Black panther
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Genres: Science, Fiction, Drama, Action, Thriller, Adventure, Sci-Fi, Superhero, Fantasy, espionage
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Overview: The screenplay showcases a high level of originality and creativity with its blend of Afro-futuristic themes, Mesoamerican mythology, and superhero action. While it excels in character innovation, thematic depth, and audience engagement, there are opportunities for improvement in resolving emotional themes and subplots significance.
Themes: Death and Loss, Redemption, Technology, Betrayal, Family and Heritage, Responsibility, Culture Clash, Overcoming Adversity
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- M'Baku: THE BLACK PANTHER LIVES!!!! (Scene 52)
- Shuri: I am the spirit of a murdered queen, the wrath of a wounded nation, I am the Black Panther! And I am here for retribution. (Scene 56)
- Namor: We will match bloodshed with bloodshed. (Scene 37)
- Namor: If you try to find us...I will kill the Princess, and then I will come to Wakanda and kill you. Do you understand? (Scene 24)
- Dr. Graham: We lost them! GODDAMN IT. (Scene 5)
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Executive Summary
The Black Panther screenplay is a compelling story with strong female characters, relevant themes, and exciting action sequences. However, it suffers from pacing issues, underdeveloped characters, and an underdeveloped resolution. With some revisions, it has the potential to be a highly successful film.
- Strong and complex female characters who drive the narrative and exhibit a range of emotions and motivations. high
- Exploration of relevant themes such as grief, legacy, isolationism vs. globalization, and the consequences of colonialism. high
- Namor's backstory is compelling and provides a strong foundation for his motivations and conflict with Wakanda. high ( Scene 114-116 )
- The action sequences are well-choreographed and visually engaging, showcasing the unique abilities of both the Wakandans and the Talocanil. medium
- Shuri's internal conflict and journey as she grapples with grief, anger, and the responsibility of the Black Panther mantle is emotionally resonant. high ( Scene 51, 222 )
- The pacing is uneven, with some scenes feeling rushed and others dragging, particularly in the second act. medium
- Riri Williams, while having potential, feels underdeveloped and her motivations for helping Wakanda could be explored further. medium
- The political landscape of Wakanda after T'Challa's death and the power dynamics within the Tribal Council could be explored in more depth. low
- The resolution of the conflict between Wakanda and Talocan feels somewhat abrupt and could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the long-term implications of their alliance. medium
- The portrayal of the Talocanil, while visually striking, could benefit from further exploration of their culture and individual characters beyond Namor and Namora. low
- Further exploration of the emotional impact of Ramonda's death on Shuri and the other characters. high
- More scenes showcasing the daily lives and culture of the Talocanil to deepen audience understanding of their society. low
- A deeper dive into the moral and ethical implications of using vibranium as a weapon and the potential consequences of its global proliferation. medium
- The revelation of M'Baku's promise to T'Challa to protect and advise Shuri adds depth to his character and their relationship. medium ( Scene 208 )
- The use of technology and innovation by both Wakanda and Talocan is a significant element that drives the plot and action sequences. high
- Okoye's decision to leave the Dora Milaje and forge her own path is a powerful moment of character development. medium ( Scene 306 )
- The revelation of T'Challa's son and his connection to both Wakanda and Haiti adds an intriguing layer to the story's conclusion and potential future narratives. high ( Scene 306 )
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 7.25, The screenplay presents a compelling premise that sets up an intriguing conflict between Wakanda and Talocan, driven by the characters' motivations and the search for vibranium. However, it could benefit from further refining the narrative to enhance its clarity and audience engagement, particularly in the execution and depth of the conflict resolution. See More
Structure: 8.25, The screenplay exhibits a sturdy narrative structure and effectively balances its multiple plotlines, showcasing the clash between Wakanda and Talocan, while exploring themes of grief, legacy, and the responsibility of leadership. The screenplay deftly handles the task of balancing character arcs with the advancement of the central conflict, resulting in a compelling and engaging storyline. While the pacing remains steady throughout, there are moments where the plot could benefit from refinement to elevate the tension and emotional impact. See More
Theme: 7.75, The screenplay adeptly explores themes of identity, legacy, and the clash between tradition and progress through its well-developed characters and engaging narrative. While some areas could be refined to enhance thematic depth, the screenplay holds promise for delivering a thought-provoking and emotionally resonant experience. See More
Visual Impact: 8.0, "Black Panther: Wakanda Forever" presents a richly imagined and visually captivating cinematic experience. The screenplay's imagery is characterized by its vivid and evocative descriptions of the vibrant Afro-futuristic world of Wakanda and its captivating underwater counterpart, Talocan. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.0, The screenplay elicits a range of emotions, with its strengths lying in the depth of emotional responses it evokes. However, there are opportunities to enhance the emotional depth and resonance by delving deeper into the characters' internal conflicts and exploring their motivations and backstories. See More
Conflict: 7.5, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes, although there are areas where they could be further enhanced to deepen tension and elevate audience engagement. The central conflict between Wakanda and Talocan is clear and compelling, with personal stakes that drive the characters' actions and decisions. However, some subplots lack the same level of significance and integration, potentially diluting the overall impact of the conflict. See More
Originality: 8.25, The screenplay displays an impressive level of originality and creativity in its blend of Afro-futuristic elements with a superhero narrative. The film's focus on Wakanda's distinct culture, its seamless integration of mythology, technology, and action sequences sets it apart from typical superhero films. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
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Summaries
- Shuri tries to save King T'Challa's life with a synthetic Heart-Shaped Herb
- T'Challa's funeral procession takes place, with Wakandans paying their respects. The casket is lifted and carried to Bashenga Triangle and set in front of Bashenga's Hut where a prayer is said in Xhosa. The Wakandans salute T'Challa as his casket is taken away. One year later, Queen Ramonda attends a UN meeting, while at the Mali Outreach Center, a group of mercenaries take the staff hostage.
