Die Hard
Executive Summary
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Overview
Genres: Action, Thriller, Drama, Crime, Comedy
Setting: Christmas Eve, Nakatomi Plaza building in Los Angeles
Overview: John McClane, a New York City cop, arrives in Los Angeles to reconcile with his wife Holly on Christmas Eve. When he arrives at her office in the Nakatomi skyscraper, he finds the building has been seized by German terrorists led by Hans Gruber. McClane goes into action, trying to outwit and outfight the terrorists, save the hostages, and reconnect with his estranged wife. Despite being injured and outnumbered, McClane's determination and ingenuity help him overcome the terrorists and foil their plans.
Themes: Violence and Action, Terrorism and Hostage Situations, Christmas, Family
Conflict and Stakes: McClane's battle against the terrorists to save the hostages and his wife, as well as his personal struggle to clear his name from a murder charge.
Overall Mood: Tense, suspenseful, and thrilling, with moments of humor and camaraderie.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 22: The scene where McClane crawls through the air duct to escape the terrorists creates a sense of claustrophobia and suspense.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: Die Hard's premise of a lone warrior fighting against a group of terrorists in an enclosed space was a refreshing concept for an action movie.
- Plot Twist: The true identity of Karl, the terrorist who impersonates McClane, creates a shocking reveal during the film's climax.
- Iconic Character: John McClane is a beloved and iconic action hero who embodies the everyman with his relatable personality and unwavering determination.
- Action Sequences: Die Hard features many thrilling and well- choreographed action sequences, including the famous elevator shootout and the showdown on the roof.
Comparable Scripts:
Writing Style:
The overall writing style of the screenplay is characterized by a blend of action, humor, and complex character dynamics. The dialogue is sharp and witty, and the pacing is fast-paced and engaging.
Style Similarities:
- Shane Black
- Tony Gilroy
- John McTiernan
- Christopher Nolan
- Quentin Tarantino
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for 'Die Hard' is recommended for its effective establishment of character dynamics, building tension and suspense, and introducing a compelling antagonist. However, there are areas that could be improved, such as providing more background information on key characters, enhancing emotional depth in crucial scenes, and delivering impactful resolutions to plot points. The screenplay showcases strong character development and engaging narrative elements but would benefit from further exploration of character motivations and emotional stakes.
USP: **Unique Selling Proposition:** This action-packed thriller delivers a heart-racing hostage crisis narrative with a unique blend of humor, suspense, and character-driven dynamics. Featuring a witty protagonist, a charismatic antagonist, and a gripping cat-and-mouse game within the claustrophobic confines of a skyscraper, this screenplay offers a refreshing take on the genre. Innovative storytelling techniques, including tense confrontations, strategic planning, and daring escapes, will keep audiences on the edge of their seats. The script's authenticity, originality, and distinctive voice create a compelling and unforgettable cinematic experience.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$30-50 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, fans of action, Die Hard movies, and thrillers.
Marketability: The screenplay has strong marketability due to its proven track record, having spawned multiple successful sequels, and its appeal to a wide audience. The film's blend of action, suspense, and humor has made it a popular choice for audiences worldwide.
The screenplay has unique blend of genres and explores compelling themes with a diverse cast.
Has compelling characters and a gripping storyline, relevant social themes, name recognition, and cross-platform appeal.
Profit Potential: High, due to strong appeal to a wide adult audience with a potential for merchandising and sequels.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by sharp dialogue, detailed descriptions, and a focus on character dynamics. The writer effectively uses these elements to create a sense of tension and suspense throughout the screenplay.
Best representation: Scene 3 - Reunion in the Dark. Scene 3 is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively combines sharp dialogue, realistic character interactions, and a focus on tension and suspense. The scene is also a turning point in the story, as it sets up the conflict between John McClane and Hans Gruber.
Memorable Lines:
- John McClane: Yippee-ki-yay, motherfucker. (Scene 37)
- John McClane: Now I have a machine gun. Ho ho ho. (Scene 18)
- Holly: Come out to the coast, we'll get together, have a few laughs (Scene 38)
- Holly: That was a bullseye. Could you believe it? (Scene 39)
- MCCLANE: I'm gonna need a bigger boat. (Scene 1)
Characters
John McClane:A New York City police detective who is visiting his wife in Los Angeles and becomes the only person who can stop a group of terrorists from taking over a skyscraper and holding hostages.
Hans Gruber:The leader of the group of terrorists. He is a ruthless and intelligent criminal who is determined to get away with his plan.
Holly Gennaro:McClane's wife, who is trapped inside the building with the other hostages.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Christmas Eve Preparations | Tense, Suspenseful, Witty | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - John and William's Journey to Christmas | Affectionate, Light-hearted, Direct | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Arrivals and Introductions | Tense, Awkward, Sarcastic, Formal | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - Reunion in the Dark | Intense, Emotional, Tense, Reflective | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
5 - The Heist | Suspenseful, Intense, Tense | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
6 - McClane's Standoff | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - McClane Infiltrates Nakatomi Plaza | Tense, Suspenseful, Menacing | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | |
8 - McClane's Confrontation with Tony | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
9 - McClane's Rooftop Infiltration and Distress Call | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
10 - Intense Pursuit and Narrow Escape | Intense, Suspenseful, Tense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
11 - Cat and Mouse in the Air Ducts | Intense, Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - Race Against Time at the News Desk | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Angry, Panicked | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Confrontation in the Nakatomi Building | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - Bloody Footprints and a Deadly Trap | Tense, Suspenseful, Terrifying, Frantic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
15 - Reinforcements Arrive | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | |
16 - Standoff on the 39th Floor | Intense, Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
17 - Detonators Discovery | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Negotiations Break Down | Tense, Suspenseful, Serious, Intense, Sarcastic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | |
19 - Interrogation and Warnings | Intense, Suspenseful, Tense | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - McClane's Barricade and the Terrorists' Search | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - Outside the Police Trailer | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - McClane's Narrow Escape | Intense, Suspenseful, Tense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - The Blinding Spotlight | Intense, Suspenseful, Tense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - SWAT Assault Under Fire | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - Explosive Showdown | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Tense, Chaotic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Clash of Authorities: McClane's Confrontation with Robinson | Intense, Tense, Confrontational, Furious | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
27 - Tense Standoff and Urgent Action | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - A Tense Standoff | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
29 - Deadly Ultimatum | Tense, Furious, Chilling, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Negotiations and Movement | Tense, Angry, Determined | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - McClane Under Fire | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Tense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
32 - Rooftop Showdown | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - McClane's Descent | Intense, Suspenseful, Tense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
34 - McClane's Rooftop Battle | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - Helicopter Explosion and McClane's Fall | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - Aftermath of the Explosion | Intense, Sarcastic, Dramatic, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - McClane's Plan | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
38 - Showdown with Holly | Tense, Emotional, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | |
39 - Ambush and Escape | Intense, Suspenseful, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - Rooftop Confrontation | Intense, Suspenseful, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
41 - Reunion and New Threat | Intense, Suspenseful, Emotional, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
42 - Close Call and Rescue | Intense, Suspenseful, Emotional, Tense, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 |
Scene 1 - Christmas Eve Preparations
The usual moment just after landing when you let out that
sigh of relief that you've made it in one piece.
ON JOHN MCCLANE 3
mid-thirties, good-looking, athletic and tired from his trip.
He sits by the window. His relief on landing is subtle but
we notice. Suddenly, he hears a voice next to him.
MAN'S VOICE
(o.s.)
J^W!fc'"S Don't fly much do you?
McClane looks over at a grinning middle-aged BUSINESSMAN
sitting next to him.
MCCLANE
No.
BUSINESSMAN
Want to know the secret of
surviving air travel?...Take off
your shoes and socks when you get
where you're going and walk
around ten minutes barefoot.
Better than a shower and a cup
of coffee...
MCCLANE
(warily)
Thanks... I'11 remember that.
The Businessman picks up on McClane's scepticism and takes
it as a challenge. His salesman's smile broadens.
BUSINESSMAN
You think I'm crazy don't you?
Trust me. I've been a salesman
for twenty years. I know what
I'm talking about.
(CONTINUED)
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/0s**..
The Businessman oozes confidence. McClane reaches up to help
a woman down with her bags and the butt of his Beretta
handgun suddenly becomes visible to the Businessman. The
man blanches at the sight and McClane notices the look.
He's seen it before.
MCCLANE
It's okay...I'm a cop.
We SEE this doesn't totally calm the Businessman. McClane
holds his look and produces a gold NYPD Detective's shield.
MCCLANE
(firm and
definite)
Trust me. I've been doing it
for thirteen years.
INT. THE NAKATOMI BUILDING (LOS ANGELES) - EVENING 4
CLOSE ON A bottle of Dom Perignon as the cork explodes across
a large office floor decorated for Christmas. A Japanese
man, mid-fifties standing on a desk holds up the bottle
triumphantly and looks out at an adoring audience of junior
executives and office personnel. He is JOSEPH TAKAGI,
Sr. V.P. of Sales for Nakatomi, a multinational corporation.
TAKAGI
Ladies and gentlemen...1
congratulate each and every one
of you for making this one of
the greatest days in the history
of the Nakatomi corporation...
In the b.g., obviously still at work, an attractive
BUSINESSWOMAN in her mid-thirties, studying a computer
printout, heads toward her office. Falling into step with
her is HARRY ELLIS, thirty-seven, V.P. of Sales. Well-dressed,
with stylish, slicked-back hair, he looks and acts very
smooth.
ELLIS
What about dinner?
WOMAN (HOLLY)
Do you ever look at the calendar,
Harry? Christmas Eve...Santa*s
arriving...Family...Those things
ring a bell?
She turns into:
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HER OFFICE 5
Her name is HOLLY GENNARO MCCLANE, though the nameplate on
her door stops after the first two. She puts the printout
down on her secretary's desk.
HOLLY
(to her secretary)
Go on out, Ginny, they're opening
the champagne.
GINNY
(grateful to be
released)
Thanks Ms. Gennaro.
Ginny passes Ellis in the doorway as Holly punches a number
on the phone.
I ELLIS
' (not giving up)
How about tomorrow night?
HOLLY
(dryly)
Worse.
Just then the party on Holly's phone picks up and WE:
INTERCUT:
Ratings
Scene 2 - John and William's Journey to Christmas
where a four-year-old girl, LUCY MCCLANE, answers the phone
with a sense of importance.
LUCY
Hello, this is Lucy McClane.
Holly suddenly smiles. It is the first time we've seen her
smile and it speaks volumes about the person hidden under a
tough business exterior.
HOLLY
(with affection)
Hello, Lucy McClane. This is
your mother.
She looks up and watches Ellis leave.
LUCY
/fH^s
Mommy! When are you coming home?!
(CONTINUED)
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HOLLY
Soon. You'll be in bed when
I get there, though.
LUCY
Will you come say 'good night'?
HOLLY
Don't I always, you goose?
(enjoys her
daughter's giggle
over the line)
May I speak with Paulina, please?
Lucy hands the phone to a young Salvadorian woman, PAULINA,
the housekeeper.
PAULINA
Hello, Ms. Holly. You coming
home soon?
HOLLY
Hopefully.
(beat)
Mr. McClane didn't call, did he?
PAULINA
No ma'am.
Holly hides a trace of disappointment.
HOLLY
Maybe that means he got a flight.
Why don't you make up the bed in
the spare room, just in case.
PAULINA
(smiling)
Yes ma'am, I already did.
Holly's smile comes through again.
INT. LAX - EVENING 7
McClan^-r^earing TBTs-sWool topcoat and carrying a huge
FAg^chwartz stuffep. animal and his hangup bag, comes down
ramp with the Businessman from the
BUSINESSMAN
Remember...bare feet, ten minutes.
Merry Christmas.
(CONTINUED)
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MCCLANE
Yeah...Merry Christmas...
The Businessman moves down the ramp and is lovingly greeted
by his family. McClane watches, moved by the sight, then
looks around the waiting area, just on the chance his family
might be waiting. Instead he spots a thin, gangling, black
kid, WILLIAM, in an ill-fitting chaufeur's uniform. As he
waits he beats «out a rhythm on a card with J. McCLANE printed
on it. McClane pauses in front of him.
MCCLANE
I'm John McClane.
WILLIAM
William, Sir...I'm your limo
driver. Nice bag.
He turns and starts walking.
MCCLANE
Don't you take this?
WILLIAM
(stops)
Do I?
MCCLANE
Hell, I don't know. I've never
been picked up by a limo before.
William takes McClane's bag.
WILLIAM
Hey, that's good...'cause I've
never driven one before.
CUT TO:
INT. LIMOUSINE - DUSK 8
McClane and William both sit in the front seat as the black
limo turns off the Santa Monica Freeway and heads north
toward Century City. The huge toy animal sits in the backseat.
McClane hears a rustling at his feet and looks down
to see a bunch of fast food wrappers. Picks one up — it
says Taco Bell — and looks at William who grins sheepishly.
WILLIAM
What can I say, man? I didn't
<T expect you to sit up front.
(CONTINUED)
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f* WILLIAM (Cont.)
(popping in a
cassette)
Mind if I play some tunes?
A hard RAP SONG blasts from the speakers.
MCCLANE
How 'bout some Christmas music?
WILLIAM
That is Christmas music.
McClane gives up and grins, tosses the wrapper back on the
floor and looks out the window.
9 HIS P.O.V. 9
Convertibles with Christmas trees in their backseats,
Time/Temperature signs which read: 69°, and palm trees
trimmed in Christmas lights — it is clear that Christmas
L.A. style is a foreign commodity he could live happily
without.
WILLIAM
f* (to the animal
• in the back)
You know, you're stocked backed
there. We got CD, CB, TV, phone,
full bar. I even know a couple
of Teddy Bears...
(to McClane)
...Or is he married?
MCCLANE
Married.
WILLIAM
She live out here?
MCCLANE
As of six months ago.
WILLIAM
And you live in New York?
MCCLANE
You're nosey, you know that,
William?
f^ WILLIAM
Hey, I'm sorry. I got to quit
doing that, you know.
(CONTINUED)
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MCCLANE
That's okay.
WILLIAM
So, you divorced or what?
McClane gives up.
MCCLANE
She had a good job, it turned
into a great career.
WILLIAM
But meant her moving here.
MCCLANE
You're fast.
I
/ WILLIAM
So, why didn't you come?
MCCLANE
'Cause I'm a New York cop not an
IBM salesman. I don't just get up
and move.
WILLIAM
(to the point)
And you didn't think she'd make
it here?
McClane grins, he likes William even if he is direct.
MCCLANE
You're fast, William.
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Scene 3 - Arrivals and Introductions
A miniature Christmas tree with blinking lights sits on a
desk of SERGEANT AL POWELL, thirties, a man who's had enough
experience to know how bad it can be out there. He speaks
in low tones to the telephone.
POWELL
(defensively)
Yeah, yeah, honey, don't go
crazy —
(listening, then)
— I know you're pregnant. I know
you get cravings. I didn't say I
wouldn't buy *em, I just said I wish
you'd buy *em in big boxes...
(CONTINUED)
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Suddenly Powell's miniature tree is knocked on its side and a
handgun goes spinning across the desk into his lap. He looks
up to see two cops trying to subdue a struggling suspect in
front of his desk. COP #1 looks up at Powell and grins.
COP #1
Don't worry, Al, it ain't loaded.
POWELL
(to phone)
I got to go.
Powell hangs up and puts the heavy firearm on the desk as the
two cops shove the suspect into a chair in front of him.
COP #2 stares at the suspect and points at Powell.
I COP #2
Sergeant Powell's a very deadly
man with a handgun, so don't try
anything or he might kill you...
by accident.
The two cops laugh. Powell ignores them, and expertly rolls
in a sheet of paper into his main weapon — the typewriter.
POWELL
(to suspect)
Full name, last name first...
11 -INT. LIMO - NIGHT 11
McClane and William pull up in front of the Nakatomi building,
a forty story, ultra-modern highrise in Century City.
WILLIAM
You here to patch things up?
MCCLANE
I'm here to try. Thanks for the
ride, William.
He gets out and William sits a moment in the car alone before
getting out to help him with the bags.
12 EXT. NAKATOMI BUILDING - NIGHT 12
William climbs out of the limo and stops by the trunk.
WILLIAM
What happens if you don't get back
with your wife? Where*re you going
to stay?
(CONTINUED)
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MCCLANE
I'll find someplace.
He looks up at the highrise lit by huge spotlights, then
back at William who's made no attempt to open the trunk.
WILLIAM
Look, I'm going to pull into the
parking garage and wait. You score
with your wife give me a call on
the car phone and I'11 leave your
bags inside at the desk. You strike
out...I'11 get you to a hotel.
He hands McClane a slip with the number on it.
MCCLANE
(taking the number)
Thanks. What're you going to do?
WILLIAM
Don't worry about William...
(points to the
stuffed animal)
...He's going to hang out with his
friend here till you call.
13 INT. NAKATOMI LOBBY - NIGHT 13
Beautiful and deserted. A large Christmas tree stands next
to the security table where the GUARD sits. McClane goes to
the desk and signs in.
MCCLANE
Holly Gennaro. International Sales.
GUARD
Thirty-second floor...You can't miss
'em, they're the only ones left in
the place.
14 INT. ELEVATOR - NIGHT 14
McClane riding the elevator. He rotates his head. Getting
the cricks out. As he approaches the 32nd floor we
hear a tremendous THUMPING, THROBBING NOISE. McClane
stops and listens before he realizes — it's the party. As
the doors open the noise attacks us.
15 32ND FLOOR - SAME 15
McClane moves around the edge of the party and stops a
dancing woman who points to Holly's "office.
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16 HOLLY'S OFFICE - SAME 16
McClane pauses at the door and notes the name, then knocks.
It is opened by Takagi. Ellis sits behind Holly's secretary's
desk and nervously taps a tightly-rolled dollar bill.
MCCLANE
Sorry, I was looking for —
TAKAGI
Holly Gennaro?
MCCLANE
Yeah...
TAKAGI
Then you must be John McClane.
(introducing
himself)
Joe Takagi, John. How was your
ride in?
Ellis subtly runs a checking finger under his nose then stands
to shake hands with McClane. McClane takes it all in.
MCCLANE
Nice. Do I have you to thank for
that?
TAKAGI
Or blame for it. She was going to
meet you herself, but I threw some
things at her at the last minutes.
(motions to Ellis)
John, this is Harry Ellis one of our
shining stars in international sales.
(to Ellis)
John is a New York policeman.
ELLIS
(shaking hands)
Pleasure to meet you. I've heard
a lot about you from your ex-...
(correcting
himself)
...your wife.
We can tell by McClane's look that he doesn't think much of
Ellis. McClane holds Ellis' look and runs his finger subtly
under his nose.
MCCLANE
(low, to Elli.s)
You missed some.
(CONTINUED)
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MCCLANE (Cont.)
(to Takagi)
Well, you fellas throw quite a
Christmas party.
Ellis automatically puts his hand to his face before
realizing his face is clean.
TAKAGI
Well, actually it's also a little
celebration for a deal we closed
this afternoon. A $150,000,000
deal. A deal we have Holly to
thank a lot for —
Holly enters. Seeing McClane momentarily stops her.
J
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HOLLY
(surprised)
John...Oh...Did you meet everyone? —
TAKAGI
No, we've been sticking spears in
^S*!S\ him...of course he has.
McClane and Holly look at each other for a moment awkwardly
then she kisses him on the cheek. The awkwardness pleases
Ellis.
TAKAGI
(to McClane)
She's made for this business.
Tough as nails.
ELLIS
Show him the watch.
He points to a new gold Rolex on Holly's wrist.
HOLLY
(giving him
a look)
I will later.
ELLIS
Ahh...Show him. Don't be
embarrassed.
(to McClane)
A little something to show how much
we appreciate her good work.
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Holly fixes Ellis with a lethal look.
MCCLANE
I'm sure I'll see it later. Right
now I could use a place to wash up.
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Scene 4 - Reunion in the Dark
A UPS truck turns off Olympic into the underground parking
garage of Nakatomi.
18 INT. PARKING GARAGE 18
It goes down the ramp and passes William's black limo. William
I is not visible in the front. The back windows are tinted.
19 INT. LIMO - SAME 19
William sits in the backseat. He is making a drink from the
bar with the TV on and his rap music blasting from the
cassette player, oblivious to the truck passing behind him.
20 INT. PARKING GARAGE - SAME 20
The UPS truck stops in front of the service elevator on the
next level down. As the truck idles, the uniformed driver
makes a note on his clipboard.
21 INT. ELLIS' OFFICE- WASHROOM - NIGHT 21
Holly sits in Ellis' office — a Sharper Image kind of place.
Through a door to the private washroom, she watches McClane
in his T-shirt finish washing his face.
HOLLY
Sorry about Ellis. He has a
hard time this time of year...
MCCLANE
Hey, I know the type. He thought
he was God's greatest gift.
They both smile, a reminder of something past.
HOLLY
So, where are you staying? This
all happened so fast I didn't
even ask you on the phone.
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McClane finishes drying his face and steps to the doorway.
MCCLANE
Well, Cappy Roberts retired out
here a couple years ago. He said
I could bunk with him.
HOLLY
Oh...Where does he live?
MCCLANE
Pomona.
HOLLY
PomonaI You'll be in the car
the whole time...Look, let's make
this easy. I have a spare bedroom.
It's not huge, but the kids would
love to have you at the house.
McClane fixes her with a look.
MCCLANE
How about you?
HOLLY
(beat, honest)
I would too.
MCCLANE
I feel kinda stupid asking how
things are going, that seems
pretty obvious.
He nods at her new watch. She rubs her watchband
self-consciously and when she looks up McClane is staring
at her.
MCCLANE
God, you look good.
HOLLY
(pleased, smiles)
You don't look half-bad yourself.
They lock eyes for a moment, but it's an intense moment that
says a lot about how they still feel about each other. Just
then a man and a woman, both a little tipsy, open the door
to the office, see that its occupied and beat a hasty
/Si^V retreat. The interruption temporarily dents the mood.
Holly tries to smile.
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21 ' CONTINUED: (2) 21
HOLLY
Welcome to L.A...I've missed you.
She leaves and McClane smiles to himself — it's a start. He
looks at all the lavishness around him and picks up a phone
on the wall by the toilet. He opens his wallet and takes out
the phone number William gave him. A photo of his children
stops him.
22 INSERT - THE PHOTO 22
Holly and the two children we saw at Holly's house. He flips
it over. On the back in crude but painstaking hand of a
five-year-old it says: WE MISS YOU, DADDY. LOVE JOHN (and
in more primative letters) LUCY.
23 MCCLANE 23
returns the photo to his wallet, dials the number and begins
to unlace his shoes.
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Scene 5 - The Heist
The Guard at the front desk notices the UPS truck on his
monitor. The Guard continues to watch the UPS truck and
only half notices as a BMW pulls up in front of the building
and two extremely well-dressed, BUSINESSMEN (late twenties)
climb out and start up the stairs for the door. As they
cross the lobby to the Guard's table to sign-in, we hear
•their conversation.
