Inside Out

Executive Summary

Logline: When an 11-year-old girl's emotions are personified and thrown into disarray by a family move, her Joy and Sadness must work together to restore balance and help her navigate the challenges of growing up. See other logline suggestoins

Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend

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Engine: Claude

Recommend

Explanation: The screenplay for 'Inside Out' is a highly imaginative and emotionally resonant exploration of a young girl's inner world. Through the lens of personified emotions navigating Riley's psyche, the story seamlessly blends humor, heart, and profound insights into the complexities of growing up. The screenplay's consistent character arcs, thematic depth, and innovative storytelling make it a standout example of Pixar's mastery of the animated feature genre.

Engine: GPT4

Highly Recommend

Explanation: Inside Out is a masterfully crafted screenplay that delves into the complexities of human emotions through the imaginative portrayal of personified emotions within a young girl's mind. The screenplay excels in its unique concept, emotional depth, and character development, making it a compelling and engaging narrative. The pacing is well-balanced, and the resolution is both satisfying and thought-provoking. This screenplay stands out for its originality and the profound way it addresses universal themes of growing up and emotional resilience.

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Overview

Genres: Animation, Comedy, Family, Adventure, Fantasy, Drama, Sports

Setting: Contemporary, San Francisco, Minnesota, and Riley's Mind World

Overview: The screenplay demonstrates a strong overall score, showcasing a compelling premise, well-developed characters, and a unique visual style. However, some areas need refinement to elevate the screenplay to a truly outstanding level.

Themes: Emotions and Mental Health, Identity and Self-Discovery, Family and Relationships, Change and Adaptation, Memory and Core Memories

Conflict and Stakes: Riley's struggle to adjust to her new life in San Francisco, with her happiness and well-being at stake. The core memories that power her personality islands are at risk of being lost, threatening her sense of identity and her ability to cope with challenges. Joy and Sadness must work together to restore Riley's core memories and guide her towards emotional balance.

Overall Mood: Whimsical, heartfelt, and ultimately hopeful.

Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:

Scene 1: A sense of wonder and curiosity as we are introduced to Riley's inner world and the emotions controlling her.

Scene 7: A sense of anxiety and desperation as Joy tries to prevent Sadness from affecting Riley's core memories.

Scene 18: A sense of somberness and nostalgia as Bing Bong's rocket, symbolizing his connection to Riley, is destroyed.

Scene 32: A feeling of hope and resilience as Joy and Bing Bong overcome obstacles and work together to save Riley's core memories.

Scene 42: A sense of joy and celebration as Riley returns home and the family comes together.

Standout Features:

Unique Hook: The story is told from the perspective of emotions, giving a unique insight into the internal world of a young girl, as her feelings navigate the challenges of growing up and adjusting to a new environment.

Genre Blend : The movie blends animation, comedy, drama, and fantasy elements into a compelling and engaging story.

Distinctive Setting : The setting of Riley's mind is visually captivating and imaginative, with each emotion having a unique personality and role, creating a colorful and engaging world to explore.

Unique Characters : The emotions, including Joy, Sadness, Anger, Fear, and Disgust, are not only visually distinct but also have unique personalities and motivations, contributing to the film's humor and heart.

Plot Twist : The revelation that Sadness plays a vital role in Riley's well-being is a surprising and meaningful plot twist, highlighting the importance of accepting and integrating all emotions.

Comparable Scripts:

Inside Out (2015)

Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind (2004)

The Good Place (TV Series)

Inside (2015)

A Wrinkle in Time (2018)

The Perks of Being a Wallflower (2012)

Market Analysis

Budget Estimate:$150-200 million

Target Audience Demographics: Families with children, adults who enjoy animated films, fans of coming-of-age stories.

Marketability: It features a captivating story, relatable characters, and stunning visuals, making it likely to appeal to a broad audience. Its themes of emotional growth and the importance of family resonate with viewers of all ages.

Its unique blend of animation, humor, and emotional depth has the potential to draw in both children and adults. The movie's themes of self-discovery and acceptance are relevant to a wide range of viewers. Additionally, its imaginative and engaging world-building will appeal to those who enjoy fantasy and adventure.

Its strong cast of characters and compelling storyline combined with its innovative and visually appealing world of emotions will appeal to a wide audience. Its themes of emotional intelligence and resilience are relevant to viewers of all ages.

Profit Potential: High, with potential for significant box office revenue and merchandising opportunities.

Scene Level Percentiles

The screenplay boasts a strong concept and emotional impact but needs improvement in plot, dialogue, and conflict. The writer's intuitive style could benefit from integrating more conceptual elements to create a more well-rounded and engaging experience.

Script Level Percentiles

Characters: 7.75 See More
Premise: 6.25 See More
Structure: 7.75 See More
Theme: 7.75 See More
Visual Impact: 7.75 See More
Emotional Impact: 7.75 See More
Conflict: 6.5 See More
Originality: 8.5 See More

Emotions Elicited Percentiles

Robert McKee: "The audience doesn’t go to the movies to see plot; they go to feel emotion, to be moved."
This is a rough estimate of how the average intensity of emotions elicited in this script compare to all scripts in the Vault (all genres).
Higher isn't necessarily better. This is FYI.

Key Strengths

The screenplay boasts a very strong concept, evident in the 100th percentile ranking for 'conceptrating'. This suggests a captivating and unique central idea that grabs the audience's attention.
The emotional impact of the story shines through, scoring in the 78th percentile for 'emotional_impact'. This indicates the screenplay effectively evokes a strong emotional response in the audience, leaving a lasting impression.
The screenplay displays a high degree of originality, achieving a 91st percentile for 'originality_score'. This suggests the story and its execution feel fresh and distinct from other works, potentially creating a unique and engaging experience for the viewer.

Areas for Improvement

The screenplay could benefit from strengthening its plot structure, as it currently ranks in the 22nd percentile for 'plotrating'. This suggests the writer might consider revisiting the plot's flow and pacing, ensuring a more compelling and engaging narrative arc.
The dialogue, while not weak, ranks in the 13th percentile for 'dialoguerating', indicating room for improvement. The writer might focus on sharpening the dialogue's impact, wit, and natural flow to better serve the characters and the story.
The screenplay's conflict level sits at the 23rd percentile for 'conflict_level', highlighting the need for more compelling and impactful conflict to drive the story forward. Exploring new avenues of conflict and raising the stakes could further engage the audience.
Despite strong 'emotional_impact', the screenplay could benefit from further developing the 'stakes' of the story, currently sitting at the 24th percentile. Raising the stakes can create more tension and urgency, making the characters' actions feel more consequential and impactful.

Writer Style

The writer leans towards an intuitive style, showcasing strong emotional impact and originality. This is evident in the high rankings for 'emotional_impact', 'originality_score', and 'engagement_score'. The lower scores in areas like plot and dialogue suggest a potential focus on character development and emotional themes, which are typically hallmarks of an intuitive writer.

Balancing Elements

The writer should strive to balance their strengths in concept and emotional impact with improvements in plot and dialogue. While the concept is strong, a well-structured and engaging plot is crucial for keeping the audience invested.
While the writer has a knack for creating emotional impact, further strengthening the dialogue can enhance the emotional connection with the characters and the story. This can help amplify the emotional resonance of the screenplay.

Intuition Level

Intuitive

Overall Assessment

The screenplay demonstrates potential, particularly in its unique concept and emotional impact. By focusing on strengthening the plot structure, dialogue, and conflict, the writer can elevate the screenplay to a higher level of engagement and impact. The writer's intuitive style, while valuable, could benefit from a strategic integration of more conceptual elements to create a more well-rounded and engaging experience for the audience.

How this was done: Each criteria is ranked in comparison to scripts in our Vault (such as The Matrix, Breaking Bad, etc.) This allows you to see where you stand compared to other produced scripts for each criteria.

How scenes compare to the Scripts in our Library

Note: The ratings are the averages of all the scenes.

