LA confidential - draft

The scene is moderately original; while the setting of 1950s Los Angeles has been covered in other films, the writer's emphasis on crime and corruption is unique. The writer's use of montaging and voice-over narration creates a sense of tone and visual texture that helps to set the film apart from other crime dramas.

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is not clearly established.

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to secure Los Angeles's future through the development of infrastructure such as freeway systems to attract more people to the city and to promote a safe and prosperous environment. He faces the challenge of doing this while also battling organized crime that threatens to destroy the city's reputation.

The philosophical conflict in this scene is the tension between the goal of presenting Los Angeles as a place of hope and prosperity and the reality of the crime and corruption that threatens to undermine that image. It challenges the protagonist's belief that he can change the city and improve the lives of its citizens.

This scene is engaging because it establishes the film's setting and themes in a memorable and stylized way that is consistent throughout the rest of the film. The rapid-fire editing and use of different characters and settings helps to create a sense of texture and complexity that keeps the viewer engaged.

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it sets a quick pace that propels the viewer through the different settings and characters featured in the scene. The rapid montage and use of voice-over narration adds to the pacing of the scene and the feeling of intricacy.

The formatting of this scene follows the expected pattern for a drama film; the use of character dialogue and voice-over helps to establish the different characters, settings, and conflicts that will be central to the rest of the film.

The structure of this scene follows the expected pattern for a drama film; it establishes the film's setting and themes through a series of different vignettes that set the stage for the rest of the film.

The scene is not particularly original in terms of its content, as it depicts a classic showdown between a cop and a criminal. However, the writer's voice and style are highly original, adding new depth and complexity to the familiar tropes of the genre. The characters' actions and dialogue feel authentic and true to life, reinforcing the scene's themes of violence and power.

Bud White's internal goal is to protect women from abusive men. This reflects his deep desire to make up for his own history of violence against women and his fear of causing harm to them.

Bud White's external goal is to arrest a man who is committing domestic violence.

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the issue of violence and the extent to which it is necessary or justified for men like Bud White to use it to protect women. This conflict challenges Bud's beliefs about violence and his role as a cop.

This scene is engaging because it uses a combination of action, dialogue, and dark humour to create a sense of tension and danger. The characters are complex and well-developed, and their interactions feel authentic and true to life.

The pacing of the scene is fast and frenetic, using a combination of quick cuts and terse action to create a sense of urgency and tension. This contributes to the scene's effectiveness by keeping the audience engaged and invested in the outcome.

The formatting of the scene follows the expected format for its genre, using standard industry conventions to clearly communicate information about character, action, and dialogue.

The structure of the scene follows the expected format for its genre, using a combination of dialogue and descriptive action to build tension and reveal character. It also uses a clear sequence of events to move the plot forward.

The scene presents a fresh approach to depicting Hollywood in the 1950s by focusing on the cost of fame and the moral challenges faced by law enforcement officers in this environment. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue adds to the originality of the scene.

Jack Vincennes desires to maintain his reputation as a celebrity crime-stopper and also use his detective work to make some extra cash. This reflects his desire for fame and fortune at the expense of his moral compass.

Jack's external goal in this scene is to arrest Matt Reynolds for possession of marijuana. This goal reflects the challenges Jack is facing as a detective who must balance his desire for fame and his duties as a law enforcement officer.

The philosophical conflict in this scene is the tension between morality and the desire for fame and fortune. This challenge Jack's values, beliefs, and worldview.

This scene is engaging because of the witty and fast-paced dialogue, as well as the tension between Jack's desire for fame and his duty as a detective.

The pacing of the scene is effective because it moves quickly and efficiently through the various actions and dialogue, creating tension and building towards the resolution of the external conflict.

The formatting of the scene adheres to the expected format for a screenplay, with clear scene headings, action descriptions, and dialogue formatting.

The scene follows the expected structure for a detective/crime drama genre, with a clear setup, conflict, and resolution.

This scene is fairly original in its portrayal of the violence and danger that lurks beneath the surface of Hollywood glamour. The characters' actions and dialogue ring true to the time period and location, and the scenes highlight complex moral dilemmas.

Bud White's internal goal in this scene is to protect and serve the community, even if it means risking his own safety. His actions throughout the scene reflect his desire to uphold the law and protect the victims of violence.

Bud White's external goal in this scene is to investigate the black-eyed woman in the Cadillac, whom he suspects may be a victim of domestic violence. He also aims to confiscate Turner Meeks's illegal firearm.

The philosophical conflict in this scene is between Bud's duty as a police officer and the criminal underworld that is protected by power and money. Bud struggles to reconcile these opposing forces as he interacts with Lynn Bracken and Pierce Patchett, who represent the opposite ends of this spectrum.

This scene is engaging because of the tension that builds between the characters and the danger that lurks just beneath their superficial interactions. The subtle dialogue and nuanced character reactions add to the intrigue.

