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Compelled to Read | Story Content |
Character Development
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Scene Elements |
Audience Engagement
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Technical Aspects |
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1 - Death in the Night
| PolishTransitionNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 6.5 |
7 |
7 | 5 |
6 |
1 | 2 | 5 | 4 | 2 | 5.5 | 7 | 4 | 4 |
6 | 6 | 7 | 8.5 | 6.5 |
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2 - The Senate Appointment
| KeepNegotiationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 6 / 6 |
7 |
7 | 4.5 |
6 |
1 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 3 | 4 |
6 | 6 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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3 - The Governor's Dilemma
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
8 | 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 6 | 7 |
8 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7.5 |
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4 - Family Dynamics and Political Decision-Making
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 7 |
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5 - A Visit to the Smith Home
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
5 | 8 |
8 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 8 | 6 |
7 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 |
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6 - The Surprise Appointment
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 6.5 / 6.5 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
3 | 6.5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7.5 | 8 | 6 |
7 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 7.5 | 6.5 |
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7 - Jefferson Smith's Acceptance Speech and Farewell
| PolishRitualNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.8 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 6.5 | 5.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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8 - Arrival in Washington D.C.
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 5 / 6.5 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
1 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 5.5 | 5 | 5 |
8 | 6.5 | 6.5 | 8 | 6 |
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9 - Capitol Dome and a Missing Jeff
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 5 | 6 | 5 |
6 | 6.5 | 7 | 8 | 6 |
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10 - Exploring Washington's Legacy
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
5 | 5 |
8 |
2 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 9 | 6 |
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11 - Unexpected Visitors
| KeepOrientationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
1 | 7 | 6 | 4 | 2 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 6 |
8 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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12 - Jefferson's Hotel Dilemma
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6 / 7 |
7 |
5 | 6.5 |
8 |
1 | 7 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 5 | 7 | 5 |
9 | 7 | 7.5 | 9 | 7.5 |
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13 - Apartment Antics and Political Turmoil
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 |
8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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14 - Jeff's Interview and McGann's Mishap
| Low on its ownMontageDesign and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | BrokenThe underlying story machine isn’t holding — worth looking at before polish. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
7 |
2 | 6 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 5 |
7 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 6.5 |
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15 - Jefferson Arrives in Washington
| PolishOrientationNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7 |
8 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 5 |
8 | 7 | 7.5 | 9 | 6.5 |
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16 - Jefferson's Swearing-In Ceremony
| KeepRitualAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
8 |
6 | 6.5 |
7 |
1 | 5 | 8 | 3 | 2 | 5 | 6.5 | 6 | 6 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6.5 |
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17 - Jefferson's Senate Swearing-In and Press Club Brawl
| PolishAftermathNo lens is broken, but Design, Execution and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
7 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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18 - The Confrontation
| PolishRelationship shiftNo lens is broken, but Read is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 5 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 |
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19 - Jefferson's Awkward Apology
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
8 |
6 | 7 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 6 |
8 | 7 | 7.5 | 9 | 7 |
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20 - An Eager Senator
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 7 |
8 |
2 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 6.5 | 6 | 6 |
8 | 6.5 | 6 | 8.5 | 6.5 |
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21 - Drafting the Liberty Camp Bill
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 6.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 6 |
8 |
6 | 8.5 | 8 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 8 |
8 | 7.5 | 8 | 9 | 7.5 |
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22 - Bridging the Divide
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 6.5 |
9 |
6.5 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4.5 | 6 | 8 |
9 | 8 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 |
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23 - The Introduction of the Willet Creek Bill
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 7.5 |
7 |
3 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 6.5 | 7 | 6 | 6 |
8 | 7.5 | 6.5 | 9 | 7 |
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24 - The National Boys' Camp Proposal
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 9
| 8.5 / 8 |
8 |
8 | 6.5 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
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25 - Senator Smith Prepares for an Event
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 6 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 5 | 6 | 6 |
8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
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26 - Uncomfortable Confessions
