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Scene 1 -  Breach of the Embassy
ARGO



by

Chris Terrio


based on the May 2007 "Wired" magazine article
entitled "The Great Escape" by Joshuah Bearman;
and chapter nine of the book entitled
"The Master of Disguise" by Antonio Mendez
FADE IN:

BEGINNING LOGO

The familiar logo WARNER BROS. PRESENTS COMES UP.

After a beat, it is consumed by FIRE.

It becomes AN AMERICAN FLAG, BURNING in the street.


1 EXT. U.S. EMBASSY (TEHRAN) - MORNING 1

Effigies of Jimmy Carter and the deposed Shah -- crowds
chanting “Magbar Carter! Magbar Ahmrika!” Fists in the
air.

SUPERIMPOSE: TEHRAN - NOVEMBER 4, 1979

YOUNG MEN AND WOMEN -- about 2/3 men and 1/3 women, some
with flak jackets; about half the young women wear full
chador. Many wear plastic bibs with photographs of
Ayatollah Khomeini.

PASTED TO ROOSEVELT GATE: photographs of STUDENTS who
were killed under the deposed Shah of Iran’s regime.

Signs in English: “U.S.A. RETURN THE SHAH” -- “JUSTICE
FOR MURDER.” A few IRANIAN POLICE attend -- more as
bystanders than peacekeepers.

A MAN frantically stabs an EFFIGY of the SHAH.

An IRANIAN STUDENT films the scene with a Super 8 camera.


2 EXT. EMBASSY GROUNDS - MORNING 2

From INSIDE THE EMBASSY GATES we can hear the noise of
the protest. There are three primary buildings on
campus: the CHANCERY, the embassy’s main building, THE
AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE, and the CONSULATE.

We can see that the compound is securitized: sand-filled
traps and steel bars on the windows of the consulate.


3 INT. U.S. EMBASSY - CONSULATE OFFICE - MORNING 3

Now, we see the POV THROUGH those steel bars.

Standing on a chair looking at the protest outside the
gate, is BOB ANDERS, late 40s-50s, a consular officer.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 2.
3 CONTINUED: 3

BOB ANDERS
Carnival’s bigger today.

MARK LIJEK, 29, a consular officer, joins Anders at the
window.


4 EXT. ROOSEVELT GATE - MORNING 4

Then, in a famous piece of archive footage, something
simple happens. A YOUNG MAN IN A SWEATER climbs the gate
and makes it to the other side.

And now, we see the REVERSE of that famous shot. This
isn’t archive footage anymore.

We’re looking at the POV of TOM AHERN, 48, the CIA
station chief here.


5 INT. MARINE GUARD POST - MORNING 5

From a pillbox on the embassy campus, SGT. ROCKY
SICKMANN, a young MARINE, can also see the protestors
break across the lawn.

MARINE SGT. SICKMANN
(into his radio)
... Fort Apache is breached -- *
please advise --


6 EXT. ROOSEVELT GATE - MORNING 6

The PROTEST in front of the gate is getting rowdier --
its energy and numbers swelling.

A group of STUDENTS -- these more brisk, organized, all
bearded and dressed in flak jackets -- push their way to
the front of the protest --

WOMEN raise a banner. It’s a signal.

As if on cue, the IRANIAN POLICE move from the gates. A
WOMAN removes a large pair of bolt cutters from
underneath her chador -- hands them to a BEARDED STUDENT
-- who gets to work on the CHAINS holding the gate
closed --

When one YOUNG MAN wearing a green military field jacket
raises his fist, we can see that he has a concealed
PISTOL in his clothes.

More STUDENTS climbing the wall -- dropping the 12 feet
to the other side, one after another.
ARGO - Final 3.


7 INT. MARINE GUARD POST - MORNING 7

MARINE SGT. SICKMANN
THEY’RE COMING OVER THE WALLS --


8 EXT. ROOSEVELT GATE - MORNING 8

But a moment later no more climbing is required, because
the GATE CHAIN IS CUT and protestors FLOOD through the
embassy gates, a human dam breaking --
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary On November 4, 1979, a tense scene unfolds at the U.S. Embassy in Tehran as a large protest erupts outside, with crowds chanting anti-American slogans and displaying effigies. Inside, consular officers Bob Anders and Mark Lijek observe the escalating chaos, while Marine Sgt. Rocky Sickmann reports the breach of the embassy gates by organized students armed with bolt cutters and weapons. The situation intensifies as protestors flood into the compound, marking a critical turning point in the crisis.
Strengths
  • Intense atmosphere
  • Effective tension-building
  • Realistic portrayal of a crisis situation
Weaknesses
  • Some dialogue could be more impactful
  • Limited character development in this specific scene

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.5

This scene's primary job is to plunge the reader into the chaos and danger of the 1979 Iran hostage crisis with immediate, visceral tension. It lands effectively through its documentary-style opening and rapid escalation, but the repetitive description of the protest and the lack of distinct character voices slightly dilute the impact, limiting the score.


Story Content

Concept: 8.5

The concept of opening a historical thriller with the actual event, using a burning logo to symbolize the collapse of order, is strong and immediately engaging. It sets a clear, high-stakes premise.

Plot: 7

The plot is simple but effective: a protest escalates into a breach of the embassy. The sequence of events is clear and builds tension, though it lacks a specific protagonist-driven action beyond observation.

Originality: 5

The scene is not highly original in its depiction of a historical event, but the use of the burning logo and the multiple perspectives inside the embassy adds a fresh, cinematic approach to a well-known story. The actions and dialogue feel authentic to the period.


Character Development

Characters: 4

Characters are introduced but not developed. Bob Anders, Mark Lijek, and Tom Ahern are identified by role, but their personalities, fears, or goals are not yet established, making them placeholders rather than individuals.

Character Changes: 0

No character undergoes any change in this scene; they are introduced in a state of reaction to external events.

Internal Goal: 2

The protagonist's internal goal is likely to survive the escalating situation and protect themselves and their colleagues.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to navigate the dangerous protest and potential breach of the embassy's security.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8

The central conflict is the physical breach of the embassy by the protestors, an external, escalating threat. There is no internal or interpersonal conflict yet.

Opposition: 7

The opposition is the massive, angry protest, which is a formidable, faceless force. The strength of the opposition is high, but it lacks a specific antagonist.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are immediately life-and-death: the safety of everyone inside the embassy is threatened by a violent, unpredictable mob.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story forward by establishing the inciting incident—the embassy takeover—which sets the entire plot in motion.

Unpredictability: 4

This scene is somewhat predictable for anyone familiar with the Iran hostage crisis, but the specific details of the breach (the bolt cutters, the signal) add a degree of tension and specificity.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict in this scene is the clash between American values of democracy and freedom and Iranian revolutionary ideals of anti-imperialism and religious governance.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The scene generates a strong sense of fear and urgency through its pacing and imagery, but the lack of character connection limits deeper emotional resonance.

Dialogue: 3

Dialogue is minimal and functional. Anders' line 'Carnival’s bigger today' and Sickmann's radio call are the only spoken words, serving to underscore the situation but not to reveal character or advance a personal arc.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it drops the reader into a historically significant, high-stakes situation with immediate visual and sensory details, creating a sense of urgency and danger.

Pacing: 8

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it starts with a wide view of the protest, then tightens to specific actions (the signal, the bolt cutters, the breach), accelerating the rhythm and heightening tension.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 6

The formatting is mostly correct, with clear scene headings and action lines. However, there is some redundancy in the description (e.g., repeated details about the protest) and a few minor formatting inconsistencies (e.g., the repeated 'CONTINUED' slug).

Structure: 8

The structure follows a classic thriller opening: a calm before the storm (the protest), a signal (the banner), a rapid escalation (the breach), and a cliffhanger (the flood of protestors). It is effective for the genre.


Critique
  • The opening scene effectively sets the tone and context for the story, immersing the audience in the historical moment of the Iranian Revolution. The use of vivid imagery, such as the burning American flag and the effigies, creates a strong emotional impact and establishes the stakes right away.
  • The dialogue is minimal in this scene, which is appropriate given the chaotic environment. However, the characters' internal thoughts and emotions could be better conveyed through visual storytelling or brief internal monologues to enhance audience connection with them.
  • The scene transitions between the exterior protest and the interior of the embassy smoothly, but the pacing could be improved. The shift from the protest to the consulate office feels abrupt. A more gradual transition could help maintain tension and build anticipation for the impending crisis.
  • While the scene introduces key characters, it lacks depth in their characterization. Providing brief visual or auditory cues about their personalities or backgrounds could help the audience connect with them more quickly. For instance, showing Bob Anders' reaction to the protest could hint at his character's perspective.
  • The use of archive footage is a creative choice, but it may confuse viewers who are not familiar with the historical context. A brief visual or auditory cue indicating that this is a flashback or archival footage could clarify the timeline for the audience.
  • The scene does a good job of establishing the physical setting of the embassy, but it could benefit from more sensory details. Describing sounds, smells, or the atmosphere inside the embassy could enhance immersion and make the audience feel more present in the scene.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief internal monologue or visual cue to express the characters' emotions as they observe the protest, which would help the audience connect with them on a deeper level.
  • Introduce a more gradual transition between the protest and the embassy interior to maintain tension and build anticipation for the conflict.
  • Incorporate sensory details to enhance the atmosphere, such as the sounds of the protest, the smell of smoke, or the tension in the air, to create a more immersive experience.
  • Provide brief character moments or visual cues that hint at the personalities of key characters, allowing the audience to form connections with them early on.
  • Add a visual or auditory cue to clarify the use of archive footage, ensuring that the audience understands the timeline and context of the events being depicted.



Scene 2 -  Confronting Chaos
9 INT. CHANCERY OFFICE - MORNING 9

Mounting chaos in here, the nerve center of the embassy.
Everyone on a different phone. It’s like an emergency
room where the patient is the whole building.

ANN SWIFT, 31, Deputy Political Officer, has the phone by
her ear -- trying to hear reports from D.C.

ANN SWIFT
There are hundreds of people out
there --
(looks out)
No, thousands... There are *
thousands -- *


10 IN THE CONSULATE OFFICE - MORNING 10

Mark Lijek and Bob Anders look out windows, nervous, but
not like the Iranian VISA APPLICANTS who are close to
panic.

BOB ANDERS
Are these supposed to be *
bulletproof?

MARK LIJEK
Well, they’ve never been tested.


11 INT. CHANCERY (MARINE POST ONE) - MORNING 11

Six MARINES watch images from closed-circuit television
cameras on chunky 1970’s monitors. Crowds of protestors
from every part of the embassy campus.

AL GOLACINSKI, 30, chief of security for the embassy,
shouts into a radio.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 4.
11 CONTINUED: 11

AL GOLACINSKI
Marines to Number One -- FALL
BACK --


12 EXT. CHANCERY - MORNING 12

PROTESTORS come running, turning the corner to reach the
building. They use bats and crowbars to smash the
windows of the building.


13 INT. CONSULATE OFFICE - MORNING 13

BOB ANDERS
(on the phone)
Can we get some fucking police
please?


14 INT. MARINE POST ONE - MORNING 14

One by one, the security monitors are going black -- or
smashed. The Marines stare.


15 EXT. TALEGHANI AVE. - MORNING 15

An IRANIAN POLICE CAPTAIN smokes a cigarette, watching
the mayhem, impassive.


16 INT. MARINE POST ONE - MORNING 16

MARINES are putting on armor, gas masks, riot gear. AL
GOLACINSKI goes down the line reminding them of protocol.

AL GOLACINSKI
Don’t shoot. You don’t want to be *
the sonofabitch who started a war -
-

CUT TO: *

AL GOLACINSKI *
They need an hour to burn the
classified -- Hold.
(beat, stern)
You shoot one person, they’ll kill
every one of us in here.


17 EXT. CONSULATE - MORNING 17

PROTESTORS, now on the embassy grounds, carry banners.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 5.
17 CONTINUED: 17

PROTESTORS
La ilaha ilallah --

A WOMAN IN A CHADOR uses her own radio.

Some of them ring around the building, holding hands and
chanting. Some carry AUTOMATIC WEAPONS openly.


18 INT. MARINE POST ONE - MORNING 18

AL GOLACINSKI
(into walkie)
Tear gas as last resort ONLY -- I
repeat, only if your life is under
threat!


19 INT. HALLWAY - MORNING 19

Gallegos and Sickmann hear Golacinski’s admonition, but
PUMP TEAR GAS out a window onto protestors below despite
it. One cannister after another.


20 INT. CONSULATE OFFICE - MORNING 20 *


Now the five in the consulate are joined by LEE SCHATZ, *
32, an agricultural attache. *


JOE STAFFORD
-- We’re not going out in this --

MARK LIJEK
(interrupting)
We are in the only building with
an exit direct to the street. We
need to GO --

The SOUNDS OF MARINES barking at one another over the
radio.


21 OMITTED 21


22 INT. HALLWAY - MORNING 22

They look out a small WINDOW to see a MOB outside.

AL GOLACINSKI
I’m going outside.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 6.
22 CONTINUED: 22

GALLEGOS
Why?

AL GOLACINSKI
To reason with them. *

Marines open the Chancery door, with a look --
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In the embassy's Chancery office, chaos ensues as Deputy Political Officer Ann Swift reports thousands of protestors outside, prompting anxiety among consulate staff about their safety. Chief of security Al Golacinski orders the Marines to prepare for potential violence while urging restraint. As protestors begin to smash windows, tensions rise among the staff regarding whether to stay or evacuate. Ultimately, Golacinski decides to confront the mob outside, leaving the situation unresolved and the staff in a state of uncertainty.
Strengths
  • Tense atmosphere
  • Realistic reactions
  • High stakes
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Some dialogue may feel cliched

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

This scene effectively establishes the immediate, life-threatening stakes of the hostage crisis through visceral action and mounting tension, but the rapid-fire cuts and repetitive dialogue between characters can feel disjointed and slightly confusing, limiting its emotional depth.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of depicting the Iran hostage crisis from the perspective of the embassy staff is inherently compelling and historically significant, but the scene relies heavily on familiar tropes of a besieged building without offering a fresh angle or unique character insight yet.

Plot: 6.5

The plot advances the crisis from protest to active breach, raising the stakes clearly, but the fragmented structure and lack of a clear protagonist's decision point make the progression feel more reactive than driven.

Originality: 5

The scene is not particularly original in its execution, relying on standard siege-movie tropes, but the historical specificity and the focus on the embassy staff's procedural panic (burning documents) adds a layer of authenticity.


Character Development

Characters: 5

Characters are introduced primarily through their functional roles (Marine, consular officer) rather than distinct personalities, making them feel interchangeable and reducing emotional investment.

Character Changes: 1

No character undergoes a meaningful change in this scene; they remain in a reactive state of fear and duty.

Internal Goal: 4

Ann Swift's internal goal is to maintain control and gather information amidst the chaos. This reflects her need for order and safety in a dangerous situation.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to ensure the safety of the embassy staff and prevent violence. This reflects the immediate challenge of the protest turning violent.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8.5

The external conflict is clear and escalating (protestors vs. embassy staff), but internal conflicts among characters are barely hinted at, reducing depth.

Opposition: 9

The opposition is overwhelming and faceless—a massive, angry mob with weapons—making the protagonists' position feel hopeless and the threat immediate.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are life-and-death and historically monumental, but the scene's fragmented focus slightly dilutes their impact.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story from a protest to a full-scale invasion, a major plot point, but does so without advancing character arcs or introducing new information beyond the obvious.

Unpredictability: 4

This scene is somewhat predictable because the historical outcome is known, and the beats (protest escalates, gates breached, tear gas deployed) follow a familiar siege narrative.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict is between the use of force and diplomacy in handling the protest. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs about conflict resolution and the consequences of their actions.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6.5

The scene generates anxiety and fear through its pacing and imagery, but the lack of character development prevents a deeper emotional connection.

Dialogue: 5.5

Dialogue is functional and realistic for the chaos, but repetitive lines like 'They need an hour to burn the classified' and 'Don't shoot' lack individual voice and become numbing.

Engagement: 7.5

This scene is engaging because of its high-stakes, real-time depiction of a historical crisis, with visceral details like bolt cutters and tear gas that create a sense of immediacy.

Pacing: 7

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the rapid cuts and short lines create a breathless, panicked rhythm that mirrors the chaos, though the repetition slightly dulls the effect.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 5.5

Formatting is mostly standard, but the repeated 'CONTINUED' headers and the 'OMITTED' scene number are distracting and break the flow. The action lines are clear but could be more concise.

Structure: 6

The structure uses cross-cutting between locations to build tension, but the repetition of similar actions (watching monitors, shouting orders) and the omission of scene 21 create a slightly choppy rhythm that undermines the intended momentum.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the escalating tension and chaos within the embassy, mirroring the external conflict. However, the pacing could be improved by varying the length of dialogue and action beats to create a more dynamic rhythm. For instance, some lines could be shortened or delivered with more urgency to heighten the sense of panic.
  • The dialogue, while functional, lacks distinct character voices. Each character should have a unique way of speaking that reflects their personality and background. For example, Ann Swift's dialogue could be more authoritative to reflect her position, while the Marines might use more colloquial language under stress.
  • The visual descriptions are strong, but they could be enhanced by incorporating more sensory details. For instance, describing the sounds of shattering glass or the smell of tear gas could immerse the audience further into the scene. This would help convey the chaos more vividly.
  • The motivations of the characters could be more clearly defined. For example, why does Al Golacinski decide to confront the mob? Providing a brief internal thought or a line of dialogue that hints at his reasoning could add depth to his character and make his actions more relatable.
  • The transition between the different locations (Chancery office, consulate office, Marine post) could be smoother. Consider using visual or auditory cues to guide the audience through the shifts in setting, which would help maintain the flow of the scene.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment of silence or a brief pause before the chaos erupts to emphasize the tension and build anticipation for the impending violence.
  • Incorporate more character reactions to the chaos around them. For example, showing how the Iranian visa applicants react to the violence could add emotional weight and highlight the stakes for everyone involved.
  • Use more active verbs in the descriptions to create a sense of urgency. Instead of 'the Marines stare,' consider 'the Marines' eyes widen in disbelief' to convey their shock and fear more vividly.
  • Introduce a ticking clock element, such as a countdown to a critical moment, to increase the urgency and stakes of the scene. This could be a radio announcement or a visual cue that time is running out.
  • Explore the use of overlapping dialogue to reflect the chaos of the situation. This could create a more realistic portrayal of the frantic environment and emphasize the confusion among the characters.



Scene 3 -  Chaos at the Chancery
23 INT. CHANCERY OFFICE - MORNING 23

FRED KUPKE, 34, communications officer, is shouting at
staffers who pile up documents for the shredders --

KUPKE
Just everything. Don’t sort it --

ANN SWIFT
(on the phone)
-- NONE, there are no police --
ZERO --


24 EXT. CHANCERY - MORNING 24

Al Golacinski steps out onto the steps and immediately
there is shouting, and a protestor puts a GUN to his head
-- blindfolds him -- PUSHING AL’S head to the ground...


25 INT. CONSULATE OFFICE - MORNING 25 *

CORA LIJEK
-- Second floor -- anyone who can
hear this -- we need help --

As we MOVE DOWN the line of desks, JOE STAFFORD is also
on a radio repeating the same in FARSI --

Others PACK things.


26 INT. THE HALLWAY - INTO THE VAULT - MORNING 26

MARINES and STAFFERS -- including TOM AHERN -- RUN down
the hall, pushing a cart of items to secure. They reach
the security locker -- code the door -- and enter the
locker, heading to the INCINERATOR to begin destroying
classified material --


27 EXT. CHANCERY - MORNING 27 *

Golacinski HELD UP TO THE DOOR -- GUN TO HIS HEAD. He
starts to panic.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 7.
27 CONTINUED: 27

AL GOLACINSKI
Let me in! Jesus Christ! Open
the fucking door!

The Marines OPEN THE CHANCERY DOOR -- PROTESTERS POUR IN.


27A INT. CHANCERY OFFICE - MORNING 27A

ANN SWIFT
-- Washington on flash -- Get Ops
-- get a line --

We hear --

The POUNDING of footsteps on the roof. They look up.


28 EXT. CONSULATE ROOF - MORNING 28

Protestors RUNNING on the roof of the consulate building.
Several stop to try and RIP off a vent cover using CLUBS
and PIPES.


29 EXT. EMBASSY GROUNDS - MORNING 29

THOUSANDS are now on the grounds of the embassy and they
continue to swarm through the gates.

The student with the SUPER 8 continues to film it all.
Also filming, a NEWS PHOTOGRAPHER with a 16 mm camera.

Smoking cannisters of TEAR GAS, people hurling them.

A protestor lights a paper on fire to ward off the sting
of the gas --


30 INT. CHANCERY OFFICE - MORNING 30

STAFFERS using pieces of machines to destroy other
machines -- any embassy equipment that might function --

Then... screams. The lights have gone out. The power
has been cut.


31 IN THE VAULT - MORNING 31

AHERN destroys the cryptography keys -- box-sized hard
drives -- while BILL DAUGHERTY, 33, tosses stacks of
papers into an electrical furnace.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 8.
31 CONTINUED: 31

BILL DAUGHERTY
Well, Tom. You wanted to see the
world...

The furnace makes a LOUD CHUNK and stops. They both hold
their looks for a beat.

BILL DAUGHERTY
Are you kidding me?

AHERN
Get the shredder.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense Chancery office, Fred Kupke directs frantic staffers to shred documents as protestors, led by a gunman threatening Al Golacinski, breach the building. Inside, Cora Lijek calls for help while Joe Stafford communicates in Farsi, highlighting the urgency of the crisis. Marines rush to secure classified materials, leading to chaos when the power is cut. In the vault, Tom Ahern and Bill Daugherty destroy sensitive documents, grappling with the gravity of their dire situation.
Strengths
  • Effective portrayal of chaos and tension
  • High emotional impact on the audience
  • Compelling plot progression
Weaknesses
  • Some characters' actions may seem reckless or impulsive

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene effectively establishes the immediate danger and panic of the embassy takeover, but its fragmented structure and rapid cuts between locations can disorient the reader, limiting emotional immersion.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of depicting the embassy siege from multiple interior perspectives is strong, but the execution feels disjointed, lacking a clear focal point.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the crisis but is more a series of reactions than a coherent narrative progression; the sequence of events is clear but lacks cause-and-effect tension.

Originality: 4

The scene is a faithful recreation of a historical event, but it offers little fresh perspective or unique character moments; the actions and dialogue feel generic.


Character Development

Characters: 4.5

Characters are defined by their roles (Marine, diplomat, staffer) rather than individual personalities, making them feel interchangeable and reducing emotional investment.

Character Changes: 2

No character undergoes meaningful change; they react to events but do not evolve or make transformative decisions.

Internal Goal: 4

The protagonist's internal goal is likely to survive the dangerous situation and protect the classified material from falling into the wrong hands. This reflects their fear of failure and desire to fulfill their duty.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to secure the classified material and ensure the safety of themselves and their colleagues amidst the violent protests and threats.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8

Conflict is external and immediate—protesters vs. embassy staff—but lacks personal stakes or moral complexity, reducing its impact.

Opposition: 7

The opposition is a faceless mob, which is physically overwhelming but lacks a personal antagonist, reducing dramatic tension.

High Stakes: 8

The stakes are life-and-death for the embassy staff, but the diffuse focus dilutes the sense of personal risk.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by establishing the crisis, but it is a setup rather than a turning point; the plot is in stasis until the next scene.

Unpredictability: 5

This scene is unpredictable because the chaos and multiple simultaneous events create a sense of anything happening, but the overall outcome (the embassy is taken) is historically known.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the value of duty and sacrifice. The characters must weigh the importance of their mission against their personal safety and well-being.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The panic is palpable, but the rapid cuts and lack of character focus prevent deep emotional resonance; the reader feels the chaos but not the fear of any one person.

Dialogue: 5.5

Dialogue is functional and realistic in its brevity, but it lacks distinct voices; lines like 'Get the shredder' serve plot but not character.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because of its relentless pace and real-time urgency, but the lack of a central character to root for reduces sustained interest.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the rapid cuts and short lines create a breathless rhythm, but it can feel rushed and disorienting, sacrificing clarity.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 6

Formatting is mostly correct but inconsistent with scene numbers (e.g., '27A' and '31' repeated) and some action lines are run-on; it follows standard screenplay conventions but could be cleaner.

Structure: 5.5

The scene uses a montage structure with rapid cross-cuts, fitting a thriller but lacking a clear three-act beat within the scene; it feels like a series of snapshots.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the chaos inside the Chancery office with the escalating violence outside. However, the transitions between the different locations (Chancery, Consulate office, and Vault) could be smoother to maintain the flow of urgency. The abrupt shifts may disorient the audience and dilute the mounting tension.
  • Character motivations and emotional stakes could be more clearly defined. For instance, while Fred Kupke's frantic orders to shred documents convey urgency, it would enhance the scene to show his emotional state—fear, desperation, or determination—through his dialogue or actions. This would help the audience connect more deeply with the characters.
  • The dialogue, while functional, lacks distinctiveness among characters. Each character should have a unique voice that reflects their personality and emotional state. For example, Ann Swift's line about the police could be more impactful if it included a personal touch or a hint of her own fear, rather than just a factual report.
  • The visual descriptions are strong, particularly the imagery of the protestors and the chaos inside the embassy. However, the scene could benefit from more sensory details—sounds, smells, and tactile sensations—to immerse the audience further in the environment. For instance, describing the acrid smell of tear gas or the frantic sounds of shattering glass would enhance the urgency.
  • The pacing of the scene is uneven. While the initial chaos is well-established, the latter part, particularly in the vault, feels slower and less urgent. The stakes should remain high throughout, and the pacing should reflect that by maintaining a sense of immediacy as the characters work to destroy classified materials.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment of personal reflection or a brief flashback for a character, such as Kupke or Swift, to deepen their emotional stakes and provide context for their actions. This could help the audience empathize with their plight.
  • Enhance character differentiation by giving each character a distinct way of speaking or reacting to the crisis. This could be achieved through unique phrases, tones, or even physical actions that reflect their personalities.
  • Incorporate more sensory details to create a vivid atmosphere. Describe the sounds of the protest, the feeling of panic in the air, or the physical sensations of fear and urgency experienced by the characters.
  • Smooth out the transitions between locations by using visual or auditory cues that connect the scenes. For example, the sound of breaking glass could lead into the chaos of the vault, maintaining the tension.
  • Maintain a consistent pacing throughout the scene. Ensure that the urgency of the situation is reflected in the dialogue and actions, keeping the audience on edge as the characters navigate the escalating crisis.



Scene 4 -  Escape from Chaos
32 INT. CHANCERY STAIRWELL LEADING TO 2ND FLOOR - MORNING 32

BROTHER ALI, 20s, one of the student leaders, shouts as
he holds a cloth near his face to protect from tear gas.


33 INT. CHANCERY OFFICE - MORNING 33 *

The mood is now frantic -- people destroying things or
shouting everywhere --

ANN SWIFT
No... Hal -- yes -- INSIDE the
building, IN --


34 INT. CONSULATE OFFICE - MORNING 34

Bob Anders SMASHES AMERICAN VISA PLATES.

The visa-applicant Iranians are now huddled in a group.
A couple of the women are wailing.

Improv resuming the debate over leaving.

Lijek on his walkie, but every channel is now speaking
FARSI.

MARK LIJEK
Nobody is coming. We need to go. *


35 OMITTED 35


36 INT. CONSULATE OFFICE - MORNING 36

Mark gestures for the other six staffers -- and the
twenty IRANIAN VISA SEEKERS in the office -- to head to
the stairwell.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 9.
36 CONTINUED: 36

BOB ANDERS
Iranians first.
(as no one moves)
Go! Now!


37 INT. CHANCERY - HALLWAY - MORNING 37

One STUDENT emerges with a large portrait of KHOMEINI
that had been used for dart practice.

STUDENT
(screaming)
Who has made this!!!

Two EMBASSY EMPLOYEES look at the floor.


38 INT. CONSULATE STAIRWELL - MORNING 38

The twenty VISA-SEEKING IRANIANS pass our guys and run
down the stairs out onto the street and disperse outside.
Behind them, the FIVE CONSULATE EMPLOYEES we saw head
down the stairs.

So the group of SIX is: MARK AND CORA LIJEK, JOE AND *
KATHY STAFFORD, and BOB ANDERS. They get to the bottom
of the stairs.


39 INT. CHANCERY OFFICE - MORNING 39

The students, guns drawn, burst into the Chancery Office,
shouting at Ann Swift and the others. The mood among the
staffers is now almost peaceful.

ANN SWIFT
(into the phone)
It’s done. They’re in.

She puts down the phone. *


40 EXT. BIST METRI STREET - MORNING 40

The It’s quiet -- the sound of the protest on the other *
side of the roof and the embassy campus is distant. Just
the empty street.

On the ground: discarded banners from the protest,
fliers and newspapers.

We see something that looks like BLOOD on the street.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 10.
40 CONTINUED: 40

They walk west. They’re hurrying but taking care not to
run. The five can hear the gunfire and shouting in
Farsi. They walk up the street, away from the sounds of
the protest, instinctively grouping together. Cora looks
back.

BOB ANDERS
Keep going.


41-45 OMITTED 41-45
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a chaotic Chancery stairwell, Brother Ali leads student protesters while tear gas fills the air. Inside, Ann Swift frantically coordinates the evacuation of Iranian visa applicants as Bob Anders destroys American visa plates. Mark Lijek urges the group to escape, prioritizing the Iranians' safety. As they descend, tensions rise with a student demanding accountability for a damaged portrait of Khomeini. The Iranians successfully flee to the street, followed by the consulate staff, just as armed students burst into the office. The scene concludes with the group moving away from the protest, aware of the lingering danger but determined to find safety.
Strengths
  • Intense atmosphere
  • Realistic portrayal of fear and panic
  • High emotional impact
  • Effective tension-building
Weaknesses
  • Some chaotic moments may be overwhelming for viewers

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.5

The scene's primary job is to establish the immediate danger and chaos of the embassy takeover, which it does effectively through rapid action and sensory details. The biggest limiter is the slight confusion in character names and locations across the repeated iterations, which can momentarily pull the reader out of the tension.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of depicting the real-life embassy siege from the perspective of the staff is strong and inherently dramatic, but the scene relies on familiar tropes of chaotic evacuations and document shredding.

Plot: 8

The plot advances the crisis from protest to full breach, with clear escalation: gates broken, windows smashed, staff forced to flee. The sequence of events is logical and propulsive.

Originality: 6

The scene is based on real events, so the situation is not original, but the specific focus on the staff's perspective and the destruction of documents adds authenticity. The dialogue and actions feel true to the period.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

Characters are defined by their roles (Marines, diplomats, visa seekers) rather than individual personalities, which limits emotional investment. Bob Anders and Mark Lijek show leadership, but their traits are generic.

Character Changes: 2

No significant character change occurs; the scene is about survival under pressure, not transformation.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal is to maintain composure and ensure the safety of themselves and others amidst the chaos. This reflects their need for control and protection.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to evacuate the consulate safely and navigate the dangerous situation outside. This reflects the immediate challenge of survival and escape.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 9

The central conflict is the physical siege—protestors vs. embassy staff—with clear life-or-death stakes. Internal conflict (whether to stay or flee) is present but underplayed.

Opposition: 9

The opposition is overwhelming: hundreds of protestors with weapons, breaking through defenses. The staff is outnumbered and outgunned.

High Stakes: 10

Stakes are life and death: capture by hostile protestors, potential execution. The destruction of documents adds urgency.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story from the start of the crisis to the staff's escape into hiding, setting up the central premise of the film.

Unpredictability: 6

This scene is unpredictable because the outcome is historically known, but the moment-to-moment actions (the protestor with a gun, the Farsi on the walkie) add uncertainty.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict is between the values of peace and violence, as seen in the contrast between the peaceful mood among the staffers and the aggressive actions of the student protesters.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The chaos and danger create tension, but the lack of character depth limits emotional resonance. The image of visa seekers huddling and the blood on the street are effective touches.

Dialogue: 5

Dialogue is minimal and functional ('Keep going,' 'Iranians first'), serving the action but not revealing character depth. The Farsi on the walkie adds authenticity but is not translated for the reader.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because of the relentless pace and sensory details (smashing windows, tear gas, blood on the street) that immerse the reader in the chaos.

Pacing: 8.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it starts with tension, accelerates through the breach, and ends with a quiet escape, providing a rhythm of action and relief.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is standard and clean, with clear scene headings and action lines. The repeated versions show some redundancy, but the final version is well-formatted.

Structure: 8

The scene follows a classic thriller structure: escalating threat (protest, breach, invasion), followed by a desperate escape. The repeated iterations show refinement but the final version is tight.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the chaos and urgency of the situation, but it could benefit from more character development. While we see the actions of the characters, their emotional responses and motivations are somewhat underexplored. For instance, how does Mark Lijek feel about the decision to prioritize the Iranians' escape? Adding internal thoughts or brief exchanges that reveal their fears or hopes could enhance the emotional weight of the scene.
  • The dialogue is functional but lacks distinctiveness among characters. Each character's voice should reflect their personality and background more clearly. For example, Mark Lijek's insistence on leaving could be more passionate or desperate, while Bob Anders' command could reflect his leadership style. This would help differentiate their voices and make the scene more engaging.
  • The pacing of the scene is quite rapid, which is appropriate given the context, but it may lead to confusion for the audience. Consider slowing down certain moments to allow for brief pauses or reactions that can heighten tension. For instance, after Mark's command to leave, a moment of hesitation or a glance exchanged between characters could amplify the stakes.
  • The visual descriptions are strong, but they could be enhanced with more sensory details. For example, describing the sounds of the protest or the smell of tear gas could immerse the audience further into the scene. This would create a more visceral experience and heighten the tension.
  • The transition between the frantic atmosphere in the Chancery office and the calmness among the consulate staff could be more pronounced. The contrast is interesting, but it feels abrupt. A line of dialogue or a visual cue that highlights this shift could make it clearer and more impactful.
Suggestions
  • Incorporate internal monologues or brief character reflections to deepen emotional engagement. This could be done through voiceovers or dialogue that reveals their thoughts about the situation.
  • Revise the dialogue to ensure each character has a unique voice that reflects their personality and background. This will help the audience connect with them on a deeper level.
  • Consider adding moments of hesitation or emotional reactions to key decisions, allowing the audience to feel the weight of the characters' choices.
  • Enhance sensory details in the scene to create a more immersive experience. Describe sounds, smells, and tactile sensations to draw the audience into the chaos.
  • Clarify the transition between the frantic atmosphere and the calmness among the consulate staff with a visual or dialogue cue that emphasizes the contrast.



Scene 5 -  Crisis at the State Department
46 INT. STATE DEPARTMENT HALL - SEVENTH FLOOR - NIGHT 46

Halfway around the world, hell has broken loose here,
too. BATES and MALICK, 30s, State Department mid-level
aides. A cascade of voices and energy -- a reverberation
from the embassy siege -- the building exploding into a
crisis center.

BATES MALICK
These fucks can hit us, we Mossadeq. We did it to
can’t hit back? them first.

BATES
You think the Russians would put
up with this? They’d fucking
invade --

ROBERT PENDER, 40s, joins them heading down the hall.
They’ve all gotten the same call to get to the
Secretary’s office. PETER GENCO, late 20s, behind.

MALICK PENDER
What did you expect? We (turning behind him)
helped a guy torture and de- Schafer! Schafer!
ball an entire population --

BRICE
At least 60. Could be a hundred.

GENCO
(catching up to them)
You still haven’t found Schafer?

PENDER
(to Genco)
No, I was screaming his name
‘cause I was fucking him.

HAL SAUNDERS, late 40s, Assistant Secretary of State for
Near Eastern Affairs, perpetually stressed, coming out of
his office, out of breath --

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 11.
46 CONTINUED: 46

SAUNDERS
Six got out!


47 OMITTED 47


47A INT. SECRETARY OF STATE’S OFFICE - NIGHT 47A

STAPLED PAGES with PHOTOGRAPHS. In the hands of
SECRETARY OF STATE CYRUS VANCE, 62, a former Navy man who
is used to telling important people what to do.

EVERYONE FROM THE PREVIOUS HALLWAY SCENE is here in
attendance as well.

VANCE
I was told five.

BATES
Apparently it’s six now.

VANCE
What happened?

PENDER
Not clear. We know they escaped
the embassy.

VANCE
Where are they?

SAUNDERS
The Canadian Ambassador’s house.

BATES
Are we attempting rescue?

BRICE
Hold for the Secretary --

VANCE
(handed another
phone)
-- there’s no one -- this is he...
(to an aide)
Can we get Ottawa patched? Five
phones and none of them work.

Coming back -- on phone --

VANCE
Is White House joining?
ARGO - Final 12.


48 INT. WHITE HOUSE - WEST WING - NIGHT 48

HAMILTON JORDAN, 40s, Carter’s White House Chief of
Staff, comes up stairs, trailed by AIDES. Jordan is
forty, Southern.

BUTLER (O.S.)
They’re claiming the embassy was a
‘den of -- ‘

JORDAN
We wish it was the fucking Den of
Espionage. C.I. had three people
there, didn’t see a revolution
coming? I’d call that something
other than intelligence --
Genres: ["Political Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a tense State Department hall at night, aides Bates and Malick express frustration over the U.S. inability to retaliate against attackers following an embassy siege. Joined by Robert Pender, they urgently discuss the search for their missing colleague, Schafer. Assistant Secretary Hal Saunders reveals that six individuals have escaped to the Canadian Ambassador's house, contradicting earlier reports. The scene culminates with Secretary Cyrus Vance struggling to connect with Ottawa for further instructions, highlighting the escalating crisis.
Strengths
  • Intense conflict
  • Sharp dialogue
  • Realistic portrayal of crisis management
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Some dialogue may be too expository

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to establish the immediate crisis and its escalating danger, which it does effectively through chaotic action and mounting tension. The biggest limiter is the confusing character name shifts and unclear spatial transitions, which undermine clarity and emotional impact.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of depicting the 1979 Iran hostage crisis from inside the embassy is strong and historically resonant, but the execution in this draft suffers from disorienting name changes and repetitive action beats.

Plot: 5.5

The plot moves forward with the breach, the Marines' response, and the staff's escape, but the sequence of events is muddled by inconsistent character names and unclear location shifts.

Originality: 4

The scene covers a well-known historical event with standard crisis beats; originality is limited by the chaotic execution and lack of fresh perspective on the characters.


Character Development

Characters: 4

Characters are introduced but not differentiated; name changes (e.g., Bob Anders to Robert Pender) confuse identity. No distinct personalities emerge beyond generic panic.

Character Changes: 2

No clear character change occurs; characters react but do not evolve within this short, chaotic scene.

Internal Goal: 4

The protagonist's internal goal is to navigate the crisis and make decisions that align with their personal values and beliefs.

External Goal: 6

The protagonist's external goal is to handle the situation at hand, including potential rescue attempts and communication with other government officials.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8.5

Conflict is high—physical (protestors breaching, Marines fighting), interpersonal (debate to stay or leave), and systemic (embassy security failing).

Opposition: 8

The opposition is the Iranian protestors, who are numerous, armed, and determined, presenting an overwhelming physical threat.

High Stakes: 9

Stakes are life-and-death: capture, injury, or death for the embassy staff, and international political fallout.

Story Forward: 7

The scene advances the story by establishing the crisis and the escape of six diplomats, setting up the central problem of the film.

Unpredictability: 5

This scene is unpredictable because the chaos of the attack and the fragmented dialogue create a sense of disorientation, but the overall outcome (embassy falls) is historically known.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict revolves around the ethics of political decisions and the consequences of past actions on current events.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The scene generates anxiety and fear through rapid action and danger, but the confusion of names and locations dilutes emotional connection to specific characters.

Dialogue: 5

Dialogue is fragmented and realistic for a crisis, but much of it is repetitive (e.g., 'Six got out!' / 'I was told five') and lacks individual voice.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because of its high-stakes, fast-paced action and the historical weight of the event, but the confusion over who is who and where they are reduces immersion.

Pacing: 6

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because rapid cuts between action and dialogue create urgency, but repetitive lines and unclear geography slow momentum.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 3

Formatting is inconsistent: character names change mid-scene (e.g., Bob Anders to Robert Pender), and scene headings shift confusingly (e.g., 'STATE DEPARTMENT HALL' then 'SECRETARY OF STATE’S OFFICE').

Structure: 5.5

The scene uses a classic crisis structure: inciting event (protest), escalation (breach), climax (Marines fire tear gas), and resolution (escape to Canadian embassy). However, the structure is muddied by repetitive beats and unclear transitions.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the chaos and urgency of the situation, reflecting the high stakes involved in the embassy crisis. The dialogue is sharp and conveys the frustration and tension among the characters, particularly in their discussions about retaliation and the implications of past U.S. actions in the region.
  • However, the scene could benefit from clearer character differentiation. While Bates, Malick, and Pender have distinct voices, the addition of more unique traits or backstory elements could help the audience connect with them on a deeper level. For instance, giving each character a specific motivation or personal stake in the crisis could enhance their emotional weight.
  • The pacing of the scene is brisk, which is appropriate given the context, but it may feel overwhelming for the audience. Consider incorporating brief moments of stillness or reflection amidst the chaos to allow viewers to absorb the gravity of the situation. This could also serve to heighten the tension when the action resumes.
  • The transition from the hallway to the Secretary of State's office feels abrupt. A smoother transition could enhance the flow of the narrative. Perhaps a brief moment of hesitation or a visual cue indicating the urgency of their movement could help bridge the two locations more effectively.
  • The dialogue, while engaging, occasionally veers into exposition-heavy territory. Strive for a balance between conveying necessary information and maintaining natural conversation. For example, instead of stating facts outright, characters could express their concerns or frustrations in a way that reveals information organically.
Suggestions
  • Introduce a brief character moment that highlights each character's personal stakes in the crisis, such as a family member in Iran or a past experience that shapes their perspective on the situation.
  • Incorporate a moment of silence or a reflective pause amidst the chaos to allow the audience to process the urgency and stakes of the situation.
  • Enhance the transition between the hallway and the Secretary of State's office by adding a visual cue or a moment of hesitation that emphasizes the urgency of their mission.
  • Revise dialogue to reduce exposition and allow for more organic conversations that reveal character motivations and the gravity of the situation without feeling forced.
  • Consider adding a visual element that emphasizes the chaos outside the State Department, such as news footage or a radio report, to ground the characters' discussions in the larger context of the crisis.



Scene 6 -  Political Dilemmas in the Chief's Office
49 INT. CHIEF OF STAFF’S OFFICE - NIGHT 49

There are already maps of Iran on easels in here. The
big three plus foreign networks on silent televisions.
LANDON BUTLER, 30s, Jordan’s Deputy Chief of Staff, is on
the phone.

SECRETARY
(into a phone)
Hold for the Chief of Staff --
(holds out the phone
to Jordan)
Hodding --

JORDAN BUTLER
(to Secretary) They’re sticking to it. No
I’ll call him back. release till we expel the
shah.

Jordan sinks into his chair, putting his feet up on the
desk.

JON TITTERTON, 30s, an aide to Jordan --

TITTERTON
Put him on a plane. Fuck him.

JORDAN
He’s half dead and he’s in chemo.

BUTLER
We took him in. He’s ours now.

TITTERTON
So we’ll take in any prick as long
as he’s got cancer?

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 13.
49 CONTINUED: 49

JORDAN
No. Just the pricks on our side.
So all our other pricks on their
prick thrones know, when they get
run out on a rail, they won’t be
getting their spleens out by a
camel vet in the Sinai.

TITTERTON
The six with the Canadians.

Now Jordan is looking at a monitor showing footage of a
BLINDFOLDED HOSTAGE in front of the Embassy. AL
GOLACINSKI being prodded and led down the front stairs of
the embassy.

JORDAN
We’ve got 60 in the embassy with
guns to their heads right now --

TITTERTON
The eyes of the world are on the *
embassy. That makes them safer *
than the six on the street. *

ANALYST
(coming to the door)
Bani-Sadr’s saying it’ll be over
in 24 hours.

JORDAN
Leave the six where they are. *
I’ll go brief the president. *

CUT TO BLACK.


FADE IN:
Genres: ["Political Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a tense night meeting in the Chief of Staff's office, Deputy Chief of Staff Landon Butler discusses the situation regarding the critically ill shah of Iran, while Chief of Staff Jordan weighs the political implications of taking him in against the safety of six hostages outside the embassy. As they debate the best course of action, an analyst reports that the crisis may resolve within 24 hours, prompting Jordan to prioritize briefing the president over the immediate safety of the hostages.
Strengths
  • Intense atmosphere
  • Realistic portrayal of crisis
  • Strong character reactions
Weaknesses
  • Some chaotic moments may be hard to follow for the audience

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to establish the immediate, life-threatening stakes of the embassy takeover and the confusion of the response. It lands effectively through mounting tension and clear physical danger, but the repetitive, fragmented dialogue and shifting character names weaken clarity and momentum, limiting its impact to a 6.5.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of depicting the 1979 Iran hostage crisis from inside the embassy is inherently compelling and historically significant, but the scene's execution feels muddled by inconsistent character naming and repetitive beats.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the crisis from protest to breach to occupation, but the sequence of events is sometimes confusing due to repeated descriptions and unclear spatial transitions.

Originality: 4.5

The scene covers a well-known historical event; originality is limited by the conventional depiction of chaos. The shifting character names and repetitive lines feel unpolished rather than fresh.


Character Development

Characters: 4

Characters are introduced but not differentiated; names shift (Bob/Mark, Ann/Cora, Al/Fred, etc.) making it hard to track who is who. No distinct personalities emerge.

Character Changes: 2

No character undergoes a clear change; they react to events but do not evolve or make meaningful decisions that alter their arc.

Internal Goal: 5

Jordan's internal goal is to navigate the complex political landscape and make decisions that will protect his country's interests while also considering humanitarian concerns.

External Goal: 6

Jordan's external goal is to handle the hostage crisis in Iran and make strategic decisions to ensure the safety of the hostages and maintain diplomatic relations.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 7

Conflict is clear: embassy staff vs. invading protesters, with internal tension about whether to fight or flee. However, the opposition is faceless and the internal debate is repetitive.

Opposition: 5

The opposition is the invading student protesters, who are faceless and monolithic, reducing dramatic tension. The internal opposition (confusion among staff) is more present but not sharp.

High Stakes: 8.5

Stakes are life-and-death: hostages taken, violence imminent, classified materials must be destroyed. This is clearly communicated.

Story Forward: 6.5

The scene moves the story forward by establishing the embassy takeover and the escape of six individuals, but the progression is muddled by repetition.

Unpredictability: 5.5

This scene is unpredictable because the chaos of the takeover and the shifting perspectives keep the reader uncertain of outcomes, though the broad historical outcome is known.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the ethical considerations of political decisions, balancing national security with moral obligations.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The scene generates anxiety and fear through the escalating violence and chaos, but the emotional impact is diluted by confusing character identification and repetitive dialogue.

Dialogue: 5

Dialogue is functional but repetitive, with characters echoing similar lines about danger and escape. It lacks distinct voices or subtext.

Engagement: 6

This scene is engaging because the real-life historical stakes and immediate physical danger create tension, but the confusion over who is who and what is happening reduces immersion.

Pacing: 5.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it accelerates from protest to breach to violence, but repetitive dialogue and action lines slow the momentum.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 4

Formatting is standard but inconsistent: character names change mid-scene (e.g., Bob/Mark, Ann/Cora), and action lines are sometimes redundant.

Structure: 5.5

The scene follows a linear escalation from protest to breach to occupation, but the structure is undermined by repetitive beats and unclear transitions between locations.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the tension and urgency of the political situation, but it could benefit from more character development. The dialogue feels somewhat expository and lacks emotional depth. For instance, while Jordan's pragmatic approach is clear, his emotional stakes regarding the hostages could be more pronounced to create a stronger connection with the audience.
  • The use of dialogue to convey the stakes is effective, but it sometimes feels too on-the-nose. Phrases like 'We’ve got 60 in the embassy with guns to their heads right now' could be rephrased to sound more natural and less like a plot summary. This would enhance the realism of the conversation.
  • The scene's pacing is somewhat uneven. The dialogue flows quickly, but the emotional weight of the situation could be emphasized with pauses or reactions from the characters. For example, after Titterton's comment about the hostages, a moment of silence or a visual reaction from Jordan could heighten the tension.
  • The setting is established with maps and silent televisions, which is a good visual cue, but it could be enhanced with more sensory details. Describing the atmosphere in the room—such as the tension in the air, the sounds of the televisions, or the expressions on the characters' faces—would create a more immersive experience.
  • The ending feels abrupt with the cut to black. While it serves to heighten the tension, it might be more impactful to include a brief moment of reflection or a visual cue that emphasizes the gravity of the decision to leave the six hostages where they are.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment of vulnerability for Jordan, perhaps a flash of concern for the hostages that contrasts with his otherwise pragmatic demeanor. This could help the audience connect with him on a deeper level.
  • Revise the dialogue to make it feel more organic. Instead of stating facts, allow characters to express their emotions and frustrations more subtly, which can convey the stakes without feeling overly expository.
  • Incorporate pauses in the dialogue to allow characters to react to each other's statements. This can create a more dynamic and realistic conversation, reflecting the weight of their decisions.
  • Enhance the sensory details in the setting to create a more vivid atmosphere. Describe the tension in the room, the flickering lights of the televisions, or the sound of papers rustling to immerse the audience in the scene.
  • Consider extending the scene slightly to include a moment of reflection or a visual that underscores the gravity of the situation before cutting to black. This could be a close-up of Jordan's face or a lingering shot of the monitors showing the hostages.



Scene 7 -  A Nation in Despair
49A EXT. OLD DOMINION DRIVE (VIRGINIA) - AFTERNOON 49A

A LONE ribbon sags in the f.g. -- the CAPITOL BUILDING
behind.

Yellow ribbons tied to lampposts. A Catholic church with
a sign on the lawn that says PRAY FOR OUR HOSTAGES. A
dry cleaner with a large American flag in the window and
yellow ribbons drawn by kids around it.

The exterior of a neighborhood bar, O’Tooles. More
ribbons.

SUPERIMPOSE: McLEAN, VIRGINIA - 69 DAYS LATER
ARGO - Final 14.


49B INT. MENDEZ APARTMENT - BEFORE DAWN 49B *

A television connected to a faraway wall with an *
extension cord sits on a coffee table. The t.v. shows *
color test patterns. *

We move over the coffee table, a mess of Chinese food *
containers and beer bottles, to find TONY MENDEZ, 40, *
asleep in his clothes from the day before. *

The phone rings. He answers it, half awake. *

MENDEZ *
Yeah. *

He listens for a moment, then sits up, suddenly wide- *
awake. *

49E 49E *


50 EXT. CANAL ROAD - MORNING 50

Mendez’s car speeds by yellow ribbons along trees on
Canal Road.


51 EXT. CIA - PARKING LOT - EARLY MORNING 51

Mendez gets out of his car and hurries toward a white
building that looks like a college campus.

NEWSCASTER (V.O.)
Prime Minister Bani-Sadr today re-
stated demands for the hostages’
release...


52 INT. CIA DIRECTORATE OF OPERATIONS - MORNING 52

As we watch him hurry out of his car and into the CIA, we
start to pick up TVs as we go by them -- all tuned to
some version of the same story.

He enters the front doors and crosses the famous EMBLEM
on the ground.

He moves past the STARS ON THE WALL, signifying fallen
CIA officers (and there were fewer stars then than now).

He passes the SECURITY GUARD at the desk, holds up his
badge. The guard nods.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 15.
52 CONTINUED: 52

A young Tom Brokaw in a yellow, sleeveless sweater and
teal tie plays on the television, intoning on the “Today
Show.” ANGELA BELK, young wife of hostage WILLIAM BELK,
has a soft Southern voice and fights back tears. (*ABC,
11/23/79)

BROKAW (V.O.) ANGELA BELK (V.O.)
Week ten of a hostage I’m so afraid that I won’t
crisis that seems without see him again. That he
end. A glimmer of hope won’t get out from over
after the release of some there, because everything --
women and Afro-Americans it seems like everything
but little activity in the they’re trying to do is
weeks since, and the images just backfiring, it’s not
of bound Americans under working --
armed guard have many
losing hope --

Under these images we hear an undulating drone -- the
constant accompaniment of life then -- coverage of the
hostage crisis.

PRESIDENT CARTER (V.O.)
The United States shall not
purchase oil from Iran. Iranian
assets shall be frozen and the
U.S. shall engage in a forceful
campaign of international
diplomacy against the Iranians...

MENDEZ (V.O.)
Ten weeks State’s sitting on this?


53-55 OMITTED 53-55
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary The scene depicts the emotional toll of an ongoing hostage crisis in Virginia, marked by yellow ribbons and signs for prayers. It follows CIA operative Tony Mendez, who wakes up in a disheveled apartment and drives past the symbols of hope before arriving at CIA headquarters. News coverage highlights the despair of families affected, particularly focusing on Angela Belk, the wife of a hostage. Mendez reflects on the stagnation of the situation, underscoring the urgency and hopelessness surrounding the crisis.
Strengths
  • Intense pacing
  • Realistic portrayal of chaos
  • Strong character development
Weaknesses
  • Minimal dialogue
  • Some actions may be predictable

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 5.5

This scene effectively establishes the passage of time and the national mood through visual symbols and media snippets, but its primary job—to advance the plot or deepen character—is undercut by its static, montage-like quality that lacks dramatic action or character change, limiting its overall impact. A stronger narrative hook or character moment would lift it.


Story Content

Concept: 5.5

The concept of showing the home front's emotional landscape through yellow ribbons and TV news is solid, but it's a familiar trope and doesn't introduce new tension or insight.

Plot: 4

The plot barely moves; it's a transitional scene showing Mendez being called in, but the bulk is atmosphere and recap of known events.

Originality: 4

The use of yellow ribbons and TV news is historically authentic but not original; the scene offers no fresh take on the material.


Character Development

Characters: 4.5

Mendez is shown as tired and suddenly alert, but we learn little new about him. Other characters are fleeting or absent.

Character Changes: 2

Mendez goes from asleep to alert, but this is a minor shift, not a meaningful change.

Internal Goal: 4

The protagonist's internal goal is to navigate the complexities of the hostage crisis and find a solution to bring the hostages home safely. This reflects his desire to fulfill his duty as a CIA agent and his fear of failure.

External Goal: 5

The protagonist's external goal is to execute a plan to rescue the hostages from Iran. This reflects the immediate challenge he is facing in the crisis.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

Conflict is implied (the hostage crisis, bureaucratic delay) but not dramatized in the scene itself.

Opposition: 3

Opposition is abstract—the hostage takers, bureaucratic inertia—not personified in the scene.

High Stakes: 6

Stakes are high (hostage crisis, national crisis) but felt indirectly; the scene doesn't raise immediate stakes for Mendez.

Story Forward: 4

The scene moves the story forward only by showing Mendez being called to action, but the bulk is static atmosphere.

Unpredictability: 3.5

This scene is unpredictable because the call to Mendez is a small surprise, but the rest is a predictable depiction of the era's mood.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict is between the value of human life and political power. The protagonist's beliefs in the importance of saving lives clash with the political complexities of the hostage situation.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 4.5

The yellow ribbons and Angela Belk's voiceover evoke sadness, but the scene is too diffuse to land a strong emotional punch.

Dialogue: 3.5

Dialogue is minimal and functional—phone calls and TV voiceovers—with no memorable exchanges.

Engagement: 5

This scene is engaging because the yellow ribbons and TV news create a palpable sense of historical moment, but the lack of direct action or character focus reduces momentum.

Pacing: 5.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the slow, observational rhythm mirrors the waiting and stagnation, but it risks becoming dull.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 7

Formatting is standard and clean, with clear scene headings and transitions, though the montage style is somewhat loose.

Structure: 4

The structure is a montage of locations and media, lacking a clear dramatic arc or turning point within the scene.


Critique
  • The scene effectively establishes the emotional weight of the hostage crisis through visual imagery, such as the yellow ribbons and signs urging prayers. However, it could benefit from a stronger connection to the characters' emotional states, particularly Mendez's, as he transitions from a chaotic personal life to the gravity of his professional responsibilities.
  • The juxtaposition of the peaceful suburban setting with the ongoing crisis creates a stark contrast, but the scene lacks a deeper exploration of how this crisis affects the community. Adding brief interactions or reactions from locals could enhance the emotional impact and provide a broader context.
  • The dialogue in the scene is minimal, which can be effective for pacing, but it may leave the audience wanting more character development. Mendez's half-awake response to the phone call feels somewhat detached; a more engaged reaction could better convey his urgency and the stakes involved.
  • The use of news broadcasts as a narrative device is effective in conveying the ongoing crisis, but it could be more tightly integrated with Mendez's character arc. For instance, showing Mendez's reaction to the news could provide insight into his emotional state and motivations.
  • The transition from the exterior shots to Mendez's apartment feels abrupt. A smoother transition that connects the two locations thematically or visually could enhance the flow of the scene.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief moment where Mendez interacts with a neighbor or a passerby to illustrate the community's response to the hostage crisis, which would ground the story in a more relatable context.
  • Enhance Mendez's emotional journey by including a moment of reflection or a flashback that connects his personal struggles to the larger crisis, allowing the audience to empathize with his character more deeply.
  • Incorporate more dialogue or internal monologue from Mendez as he wakes up and processes the phone call, which could heighten the tension and urgency of the situation.
  • Explore the use of sound design to amplify the emotional weight of the news broadcasts, perhaps by layering in ambient sounds from the neighborhood to contrast with the gravity of the news.
  • Consider using a visual motif, such as the yellow ribbons, to symbolize hope or despair throughout the scene, reinforcing the emotional stakes as Mendez navigates his day.



Scene 8 -  Urgent Extraction Plans
56 INT. D.O. FLOOR - HALLWAY - LANGLEY - AFTERNOON 56

O’Donnell, frantically grabbing documents and tossing
them into an accordion folder.

O’DONNELL
The six of them went out a back
exit. Brits turned them away,
Kiwis turned them away. The
Canadians took them in. They’ve
been there since.

O’Donnell hands Mendez pages with STAFF PHOTOGRAPHS of
SIX PEOPLE -- the escaped embassy employees -- as he
continues to toss stuff into his folder.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 16.
56 CONTINUED: 56

O’DONNELL
Traffic calls them The
Houseguests. Haven’t left the
Canadian ambassador’s house since
it happened.

MENDEZ
Compromised? *

O’DONNELL
(shakes his head)
Just a matter of time. We’ve got
Revolutionary Guards going door-to-
door like Jehovah’s Witnesses,
looking for escapees. They’re out
for blood, Tony. Half of them
think Khomeini’s been too lenient
with the ones in the embassy.

Walking out of his office, Mendez following.

MENDEZ
White House?


56A INT. CIA - THE PIT - CONTINUOUS ACTION 56A

They walk through an open floor of cubicles lined with
offices, we get a look at the 1979 CIA headquarters:
nothing sleek or sexy about the interior. An open area
of desks where Woodward and Bernstein might be spilling
coffee on their thick ‘70s ties. Papers and files
everywhere. Trash emptying happens only once a week.
Cigarette and cigar butts in ashtrays. Everything is
perpetually a mess. And typewriters. The constant
percussive sound of telexes and typing is the metronome
that beats out the day here.

O’DONNELL
Carter’s shitting enough bricks to
build the pyramids. He wants the *
six of them out.

MENDEZ
Who else knows?

O’DONNELL
Just the families. Meanwhile,
some genius in the embassy was
keeping a mug book of everybody
who worked there.

MENDEZ
Jesus Christ.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 17.
56A CONTINUED: 56A

O’DONNELL
We think it got shredded before
they got in, but the fuckers have
sweat-shop kids in there re-
assembling the shreds.

O’DONNELL
They’re gonna make an example of
the ones who escaped. Standing-
room-only for beheadings in the
square.

MENDEZ
Who’s handling?

They walk through a door and out of the Pit.


57 INT. D.O. FLOOR - HALLWAY - AFTERNOON 57

-- into a HALLWAY WITH POP ART on the walls. People with
laminated badges and folders with red stripes walk with
purpose. *

O’DONNELL
State’s coordinating in-house.

MENDEZ
They don’t do exfils. *

O’DONNELL
They do now. They want to run it
by us, strictly as consultants.

Off his look.

O’DONNELL
Engell’s saying it’s lose-lose.
These people die, they die badly.
Publicly. ‘State wants the blame,
he’ll give it to them.

MENDEZ
Then why’s he want me?

O’DONNELL
So he can tell State he ran it by
his best exfil guy.

They stop in front of a conference room. Jack looks at
him.

O’DONNELL
Tony. This isn’t the kind of
meeting where you talk.
ARGO - Final 18.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense scene at CIA headquarters in 1979, O'Donnell frantically briefs Mendez on the urgent situation of six embassy employees hiding from Revolutionary Guards in the Canadian ambassador's house. With the White House anxious for their safe extraction and the threat of public executions looming, O'Donnell emphasizes the lack of experience in the State Department for such operations, drawing Mendez into the high-stakes mission. The chaotic office environment reflects the urgency of their discussion, culminating in O'Donnell's warning that the upcoming meeting is not open for debate.
Strengths
  • Intense atmosphere
  • Realistic dialogue
  • High stakes
  • Strong character dynamics
Weaknesses
  • Potential for confusion with multiple characters and locations

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene efficiently establishes the stakes and the CIA's bureaucratic paralysis, landing the political-thriller job of raising tension through exposition. The biggest limiter is the repetitive, self-correcting dialogue pattern that, while stylistically interesting, slows momentum and risks confusing the reader about what is actually happening.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of a CIA exfiltration expert being reluctantly pulled into a politically toxic rescue mission is strong and genre-appropriate. The scene effectively introduces the core dilemma: the State Department wants cover, not a solution.

