The Wolf of Wall Street

Executive Summary

Synopsis

Based on the true story of Jordan Belfort, 'The Wolf of Wall Street' chronicles the rise and fall of a stockbroker who becomes a notorious figure in the world of finance. The film opens with Belfort, played by Leonardo DiCaprio, introducing himself as a former middle-class man who ascended to the heights of Wall Street, making millions through dubious practices. After being mentored by the charismatic Mark Hanna, portrayed by Matthew McConaughey, Jordan learns the ropes of high-pressure sales tactics and the art of manipulation. He quickly rises through the ranks, founding his own brokerage firm, Stratton Oakmont, with his partner Donnie Azoff, played by Jonah Hill.

As Stratton Oakmont grows, so does the excess. The firm becomes infamous for its wild parties, rampant drug use, and a lifestyle that epitomizes greed and hedonism. Jordan and his team engage in pump-and-dump schemes, manipulating stock prices to enrich themselves at the expense of unsuspecting investors. The film showcases the lavish lifestyle that comes with their success, including luxury cars, yachts, and a mansion filled with opulence. However, the darker side of their lifestyle begins to surface as the FBI starts to investigate their operations.

Jordan's personal life also spirals out of control. He marries Naomi, played by Margot Robbie, who initially enjoys the wealth but soon becomes disillusioned with Jordan's reckless behavior and infidelities. As the pressure mounts from law enforcement, Jordan's world begins to crumble. His associates start to turn on each other, and the consequences of their actions catch up with them. The film reaches a climax as Jordan is faced with the reality of his choices, leading to his eventual arrest and cooperation with the authorities to reduce his sentence.

In the end, Jordan serves time in prison but emerges with a renewed sense of purpose, leveraging his past experiences to become a motivational speaker. The film closes with Jordan back in the spotlight, demonstrating that while he may have lost everything, his ability to persuade and sell remains intact.

Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend

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Explanation:

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Highly Recommend

Explanation: The screenplay for 'The Wolf of Wall Street' is a masterclass in character-driven storytelling, showcasing the rise and fall of Jordan Belfort in a world of excess and moral ambiguity. Its strengths lie in its sharp dialogue, compelling character arcs, and a vivid portrayal of the financial industry's darker side. However, it could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of its themes and a tighter narrative structure in certain sections. Overall, it is a captivating and entertaining piece that resonates with audiences.

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Overview

Genres: Drama, Crime, Comedy, Thriller, Biography, Romance, Dark Comedy

Setting: 1987 to 1998, Primarily set in New York City and surrounding areas, including Wall Street, upscale restaurants, and luxurious homes.

Overview: The screenplay receives an overall score of 7.4, indicating a solid foundation with areas for improvement. The screenplay's strengths lie in its engaging premise, strong character development, and skillful portrayal of the chaotic Wall Street environment. However, the lack of a compelling antagonist, uneven pacing, and limited emotional depth hinder its full potential.

Themes: The American Dream and its Corruption, Greed and Its Consequences, Addiction and its Impact on Relationships, The Power of Persuasion and Manipulation, The Price of Success, Loyalty and Betrayal, The Justice System and its Imperfections

Conflict and Stakes: Jordan's struggle with his self-destructive behavior, legal troubles, and the impact on his relationships, particularly with Naomi, as he navigates the high-stakes world of finance.

Overall Mood: Chaotic and exuberant, with moments of dark humor and tension.

Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:

Scene 1: The opening scene sets a chaotic and exuberant tone, reflecting the wild lifestyle of the stockbrokers.

Scene 10: The mood shifts to tense and confrontational as Jordan faces the consequences of his actions during a heated argument with Naomi.

Scene 20: The emotional tone is somber and reflective as Jordan contemplates his legal troubles and impending imprisonment.

Standout Features:

Unique Hook: The film's portrayal of the chaotic and hedonistic lifestyle of stockbrokers, providing a behind-the-scenes look at Wall Street's excesses.

Major Twist : Jordan's eventual downfall and legal troubles serve as a stark contrast to his earlier success, highlighting the consequences of his actions.

Distinctive Setting : The vibrant and chaotic atmosphere of the Stratton Oakmont bullpen, showcasing the frenetic energy of the stock market.

Innovative Ideas : The use of dark humor to address serious themes of greed and moral ambiguity, making the story both entertaining and thought-provoking.

Comparable Scripts:

The Wolf of Wall Street

American Psycho

Boiler Room

The Big Short

Catch Me If You Can

Wall Street

The Social Network

Mad Men

Scarface

Market Analysis

Budget Estimate:$20-30 million

Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-45, particularly those interested in biographical dramas, financial thrillers, and stories of excess and downfall.

Marketability: The screenplay's exploration of the high-stakes finance world, combined with its dark humor and compelling characters, is likely to attract a broad audience and generate significant buzz.

The film's themes of greed and excess resonate with contemporary societal issues, making it relevant and appealing to modern viewers.

The unique blend of comedy and drama, along with the real-life inspiration, enhances its marketability, especially among fans of biographical films.

Profit Potential: High, due to the film's appeal to a wide audience, potential for strong box office returns, and opportunities for awards recognition.

Scene Level Percentiles

The screenplay demonstrates strong engagement and pacing but requires substantial work on its concept and plot to realize its full potential.

Script Level Percentiles

Characters: 7.75 See More
Premise: 7.25 See More
Structure: 6.75 See More
Theme: 8.25 See More
Visual Impact: 7.50 See More
Emotional Impact: 6.25 See More
Conflict: 7.75 See More
Originality: 7.5 See More

Emotions Elicited Percentiles

Robert McKee: "The audience doesn’t go to the movies to see plot; they go to feel emotion, to be moved."
This is a rough estimate of how the average intensity of emotions elicited in this script compare to all scripts in the Vault (all genres).
Higher isn't necessarily better. This is FYI.

Key Strengths

Engagement score is high at 75.61, indicating that the screenplay has the potential to captivate the audience.
Pacing score is strong at 79.27, suggesting that the screenplay maintains a good rhythm and flow.
Stakes are rated at 60.92, which implies that the screenplay effectively raises tension and interest.

Areas for Improvement

Concept rating is low at 27.78, indicating a need for a more compelling or original premise.
Plot rating is particularly weak at 17.36, suggesting that the storyline may lack clarity or coherence.
Internal goal score is very low at 11.79, which may indicate that character motivations are not well-defined.

Writer Style

The writer appears to be more intuitive, with strengths in dialogue and character engagement but weaknesses in concept and plot development.

Balancing Elements

Enhance the concept and plot elements to complement the strong engagement and pacing, creating a more cohesive narrative.
Focus on developing clearer internal goals for characters to improve emotional impact and character depth.

Intuition Level

Intuitive

Overall Assessment

The screenplay shows promise with strong engagement and pacing, but significant improvements are needed in concept and plot to enhance overall coherence and impact.

How this was done: Each criteria is ranked in comparison to scripts in our Vault (such as The Matrix, Breaking Bad, etc.) This allows you to see where you stand compared to other produced scripts for each criteria.

How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library

Note: The ratings are the averages of all the scenes.

Title	Grade	Percentile	Before	After
Scene Pacing	8.54	80	El Mariachi: 8.50	face/off: 8.54
Scene Engagement	9.00	77	Narcos Pilot: 8.98	fight Club: 9.00
Scene High Stakes	7.9	62	Midsommar: 7.8	Spy kids: 7.9
Scene Originality	8.80	60	Hot Fuzz: 8.79	The Wolf of Wall Street: 8.80
Scene Unpredictability	7.59	57	American Beauty: 7.58	The Wolf of Wall Street: 7.59
Script Structure	8.15	57	Cruel Intentions: 8.14	There's something about Mary: 8.15
Scene Dialogue	7.7	52	Sherlock Holmes: 7.6	Erin Brokovich: 7.7
Scene Conflict Level	7.7	51	American Beauty: 7.6	Erin Brokovich: 7.7
Script Conflict	7.75	51	Inception: 7.50	the pursuit of happyness: 7.75
Script Theme	8.25	47	Stranger Things: 8.00	the dark knight rises: 8.25
Scene Formatting	8.15	47	Cruel Intentions: 8.14	The Wolf of Wall Street: 8.15
Scene Character Changes	6.8	45	Enemy of the State: 6.7	True Blood: 6.8
Scene Story Forward	8.0	40	Midsommar: 7.9	severance (TV): 8.0
Scene External Goal	7.13	37	The Wizard of oz: 7.12	The Wolf of Wall Street: 7.13
Scene Overall	8.2	34	Almost Famous: 8.1	a few good men: 8.2
Scene Characters	8.1	33	Memento: 8.0	the pursuit of happyness: 8.1
Scene Emotional Impact	7.4	31	Narcos Pilot: 7.3	glass Onion Knives Out : 7.4
Script Visual Impact	7.50	27	Zootopia: 7.25	Erin Brokovich: 7.50
Scene Concept	7.9	27	500 days of summer: 7.8	The Wolf of Wall Street: 7.9
Script Characters	7.75	20	Inception: 7.50	Blade Runner: 7.75
Scene Plot	7.5	19	Gran Torino: 7.4	Arsenic and old lace : 7.5
Script Originality	7.50	13	2001: 7.25	scream : 7.50
Script Premise	7.25	12	Boyz n the hood: 7.00	the 5th element: 7.25
Scene Internal Goal	7.96	11	Bad Boy: 7.95	The Wolf of Wall Street: 7.96
Overall Script	7.40	6	El Mariachi: 7.38	The Wolf of Wall Street: 7.40
Script Structure	6.75	3	The whale: 6.50	Her: 6.75
Script Emotional Impact	6.25	2	Rear Window: 6.00	The Wolf of Wall Street: 6.25

Writer's Voice

Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a darkly humorous and cynical tone, a fast-paced narrative, sharp and witty dialogue, and a focus on the excesses and moral ambiguity of the financial world.

