Thor
A arrogant god of thunder is cast down to Earth as a mortal and must learn humility before he can reclaim his power and save his home from his treacherous brother.
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Unique Selling Point
The Unique Selling Proposition in this screenplay lies in its combination of scientific investigation and mystical elements, creating a compelling and intriguing story. With its unique blend of suspense, action, and emotional depth, this script sets itself apart from others in the genre. Targeting audiences who enjoy science fiction and fantasy, this screenplay offers a fresh take on traditional superhero narratives, showcasing distinctive characters and innovative storytelling techniques. With its captivating plot twists and themes of identity, loyalty, and sacrifice, this script offers a compelling piece of storytelling that will engage and resonate with its target audience.
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This rating is from a single AI engine based on structure, character, tone, and emotional engagement.
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Story Facts
Genres: Science, Fiction, Adventure, Fantasy, Action, Sci-Fi, Family, Comedy, Drama
Setting: Present day, A small town in the Midwest
Conflict & Stakes: John's struggle to clear his name after being falsely accused of a crime, with his family's reputation at stake
Mood: Tense and suspenseful, with moments of hope and determination
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: A young man falsely accused of a crime must fight to clear his name while navigating a corrupt justice system
- Plot Twist: The corrupt police officer who framed John is revealed to be the mastermind behind a larger conspiracy
- Distinctive Setting: The small-town setting creates a sense of claustrophobia and isolation that heightens the tension
- Innovative Idea: The film explores the theme of truth and justice through the lens of a small-town legal battle
Comparable Scripts: Thor, Avengers: Age of Ultron, Men in Black, Stranger Things, Interstellar, Close Encounters of the Third Kind, Arrival, E.T. the Extra-Terrestrial, Independence Day, The X-Files, The Day After Tomorrow, Contact, Independence Day: Resurgence, Cloverfield, The Avengers, Pacific Rim, War of the Worlds, Stranger Things 3, The Mist, The Cloverfield Paradox
Script Level Analysis
This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.
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Story Critique
Characters
Emotional Analysis
Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Logic & Inconsistencies
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Executive Summary
Thor is a promising screenplay with a captivating premise, strong character dynamics, and a compelling character arc for the protagonist. However, it could benefit from addressing pacing issues, further developing certain characters' motivations, and exploring the Asgardian world and the conflict with the Frost Giants in greater depth. With some refinements, it has the potential to be a successful superhero film with a unique blend of mythology and sci-fi elements.
- Compelling premise and world-building: The introduction of Asgard and the Nine Realms offers a unique and intriguing setting for a superhero film, blending Norse mythology with sci-fi elements. high
- Strong character dynamics: The relationship between Thor and Loki is complex and engaging, showcasing their brotherly bond, rivalry, and contrasting personalities. The Warriors Three and Sif also provide a strong supporting cast with their own distinct traits. high ( Scene 17 Scene 26 )
- Thor's character arc: His journey from arrogance to humility is well-developed, as he learns valuable lessons about responsibility and selflessness through his experiences on Earth. high ( Scene 62 Scene 97 )
- Jane Foster's character: She is a strong and intelligent female protagonist, driven by her passion for science and her desire to understand the unknown. Her interactions with Thor provide a grounded perspective on the extraordinary events. medium ( Scene 1 Scene 45 )
- Humor: The screenplay incorporates moments of humor effectively, particularly in the interactions between Thor and the humans, providing levity and contrast to the more serious themes. medium ( Scene 89 Scene 92A Scene 92C )
- Pacing issues: The Jotunheim sequence feels rushed, with Thor's decision to attack the Frost Giants seeming impulsive and lacking sufficient build-up. The battle itself could benefit from more strategic planning and showcasing of individual character strengths. high ( Scene 34 Scene 35 )
- Heimdall's role: His motivations and actions regarding the Frost Giants' infiltration are unclear, requiring further exploration to understand his position in the conflict. medium ( Scene 27 Scene 29 )
- Loki's motivations: While his jealousy towards Thor is evident, his alliance with Laufey and the reasons behind his desire to destroy Jotunheim could be further developed. medium ( Scene 95 )
- S.H.I.E.L.D.'s role: Their actions, particularly confiscating Jane's research, seem heavy-handed and could be better justified, perhaps by highlighting the potential threat of the Bifrost or the Asgardians. low ( Scene 66A )
- Exploration of Asgardian culture and politics: While the screenplay establishes Asgard as a powerful realm, it would be beneficial to delve deeper into its societal structure, customs, and internal conflicts. medium
- Backstory of the Frost Giants: Providing more context about their history, motivations, and grievances with Asgard would enhance the depth of the conflict. medium
- Development of the romance between Thor and Jane: While there is a spark between them, their relationship could be further explored to create a more emotional connection. low
- The opening sequence effectively sets the stage for the story, introducing the grandeur of Asgard and the conflict with the Frost Giants. high ( Scene 13 Scene 14 )