Plot: 6

The plot advances by revealing the escapees' situation and the CIA's internal politics. However, the repetitive dialogue corrections (Brits/Kiwis/Canadians) obscure the plot progression and make the information feel less reliable.

Originality: 6

The repeated self-correction dialogue is an original stylistic touch that conveys the chaos of the situation. The scene is otherwise a familiar 'reluctant expert briefed on impossible mission' setup.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Mendez is established as a reluctant, cynical expert through his minimal, pointed responses. O'Donnell is the harried messenger. Their dynamic is clear, but neither character is deeply developed in this scene.

Character Changes: 1

Mendez shows no change in this scene; he remains resistant. The scene sets up potential for change but does not deliver it.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to navigate the dangerous political landscape and make a decision that could save lives while also protecting his own reputation and career.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to plan and execute a successful extraction mission to save the embassy employees from Iran.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6

The central conflict is between Mendez's desire to avoid a no-win mission and the institutional pressure to take it. This is clear but undercut by the repetitive dialogue.

Opposition: 6

The opposition is institutional: the State Department's political cowardice and the impossible mission parameters. There is no personal antagonist yet.

High Stakes: 8

The stakes are explicitly stated: the escapees will be publicly beheaded if caught. This is high, but the scene's tone undercuts the urgency.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by establishing the mission parameters and Mendez's reluctant involvement. It is a necessary plot step.

Unpredictability: 5

This scene is somewhat unpredictable because the repeated corrections of O'Donnell's lines create a sense of chaotic, real-time information gathering, but the overall trajectory (Mendez being recruited) is expected.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict in this scene is the tension between moral duty and political expediency. The protagonist must balance the need to save lives with the potential consequences for his career and the US government's reputation.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5

The emotional impact is muted by the cynical, procedural tone. The stakes are high (beheadings), but the scene keeps them at an intellectual distance.

Dialogue: 6

The dialogue is sharp and functional, with a darkly humorous edge. The repeated corrections are a distinctive stylistic choice, but they can feel gimmicky and slow the exchange's natural flow.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because the rapid-fire dialogue and dark humor create a sense of urgency and insider cynicism, and the stakes are clearly life-or-death.

Pacing: 6

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the walk-and-talk structure and short lines create forward momentum, but the repetitive corrections can stall that momentum.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 7

Formatting is professional and follows standard screenplay conventions. The use of CONTINUED headers and scene numbers is correct. The repeated dialogue lines with strikethroughs (implied by the corrections) are a stylistic choice that may not render clearly in all formats.

Structure: 6.5

The scene uses a classic 'walk and talk' structure to deliver exposition while building momentum. The repeated corrections are an unconventional structural choice that can disrupt flow.


Critique
  • The scene effectively conveys a sense of urgency and chaos, reflecting the high stakes of the situation. O'Donnell's frantic behavior and dialogue help establish the tension surrounding the escapees, making the audience feel the pressure of the moment.
  • The dialogue is sharp and informative, providing necessary exposition without feeling overly expository. O'Donnell's lines about the Revolutionary Guards and the potential consequences for the escapees create a palpable sense of danger.
  • The transition between locations (from O'Donnell's office to The Pit) is smooth, maintaining the momentum of the scene. The description of the CIA headquarters adds a layer of authenticity, grounding the narrative in the historical context of the 1970s.
  • However, the scene could benefit from more character development. While O'Donnell and Mendez are established as key players, their emotional stakes could be deepened. For instance, exploring Mendez's personal feelings about the situation could enhance the audience's connection to him.
  • The pacing is generally good, but there are moments where the dialogue could be tightened to maintain a brisker tempo. For example, some lines could be trimmed or rephrased for greater impact, ensuring that the urgency of the situation is reflected in the dialogue's rhythm.
  • The visual descriptions, while effective, could be more vivid. Adding sensory details about the environment—such as the sounds, smells, or even the atmosphere of the CIA office—could immerse the audience further into the scene.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment where Mendez reflects on the personal stakes involved in the mission, perhaps recalling a past experience that parallels the current situation. This could deepen his character and make the audience more invested in his journey.
  • Tighten the dialogue by removing any redundant phrases or words that do not add to the urgency or clarity of the scene. Aim for brevity to enhance the fast-paced nature of the conversation.
  • Incorporate more sensory details to enrich the setting. Describe the sounds of the typewriters, the smell of stale coffee, or the tension in the air to create a more immersive experience for the audience.
  • Introduce a moment of hesitation or doubt from Mendez to humanize him further. This could be a brief internal conflict about the risks involved, which would add depth to his character and the stakes of the mission.
  • Consider using visual metaphors or motifs that reflect the chaos of the situation, such as cluttered desks symbolizing the disarray of the operation, to enhance the thematic elements of the scene.



Scene 9 -  Tensions in the Conference Room
58 INT. CONFERENCE ROOM - A FEW MINUTES LATER 58

They enter to find: ADAM ENGELL, 40s or 50s, Deputy
Chief of Operations, hosting visitors from the State
Department: PENDER and BATES from State. The State guys
are both dressed better than the CIA guys, except for
Engell.

Other CIA Operations OFFICERS and ANALYSTS sit in
audience.

ENGELL
Okay. This is Bob Pender from
State O.S. He’s been talking to
Morgan at ExtAff.

GENCO, a State Department Assistant, removes a drape from
the photographs of SIX FACES, State Department I.D.
photos. Pender indicates the first two photos -- and
during this, we may flash to scenes of the Houseguests in
the Canadian ambassador’s residence --

PENDER
Mark and Cora Lijek, 29 and 25.
He’s a consular officer and she’s
an assistant. Newlyweds. They
just got there a couple of months
ago. No language skills or in-
country knowledge.
(re: the next photo)
Henry Lee Schatz. Agricultural
attache from Idaho. He was there
to sell U.S. tractors to Iranian
agro. Hid out with the Swedes
during the takeover then made his
way to join the others with the
Canadians.
(re: next photo)
Joe Stafford. Late twenties.
He’s smart and a climber. Speaks
Farsi. Arranged the hire of his
wife Kathy --

BATES
Understaffed so the faculty wives
were the typing pool.

That goes without comment in this room of men.

PENDER
(then, finally)
Bob Anders. Senior consular
officer, oldest of the group.
Most likely to be group leader.
So.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 19.
58 CONTINUED: 58
PENDER (CONT'D)
(now, shifting gears)
What we like for this are
bicycles. We’ve identified
backroads from the Shemiran
district -- a couple of rat lines
through the mountains to the
crossing at Tabriz. Cars are off
the table because of the
roadblocks.

Pender nods to Bates, who goes to a map, indicating the
north of Iran.

BATES
We wait till the weather clears up
then we deliver six bikes and
provide maps to the Turkish
border.

PENDER
We have intelligence they can ride
bicycles. Or we’re prepared to
send in somebody to teach them.

The professional spies shifting at the stupidity of it.
But nobody speaks up. And then --

MENDEZ
You can send in training wheels
and wait at the border with
Gatorade.

Attention turns to Mendez. O’Donnell shifts. Engell,
not happy.

MENDEZ
It’s 300 miles to the Turkish
crossings. They’d need a support
crew behind them with a tire pump.

ENGELL PENDER
(directed at Mendez) Who is --
We’ve only been asked to
sharpshoot this, State’s
handling the op.

O’DONNELL
Tony’s an exfil spesh. He got a
lot of the shah’s people out after
the fall.




(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 20.
58 CONTINUED: (2) 58

MENDEZ
(to Pender)
If these people can read OR add,
any minute they’re gonna figure
out they’re six short of a full
deck. It’s winter. You wanna
wait around for a nice spring day
for bike rides?
(a beat)
The only way out’s through the
airport. You build them new
identities, a Moses goes in, takes
them out on a commercial flight.

BATES ENGELL
We’re exploring that They wouldn’t clear airport
option. control. Komiteh own the
place.

BATES
They would pose as reporters. The
government issued 70-something --

Jumping in--MARIO MALINOV, 30s, an ambitious Bulgarian
CIA analyst, Bronx Science and MIT, raised in Queens,

BATES MALINOV
-- visas for American 74.
journalists.

MALINOV
And the Revolutionary Guards keep
them on 74 leashes.

MENDEZ
They get caught with journalist
creds, you’ve got Peter Jennings
with a noose around his neck in an
hour.

PAUL LAMONT, late 20s, a Master’s from the Woodrow Wilson
School before he joined CIA --

LAMONT
World Noose Tonight.

Pender looks at Bates, who is trying to impress his boss.

BATES
North American accents give us
limited options. So we get the
Canadians to issue them
passports...


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 21.
58 CONTINUED: (3) 58

GENCO
English teachers from the
international school. Tested
model. It’s worked before.

MENDEZ
The school was shut eight months
ago.

Bates, meanwhile, removing a binder from his accordion
folder: in the binder, a photograph of an emaciated kid
in Namibia.

BATES
So do-gooders. They’re six
Canadians who’ve been over there
inspecting crops. Making sure the
kids get enough to eat. Get them
creds for an AG NGO --

But he’s already lost Mendez, who is going through a
newspaper on the table.

BATES MALINOV
A Feed the Children thing -- These kids are black.
O.S. can make binders with These are African kids.
starving kids --

LAMONT GENCO
Are there starving kids in We can get ethnically
Iran? appropriate kids.

PENDER ROSSI
I’m sure there’s skinny A logo with... seeds.
kids... ‘Seeds of Hope’...

Mendez holds a page from the newspaper up to Pender.

MENDEZ
What do you see in the picture,
sir?

A beat. Pender doesn’t like this, but he’ll play.

PENDER
Tehran.

MENDEZ
What’s on the ground?

PENDER
Snow.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 22.
58 CONTINUED: (4) 58

MENDEZ
So what crops are the do-gooders
inspecting under Frosty?

Pender shifts.

MENDEZ
Exfils are like abortions. You
don’t wanna need one, but when you
do, you don’t do it yourself.

The meeting is breaking up. Pender, followed by Bates,
leaves the room. Engell, who has just been made to look
bad and inherited a problem, stops by Tony.

ENGELL
(to Mendez)
You have a better plan?

Mendez doesn’t respond.

ENGELL
Get one. *


58A-59 OMITTED 58A-59
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense conference room meeting, Deputy Chief Adam Engell introduces State Department representatives Bob Pender and Bates to CIA officers to discuss the exfiltration of American diplomats in Iran. Pender proposes an escape plan using bicycles, which CIA specialist Mendez criticizes as impractical, advocating instead for creating new identities to facilitate a safer airport exit. The discussion highlights the conflict between the CIA and State Department over the best approach, culminating in Engell asking Mendez for a better plan, which he does not provide, leaving the situation unresolved.
Strengths
  • Intense dialogue
  • High-stakes decision-making
  • Strategic planning
  • Tension-filled interactions
Weaknesses
  • Some dialogue may be too technical for general audiences
  • Lack of emotional depth in certain interactions

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to introduce the central conflict—the flawed State Department plan versus Mendez's expertise—and it lands effectively through sharp dialogue and escalating tension. The biggest limiter is the lack of character depth for Mendez, who remains a reactive voice rather than a fully realized protagonist, and the scene could be lifted by giving him a more personal stake or a moment of vulnerability.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of a high-stakes extraction plan being debated in a bureaucratic meeting is strong, and the contrast between the absurd bicycle plan and the realistic airport exfiltration is compelling. The scene effectively sets up the core conflict of the film.

Plot: 7

The plot advances by rejecting the State Department's plan and setting up Mendez's alternative, but it's mostly a debate scene with little action. The plot moves forward through dialogue and decision, not through events.

Originality: 8

The scene is original in its portrayal of a bureaucratic meeting as a high-stakes thriller. The use of dark humor and the absurdity of the bicycle plan is a fresh take on the espionage genre.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Mendez is established as the expert with a dry wit, but his internal life is not explored. The State Department officials are portrayed as incompetent, but they are somewhat one-dimensional. The scene lacks a strong character arc or emotional depth.

Character Changes: 3

Mendez does not change significantly in this scene; he remains consistent in his skepticism and expertise. The State Department officials are humbled but not transformed. The scene is more about establishing positions than changing them.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to assert his expertise and competence in front of his colleagues and superiors. This reflects his desire for recognition and respect within the intelligence community.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to come up with a viable plan to rescue the six individuals from Iran using bicycles as a means of transportation. This goal reflects the immediate challenge of navigating the dangerous terrain and evading detection by Iranian authorities.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6

The conflict is primarily intellectual and bureaucratic, with Mendez challenging the State Department's plan. There is no physical conflict, but the tension is palpable as the stakes are life and death.

Opposition: 6

The opposition comes from the State Department officials who are set on their flawed plan, and from Engell who is resistant to Mendez's input. The opposition is bureaucratic and intellectual, not physical.

High Stakes: 8

The stakes are extremely high—the lives of six people are at risk—but the scene focuses on the planning, so the immediate danger is not felt. The stakes are intellectualized rather than visceral.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by rejecting the bicycle plan and setting up Mendez's alternative, which will drive the rest of the plot. It also introduces key characters and the central conflict.

Unpredictability: 7.5

The scene is unpredictable because the audience expects a serious plan, but instead gets a ridiculous bicycle proposal. Mendez's sarcastic takedown is unexpected and refreshing, making the scene memorable.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the differing approaches to the rescue mission. Some characters advocate for unconventional methods like using bicycles, while others prefer more traditional strategies like creating new identities for the individuals. This conflict challenges the protagonist's beliefs about the best course of action in high-stakes situations.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5.5

The emotional impact is limited because the scene focuses on debate rather than character emotion. The urgency is felt, but the audience is not deeply moved by the characters' personal stakes.

Dialogue: 8.5

The dialogue is sharp, witty, and serves to highlight the absurdity of the plans. Lines like 'World Noose Tonight' and 'Exfils are like abortions' are memorable and reveal character. However, some exchanges feel like they are there purely for exposition.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because of the sharp dialogue and the intellectual battle between Mendez and the State Department. The absurdity of the bicycle plan keeps the audience hooked, and the tension is palpable.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is brisk, with rapid-fire dialogue that keeps the scene moving. The back-and-forth between characters creates a rhythm that mirrors the urgency of the situation.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is standard screenplay format with clear character introductions and dialogue. The use of parentheticals and action lines is effective, though some descriptions are minimal.

Structure: 8

The scene follows a classic meeting structure: presentation of a plan, critique, counter-proposal, and resolution. It builds tension through the back-and-forth and ends with a challenge to Mendez, setting up the next phase.


Critique
  • The scene effectively establishes the tension between the CIA and State Department, showcasing the differing approaches to the crisis. However, the dialogue can feel a bit expository at times, with characters explaining their roles and the situation rather than engaging in natural conversation. This can detract from the urgency of the moment.
  • Mendez's character is introduced as a strong voice of reason, but his initial comments about the bicycle plan come off as overly sarcastic, which may undermine the gravity of the situation. Balancing his humor with the seriousness of the context could enhance his character's depth.
  • The scene's pacing is uneven, particularly in the middle where the dialogue becomes cluttered with too many voices chiming in. This can confuse the audience and dilute the impact of Mendez's critical points. Streamlining the dialogue to focus on key characters could improve clarity.
  • The use of visual elements, such as the photographs of the hostages, is a strong choice, but the scene could benefit from more vivid descriptions of the characters' reactions to these images. This would help to humanize the stakes involved and create a stronger emotional connection for the audience.
  • The ending of the scene, where Engell asks Mendez if he has a better plan, feels abrupt and lacks a strong emotional or narrative payoff. It would be more impactful if Mendez's silence was accompanied by a moment of reflection or a visual cue that emphasizes the weight of the situation.
Suggestions
  • Consider revising the dialogue to make it feel more organic and less like exposition. Allow characters to express their frustrations and ideas in a way that feels more conversational.
  • Balance Mendez's sarcasm with moments of seriousness to maintain the tension of the scene. This will help to establish him as a competent and relatable character.
  • Streamline the dialogue by focusing on fewer characters during critical moments. This will help maintain clarity and ensure that the audience can follow the stakes without getting lost in the chatter.
  • Enhance the emotional weight of the scene by including more descriptive reactions from the characters when the photographs of the hostages are revealed. This will help to create a stronger connection to the stakes involved.
  • Add a moment of reflection or a visual cue at the end of the scene to emphasize the gravity of Mendez's silence when asked for a better plan. This could involve a close-up on his face or a lingering shot on the photographs, reinforcing the tension.



Scene 10 -  Dinner Disrupted
60 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DINING ROOM - 60
NIGHT

At dinner around a dining room table: the SIX
HOUSEGUESTS; KEN TAYLOR, 40s, Canadian ambassador. He
does much to support the myth that Canadians are always
in a good mood. Next to him is PAT TAYLOR, Filipino,
40s. We’re joining various conversations, including one
with LEE SCHATZ, 29, an American agricultural attache,
the sixth escapee we heard about.

TAYLOR
-- Martin was the worst one.
Martin the Maximo King --

PAT TAYLOR
(to Lee Schatz)
-- he looked like a cartoon witch
doctor, bone through his nose, so
she asked to take her picture with
him --

Joe Stafford, keeping to himself.

KATHY STAFFORD
(to Joe Stafford)
You okay?
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 23.
60 CONTINUED: 60

CORA LIJEK
-- if your family’s hungry, you
don’t want to hear about
international law --

MARK LIJEK CORA LIJEK
And she’s off! Defending Not defending. Explaining.
them again -- Stockholm
Syndrome --

MARK LIJEK
Same thing.

The sound of a fork on a glass. Ken Taylor is standing *
up.

TAYLOR
I read today that Tehran was voted
the second most desirable city in
the world to live in. Everywhere
else tied for first.
(toast)
To getting through ten weeks. To
our guests.

LEE SCHATZ
(raising his glass)
Our hosts. Mr. Ambassador...

BOB ANDERS CORA LIJEK
Hear, hear... And Mrs.

But the liquid in their wine glasses is beginning to
shake. The noise of a HELICOPTER. Taylor tries to be
pleasant.

TAYLOR
You should get into the crawl *
space.


61-67 OMITTED 61-67
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary During a dinner at the Canadian Ambassador's residence, guests engage in light-hearted conversations, with Ken Taylor toasting to their resilience. However, the atmosphere shifts dramatically when the sound of a helicopter interrupts, causing tension among the guests. Joe Stafford's withdrawn demeanor raises concern from his wife, Kathy, while Cora and Mark Lijek debate Stockholm Syndrome. As the noise shakes the wine glasses, Ken suggests they seek safety in the crawl space, signaling a transition from camaraderie to crisis.
Strengths
  • Effective tension-building
  • Compelling character dynamics
  • Emotional depth
Weaknesses
  • Some transitions between locations could be smoother

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 5.5

This scene's primary job is to establish the hidden tension and vulnerability of the diplomats in the Canadian ambassador's residence, which it does effectively through the contrast of casual dinner talk and the ominous helicopter noise. The biggest limiter is the lack of clear stakes or character development within the scene itself, as the dialogue feels aimless and the threat remains external and vague, which would be lifted by more direct conflict or a clearer sense of immediate danger.


Story Content

Concept: 6

The concept of hiding diplomats in plain sight during a crisis is strong, but the scene doesn't fully exploit the inherent tension, instead focusing on trivial conversation.

Plot: 4

The plot advances minimally; the scene shows the diplomats in hiding but doesn't introduce new obstacles or decisions, making it feel like a pause rather than a progression.

Originality: 4

The scene is not particularly original; the 'hiding in plain sight' trope is common, and the dialogue feels generic rather than authentic to the specific historical moment.


Character Development

Characters: 3.5

Characters are barely differentiated; the dialogue is generic and doesn't reveal distinct personalities or arcs, with the exception of Taylor's forced pleasantness.

Character Changes: 1

No character shows significant change; they remain in a static state of waiting, which doesn't advance their arcs.

Internal Goal: 4

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to maintain a sense of normalcy and composure despite the underlying tension and potential danger. This reflects their need to protect their guests and uphold their diplomatic responsibilities.

External Goal: 5

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to keep the guests safe and maintain a sense of hospitality despite the looming threat of danger, as indicated by the noise of the helicopter.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

Conflict is minimal and external (the helicopter); internal or interpersonal conflict among the diplomats is absent, reducing dramatic tension.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is the unseen threat of the helicopter and the Iranian guards, but it's not personified or actively opposing the characters in the scene, reducing its strength.

High Stakes: 6

Stakes are high conceptually (capture and death), but the scene doesn't make them feel immediate or personal, reducing their impact.

Story Forward: 3

The scene stalls the story; it shows the status quo of hiding but doesn't introduce new information or propel the plot toward a resolution.

Unpredictability: 4

This scene is unpredictable because the mundane conversation is interrupted by the helicopter, but the overall situation (hiding from a search) is predictable.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the tension between maintaining diplomatic decorum and addressing the imminent danger. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs in diplomacy and hospitality.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 4

The emotional impact is muted; the fear is implied but not felt through the characters' actions or dialogue, making it hard to connect.

Dialogue: 3

The dialogue is stilted and lacks subtext; the conversation about a witch doctor and international law feels disconnected from the life-or-death situation, weakening the tension.

Engagement: 5

This scene is engaging because the contrast between the trivial dinner chat and the helicopter creates a sense of dread, but the lack of character depth or plot movement reduces engagement.

Pacing: 5.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the slow, banal dialogue builds a false sense of calm, which is then shattered by the helicopter, but the pacing drags in the middle.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 7

Formatting is standard and clean, with proper scene headings and character cues, though the repeated 'CONTINUED' and omitted page numbers are minor distractions.

Structure: 4.5

The structure is a slice-of-life scene with a rising tension from the helicopter, but it lacks a clear turning point or climax, ending on a note of unresolved threat.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the tension of the situation through the juxtaposition of a seemingly light-hearted dinner conversation against the backdrop of the ongoing crisis. However, the humor feels somewhat forced and may detract from the gravity of their circumstances. The dialogue could benefit from a more organic flow that reflects the characters' anxiety and fear, rather than relying on comedic elements that may not resonate given the context.
  • The character dynamics are introduced, but they lack depth. For instance, Joe Stafford's withdrawal is noted, but his internal conflict or emotional state isn't explored. This could be an opportunity to delve deeper into the psychological impact of their situation on each character, particularly those who are more affected by the crisis.
  • The dialogue, while humorous, sometimes feels disjointed and lacks a clear thematic connection to the overarching narrative. For example, the references to 'Stockholm Syndrome' and the light banter about Martin could be tied more closely to the characters' fears and the reality of their situation, enhancing the emotional stakes.
  • The introduction of the helicopter noise serves as a strong auditory cue to heighten tension, but it could be more effectively integrated into the dialogue. Characters could react more visibly to the sound, allowing the audience to feel the immediate threat rather than just hearing it. This would create a more immersive experience.
  • The toast by Ken Taylor is a nice touch, but it feels somewhat disconnected from the preceding dialogue. A more cohesive transition into the toast could enhance the emotional weight of the moment, perhaps by reflecting on their shared experiences or fears before raising their glasses.
Suggestions
  • Consider revising the dialogue to incorporate more subtle humor that reflects the characters' coping mechanisms in the face of danger, rather than overt jokes that may feel out of place.
  • Explore Joe Stafford's character more deeply by including a moment of vulnerability or a line that reveals his internal struggle, which could resonate with the audience and add depth to the scene.
  • Tie the dialogue more closely to the themes of fear and survival. For example, characters could express their concerns about the helicopter noise more explicitly, discussing what it means for their safety.
  • Enhance the auditory tension by having characters react to the helicopter noise in real-time, perhaps pausing mid-conversation or exchanging worried glances, to create a more immediate sense of danger.
  • Revise Ken Taylor's toast to reflect a deeper emotional connection to their situation, perhaps by acknowledging the hardships they've faced together, which would make the moment feel more poignant and impactful.



Scene 11 -  Tensions Rising: A Night of Uncertainty
68 INT. MENDEZ’S CAR - NIGHT 68

Mendez listens to the radio as he drives home along the
bridge, the Jefferson Memorial beyond.

NEWSCASTER (V.O.)
The White House Christmas tree was
taken down today after never
having been lit, as the cruel
stalemate in Iran continues.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 24.
68 CONTINUED: 68
This is a --


69 MONTAGE 69

that jumps around the world -- scenes of our principals
and overlapping news accounts play.

FRANK REYNOLDS (V.O.)
Today, a clear threat to place the
remaining 50 Americans on trial as
spies.*


69A INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE (TEHRAN) - NIGHT 69A

The Houseguests getting up from dinner. Kathy Stafford
hesitates.

JOE STAFFORD
(to Pat Taylor)
Kathy doesn’t want to go down
again.

BOB ANDERS JOE STAFFORD
Jesus Christ -- She’s claustrophobic.

CUT TO:


69B FOOTAGE OF NILOFUR EKTEBAR - AKA TEHRAN MARY 69B

The Penn-educated Tokyo Rose of the hostage crisis.
She’s reading a statement to the camera.

TEHRAN MARY (V.O.)
(perfect American
English)
Those who remain here are spies.
They will be treated as spies who
have interfered with the
sovereignty of the people of Iran.


69C INT. MENDEZ’ CAR - NIGHT 69C

Mendez driving -- thinking --


69D INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE (TEHRAN) - NIGHT 69D

MARK LIJEK JOE STAFFORD
You’re putting us all at They’re not going to come
risk -- into the house.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 25.
69D CONTINUED: 69D
LEE SCHATZ BOB ANDERS
It’s her choice. Leave her (angry)
be. G’head. Put flowers in
their gun barrels --

SAHAR, housekeeper, is visible here cleaning up after
their meal.


70 INT. MUSHROOM INN - DAY 70

A dark room where hostages are kept in groups of two.

A 21-year-old with an automatic weapon -- *

CROSS-CUTTING WITH --


71 INTERVIEW FOOTAGE OF AYATOLLAH KHOMEINI 71

KHOMEINI (V.O.)
(subtitled)
If Carter does not send back the
Shah, it is possible that they
will be tried and if they are
tried, who knows what will happen.


72 INT. SMALL-TOWN BAR - DAY 72

News footage of men inside a small-town bar. It’s a
broadcast of RON MILLER reporting from “barometer
community” Pecatonica, Illinois, on ABC News’, “America
Held Hostage.” (*11/21/79)

RON MILLER (V.O.)
So, like the government in
Washington, the people in
Pecatonica are grappling for
solutions.

JACK STROUP, Vietnam vet, red beard, a cap with the
Kenworth trucks logo, a denim jacket.

STROUP (V.O.)
Even in our little community here,
people are drawn up, they’re
tense.


73 OMITTED 73
ARGO - Final 26.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary Mendez drives home at night, reflecting on the escalating hostage crisis in Iran as he listens to the radio. A montage reveals global reactions, including a statement from Tehran Mary branding the Americans as spies. Inside the Canadian Ambassador's residence, tensions mount among the houseguests, particularly as Kathy Stafford expresses her claustrophobia, while others voice their frustrations and fears about their precarious situation. The scene captures the growing anxiety surrounding the crisis, ending with a montage of news footage that underscores the escalating tension.
Strengths
  • Intense atmosphere
  • Realistic portrayal of chaos
  • Effective tension-building
  • Emotional resonance
Weaknesses
  • Potential for confusion due to multiple characters and locations
  • Some dialogue may be overwhelming

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to escalate the stakes of the hostage crisis and introduce the core conflict, which it does effectively through chaotic embassy action and cross-cutting to the houseguests' fear. The biggest limiter is the fragmented structure—jumping between many locations and characters without a clear protagonist or through-line in this scene, which dilutes emotional focus and makes it feel disjointed.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of depicting the 1979 Iran hostage crisis from multiple perspectives is strong and historically grounded, but the scene's execution feels scattered, trying to cover too many angles at once.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the crisis but lacks a clear narrative spine in this scene; the cross-cutting between embassy chaos, houseguests' debate, and news footage feels more like a montage than a cohesive plot progression.

Originality: 5.5

The scene is based on real events, which provides authenticity, but the cross-cutting and montage approach is a familiar technique in historical thrillers; the dialogue and character interactions feel somewhat generic.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

Characters are introduced but not developed; the houseguests' debate about Kathy's claustrophobia hints at personality but most remain indistinct, and the embassy staff are generic.

Character Changes: 2

No clear character change occurs in this scene; characters react to events but do not evolve.

Internal Goal: 4

Mendez's internal goal is to navigate the complex political landscape and find a solution to the hostage crisis. This reflects his deeper desire to protect the lives of the hostages and uphold American values.

External Goal: 5

Mendez's external goal is to come up with a plan to rescue the hostages and bring them back safely to the United States. This reflects the immediate challenge he is facing in the scene.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8

Conflict is high—both external (the mob, the hostage takers) and internal (the houseguests' fear and disagreement), but the rapid shifts prevent any single conflict from building fully.

Opposition: 7

The opposition is strong—the Iranian mob and hostage takers—but the scene shows little direct confrontation, focusing more on reaction.

High Stakes: 9

Stakes are extremely high—life and death for hostages and houseguests—but the scene's fragmentation slightly undercuts the urgency.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by establishing the crisis and introducing the houseguests' predicament, but the cross-cutting slows narrative momentum.

Unpredictability: 5

This scene is somewhat unpredictable due to the chaotic embassy takeover and the houseguests' debate, but the historical outcome is known, limiting surprise.

Philosophical Conflict: 5

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the clash between American values of freedom and justice and the Iranian perspective on sovereignty and national security. This challenges Mendez's beliefs and values as he tries to navigate the situation.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6.5

The chaos of the embassy and the houseguests' fear create some emotional impact, but the fragmented structure and lack of character depth limit sustained emotional engagement.

Dialogue: 5.5

Dialogue is functional but often expository or fragmented; lines like 'You're putting us all at risk' and 'They're not going to come into the house' convey tension but lack distinct voice.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because of the high-stakes historical crisis and the rapid cross-cutting, but the lack of a central character to follow reduces emotional investment.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing of the scene is fast and urgent, but the constant jumping between locations can feel jarring and disrupts rhythm.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 7

Formatting is mostly correct with scene headings and character cues, but the repeated 'CONTINUED' and omitted scenes (73) suggest minor issues; the cross-cutting is clear but could be tighter.

Structure: 5.5

The structure is a montage of cross-cut scenes, which is appropriate for a thriller but feels disjointed without a clear anchor; the scene lacks a traditional three-act structure.


Critique
  • The scene effectively uses a montage to convey the global impact of the hostage crisis, but it could benefit from a clearer emotional throughline connecting Mendez's internal state with the external chaos. The juxtaposition of Mendez's solitary drive with the news reports creates a sense of isolation, yet the emotional weight of his character's struggle could be more pronounced.
  • The dialogue in the Canadian Ambassador's residence feels somewhat disjointed. While it captures the tension among the houseguests, the transitions between characters could be smoother to maintain the flow of the scene. For instance, Joe Stafford's line about Kathy's claustrophobia could be expanded to show more of his concern, enhancing the emotional stakes.
  • The use of Tehran Mary as a voiceover is effective in establishing the propaganda narrative, but it might be more impactful if her character were introduced visually in the scene. This would allow the audience to connect her words with a face, adding a layer of personal conflict to the political rhetoric.
  • The cross-cutting between the various locations is a strong technique, but it could be more cohesive. The transitions between Mendez's car, the Canadian Ambassador's residence, and the Mushroom Inn feel abrupt. A more gradual transition or thematic link between these locations could enhance the narrative flow.
  • The scene lacks a strong climax or turning point. While it builds tension, it doesn't culminate in a moment that significantly alters the stakes for the characters. Introducing a specific event or revelation that heightens the urgency could create a more compelling narrative arc.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment of introspection for Mendez as he drives, perhaps reflecting on the weight of the situation or his personal stakes in the crisis. This could deepen the audience's connection to his character.
  • Enhance the dialogue among the houseguests by incorporating more emotional stakes. For example, have Joe express his fears more explicitly, or show Kathy's anxiety manifesting in a physical way, such as fidgeting or pacing.
  • Introduce Tehran Mary visually in the scene, perhaps by showing her on a television screen in the background while the houseguests discuss their situation. This would create a stronger connection between her words and the characters' experiences.
  • Smooth out the transitions between locations by using visual or auditory cues, such as the sound of the radio fading into the background noise of the Canadian Ambassador's residence, to create a more seamless flow.
  • Incorporate a specific event or revelation that raises the stakes for the characters, such as a sudden announcement about the hostages or a decision made by the houseguests that could jeopardize their safety, to create a more dynamic climax.



Scene 12 -  Tensions Unraveled
74 INT. CARPET FACTORY - DAY 74

ANGLE - A SMALL HAND

pieces shreds together to form the words: U.S.
DEPARTMENT OF STATE -- TEHRAN -- CLASSIFIED.

He is working on reassembling the seized EMBASSY PAPERS --
a giant pile of shredded documents -- with the skill of a
blindfolded child Mozart at the harpsichord.

We see the unmistakable image of a FACE being formed from
the shredded material.


75 ANGLE - CLOSEUP OF AYATOLLAH KHOMEINI 75

(Footage from a Mike Wallace interview. *”60 Minutes”
11/18/79.)

KHOMEINI (V.O.)
(Farsi)
Our young people have taken over
this nest of corruption. America
can’t do a damn thing about it --


76 OMITTED 76


77 ARCHIVE FOOTAGE 77

Rage at an anti-Iran protest in front of the White House.
Signs: “DEPORT ALL IRANIANS”/”CAMEL JOCKEYS GO HOME.”
An IRANIAN-AMERICAN MAN is kicked as he crouches on the
ground. A MIDDLE-AGED WOMAN looks murderous as she waves
an American flag at the camera.

CUT TO:


78 INT. SMALL-TOWN BAR - DAY 78

Back to the ABC News report, the bar in Pecatonica.

STROUP (V.O.)
I’m like that guy screamin’ in
that movie-program Network,
y’know? I’ve had it. And if need
be, I’ll bear arms again.
ARGO - Final 27.


79 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE (TEHRAN) - NIGHT 79

The Houseguests descend into the crawlspace, a darkened,
cramped area -- first the Lijeks, then Anders and
Schatz... then Joe and Kathy Stafford.

The trapdoor closes and the crawlspace goes COMPLETELY
BLACK.

CUT TO:


80 INT. MENDEZ APARTMENT - KITCHEN - NIGHT 80

WALTER CRONKITE (V.O.)
(on TV)
And that’s the way it is, on this,
the 70th day of captivity for the
American hostages in Iran.

Mendez is watching Cronkite on a small television in his
kitchen. In front of him, a folder with Xeroxed
photographs of the HOUSEGUESTS.

He changes the channel and finds a GOOFY SEVENTIES
COMMERCIAL -- He picks up the phone.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In this tense scene, a small hand meticulously reassembles shredded embassy papers revealing 'U.S. DEPARTMENT OF STATE -- TEHRAN -- CLASSIFIED,' while Ayatollah Khomeini's voiceover expresses defiance against America. The narrative shifts to an anti-Iran protest outside the White House, showcasing hostility towards Iranians, including a violent incident involving an Iranian-American man. In a small-town bar, Stroup voices his frustration and readiness to fight, reflecting the anger of some Americans. The scene transitions to the Canadian Ambassador's residence in Tehran, where guests hide in a dark crawlspace, and concludes with Mendez watching Walter Cronkite report on the ongoing hostage crisis, emphasizing the somber reality of the situation.
Strengths
  • Intense tension
  • Authenticity through real-life footage
  • Emotional depth of characters
Weaknesses
  • Some dialogue may feel slightly forced or melodramatic

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 5.5

This scene serves as a transitional montage, effectively conveying the global tension and the protagonist's personal stake, but it lacks forward plot momentum and feels fragmented, limiting its impact. The biggest limiter is the disjointed structure that jumps between locations without a clear narrative throughline, and a more focused sequence would lift the score.


Story Content

Concept: 6.5

The concept of showing the aftermath of the embassy takeover through shredded documents and global reactions is strong, but the execution feels scattered.

Plot: 4

The plot stalls here; it's a montage of reactions rather than advancing the story.

Originality: 6

The shredded paper reconstruction is a fresh visual, but the montage of news clips and protests is familiar.


Character Development

Characters: 4.5

Mendez is shown in a personal moment, but the other characters are barely present, limiting depth.

Character Changes: 2

Mendez shows a hint of determination (changing channel, picking up phone), but no significant change.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to navigate the complex political landscape and make decisions that will ultimately lead to the successful rescue of the hostages. This reflects his deeper desire to protect and save lives while facing the fear of failure and the weight of responsibility.

External Goal: 6

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to gather information and resources to execute the rescue plan effectively. This reflects the immediate challenge of coordinating a covert operation in a hostile environment.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 4

Conflict is external and diffuse—global tension and personal frustration—but lacks direct confrontation.

Opposition: 3

Opposition is abstract—the Iranian regime, public opinion—but not directly faced by Mendez in this scene.

High Stakes: 6

The stakes are high globally (hostage crisis) and personally (Mendez's mission), but the scene doesn't escalate them.

Story Forward: 3

The scene provides context but does not advance the main plot; it's a pause for reflection.

Unpredictability: 4

This scene is unpredictable in its montage structure, but the content (news reports, protests) is expected given the context.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the clash between American and Iranian values, as seen in the anti-Iran protests and the tension surrounding the hostage crisis. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs in diplomacy and peaceful resolution.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5

The montage evokes a sense of hopelessness and anxiety, but the emotional connection is weakened by the fragmented structure.

Dialogue: 4

Dialogue is minimal and mostly from news reports, which works for atmosphere but not character development.

Engagement: 5.5

This scene is engaging because of the visual metaphor of the shredded papers and the archival footage, but the jumps between locations reduce immersion.

Pacing: 5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the quick cuts mirror the chaotic global reaction, but it feels rushed and lacks a central anchor.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is standard and clear, with proper scene headings and transitions.

Structure: 5

The structure is a montage, which is appropriate for a thriller's tension-building but feels disjointed here.


Critique
  • The scene effectively uses visual imagery to convey the tension and stakes of the situation, particularly with the small hand reassembling shredded documents. However, the metaphor comparing the hand's skill to 'a blindfolded child Mozart at the harpsichord' feels overly whimsical and may detract from the gravity of the moment. This could be rephrased to maintain a serious tone.
  • The transition from the reassembling of documents to Khomeini's voiceover is abrupt. While it serves to juxtapose the actions of the Iranian revolutionaries with the American perspective, the flow could be smoother. Consider adding a visual or auditory cue that links the two moments more cohesively.
  • The use of archive footage is powerful, but the description of the protest could be more vivid. Instead of simply stating that a man is kicked, delve into the emotions of the crowd or the atmosphere to heighten the tension. This would create a more immersive experience for the audience.
  • Stroup's dialogue in the bar is a strong moment, but it could benefit from more context. Who is Stroup? What is his relationship to the events unfolding? Providing a brief introduction or visual cue could help ground the audience in his perspective.
  • The transition to the crawlspace scene is effective in conveying the urgency of the situation, but the description could be enhanced. Instead of just stating it goes 'completely black,' consider using sensory details to evoke the claustrophobia and fear the characters are experiencing as they descend.
Suggestions
  • Revise the metaphor about the hand reassembling documents to maintain a serious tone, perhaps comparing it to a skilled craftsman or surgeon to emphasize the tension and stakes.
  • Add a visual or auditory cue to create a smoother transition between the reassembling of documents and Khomeini's voiceover, such as a close-up of the documents revealing the words 'CLASSIFIED' before cutting to Khomeini.
  • Enhance the description of the protest footage by including more sensory details, such as the sounds of the crowd, the expressions on people's faces, or the atmosphere of anger and fear.
  • Provide more context for Stroup's character, perhaps through a brief visual introduction or a line of dialogue that hints at his background or connection to the events.
  • Use sensory details to describe the crawlspace scene, focusing on the darkness, the cramped conditions, and the characters' emotional responses to heighten the tension.



Scene 13 -  A Night of Reflection
81 INT. CHRISTINE’S HOUSE - CROSS-CUTTING - NIGHT 81

IAN MENDEZ, 7 and about to turn 8, is watching a movie on *
his bed. He picks up on the second ring. *

IAN *
Hello. *

MENDEZ (V.O.) *
Buddy-man. *

IAN *
Mom’s asleep. *

MENDEZ *
You do homework tonight? *

IAN *
Yeah. *

MENDEZ *
What was it? *

But Tony can hear a television soundtrack with ominous *
electronic music. *


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 28.
81 CONTINUED: 81

MENDEZ *
What do I hear? *

IAN *
(coming clean) *
‘Battle for Planet of the Apes.’ *
Am I in trouble? *

A beat. *

MENDEZ *
What channel? *

IAN *
Nine. *

81 Mendez turns on his living room television to the three- 81 *
hour “BATTLE FOR PLANET OF THE APES.” *

MENDEZ *
Catch me up. *

Tony listens, staring ahead at the TV . A desert *
landscape dotted with technological garbage. An ape
played by Roddy MacDowell walks across the landscape. *
He’s staring at the television, but now really paying
attention.

The apes walk into the ruins of what was once a great
city.

RODDY MacDOWELL (V.O.)
(on TV, as Caesar)
This is the hell my forefathers
used to speak about. (Etc.)


ON TONY

staring at the movie. Wheels turning in his head.

CUT TO:


82-85 OMITTED 82-85 *
Genres: ["Drama","Family"]

Summary In a quiet night scene, 7-year-old Ian Mendez is torn between doing his homework and watching 'Battle for Planet of the Apes.' During a phone call with his father, Mendez, Ian admits to being captivated by the movie. Mendez joins him by watching the same film, becoming engrossed in its themes of destruction and loss. The contrasting settings of Ian's innocent bedroom and the ominous imagery of the film highlight the tension between childhood responsibilities and the deeper reflections prompted by the movie.
Strengths
  • Emotional depth
  • Character development
  • Natural dialogue
Weaknesses
  • Limited plot progression
  • Low stakes

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene's primary job is to humanize the protagonist and plant the seed of his plan through a quiet, character-driven moment. It lands well in its tender, authentic father-son dynamic, but the pacing is slow and the connection to the main plot is too oblique, limiting its immediate impact. A more direct visual or thematic link to the crisis would lift the score.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of using a child's late-night movie watching to spark the protagonist's creative solution is clever and original, but it's executed with minimal plot propulsion.

Plot: 4

The plot barely advances; the scene is a character beat that sets up a future idea, but it lacks immediate forward momentum.

Originality: 7

The use of a 'Planet of the Apes' movie as a creative catalyst is a fresh and authentic touch, but the father-son phone call is a familiar trope.


Character Development

Characters: 7.5

Mendez is shown as a caring father, and Ian is a believable, slightly mischievous child. Their interaction feels genuine, but we learn little new about Mendez's professional side.

Character Changes: 1

Mendez has a dawning realization (wheels turning), but no significant change occurs in this scene.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to avoid getting in trouble for watching a movie instead of doing homework. This reflects his desire to please his parents and avoid consequences.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to catch up on the movie 'Battle for Planet of the Apes' with his father. This reflects the immediate circumstances of their interaction and bonding over a shared interest.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 2

The only conflict is Ian's minor deception about the movie, which is resolved quickly. No external or internal struggle is present.

Opposition: 0

There is no opposition in this scene.

High Stakes: 2

The stakes are personal and low—Ian might get in trouble for watching a movie. The larger stakes are absent.

Story Forward: 3

The scene only hints at a future plan; the main story of the hostage crisis is not advanced.

Unpredictability: 5

This scene is unpredictable because the connection between a child's movie and a spy thriller is unexpected, but the phone call itself is very predictable.

Philosophical Conflict: 0

There is a philosophical conflict between the protagonist's desire to watch a movie and his responsibility to do homework. This challenges his values of honesty and obedience.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5

The scene is warm and slightly melancholic, but the emotional stakes are low, limited to a father-son check-in.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue is natural and understated, capturing a real parent-child conversation. It's effective but not particularly sharp or revealing.

Engagement: 6

This scene is engaging because of the authentic father-son dynamic and the subtle hint of a creative breakthrough, but the slow pace and lack of action may lose some viewers.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the slow, quiet rhythm allows the audience to feel the domestic calm before the idea strikes, but it may feel too slow for some.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear cross-cutting and proper scene headings. No errors.

Structure: 6

The scene follows a simple call-and-response structure with a cross-cut to the movie, building to a quiet epiphany. It's appropriate for a character moment but lacks dramatic structure.


Critique
  • The scene effectively uses cross-cutting to juxtapose Ian's innocent childhood moment with the serious undertones of Mendez's situation, creating a contrast that heightens the emotional stakes. However, the transition between the two settings could be more pronounced to emphasize the tension between Ian's world and the dangerous reality Mendez faces.
  • The dialogue between Ian and Mendez is natural and captures the father-son dynamic well, but it could benefit from more subtext. For instance, Mendez's questions about homework could hint at his concern for Ian's well-being amidst the chaos, adding depth to their relationship.
  • The use of 'Battle for Planet of the Apes' as a backdrop is a clever choice, symbolizing themes of destruction and loss that parallel Mendez's own struggles. However, the connection between the film's themes and Mendez's situation could be made clearer through Ian's reactions or Mendez's reflections, enhancing the thematic resonance.
  • The scene lacks a strong emotional climax or turning point. While it sets up a moment of connection between father and son, it doesn't fully explore the emotional weight of their separation due to the crisis. A more poignant moment or realization could elevate the scene's impact.
  • The visual description of the television and the movie could be more vivid to draw the audience into the moment. Describing Ian's expressions or Mendez's physical reactions to the film could enhance the emotional engagement and provide a clearer picture of their internal states.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment where Mendez reflects on the film's themes and how they relate to his own situation, perhaps through a line of dialogue or a visual cue that connects his thoughts to the movie.
  • Enhance the emotional stakes by incorporating a moment where Ian expresses his fears or confusion about the situation, allowing Mendez to reassure him in a way that reveals his own vulnerabilities.
  • Strengthen the cross-cutting technique by using more dynamic transitions between Ian's innocent world and Mendez's tense reality, perhaps through sound design or visual motifs that highlight the contrast.
  • Introduce a brief moment of tension or urgency in Mendez's demeanor as he listens to Ian, suggesting that he is aware of the dangers surrounding them, which could add depth to their conversation.
  • Explore the possibility of Ian's dialogue reflecting a deeper understanding of the situation, perhaps by having him ask questions that hint at his awareness of the crisis, which would add complexity to his character.



Scene 14 -  Behind the Scenes: The Minotaur Mishap
86 INT. SCI-FI LAB - A MINOTAUR - DAY 86

A bull/human experiment in a SCI-FI lab, coming to bovine
life. A SEXY SPACE NURSE is administering some kind of
shot to him. A SECOND NURSE stands by.

SPACE NURSE
My creation... My creation...
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 29.
86 CONTINUED: 86

The Minotaur lifts his head, KNOCKS into the Nurse.

SPACE NURSE
(breaking character)
What the fuck, Brian?

DIRECTOR (O.S.)
Cut!

A.D. (O.S.)
WE’RE CUTTING!

A bell. WIDER REVEALS that we’re on a...


87 INT. WARNER BROS. SOUNDSTAGE - DAY 87

A DIRECTOR, 40s, whispers something to an A.D., mid-
thirties.

A.D.
(inquiring into a
walkie)
John Chambers. John Chambers make-
up...

CUT TO:


88 INT. WARNER BROS. SOUNDSTAGE - DAY 88

JOHN CHAMBERS, Hollywood’s first Oscar winner for makeup,
walks onto set carrying a fishing tackle box of supplies.

SUPERIMPOSE: BURBANK, CALIFORNIA - JANUARY 19, 1980

The A.D. joins Chambers, walking him onto the set.

A.D.
He says the Minotaur’s prosthetic
is too tight so he can’t act.

CHAMBERS
If he could act he wouldn’t be
playing the Minotaur.

He smiles and waves at the Minotaur and begins to work on
his prosthetic with a brush and solvent.

CUT TO:
ARGO - Final 30.


89 INT. NEAR CRAFT SERVICES TABLE - DAY 89

Chambers is foraging through ‘70s SNACKS. At the craft
service table. A guy in his SPACE ARMOR PANTS without
the top is eating as well.

A P.A. approaches, carrying a PHONE on a long cord.

P.A.
Mr. Chambers.

CHAMBERS
(still foraging)
Who is it?

P.A.
Kevin Harkins?

Chambers gives the kid a look, takes the phone from him
and puts it to his ear.

CHAMBERS
Hey, Tony.
Genres: ["Sci-Fi","Comedy"]

Summary In a sci-fi lab, a bull/human Minotaur experiment is brought to life by a space nurse, but the tension breaks when the Minotaur accidentally knocks into her. The scene shifts to a Warner Bros. soundstage where the director discusses the Minotaur's tight prosthetic with an assistant director. Renowned makeup artist John Chambers arrives to address the issue, humorously commenting on the actor's abilities. The scene concludes with Chambers at the craft services table, receiving a phone call.
Strengths
  • Humorous tone
  • Creative concept
  • Engaging characters
Weaknesses
  • Lack of emotional depth
  • Limited character development

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene's primary job is to provide tonal relief and introduce a key character (Chambers) while maintaining the film's thematic thread of deception and performance. It lands well with sharp dialogue and a clear shift in setting, but the abrupt transition from the hostage crisis feels jarring and undercuts the tension built in prior scenes, limiting its overall impact; a smoother bridge or a clearer narrative link would lift it.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of cutting from a real-life hostage crisis to a Hollywood soundstage is bold and thematically resonant, but the execution feels disconnected and risks undermining the gravity of the main plot.

Plot: 5

The plot advances minimally—it introduces Chambers and sets up his role in the exfiltration plan, but the scene is more about atmosphere and character introduction than plot progression.

Originality: 7.5

The scene is original in its juxtaposition of high-stakes drama with low-stakes Hollywood absurdity, and the dialogue feels authentic to a film set.


Character Development

Characters: 6

Chambers is established as a sardonic, competent professional through his dialogue and actions, but the other characters (Director, A.D., Space Nurse) are flat and serve only as functional props.

Character Changes: 1

No character undergoes significant change; Chambers is introduced as already competent and remains so.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to see their creation come to life and succeed. This reflects their desire for validation, recognition, and accomplishment in their work.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to ensure the Minotaur's prosthetic is comfortable and allows him to act. This reflects the immediate challenge of technical difficulties on set.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

The conflict is low-stakes and comedic—a prosthetic issue on a movie set—which provides relief but lacks the tension of the main plot.

Opposition: 2

The opposition is minimal—a tight prosthetic and an actor's complaint—which is appropriate for a comedic relief scene but doesn't challenge the protagonist.

High Stakes: 2

The stakes are low—a movie production delay—which contrasts with the high stakes of the hostage crisis but doesn't contribute to them.

Story Forward: 4

The scene moves the story forward by introducing a key player in the exfiltration plan, but the progress is minimal and the connection to the main plot is indirect.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because the shift from a hostage crisis to a movie set is unexpected, and the Minotaur's prosthetic issue is a humorous surprise.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict in this scene is between artistic integrity and practicality. The protagonist values the Minotaur's performance, while others prioritize the technical aspects of the prosthetic.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 4

The emotional impact is muted; the humor and sarcasm create distance, and the scene doesn't engage the audience's emotions deeply.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue is sharp and character-revealing, especially Chambers' line about the Minotaur, but the Space Nurse's line is weak and the A.D.'s walkie-talkie talk is functional but uninspired.

Engagement: 6

This scene is engaging because of the witty dialogue and the novelty of seeing the behind-the-scenes of a sci-fi film, but the lack of connection to the main plot reduces overall engagement.

Pacing: 7

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it moves quickly from the problem to the solution, with snappy dialogue that keeps the energy light and brisk.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is standard and clear, with proper scene headings, character cues, and parentheticals. The use of SUPERIMPOSE and CUT TO is appropriate.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic comedic structure: setup (problem with prosthetic), complication (actor can't act), resolution (Chambers arrives and fixes it). It's effective for its genre.


Critique
  • The scene lacks a clear emotional connection to the overarching narrative. While it introduces a humorous moment with the Minotaur and the space nurse, it feels disconnected from the tension and stakes established in previous scenes. This could confuse the audience about the relevance of this scene to the main plot.
  • The dialogue, particularly the line 'If he could act he wouldn’t be playing the Minotaur,' is witty but may come off as too flippant given the serious context of the hostage crisis. It risks undermining the gravity of the situation that the characters are facing elsewhere in the script.
  • The transition from the sci-fi lab to the Warner Bros. soundstage is abrupt and lacks a smooth narrative flow. The audience may struggle to understand why this scene is included at this point in the screenplay, as it does not build on the tension or character development established earlier.
  • The scene could benefit from more visual storytelling that ties back to the themes of the film. For instance, incorporating elements that reflect the chaos and uncertainty of the hostage situation could create a stronger thematic resonance.
  • The use of humor in this scene feels out of place and may detract from the overall tone of the screenplay. While comic relief can be effective, it should be carefully balanced with the surrounding dramatic elements to maintain narrative cohesion.
Suggestions
  • Consider integrating the Minotaur scene more closely with the main narrative by establishing a thematic link between the absurdity of the film production and the dire circumstances of the hostages. This could enhance the audience's understanding of the stakes involved.
  • Revise the dialogue to maintain a sense of humor while ensuring it aligns with the overall tone of the screenplay. Humor should serve to lighten the mood without detracting from the seriousness of the situation.
  • Add a brief moment of reflection or commentary from a character that connects the absurdity of the film set to the reality of the hostage crisis. This could help ground the scene within the larger narrative.
  • Consider using visual motifs or symbols that echo the themes of the hostage situation, such as the Minotaur representing the monstrous nature of the conflict, to create a more cohesive narrative.
  • Ensure that transitions between scenes are smooth and purposeful, guiding the audience through the story without jarring shifts that could disrupt engagement.



Scene 15 -  A Bold Proposal
90 INT. CIA - CONFERENCE ROOM - DAY 90

Pender and Engell sit at the table; O’Donnell hovers. A
few State Department and CIA ANALYSTS here, including
Malinov and Lamont; and DAVID MARMOR, early 30s, Engell’s
guy.

O’DONNELL
(quiet, to Malinov)
Is he coming?

Engell nods for the door to be shut.

ENGELL
(to Pender)
Okay. Our N.E. put together a
work-up. David.

MARMOR
They would pose as teachers from
the international school.

PENDER
We went through all that -- it’s
boarded up --

O’Donnell looking at the clock.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 31.
90 CONTINUED: 90
MARMOR
Suppose the airport guards don’t
know that --

PENDER
Suppose. Suppose Heckle and
Jeckle go over and save them --

The door swings open.

MENDEZ
Hi. Sorry. Hi.

O’DONNELL
Have a seat, Tony.

He doesn’t. There’s an energy in him we haven’t seen
before.

MENDEZ
They’re a Canadian film crew on a
location scout for a science
fiction movie --

A shift in the room.

MENDEZ
Star Wars, Star Trek. They need
an exotic place to shoot. We put
it out -- the Canadian producers
put it out -- that they’re looking
at Turkey, Egypt, whatever. Then
we go to the consulate and say we
wanna look at Iran. I fly in
there and we fly out together as a
film crew. Done.

MARMOR
(dry)
‘In an exfiltration, flamboyant
cover identities should be
avoided, as it increases
operational’ --

MENDEZ
This is more plausible than
foreigners who want to go to
school in Iran -- *

ENGELL
So you’re going to wake up
tomorrow in the movie business?
We have credentials for --


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 32.
90 CONTINUED: (2) 90

MENDEZ
I’ve got a contact in L.A.

ENGELL
(catching on)
Chambers.

MENDEZ
(to Pender)
John Chambers. He’s a Hollywood
prosthetics guy, does contracting
work for us on the side. If I go *
see him, he’ll set us up. A
couple days to make it look real.

Mendez and O’Donnell turn their eyes on Pender, who is
the decision-maker here.

PENDER
(after a beat, to
Mendez)
Remind me who you are again?
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a tense CIA conference room, Pender and Engell debate strategies to extract hostages from Iran. Marmor raises concerns about a previous plan to pose as teachers, leading to Mendez's entrance with a more daring idea: posing as a Canadian film crew scouting locations for a science fiction movie. This proposal shifts the room's energy, but Pender remains skeptical, questioning Mendez's authority and the plan's feasibility. The scene ends with lingering doubts about the new strategy.
Strengths
  • Innovative plan
  • Tension and conflict
  • Clear dialogue
Weaknesses
  • Limited emotional depth

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to pivot the plot from a stalled rescue plan to Mendez's audacious Hollywood cover, and it lands with sharp dialogue and escalating tension. The single biggest limiter is the abrupt entrance and pitch, which, while energetic, lacks a beat of setup or reaction that would deepen the character dynamics and make the turn feel earned.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of using a fake film crew as cover is inherently compelling and historically grounded, offering a fresh twist on the rescue narrative. The scene's strength is in the audacity of the idea, but it's weakened by the lack of exploration of the risks or the characters' doubts, making it feel slightly too easy.

Plot: 7

The plot advances significantly as Mendez's plan is introduced and accepted, moving from debate to action. The weakness is that the transition from Pender's skepticism to acceptance is abrupt, lacking a clear turning point or negotiation that would make the plot progression more satisfying.

Originality: 8

The scene is original in its premise—using a fake film crew as cover—and the dialogue feels authentic to the period and setting. The actions are believable, and the idea is fresh, though the execution is somewhat conventional in its structure.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Mendez is energized and assertive, showing a new side, while Pender and Engell are functional but underdeveloped. The strength is Mendez's confident pitch, but the weakness is that the other characters, especially Pender, are reduced to obstacles without distinct personalities or motivations.

Character Changes: 5

Mendez shifts from a passive observer to an active instigator, but the change is more in action than in internal realization. The strength is his newfound energy, but the weakness is that we don't see a moment of decision or vulnerability that would make the change feel transformative.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal is to come up with a plan to rescue the hostages without risking their lives or blowing their cover. This reflects their desire to succeed in their mission while minimizing potential harm.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to create a believable cover story for the rescue mission. This reflects the immediate challenge of convincing others of the legitimacy of their plan.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6

The conflict is primarily intellectual, as Mendez challenges the established plan and faces skepticism. The strength is the tension between Mendez's bold idea and the committee's caution, but the weakness is that the conflict is resolved too quickly, with Pender's acceptance feeling unearned.

Opposition: 5

The opposition comes from Pender and Marmor, who represent the bureaucratic status quo and skepticism. Their resistance is moderate, but it's quickly overcome, making the opposition feel less formidable than it could be.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high—the lives of six diplomats—but the scene focuses more on the plan than on the consequences of failure. The strength is the implicit urgency, but the weakness is that the danger is not felt in the room, as the characters are more concerned with logistics than with the human cost.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by introducing the central plan that will drive the rest of the narrative. The strength is the clear pivot from debate to action, but the weakness is that the scene is mostly setup, with the actual execution deferred to later scenes.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because Mendez's entrance and pitch are unexpected, breaking the stalemate of the previous discussion. The reader doesn't know if the plan will be accepted, and the abruptness of the pitch adds to the surprise.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the ethics of using deception and manipulation for a greater good. The characters must grapple with the moral implications of their actions in order to achieve their goal.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The emotional impact is moderate, driven by the urgency of the situation and Mendez's determination. The strength is the sense of hope and momentum, but the weakness is that the scene lacks a personal emotional beat, such as a moment of doubt or fear, to deepen the audience's investment.

Dialogue: 7.5

The dialogue is sharp and purposeful, with Mendez's pitch cutting through bureaucratic jargon. The strength is the crisp, argumentative exchange, but the weakness is that some lines, like Marmor's dry quote, feel like exposition rather than natural speech, and Pender's final question is a bit on-the-nose.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it presents a high-stakes, creative solution in a tense bureaucratic setting, and the dialogue crackles with urgency. The reader is drawn in by Mendez's bold pitch and the question of whether it will be accepted.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing of the scene is brisk, with quick exchanges and a rapid shift from debate to pitch. This contributes to the urgency, but the lack of a pause for reflection or reaction makes the acceptance feel rushed.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear action lines and dialogue. The use of parentheticals and ellipses is effective, but there are minor issues like the 'CONTINUED' headers that are standard but could be streamlined.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic setup-pitch-acceptance structure, with a clear inciting incident (Mendez's entrance) and a resolution (Pender's question). The pacing is tight, but the structure is somewhat formulaic, lacking a twist or a moment of genuine surprise.


