Midsommar

Executive Summary

Logline: A young woman's grief spirals out of control when she travels to Sweden with her boyfriend, only to find herself at the mercy of a terrifying and ancient cult. See other logline suggestoins

Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend

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Engine: Gemini

Highly Recommend

Explanation: Midsommar is a masterfully crafted horror screenplay that utilizes stunning visuals, unsettling atmosphere, and compelling character arcs to deliver a truly unique and unforgettable experience. The story masterfully blends psychological horror with folk horror, creating a chillingly believable world where traditions collide with modern anxieties. While the screenplay does contain some minor pacing issues, its strengths far outweigh any weaknesses. It is a highly recommendable script for its originality, disturbing themes, and gripping narrative.

Engine: GPT4

Highly Recommend

Explanation: The screenplay for 'Midsommar' is a masterful blend of horror and psychological drama, exploring themes of grief, isolation, and cultural dislocation. The character arcs are intricately woven into the narrative, with Dani's transformation from a vulnerable woman to a powerful figure within a foreign community serving as a compelling focal point. The screenplay's unique setting and ritualistic elements create a haunting atmosphere that lingers long after the story concludes.

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Overview

Genres: Drama, Horror, Mystery, Thriller, Psychological Thriller, Psychological, Relationship, Romance, Psychological Horror

Setting: Present day, The Hårga farmstead, a remote village in Sweden

Overview: The overall score of 7.2 indicates a promising screenplay with potential for strong audience engagement. The screenplay effectively blends elements of horror, suspense, and psychological thriller, creating an intriguing and unsettling atmosphere. The story utilizes compelling visual elements and effectively explores themes of cultural clashes and the allure of the unknown. However, several areas require attention to elevate the screenplay's overall quality and marketability.

Themes: Grief and Loss, Isolation and Connection, Cultural Rituals and Belonging, Manipulation and Control, Mental Health and Breakdown

Conflict and Stakes: Dani and Christian's journey into the dark secrets of the Hårgan community, where they are increasingly caught in a web of ritualistic violence and their own moral dilemmas, with their lives and relationship at stake.

Overall Mood: Dark, suspenseful, and unsettling, with a surreal and ritualistic undercurrent.

Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:

Scene 27: A sense of dread and horror permeates the scene as the elders are brutally murdered in the ritualistic act of Attestupans.

Scene 48: The scene has a dark, mystical, and unsettling tone as Christian is intoxicated and engaged in a ritualistic act with Maja, while Dani witnesses the scene with horror and disgust.

Scene 51: The scene is a horrifying spectacle, with Christian trapped in the burning bear carcass and Ulf consumed by flames, creating a sense of intense dread and terror.

Scene 56: The tone is overwhelmingly surreal and unnerving as the sacrifices are announced and Christian is chosen by Dani, creating a sense of impending doom and unsettling power dynamics.

Standout Features:

Unique Hook: The unsettling and disturbing depiction of a secluded community with dark secrets and ritualistic practices. The film draws inspiration from folk horror, using elements of paganism and folklore to create a uniquely unsettling atmosphere.

Plot Twist : The revelation of the true nature of the Hårgan community and their disturbing rituals, including the sacrifice of individuals and animals. The film gradually reveals the horrors of this community, building tension and suspense, and ultimately culminating in a shocking climax.

Distinctive Setting : The remote and visually striking Hårgan farmstead in Sweden, which serves as the backdrop for the story and adds a layer of visual intrigue and atmosphere.

Unique Characters : The characters are complex and morally ambiguous, each with their own motivations and desires. The film explores the complexities of human nature, questioning the boundaries between good and evil.

Genre Blend : The film blends elements of horror, psychological thriller, and arthouse cinema, creating a unique and disturbing experience for the audience. It uses visual and narrative techniques inspired by folk horror and cult cinema, which adds a layer of originality to the story.

Innovative Idea : The film's exploration of cultural clashes, the power of rituals, and the darkness within human nature, combined with the striking visuals and unsettling atmosphere, offers a unique and thought-provoking experience.

Comparable Scripts:

Midsommar (2019)

The Wicker Man (1973)

The Ritual (2017)

Hereditary (2018)

The Village (2004)

The Blair Witch Project (1999)

The Witch (2015)

Market Analysis

Budget Estimate:$15-25 million

Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-45, fans of horror, psychological thrillers, and cult films, interested in folklore and mythology, with a particular appeal to audiences who enjoyed films like Midsommar

Marketability: The film has a unique premise and a strong visual style, combining elements of horror, psychological thriller, and folklore. It has the potential to attract a wide audience, particularly those who enjoyed films like Midsommar, and generate buzz for its disturbing and thought-provoking themes. The film could also appeal to fans of Nordic Noir and arthouse cinema.

The film presents a compelling story with strong characters and a gripping narrative. It also explores relevant social themes, such as cultural clashes, the dark side of human nature, and the power of ritual. This could appeal to audiences interested in these topics and contribute to the film's overall marketability.

The film has a strong hook in its premise and its striking visual style. It uses a blend of genres, combining horror, thriller, and elements of arthouse cinema, which could appeal to a wider audience. It also has potential to attract attention from film festivals and generate critical acclaim, further boosting its marketability.

Profit Potential: High, the unique premise and disturbing visuals have potential for strong box office performance. The film could generate significant interest in home video and streaming platforms, making it a lucrative project for investors.

Scene Level Percentiles

This screenplay displays a strong conceptual foundation with a highly original idea and emotional impact. However, it requires attention to plot structure, character development, and dialogue to reach its full potential. By refining these elements, the writer can create a more compelling and engaging story.

Script Level Percentiles

Characters: 7.75 See More
Premise: 6.5 See More
Structure: 6.75 See More
Theme: 7.75 See More
Visual Impact: 7.5 See More
Emotional Impact: 7.25 See More
Conflict: 6.75 See More
Originality: 7.75 See More

Emotions Elicited Percentiles

Robert McKee: "The audience doesn’t go to the movies to see plot; they go to feel emotion, to be moved."
This is a rough estimate of how the average intensity of emotions elicited in this script compare to all scripts in the Vault (all genres).
Higher isn't necessarily better. This is FYI.

Key Strengths

The screenplay boasts a highly original concept (92nd percentile), demonstrating strong creative vision and unique storytelling potential.
The screenplay exhibits a strong emotional impact (90th percentile), suggesting the writer effectively evokes feelings and connects with the audience.
The screenplay has a very high concept rating (95th percentile), suggesting a strong, compelling, and potentially marketable idea.
The screenplay has very high levels of unpredictability (90th percentile), meaning the writer successfully keeps the audience guessing and engaged.

Areas for Improvement

The plot structure needs attention (14th percentile), potentially lacking clear cause-and-effect relationships and a compelling narrative arc. Focus on strengthening the plot's foundation and ensuring it propels the story forward.
Character development requires more focus (4th percentile). Explore the characters' motivations, conflicts, and journeys more deeply to create more engaging and relatable figures.
Dialogue could be more impactful (4th percentile). Aim for dialogue that is character-driven, revealing personality, and pushing the plot forward. Consider revising existing dialogue for greater impact.
The screenplay could benefit from a stronger focus on the story's stakes (56th percentile). Highlight the consequences of failure and the urgency of the characters' goals to elevate tension and emotional investment.
While the screenplay is forward moving (34th percentile), consider implementing techniques to accelerate the narrative momentum and create a tighter, more engaging pace.

Writer Style

The writer appears to be highly conceptual, prioritizing originality and emotional impact over traditional plot structure and character development.

Balancing Elements

Balancing the screenplay's strong conceptual foundation with a more robust plot structure and deeper character development is crucial for maximizing its potential. The writer could explore techniques like plot outlining, character arc mapping, and dialogue analysis to strengthen these elements.
The writer could explore techniques like plot outlining, character arc mapping, and dialogue analysis to strengthen these elements.

Intuition Level

Conceptual

Overall Assessment

The screenplay demonstrates a strong creative foundation with a highly original concept and emotional impact. However, it needs significant improvement in areas like plot structure, character development, and dialogue to reach its full potential. By addressing these areas, the writer can transform their screenplay into a more engaging and captivating work.

How this was done: Each criteria is ranked in comparison to scripts in our Vault (such as The Matrix, Breaking Bad, etc.) This allows you to see where you stand compared to other produced scripts for each criteria.

How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library

Note: The ratings are the averages of all the scenes.

