Logline: In the aftermath of the Spanish Civil War, a young girl named Ofelia discovers a fantastical world of mythical creatures and must choose between her own destiny as a princess and protecting her ailing mother and newborn brother from the cruelty of a fascist officer. See other logline suggestoins
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Explanation: Pan's Labyrinth is a visually stunning and thematically rich fantasy/drama screenplay that blends the real and the supernatural in a compelling manner. The story effectively explores the emotional journey of its protagonist, Ofelia, against the backdrop of the Spanish Civil War, and the ending provides a powerful and satisfying resolution to her character arc. The screenplay features strong character development, imaginative fantasy elements, and impactful dramatic moments, making it a compelling and unique work that would likely resonate with audiences.
Genres:
Fantasy, Drama, Historical, War, Horror, Adventure, Action, Thriller
Setting:
Late 1940s,
Post-Civil War Spain
Overview:
The screenplay showcases strong character development, a unique and engaging premise, and effective thematic exploration. However, there are opportunities for improvement in integrating visual imagery, enhancing emotional depth, and refining the conflict resolution.
Themes:The Power of Imagination and Storytelling, The Brutality of War, Sacrifice and Loss, Authority and Power, Identity and Self-discovery
Conflict and Stakes:
Ofelia's struggle to navigate the horrors of war and her own personal trauma, while also completing the tasks given to her by the Faun in order to save her family.
Overall Mood:
Dark, violent, and oppressive, with moments of beauty and hope
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
Scene
1:
The film's opening scene, which sets the tone for the rest of the film with its depiction of the horrors of war
Scene
5:
The scene in which Ofelia meets the Faun, which is full of wonder and magic
Scene
10:
The scene in which Ofelia's mother dies, which is full of sadness and despair
Standout Features:
Unique Hook:
The film's unique blend of fantasy and horror, which creates a truly immersive and unforgettable experience
Plot Twist :
The revelation that Ofelia is actually a princess from another world, which adds a whole new layer to the story
Distinctive Setting :
The film's setting in post-Civil War Spain, which provides a backdrop of violence and despair that adds to the film's overall atmosphere
Innovative Ideas :
The film's use of magical realism, which allows the fantasy and horror elements to co-exist in a believable way
Unique Characters :
The film's characters are all complex and well-developed, and their motivations are often ambiguous
Genre Blend :
The film's unique blend of fantasy, horror, and coming-of-age story elements creates a truly unique and unforgettable experience
Comparable Scripts:
Pan's Labyrinth
Alice in Wonderland
The Chronicles of Narnia: The Lion, The Witch, and The Wardrobe
The Secret Garden
Guillermo del Toro's Cabinet of Curiosities
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$20-30 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-45, fans of fantasy, war dramas, and coming-of-age stories
Marketability: Guillermo del Toro's unique blend of fantasy and horror has proven to be popular with audiences worldwide, and the film's themes of war and family are universal
The film's dark and violent content may limit its appeal to some audiences, but its strong performances and stunning visuals could help it overcome this
The film's foreign-language status could limit its box office potential in some markets, but its critical acclaim could help it overcome this
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, due to the film's strong critical reception and potential for award nominations
Vidal: What must you think of me, my dear young woman? You must think I'm a monster. (Scene 21)
Mercedes: Don't you dare touch the girl... You won't be the first pig I've gutted! (Scene 22)
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
Screenplay Rating:
Recommend
Executive Summary
Pan's Labyrinth is a visually stunning and thematically rich fantasy/drama screenplay that blends the real and the supernatural in a compelling manner. The story effectively explores the emotional journey of its protagonist, Ofelia, against the backdrop of the Spanish Civil War, and the ending provides a powerful and satisfying resolution to her character arc. The screenplay features strong character development, imaginative fantasy elements, and impactful dramatic moments, making it a compelling and unique work that would likely resonate with audiences.
Strengths
The opening sequence effectively establishes the fantasy/mythological elements of the story and the historical context of post-Spanish Civil War. The use of voiceover narration and visual storytelling creates an atmospheric, immersive experience for the audience. high
( Scene 1
(PAN'S LABYRINTH)
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The scene between Ofelia and her mother Carmen is a strong character-driven moment that explores their relationship and Ofelia's emotional journey. The dialogue and subtext effectively convey the challenges and conflicts the characters face. high
( Scene 4
(INT. UPPER BEDROOM - NIGHT)
)
The introduction of the fantastical elements through the Faun and the magical labyrinth is compelling and imaginative, blending the real and the supernatural in an intriguing way. high
( Scene 7
(LABYRINTH - CONTINUOUS)
)
The visually striking and unsettling Banquet Hall sequence, with the strange Pale Man figure, is a highlight that effectively raises the stakes and tension in the story. high
( Scene 15
(INT. BANQUET HALL - SAME)
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The climactic ending, where Ofelia is revealed to be a princess in the Underworld, is a powerful and emotionally resonant resolution to her journey, balancing the real and the fantastical. high
( Scene 25
(INT. VAST HALL - NIGHT)
)
Areas of Improvement
The scene involving the Doctor and Stutter's torture could be tightened and streamlined to maintain the pacing and avoid feeling overly drawn out. medium
( Scene 13
(INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT)
)
There are no major missing elements in the screenplay. The story is well-developed and the narrative arc is complete. low
( Scene
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NotablePoints
The scene where Vidal discusses his father's death and legacy is a strong character moment that provides insight into his motivations and backstory. medium
( Scene 6
(INT. VIDAL'S STUDY - DAY)
)
The depiction of the guerrilla resistance fighters and their struggle against the fascist regime adds an important political and historical dimension to the story. medium
( Scene 14
(INT. CAVE - NIGHT)
)
Ofelia's final decision to protect her brother over her own destiny is a poignant and emotionally resonant moment that highlights her character growth and values. high
( Scene 22
(INT. ATTIC - NIGHT)
)
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Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.5, The screenplay's character development effectively drives the narrative and creates compelling emotional connections. Ofelia's journey is particularly well-crafted, showcasing her transformation from a naïve child to a courageous heroine. The supporting characters, Carmen, Mercedes, and Vidal, also undergo significant development, adding depth to the story and exploring themes of sacrifice, redemption, and power dynamics. See More
Premise: 8.5, The screenplay establishes a compelling and clear premise that sets up an intriguing narrative with a unique blend of fantasy and historical elements. While the premise effectively sets the stage for an immersive and engaging story, specific areas have the potential to be further strengthened to enhance the screenplay's initial hook and long-term audience interest. See More
Structure: 8.25, The screenplay possesses a captivating structure that skillfully merges the real world and fantasy elements, creating a compelling narrative. However, some areas could benefit from refinement to enhance the plot's clarity and maintain a consistent pacing throughout. See More
Theme: 8.25, The screenplay effectively explores the themes of innocence, brutality of war, and human resilience through the central character of Ofelia. The shift between the whimsical fantasy world and the harsh realities of war creates a stark contrast that underscores the fragility of innocence. The screenplay powerfully depicts the impact of war on children and the sacrifices they make to protect their loved ones. See More
Visual Impact: 7.25, The screenplay offers a captivating blend of realism and fantasy with its visual descriptions, successfully immersing readers in the war-torn world of Spain and the mystical realm of Ofelia's imagination. The evocative imagery of the post-Civil War landscape and the haunting beauty of the labyrinth enhance the film's emotional resonance. See More
Emotional Impact: 7.75, This screenplay powerfully evokes emotions through its compelling characters and immersive storytelling, yet there are opportunities to further elevate the emotional depth by amplifying the psychological struggle of its protagonist and the emotional consequences of the choices made. See More
Conflict: 7.5, The screenplay effectively presents a central conflict between the protagonist, Ofelia, and the oppressive forces represented by her stepfather, Vidal. The stakes are personal and significant, involving Ofelia's survival, her family's well-being, and her sense of self-identity. However, the screenplay could benefit from a clearer integration of the fantasy and real-world conflicts, as well as a more consistent escalation of stakes throughout the narrative. See More
Originality: 8.00, The screenplay displays creativity in its fusion of a classic fairy tale with the harsh realities of war-torn Spain. The unique character of Ofelia, a young girl who finds solace in fantasy amidst the horrors of war, is a testament to the screenplay's imaginative approach. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
In the aftermath of the Spanish Civil War, 11-year-old Ofelia is bleeding from her nose while a narrator tells a fairytale about a lost princess who forgets her identity and suffers before dying. Ofelia is traveling with her pregnant mother in a car caravan of fascist supporters.
Ofelia discovers a strange stone and uses it to complete a carved monolith. A stick insect crawls out and flies away as they arrive at the water mill.
Ofelia ventures into a garden labyrinth and meets Mercedes while traveling with fascist supporters. Vidal plans to block supplies to the guerrillas, and Carmen takes medicine to help her sleep. Mercedes asks the doctor for help with the Captain's leg wound.
Ofelia and her mother bond over a fairytale as they hear strange noises in their old house. Ofelia tells a story of a magic rose and the dangers of immortality while a stick insect observes them.
Vidal interrogates and executes a father and son suspected of being guerrilla fighters, while his wife rests in the underground makeshift office near the mill wheel.
Ofelia wakes up to strange noises and discovers a Stick Insect that transforms into a Green Fairy. The fairy points towards the window, inviting Ofelia to follow.
Ofelia meets a faun who reveals her true identity as the Princess Moanna, daughter of the King of the Underworld. The faun gives Ofelia a book with three tasks she must complete to ensure her return, but it reveals nothing to her when she opens it.
Ofelia receives a beautiful green dress from her mother and discovers a magical book in the bathroom.
Ofelia meets with Mercedes and speaks of fairies before being asked to accompany Vidal to the bodega. Ofelia recites the third task that requires her to retrieve a key from the mouth of a toad, which will help a fig tree flourish. She takes off her dress and heads to the tree in a slip and shoes.
Ofelia retrieves a key from the mouth of a giant toad under a fig tree root, but loses her dress in the process and gets covered in mud.
Vidal hosts a dinner party with various guests, discussing ration cards and the guerillas. He reveals his true motives for being there and makes a threatening toast.
After retrieving a key from a giant toad, Ofelia attends a dinner party hosted by Vidal. Carmen reveals how she met the Captain. Vidal becomes uncomfortable when a guest mentions his father, but then tells a story about how his father died. Ofelia talks to Carmen in the bathroom and is scolded. The Green Fairy appears and takes Ofelia to the labyrinth where the Faun gives her a piece of chalk and tells her there are still two tasks left.
Vidal supervises food rationing, Carmen dies in childbirth, and Ofelia moves to the attic with Mercedes
Mercedes and the doctor join the guerrilla group, while Ofelia receives instruction from the faun to save her mother's life.
Ofelia retrieves a package from one of three doors in a banquet hall, but eats a grape and inadvertently awakens a pale monster with two human eyeballs. The monster attacks and kills some of the fairies while pursuing Ofelia, who barely escapes through a newly traced door with her package.
The Doctor gives Pedro and Mercedes advice while Vidal tends to Carmen in her sickbed amid nearby explosions. Ofelia tries to save Carmen with a mandrake root while also speaking to her unborn brother.
Vidal and his men investigate a train explosion and a gunfight ensues at a mill, where they capture a guerrilla fighter. Mercedes learns of the captive and sees it is Stutter.
Vidal interrogates a guerrilla fighter with torture tools
Ofelia talks to the Faun about her accident and the Faun tells her that she can never go back. Vidal seeks medical help from the Doctor to heal Stutter while secretly stealing antibiotics from his bag. The Doctor administers an injection to Stutter as he passes away. Ofelia finds the mandrake root and speaks to Vidal in her room when he catches her.
Vidal displays his cruelty while trying to save Carmen's life. Ofelia's belief in magic causes conflict in the family, leading to tragic consequences.
Carmen dies during childbirth while Vidal steals medicine from the Doctor. Mercedes, who is secretly part of the resistance, plans to leave with important materials. Ofelia learns of Mercedes' plan and begs to go with her.
Mercedes betrays Vidal and escapes, while Vidal interrogates and tortures Mercedes.
Mercedes is chased through the forest and saved by guerrilla fighters, while Ofelia receives a mission from the Faun and attempts to drug Vidal's liquor.
Ofelia leads her brother through the labyrinth, chased by Vidal. The Faun urges Ofelia to complete the final task, while Vidal tries to shoot her. In the ensuing chaos, Ofelia is shot and dies at the edge of the well, clutching her brother. Vidal takes the baby and leaves Ofelia to die alone.
Mercedes helps the resistance overthrow Vidal, Ofelia dies but completes her final task to become Princess of the Underworld, and the story concludes with a reflection on her legacy.
CharacterInconsistencies
Character Carmen Description Carmen's initial portrayal as a practical and skeptical woman clashes with her later belief in the mandrake root's magical properties. While the stress of her pregnancy and environment could explain some inconsistencies, the shift feels somewhat abrupt.
( Scene 7 Scene 20
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Character Vidal Description Vidal's character is generally consistent in his ruthlessness and arrogance. However, his reaction to the story of his father's watch seems out of character, as he appears more sensitive and insecure than his usual demeanor would suggest.
( Scene 12 Scene 17
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StoryInconsistencies
Description The guerillas' attack on the train seems illogical as they cause significant damage and risk exposure without gaining any apparent advantage or resources.
( Scene 17
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PlotHoles
DialogueAuthenticity
Description The dialogue between Ofelia and the Faun initially feels somewhat exposition-heavy and unnatural, as the Faun reveals crucial information about Ofelia's identity and tasks in a direct manner.
( Scene 7
)
Redundancies
Element Vidal's shaving scenes
( Scene 5 Scene 13 Scene 16
)
Suggestion While these scenes establish Vidal's ritualistic behavior and obsession with control, reducing their frequency could improve pacing and avoid redundancy.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character
Arc
Critique
Suggestions
Ofelia
Throughout the movie, Ofelia's character arc is one of discovery, growth, and sacrifice. She begins the story as an innocent and curious girl, fascinated by the magical world around her. She embarks on a fantasy quest to complete three tasks to prove herself worthy of becoming a princess. As she completes each task, she becomes more aware of the darkness and dangers of the real world. She learns to be brave and persistent, standing up to authority when necessary to protect her family. By the end of the story, Ofelia has sacrificed herself in order to save her brother, demonstrating her love, bravery, and selflessness.
Overall, Ofelia is a well-developed and complex character who undergoes significant growth over the course of the movie. However, at times, her actions and decisions can be impulsive or naïve, leading her into dangerous situations. Additionally, some aspects of her character, such as her resentment towards her mother, are not fully explored or resolved.
