Baby Driver
Executive Summary
Overview
Genres: Crime, Action, Thriller, Drama, Romance
Setting: Present day, Los Angeles, California
Overview: Baby Driver is a thrilling and unique story about a skilled getaway driver named Baby who uses music to drown out the chaos of his criminal world. As he navigates high-speed chases and dangerous heists, Baby forms a romantic connection with a waitress named Debora and contemplates leaving his life of crime behind. However, his loyalty to his criminal crew and the consequences of his actions threaten to derail his plans for redemption.
Themes: Music as a form of escape, Redemption and second chances, Family and father figures, Crime and its consequences, Love and romance
Conflict and Stakes: Baby's internal conflict between his love for music and his involvement in criminal activities, as well as the external conflict between Baby and the police, who are chasing him after a series of heists.
Overall Mood: Action-packed and music-driven, with a hint of danger and excitement
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: Tense and action-packed, with a focus on Baby's driving skills and the police chase.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: Innovative use of music and sound design to drive the narrative and action sequences.
- Plot Twist: The unexpected betrayal of a crew member, leading to a tense and action-packed climax.
- Distinctive Setting: The vibrant and diverse city of Los Angeles, with its iconic landmarks and neighborhoods.
- Innovative Idea: The use of music as a character in the film, driving the action and emotions of the story.
- Unique Characters: A diverse cast of characters, each with their own unique backgrounds and motivations.
Comparable Scripts:
- Drive
- The Town
- Heat
- The Italian Job
- Gone in 60 Seconds
- The Fast and the Furious
- Reservoir Dogs
- Pulp Fiction
- Snatch
- Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels
Writing Style:
The screenplay's writing style is characterized by fast-paced action, intense dialogue, and unique character interactions. The narrative often combines elements of crime, music, and vivid dialogue to create distinct atmospheres. Music plays a significant role in the storytelling, often used as a narrative device or to enhance the emotional impact of a scene. The visual descriptions are detailed and evocative, contributing to the overall mood and atmosphere.
Style Similarities:
- Quentin Tarantino
- Edgar Wright
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: Overall, 'Baby Driver' presents a compelling and well-crafted screenplay with a strong foundation in character development, dialogue, and atmosphere. While there are areas where it could be further enhanced, the screenplay's strengths outweigh its limitations. By addressing the identified areas of improvement and considering the missing elements, the screenplay has the potential to elevate the narrative and create an even more engaging and satisfying cinematic experience.
USP: Discover a thrilling journey of self-discovery, redemption, and the power of music in "Baby Driver" - a captivating script that showcases a unique blend of coolness, rebellion, energy, wit, and musicality. This high-octane getaway story follows Baby, a young and skilled driver who uses music to drown out his tinnitus and navigate the chaos of his criminal world. With a distinct voice that combines concise dialogue, descriptive narrative, and specific music references, this screenplay delivers an engaging, fast-paced, and emotionally resonant experience. Witness Baby's transformation from a quiet and reserved individual to a courageous hero, as he confronts his past, forms deep connections, and strives for a chance at a normal life. Immerse yourself in the authentic characters, high-speed chases, and the evocative use of music that underscores the tension and excitement in every scene. "Baby Driver" is a must-read for those who appreciate a unique and unforgettable story that combines action, music, and heart.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$30-40 million
Target Audience Demographics: Young adults aged 18-34, fans of action, crime, and music genres
Marketability: The unique blend of music and action, as well as the compelling characters and storyline, make this screenplay highly marketable.
The innovative use of music and sound design, as well as the unique take on the heist genre, make this screenplay stand out.
The diverse cast and relevant themes of family, friendship, and consequences make this screenplay appealing to a wide audience.
Profit Potential: High, due to the strong appeal to a wide young adult audience and potential for award nominations in the music and sound design categories.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice in this screenplay is characterized by a distinct blend of coolness, rebellion, energy, wit, and musicality.
Best representation: Scene 12 - Baby's Intense Escape and the Carjacking of a Blue Accord. This scene is the best representative of the writer's voice as it encapsulates the quintessential elements that define it: the thrilling action, the sharp dialogue, and the powerful use of music to heighten the emotional impact.
Memorable Lines:
- Bats: Go Baby go! (Scene 13)
- Baby: I'm sorry. (Scene 11)
- Doc: Was he slow? (Scene 6)
- Bats: Te-quiiiii-laaaaaaa! (Scene 23)
- Bats: What the fuck did I just listen to? (Scene 28)
Characters
Baby:A young, introverted getaway driver with tinnitus who listens to music to drown out the ringing in his ears.
Doc:Baby's mentor and the mastermind behind the heists, who takes Baby under his wing.
Debora:A waitress who works at a diner and becomes smitten with Baby.
Bats:A member of Doc's crew who is aggressive and reckless, causing tension within the group.
Buddy:Another member of Doc's crew who is more laid-back and friendly, but still involved in criminal activities.
Darling:Buddy's girlfriend and a member of Doc's crew, who is often affectionate towards Buddy.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Baby's Getaway Drive | Intense, Exciting, Playful | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
2 - High-Speed Escape Through LA | Intense, Fast-paced, Exciting | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
3 - Griff's Harassment and Baby's Calm Resistance | Cool, Intense, Playful | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
4 - Baby's First Encounter with the Gang and Griff's Departure | Tense, Humorous | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
5 - Baby's Financial Transaction and Caring for the Elderly Man | Tense, Intimate, Playful | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
6 - Baby's Restless Evening: Loneliness and Longing | Tense, Reflective, Nostalgic | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
7 - Baby's Captivating Encounter with Jonathan at the Diner | Cool, Mysterious, Romantic | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 3 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
8 - Baby's Evening of Preparation and a New Job Offer | Serious, Intriguing, Playful | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
9 - Baby Meets the Crew: Tensions Run High in the Warehouse | Intense, Curious, Malicious, Jazzy | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
10 - Planning the Heist: A Team in Tension | Intense, Suspenseful, Serious | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
11 - Baby's Playful Car Heist | Intense, Suspenseful, Playful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
12 - Baby's High-Stakes Escape in the Avalanche | Intense, Suspenseful, Menacing | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
13 - Baby's Intense Escape and the Carjacking of a Blue Accord | Intense, Fast-paced, Tense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
14 - Baby's Anxiety Grows as He Loses Another Ride | Tense, Mysterious, Romantic | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
15 - Baby's Infatuation: Longing for Debora | Intense, Playful, Reflective | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | |
16 - Baby's Diner Dilemma | Upbeat, Unease | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
17 - Baby's New Job Opportunity and Uncertain Future | Tense, Mysterious, Intense | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
18 - Baby's Uneasy Reconnaissance at the Post Office | Tense, Suspenseful, Uneasy | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
19 - Baby Accepts Doc's Offer and Meets the Team | Tense, Suspenseful, Serious | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
20 - Baby Meets the Team and Bonds with Buddy, Amidst Tension | Intense, Humorous, Nostalgic | 9 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 4 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | |
21 - The Heist Plan and Baby's Struggle | Intense, Suspenseful, Serious | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
22 - Baby Leaves Bats Behind at the Gas Station | Tense, Anxious, Playful | 8 | 7 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | |
23 - Bats' Reckless Gun Deal: A Train Yard Heist | Intense, Tense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
24 - Baby and Gang's Tense Diner Visit | Tense, Intense, Confrontational, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
25 - Tensions Rise Over Baby's Emotional State | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
26 - Baby's Loyalty Questioned as Bats Reveals Recording | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
27 - Bats' Suspicion of Baby's Recording Habit | Tense, Serious, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | |
28 - Baby's Driving Test | Uneasy, Menacing, Surprised, Simple, Funny | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
29 - Narrow Escape: The Tense Standoff | Tense, Suspenseful, Menacing, Surreal | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
30 - Post Office Heist Gone Wrong | Tense, Menacing, Shocking | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
31 - Baby's Daring Escape from the Police in a Watts Mall | Intense, Fast-paced, Chaotic | 9 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
32 - Baby's High-Speed Escape and Shootout with Buddy | Intense, Chaotic, Violent | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
33 - Baby's Desperate Escape | Intense, Fast-paced, Suspenseful, Chaotic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
34 - Escape from Danger: Baby and the Elderly Man's Hasty Departure | Intense, Suspenseful, Chaotic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
35 - Baby's Daring Escape and Heartfelt Goodbye | Intense, Suspenseful, Emotional | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
36 - Baby's Desperate Plea for Help | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
37 - Baby Finds Motivation and Acquires a Red Mustang | Tense, Intense, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
38 - Baby's Escape and Car Chase | Intense, Suspenseful, Chaotic | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
39 - Baby's Escape and Deafening Betrayal | Intense, Tense, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
40 - Baby's Shocking Appearance at Debora's Diner | Intense, Suspenseful, Desperate, Romantic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
41 - Baby's Surrender Leads to Arrest and Debora's Fear | Upbeat, Surreal, Surrender | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | |
42 - Baby's Prison Release and Reunion with Debora | Intense, Thrilling, Romantic, Sentimental | 9 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 |
Scene 1 - Baby's Getaway Drive
A strip mall in the San Fernando Valley.
A front wheel of a car pulls slowly into view.
A curb reads ‘Short Stay. 5 Mins Only.’
2 INT. CAR - CONTINUOUS 2
Play is pressed on an iPod Classic. A rock track starts up.
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It’s very loud. It’s awesome.
‘Bellbottoms’ by the Jon Spencer Blues Explosion.
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On high strings and a guitar stab we see the driver.
Young, baby faced. Short cropped hair. He wears mostly black.
Sports cheap gas station shades. This is BABY.
We can’t see his eyes, but his blank expression seems pretty
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stoic. He listens to the track, stares out the windshield.
On a 2nd guitar stab we see a beefy (30s) tough guy in shotgun.
This is GRIFF. He too wears shades, black business clothes.
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On a 3rd stab we see another black clad gentleman. (40s) He’s
handsome, but looks like he parties too hard. This is BUDDY.
On a final stab we see the last shades wearing black clad
passenger, a younger lady (20s) with her hair up. This is
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DARLING. There’s a hint of trash beneath her business clothes.
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The high strings crescendo. Griff flings his door wide open.
3 INT./EXT. CAR/PARKING LOT - CONTINUOUS 3
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The track kicks in. We see the car is a shiny red Honda Civic
and note the door chimes are in time with the song.
Choppy strings play against guitar riffs as GRIFF gets out. We
see a shotgun partially concealed in his trench coat.
BUDDY and DARLING get out. We glimpse they are also armed. He
pops the trunk. Grabs two duffels. Hands one to Darling.
We see they all wear sneakers as they walk away from the car in
sync with the track. Again. It’s awesome. But we stay with-
2.
BABY: our young driver. Hands fixed on the wheel. Ten to two.
Watching his colleagues disappearing inside a ‘CHASE’ bank.
The song pauses for two bars.
When it kicks back in, our driver suddenly drops the strong,
silent tough guy act and comes to glorious, joyous life.
Nodding his head. Swaying in his seat. Mouthing the vocals. A
slave to the rhythm. He doesn’t miss a beat. It’s cool, but-
He’s also like a big kid in front of his bedroom mirror. As he
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drums on the dash, we see shoppers pass, other cars cruise by.
Baby is so immersed in the track, he flicks on the wipers. They
swipe across the dry glass in perfect sync.
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A mother with a stroller passes. The infant inside notices Baby
rocking out in his car. Baby waves. The infant smiles.
Then he instinctively looks in his rear view. A BLACK & WHITE
POLICE CRUISER, sirens blaring, races up the street behind.
Baby turns to watch the police car drive up and past.
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A pause in the music. The police car doesn’t return.
An urgent bass line. Baby looks to the bank. His goofy chair
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dance is over. He’s stone faced and all business again.
Over distorted guitars, our driver watches through partially
frosted windows. Sees his colleagues ordering staff to hit the
floor. Glimpses scared faces, the brandishing of weapons.
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The song reaches an interlude; a vocal comes in and Baby lip
syncs every word as his eyes stay fixed on the bank.
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JON SPENCER (IN SONG)
“Thank you very much, ladies and
gentlemen.”
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A snare hits. An ALARM sounds. Baby steels himself.
