Squid Game

Executive Summary

Logline: A down-on-his-luck gambler wins a deadly competition but must confront the moral consequences of his survival and the enigmatic organization behind the games. See other logline suggestoins

Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend

Gemini: Consider

Consider

Explanation: Squid Game Episode 9 delivers a compelling and suspenseful conclusion to the main game, with strong character development, high-stakes action, and thought-provoking social commentary. While there are opportunities to improve pacing, explore supporting characters further, and provide more background information about the game's organizers, the episode effectively sets the stage for potential future storylines and leaves the audience eager to learn more.

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Overview

Genres: The, unique, genres, for, this, movie, would, be:, Thriller, Drama, and, Action

Setting: Contemporary, Game arena, VIP Room 2, playground, Gi-hun's home, bank, riverside, private hospital room, room with a window overlooking a snowy street, private hospital room, ICN airport subway platform and lobby

Overview: The screenplay showcases compelling conflict and emotional depth, with well-developed characters and impactful dialogue. However, there are opportunities for improvement in plot unpredictability and exploration of secondary character development.

Themes: Betrayal and Deception, Survival and Desperation, Friendship and Loyalty, Guilt and Redemption, Power and Control

Conflict and Stakes: The primary conflicts in this story include the life-or-death struggle of the characters in the deadly games, the rivalry and betrayal between Gi-hun and Sang-woo, and Gi-hun's personal journey of redemption. The stakes are high as the characters' lives are on the line, and their actions have consequences for themselves and others.

Overall Mood: Tense and suspenseful

Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:

Scene 1: The scene has a tense and suspenseful mood as Sang-woo and Gi-hun are chosen to play the final game and face off against each other.

Scene 2: The scene has an intense and violent mood as Sang-woo and Gi-hun engage in a bloody knife fight.

Scene 3: The scene has a tragic and heartbreaking mood as Sang-woo stabs himself and Gi-hun holds him as he dies.

Scene 4: The scene has a somber and reflective mood as Gi-hun mourns his mother's death and learns about the VIP service.

Scene 5: The scene has a tense and philosophical mood as Il-nam proposes a bet to Gi-hun and they discuss the value of human life.

Scene 6: The scene has a bittersweet mood as Il-nam dies and Gi-hun reflects on their time together before starting a new chapter in his life.

Scene 7: The scene has a tense and urgent mood as Gi-hun confronts the Man in a Jumper at the airport.

Standout Features:

Unique Concept: The Squid Game concept, where participants compete in deadly children's games, is a standout feature that sets it apart from other thrillers.

Twists and Betrayals : The screenplay's numerous plot twists and betrayals keep the audience engaged and guessing.

Social Commentary : The screenplay's exploration of social issues and commentary on the corrupting influence of money and power adds depth and relevance to the story.

Intense and Suspenseful : The screenplay's intense and suspenseful moments create a gripping viewing experience.

Diverse Cast : The screenplay features a diverse cast, which adds to its appeal and reflects the multicultural nature of the story.

Genre Blend : The screenplay successfully blends elements of thriller, drama, and social commentary, creating a unique and compelling narrative.

Strong Performances : The screenplay features strong performances by the cast, which enhance the emotional impact of the story.

Visual Elements : The screenplay incorporates visually striking elements, such as the rain falling on Gi-hun during the Squid Game and the snowy street outside the window.

Emotional Depth : The screenplay delves into the emotional depth of the characters, exploring themes of friendship, betrayal, and redemption.

Thought-Provoking Themes : The screenplay raises thought-provoking themes about the value of life, the human condition, and the corrupting influence of money and power.

International Appeal : The Squid Game's international popularity and success on streaming platforms indicate its potential for global appeal.

Critical Acclaim : The screenplay's strong storytelling, compelling characters, and social commentary make it a potential contender for critical acclaim and award nominations.

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Market Analysis

Budget Estimate:$30-40 million

Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-54, fans of suspenseful and thought-provoking dramas with elements of thriller and social commentary.

Marketability: The Squid Game has gained significant international popularity and has a strong potential to attract a wide audience due to its unique concept, intense storytelling, and compelling characters. It has already proven to be highly marketable through its success on streaming platforms.

The screenplay offers a unique blend of genres, combining elements of thriller, drama, and social commentary. It explores compelling themes and features a diverse cast, which adds to its marketability.

The screenplay's gripping storyline, relevant social themes, and strong performances by the cast make it appealing to a wide audience. However, its violent and intense nature may limit its marketability to some viewers.

Profit Potential: High, due to the strong appeal of the Squid Game concept, its international popularity, and potential for award nominations. The screenplay's thought-provoking themes and intense storytelling can generate significant buzz and attract a large audience, resulting in high box office and streaming revenue.

Scene Level Percentiles

Script Level Percentiles

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Characters: 8.1 See More
Premise: 8.2 See More
Structure: 8.2 See More
Theme: 8.2 See More
Visual Impact: 7.7 See More
Emotional Impact: 8.5 See More
Conflict: 8.0 See More
Originality: 8.0 See More

Emotions Elicited Percentiles

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Writer's Voice

Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by concise and impactful dialogue, minimalistic description, and a focus on tension, suspense, and moral dilemmas. The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a sense of urgency, exploring deeper themes, and developing complex characters through dialogue and action.

Best representation: Scene 6 - The Revelation and Departure. This scene is the best representation because it showcases their ability to create tension and mystery through concise dialogue and descriptive narrative.

Memorable Lines:

Gi-hun: You killed them. You’re the one who killed them! (Scene 2)
Sang-woo: Gi-hun. I’m sorry. (Scene 3)
Il-nam: You asked me why I let you live. Because it was fun playing with you. (Scene 6)
Il-nam: If you play the game, I'll answer your questions. (Scene 5)
Gi-hun: That's why I can't forgive you for everything you're doing. (Scene 7)

Writing Style:

The writing style of the screenplay is characterized by a focus on complex themes, exploration of moral dilemmas, and building tension through suspense and escalating conflicts. The writers also incorporate dark humor and explore societal issues in their stories.

Style Similarities:

Christopher Nolan
Bong Joon-ho

Other Similarities: The screenplay also features a focus on family relationships and everyday struggles, as well as exploration of philosophical themes. The writers often use shocking and unexpected twists to heighten the intensity of their stories.

Story Shape

Emotions Elicited

Suspense

Empathy

Fear

Surprise

Joy

Sadness

Screenplay Rating:

Consider

Executive Summary

Squid Game Episode 9 delivers a compelling and suspenseful conclusion to the main game, with strong character development, high-stakes action, and thought-provoking social commentary. While there are opportunities to improve pacing, explore supporting characters further, and provide more background information about the game's organizers, the episode effectively sets the stage for potential future storylines and leaves the audience eager to learn more.

Strengths

Strong character development, particularly for Gi-hun and Sang-woo, whose complex relationship drives the narrative and explores themes of morality and survival. high
High-stakes conflict and suspenseful action sequences, especially during the Squid Game itself, keep the audience engaged and on the edge of their seats. high ( Scene 3 Scene 5 Scene 7 Scene 9 )
Intriguing world-building and social commentary through the presence of the VIPs and their detached observation of the game, raising questions about wealth, power, and entertainment. medium ( Scene 2 Scene 4 Scene 8 Scene 10 Scene 12 Scene 14 Scene 18 )
Effective use of emotional moments, such as Gi-hun's discovery of his mother's death and his encounter with the flower seller, to add depth and pathos to the story. medium ( Scene 24 Scene 27 )
The ending leaves the audience with a sense of ambiguity and anticipation for future developments, as Gi-hun chooses to confront the game organizers rather than move on with his life. medium ( Scene 34 Scene 36 )

Areas of Improvement

The pacing could be tightened in certain sections, especially during dialogue-heavy scenes that don't directly advance the plot. medium
The motivations and backstories of the VIPs remain largely unexplored, leaving their role in the narrative somewhat underdeveloped. medium ( Scene 2 Scene 4 Scene 8 Scene 10 Scene 12 Scene 14 Scene 18 )
The year-long gap between the game and Gi-hun's reunion with Il-nam feels a bit abrupt and could benefit from additional scenes showing his struggles and attempts to cope with his trauma. low ( Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 29 )

MissingElements

Further exploration of the origins and purpose of the Squid Game organization would provide more context and depth to the overall narrative. high
The fate of Sae-byeok's brother and his relationship with Sang-woo's mother could be explored in more detail to provide closure to their storylines. medium ( Scene 32 Scene 33 )

NotablePoints

The flashback scene with Il-nam and the Front Man adds a layer of complexity to their characters and hints at a deeper connection between them. medium ( Scene 30 )
Gi-hun's red hair dye symbolizes a significant change in his personality and outlook on life, suggesting a newfound determination and perhaps a hint of rebellion. low ( Scene 31 )

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Screenplay Insights:

Characters: 8.1, The screenplay effectively develops its characters, creating relatable and emotionally engaging individuals. The depth and complexity of the characters drive the narrative forward and enhance its emotional resonance. However, refining certain character arcs and addressing issues with relatability in some supporting characters could strengthen the screenplay's character engagement. See More

Premise: 8.2, The screenplay presents a clear and engaging premise that sets up a compelling and high-stakes narrative. It effectively introduces the central conflict, characters, and game rules, drawing the audience into the world of Squid Game. While the premise has a strong foundation, exploring its potential for deeper themes and character development could further enhance its impact and resonance. See More

Structure: 8.2, The screenplay for Squid Game demonstrates a solid structure and plot development. It effectively utilizes a traditional narrative structure, engages the audience through its unpredictable twists and turns, and highlights the internal conflicts of its characters. However, there are areas where the plot could be further refined to enhance its clarity, pacing, and narrative impact. See More

Theme: 8.2, The screenplay effectively explores themes of morality, human nature, and the dangers of capitalism through its depiction of the Squid Game. However, the exploration of some themes, particularly the criticism of capitalism, could be refined to enhance their impact and clarity. See More

Visual Impact: 7.7, The screenplay's visual imagery effectively complements its gripping narrative, creating a visually engaging experience for the reader. The vivid descriptions and emotionally resonant scenes immerse the reader in the world of the Squid Game, enhancing the impact of the story's themes and characters. See More

Emotional Impact: 8.5, This screenplay showcases a compelling and emotionally resonant narrative. The exploration of themes like guilt, redemption, and the sacrifices made in desperate situations adds depth and weight to the story. The climax, in particular, delivers a powerful emotional punch that is likely to linger with the audience long after the credits roll. See More

Conflict: 8.0, The screenplay presents compelling conflict and stakes that effectively drive the narrative and engage the audience. However, the screenplay could further enhance tension and engagement by deepening the conflict between Gi-hun and Sang-woo and by exploring more nuanced stakes. See More

Originality: 8.0, The screenplay exhibits originality and creativity in its exploration of profound themes and moral dilemmas within the context of a deadly game. The dynamic between Gi-hun and Sang-woo drives the story, highlighting the tension between self-interest and compassion. While the screenplay employs some familiar tropes, it infuses them with fresh perspectives and thought-provoking twists. See More

Summary In "Squid Game," Sang-woo and Gi-hun engage in a brutal fight to the death during the final game. Sang-woo reveals that he killed someone to secure his own survival, leading to a heated argument between the two. Gi-hun ultimately decides to end the game and approach the Masked Soldier to invoke the clause for termination. The unexpected turn of events leaves everyone puzzled. Gi-hun returns home to find his mother dead, leading him to a downward spiral of homelessness and despair, but a year later, he encounters a mysterious message that leads him to a private hospital room where he discovers Il-nam, the old man from the Squid Game. The scene explores themes of loss, redemption, and the consequences of participating in the deadly games.

Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The plot/story of the screenplay is engaging and suspenseful, with well-developed characters and emotional depth. The use of flashbacks adds depth to the relationships between the characters and enhances the overall narrative. The conflicts and resolutions throughout the story keep the audience invested and interested. The emotional tone of each scene is effectively conveyed, creating a strong connection between the characters and the audience. The significant visual elements add visual interest and enhance the storytelling. However, there are some areas where the plot/story could be improved.

Suggestions: 1. Provide more clarity and explanation about the purpose and rules of the Squid Game. This will help the audience understand the stakes and motivations of the characters. 2. Develop the conflict between Sang-woo and Gi-hun further, exploring their contrasting ideologies and motivations. This will add depth to their relationship and make their final confrontation more impactful. 3. Consider adding more scenes that explore the psychological toll of the game on the characters, showcasing their internal struggles and growth. This will add depth to their character arcs and make their actions more meaningful. 4. Provide a stronger resolution to the conflict between Gi-hun and the people behind the game. This will give the story a more satisfying conclusion and tie up loose ends. Overall, the plot/story of the screenplay is strong, but these suggestions can help elevate it to the next level.

Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here

CharacterInconsistencies

Character Gi-hun
Description Gi-hun's sudden expertise in hand-to-hand combat during the final game seems unjustified and convenient for the plot. There's no prior indication of his fighting skills.
( Scene 3 )
Character Sang-woo
Description Sang-woo's decision to primarily use a knife in the final game, despite his intelligence and strategic thinking, seems out of character. It contrasts with his previous calculated approach.
( Scene 3 )

StoryInconsistencies

Description The unclear explanation of 'can't continue playing' leading to death in the Squid Game rules creates a moment of confusion. More specific language would improve clarity.
( Scene 1 )

PlotHoles

Description The Front Man's claim that Gi-hun's survival was unexpected and that he didn't think Gi-hun would 'run this far' contradicts the game's design and purpose, which seems to heavily favor luck and chance.
( Scene 19 )
Description The message from 'Gganbu' leading Gi-hun to Il-nam appears contrived and lacks a logical explanation of how it was arranged, especially considering Il-nam's deteriorating health.
( Scene 27 )

DialogueAuthenticity

Description The VIPs' dialogue, while providing exposition and reactions, often feels unnatural and stereotypical, lacking the depth and nuance expected from individuals of their supposed status.
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Redundancies

Element Gi-hun's internal struggle with guilt and trauma
( Scene 25 Scene 26 Scene 27 )
Suggestion While Gi-hun's emotional state is important, the repeated emphasis on his guilt and trauma could be streamlined to maintain a balance between character development and plot progression.

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Gi-hun - Score: 88/100

Aliases

Player 456

Role

Protagonist

Personality

MBTI: ESFP
Enneagram: Type 2 (The Helper)

Scenes

Strongest: #15
Weakest: #11

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 9/10

A relatable character facing moral dilemmas shaped by poverty.

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Gi-hun faces guilt and impulses that complicate his moral journey.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 9/10

Gi-hun's journey is one of moral awakening as he faces the consequences of his decisions.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Gi-hun's dialogue reflects his emotional turmoil and moral conflicts.

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Gi-hun's choices often emphasize his struggle between survival and morality.

Relationship Dynamics 9/10

Gi-hun's relationships drive much of the emotional weight in the narrative.

Scene Impact 9/10

Gi-hun's presence shapes the emotional tone of pivotal scenes.

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Gi-hun serves as the moral compass within the chaotic narrative.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Gi-hun’s journey aligns intricately with the themes of morality and human nature.

Emotional Resonance 9/10

Gi-hun’s journey elicits empathy and emotional engagement.

Foundational Definition

Score: 9

Gi-hun is a deeply relatable character grounded by his struggles with poverty and a desire for redemption. He embodies the everyday man's fight against overwhelming odds, reflecting themes of survival and the moral complexities of human nature. At the beginning of the story, Gi-hun values family, friendship, and his own survival, shaped by the dire economic circumstances he faces. His character is shaped by feelings of guilt and loyalty, particularly surrounding his relationships with other players and his motivations for joining the game.

