Overview
Unique Selling Point
Discover a fresh and witty take on the romantic comedy genre with "Legally Blonde," a script that showcases the journey of Elle Woods, a sorority queen who transforms into a successful and empowered lawyer. This story offers a unique blend of humor, heartbreak, and determination, challenging societal norms and exploring themes of love, self-worth, and personal growth. With its authentic characters, sharp dialogue, and unexpected twists, "Legally Blonde" delivers a delightful and engaging narrative that will leave audiences cheering for Elle's success. This script stands out with its distinct voice, combining satire and wit to create a captivating and unforgettable experience.
AI Verdict & Suggestions
This rating is from a single AI engine based on structure, character, tone, and emotional engagement.
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Recommend
Story Facts
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Romance, Legal Drama
Setting: Present day, Harvard Law School and surrounding areas in Boston, MA
Themes: Personal Growth, Love and Relationships, Female Empowerment
Conflict & Stakes: Elle's struggle to prove herself in a male-dominated field and win back her ex-boyfriend, Warner, while also dealing with her own insecurities and the expectations of those around her.
Mood: Uplifting and empowering, with moments of humor and drama.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: A romantic comedy set in the world of law school, featuring a strong female lead who challenges stereotypes and expectations.
- Plot Twist: Elle's decision to attend law school to win back her ex-boyfriend, only to discover her own potential and passion for the law.
- Distinctive Setting: The world of Harvard Law School, which provides a unique backdrop for a romantic comedy.
Comparable Scripts: Legally Blonde, The Devil Wears Prada, Juno, Election, Clueless, A Beautiful Mind, The Social Network, Dead Poets Society, Good Will Hunting, Monster's Ball
Script Level Analysis
This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.
Screenplay Insights
Breaks down your script along various categories.
Story Critique
Characters
Explores the depth, clarity, and arc of the main and supporting characters.
Emotional Analysis
Breaks down the emotional journey of the audience across the script.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Logic & Inconsistencies
Scene Analysis
All of your scenes analyzed individually and compared, so you can zero in on what to improve.
Analysis of the Scene Percentiles
- The screenplay excels in plot (94.74th percentile) and character development (93.42nd percentile), suggesting a strong narrative and well-developed characters.
- It also scores highly in originality (97th percentile), indicating a unique and fresh take on the story.
- The screenplay is engaging (88th percentile), maintaining the reader's interest throughout.
- The conflict level is relatively low (37.28th percentile), suggesting an opportunity to enhance the stakes and tension in the story.
- The external goal score is also low (18th percentile), which may indicate underdeveloped external goals or motivations for the characters.
- Formatting could be improved (2nd percentile), suggesting a need for better adherence to standard screenplay format.
The writer's style appears to be balanced, with strong character development and plot, but could benefit from more focus on conflict and external goals.
Balancing Elements- The writer could work on balancing the conflict and tension in the story to match the strong character development and plot.
- Developing clearer and more compelling external goals for the characters could enhance the overall story.
The writer appears to be integrated, with a balance of conceptual and intuitive elements in the screenplay.
Overall AssessmentThe screenplay has a strong foundation in plot and character development, with room for improvement in conflict, external goals, and formatting. With focused refinement, it has the potential to be a compelling and unique story.
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Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Legally Blonde' is a well-written and engaging piece with a strong central character, compelling narrative, and effective use of humor. While there are a few areas where improvements could be made, such as providing more depth to certain character motivations and smoothing out transitions between scenes, the screenplay overall delivers on its promise of a fun, heartwarming, and empowering story. Elle Woods' journey of self-discovery and growth is expertly crafted, and the screenplay provides ample opportunities for memorable and impactful scenes that showcase her determination, wit, and resilience.
- Scene 1: Introduces Elle Woods as a determined and ambitious character, effectively establishes the setting and tone of the movie.
- Scene 7: Provides insights into Elle's character and motivations through her admissions essay and interactions with others.
- Scene 17: Introduces the main conflict in a compelling way: Warner Humphrey dismisses Elle Woods as not smart enough to secure a prestigious internship.
- Scene 19: Cleverly uses humor to highlight Elle's resilience and determination to prove herself.
- Scene 21: Elle's victory is both a personal and professional triumph; Elle's argument is well-reasoned and persuasive.
- Scene 13: Could provide more context about Elle's current emotional state and her motivations for attending law school.
- Scene 24: The transition from Elle flirting with the UPS Guy to teaching the 'Bend & Snap' maneuver could be smoother to enhance the flow of the scene.