Military snares build like staccato machine gun fire. His
colleagues explode out of the bank, two bags full.
Baby revs in time with the snares as his colleagues get in. Our
driver glances at the bank sign. ‘CHASE’.
He pops the car into reverse. Stomps the gas, hard.
Snare drums crescendo. The car screams back through the tight
spaces between parked cars, makes a tight Rockford to face
forward. Baby drops into drive. Swerves wide onto -
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Scene 2 - High-Speed Escape Through LA
JON SPENCER
“I’m gonna daaaaance.”
Baby’s car sails into busy traffic, the track blasting on the
car stereo, building in speed and energy.
Despite the velocity of the getaway, our driver is calm at the
wheel, weaving through traffic like an android.
The other gang members lay low in their seats, shrug out of
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their business attire. They trade looks as Baby swerves.
WOOP WOOP. One BLACK & WHITE cruiser screams the opposite way.
It zooms past, then makes a 180 behind them.
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Baby sees the Black & White BEHIND. A light turns red AHEAD.
He FLOORS it through the stop light. Other drivers break hard
around him. Cars crash, rear end in time with kick drum hits.
The Black & White flies through the intersection, gaining.
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Baby nears 70 mph, the track building with cracking snares. The
lone Black & White still dogs behind. Sirens wailing.
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Baby HITS 70 mph. Then 80. Comes up to an intersection. Eases
off. Makes a hard right at the last second into -
A side street. Loses the Black & White. Baby TEARS down the
narrow street, dodges dumpsters.
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On the adjacent artery, the Black & White can be seen in
parallel. Baby floors it to the next cross street and SWERVES a
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hard left, directly into the path of the Black & White
pursuing.
Baby plows through this intersection, forcing the Black & White
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and all other traffic to brake VIOLENTLY HARD.
The Honda Civic leaves the Black & White in the dust and tears
down another straight with less traffic.
Baby holds the gas down. Sees something before we do -
JON SPENCER (CONT’D)
“I’m gonna break, I’m gonna break!”
Baby brakes, pulls hard on the wheel, accelerates through a 180
skid, roars in back the other direction with -
THREE BLACK & WHITES now on his tail. Red and Blues. Sirens.
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Facing the original cruiser, Baby crosses the double line, tears
past oncoming traffic and DISAPPEARS up a freeway ramp.
No one saw that turn coming but Baby.
5 EXT. THE 405 FREEWAY - CONTINUOUS 5
The Black & Whites are left behind as Baby revs past the green
light and into aggressive morning traffic. 85... 90.
Highly distorted guitar signals the arrival of a POLICE
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HELICOPTER. It dogs above, but has to play find-the-lady with
at least three red Honda Civics currently southbound.
Baby weaves from lane to lane. As he disappears under a bridge,
he crosses to the shoulder and barrels along it at a crazy
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speed. Tears down the off ramp. And he’s back onto -
6 EXT. THE STREETS OF LA - CONTINUOUS 6
MASS HONKS as Baby blows through a intersection. Disappears down
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an alley, weaving these back routes like a savant.
As sirens and choppers’ blades ebb away a little, we see Baby
ease it down, a rising bass riff signals a sneaking approach.
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He slows to see if any cruisers cross by ahead. One police
cruiser glides by, sirens off. Baby waits on the bass riff
again. Then floors it when the coast’s clear. And suddenly -
They pull into a covered parking lot underneath a quiet shopping
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complex and pull up next to a green Toyota Corolla.
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And like that, the gang leap out of the Civic and into the switch
car, money and guns covered up.
The gang swap places. Buddy and Griff in the back. Baby shotgun,
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Darling drives. Lets her hair down. Pulls on a colorful sweater.
Baby closes his eyes, pretends to be asleep as Darling roars
into the white of morning and the Blues Explosion echoes out.
And the first musical number is over. That was something.
7 EXT. DOWNTOWN BUSINESS DISTRICT - LATER 7
OVER CREDITS: ‘Harlem Shuffle’ by Bob & Earl.
Our hero, Baby, appears from a door in the mirrored exterior of
a non-descript business address in Bunker Hill.
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Baby has his iPod earphones firmly in, his shades on and his
bubble of sound around him. Again, he’s clearly a big kid when
away from the gang, lost in his music.
He strolls down the street listening to ‘Harlem Shuffle’. The song
is as funky as the business district is not. Office workers stride
to work, while Baby STRUTS along like Tony Manero.
Baby walks against the traffic, the world syncing around him: a
chorus of car honks, cell phones and barking canines.
Baby uses a crosswalk, the bleeps and his steps all in time. He
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reaches the other side of the street and breezes into -
8 INT. STARBUCKS - CONTINUOUS 8
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Baby takes one ear out, orders from an unseen MALE BARISTA.
BARISTA (O.S.)
Can I get your order sir?
BABY
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(counts out four fingers)
One black coffee. One black coffee.
One black coffee. And one coffee,
black.
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BARISTA (O.S.)
So, four black coffees?
BABY
Uh. Yeah.
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BARISTA (O.S.)
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Size?
BABY
Middle one.
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BARISTA (O.S.)
Four grande black coffees. Name?
BABY
Baby.
BARISTA (O.S.)
Your name is “Baby”?
BABY
B-A-B-Y. Baby.
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Baby puts his second ear back in as the coffee machine screams
into life and Bob (or Earl) wails over the middle 8.
Baby looks around the Starbucks, sees other young people of his
age, smiling and chatting, enjoying their carefree lives. Their
actions are magically in time with his personal soundtrack.
Baby looks out through the window, sees A PRETTY GIRL walking
past. She too is wearing earphones and lost in her own music.
For a beautiful moment this girl and the whole damn city is
alive and all in step with the music in his head. All except -
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A BEAT COP. Ironically, the only person not walking on beat.
The middle 8 ends. The GIRL disappears. The BEAT COP lingers.
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Baby grabs his coffee tray. Splits.
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Scene 3 - Griff's Harassment and Baby's Calm Resistance
Baby passes the Beat Cop, only doing a subtle strut in time.
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His swagger returns as he approaches the building from where he
came. We see POLICE CARS reflected in the glass of the
building. Baby hears their sirens and watches as they pass.
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As the song fades, Baby opens the door with his elbow, stops it
with his foot, all while switching the coffee tray from one
hand to the other. He then pirouettes into the open door. He is-
The Gene Kelly of the coffee run.
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10 INT. UNDECORATED LOFT - DAY 10
‘Egyptian Reggae’ by Jonathan Richman & The Modern Lovers.
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Coffee is drunk. Cash split. The gang are in a garment
warehouse space with some vintage sewing desks.
On a large table in the middle. DOC, an older (60s), silver-
haired, very well-dressed man, counts out the day’s haul.
Darling, fixes herself up (down?), now looking trashier than
before. Buddy, sits next to her and sips his coffee quietly.
Baby sits at the back of class, earphones in and shades still
on. The goofy kid has disappeared, the stoic, poker faced Baby
has returned. The beefy guy, Griff, glowers at him.
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GRIFF
What’s his deal?
DOC
Baby? Full cut. Same as everyone.
Doc is brusque, seems irritated at answering any questions.
GRIFF
No I mean, is he retarded?
DOC
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Retarded means slow. Was he slow?
GRIFF
No...
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DOC
Then he don’t sound retarded to me.
Doc smiles for a second. Then resumes counting.
GRIFF
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I don’t know. There’s something wrong
with him not saying anything.
DOC
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There’s nothing wrong with some quiet.
GRIFF
I’m just saying it weirds me -
DOC
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(makes a zip-it motion)
Hey! I’m going to lose count.
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Griff swaggers over to Baby, who taps his fingers on the table
to ‘Egyptian Reggae’ on his iPod.
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Griff observes for a while, then holds down his tapping hand.
Baby slowly takes his hand away. Now his feet tap in time.
GRIFF
What you listening to?
No answer. Griff takes out one of Baby’s earphones.
GRIFF (CONT’D)
What are you listening to Baby?
No answer. Griff looks at Baby’s iPod. Drops it with a scoff.
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GRIFF (CONT’D)
You think you’re pretty smart acting
dumb, that it?
BUDDY
Leave the kid alone Griff.
GRIFF
I just wanna know what’s going in his
head. Aside from ‘Egyptian Reggae’.
DARLING
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(half listening)
Love reggae.
BUDDY
What does it matter to you?
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GRIFF
I think he thinks he’s better than us,
Buddy. Wants to keep his white shirt
clean while we plays dirty.
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Griff snatches off Baby’s shades. We see Baby’s baby blues for
the first time. He looks so fresh faced, so young.
GRIFF (CONT’D)
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It don’t work like that. Someday
you’ll get blood on your hands and
find out it don’t wash off in the
fucking sink.
DARLING
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Griff.
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GRIFF
Hey Darling, he wants to hang with the
older kids, he’s going to hear some
grown up words. Like ‘fuck’.
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Griff does a boo scare on Baby. He doesn’t flinch.
DOC
Will you cut it out!
BUDDY
Yeah, he did his job, let him be.
GRIFF
Hey, I ain’t saying he’s not great.
Boy’s a star, right?
Doc puts Baby’s cut in a holdall and brings it over to his desk.
DOC
Would I vouch for him if he wasn’t?
Doc leaves to go to the bathroom. Griff shouts after.
GRIFF
Hey I’m just checking he’s gonna be
okay out in the world. You know, since
he’s the only one in here not packing.
Smiling, Griff takes out his revolver, puts it on the desk.
Baby looks at the revolver, but doesn’t show any emotion.
GRIFF (CONT’D)
Take it. There’s bad people around.
BUDDY
Speak for yourself.
GRIFF
Don’t want it? Say I took your share,
walked out? How you gonna stop me? I
wanna see you stop me.
Darling and Buddy exchange glances as Griff playfully swipes
Baby’s holdall and walks slowly away towards the door.
GRIFF (CONT’D)
C’mon. Don’t let me get away.
Baby looks at Griff, then the revolver. Griff laughs.
GRIFF (CONT’D)
Do it Baby. I’m a real bad guy.
Baby looks up at the ceiling. Griff is insulted.
GRIFF (CONT’D)
Okay. Enough games.
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Griff huffs, reluctantly puts the money back in the holdall.
Baby quietly puts his shades back on again, retreats.
BUDDY
I figured out why you call him Baby.
Still waiting for his first words.
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Scene 4 - Baby's First Encounter with the Gang and Griff's Departure
‘Secondo Intermezzo Pop’ by Ennio Morricone.
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Baby travels with Griff, Darling, Buddy and Doc in a packed
elevator. All five of them clutch HOLDALLS.
Darling is all over Buddy. Smooching and laughing. (The 20 year
age gap between them is a little much.)
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DARLING
Well isn’t this quite the squeeze?
BUDDY
I think you’re quite the squeeze.
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Griff again eyeballs Baby who has shades back on, phones in.
GRIFF
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You still mad-dogging me boy?
Doc snaps, Darling and Buddy sigh, tired of this shit.
DOC
Jesus. You’re mad dogging him.
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BUDDY
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Yeah, where do you get off?
GRIFF
Kid’s gotta grow up sometime.
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BUDDY
Seriously. Where do you get off?
PING. The lift hits P1.
GRIFF
Right here.
Griff makes a move, looking to Doc.
GRIFF (CONT’D)
Okay folks, if you don’t hear from me.
It’s because I’m dead.
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Griff exits the frame and the movie. He’s never seen again.
The doors close and Darling laughs at the release of tension.
The lift descends. Buddy and Darling kiss again.
DARLING
Hey, what’s that song?
(sings)
“Love in an elevator”
BUDDY
That would be ‘Love In An Elevator’.
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DARLING
Riiight.
PING. The elevator hits P2. Buddy salutes Doc.
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BUDDY
Sir, I will call you as soon as the
nose bag is empty.
Buddy punches Baby’s arm playfully.
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BUDDY (CONT’D)
And you? You did great. You aced it.
You’re one of the good guys.
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They exit. Buddy shouts back to Baby as the doors close.
BUDDY (CONT’D)
He calls you again, don’t pick up.
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And with that, the elevator descends. Doc smiles tersely.
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DOC
Don’t listen to him.
Baby then speaks his first words to any of ‘the gang’.
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BABY
Okay.