Values And Beliefs: Survival, loyalty, the value of human connections.

Strengths And Skills: Street smarts, emotional intelligence, physical resilience.

Suggestions

Explore Gi-hun's childhood memories in more detail to enrich his backstory.
Highlight moments where his loyalty to friends drives his choices.

Follow-up Questions

How does Gi-hun's relationship with his mother influence his decisions throughout the games?
In what ways does Gi-hun's character reflect the societal issues present in the story?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 8

Gi-hun's emotional wounds stem from the guilt of surviving when others did not, particularly regarding his friend Sang-woo and the other players. His flaws include impulsiveness and a tendency to prioritize others over himself, sometimes leading to dangerous consequences. These internal conflicts create depth, revealing his struggle between self-preservation and moral integrity, which shapes his choices throughout the narrative.

Character Wound: Survivor's guilt related to the deaths of other players.

Character Flaws: Impulsiveness, self-doubt, often placing others' needs above his own.

Suggestions

Incorporate flashbacks that illustrate Gi-hun's past regrets.
Develop scenes that focus on his internal dialogue during critical moments.

Follow-up Questions

How do Gi-hun's relationships influence his emotional decisions during the games?
What specific experiences in Gi-hun's past shape his responses to betrayal?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 9

Over the course of the story, Gi-hun transitions from a man motivated by desperation and greed to someone who understands the true cost of his choices. Key events, like the confrontation with Sang-woo and ultimately choosing not to kill him, serve as critical moments that reflect his development and growing empathy. The impact of these experiences shapes his relationships and view of life, moving from a mindset of competition to one of connection.

Polarity Changes: Gi-hun's transformation from a desperate, selfish man to a more self-aware and morally conscious individual.

Transformation Triggers: The emotional confrontations with Sang-woo and the realization of the value of life.

Suggestions

Clarify Gi-hun's motivations in pivotal scenes to highlight his transformation.
Explore Gi-hun's reflections on what he lost in the games to deepen his arc.

Follow-up Questions

What does Gi-hun's final decision signify about his character's growth?
How do moments of confrontation with Sang-woo crystallize Gi-hun's moral standpoint?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Gi-hun's speech is filled with a mix of vulnerability and defiance, illustrating his inner struggles and the harsh realities he faces. His dialogue often reveals his emotional state, fluctuating between hopefulness and despair, particularly during confrontations or moments of self-reflection. His interactions are layered with subtext that reflect his moral dilemmas and emotional stakes throughout the game.

Unique Voice: Conversational, sometimes vulnerable, often filled with colloquial language reflecting his background.

Suggestions

Incorporate more internal thoughts to enhance the emotional impact of his words.
Contrast Gi-hun's tense dialogue with lighter moments to showcase range.

Follow-up Questions

In what ways do Gi-hun's dialogues reveal his evolving relationships?
How does Gi-hun's manner of speaking change from the beginning to the end of the story?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 9

Gi-hun's actions are driven by a combination of desperation for survival and a deep sense of loyalty to those he cares about. Key moments include refusing to kill Sang-woo, which demonstrates his moral awakening, and choosing to protect others. These decisions reflect his evolving character and highlight the tension between his immediate needs and the ethical implications of his actions throughout the games.

Motivations: Survival, desire for redemption, and protecting others.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires money and power but needs to rediscover his humanity and values.

Suggestions

Merge action sequences with Gi-hun's thought process to clarify his motivations.
Show alternative paths he might have taken to emphasize his growth.

Follow-up Questions

How do Gi-hun's choices impact his moral compass throughout the story?
What moments reveal the conflict between Gi-hun's desires and his intrinsic morals?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 9

Gi-hun forms complex relationships with several characters, notably Sang-woo and Sae-byeok, which consistently challenge his moral viewpoint. His bond with Sang-woo evolves from childhood friends to rivals, revealing deep scars of betrayal and loyalty. Meanwhile, his protective feelings toward Sae-byeok enhance his depth, showcasing his desire for redemption and connection in a ruthless environment. These dynamics not only motivate his actions but also expose the themes of friendship, sacrifice, and the human condition.

Suggestions

Expand on the backstories of Gi-hun's relationships to deepen viewer understanding.
Illustrate key moments of conflict and reconciliation to highlight character growth.

Follow-up Questions

How do Gi-hun's relationships illustrate the broader themes of the series?
What lessons does Gi-hun learn from his interactions with others?

Scene Impact

Score: 9

In key scenes, Gi-hun's actions often serve to heighten tension or evoke empathy from the audience. His emotional confrontations—with Sang-woo, for example—are crucial for illustrating themes of survival, betrayal, and moral ambiguity. Gi-hun's internal struggle is mirrored in the external conflicts, making his presence a powerful lens through which the audience experiences the narrative. His decisions often shift the trajectory of scenes, creating poignant emotional beats that resonate deeply.

Suggestions

Focus on enhancing Gi-hun's emotional responses in high-stakes scenes.
Ensure that Gi-hun’s actions consistently reflect his emotional journey.

Follow-up Questions

Which scenes best exemplify Gi-hun's emotional impact?
How does Gi-hun's presence alter the course of the narrative in critical moments?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 9

As the protagonist, Gi-hun embodies the struggle against inhumanity and the quest for redemption amidst chaos. His journey, from a desperate player to a morally aware individual, highlights the series’ exploration of human nature and societal issues, like greed and sacrifice. Gi-hun's evolution underpins the narrative's critique of survival, morality, and the personal costs associated with competition and desperation.

Symbolic Role: The everyman representing hope and resilience against a corrupt system.

Suggestions

Consider scenes where Gi-hun's moral choices could be visually symbolized.
Draw clearer contrasts between Gi-hun and other characters to highlight his unique perspective.

Follow-up Questions

How does Gi-hun's journey challenge or reinforce traditional hero archetypes?
In what ways does Gi-hun's moral compass influence other characters' choices?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

Gi-hun’s personal struggles reflect the screenplay's broader themes of survival, the morality of choices, and the value of human life. His evolution directly engages with the moral questions posed by the game, pushing him to confront his values versus his survival instinct. Every choice Gi-hun makes speaks to the larger societal critique the story investigates—placing individual morals against the urge for self-preservation in a corrupted system.

Suggestions

Deepen the exploration of Gi-hun's internal conflict with societal issues.
Create parallels between Gi-hun’s journey and current societal dilemmas to enhance relevance.

Follow-up Questions

What key moments in Gi-hun's journey encapsulate the series' thematic message?
How effectively does Gi-hun's story resonate with contemporary societal issues?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 9

Gi-hun’s character elicits a range of emotions—from sympathy for his plight to tension during his moral dilemmas. His vulnerability and struggles resonate deeply with the audience, as they reflect universal human experiences of choice, consequences, and morality. Each emotional peak and valley in his journey creates an intense connection, solidifying Gi-hun as a relatable and tragic hero who evokes a heartfelt response from viewers.

Emotional Impact: Gi-hun evokes strong feelings of empathy and connection amid a brutal environment.

Suggestions

Highlight Gi-hun's most vulnerable moments to strengthen his emotional arc.
Include more scenes that provoke audience reflection on moral choices.

Follow-up Questions

What specific moments in Gi-hun's journey achieve the highest emotional impact?
How do other characters' responses to Gi-hun shape audience perception of him?

Personality Types

MBTI: esfp

Gi-hun displays a preference for emotional engagement and spontaneity, illustrating traits consistent with ESFP types.

Confidence: 80%

Possible Alternative Type: isfp (60%)

Suggestions

Utilize Gi-hun's extroverted nature to create dynamic interactions with other players.
Facilitate opportunities for Gi-hun to express his values in moments of conflict.

Follow-up Questions

How does Gi-hun’s potential ESFP traits manifest in his decision-making?
What moments indicate a shift toward ISFP behavior in Gi-hun?

Enneagram: type 2 (the helper)

Gi-hun's strong sense of loyalty and service to others aligns with the traits of a Helper, who seeks to meet the needs of others even at their own expense.

Confidence: 75%

Possible Alternative Type: type 6 (the loyalist) (65%)

Suggestions

Explore Gi-hun’s motivations rooted in helping others across critical scenes.
Develop scenarios where Gi-hun's loyalty is tested to highlight growth.

Follow-up Questions

In which moments does Gi-hun display core traits of a Helper?
What situations push Gi-hun towards the characteristics of a Loyalist?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (15)

The emotional farewell between Gi-hun and Sang-woo as Gi-hun holds him in his arms.

Why: This scene captures the essence of Gi-hun's journey—his grief, compassion, and change are powerfully illustrated here, resonating deeply with the audience.

Weakest Scene (11)

Gi-hun's confrontation with the Masked Soldier where his resolve wavers.

Why: This scene reveals Gi-hun's moment of indecision, showcasing a lack of confidence that weakens his character at a pivotal moment.

Suggestions:

Strengthen Gi-hun's internal conflict to show the complexity of his decision.
Enhance the dialogue to reflect a clearer determination despite crisis.

Sang-woo - Score: 86/100

Role

Antagonist

Personality

MBTI: ENTJ
Enneagram: Type 3 - Achiever

Scenes

Strongest: #9
Weakest: #10

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Ambitious yet ruthless character with a dark competitive streak.

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Emotional insecurities lead to morally ambiguous choices.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 8/10

Sang-woo undergoes a tragic fall from grace as his survival instincts lead to his demise.

Dialogue And Voice 9/10

Sang-woo's dialogue reflects his strategic mindset and emotional turmoil.

Behavior And Choices 8/10

Sang-woo's choices stem from a blend of survival instincts and self-interest.

Relationship Dynamics 9/10

His relationship with Gi-hun is central to Sang-woo's narrative.

Scene Impact 9/10

Sang-woo introduces tension and conflict in pivotal scenes.

Role Fulfillment 10/10

Sang-woo acts as both a rival and tragic character.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Sang-woo’s journey integrates themes of survival, morality, and sacrifice.

Emotional Resonance 9/10

He evokes sympathy and tension through his tragic choices.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Sang-woo is depicted as a highly intelligent and competitive character, driven by a deep fear of failure and a desire for success. His background as a former student of an elite school indicates a high level of ambition. Sang-woo's foundational traits manifest in his ruthless decision-making, particularly in critical moments within the games, where his survival instincts overshadow his ethics. This complex identity shapes his actions throughout the story, leading to conflicting moments with Gi-hun, highlighting themes of friendship and betrayal.

Values And Beliefs: Winning at all costs, fear of failure, survival of the fittest.

Strengths And Skills: Strategic thinker, athleticism, knowledge of games.

Suggestions

Deepen his backstory to explore the roots of his competitiveness.
Show more internal conflict to highlight the struggle between his ambition and morality.

Follow-up Questions

What events in Sang-woo's past specifically shaped his competitive nature?
How does Sang-woo reconcile his ambitions with the consequences of his actions?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Sang-woo grapples with emotional wounds stemming from his upbringing and societal expectations. His decisions are often fueled by insecurity, particularly in relation to Gi-hun and his own familial background. This creates a moral ambiguity that adds depth to his character. His flaws, such as selfishness and a propensity for manipulation, showcase an extensive internal conflict that drives his determination to win, often at the expense of his relationships.

Character Wound: Fear of inadequacy stemming from societal expectations.

Character Flaws: Selfishness, manipulative, unwilling to confront feelings.

Suggestions

Explore Sang-woo’s regrets about his actions to enhance emotional depth.
Develop flashback scenes that illustrate his insecurities.

Follow-up Questions

What past experiences intensify Sang-woo's fear of inadequacy?
How does Sang-woo's view of Gi-hun contribute to his internal conflict?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 8

Throughout the story, Sang-woo moves from a position of strength as a strategic player to one of desperation. His refusal to accept any form of defeat leads to a pivotal moment where he sacrifices his own life, showcasing a tragic culmination of his character arc. This final transformation underlines his inability to escape the moral consequences of his actions, providing a stark contrast to Gi-hun’s eventual growth.

Polarity Changes: His journey transitions from confidence to desperation, culminating in his final act.

Transformation Triggers: Confrontations with Gi-hun and the realization of his impending failure.

Suggestions

Clarify the moment Sang-woo decides to sacrifice himself to emphasize his internal struggle.
Highlight the moments before his final decision to illustrate his change more effectively.

Follow-up Questions

What specific moments trigger Sang-woo's emotional breakdown?
How does Sang-woo's perception of Gi-hun change throughout their conflict?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 9

Sang-woo's speech alternates between confident, commanding tones and moments of emotional frailty, reflecting his inner conflict. This duality enhances his complexity, as he often uses language to manipulate and control while also revealing glimpses of his fear and desperation. His dialogue contributes heavily to the tension between him and Gi-hun, showcasing their shifting dynamic.

Unique Voice: He combines authoritative commands with moments of vulnerability.

Suggestions

Incorporate more foreshadowing elements in Sang-woo's dialogue.
Use repetition or distinct phrases to mark key emotional shifts in future scripts.

Follow-up Questions

What specific phrases or words does Sang-woo frequently use that signify his mindset?
How do Sang-woo's conversations with Gi-hun evolve as the game progresses?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 8

Sang-woo's actions throughout the screenplay often prioritize his immediate survival over ethical considerations. This behavior highlights his internal conflict and desperation, driving him to betray others, including Gi-hun. The dichotomy between his desires and needs emphasizes a tragic flaw—his inability to form genuine connections, ultimately propelling him down a path of self-destruction.

Motivations: To win the game and overcome his socioeconomic struggles.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires victory at all costs; needs emotional connection and redemption.

Suggestions

Contrast his initial decisions with their long-term consequences more explicitly.
Increase the emotional stakes in his choices to evoke greater audience empathy.

Follow-up Questions

What pivotal choices could underscore Sang-woo’s eventual downfall?
How do Sang-woo's choices challenge traditional notions of friendship?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 9

Sang-woo's relationship with Gi-hun illustrates complex themes of friendship, betrayal, and competition. Initially, they are allies, bound by shared history and camaraderie. However, as the stakes rise, Sang-woo's fear of losing drives him to betray Gi-hun, showcasing the thin line between competition and enmity. Their dynamic adds emotional weight to the narrative, especially during confrontational moments.

Suggestions

Enhance interactions between Sang-woo and Gi-hun to further explore their conflicting emotions.
Illustrate moments that reflect their shared history more vividly.

Follow-up Questions

How does their shared history influence their choices in the game?
What moments can amplify the sense of betrayal in their relationship?

Scene Impact

Score: 9

Sang-woo's presence dramatically alters the emotional tone of the scenes he participates in. His aggressive tactics and moral ambiguity create a tense atmosphere, pushing Gi-hun to confront his own values. In moments where their conflict escalates, the stakes become personal, forcing both characters to navigate complicated emotions, thus heightening tension and driving the plot forward.

Suggestions

Craft scenes where his emotional turmoil visibly clashes with Gi-hun’s responses.
Increase the stakes in their confrontations to escalate the tension further.

Follow-up Questions

What specific scenes demonstrate Sang-woo's ability to influence Gi-hun's decisions?
How can Sang-woo's behavior shift the tone of upcoming scenes?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 10

Sang-woo embodies a classic antagonist role, challenging Gi-hun’s morality and forcing him to confront his own ideals. His tragic arc explores the consequences of unchecked ambition and the moral dilemmas that arise in the pursuit of personal gain. Through his downfall, Sang-woo’s character serves as a cautionary tale, illustrating the cost of ruthless ambition.

Symbolic Role: Represents the darker aspects of ambition and survival instincts.