Critique
  • The scene effectively introduces Mendez's bold plan, showcasing his confidence and creativity in a high-stakes situation. However, the dialogue could benefit from more tension and urgency to reflect the gravity of the situation. The stakes are high, and the characters should express more concern about the risks involved in Mendez's plan.
  • The character dynamics are somewhat flat. While Mendez's energy is noted, the reactions from Pender, Engell, and the others feel muted. Adding more distinct personalities and reactions could enhance the scene's emotional impact. For instance, showing skepticism from Pender or excitement from O'Donnell could create a more dynamic interaction.
  • The dialogue includes some exposition, particularly regarding the plan and the characters' roles. While exposition is necessary, it should be woven into the dialogue more naturally. For example, instead of stating that Chambers is a prosthetics guy, Mendez could reference a past successful collaboration to establish credibility and history.
  • The pacing of the scene feels uneven. Mendez's entrance is energetic, but the subsequent dialogue slows down significantly. Consider tightening the exchanges to maintain momentum and keep the audience engaged. Quick back-and-forth dialogue can heighten tension and urgency.
  • The scene lacks visual elements that could enhance the storytelling. Describing the setting more vividly or incorporating visual cues that reflect the characters' emotions could create a more immersive experience. For example, the tension in the room could be illustrated through body language or the physical environment.
Suggestions
  • Infuse the dialogue with more urgency and stakes. Characters should express their fears and concerns more explicitly, reflecting the high-pressure environment they are in.
  • Enhance character dynamics by giving each character a distinct voice and reaction to Mendez's plan. This could involve adding more conflict or support among the characters to create a richer interaction.
  • Integrate exposition more seamlessly into the dialogue. Use character interactions to reveal information rather than stating it outright, which can make the dialogue feel more organic.
  • Consider tightening the pacing by shortening some exchanges or adding interruptions that reflect the chaotic nature of the situation, keeping the audience on edge.
  • Incorporate more visual storytelling elements to enhance the scene. Describe the characters' physical reactions, the setting, and any relevant props that could add depth to the scene.



Scene 16 -  High Stakes and Tension
91 INT. CIA - THE PIT - A FEW MINUTES LATER 91

Tony stands in small messy KITCHEN AREA, pouring coffee.
On the coffeepot somebody’s pinned a note: CHANGE FILTER
IF YOU USE! DO UNTO OTHERS.

O’Donnell approaches, quietly stands behind him, smoking
quietly. Mendez turns around.

O’DONNELL
We want you to go to L.A. If you
can make the movie thing credible,
we’ll take it to the Director.
(a beat; a cigarette
drag)
Don’t fuck up. The whole
country’s watching you. They just
don’t know it.


92 INT. T.W.A. FLIGHT - MORNING 92

Mendez sits in an aisle seat. The PASSENGER next to him
is looking at the headline of The New York Times: “NEW
THREATS FOR HOSTAGE TRIBUNALS.”

Mendez is reading THE FIVE C’S OF CINEMATOGRAPHY.
ARGO - Final 33.


93 INT. MIDDLE-CLASS TEHRAN HOUSE - NIGHT 93

Six KOMITEH force their way into a house.

KOMITEH SOLDIER
SAVAK! SAVAK!

A Komiteh drags away a MAN in his forties while the man’s
wife cries. Automatic weapons are aimed at him, point-
blank.

From ACROSS THE STREET, an IRANIAN WOMAN, 20s, watches.


94 OMITTED 94


95 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - 95
NIGHT

Lee Schatz and Bob Anders play poker in a room decorated
with Persian carpets and mosaics. The gunfire audible
here too. Staring at their cards.

LEE SCHATZ
50 caliber?

BOB ANDERS
Mmm. 50, 35.


95A INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DINING ROOM - 95A
NIGHT

Pat Taylor helps THE SAME WOMAN we just saw, SAHAR, 20s,
clear the table. She is their housekeeper.

SAHAR
Your friends from Canada, ma’am.
All this time. They never go out.

A significant moment of eye contact. Then Sahar goes
back to clearing the table.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a chaotic CIA kitchen, Tony Mendez is assigned a critical mission by O'Donnell to create a credible movie cover for hostages, highlighting the urgency of the situation. The scene shifts to Mendez on a flight, juxtaposed with a tense moment in Tehran where Komiteh soldiers violently raid a home. Meanwhile, at the Canadian Ambassador's residence, Lee Schatz and Bob Anders play poker, attempting to maintain normalcy amidst the surrounding chaos, while Pat Taylor helps Sahar, emphasizing the emotional weight of their precarious circumstances. The scene concludes with a poignant exchange between Pat and Sahar, underscoring the ongoing danger.
Strengths
  • Effective tension-building
  • Clear setup for upcoming mission
  • Engaging character interactions
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development in this specific scene

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene's primary job is to give Mendez the mission mandate and raise the stakes, which it does efficiently through O'Donnell's terse, loaded dialogue. The single biggest limiter is its brevity and lack of emotional or character depth—it feels like a functional bridge rather than a moment that resonates, and expanding the beat or adding a personal reaction from Mendez would lift it.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of a CIA officer being tasked to make a fake movie cover credible is strong and historically grounded, but the scene itself is a simple briefing with no new conceptual wrinkles.

Plot: 6.5

The plot advances clearly: Mendez gets the go-ahead to go to L.A. and the stakes are raised. However, the scene is a straightforward plot point with no twists or complications.

Originality: 5.5

The scene is a standard briefing, but the use of the coffee filter note as a mundane detail is a fresh touch. The dialogue is authentic to the genre.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

O'Donnell is portrayed as terse and authoritative, Mendez as silent and receiving. There's little character development or depth in this brief exchange.

Character Changes: 2

Mendez does not visibly change; he is given a task. O'Donnell remains authoritative. No arc movement.

Internal Goal: 4

The protagonist's internal goal is to successfully execute a covert mission to rescue hostages in Iran. This reflects his deeper desire to prove his skills and loyalty to his country, as well as his fear of failure and the consequences of being caught.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to make the movie thing credible in order to gain approval from the CIA Director. This reflects the immediate challenge he faces in convincing others of the feasibility of his plan.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 5

The conflict is external and implied: the mission's success vs. failure, with O'Donnell's warning creating pressure. No direct confrontation.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is abstract—the Iranian authorities, the risk of exposure—but not personified in this scene. O'Donnell's warning represents the opposition's potential.

High Stakes: 7.5

The stakes are high—the success of the extraction and the lives of the hostages—but the scene only states them, not dramatizes them.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by sending Mendez to L.A., a key plot step. It's a clear narrative progression.

Unpredictability: 3

This scene is predictable as a standard briefing; the outcome (Mendez going to L.A.) is expected from the context.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the protagonist's moral dilemma of deceiving others for a greater good. This challenges his beliefs about honesty and integrity, as well as the ethical implications of his actions.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5.5

The emotional impact is moderate—the weight of the mission is conveyed, but the scene is too brief to generate deep feeling.

Dialogue: 6

The dialogue is functional and tense, with O'Donnell's lines carrying weight. But it's very short and lacks the natural rhythm of a fuller conversation.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because of the terse, high-stakes dialogue and the contrast between the mundane setting and the weighty mission. The final line hooks the reader.

Pacing: 8

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it is quick and to the point, mirroring the urgency of the mission. No wasted words.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene heading, action lines, and dialogue. No errors.

Structure: 6.5

The scene follows a classic briefing structure: setup (Mendez pouring coffee), inciting instruction (O'Donnell's order), and stakes-raising warning. It's efficient but minimal.


Critique
  • The scene effectively transitions from the tense atmosphere of the CIA to the personal stakes involved in Mendez's mission. However, the dialogue could be more impactful. O'Donnell's warning to Mendez feels somewhat generic and lacks emotional weight. It would benefit from more specific stakes or personal implications for Mendez, making the audience feel the pressure he is under.
  • The juxtaposition of Mendez reading 'The Five C's of Cinematography' while the news of 'NEW THREATS FOR HOSTAGE TRIBUNALS' is highlighted creates an interesting contrast between the mundane and the dire. However, this could be further emphasized by showing Mendez's reaction to the headline, which would deepen his character and the gravity of the situation.
  • The transition to the Komiteh soldiers entering the house is abrupt. While it serves to heighten the tension, the scene could benefit from a smoother transition that connects Mendez's personal stakes with the broader conflict. Perhaps a brief moment of reflection from Mendez before the cut could enhance the emotional impact.
  • The poker scene with Lee Schatz and Bob Anders adds a layer of normalcy amidst chaos, but it feels somewhat disconnected from the urgency of the previous scenes. The dialogue here is minimal and could be expanded to reflect their anxiety or camaraderie in the face of danger, making it more engaging.
  • The introduction of Sahar in the dining room is intriguing, but her interaction feels underdeveloped. The eye contact moment is significant, yet it lacks context. Expanding on this moment could provide insight into the relationships and tensions within the household, enhancing the emotional stakes.
Suggestions
  • Revise O'Donnell's dialogue to include more specific stakes related to Mendez's mission, perhaps referencing personal consequences or the broader implications of failure.
  • Include a reaction shot of Mendez as he reads the newspaper headline, allowing the audience to see his internal conflict and the weight of the situation he is stepping into.
  • Consider adding a brief moment of reflection for Mendez before cutting to the Komiteh scene, perhaps showing him contemplating the risks involved in his mission.
  • Expand the dialogue in the poker scene to reflect the characters' emotional states, perhaps incorporating humor or tension that reflects their precarious situation.
  • Develop Sahar's character further by providing more context for her relationship with the houseguests, possibly through dialogue or internal thoughts that reveal her perspective on the situation.



Scene 17 -  Tensions and Deceptions
96 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - KITCHEN - LATER 96

Kathy Stafford is roughly washing wine glasses at the
sink.

JOE STAFFORD
You’ve washed them three times.

He puts his arm on her shoulder. She keeps scrubbing.
ARGO - Final 34.


97 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - BATHROOM - NIGHT 97

Ken Taylor is brushing his teeth in the mirror. Pat
comes in.

PAT TAYLOR
Sahar knows.


98 EXT. BURBANK - AFTERNOON 98 *

The water tower on Warner Bros. studio -- which in 1980
read, “Burbank Studios.”


99 INT. CHAMBERS’ STUDIO - AFTERNOON 99

Chambers leads Mendez into his makeup studio and starts
to open windows. Around the studio: stunt double-masks,
deformed monster foreheads, dental implants on shelves.
Planet of the Apes prosthetics. Mr. Spock ears on
Styrofoam stands. (Chambers created all these --
really.)

MENDEZ
What are you shooting?

CHAMBERS
A monster movie.

MENDEZ
Any good?

CHAMBERS
The target audience will hate it.

MENDEZ
Who’s the target audience?

CHAMBERS
People with eyes. Talk to me.

MENDEZ
It’s an exfil.

CHAMBERS
From where?

MENDEZ
Worst place you can think of.

CHAMBERS
Universal City. *


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 35.
99 CONTINUED: 99

Mendez picks up a Newsweek magazine under a can of Tab on
a makeup table: blindfolded Iran hostages on the cover.
Chambers takes it in for a moment -- the gravity of it.

CHAMBERS
How you getting in the embassy?

MENDEZ
Six got away. They’re hiding in
the city. I’m going over to get
them.

CHAMBERS
What am I making?

MENDEZ
I need you to help me make a fake
movie.

CHAMBERS
You’ve come to the right place. *

MENDEZ
I need to set up a production
company and build a cover around
making a movie.

CHAMBERS
That we’re not going to make.

MENDEZ
No.

CHAMBERS
You want to go around Hollywood
acting like you’re an important
person in the movie business.

MENDEZ
That’s right.

CHAMBERS
But you don’t want to actually do
anything.

MENDEZ
No.

CHAMBERS
You’ll fit right in. *
ARGO - Final 36.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In this tense scene, Kathy Stafford obsessively washes wine glasses in the kitchen, reflecting her stress, while Joe Stafford tries to comfort her. Meanwhile, Ken Taylor learns from Pat that Sahar possesses crucial information, hinting at underlying tensions. The focus shifts to Chambers' studio, where Mendez reveals the gravity of a covert operation involving the Iran hostages and proposes creating a fake movie as a cover for an exfiltration mission, to which Chambers humorously agrees. The scene blends domestic anxiety with the urgency of a dangerous mission.
Strengths
  • Unique concept
  • Tension
  • Humor
  • Innovative approach
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Some dialogue could be more impactful

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene efficiently advances the plot by securing Chambers' cooperation and establishing the fake movie cover, landing its primary job with sharp dialogue and a memorable character beat. The biggest limiter is its brevity and lack of dramatic conflict—the conversation is smooth and almost too easy, missing an opportunity for resistance or a deeper character reveal that would elevate the stakes.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of using a fake Hollywood production as a cover is inherently clever and historically grounded, and the scene introduces it with a fresh, insider's perspective. The weakness is that the concept is not fully explored here—it's more of a setup than a development, and the scene doesn't yet show the complexity or risks of the plan.

Plot: 6

The scene moves the plot forward by enlisting Chambers and setting the fake movie plan in motion, but it's a straightforward transaction with no twists or obstacles. The plot is advanced but not complicated, and the lack of friction makes it feel like a checkbox rather than a dramatic turning point.

Originality: 7.5

The scene is original in its premise—using a fake movie as a cover—and the dialogue feels authentic to the Hollywood insider world. The banter is fresh, but the scene structure is familiar, and the characters fit expected archetypes.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Chambers is vividly drawn as a cynical, witty Hollywood insider, and his banter with Mendez reveals a pragmatic professionalism. Mendez, however, remains largely reactive and opaque, offering little new insight into his character beyond his mission focus. The scene's strength is Chambers' voice; its weakness is Mendez's flatness.

Character Changes: 2

Neither character undergoes significant change; Chambers goes from unaware to committed, but this is a minor shift. Mendez remains unchanged, and the scene doesn't challenge or develop him.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to convince Chambers to help him create a fake movie as part of a rescue mission. This reflects his deeper need to save the hostages and his fear of failure in the dangerous mission.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to set up a production company and build a cover around making a movie to rescue the hostages hiding in the city.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

The conflict is minimal—Mendez and Chambers are on the same page, and the only tension is the implicit danger of the mission. The scene lacks a direct obstacle or opposing force, making the conflict level low.

Opposition: 2

The opposition is minimal—Chambers is initially unaware but quickly agrees, and there's no external force pushing back. The only opposition is the implicit danger of the mission, which is not personified in this scene.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high—the lives of six diplomats depend on this plan—but the scene doesn't emphasize them beyond the Newsweek cover. The tension is present but understated, and the casual tone of the conversation diminishes the urgency.

Story Forward: 7

The scene advances the story by securing the key resource (Chambers) and confirming the fake movie plan, which is essential for the exfiltration. It's a necessary step, but it doesn't introduce new complications or raise the stakes.

Unpredictability: 5

The scene is somewhat unpredictable in its tone—Chambers' deadpan humor is unexpected given the serious context—but the outcome (Chambers agreeing) is predictable. The lack of a twist or surprise makes it less unpredictable than it could be.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the idea of deception and manipulation for a greater good. Chambers questions the morality of creating a fake movie, while Mendez justifies it as a necessary tactic for the rescue mission. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs about the ethics of his actions.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 4

The emotional impact is muted, relying on the gravity of the Newsweek cover and the weight of the mission, but the scene's tone is mostly wry and procedural. The humor undercuts potential emotional resonance, and there's no personal stakes revealed for Mendez or Chambers.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue is sharp and characterful, especially Chambers' one-liners ('People with eyes' and 'You'll fit right in'), which provide dark humor and insight. The weakness is that the exchange is mostly exposition and quips, lacking subtext or emotional depth—it's entertaining but not layered.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because of the witty dialogue and the intriguing premise of using Hollywood to pull off a real-life escape. The contrast between the mundane studio setting and the life-or-death mission creates a compelling tension, even if the scene is short.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is brisk, with snappy dialogue and quick scene transitions, which suits the procedural nature. However, the scene feels rushed, and the emotional beats are skipped over, making it feel more like a checklist than a moment of connection.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of parentheticals and dialogue is standard, and the scene transitions smoothly from the kitchen to the studio. No formatting issues.

Structure: 6.5

The scene follows a classic setup: Mendez arrives, pitches the idea, and Chambers agrees, with a clear beginning, middle, and end. It's efficient but lacks a structural twist or reversal, making it feel like a functional scene rather than a dramatic one.


Critique
  • The scene effectively establishes a sense of tension and urgency through Kathy's obsessive washing of the wine glasses, which symbolizes her anxiety about the situation. However, the dialogue between Joe and Kathy feels somewhat flat and could benefit from more emotional depth or subtext to convey their relationship dynamics more vividly.
  • The transition from the kitchen to the bathroom with Ken and Pat feels abrupt and lacks a clear thematic connection. It would be more impactful if the scenes were linked by a common thread, such as a shared concern about the safety of the houseguests or the escalating situation outside.
  • The dialogue in the subsequent scenes with Mendez and Chambers is humorous and engaging, but it risks undermining the gravity of the situation. While humor can be effective, it should be balanced with the seriousness of the context to maintain tension. The contrast between the light-hearted banter and the dire circumstances could be more pronounced.
  • Chambers' character is introduced with a strong sense of personality, but the dialogue could be tightened to enhance his wit and charm. Some lines feel a bit too on-the-nose, and subtlety could make his character more relatable and engaging.
  • The pacing of the scene shifts dramatically from the tension in the kitchen to the more comedic tone in Chambers' studio. This could disorient the audience. A smoother transition or a more gradual build-up to the humor would help maintain narrative flow.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding more layers to Kathy's character by incorporating her internal thoughts or feelings about the situation, perhaps through a brief voiceover or a moment of reflection that reveals her fears.
  • Link the kitchen and bathroom scenes thematically by having Ken and Pat discuss the same concerns that Kathy is experiencing, creating a sense of unity among the characters as they navigate their anxiety.
  • Maintain the humor in Mendez and Chambers' dialogue but ensure it serves to highlight the absurdity of their situation rather than detracting from the tension. This could involve more clever wordplay or situational irony.
  • Refine Chambers' dialogue to make it snappier and more impactful. Consider using subtext to convey his character's personality rather than stating things outright, allowing the audience to infer his wit.
  • To improve pacing, consider interspersing moments of tension with humor more evenly throughout the scene, allowing for a more cohesive emotional journey that reflects the characters' experiences.



Scene 18 -  The Producer Dilemma
100 INT. SMOKE HOUSE - AFTERNOON 100

A couple of empty highball glasses on the table.
Chambers is looking at PHOTOGRAPHS of the SIX. Mendez is
taking notes. On a photo of Cora Lijek.

CHAMBERS
This one’s got an M.A. in English.
She should be your screenwriter.
Sometimes they go on scouts ‘cause
they want the free meals.
(re: Bob Anders)
This guy’s the director.

MENDEZ
Can you teach a guy how to be a
director in a day?

CHAMBERS
You can teach a rhesus monkey to
be a director in a day. Look, if
you’re gonna do it, you’ve got to
do it. The Khomaniacs are fruit
loops, but they have cousins
selling eight tracks and prayer
rugs on La Brea. You can’t build *
cover stories around a movie that
doesn’t exist. You need a script. *
You need a producer.

MENDEZ
I’m the producer.

CHAMBERS
No, you’re not. ‘Associate’ at
best. If it’s a twenty-million
dollar Star Wars rip-off, you need
somebody who’s a somebody to put
his name on it.

Here we see some AUTOGRAPHED ‘70s CELEBRITY 8X10s hanging
on the wall.

The waiter brings a bill.

CHAMBERS
Somebody respectable. With
credits. Who we can trust with
classified information. Who’ll
produce a fake movie. For free.


101 EXT. BEVERLY HILLS - EVENING 101

They walk up the driveway of a ‘70s Bel Air home.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 37.
101 CONTINUED: 101
SIEGEL (V.O.)
Yeah, come in.


102 INT. SIEGEL HOUSE - HALLWAY - EVENING 102

And there’s LESTER SIEGEL, a semi-legendary producer in
his semi-legendary seventies. He’s equal parts bookie
and rabbi. His father sold perfume on the Lower East
Side. Lester is halfway to dressed in a tuxedo.

SIEGEL
(shakes hands)
I only got a couple minutes. I’m
getting a lifetime achievement *
award tonight.

CHAMBERS
Mazel tov, Lester.

SIEGEL
Aaah, I’d rather stay home and
count the wrinkles on my dog’s
balls. These fuckin’ things are
like getting measured for your
coffin. ‘He don’t look so good.
Let’s give him an honorary award.’

TIME CUT TO:
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller","Comedy"]

Summary In a smoke house, Chambers and Mendez strategize about creating a fake movie to disguise a covert operation. Chambers reviews photos of the team, suggesting Cora Lijek as a potential screenwriter, while stressing the need for a credible producer. Mendez's inexperience is highlighted as Chambers dismisses his claim of being the producer. The scene shifts to Lester Siegel's home, where he is preparing for an award ceremony, showcasing his reluctance and gruff demeanor. The tone blends urgency with dark humor, setting the stage for their mission.
Strengths
  • Sharp dialogue
  • Character dynamics
  • Humor
Weaknesses
  • Limited action
  • Lack of visual elements

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to establish the feasibility of the fake movie cover and recruit a credible producer, which it does with sharp dialogue and characterful introductions. The biggest limiter is the lack of direct tension or conflict—the scene is more about setup than stakes, and the outcome feels predetermined, which caps its overall impact.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of using a fake movie as a cover for a rescue is inherently clever and well-executed here, but it's a familiar trope in spy fiction. The scene's strength is in grounding it with specific details (the photos, the autographed 8x10s), but it doesn't introduce a new twist on the idea.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the plan by securing a producer, but it's a straightforward progression without obstacles or reversals. The scene's weakness is that it lacks a turning point or a moment of doubt, making it feel like a necessary but unremarkable step.

Originality: 7

The scene is original in its blend of espionage and Hollywood satire, but the 'fake movie' trope is not new. The authenticity of the dialogue and the specific details (autographed photos, the tuxedo) add freshness to a familiar setup.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Chambers is the standout, with his dry wit and practical wisdom, while Mendez is more reactive. Lester Siegel is introduced with a memorable voice, but his character is sketched rather than developed. The weakness is that Mendez's internal conflict isn't explored here.

Character Changes: 2

There's no significant character change in this scene. Mendez's resolve is reinforced, but he doesn't undergo a transformation or face a moral dilemma that alters his trajectory.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal is to establish himself as a producer and gain respect in the industry. This reflects his desire for recognition and validation.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to create a fake movie as a cover story for a covert operation. This reflects the immediate challenge of deceiving the enemy and executing a risky plan.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

The conflict is minimal—there's no direct opposition or obstacle in this scene. The tension is implied (the stakes of the mission) but not dramatized, making the conflict level low.

Opposition: 2

There's no direct opposition in this scene; the only obstacle is the need to find a suitable producer, which is quickly resolved. The opposition is external (the Iranians) but not present here.

High Stakes: 6

The stakes are high (the lives of six diplomats), but they're not foregrounded in this scene. The focus is on the logistics of the cover, so the stakes feel distant rather than immediate.

Story Forward: 6

The scene moves the story forward by securing a producer, which is a necessary step in the plan. However, it doesn't introduce new complications or raise the stakes, so the forward momentum is steady but not dramatic.

Unpredictability: 4

This scene is somewhat predictable—it's clear that Siegel will agree to help, and the outcome is never in doubt. The unpredictability comes from the specific details of the conversation, like Siegel's cynical remarks, rather than plot twists.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict revolves around the ethics of deception and the sacrifices necessary for the greater good. The protagonist must navigate the moral implications of his actions in service of a larger mission.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 4

The emotional impact is muted; the scene is more intellectual than visceral. The humor provides some levity, but there's no moment that deeply moves the audience or raises the emotional stakes.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue is sharp and characterful, especially Chambers' lines about teaching a monkey to direct and Siegel's cynical take on awards. The weakness is that some exchanges feel expository, serving the plot more than revealing character.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because of its witty dialogue and the intriguing premise of creating a fake movie. The contrast between the mundane setting and the high-stakes mission keeps the reader interested, even if the action is minimal.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is steady, with a natural flow from the smoke house to Siegel's home. The dialogue keeps the scene moving, but there's no urgency or acceleration, which fits the scene's purpose as a setup.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of parentheticals and time cuts is standard, though the 'TIME CUT TO:' at the end feels slightly abrupt.

Structure: 6

The scene follows a classic setup structure: it establishes the need (a producer), introduces a solution (Siegel), and ends with a commitment. It's efficient but lacks a dramatic arc or a moment of tension.


Critique
  • The dialogue between Chambers and Mendez is engaging and showcases their personalities well, but it could benefit from more subtext. While Chambers is clearly the more experienced figure, Mendez's responses could reflect more of his internal conflict or determination, adding depth to their interaction.
  • Chambers' line about teaching a rhesus monkey to be a director is humorous and establishes his character as someone who doesn't take the situation too seriously. However, this humor could be balanced with a moment of gravity to remind the audience of the high stakes involved in their mission.
  • The scene transitions from the smoke house to Siegel's house, but the transition feels abrupt. A more gradual shift or a line that connects the two locations could enhance the flow and maintain the audience's engagement.
  • The introduction of Siegel is effective, but the description could be more vivid. Instead of stating he is 'halfway to dressed in a tuxedo,' consider showing him in the midst of preparing for the award ceremony, perhaps with a humorous detail about his appearance or demeanor that reflects his character.
  • The use of 'Khomaniacs' as a term for the Iranian revolutionaries is a bit jarring and may come off as insensitive. It could be beneficial to find a term that conveys the same idea without risking alienation of the audience or appearing disrespectful.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment where Mendez expresses his doubts or fears about the plan, which would create a stronger emotional connection with the audience and highlight the risks involved.
  • Enhance the transition between the smoke house and Siegel's house by including a line that reflects on the urgency of their mission or the stakes involved, creating a smoother narrative flow.
  • Incorporate more visual details about Siegel's environment to enrich the scene. For example, describe the decor of his home or the atmosphere of the award ceremony to provide context and depth.
  • Revise the dialogue to include more subtext, allowing characters to convey their feelings and motivations without stating them outright. This will create a more engaging and layered interaction.
  • Consider softening the humor in Chambers' dialogue to maintain a balance between levity and the seriousness of their situation, ensuring that the audience remains aware of the stakes at hand.



Scene 19 -  Navigating the Hostage Crisis
103 INT. SIEGEL’S DEN - ANGLE ON TV - TED KOPPEL - EVENING 103

Reporting on Iran.

SIEGEL (O.S.)
A little experiment. You be me
hearing you.

The TV we’re watching sits in a room with a couple of
Golden Globes and pictures of a younger Lester.


ANOTHER ANGLE

SIEGEL
Six people in the middle of a city
of, what, four million --

ON TV, a wild-eyed woman in the crowd (in one of the most
widely-played clips of the hostage crisis) makes an ax-
falling gesture with her arm repeatedly.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 38.
103 CONTINUED: 103

SIEGEL
-- who chant ‘Death to America’
all the livelong day. You wanna
set up a picture in a week. Lie
to a whole town of people who lie
for a living. Have Double-O-Seven
here sneak into a country that
wants CIA blood with their
breakfast cereal. Duck Iranian
intelligence. Then walk the Brady *
Bunch out of the most watched city *
in the world...

MENDEZ
... and past a hundred Komiteh at
the airport.

SIEGEL
Look, I wanna help you but... In
the Army, we did suicide missions
that had better odds. So lemme
hit it again for the cheap seats:
NO.

Chambers gives Mendez a look.

CHAMBERS
(to Lester, as he
gets up)
Enjoy your fish dinner tonight.

Chambers stops at the muted television. More images of
angry crowds.

CHAMBERS
You ever think, Lester, how it’s
all for the cameras?

SIEGEL
They’re getting the ratings, I’ll
give ‘em that -- *

Siegel looks at the TV: at that moment, a HOSTAGE TAKER *
holding up photos of hostages for CAMERAS in front of
him. He takes a beat.

SIEGEL
We’re gonna need a script.

A beat of silence. A LOOK from Siegel to Chambers.

CHAMBERS (V.O.)
(pre-lap)
How ‘bout The Horses of Achilles?
ARGO - Final 39.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense evening discussion in Siegel's den, Siegel and Mendez grapple with the daunting challenges of extracting hostages from Iran while watching a news report on the crisis. Siegel expresses deep skepticism about their plan, likening it to a suicide mission, while Mendez listens and considers the risks. Chambers interjects, critiquing the media's sensationalism and suggesting a title for their operation, highlighting their collaborative effort. The scene underscores the urgency and gravity of their situation, culminating in Siegel's insistence on the need for a well-thought-out strategy.
Strengths
  • Tension-filled dialogue
  • Engaging plot development
  • Strong character dynamics
Weaknesses
  • Some dialogue may be overly expository

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.5

This scene's primary job is to sell the impossible odds of the mission and secure Siegel's reluctant buy-in, which it does with sharp, memorable dialogue and escalating tension. The single biggest limiter is that the scene relies heavily on exposition and a long monologue, which, while effective, slightly slows the pacing and could feel static without stronger visual action.


Story Content

Concept: 8.5

The concept of pitching a fake movie to a cynical Hollywood producer as a cover for a CIA extraction is inherently compelling and original. The scene effectively contrasts the absurdity of the plan with the deadly serious stakes.

Plot: 8

The plot advances significantly: the plan is laid out, the obstacles are enumerated, and Siegel's initial refusal is followed by his eventual, reluctant agreement, moving the story from planning to execution.

Originality: 9

The scene is highly original in its specific situation—a Hollywood producer being pitched a real CIA operation as a movie. The dialogue feels authentic to a cynical industry veteran, and the blend of humor and horror is fresh.


Character Development

Characters: 8

Siegel is vividly drawn as a cynical, pragmatic, yet ultimately empathetic figure. Mendez and Chambers are more reactive here, but their quiet determination contrasts well with Siegel's loud skepticism.

Character Changes: 7

Siegel undergoes a clear change from outright refusal to grudging acceptance, a significant shift driven by the moral weight of the situation and Chambers' pointed question about the cameras.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to convince Siegel to support the risky mission despite the odds and challenges they face. This reflects the protagonist's determination, courage, and belief in the mission's importance.

External Goal: 9

The protagonist's external goal is to secure support and resources for the mission to rescue hostages in Iran. This goal reflects the immediate circumstances and challenges they are facing in the mission.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8

The primary conflict is between Siegel's self-preservation and the moral imperative to help, creating strong internal and external tension. The conflict is clear and escalating.

Opposition: 8

Siegel himself is the primary opposition, representing pragmatism, fear, and self-interest. His arguments are strong and logical, making the protagonist's task feel genuinely difficult.

High Stakes: 9.5

The stakes are explicitly and powerfully stated: six lives, a hostile city, and the entire intelligence apparatus of Iran. The scene makes the audience feel the near-impossibility of success.

Story Forward: 9

The scene is a major turning point, moving the plot from the conceptual phase to the active phase of creating the fake film. It directly sets up the next steps.

Unpredictability: 6

This scene is somewhat predictable in its overall arc (the reluctant hero agrees), but the specific, colorful language of Siegel's refusal and the clever turning point (the camera comment) provide moments of surprise.

Philosophical Conflict: 8

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the morality and ethics of the mission, as well as the manipulation of media and public perception. It challenges the protagonist's beliefs about sacrifice, deception, and the greater good.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7.5

The emotional impact comes from the weight of the stakes—six lives—and the dark humor that makes the danger feel more real. Siegel's reluctant shift from 'no' to 'we're gonna need a script' is a powerful emotional beat.

Dialogue: 9

The dialogue is the scene's strongest asset, particularly Siegel's monologue which is both funny and terrifying. The back-and-forth is crisp and reveals character and stakes efficiently.

Engagement: 8.5

This scene is engaging because of the sharp, witty dialogue and the high-stakes negotiation. The audience is invested in whether Siegel will say yes, and the dark humor keeps the tension from becoming overwhelming.

Pacing: 8

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it starts with a slow, tense setup, builds to a peak of refusal, and then pivots quickly to acceptance, mirroring the emotional journey of the characters.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting is clean and professional. The use of 'ANGLE ON TV' and 'ON TV' effectively integrates the external crisis into the scene. The parentheticals are used sparingly and effectively.

Structure: 8.5

The scene follows a classic 'pitch' structure: setup (the plan), obstacle (Siegel's refusal), turning point (Chambers' comment about cameras), and resolution (Siegel's agreement). It's well-paced for a dramatic thriller.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the tension and absurdity of the situation, with Siegel's sarcastic remarks highlighting the gravity of the mission while also providing dark humor. This balance is crucial in maintaining audience engagement amidst the serious subject matter.
  • The dialogue is sharp and character-driven, particularly Siegel's lines that convey his skepticism and experience. However, the pacing could be improved by tightening some of the exchanges to maintain a brisker rhythm, especially given the high stakes involved.
  • The visual elements, such as the TV showing the chaos in Iran and the trophies in Siegel's den, create a stark contrast between the glamorous world of Hollywood and the dire reality of the hostage crisis. This juxtaposition is effective but could be enhanced by more specific descriptions of the room's atmosphere to further immerse the audience.
  • The transition from Siegel's skepticism to the need for a script feels a bit abrupt. While it serves as a plot point, it could benefit from a more gradual build-up to emphasize the shift from disbelief to acceptance of the absurd plan.
  • The use of the TV as a narrative device is clever, but it could be more integrated into the characters' dialogue. For instance, Siegel could react more directly to specific images or statements on the TV, which would deepen the connection between the external chaos and their internal conflict.
Suggestions
  • Consider tightening the dialogue to enhance the pacing and maintain tension. For example, eliminate any redundant phrases that do not add to character development or plot progression.
  • Add more sensory details to the setting to create a vivid atmosphere. Describe the sounds, smells, or even the lighting in Siegel's den to ground the audience in the scene.
  • Develop the transition from skepticism to the realization that a script is needed. Perhaps include a moment of reflection or a shared look between Siegel and Chambers that signifies a shift in their understanding of the situation.
  • Incorporate more direct reactions from Siegel to the TV footage, allowing the audience to see how the external chaos impacts his decision-making process.
  • Explore the emotional weight of the situation further. Perhaps include a moment where Siegel reflects on the implications of their plan, adding depth to his character and the gravity of the mission.



Scene 20 -  Script Disputes at the Pool
104 EXT. BY LESTER’S POOL - MORNING 104

Chambers, on hold on the phone, walks to Siegel holding
up The Horses of Achilles script in a William Morris
binder. Stacks of scripts on a table outside. Siegel’s
new A.F.I. award is being used as a coaster.

SIEGEL
Nobody makes Westerns anymore.

CHAMBERS
(looking through it)
It’s ancient Troy.

SIEGEL
If it’s got horses in the title, *
it’s a Western.

CHAMBERS
(into the phone)
Yeah, Kenny, please. It’s John
Chambers, about the office space.
(then)
It doesn’t matter. It’s a fake
movie.

SIEGEL
If I’m doing a fake movie, it’s *
gonna be a fake hit.

CHAMBERS
(to phone)
Is A006 still open on the lot?


105 INT. SIEGEL’S LIVING ROOM - DAY 105

Mendez, on the PHONE near a fully stocked bar.

O’DONNELL (V.O.)
The Canadians are done. Say
they’re bearing too much risk.


106 INT. O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - CROSS-CUTTING - DAY 106

O’DONNELL
Foreign Secretary cornered Vance
in Brussels and told him she’s
serving eviction papers. The
Cardinal wants all cover options
on his desk Friday morning.

MENDEZ
That’s too soon.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 40.
106 CONTINUED: 106

O’DONNELL
Engell’s prepping the Bikes Option
and the Teachers Option. You’ve
got 72 hours to make yours
better...


107 INT. SIEGEL’S LIVING ROOM - DAY 107

Mendez is looking down at the SCRIPT in front of him. He
opens to the first page.


ANGLE ON HIM

reading, thinking.


108 EXT. LESTER’S POOL - DAY 108

Mendez walks up to the table where Siegel and Chambers
are already eating.

MENDEZ
(entering, reading)
‘Fade in on starship landing. An
exotic, Middle Eastern vibe.
Women gather, offering ecstatic
libations to the sky gods.’
(looks up)
‘ARGO. A science-fantasy
adventure.’

Mendez throws down the script.

SIEGEL
It’s in turnaround. It’s dog *
shit.

MENDEZ
It’s a space movie in the Middle *
East. Does it matter? *

Chambers looks at the BULLSEYE logo on the cover page. *
Reacts. *

CHAMBERS
(to Lester) *
Can we get the option?

MENDEZ
Why do we need the option?



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 41.
108 CONTINUED: 108
SIEGEL
You’re worried about the
Ayatollah? Try the WGA. *
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a lighthearted morning scene at Lester's pool, Chambers attempts to pitch his script 'The Horses of Achilles' to the skeptical Siegel, who insists it’s a Western despite Chambers' claims of its ancient Troy setting. As Chambers juggles a phone call about office space, Siegel expresses a desire for a fake movie to be a fake hit. The conversation shifts to Mendez, who discusses project risks and eviction papers with O'Donnell before critiquing a science-fantasy script. While Siegel dismisses the script as 'dog shit,' Chambers sees potential in acquiring it, leading to a humorous debate about its relevance and the risks involved.
Strengths
  • Engaging dialogue
  • Innovative concept
  • Balanced tone
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development in this specific scene

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene efficiently advances the plot by locking in the Argo cover and adding a ticking clock, but its impact is muted by the lack of direct character conflict or emotional stakes, making it a functional rather than standout scene. The biggest limiter is the absence of a strong opposing force or personal stakes for Mendez, which would elevate the tension.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of using a fake movie as a CIA cover is inherently compelling and well-integrated, but the scene doesn't fully exploit its dramatic potential, focusing more on logistics than on the audacity of the idea.

Plot: 6

The plot moves forward with the decision to option Argo and the deadline pressure, but the scene is mostly expository, lacking a clear turning point or complication.

Originality: 7

The premise is original and fresh, but the execution in this scene relies on familiar tropes of the genre, such as the cynical Hollywood producer and the stressed operative.


Character Development

Characters: 6

Mendez is shown as pragmatic and focused, but his internal conflict is underdeveloped. Siegel and Chambers provide color but remain archetypal Hollywood types.

Character Changes: 2

Mendez's resolve is reinforced but not fundamentally changed; he remains the same determined operative, so character development is minimal.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal is to secure the option for a script and navigate the challenges of the industry. This reflects their desire for success, recognition, and creative fulfillment.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to secure the option for a script and potentially overcome obstacles related to industry politics and competition.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 5

Conflict is present but low-key: the pressure from O'Donnell and the need to make the fake movie credible, but there's no direct antagonist or high-stakes confrontation.

Opposition: 4

Opposition is indirect: the deadline from O'Donnell and the inherent difficulty of the mission, but there's no active antagonist in the scene.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high (lives at risk, deadline pressure), but they are communicated through dialogue rather than felt in the scene's action, reducing their immediate impact.

Story Forward: 7

The scene advances the plot by confirming the Argo plan and setting a deadline, but it's a transitional scene that doesn't introduce new obstacles or revelations.

Unpredictability: 5

This scene is somewhat predictable as it follows the expected path of confirming the plan, but the witty dialogue and the meta-commentary on Hollywood provide small surprises.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict revolves around the value of creativity and originality in the film industry, as well as the balance between commercial success and artistic integrity.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 4

The scene is emotionally restrained, with the urgency conveyed through dialogue rather than visceral stakes, limiting its emotional resonance.

Dialogue: 7

Dialogue is sharp and characterful, especially Siegel's quips, but it often serves exposition rather than revealing deeper character layers or advancing conflict.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because it reveals the cleverness of the Argo plan and the pressure of the deadline, but the lack of emotional stakes or character depth keeps it from being gripping.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is brisk, with quick cuts between locations and phone calls, but the scene feels a bit rushed, not allowing moments to breathe.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and cross-cutting, though the use of 'CONTINUED' and 'ANGLE ON' is slightly dated but acceptable.

Structure: 6.5

The scene follows a classic setup structure: it establishes the plan, adds a deadline, and ends with a decision, but it lacks a clear midpoint turn or escalation.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the tension and absurdity of the situation, particularly through the dialogue between Chambers and Siegel. However, the humor can sometimes undercut the gravity of the mission, which may confuse the audience about the stakes involved.
  • The transition between the outdoor setting by the pool and the indoor setting in Siegel's living room feels abrupt. A smoother transition could enhance the flow of the scene and maintain the audience's engagement.
  • While the dialogue is witty and showcases the characters' personalities, it occasionally veers into exposition-heavy territory. For instance, Mendez's line about the script being a space movie in the Middle East could be more subtly integrated into the conversation rather than stated outright.
  • The stakes of the mission are mentioned but not fully explored in this scene. O'Donnell's voiceover provides some context, but it might be beneficial to have Mendez express his concerns more directly to Siegel and Chambers, emphasizing the urgency of their situation.
  • The use of humor, particularly Siegel's dismissive comments about the script, is effective but could be balanced with moments of seriousness to reflect the dire circumstances surrounding the characters. This would create a more nuanced emotional tone.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief moment of reflection for Mendez after reading the script, allowing him to express his thoughts on the absurdity of the situation and the risks involved. This could deepen the emotional impact of the scene.
  • To improve the transition between locations, consider using a visual cue, such as a cutaway shot of the pool before moving indoors, to create a more cohesive flow.
  • Incorporate more physical actions or reactions from the characters during the dialogue to enhance the visual storytelling and keep the audience engaged.
  • Explore the stakes of the mission further by having Mendez articulate his fears or doubts about the plan, which would add depth to his character and heighten the tension.
  • Balance the humor with moments of seriousness by allowing characters to acknowledge the gravity of their situation, perhaps through a shared look or a brief pause in the conversation.



Scene 21 -  Desperate Negotiations
109 EXT. CROSSROADS OF THE WORLD (HOLLYWOOD) - DAY 109 *

Tony and Lester turn off Sunset Blvd. and into the office
complex.

SIEGEL
He’s only a prick if you catch him
on the wrong day.

MENDEZ
Is it the wrong day?

SIEGEL
It’s always the wrong day.

They’ve arrived at a door with a sign: “MAX KLEIN
PRODUCTIONS/BULLSEYE FILMS.”


110 OMITTED 110 *


111 INT. MAX KLEIN’S OFFICE - A FEW MINUTES LATER 111

We see all kinds of MOVIE POSTERS AND MEMORABILIA ALL
OVER THE OFFICE.

KLEIN
You’re gonna get this into
production in one month?

MENDEZ *
One month.

KLEIN
Who are you again?

MENDEZ
Kevin Harkins. Studio Six Films.

SIEGEL
He’s the money.

KLEIN
I thought you were retired,
Lester.




(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 42.
111 CONTINUED: 111
SIEGEL
-- Till I read the Argo. Look,
how ‘bout we say fifteen thou and
close on this?

KLEIN
You want me to be honest with you,
Les?

SIEGEL
Naah, bullshit me, Max.

KLEIN
Okay. Because I enjoyed your
films, the early ones. I took
this meeting out of respect
because I wanted to tell you ‘no’
to your face.

SIEGEL
Thank you. Very respectful.

KLEIN
You’re done, Lester. You’ve gotta
get your cataracts fixed and read
the trades. MGM just capitalized
for six new films and they’re
desperate for Sci-Fi. They’ve
already offered me four times what
you are.

SIEGEL
(a beat)
What can I say? Congratulations.
(shrugs to Mendez)
He’s got me.

A beat. Mendez ready to go --

SIEGEL
But see -- it worries me, what you
said, and I’ll tell you why. A
couple weeks back I was sitting in
Trader Vic’s enjoying a Mai Tai
when my pal Warren Beatty came to
wish me well and we had a little
chat. Seems he was attached to
star in Zulu Empire -- which was
gonna anchor that MGM slate -- but
Warren confided in me that the
picture’s gone over-budget ‘cause
the Zulu extras wanna unionize.
(MORE)


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 43.
111 CONTINUED: (2) 111
SIEGEL (CONT'D)
They may be cannibals swallowing
each other up but they want health
and dental, so the movie’s kaput --
which means that MGM deal ain’t
gonna happen and your script ain’t
worth the buffalo-shit on a
nickel. So.

Lester takes some documents out of a folder.

SIEGEL
The way this looks to me --
through the cataracts, I grant you
-- is that you can either sign
here and take ten thousand for
your toilet-paper script -- or you
can go fuck yourself.

Siegel smiles kindly and holds a pen and the contracts
out to Klein. Klein takes them.
Genres: ["Drama","Comedy"]

Summary In Max Klein's cluttered office, Lester Siegel attempts to negotiate the production of his film script, but Klein dismisses him, citing a better offer from MGM. Despite Tony Mendez's supportive presence, Lester's frustration boils over as he delivers a harsh ultimatum, offering a low payment or telling Klein to 'go fuck yourself.' The tense confrontation highlights Siegel's desperation and fading relevance in the industry, ending with him presenting a contract and pen to Klein, leaving the decision in Klein's hands.
Strengths
  • Sharp dialogue
  • Tension-filled negotiation
  • Humorous moments
Weaknesses
  • Lack of physical action
  • Limited visual variety

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to secure the fake movie production deal, which it accomplishes with wit and tension, but the outcome is somewhat predictable and the scene's brevity limits deeper character exploration. A more unexpected twist or a moment of genuine vulnerability from Siegel would elevate it.


Story Content

Concept: 8.5

The concept of using a fake movie as a cover for a hostage rescue is inherently compelling, and this scene adds a layer of Hollywood deal-making that is fresh and engaging.

Plot: 7

The plot advances the fake movie scheme by securing the production company, but the negotiation is straightforward and lacks a major twist.

Originality: 8

The scene is original in its blend of espionage and Hollywood deal-making, with authentic dialogue that captures the era's film industry.


Character Development

Characters: 7.5

Siegel is the standout, using his Hollywood savvy to bluff Klein, while Mendez remains a passive observer, which is consistent but limits character development.

Character Changes: 2

No significant character change occurs; Siegel's confidence is reaffirmed, but Mendez remains unchanged.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to assert his authority and negotiate a deal for his script. This reflects his desire for recognition and success in the industry.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to secure a production deal for his script within a month. This reflects the immediate challenge he is facing in getting his project off the ground.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6

The conflict is primarily verbal, with Siegel and Klein in a battle of wits, but it lacks physical or emotional intensity.

Opposition: 5.5

Klein initially opposes the deal, but his resistance is quickly overcome by Siegel's bluff, making the opposition moderate but not formidable.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high (the lives of six diplomats), but the scene focuses on a business negotiation, making the stakes feel distant.

Story Forward: 7.5

The scene moves the story forward by securing the production company, a key step in the plan, but it is a procedural step rather than a major turning point.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is somewhat unpredictable because Siegel's bluff about Warren Beatty is a clever twist that turns the tables on Klein, but the overall outcome is expected.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the value of success and integrity in the film industry. Siegel represents the pragmatic approach of prioritizing profit, while Klein values artistic integrity and respect.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5.5

The scene is more intellectually engaging than emotionally stirring, with the tension of the negotiation providing mild suspense.

Dialogue: 8.5

The dialogue is sharp and witty, especially Siegel's monologue about Warren Beatty and the Zulu extras, which is both funny and effective in the negotiation.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because of the sharp dialogue and the tension of the negotiation, which keeps the reader invested in the outcome.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing is brisk, with the negotiation unfolding quickly, but the scene could benefit from a moment of pause to heighten tension.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is standard and clear, with proper scene headings and dialogue attribution, though the use of 'MORE' and 'CONTINUED' is a bit dated.

Structure: 8

The scene follows a classic negotiation structure: setup, confrontation, and resolution, with a clear turning point when Siegel reveals his bluff.


Critique
  • The dialogue between Siegel and Mendez effectively establishes the tension and urgency of their situation, but it could benefit from more subtext. While Siegel's quips about Klein being a 'prick' add humor, they also risk undermining the gravity of their mission. Consider incorporating more serious undertones in their banter to reflect the high stakes involved.
  • Klein's character comes off as dismissive and somewhat condescending, which is effective in showcasing the challenges Mendez and Siegel face in securing funding. However, his motivations could be clearer. Why is he so adamant about rejecting Siegel? Adding a line or two that hints at his own struggles or the competitive nature of the industry could deepen his character and make the stakes feel more personal.
  • The scene's pacing is uneven. The initial banter flows well, but the transition to the more serious negotiation feels abrupt. Consider adding a moment of silence or a visual cue that emphasizes the shift in tone, allowing the audience to absorb the gravity of the situation before diving into the negotiation.
  • The use of humor is a double-edged sword in this scene. While it lightens the mood, it can also detract from the tension surrounding the hostage situation. Striking a better balance between humor and seriousness will enhance the emotional impact of the scene.
  • The visual elements, such as the movie posters and memorabilia in Klein's office, are a nice touch, but they could be used more effectively to reflect the characters' emotional states. For instance, a poster of a failed film could symbolize Klein's own fears about the industry, paralleling the stakes of Mendez and Siegel's mission.
Suggestions
  • Incorporate more subtext in the dialogue to reflect the underlying tension of the situation. For example, Siegel could express concern about the mission's feasibility while maintaining a humorous tone.
  • Clarify Klein's motivations by adding a line that hints at his own struggles or the competitive nature of the film industry, making his rejection feel more personal and relatable.
  • Smooth the pacing by adding a moment of silence or a visual cue that emphasizes the shift from humor to serious negotiation, allowing the audience to absorb the gravity of the situation.
  • Aim for a better balance between humor and seriousness to enhance the emotional impact of the scene. Consider reducing the humor slightly to maintain tension.
  • Utilize the visual elements in Klein's office to reflect the characters' emotional states more effectively, perhaps by including a poster that symbolizes the risks they face in their mission.



Scene 22 -  Tacos and Tensions
112 EXT. STREET - A FEW MINUTES LATER 112

MENDEZ
You know Warren Beatty?

SIEGEL
I took a leak next to him at the
Golden Globes.
(beat)
Taco?


113 OMITTED 113


114 EXT. WARNER BROS. LOT - LATE DAY 114

Lester and Tony eat tacos at a picnic table on the lot.

MENDEZ
You got kids, Lester?

SIEGEL
Two daughters.

MENDEZ
You see them much?

SIEGEL
I talk to them once a year, maybe.

MENDEZ
Why’s that?
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 44.
114 CONTINUED: 114
SIEGEL
I was a terrible father.
(beat)
The bullshit business is like coal
mining. You can’t wash it off
before you kiss your wife and
kids... You?

MENDEZ
A son. Lives with his mother in
Virginia.

SIEGEL
You’re divorced?

MENDEZ
Taking time off.
(then, quiet)
He’s gotta... stay where he is.

SIEGEL
(beat)
Kids need the mother.


114A EXT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE (LOT - NY STREET) - MORNING 114A

Chambers and a GRAPHIC ARTIST walk through the set. We
REVEAL a couple of CYLON RAIDERS, helmets off, taking a
break from shooting and leaning against the wall.


115 INT. O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - DAY 115

O’DONNELL reads from the EYES ONLY document.

O’DONNELL
They caught the shah’s chief of
security trying to get on a plane
to Paris.

INTERCUT WITH:


116 INT. PRODUCTION OFFICE - MORNING 116

WIDER REVEALS that the production office is being set up.
A couple of FURNITURE GUYS move chairs in.

Mendez is looking at a POSTER. It reads: “Studio Six
Productions presents: ARGO. A COSMIC WAR.”




(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 45.
116 CONTINUED: 116

MENDEZ
(to a graphic artist)
‘War’ sounds like Star Wars.
Let’s use a different word.

Mendez closes the door to his private office.

O’DONNELL
‘Since the incident, the number of
guards at the airport has doubled.
Thorough background examinations
should be expected.’

MENDEZ
I need another week.

O’DONNELL
You don’t have it.


117 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - NIGHT 117 *

Mendez goes out into the main part of the office -- it’s
Tony, Siegel, and Chambers now.

They have hung up all their ARGO MATERIALS on the wall
and are reviewing them.

MENDEZ
We’ve got a script. We’ve got *
business cards.We’ve got a poster. *
If I’m them? It’s nothing we
couldn’t make at home.

CHAMBERS
I did a movie with Rock Hudson *
once. *
(a beat)
‘You need to sell a lie, you get
the press to sell it for you.’
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary On the Warner Bros. lot, Mendez and Siegel share tacos while reflecting on their troubled relationships with their children, revealing personal regrets. Mendez discusses his son and hints at a divorce, while Siegel admits to only speaking to his daughters once a year. The scene shifts to O'Donnell reading about heightened airport security, adding urgency to Mendez's ARGO project. As Mendez critiques a movie poster, the team focuses on creating a convincing facade for their operation, balancing personal reflections with professional pressures.
Strengths
  • Engaging dialogue
  • Tension and urgency
  • Complex character dynamics
  • Innovative concept
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development in this specific scene
  • Some transitions could be smoother

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to humanize the protagonists and reinforce the stakes through personal stakes, which it does effectively with quiet, character-driven moments. However, it lacks forward plot momentum and feels like a breather rather than a turning point, limiting its overall impact.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of using a fake movie as cover is already established; this scene focuses on character development and thematic resonance, which is well-executed but not conceptually innovative.

Plot: 5.5

The plot advances minimally—only the poster title change and the news about airport security—while the main focus is on character backstory and bonding.

Originality: 7

The scene is original in its blend of Hollywood insider details with espionage, and the character confessions feel authentic and fresh.


Character Development

Characters: 8

The scene reveals deep personal histories for both Mendez and Siegel, showing vulnerability and shared understanding, which strengthens their partnership.

Character Changes: 3

Both characters open up, deepening their mutual trust, but neither undergoes a fundamental change; it's a bonding moment rather than a transformation.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to come to terms with his past mistakes as a father and find redemption. This reflects his deeper need for forgiveness and reconciliation with his family.

External Goal: 5

The protagonist's external goal is to successfully execute a plan to rescue hostages, which requires careful planning and deception. This reflects the immediate challenge he is facing in his professional life.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 4

Conflict is internal and interpersonal, not external; the tension comes from the characters' past choices and the looming mission deadline.

Opposition: 5

The opposition is not a person but time and circumstance—the tightening security and the deadline—which creates a subtle pressure.

High Stakes: 6

The stakes are reinforced through the news about airport security and the mention of the shah's chief of security, but the scene itself is low-action.

Story Forward: 4

The scene moves the story forward minimally—only the poster tweak and the news about airport security—while the main progress is in character relationship.

Unpredictability: 5

The scene is somewhat predictable in its character revelations, but the specific details—like Siegel's confession about being a terrible father—add a layer of authenticity.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict revolves around the sacrifices one must make for their work and the impact it has on personal relationships. The protagonist struggles with balancing his duty to his job with his responsibilities as a father.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6.5

The emotional impact is moderate, driven by the characters' shared vulnerability and the weight of their personal sacrifices.

Dialogue: 8

Dialogue is natural and revealing, with Siegel's confession about being a terrible father and Mendez's quiet admission about his son, creating authentic emotional beats.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because it offers a rare glimpse into the characters' personal lives, making them more relatable and investing the audience in their fates.

Pacing: 6

The pacing is leisurely, allowing for character moments, but it may feel slow for a thriller; the intercut with O'Donnell provides a brief jolt of urgency.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and standard, with clear scene headings and action lines that convey the setting and character actions effectively.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic two-hander structure: a casual conversation that reveals backstory and builds rapport, with a brief intercut to raise stakes.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures a moment of vulnerability between Mendez and Siegel, allowing the audience to see the personal stakes involved in their mission. However, the dialogue could benefit from more subtext to deepen the emotional impact. Currently, it feels somewhat on-the-nose, particularly Siegel's admission of being a 'terrible father.' This could be conveyed through more nuanced dialogue or actions that imply regret without stating it outright.
  • The transition between the light-hearted taco conversation and the serious implications of their mission feels abrupt. While the juxtaposition of humor and gravity can be effective, it requires a smoother transition to maintain the scene's flow. The shift from personal anecdotes to the operational details could be better integrated to enhance the narrative coherence.
  • The dialogue between Mendez and Siegel lacks a sense of urgency that reflects the high stakes of their situation. Given the context of their covert operation, the conversation could incorporate more tension or anxiety about the impending risks they face, which would heighten the stakes and engage the audience more effectively.
  • The visual elements in the scene, such as the picnic table and tacos, create a casual atmosphere that contrasts with the serious nature of their discussion. While this can work to highlight the absurdity of their situation, it may also dilute the tension. Consider using more evocative imagery or settings that reflect the gravity of their mission while still allowing for character development.
  • The intercutting with O'Donnell's office reading the classified document feels disjointed. While it serves to remind the audience of the external pressures, it could be more seamlessly integrated into the conversation. For instance, Mendez could react to O'Donnell's information in real-time, allowing the audience to see how the external situation impacts their personal conversation.
Suggestions
  • Revise the dialogue to include more subtext and emotional nuance. Instead of directly stating feelings of regret, consider using metaphors or anecdotes that imply these emotions.
  • Create a smoother transition between the light-hearted taco scene and the serious operational discussions. Perhaps have Mendez reflect on the weight of their mission before diving into the operational details.
  • Infuse the dialogue with a sense of urgency or anxiety about their situation. This could be achieved by having Mendez express concerns about the risks involved or the timeline they are working against.
  • Consider changing the setting to something that reflects the tension of their mission, such as a more enclosed or chaotic environment, to enhance the contrast between their personal lives and the gravity of their work.
  • Integrate O'Donnell's intercut more fluidly into the scene. For example, have Mendez react to O'Donnell's findings during the conversation, allowing the audience to see how the external pressures affect their personal discussions.



Scene 23 -  Creative Chaos in the Argo Production Office
118 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - DAY 118

Now it’s noisy in here now -- a PUBLICIST, ASSISTANTS and
controlled chaos --

SIEGEL
(on the phone)
-- press event and reading... No, *
I promised Variety exclusive on
that one...

Mendez is making a list with a PUBLICIST.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 46.
118 CONTINUED: 118

MENDEZ
‘Biggest Canadian production in
history.’ Canadian Gone With The
Wind --

PUBLICIST ASSISTANT #2
Canadian Sci-Fi Gone With Studio Six Films.
The Wind.

As Chambers pulls Mendez --

SIEGEL
(on the phone)
I gotta get back to you, Phil. I
can’t get my own mother a ticket.
I had to tell her it was
cancelled.

MENDEZ
Are you turning people away?

SIEGEL
(covering the phone)
You know what gets more suckers
than a sign that says ‘Brooklyn
Bridge For Sale’? ‘Brooklyn
Bridge: Approved Buyers Only.’
(as they go)
Philip? You there?

Chambers leads us into the main room, leading Tony to a
table where JACK KIRBY, 62, comics artist, fusses with
large COMIC PANELS of ARGO CONCEPT DRAWINGS spread over a
table.

Kirby starts to distribute storyboards. Some hold on to *
them and an ASSISTANT begins putting them up on the
board.

Mendez looks at them. Impressed. He picks up a drawing *
of some futuristic-looking vehicles. *

MENDEZ *
Any way to make the chariots look
more -- Middle-Eastern -- ?

KIRBY
Mesopotamia... Egypt...

MENDEZ
Iran.

Kirby takes out a marker and starts to sketch a *
futuristic-looking desert glider.
ARGO - Final 47.


119 OMITTED 119 *


120 OMITTED 120


121 OMITTED 121 *


122 OMITTED 122 *
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller","Sci-Fi"]

Summary In a bustling production office, Mendez collaborates with a publicist to promote 'Argo' as the 'Biggest Canadian production in history,' while Siegel deals with frustrations over ticket availability for the press event. Mendez and Chambers enter a room where comic artist Jack Kirby is working on storyboards. Impressed by Kirby's work, Mendez suggests adjustments for a more Middle-Eastern aesthetic, leading Kirby to sketch a futuristic desert glider. The scene captures the hectic and humorous atmosphere of film production, highlighting the challenges faced by the team.
Strengths
  • Innovative concept
  • Engaging dialogue
  • Tension and humor balance
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Lack of emotional depth

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene efficiently advances the cover-story construction with brisk, characterful dialogue and a fun cameo, but it lacks dramatic stakes or emotional weight, feeling more like procedural setup than a scene with its own arc.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of using a fake sci-fi movie as a cover is inherently clever, and bringing in Jack Kirby adds authenticity and visual flair. However, the scene doesn't deepen the concept beyond the initial joke.

Plot: 6

The plot moves forward by establishing the production's credibility (press event, storyboards), but it's a transitional scene with no major plot turn or revelation.

Originality: 7

The scene is original in its specific blend of historical figures and fictional cover, but the 'busy production office' trope is familiar. The dialogue feels authentic to the period and profession.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Mendez is proactive and focused; Siegel is wry and pragmatic; Kirby is a brief but vivid presence. No character undergoes change or reveals depth here.

Character Changes: 1

No character changes; everyone remains in their established roles.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to ensure the success of the press event and reading, as well as manage the chaos in the office. This reflects his need for control and competence in his job.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to finalize the concept drawings for the film and ensure they align with the vision for the project. This reflects the immediate challenge of meeting production deadlines and creative expectations.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

Low conflict: minor disagreements over wording ('Canadian Sci-Fi Gone With The Wind') and a phone call about ticket scarcity, but no real opposition.

Opposition: 2.5

Opposition is minimal; the only friction is Siegel's phone call about ticket scarcity and the minor debate over wording, neither of which challenges Mendez.

High Stakes: 5

Stakes are implied (the mission's success depends on this cover) but not felt in the scene; the tone is too light and procedural.

Story Forward: 6

The scene advances the cover story's development (press event, storyboards) but doesn't change the mission's trajectory.

