The father
Executive Summary
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Overview
Genres: Drama, Family, Psychological Thriller, Mystery, Thriller
Setting: Contemporary, London, primarily in residential flats and a hospital
Overview: The story follows Anne, a devoted daughter, as she navigates the emotional complexities of caring for her father, Anthony, who is suffering from Alzheimer's disease. The narrative begins with Anne's anxious arrival at her father's flat, where she confronts his denial about needing help. As the story unfolds, Anthony's confusion deepens, leading to tense interactions with Anne and her husband, Paul. The middle of the script explores the strain on their family dynamics, highlighting Anne's struggles with her father's deteriorating condition and her desire for independence. The climax reveals Anne's emotional turmoil, culminating in a shocking moment that forces her to confront her feelings about caregiving. Ultimately, the story concludes with a bittersweet sense of acceptance as both Anne and Anthony grapple with their new realities.
Themes: The Emotional Toll of Alzheimer's Disease, Denial and the Struggle for Independence, Family Dynamics and the Burden of Caregiving, The Process of Aging and Loss of Identity
Conflict and Stakes: The primary conflict revolves around Anthony's deteriorating mental state and Anne's struggle to care for him while managing her own life, with the stakes being Anthony's well-being and their relationship.
Overall Mood: Melancholic and introspective, with moments of tenderness and tension.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Tense and anxious as Anne searches for her father, reflecting her urgency and concern.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The exploration of memory loss from the perspective of both the caregiver and the person affected, providing a dual narrative.
- Emotional Depth: The screenplay delves deeply into the emotional struggles of caregiving, making it relatable and poignant.
- Character Dynamics: The complex relationships between Anthony, Anne, and Paul highlight the challenges of family dynamics in caregiving.
Comparable Scripts:
- The Father
- Still Alice
- The Notebook
- A Long Way Down
- The Savages
- The Farewell
- The Lion in Winter
- The Curious Case of Benjamin Button
- The Hours
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a diverse yet cohesive writing style, blending elements of realism, psychological depth, and existential exploration. It frequently utilizes sharp dialogue, nuanced character interactions, and a focus on interpersonal relationships, particularly within family dynamics. While incorporating moments of humor and wit, the overall tone leans towards introspective and suspenseful, often delving into complex emotional landscapes and moral ambiguities.
Style Similarities:
- Ingmar Bergman
- Woody Allen
- Charlie Kaufman
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for 'The Father' is a compelling and thoughtful exploration of the challenges faced by a man suffering from dementia and his daughter's struggle to care for him. The script skillfully navigates the complexities of memory, identity, and the evolving family dynamics, creating a powerful and emotionally resonant narrative. The writing is nuanced, with strong character development and a layered thematic exploration of aging, loss, and the human experience. While the pacing may falter in some areas, the overall narrative strength and the unique perspective make this screenplay a compelling work that would be of interest to a wide range of audiences.
USP: What sets 'The Father' apart is its immersive portrayal of dementia from the perspective of the afflicted, allowing the audience to experience the confusion and fear alongside Anthony. This unique narrative approach, combined with rich character development and poignant dialogue, makes it a compelling story that resonates with anyone who has faced the challenges of aging and loss within a family context.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$10-15 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 30-65, particularly those interested in character-driven dramas and stories about aging and family relationships.
Marketability: The screenplay addresses universal themes of aging and family, appealing to a broad audience, especially in the context of an aging population.
The emotional depth and character-driven narrative can attract critical acclaim and awards, enhancing its marketability.
While it has strong themes, the niche subject matter may limit its appeal to mainstream audiences.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, as it can attract both audiences and awards, leading to potential profitability through box office and streaming.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by a compelling blend of realism and psychological depth. The dialogue is often sharp and concise, revealing underlying tensions and emotional complexities through subtle shifts in tone and pacing. The narrative focuses on internal conflicts and unspoken emotions, creating a sense of unease and vulnerability. The direction emphasizes realistic details and intimate moments, highlighting the everyday struggles and internal turmoil of the characters.
Best representation: Scene 20 - Tension at the Table. Scene 20 best encapsulates the writer's unique voice because it masterfully combines seemingly mundane realism (the dropped teacup) with a shocking, intensely emotional climax (the attempted strangulation). This scene perfectly illustrates the writer's ability to build subtle tension throughout the screenplay, culminating in a powerful moment of psychological revelation. The minimal dialogue and impactful action emphasize the internal conflict and emotional depth that defines the writer's style. It highlights the realistic portrayal of everyday life contrasted with sudden, deeply disturbing emotional eruptions, a signature element of the writer's voice.
Memorable Lines:
Characters
Anthony:An elderly man struggling with memory loss and confusion, facing the challenges of aging.
Anne:Anthony's devoted daughter, who is trying to manage her father's care while dealing with her own life changes.
Paul:Anne's partner, who expresses concern about Anthony's well-being and the need for professional care.
Laura:A caregiver assigned to help Anthony, representing the external support system.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Desperate Search | Anxious, Serious, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
2 - Confrontation in the Shadows | Tension, Irritation, Defiance | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Confrontation and Resolution | Tense, Desperate, Annoyed | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - A Bittersweet Farewell | Tense, Anxious, Frustrated, Concerned, Fragile | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Anxiety in the Silence | Anxious, Surprised, Cautious | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
6 - Unwelcome Revelation | Confusion, Anxiety, Surprise | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Unexpected Revelations | Tense, Confused, Amused | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - Frustration in the Kitchen | Tense, Anxious, Confused | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Struggling for Independence | Tense, Confused, Defensive, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Lost Connections | Confusion, Anxiety, Gloominess | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - The Confusion of Perception | Confusion, Anxiety, Concern | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - The Vanishing Man | Confusion, Anxiety, Denial | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
13 - Lost in Transition | Confusion, Anxiety, Denial, Concern | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - Anne's Burden | Anxious, Reflective, Confused | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
15 - Anticipation in the Office | Contemplative, Reflective, Confused | 7.5 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Anxiety and Anticipation | Anxious, Confused, Apprehensive | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
17 - A Warm Welcome | Anxious, Confused, Apprehensive | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Navigating Confusion | Anxious, Confused, Cordial | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - A Toast to Confusion | Confusion, Denial, Sarcasm, Somber | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Shattered Calm | Tense, Emotional, Dark | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - Tension at the Table | Reflective, Cordial, Sentimental | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - Fleeting Recognition | Emotional, Reflective, Confused | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - The Watch and the Cupboard | Confusion, Denial, Anxiety | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - The Missing Watch | Anxious, Confused, Worried | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - Tension in Time | Suspenseful, Confused, Anxious | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Reflections of Loneliness | Anxious, Reflective, Tense | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
27 - Unresolved Tensions | Tense, Reflective, Anxious | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - A New Look and a Confusing Turn | Tense, Confused, Anxious, Cordial | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Navigating Confusion | Disorientated, Startling, Cordial | 7.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
30 - Misunderstandings in the Doctor's Office | Anxious, Confused, Tense, Humorous | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - Emotional Distance | Suspense, Worry, Tension | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
32 - Reflections of Loss | Reflective, Melancholic, Introspective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | |
33 - A Call to Care | Anxious, Tense, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
34 - A Moment of Connection | Compassionate, Anxious, Loving | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - A Difficult Decision | Tense, Emotional, Serious | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
36 - Unspoken Concerns | Awkward, Tense, Compassionate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - Dinner Table Tensions | Tense, Awkward, Sarcastic, Patient | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
38 - Tensions at the Dinner Table | Tension, Awkwardness, Concern | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - Tender Reflections | Tender, Thoughtful, Worried | 8.5 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - Fleeting Joy | Tense, Emotional, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
41 - Morning Confusion | Confusion, Puzzlement, Concern | 8.2 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
42 - Confrontation in Confusion | Tense, Menacing, Defensive, Confused | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
43 - Evening Confusion | Compassionate, Confused, Anxious | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
44 - Silent Struggles | Tension, Sadness, Confusion | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | |
45 - A Midnight Call | Emotional, Confused, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
46 - A Desperate Search | Confusion, Sadness, Tension, Compassion | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
47 - The Cupboard's Secret | Confusion, Sadness, Tension, Concern | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
48 - Morning Jitters | Tense, Emotional, Confused, Compassionate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
49 - A Disturbing Encounter | Confusion, Fear, Tension, Sadness | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
50 - A Tender Goodbye | Emotional, Reflective, Tense | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
51 - Departure from the Hospital | Sadness, Resignation, Loneliness | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
52 - Awakening in Confusion | Confusion, Anxiety, Isolation | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
53 - A Moment of Vulnerability | Confusion, Sadness, Resignation, Tenderness | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Scene 1 - Desperate Search
Music. ANNE emerges from the entrance to a tube station into
a London street. She’s in a hurry, her expression serious.
She arrives, across from a familiar block of flats. She
crosses the street in such a rush, she’s almost hit by a
taxi. She steps into the building.
2 INT. STAIRS AND LANDING DAY 2
ANNE climbs the stairs. She arrives on the second floor and
rings a bell. Then, impatient, she fetches a bunch of keys
out of her handbag and opens the door.
ANNE
Dad?
3 INT. ANTHONY’S FLAT DAY 3
ANNE moves from one room to another, her anxiety mounting.
ANNE
Dad? It’s me... Are you there? Dad?
No answer. Tension rises. She steps into -
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Scene 2 - Confrontation in the Shadows
- ANTHONY’s office and finds him. He’s sitting in his
armchair, listening to music on his headphones.
ANNE
Ah, there you are.
He’s surprised to see her. He takes off his headphones
immediately. The music we’ve been hearing cuts out, as if
it’s been coming through ANTHONY’s headphones.
ANTHONY
What are you doing here?
ANNE
What do you think?
He seems irritated by his daughter’s unexpected arrival.
She notices the curtains are closed and goes over to open
them. She turns towards him.
ANNE (CONT’D)
So? What happened?
He turns off the music.
THE FATHER - FINAL 2
4 CONTINUED: 4
ANTHONY
Nothing.
ANNE
Tell me.
ANTHONY
I just did. Nothing happened.
ANNE
Nothing happened?
ANTHONY looks at her as if to say: “Nothing at all.”
ANNE (CONT’D)
I’ve just had her on the phone.
ANTHONY
So? What does that prove?
ANNE
You can’t go on behaving like this.
ANTHONY
It’s my flat, isn’t it? I mean,
this is incredible. You burst in on
me as if... I’ve no idea who she
is, this woman. I never asked her
for anything.
ANNE
She’s here to help you.
ANTHONY
To help me do what? I don’t need
her. I don’t need anyone.
Abruptly, he decides to leave the room.
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Scene 3 - Confrontation and Resolution
ANTHONY goes to the piano and starts playing a couple of
notes.
He turns his back on her as she appears in the doorway.
ANNE
She told me you’d called her a
little bitch. And I don’t know what
else.
ANTHONY
Me?
He shrugs his shoulders.
THE FATHER - FINAL 3
5 CONTINUED: 5
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Could be. I don’t remember.
ANNE
She was in tears.
ANTHONY
What, just because I called her
a...
ANNE
No. She told me you threatened her.
Physically.
ANTHONY stops playing the piano and turns back to her.
ANTHONY
Physically? Me? Obviously she has
no idea what she’s talking about.
This woman is raving mad, Anne.
Best if she does leave, believe me.
ANNE sighs. She looks desperate. ANTHONY becomes aware of
this.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Especially as...
ANNE
As what?
ANTHONY
Listen... I didn’t want to tell
you... but if you must know, I
suspect she was...
He breaks off. ANNE looks at him as if to say: “She was
what?”
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
She was stealing from me.
ANNE
Angela? Of course not. What are you
talking about?
ANTHONY
I’m telling you. She stole my
watch.
ANNE
Your watch?
ANTHONY
Yes.
THE FATHER - FINAL 4
5 CONTINUED: 5
ANNE
Isn’t it more likely you just lost
it?
ANTHONY
No, no, no. I already had my
suspicions. So I set a trap for
her. I left my watch somewhere, out
in the open, to see if she’d pinch
it.
He illustrates this with a vague hand gesture.
ANNE
Where? Where did you leave it?
ANTHONY
Mm? Somewhere. Can’t remember. All
I know is it’s nowhere to be found.
That girl stole it. I know she did.
ANNE sits down. She looks winded.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
What’s the matter?
ANNE
I don’t know what to do.
ANTHONY looks at her as if to say: “What about?”
ANNE (CONT’D)
We have to talk, Dad.
ANTHONY
That’s what we’re doing, isn’t it?
ANNE
I mean, seriously. This is the
third one you’ve...
ANTHONY
I said, I don’t need her! I don’t
need her or anyone else! I can
manage very well on my own!
Obviously, ANNE isn’t listening; she continues pursuing her
thread, which annoys ANTHONY.
ANNE
She wasn’t easy to find, you know.
It’s not that easy. I thought she
was really good. A lot of good
qualities. She... and now she
doesn’t want to work here any more.
THE FATHER - FINAL 5
5 CONTINUED: 5
ANTHONY
You’re not listening to what I’m
telling you. This girl stole my
watch! I’m not going to live with a
thief.
ANNE
Have you looked in your bathroom
cupboard?
ANTHONY
What?
ANNE
In your bathroom cupboard. Behind
the boiler. Where you hide your
valuables.
This remark seems to stagger ANTHONY.
ANTHONY
How do you know?
ANNE
I just know, that’s all.
ANTHONY
Have you been in my cupboard? Anne,
tell me the truth.
ANNE
No!
ANTHONY
Then how do you know that... I
mean... that I sometimes... with my
valuables...
ANNE
I can’t remember. I must have
opened it by accident.
ANTHONY looks appalled. He hurries off towards his bathroom.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Where are you going? I didn’t touch
anything, Dad.
He leaves the room. ANNE sighs.
6A INT. ANTHONY’S BATHROOM DAY 6A
ANTHONY goes to his bathroom to look in his hiding-place. He
closes the door to make sure no one is watching him.
THE FATHER - FINAL 6
6A CONTINUED: 6A
He reappears few seconds later, his watch on his wrist with
obvious satisfaction. Then, he heads back towards the...
office.
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Scene 4 - A Bittersweet Farewell
ANNE is waiting for him in the living room. She sighs. She
knows they can not go on like this... She hardly knows what
to make of the situation.
She sees the painting on the wall. This is her sister’s
painting. Things would have been easier for her if LUCY were
here...
She sees ANTHONY step into the office. He turns on the T.V.
Has he forgotten she’s there?
Her father’s absurd behaviour almost makes her smile.
She gets up to go and join him -
7 INT. OFFICE DAY 7
- in the office. He’s sitting in his armchair, flicking
through the channels on his T.V., until he reaches a Fred
Astaire movie. He watches Fred tap-dancing, entranced.
ANNE appears in the doorway. She looks at him for a moment
without saying anything.
ANNE
You found it.
ANTHONY
What?
ANNE
Your watch.
ANTHONY
Oh. Yes.
ANNE
You realise Angela had nothing to
do with it.
ANTHONY
Only because I hid it. Luckily.
Just in time! Otherwise, I’d be
sitting here talking to you with no
means of knowing what time it was.
It’s five o’clock, if you’re
interested. Myself, I am
interested. Pardon me for
breathing.
THE FATHER - FINAL 7
7 CONTINUED: 7
ANNE
Have you taken your pills?
ANTHONY uses the remote to turn off the TV.
ANTHONY
Yes. But why are you...? You keep
looking at me as if there was
something wrong. Everything’s fine,
Anne. The world is turning. You’ve
always been that way. A worrier.
Like your mother. Your mother was
always scared. Always looking for
reasons to be scared. Whereas your
sister has always been much more...
At least she doesn't keep badgering
me.
Pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Where is she, by the way? Have you
heard from her?
No answer from ANNE.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
I’m asking you a question...
ANNE
I’m going to have to move, Dad.
ANTHONY looks at her, not understanding.
ANNE (CONT’D)
I’m going to have to leave London.
ANTHONY
Really? Why?
ANNE
We talked about this. Do you
remember?
Brief pause. ANTHONY doesn’t seem to know what she’s talking
about.
ANTHONY
Is that why you’re so keen on this
nurse living with me? Well,
obviously it is. The rats are
leaving the ship.
ANNE
I won’t be here, Dad. I won’t be
able to come here everyday. You
need to understand that.
THE FATHER - FINAL 8
7 CONTINUED: 7
ANTHONY suddenly looks fragile.
ANTHONY
You’re leaving? When? I mean...
why?
ANNE
I’ve met someone.
ANTHONY
You?
ANNE
Yes.
ANTHONY
You mean... a man?
ANNE
Yes.
ANTHONY
Really?
ANNE
You needn’t sound so surprised.
ANTHONY
No, it’s just that... since your...
What was his name?
ANNE
James.
ANTHONY
That’s right. You have to admit,
since James, there hasn’t been a
lot of... What’s he do, anyway?
ANNE
He lives in Paris. I’m going to go
and live there.
ANTHONY
What, you? In Paris? You’re not
going to do that, are you, Anne? I
mean, wake up... They don’t even
speak English.
Pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Do I know him?
ANNE
Yes. You’ve met him.
