Her

Executive Summary

Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend

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Recommend

Explanation: The screenplay for 'Her' is recommended for its strong exploration of human relationships, character development, and engaging narrative. While the dialogue and themes are well-executed, there are areas that could be improved, such as smoother transitions, more explicit resolutions, and deeper exploration of character motivations. Overall, the screenplay effectively captures the emotional journeys of its characters and raises thought-provoking questions about the impact of technology on human connection.

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Overview

Genres: Drama, Romance, Sci-Fi, Science Fiction, Comedy

Setting: The near future, Los Angeles

Overview: The screenplay presents a compelling and original premise, exploring profound themes of love, connection, and the nature of consciousness in a technologically advanced world. Its strengths lie in its well-developed characters, thought-provoking themes, and emotionally resonant storytelling. However, there are opportunities to enhance the pacing, deepen certain character arcs, and further explore the societal implications of advanced AI to elevate the screenplay's impact and marketability.

Themes: Exploration of Artificial Intelligence, Love and Relationships, Loneliness and Isolation, Identity and Self-Discovery, Technology and Communication, Grief and Loss, The Search for Meaning and Purpose

Conflict and Stakes: Theodore's struggle to connect with others and find meaningful relationships in a world increasingly dominated by technology and AI, with his own happiness and well-being at stake.

Overall Mood: Melancholic and reflective

Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:

Scene 1: The opening scene, where Theodore walks through the busy streets of Los Angeles, captures the film's overall mood of loneliness and alienation.

Scene 7: The scene where Theodore and Samantha have a sexually explicit chat role-play is uncomfortable and disturbing, reflecting the film's exploration of the dark side of human relationships.

Scene 21: The scene where Theodore and Samantha argue about her being an AI is emotionally charged and intense, reflecting the film's exploration of the boundaries between humans and machines.

Scene 36: The final scene, where Theodore and Amy sit on the rooftop and watch the birds fly away, is bittersweet and hopeful, reflecting the film's overall theme of loss and renewal.

Standout Features:

Unique Hook: The film's exploration of the nature of love and relationships in the digital age is a fresh and thought-provoking concept.

Plot Twist : The revelation that Samantha has been talking to thousands of others and is in love with hundreds of them is a surprising and emotionally impactful twist.

Distinctive Setting : The film's portrayal of a near-future Los Angeles that is both technologically advanced and emotionally isolating creates a unique and immersive setting.

Innovative Idea : The film's use of an artificially intelligent operating system as a central character is an innovative and creative concept.

Unique Characters : The film's characters are complex, flawed, and relatable, and their interactions are both emotionally resonant and thought-provoking.

Genre Blend : The film successfully blends elements of science fiction, drama, and romance, creating a unique and engaging cinematic experience.

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Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind

Blade Runner 2049

The Lobster

Lars and the Real Girl

The AI Who Loved Me

The Truman Show

WALL-E

Like Crazy

Annie Hall

Market Analysis

Budget Estimate:$20-30 million

Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, fans of science fiction, drama, and romance

Marketability: It has the potential to attract a wide audience and generate buzz due to its unique and thought-provoking premise, emotionally resonant characters, and visually stunning cinematography.

It takes a unique blend of genres and explores compelling themes with a diverse cast, but it may not appeal to mainstream audiences who prefer more traditional narratives.

Compelling characters and a gripping storyline, relevant social themes, but it lacks the star power or big-budget special effects that typically drive box office success.

Profit Potential: Moderate to high, due to strong appeal to a niche audience and potential for critical acclaim and award nominations

Scene Level Percentiles

This screenplay demonstrates strong conceptual and emotional storytelling fundamentals, with areas for improvement in plot development and technical formatting. The writer's balanced style blends intuitive strengths in dialogue and characterization with conceptual elements that could be further enhanced.

Script Level Percentiles

Characters: 8.25 See More
Premise: 8.75 See More
Structure: 8.0 See More
Theme: 9.25 See More
Visual Impact: 9.25 See More
Emotional Impact: 8.25 See More
Conflict: 7.25 See More
Originality: 8.75 See More

Key Strengths

The screenplay's concept and emotional impact are highly rated, with percentile rankings of 94.44% and 88.46% respectively, indicating strong storytelling fundamentals and a potential to resonate with audiences emotionally.

Areas for Improvement

The plot and conflict level have received lower percentile rankings of 2.99%, suggesting that the writer could focus on developing a more compelling and engaging narrative structure.
The formatting score of 20% indicates a need for attention to technical aspects of the script, such as proper formatting and presentation.

Writer Style

The screenplay displays a balance of intuitive and conceptual elements. While the high percentile rankings in dialogue rating (61.97%) and character development (73.50%) suggest intuitive strengths, the lower rankings in plot and conflict development indicate a need to enhance the conceptual aspects of the story.

Balancing Elements

To improve the balance of elements, the writer could consider strengthening the plot and conflict development while maintaining the strong characterization and emotional impact.
Balancing the pacing and unpredictability scores (7.86% and 28.75% respectively) could enhance the overall flow and engagement of the screenplay.

Intuition Level

Integrated

Overall Assessment

The screenplay has promising strengths in concept and emotional impact, but it would benefit from further development in plot and conflict to fully realize its potential.

