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Compelled to Read | Story Content |
Character Development
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Scene Elements |
Audience Engagement
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Technical Aspects |
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1 - The Burial of the Sacred Pipe
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 7
| 5.5 / 5 |
8 |
4 | 7.5 |
4 |
1 | 6 | 5 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 3.5 | 6 | 7 |
6 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 5.5 |
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2 - Ernest Burkart's Arrival at Hale's Ranch
| Low on its ownOrientationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
8 / 7.5
| 7.5 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
8 |
2 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
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3 - Mollie Kyle's Monthly Check-in and Osage Community Chaos
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 7.5
| 5.5 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
1 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 5.5 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5.5 |
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4 - Ernest Waits for Mollie Outside Church
| Low on its ownDeliveryDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
5 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 5.5 | 9 | 6 |
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5 - Ernest and Mollie's Intimate Evening
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
9 / 8.5
| 5.5 / 7 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
8 |
4.5 | 7 | 7.5 | 6 | 4 | 4.5 | 5.5 | 7 | 7 |
8 | 7 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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6 - Ernest's Presence at Church and Picnic
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
8.5 / 8
| 6 / 6.5 |
8 |
6 | 8 |
8 |
3 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8.5 | 7 |
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7 - Ernest and Mollie's Proposal and Wedding
| Low on its ownRitualDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 6 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 8 | 5 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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8 - Minnie's Prayer at the Osage Giveaway
| KeepMontageAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 |
7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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9 - Mourning and Conversations at Minnie's Wake
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 9
| 8 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 3 | 9 | 8.5 | 5 | 6 |
8 | 7.5 | 7 | 9 | 7 |
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10 - Lizzie's Concern and Aunt Annie's Racism
| PolishRelationship shiftNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
6.5 / 7
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 7 | 5.5 |
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11 - Anna's Aggressive Visit to Gray Horse Home
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7 / 7.5
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 5.5 |
7 |
1 | 4 | 5 | 9 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 7.5 | 6 |
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12 - The Suspicion of Charlie Whitehorn's Death
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7 / 7.5
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
4 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 7 | 6 |
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13 - The Osage Tribe's Emergency Meeting
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 7.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 7.5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7.5 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 7 |
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14 - Ernest Argues with Undertaker over Funeral Costs
| Low on its ownAftermathDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 8 |
6 |
3 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 6 |
8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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15 - Execution of Anna's Will and Introduction of Private Detective
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 8.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
4 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 8 |
6 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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16 - William J Burns Discusses Anna's Death with Mollie and Ernest
| Low on its ownInvestigationDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
8 / 7.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 7 | 6.5 |
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17 - Investigating Anna's Murder
| PolishNegotiationNo lens is broken, but Execution is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
3 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 2 | 7.5 | 7 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 5.5 |
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18 - Mollie's Health Concerns and Blackie's Theft
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 7
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 6.5 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6 | 5.5 | 8 | 5 |
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19 - Ernest's Confession and Punishment
| KeepRitualAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
8 | 7.5 | 7 | 9 | 7 |
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20 - Henry's Despair and Hale's Dilemma
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 5.5 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 3 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
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21 - Mollie's Refusal of Medical Treatment
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7.8 |
8 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
4 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7.5 | 5.5 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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22 - Henry's Outbursts
| KeepAftermathAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
8 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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23 - Lizzie's Passing
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 6
| 6 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
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24 - Mourning and Job Discussion
| ReworkDeliveryRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 7
| 4 / 7 |
7 |
5 | 8 |
6 |
1 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 1 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 6 |
6 | 5.5 | 5 | 7 | 5.5 |
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25 - Mollie's Secret and Barney's Fate
| PolishRelationship shiftNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7 / 7.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 6.5 | 7 | 6 |
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26 - Mollie's Pregnancy and Henry's Concerns
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
7 / 7
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
6 |
4 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 5.5 |
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27 - Betrayal at the Speakeasy
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 7
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
6 |
4 | 5 | 8 | 5 | 2 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 5 |
5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
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28 - Suspicions Arise in Mollie's House
| KeepInvestigationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8
| 7.5 / 7.8 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
8 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 6 | 7 |
8 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8.5 | 7 |
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29 - Protection Offered and Tension Rises
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 7 |
8 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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30 - Preparing for Danger and Uncovering Secrets
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Execution is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9 / 9
| 9 / 8.5 |
8 |
8 | 7 |
8 |
6 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 |
7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
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31 - Seeking Justice in Washington D.C.
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 8.5 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
6 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5.5 |
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32 - Preparing for Mollie's Care
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8 / 7
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6.5 |
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33 - Mollie's Illness and Tom White's Investigation
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 7.5
| 6.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 5.5 | 7 | 6 | 7 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
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34 - Uncovering Family Secrets and Community Tensions
| PolishInvestigationNo lens is broken, but Execution is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 8.5 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8.5 | 7 |
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35 - Hale's Insurance Dispute and Agents' Investigation
| KeepInvestigationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.2 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
5 |
1 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 9 | 7 |
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36 - Hale Investigates the Murders and Warns of Danger
| ReworkDeliveryDesign is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
7 / 7.5
| 5.5 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 |
8 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 6 |
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37 - Betrayal and Consequences
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Execution is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 8 |
7 |
7 | 5.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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38 - Unraveling the Web of Crimes
| ReworkInvestigationRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.8 |
7 / 7.5
| 6 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 5 | 7.5 | 8 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 6 | 7.5 | 6 |
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39 - Ernest's Arrest and Interrogation
| KeepInvestigationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 8.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 7 |
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40 - Ernest Confronts Blackie and Tom Questions Ernest
| PolishInvestigationNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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41 - The Interrogation of John Ramsey
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
7 |
4 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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42 - Hale's Arrest and Interrogation
| ReworkDeliveryRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 8 |
7 |
7 | 4 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 |
7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 6 |
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43 - Blackie's Escape Offer and Ernest's Protection
| Low on its ownDeliveryDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 4 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 5.5 |
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44 - Hamilton's Demand
| PolishContestNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8.5 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
3 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 |
6 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 |
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45 - Ernest's Dilemma: To Testify or Not to Testify
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 5 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 6.5 |
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46 - Mollie and Ernest's Conversation and Ernest's Arrest
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.8 |
9.5 / 9
| 8.5 / 8.5 |
9 |
7 | 8 |
8 |
6.5 | 8.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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47 - Ernest's Grief
| KeepAftermathAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 6 |
8 |
6 | 7 | 6.5 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 8 |
7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8.5 | 7 |
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48 - Ernest's Dilemma: Testify Against Brother or Protect Family Ties?
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 8 |
8 |
7 | 6.5 |
8 |
6.5 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 |
8 | 7.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 7 |
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49 - Ernest Testifies in Court
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5.5 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 5 |
6 |
3 | 5 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 5 |
6 | 6 | 6.5 | 9 | 6 |
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50 - Mollie Confronts Ernest in Court
| Low on its ownAftermathExecution and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 2 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
8 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 3 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 6 |
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