Best representation: Scene 1 - The Thrill of Excess. This scene is the best representation of the author's voice because it effectively establishes the tone, style, and themes of the screenplay. It blends fast-paced dialogue, vivid descriptions of excess and decadence, and a darkly humorous tone that perfectly encapsulates the characters' ambition, greed, and recklessness. The scene also foreshadows the moral ambiguity and internal conflicts that will drive the story forward. It provides a glimpse into the chaotic and seductive world of Wall Street, showcasing the writer's ability to create a compelling and engaging narrative.

Memorable Lines:

Jordan: Money is the oxygen of capitalism and I wanna breathe more than any other human being alive. (Scene 2)
Jordan: My name is Jordan Belfort. No, not him, me. I’m a former member of the middle class raised by two accountants in a tiny apartment in Bayside, Queens. (Scene 1)
Jordan: THE SHOW GOES ON!! (Scene 35)
Jordan Belfort: If you wanna party with the boys, you gotta wake up with the men. (Scene 13)
Jordan: Sell me this pen. (Scene 46)

Writing Style:

The screenplay's writing style is characterized by sharp dialogue, intense character interactions, and a focus on moral ambiguity and power dynamics. It leans heavily towards fast-paced storytelling, often utilizing high-stakes situations and conflict to drive the narrative.

Style Similarities:

Martin Scorsese
Aaron Sorkin
Quentin Tarantino
David Mamet

Other Similarities: The screenplay likely blends elements from these various screenwriters, creating a dynamic and engaging narrative. The combination of their distinct styles allows for a rich exploration of characters, themes, and conflict, resulting in a screenplay that is both entertaining and thought-provoking.

Story Shape

Emotions Elicited

Engine: Claude

Screenplay Rating:

Executive Summary

Strengths

Areas of Improvement

MissingElements

NotablePoints

Engine: GPT4

Screenplay Rating:

Highly Recommend

Executive Summary

The screenplay for 'The Wolf of Wall Street' is a masterclass in character-driven storytelling, showcasing the rise and fall of Jordan Belfort in a world of excess and moral ambiguity. Its strengths lie in its sharp dialogue, compelling character arcs, and a vivid portrayal of the financial industry's darker side. However, it could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of its themes and a tighter narrative structure in certain sections. Overall, it is a captivating and entertaining piece that resonates with audiences.

Strengths

The screenplay features sharp, engaging dialogue that captures the characters' personalities and the chaotic atmosphere of Wall Street. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (1) Scene Sequence number 2 (8) )
The character arcs, particularly that of Jordan Belfort, are well-developed, showcasing his transformation from an ambitious broker to a morally bankrupt figure. high ( Scene Sequence number 3 (20) Scene Sequence number 4 (21) )
The screenplay effectively uses voiceover narration to provide insight into Jordan's thoughts and motivations, enhancing the audience's understanding of his character. high ( Scene Sequence number 5 (25) Scene Sequence number 6 (29) )
The pacing of the screenplay is generally strong, maintaining a high level of energy that keeps the audience engaged throughout. medium ( Scene Sequence number 8 (82) Scene Sequence number 9 (130) )
The vivid imagery and detailed descriptions create a strong sense of place, immersing the audience in the opulent yet morally ambiguous world of Wall Street. high ( Scene Sequence number 10 (59) Scene Sequence number 11 (74) )

Areas of Improvement

Some scenes could benefit from tighter editing to maintain narrative momentum and avoid dragging in certain sections. medium ( Scene Sequence number 12 (77) Scene Sequence number 13 (87) )
The screenplay occasionally relies on clichés or predictable plot points that could be refreshed for a more original take. medium ( Scene Sequence number 14 (79) Scene Sequence number 15 (82) )
The exploration of themes such as morality and consequence could be deepened to provide a more nuanced commentary on the characters' actions. high ( Scene Sequence number 16 (88) Scene Sequence number 17 (97) )
Some character motivations could be clearer, particularly for secondary characters, to enhance their roles in the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 18 (101) Scene Sequence number 19 (111) )
The resolution of certain plot threads feels rushed, leaving some character arcs feeling unresolved or underexplored. medium ( Scene Sequence number 20 (118) Scene Sequence number 21 (122) )

MissingElements

A deeper exploration of the consequences of Jordan's actions on his family and friends could add emotional weight to the narrative. high ( Scene Sequence number 22 (126) Scene Sequence number 23 (130) )
The screenplay could benefit from more diverse perspectives, particularly from those affected by Jordan's actions, to provide a fuller picture of the impact of his choices. medium ( Scene Sequence number 24 (134) Scene Sequence number 25 (137) )
There is a lack of exploration into the systemic issues within the financial industry that allowed characters like Jordan to thrive. medium ( Scene Sequence number 26 (138) Scene Sequence number 27 (151) )
The screenplay could include more moments of introspection for Jordan, allowing the audience to connect with his internal struggles. medium ( Scene Sequence number 28 (155) Scene Sequence number 29 (158) )
A more thorough examination of the legal and ethical implications of Jordan's actions could enhance the narrative's depth. medium ( Scene Sequence number 30 (170D) Scene Sequence number 31 (182) )

NotablePoints

The use of humor amidst serious themes creates a unique tone that balances entertainment with critique. high ( Scene Sequence number 32 (188) Scene Sequence number 33 (193) )
The screenplay's ability to maintain tension and excitement throughout, even in slower moments, is commendable. high ( Scene Sequence number 34 (201) Scene Sequence number 35 (215) )
The screenplay effectively captures the allure and danger of the lifestyle it portrays, making it both captivating and cautionary. high ( Scene Sequence number 36 (221) Scene Sequence number 37 (230) )
The juxtaposition of wealth and moral decay serves as a powerful commentary on the American Dream. high ( Scene Sequence number 38 (210) Scene Sequence number 39 (215) )
The ending leaves a lasting impression, prompting reflection on the consequences of greed and excess. high ( Scene Sequence number 40 (236) Scene Sequence number 41 (248) )

Blind Spots

Character Depth While Jordan's character is well-developed, secondary characters often lack depth and motivation, making them feel one-dimensional. For example, characters like Naomi and Donnie could benefit from more backstory and emotional complexity to enhance their roles in the narrative. high

Amateur Giveaways

Predictable Plot Points Certain plot developments, such as the inevitable downfall of Jordan and the consequences of his actions, feel predictable and could benefit from more originality or unexpected twists to keep the audience engaged. medium

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Screenplay Insights:

Characters: 7.75, The screenplay demonstrates strong character development, with Jordan Belfort's arc as the most prominent and complex. However, certain characters, like Naomi and Donnie, could benefit from further exploration to deepen their emotional impact and provide a more balanced perspective on Jordan's world. Additionally, introducing a stronger antagonist would provide a more compelling external force driving the narrative. See More

Premise: 7.25, The screenplay's premise, based on the rise and fall of Jordan Belfort, is intriguing, blending elements of financial thriller, dark comedy, and character drama. The scene-by-scene summary provides a clear roadmap for the narrative, outlining Jordan's transformation from an ambitious broker to a criminal mastermind and ultimately a motivational speaker. However, the screenplay could benefit from refining the initial hook to create more immediate engagement and emphasize the unique aspects of the story. See More

Structure: 6.75, This screenplay, while possessing a captivating premise and strong character development, suffers from structural and pacing issues that hinder its overall narrative impact. The chaotic, often episodic nature of the storytelling diminishes the narrative drive and undermines the potential for dramatic tension. Refinement of the structure and pacing is crucial for achieving a more cohesive and impactful narrative. See More

Theme: 8.25, The screenplay 'Wolf of Wall Street' tackles themes of ambition, greed, excess, and the pursuit of the American Dream. It effectively portrays the intoxicating allure of wealth and power, the destructive consequences of unchecked ambition, and the ethical compromises individuals make in the pursuit of success. However, while the film's thematic exploration is engaging, the screenplay could benefit from more nuanced portrayal of redemption and a deeper exploration of the psychological impact of Jordan Belfort's actions. See More

