Overview
Unique Selling Point
This screenplay stands out due to its unflinching portrayal of greed and excess in the financial world, combined with a darkly comedic tone that engages the audience. Its unique perspective on the consequences of ambition and moral decay makes it compelling for viewers interested in character studies and cautionary tales.
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Story Facts
Genres: Drama, Crime, Comedy, Thriller, Biography, Romance, Dark Comedy
Setting: 1987 to 1998, Primarily set in New York City and surrounding areas, including Wall Street, upscale restaurants, and luxurious homes.
Themes: The American Dream and its Corruption, Greed and Its Consequences, Addiction and its Impact on Relationships, The Power of Persuasion and Manipulation, The Price of Success, Loyalty and Betrayal, The Justice System and its Imperfections
Conflict & Stakes: Jordan's struggle with his self-destructive behavior, legal troubles, and the impact on his relationships, particularly with Naomi, as he navigates the high-stakes world of finance.
Mood: Chaotic and exuberant, with moments of dark humor and tension.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The film's portrayal of the chaotic and hedonistic lifestyle of stockbrokers, providing a behind-the-scenes look at Wall Street's excesses.
- Major Twist: Jordan's eventual downfall and legal troubles serve as a stark contrast to his earlier success, highlighting the consequences of his actions.
- Distinctive Setting: The vibrant and chaotic atmosphere of the Stratton Oakmont bullpen, showcasing the frenetic energy of the stock market.
- Innovative Ideas: The use of dark humor to address serious themes of greed and moral ambiguity, making the story both entertaining and thought-provoking.
Comparable Scripts: The Wolf of Wall Street, American Psycho, Boiler Room, The Big Short, Catch Me If You Can, Wall Street, The Social Network, Mad Men, Scarface
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The Wolf of Wall Street Synopsis
Synopsis
Based on the true story of Jordan Belfort, 'The Wolf of Wall Street' chronicles the rise and fall of a stockbroker who becomes a notorious figure in the world of finance. The film opens with Belfort, played by Leonardo DiCaprio, introducing himself as a former middle-class man who ascended to the heights of Wall Street, making millions through dubious practices. After being mentored by the charismatic Mark Hanna, portrayed by Matthew McConaughey, Jordan learns the ropes of high-pressure sales tactics and the art of manipulation. He quickly rises through the ranks, founding his own brokerage firm, Stratton Oakmont, with his partner Donnie Azoff, played by Jonah Hill.
As Stratton Oakmont grows, so does the excess. The firm becomes infamous for its wild parties, rampant drug use, and a lifestyle that epitomizes greed and hedonism. Jordan and his team engage in pump-and-dump schemes, manipulating stock prices to enrich themselves at the expense of unsuspecting investors. The film showcases the lavish lifestyle that comes with their success, including luxury cars, yachts, and a mansion filled with opulence. However, the darker side of their lifestyle begins to surface as the FBI starts to investigate their operations.
Jordan's personal life also spirals out of control. He marries Naomi, played by Margot Robbie, who initially enjoys the wealth but soon becomes disillusioned with Jordan's reckless behavior and infidelities. As the pressure mounts from law enforcement, Jordan's world begins to crumble. His associates start to turn on each other, and the consequences of their actions catch up with them. The film reaches a climax as Jordan is faced with the reality of his choices, leading to his eventual arrest and cooperation with the authorities to reduce his sentence.
In the end, Jordan serves time in prison but emerges with a renewed sense of purpose, leveraging his past experiences to become a motivational speaker. The film closes with Jordan back in the spotlight, demonstrating that while he may have lost everything, his ability to persuade and sell remains intact.
Script Level Analysis
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Analysis of the Scene Percentiles
- Engagement score is high at 75.61, indicating that the screenplay has the potential to captivate the audience.
- Pacing score is strong at 79.27, suggesting that the screenplay maintains a good rhythm and flow.
- Stakes are rated at 60.92, which implies that the screenplay effectively raises tension and interest.
- Concept rating is low at 27.78, indicating a need for a more compelling or original premise.
- Plot rating is particularly weak at 17.36, suggesting that the storyline may lack clarity or coherence.
- Internal goal score is very low at 11.79, which may indicate that character motivations are not well-defined.
The writer appears to be more intuitive, with strengths in dialogue and character engagement but weaknesses in concept and plot development.
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- Focus on developing clearer internal goals for characters to improve emotional impact and character depth.
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Overall AssessmentThe screenplay shows promise with strong engagement and pacing, but significant improvements are needed in concept and plot to enhance overall coherence and impact.