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Scene 5 - Baby's Financial Transaction and Caring for the Elderly Man
PING. Baby and Doc exit into a cavernous parking lot. They walk
over to Doc’s shiny Black Merc. Doc opens the trunk.
DOC
Now you know I don’t like taking candy
from Baby, but...
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Doc holds out his hand. Baby gives him his holdall. Doc takes
out one stack of bills and throws both bags in the trunk.
DOC (CONT’D)
Didn’t want to embarrass you in front
of the gang. When we’re square we’ll
work out a new deal. Deal?
BABY
Uh. Yeah.
Doc gives Baby the one stack of bills. Gets into his car.
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DOC
Don’t go crazy with that. I want you
back behind the wheel and soon. I’ll
call you.
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Doc pulls out. Leaves Baby all alone.
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‘Nutrocker’ by B. Bumble And The Stingers.
A piano bangs out a funereal intro. We see a dilapidated red
brick apartment building complete with a rusty fire escape.
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It’s a stone’s throw from a park. Judging by some of the
boarded up windows, literally a stone’s throw.
14 INT. BARE APARTMENT - DUSK 14
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The song becomes a rendition of March Of The Wooden Soldiers,
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we see Baby flick the stack of cash in time with the piano.
Without his shades, Baby again looks less the badass, more the
big kid. Young, of indeterminate age. Handsome, but cute.
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As the track vamps, Baby puts the money away, under a missing
floorboard where an amount of dollar bills are stashed.
Baby replaces the board and we get a wider view of his
quarters.
Pretty basic. Tiny kitchenette. Small bathroom and bedroom. In
the center, a dining table and single chair.
As ‘Nutrocker’ blossoms into a jazzy version of Tchaikovsky,
Baby mimes the keyboards on the table. Pounding out the tune
with his fingers. Playing at playing like Jerry Lee Lewis.
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There are iPods on the counter, table and floor. There must be
close to 70 devices from different years, different colors,
different models, seemingly from different owners.
There isn’t a computer in the room. Just the odd charger.
Battered travel speakers. A cassette deck. Audio tapes. A vinyl
player. LPs. CD players, Walkmans. Dictaphones and many other
recorders. A treasure trove of music systems and physical
media.
While there is a tremendous amount of equipment, it’s ordered
in a way that makes sense to Baby. Very precisely laid out.
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Baby is now jiving around the room to ‘Nutrocker’. He even pops
some pills to the tune. (Sharp eyes will notice it’s
anticonvulsant medication for tinnitus and epilepsy.)
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It’s clear music is an obsession as Baby dances like no-one’s
watching. As he moves to the other side of the room we see -
An ELDERLY MAN (African American, 80s) in pajamas and robe,
sitting in a wheelchair. He’s half-asleep, watching TV.
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Baby sees a KTLA 5 report on a ‘Valley Bank Robbe - ’.
CLICK. Baby switches it off. He wakes the Elderly Man and
communicates the following in sign language. No subtitles.
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BABY
You okay?
ELDERLY MAN
I’m hungry.
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BABY
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You want the same?
ELDERLY MAN
Yes please.
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As drums shuffle and the piano starts a descending octave, Baby
makes a sliced white bread and peanut butter sandwich.
He makes sure to spread the butter to the edges and cuts it
into four smaller slices. Every action has a flourish to it.
The song ends as it began, with jolly ceremony. Baby serves the
sandwich on bended knee, as if it were a royal platter. The
Elderly Man beams with his remaining teeth.
In the corner sits one of those deaf friendly phones where a
red light flashes when a call is incoming. It is not flashing.
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Scene 6 - Baby's Restless Evening: Loneliness and Longing
Baby sits alone. The Elderly Man is asleep in his chair. Baby
absent mindedly flicks through kids’ TV CHANNELS.
Flip to Alfala from ‘The Little Rascals’ singing -
ALFALFA
“You are so beautiful.”
Flip to Donkey and several baby donkeys in ‘Shrek The 3rd’-
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DONKEY
They grow up so fast.
Flip to Sully and Mike in ‘Monsters Inc’-
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MIKE WAZOWSKI
You and I are a team. Nothing is more
important than our friendship.
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Baby still sits alone. The Elderly Man now cannot be seen. He
holds an outmoded Sony handheld cassette recorder.
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He plays back the audio for the opening chase. We hear a badly
recorded ‘Bellbottoms’ and all the sounds of the car.
The phone sits in the corner. Still nothing.
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17 INT. BARE APARTMENT - DAWN 17
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Baby. Alone. Still playing the tape. We hear this dialogue.
DOC (TAPE)
Was he slow?
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GRIFF (TAPE)
No.
VEEEEEP. Baby rewinds this. Listens again.
18 INT. BARE APARTMENT - EARLY MORNING 18
‘Call Me’ by Siriusmo.
Baby hasn’t slept. Stares at the phone. In time with a track
made up of dial tones, he pretends to play it like a theremin.
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He mimes out this Chaplin-esque routine where he wills the
phone to ring with grand choreographed gestures.
But no call. Bored, Baby looks into the bedroom. Sees the
Elderly Man asleep under blankets. Sunlight streaming in.
Slowly Baby starts to fall asleep. But as soon as his eyes
close-
FLASHBACK: A HIGH PITCHED WHINE ON SOUNDTRACK
- A YOUNG 7 YEAR OLD Baby, not wearing headphones, sitting in
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the same apartment, same table. The furnishings are different.
- Young Baby has bruises and visible stitches. He looks up to
see the Elderly Man (about 10 years younger) offer him a peanut
butter sandwich and mouth ‘you okay?’. Baby closes his eyes.
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- See Young Baby, unbruised, in the back seat of a car,
headphones firmly on. The camera pans around to see -
- A crying woman driving.
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- A man in the passenger seat shouting furiously at her.
- The pick up truck they are about to rear end.
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- The WHINE reaches a peak. Baby closes his eyes.
FLASHBACK ENDS. Baby opens his eyes. Gets out of his chair.
He looks at one white iPod on the table. The original model
from 2001. It is cracked and broken. Beyond repair.
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Scene 7 - Baby's Captivating Encounter with Jonathan at the Diner
‘Intro’ by The Herbaliser.
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Baby’s back in his bubble. Jacket on. Phones in. Stands by the
front door in a hallway with mirrors on both sides.
THE HERBALISER
“He’s rough, he’s rugged, he’s red
blooded, he’s romantic. He's full of
shit.”
Baby takes his shades on and off, throwing looks into the
mirrors, acting out tough expressions and badass poses.
It’s clear Baby will not leave until the beat kicks in. Baby
throws open the door and exits...
16.
20 INT./EXT. APARTMENT BLOCK - CONTINUOUS 20
To a funky groove, Baby struts down the stairwell, passing a
rising exposed elevator on the way up. He doesn’t acknowledge
the neighbor going up as he continues his tough act, sauntering
down to the front door and on beat -
He struts into the street, as if he owns it. Baby jumps into a
Blue Chevy Malibu. As the song ends, he rolls away.
21 INT. EMPTY DINER - EARLY MORNING 21
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‘Let’s Go Away For Awhile’ by The Beach Boys.
Baby. Shades on. Phones in. Looking ahead. Listening to music.
He sits in a pleasant, but not very busy, old school diner.
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The decor is 50s retro and auto centric. Classic convertibles
with happy smiling couples inside are painted everywhere.
Baby sees the LA Times on the table. He flips it over so he
doesn’t have to see the headline featuring ‘Robbery’.
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Baby looks out to see a COUPLE in a car at the lights. They
seem happy living the life Baby does not. They pull away
revealing-
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The PRETTY GIRL from earlier.
She’s outside the diner, wearing grey sweats, and still wearing
earphones too. She appears to be singing as she -
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Walks into the diner and right into the kitchen.
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Baby peers through the round glass of the kitchen doors as the
girl gets changed out of her sweats. Still singing.
Baby takes out one ear of his earphones to hear what she’s
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singing. But he can only hear the diner music and a little
snatch of her voice when the kitchen doors swing open.
For a brief moment, the planets align and Baby’s music, the
diner muzak and her singing make glorious union.
THE GIRL
B-A-B-Y, Baby.
Baby takes off his shades to look more clearly at this angel,
but she disappears from view to finish getting changed.
Baby stares at the empty space where she just was. Then -
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FEMALE VOICE
What can I get you this fine morning?
Baby looks up in a daze. It’s her. She’s a waitress.
BABY
Uh.
THE WAITRESS
Don’t worry if you need a minute. I
got all the time in the world.
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She gestures to the empty diner. One man at the counter and a
second bored waitress. Baby stares at photos on the menu.
THE WAITRESS (CONT’D)
Y’know that’s the kids’ menu right?
-C
BABY
Uh. Yeah.
He embarrassedly flips the menu to the other side.
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THE WAITRESS
Hey don’t worry. I get it. It’s early.
You need Joe to jump start your head?
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BABY
Joe?
THE WAITRESS
Coffee.
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BABY
Uh. No thank you.
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THE WAITRESS
Did you just get off?
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BABY
Get off?
THE WAITRESS
You just starting your day or did you
just get off?
BABY
I guess.
The Waitress smirks at his non-answers. Hearing Baby talk more,
we note his speech patterns are half schoolkid and half stoner.
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THE WAITRESS
What do you do?
BABY
I’m a driver.
THE WAITRESS
Like a show-fer?
BABY
A what?
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THE WAITRESS
You drive around important people?
BABY
I guess I do.
-C
THE WAITRESS
That’s pretty cool. Is it exciting?
BABY
Yeah.
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THE WAITRESS
Anyone I’d know?
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BABY
I hope not.
THE WAITRESS
Well, aren’t you mysterious?
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BABY
...I don’t know.
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THE WAITRESS
You don’t know? Ha! Do you ever hit
the road just for fun?
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BABY
Not so much anymore.
THE WAITRESS
Me neither. Sometimes I’d like to just
take off. Put some tunes on. Not know
where I was going.
BABY
Yeah?
THE WAITRESS
Yeah.
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A long pause. They drift off, lose themselves in the idea.
THE WAITRESS (CONT’D)
Have you decided on anything yet?
BABY
Yeah...
(blurts)
You are so beautiful.
THE WAITRESS
Oh you just decided that? Well thank
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you but I’m sure you don’t mean it.
BABY
I do mean it.
(looks at her name tag)
-C
Jonathan?
THE WAITRESS
Oh sorry. This isn’t my badge. I only
just started here as a...
(gestures at her uniform)
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BABY
Jonathan?
nL
THE WAITRESS
Yeah, as a ‘Jonathan’.
She smiles. Charmed at his odd manner. She walks off.
THE WAITRESS (CONT’D)
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Well, if you have any questions,
holler.
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Baby stares as she walks off, tapping the backs of diner stools
in time with the music as she goes. She sings a snatch of the
song she was singing earlier in time with the muzak.
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THE WAITRESS (CONT’D)
B-A-B-Y, Baby.
Baby takes in this image of The Waitress framed within the
couples in convertible illustrations that adorn the walls.
BABY
I have a question.
THE WAITRESS
Uh huh.
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BABY
What song are you singing?
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Scene 8 - Baby's Evening of Preparation and a New Job Offer
‘The Plot’ by Lalo Schifrin.
Baby marches into a discount music store, the final resting
place of physical media. Zeroes in on the right section. He’s
never looked so serious. He flips through jewel cases. Finds.
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BABY
Car-lah Tom-ass.
We see the CD cover. ‘Gee Whiz: The Best Of Carla Thomas’. He
flips to the back cover. Track listings. ‘13. B-A-B-Y’.
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Pays with a crisp new 50 dollar bill. And he’s out.
23 INT. BARE APARTMENT - DUSK 23
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‘B-A-B-Y’ by Carla Thomas plays at full volume.
Baby stands in the middle of the room. Lost in the track. The
Elderly Man sits in the corner again, watching TV.
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We see a red light flashing on the phone.
Baby doesn’t see it at first. He mouths along with the song -
CARLA THOMAS
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“And I can’t stop loving you.”
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Baby has started a slow, solo dance around the room. The phone
light flashes in time with the track.
CARLA THOMAS (CONT’D)
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“And I won’t stop calling you.”
The Elderly Man waves to Baby, alerts him to the phone. Baby
presses pause on his music and picks up.
