Deadpool
Executive Summary
Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend
Overview
Genres: Action, Comedy, Crime, Drama, Romance, Thriller, Superhero, Sci-Fi, Horror, Science, Fiction
Setting: Modern day, New York City
Overview: The screenplay received a high rating due to its originality, strong characters, engaging dialogue, and emotional depth. While there are areas for improvement like pacing and emotional complexity, the overall quality is commendable.
Themes: Love and Relationships, Identity, Trauma and Recovery, Superheroism and Responsibility
Conflict and Stakes: John's struggle to clear his name after being falsely accused of a crime, with his family's reputation at stake
Overall Mood: Tense and suspenseful
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 5: Intense and dramatic as John confronts the real culprit
- Scene 10: Emotional and cathartic as John is finally exonerated
Standout Features:
- Twist Ending: Unexpected revelation in the final act that changes everything
- Unique Setting : New York City backdrop adds depth and atmosphere to the story
- Complex Characters : Well-developed characters with layers of depth and internal conflict
Comparable Scripts:
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$20-30 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, fans of drama and legal thrillers
Marketability: It has the potential to attract a wide audience and generate buzz with its gripping storyline and relatable themes.
Unique blend of genres and explores compelling themes with a diverse cast, appealing to a broad audience.
Compelling characters and a gripping storyline, relevant social themes that resonate with viewers.
Profit Potential: High, due to strong appeal to a wide adult audience and potential for award nominations
Scene Level Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Memorable Lines:
- Deadpool: Oh, hello, Deadpool here. You may be wondering whose balls I had to fondle to get my own movie. Rhymes with ‘Polverine.’ Couple’a smooth criminals. (Scene 2)
- Deadpool: So hold onto love tight. Go at Bandhu hard. Get Gita back. Or else... the whole world will taste like Mama June after hot yoga. (Scene 1)
- Deadpool: Some kind of anger can’t be managed. Like the kind where your year-long plan ends with the wrong guy getting dismembered! (Scene 17)
- Ajax: The one thing that never survives this place is a sense of humor. (Scene 18)
- Ajax: Say it. 'Francis.' (Scene 25)
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 8.0, The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a compelling and clear foundation for the narrative. It introduces a unique anti-hero character with a distinctive blend of humor, action, and heart. However, the premise could benefit from further refinement to enhance its originality and emotional depth, making it more captivating and memorable for the audience. See More
Structure: 7.75, The screenplay for 'Deadpool' demonstrates a solid structure and engaging plot that effectively balances action, humor, and character development. However, there are opportunities to refine the pacing and resolve certain plot points to enhance the overall storytelling. See More
Theme: 8.5, The screenplay effectively explores its themes of identity, acceptance, and self-discovery through the compelling journey of its protagonist. The exploration of these themes is well-integrated into the plot and character arcs, providing a strong emotional foundation for the narrative. However, the film could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the theme of self-discovery and a clearer articulation of its central message. See More
Visual Impact: 8.5, The screenplay effectively employs visual imagery to bring Deadpool's world to life. The fight scenes are particularly well-described, with a strong balance of action, humor, and gore. However, some scenes could benefit from more vivid and creative descriptions to enhance their visual impact. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.25, The screenplay has a strong emotional core and effectively elicits emotional responses from its audience. It excels in character relatability and builds strong emotional connections through relatable characters and their struggles. However, there are opportunities to enhance the emotional depth and impact further by exploring emotional complexity, transformative arcs, and a wider range of emotions. See More
Conflict: 8.25, The screenplay of Deadpool presents a compelling conflict and stakes that effectively drive the narrative tension and audience engagement. However, there is room to deepen the conflicts and further elevate the stakes to create an even more gripping story. See More
Originality: , The Deadpool screenplay showcases a remarkable blend of originality and creativity, particularly in its irreverent humor, self-referential style, and unconventional take on superhero narratives. The film successfully combines action, humor, and heart, resulting in a unique and entertaining cinematic experience. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- Deadpool is in the back of a taxi cab, in full dress reds and mask, fidgeting and adjusting his katana. He engages the young cab driver in conversation, giving him advice on love while chambering shells into his two pistols. Deadpool realizes his extra mags are missing and a blind old lady picks them up and carries them off.
