Rambo

Executive Summary

Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend

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Engine: Gemini

Consider

Explanation: Rambo: First Blood Part II is an action-packed screenplay with a strong protagonist and thrilling action sequences. However, it could benefit from more nuanced character development, particularly for the antagonists, and a more balanced approach to pacing and violence. Exploring the psychological impact of war and providing a broader perspective on the Vietnamese characters would further elevate the narrative.

Engine: GPT4

Recommend

Explanation: The screenplay of 'Rambo' is a compelling narrative that combines intense action with deep emotional and psychological exploration of its main character. It effectively sets up a strong premise and delivers a satisfying conclusion with well-executed action sequences. While the main character is well-developed, secondary characters and pacing in certain sections could be improved to enhance the overall impact and depth of the story.

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Overview

Genres: Action, War, Thriller, Drama, Adventure

Setting: Present day, Vietnam, Thailand, and a rock quarry

Overview: The overall score of 8.1 reflects a strong screenplay with well-developed characters, a compelling premise, and effective use of conflict and stakes. The screenplay excels in portraying the emotional and physical challenges faced by soldiers and the complexities of war. However, opportunities exist to enhance the emotional depth, explore thematic nuances, and refine pacing for an even more impactful narrative.

Themes: War is Hell, The Importance of Loyalty, The Search for Redemption

Conflict and Stakes: The primary conflict revolves around Rambo's mission to rescue American POWs in Vietnam, facing opposition from Murdock and Russian soldiers. The stakes are high as lives are on the line, and Rambo's redemption is at risk.

Overall Mood: Tense and action-packed

Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:

Scene 15: Intense and tragic as Co is killed in a firefight

Scene 20: Triumphant and vengeful as Rambo destroys the POW camp and rescues the prisoners

Scene 23: Emotional and reflective as Rambo confronts Trautman and walks away into the distance

Standout Features:

Intense Action Sequences: High-octane action scenes that keep the audience on the edge of their seats

Redemption Arc for Rambo : Exploration of Rambo's journey towards redemption and inner turmoil

Unique Setting in Vietnam : The Vietnam War backdrop adds depth and historical context to the story

Comparable Scripts:

First Blood

The Deer Hunter

Apocalypse Now

Missing in Action

The Green Berets

The Expendables

Extraction

Uncommon Valor

Lone Survivor

The Last of Us

Market Analysis

Budget Estimate:$50-70 million

Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, fans of action, thriller, and war genres

Marketability: Strong franchise with a loyal fan base, action-packed storyline, and iconic lead character

Compelling themes and intense action sequences, potential for international appeal

Well-known characters, established franchise, and relevant social commentary

Profit Potential: High, due to the established franchise, strong international appeal, and potential for box office success

Scene Level Percentiles

The screenplay exhibits strengths in plot, stakes, and unpredictability, but opportunities exist to enhance dialogue, character development, and originality to maximize its potential.

Script Level Percentiles

Characters: 8.5 See More
Premise: 7.75 See More
Structure: 7.75 See More
Theme: 7.5 See More
Visual Impact: 8.25 See More
Emotional Impact: 7.5 See More
Conflict: 8.75 See More
Originality: 8.5 See More

Emotions Elicited Percentiles

Robert McKee: "The audience doesn’t go to the movies to see plot; they go to feel emotion, to be moved."
This is a rough estimate of how the average intensity of emotions elicited in this script compare to all scripts in the Vault (all genres).
Higher isn't necessarily better. This is FYI.

Key Strengths

**Plot:** The screenplay's plot ranks remarkably high in the 89th percentile, indicating a strong foundation and engaging storytelling elements.
**Stakes:** With a percentile of 96.49, the stakes in the screenplay are exceptionally high, creating a sense of urgency and compelling tension for the audience.
**Unpredictability:** The screenplay scores an impressive 83.82 in unpredictability, suggesting that it offers unexpected twists and turns, keeping the audience engaged and guessing throughout the story.

Areas for Improvement

**Dialogue:** The dialogue in the screenplay has received a relatively low percentile of 16.26, indicating a need to enhance the quality and impact of the conversations between characters.
**Characters:** Character development seems to be an area for improvement, with a percentile of 45.12. Focusing on creating more well-rounded and relatable characters can strengthen the emotional connection with the audience.
**Originality:** The screenplay scores a moderate 50th percentile in originality, suggesting that it could benefit from injecting more unique and distinctive elements to set it apart.

Writer Style

The screenplay's percentile patterns suggest a balance between intuition and concept. While the high plot and stakes percentiles indicate conceptual strengths, the relatively lower dialogue and character percentiles point towards intuitive tendencies. This mix can create a compelling blend of engaging plot and relatable characters.

Balancing Elements

Consider infusing more depth and nuance into the dialogue to elevate the character development and enhance the emotional impact.
Explore ways to further differentiate the screenplay by introducing original and unexpected elements that make it stand out from the competition.

Intuition Level

Integrated

Overall Assessment

The screenplay showcases strengths in plot, stakes, and unpredictability, creating a solid foundation for an engaging story. However, to elevate its potential, the screenplay would benefit from improvements in dialogue, character development, and originality.

How this was done: Each criteria is ranked in comparison to scripts in our Vault (such as The Matrix, Breaking Bad, etc.) This allows you to see where you stand compared to other produced scripts for each criteria.

How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library

Note: The ratings are the averages of all the scenes.