DOC (O.S.)
You didn’t answer. What’s up?
Baby briefly glances at the ceiling, puzzled.
BABY
What’s up?
21.
DOC (O.S.)
Baby, I don’t actually need to know.
Here’s what’s up.
24 INT. DISCOUNT CLOTHING - EVENING 24
‘Supervillain Theme’ by Madvillain.
DOC (O.S.)
I need you to drive me to an
appointment and I need you to look
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smart.
Over the phone conversation, we see Baby in a cavernous
discount menswear store in Santee Alley, garment district.
-C
It appears that we’re in the store after hours and that Doc is
very much in charge. He may be the owner as he has several same
age lackeys helping Baby try out some smarter clothes.
DOC (O.S.) (CONT’D)
You got what it takes to be a
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chauffeur?
BABY (O.S.)
I think so.
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DOC (O.S.)
You know what a chauffeur does?
BABY (O.S.)
Drives around important people.
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DOC (O.S.)
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You learn fast kid. I like it.
Baby admires his new suit. Doc gives it the nod too.
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25 EXT./INT. FANCY RESTAURANT/FANCY CAR - NIGHT 25
‘Marca A La Turca’ by La Tia Leonor Y Sus Sobrinos.
Baby drives Doc’s Merc up to an equally smart restaurant.
It’s a final sitting for dinner, not too busy. Baby sees a
booth full of SERIOUS LOOKING GUYS through the window.
He wears his new black suit, shirt, tie, smart sunglasses and
driver gloves. Only one earphone is in. Doc sits in the back.
Baby pulls into a spot. A town car is parked alongside.
22.
A valet opens the door. Doc leans over to Baby and whispers -
DOC
I won’t be long. In case of fire,
there’s something in the glove.
Doc gets out, leaving Baby staring at his gloves, intrigued.
There’s a hidden weapon in his gloves? Like in ‘Iron Man’?
Baby then realizes Doc meant the glove compartment. He opens
that to sees a PISTOL inside. He closes the glove again.
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He looks over to the restaurant. Three WELL DRESSED TOUGHS sit
in a booth with their backs to the wall. They greet Doc with
cordial hugs. They look like gangsters. Or ex-cops.
As they talk we only see the back of Doc’s head. Their
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conversation cannot be heard but it syncs perfectly with the
music in Baby’s ears: a wonky sixties cover of Mozart’s Piano
Sonata in A Major.
The four men discuss something important. Through Baby’s eyes
their hushed talk is scored by the piano music. A 4 bar melody
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represents one guy talking, the next 4 bars in a higher octave
represent a second guy. The meeting continues in time with
descending piano scales.
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A piece of paper is passed to Doc across the table, Baby starts
to mouth along with what he imagines the conversation to be,
mimicking the facial expressions of the three toughs.
As he fully commits to this silly charade the window of the
ADJACENT CAR winds down and a POKER FACED CHAUFFEUR looks
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across at Baby, acting like a goof.
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Baby stops. The chaffeur then winds his window back up.
Then, in perfect sync with a celebratory end to the track Doc
walks out of the front door of the restaurant.
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Doc jumps in, slams the door on the closing note of the song.
DOC (CONT’D)
So I got us a job. You in?
BABY
Am I in?
DOC
It was a rhetorical question Baby.
You’re in.
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Scene 9 - Baby Meets the Crew: Tensions Run High in the Warehouse
‘Kashmere’ by The Kashmere Stage Band.
Baby walks in with Doc. We see what he sees. Three new
colleagues. Three hardened criminals. Meet EDDIE, J.D. and
BATS.
DOC
Meet the new cast.
All 30s, all formidable male specimens. Eddie is a slab of
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white muscle with a discolored band-aid on his nose. J.D. is a
long haired, dopey faced Korean, covered in tattoos.
DOC (CONT’D)
This is Eddie No Nose. Formerly Eddie
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The Nose.
BATS (O.S.)
Why, what happened?
EDDIE
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Come on. Don’t ask me that. That’s a
No-Nose’ no-one. Page one.
DOC
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And that’s J.D. He put the Asian in
home invasion. And Bats there-
Bats is an intense dude, mixed race, wiry with piercing eyes
and permanent grin. He wears a leather glove on one hand.
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BATS
No need for the intro Doc, everyone’s
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heard of the ‘One Glove Bandit’.
Bats and Co. treat their new member with curiosity and
malicious glee; their jazzy patter overlapping like Altman.
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They talk around him, at him, project onto him.
J.D.
This is him Doc? This is the mute?
EDDIE
All I hear is talk about this mute.
J.D, Eddie and Bats are up in Baby’s face like wild dogs as Doc
busies himself writing on a freestanding chalkboard.
BATS
That right? Are you the mute?
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BABY
...No.
J.D.
This is the kid, the one who listens
to music all the time.
BATS
If he’s got phones in all the time
how’s he’s concentrate on the job?
DOC
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He doesn’t phone it in.
J.D.
Phones don’t phone it in, huh?
-C
BATS
Driver’s supposed to be the eyes and
ears. Not just the eyes.
DOC
He won’t disappoint.
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EDDIE
You don’t disappoint in this biz, you
just end up dead.
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DOC
I’d put money on any of you fucking
up, before Baby puts a step wrong.
J.D.
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Baby steps, right?
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EDDIE
Why’s he listen to music all the time,
he got mental problems or something?
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BATS
Hey. I got the mental problems on this
crew. Position taken, you hear?
DOC
He’s got tinnitus.
EDDIE
What’s that?
DOC
Had an accident when he was a kid.
Something went pop in his ear.
(MORE)
25.
DOC (CONT'D)
Still got a hum in the drum. Plays
music round the clock to drown it out.
J.D.
Hum-drum, huh?
Baby doesn’t react to them talking about the accident. He’s
distracted by one of J.D’s tattoos that reads ‘Hat’.
BABY
‘Hat’?
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J.D.
Uh?
BABY
Your tattoo says ‘Hat’.
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J.D.
Yeah it used to say ‘hate’, but to
appease my parole officer and increase
my chances of employment, I got the
‘e’ removed.
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BATS (O.S.)
Oh how’s that working out for you?
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J.D.
Who doesn’t like hats?
DOC
So. Let’s talk shop.
(clicks fingers at Baby)
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Baby, you with us?
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Again, Baby doesn’t directly answer. We CUT TO-
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Scene 10 - Planning the Heist: A Team in Tension
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‘Unsquare Dance’ by Dave Brubeck.
Over a strong bass line, hand claps and snare drums -
Doc relates a plan to the four strong team. Some of it is
illustrated on the chalkboard. We see everyone, except Baby,
listen as Doc relays details of masks, timings, routes etc.
Baby sits at the back again. The music in his ears fully drowns
out any dialogue. But he watches their lips.
There is a TOY CAR on the table next to some floorplans. Baby
absent mindedly plays with it as he taps his foot.
26.
The song finishes. Doc finishes. Bats’ hand shoots up.
BATS
I got a question. Tell me why I should
believe Phones over there listened to
a damn word you just said? You go
through the whole play and he ain’t
listening.
DOC
Baby?
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BABY
You’re going to hit an armored truck
at Banco Popular in El Monte at 10am
sharp. You have the details of the
route because someone at the depot has
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a nasal problem. The bank itself is
right by the 10 so we should be able
to hit a ramp within 60 seconds of
getting out. We also have a diversion
crew, who are going to blow up a bread
truck a ways away, keep the fuzz busy.
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Dress code is Michael Myers Halloween
masks, but you can’t all buy the masks
at the same time, looks suspicious.
You guys have the switch car all set
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up, but you want me to go out to the
long stay parking structure at a
Metrolink and get a ride that stays
colder for longer. Boost a commuter
car, a family car. Something that will
blend into the morning traffic.
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(beat)
I think something on the heavy side,
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case we need to ram the police off the
road. An Escalade, a Yukon, an
Avalanche. Whatever it is, it needs to
be ready for an 8.30 start. In the
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ayem.
Wowed silence.
DOC
That’s my Baby.
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Scene 11 - Baby's Playful Car Heist
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‘Bongolia’ by The Incredible Bongo Band.
On a bongo roll, we see a windshield POV, as we pull into a
concrete parking structure and park up in a long stay spot.
27.
Shades on, ears in; Baby sits in a 1989 white Toyota Camry. And
waits for something better.
Drums kick in. Tempo shifts up. The lot gets busy.
On every second beat we hear a loud vibraslap and each time
Baby sizes up another car. Office workers slamming car doors
and beeping keys in perfect sync with his music.
We see a silver Infinti dropped off, a blue Accord, a green
Acura, a silver SmartCar, then bingo. A black Avalanche.
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The middle aged, middle management AVALANCHE OWNER beeps it
locked. Then wanders out of the lot, nose in the LA Times.
On a drum fill, Baby jumps out of his ride, follows.
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29 EXT. NORTH CORONA METROLINK STATION - CONTINUOUS 29
A brass riff scores Baby following the Avalanche Owner, copying
his stride. He follows him onto the train platform. Apes his
glance to the digital timetable. He even swipes a discarded
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paper to look like a real commuter.
When the Avalanche Owner reaches the edge of the platform. Baby
stops, pretending, like his mark, to read the LA Times too. The
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Avalanche Owner stops to get a coffee from a news stand. Baby
does too, like a weird echo of Harpo Marx.
A bongo solo signals the arriving train. Baby waits, lining up
one door away from the Avalanche Owner. They get on.
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The Avalanche Owner moves inside the carriage, Baby does too
and KNOCKS RIGHT INTO HIM.
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BABY
I’m sorry.
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Baby then swiftly moves further down the carriage.
The breakdown ends with a key change and a whistle blowing.
Just before the train doors close, Baby slips off again.
Now a solo sax joins as Baby struts back to the parking
structure, a swing in his step as the train leaves behind.
The brass sounds triumphant as Baby Travoltas back into the
long stay area and right up to his prize.
The Avalanche. Baby walks up. Whips out the OWNER’S KEYS. Beep
beeps. Gets in. Pulls out.
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Scene 12 - Baby's High-Stakes Escape in the Avalanche
The Avalanche pulls into a strip mall lot outside the bright
red facade of a Banco Popular. Parks up.
Baby is still at the wheel. In the back are Eddie and J.D.
dressed in black duds. In shotgun and in black is Bats.
Baby spies, with his little eye, a utility uniformed MARINE
walk past their car and over to a 1988 Red Toyota Pickup.
The Marine eyeballs the Avalanche as he gets into his Ford, but
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Baby’s attention turns to another Ford, the E-350 ARMORED TRUCK
which pulls up level with a side entrance to the bank.
Bats breathes deep. Whispers a mantra, half to himself.
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BATS
What’s in there is ours. It belongs to
us. They got our money. Our hard
earned paper. They snuck in last night
when we was asleep, took our pants off
the chair and emptied our wallet. They
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got what is rightfully ours. So let’s
take it back. What is rightfully ours.
Baby hits play on an iPod plugged into the Chevy’s stereo.
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‘Neat Neat Neat’ by The Damned. A menacing bass riff scores -
Bats. Pulling on the mask from the movie ‘Halloween’.
In the back Eddie also pulls on the ‘Halloween’ mask.
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Third up, J.D. pulls on an ‘Austin Powers’ latex face mask.
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HALLOWEEN 1 (BATS)
What is that?
Fra
AUSTIN POWERS (J.D.)
What’s what?
HALLOWEEN 2 (EDDIE)
Your mask! Doc said Michael Myers.
AUSTIN POWERS (J.D.)
This is Mike Myers!
HALLOWEEN 1 (BATS)
It should be the ‘Halloween’ mask!
AUSTIN POWERS (J.D.)
This is a Halloween mask!
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HALLOWEEN 1 (BATS)
You’re gonna stand out.
AUSTIN POWERS (J.D.)
From who? Is everyone in this mall
wearing a Mike Myers mask too?
HALLOWEEN 2 (EDDIE)
Michael Myers.
AUSTIN POWERS (J.D.)
Whatever dude.
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Austin Powers goes to open his door when Baby stops them -
BABY
Wait. I gotta start the song again.
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Baby rewinds, plays the intro again. The gang stare like he’s
insane. When drums kick at the 5 second mark, Baby points.