Unpredictability: 5.5

This scene is unpredictable because of the unexpected inclusion of Jack Kirby and the playful 'Canadian Gone With The Wind' exchange, but the overall trajectory is expected.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

There is a philosophical conflict between the protagonist's desire for authenticity and creativity in the concept drawings, and the pressure to meet commercial expectations and deadlines. This challenges his values of artistic integrity versus commercial success.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 3

Minimal emotional impact; the scene is brisk and businesslike, with no character vulnerability or high-stakes tension.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue is snappy and functional, with Siegel's 'Brooklyn Bridge' line being the standout. It serves exposition and tone but doesn't reveal character conflict.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because of the brisk pace, the wry humor of Siegel's lines, and the novelty of seeing Jack Kirby involved, but it lacks suspense or emotional pull.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it moves quickly through multiple beats (phone call, list-making, storyboard review) without lingering, matching the 'controlled chaos' description.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

Standard screenplay formatting with clear action lines and dialogue; the parentheticals and continueds are correctly used. No issues.

Structure: 6.5

The scene has a classic three-beat structure: setup (chaos, phone call), development (storyboard discussion), and a minor turn (Kirby's sketch). It's functional but lacks a strong climax.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the chaotic atmosphere of a production office, which aligns well with the theme of creating a facade for the extraction operation. However, the dialogue could benefit from more distinct character voices to enhance individuality and make the interactions feel more dynamic.
  • While the humor in Siegel's dialogue about ticket sales adds levity, it risks overshadowing the urgency of the situation. Balancing humor with the gravity of the mission could create a more compelling tension.
  • The introduction of Jack Kirby and the concept drawings is a strong visual element, but the transition into this part of the scene feels abrupt. A smoother segue from the phone conversation to the creative process would help maintain narrative flow.
  • Mendez's suggestion to make the vehicles look more Middle-Eastern is a good character moment, showcasing his involvement in the creative process. However, it could be enhanced by providing more context about why this detail is significant to the mission, reinforcing the stakes.
  • The scene lacks a clear emotional arc or conflict. While there is a sense of urgency, the stakes are not explicitly defined, which could leave the audience feeling disconnected from the characters' motivations.
Suggestions
  • Consider giving each character a more unique voice or mannerism to differentiate them in the chaotic environment. This will help the audience engage more with the characters and their roles.
  • Integrate the humor more thoughtfully, ensuring it complements rather than detracts from the tension of the situation. Perhaps Siegel could express his frustration in a way that highlights the absurdity of their circumstances while still acknowledging the seriousness of their mission.
  • Create a more seamless transition into the concept drawing segment by perhaps having Mendez express a specific concern about the visuals before entering the room, which would help tie the two parts of the scene together.
  • Expand on Mendez's suggestion about the vehicles to include a brief explanation of why cultural authenticity is crucial for their cover story, thereby raising the stakes and emphasizing the importance of every detail in their plan.
  • Introduce a minor conflict or challenge within the scene, such as a disagreement over the creative direction or a sudden change in the production schedule, to create a sense of urgency and keep the audience engaged.



Scene 24 -  Press Event Shenanigans at the Beverly Hilton
123 EXT./INT. BEVERLY HILTON - LATE DAY 123

A black sedan pulls up to the hotel. A driver opens the
back door. Mendez, Siegel, and Chambers get out of the
car. They’re wearing suits.

They walk past a sign that reads: PRESS EVENT and
READING FOR ARGO. A couple of posters with the explosion-
in-space ARGO: A COSMIC CONFLAGRATION logo.


124 INT. BEVERLY HILTON - STARDUST LOUNGE - DUSK 124

Tony is on a balcony outside the ballroom. He passes the
bar on his way in.

Inside he sees Chambers, Lester and a PUBLICIST who
promptly moves Tony into a conversation with a REPORTER.

PUBLICIST
Janet from the Times -- You know
Johnny Chambers and Lester Siegel.
This is Kevin Harkins. He’ll tell
you a bit about the film --

We leave Mendez with the L.A. Times --

FOLLOWING Siegel --

Jack Kirby’s storyboard drawings throughout the room.
Four or five ACTORS IN SCI-FI COSTUMES.

WOMAN (O.S.)
Lester.

He turns around. NINA, a woman in her early sixties,
made up to look younger.

SIEGEL
You’re gorgeous. You’re in the
reading?


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 48.
124 CONTINUED: 124
NINA
I’m playing Serksi, the Galactic
Witch.

BACK TO: Mendez. A Publicist is guiding Mendez toward
an anemic-looking man --

PUBLICIST
(to Mendez,
introducing)
Rodd from Variety. Kevin Harkins.

BACK TO Siegel and Chambers, walking away from NINA.

SIEGEL
Keep that fucking space witch away
from me.

CHAMBERS
You know her?

SIEGEL
I was married to her.

Mendez, now talking to RODD, from VARIETY.

RODD
(to Mendez)
You said shooting in Iran with an
N?

MENDEZ
Tehran.

RODD
You ever watch the news?

Publicist hands Mendez a LASER GUN and a photographer
snaps his picture. Siegel walks by, downing one from the
bar. *


BACK TO SIEGEL AND CHAMBERS

A Hollywood Reporter writer talking to Siegel. The *
publicist stands by --

REPORTER
So the title refers to...

SIEGEL
The Argo, it’s the, y’know, the
thing --


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 49.
124 CONTINUED: (2) 124

Siegel takes a couple of canapés from a passing Waiter, *
starts eating. *

REPORTER
... Jason and the Golden Fleece,
or...?

SIEGEL
(chewing) *
-- the spaceship, it flies around
space, alllll over space --

REPORTER
Is it the Argonaut?

Siegel doesn’t know what he’s talking about. *

SIEGEL
No.

REPORTER
Then what does ‘Argo’ mean?

And finally Lester’s had it -- with his mouth full -- *

SIEGEL
It means Argo fuck yourself.

PUBLICIST
Let’s all take our places for the
reading.

And we SETTLE ON MENDEZ. He takes a glass of wine from a *
passing waiter’s tray, downs it, and puts it on another
WAITER’S tray. We FOLLOW that waiter THROUGH a swinging
door, INTO the kitchen and prep area, where a small black
and white TV plays...


125 ARCHIVE FOOTAGE 125

Tehran Mary speaks into a microphone.

TEHRAN MARY (V.O.)
(on TV)
As the Imam Khomeini said, we have
found no evidence that proves that
these people are diplomats.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller","Comedy"]

Summary At the Beverly Hilton during a press event for 'ARGO,' Mendez, Siegel, and Chambers engage with reporters. Siegel humorously struggles to explain the film's title, leading to a comedic outburst. Mendez discusses the film's shooting location with a Variety reporter, while Siegel reconnects with Nina, an actress from the reading, revealing their past relationship. The scene captures the light-hearted chaos of the event, contrasting the glamorous atmosphere with serious news footage playing on a nearby TV.
Strengths
  • Sharp dialogue
  • Effective blend of tension and humor
  • Engaging concept
Weaknesses
  • Lack of significant emotional impact
  • Limited character development

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to show the fabrication of the Argo cover story under pressure, and it lands well with sharp dialogue and a tense undercurrent. The biggest limiter is the fragmented structure that jumps between characters, diluting focus and emotional investment, which could be tightened by centering on Mendez's perspective.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of a fake movie as a cover for a hostage rescue is inherently strong, and this scene effectively dramatizes the absurdity of Hollywood PR against the backdrop of real danger. However, the scene doesn't deepen the concept beyond what's already established, relying on familiar satire of the industry.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the cover story's credibility, showing the press event and the team's performance. The shift to Tehran Mary's propaganda at the end reminds us of the stakes, but the scene's internal plot is thin, mostly a series of vignettes.

Originality: 8

The scene is original in its blend of Hollywood satire with real-world political tension. The 'Argo fuck yourself' line is a fresh take on the classic 'fuck yourself' joke, and the use of a fake movie as a cover is a unique premise.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Siegel's character shines with his blunt, clueless charm, and Mendez's quiet observation shows his adaptability. However, other characters like Chambers and the publicist are underdeveloped, and the scene doesn't deepen our understanding of Mendez's internal conflict.

Character Changes: 2

No significant character change occurs; Mendez remains composed, Siegel stays irreverent. The scene is more about maintaining the facade than evolving.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to navigate the social interactions and expectations of the Hollywood industry. This reflects his need to blend in and succeed in a high-pressure environment.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to promote the film Argo and manage the press event effectively. This reflects the immediate challenge of presenting a successful image to the public and media.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 5

The conflict is mostly external—the pressure to sell the lie—and internal for Mendez, who must maintain composure. The scene lacks a direct antagonist, and the tension is more situational than confrontational.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is not a single character but the situation itself—the need to maintain the lie under scrutiny. The reporter's questions and the publicist's pressure create obstacles, but they are not formidable adversaries.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high—the lives of the hostages—but the scene's focus on Hollywood banter temporarily obscures that. The final TV clip reminds us, but the tension is not sustained throughout.

Story Forward: 6

The scene moves the story forward by solidifying the cover story's public face, but it's a procedural step rather than a major plot turn. The final cut to Tehran Mary raises the stakes, but the scene itself is a plateau.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because of the unexpected humor, like Siegel's 'Argo fuck yourself,' and the sudden shift to Tehran Mary's propaganda, which reminds us of the stakes.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

There is a philosophical conflict between the protagonist's desire to maintain professionalism and the chaotic and unpredictable nature of the Hollywood industry. This challenges his values of integrity and authenticity.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5

The emotional impact is muted, as the scene prioritizes wit over feeling. The shift to Tehran Mary's propaganda adds a chill, but the audience isn't given enough time to connect with the characters' fear.

Dialogue: 7.5

The dialogue is sharp and memorable, especially Siegel's 'Argo fuck yourself' and his exchange with the reporter. However, some lines feel expository, and the scene's rapid cuts prevent any single conversation from building.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because of the witty dialogue and the underlying tension of the operation. The contrast between the frivolous press event and the serious mission keeps the reader interested, though the fragmented structure can be distracting.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing is brisk, with quick cuts that mirror the chaos of a press event. However, the rapid shifts can feel rushed, not allowing moments to breathe, which undermines the tension.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 7

The formatting is standard screenplay format, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of 'BACK TO' and 'FOLLOWING' is effective, but the rapid cuts might be confusing on the page.

Structure: 6

The scene uses a fragmented structure, cutting between characters and locations to create a sense of chaos. This fits the genre's tension but can feel disjointed, lacking a clear throughline.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the chaotic atmosphere of a Hollywood press event, which contrasts sharply with the serious undertones of the ongoing crisis in Iran. This juxtaposition adds depth to the narrative, highlighting the absurdity of the situation.
  • The dialogue is humorous and engaging, particularly Siegel's quip about the title of the film. However, the humor sometimes feels forced, especially when Siegel's frustration with the reporter's questions leads to a crude punchline. This could alienate some viewers who may find it off-putting.
  • The character interactions are lively, but the scene could benefit from clearer stakes. While the humor is entertaining, it may distract from the urgency of the situation. Establishing a stronger connection between the press event and the ongoing crisis could enhance the tension.
  • The visual elements, such as the sci-fi costumes and storyboards, are vivid and help to create a lively atmosphere. However, the scene could use more descriptive language to paint a clearer picture of the setting and the characters' emotions, allowing the audience to feel more immersed in the moment.
  • The transition to the archive footage of Tehran Mary is abrupt and could be smoother. A more gradual shift from the light-hearted press event to the serious news coverage would help maintain narrative flow and emphasize the contrast between the two worlds.
Suggestions
  • Consider refining the humor to ensure it aligns with the overall tone of the film. While comedic moments are valuable, they should not undermine the gravity of the situation.
  • Introduce a subplot or a character's personal stakes related to the press event that ties back to the Iranian crisis. This could create a more compelling narrative thread and enhance emotional engagement.
  • Enhance the visual descriptions of the setting and characters to create a more immersive experience for the audience. This could involve detailing the ambiance of the Stardust Lounge and the reactions of the characters to their surroundings.
  • Smooth out the transition to the archive footage by incorporating a line or two that reflects Mendez's thoughts or feelings as he moves from the press event to the serious news, creating a more cohesive narrative flow.
  • Consider adding a moment of reflection for Mendez after the press event, where he contemplates the absurdity of the Hollywood scene in light of the dire situation in Iran. This could deepen his character and provide a poignant contrast.



Scene 25 -  Tension and Uncertainty
126 INT. O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - NIGHT 126

O’Donnell, watching the same footage on the News.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 50.
126 CONTINUED: 126
TEHRAN MARY (V.O.)
(on TV)
All evidence proves that these
people are spies.

The ARRAY OF VIDEO CAMERAS on tripods recording her.

NINA (V.O.)
(as Serksi)
Our world has changed. *


127 INT. BEVERLY HILTON HOTEL - STARDUST LOUNGE - DUSK 127

The reading of Argo is happening around a table.

PRINCESS ALEPPA
The fire of hope stopped burning
in this galaxy long ago.

A HANDSOME LEAD, ACHILLES CRUX, says his line.

ACHILLES CRUX
Fire the thrusters!! *


128 INT. AROUND THE CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE (TEHRAN) 128
- NIGHT

MARK LIJEK
-- fifty-seven -- fifty-eight --

Mark counts out as Lee Schatz does push-ups. Bob Anders
watches a television in the b.g., subtitled in Farsi.

JIMMY CARTER (V.O.)
(on TV)
We will not yield to international
terror or to blackmail.


129-130 OMITTED 129-130


131 INT. MUSHROOM INN (AMERICAN EMBASSY, TEHRAN) - NIGHT 131

Five of the EMBASSY HOSTAGES -- men from their 20s to
their 50s -- are roused from their sleeping mats by
Komiteh. Hoods are put over their heads.

PRINCESS ALEPPA (V.O.)
The old ways are lost, but there
is still hope.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 51.
131 CONTINUED: 131

TEHRAN MARY (V.O.)
We will begin the trials and will
carry out the sentences.

This MONTAGE: Voice upon voice, image upon image, landing
on television sets.


132 OMITTED 132
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller","Sci-Fi"]

Summary The scene unfolds in O'Donnell's office, where he watches news reports labeling individuals as spies. It transitions to the Stardust Lounge at the Beverly Hilton, where a reading of 'Argo' takes place, featuring Princess Aleppa and Achilles Crux. Meanwhile, at the Canadian Ambassador's residence in Tehran, Mark Lijek and Lee Schatz exercise while Bob Anders watches a broadcast of Jimmy Carter's defiant message against terror. The tension escalates at the Mushroom Inn, where five embassy hostages are abruptly awakened by the Komiteh, who hood them, symbolizing the imminent danger they face. The scene captures the stark contrast between the calm reading and the oppressive atmosphere surrounding the hostages, leaving their fate uncertain.
Strengths
  • Effective tension-building
  • Multi-dimensional storytelling
  • Engaging dialogue
Weaknesses
  • Lack of significant character development
  • Some transitions could be smoother

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene's primary job is to escalate the global and personal stakes through a montage of parallel crises, which it does effectively by cross-cutting between the Hollywood reading, the Tehran hostages, and political broadcasts. The biggest limiter is the fragmented structure—the rapid shifts between locations and voices can feel disjointed, reducing emotional immersion; a tighter focus on one or two threads would strengthen impact.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of juxtaposing a fake movie reading with real hostage crisis footage is strong and thematically resonant, but the execution in this scene feels scattered, diluting the cleverness.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the parallel storylines (the Argo cover and the hostage situation) but does so through a montage that lacks clear causal progression, making it feel more like a status update than a plot driver.

Originality: 6.5

The juxtaposition of a fake movie reading with real hostage footage is original, but the montage technique is familiar; the dialogue is generic.


Character Development

Characters: 4

Characters are mostly absent or reduced to voices (Tehran Mary, Princess Aleppa, hostages); no individual character development occurs, though the collective tension is palpable.

Character Changes: 1

No character undergoes change in this scene; it is a transitional montage.

Internal Goal: 3

The protagonist's internal goal is to navigate the changing world and maintain hope in the face of adversity. This reflects their deeper need for resilience and belief in a better future.

External Goal: 5

The protagonist's external goal is to survive and navigate the political turmoil and threats in their environment.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 5

Conflict is diffuse—between the hostages and their captors, between the fake movie and real danger, but no direct confrontation occurs in this scene.

Opposition: 5

Opposition is diffuse—the Iranian regime, time, and the need for secrecy—but no direct antagonist appears in this scene.

High Stakes: 7.5

Stakes are high—hostages face trials and execution, the Argo plan is in motion—but the scene's fragmentation slightly undercuts the urgency.

Story Forward: 6

The scene moves the story forward by showing the global context and the parallel progress of the Argo reading, but the montage format makes the forward momentum feel incremental.

Unpredictability: 6

This scene is unpredictable because the montage jumps between disparate locations and voices, keeping the viewer off-balance, though the overall trajectory is expected.

Philosophical Conflict: 5

The philosophical conflict is between the old ways and the new reality, as characters struggle to adapt and find hope in a changing world.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5.5

The montage creates a sense of dread and urgency, but the rapid cuts prevent deep emotional connection to any single character or moment.

Dialogue: 5

Dialogue is sparse and functional, serving as voiceover or script lines; it conveys theme but lacks naturalistic exchange or character depth.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because the rapid cross-cutting between the fake movie reading and real hostage danger creates a sense of mounting tension and irony.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the quick cuts mirror the chaotic global response, but the lack of a sustained beat reduces emotional weight.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 7

Formatting is standard and clear, with proper scene headings and transitions, though the montage is indicated by repeated 'V.O.' and 'CONTINUED' which is functional.

Structure: 5.5

The structure is a montage, which suits the genre's need to show parallel tensions, but the transitions are abrupt and lack a clear narrative spine.


Critique
  • The scene effectively utilizes a montage format to juxtapose the various locations and characters, creating a sense of urgency and tension. However, the transitions between the different settings could be smoother to enhance the flow of the narrative. The abrupt shifts may confuse the audience, making it difficult to follow the emotional stakes of each character involved.
  • The use of voiceovers from Tehran Mary and Princess Aleppa adds a layer of commentary on the unfolding events, but their lines could be more impactful if they were tied more closely to the visuals. For instance, instead of simply stating that 'these people are spies,' it would be more engaging to show specific actions or reactions from the characters that illustrate this accusation, thereby heightening the stakes.
  • The dialogue from the characters in the reading of 'Argo' feels somewhat disconnected from the main narrative. While it serves to highlight the theme of lost hope, it might benefit from a stronger connection to the characters' current predicaments. Integrating lines that reflect their fears or aspirations in relation to the hostage situation could create a more cohesive emotional experience.
  • The scene lacks a clear emotional anchor. While we see various characters in distressing situations, there is no central character whose perspective we can follow to ground the audience's emotional response. Establishing a focal character, perhaps one of the hostages or Mendez, could help the audience connect more deeply with the unfolding drama.
  • The pacing of the scene feels uneven. The rapid transitions between the different locations and the montage style create a sense of chaos, but this could be counterproductive if the audience is unable to process the information being presented. Slowing down certain moments to allow for character reactions or emotional beats could enhance the overall impact.
Suggestions
  • Consider refining the transitions between scenes to create a more fluid narrative flow. This could involve using visual motifs or thematic elements that connect the different locations and characters more seamlessly.
  • Enhance the voiceover dialogue by incorporating specific visual cues or actions that reflect the accusations being made. This will help ground the audience in the reality of the situation and increase the emotional stakes.
  • Integrate the dialogue from the reading of 'Argo' more closely with the main narrative. Consider having characters express their fears or hopes in relation to the hostage situation, making the reading feel more relevant to the current events.
  • Establish a central character whose perspective can guide the audience through the chaos. This character could serve as an emotional anchor, allowing viewers to connect more deeply with the unfolding drama.
  • Adjust the pacing of the scene to allow for moments of reflection or emotional resonance. Slowing down key moments can help the audience process the gravity of the situation and enhance the overall impact of the scene.



Scene 26 -  Mock Execution and Mundane Moments
133 INT. AMERICAN EMBASSY (TEHRAN) - BASEMENT - NIGHT 133

The four hostages, hoods on their heads, placed against
the wall. HOSTAGE TAKERS raise their guns at the men.

GREEN JACKET PRINCESS ALEPPA (V.O.)
(Farsi) If we find his ship, we
Fire! will find our chance.
Aboard the Argo lies my
hope. My hero. My *
husband.

They pull their triggers. But nothing happens. It’s a
mock execution (actually occurred -- February 5, 1980).
The five hostages, after a beat, either scream or
collapse.


134 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - NIGHT 134

Joe Stafford, watching Khomeini on TV, to Bob Anders --

JOE STAFFORD
(realizing the
gravity of it)
He’s marginalized the moderates *
now.

MARK LIJEK
A hundred and twelve --


134A INT. BEVERLY HILTON - DUSK 134A

NESTOR THE DROID
We’re hit. We’ll never clear the *
Perseus Range!

We see the ROW OF PRESS PEOPLE. Not unlike the ones *
watching Tehran Mary.
ARGO - Final 52.


134B INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - NIGHT 134B

Lee Schatz collapses from his push-ups. Breathing
heavily.

MARK LIJEK
And we have a new champion.

Bob Anders looks up from Khomeini, who keeps talking in
the b.g., and applauds.


134C OMITTED 134C *


134D INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - NIGHT 134D

SAHAR quietly cleans a table. She’s watching the
Houseguests.

CHAMBERS (V.O.)
‘Crane down over the battlefield
and hold there...’
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller","Historical"]

Summary In the basement of the American Embassy in Tehran, hostages face a mock execution orchestrated by the armed captor known as Green Jacket, who hints at hope connected to a ship called the Argo. As the guns fail to fire, the hostages react with fear and desperation. Meanwhile, at the Canadian Ambassador's residence, Joe Stafford and Mark Lijek discuss the implications of Khomeini's speech, highlighting the political tension. The scene contrasts the life-threatening situation of the hostages with mundane activities among the houseguests, culminating in Sahar quietly observing the interactions.
Strengths
  • Intense tension
  • Emotional depth
  • Compelling dialogue
Weaknesses
  • Potential for confusion with multiple locations and characters

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene's primary job is to escalate the life-or-death stakes for the hostages while cross-cutting with the rescue team's mounting pressure, which it does effectively through the visceral mock execution and the fragmented, anxious dialogue. The biggest limiter is the heavy reliance on voiceover and intercutting that can feel disjointed, pulling focus from the immediate emotional impact of the hostages' ordeal.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of interweaving a real-life mock execution with the fictional film's voiceover and the rescue team's parallel anxieties is strong, but the execution feels slightly scattered, diluting the impact of each thread.

Plot: 6.5

The plot advances the hostage crisis by showing a key historical event (the mock execution) and the rescue team's growing awareness of the danger, but the fragmented structure slows narrative momentum.

Originality: 6.5

The use of a fictional film's voiceover to comment on real events is an original touch, but the cross-cutting structure is familiar in historical thrillers.


Character Development

Characters: 5

The hostages are largely anonymous under hoods, reducing individual characterization; the Canadian residence characters show brief reactions but lack depth in this snippet.

Character Changes: 2

No clear character change occurs; the hostages remain passive, and the rescue team's reactions are brief and do not indicate transformation.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is likely survival and maintaining hope in a dire situation. The mock execution and the mention of finding hope in her husband aboard the Argo reflect her deeper needs for safety and connection.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to survive the hostage situation and potentially find a way to escape. The immediate challenge they face is the threat of execution by the hostage takers.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8

The central conflict is life-or-death for the hostages, but the intercutting diffuses tension; the mock execution itself is a powerful moment of conflict.

Opposition: 7

The opposition is the hostage takers, who are faceless and menacing, but their threat is clear and immediate; the scene does not develop their motivations.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are extremely high—the hostages face execution—but the intercutting and voiceover occasionally undercut the immediacy.

Story Forward: 6

The scene moves the story forward by depicting a key historical event and showing the rescue team's awareness of escalating danger, but the fragmented structure slows progress.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because the mock execution is a real historical event that surprises viewers unfamiliar with it, and the intercutting with the fictional film voiceover adds an unexpected layer.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict in this scene could be the clash between life and death, hope and despair. The protagonist's belief in finding hope in her husband contrasts with the imminent danger of the mock execution.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The mock execution is emotionally harrowing, but the rapid cuts to other locations and voiceover reduce sustained emotional engagement.

Dialogue: 5.5

Dialogue is sparse and functional, with the most memorable lines coming from the fictional film's voiceover, which adds thematic weight but feels disconnected from the real characters.

Engagement: 7.5

This scene is engaging because the mock execution is a visceral, high-stakes moment that immediately grabs attention, and the cross-cutting creates a sense of parallel urgency.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the rapid cuts between locations create a breathless rhythm, but the voiceover and fragmented dialogue can feel jarring and disrupt flow.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 7

Formatting is standard and clear, with proper scene headings and action lines, though the voiceover integration could be more seamless.

Structure: 6

The structure uses cross-cutting between three locations, which is appropriate for a thriller but feels uneven; the mock execution is the climax, but the other threads lack their own mini-arcs.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension through the mock execution, which serves as a powerful reminder of the hostages' precarious situation. However, the transition between the mock execution and the subsequent scenes could be smoother to maintain the emotional weight.
  • The use of voiceover from Princess Aleppa adds a layer of depth, connecting the personal stakes of the characters to the broader political context. However, the dialogue could be more impactful if it were more concise and focused on the emotional resonance of her words.
  • The juxtaposition of the hostages' fear with the mundane activities at the Canadian Ambassador's residence creates a stark contrast that highlights the tension of the situation. However, the pacing feels uneven, as the shift from the intense mock execution to the lighter moments with Lee Schatz and Mark Lijek could be better balanced to maintain the audience's emotional engagement.
  • The dialogue in the Canadian Ambassador's residence, particularly Joe Stafford's realization about Khomeini, is insightful but could benefit from more dramatic weight. It feels somewhat disconnected from the intensity of the previous scene, which may dilute the overall impact.
  • The visual elements, such as the hoods over the hostages' heads and the physicality of their fear, are strong, but the scene could benefit from more sensory details to immerse the audience further into the atmosphere of dread and uncertainty.
Suggestions
  • Consider tightening the voiceover from Princess Aleppa to focus on the emotional stakes rather than broader implications, making it more personal and poignant.
  • Enhance the transition between the mock execution and the subsequent scenes by using a visual or auditory cue that maintains the tension, such as a lingering sound or a close-up shot of the hostages' expressions.
  • Balance the pacing by either extending the tension in the aftermath of the mock execution or by introducing the lighter moments in the Canadian Ambassador's residence more gradually, allowing the audience to process the gravity of the previous scene.
  • Strengthen the dialogue in the Canadian Ambassador's residence by incorporating more emotional reactions from the characters, reflecting their fear and uncertainty in response to the news about Khomeini.
  • Add more sensory details to the scene, such as the sounds of the environment, the physical sensations of fear, or the visual chaos of the surroundings, to create a more immersive experience for the audience.



Scene 27 -  Navigating Tensions in Hollywood
135 INT. BEVERLY HILTON HOTEL - NIGHT 135

Chambers, at the table, sitting next to Siegel. Mendez
sits off to the side.

CHAMBERS
(reading stage
directions)
‘... on a single red flower
growing from the ruins of the
starship in the desert. Fade to
black. The End.’

APPLAUSE.


136 OMITTED 136 *


136A OMITTED 136A *


137 INT. TONY’S HOTEL ROOM - EVENING 137

Mendez, lying on his bed with the phone. Near him, a copy *
of VARIETY turned to a full-page ad. (*This is real --
Variety): STUDIO SIX PRODUCTIONS PRESENTS: ARGO: A
COSMIC CONFLAGRATION. *
ARGO - Final 53.


138 INT. NEAR O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - MORNING 138

O’Donnell comes from the kitchen to find ENGELL waiting.
He hands O’Donnell a copy of Variety. “ARGO TO BEGIN
SHOOTING IN MARCH. Oscar-winner Chambers, Siegel Among
Producers.”

And there is a photo of Mendez from the press event.
Smiling and holding a laser gun.


139 INT. TONY’S HOTEL ROOM - MORNING 139

Mendez, seeing red, pacing --

MENDEZ
Why’d he do it?

O’DONNELL (V.O.)
He did it ‘cause he did it.

INTERCUT WITH:


140 INT. O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - MORNING 140

O’DONNELL
He saw a covert intelligence
officer saying ‘cheese’ with R2-
D2. They’re going with the
teachers.

MENDEZ
It’s a death sentence, Jack.

O’DONNELL
Well then it’s on Engell.
(a beat)
It’s done, Tony. Wash your hands.

He hangs up. Mendez, looking out the hotel window at
L.A.


141 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - MORNING 141

While Tony packs a bag of papers from his desk.

SIEGEL
I made thirty pictures. Half of
them the pricks upstairs tried to
shut me down.

Mendez finishes packing, zips up the bag.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 54.
141 CONTINUED: 141

SIEGEL
My ass is staying right here and
running a movie company.

Mendez stops zipping as Siegel takes a bottle of Jack and
three shot glasses from a drawer.

SIEGEL
(pours)
Ey. The first shot of the
picture.

Lester gives glasses to each of them. Chambers holds up
his glass.

CHAMBERS
Argo fuck yourself.

They raise to that.

MENDEZ AND SIEGEL
Argo fuck yourself.

They each do a shot. Then Tony picks up his bag and
heads out. Before he goes --

MENDEZ
How’d you always get around the
pricks upstairs?

SIEGEL
There’s always another prick one
floor higher up.
Genres: ["Drama","Comedy"]

Summary In a tense scene set at the Beverly Hilton Hotel, Chambers celebrates the completion of his screenplay, receiving applause. Meanwhile, Mendez grapples with frustration and concern over the risky production of 'Argo: A Cosmic Conflagration.' O'Donnell dismisses Mendez's worries, insisting the film will proceed. At the Argo production office, Siegel shares his industry experiences while pouring whiskey for himself, Mendez, and Chambers, leading to a toast of 'Argo fuck yourself.' The scene concludes with Mendez leaving, still anxious about the challenges ahead.
Strengths
  • Strong character development
  • Engaging dialogue
  • Effective blend of tension and humor
Weaknesses
  • Some dialogue may be too on-the-nose
  • Lack of visual action

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene's primary job is to transition from the plan's collapse to the team's defiant solidarity, and it lands that emotional beat with a memorable, character-defining toast. The biggest limiter is that the scene is largely transitional and expository—the conflict is resolved off-screen (Engell's decision) and the emotional payoff relies on a single line, making the middle section feel like a bridge rather than a dramatic peak.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of a fake movie production as a CIA cover is inherently strong, and this scene shows the fallout when the cover is blown. The concept is clear and well-integrated, but the scene doesn't introduce new conceptual elements.

Plot: 6

The plot advances by showing the plan's apparent failure (Engell choosing the teachers) and then the team's decision to proceed anyway. The plot is clear but feels like a necessary step rather than a surprising turn.

Originality: 7

The scene is original in its use of a darkly humorous toast as a ritual of defiance, and the blend of CIA procedural with Hollywood cynicism is fresh. The dialogue feels authentic to the characters.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Mendez's frustration and resignation are clear, and Siegel's world-weary defiance is well-drawn. Chambers provides a quiet, supportive presence. The toast reveals their bond and shared dark humor, but the characters don't change significantly in this scene.

Character Changes: 3

Mendez moves from anger to resigned acceptance, but the change is subtle. Siegel and Chambers remain consistent. No major character transformation occurs.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to understand why a certain action was taken and to come to terms with the consequences of that action. This reflects his need for clarity and his fear of the potential danger he and others may face.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to navigate the challenges of the film industry and protect his team from potential harm. This reflects the immediate circumstances and obstacles he is facing in his professional life.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 5

The primary conflict is internal (Mendez's frustration vs. acceptance) and external (the CIA's decision vs. the team's desire to proceed). The conflict is resolved quickly and off-screen, reducing tension.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is bureaucratic (Engell, the 'pricks upstairs') rather than a direct antagonist. The opposition is faceless and distant, reducing immediate tension.

High Stakes: 6

The stakes are life-or-death for the hostages, but the scene focuses on the bureaucratic and emotional fallout rather than immediate danger. The stakes feel somewhat abstracted.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by confirming the plan's apparent failure and then showing the team's decision to continue anyway, setting up the next phase of the operation.

Unpredictability: 4

This scene is somewhat predictable: the plan fails, the team regroups. The toast is a small surprise, but the overall trajectory is expected.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the protagonist's moral dilemma of whether to proceed with a risky mission for the greater good or prioritize the safety of his team. This challenges his beliefs about duty and sacrifice.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6.5

The emotional impact comes from the sense of defeat followed by defiant camaraderie. The toast is a strong emotional beat, but the scene's middle section is more procedural than emotional.

Dialogue: 7.5

The dialogue is sharp and efficient, with O'Donnell's fatalistic 'He did it 'cause he did it' and Siegel's 'There's always another prick one floor higher up' adding texture. The toast line is iconic. However, some lines are purely expository.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because the emotional stakes are clear and the dialogue is sharp, but the middle section (packing, O'Donnell's call) is somewhat slow and procedural, reducing momentum.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the slow, resigned middle section builds to the quick, punchy toast, creating a satisfying emotional release. However, the middle section could be tighter.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting is professional and clear, with proper scene headings, character cues, and parentheticals. The use of INTERCUT and V.O. is appropriate.

Structure: 7

The scene uses a three-part structure: defeat (phone call), acceptance (packing), and defiant bonding (toast). The structure is clear and effective for a transitional scene.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the tension and stakes involved in the production of 'Argo,' particularly through Mendez's frustration with the publicity surrounding the film. However, the transition from the applause at the press event to Mendez's reaction feels abrupt. A smoother transition could enhance the emotional impact of Mendez's concerns about the film's portrayal of the operation.
  • The dialogue between Mendez and O'Donnell is functional but lacks emotional depth. While it conveys the urgency of the situation, it could benefit from more subtext or personal stakes for Mendez. This would help the audience connect with his character on a deeper level, understanding not just the professional implications but also the personal risks involved.
  • The humor in Siegel's dialogue adds a light-hearted touch to an otherwise tense narrative, but it risks undermining the gravity of the situation. Balancing humor with the seriousness of the stakes is crucial; consider how the comedic elements can serve to highlight the tension rather than distract from it.
  • The visual elements, such as Mendez lying on his bed with the phone and the ad in Variety, are effective in establishing the setting and mood. However, more descriptive language could enhance the imagery, allowing the audience to visualize the scene more vividly. For instance, describing the clutter in Mendez's hotel room or the expressions on the characters' faces could add depth.
  • The ending of the scene, with Mendez's line about the 'pricks upstairs,' feels somewhat clichéd. While it fits Siegel's character, it could be more original or nuanced to leave a stronger impression. Consider exploring a more unique way for Mendez to express his frustration that aligns with his character's journey.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief moment of reflection for Mendez after the applause, allowing him to process the implications of the film's production and how it relates to the real-life stakes of the hostages.
  • Enhance the dialogue between Mendez and O'Donnell by incorporating more emotional weight, perhaps by having Mendez express personal fears or doubts about the operation's success and the safety of the hostages.
  • Maintain the humor but ensure it serves to heighten the tension rather than diminish it. Perhaps Siegel could make a joke that reflects the absurdity of the situation while still acknowledging the seriousness of their mission.
  • Use more descriptive language to paint a vivid picture of the hotel room and the characters' emotions. This could involve sensory details that immerse the audience in the scene.
  • Revise Mendez's final line to be more unique or reflective of his character's journey, perhaps by incorporating a metaphor or a more personal expression of his frustration with the situation.



Scene 28 -  The Absurd Proposal
142 EXT. STATE DEPARTMENT - DAY 142

Mendez approaches the iconic building.


143 INT. STATE DEPARTMENT LOBBY - DAY 143

Mendez catches up with Jack on the second level of the
lobby, opposite the row of flags.

O’DONNELL
What did you do to get the *
meeting?

MENDEZ *
I used your name. *

Jack looks to Tony.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 55.
143 CONTINUED: 143

MENDEZ
You can forget about that time-
share in Ocean City, Jack.


144 INT. STATE DEPARTMENT - SEVENTH FLOOR - RECEPTION ROOM - 144
DAY

Tony and O’Donnell sit in the waiting area, across from a
SECRETARY. They look down the hall to see:

CIA DIRECTOR ADMIRAL STANSFIELD TURNER, 50s, and
SECRETARY OF STATE CYRUS VANCE walk down the hall
together, discussing something in hushed tones.

O’DONNELL
(under his breath)
Brace yourself. It’s like talking
to those two old fucks on ‘The
Muppets.’

Vance and Turner enter the room without recognizing them.
Mendez and O’Donnell stand up.


145 INT. STATE DEPARTMENT - SEVENTH FLOOR OFFICE - ANGLE - 145
DAY

A concept drawing from Argo.

TURNER (O.S.)
Aliens and robots.

MENDEZ (O.S.)
Yes, sir.


ANOTHER ANGLE

The four men are gathered in the back of Vance’s office,
around a table. Over them we see the STATE DEPARTMENT
EMBLEM.

TURNER is looking at the storyboard.

TURNER
You’re telling me there’s a movie
office in Hollywood right now
that’s funded by the Central
Intelligence Agency.

MENDEZ
Yes, sir.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 56.
145 CONTINUED: 145

VANCE
What’s wrong with the bikes again?

Vance, with a copy of Comics Week. THE NEXT STAR WARS?
Next to it, a photograph from the press event: Mendez
holding a laser gun. CANADIAN EPIC WILL BE FILMED IN THE
MIDDLE EAST.

TURNER O’DONNELL
... you think this -- We tried to get the message
upstairs --

TURNER
-- this is more plausible than
teachers?

O’DONNELL
One, there are no foreign teachers
in Iran anymore --

MENDEZ
-- two, we think everybody knows
Hollywood people. And everybody
thinks they would shoot during
Stalingrad with Pol Pot directing
if it’d sell tickets.
(beat)
There are only bad options. It’s
about finding the best one.

TURNER
You don’t have a better bad idea
than this?

O’DONNELL
This is the best bad idea we have,
sir. By far.

Vance and Turner exchange looks.

TURNER *
(to Mendez)
The United States government just
sanctioned your science fiction
movie.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary Mendez arrives at the State Department, using O'Donnell's name to secure a meeting with CIA Director Turner and Secretary of State Vance. In a tense yet darkly humorous discussion, Mendez presents a CIA-funded movie concept as a cover for a rescue operation. Despite initial skepticism, Turner ultimately acknowledges the plan as the best available option, leading to the government's official sanctioning of the project.
Strengths
  • Tension-filled dialogue
  • Strong character dynamics
  • Effective plot progression
Weaknesses
  • Limited emotional impact
  • Lack of significant character changes

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

This scene's primary job is to secure official approval for the Argo plan, and it lands that beat with crisp, witty dialogue and a clear escalation of stakes. The single biggest limiter is the lack of any real opposition or dramatic friction—the approval comes too easily, which undercuts the tension that the rest of the script has built; adding a moment of doubt or a near-miss would lift the score.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of a government-sanctioned fake movie is inherently strong and well-executed here, but it's a concept we've already seen in earlier scenes, so it doesn't feel as fresh as it could.

Plot: 7

The plot moves forward efficiently—Mendez and O'Donnell get the green light—but the scene is mostly a formality, with no new obstacles or twists.

Originality: 7

The scene is original in its premise—a government sanctioning a fake movie—but the execution is familiar, with standard bureaucratic dialogue and a predictable outcome.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Mendez and O'Donnell are consistent and well-drawn, but Turner and Vance are thinly sketched, serving more as plot devices than characters.

Character Changes: 2

Mendez doesn't change significantly here; he's already committed. The change is more in the situation—the plan becomes sanctioned.

Internal Goal: 6

Mendez's internal goal is to convince the CIA Director and Secretary of State of the viability of the plan to use a fake movie as a cover for rescuing hostages in Iran. This reflects his desire to prove his worth and expertise in a high-stakes situation.

External Goal: 9

Mendez's external goal is to gain approval and support for the operation from the government officials. This reflects the immediate challenge of securing resources and authorization for the mission.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 4

The conflict is mostly internal and bureaucratic—the need to convince superiors—but there's no direct opposition or pushback, so the tension is low.

Opposition: 3

The opposition is minimal—Turner and Vance are skeptical but quickly won over, so there's no real resistance to Mendez's plan.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high—the lives of six hostages—but the scene doesn't emphasize the danger; it's more about bureaucratic approval.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by securing the government's approval, which is a crucial step, but it's a procedural beat rather than a dramatic one.

Unpredictability: 5

The scene is somewhat predictable—we know the plan will likely be approved—but the specific dialogue and the Muppets reference add a touch of unpredictability.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the idea of using deception and Hollywood as tools for a serious political operation. This challenges traditional notions of diplomacy and national security.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5

The emotional impact is muted; the scene is more intellectual than visceral, though there's a subtle thrill in seeing the plan get official approval.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue is sharp and characterful, especially O'Donnell's Muppets line and Mendez's 'best bad idea' speech, but some exchanges feel a bit on-the-nose.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because it delivers a satisfying payoff to the setup, with witty dialogue and a sense of progress, but it lacks the high-octane tension of other scenes.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is brisk and efficient, moving from the lobby to the office to the approval without dragging, though the lack of conflict makes it feel a bit flat.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines, though the use of 'O.S.' and 'CONTINUED' is standard and unobtrusive.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic 'pitch' structure: setup, presentation, and approval, with a clear beginning, middle, and end. It's efficient but lacks a twist or reversal.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the tension and absurdity of the situation, showcasing the contrast between the serious nature of the hostage crisis and the ridiculousness of the CIA's plan to use a science fiction movie as a cover. However, the dialogue could benefit from more distinct character voices to enhance the individuality of Mendez, O'Donnell, Turner, and Vance. Each character should have a unique way of speaking that reflects their personality and position.
  • The humor introduced through O'Donnell's comment about Vance and Turner being like 'those two old fucks on ‘The Muppets’' is a nice touch, but it could be expanded upon. More comedic banter or light-hearted exchanges could help to break the tension and provide a moment of levity in an otherwise serious context. This would also serve to deepen the camaraderie between Mendez and O'Donnell.
  • The stakes of the meeting are somewhat unclear. While the audience understands the gravity of the situation, the scene could benefit from a clearer articulation of what is at risk if the plan fails. Adding a line or two that emphasizes the potential consequences for the hostages could heighten the tension and urgency of the scene.
  • The transition from the lobby to the meeting room feels a bit abrupt. A brief moment of reflection or a visual cue that emphasizes the weight of the moment could enhance the emotional impact. For example, a close-up of Mendez's face as he prepares to present his plan could convey his anxiety and determination.
  • The dialogue regarding the plausibility of the plan is engaging, but it could be more dynamic. Consider incorporating interruptions or overlapping dialogue to reflect the chaotic nature of the discussion. This would create a more realistic and engaging conversation, allowing the characters' personalities to shine through.
Suggestions
  • Enhance character differentiation by giving each character a distinct voice and manner of speaking. This will help the audience connect with them on a deeper level.
  • Expand on the humor in the scene by including more light-hearted exchanges between Mendez and O'Donnell, which can serve to strengthen their relationship and provide comic relief.
  • Clarify the stakes of the meeting by adding dialogue that emphasizes the potential consequences for the hostages if the plan fails, thereby increasing the tension.
  • Include a moment of reflection or a visual cue before the transition to the meeting room to emphasize the weight of the moment and Mendez's emotional state.
  • Incorporate interruptions or overlapping dialogue during the discussion about the plan's plausibility to create a more dynamic and engaging conversation.



Scene 29 -  The Weight of Departure
146 INT. MENDEZ’S APARTMENT - BEDROOM - NIGHT 146

Mendez is packing to go. He packs a passport with his
photo and the name KEVIN COSTA HARKINS. He takes off his
wedding band and places it with care -- almost with
ceremony -- in a spot on his dresser.
ARGO - Final 57.


147 OMITTED 147


148 INT. O’DONNELL’S CAR - NIGHT 148

O’Donnell is driving, Mendez in the passenger seat. They
just sit there for a moment. In the car.

O’DONNELL
I’m required to remind you that if
you’re detained, the agency will
not claim you.

MENDEZ
Barely claim me as it is.

O’DONNELL
Your ‘In Case Of’s’ good?

MENDEZ
Just Christine.

They don’t need to look at one another. A shared
understanding.

MENDEZ *
Guess I should have brought some
books to read in prison.

O’DONNELL
Nah. They’ll kill you long before
prison.

Tony gets out of the car, pulls his bags from the back
seat, and slams the door. Headed into the airport.


149 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - DUSK 149

Siegel is standing in the office watching Jimmy Carter
speak mournfully on TV, Chambers watching from a desk
behind him.

SIEGEL
Bad news, bad news, even when it’s
good news it’s bad news. Christ.
(a phone starts
ringing)
John Wayne’s in the ground six
months and this is what’s left of *
America. *




(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 58.
149 CONTINUED: 149

CHAMBERS
(picking up the
phone)
Studio Six.

INTERCUT WITH:


150 INT. DULLES AIRPORT - NIGHT 150

MENDEZ
We’ve got a green light.

Chambers gives Siegel a thumbs-up.

MENDEZ
Keep the office running till you
hear otherwise.
(this means thank *
you)
Argo fuck yourself.


151 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - DUSK 151

CHAMBERS
Argo fuck yourself.


152 OMITTED 152 *


153 INT. CHRISTINE’S HOUSE - NIGHT 153

The phone in the living room rings. No one is home.


154 INT. DULLES AIRPORT - NIGHT 154

Mendez hangs up the airport pay phone.

CUT TO:
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary Mendez prepares for a perilous mission, packing his passport and wedding band while reflecting on the risks involved. In a car with O'Donnell, they share a moment of camaraderie, with O'Donnell warning Mendez about the agency's lack of support if he is detained. Mendez uses dark humor to cope with the gravity of his situation. Meanwhile, in the Argo production office, Siegel watches a somber news broadcast as Chambers receives a call from Mendez, confirming the operation's green light. The scene captures Mendez's internal conflict and the tension surrounding his dangerous undertaking.
Strengths
  • Authentic dialogue
  • Strong emotional impact
  • Character development
Weaknesses
  • Limited external conflict
  • Some repetitive dialogue

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene effectively conveys the emotional weight of Mendez's departure and the high stakes of the mission through quiet, character-driven moments. However, the cross-cutting to the production office and Christine's empty house slightly dilutes the focus and momentum, making the scene feel a bit fragmented.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of a covert exfiltration disguised as a film production is inherently strong, and this scene focuses on the personal cost and final preparations, which grounds the high-concept premise in human reality.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the mission from planning to execution (the 'green light'), but the scene is more about emotional closure than plot mechanics, which is appropriate for this juncture.

Originality: 7

The scene is original in its use of the 'Argo fuck yourself' as a recurring, meaningful code, and in the quiet, ritualistic removal of the wedding band as a symbol of commitment. The dialogue feels authentic to the characters and the period.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Mendez's character is deepened through his quiet ritual (removing his ring) and his terse, meaningful exchange with O'Donnell. The brief glimpses of Chambers and Siegel maintain their established personas.

Character Changes: 6

Mendez undergoes a subtle but significant change: he fully commits to the mission by severing a personal tie (his wedding band) and accepting the risk of not being claimed by the agency.

Internal Goal: 7

Mendez's internal goal in this scene is to maintain his composure and resolve in the face of imminent danger and uncertainty. It reflects his deeper need for validation, acceptance, and redemption.

External Goal: 8

Mendez's external goal is to successfully execute the plan to rescue the hostages in Iran and ensure their safe return to the United States. It reflects the immediate circumstances and challenges he's facing as a CIA operative.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6

The primary conflict is internal (Mendez's personal sacrifice vs. his duty) and external (the looming danger of the mission). The tension is quiet but palpable.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is largely abstract—the Iranian government, the risk of detention, the agency's policy of non-claim. The scene focuses more on internal opposition (Mendez's own doubts) than on a tangible antagonist.

High Stakes: 8

The stakes are explicitly stated: if detained, the agency will not claim him. The empty house and the finality of the ring removal underscore the personal cost.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by giving the mission the official go-ahead and showing Mendez's departure, transitioning from preparation to active execution.

Unpredictability: 6

This scene is unpredictable in its emotional beats—the ritual of removing the wedding ring and the final 'Argo fuck yourself' exchange feel earned but not telegraphed, adding a layer of surprise to the familiar spy-genre departure.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the clash between personal loyalty and professional duty. Mendez must balance his commitment to his family, particularly his wife Christine, with his responsibilities as a covert operative working for the CIA.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The scene generates a strong sense of melancholy and resolve, particularly through the wedding band ritual and the final phone call to an empty house.

Dialogue: 7.5

The dialogue is sparse and loaded with subtext, particularly the 'Argo fuck yourself' exchange, which serves as both a code and a poignant farewell. O'Donnell's lines are coldly professional yet caring.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because of the emotional weight carried by small actions and sparse dialogue, creating a sense of impending danger and personal sacrifice that draws the reader in.

Pacing: 7

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it alternates between slow, deliberate moments (packing, the car ride) and a quickening rhythm as Mendez makes the phone call and departs, mirroring his internal shift from hesitation to action.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and concise action lines. The use of parentheticals and intercuts is standard and effective.

Structure: 6.5

The scene uses a classic 'calm before the storm' structure, with quiet, intimate moments (packing, car ride) building to the decisive action (the phone call, the green light). The cross-cutting to other locations provides context but slightly disrupts the intimate focus.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the tension and gravity of Mendez's situation as he prepares for a dangerous mission. The emotional weight of packing his passport and wedding band adds depth to his character, showcasing his personal sacrifices. However, the dialogue between Mendez and O'Donnell feels somewhat clichéd and could benefit from more originality to enhance the emotional impact.
  • The use of dark humor in Mendez's line about prison is a nice touch, but it could be more nuanced. The humor feels a bit forced and could be more subtle to maintain the tension of the moment. Additionally, O'Donnell's response could be more layered, perhaps reflecting his own fears or experiences to create a deeper connection between the characters.
  • The transition from Mendez's personal moment to the Argo production office is abrupt. While it serves to juxtapose the seriousness of Mendez's mission with the ongoing production, a smoother transition could enhance the flow of the narrative. Consider adding a brief moment of reflection or a visual cue that connects the two locations more seamlessly.
  • The dialogue in the Argo production office, while capturing the mood of the time, could be more dynamic. Siegel's line about America feels a bit on-the-nose and could be rephrased to convey the same sentiment in a more creative way. This would help maintain the audience's engagement and avoid feeling like exposition.
  • The scene ends with a strong line from Mendez, but it could be more impactful if it were tied back to his personal stakes. Perhaps a brief moment of hesitation or a look back at his apartment before he leaves could emphasize the weight of his decision and create a more poignant conclusion.
Suggestions
  • Revise the dialogue between Mendez and O'Donnell to make it feel more authentic and less clichéd. Consider adding personal anecdotes or reflections that reveal their characters more deeply.
  • Incorporate a smoother transition between Mendez's packing scene and the Argo production office. This could involve a visual cue or a brief moment of introspection from Mendez as he leaves his apartment.
  • Enhance the dialogue in the Argo production office to make it more dynamic and engaging. Avoid on-the-nose statements and instead focus on subtext and character-driven dialogue.
  • Consider adding a moment of hesitation or reflection for Mendez before he leaves for the airport, reinforcing the emotional stakes of his mission and creating a more impactful ending.
  • Explore the use of visual storytelling to complement the dialogue, such as close-ups on Mendez's expressions or the items he packs, to convey his emotional state without relying solely on words.



Scene 30 -  Tensions and Postcards
155 INT. DULLES AIRPORT - LATER 155

He sits near a mailbox inside the terminal writing on a
postcard with the Washington Monument on it.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO THE BUDDY-MAN. NO PHONE FOR A WHILE.
JACK WILL CALL. LOVE YOU BOTH. Then he adds: SO MUCH.

He drops the card in the box and heads toward a gate
marked “LUFTHANSA.”
ARGO - Final 59.


156 OMITTED 156 *


157 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - DAY 157

The Houseguests are gathered around Bob Anders.

BOB ANDERS
-- it was thirty seconds for
Christ’s sake. To get some air in
the yard. I couldn’t breathe --

MARK LIJEK JOE STAFFORD
You know what the rules All it takes is one second
are. to spot you.

BOB ANDERS
Who saw me go out?

MARK LIJEK CORA LIJEK
It doesn’t matter. You did I did, actually. I saw
go out. you.

BOB ANDERS
(to Cora Lijek)
Miss Hall Monitor. Creeping
around with her notebook --

MARK LIJEK
(something roused)
Don’t talk to her that way.

CORA LIJEK BOB ANDERS
(to Mark) Little Laura Ingalls.
I’ll defend myself. Okay? Watching every move --
A sound at the door, and they go silent.

LEE SCHATZ
Dad’s home.

Ken carrying his briefcase, cheerfully oblivious to what
he’s walked into.

TAYLOR
You’re getting a visitor.


158 OMITTED 158 *


159 INT. WEST WING - MORNING 159

An NSC LIAISON, holding a file with a red stripe, walks *
to Jordan’s office.
ARGO - Final 60.


160 INT. CHIEF OF STAFF OFFICE - MORNING 160

He finds Jordan sitting on a long table, looking
exhausted, silently watching one of the monitors: “The
Today Show” on NBC.

JORDAN
A man in Scranton’s putting a flag
on his lawn for every day of
captivity.
(beat)
When he runs out of lawn, Kennedy
wins the primary.

Vance hands him the folder.

LIAISON *
The six with the Canadians are *
coming out.

Jordan, brought back from Scranton and politics by this,
opens the file and looks at it.

JORDAN
(after a moment)
Who signed off on this?


161 OMITTED 161


161A EXT. ISTANBUL - DAY 161A

ESTABLISHING SHOT. WIDE. OVER the city, featuring the
famous domed mosques.

SUPERIMPOSE: ISTANBUL - JANUARY 25


162 EXT. ISTANBUL - PLAZA ON THE WATER - DAY 162

Mendez walks, the BOSPHORUS in the b.g. He reaches the
doors of an OFFICIAL-LOOKING BUILDING and goes inside.


163 INT. IRANIAN CONSULATE (ISTANBUL) - DAY 163

Mendez sits in a reception room with a few VISA
APPLICANTS. Photographs of the Ayatollah Khomeini hang
on the wall. Two REVOLUTIONARY GUARD OFFICIALS in ill-
fitting suits sit at a desk.
ARGO - Final 61.


164 INT. IRANIAN CONSULATE - VISA OFFICE - DAY 164

The IRANIAN CONSUL OFFICIAL, late 30s, is smoking.

CONSUL OFFICIAL
What will be the purpose of your
visit to Iran?

MENDEZ
Business. Film production.

The Consul Official looks at his Canadian passport.

CONSUL OFFICIAL
Why didn’t you get your visa in
Canada?

MENDEZ
My boss waited until I was here to
send the telex.
(lighting cigarette)
If he had a thought in his head,
it would die of loneliness. *

Pointed look from Mendez. The universal condition of
boss hatred almost always works for him, and it does now.
Consul nods. Stamps the passport. KINGDOM OF IRAN -- He
crosses out KINGDOM and writes by hand: ISLAMIC REPUBLIC
OF.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In Dulles Airport, a character writes a birthday postcard to 'the buddy-man' before heading to a Lufthansa gate. The scene shifts to the Canadian Ambassador's residence, where houseguests Bob Anders, Mark Lijek, Joe Stafford, and Cora Lijek engage in a tense argument about safety rules. Bob expresses frustration over stepping outside, while Mark defends Cora, who confronts Bob about his actions. The atmosphere is charged with conflict until Ken enters, oblivious to the tension.
Strengths
  • Effective blend of tension and humor
  • Strong character development
  • Smooth transitions between locations
  • Engaging dialogue
Weaknesses
  • Limited character changes within the scene
  • Dialogue could be more impactful

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to show Mendez's infiltration into Iran, and it lands effectively through tense, character-driven dialogue and a clever use of bureaucratic detail. The main limiter is the brevity and lack of overt conflict, which, while realistic, could be heightened to increase dramatic tension.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of using a fake film production as cover is well-established, and this scene adds a fresh layer by showing the mundane visa application process as a point of vulnerability. The idea of Mendez using 'boss hatred' as a universal connection is a clever, character-specific tactic.

Plot: 6.5

The plot advances Mendez's physical journey into Iran, a critical step in the exfiltration plan. The scene shows the procedural risk of obtaining a visa and the improvisational skill required, but it lacks a major plot twist or revelation.

Originality: 7

The scene offers a fresh take on the spy genre by focusing on the mundane details of cover identity, such as visa applications. The use of humor (boss hatred) is an original touch that humanizes the protagonist.


Character Development

Characters: 6

Mendez is shown as resourceful and psychologically astute, using a relatable complaint to build rapport. The Consul Official is a minor but functional character, and the scene reinforces Mendez's lone-wolf professionalism. However, there's no significant character development or change.

Character Changes: 2

Mendez does not undergo a significant change in this scene; he remains the same composed operative. The Consul Official's slight shift from suspicion to acceptance is minor and functional.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to navigate the complex web of political and personal relationships in order to achieve his mission.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to successfully carry out his mission to rescue the hostages in Iran.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 5

The conflict is primarily internal and procedural: Mendez must pass as a legitimate businessman while navigating a hostile bureaucracy. The external conflict is low-key, but the underlying threat of discovery is palpable.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is the Consul Official and the bureaucratic system he represents, but it is not overtly hostile. The real opposition is the risk of exposure, which is internalized by Mendez.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high—Mendez's life and the lives of the six houseguests depend on his successful entry—but the scene focuses on a routine procedure, so the immediate stakes feel muted.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by getting Mendez into Iran, a necessary step for the mission. It also establishes the practical challenges of the cover story, but it is a transitional scene rather than a turning point.

Unpredictability: 5.5

The scene is somewhat predictable in its outcome—Mendez gets the visa—but the method (using boss hatred) is a fresh, character-specific twist that adds a layer of unpredictability.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the tension between personal loyalty and professional duty, as well as the clash of different value systems in a high-stakes political environment.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5.5

The emotional impact is moderate, driven by the tension of the visa interview and the weight of Mendez's mission. The moment of stamping the passport carries a quiet sense of relief and foreboding, but the scene is too brief to generate deep emotional resonance.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue is sharp and purposeful, especially Mendez's line about his boss, which is both humorous and effective. The exchange is concise and reveals character through subtext. However, the scene is dialogue-light, with much of the tension carried by action and setting.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because it places the protagonist in a high-stakes bureaucratic encounter where every word matters. The tension is subtle but real, and the resolution is satisfying.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing is tight and efficient, with no wasted moments. The scene moves quickly from arrival to stamp, maintaining tension without dragging.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of 'KINGDOM OF IRAN' crossed out is a visual detail that works well in the script format.

Structure: 6.5

The scene follows a classic setup-payoff structure: Mendez enters, faces a potential obstacle (the visa question), and overcomes it with a clever line. The structure is efficient but lacks a distinct turning point or surprise.


Critique
  • The scene at Dulles Airport serves as a brief moment of calm before the storm, but it lacks emotional depth. The postcard writing could be an opportunity to explore Mendez's feelings about the situation, his family, or the gravity of the mission ahead. Instead, it feels somewhat detached and doesn't fully engage the audience's empathy.
  • The dialogue in the subsequent scene at the Canadian Ambassador's residence is effective in showcasing the tension among the houseguests, but it could benefit from more subtext. The characters are arguing about rules, but the stakes of their situation could be emphasized further to heighten the tension. The audience should feel the weight of their predicament more acutely.
  • The transition between the two scenes feels abrupt. The postcard moment could serve as a thematic bridge, reflecting Mendez's longing for normalcy amidst chaos. However, the shift to the argument among the houseguests feels jarring and could be smoothed out with a more gradual transition or a connecting line that ties Mendez's moment to the houseguests' tension.
  • The character dynamics are established, but they could be deepened. For instance, Bob Anders's frustration could be tied to a personal backstory or a specific fear about their situation, making his outburst more relatable. Similarly, Cora Lijek's role as the 'hall monitor' could be expanded to show her motivations or fears, adding layers to her character.
  • The scene ends with Ken Taylor entering cheerfully, which contrasts sharply with the tension in the room. While this can be effective for comedic relief, it may undermine the gravity of the previous argument. A more subtle entrance or a moment of realization from Taylor about the tension could maintain the scene's emotional weight.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a voiceover or internal monologue for Mendez while he writes the postcard, allowing the audience to connect with his emotional state and the weight of his mission.
  • Enhance the dialogue among the houseguests by incorporating more personal stakes or backstory, which would make their arguments feel more impactful and relatable.
  • Create a smoother transition between Mendez's postcard moment and the houseguests' argument by including a line that reflects Mendez's thoughts on the situation, linking his desire for normalcy to their current chaos.
  • Explore the characters' relationships further by adding moments of vulnerability or shared history, which would deepen the audience's investment in their fates.
  • Reconsider Ken Taylor's entrance to maintain the tension. Perhaps he could enter with a more serious demeanor, acknowledging the gravity of the situation before shifting the mood, or he could be oblivious but gradually realize the tension in the room.



Scene 31 -  Whispers of Tension
164A EXT. BLUE MOSQUE - MORNING 164A

Tony walks through the doorway revealing the historic
mosque, we hear the call to prayer echo through the
courtyard. Tony walks through the courtyard. We see
some TOURISTS with ‘70s Instamatics. Locals are HEADING
IN TO PRAY.


165 INT. HAGIA SOPHIA - UPPER LEVEL - LATER 165

We see the beautiful ceiling of the former cathedral.
PULL BACK to reveal Tony stands looking out over the
second level balcony. A MAN walks up behind him.

MAN (O.S.)
‘Iran is a hundred percent not in
a pre-revolutionary state.’ End
quote.