- Queen Ramonda defends Wakanda's policy on vibranium at a UN meeting while mercenaries ambush a Mali outreach center, taking hostages.
- The Dora Milaje foil a mercenary attack on a Mali outreach center and deliver the attackers to the UN meeting where Queen Ramonda defends Wakanda's vibranium policy. Meanwhile, a group of military-types embark on a deep-sea mission to find vibranium.
- A team of divers descends to the ocean floor to extract vibranium, but things go awry when one member is taken by an unseen figure and a massive squid approaches. The mission ends in tragedy.
- A group of Talocanil warriors launch a surprise attack on a cargo ship carrying Wakanadan lead mining technicians, causing chaos and violence as they try to take over the ship and its precious cargo of vibranium.
- The Talocanil attack a ship with Wakandan lead mining technicians, Namor freezes a helicopter mid-air and causes it to crash into the ocean, and Queen Ramonda defends Wakanda's vibranium policy at the UN after evidence is released proving that French mercenaries have been attacking Wakandan outreach centers.
- Shuri and Ramonda discuss the creation of new technology and the anniversary of T'Challa's death.
- Shuri and Ramonda discuss their rituals for honoring their connection to those who have passed and consider how to move forward after T'Challa's death.
- Namor arrives in Wakanda seeking help to prevent further mining of vibranium and mentions a scientist who has created a machine to detect it. Ramonda and Shuri are suspicious of him but agree to help find the scientist.
- The Wakandan council, including M'Baku, debates how to handle the threat of the man who claims to command a massive army and seeks a Vibranium scientist.
- Shuri and Ramonda discuss the capabilities of a new vibranium detector, and Okoye proposes a plan to locate a scientist with knowledge of vibranium mining. Meanwhile, Everett Ross is summoned by a Kimooyo Bead Drone.
- Ross meets with Okoye and Shuri to discuss finding the scientist who created a vibranium detector. Shuri suggests it might be a student at MIT. Okoye goes to meet the student, Riri Williams, who is initially hostile but eventually agrees to come to Wakanda.
- Okoye and Shuri meet Riri Williams, a student who has created a vibranium detector, but their meeting is interrupted by the arrival of armed federal officers led by Everett Ross. Shuri and her team manage to escape, but Riri is left to deal with the consequences of her actions.
- Okoye, Shuri, and Riri are trapped in Riri's garage while being pursued by the FBI. Riri reveals her Ironheart suit and escapes as Okoye and Shuri flee in a car.
- Okoye, Shuri, and Riri are pursued by armed federal officers as they attempt to escape Cambridge. Shuri and Riri use their advanced technology to evade the officers while Okoye takes matters into her own hands.
- Okoye, Shuri, and Riri escape from the FBI in Riri's garage with the help of Riri's Ironheart suit. They are pursued by the FBI as they attempt to flee Cambridge, using their advanced technology to evade the officers while Okoye takes matters into her own hands.
- Riri suits up to take on the FBI and uses her advanced Ironheart suit to evade them while Okoye and Shuri drive away. Riri puts her life on the line to shoot down a surveillance drone, which they use to clear a path and escape a police blockade.
- Okoye, Shuri, and Riri attempt to escape from the FBI but are attacked on the bridge by Namora and Attuma along with Talocanil warriors. Okoye fights the warriors while Shuri tries to negotiate with Attuma and Riri is dragged by a chain. A massive explosion occurs, and Okoye is swept over the bridge while Shuri is taken as a captive by Attuma.
- Okoye, Shuri, and Riri attempt to flee Cambridge pursued by FBI, but are attacked on the bridge by Namora and Attuma along with Talocanil warriors. Okoye fights the warriors while Shuri tries to negotiate with Attuma and Riri is dragged by a chain. A massive explosion occurs, and Okoye is swept over the bridge while Shuri is taken as a captive by Attuma. Okoye later awakens to see Attuma and Namoro fleeing with Shuri and Riri. The scene then shifts to the aftermath with FBI Agents investigating the crime scene, believing that Wakandans are responsible.
- Okoye faces repercussions for failing to keep Shuri safe and is stripped of her rank. Ramonda becomes desperate to find Shuri and seeks the help of the Griot for tracking.
- Ross and Val discuss the recent attacks by Wakandans, including the disappearance of Riri Williams and the kidnapping of Shuri. Meanwhile, Ramonda contacts Ross about the whereabouts of Shuri's kimoyo beads.