BABY (CONT’D)
Okay go.
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The gang jump out of the Avalanche. Run over to the truck.
Surprise the Hopper unloading bags from the back doors.
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Halloween 1 is about to cold cock the Hopper when -
Baby pulls forward a few feet, blocking his view of the
violence. He looks dead ahead, retreats into his bubble.
Chooses not to watch. He lip syncs the first verse -
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THE DAMNED
“Be a man, can a mystery man. Be a
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doll, be a baby doll. It can’t be fun
in any way. There can be found no way
at all.”
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Then on a key change into the chorus, he backs up. Sees two
Halloweens and Austin Powers, each with a bag running toward.
Baby can see the Hopper beyond them. Face down on the ground.
Blood on the concrete. Baby didn’t want to see this. Then-
Halloween 1 & 2 jump in. Austin Powers lags behind, a klutz.
BATS
Fucking move Austin! Move! Use your
powers of speed!
Austin (J.D.) finally makes it to the car. And then Baby floors
it, spins a perfect circle to face the exit. When -
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The RED PICKUP reverses into their path. Blocking the exit.
Baby squeals to a halt as the Marine jumps out, pulls a RIFLE
and opens fire on the Avalanche. Holy shit.
Baby & Co. Hit the deck. Bullets spiderweb the windshield.
Slam into reverse. Scream into a J-turn.
BANG! The Marine takes out the rear window. Glass rains down.
BANG! The driver of the armored truck is out and firing too.
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VROOM! Baby floors it. Escapes over a landscaped island.
In his shaking rear view, Baby can just see the Marine jump
back into the Red Pickup, as he roars onto -
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Scene 13 - Baby's Intense Escape and the Carjacking of a Blue Accord
Sweating, Baby speeds out of there. Screams down the shoulder.
Going 70... 80. The gang in the car have their masks off and
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slump down, out of sight. Bats curses.
An out of control guitar solo signals the Avalanche joining the
freeway and swerving wide to occupy the far left lane.
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BATS
Diamond lane that shit. We got four.
Baby holds the gas down, tearing up the far left, swerving only
to overtake cars observing the speed limit.
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As the guitar solo goes up in register. Bats sees-
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THE RED FORD PICKUP is behind and gaining. Baby is boxed in by
rigs. Allowing the Pickup to get close.
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BATS (CONT’D)
Go Baby go!
Right now. There is nowhere to go. The Pickup closes in, a
determined Marine at the wheel.
To the gang’s amazement, The Pickup attempts the PIT maneuver
(Pursuit Immobilization Technique), tapping the back of the
Avalanche and sending the gang into a tailspin.
That would be pretty crazy, if not for what happens next.
Still boxed in by surrounding rigs, Baby spins the wheel and
turns the fishtailing Avalanche around to face front again.
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Nose forward, Baby floors it, snakes in between the rigs in a
hairy move, just missing them both.
It is some fancy ass driving. Though Baby looks shaken.
The Pickup is left on the scorching hot 10, as the Avalanche
swerves hard right and, like that, is gone -
32 EXT. OFF RAMP - CONTINUOUS 32
The Avalanche glides fast down the off ramp. But up ahead-
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A RED LIGHT. Construction. Single lane traffic.
The music breaks down to the solo bass line. Baby’s car is
third back from the stop light. Bats motions for them to get
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out.
BATS
New ride.
Baby unplugs the iPod and jumps out, there is a PAUSE in the
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music. We hear traffic, sirens approach, sounds of unease.
Bats and Eddie stroll with their bags to the first car at the
stop. A Blue Accord with a YOUNG MOTHER inside, Bats taps his
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pistol on the passenger window. The Mother looks stunned.
YOUNG MOTHER
I have a child.
BATS
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Get the fuck out of the car lady.
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Bats roughly pulls the Mother out and gets the fuck in. Baby
quickly, instinctively opens the back door. Sees-
Her YOUNG SON on the backseat. He recognises himself, then
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unbuckles and hands the scared kid to his mom at the roadside.
BATS (CONT’D)
C’mon pussies. Let’s go go go.
J.D. is lagging again, having run back to retrieve a gun from
the Avalanche. Bats mutters again at the gang klutz.
J.D’s Austin Powers masks FALLS OFF as he races to the Accord.
He quickly picks it up off the street and jumps in.
BATS (CONT’D)
Jesus, Austin!
32.
Baby is now in the drivers seat and quickly plugs his iPod into
this car. We barely miss a bar.
The light turns magically green. They pull out and drive to -
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Scene 14 - Baby's Anxiety Grows as He Loses Another Ride
Baby eases this unplanned ride into a shopping center parking
lot. The GPS is going crazy (all in time with the music)
FEMALE GPS VOICE
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Route recalculation...
Baby glides past an oblivious Black & White that is on its way
out of the huge mall.
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When the cruiser is out of sight, Baby swerves hard and heads
for their target, a quiet access street behind a Target.
They pull up next to a 2005 SILVER SATURN AURA parked in the
shadow of the morning sun.
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On the final chorus, drums drive up the energy as our gang jump
out and slip into their third ride of the day.
We’re back to something like clockwork. The hi hats blending
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into white noise as Baby slams into drive, peels out and -
34 EXT. UNDERGROUND PARKING P3 - LATER 34
Pulls up to a sharp stop back at Doc’s. Baby got the gang out
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of a mess. But he is not as calm as before, he’s sweating.
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BATS
Man up, Baby.
(jumps out)
And go get the fucking coffee.
Fra
We hear the ‘Harlem Shuffle’ intro again. But this time -
35 EXT. DOWNTOWN BUSINESS DISTRICT - MOMENTS LATER 35
It’s a cover by ‘The Foundations’. And it’s a faster tempo.
Equally, Baby performs his coffee run at speed. But he’s not
strutting this time. He’s not enjoying himself. At all.
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36 INT. UNDECORATED LOFT - LATER 36
Doc divides up the take in front of the gang. Baby walks back
in, handing out black coffees. To Doc, to Eddie, to Bats, to...
Baby looks for the missing team member. Doc catches it.
DOC
Where’s J.D.?
Eddie sips at his coffee. Bats sits back and stretches.
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BATS
The International Man of Mystery?
Bats lifts up the Austin Powers mask, puppeteering it with two
fingers through the eyes and his thumb through the mouth.
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BATS (CONT’D)
Beats me.
Bats grins at Baby like a naughty schoolkid.
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37 INT. UNDERGROUND PARKING P3. DAY 37
PING. Baby exits the elevator with Doc. Both carry holdalls.
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Baby walks over to the Silver Aura. Stares at the trunk. But
doesn’t dare open it. We see a SMUDGE OF BLOOD on the latch.
Stay on Baby. Mesmerized. Horrified. Doc takes Baby’s Holdall
from his hands. Gives him a stack of bills in return.
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DOC
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You’re nearly done Baby.
BABY
Yeah...
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DOC
One more job though. Lose this ride.
SLAM. Baby shuts the door, sits in the car. Alone.
38 EXT. JUNK YARD - DAY 38
A slowed down version of Carla Thomas’ ‘B-A-B-Y’ starts.
Baby watches his former ride (the Aura) and former colleague
(J.D.), about to be destroyed in a car wrecker.
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A hydraulic plate presses. The windows explode. Baby turns,
equally crushed, as the song drowns out the CRUNCHING METAL.
He closes his eyes.
FLASHBACK: A HIGH PITCHED WHINE ON SOUNDTRACK
In reverse we see the CRUNCHING METAL of a car slamming into
the back of a pick up truck. Then see in reverse-
- The man shouting. The crying woman driving. The busy road.
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- We see a Young Baby sitting in an apartment we haven’t seen.
Standing over him, the Man & Woman from the previous flashback.
- Eyes closed, Young Baby opens a hastily wrapped gift. He
opens his eyes to see a new iPod. The one we saw earlier,
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unbroken.
- Young Baby peers through a bedroom door. Sees the Man & Woman
argue violently. Listens to the iPod to drown out the fight.
- Young Baby hides under his comforter. His mother leans over
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him. Her mascara has run. She takes out one of Baby’s
earphones, says ‘Hey Baby’. Young Baby closes his eyes. The
WHINE peaks.
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39 INT. HALF EMPTY DINER - DAY 39
Baby opens his eyes. He sits in his usual spot. Sans shades.
Retreats into a happy song (’Lalo Bossa Nova’ by Quincy Jones).
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A finger clicks in front of his face. She’s here. His waitress.
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WAITRESS
You’re back.
Baby doesn’t catch this. She takes one of his earphones out.
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WAITRESS (CONT’D)
You’re back.
Baby is not sure whether he’s dreaming or not.
BABY
I am?
WAITRESS
Yeah you are. And you sir are going to
be my last customer because I am
walking outta that door in precisely
30 seconds.
35.
BABY
You’re leaving?
WAITRESS
Yes I am.
BABY
Can I come with you?
WAITRESS
You can. But I don’t know how exciting
you’re gonna find the laundromat.
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Baby is confused.
WAITRESS (CONT’D)
I gotta run some errands. So can I get
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you a drink instead?
BABY
Oh, I don’t drink.
WAITRESS
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No, I mean water, coffee?
BABY
I don’t drink.
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Another pause. The waitress breaks into a cute grin.
WAITRESS
Well you might not drink sir, but I am
sure getting a buzz off you.
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BABY
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Yeah?
WAITRESS
Yeah. Tell you what, you have a think
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about what you want, and I will stick
around and wait for you.
BABY
You will?
WAITRESS
Yessir.
Baby glances at the menu, but can’t stop watching the Waitress,
who small-talks with a Second Bored Waitress.
SECOND WAITRESS
How you two getting along?
36.
The Waitress grins. Baby loses himself in that sunny smile.
WAITRESS
Oh, good. He’s sweet isn’t he?
SECOND WAITRESS
That kid’s been coming here since
before me. I think maybe his mom used
to work here.
WAITRESS
Huh...
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The song fades in Baby’s ears. The waitress comes back.
WAITRESS (CONT’D)
You know what you want?
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BABY
Your name?
This is not as smooth as it sounds.
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WAITRESS
You can get that for free. It’s
Debbie. Debora.
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BABY
Like the song?
DEBORA
The Beck one? Yes, except I’m ‘d-e-b-o-
r-a’ and I think that’s just ‘d-e-b-r-
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a’.
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BABY
I don’t know it.
DEBORA
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It goes-
(sings just beautifully)
‘I met you at J.C. Penny, I think your
nametag, said Jenny’.
BABY
Jenny?
DEBORA
Yeah, the song is about him wanting to
get with Jenny and her sister too,
whose name is Debra. So it’s not even
really about me, it’s about the
sister. My sister’s name is Mary.
(MORE)
37.
DEBORA (CONT'D)
She’s got all the songs. ‘Mary, Mary
where you going to’, ‘Proud Mary keep
on burning’, ‘Mary, you shouldn’t let
‘em make you mad’. She’s got me beat.
Again. She’s got endless songs. I got
one.
BABY
Two.
DEBORA
What’s the other one?
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BABY
Debora.
DEBORA
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Who by?
BABY
Trex?
DEBORA
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T-Rex? I know ‘em, but I don’t know
that one. How does it go?
BABY
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(half sings)
Deboree-dah. Deboree-dah. Bee-dah.
DEBORA
I like it so far.
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BABY
Oh Deb-o-rah, always look like a zeb-o-
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rah.
DEBORA
A zeb-orah?
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BABY
A zeebra.
DEBORA
Hey, I guess I am wearing black and
white. So you can call me Dee-bra.
BABY
I have it on here.
Baby takes out his iPod and shuffles through in front of her.
Debora notices that it is pink and covered in glitter.
38.
DEBORA
You have that iPod the other day?
BABY
No.
DEBORA
You have different color iPods for
different days, different moods?
BABY
I guess.
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DEBORA
This a pink and glittery day for you?
BABY
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Uh. Yeah.
Debora laughs again. This kid is a kook.
DEBORA
What is your name?
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BABY
Baby.
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DEBORA
Your name is ‘Baby’? ‘B-A-B-Y, Baby’?
BABY
Yeah.
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DEBORA
Well then you have us all beat. Every
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song is about you!
BABY
I guess.