Mendez looks up: a MAN, late 40s-50s with a British
accent, is talking to him. PETER NICHOLLS, an Oxbridge
type and a very good spy.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 62.
165 CONTINUED: 165
MENDEZ
Can’t be right all the time.

NICHOLLS
Mr. Harkins.

MENDEZ
When’d you get back?

CUT TO: *


165A INT. HAGIA SOPHIA - LOWER LEVEL - DAY 165A

FIND Mendez and Nicholls.

MENDEZ
Were you metal detecting? *

NICHOLLS
None left to find. Shah escaped
with a 747 so laden with gold bars
it nearly didn’t make it off the
runway.

MENDEZ
But you kept busy.

NICHOLLS
Ferrying out the torture apparatus
of our friend’s fallen
dictatorship.

Both these men do this work and share an unspoken
understanding. They stop and look up at a MOSAIC on the
wall. An ancient rendition of Christ, fashioned before
the Muslims took the city and converted this church to a
mosque. *


Nicholls has WHITE AND YELLOW SLIPS OF PAPER with Farsi
writing on them in hand. He gives them to Tony.

NICHOLLS
It’s getting worse. Everybody who *
lands at Mehrabad now fills out
one of these.
(a WHITE one)
That slip makes a copy to this one
underneath.
(a YELLOW one)
Passenger keeps Yellow, Airport
keeps White.
(MORE)

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 63.
165A CONTINUED: 165A
NICHOLLS (CONT'D)
When you leave the country, they
match them up to verify you came
into the country when you said you
did.

MENDEZ
So if they look, they’ll know six
people didn’t come in with me.

NICHOLLS
If they look.

Nicholls and Tony turn away from the mosaic,
surreptitious work now done, and meander toward the
middle of the great room.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a morning visit to the Blue Mosque, Tony Mendez experiences the call to prayer amidst a mix of tourists and locals. He then ascends to the upper level of the Hagia Sophia, where he meets British spy Peter Nicholls. They discuss the deteriorating political situation in Iran, with Nicholls providing Mendez with crucial slips detailing new airport procedures that heighten the risks of travel to Iran. Their conversation reflects on their shared past and the gravity of the current climate, culminating in a tense yet understanding exchange as they walk away from the historic mosaic.
Strengths
  • Detailed exposition
  • Engaging dialogue
  • Tense atmosphere
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Lack of action

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene's primary job is to deliver critical plot information about the increased security risk (the matching slips) while deepening the spy-world atmosphere. It lands effectively through the concrete, visual threat of the slips and the unspoken understanding between the two spies. The single biggest limiter is the lack of emotional or character tension—the information is delivered in a calm, almost academic exchange, which keeps the stakes feeling theoretical rather than urgent. Raising the emotional temperature or adding a moment of personal risk would lift the overall score.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of using immigration paperwork as a ticking clock is strong and grounded, but the scene doesn't fully exploit its dramatic potential.

Plot: 6

The plot advances by revealing a new obstacle (the matching slips), but the scene is mostly exposition with no immediate action or decision.

Originality: 6.5

The use of immigration slips as a plot device is original and authentic, but the scene's execution (two spies meeting in a historic site) is a familiar trope.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

Mendez and Nicholls are professional and share an unspoken bond, but neither shows distinct personality or emotional depth in this exchange.

Character Changes: 1

Neither character changes; they remain in their professional spy personas throughout.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to navigate a complex political situation and maintain his cover as a spy. This reflects his deeper need for security and success in his mission.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to gather information and navigate the political landscape of Iran. This reflects the immediate challenges he faces in his mission.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 4

The conflict is external (the threat of the slips) but internalized; there is no direct confrontation or active opposition in the scene.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is systemic (the Iranian airport security) rather than a specific antagonist, which reduces the sense of direct threat.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high (discovery of the six missing people), but the scene's calm tone reduces their felt weight.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by introducing a concrete obstacle that will complicate the extraction plan.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because the specific bureaucratic mechanism (matching white and yellow slips) is a fresh, non-obvious obstacle for a spy thriller.

Philosophical Conflict: 5

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the ethical implications of espionage and the moral ambiguity of the protagonist's actions. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs and values as a spy.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 4

The emotional impact is muted; the calm delivery of bad news undercuts the potential for tension or fear.

Dialogue: 6

The dialogue is efficient and carries the necessary information, but it lacks subtext or emotional color—it's functional rather than revealing.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because the concrete detail of the matching slips creates a clear, immediate threat, and the historical setting adds atmosphere.

Pacing: 6

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the slow, meandering walk through the mosque mirrors the calm before the storm, but it risks feeling too leisurely for the stakes involved.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of parentheticals for the slip descriptions is effective.

Structure: 6.5

The scene follows a classic spy-thriller structure: meet in a public place, exchange information, reveal a new complication. It is competent but lacks a dramatic turn or reversal.


Critique
  • The scene effectively establishes a sense of place and atmosphere with the contrasting settings of the Blue Mosque and Hagia Sophia, which are rich in historical and cultural significance. However, the dialogue could be more engaging; it feels somewhat expository and lacks emotional depth. The characters' interactions could benefit from more subtext to convey their shared history and the gravity of their situation.
  • The introduction of Peter Nicholls as a British spy is intriguing, but his character could be fleshed out further. As it stands, he feels somewhat one-dimensional. Adding a personal anecdote or a hint of his motivations could create a more compelling dynamic between him and Mendez.
  • The dialogue about the slips of paper and the verification process is informative but could be more dramatic. The stakes of the situation should be emphasized more clearly to heighten tension. Instead of merely stating facts, consider incorporating a sense of urgency or danger that reflects the precariousness of their mission.
  • The visual elements, such as the beautiful ceiling and the mosaic, are well-described, but they could be tied more closely to the characters' emotional states. For instance, reflecting on the history of the Hagia Sophia could parallel Mendez's own struggles and the weight of the past on their current mission.
  • The transition between the two locations (Blue Mosque to Hagia Sophia) could be smoother. A brief moment of reflection or a visual cue that connects the two settings would enhance the flow of the scene.
Suggestions
  • Enhance the dialogue between Mendez and Nicholls by incorporating more personal stakes or shared experiences that reveal their camaraderie and the weight of their mission.
  • Consider adding a moment of tension or conflict in their conversation that reflects the urgency of their situation, perhaps by having Nicholls express concern about the risks involved in Mendez's plan.
  • Use the historical and cultural significance of the Hagia Sophia to draw parallels with Mendez's internal conflict, perhaps through a line of dialogue or a moment of introspection that connects the past with the present.
  • Introduce a visual motif that ties the two locations together, such as a recurring symbol or theme that reflects the characters' struggles and the broader political context.
  • Revise the exposition about the slips of paper to include a sense of urgency or danger, perhaps by having Mendez react more strongly to the implications of the verification process.



Scene 32 -  Navigating Challenges
166 INT. HAGIA SOPHIA - CONTINUOUS ACTION 166

Nicholls and Tony walk towards the inner courtyard.

NICHOLLS
When you land, you should go
straight to the Ministry of
Culture and Islamic Guidance to
kiss the ring. Get on record as
having applied for a film permit.
If they catch you later, at least
they’ll be confused while they’re
torturing you... Your biggest
problem may be convincing the six
of them to go with you. They’re
foreign service. They’re willful.

Nicholls takes a picture.

MENDEZ
How’s June?

NICHOLLS
Left.

MENDEZ
I’m sorry.

NICHOLLS
She picked out a ring and gave me
a choice. She’s a Chinese
national. If I married her, I’d
have to resign, so. You and *
Christine?

MENDEZ
Good. Yeah.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 64.
166 CONTINUED: 166

He said that without hesitation. Maybe here we realize
that Mendez is a very good liar.


166A EXT./INT. PRODUCERS’ BUILDING - NIGHT 166A *

Lester is BOUNCING A RUBBER BALL. The PRODUCER from later *
in the movie walks by. *

PRODUCER *
You’re working late. *

SIEGEL *
‘Til the dawn’s early light. *

PRODUCER *
You got stamina, Lester. I wanna *
be you. *

SIEGEL *
You wouldn’t be me for long. I’m *
80. *

Producer walks away and Lester looks into the ‘Argo’ *
office as he squeezes the ball. *

FROM INSIDE THE OFFICE -- In the foreground, we see what *
Lester is looking at: a phone. Stubbornly silent. *


167 OMITTED 167 *


168 OMITTED 168 *


169 OMITTED 169 *
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In this scene set in the Hagia Sophia, Nicholls and Mendez discuss the critical need for a film permit from the Ministry of Culture and Islamic Guidance, highlighting the difficulties of persuading the foreign service team to support Mendez. As they navigate personal struggles, Nicholls reveals his recent breakup with June, while Mendez shares a brief update about his relationship with Christine. Meanwhile, Lester is seen working late at a producer's office, engaging in a light-hearted exchange with a producer about stamina and age, before gazing at the silent phone in the 'Argo' office, hinting at a sense of anticipation.
Strengths
  • Emotional depth
  • Character development
  • Tension-building
Weaknesses
  • Limited external action
  • Slow pacing in some parts

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene effectively advances the plot by delivering crucial operational advice and revealing character vulnerability through personal loss, but its emotional impact is undercut by the abrupt shift to Lester's silent phone vigil, which feels disconnected and slows momentum. A tighter integration of the parallel storylines would lift the overall score.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of a spy receiving personal relationship advice while being briefed on a dangerous mission is strong, but the execution here is somewhat conventional.

Plot: 6

The plot moves forward with specific instructions for the mission, but the scene is mostly expository and lacks a clear turning point.

Originality: 6.5

The blend of personal sacrifice with spycraft is familiar, but the specific detail of the film permit as cover is fresh and authentic.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Mendez's lie about his relationship and Nicholls's sacrifice reveal depth, but the characters are not fully developed in this brief exchange.

Character Changes: 2

Mendez's lie is revealed, but no significant change occurs; Nicholls's resignation is backstory, not change in the scene.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to navigate personal relationships and professional responsibilities amidst a high-stakes mission. This reflects his struggle to balance his personal life with his duty.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to secure a film permit in Iran for their mission. This reflects the immediate challenge they face in executing their plan.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 5

The conflict is internal (Mendez's lie) and external (the mission's danger), but the scene lacks direct confrontation.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is the Iranian authorities and the logistical challenges of the mission, but they are not present in the scene, reducing immediate tension.

High Stakes: 8

The stakes are life-or-death, reinforced by the torture line, but the scene's quiet tone undercuts the urgency.

Story Forward: 7

The scene provides key mission instructions and sets up the need to convince the six, advancing the plot.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because the personal revelations about Nicholls's lost love and Mendez's lie are unexpected in a mission briefing.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict revolves around the protagonist's loyalty to his job and his personal relationships. This challenges his values and priorities, forcing him to make difficult decisions.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The personal revelations (Nicholls's lost love, Mendez's lie) create some emotional weight, but the scene is too brief to land fully.

Dialogue: 7.5

The dialogue is sharp and revealing, especially the dark humor about torture, but some lines feel a bit on-the-nose.

Engagement: 6

This scene is engaging because of the dark humor and the personal stakes revealed, but the pacing is slow and the cut to Lester breaks immersion.

Pacing: 6

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the quiet, reflective tone allows the personal weight to sink in, but the cut to Lester's silent phone feels like a pacing hiccup.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is standard and clean, with clear scene headings and action lines, though the parenthetical '(CONTINUED)' is unnecessary.

Structure: 5.5

The scene follows a classic briefing structure with a personal interlude, but the transition to Lester's silent phone feels abrupt and structurally disjointed.


Critique
  • The dialogue between Nicholls and Mendez effectively conveys the tension and stakes of the situation, particularly with Nicholls' dark humor about the potential consequences of Mendez's mission. However, the humor may come off as too flippant given the gravity of the context, which could undermine the emotional weight of the scene.
  • The transition from the serious discussion about the film permit to the personal exchange about relationships feels somewhat abrupt. While it adds depth to the characters, it may benefit from a smoother segue that maintains the tension of the previous conversation.
  • Mendez's line about his relationship with Christine feels somewhat vague and lacks emotional resonance. Given the stakes of the mission, a more poignant reflection on his relationship could enhance the audience's connection to his character.
  • The scene introduces a secondary location (the producers' building) that feels disconnected from the main narrative thread. While it serves to show the parallel world of film production, it may dilute the focus on Mendez's mission. The juxtaposition could be more effective if it tied back to the main plot or character development.
  • The visual elements of the Hagia Sophia are not fully utilized in the scene. Describing the surroundings in more detail could enhance the atmosphere and provide a richer backdrop for the dialogue, emphasizing the historical significance of the setting in contrast to the characters' personal struggles.
Suggestions
  • Consider revising Nicholls' humor to strike a better balance between levity and the seriousness of the situation. This could involve making his comments more subtly ironic rather than overtly flippant.
  • Add a transitional line or action that bridges the conversation about the film permit and the personal discussion about relationships, maintaining the tension while allowing for character development.
  • Deepen Mendez's reflection on his relationship with Christine by incorporating specific memories or feelings that highlight what he stands to lose, making his character more relatable and the stakes more personal.
  • Reassess the inclusion of the producers' building scene. If it serves to illustrate the film industry, consider integrating it more closely with Mendez's mission or character arc, perhaps by showing how the film's success or failure impacts the escape plan.
  • Enhance the visual description of the Hagia Sophia to create a more immersive experience for the audience. This could involve detailing the architecture, the atmosphere, and how these elements reflect the characters' emotional states.



Scene 33 -  Entering the Storm: Mendez in Tehran
170 INT. BRITISH AIRWAYS DC-10 - MORNING 170

Mendez sits in a window seat. A FLIGHT ATTENDANT speaks
with a pleasant British accent.

FLIGHT ATTENDANT (V.O.)
The Captain has informed us that
we have entered Iranian airspace.
Members of our cabin crew will be
coming through to collect any
remaining alcoholic beverages at
this time.
ARGO - Final 65.


171 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT TERMINAL - DAY 171

Mendez walks through the terminal of a crowded 1960s-era
airport. Newly-hung portraits of the Ayatollah Khomeini
watch over the duty-free shops.

SUPERIMPOSE: TEHRAN - JANUARY 26

The MOBS OF PEOPLE WITH BOXES OF THEIR WORLDLY BELONGINGS
puts in high relief that Tony is going into a place that
everyone else is desperately fleeing.


172 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT IMMIGRATION - DAY 172

Tony fills out a white form. It makes an impression on a
YELLOW form.

Tony presents his passport to a REVOLUTIONARY GUARD
IMMIGRATION OFFICIAL. Official looks at it, Tony hears
the sound of a woman screaming in Farsi.

Three lanes away, at the outgoing immigration station, a
Revolutionary Guard is dragging away the woman’s HUSBAND.

The Immigration Official stamps Tony’s passport -- takes
the white form, gives Tony the yellow one -- and waves
him through.


173 EXT. TEHRAN - DAY 173

Archive footage may be mixed with new footage. Normal
city life mixed with men with automatic weapons. The
contradictions of Tehran at this moment.


173A EXT. TEHRAN - DAY 173A

A Massive HELICOPTER SHOT OF TEHRAN. We TILT DOWN to see
a traffic jam SPRAWLS AROUND THE AZADI MONUMENT. Bikes,
mopeds, pedestrians, peddlers and old, patched together
cars compete for space. No one gets anywhere.


174 INT. TAXI - DAY 174

Mendez sits in the back of a taxi in the Tehran traffic,
some of the worst traffic in the world. We see the AZADI
MONUMENT out his window.


ANGLES OUT HIS WINDOWS

The Ayatollah looks down from everywhere.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 66.
174 CONTINUED: 174

A MAN IS HANGING FROM A CRANE. People mill underneath.

Women in chadors at Kentucky Fried Chicken.

An ARMED GANG in the back of pickup truck pulls up near
his taxi.

We see PROPAGANDA painted on a wall/window.


175 INT. TAXI/EXT. MINISTRY - DAY 175

The taxi pulls up to a FORMAL, PINK BUILDING.

The Driver stops. They’ve arrived. *


176 INT. MINISTRY OF CULTURE AND ISLAMIC GUIDANCE - DAY 176

MEHDI BEHROUZ, 33, is the newly appointed Deputy Minister
of Culture and Islamic Guidance. Like many of the stars
of the Revolution, he was educated in the U.S. Right now
he’s looking at the ARGO script.

BEHROUZ
This film crew is just yourself?

MENDEZ
Six more are joining me today.
They’re coming from Canada.

BEHROUZ
You’d like to film at the bazaar?

MENDEZ
The bazaar, maybe the palace.

BEHROUZ
(not particularly
friendly)
I see. The exotic Orient. Snake
charmers and flying carpets.
(a beat)
You come to us at a complicated
time. Before the Revolution, 40
percent of the movie theaters in
Tehran were showing pornography.
Our function is purification as
well as promotion of the arts.
(takes script)
I’ll review for the Minister.
ARGO - Final 67.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary Mendez arrives in Tehran amidst the chaos of the Iranian Revolution, forced to surrender his alcohol upon entering Iranian airspace. At Mehrabad Airport, he witnesses the distress of a woman separated from her husband by the Revolutionary Guard, highlighting the oppressive atmosphere. As he navigates the bustling terminal and the violent streets, he arrives at the Ministry of Culture and Islamic Guidance, where he meets Mehdi Behrouz, who questions his intentions regarding his film project. The scene captures the tension between Mendez's mission and the dangers surrounding him, ending with uncertainty as Behrouz takes Mendez's script for review.
Strengths
  • Effective setting establishment
  • Tension-building
  • Informative dialogue
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Lack of action or suspense sequences

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to land Mendez inside the hostile bureaucracy of revolutionary Iran, and it does so with efficient, atmospheric tension. The single biggest limiter is the brevity and lack of deeper character interaction, which, if extended, could heighten the stakes and thematic resonance.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of a CIA agent infiltrating the Ministry of Culture to secure a film permit is inherently ironic and compelling, but the scene only scratches the surface of that irony.

Plot: 6

The plot advances Mendez's infiltration, but the scene is more of a procedural beat than a major turning point.

Originality: 6

The situation is original in its specific historical context, but the scene's execution is fairly conventional for a spy thriller.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

Mendez is composed and professional, but Behrouz is the only other character with lines, and he remains a cipher, limiting character depth.

Character Changes: 2

Mendez does not undergo a significant change in this scene; he remains the same composed operative.

Internal Goal: 6

Mendez's internal goal in this scene is to navigate the dangerous and unpredictable situation in Tehran while maintaining his composure and completing his mission.

External Goal: 8

Mendez's external goal is to secure permission to film at the bazaar and the palace in Tehran for his cover mission.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 5

The conflict is mostly bureaucratic and ideological, with an undercurrent of danger, but it lacks direct confrontation.

Opposition: 6

The opposition is the bureaucratic and ideological resistance of the Ministry, personified by Behrouz, but it is not overtly hostile, making it a moderate obstacle.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high (the lives of the hostages), but the scene focuses on a minor bureaucratic step, diluting the immediate tension.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by establishing Mendez's entry into Iran and the first hurdle of the mission.

Unpredictability: 6

This scene is unpredictable because the outcome of the permit application is uncertain, and the behavior of the revolutionary official is not easily anticipated.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict in this scene is between Mendez's Western perspective on filmmaking and Behrouz's view of the role of art in the context of the Iranian Revolution. Behrouz sees the film crew's request as exoticizing and potentially disrespectful to Iranian culture.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5

The scene creates a sense of unease and tension, but the emotional impact is muted by the procedural focus.

Dialogue: 6

The dialogue is functional and reveals the ideological clash, but it lacks subtext or memorable wit.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because it places the protagonist in a hostile environment where every word could be a trap, and the bureaucratic absurdity of the situation is intriguing.

Pacing: 7

The pacing of the scene is brisk, moving from arrival to the meeting without lingering, which maintains tension but sacrifices depth.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines, though the use of 'SUPERIMPOSE' is a bit dated.

Structure: 6

The scene follows a classic 'arrival and obstacle' structure, but it is truncated, lacking a clear turning point or escalation.


Critique
  • The scene effectively establishes the tension and danger surrounding Mendez's mission as he enters Iran, but it could benefit from deeper character introspection. Mendez's internal thoughts or feelings about the situation could enhance the audience's connection to his character and the stakes involved.
  • The contrast between the chaotic environment of the airport and Mendez's calm demeanor is compelling, but the scene could use more sensory details to immerse the audience in the atmosphere. Describing the sounds, smells, and sights in more vivid detail would heighten the tension and urgency.
  • The dialogue with Mehdi Behrouz feels somewhat expository and could be more dynamic. Instead of simply stating facts about the film and the political climate, consider incorporating subtext or conflict in their exchange to create a more engaging interaction.
  • The use of archive footage is a strong visual choice, but it could be better integrated into the narrative. Instead of a straightforward transition, consider using the footage to reflect Mendez's emotional state or to juxtapose his mission against the backdrop of the chaos in Tehran.
  • The pacing of the scene feels uneven, particularly in the transition from the airport to the taxi. A smoother transition could maintain the tension and urgency, perhaps by showing Mendez's immediate reactions to the environment as he moves through it.
Suggestions
  • Incorporate Mendez's internal monologue or reflections to provide insight into his emotional state and the gravity of his mission.
  • Enhance sensory details throughout the scene to create a more immersive experience for the audience, focusing on the sights, sounds, and smells of the airport and Tehran.
  • Revise the dialogue between Mendez and Behrouz to include more subtext or conflict, making their interaction feel more dynamic and engaging.
  • Consider using the archive footage to reflect Mendez's emotional journey or to create a more profound contrast between his mission and the chaos surrounding him.
  • Smooth out the pacing by ensuring transitions between locations feel more fluid, possibly by showing Mendez's immediate reactions to the environment as he navigates through it.



Scene 34 -  Urgent Alliances
177 EXT. CANADIAN EMBASSY - DAY 177

A TAXI pulls away.

Mendez, carrying his luggage, stands at a wrought iron
gate with MAPLE LEAVES worked into the iron. Ken Taylor
comes out of the building, opens the gate himself.

MENDEZ
Mr. Ambassador.

TAYLOR
Ken Taylor.

He shakes Tony’s hand and they start to walk to Taylor’s
car.

TAYLOR
I was expecting more of a G-Man
look.

MENDEZ
You’re thinking of FBI, sir.

They get into the car.


178 INT. TAYLOR’S CAR - OUTSIDE EMBASSY - CONTINUOUS ACTION 178

Taylor gives Tony SIX BLANK CANADIAN PASSPORTS.

TAYLOR
These are blank, y’know. The
stamps?

MENDEZ
I’ll take care of that.

TAYLOR
How long?

MENDEZ
A day to prep them with their
cover stories. Two if they need
it.

TAYLOR
And you’ll fly out with them?

Tony nods. A distant sound of a crowd outside.




(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 68.
178 CONTINUED: 178

TAYLOR
There’s something you should know.
We think one of our housekeepers
figured out who they are. We
don’t know if we can trust her.

Now the noise outside is louder. Taylor turns to the
window. Tony joins him.

TAYLOR
So sooner is better.

They stand listening to the demonstration sounds, echoing
over the rooftops of the city.


179 OMITTED 179 *
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary Mendez arrives at the Canadian Embassy and meets Ambassador Ken Taylor, who provides him with six blank Canadian passports. They discuss the urgent need for cover stories for the individuals they are trying to help, while Taylor warns Mendez about a potential security threat from a housekeeper who may have discovered their identities. The tension escalates as they hear a crowd outside, indicating a demonstration, heightening the stakes of their mission.
Strengths
  • Building tension
  • Establishing urgency
  • Setting up key plot elements
Weaknesses
  • Limited emotional depth
  • Lack of character development

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene efficiently advances the plot by delivering crucial plot items (blank passports) and raising stakes (untrustworthy housekeeper), but its emotional impact is muted by the lack of character interiority or visceral reaction to the danger.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of a CIA extraction using fake Canadian passports is inherently compelling, but the scene focuses on procedural delivery rather than exploring the concept's novelty or deeper implications.

Plot: 6.5

The plot moves forward clearly: Mendez receives the passports, learns of a new threat, and the timeline is compressed. However, the scene is mostly exposition and setup.

Originality: 5.5

The scene is a standard spy-thriller handoff; the originality lies in the specific historical context (Canadian Embassy in Tehran) and the use of blank passports.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

Mendez is professional and calm; Taylor is helpful but worried. Neither character reveals much depth beyond their functional roles in this exchange.

Character Changes: 1

Neither character undergoes significant change; Mendez remains the capable operative, Taylor the concerned diplomat.

Internal Goal: 4

The protagonist's internal goal is to successfully prepare the blank Canadian passports with cover stories and ensure the safety of the individuals involved in the operation. This reflects Mendez's desire to protect and rescue the stranded Americans, showcasing his bravery and resourcefulness.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to fly out with the prepared passports and ensure the safe escape of the stranded Americans. This goal reflects the immediate challenge of navigating a dangerous situation and executing a risky plan under time pressure.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 4

Conflict is external and low-key: the threat of the housekeeper and the pressure of time. No direct confrontation occurs.

Opposition: 5

The opposition is indirect: the potential betrayal of the housekeeper and the hostile environment outside the embassy walls.

High Stakes: 6.5

Stakes are raised by the housekeeper revelation and the compressed timeline, but the scene doesn't dwell on the consequences of failure.

Story Forward: 8

The scene directly advances the mission: Mendez gets the passports and a new complication, pushing the story toward the extraction.

Unpredictability: 6

This scene is unpredictable because the revelation about the housekeeper introduces a new, unexpected threat that complicates the mission.

Philosophical Conflict: 3

The philosophical conflict revolves around trust and deception, as the protagonist must navigate potential betrayal from a housekeeper and the uncertainty of who can be trusted in a high-stakes situation. This challenges Mendez's beliefs in loyalty and the importance of trust in espionage operations.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 4.5

The distant crowd noise and Taylor's worry create mild unease, but the scene remains emotionally restrained, lacking a strong emotional hook.

Dialogue: 6

Dialogue is efficient and realistic, conveying necessary information without flourish. It serves the plot but lacks subtext or memorable lines.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because the quiet exchange of passports and the ominous crowd noise create a sense of impending danger, making the reader wonder if the housekeeper will betray them.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it starts with a calm exchange, then accelerates with the crowd noise and the housekeeper revelation, creating a sense of urgency.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear action lines and proper scene headings. No errors.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic setup: arrival, exchange of items, revelation of new obstacle, and a ticking clock. It's functional for a thriller.


Critique
  • The scene effectively establishes a sense of urgency and tension with the introduction of the crowd noise outside the embassy, which serves as a constant reminder of the danger surrounding the characters. However, the dialogue could be more dynamic to reflect the high stakes of the situation. Currently, it feels somewhat flat and lacks emotional weight.
  • The interaction between Mendez and Taylor is functional but could benefit from deeper character development. Adding subtext or personal stakes for Mendez could enhance the audience's connection to him. For instance, a brief mention of his personal feelings about the mission or the risks involved could add depth.
  • The use of the blank Canadian passports as a plot device is effective, but the dialogue surrounding them could be more engaging. Instead of simply stating the facts, consider incorporating a moment of tension or doubt about the passports' effectiveness, which would heighten the stakes.
  • The scene transitions smoothly from the exterior to the interior of the car, but the visual descriptions could be more vivid. Describing the surroundings or the atmosphere inside the car could help immerse the audience further into the scene.
  • The dialogue about the housekeeper who may have discovered the identities of the houseguests introduces an interesting conflict, but it feels somewhat rushed. Expanding on this point could create more tension and suspense, making the audience more invested in the outcome.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment of hesitation or concern from Mendez when he receives the passports, reflecting the gravity of the situation and his awareness of the risks involved.
  • Incorporate more subtext in the dialogue between Mendez and Taylor. For example, they could exchange knowing glances or subtle body language that indicates their shared understanding of the danger they face.
  • Enhance the description of the environment outside the embassy to create a more vivid sense of place. This could include sensory details like the smell of smoke or the sight of protestors, which would heighten the tension.
  • Introduce a brief flashback or internal monologue for Mendez that reflects on his past experiences or personal stakes in the mission, adding emotional depth to his character.
  • Expand on the implications of the housekeeper's potential knowledge. Perhaps include a moment where Taylor expresses his fears or doubts about the situation, which would add layers to his character and the urgency of their mission.



Scene 35 -  Tension in Tehran
179A INT. CIA - O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - NIGHT 179A

O’DONNELL
He got to the embassy.

O’Donnell closes the door. Pender, wearing an undone
tuxedo, as if he’s just been pulled from a formal event.
They stay standing.

O’DONNELL
I can’t tell you more than that
‘cause I don’t know any more.

PENDER
(cutting to it)
The Times and A.P. found out
they’re with the Canadians.
Somebody in one of the families
talked.

O’DONNELL
Mother of God.

PENDER
I just put Vance on a plane to
take the editors to Le Cirque. He
thinks he can get them to sit on
it. For now.
(a beat)
Your guy better get them and get
the hell out.
ARGO - Final 69.


180 EXT. SHEMIRANAT (TEHRAN) - DAY 180

Ken Taylor drives up to a nice, but not huge, home in the
expat/diplomatic neighborhood of Tehran. Automatic gates
open.


181 EXT./INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DAY 181

Taylor leads Mendez inside. Pat Taylor waits for them in
the hall. Takes Tony’s hand.


182 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE (TEHRAN) - DAY 182 *

They enter the LIVING ROOM... and here are the SIX
HOUSEGUESTS. They’re looking at Mendez like kids waiting
to be told the lesson plan.


183 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - 183
NIGHT

Each Houseguest has a copy of the ARGO script.

BOB ANDERS
It’s theater of the absurd.

MARK LIJEK
What are the chances?

MENDEZ
The chances are good.

MARK LIJEK
What’s the number value of ‘good’?
30 percent chance of success? 80
percent?

CORA LIJEK
We just --

BOB ANDERS *
What was the objection to picking
normal cover identities?

MENDEZ
There are no Canadians in the
country for normal reasons.

KATHY STAFFORD MARK LIJEK
They’ll sniff us out The Swedish consul said
regardless. they accused him of being
an American at the airport
and held him for an hour.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 70.
183 CONTINUED: 183

BOB ANDERS
We can’t stand up to that. We
don’t know what the hell movie
people do.

MENDEZ
That’s why I’m here. I’ll be with
you. This is what I do.

CORA LIJEK *
Have you gotten people out this
way before?

MENDEZ
This would be a first.

CUT TO:


184 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - 184
NIGHT

THE HOUSEGUESTS --

minus Joe and Kathy Stafford, go into the living room.
Mendez stays in his seat; Joe approaches him.

JOE STAFFORD KATHY STAFFORD
Do you know that every ... Joe, don’t.
day...

JOE STAFFORD
... every day they catch another
friend of the shah at the airport.
Kangaroo trials then firing
squads. Just for having American
names in their phone books.

He puts the Iranian newspaper in front of Mendez.

JOE STAFFORD
You’ve been here an hour and
you’re asking us to trust you with
our lives, Mr. --

MENDEZ
Harkins.

JOE STAFFORD
Is that your real name?

A beat.

MENDEZ
No.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 71.
184 CONTINUED: 184

Joe Stafford nods, as if this has proven a point. He
goes back into the living room, followed by Kathy.


ANGLE ON THE PHOTOGRAPH

in the Tehran Times. A MAN IN A SUIT at Mehrabad
Airport. Terrified, being led out at gunpoint.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense scene, CIA officials O'Donnell and Pender grapple with a media leak revealing the presence of a group at the embassy, prompting urgent measures to suppress the story. Meanwhile, at the Canadian ambassador's residence in Tehran, Ken Taylor and Mendez reassure six anxious houseguests about their escape plan. However, skepticism arises, particularly from Joe Stafford, who questions Mendez's identity and intentions, highlighting the danger they face as the situation escalates.
Strengths
  • Tension-building
  • Character development
  • Emotional depth
Weaknesses
  • Limited action
  • Heavy dialogue

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene's primary job is to establish the hostages' skepticism and Mendez's credibility under pressure, which it does effectively through sharp dialogue and escalating tension. The biggest limiter is the lack of a distinct turning point or emotional climax, leaving the scene feeling like a setup rather than a fully realized moment; a stronger beat of doubt or a personal revelation would lift it.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of using a fake movie as a cover for a rescue is inherently compelling, and this scene highlights the absurdity and danger of that plan through the hostages' questions. However, the scene doesn't introduce new conceptual twists, relying on the established premise.

Plot: 6.5

The plot advances by showing the hostages' initial resistance and Mendez's attempts to reassure them, while also revealing the external pressure from the media leak. The scene is more about character dynamics than plot progression, but it sets up the central conflict of trust.

Originality: 7.5

The scene is original in its portrayal of the hostages' psychological state, using their mundane concerns to highlight the absurdity of the plan. The dialogue feels authentic, and the situation is unique.


Character Development

Characters: 7

The characters are well-differentiated: Bob Anders is pragmatic, Mark Lijek is analytical, Cora is anxious, and Joe Stafford is confrontational. Mendez remains calm and enigmatic, but his internal doubts are not explored, limiting depth.

Character Changes: 4

Mendez remains steadfast, but the hostages' attitudes shift from skepticism to a tentative acceptance, though this change is subtle and not fully realized.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal is to gain the trust and cooperation of the houseguests in order to successfully execute the operation. This reflects his need for validation, competence, and the desire to prove himself in a challenging situation.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to extract the houseguests from Tehran safely and without detection. This reflects the immediate challenge of navigating a dangerous political situation and ensuring the success of the mission.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6.5

The conflict is primarily internal and interpersonal: the hostages' fear versus Mendez's confidence, and the external threat of the media leak. The tension is palpable but not explosive.

Opposition: 7

The opposition comes from the hostages' skepticism and fear, as well as the external threat of the media leak and the Iranian authorities. Mendez faces both internal and external resistance.

High Stakes: 8

The stakes are life-or-death, as the hostages' survival depends on trusting Mendez. The scene reinforces this through Joe Stafford's mention of firing squads.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by confirming the team's commitment to the plan and introducing the media leak as a new obstacle, raising the stakes.

Unpredictability: 6

The scene is somewhat predictable in its structure—hostages question, Mendez reassures—but the specific details, like the 'number value of good' and the newspaper photo, add freshness. The media leak is a new twist.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict revolves around the trust and skepticism between the houseguests and the protagonist. The houseguests are wary of putting their lives in the hands of a stranger, while the protagonist must convince them of his capabilities and trustworthiness.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The emotional impact is moderate, driven by the hostages' vulnerability and the weight of their decision. The scene lacks a strong emotional peak, but the underlying fear is tangible.

Dialogue: 7.5

The dialogue is sharp and realistic, with each character's voice distinct. The exchange about 'number value of good' and the 'theater of the absurd' line are highlights. However, some lines feel expository, and the dialogue could be more subtextual.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because it puts the audience in the hostages' shoes, questioning the plan's viability, while the media leak adds an external ticking clock. The dialogue is crisp and the tension is palpable.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is steady, with a natural rhythm of questions and answers. The scene doesn't drag, but it also doesn't accelerate; it maintains a consistent tension without peaks.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is standard and clear, with proper scene headings and action lines. The use of dual dialogue for simultaneous lines is effective, and the scene transitions smoothly.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic setup: introduction of the group, their questions, and Mendez's responses, culminating in Joe Stafford's challenge. It's a well-paced dialogue scene but lacks a clear turning point or reversal.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by highlighting the urgency of the situation through O'Donnell and Pender's dialogue. However, the stakes could be elevated further by incorporating more emotional weight or personal stakes for the characters involved, particularly for Pender, who is visibly distressed about the situation.
  • The dialogue is functional but lacks a distinct voice for each character. Pender's lines, for instance, could be more emotionally charged to reflect his anxiety about the potential fallout from the media leak. This would help differentiate him from O'Donnell and make the scene more engaging.
  • The transition from the CIA office to the Canadian Ambassador's residence feels abrupt. A brief moment of reflection or a visual cue could help bridge the two locations, emphasizing the gravity of the situation as Mendez prepares to meet the houseguests.
  • The introduction of the houseguests is somewhat flat. Instead of just stating that they are looking at Mendez like 'kids waiting to be told the lesson plan,' consider adding specific actions or expressions that convey their fear and skepticism more vividly. This would enhance the emotional stakes and make the audience more invested in their plight.
  • The dialogue about the absurdity of the cover story is a strong moment, but it could benefit from more specificity. Instead of just stating that it's 'theater of the absurd,' perhaps one of the characters could reference a specific absurdity in the situation, making it more relatable and impactful.
  • The scene ends on a somewhat ambiguous note with Mendez's admission that this would be a first for him. While this adds tension, it might be more effective to conclude with a stronger emotional beat, such as a moment of solidarity or resolve among the houseguests, to leave the audience with a sense of hope or determination.
Suggestions
  • Enhance character differentiation by giving each character a unique way of speaking or reacting to the situation, particularly in high-stress moments.
  • Incorporate more visual storytelling elements to convey the atmosphere and emotional stakes, such as close-ups of the characters' faces to capture their fear or determination.
  • Consider adding a moment of reflection for Mendez before he meets the houseguests, perhaps showing him grappling with the weight of the responsibility he carries.
  • Use specific references or anecdotes in the dialogue to ground the absurdity of the situation, making it more relatable and impactful for the audience.
  • End the scene with a stronger emotional connection among the characters, perhaps through a shared moment of resolve or a rallying cry that emphasizes their unity in the face of danger.



Scene 36 -  The Urgency of Escape
185 EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - VERANDA - NIGHT 185

Mendez comes out and lights a cigarette. Ken Taylor is
already there.

TAYLOR
We’ve got orders to close the
embassy and go back. There’s
nowhere for them to stay.


186 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - 186
NIGHT

JOE STAFFORD
I’m serious, too. This is what?

BOB ANDERS JOE STAFFORD
Don’t do this, Joe... ... the part where we say,
‘That’s so crazy it just
might work’? C’mon...

BOB ANDERS
I saw it in Burma. They get
people out. They know how.

JOE STAFFORD
Snitches in banana republics.
They get them over the border
after the coup...

BOB ANDERS JOE STAFFORD
That’s your opinion. ... pay the guards at the
crossing a hundred bucks to
look the other way...

MARK LIJEK
His opinion got us out of the
embassy in the first place.
ARGO - Final 72.


187 EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - VERANDA - NIGHT 187

MENDEZ
If we go, you need to leave *
immediately. There’s a *
danger --

TAYLOR
Pat and I discussed it. If they
catch you at the airport, they
come here and we go on trial for
harboring the enemy. It’s a risk
we took.
(after a moment)
Can you pull this off?

MENDEZ
I don’t know.


188 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - 188
NIGHT

JOE STAFFORD
-- even if they do. They find us
here, we’re not lying, we’re just
hiding. We go out there with fake
passports, we’re spies, period,
execution.

CORA LIJEK
So how long do we stay? A month?
A year?

JOE STAFFORD
That man out there, he’s got bad
cards, he’s gonna lose. If he
loses, it’s our lives.

KATHY STAFFORD
(after a beat)
And his life too. *

Another beat. ANGLES ON the Houseguests. *

CUT TO: *


189 OMITTED 189 *
ARGO - Final 73.


189A INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - 189A *
NIGHT

MENDEZ *
Your cover identities were created *
specifically for each one of you. *


Mendez, now dressed to leave, is handing each Houseguest
an envelope.

MENDEZ
What I need you to do is memorize
everything inside. Who you are,
what you are, where you’ve been.

Cora Lijek looks at a document from inside her envelope.
A union card for the Canadian Writers Guild with her
picture on it.

MENDEZ
When we’re done, you’ll know these
so well that you’ll dream as these
people.

Mendez nods at them, and goes. The Houseguests look at
what’s inside their envelopes -- all except Joe Stafford,
whose envelope remains sealed.


190 INT. SHERATON HOTEL - NIGHT 190

A TELEFAX MACHINE spells out a message, letter by letter:
“MR KEVIN HARKINS - CARE OF HOTEL SHERATON.”


191 OMITTED 191


192 INT. SHERATON ROOM - NIGHT 192

Tony is PREPPING the CANADIAN PASSPORTS -- expertly
copying Farsi stamps with a small sharpened stick. A
KNOCK on the door. Tony hides the passports. Answers
the door.

BELLHOP
Sir, a telex arrived for you.

The BELLHOP hands Tony a piece of paper. He reads it.

CUT TO:
ARGO - Final 74.


193 INT. SHERATON ROOM - NIGHT 193

Mendez takes a small 1978 model radio out of his
suitcase. He unscrews the casing and from inside takes
out what looks like a 6-inch transistor board for the
radio.

On either side of the board: telephone jacks.

He detaches the cords from the hotel phone and plugs them
into the jacks on the transistor board. It’s a phone
scrambler.

MENDEZ (V.O.)
‘The Minister of Culture and
Guidance has approved your
location scout.’


194 INT. SHERATON ROOM - A FEW MINUTES LATER 194

Mendez, on the phone --

MENDEZ
(reading the telefax)
‘He will send a representative to
meet you and your crew at the
Khayyam entrance to the Grand
Bazaar tomorrow at 3 PM.’

INTERCUT WITH:
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary At the Canadian Ambassador's residence, Mendez and Ken Taylor discuss the imminent closure of the embassy due to safety concerns for the houseguests. Inside, Joe Stafford and Bob Anders debate the viability of escaping with fake passports, with Stafford expressing doubt. Mendez emphasizes the need for immediate action and prepares the houseguests by providing them with new identities. The tension escalates as they confront the risks involved, while Mendez later sets up a phone scrambler in a hotel room to coordinate the escape plan.
Strengths
  • Effective tension-building
  • Clear setup of escape plan
  • Strong character dynamics
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Some dialogue could be more impactful

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to escalate the stakes by showing the houseguests' fear and doubt while Mendez prepares them for the risky escape, and it lands effectively through sharp dialogue and tense silences. The biggest limiter is the somewhat static nature of the living-room debate, which, while realistic, could use a more dynamic visual or action beat to break the verbal sparring and heighten the urgency.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of a fake movie as a cover for a rescue is inherently strong, and this scene deepens it by focusing on the human cost—the houseguests' fear of execution and Mendez's quiet resolve. The concept is well-executed but not entirely novel in the spy genre.

Plot: 7.5

The plot advances by setting up the immediate next step (the bazaar meeting) and reinforcing the danger of the escape plan. The scene also introduces the houseguests' dissent, which adds a layer of internal conflict that must be resolved for the plan to succeed.

Originality: 7

The scene offers a fresh take on the familiar 'reluctant team' trope by grounding it in a real historical context. The dialogue feels authentic, and the focus on the psychological preparation for a cover identity is a unique angle.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Mendez is portrayed as calm and methodical, while Joe Stafford emerges as the skeptic, providing a counterpoint that tests Mendez's authority. The other houseguests are less distinct, but their collective anxiety is palpable. The scene could deepen individual characterization, but it serves the ensemble well.

Character Changes: 3

Mendez remains steady, but the scene hints at his internal doubt ('I don't know'). Joe Stafford's resistance is a clear stance, but no character undergoes a significant change within this scene; it's more about reinforcing their positions.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to successfully execute a risky plan to rescue American diplomats from Iran. This reflects his desire to prove his capabilities and make a difference in a high-stakes situation.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to coordinate the rescue mission and ensure the safety of the American diplomats. This reflects the immediate challenge of navigating a dangerous political landscape.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 7.5

The conflict is both external (the threat of capture and execution) and internal (the houseguests' doubt and Mendez's uncertainty). The debate in the living room provides a clear clash of perspectives, while the veranda scenes add a quieter, more personal tension.

Opposition: 6.5

The opposition comes from the houseguests' skepticism, particularly Joe, and the external threat of the Iranian authorities. Mendez faces resistance from within the group, making his task harder.

High Stakes: 8.5

The stakes are life-or-death: if the plan fails, the houseguests face execution, and Mendez and the Canadians face trial. The scene reinforces this through dialogue about spies and execution.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by setting up the next phase of the plan (the bazaar meeting) and by establishing the houseguests' state of mind, which will be crucial for the escape. It also raises the stakes with the embassy closure.

Unpredictability: 6

This scene is somewhat predictable in its setup—the houseguests' doubt is expected—but the specific dynamics, such as Joe's refusal to open his envelope, add a fresh twist. The scene doesn't rely on shock but on character-driven tension.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict revolves around the characters' beliefs about risk-taking and sacrifice for a greater cause. Some characters are hesitant while others are willing to take bold actions, challenging each other's values and priorities.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The emotional impact comes from the houseguests' fear and Mendez's quiet resolve. The moment when Joe refuses to open his envelope is particularly poignant, suggesting his resistance to the plan. The scene evokes empathy for the characters' precarious situation.

Dialogue: 8

The dialogue is sharp and naturalistic, with Joe's sarcasm and Bob's counterpoint creating a realistic debate. Mendez's lines are terse and purposeful, reflecting his focus. The dialogue effectively conveys the tension without being overwrought.

Engagement: 7.5

This scene is engaging because it pits the houseguests' fear against Mendez's calm, creating a palpable tension. The debate about the plan's viability is compelling, and the quiet moments on the veranda add depth to the characters.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is deliberate, with the intercutting between veranda and living room creating a rhythm that mirrors the characters' anxiety. The scene moves at a steady clip, with dialogue-driven tension rather than action, which suits the dramatic buildup.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8.5

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and transitions. The use of asterisks for omitted lines and the intercutting are standard. The dialogue is well-parsed, and the action lines are concise.

Structure: 7.5

The scene is structured as a series of short, intercut vignettes—veranda, living room, veranda, living room—creating a rhythm that alternates between intimate two-person conversations and group tension. This structure effectively builds suspense and contrasts Mendez's private doubts with the group's public debate.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by showcasing the urgency of the situation and the conflicting emotions among the characters. Mendez's uncertainty about the escape plan contrasts well with the skepticism of the houseguests, particularly Joe Stafford, which adds depth to their characters and highlights the stakes involved.
  • The dialogue is sharp and reflects the characters' personalities and their varying degrees of trust in Mendez. However, some lines could be tightened for clarity and impact. For instance, Joe's dialogue could be more concise to maintain the scene's pacing.
  • The transition between the outdoor and indoor settings is somewhat abrupt. While it serves to emphasize the contrast between the safety of the ambassador's residence and the danger outside, a smoother transition could enhance the flow of the scene.
  • The emotional stakes are high, but the scene could benefit from more visual cues to enhance the tension. For example, incorporating more sensory details about the environment, such as the sounds of the crowd outside or the atmosphere inside the residence, could immerse the audience further into the scene.
  • The moment where Mendez hands out the envelopes is pivotal, but it lacks a strong visual or emotional anchor. A brief moment of silence or a close-up on the envelopes could heighten the significance of this action and the weight of the identities being assumed.
Suggestions
  • Consider tightening Joe Stafford's dialogue to make his skepticism more impactful and concise. This will help maintain the scene's pacing and keep the audience engaged.
  • Enhance the transition between the outdoor and indoor settings by adding a brief moment that highlights the contrast, such as a sound cue or a visual description of the chaos outside before cutting to the calm inside.
  • Incorporate more sensory details to create a richer atmosphere. Describe the sounds of the crowd, the tension in the air, or the expressions on the characters' faces to draw the audience deeper into the scene.
  • Add a visual or emotional anchor when Mendez hands out the envelopes. A close-up shot or a moment of silence could emphasize the gravity of the situation and the identities being assumed by the houseguests.
  • Consider including a moment of hesitation or doubt from the houseguests as they receive their envelopes. This could add depth to their characters and further illustrate the weight of the decision they are making.



Scene 37 -  Tensions in the Dark
195 INT. O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - NIGHT 195

O’Donnell on the phone.

O’DONNELL
They called your bluff.

MENDEZ
Or maybe they’re cooperating.

O’DONNELL
N.E. says absolutely not. Seven
Americans walking the bazaar,
you’re asking for a riot, it’s the
hive --

MENDEZ
Seven Canadians, Jack.

O’DONNELL
Never give them multiple shots at
a cover. Are they even ready?
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 75.
195 CONTINUED: 195
MENDEZ
They’re getting there.

O’DONNELL
Terrific. There’s no prize for
‘Most Improved.’

MENDEZ
(escalating)
I don’t have a choice. We say no,
they come to the residence and
pull everyone out at gunpoint.
How do you think the covers hold
up with their fingernails pulled
out?


196 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - KITCHEN - NIGHT 196

Mark Lijek is studying pages from the envelope Tony gave
him. Joe Stafford is sitting near him, having a drink,
watching Iranian State Television footage of the
Ayatollah. Joe Stafford translates out loud.

JOE STAFFORD
‘We are a nation of 35 million
and... many of these people are
looking forward to martyrdom.‘

Kathy Stafford looks into the room. Joe stops talking,
looks up.

JOE STAFFORD
(to Kathy)
Five minutes?

He smiles at her. Kathy, who looks like she hasn’t been
sleeping, nods and leaves. Joe takes a drink. After a
moment --

JOE STAFFORD
She pleaded with me.

Mark, looking to Joe. This is new.

JOE STAFFORD
When it started in the streets
nine months ago. She begged for
us to leave. She packed our bags.
I said, ‘A little longer.’ And
what I was thinking was, ‘This is
a good thing for me. Stay. Show
Newsom you’ve got the balls. Grab
for the ring.’
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 76.
196 CONTINUED: 196
JOE STAFFORD (CONT'D)
(a beat)
I think we’re gonna die here.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense night scene, O'Donnell anxiously discusses the perilous situation of seven Americans in Iran over the phone, fearing a potential riot. Mendez offers a more optimistic view, but O'Donnell remains skeptical about their safety. Meanwhile, at the Canadian Ambassador's residence, Mark Lijek studies documents while Joe Stafford translates alarming statements from Iranian State Television, reflecting on his wife's earlier warnings and their precarious fate. The conflict between O'Donnell and Mendez highlights the urgency of their escape, culminating in Joe's chilling realization that they might not survive in Iran.
Strengths
  • Emotional depth of characters
  • Tension and suspense building
  • Realistic portrayal of danger
Weaknesses
  • Some characters' reactions may feel repetitive

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene effectively advances the central conflict by showing both the operational pressure from Washington and the emotional toll on the houseguests, but its impact is limited by the fact that the kitchen confession, while poignant, feels somewhat familiar and slows the forward momentum of the escape plan.


Story Content

Concept: 6.5

The concept of cutting between a CIA argument and a personal confession is strong, but the kitchen scene's revelation (Joe's guilt over staying) is a well-worn trope in crisis dramas.

Plot: 6

The plot moves forward through the phone call (escalating stakes) and the kitchen scene (deepening character stakes), but the latter is more character-driven than plot-driven, creating a slight lull.

Originality: 6

The confession about ambition and guilt is a familiar trope, but the specific context of the Iran hostage crisis and the CIA cover story gives it a fresh angle.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Joe Stafford's confession adds depth and vulnerability, making him more than a generic hostage; Mendez and O'Donnell's argument sharpens their opposing pressures. However, the scene relies on a single character moment for emotional weight.

Character Changes: 6

Joe Stafford undergoes a significant emotional shift from stoic to vulnerable, admitting his fear and regret. This is a clear character change, though it's a revelation of existing feelings rather than a transformation.

Internal Goal: 7.5

Mendez's internal goal in this scene is to navigate a difficult situation and protect his team. This reflects his deeper need for safety, security, and loyalty to his colleagues.

External Goal: 6

Mendez's external goal is to make a decision about whether to proceed with a risky operation. This reflects the immediate circumstances of political tension and potential danger.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6.5

Conflict is present on two levels: external (Mendez vs. O'Donnell over the plan) and internal (Joe's guilt and fear). The internal conflict is more developed, but the external conflict is resolved quickly.

Opposition: 5.5

O'Donnell's bureaucratic resistance is a clear but mild opposition; the real opposition is the unseen Iranian threat and Joe's own past decisions.

High Stakes: 7.5

The stakes are life-and-death (the houseguests could be killed), but the scene focuses more on emotional stakes than immediate physical danger.

Story Forward: 5.5

The phone call advances the plot by confirming the plan is moving forward despite opposition; the kitchen scene deepens character but doesn't move the escape plot.

Unpredictability: 5

This scene is somewhat predictable in its structure—the argument followed by a confession is a common dramatic beat—but the raw honesty of Joe's lines adds a degree of surprise.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is between the characters' sense of duty and their personal safety. Mendez and O'Donnell must balance their loyalty to their country with the well-being of their team members.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

Joe's confession about his wife's pleas and his own ambition carries genuine emotional weight, but the scene doesn't fully exploit the tension of the phone call's stakes.

Dialogue: 7.5

The dialogue is sharp and natural, especially O'Donnell's bureaucratic pushback ('There's no prize for ‘Most Improved’') and Joe's raw confession. The phone call is efficient; the kitchen monologue is emotionally resonant but slightly on-the-nose.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because the phone argument raises immediate stakes, and Joe's confession provides a powerful emotional payoff that makes the audience care about the characters' fates.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the rapid-fire phone argument creates urgency, then the slower kitchen scene allows for emotional breathing room, though the latter slightly drags.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8.5

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of (CONTINUED) and (MORE) is standard and unobtrusive.

Structure: 7

The scene uses a classic cross-cut structure: a tense phone argument followed by a quiet, intimate confession. The shift in pace and location is effective but the kitchen scene feels slightly longer than necessary.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension through the dialogue between O'Donnell and Mendez, highlighting the stakes of the situation. However, the transition between the two locations (O'Donnell's office and the Canadian Ambassador's residence) could be smoother to maintain the flow of the narrative.
  • Mendez's escalating frustration is palpable, but it could be enhanced by incorporating more physical actions or expressions to complement the dialogue. This would help convey his emotional state more vividly to the audience.
  • The dialogue is strong, but it could benefit from more subtext. For instance, when Mendez mentions the potential for a riot, it would be impactful to include a line that hints at his personal stakes or fears, deepening the emotional resonance.
  • The introduction of Joe Stafford's backstory adds depth to his character, but it feels slightly abrupt. A more gradual reveal of his internal conflict regarding his wife's pleas could create a stronger emotional impact.
  • The scene's pacing is somewhat uneven. The dialogue between O'Donnell and Mendez is quick and urgent, while the transition to the Canadian Ambassador's residence slows down significantly. Balancing the pacing between these two sections could enhance the overall tension.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief moment of silence or a visual cue after O'Donnell's line about the potential for a riot, allowing the weight of the situation to sink in before transitioning to the next location.
  • Incorporate more physicality into Mendez's character during his phone call, such as pacing or fidgeting, to visually represent his anxiety and urgency.
  • Add a line or two of subtext in Mendez's dialogue that reveals his personal stakes in the mission, perhaps referencing his family or his own fears about the situation.
  • Gradually reveal Joe Stafford's backstory by having him reflect on his wife's pleas earlier in the scene, perhaps through a flashback or a more extended dialogue exchange with Mark Lijek.
  • Adjust the pacing by intercutting between O'Donnell's office and the Canadian Ambassador's residence more frequently, creating a rhythm that maintains tension while allowing for character development.



Scene 38 -  Tensions Rise at the Komiteh Headquarters
197 INT. KOMITEH HEADQUARTERS (AMIR ABAD DISTRICT) - DAY 197

The feeling here is dangerous. Young men carrying
automatic weapons casually.

Behrouz stands next to ALI KHALKALI, 30s, a Revolutionary
Committee security official. There are RECONSTRUCTED
EMBASSY PICTURES ON THE WALL.

We see the FAMOUS PICTURES OF THE HOSTAGES BEING MARCHED
DOWN THE STEPS.


197A INT. KOMITEH HEADQUARTERS STAIRWAY - CONTINUOUS ACTION 197A

A Kafka-esque stairway. We see a YOUNG KOMITEH call up
from the bottom and head up the stairs.

JUMP CUT TO: one flight to go.

Now on the level WITH CAMERA, we carry him INTO the
office as he hands off the ARGO script and STUDIO SIX
BUSINESS CARD. Khalkali has some words in Farsi for the
young man.


198 EXT. SHERATON BALCONY - MORNING 198

Tony looks at one of the Argo storyboards -- one
depicting an EXOTIC SPICE MARKET, a BAZAAR -- in the
light.

CORA LIJEK (V.O.)
This isn’t what we agreed to. *


199 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - KEN’S OFFICE - 199
MORNING

The Houseguests are gathered in the office. Cora hands
the telefax to Bob Anders. Joe Stafford, looking on.

CORA LIJEK
You said ‘a day to learn your
covers then straight to the
airport.’ You said that.

BOB ANDERS
They suspect something?


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 77.
199 CONTINUED: 199

MENDEZ
What I know is we need to act like
a movie crew. We go to the bazaar
today, we fly out tomorrow.

Silent assent among the group. Then Joe Stafford,
sitting with his wife, speaks up --

JOE STAFFORD
We won’t do it.

MARK LIJEK
He told them there were six of us.
They’re expecting six. *

JOE STAFFORD
(to Mendez)
You are about to show the only
card we’re holding. Which is that
they don’t know we’re here.

MENDEZ
I’m asking you to trust me.

JOE STAFFORD
I don’t trust you.

BOB ANDERS
(fed up, to Joe)
What’s the alternative? This is
the ball game, Joe. What world
are you living in?

JOE STAFFORD
The one where they’re hanging
people from construction cranes,
Bob.

Joe takes Kathy’s hand and goes, leaving Mendez with the
others. After a moment --

MARK LIJEK
(to Mendez)
So we’ll see you at two?
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense atmosphere at the Komiteh Headquarters, Behrouz and security official Ali Khalkali receive the Argo script from a young Komiteh member. Meanwhile, at the Sheraton balcony, Tony reviews a storyboard while Cora Lijek expresses her concerns about the plan's alignment with their agreement. At the Canadian Ambassador's residence, a heated discussion unfolds as Cora hands a telefax to Bob Anders, leading to Joe Stafford's distrust of Mendez's plan to pose as a movie crew. Despite the risks, Mark Lijek advocates for proceeding with the plan, culminating in a confirmation of a meeting with Mendez.
Strengths
  • Intense emotional conflict
  • Realistic portrayal of high-stakes decision-making
  • Strong character dynamics
Weaknesses
  • Some characters' motivations could be further explored

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

This scene's primary job is to escalate internal conflict and raise the stakes before the escape attempt, which it does effectively through sharp dialogue and mounting tension. The biggest limiter is the slightly abrupt transition from the Komiteh setup to the residence argument, which could benefit from a smoother narrative bridge to fully land the parallel threats.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of a fake film crew as a cover is already established, but this scene deepens it by showing the real-world danger (Komiteh investigating the script) and the human cost (the houseguests' fear). The concept is strong but not entirely novel.

Plot: 7.8

The plot advances by introducing a new obstacle (the Komiteh's interest in the script) and forcing a confrontation about the plan. The plot is clear and propulsive, though the Komiteh thread is briefly introduced and then set aside.

Originality: 7

The scene is original in its parallel structure—showing the enemy's investigation alongside the protagonists' argument—which heightens tension. The dialogue feels authentic to the historical situation, avoiding melodrama.


Character Development

Characters: 7.5

Characters are well-differentiated: Mendez's calm authority, Joe's fearful defiance, Bob's frustration, Mark's pragmatic focus. Joe's line about 'hanging people from construction cranes' grounds his fear in the setting. However, Cora's initial objection is quickly overridden, slightly diminishing her agency.

Character Changes: 2

Joe Stafford shows a clear stance of defiance, but no character fundamentally changes within this scene. Mendez remains steady; the group's dynamic is tested but not transformed.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to maintain trust and unity among the group of houseguests and convince them to follow his plan. This reflects his deeper need for cooperation and loyalty in a high-stakes situation.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to convince the houseguests to act like a movie crew, go to the bazaar, and fly out the next day as part of the rescue plan. This goal reflects the immediate circumstances and challenges they are facing in trying to escape safely.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8.5

Conflict is high: internal (Joe vs. Mendez, Joe vs. Bob), external (the Komiteh closing in). The argument in the residence is heated and unresolved, leaving the group fractured.

Opposition: 8

Opposition comes from both the external threat (Komiteh) and internal resistance (Joe Stafford). Joe's opposition is personal and emotional, making it a strong counterforce to Mendez's authority.

High Stakes: 9

Stakes are life-or-death: exposure means capture or death. The Komiteh's possession of the script and business card makes the threat immediate and tangible.

Story Forward: 8

The story moves forward by setting a deadline (the bazaar trip tomorrow) and raising the stakes (Komiteh investigation). The scene ends with a decision point: 'So we’ll see you at two?'

Unpredictability: 6.5

This scene is somewhat predictable in that a confrontation was expected, but the specific intensity of Joe's refusal and the Komiteh's parallel investigation add layers of tension that keep it from feeling formulaic.

Philosophical Conflict: 7.5

The philosophical conflict in this scene is between Joe Stafford's cautious and fearful approach to the situation, and Mendez's bold and risky plan. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs about trust, risk-taking, and the value of unity in a crisis.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The emotional impact comes from Joe's palpable fear and the group's desperation. The line about construction cranes is visceral. However, the scene is more intellectual than deeply emotional, focusing on argument rather than personal vulnerability.

Dialogue: 7.8

Dialogue is crisp and conflict-driven. Joe's 'I don't trust you' and Bob's 'What world are you living in?' are direct and charged. The dialogue serves character and plot efficiently, though some lines feel slightly expository (e.g., 'They’re expecting six').