THE FATHER - FINAL 9
7 CONTINUED: 7
Pause. He’s trying to remember.
ANTHONY
So, if I understand correctly,
you’re leaving me. Is that it?
You’re abandoning me...
ANNE
Dad...
He suddenly looks really anxious.
ANTHONY
What’s going to become of me?
She approaches him, her expression tender.
ANNE
You know, it’s important to me.
Otherwise, I wouldn’t be going.
I... I really love him.
Pause. He says nothing.
ANNE (CONT’D)
I’ll come back and see you often.
At weekends. But I can’t leave you
here all on your own. It’s not
possible. That’s why. If you refuse
to have a carer, I’m going to have
to...
ANTHONY
To what?
Pause. She doesn’t answer.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
To what?
ANNE
You have to understand, Dad.
ANTHONY
You’re going to have to what?
She lowers her eyes. Pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Anne... you’re going to have to
what?
THE FATHER - FINAL 10
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Scene 5 - Anxiety in the Silence
ANTHONY stands at his bedroom window. He’s watching his
daughter cross the street and walk away from the block of
flats. She doesn’t look back.
He can’t get over the fact that his daughter - his own
daughter - is capable of threatening him in this way.
He turns away from the window. He sits on the bed. He thinks
for a moment, his expression anxious.
9 INT. KITCHEN DAY 9
ANTHONY switches on the radio. It’s a Verdi aria. He hums
along with it.
He starts making tea.
There are shopping bags on the table. ANTHONY seems surprised
to see them. Who’s put them there?
He inspects their contents and decides to put the shopping
away in the cupboard. He seems to be on top of the situation.
There’s a poster on a wall, some French landscape with a
lake, perhaps.
Suddenly, he hears a door closing, within the flat. He
listens. He switches off the radio, listens again.
Footsteps. There’s someone in the flat.
He hesitates for a moment, not sure how to proceed. To
reassure himself, he picks up a fork.
He leaves the kitchen.
10 INT. ENTRANCE HALLWAY DAY 10
He approaches the sounds, moving cautiously.
ANTHONY
Anne?
He hears another sound, this time from the living room.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Is there somebody there?
THE FATHER - FINAL 11
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Scene 6 - Unwelcome Revelation
He pushes open the door. In the middle of the room, reading
his emails on his mobile, is a stranger, a tall, dark man of
about 50. The MAN glances up at him, no particular reaction:
then resumes reading his smartphone.
MAN
Everything all right?
ANTHONY
Who are you?
MAN
Sorry?
ANTHONY
What are you doing here? What are
you doing in my flat?
The MAN looks at him, astonished.
MAN
Anthony, it’s me... Paul.
ANTHONY
What?
MAN
Don’t you recognise me? It’s me,
Paul.
The MAN takes a step in ANTHONY’s direction, which causes him
to back away.
ANTHONY
Who? What are you doing here?
MAN
I live here.
ANTHONY
You?
MAN
Yes.
ANTHONY
You live here?
MAN
Yes.
ANTHONY
You live in my flat? That’s the
best yet. What is this nonsense?
THE FATHER - FINAL 12
11 CONTINUED: 11
MAN
I... I’m going to phone Anne.
Seeing ANTHONY’s apparent confusion, the MAN clarifies:
MAN (CONT’D)
Your daughter.
ANTHONY
Thank you, yes, I do know who Anne
is! Do you know her? You a friend
of hers?
No answer. The MAN is dialling a number.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
I’m speaking to you. Do you know
Anne?
MAN
I’m her husband.
ANTHONY is caught off guard.
ANTHONY
Her husband?
MAN
Yes.
ANTHONY
But... since when?
MAN
Coming up for ten years.
ANTHONY tries to conceal his dismay.
ANTHONY
Ah, yes. Of course. Yes, yes.
Obviously. Ten years already? Time
passes at such a lick... But I
thought... Didn’t you, aren’t you
separated?
MAN
Who? Anne and me?
ANTHONY
Yes. You aren’t?
MAN
No.
ANTHONY
Are you sure? I mean... I mean, are
you sure ?
THE FATHER - FINAL 13
11 CONTINUED: 11
MAN
Yes, Anthony.
ANTHONY
But this thing about France? Wasn’t
she supposed to be going to Paris
to... wasn’t she?
The MAN is on the phone.
MAN
Hello, darling. Yes, it’s me.
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Scene 7 - Unexpected Revelations
ANNE is choosing a chicken from the cooler in a small
supermarket run by Indians. She speaks into the phone.
ANNE
What’s the matter?... What?
12 INT. DINING ROOM DAY 12
The MAN moves into the dining room in order not to be
overheard by ANTHONY.
MAN
No, it’s just your father isn’t
feeling very well. I think he’d
like to see you.
ANTHONY doesn’t know what to make of the situation. He
realises he still has a fork in his hand. He slips it
discreetly into his pocket.
MAN (CONT’D)
Fine, but don’t be too long.
He hangs up, turns to ANTHONY.
MAN (CONT'D)
She’s just doing some shopping.
She’ll be up in a minute.
ANTHONY
She told me she was going to go and
live in Paris. She told me the
other day.
MAN
Paris?
He moves into the Living Room, takes the newspaper.
THE FATHER - FINAL 14
12 CONTINUED: 12
ANTHONY
Yes.
MAN
What was she going to do in Paris?
ANTHONY
She’s met a Frenchman.
The MAN frowns at him. He knows it isn’t true.
MAN
I don’t think so, Anthony.
ANTHONY
Yes, she has. She told me the other
day. I’m not an idiot. She told me
she was moving. To go and live with
him. I even remember telling her it
was a stupid idea because, you
know, they don’t even speak
English. You don’t know about this?
MAN
No.
ANTHONY
Oops.
MAN
What?
ANTHONY
Have I put my foot in it?
Brief pause. The MAN is amused.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
I’ve put my foot in it.
MAN
No, no, don’t worry. She hasn’t
mentioned it to me, but I’m sure
she was intending to...
ANTHONY
You didn’t know anything about the
Frenchman?
MAN
No.
ANTHONY
Oops-a-daisy...
Pause. ANTHONY puts a hand on his shoulder.
THE FATHER - FINAL 15
12 CONTINUED: 12
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Never mind. Chin up. Anyway, they
all end up leaving sooner or later.
I speak from experience.
Brief pause. The MAN heads towards the kitchen to get himself
a glass of wine.
MAN
You want something to drink while
we’re waiting? Glass of water?
Fruit juice?
ANTHONY
No, but I mean... What was I going
to say?
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Scene 8 - Frustration in the Kitchen
The MAN is opening a bottle of wine. ANTHONY joins him.
ANTHONY
It’s because of that girl... That
nurse...
MAN
Laura?
ANTHONY
I’ve forgotten her name. That girl
your wife insists on handing me
over to. A nurse. You know about
this? As if I wasn’t able to manage
on my own...
The MAN heads back to the living room. ANTHONY follows him,
continuing to talk to him in the entrance hallway.
13B INT. ENTRANCE HALLWAY DAY 13B
ANTHONY
She told me I needed the help of
this... When I can manage perfectly
well on my own. Even if she does
have to go abroad.
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Scene 9 - Struggling for Independence
ANTHONY
I don’t understand why she persists
in... Look at me. Take a good look
at me...
THE FATHER - FINAL 16
13C CONTINUED: 13C
He’s trying to remember the name of the MAN, who’s installed
himself in the armchair, resolved to read the newspaper and
to drink his glass of wine.
MAN
Paul.
ANTHONY
That’s right, Paul. Take a good
look at me. I can still manage on
my own. Don’t you think? I’m not
completely...
He hunches over like an old man.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
You agree? Of course you agree. But
her? I don’t know where this stupid
obsession comes from. She’s always
been that way. Ever since she was
little. Thing is, she’s not very
bright. Not very... you agree? Not
very intelligent. She gets that
from her mother.
MAN
I think she tries to do the best
she can for you, Anthony.
ANTHONY
The best she can, the best she
can... I never asked her for
anything. I don’t know what she’s
cooking up against me. But she’s
cooking something up. She’s cooking
something up, that I do know. I
suspect she wants to put me in a
home for...
He pulls a face representing an old man.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Yes, I’ve seen the signs. But let
me make something absolutely clear:
I’m not leaving my flat! I’m not
leaving it!
To underline his last sentence, he makes a strong gesture -
along the lines of a single firm hand to the table, as if to
mark his territory. His force unintentionally sends the chess
pieces falling to the ground.
The MAN decides to put down his newspaper.
MAN
This isn’t your flat, Anthony.
THE FATHER - FINAL 17
13C CONTINUED: 13C
ANTHONY
Sorry?
The MAN gets up from his chair.
MAN
If you remember, you moved here, I
mean you moved to our place while
you were waiting for...
ANTHONY
What?
MAN
For a new carer. Because you
quarrelled with the last one...
With Angela.
ANTHONY
Did I?
MAN
Yes. Don’t you remember? That’s why
you’re staying in our place. While
you wait.
Pause. ANTHONY looks slightly lost. He looks at the furniture
around him. It’s definitely his flat.
ANTHONY
So, James...
MAN
Paul.
ANTHONY
Yes, Paul... So you’re telling me,
I’m in your place.
MAN
Yes.
ANTHONY laughs and rolls his eyes.
ANTHONY
Now I’ve heard everything.
SOUND of the front door opening.
ANNE (O.S.)
It’s me.
ANTHONY
Ah, there she is...
THE FATHER - FINAL 18
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Scene 10 - Lost Connections
ANTHONY steps into the corridor, anxious to find out what’s
going on: but he’s confronted not by ANNE, but by a
completely different WOMAN.
WOMAN is taking off her coat.
WOMAN
What’s happening?
The MAN has appeared in the corridor behind ANTHONY.
MAN
Nothing much. Your father seemed a
bit... confused.
WOMAN
Something wrong? Are you all right,
Dad?
He obviously doesn’t recognise her.
WOMAN (CONT’D)
Dad?
He recoils as she approaches. He can’t understand why she’s
calling him “dad”. To him, she’s a complete stranger.
ANTHONY
I... What is this nonsense?
WOMAN
What are you talking about?
ANTHONY
Where’s Anne?
The WOMAN looks at the MAN. Now it’s she who seems confused.
WOMAN
Sorry?
ANTHONY
Anne. Where is she?
She realises he doesn’t recognise her. She glances anxiously
at the MAN.
WOMAN
I’m here, Dad... I went downstairs
to do some shopping. And now I’m
back.
ANTHONY tries to conceal his dismay.
THE FATHER - FINAL 19
14A CONTINUED: 14A
ANTHONY
I... I see, but... What did you
buy?
WOMAN
A chicken. Sound good? Are you
hungry?
ANTHONY
Why not?
He seems lost. And gloomy.
MAN
Here, let me have it. I’ll go and
fix everything.
WOMAN
Thanks.
He takes the bag and heads off towards the kitchen. They
exchange a worried look.
ANTHONY wanders back into the living room, baffled.
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Scene 11 - The Confusion of Perception
ANTHONY decides to pick up the chess pieces.
The WOMAN appears and approaches ANTHONY. She looks genuinely
concerned.
WOMAN
Paul said you weren’t feeling very
well.
ANTHONY
I feel fine. Thank you.
But he looks gloomy.
WOMAN
You look worried.
ANTHONY
No, it’s just...
WOMAN
Just what? Tell me...
ANTHONY
I was in the kitchen... Making a
cup of tea... I was alone in the
flat... Suddenly, I heard a
sound... So I came in here and
there was your husband...
THE FATHER - FINAL 20
14B CONTINUED: 14B
The WOMAN interrupts him.
WOMAN
Who?
ANTHONY
Your husband.
WOMAN
What husband?
ANTHONY
Well, yours, my dear. Not mine.
WOMAN
James?
ANTHONY
Your husband.
WOMAN
Dad, I’m not married.
ANTHONY
Sorry?
WOMAN
I got divorced more than five years
ago. Have you forgotten?
ANTHONY
What? Well, then, who’s he?
WOMAN
Who?
ANTHONY
Are you doing this on purpose? I’m
talking about... him. Who just left
with the chicken.
WOMAN
The chicken? What are you on about,
Dad?
ANTHONY
Right here, just a minute ago. Did
you not hand over a chicken to
someone?
Clearly, she doesn’t know what he’s talking about.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
The chicken! A minute ago you were
holding a chicken, were you not? A
chicken. A CHICKEN!
THE FATHER - FINAL 21
14B CONTINUED: 14B
WOMAN
What chicken? What are you talking
about, Dad?
Realising she doesn’t know what he’s talking about, he
plunges off towards the kitchen in a panic.
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Scene 12 - The Vanishing Man
ANTHONY arrives in the kitchen. It’s empty.
ANTHONY
But he was here just now!
He goes to look in the dining room.
16 INT. DINING ROOM DAY 16
Still nobody. The WOMAN appears on the threshold.
WOMAN
I think you’re mistaken, Dad.
There’s no one here.
ANTHONY
He’s vanished.
The WOMAN smiles.
WOMAN
Who? The man with the chicken?
ANTHONY
Your husband. The man with the
chicken. Why are you smiling?
WOMAN
Nothing. Sorry.
She reaches out, trying to pacify him. He avoids her and
heads for his bedroom.
ANTHONY
All this nonsense is driving me
crazy.
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Scene 13 - Lost in Transition
He arrives in the bedroom. It occupies the same space as his
first bedroom, but some elements of the décor and furniture
have changed - as if he was indeed in a different flat.
He’s aware of this difference. He frowns. He goes to the
window. He draws the curtain.
THE FATHER - FINAL 22
17 CONTINUED: 17
It’s the same view as before, easily recognisable as the
London street we saw a little earlier. So as far as he’s
concerned, he’s obviously still in his flat.
17PT2 The WOMAN appears. 17PT2
WOMAN
What’s the matter, Dad?
ANTHONY
There’s something funny going on.
Believe me, Anne, there’s something
funny going on!
WOMAN
Come and sit down. Come on...
He goes and sits on his bed. He’s upset. The WOMAN smiles at
him and rests a hand on his.
WOMAN (CONT’D)
Now don’t worry. Everything’ll sort
itself out. Mm?
ANTHONY
I don’t know.
WOMAN
Yes, it will. Don’t worry. Have you
taken your medication?
ANTHONY
What’s that got to do with
anything?
WOMAN
Let’s give you your medication. The
evening dose. Then you’ll feel
better.
She shakes some pills out of a bottle by the bed. Anthony
stares out into space. He speaks to her as if confiding a
secret.
ANTHONY
It’s been going on for some time.
Strange things going on around us.
Haven’t you noticed? There was this
man claiming this wasn’t my flat. A
really unsympathetic-looking man. A
bit like your husband. Only worse.
In my flat, you understand what I’m
saying? It’s the best yet. Don’t
you think? In my flat. He told
me...
ANTHONY is suddenly seized by a doubt.
THE FATHER - FINAL 23
17 CONTINUED: 17
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
But... this is my flat, isn’t it?
Mm? Anne... This is my flat?
She smiles at him without answering. She prepares his
medication.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Isn’t it?
Brief pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Tell me, Anne, this really is my
flat, isn’t it?
She hands him his medication. In silence. He takes it. He
looks like a lost child.
She smiles at him.
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Scene 14 - Anne's Burden
For a moment, like a punctuation, the CAMERA CONTEMPLATES the
empty room. It’s the same space as before, but it’s taken on
the characteristics of ANNE and PAUL’s flat, far more light
and modern than ANTHONY’s place.
19 INT. HALLWAY AND KITCHEN 2 DAY 19
ANNE comes back with the shopping. She’s on the phone,
juggling with shopping bags.
ANNE
Yes, I know... I know... No. You
can’t imagine how difficult it is
sometimes... The other day, he
didn’t even recognise me... I
know...
She puts the bags in the kitchen. They land in the exact
position ANTHONY found them in Scene 9.
Still on the phone, ANNE steps back into the hallway to hang
up her coat, leaving the bags in the kitchen to be dealt with
later.
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Scene 15 - Anticipation in the Office
ANNE
No, I’m expecting her any minute.
Yes...
THE FATHER - FINAL 24
20 CONTINUED: 20
She hangs up her coat. Then she picks up the letters and
opens them as she goes into the office.
21 INT. OFFICE 2 DAY 21
This really seems like her office. It’s not the same office
as in Scene 5. It covers the same space, but the décor is
different. It’s where ANNE, who’s a translator, works.
ANNE
Right, right. I’ll call you back.
Lots of love. Thanks...
She hangs up and sits at her desk.
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Scene 16 - Anxiety and Anticipation
ANTHONY is stretched out on the bed, in his pyjamas. He’s
holding a newspaper and a pencil and is concentrating on
filling squares in the crossword. Suddenly, he stops.
He stares into space. He looks anxious. He’s trying to
understand what’s going on. He looks around. Why does he have
the feeling he’s no longer in his own flat?
23 INT. OFFICE 2 DAY 23
ANNE has opened her computer and begun working.
The bell rings. She closes her computer at once and heads for
the front door, somewhat apprehensive.
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Scene 17 - A Warm Welcome
She opens the door. It’s LAURA.
