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Compelled to Read | Story Content |
Character Development
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Scene Elements |
Audience Engagement
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Technical Aspects |
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1 - Toto's Trouble
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
9 / 8
| 4 / 4 |
5 |
3 | 3 |
5 |
1 | 7 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 1 | 4 |
5 | 4 | 4 | 8 | 4 |
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2 - Barnside Banter and a Close Call
| ReworkOrientationRead is broken — a load-bearing lens isn’t doing its job yet. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
5 / 5.5
| 4 / 5 |
7 |
4 | 5 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 5 |
7 | 6 | 5.5 | 3 | 4 |
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3 - Dorothy's Troublesome Afternoon
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9.5 / 9
| 9 / 8.5 |
9 |
8 | 8 |
9 |
3 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 4 | 10 |
8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 |
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4 - Toto's Fate
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
6 / 7
| 7 / 6.5 |
6 |
6 | 5 |
6 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 7 |
5 | 6.5 | 6 | 5.5 | 6.5 |
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5 - Dorothy's Homecoming
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7 / 8
| 7 / 6.5 |
6 |
5 | 7 |
7 |
4 | 8 | 6 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 6 | 5 | 3 | 6 |
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6 - A Distant Cry
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
7 |
7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 7.5 |
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7 - Dorothy's Journey to Munchkinland
| KeepTransitionAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
5.5 / 5
| 7 / 6.5 |
8 |
6 | 4.5 |
6 |
2 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 |
5 | 6.5 | 5 | 4 | 5.5 |
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8 - Dorothy Meets Glinda and the Munchkins
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6 / 7.5 |
8 |
5 | 8.5 |
6 |
2 | 6 | 4 | 1 | 1 | 2 | 4 | 8 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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9 - Celebration in Munchkin City
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 4 / 5.5 |
7 |
4 | 3 |
3 |
1 | 4 | 2 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 7 |
4 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 |
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10 - Welcome to Munchkinland and the Wrath of the Witch
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
5.5 |
7 / 7.5
| 7 / 6.5 |
6 |
5 | 4 |
6 |
2 | 3 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
5 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 4.5 |
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11 - The Ruby Slippers
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 4 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 6 | 7.5 |
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12 - The Yellow Brick Road
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 7 | 5 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 |
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13 - The Scarecrow's Dilemma
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
8 |
2 | 6 | 4 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 5 | 6 | 5 |
8 | 7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 7 |
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14 - The Scarecrow's Dream of a Brain
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 6 / 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 5 |
8 |
3 | 7 | 6 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 7 | 6 |
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15 - Meeting the Scarecrow
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 4 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 6 | 5 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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16 - The Apple-Throwing Trees and the Rusted Tin Man
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8 / 8
| 6 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
7 |
4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6 | 5.5 | 7 | 6.5 |
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17 - The Tin Man's Heartless Woe
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 4 |
7 |
3 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 6 | 6 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
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18 - Confrontation with the Witch
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
8 |
4 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 5.5 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 6 |
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19 - Encounter in the Eerie Forest
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 7 |
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20 - The Lion's Cowardice
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
8 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 7 |
6 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 6 |
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21 - Song and Journey
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 4.5 |
7 |
1 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6.5 | 7 | 4 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 6.5 |
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22 - Dorothy and the Poppy Field
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 5.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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23 - Arrival at the Emerald City Gate
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 5.5 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 4 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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24 - The Merry Old Land of Oz
| Low on its ownTransitionDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
5.5 |
9 / 7
| 4 / 6 |
6 |
2 | 4 |
4 |
0.5 | 3 | 4 | 1 | 0 | 0.5 | 1 | 5 | 4 |
3 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 6 |
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25 - The Wicked Witch's Threat
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
1 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 4 |
6 | 6 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
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26 - The Lion's Coronation
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
5.5 |
8 / 7
| 4.5 / 5.5 |
6 |
3 | 4 |
6 |
1 | 6 | 3 | 1 | 0 | 1 | 2 | 5 | 4 |
5 | 5.5 | 4 | 6 | 5 |
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27 - A Call to Courage
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 7 | 6 |
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28 - An Audience with Oz
| KeepRitualAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 7 |
8 | 6.5 | 6 | 8 | 6.5 |
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29 - Into the Haunted Forest
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
8 |
3 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7.5 | 7 | 5 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 5.5 | 7.5 | 6.5 |
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30 - The Jitterbug Attack
| Low on its ownPursuitDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
5.5 |
8 / 6.5
| 4.5 / 6 |
7 |
4 | 5.5 |
6 |
1 | 4 | 2 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 4 |
5 | 5.5 | 4.5 | 6 | 5.5 |
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31 - The Attack of the Winged Monkeys
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
5.5 |
5 / 6
| 8 / 7.5 |
6 |
6 | 3 |
5 |
2 | 4 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 6 |
5 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 3 | 5.5 |
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32 - Dorothy's Impending Doom
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
6.5 / 7.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6.5 | 4 | 7 |
6 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 5.5 | 6 |
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33 - The Lion's Bravery
| PolishPursuitNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 7
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 4.5 |
7 |
4 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6.5 | 5 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 5.5 | 8 | 6 |
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34 - Rescue from the Tower
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 8 |
7 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 |
6 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 7 |
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35 - Trapped in the Witch's Castle
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
5.5 / 6.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 5.5 |
7 |
2 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7.5 | 7 | 6 | 6 |
6 | 6.5 | 6 | 4 | 6 |
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36 - The Melting of the Witch
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 6 / 7 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
6 |
5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6.5 |
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37 - Triumphant Return to Oz
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
6 |
7 | 4 |
6 |
1 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 7 |
5 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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38 - The Wizard's Deception
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
6 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
8 |
7 | 5 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 4 | 6 |
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39 - The Wizard's Honorary Awards
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 5.5 |
7 |
4 | 3 | 8 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 7 |
8 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 7.5 | 7 |
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40 - The Wizard's Gifts
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 4 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 6 |
7 | 6 | 5.5 | 8 | 6 |
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41 - The Wizard's Departure
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
8.5 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 5 |
7 |
4 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 7.5 |
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42 - Dorothy's Return to Kansas
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9 / 9
| 2 / 2 |
7 |
7 | 5 |
8 |
7 | 9 | 8 | 2 | 0 | 6 | 3 | 3 | 8 |
8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 |
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43 - Dorothy Returns Home
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
7.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 1 / 1 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
8 |
9 | 9 | 6 | 2 | 1 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 9 |
8 | 8 | 8.5 | 7.5 | 8 |
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