The imitation game
Executive Summary
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Overview
Genres: Drama, Historical, War, Historical Drama, Thriller, Mystery, Biography, Romance, Crime, Espionage, Coming-of-age
Setting: 1927-1954, Primarily Bletchley Park, Manchester, and Sherborne School in England
Overview: The Imitation Game follows the life of Alan Turing, a brilliant mathematician and cryptanalyst, as he navigates the challenges of World War II while attempting to break the German Enigma code at Bletchley Park. The story begins with Turing's troubled childhood, marked by bullying and isolation, and transitions to his recruitment by the British government to work on codebreaking. As Turing assembles a team and faces skepticism from his superiors, he develops a groundbreaking machine to aid in decrypting messages. Throughout the narrative, Turing grapples with his identity as a gay man in a repressive society, leading to personal and professional conflicts. The climax centers around the moral dilemmas of wartime intelligence, culminating in Turing's tragic fate as he faces societal rejection despite his monumental contributions to the war effort.
Themes: Societal Rejection and Persecution of the Different, The Nature of Intelligence and Genius, The Moral Dilemmas of War and Secrecy, Love and Relationships in the Face of Adversity, The Power of Collaboration and Teamwork
Conflict and Stakes: Alan Turing's struggle against societal norms and legal persecution due to his homosexuality, while also facing the pressure of wartime codebreaking efforts that could save lives.
Overall Mood: Somber and reflective, with moments of tension and urgency.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Tense and authoritative as Turing asserts control over the police officers investigating his home.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The story of Alan Turing, a key figure in WWII codebreaking, whose personal struggles with identity and societal acceptance are intertwined with his professional achievements.
- Major Twist: The revelation of John Cairncross as a Soviet spy, which adds layers of intrigue and betrayal to the narrative.
- Innovative Ideas: The depiction of early computing technology and its role in codebreaking, showcasing Turing's visionary ideas.
- Distinctive Settings: The contrast between the secretive, high-pressure environment of Bletchley Park and the personal struggles faced by Turing in his private life.
Comparable Scripts:
- The Imitation Game
- A Beautiful Mind
- The Theory of Everything
- Good Will Hunting
- Hidden Figures
- The Social Network
- The Man Who Knew Infinity
- The King's Speech
- The Cuckoo's Calling
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a consistent style characterized by sharp, witty dialogue, complex character interactions, and a focus on exploring intricate moral dilemmas and philosophical themes within historical or high-stakes settings. The narratives often blend personal drama with larger societal issues, utilizing intellectual sparring and tension-filled scenes to drive the plot forward. There's a noticeable preference for character-driven stories that delve into the emotional depth and motivations of individuals within compelling and often unpredictable narratives.
Style Similarities:
- Aaron Sorkin
- Tom Stoppard
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Highly Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for "The Imitation Game" is a captivating and multilayered exploration of the life of Alan Turing, a brilliant mathematician who played a pivotal role in cracking the Nazi's Enigma code during World War II. The narrative seamlessly weaves together Turing's personal life, his groundbreaking work on the first digital computer, and the moral dilemmas he faced in using his intellect to guide the course of the war. With its rich character development, historical significance, and innovative storytelling, this screenplay is a compelling and thought-provoking work that would be of great interest to both general audiences and specialized viewers.
USP: The unique selling proposition of 'The Imitation Game' lies in its blend of historical drama with a deeply personal story. It not only highlights Turing's monumental contributions to the war effort through codebreaking but also delves into his tragic personal life as a gay man in a repressive society. This duality makes it compelling for audiences interested in both historical events and character-driven narratives, offering a poignant reflection on the cost of genius and the societal failures that can accompany it.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$20-30 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, particularly those interested in historical dramas, biopics, and stories about LGBTQ+ issues.
Marketability: The screenplay has strong historical relevance, a compelling protagonist, and themes that resonate with contemporary audiences, making it appealing for awards and general viewership.
The unique blend of historical drama and biographical elements, along with a focus on LGBTQ+ themes, can attract diverse audiences.
While it has strong characters and a gripping storyline, the niche subject matter may limit its broader appeal.
Profit Potential: High, due to the potential for critical acclaim, awards recognition, and a strong audience interest in historical and biographical narratives.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a sharp, witty, and intellectually stimulating style. There's a consistent blend of tension, humor, and historical detail, particularly noticeable in the dialogue. The narrative voice effectively balances atmospheric descriptions with character-driven moments, often shifting between the detached observation of the protagonist and intimate glimpses into his interiority. Direction is suggested through strong visual descriptions and pacing cues, creating a sense of urgency and immediacy, especially in scenes of conflict and action.
Best representation: Scene 2 - Suspicion Outside Turing's Door. Scene 2 best encapsulates the writer's voice because it perfectly balances the sharp, witty dialogue with a darkly humorous undertone and a palpable sense of tension. The scene showcases the writer's ability to create compelling character dynamics through intelligent wordplay and subtle power dynamics. Turing's nonchalant handling of the cyanide, combined with his superior intellect, immediately establishes his unique personality and the central conflict of the narrative. The scene's brevity and impactful conclusion leave a lasting impression, effectively foreshadowing the complexities and tensions that drive the rest of the screenplay.
Memorable Lines:
- Christopher: Sometimes it is the very people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine. (Scene 9)
- ALAN TURING: There is only one thing that matters in this entire world, do you understand? Breaking Enigma. (Scene 21)
- Alan Turing: Are you paying attention? (Scene 1)
- ALAN TURING: What if only a machine can defeat another machine? (Scene 14)
- ALAN TURING: Joan Elizabeth Clarke, will you marry me? (Scene 35)
Characters
Alan Turing:A brilliant mathematician and logician, known for his work in codebreaking during World War II and his struggles with societal acceptance.
Joan Clarke:A skilled cryptanalyst and Alan's close friend, who navigates her own challenges as a woman in a male-dominated field.
Hugh Alexander:A fellow codebreaker at Bletchley Park, who often clashes with Alan but ultimately supports him.
Stewart Menzies:The head of MI-6, who plays a pivotal role in the espionage aspects of the story.
Detective Nock:A police detective investigating Alan Turing, who grapples with the complexities of Turing's life and work.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Chaos and Control | Intense, Mysterious, Authoritative | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
2 - The Unraveling of Alan Turing | Sarcastic, Condescending, Intriguing | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Suspicion Outside Turing's Door | Suspenseful, Intriguing, Confrontational | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - A Day of War and Secrets | Serious, Emotional, Tense | 8.2 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - The Challenge of Enigma | Serious, Intense, Confrontational | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - The Challenge of the Enigma | Tense, Intriguing, Serious, Informative | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
7 - Isolation and Humiliation | Intense, Emotional, Bullying, Isolation | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - Trapped in Silence | Tense, Emotional, Dark | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Support and Investigation | Tense, Reflective, Supportive | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Chase Through Chaos | Tense, Confused, Suspenseful | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Deception and Interception | Tense, Intriguing, Suspenseful, Reflective | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
12 - The Weight of Time | Urgent, Tense, Analytical | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Lunch Break at Hut 8 | Tense, Intellectual, Sarcastic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - The Clash of Innovation and Authority | Tense, Defiant, Authoritative, Serious | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
15 - Authority and Tension at Bletchley Park | Tense, Authoritative, Confrontational, Humorous | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Crossword Under Fire | Resilience, Tension, Hope | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - Puzzles and Qualifications | Tense, Serious, Determined | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - A Puzzling Entrance | Tense, Serious, Confrontational, Intriguing | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - Secrets and Bonds | Intimate, Reflective, Inquisitive | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 3 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
20 - The Missing File | Suspenseful, Intriguing, Serious | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - Breaking Barriers | Serious, Intense, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - Midnight Frustration | Frustration, Intensity, Determination | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - Fractured Resolve | Tense, Defiant, Resolute, Angry, Frustrated | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - The Stealthy Escape | Tense, Suspenseful, Intriguing | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - A Fiery Encounter | Tense, Intense, Suspenseful, Informative | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Suspicion at Bletchley Park | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - A Toast to Teamwork | Tense, Introspective, Informative | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - Awkward Offerings | Awkward, Tense, Light-hearted | 7.5 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Secrets in the Classroom | Serious, Nostalgic, Intimate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - A Picnic of Friendship and Ideas | Tense, Light-hearted, Collaborative | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - The Birth of Christopher | Tense, Exciting, Historic | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
32 - A Desperate Stand at Bletchley Park | Tense, Defiant, Resolute, Dramatic | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - The Turing Revelation | Tense, Suspenseful, Confrontational | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
34 - Conflicting Truths | Tense, Dramatic, Serious | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - A Proposal Amidst Chaos | Emotional, Intimate, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - Dancing in the Shadows | Tender, Intimate, Conflicted | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - Anticipation and Isolation | Longing, Heartbreak, Confusion | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
38 - The Imitation Game: A Battle of Wits | Intense, Philosophical, Confrontational | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - Midnight Despair at Bletchley Park | Tension, Frustration, Desperation | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - A Sudden Realization | Romantic, Humorous, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
41 - The Breakthrough in Hut 8 | Tense, Excited, Intrigued, Focused | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
42 - The Race Against Time | Tense, Anxious, Frustrated, Nervous, Hopeful | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
43 - Breakthrough at Bletchley Park | Joyful, Tense, Excited | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
44 - The Cost of Knowledge | Tense, Emotional, Conflict-driven | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
45 - Secrecy Over Tea | Serious, Tense, Strategic, Collaborative | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
46 - Dawn at Bletchley Park: The Ultra Codebreakers | Tense, Exciting, Historical | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
47 - Betrayal in Hut 8 | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
48 - Fractured Trust | Tense, Revealing, Confrontational | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
49 - Trust and Betrayal at Bletchley Park | Tense, Suspenseful, Revealing | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
50 - The Unwitting Courier | Suspenseful, Intriguing, Deceptive | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
51 - Coercion at Bletchley Park | Tense, Threatening, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
52 - A Heart Divided | Tense, Emotional, Confrontational | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
53 - The Weight of Loss | Serious, Emotional, Informative | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
54 - The Weight of Choices | Tense, Calculating, Reflective | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
55 - The Weight of Sacrifice | Tense, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
56 - Secrecy Amidst Celebration | Serious, Tense, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
57 - Judgment and Isolation | Reflective, Introspective, Emotional | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
58 - A Fragile Connection | Emotional, Intense, Heartbreaking | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
59 - Echoes of Loneliness | Sad, Reflective, Tragic | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
60 - Bonfire of Secrets | Reflective, Bittersweet, Triumphant | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Scene 1 - Chaos and Control
Written by
Graham Moore
Based on
"Alan Turing: The Enigma"
By Andrew Hodges
BLACK.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Are you paying attention?
INT. ALAN TURING’S HOUSE - DAY - 1951
A HALF-DOZEN POLICE OFFICERS swarm the Manchester home of
mathematics professor Alan Turing.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Good. This is going to go very
quickly now. If you are not
listening carefully, you will miss
things. Important things. You’re
writing some of this down? That’s
good.
INSIDE ALAN’S HOUSE: There's been a break-in, and the house
is a mess - someone has given it a pretty thorough once-over.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
I will not pause, I will not repeat
myself, and you will not interrupt
me. If you ask me a question, I
will ignore it. You think that
because you’re sitting where you
are, and I am sitting where I am,
that you are in control of what is
about to happen. You’re mistaken. I
am in control, because I know
things that you do not know.
PAPERS inked black with mathematical symbols litter the
floor. The test tubes and beakers of Turing's chemical work
are shattered in the study, CYANIDE and POTASSIUM NITRATE
DRIPPING ACROSS THE UGLY CARPET.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
What I will need from you now is a
commitment. You will listen
closely, and you will not judge me.
And, in the corner: A MACHINE. It’s the size of a dresser,
tall, sprouting VACUUM TUBES and WIRES. It looks
anachronistic here, too futuristic for its time.
The CONSTABLES LOOK AT THE MACHINE, CONFUSED: What is that
thing?
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
When I am finished — when I have
told you that I am finished — you
are free to think whatever you
like. But until then, you will
trust that while this story will be
hard for you to understand,
everything I am saying I am saying
for a reason.
A CONSTABLE PHONES IN the robbery to police headquarters —
INT. POLICE HEADQUATERS - DAY
— At headquarters, a RADIO GIRL RECEIVES the information and
passes it to an assistant for delivery to the detectives on
duty —
INT. MI-6 - RADIO OPERATORS’ ROOM/HALLWAYS - DAY
— While in London, a RADIO OPERATOR in a dark room far below
Victoria Street INTERCEPTS THE MESSAGE —
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
If you cannot commit to this, then
please leave the room. That’s
right, you’re the one who’s free to
go. But if you choose to stay, if
you choose to listen, remember
this: If things happen that you do
not like, you chose to be here.
— The MESSAGE is HANDED OFF and WHISKED through the dim
hallways —
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Scene 2 - The Unraveling of Alan Turing
— Until it’s finally deposited on the desk of STEWART
MENZIES, the Director of MI-6. British Secret Intelligence
Services.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
What happens from this moment
forward is not my responsibility:
It’s yours.
Menzies picks up the message: “Alan Turing has been robbed.”
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
This will go quite fast now.
(laughs)
And that is the last time I will
repeat myself. Pay attention.
EXT. ALAN TURNING’S HOUSE - MORNING
DETECTIVE ROBERT NOCK, 40s, athletic, more interested in
football than being a detective, hustles past a few double-
parked police cars and up the steps and into:
INT. ALAN TURNING’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Detective Nock enters to find the same messy crime scene we
just saw. He’s addressed by SERGEANT STAEHL.
SGT. STAEHL
Bit late, don’t you think?
DETECTIVE NOCK
The baby. Up all night, hollering
and crying. June says it’s collick.
(re: the mess)
What’s all this, then?
SGT. STAEHL
Turing, Alan. Professor at King’s.
Seems there’s been a robbery.
DETECTIVE NOCK
What of?
SGT. STAEHL
That’s just it. Nothing’s missing,
really.
DETECTIVE NOCK
No, what’s he a professor of?
SGT. STAEHL
(consulting notes)
Maths. Or, as he put it, “ordinal
logic, with a dose of number
theory.”
ON NOCK: What on earth does that mean?
Staehl shrugs.
DETECTIVE NOCK
What’s he doing in Manchester?
Sergeant Staehl shows Nock the MACHINE in the corner.
ON NOCK: What the hell is that?
SGT. STAEHL
Something with machines. Project at
the NPL, I checked, but he won’t
say what it’s on.
DETECTIVE NOCK
He’s a bit squirrely then, our
Professor Turing?
SGT. STAEHL
That’s putting it mildly.
Sergeant Staehl motions to the next room, and he follows Nock
in...
... Where they find ALAN TURING, 38. He’s the smartest man in
the room, and he knows it. But he doesn’t really care if you
do.
Turing is VERY CAREFULLY sweeping up a pile of WHITE POWDER.
He’s doing it with a PAINTBRUSH, his mouth covered in a
scarf.
He’s totally oblivious to the detectives as they enter.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Professor Turing?
(beat)
Professor Turing? My name is
Detective Nock. Manchester Police.
Sergeant Staehl here tells me
you’ve had a robbery last night.
(still nothing)
Professor Turing?
Detective Nock steps closer, peering over Turing’s shoulder
at the white powder.
DETECTIVE NOCK (CONT’D)
Professor —
ALAN TURING
— I would step back, if I were you.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Pardon me?
ALAN TURING
Step back, and don’t breathe so
much.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Breathe?
ALAN TURING
You’re breathing heavily and you’re
going to inhale this junk and
you’re going to leave your collicky
son without a father.
Detective Nock stops, and steps back. What in the world?
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
Sound carries in this house.
DETECTIVE NOCK
What is all that?
ALAN TURING
Cyanide. Undiluted. Wouldn’t take
more than a thimbleful to kill you.
Turing finishes sweeping the cyanide into a jar, before
safely CAPPING IT.
Turing stands, removes his scarf, and for the first time
takes a look at Detective Nock. Sizes him up.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
Oh. Disappointing.
Detective Knock and Sergeant Staehl exchange a look.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Pardon?
ALAN TURING
I’d hoped for a bit more.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Sergeant Staehl, is it just me, or
do you get the sense that we’re
being insulted?
ALAN TURING
(to Nock)
You lied to your friend here about
your son, which is just unseemly.
Collick didn’t keep you up all
night. Drink did. You’ve bags under
your eyes the size of strawberries.
Your topcoat reeks of whiskey.
You’re short of breath after
walking 30 paces. And I believe
Manchester United had a match
yesterday, yes? I could hear the
shouting from Simpson’s on my way
home.
DETECTIVE NOCK
(caught)
... We won by four. Would’ve been
unseemly not to celebrate.
Sergeant Staehl SIGHS, embarrassed.
SGT. STAEHL
You had a break in last night. Your
neighbor, a Mr. Springborn, called
to report the noise. Only you say
there’s nothing missing. Odd. So
how about it — You tell us what
happened, and we find the chap who
did this.
ALAN TURING
Gentlemen, I don’t think you could
figure out who broke into my house
if he walked up and spat in your
face. What I could really use at
the moment is not a bobby but a
good cleaning lady. So unless one
of you has an apron in your car,
I’d suggest that you file your
reports and leave me alone.
Staehl is about to say something — and probably something
aggressive, by the look of his face — but Nock stops him.
DETECTIVE NOCK
... As you say, Professor Turing.
Best of luck with your cyanide.
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Scene 3 - Suspicion Outside Turing's Door
Detective Nock and Sergeant Staehl walk away from Turing’s
house.
SGT. STAEHL
I’ll give you a bob if you can name
me a more insufferable sod.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Curious, isn’t he?
SGT. STAEHL
Oh, you’ve a soft spot for the
bastard ‘cause he called you on
your drink? Which, while we’re on
the subject —
DETECTIVE NOCK
— Seemed a bit forced though,
didn’t it?
SGT. STAEHL
Don’t know what you mean.
DETECTIVE NOCK
If you didn’t want a pair of
bobbies digging around in your
personal affairs, well, that would
have been a stellar way to see that
they don’t. Tell me you don’t think
this is suspicious.
SGT. STAEHL
I don’t think this is suspicious.
DETECTIVE NOCK
A mysterious professor who won’t
admit he’s had something stolen
from his flat?
SGT. STAEHL
What’re you suggesting?
DETECTIVE NOCK
I’m suggesting that Alan Turing is
hiding something.
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Scene 4 - A Day of War and Secrets
Alan Turing — 11 years younger — HURRIES through Euston
Station on the day that Britain declares war on Germany.
The station is preparing for war:
PAPERBOYS SCREAM the headlines: “800,000 CHILDREN EVACUATED!”
“GERMAN BOMBS COMING!” “FOOD SUPPLIES RATIONED!”
MILITARY PERSONNEL herd PACKS OF CHILDREN like cattle onto
rumbling trains.
The children, born with stiff upper lips, hold back their
tears. A FATHER shakes the hand of his 8-YEAR-OLD SON
goodbye, almost business-like. Neither knows if they’ll ever
see one another again.
Alan moves through this determinedly, methodically, and
unemotionally — it’s like he doesn’t even notice anyone is
there.
INT/EXT. TRAIN - DAY - LATER
Alan Turing walks down the aisle of a train bound for
Bletchley Park — his is the only adult face amidst the sea of
children.
He watches a SMALL BOY pour over a PUZZLE BOOK. OLDER KIDS,
loud and rowdy, TAUNT the Small Boy, who doesn’t look up,
he’s so focused on his puzzles.
Alan watches. Maybe he smiles. Maybe he understands.
EXT. BLETCHLEY VILLAGE - STREET - A FEW HOURS LATER
Alan walks through the small village of Bletchley. He passes
a sign that reads “BLETCHLEY RADIO MANUFACTURING” as he heads
to
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - AN HOUR LATER
Alan arrives at the imposing front gates of Bletchley Park.
An enormous Victorian mansion lies in the center of the
grounds, surrounded by empty gardens and tall iron fences.
As Alan approaches, two NAVAL OFFICERS with MACHINE GUNS step
out from behind the BARRICADES.
Whatever this place is, it’s housing something very secret
inside.
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Scene 5 - The Challenge of Enigma
A few minutes later, Alan sits alone in a cluttered office.
He stares ahead blankly at the empty chair behind the desk.
Waits.
COMMANDER DENNISTON (O.S.)
— What are you doing here?
Alan turns with a start.
ALAN TURING
The girl told me to wait —
COMMANDER DENNISTON
In my office? She tell you to help
yourself to a cup of tea while you
were here?
ALAN TURING
No. She didn’t.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
She didn’t tell you what a joke is
then either, I gather.
ALAN TURING
Was she supposed to?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
For Christ’s sake — who are you?
ALAN TURING
Alan Turing.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
(looking at papers on his
desk)
Turing... Let me see... Oh, Turing.
The mathematician.
ALAN TURING
Correct.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
How ever could I have guessed?
ALAN TURING
You didn’t. It was written on your
paper.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
... King’s College, Cambridge. Says
here you were a bit of a prodigy in
the maths department.
ALAN TURING
I’m not sure I can evaluate that,
Mr... ?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
How old are you, Mr. Turing?
ALAN TURING
27.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
How old were you when you became a
fellow at Cambridge?
ALAN TURING
24.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
And how old were you when you
published this paper here, that has
a title I can barely understand,
which apparently got you this
fellowship?
ALAN TURING
23.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
And you don’t think that qualifies
you as a certified prodigy?
ALAN TURING
Rather depends on how old my peers
were when they did comparable work,
doesn’t it?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
And how old were they?
ALAN TURING
Newton discovered the binomial
theorem at 22. Einstein published
four papers that changed the world
at 26. As far as I can tell I’ve
barely made par.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
You’re serious, aren’t you?
ALAN TURING
Would you prefer I make a joke?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Not sure you know what those are.
ALAN TURING
It hardly seems fair that that
would be a requirement for
employment here, Mr...?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Commander Denniston, of the Royal
Navy. All right, Mr. Turing, I’ll
bite. Why do you want to work for
His Majesty’s government?
ALAN TURING
Oh, I don’t, really.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
(suspicious)
Are you a bleeding pacifist,
Turing?
ALAN TURING
I’m agnostic about violence.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
But you realize that 600 miles from
London there’s this nasty chap
named Hitler who’s looking to
engulf Europe in tyranny?
ALAN TURING
Politics is not my area of
expertise.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
I believe you’ve just set a record
for the shortest job interview in
British military history.
ALAN TURING
Mother says that I can be off-
putting sometimes. On account of
being the best mathematician in the
world.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
You’re the best mathematician in
the world?
ALAN TURING
Oh. Yes.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
... Do you know how many people
I’ve rejected for this program?
ALAN TURING
No.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
That’s right. Because we’re a top
secret program. But I’ll tell you,
just because we’re friends, that
last week I rejected one of our
great nation’s top linguists, knows
German better than Bertolt Brecht.
ALAN TURING
I don’t speak German.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
What?
ALAN TURING
I don’t. Speak German.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
How the bloody hell are you
supposed to decrypt German
communications if you don’t, oh, I
don’t know, speak German?
ALAN TURING
I’m quite excellent at crossword
puzzles.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
(calling off)
MARGARET!
ALAN TURING
The German codes are a puzzle. A
game. Just like any other game.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
MARGARET! Where are you?!
ALAN TURING
I’m very good at games. Puzzles.
And I think this is the hardest
puzzle in the world.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
MARGARET!?!
(beat)
For the love of... This is a joke,
obviously.
ALAN TURING
I’m afraid I can’t make jokes,
Commander Denniston.
And for a split second, Denniston actually smiles.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Have a pleasant trip back to
Cambridge, Professor.
