Vice
Find out how a drunk driver turned his life around and silently gained control of the United States government.
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The screenplay's unique selling proposition is its radical departure from traditional biopic conventions, employing meta-narrative devices, anachronistic humor, and creative visual metaphors to deconstruct political power structures while maintaining a compelling character study of one of America's most secretive leaders.
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Genres:Setting: 1963 to 2009, with significant events during the 2001 terrorist attacks and the Iraq War, Various locations including Wyoming, Washington D.C., the White House, and Iraq
Themes: The Insidious Accumulation and Abuse of Power, Moral Ambiguity and Justification, The Manipulation of Truth and Information, The Corrosive Nature of Power on Individuals, Consequences and Reckoning, Personal Ambition vs. Public Service, Family Legacy and Sacrifice
Conflict & Stakes: The central conflicts revolve around the ethical implications of Cheney's decisions during the Iraq War, the personal struggles within the Cheney family regarding political actions, and the broader consequences of their policies on national and global scales.
Mood: A mix of darkly comedic and tense, reflecting the absurdity and gravity of political life.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The film's satirical portrayal of real-life political events and figures, blending humor with serious themes.
- Major Twist: The exploration of Cheney's personal life and family dynamics, revealing the human cost of political ambition.
- Innovative Ideas: The use of flashbacks and intercutting between personal and political events to highlight the interconnectedness of Cheney's life.
- Distinctive Settings: The contrast between the high-stakes political environment of Washington D.C. and the personal, intimate settings of the Cheney family.
Comparable Scripts: The Big Short, Vice, W. (2008), The West Wing, Fahrenheit 9/11, House of Cards, All the President's Men, The Trial of the Chicago 7, The Ides of March
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- Strong character changes (91.59) suggest dynamic character development, which can lead to a compelling narrative arc.
- Excellent conflict level (99.30) shows that the screenplay effectively builds tension and stakes, keeping the audience engaged.
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- Structure score (67.68) suggests that the screenplay may benefit from a more refined narrative structure to enhance flow and coherence.
- Character grade (1.63) is significantly low, indicating a need for deeper character exploration and development.
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Grok
Executive Summary
- The screenplay masterfully opens with high-stakes tension on 9/11, immediately establishing Cheney's opportunistic mindset and the theme of power grabs amid chaos, setting a tone of urgency and satire. high ( Scene 1 Scene 2 )
- Cheney's character arc from a drunken failure to a resolute power player is richly developed through pivotal confrontations with Lynne, highlighting themes of ambition and partnership. high ( Scene 4 Scene 16 )
- Innovative narrative devices like the fourth-wall-breaking narrator and freeze-frames provide incisive commentary on overlooked political forces, making complex history accessible and engaging. high ( Scene 2 Scene 21 )
- The surreal 'menu' scene satirizes legal manipulations around torture and war powers, blending dark humor with critique to underscore the screenplay's thematic boldness on executive overreach. medium ( Scene 27 )
- The ending interview sequence delivers a powerful, unapologetic climax that reinforces Cheney's arc and invites audience reflection, tying themes of legacy and regret into a provocative close. high ( Scene 35 )
- Montages of 1970s-1980s political shifts feel somewhat rushed and superficial, compressing key historical context without fully exploring Cheney's internal growth during these periods. medium ( Scene 11 Scene 12 )
- Powell's UN speech and its aftermath could benefit from more nuanced emotional fallout for Powell's character, as his arc feels somewhat sidelined post-event. medium ( Scene 30 )
- The family rift over Liz's campaign introduces tension but resolves too abruptly, lacking deeper exploration of long-term relational impacts on the Cheneys. low ( Scene 34 )
- Some satirical elements, like the Shakespearean soliloquy, risk alienating viewers if not balanced, potentially disrupting immersion in more serious dramatic moments. low
- The focus group epilogue cleverly meta-comments on bias but could be tightened to avoid feeling like an afterthought, ensuring it reinforces rather than extends the narrative. low ( Scene 36 )
- Deeper exploration of international perspectives or civilian impacts in Iraq/Afghanistan beyond quick cuts, to humanize the global consequences of Cheney's policies. medium
- More insight into Cheney's personal vulnerabilities post-9/11, such as private doubts or family strains, to add layers to his otherwise stoic arc. medium ( Scene 20 )
- Extended development of secondary characters like Rumsfeld or Powell, whose motivations and downfalls are introduced but not fully resolved in relation to Cheney's influence. low
- A clearer bridge between Cheney's 'retirement' phase and his VP return, to avoid the false ending feeling like a narrative feint without sufficient setup. low ( Scene 14 )
- Subtler handling of the narrator's relation to Cheney (revealed late), which could be foreshadowed earlier for greater emotional payoff. low
- The narrator's introduction as a relatable everyman ties personal stakes to historical events, enhancing thematic accessibility. high ( Scene 2 )
- Energy policy scenes cleverly foreshadow Iraq oil interests, weaving economic motives into the political narrative. medium ( Scene 23 )
- The torture memo sequence uses graphic intercuts to visceral effect, balancing satire with horror to critique legal ethics. high ( Scene 26 )
- Ending with a chaotic focus group mirrors real-world polarization, providing a timely, meta-commentary on media and politics. medium ( Scene 36 )
- Recurring motifs like fishing symbolize Cheney's patient, predatory ambition, adding subtle visual poetry to the character study. low
- Emotional Nuance in Antagonists The writer focuses heavily on Cheney's strategic mindset but underplays moments of genuine vulnerability or regret, such as in family scenes (e.g., sequence 34 with Mary and Liz), potentially making him one-note villainous rather than complex; this risks simplifying the human element in a story about moral ambiguity. medium
- Global Ramifications While U.S.-centric, the script glosses over non-Western viewpoints, like Iraqi civilians' experiences beyond quick cuts (e.g., sequence 31), missing opportunities to deepen the critique of imperialism. low
- None evident As a professional screenplay by an established director, there are no amateurish errors like inconsistent formatting, plot holes, or clunky exposition; the script's polish, from precise action lines to integrated V.O., reflects high-level craftsmanship. low
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- Compelling and unconventional narrative structure, blending historical biopic with dark satire and breaking the fourth wall. high ( Scene general )
- Strong character development, particularly for Dick and Lynne Cheney, exploring their complex motivations and relationship. high ( Scene general )
- Masterful use of tension and suspense, especially surrounding pivotal events like 9/11 and the lead-up to the Iraq War. high ( Scene 1 Scene 24 Scene 29 Scene 30 )
- Sharp and witty dialogue, effectively balancing humor with the serious subject matter. medium ( Scene general )
- Insightful exploration of the political landscape and the influence of money and ideology on American policy. medium ( Scene 12 Scene 22 Scene 23 )
- The satirical elements, while effective, could be toned down in certain scenes to ensure the historical context remains clear. medium ( Scene general )
- The pacing could be tightened in some sections, particularly during montages or scenes with extensive exposition. low ( Scene 26 Scene 27 )
- Exploring the perspectives of characters beyond the Cheney inner circle could provide a more nuanced view of the events. low ( Scene general )
- Deeper exploration of the psychological impact of Cheney's decisions and actions on himself and those around him. medium ( Scene general )
- More explicit portrayal of the human cost of the Iraq War and the War on Terror, particularly on civilians and soldiers. medium ( Scene general )
- The use of the narrator's heart transplant as a metaphor for Cheney's legacy is both powerful and disturbing. high ( Scene 34 )
- The scene where Cheney tells Rumsfeld he's being fired showcases the ruthlessness and pragmatism of his character. high ( Scene 33 )
- The conflict between Cheney's political ambitions and his love for his daughter Mary adds an emotional layer to the narrative. medium ( Scene 14 Scene 34 )
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- Powerful opening and recurring scenes that establish Cheney's strategic mindset: the bunker 9/11 sequence crystallizes motive, shows him seizing authority, and becomes a recurring thematic hinge. The script turns a real historical instant into a character-defining moment. high ( Scene 2 (INT. UNDERGROUND WHITE HOUSE BUNKER - 9/11 9:38AM) Scene 24 (INT. UNDERGROUND WHITE HOUSE BUNKER - 9/11 9:38AM) )
- Distinct narrative voice and meta devices—using Kurt as an everyman narrator, freeze frames, VT and direct address—give the film an immediate, conversational, and ironic personality that carries exposition and satire without becoming dry. high ( Scene 4 (INT. RUMSFELD’S OFFICE / NARRATOR INTRO) Scene 6 (INT. WHITE HOUSE HALLWAY / NARRATOR (Kurt) introduces himself) )
- Inventive visual metaphors and set-pieces (game-pieces, focus-group montages, the restaurant menu of legal options) translate complex political maneuvers into clear, cinematic moments—making policy feel like action and persuasion like weaponry. high ( Scene 21 (INT. OVAL OFFICE - GAME BOARD SEQUENCE) Scene 22 (INT. THINK TANK / FRANK LUNTZ FOCUS GROUPS) )
- Bracingly brave dramatization of legal rationales and moral inversions (Yoo/Bybee memos, 'enhanced interrogation')—these scenes show structural causality between theory and practice and dramatize legalese in memorable images. high ( Scene 26 (INT. OLC / JOHN YOO MEMOS AND TORTURE SEQUENCE) Scene 27 (INT. GOURMET RESTAURANT - 'MENU' OF LEGAL OPTIONS) )
- Strong, symbolic set pieces (the heart transplant, the narrator as donor) provide the screenplay with striking imagery that connects the personal and political — a recurring motif about ownership, legacy and bodily cost. medium ( Scene 34 (INT. SURGICAL ROOM / HEART TRANSPLANT) Scene 33 (INT. GEORGE WASHINGTON UNIVERSITY HOSPITAL / HEART TRANSPLANT SET-UP) )
- Tone inconsistency: the script oscillates between broad satire (absurdist jokes, caricature) and grave drama (torture, war, death) in ways that sometimes undermine emotional resonance. Certain comic beats (e.g., puppet-show gag, Shakespeare interlude) jar against scenes that require solemnity. Tightening tone transitions or rebalancing comedic moments would increase impact. high ( Scene 6 (INT. RAYBURN HOUSE OFFICE BUILDING / Rumsfeld introduction) Scene 18 (EXT. CRAWFORD RANCH / W and Cheney negotiation) )
- Supporting characters are underdeveloped: Lynne is often a foil/prop for Cheney's ambition (though she has strong moments), Mary’s arc (coming out and later estrangement) lacks sustained emotional exploration, and figures like Rumsfeld and Powell are sometimes flattened into caricature. Deepening one or two supporting arcs would give the story more emotional ballast. high ( Scene 12 (INT. CHRISTMAS PARTY / FAIRNESS DOCTRINE REPEAL) Scene 33 (INT. HOSPITAL / FAMILY DISCUSSIONS AROUND HEALTH) )
- Incomplete treatment of consequences: the screenplay dramatizes the decision-making and legal rationales well, but gives comparatively less sustained weight to the human cost in Iraq and to the long-term geopolitical consequences. The emotional and political aftermath feels narrated rather than lived in scenes. high ( Scene 29 (INT. OVAL OFFICE / PREPARATION FOR WAR) Scene 31-32 (EXT. IRAQ / INVASION MONTAGE & CONSEQUENCES) )
- Resolution/Accountability gaps: major threads (legal memos, Halliburton contracts, civilian costs, possible prosecutions) are signposted but not given dramatic closure — the film ends as an indictment but avoids dramatizing accountability or the legal/political reckoning, which leaves the audience with unanswered structural questions. medium ( Scene 33 (INT. PENTAGON / Rumsfeld confrontation & resignation) )
- Direct, grounded perspectives from Iraqi civilians or military that would humanize the war’s consequences are scarce. The script relies on montage and off-screen statistics rather than immersive scenes that show the war’s immediate human cost in depth. high ( Scene 31 (EXT. BAGHDAD - MARCH 20, 2003 - INVASION) )
- A stronger courtroom or investigatory confrontation later in the story (a hearing, trial, or more sustained political inquiry) would provide a cathartic counterpoint to the memos and policies which are shown earlier. The absence of such a set-piece weakens final accountability. high ( Scene 26 (INT. OFFICE OF LEGAL COUNSEL - OLC MEETING) )
- More nuance in countervailing voices: key figures who disagree (e.g., Powell, some Democrats) are present but not fully developed as moral/strategic foils. Expanding these perspectives would increase dramatic tension and prevent an overly single-minded portrait. medium ( Scene 12 (INT. CHRISTMAS PARTY / LYNNE & BUSH SR.) )
- A clearer emotional reconciliation or lasting consequence within Cheney’s family (particularly Mary and Liz’s relationship) is missing — the film hints at fractures but does not dramatize a decisive moment of reconciliation or repudiation that would pay off familial stakes. medium ( Scene 34 (INT. SURGICAL ROOM / HEART TRANSPLANT) )
- A more explicit thematic statement tying personal ambition, legal theory (the Unitary Executive) and the erosion of democratic checks would help. The script accomplishes this largely through montage and epigraphs; an added climactic scene that frames this thesis emotionally would be useful. medium
- Meta-narration and self-awareness: the script uses an everyman narrator (Kurt) and direct-to-camera devices to bracket the story, which makes big policy discussions feel rooted in ordinary experience. This device is repeated at beginning, middle and end and provides a consistent point-of-view anchor. high ( Scene 4 (NARRATOR INTRO) Scene 35 (INT. INTERVIEW ROOM / Epilogue interview) )
- Clear, memorable visual metaphors (game board, restaurant menu of legal options, focus groups) translate opaque policy into cinema—they are the screenplay's strongest storytelling tool for explaining complex systems quickly and dramatically. high ( Scene 21 (GAME BOARD OVAL OFFICE) )
- Use of real, historically charged moments as character-defining beats: the bunker scene functions as a moral fulcrum and the line about rules of engagement creates a through-line between fear and opportunity that propels Cheney’s choices. high ( Scene 24 (9/11 Bunker - 'you have authorization to shoot down any aircraft' exchange) )
- Dramatizing legal theory: rather than only reporting memos, the screenplay stages them—making abstract legal ideas (unitary executive, definitions of torture) feel like actionable plot devices, which is both narratively efficient and provocative. medium ( Scene 26 (OLC / Yoo memos and torture) )
- Bold symbolic beats: the heart transplant sequence (with the narrator as donor) is audacious and supplies a moral/poetic counterpoint to the machine-like pursuit of power — a memorable final image that fuses body and policy. medium ( Scene 34 (Heart transplant & narrator as donor) )
- Ideological bias The script takes a clear critical stance toward Cheney and his allies, which is a legitimate creative choice, but this creates blind spots: some opposition characters and complexities (e.g., Powell’s moral wrestling, public fears after 9/11, nuance in foreign counterparts) are not fully explored. Example: Colin Powell and George Tenet appear primarily to be corrected, rather than portrayed as interior antagonists with sustained screen time. high
- Lack of foreign/other perspectives Very little sustained screen time is given to Iraqi civilians, Afghan allies, or non-American points of view; the consequences of decisions are often represented via montage or statistics rather than grounded, human scenes. Example: the invasion (Seq 31) and insurgency (Seq 32) are covered narratively but not given immediate multi-scene human perspectives. high
- Emotional economy around family fallout The screenplay signals family fractures (Mary/Liz tension) and health crises but does not always give them the dramatic time to deepen; as a result, personal stakes sometimes feel subordinated to political mechanics. Example: Mary’s coming-out arc (Seq 12) and later estrangement (Seq 34) are powerful but undercut by underexplored scenes. medium
- Expository compression & info dumps The script frequently covers complex political and legal developments via montage or single-scene expositions rather than dramatizing them across sequences; this can sometimes feel like a 'show-and-tell' shortcut (e.g., multiple policy shifts are summarized in narrator VT rather than dramatized). Example: the legal consequences of the Yoo memos are explained but not litigated in a courtroom or congressional hearing. medium
- Occasional tonal whiplash Abrupt switches from slapstick or cartoonish satire (puppet-show gag, Shakespeare parody) to scenes of torture and death risk undermining the emotional truth of weightier moments. These jolts sometimes read as directorial bravado rather than organic tone shifts. high
- Reliance on montage to cover transitions Large chronological jumps covered with montage and title cards occasionally skip opportunities for character beats that would make developments feel earned. Example: Cheney’s transition into the Vice Presidency and the administrative build-out is heavily montage-driven. medium
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- The opening sequence and the scenes set during the 9/11 attacks effectively establish the tone and themes of the screenplay, highlighting Cheney's pragmatic and ruthless approach to wielding power in the face of a national crisis. high ( Scene 1 (VICE) Scene 2 (INT. UNDERGROUND WHITE HOUSE BUNKER - 9/11 9:38AM) )
- The scene between Dick and Lynne Cheney showcases the strong character development and the complex, nuanced portrayal of their relationship, which is a driving force throughout the screenplay. high ( Scene 4 (INT. LYNNE'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - SAME TIME) )
- The scenes depicting Cheney's efforts to expand the power of the executive branch, particularly through the use of the Unitary Executive Theory, are well-executed and provide insight into the character's motivations and the broader political context. high ( Scene 23 (INT. OFFICE OF THE VICE PRESIDENT - DAY) )
- The scenes set during the 9/11 attacks, particularly the interactions between Cheney and other key figures, are tense and well-paced, effectively conveying the gravity of the situation and Cheney's decision-making process. high ( Scene 24 (INT. UNDERGROUND BUNKER - WHITE HOUSE - THAT NIGHT) )
- The scenes exploring Cheney's use of legal loopholes and the development of enhanced interrogation techniques provide a chilling and thought-provoking examination of the ethical and moral implications of the administration's actions. high ( Scene 26 (INT. JOHN YOO'S OFFICE - DAY) Scene 27 (INT. HIGH PRICED GOURMET RESTAURANT - NIGHT) )
- The pacing in the scenes leading up to and during the 2000 election could be tightened to maintain the narrative momentum and avoid any potential lulls. medium ( Scene 8 (INT. FRANK ERWIN CENTER - AUSTIN - 2000 - DAY) )
- The portrayal of some characters, such as Colin Powell, could be more nuanced and complex, providing a more balanced perspective on the decision-making process leading up to the Iraq War. medium ( Scene 29 (INT. OVAL OFFICE - WHITE HOUSE) )
- The pacing and transitions between the scenes depicting the aftermath of the Iraq invasion could be improved to maintain the narrative flow and avoid any potential disruptions. medium ( Scene 30 (INT. TERRORIST TENT - MIDDLE OF NOWHERE - DAY) Scene 31 (EXT. IRAG DESERT - DAY - 2003) )