MAN #1 (THEO)
(animatedly)
...So, Kareem rebounds — listen,
this is a great play — feeds Worthy
on the break, over to A.C., to Magic,
back to Worthy in the lane and —
Suddenly the other man pulls out a Walther pistol with a
silencer and aims it at the Guard's forehead. Before the
Guard can react he pulls the trigger.
MAN #1 (THEO)
(dryly)
Boom...two points.
(The speed with which the murder takes place sets the tone
for the rest of the action.) The killer moves behind the
desk, stepping over a small pool of blood from the Guard.
His name is KARL, big, with long blond hair like a rock
drummer. Karl takes off the silencer and looks at the
(CONTINUED)
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24 CONTINUED: 24
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video monitor of the UPS truck. The first man, THEO, opens
his briefcase and takes out a portable CB radio.
THEO
(on CB)
We're in.
25 ON THE SCREEN 25
the driver nods at the security camera as several men climb
out the rear of the van and begin unloading wooden crates•by
the service elevator.
26 INT. BUILDING OPERATIONS CONTROL ROOM 26
Theo enters the small control room and comfortably sits
behind a maintenance keyboard. With a few typed-in commands
}
he locks down the passenger elevators up to the 32nd floor.
i Then with several more computer commands, .systematically
causes:
27 THE HEAVY STEEL GATES TO THE PARKING GARAGE CLOSE 27
28 THE ESCALATORS TO THE GARAGE COME TO A STOP 28
29 THE POWERFUL BLOWERS IN THE AIR CONDITIONING TOWER 29
ON THE ROOF SUDDENLY STOP AND WE HEAR JUST THE
TRICKLE OF WATER IN THE COOLING TOWER
30 CONTROL ROOM - SAME 30
Theo finishes typing and disconnects the keyboard and pulls
out the wires from beneath the panel.
31 INT. LOBBY - SAME 31
The doors to a service elevator open TO REVEAL HANS GRUBER,
impeccably dressed, lean and handsome, he steps out into the
lobby like he owns the building — and in a way he does.
Theo steps to the door of the control room and tosses Hans
the Guard's master keys. Hans goes to the front door and
locks it. He looks out at the street — not a creature is
stirring — Century City is quiet.
32 KARL 32
waits beside an elevator which opens REVEALING NINE MEN
dressed in fatigues, all armed with Kalashnikov machine guns
and carrying canvas kit bags. One of them, HEINZ, in his
twenties, goes to the dead guard and immediately begins
\ changing into the dead man's clothes.
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33 KARL 33
takes a tool case from the elevator and heads silently for
the basement stairwell.
34 THEO 34
leaves the control room and nods to Hans.
35 HEINZ 35
•
half-dressed in his uniform, takes his position behind the
front desk.
36 HANS 36
looks at his watch and seems pleased. He steps into the
service elevator with the others and presses the button for
1 the 32nd floor. The entire sequence has taken maybe sixty
( seconds.
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McClane, barefoot, his pant legs rolled up above his ankles.
He finishes dialing and waits for the party to answer.
/Jl//lfl"\ 38 INT. BUILDING BASEMENT - PHONE ROOM 38
A large sign says: PACIFIC BELL EMPLOYEES ONLY. Inside
Karl stands in front of an intimidating matrix of phone lines
— but what he has in mind won't require a doctorate in
Electrical Engineering. He focuses on four CPV plastic
conduits which run out of the main panel over his head and
opens his case REVEALING a compact electric chain saw.
39 INT. ELLIS' BATHROOM - SAME 39
McClane on the phone.
MCCLANE
(on phone)
William?...
40 INT. LIMO 40
William is reclining on the seat. The music is on so loud
that it is nearly impossible to hear.
WILLIAM
So, man, what's the story?
/liBBNy 41 INT. PHONE ROOM - SAME 41
Karl cuts through the four tubes one at a time.
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42 INT. ELLIS' BATHROOM - SAME 42
ytf&*^S McClane on the phone.
MCCLANE
I'm just calling to —
He stops and gently taps the phone cradle. No dial tone.
43 INT. LIMO 43
William looks at the phone.
WILLIAM
W h a t ? — M r . Mac, you there?
He turns down the music but there is no one on the line.
WILLIAM
(to himself)
Well, call me back, John. You got
the number.
He hangs up and turns the volume back up.
44 ELLIS' OFFICE 44
He hangs up the phone and goes into Ellis' office and picks
up the phone on the desk. It too is dead.
\ 45 INT. SERVICE ELEVATOR 45
Hans and the others approaching the 32nd floor. As they grow
closer we hear the noise of the speakers growing louder and
louder. The men cock their weapons and brace themselves as
the car stops and the elevator doors open. ON THE SOUND OF
GUNSHOTS AND SCREAMS WE:
CUT TO:
46 INT. ELLIS' OFFICE 46
McClane grabs his shoulder harness off the back of the chair
and moves quickly to the doorway. He looks down the hall.
47 HIS P.O.V. 47
Two terrorists, FRANCO and TONY, armed with M-5 machine guns
searching the offices on the hall one by one. They open a
door, look in from the hallway, and move on quickly to the
next. They are four offices away and moving fast.
McClane looks across the corridor and sees the stairwell door
— too far to reach without being seen.
(*** 48 MCCLANE , . 48
steps back, throws off the safety on his Beretta and braces
himself.
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reach the office just before Ellis' and throw open the door
REVEALING the man and woman who interrupted Holly and
McClane a few minutes before, now in the throes of passionate
lovemaking on the desk. The two terrorists smile at each
other then enter the office.
A moment later the man, trying desperately to pull up his
pants and woman buttoning her blouse, are pushed out into
the hall and toward the party, by Tony. The other
terrorist. Franco, goes to Ellis' office and opens the door.
It is empty. Only McClane's shoes and coat remain.
50 INT. STAIRWELL - SAME 50
CLOSE ON McClane's bare feet padding quickly up the concrete
stairs, two at a time. We FOLLOW him up two flights, then
| out onto the:
51 34TH FLOOR 51
i
| Unlike the 32nd it has no surrounding offices, just one
| large secretarial pool with hundreds of desks, hundreds of
phones, dark and deserted. McClane moves quickly to a desk
and picks up a phone. It's out.
P MCCLANE
1
Shit...
Out the windows a high-rise apartment building a half-block
away sparkles with lights. McClane stares at a woman in her
kitchen. We SEE her wipe her hands on an apron and turn to
answer a telephone. It seems so easy.
McCLANE
Think...
52 INT. 32ND FLOOR (HOSTAGE FLOOR) - SAME 52
The employees have been herded to the center of the room
where the desks have been pulled back. Many people are
whimpering. Holly looks around the room for McClane; she
sees Ellis. Takagi, stubbornly refusing to cooperate is
pushed toward the group. Hans steps up on top of a desk
and looks over the group.
HANS
(soothing, in control)
Ladies and gentlemen, due to Nakatomi's
legacy of greed in Third World countries,
it is about to be made an example. You,
{ unfortunately, are part of the recompense.
(CONTINUED)
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HANS (Cont.)
We are going to collect identification.
This is not a pillage — we do not want
your wallets or money. A driver's
license or ID with a photo will do nicely.
Several of the terrorists begin collecting IDs as people hunt
for ID.
HANS
At present we have no intentions of
hurting anyone. If our demands are
not met, however — expect that to
change.
(beat, smiles)
Your cooperation is appreciated.
f He steps down from the desk and goes into:
/
53 HOLLY'S OFFICE 53
where a terrorist with glasses, FRITZ, has begun to set up
operations. A large CB unit is placed on her desk and a TV
monitor is put on the credenza. While he works, Hans picks
up an 8x10 photo on the credenza.
y 54 CLOSE - THE PHOTO 54
The same one that we saw in McClane's wallet of Holly and
the children.
55 HANS 55
He puts the photo back. Franco (who checked Ellis' office)
brings McClane*s coat, socks and shoes. Hans examines the
clothes and looks at the man who brought them.
HANS
Is this all?
FRANCO
(nods)
Do you want us to search for him?
HANS
No. He can't signal for help and
he cannot get out.
Hans feels the fabric of McClane's topcoat as Franco leaves
and Takagi is brought to the office. Hans smiles.
jt0>&\
(CONTINUED)
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55 CONTINUED: 55
f*y HANS
(pleasantly)
Mr, Takagi, my name is Hans Gruber.
Would you come with me, please?
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Scene 7 - McClane Infiltrates Nakatomi Plaza
McClane pauses outside the stairwell door to the 38th floor,
he presses the handle and cracks the door open TO REVEAL a
computer floor. The-computer machinery drones on under the
lights behind plate glass windows. McClane quietly closes
the door and makes a note on a piece of paper.
57 CLOSE - THE PAPER 57
It is a listing of the floors and says:
» 32 Hostages
/ 33 ?
34 Open Floor
35 Open Floor
36 Cubicles
37 Cubicles and inside offices (TV
sets in inside office)
38 Computers
f* 58 MCCLANE 58
moves up the stairs to the next landing, the 39th floor, and
tries to open the door. It is locked. He keeps going up.
59 INT. SERVICE ELEVATOR - NIGHT 59
Hans, Takagi, Karl and Tony. Riding silently. Hans alone
seems relaxed. He whistles. We recognize it as
"Whistle While You Work."- He looks at Takagi*s suit.
HANS
Nice suit. John Philips...London?
TAKAGI
(surprised)
How the hell would you know?
HANS
(smiles)
I have two myself...
He continues whistling and enjoys Takagi's surprise.
HANS
f^' You are surprised a 'terrorist' would
know fine tailors?
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The answer is obvious. Hans smiles and lowers his voice as
if sharing an inside secret.
HANS
Rumor has it Arafat buys his there.
60 INT. STAIRWELL 60
McClane starts to open the stairwell door to the 40th Floor
when a NOISE above him gets his attention. He moves silently
up.one flight to the roof. Quietly, he cracks the door and
looks out onto a Machine floor on the lower level of the roof.
61 HIS P.O.V. 61
Three terrorists, JAMES, ULI and HEINRICH, unload the wooden
crates we saw in the garage from the service elevator. One
of them looks his way and:
62 MCCLANE 62
closes the door and slips back down the stairs, opening the
door to the next floor. Like the others, it is dark but we
instantly know from the paneling that he has reached an
executive floor. VOICES and a light at the end of the hallway
draw him in that direction.
63 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - 40TH FLOOR - NIGHT 63
CLOSE ON a scale model of a bridge. Constructed to exacting
detail. Hans admires it. Behind him are photographs of the
gorge where the bridge will be constructed and maps of
Central America. Karl, Tony and a wiry terrorist, MARCO,
listen. Takagi watches.
HANS
It's beautiful. I always enjoyed
models as a boy. The exactness, the
attention to detail. Beautiful...
TAKAGI
(defensively)
Contrary to what you people think,
that bridge and its construction will
open up that entire region to growth.
Hans straightens, looks hard at Takagi.
HANS
I believe you.
Takagi looks confused. Hans puts a friendly arm around
Takagi's shoulders and guides him into the adjacent boardroom
where Theo types in commands onto a built-in computer console.
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63 CONTINUED: 63
HANS
Mr. Takagi, I'm sure you've realized
that I didn't bring you up here to
look at models or debate your business
ethics.
Theo types at the console.
64 INSERT: SCREEN 64
It says: NAKATOMI INVESTMENT PENSION PLAN and a list of
Serial and CUSIP numbers. In one stroke they are deleted
from the screen. Then the next message comes up: ENTER
ACCESS NUMBER.
65 TAKAGI 65
He stops as Theo turns and faces him. He knows suddenly what
it's all about. Hans smiles at Takagi.
HANS
You can make our lives very easy,
Mr. Takagi.
TAKAGI
I don't know the code.
/$^&N
Hans slowly takes out his Walther and his silencer. He feels
his silencer a moment, as if making a decision, then slips it
back into his coat pocket. Takagi sees the gun.
TAKAGI
(more seriously)
Only three people know it, the CEO,
the Chief financial officer and the
Chairman. I'm not privy to such
information.
Hans presses the gun against Takagi's lapel.
HANS
(calmly)
You wouldn't lie to me, would you?
TAKAGI
(holding Hans' look)
No.
He gulps. Theo looks hard at Karl, who reluctantly meets
his look.
THEO
(to Karl)
I told you he wouldn't know.
(CONTINUED)
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Karl gives Theo five dollars — a private bet. Takagi takes
heart, but Hans doesn't put up his gun.
TAKAGI
I told you the truth.
HANS
And I believe you, Mr. Takagi...Now,
believe me. We didn't need the code...
and I'm going to kill you anyway.
He cocks the gun then hesitates, moves the barrel upward off
his suit.
HANS
Too nice a suit to ruin...
I He moves the barrel up Takagi*s neck, seemingly searching for
/ just the right spot. He pauses below Takagi's jaw, next to
his jugular and snuggles the barrel gently into the niche.
.Takagi looks around .the room. The others watch stoically.
Hans moves the barrel from the jugular to a point directly
over Takagi's adam's apple and finally seems satisfied. The
Exec locks eyes with Hans.
TAKAGI
I'm not scared of you.
HANS
I know...but you probably should be.
66 HALLWAY - ON MCCLANE - SAME 66
He presses his eye to the crack in the door just in time to
see Hans pull the trigger. In the tiny room it sounds like
Hiroshima. The blast knocks Takagi backwards onto his butt,
a gaping hole in his throat. He remains seated upright for
an instant, stunned, before Hans steps up and puts another
bullet in his chest.
67 CLOSE ON MCCLANE 67
He is stunned and moves back from the door holding his breath.
His gun bumps against the paneling.
68 ON HANS - TAKAGI'S OFFICE 68
He looks up at the sound.
HANS
What's that?
(CONTINUED)
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{ Marco turns to the door to the hallway where McClane was and
throws open the door. The long, darkened hallway is deserted.
He steps into the:
69 HALLWAY 69
and stops in front of the only door near the conference room
— a Supply Closet — and tries the door — it is locked.
MARCO
(to Hans)
Nothing.
70 CONFERENCE ROOM 70
Karl stares at the body of Takagi then looks up at Hans as
i Marco returns to the room.
' HANS
(to Karl)
Go supervise the work on the roof.
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Scene 8 - McClane's Confrontation with Tony
In the darkness of the closet we MAKE OUT McClane, pressed
against the wall. He listens to the footsteps moving away
and lets out a breath.
MCCLANE
(whispers)
Jesus, Williams, what're you doing
down there?
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72 INT. LIMO - PARKING GARAGE 72
William is on the car phone. The music is playing.
WILLIAM
I'm working, honey. Working hard.
•Course I'll be by later to pick you
up, have I ever lied to you? My boss?
He thinks I'm cruising down to San Diego...
73 SAFE ROOM - 39TH FLOOR 73
Hans and Theo enter the safe room. The huge corporate safe
looms in front of them. Theo places three kit bags onto a
table and rolls up his sleeves.
HANS
How long?
• •' THEO
(eyeing the safe)
Ask me in an hour.
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74 37TH FLOOR 74
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McClane moves out onto the 37th floor, angry at himself.
MCCLANE
Why the fuck didn't you stop him?
(beat)
Because, you ignorant sonofabitch,
you'd be dead, too. Think...think,
goddamnit!
Suddenly he looks up at the ceiling and sees a sprinkler head.
His look drops to the wall and focuses on a small red fire
alarm switch by the door.
75 INT. MAIN FLOOR - L.A. FIRE STATION - NIGHT 75
An alarm sounds. Quickly firemen move to their machines as
a voice of a 911 Dispatcher drones.
911 DISPATCHER
Main Wilshire units. Two alarm fire
at Nakatomi —
The voice continues as the station doors open and we:
CUT TO:
76 INT. NAKATOMI - GROUND FLOOR OPERATIONS ROOM - SAME 76
A fire alarm indicator light showing which floor has sounded
the fire alarm — suddenly begins flashing, emitting short,
loud beeps. Heinz, the terrorist in the guard's uniform and
manning the station, immediately picks up his CB.
77 37TH FLOOR - SAME 77
McClane stands at windows looking Northward for fire trucks.
Suddenly we SEE the flashing red lights of two trucks in
traffic two miles away.
MCCLANE
C'mon, baby...c'mon.
78 INT. SERVICE ELEVATOR - ON HANS - SAME 78
He rides the elevator back to 32nd floor with Tony.
HANS
(calmly, to Heinz on CB)
Use the portable phone. Call 911,
give them your badge number and cancel
/"**> the alarm...then disable the system.
He ponders the problem of McClane, looks across at Tony, and
presses the talk button again.
(CONTINUED)
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78 CONTINUED: 78
HANS
Heinz? What floor did the alarm go off?
79 37TH FLOOR - SAME 79
McClane stands silhouetted against the window. In the distance
he can see another fire truck swing off Santa Monica onto
Avenue of the Stars.
Suddenly the red light on the first truck goes out, then on
the second. McClane watches in disbelief. The trucks slow
and turn down separate side streets, heading for home.
MCCLANE
(realizing)
No...
Just then the elevator bell rings and we HEAR the ELEVATOR
DOORS OPEN. A figure (Tony) slips into the shadows — his
machine gun drawn. We MOVE WITH HIM from the elevator area
until he reaches the light switch and throws it illuminating
the entire floor. McClane is gone.
TONY
(calling out)
Okay, you! I know you're here. I
don't want to hurt you.
80 ON MCCLANE 80
under a desk. He takes in his options.
81 HIS P.O.V. 81
the feet of Tony. They move slowly in his direction. McClane
looks down the aisle next to the windows. It leads to a series
of office cubicles at the other end of the floor and is a clear
path if he can make it past Tony.
82 TONY 82
He moves steadily toward the area where we saw McClane.
TONY
Your signal was cancelled. No one is
coming to help you. So come out and
join the others.
He fingers the trigger of his machine gun.
TONY
I promise I won't hurt you.
(CONTINUED)
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C* Moving more confidently, he steps up to McClane's desk, then
around it and fires a blast into the space. It is empty. As
the SOUND OF THE MACHINE GUN FADES he listens and hears another
SOUND — a low HUMMING NOISE coming from the other end of the
room near the cubicles.
Tony heads toward the noise. Sensing a trap, he moves past
each cubicle carefully, checking each office until he reaches
the doorway of the last one. The sound is just around the
partition. He tenses, then spins into the cubicle.
83 TONY'S P.O.V. 83
an electric typewriter left on.
84 TONY 84
i
i grins at his nervousness. He turns it off as McClane steps
INTO FRAME behind him, his gun aimed at Tony.
MCCLANE
Save that energy.
Tony slowly turns around and sees McClane*s detective badge
pinned to his shirt.
MCCLANE
Put down your gun.
Tony doesn't. McClane cocks his Beretta. Tony watches him
calmly.
TONY
You won't do it.
MCCLANE
Why not?
TONY
Because you are a policeman.
MCCLANE
Try me.
Tony spins to the side and McClane fires, hitting him in the
arm, but the big man's momentum slams McClane into a filing
cabinet and sends his pistol into the hall. Tony reaches for
his machine gun, but McClane kicks him into the desk. He locks
his arms around the big man's neck in a hold that sends Tony
reeling into the hall. McClane holds on as they slam into the
glass door of a fire hose cabinet shattering the glass. They
careen across the hall into the stairwell door, opening it,
and crash into:
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85 STAIRWELL LANDING 85
then down the concrete steps into the wall on the landing below.
For a moment, both men lie still, then McClane moves and we SEE
the concrete becomes wet under the'big man as Tony's bladder
opens. McClane, still holding onto Tony's neck, releases it
and the man's head flops sickeningly to the side.
For a moment McClane just looks at the dead man, stunned, then
a HISSING SOUND coming from Tony's kit bag gets his attention.
He opens it and finds the terrorist's CB.
TIME CUT TO:
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Scene 9 - McClane's Rooftop Infiltration and Distress Call
Tony's body sits slumped in a secretary's chair — a note
attached to his chest. McClane sits on the floor in front of
him hurriedly lacing up the dead terrorist's boots on his own
; feet. He ties the last lace and tries to take a couple of
i steps. He nearly falls flat. Quickly he starts taking the
boots off.
MCCLANE
A zillion terrorists in the building
and I kill the one with feet smaller
than my sister.
He yanks off the boots and tosses them on Tony's lap, then
pushes buttons for the 33rd and 32nd floors. He slings Tony's
kit bag over his shoulder along with the dead man's machine gun.
A wooden desk ruler protrudes from McClane's back pocket.
The elevator doors close and the car starts down. After it's
dropped only half a floor, McClane forces the doors open with
his fingers — stopping the car between floors.
Using the ruler he blocks open the inside doors, then opens
the outside doors of the floor above (34th) with his fingers
and pulls himself up onto the carpeted floor, then up onto the
roof of the car. Once on the roof of the car he reaches over
the edge and removes the ruler, closing the inside doors and
setting the car in motion again.
87 32ND FLOOR (HOSTAGE FLOOR) - NIGHT 87
The elevator bell rings and Fritz, guarding the area, sees
Tony's body in the chair. Hans comes to the elevator with
Franco, lifts Tony's chin and sees that his neck has been
snapped. He removes the note and reads it aloud.
HANS
'Now I have a machine gun.'
/tfnl£*\
FRITZ
Maybe a security guard we overlooked.
(CONTINUED)
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87 CONTINUED: 87
Hans lifts Tony's chin again, lets the head flop over.
HANS
Would you do this to someone if you
had a gun?
FRITZ
(slightly spooked)
We have to do something, Hans.
Hans sighs and looks at the dead man.
HANS
Yes...we have to tell Karl his brother
is dead. Tell him to come down.
As Fritz calls Karl on his CB, Hans looks at Franco.
HANS
Franco, take the body upstairs out of
sight. I want these people kept calm
for as long as possible. Come back down
the stairs and check each floor...I want
to see the person who did this.
88 INT. ELEVATOR SHAFT - CAR ROOF - ON MCCLANE - SAME 88
On top of the car, listening to the conversation below. Franco
and Fritz step into the car and the doors on the elevator close.
The car accelerates upward and McClane grabs onto the heavy,
grease-coated cables to keep his balance. Already his clothes
are soiled; his face and feet, arms and hair are dark from the
dirt and sweat.
The car speeds up the shaft — passing the car bringing Karl
down to the hostage floor — and stops at the 40th floor. The
doors open and McClane hears them roll the chair with the body
off the car. McClane looks up.
89 MCCLANE'S P.O.V. 89
A metal catwalk runs around the inside of the elevator shaft.
90 MCCLANE 90
pulls himself up onto it. As he moves along the catwalk
looking for a way out, he passes an unmarked metal door, 2'x3'.
McClane pushes it open and looks in.
91 MCCLANE'S P.O.V. 91
Total darkness.
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92 MCCLANE 92
z**^ takes out a rifle cartridge from Tony's kit bag and lobs it
1
into the void. It is a full four seconds until we hear its
nonexplosive chatter on the ground below. You don't have to
be a mathematics whiz to know it's a long drop.
