Legally Blonde
Executive Summary
Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend
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USP: Discover a fresh and witty take on the romantic comedy genre with "Legally Blonde," a script that showcases the journey of Elle Woods, a sorority queen who transforms into a successful and empowered lawyer. This story offers a unique blend of humor, heartbreak, and determination, challenging societal norms and exploring themes of love, self-worth, and personal growth. With its authentic characters, sharp dialogue, and unexpected twists, "Legally Blonde" delivers a delightful and engaging narrative that will leave audiences cheering for Elle's success. This script stands out with its distinct voice, combining satire and wit to create a captivating and unforgettable experience.
Overview
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Romance, Legal Drama
Setting: Present day, Harvard Law School and surrounding areas in Boston, MA
Overview: The screenplay presents a fresh and original concept with a unique blend of legal drama, fashion, and humor. It effectively conveys emotions, character growth, and engaging dialogue. While there are opportunities to deepen secondary character development and enhance emotional transitions, the overall quality is strong and engaging.
Themes: Personal Growth, Love and Relationships, Female Empowerment
Conflict and Stakes: Elle's struggle to prove herself in a male-dominated field and win back her ex-boyfriend, Warner, while also dealing with her own insecurities and the expectations of those around her.
Overall Mood: Uplifting and empowering, with moments of humor and drama.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Joyful and lighthearted, with a sense of excitement and anticipation.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: A romantic comedy set in the world of law school, featuring a strong female lead who challenges stereotypes and expectations.
- Plot Twist : Elle's decision to attend law school to win back her ex-boyfriend, only to discover her own potential and passion for the law.
- Distinctive Setting : The world of Harvard Law School, which provides a unique backdrop for a romantic comedy.
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Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$30-40 million
Target Audience Demographics: Women aged 18-35, fans of romantic comedies and legal dramas.
Marketability: The film has a strong lead character, a unique premise, and a proven track record with the original Legally Blonde, making it appealing to a wide audience.
The film explores themes of female empowerment and self-discovery, which could attract a diverse audience, but the genre-blend of romantic comedy and legal drama may limit its appeal to some.
The film features a strong female lead, a unique premise, and a proven track record with the original Legally Blonde, making it appealing to a wide audience.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, due to its potential to attract a wide audience and generate positive word-of-mouth.
Scene Level Percentiles
Emotions Elicited Percentiles
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Screenplay Analysis
- The screenplay excels in plot (94.74th percentile) and character development (93.42nd percentile), suggesting a strong narrative and well-developed characters.
- It also scores highly in originality (97th percentile), indicating a unique and fresh take on the story.
- The screenplay is engaging (88th percentile), maintaining the reader's interest throughout.
- The conflict level is relatively low (37.28th percentile), suggesting an opportunity to enhance the stakes and tension in the story.
- The external goal score is also low (18th percentile), which may indicate underdeveloped external goals or motivations for the characters.
- Formatting could be improved (2nd percentile), suggesting a need for better adherence to standard screenplay format.
The writer's style appears to be balanced, with strong character development and plot, but could benefit from more focus on conflict and external goals.
Balancing Elements- The writer could work on balancing the conflict and tension in the story to match the strong character development and plot.
- Developing clearer and more compelling external goals for the characters could enhance the overall story.
The writer appears to be integrated, with a balance of conceptual and intuitive elements in the screenplay.
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay has a strong foundation in plot and character development, with room for improvement in conflict, external goals, and formatting. With focused refinement, it has the potential to be a compelling and unique story.
How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library
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Scene Overall | 8.9 | 98 | Good Will Hunting: 8.8 | Silence of the lambs: 8.9 |
Scene Plot | 8.7 | 98 | Die Hard: 8.6 | Terminator 2: 8.7 |
Scene Characters | 8.8 | 93 | American Fiction: 8.7 | Deadpool: 8.8 |
Script Emotional Impact | 8.30 | 87 | Promising young woman: 8.20 | fight Club: 8.30 |
Scene Dialogue | 8.3 | 86 | Ex-Machina: 8.2 | Casablanca: 8.3 |
Scene Character Changes | 7.5 | 78 | American Fiction: 7.4 | fight Club: 7.5 |