Title	Grade	Percentile	Before	After
Scene High Stakes	9.1	97	Battlefield Earth: 9.0	Rambo: 9.1
Script Conflict	8.75	97	Memento: 8.50	Erin Brokovich: 8.75
Scene Plot	8.5	91	Enemy of the State: 8.4	the dark knight rises: 8.5
Scene Story Forward	8.7	91	Enemy of the State: 8.6	Rambo: 8.7
Scene External Goal	7.79	87	Inception: 7.76	Rambo: 7.79
Scene Conflict Level	8.5	84	Sherlock Holmes: 8.4	Rambo: 8.5
Scene Overall	8.6	81	Enemy of the State: 8.5	face/off: 8.6
Script Structure	8.38	81	Interstellar: 8.37	Rambo: 8.38
Scene Pacing	8.50	77	Gladiator: 8.49	Rambo: 8.50
Scene Unpredictability	7.79	75	scream : 7.77	Rambo: 7.79
Scene Emotional Impact	8.1	73	Cruel Intentions: 8.0	Erin Brokovich: 8.1
Scene Character Changes	7.2	73	Gran Torino: 7.1	Erin Brokovich: 7.2
Script Characters	8.50	72	Sherlock Holmes: 8.25	Titanic: 8.50
Scene Formatting	8.38	68	Stranger Things: 8.36	Rambo: 8.38
Script Visual Impact	8.25	64	KILLING ZOE: 8.00	the pursuit of happyness: 8.25
Script Originality	8.50	63	Sherlock Holmes: 8.25	face/off: 8.50
Scene Internal Goal	8.08	62	Enemy of the State: 8.07	face/off: 8.08
Overall Script	8.10	54	Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde : 8.06	the pursuit of happyness: 8.10
Scene Concept	8.1	54	Fleabag: 8.0	Casablanca: 8.1
Scene Engagement	8.96	45	Fleabag: 8.95	Rambo: 8.96
Scene Characters	8.2	44	Hot Fuzz: 8.1	face/off: 8.2
Script Premise	7.75	38	Inception: 7.50	There's something about Mary: 7.75
Scene Originality	8.65	38	Gran Torino: 8.64	Rambo: 8.65
Script Structure	7.75	34	Inception: 7.50	fight Club: 7.75
Script Emotional Impact	7.50	28	Midsommar: 7.25	the pursuit of happyness: 7.50
Scene Dialogue	7.3	14	Stranger Things: 7.2	Rambo: 7.3
Script Theme	7.50	10	2001: 7.25	the pursuit of happyness: 7.50

Writer's Voice

Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by intense and gritty dialogue, vivid descriptions of action sequences and violence, and a focus on themes of survival, loyalty, and moral conflict.

Best representation: Scene 9 - Stealth Infiltration. Scene 9 is the best representation of the writer's voice because it combines intense dialogue, vivid descriptions of violence, and a focus on themes of survival and loyalty, showcasing the writer's ability to create a gritty and suspenseful atmosphere.

Memorable Lines:

Rambo: Nothing is over!!! (Scene 1)
Rambo: We win... you lose! Mission Accomplished! (Scene 26)
Trautman: Men! Men who died for their country, you bastard! (Scene 16)
Rambo: ... Murdock, I'm coming to get you. (Scene 19)
Co Bao: Let me go, please! (Scene 8)

Writing Style:

The overall writing style of the screenplay is characterized by intense action sequences, gritty dialogue, and complex character dynamics. The scenes often explore themes of moral ambiguity, heroism, survival, and sacrifice, with a strong focus on the physicality and emotional depth of the characters.

Style Similarities:

Sylvester Stallone
Christopher McQuarrie
Christopher Nolan

Other Similarities: The screenplay also draws inspiration from other notable screenwriters such as John Milius, David Ayer, James Cameron, and Quentin Tarantino. These influences contribute to the overall gritty realism, intense action, and exploration of moral complexities throughout the screenplay.

Story Shape

Emotions Elicited

Engine: Gemini

Screenplay Rating:

Consider

Executive Summary

Rambo: First Blood Part II is an action-packed screenplay with a strong protagonist and thrilling action sequences. However, it could benefit from more nuanced character development, particularly for the antagonists, and a more balanced approach to pacing and violence. Exploring the psychological impact of war and providing a broader perspective on the Vietnamese characters would further elevate the narrative.

Strengths

Strong and clear protagonist with a compelling character arc. Rambo's journey from a broken veteran to a determined rescuer is engaging and emotionally resonant. high
Vivid and immersive action sequences. The screenplay effectively utilizes its setting and props to create thrilling and suspenseful action. high ( Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 25 )
The relationship between Rambo and Co adds emotional depth and complexity to the narrative. medium ( Scene 9 Scene 14 Scene 21 )
Exploitation of political themes and commentary on the aftermath of war adds layers to the story. medium ( Scene 16 Scene 26 )
Effective use of dialogue to convey character motivations and emotions. low ( Scene 1 Scene 26 )

Areas of Improvement

The antagonists lack depth and complexity, often falling into stereotypical portrayals of villains. high
The pacing can feel uneven at times, with some scenes feeling rushed and others dragging. medium
The torture sequence, while intense, is quite graphic and may be excessive for some audiences. medium ( Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 )
The screenplay relies heavily on action and violence, which may overshadow the character development and thematic exploration. low

MissingElements

Deeper exploration of the psychological impact of war on Rambo and the P.O.W.s would enhance the emotional weight of the story. high
More nuanced portrayal of the Vietnamese characters beyond stereotypes would enrich the narrative and provide a broader perspective on the conflict. medium

NotablePoints

The opening montage effectively connects the sequel to the original film and establishes the context for Rambo's character arc. medium ( Scene 1 Scene 2 )
The ending leaves room for interpretation and potential sequels. medium ( Scene 26 )

Engine: Claude

Screenplay Rating:

Recommend

Executive Summary

The screenplay for 'Rambo' is a well-crafted and compelling action-thriller that explores themes of loyalty, sacrifice, and the lasting impact of war. The character of Rambo is exceptionally well-developed, with a clear arc that drives the narrative forward. The action sequences are expertly choreographed, and the use of the bow and arrow as Rambo's primary weapon adds a unique and compelling element to the fight scenes. While there are some areas for improvement, such as the further development of the supporting characters and the inclusion of more sensory details, the overall quality of the screenplay is high, and it is a strong candidate for production consideration.