Title	Grade	Percentile	Before	After
Scene Concept	8.5	95	Battlefield Earth: 8.4	the dark knight rises: 8.5
Scene Originality	8.96	91	Zootopia: 8.95	2001: 8.96
Scene Emotional Impact	8.6	91	The Greatest Showman: 8.5	Casablanca: 8.6
Scene Unpredictability	7.95	91	glass Onion Knives Out : 7.94	Midsommar: 7.95
Scene Character Changes	7.3	80	The Greatest Showman: 7.2	Casablanca: 7.3
Scene Engagement	9.00	76	Almost Famous: 8.98	fight Club: 9.00
Scene Conflict Level	8.2	73	Witness: 8.1	the boys (TV): 8.2
Scene Internal Goal	8.12	70	Breaking Bad: 8.11	Memento: 8.12
Scene High Stakes	7.8	58	American Hustle: 7.7	Shaun of the Dead: 7.8
Scene Overall	8.3	50	Hot Fuzz: 8.2	fight Club: 8.3
Scene External Goal	7.21	46	The Founder: 7.19	Mo: 7.21
Scene Story Forward	7.9	34	The Greatest Showman: 7.8	Scott pilgrim vs. the world: 7.9
Scene Pacing	8.18	28	Gran Torino: 8.17	True Blood: 8.18
Script Visual Impact	7.50	27	Zootopia: 7.25	Erin Brokovich: 7.50
Scene Plot	7.6	26	Birdman: 7.5	severance (TV): 7.6
Script Theme	7.75	22	Zootopia: 7.50	fight Club: 7.75
Scene Formatting	8.02	22	Easy A: 8.01	Get Out: 8.02
Script Characters	7.75	20	Inception: 7.50	Blade Runner: 7.75
Script Originality	7.75	19	Cruel Intentions: 7.50	Terminator 2: 7.75
Script Structure	8.02	15	Poor Things: 8.00	fight Club: 8.02
Script Emotional Impact	7.25	14	Charlie and The Choclate Factory: 7.00	True Blood: 7.25
Scene Characters	7.7	4	Ghostbusters: 7.6	the 5th element: 7.7
Script Conflict	6.75	4	Inside Out: 6.50	Le souvenir des belles choses: 6.75
Scene Dialogue	7.0	4	Thor: 6.9	Pinocchio: 7.0
Script Structure	6.75	3	The whale: 6.50	Her: 6.75
Overall Script	7.20	2	Her: 7.17	Midsommar: 7.20
Script Premise	6.50	2	Inside Out: 6.25	Rear Window: 6.50

Writer's Voice

Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a potent blend of psychological realism and unsettling horror, creating a distinct atmosphere of dread and mystery. The dialogue is often intimate, revealing complex emotional dynamics and inner turmoil. The narrative is punctuated by vivid sensory details, immersing the audience in the surreal and haunting world of the Hårga community. The direction, although not explicitly detailed, suggests a heightened sense of visual storytelling, using impactful imagery to amplify the unsettling nature of the events.

Best representation: Scene 9 - The Ant-Infested Woods. This scene is the best representation because it masterfully blends psychological horror with vivid imagery and unsettling descriptions. The scene showcases the writer's ability to create intense emotional moments, employing sensory details to amplify the protagonist's fear and disorientation. The use of the outhouse as a confined space, the flickering candlelight, and the grotesque visual transformation of Dani's reflection effectively evoke a sense of claustrophobia and unease. This scene encapsulates the unique voice of the screenplay, highlighting its ability to unsettle and provoke the audience with a blend of psychological realism and disturbing imagery.

Memorable Lines:

Josh: You think I don’t know what you’re doing? It’s actually kind of outrageously unsubtle. The fact that you’re being this bald about it. I’m honestly impressed. (Scene 19)
Dani: Nothing means anything! We’re just alone. (Scene 10)
Dani: I love you. (Scene 1)
Dani: NO!!! (Scene 21)
Dani: She has surrendered to a joy known only by the insane. She has lost herself completely, and she is finally free. It is horrible and it is beautiful. (Scene 42)

Writing Style:

The screenplay leans heavily towards a psychological horror and psychological thriller style, characterized by intense emotional moments, unsettling atmosphere, and explorations of dark themes, societal rituals, and cultural clashes. There is a strong emphasis on character-driven narratives and dialogue that reveals internal conflicts and complex relationships.

Style Similarities:

Ari Aster
Robert Eggers
Jordan Peele

Other Similarities: While Ari Aster's influence is dominant, the screenplay also incorporates elements from other writers like Charlie Kaufman and Lars von Trier, showcasing a deeper exploration of complex human emotions, existential themes, and internal struggles. The screenplay seamlessly blends elements of these various authors, creating a unique and compelling blend of suspense, horror, and psychological depth.

Story Shape

Emotions Elicited

Engine: Gemini

Screenplay Rating:

Highly Recommend

Executive Summary

Midsommar is a masterfully crafted horror screenplay that utilizes stunning visuals, unsettling atmosphere, and compelling character arcs to deliver a truly unique and unforgettable experience. The story masterfully blends psychological horror with folk horror, creating a chillingly believable world where traditions collide with modern anxieties. While the screenplay does contain some minor pacing issues, its strengths far outweigh any weaknesses. It is a highly recommendable script for its originality, disturbing themes, and gripping narrative.

Strengths

The screenplay boasts a strong, visually arresting narrative that pulls the audience into a disturbing yet captivating world. The slow-burn approach, building tension and unease, culminates in a horrifying climax that leaves a lasting impression. high ( Scene 1 Scene 2 Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 Scene 9 Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 14 Scene 15 Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 22 Scene 23 Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 29 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 32 Scene 33 Scene 34 Scene 35 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 Scene 42 )
The screenplay skillfully blends psychological and folk horror elements, creating a chilling atmosphere of dread and suspense that keeps the audience on edge throughout. high ( Scene 1 Scene 2 Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 Scene 9 Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 14 Scene 15 Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 22 Scene 23 Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 29 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 32 Scene 33 Scene 34 Scene 35 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 Scene 42 )
The screenplay features strong character development, delving into the complexities of Dani's psychological journey as she confronts grief, trauma, and the unsettling realities of the cult's practices. high ( Scene 2 Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 Scene 9 Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 14 Scene 15 Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 22 Scene 23 Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 29 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 32 Scene 33 Scene 34 Scene 35 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 Scene 42 )
The screenplay effectively utilizes symbolism and imagery to create a layered and disturbing narrative that resonates on both a conscious and subconscious level. high ( Scene 2 Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 Scene 9 Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 14 Scene 15 Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 22 Scene 23 Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 29 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 32 Scene 33 Scene 34 Scene 35 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 Scene 42 )
The screenplay's pacing is expertly crafted to heighten the sense of unease and create a gradual escalation of horror. The slow-burn approach builds tension effectively, culminating in a shocking and unforgettable finale. medium ( Scene 2 Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 Scene 9 Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 14 Scene 15 Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 22 Scene 23 Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 29 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 32 Scene 33 Scene 34 Scene 35 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 Scene 42 )

Areas of Improvement

The screenplay could benefit from further development of the supporting characters. While some secondary characters are intriguing, their motivations and backstories could be explored more fully to add depth and complexity to the narrative. medium ( Scene 42 )
The screenplay's pacing could be adjusted slightly to ensure a more consistent and engaging flow. Some scenes might benefit from trimming or reordering to maintain the audience's interest. low ( Scene 42 )

MissingElements

While the screenplay does a good job of building tension and creating a disturbing atmosphere, further exploration of the Hårga’s beliefs and rituals might enhance the overall impact of the story. Expanding on the origins and significance of their traditions would deepen the audience’s understanding of the cult’s practices and add layers of complexity to the narrative. medium ( Scene 42 )

NotablePoints

The screenplay skillfully uses visuals and symbolism to create a disturbing and unsettling atmosphere. The use of light and darkness, color and texture, and the juxtaposition of idyllic and unsettling imagery contribute to the screenplay's unique and memorable style. high ( Scene 42 )
The screenplay effectively uses the motif of the “May Queen” to explore themes of female power, submission, and the subversion of traditional roles within the Hårga community. This adds layers of complexity and intrigue to the narrative, prompting the audience to question the nature of power and control within the cult. high ( Scene 42 )

Blind Spots

Cultural Sensitivity The screenplay, while exploring the dark side of a pagan cult, might benefit from further exploration of the cultural and historical context of the Hårga’s practices. Ensuring a nuanced and accurate portrayal of the culture, while acknowledging the potential sensitivities surrounding certain rituals, would enhance the screenplay's credibility and depth. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Lack of Detailed Character Motivation While the screenplay focuses on Dani's journey, some of the supporting characters could benefit from further development to clarify their motivations. For example, while we see Christian's interest in the Hårga, it's unclear what specifically draws him to them, which could be further explored in the dialogue or through subtle actions. low

Engine: GPT4

Screenplay Rating:

Highly Recommend

Executive Summary

The screenplay for 'Midsommar' is a masterful blend of horror and psychological drama, exploring themes of grief, isolation, and cultural dislocation. The character arcs are intricately woven into the narrative, with Dani's transformation from a vulnerable woman to a powerful figure within a foreign community serving as a compelling focal point. The screenplay's unique setting and ritualistic elements create a haunting atmosphere that lingers long after the story concludes.

