Donnie Darko
Executive Summary
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Overview
Genres: Drama, Mystery, Sci-Fi, Thriller, Comedy, Fantasy, Psychological Thriller, Psychological, Romance, Science Fiction
Setting: The screenplay takes place in the late 1980s., The story is set in a suburban neighborhood and a high school.
Overview: Donnie Darko, a troubled teenager, is guided by Frank, a mysterious bunny rabbit, on a journey through time to save the world from destruction. Along the way, Donnie confronts his own mortality, grapples with the meaning of life, and discovers the power of love and sacrifice.
Themes: Time Travel and Fate, Teenage Angst and Loneliness, The Power of Love and Connection, The Importance of Education, The Dangers of Arrogance and Ignorance, The Strength of Family, The Complexity of Good and Evil
Conflict and Stakes: The primary conflicts in this story revolve around Donnie's struggle with his mental health, his encounters with Frank and the concept of time travel, and the impending end of the world. The stakes are high as Donnie's actions and choices have the potential to impact not only his own life but also the lives of those around him.
Overall Mood: The overall mood of the screenplay is dark, mysterious, and introspective.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Tense and confrontational as Donnie confronts Elizabeth about her political views.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The concept of time travel and the mysterious figure of Frank in a bunny suit.
- Plot Twist: The revelation of the true nature of Frank and the consequences of Donnie's actions.
- Distinctive Setting: The suburban neighborhood and high school provide a familiar backdrop for the story's surreal elements.
Comparable Scripts:
- Donnie Darko (2001 Film)
- Looper (2012 Film)
- The Butterfly Effect (2004 Film)
- Primer (2004 Film)
- Dark (2017 TV Series)
- The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (1979 Novel)
- Slaughterhouse-Five (1969 Novel)
- The Time Traveler's Wife (2003 Novel)
- The Truman Show (1998 Film)
- The Adjustment Bureau (2011 Film)
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a consistent writing style characterized by engaging dialogue, introspective moments, and a blend of humor and drama. The scenes showcase a focus on exploring complex relationships, psychological themes, and philosophical ideas.
Style Similarities:
- Richard Kelly
- Charlie Kaufman
- Richard Linklater
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: Overall, the screenplay for 'Donnie Darko' is a well-written and engaging narrative with a strong central conflict and compelling characters. While there are some areas where the dialogue and pacing could be improved, the film's unique tone, effective use of foreshadowing, and memorable characters make it a standout screenplay that deserves a 'Recommend' rating.
USP: This highly original and compelling script, "Donnie Darko," stands out from others in its genre with its distinctive elements and thought-provoking storytelling. It delves into themes of fate, free will, and the complexities of human nature through a captivating blend of mystery, philosophy, and humor. The unique character dynamics, innovative narrative techniques, and exploration of existential questions create a truly captivating cinematic experience. "Donnie Darko" offers a blend of genres, including sci-fi, coming-of-age, and psychological thriller, delivering a fresh and unforgettable story that will resonate with audiences long after the credits have rolled.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$5-10 million
Target Audience Demographics: Young adults and fans of psychological thrillers and science fiction.
Marketability: The screenplay offers a unique blend of psychological thriller and science fiction elements, which can attract a niche audience.
The screenplay explores thought-provoking themes and has the potential to generate critical acclaim and awards recognition.
The screenplay has a dedicated cult following and can appeal to fans of indie films and unconventional storytelling.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, depending on the film's critical reception and word-of-mouth buzz.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a mix of sharp and witty dialogue, realistic and naturalistic interactions, and concise and vivid narrative descriptions. The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a balance between humor and tension, exploring existential themes, and delving into the complexity of human emotions. The writer's voice adds depth to the screenplay by creating relatable and engaging characters, exploring philosophical conflicts, and creating a sense of mystery and intrigue.
Best representation: Scene 6 - Donnie and Grandma Death's Encounter. This scene could serve as the encapsulation of the writer's unique voice in the screenplay because it showcases their ability to balance humor and depth, as well as their skill in creating engaging and relatable characters.
Memorable Lines:
- Grandma Death: Every living creature... on this earth... dies alone. (Scene 7)
- Donnie: 28 days, 6 hours, 42 minutes, 12 seconds. (Scene 17)
- Donnie: I think about... 'Who's the Boss?' (Scene 11)
- Donnie: That's what's so illogical about the smurfs... what's the point of living if you don't have a dick? (Scene 12)
- Donnie: Well... the thing is, nobody remembers their infancy. And anyone who says they do is lying. We think that this would help develop memory earlier in life. (Scene 28)
Characters
Donnie Darko:A troubled teenager who experiences hallucinations and is guided by a mysterious figure named Frank.
Gretchen Ross:Donnie's love interest who becomes entangled in his journey.
Rose Darko:Donnie's mother who tries to understand and support her son.
Frank:A figure in a bunny suit who guides Donnie and warns him about the end of the world.
Ms. Pomeroy:Donnie's English teacher who challenges traditional teaching methods.
Dr. Thurman:Donnie's therapist who tries to help him navigate his hallucinations and mental health struggles.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Darko's Suburban Saturday | Humorous, Sarcastic, Tense | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 10 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
2 - Saturday Night Conflicts | Tense, Emotional, Confrontational | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
3 - Encounter with Frank | Tense, Confused, Nervous | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 0 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
4 - Jet Engine Crash | Tense, Mysterious, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
5 - Bus Stop Banter | Tense, Humorous | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
6 - Morning at Middlesex Ridge School | Humorous, Tense, Reflective | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
7 - Donnie and Grandma Death's Encounter | Tense, Thoughtful, Concerned, Mysterious | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
8 - Donnie's Journey Begins | Tense, Cryptic, Humorous | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
9 - School Chaos: Vandalism and Flooding | Tense, Humorous | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
10 - A Shared Burden | Serious, Intimate, Melancholic | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
11 - Therapy Session and Class Disruptions | Intense, Disturbing, Unsettling | 9 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
12 - Target Practice and Smurf Discussions | Humorous, Sarcastic, Cynical | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 2 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 2 | 5 | 7 | 3 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
13 - Unsettling Nightfall | Mysterious, Tense, Enigmatic | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
14 - October 13, 1988 | Serious, Humorous, Tense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
15 - Donnie Darko's Classroom Confrontations | Intense, Thoughtful, Evasive | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
16 - Uncomfortable Encounter | Humorous, Serious | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
17 - Donnie's Reflection | Serious, Mysterious, Introspective | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
18 - Unveiling Time Travel Secrets | Thoughtful, Mysterious, Intense | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
19 - Searching for Proof | Introspective, Serious, Melancholic | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
20 - Eerie Visions and a Path to Follow | Mysterious, Intense, Thoughtful | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
21 - The Spear and the Gun | Dark, Mysterious, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
22 - Threats and Reflections in the Woods | Tense, Intimate, Melancholic | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
23 - Carving Pumpkins | Dark, Intense, Mysterious | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
24 - Donnie's Diagnosis | Intense, Suspenseful, Disturbing | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
25 - Donnie's Descent into Madness | Paranoia, Psychotic, Tragic, Enamoured | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
26 - Donnie's Confrontation | Satirical, Confrontational, Humorous | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
27 - Donnie's Struggles and Confessions | Mysterious, Intense, Thought-provoking | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
28 - Family Dinner and Physics Class | Intense, Serious, Tense | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
29 - The Kiss and the Vision | Dark, Mysterious, Intense, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
30 - A Night of Performances and Arson | Intense, Mysterious, Dark | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
31 - A Night of Reflection and Paternal Encouragement | Dark, Intense, Mysterious | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 4 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
32 - Shocking Discovery | Horrified, Shocked, Speechless | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
33 - Time Travel and Destiny | Intense, Thought-provoking, Mysterious | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
34 - Conflict and Passion at Middlesex Ridge School | Intense, Emotional, Confrontational | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
35 - A Day of Mixed Emotions | Serious, Tense, Suspenseful | 8 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | |
36 - A Mother's Farewell | Tense, Emotional, Intense, Melancholic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 3 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
37 - The Fired Teacher | Intense, Melancholic, Thought-provoking | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
38 - Seeking Answers and Comfort | Intense, Suspenseful, Disturbing | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
39 - Donnie's Pre-Party Preparations | Tense, Dark, Mysterious, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
40 - A Chaotic Encounter | Tense, Suspenseful, Melancholic, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 5 | 10 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
41 - Encounter with Grandma Death | Intense, Dark, Suspenseful, Tragic | 10 | 9 | 10 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
42 - Donnie's Destiny Fulfilled | Dark, Mysterious, Emotional | 9 | 9 | 8 | 2 | 8 | 9 | 0 | 0 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 |
Scene 1 - Darko's Suburban Saturday
Donnie turns the corner and heads towards the garage.
We pan over to the Darko house... moving through the front
yard where Eddie Darko (forty-four) pulls the cord and his
gas-powered leaf-blower roars to life.
Elizabeth Darko (nineteen) comes out the front door. She
approaches her dad from behind. Eddie turns and aims the
leaf-blower at her face... blasting her with air.
EXT. DARKO DRIVEWAY - NEXT
Donnie parks his bike and goes inside.
EXT. DARKO BACKYARD / PATIO - NEXT
We pull back from Samantha Darko (ten) as she is jumping on
a trampoline and pan over to Rose Darko (forty-two) as she
sits at a table reading a paperback copy of Stephen King's
"IT". She glances over to the kitchen.
INT. KITCHEN - NEXT
Donnie walks into the kitchen. He then goes to the
refrigerator.
2.
Printed in magic marker on the refrigerator notepad is the
phrase:
WHERE IS DONNIE?
INT. FAMILY ROOM - EVENING (5 P.M.)
The opening theme of "Who's the Boss?" begins as we see Tony
Danza's blue van and the title card. We reveal Samantha,
sitting on the floor, singing softly to the theme song "Brand
New Life" performed by Larry Weiss.
We pan over to Donnie, sitting in the La-Z Boy.
INT. KITCHEN - EVENING (6 P.M.)
The Darko family has convened for dinner. They eat silently
for several moments.
ELIZABETH
I'm voting for Dukakis.
EDDIE
Perhaps when you have children of
your own that need braces, and you
can't afford them because half of
your husband's paycheck goes to the
federal government, you'll regret
that decision.
ELIZABETH
(amused bitterness)
I'm not gonna squeeze one out until
I'm thirty.
DONNIE
Will you still be working at Yarn
Barn? 'Cause that's a great place
to raise children.
ROSE
No, a year of partying is enough.
She'll be going to Harvard this fall.
ELIZABETH
I haven't been accepted yet, mother.
ROSE
(smiles)
If you think Michael Dukakis will
provide for this country prior to
the point when you decide to squeeze
one out, then I think you're
misinformed.
SAMANTHA
When can I squeeze one out?
3.
DONNIE
(to his sister)
Not until like... eighth grade.
ROSE
(to Donnie)
Excuse me?
ELIZABETH
Donnie? You're a dick.
DONNIE
Whoa, Elizabeth. A little hostile,
there. Maybe you should be the one
in therapy. Then Mom and Dad can
pay someone two hundred dollars an
hour to listen to all of your
thoughts... so we won't have to.
ELIZABETH
Maybe you'd like to tell Mom and Dad
why you stopped taking your
medication.
An awkward silence.
ROSE
(surprised)
You've stopped taking your medication?
SAMANTHA
When can I squeeze one out, Mom?
DONNIE
(glaring at Elizabeth)
You're such a fuck-ass.
ROSE
When did you stop taking your
medication?
ELIZABETH
(laughing)
Did you just call me a fuck-ass?
ROSE
That's enough.
ELIZABETH
(to Donnie)
You can suck a fuck.
DONNIE
Oh, please tell me, Elizabeth, how
exactly does one suck a fuck?
4.
ROSE
(disgusted)
We will not have this kind of language
at the dinner table.
They are all silent for a moment.
SAMANTHA
What's a fuck-ass?
Despite his brave efforts to hold back laughter, Eddie Darko
lets out a slight guffaw.
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Scene 2 - Saturday Night Conflicts
Elizabeth talks on the phone, getting ready for her Saturday
night. Rose knocks and then enters.
ELIZABETH
(into the phone)
No. I took a year off to be with
you.
(beat)
Of course I care. Don't get angry.
(covering the phone)
What?
ROSE
How did you know -
ELIZABETH
(cutting her off)
I didn't realise it was such a big
deal.
ROSE
It is a big deal.
ELIZABETH
I caught him flushing pills down the
toilet. He knows you check the
container.
INT. DONNIE'S ROOM - NEXT
Donnie lies on his bed, reading "Collected Short Stories" by
Graham Greene. His room is an organised wreck.
Rose enters and begins to pick things up of the floor.
DONNIE
Get out of my room.
Rose bitterly turns to leave, but stops at the door.
ROSE
I wish I knew where you went at night.
(MORE)
5.
ROSE (CONT'D)
(beat)
Did you toilet paper the Johnson's
house?
DONNIE
(still reading)
I stopped rolling houses in the sixth
grade, Mom.
(beat)
Get out of my room.
ROSE
You know... it would be nice to look
at you some time... and see my son.
I don't recognise this person today.
DONNIE
Then why don't you start taking the
goddamn pills?
Donnie leans over and turns off his lamp. Rose turns and
leaves her son alone in the dark, closing the door behind
her.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
Bitch.
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Scene 3 - Encounter with Frank
Rose stops in her tracks, hearing this. She then walks into
her bedroom and closes the door.
INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NEXT
Rose goes into bed with Eddie, who is reading a hardback
copy of Stephen King's "The Tommyknockers".
ROSE
Our son just called me a bitch.
EDDIE
(beat)
You're not a bitch.
INT. UPSTAIRS BATHROOM - NEXT
Donnie removes his pills from the medicine cabinet. We see
insert that reads: L. THURMAN M.D.
He looks at the bottle for a moment, and then takes three
pills and swallows them... staring at his reflection in the
mirror.
INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT (12 A.M.)
Eddie sits up in bed, unable to sleep.
6.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - NEXT
The TV pops on. Eddie drops into the La-Z Boy.
They are replaying a Bush/Dukakis debate. Eddie laughs.
INT. FOYER - NEXT
We pull back and pan over to a grandfather clock... as the
hand reaches midnight.
Title card:
OCTOBER 2 1988
INT. DONNIE'S ROOM - NIGHT (EARLY SUNDAY MORNING, 1 A.M.)
VOICE
(whisper)
Wake... up... Donnie.
Donnie jerks upright in his bed, awakened from a bad dream.
He looks over at his alarm clock: 12:50 a.m. His expression
is distant... confused.
INT. FOYER - NEXT
Donnie walks downstairs.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - NEXT
Donnie stares at Eddie, asleep in the La-Z Boy.
INT. KITCHEN - NEXT
Donnie walks into the kitchen, removes the magic marker from
the refrigerator message board.
INT. FOYER - NEXT
Donnie walks to the front and exits the house.
EXT. DARKO HOUSE, FRONT YARD - NEXT
Donnie walks down the front walk to the street.
EXT. NEIGHBOURHOOD STREET - NEXT
Donnie walks down the street.
EXT. SEVENTH HOLE - NIGHT (1:30 A.M.)
Donnie arrives next to the pin and stares off into the
distance.
7.
VOICE
Helluva night for a walk... huh,
Donnie?
Donnie stares off into the distance.
VOICE (CONT'D)
Tonight is very special, Donnie.
DONNIE
What?
VOICE
I've been watching you.
(beat)
Do you believe in God, Donnie?
Donnie doesn't answer. He holds his stomach, taking deep
breaths.
VOICE (CONT'D)
God loves his children, Donnie. God
loves you.
There... standing on the seventh hole is a six-foot-tall
figure dressed in a grotesque bunny suit.
Donnie stares at the Bunny nervously as a wave of nausea
overcomes him.
BUNNY
My name is Frank.
(beat)
I want you to follow me.
DONNIE
Why?
FRANK
I'm here to save you.
(beat)
The world is coming to an end, Donnie.
Donnie doesn't answer.
FRANK (CONT'D)
Look up in the sky, Donnie.
He looks up into the black night.
FRANK (CONT'D)
28 days... 6 hours... 42 minutes...
12 seconds. That is when the world
will end.
Donnie looks back at Frank. His expression is a vacant expanse
of confusion.
8.
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Scene 4 - Jet Engine Crash
Elizabeth comes through the front door, leans back against
it, closes her eyes.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - NIGHT
Eddie Darko sleeps reclined in the La-Z Boy. The final notes
of the Channel 12 National Anthem fade away to static.
From above... a thunderous crash. Plaster rains from the
ceiling ...Books fly off the bookshelf as the entire wall-
mount collapses to the floor.
Eddie jerks awake.
INT. FOYER - NEXT
Elizabeth falls back in horror as plaster rains down from
around the chandelier... debris falling in the dining-room
doorway.
EXT. SEVENTH HOLE - MORNING (SUNDAY MORNING, 10 A.M.)
Donnie is curled up, asleep on the green. A golf ball lands
on the green and rolls within inches of his head.
A golf cart filled with four older men arrives. Dr. Fisher
(forty-five) gets out first.
DR. FISHER
Donnie Darko?
(beat)
Son? What's going on here?
Jim Cunningham (forty), the man riding shotgun, gets out of
the cart and walks over.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Who is it, Don?
DR. FISHER
Eddie Darko's kid.
Donnie gets up and brushes himself off. On his arm he sees
something written in black magic marker.
Numbers.... 28:06:42:12.
Donnie stares at the numbers on his arm, confused.
DR. FISHER (CONT'D)
(to Jim, kissing his
ass)
Sorry about this, Jim, just a... a
kid from the neighbourhood.
(MORE)
9.
DR. FISHER (CONT'D)
(back to Donnie)
So let's stay off the greens at night,
OK?
Jim Cunningham stares at Donnie with a friendly grin.
DONNIE
Sorry, Dr. Fisher. It won't happen
again.
EXT. NEIGHBOURHOOD STREET / DARKO HOUSE - MORNING (11 A.M.)
Donnie walks down the street towards his house.
A fire engine. Two police cars. A news van... All parked in
front of his house.
There are dozens of neighbours in the street surrounding a
barricade. Donnie moves through the crowd where a Police
Officer is standing.
DONNIE
Hey, I live here!
POLICE OFFICER
Are you... Donnie Darko?
DONNIE
Yeah!
The Officer lets him through.
Near the cul-de-sac there is a large caterpillar crane lifting
something from inside the house. There are firemen roaming
around. Two Police Officers are speaking with Eddie and Rose.
Donnie looks over at the house.
A crane lifts a gigantic jet engine over from the house
towards a large flatbed truck. Firemen kick pieces of wood
and shingle from the roof.
He turns and sees his entire family standing there. Eddie is
holding Samantha.
SAMANTHA
It fell on your room.
EXT. CUL-DE-SAC - LATER ON
Two men in suits approach from a black sedan. A police officer
directs them to Rose. One of the men removes a badge from
his pocket and holds it up for Rose to see.
10.
MAN
Mrs. Darko, my name is Bob Garland
and this is David Coleman. We're
with the FAA. If you don't mind,
we'd like to speak with you and your
husband privately.
Elizabeth looks over at Donnie with a grin.
ELIZABETH
(whispering)
They don't know where it came from.
Donnie looks over in awe as the mammoth engine is now strapped
to the flatbed truck. A man in a silver firesuit sprays the
engine down with water.
EXT. CUL-DE-SAC - MOMENTS LATER
Eddie is signing some documents in front of Garland at a
table that has been set up. Another FAA guy is there.
FAA MAN
(pointing to the
document)
And then here as well.
Eddie signs off, and Garland takes the documents.
GARLAND
We've arranged for you to stay at a
hotel, get some sleep. We'll take
care of things here.
Eddie picks Samantha up into his arms. He stands with Rose
and Elizabeth... turning towards Donnie... who seems lost in
a trance.
EDDIE
Come on, Donnie... we're going to a
hotel.