Visual Impact: 7.50, The screenplay effectively utilizes visual imagery to capture the hedonistic and chaotic world of Wall Street in the 1990s. The descriptions are vivid and convey a strong sense of the characters' personalities and lifestyles. However, the screenplay could benefit from greater visual variety and deeper exploration of symbolic elements to enhance its visual storytelling impact. See More

Emotional Impact: 6.25, The screenplay effectively captures the wild and chaotic energy of Wall Street's high-stakes environment, generating excitement and intrigue. However, while it showcases Jordan Belfort's reckless rise and fall, it struggles to deeply engage the audience emotionally beyond superficial excitement. Deepening character motivations, exploring internal conflicts, and adding emotional nuances to relationships can significantly enhance the emotional impact. See More

Conflict: 7.75, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes, but there's room for deepening both to further elevate the narrative tension and audience engagement. The central conflict of Jordan's pursuit of wealth and his reckless disregard for the law is clearly established, but the stakes could be raised by exploring the emotional impact of his choices on those closest to him. The story features several compelling moments of tension, particularly during confrontations and financial scandals, yet exploring the consequences of his actions on a deeper level, especially for those he professes to care for, could significantly amplify the stakes and create a more emotionally resonant narrative. See More

Originality: 7.5, The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in originality with its focus on the chaotic and reckless world of Wall Street. The narrative excels at capturing the excessiveness and absurdity of the characters' lives, creating a darkly comedic tone that distinguishes it from other works in the genre. The screenplay's creativity shines through in its unconventional characters, particularly Jordan and Naomi, whose complex personalities and nuanced relationship add layers of intrigue to the story. However, the screenplay could benefit from further exploration of thematic depth and a more innovative narrative structure to elevate its creative potential. See More

Summary The screenplay follows the wild and chaotic rise and fall of Jordan Belfort, a charismatic stockbroker who indulges in a hedonistic lifestyle fueled by drugs, sex, and wealth. From his reckless beginnings at Wall Street brokerage firm Stratton Oakmont to his extravagant life of excess, Jordan navigates the high-stakes world of finance with charm and manipulation. However, as legal troubles and betrayals mount, Jordan's empire crumbles, leading to a dramatic downfall that culminates in his imprisonment for fraud. Despite his flamboyant charisma, Jordan must confront the consequences of his actions, ultimately facing a harsh reality as he loses everything. The screenplay portrays a captivating and chaotic journey through the tumultuous world of finance, highlighting the allure and destructiveness of unchecked ambition.

Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The screenplay effectively portrays the rise and fall of Jordan Belfort, a charismatic stockbroker who embodies the excesses of Wall Street. The story captures the thrill of his initial success, the moral compromises he makes, and the inevitable consequences of his actions. The screenplay is well-paced and engaging, utilizing flashbacks and voiceovers to provide context and depth to Jordan's journey. The ensemble cast of supporting characters, including Donnie Azoff, Mark Hanna, and Naomi, adds layers of complexity and intrigue to the story. The screenplay effectively depicts the dark side of wealth and ambition, highlighting the corruption and moral decay that can occur within a world of greed and excess. However, the screenplay could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the characters' motivations and internal conflicts. While the characters' transformations are evident, their struggles and growth could be further developed to create a deeper connection with the audience. Additionally, the screenplay could explore the ethical and social implications of Jordan's actions more thoroughly, providing a more critical commentary on the culture of Wall Street during that time. Overall, the screenplay is a compelling and entertaining story about ambition, greed, and the consequences of unchecked power, but it could be elevated by a more in-depth exploration of character development and thematic depth.

Suggestions: 1. **Develop the characters' motivations and internal conflicts:** Explore the characters' internal struggles and desires more thoroughly. Delve deeper into Jordan's vulnerabilities, anxieties, and moral dilemmas. Give Naomi a more complex backstory and explore her motivations for staying with Jordan. Develop Donnie's character arc, highlighting his internal conflicts and the impact of his choices on his relationships. 2. **Explore the ethical and social implications of Jordan's actions:** Provide a more critical commentary on the culture of Wall Street and the impact of Jordan's actions on others. Explore the systemic corruption that fuels his rise to power. 3. **Deepen the emotional impact:** Introduce scenes that showcase the characters' vulnerabilities and the consequences of their actions on their relationships. Explore the emotional toll of Jordan's choices, particularly on his wife and children. 4. **Refine the climax and resolution:** Explore more nuanced consequences for Jordan's actions. Consider adding a scene where he reflects on his past and his transformation. 5. **Develop the ending:** The ending of the story feels somewhat rushed. Consider adding a scene where Jordan reflects on his time in prison and the lessons he has learned. Explore how he uses his past experiences to inspire others.

Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here

Beginning The screenplay effectively establishes Jordan Belfort as a charismatic and ambitious protagonist, capturing his early success and the allure of Wall Street. The opening scenes showcase the chaotic and morally ambiguous world he inhabits, while introducing a range of colorful characters that contribute to the film's energy and intrigue. The screenplay effectively utilizes visual elements and Jordan's voiceover to establish his personality and aspirations, creating a compelling and engaging opening. However, the screenplay could benefit from a more nuanced portrayal of Jordan's internal conflicts and motivations. While his ambition is clear, the screenplay could delve deeper into the psychological impact of his early success and the moral compromises he begins to make. Additionally, the introduction of supporting characters like Donnie and Naomi could be further developed to create a stronger sense of their relationships with Jordan and their own motivations. The screenplay's opening lacks a clearly defined hook or central conflict that drives the narrative forward. While Jordan's ambition is evident, the initial scenes lack a sense of urgency or a significant obstacle that would propel him toward his ultimate goals. Overall, the screenplay's beginning is a promising introduction to the world of Jordan Belfort, but it could be enhanced by a more in-depth exploration of character development and the establishment of a clear narrative driving force.

Suggestions: 1. **Establish a clear hook and conflict:** Introduce a specific challenge or conflict that drives Jordan's ambition and sets the stage for his subsequent choices. This could be a personal goal he's striving for, a financial setback that pushes him to take greater risks, or a rival who challenges his dominance in the world of stock trading. 2. **Develop the supporting characters:** Introduce Donnie and Naomi more fully, giving them more distinct personalities and motivations. Highlight their relationships with Jordan and how those relationships evolve as the story progresses. 3. **Explore Jordan's internal conflicts:** Incorporate scenes that delve into Jordan's inner thoughts and feelings, exploring the moral dilemmas he faces and the psychological impact of his choices. 4. **Consider a flashback:** A flashback scene that depicts a formative moment in Jordan's past could provide valuable context for his current actions and aspirations. 5. **Enhance the visual storytelling:** Use more striking visual imagery to create a stronger sense of the world Jordan inhabits, including the luxurious lifestyle, the frenetic energy of Wall Street, and the darker consequences of his choices.

Middle The screenplay effectively portrays Jordan's descent into a world of greed and excess, showcasing the consequences of his actions on both his personal life and his professional relationships. The screenplay is particularly effective in depicting the chaos and moral ambiguity of Stratton Oakmont, a brokerage firm where Jordan's ambition and illegal activities flourish. The screenplay skillfully uses flashbacks and voiceovers to provide context for Jordan's actions, revealing his past struggles and the influences that shaped his personality. However, the screenplay could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of Jordan's internal conflicts and the emotional toll of his choices. While Jordan's reckless behavior is evident, the screenplay could delve deeper into his feelings of guilt, regret, and the impact of his actions on those around him. Additionally, the screenplay could explore the consequences of Jordan's actions on others more thoroughly, particularly the impact on his wife, Teresa, and the employees of Stratton Oakmont. The screenplay lacks a strong sense of moral complexity and ambiguity, portraying Jordan's descent into crime as a predictable outcome of his ambition. The screenplay could benefit from exploring the gray areas of his choices, presenting arguments for and against his actions, and showcasing the internal struggle he faces as he grapples with his own moral compass. Overall, the screenplay effectively captures the chaotic and morally ambiguous world of Wall Street, but it could be enhanced by a more profound exploration of the characters' motivations, the consequences of Jordan's actions, and the moral complexities of his choices.

Suggestions: 1. **Deepen the emotional impact of Jordan's choices:** Incorporate scenes that highlight the emotional toll of Jordan's choices on his relationships. Explore his feelings of guilt and regret, and the impact of his actions on those around him, particularly his wife and children. 2. **Explore the consequences of Jordan's actions on others:** Showcase the impact of his illegal activities on employees of Stratton Oakmont, clients, and the broader financial system. 3. **Develop the moral complexities:** Introduce scenes or characters that challenge Jordan's worldview and make him question his choices. Explore the gray areas of his actions, presenting arguments for and against his behavior. 4. **Introduce a moral foil:** A character who represents a contrasting perspective on ethics and ambition could provide a counterpoint to Jordan's choices and create a more nuanced moral landscape. 5. **Explore the impact of the legal system:** Incorporate scenes that delve into the consequences of Jordan's actions from a legal perspective, highlighting the ethical dilemmas faced by law enforcement and the complexities of the legal system.