- The screenplay could benefit from a more in-depth exploration of the long-term consequences and impact of Cheney's actions, particularly in the aftermath of the Iraq War and the decline of his political influence. medium ( Scene 33 (INT. PENTAGON HALLWAY - DAY - NOVEMBER 2006) )
- The screenplay could delve deeper into the personal and familial dynamics within the Cheney household, particularly the tensions and conflicts surrounding Liz Cheney's political aspirations and the impact on her relationship with her sister, Mary. medium ( Scene 34 (INT. CHENEY'S LIVING ROOM - DAY) )
- The use of the narrator character, Kurt, provides a unique and engaging perspective on the events of the screenplay, offering a relatable and accessible entry point for the audience. high ( Scene 7 (INT. MIDDLE AMERICA HOME - 2011 - DAY) )
- The scenes depicting Cheney's strategic maneuvering to gain influence and control within the various branches of government are well-executed and provide insight into the character's political acumen. high ( Scene 22 (INT. HALLWAYS OF THE CAPITOL - DAY) )
- The final interview scene with Cheney provides a powerful and thought-provoking conclusion to the screenplay, allowing the character to reflect on his actions and the consequences of his decisions. high ( Scene 35 (INT. INTERVIEW ROOM) )
- Lack of nuance in character portrayals While the screenplay generally provides a strong and compelling portrayal of Dick Cheney, there are moments where the characterization of other key figures, such as Colin Powell, could be more nuanced and balanced. The screenplay could benefit from a more nuanced exploration of the motivations and perspectives of these supporting characters. medium
- Pacing issues in certain sections The screenplay occasionally struggles with pacing, particularly in the scenes leading up to and during the 2000 election, as well as the aftermath of the Iraq invasion. These sections could benefit from tighter editing and a more streamlined narrative flow. medium
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- Strong character establishment showing Cheney's transformation from aimless youth to determined politician under Lynne's influence high ( Scene 1 (INT. ROAD SIDE BAR WYOMING - 1963 - NIGHT) Scene 4 (INT. LYNNE'S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - SAME TIME) )
- Compelling depiction of 9/11 as a pivotal moment where Cheney recognizes and seizes opportunities for expanding executive power high ( Scene 2 (INT. UNDERGROUND WHITE HOUSE BUNKER - 9/11 9:38AM) Scene 24 (INT. UNDERGROUND WHITE HOUSE BUNKER - 9/11 9:38AM) )
- Innovative Shakespearean soliloquy that creatively dramatizes internal decision-making in a way that breaks conventional biopic structure medium ( Scene 16 (INT. CHENEY BEDROOM) )
- Effective use of creative metaphors (legal theories as menu items) to explain complex political concepts to audiences medium ( Scene 26 (INT. OFFICE OF LEGAL COUNSEL - CONFERENCE ROOM - A WEEK LATER) Scene 27 (INT. HIGH PRICED GOURMET RESTAURANT - NIGHT) )
- Strong resolution showing the personal and political consequences of Cheney's actions, including family conflicts and final justification high ( Scene 33 (INT. PENTAGON HALLWAY - DAY - NOVEMBER 2006) Scene 35 (INT. INTERVIEW ROOM) )
- The Shakespearean soliloquy, while creative, may be too stylistically jarring for some audiences and disrupts narrative flow medium ( Scene 16 (INT. CHENEY BEDROOM) )
- The final focus group scene feels somewhat heavy-handed in its political commentary and may alienate viewers seeking more nuanced analysis medium ( Scene 36 (INT. FOCUS GROUP ROOM - DAY) )
- Tonal inconsistency between satirical elements and serious historical drama can create narrative whiplash for viewers medium ( Scene Multiple sequences (Throughout) )
- Some supporting characters (particularly George W. Bush) are portrayed with broad strokes that border on caricature low ( Scene Multiple sequences (Throughout) )
- Lack of nuanced perspectives from political opponents or critics who could provide more balanced analysis of Cheney's actions medium ( Scene Throughout (General) )
- Limited exploration of the human impact of policy decisions on ordinary Iraqis beyond statistical mentions in final text cards medium ( Scene Multiple sequences (Iraq war sections) )
- Insufficient exploration of Cheney's internal moral conflicts or moments of doubt about his actions and decisions low ( Scene Throughout (General) )
- Innovative use of narrator who becomes part of the story (heart transplant donor) creates unique narrative perspective high ( Scene Multiple sequences (Throughout) )
- Creative visual representation of political power structures through game board metaphor effectively illustrates bureaucratic manipulation medium ( Scene 21 (INT. OVAL OFFICE - WHITE HOUSE) )
- Sharp satire of political messaging and focus group manipulation reveals how public opinion is shaped medium ( Scene 28 (INT. FOCUS GROUP ROOM - DAY) )
- Powerful visual metaphor of heart transplant surgery paralleling Cheney's moral and political transformation high ( Scene 34 (INT. SURGICAL ROOM - CONTINUOUS) )
- Political Bias The screenplay consistently portrays Cheney and his associates as calculating manipulators with minimal exploration of their genuine ideological convictions or alternative perspectives on national security. This creates a one-sided narrative that may limit audience engagement across political spectrums. medium
- Character Complexity While Cheney is well-developed, supporting characters like George W. Bush are often reduced to caricatures (the 'dumb son') rather than fully realized individuals with their own motivations and complexities. low
- Over-explanation Some scenes, particularly the focus group sequences, explicitly explain political messaging strategies rather than trusting the audience to understand the subtext through character actions and dialogue. low
- Tonal Inconsistency The abrupt shifts between serious historical drama and broad satire (like the Shakespearean scene) can feel jarring and suggest uncertainty about the intended audience experience. medium
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Summary of the Screenplay: Vice
"Vice" intricately portrays the complex life and political career of Dick Cheney, juxtaposing his reckless youth in a Wyoming bar and his commanding authority during the September 11 attacks. The screenplay oscillates between these pivotal moments, illustrating the contrasts between personal turmoil and broader national crises.
The narrative begins with a raucous 1963 night where a young, drunken Cheney faces police scrutiny, foreshadowing his tumultuous path. As the film progresses, it delves into Cheney's early political aspirations, shaped under the domineering mentorship of Donald Rumsfeld. Scenes of Cheney’s family life reveal his struggles with alcoholism and the emotional weight of familial expectations, particularly from his wife Lynne, who demands change amid their domestic chaos.
Cheney's rise in the political arena is marked by key moments, including his role as Chief of Staff and his strategic maneuvering during crucial historical events like Nixon's Cambodia bombing and the 1974 political reshuffling post-Watergate. The screenplay highlights Cheney's growing ambition and willingness to embrace ruthless political tactics, at times with dark humor that underscores the absurdity of their machinations.
As the storyline progresses to the lead-up to the Iraq War, the narrative critiques the manipulation of public opinion through the lens of Cheney's influence. The screenplay captures intense internal debates within the Bush administration regarding military actions in Iraq, exposing the tensions between various advisors as they navigate the post-9/11 geopolitical landscape amid profound moral and ethical dilemmas.
The film culminates in Cheney's law-driven decision-making that enabled controversial practices such as enhanced interrogation and warrantless surveillance, suggesting a stark departure from American constitutional values. Cheney's health issues parallel his political downfall, reflecting on the personal cost of his ambition and decisions.
The final acts reveal Cheney's unyielding defense of his actions, even in the face of widespread criticism, culminating in a focus group scene that emphasizes the polarized views on his legacy. The screenplay concludes with a chaotic backdrop of the impact of his policies, leaving a lasting impression on the audience of the complexities and consequences of Cheney's vice presidency and the moral ambiguities of power. Overall, "Vice" offers a satirical yet poignant exploration of Cheney's life, reflecting on ambition, responsibility, and the intricate dance of politics.
Vice
Synopsis
Vice is a biographical drama that chronicles the rise of Dick Cheney, one of the most powerful and secretive political figures in American history. The film opens with a glimpse into Cheney's early life in Wyoming, where he is portrayed as a heavy-drinking, aimless young man who is transformed by the fierce determination of his future wife, Lynne Cheney. After a tumultuous start, he finds his footing in Washington D.C. as an intern for Donald Rumsfeld, who becomes a significant mentor and ally. As Cheney navigates the political landscape, he quickly learns the art of power and manipulation, positioning himself as a key player in the Nixon administration.
The narrative shifts through various pivotal moments in Cheney's career, including his time as Chief of Staff under Gerald Ford and his eventual rise to Secretary of Defense under George H.W. Bush. The film highlights Cheney's role in the Gulf War and his controversial decisions regarding military engagement and foreign policy. As the years progress, Cheney's ambition grows, and he becomes a staunch advocate for the Unitary Executive Theory, which grants the President expansive powers, particularly in times of war.
The film's timeline accelerates to the events of September 11, 2001, where Cheney's decisive actions in the White House bunker during the terrorist attacks showcase his ability to seize control in a crisis. The narrative explores how Cheney, alongside Rumsfeld and other key figures, manipulates the fear and uncertainty of the American public to justify the invasion of Iraq, despite the lack of evidence linking Saddam Hussein to the 9/11 attacks. The film delves into the ethical implications of Cheney's decisions, including the use of torture and the controversial practices of enhanced interrogation techniques.
As the Iraq War unfolds, the consequences of Cheney's policies become increasingly apparent, leading to widespread criticism and scrutiny. The film portrays Cheney's complex relationship with his family, particularly with his daughter Mary, who comes out as gay, creating a personal conflict for Cheney as he navigates his political beliefs and familial loyalty. The story culminates in Cheney's legacy, reflecting on the impact of his actions on American politics and the world stage, ultimately leaving the audience to grapple with the moral ambiguities of power and governance.
In the end, Vice serves as a provocative exploration of ambition, power, and the often murky ethics of political decision-making, leaving viewers to ponder the true cost of Cheney's ascent to power and the lasting effects of his legacy on American society.
Scene by Scene Summaries
Scene by Scene Summaries
- The scene juxtaposes two pivotal moments in Dick Cheney's life: a raucous night in 1963 where a young, drunken Cheney celebrates at a bar and faces a police officer during a traffic stop, and the tense atmosphere of September 11, 2001, as an older Cheney reacts to the unfolding terrorist attacks in the White House. The contrasting tones highlight Cheney's reckless youth and the urgent, chaotic response to a national crisis, culminating in his evacuation by Secret Service agents while his wife, Lynne, watches in shock from a hair salon.
- In the Underground White House Bunker on September 11, 2001, at 9:38 AM, Dick Cheney takes charge amid the chaos of the attacks, coordinating responses and authorizing military action against threatening aircraft. As the Twin Towers burn on television, Cheney's decisive actions reflect a mix of fear and opportunism, highlighted by a voice-over that contrasts the turmoil with images of everyday life and historical events. The scene culminates in a stark transition to military bombings, symbolizing the far-reaching consequences of the decisions made in the bunker.
- In a gritty Wyoming field in 1963, Dick Cheney, a lineman, is depicted working hard when a colleague suffers a severe injury, prompting dark humor among the crew. Later, at a roadside bar, Dick's drunken antics lead to a violent confrontation with a taunting crew member, resulting in police involvement. The scene concludes the next morning outside Lynne's house, hinting at the consequences of Dick's reckless behavior.
- In Lynne's living room, a disheveled Dick faces Lynne's fury over his repeated troubles with drinking and fighting, including his recent jail time. Lynne, drawing from her traumatic past with her alcoholic father, issues an ultimatum: he must change or she will leave him. Despite Dick's initial defensiveness and attempts to postpone the discussion, Lynne's emotional outburst reveals her deep frustrations and fears for their future. The scene culminates with Dick professing his love and determination to change, ending with a fade to black.
- The scene begins with archival footage of a young Donald Rumsfeld at a navy air field, showcasing his charismatic yet intimidating personality. A narrator likens Rumsfeld's power to a master of butterfly knives, setting the tone for his aggressive demeanor. Rumsfeld delivers a crude, energetic speech to interns, while Dick Cheney nervously introduces himself and aligns with Rumsfeld politically. Months later, in Rumsfeld's office, Cheney starts his career under Rumsfeld's mentorship, where Rumsfeld's domineering nature is evident as he assigns tasks and mentions covering for Cheney's DUIs. A montage follows, depicting Cheney's integration into Washington politics, including interactions with Roger Ailes and social dinners, highlighting the complexities of their relationships and Rumsfeld's influence over Cheney.
- In a White House hallway, Donald Rumsfeld praises Dick Cheney's discretion with a poker metaphor, testing his loyalty with a yes-or-no question that Cheney agrees to without knowing the details. This pleases Rumsfeld, highlighting Cheney's role as a servant to power. The scene shifts to Cheney's new office, where he shares a proud moment with his wife Lynne over the phone, expressing excitement about his position and meeting President Nixon. The narrator, Kurt, provides commentary on his family life in 2011, intercutting with Cheney's conversation with Lynne, who affirms the family's pride in his achievements.
- In this scene, Donald Rumsfeld and Dick Cheney walk through the White House, where Rumsfeld reveals Nixon's secret plan to bomb Cambodia without Congressional approval, showcasing the executive branch's power. Cheney is both surprised and captivated by this display of authority. The scene shifts to a Cambodian village being bombed, highlighting the global consequences of such actions. Later, in 1973, Cheney is seen teaching his daughters about strategy while reflecting on his political career, before receiving a phone call from Rumsfeld announcing his new assignment in Brussels.
- In this scene, spanning from 1973 to 2003, tensions rise as Donald Rumsfeld angrily informs Dick Cheney of his reassignment to NATO, which Cheney declines due to family obligations. The narrative shifts to the tragic drowning of Lynne Cheney's mother, Edna, leading to family conflict at her funeral, where Dick confronts Lynne's erratic father, Wayne. The scene then jumps to 2003, where Cheney, now a powerful figure, orders the abduction of an Islamic cleric, showcasing the ruthless efficiency of his decisions. The emotional tone shifts from frustration and grief to authoritative control, culminating in a tense abduction sequence.
- In a satirical scene set in 1974, Dick Cheney and Donald Rumsfeld seize the political chaos following Nixon's resignation to advance their ambitions. Cheney reflects on Nixon's mistakes while discussing power dynamics with his family. Meeting Rumsfeld at Dulles Airport, they plot to capitalize on the Republican opportunity post-Watergate. In the Oval Office, Cheney humorously suggests an absurd metaphor for bold action, which is accepted by President Ford. The scene culminates in a montage of political maneuvering, leading to the 'Halloween Massacre' where Rumsfeld and Cheney secure key positions in the administration.
- In November 1975, Dick Cheney celebrates becoming the youngest Chief of Staff with his wife Lynne, who emphasizes the seriousness of his role. Their daughters, Liz and Mary, bring a lighthearted moment, but the tone shifts as Cheney seeks to understand presidential power through a discussion with young lawyer Antonin Scalia about the Unitary Executive Theory, which excites him. The scene concludes on election night with Cheney and other political figures watching in disbelief as Jimmy Carter wins the presidency, signaling a troubling future for the Republican Party.
- The scene opens in 1976 with President Carter's solar initiative, highlighting a shift towards renewable energy. It then transitions to 2012, where an older Dick Cheney is seen fishing, reflecting on his past. Flashing back to 1978, Cheney struggles with a heart attack during his congressional campaign but insists on continuing despite medical advice. His wife, Lynne, steps in and delivers a powerful speech that unexpectedly energizes the crowd, showcasing her growing influence. The scene concludes with a narrator discussing America's societal shifts and the resistance to change.
- In a bustling DC restaurant, Dick Cheney toasts his new role as Wyoming's Congressional Representative alongside Lynne and other congressmen. The scene transitions to the arrival of wealthy conservative patrons and the influence of right-wing think tanks like the Heritage Foundation. As the narrator highlights the 1980 conservative revolution led by Ronald Reagan, Cheney is shown confidently voting against progressive legislation. However, he suddenly collapses from a heart attack, prompting panic among aides. The scene shifts to a glamorous White House Christmas party where the Cheneys engage in political discussions with notable figures, including George Bush Sr., about the repeal of the fairness doctrine, which is linked to the rise of opinion news. The scene concludes with a freeze frame on this pivotal conversation.
- In a modern newsroom, a female anchor reports on Roger Ailes and Fox News' influence on American politics. The scene shifts to a chaotic Christmas party where a drunken George W. Bush is escorted out by his father, George Bush Sr. Meanwhile, Dick and Lynne Cheney discuss their daughter Mary's struggles. After a dramatic car accident, Mary reveals to her parents that she is gay, leading to a heartfelt moment of support. The narrative then explores the Cheneys' political decisions, including their choice not to run for president to protect Mary from potential attacks. The scene concludes with Dick Cheney walking in a desert, foreshadowing his future role as CEO of Halliburton.
- The scene opens in 1993 at a lakeside family gathering, showcasing the Cheney family enjoying a joyful day of fishing and bonding, with hints of their future paths through on-screen text. The mood shifts dramatically to 1999 as Dick Cheney receives a phone call about a potential vice-presidential offer from George W. Bush, leading to a tense conversation with Lynne, who questions the significance of the role. The scene transitions to the Governor's office in Austin, where Cheney prepares for the meeting, marking his return to the political arena.
- In the Governor's Office, George W. Bush meets with Dick Cheney to discuss the Vice Presidential position. Bush, eager and casual, reminisces about their past interactions and expresses his campaign struggles. He directly offers Cheney the role to enhance his own experience, but Cheney declines, suggesting he could assist in finding a suitable running mate instead. The conversation remains friendly and humorous, with Bush joking about alternative career paths. Ultimately, Cheney's refusal leads to a collaborative approach, with Bush agreeing to consider Cheney's involvement in the campaign.
