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INT. 747 - PASSENGERS - SAME 2 The usual moment just after landing when you let out that sigh of relief that you've made it in one piece. ON JOHN MCCLANE 3 mid-thirties, good-looking, athletic and tired from his trip.
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6 INT. NICE HOUSE IN SANTA MONICA 6 where a four-year-old girl, LUCY MCCLANE, answers the phone with a sense of importance. LUCY Hello, this is Lucy McClane.
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10 INT. LOS ANGELES POLICE STATION - NIGHT 10 A miniature Christmas tree with blinking lights sits on a desk of SERGEANT AL POWELL, thirties, a man who's had enough experience to know how bad it can be out there. He speaks in low tones to the telephone.
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17 EXT. NAKATOMI - NIGHT 17 A UPS truck turns off Olympic into the underground parking garage of Nakatomi. 18 INT. PARKING GARAGE 18 It goes down the ramp and passes William's black limo. William
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24 INT. BUILDING LOBBY - SAME 24 The Guard at the front desk notices the UPS truck on his monitor. The Guard continues to watch the UPS truck and only half notices as a BMW pulls up in front of the building and two extremely well-dressed, BUSINESSMEN (late twenties)
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37 INT. ELLIS' BATHROOM - 32ND FLOOR - SAME 37 McClane, barefoot, his pant legs rolled up above his ankles. He finishes dialing and waits for the party to answer. /Jl//lfl"\ 38 INT. BUILDING BASEMENT - PHONE ROOM 38 A large sign says: PACIFIC BELL EMPLOYEES ONLY. Inside
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56 INT. STAIRWELL - 38TH FLOOR - SAME 56 McClane pauses outside the stairwell door to the 38th floor, he presses the handle and cracks the door open TO REVEAL a computer floor. The-computer machinery drones on under the lights behind plate glass windows. McClane quietly closes
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71 INT. SUPPLY CLOSET 71 In the darkness of the closet we MAKE OUT McClane, pressed against the wall. He listens to the footsteps moving away and lets out a breath. MCCLANE
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86 INT. 34TH FLOOR ELEVATOR CAR - NIGHT 86 Tony's body sits slumped in a secretary's chair — a note attached to his chest. McClane sits on the floor in front of him hurriedly lacing up the dead terrorist's boots on his own ; feet. He ties the last lace and tries to take a couple of
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103 INT. DISPATCHER OFFICE - SAME 103 Both Supervisor and Dispatcher reach for their headsets in pain from the INTENSE SOUND and: 104 INT. KCBS (THORNBURG'S OFFICE) - SAME 104 Thornburg immediately hangs up on his girlfriend and yells over
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129 INT. AIR CONDITIONING DUCT - ON MCCLANE - SAME 129 He lies exhausted and motionless in the narrow crawl space. He awkwardly fishes out the lighter from his shirt pocket and ^rx flicks it on. 130 HIS P.O.V. 130
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142 INT. KCBS - CONTROL BOOTH - NIGHT 142 Dick Thornburg and his news editor, SAM, in the control booth where we're in the countdown to the 11 o'clock news. THORNBURG What do you mean you can't cut
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143 EXT. CENTURY CITY - AVENUE OF THE STARS - NIGHT 143 The street is empty, quiet. A lone police black-and-white pulls out of the shadows of a side street and begins a slow cruise toward the Nakatomi building. A98
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163 INT. LOBBY - SAME 163 Powell comes back to Heinz — moving steadily toward the table and the pool of blood. He pauses next to the table, his shoe just touching the blood, but he doesn't see it. HEINZ
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166 INT. 40TH FLOOR - BOARD ROOM 166 McClane looks down at Powell and grins. MCCLANE Welcome to the party, boys. We've been missing you.
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177 EXT. POLICE OPERATIONS - WILSHIRE - SAME 177 An unmarked police car pulls up across the street from Nakatomi building and a MAN in a sportcoat climbs out. Stocky, his hair a little too perfect, the very fact that he is the i Deputy Chief of Police Operations on a Christmas Eve gives some
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(** 188 INT. 39TH FLOOR - OFFICE 188 Dark. A light comes on and McClane quickly moves to the desk. He takes out a handful of detonators and puts them in his other kit bag, then puts the main bag of detonators in the trash can under the desk covering it with the trash, and
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195 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 195 Hans talking on CB to McClane. Karl stands to the side. MCLANE/RADIO (o.s.) Yeah, I hear you. t
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201 INT. HOSTAGE FLOOR - NIGHT 201 Hans and Karl. Karl preps his weapon with a hunter's obsession for detail. HANS Find him and the detonators....
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208 INT. 37TH FLOOR 208 A stairwell door opens and McClane carefully moves out onto the 37th floor. Seeing that it is deserted he begins overturning desks, making a small fortress. A98
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216 EXT. POLICE TRAILER - SIDEWALK - ON POWELL - SAME 216 He stands on the street behind some cars with his CB. An officer comes by with a fresh cup of coffee for him. POWELL
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219 EXT. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 219 I / Powell is talking with McClane on the CB. POWELL You seem to know a lot about
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234 EXT. NAKATOMI - HUGE SPOTLIGHT - SAME 234 A huge spotlight is brought into position a half-block away from the building. We NOTICE several more — their generators rumbling. Suddenly their beams are turned on, increased in intensity and pointed to the building. The reflection off
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241 EXT. ADJACENT BUILDING - ROOF - SAME 241 Another PAIR of SWAT OFFICERS move to a point on the roof of another building and peer over the edge at the brilliantly lit Nakatomi building. THE SPOTTER stares through an infrared scope at the Nakatomi roof while the other officer, THE SNIPER
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256 EXT. POLICE BARRICADES - ON ROBINSON AND MITCHELL 256 They look on in horror as the armored car sits helplessly on fire. On the police radio channel we HEAR the screams of men inside. AS8 (CONTINUED)
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271 INT. 38TH FLOOR - MCCLANE - SAME 271 He sits up and lifts the CB. MCCLANE Hey, AI, you guys okay out there? INTERCUT:
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273 INT. LIMO - WILLIAM - SAME 273 William nods in agreement. WILLIAM Tell 'em, John! Tell 'em! 274 INT. 38TH FLOOR - ON MCCLANE 274
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284 INT. 32ND (HOSTAGE) FLOOR - ON ELLIS AND HANS - SAME 284 Ellis is being pampered by Fritz and Franco in Hans' office. He has a cigarette, and a terrorist brings him a Diet Coke. Hans hands the radio to Ellis. Karl watches quietly. J HANS
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289 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 289 Ellis looks at Hans and shrugs, "Well, I tried..." Hans nods understandingly. He takes the CB, presses the TALK button, and in one frighteningly smooth motion brings the Walther up to Ellis' forehead and pulls the trigger. ON SOUND OF THE GUNSHO
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295 INT. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 295 Robinson hears the static over his radio and throws down the headset. He stomps past P o w e l l . POWELL (flatly)
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303 EXT. POLICE TRAILER 303 Robinson exits the police trailer to tell Powell, then stops on the bottom step. Powell is less than twenty feet away. For a moment Robinson stands there, then he shakes out a cigarette and walks in the other direction.
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315 EXT. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 315 Robinson comes up to Powell. ROBINSON Alert McClane. They're after him. Suddenly both' men look up as bits of glass sparkle and fall to
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344 EXT. NAKATOMI ROOF - ON MCCLANE - PRE-DAWN 344 He goes through Franco's kit bag and removes his Beretta and finds something else — another candy bar. MCCLANE Hot damn, Mars bars.
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353 INT. LIMO 353 William is running through the channels. Suddenly he stops and picks up his CB. f* 354 EXT. NAKATOMI ROOF 354 McClane stares out toward the horizon. In the darkness the
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386 INT. HELICOPTER - SAME 386 Inside the helicopter there is a split-second to realize the inevitable, but not enough time to react as the second missile is launched. 387 THE ROOFTOP 387
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400 EXT. NAKATOMI 400 William's battered limo is surrounded by SWAT officers. He ( is helped out of the car holding his hands up. (CONTINUED) A98
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408 INT. STAIRWELL 408 Uli comes down the stairs. Suddenly he hears something and presses his ear to the stairwell door. 409 EXT. POLICE TRAILER - DAWN 409 Al Powell leaves the operations trailer and moves down the
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428 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 428 Hans stares at the children on the TV then looks across the room at the family photo on the credenza. 429 EXT. HOLLY'S HOUSE - ON THORNBURG - MORNING 429 He now is squatting down with his microphone to interview the
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436 INT. 39TH FLOOR - SAME 436 The doors to the service elevator open and Karl takes the detonators and goes to the safe. 437 INT. 32ND FLOOR - SAME 437 McClane moves around the side of the floor. He reaches the
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458 INT. ELEVATOR TOWER - ROOF - ON HEINZ - SAME 458 I He preps a Stinger missile and looks through the crack in the roof door. 459 HIS P.O.V. 459
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473 EXT. POLICE TRAILER - ON POWELL - SAME 473 He stands looking worriedly up at the building, when suddenly his CB comes to life. A98 (CONTINUED) 121
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479 EXT. NAKATOMI (FRONT STEPS) - SAME 479 As the press panics trying to escape, Karl locks eyes with McClane and levels his gun. McClane throws Holly to the ground and grabs the dumbstruck Robinson's sidearm. But he doesn't get off a shot — a lone gunshot stops Karl —