The pacing of the scene is deliberate and allows for more subtle character development than some other similar scenes. The technical writing proficiency is strong and the dialogue and action flow smoothly.

The formatting of the scene is clear and easy to follow, with specific details about character movements and reactions. The use of subheadings to indicate location and time of day helps orient the reader.

The structure of the scene follows a relatively standard format for its genre, with clear establishing shots, dialogue, and action. However, the pacing is slower than in some other similar scenes, allowing for more subtle character development.

The scene presents a fresh take on the classic mentor-mentee relationship, exploring the dynamics of power and corruption in a police department.

Ed Exley’s internal goal is to become a detective and follow in his father’s footsteps, while also upholding his own moral code.

Ed Exley's external goal is to navigate his relationship with Dudley Smith in the hopes of achieving his dream of becoming a detective.

The philosophical conflict in this scene is the compromise of morals for the greater good. Dudley Smith encourages Ed to do so, while Ed wants to uphold his morals while still achieving his goals.

This scene is engaging because of the snappy, tension-filled dialogue between Exley and Smith, and the tension of the internal philosophical conflict Ed is facing.

The fast-paced dialogue and quick scene changes help to maintain the tension and sustain engagement with viewers/readers.

The scene follows the expected formatting for its genre, using standard scene headers and character names.

The scene follows the expected structure for its genre by presenting dialogue-driven scenes that reveal character and move the plot forward.

The scene follows familiar police procedural tropes but adds a unique twist with the activity of police officers engaging in illegal activity. The authenticity of the dialogue and actions of the characters adds to the originality of the scene.

There is no clear internal goal for the protagonist in this scene.

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to trace a phone number and gain its location. This goal reflects the immediate challenge he is facing, which is gathering information for his case.

There is no clear philosophical conflict in this scene.

The scene is engaging due to the tension and violence present and the fast-paced dialogue between characters.

The pacing of the scene is effective in showcasing the fast-paced and violent nature of police work and corruption.

The scene follows the expected formatting for its genre with clear scene headings and action lines.

The structure of the scene is well-written and follows the expected structure for its genre.

This scene has a high level of originality, with fresh situations emerging as a result of reliable attention to detail in character dialogue and actions.

Bud White's internal goal is to maintain his honor and loyalty towards his partner and the police force. He is trying to avoid turning against his partner and colleagues.

Bud White's external goal is to maintain his reputation and position as a police officer. He is fighting to keep his badge and gun and avoid suspension and dismissal.

There is a philosophical conflict revolving around the question of loyalty towards colleagues versus loyalty towards doing the right thing.

This scene is engaging because it masterfully captures a tense and high-stakes meeting to extract information from an unwilling participant.

The pacing of the scene is masterful, with the tension and suspense of the conversation maintaining a steady tempo that keeps the audience engaged throughout the scene.

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre, with clear direction and descriptions that help set the tone and keep the reader engaged in the world created.

This scene follows a structured format for its genre, efficiently and effectively establishing conflicts and plot developments that will be critical to the narrative.

While the situation of a witness being pressured is not necessarily unique, the writer's approach to the power dynamics and dialogue is fresh and effective. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue adds to the originality of the scene.

Exley's internal goal is to maintain his integrity and duty as a witness, even when being pressured and threatened by Jack. This reflects his desire to be a moral and upstanding citizen, as well as his fear of being ostracized by his peers for snitching.

Exley's external goal is to testify as a witness in the upcoming trial. This reflects the immediate circumstances and challenges he's facing, as well as his duty as a police officer to bring justice to criminals.

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the tension between staying true to one's moral code and duty as a witness, versus succumbing to pressure and protecting oneself. This challenges Exley's beliefs and values as a police officer, as well as his desire to be respected and trusted by his colleagues.

This scene is engaging because it effectively communicates the tension and stakes of the situation through efficient and purposeful dialogue and clear power dynamics between the characters.

The pacing of the scene is effective in building tension and conveying the stakes of the situation, while also providing necessary exposition and character motivation.

The formatting of the scene follows the expected format for its genre, effectively conveying character actions and dialogue.

The structure of the scene follows the expected structure for its genre, with a clear beginning, middle, and end that effectively communicates the tension and stakes of the situation.

The scene is fairly typical of the film noir genre, with its emphasis on organized crime and police corruption. However, the writer's unique voice and skilled direction elevate the scene's authenticity and make it feel fresh.

Bud's internal goal is to understand his place in the criminal underworld and his loyalty to his partner. He wants to know how to advance his career and whether he can trust Dudley Smith.

Bud's external goal is to find out what Dudley Smith wants him to do for him and how it will impact his future career as a detective.

The conflict is between Bud's loyalty to his partner and his ambition to advance his career. He grapples with the idea of betraying Stensland to protect himself.