- In a tense nighttime bathroom conversation, Dick and Lynne Cheney discuss his meeting with George W. Bush and the implications of a potential vice presidential search. Lynne probes Dick's thoughts, revealing her concerns about their daughter Mary and the political landscape. The scene intercuts with flashbacks and a metaphor of stacked teacups, highlighting the fragility of their situation. They engage in a Shakespearean-style dialogue that reflects their mutual ambition, ultimately deciding to pursue the opportunity despite lingering worries about scrutiny and connections. The scene concludes with Dick rolling over to sleep, acknowledging the need for a thorough search.
- In the Cheney kitchen, Liz, Lynne, Mary, David Gribbin, and Dick Cheney work on the Vice Presidential questionnaire, blending humor and seriousness. David makes a crude joke about the questionnaire, prompting playful reactions from Liz and Lynne. A phone call from David Addington shifts the scene to his law office, where he discusses the unique constitutional role of the Vice Presidency with Dick, who enthusiastically agrees with Addington's insights. The scene balances light-hearted family dynamics with focused legal discussions.
- In this pivotal scene, George W. Bush and Dick Cheney discuss Cheney's potential role as Vice President at Bush's Crawford Ranch. Initially hesitant, Cheney negotiates for a more influential position, agreeing to manage key policy areas while setting boundaries regarding his daughter's sexuality. Bush enthusiastically accepts, leading to a celebratory toast. The scene transitions to a rally where Bush introduces Cheney as his running mate, amidst chants from the crowd, while a narrator reveals Cheney's lack of transparency during the vetting process.
- On November 7, 2000, during election night at the Four Seasons hotel in Austin, Dick Cheney and his team react to Al Gore's rescinded concession and the call for a Florida recount. Cheney insists they act as if they've won and begins planning the presidential transition. A week later, in the Cheney kitchen, the family discusses cabinet appointments amidst the chaos of transition preparations, while Cheney experiences a health scare. The scene shifts to the Supreme Court on December 12, where a ruling halts the recount, securing George W. Bush's victory. It concludes with a symbolic shot of black limos arriving in Washington DC, marking the new administration's entry.
- In this poignant scene, Dick Cheney walks through the dimly lit halls of the White House, pausing at the empty Oval Office, which prompts a nostalgic flashback to his early days in the Nixon administration. He shares a warm phone conversation with his wife Lynne about their daughter, filled with love and everyday life. The scene shifts back to the present, where Cheney, now Vice President, prepares for a meeting with his team, including Scooter Libby and Donald Rumsfeld, as they anticipate discussing pressing matters.
- In scene 21, the Oval Office becomes a strategic game board as Scooter Libby narrates the consolidation of power within the George W. Bush administration. Key figures like Dick Cheney, Donald Rumsfeld, and Paul Wolfowitz discuss their plans, including the controversial access to the President's communications and the ongoing preparations for the Iraq invasion. Tensions arise when Rumsfeld questions the exclusion of Bush's friends from key positions, leading to a moment of discomfort quickly deflected by Libby. The scene highlights Cheney's manipulative strategies and the infiltration of loyalists into government roles, culminating in a visual metaphor of game pieces flooding the board, symbolizing their control over the administration.
- In Scene 22, a rapid montage showcases Dick Cheney's consolidation of power as he receives offices from key political figures like Dennis Hastert, Trent Lott, and Donald Rumsfeld. The scene highlights Cheney's growing influence through a meeting at the Americans for Tax Reform think tank, where Grover Norquist and Frank Luntz discuss manipulative rebranding strategies to sway public opinion against the 'death tax' and 'global warming.' The narrator reflects on how these tactics have successfully blocked progressive policies and strengthened conservative agendas, culminating in a newsroom report on Cheney's National Energy Policy Development Group as a pivotal moment for executive power expansion.
- In this tense scene, Dick Cheney expresses frustration over FACA restrictions on meeting energy CEOs, leading to a workaround involving a young receptionist named Doug. As they conduct a distorted meeting with anonymous CEOs, a narrator reveals FOIA documents detailing potential oil interests in Iraq. The scene shifts dramatically to September 11, 2001, where Cheney, Condi Rice, and Mary Matalin watch in shock as the World Trade Center is attacked, prompting an urgent evacuation to a bunker. Meanwhile, Lynne Cheney insists on going to the White House despite security risks, culminating in her being escorted away amid chaos.
- In the Underground White House Bunker on September 11, 2001, Vice President Dick Cheney navigates the escalating crisis of the 9/11 attacks. He authorizes Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld to shoot down threatening aircraft under UNODIR orders, prompting questions from Condoleezza Rice about the rules of engagement. Cheney consults his lawyer, David Addington, amidst the chaos, while Karen Hughes relays requests from Congressional members that he denies. The scene captures the urgency and tension of decision-making during a national emergency, culminating in Cheney confirming to his wife, Lynne, that they are at war, as footage of the Twin Towers collapsing and chaos in New York underscores the gravity of the situation.
- In the wake of the September 11 attacks, President Bush and his top advisors convene in a White House bunker to strategize a response. Tensions rise as Rumsfeld pushes for military action against Iraq, while Clarke and Powell advocate for targeting Al Qaeda in Afghanistan. Bush ultimately decides to follow the CIA's advice, focusing on Afghanistan, despite Rumsfeld's objections. As the day unfolds, Cheney expresses his fears and demands unfiltered intelligence, revealing the psychological strain on the leaders. The scene shifts to a bomb shelter where Cheney reassures his wife Lynne of her safety, culminating in a symbolic flashback of him fishing, hinting at lurking dangers.
- In Scene 26, the chaotic backdrop of wartime Afghanistan sets the stage as US soldiers escort Taliban prisoners. The Narrator reflects on the swift military victory and the subsequent legal maneuvering led by Vice President Cheney and lawyer John Yoo. In a series of meetings, they redefine torture and privacy laws, enabling warrantless surveillance and 'enhanced interrogation' techniques. The scene starkly contrasts the legal discussions with graphic depictions of torture, illustrating the moral and ethical conflicts surrounding these actions. The Narrator concludes by highlighting the extensive legal changes that challenge Constitutional and international laws.
- In this scene, a high-priced gourmet restaurant serves as the backdrop for a satirical discussion among Dick Cheney, Donald Rumsfeld, Paul Wolfowitz, and David Addington, who order legal concepts related to bypassing international law as if they were menu specials. The narrative shifts to a focus group in February 2002, where participants express confusion about the war on terror, prompting the group to decide that targeting Iraq would simplify their messaging. The scene then moves to the Oval Office, where Cheney informs President Bush about the establishment of the Office of Special Plans to focus on Saddam Hussein, and concludes in the Pentagon, where a report linking Iraq to the 9/11 attacks is discovered. The tone is darkly humorous, critiquing the manipulation of public opinion and legal interpretations to justify the Iraq war.
- In a focus group, a woman's strong opposition to bombing is dismissed by an older man, highlighting the conflict between moral objections and prevailing war sentiments. The scene shifts to the Pentagon, where Douglas Feith and Paul Wolfowitz discuss dubious intelligence linking Iraq to 9/11, promoting fear-based rhetoric to garner support for military action. Condi Rice echoes this sentiment in a TV interview, using the phrase 'mushroom cloud' to emphasize the threat posed by Saddam Hussein. A montage of bipartisan political endorsements for war follows, culminating in a symbolic clip from Survivor, reinforcing the idea of a collective decision for intervention.
- In the Oval Office, President George W. Bush and his advisors debate the potential invasion of Iraq. Karen Hughes presents polling data showing support for the invasion, while Colin Powell expresses strong reservations about acting without provocation. Tensions rise as Donald Rumsfeld mocks Powell, and Dick Cheney advises Bush to act unilaterally. Bush orders Powell to prepare a speech despite his concerns. The scene shifts to intelligence discussions about Abu Musab Al-Zarqawi, revealing conflicting views on the threat posed by Iraq. The atmosphere is charged with conflict and power dynamics as the administration grapples with the decision to go to war.
- In a tense scene juxtaposing various perspectives during the lead-up to the 2003 Iraq invasion, Abu Musab Zarqawi and his followers celebrate their newfound notoriety as Colin Powell links them to terrorism in a UN speech. Meanwhile, the Cheney family enjoys a light-hearted dinner, oblivious to the impending conflict. As President Bush announces military operations, the stark reality of war unfolds with footage of Baghdad under attack, culminating in a missile strike on an Iraqi apartment, highlighting the devastating consequences of political rhetoric and misinformation.
- Set against the backdrop of the Iraq War in 2003, the scene juxtaposes patriotic celebrations in the U.S. with the grim realities of conflict. It begins with U.S. soldiers amidst chaos in Iraq, transitions to jubilant Iraqis toppling Saddam Hussein's statue, and features President Bush's declaration of the end of major combat operations. Meanwhile, key figures like Dick Cheney and Donald Rumsfeld dismiss concerns over military contracts and engage in covert actions. The tone shifts dramatically as a hunting accident involving Cheney reveals personal irresponsibility, culminating in a violent explosion that claims a soldier's life, highlighting the stark contrast between American pride and the harsh consequences of war.
- In this tense scene, Donald Rumsfeld confronts Dick Cheney with a CIA report implicating their role in promoting Abu Musab al-Zarqawi, leading to a decision to suppress the information. The narrative shifts to the aftermath of terrorism in Baghdad and a British subway, highlighting the chaos and conflict stemming from their actions. Cheney faces scrutiny in the Senate over Halliburton contracts, culminating in a dismissive exchange with Senator Leahy. The scene concludes with Cheney throwing the first pitch at a Nationals game, met with boos from the crowd, underscoring the public's discontent.
- In a tense Pentagon hallway in November 2006, an aide is dismissed by Rumsfeld, who is on a phone call with Cheney advocating for military action in Iraq. Cheney informs Rumsfeld of his dismissal, leading to a heated exchange filled with insults. The scene shifts to January 20, 2009, during Obama's inauguration, showing Cheney in a wheelchair. In a hospital, Cheney's family shares emotional moments as a doctor delivers grim news about his health. Meanwhile, the narrator jogs and reflects on Cheney's lack of regrets before being struck by a car, leading to a darkly ironic twist where his heart is prepared for Cheney's transplant. The scene concludes with a helicopter landing on the hospital roof, hinting at the impending surgery.
- In Scene 34, Dick Cheney undergoes heart surgery, symbolizing his legacy, while intercut with Liz Cheney's tumultuous 2014 Senate campaign. As Liz grapples with personal and political challenges, including a push poll attacking her stance on gay marriage, tensions rise within the Cheney family, particularly with her sister Mary. The scene highlights Liz's struggle for approval from her father, Dick, who ultimately gives a nod to escalate her campaign tactics. The emotional weight of the surgery parallels the familial conflicts, culminating in a dramatic exploration of ambition and its costs.
- In scene 35, Dick Cheney is interviewed by Martha in a tense setting where she confronts him about the public's disapproval of the Iraq war and its heavy human cost. Despite the grim statistics presented, including U.S. and Iraqi casualties, Cheney responds dismissively, asserting his unwavering commitment to national security and justifying his actions post-9/11. He delivers a passionate defense of his decisions, emphasizing his honor in serving the American people. The scene concludes with a stark cut to black, revealing the war's aftermath and controversies surrounding the Bush-Cheney administration.
- In the final scene, a focus group discussion spirals into chaos when participant Mark accuses the movie of having a liberal bias, igniting a heated argument with Turner, who defends the film. Insults fly, leading to a physical altercation that is interrupted by other participants. Amidst the turmoil, a young woman screams, and the scene abruptly shifts to the Fast and Furious Girl excitedly discussing the new movie, ending with a cut to black.
Screenplay Insights:
Characters: 7.0, The screenplay effectively develops its characters, particularly Dick Cheney, showcasing their complexities and transformations throughout the narrative. However, some characters could benefit from deeper arcs and relatability to enhance audience engagement. See More
Premise: 8.1, The screenplay effectively establishes a compelling premise centered around Dick Cheney's complex character and his rise to power, interwoven with historical events. However, enhancing clarity in certain areas and refining character motivations could further engage the audience. See More
Structure: 8.0, The screenplay effectively captures the complex character of Dick Cheney and the political landscape of his time, utilizing a non-linear narrative structure that enhances engagement. However, it could benefit from refining pacing and clarity in certain plot points to maintain coherence and dramatic tension throughout. See More
Theme: 7.8, The screenplay effectively conveys its themes of power, ambition, and moral ambiguity through the complex character of Dick Cheney and the political landscape surrounding him. It presents a nuanced exploration of the consequences of decisions made in the name of national security, though there are areas where the thematic depth could be enhanced for greater emotional resonance. See More
Visual Impact: 7.4, The screenplay 'Vice' effectively utilizes visual imagery to convey the complex narrative of Dick Cheney's life and political career. Its strengths lie in the vivid character portrayals and the juxtaposition of personal and political moments, creating a compelling visual storytelling experience. The use of historical context and emotional depth enhances the overall impact, though there are areas for improvement in consistency and emotional resonance. See More
Emotional Impact: 7.6, The screenplay effectively elicits emotional responses through its complex character portrayals and the exploration of moral dilemmas surrounding power and ambition. However, there are opportunities to enhance emotional depth by further developing character relationships and incorporating more nuanced emotional arcs. See More
Conflict: 7.6, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes through the complex character arcs of Dick Cheney and his associates, highlighting the moral ambiguities and power struggles inherent in political maneuvering. However, there are opportunities to enhance narrative tension by deepening character motivations and exploring the consequences of their actions more vividly. See More
Originality: 8.3, The screenplay 'Vice' presents a bold and original exploration of Dick Cheney's life and political career, utilizing a unique narrative structure that blends humor with dark themes. Its creative approach to character development and the intertwining of personal and political crises stand out, making it a compelling examination of power and morality. See More
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Screenplay Story Analysis
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Character Dick Cheney
Description Cheney's transition from a drunken, irresponsible youth to a determined political figure seems abrupt and lacks sufficient development. The screenplay does not adequately bridge his character arc, making his later decisiveness feel unearned.
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Character Lynne Cheney
Description Lynne's fierce determination in the early scenes contrasts with her later acceptance of Dick's political ambitions without significant conflict. This shift in her character's assertiveness feels inconsistent.
( Scene 4 (INT. LYNNE’S HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - SAME TIME) Scene 10 (INT. RAYBURN HOUSE OFFICE BUILDING - DAY) )
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Description The portrayal of the chaos during 9/11 lacks coherence. The rapid shifts between scenes and the characters' reactions do not align with the gravity of the situation, leading to a disjointed narrative.
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Description The transition from the election results to the immediate aftermath of the Bush administration's decisions feels rushed. The screenplay does not adequately explore the implications of the election on the characters' motivations.
( Scene 19 (INT. FOUR SEASONS - AUSTIN - NIGHT) )
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Description The decision-making process regarding the shoot-down orders for planes lacks clarity. The screenplay does not explain how Cheney's authority was established in such a chaotic environment, creating a significant gap in the narrative.
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Description The connection between Zarqawi's rise and the U.S. invasion of Iraq is not sufficiently explained. The screenplay implies a direct causation without providing the necessary context or evidence.
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Description Lynne's dialogue during her confrontation with Dick feels overly dramatic and lacks the subtlety that would be expected in a real-life argument. It comes off as scripted rather than authentic.
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Description Cheney's responses in the interview scene feel overly rehearsed and lack the emotional weight that would likely accompany such a contentious topic. The dialogue does not reflect the complexity of his character.
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Element Dialogue about Cheney's authority
( Scene 2 (INT. UNDERGROUND WHITE HOUSE BUNKER - 9/11 9:38AM) Scene 24 (INT. UNDERGROUND WHITE HOUSE BUNKER - 9/11 9:38AM) )
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Element Scenes depicting Cheney's rise to power
( Scene 10 (INT. RAYBURN HOUSE OFFICE BUILDING - DAY) Scene 12 (INT. DC RESTAURANT - NIGHT) )
Suggestion Consider consolidating scenes that depict Cheney's political maneuvering to create a more cohesive narrative arc.
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Dick - Score: 78/100
Character Analysis Overview
Lynne - Score: 83/100
Character Analysis Overview
Donald - Score: 76/100
Role
Antagonist
Character Analysis Overview
David - Score: 58/100
Character Analysis Overview
Rumsfeld - Score: 75/100
Character Analysis Overview
Scooter - Score: 62/100
Character Analysis Overview
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Theme Analysis Overview
Identified Themes
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The Insidious Accumulation and Abuse of Power
95%
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The screenplay meticulously details Dick Cheney's ascent from a young lineman to Vice President, highlighting his strategic maneuvering, utilization of crises (like 9/11), and the expansion of executive authority, particularly through the Unitary Executive Theory and 'UNODIR' orders. The narrative showcases how power is consolidated through legal interpretations, control of information, and strategic alliances, often bypassing democratic checks and balances.
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This theme explores how individuals, particularly in government, actively seek, consolidate, and wield power. It delves into the mechanisms by which power is accumulated and the subsequent impact on governance and society, often portraying this accumulation as clandestine and manipulative. |
This is the central theme. The entire narrative is built around Cheney's journey and the ways in which power was amassed and exercised, often unethically or extralegally, to achieve specific agendas.
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Moral Ambiguity and Justification
85%
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The screenplay presents characters, especially Cheney and his allies, rationalizing morally questionable actions. This includes redefining torture as 'enhanced interrogation,' justifying preemptive wars based on questionable intelligence, and manipulating legal frameworks. The narrative questions the justifications offered for these actions, exposing the underlying self-interest and pursuit of power.
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This theme examines the blurred lines between right and wrong, particularly when individuals in positions of authority face difficult decisions. It explores how people justify their actions, often to themselves and others, even when those actions have negative consequences, highlighting the subjective nature of morality in high-stakes environments. |
This theme directly supports the primary theme by explaining how the pursuit and maintenance of power are often accompanied by morally ambiguous choices, which are then rationalized to legitimize the power being exercised.
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The Manipulation of Truth and Information
80%
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The film illustrates how information is selectively used, distorted, or fabricated to shape public opinion and policy. Examples include the use of focus groups to craft messaging on the 'death tax' and 'global warming,' the questionable intelligence regarding WMDs in Iraq, and the deliberate leak of Valerie Plame's identity. The narrative critiques the weaponization of information in political discourse.