Suggestions

Highlight symbolic elements in Sang-woo's character that emphasize his journey.
Introduce foils to Sang-woo’s character to further illuminate his role.

Follow-up Questions

How can Sang-woo's character be contrasted with other players to enhance his role?
What literary or narrative archetypes does Sang-woo most closely align with?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

His character arc intertwines significantly with the central themes of the screenplay, particularly around the moral implications of survival. Sang-woo’s decisions provide a stark contrast to Gi-hun’s eventual choices, exploring what it means to maintain one’s humanity in desperate situations. This thematic integration deepens the audience's engagement with the plot, making Sang-woo’s actions resonate within the broader context of the series.

Suggestions

Enhance scenes that emphasize the moral dilemmas Sang-woo faces.
Weave in more references to the overarching themes to draw parallels with his arc.

Follow-up Questions

What thematic dilemmas can be heightened in Sang-woo’s interactions?
How can the theme of survival intersect with morality in upcoming plot points?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 9

Sang-woo's journey evokes a wide range of emotions from the audience. His tragic descent elicits sympathy, while his manipulative behavior stirs tension. The emotional complexity surrounding his character—in particular, his relationships with Gi-hun and the weight of his decisions—creates a profound sense of tragedy that resonates deeply with viewers, enhancing the overall emotional stakes of the narrative.

Emotional Impact: Evokes tension, sympathy, and tragedy in the audience.

Suggestions

Implement moments that showcase vulnerability to deepen emotional impact.
Highlight key scenes where Sang-woo's choices drastically alter the emotional landscape.

Follow-up Questions

What narrative techniques can amplify the audience's sympathy for Sang-woo?
How can future scenes capture the emotional weight of his decisions?

Personality Types

MBTI: entj

Sang-woo demonstrates qualities typical of an ENTJ: he is decisive, strategic, and driven by results. His leadership tendencies are underscored by a desire to control and succeed.

Confidence: 85%

Suggestions

Explore ENTJ traits in Sang-woo's interactions with other characters.
Use his strategic mind to create tense moments in future games.

Follow-up Questions

How do ENTJ traits complicate Sang-woo's decisions in critical moments?
What moments in the story align with Sang-woo’s ENTJ characteristics?

Enneagram: type 3 - achiever

Sang-woo exemplifies the Achiever's desire for success and fear of failure, often resorting to unethical methods to maintain his image and status.

Confidence: 80%

Suggestions

Highlight his fears of inadequacy in more scenes.
Contrast him with other characters who embody different Enneagram types to add depth.

Follow-up Questions

How does his Achiever nature influence his relationships with other players?
What critical moments can amplify Sang-woo's struggle with his identity as a Type 3?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (9)

Sang-woo's confrontation with Gi-hun as they battle for survival showcases his strategic mindset and emotional conflict.

Why: The scene captures the essence of his character, portraying his internal struggle and making his eventual choices more impactful.

Weakest Scene (10)

Sang-woo is at his weakest during the finale when he contemplates the end of the game and his choices.

Why: This moment highlights his vulnerability, but it feels rushed and lacks the emotional gravitas of his prior decisions.

Suggestions:

Expand on his thought process during this scene to deepen emotional impact.
Include flashbacks or reflections that strengthen the scene's emotional resonance.

Il-nam - Score: 86/100

Role

Antagonist

Personality

MBTI: ENTP
Enneagram: 7

Scenes

Strongest: #30
Weakest: #19

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 9/10

Childhood nostalgia mixed with malevolence.

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Emotional conflict between joy and brutality.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 7/10

Il-nam remains largely static but reveals personal motivations through his interactions.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Il-nam speaks with a childlike tone while revealing deep philosophical insights.

Behavior And Choices 9/10

Il-nam's choices reveal a calculated role as orchestrator of the games.

Relationship Dynamics 8/10

Il-nam showcases complex relationships, especially with Gi-hun.

Scene Impact 9/10

Il-nam's presence amplifies tension and intrigue in pivotal scenes.

Role Fulfillment 10/10

Il-nam fulfills the antagonist role, blending nostalgia with horror.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Il-nam's journey intertwines with themes of morality and existential fun.

Emotional Resonance 9/10

Elicits complex emotional responses through his actions.

Foundational Definition

Score: 9

Il-nam, often referred to as Player 001, embodies a complex duality of innocence and malevolence. His identity is intertwined with the stark contrasts of childhood nostalgia and the brutality of the games he orchestrates. This duality shapes his worldview, where he relives childhood joy amidst the horrors he facilitates.

Values And Beliefs: Value of fun, belief in human nature's darkness.

Strengths And Skills: Manipulation, strategic thinking, emotional intelligence.

Suggestions

Explore Il-nam's backstory to provide context for his actions.
Deepen the portrayal of his childhood memories to enhance emotional resonance.

Follow-up Questions

What specific events in Il-nam's past shaped his view of childhood games?
How does his perspective on life and death influence the other players?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 8

Il-nam's character showcases layers of emotional conflict. His enjoyment of the games indicates a potential emotional wound regarding the loss of joy in adulthood. Despite his actions, there is a childlike longing for connection and play, which conflicts with his role as an antagonist.

Character Wound: Loss of joy and childhood innocence.

Character Flaws: Sadistic tendencies, manipulation, detachment from morality.

Suggestions

Introduce scenes that flash back to Il-nam's happier childhood moments.
Show more moments of vulnerability to humanize him despite his wrongdoings.

Follow-up Questions

How does Il-nam's emotional conflict manifest in his interactions with Gi-hun?
What past experiences have led him to find joy in manipulating others?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 7

Il-nam’s character arc is more about revelation than transformation. He consistently displays a childlike glee in chaos, and while he demonstrates strategic manipulation, he ultimately reveals his intent. The emotional climax occurs when he dies, showing a complex blend of sadness and joy in his connection with Gi-hun.

Polarity Changes: Il-nam's power over others is challenged as the narrative progresses.

Transformation Triggers: Interactions with Gi-hun, particularly toward the end.

Suggestions

Clarify Il-nam's motivations earlier in the narrative.
Use his final moments to deepen emotional impact on viewers.

Follow-up Questions

What are the key decisions Il-nam makes that highlight his motivations?
How do the players’ reactions to Il-nam shape the overall narrative?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

His dialogue often juxtaposes innocence with the weight of his choices, as he refers to games and fun while discussing life and death. This unique voice serves to outline his complex perspective on joy, manipulation, and mortality.

Unique Voice: Childish wonder mixed with existential musings.

Suggestions

Incorporate more playful language that contrasts with grim situations.
Utilize pauses and playful tones to enhance tension in critical dialogues.

Follow-up Questions

How does Il-nam's speech evolve in intensity throughout the story?
What specific phrases can highlight his duality?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 9

His actions throughout the screenplay are animated by a desire to explore human dynamics through a perverse lens of play. He consistently challenges players, manipulating situations to both enjoy their pain and relive lost joy.

Motivations: Recreating the thrill of childhood games; exploring human nature.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires fun and engagement with human nature; needs to confront his mortality.

Suggestions

Highlight moments where Il-nam's decisions backfire or have unintended consequences.
Provide glimpses of his past to contrast with his current motivations.

Follow-up Questions

What moments in the game demonstrate Il-nam's manipulation skills?
How do his choices affect the outcome for other players?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 8

Il-nam and Gi-hun share a unique bond that blends camaraderie and manipulation. As the games progress, their connection reveals layers of emotional investment and challenges conventional moralities.

Suggestions

Increase tension in conversations between Il-nam and Gi-hun to amplify stakes.
Create additional layers of interaction with other players to illustrate his impact.

Follow-up Questions

How do Il-nam's relationships challenge traditional notions of friendship?
What dynamics can shift the emotional weight of his interactions?

Scene Impact

Score: 9

Il-nam's intricate interactions with other characters bring out the complexity of their struggles. His mere presence often hints at broader thematic explorations of morality and human nature, making for compelling viewing.

Suggestions

Raise stakes in scenes where Il-nam reveals his true intentions.
Use Il-nam's reactions to create dramatic contrasts in emotional tones.

Follow-up Questions

Which scene captures the essence of Il-nam’s complex role best?
How can his absence or presence alter whole scene dynamics?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 10

As an antagonist, Il-nam embodies the manipulative nature of power dynamics and the darkness hidden behind the facade of childhood innocence. His impact drives the thematic exploration of human depravity, making his role essential to the narrative.

Symbolic Role: Symbolizes the corruptive influence of money and power.

Suggestions

Increase moments that challenge Il-nam's power in the narrative.
Expand on his symbolic role through additional reflective dialogues.

Follow-up Questions

How does Il-nam embody the themes of childhood vs. adulthood?
What does his demise signify in the context of the narrative?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

His character arc encapsulates the stark contrasts between joy and suffering, childlike wonder in the face of stark reality, revealing how humans engage with deep psychological struggles and the inherent darkness within.

Suggestions

Develop scenes that juxtapose Il-nam's playful theories against horrific outcomes.
Link his motivations directly back to the central themes of the narrative to create depth.

Follow-up Questions

How does Il-nam's character serve as a reflection of societal issues?
In what ways can his actions reinforce or challenge central themes?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 9

Il-nam evokes a profound emotional response, making viewers grapple with conflicting feelings of pity and horror towards his character. His complexities deepen the emotional stakes of the series, leaving a lasting impact.

Emotional Impact: Provokes tension, sympathy, and disgust in the audience.

Suggestions

Incorporate moments that directly challenge audience sympathies.
Enhance pivotal scenes where his duality creates emotional tension.

Follow-up Questions

What specific scenes generate the strongest emotional reactions to Il-nam?
How can his dual nature skew audience perception throughout the story?

Personality Types

MBTI: entp

Il-nam’s spontaneous creativity and playfulness in conversations suggest he may display ENTP traits, with a focus on innovation and challenge.

Confidence: 80%

Possible Alternative Type: infj (20%)

Suggestions

Explore his motivations through an intellectual lens to enhance ENTP traits.
Develop more emotional layers that align with the INFJ perspective.

Follow-up Questions

How do Il-nam's decisions showcase an innovative approach to conflicts?
What moments demonstrate potential INFJ traits in his character arc?

Enneagram: 7

Il-nam appears to embody the adventurous and thrill-seeking qualities of a Type 7, living from a desire to experience life richly and to avoid pain.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: 4 (15%)

Suggestions

Highlight moments that align with the hedonistic pursuits typical of Type 7.
Integrate elements that hint at deeper emotional struggles resonant with Type 4.

Follow-up Questions

How do Il-nam's actions reflect a fear of being trapped or limited?
What nuances suggest deeper emotional complexities inherent in his character?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (30)

Il-nam's final interaction at the hospital encapsulates his complex emotional state.

Why: The culmination of his thoughts, themes of mortality, and connection with Gi-hun engage audiences profoundly.

Weakest Scene (19)

Il-nam’s moment in the limousine with the Front Man feels more passive than active, lacking engagement.

Why: This lack of interaction diminishes his character's dynamic nature.

Suggestions:

Introduce brief flashbacks or dialogues reflecting Il-nam's motivations.
Heighten tension through Il-nam's expectations of the Front Man and viewers.

Theme	Theme Details	Theme Explanation
Betrayal and Deception	The theme of betrayal and deception is present throughout the screenplay, particularly in the scenes involving Sang-woo and Gi-hun. Sang-woo's attempt to attack Gi-hun with a knife during the Squid Game and their subsequent knife fight demonstrate the betrayal between friends. Additionally, the revelation that the games were orchestrated by the VIPs and the Masked Soldiers shows the deception and betrayal of the participants.	This theme explores the idea of trust and loyalty being broken, leading to conflict and emotional turmoil for the characters.
Survival and Desperation	The theme of survival and desperation is evident in various scenes, such as the Squid Game and the bet proposed by Il-nam. The characters are driven to extreme measures in order to survive, whether it's participating in deadly games or making life-or-death decisions. The emotional tone of these scenes is intense and violent, highlighting the desperation of the characters.	This theme explores the lengths people are willing to go to in order to survive, as well as the moral dilemmas they face in such situations.
Friendship and Loyalty	The theme of friendship and loyalty is explored in the scenes involving Sang-woo and Gi-hun, particularly in the flashback scene and the final scene. Despite the conflicts and betrayals, there is still a deep bond between the two characters. Sang-woo's apology and Gi-hun's emotional reaction in the flashback scene demonstrate their friendship, while Gi-hun's decision to confront the people behind the game in the final scene shows his loyalty to Sang-woo.	This theme explores the power of friendship and the sacrifices people are willing to make for those they care about.
Guilt and Redemption	The theme of guilt and redemption is present in the scenes involving Gi-hun, particularly in the flashback scene and the scene with Sang-woo's Mom. Gi-hun carries a sense of guilt for his past actions and the choices he made, which is evident in his emotional reaction to Sang-woo's apology and his willingness to help Sang-woo's Mom. The emotional tone of these scenes is tragic and heartbreaking, highlighting Gi-hun's desire for redemption.	This theme explores the idea of seeking redemption for past mistakes and the emotional toll it takes on individuals.
Power and Control	The theme of power and control is evident in the scenes involving the VIPs, the Masked Soldiers, and Il-nam. The VIPs and Masked Soldiers hold power and control over the participants in the games, manipulating and orchestrating their actions. Il-nam's creation of the game and his philosophy on money and life also reflect the theme of power and control.	This theme explores the dynamics of power and control, as well as the consequences of individuals wielding such power.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

Goals and Philosophical Conflict
internal Goals	The protagonist's internal goals evolve throughout the script, reflecting their deeper needs and fears.
External Goals	The protagonist's external goals also evolve, reflecting the immediate challenges they face in the game and in their personal lives.
Philosophical Conflict	The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the protagonist's beliefs and values being challenged by the violent and morally ambiguous nature of the Squid Game.

Character Development Contribution: The evolving internal and external goals contribute to the protagonist's development by challenging their beliefs, values, and motivations. They are forced to confront their fears, seek forgiveness, question their own morality, and strive for justice and understanding.

Narrative Structure Contribution: The evolving goals provide a clear throughline for the protagonist's journey, driving the narrative forward and creating tension and conflict. They also serve as catalysts for plot developments and character interactions.

Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and philosophical conflict deepen the thematic exploration of survival, justice, forgiveness, love, and the nature of humanity. They raise questions about morality, the value of life, and the consequences of one's actions.

Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Articles

Site	Description
Creative Screenwriting	How Important Is A Character’s Goal?
Studio Binder	What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict	How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode.
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great	By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals	By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy?

What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \ It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.

Abbreviate Headers

Story Content

Character Development

Scene Elements

Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

			Story Content			Character Development				Scene Elements					Audience Engagement				Technical Aspects
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Originality	Characters	Character Changes	Internal Goal	External Goal	Conflict	Opposition	High stakes	Story forward	Twist	Emotional Impact	Dialogue	Engagement	Pacing	Formatting	Structure
1 - The Final Game Begins	Intense, Suspenseful, Violent	8	8	7	7	8	7	8	7	9	8	9	8	8	7	7	9	9	9	9
2 - The Final Showdown	Intense, Confrontational, Emotional	9	8	9	9	9	8	8	9	10	9	10	9	9	9	8	10	9	9	8
3 - The Tragic End	Intense, Emotional, Tragic	9	8	9	9	9	9	10	8	9	8	10	9	10	10	8	10	9	9	8
4 - Gi-hun's Tragic Reunion	Intense, Emotional, Grim	9	8	8	6	9	9	8	7	9	8	9	8	7	10	7	9	8	9	8
5 - The Final Game	Intense, Despairing, Mysterious	9	8	9	9	9	8	8	7	10	8	10	9	8	9	8	9	9	9	8
6 - The Final Showdown	Intense, Emotional, Mysterious	9	8	9	7	9	8	8	7	10	7	10	9	8	9	8	9	9	9	8
7 - The Revelation and Departure	Intense, Emotional, Puzzling	9	8	9	6	9	9	8	7	10	8	10	9	8	10	8	9	9	9	8

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.