To improve Ofelia's character arc, it would be beneficial to provide more context and background for her relationship with her mother, and explore the reasons for their emotional distance. This could help make her decisions and motivations more understandable to the audience. Additionally, her growth could be more organic and gradual, with more emphasis on the difficult choices she makes in the face of real-world danger, rather than relying solely on her attachment to the fantasy world. Overall, more attention could be given to developing and resolving the emotional conflicts within Ofelia's character.
Carmen
Carmen's character arc centers around her struggle with her pregnancy and the increasing dependence on medicine, which makes her vulnerable to manipulation and control. As the story unfolds, Carmen becomes more isolated and dependent on her husband Vidal, who represents the oppressive forces of the fascist regime. At the same time, she begins to realize the brutality and cruelty of the war and the toll it takes on her family and loved ones. In the end, Carmen sacrifices herself to protect her daughter and give her a chance at a better life. Her character arc is one of self-discovery, sacrifice, and redemption.
Overall, Carmen's character arc is well-developed and engaging, but it would benefit from more distinct and impactful moments throughout the film. While her struggles with medication and pregnancy are evident, they tend to be somewhat overshadowed by the larger political conflicts and magical elements of the story. Additionally, Carmen's actions towards Ofelia sometimes come across as harsh and unsympathetic, which makes it harder to empathize with her character.
To improve Carmen's character arc, it would be helpful to focus more on her internal struggles and motivations throughout the film. This could be achieved through more intimate conversations or flashbacks that show her past experiences and emotions more clearly. It might also be helpful to lighten her impact on Ofelia and portray her more as a sympathetic and loving mother, which would make her actions later in the film more impactful and emotional.
Mercedes
Mercedes begins as a nurturing caretaker to Ofelia but becomes a key player in the resistance movement, risking her life for the rebels and fighting against Vidal. She is initially guarded about the fauns, but ultimately joins the cause and makes difficult sacrifices for it. Her character arc culminates in her embracing her role as a member of the resistance, determined to protect the people she loves and fight for what is right.
Mercedes is a well-rounded character with strong motivations and a solid character arc. However, her conflicted feelings towards the rebellion and Pedro could have been explored in more detail to add further depth to her character.
To improve Mercedes' character arc, consider adding scenes that delve deeper into her internal conflict and struggles with the rebellion and Pedro. This could help create a more complex and nuanced portrayal of the character.
Vidal
At the beginning of the film, Vidal is portrayed as an uncompromising and ruthless military captain who is willing to do anything to achieve his goals. However, as the story progresses, he becomes increasingly obsessed with maintaining power and control, to the point of sacrificing everything that he holds dear. His arc ultimately leads him to become a monster, as his fears and paranoia drive him to commit atrocities against the guerrilla fighters and the people he is supposed to protect. In the end, he meets a fitting end at the hands of those he has wronged.
While Vidal is an excellent antagonist, his character arc could be developed further. At times, it feels as though his motivations are entirely driven by his desire for power and control, with little development beyond that. Additionally, his ultimate demise feels somewhat rushed and lacks the emotional impact that it could have had. There is potential for greater depth and nuance in this character, which would make his arc all the more satisfying.
To improve Vidal's character arc, it would be helpful to delve further into his backstory and explore the events and experiences that shaped him into the man he is today. This would give the audience a greater understanding of his motivations and make his actions more understandable, if not sympathetic. Additionally, adding further moments of vulnerability or hesitation would make Vidal feel more human and less of a one-dimensional villain. Finally, slowing down the pace of his ultimate demise would give his final moments greater weight and emotional resonance.
Theme
Theme Details
Themee Explanation
The Power of Imagination and Storytelling
Throughout the film, Ofelia uses her imagination and love for fairy tales to cope with the harsh reality of post-Civil War Spain. The story also includes a fairytale within the film, which intertwines and parallels with the real-world events.
This theme highlights the escapism that comes with storytelling and how it can be used as a way to deal with life's difficulties. It also emphasizes the importance of imagination in one's life.
The Brutality of War
The film portrays the senseless violence and cruelty that comes with war, including the torture and killing of suspects and the withholding of medicine and supplies for guerrilla fighters.
This theme depicts the horrors of war and its impact not only on soldiers but also on civilians caught in the crossfire. It also shows the cruelty and disregard for human life that can arise in times of conflict.
Sacrifice and Loss
The film portrays the sacrifice of characters such as Mercedes, who risks her life to help the guerrilla fighters, and Ofelia, who ultimately sacrifices her life in order to become Princess Moanna and complete the tasks assigned to her by the Faun.
This theme reflects on the idea that sometimes, in order to achieve something greater, one must make sacrifices. It also portrays the emotional pain and loss that comes with such sacrifices.
Authority and Power
The film portrays the authority and power held by Captain Vidal, who abuses his power by torturing and killing suspects and withholding medicine and supplies from the guerrilla fighters.
This theme highlights the dangers and abuses of authority and power, particularly in times of conflict. It also shows the impact that these abuses can have on individuals and society as a whole.
Identity and Self-discovery
The film explores Ofelia's journey of self-discovery as she learns of her true identity as Princess Moanna and completes the tasks assigned to her by the Faun.
This theme reflects on the idea of discovering one's true identity and purpose in life. It also emphasizes the importance of personal growth and the journey towards finding oneself.
What's going on here? - Scenes are rated on many critreia. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; \
It's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
Effective use of visual and auditory elements to create atmosphere and suggest themes. The fairytale and the images of destruction provide contrast and irony.
Establishes tension and conflict among characters. Provides foreshadowing for future events. Well-paced dialogue.
Intense scene with high stakes and emotional impact. Vidal is shown as a ruthless character who will stop at nothing to achieve his goals.
Adding a new dimension to Ofelia's character through her revelation as a princess and her tasks, the dark and mysterious tone that builds tension, and the interesting dialogue between Ofelia and the faun.
The conclusion of the film is both mystical and emotional, with strong character arcs. The imagery and visual effects are stunning, and the story wraps up nicely with a satisfying conclusion.
Scene Weaknesses
The dialogue is somewhat basic and lacking in character development. The conflict level and emotional impact are low, although this is not necessarily a weakness given the scene's purpose.
Lack of action may be slow for some viewers. Some character motivations are unclear at this point in the story.
The scene's pacing is slow and there is little action, mainly dialogue and character development. Ofelia's storyline is briefly mentioned but not developed.
The scene may be too heavy and somber for some viewers, and there is not much action or suspense present.
The pacing of the film can be slow at times, making it difficult to stay engaged. Some viewers may find the ending ambiguous or unsatisfying.
Suggestions
To improve the screenplay, work on developing richer and more nuanced dialogue that further develops the characters and conflicts in the story.
Ensure that there is a clear balance of action and slow-paced scenes to keep the audience engaged throughout the story.
Clarify character motivations and actions to avoid confusion and enhance audience understanding of the story's events.
Experiment with different techniques for creating tension and suspense, such as varying the pacing or tone of scenes, to keep the audience engaged and intrigued.
Spend time crafting a strong and impactful ending that brings all the themes and conflicts of the story to a satisfying conclusion.
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern
Explanation
Tone vs Emotional Impact
There is a strong positive correlation between tone and emotional impact. Screenplays with darker, foreboding or mysterious tones tend to have higher emotional impacts on the readers.
Dialogue vs Character Changes
There is a moderate positive correlation between dialogue and character changes. Screenplays with well-written dialogues tend to have better and more pronounced character development.
Plot vs Conflict
There is a strong positive correlation between plot and conflict. Screenplays with complex and intriguing plots tend to have a higher degree of conflict to keep the audience engaged.
Characters vs High Stakes
There is a moderate positive correlation between characters and high stakes. Screenplays with well-developed characters tend to have higher stakes, adding to the overall impact of the story.
Tone vs Dialogue
There are mixed findings on the correlation between tone and dialogue. While some screenplays with darker or tense tones have better dialogue, there are also instances where lighter or optimistic tones have impressive dialogues.
Concept vs Overall Grade
There is a strong positive correlation between concept and overall grade. Screenplays with unique and fresh concepts tend to have higher overall grades.
Tone vs Plot
There are mixed findings on the correlation between tone and plot. While some screenplays with darker or eerie tones have complex and engaging plots, there are also instances where optimistic or mysterious tones have equally impressive plots.
Conflict vs High Stakes
There is a strong positive correlation between conflict and high stakes. Screenplays that have high conflict are often more intense and have higher stakes which adds to the overall experience of the story.
Character Changes vs Emotional Impact
There is a moderate positive correlation between character changes and emotional impact. Screenplays with more pronounced character changes tend to have higher emotional impacts on the readers.
Dialogue vs Move Story Forward
There is a strong positive correlation between dialogue and moving the story forward. Screenplays with well-written dialogues tend to keep the story moving at a good pace.
Concept vs Emotional Impact
There is a moderate positive correlation between concept and emotional impact. Screenplays with unique concepts that explore different emotions tend to have higher emotional impacts on the readers.
Plot vs Move Story Forward
There is a strong positive correlation between plot and moving the story forward. Screenplays with complex and intriguing plots tend to be better at moving the story forward.
Tone vs Character Changes
There is a moderate positive correlation between tone and character changes. Screenplays with darker or eerie tones tend to have better and more pronounced character development.
Conflict vs Move Story Forward
There is a strong positive correlation between conflict and moving the story forward. Screenplays with high conflict tend to be better at keeping the story moving forward.
Tone vs Conflict
There is a moderate positive correlation between tone and conflict. Screenplays with darker or tense tones tend to have more conflict which adds to the overall experience of the story.
Character Changes vs Conflict
There is a moderate positive correlation between character changes and conflict. Screenplays with more pronounced character changes tend to have higher conflict which makes the story more engaging.
Tone vs High Stakes
There is a moderate positive correlation between tone and high stakes. Screenplays with darker or tense tones tend to have higher stakes, making the story more intense and impactful.
Plot vs Emotional Impact
There is a moderate positive correlation between plot and emotional impact. Screenplays with complex and intriguing plots tend to have higher emotional impacts on the readers.
Tone vs Concept
There are mixed findings on the correlation between tone and concept. While some screenplays with darker or foreboding tones have unique concepts, there are also instances where optimistic or mysterious tones have equally unique concepts.
Dialogue vs Emotional Impact
There is a moderate positive correlation between dialogue and emotional impact. Screenplays with well-written dialogues tend to have higher emotional impacts on the readers.
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope
Trope Details
Trope Explanation
Fantasy Worldbuilding
The film takes place in a post-Civil War Spain with fairytale elements
Fantasy Worldbuilding is a common trope in which the story takes place in a world that is not our reality. Example: The Lord of the Rings
Coming of Age
Ofelia, the main character, learns about her true identity and completes tasks to become a princess of the underworld
Coming of Age is a trope in which the main character learns about themselves and grows as a person. Example: The Catcher in the Rye
The Chosen One
Ofelia is revealed to be the lost princess Moanna and is tasked with completing three tasks to become the princess of the underworld
The Chosen One is a common trope in which the main character is special and has been chosen for a prophecy or mission. Example: The Matrix
Sympathetic Murderer
Vidal interrogates and kills guerrilla suspects and the Doctor, but is not portrayed as completely evil
Sympathetic Murderer is a trope in which the audience is made to understand and empathize with a character who commits murder. Example: Dexter
Parent-Child Relationship
Ofelia and her pregnant mother argue about her love for fairy tales and later bond over a fairytale
Parent-Child Relationship is a common trope in which the relationship between a parent and child is explored. Example: The Glass Castle
Task Completion Plot
Ofelia is tasked with completing three tasks to become the princess of the underworld
Task Completion Plot is a story structure in which the main character must complete a series of tasks or missions. Example: The Hunger Games
Tragic Hero
Ofelia leads her brother through the labyrinth and is fatally wounded by Vidal, becoming a princess of the underworld in her final moments
Tragic Hero is a common trope in which the main character suffers a downfall and often dies in the end. Example: Macbeth
Mercedes: Don't you dare touch the girl... You won't be the first pig I've gutted!
Some Loglines to consider:
In the aftermath of the Spanish Civil War, a young girl named Ofelia discovers a fantastical world of mythical creatures and must choose between her own destiny as a princess and protecting her ailing mother and newborn brother from the cruelty of a fascist officer.
A young girl's imagination transports her to a magical parallel world where she must complete three dangerous tasks to reclaim her rightful place as a princess, while grappling with the harsh realities of life under a fascist regime in post-war Spain.
Haunted by visions of a mystical underworld, a spirited 11-year-old girl navigates the treacherous landscape of 1940s Spain, where her struggle to save her family pits her against a ruthless fascist captain and the fantastical creatures of her own creation.
In the aftermath of the Spanish Civil War, a young girl's journey of self-discovery leads her to a parallel fairy-tale world, where she must confront her own mortality and the darkest realities of the human condition to reclaim her true identity as a princess.
Amidst the violence and oppression of post-war Spain, a young girl escapes into a magical labyrinth where she is tasked with completing a series of challenges to unlock her destiny as a princess, while fighting to protect her family from a brutal fascist officer.
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The Lost Princess - Overall Grade:
8.0
PAN’S LABYRINTH
(El Laberinto del Fauno)
By
Guillermo del Toro
(PAN’S LABYRINTH is in Spanish with English subtitles.
This is an English translation of the script.)
HIDDEN IN THE MOUNTAINS, ARMED MEN FIGHT THE NEW
FASCIST REGIME. MILITARY POSTS ARE ESTABLISHED TO
EXTERMINATE THE RESISTANCE.
Then: the raw, raspy SOUND of a child struggling to breathe.
FADE IN:
EXT. LABYRINTH NIGHT
In the foreground, OFELIA 11 years old, skin white as
snow, ruby lips and ebony hair is sprawled on the ground.
A thick ribbon of blood runs from her nose.
But the blood is flowing backward into her nostril. Drop
by drop, the blood leaps up and disappears.
Ofelia's pupils dilate
NARRATOR
Long ago in the Underground Realm...
CAMERA MOVES INTO THE DARK PUPIL
BLACK SCREEN
NARRATOR
...where there are no lies or pain, there
lived a Princess who dreamt of the human
world.
The sound of muffled wind.
NARRATOR
She dreamt of blue skies, the soft breeze
and sunshine...
A dark CASTLE takes shape. Here, a tower... there, a
turret... and lighted windows.
Finally, the damp, mildewed walls of a water well come into
focus.
NARRATOR
One day, eluding her keepers, the
Princess escaped.
A woman's silhouette crosses CAMERA
NARRATOR
Once outside, the brightness blinded her
and erased her memory...
A circular staircase leads up... toward daylight, where the
image...
NARRATOR
She forgot who she was and where she came
from. Her body suffered cold, sickness
and pain. Eventually, she died.
FADES TO WHITE:
EXT. BOMBED CITY DAY
CAMERA TRACKS past scenes of destruction: bombedout
buildings... cathedrals in ruins.