Ending The screenplay effectively portrays the consequences of Jordan Belfort's actions, showcasing his downfall and the price he pays for his greed and recklessness. The screenplay skillfully uses flashbacks and voiceovers to provide context for Jordan's journey, culminating in a moment of reckoning as he faces the consequences of his choices. The screenplay also effectively portrays the emotional toll of his actions on those around him, particularly his wife, Naomi, and his employees. However, the screenplay's ending feels somewhat rushed and could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of Jordan's transformation. While his cooperation with the authorities and his subsequent career as a motivational speaker are depicted, the screenplay could delve deeper into his internal struggles, his feelings of guilt, and the process of his redemption. The ending also lacks a clear resolution to the conflict between Jordan and Naomi, leaving their relationship in a somewhat ambiguous state. Overall, the screenplay effectively showcases the consequences of Jordan's actions and the fall from grace he experiences, but it could be more impactful by providing a more in-depth exploration of his internal struggles, his relationship with Naomi, and the ultimate impact of his actions.

Suggestions: 1. **Develop Jordan's transformation:** Incorporate scenes that explore Jordan's internal struggles as he confronts his past and tries to atone for his actions. Show his efforts to rebuild his life and make amends for his mistakes. 2. **Refine the resolution of Jordan's relationship with Naomi:** Provide a more definitive resolution to their relationship, exploring their feelings and the challenges they face. 3. **Explore the impact of Jordan's actions on others:** Showcase the impact of his actions on his employees, family, and the wider community. 4. **Consider an epilogue:** An epilogue could provide a sense of closure to the story, exploring Jordan's life after prison and the lasting impact of his actions. 5. **Enhance the emotional impact:** Incorporate scenes that showcase the emotional weight of Jordan's choices and the consequences of his actions. This could involve scenes where he confronts his victims or reflects on the damage he has caused.

CharacterInconsistencies

Character Jordan Belfort
Description Jordan's behavior shifts from being a charismatic leader to a reckless drug user without sufficient transition. His sudden paranoia and erratic actions in the helicopter scene seem inconsistent with his earlier confident demeanor.
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Character Naomi
Description Naomi's character is introduced as a glamorous and supportive wife, but her abrupt transition to a confrontational and emotionally distant partner later in the story lacks sufficient buildup, making her behavior feel inconsistent.
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StoryInconsistencies

Description The rapid escalation of Jordan's wealth and lifestyle lacks a clear explanation of how he transitions from a struggling broker to a millionaire in a short time, creating a logical gap in the narrative.
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Description Jordan's ability to manipulate the stock market and evade legal consequences seems overly simplistic, undermining the complexity of financial crimes and the legal system.
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PlotHoles

Description The sudden introduction of the FBI's investigation without prior hints or buildup creates a plot hole, as it feels abrupt and lacks foreshadowing, making it hard to believe that Jordan would not have anticipated legal repercussions.
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Description Jordan's transition from a high-flying broker to a government cooperator is not adequately explained, leaving a gap in understanding how he shifts from evading capture to willingly providing information.
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DialogueAuthenticity

Description Some of Jordan's motivational speeches feel overly scripted and lack the natural flow of conversation, making them less authentic to his character as a street-smart broker.
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Description Naomi's dialogue during the confrontation about their relationship feels forced and lacks the emotional depth that would be expected in such a high-stakes situation.
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Redundancies

Element Jordan's drug use
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Suggestion The repeated emphasis on Jordan's drug use could be streamlined to avoid redundancy and maintain narrative momentum. Focus on key moments rather than multiple instances.
Element Motivational speeches
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Suggestion Jordan's motivational speeches could be consolidated to enhance their impact, rather than having multiple similar speeches throughout the script.

Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:

Jordan Belfort

Jordan Belfort is a charismatic and ambitious stockbroker who rises from humble beginnings to extreme wealth, embodying the quintessential American Dream. Initially portrayed as a young, idealistic newcomer to the world of stock trading, he is quick-witted, confident, and willing to take risks. As he navigates the cutthroat environment of Wall Street, he becomes increasingly cynical and morally compromised, engaging in illegal activities while justifying them as necessary for survival. His speaking style evolves from enthusiastic and eager to confident, persuasive, and often humorous, using colorful language and bold statements to assert his dominance. He is a natural leader, capable of inspiring loyalty and admiration in his employees, yet he also exhibits a ruthless side when faced with betrayal. Throughout his journey, he grapples with guilt and moral dilemmas, reflecting vulnerability and introspection as he confronts the consequences of his actions. Ultimately, he transforms from a criminal to a motivational speaker, using his past experiences to inspire others, with a speaking style that is engaging and emotionally resonant, filled with motivational quotes and anecdotes from his life.

Naomi

Naomi is a glamorous and sophisticated woman, a former model with a taste for luxury and an alluring presence that captivates those around her. She embodies confidence and independence, often displaying a playful and flirtatious personality that intrigues her husband, Jordan. Beneath her composed exterior lies a hint of vulnerability, revealing her struggles with trust and insecurity in their tumultuous relationship. Naomi's dialogue is a blend of elegance, wit, and emotional depth, reflecting her background in fashion and design. As the story progresses, she evolves from a seductive and confident partner to a strong-willed and confrontational individual, unafraid to assert her power and voice her frustrations. Her speaking style shifts from sultry and direct to passionate and accusatory, ultimately becoming calm and rational as she navigates the chaos surrounding her family. Naomi's resilience, intelligence, and protective nature emerge as she balances her loyalty to Jordan with her own emotional turmoil.

Jordan

Jordan is a charismatic, confident, and cunning protagonist whose personality is marked by a blend of ambition, greed, and a relentless pursuit of wealth. He possesses a sharp wit and a penchant for luxury and risk-taking, often indulging in reckless behavior and substance abuse. His speaking style is assertive and persuasive, often laced with sarcasm, dark humor, and defiance, allowing him to manipulate others and navigate complex situations. Jordan's charm and bravado mask a darker side characterized by deceit and moral ambiguity. He is portrayed as impulsive and emotionally volatile, struggling with guilt, infidelity, and the consequences of his actions. As he faces legal troubles and personal betrayals, his dialogue reflects a mix of confidence, desperation, and vulnerability, showcasing his complex personality and the internal conflict between his desires and the repercussions of his choices.

Mark Hanna

Mark Hanna is a charismatic and flamboyant senior broker who embodies the excesses of Wall Street. With a larger-than-life personality, he is confident, charming, and unapologetically bold in his actions. His speaking style is brash, irreverent, and provocative, often laced with sarcasm and colorful language. Mark serves as a mentor to Jordan, introducing him to a high-stakes world filled with drugs, money, and ethical ambiguity. He promotes a lifestyle of indulgence and excess, pushing boundaries and challenging societal norms with his devil-may-care attitude towards life and work.

Donnie Azoff

Donnie Azoff is a dynamic and multifaceted character who embodies the complexities of youthful ambition and the allure of a lavish lifestyle. Initially portrayed as a preppy and enthusiastic young man, Donnie is captivated by Jordan's success and charisma, leading him to make impulsive decisions, such as quitting his job to join Jordan's firm. His speaking style is eager and excitable, often exaggerating his emotions and seeking validation from those around him. As the story progresses, Donnie adopts a more laid-back and humorous demeanor, influenced by the carefree lifestyle he observes, often reflecting this through casual and comedic dialogue, sometimes under the influence of drugs or alcohol. However, his character takes a darker turn as he becomes impulsive, loyal, and hot-headed, showcasing a quick temper and fierce protectiveness over Jordan, particularly in confrontations with characters like Nicholas. His speaking style shifts to aggressive and vulgar, mirroring his volatile personality. Despite these changes, Donnie remains fundamentally loyal and eager to please, often echoing Jordan's sentiments, which highlights his dependence on Jordan's guidance and success.

Donnie

Donnie is a charismatic and impulsive broker, known for his persuasive charm and confident demeanor. He initially engages clients with a smooth-talking style that appeals to their desires for financial gain. However, as the story progresses, Donnie becomes increasingly reckless and easily swayed by the allure of Jordan's lifestyle, leading him into immoral ventures. His speaking style evolves from brash and enthusiastic to direct and profane, reflecting his confrontational nature. Despite his chaotic tendencies, Donnie serves as a comedic foil to Jordan, often using humor and sarcasm to navigate tense situations. He is fiercely loyal to his friends, exhibiting a hot-headedness that drives him to take extreme risks. His dialogue is characterized by bluntness and colorful language, revealing a blend of vulnerability and bravado as he grapples with addiction and self-destructive behavior. Ultimately, Donnie's character embodies a mix of impulsiveness, loyalty, and a desire for excitement, making him both a source of comic relief and tension within the group.