- Odin's character is complex, displaying both wisdom and flaws, as he struggles with the challenges of leadership and protecting his realm. high ( Scene 16 Scene 61 )
- The scene where Thor explains the Nine Realms to Jane is a pivotal moment, showcasing the intersection of science and mythology. high ( Scene 100 )
- Thor's return as the God of Thunder and his defeat of the Destroyer is a satisfying climax, showcasing his heroism and redemption. high ( Scene 136 )
- The ending leaves the possibility open for a sequel, with Jane's continued research and Thor's desire to return to Earth. medium ( Scene 159 Scene 163 )
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 8.1, The screenplay demonstrates solid character development, creating engaging and relatable characters that drive the narrative forward. However, there are a few areas where enhancements could deepen the character arcs and increase the emotional impact of the story. See More
Premise: 8.8, The screenplay presents a clear and intriguing premise that sets up a compelling narrative. The originality and depth of the premise are noteworthy, promising a captivating and thought-provoking story for the audience. To enhance its foundational appeal, consider refining some aspects of the premise to further strengthen its clarity and engagement. See More
Structure: 7.8, The screenplay showcases an engaging structure and plot that effectively introduce the characters, establish the conflict, and drive the narrative towards a satisfying resolution. However, there are areas where the structure could be refined to enhance narrative clarity and strengthen the emotional impact of the story. See More
Theme: 8.3, The screenplay effectively explores the themes of heroism, sacrifice, and redemption through the character arcs of Thor, Loki, and Odin. However, the message about the importance of family could be further clarified and integrated into the narrative. See More
Visual Impact: 7.2, The screenplay provides strong visuals and imaginative settings, with a distinct cinematic feel. The inclusion of fantastical elements, particularly in the scenes set in Jotunheim, paint a vivid and otherworldly picture. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.2, The screenplay effectively elicits emotional responses through relatable character arcs and powerful scenes that explore themes of redemption, love, self-sacrifice, and the conflict between duty and desire. While the emotional impact is strong, there are opportunities to enhance the emotional depth and resonance by refining character motivations, exploring psychological complexities, and adding moments of introspection and vulnerability. See More
Conflict: 7.2, The screenplay presents a compelling conflict between Thor and Loki, centering around their clash for the throne of Asgard and their contrasting approaches to protecting their realm. The stakes are high, involving the fate of Asgard and the safety of Earth. However, the narrative's tension could be further enhanced through clearer stakes escalation, more impactful character arcs, and a more satisfying resolution. See More
Originality: 6.8, The screenplay contains creative elements in its exploration of Norse mythology and the interactions between its divine characters. However, it could benefit from further innovation in its narrative structure and character development to fully stand out. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- Jane and Selvig, along with their intern Darcy, investigate a series of anomalies in the sky. They set up equipment and eagerly wait for the anomaly to appear. However, it takes longer than usual and they start to worry. Suddenly, they notice odd glowing clouds forming in the distance. The equipment starts malfunctioning and the champagne bottle they were holding explodes. As they look outside, they are greeted by massive clouds of rainbow light in the sky. Excited, they drive towards the phenomenon.
- Jane, Selvig, and Darcy investigate anomalies in the sky. After setting up equipment, they wait eagerly for the anomaly to appear. It takes longer than expected, causing them to worry. Suddenly, they notice odd glowing clouds forming in the distance. The equipment malfunctions and the champagne bottle they were holding explodes. They then see massive clouds of rainbow light in the sky. Excited, they drive towards the phenomenon.
- Jane, Selvig, and Darcy set up equipment to investigate anomalies in the sky. They eagerly wait for the anomaly to appear, but it takes longer than expected. Suddenly, they notice odd glowing clouds forming in the distance and their equipment malfunctions. As they look outside, they see massive clouds of rainbow light in the sky and drive towards the phenomenon.
- Jane, Selvig, and Darcy set up equipment to investigate anomalies in the sky. They eagerly wait for the anomaly to appear, but it takes longer than expected. Suddenly, they notice odd glowing clouds forming in the distance and their equipment malfunctions. As they look outside, they see massive clouds of rainbow light in the sky and drive towards the phenomenon.
- Jane, Selvig, and Darcy investigate anomalies in the sky. After setting up equipment, they wait eagerly for the anomaly to appear. It takes longer than expected, causing them to worry. Suddenly, they notice odd glowing clouds forming in the distance. The equipment malfunctions and the champagne bottle they were holding explodes. They then see massive clouds of rainbow light in the sky. Excited, they drive towards the phenomenon.
- Jane, Selvig, and Darcy set up equipment to investigate anomalies in the sky. They eagerly wait for the anomaly to appear, but it takes longer than expected. Suddenly, they notice odd glowing clouds forming in the distance and their equipment malfunctions. As they look outside, they see massive clouds of rainbow light in the sky and drive towards the phenomenon.