NARRATOR
Her father, the King, always knew that
the Princess would return, perhaps in
another body, in another place, at
another time.
On halfdemolished walls, Falangist posters declare Franco's
triumph. Among the ruins, smaller, poignant traces of war:
shoes, broken eyeglasses...
NARRATOR
And he would wait for her, until he drew
his last breath, until the world stopped
turning…
Through the ruined buildings, a SMALL CARAVAN OF BLACK
BENTLEY CARS comes into view.
The shiny chrome fenders pass directly by CAMERA; they bear
all the Fascist insignias and flags.
INT. MAIN CAR SAME
Looking out the window: OFELIA.
She's dressed in plain, slightly frayed clothing. Not very
dainty. On her lap is a book of fairy tales.
CAMERA studies one of the watercolors that adorn the pages:
an illustration of a little girl dancing with several
fairies flying around her.
At her side, a small pile of similar books in a book strap.
CARMEN
I don't understand why you had to bring
so many books, Ofelia.
Ofelia turns her gaze toward the opposite seat, where her
mother, CARMEN, 28, is napping, her enormous stomach
evidence of advanced pregnancy. She, too, has black hair.
CARMEN
We're going to the country... the
outdoors... plenty of fresh air.
She takes the book away from Ofelia.
CARMEN
Fairy tales? You're too old to be filling
your head with such nonsense.
She pauses, feeling nausea.
CARMEN
Ask them to stop the car please
Ofelia knocks on the partition window of the sedan. The
Driver stops.
The caravan of cars stops. Carmen hurriedly climbs down and
moves to the front of the main car.
Gasping for air, she battles the nausea. Ofelia timidly
approaches her.
CARMEN
Ofelia, wait up.
She grabs her pregnant abdomen.
CARMEN
Your brother's not well.
Ofelia nods and moves away. SERRANO, a military man, climbs
out of the car behind them and approaches Carmen solicitous.
SERRANO
Madam, are you feeling ill?
CARMEN
Water just a bit of water
SERRANO
(to one of his men)
Water, bring water for the Captain's
wife.
Ofelia walks alongside the road, moving into the woods and
further away from the caravan of cars.
CAMERA surveys the heavy forest: a tangled tapestry of moss
and fog.
The trees, swayed by the wind, murmur softly around Ofelia.
She stumbles upon a strange stone by the side of the road.
Roughly the size of a fist carved on it, the outline of a
human EYE.
Fascinated, the young girl picks it up.
She looks around and finds amidst the shrubs an ancient
stone monolith incised with Celtic lettering.
It's crowned with the grotesque face of a satyr mouth open
wide.
A piece of the brutish face is missing: an eye.
Ofelia fits the piece of engraved stone in the missing area.
A perfect fit.
From inside the statue a clicking noise emerges. The wind
picks up and
out of the satyr's open mouth, a STICK INSECT lazily crawls
out. Ofelia smiles. The insect climbs atop the stone head
and studies the girl for a moment. Then
CARMEN
Ofelia??
The sound of Carmen's voice startles the creature, which flies
off.
Ofelia runs to her mother's side.
OFELIA
(enthusiastic)
A fairy I saw a fairy!!
CARMEN
Oh look at your shoes!! They're covered
in mud!
They head back to the caravan.
CARMEN
When we get to the mill I want you to
greet Captain Vidal.
That man has been very good to us,
darling. You have no idea
So, I want you to call him "Father." Do
you hear me? "Father..."
It's just a word, Ofelia.
The Stick Insect lands in a nearby tree and observes inquisitively
as Mother and daughter climb into the main car and head off.
A beat later, the Stick Insect flies after them.
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INT. WATER MILL DAY
CLOSEUP: a gold pocket watch, on a heavy chain. The glass
dial is cracked...
A gloved THUMB snaps the cover shut. A VOICE CAPTAIN VIDAL
mutters in irritation.
VIDAL
Fifteen minutes late.
ANGLE WIDENS to describe a dilapidated WATER MILL.
The site consists of a pair of dark stone buildings with
corrugated roofs, connected to the mill by a small stone
bridge. A large water wheel hangs over the dry riverbed.
The wooden beams and columns bear sculpted Celtic motifs and
here and there, small, odd, carved creatures.
The walls have been reinforced with hundreds of sandbags
and wooden pontoons, as if preparing for an attack.
CAPTAIN VIDAL and a small group of SERVANTS and SOLDIERS
wait patiently outside.
SOLDIER
Captain!! They're here
The caravan of Bentleys stops in front of the building. Vidal
and his group moves in. Servants and Soldiers unload luggage
withy military efficiency. In charge is MERCEDES, a young
but strict country woman.
Vidal greets Carmen.
VIDAL
Carmen Welcome
With a pleasant smile, he touches her pregnant belly and
then points at a wooden wheelchair pushed to Carmen's side
by a small, nervous man SGT. GARCÉS. By his side stands
DOCTOR FERREIRO, a pleasant, scholarly man in his mid
forties.
CARMEN
I I don't need it I can walk by myself.
VIDAL
Doctor Ferreiro prefers that you don't
exert yourself.
CARMEN
Nno...
Vidal leans towards her and whispers ever so softly in her
ear:
VIDAL
Then do it for me...
She obeys. As she sits, Ofelia exits the automobile, holding
her books close to her chest.
CARMEN
Ofelia. Greet the Captain.
She is wheeled away. An awkward silence passes between the
young girl and the Captain.
VIDAL
Ofelia
The girl extends her hand. He grabs it, firm but cold. It is
her left hand.
VIDAL
It's the other hand, Ofelia.
He turns to the servants.
VIDAL
Mercedes, take my wife's luggage to her
room
MERCEDES
Yes, sir.
Mercedes glances back to find Ofelia curiously gazing at
a pile of sandbags. Perched on top
the big Stick Insect.
It fans out its multiple wings. Twice. Ofelia runs over and
tries to catch it.
But the Stick Insect takes off and escapes. The girl drops her
books and goes after it.
Genres:
Drama, Fantasy Tone:
"Mysterious"
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3 -
The Labyrinth - Overall Grade:
8.0
EXT. GARDENS FURTHER CONTINUOUS
Ofelia follows the Stick Insect to the edge of a small rise.
She follows it with her eyes and sees, about 100 meters
away, surrounded by trees, the ruins of a garden LABYRINTH.
The CAMERA glides up for a better view. The labyrinth is
circular, its paths overgrown and partially blocked.
Ofelia enters the labyrinth through an archway. She ventures
down one of its pathways and stops
MERCEDES
It's a labyrinth
Ofelia turns the young woman stands by her side. Ofelia's
books in hand.
MERCEDES
Just a pile of old stones.
They've always been there, even before
the mill. Better you don't go near it
You could get lost.
A ray of sunlight breaks through the grey clouds and
illuminates the old ruins. Mercedes hands her the books.
OFELIA
Thank you.
MERCEDES
Have you read them all?
Garcés shouts from the mill:
GARCÉS
Mercedes!
(Mercedes reacts)
The Captain’s calling you.
Mercedes makes a small gesture of goodbye to Ofelia.
MERCEDES
Your father needs me.
She turns and walks away
OFELIA
He's not my father.
Mercedes doesn't understand. The girl runs up to her.
OFELIA
The Captain he's not my father. My
father was a tailor. He died in the war.
The Captain’s not my father!
Mercedes can't help but smile at the girl's sudden
vehemence.
MERCEDES
Well, you've made that clear enough.
They walk away together.
OFELIA
Did you see my mother?
(Mercedes nods)
She's pretty isn't she?
(Mercedes nods)
You saw her belly? She's sick with child.
As they go into the house, the Stick Insect perched atop
the labyrinth's archway monitors their every move.
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INT. DINING ROOM NIGHT
VIDAL
The guerillas are sticking to the woods
because it's hard to track them down up
there.
Vidal is standing at an enormous dining table. Serrano,
Garcés and a few lowerranking officials surround him.
VIDAL
Those pricks know the terrain better than
any of us. We need to force them down
Vidal sticks pins into one of the larger maps.
VIDAL
let's block their access to medicine and
supplies.
Mercedes enters bearing a tray of olives, cold cuts and a
bottle of Orujo liquor.
VIDAL
We'll set up three command posts. Here,
here and here.
Mercedes glances briefly at the maps, concealing avid
interest.
Suddenly, Vidal grabs Mercedes by the arm.
VIDAL
Have Dr. Ferreiro come see me.
MERCEDES
Yes, Sir...
Turning his attention back to his maps, Vidal takes two
olives and pops them into his mouth.
VIDAL
(chewing)
Those bastards are going to starve...
you'll see...
INT. UPPER BEDROOM DUSK
The doctor stirs some drops of medicine into a glass of
water. Carmen lies back in a monumental carved bed. On her
lap there are several playing cards.
DOCTOR
Just four drops at bedtime and you'll
sleep all night long.
He gives her the water and the medicine vial. Carmen drinks
weakly. Ofelia stands by her side.
DOCTOR
Don't hesitate to call if you need
anything, Madame. You or your little
nurse.
He grins at Ofelia, then exits the room. Carmen gives Ofelia
the medicine vial.
CARMEN
Go. Close the door so I can sleep.
INT. FOYER/STAIRWAY NIGHT
In the hallway, the doctor finds Mercedes waiting for him.
They proceed in silence down the hallway and look down into
the foyer: empty.
MERCEDES
You must come up the mountain and see him
the leg wound its getting worse...
The doctor nods timidly and gives Mercedes a small PACKAGE
wrapped in dark paper and neatly tied in string.
DOCTOR
This is all I could get. I'm sorry.
Mercedes sighs, disappointed.
MERCEDES
He's downstairs don't keep him waiting.
The doctor moves downstairs. Mercedes glances toward the
Upper Bedroom and
discovers Ofelia, watching her attentively how long has
she been there?
The girl closes the door quietly.
Genres:
drama, war Tone:
"tense"
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4 -
The Princess and the Frozen Nights - Overall Grade:
8.0
INT. UPPER BEDROOM NIGHT
Ofelia takes off her shoes and climbs into her mother's bed.
As she cuddles close to her mother
CARMEN
Jesus Your feet they're frozen.
She caresses Ofelia's head. The wind picks up and the house
timbers moan and creak.
CARMEN
Are you scared?
OFELIA
A little bit.
OFELIA
What's that noise?
CARMEN
Nothing, just the wind. Nights here are
different from city nights. There, you
hear cars, trains. Here the houses are
old and creaky.
The house utters a series of deep, rumbling noises.
CARMEN
Almost like they're speaking.
Tomorrow, I'm going to give you something
special.
OFELIA
A book?
CARMEN
No, something much better.
A beat of silence and then
OFELIA
Why did you have to get married?
CARMEN
We were alone too long.
OFELIA
You weren't alone. You were never alone.
CARMEN
When you're older you'll understand. It
hasn't been easy for me.
She winces in pain
CARMEN
Your brother's he's acting up. Tell him
one of your stories so he'll calm down.
Ofelia gently leans on her mother's stomach and taps it with
one finger, as if it were a telegraph key.
CARMEN
My brother, my brother...
Carmen closes her eyes and listens to her daughter's voice
OFELIA
… a long, long time ago in a grey, sad
country…
INSIDE THE STOMACH
Floating in a limbo of amniotic fluid, the BABY opens his
eyes and listens.
OFELIA
There was a magic rose that made whoever
plucked it immortal.
EXT. MAGICAL MOUNTAIN SUNSET
Against a scarlet sky: a BLUE ROSE. Its thorny stem clutches
the daggerlike crest of a black granite mountain.
The thorns grow around the granite like suffocating
serpents.
OFELIA (V.O.)
But no one would dare go near it because
its thorns were full of mortal poison.
The Stick Insect lands on one of the thorns and then flies off
into the night sky
OFELIA (V.O.)
So amongst the men tales of pain and
death were told in hushed voices. But
there was no talk of eternal life...
because men fear pain more than they
want immortality.
up, up and then through
EXT. GARDENS TWILIGHT
the WINDOW of the Upper Bedroom.
Through the glass, the Stick Insect observes how Ofelia hugs her
mother.
OFELIA
So every day the rose wilted unable to
bequeath his gift to anyone
The Stick Insect clicks its jaws in excitement.
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Genres:
drama, fantasy Tone:
"intimate, eerie"
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5 -
Interrogation and Execution - Overall Grade:
9.0
INT. VIDAL'S STUDY DAY
The improvised office is in one of the lower rooms, where
the gigantic mill wheel and the wooden gears lie in a heap.
OFELIA (V.O.)
Alone and forgotten at the top of that
mountain. Forgotten until the end of
time…
Small steel gears shine like metallic stars on a small
swatch of black velvet.
Tweezers pick them up and
put them into place within the workings of a watch.
Using a jeweler's magnifying glass, Vidal oils and closes up
his pocket watch while he listens to cuplé (traditional
Spanish music) on a phonograph.
The doctor comes to the door. Vidal motions for him to
enter.
VIDAL
Come in
How is she?
DOCTOR
Very weak.
Vidal closes the watch.
VIDAL
She'll rest as much as she needs to. I'll
sleep down here.
And my son?
DOCTOR
Your?
Serrano and Garcés enter the room.
GARCÉS
Excuse us, Captain...
Vidal motions for them to be silent. Then he looks at the
Doctor again.
VIDAL
My son. How is he?
DOCTOR
For the moment, there's no reason to be
alarmed.
VIDAL
Good. That’s good.
DOCTOR
Captain.
Your wife she shouldn't have traveled
this late in the pregnancy.
VIDAL
Is that your opinion?
DOCTOR
My professional opinion, yes sir.
VIDAL
Well, a boy should be born wherever his
father is. And that's that.
He heads for the door.
DOCTOR
Captain...
Vidal stops and looks at him fixedly.
DOCTOR
One more thing, sir. What makes you so
sure it's a boy?
VIDAL
Don't fuck with me.
He exits the mill.
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EXT. MILL NIGHT
The mill and the tents are silhouettes in the night.
Soldiers patrol the gravel paths.
Vidal, Garcés and Serrano walk towards the outer Water
Wheel. There, a small group of soldiers surrounds an OLD MAN
and his young SON.
GARCÉS
At 8 o'clock, we detected activity in the
southeastern sector. Gunfire. Sergeant
Bayona captured a suspect. The other
prisoner is his son, who's here from
town.
SON
Captain, my father is an honorable man.
VIDAL
I'll decide that. Take your hat off when
you talk to me.
The Son quietly obeys. BAYONA hands the Captain a small
gauge rifle and a leather pouch.
VIDAL
We found this weapon. It's been fired.
SON
He was hunting rabbits
VIDAL
Shut up, damn it.