ALAN TURING
Enigma.
At the mention of this word Denniston looks suddenly serious.
SECRETARY (”MARGARET”)
(popping head in)
You called for me?
He WAVES HER AWAY, entirely focused on what Alan just said.
ALAN TURING
(after she leaves)
... That’s what you’re doing here.
The top secret program at
Bletchley. You’re trying to break
the German Enigma machine.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
What makes you think that?
ALAN TURING
It’s the greatest encryption device
in history, and the Germans use it
for all major communications.
(MORE)
ALAN TURING (CONT'D)
If the Allies broke Enigma — well,
this would turn into a very short
war indeed. Of course you’re
working on it. But you also haven’t
got anywhere. If you had, you
wouldn’t be hiring cryptographers
out of University. You need me a
lot more than I need you. I’d just
as easily go work for the Germans,
frankly, but they simply don’t have
anything this good to work on. Our
mathematicians aren’t as impressive
as theirs. With one significant
exception. I like solving problems,
Commander. And Enigma is the most
difficult problem in the world.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Enigma isn’t difficult. It’s
impossible. The Americans. The
French. The Russians. The Germans.
Everyone thinks Enigma is
unbreakable.
ALAN TURING
Goody! Let me try and we’ll know
for sure.
The men stare at each other. Neither blinks.
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Scene 6 - The Challenge of the Enigma
ANGLE ON: A machine. It looks like a typewriter that got left
on the set of Blade Runner. Wires running all over it. Extra
gears sticking out of the sides. Blinking lights that reveal
German characters. Half electrical, half mechanical.
COMMANDER DENNISTON (O.S.)
Welcome to Enigma.
SLOWLY REVEAL: COMMANDER DENNISTON, 50s, is showing the
ENIGMA MACHINE to the NEW RECRUITS.
They are:
HUGH ALEXANDER, 30s, loves women and chess in equal measure.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS, 30s, Scottish, not the prodigy his
compatriots are and knows it.
PETER HILTON, 20s, a precocious undergrad from Oxford.
KEITH FURMAN and CHARLES RICHARDS, 40s, both stodgy
linguists.
Stewart Menzies — head of MI-6, who we briefly glimpsed in
the opening — stands in the corner, silent and observing.
Charming and inscrutable, he didn’t become the head of
British Secret Intelligence Services by accident.
COMMANDER DENNISTON (CONT’D)
The German navy encodes every
message they send using the Enigma
machine. The details of every
surprise attack, of every secret
convoy, of every U-Boat in the
bloody Atlantic go into that thing,
and out comes... Gibberish.
FINALLY REVEAL: ... Alan stands with them, staring at the
machine like it’s the Sistine Chapel.
He reaches out and touches it lovingly.
ALAN TURING
It’s beautiful.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
It’s the crooked hand of death
itself.
Denniston shows Alan sheets of Enigma messages: PAGE AFTER
PAGE OF RANDOM LETTERS.
COMMANDER DENNISTON (CONT’D)
Our WRENs intercept thousands of
radio messages a day. But to the
lovely young ladies of the Women’s
Royal Navy, they’re nonsense. It’s
only when you feed them back into
Enigma that they make sense.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
But we have an Enigma machine.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Yes. Polish intelligence smuggled
this out of Berlin.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
So what’s the problem? Just put the
intercepted messages back in to
Enigma and —
ALAN TURING
— It’s not that simple, is it? Just
having an Enigma machine doesn’t
help you decode the messages.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Very good, Mr. Turing. To decode a
message, you need to know the
machine’s settings. The Germans
switch settings every day, promptly
at midnight. We usually intercept
our first message around 6am. Which
gives you exactly 18 hours every
day to crack the code before it
changes, and you start again.
Alan looks at the machine carefully.
ALAN TURING
Five rotors. Six plugboard cables.
That’s...
CHARLES RICHARDS
Five —
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
— thousand million —
PETER HILTON
— No no it’s — I’ve got it —
CHARLES RICHARDS
— Million, million —
KEITH FURMAN
— In the millions, obviously —
CHARLES RICHARDS
— Obviously —
ALAN TURING
— Over one hundred and fifty
million million million possible
settings.
All eyes turn to Turing: Wow.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
... Very good.
HUGH ALEXANDER
One hundred fifty nine, if you’d
rather be exact about it.
Everyone looks at Hugh now.
HUGH ALEXANDER (CONT’D)
One five nine with eighteen zeroes
behind it. Possibilities. Every
single day.
Jesus Christ. Who is this guy?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Gentlemen, meet Hugh Alexander.
I’ve personally selected him to run
this unit.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Didn’t you...?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Mr. Alexander won Britain’s
national chess championship.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Twice.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
(extending a hand to Hugh)
John Cairncross.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
(to Alan)
You’re not the only one who’s good
at games around here.
ALAN TURING
Are we all to work together then? I
prefer to have my own office.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
You’re a team, and you’ll work as
one.
ALAN TURING
I don’t have time to explain myself
as I go along, and I’m afraid these
men will only slow me down.
STEWART MENZIES
(piping up from the
corner)
— If you can’t play together, then
I’m afraid we can’t let you play at
all.
They all stare at him.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
This is Stuart Menzies. MI-6.
The team ACKNOWLEDGES Menzies.
CHARLES RICHARDS
There are only five divisions of
military intelligence. There is no
“MI-6.”
STEWART MENZIES
Exactly. That’s the spirit.
(to Alan)
Mr. Turing. Do you know how many
British servicemen have died
because of Enigma?
ALAN TURING
I don’t.
STEWART MENZIES
Three.
They all stare at Menzies: That doesn’t sound like very many.
STEWART MENZIES (CONT’D)
... While we’ve been having this
conversation.
(checks his watch)
Oh look. There’s another. Rather
hope he didn’t have a family. This
war that Commander Denniston’s been
going on about? We’re not winning
it. Break the code and at least we
might have a chance.
(to Denniston)
Shall we leave the children alone
with their new toy?
Menzies and Commander Denniston LEAVE.
The team stands there. With Enigma.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Alright boys. Let’s play.
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Scene 7 - Isolation and Humiliation
TEENAGE BOYS play cricket in the green front gardens of a
boys boarding school. Behind them looms the school’s stately
central manor house.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
The problem began, of course, with
the carrots.
INT. SHERBORNE SCHOOL FOR BOYS - DAY
YOUNG ALAN TURING, 15, sits alone in the dining hall. Other
BOYS joke and laugh and tell animated stories at nearby
tables, but Alan sits alone, staring intently at his food.
ON ALAN’S PLATE: Boiled steak. Potatoes. Peas. And carrots.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Carrots are orange. Peas are green.
They mustn’t touch.
Alan carefully tries to separate the carrots from the peas.
It’s like he’s performing brain surgery.
BEHIND ALAN, a group of BIGGER BOYS approach quietly. One of
them holds a TRAY OF BOILED VEGETABLES —
— The Boys try to MUFFLE THEIR GIGGLES so Alan can’t hear
them approach —
— The Boys DUMP THE TRAY OF VEGETABLES ALL OVER ALAN.
Alan SCREAMS.
The Boys LAUGH as Alan SCREAMS and SHAKES and tries to get
the peas and carrots and everything else off of him. He’s in
hell.
Alan FALLS DOWN. Still shaking, still screaming.
YOUNG ALAN
Carrots are orange! Carrots are
orange! Carrots are orange!
BOY #1
What a bloody weirdo!
Alan CURLS UP INTO A BALL as he shivers.
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Scene 8 - Trapped in Silence
... Alan is now inside a coffin.
He’s KICKING AT THE WOODEN BOARDS ABOVE and SCREAMING TO BE
RELEASED.
It’s not helping.
From above, we hear the familiar LAUGHTER OF THE SCHOOLBOYS.
REVEAL: The “coffin” is make-shift; the Boys have constructed
it out of the broken floorboards of a half-finished class
room. Alan is buried underground, and they’re nailing him in.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Do you know why people like
violence? Because it feels good.
The THUMP THUMP of nails entering the boards.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Humans find violence deeply
satisfying. But remove the
satisfaction, and the act
becomes... Hollow.
FROM INSIDE THE COFFIN: Alan goes silent.
The Boys pound away, but the silence unnerves them.
BOY #1
Alan? Alan?
BOY #2
C’mon don’t be such a kike about
it...
BOY #3
Leave him to bloody rot.
The Boys LEAVE.
There’s still only SILENCE from inside Alan’s coffin.
Alan breathes slowly. Quietly. Controls his shivering to
barely a tremor. He waits.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
I didn’t learn this on my own
though. I had help.
Suddenly, the boards above him CREAK. Then BEND. Then SNAP.
Then an ARM REACHES DOWN and PULLS Alan out of the coffin.
REVEAL: CHRISTOPHER MORCOM, 16, tall, pretty, and charming in
ways that Alan will never, ever be.
CHRISTOPHER
Christ, I thought they were going
to kill you.
Christopher PULLS Alan from the floorboard coffin and they —
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Scene 9 - Support and Investigation
Walking away from the half-finished school room, Christopher
helps Alan as he hobbles.
YOUNG ALAN
... It’s not my fault. The carrots
got in with the peas.
(off Christopher’s look)
I’m sorry. I won’t let them do it
again.
CHRISTOPHER
They’re getting worse.
YOUNG ALAN
They only beat me up because I’m
smarter than they are.
CHRISTOPHER
No. They beat you up because you’re
different. So you’ll have to try a
little harder to blend in.
YOUNG ALAN
Mother says I’m just an odd duck.
CHRISTOPHER
And she’s right.
Alan STUMBLES and Christopher grabs his hand, steadying him.
CHRISTOPHER (CONT’D)
But you know, sometimes it is the
very people who no one imagines
anything of who do the things that
no one can imagine.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Christopher helped.
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INT. POLICE STATION - MANCHESTER - DAY - 1951
Detective Nock sits at his desk, yelling incredulously into
his telephone.
DETECTIVE NOCK
... What do you mean, “classified”?
(beat)
... Yes, I am aware of the literal
meaning of the word “classified,”
what I’m asking is why would a
maths professor have his military
records classified?
(beat)
... Well then I will come down
there and...
Nock HANGS UP, frustrated.
He notices Sergeant Staehl walking past.
DETECTIVE NOCK (CONT’D)
Come with me.
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Scene 10 - Chase Through Chaos
Detective Nock and Sergeant Staehl walk through Manchester,
away from the police station.
SGT. STAEHL
... So are you going to catch this
mysterious thief who hasn’t
actually stolen anything?
DETECTIVE NOCK
Alan Turing is a suspect in a
robbery but they won’t share a
thing with the police?
SGT. STAEHL
“Suspect”? I distinctly recall
writing his name next to the word
“victim.”
Nock looks around, paying no attention to Staehl. He sees
something (which we don’t) in the reflection of a shop
window.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Will?
SGT. STAEHL
Yes?
DETECTIVE NOCK
I’m terribly sorry about this.
Suddenly, Nock PUSHES Staehl, hard.
Staehl, reeling, is very, very confused.
SGT. STAEHL
What?
Nock responds by PUNCHING Staehl across the jaw, sending him
to the ground.
People on the street TURN and STARE.
Nock RUNS away down the street —
Staehl starts CHASING AFTER HIM —
— They each DODGE PASSERSBY, who are all staring —
— Until Nock suddenly CHANGES DIRECTIONS and SLAMS INTO A
PEDESTRIAN —
— The Pedestrian and Nock TUMBLE TO THE GROUND.
The two SCRAMBLE, and then exchange a look: The Pedestrian
is... Concerned.
The Pedestrian STRUGGLES TO HIS FEET and RUNS OFF.
Nock stands dusting himself off as Staehl catches up to him —
— And PUNCHES NOCK IN THE JAW.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Oww! Would you stop it?
SGT. STAEHL
What is wrong with you?
DETECTIVE NOCK
Here.
Nock hands a BILLFOLD back to Staehl.
SGT. STAEHL
... Whose is this?
Very confused, Staehl LOOKS THROUGH the billfold.
SGT. STAEHL (CONT’D)
... That man you knocked over! You
stole his billfold.
Nock shrugs.
SGT. STAEHL (CONT’D)
... Oh. Bob?
DETECTIVE NOCK
Yes?
SGT. STAEHL
There’s a photograph of you.
Staehl shows Nock the billfold’s contents: A PHOTO OF NOCK,
PAPERS WITH NOCK’S ADDRESS, PERSONAL DATA.
SGT. STAEHL (CONT’D)
That man was following you.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Has been for awhile now.
SGT. STAEHL
Good God... Your home address, your
district, your... Bob, there is a
letter here from the Foreign
Office.
Staehl shows him: The letter, stamped with the Foreign Office
seal, instructs that the bearer be granted access to all
records concerning one “ROBERT NOCK”.
FEMALE PEDESTRIAN
(approaching them)
— Are you two all right?
SGT. STAEHL
(to Pedestrian)
Bugger off.
She LEAVES, offended.
SGT. STAEHL (CONT’D)
Why are you being followed? We have
to call this in.
DETECTIVE NOCK
(looking at the letter)
I think I might have a better idea.
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Scene 11 - Deception and Interception
QUICK SHOTS: Nock PAINTS TIPP-EX over his own name on the
letter he just stole, and TYPES IN A NEW ONE — “ALAN TURING”
INT. ADMIRALTY RECORDS OFFICE - DAY - LATER
Detective Nock walks up to a SECRETARY.
DETECTIVE NOCK
(to Secretary)
Pardon me. I’d like to see some
documents, if I may. Service
records of a Mr. Turing. Alan.
He FLASHES THE FORGED LETTER.
DETECTIVE NOCK (CONT’D)
Foreign Office sent me.
Off of Nock’s SMILE we
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EXT. ATLANTIC OCEAN - GERMAN PLANE - DAY — 1940
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
The game was quite a simple one.
ON THE ATLANTIC:
— A GERMAN SPYPLANE spots a BRITISH CONVOY travelling across
the ocean, far away. We hear the BEEP BEEP of Morse Code as
the SPYPLANE SENDS OUT AN ENCRYPTED MESSAGE and we cut to —
EXT. BRITISH SHIP - ON DECK - DAY
— The DECK of one of the British ships. A SEAMAN smokes a
cigarette as waves crash against the side. He’s approached by
two FRIENDS. He looks: He’s only got one smoke left. In a
kind gesture, he SNAPS his cigarette in half, sharing it —
INT/EXT. GERMAN SUBMARINE - DAY
— As underwater, a GERMAN SUBMARINE receives the BEEP BEEP of
the Morse message about the convoy’s location. The sub
CHANGES COURSE —
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Every single German message. Every
surprise attack. Every bombing run.
Every imminent U-boat assault. They
were all floating through the air,
radio signals that any schoolboy
with an AM kit could intercept.
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 14 - DAY
AT BLETCHLEY PARK:
— Inside HUT 14: ROW after ROW of RADIO STATIONS, all staffed
by the smartly dressed young ladies of the Women’s Royal
Navy. One WREN, listening to Morse code on her headphones,
intercepts the very same BEEP BEEP of the MESSAGE —
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
The trick was that they were
encrypted.
— She takes it down by hand: It’s GIBBERISH. Encrypted. She
places the messages in a PILE —
— A FEMALE ASSISTANT picks up the pile of encrypted messages-
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Scene 12 - The Weight of Time
— And carries it through Bletchley —
— The grounds surrounding the mansion at Bletchley Park are
now littered with 18 WOODEN “HUTS” — hastily constructed
structures that contain all of Britain’s top secret
cryptography operations —
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
One hundred and fifty nine million
million million possible Enigma
settings. All we had to do was try
each one.
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - DAY
— The Female Assistant hurries past ARMED GUARDS and SECURITY
CHECKPOINTS into —
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - DAY
— HUT 8: Where the Enigma cryptanalysis team does their work.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
But if we had 10 men checking one
setting a minute, for 24 hours
every day and seven days every
week, it would take... Well, you
tell me. How many days would it
take to check each of the settings?
— John Cairncross, Peter Hilton, Keith Furman, and Charles
Richards use PERFORATED SHEETS to analyze Enigma messages as
the Female Assistant deposits the pile onto Hugh Alexander’s
desk.
All around Hut 8, we see STACK after STACK of encrypted
messages, just like the one that was just delivered.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
... Would you like a hint? It’s not
days. It’s years.
The team does their best to decrypt these stacks of messages,
but they’re getting nowhere. There are thousands of messages,
and only four cryptographers.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
(sighs)
Oh dear, you still haven’t worked
it out, have you? Pity you didn’t
pay more attention in school.
(beat)
It’s 20 million years.
MOVE IN on the urgent message about the attack, which is
untouched as —
EXT. ATLANTIC OCEAN - BRITISH SHIP - DECK - DAY
BACK IN THE ATLANTIC:
— The deck of the British ship. The sailors SMOKE as we —
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
To stop a coming attack, we would
have to check 20 million years
worth of settings... In 20 minutes.
— Move DOWN INTO THE WATER to see that the German submarine
has arrived. It FIRES A TORPEDO at the helpless convoy and we
cut—
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Scene 13 - Lunch Break at Hut 8
BACK TO HUT 8:
The team is still buried in pile after pile of undecrypted
messages. Another convoy has been lost because they couldn’t
move fast enough, and they’re so far behind they don’t even
know it yet.
PETER HILTON
... I’m famished.
Hugh stretches, staring out the window, where he sees a WREN
passing by.
HUGH ALEXANDER
(re: the WREN)
Good God, what is it with women in
little hats?
John, Peter, Keith and Charles all look as well — there is in
fact something strangely sexy about women in little hats.
John Cairncross gets up and walks into the next room, where
he finds Alan, working alone.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
The boys... We were going to get
some lunch?
(Alan ignores him)
Alan?
ALAN TURING
Yes.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
I said we were going to get some
lunch?
(Alan keeps ignoring him)
Alan?
ALAN TURING
Yes.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Can you hear me?
ALAN TURING
Yes.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
I said we’re off to get some lunch.
(silence)
This is starting to get a bit
repetitive.
ALAN TURING
What is?
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
I had asked if you wanted to have
lunch with us.
ALAN TURING
No you didn’t. You told me you were
getting lunch.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Have I offended you in some way?
ALAN TURING
Why would you think that?
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Would you like to come to lunch
with us?
ALAN TURING
When is lunchtime?
HUGH ALEXANDER
(calling out)
Christ, Alan, it’s a bleeding
sandwich.
ALAN TURING
What is?
HUGH ALEXANDER
Lunch.
ALAN TURING
I don’t like sandwiches.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Nevermind.
HUGH ALEXANDER
John was trying to be nice.
ALAN TURING
How?
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Let it go.
HUGH ALEXANDER
You know to pull off this irascible
genius routine, one has to actually
be a genius. Yet we’re the ones
making progress here, aren’t we?
ALAN TURING
You have?
HUGH ALEXANDER
We’ve decrypted a number of German
messages by analyzing the frequency
of letter distribution.
ALAN TURING
Oh. Even a broken clock is right
twice a day. That’s not progress at
all, that’s just blind luck. I’m
designing a machine that will allow
us to break every message, every
day, instantly.
We see his work: ELECTRICAL SCHEMATICS. He’s designing a
STRANGE NEW MACHINE.
ON THE TEAM: A machine? That’s ridiculous.
PETER HILTON
Who’s hungry? Let’s go.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Bye, Alan.
The guys gather their things and walk out...
ALAN TURING
I’m hungry.
... They turn.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
What?
ALAN TURING
Peter asked if anyone was hungry. I
am.
(they stare at him)
May I have some soup, please?
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Scene 14 - The Clash of Innovation and Authority
Hugh, John, Peter, Keith and Charles all exit Hut 8, shaking
their heads and laughing at what an impossible weirdo Alan
is.
In the window, we see Alan’s face, alone with his work.
ON ALAN: He looks out at the team, a slight longing to be
among them, and yet the resolution that he never can be.
EXT. OUTSKIRTS OF BLETCHLEY - DAY - SEQUENCE
Alan runs for miles and miles along the outskirts of
Bletchley.
He thinks when he runs. It focuses him. He looks intent,
deeply concentrating as he presses his legs as hard as
they’ll go.
INTERCUT WITH:
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - DAY - SEQUENCE
Alan obsessively works on something in Hut 8, filling sheet
after sheet of paper with his designs. He’s drawing
SCHEMATICS... As it fills out, we see what it is:
It’s a HUGE MACHINE.
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - DAY
Alan walks through the camp brandishing a PIECE OF PAPER.
He’s a fish out of water amidst all of the MILITARY MEN
moving supplies around him.
He finds what he’s looking for:
Commander Denniston stands before a SUPPLY TRUCK, checking
the manifest as supplies are UNLOADED.
ALAN TURING
This is unacceptable.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Turing. If you’d like to discuss
the complaint, I’d suggest making a
proper appointment with my office.
ALAN TURING
Complaint? Hugh Alexander has
denied my requisition. Parts and
equipment, to build the machine
I’ve designed.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Your fellow codebreakers are
refusing to work with you. They’ve
filed a formal complaint.
ALAN TURING
It’s inspired by an old Polish code
machine, only infinitely more
advanced.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
If you don’t respond to the
complaint, I’ll have to take it up
with the Home Office.
ALAN TURING
Fine. My response is, they are all
idiots. Fire them and use the
savings to fund my machine. I’ll
only need about a hundred thousand
pounds.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
A hundred thousand — Why are you
building a machine?
ALAN TURING
It’s highly technical. You wouldn’t
understand.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
I suggest you make an effort to
try.
ALAN TURING
... Enigma is a machine. A very
well-designed machine. Our problem
is that we’re trying to beat it
with men. What if only a machine
can defeat another machine?
Denniston stares at him.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
... Hugh Alexander is in charge of
your unit and if he’s said no,
that’s that.
ALAN TURING
I do not have time for this —
COMMANDER DENNISTON
— Have you ever won a war before,
Turing? I have. Do you know how
it’s done? Order. Discipline. Chain
of command. You’re not at
University any longer. You are a
very small cog in a very large
system and you’ll do as your
commanding officer instructs.
ALAN TURING
Who is your commanding officer?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Winston Churchill. 10 Downing
Street, London. You have a problem
with my decision you can take it up
with him.
And with that, Denniston walks away, furious.
ON ALAN: Well alright, if you say so...
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Scene 15 - Authority and Tension at Bletchley Park
Stewart Menzies walks out of the Bletchley’s MAIN GATE,
through security, when’s he’s approached by:
ALAN TURING
Mr. Menzies! You’re headed back to
London, yes?
STEWART MENZIES
Possibly.
ALAN TURING
Will you deliver a letter for me?
Alan hands Menzies a letter:
It’s addressed to “WINSTON CHURCHILL. 10 DOWNING ST. LONDON.”
ON MENZIES: Well, this should be interesting...
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - DENNISTON’S OFFICE - DAY
The team — Alan, Hugh, John, Peter, Keith, and Charles — are
assembled in Commander Denniston’s office for a meeting.
Stewart Menzies watches quietly from the corner, as is his
way.
HUGH ALEXANDER
You must be joking. Churchill put
Alan in charge?!?!?!
KEITH FURMAN
— This is a terrible plan —
PETER HILTON
— No no no no no no —
ALAN TURING
— Really? I can give these men
orders now?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Though I hate to say it... Yes.
ALAN TURING
Fantastic.
(to Keith and Charles)
Keith and Charles. You’re both
fired.
KEITH FURMAN
Excuse me?
CHARLES RICHARDS
What?
ALAN TURING
You’re mediocre linguists and
positively poor codebreakers.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Alan, you can’t just fire Keith and
Charles.
