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BREAKING BAD by Vince Gilligan 5/27/05 AMC
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INT. WHITE HOUSE - KITCHEN - MORNING Walt is dressed for work -- Dockers and a short-sleeve dress shirt courtesy of Target. An American flag pin on his tie. He and Skyler eat their breakfast in silence. Skyler glances up, sees Walt puzzling over his bacon.
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EXT. VELVET-TOUCH CAR WASH - AFTERNOON The sun's sinking low. walt -- master's degree, Inland Empire Science Educator of the Year for '92, '95, and '01 is towel-drying cars alongside the teenage vatos. His slacks and shoes are spotted with soapy water. He's grim.
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INT. WHITE HOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM/BATHROOM - NIGHT Walt, dressed for bed in sweats and a t-shirt, checks himself out in the bathroom mirror. He's not loving what he sees. He pulls at the skin under his eyes. He COUGHS a little. In the bedroom, Sky1er's in her nightgown, sitting at the
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INT. ER - EXAM ROOM - DAY Walt is conscious, seems okay. He sits in a blue paper gown, legs dangling off an exam table. He's alone, waiting. Absently tapping the table. He's been here for hours. Muffled RINGING. Walt reaches for his pants, fishes out his
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INT. WHITE HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS The end of "Scarface" plays on the TV. TONY MONTANA, with his mountain of cocaine and his M-16, takes on all comers. Walter, Jr. is sprawled on the couch, watching. His crutches are leaned against the armrest.
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EXT. TARGET HOUSE - MORNING Hank, Gomez and Walt wait in the Ford. The RADIO crackles. AGENT (RADIO V.O.) House is clear. We've got one suspect in custody.
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INT. WHITE HOUSE - KITCHEN - AFTERNOON Brown shipping tape gets pulled off its roll with a SKRRECK! skyler seals a cardboard box, readies it for the post office. The kitchen table is stacked with bubble wrap and boxes. Marie helps pack. She holds up an item.
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EXT. BUNGALOW - AFTERNOON Dupree sits on his front porch, drinking a long-neck beer and glowering. Walt's Nissan putters into view, reverses and backs into Dupree's driveway. Walt climbs out, jazzed. WALT
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INT. CREDIT UNION - AFTERNOON The name on the wall says "Ontario Teachers Credit Union." It's closing time. We find Walt standing at the counter, doing business with a TELLER and a BRANCH MANAGER. CLOSER -- crisp ONE HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS get counted out.
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INT. DEPARTMENT STORE - NIGHT - MINUTES LATER We're in a Target or somesuch. The men's department. walter, Jr. stands before a mirror, balancing on his crutches as he appraises his new jeans. Skyler and Walt stand behind him. Walt's thoughts are distant as he watches his son.
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INT. WINNEBAGO - EVENING It's getting dark outside. The cook is done. Walt sits in his apron, tired. He rubs at the red line around his face left by his respirator, trying to make it go away. They've made about a pound of fat, snowy white crystals.
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EXT. WOODS - DAY It's a second day of cooking for Walt. He's out here alone with the Winnebago, having just arrived. He puts his coat hanger on the awning and strips down, hanging up his good clothes. As he ties on his lab apron •••
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EXT. COW PASTURE - DAY - MINUTES LATER We start on BLACK, then PULL OUT of the barrel of Walt's gun. We find ourselves where the Teaser left off -- Walt is aiming past us, standing in his shirt and tie and underpants. SIRENS are wailing. We see RED LIGHTS flashing just over top

Breaking bad

A high school chemistry teacher turned methamphetamine manufacturing drug dealer partners with a former student to secure his family's future.

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"Breaking Bad" is a unique and gripping drama series that delves into the complex world of crime and morality. With its gritty characters, intense plot lines, and exploration of human nature, "Breaking Bad" stands out from other crime dramas with a gripping narrative that keeps viewers on the edge of their seats. The series' unique blend of dark humor, suspense, and character development sets it apart as a must-watch for fans of the genre.

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Genres: Drama, Crime, Thriller, Family, Slice of Life, Comedy

Setting: Contemporary, Various locations including a cow pasture, a high school, a car wash, a house, a kitchen, a meth lab, and a Winnebago

Themes: Moral Conflict, Family Relationships, Power and Corruption, Identity, Consequences

Conflict & Stakes: The primary conflicts revolve around Walt's internal struggle with his actions, his battle with cancer, and the consequences of his choices on his family. The stakes include his life, his family's safety, and his moral integrity.

Mood: Dark, intense, suspenseful

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  • Complex Characters: Walt's transformation from a mild-mannered teacher to a ruthless drug lord is a standout feature.
  • Moral Ambiguity: The exploration of moral gray areas and the consequences of one's choices adds depth to the story.
  • Intense Drama: The tension, suspense, and high-stakes situations create a gripping viewing experience.

Comparable Scripts: The Shield, The Wire, Breaking Bad, Fargo, No Country for Old Men

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