Vidal takes opens the leather pouch and finds a farmer's
almanac. He reads an inscription printed on the back page:
VIDAL
"...No God, nor Government, nor Master?"
GARCÉS
Red propaganda, sir.
SON
It's not propaganda, Sir.
Vidal, impatiently motions for him to be silent.
OLD MAN
"It's an old almanac; we're farmers, sir."
VIDAL
Go on.
OLD MAN
I was in the forest hunting rabbits for
my daughters. They're sick.
VIDAL
Rabbits, uh?
In the pouch, Vidal finds a halfempty bottle of wine.
SON
Captain, if my father says so he was
hunting rabbits.
Vidal hands Garcés the pouch and moves towards the boy,
bottle in hand.
BAM!! Without warning he flattens the boy's nose with the
bottle bottom. The Father screams, horrified, but without
the guts to intervene.
Vidal lifts the Son up, bashes his nose again and again,
leveling bone and cartilage.
FATHER
No!! No!! You killed him!! You son of a
bitch!!
Vidal drops the boy, who falls to the ground spitting blood.
He turns to the Father and shoots him twice in cold blood,
then turns to the Son and shoots him once, in the head.
Then all is silence. The distant whistle of a train can be
heard. Vidal heads back towards Garcés and calmly searches
the pouch: Inside he finds two scrawny rabbits.
VIDAL
Learn to frisk these motherfuckers before
you come bothering me.
GARCÉS
Yes, my Captain.
He moves away. And he takes the rabbits with him.
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Genres:
drama, war, historical Tone:
"dark"
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6 -
Ofelia meets the Green Fairy - Overall Grade:
7.0
INT. UPPER BEDROOM NIGHT
Eyes wide, Ofelia hears a dry rattle, followed by a soft
ululation at the window, which is half open. The curtains
billow.
The mill groans. Ofelia is restless.
Then a dry clicking noise.
OFELIA
Mama, wake up
Carmen doesn't move. A scuttling noise reaches her ears as
something small and quick skitters over the floor.
OFELIA
Mother please! There's something in the
room
Impossible. Ofelia gets up and carefully puts on her shoes.
Something shifts in the ceiling beams. Ofelia looks up,
searching.
Nothing. Suddenly, something the size of a human hand
scurries past her feet and hides under the bed.
Then, pulling at the goose down comforter, the Stick Insect climbs
up into the bed. Ofelia leans over it, shocked.
OFELIA
Hhello Did you follow me here??
The Stick Insect clicks its mandibles.
OFELIA
Are you a fairy??
The Stick Insect regards her with curiosity.
OFELIA
Look This is a fairy
She picks up one of her books and opens it to an
illustration: a beautiful fairy.
The Stick Insect scrutinizes the illustration and sits upright. It
opens and closes its wings, transforming into a GREEN FAIRY
a tiny human form with striped wings.
The Green Fairy flies to the foot of the bed, pointing to
the window.
OFELIA
You want me to go with you? Outside?
Where?
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Genres:
Fantasy, Horror Tone:
"Tense"
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7 -
The Faun - Overall Grade:
8.5
EXT. GARDENS NIGHT
The Green Fairy flies swiftly, but Ofelia follows close
behind. Suddenly it stops!
They’re at the ruins of the labyrinth, which is bathed in
moonlight.
Trees and roots crowd the broken niches, as if fused with
the stone. Some of the pathways are blocked by gnarled trees
that have grown through the rock.
LABYRINTH CONTINUOUS
Ofelia runs through the narrow, spooky pathways, but she has
lost sight of the Green Fairy.
Ofelia stops and looks around until she spots it, waiting
for her at
ROTUNDA AT CENTER OF LABYRINTH NIGHT
The Green Fairy alights on an ancient monolith at the edge of an
empty stone pool. It's decorated in Celtic lettering, just
like the one in the forest.
Another monolith stands at its center.
Ofelia nears the edge of the pool.
OFELIA
Hello?!
The pool returns her cry, again and again. The tree trunks
creak and a cloud covers the moon.
OFELIA
Echo! Echo!
Then, she hears the sound of something big clattering about
on hooves, like a horse or a bull.
VOICE
It's you It's you You've returned!!
The VOICE is cold and full of sibilance. The cloud moves
aside...
On its hind quarters in the shadows is the twisted and
sinister figure of a FAUN. He's covered in roots and moss.
Ofelia backs away speechless.
FAUN
No no don't be afraid I beg you!!
Look!!
He opens a small wicker basket and from it emerge two more
FAIRIES: one BLUE, one RED.
Ofelia smiles.
OFELIA
My name is Ofelia. Who are you?
FAUN
Me? I've had so many names. Old names
that only the wind and the trees can
pronounce.
The Green Fairy flies toward its colorful companions.
FAUN
I am the mountain, the forest and the
earth. I am... a faun.
As he bows to her, moonlight dapples his body. His coarse
hooves and the strange angle of his legs make his courtly
manner clumsy yet oddly gracious.
FAUN
Your Highness
OFELIA
No, I'm
FAUN
You are Princess Moanna, daughter of the
King of the Underworld.
OFELIA
No My father was a tailor.
FAUN
You are not born of man. It was the moon
that bore you.
Look on your left shoulder and you will
find a mark that proves it.
Ofelia instinctively touches her shoulder, with a strange
expression on her face.
FAUN
Your real father had us open portals all
over the world to allow your return. This
is the last of them.
He opens his arm and gestures at the well around them.
FAUN
But we have to make sure that your
essence is intact, that you have not
become a mortal.
To insure your return, you have three
tasks to fulfill before the moon is
full.
The Faun steps back a few paces. He deposits a large leather
bound book on the ground, as well as a leather bag.
FAUN
This is the Book of Crossroads. Open it
when you're alone and it will show you
your future show you what must be done.
Then he and the Fairies fade back into the shadows.
Ofelia goes to the book and opens it. No matter how many
pages she turns
they are all blank.
OFELIA
There's nothing here
But she is alone. Absolutely alone in the well. MUSIC starts
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INT. VIDAL'S STUDY BATHROOM EARLY MORNING
Vidal, shirtless, shaves with a switchblade while listening
to music.
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INT. DINING ROOM DAY
Now, alone in the massive dining room, Vidal shines his
boots. Methodically.
This is obviously a daily ritual for him. By his side: the
two scrawny rabbits he impounded the night before.
Mercedes brings him a cup of coffee.
VIDAL
Mercedes, prepare these rabbits for
dinner tonight.
Mercedes eyes the scrawny animals
MERCEDES
They are too young.
VIDAL
Well, see if they'll do for a stew.
MERCEDES
Yes sir.
She turns to leave but Vidal stops her gently.
VIDAL
And This coffee was burnt. Taste it
yourself.
She does. Vidal places a hand on her shoulder.
There is something unpleasant about this sudden contact,
something too familiar. She bears it in silence.
VIDAL
You should keep an eye on it.
MERCEDES
Yes, sir.
She moves into
Genres:
Fantasy, Drama Tone:
"Mysterious, dark"
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8 -
The Green Dress - Overall Grade:
8.0
INT. KITCHEN LATER
The kitchen is enormous. The open charcoal cook stove is two
meters high by five meters wide.
MERCEDES
(hands out the rabbits)
Take them to the table
Two old, stout cooks, JACINTA and PAZ, wash the gigantic
work table with boiling water.
MERCEDES
(to the others)
He didn't like the coffee.
JACINTA
Agh He's nothing but a fussy dandy. A
dandy!
MERCEDES picks up a pail of hot water.
MERCEDES
We're going to need some beef and one
more chicken. We have more guests
Conchita, Paloma and two other GIRLS pluck chickens, peel
potatoes, etc.
PAZ
Well, where are we supposed to find that?
MERCEDES
The doctor's wife and the mayor's, too.
JACINTA
Well, they eat more than a pig.
PAZ
And they don't shut up
JACINTA
not even underwater.
INT. BATHROOM, UPPER BEDROOM DAY
Mercedes and Conchita empty buckets of hot water into a
porcelain bathtub.
INT. UPPER BEDROOM BEDROOM DAY
Carmen opens one of her travel trunks.
CARMEN
Ofelia. Your father is giving a dinner
party tonight… Look what I've made you.
She lifts out a beautiful green dress in shiny silk and
ivory tulle.
Ofelia studies the dress as if it were a strange artifact
rather than something she might wear. Mercedes enters with a
breakfast tray.
CARMEN
Do you like it? What I wouldn't have
given to have a dress as fine as this
when I was little.
In a reverie, Carmen takes out a pair of new patent leather
shoes and a green silk hair ribbon.
CARMEN
(to Ofelia)
And look at these shoes! Do you like
them?
Ofelia makes an effort and smiles a weak smile.
OFELIA
Yes, they are very pretty.
But Carmen is not fooled
CARMEN
Go on, now. Take your bath. Go
Ofelia obeys She enters
INT. BATHROOM, UPPER BEDROOM DAY
Ofelia, alone in the bathroom, opens the magical book. At
first, the page is blank, but a wondrous image takes shape:
Ofelia and five chestnuts. Squatting at her side, under a
huge tree: a massive TOAD.
Then a KNOCK on the door
CARMEN'S VOICE
Ofelia
INT. UPPER BEDROOM DAY
Alone now, Carmen readies the little green dress.
CARMEN
Hurry up. I want to see the dress on you.
I want you to be beautiful for the
Captain...
INT. BATHROOM, UPPER BEDROOM DAY
On her right shoulder, Ofelia examines, exactly as the Faun
said, a birthmark in the form of the crescent moon...
CARMEN’S VOICE
You'll look like a princess
Ofelia smiles.
OFELIA
(to herself)
...a princess...
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INT. KITCHEN LATER
Mercedes organizes the kitchen.
MERCEDES
Make sure those chickens are cleaned
properly... and the beans...
Mercedes takes out a small, sharp knife from the folds in
her apron. She skillfully chops an onion.
The bustle suddenly stops. Everyone looks toward the door,
where, among chicken feathers floating like confetti, Ofelia
stands, dressed in green silk.
CONCHITA
You look marvelous, my girl, just
gorgeous.
JACINTA
What a dress!!
Mercedes smiles. She's pleased too, but she claps her hands
together
MERCEDES
Get back to work, stop wasting time.
They obey. Mercedes goes next to Ofelia.
MERCEDES
Do want some milk with honey?
Ofelia nods eagerly.
Genres:
drama, fantasy Tone:
"optimistic"
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9 -
Ofelia's Task - Overall Grade:
9.0
INT. STABLE LATER
Mercedes puts a bucket under a huge milk cow.
MERCEDES
Step back, I don't want you getting milk
on your dress, with you looking so
pretty.
Mercedes begins to milk the cow.
OFELIA
Mercedes, do you believe in fairies?
MERCEDES
No. But when I was a little girl, I did.
I believed in a lot of things that I
don't believe any more.
OFELIA
Well, last night, a fairy visited me. And
it wasn't alone, there were lots of them
and a faun, too.
MERCEDES
A faun??
Mercedes picks up the bucket and fills a wooden bowl with
milk.
OFELIA
He was very old, very tall and smelled
like dirt.
MERCEDES
My mother warned me to be wary of fauns
Suddenly, Vidal and Garcés approach them.
VIDAL
Mercedes, come with me.
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EXT. STORAGE BUILDING MILL DAY
Vidal and Mercedes walk toward the bodega, or storage
building, adjoining the mill.
Guards unload giant sacks of provisions from trucks. A Civil
Guard CAPITAN supervises the operation and greets Vidal.
CAPITAN
Captain, everything is here.
INT. BODEGA MILL CONTINUOUS
The men fill the enormous bodega with grain, bottles of
wine, barrels of oil, salt and sugar, etc.
VIDAL
Tobacco, huh? Real tobacco!
The CAPITAN hands over some papers with the Falangist
letterhead.
CAPITAN
And the ration cards.
Mercedes is stunned by the quantity of food and supplies.
Vidal checks the padlock on the door.
VIDAL
Mercedes, the key
MERCEDES
Yes, sir.
Mercedes hands over the key from her large key ring.
VIDAL
(to Mercedes)
Is this the only copy?
MERCEDES
The only one.
Vidal locks the padlock. Yanks on it: nice and strong.
VIDAL
From now on, I'll carry it.
From outside, Serrano calls him.
SERRANO
Captain!!
Vidal hurries over to Serrano who hands him a pair of
binoculars and points to something on the horizon
SERRANO
Captain, perhaps it's nothing.
Through the binoculars, Vidal sees a plume of SMOKE on the
horizon.
VIDAL
It's them.
EXT. FOREST DAY
Garcés, Vidal and a few of his men ride through the forest
on horseback.
OFELIA (V.O.)
When the forest was young, a fig tree
took root and grew to colossal size.
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EXT. WOODS DAY
Ofelia walks away from the mill and into the woods.
OFELIA (V.O.)
When the forest was young, it was home to
creatures who were full of magic and
wonder...
EXT. WOODS DAY
Vidal and his men ride through the forest.
OFELIA (V.O.)
At the heart of this forest stood a
colossal fig tree. The Forest Folk slept
in its shadow.
EXT. EDGE OF THE FOREST DAY
OFELIA (V.O.)
But now, the tree is dying. Its branches
are dry, its trunk old and twisted.
Ofelia finds herself under a huge FIG TREE that has twisted
into an arch reaching to a nearby crag.
OFELIA (V.O.)
A monstrous toad has settled in its roots
and won't let the tree thrive.
Ofelia opens her leather bag. Inside there are five large
chestnuts.
OFELIA (V.O.)
You must put the three magic rocks in its
mouth and retrieve a magic key from its
insides. Only then will the fig tree
flourish again.
The tree roots are partly exposed. The tree itself is
surrounded by a large mud puddle.
Ofelia decides to take off her fancy silk dress. She
carefully hangs everything including her hair ribbon on
the tree branches. Finally she's down to only a simple
cotton slip and her shoes.
As she enters
The wind picks up and moves her hanging dress. Then, a
sudden gust sends the hair ribbon flying.
Genres:
Fantasy, Drama Tone:
"Mysterious"
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10 -
Ofelia Completes Her Third Task - Overall Grade:
8.0
INT. GALLERY UNDER FIG TREE ROOTS DAY
Ofelia crawls slowly; the gaps between the roots are narrow
and claustrophobic.
A few big, black pill bugs are nestled in the mud.
Ofelia keeps going.
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INT. CAMPSITE IN THE MIDDLE OF THE FOREST DAY
Vidal and his men probe a forest cave. Inside, they find the
remains of a campfire. Vidal removes a glove and touches the
embers.
VIDAL
Less than twenty minutes, they left in a
hurry.
He finds the remains of food and drink.
VIDAL
A dozen men, at most...