Scene Story Forward | 8.5 | 77 | Deadpool & wolverine : 8.4 | Casablanca: 8.5 |
Script Conflict | 8.00 | 76 | The shining: 7.90 | the black list (TV): 8.00 |
Script Structure | 8.10 | 71 | Jojo rabbit: 8.00 | Titanic: 8.10 |
Script Characters | 8.20 | 70 | 12 years a slave: 8.10 | groundhog day: 8.20 |
Scene Originality | 8.83 | 69 | The Umbrella Academy: 8.82 | Shaun of the Dead: 8.83 |
Scene Pacing | 8.36 | 67 | Deadpool & wolverine : 8.35 | Mo: 8.36 |
Overall Script | 8.25 | 66 | The Hudsucker Proxy: 8.20 | Black mirror 304: 8.25 |
Script Premise | 8.40 | 66 | Argo: 8.30 | face/off: 8.40 |
Scene Engagement | 8.98 | 61 | Parasite: 8.97 | Mr. Smith goes to Washington: 8.98 |
Scene Conflict Level | 7.4 | 42 | Promising young woman: 7.3 | Vice: 7.4 |
Scene Emotional Impact | 7.7 | 40 | Jack Reacher: 7.6 | severance (TV): 7.7 |
Scene High Stakes | 7.0 | 36 | Promising young woman: 6.9 | Bonnie and Clyde: 7.0 |
Script Originality | 7.80 | 32 | Sing Sing: 7.70 | face/off: 7.80 |
Scene Concept | 8.0 | 30 | Poor Things: 7.9 | a few good men: 8.0 |
Scene Formatting | 8.07 | 29 | Witness: 8.06 | Breaking bad: 8.07 |
Scene Internal Goal | 8.00 | 20 | KILLING ZOE: 7.98 | fight Club: 8.00 |
Scene Unpredictability | 7.12 | 16 | The King's speech: 7.11 | Baby Driver: 7.12 |
Script Visual Impact | 7.10 | 13 | Triangle of sadness: 7.00 | Labyrinth : 7.10 |
Script Structure | 8.02 | 13 | Poor Things: 8.00 | fight Club: 8.02 |
Scene External Goal | 6.98 | 8 | Solaris: 6.96 | Arsenic and old lace : 6.98 |
Script Theme | 7.50 | 6 | Triangle of sadness: 7.40 | Easy A: 7.50 |
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is witty, satirical, and uses humor to address serious themes. The dialogue is sharp and the scenes transition smoothly between comedic and dramatic moments.
Best representation: Scene 17 - Elle's Costume and Warner's Doubts. This scene is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively blends humor, drama, and social commentary in a compelling and engaging way.
Memorable Lines:
- Elle: Exercise gives you endorphins, endorphins make you happy — happy people don't kill their husbands! (Scene 25)
- Sapphire: What, like it's that hard? (Scene 10)
- ELLE: You're an attractive man, but you need to take better care of yourself. (Scene 31)
- Elle: Forget it. I've already spent too many hours crying over you. (Scene 32)
- Professor Stromwell: The law leaves much room for interpretation — but very little for self-doubt. (Scene 12)
Writing Style:
The writing style across the screenplay is characterized by sharp dialogue, witty humor, and a strong focus on character-driven narratives. There is a blend of both comedy and drama, often used to explore complex themes and relationships.
Style Similarities:
- Aaron Sorkin
- Nora Ephron
- Tina Fey
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
The reasons might be more valuable than the rating.
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Legally Blonde' is a well-written and engaging piece with a strong central character, compelling narrative, and effective use of humor. While there are a few areas where improvements could be made, such as providing more depth to certain character motivations and smoothing out transitions between scenes, the screenplay overall delivers on its promise of a fun, heartwarming, and empowering story. Elle Woods' journey of self-discovery and growth is expertly crafted, and the screenplay provides ample opportunities for memorable and impactful scenes that showcase her determination, wit, and resilience.
- Scene 1: Introduces Elle Woods as a determined and ambitious character, effectively establishes the setting and tone of the movie.
- Scene 7: Provides insights into Elle's character and motivations through her admissions essay and interactions with others.
- Scene 17: Introduces the main conflict in a compelling way: Warner Humphrey dismisses Elle Woods as not smart enough to secure a prestigious internship.
- Scene 19: Cleverly uses humor to highlight Elle's resilience and determination to prove herself.
- Scene 21: Elle's victory is both a personal and professional triumph; Elle's argument is well-reasoned and persuasive.
- Scene 13: Could provide more context about Elle's current emotional state and her motivations for attending law school.
- Scene 24: The transition from Elle flirting with the UPS Guy to teaching the 'Bend & Snap' maneuver could be smoother to enhance the flow of the scene.
- Scene 28: The transition from Chutney's testimony to Enrique's testimony could be smoother to enhance the flow of the scene.
- Scene 3: The scene could be more concise and to the point.
- Scene 12: Could provide more context about the subject matter jurisdiction case being discussed.
- Scene 2: Introduces Elle's character as a fashion-conscious, confident, and ambitious individual.
- Scene 6: Provides background information on Elle's previous relationship with Warner and her determination to win him back.
- Scene 20: Elle Woods' growth and empowerment throughout the screenplay is effectively showcased.
- Scene 25: The scene effectively introduces Mrs. Windham Vandermark, who provides valuable information about Brooke and Heyworth's relationship.
- Scene 27: The dialogue between Emmett and Elle is engaging and reveals their dynamic relationship.