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This theme focuses on how information is controlled, distorted, or misrepresented to influence perceptions and outcomes. It highlights the deliberate efforts to shape narratives, suppress dissent, and create a desired reality through propaganda, selective disclosure, or outright falsehoods. |
This theme is crucial to how power is maintained. The manipulation of information is a key tool used by those in power to justify their actions, garner public support, and consolidate their influence, thereby directly serving the primary theme.
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The Corrosive Nature of Power on Individuals
75%
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The screenplay depicts how power can transform individuals, hardening them and potentially eroding their empathy. Cheney's early life shows glimmers of his potential, but his ascent in politics seems to solidify a more ruthless and calculating persona, particularly evident in his pragmatic approach to crisis and his perceived lack of regret.
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This theme investigates the psychological and personal impact of holding significant power. It explores how power can alter an individual's character, values, and relationships, often leading to a detachment from consequences or a growing sense of entitlement and invincibility. |
This theme complements the primary theme by illustrating the human cost of unchecked power, showing how the acquisition and exercise of power can fundamentally change the individuals involved, often for the worse.
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Consequences and Reckoning
70%
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While the screenplay often portrays Cheney seemingly unburdened by regret, the narrative also hints at consequences. These include public scrutiny, legal challenges (Valerie Plame affair), and the ultimate societal divisions and lasting impacts of the policies enacted. The focus group scene at the end also suggests a societal debate and potential future reckoning.
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This theme deals with the repercussions of actions, both intended and unintended. It examines how choices, particularly those made in pursuit of power or policy, eventually lead to outcomes that can be positive or negative, and how individuals or societies respond to these consequences. |
This theme provides a counterpoint to the unchecked accumulation of power, suggesting that while immediate power might be consolidated, there can be long-term ramifications and a form of societal or personal reckoning, which can serve as a check, however delayed, on absolute power.
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Personal Ambition vs. Public Service
65%
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The screenplay contrasts Cheney's personal ambition with the idealized notion of public service. His calculated moves and prioritization of political advantage over genuine public good suggest that personal ambition is the driving force behind his career, rather than a desire to serve the nation.
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This theme explores the conflict between an individual's personal aspirations for success, recognition, or advancement, and the ethical responsibility to act in the best interests of the public. It questions the true motivations behind public figures' actions. |
This theme highlights the underlying motivations for the accumulation of power. By showing personal ambition as the primary driver, it further emphasizes that the pursuit of power is not necessarily for noble public service, reinforcing the critique of how power is wielded.
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Family Legacy and Sacrifice
55%
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The screenplay shows the impact of political life on the Cheney family, particularly his daughters. The decision against a presidential run to protect Mary from attacks, Liz's political aspirations and campaign struggles, and the family's private moments all illustrate the personal sacrifices made and the legacy being built or defended.
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This theme examines the influence of family on an individual's life and decisions, especially when those decisions involve high stakes. It explores how family relationships, pressures, and legacies can shape choices and create emotional complexities. |
This theme adds a humanizing element to the narrative, showing how the pursuit of power and the associated sacrifices impact personal life. It can also be seen as a justification or complexifying factor for certain decisions, indirectly supporting the primary theme by demonstrating the personal motivations behind the political machinations.
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Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
| Site | Description |
|---|---|
| Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
| Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
| John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
|---|---|
| Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
| What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
| Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Top Takeaway from This Section
Emotional Analysis
Emotional Variety
Critique
- The screenplay demonstrates strong emotional variety overall, with scenes effectively cycling between fear, suspense, sadness, and occasional moments of joy and surprise. However, there's a noticeable imbalance toward negative emotions - fear (average intensity 6.8), sadness (6.2), and suspense (7.3) dominate, while positive emotions like joy (2.8) and surprise (6.5) appear less frequently and with lower intensity.
- Scenes 1-4 establish a good emotional foundation with varied tones from humorous bar scenes to tense confrontations, but the middle section (scenes 21-28) becomes emotionally repetitive with sustained high-intensity fear and suspense around political machinations and war planning, risking emotional fatigue.
- The screenplay misses opportunities for emotional contrast in key political scenes. For example, scenes 27-30 maintain relentless dread and moral outrage without emotional relief, making the audience potentially numb to the escalating stakes.
Suggestions
- Introduce more moments of genuine human connection and warmth in political scenes - for instance, in scene 29 during the Oval Office debate, add a brief moment where Powell shares a personal memory that humanizes his opposition to war, providing emotional contrast to the political tension.
- In scenes 21-25, incorporate brief moments of bureaucratic absurdity or dark humor to break the relentless tension of power consolidation, similar to the satirical restaurant scene (27) which effectively uses humor to critique political manipulation.
- Develop the family dynamics in scenes 13-14 further by showing more positive interactions between Cheney and his daughters before the political tensions escalate, creating stronger emotional contrast when those relationships become strained.
Emotional Intensity Distribution
Critique
- Emotional intensity peaks dramatically around the 9/11 sequences (scenes 1, 2, 23-25) with fear intensity reaching 9-10, creating an emotional high that subsequent political scenes struggle to match, leading to potential disengagement during the mid-section.
- There's an intensity valley between scenes 15-18 where the emotional stakes feel lower despite the importance of Cheney's decision to accept the VP role. The empathy intensity drops to 4-5 during these crucial character decisions.
- The final scenes (33-36) maintain consistently high emotional intensity without adequate build-up, particularly the heart surgery and focus group fight which feel emotionally abrupt rather than earned through gradual escalation.
Suggestions
- Increase emotional intensity in scenes 15-18 by emphasizing Cheney's internal conflict through more visible hesitation, doubt, or moral questioning during his negotiations with Bush, raising the empathy intensity from 4 to at least 6.
- Create a more gradual emotional descent after the 9/11 peak by introducing scenes of bureaucratic routine or personal reflection between scenes 25-26, allowing the audience emotional recovery before the torture justification scenes.
- Restructure the final act to build more gradually toward the heart surgery climax - perhaps showing Cheney's declining health earlier and more consistently to make the medical crisis feel more emotionally earned.
Empathy For Characters
Critique
- Empathy for Dick Cheney fluctuates dramatically - strong in early scenes (scenes 3-4 with Lynne's ultimatum, empathy intensity 8) and late scenes (scene 33 with health crisis, empathy 7), but weak during his most powerful political maneuvers (scenes 21-22, empathy 2-3) where he appears purely calculating.
- Secondary characters often serve as emotional anchors but lack consistent development. Lynne Cheney shows strong empathy peaks (scene 4 intensity 8, scene 13 intensity 9) but becomes more distant in political scenes, reducing emotional connection.
- The narrator's sudden death in scene 33 creates empathy whiplash - the audience develops connection through his direct address, then experiences abrupt loss without adequate emotional preparation.
Suggestions
- In scenes 21-22, add brief moments where Cheney expresses private doubt or moral conflict about his power consolidation, perhaps through private conversations with Lynne or solitary reflections that reveal vulnerability.
- Develop Mary Cheney's perspective more consistently throughout the political scenes - show her reactions to her father's decisions and the family's political compromises to maintain emotional connection to the personal costs of power.
- Introduce the narrator's personal connection to Cheney's policies earlier in the screenplay (perhaps in scene 6 instead of just mentioning it) to make his eventual sacrifice in scene 33 feel more emotionally resonant and less abrupt.
Emotional Impact Of Key Scenes
Critique
- Key political decision scenes (scene 18 - VP negotiation, scene 29 - Iraq war planning) lack the emotional punch they need because they focus on strategic maneuvering rather than emotional stakes. The empathy intensity in scene 18 is only 5 despite its narrative importance.
- The 9/11 scenes (1, 2, 23-25) achieve strong emotional impact through visceral fear and shock (intensity 9-10), but this emotional power isn't consistently maintained in subsequent scenes exploring the consequences of those events.
- Scene 35's interview confrontation has strong emotional potential but feels somewhat diluted by the statistical text overlays, reducing the raw emotional impact of Cheney's unapologetic stance.
Suggestions
- In scene 18, add a moment after Cheney secures his unprecedented VP powers where he privately acknowledges the moral compromise, either through a meaningful glance with Lynne or a brief solitary moment of reflection, increasing emotional complexity.
- Strengthen the emotional through-line from 9/11 to the Iraq war decisions by showing more personal connections between the trauma of the attacks and the subsequent political choices, perhaps through characters directly referencing their 9/11 experiences when justifying later actions.
- Restructure scene 35 to place the statistical text before Cheney's emotional speech, allowing his defiant justification to stand alone as a powerful emotional climax rather than competing with factual information.
Complex Emotional Layers
Critique
- Many political scenes rely on single dominant emotions - scenes 21-22 focus almost exclusively on dread and apprehension without incorporating contrasting sub-emotions that would create richer emotional experiences.
- Family scenes often simplify emotional complexity - scene 13 reduces Mary's coming out to primarily sadness and conflict, missing opportunities for mixed emotions like pride, relief, or generational tension.
- The torture justification scenes (26) present moral horror as the dominant emotion but don't adequately explore the complex sub-emotions of those implementing the policies - the potential internal conflict, rationalization, or dehumanization processes.
Suggestions
- In scenes 21-22, incorporate moments of professional pride or satisfaction alongside the dread of power consolidation - show Cheney and his team experiencing genuine belief in their mission alongside their manipulative tactics.
- Enrich scene 13 by showing not just Mary's fear and her parents' concern, but also moments of familial pride, generational progress, and the complex intersection of personal identity and political reality.
- In scene 26, add brief moments showing the psychological toll on those implementing enhanced interrogation - perhaps a junior staffer's discomfort, or a moment where Cheney himself must confront the human reality of his decisions beyond the legal abstractions.
Additional Critique
Narrative Structure and Emotional Pacing
Critiques
- The non-linear structure creates emotional disorientation that sometimes serves the satire but undermines character connection - the abrupt jumps between time periods (like scene 14's transition from 1993 family peace to 1999 political return) prevent sustained emotional investment in any single timeline.
- The narrator's intermittent appearances create emotional distance rather than connection - his meta-commentary often explains emotions rather than letting the audience experience them organically through character actions and reactions.
- The final focus group scene (36) attempts to comment on political polarization but reduces complex emotional responses to simplistic shouting matches, missing opportunities for more nuanced emotional exploration of how people process difficult historical narratives.
Suggestions
- Reorganize some timeline jumps to create stronger emotional through-lines - perhaps group early Cheney scenes more consecutively to build stronger initial character connection before introducing political complexity.
- Use the narrator more strategically for emotional guidance rather than exposition - have him reflect on the emotional weight of events rather than just explaining political machinations.
- In scene 36, include at least one participant who expresses mixed or conflicted emotions about the film's content, representing the audience's likely complex emotional response rather than reducing reactions to pure opposition or support.
Supporting Character Emotional Arcs
Critiques
- Lynne Cheney's emotional journey feels fragmented - her strong early characterization (scenes 4, 11) gives way to passive support in later political scenes, reducing her emotional impact as a key influence on Dick's decisions.
- Donald Rumsfeld's emotional presence is primarily abrasive and cynical throughout, missing opportunities to show vulnerability or complexity, particularly in his dismissal scene (33) where his anger feels one-dimensional.
- Colin Powell's moral conflict in scenes 29-30 achieves strong empathy but isn't adequately set up earlier in the screenplay, making his emotional crisis feel somewhat isolated from his established character.
Suggestions
- Develop Lynne's emotional arc more consistently by showing her active involvement in key political decisions throughout the screenplay, not just in early career moments, maintaining her as a strong emotional counterpoint to Dick.
- In scene 33, add a moment where Rumsfeld shows vulnerability or regret about his legacy before his angry outburst, creating more complex emotional resonance for his character's conclusion.
- Introduce Powell's character earlier in the political rise sequences (perhaps scenes 9-10) to establish his ethical framework before the Iraq war crisis, making his later moral conflict more emotionally grounded and impactful.
Satire and Emotional Authenticity Balance
Critiques
- The satirical elements sometimes undermine emotional authenticity - scenes like the restaurant legal menu (27) and game piece manipulation (21) provide clever critique but distance the audience from genuine emotional engagement with the consequences of these actions.
- The balance between historical critique and character drama fluctuates unevenly - some scenes lean heavily into satire while others play as straight drama, creating emotional whiplash that prevents sustained investment.
- The use of graphic violence and torture scenes (26, 30) creates strong visceral emotions but sometimes feels exploitative rather than emotionally earned, particularly when not adequately connected to character perspectives or consequences.
Suggestions
- Follow satirical scenes with more emotionally grounded consequences - after the restaurant scene (27), show a character personally grappling with the human impact of the decisions being treated so casually.
- Maintain a more consistent tone by ensuring that even the most satirical scenes include moments of genuine human emotion or consequence to keep the audience emotionally anchored.
- In torture scenes, focus more on the emotional experiences of those involved - the interrogators' psychological toll, the bureaucratic detachment, or the personal justifications - rather than relying primarily on graphic imagery for emotional impact.
Top Takeaway from This Section
| Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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| internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals evolve from a youthful need for validation and control to a more complex struggle for power and moral clarity in the political arena. Over time, these internal goals manifest as desires to maintain authority, cope with personal crises, and assert one's legacy amidst ethical dilemmas. |
| External Goals | The protagonist's external goals progress from seeking initial influence and position within the political landscape to making critical decisions during crises. These goals culminate in attempts to assert control over national security, political narratives, and public perception in the wake of significant events, such as 9/11. |
| Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict centers on Authority vs. Accountability, exploring the balance between the necessity of holding power to make decisive actions and the moral implications of those actions in a democratic society. |
Character Development Contribution: As the protagonist navigates these internal and external conflicts, they undergo significant development from a morally ambiguous figure wielding power to one who grapples with the consequences of their actions, ultimately revealing vulnerabilities and a complex legacy.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The progression of the protagonist's goals and conflicts intricately weaves through the narrative, creating a structure that embodies rising tensions, crises, and eventual decisions that drive the plot toward a climax and resolution centered on power dynamics and moral dilemmas.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The interplay of internal and external goals, along with the philosophical conflicts, enriches the thematic depth of the screenplay, examining the cost of power, the struggle for validation, and the ethical implications of decisions made in the name of national security.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
| Site | Description |
|---|---|
| Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
| Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
| Title | Description |
|---|---|
| How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
| Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
| Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
| Compelled to Read | Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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| Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Scene Impact | Concept | Plot | Originality | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
| 1 - From Recklessness to Crisis: Cheney's Dual Moments | Dramatic, Intense, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 2 - Chaos and Opportunity: The Bunker on 9/11 | Tense, Serious, Reflective | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 3 - A Night of Recklessness | Gritty, Intense, Raw | 8.5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 4 - Confrontation and Ultimatum | Confrontational, Intense, Emotional | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
| 5 - Rumsfeld's Rise: A Political Apprenticeship | Serious, Intense, Informative | 8.5 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 6 - Loyalty and Pride in Power | Serious, Reflective, Proud, Emotional | 8.7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 7 - The Weight of Power | Intense, Cynical, Intriguing | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 8 - Shadows of Power | Tense, Emotional, Resolute, Dark | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8.5 | |
| 9 - Opportunistic Ambitions: The Rise of Cheney and Rumsfeld | Serious, Tense, Reflective, Humorous | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 10 - Power and Disappointment | Serious, Reflective, Hopeful | 8.7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 11 - Resilience in the Face of Change | Serious, Dramatic, Satirical | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | |
| 12 - The Rise of Conservatism: Cheney's Triumphs and Trials | Serious, Historical, Satirical | 8.5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 13 - Family Ties and Political Choices | Serious, Reflective, Emotional | 8.7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8.5 | |
| 14 - From Family Bliss to Political Intrigue | Serious, Reflective, Tense | 8.7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8.5 | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | |
| 15 - The Vice Presidential Proposal | Serious, Reflective, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | |
| 16 - Ambition and Uncertainty | Contemplative, Introspective, Serious | 8.7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8.5 | |
| 17 - Kitchen Collaborations and Legal Insights | Serious, Humorous, Informative | 8.5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 8 | 7.5 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 18 - The Deal at Crawford Ranch | Serious, Tense, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 19 - Election Night Uncertainty and Transition Planning | Serious, Strategic, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 20 - Reflections in the Oval Office | Reflective, Intimate, Nostalgic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 2 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 21 - Power Plays in the Oval Office | Serious, Strategic, Manipulative | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 22 - The Rise of Cheney's Influence | Serious, Sarcastic, Informative | 8.5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 23 - Crisis and Conspiracy: The Day of 9/11 | Tense, Serious, Suspenseful | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
| 24 - Crisis Command: Decisions in the Bunker | Tense, Serious, Chaotic | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 25 - Aftermath of Chaos | Tense, Serious, Suspenseful | 8.7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 26 - Legal Justifications for Torture | Intense, Serious, Suspenseful, Controversial | 9.2 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 27 - The Menu of War: A Satirical Feast | Serious, Intense, Manipulative | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 28 - The Consensus for War | Serious, Satirical, Critical | 8.5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 29 - Tensions in the Oval Office: The Push for War | Tense, Serious, Confrontational | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 30 - Contrasting Realities: The Prelude to War | Tense, Dramatic, Satirical | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 31 - Irony of Triumph and Tragedy | Tense, Satirical, Serious | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 32 - The Consequences of Power | Serious, Satirical, Tense | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
| 33 - Power Struggles and Ironic Fates | Tense, Emotional, Reflective | 9.2 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
| 34 - Legacy and Division | Tense, Emotional, Serious | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8.5 | 8 | |
| 35 - Defending the Unjustifiable | Defiant, Emotional, Serious | 8.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
| 36 - Chaos in the Focus Group | Confrontational, Emotional, Satirical | 8.5 | 1 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
Tip: Click on criteria in the top row for detailed summaries.
Scene Strengths
- Strong character dynamics
- Emotional depth
- Effective transitions between timelines
- Engaging dialogue
- Tension-filled atmosphere
Scene Weaknesses
- Limited exploration of supporting characters
- Some dialogues may be cliched or forced
- Sudden transitions between scenes
- Limited emotional depth in certain character interactions
- Pacing issues in scenes that lack dynamic tension
Suggestions
- Enhance character development for secondary characters to create a more rounded story.
- Refine dialogue to avoid clichéd phrases and ensure it feels fresh and impactful.
- Smooth out transitions between scenes to maintain narrative flow and coherence.
- Work on deepening emotional interactions between characters to amplify audience connection.