INT. HOLIDAY INN, ROOM 614 - SUNDOWN (SUNDAY NIGHT, 5:30
P.M.)
Donnie lies in bed, watching television. Elizabeth is spread
out on the other bed. Samantha sits on the edge of Elizabeth's
bed, holding a stuffed unicorn named Ariel.
SAMANTHA
If it fell from a plane, then what
happened to the plane?
ELIZABETH
They don't know, Samantha.
11.
SAMANTHA
Is there any way that we can make
money from this? Couldn't we get on
television if we sue the airline?
INT. HOLIDAY INN, ROOM 615 - NEXT
Rose and Eddie lie awake in the dark.
ROSE
So let me get this straight. No
airline will claim ownership of the
engine. So we have to wait for the
FAA to decide who fixes my roof.
(beat)
Fuck that. We're taking the money
out of savings.
EDDIE
(quoting Rod Serling)
You are entering a new dimension of
sight and sound...
Rose begins to laugh.
INT. HOLIDAY INN, ROOM 614 - NEXT
SAMANTHA
Why do I have to sleep with Donnie?
He stinks.
DONNIE
When you fall asleep tonight, I'm
gonna fart in your face.
SAMANTHA
(walking to the door)
I'm telling Mom.
ELIZABETH
Samantha, don't go over there.
INT. HOLIDAY INN, ROOM 615 - LATER THAT NIGHT
EDDIE
Frankie Feedler.
ROSE
What?
EDDIE
Frankie Feedler. You remember him
from high school?
ROSE
(long beat)
He was a year ahead of us?
12.
EDDIE
He died, remember? On the way to the
prom.
(beat)
He was doomed.
Rose lies there silently.
EDDIE (CONT'D)
Jesus Christ. They could have said
the same thing about Donnie. Our
Donnie.
(beat)
But he dodged it. He dodged his
bullet, Rose.
Rose rolls over to embrace him.
EDDIE (CONT'D)
That's my boy.
Moments later, the door to the adjoining room opens. It is
Samantha.
SAMANTHA
Mom, Donnie said he's gonna fart in
my face.
Title card:
OCTOBER 3 1988
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Scene 5 - Bus Stop Banter
Rose drops Donnie and Samantha off at the corner.
ROSE
Ms. Farmer will pick you up from
recital. Bye, now.
She pulls of in the Taurus.
Already waiting at the bus stop is Joanie James (eleven).
Also Cherita Chen (fifteen).
SAMANTHA
Hi, Cherita.
CHERITA
Chut up.
Also there are Donnie's two best friends, Sean Smith (sixteen)
and Ronald Fisher (fifteen)
13.
RONALD
(raising his hands in
victory)
DARKO CHEATS DEATH! Man... you're
famous! I called you, like, a jillion
times last night!
DONNIE
We went to a hotel.
RONALD
My dad said he found you on the golf
course. Are you sleepwalking again?
DONNIE
I don't wanna talk about it.
SEAN
Now that you're famous, you gotta
have a smoke.
Sean hands Donnie a Marlboro Red and he takes it, looking
over at Samantha and Joanie.
DONNIE
What happens if you tell Mom and Dad
about this, Samantha?
SAMANTHA
You'll put Ariel in the garbage
disposal.
JOANIE
So... grody.
Sean, Ronald and Donnie light up. Ronald is the most amateur-
looking.
SEAN
Hey, Cherita... want a cigarette?
CHERITA
Chut up.
RONALD
(mimicking)
Chut up!
SEAN
Go back to China, bitch!
DONNIE
Leave her alone, man.
Cherita looks over at Donnie... her quiet devastation poorly
hidden.
14.
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Scene 6 - Morning at Middlesex Ridge School
The following montage is three long Steadicam shots in the
main school hallway and courtyard.
We follow Donnie and his friends as they pour out of the
back of the emergency exit of the school bus to 'Head Over
Heels' by Tears for Fears.
We pick up teachers Karen Pomeroy (twenty-seven) and Dr.
Kenneth Monnitoff (thirty) and Kitty Farmer (forty-two),
with Jim Cunningham, as they make their way through the
hallways.
Swarms of girls surround Donnie as he makes his way to his
locker. There is a huge smile on his face.
We reveal Gretchen Ross (fifteen)... we see Principal Cole
(thirty-eight) and then Samantha's dance team (Sparkle Motion)
practising their routine in the courtyard.
We follow Ms. Pomeroy into English class... then time-lapse
dissolve through the doorway...
INT. ENGLISH CLASS - DAY (8:30 A.M.)
Ms. Pomeroy has been reading from "The Destructors" by Graham
Greene.
MS. POMEROY
"There would be headlines in the
papers. Even the grown-up gangs who
ran the betting at the all-in
wrestling and the barrow-boys would
hear with respect how Old Misery's
house had been destroyed. It was as
though his plan had been with him
all his life, pondered through the
seasons, now in his fifteenth year
crystallised with the pain of
puberty."
Donnie sits in the front.
MS. POMEROY (CONT'D)
What is Graham Greene trying to
communicate in this passage? Why do
the children break into Old Misery's
house?
Joanie James raises her hand.
MS. POMEROY (CONT'D)
Joanie.
JOANIE
They wanted to rob him.
15.
MS. POMEROY
Joanie, if you had actually read the
short story... which, at a whopping
thirteen pages must have kept you up
all night, you would know that the
children find a great deal of money
hidden in a mattress. But they burn
it.
The class gives an "Awwww." Joanie blushes.
MS. POMEROY (CONT'D)
Donnie Darko, perhaps, given your
recent brush with mass destruction,
you can give us your opinion?
DONNIE
Well... they say it right when they
are ripping the place to shreds.
When they flood the house. That
like... destruction is a form of
creation. So the fact that they
burn the money is... ironic. They
just want to see what happens when
they tear the world apart.
(beat)
They want to change things.
Gretchen Ross stands at the doorway to the classroom.
MS. POMEROY
May we help you?
GRETCHEN
I just registered, and I think they
put me in the wrong English class.
Ms. Pomeroy studies her.
MS. POMEROY
You look like you belong here.
GRETCHEN
Umm, where do I sit?
Ms. Pomeroy thinks for a moment. There are several empty
chairs.
MS. POMEROY
Sit next to the boy you think is the
cutest. Girls, get up.
The whole class begins to freak out. The girls all get out
of their seats... eating this up. Ronald fixes his hair.
MS. POMEROY (CONT'D)
Quiet! Let her choose.
16.
Without hesitation, Gretchen scans the class for every guy.
As she gracefully takes her seat next to Donnie, they make
eye contact. Donnie grins ear to ear.
The class freaks out laughing.
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Scene 7 - Donnie and Grandma Death's Encounter
Eddie drives Donnie down Old Gun Road, a windy back-road
that goes towards the country.
EDDIE
So how was school today?
DONNIE
It was great. We had peanut-butter
sandwiches and apples and honey at
snacktime. And then during show-and-
tell, my stuffed walrus was a big
hit.
EDDIE
Good Lord.
(beat)
So the construction guys say it'll
take about a week to fix the roof.
Damn airline better not fuck us on
the shingle match.
DONNIE
Do they know yet?
EDDIE
Know what?
DONNIE
Where it came from?
EDDIE
No... apparently they can't tell us
what happened yet. Something about a
matching serial number that got
burned.
(beat)
But I had to sign a form saying I
wouldn't talk to anyone about it.
DONNIE
So we're not supposed to tell anybody
what nobody knows?
EDDIE
You tell Dr. Thurman whatever you
want.
Suddenly, Eddie slams on the brakes and the station wagon
comes to a sudden stop.
17.
EDDIE (CONT'D)
Oh, shit!
DONNIE
Grandma Death.
Standing in the road directly in front of the car is Roberta
Sparrow (101 years old, a.k.a. Grandma Death).
Grandma Death lives in a modest brick house that sits back
in a huge grassy field that overlooks the entire town. Her
mailbox sits on the edge of Old Gun Road.
EXT. OLD GUN ROAD - NEXT
Donnie gets out of the car and takes Grandma Death's hand,
walking her back towards her mailbox. He opens it for her.
DONNIE
No mail today.
(smiles)
Maybe tomorrow.
Grandma Death smiles back at him... and begins to walk slowly
back to her house. She then turns and takes Donnie's hands
into her frail grip.
GRANDMA DEATH
(speaking slowly)
Every living creature... on this
earth...
(beat)
...dies alone.
Donnie stands there silently for a moment, and then Grandma
Death turns back towards her house.
EXT. DR. THURMAN'S RANCH - SUNSET
We see a large colonial rancher in the distance.
INT. THERAPIST'S OFFICE - EVENING
Dr. Lilian Thurman (fifty-eight) is a beautiful older woman.
DR. THURMAN
Your mother said that you've been
skipping cycles of your medication.
DONNIE
I've been taking it. I just like to
make her feel guilty for all of this.
You know, abuse her. Psychologically.
DR. THURMAN
All of this... certainly isn't your
mother's fault, Donald.
18.
He is quiet for a moment.
DONNIE
So, I met a new friend.
DR. THURMAN
Would you like to talk about this
friend?
DONNIE
His name is Frank.
DR. THURMAN
Frank.
DONNIE
I think he saved my life.
DR. THURMAN
How so?
DONNIE
Don't you watch the news?
DR. THURMAN
I don't own a television.
DONNIE
A jet engine fell on my house...
landed on my bed. While I was talking
to Frank on the golf course.
Dr. Thurman looks at him for a long beat, analysing whether
or not he is telling her the truth.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
I'm not kidding.
Concerned, Dr. Thurman leans in closer.
DR. THURMAN
Frank... instructed you... to get
out of bed... just before this
happened.
DONNIE
He said to follow him.
DR. THURMAN
Follow him where?
DONNIE
Into the future.
(beat)
Then he said that the world was coming
to an end.
19.
He rubs his arm, where the numbers are still lightly drawn.
DR. THURMAN
Do you believe that the world is
coming to an end?
DONNIE
(long beat)
No.
(beat)
That's stupid.
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Scene 8 - Donnie's Journey Begins
In the empty school hallway... a gigantic tidal wave forms
in the distance and comes crashing towards us between the
lockers.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - NIGHT (EARLY TUESDAY MORNING, 2 A.M.)
Donnie lies on the couch... fast asleep. His eyes slowly
open.
There, standing in the corner of the room in the shadows is
Frank.
FRANK
Wake up, Donnie.
INT. MIDDLESEX RIDGE SCHOOL - NIGHT
In the dark school hallway, Donnie rounds the corner with a
flashlight, a can of spray paint, and an axe. Frank stands
in the same hallway where the tidal wave crashed.
INT. SCHOOL BASEMENT - NEXT
Donnie shines the flashlight through the basement. He
approaches some old piping.
Donnie puts the axe back over his shoulder and then lowers
it fiercely. The smashing of metal against metal echoes
through the huge room.
Title card:
OCTOBER 4 1988
EXT. BUS STOP - MORNING (7:45 A.M.)
The same group stands and waits for the bus. The guys smoke.
Cherita stands alone. Samantha is reading something to
Joanie.
20.
SAMANTHA
(reading)
"And then the prince was led into a
world of strange and beautiful magic."
JOANIE
Wow.
Donnie grabs the piece of paper from his sister.
DONNIE
(reading out loud)
"The Last Unicorn!" By Samantha Darko.
SAMANTHA
Donnie! Give it back!
He pushes her away.
SAMANTHA (CONT'D)
You're wrinkling it!
SEAN
Hey, it's 7:45. The bus shoulda been
here, like, twenty minutes ago.
RONALD
Maybe Martha Moo finally went nuts
and hijacked the bus.
SEAN
(excited)
You know, there's, like, this rule.
We get to go home at 7:55.
RONALD
There's no rule!
SEAN
Fuck yeah there is! If the bus doesn't
show up in thirty minutes, you're
supposed to go straight home.
DONNIE
Yeah... he's right. Because if we
keep waiting, some guy in a van might
pull up and try to molest us. And
then our parents could sue the school
board.
Everyone starts to get excited... looking down the road to
see if the bus is coming.
Sean's watch hits 7:55. No bus.
21.
SEAN
All right! 7:55. Everybody goes
home.
RONALD
Let's go to Donnie's house. His
parents are both at work.
The three guys begin walking.
DONNIE
Come on, Sam, you can call Joanie's
mom from home.
The two girls follow them. Cherita stands at the corner.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
Hey, Cherita... you should go home.
SEAN
Yeah, if you're still here and the
bus comes, we'll get in trouble.
CHERITA
Chut up.
SEAN
Hey, porky pig. I hope you get
molested!
Suddenly, Emily Bates (ten) and Susie Bates (eight) run up
to the bus stop.
EMILY
Hey! Our mom said that school is
cancelled today because it's flooded!
JOANIE
No... way.
A horrible expression appears on Donnie's face.
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Scene 9 - School Chaos: Vandalism and Flooding
A janitor named Leroy (fifty-five) stands at the end of the
hall with Principal Cole. Water rushes past their feet down
the steps.
LEROY
I got twelve classrooms full of water.
All coming from a busted water main.
PRINCIPAL COLE
What else?
22.
LEROY
What else? Shit, Principal Cole,
you ain't gonna believe what else.
EXT. BACK COURTYARD - MORNING
They stand before the bronze Middlesex mongrel. Spray-painted
on the concrete before it is the phrase: THEY MADE ME DO IT.
There are papers strewn everywhere. Embedded in the head of
the mongrel is an axe.
PRINCIPAL COLE
Christ. Is that an axe?
LEROY
Yep.
PRINCIPAL COLE
How did this happen?
LEROY
(beat)
I guess they made him do it.
Leroy can't help himself. He has to laugh.
PRINCIPAL COLE
You're fired.
Principal Cole walks off.
EXT. BUS STOP 2 - EARLY MORNING (8:15 A.M.)
Donnie, Sean, Ronald, Samantha and Joanie, Emily and Susie
walk from their bus stop.
RONALD
School's closed! Everybody go home!
EMILY
Nu-huh.
SAMANTHA
Yeah-huh. A cat burglar broke him
and trashed everything.
Susie talks with Emily. Joanie and Samantha listen in.
EMILY
Mom said that the boys' locker room
looked like a swimming pool... and
that they found faeces everywhere.
SUSIE
What are faeces?
23.
EMILY
Baby mice.
SUSIE
Aww.
JOANIE
Oh my God, that is so grody.
EXT. BUS STOP 3 - NEXT
Sean looks down to another bus stop down the street.
SEAN
School's cancelled!
A bunch of young kids scream out... jumping up and down.
EXT. BUS STOP 4 - NEXT
Donnie approaches another corner alone. Ricky Danforth
(seventeen) and Seth Devlin (eighteen) stand with Gretchen.
SETH
(smoking a cigarette)
Has anyone ever told you that you're
sexy?
RICKY
I like your boobs.
Gretchen looks at them with disgust.
Donnie walks into the group.
DONNIE
Hey...
GRETCHEN
Hey...
DONNIE
School's cancelled.
They look at one another, surprised.
GRETCHEN
(to Donnie)
Wanna walk me home?
DONNIE
Sure.
They quickly begin to walk off. Seth and Ricky look off at
them, furious.
24.
GRETCHEN
Don't look so freaked.
DONNIE
I'm not. But you should check your
backpack 'cause those guys like to
steal shit.
GRETCHEN
Fuck them.
Gretchen smiles at Donnie, and then turns back and gives
them the middle finger.
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Scene 10 - A Shared Burden
Donnie and Gretchen walk along the sidewalk together.
DONNIE
So... you just moved here?
GRETCHEN
Yeah. My parents got divorced. My
mom has a restraining order against
my stepdad.
(beat)
He has... emotional problems.
DONNIE
Oh, I... have those too.
(beat)
What kind of problems does your dad
have?
GRETCHEN
(long beat)
He stabbed my mom four times in the
chest.
Donnie is shocked.
DONNIE
Wow. Did he go to jail?
GRETCHEN
He fled. They still can't find him.
(beat)
My mom and I had to change our names
and stuff. I thought Gretchen sounded
kind of cool.
DONNIE
I'm sorry. I was in jail once.
(beat)
I accidentally burned down this house.
It was abandoned.
(MORE)
25.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
I got held back in school again.
Can't drive until I'm eighteen.
(babbling)
I think when I grow up I want to be
a painter. Or maybe a writer or
maybe both. Then I'll write a book
and draw the illustrations like a
comic book. You know, change things.
GRETCHEN
Donnie Darko is a cool name. Sounds
like a superhero.
DONNIE
What makes you think I'm not?
Gretchen smiles. She looks over at her house.
GRETCHEN
I should go. For physics. Monnitoff
says I have to write an essay on the
greatest invention ever to benefit
mankind.
DONNIE
That's easy. Antiseptics.
She gives him a look.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
I mean, the whole sanitation thing.
Joseph Lister... 1895. Before
antiseptics there was no sanitation,
especially in medicine.
GRETCHEN
You mean soap?
DONNIE
Don't knock soap. Without it, disease
would spread rapidly. If we ran out...
you and I would never live to see
the year 2000.
GRETCHEN
Wonder where we'll be then.
DONNIE
The best thing about soap is that
it's the only thing on earth that
can never get dirty. No matter what
crap you throw on it ...it always
rubs off. And there it is again...
perfect.
26.
GRETCHEN
Until it withers away.
She stares at him for a moment.
DONNIE
It's a good thing the school was
flooded today.
GRETCHEN
Why is that?
DONNIE
We never would have had this
conversation.
She smiles.
GRETCHEN
You're weird.
DONNIE
I'm sorry.
GRETCHEN
That was a compliment.
DONNIE
Will you go with me?
GRETCHEN
Where are we going?
DONNIE
No... I mean, will you GO with me?
That's like... what they call it
here. Going together.
GRETCHEN
(beat)
Sure.
She gets up and begins to walk up the hill.
DONNIE
Where are you going?
GRETCHEN
I'm going home.
Title card:
OCTOBER 6 1988
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Scene 11 - Therapy Session and Class Disruptions
Dr. Thurman sits next to Donnie. His eyes are closed.
27.
DR. THURMAN
And when I clap my hands twice, you
will wake up. Do you understand?
DONNIE
Yes.
DR. THURMAN
So, tell me about your day, Donald.
DONNIE
I met a girl.
DR. THURMAN
What is her name?
DONNIE
Gretchen. We're going together now.
DR. THURMAN
Do you think a lot about girls?
DONNIE
Yes.
DR. THURMAN
How are things going at school?
DONNIE
I think about girls a lot.
DR. THURMAN
I asked you about school.
DONNIE
I think about.. Fucking a lot during
school.
DR. THURMAN
What else do you think about during
school?
DONNIE
I think... about... "Who's the Boss?"
DR. THURMAN
Who is the boss?
DONNIE
I just turn the volume down and think
about fucking Alyssa Milano.
DR. THURMAN
What about your family, Donnie?
28.
DONNIE
No, I don't think about fucking my
family. That's sick!
DR. THURMAN
Donnie... I want to hear about your
friend Frank.
Donnie is now undoing his belt. He is no longer paying
attention.
Dr. Thurman quickly claps her hands. Donnie jolts awake...
disoriented.
INT. ENGLISH CLASS - DAY (FRIDAY, 8:30 A.M.)
Donnie sits with his eyes wide open, staring at something.
POLICE OFFICER
(out of shot)
Aaron Armitage... Cherita Chen.
Donnie's face has gone white.
PRINCIPAL COLE
Donald Darko.
We reveal on the blackboard the phrase, "They made me do
it", written over and over again.
We reveal two Police Officers standing next to Principal
Cole in the corner of the classroom.
Donnie gets up and walks over to the board and writes the
phrase.
He then sits down again without hesitation.
The Police Officer hesitates for a moment, lingering over
Donnie's penmanship. He then places a '?' next to Donnie's
name on the roster. Ms. Pomeroy makes eye-contact with him.
INT. HEALTH CLASS - AFTERNOON (FRIDAY, 1 P.M.)