Strengths

The screenplay has a strong and compelling narrative that keeps the audience engaged throughout. The pacing is well-structured, with a good balance of action, character development, and thematic exploration. high
The character of Rambo is well-developed, with a clear arc and motivations that drive the story forward. His transformation from a broken, expendable soldier to a skilled, determined warrior is conveyed effectively. high ( Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 )
The action sequences are expertly crafted, with a strong sense of tension and a clear visual style. The use of the bow and arrow as Rambo's primary weapon adds a unique and compelling element to the fight scenes. high ( Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 13 )
The screenplay explores themes of loyalty, sacrifice, and the lasting impact of war in a thoughtful and nuanced way, without being preachy or heavy-handed. medium
The confrontation between Trautman and Murdock provides a compelling and high-stakes narrative twist, revealing the true nature of the mission and the government's involvement. medium ( Scene 16 )

Areas of Improvement

The subplot involving Co and her desire to leave Vietnam with Rambo could be further developed and integrated more seamlessly into the overall narrative. medium ( Scene 14 Scene 15 )
While the supporting characters are well-defined, there is room for further exploration and development of their backstories and motivations. low
Some of the dialogue, particularly in the more expository scenes, could be refined to sound more natural and less on-the-nose. low

MissingElements

The screenplay could benefit from some additional visual descriptions and sensory details to further immerse the audience in the rich and evocative setting of the Vietnam jungle. medium
While the overarching themes are well-explored, the screenplay could delve deeper into the psychological and emotional toll of the war on Rambo and the other characters. medium

NotablePoints

The confrontation between Rambo and Murdock, as well as Rambo's final showdown with the Russian and Vietnamese forces, are particularly well-executed and impactful sequences that showcase the character's transformation and the high stakes of the mission. high ( Scene 16 Scene 25 )
The screenplay's use of the Vietnam War setting and the POW/MIA issue as a backdrop for the story is a compelling and relevant choice that resonates with the target audience. high
The non-linear structure of the screenplay, with flashbacks and parallel storylines, adds depth and complexity to the narrative and keeps the audience engaged. medium

Engine: GPT4

Screenplay Rating:

Recommend

Executive Summary

The screenplay of 'Rambo' is a compelling narrative that combines intense action with deep emotional and psychological exploration of its main character. It effectively sets up a strong premise and delivers a satisfying conclusion with well-executed action sequences. While the main character is well-developed, secondary characters and pacing in certain sections could be improved to enhance the overall impact and depth of the story.

Strengths

The screenplay effectively captures intense action sequences and emotional depth, particularly in the portrayal of Rambo's character and his struggles. high
The climactic sequence where Rambo rescues the POWs is particularly well-executed, providing a satisfying resolution to the narrative arc. high ( Scene 26 )
The opening scenes set up the story's premise and Rambo's character motivations clearly and engagingly. medium ( Scene 1 Scene 2 )
The dialogue, especially Rambo's, is concise and impactful, enhancing the dramatic tension and character development. medium
The use of environment in action scenes, such as the jungle setting, adds a layer of complexity and realism to the combat sequences. medium ( Scene 25 )

Areas of Improvement

Some character arcs besides Rambo's, such as that of Trautman and Murdock, could be further developed to enhance the narrative depth. medium
The pacing in the middle sections could be tightened to maintain momentum and keep the audience engaged throughout. medium
More background on the antagonists' motivations could provide a clearer understanding of the stakes and enrich the plot. low
Incorporating more visual descriptions could enhance the screenplay's adaptability to film, giving better guidance on the intended visual impact. low
The emotional depth of secondary characters could be explored further to create a more immersive and relatable story. low

MissingElements

The screenplay could benefit from more scenes showing Rambo's interactions with other characters to build his relationships and emotional network. medium

NotablePoints

The screenplay's depiction of Rambo as a complex, troubled hero with deep personal issues provides a strong emotional core. high
The intense action sequences are well-crafted, offering potential for high-impact visual scenes in a film adaptation. high

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Screenplay Insights:

Characters: 8.5, The screenplay effectively develops the protagonist, Rambo, showcasing his transformation from a hardened and reserved soldier to a resilient and determined warrior. The supporting characters, Trautman and Co Bao, also undergo meaningful growth and contribute to the screenplay's emotional impact. However, the screenplay could benefit from further development of the antagonists and exploration of the themes to deepen the narrative's resonance with the audience. See More

Premise: 7.75, The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a clear and engaging narrative centered around a rescue mission in a war-torn setting. Its strength lies in the compelling character of Rambo and the high-stakes action sequences. However, the premise could be enhanced by exploring the moral complexities of war and the psychological impact on soldiers, offering a deeper layer of intrigue. See More

Structure: 7.75, The screenplay for "Rambo" exhibits a coherent narrative structure and well-paced plot development. However, certain aspects could be refined to enhance the overall storytelling dynamics, particularly the utilization of subplots and the pacing of certain scenes. See More

Theme: 7.5, The screenplay effectively explores the PTSD experienced by soldiers returning from war, highlighting the struggle to adjust to civilian life and the challenges they face in reintegrating into society. The movie does a good job of conveying the emotional and psychological toll that war takes on individuals, their relationships and the lasting trauma suffered by soldiers. However, it could benefit from a deeper exploration of the moral dilemmas that arise in war, as well as the broader political context that drives the conflict. See More

Visual Impact: 8.25, The screenplay demonstrates a solid foundation for visual storytelling, effectively immersing the reader in the intense and action-packed narrative. The vivid descriptions of the harsh quarry setting, the soldiers' grueling labor, and the tense atmosphere create a visually compelling backdrop for the unfolding events. The screenplay excels in capturing the physicality of the characters, particularly the hardened and determined demeanor of Rambo. See More

Emotional Impact: 7.5, The screenplay demonstrates strengths in crafting intense action sequences and engaging character arcs, but opportunities exist to enhance its emotional depth and resonance. By exploring the complexities of each character's emotional journey, the screenplay can amplify its emotional impact and create a more immersive and thought-provoking experience for the audience. See More

Conflict: 8.75, The screenplay effectively employs conflict and stakes to generate tension and engage the audience. It presents a compelling conflict between Rambo and his adversaries, with high stakes for both sides. The screenplay's resolution provides a satisfying conclusion to the conflict and leaves the audience feeling invested in Rambo's journey. See More