- Ramonda contacts Ross for help in finding Shuri and informs him of a new world power at play. They discuss the disappearance of Riri Williams and the kidnapping of Shuri while Ross expresses his desire to help. Ramonda reveals that Shuri was taken while trying to save Riri and urges Ross to keep her updated on any government actions. Meanwhile, Ramonda uses a conch shell given to her by Namor to signal for help.
- Ramonda meets with Namor to demand the return of her daughter and a scientist, threatening to reveal his existence to the Americans if they are not returned. Namor gives her two days and warns her of the consequences if Wakanda interferes with his people again. Ramonda then seeks out Nakia for help.
- Shuri and Riri wake up in a cave and realize they've been taken captive. Shuri tries to calm down Riri and assure her that they're safe, but Riri panics when she sees one of their captors, a blue-skinned Talocanil Warrior. As Shuri and Riri try to figure out a way to escape, Namora enters and presents them with traditional Mayan dresses.
- Shuri and Riri wake up in a cave to find themselves captive. Namor assures Shuri's safety and shows her his mother's Mesoamerican artifact. The scene shifts to Namor's flashback of his mother's village driven to take the blue potion from Namor's father's clan. Namor is born the first of the new world.
- Namor recounts his origin story to Shuri and Riri, explaining how his mother and tribe were transformed into aquatic beings and how he became the king of Talocan.
- Namor recounts his origin story to Shuri and Riri, explaining how his mother and tribe were transformed into aquatic beings and how he became the king of Talocan. He then reveals his duty to protect their land at any cost, leading to a discussion about the captive scientist and a trip to Talocan.
- Namor reveals his origin story to Shuri and Riri, showing them the beautiful and advanced civilization of Talocan. He explains his duty to protect it at any cost, leading to a discussion about the captive scientist and a potential partnership with Shuri.
- Ross enters an NSA facility to retrieve Shuri's kimoyo beads. He uses a fake identity and attempts to get close to a laptop. Ramonda provides instructions through his earpiece.
- Ross enters an NSA facility to retrieve Shuri's kimoyo beads and a thumb drive containing information to find the Spymaster. He successfully retrieves the thumb drive and plants a tracking device in the facility. As he leaves, he flushes the beads down the toilet to track them.
- Shuri and Riri work with Namor and Namora to create an amplifier for Shuri's kimoyo beads. Nakia locates the captive scientist in the cenote and seeks permission to retrieve her. Ramonda attempts to draw Namor out.
- Namor reveals his plans to wage war on surface nations unless Wakanda forms an alliance with him. Shuri refuses to let him kill the captive scientist, leading to a tense disagreement. Ramonda meets with Namor to negotiate the release of Shuri.
- Shuri, Riri, and Nakia are trapped in a Talocanil cave while they discuss an impending threat from Namor. Nakia saves them from the Talocanil guards, but in the process, they accidentally kill a guard, leading to a tense decision on whether to save her with Nakia's kimoyo beads or leave to avoid war.
- Shuri, Riri, and Nakia successfully escape from Namor's underwater hideout and are beamed up by the RTF. Meanwhile, Namor discovers that the Wakandans have taken the captive scientist, and he decides to gather his forces for revenge. Back in Wakanda, Ramonda informs Shuri that Okoye has been removed as General of the Wakandan armies.
- Namor reveals his plan to wage war on Wakanda unless they form an alliance with him. He orders his warriors to accompany him to Wakanda to match bloodshed with bloodshed.
- Namor threatens Wakanda into forming an alliance with him. Shuri and her companions are caught in a dilemma, and they escape Namor's hideout. Okoye and Nakia discuss Shuri's safety, and Okoye learns about the change in leadership in the Wakandan armies. Meanwhile, Shuri works on a plan to defend Wakanda against Namor's attack.
- M'Baku and the Jabari guard the city while people celebrate the return of the princess. Nakia and Okoye discuss recent events, including Nakia's accidental killing of two soldiers. Suddenly, the city is hit with hydrobombs and flooding, and they realize they're under attack.
- The Golden City is under attack by Namor's forces. Ramonda initiates emergency response protocols and Shuri defies her mother's orders to help defend the city. M'Baku and the Jabari guard the city while Nakia and Okoye help citizens in need. Ramonda remotely pilots the emergency response fleet with Riri's assistance.
- The Golden City is under attack by Namor's forces.
- Namor attacks the Golden City with hydrobombs and his forces. M'Baku attempts to fight Namor, but is defeated. Shuri and her allies try to defend the city, while Ramonda remotely pilots the emergency response fleet to safety. Namor also attacks the Tribal Council Room, while Okoye tries to rescue Shuri and Aneka who are trapped in the moat.
- Namor attacks the Golden City with hydrobombs and his forces. Ramonda remotely pilots the emergency response fleet with Riri's assistance. M'Baku attempts to fight Namor but is defeated. Shuri and her allies try to defend the city, while Ramonda remotely pilots the emergency response fleet to safety. Namor also attacks the Tribal Council Room, while Okoye tries to rescue Shuri and Aneka who are trapped in the moat.