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DEBORA
Did your Mom call you Baby?
BABY
...Sometimes.
DEBORA
She used to work here?
BABY
Sometimes. She was a singer too.
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DEBORA
Oh wow. I like to think I can sing.
But I am not a pro or anything. What
does she do now?
BABY
Nothing...
Baby is looking flustered. He holds up the iPod again.
BABY (CONT’D)
I can find ‘Debora’ if you want.
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Debora pauses, smiles sweetly at him.
DEBORA
How about you play it for me sometime
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when I don’t gotta rush off. Deal?
BABY
Deal.
DEBORA
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Now you know what you want yet?
Baby knows what he wants. Her.
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Scene 15 - Baby's Infatuation: Longing for Debora
‘Debora’ by T-Rex.
Baby sits in a Red Chrysler Lebaron singing along. Loudly. Out
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of his window, he sees the real Debora leave work.
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She briefly shoots a look Baby’s way. He ducks.
41 INT. BABY’S BATHROOM - EVENING 41
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...then resurfaces wet to sing along with ‘Debora’. Again.
Baby is in the bath. The song echoes around the tiles. It is
being played on a battered iPod speaker dock. Baby goofs around
to the track in the bath, in his own mini musical.
42 INT. BARE APARTMENT - LATER 42
‘Debora’ still plays. Baby dances around the living room.
40.
The Elderly Man is in his chair, looking more and more like a
piece of the furniture. He watches the local news again with
subtitles. We see that THE MARINE is being interviewed when -
Baby switches the channels to ‘Jeopardy’.
Then Baby resumes singing with ‘Debora’ again, leading into a -
‘DEBORA’ ON REPEAT MONTAGE: The song scores Baby’s night.
- Baby flicks through an address book. Empty except for ‘D’. We
see ‘DOC’ and his phone number written in a scrawl.
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- Baby adds the name ‘Debora’. Under, he draws a question mark.
- Baby plays dialogue on his recorder in time with ‘Debora’.
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BABY (ON TAPE)
Can I come with you?
DEBORA (ON TAPE)
Yes, you can.
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VEEEEEP. He rewinds this. Plays it again.
- Baby uses a twin deck cassette recorder to edit dialogue. We
see stacks of TDK D90s and TDK D30s audio tapes.
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- Using the pause, play and record buttons on the twin deck, he
has edited a conversation with Debora to say -
DEBORA (ON TAPE) (CONT’D)
Sometimes I’d like to just take off.
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BABY (ON TAPE)
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Can I come with you?
DEBORA (ON TAPE)
Yessir. I got all the time in the
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world.
- Baby sits back in a chair and listens to this dialogue on a
loop. It’s now the dead of night. He is alone when -
The phone rings. FLASHES. Baby stares. Doesn’t pick up.
- Baby sits on the bathroom floor. He lip syncs along to
‘Debora’ with gusto, as if driving other concerns out.
- Baby peers back into the main room. Two things.
One. Sunlight floods in. He has clearly not slept again.
41.
Two. The phone is still FLASHING. Baby doesn’t pick up.
- Baby sits at his bedroom window, looks out at the city.
Mouthing along with ‘Debora’ again.
- The phone FLASHES again. Baby is not present. We see the
Elderly Man rise slowly out of his chair to answer.
Baby runs out of the bedroom. Motions ‘No’. Stops him.
He watches the phone FLASH. ‘Debora’ echoes around the room.
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Scene 16 - Baby's Diner Dilemma
Baby comes bounding out of his block. He gets into his Red
Chrysler Lebaron and peels out. He doesn’t see-
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A BLACK MERC behind him. It follows slowly.
44 INT. HALF EMPTY DINER - DAY 44
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‘I Can’t Believe What You Say’ by Ike & Tina Turner.
Baby is happy to be back. Upbeat music on. His shades are off.
Has the pink iPod with him. He looks out of the window-
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He imagines himself and The Waitress as a young couple in a 50’s
convertible at the lights. Smiling, laughing. Then he hears-
DEBORA
Hey Baby.
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She’s here. The dream come true.
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BABY
Hey Debora. I’m back.
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DEBORA
I can see. What’s up?
BABY
You know... just listening.
DEBORA
Well, what you listening to?
BABY
Music.
DEBORA
Well, duh.
42.
Baby smarts a little at this. Debora stops herself.
DEBORA (CONT’D)
Wait, I take that back. I guess not
everyone listens to music. Could be a
podcast or an audiobook. Hell, I get
to sleep listening to whale song.
Never even seen a whale but I sleep
with one.
BABY
It’s music.
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Baby offers up his iPod. She reads the display.
DEBORA
Ike and Tina Turner huh?
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BABY
You like ‘em?
DEBORA
Half. Like Tina. Don’t like Ike. He’s
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a bad man. Don’t like bad men.
BABY
You don’t?
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DEBORA
Why, do you?
BABY
No. I don’t.
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Baby then sees. Outside the diner. For real. DOC. Patiently
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waiting outside his Black Merc.
DEBORA (O.S.)
I don’t need bad people in my life. Or
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my ears. I’ll stick with the whale.
Debora sees she has lost Baby’s attention.
DEBORA (CONT’D)
Is that your Dad?
BABY
No. It isn’t.
Baby just stares out the window. Debora notes his unease.
43.
DEBORA
Hey, why don’t I give you a minute to
decide.
Baby pauses his music. We hear that FAINT UNSETTLING HUM.
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Scene 17 - Baby's New Job Opportunity and Uncertain Future
Baby walks up to Doc. Shades firmly on. The hum continues.
DOC
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I called three times. Something wrong?
BABY
No...
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DOC
What’s with you all of a sudden? You
sweet on that waitress or something?
BABY
No...
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DOC
Well, there’s good news and there’s
good news. Good news is you’re paid in
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full. We’re all square. And then the
good news is I got another job for ya.
So maybe if you wanna get your
waitress girlfriend there a rock or
some fur, you’re gonna get a fat cut.
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BABY
She’s not my girlfriend...
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DOC
...So, you in?
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BABY
Am I in?
DOC
One, don’t reply to my question with a
question. Two, I ain’t in the habit of
taking no for an answer. So, get in.
I’m driving.
Doc opens the passenger door. From inside, DEBORA puzzles at
this well dressed older man opening the door for Baby.
Baby looks at Debora one last time, takes a breath. Then jumps
into the passenger seat. They disappear.
44.
46 INT. DOC’S MERC - LATER 46
‘Here We Go’ by Mister Scruff.
Doc drives the Merc down a street with palm trees on either
side. But this is not Sunset Boulevard. It’s Watts. Baby looks
out of the window. His stomach sinking.
DOC
You’re not going to ask why?
BABY
Why?
DOC
Why I’m driving?
BABY
Why are you driving?
DOC
What I’m alluding to Baby, is that you
don’t have to drive forever. You
haven’t done me wrong yet, have you?
BABY
No.
DOC
No you haven’t. I don’t think you have
the fuck up gene. Not like your dad.
Baby says nothing.
DOC (CONT’D)
You keep going like you’re going, you
can leave the wheels behind some day.
How does that sound?
BABY
I don’t know sir.
DOC
What don’t you know?
BABY
I know what I’m good at.
DOC
And I ain’t seen you break a sweat
doing it. I’m just saying, there’s
other jobs in your future. If you want
to shift up a gear.
45.
Baby looks out of the window. Doc seems offended, then smiles.
DOC (CONT’D)
Sure. You can think about it first.
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Scene 18 - Baby's Uneasy Reconnaissance at the Post Office
Doc pulls into a unremarkable strip mall that houses a post
office. Construction is occurring nearby. The noise is
disorienting. It is hot outside. Sticky. Close.
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DOC
This place doesn’t get rolled as much
as you’d think. Most people get scared
off by the area. But we ain’t most
people.
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(looks at watch)
It will be ripe around this time
tomorrow. So what do you say? You
wanna go for third time lucky?
Baby looks at the immediate area, feels uneasy. Turns to Doc.
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BABY
Can I just drive? Have my music?
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Doc looks at him, then shakes his head, smiling.
DOC
Sure you can. But I want you to do
something for me right now. I want you
to go in there. Make a note of the
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number and position of cameras, the
number of registers open, number of
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employees and number of customers. Is
there a guard? Is he armed? Is there
bandit glass? You’re not a face so it
will be cool. Here’s some currency to
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get changed. Take your buds out and
shades off. Less suspicious.
Baby does so.
DOC (CONT’D)
Oh and take him too.
Doc motions to the backseat. There is an EIGHT YEAR OLD KID
sitting on the backseat. He has his own phones in, and is
plugged into his PSP. He throws Baby a bored look.
46.
48 INT. US POST OFFICE - DAY 48
Baby enters the post office. An alien environment to him.
It’s an impersonal space. Like a bank, but without couches and
complimentary coffee. A security guard is present. The counter
is wide open, a heavy door protects the back room.
Without music playing, we again hear the hum in his ears. It’s
an unsettling noise that accentuates Baby’s unease. It is also
intensified by the whine of computers and cameras in the room.
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Baby cases. He counts the number of cameras (three) and the
number of registers (six). There are a few (eight) customers
doing business at the (four) registers open.
He mouths the numbers. The Kid tugs on Baby’s leg. Whispers.
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THE KID
No bandit glass. One guard unarmed,
three cameras, six registers, two
open, eight customers, four employees.
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BABY
Thanks.
They wait in line. The kid continues playing on his PSP.
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BABY (CONT’D)
You okay?
KID
I get bored of this.
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BABY
nk
Yeah. Me too.
Baby reaches his TELLER, a sweet faced lady, some jewelry,
personal flare, a small crucifix. He hands her some pesos.
Fra
NICE LADY TELLER
Back from vacation?
BABY
Uh. Yeah.
NICE LADY TELLER
Oh it would be real nice to get away.
With all this heat.
BABY
Yes, ma’am.
47.
NICE LADY TELLER
How old is your boy?
BABY
Four?
THE KID
Eight.
BABY
They grow up so fast.
AA
The Teller is bemused. She hands back some dollars.
NICE LADY TELLER
Does he have a name?
-C
BABY
You do don’t you?
THE KID
Samm.
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NICE LADY TELLER
Well Samm. I have a mint with your
name on it.
nL
The Teller passes a mint across, smiling sweetly.
BABY
Thank you.
Baby has a sudden flicker of concern. Politely asks.
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BABY (CONT’D)
nk
Are you here tomorrow?
NICE LADY TELLER
Sure am. Workin’ 9 to 5. Just like
Fra
Dolly.
BABY
Dolly?
NICE LADY TELLER
Dolly Parton. ‘9 to 5’.
BABY
Oh yeah. I like Dolly.
48.
NICE LADY TELLER
Who doesn’t? ‘Everybody wants
happiness, nobody wants pain, but you
can’t have a rainbow without a
little rain’. Wise lady.
BABY
She is.
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Scene 19 - Baby Accepts Doc's Offer and Meets the Team
AA
Baby jumps back in shotgun. Samm in the back.
DOC
So?
-C
BABY
No bandit glass. One guard unarmed,
three cameras, six registers, four
open, eight customers.
The kid coughs. Mouths ‘four employees’.
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BABY (CONT’D)
And four employees.
nL
DOC
Anything else?
BABY
The teller seemed nice.
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THE KID
Yeah, that lady gave me a mint.
nk
DOC
She did?
Fra
THE KID
Yeah. She did seem real nice. You
probably wouldn’t even need to use a
gun with her. Just say boo and she’ll
give you the big bills first.
DOC
Chips off the block.
Doc smiles. Baby does too, but only for Doc’s benefit. When
Baby looks out of the window, his expression clouds again.
DOC (O.S.) (CONT’D)
So you think about it?
49.
50 INT. FREIGHT ELEVATOR - AFTERNOON 50
‘Threshold’ by Steve Miller Band.
CLUNK. The elevator doors close on Baby and Doc like a prison
cell. Baby looks trapped as he and Doc go up in the world.
DOC
My offer.
BABY
Yes...
AA
DOC
I’m thinking about your future. Are
you?
-C
BABY
I am...
DOC
And I don’t offer these positions
lightly Baby. You wouldn’t want me to
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be offended would you?
BABY
No.
nL
Doc eyeballs Baby. Unsure if there’s hesitation or insolence.