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Executive Summary
- The screenplay features sharp, engaging dialogue that captures the characters' personalities and the chaotic atmosphere of Wall Street. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (1) Scene Sequence number 2 (8) )
- The character arcs, particularly that of Jordan Belfort, are well-developed, showcasing his transformation from an ambitious broker to a morally bankrupt figure. high ( Scene Sequence number 3 (20) Scene Sequence number 4 (21) )
- The screenplay effectively uses voiceover narration to provide insight into Jordan's thoughts and motivations, enhancing the audience's understanding of his character. high ( Scene Sequence number 5 (25) Scene Sequence number 6 (29) )
- The pacing of the screenplay is generally strong, maintaining a high level of energy that keeps the audience engaged throughout. medium ( Scene Sequence number 8 (82) Scene Sequence number 9 (130) )
- The vivid imagery and detailed descriptions create a strong sense of place, immersing the audience in the opulent yet morally ambiguous world of Wall Street. high ( Scene Sequence number 10 (59) Scene Sequence number 11 (74) )
- Some scenes could benefit from tighter editing to maintain narrative momentum and avoid dragging in certain sections. medium ( Scene Sequence number 12 (77) Scene Sequence number 13 (87) )
- The screenplay occasionally relies on clichés or predictable plot points that could be refreshed for a more original take. medium ( Scene Sequence number 14 (79) Scene Sequence number 15 (82) )
- The exploration of themes such as morality and consequence could be deepened to provide a more nuanced commentary on the characters' actions. high ( Scene Sequence number 16 (88) Scene Sequence number 17 (97) )
- Some character motivations could be clearer, particularly for secondary characters, to enhance their roles in the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 18 (101) Scene Sequence number 19 (111) )
- The resolution of certain plot threads feels rushed, leaving some character arcs feeling unresolved or underexplored. medium ( Scene Sequence number 20 (118) Scene Sequence number 21 (122) )
- A deeper exploration of the consequences of Jordan's actions on his family and friends could add emotional weight to the narrative. high ( Scene Sequence number 22 (126) Scene Sequence number 23 (130) )
- The screenplay could benefit from more diverse perspectives, particularly from those affected by Jordan's actions, to provide a fuller picture of the impact of his choices. medium ( Scene Sequence number 24 (134) Scene Sequence number 25 (137) )
- There is a lack of exploration into the systemic issues within the financial industry that allowed characters like Jordan to thrive. medium ( Scene Sequence number 26 (138) Scene Sequence number 27 (151) )
- The screenplay could include more moments of introspection for Jordan, allowing the audience to connect with his internal struggles. medium ( Scene Sequence number 28 (155) Scene Sequence number 29 (158) )
- A more thorough examination of the legal and ethical implications of Jordan's actions could enhance the narrative's depth. medium ( Scene Sequence number 30 (170D) Scene Sequence number 31 (182) )
- The use of humor amidst serious themes creates a unique tone that balances entertainment with critique. high ( Scene Sequence number 32 (188) Scene Sequence number 33 (193) )
- The screenplay's ability to maintain tension and excitement throughout, even in slower moments, is commendable. high ( Scene Sequence number 34 (201) Scene Sequence number 35 (215) )
- The screenplay effectively captures the allure and danger of the lifestyle it portrays, making it both captivating and cautionary. high ( Scene Sequence number 36 (221) Scene Sequence number 37 (230) )
- The juxtaposition of wealth and moral decay serves as a powerful commentary on the American Dream. high ( Scene Sequence number 38 (210) Scene Sequence number 39 (215) )
- The ending leaves a lasting impression, prompting reflection on the consequences of greed and excess. high ( Scene Sequence number 40 (236) Scene Sequence number 41 (248) )
- Character Depth While Jordan's character is well-developed, secondary characters often lack depth and motivation, making them feel one-dimensional. For example, characters like Naomi and Donnie could benefit from more backstory and emotional complexity to enhance their roles in the narrative. high
- Predictable Plot Points Certain plot developments, such as the inevitable downfall of Jordan and the consequences of his actions, feel predictable and could benefit from more originality or unexpected twists to keep the audience engaged. medium
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Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 7.6, The screenplay demonstrates strong character development, with Jordan Belfort's arc as the most prominent and complex. However, certain characters, like Naomi and Donnie, could benefit from further exploration to deepen their emotional impact and provide a more balanced perspective on Jordan's world. Additionally, introducing a stronger antagonist would provide a more compelling external force driving the narrative. See More
Premise: 7.5, The screenplay's premise, based on the rise and fall of Jordan Belfort, is intriguing, blending elements of financial thriller, dark comedy, and character drama. The scene-by-scene summary provides a clear roadmap for the narrative, outlining Jordan's transformation from an ambitious broker to a criminal mastermind and ultimately a motivational speaker. However, the screenplay could benefit from refining the initial hook to create more immediate engagement and emphasize the unique aspects of the story. See More
Structure: 7.0, This screenplay, while possessing a captivating premise and strong character development, suffers from structural and pacing issues that hinder its overall narrative impact. The chaotic, often episodic nature of the storytelling diminishes the narrative drive and undermines the potential for dramatic tension. Refinement of the structure and pacing is crucial for achieving a more cohesive and impactful narrative. See More
Theme: 8.6, The screenplay 'Wolf of Wall Street' tackles themes of ambition, greed, excess, and the pursuit of the American Dream. It effectively portrays the intoxicating allure of wealth and power, the destructive consequences of unchecked ambition, and the ethical compromises individuals make in the pursuit of success. However, while the film's thematic exploration is engaging, the screenplay could benefit from more nuanced portrayal of redemption and a deeper exploration of the psychological impact of Jordan Belfort's actions. See More