- Scene 28: The transition from Chutney's testimony to Enrique's testimony could be smoother to enhance the flow of the scene.
- Scene 3: The scene could be more concise and to the point.
- Scene 12: Could provide more context about the subject matter jurisdiction case being discussed.
- Scene 2: Introduces Elle's character as a fashion-conscious, confident, and ambitious individual.
- Scene 6: Provides background information on Elle's previous relationship with Warner and her determination to win him back.
- Scene 20: Elle Woods' growth and empowerment throughout the screenplay is effectively showcased.
- Scene 25: The scene effectively introduces Mrs. Windham Vandermark, who provides valuable information about Brooke and Heyworth's relationship.
- Scene 27: The dialogue between Emmett and Elle is engaging and reveals their dynamic relationship.
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.2, The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in character development, with compelling arcs and relatable personalities. Elle Woods' journey from sorority queen to determined law student is particularly captivating, showcasing resilience, humor, and self-discovery. However, some supporting characters could benefit from further development to enhance their emotional impact and relatability. Overall, the screenplay effectively utilizes character development to drive the narrative and engage the audience. See More
Premise: 8.4, The screenplay's premise establishes a compelling foundation for an engaging and entertaining narrative, introducing Elle Woods, a determined and effervescent sorority queen whose journey to prove herself takes her to the halls of Harvard Law School. While the premise effectively balances humor and heart, certain aspects could be refined to further capitalize on its potential for originality and audience intrigue. See More
Structure: 8.1, Legally Blonde exhibits a strong narrative structure that effectively engages the audience through a compelling plot and well-developed characters. The screenplay adheres to the traditional three-act structure, providing familiarity and structure to the story's progression. The central conflict is introduced early on, setting the stage for Elle's journey and her determination to prove her worth. The plot unfolds at a steady pace, balancing humor, romance, and legal drama to maintain viewer interest. The resolution provides a satisfying conclusion while leaving room for character growth in future installments. See More
Theme: 7.5, The screenplay effectively conveys its themes and messages, showcasing the power of empowerment, perseverance, and the importance of embracing one's individuality. However, the film could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the legal profession and a tighter focus on its central themes. See More
Visual Impact: 7.1, The screenplay boasts creative and vivid visual imagery that effectively transports readers into its world. The descriptions are detailed and immersive, aiding the reader in visualizing the scenes and connecting emotionally with the narrative. However, there are areas where the screenplay can further enhance its visual storytelling to elevate the overall impact of its scenes. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.3, Legally Blonde presents a strong foundation for emotional storytelling, with a blend of humor, heart, and relatable characters. The screenplay effectively conveys emotions such as determination, self-discovery, and the power of friendship. However, it could benefit from exploring deeper emotional complexities and providing more nuanced emotional arcs for certain characters. See More
Conflict: 8.0, The screenplay effectively utilizes conflict and stakes to generate tension and drive audience engagement. The central conflict, Elle's pursuit of justice for her client while navigating societal expectations, is well-defined and compelling. The stakes are personal and significant to Elle, adding weight to her journey. However, some areas could benefit from further development to heighten the conflict and raise the stakes, ultimately increasing the screenplay's overall impact. See More
Originality: 7.8, The screenplay showcases a refreshing approach to the legal drama genre, offering a blend of humor, wit, and a feisty female protagonist. By injecting elements of fashion, pop culture, and a diverse cast of characters, the screenplay carves out a unique identity for itself. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Elle - Score: 89/100
Role
Protagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Warner - Score: 54/100
Role
Antagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Emmett - Score: 75/100
Character Analysis Overview
Serena - Score: 66/100
Role
Supporting Character
Character Analysis Overview
Margot - Score: 57/100
Character Analysis Overview
Paulette - Score: 75/100
Character Analysis Overview
Donovan - Score: 64/100
Role
Antagonist
Character Analysis Overview
Identified Themes
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Personal Growth
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Elle's journey from a fashion merchandising major to a law student, her determination to get into Harvard Law School, and her transformation into a successful lawyer show her personal growth.
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Love and Relationships
30%
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The story revolves around Elle's relationship with Warner, her ex-boyfriend, and her interactions with other characters like Emmett, Paulette, and her friends. These relationships shape her character and influence her decisions.
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Love and relationships are significant themes in the screenplay, illustrating the importance of human connections and the impact they have on our lives. | ||||||||||||
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Female Empowerment
20%
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Elle's journey to becoming a successful lawyer, her fight against discrimination, and her support for other women show the theme of female empowerment.
