Trumbo
Executive Summary
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Overview
Genres: Drama, Historical, Biography, Crime, Political, Family
Setting: 1947-1970, Primarily Los Angeles, California, with scenes in Washington D.C. and various Hollywood locations
Overview: Trumbo follows the life of Dalton Trumbo, a successful Hollywood screenwriter, as he navigates the tumultuous landscape of the 1940s and 1950s during the Hollywood blacklist era. The story begins with Trumbo's comfortable life, showcasing his talent and family life, but quickly shifts to the challenges he faces when he is blacklisted for his political beliefs. As he grapples with the repercussions of his convictions, including imprisonment and financial struggles, Trumbo's resilience is tested. Throughout the narrative, he fights for artistic freedom while maintaining his family relationships, ultimately leading to a moment of recognition and redemption in the industry.
Themes: Artistic Freedom, Political Persecution, Family Dynamics, Social Justice, Personal Sacrifice
Conflict and Stakes: Dalton Trumbo's struggle against the Hollywood blacklist and the societal repercussions of his political beliefs, with his family's well-being and his career at stake.
Overall Mood: Reflective and tense, with moments of humor and warmth amidst the struggles.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Introspective and contemplative as Trumbo reflects on his life and aspirations while writing.
- Scene 3: Tense and confrontational during the argument between Trumbo and Wood, highlighting the stakes of the writers' strike.
- Scene 12: Somber and reflective as Trumbo faces the reality of his imprisonment and its impact on his family.
- Scene 30: Triumphant and nostalgic during the premiere of 'Spartacus,' celebrating the culmination of Trumbo's struggles.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The story of a successful screenwriter who must navigate the treacherous waters of political persecution while trying to provide for his family.
- Major Twist: The revelation of Dalton Trumbo's true identity as the writer behind the pseudonym 'Robert Rich' and the implications of this on his career.
- Distinctive Setting: The contrast between the glamorous Hollywood lifestyle and the harsh realities of the blacklist era, showcasing both the industry and personal struggles.
- Innovative Ideas: The screenplay blends biographical elements with a critique of political repression, making it both informative and engaging.
- Unique Characters: A diverse cast of characters, each representing different facets of Hollywood during the blacklist, from supportive friends to antagonistic figures.
Comparable Scripts:
- Good Night, and Good Luck
- The Front
- The Ides of March
- The Crucible
- Trumbo (2015)
- The Social Network
- The King's Speech
- Spotlight
- The Post
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a strong emphasis on sharp, witty dialogue and complex character dynamics, often exploring themes of power, morality, and political intrigue. The writing style is characterized by a blend of humor and drama, creating engaging narratives that delve into interpersonal conflicts and societal issues.
Style Similarities:
- Aaron Sorkin
- Tony Kushner
- Quentin Tarantino
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for 'Trumbo' effectively captures the tumultuous life of Dalton Trumbo, showcasing his struggles against the Hollywood blacklist while maintaining a strong focus on character development and thematic depth. The narrative is engaging, with a well-paced structure that balances drama and humor. However, there are areas for improvement, particularly in tightening certain scenes and enhancing character arcs for supporting roles.
USP: The screenplay's unique selling proposition lies in its detailed portrayal of Dalton Trumbo's life, blending historical accuracy with emotional depth. It stands out for its sharp dialogue, strong character arcs, and the exploration of themes like integrity, resilience, and the cost of standing up for one's beliefs.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$20-30 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, particularly those interested in historical dramas, political themes, and biographical stories.
Marketability: The screenplay's historical context and relevance to contemporary issues of freedom of speech and artistic integrity can attract a broad audience and generate significant interest.
The film's exploration of the Hollywood blacklist and its impact on personal lives resonates with audiences interested in social justice and historical narratives.
The compelling character arcs and emotional depth provide a strong foundation for audience engagement, though it may appeal more to niche audiences.
Profit Potential: High, due to its potential for critical acclaim, award nominations, and a strong appeal to adult audiences interested in historical and political themes.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a blend of sharp dialogue, introspective narration, and a keen awareness of historical and political contexts. This voice manifests through poetic descriptions, witty banter, and a focus on the internal struggles of characters, particularly Dalton Trumbo. The dialogue often balances humor with serious themes, creating a rich tapestry that captures the complexities of the human experience during a tumultuous era.
Best representation: Scene 4 - A Splash of Controversy and a Touch of Affection. This scene is the best representation because it encapsulates the writer's unique voice through its blend of historical context, emotional intensity, and political relevance. The introspective narration and sharp dialogue highlight Trumbo's internal struggles while also addressing broader societal issues, showcasing the writer's ability to weave personal and political narratives seamlessly.
Memorable Lines:
- Edward G. Robinson: What do you want? What we all want. To not die young, poor... or alone. (Scene 1)
- DALTON TRUMBO: You believe this Committee has the right to compel testimony, indict opinion -- criminalize thought -- but that right does not exist and the day it does, God help us all. (Scene 13)
- DALTON TRUMBO: The radical may fight with the purity of Jesus... but the rich guy wins with the cunning of Satan. (Scene 12)
- HEDDA HOPPER: Never, ever, ever, ever, EVER AGAIN! (Scene 15)
- John Wayne: And when we talk about America I’m talking about freedom! The kinda freedom we just fought a world war to save! You wanna be a Commie, go be a Commie... but some friends of mine in Washington think you got some questions to answer! (Scene 6)
Characters
Dalton Trumbo:A talented screenwriter who becomes a victim of the Hollywood blacklist, struggling to maintain his career and family life.
Cleo Trumbo:Dalton's supportive wife who navigates the challenges of their family's changing dynamics due to Dalton's political struggles.
Edward G. Robinson:A fellow actor and friend of Trumbo who grapples with his own choices during the blacklist era.
Arlen Hird:A fellow writer and friend of Trumbo who shares his frustrations about the industry and the political climate.
Kirk Douglas:A prominent actor who ultimately supports Trumbo by crediting him for his work on 'Spartacus.'
Hedda Hopper:A powerful gossip columnist who plays a significant role in the political landscape of Hollywood during the blacklist.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Dawn of Aspirations | Reflective, Introspective, Nostalgic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - A Comedic Misfire | Tense, Humorous, Sarcastic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Tensions Under the Stars | Tense, Confrontational, Sarcastic, Jovial | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - The Iron Curtain Unveiled | Serious, Tense, Informative | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
5 - A Splash of Controversy and a Touch of Affection | Serious, Reflective, Informative | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Clash of Ideals | Serious, Political, Tense | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Confrontation in the Lobby | Tense, Confrontational, Defiant, Sarcastic | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - Navigating Hollywood's Shadows | Tense, Serious, Confrontational | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
9 - A Day of Joy Interrupted | Humorous, Nostalgic, Light-hearted | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - The Hollywood Red Scare: A Political Showdown | Serious, Tense, Informative | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Defiance at the Lazy-T Ranch | Defiant, Serious, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - Splashing Innocence and Philosophical Tension | Defiant, Reflective, Generous | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Defiance in the Caucus Room | Defiant, Confrontational, Political | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
14 - Laughter and Shadows | Defiant, Philosophical, Serious, Humorous | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
15 - Tensions in Tinseltown | Intense, Confrontational, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Sacrifice and Solidarity | Serious, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - Verdict and Resilience | Defiant, Reflective, Sarcastic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Toast of Tension | Serious, Reflective, Tense | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - The Price of a Name | Serious, Sarcastic, Humorous | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Legislation and Loss | Tense, Serious, Shocking | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - Farewell to Freedom | Somber, Reflective, Resigned | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - Revelations in the Night | Revealing, Reflective, Light-hearted | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 2 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - Endurance in the Shadows | Resilience, Struggle, Defiance, Suffering | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - Tension in the Supply Room | Tense, Defiant, Resigned | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - Reflections of Love and Imprisonment | Reflective, Resigned, Hopeful | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Echoes of Tension | Serious, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - Betrayal in the Capitol | Tense, Serious, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - Tensions in the Alliance | Tense, Emotional, Serious, Contentious, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Navigating Tensions in Hollywood | Tense, Reflective, Defiant | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Negotiation Tensions | Tense, Confrontational, Sarcastic | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - Balancing Act | Tense, Reflective, Warm | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
32 - Vandalism and Vigilance | Tense, Emotional, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - A Family Business in the Shadows | Serious, Instructional, Reflective | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
34 - Tensions at Home | Tense, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - Script Showdown at King Brothers | Tense, Confrontational, Sarcastic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - Creative Struggles in the Night | Reflective, Introspective, Resentful | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - Oscar Night Dilemma | Tense, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
38 - A Desperate Plea | Tense, Desperate, Hopeful | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - Chaos in the Kitchen | Tense, Emotional, Defiant | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - Clash of Ideals | Intense, Confrontational, Reflective | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
41 - A Birthday Divided | Tense, Emotional, Intense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
42 - Fighting Shadows | Tense, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
43 - Confronting the Past | Intense, Emotional, Reflective | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
44 - Betrayal at Romanoff's | Tense, Confrontational, Revealing | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
45 - Clash of Priorities | Tense, Confrontational, Defiant | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
46 - Confrontation in the Dark | Tension, Emotional, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
47 - Confrontations and Commitments | Tense, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
48 - The Shadow of Robert Rich | Tense, Dramatic, Reflective, Playful | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
49 - A Script for Spartacus | Serious, Reflective, Intense | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
50 - Confrontation at Perino's | Tense, Confrontational, Serious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
51 - A Visit from Otto Preminger | Tense, Humorous, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
52 - Christmas Critique | Tense, Amused, Sanguine, Humorous | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
53 - Hollywood Tensions | Tense, Serious, Humorous | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8.5 | |
54 - Legal Shadows and Oscar Dreams | Tense, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
55 - Defiance in the Spotlight | Serious, Reflective, Informative | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
56 - The Reckoning of Dalton Trumbo | Tense, Reflective, Humorous | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
57 - Defiance in the Face of Adversity | Tense, Defiant, Serious | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
58 - Triumph and Tension at the 'Spartacus' Premiere | Emotional, Reflective, Hopeful | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
59 - A Call for Healing: Dalton Trumbo's Gala Speech | Reflective, Compassionate, Contemplative | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
60 - A New Dawn at MGM | Reflective, Respectful, Hopeful | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 3 | 8 | 4 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 |
Scene 1 - Dawn of Aspirations
___________
Written by
John McNamara
Based on the Biography by
Bruce Cook
TRUMBO PRODUCTIONS, LLC
PUBLISHED DRAFT
TRUMBO
A BLACK SCREEN
As white words FADE UP in silence --
Later, you might ask, “Wait, that really happened?”
A beat, then --
It really happened.
A longer beat, then --
And it mostly happened like this...
CUT TO:
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - 1947 - DAWN
Alone in a vast, serrated mountain range a hundred miles
north of Los Angeles, it looks from the outside like a rustic
sprawl. The day is a gold sliver in a navy sky.
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - BATHROOM - DAWN
Writer DALTON TRUMBO, 41, debonair, heartfelt and combative,
is naked in a tub, his copyholder on a wood plank as the
steam rises.
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - TRUMBO’S STUDY - DAWN
Like the whole home, beautifully appointed. Trumbo, kindled
cigarette in its holder, attacks the keys of a typewriter on
his desk, the fastest two-fingered typist ever as we --
QUICKLY CUT AROUND HIS OFFICE,
Taking in:
- The American Booksellers National Book Award for his novel,
Johnny Got His Gun.
- The poster for his movie, Thirty Seconds Over Tokyo.
- His Oscar nomination for the screenplay of Kitty Foyle.
TIGHT ON TRUMBO’S TYPEWRITER
As the inky letters CHOP movie dialogue across the white
paper, Trumbo writing like a boxer working a speed bag --
MANNY: What do you want?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 2.
CONTINUED:
MORE QUICK POPS - TO SHELVES AND TABLETOPS
Thick with framed photos of:
- Trumbo with KATHARINE HEPBURN at a United Refugee Committee
dinner.
- Trumbo as a World War II correspondent in his dress
uniform, boarding a plane.
- Trumbo in muddy fatigues, among battered SOLDIERS on a
battle-scarred beach in the South Pacific.
BACK TO A TIGHT CLOSE-UP OF TRUMBO’S WRITING
Words racing across the page:
What we all want.
ATOP HIS DESK - FRAMED FAMILY PICTURES
In them, WE SEE both Trumbo’s furious pecking reflected on
glass, animatedly overlaying stills under glass of:
- Trumbo’s wife Cleo in a stunning portrait.
- Trumbo and Cleo with their three children, blowing out
Niki’s eighth birthday cake.
BACK TO TRUMBO AT THE TYPEWRITER
Lemony morning light now paints the windows. Trumbo writes:
To not die young, poor...
And now we HEAR --
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (PRE-LAP)
What do you want? What we all
want. To not die young, poor...
-- as the final words of Trumbo’s speech strike paper --
...or alone.
-- Trumbo SLAPS the return and in a WHITE BLUR we’re now --
Ratings
Scene 2 - A Comedic Misfire
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
...or alone.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 3.
CONTINUED:
EDWARD G. ROBINSON -- a charismatic, stocky man of 53, both
assertive and refined -- plays “MANNY,” stepping from a
sedan, moving toward a SUPPORTING PLAYER as “ROCCO,” on his
knees, bloody lip, torn jacket.
“ROCCO”
Manny, these guys... I don’t give
’em what they’re after, they’ll
kill me.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON/“MANNY”
Hold it, Rocco.
“Manny” takes out his revolver -- and aims it at “Rocco,” who
freezes as he stands.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON/“MANNY” (CONT’D)
If we don’t fight these guys,
sure, maybe you --
As “Manny” gestures with the gun, its cylinder dislodges from
the barrel -- and several bullets FLY out and comically
CLATTER to the stage floor at Robinson’s feet.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON/“MANNY” (CONT’D)
Shit.
The director is out of his chair and on his feet -- SAM WOOD,
early 60s, sharp, authoritative.
SAM WOOD
Cut! Goin’ again, Eddie.
A BELL sounds. The CREW rustles in the shadows.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Sorry, Sam. Sorry, everybody. Of
course, the one day the author’s
among us.
Trumbo sits nearby, in a bespoke suit, calmly smoking.
Robinson settles in a canvas chair with his name on the back.
SAM WOOD
(as he glides past to talk
to the CAMERAMAN)
“Among us.” Sure ain’t one of us.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
(keeping it light)
What’s the brilliant line, Trumbo?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 4.
CONTINUED: (2)
DALTON TRUMBO
“If we don’t fight these guys,
sure, maybe you get that long,
happy life we all want.”
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Then what is it you’ve got me
fighting for again?
DALTON TRUMBO
“Peace on Earth, good will toward
men.”
Nearby, Wood SNORTS. Yeah, right.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
You can’t do that, this is America.
DALTON TRUMBO
How about sex and money?
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
There you go, two things we all
love. None of your little sermons
on citizenship.
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Scene 3 - Tensions Under the Stars
A flat half-acre dominated by a massive pool that GLOWS with
a hundred floating candles. A PARTY where:
- MEN are in black tie, WOMEN in gowns, everyone smokes,
everyone drinks. Different time, different world.
- There’s MUSIC from a live BIG BAND.
VOICES overlap and compete as we snag snippets:
PARTYGOER 1
“...I don’t love it but Zanuck
does...”
PARTYGOER 2
“...make the Indians the good guys,
that’s the twist...”
PARTYGOER 3
“Now the actors want to go on
strike. Who’s next? Lassie?”
CLEO TRUMBO, 30s, hovers at the edge of a GROUP OF WOMEN
about her age.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 5.
CONTINUED:
She’s beautiful, observant, sensitive, often silent, as she
is here, excusing herself with a warm smile to look for
someone at the party, passing by --
A GROUP OF MEN. Louder, more boisterous. Within that group,
Edward G. Robinson.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
(in mid-sentence)
...still doing reshoots, what else?
Luckily, Mayer lined up the A Team,
Sam Wood to shoot, Dalton Trumbo
for rewrites, so, fingers
crossed...
From across the lawn, TWO MALE VOICES suddenly RISE, so we
hear before we see:
SAM WOOD (O.S.)
...Jesus, Trumbo, a goddamn six-
month strike, for what?
DALTON TRUMBO (O.S.)
(dryly)
Well, I think... money.
Cleo Trumbo turns to that second VOICE with minor dread and
as she does, she and Robinson clock one another with the same
thought: Jesus, here we go...
As they both zero in on:
Director Sam Wood, more than a little drunk.
SAM WOOD
Laugh it up. I had no crew! I
couldn’t work --
(shouting at Trumbo)
-- you wouldn’t work, God forbid
you cross a picket line. For set
builders. What do set builders
have to do with writing?
DALTON TRUMBO
What writers write, builders build.
What they build, you film. You
make all the money you possibly
can, so do I, why shouldn’t they?
And why can’t we help them? In the
long run, it’s better for everyone -
-
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 6.
CONTINUED: (2)
SAM WOOD
-- said the Swimming Pool Soviet.
DALTON TRUMBO
(calmly)
Sam. You won. The strike’s over,
the union’s history. We’ve all
gone back to being good little
worker bees making sweet movie
honey and you --
(now, just a little sharp)
-- might just try being a gracious
winner.
That last comes with a gentle poke into Wood’s lapel from
Trumbo’s fingers, which hold his cigarette. Wood does not
appreciate the jab or the accompanying smoke in his face.
SAM WOOD
It’s never over with you people --
strike, after strike, after strike!
Wood is SHOUTING now. Among the Guests: HEADS turn... SMILES
falter... CONVERSATIONS stop.
SAM WOOD (CONT’D)
Y’know what? I’m going on strike --
against people WHO GO ON STRIKE!
DALTON TRUMBO
And I won’t cross your picket line,
either.
Wood might just shove Trumbo now, he’s so angry, but --
-- suddenly, Robinson is there to get Wood’s arm in a
friendly grasp.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
(with jovial aplomb)
Sam, Sam, Sam, we’ve got to talk
about those scenes tomorrow,
disaster, who the hell wrote that
crap?
(a wink at Trumbo, steering
Wood away)
But first, may I have this
dance...?
At the same time, Cleo takes her husband’s hand and moves him
in the opposite direction.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 7.
CONTINUED: (3)
CLEO
Having fun?
DALTON TRUMBO
Eternally.
They kiss and move to the bar, passing --
-- a tall, broad MAN of 39 who eyes Trumbo the way a western
sheriff would a gunfighter. We don’t know it yet, but:
This is JOHN WAYNE.
And as his eyes follow the Trumbos, he meets the gaze of a
WOMAN. Late middle years, trim, striking, grand yet folksy,
always in a stylish hat. Wayne and she share a moment of
silent understanding. We don’t know it yet, but:
This is HEDDA HOPPER.
CUT TO:
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Scene 4 - The Iron Curtain Unveiled
UP ON THE MOVIE SCREEN - A NEWSREEL
Actual black & white documentary footage of a waving WINSTON
CHURCHILL, grimly addressing an assembly:
WINSTON CHURCHILL (ON SCREEN)
Nobody knows what Soviet Russia
intends to do. An Iron Curtain has
descended across the continent.
The newsreel CUTS TO a cartoon map of Europe and Asia as an
animated red Iron Curtain drops, enclosing Soviet Russia.
NEWSREEL NARRATOR
The front line in a new kind of
war. A Cold War!
SHOTS of Russian military might: ARMIES march, FIGHTERS
launch, TANKS roll.
NEWSREEL NARRATOR (CONT’D)
The enemy -- Communists!
BACK TO the cartoon map as the Iron Curtain BECOMES a series
of red tentacles --
NEWSREEL NARRATOR (CONT’D)
Their goal -- world domination!
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 8.
CONTINUED:
-- and those tentacles slither across Europe and Asia,
heading for the United States.
REVERSE TO REVEAL - THE MOVIE AUDIENCE
MEN in ties, WOMEN in dresses, KIDS in their Sunday best.
And among them WE FIND Dalton Trumbo with his family:
daughter NIKI, 8, son CHRIS, 6, Cleo, and in her lap, their
youngest, MITZI, 2, all munching and sipping movie treats,
watching --
THE NEWSREEL
As it CUTS TO A SHOT OF the Hollywood sign --
NEWSREEL NARRATOR (CONT’D)
Dateline: Hollywood. The offices
of former film starlet, now top
columnist, Hedda Hopper.
-- then DISSOLVES TO A SHOT of a newspaper column under the
aerodynamically lettered byline, HEDDA HOPPER’S HOLLYWOOD.
Next to the text, Hedda Hopper. As she begins to speak from
inside her column:
HEDDA HOPPER (ON SCREEN)
(to camera)
Greetings from our film capital,
where all is sun and fun. Or is
it?
CUT TO A WIDE SHOT (ARCHIVAL) -- OF WELL-KNOWN MOVIE FOLK.
Grouped together a bit awkwardly in bright midday sun:
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.) (CONT’D)
See the famous faces here? Danny
Kaye, Humphrey Bogart, his dishy
bride, Lauren Bacall, their good
friend, film director John Huston,
and many others...
CLOSE-UPS (ARCHIVAL) of these FAMOUS FACES, plus a few LESS
WELL-KNOWN.
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.) (CONT’D)
...all of whom have declared
solidarity with film crews
picketing for higher wages. In
walk-outs that quickly turned
violent.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 9.
CONTINUED: (2)
NEW SHOTS (ARCHIVAL) - OF PEACEFUL STRIKES OUTSIDE FILM
STUDIOS that indeed turn violent: POLICE CLUB THE STRIKERS,
ATTACK DOGS MAUL, FIRE HOSES SPRAY --
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.) (CONT’D)
Because these strikes were in fact
the work of dangerous radicals.
A NEW CLOSE-UP (TO BE SHOT) -- SOMEONE standing on an apple
box, addressing a peaceful line of studio PICKETERS:
It’s Dalton Trumbo, his black & white face 40 feet high:
DALTON TRUMBO (ON SCREEN)
...this is what angers and
frightens the studios!
DOWN IN THE THEATRE
The Trumbo family is silently stunned. Trumbo’s own jaw
slackens just a bit at the surreal sight of himself up on
screen, then he quickly regains his composure. But his
oldest child can’t help herself --
NIKI
Dad, is that you?
He nods curtly, pats her arm and the tiny, color, real Trumbo
down here watches:
THE ENORMOUS BLACK & WHITE FACE OF TRUMBO - UP ON SCREEN
Delivering this searing union rallying cry to the assembled,
among whom we glimpse an APPLAUDING Edward G. Robinson:
DALTON TRUMBO (ON SCREEN)
We’ve discovered where our true
power lies! Builders, cameramen,
painters, drivers, writers, actors,
directors! We are a single,
indivisible brotherhood of workers.
Bargain with a few of us, you
bargain with all of us! Threaten
one, you threaten us all and it’s
war! We are many but from this day
forward -- we are one!
The Picketers and Movie Stars UP ON SCREEN begin to CHEER
Trumbo as --
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.)
This is writer Dalton Trumbo. Who
is...
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 10.
CONTINUED: (3)
A new CLOSE-UP of Hedda Hopper in her office:
HEDDA HOPPER (ON SCREEN)
...like many of those strikers --
and their supporters -- a
registered Communist.
BACK TO TRUMBO AND NIKI
As daughter looks at father, surprised -- is that true?
Trumbo doesn’t meet her questioning gaze, just smokes and
stoically takes in:
HEDDA HOPPER - UP ON SCREEN
Dwarfing him:
HEDDA HOPPER (ON SCREEN)
Which is why we must know: Who
exactly was behind that walk-out...
and why?
The scene now CUTS TO various CONGRESSMEN, INVESTIGATORS and
AIDES mounting the stairs of the U.S. Capitol.
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.) (CONT’D)
Our elected leaders will find out.
The CAMERA SINGLES OUT a bald, fifty-ish New Jerseyite --
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.) (CONT’D)
Congressman J. Parnell Thomas and
his House Un-American Activities
Committee.
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS (ON SCREEN)
Communism is not some faraway
threat; its most dangerous agents
are here, controlling the airwaves
and movie screens, taking over its
employees and their unions. They
need to be identified as the
enemies they are.
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Scene 5 - A Splash of Controversy and a Touch of Affection
The five Trumbos stream out with the audience. When
suddenly --
A YOUNG FATHER WITH HIS KIDS
Hey, that you in the newsreel...?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 11.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
It was, yes --
The Father FLINGS Coke into Trumbo’s face, SPLATTERING him --
YOUNG FATHER
Traitor --
-- terrifying Cleo and the kids before taking off.
DALTON TRUMBO
(dripping, calm)
No harm done, everybody okay?
CUT TO:
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - CORRAL - DAY
Mountain, meadow and sky dwarf this fine spread. Trumbo
walks along the fence while Niki rides a horse next to him.