- Shuri, grieving the loss of her family, contemplates suicide but is talked down by Nakia.
- Shuri mourns the loss of her loved ones and contemplates revenge. M'Baku offers counsel and protection, revealing a proposal for the tribe's evacuation. Shuri considers the proposition but ultimately chooses revenge over tradition.
- Okoye is asked to become Queen and take up the mantle of leadership in Wakanda, while the Tribal Council discusses how to deal with Namor's attack.
- Shuri informs Ross of the Queen's death and urges him to keep the CIA from interfering with Wakanda. Ross is shocked and Val urges him to hurry up.
- Shuri and Riri discuss building a suit to attack Namor and weaken him through exposure to extreme heat. Shuri also contemplates revenge and explores a proposal for the tribe's evacuation while Okoye is asked to become Queen. Meanwhile, Ross and Val discuss the President's desire to attack Wakanda.
- Shuri and Riri discuss building a suit to attack Namor and weaken him through exposure to extreme heat.
- Shuri successfully recreates the Heart-Shaped Herb, which could help defeat Namor and restore Wakanda's protector. She tests it with the help of Nakia and Riri
- Shuri confronts Killmonger in the Ancestral Plane and they discuss their motivations for taking the Heart-Shaped Herb. Killmonger tries to persuade Shuri to join him in his mission to change Wakanda and take revenge on those who have wronged them. Shuri refuses and vows to take down Namor.
- Shuri overcomes her failure and recreates the Heart-Shaped Herb, becoming the Black Panther again. She demonstrates her strength and intelligence to the tribal elders, including M'Baku.
- Shuri presents a plan to draw Namor out and weaken him through dehydration. M'Baku questions the morality of killing a possible god and risking eternal war. Shuri remains resolute and prepares to leave for battle.
- Shuri and her group prepare to face Namor with a plan to weaken him through dehydration. Okoye talks with Aneka about their past and possibilities for the future. Namor and his people detect a presence and prepare for battle.
- Shuri and her group prepare to face Namor with a plan to weaken him through dehydration. As they approach, Namor commands his allies to destroy their weapon and take their ship. Namor takes a conch shell and flies up into the sky.
- Shuri and her team ambush Namor in the sky and capture him in a dehumidifier. Shuri confronts Namor about his violations of an agreement, which includes the murder of a Wakandan child and scientist. Namor is weakened by dehydration and trapped.
- Shuri and her team ambush and capture Namor, weakening him through dehydration and confronting him about his violations of an agreement.
- Shuri and her team capture Namor and confront him about his violations of an agreement. Meanwhile, Okoye and Aneka, in their Midnight Angel suits, rebalance the ship.
- Shuri and her team face off against Namor, weakening him through dehydration and confronting him about his violations of an agreement, while Okoye and Aneka fight off Talocanil attackers on the Royal Sea Leopard. Meanwhile, Riri takes on Namora underwater and in the sky.
- Shuri confronts and battles Namor while Okoye fights off Talocanil attackers on the Royal Sea Leopard.
- Shuri and her team capture Namor and confront him about his violations of an agreement while Okoye and Aneka fight off Talocanil attackers on the Royal Sea Leopard.
- Val confronts Ross about his ties to Wakanda and the attack on the mining vessel, which Ross denies. Val reveals that she has been listening to his conversations and playing him all along. Ross is taken into custody by federal agents.
- Ross is taken captive in a prison transport van and a Midnight Angel rescues him while Shuri's team confronts Namor in his cave.
- Namor paints while Namora questions his alliance with Wakanda. Aneka is offered a chance to be reinstated as a Dora. Shuri gives Riri a gift and forgives her for stealing her AI.
- M’Baku challenges for the throne and no one takes him up on the offer.
- Shuri says goodbye to Okoye who is leaving to make her own life, and burns her grieving garments. She joins Nakia on the beach where she is introduced to Nakia's son, Toussaint.
- Shuri learns her nephew's true name while visiting a Haitian beach where her mother once visited. She shares a tender moment with the young boy and reminisces about her brother T'Challa.
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Character Shuri
Description Shuri's character arc shows inconsistency. Initially, she is portrayed as a tech-focused individual who dismisses tradition and spirituality. However, after T'Challa's death, she becomes more open to rituals and even attempts to recreate the Heart-Shaped Herb. This shift seems abrupt and not fully justified by the narrative.
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Character Okoye
Description Okoye's fierce loyalty and dedication to the throne seem to waver after being stripped of her rank. Her willingness to disobey the Queen's orders and assist Shuri appears out of character for someone who previously upheld tradition and authority with unwavering commitment.
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Character M’Baku
Description M’Baku's initial aggression and desire for war with Namor change after learning about the Talocanil's history and potential godlike status. His sudden advocacy for peace and understanding seems inconsistent with his previous warlike demeanor.
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Description The discovery of vibranium outside Wakanda contradicts established lore and raises questions about the origins and properties of the metal. This inconsistency challenges the previously established uniqueness of Wakanda's vibranium source.
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Description The Talocanil's ability to control marine life and their advanced underwater technology seem incongruous with their isolation and lack of interaction with the surface world. The source of their knowledge and technological advancements remains unexplained.