In the dirt, he discovers the remains of the package the
doctor gave to Mercedes.
Inside he finds empty antibiotics containers.
VIDAL
Antibiotics...
Garcés comes upon a halfburnt lottery ticket.
GARCÉS
(showing him the lottery ticket)
Shit They forgot this lottery ticket.
Vidal motions for silence.
VIDAL
They're here. Those bastards are here and
they are watching us.
He stands in rapt silence. The trees sway gently. He hefts
the empty package like a trophy.
VIDAL
You left this behind! And the lottery
ticket! Come back and get it!! This could
be your lucky day !
Silence.
Then, they mount up and ride off.
Invisible under the trees, six GUERRILLAS are indeed
watching. Among them is PEDRO, a tall and serious young man.
In a flash, they all disappear into the underbrush.
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INT. GALLERY UNDER FIG TREE ROOTS DAY
Ofelia's progress is slow. Water oozes from the surrounding
roots and mud.
Bugs crawl on her arms.
She hears a sudden, soggy movement up ahead. She takes out
the five chestnuts which are so large they barely fit in
her hands and works her way toward the noise.
Soon, she comes face to face with
an immense TOAD, as big as a boar. His golden eyes blink;
his cheeks puff rhythmically in and out.
OFELIA
Hi
The Toad's long tongue flicks out, trapping a couple of
beetles and pulling them back into his mouth. Their
chitinous shells crunch noisily in its slimy jaws.
Ofelia shudders and tries to stand up. As she speaks, a
large red pill bug clings to her cheek.
OFELIA
I am I'm princess Moanna and I'm not
afraid of you
The Toad observes her, unmoved.
OFELIA
Aren't you ashamed? Living down here,
eating all the pill bugs and getting fat
while the tree dies!
FWAPPPP!!!! The Toad sends out its soft pink tongue, which
flattens against her face, then slides off, taking the pill
bug and leaving a gelatinous goo.
Three of the chestnuts roll to the ground. Ofelia spits in
disgust.
The Toad hunkers down, shaking violently as it croaks.
Ofelia backpedals, frightened. The Toad resumes its resting
position.
Ofelia scoops up the chestnuts. Two fall back into the mud.
She kneels to get them and
deftly palms a juicy, fat pill bug. It curls itself into a
tight ball. She keeps it in the same hand as the chestnuts.
The Toad croaks again, shoots out its tongue, which wraps
around her wrist. She stays calm. When the tongue retracts,
covering her hand with viscous spittle, the pill bug is
gone.
And so are the chestnuts.
The Toad croaks violently and suddenly burps up a gigantic
pearly bubble, which floats in the air, bathed in blood and
saliva.
And with this, the Toad shrivels away, like a serpent
shedding its skin.
Ofelia picks up the warty, empty skin and looks at the
bubble.
In its center: a GOLD KEY.
Ofelia plunges her hands into the bubble to grab it.
EXT. EDGE OF THE FOREST TWILIGHT
Ofelia emerges from under the tree with the golden key in
hand. She's filthy, sweaty and exhausted.
She nears the place where she left her dress
but it's not there!
After a brief search, she finds her hair ribbon. Covered in
mud.
A few meters away, the dress covered in wet, mossy mud.
It starts to rain.
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EXT. MILL DUSK
A pair of BENTLEYS sweeps into the driveway. Elegant dinner
guests get out of the cars: the MAYOR, his WIFE, and a
parish PRIEST.
Vidal stands at the front door to greet them. He's in his
formal uniform.
Carmen, in a velvet maternity dress and in her wheelchair,
wrings her hands in anguish. The dining room is looking its
best, with sparkling crystal and china at each place
setting.
CARMEN
(to Mercedes)
Have you checked in her room?? And the
garden??
MERCEDES
Yes, madam.
The VOICES of the dinner guests get louder. As Vidal enters
VIDAL
May I introduce you to my wife, Carmen.
Carmen manages a wan smile of greeting. The Mayor's wife
smiles back
MAYOR'S WIFE
Enchanted.
MERCEDES
Pleasure to meet you.
INT. DINING ROOM NIGHT
A ration card with the Falangist stamps on it. The Mayor
examines it.
VIDAL
From now on one ration card peer family.
Seated around the table are: the doctor and his WIFE, the mayor and his
wife, Garcés, Serrano, Carmen, the Guardia Civil Capitan, and the Priest.
Carmen is stonyfaced in her distraction.
MAYOR
One?? Captain, I'm not sure it'll be
enough.
PRIEST
If people are careful, it should be
plenty.
He eats more potatoes.
VIDAL
What we can't allow is for anyone to send
food to the guerillas in the mountains.
They're losing ground and one of them
is wounded.
DOCTOR
Excuse me, Captain, how can you be so
sure?
VIDAL
We almost got them today. They had this.
Vidal pulls out one of the antibiotic vials.
VIDAL
Antibiotics.
Mercedes briefly catches the Doctor's eye.
PRIEST
God has already saved their souls. What
happens to their bodies, well, it hardly
matters to Him.
MAYOR
We’ll help you in any way we can,
Captain.
We know you’re not here by choice
Vidal pauses and locks eyes with him.
VIDAL
You're wrong about that.
The guests grow silent.
VIDAL
I choose to be here because I want my son
to be born in a clean, new Spain.
Because these people have the idea that
we're all alike. But there's a big
difference: The war is over and we won.
And if we need to kill each of those
motherfuckers to agree on it, then we’ll
kill them all. And that’s that.
He raises his glass and toasts.
VIDAL
We're all here by choice.
All the guests raise their glasses.
ALL
By choice.
Mercedes quickly leaves the dining room.
INT. KITCHEN LATER
The kitchen door opens and Mercedes enters, trembling. On
the verge of tears, she grabs a lantern and readies to
leave.
MERCEDES
Put the coffee on. I'm going for more
wood.
She leaves the kitchen.
EXT. MILL BACK NIGHT
The mill receding in the distance, Mercedes hurries uphill.
She pauses next to a large wood pile and sadly gazes at the
forest.
Using her hand to shield the lantern's light she signals the
woods one, two, three times. Then she turns around
She sees
MERCEDES
Ofelia
Shivering, covered in mud, Ofelia climbs downhill and into
Mercedes’s arms.
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Genres:
drama, fantasy Tone:
"somber"
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12 -
Dinner with the Captain - Overall Grade:
9.0
INT. DINING ROOM NIGHT
Everyone eats with relish, impeccably attended by the
kitchen staff.
MAYOR'S WIFE
And How did you and the Captain meet?
Vidal seems uncomfortable but Carmen gently touches his
hand.
CARMEN
Ofelia's father was a tailor he used to
make the Captain’s uniforms
MAYOR'S WIFE
I see
CARMEN
and after he died, I went to work at the
shop. A little more than a year ago, the
Captain and I met again...
Vidal moves his hand away from Carmen's.
MAYOR'S WIFE
Curious, isn't it? Finding each other
after such a long time.
DOCTOR'S WIFE
Curious indeed very curious...
VIDAL
Please, forgive my wife. She hasn't been
exposed to the world. She thinks these
silly stories are interesting to others.
Carmen grows silent. Ashamed.
Mercedes discreetly comes over to Carmen and speaks to her.
Carmen pushes back from the table.
CARMEN
Please, excuse me.
All the men get up as Carmen leaves the dining room. The
Guardia Civil Capitan smiles at Vidal.
CAPITAN
Have I told you that I was acquainted
with your father, Captain?
Vidal can't suppress a brief grimace.
VIDAL
No I had no idea.
CAPITAN
In Morocco. I met him only briefly, but
he left a great impression.
Vidal chews his food nervously.
VIDAL
An excellent soldier.
CAPITAN
The men in his battalion said that when
General Vidal died on the battlefield, he
smashed his watch on a rock so that his
son would know the exact hour and minute
of his death.
So he would know how a brave man dies.
All eyes turn to Vidal.
CAPITAN
Nonsense. He didn't own a watch.
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INT. UPPER BEDROOM / BATHROOM MOMENTS LATER
Ofelia is floating on the warm water of the tub.
CARMEN
What you've done hurts me. When you get
out of the tub, you'll go to bed without
dinner.
Ofelia listens in silence, holding back.
CARMEN
Are you listening? Sometimes I think
you'll never learn to behave.
You've disappointed me, and your father,
too.
OFELIA
The Captain?
CARMEN
Yes Him more than me.
The faintest trace of satisfaction is visible on Ofelia's
face. Carmen leaves.
The Green Fairy flies in through the open window. Ofelia
greets it.
OFELIA
I've got the key. Take me to the
labyrinth.
EXT. LABYRINTH THE WELL NIGHT
With the book and the key in hand, Ofelia steps to the
center of the well. She is wearing a striped robe.
She examines the engravings on the monolith: the Faun,
embracing a girl and a baby.
FAUN
That's me and the girl is you.
From out of the shadows comes the Faun. The Green Fairy
hurries to him.
OFELIA
And the baby?
The Faun comes near Ofelia chewing a chunk of raw meat.
FAUN
I see that you got the key
The Green Fairy lands on his shoulder. He feeds her some meat.
FAUN
She's very glad you succeeded. She's
believed in you from the very start.
Keep the key. You'll be needing it. And
this also
Out of nowhere he produces a piece of white chalk.
FAUN
a piece of chalk
Ofelia takes the chalk.
FAUN
There are still two tasks left and the
moon is almost full. Be patient.
He caresses her face with his dirty hands, which are covered
with creeping bugs.
FAUN
We'll soon be strolling through the seven
circular gardens of your palace.
OFELIA
How do I know that what you say is true??
As he comes closer, the Faun's face again comes into the
light. A wicked grin is revealed
FAUN
Why would a poor little faun like me lie
to you?
Ofelia leaves the well.
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Genres:
drama, fantasy, war Tone:
"tense"
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13 -
Rations and Tragedy - Overall Grade:
10.0
EXT. MILL SUNRISE
VIDAL opens the warehouse.
A large CROWD OF PEOPLE lines up for rations.
The soldiers keep order as Vidal supervises the distribution
of wheat, cooking oil and tobacco.
VIDAL
Proceed.
SERRANO
Have your cards in hand and ready. Let's
go. Your name?
In a logbook, he makes note of every handout.
Mercedes, Conchita and Paz come out of the granary carrying
baskets of bread. Each piece is contained in a brown bag
with a legend printed. The Guardia Civil Capitan grabs a
piece and starts reciting the printed legend.
CAPITAN
This is our daily bread in Franco's
Spain! Which we keep safe in this mill.
The Reds lie when they say there's hunger
in Spain. Because in a united Spain,
there's not a single home without a warm
fire or without bread.
Mercedes looks toward the mountains.
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INT. NORTH BEDROOM DAWN
Ofelia wakes up next to her mother. She quietly slips out of
bed; her mother sleeps on. As Ofelia reaches the middle of
the room, her mother moans softly.
INT. BATHROOM NORTH BEDROOM DAWN
Ofelia opens the special book. Impatient, she starts turning
the pages
NOTHING.
She keeps flipping through, looking and looking. But each
page fades to white.
Ofelia looks at a beam of sunlight coming in from the small
bathroom window. She reaches out her hand and plays with it.
She looks down at a page in the book. A small red stain has
appeared. Blood.
It spreads rapidly, until it covers the whole page.
Frightened, Ofelia drops the book. The blood flows onto the
next page and covers it, too.
Ofelia notices a bloodstain on her nightgown.
She steps back. Opens the door.
CARMEN (V.O.)
(weak)
Ofelia...
INT. NORTH BEDROOM MORNING
Ofelia returns to her mother. Huge torrents of blood flow
from the bed onto the floor. Carmen extends a bloody hand
toward the girl.
CARMEN
(barely a whisper)
Ofelia... help me...
She gets out of bed; the lower half of her body is
completely bloody.
Ofelia runs to her. Carmen disappears from her arms.
EXT. MILL EARLY MORNING
Ofelia hurries from the building and goes to Vidal, who
supervises the food rationing.
OFELIA
Captain! Come quickly!
CAMERA pulls back to follow Vidal as he runs inside the
mill.
The day is just beginning.
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INT. MILL DAY
It’s raining. Vidal and the Doctor stand near the front
entrance:
DOCTOR
Your wife needs absolute bed rest. She'll
be sedated from now on. The girl should
sleep somewhere else. I'll stay here
until the birth.
VIDAL
Take care of her. Heal her. I don't care
what it costs or what you need, make her
well.
INT. ATTIC LATE AFTERNOON
Ofelia surveys the filthy attic and the dark, low ceiling,
full of holes.
Mercedes and Conchita make a bed with a large comforter and
several fluffy pillows.
Conchita leaves.
MERCEDES
Don't worry. Your mother will get better
soon, you'll see. Having a baby is
complicated.
Ofelia shakes her head.
OFELIA
Then I'll never have a one.
Mercedes sits by her side.
OFELIA
You are helping the men in the woods,
aren't you?
This comes out of the blue. Mercedes freezes and after a
long beat:
MERCEDES
Have you told anyone?
OFELIA
No, I haven't I don't want anything bad
happening to you.
MERCEDES
Or me to you
They embrace softly.
OFELIA
Do you know a lullaby?
MERCEDES
Only one, but I don't remember the words.
OFELIA
I don't care. I still want to hear it.
As she sings we
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Genres:
drama, war Tone:
"tense"
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14 -
Betrayal and Resistance - Overall Grade:
8.0
INT. KITCHEN NIGHT
Mercedes is alone in the kitchen. She carries a canvas bag.
There is a low flame burning on the charcoal range.
She kneels down and removes a tile from the floor: she has
hidden some food, a bottle of Orujo and some papers. She
transfers everything to the canvas bag. Someone comes into
the kitchen, startling her.
DOCTOR
Don’t be afraid it’s just me
Mercedes exhales, relieved.
MERCEDES
Are you ready?
DOCTOR
Yes.
MERCEDES
Well, let's go.
EXT. FOREST / RIVER NIGHT
Carrying the bag, Mercedes walks through the river with the
Doctor.
They stop in front of a large, halfcut tree.
DOCTOR
This is sheer madness. When that man
finds out about us, he'll kill us all.
Have you thought about that?
MERCEDES
Are you that afraid of him, Doctor?
After a long beat
DOCTOR
It's not fear, at least not for myself.
A noise. Then silence. The tree trunks sway and creak
softly. Something moves among the trees...
Mercedes takes a couple steps... and suddenly, someone is
there: it is Pedro, the young guerrilla. He hugs her.
MERCEDES
Pedro, Pedro My brother.
He kisses her on both cheeks. The Doctor looks around with
alarm as twenty more men appear from out of the shadows.
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INT. ATTIC NIGHT
Ofelia is lying in bed.