NIKI
So, are you a Communist?
DALTON TRUMBO
I am.
NIKI
Is it against the law?
DALTON TRUMBO
It is not.
NIKI
That lady with the big hat said
you’re a “dangerous radical.” Are
you?
DALTON TRUMBO
Radical, maybe. Dangerous, only to
men who fling Cokes.
NIKI
You don’t want to overthrow the
government?
DALTON TRUMBO
No, we have a good government. But
anything good can be better, don’t
you think?
NIKI
Is Mom a Communist?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 12.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
No.
NIKI
Am I?
DALTON TRUMBO
Let’s give you the official test.
Mom packs your favorite lunch...
NIKI
Salami.
DALTON TRUMBO
...and you see someone at school
with no lunch -- what do you do?
NIKI
Share?
DALTON TRUMBO
You don’t tell them to get a job?
NIKI
(aware she’s being teased)
No.
DALTON TRUMBO
Offer a loan at six percent?
NIKI
Dad.
DALTON TRUMBO
Then just ignore them.
NIKI
No.
He studies his oldest daughter with great affection.
DALTON TRUMBO
Well, well. You little Commie.
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Scene 6 - Clash of Ideals
Elegant, tasteful, its walls glowing colorfully with: Six
spotlit French Impressionist paintings. Seated under a
Renoir, Trumbo is debating with Robinson and a small
gathering of DIRECTORS, PRODUCERS, ACTORS and WRITERS.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 13.
CONTINUED:
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Trumbo, as usual, you only make
sense to you. Let ’em call you a
Communist, me a Democrat -- both
legitimate parties, yours is just
meaner and duller but nothing
illegal about any of it.
DALTON TRUMBO
Yet.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Hunter, tell your friend to dial
down the paranoia and have a drink.
This to screenwriter IAN McLELLAN HUNTER, 32, quick mind, sad
eyes, sharp wit, always puffing on a pipe:
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
I don’t think he’s being paranoid
enough.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Not you, too.
Trumbo pulls several booklets of mimeoed paper from a valise.
DALTON TRUMBO
I’ve drawn up a little pamphlet.
(passing them out)
Subject: “Congress Unaware of
Little Thing Called First
Amendment.”
ARLEN HIRD (O.S.)
They’re aware...
Everyone turns to the man saying:
ARLEN HIRD (CONT’D)
...they just don’t give a shit.
ARLEN HIRD is 40s, caustic, dyspeptic; the BUTLER offering
him a canape, which he waves off --
ARLEN HIRD (CONT’D)
All they care about is this nice,
new war of theirs -- these guys
love war -- and this is a great
one, scary, vague and expensive.
Anybody for it’s a hero, anybody
against it’s a traitor.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 14.
CONTINUED: (2)
DALTON TRUMBO
And anybody who thinks it’s about
movies is an idiot. Which is why
I’m going to go have a chat with
the other side.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
You don’t mean the Alliance.
DALTON TRUMBO
I do.
A CHORUS of disbelieving MOANS and startled LAUGHS.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Are you out of your mind -- ?
DALTON TRUMBO
They’re actors, writers, directors,
just like us --
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
They’re Nazis, they’re just too
cheap to buy the uniforms --
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
They invited Congress out here --
DALTON TRUMBO
(to the room at large)
And are they all Sam Wood and Hedda
Hopper? Let’s not demonize people
we don’t really know.
ARLEN HIRD
Go for it. Be fun. ’Cause ya know
who you’re gonna be talkin’ to?
JOHN WAYNE (PRE-LAP)
I wanna say one thing about a place
I love. No, not Hollywood...
And WE REVEAL WE’RE --
INT. HOLLYWOOD ROOSEVELT HOTEL - BANQUET ROOM - NIGHT
JOHN WAYNE
...I like Hollywood...
Alone on stage, John Wayne, six-feet, four inches of bass-
voiced movie icon.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 15.
CONTINUED:
JOHN WAYNE (CONT’D)
...but I love America!
As WE REVEAL a sign near the stage announcing this is:
THE MOTION PICTURE ALLIANCE FOR THE PRESERVATION
OF AMERICAN IDEALS
WE SEE the HUGE CROWD of movie pros, from below-the-line crew
to above-the-line stars, all CHEERING and APPLAUDING Wayne.
JOHN WAYNE (CONT’D)
And when we talk about America I’m
talking about freedom! The kinda
freedom we just fought a world war
to save! You wanna be a Commie, go
be a Commie... but some friends of
mine in Washington think you got
some questions to answer!
AT THE BACK OF THE ROOM
Trumbo, Hird, Hunter and Edward G. Robinson all stand,
studying Wayne, awed and disturbed by his power.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
I never knew he was this good.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
’Cause he’s not acting, that’s him.
UP ON STAGE
Wayne’s voice RISES with the MOB’S CHEERS.
JOHN WAYNE
Still wanna be a Commie? Be a
Commie! In Russia! But off ya go
’n’ enjoy the Bolshoi Ballet!
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Scene 7 - Confrontation in the Lobby
Trumbo, Hird, Robinson and Hunter offer copies of Trumbo’s
pamphlet to THOSE who ignore or shoot them dirty looks. Or
put on their hats and throw smug smiles. Including --
SAM WOOD
(as he accepts a pamphlet)
Do svidaniya.
Russian for “goodbye,” as he tears it to shreds.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 16.
CONTINUED:
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
This? Is a nightmare.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
If it were, I’d be in bed.
An elegantly turned out, in-the-flesh Hedda Hopper
approaches.
HEDDA HOPPER
Hello, Dalton.
DALTON TRUMBO
Hedda, here you are, of course.
Good evening to you.
HEDDA HOPPER
Eddie, darling.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Hedda. New hat?
HEDDA HOPPER
Daily, dear, daily.
(to Trumbo)
Been to the movies lately?
(before he can answer)
Duke!
John Wayne has crossed the room with IATSE Union Leader ROY
BREWER, 40, jowly, jovial and shrewd.
HEDDA HOPPER (CONT’D)
Wasn’t he? Mag. Nificent.
JOHN WAYNE
Just sayin’ what needs sayin’.
(then)
Hiya, Eddie.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Duke.
JOHN WAYNE
Hear you ’n’ your pals got a
“pamphlet.” Any takers?
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Not yet...
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 17.
CONTINUED: (2)
ARLEN HIRD
(offers one to Wayne)
Would you like one? We’re
Communists.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
(shrugs)
He’s a writer.
JOHN WAYNE
(to Robinson)
Ya won’t get any takers. Not here.
DALTON TRUMBO
Why not?
Wayne now turns and regards an affable Trumbo.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
All it says is, Congress has no
right to investigate how we vote,
where we pray, what we think, say
or make movies about.
(holds out the pamphlet)
Hello, I’m Dalton Trumbo.
JOHN WAYNE
(takes the pamphlet)
Congress has the right to go after
anything they think is a threat.
DALTON TRUMBO
We disagree. That’s the point --
we both have the right to be wrong.
A LOOSE, CURIOUS GROUP has begun to gather, sensing trouble.
JOHN WAYNE
You wanna talk about rights, first
show me whose side you’re on.
Russia’s no friend, not anymore.
You better wake up.
(then)
’Cause it’s a new day. A new day.
DALTON TRUMBO
And?
JOHN WAYNE
Maybe it’s not for your kind.
DALTON TRUMBO
My kind, what kind is that?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 18.
CONTINUED: (3)
JOHN WAYNE
Kind that has no idea why we just
won a war.
Wayne crumples Trumbo’s pamphlet, tosses it and starts off.
DALTON TRUMBO
That’s the second time you’ve
brought that up. I was a war
correspondent in Okinawa --
(to Hedda now)
-- your son was stationed in the
Philippines --
(re: Robinson)
-- Eddie was in Europe with the
Office of War Information --
(back to Wayne)
-- where’d you serve again?
JOHN WAYNE
(stops, turns)
You tryin’ to say something?
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
No, Duke, he wasn’t --
HEDDA HOPPER
Stay out of it, Eddie --
DALTON TRUMBO
(right in Wayne’s face)
If you’re gonna talk about World
War Two like you personally won it,
let’s be clear where you were
stationed -- on a film set,
shooting blanks, wearing makeup and
if you’re going to hit me, I’d like
to take my glasses off.
Wayne could belt him but camera FLASHBULBS POP.
ROY BREWER
Duke, let’s get outta here...
He urges the apoplectic Wayne to a doorway.
HEDDA HOPPER
Thank you, Dalton. My next column
just wrote itself.
She exits. Robinson, Hird and Hunter just stare at Trumbo.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 19.
CONTINUED: (4)
ARLEN HIRD
(happy as a clam)
That was... I don’t even know what
to...
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
Yes, good thing you don’t want to
demonize anybody or that could’ve
been awkward.
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Scene 8 - Navigating Hollywood's Shadows
Walking with Robinson, Trumbo crosses the gleaming, BUSY
dream factory at the height of its productivity, stops at a
newsstand to buy cigarettes and is confronted by a strange
and awful sight:
The face of Hedda Hopper on the July 28, 1947 cover of TIME
magazine, the copies all hung in a line, creating two dozen
identical Heddas. Trumbo is quietly amused, Robinson
slightly horrified.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Good God.
(reaches for a copy)
Trumbo, you pick your enemies the
way you live -- only the best will
do.
INT. MGM STUDIOS - LOUIS B. MAYER’S OFFICE - DAY
LOUIS B. MAYER, 60, warm-hearted, cold-blooded studio
president, beams affectionately at Trumbo.
LOUIS B. MAYER
Your next deal’s gonna make you the
highest-paid writer in Hollywood,
which’ll make you the highest-paid
writer in the world.
BUDDY ROSS, early 30s, a young, go-getter producer, sits off
to the side, eyes darting anxiously between the studio
president and the writer.
LOUIS B. MAYER (CONT’D)
You earned it. You don’t just
write happy endings, you actually
believe them.
BUDDY ROSS
That’s what the people pay to see,
that’s why you belong here at MGM,
right, L.B.?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 20.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
Look, I hate to make the wooing too
easy for you but: Where do I sign?
LOUIS B. MAYER
Just one thing. If you’re going to
work for me...
(unfolds a newspaper)
...I never, ever want to see
anything like this...
HEDDA HOPPER’S HOLLYWOOD column: a photo of Dalton Trumbo
under the headline, “OUR OWN RED MENACE.”
LOUIS B. MAYER (CONT’D)
...again.
Trumbo and Mayer lock eyes. Buddy is frozen silent.
DALTON TRUMBO
You won’t. I promise.
Mayer nods, satisfied. Buddy could kiss Trumbo.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Just stop reading Hedda Hopper.
Off Mayer’s fury and Buddy’s panic --
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Scene 9 - A Day of Joy Interrupted
Overlooking their lake. Trumbo stands at a hot grill,
flipping filet of trout, holding court for his family;
Hunter, his WIFE and CHILDREN; Robinson and his WIFE; Buddy
Ross and a GLAMOROUS INGENUE GIRLFRIEND.
NIKI
(to Cleo)
Mom, please...?
CLEO
(to Niki)
Not now, honey.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
So what’d L.B. say then?
BUDDY ROSS
Jesus, don’t, I haven’t eaten
since. My job’s not hard enough?
DALTON TRUMBO
Your job’s not hard at all.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 21.
CONTINUED:
BUDDY ROSS
You think getting Mayer to sign you
after those headlines was easy?
You have a record-breaking, three-
year contract -- to make shit up.
You’re welcome.
CHRIS
C’mon, Mom!
EXT. A NARROW DIRT ROAD - DAY
A solitary black sedan churns up a plume of dust.
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - TERRACE - DAY
Trumbo and the other adults LAUGH and drink away a dazzling
summer afternoon.
NIKI
(to Robinson)
She really can! Ask her!
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
(chuckling)
Cleo? Is this true?
CLEO
I... had a very unusual mother.
DALTON TRUMBO
Which means “Stage Mother.”
He picks up a glass, a twinkle in his eye.
CLEO
(knows what’s coming,
laughs, embarrassed)
Trumbo, no...
He hands Niki the glass, who tosses it to Cleo, which she
catches easily, then another, which she catches in her other
hand, beginning to lightly JUGGLE the two, causing the
children to finally SQUEAL with delight as --
EXT. ANOTHER DIRT ROAD - DAY
-- that black sedan takes a gravel-popping turn and --
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 22.
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - TERRACE - DAY
-- Robinson and his Wife stare in amazement, watching Cleo
expertly JUGGLE two glasses, flipping and catching one behind
her back as Trumbo beams.
DALTON TRUMBO
The misspent youth of a child
acrobat.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
My God, how long were you in show
business?
CLEO
(juggling away)
Till I was 15. And it was more
“show-forced-labor.”
Niki tosses her mother a third glass, which Cleo catches, now
pinwheeling all three easily.
NIKI
She never drops one, ever.
CLEO
Mom had a little saying. “Drop it,
you lose your next meal.”
DALTON TRUMBO
(to Robinson)
And “Mom” wasn’t kidding. Woman
was a Dickensian harridan.
CLEO
(laughs)
No one even knows what that means.
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - DRIVEWAY - DAY
The black sedan closes in --
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - TERRACE - DAY
-- as Cleo does over-hand grabs, then switches to a circular
pattern, the spool of tumblers catching sunlight in dazzling
prisms.
AND THROUGH CLEO’S GLASSY WHIRL OF COLOR - WE SEE THAT SEDAN
Pull to a stop and Trumbo sees THREE MEN in suits get out.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 23.
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - DRIVEWAY - A FEW MOMENTS LATER
Family and friends watching, Trumbo greets the three men,
among whom we recognize: HUAC Investigator Robert Stripling.
STRIPLING
Mr. Dalton Trumbo?
Stripling hands Trumbo a pink document.
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Scene 10 - The Hollywood Red Scare: A Political Showdown
Congressman J. Parnell Thomas stands before REPORTERS:
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
Nineteen subpoenas have been issued
to those we believe have knowledge
of the ongoing Communist threat in
Hollywood.
This announcement is greeted with a resounding... pause.
REPORTER 1
Uh, what kind of threat is that?
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
A conspiracy to corrupt democratic
values and bring about the
overthrow of this nation.
REPORTER 2
Using... movies.
The CHUCKLING Reporters clearly think this is horseshit.
REPORTER 1
Any movie in particular or...?
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
(cutting him off)
Movies are the most powerful form
of influence ever created and they
are infested with hidden traitors
who will be dragged into the light,
for all to see and all to judge.
CUT TO:
HEDDA HOPPER’S HOLLYWOOD NEWSREEL
Her talking face again appears alongside her column.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 24.
CONTINUED:
HEDDA HOPPER
(to camera)
We travel now...
CUT TO:
EXT./INT. U.S. CAPITOL - VARIOUS SHOTS - DAY - THE HEARINGS
And actual newsreel footage in black & white of the Capitol
packed with POLITICIANS, EXECUTIVES and STARS.
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.)
...to Washington, D.C., where
battle lines are drawn. On one
side, Communist subversives. On
the other, studio heads, labor
leaders and some of our brightest
stars.
And in actual footage from his testimony that day, RONALD
REAGAN, 36, handsome and measured, cooperates with Robert
Stripling before a PACKED HOUSE.
STRIPLING
Your profession, Mr. Reagan?
RONALD REAGAN
Motion picture actor.
STRIPLING
And you are currently the president
of the Screen Actors Guild?
RONALD REAGAN
Yes, sir.
STRIPLING
Has it been reported to you that
certain members of the guild were
Communists?
RONALD REAGAN
Yes, sir, I have heard different
discussions of some of them as
Communists.
JUMP CUT TO:
More actual news footage -- CONGRESSMAN RICHARD M. NIXON (R-
California), 34.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 25.
CONTINUED:
RICHARD M. NIXON
Do you believe that the motion
picture industry is doing
everything it can to rid itself of
subversive, Un-American influences?
Then answering, in testimony we recreate in matching black &
white --
ROY BREWER
No! The Communists are everywhere!
They report directly to Moscow!
Then --
SAM WOOD
Enough is enough! The Communists
have to go!
DALTON TRUMBO (PRE-LAP)
What we’re about to do...
CUT TO:
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Scene 11 - Defiance at the Lazy-T Ranch
DALTON TRUMBO
...won’t make us too popular.
Trumbo leads a small strategy session with Robert Kenny,
Arlen Hird and a HALF-DOZEN of the SUBPOENAED 19 and --
-- Niki, in a corner, quietly taking everything in.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Our support’s not only going to
vanish, we’re going to get attacked
by our own.
ARLEN HIRD
Okay, we get slandered, then what?
ROBERT KENNY
You testify and answer every
question they ask, in your own way.
ARLEN HIRD
So don’t tell ’em shit.
DALTON TRUMBO
Beautifully put.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 26.
CONTINUED:
In her corner, Niki smiles.
CUT TO:
INT. U.S. CAPITOL - DAY - THE HEARINGS
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.)
Of the nineteen forced to appear,
only ten were called to the stand.
The Hollywood Nineteen wait to be called to testify.
HEDDA HOPPER (V.O.)
Dubbed “The Hollywood Ten,” they
refused to answer every question
about their Communist ties.
ARLEN HIRD (PRE-LAP)
You know what that’s called?
BACK TO:
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - LIVING ROOM - DAY - BEFORE THE HEARINGS
DALTON TRUMBO
Contempt of Congress.
Beat. The room is silent, Niki transfixed. Then --
ARLEN HIRD
Maybe I’m missing something, ’cause
all I’m seein’ here is jail.
CUT TO:
INT. U.S. CAPITOL - CAUCUS ROOM - DAY - THE HEARINGS
As Trumbo is sworn in, there’s a BLINDING CAMERA FLASH and
Congress, the crowds and Trumbo all BURST INTO FULL COLOR --
STRIPLING
Mr. Trumbo, I will ask various
questions, all of which can be
answered yes or no.
DALTON TRUMBO
I shall answer yes or no if I
please to. Many questions can only
be answered yes or no by a moron or
a slave.
As the caucus room FLUTTERS with DISBELIEVING MOANS,
supportive LAUGHTER and a few nasty BOOS, WE FIND --
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 27.
CONTINUED:
Cleo Trumbo, in the gallery, serenely unsurprised by her
husband’s insolence.
BACK TO:
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - LIVING ROOM - DAY - BEFORE THE HEARINGS
ROBERT KENNY
No one can beat Congress in
Congress. The only place to do
that’s in court --
ARLEN HIRD
-- in front of a judge who’ll
probably hate Commies and rule
against us --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- in a lower court, yes, we’ll
likely lose but on appeal...
ROBERT KENNY
...it’ll work. The Supreme Court
is a five to four liberal majority.
They think the Committee’s
unconstitutional, they want it
killed and we’re gonna hand them
the case to do it.
ARLEN HIRD
Great. Best of luck. I’m out.
And suddenly, Hird is on his feet and gone.
CUT TO:
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Scene 12 - Splashing Innocence and Philosophical Tension
Mitzi SPLASHES in the water with Chris as Cleo aims a large,
professional camera at them and snaps pictures.
Arlen Hird walks to a nearby tree, leans against it and stabs
a cigarette into his mouth. Trumbo walks up.
ARLEN HIRD
(sighs, beat)
Look, I can’t afford what you’re
talkin’ about... Supreme Court,
legal fees. My wife, it’s never
been great, but I raid our savings
for this? She’s gone, with both
boys.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 28.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
I’ll cover you. Expenses, travel,
legal fees...
Hird is shocked by Trumbo’s casual generosity.
ARLEN HIRD
You don’t even like me.
DALTON TRUMBO
I like you fine, you don’t like me.
ARLEN HIRD
Also, I don’t trust you.
DALTON TRUMBO
I’d say “go on,” but I’m afraid you
will.
ARLEN HIRD
Look. I know what I am, okay? I
want this country to be a whole
new... everything. Top to bottom.
And if I get what I want? Nobody
gets their own lake.
DALTON TRUMBO
Seems a little grim.
ARLEN HIRD
For you, yeah. But not the guys
who built all this...
(the ranch, the lake)
...for you, their families,
friends. Which, remember, is kind
of the point. Them, not you. I
mean, if I’m wrong here, tell me,
but ever since I’ve known you, you
talk like a radical, live like a
rich guy --
DALTON TRUMBO
True.
ARLEN HIRD
-- ’n’ I don’t think if it gets
right down to it, you’re willing to
lose all this just to do what’s
right. Radical would, rich guy? I
don’t think so.
Trumbo watches his family in the sparkling light of his lake.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 29.
CONTINUED: (2)
DALTON TRUMBO
Am I “willing.” Hm.
(beat)
Well. I hate martyrs and will not
fight a lost cause, so you’re
right, I’m not willing to lose it
all -- I’m willing to risk it.
That’s why being the radical and
the rich guy is the perfect
combination. The radical may fight
with the purity of Jesus... but the
rich guy wins with the cunning of
Satan.
ARLEN HIRD
Y’know, the thing is, really?
You’re wrong about almost
everything and you never shut up.
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS (PRE-LAP)
No, no, no, no -- !
CUT TO:
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Scene 13 - Defiance in the Caucus Room
Still in glorious color that reveals the face of Congressman
Thomas to be red as a blister as he POUNDS his gavel --
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
-- no, no, no, no, no, no!
-- like a four year old throwing a tantrum.
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS (CONT’D)
Are you now or have you ever been a
member of the Communist party?
DALTON TRUMBO
Mr. Stripling, may I read a
statement?
STRIPLING
No.
DALTON TRUMBO
May I present my writing?
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
No.
DALTON TRUMBO
May I -- ?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 30.
CONTINUED:
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
No, no, no! Answer the question!
STRIPLING
Are you now or have you ever been a
member of the Communist Party?
DALTON TRUMBO
Have I been accused of a crime? If
so, what is it and where is your
evidence?
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
You’re not asking the questions!
DALTON TRUMBO
Well, I was.
STRIPLING
The witness will answer.
DALTON TRUMBO
I see. And then what would you
like? My voting record, union
membership, religion?
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
Answer the question!
DALTON TRUMBO
You believe this Committee has the
right to compel testimony, indict
opinion --
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
Typical Communist tactics!
DALTON TRUMBO
-- criminalize thought -- but that
right does not exist and the day it
does, God help us all.
CUT TO:
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Scene 14 - Laughter and Shadows
-- Arlen Hird is now on the stand.
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
Are you now or have you ever been a
member of the Communist party?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 31.
CONTINUED:
ARLEN HIRD
Congressman, first I need to call
my doctor.
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
Your doctor? I don’t un --
ARLEN HIRD
To see if he can surgically remove
my conscience.
EXPLOSIVE LAUGHTER no amount of GAVELLING by Thomas can stop.
Trumbo sits beside Cleo in the gallery, delighted and
surprised. And our HEARING MONTAGE ENDS.
INT. U.S. CAPITOL - HALLWAY - DAY
Trumbo and Hird walk as Hird begins to COUGH, can’t stop.
DALTON TRUMBO
What? What is it?
ARLEN HIRD
Cancer.
DALTON TRUMBO
Jesus. How long’ve you known?
ARLEN HIRD
Couple months.
DALTON TRUMBO
Months? Are you being treated -- ?
ARLEN HIRD
I don’t like the options. It’s
lung cancer. Bad if they operate,
bad if they don’t.
DALTON TRUMBO
Is there anything I can do?
ARLEN HIRD
No! No. It’s cancer, Jesus.
(then)
Yes. Make sure this fuckin’ plan
of yours works.
CUT TO:
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 32.
A HEADLINE FROM NOVEMBER 24, 1947:
THE NEW YORK TIMES: “‘HOLLYWOOD 10’ CHARGED WITH CONTEMPT OF
CONGRESS”
Under that, a group photo of The Hollywood Ten, PUSHING IN ON
the grainy faces of Hird and Trumbo.
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Scene 15 - Tensions in Tinseltown
Other faces, in framed photos on a wall: CLARK GABLE, JUDY
GARLAND, FRED ASTAIRE, more. Being studied by Hedda Hopper.
Mayer enters, sees Hedda is focused on a group photo with a
row of SILENT STARS where, squeezed between RAMON NAVARRO and
GRETA GARBO, a younger Hedda stands alongside a boyish Mayer.
HEDDA HOPPER
Look at us. God, we thought we
knew everything...
LOUIS B. MAYER
We did.
HEDDA HOPPER
Not me.
(then)
I didn’t know how much I loved it
all, till I hit a certain birthday
and the parts started drying up. I
remember thinking, when you love
something and it stops loving you
back, what do you do...?
LOUIS B. MAYER
You fight.
HEDDA HOPPER
That’s a man’s answer.
(he concedes, waits)
You love it more. Till it
surrenders.
