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# PG SLUGLINE
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION - NIGHT VINCENT, a young late 20s black man, is standing in front of a mirror with an undone red bow tie hanging around his neck. His hairline is cut razor sharp and braids neatly cornrowed to the back.
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION - NIGHT (CONTINUOUS) Vincent rushes through the lush mansion to meet his beautiful girlfriend STACY, dressed in a gorgeous green evening gown. Vincent hugs her from behind and the two share a quick kiss. They walk out to the car as letters follow behind.
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INT. INDUSTRIAL ART GALLERY - BAR - NIGHT Monte, Lauren, and Tom are standing at the open bar. Monte notices his watch. 9. MONTE
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EXT. VINCENT'S MANSION - MOMENTS LATER The police car pull up to Vincent's house. The front door is wide open and the alarm is still going off in the distance. Sarah and Officer Davis hop out of the car and make there way
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION - BACK ENTRANCE Officer Smith creeps through the dark house from the backyard alert. Her gun is drawn and she grips it tightly, walking through the grassy garden.
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INT. NEWSROOM - NIGHT A black woman news anchor hits a stack of papers on the wooden desk at a news studio. Intercuts of the funeral scene as the anchor does her reading.
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION - TWILIGHT Smokey. Messy. Jazz Music The house is scattered with magazines, newspaper clippings, and unfinished oil paintings as the music echos through the dark, depressing halls of Vincent's mansion.
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INT. DARLA’S CAR - DAY Darla is now in her car as she talks to Vincent. INTERCUT BETWEEN VINCENT AND DARLA DARLA Vincent, we need to talk.
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INT. VINCENT'S ART STUDIO - NIGHT Smokey Room. Painters Pondering MONTAGE Music swells as a shirtless Vincent sits in the center of the frame with blank, white canvases all around him.
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION (KITCHEN) - NIGHT Vincent sits’ at a table on a Zoom call with his Grief Therapist. THERAPISTS It’s not uncommon to feel the way
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION (KITCHEN)- NIGHT Stacy is sitting on the kitchen counter as Vincent just sits across from her, not really making eye contact. She leans in. 27.
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INT. PENTHOUSE LOFT - NIGHT Red Neon Lights, Smoky High rise Penthouse, Playboy Carti Style Music, Deep Bass. Stacy walks Vincent into the Loft Party holding his hand. People are dancing, snorting coke, and making out in the
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INT. APARTMENT ROOFTOP - NIGHT Roof. City Skyline. Cityscape sounds. The two are all alone on the quieter side of the terrace where they are both drinking, far away from the rest of the party.
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INT. APARTMENT BUILDING (STAIRWELL) - NIGHT Vincent rushes down the stairwell. He pauses when he comes upon two girls. He makes eye contact and quickly diverts his gaze as he smiles sheepishly and passes them.
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION - BATHROOM - NIGHT He washes his hands and face in the white sink. Blood rinses down the drain. He looks at the mirror at his own reflections and starts to laugh as he wipes his face off.
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INT. DARLA'S APARTMENT - DAY Darla is sitting at her desk. She's looking at her computer seeing news coverage on "Artists Mike Borelli Missing" in the headline on the screen. The woman on the screen is Sargent Vanessa, speaking at a
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INT. DARLA’S ART GALLERY - NIGHT It’s the evening now and Darla is still in the gallery. Her last employee leaves her behind and she goes to lock the door behind her. The gallery is finally clear.
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INT. VINCENT'S ART GALLERY - NIGHT We cut to severed heads, fingers, bodies, and drain bodies in plastic bags. The sound of Vincent texting back Darla clicks as we see the bodies and blood spread out all around the room.
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INT. INTERROGATION ROOM - DAY Vanessa sits across from Tom and Officer Miller at a steel metal table. Vanessa is shuffling through a folder of peoples files. VANESSA
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EXT. MIKE'S APARTMENT - DAY Mike's apartment is very posh and minimalist looking. It's white walls and white marble floor give it a Miami Condo Vibe even in the middle of Atlanta. The TV is still on and clothes still scattered from the last
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INT. INTERROGATION ROOM - DAY ALEX, mid 20s white woman, IG Influencer/ Model type blonde, sits on one side of the interrogation room with her attorney. Vanessa, Tom, and FRANKLIN, White Male mid 40s and the local City Attorney, sits in the interrogation room watching the
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INT. DARLA'S OFFICE - NIGHT Here it is! The first painting with blood. Vincent stands behind her was she inspects the piece. She doesn't know weather to be surprised or laugh or shrivel in fear.
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EXT. DARLA'S OFFICE (PARKING LOT) - NIGHT Vincent fast walks out to his car. He opens the door and sits in the driver seat. 60. He rest his head of the steering wheel as flashback of a few
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INT. TOM AND LAUREN (BATHROOM)- NIGHT Vincent rushes into the bathroom door, shutting it behind him. He splashes water on his face and tries to calm himself down. His heart beat is loud and breath short. He rests his head on the door of the bathroom, letting out a
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INT. TOM'S OFFICE - NIGHT Late Night Office Cubicles, Isolated Lighting, A Sickly Green Tom is looking on his desktop computer as he runs a manual ID Search. The light from the terminal illuminates his face. Tom is focused while he is typing.
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INT. ART GALLERY - NIGHT Dark night, Glowing Computer Screen, Still Raining Darla is sitting on her desk smoking a cigarette looking at a laptop as she bites her nails and listens to the acquittal story on the news.
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INT. DARLA'S ART GALLERY - NIGHT Darla walks back into the Gallery. Her tall heels click across the floor as she looks at her newest pieces. They are hanging along the dimly lit white wall under a track light as we are close on her face with an empty yet
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION (OFFICE)- NIGHT A reporter MASON "Hipster bro Type" (Early 30s/ white / slightly overweight) is sitting across from Vincent at a office table. MASON
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INT. VINCENT'S ART STUDIO - NIGHT Vincent walks into the studio with a sinister smile on this face and as the reporter walks ahead of him. The reporter is looking at all of the different pieces on the wall that Vincent has finished, but not sold.
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INT. VINCENT'S HOUSE (BATHROOM) - NIGHT Vincent walks into the bathroom and looks at himself in the mirror and starts to laugh a psychotic laugh. He tries to wipe the joy from his face. He reaches down under the cabinet and takes out a cleaver, covered in blood.
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION - NIGHT (COUNT.) We cut out to other places around Vincent's mansion. Art work, pictures of Vincent's family, and Monte cut between each swing. The home has gotten darker, grittier, and more emotional.
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION - NIGHT Dark. Focused Painter. Brown Protective paper covers the floor. Quick cut of the finished paintings distributed all around the room.
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INT. SARAH'S HOUSE (BEDROOM) - NIGHT Sarah sits on the couch of her dingy open apartment as the Late Night show plays over the TV sitting on a few moving boxes. She is biting her finger nails and pacing around, waiting to
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INT. SARAH'S HOUSE - NIGHT (COUNT.) Sarah walks downstairs to see her husband standing in the kitchen waiting for her at the table and drinking a cup of tea. 100.
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EXT. SUBURBAN STREET - NIGHT Vincent sits in his car outside of Sarah's house with blacked out headlights, with a dark hoodie and mask. He watches as her husband takes out the garbage, completely unaware that anyone is watching.
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EXT./INT. SARAH'S HOUSE - NIGHT Hazy Yard. Wides Sarah's let's out a blood curdling scream, but we are outside of Sarah's house and we don't see the horrors that are taking place inside.
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EXT. SARAH'S HOME - NIGHT Suddenly, a fleet of BLACK SUVs speed down the road towards the onto the scene. They all hop out of Black Sprinter vans looking official and organized.
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INT. VINCENT'S ART STUDIO - NIGHT Raining, The Thunderstorm is Raging Outside of the House, and Music Blast in the room Smile Sarah - Halls and Oates. Sarah wakes up to dark room surrounded by one ambient light. Lightning strikes from outside of the window
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INT. VINCENT'S MANSION (BATHROOM) - NIGHT SCENE #1 Vincent is cutting off his hair and looking the mirror. He has completely lost it and with a straight face, he cuts away. All of it falls off.
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INT. POLICE STATION, PRESS PODIUM - NIGHT SCENE #2 : INTERCUT BACK VANESSA We want to re-enforce our commitment to equity, family,
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INT. DARLA'S ART GALLERY - NIGHT The gallery is full of people once again. We are following behind an older man and older woman at the door as they walk onto the gallery floor. A waiter stops to take their name.
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EXT. VINCENT'S MANSION - DAY It’s sometime in the future. Birds are chirping, The Sound of Lawn Mower Going on in the Distance. 125. There is a huge FOR SALE SIGN in the front yard and a couple