ALAN TURING
He just said I could.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
(furious)
I did no such thing.
STEWART MENZIES
But Churchill did.
Denniston looks at Menzies, stewing, but Menzies just shrugs
back: “What would you have me do?”
CHARLES RICHARDS
(to Alan)
Go to hell.
Charles and Keith leave, pissed.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
This is inhuman. Even for you.
ON DENNISTON: He looks at Alan with a withering, simmering
glare.
ON ALAN: He doesn’t budge an inch, or feel the slightest need
to explain himself.
As everyone stares at him, angry, the tension is brutal.
STEWART MENZIES
(to Alan)
... Popular at school, were you?
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Scene 16 - Crossword Under Fire
Alan, Hugh, John and Peter walk back into Hut 8 after the
meeting — resigned, unhappily, to their fate.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
... So what do we do now?
PETER HILTON
We’re short on staff.
ALAN TURING
We get more staff.
HUGH ALEXANDER
And how are you going to do that?
Alan takes a paper from his desk and TACKS IT UP ON THE WALL.
ON THE PAPER: It’s a CROSSWORD PUZZLE.
INT. FAMILY HOME - MORNING - 1940
A MAN opens up that morning’s Daily Telegraph, and flipping
through the paper, he sees an advertisement.
ON THE AD: It’s a crossword puzzle. Below it, the ad copy
says — “If you can solve this puzzle in under ten minutes
please call STO-6264 for an exciting career opportunity.”
INT. OTHER LOCATIONS - SAME TIME
SERIES OF SHOTS: Other people — MEN, WOMEN, STUDENTS,
RETIREES — open up their papers and see Alan’s ad. They all
try solving the puzzle.
It’s really, really hard.
INT. FAMILY HOME - SAME TIME
Back in the first house, the Man is trying to complete the
puzzle when —
— The AIR RAID SIREN goes off.
Quickly, the Man gathers his FAMILY and they rush down into
INT. BOMB SHELTER - CONTINUOUS
The Man and his WIFE light candles in the safety of their
underground BOMB SHELTER.
As BOMBS EXPLODE on the street above them, the Man passes
TOYS and GAMES to his children, to keep them distracted
during the assault.
He returns to Alan’s crossword puzzle, trying to solve it as
just a few yards above him a city burnt to rubble.
INT. TUBE STATION - LONDON - SAME TIME
CIVILIANS run down into an old TUBE TUNNEL to get away from
the bombing.
Inside the tightly crowded station, some people read books,
some play games, some lay on the train tracks to sleep as
dust POOFS UP from the shaking ground.
Normal life goes on as the LIGHTS FLICKER from the shelling
above.
By the dim flickering, we see OTHER PEOPLE trying their hand
at Alan’s puzzle.
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Scene 17 - Puzzles and Qualifications
Alan bicycles through London, passing a group of GASMASKED
SCHOOLCHILDREN being led calmly on a DRILL by their TEACHER.
As a MILKMAN crosses a BOMBED OUT BUILDING to delivers his
wares, Alan comes to a stop beside a MARRIED COUPLE who are
digging through the RUBBLE. The husband digs while the wife
rests, sipping tea as if her house was other than a war zone.
While FIREMEN tend to a nearby smoldering mess, Alan locks up
his bike and enters MI-6 HEADQUARTERS.
END SEQUENCE
INT. MI-6 HEADQUARTERS - LONDON - MOMENTS LATER
Alan and Stewart Menzies talk in the hallway, outside a
closed door.
STEWART MENZIES
Who are they?
ALAN TURING
All sorts, really. A school
teacher. An engineer. A handful of
students.
STEWART MENZIES
And you think they’re qualified for
Bletchley because they’re good at
crossword puzzles?
ALAN TURING
Well, they say they’re good. Now we
should probably find out.
Alan leads Menzies into:
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Scene 18 - A Puzzling Entrance
Alan and Stewart Menzies are in an MI-6 conference room. It’s
been set up like a class room: Rows of identical desks, at
which sit a COLLECTION OF CROSSWORD ENTHUSIASTS. There are
around 20, all men.
ALAN TURING
... You’ll have six minutes to
complete the puzzle, at which
point—
Just then, a WOMAN enters. Everyone turns to look...
Her name is JOAN CLARKE, 20s, a graduate student at Cambridge
who’s trying to get as far away from her preacher father as
possible, and she’s about to become very important to this
story.
MI-6 AGENT
Pardon, Ma’am, this room is
restricted.
JOAN CLARKE
Apologies for my tardiness — bus
caught a flat tire.
ALAN TURING
(irritated)
May I continue, please?
MI-6 AGENT
(to Joan)
You’re not allowed in here, Ma’am.
JOAN CLARKE
I’m only a few minutes late. With
the bombing there’s ten potholes to
each road.
MI-6 AGENT
No, ma’am, the secretaries are to
head upstairs. This room is for the
candidates.
ALAN TURING
May I please get on with this?
JOAN CLARKE
I am a candidate.
MI-6 AGENT
For what position?
JOAN CLARKE
The letter did not say, precisely.
MI-6 AGENT
Yes, so, secretaries are to head
upstairs.
JOAN CLARKE
It said it was top secret.
ALAN TURING
(comes over to them)
What is going on here?
JOAN CLARKE
There was a crossword in the paper.
I solved it. I got a letter saying
I was a candidate for some
mysterious job. So here I am. My
name is Joan Clarke.
She hands the Agent the LETTER.
MI-6 AGENT
Miss, did you really solve this
puzzle yourself?
JOAN CLARKE
What makes you think I couldn’t
have solved the puzzle myself? I am
quite —
MI-6 AGENT
— Ma’am I’ll have to ask you —
ALAN TURING
— Miss Clarke. I find tardiness
unacceptable under any
circumstance. Now take a seat, so
we may continue.
Joan stares at Alan: Thank you.
JOAN CLARKE
Apologies again for being late.
As Joan SITS, the Agent turns to Menzies — who’s been
silently observing Alan thus far — for support.
Menzies SHRUGS.
The Agent backs down.
Alan passes out NEW CROSSWORD PUZZLES.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
— Pardon, but before we start, can
you tell me a bit about this
position I’m qualifying for?
ALAN TURING
Oh for God’s sake — No.
JOAN CLARKE
It’s just that I’ve a pretty decent
job at the University, and I’d
rather not give it up for something
less interesting.
ALAN TURING
Miss Clarke. You now have the
distinct honor of having wasted
more of my time than any other
person in this room. Quiet.
Gentlemen. And lady. You have six
minutes. Begin.
SHOTS: EVERYONE FRANTICALLY TRIES TO FINISH THE NEW PUZZLE.
As they work:
STEWART MENZIES
(whispering to Alan)
Six minutes? Is that even possible?
ALAN TURING
No. It takes me eight. But this
test isn’t about crosswords — it’s
about how you approach solving an
impossible problem. Do you take the
whole thing at once? Do you divide
it into smaller —
— Suddenly, Joan sits up. She’s finished. Early.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
You’ve finished?
JOAN CLARKE
Yes.
ALAN TURING
(checking watch)
... 5 minutes, 34 seconds.
JOAN CLARKE
You said to do it in under 6.
ON ALAN: The smartest man in the room is surprised for the
first time in a very long time by someone who might be even
smarter.
STEWART MENZIES
(to Alan)
Seems like some people approach it
by simply doing the impossible.
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Scene 19 - Secrets and Bonds
Minutes later, TWO PEOPLE have survived the crossword test.
Joan is one of them.
STEWART MENZIES
Congratulations, and my warmest
welcome to His Majesty’s service.
If you speak a word of anything I’m
about to show you, you’ll be
executed for High Treason. You will
lie to your friends, your family,
everyone you meet about what it is
you really do.
JOAN CLARKE
And what is it that we’re really
doing?
ALAN TURING
We’re going to break an unbreakable
Nazi code and win the war.
JOAN CLARKE
... Well that does sound more
interesting than my university job.
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EXT. SHERBORNE SCHOOL FOR BOYS - DAY - 1927
Young Alan and Christopher sit under a tree, the school in
the distance.
Alan is going through a crossword puzzle, Christopher is
reading a book. Their legs are touching affectionately
without either even knowing, like two people who are
effortlessly comfortable with one another.
YOUNG ALAN
What’s that you’re reading?
Christopher shows him: “A Guide to Codes and Cyphers.”
CHRISTOPHER
It’s about cryptography.
YOUNG ALAN
What’s cryptography?
CHRISTOPHER
It’s complicated. You wouldn’t
understand.
YOUNG ALAN
I’m only fourteen months younger
than you. Don’t treat me like a
child.
CHRISTOPHER
Cryptography is the science of
codes.
YOUNG ALAN
Like secret messages?
CHRISTOPHER
Not secret. That’s the brilliant
part. Messages that anyone can see,
but no one knows what they mean,
unless you have the key.
YOUNG ALAN
(confused)
How is that different from talking?
CHRISTOPHER
Talking?
YOUNG ALAN
When people talk to each other they
never say what they mean. They say
something else. And you’re supposed
to just know what they mean. Only,
I never do. So how is that
different?
CHRISTOPHER
(handing him the book)
Alan, I have a funny feeling that
you’re going to be very good at
this.
EXT. SHERBORNE SCHOOL FOR BOYS - DORMITORY - EVENING
Christopher walks Young Alan back to his dormitory. They’re
happy after a long day together.
CHRISTOPHER
Goodnight, Alan.
Christopher touches Alan’s shoulder, and the two share a
sweet moment.
ALAN TURING
Goodnight.
Alan watches Christopher go; his heart is blooming, in love.
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Scene 20 - The Missing File
A crowded POLICE STATION.
Detective Nock approaches his boss, SUPERINTENDANT SMITH, as
the latter walks through the station dropping PAPERS onto
various DESKS and checking the work of other POLICE OFFICERS.
Nock hands Superintendant Smith a MANILA ENVELOPE.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
What is this?
DETECTIVE NOCK
Alan Turing’s classified military
file.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
(displays the file)
It’s bloody empty.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Exactly.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
It’s an empty manila envelope.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Yes.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
Well you’ve cracked the case wide
open then, haven’t you?
DETECTIVE NOCK
Alan Turing’s war records aren’t
just classified. They’re non-
existent. That means someone got
rid of them. Erased them, burned
them.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
And that person broke into his
house and stole... Nothing?
DETECTIVE NOCK
What if Turing wasn’t just a math
professor?
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
You think maybe he also teaches
English lit?
DETECTIVE NOCK
Guy Burgess and Donald Maclean.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
The spies? From the papers?
DETECTIVE NOCK
The Soviet spies. But first, they
were professors, weren’t they?
Newspapers say they became
radicalized at Cambridge. Then they
joined the Communist Party, took
positions in the Foreign Office and
leaked information to Stalin during
the war. Now, can you think of
anyone else we know who was at
Cambridge, then took up something
murky and top secret when the war
broke out?
Smith gives him a look.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
You think Alan Turing might be a
Soviet agent?
ON NOCK’S FACE: It would explain a lot, wouldn’t it?
ON SUPERINTENDANT SMITH: He’s considering...
DETECTIVE NOCK
Something very serious is
happening, right here under our
noses. Wouldn’t you like to find
out what it is?
Smith thinks, and then hands the folder back to Nock.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
No. I wouldn’t. I like my job. Now
as to yours: Those lads have been
causing a ruckus down by Whitworth
Park again. Will you give them a
talking to? Thank you.
And with that, Smith leaves.
ON NOCK: Damn it.
He walks back across the station to find Sergeant Staehl
waiting beside his desk.
SERGEANT STAEHL
Well? What’d he say?
DETECTIVE NOCK
He said alright. Let’s do it. Let’s
follow Turing. You’ll take the
first shift. Turing won’t have a
secret left by the time we’re
through with him.
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INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 11 - DAY - 1941
CLOSE ON: A GIANT, HALF-BUILT MACHINE. The size of a dining
room table, but taller than it is wide, its guts are composed
of SPINNING GEARS and a seemingly endless stream of LONG RED
WIRES.
REVEAL: TECHNICIANS work on putting the machine together,
SOLDERING THE WIRES, while Alan FUSSES.
ALAN TURING
Careful! Damn it, will you — It’s
not a toy.
Alan tries to protect his precious creation when he’s
interrupted by:
HUGH ALEXANDER
Alan! Your new minion has arrived.
Alan turns to see: His new recruit, JACK GOOD.
... But no Joan.
ALAN TURING
(displeased)
... Where’s Miss Clarke?
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Scene 21 - Breaking Barriers
Joan returns home from the market when she hears a familiar
VOICE from the sitting room.
ALAN TURING (O.S.)
— Well it’s a very important radio
factory you see. It’s not really —
I mean along the spectrum of radio
factories this one is particularly—
Joan follows the voices to find:
Alan sitting across from her MOTHER and FATHER, arguing.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
(seeing Joan)
Hello.
Joan makes the sort of face any young woman would make if she
found Alan Turing sitting to tea with her parents.
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INT. CLARKE HOUSE - LONDON - MINUTES LATER
In the KITCHEN: Joan’s MOTHER hands her a TEA TRAY. The two
share a look.
As Joan’s Mother and Father pretend to putter in the kitchen,
listening in on the conversation in the next room, Joan takes
the tray to the LIVING ROOM, where she begins to serve tea.
ALAN TURING
... Why aren’t you at Bletchley?
JOAN CLARKE
(”My parents can hear us”)
So kind of you to visit, Mr.
Turing. Was your trip pleasant?
ALAN TURING
Gather your things and let’s go.
JOAN CLARKE
I’m sorry. I am unable to accept
your offer.
ALAN TURING
And why not?
JOAN CLARKE
As my father told you, it is felt —
well we feel — that such a position
would hardly be appropriate.
ALAN TURING
You earned a double-first in
mathematics.
JOAN CLARKE
But sadly was not granted the
opportunity to become a Fellow.
ALAN TURING
You belong at Bletchley.
JOAN CLARKE
I’m sorry, but for someone in my
position to work - to live -
amongst all of your men, so far
from home... It would be
indecorous.
ALAN TURING
What in the world does that even —
JOAN CLARKE
(”I told you they’re
listening!”)
— One lump or two?
ON ALAN: Are you fucking serious?
ON JOAN: Yes. I’m fucking serious.
ON ALAN: He tries to think of a solution...
ALAN TURING
... We have a group of young women
who tend to our clerical tasks.
Assistants, translators. They live
together in town. Would that be a
more suitable environment?
ON JOAN’S PARENTS: This sounds more promising.
JOAN CLARKE
So I would be working amongst these
women?
ALAN TURING
(”Not actually”)
Yes.
ON JOAN: “Go on.”
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
... Wonderful ladies, they even
organize social events at St
Martin’s church, down the road. The
whole thing is really quite...
Decorous.
ON JOAN’S PARENTS: That’s much better.
JOAN CLARKE
(”Good job.”)
Well. I will have to talk this over
with my family.
As Joan’s parents enter, we
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EXT. CLARKE HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER
Joan walks Alan out of the front door, finally out of earshot
from her parents for a few quick seconds.
ALAN TURING
You won’t have the proper
clearance, so we’ll have to
improvise a bit.
JOAN CLARKE
Why are you helping me?
ALAN TURING
There is only one thing that
matters in this entire world, do
you understand? Breaking Enigma.
JOAN CLARKE
Mr. Turing. Why are you helping me?
ALAN TURING
... Sometimes it is the very people
who no one imagines anything of who
do the things that no one can
imagine.
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Scene 22 - Midnight Frustration
Joan and a few OTHER WRENS exit a BUS that’s deposited them
in front of the Park’s central mansion.
Looking up at it, she sees Alan walking across the way.
He gives her a small wave, which she returns with a small
wave back.
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - NIGHT
Later in Hut 8, the team (w/o Alan) — Hugh, John, Peter, and
the new guy, Jack — work frantically into the night.
The team uses their PERFORATED SHEETS to find linguistic
patterns in the Enigma messages, everyone working as hard and
as fast as they possibly can until —
— Suddenly a BELL GOES OFF.
Everyone stops their work, frustrated.
Angry, Hugh KICKS his desk.
JACK GOOD
... What just happened?
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Midnight. All the work we did today
is useless. But don’t worry: We’ve
a few hours before tomorrow’s
messages start pouring in. And we
start all over again.
PETER HILTON
From scratch.
HUGH ALEXANDER
I am sick of this. Sick. He made me
waste four hours this morning re-
wiring his plugboard matrix. Three
hours yesterday on rotor positions.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Don’t go over there.
HUGH ALEXANDER
No. If our job was not impossible
before it bloody well is now.
Hugh stands and heads to the door —
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
— Hugh, don’t —
— But Hugh is already gone to
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Scene 23 - Fractured Resolve
Alan stands alone with his machine, tinkering, comparing the
assembly to his SCHEMATICS.
Hugh BURSTS in —
HUGH ALEXANDER
— Damn you and damn your useless
machine.
ALAN TURING
(not even looking)
My machine is how we’re going to
win.
HUGH ALEXANDER
This machine?
Hugh grabs a GLASS from the table and SMASHES IT AGAINST
ALAN’S MACHINE.
ALAN TURING
(turning around, shocked)
Stop.
HUGH ALEXANDER
This is the bloody machine you’re
talking about?
He grabs a WRENCH —
— Alan moves to protect Christopher, standing between Hugh
and the machine —
ALAN TURING
No no don’t —
— When the team enters behind Hugh —
— GRABBING HIM and HOLDING HIM BACK.
Alan stands between the team and his machine as Hugh STEAMS.
HUGH ALEXANDER
... You could help us. You could
make this go faster. But you won’t.
PETER HILTON
Hugh is right, Alan. There are
actual soldiers out there trying to
win an actual war — my brother, my
cousins, all my friends, they are
all making a difference, while we
wile away our days producing
nothing. Because of you.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Because of you...
Hugh PUSHES towards Alan again —
— but John HOLDS HIM BACK.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
(to Hugh, calming)
... What’s the use?
ALAN TURING
My machine will work.
Hugh stares Alan, then at John.
HUGH ALEXANDER
.... I’m going to the pub.
Hugh leaves, and the team FOLLOWS.
ALAN TURING
... It’ll work.
ON ALAN: Alone. Rattled from the violence. Scared.
And yet... Resolved.
He makes a fateful decision and runs off to
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Scene 24 - The Stealthy Escape
Alan goes back into Hut 8, which is now empty.
He goes to a far STORAGE CABINET, from which he removes a
STACK OF ENIGMA MESSAGES.
Alan FOLDS THE SHEETS, STUFFING THEM INTO HIS COAT POCKETS —
— INTO HIS PANTS —
— INTO HIS SHOES —
— ETC.
He runs out, concealing enough top secret information on his
body to have him hanged for treason ten times over.
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - DIRT PATH - MINUTES LATER
Alan walks his bicycle through the CHECK POINT, showing his
ID to the GUARDS.
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - MAIN GATE - CONTINUOUS
At the Gate, ARMED GUARDS stop him as he passes, and as is
protocol, Alan opens up his BRIEFCASE for the men to see:
Nothing is inside.
Concealing the documents in his coat/pants/shoes/etc., Alan
hops on his bike and heads off to:
EXT. JOAN’S FLAT - LATER
Alan bicycles to the outside of Joan’s new flat.
The windows are BOARDED UP at night — city regulations, so
that the Germans flying overhead can’t see any lights from
the town.
Alan CHUCKS A SMALL rock at Joan’s boarded window —
— Then carefully sneaks around in back of the house—
— Finding an OPEN BACK WINDOW —
— On the second floor.
He CLIMBS A NEARBY FENCE, and JUMPS FROM THE FENCE TO THE
WINDOW —
— Where Joan GRABS HIM and HELPS HIM INSIDE:
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Scene 25 - A Fiery Encounter
It’s dark inside...
JOAN CLARKE
(whispering)
Could you have made a bit more
noise, Alan? Not sure you woke up
my landlady.
ALAN TURING
Sorry.
Joan turns on a SMALL LAMP and then lights some CANDLES.
JOAN CLARKE
The best I can do. No male visitors
after dark.
She watches Alan remove papers from his pockets.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
What’d you bring me?
Alan produces the Enigma messages from every available hiding
place on his person.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
... Some men try flowers, you know.
ALAN TURING
(pulling papers from
inside his shirt)
These are actual decrypted Enigma
messages, direct from Nazi high
command.
JOAN CLARKE
Or chocolates. Girls like
chocolate.
Alan starts PLACING THE MESSAGES down on a table, but there
isn’t room, so he starts LAYING THEM OUT ON THE FLOOR.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
(reading a message)
“0600 hours. Weather today is
clear. Rain in the evening. Heil
Hitler.” Well, clearly that vital
information is going to win us the
war.
ALAN TURING
It’s the relationship between the
encrypted and decrypted messages
that interests me. Is there a clue
there that we can build into
Christopher?
JOAN CLARKE
Who’s “Christopher”?
ALAN TURING
Oh. He’s my machine.
JOAN CLARKE
You named him?
ALAN TURING
Is that a bad name?
JOAN CLARKE
Nevermind...
(looks over the messages)
Are you trying to build your
Universal Machine?
Alan looks at her: How do you know what that is?
Joan smiles.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
I read your paper at university.
ALAN TURING
They’re teaching it already?
JOAN CLARKE
Oh God no, but I was precocious.
You theorized a machine that can
solve any problem. It doesn’t just
do one thing: It does everything.
The machine isn’t only
programmable, it’s re-programmable.
ON ALAN: She understands what he’s been writing about.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
Is that part of the idea behind
your Christopher?
ALAN TURING
Human beings can compute large sums
very quickly. Even Hugh can do
that. I want Christopher to be...
Smarter. To make a calculation, and
then to determine what to do next.
Like a person does. Think of it: An
electrical brain. A digital
computer.
JOAN CLARKE
(trying out the words on
her tongue)
A “digital computer?” Hmm.
ALAN TURING
I’ll show you —
— Alan TURNS, and KNOCKS OVER THE CANDLE...
... Which LIGHTS THE ENIGMA MESSAGES ON FIRE.
Alan and Joan SCRAMBLE TO PUT OUT THE FIRE.
They make a lot of NOISE in the process, though they do
manage not to burn down Joan’s flat.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
I’m so sorry.
They hear more noise from downstairs: “Joan?!? HELLO?!?”
JOAN CLARKE
My landlady. You need to leave.
ALAN TURING
Right.
Alan moves to the front door —
JOAN CLARKE
— No. The window. She’s coming.
ALAN TURING
(staring at window)
Really?
JOAN CLARKE
Go.
Alan AWKWARDLY CLIMBS OUT THE WINDOW, TRYING NOT TO FALL...
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Scene 26 - Suspicion at Bletchley Park
REVEAL: Alan has been injured in his fall.
(Climbing is not his strong suit.)
Alan walks through the grounds into:
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - CONTINUOUS
Alan enters Hut 8 to find his team watching silently as a
bunch of MILITARY POLICE RIFLE THROUGH HIS DESK —
— MANHANDLING his papers, his machine parts, making a mess.
ALAN TURING
(re: parts of Christopher)
Hey! Don’t touch that!
The RMP’S TRAIN GUNS ON HIM.
MILITARY POLICEMAN
Don’t move!
ALAN TURING
That’s my desk.
COMMANDER DENNISTON (O.S.)
Thank goodness. Be a pity if we
were searching the wrong one.
Alan turns to find Denniston directing the search.
ALAN TURING
What are you doing?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
There’s a spy at Bletchley Park.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
The Navy thinks one of us is a
Soviet double-agent, Alan.
ALAN TURING
Why?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Our boys intercepted this on its
way to Moscow. Look familiar?