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 8.4, The screenplay's premise establishes a compelling foundation for an engaging and entertaining narrative, introducing Elle Woods, a determined and effervescent sorority queen whose journey to prove herself takes her to the halls of Harvard Law School. While the premise effectively balances humor and heart, certain aspects could be refined to further capitalize on its potential for originality and audience intrigue. See More
Structure: 8.1, Legally Blonde exhibits a strong narrative structure that effectively engages the audience through a compelling plot and well-developed characters. The screenplay adheres to the traditional three-act structure, providing familiarity and structure to the story's progression. The central conflict is introduced early on, setting the stage for Elle's journey and her determination to prove her worth. The plot unfolds at a steady pace, balancing humor, romance, and legal drama to maintain viewer interest. The resolution provides a satisfying conclusion while leaving room for character growth in future installments. See More
Theme: 7.5, The screenplay effectively conveys its themes and messages, showcasing the power of empowerment, perseverance, and the importance of embracing one's individuality. However, the film could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the legal profession and a tighter focus on its central themes. See More
Visual Impact: 7.1, The screenplay boasts creative and vivid visual imagery that effectively transports readers into its world. The descriptions are detailed and immersive, aiding the reader in visualizing the scenes and connecting emotionally with the narrative. However, there are areas where the screenplay can further enhance its visual storytelling to elevate the overall impact of its scenes. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.3, Legally Blonde presents a strong foundation for emotional storytelling, with a blend of humor, heart, and relatable characters. The screenplay effectively conveys emotions such as determination, self-discovery, and the power of friendship. However, it could benefit from exploring deeper emotional complexities and providing more nuanced emotional arcs for certain characters. See More
Conflict: 8.0, The screenplay effectively utilizes conflict and stakes to generate tension and drive audience engagement. The central conflict, Elle's pursuit of justice for her client while navigating societal expectations, is well-defined and compelling. The stakes are personal and significant to Elle, adding weight to her journey. However, some areas could benefit from further development to heighten the conflict and raise the stakes, ultimately increasing the screenplay's overall impact. See More
Originality: 7.8, The screenplay showcases a refreshing approach to the legal drama genre, offering a blend of humor, wit, and a feisty female protagonist. By injecting elements of fashion, pop culture, and a diverse cast of characters, the screenplay carves out a unique identity for itself. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- In a daytime scene at the pink-decorated Delta Gamma sorority house of USC, blonde Elle Woods collects signatures from her blonde sorority sisters on a handmade card for her boyfriend Warner. After they exchange well-wishes, Elle's dog, Underdog, delivers the card to Warner, foreshadowing Warner's upcoming proposal to Elle.
- In this light-hearted and exciting scene, Elle, accompanied by Serena and Margot, goes to the Sunset Plaza Boutique to find the perfect dress for her special date with Jason, where she expects a proposal. A saleswoman attempts to upsell Elle an expensive dress with false claims, but Elle, who has knowledge of fashion, quickly sees through the lies and rejects the dress. Elle finds and purchases a different dress that she likes, ending the scene as she prepares to leave the boutique.
- Amy summons Elle to meet Warner at The Ivy restaurant, where he surprises her with a romantic gesture. However, their conversation takes a devastating turn when Warner reveals his intention to discuss their future, leading to a heartbreaking breakup. Elle is left in tears, with Warner following her as she leaves the restaurant.
- Elle, devastated after being dumped by Warner, is driven home by him only to have him end the relationship. She tearfully confides in her sorority sisters, Serena and Margot, who console her and try to make sense of the situation. The scene takes place at night, transitioning from a street to the Delta Gamma sorority house, and is filled with emotional dialogue and visuals of Elle's distress. The conflict between Elle and Warner remains unresolved, and the scene concludes with Elle, distraught, holding a photo of Warner while her dog, Underdog, showers her with affection.
- The scene opens with Amy finding Elle, a Delta Gamma sister, distraught over her breakup with Warner. Serena and Margot arrive with Jamba Juice to console Elle, who laments about her future plans centered around Warner. The setting transitions to an upscale manicure shop where Elle learns about Warner's older brother's engagement, prompting her to focus on self-improvement. The main conflict lies in Elle's struggle to cope with her breakup and the uncertainty of her future. The emotional tone is primarily sad and melancholic, with moments of hope as the characters try to help Elle move forward.
- Elle meets with her advisor to discuss applying to Harvard Law School, despite her major being Fashion Merchandising. The advisor tells her she needs excellent recommendations, a great admissions essay, and a high LSAT score. Back at her sorority house, Elle tells her friends she's going to Harvard, but they don't understand why. Elle explains it's to win Warner back, and Margot gives her a lucky scrunchie for good luck. The scene is lighthearted and humorous, but there's also a sense of uncertainty and confusion as Elle's friends struggle to understand her motivations.
- In this scene, Elle Woods records her Harvard admissions essay while studying for the LSAT, reviewing flashcards, and taking practice tests. She also participates in sorority activities as president of Delta Gamma, multitasks by studying during a horror movie night with Kappa Sigmas, and interacts with her sorority sisters, studies with her classmates, and addresses her Kappa Sig sisters during the movie night. The scene takes place in various locations, including Woods' backyard Jacuzzi and pool, Delta Gamma house living room, an LSAT prep course classroom, and a beach, during the day or night as indicated. The tone is light-hearted and humorous, with Elle's voiceover providing a satirical take on her experiences and abilities. The scene ends with Elle growing frustrated after receiving a low score on her practice LSAT exam.