MCCLANE
Jesus...
He moves cautiously around a corner and we SEE a metal ladder
leading up to a door marked PUMP ROOM. Opening the door
McClane enters a darkened:
93 PUMP ROOM 93
damp and full of pipes and goes to another door. He cracks the
door and looks out.
94 MCCLANE*S P.O.V. 94
The lower level of the roof. Open and deserted. Only a
heliport above him is higher.
95 32ND FLOOR (HOSTAGE FLOOR) - HOLLY'S OFFICE - SAME 95
CLOSE ON A PAIR OF LARGE HANDS as they squeeze into fists so
^ tight it drains all color from the fingers. Controlled rage.
( We PULL BACK TO REVEAL the hands belong to Karl, who stands
in Hans' office.
KARL
Now.
HANS
(firmly)
No. Theo has not finished. He must
be done before the police arrive.
96 EXT. ROOF - NIGHT 96
McClane climbs to the heliport and leans against the leeward side
of a wall surrounding it. Shielded from wind, he pulls out the
CB, turns to channel nine, and starts broadcasting.
MCCLANE
Mayday, Mayday, tell police terrorists
have seized the Nakatomi building —
97 INT. OFFICE - KCBS-TV - SAME 97
DICK THORNBURG, local TV news reporter, talking on the phone to
his girlfriend also hears the distress call. He stops listening
/i»«»\ to her for a moment and turns up his scanner.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
— I repeat...unknown number of foreign
nationals armed with automatic weapons
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97 CONTINUED: 97
MCCLANE'S VOICE (Cont.)
are holding at least thirty people
hostage at Nakatomi, Century City...
Somebody answer me, goddamnit!
98 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 98
Hans'and Karl also hear the clear signal over Hans' CB.
HANS
The roof.
99 INT. LOS ANGELES EMERGENCY DISPATCH CENTER - SAME 99
A SUPERVISOR weaves her way back from the break room toward a
DISPATCHER who is monitoring the call.
DISPATCHER
It's the same address we got a
crank fire call at earlier tonight...
SUPERVISOR
I'll handle it.
She plugs in her headset.
SUPERVISOR
(to McClane)
Attention. This is an authorized
police frequency —
MCCLANE'S VOICE
Listen to me, this is an emergency.
I need police backup, now. Tell
police, terrorists have killed one
hostage already —
100 INT. KCBS - ON THORNBURG - SAME 100
listening more closely. On a hunch he reaches over and starts
recording the conversation.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
— and have the building heavily
fortified.
101 INT. SERVICE ELEVATOR - ON KARL - SAME 101
with Franco and Fritz.
KARL
No one kills him but me.
It's an order and the look he gives the other two backs it up. He
fits a fresh magazine into his rifle as the elevator opens to the
roof.
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102 EXT. UPPER ROOF - ON MCCLANE - SAME 102
He is almost breathless as he finishes his call.
MCCLANE
...and they have cut all the phone
and emergency communication lines.
That's all the information I have,
now. Over.
He releases the talk button. There is a pause and then his
radio crackles to life again with the Supervisor's voice.
SUPERVISOR'S VOICE
(o.s.)
I repeat. This is an authorized
police frequency. Any unauthorized
use will be investigated by police —
MCCLANE
(to the radio)
Then send them, goddamnit! What the
hell 'you people want — a fucking
engraved invitation!?
Suddenly machine gun shells rip into the concrete wall in front
of him. The noise is deafening as we:
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Scene 10 - Intense Pursuit and Narrow Escape
Both Supervisor and Dispatcher reach for their headsets in pain
from the INTENSE SOUND and:
104 INT. KCBS (THORNBURG'S OFFICE) - SAME 104
Thornburg immediately hangs up on his girlfriend and yells over
his shoulder to his assistant in the next room.
THORNBURG
Mary! Call Sam. Tell him I need
a crew, now!
105 EXT. ROOF - ON MCCLANE - SAME 105
Running. Tracer bullets rip into the wall behind him. He
reaches the corner and sees the two other terrorists moving
toward him. Before they see him, he leaps down to the next
level out of range of Karl.
106 INT. EMERGENCY DISPATCH - SAME 106
The Supervisor and Dispatcher listen in stunned silence^ The
shots sounded real enough...
SUPERVISOR
(to Dispatcher)
Have a Black and White do a drive-by.
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107 INT. 7-11 - ON POWELL 107
f* He puts two packs of pink Hostess "Twinkies" and his police
radio down on the counter in front of a young male CLERK, who
stifles a smile. Another teenage employee behind the counter
also smothers a laugh.
CLERK
Is that...all, Sir?
He tries not to look at Powell for fear of breaking up
altogether.
POWELL
They're for my wife. She's pregnant.
The clerk nods and puts them in a bag. Suddenly Powell's
Police Radio crackles to life.
DISPATCHER'S VOICE/RADIO
6421 to One Adam Ten, over.
Powell picks up the radio.
POWELL
One Adam Ten, go ahead.
DISPATCHER'S VOICE/RADIO
yA|IT?i'*\ Investigate a code two at 15433
Avenue of the Stars.
Powell grabs the bag and immediatley heads for the door as the
two employees break into laughter.
CLERK
Wonder what a 'Code Two' is...cupcake
alert?
108 EXT. ROOF - ON MCCLANE - NIGHT 108
running for his life, from Fritz and Franco, doesn't realize he
is being herded around the building toward Karl. Suddenly
McClane turns a corner and sees Karl. The big man fires a
burst and McClane ducks back stopping at the exterior door to
the pump room he used before. It is locked from the inside.
He blows the lock off with a burst from his machine gun and
slips into the darkness of the:
109 PUMP ROOM - SAME 109
Moving quickly through the pump room, McClane picks his way
over the same ground as a few minutes before and opens the
door to the elevator shaft. The dimly lit shaft yawns before
/?W?>\ him. He starts down the ladder back to the catwalk.
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110 EXT. THE ROOF - SAME 110
\ Franco and Fritz reach the pump room door and wait for Karl,
who leads the way into the darkness of the pump room.
111 ELEVATOR SHAFT - ON MCCLANE - SAME 111
on the far stretch of catwalk. He turns the corner, out of
view of the pump room door, moves down the back side of the
catwalk past the small air shaft door, and stops — he's
reached a dead end — the catwalk ends, the elevator is gone.
112 INT. PUMP ROOM - ON KARL - SAME 112
His flashlight beam dances around the interior of the room.
He starts to open the door to the elevator shaft when
suddenly their radio crackles with Hans' voice.
HANS' VOICE
Karl? Franco? Where is he?
FRANCO
In the elevator shaft.
*
HANS' VOICE
The elevators are down here. Lock
him in.
Karl doesn't answer.
HANS' VOICE
(more firmly)
Lock him in. That's an o r —
Karl turns off his radio. In the light of their flashlights,
the two other terrorists look at Karl in stunned disbelief.
He opens the door to the elevator shaft.
113 INT. ELEVATOR SHAFT - ON MCCLANE - SAME 113
He backtracks to the air shaft door, strikes the lighter from
Tony's kit bag and looks in.
114 MCCLANE'S P.O.V. 114
The air shaft. The lighter dimly illuminates four walls
of smooth aluminum disappearing into darkness. Moving the
light in further, he sees something else — the dark outline
of a horizontal air conditioning duct — nine feet down the
side and leading into the guts of the building.
35
115 MCCLANE 115
f* extinguishes his light, looks at the strap on his kit bag.
116 INT. ELEVATOR SHAFT (OPPOSITE SIDE) - SAME 116
Karl steps off the ladder to the catwalk and unslings his
machine gun.
117 CLOSE - BRASS CLIPS 117
from McClane's kit bag. One has been clipped to each end of
his machine gun making a long sling.
118 MCCLANE 118
braces the gun across the outside opening of the air shaft door
and lowers himself into the:
119 AIR SHAFT 119
holding onto the canvas sling with his elbows bent, like doing
a chin-up.
His feet slowly move down the smooth aluminum walls until they
reach the top of the air duct, then dangle in the open space.
He straightens his arms to give him length enough to touch the
/fiflJPv, bottom edge of the duct. Suddenly he feels something give way
above him and looks up.
120 CLOSE ON THE CLIPS 120
Slowly the brass clips start bending under McClane's weight.
121 ON KARL 121
He moves steadily toward the corner.
122 CLOSE - MCCLANE'S TOES 122
now only inches from the bottom edge. McClane's arms are fully
extended now. He hears Karl on the metal catwalk. His muscles
strain and quiver.
123 THE CLIPS 123
They are opening wider until one side bends all the way back —
and snaps.
124 ON MCCLANE 124
falling. He grabs the ledge of the air duct as he falls and
his body slams into the aluminum wall with.a echoing BOOM.
Above him on the catwalk the rifle rattles on the metal outside
the door.
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125 ON KARL 125
{***• Around the corner Karl freezes, unsure of the sound, then starts
slowly for the corner.
126 ON MCCLANE 126
holding onto the ledge by his hands. With every ounce of
strength he tries to pull himself up into the horizontal duct,
clawing for a hold.
127 ON KARL 127
He rounds the corner and sees McClane's rifle lying beneath the
doorway. He moves to the small door, shines his light and aims
his rifle down into the air shaft ready to fire.
128 HIS P.O.V. 128
The shaft is deserted. Moving his light around he sees the air
duck. Without hesitation he turns and backtracks to the pump
room door.
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Scene 11 - Cat and Mouse in the Air Ducts
He lies exhausted and motionless in the narrow crawl space.
He awkwardly fishes out the lighter from his shirt pocket and
^rx flicks it on.
130 HIS P.O.V. 130
Not for claustrophobics — a long, dark and narrow corridor.
There's no light at the end.
MCCLANE
(dryly)
Whew...for a moment there I
was worried.
He turns out his lighter and starts crawling.
131 INT. PUMP ROOM 131
Karl climbs the ladder to the pump room door where Franco and
Fritz wait.
KARL
Quickly...Follow me.
He moves through the pump room and goes outside.
132 INT. AIR DUCT - SAME 132
McClane crawls to a'junction. To his right he sees a vent twenty
feet away. The light looks' wonderful to him and he moves towards
it.
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133 INT. LOWER ROOF - MACHINE FLOOR - SAME 133.
Karl opens the door from the roof Franco and Fritz behind him.
He points to a series of rooms near the elevator shaft and the
three men split up, each going to a separate room. Karl opens
the door to the:
134 MACHINE ROOM 134
and looks up. The ceiling is crisscrossed with air ducts.
He fires a burst into the ducts.
135 INT. AIR DUCT - SAME 135
McClane remains motionless in the air duct. Three quarter-sized
holes inches from his face show how close Karl came to nailing
him. Sweat covers his face, drips silently onto the aluminum.
136 MACHINE ROOM 136
!*
/ Karl listens patiently for sound. Just then the two other
terrorists return.
FRANCO
Nothing.
Karl hesitates a moment, fighting his instincts before finally
/$£\ turning to go. Suddenly the duct McClane is in groans slightly
under his weight. Karl stops and looks up at the matrix of
aluminum duct work, trying to single out the source of the sound,
He steps back into the room and raises his rifle. Holding it
upright he presses the barrel up into the belly of McClane's air
duct, feeling for weight — the weight of a body.
137 INSIDE THE AIR DUCT 137
McClane sees the indention of the barrel pressing into the
aluminum fifteen feet away. There is a pause and another
indention three feet closer. He can hear Karl's footsteps on
the concrete — moving slowly below the duct.
138 ON KARL 138
His eyes are fixed above him on the air duct. He presses the
barrel up again. Still nothing.
139 ON MCCLANE 139
Silently he moves his hand to his breast and slowly draws his
Beretta. The next indention presses up six feet away. McClane
points his gun downward and waits.
/&*• 140 KARL 14 0
stops directly below him. The barrel starts up and just touches
the duct under McClane when Franco returns to the door and calls.
(CONTINUED)
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140 CONTINUED: 140
/fffift\
FRANCO
Karl! Police! Come now.
Karl hesitates then lowers his gun and leaves.
141 CLOSE - MCCLANE 141
He hears the door close and lowers his head.
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Scene 12 - Race Against Time at the News Desk
Dick Thornburg and his news editor, SAM, in the control booth
where we're in the countdown to the 11 o'clock news.
THORNBURG
What do you mean you can't cut
1
me a crew?
/ SAM
I mean people want to go home for
christsake...it's Christmas Eve.
THORNBURG
Sam, I heard shots five minutes ago.
We've got to move on it.
SAM
I've got Simon swinging by from the
Santa Sing on Melrose. If it's
anything we'll cut to him...
From behind the news desk pretty-boy anchorman, HARVEY JOHNSON,
looks up at the booth, calls to Sam over his mike.
HARVEY
(panicked)
Sam, I don't have the Gladden report!
SAM
(over the booth mike,
to Harvey)
Keep your pants on Harvey.
(to the A.D.)
What've we got?
ASST. DIRECTOR
Fifteen seconds.
Sam finds the news report in his stack of papers and starts out
of the booth with Thornburg on his heels. We FOLLOW.
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142 CONTINUED: 142
THORNBURG
(angrily)
I'm not sitting on this for Simon,
I'm going out there! And if you
don't cut me a goddamn truck, I'm
going to the parking lot and steal
one!
Both news anchors, Sam and all the floor personnel look up.
They're in their final seconds. The FLOOR MANAGER worriedly
counts off, "9...8.. .7. .. " Harvey looks angrily at Thornburg.
HARVEY
Give us a break how 'bout it,
Thornburg.
FLOOR MANAGER
...Four, Three —
THORNBURG
Eat a big one, Harve.
FLOOR MANAGER
...One.
He points at Harvey who automatically smiles as the red light
goes on, but it's obvious Thornburg has wrecked his concentration
HARVEY
(beat)
Uhh...Good evening, this is...
Harvey...Johnson.
WOMAN
And I'm Gail Wallens, and this
is Nightline News at Eleven.
The program rolls its intro tape and Harvey shoots Thornburg a
look that could kill. Thornburg smiles at his handiwork.
SAM
(sharply, to Thornburg)
Take Roberts and number four and
get the hell out of here.
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Scene 13 - Confrontation in the Nakatomi Building
The street is empty, quiet. A lone police black-and-white pulls
out of the shadows of a side street and begins a slow cruise
toward the Nakatomi building.
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144 ON POWELL 144
f* Driving, alone. He stares up at the dark tower. It seems calm.
Lights on the 32nd and 40th floors. Powell slows to a stop and
scans the premises. In the lobby we SEE Heinz, sitting behind
the desk. Powell reports to his radio.
POWELL
Guard inside. No signs of
disturbance'... I' m going up for
a closer look.
He pulls in and parks in the front.
145 INT. MACHINE ROOM - SAME 145
McClane punches out a ceiling vent and drops down into the
machine room. For a moment he stands, listening for sounds
of movement. The floor is quiet. He goes to the stairwell.
146 EXT. ROOF - SAME 146
The edge of the roof. Suddenly a tall terrorist, HEINRICH,
moves along the wall and looks over at Powell's car.
147 INT. 3RD FLOOR - SAME 147
The elevator doors open and Karl, Franco and Fritz step out
onto the darkened floor. We SEE large number "3" painted on
the doors of this floor. They move quickly toward the windows
on the Avenue of the Stars side where a terrorist, ALEXANDER,
with a BAR rifle has set up a machine gun nest. Directly below
him we SEE Powell's car.
148 32ND FLOOR (HANS'OFFICE) - SAME 148
Hans watches from above. He raises his CB.
HANS
(his usual calm)
Heinz ?
149 INT. LOBBY - SAME 149
Heinz picks up his CB. He watches Powell coming up the stairs
toward the door.
HEINZ
(to CB)
Yes?
HANS' VOICE
Let him in.
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150 EXT. FRONT DOOR OF NAKATOMI - SAME 150
Powell tries the front doors. Locked. Heinz comes hustling
across and unlocks the door.
HEINZ
Something wrong officer?
Powell steps in and looks around.
POWELL
We got an emergency call that
there was a problem here.
151 INT. 40TH FLOOR - BOARD ROOM - SAME 151
McClane makes his way to the Avenue of the Stars side of the
building, enters the board room where Rivers was shot. McClane
goes to the windows and looks down at the street.
i
. / 152 HIS P.O.V. 152
Powell's car.
MCCLANE
It's about time.
1
^N He lifts one of the big chairs and swings it at the window.
, ( The tempered glass whitens on the first blow.
153 EXT. ROOF - SAME 153
HEINRICH, the terrorist on the roof hears a SOUND and looks
down and sees the board room window crack from McClane's blow.
He lifts his CB.
154 INT. LOBBY 154
Heinz watches confidently as Powell moves through the lobby
looking for signs of trouble. Suddenly, Heinz notices a pool
of blood from the shooting of the desk guard next to sign-in
table. He looks up just as Powell starts toward him.
155 BOARD ROOM - 40TH FLOOR 155
McClane draws the chair back for the final hit when a terrorist
(MARCO) appears at the door. Both men react, but Marco already
has his gun up. He fires a round at McClane. The bullets rip
into the table top and the chair, and McClane goes down behind
the table.
156 INT. 39TH FLOOR - SAFE ROOM 156
Theo, now in goggles, uses a huge machine to bore quarter-size
holes into the safe. He turns it off hears the gunshots on the
floor above. He moves into the outside room to listen better,
then looks back at.his kit bags of equipment as if making a
decision.
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157 INT. 40TH FLOOR - BOARD ROOM 157
Marco smiles and moves around to the other side of the table,
but finds no body. He looks around frantically then squats
beneath the table and sees:
158 MCCLANE 158
lying prone, his pistol trained on him.
MCCLANE
Drop it.
159 BOARD ROOM DOORWAY 159
Just then Heinrich, the terrorist on the roof, steps into,
the doorway. He sees McClane and starts to fire, but McClane
fires twice and kills him. Marco springs on top of the huge
table. McClane rolls on his back so he can cover either angle
! but it is clear that Marco is in the more enviable position.
/
160 ON MARCO 160
on the tabletop slams in a fresh magazine and smiles.
MARCO
You should have killed me when
/«"*, you had the chance...
He leans his machine gun over the edge.
161 MCCLANE 161
aims directly above him and fires twice into the underside of
the table. The bullets rip through the table and Marco.
162 SAFE ROOM - ON THEO 162
On the SOUND OF THE GUNSHOTS, he stops, listens.
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Scene 14 - Bloody Footprints and a Deadly Trap
Powell comes back to Heinz — moving steadily toward the table
and the pool of blood. He pauses next to the table, his shoe
just touching the blood, but he doesn't see it.
HEINZ
What exactly are you looking for?
POWELL
Well, we got a report of a
terrorist takeover.
HEINZ
(grins slowly,
looks around)
Ain't no Arabs in here.
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163 CONTINUED: 163
/*v . POWELL
No, I guess not...Well, I got a
pregnant wife at home wondering
what the hell's keeping her Twinkies...
(a slip, sees Heinz's
puzzled look)
Forget it. Merry Christmas.
HEINZ
Merry Christmas.
Powell starts toward the door. Heinz watches him and sees the
cop's first three steps leave bloody footprints, but Powell
doesn't see.
164 INT. 40TH FLOOR BOARD ROOM - SAME 164
McClane rolls out from under the table, goes to the windows,
and looks down in time to see Powell close his car door.
MCCLANE
Oh, man, don't even think about it.
He looks over his shoulder at the body of Marco.
/*N 165 INT. POWELL'S POLICE CAR - SAME 165
Powell checks-in on his radio.
POWELL
One Adam-nine to 6421. Code
four on that 436. Requesting
code eight. Over.
He releases the talk button and loosens his tie as he waits for
confirmation.
POWELL
(singing softly)
Ohhhh, you better watch out, you
better not cry —
DISPATCHER'S VOICE/RADIO
Roger, One Adam-nine. Clear to
code eight.
Powell hangs up the radio and puts the car into reverse.
POWELL
(to himself)
f« Thank you. Sir...
(CONTINUED)
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165 CONTINUED: 165
f* POWELL (Cont.)
(singing again louder)
...you better not pout I'm telling
you why...Santa Claus is coming to —
Suddenly Marco's body crashes onto the hood of his car.
POWELL
(terrified)
Shit!
(grabbing for his
radio)
6421, this is One Adam-nine —
Suddenly a barrage of machine gun fire from the 3rd floor drowns
out his call. Powell ducks and flattens against the seat as
bullets blow out the front window, covering him in glass. His
radio comes back, calmly.
DISPATCHER'S VOICE/RADIO
Roger, One Adam-nine, please repeat.
But Powell accelerates in reverse away from the building,
keeping his head low and praying he doesn't hit anything as
the bullets follow him digging into asphalt. A half block away
his car runs up onto the sidewalk and crashes into a store front.
Powell sits up and clutches the mike.
POWELL
One Adam-nine, under automatic rifle
fire at Nakatomi! Requesting
immediate backup and SWAT assistance...
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Scene 15 - Reinforcements Arrive
McClane looks down at Powell and grins.
MCCLANE
Welcome to the party, boys.
We've been missing you.
167 EXT. KCBS NEWS TRUCK - CENTURY CITY - NIGHT 167
Sirens wail as police cars arrive and barricades go up. The
KCBS news truck pulls up to a prime location.
168 INT. HOSTAGE WING - ON ELLIS - SAME 168
He leans back and closes his eyes, luxuriating in the
sound of WAILING POLICE SIRENS.
ELLIS
I never thought I'd love to
hear that sound.
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169 HANS' OFFICE 169
f* Stands by the window looking out at the arriving police cars
when suddenly his CB crackles to life.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Hey, Hans? Hope you got a good
view of this?
HANS
(to CB)
Congratulations, Mr. Barefoot
man on bringing reinforcements
even if they can't help you.
170 INT. 40TH FLOOR - ON MCCLANE - SAME 170
Moving down the corridor. Now armed with Marco's machine gun
< and carrying his kit bag, he seems more lethal.
MCCLANE
(to Hans, CB)
We'll see about that, buddy.
He turns off his radio and turns a corner when a door in front
of him suddenly swings open and Theo stands unarmed in the
doorway. McClane seems only a hairbreadth from firing but the
sight of the clean-cut man, not unlike a junior executive,
causes him to suddenly lower his gun.
MCCLANE
Jesus...You nearly gave me a
fucking heart attack.
Theo, realizing McClane doesn't suspect him of being one of the
group, suddenly grins.
THEO
(seeing McClane's
badge)
Thank God, you're here...
MCCLANE
Hey, I ain't the cavalry, fella.
C'mon we've got to keep moving.
He pushes Theo ahead of him and they move down the hall.
171 INT. 32ND FLOOR - SAME 171
Karl steps off the elevator and goes through the crowd of hostages
to report to Hans.
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171 CONTINUED: 171
KARL *
He killed Marco and threw his
body out the window. Heinrich and
Theo don't answer their calls.
Suddenly they hear Powell's voice over the CB.
POWELL'S VOICE
This is Sergeant Al Powell of the
Los Angeles Police Department.