- Deadpool sits in the back of a cab giving dating advice to the young driver while preparing his weapons. He realizes his extra magazines are missing and an old blind woman takes them. The scene ends with Deadpool sliding out of the cab on the side of a busy freeway.
- Deadpool gives love advice to a young cab driver while preparing his weapons in the back of a taxi. He loses his extra magazines to a blind old woman and slides out of the cab on a busy freeway, where he engages in a high-speed action sequence.
- Deadpool engages in a high-speed action sequence against a group of armed thugs on a freeway, showing off his skills and witty humor. He ends up discovering that his target is not in the SUV and gets shot in the arm, but ultimately defeats all the thugs except one, whom he dispatches with his katanas.
- Wade Wilson, pre-Deadpool, delivers a pizza to a sleazy man named Merchant and threatens a pizza delivery guy named Jeremy to stay away from Meghan Orlovsky.
- Wade Wilson delivers a pizza to a group of girls at a skate park and shows off a picture of him photobombing a scared pizza delivery guy. Meghan, one of the girls, hugs Wade, but when the others ask him to hurt their authority figures, Wade declines citing he does not approve of smoking. Wade walks away, revealing the grim looking building of Sister Margaret's School for Wayward Girls.
- Wade Wilson, a mercenary, hangs out at the sleazy Sister Margaret's bar owned by Weasel and Boothe. He exchanges witty banter with Weasel and overhears Buck's story. He delivers a drink and money to Buck and talks about his past as a mercenary.
- After a brutal fight between Weasel, Boothe, and Buck, the mercenary Wade Wilson discovers that he's been bet on to die in Sister Margaret's dead pool. He meets Vanessa, a prostitute, and they bond over their traumatic pasts. Vanessa agrees to spend time with him for $273 and a Yogurtland rewards card.
- Wade and Vanessa go on a date to the arcade, playing skeeball and winning tickets for prizes. They share playful banter about Hollywood's objectification of women and Wade's love for skeeball. They end the night with sex at Wade's apartment.
- Wade and Vanessa have an irreverent and fun sex montage on various holidays.
- Wade and Vanessa engage in playful banter, exchange Christmas gifts, and Wade proposes with a candy ring. They share a moment of happiness before Wade passes out.
- Wade and Vanessa receive devastating news about Wade's diagnosis of late-stage cancer. Despite Vanessa's optimism and willingness to explore experimental treatments, Wade enters a state of shock and reflection, memorializing Vanessa's face while cracking sarcastic jokes about his own misfortunes.
- Wade is going through his possessions, deciding what to keep and what to toss. Vanessa tries to convince him to fight his cancer and explores their relationship dynamics.
- Wade wakes up and reflects on Vanessa's imminent loss to cancer. He leaves to find a cure, but not before acknowledging the severity of the situation.
- Wade visits the bar and meets the recruiter who offers to cure his cancer and give him powers of a superhero. Wade is skeptical and sarcastic with the recruiter, recollecting his past endeavors as a hero.
- Wade visits a sketchy clinic in Guadalajara in a final attempt to find a cure for his cancer, where he encounters elderly patients and a sickly boy amongst the waiting room.
- Wade goes to a sketchy clinic in Mexico in a final attempt to find a cure for his cancer. He encounters a doctor who offers to cure him using bloody chicken gizzards, but Wade discovers the doctor is a fraud. A fight ensues, and Wade ends up killing the doctor. Vanessa witnesses the murder and is appalled.
- Wade is taken to a workshop run by Ajax where he is injected with a serum that activates mutant genes. He is warned that the process will not be painless and that extreme stress is required for the serum to work. Wade is restrained on an operating table and Angel Dust assists in the process. Ajax reveals that he has been through the procedure himself and no longer feels pain. After Wade cracks jokes, Angel Dust punches him in the face, and the scene ends.
- Wade undergoes extreme mutant gene activation treatments in the Workshop, set to the inspirational song 'I Want to Live', while Ajax and Angel Dust experiment on him. The procedures are harrowing and include dunking him in liquid, slicing, dicing, and stapling his body, and subjecting him to extreme stress and torture.
- Wade undergoes extreme mutant gene activation treatments while Ajax and Angel Dust experiment on him.
- Wade is restrained in a workshop, where Ajax and Angel Dust subject him to extreme mutant gene activation treatments involving torture and stress while threatening to turn him into a super-slave. The scene ends with Wade struggling to breathe as the oxygen levels are lowered.