ANNE
Hello.
LAURA
Hello. Not too early, am I?
ANNE
No, no. Not at all. Come in. Come
in.
LAURA comes in.
LAURA
Thanks.
ANNE
Come in. Thanks for coming round.
THE FATHER - FINAL 25
24 CONTINUED: 24
LAURA
That’s OK.
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Scene 18 - Navigating Confusion
The décor in the living room is as we saw it in Scene 18: in
other words, not ANTHONY’s flat any more.
ANNE
My father’s in his room. Would you
like something to drink?
LAURA
No, thanks.
ANNE
Make yourself comfortable.
She sits down.
ANNE (CONT’D)
I...
ANNE indicates her father’s room. She sets off in that
direction, as if to fetch him. Then she moves back towards
LAURA to explain the situation to her.
ANNE (CONT’D)
So, yes, as I was telling you, I...
He’s a bit upset by the whole idea
of...
LAURA
That’s OK.
ANNE
Yes. And that can cause him to...
Anyway, I think he’s a bit annoyed
with me. I’m telling you this just
to warn you he’s capable of
reacting... unexpectedly.
LAURA
Has he lived on his own up to now?
ANNE
Yes. In a flat, not too far from
here. It worked. I was able to look
in on him practically every day.
But eventually, we’ve had to come
to another arrangement. It wasn’t
viable any more.
LAURA
I understand.
THE FATHER - FINAL 26
25 CONTINUED: 25
ANNE
He’s had several carers one after
the other. But he’s had difficulty
getting on with them. He has his
ways... That’s why I moved him
here, in with me. But I can’t
manage him on my own. It’s too much
for me. I have to work and...
That’s why I...
ANNE is trying to master her emotions.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Well, that’s why I need someone to
help me.
25PT2 ANTHONY 25PT2
Did I hear the bell?
ANTHONY appears. He’s in his pyjamas and a dressing gown.
ANNE
You did... Dad, I’d like you to
meet Laura.
LAURA
How do you do, sir.
ANNE
I explained to you that Laura was
going to come by today so you could
meet.
ANTHONY
Hello.
LAURA
Hello.
ANTHONY
You’re... gorgeous.
LAURA
Thank you.
ANTHONY
But I... Don’t we know each other?
LAURA
No, I don’t think so.
ANTHONY
Are you sure? I’ve a definite
impression I’ve seen you before...
He moves closer to her, fascinated by her face. ANNE tries to
bring him back to the subject at hand.
THE FATHER - FINAL 27
25 CONTINUED: 25
ANNE
Well. So, Laura’s come by to see us
to get a bit of an idea of how you
live and to see to what extent she
might be able to help you.
ANTHONY
I know, dear, I know that. You’ve
already told me a hundred times.
He turns to LAURA.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
My daughter has a tendency to
repeat herself. You know what it’s
like... it’s an age thing...
LAURA smiles at what she takes to be a joke.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Would you like something to drink?
LAURA
You’re very kind, but no thanks.
ANTHONY
Sure? An aperitif? Must be about
time for an aperitif, isn’t it?
What time is it? It’s...
He realises he doesn’t have his watch.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Hang on, I’ll be right back.
He heads off in the direction of his bathroom.
ANNE
He’s gone to look for his watch.
Pause.
LAURA
I must say, he’s charming.
ANNE
Yes. Not always.
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Scene 19 - A Toast to Confusion
ANTHONY finds his watch. He checks himself in the mirror to
make sure his hair is all right: just a moment of vanity. He
sets off back to the living room, satisfied.
THE FATHER - FINAL 28
27 INT. LIVING ROOM 2 DAY 27
27PT1 27PT1
ANTHONY arrives with a big smile, resolved to make an effort
to charm LAURA.
ANTHONY
Just as I thought, time for an
aperitif. I have two watches. I’ve
always had two. One on my wrist and
the other in my head. It’s always
been that way. Now, would you like
something, young lady?
ANNE
Dad...
ANNE’s interruption irritates ANTHONY.
ANTHONY
What? I’m allowed to offer our
guest something, aren’t I?
He turns to LAURA, his smile back in place.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
What would you like?
LAURA
What are you going to have?
ANTHONY
A small whisky.
LAURA
Then I’ll have the same.
ANTHONY
Excellent.
He speaks to ANNE as if she’s a waitress.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
So, two whiskies. Two!
27PT2 ANNE goes to look for two glasses of whisky. 27PT2
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
I’m not offering you one, Anne.
He turns back to LAURA.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
She never drinks alcohol. Never.
ANNE
It’s true.
THE FATHER - FINAL 29
27 CONTINUED: 27
ANTHONY
Never. Not a drop. That’s why she
seems so...
ANNE
So what?
ANTHONY
Sober. Her mother was the same. Her
mother was the... soberest woman
I’ve ever met. Whereas her little
sister... That was quite another
story.
LAURA
You have two daughters?
ANTHONY
That’s right. Even though I hardly
ever hear from the other one. Lucy.
All the same, she was always my
favorite.
ANNE’s expression: she’s hurt.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Do you ever hear from her? I don’t
understand why she never gets in
touch. Never. Dazzling girl. A
painter. Look. Beautiful, isn’t it?
He indicates a painting on the wall. It’s rather a haunting
image of a park, a big tree and a couple of small figures
walking hand-in-hand in the shadow of the tree. CLOSE-UP of
the painting.
LAURA
Yes, it is...
ANTHONY
Your whisky.
LAURA
Thank you.
ANTHONY
Cheers.
They clink glasses and drink.
27PT3 ANTHONY (CONT’D) 27PT3
I’d give everything I own for a
glass of whisky. Don’t you agree?
LAURA
Well, I don’t own all that much...
THE FATHER - FINAL 30
27 CONTINUED: 27
ANTHONY
Don’t you? What do you do for a
living?
LAURA glances uncertainly at ANNE, not sure how to respond.
LAURA
Well, I... I look after... other
people.
ANTHONY
Other people?
LAURA
Yes. My job is to help people who
need help.
ANTHONY
Sounds like one of those girls
you’re always trying to dump off on
me.
He turns back to LAURA.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Must be a difficult job, isn’t it?
Spending all day with some...
He makes a face signifying an invalid.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Am I right? I couldn’t stand it.
LAURA
What about you, what did you do for
a living?
ANTHONY
I was a dancer.
LAURA
Were you?
ANTHONY
Yes.
ANNE
Dad...
ANTHONY
What?
ANNE
You were an engineer.
ANTHONY
What do you know about it?
THE FATHER - FINAL 31
27 CONTINUED: 27
He turns back to LAURA.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Tap dancing was my speciality.
LAURA
Really!
ANTHONY
You seem surprised.
LAURA starts laughing.
LAURA
Yes, a little bit.
ANTHONY
Why? Can’t you imagine me as a tap
dancer?
LAURA
Of course. It’s just... I’ve always
loved tap dancing.
ANNE is watching them. She looks happy to see they’re getting
on so well.
ANTHONY
You as well? I’m still great at it.
I’ll show you...
27PT4 27PT4
He gets up, takes a few hopeless steps. LAURA is shaking with
laughter. He stops.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Why are you laughing?
LAURA can’t stop laughing.
LAURA
It’s nothing. Sorry. Sorry. It’s
just... the whisky.
ANTHONY
That’s it, I know. I know who you
remind me of.
ANNE
Who?
ANTHONY
Lucy. Lucy, when she was her age.
LAURA
Lucy?
THE FATHER - FINAL 32
27 CONTINUED: 27
ANTHONY
My other daughter. Don’t you agree?
ANNE
I don’t know.
ANTHONY
Yes. There’s a resemblance.
ANNE
Maybe.
LAURA’s still laughing. He comes closer.
ANTHONY
Her unbearable habit of laughing
inanely.
Everyone stops laughing. Embarrassed pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
I had you there, didn’t I? Ha ha.
Brief pause. ANTHONY suddenly becomes serious and sombre, as
if he’d been playing a part all along.
27PT5 ANTHONY (CONT’D) 27PT5
You see, the situation’s very
simple. I’ve been living in this
flat... oh, for a long time now.
I’m extremely attached to it. I
bought it more than thirty years
ago. Can you imagine? You weren’t
even born. It’s a big flat. And my
daughter is very interested in it.
ANNE
What are you talking about?
ANTHONY
Let me explain. My daughter is of
the opinion that I can’t manage on
my own. So she’s moved in with me.
Ostensibly to help me. With this
man she met not long ago, just
after her divorce, who has a very
bad influence on her, I have to
tell you.
ANNE
Look, what are you talking about,
Dad?
ANTHONY
And now she’d like to convince me
that I can’t manage on my own.
(MORE)
THE FATHER - FINAL 33
27 CONTINUED: 27
ANTHONY (CONT'D)
The next stage will be to send me
away I don’t know where...
Obviously, it’ll be a much more
efficient way of getting hold of my
flat.
ANNE
Dad...
ANTHONY
But it’s not going to happen that
way. I may as well tell you. I have
no intention of leaving any time
soon. No, you heard me. I intend to
outlive you. Both of you. Yes.
Well, I don’t know about you... But
my daughter, yes. I shall make a
point of it. I’m going to inherit
from her. Not the other way round.
The day of her funeral, I shall
give a little speech to remind
everyone how heartless and
manipulative she was.
ANNE
I’m very sorry about this.
ANTHONY
Why? She understands completely.
You’re the one who doesn’t
understand.
He turns to LAURA.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
I’ve been trying to explain to her
for months that I can manage very
well on my own. But she refuses to
listen. I don’t need any help from
anyone and I will not leave my
flat. All I want is for everyone to
bugger off!
He empties his glass, fetches a banknote out of his pocket
and throws it down on the table, as if he’s paying the bill.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Having said that, it was a great
pleasure, I’ll be leaving you.
27PT6 27PT6
He leaves the room. He clearly has no idea, for the moment,
that he’s living with his daughter. He may even think she’s
moved in with him.
LAURA
When you said he had his ways, you
weren’t kidding...
THE FATHER - FINAL 34
27 CONTINUED: 27
ANNE
I’m very sorry.
She seems particularly upset.
LAURA
Don’t be. That sort of reaction is
quite normal.
ANNE
No, I am very sorry.
She has tears in her eyes, clearly affected by the obvious
deterioration of her father and by how violently he’s
expressed himself.
LAURA tries to be reassuring.
LAURA
It’ll all turn out fine.
ANNE
You think so?
LAURA drinks a mouthful of whisky, without answering the
question.
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Scene 20 - Shattered Calm
ANNE is alone in the kitchen. It’s late. She’s drinking
herbal tea. She looks exhausted. When she’s completed her
cup, she washes it in the sink. Then she starts drying it,
but it slips out of her hands and shatters on the ground.
She goes to pick up the pieces and, unexpectedly, something
in her cracks and she starts crying. This only lasts for a
minute. Very quickly, she pulls herself together. She puts
the bits of porcelain in the dustbin and leaves the kitchen.
29A INT. CORRIDOR 2 NIGHT 29A
She moves down the corridor. As she passes, she switches off
the lights in the dining room, as if she was going to bed.
She steps into her father’s room. She wants to check he’s
asleep, as one would with a child. The light is still on.
29B INT. BEDROOM 2 NIGHT 29B
Oddly, she sits on the edge of the bed. ANTHONY is peacefully
asleep. She smiles, touched by him. She puts a hand on his
cheek, as if to caress him. Her hand moves down to his
throat. She seems very emotional. Suddenly, she starts
squeezing her father’s throat.
THE FATHER - FINAL 35
29B CONTINUED: 29B
The CAMERA observes the scene in LONG SHOT. We watch her
strangling her father. For some time.
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Scene 21 - Tension at the Table
PAUL (O.S.)
Well?
ANNE starts. She’s daydreaming on her feet. She comes back to
reality. She’s in the dining room laying the table. She turns
towards PAUL, who has his back to her and has just asked her
a question.
ANNE
What?
PAUL
Did it go well?
PAUL’s a man of about 50. Unlike the MAN, there seems nothing
hostile about him. On the contrary, he seems sensitive and
attentive. He’s obviously at home in the flat, which he
shares with ANNE.
ANNE
Mm? Yes, yes... I think so. She
said she’d start tomorrow.
PAUL
Here?
ANNE
Yes.
PAUL
Good.
ANNE
Yes. Then we’ll see how the first
day goes. I was so afraid it wasn’t
going to work. But in the end it
was fine. He was charming.
PAUL
There you are, you see.
ANNE has finished setting out the plates.
ANNE
He turned on the charm for her...
You should have seen it... He told
her he’d been a dancer. A tap
dancer.
PAUL smiles.
THE FATHER - FINAL 36
30 CONTINUED: 30
PAUL
No...
ANNE
Yes. She started to laugh. Not in a
mean way, you understand. There was
something kind about her. I was
relieved. I don’t know how to
describe it to you. As if she was
going to be able to... Well, as if
the two of them were going to get
on really well...
Brief pause. ANNE is trying to control her feelings.
ANNE (CONT’D)
He said she reminded him of Lucy.
PAUL
Oh, yes? How old is she?
ANNE
I don’t know. Thirty. Something
like that.
PAUL
Is she pretty?
ANNE
Why? Are you interested?
PAUL can’t understand why she’s reacted like that. ANNE steps
into the kitchen to check the oven.
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Scene 22 - Fleeting Recognition
ANNE opens the oven. The chicken is cooking. She burns
herself. She looks jumpy. PAUL appears.
PAUL
What’s the matter with you? If it
went well, that’s good news, isn’t
it?
ANNE
Yes, yes.
PAUL
So? What’s the matter with you?
Tell me.
ANNE
It’s just...
PAUL
What?
THE FATHER - FINAL 37
31 CONTINUED: 31
ANNE
Just now... When I came back with
the dinner... He didn’t recognise
me... I... I don’t know. It did
something to me.
PAUL
I understand.
ANNE
I’m finding it so hard.
PAUL
Come. Let me give you a hug.
ANNE
I saw it in his eyes. He didn’t
recognise me. Not at all. I was
like a stranger to him.
PAUL
You have to get used to it.
ANNE
I can’t manage to.
PAUL
I think you can, I think you’re
managing very well. Come here...
He presses her against him. Suddenly, ANTHONY appears. ANNE
draws back from PAUL.
ANNE
Ah, Dad! Dinner’ll be ready in five
minutes. That suit you?
ANTHONY
Very good, dear. Suits me fine.
Suits me... But... Hello.
PAUL smiles at him, distractedly. And goes back to the living
room, with the bottle of wine, leaving the two of them
together.
ANTHONY has no idea who PAUL is. As far as he knows, this is
the first time they’ve met.
ANNE
You hungry, Dad?
ANTHONY
Yes, yes. But... we have guests
this evening?
ANNE
No. Why?
THE FATHER - FINAL 38
31 CONTINUED: 31
ANTHONY
Nothing, nothing...
ANTHONY doesn’t want ANNE to be aware of his confusion.
He leaves the kitchen.
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Scene 23 - The Watch and the Cupboard
ANTHONY approaches the living room. He’s watching PAUL from a
distance. PAUL is sitting in his armchair reading the
newspaper and drinking a glass of wine. ANTHONY is having
some trouble understanding what’s happening. PAUL becomes
aware that he’s watching.
PAUL
Everything all right? Had a good
day?
ANTHONY shrugs his shoulders. He doesn’t seem quite with it.
ANNE appears.
ANNE
Very good. Laura came by. Didn’t
she, Dad? Laura came to see us just
now.
ANTHONY
Who?
ANTHONY has noticed Paul’s watch. He seems fascinated. He’s
wondering if it might be his.
ANNE
Laura.
ANTHONY
Mm?
ANNE
The young woman who came to see us
just now.
ANTHONY
Oh, yes.
ANNE
And we went to see the doctor...
PAUL
And? What did he say?
ANTHONY
Has anybody seen my watch? Can’t
seem to find it.
THE FATHER - FINAL 39
32 CONTINUED: 32
ANNE
Again?
ANTHONY
I’ve been looking for it for some
time.
ANNE
You must have put it in your
cupboard. Don’t you think? In your
hiding-place...
ANTHONY starts, afraid that PAUL has heard the word
‘cupboard’ and will discover his hiding-place.
ANTHONY
What are you talking about, Anne? I
really don’t know what you’re
talking about. What cupboard? Mm?
There’s no cupboard. No cupboard.
He takes ANNE aside.
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Scene 24 - The Missing Watch
ANTHONY
Couldn’t you be more discreet?
ANNE speaks more quietly.
ANNE
Have you looked in your cupboard?
ANTHONY
I’ve just come from there. It’s not
there. I must have lost it
somewhere. Or else it’s been
stolen.
ANNE
No, it hasn’t.
ANTHONY is getting annoyed.
ANTHONY
What do you mean, “No, it hasn’t”?
The watch must be somewhere! It
can’t have flown away!
ANNE
You want me to go and look?
ANTHONY
Very much so. If it’s not a bother.
Because it’s a worry. I’m worried.
(MORE)
THE FATHER - FINAL 40
33 CONTINUED: 33
ANTHONY (CONT'D)
I am losing all my things,
everyone’s just helping themselves.