Die Hard

A New York cop visiting his estranged wife in Los Angeles must single-handedly fight off a group of terrorists who have seized her office building on Christmas Eve.

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**Unique Selling Proposition:** This action-packed thriller delivers a heart-racing hostage crisis narrative with a unique blend of humor, suspense, and character-driven dynamics. Featuring a witty protagonist, a charismatic antagonist, and a gripping cat-and-mouse game within the claustrophobic confines of a skyscraper, this screenplay offers a refreshing take on the genre. Innovative storytelling techniques, including tense confrontations, strategic planning, and daring escapes, will keep audiences on the edge of their seats. The script's authenticity, originality, and distinctive voice create a compelling and unforgettable cinematic experience.

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Story Facts

Genres: Action, Thriller, Drama, Crime, Comedy

Setting: Christmas Eve, Nakatomi Plaza building in Los Angeles

Themes: Violence and Action, Terrorism and Hostage Situations, Christmas, Family

Conflict & Stakes: McClane's battle against the terrorists to save the hostages and his wife, as well as his personal struggle to clear his name from a murder charge.

Mood: Tense, suspenseful, and thrilling, with moments of humor and camaraderie.

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  • Unique Hook: Die Hard's premise of a lone warrior fighting against a group of terrorists in an enclosed space was a refreshing concept for an action movie.
  • Plot Twist: The true identity of Karl, the terrorist who impersonates McClane, creates a shocking reveal during the film's climax.
  • Iconic Character: John McClane is a beloved and iconic action hero who embodies the everyman with his relatable personality and unwavering determination.
  • Action Sequences: Die Hard features many thrilling and well- choreographed action sequences, including the famous elevator shootout and the showdown on the roof.

Comparable Scripts: The Raid: Redemption, Die Hard 2, Under Siege, Extraction, The Equalizer

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