Denniston hands Alan a TELEGRAM — it’s a LONG STRING OF
LETTERS, running down the entire page.
ALAN TURING
(looking at the telegram)
... This is a Beale Cypher. It’s
encrypted with a key phrase, from a
book or a poem or...
(re: the team)
Which one of them did this?
As Alan stares at the team, they stare back at him.
He glances at the RMP’s rifling through his desk.
Oh fuck.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
I’m not a double agent.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Double agents are such bastards.
Isolated loners. No attachments to
friends or family. Arrogant. Think
they’re smart enough to get away
with anything. Do you know anyone
like that?
ALAN TURING
I know you don’t like me... But you
don’t think I could actually be a
spy, do you?
ON THE TEAM: They won’t look him in the eye.
MILITARY POLICEMAN
(to Denniston)
Nothing out of the ordinary, Sir.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Well then. Next time, you will make
a mistake. And then, I don’t even
need to bother firing you — I can
simply hang you for treason.
Denniston and his men LEAVE.
HUGH ALEXANDER
(to Jack)
... Aren’t you glad you joined up
just in time?
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Scene 27 - A Toast to Teamwork
In the machine Hut next door, Alan touches his precious
machine for comfort.
Whenever he feels lonely, misunderstood, isolated — he has
his machine.
There’s a KNOCK on the door and...
... Joan enters.
JOAN CLARKE
I heard about what happened... I
have an idea of what might cheer
you up.
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INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - BEER HUT - LATER
Alan and Joan sip from beer bottles in the “beer hut” — Among
the military commissaries, it’s so named because, well, it’s
the one that serves beer.
They can be a bit more relaxed here than at Joan’s flat.
They’re surrounded by NAPKINS full of MATHEMATICAL EQUATIONS,
which they’re studying, debating, etc.
JOAN CLARKE
... So because no letter can be
encoded as itself, you’ve already a
handful of settings that can be
rejected at the outset. If you —
Just then, Hugh, John, and Peter enter the Beer Hut...
... Alan looks up, seeing them.
Joan notices.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
Is that your team? Let’s say hello.
ALAN TURING
No.
JOAN CLARKE
(to the boys)
Over here!
They see Joan...
ALAN TURING
I told you not to do that.
JOAN CLARKE
Correct.
... Hugh, John and Peter approach.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Alan. Didn’t even know you drank.
ALAN TURING
Hello.
JOAN CLARKE
He doesn’t, really, he just sort of
sips at the foam.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Tell you a secret, Miss...
JOAN CLARKE
... Clarke.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Miss Clarke.
JOAN CLARKE
Please.
HUGH ALEXANDER
The foam’s my favorite part too.
JOAN CLARKE
Well then, I’ll show you a trick.
(to Bartender)
Alex! We’re in need of supplies.
Joan hops behind the bar and the BARTENDER helps her to
BOTTLES OF GUINNESS.
Hugh, Alan, John and Peter watch.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Alan, are you... On a date?
ALAN TURING
What? No. Of course not.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Mind if I have a crack?
ALAN TURING
I’m not a Soviet spy.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Do love a proper blonde.
ALAN TURING
Hugh. I swear. I’m not a spy.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Oh for God’s sake, Alan, of course
you’re not a spy.
ALAN TURING
What?
HUGH ALEXANDER
Denniston gave me the Beale Cypher.
And guess what? I broke it. “Ask
and it shall be given you; seek and
ye shall find.” Matthew 7:7. That
was the key. Far too simple for
you. Pity Denniston disagrees.
Returning, Joan POURS PINTS OF GUINNESS FOR THE TEAM.
JOAN CLARKE
Did you ever notice that the
bubbles in a pint of Guinness
travel downwards, as opposed to
upwards in any other beer? Ever
wonder why? It’s because the pint
glass creates drag on the bubbles
along the side; but the center
bubbles are free to sprint upwards.
Then the rising current in the
middle pushes down on the side
bubbles and... And voila: Guinness.
The official beer of
mathematicians.
ON THE PINTS: Joan has etched pi symbols into the foam.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Be still my beating heart. Come
join us for a drink.
ALAN TURING
She’s assisting me with some
calculations.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Fine, Alan can come too.
ALAN TURING
Thank you.
JOAN CLARKE
Hugh was being sarcastic.
HUGH ALEXANDER
He’s a lost cause, I promise.
JOAN CLARKE
We’ll be there in a moment.
Joan smiles at Hugh as he joins John and Peter at a separate
table.
ALAN TURING
... He likes you.
JOAN CLARKE
Yes.
ALAN TURING
You got him to like you.
JOAN CLARKE
Yes.
ALAN TURING
Why?
JOAN CLARKE
Because I’m a woman in a man’s job
and I don’t have the luxury of
being an ass.
(beat)
Alan, it doesn’t matter how smart
you are. Enigma is smarter. If you
really want to beat it — if you
really want to solve your puzzle —
you’re going to need all the help
you can get. And they are not going
to help you if they do not like
you.
Alan thinks. The next sentence is incredibly hard for him to
say out loud.
ALAN TURING
... How should I get them to like
me?
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Scene 28 - Awkward Offerings
Alan enters Hut 8 to find his team hard at work.
He’s carrying a BAG OF APPLES.
HUGH ALEXANDER
(sees apples)
What’re those?
ALAN TURING
Apples.
HUGH ALEXANDER
No.
ALAN TURING
No, they really are... I... Joan
told me it’d be nice to bring you
all something.
Alan takes the apple bag around the room, handing each man an
apple.
They take them. It’s really awkward.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Thanks?
PETER HILTON
I like apples.
HUGH ALEXANDER
My best to Miss Clarke.
ALAN TURING
... There are two fellows in the
woods. And they run into a bear.
The first fellow, he kneels down
and starts to pray. But the second
one, he begins lacing up his boots.
The first one says, “my friend,
what’re you doing? You can’t outrun
a bear.” And the second one
responds, “I don’t have to. I only
have to outrun you.”
Ba dum bum.
Awkward silence.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
I’ll be with Christopher if anyone
needs me.
Alan walks off to the adjacent Hut.
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Scene 29 - Secrets in the Classroom
Young Alan and Christopher are in math class.
The TEACHER drones on as the students pretend to pay
attention.
Young Alan and Christopher PASS NOTES —
— Dropping them by each other’s desks —
— And snapping them up quickly.
TEACHER
Mr. Turing! Passing notes, are we?
ALAN TURING
No, Sir.
The Teacher comes over, and grabs the note from his hand.
ON THE NOTE: “FDFH RG TU HSD PDXT PEJND QERDZX.”
It’s encrypted.
TEACHER
(holding it up for
everyone)
Only Mr. Turing would pass notes
written in gibberish.
The other students LAUGH as the Teacher drops the note in the
trash.
Alan isn’t bothered by the laughter — he’s safe in his
private world with Christopher.
The BELL RINGS. Class is over. AS EVERYONE SHUFFLES OUT:
TEACHER (CONT’D)
Alright you lot, do not forget your
calculus over break. Have a
pleasant holiday and we’ll resume
your integrals when you return.
Alan waits... And grabs the note from the trash.
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Scene 30 - A Picnic of Friendship and Ideas
Now alone, Alan DECRYPTS THE MESSAGE. One at a time, the
letters become intelligible.
ON THE NOTE: “SEE YOU IN TWO LONG WEEKS, DEAREST FRIEND.”
ON ALAN: Christopher called him his dearest friend.
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EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - OUTSIDE HUT 8 - DAY - 1941
Alan and Joan eat a PICNIC LUNCH in a wooded area behind Hut
8.
Alan finishes writing an EQUATION, then hands his NOTEBOOK to
Joan.
She looks at the equation, then instantly starts CROSSING
THINGS OUT and REWRITING. Alan laughs. There aren’t many
people who would cross out his work so brazenly.
Joan sees his laughter, looks up: “What’d I do?”
But before Alan can respond they both see: Hugh approaching.
Alan is nervous.
But Hugh simply HANDS ALAN A SHEET OF PAPER.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Look at this.
As Alan and Joan stare at SCHEMATICS on the paper, Hugh
SWIPES A SANDWICH from their picnic and begins to chew.
HUGH ALEXANDER (CONT’D)
If you run the wires across the
plugboard matrix diagonally, you’ll
eliminate rotor positions 500 times
faster.
ALAN TURING
... This is actually not an
entirely terrible idea.
JOAN CLARKE
That’s Alan for “thank you.”
ALAN TURING
(looking up)
That’s my sandwich.
HUGH ALEXANDER
You don’t like sandwiches.
And with that, Hugh takes another bite, gives Joan a wink,
and walks off.
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Scene 31 - The Birth of Christopher
Alan and the team (Hugh, John, Peter) stand in a half-circle
around the now-completed Christopher.
An ELECTRICAL ASSISTANT feeds fresh Enigma messages into one
end of the machine.
The men look at each other, feeling the importance of the
moment.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
(to Alan)
You nervous?
Alan takes a gulp and CONNECTS the final bit of electrical
wiring...
... AND THE VERY FIRST “DIGITAL COMPUTER” IN HISTORY COMES TO
LIFE.
ON THE MACHINE: GEARS ARE SPINNING, CURRENT IS RACING THROUGH
THE WIRES.
The CLACKING SOUND it makes is UNBELIEVABLY LOUD.
PETER HILTON
(yelling over the machine)
Christ!! What happens now?!
ALAN TURING
It should tell us the day’s Enigma
settings!!
HUGH ALEXANDER
How long?!?
ON ALAN: He’s not sure...
The team shares a look: Is this really going to work?
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - DAWN
Dawn rises over Bletchley Park.
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - DENNISTON’S OFFICE - MORNING
Commander Denniston receives a visit from the Electrical
Assistant who’d been helping Alan in the previous scene.
ELECTRICAL ASSISTANT
The gears just keep spinning and
spinning. It’s endless.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
And there’s no result in sight?
The Assistant NODS. Denniston SMILES: Got him.
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Scene 32 - A Desperate Stand at Bletchley Park
As the machine CLACKS away, Alan is frantically going over
his papers. He’s unshaven, wearing yesterday’s clothes. He
hasn’t gotten a wink of sleep.
ON ALAN’S FRANTIC PACING: Why isn’t it working? Why?!
Alan rubs his eyes, exhausted, and as he does so he looks out
the window to see...
... Commander Denniston walking towards the Machine Hut,
accompanied by a HOME OFFICE MAN and TWO RMPs.
Alan quickly runs to the door and BOLTS it —
— Just as Denniston and the men get to it from the outside.
OUTSIDE:
Denniston tries the door. It won’t open.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Turing! Open the bloody door!
INSIDE:
ALAN TURING
No!!!
OUTSIDE:
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Open the door or we will break it
down!!
INSIDE:
ALAN TURING
I cannot let you in!! I cannot let
you interfere!!!
OUTSIDE:
Denniston turns to the RMPs: Break it down.
The RMPs KICK DOWN THE DOOR —
— And the men BURST INTO THE ROOM as Alan FALLS BACK.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
(re: the horrible noise)
Turn that thing off.
An RMP walks over to Christopher —
— Alan tries to stop him but they POINT GUNS AT HIM —
— And so Alan watches in absolute horror as they TURN OFF THE
MACHINE.
COMMANDER DENNISTON (CONT’D)
Well then. It seems your great big
expensive machine doesn’t work.
ALAN TURING
It does.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Wonderful. So you’ve broken Enigma
then?
ALAN TURING
It works... It was just... Still
working.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
This is my associate from the Home
Office. A hundred thousand pounds
is quite a lot of money. He’s here
to see what you have to show for
it.
ALAN TURING
You will never understand the
importance of what I’ve created
here.
Commander Denniston exchanges a look with the men: See what I
mean?
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Have you decrypted any German
messages? A single one? Can you
point to anything at all that
you’ve achieved?
ON ALAN: He can’t.
COMMANDER DENNISTON (CONT’D)
Your funding is up, and our
patience has expired. It is with
such great pleasure that I finally
get to say this: Alan Turing,
you’re fired.
ON ALAN: What can he do? This is it...
COMMANDER DENNISTON (CONT’D)
Please escort Mr. Turing from the
premises.
HUGH ALEXANDER (O.S.)
No.
Everyone turns to see Hugh, John, and Peter at the door,
wearing fresh clothes.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
Pardon?
HUGH ALEXANDER
God help me... If you fire Alan,
you’ll have to fire me too.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
What on earth are you saying?
HUGH ALEXANDER
Trust me, no one wants to say this
less than I do, but Alan’s right.
His machine can work. At least it’s
the best chance we’ve got.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
You must be joking.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
If you fire them, you’ll have to
fire me too.
PETER HILTON
And me.
HUGH ALEXANDER
We’re the best cryptographic minds
in Britain. Are you going to fire
us all?
Denniston looks to the Home Office Man, who NODS: Hugh is
right.
HUGH ALEXANDER (CONT’D)
At least give us more time. Six
more months, and if the machine
doesn’t produce results we’ll go
back to doing things the old way.
COMMANDER DENNISTON
... One month. And then so help me
God you are all gone.
Denniston and his men LEAVE.
The team breathes a sigh of relief: They’ve been given a
temporary reprieve.
ALAN TURING
... Thank you.
HUGH ALEXANDER
This machine better bloody work.
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Scene 33 - The Turing Revelation
Sergeant Staehl walks eagerly through the police station.
He comes to an office marked “SUPERINTENDANT SMITH”, where he
OPENS the door to find
INT. MANCHESTER POLICE STATION - SMITH’S OFFICE - CONTINUOUS
Superintendant Smith and Detective Nock are in the middle of
a genial conversation.
The Superintendant turns to Staehl.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
Can I help you?
SERGEANT STAEHL
Sirs, I think I’ve got him.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
Got who?
SERGEANT STAEHL
Turing.
Detective Nock looks at Staehl — “Shhhh!”
The Superintendant looks at Nock — “You didn’t...”
SERGEANT STAEHL (CONT’D)
I trailed Turing to a pub last
night, where he met a bloke. They
exchanged an envelope. So I
followed the guy, picked him up,
gave him a good shake... Here, I’ll
show you.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
(to Nock, angry)
You and I will discuss this later.
(to Staehl)
Sergeant.
They follow Staehl out to...
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Scene 34 - Conflicting Truths
As Nock and Smith stands outside the INTERROGATION ROOM,
Sergeant Staehl points through the window in the door:
Inside is ARNOLD MURRAY, 20s, nervous.
SERGEANT STAEHL
He’s a bloody poofter. He
confessed.
Staehl shows Nock and Smith a SIGNED STATEMENT.
DETECTIVE NOCK
What?
SERGEANT STAEHL
The man admitted it. Arnold Murray.
Bit of a hustler. Hangs around that
pub, men pay him for a go. Turing
is one of the men who paid. Only,
Mr. Murray got the bright idea to
rob Turing’s house after, with a
friend. That’s what Turing was
hiding: He’s a poof, not a spy.
DETECTIVE NOCK
No.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
This is good work, Sergeant. Quite
good.
DETECTIVE NOCK
No, it’s not.
SERGEANT STAEHL
What’s the matter? We can charge a
university professor with
indecency.
DETECTIVE NOCK
No. No. This is bloody rubbish.
Turing is up to something
important, not getting his jollies
in some pub.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
He committed a crime. He broke the
law. And with a bloke, Christ, it’s
bloody disgusting.
DETECTIVE NOCK
I don’t care if it’s disgusting.
This is not the investigation I was
conducting.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
Clearly.
(to Staehl)
Bring him in.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Wait. Let me interrogate him.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
You’re asking me for a favour right
now?
DETECTIVE NOCK
Please. I know him. I know he’s
hiding something and I know I can
get him to talk... Give me half an
hour alone and then I swear to you
I will spend the next month running
errands on as many rubbish cases as
you like.
SUPERINTENDANT SMITH
... Fine. Now will someone get a
warrant for the arrest of Alan
Turing?
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Scene 35 - A Proposal Amidst Chaos
Joan comes home to her flat. She looks sad as she puts her
key in the lock and opens the door.
She enters to find:
HUNDREDS OF MATHEMATICAL PAPERS ARE SCATTERED ALL OVER HER
LIVING ROOM.
She sighs.
JOAN CLARKE
Alan?
At the sound of her voice, Alan comes out of the wash room,
wiping the shaving cream from his face. He’s moving and
talking a mile a minute.
ALAN TURING
Christopher is simply not moving
fast enough.
JOAN CLARKE
We should talk.
Joan sits down, sadly.
ALAN TURING
(totally oblivious)
Even with the diagonal board he’s
not eliminating settings as quickly
as —
JOAN CLARKE
Alan, I’m leaving.
ALAN TURING
You just walked in.
JOAN CLARKE
No. Bletchley.
ALAN TURING
What?
JOAN CLARKE
It’s my parents... I am twenty-five
and I am unmarried and I am living
alone... And they want me home.
ALAN TURING
That’s ridiculous.
JOAN CLARKE
That’s my parents.
ALAN TURING
You cannot leave. I won’t let you.
JOAN CLARKE
“I’ll miss you.” That’s what a
normal person might say in this
situation.
ALAN TURING
I don’t care what’s normal.
JOAN CLARKE
“I’ll write.” That’d work too.
ALAN TURING
No. This is unacceptable. You are
not leaving and that is that.
JOAN CLARKE
What am I supposed to do, Alan? I
will not give up my parents. The
world is burning to ash and they
are my family and they want me
home.
ALAN TURING
You have the opportunity here to
make some actual use of your life —
JOAN CLARKE
— And end up like you? No thanks.
I’m sorry you’re lonely. I’m sorry
no one likes you.
But Enigma will not save you. Can
you decypher that, you fragile
narcissist? Or do you need me to
fetch your precious Christopher for
help?
Silence.
Alan looks like she just slapped him across the face. Which
she basically did.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
... I’m sorry.
ALAN TURING
I want you to stay because I like
you.
JOAN CLARKE
I know.
ALAN TURING
I like talking to you.
JOAN CLARKE
I like talking to you, too, Alan.
ALAN TURING
What if you weren’t living alone...
If you had a husband?
JOAN CLARKE
You have one in mind?
ALAN TURING
I do.
JOAN CLARKE
Hugh is terribly attractive, I’ll
give you that, but he’s really not
the marrying type.
ALAN TURING
I wasn’t referring to Hugh.
JOAN CLARKE
Peter? He’s so quiet...
Alan stares at Joan. She stares back.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
(getting it)
Oh dear Lord.
ALAN TURING
This makes sense.
JOAN CLARKE
Did you just propose to me?
ALAN TURING
It’s the logical thing to do.
JOAN CLARKE
This is ridiculous.
ALAN TURING
This is your parents.
JOAN CLARKE
(trying to process)
I cannot believe this is happening.
Alan fishes a piece of ELECTRICAL WIRE from his pocket...
ALAN TURING
Joan Ca... Wait, is your middle
name Caroline or Catherine?
JOAN CLARKE
Elizabeth.
ALAN TURING
Joan Elizabeth Clarke, will you
marry me?
... And then FASHIONS IT INTO A RING.
ON JOAN’S FACE: What’s she going to do?
SMASH CUT TO:
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Scene 36 - Dancing in the Shadows
An impromptu ENGAGEMENT PARTY in the Beer Hut that night:
— A BANNER made from PUNCH CARDS reads: “CONGRATULATIONS!”
— Music plays as DANCERS TWIRL in the center of the Hut.
— Joan LAUGHS with her WREN FRIENDS in one corner, while in
another Alan drinks beer with his team.
ON JOAN AND THE GIRLS: She shows off her makeshift wire
engagement ring:
JOAN’S FRIEND
(trying her best)
... It’s... beautiful?
Joan LAUGHS. She understands.
JOAN CLARKE
I know it’s not an ordinary ring...
She looks over at Alan warmly.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
... But who ever loved ordinary?
ON ALAN AND THE BOYS: They’re are all a bit drunk, TELLING
DIRTY STORIES:
HUGH ALEXANDER
... So she’s got it in her hands,
right, and she looks up at me and
says, “I’m to put it in my mouth?”
And I say, “yes, you know. The
French way.” So she pops it in,
closes her lips around the thing...
And then she starts humming the
bloody Marseillaise!
The men BURST INTO LAUGHTER.
Except for Alan, who looks a bit confused.
PETER HILTON
(to Alan)
What about you and Joan? Does she
do it the French way?
Alan looks away, uncomfortable.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Soon enough, you lucky bastard.
Just then, Joan comes over and throws an affectionate arm
around Alan.
JOAN CLARKE
Care for a dance?
HUGH ALEXANDER
No no, your fiancé can dance with
you anytime he likes. Now it’s my
turn.
Hugh takes Joan’s hand, and leads her across the room. They
begin to DANCE, while Peter follows, dancing with one of
Joan’s friends.
Alan and John are left alone at the table.
Alan looks worried.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
What’s the matter?
ALAN TURING
... What if I don’t fancy... being
with Joan in that way?
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Because you’re a homosexual?
Alan looks at him, surprised.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS (CONT’D)
I suspected. You’re not quite as
much of an enigma as you think you
are. Or as much as Enigma is.
ALAN TURING
Should I tell Joan? I’ve had
affairs. With other men.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
You know, in my admittedly limited
experience, women tend to be a bit
touchy about accidentally marrying
homosexuals. I think perhaps not
spreading this information around
might be in your best interest.
ALAN TURING
Having children, a family... I want
that with her. I do. I just don’t
know if I can... Pretend...
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
You can’t tell anyone, Alan. It’s
illegal. And Denniston is looking
for any excuse he can get to put
you away.
ALAN TURING
... I know.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
This has to stay a secret, or trust
me, they’ll kill you for it.
ON ALAN: He knows John is right.
As Alan thinks, Joan comes back over and offers him her hand.
JOAN CLARKE
Come on, now it’s your turn.
She leads him to the dance floor.
As they START TO DANCE, chastely, sweetly, WE
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Scene 37 - Anticipation and Isolation
CLOSE ON A LETTER: “I LOVE YOU” is written on the paper.
REVEAL: Young Alan sits in his dormitory room, ENCRYPTING his
love letter to Christopher.
Slowly, letter by letter, Alan transforms “I LOVE YOU” into
code...
Hearing a commotion, Alan LOOKS OUT THE WINDOW:
BOYS are being unloaded from a BUS at the gates, dropped off
to begin the new spring term.
Alan sees them all, excited: Christopher is coming back!
He STUFFS HIS ENCRYPTED LETTER IN AN ENVELOPE and RUNS OFF to
EXT. SHERBORNE SCHOOL FOR BOYS - FRONT GATES - MINUTES LATER
Alan waits eagerly by the main gate as BOYS STREAM PAST —
— Joking, horsing around —
— Alan waits patiently, looking for Christopher’s face among
the rowdy schoolboys —
— Until: They’re all gone.
Christopher never shows.
Alan looks at his undelivered note, then at the empty yard
before him.
Where is Christopher?
Confused, Young Alan finally gives up...
... When he runs into the PACK OF BOYS who beat him up
earlier.
BOY #1
Well look. Mr. Turing is all alone.
Young Alan stands frozen as they come at him, and we
CUT TO:
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Scene 38 - The Imitation Game: A Battle of Wits
Alan Turing sits alone in the interrogation room with his
eyes closed.
Detective Nock enters.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Cup of tea?
ALAN TURING
(eyes closed)
Thanks, no.
DETECTIVE NOCK
... Mr. Turing, may I tell you a
secret?
ALAN TURING
I’m quite good with those.
DETECTIVE NOCK
I’m here to help you.
Suddenly, Alan opens his eyes.
ALAN TURING
(re: being in jail)
Clearly.
DETECTIVE NOCK
(changing tacks)
... Can machines think?