If this goes on much longer, I’ll
be stark naked. And I won’t even
know what time it is.
ANNE smiles at him and makes her way to the bathroom. ANTHONY
decides to head back to the living room.
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Scene 25 - Tension in Time
PAUL ignores him. He’s still reading his paper. ANTHONY wants
to get his attention.
ANTHONY
Might you have the time?
PAUL
Yes.
ANTHONY
Ah, thanks.
Brief pause. PAUL continues to read the paper.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
So what time is it? Exactly.
PAUL looks at his watch.
PAUL
Almost seven.
ANTHONY
That late? Shouldn’t we be sitting
down to dinner?
PAUL
Yes. As soon as the chicken’s
ready. In five minutes.
ANTHONY
We’re having chicken this evening?
PAUL
Yes. The one Anne just bought.
ANTHONY flashes him a charming smile. He sits down right next
to him.
ANTHONY
It’s pretty, your watch. It’s...
It’s pretty. It’s... Is it yours? I
mean, is it yours?
THE FATHER - FINAL 41
34 CONTINUED: 34
PAUL
Mm? Yes.
ANTHONY
May I see it.
PAUL looks up from his paper.
PAUL
So. Apparently it went very well.
ANTHONY
Yes, very well. What?
PAUL
Well, your meeting with... the
carer.
ANTHONY
Oh? Yes. Very well. Very well.
He returns his attention to the watch.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
It’s very...
PAUL
Apparently she looks like Lucy.
ANTHONY
Is that right?
PAUL
I’ve no idea, I’ve never seen her.
ANTHONY is still obsessed with the watch.
ANTHONY
No, it... It went well. Anne seemed
pleased. You know, it’s mainly for
her. I don’t really need... I mean,
it’s mainly for Anne. Might I have
a look at it? Your watch...
PAUL
You’re right, it’s important for
her that this works out. She’s been
worried about you, you know. It
makes her very unhappy when you
fall out with... What is it about
my watch?
ANTHONY
Nothing. I was just looking... I
want to check if... It’s pretty.
Very pretty. Did you buy it?
THE FATHER - FINAL 42
34 CONTINUED: 34
PAUL
Sorry?
ANTHONY
No, I mean... Was it a present or
did you buy it?
PAUL
I bought it. Why?
ANTHONY
I don’t suppose you kept the
receipt...
PAUL
What are you talking about?
ANTHONY
For your watch.
PAUL
I was talking about Anne.
ANTHONY
Anne?
PAUL
Yes. Anne...
PAUL looks at him. He looks confused. Has he really forgotten
who ANNE is?
A glint of malice in ANTHONY’s eyes.
ANTHONY
I know who Anne is.
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Scene 26 - Reflections of Loneliness
ANNE is rummaging in ANTHONY’s cupboard. She discovers a fork
and wonders what it’s doing there. Then she sees the watch.
ANNE
Dad... I’ve found it...
35B INT./EXT. KITCHEN 2 DAY 35B
ANNE checks the progress of the chicken in the oven.
Then, she moves over to the window and opens it. She lights a
cigarette and looks out of the window for a moment.
In an apartment opposite, there’s a COUPLE both roaring with
laughter.
THE FATHER - FINAL 43
35B CONTINUED: 35B
ANNE sighs unhappily.
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Scene 27 - Unresolved Tensions
ANTHONY has resumed his conversation with PAUL.
ANTHONY
I don’t know why, we never really
got on. Whereas her little sister,
that was quite another story... Do
you know her? My other daughter?
Now she, she’s marvellous. I
haven’t seen her for months. I
can’t blame her. She’s traveling
round the world, I think. She’s a
painter.
He indicates her painting on the wall.
PAUL seems impatient with this speech, which he knows by
heart, slips away into the dining room to get another glass
of wine.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
But I’d be so happy if she came to
see me one day. I’d take her in my
arms and we’d be glued to one
another for hours on end, like we
used to be a long time ago, when
she was little and she still used
to call me “little daddy”, “little
daddy”. That’s what she used to
call me. Nice, isn’t it, “little
daddy”?
PAUL reappears. He swallows a mouthful, pressed back against
the wall, his expression strange.
PAUL
Now, I’d like to ask you something.
ANTHONY
Yes?
PAUL moves closer to him. There’s something threatening about
his approach.
PAUL
But I want an honest answer.
Nothing fancy... Can you do that
for me?
ANTHONY is caught off guard.
THE FATHER - FINAL 44
36 CONTINUED: 36
ANTHONY
Yes.
PAUL
Well, then...
Brief pause.
PAUL (CONT’D)
How much longer do you intend to
hang around getting on everybody’s
tits?
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Scene 28 - A New Look and a Confusing Turn
ANNE has a new hairdo. ANTHONY is looking at her, frowning.
ANNE
What is it?
ANTHONY
Have you done something to your
hair?
ANNE
No. Why?
ANTHONY
Nothing. You’re looking good...
She smiles. The lift door opens.
37A INT. STAIRS AND LANDING DAY 37A
ANTHONY and ANNE step out of a lift. It looks like the
landing outside ANTHONY’s flat (seen in scene 2). ANTHONY
(and we) assume that they’re outside his flat. But ANNE rings
the bell.
ANTHONY
Have you lost your keys?
ANNE doesn’t answer. He’s starting to search his pockets for
his own keys, when the buzzer goes. ANNE pushes open the door
and steps into the surgery.
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Scene 29 - Navigating Confusion
The entrance hall to the surgery has the same dimensions as
the entrance hall of the flat, although it’s furnished
differently.
ANNE heads for the RECEPTIONIST. ANTHONY looks around, not
understanding where they are. He seems disorientated.
THE FATHER - FINAL 45
38 CONTINUED: 38
There’s a row of seats in startling colours, as you sometimes
see in hospitals.
ANNE comes over to take ANTHONY’s arm.
ANNE
Come on, this way.
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Scene 30 - Misunderstandings in the Doctor's Office
The DOCTOR is scribbling a note; he looks up at ANTHONY and
ANNE.
DOCTOR
So... Anthony, is it?
ANTHONY
Yes.
He looks quite unhappy.
DOCTOR
Date of birth?
ANTHONY
31st December, 1937. Why?
DOCTOR
You’re living with your daughter at
the moment, is that right?
ANTHONY
Yes. Until she goes to live in
Paris.
ANNE
No, Dad, why do you keep going on
about Paris?
ANTHONY
What?
ANNE
I’m staying in London.
ANTHONY
You keep changing your mind. How do
you expect people to keep up?
ANNE
But there was never any question of
going to Paris, Dad.
ANTHONY
Yes, there was. You told me.
THE FATHER - FINAL 46
39 CONTINUED: 39
ANNE
I didn’t...
ANTHONY
I’m sorry, Anne. You told me the
other day. Have you forgotten?
Pause. ANNE looks anxiously at the DOCTOR. ANTHONY, unaware
of this, carries on blithely.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
She’s forgotten. Listen, Anne, I
think you’re starting to suffer
from memory loss. I should have a
word with the doctor, if I were
you...
ANNE
In any event, I’m not going to
Paris.
ANTHONY
Well, good. I mean, Paris, they
don’t even speak English.
The DOCTOR makes a note.
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Scene 31 - Emotional Distance
ANTHONY is sitting on one of the violently-coloured chairs in
the waiting room. He’s watching ANNE and the DOCTOR talking
in the distance. He seems worried about what they might be
saying.
The DOCTOR gives ANNE his card, which she slips into her
pocket.
She catches ANTHONY’s eye and immediately smiles at him, as
if she was trying to conceal something from him. He looks
worried and suspicious.
39B INT. TAXI DAY 39B
ANNE
Dad?
No response. She reaches for his hand, but he takes it away
from her. Music.
ANTHONY turns away from ANNE, staring out of the window of
the moving taxi.
THE FATHER - FINAL 47
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Scene 32 - Reflections of Loss
ANNE is ironing.
Then, she goes to ANTHONY’s bedroom with the laundry basket.
40B INT. ANTHONY'S BEDROOM 2 DAY 40B
She puts one of ANTHONY's shirt in his dressing room. She
pauses for a moment in front of her father's dark suits. She
touches them, as an attempt to penetrate his mystery. Then
she catches sight of his well polished shoes. This suddenly
reminds her of the man he used to be.
ANNE sits on ANTHONY’s bed, next to her laundry basket. She
looks unsettled. What is she going to do with her father?
Her eyes meet a photo on ANTHONY's bedside table. It shows
her father, younger, surrounded with his two daughters.
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Scene 33 - A Call to Care
She walks along the street and into the Indian shop. She is
buying a chicken. Her phone rings.
ANNE
What’s the matter? What? All
right... I’ll be up in a minute.
41Ba DELETED 41Ba
41C INT. HALLWAY 2 DAY 41C
ANNE comes into the flat, carrying bags. PAUL comes from the
living room.
ANNE
What’s happening?
PAUL
Nothing much... Your father... I
think he’d like to see you...
ANNE
Where is he ?
THE FATHER - FINAL 48
41C CONTINUED: 41C
PAUL
In his room...
ANNE goes towards her father’s bedroom.
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41E DELETED 41E
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Scene 34 - A Moment of Connection
The bedroom door is open and ANNE sees him at the far end of
the room, struggling with his sweater. He is trying to put it
on. He can’t manage it, keeps putting the wrong arm in the
wrong sleeve.
Instead of going to help him, ANNE watches him for a minute
from the corridor. He looks completely helpless. Then,
flooded with compassion, she crosses over to help him.
ANNE
Let me...
ANTHONY allows her to help him. He looks at her with great
benevolence, as if he’s completely forgotten their recent
contretemps.
He notices she looks somewhat agitated.
ANTHONY
What’s the matter?
ANNE
Nothing.
She makes a loving gesture.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Right. I’ll go and get the dinner
ready...
She’s almost out of the room, when ANTHONY calls out to her.
ANTHONY
Anne?
She turns back.
ANNE
What?
ANTHONY
Thanks for everything.
THE FATHER - FINAL 49
41F CONTINUED: 41F
She smiles at him and leaves the room.
41G INT. KITCHEN 2 EVENING 41G
ANNE prepares the chicken for the dinner.
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Scene 35 - A Difficult Decision
ANTHONY is reading a book. He checks his watch. It is time to
have dinner. He closes the book and gets up.
42 INT. CORRIDOR 2 EVENING 42
ANTHONY emerges from his bedroom and sets off down the
corridor towards the dining-room. ANNE and PAUL are talking;
and ANTHONY slows down to listen, as the voices become
intelligible.
PAUL (O.S.)
We have to find another
arrangement.
ANNE (O.S.)
Such as?
PAUL (O.S.)
Putting him in an institution.
ANNE (O.S.)
A home?
PAUL (O.S.)
Yes, a nursing home.
Pause.
PAUL (O.S.) (CONT’D)
It’d be better for him.
ANNE (O.S.)
Why are you saying this to me
today? I mean, when tomorrow
morning... there’s this girl
starting and...
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Scene 36 - Unspoken Concerns
ANTHONY appears in the doorway, unnoticed by ANNE and PAUL.
PAUL
Yes. You’re right. We’ll see. Maybe
it’ll work very well with this
girl. You seem to think she’s good.
(MORE)
THE FATHER - FINAL 50
43 CONTINUED: 43
PAUL (CONT'D)
But, believe me, the doctor is
right, the moment will come when...
However good she is... He’s ill,
Anne. He’s ill.
ANNE and PAUL simultaneously realise that ANTHONY is in the
room. They start. Feeling of awkwardness.
ANNE
Dad. What are you doing, standing
there? Come and sit down. Come on.
He doesn’t respond. Who are they talking about? Him?
ANNE (CONT’D)
Dad...
Pause.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Come on, Dad.
Pause. ANNE gets up and leads him to the table.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Come and sit down.
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Scene 37 - Dinner Table Tensions
LATER: ANTHONY is sitting down. The awkwardness is palpable.
Nobody knows what to say. Did he hear them? PAUL attempts to
restart the conversation.
PAUL
So, it went well?
Forced cheerfulness from ANNE.
ANNE
Yes. It went very well. Don’t you
agree, Dad?
ANTHONY
What?
ANNE
You made her laugh a lot.
ANTHONY
Did I?
ANNE
Yes. She told me she thought you
were charming. That you had your
ways, but that you were charming.
(MORE)
THE FATHER - FINAL 51
44A CONTINUED: 44A
ANNE (CONT'D)
She’s coming back tomorrow morning.
To start working here.
Brief pause.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Like a bit more?
ANTHONY
I would. It’s good, this chicken.
Don’t you think? Where’d you buy
it?
ANNE
Downstairs. Why?
ANTHONY
No reason. It’s good.
ANNE
Paul?
PAUL
No, thanks.
He pours himself another glass of wine.
PAUL (CONT’D)
Is she doing full days? I mean...
ANNE
Yes. Till six.
PAUL
And then?
ANNE
What d’you mean?
PAUL
After six?
ANNE
I’ll be here.
Pause. PAUL addresses ANTHONY: it’s like a criticism.
PAUL
Are you satisfied?
ANTHONY
What about?
PAUL
You have a daughter who looks after
you properly. Don’t you? You’re
lucky.
THE FATHER - FINAL 52
44A CONTINUED: 44A
ANTHONY
You’re lucky too.
PAUL
You think so?
Irritated by Paul’s insinuations, ANNE gets up and takes the
chicken back to the kitchen.
ANTHONY
What’s the matter with her?
PAUL
Anne? She’s tired. Needs a bit of
sun.
ANTHONY
You need to look after her, old
man. Why don’t you go away
somewhere?
PAUL
Why? You want me to tell you why?
Brief pause.
PAUL (CONT’D)
Sometimes I wonder if you’re doing
it on purpose.
ANTHONY
Doing what?
PAUL
Nothing.
He pours himself another glass.
PAUL (CONT’D)
We had planned to go to Italy ten
days ago.
ANTHONY
Oh?
PAUL
Yes. But we had to cancel it at the
last minute. You know why?
ANTHONY
No.
PAUL
Because of your row with Angela.
ANTHONY doesn’t seem to know who he’s talking about.
THE FATHER - FINAL 53
44A CONTINUED: 44A
PAUL (CONT’D)
The woman who was looking after
you. Before Laura. Have you
forgotten?
Brief pause.
PAUL (CONT’D)
We weren’t able to go and leave you
on your own. We had to cancel our
holiday and bring you over here.
And now it seems you’re going to
stay here. For good. If I
understand correctly...
ANNE has returned; he turns to her.
PAUL (CONT’D)
He’s forgotten... Amazing.
ANNE
Stop it.
PAUL
What?
ANNE
You’re being a bit...
PAUL
A bit what?
ANNE
Sarcastic.
PAUL
Not at all, Anne. I think I’m being
very patient. Very patient. Believe
me.
ANNE
What are you trying to say?
PAUL
Nothing.
ANNE
Yes, you are, tell me. Why are you
telling me how patient you are?
PAUL
I think anyone but me...
ANNE
Yes?
The tension between them is rising.
THE FATHER - FINAL 54
44A CONTINUED: 44A
PAUL
Anyone else would have pressured
you to...
ANNE
To what?
PAUL
To do what the situation calls for.
ANNE
And that is?
PAUL
You know very well!
ANTHONY
Where’s the chicken? Did you take
the chicken away?
ANNE
Yes. Did you want some more?
ANTHONY
Yes. Is it in the kitchen?
ANNE
I’ll go and fetch it for you.
ANTHONY
No, it’s all right, I’ll go.
He gets up with his plate and steps into -
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Scene 38 - Tensions at the Dinner Table
- the kitchen. Once there, however, he can’t remember why
he’s come. He stands there, frowning, puts his plate down so
he can concentrate better.
44C INT. DINING ROOM 2 EVENING 44C
PAUL is pouring himself another glass of wine.
ANNE
Why do you say things like that in
front of him?
PAUL
What did I say?
Pause.
PAUL (CONT’D)
Anyway, he forgets everything.
THE FATHER - FINAL 55
44C CONTINUED: 44C
ANNE
That’s no excuse.
Pause.
PAUL
Listen... I totally understand your
feelings.
ANNE
No, you don’t understand.
PAUL
I do... What I don’t understand
is... I mean, you do so much for
him. I respect you for that. You
took the decision to bring him
here. And why not? But... How can I
put this? I honestly think you
ought to come up with a different
solution... He’s completely lost
it, Anne.
ANNE
Don’t talk like that.
PAUL
How do you want me to talk?
He gets up from the table, annoyed.
PAUL (CONT’D)
I’m telling the truth. We have to
find another arrangement.
ANNE
Such as?
PAUL
Putting him in an institution.
ANNE
A home?
PAUL
Yes, a nursing home.
Pause.
PAUL (CONT’D)
It’d be better for him.
ANNE
Why are you saying this to me
today? I mean, when tomorrow
morning... there’s this girl
starting and...
THE FATHER - FINAL 56
44C CONTINUED: 44C
PAUL makes a gesture of appeasement to ANNE.
PAUL
Yes, you’re right. We’ll see. Maybe
it’ll work very well with this
girl. You seem to think she’s good.
ANNE pushes him away.