- In this scene, Elle studies for the LSAT with Amy in a library study room but gets distracted by Warner and fraternity boys carrying a keg. She closes the shades and continues studying, records video messages about her confidence, and takes the LSAT exam. Later, Elle and her friends follow Dylan McDermott's car and scream at him, and Elle jogs with Serena and criticizes Calvin Klein's spring line. The main conflict is Elle's struggle to focus on studying, while another conflict is her aggressive behavior towards Dylan McDermott. The tone is lighthearted and playful, with some moments of determination and frustration.
- Amy bursts into the Delta Gamma house with Elle's LSAT envelope, revealing a score of 175 and sparking a celebration. Simultaneously, the Harvard Law Admissions Office discusses Elle's unique application, highlighting her unconventional background and achievements. The scene concludes with the Dean of Admissions welcoming Elle to Harvard Law School, resolving the conflict between her unique qualities and traditional expectations.
- In this scene, Elle meets with her parents to discuss her plans to attend law school at Harvard, facing their doubts and revealing her motivation to win back her ex-boyfriend. Arriving on campus, she is met with surprise and skepticism from other students. Despite the conflicts, Elle remains determined to pursue her goals, asking about her ex-boyfriend's whereabouts at orientation and being directed to the Lido deck.
- In this light-hearted and positive scene, Elle, a former beauty queen and now law student, attends a welcome event for new law students, introducing herself with her past achievements and a story about Cameron Diaz. She then goes to her first law class, where she runs into Warner. They have a surprised but happy reunion, with Warner learning that Elle also attends Harvard Law School. The scene ends with Elle and Warner making plans to meet after class.
- In the first civil procedures class of law school, Elle enters nervously and takes a seat in the front row. However, she is the only student without a laptop and is surrounded by unshowered brainiacs. The tough professor, Stromwell, lectures on the importance of legal education and tests the class's knowledge, calling on Elle who admits to being unprepared. This leads to a conflict between Elle and prim classmate Sarah, who supports Stromwell's decision to ask Elle to leave. The scene ends with Elle leaving the class in shame.
- Emmett and Elle have a friendly conversation on a bench outside the law school quad, discussing her first day of classes and the Socratic method. Emmett offers advice on her professors and shares his own experience of being moved to tears by Professor Stromwell. However, the mood turns tense and awkward with the arrival of Warner and his fiancée Sarah, who is revealed to be the 'horrible girl' who humiliated Elle in class. Elle looks stricken and rushes off as the scene ends.
- Elle, a law student, visits a blue-collar salon in distress over her ex-boyfriend Warner's engagement. She confides in Paulette, the manicurist, who shares her own heartbreaking past. Through their conversation, Paulette encourages Elle to fight for Warner, helping Elle regain her confidence and overcome her internal conflict.
- Elle Woods attempts to reconnect with her ex-boyfriend, Warner, by leaving a message and wine bottle at his door, then spying on him playing football. In Criminal Law class, she confronts Sarah over internship preferences, showcasing her newfound confidence and determination to win the competition and Warner back. The scene is filled with playful competition, tension, and a hint of determination.
- In the study lounge, Elle passes a note to Underdog to give to Warner, inviting him to dinner. However, Warner doesn't show up at the Cask & Flagon restaurant. Elle then brings muffins to Warner's study group at the library, but they reject her. Elle is hurt and leaves, passing by the Raging Feminist Study Group and getting muffins knocked out of her hands by a group of nerds. The scene ends with Elle feeling even more depressed than before.
- Elle, feeling left out after being excluded from a party, calls her friends Serena and Margot, learning about Margot's engagement and Josh's proposal. Elle lies about having a date with The Rock. Deciding to attend the party in a Playboy Bunny costume, she faces indifference from the partygoers and a rude comment from Enid, dressed as Lizzie Borden, highlighting the exclusivity and lack of welcome she experiences.
- Elle, dressed as a Playboy Bunny, joins Sarah and Claire at the bar. Warner, dressed as O.J., flirts with Elle but later dismisses her chances of getting a prestigious internship, causing a conflict. Elle, hurt by Warner's lack of faith in her abilities, walks back into the house, ending the scene.
- In this scene, Elle overhears a group of Ils, including Enid, Dorky David, Sarah, and Arrogant Aaron, betting on how long she will last at Harvard. Hurt by their comments, Elle decides to prove her worth by purchasing a laptop and starting to study. She interacts with supportive characters like Emmett, Paulette, and Professor Donovan, showing her determination to succeed in law school. The scene highlights the conflict between Elle and the Ils, who doubt her ability to succeed, and ends with Elle resolute in proving them wrong.
- In this scene, Elle struggles to reach a book and is helped by Dorky David. She playfully marks 'Eat Me' on Arrogant Aaron's forehead while he sleeps in the library, which is later highlighted in class, causing amusement among the students. The scene takes place in various indoor settings, including the law library, study lounge, Elle's dorm room, and Civil Procedures class, during the day and night. The tone is light-hearted and humorous, with a touch of sarcasm and playfulness.