ALAN TURING
You’ve read my published work.
DETECTIVE NOCK
What makes you say that?
ALAN TURING
Because I’m sitting in a police
station, accused of entreating a
young man to touch my penis, and
you’re asking me whether machines
can think.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Can they? Could machines ever think
as human beings do?
ALAN TURING
Most people say no.
DETECTIVE NOCK
You’re not most people.
ALAN TURING
The problem is that you’re asking a
stupid question.
DETECTIVE NOCK
I am?
ALAN TURING
Of course machines can’t think “as
human beings do.” A machine is
different from a human being;
hence, it would think differently.
The interesting question is, just
because something thinks
differently from you, does that
mean it’s not thinking? We allow
that humans have such divergences
from one another. You like
strawberries. I hate ice-skating.
You cry at sad films. I’m allergic
to pollen. What does it mean to
have different tastes — different
preferences — other than to say
that our brains work differently?
That we think differently from one
another? And if we can say that
about each another, why can’t we
say the same for brains made of
copper and steel?
DETECTIVE NOCK
That’s... This big paper you
wrote... What’s it called?
ALAN TURING
“The Imitation Game.”
DETECTIVE NOCK
Right. That’s what it’s about?
ALAN TURING
(thinking)
... Would you like to play?
DETECTIVE NOCK
Play?
ALAN TURING
The game. It’s a test, of sorts.
For determining whether something
is a machine, or a human being.
DETECTIVE NOCK
How do we play?
ALAN TURING
There’s a judge, and a subject. The
judge asks questions, and based on
the subject’s answers, he
determines: Who is he speaking
with? What is he speaking with? All
you have to do is ask me a
question.
DETECTIVE NOCK
... What did you do during the war?
ALAN TURING
I worked in a radio factory.
DETECTIVE NOCK
What did you really do during the
war?
Alan smiles — Detective Nock is smarter than he looks.
ALAN TURING
... Are you paying attention?
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Scene 39 - Midnight Despair at Bletchley Park
Alan and his team — Hugh, John, Peter — anxiously stand
before Alan’s huge machine as it CLACK CLACK CLACKS,
ferociously loud.
The gears are spinning, current is flowing through the wires,
and the team stares at it, taking turns compulsively checking
their watches.
ON ALAN: This is going to work. This has to work.
Suddenly...
... DING. The chime announces the stroke of midnight.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Damn it!
Everyone is pissed, frustrated.
Alan looks as if he’s about to rip his own hair out: Why
won’t this damned thing work?
As the machine CLACKS on, oblivious, they all walk outside:
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - NEAR HUT 11 - CONTINUOUS
The team walks across Bletchley together, moving as one
through the most highly secret war zone in the world.
MORE SECURITY has been added throughout the park, including
along the path from Hut 11 — ARMED GUARDS check IDs, which
the team hands over absentmindedly.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
We’re soon out of time. Our
month...
PETER HILTON
So that’s it then. We lost.
HUGH ALEXANDER
It does not matter how much we
improve on it, that machine will
never be able to check 159 million
million million possibilities in
time.
ALAN TURING
It’s searching... It’s just... It
doesn’t know what it’s searching
for... If only we knew what the
messages were going to say...
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
If we knew what the messages were
going to say, we wouldn’t have to
decrypt them at all.
ON ALAN: Maybe it was always impossible after all.
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Scene 40 - A Sudden Realization
It’s crowded in the beer hut, even this late at night.
On one side of the room, Alan, Hugh, John, and Peter are
drinking. Commiserating about their fate.
On the other side, Joan is drinking with her friend HELEN — a
fellow WREN.
ON JOAN AND HELEN:
HELEN
Who’s Alan’s friend?
JOAN CLARKE
Hugh? Bit of a cad, actually.
HELEN
So my type then?
JOAN CLARKE
Here, I’ll introduce you.
HELEN
No! Lord, engaged for a fortnight
and you’ve already forgotten how to
do this? He’ll come over.
JOAN CLARKE
Are you sure?
HELEN
Yes. I smiled at him fifteen
minutes ago and haven’t looked at
him since.
ON HUGH, ALAN, JOHN, AND PETER:
Hugh is looking at the girls.
HUGH ALEXANDER
(re: Helen)
Who’s that, then?
ALAN TURING
Helen? Works with Joan in the
WREN’s hut.
PETER HILTON
You do have a point about the
little hats.
HUGH ALEXANDER
She wants me to come over.
ALAN TURING
How can you possibly know that?
HUGH ALEXANDER
She smiled at me awhile back and
hasn’t looked again since.
ON JOAN AND HELEN:
HELEN
(re: Hugh’s glances)
And... Got him.
JOAN CLARKE
Is it odd that when I was single
this game felt tedious, but now it
seems just dreadfully fun?
ON THE BOYS:
HUGH ALEXANDER
(re: Helen’s glances)
And... Brilliant. She’s in. Alan,
introduce me.
ALAN TURING
Why me?
HUGH ALEXANDER
Because there is nothing like a
friend’s engagement to make a woman
want to do something she will later
regret with the fiancé’s better-
looking chum.
Hugh drags Alan across the pub to Helen and Joan.
ON JOHN AND PETER:
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Half crown says Alan bollockses
this up entirely.
PETER HILTON
No bet.
ON HUGH, ALAN, JOAN, AND HELEN:
HUGH ALEXANDER
(to the ladies)
Alan Turing has a theory.
JOAN CLARKE
He has many.
HUGH ALEXANDER
He believes that the regulations
against men and women working side-
by-side are sound, because such
proximity will necessarily lead to
romance.
ALAN TURING
No I don’t —
Hugh KICKS Alan, who shuts up.
HUGH ALEXANDER
— However, I disagree.
HELEN
You do?
HUGH ALEXANDER
I think that if I were working
beside a woman all day long, I
could manage to appreciate her
abilities and intellect without
needing to take her to bed.
(to Helen)
Pardon, have we met?
HELEN
I don’t recall. But let’s assume we
haven’t.
Hugh looks at Alan for an introduction: Alan is silent.
Joan picks up the slack:
JOAN CLARKE
Helen Stewart, Hugh Alexander.
HUGH ALEXANDER
So who do you agree with? Alan or
myself?
HELEN
Well, Alan, of course.
ALAN TURING
I’m flattered, but this is not
actually —
Now Joan KICKS Alan, who is still very confused.
HUGH ALEXANDER
— Rubbish.
HELEN
I work beside a man every day, and
I can’t help but have developed a
bit of a crush on him.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Well who is this man, so I can kick
his arse?
HELEN
Oh, it’s been chaste, you’ve no
need to worry. We’ve never even
met. He’s a German.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Now I really want to kill him.
ALAN TURING
How do you mean you work alongside
a German?
HELEN
Each of us intercepts messages from
a specific German radio tower. So
we’ve a counterpart on the other
side, who’s tip-tapping out the
messages. Everybody types a touch
differently; you get to know the
rhythm of your counterpart. It’s
strangely intimate. I feel as if we
know each other. Pity he has a
girlfriend... But that’s why I
disagree with you. I’m in love with
a co-worker, of sorts, even if
we’ve never met.
HUGH ALEXANDER
I’ll require another pint to tell
you why you’re wrong.
HELEN
Let’s.
Helen and Hugh walk away to the bar...
JOAN CLARKE
(to Alan)
That’s what flirting looks like. In
case you were curious.
But Alan is lost in thought...
Something is wrong...
ALAN TURING
(screaming)
HELEN!!!
Everyone in the room turns and stares at him.
Joan winces.
Helen and Hugh come back over.
HELEN
Yes, Alan?
ALAN TURING
Why do you think your German
counterpart has a girlfriend?
HELEN
Oh, it’s a stupid joke, don’t worry
about it.
ALAN TURING
Tell me.
HELEN
Each one of his messages begins
with the same five letters. C-I-L-L-
Y. So I suspect Cilly must be the
name of his amore.
ALAN TURING
That’s impossible. The Germans are
instructed to choose five letters
at random to start every message.
HELEN
Well, this bloke doesn’t.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Love’ll make a man do strange
things, I suppose. Anyhow —
ALAN TURING
— In this case, love just lost the
Germans the whole bloody war.
Alan BOLTS out of the bar —
— SPILLING BEER ALL OVER HELEN —
— Who CRIES OUT, and ANGRILY RUNS OFF —
— Leaving Hugh and Joan standing there, confused.
They share a look: What’s gotten into Alan?
Joan quickly RUNS OFF after Alan —
— Hugh follows suit —
— And John and Peter, seeing this across the room, take off
after Hugh —
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Scene 41 - The Breakthrough in Hut 8
Everyone chases Alan across Bletchley Park —
— GUARDS YELL at Alan as he bypasses security checkpoints —
— Guards are screaming at them, drawing guns as he and Joan
barrel into Hut 8 —
— Hugh and John show their IDs to the Guards, yelling back at
them —
— Hugh and John finally get rid of the guards and enter:
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - CONTINUOUS
— Joan runs into the Hut to find that Alan has grabbed a BOX
OF PREVIOUSLY DECRYPTED MESSAGES —
— Alan POURS those messages out all over the floor —
JOAN CLARKE
Alan?
— Hugh, John, and Peter enter as Alan spreads the messages
out on the floor. (Just like he did in Joan’s flat!)
ALAN TURING
What if Christopher doesn’t have to
search through all the settings?
What if he only had to search the
ones that produce the words we
already know will be in the
message?
HUGH ALEXANDER
Repeated words! Predictable
words...
— They all search the messages with Alan —
— Joan holds up a DECRYPT: It’s the same one she read
earlier.
JOAN CLARKE
Like this?
(reading aloud)
“0600 hours. Weather today is
clear. Rain in the evening. Heil
Hitler.”
ALAN TURING
Yes! That’s it!
(looking at message)
They send a weather report at 6AM.
Every day. That means there are
three words we already know will be
in the 6am message. “Weather,”
obviously, and —
HUGH ALEXANDER
— “Heil bloody Hitler.”
ALAN TURING
Heil bloody Hitler.
Joan searches through a PILE, finding:
JOAN CLARKE
Here’s the 6 o’clock message from
this morning.
Joan holds the message as they all run out to:
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Scene 42 - The Race Against Time
Alan runs from Hut 8 to Hut 11, the team chasing behind him.
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 11 - CONTINUOUS
Alan, Joan, John, Peter and Hugh burst in —
ALAN TURING
Hugh — the right hand letter-rings.
Set them to —
HUGH ALEXANDER
— I know, I know. “Veter.”
“Hitler.”
— Hugh turns the rings while —
ALAN TURING
— Peter, John — Run voltage from
those rings through the back
scramblers —
— John and Peter go around back —
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
— So we’ll use the loops?
ALAN TURING
— Yes. Joan, what’s the last 6am
message?
Joan reads aloud to Alan as he enters it in:
JOAN CLARKE
L - H - W - A - U - Q - X - K...
They all stand back as Alan TURNS ON the machine.
They watch the CLACK CLACK CLACK of Christopher as he
processes the message...
— They’re nervous, fretting, anxiously awaiting his
calculations...
... Finally, Christopher STOPS.
Silence, as a SERIES OF ROTORS on the side of Christopher
snap into place, displaying a SET OF LETTERS.
PETER HILTON
What happened? Did it work?
Alan SCRIBBLES down the letters (”EXBAO...”) and they all run
back to —
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Scene 43 - Breakthrough at Bletchley Park
Where Alan takes a DUMMY ENIGMA MACHINE, turns the machine’s
rotors to the setting he wrote down (”EXBAO...”) —
ALAN TURING
Give me a fresh message. The last
one we intercepted.
Peter hands Alan one from a nearby folder —
— Alan starts typing one of today’s gibberish encrypted
messages into Enigma —
— As John TAKES DOWN the decoded German letters —
— Hugh looks at what John is writing and TRANSLATES the
German into English —
HUGH ALEXANDER
“KMS Jaguar... Is auf punkt — is
directed - 53 degrees, 24 minutes
north... And auf punkt 1 degree
west...”
HUGH ALEXANDER (CONT’D) ALAN TURING
“... Heil Hitler.” “... Heil Hitler.”
Alan and Hugh look at each other: Oh my god.
ALAN TURING
Turns out that’s the only German
you need to know to break Enigma.
The team EXPLODES WITH JOY.
LAUGHING, HOOTING, SCREAMING, JUMPING, HUGGING.
This is the happiest moment of their lives.
John even starts to TEAR UP, and TRIES TO HUG ALAN —
— Who just STANDS THERE, limp.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
(re: Alan)
Not a hugger. Probably could have
guessed that.
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Scene 44 - The Cost of Knowledge
Dawn rises over Bletchley Park.
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - DAWN
The team has been there working all through the night.
There’s a flurry of activity: Decoding messages, translating
the decrypts, reading the information contained within.
Hugh steps back for a moment to look at the product of their
work: A BIG MAP ON THE WALL.
ON THE MAP: It’s the Atlantic Ocean. Blue pins represent the
Allied ships, red ones represent the Axis ships.
HUGH ALEXANDER
You did it.
(turns to Alan)
Bloody hell, you did it. You just
defeated Nazism with a crossword
puzzle. What does it feel like to
do the impossible?
ON ALAN’S FACE: He’s not sure. Something is bothering him,
but he can’t figure out what.
John steps back from his work to join Hugh.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
There are five people in the world
who know the position of every ship
in the Atlantic. They are all in
this room.
Now Joan joins Hugh and John in seeing the full map for the
first time.
JOAN CLARKE
Oh my good God.
HUGH ALEXANDER
I don’t think even He has the power
that we do right now.
JOAN CLARKE
(getting closer to map)
There’s going to be an attack on a
British passenger convoy. There.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
You’re right. Those U-Boats are
only twenty or thirty minutes away.
JOAN CLARKE
Civilians. Hundreds of them. We can
save their lives.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
And knock out a whole German fleet
in the process.
HUGH ALEXANDER
I’ll call Denniston. Have him radio
his Admirals immediately.
Hugh picks up the phone —
ALAN TURING
(figuring something out)
No.
JOAN CLARKE
Is there enough time to save them?
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Should be. If we can get a message
to the passenger convoy, she can
turn —
Hugh DIALS —
ALAN TURING
(louder)
No. No.
HUGH ALEXANDER
(into phone)
— Commander Denniston’s office —
ALAN TURING
NO.
HUGH ALEXANDER
(into phone)
— This is urgent, top priority —
ALAN TURING
NO!!!
Alan LEAPS ACROSS THE ROOM and GRABS THE PHONE FROM HUGH.
HUGH ALEXANDER
What the bloody hell?
Hugh tries to grab the phone back —
— But Alan pulls away sharply.
Everyone STOPS. Turns. Looks at Alan.
HUGH ALEXANDER (CONT’D)
Are you mad?
ALAN TURING
No. No. You can’t call Denniston.
You can’t tell him about the
attack.
JOAN CLARKE
Alan, are you all right? What’s
going on?
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
We can have air support over the
passenger convoy in ten minutes.
ALAN TURING
No. Let the U-Boats sink the
convoy.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Look, this has been a big day,
maybe you’re going through a bit of
shock —
HUGH ALEXANDER
— There’s no time for this.
Hugh tries to GRAB THE PHONE from Alan —
— but Alan PULLS it away and SMASHES THE PHONE AGAINST THE
GROUND.
JOAN CLARKE
Alan!
Hugh can’t take it anymore —
— He TAKES A SWING AT ALAN —
— Who CRUMPLES AT THE BLOW ON HIS JAW —
— Hugh stares down at Alan, who’s bleeding on the floor —
— Hugh WINDS UP FOR ANOTHER PUNCH —
— When Joan CATCHES HIS ARM mid-swing —
— Surprised, Hugh instinctively SWINGS AT HER —
— Smacking Joan hard across the face.
— He’s stunned by what he’s done as she responds by PUSHING
HIM INTO A TABLE —
— And Hugh falls to the floor, next to Alan.
Joan stands above them.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
(to Hugh)
If you hurt him, you will just
barely live to regret it.
Silence. Just the sounds of panting.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Everyone stop. Please. Calm down.
PETER HILTON
The attack is in minutes. We don’t
have time to calm down.
ALAN TURING
Do you know why people like
violence, Hugh? Because it feels
good.
(wipes blood from his
nose)
It would feel good to blow those U-
Boats out of the Atlantic. But
sometimes we can’t do what feels
good. We have to do what’s logical.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
What’s logical?
ALAN TURING
The hardest time to lie is when the
other person is expecting to be
lied to.
JOAN CLARKE
(getting it)
Oh my God.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
What?
ALAN TURING
If they’re waiting for a lie, you
can’t just give them one.
JOAN CLARKE
Oh my God. Damn it. Alan’s right.
PETER HILTON
What?!?
ALAN TURING
What will the Germans think if we
destroy those U-Boats?
PETER HILTON
Nothing. They’ll be dead.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
(getting it)
No. No. You can’t be right.
PETER HILTON
Am I the only one who’s still not
getting this?
ALAN TURING
Suddenly our convoy veers off
course and a fleet of RAF bombers
magically descends on the location
of a pack of U-Boats? What will the
Germans think?
PETER HILTON
Hugh?
HUGH ALEXANDER
... The Germans will know we broke
Enigma.
JOAN CLARKE
They’ll put a halt on radio
communication by noon.
(MORE)
JOAN CLARKE (CONT'D)
And they’ll have the design of
Enigma changed by the weekend.
ALAN TURING
Two years of work. Everything we’ve
done here. It’ll all be for
nothing.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
There are 500 people in that
convoy. Civilians. Women. Children.
We’re about to let them die.
ALAN TURING
Our job wasn’t to save one
passenger convoy. It was to win the
war.
HUGH ALEXANDER
Our job was to break Enigma.
ALAN TURING
Done. Now for the hard part:
keeping it a secret. Forever.
Peter looks at the map...
PETER HILTON
It’s the Carlisle.
They all look at him.
JOAN CLARKE
What?
PETER HILTON
The convoy you’re about to...
It’s... The HMS Carlisle is one of
the ships.
ALAN TURING
So?
PETER HILTON
We can’t act on every piece of
intelligence? Fine. We won’t. Just
this one. The Germans won’t find us
out if we stop one attack.
JOAN CLARKE
What’s gotten into you, Peter?
PETER HILTON
... My brother. Phillip. He’s on
the Carlisle. Gunnery ensign.
Silence. Fuck.
ALAN TURING
I’m sorry.
PETER HILTON
Who the hell do you think you are?
This is my brother. My big brother.
He was the only one — Look, he was
there after my mum — He’s my big
brother, alright, and you have a
few minutes to call off his murder.
ALAN TURING
It’s not my fault.
Peter DIVES for Alan —
— But John stops him.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
Alan is right. We can’t.
PETER HILTON
AND WHY THE BLOODY HELL NOT? I am
begging you. Alan. Joan. Hugh.
John. Please. I am begging you.
Just this once. Just one time. The
Germans won’t get suspicious just
because we stopped one attack. It’s
one time. No one will know. I’m
asking you. As your friend. If I
mean anything to you. Please.
Silence. This is the hardest thing anyone in this room has
ever had to do.
ALAN TURING
I’m so sorry.
PETER HILTON
You’re not God, Alan. You don’t get
to decide who lives and who dies.
ALAN TURING
Yes, we do.
PETER HILTON
Why? Why?
ALAN TURING
Because no one else can.
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Scene 45 - Secrecy Over Tea
Alan and Joan ride the train from Bletchley into London.
They know what they have to do.
EXT. TRAIN STATION - DAY
Alan and Joan exit the train and walk down the platform.
INT. TEA SHOP - LONDON - DAY
In a quiet TEA SHOP, Alan, Joan, and Stewart Menzies sip
their Twinings. Outside the GLASS WINDOWS, NURSES help
WOUNDED SOLDIERS out of an AMBULANCE and into a local
HOSPITAL.
STEWART MENZIES
... Why are you telling me this?
ALAN TURING
We need your help to keep this from
the Admiralty. Army. RAF. No one
can know we broke Enigma, not even
Denniston.
STEWART MENZIES
Who is in the process of having you
fired.
JOAN CLARKE
You’ll take care of that.
ALAN TURING
While we develop a system for
determining how much intelligence
to act on. Which attacks to stop,
which to let through. Statistical
analysis. The minimum number of
actions it’ll take to win the war,
but the maximum number we’re able
to take before the Germans get
suspicious.
STEWART MENZIES
You’re going to trust this all to
statistics? To maths?
ALAN TURING
Correct.
JOAN CLARKE
And then MI-6 can come up with the
lies we’ll tell everyone else.
ALAN TURING
We’ll require a believable
alternate source for each piece of
information we use.
JOAN CLARKE
A false story that exlains how we
got that information, that has
nothing to do with Enigma. And then
you’ll need to leak those stories
to the Germans.
ALAN TURING
And the rest of our military.
JOAN CLARKE
Can you do that?
STEWART MENZIES
Maintain a conspiracy of lies
through the highest levels of our
government? Yes, that sounds right
up my alley.
ON ALAN AND JOAN: Okay. Let’s do it.
STEWART MENZIES (CONT’D)
(smiling)
Alan, I so rarely have cause to say
this. But you are exactly the man I
always hoped you would be.
INT. TRAIN - DAY
Alan and Joan ride the train back to Bletchley.
She reaches out and puts her hand in his. They’re in this so
deep now... But at least they’re in it together.
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Scene 46 - Dawn at Bletchley Park: The Ultra Codebreakers
At 6am, dawn is threatening to break across the Park.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
They codenamed it “Ultra.”
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - WREN’S HUT - SEQUENCE
But in the WREN’S HUT, the women eagerly await the coming of
the day’s first messages —
— And a sudden BEEP BEEP BEEP announces that they have. The
WRENs quickly take down the first messages —
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
And it quickly became the largest
store of military intelligence in
the history of the world.
A WREN removes the first few dozen from a pile —
— And hands it over to another WREN —
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 11 - SEQUENCE
— In Hut 11, the WREN gives the day’s first messages to Hugh,
who enters them into Christopher —
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
It was like having a tap on
Himmler’s intercom.
— Christopher HUMS —
— And Hugh, after a few minutes, reads the day’s Enigma
settings on the machine’s read-out: “FSOQR”
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Scene 47 - Betrayal in Hut 8
Jack turns his Enigma machine to the day’s setting — “FSOQR”
— and one by one types in the newly intercepted messages,
recording the now decrypted results in a BOOKLET. On the
cover, the booklet is marked: “ULTRA.”
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Secrecy became the primary concern.
And for some reason they trusted
me.
Alan organizes stacks of similar ULTRA booklets when he has
trouble finding one of them — He looks up to see Peter
walking nearby.
ALAN TURING
Peter, do you have the 9:30
decrypts —
But instead of answering, Peter BUMPS HARD against Alan’s
shoulder, scattering Alan’s papers to the floor.
Jack looks over. Peter keeps on walking.
No one helps Alan as he bends down to clean up his papers.
Peter LEAVES Hut 8 without speaking a single word.
ON ALAN: He’s kneeling down in front of John’s MESSY DESK,
picking up papers from the floor, when his eyes come level
with something on the desk...
... It’s a BOOK. Buried underneath CRYPTOGRAPHIC PAPERS.
Alan stares at it strangely. Something about its shape and
colour look familiar... He UNCOVERS it...
IT’S A BIBLE.
Holy shit.
There’s a page dog-eared. Alan opens to the page — it’s
Matthew 7:7. “Seek and ye shall find...”
ON ALAN: JOHN CAIRNCROSS IS THE SOVIET SPY.
Suddenly:
JOHN CAIRNCROSS (O.S.)
Peter will come around eventually.
