Vice

Find out how a drunk driver turned his life around and silently gained control of the United States government.

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Overview

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Unique Selling Point

The screenplay's unique selling proposition is its radical departure from traditional biopic conventions, employing meta-narrative devices, anachronistic humor, and creative visual metaphors to deconstruct political power structures while maintaining a compelling character study of one of America's most secretive leaders.

AI Verdict & Suggestions

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Gemini
 Recommend
GPT5
 Recommend
Grok
 Highly Recommend
Claude
 Recommend
DeepSeek
 Recommend
Average Score: 8.6
Key Takeaways
For the Writer:
The script’s biggest asset is its inventive, satirical voice and cinematic metaphors (narrator, game-board, ‘menu’ of legal options, heart transplant) that translate complex policy into theatrical action. To lift the material from clever to unforgettable, focus on tonal smoothing and emotional payoffs: pick a consistent register for scenes of real human harm (torture, war, 9/11) and let a few key sequences breathe as fully dramatized moments (show an Iraqi civilian thread, deepen Mary/Liz scenes, stage a discernible accountability set-piece). Also tighten exposition by converting some montages/info-dumps into short, character-driven scenes that dramatize consequence rather than summarizing it.
For Executives:
This is a high-value awards-and-critics play: a bold, timely political biopic with clear commercial hooks for prestige audiences (The Big Short/Vice territory). However, it’s also polarizing. Tone whiplash and perceived one-sidedness risk alienating mainstream viewers and some critics, and the heavy reliance on montage/archival will require careful editorial direction and music/licensing budgets. Fixing emotional depth and providing a satisfying dramatic resolution will materially increase awards potential and broaden audience appeal — without those fixes the film may be praised for craft but criticized for lacking moral/accountability closure.
Story Facts
Genres:
Drama 60% War 25% Thriller 25% Comedy 15%

Setting: 1963 to 2009, with significant events during the 2001 terrorist attacks and the Iraq War, Various locations including Wyoming, Washington D.C., the White House, and Iraq

Themes: The Insidious Accumulation and Abuse of Power, Moral Ambiguity and Justification, The Manipulation of Truth and Information, The Corrosive Nature of Power on Individuals, Consequences and Reckoning, Personal Ambition vs. Public Service, Family Legacy and Sacrifice

Conflict & Stakes: The central conflicts revolve around the ethical implications of Cheney's decisions during the Iraq War, the personal struggles within the Cheney family regarding political actions, and the broader consequences of their policies on national and global scales.

Mood: A mix of darkly comedic and tense, reflecting the absurdity and gravity of political life.

Standout Features:

  • Unique Hook: The film's satirical portrayal of real-life political events and figures, blending humor with serious themes.
  • Major Twist: The exploration of Cheney's personal life and family dynamics, revealing the human cost of political ambition.
  • Innovative Ideas: The use of flashbacks and intercutting between personal and political events to highlight the interconnectedness of Cheney's life.
  • Distinctive Settings: The contrast between the high-stakes political environment of Washington D.C. and the personal, intimate settings of the Cheney family.

Comparable Scripts: The Big Short, Vice, W. (2008), The West Wing, Fahrenheit 9/11, House of Cards, All the President's Men, The Trial of the Chicago 7, The Ides of March

Data Says…
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Our stats model looked at how your scores work together and ranked the changes most likely to move your overall rating next draft. Ordered by the most reliable gains first.