Visual Impact: 7.2, The screenplay effectively utilizes visual imagery to capture the hedonistic and chaotic world of Wall Street in the 1990s. The descriptions are vivid and convey a strong sense of the characters' personalities and lifestyles. However, the screenplay could benefit from greater visual variety and deeper exploration of symbolic elements to enhance its visual storytelling impact. See More
Emotional Impact: 6.5, The screenplay effectively captures the wild and chaotic energy of Wall Street's high-stakes environment, generating excitement and intrigue. However, while it showcases Jordan Belfort's reckless rise and fall, it struggles to deeply engage the audience emotionally beyond superficial excitement. Deepening character motivations, exploring internal conflicts, and adding emotional nuances to relationships can significantly enhance the emotional impact. See More
Conflict: 8.0, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes, but there's room for deepening both to further elevate the narrative tension and audience engagement. The central conflict of Jordan's pursuit of wealth and his reckless disregard for the law is clearly established, but the stakes could be raised by exploring the emotional impact of his choices on those closest to him. The story features several compelling moments of tension, particularly during confrontations and financial scandals, yet exploring the consequences of his actions on a deeper level, especially for those he professes to care for, could significantly amplify the stakes and create a more emotionally resonant narrative. See More
Originality: 6.8, The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in originality with its focus on the chaotic and reckless world of Wall Street. The narrative excels at capturing the excessiveness and absurdity of the characters' lives, creating a darkly comedic tone that distinguishes it from other works in the genre. The screenplay's creativity shines through in its unconventional characters, particularly Jordan and Naomi, whose complex personalities and nuanced relationship add layers of intrigue to the story. However, the screenplay could benefit from further exploration of thematic depth and a more innovative narrative structure to elevate its creative potential. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
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Character Jordan Belfort
Description Jordan's behavior shifts from being a charismatic leader to a reckless drug user without sufficient transition. His sudden paranoia and erratic actions in the helicopter scene seem inconsistent with his earlier confident demeanor.
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Character Naomi
Description Naomi's character is introduced as a glamorous and supportive wife, but her abrupt transition to a confrontational and emotionally distant partner later in the story lacks sufficient buildup, making her behavior feel inconsistent.
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Description The rapid escalation of Jordan's wealth and lifestyle lacks a clear explanation of how he transitions from a struggling broker to a millionaire in a short time, creating a logical gap in the narrative.
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Description Jordan's ability to manipulate the stock market and evade legal consequences seems overly simplistic, undermining the complexity of financial crimes and the legal system.
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Description The sudden introduction of the FBI's investigation without prior hints or buildup creates a plot hole, as it feels abrupt and lacks foreshadowing, making it hard to believe that Jordan would not have anticipated legal repercussions.
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Description Jordan's transition from a high-flying broker to a government cooperator is not adequately explained, leaving a gap in understanding how he shifts from evading capture to willingly providing information.
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Description Some of Jordan's motivational speeches feel overly scripted and lack the natural flow of conversation, making them less authentic to his character as a street-smart broker.
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Description Naomi's dialogue during the confrontation about their relationship feels forced and lacks the emotional depth that would be expected in such a high-stakes situation.
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Element Jordan's drug use
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Suggestion The repeated emphasis on Jordan's drug use could be streamlined to avoid redundancy and maintain narrative momentum. Focus on key moments rather than multiple instances. -
Element Motivational speeches
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Suggestion Jordan's motivational speeches could be consolidated to enhance their impact, rather than having multiple similar speeches throughout the script.
Jordan - Score: 86/100
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Naomi - Score: 77/100
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Donnie - Score: 75/100
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Identified Themes
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The American Dream and its Corruption
80%
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Jordan Belfort's rise from a middle-class upbringing to a life of excessive wealth and luxury is portrayed as a realization of the American Dream, but his pursuit of wealth leads to unethical and illegal practices, exposing the dark side of the American Dream.
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This theme explores the allure and dangers of achieving material success at any cost. It highlights how the pursuit of wealth can lead to moral compromises and ultimately result in a downfall. The screenplay suggests that true success is not solely defined by material possessions but also by personal integrity and moral values. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening The American Dream and its Corruption
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Greed and Its Consequences
70%
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Jordan's relentless pursuit of wealth and his obsession with money drive him to commit fraud and engage in immoral activities. His insatiable greed ultimately leads to his downfall, exposing the destructive nature of unchecked ambition.