We pull back from a television: a cloud formation blows across
the screen revealing a logo that reads: CUNNING VISIONS
PRODUCTIONS.
A series of interviews follows.. infomercial style.
LINDA CONNIE
And what I realised was that my entire
life I was a victim of my own FEAR.
I was FEEDING FEAR WITH FOOD... and
finally... I looked in the mirror.
Not just IN THE MIRROR.
(MORE)
29.
LINDA CONNIE (CONT'D)
I looked THROUGH the mirror. And in
that image I saw my EGO REFLECTION.
Donnie's health class is assembled in uniform rows in front
of a television cart. Ms. Farmer paces in front of them.
SHANDA RIESMAN
(with her arm around
her geeky son)
...and for two years I thought it
was NORMAL for a fifteen-year-old to
wet the bed.
Laughter from the students.
MS. FARMER
QUIET!
SHANDA RIESMAN
(choking up)
We tried everything. But the solution
was there... all along.
LARRY RIESMAN
(burst out emotionally)
I'm not AFRAID anymore!
A montage of "family" imagery follows.
NARRATOR
All across America... people have
come together to join hands. People
who believe that human life is too
important... too valuable to be
controlled by FEAR.
A middle-aged man walks out onto a country patio. It is Jim
Cunningham... the guy from the golf course.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Hello. My name is Jim Cunningham.
And welcome to "Controlling Fear".
The title CONTROLLING FEAR appears on the screen... followed
by PART ONE: ATTITUDINAL BELIEFS.
FRANK (V.O.)
Pay close attention, you could miss
something.
Donnie stares at the screen... at Jim Cunningham.
30.
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Scene 12 - Target Practice and Smurf Discussions
The ruins of a brick chimney sit in the middle of a field.
Donnie, Sean and Ronald have lined up several empty beer
bottles, cans and stuffed animals on the hearth.
They take turns blasting these targets with a BB gun.
Blam! A can falls over. Ronald hands the gun to Donnie. Sean
pulls out a bottle of Raspberry Night Train and takes a sip.
He hands the bottle to Ronald.
RONALD
What is this shit?
SEAN
Raspberry.
He takes a big sip... which results in a dry heave.
RONALD
Raspberry. That's good shit.
Donnie aims the crosshairs on Smurfette's head. He pulls the
trigger. Smurfette falls over.
RONALD (CONT'D)
Wicked.
SEAN
No more fuckin' for her.
RONALD
Smurfette doesn't fuck.
SEAN
Bullshit. Smurfette fucks all the
other smurfs. That's why Papa Smurf
made her, 'cause the other smurfs
were getting too horny.
RONALD
Not Vanity. He's a homo.
Blam! A bottle shatters.
SEAN
Then she fucks 'em all while Vanity
watches. And Papa Smurf films it.
Ronald takes another sip of Night Train... followed by another
dry heave. Blam! A bottle breaks.
DONNIE
First of all... Papa Smurf didn't
create Smurfette. Gargamel did.
(MORE)
31.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
She was sent in as Gargemel's evil
spy, with the intention of destroying
the smurf village. But the
overwhelming Goodness of the Smurf
Way of Life transformed her into the
Smurfette we all know and love. And
as for the whole gang-bang scenario...
it just couldn't happen. Smurfs are
asexual. They probably don't even
have reproductive organs down there
under those little white pants. The
only reason they exist is because of
magic spells and witchcraft... which
is all a bunch of bullshit if you
ask me.
(beat)
That's what's so illogical about the
smurfs... what's the point of living
if you don't have a dick?
Donnie aims the gun... pulls the trigger. Blam! A bottle
breaks.
RONALD
Dammit, Donnie! Why do you always
gotta get all smart on us!
Donnie takes the bottle of Night Train and takes a small
sip.
Their conversation is interrupted by the squealing of tyres.
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Scene 13 - Unsettling Nightfall
Down the hill, a Dodge minivan is stopped on Old Gun Road.
Grandma Death is once again in the middle of the street.
DONNIE
Grandma Death.
Ms. farmer leans her head out of the window.
MS. FARMER
Excuse me!
Grandma Death doesn't hear her. She wanders around in circles.
Furious, Ms. Farmer gets out of the car and walks over to
the old woman, walking her by the shoulders back to her
driveway.
MS. FARMER (CONT'D)
Please stay out of the road, Ms.
Sparrow. If this happens again, I'm
going to call social services.
32.
Ms. Farmer gets back behind the wheel and they drive off.
Grandma Death lurks around her mailbox.
RONALD
How old is Grandma Death?
DONNIE
A hundred and one, I think. Every
day she does the same thing. But
there's never any mail.
Grandma Death approaches the mailbox.
SEAN
Here we go... this could be it.
She opens it... then closes it. Walks away.
RONALD
Awwww. That sucks.
She approaches the box again...
SEAN
Wait a minute... we may still have
mail...
Opens it... closes it. Walks away.
RONALD
Noooo!
They continue to watch her, sipping liquor into the sunset,
as Grandma Death repeats this act like an ancient wind-up
doll.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - EVENING (FRIDAY, 7 P.M.)
Donnie lies on the couch watching television... where there
is a news story about the flooded school. Several construction
workers are packing up their things.
INT. UPSTAIRS BATHROOM - MOMENTS LATER (7:15 P.M.)
Looking nauseous, Donnie opens the medicine cabinet and
retrieves his pills. He takes four of them. Donnie takes a
drink of water, closing his eyes. He puts the pills back and
closes the cabinet.
In the mirror's reflection is Frank. Donnie jumps.
FRANK
You got away with it. Don't worry.
33.
Donnie reaches his hand out towards Frank and it presses
against an invisible wall, as if he were pressing his hand
against liquid glass.
DONNIE
How can you do that?
FRANK
I can do anything I want... and so
can you...
Donnie stares closely at Frank. He then removes his hands
and moves back away from him.
EXT. MIDDLESEX SCHOOL AUDITORIUM - EVENING (7:15 P.M.)
A sign reads: EMERGENCY PTA MEETING TONIGHT.
INT. AUDITORIUM - EVENING (7:15 P.M.)
Parents and teachers convene in front of the auditorium
entrance.
Kitty Farmer hands out Xeroxed images of something.
Eddie and Rose chit-chat with other concerned parents.
Ms. Pomeroy approaches Kitty Farmer.
MS. POMEROY
What are you trying to accomplish
here?
MS. FARMER
(indignant)
There was urine and faeces flooded
in my office.
INT. AUDITORIUM - LATER ON
The crowd settles... Principal Cole takes the stage.
PRINCIPAL COLE
In co-operation with the county
police, we have begun an active
investigation into the cause of the
flooding... and our suspects include
several of our own students.
Kitty Farmer stands up in her seat near the front row.
MS. FARMER
I want to know why this FILTH is
being taught to our children.
The crowd stirs.
34.
PRINCIPAL COLE
Kitty, I would appreciate... if you
could wait...
MS. FARMER
Mr. Cole... not only am I a TEACHER...
but I am also a PARENT of a Middlesex
child. Therefore, I am the ONLY
person here who transcends the parent-
teacher bridge.
PRINCIPAL COLE
Kitty...
MS. FARMER
The bottom line... Mr. Cole... is
that there is material being taught
to our children that is cause for
this destructive behaviour.
She stands up.
MS. FARMER (CONT'D)
I have in my hand Graham Greene's
"The Destructors". This short story
is part of my daughter's English
assignment. In this story, several
children destroy an elderly man's
house from inside out. They destroy
his house without motive, without
moral consequence. They destroy
private property ...and they get
away with it.
Ms. Pomeroy shakes her head bitterly.
MS. FARMER (CONT'D)
And how do they do this? They FLOOD
the house... by breaking through the
water main!
PRINCIPAL COLE
(trying to calm her)
This meeting of the PTA was called
to inform the parents of our ongoing
investigation...
MS. FARMER
(enraged)
I AM THE PTA! And I say that this
FILTH is directly related to this
vandalism.
Applause from the crowd.
35.
MS. FARMER (CONT'D)
I think this garbage should be
removed.
Several shouts of approval come from the crowd.
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Scene 14 - October 13, 1988
Donnie continues to converse with Frank.
DONNIE
Why did you make me flood the school?
FRANK
We just want to guide you in the
right direction.
DONNIE
Who is... we?
FRANK
You'll know soon enough.
DONNIE
(desperate)
Where did you come from?
FRANK
(beat)
Do you believe in time travel, Donnie?
A moment of silence.
SAMANTHA
Who are you talking to?
Donnie turns to see Samantha is standing in the doorway.
Frank is gone.
INT. AUDITORIUM - NIGHT
A heated debate among the parents is under way. Frustrated,
Rose stands up. Karen Pomeroy is furious.
ROSE
Excuse me... but what is the real
issue here? The PTA doesn't ban
books from school.
MS. FARMER
The PTA is here to acknowledge that
there is pornography in our school's
curriculum.
MS. POMEROY
(standing up)
My GOD... woman, are you drunk?
36.
MS. FARMER
Excuse me? You need to go back to
grad school.
ROSE
(to Kitty)
Do you even know who Graham Greene
is?
MS. FARMER
(to Rose)
I think we've all seen "Bonanza".
Ms. Pomeroy is disgusted. Rose and Eddie burst out laughing,
grab their coats, and leave.
EXT. WIZARD'S ARCADE - AFTERNOON (SATURDAY, 1 P.M.)
Donnie and Gretchen play a Sega race-car driving game. Donnie
drives a souped-up red Ferrari through the Grand Canyon.
GRETCHEN
So when you sleepwalk, can you
remember afterward? Like, do you
dream?
DONNIE
No. I just wake up and I look around,
try to figure out where I am... how
I got there.
GRETCHEN
My dad said never wake a
sleepwalker... because they could
drop dead.
The Trans-Am crashes head on into a tree. Game Over.
DONNIE
It's like this big force... that's
in your brain. But sometimes it grows
bigger... and it spread down into
your arms and legs... and it just
sends you someplace.
GRETCHEN
So when you sleepwalk, you go
somewhere familiar?
DONNIE
No. Every time I wake up somewhere
different. Sometimes my bike is
laying there next to me. Like once
when I woke up on the edge of this
cliff up on Carpathian Ridge.
37.
GRETCHEN
And you'd never been there before?
They sit silently for a moment.
GRETCHEN (CONT'D)
Donnie?
DONNIE
Yeah?
GRETCHEN
Do you ever feel as though there's
always someone watching you?
DONNIE
Why?
GRETCHEN
Well... maybe someone is, like...
giving you these dream steroids. And
sleepwalking ...is someone showing
you the way.
Title card:
OCTOBER 13 1988
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Scene 15 - Donnie Darko's Classroom Confrontations
Donnie stands in front of the class. Ms. Pomeroy sits behind
her desk. On the chalkboard is "Poetry Day".
DONNIE
"A storm is coming, Frank says. A
storm that will swallow the
children... and I will deliver them
from the kingdom of pain."
(beat)
"I will deliver the children to their
doorsteps. I will send the monsters
back to the underground. I will send
them back to a place where no one
can see them ...except for me. Because
I am Donnie Darko."
Donnie returns to his seat. Ms. Pomeroy stares at him
intensely.
MS. POMEROY
Who is Frank?
DONNIE
A six-foot-tall bunny rabbit.
The class begins to laugh. Donnie looks over at Gretchen.
38.
INT. HEALTH CLASS - AFTERNOON (THURSDAY, 1 P.M.)
Ms. Farmer stands next to the television where Jim Cunningham
narrates the Lifeline tutorial.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
And so, let us begin Lifeline Exercise
No. 1.
"PLEASE PRESS STOP NOW" appears on the screen.
Ms. Farmer stops the tape and moves to the blackboard. On
it, she has drawn a horizontal line book-ended by the words
"Love" and "Fear".
MS. FARMER
As you can see, the Lifeline is
controlled by two polar extremes:
"Fear" and "Love". Fear is in the
negative energy spectrum. Love is
in the positive energy spectrum.
SEAN
(to Donnie)
No duh.
MS. FARMER
Excuse me?
(defensive)
"No duh" is a product of fear.
She stares them down for a moment... shaking her head.
MS. FARMER (CONT'D)
(handing out cards)
Now, on each card is a CHARACTER
DILEMMA which applies to the Lifeline.
Please read each character dilemma
aloud... and place an X on the
Lifeline in the appropriate place.
The students read their cards.
KITTY FARMER
We'll start in the front.
Cherita Chen stands up and walks over to the blackboard.
Ms. Farmer pulls up large white cards that have black-and-
white animated cartoons on them.
CHERITA
Juanita has an important maths test
today. She has known about the test
for several weeks, but has not
studied.
(MORE)
39.
CHERITA (CONT'D)
In order to keep from failing her
class, Juanita decides that she will
cheat on the maths test.
Cherita places an X near the "Fear" end of the lifeline.
MS. FARMER
Good. Next.
Donnie watches as several more students interpret their
respective human dilemmas.
Finally... it is his turn.
DONNIE
Ling Ling finds a wallet on the ground
filled with money. She takes the
wallet to the address on the driver's
license but keeps the money inside
the wallet.
Donnie looks at the blackboard.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
I'm sorry, Ms. Farmer, I just don't
get this.
MS. FARMER
(impatient)
Just place an X in the appropriate
place on the Lifeline.
DONNIE
I just don't get this. Everything
can't be lumped into two categories.
That's too simple.
MS. FARMER
The Lifeline is divided that way.
DONNIE
Well, life isn't that simple. So
what if Ling Ling kept the cash and
returned the wallet? That has nothing
to do with either fear or love.
MS. FARMER
(impatient)
Fear and love are the deepest of
human emotions.
DONNIE
Well, yeah... OK, but you're not
listening to me.
(MORE)
40.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
There are other things that need to
be taken into account here. Like the
whole spectrum of human emotion.
You're just lumping everything into
these two categories... and, like,
denying everything else.
Ms. Farmer stares at Donnie vehemently. She can't believe
what she's hearing.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
People aren't that simple.
MS. FARMER
(not knowing how to
argue with him)
If you don't complete the assignment,
you'll get a zero for the day.
Donnie thinks for a moment... and then raises his hand.
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Scene 16 - Uncomfortable Encounter
Donnie and his parents sit in front of Principal Cole.
PRINCIPAL COLE
Donald... let me preface this by
saying that your Iowa scores are...
(looking down at the
file)
...intimidating.
(rubbing his temples)
So... let's go over this again. What
exactly did you say to Ms. Farmer?
Donnie does not answer. We reveal Ms. Farmer standing in the
corner.
MS. FARMER
(furious)
He asked me to... forcibly insert
the Lifeline exercise card into my
anus.
Silence. Rose looks down, furious. Eddie lets out a snort
laugh which he tries to conceal with a cough. It doesn't
work.
INT. TEACHERS' LOUNGE / OFFICE - MOMENTS LATER (2:15 P.M.)
Eddie and Donnie exit Cole's office, moving on while Rose
approaches Kitty, who looks visibly shaken.
ROSE
Kitty, I don't know what to say.
They've suspended him for two days.
(MORE)
41.
ROSE (CONT'D)
(beat)
Ever since this jet fiasco, I honestly
don't know what has gotten into him.
MS. FARMER
Rose, I'll tell you this because our
daughters have been on dance team
together for two years and I respect
you as WOMAN. But after witnessing
your son's behaviour today, I have...
significant doubts...
(stopping herself)
Our paths through life must be
righteous. I urge you to go home
and look in the mirror and pray that
your son does not succumb to the
path of fear.
Kitty Farmer turns and walks away.
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Scene 17 - Donnie's Reflection
Samantha jumps up and down on the trampoline.
INT. DONNIE'S ROOM - NIGHT (5:30 P.M.)
Donnie walks into his room again for the first time since
the accident, looking around at the new furniture, paint and
carpet. Everything is perfect.
Elizabeth appears in the doorway behind him with a cordless
phone in her hand.
ELIZABETH
(into the phone)
Oh my God, remember that gym teacher,
Ms. Farmer?
(beat)
Yeah. Well, I guess my brother called
her a fat bitch today in class and
got suspended. And my parents just
bought him all of this new shit.
(beat)
Yeah, I know. I wish a jet engine
would have fallen on my room.
INT. MARINO'S ITALIAN BISTRO - NIGHT (6 P.M.)
Eddie and Rose sit across from one another at the bistro
patio... having a quiet dinner to themselves.
ROSE
He's too old to be behaving this
way.
Eddie considers this.
42.
EDDIE
Oh, I say we buy him a moped.
INT. DONNIE'S ROM - NIGHT (7 P.M.)
Donnie lies in bed... looking up at the ceiling. He then
rolls over and looks at the calendar on his wall. The days
of the month of October are marked off with an X in each
square. Tacked onto the calendar is a drawing of Frank.
DONNIE
28 days, 6 hours, 42 minutes, 12
seconds.
INT. PHYSICS CLASS - DAY (FRIDAY, 2:30 P.M.)
As everyone is leaving class, Donnie stays behind.
DONNIE
Dr. Monnitoff?
DR. MONNITOFF
Donnie.
DONNIE
I know that this is gonna sound kinda
weird... but do you know anything
about time travel?
Dr. Monnitoff pauses, turns and looks at Donnie. He seems to
know something.
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Scene 18 - Unveiling Time Travel Secrets
Dr. Monnitoff has drawn a diagram on the blackboard. In his
hand he holds a copy of Stephen Hawking's "A Brief History
of Time".
DR. MONNITOFF
So... according to Hawking...
wormholes might be able to provide a
shot cut for jumping between two
distant regions of space-time.
DONNIE
So... in order to travel back in
time, you'd have to have a big
spaceship or something that can travel
faster than the speed of light --
DR. MONNITOFF
Theoretically.
DONNIE
-- and be able to find one of these
wormholes.
43.
DR. MONNITOFF
A wormhole with an Einstein-Rosen
bridge, which is, theoretically... a
wormhole in space controlled by man.
DONNIE
So... that's it?
DR. MONNITOFF
The basic principles of time travel
are there.
(beat)
So you have the vessel and the portal.
And the vessel can be anything.
Most likely a spacecraft.
EXT. SCHOOL COURTYARD - NEXT
Cherita Chen listens to this conversation intently.
INT. PHYSICS CLASS - NEXT
DONNIE
Like a DeLorean.
DR. MONNITOFF
(smiling)
A metal craft of any kind.
Donnie stares at him intently. Dr. Monnitoff walks over to
his desk and picks up a book.
DR. MONNITOFF (CONT'D)
Don't tell anybody that I gave you
this.
(beat)
The woman who wrote it... used to
teach here a long time ago. She was
a nun for many years and then
overnight she just became this
entirely different person. She up
and left the Church, wrote this book,
and started teaching science.
Donnie takes the battered book... we see the cover.
INT. SCHOOL MAIN HALLWAY - MOMENTS LATER
Donnie stands before an array of old photographs. We zoom in
to a black-and-white photograph of a young Robert Sparrow
standing in a class photograph dated 1944.
Donnie looks down at the book, and then at the photograph.
DONNIE
Roberta Sparrow... Grandma Death.
44.
INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT (FRIDAY, 6 P.M.)
Donnie sits down for dinner with his family.
DONNIE
It's called "The Philosophy of Time
Travel".
ELIZABETH
What does time travel have to do
with philosophy?
DONNIE
Guess who wrote it?
No one seems to know.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
Grandma Death.
ROSE
That is a terrible nickname.
EDDIE
Grandma Death.
DONNIE
(to Eddie)
You know, Roberta Sparrow. We almost
hit her with the car the other day.
ROSE
I've heard she's loaded.
The family is taken aback.
EDDIE
You're right. Roberta Sparrow was
famous for her gem collections. Kids
used to try and steal stuff from her
all the time. Over the years... as
she got older, she became more and
more of a recluse... now she just
likes to stay up there all by herself.
DONNIE
I guess she just lost faith in the
world.