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Description The attack on the Mali Outreach Center and the subsequent evidence linking it to the French government seem contrived and serve as a convenient plot device to raise tensions and justify Wakanda's isolationist stance.
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Description The sudden appearance of the downed surveillance aircraft and its convenient role in clearing a path for Shuri and Okoye's escape feel like a Deus ex machina, an unlikely event that resolves a seemingly impossible situation.
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Description The casual and humorous tone of some of Shuri and Riri's dialogue, particularly during tense situations, can feel out of place and detract from the seriousness of the threats they face.
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Element Wakanda's isolationist stance
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Suggestion The repeated justifications for Wakanda's isolationist policy could be consolidated to avoid redundancy. Explore alternative ways to convey this information, such as through character interactions or subtle world-building details.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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Shuri | Shuri's arc begins with her grief and anger over the loss of her brother, which drives her to seek revenge against Namor and avenge her mother's death. She grows in strength and determination as she confronts Killmonger and refuses to be swayed by his words. Along the way, Shuri faces failure and disappointment, but ultimately shows her intelligence and strength as the Black Panther. As she leads Wakanda through its crises, she begins to reconcile her grief and learns to find hope in the future of her people and her country. | The character arc for Shuri is well-developed and consistent throughout the movie. However, it would have been interesting to see more exploration of her character's emotions and internal struggles, as her grief and anger are important driving forces for her actions. Additionally, while Shuri's inventiveness and resourcefulness are integral parts of her character, at times they seem to overshadow her other qualities and make her appear one-dimensional. | To improve Shuri's character arc, it could be useful to explore more of her internal struggles and emotions related to her grief and anger. This can help create a more nuanced and complex character that is relatable to audiences. Additionally, showing Shuri's vulnerabilities and moments of doubt can make her more multi-dimensional and compelling. Balancing her inventiveness and resourcefulness with other aspects of her character, such as her leadership strengths and loyalty, can also add depth to her arc. |
Ramonda | Throughout the movie, Ramonda goes from a grieving mother to a strong and confident leader. She learns to challenge tradition and seek alternative solutions, even if it means making difficult decisions. She grows to become a wise and thoughtful strategist, navigating the challenges faced by Wakanda with grace and determination. In the end, she emerges as a powerful diplomat and negotiator, able to find a peaceful solution to the conflict between Wakanda and Talocan. | Overall, Ramonda is a strong and well-developed character, but the arc could use more clarity. While there is growth and change, it is not always clear what motivates Ramonda or what she is struggling with. Additionally, some of the transitions could be smoother and more impactful, with greater focus on the emotional journey of the character. | To improve the character arc, it might be helpful to add more specific goals and challenges for Ramonda to overcome. This could include exploring her relationship with her daughter and the trauma of losing her son and husband. Additionally, by giving Ramonda more agency and decision-making power, her growth could feel more impactful and meaningful. It could also be beneficial to explore the emotional journey of the character more fully, with greater attention to the internal conflicts and motivations that drive her actions. |
Okoye | Throughout the movie, Okoye remains fiercely loyal to Wakanda and its traditions but is forced to confront the challenges of a rapidly changing world. She struggles with the loss of T'Challa and Shuri, as well as her own place in Wakanda's hierarchy. She is tempted by the offer to become Queen and restore the honor of the Border Tribe but ultimately chooses to remain loyal to her duty and her people. She develops a close relationship with Aneka and begins to consider a possible future together. In the end, Okoye remains a strong and skilled warrior, but also finds hope for the future and a sense of fulfillment in her personal life. | Overall, Okoye's character arc is well-drawn and compelling. However, at times her stoic demeanor can make it difficult for the audience to connect with her on an emotional level. It would have been interesting to see more of her personal life and relationships outside of her duty to Wakanda. Additionally, although her relationship with Aneka is hinted at, it could have been developed more fully to add greater depth to her character. | To improve Okoye's character arc, it could be helpful to include more scenes that reveal her personal life and relationships beyond her duty to Wakanda. This could help to humanize her character and make her more relatable to the audience. Additionally, further exploration of her relationship with Aneka could add greater emotional depth to the character and help to develop her beyond just her role as a warrior and leader. |
Aneka | Aneka starts as a member of the Dora Milaje who clashes with Okoye over her preference for energy daggers. She leaves the Dora Milaje and experiences personal doubts and conflicts, but finds redemption through her acceptance of the offer to become a Dora once again. | The character arc is a bit simplistic and lacks depth. While Aneka is an interesting character, her journey could benefit from more challenges and obstacles to overcome. | To improve Aneka's character arc, consider adding more layers to her personal doubts and conflicts. Have her face more challenges and struggles in finding her place, but also give her moments of triumph and growth. Additionally, explore her relationship with Okoye and the Midnight Angels in more depth to add more complexity and depth to her character. |