Character	Arc	Critique	Suggestions
Jordan Belfort	Jordan's character arc begins with his rise as an ambitious and naive stockbroker, driven by a desire for wealth and success. As he gains power and influence, he becomes morally ambiguous, engaging in illegal activities and manipulating others to achieve his goals. This leads to a downfall marked by legal troubles and personal crises, forcing him to confront the consequences of his actions. In the end, he experiences a moment of reflection and redemption, transforming into a motivational speaker who uses his past to inspire others, showcasing growth and a desire for second chances.	While Jordan's character arc effectively captures the rise and fall of a morally ambiguous figure, it could benefit from deeper exploration of his internal conflicts and motivations. The transition from a naive stockbroker to a manipulative leader is compelling, but the screenplay could delve more into the emotional toll of his choices, particularly the impact on his relationships and personal life. Additionally, the redemption aspect feels somewhat rushed and could be more nuanced, allowing for a more gradual realization of his past mistakes.	To improve Jordan's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that highlight his internal struggles and the consequences of his actions on those around him. This could include moments of vulnerability where he reflects on his relationships and the moral implications of his choices. Additionally, the redemption phase could be expanded to show a more gradual transformation, perhaps through mentorship or genuine acts of kindness that demonstrate his growth. This would create a more layered and relatable character, allowing the audience to connect with his journey on a deeper level.
Naomi	Naomi's character arc begins with her as a glamorous and confident wife, deeply enamored with Jordan's lifestyle. As the narrative unfolds, she faces the harsh realities of their relationship, grappling with feelings of betrayal and insecurity. This leads her to confront Jordan about his actions, showcasing her strength and assertiveness. Throughout the screenplay, Naomi transitions from a seductive figure to a grounded and pragmatic partner, ultimately becoming a voice of reason amidst chaos. By the end, she emerges as a resilient individual who prioritizes her family's well-being, finding a balance between her love for Jordan and her own self-worth.	Naomi's character arc is compelling, showcasing her evolution from a glamorous wife to a strong, independent woman. However, the arc could benefit from deeper exploration of her internal conflicts and motivations. While her confrontational moments are impactful, they may come across as reactive rather than proactive. Additionally, her transition from seduction to pragmatism could be more gradual, allowing the audience to witness her struggles and growth in a more nuanced manner.	To improve Naomi's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into her backstory, highlighting her experiences in the fashion industry and how they shape her views on trust and loyalty. This could provide context for her emotional responses and make her confrontations with Jordan more relatable. Additionally, introduce moments where Naomi takes initiative in her own life, such as pursuing a passion or career, which would reinforce her independence and resilience. Gradually revealing her vulnerabilities and strengths through interactions with other characters could create a richer, more layered portrayal of her journey.
Jordan	Jordan's character arc follows a trajectory from a morally bankrupt, hedonistic individual driven solely by greed and ambition to a more reflective and conflicted person grappling with the consequences of his actions. Initially, he is portrayed as a master manipulator, thriving in a chaotic world of finance and excess. However, as the narrative progresses, he faces mounting legal troubles and personal crises that force him to confront his reckless behavior and the impact it has on his relationships. Ultimately, Jordan's journey leads him to a moment of self-awareness, where he must decide whether to continue down a path of self-destruction or seek redemption by taking responsibility for his actions and protecting those he cares about.	While Jordan's character arc is compelling, it risks becoming predictable as he transitions from a reckless anti-hero to a more reflective figure. The internal conflict is present, but the stakes could be raised to enhance the emotional impact of his journey. Additionally, the portrayal of his relationships, particularly with his wife and Naomi, could be deepened to provide more context for his motivations and struggles. The balance between his charm and darker tendencies is well-executed, but there may be moments where his vulnerability could be more pronounced to create a stronger connection with the audience.	To improve Jordan's character arc, consider introducing more significant consequences for his actions earlier in the screenplay, which would heighten the tension and urgency of his journey. Additionally, explore his relationships in greater depth, allowing for more nuanced interactions that reveal his vulnerabilities and motivations. Incorporating moments of genuine self-reflection or moral dilemmas could enhance his internal struggle and make his eventual choices more impactful. Finally, consider adding a mentor or a foil character who challenges Jordan's worldview, pushing him toward growth and self-awareness.
Mark Hanna	Mark Hanna's character arc follows his journey from a hedonistic mentor who revels in the excesses of Wall Street to a more introspective figure who begins to question the moral implications of his lifestyle. Initially, he embodies the thrill of the high-stakes environment, encouraging Jordan to embrace the same reckless abandon. However, as the story progresses, Mark faces the consequences of his choices, leading to moments of vulnerability and self-reflection. Ultimately, he becomes a cautionary figure, illustrating the dangers of unchecked ambition and the emptiness that can accompany a life of excess.	While Mark Hanna's character is vibrant and engaging, his arc could benefit from deeper emotional resonance. The transition from a hedonistic mentor to a more reflective figure feels somewhat abrupt and lacks sufficient buildup. Additionally, the consequences he faces could be more clearly defined to enhance the impact of his transformation. As it stands, his character serves primarily as a catalyst for Jordan's journey, but his own development could be more nuanced.	To improve Mark Hanna's character arc, consider incorporating more moments of internal conflict that reveal his vulnerabilities earlier in the screenplay. This could involve flashbacks to his past or interactions with other characters that highlight the toll of his lifestyle. Additionally, providing a clearer catalyst for his change—such as a significant event that forces him to confront the consequences of his actions—would strengthen his transformation. Finally, allowing for a more gradual evolution in his perspective on ethics and ambition could create a more compelling and relatable character journey.
Donnie Azoff	Donnie Azoff's character arc follows a trajectory from naive admiration to a tumultuous journey of self-discovery. Initially, he is a starry-eyed follower, enamored with Jordan's lifestyle and willing to abandon his own stability for the promise of wealth and excitement. As he becomes more entrenched in this world, he grapples with the consequences of his impulsive decisions, leading to moments of aggression and volatility. His loyalty to Jordan is tested as he faces moral dilemmas and the darker aspects of their lifestyle. Ultimately, Donnie's arc culminates in a moment of clarity where he must confront the reality of his choices, leading him to either break free from Jordan's influence or double down on his loyalty, reflecting a deeper understanding of himself and the cost of the life he has chosen.	While Donnie's character arc presents a compelling journey of loyalty and self-discovery, it risks becoming one-dimensional if not explored with nuance. His initial enthusiasm and later aggression could benefit from deeper emotional exploration, particularly in understanding the motivations behind his impulsive decisions. Additionally, the transition from a carefree follower to a volatile protector may feel abrupt without sufficient development of the internal conflicts he faces. The screenplay could further emphasize the consequences of his actions on his relationships and personal identity, allowing for a more profound transformation.	To improve Donnie's character arc, consider incorporating moments of introspection that reveal his internal struggles and fears about losing his identity in the shadow of Jordan's success. Introducing scenes where he reflects on his past choices or interacts with characters who challenge his worldview could add depth. Additionally, showcasing the impact of his loyalty on his personal relationships, perhaps through conflicts with family or friends, would provide a more rounded perspective on his character. Finally, a pivotal moment where Donnie must choose between loyalty to Jordan and his own moral compass could serve as a powerful climax to his arc, allowing for a more satisfying resolution.
Donnie	Throughout the screenplay, Donnie's character arc follows a trajectory from a confident and persuasive broker to a reckless and impulsive partner in crime. Initially, he is drawn to Jordan's charisma and success, leading him to indulge in wild antics and drug use. As the story unfolds, Donnie's impulsive nature causes increasing tension among the group, culminating in dangerous situations that test his loyalty and survival instincts. In the climax, he faces a critical choice between his loyalty to Jordan and the need to protect himself. Ultimately, Donnie's journey leads him to a moment of self-realization, where he acknowledges his flaws and the consequences of his actions. By the end, he emerges as a more resourceful and supportive friend, learning to balance his impulsiveness with a sense of responsibility.	Donnie's character arc is compelling, showcasing the complexities of loyalty, impulsiveness, and the struggle with addiction. However, the arc could benefit from deeper exploration of his internal conflicts and motivations. While his loyalty to Jordan is evident, the screenplay could delve more into the emotional stakes that drive his reckless behavior. Additionally, the transition from a comedic foil to a more serious character could be more gradual, allowing the audience to witness the evolution of his character in a more nuanced way.	To improve Donnie's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or moments of introspection that reveal his backstory and the reasons behind his impulsive nature. This could help the audience empathize with his struggles and understand the stakes of his loyalty to Jordan. Additionally, introducing a pivotal moment where Donnie must confront the consequences of his actions—perhaps a situation where he risks losing a friend or facing legal repercussions—could heighten the tension and provide a clearer turning point in his character development. Finally, allowing for moments of vulnerability and growth throughout the screenplay, rather than saving them for the climax, could create a more cohesive and relatable character journey.