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Haunted by his brother's murder and disillusioned by the art world, a talented Black artist channels his rage into a series of gruesome paintings, blurring the lines between artistic expression and violent revenge.

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**Unique Selling Proposition:** Immerse yourself in a captivating and thought-provoking cinematic journey with "Vincent," a powerful feature that captivates with its raw intensity, complex characters, and exploration of poignant themes. Delve into the world of Vincent, a tormented artist grappling with the depths of despair and madness, as he navigates a web of art, grief, revenge, and societal issues. This deeply emotional narrative explores the darkest recesses of the human psyche, exposing the complexities of mental health, societal pressures, and the transformative power of trauma. Featuring an eclectic cast of unforgettable characters, "Vincent" unravels a compelling mystery that intertwines with the protagonist's struggle for self-discovery. Through gripping dialogue and evocative imagery, the script delves into the motivations, desires, and fears of each individual, crafting a tapestry of intricate relationships and moral dilemmas. Experience the unique storytelling techniques that propel the narrative forward, from the use of introspective flashbacks to the juxtaposition of violence and art. "Vincent" is a cinematic masterpiece that lingers long after the credits roll, inviting audiences to reflect on the profound questions it raises.

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Drama 45% Thriller 30% Horror 25% Crime 25%

Setting: Contemporary, Vincent's mansion, art gallery, police station, Darla's art gallery, Sarah's house

Themes: Trauma and Loss, Power and Control, Social Commentary, Art and the Creative Process, Redemption and Forgiveness, Violence and its Consequences, Race and Identity, Love and Loss, Hope and Despair

Conflict & Stakes: The primary conflicts revolve around Vincent's internal struggle with guilt and violence, Sarah's persecution and the investigation of her husband's crime, and the challenges faced by the detectives in solving the murder cases.

Mood: Dark, suspenseful, and emotionally intense

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  • Unique Hook: Exploration of the dark side of art and the human psyche through a series of interconnected characters and events.
  • Innovative Ideas: The integration of art, crime, and psychological drama creates a unique and compelling narrative.
  • Major Twists: Unexpected plot developments and character revelations keep the audience engaged and guessing.
  • Distinctive Settings: The contrast between the opulent art world and the gritty reality of crime scenes adds depth and visual interest.
  • Genre Blends: Combining elements of psychological thriller, crime drama, and character study offers a fresh and multifaceted viewing experience.

Comparable Scripts: A History of Violence, The Guest, Prisoners, The Girl on the Train, Gone Girl, The Silence of the Lambs, Se7en, Zodiac, The Killing, True Detective

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