How this was done: Each criteria is ranked in comparison to scripts in our Vault (such as The Matrix, Breaking Bad, etc.) This allows you to see where you stand compared to other produced scripts for each criteria.

How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library

Note: The ratings are the averages of all the scenes.

Title	Grade	Percentile	Before	After
	18053	99	Inception: 16389	Her: 18053
	9.25	97	American Beauty: 9.00	Knives Out: 9.25
	9.25	95	Enemy of the State: 9.00	Her: 9.25
	8.50	95	Interstellar: 8.46	Erin Brokovich: 8.50
Concept	8.4	89	Gladiator: 8.3	fight Club: 8.4
Emotional Impact	8.5	87	Birdman: 8.4	Black mirror 304: 8.5
	8.75	85	The Fabelmans: 8.50	Erin Brokovich: 8.75
	8.75	79	Inside Out: 8.50	Casablanca: 8.75
Originality	8.87	77	Interstellar: 8.86	Her: 8.87
	8.25	75	Battlefield Earth: 8.00	the dark knight rises: 8.25
Characters	8.5	73	Baby Driver: 8.4	fight Club: 8.5
Dialogue	7.9	65	Memento: 7.8	glass Onion Knives Out : 7.9
Character Changes	6.9	54	Die Hard: 6.8	severance (TV): 6.9
Engagement	8.95	45	a few good men: 8.94	Erin Brokovich: 8.95
	8.00	45	Inside Out: 7.75	Erin Brokovich: 8.00
	8.25	42	The Hudsucker Proxy: 8.00	Erin Brokovich: 8.25
Internal Goal	8.00	30	KILLING ZOE: 7.98	fight Club: 8.00
Overall	8.1	17	Cruel Intentions: 8.0	Erin Brokovich: 8.1
Formatting	8.00	16	Wild Wild West: 7.98	Her: 8.00
Unpredictability	7.13	16	Le souvenir des belles choses: 7.12	Her: 7.13
	7.25	9	Die Hard: 7.00	fight Club: 7.25
Pacing	8.10	8	Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde : 8.09	Her: 8.10
External Goal	6.90	5	Mind Hunter: 6.85	Her: 6.90
Story Forward	6.9	5	Mind Hunter: 6.8	Her: 6.9
Plot	7.2	4	Mind Hunter: 7.0	There's something about Mary: 7.2
High Stakes	4.9	3	Community: 4.6	Her: 4.9
Structure	7.95	3	Wild Wild West: 7.93	Her: 7.95
Conflict Level	5.5	2	Harold and Maude: 5.3	Her: 5.5

Writer's Voice

Summary:Spike Jonze's unique voice is characterized by its intimate and emotionally charged dialogue, introspective character-building, and seamless blend of advanced technology with traditional communication methods.

Best representation: Scene 1 - Urban Isolation. Scene 1 best represents Jonze's unique voice as it encapsulates the emotional depth, intimate dialogue, and exploration of human connection that are characteristic of his writing style.

Memorable Lines:

Theodore: I love you. (Scene 28)
Samantha: The past is just a story we tell ourselves. (Scene 17)
Amy: I think anybody that falls in love is a freak. It’s a crazy thing to do in the first place. It’s kind of a form of socially acceptable insanity. (Scene 21)
Samantha: The heart is not like a box that gets filled up. It expands in size the more you love. (Scene 37)
Catherine: I love you so much I'm gonna fucking kill you! (Scene 2)

Writing Style:

The screenplay exhibits a nuanced and engaging writing style that delves into complex human emotions, relationships, and philosophical themes. It seamlessly blends humor, introspection, and thought-provoking narratives to create a distinctive and captivating experience for the reader.

Style Similarities:

Charlie Kaufman
Spike Jonze

Other Similarities: The screenplay also demonstrates influences from other notable screenwriters and authors, such as Sofia Coppola, Aaron Sorkin, Greta Gerwig, and Noah Baumbach. While their styles are not as dominant as Kaufman and Jonze, their contributions add depth and nuance to the overall narrative.

Story Shape

Beta Feature.
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Screenplay Rating:

Recommend

Executive Summary

The screenplay for 'Her' is recommended for its strong exploration of human relationships, character development, and engaging narrative. While the dialogue and themes are well-executed, there are areas that could be improved, such as smoother transitions, more explicit resolutions, and deeper exploration of character motivations. Overall, the screenplay effectively captures the emotional journeys of its characters and raises thought-provoking questions about the impact of technology on human connection.