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This theme delves into the negative impact of greed on individuals and society. It shows how the pursuit of wealth can consume individuals, leading to unethical behavior and ultimately causing personal and professional ruin. The screenplay cautions against the dangers of prioritizing material gain over ethical principles. | ||||||||||||
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Addiction and its Impact on Relationships
60%
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Jordan's addiction to drugs, gambling, and sex affects his relationships, causing strain in his marriage and ultimately leading to his downfall. The screenplay highlights the devastating consequences of addiction on personal lives and relationships.
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This theme explores the complexities of addiction and its impact on interpersonal connections. It shows how addictive behaviors can lead to self-destruction, erode trust, and damage relationships. The screenplay also suggests that addiction can be a vicious cycle that is difficult to break free from. | ||||||||||||
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The Power of Persuasion and Manipulation
50%
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Jordan's success in the stock market is largely attributed to his ability to persuade and manipulate people. He uses charisma, confidence, and unethical tactics to convince investors to buy worthless stocks, highlighting the dark side of salesmanship.
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This theme examines the art of persuasion and its potential for both good and evil. The screenplay demonstrates how persuasive techniques can be used to influence and manipulate others, often for personal gain. It raises questions about the ethics of salesmanship and the importance of responsible communication. | ||||||||||||
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The Price of Success
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Jordan's pursuit of success comes at a high cost, leading to the loss of his marriage, his friends, and his freedom. The screenplay highlights the sacrifices and compromises often associated with achieving success, especially in a competitive field like Wall Street.
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This theme explores the complexities of defining success and the sacrifices that may be required to achieve it. It suggests that success can come at a cost, often requiring individuals to compromise their values and personal lives. The screenplay ultimately challenges the notion that material wealth equates to happiness and fulfillment. | ||||||||||||
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Loyalty and Betrayal
30%
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Jordan's relationships with his friends and associates are tested as he faces legal troubles. Some remain loyal, while others betray him for their own benefit. The screenplay explores the complexities of loyalty and the ways in which trust can be broken.
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This theme examines the importance of loyalty and the fragility of trust in personal and professional relationships. It shows how betrayal can arise from various motivations, such as self-preservation, greed, or personal vendettas. The screenplay ultimately highlights the emotional consequences of broken trust and the difficulty of rebuilding relationships after betrayal. | ||||||||||||
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The Justice System and its Imperfections
20%
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The screenplay depicts the complex workings of the legal system, highlighting its imperfections and the influence of money and power. Jordan's ability to evade justice for a period of time is a testament to the loopholes and corruption that can exist within the system.
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This theme explores the complexities of the justice system and the challenges of achieving true accountability. The screenplay shows how money and influence can distort the legal process and undermine the pursuit of justice. It also raises questions about the effectiveness of law enforcement in holding powerful individuals accountable for their actions. | ||||||||||||
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
| Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
| John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
| What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
| Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
| Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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| internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals evolve from a desire for identity and success, transitioning into a need for validation, control, and ultimately a reckoning with his moral values as he grapples with the consequences of his actions. Initially, Jordan seeks financial success and recognition, but as his lifestyle spirals into chaos, he wrestles with his sense of identity amidst addiction and infidelity. |
| External Goals | The protagonist's external goals evolve from achieving wealth and a lavish lifestyle to navigating legal troubles and the need to preserve his reputation. As he rises in the financial world, his focus shifts from mere success to maintaining visible control and avoiding the legal ramifications of his behaviors. |
| Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict centers on the pursuit of material wealth and success at any cost versus traditional values of hard work and ethics. This conflict intertwines with Jordan's journey as he justifies his increasingly unethical choices through his desire for power and validation, challenging his moral compass and leading to his ultimate downfall. |