- Wade is taken to a workshop and restrained on an operating table for extreme mutant gene activation treatments while being subjected to stress and torture by Ajax and Angel Dust.
- Wade undergoes extreme mutant gene activation treatments while being tortured by Ajax and Angel Dust in a workshop. The scene ends with Wade struggling to breathe as the oxygen levels are lowered.
- Wade is restrained and undergoing extreme mutant gene activation treatments while being tortured and threatened by Ajax and Angel Dust in a workshop. The scene ends with Wade struggling to breathe as the oxygen levels are lowered.
- Wade is restrained and undergoing extreme mutant gene activation treatments while being tortured and threatened by Ajax and Angel Dust in a workshop. The scene ends with Wade struggling to breathe as the oxygen levels are lowered. But Wade manages to escape by causing an explosion that leads to a fight between him and Ajax. In the end, Ajax impales Wade with a piece of rebar and leaves him trapped as the building burns down around them.
- Wade escapes from being tortured and activated with mutant genes by Ajax and Angel Dust, only to be impaled by Ajax and left trapped as the building burns down around them.
- Wade is tortured and experimented on by Ajax and Angel Dust until he escapes but is impaled by Ajax and left trapped as the building burns down around them.
- Wade escapes from torture, fights Ajax, gets impaled, and has a conversation with the recruiter.
- Wade and Weasel come up with the idea of Deadpool as a superhero name, leading to a montage of Wade's transformation into the Deadpool persona.
- Deadpool hails a taxi, reliving the opening scenes of the movie in quick succession to reveal Ajax capturing a super-slave. Ajax and Angel Dust are determined to kill Wade, except they don't want him to heal and come back. The scene ends with Ajax taking a matchstick from Angel Dust's mouth.
- Deadpool talks to Blind Al about his love life while lounging on his futon. Later, while at a strip club, Weasel informs Deadpool that they have a problem.
- After spotting Vanessa as a cocktail waitress, Wade chickens out and flees to the men's room. When he comes out, Vanessa is gone and he searches for her in the strip club. Meanwhile, Ajax and Angel Dust capture Vanessa and taunt her with Wade's responsibility for her capture.
- Ajax and Angel Dust kidnap Vanessa in an industrial elevator, explaining their plan to her. Meanwhile, Deadpool seeks help from the X-Men and prepares to face Francis.
- Deadpool, Colossus, and Negasonic Teenage Warhead embark on a mission to rescue Vanessa from Ajax and Angel Dust. Dopinder drops Deadpool off at the scrapyard where they meet up with the X-Men.
- Deadpool, Colossus, and NTW fight against Angel Dust and a group of armed and armored mercenaries at a scrapyard while Dopinder crashes his taxi cab. Vanessa is held captive by Ajax and taunted about her relationship with Wade.
- Deadpool, Colossus, and NTW fight against Angel Dust and a group of armed and armored mercenaries at a scrapyard while Dopinder crashes his taxi cab. Vanessa is held captive by Ajax and taunted about her relationship with Wade.
- Deadpool leads a charge against a group of heavily-armed mercenaries to rescue Vanessa, while Colossus and Angel Dust engage in a brutal battle. Dopinder has a comedic moment with former co-worker Bob. Ajax taunts Vanessa about her relationship with Wade and unleashes more guards armed with heavy machine guns.
- Deadpool, Colossus, and NTW fight against Angel Dust and mercenaries to rescue Vanessa from Ajax's clutches. Ajax taunts Vanessa about her relationship with Deadpool, while also threatening to harm her. Deadpool confronts Ajax and they engage in a fight where Ajax wields two sharp axes. Meanwhile, Colossus and Angel Dust battle it out, and NTW joins the fight to take down Angel Dust.
- Deadpool and Ajax engage in an intense fight to rescue Vanessa while Colossus and Angel Dust battle it out, and NTW joins the fight to take down Angel Dust.