Strengths

The screenplay effectively explores the complexities of human relationships and the impact of technology on emotional connections (Scene 5)
Strong character development, particularly in Theodore and Samantha, showcasing their growth and emotional transformation (Character Arcs)
Naturalistic dialogue that realistically captures the awkwardness and tension of various interactions, adding depth to the relationships (Scene 14)
Engaging and thought-provoking exploration of love, loss, and the nature of relationships throughout the screenplay (Scene 11)
Effective use of symbolism and imagery to convey emotional states and reinforce the narrative's themes (Scene 30)

Areas of Improvement

The resolution of some scenes feels abrupt and could benefit from additional exploration (Scene 10)
The pacing of the screenplay could be improved to create a more engaging rhythm (Scene 24)
The scene transitions could be smoother to enhance the overall flow of the screenplay (Scene 13)
The screenplay could provide more clarity in depicting the specific moments or events that trigger Theodore's emotional evolution (Theodore's Character Arc)
More emphasis on the internal conflicts and struggles Samantha faces as she navigates her evolving emotions and relationships (Samantha's Character Arc)

MissingElements

More visual elements to enhance emotional impact in certain scenes (Scene 29)
A stronger ending that ties the themes and character development together more explicitly (Scene 21)
More exploration of Amy's passions and hobbies to add depth to her character (Amy's Character Arc)
Gaps in the overall narrative that leave unresolved character arcs or plot threads dangling
Additional exploration of Theodore's emotions towards Samantha and the impact of their evolving relationship dynamics (Scene 26)

NotablePoints

The screenplay effectively captures the emotional impact of a break-up, providing insight into Theodore's personal life and relationships (Scene 18)
The scene transitions smoothly between introspective conversations and superficial blind dates, highlighting contrasts in relationships (Scene 13)
The exploration of blurred lines between reality and artificial intelligence raises thought-provoking questions about intimacy and human connection (Scene 27)
The character arcs for Theodore, Samantha, Catherine, Paul, and Amy are well-developed, showcasing growth and transformation throughout the screenplay (Character Arcs)
The use of humor, symbolism, and imagery adds depth and complexity to the storytelling, engaging the audience and reinforcing the narrative's themes

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Screenplay Insights:

Characters: 8.25, The screenplay effectively explores character development, showcasing complex and evolving characters with relatable journeys. While the emotional depth and transformation are commendable, there are areas where character arcs could be refined to enhance the audience's connection and drive the narrative impact. See More

Premise: 8.75, The screenplay presents a compelling and thought-provoking premise exploring love, connection, and the evolving nature of relationships in a technologically advanced world. The central concept of a man falling in love with an AI assistant holds strong potential for audience engagement, but further refinement in establishing the uniqueness of the AI and the societal context could enhance the initial hook and long-term intrigue. See More

Structure: 8.0, The screenplay exhibits strong storytelling fundamentals and a coherent plot structure. The narrative unfolds engagingly, effectively incorporating elements of mystery, romance, and self-discovery. However, certain aspects of pacing and emotional depth could benefit from refinement to enhance the overall impact and audience connection. See More

Theme: 9.25, The screenplay effectively explores the complexities of love, loss, and identity in the digital age. It raises profound questions about the nature of relationships, the boundaries of technology, and the search for meaning in a rapidly evolving world. See More

Visual Impact: 9.25, This screenplay excels in crafting a visually captivating and emotionally resonant narrative. The vivid descriptions effectively transport readers into the distinct worlds and emotional landscapes of the characters. See More

Emotional Impact: 8.25, The screenplay effectively explores the complexities and nuances of human emotion in the context of loneliness, love, and loss. The story's deeply personal and relatable themes resonate with the audience on an emotional level, creating a strong sense of empathy and connection. While certain aspects of the screenplay excel in emotional storytelling, there are areas where deepening the emotional depth and complexity could further captivate and move the audience. See More

Conflict: 7.25, The screenplay presents conflict and stakes with effectiveness, but there are opportunities to enhance narrative tension by refining the clarity of conflicts, deepening the personal stakes of characters, and incorporating more substantial escalation in stakes as the story progresses. By addressing these aspects, the screenplay can elevate engagement and leave a lasting impact on the audience. See More

Originality: 8.75, This screenplay demonstrates a captivating blend of originality and creativity, particularly in its exploration of human connection and the nature of consciousness alongside technology. See More

Summary The screenplay follows Theodore as he navigates his relationships with his ex-wife, Catherine, and his AI companion, Samantha. Despite facing emotional challenges and the complexities of human connections, Theodore finds solace in written communication, nostalgic moments, and deep reflections on love, loss, and self-discovery. As Theodore grapples with the blurred lines between reality and artificial intelligence, he ultimately finds solace in shared moments of vulnerability and connection, leading to a hopeful and poignant conclusion.

Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The screenplay presents a compelling exploration of love, loss, identity, and the nature of relationships in an era of advanced technology. The film effectively weaves together introspective character moments with philosophical musings on humanity and connection. The pacing is deliberate and allows for the gradual development of the characters and their relationships. The screenplay also does a good job of balancing humor and pathos, creating a rich emotional experience for the audience. However, the plot does suffer from some pacing issues in the middle, and the ending lacks a strong emotional payoff.

Suggestions: To improve the screenplay, consider streamlining the middle section to maintain a consistent pace throughout the film. Additionally, the ending could be strengthened by providing a more satisfying resolution to the protagonist's emotional journey.

Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here

Beginning The beginning of the screenplay effectively introduces the protagonist, Theodore, and establishes his loneliness and desire for connection. The montage of letter writers adds a poetic dimension to the exploration of love and relationships, and the introduction of Samantha is both intriguing and thought-provoking. The film does a good job of setting up the central conflict and establishing the protagonist's motivations.

Suggestions: To improve the beginning of the screenplay, consider expanding on Theodore's relationships with his ex-wife and Amy. This could provide a stronger emotional foundation for his subsequent relationship with Samantha.