Scene Strengths

Intense action
Compelling characters
Emotional impact
Well-developed themes
Surprising plot twist

Scene Weaknesses

Limited exploration of themes
Moderate emotional impact
Some moments of excessive violence
Limited dialogue
Confusing for some viewers

Suggestions

Consider further exploring and developing the themes presented in the screenplay to add more depth and meaning to the story
Balance the scenes with excessive violence with scenes that have more emotional impact and dialogue
Think carefully about the intended audience and make sure the level of violence and intensity is appropriate
Consider adding more dialogue and backstory to help viewers understand the character motivations
Make sure the plot twists and surprises are clear and easy to follow, especially for viewers who may not have watched previous episodes

World Building

Physical environment: The world depicted in the screenplay is a mix of different physical environments, including a game arena, a semi-basement apartment, a subway car, a snowy street, a private hospital room, an airport, and various other locations. Each environment has its own unique characteristics that contribute to the overall atmosphere and tone of the scenes.
Culture: The cultural element present in the screenplay is the Squid Game itself, which was originally a children's game played in Korea. The game has been transformed into a deadly competition with high stakes and life-or-death challenges. The cultural significance of the game adds depth to the narrative and explores themes of childhood innocence, societal pressures, and the dark side of human nature.
Society: The societal structure in the screenplay is depicted through various characters and their interactions. There are VIPs who watch the Squid Game, a hidden organization orchestrating the game, and ordinary people struggling to survive in a harsh and unforgiving world. The societal structure highlights the power dynamics, inequality, and exploitation present in the world of the screenplay.
Technology: The technological aspects in the screenplay include the use of walkie-talkies, cell phones, an ATM machine, and a coin toss. These technological elements serve as tools for communication, decision-making, and survival. They also reflect the modern world and the role of technology in shaping human experiences and actions.
Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology shape the characters' experiences and actions in the screenplay. The physical environments create a sense of atmosphere, tension, and isolation, which influence the characters' emotions and behaviors. The cultural element of the Squid Game affects the characters' motivations, as they are driven by the desire to win and survive. The societal structure and power dynamics shape the characters' relationships and choices. The technological elements provide opportunities for communication, decision-making, and manipulation.
Narrative contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the narrative by creating a rich and immersive world for the characters to navigate. The physical environments, cultural elements, societal structure, and technology provide the backdrop for the characters' journeys, conflicts, and transformations. They also drive the plot forward, as the characters are forced to confront the challenges and dangers of their world. The world elements add depth and complexity to the narrative, allowing for exploration of themes such as survival, morality, identity, and the human condition.
Thematic depth contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the thematic depth by exploring various themes and ideas. The physical environments reflect the characters' internal states and external circumstances, highlighting themes of isolation, despair, and hope. The cultural element of the Squid Game raises questions about the nature of competition, the loss of innocence, and the consequences of societal pressures. The societal structure exposes the inequalities and power dynamics that exist in the world, touching on themes of class, exploitation, and corruption. The technological elements raise questions about the role of technology in shaping human experiences and actions, and the ethical implications of its use. Overall, the world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by providing a rich and thought-provoking exploration of human nature, society, and the complexities of the human condition.

Voice Analysis
Summary:	The writer's voice is characterized by concise and impactful dialogue, minimalistic description, and a focus on tension, suspense, and moral dilemmas. The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a sense of urgency, exploring deeper themes, and developing complex characters through dialogue and action.
Voice Contribution	The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a tense and suspenseful atmosphere, exploring moral dilemmas and philosophical themes, and developing complex characters through concise and impactful dialogue. The writer's voice also adds depth to the screenplay by effectively conveying emotions and actions without relying heavily on dialogue or description.
Best Representation Scene	6 - The Final Showdown
Best Scene Explanation	This scene is the best representation because it showcases their ability to create tension and mystery through concise dialogue and descriptive narrative.

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
Tone and Emotional Impact	There is a strong correlation between the tone of the scene and its emotional impact. Scenes with intense and emotional tones consistently score high in emotional impact.
Dialogue and Character Changes	Scenes with strong dialogue tend to have more significant character changes. This suggests that dialogue is an effective tool for character development.
Conflict and High Stakes	Scenes with high conflict tend to have high stakes. This makes sense, as high stakes often drive conflict.
Concept and Plot	There is a moderate correlation between the concept of the scene and its plot. Scenes with strong concepts tend to have more complex plots.
Characters and Emotional Impact	Scenes with well-developed characters tend to have higher emotional impact. This suggests that readers are more invested in characters they care about.
Move Story Forward and Overall Grade	Scenes that effectively move the story forward tend to score higher overall grades. This suggests that readers value scenes that advance the plot.
Tone and Conflict	Scenes with intense tones tend to have high conflict. This makes sense, as intense tones often create tension and conflict.
Character Changes and Emotional Impact	Scenes with significant character changes tend to have higher emotional impact. This suggests that readers are invested in character growth and development.
Dialogue and Conflict	Scenes with strong dialogue tend to have high conflict. This suggests that dialogue can be an effective tool for creating tension and conflict.
High Stakes and Emotional Impact	Scenes with high stakes tend to have higher emotional impact. This makes sense, as readers are more invested in outcomes that have significant consequences.

Writer's Craft Overall Analysis

The writer demonstrates strong technical writing proficiency and an ability to create suspenseful and engaging scenes. However, there are areas for improvement in terms of character development, exploring different conflicts, and crafting emotionally resonant scenes.

Key Improvement Areas

Character development

While the scenes effectively establish the setting and challenges of the game, there is room for further development of the characters. This can be achieved by exploring their motivations, backstories, and internal conflicts.

Exploring different conflicts

The writer shows promise in creating tension and exploring moral dilemmas. However, it would be beneficial to practice creating conflicts with different philosophical viewpoints and motivations to add depth and complexity to the scenes.

Crafting emotionally resonant scenes

The scenes effectively convey tension and suspense, but there is an opportunity to further develop the emotional impact. This can be achieved by focusing on conveying emotions through actions, visuals, and minimal dialogue.

Suggestions

Type	Suggestion	Rationale
Book	Save the Cat! Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody	This book provides insights and exercises to improve the craft of screenwriting, including creating engaging scenes and developing unique voices.
Book	Story by Robert McKee	This book provides insights and techniques for crafting compelling and emotionally resonant scenes.
Exercise	Write a scene with a different game and set of challengesPractice In SceneProv	This exercise can help the writer explore different scenarios and develop their creativity in creating unique and engaging scenes.
Exercise	Write a scene with a different philosophical conflictPractice In SceneProv	This exercise can help the writer further develop their ability to create complex conflicts and explore different moral dilemmas.
Exercise	Write a scene with minimal dialogue, focusing on conveying emotions through actions and visuals.Practice In SceneProv	This exercise can help the writer further develop their ability to create engaging and impactful scenes.

Additional Notes: The writer shows promise in their ability to create engaging and thought-provoking scenes. With further development of their craft, they have the potential to become a skilled screenwriter.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation
Final Game Showdown	Sang-woo and Gi-hun engage in a bloody knife fight in the final game.	The Final Game Showdown trope is a common trope in which the main characters face off in a climactic battle or confrontation. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'The Hunger Games' when Katniss and Peeta fight against the other tributes in the final game.
Flashback	A scene takes place in a playground during a flashback where Sang-woo and Gi-hun reminisce about their childhood.	The Flashback trope is used to provide background information or context by showing events that happened in the past. An example of this trope can be seen in the TV show 'Lost' where flashbacks are used to reveal the characters' backstories.
Tragic Death	Sang-woo unexpectedly stabs himself and dies in Gi-hun's arms.	The Tragic Death trope is used to create a dramatic and emotional moment in a story. It often involves the sudden and unexpected death of a character. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'Romeo + Juliet' where Romeo and Juliet both die tragically at the end of the story.
Emotional Turmoil	Gi-hun experiences emotional turmoil over his mother's death and his uncertain future.	The Emotional Turmoil trope is used to depict a character's inner struggles and conflicts. It often involves intense emotions such as grief, sadness, or confusion. An example of this trope can be seen in the TV show 'Breaking Bad' where the main character, Walter White, experiences emotional turmoil as he becomes involved in the drug trade.
Philosophical Conversation	Il-nam and Gi-hun discuss the purpose of the game and their differing views on the value of human life.	The Philosophical Conversation trope is used to explore deeper themes and ideas through dialogue between characters. It often involves discussions about morality, ethics, or the meaning of life. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'The Matrix' where the characters engage in philosophical conversations about the nature of reality.
Life and Death Reflection	Il-nam dies as the clock strikes midnight, and Gi-hun reflects on their time together.	The Life and Death Reflection trope is used to create a contemplative and introspective moment in a story. It often involves characters reflecting on their own mortality or the meaning of life. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'The Fault in Our Stars' where the main characters reflect on life and death as they navigate their own terminal illnesses.
Confronting the Villain	Gi-hun walks away from the plane, determined to confront the people behind the game.	The Confronting the Villain trope is used to create a climactic moment where the protagonist confronts the main antagonist or the source of conflict. It often involves a final showdown or confrontation. An example of this trope can be seen in the movie 'The Dark Knight' where Batman confronts the Joker in a final battle.

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
2	Gi-hun: You killed them. You’re the one who killed them!
3	Sang-woo: Gi-hun. I’m sorry.
6	Il-nam: You asked me why I let you live. Because it was fun playing with you.
5	Il-nam: If you play the game, I'll answer your questions.
7	Gi-hun: That's why I can't forgive you for everything you're doing.

Some Loglines to consider:

A down-on-his-luck gambler wins a deadly competition but must confront the moral consequences of his survival and the enigmatic organization behind the games.
Childhood friends become bitter rivals in a high-stakes game of life and death, where the ultimate prize is a life-changing fortune and the chance to escape poverty.
A group of desperate individuals risk their lives in a series of deadly children's games, orchestrated by a mysterious organization that preys on the vulnerable.
As the sole survivor of a brutal competition, a man grapples with guilt, trauma, and the corrupting power of wealth, leading him to seek answers and justice from the game's organizers.
In a world where the wealthy gamble on human lives for entertainment, one man must choose between accepting his fortune and fighting back against the system that nearly destroyed him.

SQUID GAME

EPISODE 109
“ONE LUCKY DAY”

Written by
Hwang Dong-hyuk
1. INT. WAITING AREA

Sang-woo and Gi-hun stand glaring at each other outside the game arena entrance.

MASKED SOLDIER
Player 218 and 456. Welcome to the ﬁnal game.
Before we begin, we will toss a coin to determine
oﬀense and defense. Please, choose between triangle
or square.

GI-HUN
Triangle.

SANG-WOO
...

The coin is tossed into the air, and it comes back down, lands in the Masked Soldier's palm. He
immediately closes his ﬁst, slaps the coin onto the back of his opposite hand, then -- reveals the
coin to show -- triangle.

MASKED SOLDIER
It's a triangle.
(to Gi-hun)
Please choose between oﬀense and defense.

GI-HUN
Oﬀense.

MASKED SOLDIER
No. 456 is oﬀense, and No. 218 is defense!

MASKED SOLDIER
The last game is the Squid Game.

2. INT. VIP ROOM 2

This room is on the 2nd ﬂoor at the end of the corridor leading to the arena. The VIPs stand
before the plate glass window that looks out on the arena and -- the 2 men entering it.
The Squid Game ﬁeld drawn on the arena stretches out before them.

VIP 1 (ENGLISH)
Squid Game... what an odd name.

FRONT MAN (ENGLISH)
It was originally a children's game
that was played in Korea many years ago.

3. EXT. SQUID GAME FIELD – GAME ARENA - DAY

Masked Soldier walks Gi-hun and Sang-woo to the Squid Game ﬁeld.

MASKED SOLDIER
I will explain the rules. One, the attacker needs to
go into the squid drawing, run past the defense,
and tap the squid's head to win. Two, the defender
must push the attacker out of the drawing to win.
Three, if there comes a situation where either one of
you can't continue playing, the last one standing wins.

Gi-hun and Sang-woo stand in the middle of the Squid Game ﬁeld.

GI-HUN
What do you mean by "can't continue playing"?

MASKED SOLDIER
It refers to a player's death.

MASKED SOLDIER
Now, let the game begin.

Gi-hun and Sang-woo exchange icy stares before going to their positions on the ﬁeld --

4. INT. VIP ROOM 2

The VIPs stand before the plate glass window, looking out on the arena.

FRONT MAN (ENGLISH)
Among all the games that kids played back then,
it was the most physical and violent.

VIP 2 (ENGLISH)
So any kind of violence is allowed?

FRONT MAN (ENGLISH)
Sure. There are no restrictions.
5. EXT. SQUID GAME FIELD – GAME ARENA - DAY

Sang-woo stays right in the middle of the ﬁeld, and he watches Gi-hun as --
Gi-hun goes to the circle part of the ﬁeld, where he kneels, reties his shoes. Then he stands and --
starts hopping on one leg. Slowly, he heads for the midsection of the squid ﬁeld.
Gi-hun places his foot in the small circle located in the midsection.

6. INT. VIP ROOM 2

The VIPs look out the window to the game arena where Gi-hun is hopping on one foot.

VIP 1 (ENGLISH)
Why is he hopping on one foot?

FRONT MAN (ENGLISH)
The attacker is given a handicap. He can only
hop on one foot until he crosses the squid's neck.

VIP 2 (ENGLISH)
Oh, so the defender tries to block him.

FRONT MAN (ENGLISH)
Yes. That's the ﬁrst challenge of this game.

7. EXT. SQUID GAME FIELD – GAME ARENA - DAY

Gi-hun stands with his foot in the small circle, and Sang-woo stands in front of Gi-hun, holding a
knife.

GI-HUN
We played this pretty often as kids.

SANG-WOO
...

GI-HUN
Do you remember what we used to say
when we crossed this?

SANG-WOO
(points his knife, marches forward)
Cut the crap and…
Sang-woo swoops in with his knife but --
Gi-hun throws the sand into Sang-woo's eyes.
Sang-woo jerks away, throws his hands to eyes, stumbles back in visible agony.
Gi-hun struts into the squid's midsection.

GI-HUN
The Secret Royal Inspector move. That's what we
called it...

INSERT -- EXT. ISLAND -- the island immobile as rough, rising waves crash against it. The sky
ominous with dark clouds as thunder RUMBLES low in the distance.

8. INT. VIP ROOM 2

The VIPs stand in front of the plate glass window, looking down at the two men. Rain
drops start to patter against the glass.

VIP 3 (CHINESE)
Good rain knows the best time to fall.

VIP 2 (ENGLISH)
Mmm. It sounds so romantic. What's it mean?

VIP 3 (ENGLISH)
"Good rain knows the best time to fall."

VIP 3 (CHINESE)
Du Fu.

9. EXT. SQUID GAME FIELD - GAME ARENA - DAY

With rain falling on him, Gi-hun approaches the lower circle of the squid. Inside the
squid frame -- Sang-woo waits for Gi-hun. Knife in hand.