- Focus on pacing, ensuring that each scene contributes actively to the narrative without feeling rushed.
Scene 1 - From Recklessness to Crisis: Cheney's Dual Moments
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene masterfully sets up a dramatic juxtaposition between a wild youth and a critical moment in history. The abrupt shift from young, drunk Cheney's dice game and subsequent DUI to the chilling events of 9/11 immediately creates a powerful hook. The audience is left with a strong desire to understand how this young man became the figure making life-altering decisions in the face of national crisis. The sheer impact of 9/11 is inherently compelling, and seeing Cheney thrust into the heart of it, being rushed to a bunker, leaves the reader eager to see his reaction and the unfolding events.
The script has established a compelling narrative trajectory by immediately presenting two vastly different Dick Cheneys. The opening, with its meta-commentary on the difficulty of portraying him, and the juxtaposition of his boisterous youth with the terror of 9/11, has created a significant amount of intrigue. The question of 'how did we get here?' is implicitly posed, driving the reader forward. The inclusion of Lynne Cheney witnessing the event in parallel adds another layer of personal stakes. The introduction of the 9/11 attacks provides a massive, immediate plot driver, overshadowing any potential fading interest in earlier events and raising the stakes for the entire narrative.
Scene 2 - Chaos and Opportunity: The Bunker on 9/11
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene masterfully balances immediate crisis with a profound narrative shift. The frantic activity in the bunker, the critical decisions being made under immense pressure, and the stark contrast with the chilling voice-over commentary about opportunity create intense suspense. The scene ends on a freeze-frame of Cheney, leaving the audience with a powerful, unsettling impression of his perceived role in the unfolding chaos, directly compelling them to understand his motivations and the future implications.
The script has built significant momentum by establishing the high stakes of 9/11 and immediately framing Dick Cheney not just as a participant, but as a figure with a unique, potentially sinister perspective on the event as an 'opportunity.' This creates a strong hook, as the previous scenes have hinted at his ambition and rise to power. The juxtaposition with the subsequent transition to his early life, hinting at the origins of his character and motivations, further deepens the intrigue and compels the reader to understand how this man became who he is, especially in light of the monumental events of 9/11.
Scene 3 - A Night of Recklessness
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene effectively builds on Cheney's earlier recklessness by showing a consequence of his drinking: a bar fight that leads to his arrest. The contrast between the rough work of a lineman and his drunken antics highlights his dual nature. The inclusion of dark humor among the linemen adds a layer of gritty realism. The scene ends with the immediate aftermath of the fight, implying further trouble with the police, which directly sets up the next scene.
The script is doing a good job of establishing Cheney's character through his formative experiences. This scene, by showing his struggles with authority and his penchant for trouble even while working a manual labor job, adds depth to the narrative. It directly contrasts with the later political maneuvering and power-grabbing, suggesting a long-standing pattern of impulsivity and a disregard for rules. The ongoing thread of his personal life and relationship with Lynne is also subtly present, as this incident will undoubtedly affect her.
Scene 4 - Confrontation and Ultimatum
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene masterfully sets up a crucial turning point for Dick Cheney's character by presenting him with a profound ultimatum from Lynne. Her raw emotional vulnerability, stemming from her traumatic childhood experiences, imbues her demands with significant weight. The stakes are clearly established: Cheney must choose between continued self-destruction and genuine transformation. The flashback to her father's abusive behavior powerfully illustrates why this is so critical for Lynne, making her desire for a stable future with Dick incredibly compelling. Cheney's promise to never disappoint her again, coupled with the ominous quote and opening titles, creates a strong sense of anticipation for how he will evolve under this pressure.
The screenplay is building significant momentum. Scene 3, with its depiction of Cheney's reckless behavior and subsequent bar fight, directly leads into the consequences explored in Scene 4. Lynne's ultimatum and Cheney's vow to change are a substantial hook, raising questions about his capacity for growth and the future of their relationship. The introduction of the narrator and the overarching theme of 'beware the quiet man' suggests a larger narrative about Cheney's calculated rise to power, which is further hinted at by the opening titles and the impending introduction of Donald Rumsfeld. The script has effectively established Cheney's personal struggles and is now poised to explore his professional trajectory, creating a strong desire to see how these elements intertwine.
Scene 5 - Rumsfeld's Rise: A Political Apprenticeship
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene effectively establishes Dick Cheney's early career trajectory and his relationship with Donald Rumsfeld. The introduction of Roger Ailes and the rejection of his FOX News idea plants a seed for future developments. The scene ends with Cheney taking on significant roles and receiving validation from Rumsfeld, creating a sense of upward momentum for his character. The montage of his work, while brief, showcases his diligence. However, the scene lacks a strong cliffhanger or immediate unanswered question, which slightly tempers the compulsion to jump to the next scene.
The screenplay continues to build a compelling narrative by detailing Cheney's early career and his strategic alliances. The introduction of key figures like Rumsfeld and the mention of Roger Ailes's nascent media ideas offer glimpses into future plotlines. The scene reinforces the theme of power and ambition, particularly through Rumsfeld's mentorship and Cheney's willingness to owe him. The subtle foreshadowing of Ailes's future success and Rumsfeld's belief in Cheney's capabilities create a strong sense of forward momentum for the overall story.
Scene 6 - Loyalty and Pride in Power
The #1 Rule of Screenwriting: Make your reader or audience compelled to keep reading.
“Grab ‘em by the throat and never let ‘em go.”
The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene effectively builds intrigue by highlighting Cheney's ascent to power under Rumsfeld. The freeze-frame and narrator's commentary about Cheney finding his "calling" as a servant to power are compelling. The transition to the narrator's personal introduction and the intercutting with Cheney's joyful phone call to Lynne about his new position and meeting Nixon creates multiple layers of narrative momentum. The scene ends with a clear sense of accomplishment for Cheney and his family, setting up anticipation for what comes next.
The script continues to build momentum by detailing Cheney's early career and his growing ambition. The introduction of the narrator, Kurt, and the hint of a familial connection adds a personal mystery that encourages continued reading. The contrast between Cheney's professional success and his personal happiness with his family, especially after the earlier confrontation with Lynne (Scene 4), provides a well-rounded and engaging narrative arc. The seeds of Cheney's future power and influence are being clearly sown.
Scene 7 - The Weight of Power
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This scene masterfully ramps up the tension and expands the scope of the narrative. Rumsfeld's casual reveal of Nixon's secret bombing plans, juxtaposed with the sudden, violent imagery of the Cambodian village being destroyed, is a powerful and shocking moment that immediately compels the reader to understand the implications. The subsequent scene in Rumsfeld's office, where Cheney's naive question about 'what do we believe?' is met with mocking laughter and a slammed door, highlights his growing disillusionment and the brutal pragmatism of power. This, combined with the shift to Cheney teaching his daughters about strategy through fishing, creates an intriguing contrast and raises questions about his developing worldview. The scene ends with Rumsfeld's unexpected reassignment to Brussels, a cliffhanger that leaves the reader wondering about his fate and Cheney's future involvement.
The script continues to build momentum by showcasing the moral compromises and the intoxicating nature of power within the White House. The reveal of the Cambodia bombing, presented with such stark visual and auditory impact, deepens the exploration of executive power and its consequences. Cheney's interaction with Rumsfeld, particularly the moment he's laughed out of the office, marks a potential turning point for his character, hinting at a shift in his understanding of belief and action. The introduction of the fishing metaphor for strategy is a clever narrative device that links his personal life to his burgeoning political career. The cliffhanger of Rumsfeld's reassignment opens up new narrative possibilities and leaves the reader eager to see how Cheney will navigate this shifting political landscape.
Scene 8 - Shadows of Power
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This scene masterfully blends personal tragedy with the emerging ruthlessness of Dick Cheney's professional life, creating a potent push to continue reading. The abrupt shift from the somber funeral to the tense confrontation with Wayne, and then to the starkly pragmatic abduction scene, creates a compelling narrative acceleration. The juxtaposition of Lynne's profound grief and Cheney's cold, decisive action regarding the cleric leaves the reader with numerous unanswered questions about his moral compass and the direction of his career.
Scene 8 significantly deepens the understanding of Dick Cheney's character and the forces shaping his worldview. The juxtaposition of his wife's personal tragedy and his swift, almost detached, embrace of power and decisive action (leading to the cleric's abduction) establishes a central tension for the narrative. The earlier scenes have laid the groundwork for his ambition, but this scene directly links personal loss to a hardening of his resolve, making the reader question how this will further impact his political ascent and the decisions he will make. The abruptness of the abduction, following the funeral, hints at a complex and perhaps morally ambiguous journey ahead.
Scene 9 - Opportunistic Ambitions: The Rise of Cheney and Rumsfeld
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This scene is a high-energy, pivotal moment that propels the narrative forward with immense momentum. It begins with the immediate aftermath of Nixon's resignation, creating a sense of political flux and opportunity. The core of the scene is the strategic plotting between Rumsfeld and Cheney, fueled by ambition and a shared desire to seize power. Their dialogue, particularly Cheney's audacious (and satirical) proposal, is incredibly engaging and unexpected, showcasing a boldness that is both shocking and compelling. The quick montage of administrative changes and the 'Halloween Massacre' news report solidify the feeling of rapid ascent and political maneuvering, leaving the reader eager to see the immediate consequences of their ambition.
The script has built a strong narrative arc, charting Cheney's rise from a young man with DUIs to a key player in Washington. This scene exponentially increases the stakes by showing him actively strategizing to 'take over the damn place' with Rumsfeld. The previous scenes established Cheney's ambition and his developing understanding of power dynamics, particularly his willingness to be a servant to it. The satirical depiction of his proposal in the Oval Office, though extreme, emphasizes his unconventional approach and ambition, making the reader question how far he's willing to go and what the immediate political landscape will look like under this new influence. The foundation of Rumsfeld's mentorship and Cheney's own cunning has laid the groundwork for this ambitious power play, making the reader deeply invested in its outcome.
Scene 10 - Power and Disappointment
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This scene masterfully pivots from a moment of personal triumph and familial warmth to a profound exploration of political power. The introduction of the Unitary Executive Theory, presented as a revolutionary concept to Cheney, immediately raises the stakes and intellectual curiosity. The visual metaphor of the lion and gazelle, followed by the chilling comparison to Galactus, powerfully illustrates the immense, unchecked power Cheney is poised to wield. The abrupt end with the election loss creates a significant cliffhanger, leaving the reader desperate to see how Cheney will react and if his newfound understanding of power will be tested or extinguished.
The script has built a compelling narrative of Dick Cheney's rise, showcasing his ambition, loyalty, and growing understanding of power dynamics. The previous scenes detailing his early career, his relationship with Rumsfeld, and his political maneuvering have set the stage for this pivotal moment. The introduction of the Unitary Executive Theory is a significant development that promises to shape future actions, while the election loss presents a major challenge. The ongoing thread of Cheney's pursuit of power, now amplified by this new theoretical understanding, keeps the reader invested in his journey.
Scene 11 - Resilience in the Face of Change
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This scene effectively builds momentum by introducing a critical health crisis for Dick Cheney that directly impacts his campaign. The sudden heart attack and the subsequent decision to push forward despite it creates immediate stakes. Furthermore, Lynne Cheney stepping in and delivering a powerful, unexpected speech that galvanizes the crowd introduces a significant new dynamic and showcases her political acumen, making the reader eager to see how this affects the campaign and her own role.
The script has been steadily building Cheney's ambition and the political landscape he operates within. This scene, while focusing on a personal crisis, also subtly advances the larger narrative of his ascent by introducing Lynne as a formidable political force and highlighting the high-stakes nature of their pursuit of power. The contrast between the political decline of the GOP mentioned at the end of the previous scene and Cheney's personal drive and Lynne's unexpected political success creates a compelling tension that makes the reader want to see how these elements intertwine.
Scene 12 - The Rise of Conservatism: Cheney's Triumphs and Trials
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This scene effectively propels the narrative forward by showcasing Cheney's ascent within the Republican party and highlighting key policy shifts. The juxtaposition of the 'Halloween Massacre' and the repeal of the Fairness Doctrine directly sets up future political landscapes. The heart attack, while a personal setback, also serves as a dramatic event that will likely influence future decisions and perceptions of Cheney.
The script continues to weave a compelling narrative of Dick Cheney's rise to power, demonstrating his strategic maneuvering and the broader ideological shifts within the Republican party. The introduction of the 'Fairness Doctrine' repeal and the subsequent rise of opinion news directly foreshadows the media landscape that will shape public discourse and influence future events, creating a strong hook for subsequent scenes. The personal drama of his heart attack also adds a layer of intrigue about how this will impact his career and future decisions.
Scene 13 - Family Ties and Political Choices
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This scene masterfully balances multiple compelling elements, creating a strong desire to continue reading. The introduction of George W. Bush as a 'black sheep' and the subsequent discussion between Dick and Lynne about the nature of power and the presidency immediately pique interest, hinting at future political ambitions. The sudden, dramatic car accident involving Mary Cheney and her subsequent coming out creates a significant emotional and dramatic pivot. This personal crisis, juxtaposed with the political machinations and Dick's past ambitions, introduces a deeply personal conflict that is sure to impact the trajectory of their political lives. The transition to the narrator in 2011, referencing Cheney's past political positions and the failed presidential run, ties together the narrative threads and sets up further exploration of Cheney's choices and their consequences.
The screenplay continues to build momentum by weaving together Dick Cheney's personal life with his burgeoning political career and ambition. The reveal of Mary's sexuality and the family's reaction, especially Dick's acceptance, adds a deeply human element and raises questions about how this personal challenge will impact their public lives. The mention of Cheney's past ambition for the presidency and the failed polling in 1992, coupled with his role as Secretary of Defense and his strategic thinking even when outside the spotlight (implied by his CEO position at Halliburton), creates a sense of ongoing narrative that is yet to fully unfold. The script successfully connects past events and characters to future possibilities, such as the lingering question of Cheney's return to power.
Scene 14 - From Family Bliss to Political Intrigue
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This scene masterfully transitions from a sense of peace and resolution to a potent hook for the future. The idyllic family scene, complete with on-screen text affirming a happy, quiet retirement, lulls the reader into a false sense of closure. This peace is then shattered by the insistent ringing of the phone, immediately creating suspense. The subsequent conversation between Dick and Lynne Cheney about the potential Vice Presidency offer from George W. Bush is charged with unspoken ambition and a hint of reluctant duty. The final moments in the Austin lobby, with Cheney reaching for the 'President Bush?' magazine, create a powerful cliffhanger, making the reader desperate to know if this meeting will reignite Cheney's political career.
The script has been building towards a significant political resurgence for Dick Cheney, and this scene delivers that hook. After a long arc depicting his rise, fall, and apparent exit from public life, the offer from George W. Bush reintroduces a major driving force of the narrative. The earlier scenes established Cheney's ambition and his strategic mind, particularly his belief in wielding power. This scene directly taps into those established character traits and sets up a high-stakes scenario. The lingering questions about whether he will accept, his motivations for doing so, and the implications for the country all contribute to a compelling desire to see what happens next.
Scene 15 - The Vice Presidential Proposal
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This scene is incredibly compelling because it directly addresses the central narrative hook: Dick Cheney's return to politics. The tension between his desire for a quiet life and the allure of power, especially when offered by George W. Bush, creates immediate intrigue. Bush's character is established as somewhat naive and desperate, making Cheney's calculated refusal and counter-offer all the more fascinating. The quick flashes of Cheney fishing and the visual of his lures hint at his strategic thinking and preparation, suggesting this isn't a simple refusal but a power play. The scene ends with Bush agreeing to consider Cheney's proposal for the VP search, leaving the reader eager to see how this manipulation unfolds.
The script's momentum is exceptionally high at this point. Scene 14 expertly set up Cheney's re-entry into politics after a period of apparent retirement, and this scene immediately capitalizes on that hook. The negotiation between Cheney and Bush over the Vice Presidency is handled with skillful tension and character revelation. Cheney's deliberate refusal followed by his offer to lead the VP search is a brilliant chess move that promises future conflict and strategic depth. The screenplay has consistently built toward this pivotal moment, making the reader deeply invested in Cheney's next political move and his ultimate impact.
Scene 16 - Ambition and Uncertainty
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This scene masterfully builds suspense by showing the Cheneys grappling with a momentous decision. The juxtaposition of their personal life with the immense political opportunity creates immediate tension. The Shakespearean dialogue, while unconventional, heightens the dramatic stakes and emphasizes the ambition driving their relationship. The subsequent shift back to a more grounded conversation, where Dick decides to 'proceed' despite Lynne's reservations about Mary and the political landscape, leaves the reader desperate to know how this will unfold and what 'very thorough search' entails.
The script continues to build a compelling narrative tapestry by weaving together personal and political threads. The flashback to the 'teacup' moments of Dick's life, contrasted with his current contemplation of power, adds depth. Lynne's anxieties about Mary and the unknown political world, coupled with Dick's resolute decision to 'proceed,' create significant forward momentum. The overarching narrative of Cheney's calculated rise, interspersed with personal stakes, makes the reader invested in his next moves, particularly in relation to the upcoming election and the Vice Presidency.
Scene 17 - Kitchen Collaborations and Legal Insights
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This scene effectively builds intrigue around the Vice Presidency, particularly through the lens of legal and constitutional interpretation. The introduction of David Addington and his 'brilliant' argument about the VP's unique position creates a significant hook. The scene ends with Addington's pronouncement on oversight, leaving the reader curious about the implications of this 'loophole' for Cheney's upcoming role and how it might be exploited. The shift from the more mundane task of filling out a questionnaire to this high-level legal strategizing creates a compelling push to see how this concept plays out.
The script continues to meticulously build the narrative of Cheney's rise and his strategic approach to power. This scene, by delving into the constitutional implications of the Vice Presidency through the Unitary Executive Theory, reinforces the theme of Cheney's calculated pursuit of influence. The juxtaposition of the mundane questionnaire with this profound legal discussion highlights the meticulous and often behind-the-scenes machinations that underpin his career. Earlier scenes have established Cheney's ambition and his willingness to operate in complex, sometimes ethically grey areas, making this exploration of a potential 'oversight loophole' a logical and compelling progression.
