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Jonathan

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Mystery all the time......

Sarasota, FL
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Mystery is my specialty, Drama is critical.
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Some of my Scripts

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At the Mount of Greylock

When his devout mother reveals she granted absolution to a “dying” priest who confessed to a local girl’s death, a Boston man haunted by broken childhood memories discovers the cleric is alive and hunts him down, forcing a truth that could destroy his family.

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When his devout mother reveals she granted absolution to a “dying” priest who confessed to a local girl’s death, a Boston man haunted by broken childhood memories discovers the cleric is alive and hunts him down, forcing a truth that could destroy his family.

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UNIQUE SELLING POINT

An intimate New England cold case refracted through Catholic iconography and dream logic, prioritizing a family’s moral reckoning over procedure and delivering a late victim-identity reversal that reframes the entire pursuit.

STANDOUT FEATURES

  • Unique Hook: The intertwining of a personal family drama with a cold case mystery involving a missing girl.
  • Major Twist: The revelation that Father Dominic, a trusted figure, is involved in the dark past of the characters, including the death of Sara Winters.
  • Distinctive Setting: The contrast between the idyllic New England landscape and the dark themes of trauma and abuse.

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Two Islands Apart

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STANDOUT FEATURES

  • Unique Hook: The story revolves around a young man's fight against a corrupt system while trying to maintain his family's honor.
  • Plot Twist: The revelation that the true culprit is someone close to John, adding layers of betrayal and personal conflict.
  • Distinctive Setting: The small-town Midwest backdrop provides a relatable yet tense atmosphere for the unfolding drama.

Two Islands Apart

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