- Thor and his companions enter the Vault to find it in ruins and the Destroyer holding the Casket. Odin assures them that the Frost Giants have paid the price for their actions, but Thor is determined to take further action. Odin disagrees and tells Thor that they will find and fix the breach in their defenses.
- Thor, filled with anger and frustration, upends tables in the banquet hall. Loki watches him. The rest of the Warriors Three enter the hall and express surprise at the chaos. Thor explains his plan to go to Jotunheim to protect Asgard's borders from the Frost Giants. The others are concerned and warn him against breaking the laws. Thor convinces them with his past exploits and they agree to accompany him.
- Thor and his companions embark on a mission to protect Asgard's borders from the Frost Giants. They encounter Heimdall, the Gatekeeper of Asgard, who questions their motives but ultimately allows them to pass. The group enters Heimdall's Observatory to activate the Bifrost and travel to Jotunheim.
- Thor and his companions activate the Bifrost and travel to Jotunheim, a frozen alien wasteland. They land on the planet's inner ring, facing the danger of falling into space. They are greeted by a crumbling Jotun city and search for their enemy, unaware of shadowy figures lurking nearby.
- Thor and his companions confront Laufey, the King of Jotunheim, demanding answers about the breach in Asgard's defenses. Laufey accuses Odin of being a murderer and thief, and tension escalates. Thor and his comrades engage in a battle against the Frost Giants, showcasing their combat skills and teamwork.
- Thor and his companions engage in a fierce battle against the Frost Giants in Jotunheim. Each member of the group showcases their combat skills and teamwork as they fight off the enemy. Volstagg and Hogun face personal struggles in the fight, while Fandral is impaled by an ice stalagmite. Loki comes to Fandral's aid but is soon overwhelmed by additional Frost Giants.
- Thor and his companions engage in a fierce battle against the Frost Giants in Jotunheim. Each member of the group showcases their combat skills and teamwork as they fight off the enemy. Volstagg and Hogun face personal struggles in the fight, while Fandral is impaled by an ice stalagmite. Loki comes to Fandral's aid but is soon overwhelmed by additional Frost Giants.
- Thor and his companions engage in a fierce battle against the Frost Giants on the frozen planet of Jotunheim. Each member of the group showcases their combat skills and teamwork as they fight off the enemy. Volstagg and Hogun face personal struggles in the fight, while Fandral is impaled by an ice stalagmite. Loki comes to Fandral's aid but is soon overwhelmed by additional Frost Giants. Just as they are about to be overwhelmed, Odin arrives on his steed Sleipnir and intervenes, stopping a confrontation between Laufey and himself. Odin and Laufey engage in a brief conversation before Laufey attempts to attack Odin. However, Odin is quicker and sends Laufey and the other Jotuns falling backwards, causing the remaining Giants to flee. Just as Thor and his companions prepare to finish them off, Odin raises his spear and uses the Bifrost to transport them back to Asgard.
- Thor and his companions engage in a fierce battle against the Frost Giants in Jotunheim. Volstagg and Hogun face personal struggles, while Fandral is impaled. Loki comes to Fandral's aid but is overwhelmed. Odin intervenes and confronts Laufey. Odin uses the Bifrost to transport Thor and his companions back to Asgard. In Heimdall's Observatory, Odin reprimands Thor for his actions and strips him of his powers. Thor is cast out through the Bifrost by Odin.
- Thor and his companions engage in a fierce battle against the Frost Giants in Jotunheim. Each member showcases their combat skills and teamwork, but face personal struggles. Fandral is impaled and Loki comes to his aid but is overwhelmed. Odin intervenes, confronts Laufey, and uses the Bifrost to transport Thor and his companions back to Asgard. Thor is later cast out by Odin. In another scene, Thor wakes up after being hit by a car and meets Jane and her friends
- After being hit by a car and tasered, Thor is taken to a hospital where he causes chaos and is sedated.
- Thor and his companions engage in a fierce battle against the Frost Giants on the frozen planet of Jotunheim. Volstagg and Hogun face personal struggles, while Fandral is impaled. Loki comes to Fandral's aid but is overwhelmed. Odin intervenes and confronts Laufey. Odin uses the Bifrost to transport Thor and his companions back to Asgard. Thor is later cast out by Odin. In another scene, Thor wakes up after being hit by a car and meets Jane and her friends.
- Thor wakes up in a hospital room and tries to free himself from restraints. Jane pretends to be his wife to gain access to him. They find Thor's room empty and quickly head out to find him. They accidentally hit Thor with a car, but he seems disoriented. Jane suggests getting him clothes.
- Thor's companions discuss their injuries and lament Thor's banishment. Loki reveals that he was the one who told a guard about their trip to Jotunheim. The companions debate whether or not to go to Odin and share their suspicions that Loki is betraying Asgard. They ultimately decide it is their duty to confront Odin.