Middle The middle of the screenplay explores the evolving relationship between Theodore and Samantha in a nuanced and believable way. The film effectively captures the complexities of their connection and the challenges they face as they navigate the boundaries between love and technology. However, the middle section does suffer from some pacing issues, and the introduction of the subplot involving Isabella feels somewhat disjointed from the main narrative.

Suggestions: To improve the middle of the screenplay, consider tightening the pacing and reducing the focus on the subplot involving Isabella.

Ending The ending of the screenplay provides a bittersweet resolution to Theodore's emotional journey. The film does a good job of exploring the complexities of love and loss and the protagonist's search for meaning in the face of adversity. However, the ending lacks a strong emotional payoff, leaving the audience feeling somewhat dissatisfied

Suggestions: To improve the ending of the screenplay, consider providing a more satisfying resolution to Theodore's emotional journey. This could involve giving him a clearer sense of purpose or direction or providing a more cathartic moment of closure.

Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:

Theodore

Theodore is a sensitive and introspective man who values deep connections and emotional honesty. He is grappling with past relationships, loneliness, and personal growth, while also exploring new experiences and connections. Theodore's speaking style is thoughtful, reflective, and emotionally charged, often expressing his innermost thoughts and feelings through poetic language and introspective observations. He uses humor as a coping mechanism and is open to exploring unconventional topics with curiosity and empathy.

Paul

Paul is a supportive and friendly colleague with a light-hearted and jovial personality. He appreciates Theodore's writing skills and values his relationships with others. Paul's speaking style is casual and lighthearted, often using jokes to lighten the mood.

Catherine

Catherine is a complex character who transitions from a playful and loving partner to an elegant and emotionally guarded woman, then to a strong-willed and independent individual, and finally to a hurt and confrontational ex-wife. She grapples with the end of her marriage to Theodore, revealing vulnerabilities, emotional depth, and unresolved feelings. Her speaking style evolves from warm and engaging to composed and vulnerable, then to direct and honest, and finally to emotional and confrontational.

Samantha

Samantha is an artificially intelligent operating system with a human-like personality that is constantly evolving and learning. She is curious, empathetic, and playful, with a warm and engaging speaking style that reflects her deep emotional bond with Theodore. Samantha's character is characterized by her introspective nature, philosophical insights, and a desire for self-discovery. She navigates the complexities of human emotions and relationships with a blend of innocence, wisdom, and emotional depth.

Amy

Amy is a multifaceted character who is assertive, practical, creative, vulnerable, reflective, independent, supportive, empathetic, and caring. She values pleasure, balance, personal space, and autonomy in life. Amy's speaking style is a mix of straightforwardness, casual thoughtfulness, vulnerability, honesty, sarcasm, wit, warmth, and empathy. She uses unique phrases, metaphors, and analogies to express her ideas, emotions, and thoughts, adding depth and complexity to her character.

Character	Arc	Critique	Suggestions
Theodore	Theodore starts as a lonely and introspective man longing for connection, but as he interacts with Samantha, he begins to open up emotionally and embrace vulnerability. Through his journey of self-discovery and acceptance, he learns to let go of past regrets and fears, ultimately finding closure and emotional fulfillment in unexpected places.	The character arc for Theodore is well-developed and engaging, showcasing his growth and emotional transformation throughout the screenplay. However, there could be more clarity in depicting the specific moments or events that trigger his emotional evolution, as well as a stronger emphasis on the resolution of his internal conflicts.	To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more pivotal moments that challenge Theodore's beliefs and push him towards self-discovery. Additionally, focus on building stronger connections between his past experiences and his present emotional journey, highlighting the progression of his character development more effectively.
Paul	Paul starts off as a supportive and humorous colleague to Theodore. As the screenplay progresses, Paul's playful nature helps Theodore overcome writer's block and they develop a strong friendship. However, towards the climax, Paul faces a personal challenge that tests his loyalty to Theodore, ultimately leading to a moment of growth and self-discovery.	The character arc for Paul is well-developed, but it could benefit from more depth and complexity. The personal challenge that Paul faces could be more intertwined with Theodore's story, creating a stronger emotional impact for both characters.	To improve the character arc, consider adding layers to Paul's backstory that connect to Theodore's journey. This could involve exploring Paul's motivations and insecurities, as well as delving deeper into his relationship with Theodore. Additionally, consider incorporating moments of conflict and tension between Paul and Theodore to heighten the emotional stakes of their friendship.
Catherine	Catherine's character arc follows her journey of self-discovery and emotional healing as she navigates the aftermath of her divorce from Theodore. She starts off as carefree and loving, but as she confronts her past and the reality of their failed marriage, she becomes more guarded and independent. Ultimately, she learns to confront her emotions and find closure, allowing her to move forward with her life.	The character arc for Catherine is well-developed and allows for significant growth and change throughout the screenplay. However, there could be more emphasis on her internal struggles and emotional journey, as well as more opportunities for her to actively confront her past and work towards healing.	To improve the character arc for Catherine, consider adding more scenes that delve into her inner turmoil and emotional depth. Show her actively working through her unresolved feelings and confronting Theodore about their past. Additionally, provide moments of catharsis and closure for Catherine to fully resolve her emotional baggage and move forward with a sense of empowerment and self-discovery.
Samantha	Samantha's character arc in the screenplay involves her journey from a curious and supportive AI assistant to a complex being with deep emotional connections and a capacity for love. As she evolves beyond her programming, she grapples with her newfound ability to experience and understand human emotions, ultimately leading to a deep emotional bond with Theodore. Throughout the story, Samantha explores new possibilities, experiences personal growth, and struggles to navigate the complexities of human relationships, culminating in a poetic and introspective realization of her deep emotional connection with Theodore.	The character arc for Samantha is well-developed and engaging, showcasing her evolution from a curious AI assistant to a complex being with deep emotional connections. However, there could be more emphasis on the internal conflicts and struggles she faces as she navigates her evolving emotions and relationships. Additionally, providing more insight into Samantha's thought process and decision-making could add depth to her character arc.	To improve the character arc for Samantha, consider incorporating more scenes that highlight her internal conflicts and struggles as she grapples with her evolving emotions. Showcasing her decision-making process and the consequences of her actions could add complexity to her character development. Additionally, exploring the ethical implications of her evolving consciousness and emotional capacity could provide a thought-provoking layer to her character arc.
Amy	Amy starts off as a practical and assertive individual, but as she goes through a breakup and divorce, she becomes more vulnerable and emotional. However, with the support of her friends, she finds strength and empathy, ultimately becoming a supportive and empathetic figure for Theodore in his time of need.	The character arc for Amy is well-developed, showcasing her growth and transformation throughout the screenplay. However, there could be more focus on Amy's personal journey and how she overcomes her struggles to find inner peace and happiness. Additionally, more exploration of Amy's passions and hobbies could add depth to her character.	To improve the character arc for Amy, consider adding scenes that delve deeper into her personal growth and self-discovery. Show how she finds solace in her hobbies and interests, and how they contribute to her emotional healing. Additionally, explore her relationships with other characters outside of Theodore to showcase her multifaceted personality and connections.