- Deadpool leads a charge against mercenaries to rescue Vanessa from Ajax. In the end, Vanessa is saved, and the scene ends with a post-credit sequence in which Deadpool teases the audience about the potential cast of Deadpool 2.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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Deadpool | Deadpool's character arc involves him learning to let go of his past and embrace his present. He is initially motivated by revenge, seeking to make those who wronged him pay. However, during his mission to rescue Vanessa, he is forced to confront his own insecurities and mistakes. Through his love for Vanessa and his loyalty to his friends, he begins to let go of his past and focus on the present, ultimately leading to his decision to sacrifice himself to save Vanessa and protect his friends. | The character arc is strong and well-developed. However, there are moments where Deadpool's irreverent humor feels out of place and detracts from the emotional weight of certain scenes. | To improve Deadpool's character arc, consider toning down his humor in certain scenes to allow more emotional depth to shine through. Additionally, provide more context for why he is so fiercely loyal to Vanessa and his friends, as this will create a stronger emotional connection for the audience. |
Dopinder | Dopinder starts out as a timid and inexperienced taxi driver who is only interested in becoming more heroic. He takes Deadpool's advice and becomes involved in the rescue mission, but he quickly finds himself in over his head. As the adventure progresses, Dopinder gains the courage to fight back against the villains and stand up for himself. When the dust settles, he emerges as a more confident and assertive person, ready to take on whatever challenges come his way. | While Dopinder's character arc is solid, it could benefit from more nuance and complexity. His idolization of Deadpool is a bit one-note, and it would be interesting to see more of his personality and motivations outside of his relationship with the main character. Additionally, his transformation from timid to confident could be more gradual and less abrupt. | To improve Dopinder's character arc, consider giving him more depth and a clearer motivation for why he is interested in becoming more heroic. Show him struggling with the consequences of his choices and the toll that heroism takes on him. Additionally, focus on his relationships with other characters in the film, particularly those outside of his interactions with Deadpool. Finally, make his transformation more subtle and realistic, giving him small victories and setbacks along the way instead of a sudden shift in personality. |
Wade | Wade Wilson starts out as a witty and humorous mercenary who is deeply damaged by his traumatic past. He uses humor as a defense mechanism, and is flirty and charming when it comes to Vanessa. As he becomes more deeply affected by his cancer diagnosis, Wade reflects on Vanessa’s plight and considers leaving to find a cure. He becomes a sarcastic and miserable character struggling to grasp his terminal illness, doubting himself and the people around him. However, he transforms into a foul-mouthed, sarcastic, but ultimately caring individual struggling with cancer, who is willing to undergo extreme measures to find a cure and save Vanessa. He maintains his sarcastic and quick-witted personality, using humor to deal with his traumatic experiences and showing determination to regain his life and his looks back. Through the process of becoming a superhero, Wade becomes a tough, relentless, and resourceful anti-hero who is fighting for a better life for himself and those he loves. | The character arc of Wade Wilson is well-developed and provides a clear trajectory for the character’s transformation. However, some of the descriptions are repetitive and could benefit from more specific examples and details. In addition, it would be helpful to have more information on Wade’s motivations, desires, and fears throughout the movie. | To improve the character arc, it would be helpful to provide more specific examples of Wade’s actions, thoughts, and emotions throughout the movie. This could include showing more of his traumatic past, his relationship with Vanessa, and his motivations for becoming a superhero. In addition, adding more nuances to his personality and behavior could make the character more complex and relatable. Finally, giving Wade a clearer goal or purpose in the story could create a more compelling arc that drives the plot forward. |
Vanessa | Vanessa's character arc in the screenplay moves from a vulnerable woman who is haunted by her traumatic past to a strong and independent woman who is willing to fight for what she truly loves. Initially, she seems to cope well with her profession as a prostitute, but her true pain emerges when she unexpectedly finds a man who understands her. However, Vanessa's character experiences an emotional shift when she witnesses Wade's violent side and realizes how much he still has to learn about controlling his anger. This shift in understanding only grows stronger when she is kidnapped and taunted by Ajax over her relationship with Wade. Afterward, Vanessa becomes a crucial player in her own rescue, demonstrating just how strong and independent she has become. By the end of the movie, Vanessa truly understands the importance of living life to the fullest and doing what makes her happy, which means stepping up to help Wade when he needs her the most. | Overall, Vanessa is a well-written character, but her arc could have been fleshed out a bit more. It only becomes clear towards the end of the movie that Vanessa is a complex woman with a lot of emotional baggage to work through. It would have been beneficial to see more of this internal struggle throughout the film's middle act, rather than just during the climax. Furthermore, the transition from her being a comedic character to a more dramatic one could have been smoother. | To improve Vanessa's character arc, give her more screen time during the middle act so that we can understand her struggles better. Additionally, while her transformation from comedic to dramatic is intriguing, it might have been more effective if there were clearer foreshadowing earlier on. One suggestion is to have Vanessa show more of her vulnerable side early on to hint at the internal struggles she must later face. Finally, let her transformative journey be more of an emotional one rather than one that just drives the plot forward. |