Scene 18 - The Deal at Crawford Ranch
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This scene significantly raises the stakes by solidifying Cheney's return to politics and his partnership with George W. Bush. The direct offer of the Vice Presidency, the negotiation of roles, and the personal boundary set regarding Mary all create immediate intrigue. The scene concludes with the public announcement and the reveal of Cheney's opaque vetting process, leaving the reader eager to see how this pivotal decision unfolds and what secrets Cheney might be hiding.
The script has built a strong momentum towards Cheney's re-entry into national politics, and this scene delivers on that anticipation. The personal elements, like the discussion of his daughters and the hint of hidden agendas (the "different understanding"), combined with the dramatic reveal of his opaque vetting, create a compelling narrative arc. The seeds of future conflict and controversy are clearly sown, especially with the mention of his role in shaping the administration and the lack of full disclosure.
Scene 19 - Election Night Uncertainty and Transition Planning
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This scene brilliantly escalates the narrative tension. The initial shock and disbelief in the room upon hearing Gore's concession retraction immediately propels the reader forward, eager to see how the Bush campaign reacts to this unprecedented turn of events. Dick Cheney's decisive, even defiant, declaration to 'play it like we've already won' and to lead the transition team, despite Scooter Libby's valid point about the VP's role, creates a powerful hook. The abrupt shift to the kitchen and the subsequent revelation of Dick's health scare, just as they are discussing vital appointments and Halliburton's payout, adds a layer of personal drama and urgency. The final transition to the Supreme Court ruling, confirming their victory, leaves the reader with a sense of both triumph and foreboding, setting the stage for the immense power Dick Cheney is about to wield.
The script has built considerable momentum, and Scene 19 amplifies it significantly. The narrative has moved from Cheney's early life and career climb to the cusp of national power. The unresolved tension surrounding the contested election and the subsequent Supreme Court decision, combined with Cheney's assertive maneuvering and a sudden personal health crisis, creates a powerful cliffhanger for the overarching story. The introduction of key players for the new administration, like Rumsfeld and Wolfowitz, further solidifies the impending power grab. The narrator's voice-over subtly planting seeds of doubt about the legitimacy of the victory (the narrow margin and lack of full disclosure) adds a layer of unease that compels the reader to see how these newly acquired powers will be used.
Scene 20 - Reflections in the Oval Office
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This scene powerfully bridges the past and present, immediately drawing the reader in with Cheney's solitary contemplation of the empty Oval Office. The juxtaposition of this weighty moment with the warm, intimate flashback of his early family life creates a strong emotional resonance. The abrupt return to the present, emphasizing the darkness and silence, leaves a lingering sense of anticipation for what has led him to this point and what he intends to do with the power now within his grasp. The introduction of Scooter Libby and the assembled team signals the beginning of the operational phase, promising to reveal the machinations behind the scenes.
The script has been building towards this moment with meticulous detail, tracing Cheney's ascent through political maneuvering and strategic alliances. The transition from his personal life to the professional, political sphere, culminating in the formation of his core team in the Office of the Vice President, signifies a critical turning point. The story has established Cheney as a behind-the-scenes architect of power, and this scene sets the stage for the active execution of those plans, making the reader highly compelled to see what unfolds next.
Scene 21 - Power Plays in the Oval Office
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This scene masterfully builds anticipation by revealing the intricate, almost conspiratorial, machinations behind the Bush administration's appointments and control. The use of the 'game board' metaphor is particularly effective in illustrating Cheney's calculated approach to power. The dialogue about running off the RNC's private server and deactivating archiving immediately raises red flags and creates a sense of impending scandal or at least highly questionable ethics, compelling the reader to want to see the consequences of these decisions. Furthermore, the setup of the Iraq invasion plans and the inclusion of Liz Cheney in a key department add layers of intrigue and foreshadowing, directly linking the narrative to future major plot points.
The script has been consistently building a detailed, often morally complex, portrait of Dick Cheney's rise to power and his influence on major political decisions. The current scene significantly escalates this by showcasing the consolidation of power, the clandestine methods employed (like the RNC server), and the proactive planning for controversial actions such as the invasion of Iraq. The narrative has expertly woven together personal ambition with national policy, and this scene directly addresses the 'how' behind those policies, making the reader deeply invested in seeing the immediate and long-term outcomes of these machinations. The groundwork laid in earlier scenes regarding Cheney's ambition and strategic mind makes this deep dive into his operational control of the administration highly compelling.
Scene 22 - The Rise of Cheney's Influence
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This scene masterfully builds Cheney's influence by showcasing his strategic placement within various powerful institutions. The rapid-fire montage of offices in the Capitol, Senate, Pentagon, and CIA, coupled with the narrator's voice-over, emphasizes his growing reach and control. The introduction of Grover Norquist and Frank Luntz, and the subsequent focus group demonstration, provides a compelling insight into the manipulation of public perception and the rebranding of political issues. The scene ends on a high note of Cheney's machine successfully pushing its agenda, setting up a clear expectation of how these tactics will be employed in future political battles. The narrator's summary of the impact of these tactics—blocking action on global warming, cutting taxes, and gutting regulations—creates a sense of the vast power Cheney wields and leaves the reader eager to see how this power is further exercised.
The script has established a clear arc of Dick Cheney's rise to power, from his early career struggles to his strategic positioning within the Bush administration. Scene 22, by highlighting his meticulous efforts to secure influence and shape public narrative, significantly propels this arc forward. The scene effectively builds on earlier plot points, particularly the emphasis on 'executive power' established in Scene 10 and the ongoing theme of media manipulation. The introduction of the 'death tax' rebranding and the focus on climate change messaging directly connects to the earlier narrative of shaping public opinion. This scene also sets up future conflicts by showcasing the immense power and reach of the conservative political machine, hinting at the battles to come over issues like environmental policy and taxation.
Scene 23 - Crisis and Conspiracy: The Day of 9/11
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This scene masterfully shifts gears from the mundane political machinations of energy policy to the devastating reality of 9/11. The juxtaposition of Cheney's frustration over bureaucratic hurdles with the shocking news of the World Trade Center attacks creates a jarring and immediate cliffhanger. The urgency of the evacuation to the bunker, combined with Lynne Cheney's defiant insistence on reaching the White House amidst the unfolding chaos, leaves the reader desperate to know how these events will impact the characters and the nation.
The script has built a compelling narrative by tracing Cheney's rise and the behind-the-scenes maneuvering that shaped policy. The introduction of 9/11 in the previous scenes and its immediate, visceral depiction here brings the story to a critical turning point. The reader is now deeply invested in how Cheney, a figure so concerned with power and control, will navigate this unprecedented crisis, especially given the groundwork laid regarding executive power and intelligence gathering. The parallel storylines of Dick and Lynne during the evacuation add further emotional stakes.
Scene 24 - Crisis Command: Decisions in the Bunker
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This scene masterfully ratchets up the tension and stakes. The immediate aftermath of the 9/11 attacks is portrayed with visceral urgency, from the chaos in the bunker to the devastating visual of the Twin Towers collapsing. Cheney's authorization of lethal force (UNODIR) is a critical escalation, immediately raising questions about the rules of engagement and his consultation with his lawyer, David Addington. This sequence ends with the horrifying confirmation of war, leaving the reader desperate to know who the enemy is and what the repercussions will be.
The script has built considerable momentum towards a major crisis, and Scene 24 delivers this in spades. The foundational elements of Cheney's rise to power and his strategic thinking have been established, making the current situation feel like a direct consequence of his carefully cultivated influence. The personal stakes are heightened by Lynne's presence and her questions, grounding the immense geopolitical event in a human context. The cliffhanger of confirming 'war' without specifying an enemy is an extremely effective hook for the overarching narrative.
Scene 25 - Aftermath of Chaos
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This scene immediately follows the shocking 9/11 attacks and thrusts the reader into the heart of the crisis response. The high-stakes discussions in the bunker, the authorization to shoot down aircraft, and the conflicting advice create immediate tension. The narrator's voice-over and the visual of Cheney's fear add a layer of psychological intrigue, while the subsequent scene of Cheney and Lynne in the bomb shelter and the ominous final shot of the creature in the stream leave the reader with a sense of dread and unresolved danger.
The screenplay has masterfully built momentum through Cheney's rise to power, his strategic maneuvering, and the increasing stakes. The transition from political machinations to the immediate aftermath of 9/11 creates a dramatic shift, intensifying the narrative. The ongoing mystery surrounding Cheney's motivations, the unresolved threats hinted at by the narrator, and the sheer magnitude of the 9/11 attacks create a compelling drive to understand the full consequences and how Cheney will navigate this unprecedented crisis.
Scene 26 - Legal Justifications for Torture
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This scene is incredibly compelling due to its unflinching and graphic depiction of torture and the legal justifications for it. The juxtaposition of the sterile legal discussions with the brutal imagery creates a visceral impact. The introduction of John Yoo and the legal opinions that redefine 'torture' and violate privacy laws raise profound ethical and legal questions. The scene ends on a note of escalating horror, leaving the reader desperate to understand the full scope of these actions and their consequences.
The screenplay continues to build immense momentum by delving into the morally complex and legally questionable actions taken in the name of national security. The introduction of John Yoo and the 'torture memos' directly addresses a crucial and controversial aspect of the post-9/11 era, which resonates with the audience's understanding of history. The established themes of expanding executive power, disregard for international law, and the manipulation of legal definitions are powerfully reinforced here. The previous scenes set a foundation of Cheney's pursuit of power, and this scene showcases a terrifying manifestation of that power, raising the stakes significantly.
Scene 27 - The Menu of War: A Satirical Feast
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This scene masterfully escalates the tension by juxtaposing the clandestine manipulation of legal and public opinion with the immediate, and somewhat satirical, consequences of those manipulations. The focus group segments effectively highlight the public's confusion and desire for a clear enemy, directly paving the way for the decision to target Iraq. The transition from the satirical restaurant scene to the purposeful creation of the Office of Special Plans, coupled with the discovery of a potential link between Atta and an Iraqi spy, creates a strong sense of impending doom and forward momentum. The final moments with Wolfowitz and Feith presenting the tenuous evidence strongly compel the reader to see how this flimsy justification will be used.
The script continues to build its compelling narrative by weaving together the insidious machinations of powerful figures with the societal forces that enable them. Scene 27 masterfully connects the abstract manipulation of legal concepts and public perception to a concrete decision to invade Iraq. This scene directly addresses the audience's potential questions from earlier sequences about how and why certain decisions were made, and it raises new questions about the validity of the intelligence and the motivations behind the rush to war. The narrative thread of Cheney and his allies constructing justifications for war, while simultaneously operating under the guise of national security, remains a powerful hook. The introduction of the Office of Special Plans and the discovery of a potential Atta connection further fuels the intrigue.
Scene 28 - The Consensus for War
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This scene masterfully builds suspense by juxtaposing the cynical manipulation of intelligence and public opinion with the looming threat of war. The focus group segment highlights the public's confusion and the administration's cynical strategy to exploit it. The discovery of the potential Atta-Iraqi spy connection, even with dubious credibility, provides a tangible, albeit manufactured, justification for invasion. The rapid montage of politicians echoing the 'smoking gun' and 'mushroom cloud' rhetoric effectively crystallizes the escalating momentum towards war, leaving the reader eager to see how this manufactured consensus will play out and what the ultimate consequences will be.
The script continues to build immense momentum. The seeds of the Iraq War, planted and nurtured through manipulation and fear-mongering, are now coming to fruition. The focus group scenes brilliantly illustrate the cynical approach to public persuasion, while the discovery of the Atta-Iraqi link, however flimsy, provides the crucial narrative hook. The rapid-fire montage of politicians adopting the same rhetoric creates a powerful sense of inevitability. Coupled with the overarching narrative of Cheney's rise to power and his influence on foreign policy, the reader is deeply invested in seeing the ramifications of these decisions and how they will shape the future. The foreshadowing of the war's justification is incredibly compelling.
Scene 29 - Tensions in the Oval Office: The Push for War
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This scene masterfully escalates the tension surrounding the decision to invade Iraq. The dynamic between the characters, particularly the clash between Powell and Rumsfeld, coupled with Cheney's quiet but firm influence on Bush, creates a palpable sense of impending conflict. The introduction of Abu Musab Al-Zarqawi and the subsequent focus on his potential connection to Al Qaeda provides a new, immediate hook, driving the narrative forward. The scene ends with Cheney obtaining the intelligence on Zarqawi, directly setting up the next sequence of events and leaving the reader eager to see how this information will be used.
The script continues to build momentum by meticulously detailing the political maneuvering and intelligence manipulation that led to the Iraq War. The narrative has consistently shown how key decisions were made, often through subtle (and not-so-subtle) persuasion and the shaping of information. The introduction of Zarqawi in this scene, and Cheney's keen interest in him, adds a new layer to the unfolding crisis. This directly links back to the earlier seeds planted about the potential for a wider conflict beyond Afghanistan, suggesting a direct path to the war narrative.
Scene 30 - Contrasting Realities: The Prelude to War
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This scene masterfully transitions from the manipulative political maneuvering of the previous scene to the stark, devastating reality of the decision to invade Iraq. The juxtaposition of Zarqawi's triumphant reaction to Powell’s speech with the subsequent news footage of Baghdad exploding is incredibly impactful. The sudden shift to a seemingly normal family dinner, punctuated by a fish pun, provides a jarring contrast and highlights the disconnect between the decision-makers and the consequences. This contrast, along with the visual of W. Bush’s nervously bouncing leg mirroring the Iraqi father’s, creates a powerful sense of impending doom and compels the reader to see what happens next.
The script has been building towards this point with intense focus on the machinations that led to the Iraq War. The previous scenes meticulously detailed the legal justifications, intelligence manipulation, and political strategizing. This scene delivers on the promise of those build-ups by showing the direct, immediate impact of those decisions. The introduction of Zarqawi's amplified notoriety, Powell's regret, and the horrifying visual of the cruise missile strike in Baghdad create a potent cocktail of tension and foreboding, ensuring the reader is desperate to understand how this unfolds.
Scene 31 - Irony of Triumph and Tragedy
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This scene is packed with significant plot developments and compelling hooks that make the reader eager to see the consequences. The juxtaposition of the triumphant 'mission accomplished' imagery with the violent reality of the IED attack and the subsequent order to leak Valerie Plame's identity creates immediate suspense and moral ambiguity. The revelation of Zarqawi's connection to the invasion, the hunting accident, and the order to leak Plame's identity all raise the stakes and introduce new conflicts that demand resolution. The sudden, brutal explosion and death at the end is a shocking cliffhanger.
The screenplay maintains a high level of engagement through its relentless pace and the escalating consequences of Cheney's decisions. The narrative consistently introduces new crises and moral quandaries, from the manipulation of intelligence for war to the personal and political fallout of actions like the hunting accident and the leak of Plame's identity. The introduction of Zarqawi as a pivotal figure in the Iraq insurgency, even as the official narrative is being constructed, adds a layer of complex foreshadowing. The sheer volume of impactful events—the 'mission accomplished' declaration, the hunting incident, the order to leak Plame's identity, and the deadly IED attack—all contribute to a powerful momentum.
Scene 32 - The Consequences of Power
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This scene masterfully pivots from the immediate crisis of the Zarqawi report to a broader, chilling depiction of the consequences of the Iraq War and the political machinations behind it. The juxtaposition of the escalating chaos in Baghdad and the mundane discovery of no WMDs, followed by Cheney's defiant confrontation with Senator Leahy and the booing crowd, creates a potent sense of irony and foreboding. The scene ends on a note of public disapproval, leaving the reader eager to see how Cheney and the administration navigate this fallout and what further repercussions arise from their decisions.
The script has built significant momentum by detailing the lead-up to the Iraq War, the questionable intelligence, and the political maneuvering. This scene continues that momentum by showing the immediate aftermath of the invasion and the emerging criticisms and consequences. The introduction of Valerie Plame's lawsuit and the Halliburton contract investigations, alongside the narrative of Zarqawi's insurgency, creates multiple threads of tension. The script has established a clear trajectory of political and military action, and the audience is invested in seeing how these complex issues play out and if any accountability will emerge.
Scene 33 - Power Struggles and Ironic Fates
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The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene is highly compelling due to its potent blend of political intrigue, personal drama, and dark irony. The confrontation between Rumsfeld and Cheney, filled with raw emotion and veiled threats, sets a high stakes tone. The abrupt shift to the narrator's violent death and the subsequent revelation that his heart will be transplanted into Cheney creates a shocking and unexpected twist. This juxtaposition of a powerful figure's decline with a seemingly random act of fate involving the narrator, whose perspective has been guiding the audience, generates significant curiosity about the narrative's future direction and the implications of this macabre connection.
The script continues to build immense momentum. The Rumsfeld/Cheney exchange, while concluding a chapter of their professional relationship, reinforces the ruthlessness and consequences of their political actions. The narrator's death and the impending heart transplant introduce a deeply personal and unsettling element that directly connects the audience's guide to the subject of the story. This unexpected twist raises profound questions about fate, legacy, and the interconnectedness of lives, significantly deepening the overall mystery and compelling the reader to discover how this will impact Cheney and the narrative's trajectory.
Scene 34 - Legacy and Division
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The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene masterfully interweaves multiple storylines, creating a powerful sense of forward momentum. The immediate dramatic tension of Cheney's heart surgery, juxtaposed with Liz's political struggles and Mary's emotional fallout, provides immediate hooks. The quick cuts of symbolic imagery—from war casualties to political protest and intimate family moments—rapidly re-contextualize Cheney's impact, leaving the reader eager to see how these disparate threads resolve. The ending, with the successful heart transplant and the lingering question of the strained family relationship, leaves a strong desire to know what happens next.
The script has maintained a consistently high level of engagement by chronicling Cheney's rise and impact across decades, linking personal and political consequences. The narrative skillfully balances the grand sweep of his influence with intimate family moments and sharp political commentary. The current scene, by focusing on the consequences of his actions on his family and legacy, while simultaneously concluding the immediate crisis of his health, pulls the reader forward. The recurring themes of power, public perception, and familial strain are all at play, making the reader invested in the ultimate outcome and the characters' fates.
Scene 35 - Defending the Unjustifiable
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The scene level score is the impact on the reader or audience to continue reading.