ANTHONY appears in the doorway with his chicken. He’s
listening to the conversation. But neither of them has
noticed him.
PAUL (CONT’D)
But, believe me, the doctor is
right, the moment will come when...
However good she is... He’s ill,
Anne. He’s ill.
ANNE and PAUL simultaneously realise that ANTHONY is in the
room. They start. Feeling of awkwardness. A reprise.
ANNE
Dad. What are you doing, standing
there? Come and sit down. Come on.
He doesn’t respond.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Dad...
Pause.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Come on, Dad.
Pause.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Come and sit down.
He looks lost and terrified by what he’s just heard. Who is
ill? ANNE gets up, but this time, ANTHONY doesn’t allow
himself to be led to the table. He leaves the room without
saying anything and heads towards his bedroom.
ANNE and PAUL look at one another, very embarrassed.
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Scene 39 - Tender Reflections
ANNE sits on the edge of Anthony’s bed. He’s just gone to
sleep. He looks peaceful. ANNE strokes his cheek tenderly.
It’s like the strangling scene. But this time, she gets up
and leaves the room, like a mother who’s just put her child
to bed.
THE FATHER - FINAL 57
46 DELETED 46
47 INT. OFFICE 2 DAY 47
Anne is sitting at her desk, lost in thought. She holds the
DOCTOR’s card in her hand and considers it carefully.
A long hesitation. She sits, turning the card around,
pensive.
Finally, she decides to dial a number.
On the other end of the line, we hear the muzak from the
waiting room. She’s holding the receiver away from her ear.
She stares into space. Then her attention is attracted to the
light reflections on the wall. There’s a crystal pyramid
placed on her desk, and the light going through it reflects
on the opposite wall as a luminous constellation. She takes
the pyramid in her hands and plays with the reflections,
which now show on her thoughtful and worried face.
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Scene 40 - Fleeting Joy
ESTABLISHING SHOT of the same space: but with less furniture.
Dawn light. LUCY’s painting is no longer hanging on the wall.
There are packing cases, which may explain why the flat is
virtually empty.
The muzak from the previous scene runs over these SHOTS.
It stops abruptly as the DOCTOR’s VOICE comes over the line,
saying: “Doctor Odgers speaking...:
Then, when there’s no answer, he goes on: “Hello? Hello?”
49A INT. BEDROOM 3 MORNING 49A
ANTHONY opens his bedroom curtains. It’s morning.
He looks out at the street. What he sees is the same quiet
London street as before. This seems to reassure him.
Outside, a CHILD is playing with a plastic bag. He watches
him attentively, as fascinated as if he were trying to
uncover some mystery... He smiles at this vision. But then
his smile brutally disappears.
THE FATHER - FINAL 58
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Scene 41 - Morning Confusion
ANTHONY moves down the corridor in his pyjamas, heading for
the kitchen.
His attention is caught by the brightly-coloured chairs from
the surgery, which are now in the hallway.
ANTHONY
Where are these from?
ANNE’s VOICE is heard, calling him in the corridor.
ANNE (V.O.)
Dad? Are you up already? Did you
sleep well?
But he doesn’t answer. Something about the flat is different.
Puzzled, he moves on to inspect -
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Scene 42 - Confrontation in Confusion
- the living room. He sees the packing cases. Is ANNE finally
moving to Paris?
ANTHONY looks at the wall. LUCY’s painting is no longer here.
Once again we hear ANNE’s VOICE as she busies herself in the
kitchen, preparing breakfast prior to the meeting with LAURA.
ANNE (V.O.)
Shall I get you some coffee before
she arrives?
ANTHONY
Where’s the painting?
ANNE (V.O.)
What painting?
ANTHONY
Lucy’s.
ANNE (V.O.)
You’re mixing this up with your
flat. There’s never been a painting
here. Come and have your breakfast.
ANTHONY peers at the wall. There seems to be a slightly
lighter rectangle and marks perhaps made by a picture-frame.
ANTHONY
See, look, Anne... there.
He turns around, but she’s not here.
THE FATHER - FINAL 59
50 CONTINUED: 50
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Anne?
50PT3 LAURA emerges from the kitchen. She’s carrying a cup of 50PT3
coffee.
LAURA
Here’s your coffee...
ANTHONY is startled to see her.
ANTHONY
What?
LAURA
Don’t let it get cold...
ANTHONY
Where’s Anne?
LAURA
She went out.
ANTHONY
Really? Already?
LAURA
Yes.
ANTHONY
What time is it?
LAURA
She’ll be back soon. At the end of
the day. I’m going to look for your
medication.
ANTHONY
No. Wait.
LAURA
I’ll be back. I’m just going to
look for your medication.
She leaves. He seems troubled. He realises he doesn’t have
his watch.
ANTHONY
Shit. Honestly.
He suddenly becomes aware he’s in his pyjamas. He tries to
arrange himself a bit before she gets back.
He gets his armchair and moves it and sits in it, pretending
to be comfortable with this uncomfortable situation.
50PT4 She comes in with a glass of water and his medication. 50PT4
THE FATHER - FINAL 60
50 CONTINUED: 50
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
What time is it?
LAURA
Time for your medication. Here we
are. Best to take them now. Then
it’s done. Don’t you think? There
are three today. This little blue
one...
It’s as if she’s speaking to a child, which irritates
ANTHONY.
LAURA (CONT’D)
That’s the one you like. Your
little blue pill. Look, it’s a
pretty colour, isn’t it?
ANTHONY
Can I ask you a question?
LAURA
Yes.
ANTHONY
Are you a nun?
LAURA
No.
ANTHONY
Then why are you speaking to me as
if I were retarded?
LAURA
Me?
ANTHONY
Yes.
LAURA
But I’m not...
ANTHONY
“Your little blue pill.” “Your
little blue pill.”
LAURA
I’m sorry. I didn’t think you...
ANTHONY
It’s really unpleasant. You’ll see
when you get to my age. Which’ll
happen sooner than you think, by
the way.
THE FATHER - FINAL 61
50 CONTINUED: 50
LAURA
I apologise. I... It won’t happen
again.
ANTHONY mimics her.
ANTHONY
“Your little blue pill.”
She hands him the glass of water.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Have you noticed anything?
LAURA
What about?
ANTHONY
What do you think? About my flat!
LAURA
No. What about it?
ANTHONY
It’s changed.
LAURA
You think so?
ANTHONY
Yes. These chairs, for instance.
There. Who put them there?
He’s referring to the brightly-coloured chairs in the
corridor.
LAURA
I don’t know. Your daughter, I
imagine.
ANTHONY
Obviously. My daughter...
Obviously... All the same, it’s
extraordinary! Not even to ask my
opinion. I... Do you know what’s
being planned? For this flat?
LAURA
No.
ANTHONY
Well, I do. I keep my eyes open. I
know everything.
Pause.
THE FATHER - FINAL 62
50 CONTINUED: 50
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
By the way, I wanted to apologise
if I was a little... Last time we
met...
LAURA
No problem. Your daughter warned
me. She told me you had your ways.
She gives him a dazzling smile. He watches her, fascinated.
ANTHONY
It’s amazing how like Lucy you
look. My other daughter. Not Anne,
no. The other one. The one I love.
LAURA
Anne told me what happened to her.
I’m sorry. I didn’t know.
ANTHONY
Didn’t know what?
LAURA
About her accident.
ANTHONY
What accident?
LAURA
What?
ANTHONY
What are you talking about?
LAURA
Nothing...
Pause. LAURA realises ANTHONY’s forgotten his daughter is
gone. She tries to change the subject.
LAURA (CONT’D)
Are you taking your medication?
Then we’ll go and get dressed.
ANTHONY
You see?
LAURA
What?
ANTHONY
You’re speaking to me as if I were
retarded.
LAURA
No, I’m not.
THE FATHER - FINAL 63
50 CONTINUED: 50
ANTHONY
You are!
LAURA
I’m not, I...
ANTHONY
“And then we’ll go and get
dressed...” “Your little blue
pill.”
Pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Thing is, I’m very intelligent. You
need to bear that in mind, d’you
understand?
LAURA
Yes, I’ll... bear it in mind.
ANTHONY
Thank you.
Pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
It’s true. I’m very intelligent...
Sometimes, I even surprise myself.
Memory like an elephant.
ANTHONY wants to make himself absolutely clear.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
You know, the animal.
LAURA
Yes, yes.
He drinks his glass of water without taking his medication.
LAURA (CONT’D)
You’ve forgotten your pills!
He looks at them in the hollow of his hand.
ANTHONY
Oh, yes, so I did... What are they
doing there?
LAURA
I’ll go and get you another glass
of water.
THE FATHER - FINAL 64
50 CONTINUED: 50
ANTHONY
No, no. Don’t bother. I’ll swallow
them with... You’ll see. With the
coffee.
LAURA
Are you sure?
ANTHONY
Positive. Look. Here.
He begins what seems to him the equivalent of a magic trick.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
You’ll see. Are you watching? Watch
carefully. I stick them in my gob.
Watch, there they go, hey presto,
they’re in my mouth. Did you see?
Did you see? Did you see?
LAURA
Yes, yes. I... I’m watching.
ANTHONY
Good. And now, the coffee. Watch
carefully... Hey presto.
He swallows the pills.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
The job is done.
LAURA
Bravo.
ANTHONY
I worked in the circus a bit when I
was young.
LAURA
Did you?
ANTHONY
Yes. I was quite talented.
Especially at conjuring tricks.
Would you like me to show you a
little magic?
LAURA
Let’s get dressed first.
ANTHONY
Now?
LAURA
Yes.
THE FATHER - FINAL 65
50 CONTINUED: 50
ANTHONY
Oh, no, not now...
He’s spoken like a child.
LAURA
Yes.
ANTHONY
Oh, no.
LAURA
Yes.
ANTHONY
What’s the point? I’ll only have to
put my pyjamas back on tonight,
won’t I? Might as well save some
time.
LAURA
I see what you mean. But if you
stay in your pyjamas, we won’t be
able to go out.
ANTHONY
Where d’you want to go?
LAURA
The park. It’s a nice day.
50PT5 Suddenly, the MAN walks in. 50PT5
He also has a cup of coffee in
his hand.
MAN
Everything all right?
The MAN’s sudden appearance has unnerved ANTHONY.
LAURA
Fine. We were going to get dressed.
ANTHONY
But...
LAURA
Are you coming with me?
ANTHONY can’t understand what this MAN is doing in his flat.
He thought ANNE was living with PAUL. The MAN has an air of
menace.
MAN
Everything all right, Anthony?
ANTHONY is rooted to the spot. He doesn’t answer.
THE FATHER - FINAL 66
50 CONTINUED: 50
MAN (CONT’D)
Something the matter?
ANTHONY
No, no...
MAN
I just wanted a word with you. In
fact.
ANTHONY
With me?
MAN
Yes.
LAURA
In that case, I’ll... I’ll go and
get your things ready.
ANTHONY is alarmed.
ANTHONY
No, wait a minute...
LAURA
I’ll be back.
ANTHONY
Don’t leave me on my own.
LAURA
I’ll be in the next room. I’ll be
right back.
She leaves the room. We can see ANTHONY is intimidated, as if
this stranger’s presence frightened him.
50PT6 MAN 50PT6
Can I ask you a question?
ANTHONY
Yes.
The MAN moves closer to him. There’s something threatening
about his approach.
MAN
But I want an honest answer.
Nothing fancy... Can you do that
for me?
ANTHONY
Yes.
THE FATHER - FINAL 67
50 CONTINUED: 50
MAN
Well, then... how much longer do
you intend to hang around getting
on everybody’s tits?
ANTHONY
Me?
MAN
Yes, you. I’d like to know your
opinion.
Brief pause.
MAN (CONT’D)
I mean, do you intend to go on
ruining your daughter’s life? Or is
it too much to hope that you’ll
behave reasonably in the
foreseeable future?
ANTHONY
But... What are you talking about?
MAN
About you, Anthony. About you. Your
attitude.
He gives him a little slap.
ANTHONY
What are you doing? I can’t allow
this.
MAN
You can’t allow it?
ANTHONY
No.
MAN
Suppose I do it again, then what
will you do?
ANTHONY
I’ll...
MAN
Yes?
ANTHONY
You’ll have to take me on.
Physically.
THE FATHER - FINAL 68
50 CONTINUED: 50
MAN
Are you saying that to tempt me?
See, me as well, there’s something
I can’t allow. Getting on
everybody’s tits. Past a certain
age.
The MAN smiles and gives him a second little slap.
ANTHONY
Stop it! Do you hear me? Stop this
at once.
The MAN still has a broad, menacing smile on his face.
ANTHONY, in front of him, looks helpless.
MAN
Yes. I won’t put up with that. I
find that totally inappropriate.
He gives him a third little slap.
ANTHONY
Stop that! I told you to stop it!
ANTHONY covers his face. For a moment, he’s in this
humiliating defensive position. The MAN continues to smile.
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Scene 43 - Evening Confusion
ANNE is smoking her cigarette at the window (as we saw her in
scene 35). We seem to be in the follow-on to that scene.
Suddenly, she hears her father’s VOICE.
ANTHONY (O.S.)
Anne!
She hurries into the living room.
52 INT. LIVING ROOM 3 EVENING 52
ANTHONY is in the same defensive position, hunched over. In
front of him is PAUL, rather than the MAN, looking at him
uncomprehendingly.
ANNE
Dad? Dad, what’s the matter?
No answer. ANNE turns to PAUL.
ANNE (CONT’D)
What’s the matter with him?
THE FATHER - FINAL 69
52 CONTINUED: 52
PAUL
I don’t know.
She approaches her father, who maintains the same position,
as if afraid of being slapped.
ANNE
Is it because of your watch? Dad,
is that the reason? I found it,
look! Shush. Come on, don’t cry.
As she speaks, she’s holding him in her arms and stroking his
hair. She looks at PAUL with a concerned expression.
ANNE (CONT’D)
You’ll be all right now. Mm? Shush.
You’ll be all right. You’ll be all
right. Let’s eat our chicken. Shall
we? You like chicken, don’t you?
ANTHONY
But what time is it?
ANNE
It’s seven o’clock. Time to eat.
ANTHONY
Seven o’clock in the evening?
ANNE
Yes, Dad.
ANTHONY
But I thought it was morning. I’ve
only just got up. Look, I’m still
in my pyjamas.
ANNE
No, it’s evening and I’ve cooked
you a chicken. Come on, let’s eat.
Come on. Little daddy. Little
daddy.
He seems very lost. She tries to console him. Then, she looks
at PAUL.
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Scene 44 - Silent Struggles
ANNE is in the bathroom, while PAUL is waiting for her in the
bedroom.
She is brushing her teeth in front of the mirror. Suddenly
she stops... She looks exhausted and unhappy. Then, she steps
back into the bedroom.
THE FATHER - FINAL 70
54 INT. MAIN BEDROOM 3 EVENING 54
PAUL is there, already in bed. ANNE goes to sit on the bed.
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Scene 45 - A Midnight Call
ANTHONY is in bed. It’s the middle of the night. Suddenly, he
hears VOICES.
VOICE
Dad? Dad, are you asleep?
He sits up and turns on the light. There’s no one there.
ANTHONY
Anne?
VOICE
No, Dad, it’s me.
ANTHONY
Lucy?
He gets up, puts on his dressing-gown and leaves the room.
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Scene 46 - A Desperate Search
The flat is in darkness. But he hears a SOUND, coming from a
cupboard at the end of the corridor. He’s intrigued. He
approaches and opens the cupboard: but the door leads him
into another corridor, which ANTHONY seems to be seeing for
the first time. It’s a hospital corridor.
56B INT. HOSPITAL CORRIDOR NIGHT 56B
He looks up and down the corridor, bewildered. All the sounds
and sights of a hospital at night make it undeniable that
he’s in hospital. He looks to and fro, rooted to the spot.
VOICE
Dad?
ANTHONY
Lucy? Are you there?
He moves slowly down the corridor. Then, through a half-open
door, he sees a young woman stretched out on a bed. The young
woman turns her head and looks at him. It’s LUCY.
LUCY
Dad...
THE FATHER - FINAL 71
57A DELETED 57A
57B DELETED 57B
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Scene 47 - The Cupboard's Secret
Same stationary empty SHOT. This time, there’s hardly any
furniture at all.
59 INT. BATHROOM 4 MORNING 59
ANTHONY splashes water over his face and looks at himself in
the mirror. He uses the water to tidy his hair. He remembers
his dream and decides to investigate the cupboard.
60 INT. CORRIDOR 4 MORNING 60
He approaches the cupboard he dreamed about. He’s reluctant
to open it. Then he decides to do it. It’s a broom cupboard.
ANNE (O.S.)
Ah, you’re up...
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Scene 48 - Morning Jitters
ANNE is cooking breakfast. There’s coffee already by his
place at the table.
ANTHONY
Morning, darling...
ANNE
Sit down. It’s all ready. Are you
hungry?
ANNE puts a plate of toast and eggs in front of him.
ANNE (CONT’D)
You have a visitor today. Remember?
Anthony starts eating his breakfast. He looks baffled.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Dad, you do remember?