| PolishRelationship shiftNo lens is broken, but Design and Read are soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 5 / 7 |
7 |
4 | 7 |
8 |
5 | 8 | 2 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 3 | 7 | 7 |
9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 6 |
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27 - A Mother's Fear
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 7 / 7.5 |
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5 | 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 8 | 7 |
9 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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28 - Revealing the Dam Plan
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 9 / 8.5 |
8 |
8 | 7 |
8 |
7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 |
9 | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 7.5 |
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29 - Departure and Deliberation
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 4 |
7 |
3 | 5 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 4 | 6 |
6 | 7 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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30 - The Deal
| KeepPursuitAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9 / 9
| 9 / 8.5 |
8 |
8 | 6 |
9 |
6 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 9 |
8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 7.5 |
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31 - Paine's Accusation
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
8.2 |
9.5 / 9
| 9 / 8.5 |
9 |
9 | 7 |
8 |
7.5 | 7.5 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 9.5 | 9.5 | 9 | 9 |
9 | 9 | 8.5 | 9 | 8.5 |
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32 - The Accusation and Defense
| KeepInvestigationAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 6.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
6 | 4.5 |
7 |
3 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 |
6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 5.5 |
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33 - Jefferson's Hearing
| KeepAftermathAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.8 |
9 / 8.5
| 8.5 / 8 |
7 |
7 | 5.5 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 6.5 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | 8 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 |
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34 - Paine's Desperate Plea
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.8 |
9 / 9
| 9 / 8.5 |
8 |
8 | 8 |
9 |
7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 |
9 | 8.5 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 |
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35 - A Call to Action
| KeepRelationship shiftAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.5 |
9 / 9
| 8.5 / 8 |
8 |
8 | 6.5 |
8 |
8 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8.5 | 8.5 | 6 | 9 |
8 | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
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36 - Confrontation in the Senate Chamber
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 8.5 / 8 |
7 |
8 | 6 |
7 |
5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 7 | 7 |
7 | 7.5 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 |
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37 - Senate Floor Showdown: Smith Defies Expulsion
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.8 |
9 / 9
| 8.5 / 8.5 |
8 |
8 | 6.5 |
8 |
7 | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9.5 | 9 | 7 | 8 |
8 | 8.5 | 8 | 8.5 | 8 |
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38 - Tumultuous Senate Hearing: Jefferson Defies Accusations
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
8.5 / 8.5
| 9 / 8.5 |
8 |
8 | 7 |
8 |
6 | 7.5 | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 |
8 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | 8 |
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39 - The Filibuster Begins
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 8.5 / 8 |
8 |
8 | 6 |
7 |
4 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 |
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40 - Media Manipulation
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
8.5 / 8
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 5.5 |
6 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 7 | 7.5 | 6.5 |
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41 - Tensions Rise Amid Filibuster
| PolishDeliveryNo lens is broken, but Design is soft — this reads as a polish pass. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
6.5 |
7.5 / 7
| 8 / 7.5 |
7 |
7 | 6 |
6 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6.5 | 6 | 7 |
7 | 7 | 6 | 7.5 | 6 |
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42 - Jefferson's Filibuster: A Fight for Democracy
| KeepDeliveryAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 6.5 / 7 |
7 |
6 | 4 |
6 |
2 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 3 | 6 |
7 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 6 |
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43 - Suppression and Resistance
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 7.5 / 7.5 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
7 |
6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 |
6 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 |
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44 - Protest Against Jeff Smith's Filibuster
| KeepMontageAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
9 / 8.5
| 8 / 8 |
7 |
7 | 7 |
4 |
1 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8.5 | 8 | 5 | 7 |
3 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 6 |
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45 - The Stop Smith Campaign Turns Violent
| KeepMontageAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
6.5 |
7 / 7.5
| 8.5 / 8.5 |
8 |
7 | 7.5 |
6 |
5 | 4 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 |
5 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 6 |
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46 - Jefferson's Collapse and Paine's Desperation
| KeepContestAll three lenses are solid — worth protecting as it stands. | SolidThe story machine is built and mostly working. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 9 / 8.5 |
8 |
7 | 7 |
8 |
8.5 | 8.5 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 |
8 | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
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47 - Triumphant Vindication
| Low on its ownAftermathExecution and Read are broken — this reads as a rebuild before polish. | SoftThe structure works but is leaking power in places. |
7.2 |
9 / 8.5
| 2 / 7 |
8 |
7 | 6.5 |
7 |
7 | 7 | 8 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 6 | 8 |
7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 |
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