- Elle Woods celebrates a small victory at the Beauty Oasis salon with Paulette before attending her Criminal Law class. During the class, Elle, now with less makeup and a ponytail, confronts Warner and another student's argument that a sperm donor has visitation rights. Elle challenges their stance by questioning the defendant's records and intent, transforming the academic and serious tone of the class into a lively debate. The professor ultimately sides with Elle, ending the scene with her triumphant victory.
- In this scene, Elle receives praise from Professor Donovan for her class performance, which leads to a conversation about an internship opportunity. Elle presents her unique resume, and Donovan questions her decision to attend law school. Meanwhile, Emmett observes the conversation, and Elle shares her excitement with Paulette, encouraging her to approach Dewey. The scene takes place in Donovan's class, Elle's car, and Dewey's trailer, with a positive and uplifting tone. Key pieces of dialogue include Donovan's praise and comment about Elle's pink resume, and Elle's encouragement of Paulette. Visual elements include Elle's pink resume, Paulette's nervous demeanor, and Dewey's beer gut. The scene ends with Paulette hesitantly making her way to Dewey's trailer.
- Elle Woods, assertive and professional, visits Dewey's trailer to discuss legal matters regarding the common law marriage of Paulette and her dog Rufus. Initially confused, Dewey eventually understands and hands over Rufus. Paulette, surprised and empowered, takes back her beloved pet, ending the conflict. The scene takes place in the afternoon, in Dewey's trailer's exterior and Elle's car's interior, and is serious in tone with a hint of triumph and relief for Paulette.
- Elle, Paulette, and Rufus celebrate their victory and head off in Elle's car. At her Civil Procedures class, Elle correctly answers a question posed by Professor Stromwell, which leaves her classmates in awe. After class, Elle learns that she has been chosen as an intern for a major murder case, much to her surprise and the shock of her classmates. The scene is filled with joy, tension, and surprise as Elle navigates this new development in her law school journey.
- In this serious-toned scene, Elle starts her new job at a law firm with a confident transformation, impressing her ex-boyfriend Warner. The group, including Donovan, Emmett, and other associates, discuss their case defending Brooke Windham, accused of murdering her husband. Elle's passionate defense of Brooke sparks a new perspective, leaving the group in anticipation as Emmett hints at having a case.
- In a tense scene at the Boston Jail, lawyer Donovan interviews his client Brooke, who is accused of murdering her husband. Donovan tries to get Brooke to reveal her alibi, but she refuses, getting defensive and angry. Amidst this tension, Donovan's intern Elle recognizes Brooke from a dance class they both attended in LA, providing a brief moment of levity. The scene ends with Brooke expressing gratitude towards Elle, indicating a potential connection between the two characters. The main conflict, Donovan's attempt to get Brooke to reveal her alibi, remains unresolved.
- Rufus sleeps on the floor while Elle and Paulette discuss Brooke's situation. A UPS guy delivers a package, and Elle flirts with him to boost Paulette's confidence. Elle then teaches the 'Bend & Snap' maneuver to Paulette and the other clients in the beauty salon, ending with everyone practicing it together.
- In this scene, Chutney, the victim's daughter, gives a conflicting account of the defendant's actions at the time of the murder compared to an intern named Enrique. The group discusses the case, and the main character, Elle, decides to visit the defendant, Brooke Windham, in jail to get her alibi. The scene ends with Elle visiting Brooke in jail, where she reveals she was getting liposuction on the day of the murder.
- In the library, Donovan assigns interviews and inquires about a prison communique. The main conflict arises when Elle refuses to disclose a promised alibi, causing tension with Donovan and the associates. Despite their attempts to persuade her, Elle remains firm. The scene ends with Donovan sending Elle to the spa to get the alibi from the ex-wife, while the tension remains unresolved.
- Emmett and Elle drive to a spa to meet Katherine Windham Vandermark for a Pilates class. During the car ride, they discuss Emmett's dislike for Brooke, with Elle defending her. At the spa, they find Katherine covered in mud for a treatment and discuss the case. Katherine reveals that Brooke was having an affair with Heyworth, shocking Emmett and Elle. This revelation adds a new layer to the case and causes tension between Emmett and Elle, as Emmett had previously defended Brooke's character. The scene ends with Katherine's revelation, leaving the audience eager to find out how this new information will impact the case.
- Emmett drives while Elle rants about her suspicion of Brooke's innocence and her idea for a Blonde Legal Defense Fund to combat blonde discrimination. Emmett is initially skeptical, but Elle's enthusiasm wins him over. Elle also offers Emmett seaweed cream for his eye bags, which he initially declines. The scene ends with Emmett asking Elle if she really thinks he's attractive, and Elle responding with a backhanded compliment.