Originality: 8.5, This screenplay effectively combines classic action elements with a timely and resonant narrative, resulting in a fresh and captivating story. Its exploration of the complexities of war and the resilience of the human spirit adds depth and emotional weight to the thrilling action sequences. See More

Summary In "Rambo: First Blood Part II," we follow the journey of John Rambo as he is offered a pardon in exchange for a covert mission to rescue American POWs in Vietnam. Despite initial doubts, Rambo accepts the mission with a sense of hope and redemption. Along the way, he faces numerous challenges and betrayals but ultimately succeeds in rescuing the POWs and exacting revenge on those who betrayed him. Through his actions, Rambo proves his unwavering loyalty to his country and his dedication to his fellow soldiers, ultimately disappearing into the distance as a symbol of his sacrifice and heroism.

Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The overall plot and story of the screenplay is engaging and action-packed, presenting a gripping narrative that keeps the audience on the edge of their seats. The premise of a skilled soldier sent on a covert mission to rescue POWs in Vietnam is compelling and provides a solid foundation for the story. The character dynamics between Rambo, his team, and the captors add depth and tension to the plot. The action sequences are well-executed and intense, showcasing Rambo's exceptional combat skills and resourcefulness. However, the screenplay could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the ethical implications of Rambo's actions and the psychological toll it takes on him. Additionally, the motivations of some characters, particularly the captors, could be further developed to provide a more well-rounded understanding of their actions and beliefs.

Suggestions:

Explore the psychological impact of Rambo's actions on his mental state and relationships.
Delve deeper into the motivations and backgrounds of the captors to provide a more nuanced understanding of their actions.
Incorporate moments of introspection and reflection to provide depth to the characters and their struggles.
Consider adding scenes that highlight the human cost of war and the impact it has on both soldiers and civilians.
Enhance the emotional stakes by exploring the personal relationships and connections between the characters.

Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here

Beginning The beginning of the screenplay effectively sets up the premise and introduces the main characters. The opening scene in the quarry establishes Rambo's hardened nature and provides a glimpse into his past. The subsequent scenes introduce Trautman and the mission briefing, creating a sense of urgency and intrigue. The tension builds as Rambo arrives in Thailand and meets his team. The initial interactions between Rambo and the other characters hint at potential conflicts and alliances. However, the exposition-heavy dialogue could be streamlined to enhance the pacing and create a more engaging start.

Suggestions:

Consider adding a pre-credits sequence that showcases Rambo's past experiences in war to provide a stronger emotional connection to his character.
Tighten the dialogue in the mission briefing scene to make it more concise and impactful.
Introduce the other team members in a more organic way, highlighting their unique skills and personalities.
Create a stronger sense of danger or urgency in the opening scenes to immediately captivate the audience.
Explore visual techniques or flashbacks to provide a deeper insight into Rambo's motivations and inner conflicts.

Middle The middle part of the screenplay delivers intense action sequences and thrilling escapes. Rambo's infiltration of the POW camp and his subsequent rescue mission are well-executed and keep the audience engaged. The introduction of Co Bao adds a new dynamic to the story, providing both support and emotional depth to Rambo's character. However, the pacing could be tightened in some sections to maintain a consistently high level of tension and suspense. Additionally, the motivations and actions of the captors could be further developed to add complexity to the conflict.

Suggestions:

Consider trimming down some of the action sequences to maintain a brisk pace and avoid any lulls in the storytelling.
Explore the relationship between Rambo and Co Bao in more depth, showcasing their growing trust and reliance on each other.
Add scenes that reveal the captors' own struggles and motivations, humanizing them and making the conflict more nuanced.
Incorporate moments of suspense and uncertainty to keep the audience guessing about the outcome of the mission.
Utilize flashbacks or dream sequences to delve into Rambo's past and provide insights into his character.

Ending The ending of the screenplay delivers a satisfying conclusion to Rambo's mission. The final confrontation between Rambo and the captors is intense and cathartic, showcasing Rambo's unwavering determination and combat skills. The rescue of the POWs and the emotional reunion with Trautman provide a sense of closure and uplift. However, the motivations and actions of some characters, particularly Murdock, could be further explored to provide a more well-rounded understanding of their choices. Additionally, the ending could benefit from a stronger emotional punch to leave a lasting impact on the audience.

Suggestions:

Expand on Murdock's character and motivations, revealing the complexities that drive his actions.
Add scenes that highlight the emotional toll the mission has taken on Rambo and his team.
Consider incorporating a twist or unexpected event to enhance the emotional impact of the ending.
Explore the long-term consequences of Rambo's actions and the impact it has on his life and the lives of others.
Provide a stronger sense of closure or resolution to the story by addressing the fates of all the main characters.

CharacterInconsistencies

Character Rambo
Description Rambo's initial reluctance to participate in the mission seems inconsistent with his strong desire to 'win' the war and help fellow soldiers. His quick acceptance afterwards feels abrupt.
( Scene 1 )
Character Murdock
Description Murdock's shift from seemingly caring about POWs to actively hindering their rescue is a significant inconsistency. His motivations and true intentions remain unclear and require further development.
( Scene 2 (3) Scene 4 Scene 15 )

StoryInconsistencies

Description The mission's objective is to gather photographic evidence of POWs, yet Rambo takes direct action to rescue them, deviating from the plan without clear justification.
( Scene 9 Scene 12 )
Description The presence of American POWs in the camp contradicts the earlier assertion that the camp was supposed to be empty. This discrepancy needs to be addressed and explained for narrative coherence.
( Scene 10 Scene 12 )

PlotHoles

Description Murdock's decision to abort the mission and leave Rambo behind despite knowing there are POWs lacks a convincing rationale. His actions seem driven by plot convenience rather than logical motivations.
( Scene 15 Scene 26 )

DialogueAuthenticity

Description Co's rapid shift to fluent English after initially speaking Vietnamese feels abrupt and lacks a natural progression.
( Scene 9 )

Redundancies

Element Rambo's stoicism and lack of dialogue

Suggestion While Rambo's quiet nature is a defining characteristic, incorporating occasional moments of vulnerability or introspection could add depth and complexity to his character.

Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:

Rambo

Rambo is a hardened, stoic, and determined soldier haunted by his past experiences in war. He is driven by a strong sense of duty, honor, and a desire for redemption. His actions speak louder than words, showcasing his bravery, resourcefulness, and unwavering loyalty. Rambo's speaking style is direct, terse, and intense, reflecting his no-nonsense attitude and focus on the mission at hand.

Trautman

Colonel Trautman is a seasoned military leader who serves as a mentor figure to Rambo. He cares deeply for Rambo and provides guidance and support throughout the story. Trautman's speaking style is authoritative, compassionate, and measured, reflecting his experience, wisdom, and strong sense of duty. He values honor, loyalty, and sacrifice, and is willing to confront authority to uphold what he believes is right.

Co Bao

Co Bao is a resourceful, brave, and resilient young woman who has faced loss and hardship with strength. She is quick-witted, observant, and determined to survive and protect those around her. Co Bao's speaking style is candid, introspective, and assertive, with a hint of vulnerability that adds depth to her character. She uses metaphors and imagery to convey her thoughts and feelings, showing her intelligence and resilience.

Co is a resourceful, brave, and empathetic young woman who has faced loss and hardship but remains resilient. She is quick-witted, observant, and adaptable, willing to work with others to achieve a common goal. Co shows compassion, loyalty, and a strong sense of justice, willing to risk her life to help others. Her speaking style is thoughtful, perceptive, and determined, with a hint of vulnerability beneath her tough exterior.

Character	Arc	Critique	Suggestions
Rambo	Rambo starts as a solitary and reserved soldier, hesitant to take on dangerous missions but ultimately agreeing to seek redemption. Throughout the screenplay, he evolves into a resilient and determined warrior, facing extreme adversity with strength and courage. His emotional turmoil leads to a deep sense of justice and a desire for revenge, culminating in a self-sacrificial act to save others.	The character arc for Rambo is well-developed, showcasing his growth from a reluctant soldier to a selfless hero. However, there could be more exploration of his internal struggles and emotional depth to further enhance his complexity as a character. Additionally, providing more insight into his past traumas and how they shape his actions could add depth to his arc.	To improve the character arc, consider incorporating flashback scenes that delve into Rambo's past experiences in war, highlighting the emotional scars that drive his actions. Show moments of vulnerability and internal conflict to humanize him and make his journey more relatable to the audience. Additionally, explore his relationships with other characters to add layers to his development and showcase different facets of his personality.
Trautman	Trautman starts off as a mentor figure to Rambo, guiding him through the mission with authority and wisdom. As the story progresses, Trautman's commitment to his beliefs is tested, leading him to confront authority and make difficult decisions to protect his team and uphold his principles. Ultimately, Trautman's arc culminates in a moment of sacrifice, where he puts his own life on the line to save his team and ensure the mission's success.	The character arc for Trautman is well-developed and engaging, showcasing his values and principles while highlighting his mentorship role with Rambo. However, the arc could benefit from more internal conflict and emotional depth to further explore Trautman's struggles and motivations. Additionally, providing more backstory or context for Trautman's beliefs and actions could enhance the audience's understanding and connection to the character.	To improve the character arc for Trautman, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that delves into his past experiences and the events that shaped his values and beliefs. This will add depth to his character and provide a more nuanced understanding of his actions throughout the story. Additionally, exploring Trautman's internal conflicts and emotional struggles in more detail can create a more compelling and relatable character arc for the audience to follow.
Co Bao	Co Bao starts off as a survivor of war, adapting to the harsh realities of her environment. Throughout the screenplay, she forms a strong bond with Rambo and becomes an integral part of his mission. As the story progresses, Co Bao's courage and resourcefulness are put to the test, leading her to confront her past traumas and fears. By the end of the screenplay, Co Bao emerges as a true hero, having overcome her personal struggles and proven herself as a valuable ally to Rambo.	The character arc for Co Bao is well-developed, showcasing her growth and transformation throughout the screenplay. However, there could be more emphasis on Co Bao's internal struggles and emotional journey, allowing the audience to connect with her on a deeper level. Additionally, providing more backstory and context for Co Bao's past experiences could enhance her character development and make her arc even more compelling.	To improve the character arc for Co Bao, consider incorporating flashback scenes or dialogue that delve into her past traumas and motivations. This will help the audience understand her actions and decisions better, adding complexity to her character. Additionally, exploring Co Bao's relationships with other characters in more depth could further enrich her arc and create more opportunities for emotional growth and conflict.
Co	Co starts off as a courageous and resourceful character who aids Rambo in his escape attempt. As the story progresses, she forms a strong bond with Rambo and becomes a loyal ally, willing to sacrifice herself for the greater good. However, she experiences a tragic loss that highlights her selflessness and inner strength. In the end, Co's character arc showcases her growth from a brave individual to a selfless hero who fights for justice and compassion.	The character arc for Co is well-developed, showcasing her evolution from a courageous ally to a selfless hero. However, the arc could benefit from more internal conflict or personal stakes to further deepen Co's character development. Additionally, providing more backstory or emotional depth to Co's motivations could enhance the audience's connection to her journey.	To improve the character arc for Co, consider incorporating flashbacks or moments of introspection that reveal her past traumas or personal struggles. This will add depth to her character and provide a clearer understanding of her motivations. Additionally, exploring Co's relationships with other characters in more depth could create more emotional resonance and complexity in her journey. Overall, focusing on Co's internal growth and emotional journey will enhance the impact of her character arc in the screenplay.

Theme

Theme Details

Themee Explanation

War is Hell

The film depicts the horrors of war through graphic scenes of violence and torture. Rambo is a killing machine who is forced to commit unspeakable acts in order to survive. The film also shows the devastating effects of war on the human psyche, as Rambo is left traumatized and unable to reintegrate into society.