LOUIS B. MAYER
Well. You never left MGM. Or my
heart. How’s your boy? Still in
the Navy?
HEDDA HOPPER
First lieutenant.
LOUIS B. MAYER
You raised a real hero.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 33.
CONTINUED:
HEDDA HOPPER
Which is why I’d like to tell him
we’re doing as much for this
country as he is.
(then)
Are we?
LOUIS B. MAYER
It’s complicated. Trumbo, the
others, all have contracts...
HEDDA HOPPER
You helped build this business, so
did I, we’re not gonna watch these
pissants defile it --
LOUIS B. MAYER
I’m running a studio here, you
think I love every person on my
payroll? Grow up.
HEDDA HOPPER
Then how about I make crystal clear
to my thirty-five million readers
who runs Hollywood and won’t fire
these traitors? How about I name
names, real names? Like yours,
Lazar Meir; or Jack Warner, Jacob
Varner; Sam Goldwyn, Schmuel
Gelbfisz --
LOUIS B. MAYER
You watch what you say to me --
HEDDA HOPPER
No, you watch! This isn’t 1920!
I’m not your STARLET, you don’t
tell me what to do! Never, ever,
ever, ever, EVER AGAIN!
LOUIS B. MAYER
Enough, Hedda --
HEDDA HOPPER
Forty years ago, you’re starving in
some shtetl, the greatest country
on Earth takes you in, gives you
wealth, power and the second we
need you, you do nothing!
(then)
Just what my readers expect from a
business run by kikes.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 34.
CONTINUED: (2)
LOUIS B. MAYER
Get out.
She sits. Takes a cigarette out of her case. Lights it.
She blows a wall of smoke between them.
HEDDA HOPPER
Now listen, L.B. I’m fond of you.
Some of my happiest years were
spent on this lot.
(then)
Not in your office, of course, you
always trying to fuck me on the couch,
me maintaining my virtue. Barely.
(lightly)
But... times change. Now I’ll
happily fuck you.
CUT TO:
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Scene 16 - Sacrifice and Solidarity
Black & white NEWSREEL, created by us, of Mayer, flanked by all
the other studio heads, reading a press statement to camera:
LOUIS B. MAYER
Forthwith, all studios unanimously
agree to discharge the Hollywood
Ten. Without compensation.
Effective immediately.
(then)
Further, no studio will ever employ
a member of the Communist Party or
anyone refusing to cooperate in our
mighty struggle against this
terrible new menace.
INT. HEDDA HOPPER’S OFFICE - DAY
Hedda reads her copy into a large microphone.
HEDDA HOPPER
He’s been loved by film fans for
almost twenty years. But have you
noticed? He hasn’t been on-screen
much lately. Bad box office? No.
Bad politics. Bad news indeed.
For Mr. Edward G. Robinson.
INT. EDWARD G. ROBINSON’S MANSION - LIVING ROOM - DAY
Robinson addresses a small GROUP, many of whom would rather
not be here.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 35.
CONTINUED:
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
The Hollywood Ten’s going to court
for all of us. It’ll be long,
expensive. So please, give as much
as you can to the defense fund.
SAME SCENE - LATER
The gathering has thinned. Trumbo studies Robinson’s
Impressionist paintings. Robinson wanders over with Cleo.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
This little gathering doesn’t quite
have the zip and zing of yesteryear,
does it?
CLEO
Where’re all the liberals all of a
sudden?
DALTON TRUMBO
At their lawyers’. Or
psychiatrists’.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Likely both. Anyway...
(hands Trumbo a check)
...for the defense fund.
DALTON TRUMBO
(hesitates)
You working again?
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Eh. It’s a little slow.
(to Trumbo)
I’ll be fine, kid, take it.
Trumbo does, reluctantly, then:
DALTON TRUMBO
You sold one.
Cleo looks at the wall and sees a discolored space. There
were six paintings; now only five.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
The Renoir. I got a good price.
Trumbo is moved beyond words -- a rare occurrence.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 36.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
Eddie, I...
(overcome)
...well... I...
CLEO
What he’s trying to say is, he
loves you.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
(to Cleo)
I love him, too, the warty son of a
bitch.
(then, to Trumbo)
Oh and I got a great offer on the
Monet, if you want to bribe the
jury.
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Scene 17 - Verdict and Resilience
As the JURY FOREMAN reads:
JURY FOREMAN
In the matter of the United States
versus Dalton Trumbo...
Trumbo stands at the bar, next to attorney Robert Kenny.
JURY FOREMAN (CONT’D)
...we find the defendant guilty of
contempt of Congress.
He was ready for this, but the reality hits hard. His eyes
betray just a flicker of agony. Then, aware of all the
stares, his battler’s armored visage returns.
INT. WASHINGTON, D.C. COURTHOUSE - CORRIDOR - DAY
Trumbo and Kenny exit the courtroom in a river of COURT FOLK.
DALTON TRUMBO
I have total contempt for Congress,
I just thought a jury’d see why.
INT. WASHINGTON, D.C. COURTHOUSE - HALLWAY - DAY
Trumbo and Kenny fight their way through the clinging PRESS.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 37.
CONTINUED:
ROBERT KENNY
(to Reporters)
The Supreme Court will drop kick
this verdict into speeding traffic
and end the most shameful chapter
of Congressional history I ever
want to live through.
INT. WASHINGTON, D.C. COURTHOUSE - STAIRCASE - MOMENTS LATER
Trumbo and Kenny.
ROBERT KENNY
How’re you doing for money?
DALTON TRUMBO
Broke as a bankrupt’s bastard.
Why?
ROBERT KENNY
You owe me thirty-thousand dollars.
The appeal’s gonna be twice that.
DALTON TRUMBO
Well, better get to work.
ROBERT KENNY
Doing what?
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - STUDY - DAY
Trumbo writes furiously on his typewriter. The sounds of
LAUGHTER pierce his CLATTER. He looks up at the window, then
rises, crossing to it.
AT THE WINDOW - TRUMBO SEES
Cleo on the driveway, where a ping-pong table’s been set up.
She’s teaching Niki, 4-year-old Mitzi and Chris how to play
the game. There is much GIGGLING amid the missed shots.
TRUMBO WATCHES,
Silently separated from his family by the sheet of glass.
Then he has to let the curtain drop back across the window.
Back to it.
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - NIGHT
One light on. Trumbo’s study.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 38.
INT. HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY
Arlen Hird lies in a weakened, post-surgery stupor. His eyes
open and he sees Trumbo setting down some flowers.
DALTON TRUMBO
How are you?
ARLEN HIRD
Breathin’. With one lung. Which
is half as good as two. How bad’re
things out there?
DALTON TRUMBO
Everybody envies you.
Hird looks around the pleasant, private room.
ARLEN HIRD
Why not. Got the best room in the
joint. You oughta know, you paid
for it.
(then, woozy)
Thanks. By the way.
Trumbo smiles at Hird, whose eyes flutter shut.
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Scene 18 - Toast of Tension
BUDDY ROSS (PRE-LAP)
Mayer’s a dinosaur...
Over the streamlined entrance, a steel-sculpted banner: ROSS
INTERNATIONAL PICTURES.
BUDDY ROSS (PRE-LAP) (CONT’D)
...they all are, extinct and don’t
even know it.
INT. ROSS INTERNATIONAL - BUDDY’S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
Enormous and pristine.
BUDDY ROSS
Let’s see now, to, uh...
Buddy, Trumbo and other MOVIE-INDUSTRY COMPATRIOTS raise
champagne glasses in the winter of 1948.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 39.
CONTINUED:
BUDDY ROSS (CONT’D)
...to no more MGM, no more Mayer, I
am strictly independent, got cans
of film, wads of Wall Street dough
and my favorite boss -- me!
(all CHUCKLE, CLINK, sip,
then to Trumbo)
And you, you crazy son of a bitch,
are gonna write all my movies, once
this Washington crap clears up.
A throat is CLEARED. Trumbo is a bit more pensive than we’ve
seen him.
DALTON TRUMBO
And how’ll that happen?
BUDDY ROSS
Hey. I’m not political. Thank
Jesus. But if they called me in,
accused me? I’d just say, yep, did
it, sorry, didn’t mean it.
Trumbo nods, willing to move on. But somehow just can’t help
himself.
DALTON TRUMBO
(evenly)
So Congress asks, “Are you now or
have you ever been a Democrat...?”
BUDDY ROSS
“I am... and God, I just feel awful
about it, never again...”
DALTON TRUMBO
But now they want the names of
other Democrats.
(points at random MEN)
Bill... Stan... Earl... Nat.
BUDDY ROSS
Then I say go to hell.
DALTON TRUMBO
Really. And how many banks fund
enemies of the state? Your money’s
gone. Unless you give the names of
your friends here. They’ll never
work again. But it’s the only way
you ever will.
(then)
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 40.
CONTINUED: (2)
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT'D)
We’re all friends here, we all know
each other... we hope. What would
you do, Buddy?
Buddy stares, chilled. Silence. Then --
BUDDY ROSS
Piss on the best day of a guy’s
life! Only you!
BIG LAUGHS all around. But from those four men Trumbo
singled out, nervous ones. And from Trumbo, not so much as a
smile.
Ratings
Scene 19 - The Price of a Name
Trumbo hard at the keys, surrounded by full ashtrays, piles
of typescript and a half-empty scotch bottle. He pauses to
shift in his seat and twist his aching back.
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - LIVING ROOM - DAWN
He lies on the couch, scotch on his chest, pillow under his
back, scribbling on typed copy, still in some pain. Niki,
almost 11 now, walks in wearing her nightgown.
DALTON TRUMBO
Morning, Nikola.
NIKI
I thought you weren’t allowed to
write anymore.
DALTON TRUMBO
No. Just can’t put my name on it
or get paid.
NIKI
How’s that work?
INT. DINER - DOWNTOWN L.A. - DAY
Niki eats a sundae, watching Trumbo and Hunter as the latter
thumbs a dog-eared screenplay with scribbles on many pages
and bold handwriting on the cover.
DALTON TRUMBO
Well?
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
(the script)
It’s funny, breezy, romantic.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 41.
CONTINUED:
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER (CONT'D)
(then, sarcastically)
Who the hell wrote it?
DALTON TRUMBO
You did, old boy. Stick your name
on my labor, hand it in to your
studio and --
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
Look, it’s just dumb luck I wasn’t
subpoenaed. The hearings’re gonna
start up again soon, I’m gonna get
called and canned...
DALTON TRUMBO
Then quick, lad, let’s sell this
little beauty and split the take,
fifty-fifty.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
Ridiculous. I’ll take ten percent.
DALTON TRUMBO
You’ll take twenty. No, thirty.
That’s my final offer.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
You are the worst businessman,
ever.
(then)
I hate the title.
NIKI
Me too.
She gets a sharp look from her father that drives her back to
her ice cream.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
I mean, The Princess and the
Peasant...
(scribbling on the cover)
...sounds like a puppet show.
DALTON TRUMBO
(shrugs)
Change it.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
I did.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 42.
CONTINUED: (2)
He slides the script across the table to Trumbo, its new
title atop the cover page’s handwritten notes, in bold felt
and circled. Trumbo’s distaste for it is immediate.
DALTON TRUMBO
Now, who the hell’s going to go see
a movie called Roman Holiday?
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Scene 20 - Legislation and Loss
Congressman Thomas moves with a small CLUSTER of many of the
same REPORTERS from Scene 30, all now his acolytes --
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
...I’m going to introduce
legislation so in the event of
national emergency, all Communists
will be sent to internment camps...
REPORTER 2
Does the president support this?
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
He’d better.
Stripling now appears at Thomas’ shoulder, WHISPERS in his
ear as he shows him a sheaf of monetary columns.
Both Stripling’s hushed, unheard words and the document’s top
sheet get Thomas’ full attention.
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS (CONT’D)
(to the Reporters)
Excuse me, gentleman.
He and Stripling peel off, away from the Reporters.
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS (CONT’D)
I’ve told you, Bob, these are
legitimate, salaried employees from
my home state --
STRIPLING
What you didn’t tell me is, every
one of them is a relative.
CONGRESSMAN THOMAS
Which is completely legal.
STRIPLING
Except none of them have paid
taxes.
(as Thomas tries to explain)
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 43.
CONTINUED:
STRIPLING (CONT'D)
Don’t say anything else without a
lawyer.
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - DAY
Cleo gets out of her car, carrying mail and The L.A. Times.
She walks past a half-finished addition, abandoned at
framing. She scans the front page of the paper.
CLEO
(suddenly shaken)
...no...
JEFF, their contractor, sun-baked, 30s, has been waiting.
JEFF THE CONTRACTOR
Mrs. Trumbo? Ma’am, I gotta get
paid.
She looks up, truly at a loss.
JEFF THE CONTRACTOR (CONT’D)
Please, I got men with families.
CLEO
Jeff. We owe everyone. But my
husband can’t get work.
Before Jeff can respond, Trumbo speeds up in his car and
skids to a stop and bounds out with two bottles of champagne.
DALTON TRUMBO
(ecstatic once again)
We’re rich!
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - KITCHEN - DAY
Trumbo signs a check with a flourish and hands it to Jeff.
JEFF THE CONTRACTOR
Thanks. You sure lead exciting
lives. Boy.
He pockets it as Trumbo reaches for the champagne.
DALTON TRUMBO
It sold, Cleo, Roman Holiday,
Paramount, credited to our dear
Hunter and what, what’s the matter?
CLEO
Justice Rutledge died.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 44.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
No, Justice Murphy, last --
CLEO
And Rutledge. This morning.
She hands him the Times. As he reads, she holds him.
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Scene 21 - Farewell to Freedom
ROBERT KENNY
The two most liberal judges on the
Supreme Court...
Trumbo, a still-frail Arlen Hird and members of The Ten sit
solemnly before a heartsick Kenny.
ROBERT KENNY (CONT’D)
...back to back. This is just...
He lets it hang in the air. A long, ten-man silence.
DALTON TRUMBO
Well. I’ll be goddamned if I know
what to say.
ARLEN HIRD
One upside, anyway.
ROBERT KENNY
Our appeal’s gonna be denied.
You’re all going to prison.
INT. ROBERT KENNY’S LAW OFFICE - ELEVATOR - DAY
Trumbo helps Hird in. Hird pushes the button, then leans on
his cane.
Both men stare straight ahead as they descend. As sick as
Hird is, Trumbo is paler. He looks gutted. The CLANKING
descent seems eternal. Then:
ARLEN HIRD
I wouldn’t change a thing. Not
one. Would you?
Trumbo considers this carefully before:
DALTON TRUMBO
Let’s ask each other in a year.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 45.
EXT. LOS ANGELES AIRFIELD - NIGHT
June, 1950. NO SOUND at first, just MUSIC as Trumbo, Cleo,
Niki, Chris, 9, and Mitzi, now 5, cross the tarmac to a
waiting DC-3 prop passenger plane. Suddenly aware of --
A CROWD gathering at the edge of the light, moving toward
them. Then, TWO PEOPLE raise a banner, the words spread out
on a sheet between two poles:
DALTON TRUMBO IS GOING TO JAIL! FREE THE HOLLYWOOD 10!
The crowd closes around the surprised Trumbos. Hands are
offered and shaken. More signs raised. More PEOPLE cluster.
Cameras are brought out and --
MOMENTS LATER - TRUMBO
Slightly embarrassed, is surrounded by family, well-wishers
and more huge, handwritten signs bearing his name and plight.
MINUTES AFTER THAT - A MONTAGE
Capturing the final, sad moments of Trumbo’s goodbye:
- Tiny Mitzi hugs Trumbo. She can’t be pried off.
- Trumbo whispers into Chris’ ear:
DALTON TRUMBO
I’m counting on you. Your mother
needs to laugh. Once a day. At
least. Deal?
Chris nods and refuses to cry. Father and son shake hands.
- Trumbo hugs Niki.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Don’t be afraid.
NIKI
I’m not.
She’s angry at herself for tearing up. Trumbo hands her his
silk pocket square.
- Trumbo kisses Cleo one last time on the lips.
- Trumbo is led off by TWO U.S. MARSHALS.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 46.
CONTINUED:
- Trumbo is up on the ramp of the plane. A FLASHBULB POPS.
The moment is FROZEN into an old sepia photograph.
DISSOLVE TO:
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Scene 22 - Revelations in the Night
The Trumbo family car rumbles home from the airport.
INT. TRUMBO FAMILY CAR - DRIVING - CONTINUOUS
In the backseat, Niki consoles Mitzi. Up front, Chris rides
alongside Cleo, who is driving. Everyone is grieving in
their own way. Then --
CLEO
(suddenly blurting)
I was married before.
Well, this certainly gets the attention of all the kids.
CLEO (CONT’D)
Your father’s my second husband.
NIKI
Holy shit.
CLEO
Niki...
NIKI
Mom, gimme a break, you can’t just
say that and not --
CLEO
I’m saying it for a reason. When I
met your father, I had a boyfriend.
CHRIS
What was his name?
CLEO
Hal.
CHRIS
Hal. Heh.
NIKI
Did you love him?
CLEO
That’s not the point.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 47.
CONTINUED:
CHRIS
What’d you think of Pop back then?
CLEO
I couldn’t stand him.
NIKI
So how’d you end up marrying him?
CLEO
I was waitressing. He came in for
a hamburger, we talked a little, I
brought him the check and he
proposed.
CHRIS
Seriously?
Cleo catches Niki’s look in the rear view, a smile that says,
that’s Pop.
CLEO
I said he was crazy but he kept
coming back, night after night.
Talking and talking. And the tips!
On a ninety-cent check, he’d leave
ten dollars! After a year, I had
over a thousand dollars. I saved
every penny, I wasn’t going to let
him think he could buy me. But...
also... I just, I’d never met
anyone like him, ever, I couldn’t
stop thinking about him. And guess
who didn’t like that much?
NIKI
Hal.
CLEO
Hal. Who got mad, then jealous,
then went and got a wedding license
and a judge.
CHRIS
That must’ve made Pop mad.
CLEO
No. He just asked if I could see
myself with Hal in twenty years and
I burst into tears -- I couldn’t
see myself with him for twenty more
minutes. He was big and crude and
had all these rules...
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 48.
CONTINUED: (2)
CLEO (CONT'D)
(then)
Your father was such a good friend,
I’d never had anyone like him in my
life... and do you know what he
did? Hired a private detective.
CHRIS
Wow.
CLEO
And found out Hal was already
married.
All the kids let out LAUGHS and SHOUTS and pound the seats.
They love seeing this new side of their mother.
NIKI
Mom, how could you not tell us this
before? This is great!
CLEO
I’m telling you now because when he
did all that, your father proved
when he believes in something... or
someone...
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Scene 23 - Endurance in the Shadows
Large, remote, set amid thick green Kentucky forest.
CLEO (POST-LAP)
...it doesn’t matter what anybody
else thinks, says or does...
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - PRISONER PROCESSING - DAY
CLEO (POST-LAP)
...he will try, fail...
Trumbo is naked, along with a GROUP of prisoners who are
undergoing a body and cavity search by GUARDS. Trumbo is
stoic.
CLEO (POST-LAP) (CONT’D)
...fall down, get up, fall again.
But never, ever give up.
INT. TRUMBO FAMILY CAR - DRIVING - NIGHT
CLEO
So don’t waste your time being mad
at the people trying to stop your
father.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 49.
CONTINUED:
CLEO (CONT'D)
(smiles)
Feel sorry for them.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - LOADING DOCK - DAY
On a blazing summer afternoon, Trumbo off-loads 50-pound
slabs of frozen beef rib from a truck, balancing one on his
shoulder, sweating and moving past TWO PRISON GUARDS.
PRISON GUARD 1
(mid-story)
...so he files a complaint, says I
don’t treat him fair.
PRISON GUARD 2
Nigger said that?
PRISON GUARD 1
So warden says I gotta do right.
Boy wanna better job? I put him in
charge o’ the whole goddamn supply
room. ’Cause I know somethin’ the
warden don’t. Nigger can’t read!
Finally, Trumbo gets his huge side of beef to the pallet and
manages to drop it. He stands, soaked, catching his breath.
There’s a sharp pain in his back. He tries not to let it
show.
PRISON GUARD 2
(laughing)
Can’t read, that’s good!
PRISON GUARD 1
Serve the jig and warden both
right, supply gonna be a goddamn
mess!
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Scene 24 - Tension in the Supply Room
Very much a mess. Reports and records in random piles and
sloppy stacks. But also a cool, dark basement relief from
the swelter above.
A wrung-out Trumbo hands a clipboard to a powerful, severe
black man named VIRGIL BROOKS.
DALTON TRUMBO
Beef’s unloaded. Driver needs a
signature.
Brooks nods and takes the clipboard. Without really looking,
he scribbles a line near the bottom of the page.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 50.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Actually, he needs it... here.
Trumbo points to the still-blank signature line. Brooks
signs again.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
If you could use help, I used to be
in shipping, at a bakery.
BROOKS
I heard you was a writer.
DALTON TRUMBO
That, too.
BROOKS
And a Commie.
(with a hard look)
Fuck is wrong with you people?
This is a great country.
DALTON TRUMBO
Agreed.
Well, he tried. Heads out.
BROOKS
You type?
DALTON TRUMBO
Eighty words a minute.
BROOKS
Bullshit.
MOMENTS LATER - TRUMBO TYPES
With two fingers, copying off a rule book. Brooks glances at
his watch and chops the air. Trumbo stops.
BROOKS
Now if only I could read it.
(then, off typewriter page)
“Protocol as to return of goods:
There shall be triplicate copies of
form 14-A filed with Supply,
Shipping and office of the warden.”
Trumbo looks up at Brooks, surprised.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 51.
CONTINUED:
BROOKS (CONT’D)
You think you gonna teach me the
alphabet so I shake your hand all
grateful ’n’ say, “Thankee Missuh
Trumbo, you done changed mah life,
suh, I never fuhgit you.”
(then)
This ain’t no movie and I ain’t Mr.
Bojangles. I got twenty years for
killin’ a white man tried to rob my
bar, I did it and I’d do it again.
Look down on me and I will fuck you
up like you never been fucked up in
your whole bullshit Beverly Hills
life. I’m here to build my time
and get paroled, you wanna help
make that happen?
Brooks hefts a box of files onto the desk with a THUD.
BROOKS (CONT’D)
Welcome to fuckin’ Supply, comrade.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - PRISONER DORM - NIGHT
1951. One of the few prisoners still awake, Trumbo sits on
his cot in a single cone of light, scribbling on a pad.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
(starting a letter)
Dear Cleo.
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Scene 25 - Reflections of Love and Imprisonment
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
I don’t count the days or hours. I
count the seconds.
She switches the red light off and opens the shades. Summer
sun REVEALS developing equipment and dozens of photos hung to
dry. All of the children: fishing, on horseback, playing
tag, sitting for a group portrait.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
Sometimes I think I’ll die of
boredom. Other times, fear.
As she inspects each critically, she passes something we
don’t expect: a boxer’s speed bag hanging from the ceiling,
which she gives a single, light WHACK without looking.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 52.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - SUPPLY ROOM - DAY
Immaculately organized now.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
Not of this place.
Trumbo sits, dutifully typing at top speed.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
So far...
Prison Guard 1 enters, shocked at the crispness of the room --
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
...its challenges are all
surmountable. Augmented by days of
lovely boredom, so flat and calm in
the wake of all that churning,
ugly, luckless battle.
-- and the report Brooks writes with a fuck-you smile.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
No, my fear is for what will
happen...
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - DRIVEWAY - DAY
Cleo is playing a furious game of ping-pong against both
Chris and Mitzi --
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
...when I get out. To our
family...
-- while Niki sits nearby, absorbed in a copy of the Daily
Worker, with its headline: “NEW COMMUNIST HOLLYWOOD HEARINGS
BEGIN.”
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
...and our country.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - MESS - DAY
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
Not all the national news is
worrisome. Some reminds me that
what the imagination can’t conjure,
reality delivers with a shrug.
Nearly deserted but for Trumbo as he enters with a sheaf of
reports, crossing past a lone figure mopping the floor:
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 53.
CONTINUED:
Congressman J. Parnell Thomas, wearing a prison uniform
identical to Trumbo’s. He stops mopping. Trumbo pauses in a
doorway. The two men regard one another.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
And reality has delivered, in all
its beatific wonder, to the federal
penal system, former Congressman
and head of HUAC, J. Parnell
Thomas. Convicted of tax evasion.
Thomas goes back to work. Trumbo’s eyes linger on Thomas as
the former inquisitor dips his mop then swabs the floor.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
Proving the truism...
Trumbo deposits his sheaf on a table top and exits.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
“...Character is destiny.”