Alan turns and stands — there’s John, right behind him.
ON JOHN: He sees something on Alan’s face. Something is
wrong. He looks down at the desk... AND SEES THE UNCOVERED
BIBLE.
What’s John going to do? Alan is terrified...
JOHN CAIRNCROSS (CONT’D)
... Jack, could you give Alan and I
a moment?
Across the room, Jack looks over. Whatever is going on
between Alan and John, he wants no part of it.
Jack leaves.
Alan is now alone with John, the Soviet spy.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS (CONT’D)
... The Soviets and us, we’re all
on the same side. What I’m doing
will help Britain.
ALAN TURING
I’ll tell Denniston.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
No you won’t. Because if you tell
him my secret, I’ll tell him yours.
ON ALAN: Oh God, John was the one person he trusted.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS (CONT’D)
Do you know what they do to
homosexuals? You’ll never be able
to work again. Never be able to
teach. Your precious machine —
doubt you’ll ever see him again.
ON ALAN: Looks down. He’s beaten.
He puts an understanding hand on Alan’s shoulder.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS (CONT’D)
Until the history books are ready
to call you a hero, sometimes you
have to play the villain.
And with that, John takes his bible and leaves.
ON ALAN: What’s he going to do?
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Scene 48 - Fractured Trust
Alan borrows a phone in the central mansion.
ALAN TURING
(into phone)
I need to speak to Menzies...
... But frustrated by the response he hears, Alan HANGS UP.
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - JOAN’S FLAT - DAY
Alan bursts into Joan’s flat to tell her what he’s found.
ALAN TURING
Joan! Joan! Are you there?
It’s dark. He FLICKS ON THE LIGHT...
REVEAL: The room has been ransacked.
Clothes, books, papers scattered everywhere.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
— Joan?!?
He quickly moves through the flat: What happened here?
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
Joan, are you okay? Where are you?
Runs to the back bedroom, where he finds...
... Stewart Menzies. Calmly looking over some papers.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
Where’s Joan?
STEWART MENZIES
Military prison.
ALAN TURING
What have you done?
STEWART MENZIES
(holding up papers)
Decoded Enigma intercepts. A stack
of them under her nightstand.
ON ALAN: Fuck.
ALAN TURING
I gave those to her. A year ago.
When she was with the clerks I was—
STEWART MENZIES
— Yes yes yes, I’m sure. But
Denniston has been looking for a
Soviet spy, and he’s been looking
for one inside Hut 8.
ALAN TURING
I know who the Soviet agent is.
It’s not Joan.
Menzies looks at Alan: Who is it if not her?
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
... I found the bible... The spy is
John Cairncross.
Menzies SMILES. As if he’s impressed.
STEWART MENZIES
... God, how I wish you’d been the
spy. You’re so much better at this
than he is.
ALAN TURING
You knew Cairncross was the spy?
STEWART MENZIES
Well of course Cairncross was the
bloody spy.
(MORE)
STEWART MENZIES (CONT'D)
I’ve known that since before he got
to Bletchley. Why do you think I
had him placed here?
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Scene 49 - Trust and Betrayal at Bletchley Park
Flash to the first scene where Alan met his new team after
arriving at Bletchley. Commander Denniston explains how
Enigma works, while Menzies stands in the corner, observing.
Menzies keeps a special eye on Cairncross as Alan and Hugh
compete over who knows more about cryptography.
STEWART MENZIES (V.O.)
You said yourself he was a piss-
poor mathematician.
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INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - JOAN’S FLAT - CONTINUED
ALAN TURING
You placed a Soviet agent at
Bletchley?
STEWART MENZIES
It’s quite useful to be able to
leak whatever we like to Stalin.
QUICK CUT TO:
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - MAIN GATE - DUSK - FLASHBACK
A year earlier, John Cairncross exits the Main Gate of
Bletchley carrying a SUITCASE —
STEWART MENZIES (V.O.)
Churchill is too damned paranoid.
He won’t share a shred of
intelligence with the Soviets.
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Scene 50 - The Unwitting Courier
Cairncross walks through the village with the suitcase —
STEWART MENZIES (V.O.)
Even information that will help
them against the Germans. So much
secrecy...
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EXT. BLETCHLEY VILLAGE - STREET - NIGHT - FLASHBACK
Cairncross comes to a MAILBOX, where under cover of night he
OPENS HIS CASE —
— Removing A FOLDER OF COPIED ENIGMA INTERCEPTS —
— Which he then places in the mailbox.
STEWART MENZIES (V.O.)
Cairncross has no idea we know, of
course. Really not the brightest
bulb.
Cairncross WALKS AWAY into the night.
After he leaves, two MI-6 AGENTS come and UNLOCK THE MAILBOX—
— Removing his FOLDER —
— The Agents take SOME MESSAGES OUT, and put other NEW ONES
BACK IN —
— Before re-sealing the folder and putting it back in the
mailbox —
— And RE-LOCKING the mailbox lid.
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Scene 51 - Coercion at Bletchley Park
STEWART MENZIES
That’s why I’ll need your help now
to work out what to leak to John.
What to feed the Soviets, as well
as the British.
ON ALAN: Flustered. Terrified.
ALAN TURING
I’m not a spy. I’m just a
mathematician.
STEWART MENZIES
I know a lot of spies, Alan. You’re
holding on to more secrets than the
best of them.
Menzies holds up the stolen decrypts. The threat is palpable.
ALAN TURING
You must promise to get Joan out of
prison.
STEWART MENZIES
She’s at the market. She’ll be back
in an hour. I lied.
(puts the decrypts into
his pocket)
I’d better hold on to these. If
anyone finds out about them, prison
will be the least of her worries.
ON ALAN: What choice does he have? He looks down.
STEWART MENZIES (CONT’D)
Oh Alan. We’re going to have such a
wonderful war together.
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Scene 52 - A Heart Divided
Joan walks towards Hut 8, showing her ID to the new GUARDS
who are closely monitoring entry to the Huts.
In front of Hut 8, Alan watches her. Steeling himself up for
what he has to do.
As she approaches, she sees Alan waiting for her. She smiles
at him, but he doesn’t return it. Something is wrong.
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - BEHIND HUT 8 - MOMENTS LATER
Alan and Joan talk behind Hut 8.
ALAN TURING
... I need you to leave Bletchley.
JOAN CLARKE
(annoyed)
What?
ALAN TURING
Menzies. I don’t trust...
ON ALAN: He wants to tell her, but he can’t. It’s too
dangerous.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
... I don’t think it’s safe here.
JOAN CLARKE
You think it’s safe somewhere else?
ALAN TURING
You need to leave, and you need to
get very far away from me.
JOAN CLARKE
Alan. What’s happened?
ON ALAN: This isn’t working. He’s going to have to try a
different approach.
ALAN TURING
... We can’t be engaged anymore.
Your parents will have to take you
back and find you a husband
elsewhere.
JOAN CLARKE
What is wrong with you?
ALAN TURING
... There’s something I have to
tell you. I’m... I’m a homosexual.
JOAN CLARKE
Alright.
ON ALAN: What?
ALAN TURING
Men, Joan. Not women.
JOAN CLARKE
So what?
ALAN TURING
I just said —
JOAN CLARKE
— So what? I had my suspicions. I
always did. But we’re not like
other people. We love each other in
our own way, and we can still live
the life together that we want. You
won’t be the perfect husband? I can
promise you I harboured no
intention of being the perfect
wife. I’ll not be fixing your lamb
all day awaiting your return from
the office, will I? I’ll work.
(MORE)
JOAN CLARKE (CONT'D)
You’ll work. We’ll have each
other’s company. We’ll have each
other’s minds. Sounds like a better
marriage than most. Because I care
for you. And you care for me. And
we understand one another more than
anyone else ever has.
ON ALAN: He needs to get rid of her, to save her, and she is
making this impossible.
ALAN TURING
I don’t.
JOAN CLARKE
What?
ALAN TURING
Care for you. I never did. I only
needed you to break Enigma. And now
I’ve done it, so you can leave.
She SLAPS HIM.
JOAN CLARKE
I am not going anywhere. I have
spent entirely too much of my life
worried about what you think of me,
or what my parents think of me, or
what the boys in Hut 8 or the girls
in Hut 3 think, and you know I am
done with it. This work is the most
important thing I will ever do in
my life. And no one will stop me.
Least of all you.
Joan turns to walk away, and then, angry, she turns back.
She TOSSES HER WIRE ENGAGEMENT RING AT ALAN.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
... They were right. John. Hugh.
Peter. You really are a monster.
Alan watches her walk away, struggling to maintain his facade
of icy indifference.
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Scene 53 - The Weight of Loss
Young Alan enters the HEADMASTER’S OFFICE.
YOUNG ALAN
You wanted to see me, Sir?
HEADMASTER
Turing. Sit down.
YOUNG ALAN
Is something the matter?
HEADMASTER
You and Christopher Morcom are
quite close.
YOUNG ALAN
I wouldn’t say that.
HEADMASTER
Your mathematics teacher says you
two are positively inseparable.
YOUNG ALAN
We’re the best students in the
class.
HEADMASTER
He caught you passing notes the
other day.
YOUNG ALAN
Cryptography. To pass the time. The
class is too simple.
HEADMASTER
You and your friend solve maths
problems during maths class because
maths class is too dull?
YOUNG ALAN
He’s not my friend.
HEADMASTER
I’ve been told he’s your only
friend.
YOUNG ALAN
Who said that?
HEADMASTER
Something has come up. About
Morcom.
YOUNG ALAN
Why am I here?
HEADMASTER
Christopher is dead.
YOUNG ALAN
... I don’t understand.
HEADMASTER
His mother sent word this morning.
The family was on holiday, you see.
YOUNG ALAN
I don’t understand.
HEADMASTER
He had bovine tuberculosis, as I’m
sure he told you. This mustn’t be a
shock, but all the same, I’m sorry.
YOUNG ALAN
You’re mistaken.
HEADMASTER
Did he not tell you? He’s been sick
for a long time. Knew this was
coming soon, but he had a stiff
upper lip about it. Good lad.
ON ALAN’S FACE: Christopher never told him.
HEADMASTER (CONT’D)
Are you all right, Turing?
YOUNG ALAN
Yes. Of course. As I said, I didn’t
know him well.
HEADMASTER
Ah. Very well then.
YOUNG ALAN
May I leave, Headmaster?
HEADMASTER
Of course. Oh, but Turing?
YOUNG ALAN
Yes, Sir?
HEADMASTER
Do pay more attention in maths
class, will you?
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Scene 54 - The Weight of Choices
Alan, Joan, John, Hugh, and Peter decrypt messages together
for another two exhausting years.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
The war dragged on for another two
solitary years.
Alan spends two years pressed shoulder-to-shoulder with the
woman whose heart he broke. With the man whose dark secret he
uncovered. With the man whose brother he allowed to die.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Every day we performed our blood-
soaked calculus. Every day we
decided who lived and who died. And
every day we guided the Allied
armies to victory without anyone
knowing.
EXT. MEDITERRANEAN SEA - SICILY (ARCHIVE FOOTAGE) - DAY
INTERCUT WITH ARCHIVAL FOOTAGE: The FRONTLINE BATTLES whose
outcomes, good and bad, are determined by the work of Hut 8.
The MEDITERRANEAN FLEET is RAVAGED outside Sicily... 6,000
SHIPS launch for the surprise attack on Normandy...
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Stalingrad? The Ardennes? Normandy?
None of those victories would have
been possible without the
intelligence we produced.
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - DAY
IN HUT 8: Peter and Hugh each decrypt a message, placing TWO
BLUE PINS on the board, and then one RED. They look to Alan:
Two British ships, and they can only save one of them.
Alan runs a statistical analysis of their options. We see KEY
WORDS: “LIKELIHOOD OF DETECTION,” “CASUALTIES,” “MATERIAL
LOSSES” interspersed with mathematical equations. Alan places
his results into a GREEN FOLDER. A MESSENGER comes in and
takes the folder to —
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Scene 55 - The Weight of Sacrifice
AN MI-6 WAR ROOM: The Messenger delivers the Green Folder to
Menzies and a TEAM OF MI-6 AGENTS. They look over Alan’s
analysis and decide what military actions to take. The Agents
TELEPHONE Churchill’s office in London.
EXT. NORTH OF ALGIERS (ARCHIVE FOOTAGE) - DAY
ARCHIVAL FOOTAGE: We see the impact of Hut 8’s work as a
dozen British ships are BLOWN OUT OF THE OCEAN just north of
Algiers, sacrificed for the greater good in Operation Torch.
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - DAY
BACK IN HUT 8: The team learns of the outcome as they decode
more German messages. Peter takes the BLUE PIN down from the
map, tossing it angrily in the trash. He looks at Alan, who
looks away — another ship they could not save.
EXT. BLETCHLEY VILLAGE/ ENVIRONS - NIGHT
OUTSIDE BLETCHLEY VILLAGE: Alan RUNS at night on a dirt path
along the outskirts of Bletchley. He runs for miles,
sweating, panting, until his legs almost give way.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
People talk about the war as this
epic battle between civilizations.
Good versus evil, liberty versus
tyranny. Armies of millions
bleeding into the mud, fleets of
ships that weighed down the oceans,
packs of airplanes that dropped
bombs until they blotted out the
sun itself. But it wasn’t.
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - NIGHT
QUIET MOMENTS IN HUT 8: Hugh lays a folded-up coat under a
sleeping Peter’s head as a pillow. John makes tea for Joan.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
The war was really just a half-
dozen crossword enthusiasts in a
tiny village in the south of
England.
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Scene 56 - Secrecy Amidst Celebration
ARCHIVAL FOOTAGE: On V-E Day, Churchill speaks to millions
from a balcony in Whitehall. Truman dedicates the victory to
Roosevelt as Times Square erupts into drunken cheers.
The whole world kisses. The whole world cries.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Was I God? No. Because God didn’t
win the war. I did.
EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - DAY - 1945
All of Bletchley Park is celebrating the end of the war.
Flags are being waved, people are dancing, cheering.
But inside the central mansion:
INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - CENTRAL MANSION - CONTINUOUS
Alan and his team are assembled before Stewart Menzies.
HUGH ALEXANDER
... What happens now? Back to the
university for us?
STEWART MENZIES
Yes. You’ve only one thing left to
do before your service to your
government is concluded.
JOHN CAIRNCROSS
What’s that?
STEWART MENZIES
Burn everything.
HUGH ALEXANDER
What?
STEWART MENZIES
We told you when you started that
this was a top secret program. Did
you think we were joking?
HUGH ALEXANDER
But the war is over.
ALAN TURING
This war is over. But there will be
more. And we know how to break a
code that everyone else thinks is
unbreakable.
STEWART MENZIES
(with a smile at Alan)
Alright. Tear it down, light it up,
sweep away the ashes. None of you
have ever met before. None of you
have ever even heard the word
Enigma. Have a safe trip home.
(MORE)
STEWART MENZIES (CONT'D)
Behave, and with a bit of luck none
of you will ever see me — or one
another — again in your lives.
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Scene 57 - Judgment and Isolation
Alan Turing finishes telling his story to Detective Nock.
DETECTIVE NOCK
That’s... Unbelievable.
ALAN TURING
That’s the Imitation Game.
DETECTIVE NOCK
I don’t know what to do now.
ALAN TURING
Now, Detective, you get to judge.
That’s how the game works. I
answered your questions. You know
my story. That’s the point of the
game. We are all pretending to be
something. Imitating something.
Someone. And we are no more, and no
less, than what we can convince
other people that we are. So tell
me: What am I? Am I a person? Am I
a machine? Am I a war hero? Am I a
criminal?
DETECTIVE NOCK
I can’t judge you.
ALAN TURING
Well then you’re no help to me at
all.
ON ALAN: Turning away. He’s done with Nock.
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INT. POLICE STATION - MANCHESTER - DAY - 6 MONTHS LATER
A PLAINCLOTHES OFFICER walks through the police station,
carrying a NEWSPAPER under his arm.
He makes his way to —
— Detective Nock’s desk.
PLAINCLOTHES OFFICER
Congratulations, Sir.
The Officer drops the newspaper in front of Nock.
The headline reads: “CAMBRIDGE PROFESSOR SENTENCED FOR
INDECENCY”, above a photo of Alan.
ON NOCK: This should make him happy. But instead he feels
only empty and sick.
INT. ALAN TURING’S HOUSE - DAY
We find Alan in his study. He’s gained weight since last we
saw him — he’s grown paler as well. Haggard. And the place is
a horrible mess.
He compares his half-built NEW MACHINE to the plans on his
desk — his work progresses. Slowly.
(This is the machine we saw in the opening scene, which
appears different but related to the Bletchley machine — like
a newer model of the same basic concept.)
The doorbell RINGS. Alan ignores it, focused on his work.
It RINGS again. Irritated, he gets up and shuffles through
his house —
— He’s walking with an odd limp, like it’s hard for him to
move his legs normally —
— And as the bell keeps RINGING insistently he reaches the
front door, opening it to find:
JOAN CLARKE
I had to find out from the bloody
newspapers.
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Scene 58 - A Fragile Connection
Joan takes a seat while Alan fusses, embarrassed at the state
of the place and trying to clean up for her.
JOAN CLARKE
... You never responded to my
letters.
(silence from Alan)
I would have come. I would have
testified.
ALAN TURING
And what would you have said? That
I wasn’t a homosexual?
JOAN CLARKE
I would have said something. This
is serious. They could send you to
jail —
Alan tries to move a glass of water...
... Which he DROPS, shattering it.
ALAN TURING
Damn it...
JOAN CLARKE
Your hands... You’re twitching.
ALAN TURING
No I’m not.
He is.
JOAN CLARKE
Alan.
ALAN TURING
... It’s the medication.
JOAN CLARKE
The medication?
ALAN TURING
I have to go in for weekly
oestrogen treatments. At the
hospital.
JOAN CLARKE
What are you talking about?
ALAN TURING
The judge gave me a choice. Prison.
Or “hormonal therapy.”
JOAN CLARKE
Oh my god. Oh my god. That’s —
ALAN TURING
— Chemical castration. Yes. To cure
my homosexual predilections. Of
course I chose that. I wouldn’t be
able to work from prison.
Joan is HORRIFIED.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
Well how would I even have got
parts in jail? It just makes no
sense.
JOAN CLARKE
All right. This is what we’re going
to do. I’m going to speak to your
doctors. I’m going to speak to your
lawyer. We’re going to find a way
out of this.
ALAN TURING
No.
JOAN CLARKE
You are not thinking clearly. There
are a million chemicals flowing
through your brain. This treatment—
ALAN TURING
— I’m fine.
JOAN CLARKE
Please let me help you.
ALAN TURING
I don’t need your help.
JOAN CLARKE
You do not have to do this all
alone.
ALAN TURING
Alone? I’m not alone. I never have
been.
He looks lovingly at his machine — at Christopher.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
... Christopher has got so smart.
If I stop the treatment, they’ll
take him away from me. You can’t
let them do that. You can’t. Don’t
let them leave me alone.
Joan looks at Alan. And at Christopher. His true love.
Looking at his machine, Alan starts to have a small PANIC
ATTACK — he’s getting more emotional, twitching more, getting
teary — the hormones are flowing through him.
JOAN CLARKE
(re: Alan’s freak out)
Here, it’s alright. It’s alright.
Sit down.
She sits him in a chair, trying to contain his
hyperventilating.
Alan, embarrassed at this uncontrollable display, tries to
play it off, but of course he can’t stop it.
With her hand on his shoulder, he notices her WEDDING RING.
ALAN TURING
(trying to seem normal)
... It’s a much nicer ring than the
one I got you.
JOAN CLARKE
His name is Jock. We work together
in Eastcote. He’s gotten me into
coin collecting. Can you believe
it?
Joan looks around the room for a tea cup, a glass of water,
anything that isn’t mouldy she can have him sip from.
She sees the newspaper she brought in, grabs it.
JOAN CLARKE (CONT’D)
Do you want to do a crossword? For
old times’ sake. It’ll only take
five minutes. Or in your case, six.
She tries to get him to smile at her joke.
Joan opens the paper to a PUZZLE.
Alan looks down at it.
His fingers twitch. He stares at the puzzle, confused. He
doesn’t know how to do it.
Alan moves his hand away from the puzzle.
ALAN TURING
... Perhaps later.
The treatment has wrecked his brain so badly that he can’t do
crossword puzzles anymore.
Joan watches and her heart utterly breaks.
ON JOAN: He’s gone forever. And she knows it.
Alan sees her sadness. He’s embarrassed, angry, bitter.
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
... At least it worked out for one
of us.
(MORE)
ALAN TURING (CONT’D)
You got what you wanted, didn’t
you? Work. A husband. A normal
life.
She looks at him quietly for a moment.
JOAN CLARKE
But no one normal could have done
this.
(gestures to Christopher)
This morning I took a train through
a city that would not exist if it
wasn’t for you. I bought a ticket
from a man who would likely be dead
if it wasn’t for you. I read up on
my work, a whole field of
scientific inquiry that only exists
because of you. If you wish you
could have been ‘normal’, I can
promise you, I do not. The world is
an infinitely better place
precisely because you weren’t.
ALAN TURING
Is that what you think?
JOAN CLARKE
... I think that sometimes it is
the very people who no one imagines
anything of who do the things that
no one can imagine.
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Scene 59 - Echoes of Loneliness
Young Alan sits under the tree where Christopher first taught
him about cryptography. He’s holding the book that
Christopher gave him.
He starts to cry. He’s alone now, and he will be for a very
long time.
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INT. ALAN TURING’S HOUSE - DAY - 1954
Alan sits at his desk, going over papers. He closes a book.
Gets up. Walks past Christopher, giving him a look. He turns
off the light, walking away down the dim hallway.
EXT. ALAN TURING’S HOUSE - DAY - 1954
A familiar scene: A HALF-DOZEN POLICE OFFICERS swarm the
Manchester home of (former) mathematics professor Alan
Turing.
Detective Nock passes the double-parked police cars and
ascends the front steps of Alan’s house.
Remembers the first time he was here.
INT. ALAN TURING’S HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
A CONSTABLE leads Detective Nock upstairs, gesturing into the
open BEDROOM door.
In the doorway, we see a team of COPS tending to something on
the bed. There’s an APPLE on the nightstand.
CONSTABLE
Suicide, looks like. Half-eaten
apple next to the bed. Some sort of
white powder all over it.
DETECTIVE NOCK
Cyanide.
(off the Constable’s look)
You’ll find a tub of it downstairs.
The Constable makes a curious face: How can you know that?
Nock approaches the bed, and stares into the lifeless face of
Alan Turing.
ON NOCK: Alan Turing made the world a better place... And
Nock killed him for it.
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Scene 60 - Bonfire of Secrets
Alan, Joan, Hugh, John, and Peter stand before the MASSIVE
BONFIRE that’s been built in the center of the Park.
TITLE: Alan Turing committed suicide in 1954.
TITLE: His machine was never perfected, though it
generated a whole field of research into what became
nicknamed “Turing Machines.” Today, we call them “computers.”
Hugh comes over and puts one arm around Alan, another around
Joan. They have a moment: They did it. They won the war.
John throws a stack of Enigma messages high into the air —
— They watch as the papers flutter down into the fire.
They laugh, and one by one they all join in:
They FROLIC and PLAY as they throw every document, every slip
of scratch paper, every bit of evidence they were there into
the fire.
TITLE: In 1990, John Cairncross publicly confessed to having
been a Soviet agent. He was never prosecuted.
TITLE: In 2013, Turing was granted an official pardon by the
government. Approximately 49,000 other gay men were convicted
and punished under the same code between 1885 and 1967.