DOC
It’s just when I give you something
nice, maybe try and help you out of
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your situation and you go off day
dreaming, I feel like I should go fuck
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myself.
Doc smiles broadly. This is somehow much worse. Baby takes a
breath, takes his shades off and says the following.
Fra
BABY
You and I are a team. There is nothing
more important than our friendship.
Doc is surprised and touched.
DOC
Well, good.
CLANK. The elevator reaches their floor. The doors open.
DOC (CONT’D)
Normally I’d introduce you to the rest
of your team. But in this case, you
already met.
We see Baby take a big breath before walking back in.
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Scene 20 - Baby Meets the Team and Bonds with Buddy, Amidst Tension
Walking through the doorway of Doc’s warehouse, we see what
51.
BATS
He’s got tinnitus. A hum in his drum
that he has to drown out by playing
music all the time.
DARLING
You know who else does that exact same
thing? Barbra Streisand.
Bats takes offense at this. Stares at Darling.
BATS
AA
Do I look like a fucking guy who knows
a fucking thing about Barbra fucking
Streisand?
BUDDY
-C
That’s my lady. Watch your mouth.
Bats just laughs. Darling takes a cue to powder her nose. Baby
sits on the opposite side of the room to Bats. Buddy walks over.
BUDDY (CONT’D)
att
That true? You listen to music to
drown out a noise in your head?
BABY
nL
Uh. Yeah. And when I don’t want to
think about stuff.
BUDDY
It’s an escape. I get it.
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BABY
It gets me moving, you know. Music
nk
makes everything better.
BATS (O.S.)
Oh, I am playing the violin right now.
Fra
BUDDY
Knock it off.
(sits, continues quietly)
I used to do the same thing. Used to
fool around with cars when I was a
kid. Drive all night, hopped up,
listening to the radio. I used to have a
special tape. Used to have my track.
My one killer track that would get me
flying. You got one of those?
BABY
Sure.
52.
BUDDY
What’s yours?
Baby speaks phonetically. Like he’s never said the title aloud.
BABY
‘Bry-ton Rokk’.
BUDDY
I know ‘Brighton Rock’. Queen right?
My big brother used to play ‘Sheer
Heart Attack’ right through the wall.
AA
You got it on there?
BABY
Not this one.
-C
Baby swaps out the iPod he has plugged in, for another one in
his jacket. His deep pockets have lots of devices it seems.
BABY (CONT’D)
This one.
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BUDDY
Play it.
Baby finds it. Plays the intro to ‘Brighton Rock’ by Queen.
nL
Buddy takes one earphone. It’s a weirdly intimate image of two
men sharing one pair of earphones.
We hear a fairground organ. Then a chugging electric guitar.
Buddy nods, grins, reliving his teenage rock years.
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Bats looks over at them both, incredulous.
nk
BATS
What are you faggots listening to?
Fra
BUDDY BABY
Queen. Queen.
BATS (CONT’D)
First Streisand, now Queen? Are you
three going to be belting out show
tunes on the way to the job? You don’t
need that shit. You don’t need a score
for a score. Just drive a fucking car.
BUDDY
Come on. You’ve been a wheel man. You
never had a lucky song?
53.
BATS
A cigarette song? Yes. Aprés heist
with a glass of scotch? Absolutely.
But not on the way to a job. Don’t
need any extra noise. I got enough
demons making music up here.
BUDDY
I believe that.
Bats warms to his theme. Turns his chair to face them.
AA
BATS
My old buddy wanted to pull out of a
job because of what was playing on the
radio. We’re about to go in, he won’t
get out of the car. Why? Guns & Roses’
-C
‘Knockin’ On Heaven’s Door’ is playing
on the FM. Gives him the heebs. He
says we all gonna die in there.
BUDDY
So you bailed on the job?
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BATS
Nah. We did it. And he was half right.
He bought it. I didn’t. Fucking crazy.
nL
Bats jumps up now. Seems to be a little coked up.
BATS (CONT’D)
And I’ll tell you another thing.
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BUDDY
Can’t wait.
nk
BATS
My uncle used to be a movie nut. And
we used to ride together, pulling off
Fra
liquor stores. He was my road dog. And
he used to say we should get chase
music ready next time we get in a
chase. I say like what? He says get
the chase music from Bullitt. He was
way into Steve McQueen, not Queen. And
so I goes into some record store and I
pocket me the Bullitt soundtrack. And
guess what? We can’t find the track.
Know why? There is no fucking chase
music in Bullitt. It’s just the noise
of the car.
(MORE)
54.
BATS (CONT'D)
So I said to my uncle, that’s the only
music you need, the sound of a 390 V8
in a third gear four-wheel slide,
there's your music. My uncle didn’t
believe me, he said there’s definitely
music in the Bullitt chase and I said
yeah there is, it’s VROOOOM VROOOOOOM
VROOOOOOM.
(...)
This was all before I stabbed him.
BUDDY
AA
All your stories end with someone
dying?
BATS
I guess you’ll find out Buddy.
-C
BUDDY
Oh, that’s funny.
Bats grins at Buddy. Darling re-enters. Senses tension.
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DARLING
What’s funny?
BABY
nL
What’s Bullitt?
Doc clicks his fingers.
DOC
I need eyes and ears open, people.
li
BUDDY
nk
You got it, Doc. What’s happening?
DOC
Watts. That’s what’s happening.
Fra
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Scene 21 - The Heist Plan and Baby's Struggle
‘This Is Soul’ by Paul Nero.
Doc relates the plan on the chalkboard. Again Baby drowns this out
with incongruously jazzy music in his ears.
This time Baby only half watches. He looks up at the lights,
blots them out with his fingers in time with the music. He then
plays with TOY CARS on the table. But makes them CRASH into one
another. The song ends as Doc wraps up.
55.
DOC
You get all that Baby?
All eyes are on Baby to reiterate the plan. But he is not as
impressive as before, stuttering through the following.
BABY
Uh. The plan is hit this post office.
You know a guy who has a...
(stalls)
DOC
AA
Money order machine.
BABY
We get the order slips themselves and
it’s literally a license to print
-C
money. Every money order is a
potential 700 dollars, each box of
money orders has 250 slips in there.
That’s 175 K for every box you get...
DOC
att
And for the icing on top?
BABY
Tomorrow is the day after people get
nL
their welfare, which means there’s a
lot of their cash in there tomorrow
afternoon. Plan is...go in there. Get
the money orders. And the cash. I get
a used car as the g-ride and the
switch car is one of ours. We come
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back here after and uh...that’s it.
nk
DOC
You missed stuff.
Baby goes red. Like a child embarrassed in front of class.
Fra
BUDDY
The plan is that Darling goes in
first. Then me and Bats. I take her
hostage, put shotgun to her head.
DARLING
We’ve role-played this a lot.
BUDDY
That gets the door open. And gets us
where the money is. And where the
money orders are.
56.
DOC
And the guns?
BABY
I don’t know...
BATS
I got some contacts to get us hardware
that’s fresh and clean. Keep up Rain
Man, we picking it up tonight.
DOC
AA
And then what are you going to do?
Baby stalls. Doc is disappointed. Becomes more intense.
DOC (CONT’D)
-C
You’re going to stay here tonight.
There’s a lot of heat around and we
need to mix up our routines. So you
guys better learn to live together.
Bats breaks into a wide toothy grin.
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BATS
Oh, we in bed together now!
nL
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Scene 22 - Baby Leaves Bats Behind at the Gas Station
‘Nowhere To Run’ by Martha and the Vandellas.
Baby drives. Bats in shotgun. Buddy and Darling in back. She
li
sings along. She has some really good lungs.
nk
DARLING
“Nowhere to run to Baby!”
For once, everyone in the car is enjoying the music. Everyone
Fra
except Baby, who looks like he wants to be somewhere, anywhere
else.
On the line “I know you know you’re no good for me”, Baby looks
at Bats, a dread descending. Bats motions to pull over.
54 INT./EXT. CADILLAC DEVILLE/GAS STATION - NIGHT 54
Bats jumps out of the passenger door.
BATS
I gotta take a leak. You guys want
anything while I’m in there?
57.
Everyone shrugs a negative response.
BATS (CONT’D)
Gum? How about you Darling? Gum?
BUDDY
Sure, I’ll take some gum.
Bats saunters off. Baby watches him walk up to the gas station
where a MALE CLERK is behind the counter.
Buddy and Darling smooch. Baby glances at this in his rear
AA
view.
BUDDY (CONT’D)
Hey. Not in front of the Baby.
-C
DARLING
He don’t mind. And I never seen you
complain when I put on a show before.
(another noisy smooch)
How much do you think there’s going to
be tomorrow?
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BUDDY
If it were just me, enough to live on
for the year. But if we’re talking the
nL
two of us, enough for one weekend.
(to Baby)
My fiancé has expensive taste.
Darling breaks out of the embrace, hits him playfully.
li
DARLING
Hey, blame it all on me why don’t cha?
nk
You got a problem too.
(to Baby)
This one has a gambling problem too.
Fra
BUDDY
I do not have a gambling problem. They
call it gaming now.
DARLING
Fine, we both have a gaming problem.
See? That don’t sound so bad.
BUDDY
Hey, it ain’t a problem if you keep
winning, right Baby?
Baby looks back into the gas station. He can’t see Bats OR the
clerk anymore. It doesn’t feel good at all. He mutters.
58.
BABY
Yessir.
DARLING
Oh hey baby. Was going ask, what’s a
good Egyptian reggae song?
BABY
...‘Egyptian Reggae’.
The door opens. A grinning Bats is back. He dumps whole armfuls
of chewing gum onto Buddy. Packets and packets.
AA
BUDDY
The fuck? Did you just swipe this?
BATS
-C
You said you wanted gum! What am I
going to do, pay for it?
Baby looks back to the gas station. Still can’t see the clerk.
He peels out fast.
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Scene 23 - Bats' Reckless Gun Deal: A Train Yard Heist
‘Fog On The Hudson’ by Moondog.
nL
The gang wait in the dark outside a deserted train yard.
Headlights off. It’s eerie quiet. Inside, everyone chews gum.
Save for Baby who doesn’t look like he wants to play anymore.
Bats flexes his hands. We see his single glove.
li
DARLING
nk
The one glove? Is that a Michael
Jackson thing?
BATS
Fra
Fuck no. It’s not a Michael Jackson
thing. It’s all me. I wanna make an
impression.
BUDDY
Oh, you make an impression.
BATS
They don’t know the name Bats but you
better believe they heard of the One
Glove Bandit. I come into a bank and
the business manager sees this glove
come off, he knows I mean business.
59.
DARLING
You not worried you’ll get recognized?
BATS
That’s the genius Darling. When I
think they’re onto me, I just -
He slips on a second glove too.
BATS (CONT’D)
And now I could be anyone.
AA
BUDDY
Anyone wearing gloves. In summer.
BATS
You got it.
-C
BUDDY
Whatever you say, MJ.
BATS
Fuck you Buddy. I did the one glove
att
before him.
BUDDY
How old are you?
nL
BATS
I am thirty seven years young.
BUDDY
Jackson did the one glove at least
li
thirty years ago. So what, you were
robbing banks at the age of five?
nk
Bats shrugs as if to say “Maybe I was...”.
BUDDY (CONT’D)
Fra
You’re crazy Bats.
BATS
Hey, your parents call you Bats, you
gonna turn out crazy.
BUDDY
Come on. Bats isn’t your real name.
BATS
You doubting I’m Bats? I can show you
my ID anytime buddy.
BUDDY
61.
That doesn’t sound good.
57 INT. ABANDONED RAIL YARD - MOMENTS LATER 57
‘Tequila’ by The Button Down Brass.
Cowbells play in Baby’s ears. A bass part kicks in as -
Our foursome approach the truck and the semi-circle of black
SUVs with tinted windows. In the center of this gathering,
portable work lights illuminate crates covered by a tarp.
AA
Four linen suited gorillas flank the crates (we’ll call them
FARMERS) and a more urbane man (THE BUTCHER) stands in the
middle, quietly makes a list to himself.
-C
As they walk up. Bats discreetly offers Baby a pistol.
BATS
Take this. Look serious.
Baby looks at the pistol being offered. Stalls on taking it.