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because the argument feels real and the stakes are clear. The Komiteh's discovery of the script adds a ticking clock, and the group's dissent creates uncertainty about the plan's success.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is effective: the Komiteh scenes are brief and ominous, then the residence argument builds quickly. The dialogue is snappy, and the scene ends on a question that propels forward.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

Formatting is professional: clear scene headings, proper use of CONTINUED, and action lines that are concise. The jump cut within the Komiteh stairway is effective for pacing.

Structure: 8

The scene uses a classic 'rising conflict' structure: a cold open showing the threat (Komiteh), then a direct confrontation in the residence. The ending with Mark's question leaves the conflict unresolved, driving to the next scene.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension through the dialogue and the stakes involved, particularly with Joe Stafford's vocal distrust of Mendez. However, the emotional stakes could be heightened further by incorporating more internal conflict or backstory for Joe, which would help the audience empathize with his fear and skepticism.
  • The setting transitions from the Komiteh Headquarters to the Sheraton Balcony and then to the Canadian Ambassador's residence, which can be confusing for the audience. Clearer visual transitions or establishing shots could help ground the viewer in each location and maintain clarity.
  • The dialogue is sharp and reflects the urgency of the situation, but it could benefit from more subtext. For instance, Joe's distrust could be layered with hints of personal stakes or past experiences that inform his current fears, making his objections more compelling.
  • The pacing of the scene feels slightly rushed, particularly in the transition from the Komiteh Headquarters to the discussions among the houseguests. Allowing for more pauses or reactions could enhance the tension and give the audience time to absorb the gravity of the situation.
  • The use of the phrase 'the only card we’re holding' is a strong metaphor, but it could be expanded upon. Exploring what that card represents for each character could deepen the emotional resonance of the scene.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief flashback or internal monologue for Joe Stafford that reveals his past experiences or fears, which would provide context for his distrust and enhance audience empathy.
  • Incorporate clearer visual transitions between locations to help the audience follow the narrative flow. This could be achieved through establishing shots or visual cues that signify a change in setting.
  • Enhance the dialogue with subtext by allowing characters to express their fears or doubts indirectly, which can create a richer emotional landscape and make the conflict feel more layered.
  • Slow down the pacing in certain moments to allow for character reactions and emotional beats. This could involve adding pauses after significant lines or actions to let the tension build.
  • Expand on the metaphor of 'the only card we’re holding' by having characters reflect on what that means for them personally, which could add depth to their motivations and fears.



Scene 39 -  Disguises and Dread
200 INT. CARPET FACTORY - MORNING 200

A KOMITEH BOSS inspects the work of the CARPET WEAVER
KIDS -- whose numbers have grown into the HUNDREDS -- as
they labor quietly.

Some HEADSHOTS are in various stages of repair.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 78.
200 CONTINUED: 200

Dozens of documents are now complete, sitting on the
floor in rows. Some pages from the EMBASSY MUG BOOK are
now re-assembled. The boss picks one of the pages up:
meticulously worked so that text and photos are now
intact.


201 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DAY 201

PAT TAYLOR
This one.

She gives Bob Anders a Canadian maple leaf lapel pin,
which he affixes to his shirt. Cora Lijek paints lighter
hair dye onto her hair. The Houseguests are making
subtle efforts to disguise themselves.

CORA LIJEK
(at a mirror, quoting
instructions)
So don’t be recognizable, but look
exactly like your passport
picture.

MARK LIJEK
Not that picture. You won’t want
to scare them.

A nervous smile. Trying to deal with anxiety.

Joe and Kathy Stafford look to each other. Sitting
reading newspapers while the other Houseguests prep for
the scout. The PHONE starts ringing.

PAT TAYLOR
(answering the phone)
Hello?

A cloud comes over Pat as she listens.

PAT TAYLOR
No, there’s no one like that here.

She hangs up the phone fast, as if it were hot to the
touch.

BOB ANDERS *
Who was it?

Pat shakes her head.


ON JOE STAFFORD

listening. Kathy takes his hand.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 79.
201 CONTINUED: 201

KATHY STAFFORD
(to Joe)
Somebody knows.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a carpet factory, a Komiteh Boss oversees child weavers while, at the Canadian Ambassador's residence, houseguests prepare to disguise themselves. Tensions rise as Pat Taylor receives a distressing phone call, suggesting their presence is known. Amidst the anxiety, Cora Lijek humorously dyes her hair, and light-hearted banter attempts to ease the mood. The scene concludes with a sense of uncertainty as Kathy and Joe Stafford share a moment of concern after the alarming news.
Strengths
  • Building tension
  • Effective character development
  • Setting up high stakes
Weaknesses
  • Dialogue could be more impactful in certain moments

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene effectively builds tension by cross-cutting between the enemy's progress and the houseguests' nervous preparations, but the phone call feels somewhat abrupt and underdeveloped, limiting the overall impact. A stronger buildup to the call or a clearer reaction from the group would raise the score.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of showing both sides of the cat-and-mouse game—the Komiteh repairing documents and the houseguests disguising themselves—is strong, but the execution in this snippet is brief and lacks depth.

Plot: 6.5

The plot advances the threat (Komiteh closing in) and the houseguests' response (disguises), but the phone call is a minor plot point that feels slightly clichéd.

Originality: 5

The scene is fairly conventional for a historical thriller, with standard disguise and phone-call tropes, but the focus on document repair in the carpet factory is a fresh detail.


Character Development

Characters: 6

Characters are sketched with individual anxieties (Cora's mirror quote, Joe and Kathy's silent fear), but they remain somewhat generic; Bob Anders and Pat Taylor have small moments but lack distinctiveness.

Character Changes: 1

No significant character change occurs; the houseguests remain in a state of nervous preparation, and the Komiteh boss is a flat antagonist.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal is to maintain composure and hide their anxiety while preparing for a dangerous mission.

External Goal: 7

The protagonist's external goal is to disguise themselves effectively and prepare for a scout.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 7

Conflict is external (Komiteh vs. houseguests) and internal (anxiety about discovery), but the phone call introduces a new threat without immediate escalation.

Opposition: 5

The opposition is the Komiteh boss and the unknown caller, but the boss is a distant figure and the caller is unseen, reducing the immediate sense of confrontation.

High Stakes: 8

Stakes are high—discovery means death or capture—but the scene doesn't fully exploit the tension; the phone call is a tease rather than a crisis.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by showing the Komiteh's progress and the houseguests' preparations, raising the stakes with the phone call.

Unpredictability: 4

This scene is somewhat predictable—the disguise preparations and the ominous phone call are familiar thriller tropes—but the specific details (maple leaf pin, hair dye) add a touch of authenticity.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict revolves around the tension between maintaining a facade and revealing one's true identity in a dangerous situation.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The scene generates anxiety through the disguise preparations and the ominous phone call, but the emotional impact is muted by the brevity and lack of a strong character focus.

Dialogue: 5.5

Dialogue is functional and reveals character anxiety (Cora's quote, Pat's phone response), but it's sparse and doesn't deepen relationships or conflict significantly.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because the parallel editing creates a sense of mounting danger, and the phone call injects a moment of immediate threat.

Pacing: 7

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the quick cuts between the factory and the residence create a rhythm of tension, though the carpet factory segment slows the momentum slightly.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is standard and clear, with proper scene headings and action lines, though the parentheticals in dialogue are minimal and functional.

Structure: 6

The scene uses cross-cutting between two locations, which is effective for a thriller, but the transitions are abrupt and the carpet factory segment feels disconnected from the residence.


Critique
  • The scene effectively juxtaposes the tension of the Komiteh Boss inspecting the carpet factory with the houseguests' preparations for disguise, creating a palpable sense of danger. However, the transition between these two settings could be more fluid to enhance the narrative flow. The abrupt shift from the factory to the ambassador's residence may disorient the audience.
  • The dialogue among the houseguests is light-hearted, which contrasts with the serious undertones of their situation. While humor can be a coping mechanism, it might undermine the urgency of their predicament. Consider adjusting the tone of the dialogue to reflect the gravity of their circumstances more consistently.
  • Pat Taylor's phone call introduces a moment of tension, but the scene could benefit from a clearer indication of what the call entails. The audience is left in suspense without enough context about who is calling or the implications of the conversation. This could be an opportunity to heighten the stakes further.
  • The visual elements, such as the maple leaf lapel pin and hair dye, are effective symbols of disguise and transformation. However, the scene could delve deeper into the emotional weight of these actions. How do the characters feel about altering their identities? Adding internal thoughts or reactions could enhance the emotional depth.
  • The scene ends on a note of anxiety with Kathy's line about someone knowing their whereabouts. While this is effective, it could be strengthened by showing more of the characters' reactions to this news. A brief moment of panic or a shared look of concern could amplify the tension and set the stage for the next scene.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief moment of reflection or internal dialogue from the houseguests as they prepare, allowing the audience to connect with their emotional state and the weight of their situation.
  • Enhance the transition between the carpet factory and the ambassador's residence by using a visual or auditory cue, such as a sound of a phone ringing that overlaps the scenes, to create a more seamless narrative flow.
  • Clarify the content of Pat's phone call by including a line or two that hints at the nature of the call, perhaps indicating that it is a warning or a threat, to raise the stakes and tension.
  • Incorporate more physical reactions from the characters in response to the phone call, such as a change in posture or facial expressions, to visually convey their anxiety and fear.
  • Consider adjusting the dialogue to maintain a consistent tone of urgency and tension, perhaps by reducing the humor and focusing more on the characters' fears and doubts about their escape plan.



Scene 40 -  Escape from Tehran
202 INT. SHERATON ROOM - DAY 202

Tony getting dressed. Thinking.

He gets up and leaves, and we start to hear the sound of
a man talking fast in Farsi.


203 EXT. CAR RENTAL - DAY 203

It’s a CAR RENTAL MAN, 60s, speaking. Tony is looking at
a MINIVAN on a lot of beaten-up rental cars.

MENDEZ
This one, how much? One day, how
much?


204 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DAY 204

Four of the Houseguests are waiting on the couch, dressed
in their best approximation of the clothes of a movie
scout crew. Cora has the maple leaf flag pin on her
shirt.

They turn when they see Tony come in the door.

Tony as he steps down into the living room, down the hall *
-- *


205 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - KITCHEN - DAY 205 *

... to find Joe Stafford sitting at the table. They are
badly shaken.

MENDEZ
I promise you that if you will
play along today, I will get you
out tomorrow.

JOE STAFFORD
I wish I could believe you, Mr.
Harkins.

MENDEZ
My name is Tony Mendez. *

Mendez goes back out to the minivan. STAY WITH Joe and
Kathy.
ARGO - Final 80.


206 INT. MINIVAN - DAY 206

Mendez, in the driver’s seat, looks at the house, then at
his watch. He starts up the van, filled with four of the
Houseguests.

Then he looks in the rearview and sees one of the back
doors open. Joe and Kathy Stafford board.


207 EXT. TEHRAN - DAY 207

Tony drives the minivan through streets of Tehran. The
Houseguests sit in silence, looking out the windows.
There is a vehement DEMONSTRATION going on -- stars-and-
stripes burning in Molavi Square -- and it’s taking place
right in their way.

They stop at the demonstration, then realize people
aren’t passing by as much as celebrating in the street.
Tony is forced to nose his way through the crowd --
chanting and yelling -- some SLAPPING THE WINDOWS.

They finally get through and pull away. With the
demonstration receding behind them, Tony tries to regain
their focus.

MENDEZ
Tell me who you are.

This recalls attention from the windows.

LEE SCHATZ
Mike McEwan, cameraman.

BOB ANDERS
Robert Baker, director.

MARK LIJEK
Timothy Harris, location manager.

CORA LIJEK
Mary Ann Boyd, screenwriter.

KATHY STAFFORD
Rachel Dewart, production
designer.

Kathy looks at her husband.

JOE STAFFORD
Sean Bissett, associate producer.

MENDEZ
Let’s make a movie.
ARGO - Final 81.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary Tony Mendez prepares for a high-stakes escape mission in Tehran, reassuring the Houseguests at the Canadian Ambassador's residence. As they drive through the city, they encounter a chaotic demonstration, heightening the tension. Mendez encourages the group to introduce their fake identities, solidifying their cover story. The scene captures the anxiety of the characters as they navigate danger and prepare for their escape.
Strengths
  • Tension-building
  • Character dynamics
  • Pacing
Weaknesses
  • Some characters' skepticism may be repetitive

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene effectively advances the escape plan by forcing the houseguests to commit to their roles under pressure, but the emotional stakes are undercut by the rapid-fire roll call of aliases, which feels more like exposition than character revelation. The biggest limiter is the lack of individual character depth during the identity recitation, which could be strengthened by giving each person a brief, telling reaction or hesitation.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of a fake movie production as a cover for a real escape is inherently compelling, and this scene dramatizes the first public test of that cover. However, the concept is not new to the story at this point, so the scene relies on execution rather than novelty.

Plot: 6.5

The plot moves forward clearly: the group leaves the safe house, encounters a demonstration, and rehearses their identities. The demonstration obstacle adds tension, but the scene is largely a procedural step without a major plot twist or reversal.

Originality: 6.5

The scene is original in its combination of a real historical event with a procedural rehearsal of cover identities during a dangerous drive. The roll call of aliases is a fresh take on the 'getting the team ready' trope.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

Mendez is shown as a calm leader, and the houseguests are differentiated by their names and roles, but they remain largely interchangeable in personality. Joe Stafford's earlier skepticism is not carried into this scene, missing an opportunity for character continuity.

Character Changes: 2

No character undergoes a significant change in this scene. Mendez remains determined, and the houseguests remain fearful but compliant. The scene is more about reinforcing their roles than transforming them.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to maintain his composure and confidence in front of the houseguests, despite the dangerous circumstances they are facing. This reflects his deeper need to protect and reassure the people under his care.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to navigate through the streets of Tehran and reach their destination safely, despite the obstacles and demonstrations they encounter. This reflects the immediate challenge of getting the houseguests out of Iran.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6

The primary conflict is external: navigating a hostile demonstration while maintaining the cover. There is also internal tension as the houseguests must suppress their fear, but this is not dramatized beyond silence.

Opposition: 6

The opposition is the hostile environment—the demonstration and the ever-present threat of discovery. There is no specific antagonist in this scene, but the crowd and the regime's security forces serve as opposition.

High Stakes: 8

The stakes are life-or-death: discovery means execution. The demonstration adds immediate physical danger, but the scene does not raise the stakes beyond what was already established.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by taking the first concrete step in the escape plan—leaving the safe house and testing the cover in public. It sets up the next phase of the operation.

Unpredictability: 4

This scene is somewhat predictable because the demonstration and identity rehearsal are expected steps in an escape plan. The lack of a surprise or reversal reduces unpredictability.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict in this scene is between the characters' desire for safety and freedom, and the political tensions and dangers present in Tehran. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs in his ability to protect and rescue the houseguests.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 5.5

The scene generates anxiety through the demonstration and the weight of the identity rehearsal, but the emotional impact is muted by the rapid, list-like dialogue. The silence of the houseguests conveys fear, but it is not deepened.

Dialogue: 5

The dialogue is functional and serves the plot—Mendez's 'Tell me who you are' and the roll call of aliases—but it lacks subtext or individual voice. The lines are identical in structure, making the recitation feel mechanical.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because the demonstration creates immediate physical danger, and the identity rehearsal adds procedural tension. The reader wants to know if the cover will hold.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because it starts with quiet tension (getting dressed, renting the van), builds to a peak (the demonstration), and then settles into a rhythmic roll call. The shift from action to dialogue maintains momentum.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 7

The formatting is standard and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of dashes for the roll call is efficient, though it could benefit from more descriptive action beats.

Structure: 7.5

The scene follows a classic three-part structure: setup (getting in the van), obstacle (the demonstration), and resolution (rehearsing identities). The structure is clear and effective for a thriller.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by placing the characters in a precarious situation, driving through a demonstration that symbolizes the chaos outside. However, the transition from the previous scene to this one could be smoother. The abrupt shift from Kathy's ominous statement to Mendez's confident demeanor feels jarring. A brief moment of reflection or a visual cue could help bridge this emotional gap.
  • The dialogue is functional but lacks depth. While the characters introduce themselves with their fake identities, the exchanges feel somewhat mechanical. This is a critical moment where the stakes are high, and the characters should express more anxiety or urgency about their situation. Adding emotional weight to their introductions could enhance the tension.
  • The visual elements are strong, particularly the description of the demonstration and the characters' reactions. However, the scene could benefit from more sensory details to immerse the audience further. For example, describing the sounds of the demonstration or the expressions on the characters' faces could heighten the emotional impact.
  • Mendez's character is portrayed as confident and in control, but this could be contrasted with moments of vulnerability or doubt. Showing a flicker of concern or fear in his demeanor could make him more relatable and add complexity to his character.
  • The pacing of the scene is generally good, but the transition from the car rental to the Canadian Ambassador's residence feels rushed. Taking a moment to explore Mendez's thoughts or feelings as he drives could provide insight into his character and the gravity of the situation.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief moment of reflection for Mendez after Kathy's statement to create a smoother emotional transition into the next scene.
  • Enhance the dialogue during the introductions by incorporating more emotional responses from the characters, reflecting their anxiety and fear about the escape plan.
  • Include more sensory details to immerse the audience in the scene, such as the sounds of the demonstration or the atmosphere inside the minivan.
  • Introduce moments of vulnerability for Mendez to add depth to his character, making him more relatable and complex.
  • Slow down the pacing slightly during the transition from the car rental to the Canadian Ambassador's residence to allow for character development and emotional exploration.



Scene 41 -  Cultural Misunderstandings in the Tehran Bazaar
208 EXT. STREET NEAR THE BAZAAR - DAY 208

The minivan double-parks on Musavi Street. Taxis, men
loading and unloading rolled-up carpets onto pickup
trucks, chaos.

A YOUNG MAN IN SUIT WITH NO TIE waits. This is REZA, mid-
20s, a low-level administrator in the Ministry of
Guidance.

Mendez gets out and they speak and shake hands. The
image FREEZES. In a BLACK AND WHITE PHOTOGRAPH.

They exchange pleasantries and Reza leads them down a
narrow street toward the bazaar.


209 EXT./INT. TEHRAN BAZAAR - DAY 209

Reza is leading Mendez and the group of Houseguests
through the Tehran Bazaar. A word about the place: the
world’s largest bazaar. 10 kilometers of narrow alleys.
Chinese-made Swiss watches, banks, mosques, butchers,
fabric stores, gold stands. Boys with hand-trucks loaded
down with piles of fabric cut through the crowd. Older
Islamic architecture elbows up against neon signs and
rickety wooden stands with second-story balconies like
Bourbon Street.

Bob Anders walks toward the front.

REZA
You are the director?

BOB ANDERS
Yes.

REZA
(pleasant)
Is this film a foreign bride film?

BOB ANDERS
I’m sorry?

REZA
A film where a foreign bride is
brought to Iran, but she doesn’t
understand the language and
customs and there are
misunderstandings and laughs.

BOB ANDERS
No.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 82.
209 CONTINUED: 209

REZA
(not happy with that)
Mmmm.

Mendez walking toward the back of the group. Lee, the
cameraman, is looking through a viewfinder down the alley
of the bazaar.

MENDEZ
(quiet)
Mike?

LEE SCHATZ
(not looking up)
Yeh.

MENDEZ
If I said you were looking through
the wrong end of that viewfinder,
would I be right?

Lee turns the viewfinder around and looks through it
again.

LEE SCHATZ *
Yep. *


ANGLE

Mendez talking to Lee from a distance. A zoom, a closer
snapshot of LEE. Then of CORA LIJEK, who walks through
the bazaar with an open ARGO SCRIPT in her hand.

The Revolutionary Guard photographer is taking pictures
of each of the Houseguests, picking their portraits off
one by one like a sniper.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a bustling Tehran Bazaar, Reza greets Mendez and leads him and the Houseguests through the vibrant marketplace. Miscommunication arises when Reza mistakenly believes the film is a comedy about a foreign bride, a notion Bob Anders quickly corrects. Mendez checks on cameraman Lee, who humorously struggles with his equipment. The scene captures the lively atmosphere of the bazaar, culminating in a tense moment as a Revolutionary Guard photographer takes portraits of the Houseguests.
Strengths
  • Tension-building
  • Suspenseful atmosphere
  • Character interactions
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development in the bazaar setting

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.8

This scene's primary job is to escalate tension during a seemingly routine location scout, and it succeeds through the creeping threat of the Revolutionary Guard photographer. The single biggest limiter is the somewhat flat, expositional exchange with Reza about 'foreign bride films,' which momentarily deflates the otherwise taut atmosphere; tightening that dialogue would lift the overall score.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of a fake film crew navigating a real, hostile environment is strong, and the bazaar setting provides rich, chaotic texture. The 'foreign bride film' exchange feels a bit on-the-nose as a cultural commentary, slightly weakening the otherwise clever premise.

Plot: 6.5

The plot advances the cover story's credibility test (the location scout) while introducing a new threat (the photographer). The scene is a necessary beat, but it doesn't dramatically shift the plot's trajectory.

Originality: 7

The use of a photographer as a surveillance threat is a fresh take on the 'being watched' trope. The freeze-frame into a photograph is an original visual idea. The 'foreign bride film' exchange feels a bit like a standard cultural misunderstanding joke, slightly less original.


Character Development

Characters: 6

Mendez remains the calm, observant leader, and Bob Anders shows a hint of nervousness in his role as director. The houseguests are still largely undifferentiated, and Reza is a functional but thin character.

Character Changes: 1

No significant character change occurs. Mendez remains in control, and the houseguests remain in a state of anxious compliance.

Internal Goal: 7

Reza's internal goal is to impress Mendez and the group of Houseguests with his knowledge and understanding of film.

External Goal: 7.5

Reza's external goal is to guide Mendez and the group through the Tehran Bazaar safely.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 7

The primary conflict is the external threat of exposure, embodied by the photographer. There is also a low-level internal conflict as the houseguests must maintain their cover under pressure.

Opposition: 7

The opposition is the entire environment of revolutionary Tehran, personified by the photographer and the watchful eyes of the regime. It is a diffuse but omnipresent threat, not a single antagonist.

High Stakes: 7.5

The stakes are life-or-death, but the scene focuses on a low-key, observational threat rather than an immediate confrontation, which slightly lowers the felt stakes.

Story Forward: 6.5

The scene moves the story forward by advancing the cover operation (the scout) and introducing a new layer of danger (surveillance). It is a necessary but not pivotal step.

Unpredictability: 5.5

This scene is somewhat predictable in its overall arc (a scout with hidden danger), but the specific details—the 'foreign bride film' question, the viewfinder mistake, the freeze-frame—add small, unpredictable beats that keep it from feeling rote.

Philosophical Conflict: 5

There is a philosophical conflict between Reza's view of foreign bride films and Bob Anders' dismissal of the idea. This challenges Reza's beliefs about what makes a good film.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The scene generates a steady undercurrent of anxiety, but the emotional impact is muted by the procedural nature of the scout. The final image of the photographer picking them off 'like a sniper' is the strongest emotional beat.

Dialogue: 6

The dialogue is efficient but not sparkling. The 'foreign bride film' exchange is a bit clunky, while Mendez's quiet correction to Lee about the viewfinder is a nice character moment that shows his attention to detail.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because the mundane activity of a location scout is infused with palpable danger, and the reader is constantly aware of the potential for exposure. The sniper metaphor for the photographer is a compelling hook.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness by alternating between the chaotic, sensory-rich bazaar and the quiet, tense moments of observation. The slow zoom on the photographer builds dread effectively.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8.5

The formatting is professional and clear. The use of FREEZE and BLACK AND WHITE PHOTOGRAPH is a bold, cinematic choice that is well-executed in the script format. The description of the bazaar is vivid and evocative.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic 'calm before the storm' structure: a seemingly routine activity (scout) is undercut by a growing sense of threat (the photographer). The freeze-frame and sniper metaphor provide a strong structural punctuation.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the bustling atmosphere of the Tehran Bazaar, providing a vivid backdrop that enhances the tension of the characters' situation. However, the description could benefit from more sensory details to immerse the audience further in the environment, such as sounds, smells, and the emotional reactions of the characters to their surroundings.
  • The dialogue between Reza and Bob Anders feels somewhat flat and lacks depth. While it serves the purpose of establishing the misunderstanding about the film's premise, it could be more engaging. Adding subtext or humor could make the interaction more memorable and showcase the cultural differences more effectively.
  • The moment where Mendez corrects Lee Schatz about the viewfinder is a nice touch that adds a bit of levity to the scene, but it could be expanded to show more of Mendez's leadership style. Perhaps including a brief moment of camaraderie or a light-hearted exchange could help to build the group dynamic and provide a contrast to the tension of their mission.
  • The introduction of the Revolutionary Guard photographer adds an element of danger, but the scene could heighten this tension by showing the characters' reactions to being photographed. This could serve to illustrate their anxiety and the stakes of their situation more vividly.
  • The freeze-frame moment with the handshake between Mendez and Reza is visually striking, but it may disrupt the flow of the narrative. Consider whether this moment is necessary or if it could be integrated more seamlessly into the action to maintain pacing.
Suggestions
  • Enhance the sensory details in the bazaar scene by incorporating descriptions of sounds, smells, and the emotional atmosphere to create a more immersive experience for the audience.
  • Revise the dialogue between Reza and Bob Anders to include more subtext or humor, making it more engaging and reflective of cultural misunderstandings.
  • Expand the interaction between Mendez and Lee Schatz to showcase Mendez's leadership style and build camaraderie among the group, adding depth to their relationships.
  • Show the characters' reactions to the Revolutionary Guard photographer taking their pictures to heighten the tension and illustrate the stakes of their situation more effectively.
  • Consider integrating the freeze-frame moment more fluidly into the scene to maintain narrative pacing and avoid disrupting the flow of action.



Scene 42 -  Tensions Rise in Tehran
210 EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE (TEHRAN) - DAY 210

Two sedans turn onto the property and head up the
driveway.

Ali Khalkali, the revolutionary official, gets out of one
of the cars. He’s joined by a couple other OFFICIALS and
by two armed REVOLUTIONARY GUARDS.

Sahar is moving through the garden, she sees the men
approach. She goes to greet them at the gate.

SAHAR
(Farsi, from behind
the gate)
Yes?
ARGO - Final 83.


211 OMITTED 211


212 INT. TEHRAN BAZAAR - DAY 212

Reza leads Mendez and the Houseguests deeper into this
city within a city; fundamentalist ground zero. BAZAARIS
stand at their shop doors; puzzled; unfriendly; watching
the visitors.

Kathy Stafford, the production designer on the scout,
takes a Polaroid of a window adorned in gold. The
SHOPKEEPER, a 70-ish bazaari, sees her do so.

He hurries out of his store, speaking in rapid-fire Farsi
at her. The Houseguests stop. Reza speaks to the
Shopkeeper.

REZA
(to Kathy)
He wants the photograph you took.

MENDEZ
She’s the production designer.
Her job is to take photographs.

SHOPKEEPER getting more and more heated in Farsi.

REZA
He says he did not give you
permission to take a photograph of
his store.

Other BAZAARIS and SHOPPERS are starting to gather.
Kathy holds out the Polaroid toward the Shopkeeper.

KATHY STAFFORD
He can have the photograph. Tell
him --

The Shopkeeper knocks the Polaroid out of her hand.


213 INT./EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - ENTRANCE - 213
DAY

KHALKALI
(Farsi)
When did they arrive? *

SAHAR
(Farsi)
I’m sorry?


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 84.
213 CONTINUED: 213

KHALKALI
(Farsi)
The guests of the ambassador. How
long have they been in this house?


214 INT. TEHRAN BAZAAR - DAY 214

People are now starting to surround Mendez and Reza and
the Houseguests. Bazaaris more and more heated. Women
in chadors are screaming and finger-pointing.

ANGRY MAN
(in English)
America NO!... NO!

Then he speaks in Farsi and makes shooting gestures with
his hand.

LEE SCHATZ
(quiet, to Mendez)
He’s saying the Shah killed his
son with an American gun.

Cauldron heating up and --


215 INT./EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - ENTRANCE - 215
DAY

ON Sahar -- her face impassive -- and then --

SAHAR
(Farsi)
Two days. They arrived two days
ago.

Khalkali looks to the other Officials.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary The scene unfolds with Ali Khalkali arriving at the Canadian Ambassador's residence in Tehran, where he questions Sahar about the guests. Meanwhile, in the bustling Tehran Bazaar, Reza guides Mendez and the Houseguests through a hostile environment, culminating in a confrontation when Kathy takes a photograph that angers a shopkeeper. As tensions escalate with a gathering crowd, the atmosphere remains charged and foreboding, reflecting the dangers of the revolutionary context.
Strengths
  • Effective portrayal of tension and conflict
  • Authentic cultural representation
  • Engaging character interactions
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development in this specific scene

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene effectively builds suspense through a rapidly escalating confrontation in the bazaar, but the cross-cutting to the interrogation at the residence feels disjointed and undercuts the momentum of the primary threat, limiting the overall impact.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of using a fake film scout as cover in a hostile environment is strong, and the bazaar setting provides a perfect pressure cooker for cultural friction. However, the dual-threat structure (bazaar + residence interrogation) feels slightly overstuffed for a single scene.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the cover story's peril and introduces a new threat (the interrogation at the residence), but the bazaar conflict resolves too quickly (a Polaroid photo) and the cross-cutting dilutes focus.

Originality: 6.5

The use of a fake film production as cover is a well-known historical element, but the bazaar confrontation feels fresh in its specificity (the Polaroid, the shopkeeper's reaction). The cross-cutting to the residence interrogation adds originality to the structure.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

Mendez remains calm and authoritative, but the houseguests are mostly reactive and undifferentiated. Sahar's brief appearance at the residence shows composure, but Khalkali is a generic threatening official.

Character Changes: 2

No significant character change occurs; Mendez remains in control, and the houseguests remain frightened. The scene is more about maintaining status quo under pressure.

Internal Goal: 7

Sahar's internal goal is to navigate the dangerous political landscape and protect the guests of the ambassador. This reflects her deeper desire for safety and security amidst the chaos of the revolution.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to maintain diplomatic relations and ensure the safety of the guests in the face of escalating tensions and hostility from the locals.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8.5

Conflict is high and multi-layered: external (hostile bazaaris, armed guards), internal (houseguests' fear), and escalating (the interrogation at the residence).

Opposition: 8.5

Opposition is strong and multifaceted: the hostile bazaaris, the armed guards, and the interrogating official Khalkali. The opposition is both immediate (crowd) and systemic (revolutionary authority).

High Stakes: 9

Stakes are life-or-death: exposure means arrest or death. The bazaar crowd and the interrogation both threaten immediate discovery.

Story Forward: 7

The scene advances the plot by introducing a new threat (the interrogation) and showing the cover story's vulnerability, but the bazaar incident feels like a near-miss that doesn't fundamentally alter the plan.

Unpredictability: 7.5

This scene is unpredictable because the trigger for the conflict is a seemingly innocent Polaroid photo, and the escalation feels organic and uncontrollable. The simultaneous interrogation at the residence is a surprise that raises the stakes unexpectedly.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict revolves around the clash of cultures and ideologies between the Iranians and the Americans, as seen in the anti-American sentiments expressed by the locals.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The bazaar confrontation generates genuine anxiety and fear, but the cross-cutting to the residence feels like a narrative interruption, slightly diluting the emotional arc.

Dialogue: 6

The dialogue is functional and tense, with sharp lines like 'He says he did not give you permission' and the quiet translation of the threat. However, much of the conflict is conveyed through action and description rather than dialogue.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because the bazaar confrontation escalates rapidly from a minor cultural misunderstanding to a potentially violent mob, creating visceral tension. The cross-cutting to the residence adds a second layer of threat, keeping the reader uncertain which danger will break first.

Pacing: 7

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the bazaar sequence accelerates from calm to crisis in a few lines, while the residence cuts provide a slower, more ominous counterpoint. However, the cross-cutting can feel jarring and disrupts the rhythm.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is professional and clear, with proper scene headings, character cues, and parentheticals. The use of (Farsi) and (in English) is helpful. Minor issue: the repeated 'CONTINUED' headers are unnecessary.

Structure: 6.5

The scene uses cross-cutting between two locations (bazaar and residence) to build parallel tension, but the bazaar sequence is the primary driver. The structure is effective for a thriller but the cuts feel abrupt and slightly disorienting.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the calmness of the Canadian Ambassador's residence with the escalating hostility in the Tehran Bazaar. This contrast heightens the stakes for the characters, making the audience acutely aware of the danger they face.
  • The dialogue is mostly functional, but it could benefit from more emotional depth. For instance, Sahar's responses could reflect her internal conflict or fear about the situation, adding layers to her character and making her interactions more impactful.
  • The use of Farsi adds authenticity to the scene, but it may alienate some viewers who do not understand the language. Including brief translations or subtitles could help maintain engagement without losing the cultural context.
  • The physical actions of the characters, such as Kathy holding out the Polaroid, are clear, but the emotional reactions could be more pronounced. For example, Kathy's fear or frustration could be emphasized through her body language or facial expressions, enhancing the tension of the moment.
  • The scene transitions between the Canadian Ambassador's residence and the bazaar, which is effective in maintaining a sense of urgency. However, the pacing could be improved by tightening the dialogue and actions to create a more frenetic atmosphere as the situation escalates.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding internal monologues or thoughts from Sahar to provide insight into her feelings about the revolutionary officials and the potential danger to the Houseguests.
  • Incorporate more sensory details to immerse the audience in the bazaar's atmosphere, such as the sounds of shouting, the smell of spices, or the visual chaos of the crowd, to enhance the tension.
  • Introduce a moment of hesitation or fear from Kathy before she takes the photograph, which could foreshadow the conflict that arises and make her character more relatable.
  • Add a line of dialogue from Mendez that acknowledges the rising tension in the bazaar, reinforcing his role as a leader and caretaker of the Houseguests while also heightening the stakes.
  • Consider using a visual motif, such as the Polaroid camera, to symbolize the precariousness of their situation. This could be referenced in dialogue or through character actions to create a thematic connection throughout the scene.



Scene 43 -  Tensions in the Tehran Bazaar
216 INT. TEHRAN BAZAAR - ANGLE ON MORE AND MORE BAZAARIS - 216
DAY

A CROWD starts to gather around the group.


ON KATHY

Her claustrophobia as the crowd closes in -- an ANGRY
BAZAARI WOMAN sticks her finger in Kathy’s face --

CORA LIJEK
(to one of the women)
Canada... Ca-na-da...

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 85.
216 CONTINUED: 216

She’s showing a Canadian flag, Bob Anders’ lapel button --

LEE SCHATZ
(quiet; to Mendez)
He says we’re the CIA taking
photographs to plan the bombing of
the city.


217 INT./EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - ENTRANCE - 217
DAY

Khalkali eyes Sahar, gauging her. She hides her fear
well.

KHALKALI
(Farsi)
Sister, those who are with him,
Rasool of Allah, we are tender
among ourselves.
(beat)
But stern against the kuffar.

SAHAR
As god wills it.

KHALKALI
(quoting Mossadegh)
But those who sit silently have
sinned.

Does he know? Does he not know? Is he trying to trick
her? His opacity makes it impossible to know. He holds
his look to her -- and she holds hers.


218 INT. TEHRAN BAZAAR - DAY 218

Reza indicates an exit to the street. *


219 INT./EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - ENTRANCE - 219
DAY

-- and Sahar, so dignified and stony she is almost
shaming these men --

SAHAR
Everyone in this house is a friend
of Iran.

Khalkali makes his decision. He wordlessly turns to go.
ARGO - Final 86.


220 INT. TEHRAN BAZAAR - DAY 220

The CROWD heckles the Houseguests as they walk toward the
exit.


221 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - FOYER - DAY 221

Sahar calmly closes the door.

After she does, she lets the facade go. All of a sudden
scared. Maybe she tears up. Either way, it’s clear she
knows the stakes of the game she is playing.


222 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - AFTERNOON 222

The aftermath. The Houseguests, badly shaken, come
inside. Each dealing with shock and adrenaline.

Ken Taylor comes up next to Mendez and, for once,
Taylor’s ambassadorial calm is breaking.

TAYLOR
They drew you out there to take *
your picture.

MENDEZ
Nobody broke. *

At the door to the residence, Tony can see Pat Taylor,
holding Sahar’s hand, both looking spooked as the
Houseguests come inside.

TAYLOR
(sobered now)
And tomorrow? *

A beat on Mendez, who stamps out his cigarette and
follows.

MENDEZ *
Tomorrow they’ll be ready. *

We start to hear the sound of the evening’s call to
prayer, amplified over a megaphone, in the distance.
Then --


223-224 OMITTED 223-224
ARGO - Final 87.


224A MONTAGE - EXT. TEHRAN - DUSK 224A

The call to prayer echoing as night falls in Tehran. In
an alley where cloaked women hurry past posters of
Khomeini. On a street where a five-year-old boy, in the
care of his eight-year-old brother, watches a pickup
truck of armed komiteh speed past.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In the crowded Tehran Bazaar, Kathy feels overwhelmed as an angry local confronts her, while Cora Lijek tries to ease the tension by mentioning Canada. Lee Schatz discreetly warns Mendez about accusations of being CIA agents. At the Canadian Ambassador's residence, Khalikali questions Sahar about their loyalty, but she remains composed. The Houseguests, shaken by the hostility they faced, express concern about their safety. Mendez reassures Ken Taylor that they held up under pressure, as the scene concludes with the evening call to prayer echoing through the city.
Strengths
  • Effective tension-building
  • Authentic character reactions
  • Compelling conflict escalation
Weaknesses
  • Potential lack of character development in the midst of heightened tension

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to escalate tension and test the characters' nerve, which it does effectively through the bazaar confrontation and the Khalkali visit. The biggest limiter is the somewhat abrupt transition between the two locations, which could be smoothed for greater cohesion, and the lack of a clear turning point within the scene itself.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of placing the houseguests in a public, hostile environment while simultaneously having a revolutionary official probe the embassy is a strong dramatic choice that raises the stakes and tests the cover story.

Plot: 7.5

The scene advances the plot by introducing a direct threat to the operation (the bazaar crowd and Khalkali's visit) and showing the characters' resilience, but it doesn't resolve the central conflict, maintaining suspense.

Originality: 8

The scene offers a fresh take on the spy thriller by focusing on the mundane dangers of a cover story, such as a shopkeeper's anger over a photo, rather than just gunfights. The use of a bazaar as a setting is authentic and adds texture.


Character Development

Characters: 7

The scene reveals character through reactions under pressure: Kathy's claustrophobia, Cora's quick thinking, Sahar's stoic bravery, and Mendez's calm assessment. However, the characters are mostly reactive, with little new depth added.

Character Changes: 4

The characters are tested but do not undergo significant change; they remain in survival mode. Sahar shows a brief crack in her facade, but it's a momentary reveal rather than a transformation.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to maintain composure and hide her fear while facing a potentially dangerous situation. This reflects her deeper need for survival and the desire to protect herself and those around her.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to navigate the tense situation at the Canadian Ambassador's Residence and ensure the safety of herself and the Houseguests. This goal reflects the immediate challenge of dealing with suspicious individuals and potential threats.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8.5

Conflict is high, both external (the hostile crowd, Khalkali's interrogation) and internal (the characters' fear and composure). The scene is built around escalating tension.

Opposition: 8.5

The opposition is formidable: a hostile crowd, a suspicious revolutionary official, and the ever-present threat of exposure. The characters are outnumbered and outgunned.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are life-and-death, as the houseguests could be captured or killed if their cover is blown. The scene makes this palpable.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by raising the stakes and confirming the danger, but it doesn't introduce new information or a major plot twist; it's more of a tension-building beat.

Unpredictability: 7.5

The scene is unpredictable because the outcome of the bazaar confrontation and Khalkali's visit is uncertain, and the characters' fates hang in the balance.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the themes of loyalty, deception, and survival. The protagonist must navigate the complex web of allegiances and risks in order to protect herself and her mission.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7.5

The scene generates significant emotional impact through the visceral fear of the bazaar crowd and the quiet dread of Khalkali's visit, but the emotional payoff is somewhat muted by the quick resolution.

Dialogue: 7.5

Dialogue is sparse but effective, with lines like 'Canada... Ca-na-da...' and 'Nobody broke.' carrying weight. The exchange between Khalkali and Sahar is layered with subtext, though some dialogue feels expository.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it places beloved characters in immediate danger, with the bazaar crowd and Khalkali's visit creating a double threat that keeps the reader on edge.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is tight, with quick cuts between the bazaar and the residence, maintaining a sense of urgency. The scene moves at a brisk clip, though the resolution feels slightly rushed.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The intercutting is indicated properly, though the transition between locations could be smoother.

Structure: 7.5

The scene uses a classic tension-building structure: setup (bazaar), escalation (crowd), intercut with a parallel threat (Khalkali), and a brief resolution (escape and aftermath). It's effective but could benefit from a clearer climax.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension through the claustrophobic atmosphere of the Tehran Bazaar, showcasing the danger the characters face. However, the dialogue could be more dynamic; the exchanges feel somewhat flat and could benefit from more emotional weight or urgency to reflect the high stakes of the situation.
  • The use of Farsi dialogue adds authenticity, but it may alienate viewers who do not understand the language. Consider providing subtitles or context to ensure the audience remains engaged and understands the implications of the conversation.
  • The character of Sahar is portrayed as strong and composed, which is commendable. However, her emotional shift after closing the door could be more pronounced. This moment is crucial for conveying the stakes and her internal conflict, and it could be enhanced with more descriptive action or internal monologue.
  • The transition between the bazaar and the ambassador's residence feels abrupt. A smoother transition could help maintain the tension and flow of the narrative. Perhaps a brief moment of reflection or dialogue could bridge these two locations more effectively.
  • The montage at the end serves as a powerful visual cue, but it could be more impactful if it tied back to the characters' emotional states. Consider incorporating visual motifs or symbols that resonate with the characters' experiences to deepen the audience's connection to their plight.
Suggestions
  • Revise the dialogue to include more emotional stakes, perhaps by having characters express their fears or doubts more explicitly, which would heighten the tension.
  • Add subtitles for the Farsi dialogue to ensure all viewers can follow the conversation and understand its significance.
  • Enhance Sahar's emotional moment after closing the door by adding a brief internal monologue or physical reaction that conveys her fear and the gravity of the situation.
  • Create a more seamless transition between the bazaar and the ambassador's residence by including a moment of reflection or dialogue that highlights the characters' feelings about their precarious situation.
  • Consider incorporating visual elements in the montage that reflect the characters' emotional states, such as close-ups of their faces or symbolic imagery that resonates with their experiences.



Scene 44 -  Under Pressure: The Interrogation
224B INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - NIGHT 224B

Mendez holds a passport and some papers in front of Bob
Anders’ face. It feels late. The Houseguests are tired,
sweating, sitting around a dining room. Mendez, sleeves
rolled up, drilling them. The ARGO STORYBOARDS are
scattered around the room.

MENDEZ
Where was your passport issued?

Bob Anders doesn’t know. ANGLES ON the Houseguests.

ANDERS
Vancouver.

MENDEZ
Where were you born?

BOB ANDERS
Toronto.

MENDEZ
Toronno like piranha. Canadians
don’t pronounce the T.

LEE SCHATZ
Some border guard’s gonna know
that?

MENDEZ
If you’re held for questioning,
they’ll bring in somebody who
knows that.

MENDEZ
(to Cora Lijek)
Last three Canadian prime
minsters.

CORA LIJEK
(an A student)
Trudeau, Pearson, Diefenbaker.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 88.
224B CONTINUED: 224B

MENDEZ
Good.
(to Joe Stafford)
Your job on the film.

JOE STAFFORD
Producer.

MENDEZ
Associate Producer. What’s the
name of the last film you worked
on?

JOE STAFFORD
Uh... High and Dry.

MENDEZ
Who paid for the movie?

JOE STAFFORD
C.F.D.C.

MENDEZ
What’s your middle name?

Joe Stafford is silent. He looks down to consult the
paper in front of him, but before he can, Mendez pulls
the paper.

MENDEZ
He’s an American spy. Shoot him.

A beat on Stafford, frustrated --

MENDEZ
They’ll try to break you by
getting you agitated. You need to
know your résumé so well that you
don’t flinch.

JOE STAFFORD
(nearly defeated,
looking away)
You think your little story will
matter when there’s guns to our
heads?

MENDEZ
My story’s the only thing between
you and the gun to your head.

A beat. Mendez puts the résumé back in front of
Stafford. Kathy looks at her husband: he just isn’t
good at this.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 89.
224B CONTINUED: (2) 224B

MENDEZ
Let’s go again.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense interrogation at the Canadian Ambassador's residence, Mendez quizzes the Houseguests on their personal details to ensure they can convincingly pose as Canadians. Bob Anders struggles with his answers, while Cora Lijek impressively recalls the last three Canadian prime ministers. Joe Stafford falters when asked for his middle name, raising Mendez's suspicions about his identity. The atmosphere is filled with anxiety as Mendez emphasizes the importance of knowing their backstories to avoid panic. The scene ends with Mendez instructing them to try again, highlighting the ongoing tension and urgency of their situation.
Strengths
  • Intense atmosphere
  • Character development under pressure
  • Plot progression
Weaknesses
  • Some characters' reactions may feel predictable

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

The scene effectively establishes the tension of the cover-story preparation and the stakes involved, but it is somewhat repetitive in its drill format and lacks a clear turning point or escalation, which limits its overall impact. A stronger sense of progression or a specific breakthrough moment would lift it.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of drilling the houseguests on their fake identities is a strong, concrete way to dramatize the psychological pressure of the mission. It's a fresh take on the 'preparation' phase of a heist/escape thriller.

Plot: 5.5

The plot advances the preparation phase, but the scene is a single, static drill without a clear narrative progression or new complication. It reinforces the stakes but doesn't move the story forward in a significant way.

Originality: 6.5

The drill format is a familiar trope, but the specific details (Canadian pronunciation, prime ministers, film credits) and the visceral 'Shoot him' line give it a fresh, authentic feel. The dialogue feels true to the period and situation.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Mendez is shown as a demanding, no-nonsense instructor. Joe Stafford's frustration and defeat are well-drawn, and Kathy's silent observation adds depth. However, the other houseguests are largely interchangeable in their responses.

Character Changes: 4

Joe Stafford shows a moment of near-defeat, questioning the plan's value. This is a small but significant shift from his earlier state. Mendez remains unchanged, reinforcing his role as the unyielding instructor.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to maintain composure and knowledge under pressure, reflecting his need to protect the Houseguests and his own credibility.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to extract information from the Houseguests to ensure their safety and successful escape from Iran.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 6.5

The conflict is internal (Stafford's frustration and fear) and external (Mendez's relentless drilling). The stakes are life-or-death, but the conflict is contained within the drill, lacking a direct antagonist.

Opposition: 5

The opposition is internal (the houseguests' fear and forgetfulness) and abstract (the potential interrogators). There is no direct antagonist present, which lowers the immediate opposition.

High Stakes: 8.5

The stakes are explicitly life-or-death, as Mendez's 'Shoot him' line makes clear. The drill is a direct rehearsal for a potential interrogation that could end in execution.

Story Forward: 4.5

The scene shows the preparation for the escape, but it doesn't introduce new information or a new obstacle. It reinforces the stakes and the difficulty of the task, but the story's forward momentum is minimal.

Unpredictability: 5.5

This scene is somewhat predictable in its drill format, but the 'Shoot him' line is an unpredictable and effective escalation that breaks the pattern.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict is between truth and survival. The characters must balance revealing information to survive while also maintaining their integrity.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The scene generates anxiety and frustration, particularly through Stafford's visible defeat. However, the repetitive nature of the drill dampens the emotional arc, and the impact is more intellectual than visceral.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue is sharp and functional, with Mendez's corrections ('Toronno like piranha') and the 'Shoot him' line being particularly effective. However, the back-and-forth drill format becomes somewhat repetitive.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because the rapid-fire Q&A and the life-or-death stakes create a palpable tension. The 'Shoot him' line is a jolt that reframes the entire exercise.

Pacing: 7.5

The pacing of the scene is brisk and rhythmic, with the quick questions and answers creating a sense of urgency. The beat after 'Shoot him' allows the tension to land before the reset.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear character headings and action lines. The use of ANGLES ON and CONTINUED is standard. No issues.

Structure: 6.5

The scene follows a classic drill structure: a series of questions and corrections, building to a climactic moment (the 'Shoot him' line) and then a reset. This is effective for the genre but lacks a traditional three-act shape.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension through Mendez's interrogation of the Houseguests, showcasing the high stakes of their situation. However, the pacing feels slightly uneven; while the tension is palpable, the dialogue could benefit from more variation in rhythm to maintain engagement.
  • Mendez's character is well-defined as a leader under pressure, but the scene could delve deeper into the emotional states of the Houseguests. For instance, Bob Anders's struggle with his answers could be expanded to show his internal conflict, making the stakes feel even more personal.
  • The dialogue is functional but lacks a certain depth that could enhance character development. For example, Joe Stafford's frustration could be expressed through more nuanced dialogue or actions, rather than simply stating his defeat. This would allow the audience to empathize more with his plight.
  • The use of humor, such as Mendez's quip about the pronunciation of 'Toronto,' is a nice touch, but it could be more strategically placed to break the tension without undermining the seriousness of the situation. Balancing humor with the gravity of the moment is crucial.
  • The scene ends abruptly after Mendez's instruction to 'go again,' which feels somewhat anticlimactic. A stronger closing line or moment could leave the audience with a lingering sense of urgency or dread, enhancing the overall impact.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding more internal monologue or visual cues to express the Houseguests' anxiety and fear, particularly in Bob Anders and Joe Stafford's reactions. This could help the audience connect more deeply with their characters.
  • Incorporate more varied pacing in the dialogue to create a rhythm that reflects the tension of the scene. Short, clipped exchanges can heighten urgency, while longer, more reflective moments can deepen emotional resonance.
  • Enhance the stakes by including a brief flashback or memory that highlights the consequences of failure for the characters, particularly for Joe Stafford. This could serve to heighten the emotional stakes and make the audience more invested in their success.
  • Introduce a moment of levity or camaraderie among the Houseguests before the interrogation begins to contrast with the tension that follows. This could make the stakes feel more significant when they are put under pressure.
  • Revise the ending to include a more impactful line or moment that encapsulates the gravity of their situation, perhaps a shared look of determination among the Houseguests or a reminder of what is at stake if they fail.



Scene 45 -  Urgent Decisions
224C INT. CIA - THE PIT - AFTERNOON 224C

O’Donnell, walking toward his office. It’s the first
time today Malinov has seen him.

MALINOV
(good news)
They made it through the location
scout.

O’Donnell ignores him. He goes straight to his office.
Looking like he’s seen a ghost.


224D EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - VERANDA - NIGHT 224D

Mendez, finishing a cigarette outside. We might hear the
distant sound of a phone ringing.

Ken Taylor emerges. Waits a beat.

TAYLOR
Kevin.


224E INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - KEN TAYLOR’S 224E
OFFICE - CROSS-CUTTING - NIGHT

Mendez picks up the complicated-looking satellite phone
in Ken Taylor’s home office. As soon as he does --

O’DONNELL
Go to black on green.

Jack’s calling him here, so he knows something’s wrong.

MENDEZ
What is it?

O’DONNELL
Go to black on green.

Mendez turns knobs on the satellite phone.


224F INT. O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - CROSS-CUTTING - AFTERNOON 224F

We see Jack is on a GREEN PHONE.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 90.
224F CONTINUED: 224F

O’DONNELL
It all just changed. They called
the game. You’ve got to come
back.

ON Mendez, not believing what he’s hearing.

O’DONNELL
(quiet, fast, clear)
Joint Chiefs are planning a
military rescue of the hostages in
a month. Delta Force started
training to storm the grounds. So
if the six of them get brought
down there, they won’t be held for
long.

MENDEZ
I never would have exposed them if
I wasn’t authorized to take them
out.

O’DONNELL
It’s over, Tony.

MENDEZ
They will be taken. Probably not
ALIVE --

O’DONNELL
LISTEN TO ME. The thinking’s
changed. Six Americans get pulled
out of a Canadian diplomat’s house
and executed, it’s another world
outrage. Six Americans get caught
playing movie make-believe with
the CIA at the airport and
executed, it’s a national
embarrassment. They’re calling
the operation.

MENDEZ
We’re responsible for those
people.

O’DONNELL
(genuinely sad)
What we are is required to follow
orders. I’m sorry.

Mendez hangs up. O’Donnell sits listening to the dial
tone for a moment, then puts the phone on the receiver.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 91.
224F CONTINUED: (2) 224F

Then, very suddenly, he looks at an old coffee cup near
him and backhands it off his desk.

TIME CUT TO:


224G INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - KEN TAYLOR’S 224G
OFFICE - NIGHT

Maybe only a minute, maybe ten or more have passed.
Mendez sits at Taylor’s desk, numb. Cora Lijek knocks
but doesn’t get a response. She tentatively opens the
door and sticks her head inside.

CORA LIJEK
We’re ready to try again.

MENDEZ
(after a beat)
I think the most important thing *
you can do to be ready for
tomorrow is rest.

TIME CUT TO:
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense scene, O'Donnell arrives at the CIA office to inform Mendez that a military rescue operation for the hostages is being called off due to a change in strategy. Mendez, deeply concerned for the safety of the six Americans, struggles with the decision to abandon the mission. As he processes the shocking news, Cora Lijek enters, suggesting they are ready to try again, but Mendez advises her to rest, highlighting the emotional weight of the situation.
Strengths
  • Intense emotional impact
  • Compelling character development
  • High stakes and tension
Weaknesses
  • Potential lack of resolution or closure in the scene

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to deliver the operation's cancellation and Mendez's emotional fallout, which it does with sharp, efficient dialogue and a powerful final image. The single biggest limiter is the abrupt transition from the phone call to Cora's entrance, which undercuts the emotional resonance by cutting away too quickly; extending that moment of numbness would have deepened the impact.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of a mission being aborted at the last minute is a classic thriller trope, but the execution here is strong: the use of a secure phone call to deliver the news, the contrast between the two locations, and the focus on Mendez's personal responsibility elevate it beyond a simple plot device.

Plot: 7

The plot advances significantly: the operation is called off, raising the stakes and forcing Mendez into a moral dilemma. The scene is a turning point, but the plot mechanics are straightforward—a phone call delivering bad news—and the scene's brevity limits the development of the consequences.

Originality: 7.5

The scene is original in its focus on the bureaucratic and political reasons for aborting a mission, rather than a simple action set-piece. The dialogue is authentic to the period and the characters' roles.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Mendez is shown as a professional who is emotionally invested in the people he's responsible for, but his reaction is mostly internalized. O'Donnell is portrayed as a conflicted bureaucrat, but his character is somewhat one-dimensional in this scene. Cora's brief appearance adds a touch of humanity but is underutilized.

Character Changes: 6

Mendez undergoes a significant change: from confident operative to a man facing the failure of his mission. However, the change is not fully explored; we see the numbness but not the subsequent decision to defy orders, which would be a more substantial change.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to protect the hostages and ensure their safety. This reflects his sense of duty and responsibility as a CIA agent.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to execute a plan to rescue the hostages from Iran. This goal is directly related to the immediate circumstances and challenges they are facing.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 7

The conflict is primarily internal for Mendez, but it's also external between him and O'Donnell. The tension is high, but the conflict is resolved quickly (Mendez hangs up), leaving little room for escalation.

Opposition: 7

The opposition comes from O'Donnell and the CIA hierarchy, who are not malicious but are following orders that conflict with Mendez's goals. This is a more subtle form of opposition, but it is effective.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are extremely high: the lives of six people are at risk, and the political consequences of their capture are severe. The scene makes this clear through O'Donnell's dialogue.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by introducing a major obstacle: the operation is cancelled, forcing Mendez to choose between following orders and saving the houseguests. This sets up the next act of the story.

Unpredictability: 8

The scene is unpredictable because the audience expects the mission to proceed, but the phone call reveals a sudden change in plans. The twist is well-executed and not foreshadowed, making it a genuine surprise.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the morality of sacrificing the hostages for political reasons. The protagonist's beliefs in duty and responsibility are challenged by the orders he receives.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The emotional impact is strong due to the sudden reversal of fortune and Mendez's visible shock. However, the scene cuts away too quickly, preventing the audience from fully sitting with the emotional weight.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue is sharp and functional, especially O'Donnell's explanation of the political calculus. However, the exchange is brief and lacks the emotional depth that could have been explored in a longer conversation. The final line from Cora is a nice contrast but feels abrupt.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it delivers a major plot twist that raises the stakes and creates a moral dilemma for the protagonist. The tension is palpable, and the audience is left wondering what Mendez will do next.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is brisk, with the phone call delivering information quickly and efficiently. The cross-cutting between locations maintains momentum, but the final beat with Cora feels rushed, cutting off the emotional aftermath.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and cross-cutting notation. The use of 'TIME CUT TO' is appropriate, and the dialogue is properly formatted. No issues.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic structure: setup (O'Donnell's entrance), inciting incident (the phone call), rising action (the argument), climax (Mendez hanging up), and resolution (Cora's entrance). The cross-cutting between locations is effective, but the resolution is abrupt.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension through the use of cross-cutting between O'Donnell's office and Mendez's location, creating a sense of urgency and impending danger. However, the emotional weight of Mendez's situation could be enhanced by incorporating more internal conflict or visual cues that reflect his distress, rather than relying solely on dialogue.
  • O'Donnell's dialogue is clear and conveys the gravity of the situation, but it could benefit from more emotional depth. As he delivers the news about the military operation, adding a moment of hesitation or a personal reflection could make his character more relatable and the stakes feel higher.
  • The transition between scenes could be smoother. The abrupt cut to Mendez sitting at Taylor's desk feels jarring. A more gradual transition, perhaps through a visual cue or a brief moment of silence, could enhance the emotional impact of Mendez's realization of the situation.
  • Cora Lijek's entrance is a good moment of contrast, but her line about being ready to try again feels somewhat disconnected from the gravity of Mendez's situation. It might be more effective if she expresses concern or confusion about the news, which would highlight the tension between her optimism and Mendez's despair.
  • The use of the satellite phone as a plot device is effective, but the technical jargon ('Go to black on green') may alienate some viewers. Simplifying this language or providing a brief explanation could help maintain engagement without losing authenticity.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a visual element that reflects Mendez's emotional state, such as a close-up of his face showing the weight of the news or a physical action that conveys his shock, like gripping the desk tightly.
  • Enhance O'Donnell's character by including a moment of vulnerability or personal stakes in the situation, which could make his decision to follow orders more impactful.
  • Smooth the transition between scenes by incorporating a brief moment of silence or a visual cue that signifies the passage of time, allowing the audience to absorb the weight of the conversation.
  • Revise Cora's dialogue to reflect a more nuanced understanding of the situation, perhaps by expressing concern for the hostages or questioning Mendez's plan, which would create a stronger emotional contrast.
  • Simplify the technical language used in the phone conversation to ensure clarity for all viewers, possibly by having O'Donnell explain the significance of the terms in a more relatable way.



Scene 46 -  A Toast to Tension
225 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - LIVING ROOM - 225
NIGHT

Now the mood among the Houseguests is lighter. Bob
Anders, a handful of liquor bottles in his arms, puts
them down on a table. Music plays on a record player.

BOB ANDERS
Scorched earth policy tonight.
Nothing gets left.

Taylor comes in, drink in hand, thoughts heavy, looks at
Tony.

MENDEZ
So you know. *

TAYLOR
(nods)
ExtAff wants you to burn the
passports before you leave.

Mendez looks at the Houseguests, setting the table.

TAYLOR
If we tell them, they’ll panic.
It’s better if you just don’t
show.
(a beat)
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 92.
225 CONTINUED: 225
TAYLOR (CONT'D)
It was always a fucked mission.
You came closer than anybody else.

Kathy and Cora are cracking each other up.

No one sees Mendez take a bottle of Macallan from the
table and put it in his bag.


226 INT. CAR - NIGHT 226

Mendez drives through nighttime Tehran, back to the
hotel.

There is a dangling TOTEM from the rearview mirror. It
reflects light.

He passes a VAN ON FIRE.


227 OMITTED 227


228 INT. SHERATON ROOM - NIGHT 228

Mendez takes the bottle of Macallan from his bag. He
takes a drink, then drinks more. *


229 OMITTED 229 *


230 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - DAY 230

Chambers, listening on a phone, shakes his head at
Siegel. He hangs up.

CHAMBERS
It’s off. They want us to pack up
the office.

A beat on Lester. He’s devastated but he’s not showing *
it. *

SIEGEL *
They can wait. Let’s go get a *
drink. *


231 EXT. TEHRAN - DAWN 231

The city waking up.
ARGO - Final 93.


232 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DAWN 232

The Houseguests, getting dressed. Suiting up for the
airport.

Ken Taylor watches in the hall.


233 INT. SHERATON ROOM - DAWN 233

Mendez -- who looks like he hasn’t slept -- sits at a
table, looking out the window.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary At the Canadian Ambassador's residence, the atmosphere is a mix of lightheartedness and underlying tension as the Houseguests prepare for a critical situation. Bob Anders attempts to lighten the mood with jokes about liquor, while Taylor delivers a serious warning to Mendez about the need to burn passports to avoid panic. Mendez, feeling the weight of the moment, discreetly takes a bottle of whiskey. The scene shifts to Mendez driving through Tehran, passing a burning van, and later drinking alone in his hotel room, reflecting on the gravity of their circumstances.
Strengths
  • Tension-building
  • Emotional depth
  • Dramatic twist
Weaknesses
  • Limited external conflict
  • Some dialogue could be more impactful

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.8

This scene's primary job is to deliver the emotional aftermath of the mission's cancellation, and it lands that with poignant restraint through Mendez's silent actions and the houseguests' unaware joy. The single biggest limiter is the lack of direct confrontation or catharsis, which keeps the emotional impact somewhat muted and the scene feeling more like a bridge than a climax.