FAUN
You refused the task
Ofelia is startled: the Faun is perched on the foot rail of her
bed, like a big crow.
OFELIA
Nno my mother is sick.
FAUN
That's no excuse for negligence.
The Faun looks in a tattered bag, takes out a twisted root
of MANDRAKE.
FAUN
Look, this is a mandrake root. A plant
that dreamt of being human. Put it under
your mother's bed in a bowl of fresh
milk. Each morning give it two drops of
blood.
Ofelia, revolted, takes the root.
FAUN
Now, we have no time to waste. The full
moon will be upon us.
Let my pets guide you through
He hands her his basket. The Fairies chitterchatter inside
it.
FAUN
You're going to a very dangerous place,
so be careful.
The thing that slumbers there, it's not
human...
He hands her a small, dark hourglass.
FAUN
You will see a sumptuous banquet, but
don't eat or drink anything.
Your life depends on it.
EXT. CAVE NIGHT
Mercedes, Pedro and the Doctor arrive at a large cave mouth.
GUERILLA sentries allow them to pass.
INT. CAVE NIGHT
The walls are covered with soot.
A dozen more guerillas sit around an open fire in the middle
of the cave.
Mercedes opens up the canvas bag and starts handing out
letters, food, tobacco and newspapers.
MERCEDES
I've brought some Orujo, tobacco, cheese.
Some mail for "Trigo" and "Piloto.".
The men divide a newspaper among themselves. One page each.
The doctor approaches a group of wounded men. One of them,
FRENCHIE, is very weak. His leg is bandaged.
DOCTOR
Let«s see how that leg is doing, Frenchie
FRENCHIE
Well, how do you think it’s doing?? It's
fucked up
STUTTER
... North American, Bbbritish and Cc
canadian Tttroops disembbbarked on a
small beach in the North of FFfrance
STUTTER, a thin guy in his thirties, reads a ragged
newspaper.
TRIGO
Gimme that, you stammering piece of shit!
Musclebound TRIGO grabs the newspaper from Stutter.
TRIGO
More than 150,000 soldiers... under the
command of General Dwight D. Eisenhower
who said: "We will not accept anything
less than complete victory over Germany."
The Doctor cuts the bandages off Frenchie's leg. It looks
horrible.
FRENCHIE
Is it bad, doctor?
DOCTOR
Look, Frenchie There's no way to save
it.
Everyone goes quiet
Genres:
drama, war Tone:
"serious"
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15 -
Ofelia's Close Call - Overall Grade:
8.0
INT. CAVE LATER
The Doctor readies a stainless steel bone saw.
DOCTOR
I'll try to do it in as few cuts as I
can.
The men give Frenchie the bottle. He gulps down half of it.
FRENCHIE
(stoically)
Wait a second, doctor, just a second.
Frenchie looks longingly at his leg. One last time Then, he
takes hold of Trigo and Rubio's arms. Mercedes and Pedro put
all their weight on the injured limb.
The Doctor touches his saw to the leg
and cuts.
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INT. ATTIC SUNRISE
Ofelia takes the book out from under her bed. Opening it,
she sees herself illustrated in a room with a lavish table
full of food. In the wall are three niches. And at the far
end of the table, a pale human figure.
OFELIA (V.O.)
Use the chalk to trace a door anywhere in
your room. Open it and start the
hourglass let yourself be guided by the
Fairies
Ofelia draws the outline of a door on the wall... and then
opens it onto a long hallway. Ofelia goes through, wearing
the wicker basket around her neck.
OFELIA
Don't eat or drink anything and come back
before the last grain of sand falls
through...
INT. HALLWAY LEADING TO DINING HALL SUNRISE
The girl walks down a corridor with a low ceiling and a
multitude of arches. Each column represents a tree with
fanning branches. An elaborate mosaic pattern spreads over
the floor; the ceiling fresco depicts the lunar cycle.
INT. BANQUET HALL SAME
In the next room, a large, wooden table overflows with a
cornucopia of cakes, meat, fish, liquor, exotic fruits...
Light and warmth pour forth from a roaring fireplace.
A PALE MAN with a gaunt, featureless face and skeletal body
sits silently at the far end of the table.
He's ominously still, his head hanging at an odd angle. In
front of him, a small metallic plate displays two human
eyeballs.
It's very hot: beads of sweat roll down Ofelia's face. Her
hungry stomach growls.
She spots the three niches.
She takes out her golden key and considers the doors. Each
one clad in smooth gold, with identical locks.
The wicker basket starts to shake furiously. Ofelia opens
it. The Fairies fly out.
They buzz around the three niches, like flies around honey.
They fan their wings repeatedly, vibrating, communicating,
sniffing the gold doors.
Stepping back to let the Fairies investigate, Ofelia knocks
over a platter of green grapes.
She picks them up and puts them back on the table. One of
the grapes remains on the floor.
The Green Fairy stops in front of the door in the middle,
announcing its decision.
Ofelia goes to the door and puts the key in the lock.
OFELIA
No It's this one
she goes to the adjoining door, sticks the key in the lock
and turns it. CLACK.
She opens the door and reaches through the doorway to take
whatever is there.
Her hand nears a package, about 16 centimeters long, wrapped
in a dirty rag.
Ofelia looks around: nothing has happened. All is calm. The
Pale Man is immobile.
Ofelia readies to exit, but then she spots a plate full of
ripe grapes: so many of them!!
She looks back at the eerie, sitting figure: immobile and
seemingly lifeless. The Fairies warn her repeatedly, trying
to prevent her from eating any grapes. But the girl sneakily
picks one up and eats it.
Unseen by her The Pale Man lifts his head and grabs the two
human eyeballs from the metallic plate in front of him.
He introduces the eyeballs into twin stigmatas in his palms
and uses his hands to look around, splaying his fingers like
excited peacock feathers as he discovers
Ofelia eating yet another grape.
The Pale Man jerks toward her, in spastic, disembodied
steps. He crouches like an animal ready to pounce.
Ofelia turns just in time. The Pale Man roars. The Fairies
fly at him and attack!
Flailing his arms, the monster turns over the table, dumping
all the food. Swatting and snapping, he eats two of the
Fairies. They HOWL as he bites down...
Ofelia runs, carrying the precious package. The Green Fairy
follows her.
The Pale Man comes after her.
INT. LONG HALLWAY
Ofelia gets to the end of the hallway. She pounds the blank
wall where moments ago there was a door.
INT. ATTIC
Ofelia's thumping is barely audible.
INT. HALLWAY LEADING TO DINING HALL
Ofelia sees the Pale Man's silhouette coming up the hallway.
Ofelia searches her pockets for the chalk. Finding it, she
stands on tiptoe and traces the outline of a door!
Ofelia pushes against it and opens
INT. ATTIC SUNRISE
A trapdoor in the attic floor.
INT. HALLWAY LEADING TO DINING HALL
Ofelia crawls out the new exit. Her legs dangle briefly.
The pale monster leaps at them, snarling. Ofelia pulls
herself up and out just in time. The Green Fairy follows shortly
thereafter.
INT. ATTIC SUNRISE
Ofelia slams the door behind her. The marks on the floor
disappear and it seals itself shut.
All the while, something directly below bumps violently,
almost bursting through the floor.
When all is calm, Ofelia sits on the bed, exhausted. The
Green Fairy flutters and chirps, excitedly.
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Genres:
fantasy, horror Tone:
"tense, eerie"
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16 -
The Doctor's Advice - Overall Grade:
7.0
EXT. RIVER SUNRISE
The Doctor, Mercedes and Pedro start down the mountain.
PEDRO
We'll soon have reinforcements from Jaca.
Fifty men or more. Then we'll go head to
head with Vidal.
DOCTOR
And then what ? You kill him, they'll
send another just like him. And
another...
LATER RIVER BED
The Doctor washes his bloody hands and his surgical
instruments in the stream that runs through the mountains.
DOCTOR
You're screwed, no guns, no roof over
your heads... You need food, medicine.
You should take care of Mercedes. If you
really loved her, you would cross the
border with her. This is a lost cause.
PEDRO
I'm staying here, Doctor. There’s no
choice.
He moves away, towards Mercedes, who awaits him nearby. She
hands him a copy of the warehouse KEY.
MERCEDES
Here’s the key but you can't come down
now. It's exactly what he wants
He kisses her on the cheek.
PEDRO
Leave it to me.
MERCEDES
I'm a coward.
PEDRO
No, you're not.
MERCEDES
Yes, I am a coward for living next to
that sonofabitch, making his bed, feeding
him...
What if the Doctor's right and we cannot
win?
Pedro looks at Mercedes, hugs her fiercely.
PEDRO
Well At least we'll make things harder
for that bastard.
A SONG starts up, full of good cheer.
INT. VIDAL'S STUDY BATHROOM SUNRISE
Once more, Vidal, shirtless, is shaving with his switchblade
while listening to music on the Victrola.
On the sink: his father's gold and silver watch.
Vidal looks at it and then studies himself in the mirror, as
if sizing up an old enemy. He places the steel blade on his
own reflection and
cuts swiftly.
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INT. UPPER BEDROOM DAY
The music drifts upstairs into the Upper bedroom.
Ofelia approaches her mother, who is asleep in bed, sweating
profusely. She caresses her face.
There is a breakfast tray on the night stand.
Ofelia empties a glass of milk into a bowl and pulls the
mandrake root out from under her clothing. She submerges it
in the milk, then slides the bowl under the bed.
She bites her finger until a small drop of blood appears. It
falls into the milk...
The mandrake twitches, sucking avidly at the pink liquid.
The root uncoils into the floor, spiralling around the legs
of the bedframe.
Ofelia hears FOOTSTEPS: somebody's coming into the bedroom.
Ofelia stays down: she can see a pair of shoes.
It is the Doctor. He checks Carmen's pulse and temperature.
DOCTOR
Captain Vidal!
Vidal paces nervously, nearby
DOCTOR
Her temperature is down...
VIDAL
But she still has a fever?
DOCTOR
Yes, but it's a good sign her body is
responding.
Vidal stares at the Doctor, not a trace of emotion in his
eyes.
DOCTOR
Listen to me. If you have to choose, save
the baby. That boy will bear my name and
my father's name, too.
Ofelia hears this from beneath the bed.
Suddenly an explosion shakes the room. Vidal looks outside,
then another explosion rattles the windows.
Bits of plaster drop down from the ceiling onto the ground
near Ofelia.
Cursing, Vidal rushes from the bedroom. The Doctor follows
EXT. GARDENS DAY
Vidal hurries out to the garden. The guards have come out of
their tents and look at
a colossal column of smoke and fire in the distance.
Another explosion shakes the ground.
INT. NORTH BEDROOM CONTINUOUS
Ofelia comes out from beneath the bed. Tentatively, she nears
her mother's belly.
OFELIA
Brother, brother, if you can hear me...
She leans her head gently on it.
OFELIA
...things out here aren't too good. And
soon you'll have to come out. Mom isn't
doing well.
Unexpectedly, the girl tears up.
OFELIA
I'm asking you for one thing, just one:
don't hurt her.
She's very pretty, you'll see. Even
though she's sad some of the time. You'll
see, when she smiles you'll love her.
So if you do what I say, I'll make you a
Prince in my kingdom...
I promise you a Prince...
Genres:
drama, fantasy Tone:
"tense"
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17 -
Ambush and Captive - Overall Grade:
9.0
EXT. TRAIN TRACKS IN COUNTRYSIDE DAY
Something has blown a large crater into the rural railroad
track. Tipped into it is the smoking ruin of a locomotive.
Vidal inspects a couple of charred BODIES by the wreckage.
ENGINEER
I sounded the whistle but they wouldn't
move. I tried to stop, but it was too
late
The long freight train has derailed in the middle of
nowhere. Dozens of GUARDIAS CIVIL patrol the disaster.
The engineer and the FIREMAN walk among the burned freight
cars with Vidal and his men. Some GUARDIAS CIVIL ride up and
dismount.
VIDAL
What did they steal from inside the
freight cars?
FIREMAN
Nothing They didn't open a single one.
VIDAL
What the hell are you talking about?
FIREMAN
This whole mess and they didn't open any
of the cars. They didn't take anything.
VIDAL
Nothing, are you sure?
FIREMAN
Nothing, who the hell knows that they
wanted other than to make us waste our
time.
And, just as Vidal realizes he's been tricked. The sound of
DISTANT GUNFIRE reaches his ears.
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EXT. MILL DAY
Rain is falling as Vidal's Bentley roars to a stop in front
of the mill.
A gunfight is raging. Staying low, the Captain runs over to
Garcés. There are several cadavers strewn on the ground.
Guards have taken cover among the trees. Some bloody,
wounded soldiers cower on the ground.
Garcés is bleeding from a wound on his forehead.
GARCÉS
(pointing)
Captain they came out of nowhere They
have grenades...
Vidal sees the open bodega. It has been thoroughly looted:
jugs and empty crates are scattered everywhere.
He takes special note of
the open lock, hanging from the door.
Serrano hurries up to him.
SERRANO
One group stayed behind up on the cliff
with rifles... We've surrounded them
EXT. DEEP FOREST DAY
Holding his gun, Vidal advances on foot through the dripping
forest. He is accompanied by a squad of guards.
GUNSHOTS. A pair of GUERRILLAS jumps out from a pile of
boulders, blasting away. A guard falls down dead at Vidal's
feet, three bullets in his chest.
Vidal, Serrano and Garcés take cover behind a craggy
outcropping. Bullets explode onto the stone.
Excited, Vidal glances at his Father's watch and smiles.
VIDAL
C’mon, Serrano, this is the only decent
way to die.
He leaps out, firing. Two bullets whiz by his head and bury
themselves in a tree.
Vidal keeps shooting, wounding two of the guerrillas. Garcés
follows, also firing.
Vidal and Garcés get to
the boulders: kneeling there is a YOUNG GUERRILLA, panting,
torn to pieces by the gunfire.
VIDAL
Let me see Can you talk??
The Young Guerrilla gasps for air: a gaping wound on his
neck bleeds profusely.
VIDAL
Pity.
He empties his pistol into the Young Guerrilla. Garcés is
appalled. Vidal reloads and finishes off the second one with
a shot to the temple.
VIDAL
(to Serrano)
This is useless we need one alive Just
one
Garcés spots something nearby.
Lurking in the bushes is a WOUNDED MAN, gasping for air,
wounded in the leg.
His face remains hidden.
GARCÉS
Captain, this one’s still alive. He's got
a leg wound.
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INT. KITCHEN LATE AFTERNOON
Mercedes comes down the service stairs into the kitchen. She
runs to the window. All the kitchen maids are there.
MERCEDES
What's happened?
CONCHITA
They took one of them alive. And they're
taking him to the storeroom.
Mercedes darts out into the rain.