This scene is engaging because it establishes a sense of tension and danger through its gritty dialogue and taut direction. The characters' motivations and conflicts are well established, and the action moves quickly.

The pacing of the scene is effective because it moves quickly and establishes the key conflicts and character motivations in a short amount of time. The quick cuts and close-ups add to the sense of urgency and danger in the scene.

The scene follows standard formatting practices for its genre. The location is established with an INT/EXT slugline, and the dialogue is formatted with character names in all caps.

The scene follows the expected structure for its genre. It establishes the seedy setting, introduces characters with ulterior motives, and sets up the conflict between Bud and Dudley.

The scene has a level of originality in its approach to gritty crime fiction. The characters' actions and dialogue feel authentic to their particular roles and challenges.

There are different protagonists throughout the scene, and their internal goals vary. Brett Chase's internal goal is to maintain his image as a protector of justice and aid his friend in finding a romantic partner. Bud White's internal goal is to bring justice to domestic abusers. Mickey Cohen's internal goal is to maintain his power and influence.

Brett Chase's external goal is to maintain his reputation as a protector of justice and to help his friend find a romantic partner. Bud White's external goal is to bring justice to domestic abusers. Mickey Cohen's external goal is to maintain his criminal enterprise and maintain power and influence.

There is a philosophical conflict between the desire for justice and the desire for power and influence. The conflict challenges the protagonists' beliefs and values, forcing them to make difficult decisions.

This scene is engaging because it establishes a gritty and dangerous world, with characters facing difficult moral challenges and dangerous situations.

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness by creating tension and urgency through short scenes and sparse description.

The formatting of the scene follows the expected format for its genre, with clear scene headings and dialogue formatting.

The structure of the scene follows the expected format for its genre, with short scenes and a focus on character dialogue and action rather than exposition.

The level of originality in this scene is moderate. The concept of smut magazines being found at crime scenes is not entirely new, but the character dynamics and the specific setting in Los Angeles add a unique spin to the genre.

Jack Vincennes' internal goal is to redeem himself from his past mistakes and move up in the police department. He wants to work on important cases and not be stuck in Ad Vice. He also has a desire for justice and morality in the face of corruption.

Jack's external goal is to investigate the source of the smut magazines and uncover whether there is a connection to larger crime organizations.

The philosophical conflict in this scene is between justice and corruption. The Vice Captain represents corruption and Jack Vincennes represents justice and morality.

This scene is engaging because of the sharp dialogue, conflict between characters, and the underlying tension of corruption and morality.

The pacing of this scene is effective because it moves quickly and efficiently while still allowing for character development and conflict to be established.

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre of a screenplay, with clear headings, action lines, and dialogue.

The structure of this scene follows the expected structure for its genre of a police procedural. It sets up the problem, introduces characters, and advances the plot in a clear and concise manner.

The scene is fresh in the way it portrays corruption and the battle of good cops against bad cops. The setting in Hollywood and Nite Owl diner is also evocative and adds to the tone of the scene. The dialogue is authentic and true to the characters.

Exley's internal goal is to prove his competence and gain recognition from his seniors in the LAPD. He wants to solve the case and be in control of it, despite Dudley taking over.

Exley's external goal is to investigate the homicides at Nite Owl and solve the case. He wants to find who did the murders and bring them to justice.

The philosophical conflict is between trying to maintain law and order vs. using brutal and unethical means to solve crimes. This conflict challenges Exley's beliefs and values and his understanding of the corruption he faces.

The scene is engaging because of its tense and dramatic events, strong characterizations, and gripping dialogue.

The pacing of the scene is effective in creating tension and suspense, with a gradual build-up and a dramatic climax that pushes the story forward.

The scene follows expected formatting for the genre of a screenplay with clear and concise descriptions and dialogue.

The scene follows expected structure for the genre of a crime thriller with a clear set up, crime event, and investigation. It also follows the typical structure of escalating tension and action.

The level of originality in this scene is moderate. The situations are familiar, such as the interrogation of a gangster, but the tension and drama are created through the characters and their actions. The characters' dialogue is authentic and believable, which adds to the realism of the scene.

Bud White's internal goal in this scene is to find out what happened to his old partner, Dick Stensland. This reflects Bud's loyalty to his fellow officers and his desire to seek justice for him.

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to interrogate the gangster for information about who the shooters are that are killing Mickey Cohen's men.

There is a philosophical conflict evident in this scene between the corrupt police officers who are using violent tactics to get information and the protagonist, Bud White, who is committed to justice and finding out the truth.

This scene is engaging because it creates tension between the characters and the situation. The dialogue is minimalistic and to the point, which adds to the feeling of danger and violence. The twist at the end of the scene also adds to the overall engagement of the audience.