This theme is a common one in war films. It serves to remind viewers of the human cost of war and the importance of peace.

Strengthening War is Hell:

Suggestion Type	How to Strengthen the Theme
Dialogue - Scene 15	Add dialogue where Murdock explicitly acknowledges the inhumane treatment of the POWs, stating that it violates the Geneva Conventions. This dialogue would underscore the moral dilemma faced by Rambo and the extent to which the US government has compromised its own values.
Action - Scene 23	Incorporate a scene where Rambo intentionally sets fire to the forest to create a diversion and attack the Vietnamese soldiers. This action would showcase Rambo's ruthlessness and desperation, further emphasizing the brutal nature of war.
Visual - Scene 10	Enhance the visual impact of Rambo's infiltration into the POW camp by adding shots that highlight the oppressive atmosphere, such as close-ups of barbed wire, watchtowers, and the faces of the guards. This would visually reinforce the theme of war as a dehumanizing force.
Character Arc - Scene 24	Expand on Rambo's emotional journey in the aftermath of the helicopter crash. Show him struggling with the trauma of the mission and the weight of the lives he has lost. This would add depth to Rambo's character and emphasize the psychological toll of war.
Story Arc - Scene 26	Alter Rambo's final decision. Instead of walking away, have him return to the US and confront the government about the true nature of the mission and the treatment of POWs. This would provide a more impactful conclusion that reinforces the theme of war as a critique of society.

The Importance of Loyalty

The film shows the importance of loyalty to one's comrades and to one's mission. Rambo is willing to risk his life to save his fellow POWs and to complete his mission, even when it seems impossible. The film also shows the betrayal of loyalty by Murdock, who sends Rambo on a suicide mission in order to cover up his own mistakes.

This theme is also common in war films. It serves to remind viewers of the importance of standing by one's friends and allies, even in the face of danger.

The Search for Redemption

The film shows Rambo's search for redemption after the horrors of war. He wants to atone for his sins and to find peace. The film also shows the importance of forgiveness, as Rambo is able to forgive his enemies and move on with his life.

This theme is common in many different types of films. It serves to remind viewers of the importance of redemption and forgiveness.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	The protagonist's internal goals evolved from seeking redemption and validation to finding closure and justice throughout the script.
External Goals	The protagonist's external goals evolved from accepting a covert mission to fighting against oppressive forces and rescuing prisoners throughout the script.
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the contrast between redemption and survival, duty and morality, and the value of human life in the context of war.

Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals reflect his growth from seeking personal redemption to embracing a sense of duty and justice. The philosophical conflict challenges his beliefs and values, leading to a deeper understanding of himself and the world around him.

Narrative Structure Contribution: The evolution of the protagonist's goals and the philosophical conflict drive the narrative forward, creating tension and emotional depth in each scene. The resolution of the goals and conflict shape the character's journey and the overall plot.

Thematic Depth Contribution: The protagonist's journey, goals, and philosophical conflict add thematic depth to the screenplay by exploring themes of redemption, survival, duty, morality, and the value of human life in war. These elements provide a nuanced exploration of the complexities of personal growth and societal responsibility.

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

Story Content

Character Development

Scene Elements

Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \ It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.

			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - Redemption in the Quarry	Intense, Serious, Emotional	8	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	8	7	9	9	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
2 - Arrival at a Military Base	Serious, Confident, Nostalgic	8	7	8	8	8	6	8	7.5	6	8	7	8	8	6	7	9	8	8	8
3 - Briefing for the Mission	Tense, Informative, Serious	8	8	8	9	7	6	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	7	8	9	8	8	8
4 - Mission Preparation and Doubts	Intense, Serious, Suspenseful	8	8	7	8	8	6	8	7	7	8	9	8	7	6	7	8	8	9	9
5 - Mission Preparations	Tense, Serious, Reflective, Intense	8	8	8	9	7	6	8	7	7	8	9	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
6 - Rambo's Jump	Tense, Panic, Foreboding	8	8	9	9	7	6	8	7	9	8	10	8	8	8	6	9	9	8	8
7 - Helicopter Malfunction and Jungle Cat-and-Mouse	Tense, Suspenseful, Mysterious, Intense	8	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	8	8	9	8	7	7	6	9	8	8	8
8 - Encounter in the Jungle	Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic	8	7	9	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	8	9	8	7	7	9	8	8	8
9 - Conversation on the Sampan	Tense, Reflective, Suspenseful	8	8	7	8	9	7	8	7	7	8	7	8	7	8	8	9	8	8	8
10 - Stealth Infiltration	Tense, Stealthy, Dark, Suspenseful, Intense	8	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
11 - Rambo Rescues P.O.W. from Crucifixion	Tense, Suspenseful, Grim, Intense	9	9	9	8	8	7	8	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	8	9	9	9	9
12 - Escape from the POW Camp	Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Emotional	8	7	9	9	8	7	8	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	9	9	9
13 - Ambush on the River	Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic	9	8	9	9	8	7	8	9	9	8	10	9	8	8	7	9	9	9	9
14 - Rambo and Co Part Ways	Intense, Suspenseful, Emotional, Heroic	9	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
15 - Conflict and Abandonment	Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic	9	8	9	9	8	7	8	9	9	8	10	9	8	9	7	9	9	8	8
16 - Torture and Confrontation	Tense, Angry, Confrontational, Dramatic	9	9	9	9	9	8	8	9	9	9	9	9	8	9	8	9	9	9	9
17 - Interrogation and Escape	Intense, Suspenseful, Grim, Tense	9	8	9	8	9	8	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	9	8	9	8	8	8
18 - Torture and Threats	Intense, Grim, Suspenseful	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	9	10	8	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
19 - Rambo's Interrogation and Escape	Intense, Suspenseful, Defiant, Chilling, Aggressive	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	8	10	9	8	9	8	9	8	8	8
20 - Clash at the POW Camp	Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Tense	9	8	9	9	8	7	8	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	9	8	8
21 - Co's Sacrifice	Intense, Emotional, Gritty, Tragic	9	8	9	9	9	9	8	9	9	8	9	9	8	10	8	9	9	9	9
22 - Rambo's Escape	Intense, Suspenseful, Violent, Dark	9	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	9	8	8
23 - Rambo Ignites the Fire of War	Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Violent	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	9	9	8	9	9	8	9	7	9	9	9	9
24 - Rambo's Daring Escape	Intense, Dramatic, Suspenseful	9	8	9	9	8	7	8	9	9	8	10	9	8	8	7	9	9	9	9
25 - Rambo Rescues POWs	Intense, Emotional, Heroic, Tense, Dramatic	9	9	9	8	8	8	9	8	9	8	10	9	8	9	7	9	9	9	9
26 - Operation Accomplished	Intense, Emotional, Resolute, Tense	9	8	9	8	8	8	9	8	9	8	9	9	8	9	8	9	9	9	9