Strengths

The screenplay effectively establishes a haunting atmosphere from the outset, using vivid imagery and sound to immerse the audience in the world of the Hårgas. high ( Scene 1 (1-4) Scene 2 (5-6) )
Character development is a significant strength, particularly in Dani's arc, which showcases her emotional journey and transformation throughout the narrative. high ( Scene 3 (7-12) Scene 4 (15-16) )
The screenplay's pacing is well-structured, balancing moments of tension with quieter, introspective scenes that allow for character reflection. medium ( Scene 5 (17-18) Scene 6 (25-26) )
The use of symbolism and ritualistic elements throughout the screenplay adds depth and layers of meaning, enhancing the overall narrative. high ( Scene 6 (29-30) Scene 7 (31-32) )
The screenplay's ability to evoke strong emotional responses from the audience, particularly through its exploration of grief and loss, is a notable strength. high ( Scene 8 (25A-25C) Scene 9 (26-28) )

Areas of Improvement

Some dialogue can feel overly expository, particularly in scenes where characters discuss their motivations and feelings, which could be shown more subtly through actions. medium ( Scene 4 (15-16) )
The pacing in certain sections, particularly during the buildup to the climax, could be tightened to maintain tension and engagement. medium ( Scene 5 (17-18) )
Some characters, particularly the male friends, could benefit from deeper development to enhance their motivations and relationships with Dani. medium ( Scene 6 (25-26) )
The resolution of certain plot threads, particularly regarding the fate of the male characters, could be more clearly defined to avoid confusion. medium ( Scene 7 (31-32) )
The emotional transitions of characters, especially during intense scenes, could be more gradual to enhance believability. medium ( Scene 8 (25A-25C) )

MissingElements

A deeper exploration of the cultural background of the Hårgas could enhance the audience's understanding and investment in the story. high ( Scene 4 (15-16) )
More insight into Dani's internal struggles and thoughts could provide a richer emotional experience for the audience. high ( Scene 5 (17-18) )
The motivations behind the rituals and their significance to the Hårga community could be more explicitly articulated. medium ( Scene 6 (25-26) )
A clearer depiction of the consequences of the characters' actions could enhance the narrative's stakes. medium ( Scene 7 (31-32) )
The emotional aftermath of the climax could be explored further to provide closure for the audience. medium ( Scene 8 (25A-25C) )

NotablePoints

The opening scenes effectively set the tone and atmosphere, drawing the audience into the world of the Hårgas with striking visuals and sound. high ( Scene 1 (1-4) )
The use of foreshadowing in early scenes hints at the darker themes to come, creating a sense of unease that permeates the narrative. high ( Scene 2 (5-6) )
The screenplay's exploration of grief and its impact on relationships is a poignant and relatable theme that resonates throughout the story. high ( Scene 3 (7-12) )
The character dynamics, particularly between Dani and Christian, are complex and evolve throughout the screenplay, adding depth to the narrative. high ( Scene 4 (15-16) )
The climactic scenes are visually and emotionally impactful, leaving a lasting impression on the audience. high ( Scene 5 (17-18) )

Blind Spots

Character Motivation The motivations of some secondary characters, particularly the male friends, are not fully explored, leaving their actions feeling somewhat superficial. For example, Christian's friends often serve as comic relief but lack depth in their own arcs. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Expository Dialogue Some scenes contain dialogue that feels overly expository, where characters explain their feelings or motivations rather than showing them through actions. This can detract from the natural flow of the narrative. medium

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Screenplay Insights:

Characters: 7.75, The screenplay excels in crafting complex and intriguing characters who evolve through a series of emotionally charged events. Dani's journey from anxious young woman to empowered May Queen is compelling, while Christian's transformation from dismissive partner to victim underscores the dark influence of the Hårga community. However, some characters, like Mark and Josh, could benefit from more depth and consistent development to further enhance the emotional impact and audience engagement. See More

Premise: 6.5, The screenplay's premise, featuring a young woman's descent into a disturbing cult in Sweden, is intriguing and holds potential, but could benefit from a stronger initial hook and clearer delineation of the protagonist's motivations. While the cult setting and supernatural elements are compelling, the story's core conflict - the protagonist's relationship with her boyfriend - needs further development to drive the narrative forward. See More

Structure: 6.75, This screenplay shows promise in its exploration of a cult and the psychological effects of ritual on individuals. However, the structure requires refinement, particularly in terms of pacing, clarity, and the development of conflict. The story needs to more tightly connect to the themes and character arcs, and the ending feels rushed and unsatisfying. See More

Theme: 7.75, The screenplay effectively explores themes of cultural clashes, identity, and the dark underbelly of community, creating a gripping and unsettling atmosphere. However, it could benefit from further developing the thematic tension between individual agency and societal pressure, potentially drawing inspiration from works like 'The Wicker Man' or 'Midsommar' for more nuanced exploration of the cult's influence and the characters' internal struggles. It also needs to more fully explore the consequences of Christian's actions and the impact of Dani's choices. See More

Visual Impact: 7.5, The screenplay's visual imagery effectively builds suspense and conveys the unsettling atmosphere of the Hårga community. It uses vivid descriptions to create a strong sense of place and visually foreshadows the dark events to come, especially through the use of symbols like the Rubi Radr and the Rotvältan. However, the screenplay could benefit from expanding on the visual details within the Hårga community, offering more specific imagery of their customs and rituals. See More

Emotional Impact: 7.25, The screenplay successfully utilizes suspense and tension to create a thrilling and unsettling atmosphere, with moments of psychological horror. The script effectively explores the complexities of human relationships and cultural clashes, drawing the audience into a world of unconventional rituals and unsettling mysteries. However, the emotional impact could be amplified by deepening the characters' inner conflicts and exploring their emotional responses to the Hårga culture with greater nuance. See More

Conflict: 6.75, The screenplay effectively introduces conflict through Dani's anxiety and the unsettling rituals of the Hårga community. However, the stakes feel inconsistent and need elevation. While the community's practices create intrigue, the personal stakes for Dani and Christian need strengthening to increase audience investment. See More

Originality: 7.75, The screenplay showcases a strong foundation of originality, particularly in its unique blend of dark folk horror and psychological thriller elements. It introduces a compelling premise exploring the clash between modern sensibilities and ancient traditions, while utilizing the hallucinatory experiences of the characters to delve into themes of identity, grief, and the seductive power of the unknown. See More

Summary In this screenplay, Dani, a young woman grieving a family tragedy, accompanies her boyfriend, Christian, and friends to an isolated Swedish village for a midsummer festival. As tensions and unease mount within the group, they are gradually drawn into the village's dark and disturbing traditions, leading to a series of shocking and horrifying events. Dani is chosen as the May Queen, and as she becomes increasingly enmeshed in the community's rituals, she witnesses the true nature of the Hårgan customs, culminating in a harrowing climax where Christian is sacrificed in a brutal ritual. Dani, overcome with a mix of emotions, ultimately embraces her new role within the community, completing a transformative and nightmarish journey of grief, loss, and acceptance.

Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The screenplay 'Hårga' presents a captivating premise of a young woman thrust into a mysterious and unsettling pagan community. The setting is intriguing, and the screenplay effectively utilizes atmosphere and visual elements to create a sense of unease and otherworldly wonder. The characters, particularly Dani, Christian, and Pelle, are compelling and navigate their journey through the Hårga community with both curiosity and trepidation. However, the overall plot lacks a clear and compelling narrative arc. The screenplay feels disjointed at times, with plot points being introduced and then dropped without proper resolution. The characters' motivations and their individual arcs sometimes feel unclear, leaving the audience unsure of their true desires and the significance of their choices. Moreover, while the screenplay includes moments of horror and suspense, they are not fully integrated into the narrative, feeling more like standalone set pieces rather than organically intertwined elements of the overall story.

Suggestions: To strengthen the screenplay, consider streamlining the plot and establishing a clear throughline for Dani's character arc. Her relationship with Christian and her transformation into the May Queen should be interwoven more seamlessly into the story. The screenplay could benefit from stronger character motivations and more explicit development of the internal conflicts faced by each character. The use of horror elements should be integrated more effectively into the narrative, building tension and suspense organically. Additionally, the screenplay could explore the cultural significance of the Hårga rituals in greater detail, providing a deeper understanding of their practices and how they shape the lives of the community members.

Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here

Beginning The screenplay's beginning effectively establishes a sense of unease and intrigue, setting the stage for a journey into a mysterious world. The initial scene with Dani's ominous email from her sister immediately captures the audience's attention, sparking a sense of mystery and concern for her safety. However, the screenplay could benefit from a stronger introduction of the main characters, particularly Dani. Her initial anxieties and relationship dynamics with Christian could be explored more thoroughly, providing the audience with a deeper understanding of her motivations and the stakes involved in her journey. Additionally, the introduction of the Hårga community could be more gradual, allowing the audience to absorb the culture and its customs more effectively before being thrust into its unsettling rituals.