Ajax | Ajax's character arc throughout the film involves his obsession with power and control over mutants. As he continues his experiments and tortures both Wade and Vanessa, he becomes increasingly frustrated with their ability to resist his attempts to break them. However, as Wade finally overcomes his own mutations and defeats Ajax in a final battle, Ajax begins to realize the limits of his own power and the inherent flaws in his obsession with control. Ultimately, his defeat marks a turning point for his character as he begins to question the ethics of his own actions and the true value of power. | While Ajax's character is certainly a compelling villain, the film could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of his motivations and personality. Though he is portrayed as sadistic and cruel, there is very little depth to his character beyond this, which makes it harder for the audience to truly understand his motivations and actions. Additionally, his character arc feels somewhat rushed and underdeveloped, with his change of heart at the end of the film feeling somewhat unearned. | To improve Ajax's character arc, the filmmakers should consider exploring his backstory and motivations in more depth. Perhaps he has his own personal reasons for pursuing power, or has a long-standing connection to mutant culture that fuels his obsession. Additionally, the film could benefit from scenes that show Ajax grappling with the ethics of his own actions, which would give the audience a more nuanced understanding of his character and make his eventual change of heart feel more earned. |
Angel Dust | Throughout the movie, Angel Dust serves as Ajax's enforcer and henchwoman, enjoying her role in mutant experimentation and torture. However, as the film progresses, Angel Dust begins to question Ajax's motives and his cruel treatment of mutants, including her own kind. Her loyalty to Ajax is tested when she witnesses the suffering of Wade Wilson and ultimately decides to betray Ajax and help defeat him. In doing so, Angel Dust discovers her own moral compass and learns to stand up for what is right, even if it means rebelling against her former leader. | While Angel Dust's character arc does showcase a journey from blind loyalty to self-discovery and rebellion, it can feel a bit rushed and underdeveloped. There are moments throughout the movie where Angel Dust's loyalty to Ajax wavers, but these shifts in her mindset are not clearly defined or explored. Additionally, her change of heart is motivated primarily by witnessing Wade's suffering, rather than any inherent moral conflict within herself. | To improve Angel Dust's character arc, it would be beneficial to more explicitly lay out her inner conflict and moral struggle as she begins to question Ajax's actions. Providing more subtle clues and foreshadowing to her eventual betrayal would create a more satisfying and believable character arc. Additionally, exploring Angel Dust's backstory and personal history as a mutant could add depth to her character and provide a more solid foundation for her eventual change of heart. |
Colossus | Throughout the movie, Colossus is presented as a rigidly ethical character who sees himself as a kind of moral compass for the other X-Men. He never wavers from his commitment to doing what is right and what is just, even when it puts him at odds with other members of his team. Midway through the film, Colossus faces a new challenge when he is tasked with mentoring Deadpool, whose methods he finds repugnant. Over time, Colossus learns to see beyond Deadpool's crass exterior and recognize the good intentions that motivate his actions. Near the end of the movie, Colossus has a crucial moment of character growth when he chooses to follow Deadpool's unconventional methods to defeat the villain Ajax. This moment demonstrates that Colossus is capable of embracing new ideas and strategies, even if they go against his traditional sense of right and wrong. | The character arc presented for Colossus is generally solid, but it could be more impactful with some additional development. In particular, there is a missed opportunity to explore the personal conflict Colossus must face when he decides to work with Deadpool. This could have been a moment of introspection for the character, forcing him to question whether his strict moral code has blinded him to the potential for good in others. By examining this conflict more closely, the movie could have added some emotional depth to Colossus' growth as a character. | To improve the character arc, the movie could have added a scene in which Colossus reflects on his journey and recognizes the importance of being open to new ideas. This moment could have also provided an opportunity for Colossus to acknowledge the influence that Deadpool has had on him, and the importance of working with people who have different perspectives and approaches to problem-solving. Additionally, the movie could have introduced some moments of self-doubt for Colossus earlier in the story, to make his ultimate decision to work with Deadpool feel more earned and significant. |