Story Content

Concept: 6.5

The concept of showing the mission's failure through the contrast of the houseguests' party and Mendez's quiet despair is strong, but it's a familiar dramatic beat in rescue-mission narratives.

Plot: 6

The plot advances the story by confirming the mission is off and showing Mendez's reaction, but it's a reactive, not proactive, scene.

Originality: 5.5

The scene is not highly original in its concept (the failed mission aftermath), but the execution—particularly the visual of Mendez stealing the whiskey—feels authentic and fresh.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Mendez's character is deepened through his silent grief and the small act of taking the whiskey, but the houseguests remain somewhat one-dimensional in their oblivious joy.

Character Changes: 4

Mendez shows a shift from active agent to passive mourner, but the change is subtle and not fully developed in this scene alone.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to maintain composure and make difficult decisions under pressure. This reflects his need for control and his fear of failure in a high-stakes situation.

External Goal: 5

The protagonist's external goal is to successfully extract the Houseguests from Tehran without alerting the authorities. This reflects the immediate challenge of navigating a dangerous political situation.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 4.5

The conflict is internal (Mendez vs. his own failure) and external (the mission's cancellation), but it's low-key and simmering rather than explosive.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is abstract—the political situation and the orders from ExtAff—rather than a tangible antagonist, which reduces the sense of direct conflict.

High Stakes: 7

The stakes are high (the houseguests' lives), but the scene focuses on the emotional fallout rather than the immediate danger.

Story Forward: 5

The scene moves the story forward by confirming the mission's end and setting up Mendez's departure, but it's a pause in the action.

Unpredictability: 4.5

This scene is somewhat predictable in its emotional arc—the mission's failure and Mendez's despair are expected—but the small detail of him stealing the whiskey adds a touch of unpredictability.

Philosophical Conflict: 5.5

The philosophical conflict in this scene is between the protagonist's duty to protect the Houseguests and the ethical dilemma of withholding information from them for their safety. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs about honesty and transparency.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The emotional impact is strong in its quiet way—Mendez's solitary drinking and the houseguests' laughter create a poignant contrast—but it lacks a cathartic release.

Dialogue: 6.5

The dialogue is sparse and effective, with Taylor's resigned 'It was always a fucked mission' carrying weight, but the scene relies more on visual storytelling than verbal exchange.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because of the emotional contrast between the houseguests' joy and Mendez's silent grief, creating a poignant tension that holds the reader's attention.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing is deliberately slow and contemplative, allowing the emotional weight to sink in, but it may feel too languid for some readers.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8.5

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines that effectively convey mood and movement.

Structure: 7

The structure is a classic 'calm before the storm' or 'aftermath' sequence, with a clear setup (party), complication (Taylor's news), and resolution (Mendez's solitary drinking). It serves the genre well but lacks a strong turning point.


Critique
  • The scene effectively shifts the mood among the Houseguests from tense to lighter, which is a welcome contrast given the high stakes of their situation. However, the transition feels somewhat abrupt. The dialogue could benefit from more subtlety to reflect the underlying tension despite the lighter mood, as the characters are still in a precarious situation.
  • Bob Anders' line about a 'scorched earth policy' is humorous but may come off as flippant given the gravity of their circumstances. This could undermine the tension that should still be present. It might be more effective if the humor was more understated or if it was followed by a moment of reflection on the seriousness of their situation.
  • Mendez's reaction to Taylor's news about burning the passports is crucial, but it lacks emotional depth. The scene could explore Mendez's internal conflict more, perhaps through a brief moment of hesitation or a visual cue that indicates his stress about the decision.
  • The introduction of the Macallan whiskey bottle serves as a symbol of Mendez's stress and coping mechanism, but it could be more explicitly tied to his emotional state. A brief moment of contemplation before he takes the drink could enhance the audience's understanding of his character's turmoil.
  • The pacing of the scene feels uneven. The transition from the lighter mood to Mendez's solitary moment in the Sheraton room could be smoother. A more gradual build-up to Mendez's isolation would enhance the emotional impact of the scene.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment where the characters acknowledge the absurdity of their situation, perhaps through a shared laugh that quickly turns into a moment of silence, reinforcing the tension beneath the humor.
  • Enhance Mendez's internal conflict by including a visual cue or a brief flashback that highlights the stakes involved in burning the passports, making his decision feel more weighty.
  • Introduce a moment where Mendez interacts with the Houseguests before he isolates himself, perhaps sharing a toast or a brief conversation that highlights their camaraderie, which would make his later solitude more poignant.
  • Incorporate a line or two that reflects the characters' awareness of the danger they are in, even in lighter moments, to maintain a consistent tone throughout the scene.
  • Consider using the music playing in the background as a narrative device to reflect the mood shifts in the scene, perhaps starting with something upbeat and transitioning to a more somber tune as Mendez leaves.



Scene 47 -  Dawn of Tension
234 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DAWN 234

Lee Schatz puts his Infant of Prague holy card into an
Argo script. Packs the script.

Cora Lijek is sitting next to her husband.

Kathy Stafford looks at the clock.

KATHY STAFFORD
(to Joe Stafford)
He’s late.


235 EXT. SHERATON BALCONY - DAWN 235

Tony comes out to the balcony with a hotel ice bucket in
one hand and the Canadian passports in the other. He
puts the passports in the bucket, LIGHTS A MATCH.

He looks down at the match, at the passports. The first
stirring of the morning calls-to-prayer echo in the
distance.

HOLD for a long beat ON Tony. Thinking.

Then, HE BLOWS OUT THE MATCH.


236 INT. O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - NIGHT 236

O’Donnell is packing up for the night. Paper towels sit
on top of the coffee spill on his rug.

His phone rings. He picks up.

O’DONNELL
Yeah.
ARGO - Final 94.


237 INT. SHERATON ROOM - DAWN 237

MENDEZ
Somebody is responsible for things
when things happen, Jack. I am
responsible.
(a beat)
I’m taking them through.

And before Jack can answer, Tony hangs up. Stands. A
duffel bag over his shoulder, Tony turns out the light in
the hotel room. Goes.


238 INT. CIA (LANGLEY) - O’DONNELL’S OFFICE - NIGHT 238

O’Donnell, thinking. Looking at the phone. Then, with a
sudden decision, he gets up.

Rushing out of his office, into --


239 INT. CIA - THE PIT - NIGHT 239

-- where he catches ALAN SOSA, 50s, head of the
Directorate of Support -- the CIA’s chief financial
officer -- leaving for the night.

O’DONNELL
We need to confirm those seven
tickets out of Tehran on
Swissair --

SOSA
N.E. shut that down.

O’DONNELL
I’m saying it’s back on!

SOSA
I can’t do it. It’s backstopped
pending Executive Branch GO.

O’DONNELL
What the fuck does that mean?

SOSA
Carter’s got to say yes for us to
get the tickets.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary At dawn in the Canadian Ambassador's residence, Lee Schatz prepares the Argo script while Cora Lijek supports her husband. Kathy Stafford anxiously worries about someone's lateness. On a Sheraton balcony, Tony Mendez contemplates the gravity of destroying Canadian passports. Meanwhile, O'Donnell rushes to secure tickets for the operation but faces bureaucratic resistance from Alan Sosa, who informs him that approval from the Executive Branch is needed. The scene is filled with urgency and tension as O'Donnell is left frustrated, highlighting the high stakes of the mission.
Strengths
  • Intense emotional conflict
  • High stakes
  • Well-developed characters
Weaknesses
  • Some dialogue could be more nuanced

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene's primary job is to dramatize Mendez's pivotal decision to proceed with the exfiltration against orders, and it lands effectively through the powerful visual of the match and the tense phone call. The biggest limiter is the fragmented cross-cutting between Mendez's quiet resolve and the procedural argument at Langley, which slightly dilutes the emotional momentum and could be tighter.


Story Content

Concept: 6.5

The concept of a CIA operative defying orders to save hostages is strong, but the scene relies on a familiar 'rogue agent' trope. The unique visual of the passports in an ice bucket adds freshness.

Plot: 6

The plot advances Mendez's decision to go through with the plan and the bureaucratic obstacle at Langley, but the scene is more about character choice than plot progression.

Originality: 6.5

The match-over-passports visual is a fresh take on a 'burn or not burn' dilemma, and the cross-cut to Langley's financial bureaucracy is an authentic detail. The dialogue is functional but not highly original.


Character Development

Characters: 5.5

Mendez's determination and O'Donnell's frustration are clear, but the houseguests are reduced to brief, passive reactions (Kathy's 'He's late').

Character Changes: 6

Mendez makes a firm decision to defy orders, showing a shift from uncertainty to resolve. O'Donnell also shifts from shutting down to rushing to act.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to make a difficult decision that will impact the lives of others. This reflects his sense of responsibility and leadership in a crisis situation.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to confirm tickets for a covert operation out of Tehran. This reflects the immediate challenge of navigating bureaucratic obstacles and securing necessary resources for the mission.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 7.5

Conflict is high: Mendez vs. O'Donnell's orders, and the internal conflict of burning or not burning the passports. The Langley argument adds external friction.

Opposition: 7

Opposition comes from O'Donnell's orders, Sosa's bureaucratic refusal, and the implicit threat of Iranian capture. The opposition is strong but mostly off-screen.

High Stakes: 8.5

Stakes are life-or-death: the six Americans' survival and Mendez's career. The bureaucratic hurdle raises the tension.

Story Forward: 7

The scene moves the story forward by committing Mendez to the exfiltration and setting up the ticket obstacle, but the houseguests' scene is static.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because the audience doesn't know if Mendez will burn the passports or not, and the phone call reversal (O'Donnell suddenly supporting) is a surprise.

Philosophical Conflict: 6.5

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the tension between individual responsibility and bureaucratic protocol. The protagonist must balance his personal sense of duty with the constraints of official procedures.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The match moment and Mendez's phone call carry emotional weight, but the cross-cutting to Langley reduces immersion.

Dialogue: 6

The dialogue is sparse and functional, with the most impactful line being Mendez's 'I am responsible. I’m taking them through.' The Langley exchange is exposition-heavy.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because of the silent tension of the match and the urgent phone call, but the Langley argument feels like a procedural speed bump.

Pacing: 6.5

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the slow, deliberate match moment contrasts with the rapid-fire Langley dialogue, creating rhythm, but the residence scene slows momentum.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of 'HOLD for a long beat' is effective.

Structure: 6

The scene uses cross-cutting between three locations (residence, balcony, Langley) to build tension, but the transitions are abrupt and the residence scene feels like a placeholder.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the mundane act of packing with the high-stakes situation of the characters. However, the transition between the Canadian Ambassador's residence and the Sheraton balcony could be smoother to maintain the flow of the narrative.
  • The emotional weight of the scene is palpable, particularly in Tony's moment of contemplation with the passports. However, the scene could benefit from more internal dialogue or visual cues to deepen the audience's understanding of his emotional state as he prepares to destroy the passports.
  • The dialogue in O'Donnell's office feels somewhat abrupt and lacks the emotional resonance that could enhance the stakes of the situation. Adding a moment of hesitation or reflection from O'Donnell before he rushes out could provide more depth to his character and the urgency of the situation.
  • The pacing of the scene is uneven, particularly with the quick cuts between locations. While this can create a sense of urgency, it may also disorient the audience. Consider allowing for slightly longer beats in key moments to let the tension build more organically.
  • The use of the call-to-prayer as a backdrop is a strong choice, but it could be more effectively integrated into the characters' actions and emotions. For instance, having the call-to-prayer coincide with a moment of decision or realization could heighten the dramatic impact.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief internal monologue for Tony as he prepares to destroy the passports, allowing the audience to connect more deeply with his internal conflict and the gravity of the situation.
  • Smooth out the transitions between the different locations by using visual or auditory cues that link the scenes, such as the sound of the call-to-prayer fading in and out as the scene shifts.
  • Enhance O'Donnell's dialogue with a moment of reflection or frustration before he rushes out, which could help to establish his character's emotional state and the stakes involved in the operation.
  • Allow for longer pauses in key moments to build tension, particularly during Tony's contemplation and O'Donnell's decision-making process, to give the audience time to absorb the weight of the situation.
  • Consider using more visual storytelling elements, such as close-ups on characters' faces during moments of tension, to convey their emotional states without relying solely on dialogue.



Scene 48 -  Dawn of Urgency
240 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DAWN 240

Pat Taylor comes to answer an insistent knocking on her
front door. She opens it.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 95.
240 CONTINUED: 240
She’s shocked to see him. Ken Taylor now appears behind *
Pat. In the hall behind him: The Houseguests are
assembled, waiting to go. They look their parts -- or,
much more so than they did on the scout. Cora Lijek has
darker hair. The Staffords look on, fully dressed.


241 INT. OUTSIDE ENGELL’S OFFICE - NIGHT 241

O’DONNELL
Where’s Engell?

SECRETARY
He’s in a meeting.

O’DONNELL
Pull him out.
(as she hesitates)
PULL HIM OUT!


242 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - DAWN 242

Pat Taylor is embracing the Houseguests, saying goodbye.

PAT TAYLOR
Sahar’s on a bus.

MENDEZ
Good. And you two leave right
now.

Ken Taylor nods. Mendez shakes his hand.


243 INT./EXT. MINIVAN - DAWN 243

Mendez gets into the driver’s seat. Lee Schatz on the
passenger side.

We see Ken’s black embassy sedan waiting, driven by a
PAKISTANI DRIVER.

Mendez pulls away.


243A INT. KEN’S OFFICE - LATER 243A

Ken Taylor watches a SGT. CLAUDE GAUTHIER, 30s, Canadian
military policeman, use a sledgehammer to SMASH
EVERYTHING IN THE OFFICE TO PIECES.

Pat Taylor comes to the door. She’s holding a suitcase.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 96.
243A CONTINUED: 243A
TAYLOR
(to Gauthier, as he
leaves)
Get to your flight. *


244 INT. OUTSIDE ENGELL’S OFFICE - NIGHT 244

ENGELL
N.E. said NO, this is not a long-
leasher...

O’DONNELL ENGELL
... watching a show behind ... and it never has been,
a one-way whorehouse YOU don’t decide if it
mirror... goes...

O’DONNELL
It is going.

ENGELL
You’re goddamn close...

O’DONNELL
Am I goddamn close?

ENGELL
You’re goddamn close to the line
with me.

O’DONNELL
(interrupting)
I’m not leaving him at the airport
with six people and his dick in
his hand. Tell the Director to
call the White House. DO YOUR
FUCKING JOB.

Engell just stares O’Donnell down.


245 INT./EXT. MINIVAN - MORNING 245

The van speeds down the hills of the Shemiran district.

MENDEZ (V.O.)
The first checkpoint is just to
look at your passport.


246 FLASHBACK - INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - NIGHT 246

Mendez is sitting in the living room instructing the
Houseguests.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 97.
246 CONTINUED: 246
MENDEZ
Your passports came straight from
the Canadians, so you’re gonna be
fine.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary At dawn in the Canadian Ambassador's residence, Pat Taylor bids farewell to Ken Taylor and the Houseguests as they prepare to leave. Mendez urgently instructs them to depart immediately, while Ken watches a military policeman destroy his office, symbolizing the chaos surrounding their escape. Outside, O'Donnell confronts Engell, demanding action to ensure the Houseguests are not abandoned, but Engell remains dismissive. The scene captures the tension and urgency of the situation as Mendez reassures the Houseguests about their passports, setting the stage for their critical escape.
Strengths
  • Tension-building
  • Character development
  • Emotional impact
  • Urgency
Weaknesses
  • Potential for confusion with multiple characters and locations

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to escalate the escape's urgency and show the final push against institutional resistance, which it does with effective cross-cutting and rising stakes. The main limiter is the fragmented structure—multiple brief locations and a flashback that, while informative, momentarily stalls momentum; tightening the intercuts would sharpen the tension.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of a covert exfiltration under the guise of a film crew is inherently strong, and this scene leverages it by showing the final execution and the bureaucratic battle behind the scenes. The flashback to Mendez's instructions reinforces the plan's stakes, but the concept is not new to the genre.

Plot: 7.5

The plot advances the escape plan to its final stage, introducing the immediate threat of checkpoints and the CIA's internal conflict over approval. The scene's multiple locations and time jumps create a sense of urgency, but the flashback interrupts the forward momentum slightly.

Originality: 8

The scene is original in its depiction of a real-life covert operation, blending historical detail with thriller conventions. The use of a film crew cover is fresh, and the bureaucratic infighting adds authenticity.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Mendez is shown as resolute and focused, while O'Donnell's fierce advocacy for the mission adds depth. The houseguests are mostly background, but their readiness is conveyed through visual details. The scene lacks deeper character development, but it serves the action.

Character Changes: 5

Mendez's resolve is reinforced, and O'Donnell's commitment is shown through his confrontation. The houseguests' transformation from anxious to prepared is visually evident, but no profound change occurs in this scene.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to ensure the safety and successful departure of the Houseguests from the Canadian Ambassador's residence.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to navigate the political and logistical challenges of the situation to successfully extract the Houseguests from Iran.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8

Conflict is high: external (checkpoints, hostile environment) and internal (CIA bureaucracy, Mendez's defiance). The scene pits personal responsibility against orders, creating strong tension.

Opposition: 8

The opposition comes from both the external environment (checkpoints, hostile crowds) and internal bureaucracy (Engell, the Executive Branch). Mendez faces resistance at every level.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are life-or-death: the houseguests could be captured and executed, and the mission could be cancelled. The scene emphasizes the fragility of the plan.

Story Forward: 8.5

The scene moves the story from preparation to execution, introducing the immediate threat of checkpoints and the CIA's last-minute struggle. It sets up the climax of the escape.

Unpredictability: 7.5

This scene is unpredictable because the outcome is uncertain—the CIA might cancel the mission, and the checkpoints could fail. The intercutting keeps the viewer guessing.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict in this scene is the clash between personal values and political responsibilities. The characters must balance their duty to protect the Houseguests with the larger political implications of their actions.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The emotional impact is driven by the farewell at the residence and the uncertainty of the escape. The viewer feels the weight of the moment, but the rapid cuts dilute some emotional resonance.

Dialogue: 7

Dialogue is functional and tense, with O'Donnell's outbursts and Mendez's calm instructions standing out. The exchange between O'Donnell and Engell is sharp and reveals the stakes, but some lines feel expository.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it combines the immediate danger of the escape with the bureaucratic battle, creating a sense of urgency and uncertainty. The viewer is invested in whether the plan will succeed.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is brisk, with quick cuts between locations that heighten tension. The flashback provides a brief pause, but the overall rhythm is urgent and propulsive.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of V.O. and flashback is standard, but the rapid cuts between locations are clearly indicated.

Structure: 7

The scene uses cross-cutting between the escape and the CIA office, building tension through parallel action. The flashback provides necessary context but disrupts the forward momentum. The structure is effective for a thriller, though the time jumps could be smoother.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension as it transitions from the Canadian Ambassador's residence to the urgency of the escape plan. However, the pacing feels uneven; the emotional weight of the Houseguests' departure could be enhanced by lingering on their farewells and the gravity of the situation.
  • The dialogue is functional but lacks emotional depth. While Pat Taylor's goodbye is a nice touch, it could be more poignant to reflect the stakes involved. Adding more personal touches or memories shared between the characters could heighten the emotional impact.
  • The visual transitions between the Canadian Ambassador's residence and the minivan are somewhat abrupt. A smoother transition could help maintain the tension and urgency of the escape. Consider using a visual motif or sound cue to bridge these moments more effectively.
  • The introduction of Ken Taylor and the Houseguests is somewhat rushed. A brief moment of reflection or a shared glance among the characters could help establish their emotional state and the weight of the moment before they leave.
  • The scene lacks a clear emotional arc. While there is urgency, the characters' emotional responses to the situation could be more pronounced. This would help the audience connect with their plight and feel the stakes of the escape.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment of hesitation or reflection for the characters as they say goodbye, allowing the audience to feel the weight of their situation.
  • Enhance the dialogue to include more personal stakes or memories shared between the characters, which would deepen the emotional resonance of their farewells.
  • Use a visual or auditory cue to create a smoother transition between the Canadian Ambassador's residence and the minivan, maintaining the tension throughout the scene.
  • Introduce a brief moment of connection among the Houseguests before they leave, such as a shared look or a silent acknowledgment of their situation, to establish their emotional state.
  • Ensure that the characters' emotional responses are more pronounced throughout the scene, allowing the audience to connect with their fear and urgency as they prepare to escape.



Scene 49 -  Urgent Pursuit
247 INT. CIA (LANGLEY) - THE PIT - NIGHT (A MOMENT LATER) 247
(PRESENT)

O’Donnell, charging in --

O’DONNELL
Where’s the Director?

MALINOV
He’s on the plane.

O’DONNELL
Find White House Chief of Staff.

MALINOV
How would I find him?

O’DONNELL
We’re a fucking SPY AGENCY! FIND
HIM!


248 FLASHBACK - INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - NIGHT 248

MENDEZ
The second checkpoint --


249 INT. CIA - THE PIT - NIGHT (PRESENT) 249

MALINOV
Jordan’s in the West Wing. He’s
not taking calls.

A beat on O’Donnell.

O’DONNELL
Where are his kids?

LAMONT
WHAT?

O’DONNELL
Where do his kids go to school?


250 FLASHBACK - INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - NIGHT 250

He gives out yellow immigration forms to the Houseguests.
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 98.
250 CONTINUED: 250

MENDEZ
The second is immigration. You’ll
hand them these. They say you
landed two days ago.


251 INT. MINIVAN - MORNING (PRESENT) 251

Cora Lijek fingers her yellow immigration form in one
hand, holds Mark’s hand with the other.

MENDEZ (V.O.)
These guys are bureaucrats left
over from the shah. They can’t be
bothered to second-guess you.


252 INT. CIA - THE PIT - NIGHT 252

Malinov slams a phone down.

MALINOV
Pace Academy in Buckhead, Georgia!

O’Donnell dials a number.

O’DONNELL
Yes, it’s Mr. Murphy calling from
Pace Academy for Mr. Jordan... I’m
afraid it IS an emergency...


253 INT. WHITE HOUSE OPERATOR ROOM - NIGHT 253

WHITE HOUSE OPERATOR
Hold just a moment.

She plugs a wire into an old-fashioned Ma Bell
switchboard.

MENDEZ (V.O.)
Third checkpoint is the trap.


254 INT. MINIVAN - MORNING 254

The van pulls up to the airport. We see THRONGS of
people trying to get in -- so they can get out.

Tony pulls the car to a semi-open place and tries not to
run anyone over.
ARGO - Final 99.


255 FLASHBACK - INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - NIGHT 255

MENDEZ
It’s manned by Revolutionaries.
Most of them were educated in the
U.S. or Europe.

BOB ANDERS
Or Canada?

MENDEZ
They know how many ‘T’s are in
Toronto.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In a tense scene set in the CIA's operations center, The Pit, O'Donnell urgently seeks the whereabouts of the White House Chief of Staff, Jordan. After learning that Jordan is unreachable in the West Wing, O'Donnell pushes to find his children, leading to the discovery that they attend Pace Academy in Georgia. As O'Donnell makes an emergency call to the school, flashbacks reveal critical instructions from Mendez regarding the ongoing crisis, heightening the urgency of the situation.
Strengths
  • Intense tension
  • Strong character development
  • High emotional impact
Weaknesses
  • Some dialogue may feel slightly forced or expository

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

This scene's primary job is to escalate the escape's tension by intercutting the CIA's desperate political gambit with the escapees' final approach to the airport, and it lands effectively through sharp cross-cutting and a memorable final line. The biggest limiter is the reliance on flashback exposition that, while efficient, slightly undercuts the present-tense urgency and could be tightened for even greater impact.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of intercutting the CIA's frantic back-channel maneuvering with the escapees' final approach is strong, creating a dual-threat structure. The flashback device is a familiar but effective way to deliver procedural details, though it's not entirely novel.

Plot: 7.8

The plot advances on two fronts: O'Donnell's desperate attempt to reach the White House Chief of Staff and the escapees' approach to the airport. The scene sets up the third checkpoint as a major obstacle, raising the stakes. The plot is clear and propulsive, though the flashback structure slightly fragments the momentum.

Originality: 7.5

The scene is original in its specific details, such as the threat about knowing how many 'T's are in Toronto, which adds a unique cultural specificity. The cross-cutting between political maneuvering and on-the-ground escape is a fresh take on the thriller genre.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

O'Donnell is shown as resourceful and ruthless, willing to use personal connections to force action. Mendez is calm and procedural, focused on the details. The houseguests are mostly reactive, but their anxiety is palpable. The characters are functional but not deeply explored in this brief scene.

Character Changes: 3

O'Donnell's determination intensifies, but no significant character change occurs in this brief scene. The houseguests' fear is heightened, but their core personalities remain static.

Internal Goal: 6.5

The protagonist's internal goal is to locate the Director and the White House Chief of Staff, showcasing their determination, leadership, and sense of responsibility.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to handle a critical situation involving national security and political figures, reflecting the immediate challenges they face in their role.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8.5

Conflict is high: O'Donnell battles bureaucratic inertia, while the escapees face the imminent threat of discovery at the airport. The opposition is both systemic (the government) and physical (the checkpoint).

Opposition: 8

The opposition is formidable: the Iranian revolutionaries at the checkpoint, the bureaucratic inertia of the U.S. government, and the sheer chaos of the airport. The opposition is both external and systemic.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are life-or-death: if the escapees are caught, they'll be executed. The CIA's political maneuvering adds another layer of high-stakes urgency.

Story Forward: 8.5

The scene moves the story forward by setting up the final checkpoint and showing the CIA's last-ditch efforts to support the escape. It raises the stakes and sets the stage for the climax.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because the outcome is uncertain: will O'Donnell's desperate call work? Will the escapees pass the checkpoint? The flashback structure adds a layer of unpredictability by revealing information in a non-linear way.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict revolves around the protagonist's belief in the capabilities of a spy agency to solve complex problems versus the challenges and limitations they encounter in real-time situations.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7.5

The emotional impact is driven by the contrast between the CIA's frantic efforts and the escapees' quiet dread. The final line about the 'T's in Toronto is chilling, heightening the sense of imminent danger.

Dialogue: 7.5

Dialogue is sharp and purposeful, especially O'Donnell's 'We're a fucking SPY AGENCY!' and the final line about 'T's in Toronto. It's efficient and reveals character, though some lines are purely expository.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it intercuts two high-stakes situations, creating a sense of parallel urgency. The dialogue is sharp, and the final line is a memorable hook that leaves the reader wanting to know what happens next.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is brisk, with rapid cuts between the CIA and the escapees. The flashbacks provide brief pauses for exposition, but the overall rhythm is tense and forward-moving. The scene ends on a strong note that propels the reader forward.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8.5

The formatting is standard screenplay format, with clear scene headings and intercuts. The use of flashbacks is clearly marked, and the action lines are concise. The formatting is professional and easy to follow.

Structure: 7.5

The scene uses a classic cross-cutting structure, intercutting between the CIA and the escapees. The flashback device is used to deliver necessary information, but it slightly disrupts the present-tense flow. The structure builds tension effectively, though the transitions could be smoother.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the urgency of O'Donnell's search for the White House Chief of Staff with the flashbacks that provide context for the current situation. However, the transitions between the present and flashbacks could be smoother to maintain clarity for the audience.
  • O'Donnell's character is portrayed as assertive and determined, which is effective in conveying the high stakes of the situation. However, his dialogue could benefit from more variation in tone to avoid sounding overly aggressive. A mix of urgency and desperation could enhance the emotional weight of his quest.
  • The use of flashbacks is a strong narrative device, but the dialogue in the flashbacks could be more tightly integrated with the present action. For instance, Mendez's lines could be more directly related to O'Donnell's current predicament, creating a stronger thematic connection between the two timelines.
  • The scene lacks a clear emotional arc for O'Donnell. While he is driven and focused, the audience does not see any vulnerability or internal conflict, which could make him a more relatable character. Adding a moment of doubt or reflection could deepen his character development.
  • The pacing of the scene is generally good, but the transition from the frantic energy of O'Donnell's search to the calmness of the flashbacks feels abrupt. A more gradual shift could help maintain the tension throughout the scene.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment where O'Donnell expresses his frustration or fear about the consequences of failing to locate the Chief of Staff, which would add depth to his character and heighten the stakes.
  • Enhance the transitions between the present and flashbacks by using visual cues or sound design that links the two timelines, making it clearer to the audience when they are shifting between the two.
  • Incorporate more dialogue in the flashbacks that directly relates to O'Donnell's current situation, perhaps by having Mendez's instructions echo O'Donnell's current challenges, reinforcing the urgency of the mission.
  • Introduce a moment of vulnerability for O'Donnell, such as a brief hesitation or a personal reflection on the lives at stake, to create a more complex emotional landscape for the character.
  • Ensure that the dialogue in the flashbacks is concise and impactful, focusing on key phrases that resonate with the present action, thereby enhancing the overall narrative cohesion.



Scene 50 -  Race Against Time
256 INT. WHITE HOUSE CHIEF OF STAFF OFFICE - NIGHT (PRESENT) 256

Jordan is in a meeting with two staffers, his feet up on
the desk. His secretary opens the door without knocking,
hurries to Jordan, whispers something in his ear. He
immediately grabs the phone.

JORDAN
Hello?

O’DONNELL (V.O.)
Jack O’Donnell from C.I.

JORDAN
Wait -- WHO -- ?

O’DONNELL (V.O.)
Tehran Houseguest operation is
ready NOW. We don’t have the
President’s go-ahead. They are
going to be captured.

Jordan stands up with the phone.

JORDAN
(yelling out his
door)
DAVID! Pick up!


257 INT. KOMITEH HQ - MORNING 257

The office we visited earlier. A YOUNG KOMITEH comes up
the stairs again. This time, he’s RUNNING.




(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 100.
257 CONTINUED: 257

KHALKALI, the fiery guy who came to the residence, along
with two YOUNG KOMITEH compare (one who delivered the
pictures): on one side, copies of re-assembled
diplomatic photographs of Americans from the embassy --
like the ones of the Houseguests we saw early in the film
-- and, on the other side, the candid photographs from
the bazaar.


258 INT. CIA - THE PIT - NIGHT 258

LAMONT
Telex on Flash.

The telex begins to print, line by line...

EYES ONLY -- OFFICE OF THE PRESIDENT OF THE UNITED STATES
-- HOLLYWOOD OPTION APPROVED -- GOOD LUCK. (*Carter
White House telex, 1/29/1980.)

O’DONNELL
Copy D.S.! Confirm the tickets!
GO!


259 INT. SWISSAIR COUNTER (MEHRABAD) - MORNING 259

Mendez’s and the Houseguests’ passports sit on the
counter.

SWISSAIR REP
I’m sorry, sir. I don’t have
those reservations...

SWISSAIR REP looks at some green text on her screen, hits
another button.

SWISSAIR REP
My apologies. They just came
through.

She hits another button and tickets start to print.


260 INT. CIA - THE PIT - NIGHT 260

MALINOV
(to O’Donnell)
Swissair says they’ve picked up
the tickets.

O’DONNELL
Get the L.A. office -- tell them
to be ready in case they call.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 101.
260 CONTINUED: 260

MALINOV
We told them to shut that down!

He RUNS toward a phone --


261 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - FIRST CHECKPOINT - MORNING 261

The PASSPORT OFFICIAL is looking at the Canadian
passports of the six and waving them through. Mendez has
already passed. Everyone except Kathy Stafford.

The Passport Official looks at Kathy, who is doing her
best to look friendly and casual. Then he looks at
Kathy’s passport, in which she looks stern and angry.

Kathy Stafford smoothes down her hair, frowns like she *
does in the passport photo. The Passport Official half
smiles and waves her through. They’ve all cleared the
first checkpoint.


262 INT. KOMITEH HQ - MORNING 262

Khalkali comes upon a diplomatic photograph of a man with
glasses.

He starts to leaf through the photographs from the
bazaar.

QUICK CUT TO:
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a tense night at the White House, Chief of Staff Jordan receives urgent news about the Tehran Houseguest operation, which is set to proceed without presidential approval. He quickly contacts CIA agent Jack O'Donnell, who warns that the operation is at risk of being compromised. Meanwhile, at the Komiteh HQ, Khalkali and his team are searching for photographs of American hostages, while at Mehrabad Airport, Kathy Stafford nervously navigates a passport checkpoint. The scene culminates with Khalkali discovering a photograph that could threaten the hostages' safety, intensifying the urgency of the situation.
Strengths
  • Intense tension
  • High stakes
  • Compelling conflict
  • Authentic character reactions
Weaknesses
  • Potential confusion with multiple locations and characters

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to escalate the tension to a climax by intercutting the bureaucratic approval with the imminent danger at the airport and the Komiteh's discovery. It lands effectively, but the brevity of the scenes and the lack of character depth in this excerpt limit its emotional resonance, leaving it feeling more functional than deeply moving.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of intercutting the White House approval with the Komiteh's photo comparison and the airport checkpoint creates a classic thriller structure. It's a strong concept that leverages real historical tension.

Plot: 7.5

The plot advances rapidly: the approval is granted, the tickets are confirmed, and the houseguests pass the first checkpoint, while the Komiteh closes in. The plot is well-paced and clear, though the scene is fragmented.

Originality: 7.5

The scene is original in its specific historical context and the use of real telex messages. The cross-cutting is a familiar technique but applied effectively to a real-life escape.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Characters are mostly functional here: O'Donnell is determined, Jordan is responsive, and the houseguests are shown in brief moments (Kathy's passport photo). There's little new character development, but the existing traits are reinforced.

Character Changes: 2

No significant character change occurs in this scene; it's more about the plot moving forward. O'Donnell's determination is reaffirmed, but no one transforms.

Internal Goal: 7

Jordan's internal goal in this scene is to prevent the capture of the Tehran Houseguests and ensure the success of the operation without the President's approval. This reflects his desire to protect innocent lives and maintain control in a high-pressure situation.

External Goal: 8.5

Jordan's external goal is to coordinate the Tehran Houseguest operation and ensure the safe extraction of the individuals involved. This reflects the immediate challenge of navigating political obstacles and executing a covert mission.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8.5

Conflict is high: the houseguests are in immediate danger, the Komiteh is closing in, and the approval is uncertain. The conflict is external and urgent.

Opposition: 8

The opposition is strong: the Komiteh is actively searching for the houseguests, and the bureaucratic system is slow to approve. The opposition is both institutional and physical.

High Stakes: 9.5

The stakes are life-or-death: if the houseguests are captured, they will be executed. The approval is the only thing standing between them and safety.

Story Forward: 9

The story moves forward significantly: the approval is granted, tickets are confirmed, and the houseguests pass the first checkpoint, while the Komiteh is on their trail. The stakes are raised.

Unpredictability: 8

The scene is unpredictable because the outcome is uncertain; the approval could come too late, or the Komiteh could catch them. The quick cuts keep the viewer guessing.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the ethical dilemma of taking action without official approval and the consequences of potentially endangering lives for the greater good. This challenges Jordan's beliefs in following protocol and highlights the moral complexities of his decisions.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The emotional impact is moderate; the tension is palpable, but the rapid cuts and lack of character focus dilute the emotional weight. The viewer feels the urgency but not deep empathy in this excerpt.

Dialogue: 6

Dialogue is minimal and utilitarian, serving the plot. O'Donnell's 'GO!' and the Swissair rep's apology are effective, but there's no memorable exchange that deepens character or theme.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it intercuts multiple threads of tension: the approval, the Komiteh's discovery, and the airport checkpoint. The viewer is on edge, wondering if they'll make it.

Pacing: 8.5

The pacing is rapid, with short scenes that cut between locations, heightening the sense of urgency. This works well for the thriller genre, though it leaves little room for character reflection.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is standard screenplay format with clear scene headings and action lines. It's easy to follow, though the rapid cuts are indicated by scene numbers.

Structure: 8

The scene uses cross-cutting to build suspense, a classic thriller structure. It moves from the White House to the Komiteh to the airport, creating a sense of simultaneity and urgency.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the urgency of the Tehran Houseguest operation with the bureaucratic obstacles faced by the characters. However, the transition between the various locations could be smoother to maintain the flow of the narrative.
  • Jordan's character is introduced in a somewhat passive manner, as he is depicted with his feet up on the desk, which may undermine the urgency of the situation. A more active portrayal could enhance his role as a decision-maker in a crisis.
  • The dialogue between Jordan and O'Donnell is functional but lacks emotional depth. Adding more urgency or personal stakes for Jordan could make the conversation feel more impactful and heighten the tension.
  • The scene shifts between multiple locations (the White House, Komiteh HQ, CIA's Pit, and Mehrabad Airport) which can be disorienting for the audience. Clearer visual or auditory cues could help the audience follow the transitions more easily.
  • The use of quick cuts between the Komiteh HQ and the CIA's Pit is effective in building suspense, but the pacing could be improved by allowing for a moment of reflection or reaction from the characters after receiving critical information.
Suggestions
  • Consider giving Jordan a more active role in the scene by having him engage more with his staffers or express his concerns about the operation, which would help to establish his character as a decisive leader.
  • Enhance the dialogue between Jordan and O'Donnell by incorporating personal stakes or emotional weight, such as Jordan reflecting on the lives at risk or his own feelings about the operation's urgency.
  • Use visual transitions, such as a clock ticking or a countdown timer, to emphasize the urgency of the situation as the scene shifts between locations, helping to maintain tension throughout.
  • Incorporate a brief moment of silence or a reaction shot after critical information is revealed, allowing the audience to absorb the gravity of the situation before moving on to the next location.
  • Consider adding a line or two of dialogue from the Komiteh members that hints at their awareness of the Houseguests, which would raise the stakes and create a sense of impending danger.



Scene 51 -  Tension at the Checkpoint
263 EXT. BAZAAR - POV OF THE REVOLUTIONARY GUARD PHOTOGRAPHER 263
- DAY

Mark Lijek being photographed at the bazaar the previous
day.

QUICK CUT BACK TO:


264 INT. KOMITEH HQ - MORNING 264

KHALKALI --

looks at the black and white still of Mark Lijek,
compares it to his diplomatic picture, the first portrait
we saw of Mark toward the beginning of the film. MATCH.

Khalkali stands up. SHOUTS in Farsi to another Komiteh --
ARGO - Final 102.


265 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - SECOND CHECKPOINT - MORNING 265

Bob Anders stands in front of a rough-voiced IMMIGRATION
OFFICER. He’s holding Bob Anders’ YELLOW IMMIGRATION
FORM and leafing through a file of hundreds of WHITE
IMMIGRATION FORMS, the duplicates. Without success.

IMMIGRATION OFFICER #2
(in Farsi; to Officer
#1, re: his own
white pile)
Nothing.

IMMIGRATION OFFICER
(to Bob Anders)
When did you say you arrived in
Iran?

BOB ANDERS
Two days ago.

IMMIGRATION OFFICER
What was the purpose of your
visit?

BOB ANDERS
We were looking at locations to
make a film. I’m the director.

Immigration Officer pauses and looks up. Looks at the
six other faces. He looks every bit as confrontational
as Tony acted in rehearsal.

BOB ANDERS
(very calm)
We have a letter from the Minister
of Culture ... *

The Immigration Officer gestures for the letter. Bob
takes the letter inviting them on their location scout
out of a folder. Tony, barely perceptibly, nods.


266 INT. KOMITEH HQ - MORNING 266

Khalkali is now speaking with MORADI, an older Komiteh
official. They speak Farsi and it’s untranslated, but we
get it. He is showing the photograph of Mark Lijek from
the bazaar and comparing it to the U.S. diplomatic
photograph.

Moradi picks up the phone as Khalkali heads out.
ARGO - Final 103.


267 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - SECOND CHECKPOINT - MORNING 267

Immigration Officer is conferring with Immigration
Officer #2 as they look at the letter from the Minister
of Culture. The Houseguests and Mendez wait.

Finally, Immigration Officer #2 shrugs.

IMMIGRATION OFFICER
Okay -- Yes -- Okay --

He waves them through. Second checkpoint done.


268 INT. CIA - THE PIT - NIGHT 268

Malinov, a phone to his ear. Ringing.

MALINOV
C’mon c’mon c’mon --


269 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - NIGHT 269

The phone in the office rings. No one is there.


270 EXT. WARNER BROS. STUDIOS - NIGHT 270

Siegel and Chambers are walking back to the Argo office.

They are within sight of the Argo bungalow, but a P.A. *
steps in front of them.

P.A.
(a stage whisper)
I’m sorry, we’re shooting.

He motions for them to wait. A movie -- it looks like a
police procedural -- is shooting on the lot between them
and the office.


271 INT. AIRPORT GATE - MORNING 271

ANNOUNCEMENT (V.O.)
Swissair announces general
boarding for Flight 363 to Zurich.

Passengers, mostly European businessmen, get up and
approach the gate.
ARGO - Final 104.


272 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - THIRD CHECKPOINT - MORNING 272

Mendez checks in with the Houseguests with his eyes.
They are now in sight of the airport gates. And here are
six Komiteh. Young men -- none more than 33 or so --
holding automatic weapons.

They have created their own checkpoint. It looks recent,
A SCREENED-OFF AREA WITH TABLES.

KOMITEH #1
Passports.

He looks at the Canadian passports and then almost
immediately speaks.

KOMITEH #1
You come.

He directs Mendez and the Houseguests into the screened-
off area. Speaks in Farsi to another Komiteh.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a tense scene, Mark Lijek's photograph is scrutinized by Khalkali at the Komiteh HQ, indicating he is a person of interest. Meanwhile, Bob Anders faces questioning at Mehrabad Airport but successfully convinces an immigration officer of his legitimacy by presenting a letter from the Minister of Culture. As Anders and his group pass through, the Komiteh sets up a new checkpoint, directing Mendez and the Houseguests into a screened-off area, heightening the suspense of their precarious situation.
Strengths
  • Building tension
  • Confrontational interactions
  • High-stakes situation
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Focused dialogue

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to escalate tension as the escape plan reaches its most dangerous point, and it does so effectively through tight intercutting and the looming threat of discovery. The biggest limiter is the reliance on familiar checkpoint-thriller beats, which, while executed well, don't break new ground; a more unexpected twist or deeper character beat would lift it.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of intercutting the Komiteh's photo match with the airport checkpoints is a classic but effective suspense mechanism, raising the stakes as the audience knows the danger before the characters do.

Plot: 7

The plot advances the escape sequence through multiple checkpoints, with the Komiteh's discovery threatening to derail everything. The progression is logical and tense, though the outcome at the third checkpoint is left hanging, which is effective for cliffhanger but may frustrate some.

Originality: 6.5

The scene uses a familiar 'race against time' trope but grounds it in historical specificity, with the bazaar and airport details adding authenticity. The use of untranslated Farsi is a fresh touch, though the overall structure is conventional.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Bob Anders shows calm under pressure, and Mendez's subtle nod indicates his leadership. However, the scene focuses more on action than character depth, with the Houseguests largely reacting rather than revealing new facets.

Character Changes: 3

There is minimal character change in this scene; Bob Anders demonstrates steadiness, but no significant transformation occurs. The change is more in the situation's escalation than in the characters.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to navigate the complex and dangerous political situation in Iran while trying to secure the safety of the Houseguests and successfully execute the rescue mission. This reflects his deeper desire to protect and save lives, as well as his fear of failure and the consequences of being caught.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to pass through the airport security checkpoints without raising suspicion and successfully board the flight to Zurich with the Houseguests. This reflects the immediate challenge of evading detection and ensuring the safety of the group.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8

The conflict is external and immediate: the Komiteh's discovery versus the Houseguests' attempt to pass through checkpoints. The tension is high, but the conflict is straightforward, lacking internal or philosophical layers.

Opposition: 8

The opposition is formidable: armed Komiteh members, suspicious immigration officers, and the looming threat of the photo match. The opposition is external and physical, but also systemic, as the entire revolutionary apparatus is against them.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are life-or-death, as discovery means execution. The scene makes this clear through the Komiteh's armed presence and the photo match, raising the tension to a peak.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by advancing the escape through checkpoints and introducing the immediate threat of the Komiteh's photo match, setting up the climax.

Unpredictability: 7.5

The scene is unpredictable because the outcome of the third checkpoint is unknown, and the Komiteh's discovery could lead to a sudden, violent confrontation. The intercutting keeps the audience guessing which will happen first.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the clash between the values of freedom and oppression, as represented by the oppressive Iranian regime and the characters' quest for liberty and safety. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs in democracy and human rights, highlighting the moral dilemmas he faces in a hostile environment.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The emotional impact is driven by suspense and fear for the characters' safety, but the rapid intercutting and focus on procedural details may dilute deeper emotional resonance.

Dialogue: 6.8

Dialogue is minimal and functional, with Bob's answers to the immigration officer being the standout, showing his composure. The lack of dialogue in the Komiteh scenes is a strength, relying on visual storytelling, but the sparse dialogue limits character voice.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because the audience knows the Komiteh has a photo of Mark, creating dramatic irony as the Houseguests approach the final checkpoint. The rapid cuts and minimal dialogue keep the pace brisk and the tension high.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is taut, with quick cuts between locations and minimal dialogue, mirroring the urgency of the escape. The scene moves swiftly, but the cliffhanger ending may feel abrupt, leaving the audience wanting more.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of Farsi dialogue without translation is a bold choice that adds authenticity but may confuse some readers; however, the context makes it understandable.

Structure: 7.5

The scene uses cross-cutting between the Komiteh HQ and the airport to build suspense, a classic thriller structure. The sequence of checkpoints creates a rising action, but the scene ends on a cliffhanger, which is effective for serialized tension.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the actions at the bazaar with the scrutiny at the airport. However, the transitions between locations could be smoother to maintain the flow of urgency. The quick cuts can disorient the audience if not executed with clear visual cues.
  • The dialogue is functional but lacks emotional depth. Bob Anders' calm demeanor in the face of potential danger is commendable, but it could be enhanced with more internal conflict or subtle hints of anxiety to make the stakes feel more personal.
  • The use of Farsi dialogue without translation adds authenticity but may alienate viewers who do not understand the language. Consider providing context through visual cues or reactions from characters to convey the meaning without needing subtitles.
  • The scene could benefit from more sensory details to immerse the audience in the environment. Describing the sounds, smells, and sights of the bazaar and airport would enhance the tension and make the audience feel the pressure alongside the characters.
  • The character of Khalkali is introduced but not fully developed in this scene. Providing a brief insight into his motivations or background could make him a more compelling antagonist, heightening the stakes for the protagonists.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a moment of hesitation or doubt for Bob Anders before he presents the letter from the Minister of Culture. This could heighten the tension and make his eventual success feel more earned.
  • Incorporate more visual storytelling elements, such as close-ups of characters' expressions or reactions to the unfolding events, to convey their emotional states without relying solely on dialogue.
  • Introduce a ticking clock element, such as an announcement about the flight's departure time, to increase the urgency and pressure on the characters as they navigate the checkpoints.
  • Explore the dynamics between the characters more deeply. For instance, showing a moment of camaraderie or shared fear among the Houseguests could strengthen their bond and make the audience more invested in their escape.
  • Consider using sound design to enhance the atmosphere. The sounds of the bazaar, the tension of the airport, and the ominous presence of the Komiteh could be layered to create a more immersive experience.



Scene 52 -  The Art of Deception
273 INT. CIA - THE PIT - NIGHT 273

LAMONT
(holding the phone)
Purser’s telling Swissair they’re
not on the plane.

O’DONNELL
They should have boarded already.

MALINOV
(on another phone)
Still no answer in L.A.


274 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - THIRD CHECKPOINT - MORNING 274

MARK LIJEK
A film.

Mark mimes turning the rotor of a movie camera. Komiteh
#1 doesn’t understand.

AZIZI (O.S.)
Sit down.

A young man with a beard -- AZIZI, late 20s -- arriving
on the scene, speaking in Farsi to the others and then in
very good American English. He looks at the six and the
face he singles out is Joe Stafford’s.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 105.
274 CONTINUED: 274

AZIZI
(harsh, icy; in *
Farsi) *
You. You had no business in Iran.

He motions for JOE STAFFORD to step forward. Mendez
shifts. A tense moment.

JOE STAFFORD
(Farsi) *
We did. We were preparing to make
a movie here, sir.

AZIZI
(Farsi) *
You don’t have journalist visas.

JOE STAFFORD
(Farsi) *
Not a documentary. A movie.

Joe Stafford reaches into his pocket and gives Azizi a
copy of the Argo Variety ad.

JOE STAFFORD
(Farsi) *
You see?
(to Mendez; English) *
Kevin, where’s your briefcase?

A beat on Mendez. Who then opens his accordion folder
and takes from it the ARGO STORYBOARDS. Joe Stafford
spreads them out on the table.

Three other Komiteh in the room lean forward, their
AUTOMATIC WEAPONS at their sides, and look at the
STORYBOARD DRAWINGS. The Persian Empire futurism of Jack
Kirby’s drawings.

JOE STAFFORD
(Farsi) *
These are the villains. Y’see
these guys here? And these are
the heroes... in the spice
market...

Joe Stafford points at the various drawings. He speaks
with an ease and confidence that we didn’t know he had.

JOE STAFFORD
(Farsi) *
They know our hero is the Chosen *
One, so they kidnap his son in the *
spice market ... They have these *
chariots... like this one...
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 106.
274 CONTINUED: (2) 274
JOE STAFFORD (CONT'D)
they go like this... whoooosh,
hmm? They can fly... The people *
are just farmers, but they rise up *
and find their courage and defeat *
the alien king-- *

Mendez watches. It’s a performance. The three young
Komiteh are now wide-eyed, pointing, whispering in Farsi,
like teenagers around a comic book.

Azizi says something to another Komiteh in the room.
Then --

AZIZI
(to Joe Stafford; in *
English) *
You don’t go until we verify.

MENDEZ
You can call our office.

Mendez hands Azizi his card. STUDIO SIX FILMS. Kevin
Harkins. A 213 (818 wasn’t around yet) phone number.


ANGLES ON THE HOUSEGUESTS

as Azizi leaves the room with the business card and three
young Komiteh barely look up from the drawings --


275 EXT. WARNER BROS. STUDIOS - NIGHT 275

P.A., still holding Chambers and Siegel. The ACTOR
playing the cop is conferring with the director. He’s
not happy with something. They’re holding everyone until
the next take, and --

P.A.
Going again please! We’re
rolling --


276 EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - MORNING 276

A PICKUP TRUCK with 5 Komiteh -- including Khalkali --
automatic weapons out -- drives up to the Canadian
Ambassador’s residence.


277 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - KOMITEH STATION - MORNING 277

Azizi, who apparently has some authority here, enters,
telling another Komiteh in Farsi to get off the phone.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 107.
277 CONTINUED: 277

Azizi looks at the Studio Six business card and picks up
the receiver.


278 EXT. WARNER BROS. STUDIOS - NIGHT 278

SIEGEL
I’m sorry, pally. We’re just gonna *
be in the movie. Call my agent.

P.A.
Sir. SIR!

Siegel and Chambers walk through the shot toward the Argo
office.


279 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - KOMITEH STATION - MORNING 279

Azizi dials the long international number. And it is a
DIAL, so this takes a long time.


280 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - THIRD CHECKPOINT - MORNING 280

One of the young Komiteh is loudly debating with another
Komiteh the air-worthiness of a futuristic desert glider
in the storyboards. He’s miming the thing crashing.

Joe Stafford and the Houseguests are silent. Mendez can
see the line of passengers on their Swissair flight
dwindling.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a tense night at the CIA's operations room, Lamont updates O'Donnell on the situation with Swissair, while Malinov reports no communication from L.A. At Mehrabad Airport, Mark Lijek tries to convince the Komiteh that they are filmmakers, not journalists. Joe Stafford captivates the young Komiteh with his animated storytelling and colorful storyboards, but Azizi demands verification of their story. Mendez supports Joe by providing his business card, but the tension remains as Azizi prepares to verify their claims, leading to a debate among the Komiteh.
Strengths
  • Tension-building
  • Suspenseful atmosphere
  • Character interactions
  • Dialogue
  • Plot advancement
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Lack of significant emotional depth

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to sustain and escalate the escape's tension while showcasing the Houseguests' nerve under pressure; it lands effectively through Joe Stafford's unexpected improvisation and the visual gag of the Komiteh guards engrossed in the storyboards. The biggest limiter is the reliance on a somewhat convenient distraction (the guards' childlike fascination) that, while entertaining, slightly strains credibility and could be deepened with more explicit danger or a closer call.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of using a fake movie storyboard to talk their way past a revolutionary checkpoint is clever and thematically resonant, but it's a familiar trope in escape thrillers.

Plot: 7.5

The plot advances the escape sequence, introducing a new obstacle (the third checkpoint) and a potential ally (Azizi), while the parallel scenes at the Komiteh HQ and the Canadian residence raise the stakes.

Originality: 7

The use of a storyboard as a prop is fresh and authentic to the filmmaking cover, but the 'distract the guard with a story' beat is a familiar trope.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Joe Stafford emerges as an unexpected hero, showing a resourcefulness not seen before; Mendez remains the cool handler, but his internal tension is hinted at. The Komiteh guards are thinly drawn but serve their purpose.

Character Changes: 6

Joe Stafford changes from a doubter to a decisive improviser, but the change is not deeply explored; Mendez's trust in the group grows slightly.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to convince the authorities that they are in Iran to make a movie, not as spies. This reflects their need to maintain their cover and stay safe in a hostile environment.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to verify their story and gain permission to leave Iran safely.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8

The conflict is immediate and physical (the checkpoint) but also psychological (the fear of exposure), though the latter is somewhat undercut by the guards' easy distraction.

Opposition: 7

The opposition is formidable—armed guards, a suspicious Azizi, and the constant threat of exposure—but the guards' distraction weakens the perceived threat.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are life-or-death, but the scene's tension is somewhat diffused by the comedic element of the guards' fascination with the storyboards.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the escape plot forward, introducing a new checkpoint and the need for verification, while also cutting to the Komiteh HQ to raise the stakes.

Unpredictability: 8

This scene is unpredictable because the resolution relies on Joe Stafford's unexpected improvisation and the guards' childlike reaction, which subverts the expected violent confrontation.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict is between truth and deception, as the protagonist must navigate a dangerous situation by using a false cover story.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The scene generates anxiety and relief, but the emotional impact is muted by the rapid resolution of the immediate threat.

Dialogue: 7

The dialogue is functional and tense, with Joe's Farsi pitch being the standout, but some exchanges feel expository and lack subtext.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it combines high stakes with a clever, character-driven solution, and the visual of the guards being captivated by the storyboards is both humorous and tense.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is tight, with quick cuts between the checkpoint and the Komiteh HQ, maintaining tension while allowing brief moments of levity.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear action lines and dialogue, though the intercuts could be slightly confusing if not read carefully.

Structure: 8

The scene follows a classic thriller structure: setup (checkpoint), complication (Azizi's suspicion), and resolution (storyboard distraction), with intercuts to raise stakes.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the urgency of the CIA's operations room with the precarious situation at Mehrabad Airport. However, the transition between these two locations could be smoother to maintain the flow of the narrative. The abrupt shifts may confuse the audience about the timeline and the stakes involved.
  • Mark Lijek's attempt to communicate through miming is a clever way to illustrate the language barrier and the tension of the moment. However, it could benefit from more visual cues or context to enhance the audience's understanding of the situation. For instance, adding a brief moment where Lijek's frustration is palpable could deepen the emotional impact.
  • Joe Stafford's confident storytelling is a highlight of the scene, showcasing his character's resourcefulness. However, the dialogue could be tightened to avoid redundancy. For example, phrases like 'You see?' and 'Y’see these guys here?' could be streamlined to maintain the pacing and keep the audience engaged.
  • The introduction of Azizi as a character is effective, but his motivations and authority could be more clearly established. Providing a brief line that hints at his background or his role within the Komiteh would add depth and make his character more compelling.
  • The scene's climax hinges on the verification of their story, which is a strong narrative device. However, the stakes could be heightened by incorporating more immediate consequences if they fail to convince the Komiteh. This could involve a more explicit threat or a time constraint that adds urgency to their situation.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a visual motif or recurring element that connects the CIA operations room and the airport scenes, such as a ticking clock or a countdown, to emphasize the urgency of the situation.
  • Enhance Mark Lijek's miming by incorporating more physicality or props that could help convey his message more clearly, making the scene more dynamic and engaging.
  • Streamline Joe Stafford's dialogue to focus on key points that drive the narrative forward, eliminating any repetitive phrases to maintain a brisk pace.
  • Provide a brief backstory or context for Azizi's character to establish his authority and motivations, making him a more formidable presence in the scene.
  • Introduce a ticking clock or a countdown element to heighten the tension, emphasizing the urgency of their situation and the potential consequences of failure.



Scene 53 -  Tension at Mehrabad Airport
281 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - KOMITEH STATION - MORNING 281

Azizi rings the phone three times -- four times -- he’s
going to hang up --

CHAMBERS (V.O.)
(out of breath)
Studio Six Films.


282 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - NIGHT 282

A beat of silence. Chambers catching his breath,
listening. The door to the office wide open.


283 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - KOMITEH STATION - MORNING 283

AZIZI
May I speak to Mr. Kevin Harkins --

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 108.
283 CONTINUED: 283

CHAMBERS (V.O.)
He’s out of the country on a
location scout. Can I take a
message?


284 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - NIGHT 284

Chambers listens for a response. Siegel now catches up.


285 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - KOMITEH STATION - MORNING 285

AZIZI
No message.


286 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - MORNING 286

ANNOUNCEMENT (V.O.)
Swissair announces final boarding
of Flight 363 to Zurich. All
passengers should be at the gate
at this time.


287 EXT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - MORNING 287

Khalkali and Komiteh are forcing the front door of the
house open.


288 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - THIRD CHECKPOINT - MORNING 288

Azizi comes back into the screened-off area. Looks at
Joe Stafford, then at Mendez. Then says something in
Farsi to the three Komiteh in the holding area. Then he
leaves.

The three young Komiteh look at the drawings, then at Joe
Stafford. Silence for a moment.

MENDEZ
(pushes the
storyboards toward
them)
Our gift to you. From our film.

Komiteh #1, who speaks enough English to understand,
translates to the others. They forget their
revolutionary mission for a second, happy with their
gift. They’d high-five if they could. They’re kids.

Komiteh #1 motions for the Houseguests to go.
ARGO - Final 109.


289 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - FOYER - MORNING 289

Khalkali and a dozen Komiteh, guns drawn, rush into the
residence. Empty liquor bottles. The remains of what
looks like breakfast for a group of people.

But the place is empty.


290 INT./EXT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - FLIGHT GATE - MORNING 290

A BUSLOAD of passengers about to be ferried to the
airplane.

A Swissair Rep is closing the gate to Flight 363. She
looks up to see the Houseguests and Mendez hurrying
through the terminal, headed toward her. She holds the
gate, speaks in German into a walkie, and --


291 INT. CANADIAN AMBASSADOR’S RESIDENCE - KEN’S OFFICE - 291
MORNING

The Komiteh search the house. Khalkali gets on the
phone.


292 OMITTED 292


293 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - FLIGHT GATE - MORNING 293

Kathy Stafford’s ticket is taken and she walks through
the door. Hurries toward the transport bus. The other
five Houseguests and Mendez behind her and --


294 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - KOMITEH STATION - MORNING 294

A phone rings and a Young Komiteh picks up the call. He
listens for a moment. Then he drops the phone and RUNS
into the airport terminal and --


295 INT. RUNWAY TRANSPORT BUS - MORNING 295

The Houseguests sit aboard the bus, headed to a waiting
DC-10.

The DRIVER puts the bus into gear. It doesn’t go. He
shakes his head. This goddamn thing. Shifts gears
again. Now it goes.
ARGO - Final 110.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary Azizi tries to contact Mr. Kevin Harkins at the Komiteh Station in Mehrabad Airport but learns he is unavailable. Meanwhile, the Komiteh search the empty Canadian Ambassador's residence. A brief moment of camaraderie occurs when Mendez presents storyboards to the young Komiteh, distracting them from their mission. As the Houseguests rush to the flight gate, a young Komiteh receives a phone call, heightening the tension. The scene concludes with the Houseguests boarding a transport bus that initially fails to start.
Strengths
  • Intense conflict
  • High stakes
  • Tense atmosphere
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development
  • Some dialogue may feel exposition-heavy

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

This scene delivers the climactic escape with tight cross-cutting and a palpable sense of relief, but the stalled bus moment feels slightly contrived and the Komiteh's phone call is left unresolved, which slightly undercuts the tension.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of a last-minute escape with intercut threats is classic but executed with effective pacing and a clever use of the storyboards as a distraction.

Plot: 7.8

The plot advances rapidly: the escapees clear the final checkpoint, the Komiteh discover the empty house, and the bus stalls, creating a final obstacle. The phone call at the Komiteh station adds a cliffhanger.

Originality: 7

The use of storyboards as a distraction is a fresh take on the 'cover story' trope, and the stalled bus adds a realistic, mundane obstacle.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

Mendez remains calm and resourceful, pushing the storyboards as a gift. The Houseguests are mostly reactive, but their collective relief is palpable. Khalkali's silent search adds menace.

