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fair today. 2. RENATA Okay, okay. Renata closes her eyes. Sighs. As she steps toward her
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INT. RENATA'S CAR - DAY Renata checks the rearview. The Taurus makes the turn, keeping pace. Her fingers drum the steering wheel. Her foot trembles on the accelerator. She spies a narrow alleyway.
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INT. IRENE’S OFFICE - DAY Irene types at her monitor. Renata knocks at the frame of the open door. RENATA You wanted to see me, Irene?
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INT. XIMENA’S BEDROOM - NIGHT (FLASHBACK) XIMENA (32) and Renata enter. Ximena has a commanding presence with big, inquisitive eyes. We catch a glimpse of the party in the living room. A banner stretches across the room, “Happy Birthday Ximena!”. Ximena closes the door.
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EXT. DOG TRACK PARKING LOT - DAY The convoy accelerates and follows them out of the lot. Gunmen lean out of windows and FIRE. Int. SETH'S CAR - DAY Seth speeds confidently down a two-way street packed with
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INT. SETH'S CAR - DAY Renata looks at him as if she just spotted Bigfoot copulating with an alien. RENATA I don’t know if I should be more
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INT. SETH’S CAR - DAY Seth kills the engine. SETH We’ll be safe here for a few minutes.
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EXT. STASH HOUSE - DAY Seth approaches the gate. He vaults over it, heads up the stairs to the front door and waits. VOICES comes from inside. He looks at his watch and pulls out his gun. He closes his eyes and gestures as he recalls the steps.
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EXT. SETH’S CAR - DAY Seth and Renata jump in the car. The engine ignites. Seth does a three-point turn and peels off. INT. SETH’S CAR - DAY Seth glares at Renata.
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INT. SETH’S CAR - DAY (BACK TO PRESENT) News radio PLAYS in the background. Renata watches the cityscape blur by. Her thoughts seem miles away but-- RENATA You said your life seems like a
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INT. WALK-IN CLOSET - DAY A pair of hands sift through the contents of the safe. A short bald man with a goatee, PELONCILLO (30), rises from the safe and faces Tejon. Mendingo lingers at the doorway. PELONCILLO
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INT. MOTEL ROOM - DAY A prison cell with cheap makeup. A ceiling fan turns lazily. 42. Renata sits cross-legged on the bed before a fan of documents. She studies them assiduously.
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EXT. RESTAURANT COURTYARD - DAY Tejon and his men lay claim to several tables. To Tejon’s right sits ADOLFO (14), his strapping son. They take bites from juicy tacos. Servers bring out more platters loaded with food. The few other patrons there have
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INT. KITCHEN - DAY Eduardo sits at the table doing homework. A Third Place Ribbon is pinned to his uniform. Renata bursts in through the front door. EDUARDO
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EXT. TIJUANA OUTSKIRTS - DAY Desolate. Fields of dirt and dried up trees. A few houses peek over a distant hill. Next to unused railroad tracks covered in mud, Renata leans against Seth’s car with her arms crossed.
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EXT. PRIVATE PATIO - DAY Statues of monstrous creatures, skeletons, and demonic dolls occupy one side of the patio. A black canopy covers the space. Burning candles encircle an altar to the Santa Muerte. A hexagonal séance table sits in the center with six chairs.
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INT. PRIVATE PATIO - DAY Renata clutches at her head while Bicho sits back in his chair at ease. BICHO What can I say? People pay good
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EXT. BAZAAR - DAY A convoy of pick-up trucks and cars arrive at the parking lot and double park. Tejon and his men exit out of the vehicles and move towards the entrance. 63.
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INT. BAZAAR - DAY Seth and Renata hustle out onto the bazaar floor, mixing in with the crowd. They cut down a main aisle and beeline for the exit. TEJON
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INT. SETH'S CAR - DAY Seth and Renata take in the view in silence... a seagull hovers in place against the breeze. RENATA When I see such a sight in front of
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INT. SETH’S CAR - NIGHT Seth turns the engine off. Renata looks around with distaste. RENATA Why are we stopping... here? SETH
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INT. WAREHOUSE - NIGHT A wide and spacious floor level, boxes and crates form ziggurats on wooden pallets. Tall shelves reach to the ceiling. Men feverishly grab boxes and stack them on a pallet for the fork-lift.
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TEJON All those fireworks and nothing? Peloncillo? PELONCILLO I didn’t see him.
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TEJON She won’t get far. But don’t worry I’ll give her special attention before I send her to join you. He tosses the gun away.
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INT. SETH’S CAR - NIGHT Renata scrolls through the images in the gallery. One picture shows Ximena being escorted towards a lone big tree. The next one shows Ximena on her knees, next to the tree, and the group of men giving a thumbs up. Some familiar faces
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INT. SETH’S APARTMENT BEDROOM - NIGHT Seth sits with his shirt off, watching TV, while Renata stiches the cut on his arm. REPORTER (TV) ...We’re also learning that a gun
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INT. SETH’S APARTMENT BEDROOM - DAY Seth is asleep. He wakes up, turns, and notices Renata isn’t there. In the midst of confusion, he looks around. SETH Renata? Renata!

Recursion

A journalist's quest to uncover a criminal syndicate entangles her in a time loop, where she must navigate the same day repeatedly and confront her own demons in order to bring her missing friend home and expose the truth.

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This script offers a unique blend of tension, urgency, and emotional depth, with a distinctive voice that creates a sense of danger, suspense, and unpredictability. The sharp and impactful dialogue, combined with vivid and dynamic visual descriptions, keeps the reader engaged and creates a fast-paced and engaging reading experience. The script explores themes of justice, redemption, and the complexities of human nature, while also delving into moral dilemmas and societal issues. With its fresh approach to familiar situations and its exploration of character growth and transformation, this script stands out in its genre. It will captivate its target audience with its thrilling action sequences, compelling storytelling techniques, and authentic portrayal of characters.

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Story Facts
Genres:
Action 30% Crime 40% Drama 30% Thriller 50% Science Fiction 15% Fantasy 10% Romance 10%

Setting: Contemporary, Tijuana, Mexico

Themes: Danger and Pursuit, Investigation and Revelation, Betrayal and Trust, Redemption and Forgiveness, Family and Sacrifice

Conflict & Stakes: The primary conflicts in this story are Renata's desire to find her kidnapped friend and expose the corruption of the cartel, which puts her in danger and threatens her life. The stakes are high as Renata risks everything to uncover the truth and bring justice to those responsible.

Mood: Tense and suspenseful

Standout Features:

  • Unique Setting: The dangerous and exotic setting of Tijuana adds a unique element to the story and can attract audiences.
  • Strong Female Protagonist: Renata's determination and bravery make her a compelling and relatable character.
  • Suspenseful Plot: The gripping storyline and constant danger keep audiences on the edge of their seats.

Comparable Scripts: Sicario, Prisoners, No Country for Old Men, Traffic, The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo, True Detective, Narcos, Breaking Bad, The Departed, Zero Dark Thirty

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