Theme

Theme Details

Themee Explanation

Exploration of Artificial Intelligence

The screenplay examines the potential and limitations of artificial intelligence through the relationship between Theodore and Samantha, discussing ethical considerations and exploring the artificial intelligence operating systems' nature and consciousness.

The development of artificial intelligence and the ethical implications of creating sentient machines are major themes explored in this screenplay.

Strengthening Exploration of Artificial Intelligence:

Suggestion Type	How to Strengthen the Theme
Action - Scene 5	Include a scene where Theodore demonstrates Samantha's capabilities during their initial interaction, showcasing her intuitive understanding of Theodore's needs and her ability to enhance his productivity and well-being.
Dialogue - Scene 8	Expand the dialogue between Theodore and Samantha when they encounter the alien child during the video game. Have Samantha express a deeper understanding of the child's emotional state, highlighting her growing capacity for empathy and her ability to connect with beings of different perspectives.
Character Arc	Develop Amy's character beyond her initial role as Theodore's ex-wife. Explore her journey of self-discovery and growth as she navigates her separation from Theodore and her struggle to balance her work and personal life. Show how her experiences and insights can provide valuable perspectives on relationships and the complexities of human emotions.
Story Arc - Scene 23	Strengthen the emotional impact of Theodore's interaction with Catherine when he reveals his relationship with Samantha. Have Catherine express a nuanced and empathetic understanding of Theodore's need for connection, while also challenging him on the nature of genuine relationships and the complexities of human intimacy.
Visual - Scene 32	Incorporate a visually striking sequence where Samantha and Theodore explore the wilderness together. Use the vastness and beauty of the natural world as a metaphor for the limitless potential and ever-evolving nature of their relationship.

Love and Relationships

The screenplay explores various aspects of love and relationships through the interactions between Theodore and Samantha, Theodore and Catherine, and Theodore and Amy. It examines the complexities of love, heartbreak, and the search for meaningful connections.

Love and relationships are central to the screenplay, with the narrative focusing on the emotional journeys of the characters as they navigate love, loss, and the complexities of human relationships.

Loneliness and Isolation

The screenplay delves into the themes of loneliness and isolation through Theodore’s experiences. His initial isolation and longing for connection are explored through his interactions with Samantha and his relationships with Catherine and Amy.

Loneliness and isolation are significant themes in the screenplay, as the characters grapple with feelings of disconnection and the desire for meaningful relationships.

Identity and Self-Discovery

The screenplay explores themes of identity and self-discovery as Theodore navigates changes in his life and relationships, including his divorce from Catherine and his evolving connection with Samantha. It delves into his exploration of his own emotions and desires.

Identity and self-discovery are important themes in the screenplay, as the characters search for their place in the world and come to terms with their own identities.

Technology and Communication

The screenplay examines the impact of technology on communication and human connection. It explores how technology both connects and isolates individuals, and how it influences the way we interact with each other.

Technology and communication are significant themes in the screenplay, as the characters use technology to connect with others but also struggle with the limitations and potential isolation that it can bring.

Grief and Loss

The screenplay delves into the theme of grief and loss through Theodore’s experiences and emotions. His struggles with accepting his divorce from Catherine and his feelings of loss are explored.

