Jake and Angus

An autistic man's life takes a fantastical turn when a legendary strongman from the 1850s appears, forcing him to confront his anxieties and find love.

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

The screenplay's unique selling proposition lies in its exploration of neurodiversity and the experiences of a protagonist who struggles to find his place in a neurotypical world. The juxtaposition of Jake's modern-day story with the historical figure of Angus Macaskill creates a compelling narrative that delves into themes of strength, authenticity, and the search for belonging. The script's blend of drama, humor, and magical realism sets it apart from more conventional TV pilots and could appeal to audiences seeking a fresh and thought-provoking viewing experience.

AI Verdict & Suggestions

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Gemini
 Consider
GPT4
 Recommend
Claude
 Consider
Story Facts

Genres: Drama, Comedy, Romance, Historical, Fantasy, Romantic Comedy

Setting: Modern day and mid-19th century, Various locations including a circus, a wedding reception, Trader Joe's grocery store, a bar, and Griffith Park

Themes: Neurodivergence and Self-Acceptance, Social Awkwardness and Connection, The Search for Belonging, Humor and Absurdity, Fantasy and Escapism

Conflict & Stakes: Jake's struggle with social anxiety and feelings of inadequacy, particularly in romantic situations, with the stakes being his self-acceptance and ability to connect with others.

Mood: Light-hearted yet introspective, blending humor with moments of vulnerability.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The juxtaposition of a modern-day character's struggles with a historical figure, Angus MacAskill, providing a unique narrative perspective.
  • Character Dynamics: The relationship between Jake and Angus, showcasing mentorship and camaraderie despite their size difference.
  • Humor and Heart: The screenplay balances comedic moments with deeper themes of self-acceptance and social anxiety.

Comparable Scripts: The Greatest Showman, Big Fish, The Elephant Man, Atypical, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, The Big Sick, The Mighty, The King’s Speech, Wonder

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Overall Score: 7.10
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