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Compelled to Read | Story Content |
Character Development
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Scene Elements |
Audience Engagement
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Technical Aspects |
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1 - The Wild Jungle of Wealth
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
8 |
4 | 8 |
6 |
0.5 | 6 | 7 | 1 | 1 | 1.5 | 2 | 8 | 5 |
8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6.5 |
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2 - The Thrill of Excess
| PolishMontageNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6 / 6.5 |
8 |
4 | 7.5 |
7 |
1 | 7 | 4 | 2 | 1 | 4 | 3 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 9 | 5.5 |
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3 - The Thrill of the Trading Floor
| KeepOrientationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
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4 - The Allure of Wall Street
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7.5 |
8 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 6 |
9 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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5 - From Struggles to Success
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
6 |
4 | 6 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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6 - The Birth of a Partnership
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
4 | 5 | 7 | 3 | 1 | 3 | 7 | 8 | 4 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 5.5 |
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7 - Ambition and Doubt
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.2 |
9 / 7.5
| 5 / 6.5 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 5 |
7 | 6 | 5.5 | 8 | 5 |
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8 - The Art of Manipulation
| KeepMontageAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
6.5 / 7
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 4 |
8 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5.5 |
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9 - The Art of Persuasion
| PolishMontageNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 6 / 7 |
6 |
5 | 6 |
4 |
0.5 | 3 | 7 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 3 |
5 | 6.5 | 8 | 8 | 5 |
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10 - Celebration of Excess
| ReworkMontageRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
7.2 |
8 / 7
| 6.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 |
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11 - Chaos and Consequences at Stratton Oakmont
| ReworkMontageRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 7
| 5 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 8 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
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12 - Dwarfs and Debt
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.8 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 6.5 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 3.5 | 4.5 | 7 | 5 |
9 | 7.5 | 6.5 | 9 | 6 |
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13 - Rallying the Brokers
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 4.5 |
6 |
1 | 6 | 7 | 2 | 1 | 3 | 4.5 | 3 | 5 |
7 | 6.5 | 7 | 9 | 7 |
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14 - Desire Amidst Chaos
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 7.5 |
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15 - Temptation in the City
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 2 | 4 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
8 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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16 - Beneath the Surface
| Low on its ownMontageDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7.5 |
6 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 9 | 6.5 |
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17 - Betrayal in the City
| KeepInvestigationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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18 - Chaos in the Bullpen
| Low on its ownMontageDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
6 |
1 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 4 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 5.5 |
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19 - Waves of Celebration and Conflict
| ReworkMontageRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 7
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
6 |
4 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 5.5 |
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20 - Confrontation of Betrayal
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7.5 |
8 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
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21 - Seduction and Surveillance
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 8 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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22 - A Fishy Display of Dominance
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6.5 / 7 |
8 |
5 | 8 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 3 | 8 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 8 | 6 |
7 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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23 - From Heckling to Hustle: The Madden Stock Rally
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
6 |
1 | 6 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 5 |
8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
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24 - High Stakes and Legal Shadows
| KeepInvestigationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
9 / 8
| 7.5 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7.5 | 7 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 6.5 |
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25 - The Yacht Encounter
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 9
| 8 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 |
8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 |
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26 - Chaos in Transit
| KeepMontageAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
5 |
2 | 4 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 8 | 4 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 |
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27 - Secrets and Strategies in Saurel's Office
| KeepNegotiationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 8 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
2 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7.5 | 6 | 4 |
8 | 7 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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28 - Flirtation and Illicit Plans
| KeepNegotiationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 5 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 5 |
8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 |
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29 - Cash Conflicts at the Beach House
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8 / 7
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 4 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 |
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30 - Money and Mayhem
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 7.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
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31 - Urgent Call in the Basement
| PolishTransitionNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
2 | 5.5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6.5 | 6 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 9 | 7 |
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32 - Descent into Chaos
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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33 - Frantic Rescue
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
6.5 / 6
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
3 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
6 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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34 - Crossroads of Recklessness
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5.5 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 5.5 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 6 | 6.5 | 9 | 6 |
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35 - The Show Goes On
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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36 - Legal Troubles and Personal Tragedies
| PolishMontageNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.8 |
7 / 7
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
4 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
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37 - Inheritance on the Horizon
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
5.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
5 |
1 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 |
6 | 6.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
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38 - Stormy Descent
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 7.5
| 8 / 8.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 6.5 | 7.5 | 6.5 |
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39 - Ambition Over Dinner
| KeepMontageAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 6.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 4 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 7 | 5.5 |
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40 - Legal Turmoil and Betrayal
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 7.5
| 6 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
6 |
4 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7.5 | 8 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 |
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41 - Beneath the Surface
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
8 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
5 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6.5 |
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42 - Divided by Optimism
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 9 | 6 |
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43 - Shattered Bonds
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
8 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 |
8 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 7 |
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44 - Desperate Escape
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 5.5 | 7 | 6 |
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45 - The Fall of Jordan Belfort
| Low on its ownAftermathDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
5 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 |
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46 - The Pen Challenge
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9.5 / 9
| 1 / 2 |
8 |
5 | 7 |
6 |
1 | 7 | 8 | 2 | 1 | 0.5 | 2 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 8 | 9 | 6 |
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