Genres: Thriller, Drama
Tone: Intense, Suspenseful, Violent

Summary In the waiting area, Sang-woo and Gi-hun are chosen for the final game of Squid Game. They are assigned offense and defense roles in the Squid Game, a violent and physical game. The VIPs in the VIP room discuss the origins of the game. The Masked Soldier explains the rules to Gi-hun and Sang-woo. Gi-hun reminisces about playing the game as kids. The game begins with Gi-hun using a distraction to enter the squid's midsection. The VIPs observe the game from the VIP room. Rain starts to fall as Gi-hun progresses through the game. The scene ends with Gi-hun approaching the lower circle of the squid, where Sang-woo waits with a knife.

Strengths

Intense atmosphere
Well-developed characters
Tense conflict

Weaknesses

Limited exploration of themes
Moderate emotional impact

General Critique

The scene lacks clear character motivations for Sang-woo's sudden attack on Gi-hun with a knife. It feels forced and out of place.
The dialogue is mostly functional and lacks depth or nuance.
The visual element of rain falling on Gi-hun is interesting but could be better utilized to enhance the emotional tone of the scene.
The pacing of the scene could be improved to build more tension and suspense leading up to the attack.
The exposition about the game rules and history feels clunky and could be integrated more smoothly into the dialogue and action.

General Suggestions

Consider adding more backstory or context to Sang-woo's character to make his attack on Gi-hun more believable and impactful.
Rewrite the dialogue to add more subtext and character development, making it more engaging for the audience.
Use the rain falling on Gi-hun to heighten the emotional stakes of the scene, perhaps by having it symbolize his fear or uncertainty about the game.
Experiment with different pacing techniques, such as slowing down the action or using quick cuts, to build more tension and suspense leading up to the attack.
Integrate the exposition about the game rules and history more organically into the dialogue and action, perhaps by having the characters discuss it in a more natural way.

Ratings

Overall

Overall: 8

The scene effectively sets up the final game and creates a tense and suspenseful atmosphere. The violent nature of the game adds to the intensity. The nostalgic childhood memories add depth to the characters and their motivations.

Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of the Squid Game, a violent and physical game with offense and defense roles, is intriguing and unique. It adds a layer of suspense and danger to the story.

Plot: 7

The plot progresses as the final game begins and the rules are explained. The childhood memories add depth to the characters and their motivations.

Originality: 7

The level of originality in this scene is moderate. While the concept of a deadly game is not entirely unique, the specific rules and challenges of the Squid Game add a fresh approach. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue adds to the originality.

Character Development

Characters: 8

The characters of Gi-hun and Sang-woo are well-developed and their motivations are clear. The childhood memories add depth to their relationship.

Character Changes: 7

Gi-hun shows resourcefulness and quick thinking by using a distraction to progress in the game. Sang-woo's character remains consistent.

Internal Goal: 8

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to win the Squid Game and survive. This reflects their deeper need for survival and their fear of death.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to tap the squid's head and win the game. This reflects the immediate challenge they are facing in the game.

Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 9

The conflict between Gi-hun and Sang-woo, as well as the violent nature of the game, creates a high level of conflict in the scene.

Opposition: 8

The opposition in this scene is strong as the protagonist faces the challenge of overcoming the defender and tapping the squid's head. The audience is unsure of how the protagonist will succeed.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are high as the characters' lives are at risk in the violent game.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by introducing the final game and setting up the conflict between Gi-hun and Sang-woo.

Unpredictability: 8

This scene is unpredictable because it includes unexpected moments, such as Gi-hun throwing sand into Sang-woo's eyes to gain an advantage. The audience is unsure of how the game will unfold.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

There is a philosophical conflict evident in this scene between the violence and physicality of the Squid Game and the protagonist's beliefs and values. The protagonist questions the violence allowed in the game.

Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The scene evokes tension and suspense, but the emotional impact is not as strong.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue effectively conveys the rules of the game and the characters' emotions. The nostalgic conversation between Gi-hun and Sang-woo adds depth to their relationship.

Engagement: 9

This scene is engaging because it introduces the high-stakes final game of the Squid Game and creates suspense through the protagonist's actions and the intense atmosphere of the game.

Pacing: 9

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness by gradually building tension and suspense. The writer uses concise and impactful writing to maintain a fast pace.

Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It uses proper scene headings, action lines, and dialogue formatting.

Structure: 9

The structure of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It introduces the setting and characters, establishes the rules of the game, and builds suspense through the protagonist's actions.

SANG-WOO
She was going to die anyway. I just chose to
end her pain quickly.

GI-HUN
Don't give me that bullshit. She was alive, and she
could have been saved.

SANG-WOO
That's why I killed her. Because I know what
you're like. Because you would've given up on
playing just to save her.

GI-HUN
Was that it? Were you afraid I'd give up?

SANG-WOO
That's right! Because if you two gave up, it
would've been all over! I'd have to leave this place
without a penny!

GI-HUN
(taking a knife out of his pocket)
If it hadn't been for her, I would've killed you
with this knife.

GI-HUN
(glaring at Sang-woo)
You are never… going to leave this place
with that money.

Gi-hun rushes towards Sang-woo. When they collide -- the two men are locked in bloody combat
right in the middle of the squid ﬁgure.
From God shot -- through the roof of the arena, the squid drawing looks like a ring fencing the two
men in.
On the ﬁeld -- they lash out at each other with their knives, slashing limbs and torsos.
Blood trickles, oozes, sprays. In a battle of strength, they each grab hold of the other person's hand,
trying to subdue it. Then --
Sang-woo knocks Gi-hun's knife from his hand and throws himself against Gi-hun.
Pushed back, Gi-hun comes dangerously close to the squid line, but just in time -- he manages to
turn and get away from Sang-woo without stepping on the line.
Gi-hun seems familiar with hand to hand combat. As the ﬁght continues, he steadily gains the
advantage by artfully dodging Sang-woo's blows and landing his own consecutive punches to
Sang-woo's face and stomach.
Sang-woo grabs his stomach in pain. Blood trickles from his lip. Gi-hun stops for just a second,
seeing Sang-woo in pain, and --
Sang-woo sees a chance. He reaches down, snatches Gi-hun's dropped knife, then stabs Gi-hun's
thigh.
Gi-hun wobbles, staggers back.
Sang-woo comes at him again, knife in hand. Gi-hun manages to get away, but before he's
completely out of reach --
Sang-woo stabs Gi-hun in the side.
Gi-hun's legs buckle, and he collapses. He grabs his side in pain.
SANG-WOO
(panting)
Do you remember this place? We played
Red Light, Green Light here. Everyone who stood
here back then is all dead now, except for you and me!

SANG-WOO
We have come too far to go back.

Gripping his knife, Sang-woo approaches Gi-hun.
Sang-woo raises his knife to stab Gi-hun but Gi-hun raises his hand to block it.
The knife lodges into Gi-hun's hand when Sang-woo brings it down, Gi-hun bites into Sang-woo’s
heel.
Gi-hun's teeth dig deeper into the ﬂesh. Blood trickles from around the bite, then oozes, then --
Gi-hun wrenches back, completely biting, tearing oﬀ Sang-woo's Achilles heel.
Sang-woo SCREAMS in agony as his heel squirts blood onto the ground.
Gi-hun pulls the knife lodged in his hand, scrambles back, gets to his feet.
As Sang-woo writhes in pain on the ground, Gi-hun starts punching him.

GI-HUN
You killed them. You killed everyone.
You’re the one who killed them!

Gi-hun lets out a wild, animalistic cry -- "Aaarrrrgggghhh!" -- then raises the knife and plunges it
down into --
The ground. Right next to Sang-woo's ear.

10. INT. VIP ROOM 2

The VIPs stand in front of the plate glass window, looking down at the game arena.

VIP 1 (ENGLISH)
Well, this game is over.

VIP 2 (ENGLISH)
Yep, that about wraps it up.

11. EXT. SQUID GAME FIELD - GAME ARENA - DAY

Gi-hun staggers to his feet, limps oﬀ, leaving Sang-woo behind him. And he's just about to step into
the squid head, past the ﬁnish line, when he -- stops.
To win, all Gi-hun has to do is step into the squid head. But he hesitates until --
GI-HUN
(softly)
I'm done…

Gi-hun slowly turns around, looks at MASKED SOLDIER 2, who's aiming a gun at
Sang-woo's head.

GI-HUN
I want to stop here.

12. INT. VIP ROOM 2

The VIPs stand at the glass window, watching Gi-hun intently as --
He limps back to Sang-woo, who's still lying sprawled out on the ﬁeld.

VIP 1 (ENGLISH)
What is he doing?

VIP 2 (ENGLISH)
What the hell?

VIP 3 (ENGLISH)
What is going on?

13. EXT. SQUID GAME FIELD - GAME ARENA - DAY

Gi-hun walks to the Masked Soldier.

GI-HUN
Clause Three of the agreement. Games may be
terminated if the majority agrees. If we both give up,
the game ends here.

MASKED SOLDIER 2 (ENGLISH)
(talking into his walkie-talkie)
No. 456 wants to stop the game.

14. INT. VIP ROOM 2

The VIPS stand at the glass window, watching Gi-hun.

VIP 1 (ENGLISH)
He's giving up the prize money right here
at the very edge of victory?

VIP 2 (ENGLISH)
No fucking way.

The Front Man watches Gi-hun.

15. EXT. SQUID GAME FIELD - GAME ARENA - DAY

GI-HUN
(after a moment's silence)
Sang-woo...

Genres: Action, Thriller
Tone: Intense, Confrontational, Emotional

Summary In the midst of the Squid Game, Sang-woo and Gi-hun engage in a brutal fight to the death. Sang-woo reveals that he killed someone to secure his own survival, leading to a heated argument between the two. The fight escalates with both men using knives, resulting in bloody combat. Gi-hun gains the upper hand, but Sang-woo manages to stab him multiple times. However, Gi-hun retaliates by biting off Sang-woo's Achilles heel. As Sang-woo writhes in pain, Gi-hun confronts him about the deaths caused by their participation in the games. Gi-hun ultimately decides to end the game and approaches the Masked Soldier to invoke the clause for termination. The VIPs and the Front Man observe the unexpected turn of events. Gi-hun's actions leave everyone puzzled.

Strengths

Intense action sequences
Emotionally charged dialogue
Surprising plot twist

Weaknesses

Some moments of excessive violence

General Critique

The dialogue between Sang-woo and Gi-hun feels a bit on-the-nose and could benefit from more subtext and nuance.
The fight scene is well-written and intense, but some of the descriptions of the violence may be too graphic for some readers/viewers.
The visual element of the squid drawing acting as a ring fencing the two men in is a bit heavy-handed and could be more subtly conveyed.
The VIPs' dialogue feels a bit cliched and could benefit from more unique and specific language.
The ending of the scene, with Gi-hun deciding to end the game, feels a bit abrupt and could benefit from more buildup and tension.

General Suggestions

Consider adding more subtext and nuance to the dialogue between Sang-woo and Gi-hun, perhaps by having them speak in more veiled terms or through nonverbal communication.
Consider toning down some of the descriptions of the violence in the fight scene to make it more palatable for a wider audience.
Consider finding a more subtle way to convey the visual element of the squid drawing acting as a ring fencing the two men in, perhaps through camera angles or lighting.
Consider giving the VIPs more unique and specific dialogue that helps to flesh out their characters and motivations.
Consider building up more tension and suspense leading up to Gi-hun's decision to end the game, perhaps by having him struggle more with the decision or by adding more obstacles in his way.

Ratings

Overall

Overall: 9

The scene is highly engaging and emotionally charged, with intense action and dramatic confrontations. The unexpected twist of Gi-hun's decision to stop the game adds a surprising element to the scene, leaving the audience on the edge of their seats.

Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of the Squid Game and the high-stakes competition is well-established throughout the scene. The introduction of the termination clause adds a new layer of tension and raises questions about the characters' motivations.

Plot: 9

The plot of the scene revolves around the intense fight between Sang-woo and Gi-hun, with the added conflict of their differing motivations and past actions. The scene progresses the overall story by showcasing the characters' desperation and the moral dilemmas they face.

Originality: 9

The level of originality in this scene is high. The concept of the Squid Game itself is unique and fresh, and the scene presents a fresh approach to the familiar trope of a final confrontation between friends turned enemies. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue adds to the originality.

Character Development

Characters: 9

The characters of Sang-woo and Gi-hun are well-developed and their conflicting personalities and motivations drive the tension in the scene. Their actions and dialogue reveal their complex relationship and the moral choices they have made.

Character Changes: 8

Gi-hun experiences a significant change in his determination to stop the game and confront Sang-woo about his actions. Sang-woo, on the other hand, remains steadfast in his pursuit of survival, even at the cost of others.

Internal Goal: 8

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to confront and defeat his former friend, Sang-woo. This reflects his deeper need for justice and revenge, as Sang-woo has betrayed and killed other participants in the game.

External Goal: 9

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to win the game by stepping into the squid head. This reflects the immediate circumstances and challenges he's facing, as it is the final step to victory.

Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 10

The conflict in the scene is intense and physical, with the characters fighting for their lives. The emotional conflict between Sang-woo and Gi-hun adds another layer of tension and raises the stakes.

Opposition: 9

The opposition in this scene is strong, as the two characters engage in a bloody and brutal fight. The audience doesn't know who will come out on top.

High Stakes: 10

The stakes in the scene are incredibly high, as the characters are fighting for their lives and the potential prize money. The decision to stop the game at the brink of victory adds an unexpected twist and raises the stakes even further.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story forward by showcasing the characters' moral dilemmas and their ultimate decision to stop the game. It also sets up further conflicts and raises questions about the consequences of their actions.

Unpredictability: 9

This scene is unpredictable because it subverts expectations by having the protagonist give up on winning the game at the last moment. The audience doesn't know how the situation will resolve.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the clash between the protagonist's belief in justice and revenge, and the antagonist's belief in survival and self-interest. This challenges the protagonist's values and worldview, as he must decide whether to prioritize his personal vendetta or the greater good.

Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 9

The scene evokes strong emotions through the characters' intense fight, their heated argument, and the revelation of Sang-woo's dark actions. The audience is emotionally invested in the outcome of the conflict.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue in the scene is confrontational and emotionally charged, reflecting the characters' anger, betrayal, and determination. The lines effectively convey the characters' motivations and add depth to their conflict.

Engagement: 10

This scene is engaging because it is filled with intense action, emotional conflict, and high stakes. The reader or viewer is invested in the outcome of the confrontation between the two characters.

Pacing: 9

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness by maintaining a fast and intense rhythm. The action and dialogue are well-paced, keeping the reader or viewer engaged.

Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It effectively conveys the action and dialogue in a clear and concise manner.

Structure: 8

The structure of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It builds tension through escalating conflict and ends with a cliffhanger moment.

SANG-WOO
When we were kids, we would play just like this,
and our moms would call us in for dinner.
But no one calls us anymore.

GI-HUN
Let's go...

SANG-WOO
(tears running down his face)
...

GI-HUN
(also crying now)
Let's go home.

Gi-hun holds his hand out for Sang-woo.
Sang-woo's teary eyes look up at Gi-hun, and he raises his hand as if he’s trying to reach
Gi-hun’s hand.

SANG-WOO
Gi-hun. I’m sorry.

And without warning -- Sang-woo plunges the knife into his own neck.
Blood splashes across his face.

GI-HUN
(shocked)
Sang-woo!
He drops to his knees, takes Sang-woo in his arms.
Sang-woo coughs blood, speaks with diﬃculty --

GI-HUN
(crying renewed)
Sang… Sang-woo…

SANG-WOO
Gi-hun…

GI-HUN
No, Sang-woo. Don't talk.

SANG-WOO
My… My mom.