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The American Dream and its Corruption

Jordan Belfort's rise from a middle-class upbringing to a life of excessive wealth and luxury is portrayed as a realization of the American Dream, but his pursuit of wealth leads to unethical and illegal practices, exposing the dark side of the American Dream.

This theme explores the allure and dangers of achieving material success at any cost. It highlights how the pursuit of wealth can lead to moral compromises and ultimately result in a downfall. The screenplay suggests that true success is not solely defined by material possessions but also by personal integrity and moral values.

Strengthening The American Dream and its Corruption:

Suggestion Type	How to Strengthen the Theme
Character Arc	Deepen Jordan's initial disillusionment with the American Dream. In the opening scenes (1 & 2), showcase his initial yearning for a better life and how it fuels his ambition. Later (Scene 12), introduce an internal conflict as his father, Max, challenges Jordan's perception of success. This will create a richer, more complex arc where Jordan grapples with the corruption of his ambitions.
Visual - Scene Scene 10	During the Stratton Oakmont celebration, subtly juxtapose the brokers' frenzied revelry with shots of the city skyline. This visual contrast emphasizes the disconnect between their manufactured sense of success and the reality of the world outside their bubble. It should highlight the emptiness of their pursuit of wealth.
Dialogue - Scene Scene 35	When Jordan addresses the Stratton brokers (Scene 35), incorporate dialogue that highlights the moral cost of his ambition. He could acknowledge the damage he has caused, perhaps in the form of a heartfelt apology or a moment of self-reflection. This will add emotional depth to his character and emphasize the theme of corruption.
Story Arc	Weave in scenes or moments where the consequences of Jordan's actions impact individuals beyond his inner circle. Consider showcasing the struggles of a family who loses their life savings through Jordan's schemes. This will broaden the scope of the theme beyond Jordan's personal journey, highlighting the broader societal impact of his corruption.
Dialogue - Scene Scene 46	In the final scene (Scene 46), subtly alter the tone of Jordan's motivational speech. Instead of solely focusing on financial success, have him acknowledge the importance of integrity and the dangers of chasing wealth without ethical boundaries. This can leave the audience pondering the true meaning of the American Dream and its potential for corruption.

Greed and Its Consequences

Jordan's relentless pursuit of wealth and his obsession with money drive him to commit fraud and engage in immoral activities. His insatiable greed ultimately leads to his downfall, exposing the destructive nature of unchecked ambition.

This theme delves into the negative impact of greed on individuals and society. It shows how the pursuit of wealth can consume individuals, leading to unethical behavior and ultimately causing personal and professional ruin. The screenplay cautions against the dangers of prioritizing material gain over ethical principles.

Addiction and its Impact on Relationships

Jordan's addiction to drugs, gambling, and sex affects his relationships, causing strain in his marriage and ultimately leading to his downfall. The screenplay highlights the devastating consequences of addiction on personal lives and relationships.

This theme explores the complexities of addiction and its impact on interpersonal connections. It shows how addictive behaviors can lead to self-destruction, erode trust, and damage relationships. The screenplay also suggests that addiction can be a vicious cycle that is difficult to break free from.

The Power of Persuasion and Manipulation

Jordan's success in the stock market is largely attributed to his ability to persuade and manipulate people. He uses charisma, confidence, and unethical tactics to convince investors to buy worthless stocks, highlighting the dark side of salesmanship.

This theme examines the art of persuasion and its potential for both good and evil. The screenplay demonstrates how persuasive techniques can be used to influence and manipulate others, often for personal gain. It raises questions about the ethics of salesmanship and the importance of responsible communication.

The Price of Success

Jordan's pursuit of success comes at a high cost, leading to the loss of his marriage, his friends, and his freedom. The screenplay highlights the sacrifices and compromises often associated with achieving success, especially in a competitive field like Wall Street.

This theme explores the complexities of defining success and the sacrifices that may be required to achieve it. It suggests that success can come at a cost, often requiring individuals to compromise their values and personal lives. The screenplay ultimately challenges the notion that material wealth equates to happiness and fulfillment.

Loyalty and Betrayal

Jordan's relationships with his friends and associates are tested as he faces legal troubles. Some remain loyal, while others betray him for their own benefit. The screenplay explores the complexities of loyalty and the ways in which trust can be broken.

This theme examines the importance of loyalty and the fragility of trust in personal and professional relationships. It shows how betrayal can arise from various motivations, such as self-preservation, greed, or personal vendettas. The screenplay ultimately highlights the emotional consequences of broken trust and the difficulty of rebuilding relationships after betrayal.

The Justice System and its Imperfections

The screenplay depicts the complex workings of the legal system, highlighting its imperfections and the influence of money and power. Jordan's ability to evade justice for a period of time is a testament to the loopholes and corruption that can exist within the system.

This theme explores the complexities of the justice system and the challenges of achieving true accountability. The screenplay shows how money and influence can distort the legal process and undermine the pursuit of justice. It also raises questions about the effectiveness of law enforcement in holding powerful individuals accountable for their actions.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	The protagonist's internal goals evolve from a desire for identity and success, transitioning into a need for validation, control, and ultimately a reckoning with his moral values as he grapples with the consequences of his actions. Initially, Jordan seeks financial success and recognition, but as his lifestyle spirals into chaos, he wrestles with his sense of identity amidst addiction and infidelity.
External Goals	The protagonist's external goals evolve from achieving wealth and a lavish lifestyle to navigating legal troubles and the need to preserve his reputation. As he rises in the financial world, his focus shifts from mere success to maintaining visible control and avoiding the legal ramifications of his behaviors.
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict centers on the pursuit of material wealth and success at any cost versus traditional values of hard work and ethics. This conflict intertwines with Jordan's journey as he justifies his increasingly unethical choices through his desire for power and validation, challenging his moral compass and leading to his ultimate downfall.

Character Development Contribution: The evolution of Jordan's internal and external goals reflects his transformation from an ambitious young broker to a morally conflicted individual grappling with the consequences of his choices. His journey reveals deeper vulnerabilities, leading to moments of self-realization, guilt, and ultimately a need for redemption.

Narrative Structure Contribution: The alignment and conflict of Jordan's goals propel the narrative forward, framing his rise and fall as a cautionary tale about excess and ambition. Each goal achieved builds tension and stakes that contribute to a dynamic narrative arc, culminating in a dramatic confrontation with the law and his own morality.

Thematic Depth Contribution: The interplay between Jordan's goals and the philosophical conflicts enriches the screenplay's thematic depth. It explores the moral ambiguities of ambition, the dichotomy of appearance versus reality, and the dire consequences of unchecked greed, prompting audiences to reflect on the nature of success and its impact on personal relationships and integrity.

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

Story Content

Character Development

Scene Elements

Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \ It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.