Suggestions: Consider adding a scene that delves deeper into Dani's life before her arrival in Sweden. This could include scenes exploring her relationship with her sister, her anxieties, and her initial relationship with Christian. Additionally, introduce the Hårga community more subtly, perhaps through Dani's research or encounters with individuals connected to the culture. This gradual introduction would allow the audience to better grasp the complexity of the world she is entering.

Middle The middle of the screenplay is where the story starts to feel disjointed and lacks a clear narrative throughline. While the introduction of the Hårga community and its rituals is intriguing, the overall plot meanders without a clear sense of direction. The screenplay could benefit from stronger development of the character arcs, particularly Dani and Christian. Their motivations and their internal conflicts need to be explored more thoroughly. The screenplay also lacks a clear sense of tension and suspense. The Hårga community's rituals are presented as interesting but not necessarily threatening, which diminishes the overall impact of the narrative.

Suggestions: Strengthen the narrative structure by introducing a clear goal for Dani and Christian. Perhaps they are seeking to understand the Hårga culture, uncover a family secret, or escape a dangerous situation. Also, add more suspense by making the Hårga rituals more threatening or by introducing a more direct conflict between the protagonists and the community. Finally, enhance the character arcs by delving deeper into their internal struggles and motivations.

Ending The screenplay's ending offers a sense of closure while leaving some questions unanswered, which could be interpreted as a deliberate artistic choice, The final scenes with the sacrificial ritual and Dani's transformation are visually compelling and emotionally charged. However, the screenplay could benefit from a more decisive conclusion for Dani's character arc. The audience may be left wondering about the long-term consequences of her choices and her ultimate fate. Additionally, the screenplay could provide a more satisfying resolution for Christian, exploring the full impact of his actions and the implications of his encounter with the Hårga community.

Suggestions: To strengthen the ending, consider giving Dani's transformation into the May Queen a more decisive ending. Perhaps she is presented with a final choice or faces a critical moment that solidifies her transformation. Additionally, the screenplay could provide a more conclusive fate for Christian, ensuring that his journey and the consequences of his choices are fully explored. This could be done by exploring his reaction to the ritual, his relationship with the Hårga community, or his potential for redemption.

CharacterInconsistencies

Character Christian
Description Christian's behavior shifts from being supportive to dismissive and ambivalent towards Dani's emotional struggles. Initially, he seems caring during their phone call, but later he appears cold and defensive, which feels inconsistent given the context of their relationship.
( Scene 6 (6) Scene 16 (16) )
Character Dani
Description Dani's emotional state fluctuates rapidly, from anxious and insecure to suddenly being overwhelmed with grief and despair. While this could be attributed to her trauma, the abruptness of these shifts can feel jarring and lacks a gradual build-up.
( Scene 5 (5) Scene 12 (12) )

StoryInconsistencies

Description The transition from the discovery of Dani's family tragedy to her subsequent emotional breakdown feels rushed. The screenplay does not adequately explore the impact of this trauma on her character, leading to a lack of emotional coherence in her reactions.
( Scene 7 (7) Scene 10 (10) )
Description The sudden disappearance of Josh and Mark without any prior foreshadowing or explanation creates a narrative gap. Their absence is not sufficiently addressed, leaving the audience confused about their fate.
( Scene 29 (29) )

PlotHoles

Description Christian's decision to stay and pursue his thesis while Dani is clearly distressed raises questions about his motivations. The screenplay does not provide a convincing rationale for why he prioritizes his academic interests over his girlfriend's well-being.
( Scene 6 (6) Scene 16 (16) )
Description The mechanics of the Hårga's rituals and their implications for outsiders are not clearly explained. This lack of clarity creates confusion about the stakes involved for the characters, particularly regarding the sacrifices.
( Scene 29 (29) )

DialogueAuthenticity

Description The dialogue between Christian and Dani during their argument feels forced and overly dramatic. Their exchanges lack the natural flow of a couple in conflict, making it difficult for the audience to connect with their emotional turmoil.
( Scene 16 (16) )
Description Dani's conversation with her girlfriend feels somewhat clichéd and lacks depth. The dialogue does not fully capture the complexity of her emotional state, making it feel less authentic.
( Scene 5 (5) )

Redundancies

Element Dani's emotional breakdowns
( Scene 12 (12) Scene 29 (29) )
Suggestion Streamline Dani's emotional breakdowns to avoid redundancy. Instead of multiple breakdowns, consider consolidating them into a single, more impactful moment that captures her grief and trauma.
Element Christian's indecisiveness
( Scene 16 (16) Scene 93 (93) )
Suggestion Christian's indecisiveness about his relationship with Dani is repeated. This could be streamlined to create a more cohesive character arc, focusing on a single moment of realization or decision.

Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:

Dani

Dani is a deeply complex character marked by her caring nature and profound emotional vulnerability. She grapples with anxiety, fear, and a longing for reassurance, particularly in her relationships, especially with her sister and Christian. Throughout the screenplay, Dani's speaking style evolves from warm and intimate to frantic and emotional, reflecting her inner turmoil and struggles with trust and communication. She often expresses her feelings openly, using phrases like 'No, no, no' and 'I'm sorry. I'm gonna walk,' which highlight her sensitivity and need for connection. As she navigates the unsettling rituals of the Hårga community, her emotional journey showcases her vulnerability, curiosity, and moments of strength. Dani's character arc culminates in her transformation into the May Queen, where she experiences a profound shift from fear and confusion to empowerment and acceptance of her fate, embodying a blend of compassion, introspection, and resilience.

Christian

Christian is a complex character who embodies a mix of pragmatism, emotional distance, and internal conflict. Initially portrayed as dismissive and pragmatic, he often takes a rational approach to situations, providing a counterbalance to Dani's emotional nature. His speaking style is casual and straightforward, with a tendency to offer practical advice. However, as the story progresses, Christian becomes increasingly conflicted and emotionally distant, struggling with his relationship with Dani and the emotional burden she places on him. He oscillates between moments of genuine care and insensitivity, often reflecting his internal struggles and reluctance to engage emotionally. His dialogue reveals a defensive and dismissive tone, particularly when faced with emotional confrontations. Christian's character arc takes him from being a protective yet distant partner to a morally ambiguous figure, ultimately facing the consequences of his actions in a terrifying ritual. His speaking style evolves from casual and indifferent to hesitant and distressed, culminating in a paralyzed state that symbolizes his transformation and the horror of the cult's practices.

Mark

Mark is a complex character who evolves throughout the feature. Initially, he is laid-back and easygoing, providing a sense of normalcy amidst the tension of the scenes. His relaxed and friendly speaking style helps to ground the interactions, making him relatable to others. However, as the story progresses, Mark's demeanor shifts dramatically. He becomes blunt and confrontational, particularly in his interactions with Christian, where he challenges him and reveals his own insecurities. This direct and provocative dialogue adds significant tension to the group dynamics, showcasing his emotional struggles and conflicts. In a chilling twist, Mark is later revealed to be a larger man wearing Mark's skin as a mask, transforming him into a mysterious and menacing figure. His silence and eerie presence amplify the horror elements of the scene, creating a stark contrast to his earlier persona and heightening the overall tension and fear.

Josh

Josh is a complex character characterized by his insatiable curiosity and slightly provocative nature. He possesses a direct and inquisitive speaking style, often pushing conversations forward with challenging questions that add depth to the dialogue. His enthusiasm is palpable, especially when documenting the Ättestupan ritual, where he speaks quickly and with excitement, peppering his dialogue with cultural references. Throughout the story, Josh's intrigue and amusement towards the Hårga culture are evident, as he approaches unfamiliar traditions with a sense of playful curiosity. However, his strong sense of ethics and academic ambition also surface, particularly in his confrontations with Christian regarding their research. His tone becomes passionate and assertive when defending his principles, reflecting his commitment to hard work and dedication. As the narrative progresses, Josh's frustration and annoyance grow, especially in response to Christian's actions that threaten their research. This culminates in a moment of vulnerability when he sneaks into the temple, revealing his fear upon encountering the horrifying revelation of a character wearing a skin mask. His speaking style remains direct and urgent, mirroring his intense emotions and reactions throughout the screenplay.

Pelle

Pelle is a complex and multifaceted character, embodying a blend of mystery, wisdom, and empathy. He serves as a calming presence within the group, often engaging in thoughtful and introspective dialogue that draws others, particularly Dani, into meaningful conversations. Pelle's connection to his heritage is profound; he speaks with reverence and respect for the Hårga community's traditions, often translating and explaining the significance of their rituals. His tone is solemn and cryptic when discussing the Ättestupan ritual, hinting at its deeper meanings while conveying a sense of reverence for cultural beliefs. Pelle's compassionate nature shines through as he comforts Dani, sharing his personal history and emphasizing themes of family, belonging, and tradition. He demonstrates a strong sense of duty and loyalty to his community, particularly when he takes action to search for the missing Josh and Mark, showcasing his leadership qualities. Throughout the screenplay, Pelle's speaking style remains calm, reassuring, and engaging, often laced with philosophical insights that reflect his understanding of human emotions and relationships.

