David Goldstein

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Drama Coming-of-age Psychological Thriller Romance Teen

Becoming Ben

When a perfectionist high-school swimmer's repressed childhood abuse collides with a crush on his favorite teacher, the ensuing humiliation and self-harm force him and the adults around him to confront shame, boundaries and the slow, hard work of healing.

Drama Coming-of-age Psychological Thriller

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When a perfectionist high-school swimmer's repressed childhood abuse collides with a crush on his favorite teacher, the ensuing humiliation and self-harm force him and the adults around him to confront shame, boundaries and the slow, hard work of healing.

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UNIQUE SELLING POINT

This script offers a rare, psychologically nuanced portrait of adolescent male sexuality and trauma that avoids sensationalism while maintaining dramatic tension. Its authentic depiction of how educational systems handle student mental health crises, combined with its non-judgmental approach to all characters (including well-meaning but limited adults), sets it apart from typical coming-of-age or trauma narratives. The script's clinical accuracy, informed by mental health professionals, gives it both educational value and emotional credibility.

STANDOUT FEATURES

• Unique Hook: The exploration of a high-achieving student's internal collapse and the impact of trauma on mental health.
• Character Development: Ben's journey from despair to resilience, showcasing his growth and healing process.
• Emotional Depth: The screenplay tackles heavy themes such as abuse, identity, and suicide with sensitivity and authenticity.