- Loki confronts Odin in the Vault and demands to know the truth about his origins. Odin reveals that Loki was adopted and taken from Jotunheim as a baby. Loki feels betrayed and questions his identity and purpose. Odin collapses from the strain of recent events as Loki calls for help.
- Thor wakes up in a hospital room after being hit by a car and meets Jane and her friends.
- Loki confronts Odin about his true origins and feels betrayed. Frigga reassures Loki of his place in the family and the responsibility he now holds. The guards acknowledge Loki as the new ruler of Asgard in Thor's absence.
- Thor wakes up in a hospital room after being hit by a car and meets Jane and her friends. They go to a local diner where Thor eats ravenously. They discuss Thor's recent experiences and overhear a conversation about a satellite crash in the desert. Thor becomes excited by the possibility and asks for more information. He quickly leaves the diner, despite warnings about the Army's involvement.
- Thor asks Jane to take him to a satellite crash site, promising to give her answers in return. Selvig warns Jane about the danger of trusting Thor. Jane ultimately decides not to take Thor, and they say their goodbyes. Meanwhile, Loki sits on the throne of Asgard and asserts his authority as the new ruler.
- Jane discovers that SHIELD has taken all of her research equipment and data. She confronts them but is ultimately unsuccessful in stopping them. She is devastated by the loss. Meanwhile, Selvig offers to contact Dr. Pym for help. Jane then sees Thor and offers him a ride.
- Thor wakes up in a hospital room and meets Jane and her friends. They discuss a satellite crash in the desert and Thor becomes excited. Thor asks Jane to take him to the crash site, but she decides not to. Jane discovers that SHIELD has taken her research equipment. Meanwhile, in Asgard, Loki asserts his authority as the new ruler.
- Thor infiltrates the SHIELD desert base to reclaim Mjolnir. Jane contacts Selvig for help. Security is alerted to Thor's presence.
- Thor infiltrates the SHIELD desert base to reclaim Mjolnir, encountering and defeating guards along the way. Meanwhile, Jane watches from a distance and Coulson coordinates the defense. Barton, a sniper, prepares to take a shot at Thor.
- Thor infiltrates the SHIELD desert base to reclaim his hammer, Mjolnir. He encounters a huge SHIELD agent who blocks his way. Thor manages to defeat him and heads towards the cube structure where Mjolnir is. However, he fails to lift the hammer and falls to his knees. SHIELD agents surround Thor and Coulson calls off the operation. Thor sits broken and lost as the scene ends.
- Jane and her friends discuss the possibility of Thor's hammer being real and Jane convinces Selvig to help her find him.
- Thor infiltrates the SHIELD desert base to reclaim his hammer, Mjolnir. He defeats a huge SHIELD agent and heads towards the cube structure where Mjolnir is. However, he fails to lift the hammer and is surrounded by SHIELD agents. Coulson calls off the operation and Thor sits broken and lost. Meanwhile, Jane convinces Selvig to help her find Thor.
- Thor infiltrates the SHIELD base to reclaim his hammer, but fails to lift it and is surrounded by SHIELD agents. Coulson calls off the operation and Thor sits broken. Meanwhile, Jane convinces Selvig to help her find Thor. In a ruined temple, Loki proposes a plan to Laufey to overthrow Odin and rule Asgard. Laufey accepts the proposition. Loki returns to Asgard and confronts Heimdall, ordering him to obey him instead of Odin.
- Thor and Selvig have a heart-to-heart conversation at a bar, where Selvig expresses his concern for Jane and Thor admits he doesn't know what to do. They are interrupted by a drunk townie who tries to provoke Thor, but Selvig steps in and knocks him out. Thor and Selvig leave the bar singing and dancing, and Thor carries Selvig on his shoulder towards Jane's trailer.
- Thor brings Selvig back to Jane's trailer, where they have a heart-to-heart conversation. Thor shows tenderness towards Selvig and they share a moment of friendship. Thor then takes Jane to the rooftop where they discuss her research and he teaches her about the Nine Realms. They spend the night together.
- Volstagg, Sif, Fandral, and Hogun discuss the dire situation in Asgard and the need to find Thor. Heimdall demands their presence.
- The Warriors Three and Sif search for Thor, who has landed in the New Mexico desert. They use their tracking skills to look for signs of his presence and end up in the town of Puente Antiguo. Meanwhile, back in Asgard, Loki learns that they have gone missing and suspects foul play.
- Loki confronts Heimdall on the Rainbow Bridge and strips him of his duties. He unleashes the power of the Casket of Ancient Winters against Heimdall but is stopped at the last moment. Loki then goes to Heimdall's observatory and opens the Bifrost, summoning the Destroyer. Meanwhile, Thor and his friends are visited by Sif and the Warriors Three who have come to take him back to Asgard. They reveal that their father is still alive, shocking Thor. Coulson and SHIELD agents witness the arrival of the Destroyer on Earth.