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Scene 19 - Searching for Proof
Slow motion. Donnie and Gretchen jump up and down on the
trampoline, lost among falling autumn leaves.
INT. THERAPIST'S OFFICE - DAY (SUNDAY, 12 P.M.)
Donnie is back on Dr. Thurman's couch.
45.
DR. THURMAN
How many times have you seen Frank?
DONNIE
Four times... so far.
DR. THURMAN
Can anyone else see him?
DONNIE
I don't think so. It's like a TV
station. And they're tuned into
mine and no one else's.
DR. THURMAN
Who is they? Is Frank part of some
larger group?
DONNIE
I don't know. Gretchen has a theory.
That Frank is a sign. I told her I
thought it was ridiculous.
DR. THURMAN
A sign from whom?
DONNIE
(changing the subject)
I think that Frank wants me to go to
this woman.
(holding up the book)
She wrote a book about time travel.
Frank asked me if I believed in time
travel. That can't just be a random
coincidence.
(beat)
My dad almost hit her with the car
the other day, and she said the
creepiest thing. She said that every
living creature on this earth dies
alone.
DR. THURMAN
How does that make you feel?
DONNIE
It reminded me of my dog Callie.
DR. THURMAN
Is Callie still around?
DONNIE
No. She died when I was eight. We
couldn't find her for days. She
went and crawled underneath our back
porch...
46.
DR. THURMAN
Do you feel alone right now?
He looks at her for a moment.
DONNIE
I'd like to believe that I'm not...
but I've just never seen any proof.
So I just choose not to bother with
it. It's, like, I could spend my
whole life thinking about it...
debating it in my head. Weighing
the pros and cons. And in the end,
I still wouldn't have any proof. So
...I don't even debate it any more.
Because it's absurd.
(beat)
I don't want to be alone.
(beat)
So, does that make me, like, an
atheist?
DR. THURMAN
No. That makes you keep searching.
Donnie takes this in for a moment.
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Scene 20 - Eerie Visions and a Path to Follow
Eddie and Dr. Fisher watch the Redskins game. Ronald and
Donnie watch the game in the family room.
EDDIE
Ahh... we need Theisman.
DR. FISHER
We need a miracle.
INT. KITCHEN - NEXT
Rose and Anne Fisher (forty-five) share a bottle of wine at
the kitchen table.
ANNE
And so, his tapes made me realise
that for forty-five years I have
been a a prisoner of fear. Rose, you
have to meet Jim Cunningham.
(taking a sip of wine)
I can't believe he's not married.
Samantha bounces through the kitchen and into the family
room, wearing a Dorothy outfit from "The Wizard of Oz".
INT. FAMILY ROOM - NEXT
Donnie sits back in the La-Z Boy, dozing off...
47.
John Madden's CBS chalkboard unfolds on the TV screen. Madden
traces his electronic lines across the screen, tracing the
movement of the players... as their images are frozen in
time.
Donnie's eyes close... and then re-open.
Donnie turns his head and sees that the room is momentarily
bathed in artificial white light, as if God hit the slow-
motion button during a flash of lightning.
Donnie turns his head and sees that protruding from his
father's stomach... is a thick spear made of silvery plastic
gel.
As Eddie gets up from the couch to walk over to the
refrigerator ...his spear precedes him... morphing into an
extruded arrow that reaches the refrigerator several seconds
before him.
The spear traces the exact geography of his movement through
time... using his centre of gravity as its axis point.
Donnie turns and sees Samantha skipping from the kitchen...
as her spear bounces several feet in front of her like a
caterpillar.
Her spear... smaller than her father's... is proportional to
her mass.
SAMANTHA
(her voice echoing
through the silence)
Follow the yellow brick road...
Donnie looks down at his stomach and sees his own spear
protruding outward. It then begins to extrude forward towards
the foyer.
He does not follow it. It then retreats back in and beckons
him to follow.
Like a child transfixed by a firefly... Donnie follows the
path of his spear into the foyer.
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Scene 21 - The Spear and the Gun
Donnie and his spear round the corner and arrive in his
parents' bedroom.
INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT
His spear leads him to the closet. He opens the closet door...
and the spear leads him down to a box hidden beneath his
father's shoe rack.
48.
Donnie removes the box from the closet and unlatches it.
Inside is a gun. Donnie removes the pistol from the box...
staring at it with the same childlike expression.
Suddenly... Donnie's universe snaps back to normal. The white
light strobes... the spear has vanished.
Donnie still holds the gun. His expression changes to nervous
shock.
His eyes linger over the gun for a moment, he then quickly
puts it back in the box... and carefully places the box back
under the shoe rack.
Title card:
OCTOBER 18 1988
EXT. BUS STOP - MORNING (TUESDAY, 7:30 A.M.)
The usual bus stop crew is there. Donnie arrives last... by
himself. He looks tired and preoccupied.
A plane flies overhead... they all look up at the sky.
INT. ENGLISH CLASS - MORNING (8:30 A.M.)
We see the students placing the Graham Greene books on Ms.
Pomeroy's desk.
MS. POMEROY
It gives me no pleasure to deny you
the right to read one of the great
writers of the twentieth century.
But... alas, I have not yet been
elected Queen of the Universe. And
until that day, I will be forced to
obey the rules... and so will you.
So... if anyone is found carrying
this book in school, they will be
suspended.
Donnie slips his book into his backpack.
MS. POMEROY (CONT'D)
But let's not worry. Someone has
already pre-ordered several dozen
copies at Sarasota Mall Waldenbooks.
now, in Mr. Greene's absence, we
will be reading another classic.
Richard Adams' "Watership Down".
She begins to hand out copies of the paperback novel. Beth
Farmer smiles when she sees the cover.
BETH
Awww. Bunnies.
49.
MS. POMEROY
(whispering in his
ear)
Donnie, maybe you and Frank can read
this one together.
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Scene 22 - Threats and Reflections in the Woods
Donnie walks along the edge of the school. Suddenly, a figure
approaches, grabbing him from behind, placing a switchblade
next to his throat. It is Seth Devlin.
SETH
Did you tell them that I flooded the
school?
DONNIE
I didn't say shit.
SETH
That's not what I heard. Now they
think I did it.
DONNIE
Well, if you're innocent, then you
have nothing to worry about.
SETH
You know what? I think that you did
it.
Seth takes the knife and pokes the tip softly into the flesh
of Donnie's neck, drawing a small amount of blood.
He pushes Donnie away. Donnie touches his neck in shock.
INT. PHYSICS CLASS - DAY (2:30 P.M.)
Donnie walks into the classroom and takes his seat next to
Gretchen. He is sweating profusely.
Dr. Monnitoff is handing out papers. The bell rings People
shuffle out.
DR. MONNITOFF
Don't forget tomorrow we'll be meeting
with our partners for the Young
Inventors Fair.
Donnie rubs his finger over his neck wound.
GRETCHEN
What happened to your neck?
DONNIE
I don't want to talk about it.
(MORE)
50.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
(changing the subject)
So what happened to your neck?
EXT. GOLF COURSE FOREST - THAT AFTERNOON (3 P.M.)
Donnie and Gretchen walk around the trail.
GRETCHEN
Were you ever afraid of the dark?
They pull over to a stop.
DONNIE
Why?
She thinks for a moment.
GRETCHEN
Babies cry because they're afraid of
the dark. And because they have no
memories... for all they know...
every night could be the last forever.
Like, perpetual darkness.
DONNIE
Why not just buy your baby a night
light?
GRETCHEN
That's not good enough. You've got
to go back in time and take all those
hours of darkness and pain and replace
them... with whatever you wanted.
DONNIE
With, like, images?
GRETCHEN
Like... a Hawaiian sunset... the
Grand Canyon. Things that remind you
how beautiful the world can be.
Donnie stops and takes Gretchen's hand.
DONNIE
You know... we've been going together
for a week and a half...
GRETCHEN
And what?
DONNIE
Well...
GRETCHEN
You want to kiss me...
51.
Donnie goes in for an awkward kiss... but Gretchen turns and
denies him.
Donnie turns away, embarrassed.
DONNIE
That's alright... I understand.
GRETCHEN
(embarrassed)
No... Donnie, wait. I've never...
DONNIE
I always wanted it to be at a time
when ...when it reminds you how
beautiful the world can be.
GRETCHEN
Yeah. And right now there's some fat
guy over there watching us.
A man in a red jogging suit is standing there in the forest
smoking a cigarette. He turns away... disappearing into the
woods.
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Scene 23 - Carving Pumpkins
Donnie rides along the sidewalk... and skids to a stop, seeing
a wallet lying there.
Donnie opens the wallet, looking at the ID. It reads:
JIM CUNNINGHAM
42 POWDERHAM DRIVE
MIDDLESEX, VA 23113
FRANK (V.O.)
(echoing in Donnie's
head)
Now you know where he lives.
Donnie looks over and sees that he is in front of Cunningham's
Tudor mansion.
INT. KITCHEN - EVENING (7:15 P.M.)
Donnie sits at the kitchen island with Elizabeth, carving a
pumpkin.
ELIZABETH
So I hear you have a girlfriend.
DONNIE
Yeah.
ELIZABETH
What's her name?
52.
DONNIE
You're not gonna tell Mom, are you?
ELIZABETH
(defensive)
Why would I tell Mom?
DONNIE
Because you tell Mom everything.
ELIZABETH
No I don't.
(long beat)
She worries about you.
DONNIE
Well, don't worry... I'm taking my
medication.
ELIZABETH
It's not that. I mean mouthing off
to your teachers. I'll admit... when
Dad told me what you said to Ms.
Farmer, I laughed my ass off.
DONNIE
I was just being honest.
ELIZABETH
Yeah... well, that's not the way the
world works. If you keep being too
honest, the world will eventually
find a way to destroy you.
DONNIE
Her name is Gretchen.
ELIZABETH
That's a nice name.
(beat)
OK, let me see it.
Donnie turns the carved jack o' lantern around and we see
that it looks remarkably like Frank.
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Scene 24 - Donnie's Diagnosis
Rose and Eddie sit in front of Dr. Thurman.
ROSE
Thank you for seeing us... We...
just felt that it was time to
discuss...
DR. THURMAN
What I think is going on with your
son.
53.
ROSE
Well, you know about his past. And
when you said to look for signs of
aggression ...He was recently
suspended from school for insulting
his gym teacher.
EDDIE
She deserved it.
DR. THURMAN
Rose... let me just lay out what I
believe is happening here. Donnie's
aggressive behaviour seems to stem
from his increased detachment from
reality. His inability to cope with
the forces in the world that he
perceives to be threatening.
Rose smiles nervously.
DR. THURMAN (CONT'D)
Has your son ever told you about
Frank?
ROSE
Come again?
DR. THURMAN
Frank... the giant bunny rabbit?
ROSE
Frank?
DR. THURMAN
Donnie is experiencing what is
commonly called a daylight
hallucination.
ROSE
You're telling me my son has an
imaginary friend?
DR. THURMAN
He has described lengthy
conversations... physical encounters
with what I believe to be a
manifestation of his subconscious
mind.
Rose looks over at Eddie with an expression of panic.
ROSE
I... What can we do?
54.
DR. THURMAN
I would like to put him through more
hypnotherapy... and increase his
medication.
Eddie looks at Rose... who nods in approval.
ROSE
If that's what you think is necessary.
DR. THURMAN
But let me remind you that this
treatment is... experimental.
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Scene 25 - Donnie's Descent into Madness
Donnie walks into the kitchen and removes a butcher's knife
from a drawer.
INT. UPSTAIRS BATHROOM - NIGHT
Donnie stands in front of the bathroom mirror... catatonic...
looking at his reflection.
Frank stands behind him.
Suddenly, Donnie turns around with the butcher's knife and
lunges at Frank with all of his weight.
The knife collides with Frank's invisible force field as if
it were liquid steel. Donnie lunges repeatedly at Frank with
psychotic rage... but the knife bounces off.
Title card:
OCTOBER 20 1988
INT. SCHOOL AUDITORIUM - MORNING (10 A.M.)
The auditorium is packed with Middlesex mongrels. Jim
Cunningham takes the stage.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
(shouting)
Good morning, mongrels!
AUDIENCE
(scattered voices)
Good morning...
JIM CUNNINGHAM
That's all the gusta you can musta?
I said, "Good morning!"
AUDIENCE
(yelling louder)
Good MORNING!
55.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Now that's better... but I still
sense some students out there... who
are AFRAID ...just to say GOOD
MORNING!
AUDIENCE
(screaming)
GOOD MORNING!
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Are you AFRAID?
AUDIENCE
(screaming louder)
GOOD MORNING!
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Now that's what I like to hear!
(suddenly serious)
Because too many young men and women
today are paralysed by their fears.
They give in to their feelings of
self-doubt... they surrender their
bodies to the temptations of drugs,
alcohol and premarital sex. Empty
solutions. These are toxic chemicals
...and disease-spreading behaviour.
A large screen lowers behind him.
JIM CUNNINGHAM (CONT'D)
I would like to tell you a story
today about a young man whose life
was destroyed by the instruments of
fear. A young man searching for
love... in all the wrong places.
(shaking his head
tragically)
His name was Frank.
On the giant screen, an image slide appears of a young cartoon
teenager whose eyes are whacked out on drugs. The title
appears: HIS NAME WAS FRANK.
Upon hearing the name Frank, Donnie falls into a paranoid
trance.
Gretchen, who looks extremely bored, leans over to Donnie.
GRETCHEN
Let's get out of here.
Donnie ignores her. His eyes are locked on Jim Cunningham,
who begins his rousing re-enactment of the sad, unfortunate
downfall of Frank.
56.
Within minutes, Jim Cunningham has the crowd laughing...
enamoured of him with his cartoon slide show.
Note: during this sequence, the camera speed ramps to 4 bps.
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Scene 26 - Donnie's Confrontation
Donnie is in a trance.
DONNIE
We're moving through time.
GRETCHEN
What?
The huge screen rises upwards and Jim Cunningham takes
questions from the crowd from portable mike stands in the
back of the auditorium.
Several students get up and go to the mikes.
DORKY GIRL
Hi. Um... my stepsister... like... I
sometimes worry that she eats too
much.
OVERWEIGHT GIRL
(mortified; yelling
at her sister from
the crowd)
Shut up, Kim!
DORKY GIRL
I'm just trying to help you!
JIM CUNNINGHAM
There's no need to be embarrassed.
Many times we eat because we are
afraid to face the reality of our
ego reflections. We shouldn't just
look INTO the mirror. We should look
THROUGH the mirror.
DORKY GIRL
Thanks.
Kitty Farmer runs out onto the stage and hands Jim Cunningham
a bottle of water and a towel. She gives him the thumbs-up
sign, and runs back offstage.
LANKY KID
Um... How can I decide what I want
to be when I grow up?
57.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
I think you should look deep within
yourself... deep within your heart...
and find what it is in the world
that makes you feel LOVE. Just pure
LOVE. And then go to that. In your
studies... in your athletics... go
towards love.
LANKY KID
Thank you.
Donnie gets up from his seat and goes to the mike.
LARRY RIESMAN
What can I do to learn how to fight?
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Violence is a product of fear. Those
who love themselves enough should
have no need to fight another person.
Learn to truly love yourself... and
the world will be yours.
LARRY RIESMAN
Okay.
Donnie steps up to the mike stand.
DONNIE
(furious)
How much are they paying you to be
here?
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Excuse me? What's your name, son?
DONNIE
Gerald.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Well, Gerald, I think you're afraid.
DONNIE
Well, Jim, I think you're full of
shit!
There are rumblings from the faculty. Some laughter from the
student body.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
Are you telling us this crap because
you want us to buy your book? Because
I'll tell you something, that was
some of the worst advice I've ever
heard!
(MORE)
58.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
(to Dorky Girl)
If you want your sister to lose
weight... tell her to get off the
couch, stop eating Twinkies... and
maybe go out for field hockey.
(to Lanky Kid)
You're never gonna know what you
want to be when you grow up. Most of
the time, nobody does. How about
you, Jim?
(to Larry)
And you... Sick of some jerk shoving
your head in a toilet? Then go lift
some weights... take a karate lesson.
And when he tries to do it again...
kick him in the balls.
More rumblings from the faculty... Laughter from the students
gets louder.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
(getting angry)
I think you are afraid to ask me for
advice. I think that you are a very
troubled... confused young man. I
think you're searching for answers
in all the wrong places.
DONNIE
(long beat)
Well, I think you're the fucking
Anti-Christ.
The crowd is stirring. Students break out into applause.
Principal Cole approaches Donnie and removes him from the
auditorium.
Gretchen watches him go with a smile.
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Scene 27 - Donnie's Struggles and Confessions
Donnie and Gretchen walk down the wooded road.
DONNIE
(mumbling)
They suspended me for two days.
GRETCHEN
(stopping)
Are you okay?
DONNIE
(long beat)
I've been seeing stuff... a lot of
really messed-up stuff.
(MORE)
59.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
(beat)
Do you know who Grandma Death is?
GRETCHEN
Who?
DONNIE
The old crazy woman who lives off
Old Gun Road.
Donnie takes out the book by Roberta Sparrow.
GRETCHEN
Oh, yeah.
(taking the book)
"The Philosophy of Time Travel".
What is this?
DONNIE
She wrote it.
(beat)
There are chapters in this book that
describe the stuff I've been seeing.
It can't just be a coincidence.
(beat)
Will you come see her with me?
EXT. OLD GUN ROAD - NEXT (3:45 P.M.)
Donnie and Gretchen stand at the end of Grandma Death's
driveway.
Gretchen leads Donnie up to the front porch of the decrepit
house. She then rings the doorbell. They wait for several
moments ...nothing happens.
Gretchen then goes and peers through a window.
DONNIE
I know she's here. She never leaves
the house.
GRETCHEN
Maybe she's asleep.
They walk to the end of the driveway, and Donnie stops at
the mailbox. He opens it... empty.
GRETCHEN (CONT'D)
(pointing at the house)
Donnie, look.
In an upstairs window of the house, the silhouette of Grandma
Death peers down at them ominously.
60.
INT. DONNIE'S ROOM - AFTERNOON
Donnie sits at his desk, sealing an envelope. The address
reads:
MS. ROBERTA SPARROW
22 OLD GUN ROAD
MIDDLESEX, VA 23113
Title card:
OCTOBER 23 1988
INT. THERAPIST'S OFFICE - EVENING (6 P.M.)
Dr. Thurman looks at a diagram from Sparrow's boo. Donnie is
pacing around her office.
DR. THURMAN
And they grow out of our stomachs?
DONNIE
It was just like she described them
in her book. Like they were alive.
The way that they looked... moved...
smelled. They were like workers...
assigned to each one of us.
(long beat, then
distant)
I followed my spear... and I found
something...
DR. THURMAN
What did you find?
Donnie is silent for a moment.
DONNIE
Nothing.
DR. THURMAN
Have you told Gretchen about the
spears?
DONNIE
Yeah, but if I told her about the
other stuff about Frank...
DR. THURMAN
Are you embarrassed by these things
that you see?
DONNIE
You know... every week I come in
here and I tell you stuff... and
it's all embarrassing.
(MORE)
61.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
I tell you stuff that I don't tell
anyone else... and you know what?
It's your turn, Dr. Thurman. I'm not
saying anything else until you tell
me something embarrassing about
yourself.
Donnie makes a "zipper lip" gesture.
DR. THURMAN
(long, stubborn beat)
I once had an extended sexual fantasy
involving Mr. Rogers.
Donnie just stares at her.
DONNIE
Whoa.
(beat)
That's OK, Dr. Thurman, it's nothing
to be embarrassed about. I have sexual
fantasies all the time too.
DR. THURMAN
I know.
DONNIE
I mean... Gretchen... She won't even
let me kiss her. She says because
it's our first kiss... she's, like,
waiting for this big... moment or
something. I just don't get it. I
just want to get it over with so we
can move on to the good stuff.
DR. THURMAN
The good stuff.