Character	Arc	Critique	Suggestions
Dani	Dani's character arc begins with her as a caring and anxious individual, deeply concerned about her family and struggling with emotional vulnerability. As she confronts the unsettling customs of the Hårga community, her initial skepticism and fear evolve into curiosity and engagement. Throughout the screenplay, she faces intense emotional turmoil, particularly in response to the community's rituals, which challenge her perception of reality. Dani's journey is marked by moments of introspection and emotional breakdown, leading to a significant transformation as she embraces her role as the May Queen. By the end, she transitions from a state of confusion and fear to one of empowerment and liberation, ultimately making a steely decision that impacts the fate of others, showcasing her growth and resilience.	Dani's character arc is compelling and showcases a significant emotional journey. However, the transition from her initial vulnerability to empowerment as the May Queen could benefit from more gradual development. While her emotional breakdowns are impactful, they may come across as abrupt without sufficient buildup of her internal conflicts and motivations. Additionally, her relationship dynamics, particularly with Christian, could be explored further to enhance the emotional stakes and provide a clearer contrast to her eventual empowerment.	To improve Dani's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that highlight her internal struggles and the evolution of her relationship with Christian. This could involve deeper conversations that reveal her fears and insecurities, allowing the audience to connect with her on a more personal level. Additionally, introducing moments of agency where Dani actively confronts her fears before the climax could create a more satisfying transition to her role as the May Queen. Finally, exploring her interactions with other characters in the Hårga community could provide a richer context for her transformation, showcasing how she navigates and ultimately reconciles her conflicting emotions.
Christian	Christian's character arc begins with him as a pragmatic and somewhat dismissive partner to Dani, who struggles to connect with her emotional needs. As the narrative unfolds, he becomes increasingly conflicted, torn between his academic ambitions and his relationship with Dani. His initial skepticism towards the Hårga community's traditions gradually shifts to curiosity, revealing his internal conflict. However, his opportunistic nature leads him to prioritize his research over Dani's emotional struggles, causing tension in their relationship. As he becomes more entangled in the Hårga rituals, Christian's moral compass is challenged, leading to feelings of guilt and confusion. The climax of his arc occurs during the sacrificial ritual, where he faces the consequences of his actions, ultimately becoming a victim of the cult's dark practices. This transformation from a dismissive partner to a paralyzed victim symbolizes his internal turmoil and the horror of his choices.	Christian's character arc is compelling but could benefit from deeper exploration of his motivations and emotional struggles. While his internal conflict is evident, the screenplay sometimes relies on surface-level traits, making it difficult for the audience to fully empathize with his journey. His transition from a rational partner to a victim of the cult's practices feels abrupt, and the emotional stakes could be heightened to create a more impactful transformation. Additionally, the portrayal of his relationship with Dani could be more nuanced, allowing for moments of vulnerability that would make his eventual downfall more tragic.	To improve Christian's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into his backstory and the reasons behind his emotional distance. This could include flashbacks or conversations that reveal his past experiences and fears, making his internal conflict more relatable. Additionally, enhance the dynamic between Christian and Dani by showcasing moments of genuine connection and vulnerability, which would heighten the emotional stakes of their relationship. Gradually build his moral ambiguity throughout the screenplay, allowing the audience to witness his descent into opportunism and the resulting consequences. Finally, ensure that his transformation during the sacrificial ritual is foreshadowed and emotionally resonant, emphasizing the tragic nature of his character arc.
Mark	Mark's character arc begins with him as a laid-back individual who serves as a stabilizing force within the group. As the narrative unfolds, he faces internal and external conflicts that force him to confront his insecurities and fears. This leads to a more confrontational and aggressive side emerging, particularly in his interactions with Christian, where he grapples with feelings of anger and vulnerability. Ultimately, the revelation of Mark being a larger man in disguise serves as a climax to his arc, symbolizing the loss of his identity and the transformation into a more sinister version of himself. This shift highlights the themes of fear, identity, and the duality of human nature, culminating in a tragic and horrifying conclusion.	While Mark's character arc is intriguing and offers a compelling exploration of identity and emotional struggle, it may benefit from deeper development in certain areas. The transition from a laid-back persona to a confrontational figure feels abrupt, and the motivations behind this shift could be more clearly articulated. Additionally, the final reveal of Mark as a larger man in disguise, while shocking, may leave audiences wanting more context regarding his transformation and the implications it has on his relationships with other characters. The arc could also explore the psychological aspects of Mark's character more thoroughly, providing insight into how his laid-back nature masks deeper fears and insecurities.	To improve Mark's character arc, consider incorporating more gradual changes in his demeanor throughout the screenplay. This could involve moments of vulnerability that foreshadow his eventual confrontation with Christian, allowing the audience to better understand his emotional struggles. Additionally, providing backstory or flashbacks that reveal the origins of his insecurities could add depth to his character. The final reveal could be enhanced by exploring the psychological implications of his transformation, perhaps through interactions with other characters that highlight their reactions to the change. This would not only enrich Mark's character but also deepen the thematic resonance of identity and fear within the narrative.
Josh	Josh's character arc begins with a strong sense of curiosity and ambition as he seeks to explore and document the Hårga culture. Initially, he is enthusiastic and eager, driven by a desire to understand and engage with the unfamiliar. However, as the story unfolds, he faces ethical dilemmas and conflicts with Christian, which challenge his beliefs and commitment to his research. This tension leads to moments of frustration and confrontation, pushing him to confront his values and the consequences of his ambition. Ultimately, Josh's arc culminates in a moment of vulnerability that forces him to reevaluate his motivations and the impact of his actions, leading to a deeper understanding of himself and the culture he sought to study.	While Josh's character arc is compelling, it could benefit from more nuanced development. His initial curiosity and enthusiasm are well-established, but the transition to frustration and confrontation feels somewhat abrupt. Additionally, his vulnerability in the face of horror could be explored further to create a more profound emotional impact. The character's motivations and internal conflicts could be more clearly defined to enhance the audience's connection to his journey.	To improve Josh's character arc, consider incorporating more gradual shifts in his emotional state. Introduce smaller moments of doubt or ethical conflict earlier in the screenplay to foreshadow his eventual frustration with Christian. Additionally, provide opportunities for Josh to reflect on his motivations and the implications of his research, perhaps through conversations with other characters or internal monologues. This would deepen his character and create a more cohesive arc that resonates with the audience. Finally, ensure that his moments of vulnerability are given adequate weight, allowing the audience to fully grasp the transformation he undergoes by the end of the feature.
Pelle	Pelle begins as a mysterious figure, serving as a guide to the Hårga community's traditions and rituals. Initially, he is seen as a calming presence, providing stability amidst escalating tensions. As the story progresses, Pelle's character deepens; he reveals his personal connection to the community and its rituals, particularly through his interactions with Dani. His sense of responsibility grows, especially when he takes it upon himself to search for the missing characters, showcasing his loyalty and leadership. By the end of the feature, Pelle emerges as a more fully realized character, having navigated the complexities of his heritage and the weight of his community's traditions, ultimately finding a balance between his personal beliefs and the expectations of his culture.	While Pelle's character is rich and layered, his arc could benefit from more explicit internal conflict. As he navigates his role within the Hårga community and his relationships with the outsiders, there are opportunities to explore his doubts or fears about the traditions he upholds. This could add depth to his character and make his eventual growth more impactful. Additionally, Pelle's motivations could be clearer; while he is portrayed as loyal and responsible, understanding what drives him personally—beyond duty to his community—would enhance his relatability.	To improve Pelle's character arc, consider introducing moments of vulnerability where he questions the traditions he holds dear or struggles with the implications of those traditions on his relationships with outsiders. This could be achieved through flashbacks or conversations with other characters that challenge his beliefs. Additionally, incorporating a subplot that highlights Pelle's personal stakes in the community's rituals—perhaps a family connection to the Ättestupan or a past trauma related to the traditions—could provide a more compelling narrative thread. Finally, allowing Pelle to make a choice that reflects his growth, such as standing up against a tradition he no longer believes in, could serve as a powerful climax for his character development.

Theme

Theme Details

Themee Explanation

Grief and Loss

Dani's emotional turmoil over her sister's death and her struggle to cope with the loss is a central focus throughout the screenplay.

The theme of grief and loss is explored through Dani's character as she navigates her sister's tragic death and her own feelings of abandonment and isolation. This theme is prevalent in her interactions with Christian and her emotional breakdowns, highlighting the profound impact of loss on mental health and relationships.