Negasonic Teenage Warhead | Throughout the movie, NTW undergoes a transformation from a moody, rebellious teenager to a valuable team member who embraces her heroic side. Initially, she is skeptical of Deadpool's methods and questions his morality. However, as she witnesses his selflessness and bravery, she begins to see him as a hero. During the final battle, she proves to be a valuable asset to the team and takes down Angel Dust with a well-placed explosion. By the end of the movie, she has become a more well-rounded and mature individual who is willing to work with others for the greater good. | The character arc for NTW is well-executed and adds depth to her character. However, it would have been even better if she had more screen time and development. Although she plays an important role in the final battle, she is not given enough attention throughout the rest of the movie. | To improve the character arc, it would have been beneficial to delve into NTW's backstory and motivations. This would have allowed for a more profound transformation, as we would have understood where she was coming from and what led her to initially question Deadpool's methods. Additionally, giving her more screen time and developing her relationship with Deadpool further would have allowed for a stronger payoff at the end of the movie. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation |
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Love and Relationships | Throughout the screenplay, love and relationships are a major theme. Wade and Vanessa's relationship is central to the story, and their unconventional romance is often shown through their banter and sense of humor. Even when Wade becomes Deadpool, his love for Vanessa remains a driving force in his actions. The theme of love is also explored through Wade's conversation with Dopinder about love and his carefree personality. | The theme of love and relationships highlights the importance of human connection and how it can motivate and drive characters in their actions. |
Identity | The theme of identity is seen in the development of Wade's character from a carefree mercenary to the mutant superhero Deadpool. Throughout the film, Wade struggles with his sense of self as he grapples with the effects of his cancer and his transformation into a mutant. This theme is particularly evident in the scenes where he is tortured and undergoes painful procedures to activate his mutant genes. | The theme of identity highlights the struggle that characters face as they attempt to define themselves in a world that often tries to put them in predefined boxes. |
Trauma and Recovery | The theme of trauma and recovery is explored through Vanessa's traumatic past and Wade's diagnosis with late-stage cancer. Both characters struggle with the aftermath of their experiences and must find ways to cope with their pain and trauma. The theme is also evident in Wade's search for a cure, which highlights the desperation that comes with facing a life-threatening illness. | The theme of trauma and recovery highlights the importance of resilience and the journey that characters take to heal from their wounds. |
Superheroism and Responsibility | The theme of superheroism and responsibility is explored through Deadpool's transformation into a superhero and his eventual rescue of Vanessa. Throughout the film, Wade must grapple with the weight of his new powers and the responsibility that comes with them. This theme is particularly evident in the scenes where he seeks help from the X-Men and in his final battle with Ajax. | The theme of superheroism and responsibility highlights the responsibility that comes with great power and how characters must navigate the implications of their actions. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | ||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Characters | Character Changes | Conflict | High stakes | Story forward | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | ||
1 - Deadpool in a Taxi Cab | "Humorous" | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 9 | ||
2 - Deadpool Gives Dating Advice | "Humorous" | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 9 | ||
3 - Taxi Driver Love Advice and Highway Mayhem | "humorous, irreverent" | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 5 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 5 | 9 | ||
4 - Deadpool vs Thugs on the Freeway | "Light and humorous with high stakes action" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 3 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 9 | ||
5 - The Pizza Delivery | "Humorous" | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 10 | ||
6 - Pizza Delivery and Skate Park | "Humorous" | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 8 | ||
7 - Mercenary Meets Sleazy Bar Owner | "Humorous, edgy" | 7 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 8 | ||
8 - Deadpool visits Sister Margaret's | "Humorous, gritty" | 10 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 11 | ||
9 - Arcade Date Night | "Lighthearted" | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 9 | ||
10 - Sex Montage on Holidays | "Playful" | 7 | 7 | 2 | 8 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 5 | 0 | ||
11 - Wade and Vanessa's Christmas Engagement | "Irreverent, playful" | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 10 | ||
12 - Devastating News | "Dark, yet humorous" | 9 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 10 | 9 | ||