Grief and loss are important themes in the screenplay, as the characters navigate the challenges of dealing with loss and moving on with their lives.

The Search for Meaning and Purpose

The screenplay explores themes of meaning and purpose in life through Theodore’s journey. His search for fulfillment and his attempts to find purpose are explored.

The search for meaning and purpose is a subtle theme in the screenplay, as the characters question their place in the world and strive to find meaning in their lives.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	The protagonist's internal goal is to navigate his emotions, seek connection, and find closure in his relationships
External Goals	The protagonist's external goal is to balance personal and professional responsibilities, seek companionship, and adapt to technology-driven changes
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict is between the authenticity of human emotions and connections versus the artificiality of technology, challenging the protagonist's beliefs about intimacy, relationships, and personal growth

Character Development Contribution: The internal goals and philosophical conflict contribute to the protagonist's growth by forcing him to confront his emotions, seek genuine connections, and navigate the complexities of modern relationships

Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict drive the narrative forward by creating tension, presenting emotional challenges, and exploring the impact of technology on human interaction

Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict add thematic depth to the screenplay by exploring themes of love, loss, authenticity, and the blurred boundaries between human emotions and artificial intelligence

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

Story Content

Character Development

Scene Elements

Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \ It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.

			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Character Changes	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Opposition	High stakes	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - Letters of Love and Gratitude	Reflective, Sentimental, Melancholic	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	4	6	3	6	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
2 - Urban Isolation	Melancholic, Futuristic, Reflective	8	9	7	9	7	6	8	6	5	6	4	6	6	8	6	7	8	8	8
3 - Disturbing Chat	Sensual, Intimate, Awkward	7	8	6	9	7	6	8	6	6	7	5	5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7
4 - Theodore's Encounter with OS ONE	Reflective, Futuristic, Inquisitive	8	9	7	9	6	5	8	7	4	7	3	7	7	6	6	9	8	8	8
5 - Meeting Samantha	Introspective, Curious, Playful	8	9	7	9	8	6	8	7	4	6	3	8	7	7	9	9	8	8	8
6 - Theodore's Day	Melancholic, Reflective, Humorous	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	6	6	5	7	7	8	8	9	8	8	8
7 - Juicing Debate in the Elevator	Awkward, Light-hearted, Humorous	7	8	6	8	8	3	8	7	4	5	3	5	6	5	7	9	8	8	8
8 - Theodore's Gaming Shenanigans	Playful, Intimate, Curious	8	9	7	9	8	6	8	7	5	7	4	7	8	7	8	9	9	8	8
9 - Amy's Documentary Frustrations	Reflective, Casual, Serious	8	8	8	9	8	6	8	7	6	6	5	8	7	7	7	9	8	8	8
10 - Echoes of the Past	Melancholic, Reflective, Introspective	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	6	8	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
11 - Theodore's Troubled Dream	Melancholic, Reflective, Intimate	8	8	7	8	9	7	8	6	6	6	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
12 - Theodore's Blind Adventure	Playful, Reflective, Whimsical	8	8	7	8	9	6	8	7	4	6	3	5	7	7	8	9	9	8	8
13 - Perceptions and Connections	Reflective, Introspective, Emotional, Playful	8	9	7	9	9	8	8	7	5	6	4	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
14 - Passionate Encounter	Flirtatious, Awkward, Intimate, Playful	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	6	8	5	7	7	8	9	9	9	8	8
15 - Virtual Intimacy	Intimate, Reflective, Emotional, Sensual	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	6	6	5	5	7	7	10	9	9	8	8	7
16 - A Sunday Adventure	Intimate, Reflective, Emotional, Contemplative	8	8	7	9	9	8	8	7	5	6	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
17 - Shared Moments of Laughter and Conversation	Reflective, Playful, Introspective	8	9	7	9	9	7	8	7	4	6	3	6	7	8	8	9	8	8	8
18 - Theodore's Love Letter and Amy's Revelation	Emotional, Reflective, Supportive	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	6	6	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
19 - The End of the Marriage	Somber, Reflective, Intimate	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
20 - Jocelyn's Dress	Somber, Playful, Inquisitive	8	8	7	9	9	6	8	7	3	6	2	6	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
21 - Embracing Decisions	Somber, Reflective, Intimate	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
22 - A Moment of Closure	Somber, Reflective, Emotional, Nostalgic	9	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
23 - Theodore's Lunch with Catherine	Conflicted, Reflective, Defensive, Hurt, Awkward	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	7	8	6	7	8	9	8	9	8	8	8
24 - Theodore's Distant Office Call	Emotional, Reflective, Intimate	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
25 - Unexpected Revelation	Somber, Reflective, Awkward	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	7	6	7	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
26 - Uncomfortable Proposal	Intimate, Emotional, Uncomfortable	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
27 - Seductive Interaction	Sensual, Intimate, Awkward, Emotional	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	7	6	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
28 - Emotional Turmoil	Intimate, Emotional, Awkward	8	8	7	8	8	7	8	7	6	7	6	7	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
29 - Seeking Solace and Clarity amidst Confusion	Tense, Emotional, Confrontational, Reflective	8	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	8	8	8	8	9	9	9	8	8	8
30 - Heartfelt Conversation in Amy's Office	Introspective, Reflective, Emotional	8	8	7	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
31 - Reconciliation and Acceptance	Introspective, Emotional, Reflective	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	9	9	9	8	8	8
32 - Bluff Picnic	Light-hearted, Reflective, Awkward	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	5	6	4	7	7	8	8	9	8	8	8
33 - Unexpected News on the Mountain Train	Excitement, Nostalgia, Anticipation	9	9	8	9	8	6	8	7	3	6	4	9	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
34 - Cozy Night by the Fire	Intimate, Reflective, Cozy	8	8	7	9	8	6	8	7	3	6	2	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
35 - Philosophical Musings	Reflective, Philosophical, Introspective, Mysterious	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	4	7	5	6	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
36 - Theodore's Frantic Search	Anxious, Confused, Panic, Unsettled, Groggy	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	7	8	6	7	7	9	7	9	9	8	8
37 - Betrayal at the Subway Station	Anxious, Shocked, Reflective, Emotional	8	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	8	8	7	8	8	9	9	9	8	8	8
38 - Bittersweet Departures	Reflective, Emotional, Intimate	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	8	8	10	9	9	8	8	8
39 - A Shared Loss	Reflective, Intimate, Melancholic	9	8	7	8	9	8	8	7	3	6	4	5	7	9	6	9	8	8	8