- In this light-hearted and humorous scene, Elle walks to her dorm on the Harvard campus at night and sees Dorky David being rejected by a Freshman Girl. To help him out, Elle pretends they had a date and slaps David, implying he stood her up. The Freshman Girl is impressed by David's 'confidence' and asks him out. Elle overhears this and smiles, resolving the conflict and ending the scene on a positive note.
- The scene takes place in a courthouse during the day, where a trial is in session with Judge William R. Ptak presiding. DA Joyce Rafferty interrogates witnesses, including Mrs. Windham Vandermark, Chutney, and Enrique, revealing key information about the case. The main conflict arises when DA Rafferty questions Enrique about his affair with the defendant, Brooke Windham, which he initially denies but eventually admits. This revelation shocks the courtroom and outrages Brooke Windham. The scene ends with Enrique admitting to his affair, causing a gasp in the courtroom.
- Brooke is accused of having an affair and led away, while Elle stays behind to discuss Brooke's alibi with Sarah. Margot and Serena invite Elle out, but she declines. The scene takes place in Elle's dorm room at night, and the main conflict is whether or not to tell Donovan about Brooke's alibi. The tone is serious and tense at the beginning, but lightens up with the arrival of Margot and Serena. Key pieces of dialogue include Brooke's denial of the affair, Sarah's belief in Brooke's alibi, and the revelation about Warner being wait-listed. The scene ends with Sarah and Elle staying behind to drink champagne after they win the case.
- Paulette tries to use the Bend & Snap move to impress the UPS Guy, but accidentally hits him in the nose, causing it to bleed. UPS Guy is taken away by paramedics while Elle, who is waiting in line for a water fountain, consoles Paulette over the phone. The scene takes place in the morning, inside Beauty Oasis, a beauty shop, and at a courthouse hallway during the day. The main conflict is Paulette's desire to attract the UPS Guy's attention, which results in an accident. The tone is lighthearted and humorous, despite the accident, with a touch of drama and concern for the UPS Guy's well-being.
- Elle reveals Enrique's sexuality to Emmett and Donovan, then questions Warner about her shoes to prove her point. Brooke is skeptical, and Donovan dismisses Elle's theory. Enrique takes the stand, denying the affair with Brooke, but Emmett's questioning reveals the truth. Chuck stands up, confirming their relationship, causing an uproar in the courtroom. The scene ends with the courtroom erupting in chaos as Chuck confirms his relationship with Enrique, and Elle smiling victoriously.
- Elle and Emmett celebrate a successful day in court, followed by Elle sharing her excitement with Paulette at the salon. However, the tone turns tense when Elle meets with Donovan, who compliments her performance but then makes an inappropriate advance. This is witnessed by Sarah, potentially sowing conflict in the office.
- Elle finds out about Donovan's inappropriate intentions and quits her internship in anger and disappointment. Emmett tries to convince her to stay, but she is determined to return to LA. The scene takes place in Donovan's office, an elevator, and the building lobby at night, and highlights the sexism Elle faces in her internship. The tone is emotional, with a mix of anger, disappointment, and sadness.
- In this emotional and intense scene, Elle, feeling like a joke, plans to leave law school after Donovan's disdainful behavior. However, Professor Stromwell's encouragement helps her regain her confidence. Meanwhile, Brooke fires Donovan and hires Elle, who confidently asserts her right to represent Brooke in court under Emmett's supervision. The scene takes place in various locations, including the Beauty Oasis salon, jail waiting room, TV room, courthouse hallway, and courtroom. The main conflicts include Elle's lack of confidence and Brooke hiring Elle as her lawyer, which Donovan opposes. The scene ends with Elle confidently walking back to the defense table after being approved by the judge to represent Brooke in court.
- In this courtroom scene from Legally Blonde, Elle Woods interrogates Chutney Windham, who is defending her father's killer. Elle notices Chutney's curly hair and questions her about her recent perm. Chutney admits she hadn't wet her hair for at least twenty-four hours, which Elle uses to deduce that Chutney must have heard the gunshot and lied about finding Brooke with the gun. Under pressure, Chutney confesses that she intended to shoot Brooke but accidentally killed her father instead, resolving the conflict and exonerating Brooke. The scene ends with the crowd erupting in pandemonium.
- Elle Woods and Brooke Taylor-Windham exit the courtroom after winning a case, greeted by reporters. Elle's father and stepmother watch her on TV. Elle reunites with her friends Serena and Margot, but is confronted by Enid about being products of the patriarchy. Warner apologizes and proposes to Elle, but she rejects him and walks away with Sarah, who decides to pawn her engagement ring. Emmett asks Elle on a date, and she ultimately chooses to embrace her new beginning with him.
- During Harvard Law School's orientation, Elle, a second year law student and co-founder of the 'Blonde Legal Defense Club,' stands behind the club's table with Emmett. A nervous first year girl inquires if blonde hair is a requirement to join. Elle kindly explains that one only needs to be blonde at heart, gesturing towards their newly blonde friend Sarah. The first year girl's hesitation is quickly set aside, and she joins the growing crowd of first year students eagerly signing up for the club. The scene exudes a lighthearted and welcoming atmosphere, reflecting the excitement and sense of community among the incoming law students.