Title	Grade	Percentile	Before	After
Scene Concept	8.7	99	Inglorious Basterds: 8.6	Inside Out: 8.7
Scene Originality	8.95	88	Inception: 8.93	Some like it hot : 8.95
Scene Emotional Impact	8.2	78	Inception: 8.1	Terminator 2: 8.2
Scene Engagement	9.00	77	Almost Famous: 8.98	fight Club: 9.00
Scene Character Changes	7.1	66	Cruel Intentions: 7.0	Knives Out: 7.1
Scene Internal Goal	8.10	66	Poor Things: 8.09	Good Will Hunting: 8.10
Script Originality	8.50	63	Sherlock Holmes: 8.25	face/off: 8.50
Overall Script	8.10	54	Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde : 8.06	the pursuit of happyness: 8.10
Script Emotional Impact	7.75	46	Inception: 7.50	Erin Brokovich: 7.75
Scene Characters	8.2	44	Hot Fuzz: 8.1	face/off: 8.2
Scene Unpredictability	7.42	42	Dr. Jekyll and Mr Hyde : 7.41	Inside Out: 7.42
Scene External Goal	7.14	41	Stranger Things: 7.13	Psycho: 7.14
Scene Story Forward	8.0	40	Midsommar: 7.9	severance (TV): 8.0
Script Visual Impact	7.75	39	Midsommar: 7.50	fight Club: 7.75
Scene Formatting	8.10	37	Fleabag: 8.09	glass Onion Knives Out : 8.10
Script Structure	8.10	37	Fleabag: 8.09	glass Onion Knives Out : 8.10
Script Structure	7.75	34	Inception: 7.50	fight Club: 7.75
Scene Overall	8.2	34	Almost Famous: 8.1	a few good men: 8.2
Scene Pacing	8.19	31	Midsommar: 8.18	There's something about Mary: 8.19
Scene Plot	7.6	26	Birdman: 7.5	severance (TV): 7.6
Scene High Stakes	6.7	25	American Beauty: 6.6	Rear Window: 6.7
Scene Conflict Level	7.0	24	Amadeus: 6.9	Boyz n the hood: 7.0
Script Theme	7.75	21	Zootopia: 7.50	fight Club: 7.75
Script Characters	7.75	20	Inception: 7.50	Blade Runner: 7.75
Scene Dialogue	7.3	14	Stranger Things: 7.2	Rambo: 7.3
Script Conflict	6.50	2	Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog: 6.25	Her: 6.50
Script Premise	6.25	0	-	Inside Out: 6.25

Writer's Voice

Summary:The writer's voice is whimsical, imaginative, and emotionally resonant. They blend humor and emotional depth effectively, creating a unique style that is both playful and poignant. The narrative is driven by internal struggles and the complexities of human emotions, conveyed through creative dialogue and imaginative scene descriptions.

Best representation: Scene 12 - Joy and Sadness's Journey to Headquarters. This scene is the best representation because it effectively combines humor, emotion, and action, showcasing the writer's ability to create a dynamic and engaging narrative. The dialogue is witty and engaging, highlighting the unique personalities of each emotion, while the narrative description effectively conveys the chaos and urgency of the situation. This scene also demonstrates the writer's skill in using visual imagery to convey complex emotional concepts, creating a powerful and memorable moment.

Memorable Lines:

Bing Bong: Take her to the moon for me. Okay? (Scene 36)
Riley: I know you don’t want me to but... I miss home. I miss Minnesota. (Scene 39)
Joy: We are gonna to have a good day, which will turn into a good week, which will turn into a good year, which turns into a good LIFE! (Scene 10)
Sadness: I only make everything worse! (Scene 37)
Bing Bong: Take her to the moon for me. Okay? (Scene 36)

Writing Style:

The screenplay exhibits a unique writing style that blends imaginative storytelling, emotional depth, and humor to explore complex themes, internal conflicts, and the inner workings of the mind. It often utilizes surreal and fantastical elements to enhance the narrative and create a distinctive atmosphere.

Style Similarities:

Pete Docter
Charlie Kaufman

Other Similarities: The screenplay's writing style suggests a deliberate effort to combine the strengths of Docter and Kaufman's writing styles. This fusion creates a distinct and engaging narrative experience that appeals to both the heart and the mind.

Story Shape

Emotions Elicited

Engine: Claude

Screenplay Rating:

Recommend

Executive Summary

The screenplay for 'Inside Out' is a highly imaginative and emotionally resonant exploration of a young girl's inner world. Through the lens of personified emotions navigating Riley's psyche, the story seamlessly blends humor, heart, and profound insights into the complexities of growing up. The screenplay's consistent character arcs, thematic depth, and innovative storytelling make it a standout example of Pixar's mastery of the animated feature genre.

Strengths

The introduction of the 'Islands of Personality' and how they are formed by Riley's core memories is an excellent way to establish the core concept of the screenplay and provide a clear visual representation of Riley's inner world. high ( Scene 3 )
The seamless integration of Riley's daily life and interactions with her parents, as well as the exploration of her emotions during these moments, helps to ground the fantastical premise in a relatable and grounded reality. high ( Scene 4 )
The handling of Riley's first day at her new school is a standout sequence, with the screenplay adeptly balancing the comedy of the emotions' attempts to keep Riley happy with the genuine emotional turmoil she is experiencing. high ( Scene 11 )
The introduction of Bing Bong, Riley's imaginative friend, and his subsequent role in the story adds a delightful and poignant layer to the narrative, exploring the bittersweet process of growing up and letting go of childhood. medium ( Scene 17 )
The sequence in which Joy and Sadness become separated from the other emotions and must find their way back to Headquarters is a thrilling and emotionally charged moment that drives the story forward in a compelling way. high ( Scene 26 )

Areas of Improvement

The sequence involving Riley's parents and their attempts to understand her changed behavior could be strengthened by providing more depth and nuance to their emotional reactions, as well as exploring the potential conflict between their desire to support Riley and their own struggles with the family's relocation. medium ( Scene 15 )
The scene in the Abstract Thought building, while visually striking, could benefit from a clearer and more coherent logic to the way the characters navigate and ultimately escape the environment, as it currently feels somewhat disjointed. medium ( Scene 23 )

MissingElements

Overall, the screenplay is quite comprehensive and does not have any glaring omissions. However, some additional exploration of the other emotions' internal dynamics and how they contribute to Riley's overall emotional landscape could further strengthen the narrative. low

NotablePoints

The screenplay's handling of Riley's first day at her new school, with the emotions' attempts to keep her happy contrasting with the genuine emotional turmoil she is experiencing, is a standout moment that demonstrates the screenplay's ability to balance humor and pathos. high ( Scene 11 )
The sequence in which Joy and Sadness become separated from the other emotions and must find their way back to Headquarters is a thrilling and emotionally charged moment that drives the story forward in a compelling way, and highlights the screenplay's strong character development and narrative structure. high ( Scene 26 )
The final sequence, in which Joy and Sadness work together to help Riley through a difficult emotional moment, is a powerful and poignant resolution that reinforces the screenplay's central themes of the importance of emotional balance and the value of embracing all aspects of the human experience. high ( Scene 40 )

Blind Spots

Lack of Diversity While the screenplay does a strong job of exploring the emotional journey of its central character, Riley, the supporting cast and background characters could benefit from greater diversity in terms of representation. The screenplay could be strengthened by incorporating more diverse perspectives and experiences, particularly within the family and school settings. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Overexplanation In a few instances, the screenplay tends to over-explain certain concepts or emotional beats, which can detract from the natural flow of the story. For example, in the sequence where Joy is trying to help Sadness understand the importance of finding the fun, the dialogue could be streamlined to allow the emotional beats to land more organically. low

Engine: Gemini

Screenplay Rating:

Highly Recommend

Executive Summary

Inside Out is a brilliantly conceived and executed animated screenplay that successfully tackles complex themes of childhood and emotional development in a way that is both entertaining and thought-provoking. It features strong character arcs, an inventive and engaging narrative, and a unique visual style that perfectly complements the story. While the screenplay could benefit from minor pacing adjustments in a few scenes, its strengths far outweigh any weaknesses, making it a compelling and highly recommended script for production.

Strengths

The screenplay is highly creative and original, bringing to life a complex and imaginative world within Riley's mind. The personification of emotions as characters, each with their own distinct personalities and motivations, is ingenious and allows for a nuanced exploration of emotional development and the complexities of human psychology. high ( Scene 1 Scene 2 Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 Scene 9 Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 14 Scene 15 Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 22 Scene 23 Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 29 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 32 Scene 33 Scene 34 Scene 35 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 Scene 42 )
The character development is excellent, with each emotion undergoing a significant journey throughout the story. Joy, initially the dominant force, learns to accept Sadness's role and value, while Sadness gains confidence and self-awareness. The other emotions, particularly Anger and Fear, also evolve, demonstrating the importance of working together and embracing different perspectives. These nuanced character arcs contribute to the film's emotional depth and make the characters feel real and relatable. high ( Scene 2 Scene 7 Scene 12 Scene 22 Scene 29 Scene 36 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 42 )
The pacing of the screenplay is generally well-balanced, seamlessly transitioning between moments of humor, tension, and emotional depth. The script effectively uses flashbacks and internal monologues to provide context and depth to the narrative. However, a few scenes could benefit from minor pacing adjustments to avoid feeling rushed or drawn out. medium ( Scene 3 Scene 12 Scene 17 Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 25 Scene 27 Scene 33 Scene 35 Scene 38 Scene 41 )
The screenplay expertly integrates visual elements, leveraging the capabilities of animation to create a truly unique and immersive experience. The visual metaphors and imaginative worlds, such as Imaginationland and the Memory Dump, are both creative and effective in conveying the abstract concepts of emotions and memories. The screenplay also utilizes animation techniques to enhance comedic moments, making the humor both visually engaging and genuinely funny. high ( Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 22 Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 34 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 Scene 42 )
The screenplay's narrative is compelling and engaging, drawing the audience into the journey of Riley and her emotions. The plot is structured in a way that balances humor, suspense, and emotional depth, keeping the audience invested throughout the film. The use of flashbacks and internal monologues provides a deeper understanding of the characters and their motivations. The resolution is satisfying and offers a hopeful message about the importance of embracing all emotions. high ( Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 13 Scene 22 Scene 27 Scene 29 Scene 34 Scene 35 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 40 Scene 41 )

