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Compelled to Read | Story Content |
Character Development
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Scene Elements |
Audience Engagement
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Technical Aspects |
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1 - Joy's Headquarters: A World of Emotions
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 6.5 |
9 |
5 | 9 |
8 |
1 | 6 | 5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 7 | 9 | 5.5 |
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2 - Broccoli Battles and Core Memories
| KeepOrientationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
9 |
5 | 9 |
8 |
1 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 6.5 |
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3 - The Islands of Personality
| ReworkOrientationRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 4 / 6 |
9 |
5 | 7 |
6 |
1 | 6 | 5 | 1 | 1 | 1 | 4 | 5 | 5 |
4 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 5 |
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4 - Leaving Home: A Journey Across America
| PolishMontageNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
9 |
6 | 9 |
8 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 6 |
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5 - Moving Day Mayhem
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 |
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6 - Broccoli Pizza and Dinosaur Memories
| PolishTransitionNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 4 / 6 |
7 |
5 | 6.5 |
8 |
1 | 6 | 5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 4 | 5 | 5 |
8 | 6.5 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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7 - The Blueing of Memories
| KeepInvestigationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
3 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 5.5 | 9 | 6.5 |
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8 - Fear and Frustration in the New Home
| PolishThematic argumentNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 4.5 / 6 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
8 |
2 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 5.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 9 | 6 |
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9 - Joy Takes the Lead
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 6 |
8 |
6 | 8 |
8 |
4 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 |
8 | 7 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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10 - Joy's Master Plan for a Great First Day
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 5.5 / 6.5 |
8 |
6 | 8.5 |
8 |
2 | 7.5 | 7 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 5 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 9 | 6.5 |
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11 - First Day Jitters and a Blue Memory
| KeepOrientationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9.5 / 9
| 8.5 / 7.5 |
9 |
7 | 8 |
8 |
2 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 |
8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
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12 - The Blue Memory
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 9 / 8.5 |
9 |
8 | 9 |
9 |
6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 |
7 | 8.5 | 8 | 7 | 7.5 |
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13 - Joy and Sadness's Journey to Headquarters
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
9 / 8.5
| 9 / 8.5 |
9 |
7 | 9 |
8 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 |
7 | 8 | 7 | 9.5 | 7.5 |
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14 - Dissonance at Dinner
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 8.5 | 7 |
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15 - First Day Blues
| KeepRitualAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 5.5 / 6.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 6 | 5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 8 | 5 |
8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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16 - The Foot
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7.5 | 6 | 7 |
8 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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17 - A Crumbling Past
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 8.5 / 8 |
9 |
7 | 8 |
7 |
5 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 |
6 | 8 | 7.5 | 8.5 | 7.5 |
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18 - Lost in Long-Term Memory
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
8 |
3 | 7 | 7.5 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6.5 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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19 - The Memory Vacuum
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.2 |
9 / 7.5
| 5 / 7 |
8 |
5 | 8 |
6 |
1.5 | 6.5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 3 | 8 | 6 |
7 | 6 | 5.5 | 9 | 5.5 |
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20 - The Memory Dump
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 7 |
7 |
5 | 7.5 |
7 |
1 | 4 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 2 | 7 | 4 |
8 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
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21 - Memory Mayhem
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 8 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 6.5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 7 | 8.5 | 7 |
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22 - Bing Bong's Memories and the Abstract Thought Shortcut
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 8 |
8 |
2 | 7 | 7.5 | 5 | 3 | 5.5 | 6.5 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 7.5 | 7 | 9 | 7 |
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23 - Escape from Abstraction
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
9.5 / 8.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
9 |
7 | 9 |
6 |
2 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5.5 | 9 | 6 |
6 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
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24 - A Journey Through Imaginationland
| PolishTransitionNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 7.5
| 5 / 6.5 |
8 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
1 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 | 4 | 5 | 5 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8.5 | 5.5 |
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25 - Hockey Chaos
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6.5 | 5 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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26 - Bing Bong's Grief and Acceptance
| KeepAftermathAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.8 |
9.5 / 9
| 8 / 8.5 |
8 |
8 | 8 |
9 |
7.5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 |
9 | 8.5 | 7 | 9 | 7.5 |
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27 - The Search for Happiness
| KeepThematic argumentAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 |
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28 - The Dream Production Deadline
| KeepInvestigationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
1 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 2 | 5 | 5.5 | 6 | 5 |
6 | 6 | 6.5 | 9 | 6.5 |
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29 - A Nightmare in the Making
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
9 |
6 | 9 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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30 - Into the Subconscious
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 8 |
7 |
1 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 3 | 5.5 | 6 | 8 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 6.5 |
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31 - Escape from the Subconscious
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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32 - Chaos and a Bus Ticket to Minnesota
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
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33 - Riding the Rails of Riley's Mind
| PolishRelationship shiftNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
8 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 6 | 6.5 | 9 | 6 |
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34 - Running Away and Returning
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 9 / 8.5 |
8 |
7 | 8 |
7 |
6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 |
6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 |
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35 - Joy's Epiphany in the Memory Dump
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9 / 9
| 8 / 8 |
9 |
8 | 9 |
8 |
8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 |
7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
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36 - Bing Bong's Sacrifice
| KeepSacrificeAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
8.5 |
9.5 / 9.5
| 9 / 8.5 |
10 |
8 | 9 |
10 |
9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 |
9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 |
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37 - A Race Against Time
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 9 / 8.5 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8.5 | 8 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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38 - Joy's Daring Rescue
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
7 / 7.5
| 8.5 / 8.5 |
9 |
7 | 8.5 |
7 |
3 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
6 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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39 - Sadness Saves the Day
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
8.5 |
9.5 / 9
| 8 / 8.5 |
10 |
9 | 8.5 |
9 |
9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 |
8 | 9 | 8.5 | 9 | 8.5 |
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40 - A New Beginning: Expansion and Upgrades
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
7.5 |
9 / 8
| 4 / 6 |
9 |
7 | 8 |
9 |
7 | 8 | 6 | 1 | 0 | 2 | 4 | 5 | 8 |
9 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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41 - Embarrassed at the Rink
| PolishMontageNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9.5 / 8.5
| 3 / 4 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
1 | 6 | 5 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 7 | 7 |
8 | 6.5 | 8 | 9 | 7.5 |
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42 - Riley's First Game
| ReworkDeliveryRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 1 / 1 |
7 |
6 | 4 |
6 |
0.5 | 5 | 6 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 8 |
6 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 | 5 |
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