Strengthening Grief and Loss:

Suggestion Type	How to Strengthen the Theme
Character Arc	Deepen Dani's arc of grief by showcasing her internal struggle with guilt. Explore how she blames herself for her sister's death, potentially through flashbacks or internal monologues. This guilt can manifest as a desire to control her environment and relationships, ultimately leading to her accepting the May Queen role as a way to find purpose and control in a chaotic world.
Visual - Scene 9	Amplify Dani's hallucination in the outhouse by making it more visually disturbing and symbolic. Consider incorporating imagery related to her sister's death, such as the car exhaust, or her own feelings of suffocating grief. This can create a powerful connection between her internal turmoil and the external world.
Dialogue - Scene 17, 18	During the Ãttestupan ritual, add dialogue that explores different perspectives on death and sacrifice. Let characters express conflicting views, highlighting the emotional complexities of this tradition. This can create a sense of moral ambiguity and force Dani to confront the uncomfortable truths of HÃ¥rgan culture.
Action - Scene 24	Instead of just showing Dani being uncomfortable, have her actively try to intervene during the animal sacrifice. This could involve trying to stop the ritual, pleading with the community, or even trying to free the animals. Her actions can showcase her strong moral compass and the internal conflict she faces when confronted with a foreign and potentially cruel tradition.
Story Arc	Weave a subplot focusing on the HÃ¥rgans' history of death and loss. Explore how their traditions and rituals have evolved in response to past tragedies. This can provide context for the present events and deepen the theme of grief by showing how it shapes their culture and worldview.

Isolation and Connection

Dani feels increasingly isolated in her relationship with Christian, who is more focused on his thesis and social life than on her emotional needs.

The theme of isolation and connection is illustrated through Dani's struggle to maintain her relationship with Christian while feeling emotionally abandoned. This theme is emphasized by her interactions with the Hårga community, which offers a sense of belonging that contrasts with her alienation from Christian.

Cultural Rituals and Belonging

The Hårga community's rituals and traditions play a significant role in the story, particularly during the Midsummer festival.

This theme examines the importance of cultural rituals in establishing a sense of belonging and identity. Dani's eventual acceptance into the Hårga community reflects her desire for connection and understanding, contrasting with her previous feelings of isolation in her relationship with Christian.

Manipulation and Control

Christian's manipulative behavior towards Dani and his interactions with the Hårga community reveal themes of control and exploitation.

The theme of manipulation and control is evident in Christian's actions, particularly when he invites Dani to Sweden under false pretenses and later engages in a relationship with Maja. This theme highlights the dynamics of power in relationships and the consequences of emotional manipulation.

Mental Health and Breakdown

Dani's mental health struggles are depicted through her anxiety, panic attacks, and eventual breakdown during the rituals.

The theme of mental health and breakdown is explored through Dani's experiences with anxiety and her emotional unraveling in the face of trauma. This theme underscores the impact of unresolved grief and the importance of mental health awareness in navigating personal crises.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	Throughout the script, Dani's internal goals evolve from seeking validation and reassurance from her partner and grappling with family turmoil to confronting deeper feelings of grief, identity, and belonging in the face of tragic events and unsettling traditions.
External Goals	Dani's external goals transition from trying to address family dynamics and establish a solid relationship with Christian to engaging with and participating in the customs of the Hårgan community, culminating in her acceptance of deeply disturbing practices that challenge her moral compass.
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict in the screenplay revolves around the tension between individuality and community belonging, as Dani struggles with her own beliefs about sacrifice, identity, and her role within both her family and the Hårga society. This conflict is amplified by her need for validation and connection against the backdrop of deeply entrenched communal traditions that often require unsettling personal sacrifices.

Character Development Contribution: Dani's goals and the philosophical conflicts she faces drive her character development from a state of insecurity and fear to one of acceptance and realization. By confronting her emotions and integrating herself into a community with radically different beliefs, she evolves into a character who ultimately embraces her identity, albeit through a lens of horror that complicates her sense of self.

Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflicts establish a clear narrative arc where Dani's initial quest for closeness and validation shapes her interactions and decisions throughout the story, leading to increasingly intense and provocative situations. This transformation also aligns the external action with her internal journey, creating a cohesive and compelling narrative progression.

Thematic Depth Contribution: The interplay of Dani's goals and the philosophical conflicts enriches the screenplay's thematic depth, exploring themes of grief, belonging, sacrifice, and the nature of identity. Through her experiences, the screenplay challenges the audience to consider the cost of community and the sacrifices individuals make in pursuit of love and acceptance, ultimately leaving lingering questions about morality and personal agency.

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

Story Content

Character Development

Scene Elements

Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \ It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.

			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Character Changes	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Opposition	High stakes	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - A Sister's Cry	Anxious, Intimate, Concerned	8	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	8
2 - Distant Cry	Anxious, Conflicted, Intense, Emotional	9	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	7	9	8	7	10	8	9	8	8	8
3 - Unraveled Ties	Tense, Somber, Foreboding	9	9	9	9	8	8	8	7	9	7	9	9	8	10	7	9	8	8	8
4 - A Sudden Departure and an Unexpected Offer	Tense, Emotional, Defensive, Desperate	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
5 - Unexpected Arrival	Anxious, Awkward, Sensitively, Mock-menacing	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7.5	6	8	6	7	9	8	8	9	8.5	8	8
6 - Driving Through Sweden	Tense, Emotional, Mysterious	8	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
7 - A Midsummer Night's Trip	Tense, Emotional, Introspective	8	9	7	9	8	8	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
8 - Dani's Discomfort	Tense, Anxious, Eerie, Intense, Disturbing	8	8	7	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	8	7	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
9 - Eyes of the Beast	Tense, Disturbing, Emotional, Intense	9	9	8	9	8	8	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
10 - The Ant-Infested Woods	Fearful, Panicked, Intense, Disconnected	8	9	7	9	7	8	8	7	7	7	8	7	8	9	6	9	8	8	8
11 - Arrival at the Hårga Farmstead	Eerie, Mysterious, Foreboding, Ceremonial	8	9	8	9	7	7	8	7.5	7	8	7	8	8	9	6	9	8.5	8	8
12 - Feast of Traditions	Disturbing, Tense, Mysterious, Reverent, Charged	8	8	7	9	7	6	8	7.5	7	8	7	8	8	9	6	9	8.5	8	8
13 - A Dance of Tensions	Tense, Eerie, Emotional, Mysterious	8	8	7	9	7	7	8	7.5	7	8	7	7	8	9	6	9	8.5	8	8
14 - Uneasy Revelations at Håрga Estate	Tense, Mysterious, Unsettling, Informative	8	8	7	9	8	6	8	7.5	6	8	6	7	7	7	7	9	8	8	8
15 - A New World, New Traditions	Suspenseful, Dark, Mysterious, Intense	8	9	8	9	7	7	8	7.5	8	8	7	8	9	8	7	9	8.5	8	8
16 - Unease in the Village	Tense, Mysterious, Unnerving, Emotional, Curious	8	8	7	9	7	7	8	7.5	7	8	7	7	9	8	6	9	8.5	8	8
17 - The Journey to Ättestupan	Tense, Disturbing, Mysterious, Emotional	8	9	8	9	7	7	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	9	6	9	8	8	8
18 - The Ritual of the Cliffs	Disturbing, Ethereal, Horrified, Contemplative, Traumatized	9	9	8	9	7	7	8	7	8	8	9	9	9	10	6	9	8	8	8
19 - Stolen Research	Tense, Confrontational, Emotional, Intense	8	8	7	9	9	7	9	7	9	8	7	8	8	8	8	9	8	8	8
20 - Secrets and Conflict at the Farmstead	Tense, Intrigued, Uneasy, Love-stricken, Annoyed	8	9	8	9	7	7	8	7	9	7	7	8	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
21 - A Ceremony of Fire and Water	Disturbing, Tense, Mysterious, Cultural	8	8	7	9	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	7	8	8	6	9	9	8	8
22 - Growing Divide	Tense, Emotional, Confrontational, Defensive	8	8	7	8.5	9	8	8	7.5	9	8	8	8	9	9	9	9	8.5	8	8
23 - Morning Rituals and Rising Tension	Disturbing, Tense, Mysterious, Emotional	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	8	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
24 - The Sacrifice and the Comfort	Tense, Anxious, Emotional, Mysterious, Intense	9	9	9	9	8	8	8	7	8	8	8	9	8	9	8	9	8	8	8
25 - The Aftermath of Sacrifice	Disturbing, Intense, Confrontational, Tense	8	8	8	8	7	7	9	8	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	9	9	9
26 - Simon's Departure and Christian's Indifference	Disturbing, Tense, Mysterious, Intense, Emotional	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	9	7	8	8	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
27 - A Taste of the Unknown	Disturbing, Tense, Mysterious, Emotional	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	7	7	8	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
28 - Tensions at the Fire Temple Feast	Disturbing, Tense, Unsettling, Mysterious, Emotional	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	8	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
29 - The Deceptive Encounter	Disturbing, Tense, Mysterious, Macabre	9	9	8	9	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	9	9	6	9	8	8	8
30 - Missing Book, Missing Boys	Tense, Suspenseful, Mysterious, Uneasy	8	8	8	9	7	6	8	7	8	8	7	8	8	7	8	9	8	8	8
31 - The Dance of Defiance	Disturbing, Tense, Mysterious, Trippy, Emotional	8	9	7	9	7	7	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	9	6	9	8	8	8
32 - Conflicted Loyalties	Tense, Uncomfortable, Mysterious, Conflicted	8	9	8	9	7	7	8	7	9	8	8	8	8	7	7	9	8	8	8
33 - Maypole Mayhem	Disturbing, Tense, Hallucinatory, Mysterious, Intense	9	9	8	9	8	7	8	7.5	9	7	8	8	9	8	7	9	8.5	8	8
34 - Dani's Coronation	Disturbing, Tense, Conflicted, Hallucinatory, Celebratory	9	9	9	9	8	8	8	7.5	9	8	9	9	9	9	8	9	8.5	8	8
35 - A Throne of Uncertainties	Disturbing, Hallucinatory, Conflicted, Eerie, Intense	8	9	8	9	7	8	8	7	9	7	8	8	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
36 - The May Queen's Departure	Disturbing, Tense, Mysterious, Surreal, Emotional	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7.5	9	8	7	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
37 - Rituals of the Unseen	Disturbing, Tense, Surreal, Mysterious, Intense	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	8	8	8	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
38 - Twilight Descent	Disturbing, Tense, Surreal, Intense, Emotional	9	9	8	9	7	8	9	8	9	8	8	7	8	10	6	9	9	8	8
39 - The Horror Unfolds	Disturbing, Traumatic, Eerie, Suspenseful	9	9	8	9	7	7	9	8	9	8	9	8	9	9	6	9	8	8	8
40 - The Chosen Sacrifice	Terror, Sadness, Confusion, Shock, Intense Emotion	9	9	8	9	8	8	8	7	9	8	10	9	9	10	7	9	8	8	8
41 - The Burning of Christian	Disturbing, Tense, Surreal, Dark, Mysterious	9	9	8	9	7	8	8	7	9	8	10	8	8	9	6	9	8	8	8
42 - Ascension Through Fire	Horror, Drama, Suspense, Tragic, Emotional	9	9	8	9	7	8	9	7.5	9	8	9	8	8	10	6	9	8	8	8