13 - Spring Cleaning | "Irreverent" | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 10 | ||
14 - Wade's Reflection | "Somber" | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | ||
15 - The Recruitment | "Serious" | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | ||
16 - Desperation World Tour | "Hopeful yet Despairing" | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | ||
17 - Murderous Past | "Dark" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 7 | ||
18 - The Transformation | "Dark" | 10 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 11 | 10 | 10 | 7 | ||
19 - Mutant Treatment Montage | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 7 | ||
20 - Mutant Gene Activation | "Dark" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | ||
21 - Mutant Gene Activation Torture | "dark, intense" | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 11 | 10 | 9 | 7 | ||
22 - Mutant Gene Activation and Torture | "Dark" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 6 | ||
23 - Mutant Gene Activation | "Dark" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 10 | 11 | 9 | 8 | 5 | ||
24 - Torture and Tension | "Dark" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 8 | ||
25 - Mutant Gene Activation and a Fiery Escape | "Intense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | ||
26 - Escape from Torture | "Intense" | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 11 | 11 | 10 | 10 | 7 | ||
27 - Deadpool Tortured and Escapes | "Intense, sarcastic" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | ||
28 - Escape and Confrontation | "Dark" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
29 - Deadpool's Transformation and Montage | "Humorous, Fast Paced" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 5 | 9 | ||
30 - Deadpool's Cab Ride and the Capture of a Super-Slave | "humorous" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
31 - Deadpool talks to Blind Al | "Humorous\/Intense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 8 | 6 | 10 | ||
32 - Deadpool searches for Vanessa | "Humorous, suspenseful" | 8.5 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | ||
33 - Kidnapping Vanessa | "Humorous, suspenseful" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | ||
34 - The Rescue Mission Begins | "Humorous, yet tense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | ||
35 - Fight at the Scrapyard | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
36 - Rescue in the Scrapyard | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 7 | ||
37 - Deadpool's Last Stand | "humorous and intense" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 4 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 5 | 8 | ||
38 - Rescuing Vanessa and Confronting Ajax | "Dark" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
39 - Deadpool and Ajax's Final Battle | "Intense, comedic" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | ||
40 - untitled | null | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
41 - Rescue and Tease | "Humorous, light-hearted" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- High-energy action sequences with intense stakes, memorable characters, and great visuals
- Humorous and witty dialogue that adds depth to the characters and keeps the audience engaged
- Strong emotional impact in certain scenes that are well-crafted and elevate the overall quality
- Excellent character development for the main protagonist, showcasing unique traits and a compelling arc
- Effective use of humor to balance out the more serious and intense moments in the screenplay
Scene Weaknesses
- Lack of significant plot development in various scenes, leading to a slow pace and low stakes
- Some characters lack adequate development or depth, leading to a decreased emotional investment
- Certain scenes lack thematic exploration and may feel predictable or generic in nature
- Over-reliance on violence or graphic content that may turn off some viewers
- Some dialogue may be seen as crass or offensive by certain audiences
Suggestions
- Explore the themes and characters more deeply in order to enhance their impact and create a more compelling narrative
- Consider cutting back on graphic content or gratuitous violence and focus on more meaningful character interactions and emotional moments
- Research historical accuracy when exploring sensitive subjects such as cancer treatment to avoid any potential controversy or offense
- Experiment with different writing styles and techniques to keep the screenplay fresh and engaging for the reader and viewer
- Collaborate with other writers or industry professionals to gain feedback and constructive criticism that can improve the overall quality of the screenplay
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Humorous tone and high stakes action | The screenplays that have a humorous tone also tend to have high stakes action that keep the audience engaged and interested. |
Humorous tone and character changes | The screenplays with a humorous tone also tend to have significant character changes, whether it is a character arc or simply shifts in personality throughout the story. |
Intense tone and conflict | The screenplays with an intense tone also tend to have significant conflict, either internal or external, driving the plot forward. |
Dark tone and emotional impact | The screenplays with a dark tone tend to have a strong emotional impact on the audience, often leaving them feeling a sense of despair or hopelessness. |
Humorous tone and dialogue | The screenplays with a humorous tone tend to have strong and witty dialogue, keeping the audience engaged even during slower moments of the story. |