Namor | Throughout the movie, Namor starts off as a mysterious and powerful figure seeking help from Wakanda. As the story progresses, he becomes more focused on protecting his people at any cost, leading to conflicts with Wakanda. However, his weaknesses begin to surface as he faces his past betrayals and discovers the consequences of his actions. Ultimately, he shows vulnerability and regret, highlighting his internal conflict over aligning his kingdom with Wakanda. | The character arc for Namor is well written and provides a complex and compelling narrative. However, some of his actions, such as killing innocent Wakandans, may make it difficult for the audience to sympathize with him. Additionally, there could be more development in his relationships with other characters, particularly with Shuri and Riri. | To improve the character arc, it may be helpful to show more of Namor's personal relationships and conflicts with other characters, particularly Shuri and Riri. Additionally, his actions could be portrayed as more morally ambiguous, rather than outright villainous, to allow the audience to sympathize and connect with him on a deeper level. |
Everett Ross | Throughout the movie, Everett Ross's character arc takes him from a skeptical outsider to a valuable and loyal ally to Wakanda. As Ross becomes more involved in the affairs of Wakanda, he starts to see the country in a new light. Initially, his priorities were aligned with those of the CIA, but Ross's experiences with the Wakandans gradually shift his loyalties towards their mission. By the end of the movie, he becomes a willing and valuable ally of the people of Wakanda. | The character arc of Everett Ross is a bit underdeveloped, particularly in the early stages of the film. While he starts off as a skeptical outsider, his shift towards becoming a valuable ally is not as clearly defined as it could be. | To improve the character arc of Ross, clearer motivations could be given at the outset of the film. Additionally, further exploration of Ross's struggles and changes during his time in Wakanda would create a more well-rounded character arc. Improved dialogue and more meaningful interactions with the Wakandan people would also help create a more compelling character development. |
Riri Williams | Riri's journey in the movie begins with her being a talented student who has created a vibranium detector for a school project. She is initially hostile towards Okoye and Shuri when they approach her about her invention, but eventually agrees to come to Wakanda to help them. Throughout the movie, Riri continues to struggle with being away from home and adjusting to life in Wakanda. She also faces challenges when it comes to working with the Wakandans and relying on others for help. However, over time, Riri learns to trust and work with others, and she ultimately creates a powerful Ironheart suit that helps save the day. By the end of the movie, Riri has not only become a valuable part of the team, but she has also grown as a person and learned to open up to those around her. | The character arc for Riri is well-developed and realistic. However, it would be beneficial to see more of her struggles and conflicts earlier in the movie so that her growth and development feel more earned. | To improve the character arc for Riri, it would be helpful to show more of her struggles and conflicts earlier in the movie. This could include scenes that highlight her difficulty adapting to life in Wakanda and trusting others. Additionally, incorporating more moments of vulnerability and emotional depth would help the audience connect with Riri on a deeper level and make her growth feel more satisfying. |
Riri | Riri's character arc starts with her initial fear and reluctance to participate in dangerous missions. Through her interactions with the other characters, especially Shuri, she gains confidence and courage. Her passion for justice and helping others drives her to build a new Ironheart suit. In the final battle, she sacrifices herself to protect Wakanda, displaying bravery and determination. | The character arc is well executed, but there could be more development of Riri's relationships with the other characters. For example, her interactions with Nakia could be explored further since they are both outsiders in Wakanda. Additionally, her sacrifices in the final battle could be foreshadowed more to make it feel less sudden. | To improve the character arc, Riri's relationships with the other characters could be further developed. More moments of bonding and conflict could be shown to highlight the growth of her character. Additionally, her sacrifices in the final battle could be foreshadowed more, perhaps through a moment in which she explicitly declares her willingness to lay down her life for Wakanda. |
Ross | Ross begins the movie as a dedicated spy who is willing to take risks to complete his mission. He is a loyal ally of Wakanda but also cautious under pressure from the US government. Throughout the film, Ross becomes increasingly torn between his loyalty to Wakanda and his duty to the US government. When he is taken captive, he is forced to confront the consequences of his actions. In the end, Ross chooses to side with Wakanda and helps them take down the villain, signaling a shift in his loyalties. | The character arc for Ross is too predictable and lacks nuance. It's clear from the beginning where his loyalties lie, and there aren't any significant obstacles or challenges that he faces that make his decision more difficult to make. Additionally, the arc could be improved by showing more of Ross's internal struggle and his conflicting feelings about his duties to Wakanda and his country. | To improve the character arc, the film could include more scenes showing Ross's internal conflict and make that more of a focus. For example, they could have Ross questioning whether or not he's doing the right thing and struggling with his loyalties. Additionally, the story could introduce more obstacles that test Ross's resolve and make his decision to side with Wakanda more significant. |
Nakia | At the beginning of the movie, Nakia is sought out by Ramonda for help rescuing Shuri, showcasing her innovativeness and resourcefulness as well as her loyalty to Wakanda. As the movie progresses, she is haunted by the killings she had to commit and struggles with conflicted feelings towards her friends. However, she remains dedicated and resourceful, always ready to protect Wakanda and its people. In the end, she reveals her secret son and the plan to raise him outside of Wakanda to Shuri, indicating her strong connection to and love for her country. | While Nakia's character is strong and loyal, her arc could benefit from a clearer and more well-defined conflict. Her inner turmoil and struggles could be explored more thoroughly and could have a deeper impact on her character development. | To improve Nakia's arc, the conflicts she faces should be made more explicit and explored more thoroughly throughout the movie. By further delving into her inner struggles and showcasing her growth and development, her character could become even more dynamic and compelling. |