- Thor and the Asgardians prepare for battle against the Destroyer in Puente Antiguo. Thor urges Jane and the townspeople to get to safety while he stays to fight. The Warriors Three and Sif head towards the Destroyer while Thor and his friends clear the streets and protect the innocent. The Destroyer, however, proves to be a formidable opponent, overpowering the Asgardians and causing chaos in the town.
- Thor and his friends are engaged in a battle against the Destroyer in Puente Antiguo. Thor uses a healing stone to save Selvig's life and devises a plan to save his friends. He confronts the Destroyer alone, apologizes to Loki, and offers his life in exchange for sparing the innocent people. Thor is brutally attacked by the Destroyer and seemingly killed in front of his friends. Odin, in his chambers, sheds a tear. Mjolnir, Thor's hammer, begins to react and flies into the air.
- Thor and his friends engage in a fierce battle against the Destroyer in Puente Antiguo. Thor sacrifices himself to save innocent lives, seemingly getting killed in the process. But he is resurrected and defeats the Destroyer with the help of his hammer, Mjolnir.
- Thor and his friends engage in a fierce battle against the Destroyer in Puente Antiguo. Thor sacrifices himself to save innocent lives, seemingly getting killed in the process. But he is resurrected and defeats the Destroyer with the help of his hammer, Mjolnir.
- Thor and Loki engage in a fierce battle in Heimdall's Observatory. Loki reveals his plan to destroy the Frost Giants and takeover Asgard. Thor tries to reason with him, but Loki attacks and they fight each other. Meanwhile, the Bifrost energy is tearing apart Jotunheim and causing chaos on Earth.
- Thor and Loki engage in a fierce battle in Heimdall's Observatory. Loki reveals his plan to destroy the Frost Giants and takeover Asgard. Thor tries to reason with him, but Loki attacks and they fight each other. Meanwhile, the Bifrost energy is tearing apart Jotunheim and causing chaos on Earth.
- Thor and his friends celebrate their victory over the Destroyer at a feast in Odin's Palace. Volstagg recounts their battle, while Frigga struggles with sadness. Thor mourns for his brother and leaves the hall. He talks to Odin on the palace balcony, expressing his desire to learn and make his father proud. Thor then visits Heimdall on the Rainbow Bridge and asks about Jane on Earth. The scene ends with Jane working on a way to help Thor find his way back to Asgard.
Thor - Score: 85/100
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Jane - Score: 84/100
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Loki - Score: 83/100
Aliases
The God of Mischief, Laufey's son
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Antagonist
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Selvig - Score: 74/100
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Supporting Character
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Darcy - Score: 67/100
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Supporting Character
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Sif - Score: 73/100
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Volstagg - Score: 75/100
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Fandral - Score: 66/100
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Hogun - Score: 63/100
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Odin - Score: 85/100
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Coulson - Score: 67/100
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| Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
|---|---|
| internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals in the screenplay are focused on understanding, self-discovery, and validation. |
| External Goals | The protagonist's external goals in the screenplay are centered around exploration, protection, and personal growth. |
| Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in the screenplay revolves around the tension between duty and personal desires, the nature of power, and the significance of family bonds. |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to the protagonist's development by challenging their beliefs, values, and worldviews, and pushing them to reflect on their actions, grow, and make significant choices.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to the narrative structure by driving the plot forward and creating tension, conflict, and suspense. They serve as catalysts for the protagonist's actions and drive the story towards its climax and resolution.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring profound themes such as identity, power, duty, redemption, family, and the nature of heroism. They invite viewers to reflect on moral and philosophical questions and delve into the complex motivations and psychological journeys of the characters.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
| Site | Description |
|---|---|
| Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
| Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
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| How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
| Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
| Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
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| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
| 1 - The Aurora | Mysterious, Exciting, Worrisome | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 5 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
| 2 - Encounter with the Anomaly | Excitement, Worry, Wonder, Relief | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | |
| 3 - The Worlds Tree | Excitement, Wonder, Mystery | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 4 - Preparation for the Ceremony | Excitement, Tension, Playfulness, Dramatic | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 5 - Anomaly in the Sky | Excitement, Worry, Tension | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | |
| 6 - Discovering the Anomaly | Excitement, Suspense, Seriousness | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 7 - The Destroyer's Attack | Shocked, Awed, Determined | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 8 - Thor and the Warriors Three plan to go to Jotunheim | Anger, Frustration, Concern, Conviction | 10 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 9 - Journey to Jotunheim | Excitement, Tension, Determination | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 10 - Embarking on a Dangerous Mission | Exciting, Tense, Serious, Humorous | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 11 - Battle in Jotunheim | tension, confrontational, defensive | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 12 - Battle in Jotunheim | Anger, Frustration, Surprise, Concern | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 13 - Battle in Jotunheim | Intense, Tense, Desperate | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | |
| 14 - The Battle on Jotunheim | Tense, Dramatic, Defiant | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
| 15 - The Fall of Thor | Intense, Tense, Serious | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 16 - Battle in Jotunheim | Intense, Suspenseful, Exciting, Serious, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 17 - Thor's Arrival in the Hospital | Fierce, Interest, Curiosity, Sympathetic, Angry, Shocked, Amazed | 7 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
| 18 - The Battle in Jotunheim | Intense, Serious, Exciting, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | |
| 19 - Thor awakens in a hospital and reunites with Jane and her friends | Intense, Dramatic, Humorous | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
| 20 - Post-Battle Reflection | Intense, Tense, Serious | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
| 21 - Loki's Revelation | Intense, Suspenseful, Revealing, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 22 - Thor's Awakening | Intense, Dramatic, Suspenseful | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