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.

Scene Strengths

Intense emotional impact
Compelling concept
High stakes
Effective portrayal of horror and tragedy
Engaging character development

Scene Weaknesses

Limited character development
Some dialogue may feel forced or expository
Disturbing and graphic content may be too intense for some viewers
Some elements may be too disturbing for sensitive viewers
Some confusion for non-Swedish speakers

Suggestions

Continue to focus on the emotional impact of the story and characters
Work towards developing character depth and avoiding forced or expository dialogue
Consider the potential impact of graphic content on the audience and weigh the cost/benefit of including it
Provide clarity for non-native speakers and aim for universal accessibility
Engage in ongoing education to continue developing craft and identifying patterns for growth

World Building

Physical environment: The screenplay presents a stark contrast between the serene natural beauty of the Swedish landscape, particularly Hälsingland, and the familiar, suburban settings of Minnesota and Brooklyn. The Swedish environment is characterized by lush meadows, dense forests, a triangular temple, a giant yellow house, runic symbols, and a farmstead with a central house that has a hole in the floor. The Minnesota and Brooklyn environments are modern and familiar, featuring houses, apartments, pizza parlors, and Lyft rides.
Culture: The Hårgan community is the central element of the screenplay's cultural world, and it is depicted as a cult-like group with unique rituals and beliefs deeply rooted in pagan traditions. They practice animal sacrifice, have a hierarchical society with specific age-based roles and a distinct form of paganism. They celebrate Saint John the Baptist, perform a ritual dance around the Maypole, and engage in various other rituals, including Ättestupan, a form of ceremonial suicide. The screenplay also explores the contrasts between Hårgan culture and American culture through the characters' experiences and interactions.
Society: The Hårgan community is depicted as a tightly knit and isolated society with a hierarchical structure. There are clear distinctions between roles and responsibilities based on age and gender. The community's decisions are made by the elders, who hold a great deal of authority. The community is also highly secretive, with members engaging in activities that are kept hidden from outsiders.
Technology: Technology plays a minimal role in the Hårgan community, reflecting their adherence to ancient traditions. The characters primarily use basic tools, and their lives are largely unaffected by modern technology. However, technology serves as a contrast to the Hårgan community's way of life, with the characters using phones, laptops, and modern transportation. These elements highlight the stark differences between modern society and the Hårgan community.
Characters influence: The unique world elements shape the characters' experiences and actions in several ways. Dani, the protagonist, is initially drawn to the Hårgan community's beauty and traditions, but she is also disturbed by their rituals and beliefs. She struggles to reconcile her own values with those of the Hårgan community, leading to a clash of cultures and a sense of unease. The characters are also influenced by the Hårgan community's rituals and practices, with some embracing them and others resisting them. The Hårgan community's rituals and beliefs affect the characters' perceptions of reality, leading to hallucinations, paranoia, and emotional breakdowns.
Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative of the screenplay by creating a sense of mystery, suspense, and intrigue. The Hårgan community's secretive nature and their unique rituals and beliefs create an atmosphere of unease and anticipation. The screenplay's narrative unfolds as the characters are drawn into the Hårgan community's world and face the consequences of their involvement. The juxtaposition of the modern world and the Hårgan community's ancient traditions creates a powerful contrast that drives the narrative.
Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes of culture clash, tradition, and the nature of reality. The Hårgan community's rituals and beliefs are presented as a stark contrast to the values of modern society. The screenplay raises questions about the nature of truth, identity, and the boundaries of human experience. The Hårgan community's rituals and practices also raise questions about the role of sacrifice, the nature of belonging, and the consequences of pushing the boundaries of human experience.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	The writer's voice is characterized by a potent blend of psychological realism and unsettling horror, creating a distinct atmosphere of dread and mystery. The dialogue is often intimate, revealing complex emotional dynamics and inner turmoil. The narrative is punctuated by vivid sensory details, immersing the audience in the surreal and haunting world of the Hårga community. The direction, although not explicitly detailed, suggests a heightened sense of visual storytelling, using impactful imagery to amplify the unsettling nature of the events.
Voice Contribution	The writer's voice contributes to the script by amplifying the emotional depth and psychological complexity of the characters, while simultaneously creating an atmosphere of unease and suspense. The intimate dialogue allows for a profound exploration of human relationships and internal conflict, while the vivid descriptions of the Hårga community and its rituals build a palpable sense of otherworldliness and impending danger. This unique blend of realism and horror elevates the themes of cultural clash, identity, and the dark side of human nature, leaving the audience on edge and grappling with the complexities of the narrative.
Best Representation Scene	9 - Eyes of the Beast
Best Scene Explanation	This scene is the best representation because it masterfully blends psychological horror with vivid imagery and unsettling descriptions. The scene showcases the writer's ability to create intense emotional moments, employing sensory details to amplify the protagonist's fear and disorientation. The use of the outhouse as a confined space, the flickering candlelight, and the grotesque visual transformation of Dani's reflection effectively evoke a sense of claustrophobia and unease. This scene encapsulates the unique voice of the screenplay, highlighting its ability to unsettle and provoke the audience with a blend of psychological realism and disturbing imagery.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
High Emotional Impact Scenes Indicate Strong Dialogue	Scenes with high 'Emotional Impact' scores (8 or above) tend to have very strong 'Dialogue' scores (8 or above), suggesting that impactful dialogue is driving the emotional resonance of these scenes. This is particularly noticeable in scenes 2, 4, 9, 18, 24, 34, 38, 39, and 40.
Character Changes Are Driven By Conflict and Emotional Intensity	Scenes with significant 'Character Changes' often feature high scores in 'Conflict' and 'Emotional Impact'. This suggests that the characters are experiencing significant emotional turmoil and are being pushed to adapt or change in response to the conflict. This trend is prominent in scenes 2, 4, 9, 18, 24, 34, 38, and 40.
Tense and Disturbing Tone Often Indicates Strong Emotional Impact	Scenes with a 'Tense' or 'Disturbing' tone tend to have high 'Emotional Impact' scores. This highlights a strong correlation between heightened tension and disturbing elements in evoking emotional responses from the audience. This pattern is prevalent in scenes 8, 9, 12, 17, 18, 21, 24, 29, 31, 33, 34, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, and 41.
Mysterious and Surreal Elements Enhance Character Development	Scenes with 'Mysterious' or 'Surreal' tones often have high 'Character Changes' scores. This suggests that these elements contribute to the characters' internal struggles, forcing them to confront their own fears, desires, or hidden truths. This is evident in scenes 11, 12, 13, 14, 16, 17, 21, 23, 26, 27, 28, 29, 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 41.
Intense Scenes Drive the Story Forward	Scenes with high 'Intense' scores frequently have high scores in 'Move Story Forward'. This reinforces the notion that intense moments, whether thrilling, disturbing, or emotional, are essential for propelling the narrative forward. This is evident in scenes 2, 9, 10, 15, 24, 25, 26, 27, 29, 33, 37, 38, 39, 40, and 41.
Strong Concept and Plot Drive High Overall Grades	Scenes with high 'Concept' and 'Plot' scores generally receive high 'Overall Grade' scores. This indicates a strong foundation in the screenplay's conceptual framework and plot structure, which contribute to the overall quality of the scenes. This is evident in scenes 1, 2, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 15, 19, 22, 24, 34, 37, 38, 39, 40, and 41.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

The screenplay exhibits strong potential, showcasing a talent for creating engaging scenes with rich character dynamics and atmospheric settings. The writer demonstrates an ability to explore complex themes, emotional depth, and unique cultural elements. However, there are areas for improvement in terms of dialogue, pacing, and scene structure.