DONNIE
Yeah... you know...
(whispering)
Fucking.
DR. THURMAN
(cutting him off)
Have you ever made love, Donald?
Donnie looks at her... and we know the answer.
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Scene 28 - Family Dinner and Physics Class
The entire family is having dinner. Donnie is lost in a
trance.
62.
SAMANTHA
Donnie, are you coming to my talent
show tomorrow?
Donnie ignores her.
ROSE
He can't, Samantha. He's been
suspended from after-school
activities. Donnie... are you still
with us?
(beat)
How was your therapy session tonight?
DONNIE
Fine. You know, Dr. Thurman isn't so
bad a lady. I can tell her anything.
Rose appears surprised and then sad at this comment. She
looks at Eddie, who just looks down at his plate of food.
EXT. PHYSICS CLASS - DAY (12 P.M.)
Donnie and Gretchen are at the front of the room, presenting
their invention. Dr. Monnitoff presides.
DONNIE
So, we call them... IMGs.
GRETCHEN
Infant Memory Generators.
DONNIE
Yeah. So the idea is that... you buy
these glasses for your infant, and
they wear them at night when they
sleep.
GRETCHEN
And inside these glasses are these
slide photographs. And each photograph
is of something peaceful... or
beautiful. Whatever pictures the
parent wants to put inside.
DR. MONNITOFF
What effect do you think this would
have on an infant?
DONNIE
Well... the thing is, nobody remembers
their infancy. And anyone who says
they do is lying. We think that this
would help develop memory earlier in
life.
63.
DR. MONNITOFF
Did you stop and think that maybe
infants need darkness? That darkness
is part of their natural development.
Seth Davis raises his hand.
SETH
What if the parents, like... put in
photographs of Satan... pentagrams,
dead people... stuff like that?
GRETCHEN
Is that what you'd show your kids?
SETH
I mean, didn't your dad, like, stab
your mom?
Dr. Monnitoff looks over at Seth calmly.
SETH (CONT'D)
Get out.
Seth begins to walk out. Gretchen doesn't answer. There is
only the 80 IQ grin... staring back at her face. The room is
silent.
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Scene 29 - The Kiss and the Vision
Gretchen walks out the front door. Donnie comes chasing after
her.
DONNIE
Gretchen! Gretchen... wait up!
She turns and faces him, tears in her eyes.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
I'm so sorry.
They embrace... kissing for the first time.
EXT. BYRD THEATRE - MAGIC HOUR (5:30 P.M.)
The old-fashioned theater marquee reads:
HALLOWEEN FRIGHTMARE
THE EVIL DEAD / THE LAST TEMPTATION OF CHRIST
Donnie and Gretchen approach the box office.
DONNIE
Two for "Evil Dead", please.
64.
INT. BYRD THEATRE - NEXT
Donnie and Gretchen sit in the middle of the huge, empty
theater.
"The Evil Dead" unfolds. They eat popcorn and watch silently.
Donnie looks over and sees that Gretchen is asleep.
Donnie turns back to the movie... beginning to look ill.
FRANK
Feeling sick?
Donnie turns his head over and looks across Gretchen. Frank
is sitting next to her.
FRANK (CONT'D)
I want to show you something.
DONNIE
You have to do something for me first.
FRANK
You have a request?
DONNIE
Yeah. Tell me why you're wearing
that stupid bunny suit.
FRANK
Why are you wearing that stupid man
suit?
DONNIE
Take it off. I want to see you.
After a moment, Frank slowly reaches up and removes the rabbit
headpiece.
Donnie's eyes widen.
Underneath the headpiece is the human face of a handsome
young man. His left eye does not exist, because it has
imploded into the socket. There is blood oozing from the
wound.
FRANK
Satisfied?
Donnie just stares at him.
DONNIE
What happened to your eye?
FRANK
I am so sorry.
65.
DONNIE
Why do they call you Frank?
FRANK
It is the name of my father... and
his father before me.
DONNIE
How much longer is this gonna last?
FRANK
You should already know that.
(beat)
Watch the movie, Donnie. I have
something to show you.
Donnie looks at the screen.
On the screen, "The Evil Dead" morphs into a Time Portal.
FRANK (CONT'D)
There's a storm coming.
(beat)
Have you ever seen a Portal, Donnie?
Suddenly... the screen morphs into an image of a large Tudor
house.
FRANK (CONT'D)
Burn it to the ground.
Donnie pulls out Jim Cunningham's wallet from his pocket.
Donnie contemplates his fate for several more moments, and
then gets up and walks out.
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Scene 30 - A Night of Performances and Arson
Donnie walks slowly past the theatre marquee.
INT. AUDITORIUM - NIGHT (7 P.M.)
On the stage, among blowing autumn leaves, Cherita Chen
performs a strangely beautiful mime act to Symphony No. 3 by
Henryk Gorecki.
When her act is finally over, the crowd is indifferent, with
scattered applause and laughter. Ms. Pomeroy stands up and
applauds enthusiastically.
Clearly affected by the laughter, Cherita walks offstage.
In the front row, the entire Darko family has assembled.
66.
INT. AUDITORIUM BACKSTAGE - NIGHT (7:15 P.M.)
Kitty Farmer stands with the five-member dance team in a
huddle.
MS. FARMER
Now girls... I want you to
concentrate. Failure is not an
option. And Bethany... if you feel
the need to vomit up there. Just
swallow it.
BETH
OK, Mom.
Jim Cunningham walks past them towards the stage. He stops
and touches Samantha on the shoulder... smiling.
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Good luck out there.
She smiles nervously back at him. He exits onto the stage.
INT. AUDITORIUM STAGE - NEXT (7:20 P.M.)
JIM CUNNINGHAM
Thank you... Cherita Chen. That was
Autumn Angel.
(clearing throat)
Next... it is my distinct pleasure
to introduce to you... Emily Bates...
Suzy Bailey... Samantha Darko...
Beth Farmer ...and Joanie James.
They are... SPARKLE MOTION!
The audience roars with applause as the lights dim.
The following montage alternates between the auditorium stage
and Jim Cunningham's house.
The stage lights slowly raise as the opening beat of 'West
End Girls' by the Pet Shop Boys begins.
Under the soft stage lights... Sparkle Motion unfolds.
Donnie approaches Jim Cunningham's house.
Sparkle Motion... in perfect synchronicity.
In the living room of the house... Donnie walks through,
dousing gasoline all over the place with psychotic force. A
trail of fire spreads.
A mystery woman emerges from the back wall of the auditorium.
A couch and curtains become engulfed in flames.
67.
Middlesex girls are jumping up and down in the aisles.
Eddie and Rose are smiling ear to ear.
Elizabeth Darko is cracking up at the entire scene.
Kids are going bonkers in the aisles.
The mystery woman takes off her glasses.
Slow motion: fire engulfs a deer taxidermy.
Ms. Pomeroy gets into the groove.
The parents are now on their feet.
The crowd roars even louder.
Slow motion: Sparkle Motion stands triumphant.
Slow motion: Donnie stands before a wall of flames.
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Scene 31 - A Night of Reflection and Paternal Encouragement
Cherita sits alone in the courtyard at the base of the mongrel
statue... defeated and alone.
INT. BYRD THEATRE - NIGHT (9 P.M.)
Donnie walks into the theatre and sits next to Gretchen, who
is asleep. As the credits to the film roll, Donnie wakes
her.
GRETCHEN
(disoriented)
What? How long was I asleep?
DONNIE
The whole movie. Let's go.
INT. JIM CUNNINGHAM'S HOUSE - NIGHT (9:45 P.M.)
Firemen walk through the charred room shining flashlight.
A Fireman shines his flashlight onto a mysterious door with
smoke emerging from it.
He kicks the door in... and shines the flashlight into the
dark hole.
EXT. CARPATHIAN RIDGE - SUNRISE (5 A.M.)
Donnie and Gretchen lie awake on a pile of blankets... staring
out into the abyssal canyon.
68.
Helicopter shot: we swoop down over Carpathian Ridge... past
Donnie and Gretchen... over the canyon and the endless expanse
of evergreen forest.
Title card:
OCTOBER 22 1988
EXT. DARKO HOUSE BACKYARD / PATIO - MORNING (11 A.M.)
Donnie and Eddie are in the backyard raking leaves onto a
giant sheet.
DONNIE
I know everyone thinks I'm a nutcase.
I've been getting a lot of weird
looks from people lately.
They rake in silence for a moment.
EDDIE
(angry)
Who's been giving you weird looks?
DONNIE
A lot of people. Teachers. Younger
kids. It's like they're afraid of
me for some reason.
(beat)
But that's OK... because I know I
deserve it.
Eddie stops raking.
EDDIE
You're my only son...
DONNIE
I know, Dad.
EDDIE
I know I'm not the best...
communicator.
(beat)
But whatever happens in your life...
whatever obstacles you come up
against... you just say... and do
whatever is in your heart. You be
honest... and tell the truth... even
if they look at you funny... and
they will. They'll tell you that
you're wrong. They'll call you a
fool.
(beat)
But what you've got to understand,
son, is that almost all of those
(MORE)
69.
EDDIE (CONT'D)
people are full of bullshit... and
they're scared of people like you.
Because you're smarter than all of
them.
Donnie smiles at his father.
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Scene 32 - Shocking Discovery
Donnie sits on his bed and stares at the calendar on his
wall. Each day is marked with an X.
He takes his pills from his nightstand... and downs three.
There are noises coming from downstairs.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - AFTERNOON
Donnie comes downstairs to see Elizabeth glued to the TV.
ELIZABETH
Oh my God, that's him. That's the
guy from last night.
On the television: a Newscaster stands in front of the charred
heap of what was once a large suburban house. Firefighters
mill about behind her.
NEWSCASTER
As firefighters continue their
investigation, arson has not been
ruled out as a cause of the fire,
particularly because of the shocking
discovery made earlier today among
the burned ruins. In the basement of
the house, authorities have discovered
what has been described as a kiddie-
porn dungeon.
Policemen emerge from the basement with several large boxes
of evidence.
NEWSCASTER (CONT'D)
Cunningham, who has become a recent
celebrity for his motivational books,
audio tapes and videos, ducked his
head from cameras when he was arrested
at the Sarasota Heights Golf Club
this morning. In a vicious statement,
Cunning Visions executive Linda Connie
attacked the Middlesex Fire
Department... claiming a vast
conspiracy.
Donnie stares at the television... speechless, horrified. On
the TV, Jim Cunningham hides his face from the camera.
70.
ELIZABETH
Oh my God. Dad played golf with
that guy.
Donnie says nothing, turns around... and walks upstairs.
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Scene 33 - Time Travel and Destiny
Donnie and Dr. Monnitoff are having another in-depth
conversation.
DR. MONNITOFF
Each vessel travels along a vector
path through space-time... along its
centre of gravity.
DONNIE
(to himself)
Like a spear.
DR. MONNITOFF
Beg pardon?
DONNIE
Like a spear that comes out of your
stomach?
DR. MONNITOFF
Uhh... sure. And in order for the
vessel to travel through time it
must find the portal, in this case
the wormhole, or some unforeseen
portal that lies undiscovered.
DONNIE
Could these wormholes appear in
nature?
DR. MONNITOFF
That... is highly unlikely. You're
talking about an act of God.
DONNIE
If God controls time... then all
time is pre-decided. Then every living
thing travels along a set path.
DR. MONNITOFF
I'm not following you.
DONNIE
If you could see your path or channel
growing out of your stomach, you
could see into the future. And that's
a form of time travel, right?
71.
DR. MONNITOFF
You are contradicting yourself,
Donnie. If we could see our destines
manifest themselves visually... then
we would be given the choice to betray
our chosen destinies. The very fact
that this choice exists... would
mean that all pre-formed destiny
would end.
DONNIE
Not if you chose to stay within God's
channel...
DR. MONNITOFF
(cutting him off)
Donnie, I'm afraid I can't continue
this conversation. I could lose my
job.
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Scene 34 - Conflict and Passion at Middlesex Ridge School
Ms. Pomeroy sits across from Dr. Monnitoff. They both grade
papers silently.
Dr. Monnitoff stares at her for a long moment.
DR. MONNITOFF
(incredulous)
Donnie... Darko.
She stares at him for a while, haunted by something.
INT. PRINCIPAL COLE'S OFFICE - AFTERNOON (3 P.M.)
Ms. Pomeroy sits across from Principal Cole.
PRINCIPAL COLE
I'm sorry, Karen, this is a
specialised school. We don't think
the methods you've undertaken here
are appropriate.
MS. POMEROY
"Appropriate".
(trying to contain
her anger)
With all due respect, sir, what
specifically about my methods do you
find inappropriate?
Principal Cole stares at her for a moment.
PRINCIPAL COLE
I don't have to get myself into a
debate about this, Karen, I believe
I have made myself clear.
72.
MS. POMEROY
You call this... clarity? I don't
think you have a clue what it's really
like to communicate with these kids.
You don't think that they can smell
your bullshit from a mile away? Every
day that goes by ...that we fail
to... inspire them... is another
moment that we all lose. And we are
losing them to apathy, and this...
prescribed nonsense. They are slipping
away...
PRINCIPAL COLE
I am sorry that you have failed. Now
if you'll excuse me, I have another
appointment. You can finish out the
week.
INT. SCHOOL OFFICE / TEACHER'S LOUNGE - NEXT (3:15 P.M.)
Ms. Pomeroy steps out from Principal Cole's office. She sees
Kitty Farmer and the Sparkle Motion girls milling about. The
mystery woman is there as well.
Ms. Pomeroy glares at Kitty Farmer before leaving.
EXT. MIDDLESEX RIDGE SCHOOL - NEXT (3:30 P.M.)
Ms. Pomeroy steps outside through an emergency exit. She
stares out at the beautiful forest. Her eyes are filled with
tears.
MS. POMEROY
FUUUUUUUCKKKKKK!!!!!
Hearing the scream from the distance, we see Cherita Chen
turn her head in shock as she walks alone along the edge of
the school building, eating her lunch.
She and Ms. Pomeroy share a moment of eye contact before she
turns and heads back into the school.
INT. MAIN SCHOOL HALLWAY - NEXT (3:45 P.M.)
Ms. Pomeroy walks slowly through the hallway, wiping tears
from her face.
PRINCIPAL COLE
(over the intercom)
Good afternoon. It is my great
pleasure to announce that the
Middlesex Middle School dance team
has been invited to perform on Ed
McMahon's Star Search '88 in Los
Angeles, California...
73.
INT. PRINCIPAL COLE'S OFFIC - NEXT (3:45 P.M.)
The Sparkle Motion girls squeal with excitement... jumping
up and down. Kitty Farmer pumps her fist in victory.
Suddenly... Linda Connie bursts into the office, grabbing
Kitty by the arm. The teacher holds up a newspaper... where
there is a headline that reads: JIM CUNNINGHAM CHARGED.
Kitty's facial expression goes from elation to horror.
INT. ENGLISH CLASS - MORNING (8:30 P.M.)
The classroom is dark. The students watch "Watership Down",
the movie.
Donnie is asleep. Gretchen stares at him. Ms. Pomeroy stares
at Gretchen.
Suddenly, she turns on the lights, turning off the TV.
Donnie wakes up... with dark circles under his eyes.
MS. POMEROY
And when the other rabbits hear of
Fiver's vision, do they believe him?
(cough)
It could be the death of an entire
way of life, the end of an era.
DONNIE
Why should we care?
MS. POMEROY
Because the rabbits are us, Donnie.
DONNIE
Why should I mourn for a rabbit like
it was a human?
MS. POMEROY
Is the death of one species less
tragic than another?
DONNIE
Of course. A rabbit is not like us.
It has no history books... it has no
knowledge of sorrow or regret. I
like bunnies and all. They're cute...
and they're horny. And if you're
cute and horny... then you're probably
happy that you don't know who you
are... or why you're even alive. But
the only thing I've known rabbits to
do is have sex as many times as
possible before they die.
74.
He looks over at Gretchen, who looks angry at this.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
There's no point in crying for a
dead rabbit... who never feared death
to begin with.
The class is silent for a moment.
GRETCHEN
You're wrong.
(beat)
You're wrong about these rabbits.
These rabbits can talk. They are the
product of the authors imagination.
And he cares for them. So we care
for them too. We care that their
home has been destroyed... and that
their lives are in danger. Otherwise
...we've missed the point.
MS. POMEROY
But aren't we forgetting the miracle
of storytelling? The dea ex machina.
The god machine. That is how the
rabbits are saved.
Gretchen looks across the room at Donnie with a disdainful
expression.
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Scene 35 - A Day of Mixed Emotions
Donnie approaches Gretchen at her locker.
DONNIE
You want to skip fourth period and
go to the Ridge?
GRETCHEN
(angry)
What's wrong with you?
DONNIE
What do you mean?
She turns and walks off, leaving Donnie broken and dejected.
INT. DONNIE'S ROOM - NIGHT (6:30 P.M.)
Donnie sits at his desk looking at an intricate drawing of a
cloud formation. On it he has written: THE PORTAL.
INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT (7 P.M.)
Rose and Eddie are in the kitchen. He is getting ready for a
business trip.
75.
Samantha is jumping up and down. Elizabeth is jumping up and
down, dancing with her.
Donnie looks into the kitchen from the foyer, catching his
family in a serene, contented moment of happiness. A moment
that he chooses not to interrupt.
Title card:
OCTOBER 25 1988
INT. / EXT. FOYER / FRONT PORCH - DAY (3 P.M.)
Doorbell rings. Rose answers the door.
Kitty Farmer is there on the front porch. She is wearing a T-
shirt that reads: GOD IS AWESOME!
MS. FARMER
Rose.
ROSE
Kitty...
MS. FARMER
Rose, we have a crisis.
(beat)
I am sure that you are aware of the
horrible allegations against Jim
Cunningham.
ROSE
Yes, I saw the news. Something about
a kiddie-porn dungeon.
MS. FARMER
(holding up her hand)
Please! Don't say those words.
(shaking her head)
Well... as you can see... many of us
are devastated by this news. This is
obviously some kind of conspiracy
meant to destroy an innocent man.
And I have taken it upon myself to
spearhead the Jim Cunningham defence
campaign. But unfortunately my civic
duties have created a conflict of
interest... which involves you.
ROSE
Beg pardon?
MS. FARMER
Rose... I have to appear at his
arraignment tomorrow morning.
(MORE)
76.
MS. FARMER (CONT'D)
And as you know, the girls also leave
for Los Angeles tomorrow morning.
Now, as their coach... I was the
obvious choice to chaperone them on
the trip.
ROSE
But now you can't go.
MS. FARMER
Yes. And believe me, of all the other
mothers I would never dream of asking
you, given the predicament with your
son. But none of the other mothers
are able to go.
ROSE
Oh, Kitty, I don't know. This is so
last-minute... Eddie is in New York...
MS. FARMER
Rose... I don't know if you realise
how great an opportunity this is for
our daughters. This has been a dream
of ours for a long time.
(beat)
Sometimes I doubt your commitment to
Sparkle Motion.
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Scene 36 - A Mother's Farewell
Rose is standing in Donnie's room alone. She stares at a
drawing of Frank that he has tacked onto his bulletin board.
Donnie appears in the doorway. Rose jumps.
DONNIE
I feel like... I'm approaching
something horrible.
Donnie walks over and sits on his bed. Rose goes and sits
next to him.
ROSE
I have to take the girls to Los
Angeles tomorrow.
DONNIE
Do you get to meet Ed?
ROSE
If I'm lucky.
(beat)
So... I won't be back until the first.
(MORE)
77.
ROSE (CONT'D)
Your dad will be back on Sunday, so
I've put Elizabeth in charge until
then. She has the car... so she can
drive you to your therapy tomorrow.
DONNIE
How does it feel to have a wacko for
a son?
ROSE
(embracing him)
It feels wonderful.
EXT. DARKO HOUSE DRIVEWAY - MORNING (10 A.M.)