Areas of Improvement

While the pacing is generally good, a few scenes could benefit from minor adjustments to enhance the flow of the story. For example, some scenes, particularly those involving the Forgetters in Long-Term Memory, could potentially be trimmed to avoid slowing down the pace of the narrative. Similarly, a few action sequences might feel more impactful with slightly tighter pacing. medium ( Scene 14 Scene 19 Scene 23 Scene 28 Scene 31 Scene 32 Scene 35 )

MissingElements

The screenplay effectively establishes a unique and compelling world within Riley's mind, but it could benefit from further development of certain aspects of this world. For example, exploring the different sections of Long-Term Memory beyond the initial introduction could add depth and intrigue to the story. Similarly, expanding on the workings of the Subconscious and the Dream Productions facility could provide further insights into the workings of Riley's mind. low ( Scene 1 Scene 2 Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 Scene 9 Scene 10 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 14 Scene 15 Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 Scene 19 Scene 20 Scene 21 Scene 22 Scene 23 Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 29 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 32 Scene 33 Scene 34 Scene 35 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 Scene 42 )

NotablePoints

The screenplay effectively utilizes the unique capabilities of animation to enhance the storytelling. The animation style complements the story's themes and characters, creating a visually striking and memorable experience. The script also incorporates clever visual metaphors and imaginative sequences to effectively convey abstract concepts, making the story more engaging and accessible to a wider audience. high ( Scene 3 Scene 10 Scene 22 Scene 24 Scene 27 Scene 29 Scene 31 Scene 33 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 39 Scene 40 Scene 41 )
The screenplay incorporates a clever and engaging use of humor, adding depth and levity to the story. The comedic moments are well-integrated into the narrative, enhancing the emotional impact and making the characters more relatable. The humor is subtle and often arises from the interactions between the emotions and the situations they find themselves in, making the film both entertaining and thought-provoking. high ( Scene 4 Scene 9 Scene 12 Scene 15 Scene 19 Scene 20 Scene 22 Scene 26 Scene 29 Scene 30 Scene 32 Scene 36 Scene 37 Scene 38 Scene 40 Scene 42 )

Blind Spots

Character Motivation Blind Spot The screenplay might have missed opportunities to explore the deeper motivations of some of the characters, particularly the secondary emotions like Anger, Fear, and Disgust. While their personalities and functions are established, it would be helpful to understand their underlying needs and fears better. For example, why is Anger so easily triggered, or what fuels Fear's anxieties? Exploring their individual motivations could add depth and complexity to the story. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Lack of Conflict While the screenplay does an excellent job of establishing a unique world and characters, there could be more internal conflict and stakes within the story. For example, while Joy's initial attempts to suppress Sadness are present, this conflict could be explored further. What happens when Joy’s authority is challenged? What are the consequences of their disagreement? Developing this conflict could add tension and depth to the story. medium

Engine: GPT4

Screenplay Rating:

Highly Recommend

Executive Summary

Inside Out is a masterfully crafted screenplay that delves into the complexities of human emotions through the imaginative portrayal of personified emotions within a young girl's mind. The screenplay excels in its unique concept, emotional depth, and character development, making it a compelling and engaging narrative. The pacing is well-balanced, and the resolution is both satisfying and thought-provoking. This screenplay stands out for its originality and the profound way it addresses universal themes of growing up and emotional resilience.

Strengths

The introduction of the personified emotions is both creative and immediately engaging, setting the tone for the entire film. high ( Scene 1 )
The emotional climax where Joy realizes the importance of Sadness is a powerful and poignant moment that adds depth to the narrative. high ( Scene 13 )
The resolution where Riley reconciles with her parents and acknowledges her feelings is a satisfying and emotionally resonant conclusion. high ( Scene 39 )
The imaginative settings like Imaginationland and Abstract Thought are visually and conceptually inventive, adding richness to the world-building. medium ( Scene 22 )
The final scenes that show the new, expanded console and the new core memories highlight the growth and development of Riley's character. medium ( Scene 41 )

Areas of Improvement

The pacing in the middle act can feel a bit slow, particularly during the scenes in Long-Term Memory. Tightening these scenes could maintain better momentum. medium ( Scene 6 )
Some of the abstract concepts, like the Abstract Thought sequence, might be confusing for younger audiences. Simplifying these could enhance clarity. low ( Scene 23 )
The transition from dream sequences to waking life can be jarring. Smoother transitions could improve the overall flow. low ( Scene 28 )
The subplot involving Riley stealing her mom's credit card feels underdeveloped and could be expanded to add more tension. medium ( Scene 34 )
The resolution of the bus sequence could be more dramatic to heighten the stakes and emotional payoff. medium ( Scene 38 )

MissingElements

A deeper exploration of the other emotions' backstories could add more depth to their characters. low
More interaction between Riley and her new friends in San Francisco could provide a better sense of her adapting to her new environment. medium
A clearer depiction of the passage of time would help in understanding Riley's emotional journey. low

NotablePoints

The screenplay's unique concept of personifying emotions is immediately captivating and sets it apart from other animated features. high ( Scene 1 )
The emotional depth and complexity of Joy's realization about Sadness is a standout moment that adds significant weight to the narrative. high ( Scene 13 )
Bing Bong's sacrifice is a heart-wrenching and memorable moment that underscores the themes of friendship and loss. high ( Scene 36 )
The expanded console and new core memories symbolize Riley's growth and the integration of her emotions, providing a satisfying conclusion. medium ( Scene 41 )
The creative and visually stunning settings like Imaginationland and Abstract Thought add a layer of richness to the screenplay. medium ( Scene 22 )

Blind Spots

Complexity of Abstract Concepts Some sequences, like Abstract Thought, may be too complex for younger audiences to fully grasp. Simplifying these concepts could enhance clarity and accessibility. medium

Amateur Giveaways

Pacing Issues The pacing in the middle act can drag, particularly during the scenes in Long-Term Memory. Tightening these scenes could maintain better momentum. medium

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Screenplay Insights:

Characters: 7.75, The screenplay effectively introduces a vibrant cast of characters representing emotions, each with distinct personalities and functions. The narrative showcases compelling growth in Joy, who evolves from a singular focus on happiness to embracing the importance of all emotions, particularly Sadness. However, some characters' arcs feel underdeveloped, especially Anger and Fear, requiring further exploration to achieve greater complexity and relatability. Expanding upon these characters' motivations and internal struggles would enhance the screenplay's emotional resonance and provide a more engaging experience for the audience. See More

Premise: 6.25, The screenplay's premise, while imaginative, could benefit from greater clarity and a more compelling hook. While the concept of emotions controlling a young girl's mind is intriguing, the narrative's focus on the emotional journey within Riley's head rather than the external events of her life could lead to a less engaging experience for viewers. The screenplay can be further enhanced by exploring more compelling themes, refining the hook, and enriching the initial setup. See More

Structure: 7.75, The screenplay "Inside Out" boasts a creative and engaging premise, effectively introducing the central concepts of emotions and their impact on a young girl's life. The story's structure is generally sound, with a clear progression from the initial setup to the climactic resolution. However, the pacing can be uneven, particularly in the middle acts, and the narrative could benefit from greater emotional depth and thematic exploration. While the concept is original, the execution could be further refined to achieve a more satisfying balance between humor and emotional resonance. See More

Theme: 7.75, The screenplay effectively explores the theme of emotional intelligence and the importance of understanding and embracing all emotions, particularly sadness. While the narrative is engaging and visually rich, there's room to further deepen the emotional impact of these themes through more nuanced character development and conflict, particularly in showcasing the full spectrum of emotions beyond Joy. See More

Visual Impact: 7.75, The screenplay's visual imagery is strong, effectively using color and symbolism to represent emotions and memories. The world of Riley's mind is distinct and vibrant, but some scenes lack detail in their descriptions and could be strengthened. See More

Emotional Impact: 7.75, The screenplay effectively introduces a vibrant cast of characters representing different emotions, each with distinct personalities and relatable struggles. The narrative explores themes of change, loss, and the importance of processing emotions. While the screenplay successfully evokes a range of feelings, it could benefit from deepening character interactions, exploring emotional complexities in greater detail, and providing more nuanced emotional resolutions. See More

Conflict: 6.5, The screenplay effectively establishes an internal conflict between Joy and Sadness, which drives much of the narrative. However, the external conflicts, particularly those involving Riley and her family, often feel underdeveloped and lack the intensity to fully captivate the audience. The stakes, while present, could be amplified to create a more gripping sense of urgency and emotional investment. See More

Originality: 8.5, The screenplay showcases strong originality and creativity in its storytelling and character development, with a unique premise and innovative narrative structure. It explores complex emotional themes in a fresh and engaging way, making it a standout in its genre. See More

Summary "Inside Out" follows the journey of a young girl named Riley as she navigates the challenges of moving to a new city. Her emotions, including Joy, Sadness, Fear, Anger, and Disgust, work together in Headquarters to guide her through the ups and downs of her experiences. The film explores the importance of memories, core personality traits, and the impact of emotions on Riley's well-being. As Riley learns to balance her emotions and embrace both joy and sadness, she discovers the power of family, resilience, and acceptance in shaping her identity and finding happiness in her new life.

Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The screenplay, while aiming for an imaginative and emotionally resonant journey through Riley's inner world, faces challenges in maintaining a clear and engaging plot. The screenplay's strength lies in its character development, particularly for Joy and Sadness, showcasing their emotional journeys and growth. The concept of emotions as distinct characters within Riley's mind provides a unique and creative framework. However, the plot suffers from pacing issues. The initial setup is somewhat slow, and the story's central conflict lacks a clear driving force. The scenes often jump between Riley's external experiences and her inner world, creating a disjointed flow. Additionally, the screenplay lacks a compelling antagonist, leaving the narrative feeling somewhat aimless. While the concept of memories being lost in the Memory Dump presents a potential conflict, it isn't fully explored or resolved in a satisfying way.

Suggestions: To enhance the plot, consider streamlining the narrative by focusing on a more focused conflict that drives the story forward. This could involve introducing a clear antagonist, whether internal or external, that poses a significant threat to Riley's emotional well-being. Exploring the consequences of losing core memories could also be a central conflict, raising the stakes for the characters. The pacing could be improved by eliminating unnecessary scenes and focusing on scenes that directly advance the plot. The emotional impact of the story could also be amplified by weaving together Riley's external struggles with her inner world in a more organic and cohesive way, showcasing how her emotional journey shapes her experiences and vice versa.

Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here

Beginning The screenplay's beginning establishes a strong foundation for its unique premise of emotions personified within Riley's mind. The initial scenes introduce the characters and their personalities effectively, highlighting their distinct roles and interactions. However, the lack of a clear antagonist or a driving conflict creates a somewhat slow pace in the early stages. While the audience is introduced to the concept of core memories, their significance isn't fully emphasized in the beginning, leading to a lack of immediate stakes or urgency. Additionally, the connection between Riley's external world and her internal emotional world is not fully established, leaving the audience with a sense of disconnection.

Suggestions: To improve the beginning, consider introducing a more immediate conflict that drives the story forward. This could involve a challenge that Riley faces early on, forcing her emotions to work together to overcome it. Additionally, highlighting the significance of core memories, showcasing their power and impact on Riley's personality, would create a sense of urgency and importance from the outset. Establishing a clear connection between Riley's external world and her internal emotional world is crucial. This could involve showcasing how her emotions are directly influenced by her experiences or how they influence her behavior, creating a more engaging and connected narrative.

Middle The screenplay's middle section features a series of events that contribute to Riley's emotional journey. The exploration of the various aspects of Riley's personality through the Islands of Personality is a clever concept that provides a visual and thematic representation of her inner world. The screenplay also effectively showcases the challenges that Riley faces as she adjusts to a new environment and deals with the emotional fallout of the move. However, the middle section could be strengthened by creating a more cohesive narrative flow. The constant transitions between Riley's external experiences and her internal world create a disjointed feeling. Additionally, the exploration of the Memory Dump and the Forgetters feels somewhat underdeveloped, leaving the audience with unanswered questions and a lack of resolution.

Suggestions: To improve the middle section, consider streamlining the narrative flow by creating a clear path for the story to unfold. This could involve focusing on a specific goal or objective that drives the characters forward. The transitions between Riley's external world and her internal world could be made smoother by linking the events more explicitly. Additionally, the exploration of the Memory Dump and the Forgetters could be enhanced by creating a more tangible conflict or threat. This could involve showcasing the potential consequences of losing core memories or developing the Forgetters into more significant antagonists.

Ending The screenplay's ending offers a sense of resolution, with Riley finding a sense of balance and acceptance in her new life. The return of the core memories and the creation of a new Family Island represent a positive outcome for Riley's emotional journey. However, the ending could be further strengthened by providing a more satisfying closure to the narrative. The fate of Bing Bong feels somewhat unresolved, leaving the audience with a sense of emptiness. The resolution of the conflict regarding the Memory Dump is also not fully explored, leaving the audience with unanswered questions. Additionally, the final scene, which showcases Riley's new hockey game, feels somewhat anticlimactic and doesn't fully capture the emotional impact of her journey.

Suggestions: To improve the ending, consider providing a more definitive resolution for Bing Bong's story, showcasing his sacrifice and his lasting impact on Riley. The consequences of losing core memories and the fate of the Memory Dump could be explored more thoroughly, providing a more satisfying closure to these storylines. Additionally, the final scene could be made more impactful by emphasizing the emotional significance of Riley's progress and growth. This could involve highlighting how her journey has shaped her character or showcasing the positive impact of her emotional understanding on her life.

CharacterInconsistencies

Character Sadness
Description Sadness's behavior and role seem inconsistent. In the early part of the script, Sadness is portrayed as a passive, ineffective emotion who Joy tries to isolate. However, later on Sadness becomes a crucial part of the team and is instrumental in helping Riley. The transition from Sadness being a problem to solving the problem feels abrupt.
( Scene 11 (INT. RILEY'S HEADQUARTERS) Scene 35 (EXT. LONG-TERM MEMORY CLIFFS) )

StoryInconsistencies

Description The script jumps back and forth in time, going from Riley at age 11 to age 3 and back. This creates some confusion in terms of the timeline and Riley's development. It's not always clear what age Riley is in each scene.
( Scene 3 (INT. HEADQUARTERS) Scene 4 (INT. RILEY'S MINNESOTA BEDROOM - NIGHT) )
Description The script transitions abruptly from Riley's happy life in Minnesota to the family's move to San Francisco. This creates a significant tonal shift that isn't fully earned or contextualized. The story would benefit from a more gradual transition that better establishes Riley's emotional state before the big change.
( Scene 3 (INT. HEADQUARTERS) Scene 4 (INT. RILEY'S MINNESOTA BEDROOM - NIGHT) Scene 5 (EXT. SAN FRANCISCO HOUSE - DAY) )

PlotHoles

Description The rules and implications of the Abstract Thought sequence are not fully explained. It's unclear why Joy and Sadness enter this space, how it works, and what the consequences are. This creates a confusing narrative detour that doesn't seem to have a clear purpose or payoff in the overall story.
( Scene 23 (INT. ABSTRACT THOUGHT BUILDING) )
Description The Subconscious is introduced as a mysterious, dangerous place, but its function and significance within the story are not fully developed. It's not clear why Joy and Sadness need to go there or what they ultimately achieve by doing so.
( Scene 30 (INT. SUBCONSCIOUS) )

DialogueAuthenticity

Description The dialogue between the Emotions, particularly Fear, Anger, and Disgust, sometimes feels overly on-the-nose or exaggerated, rather than authentic to their individual personalities and the situation.
( Scene 14 (INT. RILEY'S HEADQUARTERS) )
Description The dialogue in the dream sequence, with the teacher and students, has a somewhat artificial, sitcom-like quality that doesn't fully capture the surreal nature of the dream world.
( Scene 29 (INT. STAGE B - CLASSROOM SET) )

Redundancies

Element Dialogue
( Scene 2 (INT. KITCHEN) Scene 3 (INT. MINNESOTA LIVING ROOM) )
Suggestion The repeated dialogue between Riley and her parents about not getting dessert if she doesn't eat her dinner could be consolidated or trimmed to avoid feeling repetitive.
Element Exposition
( Scene 1 (INT. HEADQUARTERS) Scene 2 (INT. KITCHEN) Scene 3 (INT. HEADQUARTERS) )
Suggestion The script often reiterates or explains the same information about the Emotions and their roles multiple times. This could be streamlined to avoid feeling overly expository.

Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:

Joy

Joy is the embodiment of happiness and optimism. She is vibrant, energetic, and always striving to maintain a positive outlook on life. Joy's speaking style is upbeat, enthusiastic, and filled with colorful expressions and cheerful phrases. She is quick-witted, resourceful, and determined to keep Riley happy, even in the face of challenges. Joy's personality is infectious, uplifting, and she is a natural leader who motivates others with her unwavering positivity and resilience.

Sadness

Sadness is a melancholic, introspective, and empathetic character who feels deeply and often sees the downside of situations. She speaks softly and thoughtfully, expressing concern, doubt, and vulnerability. Sadness's dialogue is reflective, contemplative, and filled with poignant observations and insights. She is sensitive to others' emotions, values the importance of acknowledging and processing sadness, and offers comfort and support to those around her.