Character Development Contribution: The evolution of Jordan's internal and external goals reflects his transformation from an ambitious young broker to a morally conflicted individual grappling with the consequences of his choices. His journey reveals deeper vulnerabilities, leading to moments of self-realization, guilt, and ultimately a need for redemption.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The alignment and conflict of Jordan's goals propel the narrative forward, framing his rise and fall as a cautionary tale about excess and ambition. Each goal achieved builds tension and stakes that contribute to a dynamic narrative arc, culminating in a dramatic confrontation with the law and his own morality.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The interplay between Jordan's goals and the philosophical conflicts enriches the screenplay's thematic depth. It explores the moral ambiguities of ambition, the dichotomy of appearance versus reality, and the dire consequences of unchecked greed, prompting audiences to reflect on the nature of success and its impact on personal relationships and integrity.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
| Site | Description |
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| Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
| Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
| Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
| Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
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| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
| 1 - The Wild Jungle of Wealth | Humorous, Sarcastic, Satirical | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 2 - The Thrill of Excess | Dark, Hedonistic, Paranoid, Confident | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 3 - The Thrill of the Trading Floor | Manic, Sarcastic, Excited | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 4 - The Allure of Wall Street | Intense, Cynical, Dark | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 5 - From Struggles to Success | Intense, Ambitious, Confident | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 6 - The Birth of a Partnership | Intense, Dark, Cynical | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 7 - Ambition and Doubt | Cynical, Sarcastic, Reflective | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 8 - The Art of Manipulation | Intense, Manipulative, Persuasive | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 9 - The Art of Persuasion | Intense, Manipulative, Confident | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 10 - Celebration of Excess | Outrageous, Sensational, Irreverent | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 11 - Chaos and Consequences at Stratton Oakmont | Dark, Humorous, Satirical | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 12 - Dwarfs and Debt | Sarcastic, Cynical, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 13 - Rallying the Brokers | Celebratory, Confident, Humorous | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 14 - Desire Amidst Chaos | Humorous, Sarcastic, Seductive | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 15 - Temptation in the City | Romantic, Seductive, Tense | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 16 - Beneath the Surface | Dramatic, Intense, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 17 - Betrayal in the City | Intense, Violent, Confrontational, Dark | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 18 - Chaos in the Bullpen | Humorous, Dramatic, Sarcastic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 19 - Waves of Celebration and Conflict | Humorous, Dramatic, Romantic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 20 - Confrontation of Betrayal | Tense, Emotional, Confrontational | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 21 - Seduction and Surveillance | Seductive, Tense, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 22 - A Fishy Display of Dominance | Chaotic, Humorous, Confrontational | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 23 - From Heckling to Hustle: The Madden Stock Rally | Motivational, Intense, Humorous | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 24 - High Stakes and Legal Shadows | Intense, Suspenseful, Confrontational, Serious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 25 - The Yacht Encounter | Confrontational, Sarcastic, Intense, Humorous | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 26 - Chaos in Transit | Humorous, Chaotic, Intense | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 27 - Secrets and Strategies in Saurel's Office | Tense, Suspenseful, Confrontational, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 28 - Flirtation and Illicit Plans | Tense, Conflicted, Secretive, Intimate | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 29 - Cash Conflicts at the Beach House | Dark, Humorous, Tense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 30 - Money and Mayhem | Tense, Humorous, Chaotic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 31 - Urgent Call in the Basement | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 32 - Descent into Chaos | Intense, Suspenseful, Chaotic, Desperate | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 33 - Frantic Rescue | Frantic, Chaotic, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 34 - Crossroads of Recklessness | Intense, Tense, Reflective | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 35 - The Show Goes On | Motivational, Reflective, Celebratory | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 36 - Legal Troubles and Personal Tragedies | Chaotic, Intense, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 37 - Inheritance on the Horizon | Tense, Frantic, Desperate, Sarcastic | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 38 - Stormy Descent | Tense, Chaotic, Intense, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 39 - Ambition Over Dinner | Serious, Reflective, Informative | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 40 - Legal Turmoil and Betrayal | Dramatic, Intense, Dark, Humorous | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 41 - Beneath the Surface | Tense, Reflective, Supportive | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 42 - Divided by Optimism | Serious, Intense, Emotional | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 43 - Shattered Bonds | Intense, Emotional, Confrontational | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 44 - Desperate Escape | Tense, Chaotic, Intense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 45 - The Fall of Jordan Belfort | Tense, Dramatic, Reflective | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 46 - The Pen Challenge | Motivational, Reflective, Serious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
Tip: Click on criteria in the top row for detailed summaries.