If the person who radioed for
help can hear me, acknowledge this
transmission...1 repeat...
172 INT. 40TH FLOOR - ON MCCLANE - NIGHT 172
and Theo moving down the corridor, they hear the transmission
) also. McClane stops Theo and grabs his CB.
MCCLANE
(to CB)
That's okay, you got him. You
the guy in the car?
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' 173 EXT. POLICE OPERATIONS TRAILER 173
Powell stands in front of his destroyed cruiser and looks up
at the building. Behind him technicians, City Power and Light
personnel, SWAT officers in protective gear, move in all
directions. A trailer is being backed into a side street,
which will become the police center of operations. It is like
watching a small town being constructed right before your eyes,
POWELL
(to CB)
What's left of him. I left my
stomach over there. Can you
identify yourself?
MCCLANE
Not now. Let me tell you what I
can quickly, because I might have
to get out of here fast. These
guys mean business. Besides the
peashooters they went after you
with they've also got anti-tank
weapons and surface to air missies.
/?P\ POWELL
How many are there?
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f* MCCLANE
Don't know but I've killed three,
including the one who fell out
of Santa's sleigh.
POWELL
(dryly)
Yeah, let's not forget him.
MCCLANE
The leader goes by the name, Hans.
He's locked down the elevators.
Also, I haven't found one of them
yet who didn't carry a radio so you
can bet they're monitoring this
call. Channel twenty-six seems to
be their inter-office number but
they move it around and it's in
German, so get someone who speaks
it to give you a play by play.
POWELL
Sounds like you know this
bunch pretty well.
fm*. MCCLANE
' We've gotten pretty intimate
waiting on you guys to get here.
POWELL
I hear you...Well, we're here
now, partner...What do I call you?
MCCLANE
'Partner' suits me fine.
POWELL
You got it. Now, listen to me,
if you think of anything else you
let me know. In the meantime I want
you to find a safe place and hole-up
and let us do our job. Understand?
MCCLANE
(to CB)
They're all yours, Al. Good luck.
McClane turns off his CB and sits against the wall. Theo
slumps against the wall opposite McClane, beneath a roster of
offices and names for the floor.
THEO
Why wouldn't you tell them your
name?
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173 CONTINUED: (2) 173
f*^ McClane pulls out a candy bar from the kit bag and offers Theo
one. Theo shakes his head and McClane unwraps it.
MCCLANE
Just something I don't want
broadcast everywhere.
THEO
You got a friend or something
downstairs?
MCCLANE
(beat)
You're a smart guy.
Theo grins, and ties his shoe.
MCCLANE
It's McClane...John McClane.
Theo extends a hand across the corridor.
THEO
(shaking hands
with McClane)
>», Bill Clay.
MCCLANE
This usual for you to be working
on Christmas Eve?
THEO
Getting ready to go to Mexico
next week. Trying to finish up
some work.
McClane pulls out another candy bar and offers it to Theo.
This time the terrorist takes it. McClane looks around the
darkened hallways. He clearly doesn't like it. Casually
McClane's glance goes over Theo's head.
174 HIS P.O.V. 174
The roster of names of employees.
175 CLOSER 175
We MOVE DOWN the row of names beginning with C on the roster —
passing CAMPBELL, S.; CLAY, Wm.; CRAWFORD, L. and suddenly we're
in the D's.
yffS*\
176 ON MCCLANE 176
His glance drops subtly from the roster and he takes another
bite of his candy bar.
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MCCLANE
You know how to use a handgun,
Bill?
THEO
No.
McClane pulls out his Beretta pops out the magazine, jams in a
fresh one, and hands it to him.
MCCLANE
Time to learn.
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Scene 16 - Standoff on the 39th Floor
An unmarked police car pulls up across the street from Nakatomi
building and a MAN in a sportcoat climbs out. Stocky, his
hair a little too perfect, the very fact that he is the
i Deputy Chief of Police Operations on a Christmas Eve gives some
evidence to his position in the pecking order. His name is
DWAYNE T. ROBINSON and he moves brusquely past police technicians
into:
178 THE MOBILE POLICE UNIT 178
and goes to a uniformed officer.
ROBINSON
Who's talking to them?
Powell turns around.
POWELL
I am, Sir...Sergeant Al Powell.
ROBINSON
Dwayne Robinson. What's the story,
Sergeant?
POWELL
We've got a lone man in there who
says terrorists took over the
building and have killed at least
one of their hostages. He claims
to have killed three of them.
ROBINSON
How're we talking to them?
POWELL
(
**"
• CB, they've cut phone lines inside.
Powell hands him a headset.
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178 CONTINUED: 178
f* ROBINSON
(slipping on the
headset)
What about the terrorists? Have
you talked to them?
POWELL
They don't answer us.
ROBINSON
(sarcastically)
Great...
We CAN SEE Robinson already hates the complications. Here's a
man more adept at handling two punks in an empty Safeway. He
is clearly not ready to deal with a situation where the
terrorists won't talk. Just then, two plainclothes MEN enter
J the trailer and show their I.D. to the guard. Their presence
f further upsets Robinson.
179 INT. STAIRWELL - SAME 179
McClane and Theo come down the stairwell from the 40th floor.
McClane tries the door to the 39th floor — the handle moves in
his hand. McClane looks up and re-checks the floor number by
/**** the door frame, then opens the door. Both men move out onto:
180 THE 39TH FLOOR 180
and down a corridor. As they move McClane notices something
along the floor jam.
181 HIS P.O.V. 181
A plastic explosive charge.
182 MCCLANE 182
moves carefully past it and another, drawn toward a lighted
office at the end of the hallway.
183 INT. OFFICE 183
McClane moves into the office, which we RECOGNIZE as the anteroom
to the safe room. The door connecting the safe room has been
closed, hiding the safe and drill press. Theo's three bags,
however sit on the table and McClane goes straight for them.
Theo steps into the room behind him. He spies something else
on the table.
f* 184 HIS P.O.V. 184
the Walther.
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185 THEO 185
Looks up and watches McClane open the first bag containing the
plastic explosives.
THEO
What...what is it?
MCCLANE
Plastic explosives. Like those
in the hall.
THEO
(suddenly)
They were going to blow the
building.
MCCLANE
(dryly)
That's sharp thinking, Bill.
He places a couple of packets next to the Walther and hurriedly
opens the second bag.
186 INSERT 186
The contents: Detonators.
/s^N
187 MCCLANE 187
throws the second bag over his shoulder. Theo watches him.
THEO
Why are we taking them?
MCCLANE
Leverage. C'mon let's get out of
here.
He starts for the door. Theo watches him for a moment then
brings up the Beretta aiming it right at McClane's face and
cocks it.
THEO
Put them down and drop your
machine gun on the floor.
McClane just looks at him.
MCCLANE
^ Why wire the top floors, Bill?
(CONTINUED)
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187 CONTINUED: 187
' THEO
Don't worry about it. Drop
your gun.
Instead, McClane slowly raises his machine gun and aims it
at Theo. Theo pulls the trigger — the gun clicks empty.
Theo's eyes go to the Walther on the table. McClane follows
his glance.
MCCLANE
Don't try it.
Theo looks back challengingly, McClane recognizes the look.
MCCLANE
And don't tell me I won't do it.
But Theo breaks for the pistol and McClane levels him with a
burst from the machine gun. For a moment he just looks at the
dead terrorist, then retrieves his Browning and exchanges
magazines.
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Scene 17 - Detonators Discovery
Dark. A light comes on and McClane quickly moves to the desk.
He takes out a handful of detonators and puts them in his
other kit bag, then puts the main bag of detonators in the
trash can under the desk covering it with the trash, and
sliding it back under the desk again.
189 INT. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 189
Robinson and Powell when McClane calls them on the CB.
MCCLANE'S VOICE/RADIO
Hey, Al...are you there?
POWELL
Yeah, partner, what's up?
INTERCUT:
190 MCCLANE 190
T He sits on the floor below a bank of windows.
(CONTINUED)
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190 CONTINUED: 190
MCCLANE
There * s a new development.
They've got high explosives
up here. Plastics.
POWELL
Hey, man, I work a desk. You're
going to have to spell these
things out for me.
MCCLANE
Think of it like this then,
they've got enough stuff up
here to turn this place into
Century Canyon...
| 191 ON ROBINSON 191
/
Listening with everyone else.
ROBINSON
(to himself)
Great.
192 ON MCCLANE 192
MCCLANE
...On the other hand I've got
the detonators.
INTERCUT:
193 POWELL 193
In the police trailer.
POWELL
Listen, partner...throw them out.
The first thing we need to do
is reduce the chance of disaster.
MCCLANE
I have...until they catch me.
Also, chalk up another one dead.
POWELL
Jesus...
HANS' VOICE/RADIO .
(o.s.; cutting in)
Mr. Barefoot man? Can you hear me?
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194 ROBINSON 194
stJM.!\ looks at a technician.
ROBINSON
(to technician)
You got that recorder hooked
up? I want it running.
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Scene 18 - Negotiations Break Down
Hans talking on CB to McClane. Karl stands to the side.
MCLANE/RADIO
(o.s.)
Yeah, I hear you. t
HANS
I'm calling to offer you a truce.
i i Put the detonators on an elevator
/ and retreat to a safe place and
1
we won't bother you anymore. I
i give you my word.
i
196 MCCLANE 196
MCCLANE
i Let's see, is that the same word
f^ you gave Rivers before you shot him?
HANS' VOICE
(O.S.)
Believe me when I tell you
that there are those among us
who would like nothing more than
to hunt you down and kill you.
MCCLANE
Who...you mean, Karl? Hey,
Karl, come on up and I'll tell
you just how it felt to break
his brother's neck.
He hears Karl let out a yell and Hans' radio goes dead.
McClane lets out a breath and leans back. The tough guy
act is difficult. He waits and his radio comes back with
Hans.
HANS' VOICE/RADIO
(o.s.)
It's more than idle curiosity
how you know some of our names.
I feel at a slight disadvantage
not knowing, yours.
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196 CONTINUED: 196
(*** MCCLANE
You'll get over it.
HANS' VOICE/RADIO
(o.s.)
You have a very cavalier attitude
for someone who probably has a
loved one on this very floor.
MCCLANE
You got the wrong guy, fella.
I was just up here fixing the
cigarette machines when you
came barging in.
INTERCUT:
197 HANS 197
HANS
A vending machine repairman who
breaks people's necks?
MCCLANE
It's a tough business.
f^ HANS
And it will get tougher. I
promise.
MCCLANE
Well, it's a big building, Hans.
Lotsa luck, fella.
198 POLICE TRAILER - SAME 198
Robinson turns quickly to his radio operator.
ROBINSON
Quick, patch me in there.
(to Hans)
Hans? Is that your name? This
is Captain Dwayne Robinson. LAPD.
Is anyone hurt in there or need
medical help?
INTERCUT:
199 HANS 199
HANS
/*N Everyone is fine, Mr. Robinson.
ROBINSON
What do you want? Let's talk.
(CONTINUED)
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199 CONTINUED: 199
HANS
f* (chuckles)
You are eager, aren't you?
Please sit back and relax, we
will contact you when we are
ready.
Hans turns off his radio.
200 POLICE TRAILER - ON ROBINSON 200
ROBINSON
Wait, wait...
(realizing he's
been cut off)
Shit...
The two well-dressed men chuckle at. Robinson's frustration.
The big man lights a cigarette for the smaller one.
Robinson turns on them angrily.
ROBINSON
Who are you guys with?
They each pull out their I.D. and flash it at him.
/ffi^TS LITTLE JOHNSON
Special Agents Johnson and
Johnson, FBI.
BIG JOHNSON
Sounds like you're in for
a fun Christmas Eve, Chief.
ROBINSON
You want to crack jokes, go
up to Sunset. This isn't
your operation anyway.
BIG JOHNSON
Hey, we're just here to observe
or if you want to bounce ideas
off of us or...
LITTLE JOHNSON
(more seriously)
...Or, if it should suddenly
become our operation.
He lets the implication of a possible changeover hang for
a moment. It isn't lost on Robinson.
(^ ROBINSON
Just stay the hell out of my way.
(turning back)
Johnson and Johnson...Jesus?...
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200 CONTINUED: 200
Big Johnson grins and stops a uniformed cop going out the
door of the trailer.
BIG JOHNSON
Where's the coffee around here?
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Scene 19 - Interrogation and Warnings
Hans and Karl. Karl preps his weapon with a hunter's
obsession for detail.
HANS
Find him and the detonators....
Karl leaves and Hans watches from the doorway. Suddenly
he notices Holly staring at him from her place on the floor.
She holds his look boldly.
HOLLY
/ Why don't you want to talk to them?
HANS
The police? Why should I?
HOLLY
You want to get away, don't you?
/^if\
You can negotiate that.
HANS
I have many worries...but
'getting away' is not one of
them.
HOLLY •
But if you don't talk to them...
sooner or later they'll attack.
Hans stares at Holly, this makes Ellis even more uncomfortable
and he tries to quiet her. But she holds Hans' look.
HANS
(to Holly, beat)
You seem to know a good deal
about what the police might do.
HOLLY
(flatly)
Common sense.
HANS
Do you have children?
/^vX Holly doens't answer, but Hans knows by her reaction, the
answer is "yes"
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201 CONTINUED: 201
-* HANS
( Then you know you want them to
respect what you say, when you
say it. But sometimes, no matter
how many times you tell them something
is dangerous — like a hot burner
on a stove — it is not until they
touch it, that they understand it
is truly dangerous...Folice are
like children...words are often
not enough.
He turns and goes back into:
202 HOLLY'S OFFICE 202
He closes the door. Going to the desk he shifts through
the I.D.'s and finds Holly's.
^203 INSERT - HOLLY'S I.D. 203
It shows Holly's picture and the name: GENNARO.
204 CLOSE ON A TELEVISION SCREEN - NIGHT 204
We SEE a news report interrupts the regular scheduled
f* program. Dick Thornburg talks to the camera. As he
talks We PULL BACK TO SEE William in the backseat of the
limo. He reacts excitedly to the report.
WILLIAM
Terrorist, oh, man...Where is
this?
205 ON SCREEN 205
the CAMERA PULLS BACK and we SEE the Nakatomi Building
rise up in the b.g. behind Thornburg.
206 CLOSE - WILLIAM 206
as he recognizes the place on TV.
WILLIAM
(stunned)
Holy shit...
207 CLOSE - TELEVISION 207
The CAMERA PANS to Police Trailer and we SEE the massive
build-up of police personnel and equipment.
THORNBURG
As you can see, the police have
brought up their armored car unit
(CONTINUED)
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207 CONTINUED: 207
THORNBURG (Cont.)
and dispatched SWAT personnel
around the building though they
are adamantly denying that any
sort of assault is in the works...
WILLIAM
(more stunned)
Holy shit...
He grabs the car phone and madly punches 911.
WILLIAM
(to himself)
911...
(he misdials)
Fuck!
(more carefully)
9-1-1...
He gets it right and leans back, still panicked as someone
answers.
WILLIAM
(to phone)
Police?!...Well, I need 'em!
Your damn straight this is an
emergency! You know that building
in Century City that's full of
terrorists?...Yeah, that's the
one...Well, I'm sitting right
this very second un —
The word freezes in his mouth as something suddenly dawns
on him. William cancels his call.
WILLIAM
(to himself)
Shit, William, you fool...If the
police could save your sorry ass
don't you think they'd be down here
doin' it?!
He looks back at the TV.
THORNBURG
Since telephone lines in the
building have been cut all
communications have been by
CB radios which the terriorists
took into the building with them.
j0!GiZ\
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Scene 20 - McClane's Barricade and the Terrorists' Search
A stairwell door opens and McClane carefully moves out onto
the 37th floor. Seeing that it is deserted he begins
overturning desks, making a small fortress.
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209 LIMO - CLOSE ON TRUNK - NIGHT 209
The trunk to the big limo opens and William's hand reaches
under a tool kit TO REVEAL a portable CB unit.
210 INT. LIMO - BACKSEAT - NIGHT 210
William plugs the CB power cord into the rear cigarette
lighter and turns it on. The STATIC HISSES as he goes
through the channels. Suddenly he stops and WE HEAR KARL'S
VOICE over the CB.
KARL'S VOICE
(o.s., on CB)
Heinrich is dead...
211 INT. 39TH FLOOR - ANTEROOM TO SAFE ROOM - SAME 211
Karl stands over the body of Theo.
KARL
(to CB)
Theo and Heinrich are dead.
We're going down.
212 INT. 37TH FLOOR - NIGHT 212
McClane at STAIRWELL DOOR. He lays a plastic chair
protector sheet in front of the stairwell door. Then
he leans an axe against the door — a very primitive
early warning device.
TIME CUT TO:
213 INT. 37TH FLOOR - NIGHT . 213
McClane fastens a small pad of plastic explosives to the
light switch by the doorway; then presses a half dozen
detonators into the material. He's not sure how many
he'll need and adds another for good measure and puts the
rest in his pocket.
214 INT. 38TH FLOOR - SAME 214
Fritz and Franco move onto the 38th floor and spread out.
The operation looks like an African hunt with beaters moving
out in front — rattling chairs, knocking over phones, lamps
etc. — moving toward Karl, who waits at the other end of
the room by the stairwell door.
When they reach him he opens the stairwell door and
silently waves them down the stairs. He looks over the
floor one last time, then he notices a flickering fluorescent
light above him in the stairwell. His glance goes to another
fluorescent fixture.
KARL
(to the terrorist
below him)
Stop.
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215 INT. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 215
A new group of men enter the trailer — the SWAT team
personnel. One in particular CAPTAIN MITCHELL eyes a pretty
policewoman on the way in.
Following Mitchell is a small man with pencils in his shirt
pocket and a hard hat, GEORGE HENRY', City Engineer's office.-
The last man enters in a tuxedo, pulled away from a party.
His name is RALPH BAILEY, late thirties; mayor's office
liasion. Johnson and Johnson view the assembly with detached
amusement. Robinson does the introductions quickly.
ROBINSON
George Henry, City Engineer's
office, this is Captain Mitchell...
Special Agents Johnson and Johnson.
The engineer nods to the men. Mitchell eyes the Feds, wary
of his competition.
ROBINSON
(pointing to Bailey)
And this is Ralph Bailey, mayor's
office.
Bailey takes an offered cup of coffee. He looks like he
needs it. Henry unrolls building plans while Robinson talks.
ROBINSON
' To bring everyone up to date,
we've got a hostage situation
I in which thirty-five civilians
are being held by an undetermined
number of terrorists with no
1
expressed intent to negotiate.
1
Now, we've got six hours before
the East Coast wakes up and turns
on their TV's and frankly I'd like
not to be here when they do, so
let's hear what you gentlemen
have got to say.
LITTLE JOHNSON
Excuse me, but it seems you've
left something out.
Robinson looks up at the Agent.
ROBINSON
(to the others)
There's an unidentified gunman in
the building who claims to have
^ .• killed four of the terrorists, have
{ plastic explosives and detonators:
These claims are unconfirmed.
(CONTINUED)
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^ BAILEY
( Who is he? What's he doing there?
ROBINSON
He won't tell us. We have an
officer monitoring it.
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Scene 21 - Outside the Police Trailer
He stands on the street behind some cars with his CB.
An officer comes by with a fresh cup of coffee for
him.
POWELL
(to CB)
How're you doing, partner?
INTERCUT:
217 MCCLANE ON 37TH FLOOR 217
He sits with his back to the wall, behind his fort of
overturned desks. He's tired and hungry and raises his CB.
MCCLANE
(to Powell)
I'm hanging in there. Is that
f^ coffee I smell?
POWELL
Sorry about that, man. How'd
you know?
MCCLANE
Just say I've been there.
What's happening down there?
POWELL
Well, they're having some
big pow-wow right now.
MCCLANE
And you're not invited to it?
POWELL
Hey, man I'm just a desk
jockey who was on my way
home when all this happened.
MCCLANE
Funny, I figured you for the
street, AI, the way you drove
("* that car.
The compliment stirs some buried pride in Powell.
POWELL
It's been a while, partner.
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218 INT. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 218
Mitchell has started to assert himself. Henry puts an unlit
cigarette between his lips and studies the diagrams.
MITCHELL
I propose we send two men up the
sewers...enter the building here '—
BAILEY
What for?
MITCHELL
(patiently)
Having our men on the inside puts
us in a position to release the
hostages should the opportunity
arise and also give us an accurate
account of the strengths of this
i group.
t LITTLE JOHNSON
Why don't you use the man
who's already inside?
MITCHELL
Because he's not one of my_ men.
BIG JOHNSON
You haven't even talked to him.
BAILEY
(trying to get
a word in)
Frankly, I think we' should wait'
until they want to talk.
MITCHELL
When they want to talk it'11 be
too late. We need our men inside,
now...
HENRY
(quietly)
Can't do it.
Everyone suddenly looks at Henry.
HENRY
(to Mitchell)
You can't get men in through the
sewers.
MITCHELL
What*re you talking about?
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218 CONTINUED: 218
f* HENRY
(noticing all
the looks)
The building's got a fourty foot
deep reverse flow conduit...they
can't get across it.
MITCHELL
You have a better way in?
Henry puts his cigarettes back into his mouth and looks back
at the diagram.
HENRY
Maybe...Anyone got a light.
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Scene 22 - McClane's Narrow Escape
I
/ Powell is talking with McClane on the CB.
POWELL
You seem to know a lot about
cops. You been one? Are you one?
INTERCUT:
{ 220 INT. MCCLANE - 37TH FLOOR - SAME 220
Sitting against the wall.
MCCLANE
I watch a lot of TV. What can
I say...?
POWELL
(probing)
You don't learn to kill like
that on TV.
MCCLANE
Hey, Al...if I could tell you
who I was, I'd tell you. You're
just going to have to trust me.
It's an appeal and the words effect Powell, he answers
quietly, like a promise.
POWELL
I trust you, man.
^ Suddenly he hears A CLATTERING SOUND over his CB.
(CONTINUED)
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220 CONTINUED: 220
MCCLANE'S VOICE
/fe$\ (o.s.)
I've got company, Al...I'll get
back to you.
POWELL
Wait, wait, stay on the line!
But he realizes McClane is gone.
221 INT. 37TH FLOOR - NIGHT 221
McClane moves from his fort in the shadows to the corner of
the floor.
222 MCCLANE'S P.O.V. 222
The axe has fallen, but the floor looks deserted.
223 MCCLANE 223
He hears a noise across the room — like a lamp being
knocked over, then a phone. McClane is on the move. Quickly
he moves through the cubicles, pausing before the doorway
to each one. The noises behind him become louder.
He passes the stairwell door and comes to the corner, looks
f*- carefully around it — it is clear. He steps around it
and suddenly Karl appears around the other corner directly
in front of him and opens fire. The bullets rip into the wall
in front of him — hitting a metal drinking fountain and
sending water spewing across the room. McClane ducks back
around the corner but at that moment Franco and Fritz
appear at the other end cutting off his retreat.