Fear

Fear is a neurotic and cautious character who is constantly on edge, always worrying about potential dangers and worst-case scenarios. He speaks in a jittery and panicked tone, using phrases like 'What if...?' and 'This is a disaster!' to highlight his anxious nature. Fear's dialogue is filled with warnings, alerts, and safety measures, reflecting his protective instincts and tendency to overthink. He is characterized by his purple color and tendency to list potential disasters, adding a sense of urgency and tension to the scene.

Disgust

Disgust is a sassy, opinionated, and judgmental character who embodies revulsion and has a keen sense of what is distasteful. She is critical, snarky, and quick to find fault in things, often expressing disgust at various situations or objects. Disgust speaks with a sharp and sarcastic tone, using witty and cutting remarks to showcase her disdain. She is focused on maintaining Riley's social image and reputation, always looking out for what's best and avoiding anything she deems unappealing.

Anger

Anger is the embodiment of frustration and reacts strongly to perceived injustices. He is fiery, impulsive, and quick to anger, but also has a sense of fairness. Anger's speaking style is loud, aggressive, sarcastic, and filled with fiery remarks and exclamations.

Dad

Dad is a complex character who is caring and playful with Riley, but often struggles to understand her emotional state. He is protective and loving, yet firm when necessary, showing a mix of warmth and authority in his speaking style. Dad is well-meaning but clueless at times, easily distracted by trivial matters and missing underlying tensions in the family dynamic. He tries to maintain control and discipline in the face of Riley's emotional outbursts, speaking with a mix of authority, frustration, and a struggle to connect with his daughter. Despite his shortcomings, Dad is a supportive and enthusiastic parent, always eager to cheer on Riley at her hockey games with an energetic and playful speaking style, using sports-related phrases and exclamations to show his excitement.

Riley

Riley is a complex character who is struggling to adjust to her new life in San Francisco while dealing with conflicting emotions and insecurities. She exhibits a mix of defiance, vulnerability, and sarcasm in her speaking style, using short, sharp phrases to convey her emotions. As the story progresses, Riley undergoes significant growth, showcasing authenticity and vulnerability in her emotions as she navigates her inner turmoil and external pressures.

Mom

Mom is a caring, nurturing, and understanding parent who is deeply invested in creating a supportive and open environment for her daughter, Riley. She is perceptive, empathetic, and patient, always trying to bridge the gap between Riley and her father. Mom's speaking style is warm, gentle, and reassuring, using comforting phrases to convey her affection and support for her family.

Bing Bong

Bing Bong is a whimsical, imaginative, and playful character who embodies creativity, childlike wonder, and loyalty. He speaks with a childlike innocence and excitement, using imaginative language, playful expressions, and heartfelt emotions. Bing Bong's unique phrases and playful demeanor add a sense of magic and fantasy to the scenes, while also showcasing his deep bond with Riley.

Character	Arc	Critique	Suggestions
Joy	Throughout the screenplay, Joy starts off as solely focused on maintaining happiness but undergoes a significant change when she realizes the importance of all emotions, especially Sadness. She learns the value of teamwork, sacrifice, and empathy, ultimately putting Riley's well-being above her own desires. Joy's character arc shows growth, development, and a deeper understanding of the complexities of human emotions.	The character arc for Joy is well-developed and showcases a meaningful journey of self-discovery and growth. However, to enhance the emotional impact of the arc, it could benefit from more internal conflict and moments of vulnerability for Joy. This would add depth to her character and make her transformation even more compelling for the audience.	To improve the character arc for Joy, consider incorporating scenes where she struggles with her own emotions and doubts her ability to always maintain happiness. This internal conflict could create a more nuanced portrayal of Joy and make her eventual realization and growth more impactful. Additionally, exploring her relationship with the other emotions in more depth could add layers to her character and provide opportunities for further development.
Sadness	Sadness starts off feeling like a burden and struggling with her role in the group. However, as the story progresses, she learns to find strength in expressing and understanding emotions. Through her journey, she showcases vulnerability, depth, and emotional resonance, ultimately becoming a crucial and compassionate character who offers comfort and empathy to others.	The character arc for Sadness is well-developed and allows for growth and transformation throughout the story. However, to enhance the arc further, it would be beneficial to explore Sadness's internal struggles and conflicts in more depth. This could involve delving into her past experiences or traumas that have shaped her melancholic nature, providing a deeper understanding of her character and motivations.	To improve the character arc for Sadness, consider incorporating more moments of internal reflection and self-discovery. Showcasing her journey towards self-acceptance and finding her place within the group could add layers to her character development. Additionally, exploring her relationships with the other emotions and how they influence her growth could provide a more nuanced portrayal of Sadness's emotional journey.
Fear	Throughout the screenplay, Fear starts off as overly cautious and anxious, constantly warning Riley about potential dangers. However, as the story progresses, Fear learns to trust in Riley's ability to navigate challenges and begins to let go of his need to control every situation. By the end of the film, Fear has grown to be more supportive and less fearful, embracing the idea that some risks are worth taking for growth and happiness.	The character arc for Fear is well-developed and shows growth and development throughout the screenplay. However, there could be more opportunities to explore Fear's vulnerabilities and fears that drive his behavior. Additionally, incorporating moments of comic relief or moments of triumph for Fear could add depth to his character and make his arc more engaging for the audience.	To improve the character arc for Fear, consider adding flashback scenes or internal monologues that delve into the root causes of his fears and anxieties. This could provide a deeper understanding of Fear's character and make his growth more impactful. Additionally, incorporating moments of humor or moments where Fear conquers his fears could add emotional depth and resonance to his arc, making it more satisfying for the audience.
Disgust	Disgust starts off as a critical and judgmental emotion, quick to dismiss and reject unpleasant experiences. However, as the story progresses, she learns to appreciate the positive aspects of situations and becomes more open-minded. Through her interactions with the other emotions, Disgust begins to understand the importance of balance and acceptance, ultimately leading to her embracing a more positive outlook on life.	The character arc for Disgust is well-developed and allows for growth and change throughout the story. However, there could be more depth added to her transformation by exploring the reasons behind her critical nature and delving into her vulnerabilities. Additionally, providing more opportunities for Disgust to showcase her positive qualities and strengths could further enhance her character development.	To improve the character arc for Disgust, consider incorporating flashback scenes or moments of introspection that reveal the origins of her judgmental nature. This could add complexity to her character and provide a deeper understanding of her motivations. Additionally, give Disgust more agency in the story by allowing her to take decisive actions that contribute to the resolution of conflicts. This will showcase her growth and development more effectively.
Anger	Throughout the screenplay, Anger starts off as a hot-headed and impulsive character who reacts strongly to negative situations. As the story progresses, he learns to channel his intense emotions in a more constructive way, using his passion and assertiveness to stand up for what is right and help his friends overcome challenges. By the end of the film, Anger has evolved into a more balanced character who still retains his fiery nature but now uses it for the greater good.	The character arc for Anger is well-developed and allows for growth and change throughout the screenplay. However, to enhance the arc further, it would be beneficial to explore Anger's vulnerabilities and deeper motivations behind his intense emotions. This could add more depth to his character and make his transformation more impactful.	To improve the character arc for Anger, consider incorporating moments of introspection where he reflects on the root causes of his anger and learns to manage it in a healthier way. Additionally, exploring his relationships with the other emotions and how they influence his behavior could provide more insight into his character development. Lastly, ensure that Anger's growth is integrated seamlessly into the overall narrative to create a cohesive and satisfying arc.
Dad	Throughout the screenplay, Dad goes on a journey of self-discovery and growth as he learns to better understand and connect with Riley. Initially clueless and struggling to communicate with his daughter, he faces challenges in maintaining control and discipline. However, through his experiences and interactions with Riley, he begins to see the importance of empathy and emotional connection in their relationship. By the end of the film, Dad has evolved into a more understanding and supportive parent, able to communicate with Riley on a deeper level and show his love in a more meaningful way.	The character arc for Dad is well-developed and shows a clear progression from clueless to understanding. However, there could be more depth added to his struggles and growth throughout the screenplay. It would be beneficial to explore the reasons behind Dad's initial disconnect with Riley and delve deeper into his emotional journey as he learns to connect with her. Additionally, more emphasis could be placed on the impact of his growth on their relationship and how it ultimately strengthens their bond.	To improve the character arc, consider incorporating flashback scenes or moments of introspection for Dad to reflect on his past actions and their impact on Riley. This can provide a deeper understanding of his character and motivations, adding complexity to his growth throughout the film. Additionally, focus on the emotional moments between Dad and Riley to highlight the evolution of their relationship and the significance of their connection. By emphasizing these aspects, the character arc for Dad can be more impactful and resonate with the audience on a deeper level.
Riley	Riley starts off as a sarcastic and anxious teenager who is struggling to adjust to her new life in San Francisco. Throughout the screenplay, she experiences a range of emotions, from defiance and frustration to vulnerability and realization. As she confronts her inner turmoil and external pressures, Riley ultimately finds resolution and growth, learning to embrace her emotions and find a sense of belonging in her new environment.	The character arc for Riley is well-developed, showcasing her growth and emotional journey throughout the screenplay. However, there could be more clarity in highlighting specific moments or events that trigger her growth and transformation. Additionally, incorporating more depth into Riley's relationships with other characters could enhance her character development and add layers to her arc.	To improve the character arc for Riley, consider adding specific scenes or interactions that serve as catalysts for her growth and transformation. Explore her relationships with other characters in more depth, showing how they impact her emotional journey and contribute to her development. Additionally, consider incorporating moments of introspection or self-discovery for Riley to further explore her inner turmoil and showcase her emotional evolution.
Mom	Throughout the screenplay, Mom undergoes a transformation from initially struggling to navigate the challenges of raising a teenager in a new environment to becoming a more confident and understanding parent who successfully bridges the gap between Riley and her father. She learns to communicate more effectively with her daughter and grows in her ability to provide emotional support and guidance.	The character arc for Mom is well-developed and realistic, showing growth and development over the course of the screenplay. However, it could benefit from more specific challenges or conflicts that Mom faces in her journey to better understand and support Riley. This would add depth to her character arc and make her transformation even more impactful.	To improve the character arc for Mom, consider introducing specific conflicts or obstacles that she must overcome in her efforts to support Riley. This could include moments of doubt or frustration, as well as opportunities for Mom to learn and grow from her mistakes. Additionally, exploring Mom's own emotional journey and backstory could add layers to her character and make her transformation more compelling.
Bing Bong	Throughout the screenplay, Bing Bong starts as a whimsical and imaginative imaginary friend to Riley, bringing creativity and fun to her life. As the story progresses, he faces emotional struggles and ultimately makes a significant sacrifice to save Riley, showcasing his loyalty, bravery, and selflessness. This sacrifice leads to a deeper understanding of his character and strengthens his bond with Riley.	The character arc for Bing Bong is well-developed, showcasing his whimsical nature, loyalty, and emotional depth. However, to further enhance his arc, there could be more exploration of his backstory and motivations, as well as additional moments that highlight his friendship with Riley. This would provide a stronger emotional impact and make his sacrifice even more poignant.	To improve the character arc for Bing Bong, consider adding flashback scenes that delve into his past with Riley, showing the depth of their friendship and the significance of their bond. Additionally, explore his internal struggles and conflicting emotions leading up to his sacrifice, to further highlight his bravery and selflessness. These additions would enrich his character development and make his arc even more compelling.