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - KITCHEN - DAY
On a sunny morning, her three children eating breakfast
around her, Cleo finishes this letter.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
Yet in all this, I know I’m the
luckiest unlucky man ever to live...
because you and the children warm,
feed, clothe, pacify and rejuvenate
me, by never leaving my heart.
Love, Prisoner Number 7551.
She touches the paper tenderly, gets up and moves to
shoeboxes that overflow with Trumbo letters, adding this one.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - MESS HALL - NIGHT
All chairs face a screen as Trumbo and SEVERAL HUNDRED
PRISONERS and GUARDS watch a war movie.
UP ON THE MOVIE SCREEN - JOHN WAYNE
Plays a gung-ho soldier, barking orders amid backlot GUNFIRE.
BACK DOWN IN THE AUDIENCE
Trumbo smokes and watches. Sitting next to him, Virgil
Brooks is totally caught up in the war drama.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 54.
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Scene 26 - Echoes of Tension
Trumbo, Brooks, Prisoners and Guards walk back to the dorm.
BROOKS
You know John Wayne?
DALTON TRUMBO
I do.
BROOKS
What’s he like?
DALTON TRUMBO
You’d love each other.
EXT. THE BROWN DERBY - TO ESTABLISH - DAY
It was, in fact, an enormous, brown, stucco hat.
INT. THE BROWN DERBY - CONTINUOUS
Near the front door, the MAITRE D’ slides Hedda’s coat on.
A MAN (O.S.)
‘Scuse me? Are you Hedda Hopper?
She turns and sees a YOUNG ENLISTED MAN in an army uniform,
awkward, nervous, respectful, whose empty right sleeve is
pinned up. He’s lost an arm.
HEDDA HOPPER
I -- yes, hello, how do you -- ?
She holds out her right hand, is instantly mortified, but the
Enlisted Man clasps her right with his left.
ENLISTED MAN
I don’t mean to bother you, I’m
here with my cousin, he’s a gaffer
at Columbia? Thought he’d treat me
to the big time. I read you a lot,
all the guys do. Not just the
showbiz stuff. You get what’s
really going on, with Russia, the
Commies here, the investigations.
Thank you.
HEDDA HOPPER
Where did you serve?
ENLISTED MAN
Korea.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 55.
CONTINUED:
HEDDA HOPPER
And you’re how old...?
ENLISTED MAN
(proudly)
Next month I’ll be twenty.
She has no words, just looks at this boy, struck to her core.
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - LAKE - DAY
March, 1951. An Appaloosa horse stands against the mountain
range, lazily dipping its head to chew grass, then raising it
to scan the horizon.
Nearby, Cleo focuses her camera on the majestic animal. She
CLICKS off several shots. Chris is nearby, holding spare
film canisters and lenses.
CHRIS
Mom.
CLEO
Mm?
CHRIS
I’ve got a new one.
She glances at Chris, who uses his hands to shove his cheeks
in toward each other -- then smiles, making his mouth kind of
a chubby vertical smile. Cleo chuckles and aims her camera
at him.
NIKI (O.S.)
Mom!
She turns. Her daughter is at the back door of the main
house.
NIKI (CONT’D)
You better come quick!
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - LIVING ROOM - DAY
Chris and Cleo enter, Niki crouched in front of the enormous
radio, dialing a clearer reception.
STRIPLING (ON RADIO)
...ever been a member of the
Communist Party?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 56.
CONTINUED:
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (ON RADIO)
I am not now nor have I ever been a
member of that party, no...
INT. U.S. CAPITOL - CAUCUS ROOM - CONTINUOUS
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
...I have always been a liberal
Democrat.
Robinson is in the same seat Trumbo occupied. But no longer
a packed circus, it is now a rehearsed degradation ceremony.
Robinson speaks into radio microphones splayed before him as
he looks into the eyes of Investigator Robert Stripling.
STRIPLING
But in your home, over the years,
there have been political meetings.
Attended by those we now know to be
Communists.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Yes sir, yes, that has now been
made clear to me... there were
tremendous activities that went on
in my house during the war...
EXT. TEXARKANA FEDERAL PRISON - DAY
A cinder-block Texas facility on a brown, scrubby flat.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (ON RADIO)
...but I did not know then their
true affiliations... the work they
were up to...
INT. TEXARKANA FEDERAL PRISON - HOSPITAL WING - CONTINUOUS
Arlen Hird lies in a bed among A DOZEN other infirm
PRISONERS, hearing through an old oaken radio:
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (ON RADIO)
...the lies...
Most of these prisoners could not care less -- but Hird is
gravely riveted by Robinson’s testimony.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (ON RADIO) (CONT’D)
...the deception.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 57.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - MESS HALL - DAY
Most PRISONERS ignore the hearing CRACKLING on a small radio,
but a FEW, including Virgil Brooks and Trumbo, listen.
Congressman Thomas, wiping down tables, is far away... but
listens intently, glancing occasionally at --
Trumbo, stony, a flicker of sadness in his eyes --
INT. U.S. CAPITOL - CAUCUS ROOM - CONTINUOUS
-- as Robinson’s eyes harden, a man determined --
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
I was duped and used. I was lied
to.
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
-- Cleo’s eyes close. The kids are transfixed.
STRIPLING (ON RADIO)
Who used you?
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Scene 27 - Betrayal in the Capitol
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Well, these... sinister forces who
ran these... organizations in which
I became a member, these.... uh, so-
called Communist fronts.
STRIPLING
Tell us the names of individuals.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - MESS - CONTINUOUS
Trumbo and Thomas, across the room from one another, both
wait.
STRIPLING (ON RADIO)
(after a beat)
Mr. Robinson?
INT. U.S. CAPITOL - CAUCUS ROOM - CONTINUOUS
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Well, you had Albert Maltz, uh,
Ring Lardner, Jr., and that top
fellow who they say is the, uh,
commissar out there...
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 58.
CONTINUED:
STRIPLING
Arlen Hird?
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Yes...
INT. TEXARKANA FEDERAL PRISON - HOSPITAL WING - CONTINUOUS
Arlen Hird is unflinching as he hears --
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (ON RADIO)
...Arlen Hird. Waldo Salt, Ian
McLellan Hunter.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - MESS - CONTINUOUS
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (ON RADIO)
And Dalton...
-- as is Trumbo --
INT. U.S. CAPITOL - CAUCUS ROOM - CONTINUOUS
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
...Trumbo.
-- Robinson feels relief, hoping this is all now behind him.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - MESS - CONTINUOUS
Brooks looks at the radio, disgusted, as we hear --
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (ON RADIO)
But at the time, it never entered
my mind that any of these people
were Communists...
BROOKS
(to Trumbo)
That guy’s a friend of yours?
(no response from Trumbo)
Lucky he’s out there.
And though he speaks to Trumbo, he speaks at Thomas:
BROOKS (CONT’D)
Snitch like that in here, you’re
fuckin’ dead.
Trumbo leaves a terrified Thomas with a smiling Brooks.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 59.
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Scene 28 - Tensions in the Alliance
BUSTLING. CROWDED. Edward G. Robinson is seated. Waiting.
His eyes flick to a closed door. Stenciled on it: JOHN
WAYNE, PRESIDENT.
INT. MOTION PICTURE ALLIANCE - WAYNE’S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
Wayne, Roy Brewer, Hedda and a FEW OTHERS meet.
JOHN WAYNE
Eddie oughta go back to work, he
did what he had to.
HEDDA HOPPER
He did what he was forced to.
JOHN WAYNE
Point is, he did it.
HEDDA HOPPER
Brave men are fighting this battle,
sacrificing in ways we can’t even
imagine, and you talk about some
asshole’s “career”? I’d see Eddie
Robinson and everyone like him dead
if it’d bring one boy back from
Korea. One.
JOHN WAYNE
So what’re you saying? Guys like
Eddie cooperate and get nothin’?
(then)
That isn’t right.
HEDDA HOPPER
Careful, Duke.
JOHN WAYNE
Or what, Hedda?
They stare at each other, neither moving or blinking.
JOHN WAYNE (CONT’D)
If I’m not careful. What?
The room is frozen, cigarette smoke the only moving thing.
Then Hedda breaks the tension with a quick smile.
HEDDA HOPPER
I had no idea you were such a
softie.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 60.
CONTINUED:
Wayne studies her, then allows himself a grin.
JOHN WAYNE
That’s me. All cuddles.
INT. MOTION PICTURE ALLIANCE OFFICES - LOBBY - DAY
Wayne walks Robinson out.
JOHN WAYNE
I’m proud of ya, Eddie.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
(flat, far off)
Thanks, Duke.
JOHN WAYNE
Wasn’t easy, I know, but ya did
good. I’m gonna call the studios,
the offers’ll pour in.
(off Robinson’s mute nod)
Y’okay?
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Sure. Thanks. And tell Hedda...
(beat)
Give her my love, willya?
JOHN WAYNE
Not sure she’d know what to do with
it. That is one hard broad.
CUT TO:
NEWSREEL FOOTAGE - STOCK
Of the end of the ROSENBERG espionage trial. The Couple has
been found guilty of selling atomic secrets to Russia and
sentenced to death, then...
CUT TO:
NEWSREEL FOOTAGE - STOCK
Of SENATOR JOSEPH McCARTHY’S rise as he purports to uncover
Communists throughout the United States.
INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - PRISONER PROCESSING - NIGHT
Spring, 1951. The same room where Trumbo was stripped naked
and examined upon his entrance. Now he is back in his suit,
tie and overcoat. His wedding ring, lighter, cigarette case
and holder are returned by a GUARD.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 61.
EXT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - OUTSIDE THE FRONT GATE - NIGHT
A taxi idles. Cleo waits. A SILHOUETTE approaches on the
other side of the closed gate, which RUMBLES open, revealing
Trumbo, now free. Cleo smiles, they move into one another at
last and kiss, then --
EXT. LAZY-T RANCH - DAY
-- Trumbo drowns in the hugs of Chris, 10, and Mitzi, 6.
DALTON TRUMBO
Giants! What have you huge,
beautiful strangers done with my
little ones?
Niki appears in a dress. Tall. Almost 13. A young woman.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Good God.
(as he moves to her)
Lipstick?
NIKI
(embarrassed)
Da-aaad.
He takes her hands and kisses her cheek. Then the five
reunited Trumbos move into the house, REVEALING:
A “FOR SALE” sign on a fence and tacked across it: “SOLD.”
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Scene 29 - Navigating Tensions in Hollywood
CROWDED. Trumbo enters and sees Arlen Hird at the far end of
the bar, makes his way to him, as a KNOT OF BUSINESSMEN cross
his path. Trumbo bumps one.
DALTON TRUMBO
Pardon me, I’m terribly --
It’s Buddy Ross. Trumbo is delighted.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Buddy. How are you?
Buddy is highly aware of the men in his group, watching him.
BUDDY ROSS
(to Trumbo, icy)
I got nothin’ to say to you.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 62.
CONTINUED:
Buddy turns and strides off, followed by the men, all of whom
WHISPER to each other.
INT. CHASEN’S - AT THE BAR - LATER
Trumbo and Hird sip their cocktails.
DALTON TRUMBO
So. Jail’s given us the plague.
ARLEN HIRD
Buddy was always an asshole.
He glances into the restaurant dining area, where he can see
Buddy animatedly making a pitch to that group of men.
ARLEN HIRD (CONT’D)
And he’s in trouble. Three movies,
three flops.
(re: Buddy’s sweaty chatter)
Look at him. Tryin’ to sell his
soul but can’t find it. Just hope
he stays afloat long enough to get
the shit sued out of him.
DALTON TRUMBO
By whom?
ARLEN HIRD
You, me, all of us, go on the
offensive this time, sue the
studios, all these guys, use their
own capitalist system against them,
in civil court -- make ’em admit
under oath --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- No, no, no, Jesus, haven’t you
spent enough time in court? I
have.
ARLEN HIRD
What do you, got a better idea?
DALTON TRUMBO
Do the one thing everyone says we
can’t. Work.
EXT. RUNDOWN HOLLYWOOD BACK STREET - DAY
Trumbo crosses a courtyard of slouching palms and tobacco-
colored bungalows, the offices of: KING BROTHERS PICTURES.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 63.
CONTINUED:
FRANK KING (PRE-LAP)
Look. You’re a great writer...
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Scene 30 - Negotiation Tensions
Trumbo sits across from a beefy, harried, vaguely menacing
man in his 40s named:
FRANK KING
...we make shit. I don’t see it.
DALTON TRUMBO
Mr. King, I’m a screenwriter. If I
couldn’t write shit, I’d starve.
On the walls, lurid posters of King Brothers movies: star-
free gangster, horror, sci-fi and western quickies.
FRANK KING
We can’t afford you.
DALTON TRUMBO
How much did you pay for the script
of...
(points to western poster)
...that?
FRANK KING
Twelve-hundred bucks.
DALTON TRUMBO
I’ll write you a movie for twelve
hundred, then.
FRANK KING
And you don’t want your name on it.
DALTON TRUMBO
No, you don’t want my name on it.
HYMIE KING (O.S.)
You got that right...
And in a corner WE REVEAL Frank’s younger brother, HYMIE,
owlish and clenched with worry.
HYMIE KING (CONT’D)
...especially if you’re still...
y’know... up to stuff. Are ya?
DALTON TRUMBO
Perpetually.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 64.
CONTINUED:
HYMIE KING
Jesus.
FRANK KING
Got any ideas?
DALTON TRUMBO
Well, I just got out of prison, how
about crime? The story of a
gangster, his rise and fall?
FRANK KING
I’ve seen that a few times.
DALTON TRUMBO
Because it always makes money.
FRANK KING
And when do I get the product?
DALTON TRUMBO
(rising)
Three days.
FRANK KING
A hundred page script in three
days? You tryin’ to fuck me? You
fuck me and I will fuck you --
DALTON TRUMBO
Mr. King, I’ve heard this speech.
It was better in jail.
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Scene 31 - Balancing Act
Trumbo writes, cigarette fuming like a factory chimney. The
shelves are stripped, moving boxes piled everywhere. He
arches, his back hurting so much he actually stops.
INT. LAZY-T RANCH - BATHROOM - NIGHT
Trumbo is naked in the tub again. He adds scotch to his
coffee and scribbles on typed scripts, pain-free.
INT. KING BROTHERS - OUTER OFFICE - DAY
Trumbo waits in the room’s only guest chair. A CURVACEOUS
RECEPTIONIST hunts flies with a swatter.
A door jerks open and a flushed Frank King stands hugely in
the doorway, holding a script.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 65.
CONTINUED:
FRANK KING
Are you kiddin’ me with this?
Trumbo looks up at him, alarmed. The Receptionist freezes in
mid-swat. Frank lunges at Trumbo, grabs his right hand,
shakes it hard, then YELLS into another doorway:
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
Hymie! Get out here! Pay the man!
Hymie emerges, pulls out a roll of cash, peels off fifties.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
Now look, we got this one, killer
in a swamp? Best character’s the
swamp. Plus, women in prison,
fighting in their underwear -- it’s
perfect except it stinks.
(to Hymie)
What else?
HYMIE KING
Pirates. Can’t afford the ocean.
FRANK KING
Fix ’em all.
EXT. HIGHLAND PARK NEIGHBORHOOD - DAY
1952. A working-class section of Los Angeles. Small, neat
houses; older cars. On this Sunday, MEN in sport shirts tend
to both, while WOMEN walk baby carriages or trim flowers and
KIDS play. A moving truck RUMBLES past, followed by --
INT./EXT. TRUMBO’S CAR - DRIVING/HIGHLAND PARK - CONTINUOUS
Trumbo at the wheel, Cleo beside him, the three kids in back,
all taking in this new block.
Trumbo’s gaze settles on a presidential election lawn sign:
EISENHOWER/NIXON, featuring photos of the two candidates.
Trumbo focuses on Nixon’s wide grin.
EXT. THE NEW TRUMBO HOME - HIGHLAND PARK - DAY
Lovely, compact. MOVERS unload furniture from their truck.
Niki pours lemonade for some who take a break.
NIKI
Hard work, you holding up okay?
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 66.
EXT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - BACK PATIO - DAY
Beside a shimmering pool, Trumbo and Mitzi tend to a tiny,
injured bird. She is upset, Trumbo warmly calm.
DALTON TRUMBO
It’s a broken wing but he’s going
to be just fine, sweetie.
MITZI
He’s scared.
DALTON TRUMBO
We’ll get him some water, some
nice, yummy worms, go inside, ask
mom for a shoebox.
She runs into the house. Trumbo cups the bird.
Ratings
Scene 32 - Vandalism and Vigilance
The house has been completely moved into. Cleo comes down
the stairs in a bathing suit.
CLEO
C’mon, Mitzi!
Mitzi races down the stairs, also in a bathing suit. Mother
and daughter cross through the house, excited. They pass a
YAWNING Trumbo still in his robe. He opens the front door --
EXT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - FRONT DOOR - CONTINUOUS
-- to get the paper and lying next to it, sees a plain
envelope.
Trumbo picks it up and opens it. It reads in block letters --
WELCOME TRAITOR. WE DID THE POOL. - YOUR NEIGHBORS
Alarmed, Trumbo hurries out to --
INT./EXT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - BACK PATIO -
CONTINUOUS
-- where Cleo comforts Mitzi, upset as Trumbo exits the house
to see --
-- their pool fouled with garbage, dirt, floating dead rats.
Trumbo immediately moves to his wife and child.
DALTON TRUMBO
All right. Inside.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 67.
CONTINUED:
He glances across his fence and sees his NEXT-DOOR NEIGHBOR,
30s, tight white t-shirt, watering his lawn. And an
unmistakably big, shit-eating grin on his face.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - DINING ROOM - NIGHT
Trumbo presides over the family dinner.
DALTON TRUMBO
There are many ignorant, angry
people in the world. And they
appear to be breeding in record
numbers. All we can do is stay
together and remain vigilant.
EXT. LOS ANGELES MOVIE THEATRE 2 - NIGHT
Fall, 1953, as WE FIND the bright marquee, announcing:
Roman Holiday. Starring Gregory Peck and Audrey Hepburn.
Below that, a lit poster for the breezy romantic comedy.
TIGHT on the movie’s credits and ISOLATE:
Original Story by Ian McLellan Hunter.
INT. LOS ANGELES MOVIE THEATRE 2 - CONTINUOUS
Among the ROWS of MOVIE FANS, Dalton and Cleo Trumbo enjoy a
lovely, funny scene, LAUGHING with the rest of the audience,
though perhaps with a bit more restraint.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER (PRE-LAP)
Big hit, great reviews --
INT. DINER - DOWNTOWN L.A. - DAY
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
-- haven’t worked in nine months.
Trumbo sips coffee. Hunter reaches for the cream.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER (CONT’D)
You?
DALTON TRUMBO
There aren’t quite enough zeroes in
a King Brothers salary to survive --
FLASHBACK TO:
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - DAY
Trumbo at the typewriter, surrounded by empty shelves.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 68.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
-- but they need scripts like an
army needs food. Quality, minimal;
quantity, maximal.
THIS OFFICE MORPHS OVER THE YEAR
As Trumbo writes, never leaving the desk, as if chained. And
WITHOUT A SINGLE CUT, all around him, the shelves fill with
scripts, the office growing more and more cluttered.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
Every work week is seven days,
every day is fourteen hours, every
minute I’m behind. And I’m
becoming a stranger in my own home.
BACK TO:
INT. DINER - DOWNTOWN L.A. - DAY
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
They need five of you.
Trumbo smiles slyly.
INT. MUSSO AND FRANK - NIGHT - TIGHT ON A TABLE
Of FIVE MEN, including Ian McLellan Hunter and Arlen Hird.
Though they’re sipping cocktails and coffee, they have the
clenched look of people in the middle of a job interview.
Which is not far from the truth because --
FRANK KING (O.S.)
The only question is, can these
pinkos write?
SEVERAL TABLES AWAY - FRANK AND HYMIE KING AND TRUMBO
Sit, the Kings looking over the table of writers like used
goods at a garage sale:
DALTON TRUMBO
(points)
That’s Ian McLellan Hunter.
FRANK KING
(impressed)
Guy wrote Roman Holiday.
HYMIE KING
Guy just got subpoenaed.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 69.
CONTINUED:
FRANK KING
Guy just got nominated.
DALTON TRUMBO
Everyone at that table’s been
nominated.
Frank nods. A waiter delivers drinks as a BUXOM STARLET
bends to whisper to Frank, who nods, kisses her hand, sends
her along. Hymie looks faintly ill with dread.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
It’d be like this... I find the
writer and work with him. He
delivers the script to me. If it’s
good, I’ll give it to you, if it’s
bad, I’ll fix it. Nobody gets paid
till you’re happy.
HYMIE KING
(scared, whispers)
And these writers are... all...
all, uh...
FRANK KING
Blacklisted, Jesus, you’re such a
chickenshit.
HYMIE KING
Y’know, we’re at war with the
Communists.
FRANK KING
No, we’re not.
HYMIE KING
It’s a new kind of war.
FRANK KING
Yeah, doesn’t exist, very new.
HYMIE KING
What about the Rosenbergs?
FRANK KING
What about ’em?
HYMIE KING
They stole the atom bomb.
FRANK KING
They didn’t steal it off a fuckin’
camera truck.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 70.
CONTINUED: (2)
Four of the five writers try to appear blandly appealing.
Only Arlen waves, coquettish. Hunter throws him a glare.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
(to Trumbo, earnestly)
Look. We bought a gorilla suit.
And we gotta use it.
INT. MUSSO AND FRANK - HALLWAY - NIGHT
Hird, Hunter and the other blacklistees confer with Trumbo.
ARLEN HIRD
So you had five jobs, now we got
’em all and you got none?
DALTON TRUMBO
I’m now free to go get five more
jobs and five more writers. Then
you each get five more jobs, five
more writers --
ARLEN HIRD
To keep that going, we’d need to
write every script in the business.
DALTON TRUMBO
(faux innocence)
What a thought, Arlen. Lord,
you’re a devious lad.
(then)
So who wants to write a gorilla
movie?
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
Who doesn’t?
Ratings
Scene 33 - A Family Business in the Shadows
Trumbo stands. His wife and three children sit.
DALTON TRUMBO
We now work at midnight, in thick
fog, among strangers.
The four Trumbos stare at him, all confused.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Not... literally.
(then)
We’re running a family business.
CUT TO:
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 71.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - FRONT HALL - DAY
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
We’ll be adding new phone lines.
A phone on a table. Then ANOTHER DISSOLVES IN alongside it.
Then ANOTHER. One RINGS.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
When you answer, never say “Trumbo
residence,” just --
Chris, 12, picks up the phone.
CHRIS
Hello.
A MAN’S VOICE (ON PHONE)
Is John Abbott there?
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
Whoever they ask for, find me or --
CHRIS
No, sir, may I take a message?
He listens as he writes a message for “John Abbott.”
BACK TO:
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY
DALTON TRUMBO
The door must be answered at all
hours.
CUT TO:
INT./EXT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - FRONT DOOR - NIGHT
A DOORBELL CHIMES. Mitzi, 8, opens it. A UNIFORMED
MESSENGER stands, checking a clipboard.
MESSENGER
Got a pickup from... Sally
Stubblefield?
Mitzi checks a side table stacked with large envelopes, finds
the one marked “Sally Stubblefield” and hands it to the
Messenger.
MESSENGER (CONT’D)
Can I get your dad to sign?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 72.
CONTINUED:
She scribbles on the clipboard like a pro and shuts the door.
BACK TO:
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY
DALTON TRUMBO
Dictation, short hand and typing
will be learned. Those of legal
age will have one of the most
important jobs imaginable.
CUT TO:
Ratings
Scene 34 - Tensions at Home
A scruffy little independent company.
DALTON TRUMBO (V.O.)
Courier.
Cleo’s car pulls up, she exits, moves to a delivery entrance.
The door opens. A WOMAN’S HAND holds out an envelope.
INT. TRUMBO’S CAR - MOMENTS LATER
Cleo checks the envelope, fat with twenty-dollar bills.
BACK TO:
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY
DALTON TRUMBO
(to his family)
Questions? Comments?
Niki raises her hand.
NIKI
Is there a schedule?
DALTON TRUMBO
A what.
NIKI
I need to know when I can do
homework. And I’m on a fundraising
committee for Negro Voting Rights,
plus --
CLEO
All right, honey, we’ll work it
out.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 73.
CONTINUED:
CLEO (CONT'D)
(as Trumbo begins to object,
she throws him a look)
Won’t we.
He doesn’t answer. Trumbo and Niki lock eyes in uneasy
silence.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - NIGHT
Niki watches a bulky new television set, the picture jittery:
ON TV - AFRICAN-AMERICAN PROTESTERS
In actual black & white news footage MARCH outside schools.
TV ANCHOR (V.O.)