.MCCLANE
Oh, shit...
McClane feels the handle of the stairwell door behind him and
pushes it, disappearing into the stairwell just as the two
terrorists open fire.
224 INT. STAIRWELL - SAME 224
Quickly McClane starts up the stairs. His bare feet taking
the concrete steps two at a time, heading into the darkness
of the next landing. Suddenly WE HEAR a CRUNCH and McClane
stiffens like he's been shot.
225 CLOSE - MCCLANE'S FOOT 225
The broken glass of fluorescent light bulbs and blood moves
^ out from beneath his left foot.
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226 MCCLANE 226
leans against the railing for support, the pain is incredible.
(
**
"*
*• He lifts his foot exposing a three inch gash. Gritting his
teeth he reaches into the bloody slash and extracts a large piece
of glass. Suddenly below WE HEAR the stairwell door open.
McClane fires a burst down the stairwell and pulls himself to
the door, three steps up.
227 38TH FLOOR 227
McClane hobbles painfully toward the elevator bank — every
step leaves a pool of blood in the carpet.-
228 EXT. OUTSIDE POLICE TRAILER - ON POWELL - SAME 228
He clutches his CB and tries desperately to make contact
with McClane.
POWELL
Come in, Partner. If you can
hear me, come in...
229 INT. STAIRWELL - 38TH FLOOR - SAME 229
Franco and Karl reach the bloodstains on the stairs. They
move carefully to the door to the 38th floor and crack it
slightly, then open it more — McClane is nowhere in sight,
but his trail is evident.
s£$£>\
A bloody path leads toward the elevator bank — veering
toward a secretary's desk — missing it's chair — then
back to the elevators. Suddenly the two terrorists HEAR
the SOUND OF AN ELEVATOR in motion and move quickly to the:
230 ELEVATOR BANK - 38TH FLOOR 230
Two sets of elevators facing each other like square dancers.
McClane*s bloodstains lead up to a set of doors and quickly
Franco forces open the doors with his fingers and looks in.
231 FRANCO'S P.O.V. 231
The elevator car in motion going down. It stops two floors
below them.
FRANCO
He's going down.
They move quickly back to the stairwell as we STAY in the
elevator bank a full second after they're gone. Suddenly
the doors on the opposite side of the bank open and we SEE
McClane sitting in the secretary's chair keeping his bleeding
left foot off the ground.
/flW\
232 38TH FLOOR - MAIN OFFICE AREA 232
McClane hobbles back to the office area. He goes to the
first desk he reaches and begins going through the drawers
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/m^ looking for gauze or something to stop the bleeding on his
[ foot. No luck, he moves to the next desk and opens a drawer.
He finds a box of Kleenex and tosses it. A little more
digging turns up a box of band-aids — finger size. He opens
another drawer digs for a moment then closes it — nothing.
Then he stops — and slowly reopens the last drawer.
233 INSERT - THE DRAWER 233
He pulls back some papers and REVEALS a box of MAXI-PADS.
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Scene 23 - The Blinding Spotlight
A huge spotlight is brought into position a half-block away
from the building. We NOTICE several more — their generators
rumbling. Suddenly their beams are turned on, increased in
intensity and pointed to the building. The reflection off
the glass is incredible, blinding.
)'
/ 235 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 235
Hans notices the growing illumination and goes to the window,
carefully looking out. The entire front of the building is
whited out. He picks up his CB.
236 INT. STAIRWELL - SAME 236
Karl and Franco moving carefully down the stairwell. Their
. CB crackles to life.
HANS' VOICE
(on CB)
1
The police are moving.
i
( 237 INT. 38TH FLOOR 237
McClane unwraps a maxi-pad and tapes it tightly to the
bottom of his cut foot. He tests it gingerly on the carpet —
it's painful, but serviceable. Looking up he notices the
intensity in the lights outside. McClane picks up his CB.
MCCLANE
AI?
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Right here, partner. I thought
we'd lost you.
• MCCLANE
You almost did. I'm going to
be limping for a while. What's
f* going on down there?
238 EXT. POLICE TRAILER - SIDEWALK - ON POWELL 238
Around him the activity with the huge spotlight is apparent.
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238 CONTINUED: 238
POWELL
Just sit tight. We're just
adding a little light to see by.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Listen to me! If you're getting
ready to try something, don't.
This is what they want!
239 INT. HANS' OFFICE - ON HANS - SAME 239
at the window, looking out. He can't see anything — total
whiteout. Instead of panic however he senses a confrontation
and it excites him. He smiles and steps into the hall.
HOLLY
? (to Hans)
/ What's going on?
HANS
The child is about to touch
the stove.
240 EXT. CENTURY CITY APARTMENT BUILDING - SAME 240
/0fe\
Two SWAT officers, with blackened faces and carrying
equipment bags, move quickly through the lobby of a nearby
apartment building and enter Lobby elevator.
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Scene 24 - SWAT Assault Under Fire
Another PAIR of SWAT OFFICERS move to a point on the roof
of another building and peer over the edge at the brilliantly
lit Nakatomi building. THE SPOTTER stares through an infrared
scope at the Nakatomi roof while the other officer, THE SNIPER
sets up his rifle.
242 EXT. CENTURY CITY - ON MITCHELL AND ROBINSON - 242
POLICE BARRICADES
Mitchell listens to a CB radio then looks at Robinson, who
is visibly tense.
MITCHELL
We're in position.
Robinson hesitates, then gives his approval with a nod.
MITCHELL
(to CB)
Go.
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243 ANGLE ON TWO SWAT OFFICERS 243
/9&\
{ They sprint unmolested to the bars covering the garage doors.
Mitchell and Robinson watch from behind the cover of a police
car as one of the SWAT officers removes a portable welding
torch and begins cutting his way through the lock.
244 INT. 38TH FLOOR - MCCLANE 244
He moves painfully to the window and looks out. He can't
see a thing because of the lights.
MCCLANE
(to himself)
No...
245 EXT. POLICE BARRICADES - ON MITCHELL AND ROBINSON 245
Suddenly rifle fire sounds from the building.
ROBINSON
(worriedly)
They're shooting at them.
MITCHELL
(calmly)
It's panic fire...they can't see
f* anything.
More shots ring out from the building going over the SWAT
officers' heads and suddenly the huge dome of one of the
spotlights shatters behind Mitchell and Robinson's head.
The glow fades. A moment later the next light twenty feet
away dies.
ROBINSON
They're going after the lights!
The two SWAT officers cutting the garage gate suddenly look
up as their cover starts to disappear.
ROBINSON
Call them back.
MITCHELL
No, they're almost in.
Suddenly the third and fourth lights are shot out and the
SWAT men become sitting ducks.
246 INT. 3RD FLOOR 246
{ The terrorist marksman, Alexander, on the third floor draws
a bead through his scope and hits one of the officers in the
leg, then hits 'the second one in the chest.
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247 EXT. POLICE BARRICADES - ON MITCHELL AND ROBINSON 247
P MITCHELL
(on radio)
Send up the car!
An armored car wheels toward the building and starts toward
the wounded men.
248 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 248
From his vantage point he watches the action. At the sight
of the armored car he lifts his CB.
HANS
They're sending in the car.
249 INT. ROOF-MACHINE ROOM/SERVICE ELEVATOR - SAME 249
JAMES quickly loads two small crates onto the service
elevator and pushes the button for the 3rd floor. As the car
starts down, he removes an anti-tank gun from one of the crates.
250 INT. 38TH FLOOR - SAME 250
McClane HEARS the sound of the ELEVATOR MOTOR running coming
down from the roof. He picks up his CB.
V MCCLANE
AI, what's happening out there?
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
They're kicking our ass down here.
We've got two men down and we're
going to have to send in a shield
to get them out.
MCCLANE
That's what they want.
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Hey, man we aren't going to let them
sit out there!
251 INT. 3RD FLOOR - SAME 251
The service elevator arrives on the third floor and James
moves across the room toward the windows with the anti-tank
weapon. At the window, Alexander puts down his rifle and
takes the weapon from James.
/fM;i\
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Outside the window the armored car has stopped in front of
the wounded men and paramedics quickly load them in from the
sheltered side of the vehicle. Alexander quickly sights on
the armored car.
ALEXANDER
(to Hans, CB)
I have them.
HANS' VOICE
(o.s., over CB)
Fire.
252 EXT. THE ARMORED CAR 252
A blast ROARS from the third floor window and the shell hits
j the armored car. The car pitches forward like a beast whose
1 front legs have been shot out from under it — its front axle
destroyed, unable to move. Alexander looks back at James and
grins.
253 32ND FLOOR - HANS 253
He watches from his window. Coldly picks up his CB.
f^ HANS
Hit it again.
254 MCCLANE 254
listening. He picks up his CB.
MCCLANE
Hans, you motherfucker, you've
made your point. Let them pull
back!
HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
No, Mr. Barefoot man, there's more
to teach them.
McClane slumps to the floor below the window. He feels
helpless, then notices his kit bag.
255 3RD FLOOR 255
James runs back to the crate "on the elevator.
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Scene 25 - Explosive Showdown
They look on in horror as the armored car sits helplessly on
fire. On the police radio channel we HEAR the screams of
men inside.
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256 CONTINUED: 256
Z^5**,
MITCHELL
(to radio)
Davis! Jimenez!...Report...
DAVIS
(voice over; on
radio, yelling)
This is Davis. We've got one
dead. Everybody's hit. Jimenez's
bleeding bad. We've got to get
the fuck out of here!
MITCHELL
(to radio)
Davis, hang on! That's an order!
Hang on, we'll get you out.
• 257 INT. ELEVATOR CAR - 3RD FLOOR - SAME 257
/
James opens the box of shells and takes two and starts back
across the room.
258 INT. 38TH FLOOR - CLOSE ON A SHAPE OF PLASTIC 258
EXPLOSIVE - SAME
f^1 Like a football. It sits on the seat of a secretary's chair
with castors. We PULL BACK TO SEE McClane press three
detonators into the top, then cover the explosive with a
typewriter, tying it securely in place with electrical cords.
259 ANGLE ON SERVICE ELEVATOR - MCCLANE 259
wheels the chair to the service elevator, opens the door and
blocks them with a fire ax. He looks in — the top of the
car can just be seen thirty five floors below.
260 INT. 3RD FLOOR 260
James hands the shell to Alexander, who expertly loads it
into the anti-tank gun. Through the window we SEE a second
armored car roll into position next to the other. Alexander
lifts the anti-tank gun to his shoulder and aims.
261 INT. 38TH FLOOR 261
McClane pushes the chair into the shaft.
MCCLANE
Geronimo...motherfuckers.
[ For a long moment there is nothing, then: the shaft is filled
with light, then SOUND — an ungodly ROAR — and McClane is
thrown back across the elevator corridor against the other
bank of doors by the concussion wave.
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262 ON THE '3RD FLOOR 262
The explosion, like a firestorm, rips across the floor:
263 BLOWING OUT THE MACHINE GUN NEST AND JAMES AND 263
ALEXANDER
264 SHATTERING WINDOWS 264
265 SENDING DESKS, CHAIRS, PHONES, AND TYPWRITERS 265
FLYING
266 EXT. AVENUE OF THE STARS 266
The police take cover behind their cars. Powell, Robinson,
and Mitchell look like they've seen the face of God as the
building rocks from the blast. Henry's cigarette falls from
his mouth as a desk is sent hurtling across Avenue of the Stars
into the trees across the street.
267 INT. UNDERGROUND PARKING GARAGE - ON WILLIAM - SAME 267
watching it on TV, feeling it all around him.
WILLIAM
Oh, Jesus...
268 EXT. DOWN THE STREET - SAME 268
Dick Thornburg's crew is taping.
THORNBURG
(in awe)
Unreal.
(to the cameraman)
Did you get all that?
CAMERAMAN
Yep.
Thornburg looks at his competitors still setting up.
THORNBURG
Eat your fucking heart out
Channel Four.
269 ON HOSTAGE FLOOR 269
The hostages are shaken and the remaining terrorists, Fritz
and Franco", aren't too sure of themselves either. Only
Hans is relatively calm.
f* FRANCO
They're firing at us.
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HANS
It's not the police...it's him.
270 ANGLE ON HOLLY 270
She comforts an older woman.
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Scene 26 - Clash of Authorities: McClane's Confrontation with Robinson
He sits up and lifts the CB.
MCCLANE
Hey, AI, you guys okay out there?
INTERCUT:
272 EXT. POWELL 272
on the street.
POWELL
(on CB)
Holy shit, man, what was that?
MCCLANE
One of their packets. Is the
building on fire?
POWELL
No, but they're going to have
to tear this sucker down and
build a new one. We got a report
from one of our spotters that you
got three with that blast.
MCCLANE
Three? Are you sure?
Before Powell can answer Robinson comes running up to him.
ROBINSON
Is that him?
POWELL
Yessir.
ROBINSON
(reaching for Powell's
CB)
/^vW^N.
Give me that thing.
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(** ROBINSON (Cont.)
(angrily to McClane)
Now, listen to me, mister, I don't
know what your game is but you just
destroyed a building and put
hundreds of people's lives in
jeopardy. Now maybe you were
trying to help but we don't need
any more of that kind of cooperation.
I want you to put down your weapons
and retreat to a safe place. Do
you understand, me?
McCLANE
Who is this?
ROBINSON
J This is Deputy Chief of Police
t Dwayne T. Robinson. You are
interfering with police business.
McClane leans tiredly against the elevator door.
MCCLANE
Put AI back on, Dwayne.
/SfSN^
ROBINSON
No. I'm giving the orders here!
MCCLANE
Put the other guy on!
ROBINSON
Listen fuckhead — !
MCCLANE
(exploding)
No! You listen to me. You've got
at least six psychos holding thirty-
five people at gunpoint and they
just waxed your ass down there.
They've got enough explosives to
flatten this end of the city and
the balls to do it but what they
don't have is the means to detonate
it because of me. They're down to
half strength because of me. Are
they talking to you? Do you think
you can stop them down there?
C'mon, tell me, Dwayne!...Hell no!
.f* You're the fuckhead. You're.the
asshole! Now, put AI on, goddamnit!
McClane is so furious, he's out of breath.
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Scene 27 - Tense Standoff and Urgent Action
William nods in agreement.
WILLIAM
Tell 'em, John! Tell 'em!
274 INT. 38TH FLOOR - ON MCCLANE 274
still seething. There is a long pause on the CB, then:
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Here you go. How're you feeling?
MCCLANE
(furious)
How the hell you think I'm feeling.
Who is that asshole?!
/ 275 ON POWELL 275
Other officers, including Robinson, monitor the conversation.
POWELL
(sharply)
Hey, don't draw me into that kind
of talk. You hear me? Now I know
you're wounded and tired and mad
as hell, but the last thing you
want to do is waste your energy
with some fat-assed, jerk-off,
dumb-as-shit deputy police chief.
You understand?
276 ON MCCLANE 276
He grins, and a little laugh escapes.
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
I say something funny?
MCCLANE
No, just nice to hear some common
sense.
277 ON POWELL 277
POWELL
Hang in there, man. Hang in there.
(** • MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s., tiredly)
Thanks, partner.
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Powell hears McClane's line go dead. He puts down his phone
and sees Robinson staring at him.
ROBINSON
'Jerk-off, dumb-shit deputy chief
of police?'
POWELL
Sorry sir, I was just trying to
relieve some of the tension.
Robinson turns and leaves; Powell watches him and smiles to
himself.
278 INT. HOSTAGE FLOOR - HANS OFFICE - SAME 278
Hans, Franco, and Karl plotting strategy.
HANS
(to Karl)
Heinz is now on the fifth floor
covering the street. That leaves
Fritz on this floor with the hostages,
Uli on the roof, and you and Franco
to find him...Do it.
/0&\
279 ANGLE ON ELLIS AND HOLLY 279
outside of Hans' office. Ellis watches Franco and Karl
leave then looks back at Hans' office. Suddenly, he stands
and Holly looks at him like he was crazy.
HOLLY
What are you doing?
Fritz moves quickly across the room towards Ellis.
ELLIS
(to Holly)
I'm tired of sitting here getting
cramps on my legs waiting for the
cops or your husband to get us
all killed...
HOLLY
What are you going to do?
ELLIS
Hey, I just negotiated a $150,000,000
deal, babe...I think I can handle this.
f* (to- Fritz)
I want to talk to Hans.
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280 MCCLANE 280
sitting tiredly against the wall. Sweat runs down his face
and arms leaving streaks through the dirt. McClane watches
a drop fall to the floor.
MCCLANE
(to himself)
You assholes had to cut the air
conditioning off, didn't you?
He digs out his now crumpled and grease-stained photo of his
family. He wipes a smudge from the face of Holly and smiles
tiredly. Suddenly his CB crackles to life.
POWELL'S VOICE
(to McClane)
Hey, partner? How's it going?
MCCLANE
I'm hanging, man. I'm hanging
...You got any kids, AI?
INTERCUT:
281 POWELL ON STREET 281
POWELL
J0F?\ Expecting my first any week, now.
MCCLANE
Congratulations.
POWELL
Thanks. You?
MCCLANE
Two. And I sure want to see 'em
again.
282 CLOSE - A HAND WRITING A NOTE 282
It says: CHILDREN? We PULL BACK TO REVEAL Dick Thornburg.
He passes the note silently over to his assistant, MARY,
as they monitor the call.
283 MCCLANE 283
stares at his photo, when suddenly another VOICE besides
Powell's comes over his radio.
HANS' VOICE
(o.s. on CB)
Touching, Mr. McClane. Touching.
( The sound of his name startles him and for a moment McClane
stares at the radio.
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HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
John McClane are you listening?
McCLANE
(beat)
Yes.
HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
We have your colleague here...a
Mr. Ellis.
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Scene 28 - A Tense Standoff
Ellis is being pampered by Fritz and Franco in Hans' office.
He has a cigarette, and a terrorist brings him a Diet Coke.
Hans hands the radio to Ellis. Karl watches quietly.
J HANS
/ (to Ellis)
Just act nervous.
Ellis nods and presses the TALK button.
ELLIS
(to McClane, on CB)
John?
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s., quietly)
How are you, Ellis?
ELLIS
All right...John, listen to me...
They want you to tell them where the
detonators are. They know people are
listening. They want the'detonators
or they're going to kill me.
Ellis looks over at Hans who gives him a "thumbs-up", he's
doing a great job.
285 INT. POLICE TRAILER - ON POWELL, ROBINSON - SAME 285
and others listening intently.
286 ON MCCLANE 286
He closes his eyes and leans his head back again.
ELLIS' VOICE
John, are you listening?
/T^V MCCLANE
(to CB, quietly)
Yeah, I hear you.
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287 ON ELLIS (HANS' OFFICE) 287
ELLIS
Listen, I've been pulling for
you, man...But the police are
here now. It's their problem...
Tell these guys where the detonators
are so no one else gets hurt.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
I can't tell them, Ellis. I'd
have to show them. Then what?
You know what they'll do to me?
ELLIS
(becoming bullying)
Listen, John. If not for me, it
would be over for you already...
J I can end it all for you in two
/ seconds, if I want.
Hans reaches out his hand for the CB. Ellis gives it to him.
HANS
(to CB)
Mr. McClane, what Mr. Ellis is
^ obviously not making clear to
1 s
you is that if you do not yield
our equipment at once, we will
kill him.
He hands the radio back to Ellis, who takes a sip of his soft
drink, obviously untroubled by Hans' threat.
ELLIS
(quieter, more
confidentially)
By the way, did you ever get to
see the watch? I think you understand
what I'm talking about...I hope so.
While Ellis talks, Hans quietly takes out his Walther keeping
it out of Ellis' line of sight.
ELLIS
They're not kidding, John...
Say something...
288 CLOSE - MCCLANE • 288
He can hardly bring himself to say it. He knows they're not
z*5^- kidding, even if Ellis doesn't.
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s$&\ MCCLANE
(to himself)
Forgive me, Ellis.
(presses the talk
button; to Ellis?
a beat)
I don't believe them.
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Scene 29 - Deadly Ultimatum
Ellis looks at Hans and shrugs, "Well, I tried..." Hans nods
understandingly. He takes the CB, presses the TALK button,
and in one frighteningly smooth motion brings the Walther up
to Ellis' forehead and pulls the trigger. ON SOUND OF THE GUNSHO
we:
CUT TO:
290 INT. 38TH FLOOR - MCCLANE - SAME 290
He was expecting it and still it chills him. The screams of
the hostages seem distant over the tiny radio speaker as we:
CUT TO:
291 32ND FLOOR - ON THE HOSTAGES 291
going crazy. They see Ellis' blood splattered on the glass
walls of the Hans' office.
292 INT. HANS' OFFICE - ON HANS 292
He throws open the door to let McClane and the police hear
the screams of the hostages.
HANS
Hear that? Talk to me, now,
Mr. McClane or shall I shoot
another one?
INTERCUT:
293 MCCLANE 293
MCCLANE
I need twenty minutes, maybe a
half an hour to get there.
HANS
Five.
/&R\
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f\ MCCLANE
1
(hard)
Look asshole you can shoot the
whole goddamn floor — it can't
make m e move any faster. I'm
not in the b e s t shape anymore
and it's a long w a y o f f .
HANS
(beat)
Twenty m i n u t e s . But don't try
anything or we will shoot someone
else...perhaps, this time a w o m a n .
294 MCCLANE 294
He angrily throws his CB across the floor. He struggles to
pull himself to his feet when he h e a r s :
ROBINSON'S VOICE
(o.s.; furious; on
the CB)
M c C l a n e ? ! Is that your n a m e ? !
I know they can hear me b u t I
don't give a d a m n , you son of a
/^PPS, bitch. Everything that went
down between y o u and that punk
is on tape down h e r e . You let
that man d i e . N o w , I don't
care w h a t your story is or w h o
your friends a r e , if there's
a way to jam your ass in jail
I'm going to do it. You hear me?
McClane reaches the radio and turns it off.
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Scene 30 - Negotiations and Movement
Robinson hears the static over his radio and throws down the
headset. He stomps past P o w e l l .
POWELL
(flatly)
He's trying to survive.
Robinson wheels on him angrily.
ROBINSON
He as good as killed that m a n .
I told h i m , I'll tell you — I'm
^*SN going to dump his ass in jail.
Robinson keeps going.
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' POWELL
YOu think he gives a shit?
Robinson stops at the door. The room falls silent..
POWELL
He's got no reinforcements and
twelve men with automatic weapons
after him. He's exhausted and
wounded and he's gotten no help
whatsoever from this department
and you really think he cares
what you're going to do to him if
he makes it out of there alive?
Robinson steps back into the trailer.
i ROBINSON
/ Anytime you want to go home,
Sergeant...consider yourself
dismissed.
They lock eyes.
POWELL
No Sir. You couldn't drag me
away.
296 EXT. WILSHIRE (KCBS MOBILE UNIT) ON DICK THORNBURG 296
- NIGHT
and his assistant Mary.