Theme

Theme Details

Themee Explanation

Emotions and Mental Health

The screenplay explores the inner workings of Riley's mind through the personification of her emotions. It delves into how different emotions like Joy, Sadness, Anger, Fear, and Disgust influence Riley's thoughts, actions, and overall mental health.

The central theme of the screenplay revolves around the importance of understanding and managing one's emotions, as well as the impact of mental health on an individual's well-being.

Strengthening Emotions and Mental Health:

Suggestion Type	How to Strengthen the Theme

Identity and Self-Discovery

The screenplay follows Riley's journey of self-discovery as she navigates through different aspects of her identity represented by the 'Islands of Personality'. Each island reflects a different facet of Riley's character, highlighting her growth and development.

The theme of identity and self-discovery is prominent as Riley explores her interests, relationships, and experiences to understand who she is and what shapes her personality.

Family and Relationships

The screenplay emphasizes the importance of family dynamics and relationships in shaping Riley's emotions and decisions. It showcases the bond between Riley and her parents, as well as her interactions with friends and teammates.

The theme of family and relationships underscores the impact of supportive relationships on an individual's emotional well-being and highlights the role of family in providing comfort and stability.

Change and Adaptation

The screenplay explores the challenges of adapting to change, such as moving to a new city and starting a new school. It depicts how Riley copes with unfamiliar situations and the emotions that arise from significant life changes.

The theme of change and adaptation delves into the resilience and flexibility required to navigate transitions, highlighting the importance of coping mechanisms and support systems during periods of change.

Memory and Core Memories

The screenplay delves into the significance of memories, particularly core memories, in shaping Riley's personality and emotional responses. It explores how memories influence her perceptions, behaviors, and overall mental state.

The theme of memory and core memories underscores the role of past experiences in shaping an individual's identity and emotional well-being, highlighting the power of memories to influence thoughts and actions.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	The protagonist's internal goal is to navigate through her emotions and find balance between joy and sadness. Her external goal is to adapt to her new life in San Francisco.
External Goals	The protagonist's external goal is to adapt to her new surroundings, make friends at school, and cope with the financial struggles her family faces.
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the importance of embracing all emotions, including sadness, and finding a balance between different perspectives and experiences.

Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals, as well as the philosophical conflict, contribute to her growth as she learns the value of embracing all emotions, adapting to change, and making decisions based on her true desires and feelings.

Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict help drive the protagonist's journey, shaping the narrative arc by introducing challenges and obstacles that push her towards growth and self-discovery.

Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict deepen the thematic exploration of identity, emotional resilience, and the importance of embracing all aspects of one's self to find true happiness and fulfillment.

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

Story Content

Character Development

Scene Elements

Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \ It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.

			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Character Changes	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Opposition	High stakes	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - Joy's Headquarters: A World of Emotions	Playful, Whimsical, Light-hearted	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	6	8	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
2 - Broccoli Battles and Core Memories	Humorous, Light-hearted, Playful	8	9	7	9	8	6	8	7	6	7	5	8	7	7	7	9	8	8	8
3 - The Islands of Personality	Playful, Nostalgic, Whimsical	8	9	7	9	8	6	8	7	5	7	4	7	7	7	6	9	8	8	8
4 - Leaving Home: A Journey Across America	Humorous, Whimsical, Nostalgic	8	9	7	9	8	6	8	7	6	7	6	8	7	7	7	9	8	8	8
5 - Moving Day Mayhem	Humorous, Whimsical, Light-hearted, Sarcastic	8	9	8	9	8	6	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
6 - Broccoli Pizza and Dinosaur Memories	Humorous, Whimsical, Nostalgic	8	9	7	9	8	6	8	7	6	6	5	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
7 - The Blueing of Memories	Humorous, Emotional, Playful	8	9	8	9	8	8	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
8 - Fear and Frustration in the New Home	Anxious, Humorous, Upbeat	8	9	8	8	8	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
9 - Joy Takes the Lead	Humorous, Positive, Supportive, Light-hearted	8	9	7	9	8	6	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
10 - Joy's Master Plan for a Great First Day	Hopeful, Playful, Supportive	8	9	8	9	7	7	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
11 - First Day Jitters and a Blue Memory	Excitement, Nervousness, Confusion, Humor	8	9	8	9	8	6	8	7	6	7	5	8	7	7	7	9	8	8	8
12 - The Blue Memory	Emotional, Whimsical, Tense	8	9	8	9	7	8	8	7	8	8	7	8	8	9	7	9	9	8	8
13 - Joy and Sadness's Journey to Headquarters	Emotional, Whimsical, Tense	9	9	8	9	8	8	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	9	7	9	9	8	8
14 - Dissonance at Dinner	Humorous, Light-hearted, Subtle	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	6	7	7	8	8	9	8	8	8
15 - First Day Blues	Humorous, Sarcastic, Concerned	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	7	6	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
16 - The Foot	Humorous, Tense, Sarcastic	8	9	7	9	9	7	8	7	8	7	7	8	7	8	8	9	8	8	8
17 - A Crumbling Past	Anxious, Melancholic, Hopeful	8	8	7	9	9	8	8	7	7	8	7	8	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
18 - Lost in Long-Term Memory	Hopeful, Desperate, Inspirational, Anxious	8	9	8	9	7	7	8	7	8	8	9	8	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
19 - The Memory Vacuum	Whimsical, Playful, Anxious	8	9	8	9	8	8	8	7.5	7	8	7	8	8	9	7	9	8.5	8	8
20 - The Memory Dump	Humorous, Whimsical, Sarcastic	8	9	7	9	8	5	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	6	7	9	8	8	8
21 - Memory Mayhem	Humorous, Emotional, Tense	8	9	8	9	7	7	8	7.5	7	8	8	8	8	9	7	9	8.5	8	8
22 - Bing Bong's Memories and the Abstract Thought Shortcut	Whimsical, Nostalgic, Playful, Heartfelt	9	9	8	9	9	7	9	8	6	8	6	8	8	9	8	9	8	9	9
23 - Escape from Abstraction	Whimsical, Surreal, Humorous	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	6	7	8	8	6	9	8	8	8
24 - A Journey Through Imaginationland	Whimsical, Playful, Nostalgic	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
25 - Hockey Chaos	Anger, Sadness, Conflict, Resentment, Defiance	8	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	9	7	8	8	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
26 - Bing Bong's Grief and Acceptance	Sad, Hopeful, Whimsical	8	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	8	8	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
27 - The Search for Happiness	Humorous, Dramatic, Reflective	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	7	8	7	7	8	9	8	8	8
28 - The Dream Production Deadline	Whimsical, Playful, Inquisitive	8	9	7	8	8	6	8	7.5	6	8	5	8	8	7	7	9	8.5	8	8
29 - A Nightmare in the Making	Whimsical, Playful, Surreal, Satirical	8	9	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	8	6	8	8	7	7	9	9	8	8
30 - Into the Subconscious	Whimsical, Suspenseful, Playful, Dark	8	8	7	9	8	6	8	7	8	7	8	8	8	7	7	9	8	8	8
31 - Escape from the Subconscious	Whimsical, Suspenseful, Playful	8	8	8	9	9	7	8	7.5	8	8	8	9	8	8	7	9	8.5	8	8
32 - Chaos and a Bus Ticket to Minnesota	Whimsical, Exciting, Humorous, Tense	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	8	7	9	8	8	7	7	9	8	8	8
33 - Riding the Rails of Riley's Mind	Hopeful, Reflective, Playful	8	8	8	9	9	8	8	7	6	7	7	8	7	9	7	9	8	8	8
34 - Running Away and Returning	Excitement, Tension, Drama, Action, Suspense	9	9	8	9	8	8	8	7	9	8	9	9	8	9	7	9	8	8	8
35 - Joy's Epiphany in the Memory Dump	Sad, Hopeful, Desperate, Reflective	9	9	8	9	9	9	9	8	8	8	9	9	8	10	8	9	9	9	9
36 - Bing Bong's Sacrifice	Hopeful, Sacrificial, Emotional, Determined	9	8	9	9	9	8	9	8	7	7	8	9	8	10	8	9	9	9	9
37 - A Race Against Time	Desperate, Frantic, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Humorous	8	8	9	9	8	7	8	7	9	7	9	9	8	8	7	9	8	8	8
38 - Joy's Daring Rescue	Excitement, Determination, Humor, Tension	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	8	8	9	7	9	8	9	9	8	8
39 - Sadness Saves the Day	Anxious, Worried, Reflective, Heartwarming	9	8	9	9	9	9	8	7	7	7	7	9	7	10	8	9	8	8	8
40 - A New Beginning: Expansion and Upgrades	Hopeful, Reflective, Inspirational, Whimsical	9	9	8	9	9	8	9	8	3	7	5	8	7	9	8	9	8	9	9
41 - Embarrassed at the Rink	Light-hearted, Nostalgic, Playful, Embarrassing, Chaotic	8	8	7	9	8	7	8	7	6	7	5	7	7	8	7	9	8	8	8
42 - Riley's First Game	Hopeful, Exciting, Heartwarming, Humorous	9	9	8	9	9	8	8	7	7	7	6	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	8