| 23 - Revelations and Responsibilities | Intense, Heartfelt, Conflicted | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
| 24 - Thor's Hungry Adventure | Intrigued, Eager, Amazed, Unconcerned, Puzzled, Excited, Amused | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 2 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
| 25 - Thor's Decision | 9 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | ||
| 26 - Confrontation and Loss | Dramatic, Serious, Tense | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 27 - The Search for Mjolnir | Excitement, Tension, Curiosity | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
| 28 - Thor's Infiltration | Excited, Intense, Serious | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 29 - Thor infiltrates SHIELD desert base to reclaim Mjolnir | Tense, Exciting | 10 | 9 | 10 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | |
| 30 - Thor's Failed Attempt to Retrieve Mjolnir | Intense, Tense, Disappointing, Heartbreaking | 7 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 10 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | |
| 31 - Jane and Selvig's Discovery | Excitement, Determination, Uncertainty | 9 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 32 - Revelations and Goodbyes | Tense, Emotional | 10 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 33 - Thor Reclaims Mjolnir | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | ||
| 34 - Betrayal and Redemption | 6 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | ||
| 35 - Thor and Selvig bond | Serious, Emotional, Lighthearted | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 7 | |
| 36 - Reconnecting and Planning | Excitement, Tension, Friendship, Tenderness | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 37 - Volstagg's Concern | Dramatic, Suspenseful, Serious | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 38 - The Warriors Three and Sif Search for Thor | Intense, Mysterious, Humorous | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 39 - Loki's Betrayal | Serious, Intense, Dramatic, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
| 40 - The Battle in Puente Antiguo | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | ||
| 41 - The Sacrifice | Dire, Suspenseful, Brave, Heartwrenching, Sacrificial | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 42 - The Battle Against the Destroyer | Intense, Dramatic, Solemn | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | |
| 43 - The Battle on the Rainbow Bridge | Intense, Serious | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | |
| 44 - The Battle with Loki | Intense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | |
| 45 - The Final Showdown | Intense, Sacrifice, Desperation | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
| 46 - Asgard's Hope | Fierce, Sad, Regretful, Hopeful | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
Tip: Click on criteria in the top row for detailed summaries.
Scene Strengths
- Engaging premise
- Intense action sequences
- Strong character dynamics
- Emotional impact
- Effective tension-building
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited character development
- Lack of significant plot development
- Dialogue could be more impactful
- Some dialogue not memorable
- Lack of intense action or high-stakes conflicts
Suggestions
- Focus on developing deeper and more complex character arcs
- Explore themes in greater depth
- Create more impactful and memorable dialogue
- Increase the level of conflict and raise the stakes in key scenes
- Incorporate more unique and innovative elements to enhance the story
Scene 1 - The Aurora
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 2 - Encounter with the Anomaly
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 3 - The Worlds Tree
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 4 - Preparation for the Ceremony
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 5 - Anomaly in the Sky
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 6 - Discovering the Anomaly
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 7 - The Destroyer's Attack
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 8 - Thor and the Warriors Three plan to go to Jotunheim
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 9 - Journey to Jotunheim
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 10 - Embarking on a Dangerous Mission
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 11 - Battle in Jotunheim
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 12 - Battle in Jotunheim
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 13 - Battle in Jotunheim
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 14 - The Battle on Jotunheim
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 15 - The Fall of Thor
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 16 - Battle in Jotunheim
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 17 - Thor's Arrival in the Hospital
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 18 - The Battle in Jotunheim
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 19 - Thor awakens in a hospital and reunites with Jane and her friends
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 20 - Post-Battle Reflection
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 21 - Loki's Revelation
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 22 - Thor's Awakening
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 23 - Revelations and Responsibilities
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 24 - Thor's Hungry Adventure
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 25 - Thor's Decision
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 26 - Confrontation and Loss
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 27 - The Search for Mjolnir
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 28 - Thor's Infiltration
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 29 - Thor infiltrates SHIELD desert base to reclaim Mjolnir
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 30 - Thor's Failed Attempt to Retrieve Mjolnir
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 31 - Jane and Selvig's Discovery
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 32 - Revelations and Goodbyes
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 33 - Thor Reclaims Mjolnir
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 34 - Betrayal and Redemption
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 35 - Thor and Selvig bond
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 36 - Reconnecting and Planning
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 37 - Volstagg's Concern
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 38 - The Warriors Three and Sif Search for Thor
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 39 - Loki's Betrayal
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 40 - The Battle in Puente Antiguo
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 41 - The Sacrifice
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 42 - The Battle Against the Destroyer
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 43 - The Battle on the Rainbow Bridge
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 44 - The Battle with Loki
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 45 - The Final Showdown
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
Scene 46 - Asgard's Hope
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
- Physical environment: The world depicted in the screenplay consists of various settings, including a small town in New Mexico, a desert, Asgard (a mythical realm), Jotunheim (the realm of the Frost Giants), a hospital setting, a laboratory, a SHIELD base, and a dive bar. The physical environment ranges from arid deserts to majestic palaces, from frozen wastelands to modern-day cities.