EXT. MILL LATE AFTERNOON
CONCHITA
Mercedes!
Mercedes heads toward the old bodega. She sees the guards
drag a man inside.
EXT. BODEGA LATE AFTERNOON
Mercedes stands, in the middle of the rain not knowing what
to do where to go where to run
Vidal approaches her.
VIDAL
Mercedes?
MERCEDES
II needed to get in the bodega
VIDAL
Not now, Mercedes.
A guard comes out. Mercedes can see
INT. BODEGA LATE AFTERNOON
the prisoner is Stutter.
Stutter and Mercedes look each other in the eye
There is a mixture of relief and pity in Mercedes' eyes.
A guard closes the door.
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Genres:
war, drama, action Tone:
"Tense"
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18 -
Vidal's Interrogation - Overall Grade:
9.0
INT. KITCHEN NIGHT
Mercedes takes the hidden knife from her apron and peels
vegetables. Rapidly and mechanically. The kitchen is
bustling with activity, but her mind is miles away.
She picks up a dinner tray.
INT. VESTIBULE MILL NIGHT
She carries the tray upstairs.
INT. NORTH BEDROOM NIGHT
She places the tray on the night stand. Carmen and Ofelia
play card games by the light of the oil lamp.
The Doctor readies Carmen daily doze of sleeping medication
into a glass of water for Carmen.
DOCTOR
This is half the dose: only one drop
As Ofelia comes to the bedside, a weak but conscious Carmen
pushes the medicine away.
CARMEN
I don't think I need it. I feel better.
DOCTOR
I don't understand it. But I’m glad.
Ofelia smiles.
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INT. BODEGA NIGHT
Vidal finishes rolling a cigarette. He's standing in front
of Stutter, who is tied to a concrete post.
VIDAL
Damn! This cigarette is good. Real good
tobacco
He offers him a puff.
STUTTER
Ffffuck you
Garcés enters and sets down a table and some chairs.
VIDAL
We catch one and he turns out to be a
stutterer. Fuck! We'll be here all night.
GARCÉS
As long as he talks, Captain
VIDAL
Garcés is right You better tell us
everything. Because, to make it happen, I
brought along a few tools. Nothing fancy
Things you pick up along the way.
He goes over to a tool box and takes out a hammer, some
needlenose pliers and a leatherworking blade.
VIDAL
At first I won't be able to trust you..
But when I use this one
He lifts the hammer.
VIDAL
you'll own up to a few things...
Next, he shows off the pliers.
VIDAL
When we get to this one, we'll have a
closer relationship, almost like
brothers. You'll see.
He picks up the blade.
VIDAL
And when we get to this one, I'll believe
everything you tell me.
Vidal picks up the hammer.
VIDAL
Now I'll make you a deal. If you can
count to three without stttuttering,
you can go.
He approaches the shivering man, who looks around as if in
search of an answer.
VIDAL
Don't look around, look at me. There's no
one above me.
Garcés If I say this asshole can leave
GARCÉS
Then he can leave, Captain
VIDAL
So, there count to three.
And Stutter tries sweating making a supreme effort
STUTTER
One
VIDAL
Good.
Again, Stutter struggles and manages a
STUTTER
Two.
VIDAL
One more and you will be free.
And he goes for it. But
STUTTER
Tttt
He looks up at Vidal, imploring.
VIDAL
Pity.
His arm is a blur as the hammer lands a terrible blow.
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Genres:
Drama, Thriller Tone:
"Dark"
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19 -
The Consequences of Breaking the Rules - Overall Grade:
8.0
INT. ATTIC NIGHT
Thunder, lightning, it's raining again. Ofelia is asleep in
her bed. A shadow passes over her body
FAUN
Your mother is much better, Your Highness
You must be relieved!!
Ofelia is startled awake. The Faun looms over her.
OFELIA
Yes, thank you. But things haven't turned
out so well.
FAUN
No??
She gives him the package. The Faun opens it: inside there
is a long, gold dagger. It's beautiful. The blade is
engraved with Celtic lettering and on the handle is the
figure of a satyr hugging a girl who holds a baby.
OFELIA
No. I had an accident.
FAUN
An accident??
She hands him the Fairy basket. Out of it comes the damaged
Green Fairy, who immediately perches atop his shoulder and
starts chattering and pointing at the girl.
FAUN
You broke the rules!
OFELIA
It was just two grapes! I thought no one
would notice
FAUN
We made a mistake!!
OFELIA
A mistake?
FAUN
You failed. You can never go back.
The moon will be full in three days.
Your spirit will stay forever among
humans.
You'll live among them, you'll get old
like them, you'll die like them and
your memory of us will fade.
And we'll vanish along with it!
The Faun backs into the darkest corner of the attic.
FAUN
You will never, ever see us again.
A flash of lightning briefly illuminates the corner: The
Faun is gone.
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EXT. BODEGA SUNRISE
Vidal calmly smokes a cigarette under an umbrella. Garcés
arrives with the Doctor.
VIDAL
Good day, Doctor. Sorry to wake you so
early, but I think we need some help.
The Doctor goes inside.
INT. BODEGA MILL SUNRISE
The Doctor comes into the bodega. Vidal stays at the door.
Stutter is curled up on the ground. His nose is flattened,
one eye is bloodshot and a head wound is bleeding. Flies
buzz around him.
DOCTOR
My God, what have you done to him?
VIDAL
Not much. But things are getting better.
Vidal surreptitiously removes a vial of antibiotics from the
Doctor's medical bag. He wraps it in a linen handkerchief.
VIDAL
I like having you near, Doctor. It has
its advantages.
He moves away along with Garcés.
VIDAL
Serrano, stay here
Once alone, the Doctor opens up his bag and takes out some
alcohol and gauze to clean the wounds.
STUTTER
I spoke. Not much bbbut I did
The Doctor sees the man's hand: it's a mess of broken bones
and lacerations.
DOCTOR
I'm sorry
He glances at Serrano, outside smoking a cigarette.
STUTTER
No... Kill me, kill me now.
The Doctor looks him in the eye, unsurprised.
INT. VIDAL'S STUDY DAWN
Vidal brings out the packet of medicine from the cave. He
takes out a vial of antibiotics and compares it with the one
from the Doctor's bag.
They are identical.
VIDAL
Son of a bitch
INT. BODEGA SUNRISE
The Doctor prepares an injection.
DOCTOR
(to Stutter, in a whisper)
It will be over soon.
Stutter gratefully squeezes his hand. After a brief
hesitation, the Doctor administers the injection.
The men stare at one another. Slowly, the life ebbs from
Stutter's eyes.
INT. MILL VESTIBULE SAME
Vidal briskly leaves his study. Hearing a door click shut
somewhere above he stops
VIDAL
(to Garcés)
Go check on Doctor Ferreiro. I'll be
there soon.
GARCÉS
Yes, Captain.
Vidal goes upstairs.
INT. NORTH BEDROOM
Ofelia is crawling under the bed
There she finds the mandrake root, bloated and immobile.
OFELIA
You're not moving are you ill?
Suddenly, Vidal yanks her out from under the bed.
BEDROOM CONTINUOUS
VIDAL
What the hell are you doing down there?
Vidal looks underneath the dust ruffle
Genres:
Fantasy, War Tone:
"Somber"
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20 -
Consequences of Magic - Overall Grade:
8.0
EXT. BODEGA DAY
Garcés walks to the bodega. Serrano snuffs out his
cigarette.
GARCÉS
Where is he? Call him out here
SERRANO
Who?
GARCÉS
Who do you think, you idiot? Ferreiro!
He pushes Serrano aside, enters the bodega
INT. BODEGA SAME
The Doctor holds the dying Stutter in his arms. Garcés sees
the syringe in his hands. He understands immediately.
INT. NORTH BEDROOM DAY
VIDAL drags out the mandrake root from under the bed. Its
foul smell makes him wince.
VIDAL (CONT'D)
What the hell is this?
He rips it off the milk plate.
OFELIA
No! Nooo!
Vidal is about to hit the girl when
CARMEN
Please, leave her be!
Vidal turns: Carmen has awakened. She motions for him to
stop.
VIDAL
Look what she hid under your bed?!
What do you think of this?
He hands Carmen the mandrake root. Ashenfaced and weak,
Carmen looks at the disgusting thing, trying to make sense
of it.
CARMEN
Ofelia, what is this doing under the bed?
OFELIA
(matter of fact)
It's a magic root the Faun gave me!
VIDAL
This is all because of that junk you let
her read. Look what you've done
CARMEN
Leave us alone, I'll speak to her,
Darling...
VIDAL
As you wish.
Vidal, furious, leaves the room.
OFELIA
The Faun told me you would get better
and you did!
CARMEN
You have to listen to your father. You
have to stop all this.
Ofelia hugs her mother with all her might.
OFELIA
No I want to leave this place! Please,
let's just go
CARMEN
Things are not that simple.
Carmen pries her off and looks her in the eye.
CARMEN
As you get older, you'll see that life
isn't like your fairy tales. The world is
a cruel place.
She moves away and near the open chimney. The firelight
cast shadows over her sweaty face.
CARMEN
And you'll learn that, even if it hurts.
She throws the root into the fire!!
OFELIA
Noooo!!
CARMEN
Ofelia!! Magic does not exist!
She grabs the girl by the shoulders, shaking her.
CARMEN
Not for you, me or anyone else!
Then a horrible, inhuman squeal. The dying shriek of the
mandrake!!! Ofelia watches in horror as the humanoid root
writhes and squeals in the chimney flames!!!
Carmen gasps and doubles over in pain, clutching her
stomach. Ofelia holds her as best as she can.
OFELIA
Help, help, help!
INT. BODEGA SAME
The Ddoctor and Vidal study each other.
VIDAL
Why did you do it?
DOCTOR
It was the only thing I could do.
VIDAL
No. You could have obeyed me?
DOCTOR
I could have. But I did not.
From somewhere in the house, someone CRIES OUT. They hear a
commotion among the servants. The Doctor stands up and
collects his bag.
VIDAL
But it would have been better for you
Vidal grips his arm, stopping him.
VIDAL
I don't understand Why didn't you obey
me??
A long beat. The Doctor knows that his response will seal
his fate.
DOCTOR
To obey without thinking just like that
Well that's something only people like
you can do Captain
Vidal takes out his gun and shoots the Doctor, who drops to
the ground. Vidal stands over him and finishes him off.
A stunned Garcés looks on. It begins to rain. Jacinta and
Conchita approach Vidal an urgent murmur.
VIDAL
Garcés!! Have the troop paramedic come to
my wife's room right away!!
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Genres:
drama, fantasy Tone:
"tense"
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21 -
Death and Betrayal - Overall Grade:
8.0
INT. UPSTAIRS HALLWAY MILL LATE AFTERNOON
A stream of servants hustles up and down the stairs with
steaming basins and clean towels. Some go in and out of the
bedroom. The SOUND of Carmen's screams.
Vidal and Ofelia wait impatiently outside the bedroom.
Beyond the halfopen door: chaos. Mercedes washes her bloody
hands in a wash basin.
Ofelia listens to her mother's cries.
Carmen's screams stop, replaced by a NEWBORN'S CRY. The
PARAMEDIC walks towards Vidal and whispers
PARAMEDIC
Your wife is dead
Vidal hurries into the room.
Ofelia is now alone in the corridor. There's no one around.
She hears the crying infant in her mother's bedroom.
A PRIEST's eulogy can be heard.
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EXT. CEMETERY ON A HILL LATE AFTERNOON
A beautiful afternoon: the sun is shining, the sky is clear.
Gathered around a grave are the Mayor, his wife, the Priest,
all THE SERVANTS FROM THE MILL, the guards and Vidal in a
civilian black dress suit, with his newborn son in his arms.
Ofelia weeps silently. Mercedes puts her hand on Ofelia's
shoulder.
They lower the coffin into the grave.
INT. NORTH BEDROOM DAY
Ofelia closes the trunk that held her mother's dresses. She
puts away her mother's makeup, letters and photographs.
Various medicines and the bottle of sleeping drops are on
the night stand. She puts everything into a small suitcase.
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INT. VIDAL'S STUDY NIGHT
Vidal wipes a record with his shirt sleeve. He places it on
the Victrola.
Mercedes lays the sleeping baby in a simple wooden cradle.
VIDAL
You knew the Doctor well, didn't you
Mercedes?
MERCEDES
We all knew him, sir. Everyone around
here.
VIDAL
The stutterer spoke of an informant here
inside the mill. Can you imagine that?
Right under my nose.
Vidal places the needle on the record.
VIDAL
Mercedes, please.
He points at an empty seat in front of his desk. The music
starts up.
VIDAL
What must you think of me, my dear young
woman? You must think I'm a monster.
MERCEDES
What someone like me thinks of you
hardly matters, Sir
He pours himself a glass of Orujo and pours one for her as
well.
VIDAL
Would you go to the bodega, Mercedes? And
bring me another bottle of liquor.
Please.
He glances at the bottle: a quarter of the liquor still
remains.
MERCEDES
Yes, sir right away.
VIDAL
Aren't you forgetting something?
MERCEDES
Sir?
VIDAL
The key. I have the only copy, don't I?
MERCEDES
Yyes.
VIDAL
You know? Something's bothering me. It's
not important, a tiny detail but the day
they broke into the storehouse, with all
those grenades and explosives, the lock
itself was never forced.
But as I said It's probably not
important.
He gives her the key and hovers dangerously.
VIDAL
Be very careful.
MERCEDES
Good night, sir.
Vidal watches her leave as he sips his liquor.
INT. KITCHEN NIGHT
The music from Vidal's study carries into the kitchen.
Mercedes pries up the loose floor tile and fills her canvas
bag with letters and groceries. She hears a noise, and
stops: nothing...
She hurriedly keeps packing.
INT. ATTIC NIGHT
Ofelia, sound asleep. A shadow looms over her. She wakes up
MERCEDES
Shh. Ofelia I'm leaving tonight.
OFELIA
Where are you going?
MERCEDES
I can't tell you.
Ofelia puts her arms around her neck.
OFELIA
Take me with you, please.
MERCEDES
I can't, my child
OFELIA
Take me with you.
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EXT. MILL NIGHT
Ofelia and Mercedes cautiously move away from the mill.
Mercedes uses an old umbrella to shelter the girl from the
rain.
Genres:
drama, fantasy Tone:
"somber"
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22 -
Betrayal and Escape - Overall Grade:
8.0
INT. RIVER BED NIGHT
The two women wade the shallow end of the river. Suddenly a
noise
Mercedes pauses, agitated.
MERCEDES
I heard something
She listens intently.
MERCEDES
Nothing It was nothing.
When she turns, she's surprised to discover
Vidal, Serrano and half a dozen men surrounding them. Vidal
nods at them, gentlemanly.