Rose brings her luggage out to the airport van. Mystery Woman
loads Beth Farmer into the van.
Donnie sits on the back-porch steps, watching everyone
silently. Elizabeth gives Samantha a hug.
ELIZABETH
You're gonna win. I know it.
SAMANTHA
So do I.
(to Donnie)
Bye, Donnie.
Donnie waves goodbye.
ROSE
Here are the keys to the Taurus.
There's plenty of groceries in the
fridge. And I left money on the
kitchen table. And don't forget...
ELIZABETH
Don't worry, Mom. Just go, you'll
miss your flight.
Rose turns... wanting to say goodbye to Donnie, but not
knowing how. She smiles and waves goodbye.
Donnie waves back.
Rose turns and goes to the van... handing the driver her
last bag.
DONNIE
Mom...
Donnie stands up and reluctantly approaches from the porch.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
There's nothing broken... in my brain.
78.
Rose stands there for a moment, looking at her only son.
SAMANTHA
Come on, Mom!
ROSE
(to Donnie, holding
back tears)
I know.
She gets into the van, as Donnie and Elizabeth watch them
drive off.
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Scene 37 - The Fired Teacher
Donnie walks up to Gretchen, who stands at her locker with
several other girls. The girls whisper to each other as he
approaches.
DONNIE
Will you please talk to me?
GRETCHEN
Not now, Donnie. It isn't a good
time.
DONNIE
Then when? I have to talk to you.
Gretchen walks away, looking back at him with apologetic
eyes.
INT. ENGLISH CLASS - MOMENTS LATER (3:15 P.M.)
Donnie walks alone through the hallways... lost.
He stumbles upon Ms. Pomeroy's room. She sits behind her
desk... which has been packed up into a cardboard box.
DONNIE
(knocking on the door)
Ms. Pomeroy... what's going on?
MS. POMEROY
Donnie... it's Friday. Shouldn't you
be off with your friends, scaring
old people?
DONNIE
Where are you going?
MS. POMEROY
I don't know. That's a good
question... but suffice to say that
I am no longer your English teacher.
They fired me.
79.
DONNIE
That's bullshit. You're a good
teacher.
MS. POMEROY
Thank you, Donnie. And you're a good
student. Lazy... but a good student.
Unlike most of the others, you
question Mom and Dad's rules.
DONNIE
What do I tell the rest of the class
when they ask about you?
MS. POMEROY
(long beat)
Tell them that everything is going
to be just fine.
(beat)
It is up to the children to save
themselves these days. Because the
parents ...they don't have a clue.
Donnie looks at the blackboard. On it she has written in
perfect penmanship: "Cellar Door".
DONNIE
What's "Cellar Door"?
MS. POMEROY
(spaced out)
A famous linguist once said... that
of all the phrases in the English
language, of all the endless
combinations of words in all of
history... that "Cellar Door" is the
most beautiful.
She is silent for a moment.
DONNIE
Cellar door.
MS. POMEROY
Sometimes it's the only thing that
keeps us going.
She takes the box and crosses the room towards Donnie.
MS. POMEROY (CONT'D)
So... will Donnie find his Cellar
Door?
DONNIE
I think I already have.
(beat)
But now she won't even talk to me.
80.
MS. POMEROY
Then go find her, Donnie. Don't let
her get away.
(stopping at the door)
She was right about the rabbits. Go.
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Scene 38 - Seeking Answers and Comfort
And with that... Ms. Pomeroy turns and walks down the hallway
with her career in a cardboard box... heading towards the
bright Friday afternoon sunlight.
Donnie walks back down the hallway... lost in his own
introspection.
Across the way... at her locker... as Cherita Chen. Donnie
approaches her slowly like a cat.
She turns from her locker... and they make eye contact.
She looks at him warily, frightened. A book falls from her
arms onto the floor.
Written in large letters on the brown book cover is his name.
DONNIE DARKO.
He comes face to face with her, grabs her earmuffs with both
hands, and touches his forehead to hers as if he were going
to kiss her.
DONNIE
(long beat)
I promise that one day things will
get better for you.
Cherita holds still for a moment, trembling, and then jerks
back from him. Her earmuffs come off in his hands.
She backs away from him slowly. A single tear rolls down her
cheek.
CHERITA
Chut... up!
She then turns and runs down the hall... disappearing from
sight.
EXT. OLD GUN ROAD - AFTERNOON (4 P.M.)
Donnie walks by himself... thinking... wearing Cherita's
earmuffs.
Title card:
OCTOBER 29 1988
81.
INT. THERAPIST'S OFFICE - DAY (1:30 P.M.)
Donnie is under hypnosis.
DR. THURMAN
And when I clap my hands together
twice, you will wake up. Do you
understand?
DONNIE
Yes.
DR. THURMAN
So, your parents... why did you
disappoint them?
DONNIE
I... I was playing with fire.
DR. THURMAN
Is it Frank who wants you to destroy
the world, to set the world on fire?
Donnie doesn't answer.
DONNIE
People get hurt.
DR. THURMAN
But it was an accident. The house
was under construction.
DONNIE
People get hurt. I don't want to
hurt anyone.
DR. THURMAN
But you were punished.
DONNIE
Yes. I went to jail.
DR. THURMAN
Do you wish that you were punished
by your parents instead?
DONNIE
They... didn't buy me what I wanted
for Christmas that year.
DR. THURMAN
What did you want for Christmas that
year?
DONNIE
Hungry Hungry Hippos.
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DR. THURMAN
How did you feel... being denied
those Hungry Hungry Hippos?
DONNIE
Regret.
DR. THURMAN
What else makes you feel regret?
DONNIE
That I did it again.
DR. THURMAN
(alarmed)
You've done it again?
DONNIE
Yes. I flooded my school... and I
burned down that pervert's house. I
think I only have a few days left...
before they catch me.
DR. THURMAN
Why did you do these things, Donnie?
Did Frank tell you to commit these
crimes?
He does not respond.
DONNIE
I have to obey him... because he
saved my life. He controls me and I
have to obey him or I'll be left all
alone... and I'll never figure out
what all of this means...
DR. THURMAN
If God exists?
DONNIE
I think now that he might...
DR. THURMAN
Why?
DONNIE
Because I'm so horny.
DR. THURMAN
God exists because you're horny.
DONNIE
I think so. I think that's one of
the clues. It's a clue that tells
us... to keep going.
83.
DR. THURMAN
Where are we going?
No answer.
DR. THURMAN (CONT'D)
Where are we going, Donald?
DONNIE
I have the power to build a time
machine.
DR. THURMAN
How is that possible?
DONNIE
Grandma Death will teach me how.
Soon.
DR. THURMAN
Then how is time travel possible?
DONNIE
It would have to be God's portal.
They will lead me to it. Then I will
go back in time... and I won't feel
regret anymore.
DR. THURMAN
When will this happen?
DONNIE
Soon. Time is almost up.
Donnie gets up on his feet, staggering around the room. He
looks frightened... childlike.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
It has to happen soon, it has to
happen soon.
Dr. Thurman gets up and tries to control Donnie... following
him around the room.
DR. THURMAN
What is going to happen?
DONNIE
(freaking out)
Frank is going to kill.
DR. THURMAN
Who is he going to kill?
Dr. Thurman grabs him, trying to get him under control in an
awkward embrace.
84.
DR. THURMAN (CONT'D)
Who is he going to kill?
Donnie stares across the office like a frightened child...
as the room becomes white with artificial light.
Frank is there in the office... staring back at him.
DONNIE
(freaking out)
I can see him right now!
DR. THURMAN
Where is he, Donald?
DONNIE
He's right there... He can read my
mind and he'll show me the way out
of this. The sky is going to open
up... and then He will reveal himself
to me.
DR. THURMAN
If the sky were to suddenly open
up... there would be no law... there
would be no rule. There would only
be you and your memories... the
choices you've made and the people
you've touched. The life that has
been carved out from your subconscious
is the only evidence by which you
will be judged... by which you must
judge yourself. Because when this
world ends, there will only be you
and him... and no one else.
DONNIE
It's too late. I've already ruined
my life.
DR. THURMAN
You will survive this... Donald. I
promise you that you will survive.
You must let me help you.
(beat)
And when I clap my hands together,
you will wake up.
She claps her hands together twice... and Donnie snaps out
of his trance.
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Scene 39 - Donnie's Pre-Party Preparations
Donnie, calmed down and putting his jacket on, walks slowly
to the doorway.
Dr. Thurman stands looking out the window.
85.
DR. THURMAN
Donald?
Donnie turns back and faces her. Beat.
DR. THURMAN (CONT'D)
Your medication. They're placebos.
Just pills made out of water.
DONNIE
Thank you.
DR. THURMAN
Donald, an atheist is someone who
denies altogether the existence of a
God. You are an agnostic. An agnostic
is someone who believes that there
can be no proof of the existence of
God... but does not deny the
possibility that God exists.
DONNIE
Goodbye, Dr. Thurman.
DR. THURMAN
Goodbye, Donald.
INT. KITCHEN - DAY
Donnie walks into the kitchen, where Elizabeth is sitting at
the table.
ELIZABETH
(in shock)
I got in. I'm going to Harvard.
DONNIE
Congratulations.
Donnie sits down across from her.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
Mom and Dad won't be back until Sunday
night. It's Halloween Carnival. We
should throw a party. We could totally
get away with it.
ELIZABETH
(long beat)
Okay, but it has to be a small one.
DONNIE
Everything is going to be just fine.
86.
EXT. DARKO HOUSE - NIGHT (9 P.M.)
Neighbourhood kids are trick-or-treating. The man in the red
jogging suit shines a flashlight towards the house.
There are at least two dozen cars parked in front... and
somebody is already throwing toilet paper in the trees.
INT. FOYER - NIGHT (9:30 P.M.)
The doorbell rings. Donnie answers the door... only to find
Sean and Ronald dressed in black with monster masks. They
are both carrying backpacks.
Donnie is dressed in a black skeleton suit, and his face is
painted white like a skull.
SEAN
We got eggs, water balloons, and a
dozen rolls of toilet paper.
RONALD
I stole four beers from my dad.
DONNIE
There's a keg here.
SEAN
Only pussies drink keg beer.
They go back into the house towards the kitchen. There are
at least forty people, already quite wasted, many carrying
their own twelve-packs of beer under their arms.
Almost everyone is wearing a costume. Donnie and his friends
weave through the crowd toward the patio.
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Scene 40 - A Chaotic Encounter
Donnie and his friends watching the party unfold.
The party grows larger.
INT. THERAPIST'S OFFICE - NIGHT
Dr. Thurman paces around her office with the phone to her
ear.
INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT
The phone is ringing. The answering machine picks up.
INT. FOYER - LATER ON (11 P.M.)
The doorbell rings... and once again Donnie is the one to
answer it. To his surprise... it is Gretchen standing on his
front porch.
87.
GRETCHEN
(very upset)
Hey.
DONNIE
Hey. You OK?
GRETCHEN
(walking inside)
My mom is gone.
DONNIE
Where is she?
GRETCHEN
(close to tears)
I don't know. She didn't leave a
note.
The house is all messed up.
DONNIE
But you're OK?
She nods yes.
DONNIE (CONT'D)
Did you call the cops?
GRETCHEN
Yeah, they told me to get out of the
house.
Donnie takes Gretchen into the hallway and gives her a hug.
GRETCHEN (CONT'D)
I'm so scared... I just keep thinking
that something awful has happened.
It's my fucking stepdad. I know it.
DONNIE
(embraces her)
It's safe here.
Donnie takes Gretchen upstairs. We reveal Elizabeth watching
them go.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - NEXT
Elizabeth walks over to a friend.
ELIZABETH
(yelling over the
music)
Have you seen Frank?
88.
FRIEND
No. I think they said they were going
on a beer run.
INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NEXT (11:15 P.M.)
Donnie and Gretchen sit on the bed. Gretchen takes a sip of
beer.
GRETCHEN
Some people are just born with tragedy
in their blood.
He kisses her. He then pulls back.
GRETCHEN (CONT'D)
What?
DONNIE
There's something you have to know,
Gretchen.
(beat)
Everything is going to be just fine.
They lie down together... silently listening to the party
below.
The phone is ringing. The answering machine picks up.
ROSE
(on the answering
machine)
If you're there, please pick up.
(beat)
Oh well... there's good news. The
girls... they got three and a half
stars... and they get to come back
for the quarter-finals.
INT. LAX TERMINAL - NIGHT (9 P.M. PST)
Rose stands at a payphone while the Sparkle Motion girls
wait at the terminal.
SAMANTHA
Semi-finals, Mom!
ROSE
Sorry... semi-finals. Anyway... we're
taking the red-eye back tonight and
we should arrive around six a.m. I
hope everything is alright. Bye.
INT. FOYER - NIGHT (12 A.M.)
We move towards the grandfather clock and see the minute
hand reach midnight.
89.
INT. FOYER - NIGHT (12:30 A.M.)
Donnie and Gretchen walk downstairs. They kiss, and she goes
towards the family room.
Donnie walks towards the kitchen, but then doubles over
against the wall in pain.
Suddenly... the room blows out with a strobe of white light...
as costumed teenagers and their vector spears intersect in a
shimmering maze of chaos.
Donnie slowly follows his spear as it leads him through the
crowd... directly towards the refrigerator.
Donnie stares blankly at what he sees... scrawled in magic
marker on the memo board.
It reads: FRANK WAS HERE... WENT TO GET BEER!!
Donnie stares at the board for several moment... he then
turns his head and sees a teenager with a Ronald Reagan mask
walk by.
He then sees another spear come towards him. Gretchen rounds
the corner, coming in from the family room.
Donnie falls to his knees and puts his face inside the end
of Gretchen's spear. We see his P.O.V. - an abyssal tunnel
of light.
DONNIE
Come with me.
GRETCHEN
Where are we going?
He grabs her and pulls her out the back of the kitchen into
the back yard. Ronald and Sean follow.
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Scene 41 - Encounter with Grandma Death
They move through the backyard.
GRETCHEN
Donnie, what's going on!
She stops him.
DONNIE
Time is running out. We have to go
see Grandma Death. We have to talk
to her.
GRETCHEN
Why? Is this about the book?
90.
DONNIE
No. Frank.
GRETCHEN
Who's Frank?
Ronald and Sean approach.
SEAN
Donnie? Where are we going?
Donnie looks at Gretchen... This is it.
DONNIE
She knows. I know she knows.
EXT. NEIGHBOURHOOD STREET - NIGHT (1:15 A.M.)
The group of hour ride their bikes down the street.
EXT. FOREST - NIGHT (1:45 A.M.)
They ride their bikes through the forest.
EXT. GRANDMA DEATH'S HOUSE - NIGHT (1:30 A.M.)
They stand in front of the dark house. It is pitch-black. No
lights anywhere.
SEAN
There's nobody here... Just forget
it.
Then... there is a clanking noise from somewhere around the
side of the house. Everyone hears it.
Donnie looks towards the lower front of the house where there
is a cellar door.
GRETCHEN
Is that a cellar door?
DONNIE
(his eyes widen)
Yeah...
The cellar door is ajar... and there is a dim light coming
out from inside.
RONALD
Don't open it, Donnie. Let's just
leave.
INT. GRANDMA DEATH'S CELLAR - NEXT
Donnie and Gretchen open the door to the cellar... and descend
down into a murky pit with a stone floor.
91.
Inside... the room is quite large... filled with row after
row of boxes, paintings, antique furniture and chandeliers.
There is even an ancient piano in the back.
Gretchen slowly reaches her hand out and places her finger
on the deepest piano key.
Suddenly a figure emerges from the shadows and slams Donnie
into the wall. He then grabs Gretchen by placing an arm
around her neck with a butcher's knife.
It is Ricky Danforth. Seth comes out from another corner...
also brandishing a butcher's knife. Both have pantyhose pulled
over their heads.
RICKY
Get the fuck out! Now!
Ricky drags Gretchen out. Seth drags Donnie out.
EXT. GRANDMA DEATH'S HOUSE - NEXT
The four of them come bursting out of the cellar.
Seth holds Donnie's arms down with his knees and places the
butcher's knife against his throat.
Ricky throws Gretchen down hard onto the shoulder of Old Gun
Road. She lets out a gasp of pain as her head hits the
gravel.
RICKY
Motherfuckers!
SETH
I have... a bigger knife now.
Sean and Ronald watch... dumbfounded, backing away.
Seth just stares down at Donnie with his dead eyes... pushing
the knife down harder, cutting off Donnie's air supply.
SEAN
Hey... there's someone coming! Look,
there's a car coming!
Seth slowly turns his head and sees... far down Old Gun
Road... approaching headlights.
DONNIE
(barely audible whisper)
Dea ex machina...
SETH
What did you say?
92.
DONNIE
Our saviour...
The headlights are getting close.
RICKY
They called the fuckin' cops!
Gretchen struggles to breathe on the shoulder of the road...
the wind knocked out of her, semi-conscious.
SETH
That's no cop...
The headlights are getting close.
GRETCHEN
(in a hoarse whisper)
Donnie...
Even closer...
DONNIE
You better run.
RICKY
Forget it... let's go!
Seth doesn't move... He just stares down at Donnie.
RICKY (CONT'D)
Come on! Let's go!
SETH
You're dead, Donnie Darko.
Seth gets up and runs off with Ricky into the forest... just
as the approaching car crests the top of Old Gun Road at
breakneck speed.
Suddenly, in the bright glow of the car's headlights... is
the silhouette of Grandma Death... standing in the middle of
the road. In her right hand she is clutching a letter.
Donnie's letter.
GRETCHEN
Donnie...
The car swerves left, barely missing Grandma Death.
The Pontiac tries to brake hard... but the wheels lock...
and it goes skidding onto the shoulder.
Gretchen raises her head from the gravel... into bright
headlight beams.
93.
The Trans-Am goes barrelling over her like a speed-bump...
and her limp body rolls off into the grassy ditch.
The Trans-Am skids off into the grass and collides head-on
with the crumbling stone chimney... which explodes into the
crumpled hood of the car... as it eventually comes to a stop
in a fury of smoke.
Donnie staggers to his feet... regaining his breath. He runs
over to Gretchen and kneels down next to her.
DONNIE
Gretchen... wake up. Wake up.
Her neck is broken. She has no pulse.
The passenger door to the Trans-Am opens, and a passenger in
a clown costume gets out.
The driver's side door opens and the driver gets out.
He is wearing a rabbit suit. A Halloween costume.
He is holding the grotesque rabbit helmet in his hand.
It is Frank.
PASSENGER
Frank... what'd you do... what'd you
do!
Frank approaches Donnie... who raises his head from Gretchen
to see him for the first time... face to face... with an
expression of shocked horror.
PASSENGER (CONT'D)
She's dead. You killed her, Frank!
Frank is in shock.
FRANK
She's dead.
Donnie slowly nods his head. Sean and Ronald approach him
slowly. Grandma Death looms behind them.
FRANK (CONT'D)
What the fuck. Look at my fucking
car!
PASSENGER
Let's get out of here. Let's get out
of here, Frank!
FRANK
What were you stupid fucks doing in
the middle of the road?
94.
DONNIE
Waiting for you.
Donnie raises the gun from his father's closet with his right
hand, and to his own surprise, he pulls the trigger.
Frank's left eye implodes as the bullet passes through his
head. His body falls limply to the ground.
PASSENGER
Holy shit...
The Passenger turns and runs off into the woods.
RONALD
What'd you do, Donnie? What'd you
do!
DONNIE
(very calm)
Go home. Go home and tell your parents
that everything is going to be just
fine.
After contemplation of the recent events... Sean and Ronald
turn and run off in the opposite direction.
Donnie is left alone... with the dead bodies.
He turns and stares at Grandma Death... who is calmly standing
there... with his letter in her hand.
GRANDMA DEATH
A storm is coming.
(beat)
You must hurry.
Donnie is still in shock.