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.

Scene Strengths

Strong emotional impact
Engaging dialogue
Character development
Creative concept
Emotional depth

Scene Weaknesses

Limited external conflict
Some dialogue could be more impactful
Low conflict level
Limited character development
Some repetitive dialogue

Suggestions

Consider increasing external conflict to increase tension and stakes
Work on creating more impactful dialogue to heighten emotional resonance
Focus on developing all characters evenly to avoid overshadowing
Be mindful of repetitive dialogue and strive to make each line meaningful
Continually explore new and creative concepts to keep storytelling fresh and engaging

World Building

Physical environment: The screenplay presents two parallel worlds: the real world, depicted as typical locations like a hospital, kitchen, hockey rink, and San Francisco streets, and the internal world of Riley's mind. This inner world is a fantastical, colorful, and imaginative space where Riley's emotions are personified as characters. It includes Headquarters, a control center for emotions, Islands of Personality representing different aspects of Riley's identity, the Long-Term Memory, a maze-like storage of memories, the Memory Dump, where forgotten memories are discarded, and Imaginationland, a whimsical world of creativity and imagination. The visual contrast between the mundane real world and the fantastical inner world creates a visually engaging and thought-provoking experience.
Culture: The screenplay explores themes of family dynamics, the importance of friendships, the challenges of moving to a new city, and the emotional journey of growing up. It highlights the cultural elements of hockey, pizza, and school, using these familiar aspects to ground the story in relatable experiences. The portrayal of Riley's family dynamics, with her parents struggling to adapt to their new life and support their daughter, resonates with viewers who have experienced similar situations.
Society: The screenplay depicts a hierarchical society within Riley's mind, where Joy initially holds the position of leadership and attempts to maintain a positive outlook. The other emotions, like Sadness, Fear, and Anger, have their own distinct personalities and roles, contributing to the complex dynamics of Riley's inner world. The screenplay also showcases the societal pressures Riley faces, from the expectations of school and hockey to the challenges of making new friends and adjusting to a new environment.
Technology: The screenplay incorporates unique technological elements that add to the fantastical nature of Riley's inner world. These include the control console in Headquarters, which Joy uses to manipulate memories, the lightlines connecting Islands of Personality, the Train of Thought, a mode of transportation within Riley's mind, and the vacuum tubes that transport memories. These technologies are presented as an integral part of Riley's cognitive processes, creating a sense of wonder and highlighting the complexity of the human mind.
Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology of the screenplay directly influence Riley's experiences and actions. The characters' emotional states and interactions shape how Riley navigates her real world, contributing to her actions, thoughts, and feelings. For example, Riley's reluctance to embrace her new life in San Francisco is a direct result of her inner emotions' struggles to adjust. The fantastical elements of her mind world provide a visual representation of these inner conflicts, making them more accessible and engaging for the audience.
Narrative contribution: The world-building elements in the screenplay are crucial to the narrative structure. The exploration of Riley's inner world, with its distinct physical environments and technological elements, provides a unique perspective on her emotional journey. The parallel depiction of the real world and the inner world creates a dynamic narrative, highlighting the intricate connection between Riley's internal and external experiences. The film's narrative structure allows viewers to understand Riley's emotional growth and development through a compelling and imaginative journey.
Thematic depth contribution: The world-building elements contribute significantly to the thematic depth of the screenplay. The personification of emotions allows for a deeper understanding of their impact on human behavior. The film explores the importance of accepting and embracing all emotions, not just positive ones, and demonstrates how Sadness can play a crucial role in processing grief and making sense of life's challenges. The exploration of Riley's mind world and its relationship to her real-world experiences provides a profound commentary on the complex workings of the human psyche and the interconnectedness of our inner and outer selves.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	The writer's voice is whimsical, imaginative, and emotionally resonant. They blend humor and emotional depth effectively, creating a unique style that is both playful and poignant. The narrative is driven by internal struggles and the complexities of human emotions, conveyed through creative dialogue and imaginative scene descriptions.
Voice Contribution	The writer's voice contributes to the script by enhancing the emotional impact of the story, making it relatable and engaging for the audience. It adds a layer of depth to the characters, themes, and overall mood of the screenplay. The whimsical and humorous elements bring a sense of lightheartedness to the narrative, balancing the heavier emotional themes and creating a dynamic and engaging viewing experience.
Best Representation Scene	12 - The Blue Memory
Best Scene Explanation	This scene is the best representation because it effectively combines humor, emotion, and action, showcasing the writer's ability to create a dynamic and engaging narrative. The dialogue is witty and engaging, highlighting the unique personalities of each emotion, while the narrative description effectively conveys the chaos and urgency of the situation. This scene also demonstrates the writer's skill in using visual imagery to convey complex emotional concepts, creating a powerful and memorable moment.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
High Emotional Impact Often Linked to Character Changes	Scenes with high Emotional Impact scores (7 or above) are often accompanied by significant character changes. This suggests that emotionally charged moments drive character development in your screenplay.
Whimsical Tone Dominates, Impacting Dialogue and Emotional Impact	The whimsical tone is prevalent throughout the screenplay, influencing the dialogue to be lighthearted and playful, but often resulting in lower Emotional Impact scores. This suggests a focus on lightheartedness and humour may be limiting the emotional depth of some scenes.
Humorous Scenes Have a Lower Emotional Impact	Scenes with a humorous tone generally have lower Emotional Impact scores. This is a common pattern, as humor can sometimes distract from emotional depth. However, this may indicate a missed opportunity to explore emotional nuances alongside comedic elements.
Conflict Doesn't Always Drive Emotional Impact	Interestingly, the presence of conflict in a scene doesn't guarantee a high Emotional Impact. This may point to the need to focus on the quality of conflict rather than just its presence. The nature of the conflict and its impact on characters should be explored more deeply to achieve maximum emotional resonance.
Strong Concept and Plot Often Lead to High Character Scores	Scenes with strong Concept and Plot scores (8 or above) tend to have high Character scores. This demonstrates that well-crafted plot elements and concepts contribute significantly to character development and engagement.
Character Changes Drive High Stakes	Scenes with significant Character Changes scores are often associated with high High Stakes scores. This suggests that character development is crucial in raising the stakes and driving the narrative forward.
High Emotional Impact Scenes Don't Always Move the Story Forward	While many high Emotional Impact scenes effectively move the story forward, there are instances where emotional depth doesn't directly contribute to plot progression. Consider whether those scenes are fulfilling a different purpose, such as character development or thematic exploration.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

The screenplay showcases a strong foundation in blending humor, emotion, and character development, resulting in scenes that are engaging and memorable. The writer demonstrates skill in creating unique and imaginative worlds, balancing internal and external conflicts effectively. However, there's room for further development in the areas of thematic depth, character complexity, and narrative structure, which can be achieved by focusing on specific exercises and studying the work of renowned screenwriters.