The Script score is how compelled they are to keep reading based on the rest of the script so far.
This scene provides a powerful and direct confrontation with Dick Cheney's legacy and justifications. The interview format allows for raw emotion and definitive statements, making the reader curious about the long-term impact of these words and the lingering questions they raise. The juxtaposition of his impassioned defense with the stark on-screen statistics about the war's human and financial cost creates a compelling tension. The abrupt ending with the channel change and the final credits, along with the haunting music, leaves the reader with a sense of unease and a desire to process the information, potentially leading them to reflect on the entire narrative.
The screenplay has built a substantial foundation of historical events, character development, and thematic exploration, culminating in this intense, retrospective interview. The narrative arc of Cheney's rise to power, his controversial decisions, and the ongoing impact of those choices have created significant narrative momentum. This scene serves as a powerful summation of his perspective, but the lingering questions about the 'why' and the full consequences of his actions, especially in light of the subsequent textual information about legal memos and lost emails, keep the reader engaged and wanting to understand the full scope of his influence.
Scene 36 - Chaos in the Focus Group
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This scene serves as an epilogue, breaking the fourth wall to discuss the film's perceived bias. While it attempts to acknowledge audience reception, it does so in a way that feels tacked on and doesn't offer any new narrative momentum or compelling questions to draw the reader into the next (non-existent) scene. The abrupt shift to a 'Fast and Furious' comment is jarring and feels like a meta-joke rather than a genuine hook.
The script has reached its conclusion, presenting a meta-commentary on its own reception. There are no ongoing plot threads or character arcs left unresolved that would compel a reader to continue. The film has chosen to end with a commentary on its own perceived bias rather than offering any lingering questions or emotional resonance that would necessitate further exploration.
- Physical environment: The screenplay depicts a multifaceted physical environment that spans various locations and time periods, from the rugged, natural landscapes of 1960s Wyoming (e.g., vast fields, roadside bars, and lakes) to the iconic, institutional settings of Washington D.C. (e.g., the White House, Capitol Building, and underground bunkers). It also includes military and war zones (e.g., Afghanistan's mountains, Iraq's deserts, and Pentagon hallways), domestic spaces (e.g., homes, hospitals, and kitchens), and other settings like high-end restaurants, focus groups, and international sites. This diversity creates a contrast between rural simplicity and urban complexity, symbolizing the evolution from personal hardship to global power struggles, and emphasizes the physical isolation or intensity of key events like 9/11 and the Iraq war.
- Culture: Cultural elements in the screenplay reflect a blend of American traditions, political ideologies, and social dynamics across decades. It portrays a culture of rugged individualism and revelry in 1960s Wyoming, shifting to conservative political ambition and media influence in the 1970s-2000s, with references to events like the Watergate scandal, the rise of Fox News, and post-9/11 patriotism. Family values, gender roles, and personal relationships are highlighted, such as Lynne Cheney's frustration with traditional expectations and the family's handling of Mary's sexuality. Cultural motifs include dark humor in dangerous work environments, the normalization of political manipulation, and the use of propaganda to shape public opinion, illustrating a society grappling with power, loyalty, and moral ambiguity.
- Society: The societal structure is predominantly hierarchical and power-driven, featuring elite political circles, military chains of command, and familial dynamics. It shows how individuals navigate positions of authority (e.g., Cheney's rise from lineman to Vice President), with elements like lobbying, think tanks, and congressional maneuvers emphasizing ambition and control. Societal shifts are depicted, such as the impact of historical events (e.g., 9/11, Iraq war) on public perception and policy, and the contrast between rural communities and urban elites. This structure underscores themes of inequality, where access to power enables manipulation and decision-making that affects the masses, while personal relationships reveal the human cost of societal expectations.
- Technology: Technology in the screenplay evolves with the eras, starting with basic 1950s-1960s elements like jet planes, cars, and power lines, and advancing to 2000s innovations such as laptops, surveillance tools, teleconferencing, and intelligence systems (e.g., during 9/11 and the Iraq war). Symbolic uses include solar panels representing environmental shifts and communication devices facilitating secretive operations. Technology is often portrayed as a tool for control and crisis management, highlighting its role in enabling or concealing political actions, with minimal focus in personal scenes to emphasize emotional dynamics.
- Characters influence: The world's elements profoundly shape the characters' experiences and actions, particularly Dick Cheney's trajectory from a troubled youth in Wyoming's harsh physical environment to a master of political intrigue in D.C.'s power structures. The cultural and societal hierarchies drive his ambition, fostering a reliance on loyalty and manipulation, as seen in his adoption of the Unitary Executive Theory and handling of crises like 9/11. Technology influences his decision-making by providing tools for secrecy and control, while personal settings expose vulnerabilities, such as family conflicts over sexuality and health issues, compelling characters to adapt and make morally complex choices that reflect their environments.
- Narrative contribution: These world elements contribute to the narrative by creating a chronological and thematic progression that mirrors Cheney's life and the historical events he influences. The contrasting physical environments and cultural shifts build tension and contrast, driving the plot from personal struggles to global consequences, such as the transition from a Wyoming bar fight to White House decision-making during 9/11. Societal and technological aspects facilitate key plot points, like the use of think tanks and media to justify the Iraq war, enhancing the biographical structure and highlighting how individual actions intersect with broader historical forces to propel the story forward.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements deepen the screenplay's thematic exploration of power, secrecy, and the human cost of ambition. The physical and cultural contrasts underscore themes of moral ambiguity and transformation, showing how environments shape ethical decisions, such as Cheney's embrace of torture and war. Societal hierarchies and technological tools amplify themes of manipulation and accountability, illustrating the dangers of unchecked authority and the erosion of democratic norms. Overall, these elements enrich the narrative's critique of American politics, emphasizing the personal toll of public life and the long-term consequences of decisions made in secrecy, adding layers of irony, tragedy, and reflection on the nature of power.
| Voice Analysis | |
|---|---|
| Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a sharp, witty, and often darkly humorous blend of sharp dialogue, insightful narration, and a keen eye for the absurdities and ruthlessness of political power. This voice manifests in concise yet evocative scene descriptions, dialogue that crackles with subtext and reveals character motivations and power dynamics, and a narrative style that often interweaves personal moments with grand political machinations. There's a distinct ability to balance high-stakes drama with moments of levity, creating a tone that is both critical and engaging. |
| Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes significantly to the overall mood, themes, and depth of the screenplay by injecting a satirical edge that highlights the manipulation and self-interest often present in politics. It deepens characterization by revealing their complexities through sharp dialogue and internal reflections, and it effectively underscores the thematic exploration of power, ambition, morality, and the consequences of political decisions on both a national and personal level. The consistent use of this voice creates a cohesive and impactful viewing experience. |
| Best Representation Scene | 9 - Opportunistic Ambitions: The Rise of Cheney and Rumsfeld |
| Best Scene Explanation | Scene 9 best showcases the author's unique voice due to its potent blend of dark humor, sharp dialogue, and incisive commentary on political ambition and manipulation. The scene's satirical tone, evident in Cheney and Rumsfeld capitalizing on political chaos and the humorous suggestion of an absurd metaphor for bold action, perfectly captures the writer's ability to dissect the ruthless machinations of power with wit. The concise yet evocative narrative descriptions further enhance the tension and complexity of the characters' motivations, making it a quintessential example of the writer's distinctive style. |
Style and Similarities
The screenplay exhibits a consistent focus on sharp, rapid-fire dialogue, intricate political intrigue, and the exploration of complex power dynamics. There's a strong emphasis on character-driven narratives that delve into moral dilemmas, personal motivations, and societal themes within high-stakes environments. The writing often blends serious subject matter with elements of satire and humor, creating engaging and thought-provoking scenes.
Style Similarities:
| Writer | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Aaron Sorkin | Aaron Sorkin's influence is overwhelmingly evident across numerous scene analyses. His signature style, characterized by intelligent, fast-paced dialogue, political drama, moral complexity, and the exploration of power dynamics and personal motivations, forms the bedrock of the screenplay's writing. The recurring comparisons highlight Sorkin's consistent impact on dialogue, thematic depth, and character interactions. |
| Adam McKay | Adam McKay's presence is strongly felt through the screenplay's tendency to blend humor with serious political themes and its satirical take on power struggles and historical events. The analyses frequently mention McKay's ability to inject wit and commentary into political narratives, offering a unique perspective on the subject matter, often reflecting his signature style in satirical explorations of real-life situations. |
Other Similarities: While Aaron Sorkin and Adam McKay are the most frequently cited influences, there are also notable connections to writers like Beau Willimon and Tony Kushner, suggesting a depth of political commentary and exploration of moral ambiguities. The screenplay consistently leans into dialogue-heavy scenes that reveal character and drive plot, with a clear interest in the machinations of power and the personal consequences that arise from it. The presence of other comparable writers like Oliver Stone, David Mamet, and Charlie Kaufman indicates a multifaceted approach that combines sharp dialogue with thematic exploration and perhaps a touch of dark humor or unconventional storytelling.
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
| Pattern | Explanation |
|---|---|
| Emotional Tone Boosts Impact | Scenes with 'Emotional' in the tone consistently achieve high Emotional Impact scores (9 or 10), suggesting that the author intuitively uses emotional descriptors to amplify audience engagement, but this could be leveraged more in non-emotional scenes to maintain consistency. |
| Reflective Tones and Pacing Dips | While most reflective-toned scenes maintain strong conflict and stakes, scene 20 stands out with lower scores in Conflict (3), High Stakes (2), and Move Story Forward (5), indicating that introspective moments might unintentionally slow the narrative pace; the author may want to ensure these scenes still advance the plot subtly. |
| Humorous Tones Enhance Dialogue | Scenes featuring humorous, satirical, or sarcastic tones (e.g., scenes 9, 17, 22) correlate with higher Dialogue scores (8 or 9), revealing the author's strength in witty writing during lighter moments, which could be a signature style to emphasize in character interactions for added depth. |
| Informative Tones Lower Emotional Depth | Tones like 'Informative' or 'Historical' (seen in scenes 5, 12, 17, 22) are associated with reduced Emotional Impact scores (6-7), pointing to a potential blind spot where expository content overshadows emotional resonance; integrating more character-driven elements could make these scenes more compelling. |
| Conflict Drives Character Evolution | A strong positive correlation exists between Conflict and Character Changes scores, with high-conflict scenes (e.g., 23-26) often scoring 8-9 in both, indicating that the author effectively uses tension to foster character growth, but scenes with lower conflict (like 20) show less change, suggesting opportunities to tie quieter moments to ongoing development. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a strong ability to blend personal drama with political intrigue, showcasing the writer's skill in crafting engaging dialogue and complex character dynamics. The use of humor, tension, and moral dilemmas adds depth to the narrative, making it compelling and thought-provoking. However, there are opportunities to enhance character development, pacing, and the overall structure of the screenplay.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
| Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
|---|---|---|
| Book | Read 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder | This book provides valuable insights into crafting compelling screenplays, focusing on structure and character development, which can enhance the writer's overall storytelling techniques. |
| Screenplay | Study 'The West Wing' scripts by Aaron Sorkin | These scripts are known for their sharp dialogue and character dynamics, offering a model for writing engaging political drama and enhancing the writer's dialogue skills. |
| Video | Watch interviews with political leaders during crises | Observing real-world decision-making under pressure can provide insights into character motivations and dynamics, enriching the authenticity of the writer's political narratives. |
| Exercise | Practice writing dialogue exchanges that reveal underlying tensions and power dynamics between characters.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will help refine the writer's ability to convey complex character relationships and conflicts through dialogue, enhancing emotional impact. |
| Exercise | Write monologues for each character to explore their internal thoughts and motivations.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will deepen character development and enhance the authenticity of character interactions, allowing for richer storytelling. |
| Exercise | Create a scene outline using the three-act structure to improve pacing and narrative flow.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise will help the writer focus on the overall structure of their screenplay, ensuring that each scene serves a purpose in advancing the plot and character arcs. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
| Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
|---|---|---|
| The Rise and Fall | The screenplay chronicles Dick Cheney's rise to power, detailing his early life, political maneuvers, and eventual influence in the White House, followed by his decline in public perception and health. | This trope involves a character's ascent to power followed by a significant downfall, often due to their own actions. An example is Michael Corleone in 'The Godfather,' who rises to power in the mafia but ultimately faces tragic consequences. |
| The Anti-Hero | Dick Cheney is portrayed as a complex character who makes morally ambiguous decisions, often prioritizing power and control over ethical considerations. | An anti-hero is a central character who lacks conventional heroic qualities, often engaging in morally questionable actions. An example is Walter White in 'Breaking Bad,' who transforms from a sympathetic character to a ruthless drug lord. |
| The Power Behind the Throne | Cheney is depicted as the influential figure operating behind the scenes, manipulating events and decisions while appearing to be in a secondary role. | This trope involves a character who wields significant power without holding the official title. An example is Frank Underwood in 'House of Cards,' who orchestrates political maneuvers from the shadows. |
| The Tragic Flaw | Cheney's ambition and desire for control lead to personal and political consequences, illustrating his tragic flaw. | A tragic flaw is a character trait that leads to the downfall of the protagonist. An example is Oedipus in 'Oedipus Rex,' whose hubris leads to his tragic fate. |
| The Family Dynamic | The screenplay explores the relationship between Dick and Lynne Cheney, highlighting their support and conflicts throughout his political career. | This trope examines the complexities of family relationships, often showcasing support, conflict, and loyalty. An example is the relationship between the Bluth family in 'Arrested Development,' which is filled with both love and dysfunction. |
| The Political Satire | The screenplay employs humor and irony to critique political events and figures, particularly Cheney's actions and decisions. | Political satire uses humor to criticize political figures and policies. An example is 'Veep,' which humorously portrays the absurdities of political life. |
| The Flashback | The screenplay frequently uses flashbacks to provide context for Cheney's character development and decisions. | Flashbacks are used to reveal important backstory and character motivations. An example is 'Lost,' which often uses flashbacks to explore characters' pasts. |
| The Unlikely Friendship | Cheney's relationships with figures like Donald Rumsfeld illustrate unexpected alliances formed in the pursuit of power. | This trope involves characters forming bonds despite differences, often leading to surprising outcomes. An example is the friendship between Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson in 'Sherlock Holmes.' |
| The Consequences of Power | The screenplay highlights the impact of Cheney's decisions on both personal and global scales, illustrating the far-reaching consequences of political power. | This trope explores how power affects individuals and society, often leading to unintended consequences. An example is 'The Godfather,' which shows how power corrupts and affects family dynamics. |
Memorable lines in the script:
| Scene Number | Line |
|---|---|
| 32 | DICK: Go fuck yourself. |
| 4 | LYNNE: I’ve seen my Mother waiting up all night for my Father to come home. And I’ve seen him drunk in this house raising his voice and way worse, and I’m not dancing that dance anymore... I’m not! |
| 5 | DONALD RUMSFELD: Look, this is an opportunity. An opportunity to work in the halls of decision making for the most powerful country in the goddamn world. If that doesn’t give you a hard on I don’t know what will. |
| 18 | Dick: The Vice Presidency is a mostly symbolic job... |
| 8 | RUMSFELD: Don’t worry. I’m like bed bugs. You gotta burn the mattress to get rid of me! |
Logline Analysis
Top Performing Loglines
Creative Executive's Take
Logline_1 stands out as the top choice for its compelling narrative arc that transforms a personal flaw into a gripping tale of power acquisition, making it highly factually accurate and commercially appealing. The script summary vividly details Cheney's early life as a drunk driver in 1963, including his arrest and subsequent redemption through his rise in politics, which directly supports every element of this logline. Creatively, this logline hooks audiences with a classic underdog story—starting from a moment of vulnerability and escalating to clandestine control of the government, as evidenced in scenes like his work under Rumsfeld and the 9/11 response—mirroring real-life biopics like 'The Wolf of Wall Street' that blend personal drama with high-stakes intrigue. Commercially, it taps into universal themes of redemption and hidden influence, appealing to a broad audience seeking thrilling, character-driven stories with a political edge, potentially drawing in viewers interested in anti-heroes and making it a marketable package for festivals and streaming platforms.
Strengths
This logline effectively hooks the audience with a compelling transformation arc and ties directly to the script's core theme of Cheney's rise from personal failure to immense power, making it intriguing and memorable.
Weaknesses
It could better emphasize the conflict and stakes by clarifying the methods of 'silent' control, as the logline feels slightly vague in detailing the protagonist's journey beyond the initial hook.
Suggested Rewrites
Detailed Scores
| Criterion | Score | Reason | Evidence |
|---|---|---|---|
| Hook | 10 | The logline is highly engaging, starting with a provocative image of a 'drunk driver' and promising a secretive rise to power, which immediately draws interest. | "The script's opening in Scene 1 with Cheney's drunken arrest sets a strong hook, paralleled by his later dominance in scenes like Scene 21, where he manipulates power structures." |
| Stakes | 9 | High stakes are inherent in gaining control of the government, implying national and personal consequences, though it could specify the risks involved in his methods. | "The script highlights stakes through Cheney's influence on major events like the Iraq war in Scene 29 and 30, where decisions affect global stability, and his personal life in Scene 34 with family impacts." |
| Brevity | 9 | The logline is concise and to the point, effectively conveying the essence in few words without unnecessary fluff. | "At 11 words, it mirrors the script's efficient storytelling, such as the quick cuts in Scene 2 from 9/11 to historical events, maintaining pace." |
| Clarity | 9 | The logline is straightforward and easy to understand, clearly outlining Cheney's starting point and endpoint, but 'silently gained control' could be misinterpreted without context. | "Script summary shows Cheney's early drunken incidents in Scene 1 and his gradual accumulation of power through scenes like his work under Rumsfeld in Scene 5 and influence in the White House in Scene 21." |
| Conflict | 7 | Conflict is suggested in the transformation from drunk driver to power figure, but the logline lacks detail on specific oppositions like political rivals or internal struggles. | "Conflict is evident in the script, such as Cheney's confrontations in Scene 3 (bar fight) and political battles in Scene 9 (Halloween Massacre), but the logline doesn't explicitly reference these elements." |
| Protagonist goal | 8 | The goal of turning life around and gaining control is implied but not explicitly detailed, leaving room for ambiguity in Cheney's motivations and steps. | "Cheney's personal transformation is depicted in Scene 4 where he vows to change after Lynne's ultimatum, and his goal-oriented rise is shown in scenes like Scene 7 with his political ambitions and Scene 18 with his negotiation for power." |
| Factual alignment | 10 | It accurately reflects the script's narrative of Cheney's early life and ascent to power, with no major discrepancies. | "Directly aligns with Scene 1 (drunk driving), Scene 4 (life turnaround), and his power consolidation in scenes like Scene 18 (VP negotiations) and Scene 21 (control of administration)." |
Creative Executive's Take
As the second-best logline, logline_3 excels in capturing a pivotal historical moment with intense emotional and dramatic stakes, ensuring factual accuracy by aligning closely with the script's depiction of Cheney's actions during the 9/11 attacks in scenes like the underground bunker chaos and his authoritative decisions. This logline is commercially appealing because it leverages the high-profile, universally recognized event of 9/11 to create an immersive, visceral experience, similar to films like 'United 93' or 'Zero Dark Thirty,' which thrive on real-time tension and historical gravity. The creative hook lies in offering a behind-the-scenes perspective through Cheney's eyes, highlighting his calm amidst crisis, which is supported by the script's voice-over and character dynamics, making it ripe for marketing as a pulse-pounding thriller that educates while entertaining, with strong potential for awards buzz and audience engagement through its timely relevance to ongoing discussions about national security.