GI-HUN
No, Sang-woo…

SANG-WOO
My mom…

GI-HUN
Sang-woo…

Then -- Sang-woo dies in Gi-hun's arms.
Heavy rain falls on Gi-hun's trembling shoulders as he cries while holding the dead Sang-woo
in his arms.

16. INT. CONTROL ROOM

Sang-woo's proﬁle block goes out; his photo drops into darkness.
Only one lit proﬁle remains -- Gi-hun.

17. INT. DORMITORY

The electronic wall display reads ‘Number of Players - 1’, ‘Cash Prize - $44,200,000.’
The piggy bank ﬁlled with the prize money sits in the middle of the empty room.

18. INT. VIP ROOM 2

The room is empty with only the animal masks on the window frame.
19. INT. LIMOUSINE - NIGHT

Gi-hun sits with his hands and legs bound with rope.
The Front Man sits without his mask, pours himself a drink and takes a sip.

FRONT MAN
Congratulations on your win. It was quite the game.

GI-HUN
Why...?

FRONT MAN
...

GI-HUN
Why do you do this?

FRONT MAN
You like horseracing, right?

GI-HUN
...

FRONT MAN
You people are horses at a racetrack. It was unexpected.
I didn't think you'd run this far.

GI-HUN
Who are you?

FRONT MAN
Just think of all this as a dream. And not even
necessarily a nightmare. For you, at least...

The Front Man puts on his mask. Then -- gas ﬁlls up the car.

GI-HUN
(consciousness slipping)
Who are you... who... are you...?

Gi-hun blacks out.
20. EXT. CENTER OF SEOUL - NIGHT

Rain soaks the streets of central Seoul as --
A pseudo-Christian MISSIONARY tots a sign and SHOUTS at passersby --

MISSIONARY
Jesus to Heaven, non-believers to Hell! All who are
foolish and deny God, repent! The day of judgment
is coming!

A limousine pulls up to the side of the road, stops for a moment, then drives oﬀ again.
When it does --
Gi-hun -- blindfolded -- is revealed lying on the ground, not moving. The
Missionary sees him, cautiously goes over, undoes his blindfold.

MISSIONARY
Believe... in Jesus…

Gi-hun opens his eyes. They are bloodshot, tired, scared, and the Missionary steps back in surprise.
Gi-hun gags, writhes, wretches then -- a bank card comes out of his mouth.

21. INT. ATM - NIGHT

Gi-hun slowly inserts the plastic card into the ATM then presses the button to withdraw $10.
On ATM screen -- "Enter PIN Number"
Gi-hun thinks a moment then presses -- 0, 4, 5, 6.
With a WHIR AND A CLICK -- the ATM spits out $10.
Then -- on the ATM screen -- the remaining account balance is shown -- "$44,188,990."
Utterly stunned, Gi-hun stares at the screen.

22. EXT. CHO'S FISHMONGER - MARKETPLACE - NIGHT

It's late. Gi-hun limps through the nearly-deserted marketplace.

SANG-WOO'S MOM (O.C.)
Gi-hun!

Gi-hun stops walking.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
(gasps)
What happened to you? Did you get drunk
and ﬁght again?
GI-HUN
…

SANG-WOO'S MOM
Wait here.

Sang-woo's Mom turns, rushes into her store, comes back moments later with a bag full of
chopped ﬁsh.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
I packed some mackerel. Go have some with your mom.
She must be sick. She won't pick up her phone,
and she hasn't come out to work for two days now.
I should've stopped by, but I've been so out of it lately.

Gi-hun takes the bag then ﬁshes his $10 from his pocket, hands it to her.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
That's okay. If you have any money, save it
and give it to your mother.

Sang-woo's Mom bids farewell, turns to go back to the store, but stops in her way to look back at
Gi-hun.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
Gi-hun.

Genres: Drama, Thriller
Tone: Intense, Emotional, Tragic

Strengths "The scene is emotionally charged, with intense action and a shocking twist. The dialogue is powerful and the performances are compelling. The tragic nature of the scene leaves a lasting impact on the audience."

Weaknesses "Some viewers may find the violence and bloodshed in the scene disturbing. The scene may also be emotionally overwhelming for some audience members."

General Critique

The dialogue between Sang-woo and Gi-hun feels a bit generic and lacks depth. It could benefit from more specific and meaningful exchanges that reveal their characters and their relationship.
The emotional impact of Sang-woo stabbing himself is somewhat diminished by the lack of build-up and foreshadowing. It feels sudden and out of nowhere. Adding subtle hints or clues throughout the screenplay leading up to this moment could make it more impactful.
The scene could benefit from more sensory details to enhance the atmosphere and immerse the audience in the tragic moment. Describing the sound of rain, the smell of wet earth, or the taste of blood could add depth to the scene.
The dialogue between Gi-hun and Sang-woo after the stabbing feels a bit repetitive and could be condensed to maintain the emotional intensity without dragging the scene.
The visual element of blood splashing across Sang-woo's face is powerful, but it could be further emphasized through vivid and visceral descriptions to evoke a stronger reaction from the audience.
The ending of the scene, with Sang-woo dying in Gi-hun's arms as heavy rain falls, is poignant and tragic. However, it could benefit from a stronger closing image or moment that lingers in the audience's mind.
The transition to the next scene could be smoother and more seamless to maintain the flow of the story.

General Suggestions

Develop more unique and specific dialogue that reveals the characters' personalities, histories, and conflicts.
Foreshadow Sang-woo's self-destructive tendencies and inner turmoil throughout the screenplay to make his self-stabbing more impactful.
Add sensory details to enhance the atmosphere and immerse the audience in the tragic moment.
Condense the dialogue between Gi-hun and Sang-woo after the stabbing to maintain the emotional intensity.
Amplify the description of the blood splashing across Sang-woo's face to evoke a stronger reaction from the audience.
Consider adding a powerful closing image or moment that leaves a lasting impression on the audience.
Smoothly transition to the next scene to maintain the flow of the story.

Ratings

Overall

Overall: 9

The scene is highly impactful and emotionally charged, with intense action and a shocking twist. It effectively conveys the tragic nature of the story and leaves a lasting impression on the audience.

Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of the Squid Game and the moral dilemmas faced by the characters are compelling and thought-provoking. The scene explores the consequences of their choices and the depths they are willing to go to survive.

Plot: 9

The plot of the scene is gripping and filled with tension. The fight between Sang-woo and Gi-hun adds a layer of conflict and raises the stakes. The unexpected twist of Sang-woo taking his own life adds a tragic element to the story.

Originality: 9

This scene is fairly original in its depiction of a character taking their own life as a result of the game they have been forced to participate in. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue adds to the originality of the scene.

Character Development

Characters: 9

The characters of Sang-woo and Gi-hun are well-developed and their emotional journey is compelling. The scene showcases their complex relationship and the internal struggles they face.

Character Changes: 9

The scene marks a significant change in Gi-hun's character as he confronts the consequences of his actions and decides to end the game. Sang-woo's death also represents a major character change.

Internal Goal: 10

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to apologize and express his remorse to his friend, Sang-woo, before taking his own life. This reflects his deeper need for forgiveness and his fear of the consequences of his actions.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is not explicitly stated, but it can be inferred that he wants to end his suffering and escape the dangerous game he has been forced to participate in.

Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 9

The conflict in the scene is intense and physical, with the characters fighting for their lives. The emotional conflict between Sang-woo and Gi-hun adds another layer of tension.

Opposition: 8

The opposition in this scene is strong, as the protagonist faces internal conflict and the external challenge of the dangerous game he is participating in.

High Stakes: 10

The stakes in the scene are incredibly high, with the characters fighting for their lives and facing the consequences of their choices. The outcome of the fight and Gi-hun's decision to end the game have far-reaching implications.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story forward by resolving the conflict between Sang-woo and Gi-hun and setting up the next phase of the narrative. It also raises questions about the true nature of the Squid Game.

Unpredictability: 10

This scene is unpredictable because the protagonist unexpectedly takes his own life, which is a shocking and unexpected turn of events.

Philosophical Conflict: 9

There is a philosophical conflict evident in this scene between the protagonist's belief in the value of life and the game's organizers who see the participants as disposable and expendable.

Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 10

The scene is highly emotional and evokes strong reactions from the audience. The tragic death of Sang-woo and Gi-hun's grief leave a lasting impact.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue in the scene is emotional and impactful. It effectively conveys the characters' pain, regret, and desperation. The final exchange between Gi-hun and Sang-woo is particularly powerful.

Engagement: 10

This scene is engaging because it is emotionally charged and contains a shocking and unexpected twist.

Pacing: 9

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness by building tension and suspense leading up to the shocking moment when the protagonist takes his own life.

Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre, with proper use of dialogue and action lines.

Structure: 8

The structure of this scene follows the expected format for its genre, with clear scene headings and action lines.

GI-HUN
…

SANG-WOO'S MOM
Have you heard from Sang-woo recently?

GI-HUN
…

SANG-WOO'S MOM
Nevermind. Get going.

23. INT. LIVING ROOM - GI-HUN'S HOME - NIGHT

With the plastic bag in his hand, Gi-hun opens the door to his semi-basement apartment, enters the
living room. All the lights are out. There's no sign of anyone home.
GI-HUN
Mom? I’m home.

GI-HUN
Mom?

24. INT. BEDROOM - GI-HUN'S HOME - NIGHT

Gi-hun enters the room, sees --
Gi-hun's Mom lying on the hard, bare ﬂoor. Motionless.

GI-HUN
Mom, are you sleeping?

Gi-hun cautiously approaches his mom, studies her still, emaciated body.

GI-HUN
Mom…

GI-HUN
Mom, I’m home.

GI-HUN
Mom?

Gi-hun checks his mother's breathing -- none. He touches her face -- ice cold.

GI-HUN
Mom...

GI-HUN
Open your eyes.

GI-HUN
Mom, I’m home.

GI-HUN
I made some money.

Gi-hun lies down next to his mother, holding her like he would have done as a child - soft
sobbing ﬁlls the semi-basement room.

FADE OUT.
25. INT. SUBWAY CAR

SUPER: "1 YEAR LATER"

Gi-hun sits with a blank expression as the swaying subway car SCREECHES along its track.
With his unkempt, uncut hair and his shabby clothes, Gi-hun pretty much looks like a homeless
person. The other PASSENGERS around him keep their distance.

26. INT. BANK BRANCH MANAGER'S OFFICE - DAY

In the neat oﬃce, Gi-hun sits across from the middle-aged MANAGER who's dressed in a spiﬀy
suit. The Manager is trying to size Gi-hun up, since his appearance is so uncouth.

MANAGER
One of our staﬀ is a certiﬁed barista, and he made
it himself. I'm not sure if you'd like it, though.

GI-HUN
Why did you ask to see me?

MANAGER
Yes, I'm sorry for asking you to come all the way
out here. We wanted to send you a car but -

GI-HUN
Why did you ask to see me?

MANAGER
Well, sir... it's been nearly a year since you deposited
your money into our bank, but you haven't said
anything about it.

GI-HUN
What is there for me to say?

MANAGER
Oh, no, no. That's not what I mean. Currently, the
money is in a regular account, which means it accrues
hardly any interest at all. Our bank recently started
a new service for VIP members like yourself,
so I wanted to introduce you to it, as well as
take the opportunity to say hello. That's why I asked
you to come. And no doubt, interrupted your busy
schedule.

Gi-hun slowly stands up.

MANAGER
Sir... is something wrong?

GI-HUN
Can I ask you a favor?

MANAGER
Of course.

GI-HUN
Can you lend me 10 bucks?

MANAGER
(surprised)
Um... yeah... sure.

The Manager pulls a $10 bill from his pocket, gives it to Gi-hun.
Gi-hun takes the cash and leaves. The Manager looks dumbfounded.

27. EXT. RIVERSIDE - NIGHT

It's late, Gi-hun is sitting on the riverside drinking soju alone.

OLD LADY (O.C.)
Excuse me.

Gi-hun turns his head.

OLD LADY
Please buy some ﬂowers.

GI-HUN
...

OLD LADY
Please. These will all end up wilting
if I don't sell them by the end of today.

Gi-hun hands money to the old lady.
OLD LADY
Thank you. Thank you.

The old lady puts down a ﬂower on the ground next to Gi-hun, and leaves. Gi-hun looks down and
sees – the message card wrapped in black and pink.
Shocked, Gi-hun opens the envelope, takes out the card which reads, “December 24, 11:30 P.M. Sky
Building, 7th Floor. From your Gganbu.”

28. EXT. STREET - NIGHT

Gi-hun looks up at the high-rise buildings surrounding him, and walks to enter one.

29. INT. PRIVATE HOSPITAL ROOM - NIGHT

Gi-hun takes the elevator to the 7th ﬂoor.
He enters a large, spacious room with a hospital bed at a corner. An old man lies in the bed. He's
attached to various medical equipment. He's looking out the window.
Gi-hun walks to the bed but stops when he ﬁnally sees the old man's face. Or rather, recognizes
it.
Il-nam.
Gi-hun is stunned and speechless.

IL-NAM
Could you get me some water?

GI-HUN
…

IL-NAM
Please.

Gi-hun pours water in a crystal glass, hands it to Il-nam.
He drinks it with diﬃculty before lying back, looking out the window again.

GI-HUN
Who are you?

Genres: Drama, Thriller
Tone: Intense, Emotional, Grim

Summary Gi-hun returns home to find his mother dead, leading him to a downward spiral of homelessness and despair. A year later, he encounters a mysterious message that leads him to a private hospital room where he discovers Il-nam, the old man from the Squid Game. The scene explores themes of loss, redemption, and the consequences of participating in the deadly games.

Strengths

Emotional impact
Character development
Plot progression

Weaknesses

Limited dialogue

General Critique

The scene lacks clear transitions between locations, making it confusing for the reader to follow.
There is repetition in the dialogue, particularly with Gi-hun repeatedly calling out for his mother.
The emotional impact of Gi-hun finding his mother dead is undermined by the lack of description and focus on his reaction.
The dialogue between Gi-hun and the bank manager feels forced and unnatural.
The interaction with the old lady selling flowers feels disconnected from the rest of the scene and lacks purpose.
The revelation of Il-nam in the hospital room lacks buildup and explanation.
The scene lacks a clear narrative purpose and does not advance the overall story or character development significantly.

General Suggestions

Provide clear transitions between locations to help the reader follow the scene.
Condense and revise the repetitive dialogue to make it more impactful and concise.
Focus on Gi-hun's emotional reaction to finding his mother dead, describing his grief and devastation in detail.
Rewrite the dialogue between Gi-hun and the bank manager to make it more natural and believable.
Integrate the interaction with the old lady selling flowers more seamlessly into the scene, giving it a clearer purpose or connection to the overall story.
Build up the revelation of Il-nam in the hospital room, providing more context and explanation for his presence.
Ensure that the scene has a clear narrative purpose and contributes to the overall story or character development.

Ratings

Overall

Overall: 9

The scene is emotionally impactful and effectively conveys the tragic consequences of the Squid Game. It introduces a new twist and raises intriguing questions about the characters' past and future.

Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of exploring the aftermath of the Squid Game and the unexpected reunion between Gi-hun and Il-nam adds depth and complexity to the story.

Plot: 8

The plot of the scene focuses on Gi-hun's personal journey and his encounter with Il-nam, providing a compelling continuation of the overall story.

Originality: 6

The level of originality in this scene is moderate. While the concept of a struggling protagonist searching for his mother is not entirely unique, the specific details and the emotional depth of the scene add freshness to the familiar situation. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue also contributes to the originality.

Character Development

Characters: 9

The scene delves into Gi-hun's emotional state and showcases his resilience and determination despite his tragic circumstances. The introduction of Il-nam adds a layer of mystery and intrigue.