...and protests continued as the
Supreme Court takes up the issue of
racial segregation...
NEARBY, TRUMBO TYPES
Then pulls rough copy from his carriage and holds it out to
Niki, but she is riveted by --
TV ANCHOR (V.O.)
...while throughout the nation,
heated debate over integration...
-- until she sees the page he proffers, SIGHS, takes it,
moves to a second typewriter and begins HAMMERING out the
final carbon, her eyes straying to the TV images of PROTESTS.
SAME SCENE - LATER
Trumbo is alone, the TV is off. Trumbo opens a drawer, takes
out a pill bottle, shakes out one tablet, then decides two
would be better.
As he pops them in his mouth, Cleo appears in the doorway, a
question on her lips. She sees her husband down the pills
with a shot of scotch. She quickly decides the question can
wait and retreats.
BACK TO:
Ratings
Scene 35 - Script Showdown at King Brothers
Hunter, Hird and Trumbo sit as Frank King gives “notes.”
FRANK KING
(picks up a script)
Which one’s “Graham Topper”?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 74.
CONTINUED:
The three writers look at one another, unsure.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
Nympho nun.
Ah. Hunter raises his hand.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
Great job.
He hands Hunter his script back.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
“Elwood Carr”? Murder at the
circus?
Trumbo nods, King slides him the script.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
Needs work. I knew it was the
clown.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
(consoling Trumbo)
It’s always the clown.
Now King levels a malevolent gaze at Hird.
FRANK KING
So. You’re the alien and the farm
girl.
ARLEN HIRD
Yeah.
FRANK KING
You wrote...
He opens the script to the middle, showing pages and pages
and pages of single-spaced, typewritten speeches.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
...the alien talking about “the
rights of workers,” the “pathology
of capitalism”?
(enraged)
The “dialectic”? I don’t even know
what that IS and I fucking hate it.
ARLEN HIRD
All right, so it’s a little dense --
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 75.
CONTINUED: (2)
FRANK KING
I pay for a script about a guy with
a giant bug head balling a girl in
a haystack, you give me shit
that’ll get me subpoenaed. And
also? Stinks!
(then)
Never. Again. Fix it.
But that last was not to Hird, it was to Trumbo. As King
shoots the script across the table at him.
Ratings
Scene 36 - Creative Struggles in the Night
Hird and Trumbo go over Hird’s screenplay.
ARLEN HIRD
Oh, fuck Frank King.
DALTON TRUMBO
(scribbling in the script
margins)
I said, until he’s happy, I
rewrite.
ARLEN HIRD
So you’re gonna stay up all night
with this crap, to what, get it to
his high literary, political
standards?
DALTON TRUMBO
It shouldn’t be to anyone’s
political standards. What the hell
were you thinking...?
Hird snatches Trumbo’s pen. Trumbo glares at him.
ARLEN HIRD
I was thinking. It’s why I’m a
writer. To say things that matter.
Jesus Christ, look at us.
(then)
I was a reporter, I got nominated
for a Pulitzer, I fought in Spain!
I know Ernest Hemingway! I
actually, I know him! And he knows
me! I walk into a bar in Paris,
he’d -- maybe he doesn’t know my
name but...
(then)
You won the National fucking Book
Award. What’re we doing?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 76.
CONTINUED:
Trumbo stands and moves to the bar. He takes two glasses.
SAME SCENE - LATER
The two men, several drinks in, fairly hammered, trying to
work.
ARLEN HIRD
So the alien... the alien... why
does he... want to impregnate the
farm girl? To start a race...
propagate, so they can all take
over...
DALTON TRUMBO
(shakes head)
She’s cute.
Hird considers this solemnly. Then --
ARLEN HIRD
Uh. Fine.
(a defeated pause)
I mean, don’t you ever miss writing
something, forget great, just good?
You gotta have actual ideas...
still... don’t you?
Trumbo smokes. Then:
DALTON TRUMBO
A few. One keeps buzzing around up
there... won’t go away. Cleo and I
were in Mexico at a bullfight, years
ago. Bull died and... a thousand
people cheered. Three didn’t.
Cleo, me... and a little boy down
front. Crying. I always wondered
why.
ARLEN HIRD
You write it, you’ll know. Just,
promise me, not for Frank King.
DALTON TRUMBO
The day I don’t have to and just
want to.
Ratings
Scene 37 - Oscar Night Dilemma
Spring, 1954, Oscar Night, the Trumbos, minus Niki, eat
snacks and chat.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 77.
CONTINUED:
MITZI
Niki! Hurry!
The sound of a toilet FLUSHING, then feet running.
NIKI
(racing in)
Who’s doing it?
MITZI
Kirk Douglas!
As they all settle and watch their black & white TV --
ON TV - MOVIE STAR KIRK DOUGLAS
38 years old, chiseled and dashing in white tie and tails:
KIRK DOUGLAS
...the envelope? And the Oscar
goes to...
(pulls out the card)
...Roman Holiday! By Ian McLellan
Hunter!
The THEME from Roman Holiday and APPLAUSE, while Douglas
scans for the writer who will never appear.
IN THE LIVING ROOM - THE TRUMBOS
Sit for a moment, not sure how to react to this, until --
NIKI
So, do we get to be happy now?
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - DAY
Trumbo, Hunter and between them: that gold Oscar statuette.
DALTON TRUMBO
I don’t want it.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
Well, I don’t want it.
DALTON TRUMBO
Your name’s on it.
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
You wrote it.
DALTON TRUMBO
They gave it to you.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 78.
CONTINUED:
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
And it’s done me wonders.
(hands Trumbo a script)
Here’s the gorilla movie.
Chris enters.
CHRIS
Phone for you, Dad.
DALTON TRUMBO
Which name?
CHRIS
No. You. Some guy named Buddy
Ross.
Trumbo is surprised as he picks up the extension.
DALTON TRUMBO
(teasing, into phone)
Buddy who...?
Ratings
Scene 38 - A Desperate Plea
This is not the Buddy Ross we’ve known. He vibrates with
exhausted panic as he takes a seat near Trumbo.
BUDDY ROSS
So’s it true, the rumor? You wrote
Roman Holiday?
Trumbo just looks at him, then --
DALTON TRUMBO
What can I do for you, Buddy?
Buddy hesitates, barely knowing where to begin.
BUDDY ROSS
My movies’ve all bombed, dug me
into a hole. I finally got
something going. Classy. Three
big stars. The script...
(he can’t finish)
What script, there’s no script, I
got eleven writers who fucked me,
now the actors’re gonna pull out
’n’ if they do, I lose everything.
DALTON TRUMBO
When do you shoot?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 79.
CONTINUED:
BUDDY ROSS
Ten days.
DALTON TRUMBO
Is there anything?
He hands Trumbo three typed pages. Trumbo studies them.
BUDDY ROSS
There’d be no credit, obviously, I
can’t pay you till we start
shooting, and I wouldn’t blame you
if you spit in my face. But we did
good stuff, back then, we really
did. Please?
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - DAY
Trumbo and Hird.
DALTON TRUMBO
I owe the Kings a rewrite, I can’t
do both, I need you to take over.
ARLEN HIRD
So you can help out that great guy,
Buddy Ross.
DALTON TRUMBO
So we can keep tearing down the
blacklist.
ARLEN HIRD
Oh, Jesus, here we go...
DALTON TRUMBO
This is a huge movie, if Buddy gets
a good script --
ARLEN HIRD
-- which you’re gonna give him --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- which I’m going to sell him.
ARLEN HIRD
Yep. Money. Always money.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 80.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
Why do you not see this? We get
one big movie, we could get all the
big movies and the whole rotten
thing’ll collapse from the sheer
irony that every unemployable
writer is employed.
ARLEN HIRD
Jesus, do you ever say anything
that isn’t gonna get chiselled on a
rock?
Ratings
Scene 39 - Chaos in the Kitchen
Near an open window overlooking the back patio, Cleo dries
some dishes at the sink. Trumbo and Hird’s ARGUMENT can be
heard but is muffled by doors and walls.
Cleo HUMS to herself, as nearby --
Chris cleans his trumpet, while Mitzi tends to another
wounded bird. Mitzi catches Cleo’s eye and --
Cleo smiles and TOSSES a water glass into the air, then a
second, then a third, JUGGLING them. Mitzi LAUGHS with
delight, Chris smiles then --
ARLEN HIRD (O.S.)
(suddenly loud)
...I am not gonna help you help
Buddy Ross!
The kids are startled --
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - CONTINUOUS
ARLEN HIRD
We should be suing that cockroach
into the ground, along with every
studio, congressman, producer --
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
-- as is Cleo, who manages to keep the glasses aloft --
DALTON TRUMBO (O.S.)
(exploding)
Brilliant -- !
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 81.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - CONTINUOUS
DALTON TRUMBO
-- keep losing, give all your money
to lawyers --
ARLEN HIRD
I’d rather lose for the right
reason than --
DALTON TRUMBO
(roaring)
WHY?
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
Cleo’s deft hands flutter, a glass FUMBLES off her fingertips
and HITS the floor in an EXPLOSION of shards --
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - CONTINUOUS
DALTON TRUMBO
It’s LOSING!
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - FRONT DOOR - CONTINUOUS
Cleo sweeps her children out.
CLEO
C’mon, kids, we’re going to the
store.
CHRIS
(to Cleo)
But --
DALTON TRUMBO (O.S.)
I lose -- !
CLEO
(to her kids)
Now.
DALTON TRUMBO (O.S.)
-- you lose -- !
MITZI
Which store?
DALTON TRUMBO (O.S.)
-- we ALL lose -- !
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 82.
CONTINUED:
CLEO
Any store.
Cleo’s calm but sharp demeanor is not to be ignored. The
kids follow her out.
Ratings
Scene 40 - Clash of Ideals
DALTON TRUMBO
-- and the whole goddamn country
stays scared and dead! You want to
live like this forever? Or do
something? We can beat them, we
can win!
ARLEN HIRD
I don’t care if I win --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- Oh, bullshit, everyone wants to
win --
ARLEN HIRD
No, you wanna win, I wanna change
things.
DALTON TRUMBO
I want to win so I can change
things --
ARLEN HIRD
No, you want the Oscar you can’t
have and the money you burn through
writing shit for idiots.
DALTON TRUMBO
Why do I have to explain everything
like you’re a fucking child?
A beat, as Hird retreats quietly...
ARLEN HIRD
You don’t. Okay? You don’t.
(heads for exit)
Do what you do. It’s fine. For
you.
Trumbo, sensing he’s perhaps gone too far --
DALTON TRUMBO
(calming)
Arlen...
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 83.
CONTINUED:
ARLEN HIRD
I know what I’m fighting for. You
want another lake. And you know
what? You’re gonna get it.
Hird is gone. Trumbo is alone in the sudden quiet.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - DAY
Trumbo sits, still and silent, smoke curling off the
cigarette in his fingers, staring at a blank typewriter page.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - BATHROOM - NIGHT
The tub is full of hot water, Trumbo is in there, writing at
about half-speed, pausing every few words to smoke and rub
his head.
Ratings
Scene 41 - A Birthday Divided
Cleo drops off a script to the Secretary, gets the cash
envelope.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - BATHROOM - NIGHT
Trumbo in the tub again, writing at top speed as WE RACK
FOCUS TO that pill bottle we saw in his office. And REVEAL
here it’s Benzedrine. From downstairs, he can just barely
hear CHEERFUL FAMILY VOICES --
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - DINING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Niki, just turning 16 now, blows out the candles on her
birthday cake. APPLAUSE from Cleo, Chris and Mitzi, all
hugging her.
MITZI
You sure we shouldn’t go knock?
CLEO
I’m sure.
Niki stares at her smoking candles, angry.
NIKI
He can’t take five minutes -- ?
CLEO
No.
NIKI
(testing)
Two minutes. One minute.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 84.
CONTINUED:
CLEO
Chris. Get the good plates.
NIKI
I’ll do it.
She exits and --
INT. TRUMBO HOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS
-- parks herself outside the closed bathroom door. She
hesitates, then KNOCKS. The typing STOPS.
NIKI
Dad? We’re having birthday cake.
The door flies open and there’s Trumbo, soaked, half-in his
robe, enraged.
DALTON TRUMBO
When I’m working, you don’t knock!
NIKI
But it’s my --
DALTON TRUMBO
You don’t knock! Ever!
NIKI
So the house is on fire, you don’t
want to know?
DALTON TRUMBO
I work in a BATHTUB! Surrounded by
WATER! So even if the whole WORLD
catches fire --
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - HALL - CONTINUOUS
DALTON TRUMBO
(raging at Niki)
-- I can still be this family’s
personal goddamn SLAVE and all I
ask is not to be interrupted for
every fucking slice of FUCKING CAKE
you see fit to -- !
Cleo appears, slicing a look into Trumbo that shames him into
silence. He takes a breath, all is still, then he SLAMS the
door and is gone. Niki, terrified and humiliated, runs down
the hall, crying.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 85.
CONTINUED:
Cleo stands, unsure what to do. She lifts her hand to knock
on the bathroom door, again hears TYPING and thinks better of
it. She then follows the sound of her daughter’s SOBS.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - HALL - NIGHT
A bone-tired Trumbo heads for the master bedroom. Through
the open door, he sees the bluish flicker of a black & white
TV and some familiar words from long ago...
EDWARD G. ROBINSON/”MANNY” (V.O.,
O.S.)
What do you want? What we all
want.
Ratings
Scene 42 - Fighting Shadows
Trumbo enters, sees Cleo watching an old movie on TV. It’s
the one from MGM, 1947. Trumbo is transfixed.
ON TV - WE FINALLY GET TO SEE THE WHOLE SCENE
Smoothly acted, shot and cut together under lush MUSIC:
EDWARD G. ROBINSON/“MANNY” (ON TV)
To not die young, poor or alone.
“ROCCO” (ON TV)
Manny, these guys... I don’t give
’em what they’re after, they’ll
kill me.
“Rocco” starts to go.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON/“MANNY” (ON TV)
Hold it, Rocco.
“Manny” takes out his revolver -- and aims it at “Rocco,” who
freezes.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON/“MANNY” (ON TV)
(CONT’D)
If we don’t fight these guys,
sure, maybe you get that long,
happy life we all want... but your
eyes never really close again...
’cause you spend that life scared
of every noise in the dark. We
both do.
(beat)
I can’t let you do this, Rocco...
so I just have to convince you I’m
right.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 86.
CONTINUED:
Then -- “Manny” TWIRLS the gun with practiced élan, so he’s
now holding the barrel as he HANDS it to “Rocco,” butt-first.
“Rocco,” thrown and relieved, takes it.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON/“MANNY” (ON TV)
(CONT’D)
(grins)
After all, kid, what’re friends
for?
TRUMBO AND CLEO BOTH WATCH, NEVER LOOKING AT EACH OTHER
As she’s taken back to that simpler time a decade ago.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - NIKI’S ROOM - NEXT DAY
She is still enraged. Her mother KNOCKS.
NIKI
Don’t defend him, okay? He knows
he’s wrong, he just doesn’t like
that I saw it before he did.
CLEO
I think he was just surprised. To
see another adult in the house.
NIKI
He has to be right, all the time.
How do you stand it?
CLEO
Well, there are times... especially
lately...
(beat)
C’mon.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - CLEO’S DARK ROOM - DAY
Cleo and Niki stand at that speed bag, hanging from the
ceiling.
Cleo JABS it once, it bounces, she JABS again, it bounces
faster, then again and again and again and again and to her
daughter’s amazement, Cleo is as expert as a pro.
NIKI
Do you imagine that’s his head?
CLEO
No.
Cleo stops. Offers Niki a chance.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 87.
CONTINUED:
CLEO (CONT’D)
But you can.
Niki hesitates, then crosses over, lifts her fist and --
Ratings
Scene 43 - Confronting the Past
Niki crosses past SECRETARIES and CREW in a whirl of pre-
production. She delivers the script to Buddy. He takes it,
kisses it with a LOUD SMACK. He holds his hand out to shake
hers but she’s already turned to exit, stone-faced.
INT./EXT. AN OLD APARTMENT BUILDING - DAY
Trumbo KNOCKS on a peeling door, soon opened by an earnest
YOUNG MAN.
DALTON TRUMBO
I’d like to see Arlen Hird?
YOUNG MAN
I’m Andrew, his son...
DALTON TRUMBO
(shakes hands)
Dalton Trumbo. I’m certain your
father’s said awful things about
me, I assure you they’re all true
but I’ve opted for early senility
and forgotten everything, so...
ANDREW HIRD
Mr. Trumbo...
The young man pauses, unsure how to go on.
INT. FUNERAL HOME - DAY
A cheap closed casket.
His son Andrew sits in the front row. Next to him, a YOUNGER
BROTHER. Both wearing yarmulkes. And behind them, row after
row, all empty. And in the very back, Trumbo sits with Ian
McLellan Hunter.
INT. FUNERAL HOME - HALL - DAY
Hunter and Trumbo shake hands with the two Hird boys. Andrew
reaches into his coat.
ANDREW HIRD
Dad left something for you.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 88.
CONTINUED:
He hands a small ledger to Trumbo.
ANDREW HIRD (CONT’D)
A record... money he owed you, some
other people. I’m sorry, I wish we
could pay you back.
Trumbo is moved, shakes his head, lays a hand on the boy’s
shoulder.
DALTON TRUMBO
No, Andrew... no. I owed him. The
debts are all mine.
INT. EDWARD G. ROBINSON’S MANSION - LIVING ROOM - DAY
Trumbo waits alone, admiring Robinson’s magnificent and huge
collection of French Impressionists. Where before there were
five or six paintings here, now:
Over twenty famous works of art crowd the spotlit walls.
Robinson enters, pauses in the doorway with his BUTLER, nods
for him to leave, then gathers himself, striding in.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Well.
DALTON TRUMBO
Hello, Eddie.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
This is a bit of a surprise...
What, uh... what can I do for you?
Trumbo takes an envelope out.
DALTON TRUMBO
Arlen died.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
I heard, I was on location.
Trumbo offers the envelope. Robinson just looks at it.
DALTON TRUMBO
He left a record of his debts.
(the envelope)
This is the money you gave us. For
the defense fund. It’s everything
we owe you. Arlen included.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 89.
CONTINUED:
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
No, now that was a gift --
DALTON TRUMBO
We’d like it off the books.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
What is this supposed to be, some
kind of message? What you and
Arlen and the Great Hollywood Ten
all think of me?
Trumbo lays the envelope on a table and starts to go.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (CONT’D)
Fine. Fine. But first, you’re
gonna listen.
Trumbo pauses. Robinson gathers himself.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON (CONT’D)
After you went to jail, I didn’t
work for a year. No offers, not
even an audition. People’d see me,
cross the street, people I loved,
people I made rich.
(then)
I sat in front of that Committee...
why? I didn’t do anything, none of
us did anything, we were just
stupid babies, with no business in
any of it!
(long beat)
I just wanted my life back. They
had every name -- yours, Arlen’s,
everybody’s, I didn’t give them
anything they didn’t already have,
I ended it, is all, I just... ended
it.
DALTON TRUMBO
Eddie, you don’t end something like
this by giving them what they have
no right to ask for.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
You’re gonna tell me how I shoulda
handled it? Like you handled
Congress?
DALTON TRUMBO
Are you proud of what you did, is
that what you’re saying?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 90.
CONTINUED: (2)
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Proud? Who the hell gets to be
proud? You! With your fake names
and fronts, got all the work you
want, I gotta go out in the world,
every day, this --
(his own face)
-- is my work -- I got no one else
to be, I did what I had to --
DALTON TRUMBO
(comes at him, hard)
You did what you wanted. And you
did it for more! More movies, more
money, more dead bullshit on your
walls!
Robinson is pale and shaken. Trumbo takes a step back.
Tries to calm himself. Starts to go.
EDWARD G. ROBINSON
What I did, I did. But you get to
wonder how many years you hacked
off Arlen’s life to show the world
what a rebel genius you are. Live
with that.
Ratings
Scene 44 - Betrayal at Romanoff's
Trumbo downs a shot at the stylish, CROWDED industry watering
hole as the BARTENDER pours him another.
HEDDA HOPPER (O.S.)
Drinking alone?
He turns. She smiles. A beat as he adjusts to her presence.
DALTON TRUMBO
Preferably. You?
HEDDA HOPPER
Work. What’re you up to these
days?
DALTON TRUMBO
You know, Hedda, one more...
(downs his next shot)
...and I just might tell you.
HEDDA HOPPER
Then I’m buying.
(signals for two more)
Come on, I hear the rumors.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 91.
CONTINUED:
HEDDA HOPPER (CONT'D)
Show me you’re still in the game,
fighting the good fight.
(lowers voice, leans in)
Rub my face in it. Whisper a movie
you’ve written in secret. Maybe
I’ve even heard of it.
DALTON TRUMBO
Maybe you have.
A familiar face breaks through the CROWD --
BUDDY ROSS
(to Hedda)
Sorry, sorry, sorry, I’m shooting,
it’s crazy, I --
He sees Trumbo and freezes. Hedda clocks that.
HEDDA HOPPER
Buddy. You know Dalton Trumbo.
A long pause as the two men look at one another.
DALTON TRUMBO
We worked together.
(then)
At MGM. A million years ago.
HEDDA HOPPER
(to Buddy)
I hear the script for your new one
needs work. Hire Dalton, he used
to be pretty good... and price-wise
he’d be bargain basement.
The Bartender brings the two shots.
HEDDA HOPPER (CONT’D)
(to Trumbo)
Of course, you’d never. Not after
Buddy named names.
Trumbo tries to hide his surprise. And almost succeeds.
HEDDA HOPPER (CONT’D)
You didn’t know? Mm-hm. Word was,
he’d hired someone he shouldn’t
have. So he got subpoenaed,
testified. Closed session, no
press. Makes it easier.
(beat)
He named you, of course.
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 92.
CONTINUED: (2)
HEDDA HOPPER (CONT’D)
Now he’s been cleared. Gets to go
make his movie. In a way, thanks
to you.
Buddy looks like he’s being turned on a spit. Trumbo downs
his shot and exits as he SLAPS a bill on the bar.
Ratings
Scene 45 - Clash of Priorities
WHAP! A below-the-fold headline is SLAPPED onto Trumbo’s
desk by Niki, highlighting the headline:
“CONGRESSMEN DEMAND RACIAL SEGREGATION”
“’Negroes Have No Federal Right To Equality,’
Say Leading Democrats”
NIKI
(appalled, angry)
Can you believe it?
Trumbo is at his desk, sliding pages into a manila envelope
as Chris waits, wearing a sport coat and tie, and Niki raises
a clipboard of signatures she holds.
NIKI (CONT’D)
Democrats. Voting for segregation.
DALTON TRUMBO
(correcting)
Southern Democrats.
NIKI
Here’s the petition.
(her clipboard)
I’ve already got over a thousand
signatures.
DALTON TRUMBO
(signs)
Happy to make it a thousand and
one.
(hands Chris his envelope)
And the new draft. I need it
delivered to Hymie King in Agoura.
CHRIS
Wait, I thought the Kings, in
Hollywood.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 93.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
No, these are the rewrites, being
shot tonight, Hymie needs them on
set, now.
NIKI
Agoura’s fifty miles.
DALTON TRUMBO
I’m sure Chris knows that.
NIKI
Well, he can’t --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- excuse me?
NIKI
He has a date.
(to Chris)
Tell him.
CHRIS
(hating this)
I...
DALTON TRUMBO
(to Chris)
Is she your girlfriend? Is it
serious? Does she have some
objection to romantic Agoura?
NIKI
He’s taking her to a movie.
DALTON TRUMBO
All right, Nikola, then you deliver
the pages.
NIKI
I have a protest.
(the clipboard)
For this.
DALTON TRUMBO
Since when do protests have hard
start times -- ?
CHRIS
I’ll do it --
DALTON TRUMBO
Niki. Will do it.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 94.
CONTINUED: (2)
NIKI
I said, I can’t --
DALTON TRUMBO
Young lady, you will --
NIKI
(her clipboard)
-- this is important --
DALTON TRUMBO
(his envelope)
-- so is this --
NIKI
This is important to me -- the
date’s important to Chris -- figure
something else out --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- I’ll tell you what I’ve figured
out, that under this roof resides a
moody, self-righteous malcontent.
NIKI
Yep. We all live with him.
She coolly exits past a rattled Chris, and as she turns in
the hall, passes Cleo, who’s been listening. Trumbo, who
can’t see Cleo, nods for Chris to pick up the scenes. Chris
does so obediently, and also exits the study... under Cleo’s
protective gaze. She has now made a decision.
Ratings
Scene 46 - Confrontation in the Dark
One light on, upstairs.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM - CONTINUOUS
Trumbo enters in his pajamas. Cleo, in robe and slippers,
sits by the window, looking out.