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The screenplay emphasizes the power of women, their ability to succeed in male-dominated fields, and the importance of supporting one another. | ||||||||||||
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
| Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
| John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
| What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
| Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
| Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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| internal Goals | The protagonist, Elle Woods, evolves from seeking validation and acceptance from others to proving her worth and intelligence in a competitive environment. |
| External Goals | Elle's external goals evolve from preparing for a potential engagement to excelling in law school and defending her client in court. |
| Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in 'Legally Blonde' is Elle's belief in authenticity and self-worth versus societal expectations and judgments based on appearance. |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to Elle's growth from a superficial, appearance-focused individual to a confident, intelligent, and determined lawyer who values authenticity and self-worth.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict drive the narrative forward by creating tension, conflict, and character development within Elle's journey from a heartbroken fashion major to a successful law student and defender of justice.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict deepen the thematic exploration of authenticity, self-worth, societal expectations, and the importance of staying true to oneself in the face of judgment and stereotypes.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
| Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
| Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
| Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
| Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
| 1 - Elle Woods' Card Signing and Dog Delivery in the Delta Gamma Sorority House | Light-hearted, Playful, Excited | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 2 - Elle's Proposal Preparations: A Dress Fitting Adventure | Light-hearted, Excited, Sassy | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 3 - The Breakup at The Ivy | Romantic, Heartbreaking, Serious, Embarrassing | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 4 - A Night of Heartbreak and Support | Heartbreak, Humor, Shock | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 5 - Elle's Melancholy: Navigating a Breakup and Uncertain Future | Heartbreak, Humor, Sadness | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 6 - Elle's Surprising Ambition: A Step Closer to Winning Warner Back | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 7 - Elle Woods' Multi-tasking and Frustration: Balancing Sorority Life and LSAT Preparation | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Dramatic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 8 - Elle's LSAT Study Session and Dylan McDermott Encounter | Humorous, Heartfelt, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 9 - Elle's LSAT Triumph and Unconventional Acceptance into Harvard Law | Humorous, Heartfelt, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 10 - Elle's Arrival at Harvard: Doubts and Determination | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 11 - Elle's Law School Beginning and Warner Reunion | Humorous, Light-hearted, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 12 - Elle's Unpreparedness Leads to Embarrassment in Civil Procedures Class | Humorous, Serious, Embarrassing | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 13 - Elle's First Day of Classes: Revelations and Heartbreak | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Surprising | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 14 - Heartbreak and Hope at Beauty Oasis | Humorous, Heartfelt, Reflective | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 15 - Elle's Challenge: Reconnecting with Warner and Rising above Sarah | Humorous, Sarcastic, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 16 - Elle's Failed Attempt to Join Warner's Study Group | Humorous, Heartbreaking, Defiant | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 17 - Elle's Night of Exclusion and Rejection | Humorous, Heartfelt, Defeated | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 18 - Elle's Costume and Warner's Doubts | Sarcastic, Flirty, Heartbroken, Defiant | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 19 - Elle's Determination: Overcoming Doubts and Proving Worth | Humorous, Sarcastic, Defiant | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 20 - Elle's Playful Prank on Arrogant Aaron | Humorous, Determined, Sarcastic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 21 - Elle's Legal Victory: Challenging Sperm Donor Rights | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 22 - Elle's Empowerment: Impressing Professors and Encouraging Friends | Humorous, Determined, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 23 - Elle Woods Secures Rufus's Return for Paulette | Humorous, Dramatic, Confrontational | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 24 - Elle's Surprising Internship Offer | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 25 - Elle's New Beginning: A Case of Innocence | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 26 - Tense Jail Interview and Unexpected Connection | Serious, Humorous, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 27 - Elle Teaches the 'Bend & Snap' | Light-hearted, Humorous, Upbeat | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 28 - Differing Accounts and a Jailhouse Visit | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 29 - Donovan's Frustration: The Unrevealed Alibi | Serious, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 30 - Pilates, Mud Treatments, and a Surprising Revelation | Light-hearted, Sarcastic, Conversational | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 31 - Elle's Blonde Legal Defense Fund | Humorous, Sarcastic, Light-hearted | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
| 32 - Elle Helps Dorky David Win Over a Freshman Girl | Humorous, Sarcastic, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 33 - Revelation of an Affair in the Courtroom | Serious, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | |
| 34 - Brooke's Alibi and a Night In | Light-hearted, Sarcastic, Supportive | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 35 - Paulette's Failed Attempt at Impressing the UPS Guy | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 36 - Elle Exposes Enrique's Affair and Sexuality in Court | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
| 37 - Elle's Success Turns Sour: Donovan's Unwanted Advance | Excitement, Gratitude, Professionalism, Intrigue, Disgust | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 38 - Elle's Decision to Quit | Upset, Defiant, Resigned, Disillusioned, Empowered | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 39 - Elle's Confidence Restored: From Quitting Law School to Representing Brooke in Court | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 40 - Chutney's Perm Leads to Confession | Dramatic, Humorous, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 41 - Elle's Courtroom Victory and New Beginnings | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 42 - Blonde Legal Defense Club's Popular Orientation Debut | Light-hearted, Humorous, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
Tip: Click on criteria in the top row for detailed summaries.