Elle - Score: 89/100
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Protagonist
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Warner - Score: 54/100
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Antagonist
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Emmett - Score: 75/100
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Serena - Score: 66/100
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Supporting Character
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Margot - Score: 57/100
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Paulette - Score: 75/100
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Donovan - Score: 64/100
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Antagonist
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Personal Growth (50%) | Elle's journey from a fashion merchandising major to a law student, her determination to get into Harvard Law School, and her transformation into a successful lawyer show her personal growth. | The screenplay focuses on the main character's development and transformation, highlighting her determination, resilience, and ability to overcome challenges. | ||||||||||||
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Love and Relationships (30%) | The story revolves around Elle's relationship with Warner, her ex-boyfriend, and her interactions with other characters like Emmett, Paulette, and her friends. These relationships shape her character and influence her decisions. | Love and relationships are significant themes in the screenplay, illustrating the importance of human connections and the impact they have on our lives. | ||||||||||||
Female Empowerment (20%) | Elle's journey to becoming a successful lawyer, her fight against discrimination, and her support for other women show the theme of female empowerment. | The screenplay emphasizes the power of women, their ability to succeed in male-dominated fields, and the importance of supporting one another. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist, Elle Woods, evolves from seeking validation and acceptance from others to proving her worth and intelligence in a competitive environment. |
External Goals | Elle's external goals evolve from preparing for a potential engagement to excelling in law school and defending her client in court. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in 'Legally Blonde' is Elle's belief in authenticity and self-worth versus societal expectations and judgments based on appearance. |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to Elle's growth from a superficial, appearance-focused individual to a confident, intelligent, and determined lawyer who values authenticity and self-worth.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict drive the narrative forward by creating tension, conflict, and character development within Elle's journey from a heartbroken fashion major to a successful law student and defender of justice.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict deepen the thematic exploration of authenticity, self-worth, societal expectations, and the importance of staying true to oneself in the face of judgment and stereotypes.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Elle Woods' Card Signing and Dog Delivery in the Delta Gamma Sorority House | Light-hearted, Playful, Excited | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
2 - Elle's Proposal Preparations: A Dress Fitting Adventure | Light-hearted, Excited, Sassy | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - The Breakup at The Ivy | Romantic, Heartbreaking, Serious, Embarrassing | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - A Night of Heartbreak and Support | Heartbreak, Humor, Shock | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Elle's Melancholy: Navigating a Breakup and Uncertain Future | Heartbreak, Humor, Sadness | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Elle's Surprising Ambition: A Step Closer to Winning Warner Back | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Elle Woods' Multi-tasking and Frustration: Balancing Sorority Life and LSAT Preparation | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Dramatic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - Elle's LSAT Study Session and Dylan McDermott Encounter | Humorous, Heartfelt, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Elle's LSAT Triumph and Unconventional Acceptance into Harvard Law | Humorous, Heartfelt, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Elle's Arrival at Harvard: Doubts and Determination | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Elle's Law School Beginning and Warner Reunion | Humorous, Light-hearted, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - Elle's Unpreparedness Leads to Embarrassment in Civil Procedures Class | Humorous, Serious, Embarrassing | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Elle's First Day of Classes: Revelations and Heartbreak | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Surprising | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - Heartbreak and Hope at Beauty Oasis | Humorous, Heartfelt, Reflective | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
15 - Elle's Challenge: Reconnecting with Warner and Rising above Sarah | Humorous, Sarcastic, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Elle's Failed Attempt to Join Warner's Study Group | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Defiant | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - Elle's Night of Exclusion and Rejection | Humorous, Heartfelt, Defeated | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Elle's Costume and Warner's Doubts | Sarcastic, Flirty, Heartbroken, Defiant | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - Elle's Determination: Overcoming Doubts and Proving Worth | Humorous, Sarcastic, Defiant | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Elle's Playful Prank on Arrogant Aaron | Humorous, Determined, Sarcastic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
21 - Elle's Legal Victory: Challenging Sperm Donor Rights | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - Elle's Empowerment: Impressing Professors and Encouraging Friends | Humorous, Determined, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - Elle Woods Secures Rufus's Return for Paulette | Humorous, Dramatic, Confrontational | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - Elle's Surprising Internship Offer | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - Elle's New Beginning: A Case of Innocence | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Tense Jail Interview and Unexpected Connection | Serious, Humorous, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - Elle Teaches the 'Bend & Snap' | Light-hearted, Humorous, Upbeat | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - Differing Accounts and a Jailhouse Visit | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Donovan's Frustration: The Unrevealed Alibi | Serious, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Pilates, Mud Treatments, and a Surprising Revelation | Light-hearted, Sarcastic, Conversational | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - Elle's Blonde Legal Defense Fund | Humorous, Sarcastic, Light-hearted | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
32 - Elle Helps Dorky David Win Over a Freshman Girl | Humorous, Sarcastic, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - Revelation of an Affair in the Courtroom | Serious, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | |
34 - Brooke's Alibi and a Night In | Light-hearted, Sarcastic, Supportive | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - Paulette's Failed Attempt at Impressing the UPS Guy | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - Elle Exposes Enrique's Affair and Sexuality in Court | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
37 - Elle's Success Turns Sour: Donovan's Unwanted Advance | Excitement, Gratitude, Professionalism, Intrigue, Disgust | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
38 - Elle's Decision to Quit | Upset, Defiant, Resigned, Disillusioned, Empowered | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - Elle's Confidence Restored: From Quitting Law School to Representing Brooke in Court | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - Chutney's Perm Leads to Confession | Dramatic, Humorous, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
41 - Elle's Courtroom Victory and New Beginnings | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
42 - Blonde Legal Defense Club's Popular Orientation Debut | Light-hearted, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Engaging plot
- Strong character development
- Witty dialogue
- Emotional depth
- Humorous moments
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited diversity in characters
- Stereotypical portrayal of characters
- Some cliched elements in character interactions
- Some predictable plot points
- Lack of significant conflict
Suggestions
- Explore more diverse character representation to avoid stereotypical portrayals.