DALTON TRUMBO
She hasn’t been gone that long and
it’s not that late. This is a
blatant attempt to manipulate
worry.
CLEO
Do you know when I realized I had
to leave Hal?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 95.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
(beat; thrown; then)
Hal, Hal who?
CLEO
My first husband.
DALTON TRUMBO
(struck)
Jesus Take The Wheel...
CLEO
It wasn’t when you hired that
detective... or asked me if I
really loved him... because by then
we both knew the answer was no.
(then)
It was my wedding night.
(to clarify for him)
My first wedding night. With Hal.
Nothing about this turn in the conversation is anything he
ever expected.
DALTON TRUMBO
If we’re going to travel back in
time to that unholy coupling, I
have a medical obligation to drink.
And he heads for a small tray of glasses and scotch on the
bureau top, pouring himself three fingers.
CLEO
I saw this was not a man I could
have children with. He’d bully me,
them and we’d end up like every
miserable family since forever.
But I knew you’d never be like
that. Whatever went on out there,
the only thing that’d matter,
really matter, was us.
DALTON TRUMBO
All that matters is us --
CLEO
No, not anymore, you have no idea
what you could lose --
DALTON TRUMBO
My career, the first amendment, the
country? Am I missing anything?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 96.
CONTINUED: (2)
CLEO
Us, you’re losing us. Since
prison, you don’t talk or ask, just
snap and bark -- I keep waiting for
you to start pounding the dinner
table with a gavel --
DALTON TRUMBO
So in addition to being a pariah
out in the world, I now have the
supreme joy of battling
insurrection --
CLEO
-- please, “insurrection” --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- in my own home, where these ten
fingers literally feed, clothe and
shelter us --
CLEO
This isn’t just happening to you. We
all hurt! Niki, me, your friends --
DALTON TRUMBO
Friends, what friends? Who the
hell has the luxury of “friends”?
I’ve got allies and enemies,
there’s no room for anything else!
CLEO
(quietly)
We know. Believe me.
DALTON TRUMBO
Good, then this discussion ends.
CLEO
This isn’t a discussion, it’s a
fight. And this ends it: I will
not let our children be raised by a
bully -- any bully.
Ratings
Scene 47 - Confrontations and Commitments
Niki sits with THREE AFRICAN-AMERICAN TEENAGERS. Leaning
against the table, the handwritten signs from their protest.
All the kids chat animatedly, then stop... seeing a somber
Trumbo approach.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 97.
EXT. DINER - DOWNTOWN L.A. - NIGHT
Trumbo exits with Niki. Then she stops.
NIKI
I didn’t want to fight in front of
my friends but --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- I‘m not here to fight --
NIKI
-- I’m not coming home.
She folds her arms and stands. He pauses, then speaks
carefully, quietly, almost hesitantly.
DALTON TRUMBO
Your mother is a quiet person.
(dry)
Normally.
(then)
The effect of which is... she can
actually make me hear myself... and
lately, it’s not a sound I like
much. Because what I hear mostly
is just... how afraid I am.
This is not what Niki expected. She softens, listening.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Afraid this is scarring you, all of
you... and what if it’s all for
nothing? How do I live with that?
(then)
So I fight. It’s all I know how to
do anymore, just... rage... at
anyone in my way.
(looking tenderly at her)
But you’ve never been in my way,
Nikola, not once... and never could be.
Tears in her eyes now, she leans against him, allowing him to
put one arm across her shoulders and kiss her head.
NIKI
It’s crazy how mad you make me,
since all I ever wanted is to be
just like you...
DALTON TRUMBO
You are. Which I wouldn’t wish on
anybody.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 98.
INT. KING BROTHERS - FRANK’S OFFICE - DAY
Frank sits at his desk -- across from Roy Brewer.
ROY BREWER
We know. Okay? It’s a small town
and the gossip’s always true.
(then)
Fire Dalton Trumbo and the rest of
’em or you got pickets, headlines
and boycotts. We will put you
right out of business.
FRANK KING
We...?
ROY BREWER
Motion Picture Alliance for the
Preservation of American Ideals.
Me, Ronald Reagan, Hedda Hopper,
the guilds, studio heads. John
Wayne.
FRANK KING
I love John Wayne.
ROY BREWER
I’ll introduce you. You guys could
do a movie together.
FRANK KING
That’d be great, only...
Frank King rises, holding a baseball bat.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
...I don’t think you and me are
gonna be pals.
King swings viciously and SMASHES a lamp. Brewer covers up,
SCREAMS and goes for the door. Locked. Frank comes at him.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
You gonna stop me hiring union?
I’ll go downtown, grab some winos
and hookers, there’s my next cast
’n’ crew! It doesn’t matter! I
make garbage!
He swings and SHATTERS a poster.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 99.
CONTINUED:
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
Wanna call me a pinko in all the
papers? Do it! Nobody who goes to
my movies can fuckin’ read!
Another tight swing and he BLASTS a second poster.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
I’m in this for the money and the
pussy and they’re both fallin’ off
the trees. Take that away from me.
Frank jams the tip of the bat into Brewer’s throat.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
Go ahead. I won’t “sue” you. But
this --
(the bat)
-- will be the last fuckin’ thing
you see when I beat you to fuckin’
death with it.
Brewer just stands, hyperventilating with terror. Frank TAPS
the door with the bat and it opens from the outside. Roy
Brewer bolts --
INT. KING BROTHERS - OUTER OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
-- tears across the room, passing Hymie and practically
tripping over a seated, startled Dalton Trumbo and --
-- Brewer glances at Trumbo, acknowledging the writer with
disbelief as he tumbles out the door.
FRANK KING
Fuck do you want?
DALTON TRUMBO
New script.
FRANK KING
Yeah?
DALTON TRUMBO
Family film, something I’ve been
mulling for a while. About a
Mexican boy and his pet bull.
(hands it to him)
One problem.
TIGHT ON the title page: The Brave One. By Robert Rich.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 100.
CONTINUED:
KING
Expensive?
DALTON TRUMBO
Worse. Good.
Ratings
Scene 48 - The Shadow of Robert Rich
Fall, 1956. Hundreds of eyes drink in the vivid color:
UP ON THE SCREEN
The Brave One’s opening credits. Stirring MUSIC. Vibrant
Mexican imagery of a boy and his bull.
IN THE AUDIENCE
Amid a sea of clean-cut ’50s FAMILIES WITH KIDS and a FEW
YOUNG CALIFORNIA-CASUAL COUPLES we find:
THE FIVE TRUMBOS
Dalton, Cleo, Niki, Chris and Mitzi, munching popcorn, as:
UP ON THE SCREEN
The writing credits appear and we see:
Original Story by Robert Rich.
CLOSE ON DALTON TRUMBO’S FACE
And that writing credit is reflected in his glasses -- as if
tattooed across his eyes, marking him: Robert Rich.
CLEO
Looks down and adjusts the pleats of her dress until the
credit passes.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY
Trumbo, stone-frozen with shock, is on the phone:
DALTON TRUMBO
Who told you?
(beat)
What else did they say?
Cleo appears in the doorway. Sensing something.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
You, too. Goodbye, Frank.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 101.
CONTINUED:
He hangs up. Cleo is tense with dread.
CLEO
What?
DALTON TRUMBO
The Brave One was nominated for an
Academy Award.
INT. KING BROTHERS - FRANK’S OFFICE - NIGHT
FRANK KING
No, Hymie, this is nothing like
Roman Holiday.
Frank, Hymie and Trumbo are gathered.
FRANK KING (CONT’D)
Roman Holiday had a guy with a name
and a body they could give the
award to. There is no Robert Rich.
If it wins, who gets the thing?
HYMIE KING
Well, maybe it won’t. I mean, it’s
not that good.
(to Trumbo)
No offense.
DALTON TRUMBO
None taken.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT
Spring, 1957 and another Oscar telecast, on a slightly larger
black & white TV screen. Trumbo, Cleo, Chris, Niki, and
Mitzi are all assembled once again. Tense. Expectant.
ON TV - MOVIE STAR DEBORAH KERR
Sparkling with sexy sophistication (in actual footage of the
telecast) as she takes the card from the envelope --
DEBORAH KERR
The Brave One! Robert Rich!
INT. MOTION PICTURE ALLIANCE OFFICES - BULLPEN - DAY
An agitated Roy Brewer is pacing, on the phone:
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 102.
CONTINUED:
ROY BREWER
We’re looking into it, we can’t
find Mr. Rich anywhere, he
apparently doesn’t --
(beat)
No. Don’t print tha --
Suddenly, in the open doorway, a grimly hatted Hedda Hopper.
ROY BREWER (CONT’D)
(hanging up)
I gotta go.
HEDDA HOPPER
Who the hell is Robert Rich? And
it had better not be who they say.
EXT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - BACK PATIO - DAY
1958. A playful Trumbo holds court before FIVE JOURNALISTS.
JOURNALIST
Mr. Trumbo, are you Robert Rich?
Did you write The Brave One?
DALTON TRUMBO
My policy is, never claim credit
for any one movie. That way, it’s
possible I had something to do with
all of them. Except the stinkers,
all written by my enemies.
The Journalists all CHUCKLE and scribble, eating it up.
JOURNALIST
What’s your position on the
blacklist?
DALTON TRUMBO
Well, on it. Along with thousands
of others.
JOURNALIST
Are you using this Robert Rich
controversy to try and end it?
DALTON TRUMBO
The Brave One’s a nice little
movie. If rumors of my involvement
can sell a few tickets, then good.
He sees Niki exit the house and approach.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 103.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
And if the strange circumstances of
its authorship can get a few
questions asked, even better.
NIKI
(whispers)
Dad? Sorry, some crazy guy on the
phone says he’s Kirk Douglas.
Ratings
Scene 49 - A Script for Spartacus
Opened by Niki, revealing a tan, grinning, dimple-chinned --
KIRK DOUGLAS
Niki?
(holds out his hand to the
stunned teen)
Kirk.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - NIGHT
Trumbo settles into a chair across from Douglas.
DALTON TRUMBO
Apologies. We’ve had more than our
share of crank calls lately.
KIRK DOUGLAS
I can’t imagine.
DALTON TRUMBO
So.
KIRK DOUGLAS
So. I’m doing a new picture. And
I just got the script.
From a valise he hefts a document the size of a phone book.
DALTON TRUMBO
That’s about seven hours of
entertainment here.
KIRK DOUGLAS
And not a single page is
entertaining. But there’s a good
story in there, somewhere. About
one man...
(a knowing smile)
...who tried to take on the whole
world.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 104.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
You’ve got me so far.
KIRK DOUGLAS
He was a slave who led a revolt
against the Roman Empire...
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - BATHROOM - DAY
On a nearby stool, we glimpse a water-dappled script cover:
SPARTACUS
Screenplay by Sam Jackson
Trumbo is in the tub, writing and talking on the phone:
DALTON TRUMBO
...no, I can’t tell you what I’m
working on now except to say, the
blacklist is alive and well and so
is the black market.
(beat)
Yes, you can quote me. Seeing my
name in the paper drives certain
people out of their minds...
Ratings
Scene 50 - Confrontation at Perino's
Hedda Hopper and Kirk Douglas greet with a kiss.
HEDDA HOPPER
Kirk, I’d like you to meet a friend
of mine, Bob Stripling...
HUAC Investigator Robert Stripling shakes Douglas’ hand.
HEDDA HOPPER (CONT’D)
...House Un-American Activities
Committee. Drink?
KIRK DOUGLAS
No, thanks. You said it was
important...
HEDDA HOPPER
Only if you hired Dalton Trumbo.
KIRK DOUGLAS
Who I hire is my business.
STRIPLING
No, Mr. Douglas. It’s ours.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 105.
CONTINUED:
KIRK DOUGLAS
Why?
STRIPLING
We have to keep this country safe.
KIRK DOUGLAS
And how’re you doing that?
STRIPLING
Why don’t I show you by putting you
on the stand?
KIRK DOUGLAS
Hedda, is your friend trying to
scare me?
HEDDA HOPPER
He’s trying to tell you the way
things are.
KIRK DOUGLAS
Maybe I don’t like the way things
are.
HEDDA HOPPER
We’ve known each other a long time,
Kirk.
KIRK DOUGLAS
We have.
HEDDA HOPPER
When did you become such a bastard?
KIRK DOUGLAS
(rises)
Oh, I was always a bastard. You
just never noticed.
Ratings
Scene 51 - A Visit from Otto Preminger
A lustrous black Rolls Royce passes Trumbo’s t-shirted
Neighbor in his driveway, working on a Ford, staring in mute
disbelief as --
The spectacularly out of place Rolls parks in Trumbo’s drive,
a CHAUFFEUR exits, opens the back door and --
A BALD MAN in Saville Row tailoring emerges. He views this
scrubby neighborhood as he does the world: with utter
superiority.
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 106.
INT./EXT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - FRONT DOOR - DAY
The bell ECHOES, Cleo opens the door and --
THE BALD MAN
(in a clipped Austro-
Hungarian accent)
I wish to see the man who wrote
this.
He holds up a copy of the screenplay Spartacus.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY
Trumbo, in pajamas and robe, sits with a COCKATIEL. The Bald
Man stands, wielding the rolled-up Spartacus script like a
cudgel.
THE BALD MAN
I am Otto Preminger.
Beat. Trumbo rubs his tired eyes.
OTTO PREMINGER
(annoyed)
The director.
DALTON TRUMBO
No, I know who you are, I just
finished work a few hours ago.
OTTO PREMINGER
(the script)
A copy of which I have read.
DALTON TRUMBO
I sent it in this morning, how -- ?
OTTO PREMINGER
I am Otto Preminger. The director.
DALTON TRUMBO
Is it too early for a drink?
OTTO PREMINGER
Never.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - DAY
Trumbo, still in his robe, mixes drinks. Preminger studies a
strange contraption:
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 107.
CONTINUED:
A homemade aviary of chicken wire, built out from an open
window onto the lawn. In it, a new bird with a slightly bent
wing hops about, pecking at water.
DALTON TRUMBO
My youngest believes I can end the
suffering of all broken birds.
OTTO PREMINGER
As can I. With a broiler.
(accepts his drink)
Are your duties completed for Mr.
Kirk Douglas?
DALTON TRUMBO
I’ve got two weeks for Christmas...
OTTO PREMINGER
During which time you will work
with me.
DALTON TRUMBO
Will I.
OTTO PREMINGER
If you are as intelligent as your
writing... and as greedy as your
reputation.
(then)
It is an adaptation of the novel
Exodus. You’ve read it?
DALTON TRUMBO
No.
OTTO PREMINGER
A colossal best-seller. Very
nearly a perfect piece of shit.
But --
DALTON TRUMBO
-- there’s a good story in there,
somewhere.
OTTO PREMINGER
Actually, I have no idea. But I
have Paul Newman.
Ratings
Scene 52 - Christmas Critique
Cleo checks contact sheets as Trumbo fiddles with his
cigarette holder, studying Preminger on their hall phone.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 108.
CONTINUED:
CLEO
You’re doing it?
Trumbo has a small, secret smile on his lips.
DALTON TRUMBO
I think it’s the only way to get
him to leave.
CLEO
I know that smile.
DALTON TRUMBO
(faux innocence)
Why, what ever do you mean?
CLEO
Poor Mr. Preminger... thinks he’s
the cat and you’re the mouse...
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - DAY
Christmas morning, 1958. Under a glittering tree, Cleo,
Niki, 20, Mitzi, 13, and Chris, 18, all unwrap presents at
the tree, LAUGH and CHATTER. Trumbo sips coffee, digging
into his stocking.
Otto Preminger looms in the doorway, glancing at his watch.
OTTO PREMINGER
Christmas? Is over.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - HALL - DAY
Trumbo walks Preminger to his study.
DALTON TRUMBO
Did you read my new scenes?
OTTO PREMINGER
Dreadful. Keep up this level of
work, I will see to it your name is
on my movie. To take the blame.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - DAY
Trumbo sits, making notes on typewritten script pages.
Preminger paces as he reads a new, clean script copy. He
stops reading. He lowers the pages. He looks out the
window. Trumbo studies him.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 109.
CONTINUED:
OTTO PREMINGER
Better. Yes. But. There’s no
other way to say it. It simply...
lacks genius.
Trumbo takes this in, amused and sanguine.
DALTON TRUMBO
Otto. If every scene is brilliant,
your movie will be utterly
monotonous.
Preminger takes this in with a thoughtful pause.
OTTO PREMINGER
I tell you what.
(hands the pages back to
Trumbo)
You write every scene brilliantly.
And I will direct unevenly.
Though amused, Trumbo starts to object when Mitzi enters --
with Kirk Douglas. Douglas is surprised Trumbo’s not alone.
OTTO PREMINGER (CONT’D)
Kirk.
KIRK DOUGLAS
Otto. How are you?
The two shake hands.
OTTO PREMINGER
I’m very well.
KIRK DOUGLAS
I, uh, don’t mean to interrupt --
DALTON TRUMBO
Not at all, you’ll excuse us, Otto?
Ratings
Scene 53 - Hollywood Tensions
Trumbo and Douglas -- able to glimpse Preminger through the
open study doorway.
KIRK DOUGLAS
I sort of feel like I walked in on
my wife. Do you love him?
DALTON TRUMBO
It’s far more lurid than that.
He’s paying for my services.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 110.
CONTINUED:
KIRK DOUGLAS
So am I.
DALTON TRUMBO
And you’ll have me again, January
second, as promised.
KIRK DOUGLAS
I just need you a few days on some
the new scenes.
DALTON TRUMBO
Not till the second...
KIRK DOUGLAS
I wouldn’t ask but I’ve never had a
director who’s a bigger pain in my
ass than Stanley Kubrick. Worst
part is, he’s right.
DALTON TRUMBO
And I wouldn’t refuse, but...
(he hesitates)
This has to stay between us.
KIRK DOUGLAS
Of course.
DALTON TRUMBO
Preminger has indicated... well,
what he said was, “Keep up this
level of work and I will see to it
your name is on my movie.“
Douglas isn’t so much surprised as slightly irritated.
KIRK DOUGLAS
Really.
DALTON TRUMBO
His exact words.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - FRONT DOOR - DAY
Preminger and Trumbo watch Douglas getting into his car
outside.
OTTO PREMINGER
I suppose he wants you back?
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 111.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO
(reading script pages)
Hm? No. Just came by to talk
about, ah, screen credit.
OTTO PREMINGER
On Spartacus?
DALTON TRUMBO
I shouldn’t have said anything.
You understand.
INT. UNIVERSAL PICTURES SOUNDSTAGE - SPARTACUS SET - DAY
With a piece of the slave gladiator training compound in the
background, SLAVE EXTRAS sip coffee and gossip with ROMAN
SOLDIER EXTRAS.
CREW MEMBERS adjust lights and tweak wardrobe. In a dark
corner, Kirk Douglas, in costume as the rebel gladiator,
confers with the boxy, no-nonsense head of Universal, ED
MUHL.
ED MUHL
Hedda Hopper says the American
Legion is going to boycott us
unless you fire Trumbo.
KIRK DOUGLAS
Ed, he’s not done with the script,
his name’ll never be on the thing,
what’s anybody boycotting?
ED MUHL
Twenty-million Americans are saying
loud and clear they will never buy
a ticket to our movie unless you
fire one writer.
Muhl hands Douglas a sheet of typewritten paper.
ED MUHL (CONT’D)
Here’s fifty. Pick one.
Ratings
Scene 54 - Legal Shadows and Oscar Dreams
Central to the whole room now is a framed one sheet for The
Brave One, announcing it as an “Academy Award Winner!” Frank
stomps past, watched cautiously by Hymie and Trumbo.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 112.
CONTINUED:
FRANK KING
You can’t admit you’re Robert Rich,
so twenty-seven people with twenty-
seven lawyers all say they’re
Robert Rich and we owe ’em money...
’cause they wrote The Brave One.
(tosses a thick document
onto his desk)
Five-hundred-thousand dollar
lawsuit.
(then another)
Two-million-dollar lawsuit. And my
favorite...
(another)
...a teacher from Eagle Rock who
wants eleven-thousand five-hundred
dollars, plus mileage and meals.
HYMIE KING
We settle, we’re wiped out.
Confess, we get subpoenaed.
DALTON TRUMBO
Gentlemen, I can say in all
honesty, this I did not see coming.
EXT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - BACK PATIO - TWILIGHT
Trumbo smokes alone, gazing into another perfect sunset,
mulling this latest twist in the road.
NIKI (O.S.)
Trumbo? Mind if I stick my nose
in?
He turns as she exits the house.
DALTON TRUMBO
Please.
NIKI
He knows.
She means their Neighbor in the white t-shirt, watering his
lawn on the other side of the fence.
NIKI (CONT’D)
He sees Kirk Douglas in and out of
here and Otto Preminger in his
Rolls. He’s an idiot but he’s not
stupid.
(sits near Trumbo)
Has he called the FBI? Congress?
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 113.
CONTINUED:
NIKI (CONT’D)
No. Because everything they can
do, they’ve done.
(then)
That Oscar belongs to you. Get it.
DALTON TRUMBO
Good God, you’re nothing like me.
(delighted)
You’re worse.
Ratings
Scene 55 - Defiance in the Spotlight
January, 1959. News vans and equipment trucks clog the
drive. Cables snake into the brightly-lit house. The
Trumbos’ next-door Neighbor and OTHERS from the block stand
and rubberneck.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOME - STUDY - NIGHT
Trumbo and an INTERVIEWER are on camera in a blast of lights.
TV INTERVIEWER
For the record, you’re Robert Rich.
DALTON TRUMBO
I am.
INT. KIRK DOUGLAS’ MANSION - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
Douglas is on the phone. In front of him, Muhl’s list. Most
of the names have been crossed out. But a few are circled.
KIRK DOUGLAS
(into phone)
Yeah, he’d be all right, and I
guess he’s free, interested...
Nearby, the TV is on. Douglas can’t keep his eyes off it.
TV INTERVIEWER (ON TV)
...and you wrote The Brave One.
DALTON TRUMBO (ON TV)
I did.
INT. HEDDA HOPPER’S MANSION - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Hedda, hosting a COCKTAIL PARTY, looks through a doorway into
her home office, where A FEW GUESTS are glued to the TV.
TV INTERVIEWER (ON TV)
Why come forward now?
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 114.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - CONTINUOUS
DALTON TRUMBO
As someone who’s been thoroughly
investigated by the House Un-
American Activities Committee, I
started wondering...
INT. HEDDA HOPPER’S MANSION - HOME OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
DALTON TRUMBO (ON TV)
...why hasn’t anyone ever taken a
good, long look at them? And their
work in the movie industry?
She approaches Trumbo’s TV face here in her home, her party
guests as awkward as caught children.
INT. OTTO PREMINGER’S HOTEL SUITE - CONTINUOUS
Preminger dresses for dinner, half-watching:
DALTON TRUMBO (ON TV)
They were convened to uncover enemy
agents, expose Communist
conspiracies and write anti-
sedition laws.
INT. KIRK DOUGLAS’ MANSION - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
Douglas has the phone to his ear but is mostly watching:
DALTON TRUMBO (ON TV)
Now here we are, thousands of hours
and millions of dollars later:
agents uncovered -- zero;
conspiracies exposed -- zero; laws
written -- zero.
INT. OTTO PREMINGER’S HOTEL SUITE - CONTINUOUS
Preminger CHUCKLES, loving it.
Ratings
Scene 56 - The Reckoning of Dalton Trumbo
DALTON TRUMBO (ON TV)
All they do is deny people the
right to work and they can’t even
get that right. Academy Awards --
(self)
-- two.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 115.
CONTINUED:
HEDDA HOPPER
Mother-FUCKER!
She HURLS her tumbler at the screen -- glass and liquid
EXPLODE over Trumbo’s TV image.
INT. OTTO PREMINGER’S HOTEL SUITE - CONTINUOUS
-- Preminger HOWLS with LAUGHTER --
INT. KIRK DOUGLAS’ MANSION - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS
-- as Douglas hangs up the phone, silently transfixed.
TV INTERVIEWER (ON TV)
And how does that feel? To have so
undermined the blacklist it’s
almost a joke?
DALTON TRUMBO (ON TV)
A joke.
(contemplates this darkly)
I know the blacklist that produced
Robert Rich, I’ve seen its horror,
cruelty and hideous waste of life
as I’ve marched in the long line of
its anonymous.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - CONTINUOUS
DALTON TRUMBO
I can’t invent one more witticism
about Robert Rich or the Oscar he
can’t claim... because that small,
worthless, golden statue is covered
with the blood of my friends.
Twelve years of this foul thing is
enough. None of us should yield
one more inch... or give them one
more life.