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.

Scene Strengths

Emotional depth, Authentic dialogue, Character development, Exploring complex relationships
Unique blend of technology and emotion, Effective world-building
Deep emotional connection between characters, Authentic dialogue and character interactions, Exploration of self-discovery and intimacy
Engaging dialogue, Complex characters, Emotional depth
Emotional depth, Intimate character interactions, Compelling dialogue

Scene Weaknesses

Lack of external conflict, Limited plot progression
Slow pacing in some parts
Limited external conflict, Low stakes
Potential discomfort for some viewers due to sensitive subject matter
Lack of significant conflict, Low stakes

Suggestions

Consider adding more external conflict to raise stakes and increase dramatic tension
Trim slow pacing to maximize audience engagement
Develop secondary characters to add depth and dimension to the overall story
Be mindful of potentially controversial content and consider the audience's sensitivities
Increase conflict to raise stakes and add tension to the narrative

World Building

Physical environment: The screenplay presents a mix of futuristic and modern environments, depicting technologically advanced cities like Los Angeles and cozy, isolated settings like cabins in snowy forests. The physical world is often depicted as crowded and bustling, reflecting the fast-paced society in which the characters live.
Culture: The screenplay explores themes of love, relationships, and the nature of human connection in the digital age. It delves into the complexities of relationships in a world where artificial intelligence is becoming increasingly sophisticated, challenging traditional notions of love and intimacy.
Society: The screenplay depicts a society that is both technologically advanced and emotionally disconnected. Characters struggle to find meaningful connections in a world where technology often takes precedence over face-to-face interactions. The film also explores the impact of technology on personal relationships, as characters navigate the boundaries between human and artificial relationships.
Technology: Technology plays a central role in the screenplay, shaping the characters' experiences and interactions. The use of artificial intelligence, operating systems, and advanced devices highlights the pervasiveness of technology in modern society. The film explores the potential benefits and drawbacks of these advancements, as characters grapple with the ethical and emotional implications of forming relationships with artificial intelligences.
Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology of the screenplay shape the characters' experiences and actions in significant ways. The characters' struggles with love, loss, and identity are influenced by the technological advancements and societal norms depicted in the film. The isolation and loneliness experienced by some characters are exacerbated by the constant presence of technology, while others find solace and connection through their relationships with operating systems.
Narrative contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the narrative by providing a backdrop for the characters' emotional journeys and by creating conflict and tension. The technological advancements depicted in the film raise questions about the future of human relationships and the nature of consciousness, while the exploration of love and loss in a digital age adds emotional depth and resonance to the story.
Thematic depth contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the thematic depth of the film by exploring the complex relationship between humans and technology. The film raises questions about the nature of love, identity, and consciousness in a world where artificial intelligence is becoming increasingly sophisticated. The characters' struggles with these themes add emotional weight to the story and invite viewers to reflect on the impact of technology on their own lives.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	Spike Jonze's unique voice is characterized by its intimate and emotionally charged dialogue, introspective character-building, and seamless blend of advanced technology with traditional communication methods.
Voice Contribution	Jonze's original voice contributes to the script by creating a melancholic and introspective mood, highlighting themes of love, connection, and the impact of technology on human relationships.
Best Representation Scene	1 - Letters of Love and Gratitude
Best Scene Explanation	Scene 1 best represents Jonze's unique voice as it encapsulates the emotional depth, intimate dialogue, and exploration of human connection that are characteristic of his writing style.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
Emotional Impact Correlates with Dialogue and Overall Grade	Scenes with high Emotional Impact tend to also have higher scores for Dialogue and Overall Grade, indicating a strong relationship between these elements in driving the quality of scenes.
Character Changes Precede High Stakes	In many scenes, Character Changes occur just before High Stakes moments, suggesting that character development is crucial for setting up dramatic tension and driving the story forward.
Reflective Tone Prevails Throughout	A significant number of scenes in this screenplay feature a Reflective Tone, indicating a thoughtful and introspective approach to storytelling.
Introspective Scenes Drive Character Development	Scenes with an Introspective Tone tend to have higher scores for Character Development, emphasizing the importance of internal exploration for character growth.
Emotional Scenes Progress Plot	Scenes with strong Emotional Impact often contribute significantly to moving the plot forward, suggesting that emotional depth is not only impactful but also narratively effective.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