ANTHONY
How could I forget? You never stop
talking about it.
ANNE
She shouldn’t be long.
THE FATHER - FINAL 72
61 CONTINUED: 61
ANTHONY
This early?
ANNE
Yes.
ANTHONY
I dreamt about her last night.
ANNE
Laura?
ANTHONY
Yes. Well, I think I did. I can see
her face.
ANNE smiles at him.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
You know, she really reminded me of
your sister...
ANNE
Laura? Yes. That’s what you said
yesterday.
She sits in front of him.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Anyway, if you like her, I’m happy.
She seems really nice. I mean,
sweet. And efficient. She’ll look
after you well.
ANTHONY
Yes. I like her.
ANNE
Good. We’d better get you dressed
before she arrives, don’t you
think?
ANTHONY
Who?
ANNE
Laura. Your new carer. The one you
like.
ANTHONY
Ah, yes, yes, yes...
ANNE
Better to have a jacket on when she
arrives.
THE FATHER - FINAL 73
61 CONTINUED: 61
ANTHONY
And trousers.
They laugh.
ANNE
She very much enjoyed meeting you
yesterday, you know. I must say you
did quite a little number on her.
ANTHONY
I did?
ANNE
Yes. You convinced her you knew how
to dance. That you were good at tap
dancing.
ANTHONY
Me?
ANNE
Yes.
ANNE’s laughing again; ANTHONY has a childlike smile.
ANTHONY
And what did she say?
ANNE
She said she hoped you’d give her a
demonstration. One day.
ANTHONY
Funny. I didn’t even know I knew
how to tap dance. Did you?
ANNE
No.
ANTHONY
Hidden talents.
ANNE
Apparently, yes.
He laughs. The bell rings. She stands.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Ah.
ANTHONY
Is that her?
ANNE
I expect so.
THE FATHER - FINAL 74
61 CONTINUED: 61
ANTHONY
But... so soon? I’m not ready. I’m
not dressed.
ANNE
Never mind. You can get dressed
later.
ANTHONY
No. I... I have to put some
trousers on, Anne. Anne, I’m not
properly dressed.
ANNE
It doesn’t matter.
She’s heading for the door.
ANTHONY
Yes, it does matter.
ANNE
She’s outside the door.
ANTHONY
Anne.
ANNE
What?
ANTHONY
Don’t leave me like this. What’s
she going to think of me? I have to
get dressed. Where are my clothes?
ANNE
Dad. Why do you always make
everything so difficult? You can
get dressed later. There’s nothing
to worry about.
ANTHONY
I’ll be mortified...
ANNE
No, you won’t...
ANTHONY
I will. Look, I’m in my pyjamas. I
have to put my trousers on.
The doorbell rings again. ANNE goes to open the door.
THE FATHER - FINAL 75
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Scene 49 - A Disturbing Encounter
He arranges himself behind the breakfast table, as far as
possible so as not to be seen in his pyjamas.
We can hear the WOMEN speaking in the hallway.
ANNE (O.S.)
Hello.
LAURA (O.S.)
Hello. Not too late, am I?
ANNE (O.S.)
No, no. Not at all. Come in. Come
in.
LAURA (O.S.)
Thank you.
They step into the kitchen, but to ANTHONY’s amazement, it’s
not LAURA, it’s the WOMAN.
ANTHONY
But... who’s this?
ANNE
Here we are. We’re just getting
dressed...
WOMAN
Hello, Anthony.
ANTHONY
But, Anne... it’s not her.
ANNE
Dad.
She turns to the WOMAN.
ANNE (CONT’D)
Would you like something to drink?
Coffee?
WOMAN
No, thanks.
ANNE
Have you had breakfast? I...
ANTHONY
I don’t want her. Where’s the one I
like? Where is she?
THE FATHER - FINAL 76
62 CONTINUED: 62
ANNE
But, Dad... what are you talking
about? Say hello to Laura.
ANTHONY
There’s something that doesn’t make
sense about this. It doesn’t make
sense!
He’s terrified by the illogicality of the situation.
WOMAN
Do you remember me? We met
yesterday.
Pause.
WOMAN (CONT’D)
We were starting to get to know one
another...
Pause. ANTHONY seems panicked. He takes a step backwards.
WOMAN (CONT’D)
And I told you I’d come back...
Just to see the way you did things
and whether I could help you.
Pause.
WOMAN (CONT’D)
Do you remember?
Pause. He obviously doesn’t understand what’s going on.
Panicked, he leaves the room and plunges into his bedroom.
ANNE looks sadly and apologetically at the WOMAN.
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Scene 50 - A Tender Goodbye
Clearly a different bedroom.
ANTHONY is sitting on the bed. He’s staring into space. He’s
trying to understand what’s going on around him.
Suddenly, there’s a knock at the door and ANNE appears.
Oddly, she’s wearing a coat.
ANNE
Dad? Can I talk to you ?
She comes into the room. Behind her is the WOMAN, who also
comes into ANTHONY’s room.
ANNE sits down on the bed beside ANTHONY.
THE FATHER - FINAL 77
63A CONTINUED: 63A
ANNE (CONT’D)
How shall I put this?
ANTHONY has no idea who she’s talking about.
ANNE (CONT’D)
You remember at first, when you
came to our place, it was... I
mean, it was... a stop gap. Because
you’d fallen out with Angela.
But... I’m wondering if it wouldn’t
be... better to...
Emotion prevents her from finishing her sentence. She
searches for some less direct way of approaching the subject.
ANNE (CONT’D)
What do you think of this room?
It’s rather nice, isn’t it?
She stands.
WOMAN
It looks on to the park.
ANNE
Does it?
ANNE opens the curtains. You can see out on to a park.
ANNE (CONT’D)
It’s very nice. It’s like being in
a hotel? Don’t you think?
WOMAN
That’s what all the residents say.
ANNE turns to her father and takes her courage in both hands.
ANNE
I think you might be better off
here.
ANTHONY looks completely lost.
ANTHONY
Where?
She sits next to him.
ANNE
Here. I was wondering if it
wouldn’t be more reassuring...
nicer for you if we came to a joint
decision that you should move in
here.
THE FATHER - FINAL 78
63A CONTINUED: 63A
Brief pause.
ANNE (CONT’D)
What do you think?
ANTHONY
What about you? What are you going
to do? Where are you going to
sleep? Which room?
ANNE
If you remember, I’m going to go
and live in Paris.
ANTHONY
No, you’re not.
ANNE
I am. Remember? I told you about
it... Remember?
ANTHONY
But you said... Are you sure?
ANNE
Yes.
ANTHONY has tears in his eyes.
ANTHONY
You told me you were staying
here... with me...
ANNE
No, I have to go. It’s important. I
already explained it to you. But
I’ll come and see you. Occasional
weekends.
ANTHONY
What about me?
ANNE
You’ll stay here. In London.
ANTHONY is like a lost child.
ANTHONY
All on my own?
Pause. ANNE’s choked up, unable to speak.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
What about your sister? Where’s
she?
THE FATHER - FINAL 79
63A CONTINUED: 63A
ANNE
Dad...
He’s having difficulty holding back a sob.
ANTHONY
What?
Pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
If you knew how much I missed
her...
ANNE
I do too, Dad, I miss her too. We
all miss her.
ANTHONY realises that ANNE is moved. Immediately, he
rediscovers his role as a father: he strokes her cheek, as if
he wanted to console her. ANNE smiles. She closes her eyes
and presses her father’s hand against her cheek.
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Scene 51 - Departure from the Hospital
Same stationary empty SHOT. We are now clearly in a hospital.
63C EXT. HOSPITAL PARK DAY 63C
ANNE comes out of the building. She walks away, leaving it
behind.
63D EXT. STREET OUTSIDE HOSPITAL DAY 63D
Leaving the gates, ANNE hails a taxi which stops in front of
her.
As she gets in, she takes a last look back at the hospital.
63E INT. TAXI DAY 63E
The taxi leaves.
ANNE settles into the taxi. She’s fighting back tears.
63F DELETED 63F
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Scene 52 - Awakening in Confusion
ANTHONY wakes peacefully from his siesta. It takes him some
time to work out where he is.
THE FATHER - FINAL 80
64 CONTINUED: 64
There are medications on the bedside table. His watch is not
there. His hand goes to his wrist. He’s lost it again... He
fumes.
He gets up.
ANTHONY
Anne?
He’s wanting to leave his bedroom to go to the kitchen.
65 INT. HOSPITAL CORRIDOR DAY 65
He pushes open the door and comes upon the hospital corridor
he saw in his nightmare.
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Scene 53 - A Moment of Vulnerability
He goes back into his room.
66PT2 66PT2
Behind him, the WOMAN comes in. She’s wearing a white coat.
WOMAN
Did you sleep well?
ANTHONY
What am I doing here?
WOMAN
It’s time.
ANTHONY
I didn’t ask about the time. I
asked you what I was doing here.
Where’s Anne?
WOMAN
Look, I’ve brought you your
medication.
ANTHONY
Why don’t you just fuck off with
your medication? What are you, a
nurse?
WOMAN
Yes.
ANTHONY looks at her and realizes she has all the indications
of being a nurse.
ANTHONY
Oh, you are... Oh, so that’s it...
Oh, I see. You are a nurse.
THE FATHER - FINAL 81
66 CONTINUED: 66
WOMAN
Yes.
ANTHONY
Oh, I see. That’s what I was
thinking. You’re the type. Typical
nurse. So what are you doing here?
WOMAN
Sorry?
ANTHONY
What are you doing here?
WOMAN
Looking after you.
ANTHONY
You don’t say! Looking after me?
First I’ve heard of it. Since when?
WOMAN
For quite a few weeks now.
ANTHONY
For quite a few weeks? I’m happy to
hear it. Amazing! Nobody tells me
anything in this house. But I
thought we were getting a new one.
WOMAN
A new what?
ANTHONY
Nurse. A new nurse.
Pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
The one who looks a bit like Lucy.
My other daughter.
Brief pause.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
I met her the other day. She came
here... didn’t she?
WOMAN
Will you take your medication?
ANTHONY
She was supposed to start this
morning. Laura. Wasn’t she?
THE FATHER - FINAL 82
66 CONTINUED: 66
WOMAN
I think you’re getting mixed up,
Anthony.
ANTHONY
The one who reminded me of Lucy...
The WOMAN is getting impatient.
WOMAN
Right.
ANTHONY
Yes, all right, fine. Let’s take
this medication. It’s not timed to
the minute, is it?
He takes a look at his wrist and realises he’s not wearing
his watch.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Where is Anne?
WOMAN
Your daughter isn’t here, Anthony.
ANTHONY
Oh? Where is she? Has she gone out?
WOMAN
If you remember, she lives in
Paris.
ANTHONY
What? No, no, she thought about
going. But in the end, it didn’t
happen.
WOMAN
She’s been living there for several
months.
ANTHONY
My daughter? In Paris? No, listen,
they don’t even speak English.
The WOMAN shows him a postcard, which is on the bedside
table.
WOMAN
Look, yesterday, this postcard she
sent you. We read it together.
Don’t you remember?
ANTHONY
What is this nonsense?
THE FATHER - FINAL 83
66 CONTINUED: 66
WOMAN
Look.
He reads it. Then he turns it over and recognises the French
poster we first saw in his kitchen.
WOMAN (CONT’D)
I tell you this every day. She
lives in Paris because she met a
man called Paul, who she now lives
with. But she comes to see you
sometimes.
ANTHONY
Anne?
WOMAN
Yes. Occasionally she comes for the
weekend. She comes here. You go for
a walk in the park. She tells you
about her new life, what she’s up
to. The other day, she brought you
some tea. Because you like tea.
ANTHONY
Me? I detest tea. I only drink
coffee.
66PT3 The MAN comes in. He’s also dressed in white. ANTHONY is 66PT3
frightened when he sees him.
MAN
Everything all right?
WOMAN
Fine. We were just going to get
dressed.
MAN
Everything all right?
ANTHONY doesn’t answer. The MAN hands a document to the
WOMAN, which she signs and hands back to him.
WOMAN
There you are.
MAN
Thanks. Have a nice day.
WOMAN
See you later.
He leaves.
66PT4 ANTHONY 66PT4
Him, that one... Who’s he?
THE FATHER - FINAL 84
66 CONTINUED: 66
WOMAN
Who?
ANTHONY
Him... Who just left.
WOMAN
That’s Bill.
ANTHONY
Bill?
WOMAN
Yes.
ANTHONY
Are you sure?
WOMAN
Yes. Why?
ANTHONY
No reason. But... how shall I put
this? What’s he doing here? I
mean... in my flat. Do I know him?
WOMAN
Yes. He’s Bill. You see him every
day.
ANTHONY
Do I? And you...
WOMAN
What?
ANTHONY
Sorry to ask this, but... I mean,
you... you... Who are you, exactly?
WOMAN
I’m Catherine.
ANTHONY
Catherine. That’s right. Yes, yes,
yes. Catherine. And he’s Bill.
WOMAN
Yes.
ANTHONY
Right. Right. And... What about me?
She looks at him, not sure she’s understood.
ANTHONY (CONT’D)
Me... Who exactly am I?
THE FATHER - FINAL 85
66 CONTINUED: 66
She smiles tenderly at him.
WOMAN
You? You’re Anthony.
ANTHONY
Anthony?
WOMAN
Yes.
ANTHONY
Are you sure?
WOMAN
Yes.
ANTHONY
Anthony? Nice name, Anthony...
Don’t you think?
WOMAN
It’s a very nice name.
ANTHONY
My mother gave it to me. I imagine.
Did you know her?
WOMAN
Who?
ANTHONY
My mother.
WOMAN
No.
66PT5 ANTHONY 66PT5
She was so... She had very big
eyes. It was... I can see her face
now. I hope she’ll come and see me
sometimes. Mummy. Do you think? You
were saying she might come
occasionally for the weekend...
WOMAN
Your daughter?
He’s crushed by sudden grief.
ANTHONY
No, Mummy. I... I want my mummy. I
want my mummy. I want... I want to
get out of here. Have someone come
and fetch me.
THE FATHER - FINAL 86
66 CONTINUED: 66
WOMAN
Now. Shush...
ANTHONY
I want my mummy. I want her to come
and fetch me. I want to go back
home.
ANTHONY starts sobbing. The WOMAN is surprised: she hadn’t in
any way anticipated this grief.
WOMAN
What’s the matter with you?
Anthony... Come here. Come to me.
Tell me what the matter is...
ANTHONY
I...
WOMAN
Yes?
ANTHONY
I feel as if... I feel as if I’m
losing all my leaves, one after
another.
WOMAN
Your leaves? What are you talking
about?
ANTHONY
The branches! And the wind... I
don’t understand what’s happening
any more. Do you understand what’s
happening? All this business about
the flat? You don’t know where you
can put your head down. I know
where my watch is. On my wrist.
That I do know. For the journey. If
not, I wouldn’t know when I might
have to...
WOMAN
First we’ll get dressed, shall we?
ANTHONY
Yes.
WOMAN
We’ll get dressed and then we’ll go
for a walk in the park, shall we?
ANTHONY
Yes.
THE FATHER - FINAL 87
66 CONTINUED: 66
WOMAN
Good. All the trees. And the
leaves. And then we’ll come back
here and have something to eat.
Then you’ll have a siesta. All
right? And if you’re on form, we’ll
take another little walk. In the
park. Just the two of us. Because
it’s a nice day. Isn’t it?
ANTHONY
Yes.
WOMAN
The sun’s out. We have to make the
most of it. It doesn’t happen every
day. It never lasts very long when
the weather’s as good as this, does
it? So let’s get dressed, is that
all right?
He clings to her.
ANTHONY
No.
WOMAN
Now. Don’t be a baby. Come on. Come
with me. All right? Come on. Easy.
Easy. Shush. Shush. You’ll be all
right in a minute. You’ll be all
right. Shush...
He calms down, buried in her arms. She rocks him gently. He
looks like a child in its mother’s arms.
The CAMERA PANS ROUND to the window.
66A EXT. HOSPITAL PARK DAY 66A
The park.
The wind blows through the trees, rustling the leaves. The
image HOLDS for some time.