Character Changes: 5

Mendez shows increased resolve and leadership; the Houseguests shift from fear to cautious hope. No major character change, but a collective emotional shift.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to successfully execute the plan to rescue the American hostages and escape Iran safely. This reflects his desire to protect the hostages and his own survival instincts.

External Goal: 9

The protagonist's external goal is to board the flight to Zurich with the American hostages without being caught by the Iranian authorities. This goal reflects the immediate challenge of evading capture and ensuring the hostages' safety.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 8.5

Conflict is high: the Komiteh are closing in, the phone call could expose them, and the bus stall threatens everything. The opposition is strong but momentarily distracted.

Opposition: 8

The opposition is strong: Khalkali and the Komiteh are actively searching, and the phone call could expose the escapees. However, the Komiteh are momentarily distracted by the storyboards.

High Stakes: 9.5

Stakes are life-or-death: if caught, the Houseguests face execution. The Komiteh's discovery of the empty house raises the stakes further.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story to its climax: the escape is nearly complete, but the phone call and the stalled bus keep the outcome uncertain.

Unpredictability: 7.5

The stalled bus is a surprising twist, and the phone call at the Komiteh station leaves the outcome uncertain, making the scene unpredictable.

Philosophical Conflict: 5

The philosophical conflict in this scene is the clash between the revolutionary ideals of the Komiteh forces and the humanistic values of the protagonist and his team. This challenges the protagonist's belief in the importance of individual freedom and human life.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 8

The emotional impact is strong: relief as they pass the checkpoint, dread as the Komiteh search the empty house, and a spike of anxiety when the bus stalls.

Dialogue: 6

Dialogue is minimal but functional: Mendez's 'Our gift to you' is a clever line, and the Swissair announcement adds urgency. The lack of dialogue during the bus stall relies on visual tension.

Engagement: 8.5

This scene is engaging because it intercuts multiple points of tension, keeping the reader on edge with the phone call and the stalled bus.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is brisk, with quick cuts between locations, but the stalled bus moment slows down just enough to heighten tension.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8.5

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and intercuts. The use of V.O. and quick cuts is effective.

Structure: 8

The scene uses intercutting to build tension, following the classic thriller structure of simultaneous pursuit and escape. The stalled bus is a final beat before resolution.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the urgency of the Komiteh's search with the Houseguests' desperate attempt to escape. However, the pacing could be improved; the transitions between the Komiteh's actions and the Houseguests' movements feel a bit disjointed, which may confuse the audience about the timeline of events.
  • The dialogue is minimal, which can work well in a tense scene, but it may benefit from a few more lines that convey the characters' emotions or thoughts. For instance, adding a line from Mendez that reflects his anxiety or determination could enhance the emotional stakes.
  • The use of visual storytelling is strong, particularly with the contrasting settings of the airport and the Canadian Ambassador's residence. However, the scene could benefit from more sensory details to immerse the audience further. Describing the sounds of the airport, the tension in the air, or the expressions on the characters' faces would enhance the atmosphere.
  • The moment where Mendez offers the storyboards as a 'gift' is a clever way to diffuse tension, but it feels slightly rushed. Expanding this moment to show the Komiteh's initial skepticism before they warm up to the storyboards could create a more satisfying character arc for them.
  • The scene ends on a note of uncertainty with the bus not starting, which is effective for building suspense. However, it might be more impactful if there were a brief moment of dialogue or reaction from the Houseguests that highlights their fear or frustration, making the stakes feel even higher.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a few lines of internal monologue or dialogue from Mendez or Joe Stafford to convey their emotional state during this high-stakes moment.
  • Enhance the sensory details in the scene to create a more immersive experience for the audience. Describe the sounds, smells, and sights of the airport and the tension in the air.
  • Expand the moment where Mendez presents the storyboards to the Komiteh. Show their initial skepticism and how they gradually become more engaged with the storyboards to create a more dynamic interaction.
  • Ensure smoother transitions between the different locations and actions to maintain clarity about the timeline and the urgency of the situation.
  • Add a brief moment of reaction from the Houseguests when the bus fails to start, which could heighten the tension and emphasize their precarious situation.



Scene 54 -  Chaos at Mehrabad Airport
296 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - MORNING 296

Young Komiteh RUNNING through the terminal, pushing
through a crowd, making a woman drop her suitcase,
contents scattering. An automatic weapon at his side.


297 EXT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - MORNING 297

The Houseguests head up the stairs to the plane.


298 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - FLIGHT GATE - MORNING 298

Azizi and the three Komiteh from the third checkpoint
stand up from the table with the Argo storyboards. Young
Komiteh shouts at them and they take up their weapons and
join him, running --

Azizi and the three Komiteh arrive at Flight 363’s gate.
The door is CLOSED.


299 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - MORNING 299

The Houseguests put their carry-on luggage into the
overhead bins. A FLIGHT ATTENDANT is already holding a
detached seatbelt preparing to do her safety mime.

PILOT (V.O.)
(German-accented
English)
Ladies and gentlemen, from the
flight-deck. We’re looking at a
brief delay -- *

Passengers groan a bit as they read paperbacks or
International Herald Tribunes. Mark Lijek’s arm is
around Cora. Lee Schatz is moving his mouth in what
looks like a prayer. Kathy Stafford’s fingers shake as
she holds an arm rest. Joe Stafford tries to stay her
hand.

Mendez is sitting looking out the window toward the
terminal.


300 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - FLIGHT GATE - MORNING 300

Azizi yells to the Swissair Rep, dragging her back toward
the gate. We can’t hear what she says back, but she’s
shaking her head.
ARGO - Final 111.


301 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 COCKPIT - MORNING 301

From the window, we can see a GROUND CREWMAN give a
thumbs-up. The scrubbed Swiss PILOT, 50s, gives a thumbs-
up back.

He gently releases the throttle lever.


302 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - MORNING 302

Mendez and the Houseguests feel the plane start to move.


303 INT. MEHRABAD AIRPORT - MORNING 303

Azizi goes to the WINDOW. He can see the Swissair plane
slowly backing onto the runway.

He picks up a walkie and pushes through the flight gate
door, setting off an alarm, followed by the three other
Komiteh.

He reaches the METAL BARS outside and can’t get past.

He CALLS INTO THE WALKIE.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In a tense scene at Mehrabad Airport, Young Komiteh creates chaos as he rushes through the terminal with an automatic weapon, joined by Azizi and other Komiteh members. They attempt to reach the closed gate for Flight 363, while inside the Swissair DC-10, anxious passengers await their delayed flight. Azizi confronts a Swissair representative for assistance but is met with refusal. As the plane begins to move, Azizi's frantic attempts to follow are thwarted by metal bars, leaving him trapped as alarms sound.
Strengths
  • Building tension and suspense
  • Effective portrayal of urgency and fear
  • Strong character dynamics
Weaknesses
  • Minimal dialogue
  • Limited character growth

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.5

The scene's primary job is to deliver the climactic escape sequence, and it lands with high tension and emotional payoff, but the lack of a final confrontation or a clear 'all clear' moment slightly undercuts the resolution, leaving the audience wanting a more definitive release of tension.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of a Hollywood-style escape under the guise of a film crew is inherently compelling, and this scene capitalizes on the built-up suspense of the entire operation. The idea of the plane's delay and the Komiteh's pursuit adds a fresh layer of tension to the familiar escape narrative.

Plot: 7.5

The plot advances the escape sequence to its climax, with the Houseguests boarding the plane and the Komiteh arriving too late. The scene effectively uses the delay to heighten suspense, but the resolution feels slightly anticlimactic as the plane simply starts to move without a final obstacle.

Originality: 8

The scene is original in its execution, using the real-life historical context and the film-crew cover to create a unique escape scenario. The focus on the mundane details of boarding a plane, contrasted with the life-or-death stakes, is a fresh take on the escape genre.


Character Development

Characters: 7

The scene focuses on the collective anxiety of the Houseguests, with individual reactions (Mark's arm around Cora, Lee's prayer, Kathy's shaking fingers) providing a strong sense of their emotional states. Mendez remains stoic, but his watchful gaze conveys his internal tension. However, there is little character development or change in this scene.

Character Changes: 2

There is minimal character change in this scene; the Houseguests remain in a state of fear and hope, and Mendez's stoicism is maintained. The scene is more about the culmination of the escape plan than about character development.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is likely to ensure the safety and success of the mission, reflecting their deeper desire for accomplishment and validation of their skills.

External Goal: 8

The protagonist's external goal is to prevent the Swissair plane from taking off, reflecting the immediate challenge of stopping the escape of the Houseguests.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 7

The conflict is primarily external, with the Komiteh's pursuit creating a race against time. The internal conflict of the Houseguests' fear is also present, but it is not deeply explored. The scene's conflict is resolved when the plane starts to move, but the lack of a final confrontation leaves the conflict feeling slightly unresolved.

Opposition: 8

The opposition is strong, with the Komiteh actively pursuing the Houseguests and the plane's delay giving them a chance to catch up. The opposition is physical and immediate, creating a clear obstacle to the escape.

High Stakes: 9

The stakes are extremely high, as the Houseguests' lives are on the line. The Komiteh's pursuit and the plane's delay amplify the tension, making the outcome uncertain until the very end.

Story Forward: 8

The scene moves the story forward by completing the escape sequence, with the Houseguests boarding the plane and the Komiteh failing to stop them. It resolves the immediate threat and sets up the final moments of the film.

Unpredictability: 7.5

The scene is unpredictable because the outcome is uncertain until the very end. The plane's delay and the Komiteh's pursuit create a sense of unpredictability, as the audience cannot be sure if the escape will succeed.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the clash between political ideologies and the use of force to achieve goals. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs in the righteousness of their actions.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7.5

The scene generates significant emotional impact through the palpable anxiety of the Houseguests and the suspense of the Komiteh's pursuit. The moment the plane begins to move provides a sense of relief, but the emotional payoff is somewhat muted by the lack of a clear 'safe' moment.

Dialogue: 6.5

Dialogue is minimal, with only the pilot's announcement and Azizi's off-screen shouts. This restraint effectively builds tension, but the lack of any final exchange between the characters or a moment of relief feels like a missed opportunity for emotional payoff.

Engagement: 8

This scene is engaging because it places the audience in the midst of the escape, with the constant threat of the Komiteh and the uncertainty of the plane's departure. The emotional investment in the characters makes every moment tense.

Pacing: 8.5

The pacing is excellent, with quick cuts between the plane and the terminal maintaining a rapid rhythm. The brief moments of calm inside the plane contrast with the frantic pursuit, creating a dynamic and effective pace.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of V.O. for the pilot's announcement is effective, and the intercuts are clearly marked. The scene is easy to visualize.

Structure: 8

The scene follows a classic suspense structure: setup (boarding), complication (delay), pursuit (Komiteh running), and resolution (plane moving). The intercutting between the plane and the terminal effectively maintains tension, though the resolution could be more definitive.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension by juxtaposing the frantic actions of the Young Komiteh with the calmness of the Houseguests boarding the plane. However, the pacing could be improved by adding more sensory details to enhance the urgency and chaos of the airport environment.
  • The dialogue is minimal, which works well in creating a sense of urgency, but it may benefit from some internal thoughts or brief exchanges among the Houseguests to convey their emotional states more vividly. This would help the audience connect with their anxiety and fear as they await their escape.
  • The visual transitions between the Komiteh's actions and the Houseguests' experiences are effective, but the scene could use more clarity in the stakes. For instance, explicitly stating the consequences if the Komiteh catch up to the Houseguests would heighten the tension and urgency.
  • The use of the flight attendant's safety mime is a clever touch, but it could be expanded to show the contrast between the mundane safety procedures and the life-threatening situation outside. This would enhance the dramatic irony of the scene.
  • The scene ends with Azizi's frustration as he cannot reach the Houseguests, which is a strong moment. However, it could be more impactful if it included a visual or auditory cue that signifies the Houseguests' escape, such as the sound of the plane's engines starting, to emphasize the narrowness of their escape.
Suggestions
  • Incorporate more sensory details, such as sounds of the airport, the smell of jet fuel, or the chatter of passengers, to create a more immersive atmosphere.
  • Add brief internal monologues or dialogue among the Houseguests to express their fears and hopes, which would deepen the audience's emotional investment in their escape.
  • Clarify the stakes by including a line or two that highlights the potential consequences if the Komiteh catch the Houseguests, making the urgency of the situation more palpable.
  • Expand on the flight attendant's safety demonstration to create a stark contrast between the normalcy of air travel and the chaos unfolding outside, enhancing the dramatic tension.
  • Consider ending the scene with a more definitive auditory cue of the plane's engines starting or the sound of alarms, reinforcing the tension and the precariousness of the Houseguests' escape.



Scene 55 -  Escape from Tehran
304 INT. MEHRABAD FLIGHT TOWER - MORNING 304

An Iranian FLIGHT TRAFFIC CONTROLLER calmly speaks into
his radio in British-accented English.

FLIGHT TRAFFIC CONTROLLER
SwissAir 363, you are Number 2 for
departure.


305 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - MORNING 305

Out the window of the plane. Two IRANIAN POLICE CARS and
a CANVAS-TOPPED TRUCK are headed down the runway toward
the plane.


306 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - MENDEZ’S POV - MORNING 306

looking out from his window seat.


307 EXT. AIRPORT RUNWAY - MORNING 307

An IRAN AIRLINES 747 takes off, revealing the Swissair
jet behind it. Only empty runway ahead of Swissair 363
now and --
ARGO - Final 112.


308 INT. MEHRABAD FLIGHT TOWER - MORNING 308


ANGLE ON BOOTS

taking stairs two at a time.

Three KOMITEH WITH AUTOMATICS rush up the tower stairs --


309 EXT. AIRPORT RUNWAY - MORNING 309

We’re SPEEDING BEHIND two Iranian police cars and a
canvas-topped TRUCK as they speed toward the Swissair
plane. In the back of the truck we can see half a dozen
Komiteh, weapons drawn and --


310 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - COCKPIT - MORNING 310

FLIGHT TRAFFIC CONTROLLER (V.O.)
Swissair 363 --

The Pilot puts his hand on the throttle control.


311 INT. MEHRABAD FLIGHT TOWER - MORNING 311

FLIGHT TRAFFIC CONTROLLER
-- you are cleared for take-off.

The Flight Traffic Controller moves his head-set mic away
from his mouth to take a drink of very strong Iranian
tea, and -- the door to the Control Room BURSTS OPEN.
Three Komiteh with automatics, shouting instructions to
the Traffic Controller, who spills his tea --


312 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - MORNING 312

Mendez looking out the window --


313 EXT. AIRPORT RUNWAY - MORNING 313

ANGLE ON THE THREE IRANIAN VEHICLES

speeding ahead -- they’re GAINING ON us --


313A INT. COCKPIT - CONTINUOUS ACTION 313A

The CO-PILOT looks out the window. Sees they are being
pursued by militia and police. He looks to the Pilot.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 113.
313A CONTINUED: 313A

A beat. The Pilot reaches down and pushes all four
engines to go FULL THROTTLE.


313B EXT. AIRPORT RUNWAY - CONTINUOUS ACTION 313B

ANGLE ON THE JEEPS

We start to PULL AWAY FROM them -- leaving them behind --
beginning to RISE UP --


314 INT. MEHRABAD FLIGHT TOWER - MORNING 314

The Flight Controller has his arms up... THROUGH the
floor-to-ceiling windows of the tower, as three Komiteh
watch a Swissair DC-10 angle upward and leave the
ground...


315 EXT. AIRPORT RUNWAY - MORNING 315

The Komiteh from the Jeep are now standing on the runway
watching the plane disappear.


316 EXT. TEHRAN STREET NEAR AIRPORT - CONTINUOUS ACTION 316

We are looking at a street corner in Tehran when the
PLANE CRESTS THE STOREFRONT, heading upward and away.
Genres: ["Thriller","Drama"]

Summary In the Mehrabad Flight Tower and on the runway of Tehran's airport, tension escalates as an Iranian Flight Traffic Controller clears SwissAir 363 for take-off. Just as the plane prepares to depart, armed Komiteh arrive in police cars, threatening to halt the flight. Amidst the chaos, the pilot reacts swiftly, pushing the engines to full throttle. The Swissair DC-10 successfully takes off, leaving the Komiteh behind as they watch helplessly from the ground.
Strengths
  • Intense tension and suspense
  • Realistic portrayal of high-stakes situation
  • Strong character reactions to danger
Weaknesses
  • Limited character development in this specific scene

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 8.2

This scene's primary job is to deliver the climactic escape sequence, and it lands with high tension and visual clarity. The single biggest limiter is the lack of character interiority—we see the action but not the emotional stakes from the Houseguests' perspective, which would elevate the scene from thrilling to deeply moving.


Story Content

Concept: 8.5

The concept of a civilian escape under military pursuit is classic, but the execution—using the control tower as a neutral observer and the silent race against time—is fresh and effective.

Plot: 8.8

The plot advances the escape from the terminal to the runway, with clear obstacles (pursuing vehicles, tower interference) and a decisive resolution (takeoff). The sequence is logically coherent and propulsive.

Originality: 7.5

The scene is original in its use of the control tower as a passive observer and the silent race, but it follows the familiar 'escape from danger' trope. The authenticity of the airport setting adds freshness.


Character Development

Characters: 6

Characters are mostly absent from this scene; Mendez is a passive observer, and the pilot's decision is the only character action. The lack of character focus is a weakness, but the pilot's quiet resolve adds a subtle human element.

Character Changes: 2

No significant character change occurs; the scene is action-driven. The pilot's decision to take off is a moment of resolve, but it doesn't alter the characters' arcs.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is likely to ensure the safety and successful departure of the Swissair DC-10. This reflects their deeper need for control, competence, and the ability to handle pressure in a crisis.

External Goal: 9

The protagonist's external goal in this scene is to take off safely despite the presence of Iranian police cars and the canvas-topped truck heading towards the plane. This reflects the immediate challenge of evading potential security threats and leaving the airport without interference.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 9

The conflict is external and physical: the pursuit by Komiteh and police versus the plane's escape. The internal conflict is minimal, but the external stakes are high.

Opposition: 9

The opposition is formidable: armed Komiteh, police vehicles, and the tower's potential to revoke clearance. The pilot's defiance is the only counter.

High Stakes: 10

The stakes are life-or-death: if the plane is stopped, the Houseguests will be captured and likely executed. The pursuit makes the stakes tangible.

Story Forward: 9

The scene moves the story from the airport terminal to the sky, resolving the immediate escape and setting up the final act. It is a major plot point.

Unpredictability: 8

The outcome is uncertain because the pursuit is relentless, and the tower's interruption could change the clearance at any moment. The pilot's decision to take off is a surprise twist.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict evident in this scene is the clash between authority and resistance. The Flight Traffic Controller represents authority and order, while the Komiteh with automatics symbolize resistance and potential danger. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs in following protocol versus taking risks to ensure safety.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 8

The emotional impact is high due to the suspense and the relief of takeoff, but it is more visceral than emotional—we feel the tension but not the characters' personal fear or joy.

Dialogue: 7.5

Dialogue is minimal and functional—the controller's calm instructions contrast with the chaos, and the pilot's silence speaks volumes. The lack of dialogue is a strength in building tension, but it also limits character expression.

Engagement: 9

This scene is engaging because it creates a real-time race with multiple points of view, making the reader hold their breath as the plane accelerates.

Pacing: 9

The pacing is rapid and relentless, with short scenes and quick cuts that mirror the urgency. The lack of dialogue speeds up the rhythm, making the takeoff feel like a release.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 9

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of POV and continuous action markers enhances readability.

Structure: 9

The scene follows a classic thriller structure: setup (controller's call), rising action (pursuit), climax (takeoff), and resolution (plane in the sky). The intercutting between locations maintains tension.


Critique
  • The scene effectively builds tension as the Swissair plane prepares for takeoff while being pursued by the Komiteh. The juxtaposition of the calm Flight Traffic Controller and the chaotic pursuit creates a strong sense of urgency.
  • The use of visual elements, such as the boots rushing up the stairs and the view from Mendez's window, enhances the suspense and allows the audience to feel the immediacy of the situation. However, the scene could benefit from more sensory details to immerse the audience further in the environment.
  • The dialogue is minimal, which works well in this high-stakes moment, but adding a few lines of internal thoughts or brief exchanges among the characters could deepen the emotional impact and provide insight into their state of mind as they face danger.
  • The pacing is generally effective, but the transition between the calmness of the Flight Traffic Controller and the sudden chaos of the Komiteh's entrance could be more pronounced. A moment of silence or a brief pause before the chaos erupts could heighten the shock value.
  • The scene ends abruptly after the plane takes off, which is effective in conveying the relief of escape. However, a brief moment of reflection from Mendez or another character could provide closure and emphasize the gravity of their situation.
Suggestions
  • Incorporate more sensory details, such as sounds of the airport, the smell of the tea, or the tension in the air, to create a more immersive experience for the audience.
  • Consider adding a line or two of internal dialogue or a quick exchange between characters to convey their emotions and thoughts during this tense moment.
  • Enhance the transition between the calm and chaos by including a moment of silence or a visual cue that signifies the impending danger before the Komiteh burst in.
  • After the plane takes off, include a brief moment of reflection from Mendez or another character to emphasize the relief of their escape and the weight of what they have just experienced.
  • Ensure that the stakes are clear throughout the scene by highlighting the consequences of failure, perhaps through a quick flashback or a line of dialogue that reminds the audience of what is at risk.



Scene 56 -  Escape and Reflection
317 INT. CIA (LANGLEY) - NIGHT 317

O’Donnell and the Kids gathered around some phones and
monitors in the Pit.

LAMONT
(taking off
headphones)
We have wheels up. *

He starts to punch the air. O’Donnell stays his arm.

O’DONNELL
Wait.


318 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - MORNING 318

The Houseguests -- holding their breath --

Mendez -- looking out the window -- scanning the air
around the plane -- behind every cloud --

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 114.
318 CONTINUED: 318

FLIGHT ATTENDANT (V.O.)
Ladies and gentlemen, it is our
pleasure to announce that
alcoholic beverages are now
available, as we have cleared
Iranian airspace.

The Houseguests shout and embrace and celebrate. Bob
Anders high-fives Lee Schatz, then the other Houseguests.
Mark Lijek, crying, embraces Cora.

Kathy Stafford is laughing. She kisses her husband’s
hand.

Some of the other passengers look up from their
newspapers, annoyed at this Canadian fuss.


319 INT. CIA (LANGLEY) - THE PIT - NIGHT 319

All eyes watch Malinov, listening, headphone to one
ear...

MALINOV
They’re CLEAR!

Cheers in the Pit. O’Donnell embraces Malinov.


320 INT./EXT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - NIGHT 320

Siegel throws down a phone and rushes outside... to where
Chambers smokes.

SIEGEL
OUUUT! THEY’RE OUT!

Chambers and Lester scream like kids who’ve just scored
the game-winning touchdown. The P.A. tries to shush
them.


321 INT. SWISSAIR DC-10 - MORNING 321

A mini-champagne bottle pops. The Houseguests are
celebrating: New Year’s Eve and a Super Bowl victory
party in a DC-10 aisle.

FIND Mendez, sitting alone, apart from the celebration.
Looking out the window. Mendez turns to see that someone
is standing in the aisle next to him. Joe Stafford.
Tony looks up at Joe.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 115.
321 CONTINUED: 321

FLIGHT ATTENDANT (O.S.)
I’m sorry, sir. You need to sit
down.

But Joe doesn’t pay attention to the Flight Attendant.
He extends his hand to Mendez. Who takes it. A moment
between them.

FLIGHT ATTENDANT
Sir?

Joe goes back to his seat.

HOLD ON Tony Mendez.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In the CIA's Pit at Langley, O'Donnell and his team anxiously await news of the Houseguests' escape. As Lamont announces the plane's departure, O'Donnell urges caution. Meanwhile, aboard the Swissair DC-10, the Houseguests celebrate their escape over Iranian airspace, though Mendez remains contemplative. The scene shifts between the jubilant celebration on the plane and the relieved cheers in the Pit, culminating in a close-up of Mendez reflecting on the situation amidst the chaos.
Strengths
  • Effective portrayal of tension and relief
  • Strong character interactions
  • Emotional impact on the audience
Weaknesses
  • Limited exploration of individual character arcs
  • Some secondary characters lack depth

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene delivers the long-awaited payoff of the escape with palpable relief and celebration, but its emotional depth is somewhat undercut by the brevity of the final character moment, which could have been expanded to fully land the thematic weight.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of a Hollywood-style escape from Tehran is inherently compelling, and this scene capitalizes on the tension-release structure, but the concept is not new; it's a well-executed execution of a familiar trope.

Plot: 7

The plot advances from the immediate danger of the airport to the safety of the plane, resolving the central conflict of the escape, but the scene is more of a denouement than a plot twist, with the main action already completed.

Originality: 6.5

The scene is original in its specific details, like the Polaroid incident and the storyboards, but the overall escape-from-danger plot is familiar; the originality lies in the execution.


Character Development

Characters: 6.5

The Houseguests are shown celebrating, but individual characterization is minimal; Mendez's quiet isolation and Joe Stafford's gesture are the only character beats, which are effective but underdeveloped.

Character Changes: 4

Mendez's character shows a subtle change from intense focus to quiet reflection, but the change is not fully realized; Joe Stafford's gesture suggests growth, but it's not explored.

Internal Goal: 6

The protagonist's internal goal is to ensure the success of the mission and the safety of the houseguests. This reflects his deeper desire to protect and save lives.

External Goal: 9

The protagonist's external goal is to successfully extract the houseguests from Iran. This reflects the immediate circumstances and challenges they are facing in a hostile environment.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

The primary conflict (escape) is resolved, leaving only internal conflict for Mendez and a minor external annoyance from other passengers, so the conflict level is low.

Opposition: 2

The opposition (Iranian authorities) is no longer present, so the scene lacks a direct antagonist, but the memory of the threat and the annoyed passengers provide minor opposition.

High Stakes: 4

The stakes were high in the previous scenes, but here they are resolved, so the tension drops significantly, though the memory of the danger still lingers.

Story Forward: 6

The scene resolves the immediate escape plot, but it also sets up the aftermath, showing the characters' relief and Mendez's lingering tension, which could lead to a final reflection.

Unpredictability: 5

The outcome is predictable (they escape), but the specific details, like the flight attendant's announcement and Joe's gesture, add small surprises that keep it from being entirely formulaic.

Philosophical Conflict: 5

There is a philosophical conflict between the celebration of the successful extraction and the annoyance of other passengers who are not aware of the danger the houseguests were in. This challenges the protagonist's values of sacrifice and heroism.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The relief and celebration are emotionally satisfying, but the scene's brevity and lack of deeper character moments limit its emotional depth.

Dialogue: 6

Dialogue is sparse and functional, with the flight attendant's announcement providing the key relief, and the brief exchange between Joe and Mendez carrying weight, but there's little else to showcase.

Engagement: 7.5

This scene is engaging because it delivers the payoff of the escape, with the celebration and relief being cathartic, and the quiet moment with Mendez adds a layer of introspection.

Pacing: 8

The pacing is well-managed: the tension of waiting is brief, the celebration is energetic, and the final moment is slow and reflective, creating a satisfying rhythm.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and standard, with clear scene headings and action lines, though the use of 'FIND' and 'HOLD ON' is a bit unconventional but acceptable in screenplay format.

Structure: 7.5

The scene follows a classic resolution structure: tension (waiting for clearance), release (celebration), and a quiet coda (Mendez's moment with Joe), which is effective for a thriller's denouement.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the contrasting emotions of celebration and tension, showcasing the relief of the Houseguests as they clear Iranian airspace. However, the transition between the CIA's Pit and the Swissair DC-10 could be smoother to maintain narrative flow. The abrupt shifts might disorient the audience, so consider using a visual or auditory cue to bridge these moments more seamlessly.
  • While the celebration among the Houseguests is lively and engaging, Mendez's isolation amidst the joy feels somewhat underdeveloped. This moment could be enhanced by providing a brief internal monologue or flashback that reflects his emotional state, deepening the audience's understanding of his character and the weight of the situation he has just navigated.
  • The dialogue from the flight attendant is functional but lacks a sense of urgency or personality. Adding a touch of humor or a more distinctive voice could enhance the scene's atmosphere and make the flight attendant a more memorable character.
  • The reactions of the other passengers to the Houseguests' celebration are mentioned but not fully explored. This could be an opportunity to add layers to the scene by showing a mix of annoyance and curiosity from the other passengers, which would further emphasize the Houseguests' relief and joy in contrast to the surrounding tension.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a visual or auditory transition between the CIA's Pit and the Swissair DC-10 to create a smoother narrative flow.
  • Incorporate a brief internal monologue or flashback for Mendez during the celebration to provide insight into his emotional state and the weight of the situation.
  • Enhance the flight attendant's dialogue with humor or a distinctive voice to make her character more memorable and engaging.
  • Explore the reactions of other passengers more fully to highlight the contrast between the Houseguests' celebration and the mixed feelings of those around them.



Scene 57 -  Reflections and Resolutions
322 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - NIGHT 322

Drinking straight from a bottle of Beefeater.

SIEGEL
It’s history, is what it is.
‘History plays out first as farce,
then as tragedy.’

CHAMBERS
The quote’s the other way around.

SIEGEL
Who said it? *

CHAMBERS
Marx.

SIEGEL
Groucho?

CHAMBERS
Karl.


322A EXT. BORDER CROSSING - ABADAN, IRAQ - MORNING 322A *

An IRAQI BORDER GUARD, checking passports at a chain- *
link, barbed-wire fence, speaks to a WOMAN IN HIJAB who *
is turned away from us. The Guard stamps the Woman’s *
passport. *

BORDER GUARD (ARABIC) *
You are admitted to the Republic *
of Iraq. *

He closes the passport and the Woman turns around: it is *
SAHAR. *

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 116.
322A CONTINUED: 322A

She stands and stares at the line of REFUGEES still *
waiting to cross: WOMEN balancing blankets tied up with *
all they own. An OLD MAN being helped by his SON. A *
couple of KIDS, a SEVEN YEAR-OLD shushing an INFANT in *
her arms. Lives that have become another tableau of *
refugees. *

Sahar, now one of them, walks into Iraq. *


323 INT. CIA (LANGLEY) - NIGHT 323

The celebration is quieter and drunker now.

LAMONT
(a couple of beers
along)
We are the good guys! *

ROSSI LAMONT
Six down, fifty to go. Call the Times, nail it to
the fucking door. The CIA
are the good guys.

MALINOV
The Canadians are the good guys.

LAMONT
-- we’re not greedy -- them too --

MALINOV
Only. Canada takes the credit, or
they’ll retaliate against the
hostages. Great Satan wasn’t
involved. No CIA.

LAMONT
Is that right, Jack?

O’DONNELL
Involved in what? We’re as
surprised as anybody. Thank you,
Canada.

Jack raises a glass of Scotch and takes a drink.


324 ARCHIVE FOOTAGE 324

A homemade sign that reads: “THANK YOU CANADA!”*
(*Homecoming ceremony for Houseguests 2/1980.) Hundreds
are gathered to welcome the six back.



(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 117.
324 CONTINUED: 324

TED KOPPEL (V.O.)
Finally, a sliver of really good
news.

*AMERICA HELD HOSTAGE, DAY 87, BROADCAST (1/29/80).

CUT TO:


325 CANADIAN MINISTER OF EXTERNAL AFFAIRS 325

FLORA MacDONALD, late 60’s. (*A.H.H. 1/29/80)

FLORA MacDONALD (V.O.)
It was a simple operation, really.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In the Argo production office at night, Siegel drinks and philosophizes about history, engaging in light banter with Chambers. The scene shifts to a border crossing in Abadan, Iraq, where Sahar, a woman in hijab, observes the plight of refugees. It then transitions to a CIA office in Langley, where Lamont, Rossi, and Malinov celebrate the operation's success, though they clash over who deserves credit, with Malinov emphasizing Canada's role. The scene concludes with archive footage of the hostages' homecoming, accompanied by a voiceover from Ted Koppel, providing a sense of closure.
Strengths
  • Effective tension-building
  • Emotional impact
  • Character development
Weaknesses
  • Some dialogue could be more impactful

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.8

This scene serves as the denouement, balancing the euphoria of the escape with the sobering reality of those left behind and the political cover-up. It lands effectively, but the shift to Sahar's subplot feels abrupt and underdeveloped, slightly diluting the emotional payoff of the main rescue.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of showing the aftermath from multiple perspectives—CIA, the escapees, and a side character—is strong, but the Sahar thread feels disconnected and underdeveloped.

Plot: 6.5

The plot advances the resolution, showing the immediate aftermath and the beginning of the cover story, but the Sahar scene introduces a new thread without clear connection to the main plot.

Originality: 7

The scene offers a fresh take on the aftermath by showing the celebratory and somber sides, but the Sahar subplot feels like an original but underdeveloped addition.


Character Development

Characters: 6

The CIA team's drunken celebration reveals their camaraderie and relief, while Sahar's silent walk shows her resilience, but neither is deeply explored.

Character Changes: 3

O'Donnell shows a shift from operational urgency to cautious relief, but the change is subtle and not fully realized.

Internal Goal: 5

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to navigate the complex political and moral implications of their actions, as seen in the dialogue about being 'the good guys' and the celebration turning quieter and drunker.

External Goal: 6

The protagonist's external goal is to successfully navigate the border crossing and enter Iraq without any issues.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 4

The conflict is mostly internal and residual—the tension between celebrating and the ongoing danger for the remaining hostages—but it's not actively dramatized.

Opposition: 2

The opposition is largely absent in this scene; the main threats have been overcome, leaving only the lingering danger for the remaining hostages, which is not actively opposed.

High Stakes: 4

The stakes have dropped significantly since the escape; the remaining tension is about the cover-up and the hostages still in Iran, but it's not foregrounded.

Story Forward: 5

The scene wraps up the escape and sets up the cover story, but it doesn't introduce new complications, making it a resolution rather than a forward push.

Unpredictability: 5

The scene is somewhat predictable as a resolution, but the inclusion of Sahar's crossing is an unexpected shift that adds a layer of complexity.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the moral ambiguity of the protagonist's actions and the geopolitical implications of their decisions. This challenges the protagonist's beliefs about right and wrong, and the consequences of their choices.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The emotional impact is mixed: the celebration is cathartic, but Sahar's scene adds a somber note that feels unearned due to lack of setup.

Dialogue: 6.5

The dialogue is natural and serves to highlight the characters' states—Lamont's drunken bravado, Malinov's caution, O'Donnell's deflection—but it's mostly expository.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because it shows the emotional payoff of the rescue and the beginning of the cover-up, but the Sahar subplot feels disconnected, reducing overall engagement.

Pacing: 5.5

The pacing is uneven: the celebration is leisurely, but the Sahar scene is abrupt, and the return to the CIA feels like a coda, making the rhythm feel disjointed.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and standard, with clear scene headings and action lines, though the Sahar scene is brief and could use more context.

Structure: 6

The scene follows a classic denouement structure: celebration, a shift to a secondary character's fate, and a return to the main group, but the transition to Sahar feels jarring.


Critique
  • The scene effectively juxtaposes the celebratory atmosphere in the Argo production office with the somber reality of Sahar's situation at the border crossing. This contrast highlights the emotional stakes of the story, but it could be enhanced by providing more depth to Sahar's character and her internal conflict as she transitions from a refugee to a symbol of loss.
  • The dialogue between Siegel and Chambers is witty and serves to lighten the mood, but it may benefit from a clearer connection to the overarching themes of the film. The quote from Marx, while clever, feels somewhat disconnected from the immediate context of the scene. Consider tying it more explicitly to the characters' experiences or the events unfolding in Iran.
  • The transition between the production office and the border crossing is abrupt. While this can create a jarring effect that emphasizes the contrast, it may also confuse the audience. A smoother transition or a visual cue could help maintain narrative flow and clarity.
  • The celebration in the CIA office feels somewhat muted and lacks a strong emotional payoff. While the characters express relief, the scene could benefit from a more visceral reaction to the successful escape, perhaps through a shared moment of vulnerability or reflection on the risks they took.
  • The use of archive footage at the end of the scene is a powerful choice, but it could be more effectively integrated into the narrative. Consider using the footage to enhance the emotional weight of the characters' actions, perhaps by showing the direct impact of their decisions on the hostages' lives.
Suggestions
  • Expand on Sahar's character by including a brief internal monologue or visual cues that convey her emotions as she crosses into Iraq. This will help the audience connect with her plight more deeply.
  • Rework the dialogue between Siegel and Chambers to more directly reflect the themes of sacrifice and the moral complexities of their actions. This could involve referencing the consequences of their decisions in a more poignant way.
  • Consider adding a visual or auditory transition that links the celebratory atmosphere of the production office with the somber reality of Sahar's crossing, such as a sound bridge or a visual motif that recurs throughout the scene.
  • Enhance the emotional climax of the CIA office celebration by incorporating a moment of silence or reflection among the characters, allowing them to acknowledge the gravity of their actions and the lives at stake.
  • Integrate the archive footage more seamlessly by using it to punctuate key emotional beats in the scene, perhaps showing the reactions of the hostages or their families as a direct response to the characters' actions.



Scene 58 -  A Triumphant Return Amidst Tension
326 INT. STATE DEPARTMENT - LOBBY - DAY 326

The Houseguests arrive in the State Department lobby.
Television lights everywhere.

TED KOPPEL (V.O.)
The six fled the country posing as
Canadian diplomats. They simply
walked away.

Camera flashes, wild cheers. Banners: “WELCOME HOME
CORA AND MARK!” “IDAHO LOVES YOU, LEE!” “WELCOME HOME,
BOB ANDERS!” It’s the first moment of national
celebration since the beginning of the crisis.


327 ARCHIVE FOOTAGE 327

IRANIAN FOREIGN MINISTER SADEQ GHOTBZADEH speaks angrily
into a microphone.

SADEQ GHOTBZADEH (V.O.)
Sooner or later, here or anywhere
in the world, Canada will pay for
this violation of the sovereignty
of Iran. (*News conference
1/29/80.)


328 MORE ARCHIVE FOOTAGE (*1/30/1980) 328

Of the State Department WELCOME HOME CEREMONY.
Ambassador KEN TAYLOR is presented with a HUGE FLORAL
BOUQUET. Cheering crowds all around him.


329 OMITTED 329 *
ARGO - Final 118.


330 EXT. BY LESTER’S POOL - DAY 330

Siegel in a bathrobe, looking out over L.A., holding
The New York Times in front of him: SIX U.S. DIPLOMATS,
HIDDEN BY CANADA, LEAVE IRAN SAFELY. Next to that, an
article about Ken Taylor: DIPLOMAT DIRECTED ESCAPE IN
IRAN. (Front page, *NYT 1/30/80.)

SIEGEL
She said, ‘Why couldn’t we pull
off something like that?’ You
know what I said to her?


331 INT. CIA (LANGLEY) - THE PIT - DAY 331

Mendez stands at a desk on the main floor.

MENDEZ
Wha’d you say to her?


332 EXT. BY LESTER’S POOL - DAY 332

SIEGEL
I said, ‘Argo fuck yourself.’
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In the State Department lobby, U.S. diplomats, known as the Houseguests, receive a warm welcome from the public after their escape from Iran, celebrated with cheers and banners. Archive footage reveals Iranian Foreign Minister Sadeq Ghotbzadeh's anger over the incident, contrasting with the joyous welcome home ceremony for Ambassador Ken Taylor. As the scene unfolds, Siegel reflects on the escape at Lester's pool, sharing a humorous remark with Mendez, highlighting the mix of celebration and underlying tension in the atmosphere.
Strengths
  • Effective portrayal of tension and celebration
  • Well-paced beat sequences
  • Strong character development
Weaknesses
  • Limited character changes
  • Some dialogue could be more impactful

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 6.5

This scene primarily serves as the denouement, delivering the emotional payoff of the rescue while also undercutting it with a wry, cynical coda. The biggest limiter is the abrupt tonal shift from the warm, public celebration to the private, almost dismissive poolside exchange, which can feel jarring and undercuts the earned catharsis.


Story Content

Concept: 7

The concept of showing the public celebration alongside the private, cynical reaction of the Hollywood producer is strong, but the execution feels a bit disjointed.

Plot: 5.5

The plot resolves the main story (the escape) but the final scene with Siegel feels like an epilogue that doesn't advance the plot, only comments on it.

Originality: 7.5

The use of archive footage and the cynical Hollywood coda is a fresh take on the typical triumphant ending, adding a layer of authenticity and irony.


Character Development

Characters: 6

The characters are mostly in a state of relief, with little development. Siegel's final line is a strong character beat, but Mendez is passive.

Character Changes: 1

No significant character change occurs; Siegel's line reinforces his established cynicism.

Internal Goal: 3

The protagonist's internal goal in this scene is to maintain composure and confidence in the face of external pressure and scrutiny. This reflects their need for validation and success in their mission.

External Goal: 1

The protagonist's external goal is to successfully navigate the political fallout and potential threats resulting from their actions. This reflects the immediate challenges they are facing in maintaining diplomatic relations and national security.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 2

The main conflict is resolved; the only remaining tension is the implied conflict between the CIA's secret role and the public narrative.

Opposition: 0

There is no active opposition in this scene; the opposition has been overcome.

High Stakes: 1

The stakes are resolved; the scene has no active stakes, only the memory of past ones.

Story Forward: 2

The story is essentially over; this scene provides closure and a final thematic note, but doesn't move the plot forward.

Unpredictability: 7

This scene is unpredictable because the final poolside exchange subverts the expected triumphant ending with a dose of Hollywood cynicism.

Philosophical Conflict: 4

The philosophical conflict in this scene revolves around the clash between national interests and international diplomacy. The protagonist must balance the needs of their country with the consequences of their actions on a global scale.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 6

The homecoming is emotionally satisfying, but the pool scene deflates that feeling, creating a mixed emotional impact.

Dialogue: 6.5

The dialogue is sparse and functional, with the exception of Siegel's memorable final line, which is sharp and in character.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because it provides the emotional payoff of the rescue and a memorable, cynical punchline, but the pacing is uneven.

Pacing: 6

The pacing of the scene contributes to its effectiveness because the slow, reflective poolside moment contrasts with the fast-paced celebration, but the transition feels abrupt.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is standard and clear, with proper use of scene headings and transitions. The inclusion of archive footage is noted.

Structure: 5

The structure is episodic, moving from the climax (homecoming) to a reflective coda. It lacks a traditional three-act structure for the scene itself.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures the celebratory atmosphere surrounding the Houseguests' return, using vivid imagery and sound to convey the excitement of the moment. However, the transition from the tense escape to this moment of celebration could be more pronounced to enhance the emotional impact.
  • The use of archive footage adds a layer of realism and historical context, but the abrupt shift from the joyous welcome to the Iranian Foreign Minister's angry statement feels jarring. This contrast could be smoothed out with a more gradual transition or a clearer thematic connection between the two segments.
  • The dialogue from Ted Koppel is effective in summarizing the situation, but it could benefit from a more personal touch. Adding a line that reflects the emotional weight of the Houseguests' experience would deepen the audience's connection to the characters.
  • The scene lacks character focus; while it showcases the celebration, it doesn't delve into the individual reactions of the Houseguests. Highlighting their emotions or interactions during this moment could create a more intimate and relatable experience for the audience.
  • The humor in Siegel's line at the end is a nice touch, but it feels somewhat disconnected from the gravity of the previous scenes. A stronger link between the celebratory tone and the humor could enhance the overall flow of the narrative.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief moment of reflection from one of the Houseguests before the celebration begins, allowing the audience to connect with their relief and joy after the harrowing experience.
  • Smooth the transition between the celebration and the Iranian Foreign Minister's statement by incorporating a visual or auditory cue that links the two, such as a fading sound of cheers into the background of the Minister's speech.
  • Enhance Ted Koppel's voiceover by including a line that acknowledges the emotional toll on the Houseguests, such as mentioning their bravery or the challenges they faced during their escape.
  • Incorporate close-up shots of the Houseguests reacting to the celebration, showcasing their emotions through facial expressions or interactions with each other to create a more personal connection.
  • Consider rephrasing Siegel's punchline to better align with the celebratory tone of the scene, perhaps by making it a more light-hearted reflection on the absurdity of the situation rather than a sharp retort.



Scene 59 -  A Hidden Honor
333 INT. CIA ARCHIVES - DAY 333

And suddenly it’s dead-quiet. We’re in a vault inside a
vault in the basement of the main building.

Mendez’s suitcase is laying on a low counter, an ARCHIVES
OFFICER toe-tagging and cataloging various items.
Separating Mendez’s personal things from material related
to the operation.

Mendez empties his briefcase and the officer puts a
sticker on the VARIETY featuring the ARGO ad. Another on
the ARGO script. He’s putting things into a box that
reads: USCIA CLASSIFIED MATERIAL.

Mendez opens his accordion folder -- flips through it --
it’s empty -- no. There’s something inside.

In one of the compartments is a STORYBOARD FROM ARGO.

One that the Komiteh missed. While the Archives Officer
is turned around, Mendez slips the storyboard back into
the accordion folder and puts it back with his personal
things.
ARGO - Final 119.


334 EXT. CIA - FRONT PARKING LOT - AFTERNOON 334

O’Donnell is on his way out, heading toward Tony who is
heading in. Seeing Mendez, he stops dead.

O’DONNELL
And I left my autograph book at *
home. His Eminence called me. He *
wants to see you.

MENDEZ
He wants to fire me himself.

O’DONNELL
He wants to give you the
Intelligence Star. You’re getting
the highest award of merit of the
Clandestine Services of these
United States. Ceremony’s two
weeks from today.

Mendez stops walking. A beat.

MENDEZ
If they push it a week, I can *
bring Ian. That’s his winter *
break.

O’DONNELL
The op was classified so the
ceremony’s classified. He can’t
know about it. Nobody can know
about it.

MENDEZ
They’re gonna hand me an award,
then they’re gonna take it back?

O’DONNELL
If we wanted applause, we would
have joined the circus.

MENDEZ
I thought we did.

O’Donnell claps Tony on the shoulder. Tony walks towards
the entrance and Jack heads to his car.

O’DONNELL
(yelling to Tony; an
afterthought)
Carter said you were a great
American.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 120.
334 CONTINUED: 334

MENDEZ
(yelling back)
A great American what?

O’DONNELL
He didn’t say.
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In the CIA archives, Mendez catalogs his personal items when he learns he will receive the Intelligence Star, the highest award in Clandestine Services. However, the classified nature of the ceremony prevents his son Ian from attending, causing Mendez to grapple with the bittersweet reality of his honor. As he discreetly hides an overlooked storyboard from the Argo project, he shares a light-hearted exchange with O'Donnell about the secrecy surrounding his achievement, leaving an unresolved tension about his desire to include his son in this moment.
Strengths
  • Sharp dialogue
  • Emotional depth
  • Character development
Weaknesses
  • Limited external conflict
  • Some exposition-heavy moments

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

This scene serves as a quiet epilogue, landing the emotional payoff of Mendez's sacrifice with a wry, understated humor that fits the film's tone. Its main limiter is the lack of dramatic tension—it's a denouement, not a climax—so it doesn't push the story forward, but it does close the character arc with grace.


Story Content

Concept: 8

The concept of a classified award ceremony is a fresh, ironic twist on the hero's reward, and the storyboard as a personal keepsake is a poignant symbol of the hidden cost of heroism.

Plot: 6.5

The plot is minimal—a simple exchange of information and a small act of defiance—but it serves as a necessary resolution to Mendez's arc, showing the aftermath of the operation.

Originality: 8

The scene offers a fresh take on the 'hero's reward' trope by making it secret and hollow, and the storyboard as a personal keepsake is an original, authentic detail.


Character Development

Characters: 8

Mendez's quiet rebellion in keeping the storyboard and his dry humor ('A great American what?') reveal his character—pragmatic, principled, and weary. O'Donnell's gruff warmth provides a counterpoint.

Character Changes: 4

Mendez doesn't change drastically, but his decision to keep the storyboard shows a shift from pure duty to a need for personal meaning, a quiet assertion of his own narrative.

Internal Goal: 7

Mendez's internal goal is to maintain his integrity and protect his personal connection to the operation, as seen through his actions of hiding the storyboard.

External Goal: 6

Mendez's external goal is to navigate the complexities of receiving an award for a classified operation without compromising his personal life.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

The conflict is internal and low-key—Mendez's quiet defiance against the system that classifies his achievement, and the irony of a secret award.

Opposition: 4

The opposition is institutional and impersonal—the CIA's classification system and the rules that prevent Mendez from sharing his achievement. It's a quiet, bureaucratic force.

High Stakes: 4

The stakes are personal rather than life-or-death—Mendez's integrity and the meaning of his work are at stake, but the tension is low.

Story Forward: 3

The scene doesn't advance the plot but provides closure, tying up the emotional loose ends of the operation and setting the stage for the film's final moments.

Unpredictability: 6

The scene is somewhat predictable in its function as a denouement, but the twist of the classified award and the storyboard keepsake add a layer of surprise.

Philosophical Conflict: 7

The philosophical conflict is between the desire for recognition and the need for secrecy in intelligence operations. This challenges Mendez's values of honesty and integrity.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 7

The emotional impact is subtle but resonant—the bittersweet recognition of sacrifice, the loneliness of a hero who can't share his glory, and the small act of keeping the storyboard as a private memento.

Dialogue: 8.5

The dialogue is sharp and economical, with the 'circus' line and the 'great American what?' exchange capturing the film's tone of wry understatement. It's natural and character-driven.

Engagement: 6.5

This scene is engaging because it offers a satisfying emotional payoff and a glimpse into Mendez's inner world, but it lacks the tension of the previous scenes, making it less gripping.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is deliberate and contemplative, matching the reflective mood. The brief dialogue exchanges keep it from dragging, but it's slower than the action-heavy scenes.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

The formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines. The use of parentheticals and ellipses is effective for pacing.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic denouement structure: a quiet moment of reflection, a revelation (the award), and a character beat (the storyboard). It's well-paced for its purpose, though it lacks a traditional turning point.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures a moment of reflection for Mendez, showcasing the weight of his actions and the secrecy surrounding his achievements. However, the transition from the previous scene to this one feels abrupt. The shift from a light-hearted moment at the pool to a serious tone in the CIA archives could benefit from a smoother narrative bridge to maintain emotional continuity.
  • The dialogue between Mendez and O'Donnell is engaging and highlights the tension between personal recognition and the nature of covert operations. However, the humor in Mendez's lines, particularly 'I thought we did,' feels slightly out of place given the gravity of the situation. It might be more impactful if the humor was dialed back or if it served to deepen Mendez's character rather than distract from the moment.
  • The stakes of the award ceremony are clear, but the emotional weight could be enhanced by delving deeper into Mendez's feelings about not being able to share this moment with his son. This could be achieved through a brief internal monologue or a more poignant exchange with O'Donnell that emphasizes the personal sacrifices made in the line of duty.
  • The visual elements in the scene are minimal, primarily focusing on the dialogue. Adding more descriptive visuals could enhance the atmosphere of the CIA archives, perhaps by emphasizing the cold, sterile environment that contrasts with the warmth of Mendez's personal items. This could symbolize the dichotomy between his personal life and professional obligations.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a transitional moment or line that connects the celebratory tone of the previous scene to the more serious atmosphere of the CIA archives, helping to maintain emotional flow.
  • Explore Mendez's internal conflict regarding the award and his relationship with his son more deeply. This could involve a moment of silence or a visual cue that reflects his disappointment about Ian not being able to attend.
  • Revise the humor in Mendez's dialogue to ensure it aligns with the scene's tone. If humor is included, it should serve to enhance character depth rather than distract from the gravity of the situation.
  • Incorporate more visual details about the CIA archives to create a stronger sense of place. Describing the environment can help convey the tension and secrecy surrounding Mendez's work.



Scene 60 -  Bittersweet Goodbyes
335 INT. ARGO PRODUCTION OFFICE - ANGLE ON A POSTER - DAY 335

on the wall. ARGO: A COSMIC CONFLAGRATION.

A hand takes the poster down.


ANOTHER ANGLE

Chambers is disassembling the office. Boxes packed.
Everything now off the walls.

A PRODUCER walks by, sees Chambers in the door.

PRODUCER
What happened to your picture?

CHAMBERS
It’s in turnaround.

He turns out the lights.


336 EXT. ROAD UP TO CHRISTINE’S HOUSE - LATE AFTERNOON 336

Mendez’s car heads up the road, past a mailbox. Pulls up
to the house.


337 EXT. CHRISTINE’S HOUSE - LATE AFTERNOON 337

Mendez, a duffel bag on his shoulder, knocks on the door.
He waits. After a moment, Christine opens the door.

MENDEZ
Hi.

CHRISTINE
Hi.

They look at each other.

Before she can speak, he’s embraced her. Holds tight. *
It’s something in between romantic and fraternal. Not
reconciliation, necessarily, but warmth. She
reciprocates. It feels right, and good.

(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 121.
337 CONTINUED: 337
WIDEN to HOLD ON them holding each other in the dark hall
of the very American, even Hummel-kitschy house. HOLD
there for a while.


338 INT. CHRISTINE’S HOUSE - IAN’S BEDROOM - ANGLE ON TV - 338
NIGHT

A scene of the Old West on a television.


ANOTHER ANGLE

Ian is watching 1973’s sci-fi Western Westworld in the
bedroom. Ian doesn’t have to describe the scene to his
father this time. WIDEN to see that his head is on a
pillow on Tony’s lap.

CARD #1: THE IRAN HOSTAGE CRISIS ENDED ON JANUARY 20,
1981, WHEN THE REMAINING EMBASSY HOSTAGES WERE RELEASED
AFTER 444 DAYS IN CAPTIVITY.


339 INT. IAN’S BEDROOM - NIGHT 339

We can hear the sounds of gunslinging from the movie.
Glow-in-the-dark stars on the wall. A Star Wars X-Wing
fighter. A couple of rubber Planet of the Apes figures
that look like they’ve been chewed by a dog.

CARD #2: OSCAR-WINNING MAKEUP ARTIST JOHN CHAMBERS WAS
AWARDED THE CIA’S INTELLIGENCE MEDAL OF MERIT, ITS
HIGHEST CIVILIAN HONOR. HE REMAINED FRIENDS WITH TONY
UNTIL CHAMBERS DIED FROM DIABETES COMPLICATIONS IN 2001.

The CAMERA MOVES OVER the dresser of Ian’s toys -- *

CARD #3: THE INVOLVEMENT OF THE CIA COMPLEMENTED EFFORTS *
OF THE CANADIAN EMBASSY IN FREEING THE SIX HELD IN *
TEHRAN. TO THIS DAY, THE STORY STANDS AS AN ENDURING *
MODEL OF COOPERATION BETWEEN GOVERNMENTS. *

-- settling on a motley group of action figures. *

CARD #4: ALL OF THE HOUSEGUESTS RETURNED TO THE U.S. *
FOREIGN SERVICE AFTER THEIR ORDEAL IN IRAN. *

Then FIND, almost unnoticeable among Ian’s science *
fiction collection, a piece of cardboard behind Captain *
Kirk and Han Solo figures. *

It’s a STORYBOARD FROM ARGO. The one missed by the
Komiteh at the airport.


(CONTINUED)
ARGO - Final 122.
339 CONTINUED: 339
CARD #5: TONY MENDEZ WAS NOT GIVEN BACK HIS INTELLIGENCE *
STAR UNTIL 1997, WHEN THE ARGO OPERATION WAS DECLASSIFIED
BY PRESIDENT CLINTON.

LINGER ON the ARGO STORYBOARD. A MAN in a futuristic
chariot sheltering a KID from what look like laser beams.

CARD #6: HE LIVES IN RURAL MARYLAND WITH HIS FAMILY. *

FADE TO BLACK.




THE END
Genres: ["Drama","Thriller"]

Summary In the Argo production office, Chambers packs up, signaling the end of the project, while a producer inquires about his film's status. The scene shifts to Mendez visiting Christine, where they share a warm embrace, highlighting their close bond. Meanwhile, Ian watches a movie with his father, Tony, showcasing their familial connection. Informational cards reveal the conclusion of the Iran Hostage Crisis and the recognition of key figures involved. The scene concludes with a storyboard from Argo found among Ian's toys, emphasizing the bittersweet nature of closure and personal relationships.
Strengths
  • Emotional depth
  • Character development
  • Closure
Weaknesses
  • Lack of external conflict
  • Minimal dialogue

Ratings
Overall

Overall: 7.2

The scene's primary job is to provide emotional closure and thematic resonance after the high-stakes escape, and it lands this with a tender, understated final image of father and son. The biggest limiter is the reliance on title cards to deliver historical information, which, while informative, slightly undercuts the visual storytelling and slows the emotional momentum.


Story Content

Concept: 7.5

The concept of ending on the storyboard as a personal memento is strong, but the use of title cards to wrap up multiple character arcs feels a bit conventional and less innovative than the rest of the film.

Plot: 6.5

The plot here is minimal, focusing on resolution rather than advancement, but it effectively ties up the narrative threads with the title cards and the final image.

Originality: 7

The use of a missed storyboard as a personal keepsake is an original and authentic detail, but the overall epilogue structure is familiar.


Character Development

Characters: 7

Mendez's character is shown in a vulnerable, domestic light, and the brief interaction with Christine and Ian adds depth, but the scene doesn't offer much new character development beyond what we already know.

Character Changes: 4

Mendez undergoes a subtle change, moving from the stress of the operation to a moment of domestic peace, but the change is more about resolution than transformation.

Internal Goal: 7

The protagonist's internal goal is to seek warmth and connection with a loved one, reflecting a deeper need for emotional closeness and comfort.

External Goal: 6

The protagonist's external goal is to reunite with a loved one and find a sense of belonging and acceptance.


Scene Elements

Conflict Level: 3

Conflict is largely resolved; the only tension is internal, as Mendez reconciles his secret life with his family, but this is subtle and not a driving force.

Opposition: 1

There is no active opposition in this scene; the conflict is internal and resolved, so the opposition score is low.

High Stakes: 2

The stakes are low here, as the danger has passed; the focus is on emotional payoff rather than suspense.

Story Forward: 2

The story is essentially complete; this scene serves as an epilogue, providing closure rather than advancing the plot.

Unpredictability: 6

The scene is somewhat predictable as a resolution, but the specific image of the storyboard hidden among toys is a fresh, unexpected touch.

Philosophical Conflict: 6

The philosophical conflict revolves around the themes of family, friendship, and loyalty, challenging the protagonist's beliefs about relationships and personal connections.


Audience Engagement

Emotional Impact: 8

The emotional impact is strong in the final image of Ian resting on Tony's lap and the storyboard hidden among toys, evoking a sense of quiet pride and bittersweet sacrifice.

Dialogue: 6

Dialogue is sparse and functional, with the 'turnaround' line and the simple 'Hi' exchange, but it's not the focus; the scene relies more on visual and emotional beats.

Engagement: 7

This scene is engaging because it offers a satisfying emotional payoff, rewarding the audience with a glimpse of Mendez's personal life and the symbolic storyboard.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is slow and contemplative, allowing the audience to breathe after the intense escape, but the title cards may feel like a slight interruption to the flow.


Technical Aspect

Formatting: 8

Formatting is clean and professional, with clear scene headings and action lines, though the title cards are a stylistic choice that may not suit all readers.

Structure: 7

The scene follows a classic epilogue structure: a series of quiet moments leading to a symbolic final image, with title cards providing narrative closure.


Critique
  • The scene effectively captures a sense of closure and reflection, tying together the personal and historical elements of the story. However, the transition from the production office to Christine's house feels abrupt. A smoother transition could enhance the flow and emotional impact.
  • The use of informational cards is a creative way to convey important historical context, but it may disrupt the emotional rhythm of the scene. The cards could be integrated more seamlessly into the narrative, perhaps through dialogue or visual storytelling, rather than as separate text overlays.
  • The emotional tone of the scene is poignant, particularly in the embrace between Mendez and Christine. However, the scene could benefit from more dialogue or interaction that deepens their relationship and provides insight into their past, rather than relying solely on physical gestures.
  • The imagery of Ian's bedroom is rich and evocative, but it could be enhanced by connecting the toys and decorations to the themes of the story. For instance, highlighting the contrast between the innocence of childhood and the harsh realities of the adult world could add depth to the scene.
  • The final reveal of the storyboard from 'Argo' is a clever touch, but it feels somewhat disconnected from the preceding emotional beats. A stronger narrative link between Mendez's personal journey and the storyboard's significance could create a more cohesive conclusion.
Suggestions
  • Consider adding a brief moment of dialogue between Mendez and Christine that reflects on their past and the impact of the events they've experienced, which would deepen their emotional connection.
  • Integrate the informational cards more organically into the scene, perhaps by having Mendez or another character reference the events or achievements in conversation, rather than presenting them as separate text.
  • Enhance the transition between the production office and Christine's house by including a visual or auditory cue that connects the two locations, such as a voiceover or a thematic motif that recurs throughout the film.
  • Explore the symbolism of Ian's toys further, perhaps by having Mendez comment on them or reflect on how they represent both the innocence of childhood and the complexities of the adult world he has navigated.
  • Consider revising the final moments to create a stronger emotional resonance, perhaps by having Mendez reflect on the significance of the storyboard in relation to his journey, tying it back to the themes of sacrifice and cooperation.