Key Improvement Areas

Character Development

While the writer demonstrates a grasp of creating relatable characters, further exploration of their motivations, internal struggles, and emotional arcs can enhance the overall impact of the screenplay.

Dialogue

The screenplay generally features engaging dialogue, but refining the use of dialogue tags and focusing on creating dialogue that reveals character motivations and emotions in subtle ways can elevate the authenticity and impact of the writing.

Narrative Structure

The screenplay demonstrates a strong understanding of scene structure, but further exploration of techniques for crafting compelling and well-structured scenes can help elevate the overall pacing and flow of the narrative.

Thematic Exploration

While the writer touches upon certain themes, further exploration and development of the underlying themes throughout the screenplay can add depth and resonance to the story.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Book	'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder	This book provides invaluable insights into crafting engaging and well-structured screenplays, focusing on character development, plot structure, and pacing, which can significantly elevate the writer's craft based on the areas identified for improvement.
Screenplay	'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind' by Charlie Kaufman	This screenplay is a masterclass in blending surreal elements with emotional depth, exploring complex themes and character journeys in a captivating way, aligning with the writer's strengths and areas for further development.
Video	Watch interviews or behind-the-scenes footage of 'Inside Out' to gain insights into the creative process behind the film	This film showcases a unique approach to storytelling by visually exploring the complexities of human emotions, aligning with the writer's strength in blending humor and emotion. Studying the creative process behind this film can offer valuable insights into storytelling and character development.
Exercise	Practice writing dialogue between conflicting characters to sharpen character dynamics and conflict resolutionPractice In SceneProv	This exercise will help refine the writer's ability to create authentic and engaging dialogue that reveals the motivations and internal struggles of their characters, directly addressing the identified need to develop character depth and dialogue.
Exercise	Write a scene where two characters confront their deepest fearsPractice In SceneProv	This exercise encourages exploration of complex emotions, character dynamics, and thematic depth, all of which are areas identified for improvement in the screenplay analysis.
Exercise	Practice writing dialogue-driven scenes that focus on character interactions and relationships, without relying on exposition or external action.Practice In SceneProv	This exercise focuses on the art of conveying emotions and conflicts through dialogue, enhancing the writer's ability to create captivating interactions and deeper character connections, directly addressing the areas identified for improvement in character development and dialogue.

Additional Notes: The writer demonstrates a strong foundation in creating engaging and memorable scenes, with a unique voice that blends humor and emotion. By focusing on developing character complexity, thematic depth, and narrative structure, the writer can elevate their craft and create a screenplay with a greater impact and resonance for the audience.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
Internal World	The story takes place inside the mind of a young girl, Riley, where her emotions are personified and control her actions.	This trope is common in fantasy and science fiction stories, where the inner world of a character is given physical form. For example, in the movie "Inception", the protagonist enters the dreams of other characters, experiencing their subconscious minds as physical landscapes.
Coming of Age	Riley, a young girl, is forced to adapt to a new environment, a new school, and new challenges. These challenges are reflected in her inner world as her emotions struggle to cope.	This trope is common in stories about teenagers and young adults who are navigating the transition from childhood to adulthood. For example, in the movie "The Fault in Our Stars", the protagonist, Hazel, is a teenager who is diagnosed with cancer and has to come to terms with her mortality.
Personified Emotions	Joy, Sadness, Fear, Anger, and Disgust are each given distinct personalities and physical forms, reflecting their specific roles in Riley's emotional state.	This trope is common in fantasy and allegorical stories where abstract concepts are given human-like qualities. For example, in the movie "Inside Out", the emotions of the protagonist are personified and work together to control her actions.
Memory as a Physical Space	Riley's memories are represented as physical objects within her mind, forming “islands of personality” that reflect her experiences.	This trope is common in fantasy and science fiction stories where memories are given a tangible form. For example, in the movie "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind", the protagonist's memories are literally erased from his mind.
The Power of Imagination	Riley's imaginary friend, Bing Bong, plays a significant role in the story, representing the power of imagination and the importance of childhood memories.	This trope is common in children's stories and fantasies, where the power of imagination is emphasized. For example, in the movie "Peter Pan", the protagonist never grows up and continues to live in a world of imagination.
Moving Away from Home	The story begins with Riley's family moving from Minnesota to San Francisco, which triggers a series of emotional challenges for Riley and her inner world.	This trope is common in stories about families and personal growth, as it represents a significant change in a character's life. For example, in the movie "The Wizard of Oz", the protagonist, Dorothy, is swept away from home and has to journey to find her way back.
The Importance of Family	Despite their struggles, Riley's family provides her with love and support, reminding her of the importance of family bonds.	This trope is common in stories about family and relationships, where the importance of family is emphasized. For example, in the movie "The Lion King", the protagonist, Simba, learns the importance of family and responsibility from his father.
The Importance of Memories	Memories are shown to be powerful tools that shape Riley's personality and influence her emotions, highlighting the importance of past experiences.	This trope is common in stories about memory and nostalgia, where the importance of past experiences is emphasized. For example, in the movie "The Notebook", the protagonist's memories of his love for a woman from his youth help him to rediscover his feelings for her.
The Power of Positive Thinking	Joy's role in Riley's life is to maintain a positive outlook and to help her overcome challenges, emphasizing the power of optimism and resilience.	This trope is common in self-help literature and motivational stories, where the importance of positive thinking is emphasized. For example, in the movie "The Secret", the protagonist learns to use the power of positive thinking to achieve her goals.
The Value of Diversity	The story emphasizes the importance of all emotions, even Sadness, demonstrating that different emotions are all valuable and necessary for a healthy emotional life.	This trope is common in stories about diversity and inclusion, where the importance of appreciating and respecting different perspectives is emphasized. For example, in the movie "Hidden Figures", the protagonist, Katherine Johnson, is a black woman who worked as a mathematician for NASA during the space race.

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
36	Bing Bong: Take her to the moon for me. Okay?
39	Riley: I know you don’t want me to but... I miss home. I miss Minnesota.
10	Joy: We are gonna to have a good day, which will turn into a good week, which will turn into a good year, which turns into a good LIFE!
37	Sadness: I only make everything worse!
36	Bing Bong: Take her to the moon for me. Okay?

Some Loglines to consider:

When an 11-year-old girl's emotions are personified and thrown into disarray by a family move, her Joy and Sadness must work together to restore balance and help her navigate the challenges of growing up.
A young girl's emotions, personified as distinct characters, struggle to guide her through the upheaval of a family relocation, leading to a journey of self-discovery and the realization that all emotions, even sadness, have value.
Faced with the disruption of a move to a new city, a young girl's emotions, each with their own distinct personality, must work together to help her adapt and find her way back to happiness.
The personified emotions of an 11-year-old girl find themselves at odds when a family move threatens to unravel her sense of self, leading to a heartwarming exploration of the complex nature of human emotional development.
In the vibrant inner world of a young girl's mind, her personified emotions embark on a captivating journey to restore balance and help her navigate the challenges of growing up and adapting to change.
When a young girl moves to a new city, her five core emotions - Joy, Sadness, Anger, Fear, and Disgust - embark on a wild adventure inside her mind to help her adjust to the changes.
Inside the mind of a preteen, a team of personified emotions navigate the challenges of a big move and learn that embracing all emotions is key to happiness.
An imaginative animated adventure that takes viewers on a journey inside the mind of a young girl, where they meet the emotions that control her thoughts and actions.
Joy, a spirited emotion, struggles to keep a young girl's happiness afloat as she faces the anxieties and challenges of growing up and moving to a new city.
The inner workings of a young girl's mind come to life in this vibrant animated film, where a team of emotions must work together to help her navigate the ups and downs of life.
In the mind of an 11-year-old girl, personified emotions navigate the challenges of a major life change, discovering the importance of all feelings in shaping her identity.
When young Riley moves to a new city, her emotions—Joy, Sadness, Anger, Fear, and Disgust—must work together to help her cope with the upheaval and find happiness again.
Inside the mind of a young girl, emotions personified as characters embark on a journey to restore balance and happiness after a life-altering move.
As Riley faces the challenges of moving to a new city, her emotions must navigate a complex inner world to help her adapt and grow.
In a unique exploration of the human psyche, personified emotions guide a young girl through the trials of growing up and finding emotional resilience.

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