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.

Scene Strengths

Intense action sequences
Emotional depth
Strong character development
High stakes
Engaging dialogue

Scene Weaknesses

Limited character development
Some cliched elements
Minimal dialogue
Slightly predictable plot twists
Disturbing content

Suggestions

Focus on developing characters further and avoiding cliched elements
Consider adding more impactful and less predictable elements to the plot
Be mindful of balancing action with emotional depth and character development
Explore different dialogue styles and avoid overusing exposition-heavy dialogue
Be aware of potential graphic or disturbing content and its impact on viewers

World Building

Physical environment: The screenplay takes place in a variety of locations, from a federal prison quarry to a military base in Thailand, a hanger, a rainforest, a P.O.W. camp, and a jungle. The physical environment is often harsh and unforgiving, reflecting the challenges faced by the characters. The quarry is a place of hard labor and oppression, while the rainforest is a dangerous and unforgiving place filled with enemies. The P.O.W. camp is a place of torture and misery, and the jungle is a place of death. The harshness of the physical environment forces the characters to adapt and survive, and it also contributes to the sense of danger and suspense that runs throughout the screenplay.
Culture: The screenplay explores a variety of cultures, from the American military culture to the Vietnamese culture. The American military culture is one of honor, duty, and sacrifice. The Vietnamese culture is one of resilience and survival. The clash between these two cultures is a major source of conflict in the screenplay. The American soldiers are often seen as outsiders in Vietnam, and they struggle to understand the Vietnamese people and their culture. The Vietnamese people, on the other hand, are often seen as victims of the war, and they are forced to endure great suffering. The cultural differences between the two groups make it difficult for them to find common ground, and this difficulty contributes to the tragedy of the screenplay.
Society: The screenplay depicts a society that is divided by war. The American soldiers are fighting to protect their country from communism, while the Vietnamese people are fighting for their independence. The war has created a deep divide between the two groups, and it has led to a great deal of suffering. The American soldiers are often seen as oppressors, while the Vietnamese people are often seen as victims. The social divisions in the screenplay reflect the deep divisions that exist in the real world, and they serve as a reminder of the devastating effects of war.
Technology: The screenplay features a variety of weapons and technology, from guns to helicopters to napalm. The weapons and technology are used to wage war, and they are a major source of violence and destruction. The guns are used to kill people, the helicopters are used to transport troops and supplies, and the napalm is used to burn down villages. The technology in the screenplay is a reflection of the technological advancements that were made during the Vietnam War, and it serves as a reminder of the destructive power of modern warfare.
Characters influence: The world elements in the screenplay have a profound impact on the characters' experiences and actions. The harsh physical environment forces the characters to adapt and survive. The cultural differences between the American soldiers and the Vietnamese people make it difficult for them to find common ground. The social divisions in the screenplay lead to a great deal of suffering. The weapons and technology in the screenplay are used to wage war and cause destruction. All of these world elements combine to create a challenging and dangerous environment for the characters.
Narrative contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the narrative in a number of ways. The harsh physical environment provides a backdrop for the action and suspense. The cultural differences between the American soldiers and the Vietnamese people create conflict and tension. The social divisions in the screenplay lead to tragedy. The weapons and technology in the screenplay are used to wage war and cause destruction. All of these world elements work together to create a compelling and engaging narrative.
Thematic depth contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay. The harsh physical environment reflects the challenges of war and survival. The cultural differences between the American soldiers and the Vietnamese people highlight the importance of understanding and respecting different cultures. The social divisions in the screenplay explore the devastating effects of war. The weapons and technology in the screenplay symbolize the destructive power of modern warfare. All of these world elements combine to create a screenplay that is rich in thematic depth and meaning.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	The writer's voice is characterized by intense and gritty dialogue, vivid descriptions of action sequences and violence, and a focus on themes of survival, loyalty, and moral conflict.
Voice Contribution	The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a sense of urgency, suspense, and moral complexity, enhancing the mood and themes of the screenplay.
Best Representation Scene	9 - Conversation on the Sampan
Best Scene Explanation	Scene 9 is the best representation of the writer's voice because it combines intense dialogue, vivid descriptions of violence, and a focus on themes of survival and loyalty, showcasing the writer's ability to create a gritty and suspenseful atmosphere.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
Suspenseful Scenes Dominate	The screenplay heavily relies on suspenseful scenes, with over half of the scenes (15 out of 26) receiving a score of 8 or higher in this category. These scenes often create a sense of tension, anticipation, and uncertainty, which drives the narrative forward and keeps the audience engaged.
Emotional Impact and Conflict Align	Scenes with high emotional impact tend to also have strong conflict. This correlation suggests that the screenplay effectively uses conflict to evoke emotions in the audience, creating a more engaging and impactful viewing experience.
Dialogue and Character Changes Often Linked	Scenes with strong dialogue often coincide with significant character changes. This indicates that the screenplay uses dialogue not only to convey information but also to develop and transform the characters, adding depth and complexity to their arcs.
High Stakes Scenes Drive the Story	Scenes with high stakes tend to have a greater impact on moving the story forward. These scenes raise the tension and urgency, compelling the characters to make difficult choices and confront their challenges, resulting in a more engaging and dynamic narrative.
Emotional Depth in Intense Scenes	Intense scenes often delve into emotional depths, exploring complex feelings and inner struggles. This interplay adds emotional weight to the narrative, allowing the audience to connect on a deeper level with the characters and their experiences.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

The screenplay showcased a consistent level of writing craft, effectively conveying tension, action, and character-driven narratives throughout the analyzed scenes. The writer demonstrated a strong ability to create immersive and engaging storytelling through a blend of intense action, compelling character interactions, and exploration of moral dilemmas. The unique voice and style of the writer were evident in the vivid descriptions, impactful dialogue, and attention to character dynamics.