TITLE: The logo of Apple Computer - an apple with a bite
taken out of it - has long been rumored to be a silent
tribute to Turing. These rumors have never been confirmed.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Well then.
ON ALAN AND THE TEAM: Hugging and playing as everything they
did is burnt to a crisp.
ALAN TURING (V.O.)
Any questions?
BLACK.
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Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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alan turing | Alan Turing's character arc begins with his portrayal as a socially isolated and bullied teenager, showcasing his early struggles with identity and acceptance. As he matures into a brilliant mathematician, he becomes increasingly focused on his work, driven by a desire to decode the Enigma machine and contribute to the war effort. Throughout the feature, Turing faces numerous challenges, including the moral complexities of espionage, the societal pressures of his sexuality, and the emotional toll of his isolation. His journey is marked by moments of vulnerability and introspection, leading to a deeper understanding of himself and his relationships. In the climax, Turing confronts the consequences of his actions and the betrayal of trust, ultimately leading to a moment of emotional resolution as he decides to burn the documents symbolizing his past. The arc concludes with Turing embracing his identity and the impact of his work, despite the tragic circumstances surrounding him. | While Alan Turing's character arc is rich and multifaceted, it could benefit from a more gradual exploration of his emotional vulnerabilities throughout the screenplay. The transitions between his various states of mind, from socially awkward to emotionally resolved, may feel abrupt to the audience. Additionally, the portrayal of his relationships, particularly with Joan Clarke and his colleagues, could be further developed to highlight the impact of these connections on his character growth. The screenplay could also delve deeper into the societal context of Turing's struggles, providing a clearer understanding of the external pressures he faces. | To improve Alan Turing's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that showcase his emotional struggles and the evolution of his relationships over time. This could include moments of connection with his colleagues that highlight his growth in interpersonal skills and emotional intelligence. Additionally, integrating flashbacks or reflective moments that reveal his internal conflicts and societal pressures could provide greater depth to his character. Finally, ensuring that the pacing of his emotional journey aligns with the overall narrative arc will help create a more cohesive and impactful portrayal of Turing's life and legacy. |
detective nock | Detective Nock's character arc begins with him as a disinterested and somewhat lazy investigator, more focused on his personal life than his job. As he becomes embroiled in the investigation of Alan Turing, he transitions into a curious and skeptical investigator, driven by a desire to uncover the truth. This journey forces him to confront his own biases and the societal prejudices that surround Turing. By the climax, Nock is a determined and resourceful investigator, willing to challenge authority and societal norms to seek justice. However, as the story concludes, he faces the tragic consequences of his investigation and the societal discrimination that Turing endures, leading to a moment of reflection and moral reckoning. Nock's arc culminates in a realization of the complexities of truth and justice, leaving him forever changed by the experience. | While Detective Nock's character arc is compelling, it could benefit from a more gradual and nuanced development. His initial portrayal as a slacker may come off as one-dimensional, and his transformation into a determined investigator could feel rushed. Additionally, the moral ambiguity he faces could be explored in greater depth, allowing for a more profound internal conflict. The character's hidden past is mentioned but not fully explored, which could provide additional layers to his motivations and actions. | To improve Detective Nock's character arc, consider introducing subtle hints of his hidden past earlier in the screenplay, allowing audiences to gradually piece together his backstory. This could create a more relatable and complex character. Additionally, incorporate moments of vulnerability where Nock grapples with his biases and the societal implications of his investigation, perhaps through interactions with other characters or personal reflections. This would enhance the moral ambiguity of his character and provide a richer emotional journey. Finally, ensure that his transformation feels earned by showcasing specific challenges and revelations that lead to his growth, rather than relying solely on plot progression. |
commander denniston | Commander Denniston begins as a staunch defender of the status quo, skeptical of Turing's unconventional approaches and driven by a desire to maintain order and security. As the story progresses, he faces mounting pressure from the urgency of the war and the undeniable effectiveness of Turing's work. This leads to moments of introspection where he grapples with his rigid beliefs. By the climax, Denniston is forced to confront the reality that innovation is necessary for success, ultimately leading him to reluctantly support Turing's methods. In the resolution, he emerges as a more open-minded leader, having learned to balance his authoritative nature with the need for adaptability in the face of unprecedented challenges. | While Commander Denniston's character arc provides a compelling journey from skepticism to reluctant acceptance, it risks falling into the trope of the 'stubborn authority figure.' His transformation may feel rushed or insufficiently motivated if not given enough depth and nuance. The screenplay could benefit from more moments that showcase his internal conflict and the stakes involved in his decisions, allowing the audience to empathize with his position rather than merely viewing him as an antagonist. | To improve Denniston's character arc, consider incorporating scenes that reveal his backstory or personal stakes in the war, which could humanize him and provide context for his skepticism. Additionally, moments of vulnerability or doubt could be introduced, allowing the audience to see his internal struggle more clearly. Gradually building his acceptance of Turing's ideas through small victories or collaborative moments could create a more believable transformation. Finally, a pivotal scene where he must choose between his traditional values and the innovative approach could serve as a powerful turning point in his arc. |
hugh alexander | Hugh Alexander's character arc begins with him as a confident and competitive team member, initially skeptical of Alan Turing's unconventional methods. As the story unfolds, he faces increasing frustration and emotional turmoil due to the pressures of wartime intelligence and the ethical dilemmas posed by their work. His skepticism evolves into a deeper understanding of the complexities of their mission, leading him to confront difficult truths about sacrifice and loyalty. By the climax, Hugh's loyalty to the team is tested when they receive the order to destroy their work, forcing him to reconcile his personal beliefs with the greater good. Ultimately, he emerges as a more pragmatic and resourceful character, having learned to balance his competitive nature with a commitment to the team's collective goals. | Hugh's character arc is compelling, showcasing a journey from skepticism to acceptance of difficult truths. However, the emotional transitions could be more pronounced, as some of his frustrations and internal conflicts may not resonate deeply with the audience. While his loyalty and camaraderie are well-established, the screenplay could benefit from more moments that highlight his personal stakes in the mission, making his sacrifices feel more impactful. Additionally, the contrast between his practical approach and Alan's eccentricity could be explored further to enhance the tension and dynamics within the team. | To improve Hugh's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into his backstory, revealing personal motivations that drive his dedication to the mission. This could include flashbacks or conversations that highlight his relationships with family or friends affected by the war. Additionally, create pivotal moments where Hugh must choose between his competitive instincts and the team's needs, allowing for more dramatic tension. Strengthening his emotional responses to key events, such as the order to destroy their work, can also enhance audience connection. Finally, exploring his evolving relationship with Alan Turing could provide a richer narrative, showcasing how their differing approaches ultimately lead to mutual respect and understanding. |
christopher | Christopher's character arc begins with him as a supportive and wise friend, helping Alan navigate the challenges of bullying and anxiety. As the story progresses, he becomes more involved in Alan's intellectual pursuits, particularly in cryptography, fostering a strong bond between them. However, as Young Alan develops feelings for Christopher, the latter becomes increasingly distant, embodying the allure of unattainable love. This tension culminates in a moment of revelation where Christopher must confront his own feelings and the impact of his distance on Alan. By the end of the feature, Christopher evolves from a supportive friend to a more self-aware individual who recognizes the importance of emotional connection, ultimately choosing to embrace his bond with Alan rather than remain an elusive figure. | While Christopher's character is well-developed in terms of his supportive nature and intellectual bond with Alan, the transition from a supportive friend to an elusive figure may feel abrupt without sufficient buildup. The duality of his character could lead to confusion regarding his true feelings and intentions, which might detract from the emotional impact of his arc. Additionally, the screenplay could benefit from exploring Christopher's internal struggles more deeply, particularly regarding his own feelings for Alan and the reasons behind his distance. | To improve Christopher's character arc, consider adding scenes that delve into his internal conflicts and motivations for distancing himself from Alan. This could include moments of vulnerability where he grapples with his feelings and the fear of jeopardizing their friendship. Additionally, incorporating more interactions that highlight the evolution of their relationship—such as shared experiences or challenges that force Christopher to confront his feelings—could create a more gradual and believable transition. Finally, a climactic moment where Christopher openly communicates his feelings to Alan would provide a satisfying resolution to his arc, reinforcing the theme of emotional connection. |
john cairncross | John Cairncross begins as a supportive and loyal team member, embodying the spirit of teamwork and camaraderie at Bletchley Park. As the story progresses, he faces an internal struggle between his loyalty to his colleagues and his secret allegiance to the Soviet Union. This conflict intensifies as he becomes more deeply involved in espionage, leading to moments of emotional turmoil and ethical dilemmas. Ultimately, John's arc culminates in a revelation of his true identity as a spy, showcasing his manipulative nature and the sacrifices he is willing to make for his cause. His journey reflects a descent from a seemingly trustworthy ally to a complex antagonist, highlighting themes of betrayal and moral ambiguity. | While John's character arc is compelling, it risks losing the audience's empathy as he transitions from a supportive team member to a manipulative spy. The initial portrayal of his loyalty and camaraderie may create a strong connection with the audience, but the eventual reveal of his true nature could feel jarring if not handled delicately. The internal conflict he experiences is crucial, but it may benefit from deeper exploration to maintain audience engagement and understanding of his motivations. Additionally, the shift from a rational, analytical character to one driven by manipulation could be more gradual to enhance believability. | To improve John's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into his internal conflict, showcasing moments of doubt and hesitation about his actions as a spy. This could involve flashbacks to his past or interactions that highlight his struggle between loyalty to his team and his mission. Additionally, providing more context for his motivations—such as personal stakes or ideological beliefs—could help the audience empathize with his choices, even as he becomes more morally ambiguous. Gradually revealing his manipulative tendencies through subtle hints rather than abrupt shifts can also create a more nuanced portrayal, allowing the audience to grapple with their feelings towards him throughout the narrative. |
stewart menzies | Throughout the screenplay, Stewart Menzies undergoes a transformation from a skeptical and manipulative authority figure to a more nuanced character who grapples with the moral implications of his actions. Initially, he uses his knowledge and power to control the team and maintain secrecy, often prioritizing the mission over individual lives. However, as the story progresses and he witnesses the personal sacrifices made by Turing and his team, Menzies begins to question his own motivations and the cost of his manipulations. By the climax, he faces a pivotal choice that forces him to reconcile his duty with his conscience, ultimately leading to a more empathetic understanding of the human cost of war. | While Menzies is portrayed as a complex character with a strong presence, his arc could benefit from deeper emotional exploration. The transition from a purely manipulative figure to someone who grapples with moral dilemmas feels somewhat abrupt. Additionally, his motivations could be fleshed out further to provide a clearer understanding of his internal conflicts. As it stands, Menzies risks being perceived as a one-dimensional antagonist rather than a fully realized character with relatable struggles. | To improve Menzies' character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or moments of vulnerability that reveal his past experiences and the reasons behind his manipulative tendencies. This could help the audience empathize with him and understand his internal conflicts better. Additionally, introducing a personal relationship or a mentor figure could provide a contrasting perspective that challenges his views and prompts his transformation. Finally, allowing Menzies to make a significant sacrifice or take a stand for the greater good in the climax would solidify his character development and enhance the emotional impact of his arc. |
joan clarke | Joan Clarke's character arc begins with her initial conflict between societal expectations and her desire to contribute to the war effort at Bletchley Park. As she joins the project, she evolves from a cautious participant to a confident leader, showcasing her intelligence and resourcefulness. Throughout the screenplay, she faces challenges that test her resolve, including her feelings for Alan and the moral dilemmas of espionage. By the climax, Joan fully embraces her role, asserting her voice and challenging the status quo, ultimately becoming a key player in the team's success. In the resolution, she finds a balance between her personal aspirations and professional commitments, emerging as a symbol of resilience and empowerment for women in her time. | While Joan Clarke's character is well-developed and multifaceted, her arc could benefit from deeper exploration of her internal conflicts and motivations. The screenplay presents her as a strong and capable woman, but it occasionally glosses over the emotional weight of her struggles with societal expectations and her relationship with Alan. Additionally, her evolution could be more pronounced, with clearer turning points that highlight her growth and the challenges she overcomes. | To improve Joan's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into her internal struggles, such as her feelings of isolation in a male-dominated environment or her fears about the consequences of her choices. Highlighting specific moments where she confronts societal norms or makes sacrifices for her beliefs could add depth to her character. Additionally, creating a more defined turning point in her relationship with Alan, where she asserts her independence and challenges him, could enhance her growth. Finally, showcasing her impact on other female characters in the story could further emphasize her role as a trailblazer and inspire others to challenge the status quo. |
peter hilton | Peter's character arc begins with a sense of resignation and frustration as he faces the daunting challenges of their mission. As he interacts with his team, he gradually evolves into a more open and appreciative individual, finding joy in small moments, such as his interest in the apples. His loyalty to Alan and the team solidifies his role as a unifying force, and he learns to balance his emotional responses with a sense of duty. By the climax, Peter confronts the harsh realities of their work, leading to a pivotal moment where he challenges his colleagues to reflect on their sacrifices. Ultimately, he emerges as a passionate advocate for the human aspect of their mission, embodying a blend of resilience and moral integrity that inspires his team to persevere. | While Peter's character arc is compelling, it could benefit from deeper exploration of his internal conflicts. The transition from resignation to advocacy feels somewhat abrupt, and the screenplay could enhance this by providing more backstory or flashbacks that illustrate the personal stakes for Peter. Additionally, while his humor adds levity, it may overshadow the gravity of the situation at times, making it difficult for the audience to fully grasp the emotional weight of his journey. | To improve Peter's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into his past experiences and motivations, allowing the audience to understand the roots of his resignation and frustration. This could involve flashbacks or conversations with other characters that reveal his personal stakes in the mission. Additionally, balance his humor with moments of vulnerability, where he openly expresses his fears and doubts. This will create a more nuanced portrayal of his character, making his eventual transformation more impactful and relatable to the audience. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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High 'Overall Grade' correlates with strong 'Concept', 'Plot', and 'Characters' | Scenes with the highest overall grades (10) consistently score highly in Concept, Plot, and Characters. This suggests a strong foundation in narrative structure and character development contributes significantly to the perceived quality of the scene. Consider if less stellar scenes could be improved by strengthening these elements. |
Tense Tone Dominates, Yet Emotional Impact Varies | A 'Tense' tone is prevalent throughout the screenplay. However, the 'Emotional Impact' scores fluctuate significantly, even within scenes marked as 'Tense'. This indicates a potential for improvement in consistently delivering emotional resonance, even within scenes of high tension. Explore ways to amplify emotional impact through subtle character beats, sensory details, or internal monologues. |
'Dialogue' and 'Emotional Impact' show a moderate negative correlation in specific tone categories. | Scenes with a 'Reflective' or 'Intimate' tone show a tendency for higher dialogue scores to accompany lower emotional impact scores (scenes 9, 19, 29, 57). Consider whether the dialogue in these scenes is prioritizing exposition over emotional connection. Could more showing than telling in these types of scenes elevate the emotional impact? |
High Stakes Scenes Often Lack Emotional Depth | While scenes with high 'High Stakes' scores (9 or 10) are common, they don't always translate to equally high 'Emotional Impact'. This suggests a possible disconnect between the external conflict and the internal emotional journey of the characters. Explore opportunities to make the stakes more personally impactful for characters to amplify the emotional resonance. |
Character Changes are not a consistent driver of high scores. | The 'Character Changes' scores show a wide range and are not consistently correlated with high overall scores. This suggests that major plot points and character arcs might not be driven by significant character changes in every scene, and the story might benefit from more consistent character development that is evident in the scene itself. |
Climax and Resolution Show Marked Differences in Emotional Impact | The final scenes (58-60) show a dramatic shift in 'Emotional Impact', with a dip in scene 59 ('Sad, Reflective, Tragic') followed by a significant drop in scene 60 ('Reflective, Bittersweet, Triumphant'). While the final scene aims for a triumphant tone, the low emotional impact score suggests the resolution may not resonate emotionally as strongly as intended. Revisit the emotional journey throughout the narrative and consider enhancing the emotional payoff of the resolution. |
Scenes with 'Informative' tone have varying success. | The inclusion of 'Informative' in the tone descriptions (scenes 6, 25, 27, 53) shows that conveying information doesn't necessarily lead to a high overall scene grade. Scenes 6 and 25 score well, while others are middling. Consider how information is delivered; if it feels forced or disrupts the flow it might negatively impact overall scene quality. |
Humor as a tonal element is infrequent and needs careful integration. | Scenes with humorous tones (2, 15, 40) are comparatively few, suggesting a possible underuse of humor to provide contrast or alleviate tension. However, careful integration is needed, as the balance of tone is key to achieving both lightness and seriousness. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in creating tense, character-driven narratives, particularly within historical settings. The writer consistently showcases skill in developing engaging dialogue, building suspense, and exploring complex themes. However, there's a recurring need for deeper character development, particularly in exploring internal conflicts and motivations beyond surface-level interactions. The frequent suggestion to read 'The Imitation Game' screenplay highlights a potential leaning toward historical dramas, which offers a strong starting point but could benefit from diversification to broaden storytelling approaches.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Screenplay | Read and analyze a variety of screenplays beyond historical dramas. Include examples from different genres (e.g., romantic comedy, thriller, sci-fi) to broaden stylistic understanding and explore diverse storytelling techniques. Specifically, explore works by Quentin Tarantino ('Pulp Fiction') for unique dialogue and structure, and Alfred Hitchcock's screenplays for masterful suspense. | This will help the writer avoid stylistic stagnation and develop a more versatile writing style, adapting to various genres and narrative demands. |
Book | Read 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder for plot structure and 'The Art of Dramatic Writing' by Lajos Egri for in-depth character development and conflict analysis. Supplement these with books on subtext and emotional storytelling to enhance the depth and nuance of character interactions. | These books offer practical tools and theoretical frameworks to improve plot structure, character depth, and the overall effectiveness of the screenplay. |
Exercise | Write a scene using only subtext and nonverbal cues to convey emotion and conflict between characters. This will enhance your understanding of visual storytelling and how to create tension without relying solely on dialogue.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise addresses the key improvement area of dialogue enhancement by pushing the writer to explore less direct means of communication, creating richer, more nuanced interactions. |
Exercise | Develop a detailed character profile for your main protagonist, including their backstory, motivations, fears, internal conflicts, and relationships. Then, write a scene where the protagonist experiences a significant internal shift or revelation. This should be a scene dominated by internal monologue, showing their emotional and mental processing.Practice In SceneProv | This directly addresses the need for deeper character development by forcing the writer to explore the interior life of their characters. |
Exercise | Write a scene where two characters with diametrically opposed viewpoints engage in a high-stakes, dialogue-driven confrontation. Focus on creating tension through conflicting goals, hidden agendas, and subtext. The scene should have a clear objective and significant stakes for both characters.Practice In SceneProv | This exercise combines dialogue enhancement and plot structure by demanding the creation of a tense scene with a defined goal. It also promotes understanding of how conflicting motivations create compelling narratives. |
Stories Similar to this one
Story | Explanation |
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The Imitation Game | This film directly portrays the life of Alan Turing, focusing on his work at Bletchley Park during World War II. It shares themes of genius, social isolation, and the moral dilemmas faced by Turing and his team as they work to break the Enigma code, paralleling the screenplay's exploration of Turing's character and his relationships. |
A Beautiful Mind | This biographical film about mathematician John Nash explores themes of genius, mental illness, and social isolation. Like Turing, Nash struggles with personal relationships and societal expectations while navigating his groundbreaking work in mathematics, reflecting similar emotional and psychological arcs. |
The Theory of Everything | This biopic about Stephen Hawking delves into the life of a brilliant scientist facing personal and physical challenges. It shares a focus on the intersection of genius and personal struggle, as well as the impact of relationships on the protagonist's life, akin to Turing's experiences with Joan Clarke and his own identity. |
Good Will Hunting | This film features a young mathematical prodigy who struggles with his past and relationships while working through his genius. The themes of mentorship, emotional turmoil, and the journey of self-discovery resonate with Turing's character development and his interactions with others. |
Hidden Figures | This film tells the story of African American women mathematicians at NASA during the space race, highlighting themes of intelligence, societal prejudice, and the importance of teamwork. Similar to Turing's story, it showcases the struggles of brilliant minds working under pressure and the impact of their contributions on history. |
The Social Network | This film chronicles the creation of Facebook and the personal and legal conflicts faced by its founder, Mark Zuckerberg. It shares themes of ambition, genius, and the complexities of personal relationships, paralleling Turing's struggles with his identity and the consequences of his groundbreaking work. |
The Man Who Knew Infinity | This biographical film about mathematician Srinivasa Ramanujan explores themes of genius, cultural clash, and the pursuit of knowledge. It reflects on the personal sacrifices and struggles faced by brilliant minds, similar to Turing's journey and the challenges he encounters in his work. |
The King's Speech | This film focuses on King George VI's struggle with a speech impediment and his relationship with his speech therapist. It shares themes of overcoming personal challenges, the importance of support from others, and the emotional weight of leadership, paralleling Turing's own battles with societal expectations and personal identity. |
The Cuckoo's Calling | This novel by Robert Galbraith (J.K. Rowling) features a detective unraveling a complex mystery, showcasing themes of intelligence, social dynamics, and the pursuit of truth. The investigative elements and character-driven narrative resonate with the detective aspects of Turing's story and the exploration of his life. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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The Misunderstood Genius | Alan Turing's exceptional intelligence sets him apart from others, leading to misunderstandings about his character and intentions. | This trope involves a character who possesses extraordinary intelligence or talent but struggles to connect with others due to their unique perspective. An example is Sherlock Holmes from 'Sherlock,' whose brilliance often alienates him from those around him. |
The Secret War | This trope highlights the unseen aspects of warfare, focusing on espionage and intelligence rather than traditional combat. An example is 'Tinker Tailor Soldier Spy,' which delves into the world of espionage during the Cold War. | |
The Love Interest | This trope involves a character who serves as a romantic partner, often providing emotional depth to the protagonist's journey. An example is Elizabeth Bennet in 'Pride and Prejudice,' who challenges and supports Mr. Darcy. | |
The Tragic Hero | This trope features a protagonist who possesses noble qualities but is ultimately brought down by their flaws or circumstances. An example is Hamlet from 'Hamlet,' whose indecision leads to his downfall. | |
The Eccentric Scientist | This trope portrays scientists as quirky or socially awkward individuals, often leading to humorous or poignant moments. An example is Doc Brown from 'Back to the Future,' whose eccentricity drives the plot. | |
The Codebreaker | This trope focuses on characters who use their intellect to solve complex problems, often in high-stakes situations. An example is the character of Alan Turing in 'The Imitation Game,' who embodies this trope. | |
The Unlikely Team | This trope involves a group of mismatched characters coming together to achieve a common goal. An example is 'The Avengers,' where superheroes with different backgrounds unite to save the world. | |
The Mentor | This trope features a character who provides guidance and wisdom to a younger or less experienced character. An example is Mr. Miyagi in 'The Karate Kid,' who teaches Daniel valuable life lessons. | |
The Conspiracy | ||
The Last-Minute Save | This trope involves a character or group achieving a crucial victory at the last possible moment. An example is in 'The Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King,' where the arrival of the Rohirrim turns the tide of battle. |
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Societal Rejection and Persecution of the Different | Turing's experiences of bullying as a child, his ostracization at Bletchley Park, his persecution for his homosexuality, and his ultimate suicide are all manifestations of a society unwilling or unable to accept those who deviate from the norm. This is underscored by the contrast between his genius and his societal rejection. | This theme explores the devastating consequences of prejudice and intolerance towards individuals who are deemed different, showcasing how societal pressure and lack of understanding can lead to isolation, suffering, and ultimately, tragedy. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening Societal Rejection and Persecution of the Different:
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The Nature of Intelligence and Genius | Turing's exceptional intellect and unique problem-solving abilities are consistently highlighted throughout the screenplay. His fascination with puzzles, his ability to decipher complex codes, and his vision for a thinking machine demonstrate his genius and his unconventional approach to intellectual pursuits. | This theme explores the challenges and rewards of exceptional intelligence, emphasizing the complexities of genius and its relationship to societal understanding and acceptance. It also questions the nature of intelligence and how it manifests differently in individuals. | ||||||||||||
The Moral Dilemmas of War and Secrecy | The code-breaking at Bletchley Park presents moral dilemmas regarding the balance between saving lives and maintaining secrecy. Turing's decision not to warn a convoy knowing it will be attacked highlights the conflict between his ethical concerns and the necessity of strategic deception. | This theme explores the ethical complexities inherent in wartime, particularly the sacrifices and compromises required to achieve victory. It highlights the burden of knowledge and the difficult choices involved in a global conflict. | ||||||||||||
Love and Relationships in the Face of Adversity | Turing's relationship with Christopher Morcom, his complicated relationship with Joan Clarke, and his suppressed homosexuality are explored, highlighting the challenges of finding love and connection within a restrictive and judgmental society. | This theme examines the importance of human connection and the complexities of love in the context of personal struggles and societal pressures. The different relationships illustrate how love can be a source of both strength and pain. | ||||||||||||
The Power of Collaboration and Teamwork | The success of the code-breaking operation at Bletchley Park relies heavily on the collaboration and teamwork of Turing and his colleagues. Despite their differences, they work together to overcome obstacles and achieve a common goal. | This theme explores the importance of collaboration and collective effort in achieving difficult goals. It showcases the strength that can emerge from diverse individuals working together towards a common purpose. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a sharp, witty, and intellectually stimulating style. There's a consistent blend of tension, humor, and historical detail, particularly noticeable in the dialogue. The narrative voice effectively balances atmospheric descriptions with character-driven moments, often shifting between the detached observation of the protagonist and intimate glimpses into his interiority. Direction is suggested through strong visual descriptions and pacing cues, creating a sense of urgency and immediacy, especially in scenes of conflict and action. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by establishing a distinct mood of suspenseful intrigue, punctuated by moments of dark humor and emotional depth. This enhances the themes of intelligence, innovation, societal pressures, and the moral ambiguities inherent in wartime and espionage. The sharp dialogue adds layers of complexity to the characters, allowing their personalities and motivations to shine through even in moments of high tension. The shifting narrative perspective adds depth, drawing the audience into both the protagonist's mind and the external world he inhabits. This multifaceted approach creates a richly textured narrative with considerable thematic depth. |
Best Representation Scene | 2 - The Unraveling of Alan Turing |
Best Scene Explanation | Scene 2 best encapsulates the writer's voice because it perfectly balances the sharp, witty dialogue with a darkly humorous undertone and a palpable sense of tension. The scene showcases the writer's ability to create compelling character dynamics through intelligent wordplay and subtle power dynamics. Turing's nonchalant handling of the cyanide, combined with his superior intellect, immediately establishes his unique personality and the central conflict of the narrative. The scene's brevity and impactful conclusion leave a lasting impression, effectively foreshadowing the complexities and tensions that drive the rest of the screenplay. |
- Overall originality score: 9
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay demonstrates a high level of originality through its nuanced portrayal of historical events, particularly the life of Alan Turing and the complexities of codebreaking during World War II. Each scene introduces unique perspectives on themes such as intelligence, morality, and personal struggle, while blending elements of drama, humor, and historical accuracy. The use of character dynamics, particularly between Turing and his colleagues, adds depth and authenticity, making the narrative feel fresh and engaging.