Key Improvement Areas

Dialogue

Several scenes suggest that the writer can benefit from refining their dialogue skills to further enhance character voices, create more impactful interactions, and develop richer emotional conflicts. This includes improving the delivery of subtext and underlying emotions in dialogue, which will contribute to a more nuanced and impactful reading experience.

Pacing

While many scenes effectively build tension and suspense, there's room for improvement in terms of pacing, ensuring a consistent flow of events and a compelling rhythm for the audience. This can be achieved through studying effective scene structure and formatting techniques.

Scene Structure

The screenplay can benefit from a deeper understanding of scene structure, particularly in terms of ensuring a clear setup, conflict, and resolution for each scene. This will contribute to a more cohesive and engaging narrative flow, as well as help the writer focus on delivering impactful moments within each scene.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Book	Read 'Save the Cat' by Blake Snyder	This book will provide invaluable insights into crafting compelling characters, structuring engaging plots, and understanding the classic beats of a screenplay, which can enhance the writer's overall storytelling skills.
Screenplay	Read 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind' screenplay by Charlie Kaufman	This screenplay is a masterclass in blending humor and emotion, exploring complex characters and themes with an insightful and unique approach. It will provide valuable lessons in crafting nuanced dialogue, exploring character depth, and creating a compelling narrative.
Book	Read 'The Screenwriter's Bible' by David Trottier	This book offers comprehensive guidance on screenwriting structure, formatting, and storytelling techniques, providing practical tips and guidelines for enhancing the writer's craft in terms of scene structure and pacing, as well as improving dialogue and character development.

Additional Notes: The writer demonstrates a strong foundation in crafting compelling narratives with rich settings, complex characters, and compelling themes. By focusing on further developing their dialogue skills, mastering scene structure and pacing, and analyzing the work of master screenwriters, the writer can refine their craft and produce even more engaging and impactful screenplays.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
The Dark Secret	Dani receives disturbing emails from her sister, hinting at a dark family history and personal struggles.	This trope involves characters harboring secrets that can lead to dramatic revelations. An example is in 'The Sixth Sense,' where the protagonist has a hidden truth that impacts the story's climax.
The Broken Relationship	Dani and Christian's relationship is strained, with Dani feeling unsupported and Christian being tempted by others.	This trope explores the complexities of romantic relationships, often leading to conflict. A notable example is in 'Marriage Story,' where a couple navigates their emotional struggles.
The Call to Adventure	Dani is invited to Sweden for a midsummer festival, which serves as the catalyst for the story.	This trope involves a character being drawn into a new world or adventure, often leading to personal growth. An example is in 'The Hobbit,' where Bilbo is invited to join an adventure.
The Grieving Protagonist	Dani is deeply affected by the loss of her sister and parents, influencing her emotional state throughout the story.	This trope focuses on a character dealing with loss, often leading to character development. An example is in 'A Ghost Story,' where the protagonist grapples with grief and its implications.
The Cult	The Hårga community practices pagan rituals that become increasingly disturbing as the story progresses.	This trope involves a group with extreme beliefs that often leads to conflict with outsiders. An example is in 'The Wicker Man,' where a police officer investigates a mysterious island cult.
The Hallucinogenic Experience	Dani and others consume magic mushrooms, leading to surreal and disturbing visions.	This trope explores altered states of consciousness, often revealing deeper truths about characters. An example is in 'Enter the Void,' where the protagonist experiences life and death through hallucinogenic experiences.
The Final Sacrifice	Dani ultimately chooses Christian as a sacrifice in a ritual, highlighting her transformation.	This trope involves a character making a significant sacrifice, often for the greater good or personal growth. An example is in 'The Hunger Games,' where Katniss volunteers to take her sister's place.
The Unreliable Narrator	Dani's perception of reality becomes distorted due to her grief and the influence of hallucinogens.	This trope involves a narrator whose credibility is compromised, leading to ambiguity in the story. An example is in 'Fight Club,' where the protagonist's perspective is skewed.
The Journey to Self-Discovery	Dani's experiences in Sweden lead her to confront her grief and ultimately embrace her identity.	This trope focuses on a character's journey toward understanding themselves better. An example is in 'Eat Pray Love,' where the protagonist travels to find herself.

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
19	Josh: You think I don’t know what you’re doing? It’s actually kind of outrageously unsubtle. The fact that you’re being this bald about it. I’m honestly impressed.
10	Dani: Nothing means anything! We’re just alone.
1	Dani: I love you.
21	Dani: NO!!!
42	Dani: She has surrendered to a joy known only by the insane. She has lost herself completely, and she is finally free. It is horrible and it is beautiful.

Some Loglines to consider:

A young woman's grief spirals out of control when she travels to Sweden with her boyfriend, only to find herself at the mercy of a terrifying and ancient cult.
A group of friends on a summer trip to Sweden stumble upon a secluded community with dark secrets and unsettling rituals that threaten to shatter their reality.
Trapped in a sun-drenched nightmare, a young woman grapples with her sanity as she confronts the sinister heart of a pagan cult with horrifying traditions.
A disturbing and visually striking exploration of the dark underbelly of a seemingly idyllic cult, where traditions and modern anxieties clash in a terrifying collision.
When a young woman's grief leads her to a remote Swedish cult, she must confront the terrifying consequences of her choices as the line between reality and hallucination blurs.
A grieving woman joins her boyfriend on a trip to a remote Swedish village, only to find herself entangled in a series of bizarre and horrifying rituals.
As a young woman grapples with the loss of her family, she discovers a strange community that offers her a new sense of belonging, but at a terrifying cost.
In the midst of a midsummer festival, a woman confronts her deepest fears and desires as she becomes embroiled in a cult's dark traditions.
A couple's relationship is tested when they travel to Sweden for a festival, leading to a nightmarish journey of self-discovery and sacrifice.
Amidst the beauty of a Swedish summer, a woman's emotional turmoil leads her to a shocking revelation about love, loss, and the price of acceptance.

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OverallRating: 8.3
Overview: This screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation for a compelling horror film. It effectively utilizes tension, mystery, and disturbing visuals to create a chilling atmosphere. The characters are well-developed and their emotional journeys are engaging and impactful. The story's unique cultural and supernatural elements add depth and intrigue. While the screenplay shows considerable promise, the missing scene 3 needs to be addressed to ensure a cohesive narrative. Addressing this issue would further elevate the screenplay's overall quality and ensure a more satisfying viewing experience for the audience.
Strengths:

Strong emotional impact and character development
Effective use of tension and mystery to create suspense
Intriguing and unique cultural and supernatural elements
Compelling dialogue and character interactions
Disturbing and memorable moments that contribute to the overall horror atmosphere
Effective pacing and structure that keeps the audience engaged
Strong visual imagery and descriptions that enhance the storytelling

Areas of Improvement:

Scene 3 is missing, which could indicate a plot hole or missing information.

Notable Examples

Scene 2 - explanation: This scene is highly engaging and emotionally impactful, drawing the audience into the characters' intense emotional states and conflicts, setting the stage for the film's emotional core.
Scene 9 - explanation: This scene is highly impactful, with a strong emotional and psychological depth that keeps the audience engaged. The tension and intensity are palpable, making it a standout moment in the screenplay.
Scene 18 - explanation: This scene is highly impactful, combining elements of horror, mystery, and drama to create a tense and unsettling atmosphere. The shocking ritual of Ättestupan and the characters' reactions evoke strong emotions in the audience.
Scene 24 - explanation: This scene is highly impactful, combining tension, emotion, and mystery to create a compelling and memorable moment in the story.
Scene 29 - explanation: This scene is highly impactful, effectively building tension and delivering a shocking moment that leaves a lasting impression on the audience.
Scene 42 - explanation: This scene is intense, emotionally charged, and impactful, with a mix of horror, tragedy, and liberation that keeps the audience engaged and disturbed. The execution of the sacrificial ritual and the protagonist's emotional journey are compelling and well-crafted.

Improvement Examples

Scene 3 - explanation: This scene is missing, which is a significant issue. It could indicate a plot hole or missing information that needs to be addressed to ensure the screenplay's narrative integrity.

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