Namora | Namora's character arc involves her grappling with the conflicts between her loyalty to Namor and her sense of duty to her kingdom. While she initially supports Namor's alliances and decisions, she begins to see the danger he presents to their kingdom. Namora begins to question her own loyalties and comes to the realization that she must put Talocan's safety above all else. She becomes a key player in protecting their kingdom and ultimately helps to take down Namor when he becomes a threat. | While Namora's character arc is compelling, it would benefit from deeper exploration of her internal struggles and motivations. Additionally, her arc could be strengthened by showing more explicit moments of her growing concern and unease with Namor's actions. This would help to build her character arc more naturally and give the audience a stronger connection to her journey. | To improve Namora's character arc, consider incorporating more moments where she is shown grappling with her conflicting loyalties. Give her more explicit moments where she questions Namor's decisions, such as in conversations with other characters or internal monologues. This will help the audience understand her character arc more fully and create a stronger emotional connection to her journey. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation |
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Death and Loss | King T'Challa's death, mourning, and grieving are prominent throughout the screenplay. | The theme of death and loss is about coming to terms with the loss of loved ones and accepting the inevitability of death, coping with grief, and moving on. |
Redemption | Aneka seeks redemption after her past actions, and Namor offers it to her. | The theme of redemption deals with the idea of making amends for past misdeeds and finding a way to make up for past mistakes. |
Technology | Shuri's development of new technology and the creation of a new Black Panther are central to the plot of the screenplay. | The theme of technology is about innovation, scientific progress, and the impact of technology on society. |
Betrayal | Ross's ties to Wakanda are revealed, and he is placed under arrest. Namor violates an agreement and is held accountable. | The theme of betrayal explores the idea of trust and loyalty and the consequences of breaking them. |
Family and Heritage | Shuri and Nakia's relationship with Toussaint and the revelation of his identity as Prince T'Challa are significant to the plot. | The theme of family and heritage deals with the importance of relationships with family and cultural heritage, including traditions, customs, and ancestry. |
Responsibility | Shuri assumes the responsibility of developing new technology, creating a new Black Panther, and leading an attack on Namor. | The theme of responsibility explores the ethical and moral obligations that come with power, leadership, and authority. |
Culture Clash | Multiple instances of tension arise between different cultures: Wakandan, American, Haitian, Mayan, and Atlantean. | The theme of culture clash deals with the clashes that occur between different cultures as a result of misunderstandings or differences in values, beliefs, or customs. |
Overcoming Adversity | The characters face multiple obstacles and challenges, including the death of a loved one, hostage situations, betrayal, and attacks on their city. | The theme of overcoming adversity is about persevering through difficult circumstances and coming out stronger on the other side. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | ||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Characters | Character Changes | Conflict | High stakes | Story forward | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | ||
1 - Last Chance | "Urgent" | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 11 | 10 | 10 | 7 | ||
2 - T'Challa's Funeral | "somber" | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | ||
3 - UN Ambush | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
4 - Hostage Crisis and Diplomatic Tensions | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 10 | 8 | 8 | ||
5 - Deep-Sea Disaster | "intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 4 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 6 | ||
6 - Talocanil Invasion at Sea | "intense" | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 6 | ||
7 - Attacks and Explosions | "Tense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 6 | ||
8 - Shuri and Ramonda's Conversation | "Tense" | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 4 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 9 | ||
9 - Grief and Rituals | "Emotional" | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 10 | 9 | ||
10 - Namor Brings a Threat to Wakanda | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | ||
11 - Tribal Council Meeting | "Serious" | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 7 | 9 | ||
12 - The Vibranium Detector | "Serious" | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | ||
13 - Finding the Scientist | "Tense" | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 8 | ||
14 - Riri's Garage Raid | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 9 | ||
15 - Escape from Riri's Garage | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 7 | ||
16 - Escape from Cambridge | "intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 7 | ||
17 - Escape from Cambridge | "Intense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 6 | ||
18 - High-Flying Rescue | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
19 - Bridge Battle | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 11 | 9 | 9 | 7 | ||
20 - Escape from Cambridge | "intense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
21 - Okoye Loses Everything | "tense" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | ||
22 - In Pursuit of Wakandans | "tense" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | ||
23 - Rescue Mission | "tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | ||
24 - Ramonda's Ultimatum | "intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 11 | 9 | 9 | 8 | ||
25 - untitled | null | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
26 - Captives and Culture | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | ||
27 - Namor's Custody | "Tense" | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | ||
28 - Namor's Origin Story | "Serious" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | ||
29 - Namor's Duty | "Serious" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | ||
30 - Revelations in Talocan | "Hopeful" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | ||
31 - Infiltrating the NSA Facility | "Suspenseful" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 7 | ||
32 - Retrieving the Thumb Drive | "Suspenseful" | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 6 | ||
33 - Mission to Talocan | "intrigue" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 7 | ||
34 - Alliances and Ultimatums | "Serious" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
35 - Escape from the Talocanil Cave | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
36 - Return to Wakanda | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | ||
37 - Namor's Betrayal | "Tense" | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 11 | 10 | 8 | 9 | ||