- Most unique situations: The most unique situations in the screenplay are the innovative recruitment method using a crossword puzzle, the emotional detachment of Turing juxtaposed with the chaos of war, and the exploration of Turing's internal struggles with his identity and societal expectations. Additionally, the depiction of the moral dilemmas faced by the codebreakers, particularly in deciding whether to warn a British convoy, adds a layer of complexity rarely seen in traditional war narratives.
- Overall unpredictability score: 8
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay maintains a strong sense of unpredictability through its exploration of Turing's personal and professional challenges, as well as the moral dilemmas faced by the characters. The intertwining of historical events with personal narratives creates unexpected twists, particularly in the relationships between characters and the consequences of their decisions. The revelation of espionage within their ranks and the emotional fallout from Turing's choices contribute to a narrative that keeps the audience engaged and guessing about the outcomes.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | Throughout the screenplay, Alan Turing's internal goals evolve from a desire for acceptance and validation of his genius, to the need for emotional connection with others, especially Joan. He struggles with social isolation and the fear of societal judgment regarding his sexuality, leading him to ultimately seek autonomy and control over his identity while grappling with the consequences of his work. |
External Goals | Alan's external goals transition from breaking the Enigma code to preventing loss of life during the war, while simultaneously addressing the suspicion surrounding his personal life. He navigates the external pressures of colleagues, military authority, and societal expectations, consistently aiming to utilize his skills for the greater good. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the individual's right to privacy and authenticity (Turing's personal struggles with identity) versus societal norms and expectations (the pressures of conformity and secrecy during wartime). This conflict is epitomized in Turing's journey as he navigates love, friendship, and the fear of societal rejection alongside his groundbreaking endeavor to change the course of the war. |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflicts deeply contribute to Alan's character arc, transforming him from a socially awkward genius into a tragic figure who sacrifices his desires for acceptance and love in the face of societal pressure. His journey highlights the tension between his intellectual triumphs and personal failures.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The interplay of internal and external goals shapes the narrative's structure, driving key plot points such as Turing's recruitment, the development of Christopher, and the eventual revelations of betrayal, all framed within the high stakes of wartime pressure. This structure effectively builds tension leading to the climax of Turing's tragic end.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The juxtaposition of personal struggles against the backdrop of a world at war imbues the screenplay with rich thematic depth, exploring the nuances of love, sacrifice, and the often tragic consequences of societal norms. The themes reflect the ongoing battle for individuality and humanity amidst the mechanized chaos of wartime intelligence.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay's physical environments range from the chaotic mess of Alan Turing's home and the cluttered office of Commander Denniston to the bustling streets of wartime London, the secretive confines of Bletchley Park (including its various huts and the imposing main building), the rigid structure of a boys' boarding school, and the austere setting of a police station interrogation room. The environments often reflect the characters' internal states or the overall mood of the scene (e.g., the messy house mirroring Turing's mental state, Bletchley Park's secrecy reflecting the nature of the work).
- Culture: The cultural context is firmly rooted in 1930s-1950s Britain. The screenplay depicts the strict social hierarchies of British boarding schools, the stiff upper lip and reserved demeanor expected of the time, the gender roles of the era (particularly evident in Joan Clarke's struggle), the pervasive secrecy surrounding wartime intelligence operations, and the prevailing societal intolerance toward homosexuality.
- Society: The societal structure is characterized by rigid hierarchies and strict social norms. This is seen in the class system, the military structure at Bletchley Park, the power dynamics between police officers and suspects, the expectations placed on women, and the legal and social repercussions faced by homosexuals. The war creates a sense of urgency and shared national purpose, but also amplifies existing social inequalities and tensions.
- Technology: Technological advancements play a pivotal role. The central technology is the Enigma machine and the efforts to break its code. This is juxtaposed with the development of Christopher, Turing's early digital computer, representing a significant leap in computing technology. The screenplay also subtly incorporates other technologies of the time period, such as Morse code, telephones, and basic surveillance techniques.
- Characters influence: The world profoundly shapes the characters. Turing's genius is both his strength and his weakness, setting him apart and making him vulnerable to societal prejudice. Joan Clarke fights against gender stereotypes to achieve recognition in a male-dominated field. The wartime setting compels the codebreakers to make difficult moral choices, weighing the necessity of secrecy against the lives at stake. The societal intolerance of homosexuality profoundly affects Turing's life and contributes to his tragic end.
- Narrative contribution: The world-building is integral to the narrative. The setting of Bletchley Park provides a compelling backdrop for the code-breaking efforts, and the contrast between the secrecy of the facility and the chaos of the war outside heightens the drama. The shift from the boys' school to Bletchley Park traces Turing's development as a mathematician and highlights the formative experiences that shape his character. The post-war setting of Turing's arrest and subsequent persecution forms the climax of the narrative.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world-building contributes significantly to the film's thematic depth. The contrast between individual brilliance and societal constraints explores the challenges faced by those who are different. The moral dilemmas faced by the codebreakers highlight the complexities of war and the cost of victory. The societal prejudice against homosexuality underscores the human cost of intolerance and the tragic consequences of a rigid social order. The juxtaposition of technological advancement and human fallibility deepens the film's exploration of the relationship between progress and humanity.
central conflict
The central conflict revolves around Alan Turing's struggle to break the German Enigma code during World War II while grappling with societal prejudice against his homosexuality and the consequences of his identity.
primary motivations
- Alan's desire to prove his intelligence and capabilities in code-breaking.
- The team's commitment to winning the war and saving lives through their work.
- Joan's ambition to contribute meaningfully to the war effort while navigating societal expectations.
catalysts
- The outbreak of World War II and the urgent need to decode enemy communications.
- The discovery of Turing's potential to create a machine that can break the Enigma code.
- The personal relationships and tensions within Turing's team that drive collaboration and conflict.
barriers
- Societal stigma and legal repercussions surrounding Turing's homosexuality.
- Internal team conflicts and skepticism regarding Turing's methods and ideas.
- The secrecy and bureaucratic obstacles within military intelligence.
themes
- The intersection of genius and social alienation.
- The moral dilemmas of war and the cost of secrecy.
- The struggle for acceptance and identity in a prejudiced society.
stakes
The stakes include the potential loss of countless lives if the Enigma code remains unbroken, Turing's personal freedom and safety, and the future of his relationships, particularly with Joan.
uniqueness factor
The story uniquely intertwines the historical significance of code-breaking during WWII with a poignant exploration of Turing's personal struggles as a gay man in a repressive society.
audience hook
The main audience hook lies in the tension between the high-stakes world of wartime espionage and the intimate, personal journey of a misunderstood genius.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradoxical engine is the juxtaposition of Turing's extraordinary intellect and his profound isolation, highlighting how his brilliance both aids the war effort and alienates him from society.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another bisociation could be the contrast between the collaborative efforts of Turing's team to achieve a common goal and the individual struggles each member faces, particularly Turing's internal battle with his identity.
Engine: Claude
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for "The Imitation Game" is a captivating and multilayered exploration of the life of Alan Turing, a brilliant mathematician who played a pivotal role in cracking the Nazi's Enigma code during World War II. The narrative seamlessly weaves together Turing's personal life, his groundbreaking work on the first digital computer, and the moral dilemmas he faced in using his intellect to guide the course of the war. With its rich character development, historical significance, and innovative storytelling, this screenplay is a compelling and thought-provoking work that would be of great interest to both general audiences and specialized viewers.
- The introduction of Alan Turing and his first encounter with the Bletchley Park team is a standout strength of the screenplay. The dialogue is sharp, the characters are well-defined, and the stakes are clearly established, setting the stage for the rest of the narrative. high ( Scene 4 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - COMMANDER DENNISTON'S OFFICE - LATER) Scene 5 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 6 - DAY) )
- The flashbacks to Turing's childhood and the development of his interests in cryptography and mathematics are well-integrated and provide valuable context for the character's motivations and internal struggles. high ( Scene 7 (EXT. SHERBORNE SCHOOL FOR BOYS - DAY - 1927) Scene 19 (INT. CLASS ROOM - MINUTES LATER) )
- The sequence where the team discovers the weakness in the Enigma code is a thrilling and well-executed set piece that highlights the collaborative nature of their work and the high stakes involved. high ( Scene 40 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - BEER HUT - LATER) Scene 41 (EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - CONTINUOUS - SEQUENCE) )
- The screenplay's portrayal of the moral dilemmas faced by the Hut 8 team as they use their knowledge of Enigma to guide the course of the war is a powerful and thought-provoking element that elevates the narrative. high ( Scene 44 (EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - DAWN) Scene 54 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - 1943-5 - SEQUENCE) )
- The final act of the screenplay, which explores the tragic aftermath of Turing's life and the personal toll of his achievements, is a poignant and emotionally resonant conclusion that leaves a lasting impact on the audience. high ( Scene 57 (INT. MANCHESTER POLICE STATION - INTERROGATION ROOM - 1951) Scene 58 (INT. ALAN TURING'S HOUSE - DAY) )
- While the screenplay generally handles the romantic relationship between Alan and Joan well, the marriage proposal scene feels a bit rushed and underdeveloped. More time could have been spent exploring the nuances of their connection and Turing's rationale for proposing. medium ( Scene 35 (INT. JOAN'S FLAT - DAY - 1941) )
- The sequence where Alan steals the Enigma messages and brings them to Joan's flat could be tightened and made more impactful. The pacing and tension feel a bit uneven in these scenes. medium ( Scene 23 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 11 - MOMENTS LATER) Scene 24 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - MINUTES LATER) )
- The scenes where the team struggles to make Christopher work could be more visually engaging and use more distinctive character beats to differentiate the team members' perspectives and reactions. medium ( Scene 39 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 11 - NIGHT - 1942) Scene 43 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - HUT 8 - CONTINUOUS) )
- The screenplay could have benefited from a more in-depth exploration of Menzies' motivations and the complexities of his relationship with Alan. His role as the orchestrator of the larger deception feels a bit underdeveloped. medium ( Scene 48 (INT. BLETCHLEY PARK - JOAN'S FLAT - DAY) )
- The screenplay could have delved deeper into the relationships and dynamics between Alan and the other members of the Hut 8 team, particularly Peter Hilton and his brother's fate. More time spent on these connections could have added further emotional impact. medium ( Scene 52 (EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - PATHWAY NEAR HUT 8 - DAY) Scene 53 (INT. SHERBORNE SCHOOL FOR BOYS - HEADMASTER'S OFFICE - 1927) )
- The opening scene, with Turing's powerful monologue and the introduction of the mysterious machine, is a gripping and atmospheric start that immediately draws the audience in and sets the tone for the rest of the screenplay. high ( Scene 1 (INT. ALAN TURING'S HOUSE - DAY - 1951) )
- The "Imitation Game" scene, where Turing engages Detective Nock in a philosophical discussion about the nature of intelligence and machines, is a standout moment that resonates strongly and ties back to the screenplay's central themes. high ( Scene 38 (INT. MANCHESTER POLICE STATION - INTERROGATION ROOM - 1951) )
- The closing sequence, where the team gathers to burn the evidence of their work, is a poignant and bittersweet coda that beautifully encapsulates the sacrifices and legacy of Turing and his colleagues. high ( Scene 60 (EXT. BLETCHLEY PARK - NIGHT - 1945) )
- Gender Representation While the screenplay features strong female characters like Joan Clarke, the primary focus is on the male characters, particularly Alan Turing and his male colleagues. The screenplay could have benefited from further development of the female characters' perspectives and agency, especially in the context of their work at Bletchley Park. medium
- Pacing Issues Certain sequences, such as the scenes involving Alan's theft of the Enigma messages and the team's struggles with Christopher, feel a bit uneven in their pacing, with moments of tension and excitement followed by slower, more exposition-heavy segments. Tightening the pacing and maintaining a more consistent sense of momentum could have made these scenes more impactful. medium
Engine: Gemini
Recommend
Executive Summary
The Imitation Game screenplay is a compelling biographical drama with significant strengths in character development, narrative structure, and thematic exploration. However, certain areas require refinement to enhance emotional resonance and pacing. The unique framing device and the focus on Turing's complex personality are key selling points, but some plot points feel rushed, and the ending could benefit from a more nuanced emotional resolution.
- The framing device of Turing narrating his life after his conviction creates immediate suspense and mystery, drawing the audience into his complex story from the start. The initial scenes masterfully establish Turing's unique personality and intellectual prowess, foreshadowing the central conflict. high ( Scene 1 Scene 2 Scene 3 )
- The screenplay effectively portrays Turing's character arc, showcasing his brilliance, social awkwardness, and the profound impact of Christopher Morcom's death on his life. The flashbacks provide crucial context, revealing the roots of his personality and motivations. high ( Scene 8 Scene 19 Scene 53 )
- The innovative recruitment strategy using crossword puzzles is a clever and engaging plot device, showcasing Turing's unconventional thinking and the desperation of the situation. This sequence also introduces Joan Clarke in a memorable way. medium ( Scene 16 Scene 17 Scene 18 )
- The climax, where the team finally breaks Enigma, is thrilling and satisfying. The collaborative effort and the ensuing celebration effectively convey the enormity of their achievement. high ( Scene 41 Scene 42 Scene 43 )
- The final scenes, showing the devastating consequences of Turing's persecution, provide a powerful and emotionally resonant conclusion, highlighting the tragic irony of his situation. high ( Scene 58 Scene 59 )
- The pacing feels uneven at times. Some scenes, particularly those focusing on the technical aspects of code-breaking, could benefit from more visual dynamism and a tighter narrative focus to avoid dragging. The emotional impact of several key scenes could be enhanced. medium ( Scene 14 Scene 22 Scene 39 )
- The depiction of Turing's relationship with Joan Clarke could be more nuanced and emotionally resonant. While their scenes show a connection, the emotional arc of their relationship and its conclusion could be deepened for greater audience impact. The abruptness of the breakup feels somewhat contrived. medium ( Scene 35 Scene 52 )
- The subplot concerning John Cairncross's espionage feels somewhat rushed and underdeveloped. More time dedicated to establishing his character and his relationship with Turing would enhance the dramatic tension and the impact of his betrayal. medium ( Scene 47 Scene 48 )
- More detailed exploration of the social and political context of the time would enhance the audience's understanding of the challenges faced by Turing and the significance of his work. medium
- While the screenplay touches on the ethical implications of Turing's work, a more in-depth exploration of the moral dilemmas faced by the code-breakers in deciding which intelligence to act upon could add a layer of complexity. medium
- The screenplay cleverly uses the interrogation scene as a meta-narrative device, echoing the structure of Turing's “Imitation Game” and reflecting his struggle to be understood. high ( Scene 2 Scene 38 )
- The scene in the beer hut where Helen reveals her relationship with her German counterpart provides a crucial turning point in the narrative, leading to the discovery of the repeated words in the Enigma messages. high ( Scene 40 Scene 41 )
- The extended sequences depicting the continuation of Enigma-breaking post-climax effectively showcase the ongoing ethical and moral implications of their work and the sustained suspense. high ( Scene 54 Scene 55 )
- Underdeveloped Supporting Characters While Turing is richly developed, other characters like Hugh Alexander, John Cairncross, and even Joan Clarke, feel somewhat less three-dimensional. Their motivations and inner lives are not as fully explored, particularly beyond their roles in relation to Turing. medium
Engine: GPT4
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'The Imitation Game' presents a compelling narrative that intertwines the life of Alan Turing with the historical context of World War II. It effectively explores themes of genius, secrecy, and the moral dilemmas faced in wartime, while also addressing Turing's personal struggles with identity and societal norms. The character arcs are well-developed, particularly Turing's, showcasing his evolution from a socially awkward genius to a tragic figure. The screenplay's structure, which alternates between timelines, enhances the storytelling by creating suspense and emotional depth.
- The screenplay opens with a strong voiceover that immediately engages the audience, setting the tone for Turing's complex character. The introduction of Bletchley Park establishes the historical significance and urgency of the narrative. high ( Scene 1 (Opening scene with Turing's voiceover) Scene 4 (Turing's arrival at Bletchley Park) )
- The moment when Turing's machine comes to life is a pivotal point in the screenplay, symbolizing both his genius and the hope for victory in the war. It serves as a climax that encapsulates the film's themes of innovation and sacrifice. high ( Scene 31 (The completion of Christopher) )
- The conclusion effectively ties together Turing's contributions and the societal implications of his life, leaving a lasting impact on the audience regarding the cost of genius and the importance of acceptance. high ( Scene 60 (Final moments and Turing's legacy) )
- The dialogue in the interrogation scene is sharp and thought-provoking, encapsulating Turing's philosophical views on machines and humanity, which adds depth to his character. medium ( Scene 57 (Interrogation scene with Detective Nock) )
- Joan Clarke's character is introduced with strength and intelligence, providing a strong female presence that complements Turing's character and highlights the gender dynamics of the time. medium ( Scene 18 (Joan Clarke's introduction) )
- The subplot involving Detective Nock feels somewhat underdeveloped and could benefit from deeper exploration of his motivations and character arc. medium ( Scene 10 (Detective Nock's investigation) )
- Some police station scenes could be streamlined to maintain pacing, as they occasionally detract from the main narrative focus on Turing. medium ( Scene 20 (Police station scenes) )
- While the philosophical dialogue is engaging, it may come off as overly expository at times, potentially alienating viewers who are less familiar with the concepts discussed. low ( Scene 38 (Interrogation room) )
- The emotional confrontation between Alan and Joan could be heightened to better reflect the stakes of their relationship and the societal pressures they face. medium ( Scene 52 (Alan and Joan's confrontation) )
- The celebration scene could be more impactful with a stronger emotional resonance, emphasizing the cost of their victory and the personal sacrifices made. low ( Scene 44 (Team's celebration) )
- While Turing's childhood is touched upon, more depth could be added to his early experiences to better explain his social difficulties and genius. medium ( Scene 7 (Alan's childhood) )
- The engagement party could include more interactions that showcase the dynamics between the characters, particularly how Turing's relationships evolve. low ( Scene 36 (Engagement party) )
- More scenes depicting the team's collaborative efforts could enhance the sense of camaraderie and the stakes involved in their work. medium ( Scene 39 (Team's work on the machine) )
- The impact of Turing's treatment on his mental state could be explored further to provide a more nuanced understanding of his struggles. high ( Scene 58 (Alan's treatment) )
- The aftermath of Turing's contributions could be expanded to include more about the long-term effects of his work on technology and society. medium ( Scene 60 (Final moments) )
- The interview scene effectively showcases Turing's brilliance and social awkwardness, setting the stage for his character development. high ( Scene 5 (Turing's interview) )
- The depiction of the WRENs adds a layer of historical context and highlights the contributions of women during the war, enriching the narrative. medium ( Scene 12 (WREN's work) )
- Alan's secretive actions to protect his work create tension and intrigue, emphasizing the stakes involved in their mission. high ( Scene 24 (Alan's secretive actions) )
- The introduction of the Ultra program serves as a pivotal moment in the narrative, showcasing the significance of Turing's work. high ( Scene 46 (Introduction of Ultra) )
- The emotional weight of young Alan's experiences adds depth to his character and provides insight into his motivations. medium ( Scene 59 (Young Alan's emotional moment) )
- Character Development While Turing's character is well-developed, some supporting characters, particularly the police officers, lack depth and motivation, making them feel one-dimensional at times. medium
- Expository Dialogue Some scenes contain dialogue that feels overly expository, particularly in moments where characters explain concepts that could be shown through action instead, which can detract from the natural flow of the narrative. medium
Memorable lines in the script:
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9 | Christopher: Sometimes it is the very people who no one imagines anything of who do the things that no one can imagine. |
21 | ALAN TURING: There is only one thing that matters in this entire world, do you understand? Breaking Enigma. |
1 | Alan Turing: Are you paying attention? |
14 | ALAN TURING: What if only a machine can defeat another machine? |
35 | ALAN TURING: Joan Elizabeth Clarke, will you marry me? |