- Consider reducing the number of cliched elements and predictable plot points to increase the element of surprise and keep the audience engaged.
- Focus on creating more significant conflict in the story to create tension and overall higher stakes for the characters.
- Work on crafting impactful dialogue that avoids being too on-the-nose or overly dramatic.
- Consider incorporating more emotional impact throughout the story to keep the audience invested in the characters and their journey.
Scene 1 - Elle Woods' Card Signing and Dog Delivery in the Delta Gamma Sorority House
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 2 - Elle's Proposal Preparations: A Dress Fitting Adventure
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 3 - The Breakup at The Ivy
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 4 - A Night of Heartbreak and Support
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 5 - Elle's Melancholy: Navigating a Breakup and Uncertain Future
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 6 - Elle's Surprising Ambition: A Step Closer to Winning Warner Back
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 7 - Elle Woods' Multi-tasking and Frustration: Balancing Sorority Life and LSAT Preparation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 8 - Elle's LSAT Study Session and Dylan McDermott Encounter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 9 - Elle's LSAT Triumph and Unconventional Acceptance into Harvard Law
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 10 - Elle's Arrival at Harvard: Doubts and Determination
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 11 - Elle's Law School Beginning and Warner Reunion
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 12 - Elle's Unpreparedness Leads to Embarrassment in Civil Procedures Class
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 13 - Elle's First Day of Classes: Revelations and Heartbreak
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 14 - Heartbreak and Hope at Beauty Oasis
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 15 - Elle's Challenge: Reconnecting with Warner and Rising above Sarah
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 16 - Elle's Failed Attempt to Join Warner's Study Group
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 17 - Elle's Night of Exclusion and Rejection
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 18 - Elle's Costume and Warner's Doubts
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 19 - Elle's Determination: Overcoming Doubts and Proving Worth
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 20 - Elle's Playful Prank on Arrogant Aaron
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 21 - Elle's Legal Victory: Challenging Sperm Donor Rights
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 22 - Elle's Empowerment: Impressing Professors and Encouraging Friends
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 23 - Elle Woods Secures Rufus's Return for Paulette
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 24 - Elle's Surprising Internship Offer
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 25 - Elle's New Beginning: A Case of Innocence
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 26 - Tense Jail Interview and Unexpected Connection
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 27 - Elle Teaches the 'Bend & Snap'
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 28 - Differing Accounts and a Jailhouse Visit
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 29 - Donovan's Frustration: The Unrevealed Alibi
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 30 - Pilates, Mud Treatments, and a Surprising Revelation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 31 - Elle's Blonde Legal Defense Fund
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 32 - Elle Helps Dorky David Win Over a Freshman Girl
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 33 - Revelation of an Affair in the Courtroom
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 34 - Brooke's Alibi and a Night In
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 35 - Paulette's Failed Attempt at Impressing the UPS Guy
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 36 - Elle Exposes Enrique's Affair and Sexuality in Court
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 37 - Elle's Success Turns Sour: Donovan's Unwanted Advance
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 38 - Elle's Decision to Quit
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 39 - Elle's Confidence Restored: From Quitting Law School to Representing Brooke in Court
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 40 - Chutney's Perm Leads to Confession
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 41 - Elle's Courtroom Victory and New Beginnings
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 42 - Blonde Legal Defense Club's Popular Orientation Debut
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for 'Legally Blonde' is a well-written and engaging piece with a strong central character, compelling narrative, and effective use of humor. While there are a few areas where improvements could be made, such as providing more depth to certain character motivations and smoothing out transitions between scenes, the screenplay overall delivers on its promise of a fun, heartwarming, and empowering story. Elle Woods' journey of self-discovery and growth is expertly crafted, and the screenplay provides ample opportunities for memorable and impactful scenes that showcase her determination, wit, and resilience.