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Scene 42 - Donnie's Destiny Fulfilled
Donnie carries Gretchen home.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - NEXT
Donnie looks down at Elizabeth asleep on the couch. He then
leans down and gives her a kiss on the forehead.
EXT. DARKO HOUSE DRIVEWAY - NEXT
Donnie walks out to the Taurus, then stops and looks up at
the sky.
EXT. DARKO HOUSE - DRIVEWAY - NEXT
The Time Portal begins to form above the house.
95.
Donnie touches his stomach... feeling sick once again.
Donnie then steps into the car, where Gretchen sits in the
passenger seat. He turns on the engine and peels out of the
driveway.
INT. FORD TAURUS - EARLY MORNING
Donnie drives the Taurus up Carpathian Ridge.
EXT. CARPATHIAN RIDGE - EARLY MORNING (5:30 A.M.)
Donnie sits on the roof of the Taurus looking out.
He smiles, lighting a cigarette.
DONNIE
28 days, 6 hours, 42 minutes, 12
seconds. We're almost home.
EXT. SKY - NEXT
We see the Time Portal in the distance, forming.
INT. FLIGHT 2806 - DAWN (6 A.M.)
Samantha Darko is fast asleep. Her head rests on Rose's
shoulder. She looks out of the window at the rising sun.
EXT. DARKO HOUSE - DAWN
The Portal continues to form above the Darko house.
Police cars pull up in front of the house.
EXT. CARPATHIAN RIDGE - DAWN
Donnie continues to stare out at the canyon.
EXT. SKY - NEXT
We see the Time Portal once again.
INT. FORD TAURUS - NEXT
Donnie steps off the hood and gets into the car.
He takes Gretchen's hand.
INT. FLIGHT 2806 - NEXT
On the plane, Rose looks out of the window as the jet wing
explodes (audio only... we don't see it). She screams out as
the cabin shakes violently.
96.
EXT. DARKO HOUSE - DAWN
The Time Portal continues to form over the house.
EXT. SKY - NEXT
The left jet engine from Flight 2806 falls downward through
the sky. Beneath it, the Portal forms itself.
EXT. SKY - NEXT
The falling jet engine approaches the hexagonal plate of
light which accelerates downwards... forming a tunnel with
walls made of swirling liquid marble.
The jet engine passes into the hexagonal plate.
INT. / EXT. VARIOUS
In a series of inter-velometer time-lapse shots... the entire
suburban landscape retreats backward in a fury of speed.
Shot 1: a time-lapse of the mongrel statue.
Shot 2: a time-lapse of the main school hallway.
Shot 3: a time-lapse of the main school building.
Shot 4: a time-lapse of neighbourhood street/Darko house.
INT. FOYER - NIGHT
We Steadicam up the stairs.
INT. DONNIE'S ROOM - NIGHT
We move towards Donnie's empty bed.
Title card:
OCTOBER 2 1988
INT. VARIOUS BEDROOMS - NIGHT (1:30 A.M.)
Dr. Thurman wakes up.
Jim Cunningham wakes up... sobbing.
Kitty Farmer wakes up... coming to a horrible realisation.
Karen Pomeroy and Dr. Monnitoff wake up together.
Cherita Chen wakes up.
97.
EXT. SKY - NIGHT (1:30 A.M.)
The jet engine falls silently through the night down towards
the Darko house... having travelled back in time.
INT. DONNIE'S ROOM - NEXT
Donnie wakes up. He is laughing hysterically.
The engine crashes through his ceiling... engulfing the room.
INT. FAMILY ROOM - NEXT
Eddie jumps up from the La-Z Boy... startled awake by the
impact.
INT. MASTER BEDROOM - NEXT
Rose sits up in bed, hearing the crash.
ROSE
Eddie?
INT. FOYER - NEXT
Elizabeth leans against the wall, screaming.
INT. DONNIE'S ROOM - NEXT
The mammoth jet engine has plummeted all the way down through
the house, creating a cavernous hole that splits Donnie's
room in half. The smoke from the wreckage begins to clear.
Above the engine is Donnie... impaled through the stomach by
a wooden beam that was once part of the floor beneath his
bed. There is blood gushing from his mouth, as his face is
contorted into an expression that could almost be a smile.
EXT. NEIGHBOURHOOD STREET - MORNING (11 A.M.)
The same disaster scene as before... only more media, more
neighbours, and a Coroner. People stand around in shock...
disbelief.
From the other end of the street, a girl comes riding along
on a bike... slowly taking in the entire scene. She pulls
up to the kerb where a kid named David (eleven) is standing
around.
It is Gretchen Ross.
GRETCHEN
Hi... what's going on here?
DAVID
Horrible accident. My neighbour...
he got killed.
98.
GRETCHEN
What happened?
DAVID
He got smooshed. By a jet engine.
She stares at the house, where paramedics wheel a body out
of the front door.
GRETCHEN
What was his name?
DAVID
Donnie. Donnie Darko.
They stare at the front yard for a while. We see Elizabeth.
We see Eddie, carrying Samantha... who is crying.
DAVID (CONT'D)
I feel bad for his family.
GRETCHEN
(long beat)
Yeah.
DAVID
Did you know him?
She stares at the family for several moments... and then
shakes her head slowly as if trying to locate a memory that
is slipping away.
GRETCHEN
No.
Rose, leaning against a tree while smoking a cigarette,
notices them. She seems to recognise Gretchen... from
somewhere in the vast reservoir of her memory.
She waves at her.
She waves back.
FADE OUT.
THE END
Ratings
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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donnie | Donnie's character arc in the feature begins with his rebellious and confrontational nature, as he challenges authority and questions societal norms. As the story progresses, he becomes increasingly detached from reality and grapples with his beliefs and visions. This leads him on a journey of self-discovery and acceptance, as he learns to embrace his unique perspective and use it to confront the truth and protect those he cares about. Ultimately, Donnie transforms into a selfless hero willing to make sacrifices for the greater good, culminating in his ultimate sacrifice to save others. | The character arc for Donnie is well-developed and engaging, as it takes him from a rebellious and confrontational teenager to a selfless hero. However, there could be more clarity and focus on Donnie's mental health struggles and how they contribute to his transformation. Additionally, the arc could benefit from further exploration of Donnie's relationships with other characters, particularly his family and friends, to provide more depth and emotional resonance. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into Donnie's mental health struggles and how they impact his journey. This could involve exploring his therapy sessions, interactions with his family and friends, and moments of introspection. Additionally, further develop the relationships between Donnie and other characters, highlighting the emotional connections and conflicts that drive his transformation. This could include exploring his bond with Gretchen, his confrontations with authority figures, and his interactions with his family members. By deepening these aspects of the character arc, the story will have a stronger emotional impact and provide a more nuanced exploration of Donnie's journey. |
rose | Rose starts off as a middle-aged woman trying to maintain order and decorum in the family. She is overwhelmed by the challenges of raising a troubled teenager and resorts to confrontational tactics to break through Donnie's walls. However, as the story progresses, Rose begins to understand the importance of empathy and connection. She learns to listen to Donnie and provide him with the support he needs. By the end of the feature, Rose becomes a source of love and understanding for Donnie, reassuring him that there is nothing broken in his brain. | The character arc for Rose is well-developed and shows her growth from a frustrated and overwhelmed mother to a loving and understanding figure for Donnie. However, it would be beneficial to explore Rose's internal struggles and conflicts in more depth. This would add complexity to her character and make her arc even more compelling. | To improve the character arc, consider adding scenes that delve into Rose's internal conflicts and dilemmas. Show her grappling with her own emotions and frustrations, as well as her desire to connect with Donnie. This will provide a deeper understanding of her character and make her transformation more impactful. Additionally, consider incorporating moments of vulnerability for Rose, where she opens up about her own fears and insecurities. This will further humanize her and make her journey resonate with the audience. |
donnie darko | Donnie Darko's character arc in the screenplay is one of self-discovery and acceptance. At the beginning, he is a troubled and rebellious teenager, detached from reality and grappling with personal struggles. As he experiences strange visions and encounters with Frank, he becomes increasingly curious about the world and the concept of time travel. This curiosity leads him on a journey of introspection and questioning, as he delves into deep philosophical discussions and challenges societal norms. However, as his aggression and confusion grow, Donnie becomes more detached from reality, experiencing hallucinations and paranoia. In the climax of the story, Donnie sacrifices himself to save others, ultimately accepting his role in the time travel events and finding a sense of purpose and connection. | The character arc for Donnie Darko is well-developed and engaging. It effectively portrays his journey from a troubled and rebellious teenager to a self-sacrificing hero. However, there could be more emphasis on Donnie's emotional growth and the impact of his personal struggles on his relationships with others. Additionally, the screenplay could explore Donnie's internal conflicts and the consequences of his actions in more depth, providing a deeper exploration of his character and motivations. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more moments of emotional vulnerability and growth for Donnie. Show how his personal struggles and existential questions affect his relationships with his family and friends. Additionally, delve deeper into Donnie's internal conflicts and the consequences of his actions, allowing the audience to fully understand his motivations and the impact of his choices. This will provide a more nuanced and impactful character arc for Donnie Darko. |
elizabeth darko | Elizabeth Darko's character arc in the screenplay begins with her being detached and self-absorbed, primarily focused on her own life and social activities. However, as she becomes aware of the events surrounding Donnie and the revelation about Jim Cunningham, she starts to question her priorities and becomes more grounded and practical. Her protective nature towards her family emerges, and she experiences a shift in her moral compass. By the end of the story, Elizabeth becomes a more empathetic and emotionally connected character, willing to confront the truth and stand up for what is right. | The character arc for Elizabeth Darko is well-developed and provides a satisfying transformation for her. However, it would be beneficial to explore her emotional journey in more depth. While her protective nature and moral compass are evident, delving deeper into her internal struggles and conflicts could add more complexity to her character arc. | To improve the character arc for Elizabeth Darko, consider incorporating more scenes that showcase her internal struggles and conflicts. This could involve exploring her conflicting emotions towards Donnie's rebellious behavior and her desire to fit in with her social circle. Additionally, providing moments of vulnerability and self-reflection for Elizabeth would allow the audience to connect with her on a deeper level and understand her transformation more fully. |
jim cunningham | Jim Cunningham starts off as a friend of the family and a motivational speaker, presenting himself as a beacon of positivity and love. However, as the story progresses, Donnie sees through his facade and confronts him about his hypocrisy. Jim Cunningham's true nature is revealed when he is arrested for illegal activities. This revelation shatters his image and exposes him as a manipulative and deceitful individual. His downfall serves as a central crisis that drives the plot forward and impacts the lives of the characters. | The character arc for Jim Cunningham is well-developed and provides a satisfying resolution to his storyline. However, it would be beneficial to explore his motivations and backstory further to add depth to his character. Additionally, the impact of his actions on the other characters could be explored in more detail to enhance the emotional stakes of the story. | To improve the character arc, consider delving into Jim Cunningham's past and exploring the events or experiences that led him to become a manipulative motivational speaker. This will provide a better understanding of his motivations and add complexity to his character. Additionally, focus on the emotional impact of his actions on the other characters, allowing their reactions and struggles to further drive the plot and create a more compelling narrative. |
gretchen | Gretchen's character arc in the screenplay starts with her being a mysterious and intriguing new character who exudes vulnerability and curiosity. As the story progresses, it is revealed that she has faced significant trauma in her past, which she is open and honest about. She forms a deep connection with Donnie and becomes his love interest, providing emotional support and stability. However, as the events surrounding Donnie become more intense and surreal, Gretchen becomes entangled in them and experiences her own personal struggles. She is deeply affected by the disappearance of her mother and her own vulnerability is heightened. In the climax of the story, Gretchen's character arc reaches its peak as she confronts her own fears and trauma, ultimately finding strength and resilience. She becomes a source of stability and love for Donnie, and their connection deepens. In the resolution of the story, Gretchen's character arc is resolved as she finds a sense of normalcy and connection in her life, having grown stronger through her experiences. | The character arc for Gretchen is well-developed and provides a compelling journey for her. However, there could be more exploration of her own personal struggles and trauma, as well as the impact it has on her relationship with Donnie. Additionally, her initial skepticism towards Donnie's claims could be further explored and resolved, adding depth to her character development. Overall, the character arc is strong, but there is room for further exploration and development of Gretchen's internal struggles and growth. | To improve the character arc for Gretchen, consider delving deeper into her own personal struggles and trauma, providing more context and depth to her character. Explore the impact of her past on her relationship with Donnie, allowing for more emotional complexity and growth. Additionally, further develop her initial skepticism towards Donnie's claims, providing a more satisfying resolution to her character arc. This could involve moments of doubt and conflict, ultimately leading to a deeper understanding and acceptance of Donnie's experiences. Overall, focus on creating a more nuanced and layered portrayal of Gretchen's journey, allowing for a more impactful and satisfying character arc. |
grandma death | Grandma Death's character arc in the screenplay begins with her introduction as a mysterious and wise character who delivers a cryptic message to Donnie. As the story progresses, her role evolves into that of a mentor and guide for Donnie, providing him with important knowledge and insight. She helps him navigate the complex events and choices he faces. However, towards the climax of the story, Grandma Death's arc takes a tragic turn as she sacrifices herself to save Donnie's life, highlighting the theme of sacrifice and the consequences of choice. | The character arc for Grandma Death is well-developed and effectively highlights her role as a mentor and guide for Donnie. However, it would benefit from further exploration of her backstory and motivations. Additionally, her sacrifice towards the climax could be more emotionally impactful if there were stronger emotional connections established between Grandma Death and Donnie throughout the screenplay. | To improve the character arc for Grandma Death, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that provide insight into her past and the reasons behind her cryptic behavior. This would add depth to her character and enhance the audience's understanding of her role in the story. Additionally, focus on building stronger emotional connections between Grandma Death and Donnie through meaningful interactions and shared experiences. This will make her sacrifice more resonant and emotionally impactful for the audience. |
gretchen ross | Gretchen Ross starts off as a new girl at school, dealing with her own personal problems. She forms a connection with Donnie, drawn to his mysterious nature. As their relationship develops, Gretchen's troubled past is revealed, adding depth to her character. However, tragedy strikes when Gretchen is killed, leaving Donnie devastated. This event serves as a turning point for Donnie, leading him to confront his own demons and ultimately change the course of his life. | The character arc for Gretchen Ross is well-developed and adds emotional depth to the story. However, her role in the screenplay could be further expanded to give her more agency and independent storylines. Additionally, her character could benefit from more exploration of her personal problems and how they shape her interactions with others. | To improve the character arc for Gretchen Ross, consider giving her more agency and independent storylines. Explore her personal problems in more depth, allowing them to influence her actions and decisions throughout the feature. This will not only add complexity to her character but also provide opportunities for growth and development. Additionally, consider incorporating moments of strength and resilience for Gretchen, showcasing her ability to overcome challenges and stand up for herself. |
dr. thurman | Dr. Thurman starts off as a concerned therapist, trying to understand and help Donnie with his mental health issues. However, as she delves deeper into Donnie's revelations about time travel and the world ending, she becomes intrigued and open-minded. She begins to challenge Donnie's beliefs and encourages him to confront his fears. Throughout the feature, Dr. Thurman's perspective shifts from skepticism to a willingness to explore unconventional ideas with Donnie. | The character arc for Dr. Thurman is well-developed and provides an interesting progression. However, it could benefit from more clarity and depth. The transition from concern to intrigue could be further explored to show the internal conflict Dr. Thurman experiences. Additionally, the moments of vulnerability and openness could be more pronounced to create a stronger emotional connection with the audience. | To improve the character arc, consider adding scenes that delve into Dr. Thurman's personal life or backstory, allowing the audience to understand her motivations and internal struggles. Show more instances where Dr. Thurman actively challenges Donnie's beliefs and encourages him to confront his fears, highlighting her growth and transformation. Additionally, emphasize the moments of vulnerability and openness by giving Dr. Thurman more opportunities to share her own experiences or doubts, creating a deeper emotional connection with the audience. |
kitty farmer | Kitty Farmer starts as a concerned parent who is vocal about her beliefs and pushes for change in the school curriculum. As the story progresses, she becomes more involved in defending Jim Cunningham and his reputation, showcasing her loyalty and determination. However, as the crisis unfolds, Kitty's commitment to Sparkle Motion and her conflicted role in the situation create a shift in her character. She begins to question her beliefs and the choices she has made, leading to a transformation where she reevaluates her priorities and takes a stand for what she truly believes is right. | The character arc for Kitty Farmer is well-developed and showcases her evolution throughout the screenplay. However, it would be beneficial to delve deeper into her internal struggles and explore the reasons behind her initial beliefs and subsequent transformation. This would add more depth and complexity to her character, making her arc even more compelling. | To improve the character arc for Kitty Farmer, consider incorporating flashbacks or moments of introspection that reveal her personal experiences or traumas that have shaped her beliefs. This will provide a stronger foundation for her initial passion and subsequent transformation. Additionally, explore her relationship with her child and how it evolves throughout the story, as this can further contribute to her character development and motivations. |
ms. farmer | Throughout the screenplay, Ms. Farmer undergoes a transformation in her perspective on emotions and the importance of diverse viewpoints. Initially, she is rigid and dismissive, adhering strictly to her binary categorization of emotions. However, as the story progresses, she begins to question her own beliefs and opens herself up to the possibility of a broader emotional spectrum. This change is triggered by a personal experience that challenges her preconceived notions. As a result, she becomes more open-minded and willing to consider alternative perspectives, ultimately embracing a more nuanced understanding of human emotions. | The character arc for Ms. Farmer is well-developed and provides an interesting journey for the character. However, it would benefit from further exploration and depth. The transformation feels somewhat abrupt and could be better supported by specific events or interactions that gradually challenge her beliefs. Additionally, the screenplay could delve deeper into the emotional impact of her transformation, allowing the audience to connect with her on a more personal level. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating specific scenes or moments that gradually chip away at Ms. Farmer's rigid beliefs. Show her encountering situations or individuals that challenge her perspective, forcing her to question her own certainty. Additionally, explore the emotional journey she goes through as she undergoes this transformation. Show her grappling with internal conflicts and doubts, allowing the audience to empathize with her struggle. By providing more depth and gradual development, the character arc will feel more organic and satisfying. |
ms. pomeroy | Ms. Pomeroy's character arc in the screenplay starts with her being a strict and authoritative teacher, resistant to change. However, as she witnesses Donnie's unique interpretation of the short story and experiences the school administration's lack of understanding, she begins to question the traditional educational system. This leads her to become a passionate and unconventional teacher who challenges the status quo. Despite facing resistance from both students and parents, she remains dedicated to her teaching methods and beliefs, ultimately inspiring her students and making a positive impact on their lives. | The character arc for Ms. Pomeroy is well-developed and showcases her transformation from a strict teacher to a passionate advocate for unconventional teaching methods. However, it would be beneficial to provide more specific examples of her challenges and victories throughout the screenplay to make her arc more impactful and engaging for the audience. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating specific scenes where Ms. Pomeroy faces resistance from students, parents, or the school administration. Show her overcoming these obstacles and making a positive impact on her students' lives through her unconventional teaching methods. Additionally, explore moments of self-doubt or internal conflict to add depth to her character and make her transformation more relatable to the audience. |
principal cole | Principal Cole starts off as a dismissive and authoritative figure, prioritizing conformity and traditional teaching methods. However, as the story progresses, he begins to realize the value of innovative approaches and the need for change in the school. This realization is triggered by the resignation of Ms. Pomeroy, whose teaching methods he initially disagreed with. As he witnesses the positive impact of her methods on the students, he starts questioning his own beliefs and approaches. Eventually, he undergoes a transformation and becomes more open to new ideas, leading to a change in his leadership style and a more inclusive approach towards teaching and discipline. | The character arc for Principal Cole is well-developed and provides a satisfying transformation. However, it would be beneficial to explore the reasons behind his initial opposition to change and his focus on maintaining the status quo. This would add depth to his character and help the audience understand his motivations better. Additionally, it would be interesting to see more interactions between Principal Cole and the students, showcasing how his transformation impacts their lives and learning experiences. | To improve the character arc, consider adding a backstory or personal experiences that shaped Principal Cole's beliefs and values. This could provide a more nuanced understanding of his character and make his transformation more relatable. Additionally, incorporating scenes where Principal Cole actively engages with the students and witnesses the positive impact of innovative teaching methods would further highlight his growth and the importance of embracing change. Finally, ensure that the character's transformation is gradual and believable, allowing the audience to empathize with his journey and root for his positive change. |