INT./EXT. PREMINGER’S ROLLS ROYCE/BEL AIR - DRIVING - DAY
January, 1960. Preminger is in back, holding the script of
Exodus, speaking into an elaborate mobile telephone of the
era:
OTTO PREMINGER
I’ve read your latest draft.
INTERCUT:
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 116.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - DINING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Trumbo is just sitting down to breakfast. He has the
Cockatiel.
DALTON TRUMBO
What do you think?
OTTO PREMINGER
My answer is on the front page of
today’s New York Times.
Trumbo picks up one of several papers there. And is
stoically astonished by a headline of January 20, 1960:
“OTTO PREMINGER ANNOUNCES EXODUS WRITTEN BY DALTON TRUMBO”
He is without words as he fully takes this in. Then:
DALTON TRUMBO
You hate it that much.
OTTO PREMINGER
Merry Christmas, Mr. Trumbo.
Ratings
Scene 57 - Defiance in the Face of Adversity
Ed Muhl enters the dark, empty room, FLICKERING with a rough-
cut scene of:
Spartacus hurled against the wall by the African slave,
DRABA, pinned with his trident.
In a corner of the screening room, our Douglas is pleased,
picks up the phone. Notices Ed Muhl.
KIRK DOUGLAS
Hi, Ed, hang on.
(into intercom)
Put up the speech before the big
battle?
(into phone)
Warren, I’d like you to put out a
press release, saying the
screenplay for Spartacus was
written by Dalton Trumbo. Thanks.
Douglas hangs up. Ed Muhl doesn’t like this. One bit.
ED MUHL
Kirk. If you won’t get rid of
Trumbo, I will.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 117.
CONTINUED:
KIRK DOUGLAS
And right after I quit, you can
reshoot all my scenes. See, Ed,
for better or worse... I am
Spartacus.
INT. AMERICAN LEGION HALL - DAY
Hedda Hopper and John Wayne are both on stage, addressing TWO-
THOUSAND LEGIONNAIRES.
HEDDA HOPPER
There’s a picture coming out.
Starring Kirk Douglas. Written by
Dalton Trumbo.
HISSES and BOOS echo.
HEDDA HOPPER (CONT’D)
It’s called Spartacus. And don’t
believe it if there’s some other
writer’s name on it. We’re onto
them! Aren’t we?
APPLAUSE and mounting CHEERS.
JOHN WAYNE
We sure are. ’Cause it’s a new
day!
(the crowd ROARS)
A NEW DAY!
INT. LA SCALA RESTAURANT - NIGHT
Ed Muhl threads through the sleek industry CROWD, picks up a
phone at the bar:
ED MUHL
Yes?
INTERCUT:
INT. MOTION PICTURE ALLIANCE OFFICES - BULLPEN - CONTINUOUS
HEDDA HOPPER
Ed. Every theatre that movie is
in’ll get picketed unless you pull
the prints, tonight, and take that
fucking traitor’s name off.
ED MUHL
Hedda, that’s expensive and
pointless.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 118.
CONTINUED:
HEDDA HOPPER
Then kiss your movie, your studio
and your miserable ass goodbye!
Ratings
Scene 58 - Triumph and Tension at the 'Spartacus' Premiere
October, 1960. The world premiere of Spartacus. (ARCHIVAL
FOOTAGE)
INT. GLAMOROUS HOLLYWOOD MOVIE THEATRE - NIGHT
The movie has begun. Black-tie AUDIENCE eyes drink in:
THE OPENING CREDITS OF SPARTACUS - UP ON THE SCREEN
We hear the percussive SCORE and see the stunning titles.
TRUMBO AND CLEO
Sit a few seats from Kirk Douglas and his WIFE as --
UP ON THE SCREEN - THE NAME DALTON TRUMBO APPEARS
Under the words “Screenplay by.”
TRUMBO’S OWN NAME
Is reflected in his glasses. And strikes him deeply.
CLEO
Grips her husband’s arm, holds her breath, savors this.
INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT
Undressing, Trumbo hears a quiet SOB from across the room.
DALTON TRUMBO
Cleo?
She is at her vanity table, in her robe, CRYING.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
What, what is it?
CLEO
It’s over, isn’t it.
DALTON TRUMBO
Yes.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 119.
CONTINUED:
CLEO
And we made it...
(she can’t believe it)
Jesus, we made it, didn’t we...
DALTON TRUMBO
We did.
His eyes glisten. They clasp hands.
EXT. WASHINGTON, D.C. - MOVIE THEATRE - NIGHT
January, 1961, and below the marquee announcing Spartacus,
SIXTY OR SO MEMBERS OF THE AMERICAN LEGION picket. There is
a HEAVY POLICE PRESENCE. Suddenly, the doors of the theatre
open, disgorging MEN IN DARK SUITS protecting --
PRESIDENT JOHN F. KENNEDY
As REPORTERS close in around him (a mix of actual news
footage and recreation), trying to get a comment --
TV COMMENTATOR (V.O.)
President Kennedy enjoyed a rare
evening off, attending the new Kirk
Douglas film, Spartacus.
Breezing by the glowering Legionnaires, he’s asked --
TV REPORTER (V.O.)
It’s a very controversial film,
what did you think?
PRESIDENT JOHN F. KENNEDY
It’s a, ah, fine picture and...
INT. HEDDA HOPPER’S MANSION - HOME OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
A hatless Hedda sits alone and watches:
PRESIDENT JOHN F. KENNEDY (ON TV)
...I think it’s going to be a big
hit.
Hedda turns him off, while on a glassy wall of her many
magazine covers, sees herself in 1947 under the masthead:
TIME
As we hear the sound of POLITE APPLAUSE.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 120.
CONTINUED:
MASTER OF CEREMONIES (PRE-LAP)
...this next award is given to that
member who has advanced the
literature of motion pictures. I
am proud to present The Writers’
Guild of America Laurel Award...
Ratings
Scene 59 - A Call for Healing: Dalton Trumbo's Gala Speech
MASTER OF CEREMONIES
...to Dalton Trumbo.
On March 13, 1970, the MASTER OF CEREMONIES is on the stage
of a black-tie Writers’ Guild gala, where LIGHT CLAPPING
greets an older but still spry Trumbo, who regards his award
with a mixture of gratitude and amusement, then:
DALTON TRUMBO
(at the mic)
Often, when I stand before the film
community, there is an elephant in
the room -- me.
(mild LAUGHS ripple)
I thought I might address that.
(and begins his speech)
The blacklist was a time of evil.
As he speaks, voice echoing, WE CUT AROUND THE ROOM TO:
CLEO
At a table, unchanged in her simple, radiant elegance.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
And no one who survived it came
through untouched by evil.
WITH HER, CHRIS, MITZI AND NIKI
Now grown, beaming, proud.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Caught in a situation that had
passed beyond the control of mere
individuals, each person reacted as
his nature...
IAN MCLELLAN HUNTER
Listens with a sad and knowing smile.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 121.
CONTINUED:
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
...his needs, convictions and
particular circumstances compelled
him to.
THEN TRUMBO SEES EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Staring stonily, almost daring the writer to continue.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
(thrown, pausing, then)
There was good faith and bad.
Courage and cowardice.
And we keep CUTTING AROUND THE ROOM TO:
OTTO PREMINGER
In all his shiny-domed glory.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Honesty and dishonesty.
KIRK DOUGLAS
Still buffed to movie star perfection.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Selflessness and opportunism.
THE KING BROTHERS
Hymie, ever-nervous, and Frank, deeply gratified.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
So when you look back on that dark
time, as I think you should now and
then, it will do no good to search
for heroes or villains. There were
none. There were only victims.
AND NOW WE GO BACK TO EDWARD G. ROBINSON
Disarmed, Trumbo’s compassion the last thing he expected.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
Victims because each of us felt
compelled to say or do things we
otherwise would not. To deliver
and receive wounds we truly did not
wish to exchange.
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 122.
CONTINUED: (2)
NIKI
In particular is moved by this.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
That is why none of us -- left,
right or center -- emerged from
that long nightmare without sin.
TRUMBO’S EYES AGAIN FIND ROBINSON
And neither man looks away.
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
What I say here is not intended to
be hurtful to anyone. It is
intended to repair a hurt. To heal
wounds which years ago we inflicted
on each other and most of all...
ourselves.
(then)
Thank you.
And as the room RISES to give him a STANDING OVATION...
DISSOLVE TO:
Ratings
Scene 60 - A New Dawn at MGM
The once-bustling dream factory is weedy and deserted but for
a defiantly dapper Trumbo, saying goodbye to TWO YOUNG
PRODUCERS who sport the era’s regulation jeans and beards.
As they move off, Trumbo pauses to light his cigarette.
JOHN WAYNE (O.S.)
Well, well.
Trumbo turns to see John Wayne getting up out of a
convertible: heavier, older, but still a mighty presence.
JOHN WAYNE (CONT’D)
What’re you doin’ here?
DALTON TRUMBO
Working with some young producers.
JOHN WAYNE
Me too.
(glares at Trumbo’s shaggy
pair)
Yours look just like mine. All
growin’ the hair we’re losin’.
(then)
(MORE)
(CONTINUED)
TRUMBO - JOHN MCNAMARA 123.
CONTINUED:
JOHN WAYNE (CONT'D)
I read in the paper. ’Bout your
award. Speech. Got me...
Trumbo waits as Wayne picks his words carefully:
JOHN WAYNE (CONT’D)
Ya fight when ya have to... maybe
not always the way ya want to.
What I mean is...
DALTON TRUMBO
I know what you mean.
They stare at each other. Anything might be said, anything
could happen. After a long silence:
DALTON TRUMBO (CONT’D)
It’s a new day.
And with those words, Dalton Trumbo holds out his right hand.
John Wayne looks down at it... then clasps it in his own.
JOHN WAYNE
Each ’n’ every morning.
These two powerfully different men shake hands, then:
JOHN WAYNE (CONT’D)
Better mosey. My producers need a
diaper change. You stay outta
trouble.
DALTON TRUMBO
That I will not.
Wayne concedes a smile as Trumbo strolls away, cigarette
smoke wreathed around his head like laurel, vanishing into
the shadows of a studio at twilight.
FADE OUT.
THE END
Ratings
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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dalton trumbo | Dalton Trumbo's character arc follows his journey from a successful screenwriter to a blacklisted writer facing persecution for his beliefs. Initially, he is portrayed as a confident and principled individual, unafraid to challenge the status quo in Hollywood. As the story progresses, he experiences the harsh realities of the blacklist, leading to financial struggles and personal sacrifices. Despite these challenges, Trumbo remains resilient and defiant, using his wit and intelligence to navigate the complexities of the film industry. His interactions with family and friends reveal his vulnerabilities and the emotional toll of his convictions. Ultimately, Trumbo emerges as a more introspective and compassionate figure, reflecting on his past while advocating for justice and unity within the writing community. His journey culminates in a moment of forgiveness and hope, showcasing his growth and commitment to his principles. | While Dalton Trumbo's character arc is rich and layered, it could benefit from a more pronounced transformation throughout the screenplay. The initial portrayal of Trumbo as a confident and combative writer is compelling, but the subsequent challenges he faces could be explored in greater depth. The emotional impact of his blacklisting and the strain it places on his family relationships could be more vividly depicted, allowing for a more nuanced exploration of his vulnerabilities. Additionally, the resolution of his arc, while hopeful, may feel somewhat abrupt without sufficient buildup of the internal conflicts he grapples with. A deeper exploration of his moral dilemmas and the consequences of his choices could enhance the emotional resonance of his journey. | To improve Dalton Trumbo's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that highlight the emotional and psychological toll of his blacklisting on both him and his family. This could involve showing moments of doubt, frustration, and vulnerability that contrast with his initial confidence. Additionally, introducing secondary characters who challenge or support his beliefs could create more dynamic interactions and further develop his internal conflicts. Expanding on the consequences of his actions, both personally and professionally, would add depth to his character. Finally, ensure that the resolution of his arc feels earned by providing a gradual buildup to his moments of forgiveness and hope, allowing the audience to fully appreciate his growth and transformation. |
edward g. robinson | Edward G. Robinson's character arc begins with him as a charismatic and assertive figure, engaging in witty exchanges with Trumbo while navigating the complexities of Hollywood. As the story progresses, he becomes increasingly aware of the political pressures surrounding him, leading to a more pragmatic and skeptical outlook. His loyalty to Trumbo is tested as he faces the consequences of his own decisions, culminating in a moment of testimony that reveals his inner conflict and the weight of his choices. By the end of the feature, Robinson emerges as a more introspective character, grappling with his past decisions and the implications for his future, ultimately finding a sense of resilience and integrity despite the external pressures. | While Edward G. Robinson's character arc is rich and layered, it could benefit from a clearer progression that highlights his transformation more distinctly. The shifts in his demeanor and perspective are compelling, but they may feel abrupt without sufficient buildup. Additionally, the emotional stakes could be heightened to create a stronger connection between his internal struggles and the external conflicts he faces. This would enhance the audience's investment in his journey. | To improve Robinson's character arc, consider incorporating more pivotal moments that showcase his internal conflict and the evolution of his beliefs. For instance, adding scenes that depict his interactions with other characters who challenge his views could deepen his character development. Additionally, exploring flashbacks or memories that highlight his past decisions and regrets could provide context for his emotional struggles. Finally, ensuring that his resolution feels earned and reflective of his journey will create a more satisfying arc for the audience. |
cleo trumbo | Cleo Trumbo's character arc follows her journey from a supportive yet somewhat passive figure in her husband's shadow to a strong, independent woman who embraces her own identity and voice. Initially, she is primarily defined by her roles as a wife and mother, providing emotional support and stability. However, as the challenges of Hollywood and family pressures mount, Cleo begins to assert herself more, using her intelligence and humor to navigate the complexities of her life. By the end of the feature, she emerges as a resilient figure who not only stands by her family but also takes charge of her own narrative, advocating for her family's unity and her own aspirations. | While Cleo Trumbo's character is well-developed and showcases a range of qualities, her arc could benefit from more explicit moments of personal growth and conflict. The transition from a supportive figure to an independent woman feels somewhat gradual and could be punctuated by key events that challenge her beliefs and force her to confront her own desires and ambitions. Additionally, her humor, while engaging, may overshadow deeper emotional moments that could further enrich her character. | To improve Cleo's character arc, consider introducing pivotal scenes that challenge her to step out of her comfort zone, such as a confrontation with societal expectations or a personal crisis that forces her to prioritize her own needs. Incorporating moments where she must choose between supporting her husband and pursuing her own goals could add depth to her journey. Additionally, showcasing her evolution through interactions with other strong female characters could provide a contrasting perspective and highlight her growth. Finally, ensuring that her humor complements rather than detracts from her emotional depth will create a more balanced and relatable character. |
john wayne | Throughout the screenplay, John Wayne begins as a steadfast and authoritative figure, embodying the ideals of patriotism and traditional values. As the story progresses, he faces challenges that test his beliefs and leadership. He learns to balance his no-nonsense attitude with empathy and understanding, ultimately evolving into a more nuanced leader who recognizes the importance of collaboration and adaptability. By the end of the feature, Wayne's character arc culminates in a moment of self-reflection, where he acknowledges the complexities of the world around him and embraces a more inclusive approach to leadership. | While John Wayne's character is strong and embodies traditional values, his arc could benefit from more emotional depth and vulnerability. The stoic nature of his character may limit audience connection, as viewers might find it challenging to relate to someone who appears unyielding. Additionally, the character's evolution could be more pronounced, with clearer moments of internal conflict that lead to his transformation. | To improve John Wayne's character arc, consider incorporating scenes that reveal his vulnerabilities and personal struggles. This could involve flashbacks to his past or moments of doubt that challenge his beliefs. Additionally, introducing secondary characters who represent opposing viewpoints could create opportunities for meaningful dialogue and conflict, allowing Wayne to confront his ideals. Finally, showcasing a gradual shift in his leadership style through specific events or decisions would enhance the believability of his transformation. |
hedda hopper | Throughout the screenplay, Hedda Hopper begins as a powerful and influential gossip columnist who revels in her ability to manipulate Hollywood narratives. Initially, she uses her sharp wit and confrontational style to maintain her status and influence, often at the expense of others. However, as the story progresses, she faces challenges that force her to confront the consequences of her actions and the impact of her words on the lives of those she targets. This leads to a moment of introspection where she must choose between her ambition and her moral compass. Ultimately, Hedda evolves into a more nuanced character who learns to wield her influence responsibly, recognizing the power of her voice and the importance of empathy in her role as a storyteller. | While Hedda Hopper's character arc presents a compelling journey from a ruthless gossip columnist to a more responsible figure, it risks falling into predictable tropes of redemption. The initial portrayal of her as a fierce and uncompromising figure is strong, but the transition to a more empathetic character may feel abrupt if not properly developed. Additionally, the screenplay should ensure that her motivations are clear and relatable, avoiding the pitfall of making her transformation feel forced or unearned. | To improve Hedda's character arc, consider introducing a personal conflict or relationship that challenges her worldview earlier in the screenplay. This could be a friendship with someone she initially targets or a family member affected by her gossip. By weaving in these personal stakes, her transformation can feel more organic and grounded. Additionally, incorporating moments of vulnerability or doubt throughout the story can help to humanize her character and make her eventual change more impactful. Finally, ensure that her journey is not just about redemption but also about understanding the complexities of power and responsibility in her role as a public figure. |
niki |
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Niki's character arc is compelling and showcases a realistic progression from innocence to activism. However, her emotional journey could benefit from more nuanced moments that highlight her internal conflicts and growth. While her frustrations with her father are clear, there could be more exploration of her motivations and the impact of her activism on her personal relationships. | To improve Niki's character arc, consider incorporating scenes that depict her interactions with peers or mentors who influence her activism. This could provide depth to her motivations and showcase her growth in a broader social context. Additionally, moments of vulnerability where she reflects on her relationship with her father could enhance the emotional stakes and create a more profound connection between them. Finally, including a pivotal moment where Niki must choose between her activism and family loyalty could add tension and complexity to her character development. |
buddy ross | Buddy Ross's character arc follows a trajectory from an eager, ambitious producer to a self-preserving, calculating individual, ultimately culminating in a moment of desperation. Initially, he is driven by a desire to succeed and please others, but as he encounters moral dilemmas and the pressures of the industry, he becomes increasingly dismissive of ethical considerations. His icy demeanor and focus on image lead to conflicts, particularly with Trumbo, highlighting his internal struggles. In the climax, faced with the potential collapse of his career, Buddy's panic reveals the fragility of his self-serving nature, forcing him to confront the consequences of his choices and the impact on his relationships. | While Buddy Ross's character arc effectively illustrates the pressures of the Hollywood system and the moral compromises that come with ambition, it risks becoming one-dimensional if not handled carefully. His transformation from an eager producer to a desperate figure may feel abrupt without sufficient development of his internal conflicts and motivations. Additionally, the shift from ambition to self-preservation could benefit from more nuanced moments that showcase his moral dilemmas and the impact of his decisions on others. | To improve Buddy Ross's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that highlight his internal struggles and moral dilemmas throughout the screenplay. This could involve moments of vulnerability where he reflects on the consequences of his actions or interactions with other characters that challenge his worldview. Additionally, providing a clearer catalyst for his transformation into a calculating figure could enhance the believability of his arc. Finally, a moment of redemption or realization at the climax could add depth, allowing Buddy to confront his choices and potentially seek a path toward reconciliation or growth. |
arlen hird | Arlen Hird begins as a skeptical and cautious character, questioning the decisions of his peers and highlighting potential risks. As the story progresses, he grapples with his terminal illness, which forces him to confront his own mortality and the impact of his work. This struggle leads him to a deeper understanding of his principles and the importance of fighting for his beliefs, even in the face of adversity. By the climax, Hird transforms from a cynical critic to a passionate advocate for social change, ultimately finding a sense of purpose and resolution in his writing. His arc concludes with a bittersweet acceptance of his fate, leaving a legacy that inspires others to continue the fight for artistic integrity and social relevance. | While Arlen Hird's character arc is compelling, it risks becoming predictable due to the common trope of the terminally ill character who finds redemption through their struggles. His initial skepticism and cynicism are well-established, but there could be more nuance in his transformation. The conflict with Trumbo, while significant, may benefit from deeper exploration to avoid a simplistic dichotomy between idealism and pragmatism. Additionally, Hird's emotional journey could be more vividly illustrated through specific interactions and experiences that challenge his beliefs and force him to evolve. | To enhance Arlen Hird's character arc, consider incorporating more dynamic interactions with other characters that challenge his worldview and provoke personal growth. Introduce moments of vulnerability that reveal his fears and desires beyond his illness, allowing the audience to connect with him on a deeper level. Additionally, explore the consequences of his decisions and how they impact those around him, creating a more intricate web of relationships. This could lead to a more profound transformation, where Hird not only advocates for social change but also learns to embrace hope and connection in the face of despair. |
cleo | Cleo's character arc begins with her as a supportive figure, grappling with the family's financial struggles while maintaining a strong facade. As the story progresses, she confronts her own vulnerabilities and the impact of Trumbo's choices on their family. This leads her to assert herself more, expressing her frustrations and desires for a more balanced partnership. By the climax, Cleo emerges as a more independent and self-aware individual, having navigated her emotional journey and strengthened her relationship with Trumbo. Ultimately, she finds a way to reconcile her love for her family with her own needs, leading to a more equitable dynamic in their relationship. | Cleo's character arc is compelling, showcasing her growth and resilience. However, it may benefit from deeper exploration of her internal conflicts and motivations. While her supportive nature is well-established, the screenplay could delve further into her personal aspirations and how they are affected by her family's struggles. Additionally, the transitions between her supportive role and assertive confrontations could be more nuanced to enhance the emotional impact of her journey. | To improve Cleo's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or moments of introspection that reveal her past experiences and aspirations. This would provide context for her resilience and strengthen her emotional depth. Additionally, creating more scenes that highlight her interactions with other characters, such as friends or mentors, could offer insights into her struggles and growth. Finally, ensure that her confrontations with Trumbo are not only assertive but also allow for vulnerability, showcasing her journey towards self-acceptance and balance within the family dynamic. |
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While Trumbo's character arc effectively showcases his resilience and determination, it could benefit from deeper exploration of his emotional vulnerabilities. The screenplay tends to focus on his external struggles, which can overshadow the internal conflicts that make him a relatable and compelling protagonist. Additionally, the pacing of his character development may feel rushed, particularly in the climax and resolution, where significant emotional shifts occur. | To improve Trumbo's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into his emotional struggles and relationships, particularly with his family and friends. This could provide a richer context for his decisions and enhance audience empathy. Additionally, allowing for more gradual development of his internal conflicts would create a more nuanced portrayal. Introducing moments of self-reflection or dialogue that reveal his fears and doubts could deepen his character and make his eventual resolution more impactful. |
kirk douglas | Kirk Douglas begins as a confident and assertive actor who primarily focuses on his commercial success in Hollywood. As the story progresses, he faces challenges that test his values and beliefs, particularly regarding authority and oppression in the film industry. His character arc sees him evolve from a self-assured businessman to a more principled figure who actively fights against injustice and supports his colleagues, culminating in a pivotal moment where he stands up for Trumbo and others affected by the Hollywood blacklist. By the end of the screenplay, Douglas emerges not only as a successful actor but also as a champion for creative freedom and integrity in the industry. | While Kirk Douglas's character arc is compelling, it may benefit from deeper emotional exploration. The transition from a commercially driven actor to a principled advocate feels somewhat abrupt and could use more nuance. The screenplay could delve into his internal conflicts and the personal stakes involved in his decisions, allowing the audience to connect more deeply with his motivations. Additionally, the character's relationships with others could be fleshed out further to highlight how they influence his transformation. | To improve Kirk Douglas's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or moments of introspection that reveal his past experiences with authority and oppression, providing context for his rebellion. Introduce more scenes that showcase his interactions with other characters, particularly those who challenge or support him, to illustrate the evolution of his beliefs. Additionally, create a pivotal moment where he must choose between commercial success and standing up for his values, allowing for a more dramatic and impactful transformation. This would enhance the emotional depth of his character and make his journey more relatable to the audience. |
otto preminger | Throughout the screenplay, Otto Preminger undergoes a subtle transformation. Initially, he is portrayed as a rigid, uncompromising director focused solely on the practical aspects of filmmaking. As he collaborates with Trumbo, he begins to appreciate the complexities of storytelling and the importance of creative expression. This journey leads him to soften his approach, becoming more open to collaboration and understanding the value of diverse perspectives in filmmaking. By the end of the feature, Preminger evolves from a domineering figure to a more nuanced leader who recognizes the importance of artistic integrity alongside commercial success. | While Otto Preminger's character is well-defined and serves as a strong foil to Trumbo, his arc could benefit from deeper emotional exploration. The transition from a rigid director to a more collaborative figure feels somewhat abrupt and could use additional scenes that showcase his internal struggle or moments of vulnerability. This would make his transformation more believable and relatable to the audience. | To improve Otto Preminger's character arc, consider incorporating scenes that reveal his backstory or personal stakes in the filmmaking process. For example, moments that highlight his past failures or insecurities could add depth to his character. Additionally, including interactions with other characters that challenge his worldview could create opportunities for growth. Finally, a pivotal moment where he must choose between artistic integrity and commercial pressure could serve as a catalyst for his transformation, making his eventual acceptance of collaboration feel more earned. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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High Emotional Impact with Reflective Tone | Scenes that are graded high in emotional impact (scores of 9 or 10) often have a reflective tone. For instance, scenes 58 and 59 both have high emotional impact and a reflective tone, suggesting that the author effectively uses introspection to enhance emotional resonance. |