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Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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anne |
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While Anne's character arc is rich and emotionally resonant, it could benefit from clearer moments of transformation. The progression from her initial determination to her breaking point feels somewhat abrupt, and her journey towards self-acceptance could be more gradual. Additionally, the screenplay could explore her relationships with other characters more deeply, providing opportunities for Anne to receive support and guidance, which would enhance her development. | To improve Anne's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that highlight her interactions with supportive characters, such as friends or professionals, who can help her navigate her emotional struggles. This would provide a contrast to her isolation and emphasize her growth. Additionally, include moments of reflection where Anne can articulate her feelings, allowing the audience to witness her internal journey more clearly. Gradually building her resilience and independence throughout the screenplay will create a more satisfying and believable character evolution. |
anthony |
|
While Anthony's character arc effectively portrays the struggles of aging and memory loss, it risks becoming overly predictable. The emotional beats are powerful, but they could benefit from more nuanced interactions that explore the complexities of his relationships, particularly with Anne. Additionally, the reliance on his cognitive decline as a primary driver of conflict may limit the depth of his character development. | To enhance Anthony's character arc, consider incorporating more varied interactions that showcase his personality beyond his struggles with memory loss. Introduce moments where he displays humor, wisdom, or unexpected insights, allowing the audience to connect with him on a deeper level. Additionally, explore the dynamics of his past relationships, perhaps through flashbacks or conversations that reveal his history and regrets. This could add layers to his character and create a more compelling narrative that balances his vulnerabilities with moments of strength and resilience. |
paul | Paul's character arc follows his journey from a calm and supportive figure to a more confrontational and skeptical individual as the pressures of caregiving mount. Initially, he provides stability and comfort to Anne and tries to understand Anthony's emotional state. However, as the story progresses, he becomes increasingly impatient and confrontational, struggling to balance his concerns for Anthony's well-being with the emotional toll it takes on Anne and their relationship. By the end of the feature, Paul learns to reconcile his pragmatic approach with empathy, finding a way to support both Anne and Anthony without losing sight of his own emotional needs. | While Paul's character arc is compelling, it risks becoming one-dimensional if he solely embodies skepticism and confrontation without moments of vulnerability or growth. His initial calm demeanor may be overshadowed by his later confrontational nature, which could alienate the audience from his character. Additionally, the transition from supportive to confrontational may feel abrupt without sufficient buildup or context. | To improve Paul's character arc, consider incorporating moments that showcase his vulnerability and emotional struggles throughout the screenplay. Allow him to express his fears and insecurities about the caregiving situation, which can create a more relatable and multi-dimensional character. Additionally, provide opportunities for Paul to demonstrate growth by finding ways to communicate his concerns without resorting to confrontation. This could involve moments of collaboration with Anne and Anthony, where he learns to balance his pragmatic approach with emotional support, ultimately leading to a more nuanced resolution. |
woman | Throughout the feature, the Woman undergoes a significant character arc as she transitions from a daughter grappling with her father's memory loss to a figure of strength and resilience. Initially, she is portrayed as anxious and uncertain, struggling to connect with a father who no longer recognizes her. As the story progresses, she learns to navigate the complexities of his condition, finding ways to communicate and bond with him despite the challenges. Her journey is marked by moments of frustration and heartache, but ultimately, she emerges as a pillar of support for Anthony, embodying hope and love. By the end of the feature, she has not only strengthened her relationship with her father but also gained a deeper understanding of her own emotional resilience and capacity for compassion. | While the Woman's character arc is compelling, it could benefit from more depth and complexity. Currently, her role primarily revolves around her relationship with Anthony, which, while important, may limit her character's development. The screenplay could explore her personal struggles, aspirations, and the impact of her father's condition on her life beyond caregiving. This would create a more well-rounded character and allow the audience to connect with her on multiple levels. | To enhance the Woman's character arc, consider incorporating subplots that delve into her personal life, such as her career aspirations, relationships, or the emotional toll of caregiving. This could include scenes that showcase her moments of vulnerability, frustration, or even joy outside of her interactions with Anthony. Additionally, introducing a mentor or support system for her could provide her with guidance and perspective, further enriching her journey. By allowing her to experience growth and self-discovery alongside her efforts to care for Anthony, the screenplay can create a more dynamic and relatable character. |
laura | Laura's character arc begins with her as a mysterious and composed caregiver, initially struggling to connect with Anthony and navigate the family's complexities. As the story progresses, she becomes more empathetic and understanding, learning to balance her professional duties with genuine emotional connections. Through her experiences with Anthony and the family, Laura confronts her own uncertainties and insecurities, ultimately evolving into a more confident and compassionate caregiver. By the end of the feature, she not only establishes a strong bond with Anthony but also gains a deeper understanding of her own role and purpose, leading to personal growth and fulfillment. | While Laura's character arc shows potential for depth and growth, it risks becoming predictable if not executed with nuance. The initial mystery surrounding her character could be better utilized to create more tension and conflict throughout the story. Additionally, her slight patronization may alienate the audience if not balanced with moments of vulnerability and relatability. The arc could benefit from more specific challenges that force Laura to confront her own biases and assumptions, allowing for a more dynamic transformation. | To improve Laura's character arc, consider introducing specific challenges that test her professionalism and empathy, such as a critical incident with Anthony that forces her to confront her own limitations. Incorporating flashbacks or personal anecdotes could provide insight into her background, motivations, and the reasons behind her initial reserve. Additionally, creating moments of vulnerability where Laura seeks support from others or questions her own abilities could enhance her relatability. Finally, ensure that her growth is reflected not only in her relationship with Anthony but also in her interactions with Anne and the broader family dynamics, allowing for a more holistic character development. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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High 'Concept' Scores Despite Variable Overall Grades | The screenplay consistently receives high scores in 'Concept' (mostly 8 or 9), suggesting a strong and engaging central idea throughout. However, the overall grade fluctuates more significantly. This indicates that while the core concept remains strong, the execution (plot, character development, emotional impact, etc.) varies from scene to scene. Consider focusing on maintaining consistent execution quality to match the consistently strong concept. |
Inverse Relationship Between Emotional Impact and Dialogue/High Stakes | Scenes with high 'Dialogue' scores (8-10) tend to have lower scores in 'Emotional Impact' (often around 7 or lower), and similarly scenes with high stakes often don't translate into emotional impact. This suggests a possible disconnect between the dialogue and its ability to elicit strong emotional responses from the audience. Perhaps the dialogue, while well-written, lacks emotional depth or impactful delivery in these scenes. Review these scenes to determine if the dialogue truly supports the intended emotional impact or if a more emotional writing style is needed. |
Clustering of 'Confusion' and 'Anxiety' Tones | The tones 'Confusion' and 'Anxiety' frequently appear together, especially in the middle section of the screenplay (scenes 10-24). While this could create a sustained sense of suspense, it risks becoming monotonous. Consider diversifying the tones to maintain audience engagement. Introduce contrasting tones to break up the pattern of anxiety and confusion. |
Emotional Impact Dips in the Middle Act | Scenes 15-22 show a notable drop in 'Emotional Impact' scores. This mid-point slump could indicate a pacing issue or a weakening of the emotional arc. Analyze these scenes to ensure that the emotional stakes are rising and the audience remains invested in the characters' journeys. Stronger conflict or character changes might be needed to improve this section's impact. Consider if this section properly serves a narrative purpose or if plot elements can be trimmed for pacing. |
High 'Plot' Scores, Despite Occasional Low 'Move Story Forward' Scores | Many scenes score highly on 'Plot' but have lower scores on 'Move Story Forward,' suggesting that while individual scenes contain plot elements, they might not always effectively advance the overall narrative. Examine these scenes to identify potential areas of streamlining, ensuring every scene actively propels the plot rather than adding unnecessary complexity. |
Correlation Between 'Character Changes' and Higher Overall Grades | Scenes with higher scores in 'Character Changes' tend to have slightly higher overall grades. This suggests that significant character development and growth contribute positively to the overall quality of the scene. Prioritize moments of character change in weaker scenes to boost their effectiveness. |
Stronger Ending, but Potential for Improved Mid-Section | The final scenes (48-53) show a consistent improvement in overall grade, particularly in scenes 50 and 51. This contrasts with the emotional lull in the middle sections. While the conclusion is strong, the screenplay's middle section requires a reassessment of the pacing and the emotional impact of the story. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a consistent ability to create scenes with emotional depth and tension. The writer shows a strong grasp of character interaction and dialogue, often using subtle cues and subtext to convey complex emotions and motivations. However, there's a recurring need to enhance plot structure, pacing, and character development beyond the emotional core. The scenes frequently excel in capturing the nuances of human relationships, but sometimes lack the broader narrative drive and structural clarity needed to elevate them to a higher level of screenwriting.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder | This book addresses plot structure, pacing, and character development, all key areas for improvement identified in the scene analyses. It will provide a structured approach to crafting compelling narratives. |
Book | 'On Writing: A Memoir of the Craft' by Stephen King | This offers insights into the craft of writing and storytelling that can inform all aspects of the screenplay. King’s experience provides practical wisdom beyond specific screenwriting techniques. |
Book | 'The Screenwriter's Bible' by David Trottier | This provides comprehensive guidance on screenwriting structure, formatting, and storytelling techniques, addressing the need for stronger structural clarity and narrative pacing. |
Screenplay | Screenplays by Aaron Sorkin ('The Social Network'), Charlie Kaufman ('Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind'), and David Mamet ('Glengarry Glen Ross') | These screenplays represent diverse styles, each excelling in dialogue, character development, and creating tension. Studying them will help the writer develop a broader range of techniques and find a unique voice within the craft. |
Video | Analysis videos on suspenseful storytelling in film and television (search YouTube for examples) | Visual examples of suspense and pacing will help the writer understand how to build tension in scenes and control narrative rhythm. |
Stories Similar to this one
Story | Explanation |
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The Father | This film explores the themes of aging, memory loss, and familial relationships, particularly focusing on a father-daughter dynamic similar to Anne and Anthony's. The narrative structure emphasizes the father's confusion and disorientation, mirroring Anthony's experiences in the screenplay. |
Still Alice | This story centers on a woman diagnosed with early-onset Alzheimer's disease and her struggles with memory loss, paralleling Anthony's confusion and the emotional toll it takes on his family, particularly his daughter. The exploration of identity and the impact of illness on relationships resonates with the screenplay's themes. |
The Notebook | This romantic drama also deals with themes of memory loss and the enduring bond between family members. The emotional struggles of the characters as they navigate the complexities of love and memory echo the tensions between Anne and Anthony in the screenplay. |
A Long Way Down | This film features characters dealing with personal crises and the complexities of relationships, similar to Anne's struggles with her father's condition and her own life choices. The blend of dark humor and poignant moments reflects the tone of the screenplay. |
The Savages | This film follows siblings who must care for their aging father, dealing with themes of responsibility, familial obligation, and the emotional strain of caregiving. The dynamics between the characters and their struggles with their father's decline parallel the relationships in the screenplay. |
The Farewell | This film explores the complexities of family dynamics and the emotional challenges of caring for an elderly relative. The cultural differences and the tension between personal desires and familial duties resonate with Anne's situation in the screenplay. |
The Lion in Winter | This historical drama showcases the fraught relationships within a family, particularly between a father and his children. The themes of power struggles, emotional manipulation, and the desire for independence reflect the tensions present in Anne and Anthony's interactions. |
The Curious Case of Benjamin Button | This film explores themes of aging and the passage of time, focusing on the relationships that evolve as characters age. The emotional depth and exploration of memory and identity resonate with the screenplay's focus on Anthony's condition and Anne's struggles. |
The Hours | This film interweaves the lives of three women across different time periods, exploring themes of mental health, existential crises, and the impact of personal choices on family. The emotional weight and character-driven narrative align with the screenplay's focus on Anne and Anthony's relationship. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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The Caregiver's Burden | Anne struggles with the emotional weight of caring for her father, Anthony, who is showing signs of confusion and memory loss. | This trope highlights the emotional and physical toll that caregiving can take on individuals, often leading to feelings of exhaustion and frustration. An example can be seen in the film 'The Father,' where the daughter grapples with her father's deteriorating mental state while trying to maintain her own life. |
Memory Loss | Anthony frequently forgets details about his life and struggles to recognize his daughter, Anne. | Memory loss is a common trope in narratives involving aging or mental decline, often used to create tension and emotional conflict. A notable example is in 'Memento,' where the protagonist suffers from short-term memory loss, leading to a fragmented narrative. |
Father-Daughter Conflict | Anne and Anthony experience tension over her desire for independence and his fear of abandonment. | This trope explores the complex dynamics between fathers and daughters, often highlighting themes of love, control, and the struggle for autonomy. An example can be found in 'Lady Bird,' where the protagonist navigates her relationship with her mother amidst her quest for independence. |
The Unreliable Narrator | Anthony's perception of reality is distorted due to his memory issues, leading to confusion about his surroundings and relationships. | An unreliable narrator creates a sense of uncertainty and intrigue, as the audience must piece together the truth from a skewed perspective. This is effectively used in 'Fight Club,' where the protagonist's mental state leads to a shocking twist. |
The Absent Parent | Anne's sister, Lucy, is mentioned but not present, highlighting the absence of another parental figure. | This trope often emphasizes the emotional void left by an absent parent, impacting the characters' relationships and development. An example is in 'The Pursuit of Happyness,' where the protagonist struggles with the absence of his partner while trying to care for his son. |
The Confused Elder | Anthony often appears disoriented and confused about his surroundings and relationships. | This trope portrays elderly characters as struggling with their mental faculties, often evoking sympathy from the audience. A well-known example is in 'Still Alice,' where the protagonist faces the challenges of early-onset Alzheimer's disease. |
The Caring Friend | Paul attempts to support Anne as she navigates her father's condition, providing a sounding board for her frustrations. | This trope highlights the importance of friendship and support systems in times of crisis. An example can be seen in 'The Fault in Our Stars,' where Hazel's friend, Kaitlyn, provides emotional support during difficult times. |
The Emotional Breakdown | Anne experiences a moment of emotional vulnerability when she accidentally breaks a cup, leading to a breakdown. | This trope often serves as a cathartic release for characters, allowing them to confront their emotions. An example is in 'A Star is Born,' where the protagonist has a breakdown after a series of overwhelming events. |
The Misunderstanding | Anthony misinterprets conversations and situations, leading to confusion and tension. | Misunderstandings can drive the plot and create conflict, often leading to humorous or dramatic moments. An example is in 'Much Ado About Nothing,' where misunderstandings lead to comedic situations and conflicts between characters. |
The Emotional Climax | The tension between Anne and Anthony reaches a peak, culminating in a moment of confrontation. | An emotional climax is a pivotal moment in a narrative where characters confront their feelings and relationships. An example can be found in 'The Notebook,' where the protagonists confront their past and feelings for each other. |
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The Emotional Toll of Alzheimer's Disease | The screenplay focuses heavily on the emotional impact of Anthony's Alzheimer's on both him and Anne. Anne's emotional exhaustion, moments of anger and despair, and ultimate act of mercy (or murder) are all direct consequences of caring for her ailing father. Anthony's confusion, fear, and moments of lucidity highlight the cruel unpredictability of the disease and its devastating effect on his sense of self and connection to his loved ones. | This theme explores the emotional burden of caring for a loved one with Alzheimer's, highlighting the challenges, frustrations, and profound sadness associated with the disease's progression. It delves into the complexities of maintaining a relationship when one party is increasingly unable to recognize or connect with the other. | ||||||||||||
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Denial and the Struggle for Independence | Anthony's persistent denial of his condition and his desperate attempts to maintain his independence are central to the plot. He repeatedly refuses help, dismisses Anne's concerns, and struggles to accept his changing reality. This denial further complicates the family dynamics and intensifies the conflict. | This theme explores the psychological defense mechanisms people employ when confronted with a life-altering illness. It demonstrates how denial can both protect and hurt those facing such difficult realities, as well as their loved ones. | ||||||||||||
Family Dynamics and the Burden of Caregiving | The screenplay portrays the strained relationship between Anne and Anthony, along with the complexities of sibling relationships (implied through Lucy's absence) and the challenging role of Anne as caregiver. There's also a glimpse of the potentially tense relationship between Anne and Paul. The burden of caregiving is physically and emotionally draining Anne. | This theme examines the impact of Alzheimer's on family dynamics, exploring the emotional toll on caregivers and the complex feelings of frustration, love, resentment, and helplessness that often arise. It highlights the societal expectations of family to be caregivers and the lack of support they often receive. | ||||||||||||
The Process of Aging and Loss of Identity | The screenplay implicitly explores the theme of aging and the loss of identity associated with Alzheimer's. Anthony's confusion, memory loss, and declining mental capacity symbolize the loss of his former self, and consequently his sense of place and purpose. | This theme examines the natural process of aging and the challenges it presents, highlighting the dignity and the struggles of those experiencing cognitive decline and the subsequent loss of personal history and identity. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by a compelling blend of realism and psychological depth. The dialogue is often sharp and concise, revealing underlying tensions and emotional complexities through subtle shifts in tone and pacing. The narrative focuses on internal conflicts and unspoken emotions, creating a sense of unease and vulnerability. The direction emphasizes realistic details and intimate moments, highlighting the everyday struggles and internal turmoil of the characters. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a deeply immersive and emotionally resonant experience. The realistic dialogue and subtle emotional shifts ground the story in relatable human experiences, while the focus on internal conflict and psychological tension draws the audience into the characters' inner worlds. This combination enhances the themes of family dynamics, aging, memory loss, and the complexities of human relationships, adding layers of depth and meaning to the narrative. |
Best Representation Scene | 20 - Shattered Calm |
Best Scene Explanation | Scene 20 best encapsulates the writer's unique voice because it masterfully combines seemingly mundane realism (the dropped teacup) with a shocking, intensely emotional climax (the attempted strangulation). This scene perfectly illustrates the writer's ability to build subtle tension throughout the screenplay, culminating in a powerful moment of psychological revelation. The minimal dialogue and impactful action emphasize the internal conflict and emotional depth that defines the writer's style. It highlights the realistic portrayal of everyday life contrasted with sudden, deeply disturbing emotional eruptions, a signature element of the writer's voice. |
- Overall originality score: 7.5
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay demonstrates a high level of originality through its nuanced exploration of complex family dynamics, aging, and memory loss. While it incorporates familiar themes, the unique character interactions, emotional depth, and the use of humor amidst serious topics contribute to its originality. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue enhances the narrative, making it feel fresh and engaging.