VIDAL
Mercedes
Then he gazes down at his stepdaughter.
VIDAL
Ofelia...
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INT. ATTIC NIGHT
Vidal pushes Ofelia into the attic.
VIDAL
How long have you known about her?? Uh??
He slaps the girl twice.
VIDAL
How you must have laughed at me, you
little bitch!!
He turns to his men, awaiting orders by the door.
VIDAL
Lock the door
Keep an eye on her and if anyone tries to
get in, kill her first.
He exits. Leaving the weeping girl alone in the enormous
attic.
INT. BODEGA DAY
Vidal takes the canvas bag from Mercedes. He opens it and
brings out a few meager items.
VIDAL
Dry meat Tobacco if you had asked for
it, I would have given it to you,
Mercedes
Then, a small packet of letters.
VIDAL
I want the names of anyone named in these
letters and I want them in front of me
first thing in the morning.
GARCÉS
Yes, Sir!
Garcés nods he finishes roping Mercedes to the exact same
wooden post where Stutter was tied.
VIDAL
You can leave, Garcés.
GARCÉS
You're sure, Captain?
VIDAL
For God's sake, she's just a woman.
Garcés leers and leaves.
MERCEDES
That's what you always thought. That's
why I was able to get away with it. I was
invisible to you.
Vidal rolls up his sleeves and unbuttons his shirt collar.
VIDAL
Damn. You found my weakness: arrogance.
How perceptive.
But we’re here to find your weak points.
Vidal busies himself with his tools: the hammer, pliers, etc.
VIDAL
It's very simple: you will talk... and
I have to know that everything you say is
the truth.
Straining against the ropes, Mercedes manages reach the
knife in her apron.
VIDAL
At first, I won't be able to trust
Suddenly WHACK!!!
Vidal’s body shudders
he puts his hand to his left shoulder blade. He looks at
his bloody fingers. He turns around and stumbles.
Mercedes holds the knife. Vidal reaches for his gun.
Mercedes stabs him again, this time deep in his upper arm.
As Vidal doubles over in pain, she sticks the knife in his
mouth.
MERCEDES
At first, I won't be able to trust
I'm not some old man ! Not a wounded
prisoner ! Sonofabitch sonofabitch
Don’t you dare touch the girl... You won't
be the first pig I've gutted !
With a brutal thrust from the inside out she slices open
his cheek. Vidal collapses, gurgling blood. Mercedes uses
the knife to cut the ropes as quick as she can.
Once free, Mercedes runs toward the door.
EXT. BODEGA NIGHT
Outside, no one has any idea of what has just happened.
Garcés, Serrano and other guards go about their business.
Garcés, in fact, is listening to a radio, tuned to the
NATIONAL LOTTERY results. He holds in his hand the
Guerrilla's abandoned ticket.
RADIO ANNOUNCER
... the winning numbers are...
Mercedes, surreptitious, moves away into the woods. Serrano
spots her at the last minute.
SERRANO
(to Garcés)
He let her go!
GARCÉS
Shh
He listens to the radio and finally, grunting crumples the
lottery ticket and moves towards Serrano.
GARCÉS
What the fuck are you talking about??
Serrano points at Mercedes, already halfway into the woods.
GARCÉS
Hey!!
She starts to run. Garcés pulls out his gun and readies it.
Vidal stumbles out of the bodega, bleeding and covering his
face with his right hand.
VIDAL
(to Garcés)
Get her!!!
Garcés is shocked an injured Vidal???
GARCÉS
Captain! What??
VIDAL
Bring her to me, Goddamit!!!
He uncovers his slashed face.
Garcés, startled runs to comply.
GARCÉS
(to all men)
Mount up!!!
Genres:
Drama, War Tone:
"Intense"
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23 -
Escape and Betrayal - Overall Grade:
8.0
EXT. DEEP FOREST NIGHT
Mercedes runs through the trees.
Suddenly a rumble makes her turn around: A group of TEN MEN
on horses surges into view.
She stumbles, losing ground.
Mercedes gets up, limping now
She gets to a clearing. Closing in, Garcés dismounts. Six
other riders surround her. Mercedes flashes her knife. The
horsemen tighten the circle around her.
GARCÉS
It'll be better if you come without
struggling. The Captain
She puts the blade to her own throat.
GARCÉS
Don't be foolish, sweetheart, if anyone
is going to kill you
He takes out his gun.
GARCÉS
It'll be me
He walks up to her. Suddenly, a gunshot hits him in the
chest, and then another and another. He falls to the ground,
dead.
A series of gunshots pick off the other horsemen.
The last three soldiers try to escape. One is killed by a
furious hail of bullets; Serrano and another one manage to
get away.
A bloodspattered Mercedes sees men emerging from the
forest: Pedro now leads FORTY ARMED GUERRILLAS.
Brother and sister embrace. The Guerillas finish off the
injured soldiers on the ground.
CUT TO:
INT. ATTIC NIGHT
Ofelia lies on the floor, motionless, defeated, when the
Green Fairy appears.
Ofelia sits up, and the Faun is there.
FAUN
I've decided to give you one last chance.
Mesmerized, Ofelia nods.
FAUN
You promise to listen, to do everything I
tell you? Without question?
Ofelia nods again.
FAUN
Very well, then: Pick up your brother and
bring him to the labyrinth as fast as
you can. Your Highness...
OFELIA
My brother?
FAUN
We need him.
OFELIA
Why
FAUN
(irritated)
No more questions.
OFELIA
The door's locked.
The Faun gives her piece of chalk.
FAUN
Then, create your own door.
CUT TO:
EXT. MILL NIGHTFALL
Serrano and the injured soldier return to the mill.
INT. VIDAL'S STUDY NIGHT
Vidal sews his split cheek and then wraps a bloodstained
bandage around it.
Ofelia steals in, past the Captain's desk.
In the cradle, the baby starts crying.
The baby's wails grow louder. The Captain turns around;
Ofelia hides but leaves her magic chalk behind.
Vidal goes to a small table and serves himself the last of
the Orujo. He's takes a sip. The bandage soaks up in blood
and alcohol. He grunts
and pours himself another one.
He's about to take a sip when he sees the chalk on his desk.
He instinctively readies his gun... Then
SERGEANT
Captain Captain Please come, quickly
VIDAL
Now what?
SERGEANT
Serrano is back. He's wounded.
VIDAL
Wounded?
He leaves the study. Ofelia comes out from hiding and looks
at the cradle, at the crying infant.
She takes out her mother's bottle of sleeping medicine and
empties it into Vidal's liquor.
EXT. MILL NIGHT
A dozen men gather around the WOUNDED GUARD.
VIDAL
What happened?? Where is Garcés??
Serrano shakes his head.
VIDAL
How many were there?
WOUNDED GUARD
I don't know, sir. The shots came from
all around us. Fifty at least
SERGEANT
None of the watch posts are responding,
Sir
VIDAL
How many men here in camp?
SERRANO
Twenty, maybe less, sir
Vidal does the math.
Genres:
drama, action Tone:
"tense"
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24 -
The Final Confrontation - Overall Grade:
9.0
INT. VIDAL'S STUDY NIGHT
Ofelia lifts her brother from the cradle.
OFELIA
We're leaving. Together. Don't be afraid.
Nothing is going to happen to you.
She wraps him in a blanket and tries to soothe him. Halfway
to the door, she hears footsteps and hides in a nook.
VIDAL
Put the remaining men on picket duty at
the tree line when another squad gets
back, have it report immediately to me.
Vidal comes back in, followed by the Sergeant.
VIDAL
Call for reinforcements.
SERGEANT
Yes, sir.
The Sergeant leaves, Vidal goes to his drink. But he stops
to pick up his gold and silver watch; he winds it and slips
it into his pocket.
Finally, he drinks his Orujo.
In the shadows, Ofelia takes a few steps towards the door.
Outside, the sound of SHOUTING and GUNFIRE. An explosion
illuminates the room, revealing Ofelia and the baby to
Vidal.
Vidal takes out his gun and takes a few faltering steps.
VIDAL
Put him down
The girl edges toward the study door. Vidal stumbles toward
her. Outside, a terrible explosion shatters the window and
shakes the whole house.
VIDAL
I'm warning you put him down
He trips on his desk, barely staying on his feet. Ofelia
runs away. Vidal tries to shake himself awake and goes after
her.
INT. MILL VESTIBULE NIGHT
The girl runs toward the kitchen. Another explosion lights
up the room, allowing Vidal to see her. He heads straight at
her.
EXT. BEHIND THE MILL NIGHT
Ofelia runs outside, holding her brother. She looks up. The
moon is FULL.
She runs toward the labyrinth.
Vidal staggers out behind her. In the background, more
explosions, flames and bursts of fire. A battle rages in the
forest.
Some bullets whiz past Vidal, but he keeps going.
CUT TO:
INT. STAIRWAY TO ATTIC
Mercedes walks up the attic stairs, followed by Pedro and a
few of his men.
INT. ATTIC NIGHT
She finds the attic empty. On a wall there is a child's
chalk drawing of a doorway.
CUT TO:
EXT. LABYRINTH NIGHT
Ofelia dashes into the labyrinth. Vidal is not far behind.
The sleeping medicine makes him stumble and falter. He
slumps against a wall. Ofelia gains on him.
But right away, she loses her way, but the leafy walls move
aside to guide her!
first one, then another
and yet another.
Vidal, meanwhile, bumps into obstacles at every turn. Head
spinning, he pauses.
INT. ROTUNDA IN CENTER OF LABYRINTH NIGHT
Reaching the rotunda, Ofelia sees the Faun waiting, halfway
up the stone staircase.
Ofelia calms the baby and starts down the stairs toward him.
FAUN
Quickly, Your Majesty, give him to me.
The full moon is almost here and we need
him to open the portal.
OFELIA
(seeing something)
What's that in your hand?
It's the golden dagger.
FAUN
The portal will only open if we shed the
blood of an innocent. A pin prick That's
all. Just a drop of blood
It's the last task!! Hurry!!
The basket shakes furiously. The Green Fairy escapes and
buzzes furiously around Ofelia.
FAUN
You promised to do it, so give me the
boy. I want to leave this place, I can't
wait any longer!
The Faun comes closer to the girl. His face radiates a
wicked hunger. She steps back, horrified.
OFELIA
No. My brother stays with me.
FAUN
You would give up your sacred rights for
this brat?
OFELIA
Yes, I would.
FAUN
You will give up your throne for him? He
who has caused you such misery, such
humiliation?
Vidal comes into the rotunda. He sees Ofelia, alone. He
can't see the Faun. With enormous effort, Vidal lifts his
gun.
OFELIA
I will.
FAUN
As you wish Your Highness
As he recedes into the darkness, Vidal shoots. The bullet
hits Ofelia in the stomach. She falls gently to the ground,
at the edge of the well, clutching her baby brother.
The book lands next to her.
Vidal picks up the infant. Ofelia reaches out for help,
tears in her eyes. Vidal ignores her, spits on the ground
and leaves.
CAMERA closes in on Ofelia's face. A ribbon of blood streams
from her nose.
INT. LABYRINTH NIGHT
Vidal runs down the last path of the labyrinth, leading to
the exit
Genres:
Drama, Fantasy, War Tone:
"Tense"
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25 -
The Princess Returns Home - Overall Grade:
9.0
EXT. LABYRINTH NIGHT
where Pedro and his men are waiting. In their midst:
Mercedes.
With a loud bang gunshots tear into Vidal. Vidal falls to
his knees, hoisting his howling son in the air.
VIDAL
My son
Mercedes walks forward. Vidal and Mercedes look at each
other.
VIDAL
Tell him about his father About the time
his father died
Mercedes takes the baby in her arms.
Vidal understands the situation. He takes out his pocket
watch and smashes it on the ground.
VIDAL
Tell him
MERCEDES
No
Pedro steps over to Vidal, gun in his hand.
MERCEDES
(to Vidal)
He won’t even know your name.
Mercedes' words are Vidal's last and most painful wound. His
face goes pale
and Pedro shoots him in the head.
Vidal collapses, dead.
INT. ROTUNDA IN CENTER OF LABYRINTH
Mercedes and Pedro reach the rotunda. Mercedes kneels next
to the dying girl. Crying, Mercedes hums a sweet Galician
lullaby.
Ofelia's pupils dilate.
Her blood runs down into the well, into the puddle at the
bottom. The moon's reflection shimmers.
In the book, an image takes shape: Ofelia at a royal court,
in front of a fabulous banquet.
KING/FATHER (O.S.)
Arise, my daughter.
INT. VAST HALL NIGHT
Ofelia stands. The labyrinth has disappeared.
This is an immense hall, in a dark, sumptuous castle. A
swarm of fairies floats around her head. Before her, on a
golden throne sits the KING OF THE UNDERWORLD.
At his side, an almost unrecognizable Carmen radiant and
gilded, she has transformed into a FAIRY QUEEN. Between
them, there is another throne, empty, waiting.
Ofelia looks at the King
OFELIA
(a whisper)
Father...
KING
It was your blood and not that of an
innocent that made you worthy of the
throne. It was the last task. The most
important one...
And out from behind a pillar comes out the Faun. Smiling,
surrounded by the Fairies.
FAUN
And you chose well, Your Highness...
He bows down.
QUEEN
So, come sit by your Father’s side, my
child? He’s been waiting so long.
The Green Fairy flies around Ofelia, celebrating her return.
Ofelia is cheered by a hundred voices.
Ofelia smiles
INT. LABYRINTH NIGHT
and finally dies. In her eye: one frozen tear. Mercedes
hugs the dead girl.
CAMERA dollies back. The moon is reflected at the bottom of
the pool. Buzzing in the night air is the Stick Insect.
NARRATOR
And it is said that the Princess went
back to her father's kingdom
And that she reigned with justice and a
kind heart for many centuries. And that
she was loved by all her subjects...
EXT. EDGE OF FOREST SUNRISE
The sunlight emanates gradually from the darkness and shines
on the silhouette of the fallen fig tree.
NARRATOR
And, like most of us, she left behind
small traces of her time on earth.
Visible only to those that know where to
look...
The fig tree is flowering again.
FADE TO BLACK.
Genres:
Fantasy, Drama Tone:
"Bittersweet, mystical"
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Explanation: Pan's Labyrinth is a visually stunning and thematically rich fantasy/drama screenplay that blends the real and the supernatural in a compelling manner. The story effectively explores the emotional journey of its protagonist, Ofelia, against the backdrop of the Spanish Civil War, and the ending provides a powerful and satisfying resolution to her character arc. The screenplay features strong character development, imaginative fantasy elements, and impactful dramatic moments, making it a compelling and unique work that would likely resonate with audiences.