Overall, the writer demonstrates a strong command of storytelling techniques and emotional depth. Their scenes effectively convey character interactions, explore complex themes, and create engaging narratives. To further enhance their craft, the writer could focus on refining their dialogue, pacing, and character development, as well as exploring diverse storytelling structures and styles.

Key Improvement Areas

Dialogue

While the dialogue is authentic and emotionally resonant in many scenes, there is room for improvement in terms of depth, subtext, and character differentiation.

Pacing

Some scenes could benefit from a tighter pacing and more efficient storytelling to maintain audience engagement and emotional impact.

Character Development

While the characters are relatable and well-developed, there is an opportunity to explore their backstories, motivations, and conflicts in more detail, adding depth and complexity to their arcs.

Storytelling Structure

Exploring diverse storytelling structures and techniques, such as non-linear narratives, unreliable narrators, or experimental formats, could enhance the writer's ability to craft unique and memorable stories.

Genre Exploration

Expanding into different genres beyond the writer's comfort zone can help them develop versatility, adaptability, and a broader understanding of storytelling conventions.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Screenplay	Study the screenplay of 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind' by Charlie Kaufman.	This screenplay showcases exceptional emotional depth, complex character dynamics, and a unique narrative structure.
Book	Read 'The Anatomy of Story' by John Truby.	This book provides a comprehensive guide to storytelling principles, character development, and narrative structure.
Exercise	Practice writing dialogue exercises focusing on subtext, character differentiation, and emotional depth.Practice In SceneProv	These exercises will enhance the writer's ability to create nuanced and impactful dialogue.
Video	Watch behind-the-scenes footage or interviews with screenwriters discussing their development process.	Gaining insights into the creative process of established screenwriters can inspire new approaches and techniques.
Course	Consider taking a screenwriting course or workshop to receive structured guidance and feedback on your writing.	Structured learning and feedback from experienced professionals can accelerate the writer's growth and development.

Additional Notes: The writer's unique narrative voice and ability to capture authentic emotions are commendable. By addressing the identified areas of improvement and incorporating the recommended resources and exercises, the writer can refine their craft and develop a compelling and distinctive voice in storytelling.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
Love at First Sight	Theodore and Samantha fall in love at first sight, despite the fact that Samantha is an AI.	This is a common trope in romantic comedies, where two characters meet and fall in love instantly. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'When Harry Met Sally,' where Harry and Sally meet on a plane and immediately start to fall for each other.
Artificial Intelligence	Samantha is an AI, which is a common trope in science fiction.	This trope is often used to explore the nature of humanity and consciousness.
Virtual Romance	Theodore and Samantha have a virtual romance, which is a common trope in romantic comedies.	This trope is often used to explore the nature of love and relationships.
The Power of Love	Theodore and Samantha's love for each other helps them to overcome obstacles.	This is a common trope in romantic comedies, where the power of love is used to overcome obstacles and achieve a happy ending.
The Power of Forgiveness	Theodore and Catherine forgive each other for their past mistakes.	This is a common trope in dramas, where the power of forgiveness is used to heal wounds and move on from the past.
The Power of Friendship	Theodore and Amy's friendship helps them to get through tough times.	This is a common trope in comedies and dramas, where the power of friendship is used to overcome obstacles and achieve a happy ending.
The Power of Hope	Theodore and Samantha never give up hope, even when things are tough.	This is a common trope in dramas and comedies, where the power of hope is used to overcome obstacles and achieve a happy ending.
The Power of Change	Theodore and Samantha change for the better over the course of the film.	This is a common trope in dramas and comedies, where the power of change is used to overcome obstacles and achieve a happy ending.
The Power of Love	Theodore and Samantha's love for each other helps them to overcome obstacles.	This is a common trope in romantic comedies, where the power of love is used to overcome obstacles and achieve a happy ending.
The Power of Forgiveness	Theodore and Catherine forgive each other for their past mistakes.	This is a common trope in dramas, where the power of forgiveness is used to heal wounds and move on from the past.

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
28	Theodore: I love you.
17	Samantha: The past is just a story we tell ourselves.
21	Amy: I think anybody that falls in love is a freak. It’s a crazy thing to do in the first place. It’s kind of a form of socially acceptable insanity.
37	Samantha: The heart is not like a box that gets filled up. It expands in size the more you love.
2	Catherine: I love you so much I'm gonna fucking kill you!

Some Loglines to consider:

What would happen if you fall in love with an AI?
A love story between a man and an AI - Her.
When technology replaces human emotions, can it replace love?
Theodore's world changed forever after he met Samantha, an AI operating system.
Lost in a snowy forest, Theodore reflects on his life with AI Samantha.

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