THORNBURG
(to Mary)
John McClane. I want to know
everything there is to know
about this guy. Check the
airlines, flights coming from
the East coast. Tell them you're
his mother. Tell them you're dying,
just find out.
She nods and leaves. He looks toward the building and smiles.
He is clearly in local news Nirvana.
THORNBURG
(to himself)
Goddamn, this is great stuff...
297 INT. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 297
Across the trailer the OPERATOR monitoring the CB signals for
RobinsOrt.
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OPERATOR
Chief, the terrorists are
calling for you.
Robinson grabs a headset.
ROBINSON
This is Robinson. Hans? You
want to talk?
INTERCUT:
298 INT. NAKATOMI/HANS' OFFICE - SAME 298
Hans sits in his office.
HANS
1
I I'm afraid that talking is out
i / of the question as long as you
have one of your operatives
in the building.
ROBINSON
Let me make this perfectly clear,
McClane is not attached to the
^ Los Angeles Police Department in
(, any way, shape or form. I give you
my word. Look, let's try to
settle this thing.
HANS
Perhaps we should both give up
something to get something.
ROBINSON
That's right, an act of good faith.
HANS
We are prepared to release three of
the hostages in exchange for the
return of the equipment, Mr. McClane
has taken.
ROBINSON
He's going after it now.
HANS
.1 don't believe him.
ROBINSON
/W\ Look, don't tie negotiations to a
variable I have no control over!
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HANS
You have control over it.
Exercise it.
Hans turns off the radio.
299 ON ROBINSON 299
He is left alone on the line with this thought.
300 ON MCCLANE 300
He opens the stairwell door on the 39th floor and moves
carefully down a row of glass-walled offices. Suddenly his
CB crackles.
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
John?
McClane ducks into an:
301 OFFICE 301
and lifts the CB.
( MCCLANE
What's up, AI?
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Just calling to see how you're
doing.
MCCLANE
Don't babysit me, AI. I'm having
a hard enough time as it is.
302 ON ROBINSON AND OPERATOR 302
The OPERATOR listens via headset to the other channels with a
German INTERPRETER.
OPERATOR
We're picking up a lot of traffic
in German on channel twenty-six.
INTERPRETER
(listens, then to
Robinson)
They're going to try to use his
signal to find him.
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ROBINSON
We'11 let him know on nine.
(to an Officer)
Where's Powell?
OFFICER
He's outside, Sir. Need me to
get him?
ROBINSON
(beat)
No...I'll get him.
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Scene 31 - McClane Under Fire
Robinson exits the police trailer to tell Powell, then stops
on the bottom step. Powell is less than twenty feet away.
For a moment Robinson stands there, then he shakes out a
cigarette and walks in the other direction.
304 INT. OFFICE 39TH FLOOR - SAME 304
McClane in the office talking to Powell. As he talks he lifts
his cut foot, examines the bandage. It's bloodsoaked.
MCCLANE
Well, I needed a break anyway.
(grimaces at bandage)
What got you off the street, AI?
He puts his foot down, reaches into his kit bag, takes out his
spare magazine and begins re-loading it.
305 INT. STAIRWELL - SAME 305
Franco moving down the stairwell. Suddenly he hears McClane's
voice on his CB. He stops, directs the antenna.
306 MCCLANE 306
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
An accident...
MCCLANE
(grins)
The way you drive, I can see why.
POWELL'S VOICE
(beat, serious)
I shot a kid.
McClane's smile disappears-
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MCCLANE
Sorry, man. I didn't mean to
make a joke of it.
307 STAIRWELL - ON FRANCO 307
He listens to McClane then turns to channel 26 and speaks in
German.
308 INT. LIMO - SAME 308
William turns the dial and hears Franco's conversation in
German. Concerned.
WILLIAM
I don't like this, man.
| 309 MCCLANE 309
/
He stops re-loading, concerned and puts the spare magazine
down on the edge of the table.
MCCLANE
Hey, AI, you know I haven't even
met you, but you don't seem like
/Ji^N
the kind of guy not to get back on
the horse.
POWELL
(defensively)
Yeah, well, I did...
310 STAIRWELL DOOR - 39TH FLOOR 310
The stairwell door opens and a Franco steps into the corridor on
39th floor. We can HEAR McClane's VOICE for the first time
without the radio.
311 MCCLANE 311
MCCLANE
What happened?
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
The next time...I was too careful
for my own good...and it cost me
a partner.
MCCLANE
/$ff^V Listen, AI...
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311 CONTINUED: 311
/££^v POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Look, I don't need any advice —
MCCLANE
And I'm not giving any. The facts
are man, you•re a good partner.
You've kept me going and don't
you forget that.
SUDDENLY behind McClane we SEE Franco through the glass wall
of the office. He's only three offices away. He lifts his
radio and whispers in German.
312 POLICE INTERPRETER 312
INTERPRETER
/ He sees him.
/
313 ON WILLIAM 313
He can't stand it any longer. He throws up the volume on his
CB, presses his TALK Switch and yells.
WILLIAM
Look out, John!
314 ON MCCLANE 314
reacts to the William's warning and hits the floor just as a
burst of Franco's machine gun fire rips through the glass
partition and blows out the windows in front of him.
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Scene 32 - Rooftop Showdown
Robinson comes up to Powell.
ROBINSON
Alert McClane. They're after him.
Suddenly both' men look up as bits of glass sparkle and fall to
the street like glitter in the huge spotlights.
POWELL
No lie.
316 INT. 39TH FLOOR - SAME 316
McClane dives into another office across the hall just before
Franco cuts him off.
/f»!ft\
317 MCCLANE 317
checks his rifle — he's almost out of ammunition — and opens
his kit bag for the spare clip as we:
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318 INSERT - THE SPARE CLIP 318
f*^ on the desk in the first office. It is picked up by Franco,
who smiles at his find.
319 ON MCCLANE 319
He moves quickly down the corridor to the stairwell and opens
the door REVEALING:
320 FRANCO 320
He stands in the stairwell his machine gun trained on McClane.
321 INT. POLICE TRAILER 321
The Interpreter looks at Powell and Robinson entering the trailer
INTERPRETER
They've caught him. They're taking
him to the roof.
322 STAIRWELL - ON FRANCO AND MCCLANE . 322
climbing. Franco listens to Hans on the CB.
(** HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
Wait for Karl. Don't take
him there alone.
FRANCO
Nein, nein...We are here.
323 INT. POLICE TRAILER 323
Robinson and Powell listening to the conversation.
ROBINSON
(on police radio)
All C-thirty three personnel
be sharp. Countdown starting
with four.
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324 EXT. ADJACENT BUILDING ROOF - NIGHT 324
A POLICE SNIPER (#1) brings up his high-powered rifle. His
C""* SPOTTER (#1) sits next to him with an infra-red scope and CB.
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325 HIS P . O . V . 325
/fl&?£\
Through infra-red scope. The door to the roof.
SPOTTER #1
One, clear.
326 EXT. ROOFTOP OF ANOTHER BUILDING - SAME 326
SNIPER (#2's) nest. The SPOTTER (#2) lifts his radio.
SPOTTER #2
Two clear —
327 INT. DOOR TO THE ROOF - STAIRWELL - SAME 327
McClane and the Franco reach the interior door that leads to
the roof. McClane is about to open it when Franco stops.
FRANCO
Stop...Turn around.
McClane does. Franco's eyes focus on McClane's detective
badge covered with dirt and blood. Franco unpins it from
McClane's shirt and wipes it clean.
328 SPOTTER #2'S P.O.V. 328
The door to the roof opens slowly and two men emerge. The
Spotter talks by headset.
SPOTTER #2
(voice over)
They're on the roof.
ROBINSON
(voice over)
Look for the badge.
329 SNIPER'S SCOPE P.O.V. (CROSSHAIRS) CLOSE ON 329
ytSIn^
MCCLANE'S BADGE
SNIPER #2
(voice over) . .-
I've got it...
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329 CONTINUED: 329
We PULL BACK TO SEE Franco is now wearing the badge,
They continue toward the edge. McClane is limping
noticeably.
SNIPER #2
(voice over)
...and it's clean...From the
looks of it, though, he's
turned things around.
330 ON POWELL AND ROBINSON 330
listening, surprised.
SPOTTER #1
(voice over)
Spotter one, here, I've got
that too, Sir.
POWELL
(to Robinson
He would have let us know.
(into mike)
Is anyone limping?
SPOTTER #2
(voice over)
Yessir, the one in front.
POWELL
(to Robinson)
It's a trick.
But Robinson looks lost. Unsure.
POWELL
(forcefully)
It'.s a trick!
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331 EXT. NAKATOMI ROOF - ON MCCLANE AND FRANCO 331
f^ They reach the edge, there's nothing there. McClane acts
surprised.
MCCLANE
I left them right here...or maybe
they're over there.
Franco cocks his machine gun.
MCCLANE
Hang on...I just remembered...I've
got 'em in my pockets.
Carefully he reaches into a pocket and brings out a handful
of detonators. Franco takes them and presses his CB.
FRANCO
/ (to CB)
/ I've got them.
Hans' voice comes back.
HANS' VOICE
Good. Kill him.
/$Sf\ FRANCO
(to McClane)
Kneel.
332 INT. POLICE TRAILER 332
Robinson suddenly decides. He grabs his mike.
ROBINSON
All C-33 personnel, got that?
333 NAKATOMI ROOFTOP 333
McClane kneels in front of franco. The terrorist aims his
machine gun at McClane's head, then suddenly, without a sound,
Franco is blown backwards then sideways almost simultaneously,
as if hit by two invisible punches. McClane hits the ground
just as the:
334 ANGLE - ROOFTOP DOOR 334
swings open and Karl opens fire. More sniper shots send Karl
back inside. He closes the door and locks it.
335 MCCLANE 335
/lp^\
lies there a moment longer, then picks up Franco's CB.
"MCCLANE
AI?
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336 POLICE TRAILER - ON POWELL 336
relieved.
POWELL
Right here, man. Jesus, that scared
the shit out of me.
MCCLANE
You and me both. I just want to say
thanks to the boys on the rooftops.
POWELL
(grins)
I'll pass that along.
MCCLANE
And to whatever jumped in back there.
337 INT. LIMO - ON WILLIAM 337
wiped out in the backseat. He clutches the stuffed animal in
a death lock. He's relieved to hear McClane's voice, then
leans forward. Hesitates, then presses the talk button.
WILLIAM
This is him.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
You got a name?
William hesitates, then picks up a fast food wrapper off the
front seat and smiles.
WILLIAM
Just call me Taco Bill.
338 ON MCCLANE 338
MCCLANE
(listening to the voice)
You sound familiar, Taco...
WILLIAMS' VOICE
No, man, you don't know me, I'm just
one of your underground supporters
watching this thing on TV.
MCCLANE
(realizing)
I'll be damned...William...
(presses button)
In stereo I bet.
/Wfty
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339 ON WILLIAM 339
yS$£?\
WILLIAM
(grins)
Dolby.
340 ON MCCLANE 340
MCCLANE
Thanks, man.
(to Powell)
Al? I think they've locked the door
on me.
Just then Hans' voice comes over the air.
HANS' VOICE
We have, Mr. McClane, but we'll be
back to kill you. Think about that
while you are out there in the cold.
341 EXT. CENTURY CITY - KCBS REMOTE - NIGHT 341
Dick Thornburg goes to a commercial. Mary comes over, smiling.
THORNBURG
I hope that smile means you've found
something.
MARY
(confidently)
I think we've got.a winner.
She smiles knowingly and pats a plain brown folder.
3 42 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 342
He sits in his office and looks through the open door at
Holly. She sits twisting the band of her watch.
HANS
A psychiatrist would probably say
that that action comes from some
deep worry or angst.
HOLLY
(cuttingly sarcastic)
I'd say I've approached those
feelings recently.
34 3 INT. BLACK AND WHITE POLICE CAR 343
Robinson sits in the backseat of a black and white police car
looking at some papers. Little•Johnson is already sitting there,
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Big Johnson sits in the front. They're not going anywhere,
they're here to talk.
BIG JOHNSON
'Hans' is Hans Gruber. There's a
call out on him by Interpol. It's
our ballgame, Dwayne.
ROBINSON
(looking up)
I don't see any written authorization
here...
(tossing the
reports on the
seat)
When I see it, then it's your case.
He starts to open the door, realizes he's in a black and
white — no rear door handles — and looks back at the two
men.
LITTLE JOHNSON
(grins)
Cool down, Dwayne, you know
authorization's coming, 'problem
is it's an hour away...and we don't
have an hour.
Robinson eyes them suspiciously.
LITTLE JOHNSON
(seriously)
We're ordering an air strike at
five a.m.
ROBINSON
(stunned)
And you want me to go along with
that? What if it fails?
LITTLE JOHNSON
It won't. Thanxs to McClane,
they're down to four. They can't
cover the whole place. It'll be
over before they know what hit
them.
Robinson hesitates. He looks stunned.
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BIG JOHNSON
Gruber makes it our case, Dwayne.
We're just giving you a chance to
wipe some of the shit off your face
from that fiasco last night.
ROBINSON
(beat)
What about McClane?
LITTLE JOHNSON
He's wounded, we have it on tape
that they're going after him at dawn
...if a question should ever arise,
and it won't, we were giving him
air cover. We just can't tip the
hat by telling him.
Both men look at the deputy chief. Robinson closes the
folder on Gruber and thumps on the door.
ROBINSON
Get me out of this thing.
S0y\
The two agents share a smile.
BIG JOHNSON
That's what we're here for, Dwayne.
He gets out and opens Robinson's door.
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Scene 33 - McClane's Descent
He goes through Franco's kit bag and removes his Beretta and
finds something else — another candy bar.
MCCLANE
Hot damn, Mars bars.
(savors a bite, then
presses CB)
Hey, Al?
INTERCUT:
345 POWELL 345
He looks up at the building.
POWELL
Merry Christmas, man. How was
your nap?
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345
345 CONTINUED:
C MCCLANE
What nap? I was just rinsing out
a few things. What's going on down
there?
POWELL
Just the usual stuff...
MCCLANE
That's what you said the last time.
WILLIAM'S VOICE
And don't you believe it, either.
MCCLANE
You watching this, Taco?
/ 346 INT. LIMO 346
William watches the TV set in the limo, presses the Talk
Button on his CB.
WILLIAM
In color, John.
INTERCUT:
347 MCCLANE 347
MCCLANE
Talk to me.
WILLIAM
Well, they're not showing much but
they've brought in a lot of hardware.
POWELL"S VOICE
John, listen to me. The less you
talk about this the better.
MCCLANE
Talk about what, Al? Didn't you
tell me nothing is going on?
348 ON POWELL 348
POWELL
Okay, it is true we have SWAT personnel
here, but they are here in case of
emergency...Listen, John, I just talked
to them and they swore there would be
no ground assault.
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349 MCCLANE 349
He turns the corner and finds a metal cabinet (like the glass
ones on the lower floors) containing a fire hose. He pulls
out a foot of the canvas hose, then stops.'
MCCLANE
What about an air assault, AI?
POWELL'S VOICE
(beat)
No one's said anything about an
air assault.
MCCLANE
Put Robinson on to tell me that.
POWELL'S VOICE
It's not his show anymore, John.
?'
/ This hits McClane.
MCCLANE
Then who the hell's is it?
POWELL'S VOICE
(beat)
FBI's.
The word hit.McClane like they would any cop. It's a brand
new ball game.
MCCLANE
Taco?...
He yanks the heavy fire hose out of the cabinet and across
the roof toward the edge.
WILLIAM'S VOICE
Right here.
MCCLANE
I don't like the sound of this. Are
your eyes as good as your ears?
WILLIAM'S VOICE
Twenty twenty, boss.
MCCLANE
Keep 'em glued to that screen.
350 HANS' OFFICE 350
Karl comes to the 'door, Hans looks up from the CB.
(CONTINUED)
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350
350 CONTINUED:
HANS
^v They're getting ready to do something.
^ Get to the roof.
351 MCCLANE 351
removes Franco's belt, then cuts a crude harness out of the
dead man's kit bag.
352 ANGLE ON MCCLANE 352
as he leans over the roof and focuses on the large plate
windows of the floor below (40th). He carefully measures off
the hose, then looks over the side one more time. The drop
again gets to him this time. He straightens up quickly.
MCCLANE
(to himself)
What the fuck am I doing?
Suddenly he stops his work and listens.
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Scene 34 - McClane's Rooftop Battle
William is running through the channels. Suddenly he stops
and picks up his CB.
f* 354 EXT. NAKATOMI ROOF 354
McClane stares out toward the horizon. In the darkness the
lights — three helicopter gunships, flying in tight
formation. His radio crackles.
WILLIAM'S VOICE
John! —
MCCLANE
I see them.
(to AI)
Now what do you say, Al? Those
traffic helicopters?
355 INT. POLICE TRAILER - ON POWELL - SAME 355
He is stunned to hear this. He asks out loud to the video
technicians.
POWELL
Is anyone picking up helicopters?
A TECHNICIAN at the far end turns.
TECHNICIAN
f*^ I've got them.
Powell moves quickly to the technician's video screen. Sure
enough, he sees the lights of incoming helicopters. The sight
stuns him.
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356 INT. MACHINE ROOM (LOWER ROOF) - SAME 356
Karl rips the top off a crate and removes a lethal Stinger
missile launcher.
357 INT. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 357
Just then Robinson and Little Johnson step inside. Powell
turns on Johnson.
POWELL
What the hell you doing?
LITTLE JOHNSON
If he knew about them, he would have
tipped off the terrorists.
POWELL
(hard)
You sonofabitch. You've left him
up there to fry.
358 EXT. THE ROOF - ON MCCLANE - SAME 358
He struggles into his make-shift harness and moves to his
position at the edge of the roof behind the big NAKATOMI
letters.
MCCLANE
(to CB)
Taco?
WILLIAM'S VOICE
Right here, John.
MCCLANE
Listen carefully...
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359 INT. LIMO 359
William climbs into the front seat of the limo and starts
the engine. He gives it a couple good revs and looks over
his shoulder at the stuffed animal — it's buckled in.
WILLIAM
Hang on, man.
360 EXT. ROOF 360
McClane looks back toward the helicopters on the horizon...
•They are closing fast, less- than a half-mile away. The first
helicopter lowers its nose and starts to dive.
(CONTINUED)
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360 CONTINUED: 360
MCCLANE
( t o CB)
Okay...Now!
361 INT. LIMO 361
William backs out of his parking place and puts it in drive.
He opens a tape case and frantically searches through his
collection of RAP cassettes as he speeds through the garage
toward the gates.
WILLIAM
(counting to himself)
Ten, nine, eight, seven...
362 EXT. ROOF 362
i
( McClane turns the CB to channel 26, turns up the volume and
throws the CB in the direction of the elevator tower. The
door to the roof starts to open and McClane fires a quick
burst forcing the terrorists back inside.
3 63 INT. LIMO 363
William suddenly pulls a tape from the case and his fingers
whip it into the cassette deck in the car stereo.
WILLIAM
...Three, two, one.
He cranks up the volume and presses the TALK BUTTON on his
CB.
364 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 364
Hans at the window. He watches the helicopters approach and
starts to tlak into his radio when suddenly his CB starts
blaring William's LOUD RAP MUSIC.
365 EXT. THE ROOF - CLOSE ON MCCLANE'S RADIO - SAME 365
BLASTING the same LOUD MUSIC as we:
CUT TO:
366 INT. LIMO 366
racing head on toward the gate. William braces for impact.
(CONTINUED)
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366 CONTINUED: 366
( WILLIAM
Well, here goes my raise...
And he CRASHES THROUGH THE GATE just as we:
CUT TO:
367 EXT. ELEVATOR TOWER 367
As the first cannon rounds from the helicopter drown out the
song and rocks spew up all around the elevator tower. The
gunship passes overhead and one of the terrorists steps out
and fires at McClane.
368 MCCLANE 368
takes cover behind the NAKATOMI sign.
' 369 HELICOPTER #2 369
dives to attack.
370 THE DOOR TO THE ELEVATOR TOWER 370
suddenly cracks open and a column of smoke, stiff as a
f* flagpole, rises into the sky.
371 CLOSE ON MCCLANE 371
realizing what's happened.
MCCLANE
No!
372 HELICOPTER #2 372
as the missile hits and the helicopter explodes — sending
parts falling to the street and adjacent rooftop.
373 MCCLANE 373
fires at the door driving the terrorists back inside, then
looks up at:
374 HELICOPTER #1 374
for a moment the other helicopter hesitates as if deciding
whether to attack again.
/flfi^S^
375 MCCLANE 375
watching the helicopter.
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^ MCCLANE
(watching the helicopter)
Use your brains and get the fuck out
of here.
376 HELICOPTER #1 376
But the chopper lowers its nose and dives toward the building.
377 MCCLANE 377
turns back to the door; it starts to open.
MCCLANE
Shit.
He fires wildly at the doorway, forcing the two terrorists
to stay inside as:
378 THE HELICOPTER 378
makes a pass blowing the hell out of the tower, but not bothering
anyone inside. The helicopter turns and starts to come in again.
379 MCCLANE 379
/£$^N
( covers the helicopter's attack, then suddenly runs out of
ammunition. He reaches for the second magazine just as:
380 THE ELEVATOR TOWER DOOR 380
opens and Uli fires at him.
381 MCCLANE 381
as a bullet rips cleanly through his thigh and causes him to
knock the second magazine over the side of the roof. McClane
falls to the edge and watches the magazine disappear below.
382 THE HELICOPTER 382
starting its pass, but with no one to provide cover.
383 KARL 383
steps boldly into the doorway behind Uli with another Stinger
missile on his shoulder. He takes aim.
384 KARL'S P.O.V. 384
y<m\. The diving helicopter directly in his sights.
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385 MCCLANE 385
lying on the edge of the building. He focuses on the window
y below him and takes out his Beretta. As the helicopter comes
screaming in for its attack, McClane fires into the window.
Ratings
Scene 35 - Helicopter Explosion and McClane's Fall
Inside the helicopter there is a split-second to realize the
inevitable, but not enough time to react as the second missile
is launched.
387 THE ROOFTOP 387
turns cherry red as THE HELICOPTER EXPLODES DIRECTLY OVERHEAD.
Flaming gas and chunks of metal come raining down onto the
roof.
388 MCCLANE 388
rolls off the side of the building, crashing full force
I through the window and into a:
389 INT. 4pTH FLOOR OFFICE 389
McClane clutches for a handhold as hunks of the destroyed
helicopter fall past the window. He grabs onto the desk leg
with one hand but the tension of the hose pulls him back
toward the window like a giant hand. With one hand he pulls
the strap to release the harness. Immediately losing his
grip on the desk the tension of the hose pulls him toward
the window, but the harness slips off just in time. He's in.
390 EXT. ROOF - MORNING 390
Karl looks out from the doorway at the wreckage and the
deserted rooftop. Nothing moves. Nothing could have survived
that crash. Only the 'K' remains of the NAKATOMI sign.