dr. monnitoff | Dr. Monnitoff's character arc in the screenplay starts with him being intrigued by Donnie's ideas about time travel and destiny. He introduces Donnie to the concept and engages in deep conversations, initially showing support for Donnie's curiosity. However, as the conversations become more controversial, Dr. Monnitoff becomes cautious and dismissive, emphasizing his skepticism and concern about potential consequences. This arc showcases his transformation from an open-minded teacher to a more cautious and skeptical figure. | The character arc for Dr. Monnitoff is well-developed and provides a clear progression in his attitude towards time travel. However, it would benefit from further exploration of his internal conflict and the reasons behind his transformation. Additionally, the screenplay could delve deeper into the consequences he fears, adding more depth to his character. | To improve the character arc, consider adding scenes or dialogue that delve into Dr. Monnitoff's personal experiences or beliefs that shape his skepticism and caution. This will provide a stronger foundation for his transformation and make his character more relatable. Additionally, exploring the potential consequences he fears in more detail will add depth and complexity to his character, making him a more compelling figure in the story. |
frank | Frank's character arc in the screenplay begins with his introduction as a mysterious figure dressed in a bunny suit who appears to Donnie in his dreams and guides him in his actions. He initially serves as a catalyst for Donnie's transformation, leading him towards destructive actions and claiming to have knowledge of time travel. As the story progresses, Frank's character becomes more complex, revealing moments of vulnerability and desperation. He starts to question his own existence and purpose, creating a sense of internal conflict. In the climax of the film, Frank sacrifices himself to save Donnie, showcasing a surprising act of selflessness and redemption. | The character arc for Frank is intriguing and adds depth to his enigmatic nature. However, it could benefit from further exploration of his motivations and backstory. While Frank's mysterious presence is captivating, providing more insight into his origins and the reasons behind his actions would enhance the audience's understanding of his character. Additionally, the moments of vulnerability and desperation could be further developed to create a stronger emotional connection between Frank and the audience. | To improve the character arc for Frank, consider incorporating flashbacks or dream sequences that provide glimpses into his past and shed light on his motivations. This could help explain why he appears to Donnie and why he guides him towards destructive actions. Additionally, explore opportunities to deepen Frank's emotional journey, allowing the audience to empathize with his struggles and internal conflicts. This could be achieved through more intimate and introspective scenes that showcase his vulnerability and desperation. By delving deeper into Frank's character, the audience will have a more satisfying and meaningful experience. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Correlation between Emotional Impact and Overall Grade | There is a strong positive correlation between Emotional Impact and Overall Grade in this screenplay. Scenes with higher Emotional Impact tend to have higher Overall Grades. |
Correlation between Conflict and High Stakes | There is a moderate positive correlation between Conflict and High Stakes in this screenplay. Scenes with higher Conflict tend to have higher High Stakes. |
Correlation between Dialogue and Character Changes | There is a weak positive correlation between Dialogue and Character Changes in this screenplay. Scenes with more Dialogue tend to have slightly more Character Changes. |
Correlation between Tone and Emotional Impact | There is a weak positive correlation between Tone and Emotional Impact in this screenplay. Scenes with more intense or mysterious Tone tend to have slightly higher Emotional Impact. |
Correlation between Concept and Plot | There is a strong positive correlation between Concept and Plot in this screenplay. Scenes with higher Concept tend to have higher Plot scores. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The scenes exhibit a consistent level of writing quality, demonstrating the writer's strong grasp of storytelling techniques, dialogue writing, and scene structure. The scenes effectively convey emotions, create tension, and advance the narrative, showcasing the writer's ability to engage the reader. However, there are opportunities for improvement to enhance the depth and impact of the writing.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | Story by Robert McKee | This book provides invaluable insights into the craft of storytelling, focusing on developing compelling conflicts, creating engaging characters, and crafting impactful scenes, addressing the areas where the writer could enhance the depth and impact of their writing. |
Video | Screenwriting Masterclass with Aaron Sorkin | Aaron Sorkin is renowned for his exceptional dialogue writing. Studying his work and the techniques he employs can help the writer refine their dialogue, create stronger subtext, and enhance the emotional depth of their conversations. |
Exercise | Write scenes that focus on exploring the philosophical conflicts between different characters or exploring the internal conflicts of the main characters.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise provides an opportunity for the writer to delve deeper into developing philosophical conflicts, exploring the nuances of different perspectives, and creating characters with complex internal struggles, which can enrich the narrative and make it more resonant. |
Exercise | Write scenes with the primary focus on dialogue, paying attention to subtext, emotional depth, and the use of silence and pauses.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise allows the writer to hone their dialogue writing skills, experiment with different techniques, and develop a stronger sense of rhythm and pacing in their conversations. |
Exercise | Write scenes with different character dynamics and relationships, exploring the complexities of human interactions and motivations.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise helps the writer develop a deeper understanding of character relationships and motivations, enabling them to create more nuanced and engaging characters that drive the narrative forward effectively. |
Stories Similar to this one
Story | Explanation |
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Donnie Darko (2001 Film) | The screenplay you provided and the movie Donnie Darko share many similarities in terms of their themes, characters, and plot elements. Both stories involve a high school student who experiences visions and encounters a mysterious figure who guides them through a series of events, ultimately leading to a tragic end. |
Looper (2012 Film) | Both stories involve time travel and the consequences of changing the past. The protagonist in Looper is a hitman who is sent back in time to kill his future self, but he ultimately chooses to spare his past self and change the timeline. |
The Butterfly Effect (2004 Film) | This film also explores the consequences of changing the past, as the protagonist repeatedly travels back in time to try and prevent a tragic event, but his actions ultimately lead to even worse outcomes. |
Primer (2004 Film) | Both stories deal with time travel and the complexities of altering the timeline. Primer focuses on two engineers who invent a time machine and use it to try and improve their lives, but they soon realize that their actions have unintended consequences. |
Dark (2017 TV Series) | This German TV series also incorporates time travel and explores the interconnectedness of different characters and events across multiple timelines. It features a complex and intricate plot that involves multiple characters and time periods. |
The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy (1979 Novel) | This science fiction novel features a protagonist who travels through space and time, encountering various bizarre and surreal events and characters. Like Donnie Darko, it combines elements of science fiction, philosophy, and humor. |
Slaughterhouse-Five (1969 Novel) | This novel by Kurt Vonnegut also explores themes of time travel and the futility of war. The protagonist, Billy Pilgrim, becomes unstuck in time and experiences various moments of his life in a non-linear fashion. |
The Time Traveler's Wife (2003 Novel) | This novel by Audrey Niffenegger tells the story of a man with a genetic disorder that causes him to travel through time involuntarily. It explores the challenges and consequences of living with such a condition. |
The Truman Show (1998 Film) | This film shares Donnie Darko's themes of reality and perception. The protagonist, Truman Burbank, lives in a world that is secretly a television show, and he is unaware that his entire life is being broadcast to the world. |
The Adjustment Bureau (2011 Film) | Like Donnie Darko, this film explores the concept of destiny and free will. The protagonist, David Norris, is a politician who discovers the existence of a secret organization that controls the course of human lives. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Coming of Age | Donnie is a teenager who is struggling to find his place in the world. He is dealing with the pressures of school, family, and his own hormones. He is also struggling to come to terms with his own mortality. | The coming-of-age trope is a common theme in movies and television shows. It follows the protagonist as they navigate the challenges of adolescence and young adulthood. |
Chosen One | Donnie is the only one who can see Frank, a mysterious rabbit-suited figure who tells him that he is the Chosen One. Donnie must go on a journey to fulfill his destiny and save the world. | The chosen one trope is a common trope in fantasy and science fiction stories. It follows a hero who is destined to save the day. |
Time Travel | Donnie is able to travel through time. He uses this ability to try to prevent the death of his friends and family. | The time travel trope is a common trope in science fiction movies and television shows. It allows the characters to explore different timelines and alter the course of events. |
Memento Mori | Donnie is constantly reminded of his own mortality. He sees visions of his own death, and he knows that he is fated to die. | The memento mori trope is a reminder that death is always present. It is often used in horror movies and television shows to create a sense of dread and suspense. |
Coming-of-Age | Donnie is a teenager who is struggling to find his place in the world. He is dealing with the pressures of school, family, and his own hormones. He is also struggling to come to terms with his own mortality. | The coming-of-age trope is a common theme in movies and television shows. It follows the protagonist as they navigate the challenges of adolescence and young adulthood. |
Chosen One | Donnie is the only one who can see Frank, a mysterious rabbit-suited figure who tells him that he is the Chosen One. Donnie must go on a journey to fulfill his destiny and save the world. | The chosen one trope is a common trope in fantasy and science fiction stories. It follows a hero who is destined to save the day. |
Time Travel | Donnie is able to travel through time. He uses this ability to try to prevent the death of his friends and family. | The time travel trope is a common trope in science fiction movies and television shows. It allows the characters to explore different timelines and alter the course of events. |
Memento Mori | Donnie is constantly reminded of his own mortality. He sees visions of his own death, and he knows that he is fated to die. | The memento mori trope is a reminder that death is always present. It is often used in horror movies and television shows to create a sense of dread and suspense. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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Time Travel and Fate | Donnie experiences visions and encounters with Frank, a time-traveling bunny rabbit, who guides him through a series of events that ultimately lead to his death. The film explores the concept of fate and free will, as Donnie struggles to reconcile his visions with the reality of his actions. | The theme of time travel and fate is central to the film's plot and explores the complex relationship between choice and destiny. | ||||||||||||
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Teenage Angst and Loneliness | Donnie is a troubled teenager who struggles to fit in and connect with others. He experiences feelings of isolation and loneliness, which are exacerbated by his visions and the strange events that surround him. | The theme of teenage angst and loneliness is relatable to many young people who struggle with feelings of isolation and alienation. | ||||||||||||
The Power of Love and Connection | Donnie's relationship with Gretchen provides him with a sense of hope and connection. Through their relationship, Donnie learns the importance of love, friendship, and support. | The theme of the power of love and connection highlights the importance of human relationships and the ability of love to overcome challenges. | ||||||||||||
The Importance of Education | Ms. Pomeroy, Donnie's English teacher, is a passionate advocate for education and the power of storytelling. She believes that education can help students make sense of the world and find their own paths. | The theme of the importance of education emphasizes the value of knowledge and critical thinking in shaping young minds. | ||||||||||||
The Dangers of Arrogance and Ignorance | Jim Cunningham, a motivational speaker and youth counselor, is revealed to be a hypocrite and a pedophile. His arrest and subsequent downfall serve as a cautionary tale about the dangers of arrogance and ignorance. | The theme of the dangers of arrogance and ignorance warns against the perils of self-righteousness and the importance of holding those in power accountable. | ||||||||||||
The Strength of Family | Despite their initial misunderstandings and conflicts, Donnie's family ultimately comes together to support him during his time of need. They provide him with love, guidance, and a sense of belonging. | The theme of the strength of family underscores the importance of family bonds and the resilience of the human spirit. | ||||||||||||
The Complexity of Good and Evil | Frank, the time-traveling bunny rabbit, is a complex and enigmatic figure. He guides Donnie through a series of events that ultimately lead to his death, but his motives and true nature remain unclear. | The theme of the complexity of good and evil explores the blurry line between right and wrong and the challenges of discerning true intentions. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a mix of sharp and witty dialogue, realistic and naturalistic interactions, and concise and vivid narrative descriptions. The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a balance between humor and tension, exploring existential themes, and delving into the complexity of human emotions. The writer's voice adds depth to the screenplay by creating relatable and engaging characters, exploring philosophical conflicts, and creating a sense of mystery and intrigue. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a unique and engaging atmosphere, enhancing the emotional impact of the scenes, and providing thought-provoking dialogue and interactions. The writer's voice adds depth to the themes and characters, allowing for a more nuanced exploration of the story's central conflicts and ideas. |
Best Representation Scene | 6 - Morning at Middlesex Ridge School |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene could serve as the encapsulation of the writer's unique voice in the screenplay because it showcases their ability to balance humor and depth, as well as their skill in creating engaging and relatable characters. |
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals evolved throughout the script, reflecting his need for control, desire for companionship, fear of the unknown, and curiosity |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goals evolved throughout the script, reflecting his immediate challenges and circumstances |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict is the clash between free will and determinism, especially in relation to time travel and the idea of pre-determined destinies. Donnie grapples with the belief in the power to change his own fate and the possibility of a higher power guiding his actions |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflicts contribute to the character's development by challenging their beliefs, values, and worldview. They force the protagonist to confront their fears, seek understanding, and make choices that shape their journey
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflicts contribute to the narrative structure by driving the protagonist's actions and decisions, creating tension and conflict, and propelling the story forward
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflicts contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring philosophical and existential themes such as fate, time, free will, morality, and the search for meaning and connection in life
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The physical environment in the screenplay is predominantly suburban, with scenes taking place in houses, schools, and a golf course. The world is depicted as familiar and relatable, creating a sense of normalcy and routine. However, there are occasional moments of surrealism and other-worldliness, such as the appearance of Frank the rabbit and the mysterious Time Portal.
- Culture: The culture in the screenplay is American suburban culture of the 1980s, with references to popular culture, consumerism, and political tensions between Reagan and Dukakis. There is a strong emphasis on family dynamics, and the film explores themes of adolescence, identity, and the search for meaning.
- Society: The society in the screenplay is a hierarchical one, with adults in positions of authority and children subject to their rules. There is a strong sense of conformity and social expectations, and those who deviate from the norm are often met with ostracism or punishment. Donnie Darko himself is an outcast, and his experiences challenge the established social order.
- Technology: The screenplay makes use of various technologies, including telephones, computers, and television. These technologies play a role in shaping the characters' experiences and actions, and they also contribute to the film's overall atmosphere of paranoia and suspense.
- Characters influence: The world elements in the screenplay have a profound impact on the characters' experiences and actions. The suburban setting creates a sense of isolation and alienation for Donnie, and it also contributes to his sense of being an outsider. The cultural elements of the film shape Donnie's beliefs and values, and they also influence his interactions with others. The societal structure of the film oppresses Donnie and makes it difficult for him to express his true self. The technology in the film both helps and hinders Donnie in his quest to understand his destiny.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the narrative in a number of ways. The suburban setting provides a backdrop for the film's central mystery, and it also creates a sense of tension and suspense. The cultural elements of the film help to establish the characters' motivations and conflicts, and they also contribute to the film's overall tone. The societal structure of the film creates obstacles for the characters, and it also contributes to the film's sense of tragedy. The technology in the film plays a role in advancing the plot, and it also contributes to the film's overall sense of paranoia and suspense.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements in the screenplay contribute to the thematic depth of the film in a number of ways. The suburban setting reflects the film's themes of alienation and conformity. The cultural elements of the film explore the tension between individual freedom and social responsibility. The societal structure of the film reflects the film's themes of power and authority. The technology in the film explores the themes of progress and control
central conflict
Donnie Darko must confront the existential dread of his impending death while navigating the complexities of adolescence and unraveling the mysteries surrounding Frank, the enigmatic bunny-suited figure.
primary motivations
- Donnie's desire to understand his purpose and fate.
- Rose Darko's love and concern for her son's well-being.
- Gretchen Ross's search for connection and acceptance.
- Dr. Thurman's attempts to uncover Donnie's mental state.
catalysts
- Donnie's encounter with Frank and his subsequent visions.
- The flooding of the Middlesex School.
- Donnie's discovery of Jim Cunningham's dark secret.
- The impending end of the world and Donnie's realization of his role in it.
barriers
- Donnie's mental illness and the disbelief of those around him.
- The inherent difficulty of comprehending and accepting the concept of time travel.
- The destructive nature of Frank's guidance.
- The prejudice and ignorance of the Middlesex community.
themes
- The inevitability of destiny versus the power of free will.
- The importance of self-sacrifice and redemption.
- The existential angst of adolescence and the search for meaning.
- The duality of reality and the blurred line between sanity and madness.
stakes
The fate of Donnie, Gretchen, and the entire town of Middlesex hangs in the balance as Donnie races against time to fulfill his destiny and prevent the apocalypse.
uniqueness factor
The story's intricate blend of science fiction, psychological thriller, and coming-of-age drama sets it apart from other narratives, creating a unique and thought-provoking viewing experience.
audience hook
The compelling mystery surrounding Donnie's visions, the enigmatic nature of Frank, and the impending threat of the end of the world immediately captivates the audience and sustains their engagement throughout the film.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradoxical story engine lies in the juxtaposition of Donnie's free will and his seemingly predetermined fate. While he is given the knowledge of his death and the mission to save the world, he must also grapple with the consequences of his choices and the inherent uncertainty of the future.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another paradoxical engine can be found in the contrasting perspectives of Donnie and his therapist, Dr. Thurman. Donnie embraces the idea of time travel and the supernatural, while Dr. Thurman remains skeptical and rooted in scientific explanations. This clash of perspectives creates a tension that drives the narrative and challenges the audience's own beliefs.
Consider
Executive Summary
Donnie Darko presents a unique and thought-provoking story with a complex protagonist and intriguing themes. However, the script could benefit from further clarification of the time travel mechanics and pacing adjustments to ensure audience engagement. Additionally, exploring the consequences of Donnie's actions and providing more background on Frank would enhance the narrative depth.
- Unique and thought-provoking premise blending sci-fi, psychological thriller, and coming-of-age elements. high
- Donnie Darko is a well-developed, complex protagonist with a distinct voice and clear motivations. high ( Scene 1 Scene 6 Scene 11 Scene 15 Scene 29 )
- Intriguing exploration of themes such as free will, destiny, mental illness, and the search for meaning in life. high
- Supporting characters like Gretchen, Dr. Thurman, and even Frank, add depth and intrigue to the story. medium ( Scene 3 Scene 13 Scene 17 Scene 20 Scene 27 )
- Dialogue is often sharp, witty, and reveals the characters' inner thoughts and struggles. medium
- The time travel mechanics and rules of the universe are complex and may require further clarification for the audience. high
- Pacing can be uneven, with some scenes feeling slow or drawn out, particularly in the middle of the script. medium
- Rose and Eddie Darko's characters could be further developed to explore their reactions to Donnie's struggles. medium ( Scene 24 Scene 25 Scene 32 Scene 39 )
- The portrayal of teenage angst and rebellion sometimes relies on clichés and stereotypes. low ( Scene 12 Scene 22 )
- Further exploration of the consequences of Donnie's actions and their impact on the timeline would add depth to the narrative. high
- More background information on Frank's character and his connection to the time travel events would enhance the story's mystery. medium
- The script effectively uses dark humor and satire to critique societal norms and expectations. high ( Scene 5 Scene 14 Scene 26 Scene 34 )
- The portrayal of Donnie's mental illness is nuanced and avoids sensationalism. high ( Scene 19 Scene 28 Scene 36 )
- Dr. Thurman's role as Donnie's therapist provides valuable insights into his psychological state. medium ( Scene 7 Scene 18 Scene 33 )
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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7 | Grandma Death: Every living creature... on this earth... dies alone. |
17 | Donnie: 28 days, 6 hours, 42 minutes, 12 seconds. |
11 | Donnie: I think about... 'Who's the Boss?' |
12 | Donnie: That's what's so illogical about the smurfs... what's the point of living if you don't have a dick? |
28 | Donnie: Well... the thing is, nobody remembers their infancy. And anyone who says they do is lying. We think that this would help develop memory earlier in life. |