts: The Dark Crystal, The Last Airbender, Dune, The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe, Stranger Things, The Matrix, The Witcher, Shadow and Bone, His Dark Materials, The Giver

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Overall Score: 7.44
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