Character Changes: 9

Gi-hun undergoes a significant change as he confronts his past and makes a decision to seek redemption by helping Il-nam.

Internal Goal: 8

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to find his mother and reconnect with her. This reflects his deeper need for love, belonging, and a sense of family.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to find a job and improve his financial situation. This reflects the immediate circumstances and challenges he is facing as a homeless person.

Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 9

The conflict between Gi-hun's internal struggles and his encounter with Il-nam creates tension and drives the emotional intensity of the scene.

Opposition: 8

The opposition in this scene is strong as the protagonist faces multiple challenges, including the loss of his mother, his financial struggles, and the uncertainty of his future. The audience is unsure of how he will overcome these obstacles.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are high as Gi-hun grapples with the loss of his mother, his own homelessness, and the potential for a new path through his encounter with Il-nam.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by introducing a new direction and raising questions about the characters' past and future.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because it introduces unexpected elements, such as the protagonist finding his mother's lifeless body and encountering a mysterious message. These elements create intrigue and keep the audience guessing about what will happen next.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

There is a philosophical conflict evident in this scene between the protagonist's desire for a better life and his current circumstances of poverty and despair. This challenges his beliefs about the fairness of the world and the possibility of upward mobility.

Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 10

The scene evokes strong emotions through its portrayal of Gi-hun's grief and despair, as well as the unexpected reunion with Il-nam.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue in the scene effectively conveys the characters' emotions and reveals important information about their past experiences.

Engagement: 9

This scene is engaging because it creates a sense of mystery and emotional investment in the protagonist's journey. The reader is compelled to find out what happened to the protagonist's mother and how he will overcome his challenges.

Pacing: 8

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness by gradually building tension and suspense. The slower moments, such as the protagonist's interaction with his mother's body, are balanced with faster-paced moments, such as the encounter with the bank manager.

Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It uses proper scene headings, action lines, and dialogue formatting.

Structure: 8

The structure of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It begins with a setup of the protagonist's current situation, introduces a conflict, and ends with a cliffhanger that leads into the next scene.

IL-NAM
You see that man over there... perhaps he's drunk,
but he's been like that for hours. He looks like
a homeless man.
Through the window --
Outside in the street -- snow is falling. A MAN sits on the ground, slumped against a street
lamp.
GI-HUN
Were you behind everything?

Outside in the street -- the man slowly slumps to the ground. PEDESTRIANS hurry by, avoiding the
fallen man.

IL-NAM
He'll soon freeze to death if he stays out there.
But no one is coming to help him...

GI-HUN
Why did you do it?

IL-NAM
(looks at Gi-hun)
What would you do?

GI-HUN
Answer me! Why did you do something like that?

IL-NAM
Would you stop and help that smelly,
human piece of trash?

GI-HUN
Who are you? Why did you let me live?

IL-NAM
Play another game with me.

IL-NAM
(looks out the window again)
If that man is still there by midnight, I win.
If somebody helps him, you win.

Suddenly -- Gi-hun leans forward, wraps his hands around Il-nam's neck.

GI-HUN
Stop talking nonsense. I can kill you right this instant.

IL-NAM
If you do that, you'll never get an answer from me.
GI-HUN
...

IL-NAM
If you play the game, I'll answer your questions.

Gi-hun loosens his grip on Il-nam's neck.
He looks outside the window, then at the clock -- an old-fashioned antique –
11:30PM.
After a brief pause --

GI-HUN
If you lose, I kill you with my own hands.

IL-NAM
Then what will you wager?

GI-HUN
Anything. You can take everything from me
if you want anyway.

TIME LAPSE OF -- the wall clock shows 11:45. Through the window -- outside in the street -- not
many people out, but those who are rush along with their hands in their pockets, paying no mind to
the man lying motionless and exposed in the falling snow.

GI-HUN
Who are you?

IL-NAM
I make money with money.

GI-HUN
Do you make money so easily that
you do something like that?

IL-NAM
Money. You know what making money is like.
It's not so easy to make money, is it?

GI-HUN
How much of what you're saying is true and how
much is false? Oh Il-nam... is that even your real
name?
IL-NAM
Yes, it is. It's also true that I have a lump in my
head. And, back in the day, I once lived in a house
in an alley just like that one with my wife and son.

Suddenly -- outside in the street -- a PASSERBY approaches the fallen man. He tries shaking
him awake.
Il-nam watches the scene through the window, his face suddenly intense.
Back outside in the street -- the Passerby sees the fallen man is unresponsive, looks around, then
starts going through the man's pockets. Not ﬁnding anything, he walks oﬀ.
Il-nam turns back to Gi-hun, who looks sad, if not despairing.

IL-NAM
Do you… still believe in people?
Even after what you've been through?

GI-HUN
Why did you want to see me?

IL-NAM
I heard you haven't touched your prize money
and have gone back to living your old life.
Is it because you feel guilty?

GI-HUN
Guilty? I don’t think that’s for you to say.

IL-NAM
That money was the reward you got for your luck
and hard work. You have the right to use it.

IL-NAM
Look at me. Life is…short.

The wall clock shows 11:55.

GI-HUN
Why did you do such a thing?

IL-NAM
Do you know what people without money and
people with money have in common?

GI-HUN
...
IL-NAM
Living is no fun for them. If you have
too much money, no matter what you buy, eat or
drink, in the end, it all becomes boring.

GI-HUN
...

IL-NAM
At some point, my clients began to tell me
the same thing. That they had no joy in life anymore.
So we all got together and did some pondering.
What can we do to have some fun?

GI-HUN
Fun? You put us through it for fun?

IL-NAM
It seems like you’ve forgotten. I never forced
anyone to play that game. You also ended up
coming back of your own accord.

Genres: Drama, Thriller
Tone: Intense, Despairing, Mysterious

Strengths "The scene is highly intense and emotionally charged, with a gripping plot and well-developed characters. The dialogue is confrontational and thought-provoking, and the themes explored add depth to the story."

Weaknesses "The scene may be too violent and intense for some viewers, and the resolution of the conflict between Sang-woo and Gi-hun may leave some questions unanswered."

General Critique

The scene starts with a strong visual of snow falling outside, which sets a somber and reflective tone. However, the dialogue in the beginning feels a bit repetitive and could be condensed to make the scene more concise.
The conflict between Il-nam and Gi-hun's differing views on the value of human life is intriguing, but it could be further developed and explored. The dialogue could delve deeper into their contrasting perspectives and create more tension.
The introduction of the passerby trying to help the homeless man adds an interesting element to the scene, but it feels a bit rushed and could be given more attention. It would be beneficial to show the passerby's reaction and emotions more clearly.
The dialogue between Il-nam and Gi-hun about money and life is thought-provoking, but it could benefit from more nuance and depth. It feels a bit on-the-nose and could be more subtly woven into the conversation.
The revelation of Il-nam's personal history and his connection to Gi-hun adds an emotional layer to the scene, but it could be further explored and expanded upon. It would be impactful to delve into their shared experiences and how it has shaped their perspectives.
The scene ends with the wall clock showing 11:55, which creates a sense of impending climax. However, the final lines of dialogue feel a bit abrupt and could be rephrased to create a stronger ending.

General Suggestions

Condense the initial dialogue to make it more concise and impactful.
Further develop the conflict between Il-nam and Gi-hun's differing views on the value of human life.
Give more attention to the passerby trying to help the homeless man, showing their reaction and emotions more clearly.
Add more nuance and depth to the dialogue about money and life, weaving it more subtly into the conversation.
Expand upon the revelation of Il-nam's personal history and his connection to Gi-hun, exploring their shared experiences and how it has shaped their perspectives.
Rephrase the final lines of dialogue to create a stronger ending.

Ratings

Overall

Overall: 9

The scene is highly intense and emotionally charged, with a shocking revelation and a pivotal decision made by the protagonist. The brutal fight and the confrontation between the characters create a high level of tension and suspense.

Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of the Squid Game and the moral dilemmas faced by the characters are intriguing and thought-provoking. The revelation of Sang-woo's dark secret adds depth to the story and raises ethical questions about survival and the consequences of one's actions.

Plot: 9

The plot of the scene is gripping and intense, with the fight between Sang-woo and Gi-hun serving as a climax to their conflict. The revelation of Sang-woo's secret and Gi-hun's decision to end the game add significant twists and turns to the story.

Originality: 9

The scene introduces a unique concept of a deadly game and explores the moral dilemmas faced by the characters. The dialogue feels authentic and reveals the complexities of the characters' motivations.

Character Development

Characters: 9

The characters of Sang-woo and Gi-hun are well-developed and their conflict is deeply rooted in their personal motivations and past actions. The scene showcases their complex relationship and the emotional turmoil they experience.

Character Changes: 8

Gi-hun experiences a significant character change in this scene, as he confronts Sang-woo about the consequences of their actions and decides to end the game. Sang-woo also undergoes a change as his dark secret is revealed and he faces the consequences of his actions.

Internal Goal: 8

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to challenge the beliefs and values of the other character, Gi-hun. Il-nam wants to make Gi-hun question his own morality and view of humanity.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to make a wager with Gi-hun. Il-nam wants to play another game with Gi-hun and offers a bet that if someone helps the homeless man by midnight, Gi-hun wins.

Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 10

The conflict between Sang-woo and Gi-hun reaches its peak in this scene, with a brutal fight to the death and a heated argument. The stakes are high and the tension is palpable.

Opposition: 8

The opposition in the scene is strong, as Gi-hun challenges Il-nam's beliefs and confronts him about his actions. The audience is unsure of how the confrontation will unfold.

High Stakes: 10

The stakes are extremely high in this scene, as the characters fight for their lives and confront the consequences of their actions. The outcome of the fight and Gi-hun's decision to end the game have far-reaching implications.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story forward by resolving the conflict between Sang-woo and Gi-hun and setting up the next phase of the narrative. Gi-hun's decision to end the game has significant implications for the plot.

Unpredictability: 8

This scene is unpredictable because it introduces a wager and leaves the audience uncertain about the outcome. The characters' actions and dialogue keep the audience guessing.

Philosophical Conflict: 9

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the contrast between Il-nam's belief in the inherent goodness of people and Gi-hun's skepticism and cynicism towards humanity. This challenges Gi-hun's worldview and forces him to question his own beliefs.

Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 9

The scene evokes strong emotions of sadness, despair, and conflict. The intense fight and the revelation of Sang-woo's secret create a powerful emotional impact.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue in the scene is intense and confrontational, reflecting the emotional state of the characters. The conversation between Sang-woo and Gi-hun reveals important information and adds depth to their relationship.

Engagement: 9

This scene is engaging because it presents a moral dilemma and raises thought-provoking questions about human nature. The dialogue and tension between the characters keep the audience invested in the outcome.

Pacing: 9

The pacing of the scene is effective in building tension and maintaining the audience's interest. The dialogue and actions are well-timed and contribute to the overall rhythm of the scene.

Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The scene follows the expected format for its genre, with clear scene headings, character names, and dialogue formatting.

Structure: 8

The scene follows a clear structure with a setup, conflict, and resolution. It effectively builds tension and advances the narrative.

Il-nam turns, looks --
Outside in the street -- the fallen man. White snow piling on his body.
The wall clock hits 11:58, and the second hand TICK TOCKS, TICK TOCKS…

IL-NAM
Your luck seems to have run out...
Do you still believe in people?

GI-HUN
(voice shaking)
Why did you join the game?

IL-NAM
(breathing heavily)
When I was a child, I had so much fun no matter
what I did with my friends that I lost track of time.
I wanted to feel the same feeling one more time
before I die. It's not something you can feel while
watching as a spectator. I wanted that feeling.

GI-HUN
So? Did it feel good?
IL-NAM
You asked me why I let you live.
Because it was fun playing with you.

Il-nam's eyes seem to lose focus, and he turns, looks out the window again.
The seconds TICK TOCK on -- 11:59 now -- only 1 minute left.

IL-NAM
Thanks to you, I managed to remember things from
my past, things I'd completely forgotten about.

GI-HUN
...

IL-NAM
(voice softening)
It’d been such a long time since I’d had that much fun.

With only 10 seconds remaining, Gi-hun looks through the window at --
Outside in the street -- the fallen man blanketed with snow. No other people in sight.
Until -- the Passerby who rummaged through the fallen man's pockets reappears, followed by a
POLICEMAN. Both men lift the fallen man up.

GI-HUN
They’re here. People came to help.

The wall clock strikes midnight, and its bell CHIMES.
Gi-hun looks at Il-nam, sees -- he's dead. With his eyes open.
BEEEEE -- his heart monitor ﬂatlines.

GI-HUN
You saw it, didn’t you?

He looks blankly at the dead Il-nam.

GI-HUN
You lost.

Gi-hun's face twists with emotion as the antique clock’s bell CHIMES ON.

30. I/E. PRIVATE HOSPITAL ROOM/STREET - NIGHT (LATER)

The Front Man slowly stretches out his hand and closes Il-nam's eyes.
INSERT -- FLASHBACK -- INT. FRONT MAN’S ROOM –

Il-nam puts down his mask on the table.

IL-NAM
You attend to the guests for me.

FRONT MAN
May I ask why?

IL-NAM
Because there's no way watching it can be
more fun than playing it yourself.

The Front Man stares at his reﬂection on the window and slowly walks away.

31. INT. HAIR SALON - DAY

A salon oﬀ a suburban street.
From a TV hanging on the wall -- a news broadcast is heard. A record number of household debt
due to an economic downturn.
Gi-hun sits in a chair, his long hair disheveled and bushy around his face. A
HAIRDRESSER (middle-aged female) drapes a gown over his front.

HAIRDRESSER
You've got quite a lot of hair going on here. What
would you like to do to it?

GI-HUN
….

HAIRDRESSER
Do you want to cut it short? Or if you're growing it out,
do you want it permed?

Gi-hun glances around, sees a photo of a red-haired model hanging on the salon wall.

32. I/E. ORPHANAGE/DORM - DAY

The dorm is a small room with beds in it.
Gi-hun -- now in proper clothes and sporting his ﬂashy, new, red hairdo -- sits across from Cheol,
Sae-byeok's younger brother.

GI-HUN
You must be Cheol. You look a lot like your sister.

CHEOL
(eyes him)
Mister. Do you know my sister?

GI-HUN
(after a brief pause)
I’m a friend of hers.

CHEOL
Then do you know where she is?

On a table nearby -- a photo of Sae-byeok and Cheol together. Sae-byeok smiles brightly in the
photo.

33. I/E. FISH BUN CART - AFTERNOON

Sang-woo's Mom makes ﬁsh buns by the roadside. Sensing someone's presence, she turns, sees
--
Gi-hun. Holding luggage in one hand and Cheol's hand in the other.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
Is this the boy?

GI-HUN
(nodding)
Yes.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
(to Cheol)
What's your name?

CHEOL
Cheol, I’m Kang Cheol...

Sang-woo's Mom pats Cheol’s head.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
Kang Cheol? Goodness, you have a very manly name.
And you look like a tough boy too.
GI-HUN
Please look after him.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
All right. It’s only another spoon on my table.
Don't worry, and have a great trip.

GI-HUN
Okay.

Gi-hun pats Cheol’s head, turns and leaves.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
(to Cheol)
Have you eaten?

CHEOL
(shakes his head)
…

SANG-WOO'S MOM
Goodness, come and take a seat. I’ll give you
a ﬁsh bun. Eat up.

Genres: Thriller, Drama
Tone: Intense, Emotional, Mysterious

Strengths "The scene is filled with intense action, emotional depth, and thought-provoking dialogue. The performances of the actors are strong, and the pacing keeps the audience engaged."