Key Improvement Areas

Character Development and Dialogue

While the scenes effectively established characters and their motivations, there were opportunities to delve deeper into their emotional depth and interpersonal relationships. Enhancing character development and crafting more nuanced dialogue would strengthen the emotional impact and resonance with the audience.

Pacing and Structure

Some scenes could benefit from a tighter pacing and more efficient structure. Refining the flow of events and streamlining the narrative would enhance the overall impact and keep the audience engaged throughout the screenplay.

Emotional Depth and Moral Dilemmas

Several scenes had the potential to explore moral dilemmas and emotional depth more fully. By delving deeper into the characters' struggles and conflicts, the writer can create a more emotionally resonant and thought-provoking narrative.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Screenplay	Read 'Syd Field's Screenwriting' by Syd Field for a comprehensive guide to screenplay structure, character development, and dialogue writing.	This book provides valuable insights and techniques that can enhance the writer's craft in all aspects of screenwriting.
Video	Watch video essays on YouTube by channels like 'Lessons from the Screenplay' and 'Film Courage' to analyze successful screenplays and learn from industry experts.	Visual examples and expert perspectives can provide valuable insights into effective storytelling techniques and common pitfalls to avoid.
Course	Consider taking an online screenwriting course or workshop to receive personalized feedback, engage in discussions, and practice writing exercises.	Structured learning and guidance from experienced instructors can accelerate the writer's progress and provide valuable insights into their writing.
Exercise	Practice writing dialogue-driven scenes that explore complex emotions and relationships between characters.Practice In SceneProv	This exercise helps develop the writer's ability to create engaging and emotionally resonant dialogue that drives the narrative forward.
Exercise	Outline the screenplay's plot, identifying key turning points, conflicts, and character arcs, and analyze the pacing and structure.Practice In SceneProv	This exercise helps improve the writer's understanding of storytelling structure, pacing, and how to effectively build tension and resolve conflicts.
Exercise	Craft a character backstory and explore their motivations, fears, and desires in detail.Practice In SceneProv	This exercise helps develop well-rounded and relatable characters that drive the narrative and engage the audience on an emotional level.

Additional Notes: The writer showcased a strong foundation in storytelling and action writing. By focusing on refining character development, emotional depth, and narrative structure, the writer can elevate their craft and create even more compelling and impactful screenplays in the future.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
Action Hero	Rambo is a highly skilled and experienced soldier, who is able to take on large numbers of enemies and come out victorious.	An action hero is a protagonist who is skilled in fighting and combat, and who often uses their skills to save the day or defeat the villains.
Damsel in Distress	Co is a young Vietnamese woman who is captured by the Vietnamese and held prisoner in a POW camp. Rambo rescues her and helps her escape.	A damsel in distress is a female character who is in danger and needs to be rescued by a male character.
Fish out of Water	Rambo is a soldier who is sent to Vietnam on a mission to rescue POWs. He is not familiar with the country or the culture, and he has to learn how to adapt to the new environment.	A fish out of water is a character who is placed in a new and unfamiliar environment, and who has to learn how to adapt to the new surroundings.
MacGuffin	The MacGuffin is a device or object that is important to the plot, but which has no intrinsic value or purpose. In this case, the MacGuffin is the photographs of the POWs.	A MacGuffin is a plot device that is used to drive the plot forward, but which has no intrinsic value or purpose.
Mission Impossible	Rambo's mission to rescue the POWs is extremely difficult and dangerous, and there is a high probability that he will fail. However, he is determined to succeed, and he ultimately does.	A mission impossible is a task that is so difficult that it is almost impossible to complete.
Prison Break	Rambo and Co escape from the Vietnamese prison camp.	A prison break is a story about a group of prisoners who escape from a prison.
Revenge	Rambo is motivated by a desire for revenge against the Vietnamese soldiers who killed his comrades.	A revenge story is a story about a character who seeks revenge against someone who has wronged them.
Torture	Rambo is tortured by the Vietnamese soldiers.	Torture is a story element in which a character is subjected to physical or psychological pain in order to extract information or to make them suffer.
War	The film is set during the Vietnam War.	A war story is a story that is set during a war and that deals with the effects of war on the characters involved.
Women in Refrigerators	Co is killed by the Vietnamese soldiers.	Women in refrigerators is a trope in which a female character is killed or injured in order to motivate a male character.

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
1	Rambo: Nothing is over!!!
26	Rambo: We win... you lose! Mission Accomplished!
16	Trautman: Men! Men who died for their country, you bastard!
19	Rambo: ... Murdock, I'm coming to get you.
8	Co Bao: Let me go, please!

Some Loglines to consider:

A wrongly-imprisoned veteran is tasked with rescuing missing prisoners of war in Vietnam in exchange for his freedom from captivity.
Armed with the latest equipment, Rambo joins forces with a local guide to navigate through the jungle on a daring mission to save American P.O.W.s.
After narrowly surviving a disastrous skydive into hostile territory, Rambo fights off enemy soldiers in a daring prison camp rescue mission.
With the aid of his Vietnamese ally, Rambo seeks revenge against those who betrayed them and eliminate anyone who threatens his mission.
As the mission concludes, Rambo seeks to confront the very person who put him in harm's way and reclaim his freedom once and for all.

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Rambo

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