1. Character Development (Script Level)
Big Impact Script Level
Your current Character Development (Script Level) score: 7.0
Typical rewrite gain: +0.7 in Character Development (Script Level)
Gets you ~7% closer to an "all Highly Recommends" score
Confidence: High (based on ~1,537 similar revisions)
  • This is currently your highest-impact lever. Improving Character Development (Script Level) is most likely to move the overall rating next.
  • What writers at your level usually do: Writers at a similar level usually raise Character Development (Script Level) by about +0.7 in one rewrite.
  • Why it matters: At your level, improving this one area alone can cover a meaningful slice of the climb toward an "all Highly Recommends" script.
2. Conflict (Script Level)
Moderate Impact Script Level
Your current Conflict (Script Level) score: 7.6
Typical rewrite gain: +0.65 in Conflict (Script Level)
Gets you ~4% closer to an "all Highly Recommends" score
Confidence: High (based on ~2,057 similar revisions)
  • This is another meaningful lever. After you work on the higher-impact areas, this can still create a noticeable lift.
  • What writers at your level usually do: Writers at a similar level usually raise Conflict (Script Level) by about +0.65 in one rewrite.
  • Why it matters: After you address the top item, gains here are still one of the levers that move you toward that "all Highly Recommends" zone.
3. Theme (Script Level)
Moderate Impact Script Level
Your current Theme (Script Level) score: 7.8
Typical rewrite gain: +0.5 in Theme (Script Level)
Gets you ~3% closer to an "all Highly Recommends" score
Confidence: High (based on ~3,464 similar revisions)
  • This is another meaningful lever. After you work on the higher-impact areas, this can still create a noticeable lift.
  • What writers at your level usually do: Writers at a similar level usually raise Theme (Script Level) by about +0.5 in one rewrite.
  • Why it matters: After you address the top item, gains here are still one of the levers that move you toward that "all Highly Recommends" zone.

Script Level Analysis

Writer Exec

This section delivers a top-level assessment of the screenplay’s strengths and weaknesses — covering overall quality (P/C/R/HR), character development, emotional impact, thematic depth, narrative inconsistencies, and the story’s core philosophical conflict. It helps identify what’s resonating, what needs refinement, and how the script aligns with professional standards.

Screenplay Insights

Breaks down your script along various categories.

Overall Score: 7.73
Key Suggestions:
The script's strongest asset is Cheney's central arc, but the film will feel incomplete unless the supporting players are given clearer, more human arcs and the family relationships (especially with Lynne) are deepened. Prioritize sharpening Rumsfeld and Addington with concrete personal stakes and vulnerabilities that mirror or counterpoint Cheney’s choices, and add a few intimate, quieter scenes between Dick and Lynne to make political consequences feel personal. While doing this, trim or restructure a few rushed time-jumps to improve emotional pacing so each turning point lands with weight.
Story Critique

Big-picture feedback on the story’s clarity, stakes, cohesion, and engagement.

Key Suggestions:
The script has a strong, provocative backbone — a vivid non-linear structure, sharp satire, and rich historical detail — but it needs tighter pacing and clearer tonal balance. Prioritize smoothing scene transitions and trimming or consolidating sequences that stall momentum. At the same time, protect the emotional core by deepening Cheney's personal stakes (and the perspective of key secondaries like Lynne and Mary) so the satire doesn’t undercut the audience’s ability to care. Small structural edits that clarify cause-and-effect and give the ending more explicit consequences will dramatically increase dramatic payoff.
Characters

Explores the depth, clarity, and arc of the main and supporting characters.

Key Suggestions:
The character work is strong in scope but uneven in emotional specificity. Dick Cheney is compelling as a strategic force of nature, but the script often keeps him at a distance — powerful, decisive, but insufficiently vulnerable. The clearest fix is to deepen Cheney's interior life in a few key scenes (notably the early Lynne confrontation and the 9/11 bunker beats) so the audience can feel the personal costs of his choices. Trim or humanize static supporting players (Addington, Libby, Rumsfeld) by giving one scene each where they show doubt, contradiction, or personal stakes, and cut redundant beats. Focus on subtexted dialogue, a couple of targeted flashbacks that reveal the formative wounds cited in the analysis, and clearer emotional callbacks so the political action hits as human drama rather than documentary cataloging.
Emotional Analysis

Breaks down the emotional journey of the audience across the script.

Key Suggestions:
The script has powerful moments but loses emotional purchase in the middle third because it treats major political decisions as strategy puzzles rather than human choices. Fix the emotional pacing: follow the 9/11 high with deliberate breathing room and small, human scenes that make later moral compromises feel earned. Add brief private beats (a look, a confession, a small domestic scene) in key political sequences (VP negotiation, Iraq planning, torture memos) to restore empathy for Cheney and to better develop Lynne, Mary and the narrator. Trim or re-order some non-linear jumps so emotional through-lines (loss, ambition, doubt, consequence) are easier to follow and the final medical/climactic beats land with resonance instead of surprise.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict

Evaluates character motivations, obstacles, and sources of tension throughout the plot.