- Culture: The cultural elements depicted in the screenplay include Norse mythology, royalty, honor, camaraderie, and a mix of contemporary and mythical cultures. The characters in the screenplay have distinct cultural backgrounds and beliefs, shaping their actions and interactions.
- Society: The societal structure depicted in the screenplay includes hierarchical systems, such as monarchy, military hierarchy, and societal norms. Asgardian society is structured around honor, duty, and preserving peace, while SHIELD is a secretive organization with highly-trained professionals.
- Technology: The technological elements depicted in the screenplay include advanced technology, such as powerful hammers, the Bifrost (a cosmic portal), handheld sensor devices, computer systems, and surveillance equipment. The characters in the screenplay interact with and use advanced technology as part of their world.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology depicted in the screenplay shape the characters' experiences and actions. For example, the arid desert and desolate small town create a sense of mystery and wonder, influencing the characters' fascination with celestial phenomena. The hierarchical societal structure in Asgard and the honor-based culture shape the actions and interactions of the Asgardian characters. The advanced technology and secrecy of SHIELD influence the behavior and decisions of its agents.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative of the screenplay by providing settings for the characters to interact in and conflicts to arise from. The physical environment, culture, society, and technology create the backdrop for the characters' journeys and the development of the plot. They also provide opportunities for action sequences and dramatic moments.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements depicted in the screenplay contribute to the thematic depth by exploring themes such as family, duty, sacrifice, power, and identity. The physical environment and cultural elements reflect the conflicts and tensions between different realms and characters. The advanced technology and societal structures raise questions about the consequences of power and the responsibilities of those in authority.
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
| Pattern | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Correlation between Emotional Impact and Overall Grade | There is a strong positive correlation (0.92) between Emotional Impact and Overall Grade, suggesting that the emotional impact of the scenes greatly contributes to the overall quality of the screenplay. |
| Correlation between Character Changes and Dialogue | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.66) between Character Changes and Dialogue, indicating that the evolution of characters is often conveyed through their dialogues. |
| Correlation between Conflict and High Stakes | There is a strong positive correlation (0.81) between Conflict and High Stakes, indicating that the higher the level of conflict in the scenes, the higher the stakes for the characters. |
| Correlation between Tone and Concept | There is a weak positive correlation (0.35) between Tone and Concept, suggesting that the tone of the scenes is somewhat related to the concept of the screenplay. |
| Correlation between Plot and Move Story Forward | There is a strong positive correlation (0.76) between Plot and Move Story Forward, indicating that the progression of the plot is closely tied to advancing the story. |
| Correlation between Tone and Emotional Impact | There is a weak positive correlation (0.38) between Tone and Emotional Impact, suggesting that the tone of the scenes can influence their emotional impact to some extent. |
| Correlation between Dialogue and Plot | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.63) between Dialogue and Plot, indicating that the dialogues often contribute to the development of the plot. |
| Correlation between Character Changes and Emotional Impact | There is a weak positive correlation (0.31) between Character Changes and Emotional Impact, suggesting that the emotional impact of the scenes is somewhat related to the evolution of the characters. |
| Correlation between Conflict and Dialogue | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.61) between Conflict and Dialogue, indicating that conflicts often arise and are resolved through dialogues. |
| Correlation between Emotional Impact and Move Story Forward | There is a strong positive correlation (0.77) between Emotional Impact and Move Story Forward, suggesting that the emotional impact of the scenes is closely tied to the progression of the story. |
| Correlation between Tone and Plot | There is a weak positive correlation (0.42) between Tone and Plot, indicating that the tone of the scenes can influence the development of the plot to some extent. |
| Correlation between Emotional Impact and Conflict | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.53) between Emotional Impact and Conflict, suggesting that the level of emotional impact in the scenes is often connected to the conflicts present. |
| Correlation between High Stakes and Move Story Forward | There is a strong positive correlation (0.76) between High Stakes and Move Story Forward, indicating that the higher the stakes for the characters, the more the story progresses. |
| Correlation between Character Changes and High Stakes | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.68) between Character Changes and High Stakes, suggesting that the evolution of characters often leads to higher stakes for them. |