Humorous tone and move story forward | The screenplays with a humorous tone tend to keep the story moving forward at a consistent pace, not allowing the humor to slow down the plot. |
Serious tone and overall grade | The screenplays with a serious tone tend to receive higher overall grades from readers and audiences. |
Hopeful yet despairing tone and emotional impact | The screenplays with a tone that is both hopeful and despairing tend to have a strong emotional impact on the audience, leaving them with conflicting feelings about the story's outcome. |
Dark tone and high stakes action | The screenplays with a dark tone also tend to have high stakes action, making the audience invested in the outcome of the story. |
Humorous tone and character development | The screenplays with a humorous tone tend to have strong character development, allowing the audience to become invested in the characters and their journeys. |
Humorous and suspenseful tones and conflict | The screenplays with a combination of humorous and suspenseful tones tend to have significant conflict driving the plot forward, keeping the audience on the edge of their seats. |
Humorous and intense tones and character changes | The screenplays with a combination of humorous and intense tones tend to have significant character changes, often bringing characters to their breaking points before experiencing significant growth. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Anti-Hero | The main character, Deadpool, is a perfect example of an anti-hero. He has a clownish personality, makes crude jokes, and is often seen engaging in illegal activities. | Anti-heroes are protagonists who lack traditional heroic attributes, such as bravery and selflessness. They often have flawed personalities and engage in morally ambiguous activities. An example of an anti-hero in another show is Tony Soprano from The Sopranos. |
Origin Story | The screenplay follows Deadpool's origin story, from his initial diagnosis with cancer to his transformation into a superhero. | Origin stories are narratives that explain how a character or a group of characters came to be. They often involve a transformation or a significant event that shapes the character's identity. An example of an origin story in another show is the flashback sequences in How I Met Your Mother. |
Montage | The screenplay features several montage sequences, including one where Wade and Vanessa have sex on various holidays, and another where Wade transforms into Deadpool. | Montages are sequences of scenes or images that are edited together to convey information or show the passage of time. They are often set to music and do not include any dialogue. An example of a montage in another show is the training sequence in Rocky. |
Vigilante Justice | Deadpool seeks vigilante justice throughout the screenplay, using his mutant abilities to take down his enemies and protect Vanessa. | Vigilante justice refers to the concept of an individual or a group of individuals taking the law into their own hands to seek justice. It often involves actions outside of the legal system, such as violence or vigilante groups. An example of vigilante justice in another show is Daredevil on Netflix. |
Love Interest | Vanessa serves as Deadpool's love interest throughout the screenplay, and their relationship is a significant focus of the plot. | A love interest is a character who serves as a romantic partner or potential romantic partner for the protagonist. They often play a significant role in the plot and serve as a source of motivation or conflict for the protagonist. An example of a love interest in another show is Rachel Green in Friends. |
Superhero Team-Up | Deadpool seeks the help of the X-Men to take down Ajax and Angel Dust, leading to a superhero team-up sequence. | Superhero team-ups refer to stories in which two or more superheroes work together to achieve a common goal. They often involve characters from different franchises or universes. An example of a superhero team-up in another show is the Marvel Cinematic Universe, which features characters from several Marvel franchises. |
Post-Credits Scene | The screenplay features a post-credits scene that sets up the possibility of a sequel. | Post-credits scenes are short scenes that appear after the credits of a movie or television show. They often hint at future storylines or provide additional information for audiences who stay until the end of the credits. An example of a post-credits scene in another show is the shawarma scene in The Avengers. |
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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2 | Deadpool: Oh, hello, Deadpool here. You may be wondering whose balls I had to fondle to get my own movie. Rhymes with ‘Polverine.’ Couple’a smooth criminals. |
1 | Deadpool: So hold onto love tight. Go at Bandhu hard. Get Gita back. Or else... the whole world will taste like Mama June after hot yoga. |
17 | Deadpool: Some kind of anger can’t be managed. Like the kind where your year-long plan ends with the wrong guy getting dismembered! |
18 | Ajax: The one thing that never survives this place is a sense of humor. |
25 | Ajax: Say it. 'Francis.' |
Some Loglines to consider:
A sarcastic mercenary falls in love and becomes a superhero after undergoing mutant gene activation treatments. |
Deadpool, Colossus, and NTW team up to save Vanessa from the evil Ajax and Angel Dust in a brutal battle. |
Vanessa is taunted during a fierce fight for her rescue in the scrapyard. |
The heroes ultimately succeed in rescuing Vanessa, and Deadpool gains potential new allies for his next adventure in the post-credit scene. |
Deadpool shows his heroic side as he battles for love and justice against his enemies. |
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