Key Suggestions:
The analysis shows your screenplay's strongest asset is its thematic ambition — an extended interrogation of Authority vs. Accountability — but the emotional throughline needs tightening. Pick whether the film will take a moral stance or dramatize ambiguity, then shape the final act to provide a clear emotional payoff for Cheney’s interior arc (validation → power → reckoning). Trim or consolidate episodic vignettes that repeat the same idea (power accumulation, PR manipulation) and use those saved pages to deepen two scenes where the protagonist faces concrete consequences that test his stated beliefs.
Themes

Analysis of the themes of the screenplay and how well they’re expressed.

Key Suggestions:
To enhance the script's impact, consider deepening the exploration of moral ambiguity and justification within the characters' actions. By providing more nuanced internal conflicts and motivations, particularly for Cheney, the audience can better grasp the complexities of power and its ethical implications. This will not only enrich character development but also resonate more profoundly with viewers, prompting them to reflect on the moral dilemmas presented.
Logic & Inconsistencies

Highlights any contradictions, plot holes, or logic gaps that may confuse viewers.

Key Suggestions:
The script’s biggest weaknesses are structural: Cheney’s transformation from drunken lineman to ruthless power broker feels abrupt, and the 9/11 bunker sequences (including the shoot-down orders) lack clear authority and emotional coherence. Resolve these by adding connective scenes and beats that show incremental ambition, moral choices, and the practical mechanics of how Cheney exercises power. Tighten and naturalize key dialogues (particularly Lynne’s confrontation and Cheney’s interview) so they reveal character rather than delivering exposition. Consolidate repetitive scenes about Cheney’s rise to keep momentum and avoid diluting the dramatic turning points.

Scene Analysis

All of your scenes analyzed individually and compared, so you can zero in on what to improve.

Scene-Level Percentile Chart
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Other Analyses

Writer Exec

This section looks at the extra spark — your story’s voice, style, world, and the moments that really stick. These insights might not change the bones of the script, but they can make it more original, more immersive, and way more memorable. It’s where things get fun, weird, and wonderfully you.

Unique Voice

Assesses the distinctiveness and personality of the writer's voice.

Key Suggestions:
You have a bold, distinctive voice — sharp, darkly comic, and incisive about power — that consistently animates the script. To elevate it further, focus on balancing satirical bite with clearer emotional stakes and tighter dramatic showing. Let the voice amplify character-driven scenes rather than carry exposition; trim or dramatize montage/narration-heavy stretches, clarify the narrator's role, and deepen a few personal beats (especially in the Cheneys' relationships) so audiences buy the political ideas through emotion as well as wit.
Writer's Craft

Analyzes the writing to help the writer be aware of their skill and improve.

Key Suggestions:
To enhance the screenplay, the writer should focus on deepening character development and refining dialogue to reveal subtext and motivations more effectively. By tightening the pacing and structure, the narrative can flow more smoothly, making the political intrigue and personal drama more compelling. Engaging in exercises that explore character introspection and practicing dialogue exchanges will significantly improve the emotional depth and authenticity of the script.
Memorable Lines
Spotlights standout dialogue lines with emotional or thematic power.
Tropes
Highlights common or genre-specific tropes found in the script.
World Building

Evaluates the depth, consistency, and immersion of the story's world.

Key Suggestions:
Your world is impressively expansive — rich locations, historical specificity, and strong thematic ambition about power and secrecy. Right now the biggest craft issue is coherence: the script jumps widely in time, tone and scale (Wyoming bars to bunker strategy rooms to warzones) in ways that risk confusing or alienating viewers. Tighten the emotional throughline — center the audience on a single perspective or motif (the narrator, Cheney’s interior life, or Lynne’s moral counterpoint) and use it to smooth transitions, clarify stakes, and preserve tonal consistency between satire, drama and documentary-style interludes. Trim or rework scenes that are primarily illustrative rather than emotionally catalytic so every location shift advances character or plot.
Correlations

Identifies patterns in scene scores.

Key Suggestions:
The pattern analysis shows your strengths: emotional scenes land hard and your satirical voice produces sharp, memorable dialogue. But quiet, reflective moments (notably scene 20) sap momentum and reduce perceived stakes. Tighten introspective beats by giving them micro-conflicts, decisions, or concrete consequences that move the plot or reveal character choices. Also, when you must deliver exposition, fold it into character-driven moments or witty exchanges (where you already excel) so informational scenes still carry emotional weight and forward motion.
Loglines
Presents logline variations based on theme, genre, and hook.