38 - Threats and Escapes | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
39 - Under Attack | "tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | ||
40 - Attack on the Golden City | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
41 - Under Attack | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 6 | 6 | ||
42 - Namor Attacks | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
43 - Namor Attacks | "Tense" | 8 | 10 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 6 | ||
44 - Shuri's Grief | "emotional" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 8 | ||
45 - Mourning and Decision Making | "Somber" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 9 | 7 | ||
46 - Tribal Council Meeting and Okoye's Offer | "Serious" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
47 - Shuri's Call with Ross | "serious" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
48 - Building A Plan | "serious" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
49 - Shuri's Revenge Plan | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
50 - The Heart-Shaped Herb | "Serious" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | ||
51 - Revelation in the Ancestral Plane | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | ||
52 - The Return of the Black Panther | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | ||
53 - The Plan to Fight Namor | "serious" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | ||
54 - Pre-Battle Preparations | "Serious" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | ||
55 - The Battle with Namor | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | ||
56 - The Black Panther vs. Namor | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | ||
57 - Ambush and Capture of Namor | "Intense" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
58 - Midnight Angels Strike Back | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 6 | ||
59 - The Battle For Survival | "intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 7 | ||
60 - The Battle for Wakanda | "Intense" | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 8 | ||
61 - Confrontation and Yield | "tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
62 - Val confronts Ross | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 10 | ||
63 - Van Attack and Namor's Lair | "Intense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
64 - Repentance and Redemption | "Reflective" | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 8 | ||
65 - The Throne Challenge | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 3 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | ||
66 - Farewell and New Beginnings | "emotional" | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 10 | 8 | ||
67 - Family Secrets Revealed | "Emotional" | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 10 | 8 |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Death of a Main Character | King T'Challa dies, leaving a void in Wakanda that needs to be filled | One of the most common tropes in screenwriting where a beloved character dies, which creates a sense of loss and emotional turmoil in the audience. This trope has been used in multiple movies and TV shows including Game of Thrones where multiple main characters die throughout the series. |
Hostage Situation | Mercenaries take the Mali Outreach Center hostage, demanding access to vibranium | A plot device where a group of people are held hostage, creating a sense of urgency and danger. This trope is commonly used in crime and action thrillers, one example of which would be Die Hard where John McClane battles a group of terrorists who have taken hostages in a building |
Secret Organization/Conspiracy | The government is suspicious of Wakanda's technology and wants to investigate it | A plot device that involves a secret organization or conspiracy, which usually works behind the scenes and operates outside the law. This trope has been used in multiple movies and TV shows including the Bourne series where the main character tries to uncover a conspiracy within the CIA. |
Redemption Arc | Namor offers Aneka redemption | A character who initially starts off as a villain but later redeems themselves by performing a heroic act or by working to make things right. This trope is commonly used in superhero movies and TV shows, one example of which would be Loki, who starts as a villain in the Marvel Cinematic Universe but later redeems himself. |
Revenge Plot | Shuri contemplates revenge against Namor | A plot device that involves a character seeking revenge against someone who has wronged them. This trope has been used in multiple movies and TV shows including Kill Bill where the main character seeks revenge against the people who wronged her. |
Chosen One | Shuri and her team work on developing a new Black Panther successor | A plot device where a character is chosen to fulfill a specific destiny or mission. This trope is commonly used in fantasy and sci-fi movies and TV shows, one example of which would be Harry Potter where he is chosen to defeat Voldemort and save the wizarding world. |
Family Reunion | Shuri meets her nephew, Prince T'Challa, and forms an emotional connection with him | A plot device where family members who have been separated from each other for a long time are reunited. This trope is commonly used in dramas and comedies, one example of which would be the movie Coco where a boy is reunited with his deceased family members during the Day of the Dead festival. |
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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52 | M'Baku: THE BLACK PANTHER LIVES!!!! |
56 | Shuri: I am the spirit of a murdered queen, the wrath of a wounded nation, I am the Black Panther! And I am here for retribution. |
37 | Namor: We will match bloodshed with bloodshed. |
24 | Namor: If you try to find us...I will kill the Princess, and then I will come to Wakanda and kill you. Do you understand? |
5 | Dr. Graham: We lost them! GODDAMN IT. |
Some Loglines to consider:
Wakanda faces an imminent threat of war from Namor, and a group of military-types venture into the seas to find vibranium. |
Queen Ramonda takes the reins of Wakanda's vibranium policy while defending against a mercenary attack on a Mali outreach center. |
Shuri becomes the Black Panther again and strategizes to weaken Namor through dehydration, leading to his capture. |
A tragedy strikes as Wakandan forces foil attacks to safeguard their vibranium mines and the kingdom. |
Ross is taken into custody as Shuri nostalgically remembers T'Challa while bidding Okoye farewell. |
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Explanation: The Black Panther screenplay is a compelling story with strong female characters, relevant themes, and exciting action sequences. However, it suffers from pacing issues, underdeveloped characters, and an underdeveloped resolution. With some revisions, it has the potential to be a highly successful film.