Defiance and High Stakes | Scenes characterized by a defiant tone tend to score higher in high stakes and conflict. For example, scenes 13, 14, and 7 all feature a defiant tone and score high in both high stakes and conflict, indicating that the author successfully intertwines defiance with escalating tension. |
Serious Tone and Informative Content | Scenes with a serious tone frequently receive high grades in informative content. Scenes 4, 5, and 10 exemplify this pattern, suggesting that the author effectively conveys important information while maintaining a serious atmosphere. |
Tension and Character Changes | Scenes that maintain a tense atmosphere often correlate with significant character changes. For instance, scenes 7 and 13, both tense and high in character changes, indicate that the author uses tension to drive character development. |
Humor as a Relief in Serious Contexts | Humorous scenes often appear in conjunction with serious tones, providing relief without detracting from the overall seriousness. Scenes 51 and 53 illustrate this balance, suggesting that the author effectively uses humor to lighten the mood while still addressing serious themes. |
Reflective and Emotional Scenes with Low Conflict | Scenes that are reflective and emotional tend to have lower conflict scores. For example, scenes 25 and 58 are reflective and emotional but score lower in conflict, indicating a potential area for the author to explore more dynamic conflict in reflective moments. |
Character Development and Dialogue Quality | High character change scores often correlate with high dialogue scores. Scenes like 7 and 14, which feature significant character development, also score high in dialogue quality, suggesting that the author’s dialogue effectively supports character arcs. |
Nostalgic Tone and Emotional Impact | Scenes that evoke nostalgia tend to have a high emotional impact. Scene 9, which is nostalgic and scores high in emotional impact, indicates that the author successfully taps into nostalgia to evoke strong emotions. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a strong command of dialogue, character dynamics, and thematic depth, effectively blending humor, drama, and social commentary. The writer showcases an ability to create engaging narratives that resonate with audiences, particularly through sharp dialogue and complex character interactions. However, there are opportunities for improvement in areas such as pacing, character development, and the exploration of moral dilemmas.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | Read 'The Art of Dramatic Writing' by Lajos Egri | This book provides valuable insights into character motivations and conflict development, which can help deepen the emotional complexity of the screenplay. |
Screenplay | Study 'The Social Network' screenplay by Aaron Sorkin | This screenplay exemplifies sharp dialogue, complex character interactions, and effective pacing, serving as a model for enhancing the writer's craft. |
Exercise | Practice writing dialogue-driven scenes with conflicting character motivationsPractice In SceneProv | This exercise will help sharpen skills in creating tension and dynamic interactions, enhancing the overall quality of character development. |
Exercise | Write a scene where the protagonist faces a moral dilemma and must make a difficult choicePractice In SceneProv | This exercise will encourage deeper exploration of character motivations and ethical conflicts, adding complexity to the narrative. |
Exercise | Practice writing scenes with varying pacing, including tension-building moments and slower, introspective beatsPractice In SceneProv | This will help the writer develop a better sense of pacing and how to effectively build tension throughout the screenplay. |
Stories Similar to this one
Story | Explanation |
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Good Night, and Good Luck | This film explores the impact of McCarthyism on journalism and the media, paralleling Trumbo's struggles with the Hollywood blacklist. Both stories highlight the fight for free speech and the moral dilemmas faced by individuals in the face of political oppression. |
The Front | This film directly addresses the Hollywood blacklist, focusing on a man who fronts for blacklisted writers. It shares themes of identity, integrity, and the consequences of political persecution, similar to Trumbo's experiences as a blacklisted screenwriter. |
The Ides of March | This political drama delves into the ethical complexities of politics and media, reflecting the moral struggles faced by Trumbo and his peers. Both narratives explore the intersection of personal ambition and political ideology. |
The Crucible | Arthur Miller's play about the Salem witch trials serves as an allegory for McCarthyism, paralleling Trumbo's experiences with the House Un-American Activities Committee. Both stories depict the dangers of hysteria and the consequences of standing up against societal pressures. |
Trumbo (2015) | This biographical film specifically chronicles Dalton Trumbo's life, detailing his experiences during the Hollywood blacklist era. It shares the same narrative focus on his struggles, relationships, and eventual triumphs in the film industry. |
The Social Network | This film explores themes of ambition, betrayal, and the impact of personal choices on relationships, similar to Trumbo's conflicts with his family and colleagues as he navigates the challenges of being blacklisted. |
The King's Speech | Both stories feature protagonists who face significant societal challenges and personal struggles. Trumbo's fight for his voice and identity mirrors King George VI's battle to overcome his speech impediment, emphasizing themes of perseverance and resilience. |
Spotlight | This film about investigative journalism highlights the importance of uncovering the truth in the face of powerful opposition, akin to Trumbo's fight against the Hollywood establishment and his commitment to free speech. |
The Post | This film centers on the publication of the Pentagon Papers and the struggle for journalistic integrity against government pressure, paralleling Trumbo's fight for artistic freedom and the right to speak out against political oppression. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Based on True Events | The screenplay opens with a black screen displaying text suggesting the story is based on true events. | This trope indicates that the narrative is inspired by real-life occurrences, often adding a layer of authenticity. An example is 'The Social Network,' which dramatizes the founding of Facebook based on real events. |
The Struggling Artist | Dalton Trumbo is depicted as a passionate writer facing personal and professional challenges. | This trope portrays artists grappling with their craft, often facing external pressures. A classic example is 'Amadeus,' which follows Mozart's struggles for recognition. |
Political Commentary | The screenplay addresses themes of communism, free speech, and the Hollywood blacklist. | This trope involves narratives that reflect or critique political issues. 'The West Wing' often incorporates political commentary through its characters and storylines. |
The Misunderstood Genius | Trumbo is portrayed as a brilliant writer whose talents are overshadowed by political persecution. | This trope highlights a character whose intelligence or creativity is not recognized by society. An example is 'Good Will Hunting,' where the protagonist's genius is initially overlooked. |
The Love Interest | Cleo Trumbo is depicted as a supportive yet conflicted partner navigating the challenges of Trumbo's career. | This trope involves a character who serves as a romantic partner, often providing emotional support. An example is 'La La Land,' where the love interest plays a crucial role in the protagonist's journey. |
The Confrontation | Trumbo faces confrontations with figures like John Wayne and HUAC investigators. | This trope involves characters facing off against each other, often leading to dramatic tension. An example is 'The Dark Knight,' where Batman confronts the Joker. |
The Redemption Arc | Trumbo ultimately finds success and recognition after his struggles. | This trope involves a character who redeems themselves after facing adversity. An example is 'The Shawshank Redemption,' where the protagonist finds freedom and justice. |
The Mentor | Trumbo serves as a mentor to other blacklisted writers, sharing his experiences. | This trope features a character who guides and teaches another, often leading to growth. An example is 'Dead Poets Society,' where the teacher inspires his students. |
The Family Drama | Trumbo's relationship with his family is strained due to his political beliefs and career struggles. | This trope focuses on the dynamics within a family, often highlighting conflicts and resolutions. An example is 'Little Miss Sunshine,' which explores family tensions and support. |
The Final Showdown | Trumbo's public confrontation with the Hollywood establishment culminates in his recognition. | This trope involves a climactic confrontation that resolves the central conflict. An example is 'Rocky,' where the final match serves as the culmination of the protagonist's journey. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||
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Artistic Freedom | Trumbo's fight against the Hollywood blacklist and his determination to write under his own name. | This theme highlights the importance of creative expression and the right to voice one's beliefs without fear of retribution. | ||
Strengthening Artistic Freedom:
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Political Persecution | The impact of the House Un-American Activities Committee on Trumbo and his peers. | This theme explores the dangers of political witch hunts and the chilling effect they have on free speech and creativity. | ||
Family Dynamics | Trumbo's relationship with his wife Cleo and their children as they navigate the challenges of his blacklisting. | This theme delves into the personal sacrifices made by Trumbo and his family, highlighting the emotional toll of his political battles. | ||
Social Justice | Trumbo's advocacy for workers' rights and his involvement in labor strikes. | This theme emphasizes the broader implications of Trumbo's fight, connecting his personal struggles to larger societal issues. | ||
Personal Sacrifice | Trumbo's willingness to endure imprisonment and financial hardship for his beliefs. | This theme highlights the personal costs associated with standing up for one's principles, illustrating the sacrifices made in the name of freedom. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a blend of sharp dialogue, introspective narration, and a keen awareness of historical and political contexts. This voice manifests through poetic descriptions, witty banter, and a focus on the internal struggles of characters, particularly Dalton Trumbo. The dialogue often balances humor with serious themes, creating a rich tapestry that captures the complexities of the human experience during a tumultuous era. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by enhancing the emotional depth and thematic resonance of the narrative. It creates a mood of introspection and tension, allowing audiences to engage with the characters' moral dilemmas and personal conflicts. The interplay of humor and seriousness adds layers to the storytelling, making the characters' journeys more relatable and impactful. |
Best Representation Scene | 4 - The Iron Curtain Unveiled |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representation because it encapsulates the writer's unique voice through its blend of historical context, emotional intensity, and political relevance. The introspective narration and sharp dialogue highlight Trumbo's internal struggles while also addressing broader societal issues, showcasing the writer's ability to weave personal and political narratives seamlessly. |
- Overall originality score: 9
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay presents a highly original narrative by intertwining the personal and professional struggles of Dalton Trumbo against the backdrop of the Hollywood blacklist era. Each scene offers a fresh perspective on historical events, blending biographical elements with fictionalized dialogue and interactions that resonate with the complexities of the time. The authenticity of character actions and dialogue, along with the exploration of themes such as political persecution, artistic integrity, and family dynamics, contribute to the screenplay's originality.
- Most unique situations: The most unique situations in the screenplay are Trumbo's internal conflict as he navigates the challenges of being blacklisted while trying to maintain his family life, the humorous yet poignant exchanges between characters like Trumbo and Kirk Douglas, and the emotional weight of Trumbo's eventual recognition as a writer under the pseudonym Robert Rich. Additionally, the interactions with historical figures like Hedda Hopper and John Wayne provide a rich tapestry of the era's complexities.
- Overall unpredictability score: 8
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay maintains a high level of unpredictability through its exploration of character motivations and the evolving dynamics of the Hollywood landscape. While the historical context provides a framework, the personal choices of characters, such as Trumbo's decision to reclaim his identity and the reactions of his peers, create unexpected twists. The tension between personal ambition and moral dilemmas keeps the audience engaged, as characters navigate their relationships and the consequences of their actions in a politically charged environment.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | Throughout the screenplay, Dalton Trumbo's internal goals evolve from seeking recognition and artistic integrity to defending his beliefs and values despite societal pressures. He grapples with the complexities of identity, fear of losing his family, and the desire to leave a meaningful legacy. |
External Goals | Trumbo's external goals transition from navigating the Hollywood blacklist and securing writing jobs to achieving recognition for his contributions without compromising his values. He strives to protect his family from the fallout of societal backlash. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict centers on the tension between personal ambition and the collective struggle for artistic freedom, with Trumbo representing the desire for individual expression while contending with societal expectations and the impacts of McCarthyism. |
Character Development Contribution: The character's goals and conflicts drive Trumbo's development from a man burdened by fear and isolation to one who embraces his identity, showcasing his resilience and commitment to his values.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflicts shape the narrative, providing a clear trajectory for Trumbo's journey, from the depths of the blacklist to achieving recognition, creating tension and engagement throughout the screenplay.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The interplay of goals and conflicts enriches the thematic depth, exploring issues of artistic freedom, moral responsibility, and the struggles of individuals against systemic oppression, ultimately advocating for integrity and resilience in the face of adversity.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay is set in various locations, including the serene Lazy-T Ranch in 1947, the gritty alleys of New York, glamorous Beverly Hills mansions, and the bustling MGM Studios. These contrasting environments reflect the emotional states of the characters, from the isolation and introspection of the ranch to the chaotic and tense atmosphere of Hollywood during the McCarthy era.
- Culture: The cultural elements are deeply rooted in the political climate of the late 1940s to the 1960s, highlighting the fear of communism, the Hollywood blacklist, and the struggles of artists for creative freedom. The screenplay showcases the glamorous yet cutthroat nature of Hollywood, the impact of labor strikes, and the societal expectations of the time, including gender roles and family dynamics.
- Society: The societal structure is characterized by power dynamics, with a clear divide between the Hollywood elite and the marginalized artists facing blacklisting. The screenplay depicts a world of suspicion and paranoia, where loyalty to the studio system is paramount, and dissent is met with severe consequences. The interactions between characters reveal the complexities of friendship, betrayal, and the fight for artistic integrity.
- Technology: Technological elements are minimal and reflective of the mid-20th century, focusing on typewriters, radios, and early film technology. The screenplay emphasizes the manual processes of writing and communication, highlighting the struggles of screenwriters in a pre-digital age. The use of newsreels and television broadcasts serves to convey the political climate and societal tensions of the era.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment and societal structures shape the characters' experiences and actions significantly. Characters like Dalton Trumbo navigate the pressures of the Hollywood elite while grappling with their political beliefs and personal integrity. The isolation of the ranch contrasts with the chaos of Hollywood, influencing Trumbo's introspection and determination to fight against the blacklist.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative by providing a rich backdrop for the characters' struggles and triumphs. The contrasting settings of the ranch, Hollywood, and the courtroom create a dynamic narrative that explores themes of freedom, creativity, and the consequences of political beliefs. The screenplay's progression through various locations mirrors Trumbo's journey from isolation to public recognition.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth by exploring the moral complexities of loyalty, betrayal, and the fight for artistic freedom. The societal pressures and cultural tensions of the time serve as a lens through which the characters' personal struggles are magnified, highlighting the impact of the Hollywood blacklist on individual lives and the broader implications for freedom of expression.
central conflict
The central conflict revolves around Dalton Trumbo's struggle against the Hollywood blacklist and the repercussions of his political beliefs, particularly his identification as a communist, which leads to his imprisonment and professional ostracism.
primary motivations
- Trumbo's desire to maintain his integrity and fight for freedom of speech.
- The need to provide for his family despite the challenges posed by the blacklist.
- The aspiration to reclaim his identity and recognition as a writer in Hollywood.
catalysts
- The House Un-American Activities Committee's investigation into Hollywood, leading to subpoenas and the blacklisting of writers.
- Trumbo's decision to continue writing under pseudonyms to support his family.
- The support from friends like Edward G. Robinson and the eventual collaboration with Kirk Douglas.
barriers
- The societal stigma and legal repercussions associated with being labeled a communist.
- The financial struggles faced by Trumbo and his family during his imprisonment.
- The resistance from Hollywood executives and peers who fear association with him.
themes
- The fight for artistic freedom and the consequences of political beliefs.
- The impact of the Hollywood blacklist on personal and professional relationships.
- The resilience of the human spirit in the face of adversity.
stakes
The stakes include Trumbo's career, his family's financial stability, and the broader implications for freedom of expression in America during a politically charged era.
uniqueness factor
The story uniquely intertwines personal and political narratives, showcasing the life of a blacklisted writer while addressing the historical context of the Hollywood blacklist.
audience hook
The audience is engaged by the dramatic tension of Trumbo's fight against oppression, the moral dilemmas faced by characters, and the historical significance of the events depicted.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradoxical engine lies in Trumbo's dual identity as both a celebrated writer and a blacklisted communist, creating a tension between his public persona and private struggles.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another bisociation could be the contrast between the glamorous facade of Hollywood and the dark realities of censorship and persecution, highlighting the disparity between appearance and truth.
Engine: GPT4
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Trumbo' effectively captures the tumultuous life of Dalton Trumbo, showcasing his struggles against the Hollywood blacklist while maintaining a strong focus on character development and thematic depth. The narrative is engaging, with a well-paced structure that balances drama and humor. However, there are areas for improvement, particularly in tightening certain scenes and enhancing character arcs for supporting roles.
- The screenplay opens with a strong hook that immediately establishes Trumbo's character and the historical context, drawing the audience into his world. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (Opening scene with Trumbo writing) Scene Sequence number 4 (Newsreel footage and family reaction) )
- The character development is rich, particularly in how Trumbo's motivations and fears are explored, making him a relatable and complex protagonist. high ( Scene Sequence number 11 (Trumbo's strategy session before the hearings) )
- The climax of the screenplay effectively ties together the themes of redemption and the consequences of the blacklist, providing a satisfying resolution. high ( Scene Sequence number 59 (Trumbo's acceptance speech) )
- The screenplay skillfully weaves in social commentary about Hollywood and politics, enhancing its thematic depth. medium ( Scene Sequence number 3 (Party scene with social commentary) )
- The dialogue is sharp and engaging, showcasing the wit and intelligence of the characters, which keeps the audience invested. medium ( Scene Sequence number 6 (Trumbo's debate with Robinson) )
- Some scenes, particularly those involving political commentary, could benefit from tighter editing to maintain pacing and focus. high ( Scene Sequence number 10 (Congressman Thomas's announcement) )
- Certain character arcs, especially for supporting characters like Hird, could be more fully developed to enhance their impact on the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 12 (Trumbo's conversation with Hird) )
- The pacing in some family scenes feels rushed, which detracts from the emotional weight of Trumbo's relationships. medium ( Scene Sequence number 22 (Trumbo's family car ride) )
- The conflict between Trumbo and Robinson could be more nuanced to reflect the complexity of their friendship and differing ideologies. low ( Scene Sequence number 44 (Trumbo's confrontation with Robinson) )
- The resolution of the screenplay could be more impactful by providing a clearer reflection on the consequences of the blacklist. low ( Scene Sequence number 48 (The Brave One's premiere) )
- There is a lack of exploration into the personal lives of Trumbo's family members, which could add depth to the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 5 (Trumbo's family outing) )
- More background on the Hollywood Ten and their individual stories could enhance the stakes of Trumbo's fight. medium ( Scene Sequence number 7 (Trumbo's interactions with Wayne) )
- The screenplay could benefit from a deeper exploration of the legal ramifications of the blacklist on Trumbo and his peers. low ( Scene Sequence number 17 (Trumbo's court appearance) )
- A more detailed depiction of Trumbo's writing process could provide insight into his creative genius and struggles. low ( Scene Sequence number 19 (Trumbo's writing process) )
- The aftermath of Trumbo's speech could be explored further to show its impact on the industry and his personal life. low ( Scene Sequence number 59 (Trumbo's acceptance speech) )
- The screenplay opens with a strong thematic statement that sets the tone for the entire narrative. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (Opening scene with Trumbo writing) )
- The acceptance speech serves as a powerful commentary on the blacklist and its effects, resonating with contemporary audiences. high ( Scene Sequence number 59 (Trumbo's acceptance speech) )
- The dialogue in this scene highlights the moral complexities of the characters and their differing views on the blacklist. medium ( Scene Sequence number 6 (Trumbo's debate with Robinson) )
- The party scene effectively illustrates the social dynamics of Hollywood during the blacklist era, adding depth to the setting. medium ( Scene Sequence number 3 (Party scene with social commentary) )
- The premiere scene serves as a pivotal moment in Trumbo's journey, showcasing the culmination of his struggles. medium ( Scene Sequence number 48 (The Brave One's premiere) )
- Character Depth The screenplay occasionally overlooks the depth of supporting characters, such as Hird and Robinson, which could enhance the emotional stakes of the narrative. medium
- Pacing Issues Certain scenes feel rushed or overly drawn out, particularly in the middle sections, which can disrupt the overall flow of the narrative. medium
Engine: DeepSeek
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay 'Trumbo' is a compelling historical drama that effectively captures the life and struggles of Dalton Trumbo during the Hollywood blacklist era. It excels in character development, thematic depth, and narrative strength, though it occasionally suffers from pacing issues and some unresolved character arcs. The writing style is sharp and engaging, with a strong emphasis on dialogue and historical authenticity.
- Strong character introduction and development, particularly for Dalton Trumbo, showcasing his complexity and resilience. high ( Scene 1 (INT. LAZY-T RANCH - BATHROOM - DAWN) Scene 22 (INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - PRISONER PROCESSING - DAY) )
- Effective use of historical context and tension during the hearings, making the political stakes personal and compelling. high ( Scene 13 (INT. U.S. CAPITOL - CAUCUS ROOM - DAY - THE HEARINGS) )
- Powerful emotional moments, particularly in scenes involving Trumbo's family and his interactions with other blacklisted figures. high ( Scene 27 (INT. U.S. CAPITOL - CAUCUS ROOM - CONTINUOUS) )
- Excellent dialogue that captures the era and the personalities of the characters, particularly Trumbo's wit and intelligence. medium ( Scene 45 (INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - DAY) )
- Strong resolution that ties together the themes and character arcs, providing a satisfying conclusion to Trumbo's journey. high ( Scene 59 (INT. A BANQUET ROOM - NIGHT) )
- Some scenes feel rushed, particularly those involving secondary characters like Edward G. Robinson, which could benefit from more development. medium ( Scene 7 (INT. HOLLYWOOD ROOSEVELT HOTEL - LOBBY - LATER THAT NIGHT) )
- Pacing issues in the middle act, where the narrative drags slightly during Trumbo's time in prison. medium ( Scene 18 (INT. A MODERN BUILDING - ENTRY - DAY) )
- Certain character arcs, like that of Arlen Hird, feel unresolved or underexplored. medium ( Scene 35 (INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - NIGHT) )
- Some dialogue exchanges can be overly expository, particularly in scenes meant to convey historical context. low ( Scene 40 (INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - NIGHT) )
- The antagonist's motivations, particularly Hedda Hopper's, could be more nuanced to avoid a one-dimensional portrayal. medium ( Scene 50 (INT. PERINO’S RESTAURANT - NIGHT) )
- More exploration of the broader impact of the blacklist on other Hollywood figures beyond Trumbo and his immediate circle. medium
- Additional scenes showing Trumbo's creative process in more detail, particularly how he managed to write under pseudonyms. low
- A deeper dive into the political climate of the time, providing more context for the audience unfamiliar with the era. medium
- The transformation of Trumbo's character from a confident writer to a prisoner and back to a resilient figure is handled with nuance and depth. high ( Scene 22 (INT. ASHLAND FEDERAL PRISON - PRISONER PROCESSING - DAY) )
- The screenplay effectively uses humor to balance the heavy themes, particularly in Trumbo's interactions with his family and colleagues. medium ( Scene 45 (INT. TRUMBO HIGHLAND PARK HOUSE - STUDY - DAY) )
- The final speech by Trumbo is a standout moment, encapsulating the themes of the screenplay and providing a powerful conclusion. high ( Scene 59 (INT. A BANQUET ROOM - NIGHT) )
- Character Arc Resolution Some secondary characters, like Arlen Hird, have arcs that feel unresolved or underexplored, leaving their stories incomplete. medium
- Antagonist Nuance Antagonists like Hedda Hopper and John Wayne are sometimes portrayed in a one-dimensional manner, lacking deeper motivations. medium
- Expository Dialogue Some scenes rely too heavily on expository dialogue to convey historical context, which can feel unnatural. low
- Pacing Issues The middle act suffers from pacing issues, with some scenes dragging and others feeling rushed. medium
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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1 | Edward G. Robinson: What do you want? What we all want. To not die young, poor... or alone. |
13 | DALTON TRUMBO: You believe this Committee has the right to compel testimony, indict opinion -- criminalize thought -- but that right does not exist and the day it does, God help us all. |
12 | DALTON TRUMBO: The radical may fight with the purity of Jesus... but the rich guy wins with the cunning of Satan. |
15 | HEDDA HOPPER: Never, ever, ever, ever, EVER AGAIN! |
6 | John Wayne: And when we talk about America I’m talking about freedom! The kinda freedom we just fought a world war to save! You wanna be a Commie, go be a Commie... but some friends of mine in Washington think you got some questions to answer! |