Scene Strengths
- Engaging plot
- Strong character development
- Witty dialogue
- Emotional depth
- Humorous moments
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited diversity in characters
- Stereotypical portrayal of characters
- Some cliched elements in character interactions
- Some predictable plot points
- Lack of significant conflict
Suggestions
- Explore more diverse character representation to avoid stereotypical portrayals.
- Consider reducing the number of cliched elements and predictable plot points to increase the element of surprise and keep the audience engaged.
- Focus on creating more significant conflict in the story to create tension and overall higher stakes for the characters.
- Work on crafting impactful dialogue that avoids being too on-the-nose or overly dramatic.
- Consider incorporating more emotional impact throughout the story to keep the audience invested in the characters and their journey.
Scene 1 - Elle Woods' Card Signing and Dog Delivery in the Delta Gamma Sorority House
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 2 - Elle's Proposal Preparations: A Dress Fitting Adventure
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 3 - The Breakup at The Ivy
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 4 - A Night of Heartbreak and Support
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 5 - Elle's Melancholy: Navigating a Breakup and Uncertain Future
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 6 - Elle's Surprising Ambition: A Step Closer to Winning Warner Back
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 7 - Elle Woods' Multi-tasking and Frustration: Balancing Sorority Life and LSAT Preparation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 8 - Elle's LSAT Study Session and Dylan McDermott Encounter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 9 - Elle's LSAT Triumph and Unconventional Acceptance into Harvard Law
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 10 - Elle's Arrival at Harvard: Doubts and Determination
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 11 - Elle's Law School Beginning and Warner Reunion
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 12 - Elle's Unpreparedness Leads to Embarrassment in Civil Procedures Class
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 13 - Elle's First Day of Classes: Revelations and Heartbreak
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 14 - Heartbreak and Hope at Beauty Oasis
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 15 - Elle's Challenge: Reconnecting with Warner and Rising above Sarah
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 16 - Elle's Failed Attempt to Join Warner's Study Group
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 17 - Elle's Night of Exclusion and Rejection
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 18 - Elle's Costume and Warner's Doubts
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 19 - Elle's Determination: Overcoming Doubts and Proving Worth
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 20 - Elle's Playful Prank on Arrogant Aaron
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 21 - Elle's Legal Victory: Challenging Sperm Donor Rights
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 22 - Elle's Empowerment: Impressing Professors and Encouraging Friends
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 23 - Elle Woods Secures Rufus's Return for Paulette
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 24 - Elle's Surprising Internship Offer
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 25 - Elle's New Beginning: A Case of Innocence
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 26 - Tense Jail Interview and Unexpected Connection
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 27 - Elle Teaches the 'Bend & Snap'
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 28 - Differing Accounts and a Jailhouse Visit
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 29 - Donovan's Frustration: The Unrevealed Alibi
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 30 - Pilates, Mud Treatments, and a Surprising Revelation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 31 - Elle's Blonde Legal Defense Fund
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 32 - Elle Helps Dorky David Win Over a Freshman Girl
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 33 - Revelation of an Affair in the Courtroom
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 34 - Brooke's Alibi and a Night In
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 35 - Paulette's Failed Attempt at Impressing the UPS Guy
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 36 - Elle Exposes Enrique's Affair and Sexuality in Court
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 37 - Elle's Success Turns Sour: Donovan's Unwanted Advance
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 38 - Elle's Decision to Quit
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 39 - Elle's Confidence Restored: From Quitting Law School to Representing Brooke in Court
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 40 - Chutney's Perm Leads to Confession
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“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 41 - Elle's Courtroom Victory and New Beginnings
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 42 - Blonde Legal Defense Club's Popular Orientation Debut
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
- Physical environment: The physical environment in the screenplay is primarily set in a college campus, specifically at USC and Harvard Law School, with various locations including sorority houses, dorm rooms, classrooms, law libraries, courthouses, and social events. There are also scenes in a beauty salon, a spa, and a suburban backyard.