Scene Strengths
- Compelling character development
- Engaging dialogue
- Intense atmosphere
- Sharp dialogue
- Emotional depth
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited emotional depth
- Excessive focus on excess and luxury
- Lack of external conflict
- Some cliched elements
- Some characters may lack depth
Suggestions
- Focus on creating more unique and complex characters to avoid clichés
- Explore external conflict and action to balance out internal struggles
- Reduce focus on excess and luxury to allow for deeper exploration of themes and characters
- Utilize dialogue to further character development and add emotional impact
- Consider the potential impact of graphic drug use and violence on audiences
Scene 1 - The Wild Jungle of Wealth
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 2 - The Thrill of Excess
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 3 - The Thrill of the Trading Floor
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 4 - The Allure of Wall Street
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 5 - From Struggles to Success
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 6 - The Birth of a Partnership
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 7 - Ambition and Doubt
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 8 - The Art of Manipulation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 9 - The Art of Persuasion
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 10 - Celebration of Excess
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 11 - Chaos and Consequences at Stratton Oakmont
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 12 - Dwarfs and Debt
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 13 - Rallying the Brokers
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 14 - Desire Amidst Chaos
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 15 - Temptation in the City
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 16 - Beneath the Surface
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 17 - Betrayal in the City
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 18 - Chaos in the Bullpen
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 19 - Waves of Celebration and Conflict
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 20 - Confrontation of Betrayal
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 21 - Seduction and Surveillance
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 22 - A Fishy Display of Dominance
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 23 - From Heckling to Hustle: The Madden Stock Rally
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 24 - High Stakes and Legal Shadows
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 25 - The Yacht Encounter
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 26 - Chaos in Transit
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 27 - Secrets and Strategies in Saurel's Office
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 28 - Flirtation and Illicit Plans
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 29 - Cash Conflicts at the Beach House
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 30 - Money and Mayhem
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 31 - Urgent Call in the Basement
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 32 - Descent into Chaos
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 33 - Frantic Rescue
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 34 - Crossroads of Recklessness
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 35 - The Show Goes On
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 36 - Legal Troubles and Personal Tragedies
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 37 - Inheritance on the Horizon
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 38 - Stormy Descent
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 39 - Ambition Over Dinner
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 40 - Legal Turmoil and Betrayal
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 41 - Beneath the Surface
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 42 - Divided by Optimism
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 43 - Shattered Bonds
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 44 - Desperate Escape
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 45 - The Fall of Jordan Belfort
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 46 - The Pen Challenge
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
- Physical environment: The screenplay portrays a world of stark contrasts. On one hand, there are opulent settings like luxurious mansions, yachts, penthouse apartments, and high-end restaurants, showcasing the lavish lifestyles of the wealthy elite. On the other hand, gritty and chaotic settings like crowded stockbroker offices, a strip mall parking lot, and a minimum security prison illustrate the less glamorous side of this world. These contrasting environments contribute to the atmosphere of both excess and desperation, highlighting the pursuit of wealth and the potential consequences of unchecked ambition.
- Culture: The dominant culture is one of extreme materialism, where success is measured by wealth, status, and the ability to indulge in extravagant lifestyles. This culture is characterized by a relentless pursuit of money, fueled by greed, ambition, and a disregard for ethical boundaries. The screenplay explores the dark side of this culture, revealing the moral decay, corruption, and the toxic impact it has on individuals and relationships. Elements like excessive drug use, rampant infidelity, and a constant pursuit of pleasure contribute to the atmosphere of decadence and moral ambiguity.
- Society: The societal structure is hierarchical, with a clear divide between the wealthy elite and the rest of society. The screenplay explores the power dynamics and the influence that wealth and privilege wield. It reveals the corrupting power of money, showcasing how individuals become entangled in illegal activities and compromise their morals in the pursuit of financial success. The screenplay highlights the disparity in opportunities and the societal consequences of unchecked greed, emphasizing the vulnerability of those who lack wealth and influence.
- Technology: The screenplay takes place in the late 1980s and early 1990s, reflecting the technological advancements of that era. The use of phones, computers, and gadgets is prominent, highlighting the impact of technology on communication, finance, and surveillance. However, the screenplay's focus remains on human interactions and motivations, using technology as a tool to further the narrative rather than as a central theme. The use of bugging devices, wiretapping, and hidden cameras further emphasizes the themes of deception, betrayal, and the constant threat of surveillance within this world.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology shape the characters' experiences and actions in profound ways. The opulent surroundings fuel their desires, while the cutthroat culture pushes them to extremes. The hierarchical societal structures create opportunities and limitations based on wealth and power, influencing their choices and actions. The technological advancements both enable and complicate their endeavors, shaping their interactions and adding elements of risk and uncertainty to their lives.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute significantly to the narrative of the screenplay, driving the plot and shaping the characters' journeys. The chaotic environment of the brokerage firm, the relentless pursuit of wealth, and the high stakes involved in financial transactions create a sense of constant tension and urgency. The contrasting environments and the cultural elements fuel the characters' motivations, leading to moral dilemmas, betrayals, and ultimately, their downfall.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring the corrosive nature of greed, the dangers of unchecked ambition, and the consequences of pursuing wealth at all costs. The screenplay reveals the dark side of financial success, showcasing the moral decay, societal imbalances, and personal sacrifices that can result from a relentless pursuit of wealth. The contrast between the opulent lifestyles and the harsh realities of the criminal underworld adds layers of complexity to the themes of ambition, redemption, and the fragility of human nature.