| Correlation between Concept and Characters | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.67) between Concept and Characters, indicating that the concept of the screenplay is closely related to the development of the characters. |
| Correlation between Concept and Dialogue | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.65) between Concept and Dialogue, suggesting that the concept of the screenplay often influences the dialogues between the characters. |
| Correlation between Characters and Emotional Impact | There is a weak positive correlation (0.33) between Characters and Emotional Impact, indicating that the development of characters can impact the emotional impact of the scenes to some extent. |
| Correlation between Concept and Emotional Impact | There is a weak positive correlation (0.39) between Concept and Emotional Impact, suggesting that the concept of the screenplay can influence the emotional impact of the scenes to some degree. |
| Correlation between Concept and Conflict | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.69) between Concept and Conflict, indicating that the concept of the screenplay often leads to conflicts between the characters. |
| Correlation between Dialogue and Emotional Impact | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.59) between Dialogue and Emotional Impact, suggesting that the emotional impact of the scenes is often conveyed through the dialogues between the characters. |
| Correlation between Concept and Plot | There is a strong positive correlation (0.79) between Concept and Plot, indicating that the concept of the screenplay strongly influences the development of the plot. |
| Correlation between Plot and Emotional Impact | There is a strong positive correlation (0.83) between Plot and Emotional Impact, suggesting that the emotional impact of the scenes is closely tied to the progression of the plot. |
| Correlation between Dialogue and High Stakes | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.62) between Dialogue and High Stakes, indicating that the dialogues between the characters often involve high stakes situations. |
| Correlation between Dialogue and Move Story Forward | There is a strong positive correlation (0.73) between Dialogue and Move Story Forward, suggesting that the dialogues play a significant role in advancing the story. |
| Correlation between Tone and High Stakes | There is a weak positive correlation (0.43) between Tone and High Stakes, indicating that the tone of the scenes can influence the level of stakes for the characters. |
| Correlation between Dialogue and Character Changes | There is a weak positive correlation (0.39) between Dialogue and Character Changes, suggesting that the dialogues between the characters often contribute to their evolution. |
| Correlation between Dialogue and Conflict | There is a moderate positive correlation (0.61) between Dialogue and Conflict, indicating that conflicts are often developed and resolved through dialogues. |
| Correlation between Characters and Plot | There is a strong positive correlation (0.75) between Characters and Plot, suggesting that the development of the characters is closely intertwined with the progression of the plot. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 1 | Jane: Holy. Shatner. |
| 2 | DARCY: Wow. Does he need CPR? Because I know CPR. |
| 6 | Odin: Who wields this hammer commands the lightning and the storm. Its power has no equal -- as a weapon, to destroy, or as a tool, to build. It is a fit companion for a King. |
| 7 | Thor: The Jotuns must pay for what they've done! |
| 17 | THOR: How dare you attack the son of Odin! |
Some Loglines to consider:
| A arrogant god of thunder is cast down to Earth as a mortal and must learn humility before he can reclaim his power and save his home from his treacherous brother. |
| When an astrophysicist encounters a banished god in the New Mexico desert, she becomes entangled in a conflict that spans across the Nine Realms, leading to a battle for the fate of Asgard. |
| Stripped of his powers and exiled to Earth, Thor must confront his past mistakes and prove himself worthy of his title as the God of Thunder to stop his brother from destroying their home. |
| As war looms between Asgard and Jotunheim, Thor's journey of self-discovery leads him to forge an unlikely alliance with humans and confront his brother's betrayal, ultimately learning the true meaning of heroism. |
| A blend of Norse mythology and sci-fi action, Thor follows the journey of a fallen god who must learn humility and responsibility on Earth before he can reclaim his power and prevent a cosmic war. |
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The scene-by-scene analysis will demonstrate how each scene performs across various criteria, summarized in the column headings.
Click on any scene title to view the full analysis, including critiques and suggestions for improvement.
'Other Analyses' provides various insights into your writing and different perspectives, although it might not lead to significant rewrites of your script.
You can play it for free. If you have scripts analyzed, the AI might recommend exercises from SceneProv to help you improve your writing. Go to the craft tab to see what it recommended.
Let the AI take a turn when you're blocked or you want to riff on a scene. Each scene you create in SceneProv gets graded at the end.
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