Strengths
This logline immerses the audience in a high-drama historical event, leveraging the emotional intensity of 9/11 to create immediacy and relevance.
Weaknesses
It focuses narrowly on one event, potentially misrepresenting the script's broader scope of Cheney's life and career, which could limit appeal by ignoring the full narrative arc.
Suggested Rewrites
Detailed Scores
| Criterion | Score | Reason | Evidence |
|---|---|---|---|
| Hook | 9 | It uses the iconic 9/11 event to grab attention, though it might not be as universally appealing as a more comprehensive hook. | "The script's depiction of 9/11 in Scene 1 and 2, with gasping reactions and urgent evacuations, creates a dramatic hook that the logline capitalizes on." |
| Stakes | 10 | The stakes are inherently high with national security threats during 9/11, effectively conveying life-and-death consequences. | "Script shows immediate dangers in Scene 23 with evacuations and in Scene 24 with decisions on aircraft threats, emphasizing the high stakes of the attacks." |
| Brevity | 10 | Extremely concise at 10 words, it delivers the core idea efficiently without excess. | "The logline's brevity aligns with the script's use of quick cuts and montages, such as in Scene 2, to maintain pace." |
| Clarity | 10 | The logline is crystal clear, specifying the event, perspective, and emotional tone, leaving no room for confusion. | "Script summary details Cheney's actions during 9/11 in Scenes 1, 2, 23, and 24, such as being rushed to a bunker and making critical decisions, providing a focused viewpoint." |
| Conflict | 9 | The chaos of 9/11 provides strong conflict, but it's confined to the event, missing broader antagonisms in Cheney's life. | "Conflict is vivid in Scene 24 with debates over rules of engagement and in the narrator's voice-over highlighting opportunity amid fear, but it's event-specific." |
| Protagonist goal | 7 | Cheney's goal during 9/11 is implied as crisis management, but the logline doesn't explicitly state his objectives beyond experiencing the event, making it less defined. | "In Scene 24, Cheney barks orders and authorizes shoot-downs, showing his goal-oriented response, but the logline doesn't capture his larger ambitions depicted throughout the script." |
| Factual alignment | 9 | It accurately portrays Cheney's role in 9/11 events, but as a subset of the script, it doesn't encompass the full story, slightly reducing alignment. | "Factual elements match Scenes 23 and 24, including Cheney's bunker management and interactions, but omit earlier and later parts like his rise in Scene 5." |
Creative Executive's Take
Logline_0 secures the third spot by providing a comprehensive overview of Cheney's ascent to power, which is factually accurate as the script summary chronicles his journey from obscurity to influence across multiple decades, including key events like his roles in the Nixon and Bush administrations. This logline is commercially viable due to its broad appeal as a traditional biopic hook, akin to 'The Iron Lady' or 'Frost/Nixon,' inviting curiosity about an 'untold story' that blends historical facts with personal evolution, as seen in the narrator's commentary and various flashbacks. Creatively, it serves as an effective entry point by emphasizing Cheney's unprecedented power grab, supported by the script's thematic elements, making it marketable for general audiences interested in political history, though it lacks the punchy specificity of more focused loglines, positioning it as a solid but somewhat conventional choice for mainstream release.
Strengths
It broadly captures Cheney's rise to power, aligning with the script's biographical scope and intriguing audiences with the promise of historical insight.
Weaknesses
The logline is somewhat generic and lacks specific hooks or emotional depth, potentially failing to convey the personal conflicts and high stakes that drive the narrative.
Suggested Rewrites
Detailed Scores
| Criterion | Score | Reason | Evidence |
|---|---|---|---|
| Hook | 8 | It piques interest with the idea of an 'untold story,' but lacks a unique angle to stand out from typical biopics. | "The script's hooky elements, like the 9/11 sequence in Scene 2, are not leveraged, making the logline feel less immediate." |
| Stakes | 8 | Implies high stakes in historical power, but could better articulate the personal and national risks involved. | "Stakes are evident in the script through events like the Iraq war decisions in Scene 30 and family impacts in Scene 34, but the logline generalizes this." |
| Brevity | 9 | Concise at 12 words, it efficiently conveys the main idea without being overly wordy. | "Aligns with the script's concise scenes, such as the quick transitions in Scene 3, maintaining brevity in storytelling." |
| Clarity | 9 | Clear in stating the subject and focus, but 'untold story' is a cliché that might not add substantial value or specificity. | "Script summary covers Cheney's life from Scene 1 (early years) to Scene 35 (later reflections), providing a comprehensive arc that the logline attempts to summarize." |
| Conflict | 8 | Conflict is inferred in the rise to power, but the logline doesn't explicitly mention obstacles, reducing its dramatic tension. | "Script depicts conflicts such as political infighting in Scene 9 and personal struggles in Scene 4, which are not directly referenced in the logline." |
| Protagonist goal | 8 | The goal of becoming powerful is stated, but it's broad and doesn't detail Cheney's personal motivations or steps, making it less engaging. | "Cheney's ambitions are shown in scenes like Scene 7 (moving to Brussels) and Scene 18 (negotiating VP role), but the logline doesn't highlight these specifics." |
| Factual alignment | 10 | Fully aligns with the script's portrayal of Cheney's ascent to the vice presidency and his influence. | "Covers key aspects from Scene 5 (early career) to Scene 21 (gaining control), accurately reflecting his path to power." |
Creative Executive's Take
Ranking fourth, logline_2 offers a balanced exploration of Cheney's life, accurately reflecting the script's mix of political intrigue and intimate family moments, such as his confrontations with Lynne and health crises, which are detailed in scenes spanning his career. Factual accuracy is maintained through the script's portrayal of events like the Unitary Executive Theory discussions and personal setbacks, but commercially, it falls short of being a standout hook due to its generic phrasing, resembling standard biopic summaries without the dramatic flair of competitors. Creatively, it could appeal to viewers seeking a nuanced character study, similar to 'The Queen,' by delving into the 'controversial' aspects, but its lack of a singular, attention-grabbing angle makes it less marketable in a crowded field, potentially limiting its ability to captivate casual audiences beyond dedicated history buffs.
Strengths
It balances political and personal elements, reflecting the script's mix of public actions and private life, which adds depth to Cheney's character.
Weaknesses
The logline is vague and lacks a strong hook or specific details, potentially failing to engage audiences by not highlighting key conflicts or stakes.
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Detailed Scores
| Criterion | Score | Reason | Evidence |
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| Hook | 7 | Mildly intriguing with the promise of exploration, but it lacks a punchy or unique element to captivate immediately. | "The script's hooky aspects, like the 9/11 urgency in Scene 24, are not utilized, making the logline feel generic." |
| Stakes | 7 | Stakes are hinted at through controversy, but they are not clearly defined, diminishing the sense of urgency or consequence. | "High stakes appear in the script, such as the Iraq war ramifications in Scene 30 and personal family stakes in Scene 34, which are not emphasized." |
| Brevity | 9 | Very concise at 8 words, it gets to the point quickly without excess. | "Echoes the script's efficient pacing, such as in Scene 2's montage, but could use the space for more detail." |
| Clarity | 8 | Generally clear in outlining the focus on political and personal aspects, but 'shaped the controversial Vice President' is somewhat broad and lacks precision. | "Script summary includes political maneuvers in Scene 9 (administrative changes) and personal moments in Scene 4 (family confrontation), but the logline doesn't specify these." |
| Conflict | 7 | Conflict is suggested in 'maneuvers' and 'controversial,' but it's not detailed, reducing the dramatic pull. | "Conflict is present in scenes like Scene 29 (debates over Iraq) and Scene 32 (post-war criticisms), but the logline doesn't capture this specificity." |
| Protagonist goal | 7 | The goal is implied through shaping events, but it's not explicitly stated, making Cheney's objectives feel underdeveloped. | "Cheney's goals are shown in scenes like Scene 18 (securing VP role) and Scene 26 (redefining executive power), but the logline abstracts this too much." |
| Factual alignment | 9 | It aligns with the script's content on political and personal shaping, though it could be more comprehensive. | "Factual elements include political moves in Scene 21 (power consolidation) and personal moments in Scene 6 (family calls), fitting the overall narrative." |
Creative Executive's Take
As the lowest-ranked selection, logline_4 is factually accurate in referencing Liz Cheney's Senate campaign and the family tensions over gay marriage, as depicted in scene 34 with her emotional struggles and Dick's influence, but it struggles with commercial appeal due to its narrow focus on a subplot rather than the core narrative. This logline creatively highlights familial conflict and political hypocrisy, which could resonate in niche markets like identity politics dramas, akin to 'The Family Stone,' but it risks alienating broader audiences by sidelining the larger Cheney saga, making it less versatile for marketing. While it accurately captures a poignant aspect of the script, its specificity limits its hook, positioning it as a weaker choice for wide release, better suited as a secondary angle in promotional materials rather than a primary logline.
Strengths
It highlights a specific, emotional subplot involving family dynamics, which adds a personal layer from the script.
Weaknesses
This logline narrowly focuses on a minor aspect (Liz's campaign in Scene 34), misrepresenting the script's primary focus on Dick Cheney and potentially confusing audiences about the central narrative.
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Detailed Scores
| Criterion | Score | Reason | Evidence |
|---|---|---|---|
| Hook | 6 | The topic of gay marriage and family drama could intrigue, but it's not as broadly appealing or timely as the script's core events. | "The script uses dramatic hooks like 9/11 in Scene 24, which are more engaging than the niche focus on Liz's campaign in Scene 34." |
| Stakes | 6 | Stakes are present in family and political conflicts, but they are low compared to the script's larger themes, like national security. | "In Scene 34, stakes involve family strain over Mary's sexuality, but this pales against events like the Iraq war in Scene 30 with massive casualties." |
| Brevity | 9 | Concise at 10 words, it efficiently states the key elements without unnecessary elaboration. | "Aligns with the script's brief scenes, like the quick cut in Scene 3, but brevity doesn't compensate for the lack of comprehensive coverage." |
| Clarity | 9 | Clear in specifying the subject (Liz Cheney's campaign and views), but it might mislead by shifting focus from Dick Cheney. | "Script summary addresses Liz's campaign in Scene 34, including her struggle with gay marriage views, but this is a small part compared to Dick's story." |
| Conflict | 7 | Conflict is evident in political battles and family tensions, but it's not central to the script, limiting its impact. | "Conflict appears in Scene 34 with Liz's campaign polls and family arguments, but the script emphasizes Dick's conflicts, such as in Scene 29 (war decisions)." |
| Protagonist goal | 5 | The logline centers on Liz, not the main protagonist Dick, so it poorly defines the primary character's goals from the script. | "Liz's goals are briefly shown in Scene 34 during her campaign, but the script's focus is on Dick's arc, such as in Scene 18 and 26, making this a weak fit." |
| Factual alignment | 7 | Factually correct for the depicted events, but it only covers a fraction of the script, reducing overall alignment. | "Accurate to Scene 34's portrayal of Liz's campaign and views on gay marriage, but ignores the majority of the script focused on Dick's life and career." |
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suspense Analysis
Executive Summary
Suspense is skillfully woven throughout "Vice," primarily through the strategic pacing of political maneuvering and the foreshadowing of significant historical events. The narrative masterfully builds anticipation for Cheney's ascent to power, the consequences of his decisions, and the unfolding of major crises like 9/11. While effective, the sheer density of plot points and rapid shifts can sometimes dilute its impact, demanding a more focused application in certain sequences.
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fear Analysis
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Fear is a potent force in "Vice," manifesting from personal anxieties (Lynne's fear of repeating her mother's life) to national terror (9/11) and the chilling implications of unchecked state power (torture, surveillance). The screenplay effectively uses fear to underscore the human cost of political decisions and the erosion of civil liberties. Its most impactful moments are those that depict the tangible consequences of fear, both on individuals and society.
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joy Analysis
Executive Summary
Joy in "Vice" is rare and often fleeting, appearing in moments of familial connection or ironic triumph. It serves primarily as a contrast to the overarching themes of ambition, power, and moral compromise. While the screenplay acknowledges moments of happiness, it intentionally keeps them understated, emphasizing the sacrifices made in the pursuit of power and the absence of genuine, lasting joy in Cheney's driven life.
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sadness Analysis
Executive Summary
Sadness permeates "Vice," manifesting as profound grief over loss (Edna's death), disillusionment with political processes, and the pervasive sense of moral decay. The screenplay effectively uses sadness to underscore the human cost of political decisions, the erosion of ethical standards, and the personal sacrifices made in the relentless pursuit of power. The most impactful moments of sadness are often tied to the consequences of actions, both personal and political.
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surprise Analysis
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Surprise is a crucial element in "Vice," employed through jarring tonal shifts, unexpected narrative devices, and shocking plot developments. From the abrupt introduction of 9/11 to the outlandish 'wigs on penises' metaphor and the narrator's violent death, surprise is used to keep the audience engaged, challenge expectations, and underscore the absurdity and ruthlessness of the political landscape. While generally effective, some surprises can feel overly theatrical or detached from the core narrative, requiring careful integration.
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empathy Analysis
Executive Summary
Empathy in "Vice" is a complex emotion, often evoked through moments of personal vulnerability amidst political maneuvering. The screenplay elicits empathy for Lynne's fear of domestic abuse, Mary's struggles with her identity and the political fallout, and even, at times, for Cheney himself when confronting his own mortality or familial concerns. However, the film deliberately challenges direct empathy for Cheney's political actions, often presenting them through a critical lens, thus creating a more nuanced emotional response.
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surprise Analysis
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Surprise is a key driver in "Vice," achieved through jarring tonal shifts, unexpected narrative devices, and shocking plot revelations. From the abrupt cut to 9/11 and the outlandish 'wigs on penises' metaphor to the narrator's violent death and Cheney's resolute, often ruthless, decisions, surprise is used to keep the audience engaged, challenge expectations, and highlight the absurdity and moral ambiguity of the political landscape. While effective in grabbing attention, some surprises can feel gratuitous if not carefully integrated thematically.
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empathy Analysis
Executive Summary
Empathy in "Vice" is often complex and deliberately challenged. While the screenplay effectively evokes empathy for characters facing personal struggles (Lynne's fear, Mary's identity crisis) and for the victims of political decisions (Iraqi civilians, soldiers), it intentionally complicates audience empathy for Dick Cheney himself. His actions are consistently framed critically, making direct emotional connection difficult, thus forcing a more intellectual and analytical engagement with his character rather than a purely sympathetic one.
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sadness Analysis
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Sadness is a pervasive undercurrent in "Vice," arising from personal loss (Edna's drowning), the disillusionment of political compromise, and the profound human cost of war. The screenplay effectively uses sadness to underscore the tragic consequences of ambition and the moral decay that can accompany the pursuit of power. The film's depiction of societal division and the erosion of ethical standards contributes to a deep sense of melancholy and sorrow, particularly in its latter half.
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surprise Analysis
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Surprise is a significant element in "Vice," strategically employed through jarring tonal shifts, unexpected narrative devices, and shocking plot developments. From the abrupt cut to 9/11 and the outlandish 'wigs on penises' metaphor to the narrator's violent death and Cheney's resolute decisions, surprise is used to maintain audience engagement, challenge expectations, and satirize the absurdity and ruthlessness of the political landscape. While often effective, some surprises can feel overly theatrical or detached, requiring careful thematic integration.
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empathy Analysis
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Empathy in "Vice" is deliberately complex. While strongly evoked for victims of political actions and personal struggles (Lynne's fear, Mary's identity), empathy for Dick Cheney himself is challenged. The screenplay critically frames his actions, preventing straightforward sympathy and prompting a more analytical engagement. This nuanced approach forces the audience to confront difficult ethical questions rather than simply connecting emotionally with Cheney.
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sadness Analysis
Executive Summary
Sadness pervades "Vice," stemming from personal loss, disillusionment with political compromise, and the human cost of war. The screenplay effectively uses sadness to underscore the tragic consequences of ambition and the moral decay that can accompany power. The film's portrayal of societal division and ethical erosion contributes to a pervasive melancholy and sorrow.
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surprise Analysis
Executive Summary
Surprise is a key element in "Vice," used through jarring tonal shifts, unexpected narrative devices, and shocking plot revelations. From the abrupt cut to 9/11 and the 'wigs on penises' metaphor to the narrator's death and Cheney's resolute decisions, surprise keeps the audience engaged, challenges expectations, and satirizes political absurdity. While effective, some surprises verge on gratuitous and require careful thematic integration.
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empathy Analysis
Executive Summary
Empathy in "Vice" is deliberately complex, effectively evoked for victims of political actions and personal struggles (Lynne's fear, Mary's identity). However, empathy for Dick Cheney himself is challenged. His actions are critically framed, preventing straightforward sympathy and prompting analytical engagement rather than pure emotional connection. This nuanced approach forces viewers to confront difficult ethical questions.
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