| Voice Analysis | |
|---|---|
| Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a darkly humorous and cynical tone, a fast-paced narrative, sharp and witty dialogue, and a focus on the excesses and moral ambiguity of the financial world. |
| Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a compelling and engaging atmosphere that blends humor, drama, and social critique. The fast-paced dialogue and vivid imagery transport the audience into the chaotic world of stockbroking, highlighting the characters' ambition, greed, and recklessness. The darkly humorous tone adds a layer of satire to the story, exposing the absurdity of their actions and the corrosive effects of wealth and power. The writer's voice also reveals the internal struggles and moral dilemmas of the characters, particularly Jordan Belfort, as he grapples with guilt, ambition, and the consequences of his choices. |
| Best Representation Scene | 1 - The Wild Jungle of Wealth |
| Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representation of the author's voice because it effectively establishes the tone, style, and themes of the screenplay. It blends fast-paced dialogue, vivid descriptions of excess and decadence, and a darkly humorous tone that perfectly encapsulates the characters' ambition, greed, and recklessness. The scene also foreshadows the moral ambiguity and internal conflicts that will drive the story forward. It provides a glimpse into the chaotic and seductive world of Wall Street, showcasing the writer's ability to create a compelling and engaging narrative. |
Style and Similarities
The screenplay's writing style is characterized by sharp dialogue, intense character interactions, and a focus on moral ambiguity and power dynamics. It leans heavily towards fast-paced storytelling, often utilizing high-stakes situations and conflict to drive the narrative.
Style Similarities:
| Writer | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Martin Scorsese | Scorsese's influence is prevalent throughout, particularly in the use of dark humor, gritty realism, and the exploration of morally complex characters. His style is evident in scenes depicting excess, corruption, and the underbelly of society. |
| Aaron Sorkin | Sorkin's signature sharp dialogue and fast-paced storytelling are also prominent. His influence is most evident in scenes featuring witty banter, complex characters, and high-stakes business dealings or political intrigue. |
| Quentin Tarantino | Tarantino's influence is noticeable in scenes with provocative dialogue, unconventional storytelling, and a willingness to explore violence and dark themes. His style contributes to the screenplay's boldness and memorability. |
| David Mamet | Mamet's influence is present in scenes with intense dialogue, confrontational exchanges, and a focus on power struggles. His style adds a layer of realism and depth to the screenplay's character interactions. |
Other Similarities: The screenplay likely blends elements from these various screenwriters, creating a dynamic and engaging narrative. The combination of their distinct styles allows for a rich exploration of characters, themes, and conflict, resulting in a screenplay that is both entertaining and thought-provoking.
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
| Pattern | Explanation |
|---|---|
| High Stakes Scenes Drive Emotional Impact | Scenes with a high 'High Stakes' score tend to have a higher 'Emotional Impact' score. This suggests that your screenplay uses tension and risk to effectively evoke emotion in the reader. |
| Intense Scenes Drive Character Change | Scenes with an 'Intense' tone often have a higher 'Character Changes' score. This indicates that your intense scenes are crucial moments of growth and development for your characters. Consider if you can further amplify these changes by emphasizing the internal struggles of your characters in these scenes. |
| Humor as a Release Valve | Humor often follows scenes with high emotional impact, suggesting you use humor as a means to break tension and provide relief for the reader. This is a common and effective technique, but consider if the humor could sometimes be integrated more organically into the emotional beats, rather than acting solely as a break. |
| Strong Concept Drives Plot and Characters | The 'Concept' score consistently aligns with the 'Plot' and 'Characters' scores. This indicates that your story's core concept is well-defined and serves as a strong foundation for both the plot and character development. This is a good sign of a well-structured screenplay. |
| Dialogue is Key to Character Growth | While not as strong as other correlations, there's a slight tendency for 'Dialogue' scores to increase in scenes where 'Character Changes' are high. This suggests that your characters are evolving through their interactions with each other, which is a positive sign of well-developed dialogue. Consider if you can further emphasize this by adding more dynamic dialogue exchanges in key character development scenes. |
| Confrontational Scenes are Highly Effective | Scenes with a 'Confrontational' tone are often highly rated for both 'Conflict' and 'Emotional Impact'. This indicates that you are skillfully utilizing conflict to drive the story forward and engage the reader. Keep experimenting with confrontational scenes to further intensify emotional impact and heighten dramatic tension. |
| Character Changes are Not Linear | The 'Character Changes' score is not directly correlated with scene number. This is a good sign, suggesting your characters are not simply evolving in a linear fashion, but rather undergoing moments of change throughout the story, creating a more nuanced and believable character arc. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in creating engaging scenes, particularly in crafting sharp dialogue and dynamic character interactions. The writer excels at capturing the high-stakes world of finance, highlighting moral ambiguity and complex relationships. The writing style often leans towards a gritty, cynical tone, particularly evident in the dialogue. However, while showcasing a talent for tension and conflict, the scenes sometimes lack the depth of emotional resonance that could elevate them further.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
| Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Book | 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder | This book provides valuable insights into structuring scenes, crafting compelling characters, and creating engaging narratives, which could help the writer improve pacing, structure, and character development. |