- Most unique situations: The most unique situations in the screenplay are Anthony's confusion about his identity and surroundings, particularly when he encounters characters he does not recognize, such as the nurse Catherine and the unexpected presence of Paul. Additionally, the emotional climax where Anne transitions from tenderness to violence against her father adds a shocking and original twist to the narrative.
- Overall unpredictability score: 8
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay maintains a strong sense of unpredictability through its character-driven plot and the evolving dynamics between Anne and Anthony. The unexpected twists, such as Anthony's moments of clarity followed by confusion, and the shocking act of violence from Anne, keep the audience engaged and uncertain about the characters' fates. The interplay of humor and tragedy further enhances the unpredictability, as the audience is often left guessing how the characters will react to their circumstances.
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internal Goals | Throughout the screenplay, the protagonist Anne's internal goals evolve from a need for emotional connection with her father, to asserting her independence and personal fulfillment, while grappling with the fear of losing him. As the story progresses, these emotions intensify as she faces the reality of her father's deteriorating mental health and her own emotional exhaustion. |
External Goals | Anne's external goals evolve as she navigates her father's care, moving from simply managing his day-to-day needs to addressing the larger issue of potentially placing him in a care facility. This reflects her challenges in balancing her own life changes with her father's deteriorating situation. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the tension between independence vs. dependence. This is exemplified in Anne's struggle to maintain her autonomy while feeling the responsibility for her father's care, and Anthony's inner conflict over his diminishing independence and acceptance of assistance. |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflicts contribute significantly to Anne's character development, showcasing her evolution from a caretaker struggling with the strain of familial obligation to a woman who recognizes her own needs and the importance of balancing them. Her journey reflects a deepening understanding of love and loss.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The progression of internal and external goals structures the narrative around the cycles of care, relationship dynamics, and individual desires, driving conflict throughout the screenplay while leading to poignant climaxes that explore vulnerability and acceptance.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The interplay of these goals and conflicts enriches the thematic depth by exploring universal ideas of familial love, the struggles of aging, the search for independence, and the balance between personal and collective needs, ultimately illuminating the complexities of human relationships.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay primarily unfolds in a realistic depiction of modern-day London, specifically focusing on a middle-class to upper-middle-class domestic setting. Locations include a bustling city street with tube stations and apartment blocks, a modern office, various rooms within a family home (living room, kitchen, bedrooms, bathroom, hallway), an Indian shop, a doctor's office, a hospital, and a taxi. The physical spaces are generally described in detail only when relevant to the scene's emotional impact, ranging from cozy and familiar to sterile and clinical, often reflecting the characters' emotional states. Specific objects like paintings, chess pieces, a crystal pyramid, and clothing (suits, shoes) add to the characterization and thematic elements.
- Culture: The cultural elements are largely implied rather than explicitly stated. A love for classical music (Verdi aria) is evident, as is the importance of family relationships, albeit strained and dysfunctional. British politeness and social norms are hinted at in some scenes. The presence of an Indian shop subtly introduces cultural diversity. The depiction of family dynamics reflects cultural norms around caregiving for the elderly, but also displays anxieties around independence and the burden of responsibility.
- Society: The societal structure is primarily centered around family dynamics, revealing tensions and complexities in parent-child relationships, particularly in the context of aging and declining health. The need for professional caregiving (nurses, carers) reflects societal support structures for the elderly. The professional settings (office, doctor's office, hospital) suggest a contemporary urban environment with typical workplace and healthcare systems. Themes of marriage, separation, and generational differences are also explored.
- Technology: Technological elements are minimal and largely unobtrusive. A taxi, keys, a phone, a television, a computer, a light switch, and a doorbell are mentioned, reinforcing the contemporary setting but without being central to the plot. The lack of extensive technology emphasizes the focus on human relationships and emotional complexities.
- Characters influence: The physical environment's changes (different flats, altered decor) mirror Anthony's disorientation and memory loss, while the cozy domestic settings contrast with the sterile hospital environment, highlighting his vulnerability. Cultural expectations around family roles and caregiving influence Anne's actions and create conflict with her father's resistance to help. The limited technology allows for a greater emphasis on interpersonal interactions and emotional nuances, shaping character behaviors and reactions. The sense of place and time profoundly affect Anthony's perception of reality.
- Narrative contribution: The shifting settings and details of the environment contribute to the unfolding mystery and suspense. The gradual reveal of Anthony's condition and the changes in his surroundings create intrigue and drive the narrative forward. The juxtaposition of familiar and unfamiliar spaces reflects Anthony's internal struggle with memory loss. The use of space contributes to the growing sense of unease and disorientation.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world-building reinforces the play's themes of family, memory, aging, and the complexities of human relationships. The contrasting settings (cozy home vs. sterile hospital) highlight the emotional toll of caring for an aging parent. The minimal technology emphasizes the human element, focusing attention on interpersonal dynamics and the emotional consequences of memory loss and changing family structures. The mystery surrounding the disappearances and reappearances of people and objects mirrors the deterioration of Anthony's memory and his struggle to grasp his reality.
central conflict
The central conflict revolves around Anne's struggle to care for her aging father, Anthony, who is experiencing memory loss and confusion, while also seeking her own independence.
primary motivations
- Anne's desire to ensure her father's well-being and safety.
- Anthony's need to maintain his independence and dignity despite his deteriorating condition.
- Anne's aspiration to move to Paris and pursue her own life.
catalysts
- The arrival of a new caregiver, Laura, which prompts discussions about Anthony's care.
- Anne's decision to move to Paris, which heightens Anthony's anxiety about being left alone.
- Incidents of Anthony's confusion and memory loss that reveal the severity of his condition.
barriers
- Anthony's denial of his condition and refusal to accept help.
- Anne's emotional turmoil and guilt about leaving her father.
- The misunderstandings and miscommunications between Anthony and those around him.
themes
- The complexities of familial relationships and caregiving.
- The impact of aging and memory loss on identity.
- The struggle for independence versus the need for support.
stakes
The stakes involve Anthony's mental and emotional well-being, Anne's ability to pursue her own life, and the potential for their relationship to deteriorate further if Anthony's condition worsens.
uniqueness factor
The story uniquely portrays the emotional and psychological challenges of dementia through a deeply personal lens, focusing on the perspectives of both the caregiver and the person affected.
audience hook
The emotional depth of the father-daughter relationship, combined with the tension of impending separation, keeps viewers engaged and invested in their journey.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradox lies in the simultaneous need for connection and the desire for independence, as Anne seeks to care for her father while also yearning to break free from the responsibilities that bind her.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another bisociation could be the contrast between Anthony's past self, full of life and memories, and his current state of confusion, highlighting the tragic loss of identity that comes with aging.
Engine: Claude
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Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'The Father' is a compelling and thoughtful exploration of the challenges faced by a man suffering from dementia and his daughter's struggle to care for him. The script skillfully navigates the complexities of memory, identity, and the evolving family dynamics, creating a powerful and emotionally resonant narrative. The writing is nuanced, with strong character development and a layered thematic exploration of aging, loss, and the human experience. While the pacing may falter in some areas, the overall narrative strength and the unique perspective make this screenplay a compelling work that would be of interest to a wide range of audiences.
- The script's portrayal of the complex and nuanced relationship between Anthony and his daughter, Anne, is a significant strength. The dialogue between them is authentic and emotionally charged, capturing the love, frustration, and worry that define their dynamic. high ( Scene 3 (5) Scene 4 (7) )
- The script's exploration of Anthony's deteriorating mental state and the impact it has on his relationships is deeply compelling. The shifts in his perception of reality and the emotional turmoil it causes are powerfully conveyed, creating a nuanced and empathetic portrayal of the experience of dementia. high ( Scene 16 (25) Scene 18 (27) Scene 20 (28) )
- The script's use of visual storytelling, such as the shifting settings and the way it depicts Anthony's changing perception of his environment, is a significant strength. These elements contribute to the overall sense of disorientation and the audience's immersion in Anthony's experience. medium ( Scene 6 (11) Scene 9 (13C) Scene 12 (15) )
- The opening sequences effectively establish the central conflict and set the stage for the emotional journey that follows, drawing the audience into the story and the characters' struggles from the outset. medium ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 2 (4) )
- The script's incorporation of dream sequences and moments of disorientation effectively conveys Anthony's subjective experience and the challenges he faces in maintaining a coherent sense of reality, adding depth and emotional resonance to the narrative. high ( Scene 33 (51) Scene 34 (52) Scene 46 (55) )
- The pacing in certain sections, particularly towards the middle of the script, can feel a bit uneven, with some scenes dragging or feeling slightly repetitive. Tightening the pacing in these areas could enhance the overall narrative flow. medium ( Scene 27 (36) Scene 28 (37) )
- While the script effectively conveys the shifting dynamics and tensions within the family, there are moments where the dialogue could be streamlined or made more concise to maintain the narrative's momentum and clarity. medium ( Scene 44 (44A) Scene 45 (44B) Scene 48 (61) )
- The transitions between certain scenes, particularly when Anthony's perception of reality shifts, could be strengthened to ensure a more seamless flow and a clearer understanding of the character's mental state for the audience. medium ( Scene 49 (62) Scene 50 (63A) )
- While the script effectively portrays Anthony's deteriorating mental state, there could be some additional exploration of his internal experience and the emotional impact of his condition on his personal identity and sense of self. medium ( Scene 46 (55) Scene 47 (58) )
- The script's shift to the hospital setting in the latter part of the story could be further developed to provide a more seamless transition and a deeper exploration of the implications for Anthony and his family. medium ( Scene 51 (64) Scene 52 (65) Scene 53 (66) )
- The script's exploration of Anthony's shifting perception of reality and his attempts to make sense of the changing environment around him are particularly noteworthy, as they effectively convey the character's internal experience and the challenges he faces. high ( Scene 11 (13C) Scene 24 (33) Scene 26 (35) )
- The script's handling of the relationship between Anthony and his daughter, Anne, is a notable strength, as it navigates the complexities of their bond and the impact of Anthony's condition on their family dynamics. high ( Scene 7 (12) Scene 10 (14B) Scene 23 (32) )
- The script's use of symbolism, such as the painting on the wall and the shifting home environments, effectively enhances the thematic exploration of memory, identity, and the human experience. medium ( Scene 19 (27) Scene 22 (31) Scene 32 (50) )
- Character Development While the script excels at portraying the complexities of the relationship between Anthony and Anne, there may be opportunities to further develop the supporting characters, such as Lucy and the various caregivers, to provide a more well-rounded and nuanced understanding of the family dynamics. Exploring the backstories and motivations of these characters could enhance the overall depth of the screenplay. medium
- Pacing As noted in the 'Areas of Improvement' section, there are a few instances where the pacing feels uneven, with some scenes dragging or feeling repetitive. Tightening the pacing and ensuring a more consistent narrative flow could help elevate the overall quality of the script. medium
- Dialogue While the dialogue in the script is generally strong, there are moments where it could be more concise or streamlined to maintain the narrative's momentum and clarity. Carefully refining the dialogue, particularly in the scenes with multiple characters, could enhance the screenplay's overall polished quality. medium
Engine: Gemini
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
The Father is a masterful screenplay that masterfully utilizes non-linear storytelling to explore the devastating effects of dementia on both the sufferer and their loved ones. The script's strength lies in its subtle yet powerful portrayal of emotional disintegration, creating a deeply unsettling and profoundly moving experience. While some minor pacing issues could be addressed, the overall narrative is exceptionally compelling and the character development is nuanced and believable. This script has the potential to be a critically acclaimed and commercially successful film.
- The non-linear structure, subtly shifting realities and timelines, creates a disorienting experience for the audience that mirrors the protagonist's mental state. This immersive technique elevates the emotional impact. high ( Scene 1 Scene 17 )
- Anthony's character is remarkably nuanced. His denial, anger, charm, and vulnerability are portrayed with subtlety and complexity, making him both frustrating and deeply sympathetic. high ( Scene 7 Scene 27 Scene 66 )
- The screenplay builds suspense through subtle shifts in setting and the gradual unraveling of Anthony's reality, keeping the audience guessing and engaged until the very end. medium ( Scene 29 (29B) )
- Anne's character arc is well-defined, showing her struggle to balance her personal life and care for her increasingly ill father. Her emotional journey is believable and relatable. medium ( Scene 30 Scene 31 )
- The ending is both heartbreaking and ultimately hopeful. It emphasizes the importance of compassion and acceptance in the face of devastating illness. high ( Scene 47 Scene 66 )
- Some scenes, particularly those involving the introduction of new characters in Anthony's altered reality, could benefit from more gradual pacing to enhance the sense of mounting unease. low ( Scene 9 Scene 10 )
- While Anne's emotional journey is compelling, exploring her coping mechanisms and support system beyond her relationship with Paul could add depth and resonance to her character. low ( Scene 30 )
- More backstory on Anthony's life before the onset of his illness could enrich the emotional impact. Hints are provided, but more concrete details would help solidify his character. medium
- The scene where Anne seemingly strangles her father is a powerful and shocking moment that underscores the emotional toll of caring for a dementia patient. It demonstrates the potential for unpredictable and extreme actions under immense pressure. high ( Scene 29 (29B) )
- Anthony's dream sequence, set in a hospital, cleverly uses a surreal setting to mirror his disorientation and fears. The appearance of Lucy, his deceased daughter, is particularly poignant, hinting at a deeper level of grief and loss. high ( Scene 56 )
- Underdeveloped Secondary Characters While Anthony and Anne are deeply developed, the supporting characters, such as Paul and Lucy, remain somewhat underdeveloped. Their motivations and backstories are hinted at but not fully explored. This creates a slight disconnect, hindering the overall emotional impact. For instance, Paul's sudden shifts in his demeanor feel somewhat abrupt and could benefit from a stronger narrative context. Similarly, Lucy’s appearance in the dream sequence is powerful, but more hints throughout the script could deepen the impact of this. medium
Engine: GPT4
Highly Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay of 'The Father' presents a poignant exploration of dementia through the lens of a father-daughter relationship. It effectively captures the disorientation and emotional turmoil experienced by both the father, Anthony, and his daughter, Anne. The narrative is tightly woven, with a strong focus on character development and the gradual unraveling of Anthony's reality. The dialogue is sharp and realistic, enhancing the emotional weight of the story. Overall, the screenplay is a compelling piece that resonates deeply with audiences, offering both a personal and universal perspective on aging and familial love.
- The screenplay excels in its character development, particularly in portraying Anthony's gradual decline and Anne's emotional struggle. The depth of their relationship is explored through nuanced dialogue and interactions. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The use of disorientation and confusion effectively mirrors Anthony's experience with dementia, creating a powerful emotional impact on the audience. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The dialogue is sharp and realistic, capturing the complexities of familial relationships and the frustrations of caregiving. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The pacing is well-structured, allowing moments of tension to build while also providing necessary emotional breaks. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The screenplay's ability to evoke empathy for both Anthony and Anne creates a rich emotional landscape that resonates with viewers. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- While the screenplay is strong, some scenes could benefit from additional context or exposition to clarify character motivations and backstory. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- There are moments where the dialogue could be tightened to enhance the flow and maintain engagement. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- Some emotional beats could be expanded to deepen the audience's connection to the characters' struggles. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The transitions between scenes could be smoother to enhance the overall narrative flow. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The screenplay could explore secondary characters more deeply to provide a fuller picture of the impact of Anthony's condition. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- There is a lack of exploration of Anthony's past, which could provide more depth to his character and enhance the emotional stakes. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The screenplay could benefit from more visual storytelling elements to complement the dialogue and enhance the emotional experience. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- There is a missed opportunity to delve into the perspectives of secondary characters, which could enrich the narrative. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The emotional resolution could be more pronounced to provide a satisfying conclusion to the character arcs. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The screenplay lacks a clear thematic statement that ties together the various narrative threads. medium ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The screenplay's structure effectively mirrors Anthony's mental state, creating a disorienting experience that reflects his confusion. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The emotional weight of the story is heightened by the use of silence and pauses, allowing moments of reflection. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The screenplay's ability to evoke empathy for both Anthony and Anne creates a rich emotional landscape that resonates with viewers. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The use of humor amidst the tragedy provides a balanced tone that makes the narrative more relatable. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- The screenplay's exploration of memory and identity raises profound questions about the nature of self as one ages. high ( Scene 1 (3) Scene 5 (8) )
- Character Development While the main characters are well-developed, secondary characters lack depth and backstory, which could enhance the overall narrative. For example, Anne's husband, Paul, is introduced but not explored in detail, leaving his motivations and relationship dynamics underdeveloped. medium
- Dialogue Tags Some dialogue lacks appropriate tags or descriptions, making it difficult to follow who is speaking at times. For instance, in scenes with multiple characters, the absence of clear identifiers can lead to confusion about the speaker's identity. medium