Weaknesses "Some viewers may find the violence and brutality of the fight scene disturbing. The scene may also be confusing for those who have not watched the previous episodes of the series."

General Critique

The scene starts with a strong visual image of the fallen man in the street, covered in snow. This sets a somber and tense tone for the scene.
The dialogue between Il-nam and Gi-hun is meaningful and reveals more about their characters and motivations.
The use of the ticking clock and the passing of time adds to the tension and suspense of the scene.
The emotional impact of Il-nam's death is effectively conveyed through Gi-hun's reaction and the flatlining heart monitor.
The transition to the next scenes is smooth and allows for a sense of closure and new beginnings for Gi-hun.
The inclusion of the news broadcast about household debt adds a layer of social commentary and context to the story.
The interaction between Gi-hun and Cheol at the orphanage dorm is touching and shows Gi-hun's growth and willingness to help others.
The reunion between Gi-hun and Sang-woo's Mom at the fish bun cart is a heartwarming moment that brings closure to their relationship.
Overall, the scene effectively conveys the themes of life, death, and redemption, and sets up the next chapter of Gi-hun's journey.

General Suggestions

Consider adding more visual descriptions to enhance the atmosphere and mood of the scene, such as the sound of the snow crunching under the Passerby's feet or the dimly lit hospital room.
Explore deeper into the philosophical conversation between Il-nam and Gi-hun, delving into their contrasting views on the value of human life and the consequences of their actions.
Provide more insight into Gi-hun's emotional state after witnessing the Passerby and Policeman helping the fallen man, as this is a pivotal moment in the scene.
Consider adding a brief moment of reflection for Gi-hun after Il-nam's death, allowing the audience to fully absorb the impact of the loss.
Further develop the relationship between Gi-hun and Cheol, perhaps through a conversation about Sae-byeok and their shared memories.
Consider adding a small gesture or action from Gi-hun to show his gratitude towards Sang-woo's Mom for taking care of Cheol.
Explore the possibility of incorporating a symbolic element or motif throughout the scene to reinforce the themes and emotions, such as the recurring sound of the clock ticking or the presence of water as a symbol of life and renewal.
Consider adding a brief moment of reflection for Gi-hun after Il-nam's death, allowing the audience to fully absorb the impact of the loss.
Further develop the relationship between Gi-hun and Cheol, perhaps through a conversation about Sae-byeok and their shared memories.
Consider adding a small gesture or action from Gi-hun to show his gratitude towards Sang-woo's Mom for taking care of Cheol.
Explore the possibility of incorporating a symbolic element or motif throughout the scene to reinforce the themes and emotions, such as the recurring sound of the clock ticking or the presence of water as a symbol of life and renewal.

Ratings

Overall

Overall: 9

The scene is intense, emotionally charged, and reveals important information about the characters and their motivations. The fight sequence is well-executed and keeps the audience on the edge of their seats. The unexpected decision by Gi-hun adds a layer of intrigue and leaves the audience wanting to know what will happen next.

Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of the Squid Game, where participants compete in deadly games for a chance to win a large sum of money, is unique and intriguing. The scene effectively showcases the brutal nature of the games and the moral dilemmas faced by the characters.

Plot: 9

The plot of the scene is gripping and moves the story forward significantly. The fight between Sang-woo and Gi-hun reveals important character dynamics and sets up the climax of the story. Gi-hun's decision to end the game adds a twist to the plot and raises questions about the outcome.

Originality: 7

The level of originality in this scene is moderate. While the concept of a deadly game is not entirely unique, the specific circumstances and character interactions provide a fresh approach. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue adds to the originality.

Character Development

Characters: 9

The characters of Sang-woo and Gi-hun are well-developed and their conflict in this scene adds depth to their arcs. The scene also introduces the mysterious character of Il-nam, who later becomes a key figure in the story. The emotional impact of the scene is heightened by the strong performances of the actors.

Character Changes: 8

Gi-hun undergoes a significant change in this scene, as he confronts Sang-woo about the deaths caused by their participation in the games and decides to end the game. Sang-woo's character also experiences a change, as his dark secret is revealed and he faces the consequences of his actions.

Internal Goal: 8

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to understand why Il-nam let him live and to make sense of their interactions throughout the game. This reflects Gi-hun's deeper need for meaning and connection in his life.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to survive the game and win the prize money. This reflects the immediate circumstances and challenges he is facing.

Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 10

The conflict in the scene is intense and physical, as Sang-woo and Gi-hun fight for their lives. The emotional conflict between the characters is also palpable, as they confront each other about their past actions and the deaths caused by the games.

Opposition: 7

The opposition in this scene is moderate. While there is a small obstacle in the form of the fallen man, the audience is unsure of how it will be resolved and what impact it will have on the protagonist.

High Stakes: 10

The stakes in the scene are incredibly high, as Sang-woo and Gi-hun fight for their lives. The decision to end the game also has far-reaching consequences for the characters and the overall outcome of the story.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story forward significantly, as Gi-hun's decision to end the game sets up the climax and resolution of the story. The introduction of Il-nam and the revelation of Sang-woo's secret also add new layers to the narrative.

Unpredictability: 8

This scene is unpredictable because it introduces new elements, such as the fallen man and the passerby, that create uncertainty and raise questions about the direction of the story.

Philosophical Conflict: 9

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the question of whether people can be trusted and if there is inherent goodness in humanity. This challenges Gi-hun's beliefs and values, as he is forced to confront the actions and motivations of Il-nam.

Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 9

The scene evokes strong emotions in the audience, as they witness the brutal fight and confrontations between the characters. The revelation of Sang-woo's dark secret and Gi-hun's decision to end the game add layers of complexity and emotional depth to the scene.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue in the scene is intense and reveals important information about the characters' motivations and past experiences. The conversation between Gi-hun and Il-nam adds depth to their relationship and raises philosophical questions about the nature of the games.

Engagement: 9

This scene is engaging because it creates suspense and intrigue through its descriptive narrative and dialogue. The reader is drawn into the mystery of Il-nam's motivations and the outcome of the game.

Pacing: 9

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness by creating a sense of tension and suspense. The use of short, impactful dialogue and descriptive narrative keeps the reader engaged and wanting to know more.

Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It includes proper use of scene headings, action lines, and dialogue formatting.

Structure: 8

The structure of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It includes clear scene headings, concise action lines, and dialogue that advances the plot and reveals character motivations.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
You're dressed too lightly in this cold weather.
Don't you have a warmer jacket?

She grabs the luggage, it's heavy. She opens it and -- inside -- stacks and stacks of cash. Plus --
A note: "This is money I borrowed from Sang-woo."
Sang-woo's Mom is stunned. She rushes to ﬁnd Gi-hun, but he's long gone.

SANG-WOO'S MOM
Gi-hun. Gi-hun!

34. INT. ARRIVALS SUBWAY PLATFORM/DEPARTURES SUBWAY PLATFORM - ICN
AIRPORT - DAY

Gi-hun steps oﬀ the train with his luggage. He proceeds down the platform, talking on the phone.

GI-HUN (INTO PHONE)
Hey, Dad's almost at the airport now.
I'll board the ﬂight soon.

GI-HUN (INTO PHONE)
Of course, I bought a present for you.

GI-HUN (INTO PHONE)
(chuckles softly)
No. It's a secret. I'll show it to you in person.

Someone shouts in a loud voice, and Gi-hun stops to look at the opposite platform.

GI-HUN (INTO PHONE)
Hold on, Ga-yeong.

GI-HUN (INTO PHONE)
Ga-yeong, I'll call you again once I get there.
I love you too.

Gi-hun watches, ﬁnally sees --
Two men are playing the ddakji game. One of the men is the Suited Man Gi-hun originally
played ddakji with. And he appears to be winning because -- he slaps a MAN IN A JUMPER
across the face. Hard.

MAN IN A JUMPER
(after getting hit)
Let's play another round. Now!

Suddenly -- the Suited Man looks over, sees Gi-hun watching him. A brief silence passes before --
Gi-hun starts running.
MOMENTS LATER -- on the departures subway platform -- Gi-hun arrives -- just as the Suited
Man rides oﬀ on a leaving subway.
Panting, Gi-hun approaches the Man in a Jumper, snatches the business card that he now holds in his
hand.

MAN IN A JUMPER
What the hell are you doing?

Gi-hun eyes the card with the circle, triangle, and square.

MAN IN A JUMPER
Give that back!

GI-HUN
(pushing the man to the wall)
No! Never!
35. INT. LOBBY - ICN - DAY

The airport lobby is crowded with PEOPLE. Gi-hun sits on a bench with the card and his cell
phone in his hands.

ANNOUNCER (V.O.)
All boarding for U-Way ﬂight 202 to Los Angeles
will close shortly.

36. INT. BOARDING GATE - ICN - DAY

Gi-hun is walking to board the plane. He stops and makes a call.

VOICE (V.O.) (FROM PHONE)
Do you wish to participate in the game?
If you wish to play, state your name and date of birth.

GI-HUN (INTO PHONE)
Seong Gi-hun. October 31, 1974.

GI-HUN (INTO PHONE)
Listen carefully. I’m not a horse. I’m a person.
That’s why I want to know who you people are and
how you can commit such atrocities against people.

FRONT MAN (V.O.)
Player 456. Don't get any absurd ideas.

GI-HUN
That's why I can't forgive you for everything you're doing.

FRONT MAN (V.O.)
Just get on that plane. It's for your own good.

Gi-hun hangs up.
With his luggage, he turns around and walks away from the plane-- determined, with purpose --
towards somewhere unknown.

FADE OUT.

END EPISODE 09.

Genres: Thriller, Drama
Tone: Intense, Emotional, Puzzling

Summary In the midst of the Squid Game, Sang-woo and Gi-hun engage in a brutal fight to the death. Sang-woo reveals his dark secret, leading to a heated argument. The fight escalates with both men using knives, resulting in bloody combat. Gi-hun gains the upper hand but is stabbed multiple times. However, Gi-hun retaliates by biting off Sang-woo's Achilles heel. As Sang-woo writhes in pain, Gi-hun confronts him about the deaths caused by the games. Gi-hun decides to end the game and approaches the Masked Soldier. The unexpected turn of events leaves everyone puzzled. Gi-hun returns home to find his mother dead, leading him to a downward spiral of homelessness and despair. A year later, he encounters a mysterious message that leads him to a private hospital room where he discovers Il-nam, the old man from the Squid Game. The scene explores themes of loss, redemption, and the consequences of participating in the deadly games.

Strengths

Intense action
Shocking revelations
Emotional impact
Compelling characters

Weaknesses

Some dialogue could be further developed

General Critique

The scene starts abruptly with Sang-woo's Mom discovering the stacks of cash in her luggage. It would be helpful to provide some context or build-up to this moment to create a stronger emotional impact.
The dialogue between Sang-woo's Mom and Gi-hun is minimal and lacks depth. It would be beneficial to explore their relationship and the significance of Sang-woo's borrowed money in more detail.
The transition from the subway platform to the airport lobby feels disjointed. It would be smoother to establish Gi-hun's arrival at the airport before introducing the Suited Man and the Man in a Jumper.
The confrontation between Gi-hun and the Man in a Jumper lacks tension and intensity. It would be more effective to heighten the stakes and increase the emotional conflict between them.
The scene ends abruptly with Gi-hun walking away from the plane. It would be more satisfying to provide a clearer sense of resolution or a cliffhanger that leaves the audience wanting more.

General Suggestions

Consider adding a brief scene before Sang-woo's Mom discovers the cash, showing her emotional state and building anticipation for the reveal.
Expand the dialogue between Sang-woo's Mom and Gi-hun to delve deeper into their relationship and the impact of Sang-woo's borrowed money on their lives.
Smoothly transition from the subway platform to the airport lobby by establishing Gi-hun's arrival at the airport and his purpose for being there.
Intensify the confrontation between Gi-hun and the Man in a Jumper by adding more dialogue that reveals their conflicting motivations and emotions.
Provide a stronger ending by either offering a resolution to Gi-hun's pursuit of the game organizers or leaving the audience with a compelling cliffhanger that sets up the next episode.

Ratings

Overall

Overall: 9

The scene is highly impactful and emotionally charged, with intense action and a shocking revelation. It leaves the audience with a sense of confusion and anticipation for what will happen next.

Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of the Squid Game and the deadly games is intriguing and keeps the audience engaged. The revelation of Sang-woo's dark secret adds depth to the story and raises moral questions about the consequences of participating in the games.

Plot: 9

The plot of the scene is gripping and full of twists and turns. The intense fight between Sang-woo and Gi-hun, the revelation of the dark secret, and Gi-hun's decision to end the game all contribute to the high rating.

Originality: 6

The level of originality in this scene is moderate. While the concept of a dangerous game is not entirely new, the specific details and the protagonist's motivations add freshness to the familiar premise. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue contributes to the originality.

Character Development

Characters: 9

The characters of Sang-woo and Gi-hun are well-developed and their conflict adds depth to the scene. The emotional impact of their fight and the consequences of their actions make them compelling and relatable.

Character Changes: 9

Gi-hun undergoes a significant character change in the scene. He goes from being a participant in the deadly games to deciding to end the game and confront the organizers. This change is driven by his moral awakening and the realization of the consequences of his actions.

Internal Goal: 8

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to confront the Suited Man and find out more about the game and the organization behind it. This reflects his desire to seek justice and understand the reasons behind the atrocities committed in the game.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to catch up with the Suited Man and retrieve the business card. This reflects the immediate challenge of trying to uncover the truth and potentially save himself and others from the dangerous game.

Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 10

The conflict in the scene is intense and brutal, both physically and emotionally. The fight between Sang-woo and Gi-hun and their heated argument create a high level of conflict.

Opposition: 8

The opposition in this scene is strong, as the protagonist faces the Suited Man and the Man in a Jumper who try to stop him from retrieving the business card. The audience doesn't know how the confrontation will unfold, adding to the tension.

High Stakes: 10

The stakes in the scene are extremely high, with the characters fighting for their lives and facing the moral consequences of their actions. The discovery of Gi-hun's mother's death adds an additional layer of emotional stakes.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story forward by revealing Sang-woo's dark secret, Gi-hun's decision to end the game, and the discovery of Il-nam in the private hospital room. It sets up new conflicts and plot developments.

Unpredictability: 8

This scene is unpredictable because it introduces a new character and a potential ally for the protagonist, as well as a new conflict with the Suited Man. The audience doesn't know how the confrontation will go and what consequences it might have.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the protagonist's belief in justice and his opposition to the organization running the game. This challenges his values and worldview, as he questions the morality of the game and seeks to expose the truth.

Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 10

The scene has a high emotional impact, with intense action, shocking revelations, and the tragic discovery of Gi-hun's mother's death. It evokes strong emotions from the audience.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue in the scene is intense and emotionally charged. It effectively conveys the conflict between Sang-woo and Gi-hun and their moral dilemmas.

Engagement: 9

This scene is engaging because it introduces a new challenge for the protagonist, raises questions about the game and its organizers, and creates suspense through the protagonist's pursuit of the Suited Man.

Pacing: 9

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness by maintaining a fast pace and building tension. The short and direct dialogue exchanges, as well as the protagonist's actions, create a sense of urgency and keep the audience engaged.

Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It includes clear scene headings, character names in uppercase, and dialogue formatted correctly.

Structure: 8

The structure of this scene follows the expected format for its genre. It starts with a setup of the protagonist's internal and external goals, introduces a conflict, and ends with a cliffhanger that leads to the next episode.