			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Character Changes	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Opposition	High stakes	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - The Wild Jungle of Wealth	Humorous, Sarcastic, Satirical	8	8	7	9	8	6	8	7	6	7	7	8	7	7	7	9	9	8	8
2 - The Thrill of Excess	Dark, Hedonistic, Paranoid, Confident	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	7	8	8	7	8	7	7	9	9	8	8
3 - The Thrill of the Trading Floor	Manic, Sarcastic, Excited	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	8	8	8	8	7	6	9	9	9	8	8
4 - The Allure of Wall Street	Intense, Cynical, Dark	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	9	8	8	7	9	9	9	8	8
5 - From Struggles to Success	Intense, Ambitious, Confident	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	7	8	7	6	9	9	9	8	8
6 - The Birth of a Partnership	Intense, Dark, Cynical	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	7	7	9	9	8	8
7 - Ambition and Doubt	Cynical, Sarcastic, Reflective	8	8	7	8	9	6	8	7	7	7	7	8	7	6	8	9	9	8	8
8 - The Art of Manipulation	Intense, Manipulative, Persuasive	8	8	7	8	8	7	8	9	8	8	9	9	7	6	9	9	9	9	9
9 - The Art of Persuasion	Intense, Manipulative, Confident	8	8	7	8	8	5	8	7	8	8	9	8	7	6	9	9	9	9	9
10 - Celebration of Excess	Outrageous, Sensational, Irreverent	9	8	8	9	9	7	8	7	7	7	9	8	8	8	8	9	9	8	8
11 - Chaos and Consequences at Stratton Oakmont	Dark, Humorous, Satirical	8	8	7	9	8	6	7	6	7	7	7	8	8	6	7	9	8	8	8
12 - Dwarfs and Debt	Sarcastic, Cynical, Humorous	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	8	8	7	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
13 - Rallying the Brokers	Celebratory, Confident, Humorous	8	7	7	8	8	4	8	7	3	7	6	7	7	6	8	9	8	9	9
14 - Desire Amidst Chaos	Humorous, Sarcastic, Seductive	8	7	7	9	8	6	8	7	6	7	7	8	7	7	9	9	8	8	8
15 - Temptation in the City	Romantic, Seductive, Tense	8	8	7	8	9	7	7	8	7	8	6	7	7	9	8	9	8	9	9
16 - Beneath the Surface	Dramatic, Intense, Emotional	8	8	7	9	9	8	8	7	8	8	7	7	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
17 - Betrayal in the City	Intense, Violent, Confrontational, Dark	9	8	9	9	9	8	8	7	9	8	8	9	8	9	8	9	8	8	8
18 - Chaos in the Bullpen	Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	7	7	9	8	7	7	7	9	9	8	8
19 - Waves of Celebration and Conflict	Humorous, Dramatic, Romantic	8	7	8	8	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	8	8	8	7	9	9	9	9
20 - Confrontation of Betrayal	Tense, Emotional, Confrontational	8	7	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	7	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8
21 - Seduction and Surveillance	Seductive, Tense, Emotional	8	8	7	9	9	7	8	7	8	8	7	7	8	9	8	9	8	8	8
22 - A Fishy Display of Dominance	Chaotic, Humorous, Confrontational	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	7	7	8	8	6	7	9	9	8	8
23 - From Heckling to Hustle: The Madden Stock Rally	Motivational, Intense, Humorous	9	8	8	9	7	6	8	9	7	8	7	8	8	8	9	9	9	9	9
24 - High Stakes and Legal Shadows	Intense, Suspenseful, Confrontational, Serious	8	8	8	9	7	6	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	7	7	9	9	8	8
25 - The Yacht Encounter	Confrontational, Sarcastic, Intense, Humorous	9	9	8	9	9	7	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	8	9	9	8	8	8
26 - Chaos in Transit	Humorous, Chaotic, Intense	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	8	8	6	7	9	9	8	8
27 - Secrets and Strategies in Saurel's Office	Tense, Suspenseful, Confrontational, Humorous	8	8	8	9	7	6	8	7	8	7	9	9	8	6	9	9	8	8	8
28 - Flirtation and Illicit Plans	Tense, Conflicted, Secretive, Intimate	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	7	7	8	7	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
29 - Cash Conflicts at the Beach House	Dark, Humorous, Tense	8	8	8	9	7	6	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	6	9	9	8	8	8
30 - Money and Mayhem	Tense, Humorous, Chaotic	8	8	7	9	8	5	8	7	9	8	7	8	9	6	7	9	8	8	8
31 - Urgent Call in the Basement	Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic	8	7	8	8	8	6	8	7	8	7	7	7	7	7	7	9	8	8	8
32 - Descent into Chaos	Intense, Suspenseful, Chaotic, Desperate	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8	7	9	9	8	8
33 - Frantic Rescue	Frantic, Chaotic, Humorous	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	8	7	8	7	7	9	9	8	8
34 - Crossroads of Recklessness	Intense, Tense, Reflective	8	8	7	9	7	7	8	7	7	7	9	8	8	6	6	9	8	8	8
35 - The Show Goes On	Motivational, Reflective, Celebratory	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	7	9	7	9	8	9	9	8	8
36 - Legal Troubles and Personal Tragedies	Chaotic, Intense, Humorous	8	8	8	9	7	6	8	7	8	8	9	8	8	7	7	9	9	8	8
37 - Inheritance on the Horizon	Tense, Frantic, Desperate, Sarcastic	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	9	8	9	9	7	8	9	9	9	8	8
38 - Stormy Descent	Tense, Chaotic, Intense, Dramatic	8	8	8	9	7	7	8	9	9	8	9	8	8	8	6	9	9	8	8
39 - Ambition Over Dinner	Serious, Reflective, Informative	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	7	7	8	8	7	7	7	9	8	8	8
40 - Legal Turmoil and Betrayal	Dramatic, Intense, Dark, Humorous	8	7	9	9	8	7	8	7	9	7	9	9	7	8	7	9	9	8	8
41 - Beneath the Surface	Tense, Reflective, Supportive	8	8	8	9	8	7	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
42 - Divided by Optimism	Serious, Intense, Emotional	8	7	8	8	9	8	8	7	8	7	9	8	7	9	9	9	9	8	8
43 - Shattered Bonds	Intense, Emotional, Confrontational	9	8	9	9	9	9	8	7	10	8	9	9	8	10	8	9	8	8	8
44 - Desperate Escape	Tense, Chaotic, Intense, Dramatic	9	8	9	9	8	8	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	9	8	9	9	8	8
45 - The Fall of Jordan Belfort	Tense, Dramatic, Reflective	8	8	7	9	7	8	8	7	8	7	9	7	8	9	6	9	8	8	8
46 - The Pen Challenge	Motivational, Reflective, Serious	8	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	4	7	3	6	7	6	7	9	8	9	9

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.

Scene Strengths

Compelling character development
Engaging dialogue
Intense atmosphere
Sharp dialogue
Emotional depth

Scene Weaknesses

Limited emotional depth
Excessive focus on excess and luxury
Lack of external conflict
Some cliched elements
Some characters may lack depth

Suggestions

Focus on creating more unique and complex characters to avoid clichés
Explore external conflict and action to balance out internal struggles
Reduce focus on excess and luxury to allow for deeper exploration of themes and characters
Utilize dialogue to further character development and add emotional impact
Consider the potential impact of graphic drug use and violence on audiences

World Building

Physical environment: The screenplay portrays a world of stark contrasts. On one hand, there are opulent settings like luxurious mansions, yachts, penthouse apartments, and high-end restaurants, showcasing the lavish lifestyles of the wealthy elite. On the other hand, gritty and chaotic settings like crowded stockbroker offices, a strip mall parking lot, and a minimum security prison illustrate the less glamorous side of this world. These contrasting environments contribute to the atmosphere of both excess and desperation, highlighting the pursuit of wealth and the potential consequences of unchecked ambition.
Culture: The dominant culture is one of extreme materialism, where success is measured by wealth, status, and the ability to indulge in extravagant lifestyles. This culture is characterized by a relentless pursuit of money, fueled by greed, ambition, and a disregard for ethical boundaries. The screenplay explores the dark side of this culture, revealing the moral decay, corruption, and the toxic impact it has on individuals and relationships. Elements like excessive drug use, rampant infidelity, and a constant pursuit of pleasure contribute to the atmosphere of decadence and moral ambiguity.
Society: The societal structure is hierarchical, with a clear divide between the wealthy elite and the rest of society. The screenplay explores the power dynamics and the influence that wealth and privilege wield. It reveals the corrupting power of money, showcasing how individuals become entangled in illegal activities and compromise their morals in the pursuit of financial success. The screenplay highlights the disparity in opportunities and the societal consequences of unchecked greed, emphasizing the vulnerability of those who lack wealth and influence.
Technology: The screenplay takes place in the late 1980s and early 1990s, reflecting the technological advancements of that era. The use of phones, computers, and gadgets is prominent, highlighting the impact of technology on communication, finance, and surveillance. However, the screenplay's focus remains on human interactions and motivations, using technology as a tool to further the narrative rather than as a central theme. The use of bugging devices, wiretapping, and hidden cameras further emphasizes the themes of deception, betrayal, and the constant threat of surveillance within this world.
Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology shape the characters' experiences and actions in profound ways. The opulent surroundings fuel their desires, while the cutthroat culture pushes them to extremes. The hierarchical societal structures create opportunities and limitations based on wealth and power, influencing their choices and actions. The technological advancements both enable and complicate their endeavors, shaping their interactions and adding elements of risk and uncertainty to their lives.
Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute significantly to the narrative of the screenplay, driving the plot and shaping the characters' journeys. The chaotic environment of the brokerage firm, the relentless pursuit of wealth, and the high stakes involved in financial transactions create a sense of constant tension and urgency. The contrasting environments and the cultural elements fuel the characters' motivations, leading to moral dilemmas, betrayals, and ultimately, their downfall.
Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring the corrosive nature of greed, the dangers of unchecked ambition, and the consequences of pursuing wealth at all costs. The screenplay reveals the dark side of financial success, showcasing the moral decay, societal imbalances, and personal sacrifices that can result from a relentless pursuit of wealth. The contrast between the opulent lifestyles and the harsh realities of the criminal underworld adds layers of complexity to the themes of ambition, redemption, and the fragility of human nature.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	The writer's voice is characterized by a darkly humorous and cynical tone, a fast-paced narrative, sharp and witty dialogue, and a focus on the excesses and moral ambiguity of the financial world.
Voice Contribution	The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a compelling and engaging atmosphere that blends humor, drama, and social critique. The fast-paced dialogue and vivid imagery transport the audience into the chaotic world of stockbroking, highlighting the characters' ambition, greed, and recklessness. The darkly humorous tone adds a layer of satire to the story, exposing the absurdity of their actions and the corrosive effects of wealth and power. The writer's voice also reveals the internal struggles and moral dilemmas of the characters, particularly Jordan Belfort, as he grapples with guilt, ambition, and the consequences of his choices.
Best Representation Scene	1 - The Wild Jungle of Wealth
Best Scene Explanation	This scene is the best representation of the author's voice because it effectively establishes the tone, style, and themes of the screenplay. It blends fast-paced dialogue, vivid descriptions of excess and decadence, and a darkly humorous tone that perfectly encapsulates the characters' ambition, greed, and recklessness. The scene also foreshadows the moral ambiguity and internal conflicts that will drive the story forward. It provides a glimpse into the chaotic and seductive world of Wall Street, showcasing the writer's ability to create a compelling and engaging narrative.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
High Stakes Scenes Drive Emotional Impact	Scenes with a high 'High Stakes' score tend to have a higher 'Emotional Impact' score. This suggests that your screenplay uses tension and risk to effectively evoke emotion in the reader.
Intense Scenes Drive Character Change	Scenes with an 'Intense' tone often have a higher 'Character Changes' score. This indicates that your intense scenes are crucial moments of growth and development for your characters. Consider if you can further amplify these changes by emphasizing the internal struggles of your characters in these scenes.
Humor as a Release Valve	Humor often follows scenes with high emotional impact, suggesting you use humor as a means to break tension and provide relief for the reader. This is a common and effective technique, but consider if the humor could sometimes be integrated more organically into the emotional beats, rather than acting solely as a break.
Strong Concept Drives Plot and Characters	The 'Concept' score consistently aligns with the 'Plot' and 'Characters' scores. This indicates that your story's core concept is well-defined and serves as a strong foundation for both the plot and character development. This is a good sign of a well-structured screenplay.
Dialogue is Key to Character Growth	While not as strong as other correlations, there's a slight tendency for 'Dialogue' scores to increase in scenes where 'Character Changes' are high. This suggests that your characters are evolving through their interactions with each other, which is a positive sign of well-developed dialogue. Consider if you can further emphasize this by adding more dynamic dialogue exchanges in key character development scenes.
Confrontational Scenes are Highly Effective	Scenes with a 'Confrontational' tone are often highly rated for both 'Conflict' and 'Emotional Impact'. This indicates that you are skillfully utilizing conflict to drive the story forward and engage the reader. Keep experimenting with confrontational scenes to further intensify emotional impact and heighten dramatic tension.
Character Changes are Not Linear	The 'Character Changes' score is not directly correlated with scene number. This is a good sign, suggesting your characters are not simply evolving in a linear fashion, but rather undergoing moments of change throughout the story, creating a more nuanced and believable character arc.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in creating engaging scenes, particularly in crafting sharp dialogue and dynamic character interactions. The writer excels at capturing the high-stakes world of finance, highlighting moral ambiguity and complex relationships. The writing style often leans towards a gritty, cynical tone, particularly evident in the dialogue. However, while showcasing a talent for tension and conflict, the scenes sometimes lack the depth of emotional resonance that could elevate them further.

