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1 INTERIOR PRODUCTION STUDIO BATHROOM DAY 1 DANIEL is wearing a headset half on his face. He's sitting watching a video on his phone. 2 INT. STUDIO (ON PHONE) 2 REPORTER
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9 INT. PRODUCTION STUDIO. DAY 9 FREDDY and SHIRA are watching the playback. They seem to be very happy and impressed. FREDDY Old bitches...
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12 INT. PRODUCTION STUDIO. DAY 12 SHIRA storms over, DANIEL hands her a sandwich. DANIEL is drinking out of a red solo cup. We hear a PA over walkie. PA
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13 INT. ELEGANT SITTING ROOM. DAY 13 FREDDY is awkwardly organizing pillows. MORT Why are you fucking me? FREDDY
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16 INT. KAYLA AND FREDDY'S HOUSE 16 KAYLA is storming around the house dressed as a Disney princess. She has comically strange items she is attaching to her body. KAYLA
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18 INT. OFFICE WAITING AREA. DAY 18 SHIRA walks into a waiting room and approaches a receptionist. Shira is wearing big hoop earrings, red lipstick, and a flower in her hair. She takes off her sunglasses and she approaches the welcome desk.
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20 INT. CATHY’S OFFICE. DAY 20 AARON Your special arrival is here. CATHY is taking a big line of coke off the table. She's caught. She quickly hides the drugs and pretends to be fixing
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23 INT. WAITING ROOM 23 DANIEL Fine, what do you need? SHIRA No, I'm done with anything related
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25 INT. BAR. NIGHT 25 SHIRA, DANIEL, and FREDDY are sitting around. SHIRA No. DANIEL
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32 INT. CATHY’S OFFICE. DAY 32 CATHY shuts off the news report. AARON That's not the guy who was in our office.

As Seen On TV

When a group of misfit industry professionals attempt to capitalize on a 'diversity showcase' opportunity, they become entangled in a web of corporate corruption, personal agendas, and the perils of performative wokeness in the entertainment industry.

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Unique Selling Point

The Unique Selling Proposition (USP) of this script is its satirical and comedic exploration of the entertainment industry, highlighting the absurdity of the characters' actions and dialogue. With its fast-paced and witty banter, the script offers a fresh and humorous twist on familiar settings and themes. The authentic and distinctive voice of the writer adds to the originality of the scenes, making it compelling for its target audience. This script stands out from others in its genre by providing a unique and entertaining perspective on the industry and its characters.

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Story Facts
Genres:
Comedy 65% Drama 45%

Setting: Contemporary, Production studio, office, elegant sitting room, bar, hotel room, Cathy's office

Themes: Professionalism and Focus, Ethics and Exploitation, Identity and Self-Expression, Comedy and Satire, Conflict and Tension, Desire for Success and Recognition, Manipulation and Deception, Personal and Professional Relationships

Conflict & Stakes: The conflicts in this story revolve around the characters' frustrations with their jobs, their personal lives, and their ambitions. The stakes include their careers, relationships, and personal fulfillment.

Mood: Comedic and satirical

Standout Features:

  • Satirical take on the entertainment industry: The screenplay offers a unique and comedic perspective on the inner workings of the entertainment industry, which can attract audiences interested in behind-the-scenes stories.
  • Exploration of personal and professional struggles: The screenplay delves into the challenges and frustrations faced by the characters in their careers and personal lives, providing relatable and compelling storytelling.
  • Diverse cast: The inclusion of diverse characters adds depth and representation to the story, making it more appealing to a wide audience.

Comparable Scripts: 30 Rock, The Office, Unbreakable Kimmy Schmidt, The Devil Wears Prada, BoJack Horseman

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Overall Score: 7.61
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