The pacing of the scene is effective because it creates tension and drama through minimalistic dialogue and action. The scene moves quickly and efficiently, which adds to the overall feeling of danger and violence.

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. The scene is well-formatted with clear scene headings, character names, and actions.

The structure of this scene follows the expected structure for its genre. It begins with an establishing shot of the location, then moves into the action of the interrogation. The scene ends with a twist when Flatnose grabs the gun and clicks it, revealing that it was all part of the plan.

Though there is nothing groundbreaking, the scene's authenticity and the character's actions feel genuine. The scene shows a group of detectives working together to solve a crime, which has found its way in many other scripts too. Still, the writer manages to create a sense of intrigue and tension that keeps the reader hooked.

Bud's internal goal is to avenge the death of his partner Dick Stensland, indicating a sense of loyalty, justice, and revenge. He has something big going on and is determined to see this through, even if it means personal sacrifice.

Bud's external goal in this scene is to find a lead to crack the 'Nite Owl Massacre'. He asks the liquor shop owner for the address of Lynn Bracken, the customer he saw at the shop. Though the scene does not show how it can bring him close to the leads; it is essential for his character development.

There is no evident philosophical conflict present in this scene, except for the potential conflict of using excessive force that Exley quotes about the Chief.

The scene is engaging because it manages to create tension, introduce new leads, and set the tone for the investigation. The reader gets to know more about Bud and his intentions, establishing him as a significant character for the rest of the story.

The pacing of the scene is effective because it keeps the readers engaged while providing enough information to move the story forward. The dialogue is crisp and concise, which helps maintain a brisk pace.

The scene follows the standard format for the genre, using scene headings, action, and dialogue. It is easy to follow and serves its purpose.

The scene follows the expected structure of the genre and serves its purpose. It introduces a new lead, sets the tone for the investigation, and moves the story forward.

The scene boasts a high level of originality thanks to its unique setting, characters, and themes. The dialogue is witty, ironic, and revealing, while the scene's overall structure defies expectations. The characters are authentic and multifaceted, with complex motivations and desires.

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to maintain control of the situation, even though he is being questioned by a homicide detective. He wants to protect his business and his clients, but also wants to avoid being implicated in any crimes. This reflects his need for power, control, and reputation.

The protagonist's external goal is to deflect suspicion and distance himself from any potential criminal activity or involvement in the murder of Susan Lefferts. He is trying to protect his reputation and his business.

There is a philosophical conflict between the protagonist's actions and his words. He claims to care about the well-being of the women in his business, but he also objectifies them by using them to fulfill sexual fantasies and cultural expectations. This challenges the protagonist's value system and his perception of himself as a good person.

This scene is engaging because it contains tension, conflict, and reveals important information about the character's world and motivations. The dialogue is witty and revealing, and the setting is visually and thematically compelling.

The scene's pacing is effective, with a clear narrative trajectory and a propulsive sense of action. The dialogue is snappy and moves the plot forward while also revealing information about character motivation and backstory.

The scene is correctly formatted and follows established industry standards for structure, placement, and syntax. The formatting is clear and easy to follow, and the scene's action is described in vivid, cinematic language.

The scene conforms to genre expectations while also subverting them. It is tightly plotted, with a clear goal and conflict, and the dialogue is sharp and propulsive. The scene also succeeds in revealing character motivations and backstory in a natural and organic way.

This scene is not particularly original. It contains standard elements of detective stories, such as the protagonist locating a witness by threatening him. However, the writer's style creates an air of tension and suspense that makes the scene compelling.

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is not evident.

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to ask the Black Boxer if he knows about the three colored guys who like to pop off shotguns and locate one of them, Raymond Coates.

There is no philosophical conflict evident in this scene.

This scene is engaging because of its tension and suspense. The protagonist's search for the murderers has a sense of urgency that propels the story forward.

The pacing of this scene is excellent. It is fast-paced and tense, with short, snappy dialogue that moves the story forward. The scene is not too long or too short, and it is well-written.

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It is well-written and easy to read.

The structure of this scene follows the expected structure for its genre. It has a clear beginning, middle, and end, and it advances the story. It is well-structured.

The scene is original in its portrayal of the film-noir genre, which is evident from the sharp dialogue and the stylistic depiction of the setting. The characters' actions and dialogue are authentic, and the information is revealed gradually, adding depth to the story.

The protagonist's internal goal is to uncover the truth behind the Nite Owl murders. This reflects his desire to find purpose and justice in a corrupt system.

The protagonist's external goal is to gather intel from Lynn Bracken to solve the Nite Owl murders. It reflects the immediate challenge he faces in obtaining information to close the case.

The philosophical conflict revolves around the idea of morality. The protagonist is trying to grapple with the concept of working with those connected to the crime he is trying to solve, where their motivations are primarily driven by self-interest. This challenge is in line with his core beliefs and values.