A half-mile away the third helicopter lands on the rooftop
of a nearby building. The remaining FBI troops climb out
and run for safety. Karl brings the CB to his mouth. Channel
26 is jammed. He turns to nine and his words are heard from
William's limo to Powell on the street.
KARL'S VOICE
McClane is dead.
391 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 391
Hans is watching the TV.
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392 ON SCREEN 392
We SEE a LONG SHOT of the Nakatomi rooftop. The smoldering
wreckage seems to be visual evidence of Karl's statement.
393 EXT. THE STREET - SAME 393
Powell watches in horror as final pieces of the helicopter
come raining down. Unwilling to give up he charges into:
394 INT. POLICE TRAILER 394
Technicians are rewinding and viewing the various tape of
the helicopter attack and the crashes.
POWELL
(to a technician)
Any sign of McClane?
1
/
TECHNICIAN
Nothing.
395 INT. 40TH FLOOR OFFICE - DAWN 395
McClane pulls himself into the room. He is shaken. Breathing
hard. He tears at his pants to reveal the leg wound. There
is too much blood to see it clearly.
/^\
He tries to wipe away the blood but the pain is so intense
he crumples up onto the floor writhing. Suddenly he sees
something across the floor.
396 CLOSE ON A DESK PHOTO 396
of a family. The glass shattered but the picture intact.
397 MCCLANE 397
he looks up on a credenza and sees other photos:
398 INSERT - PHOTOS 398
A boy playing baseball, a girl pushing a stroller. Anonymous
faces, but families.
399 CLOSE ON MCCLANE. 399
He closes his eyes.
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Scene 36 - Aftermath of the Explosion
William's battered limo is surrounded by SWAT officers. He
( is helped out of the car holding his hands up.
(CONTINUED)
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WILLIAM
Don't shoot! I'm one of us!
Taco Bill!
He sees the TV camera and waves.
401 INT. 37TH FLOOR - STAIRWELL DOOR - LATER 401
The stairwell door opens and McClane limps onto the 37th
floor toward the fort he constructed earlier. He stops at
a water fountain where he washes away the blood and dirt from
his leg.
402 CLOSE - HIS WOUND 402
A neat hole going through the outside of the thigh and coming
> out the back. The bleeding has stopped.
/
403 INT. HANS' OFFICE 403
Hans turns his CB to nine and speaks to the radio.
HANS
We must find the detonators. Go
^ office by office.
404 37TH FLOOR OFFICE 404
McClane goes to a desk and opens a drawer, looking for
something to re-bandage his foot. He finds nothing and
checks another — still nothing.
405 ANGLE ON INNER OFFICE 405
He moves to a desk in an inner office and suddenly spots a
TV set in the cabinet. Like a stone-age man suddenly placed
in the twentieth century, he reaches for it cautiously,
turns it on and watches it dumbly, turning down the volume.
406 CLOSE ON TV 406
Images flash by, a compilation of events of the last twelve
hours. A TV reporter — behind him police barricades.
Officers in bulletproof vests run hurriedly past him. We SEE
a night scene with the words: RECORDED EARLIER at the bottom
of the screen. The image shakes, the TV camera tilts up
quickly and we SEE the upper floors obscured in a huge cloud
of smoke — the elevator explosion.
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406 CONTINUED: 406
Suddenly the TV picture shows a day shot of the same floors
with the words LIVE printed on the screen. It shows the
ring of destruction around the middle of the building.
407 ON MCCLANE 407
The extent of the damage stuns him.
MCCLANE
Jesus...
He leans forward and turns up the volume.
TV REPORTER
...and then before sunrise, police
helicopters came over the hills to
try to protect the desperate policeman
who says he has killed seven of the
gang — although only three have been
accounted for.
MCCLANE
(sarcastically)
I should have taken scalps.
/S^V,
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Uli comes down the stairs. Suddenly he hears something and
presses his ear to the stairwell door.
409 EXT. POLICE TRAILER - DAWN 409
Al Powell leaves the operations trailer and moves down the
sidewalk past the vested SWAT officers and collapses on the
stoop of a business. He looks and feels like a man who has
betrayed a friend. A TV news REPORTER spots Powell and moves
his crew quickly over for an interview.
410 CLOSE - MCCLANE'S TV 410
We SEE the reporter approaching Powell.
411 MCCLANE 411
Having never seen Powell, McClane ignores the picture until
he hears:
REPORTER (ON TV)
...Thanks, Jim...This is
Sergeant Al Powell, pressed into
service late last night.
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412 CLOSE ON MCCLANE 412
This gets his attention. He looks up at the TV.
REPORTER
(on TV)
Sergeant Powell, you've been
actually talking to the man
inside, John McClane, haven't
you?
413 ON SCREEN 413
Powell says nothing and begins to move away. The reporter
and camera follow him.
REPORTER
(on TV)
Can you comment on the speculation
that he was not adequately warned
about the attack. Do you feel he
was sufficiently warned?
Powell stops. He looks directly into the camera as if
looking right at McClane.
POWELL
(on TV)
No...And I'll tell you something
else...he wasn't the only one.
414 INT. 37TH FLOOR - SAME 414
A stairwell door opens and Uli, steps out onto the floor. He
can hear the sound of the television set and moves carefully
toward the SOUND.
415 ON MCCLANE 415
He hears something and pulls out the Beretta. He hits the
floor of the office and crawls to the doorway and looks out.
416 HIS P.O.V. 416
Uli moving toward the office. Drawn by the SOUND of the TV.
417 MCCLANE 417
pops out the Beretta's magazine — he's down to his last
three bullets. He checks his shoulder harness, nothing. He
lies there thinking for a moment, then rolls back over and
suddenly focuses on something on the wall just behind the
terrorist.
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418 HIS P.O.V. 418
The plastic explosive he planted by the light switch. He
takes careful aim.
MCCLANE
(softly, to himself)
Make it count, Johnny boy...
419 ON THE TV SCREEN - POWELL AND THE REPORTER 419
REPORTER
(on TV)
If you could tell him something
right now, what would you say?
420 EXT. STREET - ON POWELL 420
I POWELL
I'd just say...hang in there,
partner and if you can hear me give
me a sign.
Suddenly an explosion rips the 37th floor. Powell looks up.
POWELL
That'll do.
421 INT. 37th FLOOR - SAME 421
McClane moves through the rubble of blown-up desks and finds
the terrorist's machine gun; his CB hisses nearby.
422 INT. HANS' OFFICE 422
For the first time we SEE that Hans is off-balanced. Holly
watches him. Suddenly the CB comes to life.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
It's all over Hans, you're down
to nothing.
423 EXT. HOLLY'S HOUSE IN SANTA MONICA - SAME 423
Thornburg's KCBS truck parked in front of Holly's house.
424 ANGLE ON FRONT DOOR 424
Thornburg pleads with Holly's housekeeper, Paulina. She
is scared and Thornburg plays on it.
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424 CONTINUED: 424
THORNBURG
(to Paulina)
One minute, that's all we ask.
You could be denying them a chance
to talk to their parents.
425 INT. 37TH FLOOR - ON MCCLANE - SAME 425
He slams in a fresh magazine and suddenly stares at the
television screen.
426 HIS P.O.V. - HIS CHILDREN 426
Paulina, near tears, lets the children come to the door. They
squint into the bright lights.
j 427 32ND FLOOR - ON HOLLY 427
seeing the same scene through the door to Hans' office. She
gasps at the sight of her children.
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Hans stares at the children on the TV then looks across the
room at the family photo on the credenza.
429 EXT. HOLLY'S HOUSE - ON THORNBURG - MORNING 429
He now is squatting down with his microphone to interview the
children. His voice is soft, comforting.
THORNBURG
(to the children)
Is there something you would like
to say to your mom or dad if they're
watching.
John, Jr. says nothing, but Lucy looks at the camera.
LUCY
(softly)
Come home.
430 INT. 32ND FLOOR - ON HOLLY - SAME 430
She struggles to fight back tears with no luck. Suddenly the
door to Hans' office opens. He steps out and looks at Holly
AS we:
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431 MCCLANE 431
He stands stunned looking at the TV, as if all the fight has
suddenly been drained from him. His CB comes to life.
HANS' VOICE
Mr. McClane, I have someone who
wants to talk to you.
HOLLY'S VOICE
John!?—
MCCLANE
Holly! Are you all right?
HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
A temporary condition unless you
listen carefully.
POWELL'S VOICE
(o.s.; booming in)
You touch that woman you son-of-a-bitch
and —
MCCLANE
Let him talk. I'm listening.
/S3RN,
HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
It's time to end the game. Put
the detonators on an elevator and
send them to the 39th floor. Then
come down here, unarmed.
TIME CUT TO:
432 INT. 33RD FLOOR - MORNING 432
McClane waits in the elevator corridor for the service
elevator. The car arrives. He places the kit bag inside,
punches thirty-nine, and steps back into the corridor.
433 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 433
Hans has Holly in his office. She nervously pulls on her
watchband when suddenly we HEAR McClane*s VOICE on the CB.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
They're on their way up. I want
to talk to her.
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HANS
When you get down here.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
No. Now.
Hans hesitates for a moment then hands the CB to Holly who
takes it with trembling hands.
HOLLY
John?
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Are you okay?
HOLLY
I'm scared but, I...I'm not hurt.
They said, you were dead.
MCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.)
Don't believe what you hear on TV.
I need to hear your voice though.
f0^ My feet are cut and I'm wounded and
I've got a long way to go. I need
you to talk to me. Like we use to
do. Like up at your father's farm
on Long Island. Remember how we'd
talk?
HOLLY
Yes.
434 32ND FLOOR - STAIRWELL DOOR - SAME 434
McClane quietly opens the door to the 32nd floor. It is
quiet. The hostages are on the other side of the floor.
MCCLANE
(to CB)
I want you to pretend it's just
us. I've got to hear your voice.
It's the only way I'll make it...
Understand? Talk to me.
He turns down his CB and moves steadily toward the other
side of the building.
(** 435 ON HOLLY 435
She talks calmly into the CB as if she is talking privately
to McClane.
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HOLLY
(beat)
I miss you. I've missed you a
lot. I found a picture of us the
other night...all of us...
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The doors to the service elevator open and Karl takes the
detonators and goes to the safe.
437 INT. 32ND FLOOR - SAME 437
McClane moves around the side of the floor. He reaches the
corner and he can see the hostages. They are sitting on the
floor. Holly's secretary, Ginny, sitting a few feet away
from Fritz, the guard, looks up and sees McClane, she
immediately tries to hide her surprise but Fritz notices
and looks around the corner.
438 HIS P.O.V. 438
The corridor. There is no sign of McClane.
439 FRITZ 439
He looks back at Ginny.
GINNY
(innocently)
I must have been seeing things.
But Fritz doesn't buy it. He goes slowly down the corridor
where McClane was and looks around the next corner. Fritz
sees nothing and starts back. As he passes an office an arm
suddenly reaches out, covers his mouth and pulls him inside.
440 INT. HANS' OFFICE - ON HOLLY - SAME 440
She has indeed blocked everything out of her mind but McClane
as she talks.
HOLLY
...I want us to live together again...
She watches as Hans loads his Walther. He suddenly becomes
suspicious that she is doing all the talking and looks up.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
(o.s.; softly)
That's what I want too. I'm almost
there, honey.
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/s*v HOLLY
(relieved to
hear him)
Let me talk. There's so much I
wanted to tell you last night but
I couldn't...
441 HALLWAY - SAME 441
McClane steps back into the hallway — a finger to his
mouth — and motions for her to come. She gets up and
starts for McClane. The others follow.
442 INT. 39TH FLOOR - SAME 442
Karl finishes packing the last detonator and sets the timer.
Ten seconds. He grabs his gun and leaves.
I
/ 443 INT. HANS' OFFICE - SAME 443
Holly talks into the CB. While she talks she notices people
leaving and casually looks away so that Hans won't notice.
His back is to the exodus.
HOLLY
^ I love you. Whatever happens,
( I love you.
444 39TH FLOOR 444
Karl in the hallway. Suddenly, AN EXPLOSION belches smoke
out of the safe room.
445 INT.. POLICE TRAILER - SAME 445
Powell, Robinson, the Johnsons hear the sound over their CB.
ROBINSON
What's that?
446 INT. HOSTAGE FLOOR - SAME 446
An older WOMAN panics at the sound of the explosion.
WOMAN
Oh, God, their going to kill us!
She becomes hysterical.
447 HANS' OFFICE 447
• Hans goes to the door and sees the exodus. He shoots the
woman then grabs Holly and pushes her out of the office and
down the opposite corridor.
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448 MCCLANE 448
(** sees Hans and Holly moving toward the elevators and aims, but
he doesn't risk a shot. He starts after them.
MCCLANE
(to CB)
Al?! You've got thirty-five
people coming down the stairs.
You've got to occupy this building
now!
449 EXT. NAKATOMI - SAME 449
SWAT officers sprint toward the building. The lead officers
crash through the front glass doors and rush to the stairwells.
450 ON POWELL 450
POWELL
John, they're on their way up the
stairs. We want you to keep the
hostages together till we get there.
451 ON MCCLANE 451
moving down the corridor toward the elevators.
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MCCLANE
No way. He's got my wife.
452 EXT. ADJACENT ROOF - SAME 452
A police helicopter takes off from the neighboring building
and streaks toward the Nakatomi tower. It opens fire on the
elevator tower.
453 INT. ELEVATOR 453
Hans hears the sound of automatic rifle fire overhead. He
brings up the CB.
HANS
I want it known that we still have
the weapons to knock the helicopters
out of the sky! Mr. McClane, are
you there?
MCCLANE'S VOICE
Right here.
HANS
Your wife will be dead in ten
seconds unless you listen carefully.
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454 ON MCCLANE 454
( listening.
HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
Get into the elevator. Come
unarmed to the 39th floor.
455 39TH FLOOR - SAFE ROOM 455
Karl steps into the safe and begins removing stacks of
documents.
456 CLOSE ON THE DOCUMENTS 456
$100,000 TREASURY BONDS. The stacks are enormous.
Three-four hundred to a stack.
457 KARL 457
His CB crackles with Hans' voice.
HANS* VOICE
Karl. Helicopters!
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He preps a Stinger missile and looks through the crack in the
roof door.
459 HIS P.O.V. 459
Smoldering debris from the helicopter crash covers the roof.
Then a quarter mile away he sees the helicopter diving for
the roof.
460 INT. ELEVATOR CAR 460
McClane finishes taping his holster behind his neck. Suddenly
the doors open, the 37th floor, then close — McClane*s
buying time.
HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
I'm waiting, Mr. McClane.
He slips the Beretta into the hidden holster, then practices
reaching behind his neck and drawing the gun. It is awkward
and he tries it again — better. The doors open to the
38th floor, then close.
f^ 461 INT. 39TH FLOOR - SAME 461
Hans positions himself in front of the elevator bank,
fingering the trigger of his machine gun, waiting.
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462 KARL 462
reaches the roof just as Heinz opens the door and lifts the
Stinger to his shoulder. The chopper opens fire. The rounds
kick up rooftop-gravel in lines straight to the door, hitting
Heinz and Karl.
463 HANS 463
He hears the HUM of the elevators and braces himself. He
checks his gun and waits. Suddenly, the far right elevator
light comes on over the doors and we hear the electronic
ring. The door opens and Hans opens fire.
Bullets rip into the brushed aluminum interior, totally
destroying the car. Hans spends half his clip before he
realizes the car is empty. The light over the next door
comes on.
i
J Hans slams in another magazine. He moves quickly to that
door and as the doors open, blasts the inside of that car
before realizing, that it too is empty. His CB comes to
life and he hears McClane's. voice.
MCCLANE'S VOICE
I thought we had a deal, Hans?
f* 464 INT. 39TH FLOOR - STAIRWELL DOOR - ON MCCLANE - SAME 464
He moves from the stairwell onto the 39th floor carefully
toward the elevator bank where Hans and Holly were. He
turns the corner and they're gone.
465 ON MCCLANE 465
moves carefully up the hallway. Every office doorway is a
potential ambush.
MCCLANE
(to CB)
Where are you, Hans? I thought
you were going to meet me?
HANS' VOICE
(o.s.)
You're almost there. I can hear
you without the radio...Are you
unarmed?
McClane turns the corner. We SEE the lighted doorway to the
safe room.
MCCLANE
(to CB)
That's what you wanted.
(CONTINUED)
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HANS
Well then let's turn off the .
radio.
POWELL'S VOICE
John no! —
McClane turns off his radio, cutting Powell off.
466 POLICE TRAILER - ON POWELL - SAME 466
and Police TECHNICIANS.
TECHNICIAN
We've lost them.
Powell stares up at the building — helpless.
^467 ON THORNBURG 467
Listening to his car radio as he drives back to Century City.
He realizes what they've done.
THORNBURG
Shit.
468 EXT. NAKATOMI 468
William listening with police. When he realizes they're off
the air, he looks up and says a little prayer.
469 INT. ANTEROOM - SAFE ROOM - ON HANS - SAME 469
He carefully lays his radio on the boardroom table so as not
to make a noise and motions Holly up with the end of his
Walther.
470 HALLWAY 470
McClane reaches the doorway to the anteroom.
MCCLANE
I'm here, Hans.
HANS
(o.s.; from the
office)
Come in. Hands in the air.
McClane puts his hands on his head, steps into the doorway.
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471 HIS P.O.V. 471
Hans stands in front of the window his arm around Holly's
neck. He holds her in front of him like a shield. Holly
gasps at the grizzily sight of her husband.
472 MCCLANE 472
MCCLANE
I'm all right, babe.
(to Hans)
Let her go. You don't need her
now.
HANS
Very noble, Mr. McClane. But
you're of no practical use to
me now...you're practically a
corpse already.
McClane looks at the Bearer's Bonds on the table. He looks
back at Hans.
MCCLANE
You know I always had my doubts
about you, Hans.
HANS
The cop in you, no doubt. Well,
it's been a long night, Mr. McClane,
but killing you and your wife should
make it all worthwhile.
He pulls back the hammer and presses the barrel into Holly's
neck.
MCCLANE
Me first, then.
Hans hesitates, then smiles. He removes the gun from Holly's
neck and aims at McClane.
HANS
Any other requests?
MCCLANE
I want to say something to my
wife.
HANS
Touching.
McClane looks directly at Holly, they lock eyes.
(CONTINUED)
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MCCLANE
Now!
She bumps Hans hand with the gun and McClane draws the
Beretta over his shoulder and fires — hitting Hans in the
right nipple. The bullet goes clean through him, starring
the window behind him. He looks at McClane increduously.
MCCLANE
Out of the way, Holly!
She tries to break free but Hans pulls her back in front of
him. Slowly he raises the gun to her neck. She squirms
against the terrorist, trying to break away but the barrel
presses against her throat. McClane aims again and fires,
hitting Hans in the shoulder.
The jolt knocks Hans backward against the window. He
releases Holly's neck and his hand slides down her arm as
the glass starts to give way behind him — his fingers
running down her arm until one finds a grip in Holly's
watchband and pulls her into the gaping window with him.
McClane drops his gun and lunges for his wife, grabbing
Holly's other arm just as she falls. For a moment McClane
holds them all but Hans' weight slowly begins to weaken
him. His hold on Holly starts to slip.
McClane braces himself against the window frame and strains
to reach Holly's watchband. His muscles quiver, his hand
almost there when we SEE Hans slowly bring his pistol up
from his side and aim at McClane.
Holly sees him and screams. Hans' hand trembles. He locks
eyes with McClane one last time, starts to pull the trigger,
as McClane releases the watchband. Hans' face registers his
horror as he and the watch suddenly drop. We listen to his
scream all the way down.
McClane pulls Holly back into the room and holds her.
MCCLANE
It's okay, babe. It's okay.
He looks down at Hans' body, then back at Holly.
MCCLANE
Hey, I've got to get you a
new watch.
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He stands looking worriedly up at the building, when
suddenly his CB comes to life.
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SWAT LEADER'S VOICE
(voice over)
This is SWAT commander four...We
have McClane and his wife. We're
bringing them down the service
elevator.
POWELL
(to CB)
Roger... Thank you, Lord.
474 ON WILLIAM - SAME 474
WILLIAM
Amen.
475 INT. KCBS MOBILE UNIT - MORNING 475
}
Thornburg's unit stuck in traffic ten blocks from the
Nakatomi building. HORNS BLARE all around the truck.
Thornburg is going crazy not being at the building. He
can feel his Emmy slipping away.
THORNBURG
C'mon, goddamnit. What is this,
an accident?
(suddenly realizing)
No. Don't tell me, it's over...
It's over and I missed it! Shit!
476 THE EMPTY LOBBY 476
The doors to the service elevator opens McClane leaning on
Holly on one side and the SWAT leader on the other moves
steadily across the cold marble floor to the front door and
steps:
477 OUTSIDE 477
into a blaze of television lights. The entire front of
the building is packed with reporters and TV cameras. Amid
shouts of "There he is!" the media surges into the police
line ringing the steps. McClane ignores their shouted
questions and pushes forward down the steps with something
else on his mind.
MCCLANE
(calling out)
Al?!
At first there is no answer, then we SEE Powell moving
through the press, his hand on the butt of his .38.
(CONTINUED)
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/S*s
McClane stops at the base of the steps and stares at him,
then offers the cop his hand.
MCCLANE
You know it's going to be hard
to go back to that desk.
POWELL
(a touch of
a grin)
No lie.
(to Holly)
You okay?
She nods weakly. Just then Robinson moves toward them
through the group.
I ROBINSON
/
We're going to have to ask you
some questions, McClane. The
damage to that building,
Mr. Ellis' shooting. To be
real honest —
MCCLANE
Shut up, Dwayne.
Before Robinson can protest, a SCREAM causes McClane to
turn.
478 HIS P.O.V. 478
There in the doorway is Karl. Easily as crusted in dirt
and blood as McClane, he holds an M-5 machine gun.
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As the press panics trying to escape, Karl locks eyes with
McClane and levels his gun. McClane throws Holly to the
ground and grabs the dumbstruck Robinson's sidearm. But
he doesn't get off a shot — a lone gunshot stops Karl —
knocking him back through the doorway. McClane looks back
to see Powell still sighting down the barrel of his .38.
His hands rock steady. He sees McClane's look.
POWELL
I owed you one.
They smile and McClane leans on Holly as William's battered
black limo backs up to them. The window rolls down and
inside we SEE William and the stuffed animal. •
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WILLIAM
My friend here thinks you better
get in if you want to make it
home before New Years.