Key Improvement Areas

Character Development

While the scenes capture character dynamics and conflicts, there's an opportunity to delve deeper into the characters' motivations, backstories, and internal struggles. This would create more nuanced and compelling characters that resonate with the audience on a deeper level.

Dialogue

The dialogue is sharp and engaging, but it could benefit from further development in conveying emotional depth, subtext, and character motivations. Focusing on creating dialogue that reveals more about the characters' inner world and relationships would enhance the emotional impact of the scenes.

Pacing and Structure

The scenes are well-paced, but some could benefit from tighter structuring to ensure every element contributes directly to the narrative and character development. This can be achieved by focusing on concise scene setups, clear payoffs, and ensuring each scene advances the plot or reveals something meaningful about the characters.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Book	'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder	This book provides valuable insights into structuring scenes, crafting compelling characters, and creating engaging narratives, which could help the writer improve pacing, structure, and character development.
Screenplay	'Glengarry Glen Ross' by David Mamet	This screenplay is a masterclass in sharp dialogue and intense character interactions within a high-stakes setting, relevant to the writer's strengths and the overall theme of the screenplay. Studying Mamet's work can help refine dialogue, elevate character interactions, and enhance the sense of tension and urgency in the scenes.
Video	Watch interviews with screenwriters discussing their writing process and character development, focusing on writers known for strong emotional storytelling.	Gaining insights into how experienced screenwriters develop characters and create emotional depth in their narratives can provide valuable inspiration and new techniques to the writer.
Exercise	Practice writing scenes with a focus on character backstories and motivations, exploring how these elements inform their current actions and relationships.Practice In SceneProv	This exercise will help the writer delve deeper into the characters' inner lives and motivations, creating more complex and relatable characters.
Exercise	Practice writing dialogue-driven scenes that focus on subtext and unspoken emotions, allowing the characters' dialogue to reveal their true feelings and intentions.Practice In SceneProv	This exercise will help the writer develop more nuanced dialogue that resonates on an emotional level, creating a deeper connection between the characters and the audience.
Exercise	Practice writing scenes that follow a specific structure, ensuring each scene has a clear setup, conflict, and payoff, contributing directly to the overall narrative.Practice In SceneProv	This exercise will help the writer refine their scene structure, ensuring that every element of a scene serves a purpose and contributes to the story's progression.

Additional Notes: The writer shows a strong understanding of creating high-stakes, dialogue-driven scenes with complex character interactions. Continued focus on character depth, emotional resonance in dialogue, and scene structure will elevate the screenplay to a higher level of emotional impact and storytelling effectiveness.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
Rise and Fall	Jordan Belfort's journey from a middle-class upbringing to becoming a wealthy stockbroker, followed by his eventual downfall due to illegal activities.	This trope involves a character's ascent to success followed by a dramatic decline, often due to their own flaws or moral failings. An example is in 'The Wolf of Wall Street' itself, where Jordan's rise is marked by excess and greed, leading to his legal troubles. Another example is in 'Scarface', where Tony Montana rises to power only to fall due to his violent lifestyle.
Excessive Lifestyle	Jordan's extravagant lifestyle is showcased through his possessions, parties, and drug use.	This trope highlights characters living lavishly, often leading to their downfall. In 'The Great Gatsby', Jay Gatsby's opulent parties symbolize his wealth but also his emptiness. Similarly, in 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's lifestyle reflects his moral decay.
The Mentor	Mark Hanna serves as a mentor to Jordan, introducing him to the high-stakes world of stock trading.	The mentor trope involves a character who guides the protagonist, often leading them down a path of success or failure. In 'The Karate Kid', Mr. Miyagi teaches Daniel not just martial arts but life lessons. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Hanna's mentorship leads Jordan into a morally questionable world.
The Antihero	Jordan Belfort is portrayed as a charismatic yet morally ambiguous character.	The antihero is a protagonist who lacks conventional heroic qualities, often engaging in morally questionable actions. An example is Walter White in 'Breaking Bad', who transforms from a sympathetic character to a ruthless drug lord. Jordan embodies this trope as he captivates audiences while engaging in illegal activities.
Party Scene	The screenplay features numerous chaotic party scenes filled with drugs, alcohol, and debauchery.	Party scenes often serve to highlight characters' hedonistic lifestyles and can lead to pivotal plot developments. In 'The Hangover', the wild party leads to unexpected consequences for the characters. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', these scenes emphasize the excess and chaos of Jordan's life.
The Love Triangle	Jordan's relationships with Naomi and Teresa create tension and conflict.	A love triangle involves three characters where romantic interests conflict, often leading to drama. In 'Twilight', Bella is torn between Edward and Jacob. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's infidelity creates tension between his wife and mistress.
The Fall from Grace	Jordan's illegal activities lead to his arrest and downfall.	This trope depicts a character's loss of status or respect due to their actions. In 'The Shawshank Redemption', Andy Dufresne's fall from grace leads to his imprisonment. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's rise is followed by a dramatic fall due to his unethical behavior.
The Drug-Fueled Rampage	Jordan's drug use leads to reckless behavior and chaotic situations.	This trope involves characters engaging in wild, often destructive behavior under the influence of drugs. In 'Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas', the protagonists' drug use leads to surreal and chaotic experiences. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's drug-fueled escapades highlight his moral decline.
The Big Speech	Jordan delivers motivational speeches to inspire his brokers and maintain their loyalty.	The big speech trope involves a character delivering an inspiring or persuasive speech that rallies others. In 'Braveheart', William Wallace's speech motivates his troops to fight for freedom. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's speeches serve to manipulate and energize his brokers.
The Corrupt System	The screenplay highlights the corrupt practices within the financial industry.	This trope critiques societal or institutional corruption, often showcasing characters who exploit the system. In 'The Godfather', the mafia operates outside the law, revealing systemic corruption. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's actions expose the moral decay within Wall Street.

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
2	Jordan: Money is the oxygen of capitalism and I wanna breathe more than any other human being alive.
1	Jordan: My name is Jordan Belfort. No, not him, me. I’m a former member of the middle class raised by two accountants in a tiny apartment in Bayside, Queens.
35	Jordan: THE SHOW GOES ON!!
13	Jordan Belfort: If you wanna party with the boys, you gotta wake up with the men.
46	Jordan: Sell me this pen.

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The Wolf of Wall Street

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