| Screenplay | 'Glengarry Glen Ross' by David Mamet | This screenplay is a masterclass in sharp dialogue and intense character interactions within a high-stakes setting, relevant to the writer's strengths and the overall theme of the screenplay. Studying Mamet's work can help refine dialogue, elevate character interactions, and enhance the sense of tension and urgency in the scenes. |
| Video | Watch interviews with screenwriters discussing their writing process and character development, focusing on writers known for strong emotional storytelling. | Gaining insights into how experienced screenwriters develop characters and create emotional depth in their narratives can provide valuable inspiration and new techniques to the writer. |
| Exercise | Practice writing scenes with a focus on character backstories and motivations, exploring how these elements inform their current actions and relationships.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will help the writer delve deeper into the characters' inner lives and motivations, creating more complex and relatable characters. |
| Exercise | Practice writing dialogue-driven scenes that focus on subtext and unspoken emotions, allowing the characters' dialogue to reveal their true feelings and intentions.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will help the writer develop more nuanced dialogue that resonates on an emotional level, creating a deeper connection between the characters and the audience. |
| Exercise | Practice writing scenes that follow a specific structure, ensuring each scene has a clear setup, conflict, and payoff, contributing directly to the overall narrative.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will help the writer refine their scene structure, ensuring that every element of a scene serves a purpose and contributes to the story's progression. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|---|---|
| Rise and Fall | Jordan Belfort's journey from a middle-class upbringing to becoming a wealthy stockbroker, followed by his eventual downfall due to illegal activities. | This trope involves a character's ascent to success followed by a dramatic decline, often due to their own flaws or moral failings. An example is in 'The Wolf of Wall Street' itself, where Jordan's rise is marked by excess and greed, leading to his legal troubles. Another example is in 'Scarface', where Tony Montana rises to power only to fall due to his violent lifestyle. |
| Excessive Lifestyle | Jordan's extravagant lifestyle is showcased through his possessions, parties, and drug use. | This trope highlights characters living lavishly, often leading to their downfall. In 'The Great Gatsby', Jay Gatsby's opulent parties symbolize his wealth but also his emptiness. Similarly, in 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's lifestyle reflects his moral decay. |
| The Mentor | Mark Hanna serves as a mentor to Jordan, introducing him to the high-stakes world of stock trading. | The mentor trope involves a character who guides the protagonist, often leading them down a path of success or failure. In 'The Karate Kid', Mr. Miyagi teaches Daniel not just martial arts but life lessons. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Hanna's mentorship leads Jordan into a morally questionable world. |
| The Antihero | Jordan Belfort is portrayed as a charismatic yet morally ambiguous character. | The antihero is a protagonist who lacks conventional heroic qualities, often engaging in morally questionable actions. An example is Walter White in 'Breaking Bad', who transforms from a sympathetic character to a ruthless drug lord. Jordan embodies this trope as he captivates audiences while engaging in illegal activities. |
| Party Scene | The screenplay features numerous chaotic party scenes filled with drugs, alcohol, and debauchery. | Party scenes often serve to highlight characters' hedonistic lifestyles and can lead to pivotal plot developments. In 'The Hangover', the wild party leads to unexpected consequences for the characters. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', these scenes emphasize the excess and chaos of Jordan's life. |
| The Love Triangle | Jordan's relationships with Naomi and Teresa create tension and conflict. | A love triangle involves three characters where romantic interests conflict, often leading to drama. In 'Twilight', Bella is torn between Edward and Jacob. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's infidelity creates tension between his wife and mistress. |
| The Fall from Grace | Jordan's illegal activities lead to his arrest and downfall. | This trope depicts a character's loss of status or respect due to their actions. In 'The Shawshank Redemption', Andy Dufresne's fall from grace leads to his imprisonment. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's rise is followed by a dramatic fall due to his unethical behavior. |
| The Drug-Fueled Rampage | Jordan's drug use leads to reckless behavior and chaotic situations. | This trope involves characters engaging in wild, often destructive behavior under the influence of drugs. In 'Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas', the protagonists' drug use leads to surreal and chaotic experiences. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's drug-fueled escapades highlight his moral decline. |
| The Big Speech | Jordan delivers motivational speeches to inspire his brokers and maintain their loyalty. | The big speech trope involves a character delivering an inspiring or persuasive speech that rallies others. In 'Braveheart', William Wallace's speech motivates his troops to fight for freedom. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's speeches serve to manipulate and energize his brokers. |
| The Corrupt System | The screenplay highlights the corrupt practices within the financial industry. | This trope critiques societal or institutional corruption, often showcasing characters who exploit the system. In 'The Godfather', the mafia operates outside the law, revealing systemic corruption. In 'The Wolf of Wall Street', Jordan's actions expose the moral decay within Wall Street. |
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 2 | Jordan: Money is the oxygen of capitalism and I wanna breathe more than any other human being alive. |
| 1 | Jordan: My name is Jordan Belfort. No, not him, me. I’m a former member of the middle class raised by two accountants in a tiny apartment in Bayside, Queens. |
| 35 | Jordan: THE SHOW GOES ON!! |
| 13 | Jordan Belfort: If you wanna party with the boys, you gotta wake up with the men. |
| 46 | Jordan: Sell me this pen. |
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