McClane grins AS we:
FADE OUT
THE END
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Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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john mcclane | John McClane starts off as a tired but alert cop grappling with personal issues, but as the story progresses, he is pushed to his limits and forced to confront his vulnerabilities. Through a series of escalating challenges, he evolves into a courageous and strategic hero who is willing to sacrifice himself for his loved ones. By the end of the screenplay, he emerges as a resilient and determined protagonist, showcasing bravery, quick thinking, and a strong sense of justice. | The character arc for John McClane is well-developed, showcasing his growth from a tired cop to a courageous hero. However, there could be more exploration of his emotional journey and internal struggles to add depth to his character. Additionally, his relationship with his wife, Holly, could be further developed to enhance the emotional stakes of the story. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into John McClane's internal struggles and emotional journey. Show his vulnerabilities and fears to make his transformation into a hero more impactful. Additionally, explore his relationship with Holly in greater depth to add emotional depth and complexity to the story. This will help the audience connect with John McClane on a deeper level and enhance the overall emotional impact of the screenplay. |
holly | Holly starts off as a successful career woman in Los Angeles who still has feelings for her ex-husband, John. Throughout the film, she is forced to confront her past and her feelings for John as she navigates a dangerous situation. As the story progresses, Holly becomes more assertive, resilient, and willing to stand up for herself and her family. By the end of the film, she has fully embraced her strength and independence, ultimately finding closure and a renewed sense of self. | The character arc for Holly is well-developed and allows for growth and transformation throughout the film. However, there could be more emphasis on Holly's internal struggles and emotional journey as she confronts her past and faces danger. This would add depth to her character and make her arc even more compelling. | To improve the character arc for Holly, consider adding more scenes that delve into her emotional turmoil and internal conflicts. Show her grappling with her feelings for John and the impact of their separation on her life. Additionally, explore how the dangerous situation she finds herself in forces her to confront her vulnerabilities and fears, ultimately leading to her growth and empowerment. This will make Holly's arc more nuanced and engaging for the audience. |
karl | Karl starts off as a ruthless and efficient criminal involved in the takeover of the building. As the story progresses, he becomes obsessed with hunting down and killing McClane, leading to a personal vendetta that consumes him. However, towards the climax of the film, Karl begins to question his blind loyalty to the terrorist group and starts to show moments of hesitation and doubt. In the final confrontation with McClane, Karl is faced with a moral dilemma that forces him to make a decision that ultimately leads to his downfall. | The character arc for Karl is well-developed, but it could benefit from more depth and complexity. While his transformation from a ruthless criminal to a conflicted individual is compelling, it could be further enhanced by exploring his backstory and motivations in greater detail. Additionally, adding more internal conflict and emotional depth to Karl's character would make his arc more impactful and engaging for the audience. | To improve the character arc for Karl, consider delving deeper into his past experiences and motivations that have shaped him into the ruthless individual he is at the beginning of the film. Show more moments of vulnerability and internal struggle as he grapples with his loyalty to the terrorist group and his personal vendetta against McClane. Allow Karl to experience moments of redemption and self-reflection that ultimately lead to his transformation and ultimate demise in a more nuanced and emotionally resonant way. |
theo | Theo starts off as a non-threatening individual who poses as a member of a terrorist group. As the story progresses, he reveals his true nature as a calculated and cold terrorist willing to use violence to achieve his goals. He engages in a cat-and-mouse game with McClane, showcasing his intelligence and resourcefulness. However, in a tense confrontation with McClane, Theo meets his demise, ultimately failing to outwit his opponent. | Theo's character arc is well-developed, but it could benefit from more depth and complexity. While he is portrayed as cunning and manipulative, exploring his motivations and backstory could add layers to his character. Additionally, his ultimate demise feels somewhat predictable and could be more creatively executed. | To improve Theo's character arc, consider delving deeper into his past and motivations. Show moments of vulnerability or internal conflict to make him more relatable and multidimensional. Additionally, consider a more unexpected or surprising resolution to his storyline, perhaps allowing him to escape or face consequences in a different way. |
hans gruber | Hans Gruber starts off as a confident and strategic mastermind, always in control of the situation. However, as the story progresses, he begins to unravel as his plans are thwarted by the protagonist, John McClane. This leads to moments of desperation and vulnerability, ultimately culminating in a final showdown where he is defeated and exposed for his true nature. | The character arc for Hans Gruber is well-developed, showcasing his strengths and weaknesses as a villain. However, to enhance the emotional impact of his downfall, there could be more emphasis on his personal motivations and backstory. This would add depth to his character and make his ultimate defeat more satisfying for the audience. | Consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that provide insight into Hans Gruber's past, such as his reasons for becoming a terrorist or his previous encounters with law enforcement. This will humanize him and make his actions more understandable, while also creating a more compelling and complex antagonist for the audience to engage with. |
mcclane | In the screenplay, John McClane starts off as a confident and skilled police detective who is pushed to his limits in a high-stakes situation. As the story progresses, he faces increasing challenges that test his bravery and resourcefulness. Despite setbacks and obstacles, McClane grows in resilience and determination, ultimately overcoming the antagonist and saving the hostages. By the end of the film, he emerges as a hero who has proven his courage and willingness to sacrifice for the greater good. | The character arc for John McClane is well-developed, showcasing his growth from a confident detective to a resilient hero. However, to enhance the arc, there could be more emphasis on his emotional journey and internal struggles. By delving deeper into McClane's vulnerabilities and fears, the audience can better connect with his character and root for his success. | To improve the character arc, consider adding moments of introspection where McClane grapples with his doubts and fears. Show his internal conflict and the emotional toll of the high-stakes situation he finds himself in. Additionally, explore his relationships with other characters to further develop his arc and showcase his growth throughout the film. |
hans | Hans starts off as a formidable and confident terrorist leader, always in control of the situation. However, as the story progresses, he begins to face unexpected challenges and setbacks that test his cunning and ruthlessness. He starts to lose his composure and control, leading to a series of escalating confrontations with the protagonist. In the climax, Hans is ultimately defeated by his own hubris and underestimation of his opponent, resulting in his downfall. | The character arc for Hans is well-developed, showcasing his strengths and vulnerabilities as a cunning antagonist. However, the arc could benefit from more internal conflict and depth to explore his motivations and backstory. Additionally, the climax could be more impactful by highlighting the emotional stakes for Hans and the consequences of his actions. | To improve the character arc, consider adding flashbacks or dialogue that provide insight into Hans' past and motivations. This will add complexity to his character and make his downfall more emotionally resonant. Additionally, focus on building tension and suspense leading up to the climax, emphasizing the high stakes for both Hans and the protagonist. Finally, consider incorporating a redemption arc or moment of self-reflection for Hans to add depth and nuance to his character. |
al powell | Al Powell starts off feeling guilty and burdened by past mistakes, but through his interactions with John McClane and the crisis situation, he finds redemption and a renewed sense of purpose. He overcomes his fears and insecurities to become a key ally in the fight against the terrorists, ultimately proving his loyalty, bravery, and dedication to serving and protecting others. | The character arc for Al Powell is well-developed and provides a satisfying resolution to his internal conflict. However, it could benefit from more depth and complexity to further explore his motivations and struggles. Additionally, his transformation could be more gradual and nuanced to make it feel more authentic and impactful. | To improve the character arc for Al Powell, consider adding more backstory or flashbacks to delve into the reasons behind his past mistakes and how they have shaped his character. Show more internal conflict and emotional turmoil as he grapples with his guilt and insecurities. Allow his redemption arc to unfold organically, with small moments of growth and self-discovery leading to a more profound transformation by the end of the film. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
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Intense and suspenseful scenes consistently have high emotional impact. | Out of 42 scenes, 32 are marked as both intense and suspenseful. Of these 32 scenes, 29 have an emotional impact score of 9 or 10. This suggests that the combination of intensity and suspense is particularly effective at eliciting strong emotions from the audience. |
Dialogue scores tend to be lower in scenes with high emotional impact. | There is a negative correlation between dialogue score and emotional impact score, with scenes that have high emotional impact scores generally having lower dialogue scores. This could be due to the fact that strong emotions are often conveyed through nonverbal cues or actions, rather than through dialogue. |
Scenes with character changes tend to have high overall scores. | There is a positive correlation between character changes and overall grade, with scenes that have significant character changes generally receiving higher overall scores. This suggests that character development is an important factor in engaging the audience. |
Scenes with multiple tones tend to have higher overall scores. | Scenes that incorporate multiple tones, such as a combination of tense and light-hearted, tend to have higher overall scores. This suggests that variation in tone can help to keep the audience engaged and prevent the story from becoming monotonous. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay showcases a strong foundation in storytelling, with engaging characters, compelling conflicts, and well-crafted scenes. The writer demonstrates a clear understanding of pacing, tension-building, and dialogue-writing, creating a captivating and immersive narrative for the audience.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Screenplay | Read 'Die Hard' screenplay by Jeb Stuart and Steven E. de Souza. | This screenplay is a classic example of an action thriller with well-developed characters, a tight structure, and intense pacing. Studying it can provide insights into crafting compelling characters, building suspense, and creating a gripping narrative in this genre. |
Book | Read 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder. | This book offers valuable guidance on story structure, character development, and creating compelling narratives. It can help the writer enhance the structure and pacing of their scenes, as well as develop more engaging and well-rounded characters. |
Video | Watch analysis videos on action scenes in films. | These videos can provide visual insights into how directors and screenwriters create tension, suspense, and excitement in action sequences. Studying these techniques can help the writer improve the pacing, choreography, and overall effectiveness of their own action scenes. |
Exercise | Practice writing scenes with conflicting moral choices for the characters.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise can help the writer develop more complex and nuanced characters by exploring their moral dilemmas and inner conflicts. It can also lead to more engaging and thought-provoking scenes that resonate with the audience on a deeper level. |
Exercise | Practice writing dialogue-driven scenes with limited action.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise forces the writer to rely on dialogue to convey character, conflict, and tension. It helps improve the writer's ability to create engaging and meaningful conversations that advance the story and reveal character depth. |
Exercise | Practice outlining and structuring a screenplay.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise helps the writer develop a strong foundation for their screenplay by planning out the plot, character arcs, and overall structure. It can lead to improved pacing, smoother transitions, and a more cohesive narrative. |
Stories Similar to this one
Story | Explanation |
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The Raid: Redemption | An elite SWAT team battles its way through a tenement run by a ruthless drug lord to rescue a kidnapped girl. |
Die Hard 2 | John McClane, a New York City police officer, teams up with a group of hostages to fight off a team of terrorists who have taken over an airport during Christmas. |
Under Siege | A former Navy SEAL must protect the crew of a battleship from a group of rogue Navy terrorists led by a disgruntled ex-CIA operative. |
Extraction | A black market mercenary must rescue the kidnapped son of an Indian drug lord from a heavily fortified compound in Dhaka, Bangladesh. |
The Equalizer | A retired black ops operative comes out of retirement to help a young woman who is being terrorized by Russian mobsters. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Terrorists win | The terrorists are defeated by McClane. | The terrorists are the main antagonists in the story and their goal is to carry out a terrorist attack on the Nakatomi building. McClane is the protagonist who must stop them. |
The hero's journey | McClane is an unlikely hero who must overcome many obstacles to save the hostages and defeat the terrorists. | The hero's journey is a common narrative structure in which the protagonist goes on a journey to achieve a goal. Along the way, they must overcome challenges and obstacles. |
The reluctant hero | McClane is initially reluctant to help the hostages and defeat the terrorists. | The reluctant hero is a character who is initially unwilling to get involved in the conflict. |
The lone wolf | McClane is a lone wolf who works alone to defeat the terrorists. | The lone wolf is a character who works alone and does not rely on the help of others. |
The everyman hero | McClane is an ordinary person who is thrust into an extraordinary situation. | The everyman hero is a character who is relatable to the audience because they are not particularly special or skilled. |
The action hero | McClane is a physically fit and skilled fighter who uses violence to defeat the terrorists. | The action hero is a character who is skilled in combat and uses violence to achieve their goals. |
The damsel in distress | Holly is a hostage who is rescued by McClane. | The damsel in distress is a character who is in need of rescue by the hero. |
The villain | Hans Gruber is the leader of the terrorists. | The villain is the character who opposes the hero and tries to prevent them from achieving their goals. |
The heist | The terrorists are planning to rob the Nakatomi building. | The heist is a story in which a group of criminals plan and execute a robbery. |
The ticking clock | The terrorists have given McClane a time limit to surrender. | The ticking clock is a device used to create suspense and urgency in a story. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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Violence and Action | Die Hard is known for its intense action sequences. The screenplay is full of shootouts, explosions, and fights, as McClane battles the terrorists. | Violence and action are essential elements of the Die Hard franchise, and they play a major role in the screenplay. | ||||||||||||
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Terrorism and Hostage Situations | Die Hard is also a story about terrorism and hostage situations. The terrorists take over the Nakatomi building and hold the hostages captive, and McClane must stop them before they can carry out their plans. | Terrorism and hostage situations are serious issues, and they are explored in a realistic and suspenseful way in the Die Hard screenplay. | ||||||||||||
Christmas | Die Hard is set on Christmas Eve. The holiday setting adds to the suspense and tension of the film, as McClane faces off against terrorists while trying to save his wife and the other hostages. | Christmas is a time of peace and goodwill, but it can also be a time of darkness and danger. Die Hard explores both sides of the holiday in the screenplay. | ||||||||||||
Family | Despite all the action and violence, Die Hard is also a story about family. McClane is trying to save his wife, and he is also trying to protect his family from the terrorists. | Family is important to McClane, and it is one of the things that motivates him to fight the terrorists. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by sharp dialogue, detailed descriptions, and a focus on character dynamics. The writer effectively uses these elements to create a sense of tension and suspense throughout the screenplay. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a sense of realism and authenticity. The sharp dialogue and detailed descriptions help to create a believable world for the characters to inhabit, while the focus on character dynamics adds depth and complexity to the story. |
Best Representation Scene | 3 - Arrivals and Introductions |
Best Scene Explanation | Scene 3 is the best representation of the writer's voice because it effectively combines sharp dialogue, realistic character interactions, and a focus on tension and suspense. The scene is also a turning point in the story, as it sets up the conflict between John McClane and Hans Gruber. |
- Overall originality score: 8
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay for Die Hard features several original elements that set it apart from other action films. First, the film's setting is unique. Die Hard takes place in a skyscraper, which is a relatively uncommon setting for an action film. This setting allows for a variety of unique action sequences, such as the famous scene in which McClane jumps from the roof of the building. Second, the film's villain, Hans Gruber, is a complex and well-developed character. Gruber is not simply a one-dimensional villain, but rather a ruthless and intelligent criminal mastermind. Third, the film's action sequences are both exciting and innovative. The film features several memorable action sequences, such as the scene in which McClane fights off a group of terrorists in the Nakatomi Plaza parking garage. These action sequences are well- choreographed and exciting to watch.
- Most unique situations: Some of the most unique situations in the screenplay include: - McClane is forced to fight off a group of terrorists in the Nakatomi Plaza parking garage. - McClane must climb up the side of the Nakatomi Plaza building to rescue Holly. - McClane must defuse a bomb that has been planted in the Nakatomi Plaza building.
- Overall unpredictability score: 8
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay for Die Hard is unpredictable in several ways. First, the film's plot is full of twists and turns. The audience is never quite sure what is going to happen next. Second, the film's characters are unpredictable. The audience is never quite sure how they are going to react to the events of the film. Third, the film's action sequences are unpredictable. The audience is never quite sure how they are going to end. These factors combine to create a screenplay that is highly unpredictable and exciting to watch.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal and external goals revolve around survival, protecting loved ones, and stopping the terrorists |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goals include outsmarting the terrorists, contacting the police for help, and navigating the dangerous situation in the building |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around justice vs. violence, duty vs. self-preservation, and authority vs. rebellion |
Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's goals and conflicts contribute to his development by challenging his beliefs, values, and sense of duty as a police officer
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict drive the narrative structure by creating tension, suspense, and a sense of urgency in the screenplay
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict add thematic depth by exploring themes of redemption, sacrifice, and the complexity of morality in high-stakes situations
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay is set in Los Angeles, California, during Christmas Eve, which provides a festive and bustling atmosphere to the story. The primary setting is the Nakatomi building, a high-rise office building that becomes the site of a hostage crisis. The building's design, with its large windows, open floor plans, and multiple floors, plays a significant role in the action sequences and creates a sense of claustrophobia and danger.
- Culture: The screenplay depicts a diverse range of cultures and lifestyles. The main characters, John McClane and Holly Gennaro, represent traditional American values and family life. In contrast, the terrorists, led by Hans Gruber, are portrayed as ruthless and calculating criminals with a European background. The film also explores themes of masculinity, heroism, and the clash between good and evil.
- Society: The screenplay highlights the societal tensions and conflicts of the time. The police force, represented by Sergeant Al Powell, is depicted as a well-meaning but often bureaucratic and ineffective organization. The terrorists, on the other hand, represent a threat to law and order and challenge the authority of the state. The film also explores the role of the media in shaping public opinion and the impact of violence on society.
- Technology: The screenplay incorporates various technological elements that reflect the technological advancements of the 1980s. The use of CB radios, walkie-talkies, and surveillance cameras plays a crucial role in the communication and coordination of both the police and the terrorists. The film also features the use of explosives, machine guns, and other weapons, which contribute to the intense and often violent action sequences.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology of the screenplay shape the characters’ experiences and actions in several ways: - The Nakatomi building's design creates a sense of claustrophobia and danger, which forces the characters to make quick decisions and adapt to the ever-changing situation. - The cultural differences between the characters lead to misunderstandings and conflicts, which contribute to the tension and suspense of the story. - The societal tensions and conflicts of the time influence the characters' motivations and actions, as they struggle to navigate a world divided by violence and injustice. - The use of technology allows the characters to communicate and coordinate their actions, but it also creates new opportunities for surveillance and control.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative of the screenplay in several ways: - The physical environment provides a backdrop for the action and creates a sense of realism and authenticity. - The culture of the characters influences their motivations and actions, and contributes to the development of the plot. - The societal tensions and conflicts of the time provide a context for the story and shape the characters' relationships with each other. - The use of technology creates new possibilities for storytelling and allows the filmmakers to explore themes of surveillance, privacy, and control.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring several important themes: - The theme of good versus evil is explored through the conflict between John McClane and Hans Gruber. McClane represents the forces of good, while Gruber represents the forces of evil. The film explores the moral and ethical implications of their actions and the consequences of their choices. - The theme of heroism is explored through the character of John McClane. McClane is a reluctant hero who is forced to confront his fears and limitations in order to save the hostages. The film explores the nature of heroism and the sacrifices that heroes must make. - The theme of family is explored through the relationship between John McClane and Holly Gennero. McClane is a devoted family man who is willing to risk his life to save his wife. The film explores the importance of family and the sacrifices that people are willing to make for their loved ones.
central conflict
John McClane, an NYPD detective, must rescue his wife and other hostages from terrorists who have seized a high-rise building in Los Angeles on Christmas Eve.
primary motivations
- McClane's determination to save his wife and the other hostages
- The terrorists' desire to steal $640 million in bearer bonds from the building's vault
- The police's need to stop the terrorists and prevent further loss of life
catalysts
- The terrorists' takeover of the building
- McClane's arrival at the building and his discovery of the hostage situation
- The terrorists' execution of Ellis, a hostage who was also McClane's friend
barriers
- The terrorists' superior numbers and firepower
- The lack of communication between McClane and the police
- The building's complex layout and security systems
themes
- The importance of courage and determination in the face of adversity
- The power of love and family
- The futility of violence
stakes
The lives of the hostages, the safety of the city, and McClane's own life
uniqueness factor
The film's unique setting (a high-rise building) and its focus on a single protagonist (McClane) who must overcome seemingly insurmountable odds to save the day
audience hook
The film's exciting action sequences, suspenseful plot, and relatable characters
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The film's paradoxical engine is the combination of McClane's determination to save his wife and the terrorists' determination to kill him. This paradox drives the narrative forward and creates a sense of suspense and excitement
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
The film's bisociation engine is the combination of the Christmas setting and the violence of the terrorist attack. This juxtaposition creates a sense of cognitive dissonance and makes the film more memorable and impactful
Engine: Claude
Recommend
Executive Summary
Die Hard is a gripping, character-driven action thriller with a strong narrative drive and well-crafted set pieces. The screenplay features a compelling protagonist in John McClane, who undergoes a meaningful transformation as he fights to save his wife and stop a group of ruthless terrorists. The dialogue is sharp and realistic, and the action sequences are visually compelling and integral to the storytelling. While there are some opportunities to further develop the supporting characters and explore thematic depth, the screenplay is a strong, well-executed example of the action genre that would likely appeal to a wide audience.
- The screenplay has a strong sense of character and narrative drive, propelling the story forward with clear stakes and conflict. high
- The dialogue is sharp, realistic, and serves to develop the characters and advance the plot effectively. high
- The action sequences are well-crafted, visually compelling, and integral to the storytelling. high
- The screenplay maintains a strong sense of pacing, balancing moments of tension and release to keep the audience engaged. high
- The protagonist, John McClane, is a well-defined, multi-dimensional character who undergoes a meaningful transformation over the course of the story. high
- While the character arcs are generally strong, there may be opportunities to further develop the supporting characters and their relationships to the protagonist. medium
- The screenplay could benefit from additional thematic exploration, providing more depth and resonance to the central conflict. medium
- The screenplay could potentially benefit from the inclusion of additional subplots or character backstories to further enrich the world and provide more emotional complexity. low
- The screenplay's use of setting and environment, particularly the high-rise building, as an additional character and source of conflict is highly effective. high
- The screenplay successfully blends various genres, including action, thriller, and even subtle moments of humor, creating a well-rounded and engaging cinematic experience. high
Engine: Gemini
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
Die Hard is an exceptional action screenplay with a strong protagonist, well-paced action sequences, and a good balance of humor and character development. While some supporting characters could be further fleshed out and the ending could provide more closure, the overall narrative is compelling and engaging. The screenplay effectively uses media and technology to escalate the tension and stakes, making it a standout in its genre.
- John McClane's character is established effectively, showcasing his vulnerability and humanity through interactions with the businessman and his phone call with his daughter. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 2 (6) )
- The action sequences are well-paced and suspenseful, keeping the audience engaged and on the edge of their seats, particularly during McClane's encounters with the terrorists and his escape through the air ducts. high ( Scene 10 (103) Scene 11 (129) )
- The screenplay effectively balances action with moments of character development and humor, particularly in the interactions between McClane and Powell, which add depth and levity to the story. high ( Scene 17 (188) Scene 21 (215) Scene 22 (219) )
- Hans Gruber is a memorable and well-developed antagonist, whose intelligence and ruthlessness make him a formidable opponent for McClane. high ( Scene 31 (303) )
- The screenplay effectively uses media and technology to escalate the tension and stakes of the story, particularly with the introduction of Thornburg and the live television broadcasts. medium ( Scene 37 (406) Scene 38 (428) )
- Some of the supporting characters, such as the terrorists, could be further developed to provide more depth and motivation beyond their role as antagonists. medium
- The ending could be slightly more impactful and provide a stronger sense of closure for McClane and Holly's relationship. low
- The character of Al Powell serves as an effective counterpoint to McClane, highlighting the challenges and emotional toll of police work. medium ( Scene 3 (10) Scene 21 (216) )
- The screenplay explores themes of family, redemption, and the struggle against overwhelming odds. high ( Scene 19 (201) )