- Culture: The cultural elements in the screenplay revolve around legal education, sorority life, and societal expectations of success. There is also a focus on beauty, fashion, and relationships, with characters often discussing their appearances and social status.
- Society: The societal structure in the screenplay is hierarchical, with a strong emphasis on academic achievement, particularly in prestigious institutions like Harvard Law School. There are also power dynamics present in relationships, both romantic and professional.
- Technology: The technological elements in the screenplay are minimal, with the occasional use of laptops, cell phones, and a video camera. The focus is more on the characters' interactions and experiences rather than advanced technology.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology shape the characters' experiences and actions by creating a sense of pressure and competition, particularly in the academic setting. Characters are often influenced by societal expectations and their desire to succeed, leading them to make choices that reflect their ambitions and values.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative by providing a backdrop for the characters' personal and professional growth. The college campus and legal setting create a high-stakes environment where characters must navigate challenges and make important decisions that impact their futures.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes of ambition, identity, and societal expectations. Characters must confront their own values and beliefs as they navigate the complexities of academia, relationships, and personal growth.
| Voice Analysis | |
|---|---|
| Summary: | The writer's voice is witty, satirical, and uses humor to address serious themes. The dialogue is sharp and the scenes transition smoothly between comedic and dramatic moments. |
| Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by adding depth and complexity to the characters and themes, highlighting the contrast between superficial beauty standards and genuine ambition. |
| Best Representation Scene | 17 - Elle's Night of Exclusion and Rejection |
| Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively blends humor, drama, and social commentary in a compelling and engaging way. |
Style and Similarities
The writing style across the screenplay is characterized by sharp dialogue, witty humor, and a strong focus on character-driven narratives. There is a blend of both comedy and drama, often used to explore complex themes and relationships.
Style Similarities:
| Writer | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Aaron Sorkin | His influence is evident in the fast-paced, intelligent dialogue and exploration of power dynamics and social issues. The screenplay features strong male and female characters, as well as a balance of humor and drama. |
| Nora Ephron | Her impact is seen in the blending of humor with emotional depth, particularly in romantic comedies and character-driven scenes. The screenplay features relatable characters, engaging narratives, and a touch of heartbreak. |
| Tina Fey | Her style is reflected in the witty humor, satirical take on societal norms, and strong female characters. The screenplay incorporates elements of observational comedy and character-driven comedy throughout. |
Other Similarities: The screenplay also shares similarities with other notable screenwriters such as Diablo Cody, Amy Sherman-Palladino, Richard Curtis, and Shonda Rhimes, further enriching the overall writing style.
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
| Pattern | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Predominance of Humor and Drama | The screenplay has a strong emphasis on humor and drama, with 36 out of 42 scenes (86%) containing one or both of these elements. This combination may create a rollercoaster effect for the audience, keeping them engaged with the story. |
| High Dialogue Scores | The dialogue in the screenplay is consistently strong, with 37 out of 42 scenes (88%) scoring 8 or higher. This suggests that the characters have distinct voices and that the conversations are engaging and meaningful to the story. |
| Scene Tone vs. Emotional Impact | There seems to be a correlation between scene tone and emotional impact. Scenes with a lighter tone, such as 'Light-hearted', 'Playful', or 'Upbeat', tend to have lower emotional impact scores. In contrast, scenes with heavier tones, such as 'Heartbreaking', 'Serious', or 'Humorous', have higher emotional impact scores. This pattern suggests that the screenplay effectively uses tone to convey emotion. |
| Character Changes and High Stakes | Scenes with character changes also tend to have higher stakes, as indicated by the 'High stakes' category. This correlation implies that the character development is closely tied to the progression of the plot and the challenges the characters face. |
| Inconsistent Conflict Scores | Conflict scores are somewhat inconsistent, ranging from 4 to 10. This variability might indicate an opportunity to evenly distribute conflict throughout the screenplay, ensuring that each scene contributes to the overall tension and progression of the story. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay showcases the writer's ability to create engaging dialogue, dynamic characters, and compelling conflicts. The blend of humor, drama, and unique themes creates a rich and entertaining narrative. The writer's original voice and storytelling skills are evident throughout the scenes.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
| Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Book | Save the Cat! Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody | This book provides practical tips and techniques for improving storytelling, character development, and structure, which can help enhance the overall pacing and flow of the screenplay. |
| Exercise | Write a scene with a strong focus on subtext and nonverbal communication.Practice In SceneProv | Practicing subtext and nonverbal communication in scenes can help deepen character interactions and emotional arcs, as well as improve visual storytelling. |
| Screenplay | Study the screenplay for 'Spotlight' by Tom McCarthy and Josh Singer | This screenplay is an excellent example of strong pacing, structure, and character development, which can provide valuable insights for improving the overall quality of the screenplay. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|---|---|
| The Protagonist's Journey | Elle Woods, the protagonist, goes through a transformation from a fashion merchandising major to a Harvard Law School student to win back her ex-boyfriend. | This is a common trope in romantic comedies where the protagonist undergoes significant changes to achieve their goal, often involving personal growth and self-realization. An example of this trope can be found in 'Julie & Julia' (2009), where Julie Powell transforms from an unfulfilled administrative assistant to a successful food blogger. |
| Love Triangle | Elle Woods is caught in a love triangle between her ex-boyfriend Warner and her new love interest Emmett. | A love triangle is a common trope in romantic comedies and dramas where a character has to choose between two romantic interests. An example of this trope can be found in 'Pride and Prejudice' (2005), where Elizabeth Bennet has to choose between Mr. Darcy and Mr. Wickham. |
| The Makeover | Elle Woods undergoes a makeover to fit in at Harvard Law School, trading her pink outfits for conservative suits. | The makeover is a common trope in romantic comedies where the protagonist changes their appearance to fit in or attract a romantic interest. An example of this trope can be found in 'She's All That' (1999), where Laney Boggs undergoes a makeover to win the heart of Zack Siler. |
| The Mentor | Professor Stromwell and Emmett serve as mentors to Elle Woods, guiding her through her journey at Harvard Law School. | The mentor is a common trope in coming-of-age stories and adventures, where an experienced character guides the protagonist through their journey. An example of this trope can be found in 'The Karate Kid' (1984), where Mr. Miyagi serves as a mentor to Daniel LaRusso. |
| The Bet | A group of students bet on how long Elle Woods will last at Harvard Law School. | The bet is a common trope in underdog stories, where a character is underestimated by their peers and has to prove themselves. An example of this trope can be found in 'Back to the Future' (1985), where Biff Tannen bets George McFly that he can't date Lorraine Baines. |
| The Rival | Sarah, Warner's fiancée, serves as a rival to Elle Woods throughout the film. | The rival is a common trope in romantic comedies and adventures, where a character competes with another character for a goal or a romantic interest. An example of this trope can be found in 'Mean Girls' (2004), where Cady Heron competes with Regina George for the title of Spring Fling Queen. |
| The Transformation | Elle Woods transforms from a fashion merchandising major to a successful lawyer. | The transformation is a common trope in coming-of-age stories and adventures, where a character undergoes significant changes to achieve their goals. An example of this trope can be found in 'My Fair Lady' (1964), where Eliza Doolittle transforms from a flower girl to a lady. |
| The Break-Up | Elle Woods breaks up with her ex-boyfriend Warner and moves on with her life. | The break-up is a common trope in romantic comedies and dramas, where a character ends a relationship and pursues a new path. An example of this trope can be found in 'Eat Pray Love' (2010), where Elizabeth Gilbert breaks up with her husband and travels the world. |
| The Fish Out of Water | Elle Woods feels out of place at Harvard Law School, struggling to fit in with her peers. | The fish out of water is a common trope in comedies and adventures, where a character finds themselves in a new environment and struggles to adapt. An example of this trope can be found in 'Legally Blonde' (2001), where Elle Woods struggles to fit in at Harvard Law School. |
| The Underdog | Elle Woods, a fashion merchandising major, defies expectations and becomes a successful lawyer. | The underdog is a common trope in coming-of-age stories and adventures, where a character overcomes obstacles and achieves their goals despite the odds. An example of this trope can be found in 'Rocky' (1976), where Rocky Balboa, a small-time boxer, gets a shot at the heavyweight championship. |
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 25 | Elle: Exercise gives you endorphins, endorphins make you happy — happy people don't kill their husbands! |
| 10 | Sapphire: What, like it's that hard? |
| 31 | ELLE: You're an attractive man, but you need to take better care of yourself. |
| 32 | Elle: Forget it. I've already spent too many hours crying over you. |
| 12 | Professor Stromwell: The law leaves much room for interpretation — but very little for self-doubt. |
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