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BUDDY
Is he going to need it?
nL
BATS
He needs to swagger in like he’s got
one. Let ‘em know we ain’t a bunch of
pussies. Darling excluded of course.
DARLING
li
Oh please.
nk
BATS
Baby, take the gun. It’s not like I’m
asking you to hold my cock.
Fra
DARLING
It ain’t a million miles away.
Baby takes the pistol, just as they come within shouting range
of the men gathered around the crates.
The tallest of the ‘Farmers’, ARMIE, a thick-necked giant looks
straight at Baby, with his earphones in and shades on.
ARMIE
Who’s the geek?
BATS
This is our Baby Boy.
62.
ARMIE
What’s with the ears? That a wire?
BATS
It’s just his tunes. He’s a little
Looney Tunes and he needs his tunes.
ARMIE
Oh yeah? How we supposed to know it’s
not the police or something?
BATS
AA
Is it the police?
BABY
It’s not The Police.
-C
ARMIE
Yeah? What is it?
Baby looks at his iPod display.
BABY
att
‘Tequila’.
BATS
Tequila! Hey, why did the Mexican push
nL
his wife off a cliff? Ah, I ruined it-
BUDDY
To business?
The Butcher starts proceedings by throwing back the tarp. The
li
crates are stencilled with ‘LAPD’. On top of them is a huge
smorgasbord of GUNS AND AMMO. Black gun metal gleams at them.
nk
THE BUTCHER
Tonight gentlemen, ladies, we have
only the finest cuts of pork. Direct
Fra
from local smokehouse.
On Darling: ‘What?’
THE BUTCHER (CONT’D)
You are experienced butchers
yourselves, so as I am sure you are
aware the humble pig can be cooked
from nose to tail. So I can offer you
nine cuts at the best prices in all of
Christendom.
The Butcher motions in turn to Berettas, Smith & Wessons,
Glocks, Kimbers, Colts, Heckler & Kochs and Remingtons.
63.
THE BUTCHER (CONT’D)
So let’s dive in head first: from the
jowl we have the God-sent Roman bacon
that is Guanciale. Actually from the
shoulder of the hog comes the Boston
Butt, a tough but tasty cut. Then the
Picnic Shoulder is a favorite for those
who enjoy the smoking of pigs. Then
center cut loin, double cut pork chops,
baby back ribs, pork belly and Serrano
ham on the back leg. Every one delicious.
AA
The Butcher gestures to a wide array of ammo and grenades.
THE BUTCHER (CONT’D)
And of course, we also have a fine
selection of sausages.
-C
Buddy, Darling and Baby look bemused. Bats claps his hands.
BATS
I’m hungry.
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THE BUTCHER
Fantastique. And how will we be paying
this evening gentlemen... ladies?
nL
BATS
Do you take bullets?
THE BUTCHER
How do you mean?
li
BATS
Like this.
nk
A trumpet hits a loud blast of ‘F’, as suddenly -
BRAP. Bats draws and shoots the Butcher POINT BLANK in the
Fra
face. He drops. Dead. WHAT THE -
The big Farmer guys, caught off guard, reach for their arms.
Stunned, Buddy, Darling and Baby hit the deck.
Bats then SMOKES the nearest Farmer. As his body falls, Bats
rolls down next to his corpse. Grabs his machine pistol.
The song hits a breakdown where duelling drummers madly flail
away at each other in furious patterns as -
BRAT BRAT BRAT. The remaining farmers LET RIP with their
machine pistols and shotguns at the air Bats just vacated.
64.
The syncopation of music and action is shocking and awesome.
Over crates and car hoods, the fire fight between Bats and the
three Farmers as the duelling drum solo intensifies, each burst
of gunfire matched by a burst of drums.
The noises echo around the train yard. A portable light is
knocked over, creating dramatic under lighting. Buddy and
Darling are forced to join the violent melee.
From the deck, Baby has a sideways angle on a six way fight.
Gunfire builds. Shells drop. Car windows smash.
AA
The drums on the track get louder and louder as Baby watches
his colleagues spew hot lead. BRAT BRAT BRAT BRAT.
One Farmer aims at Baby. Baby rolls out of the way and runs
-C
like hell. He is trailed by bullets, dives over a crate for
safety.
The tempo peaks, there’s a last burst of drums and guns. And -
Baby looks up. The train yard is quiet again. There are five
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bodies on the ground that appeared to be alive seconds ago.
He cannot comprehend what he has just witnessed.
nL
Bats is out of ammo. Grabs a nearby clip. Winks to Buddy, who
strides over and goes to strike Bats with his pistol.
BATS (CONT’D)
What the fuck?
li
Bats dodges and shoves Buddy right back.
nk
BATS (CONT’D)
Hey! I just got us some hardware!
We’ve never seen Buddy this mad. It’s not fun.
Fra
BUDDY
You shot the gunsmiths! I thought
these were your contacts?
BATS
Yeah. They were my contacts.
BUDDY
Are you fucking crazy?
BATS
I believe we established I was. Why,
do you still wanna see my ID?
65.
BUDDY
You didn’t think to tell us your plan?
We come in here with no masks, no
nothing -
DARLING
Yeah, what if they recognized us?
BATS
Those what-ifs are dead Darling.
They’re ghosts now. Only way they’ll
finger us is through a Ouija board.
AA
BUDDY
Well your name is only four letters to
spell out.
-C
BATS
Pah. Bats ain’t my real name.
In ‘Tequila’, a huge trill of brass sounds as -
We see one of the farmers is not dead. He runs past Baby,
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toward one of the SUVs. Bats yells at Baby, who is closest.
BATS (CONT’D)
Don’t let him get away, Baby!
nL
Baby has his gun in his hand, but does not fire. The farmer
jumps in the SUV. Makes a break for the entrance. Fuck -
Instead Bats lets rip at the fleeing vehicle. Buddy and Darling
grab a shotgun and mini pistol from the dead and also unload.
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Baby hangs back and pointedly does not join in with the
nk
shooting. His face says everything. He doesn’t want this.
Wailing brass, furious drums and hammond organs score a barrage
of bullets that stop the escapee dead in his tracks.
Fra
We hear a sustained HORN, as the driver slumps on his dash.
BATS (CONT’D)
Baby. Get us out. Move!
No time to argue. Baby grabs another abandoned SUV as Bats,
Darling and Buddy grab as many guns as they can carry.
Baby starts the car. In his haste, one ear bud has dropped out,
meaning that Bats can hear the track as he jumps in the
passenger seat with a lot of hardware in his arms.
Baby waits for the others, then floors it.
66.
The brass in the final bridge reaches a resounding climax as
they pass their old Cadillac, Bats takes a grenade, flicks the
safety and throws it into the open window.
As the car goes KA-BOOM in the night, Bats sings along -
BATS (CONT’D)
Te-quiiiii-laaaaaaa!
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Scene 24 - Baby and Gang's Tense Diner Visit
AA
The foursome drive in the newly acquired SUV. All are silent.
Bats is still jonesing from the previous encounter.
Baby drives past his usual DINER and subtly looks in to see if
-C
Debora is working. Before he can establish this -
BATS
Hey, pull in here.
Baby does not. Keeps driving.
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BATS (CONT’D)
Pull in here. I’m hungry.
nL
BABY
No.
BATS
Stop the car.
li
Baby stops. Bats fixes him. Furious.
nk
BATS (CONT’D)
No? You telling me no?
BABY
Fra
No. I don’t want to go in there.
Baby is firm. Bats breaks into a sickly grin. Cackles.
BATS
Well hel-lo Baby. I never seen you so
mad. You saw a bunch of bodies hit the
floor and you didn’t say nothing, but
for some reason, you get all mad about
this one diner.
BABY
I don’t like it in there. It sucks.
67.
BATS
Well on that recommendation, we gots
to go in.
59 INT. HALF EMPTY DINER - NIGHT 59
‘When Something Is Wrong With My Baby’ by Sam & Dave.
This song plays on the diner’s stereo system. Opens with -
SAM & DAVE
AA
“When something is wrong with my baby,
something is wrong with me.”
Debora is dealing with one sole customer at the counter, she
looks bored and distant. Then the door opens and in walks -
-C
An intense looking Bats, a grim Buddy and Darling. And behind
them, Baby. He pointedly looks at Debora, his sunglasses very
firmly on. He is not smiling. She’s never seemed so far away.
She gets that something’s up. It’s as ominous as him and Doc in
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the parking lot. She’s also never seen him with sunglasses on.
In fact she’s never seen a booth of four people all with
sunglasses on at night. It’s as weird to us as it is to her.
nL
At the booth, Bats soaks up the tension. Loves it.
BATS
Now why you all still mad at me?
li
BUDDY
Because you have a death wish and we
nk
don’t.
Buddy talks calmly, but intensely. Tears a napkin into strips.
Baby and Darling are caught awkwardly in the middle.
Fra
BATS
We’re all going to end up in a chair.
Maybe see out your days in a lawn
chair at Holiday Villa, maybe settle
with the electric one. Might be just
me, but the latter sounds funner.
BUDDY
It’s just you. You revel in bad
choices. In bad luck. And that’s bad
business.
68.
BATS
What’s bad luck to you are more open
doors for me. So I’m gonna pick
thirteen as my lucky number and make
hay while you Hail Mary.
BUDDY
Whatever you do on your own time is
fine. What you do within this group
affects us all.
BATS
AA
Don’t worry Buddy. I ain’t gonna mess
up. I know you have noses to feed.
BUDDY
Oh. Because you never take drugs.
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Baby has been watching Debora the whole time. She comes over.
Senses the sour mood. Plays it cool.
DEBORA
Can I get you anything to drink?
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BATS
I think it’s Coke all around.
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DEBORA
Three cokes.
This strikes Darling as odd. She looks at Baby, who stares down
at his menu. When Debora leaves, Bats continues.
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BATS
Here’s the thing. You rob to support a
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drug habit. I take drugs to support a
robbery habit.
(to Baby)
Baby boy. What you do this for?
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Baby’s glances at Debora. But says nothing.
BATS (CONT’D)
The cash? The girls? Or is it just the
smell of burning rubber?
BABY
I guess.
BATS
So, we in agreement. We’re all about
the white line fever.
69.
BUDDY
Yeah. You’re real funny.
During this exchange, Debora looks at Baby, deeply concerned.
BATS
I’m deadly serious. This is my job.
It’s you two who’s on vacation.
BUDDY
What is that supposed to mean?
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BATS
You’re Wall Street right?
BUDDY
Doc tell you that?
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BATS
Doc tells me nothing. I am just
guessing.
Buddy glowers. Sub zero sarcasm.
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BUDDY
I would be fascinated to hear your
thoughts.
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BATS
Stop me if I’m way off. But I’m thinking
you were a stockbroker, maybe with a
previous fiance, maybe a wife, maybe
kids. You’re making good money, you’re
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good at your work, but you also play
hard. And you like the wild side too
nk
much, get in too deep, rack up debts
that would make even your employers
blush. So either you get laid off or
someone wants to break your legs. You
Fra
decide to run off, maybe take your
favorite lap dancer in tow, head out to
the desert and disappear into your
double life, concentrate on the three
things that get you high: the money, the
boogaloo, the sex, the action. Okay four
things. But am I close?
Buddy is still unamused. Then -
DARLING
I will have you know I was a feature
dancer, not a lap dancer.
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BATS
What’s the difference?
DARLING
It means my name was on the marquee. And
I could charge quadruple for dances.
BATS
Well then ignore everything I said.
BUDDY
You doubt my credentials?
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BATS
Just saying you’re on a trip right
now. And maybe it’s one you’re not
coming back from. Either way, if
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you’re from Wall Street you’re already
a bigger crook than I’ll ever be.
BUDDY
Two things. Don’t underestimate me.
And don’t ever speak ill about my
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lady. Or I will see red and you will
see nothing but black.
Buddy is scary when angered. Bats breaks into a big grin.
nL
BATS
Where did you find her? Vegas? Reno? I
think maybe it was Morongo.
DARLING
li
What makes you say that?
nk
BATS
‘Cause that’s where the Morons-Go.
Buddy’s eyes glaze over. He shifts in his seat. Grips a fork.
Fra
It’s fucking terrifying to see him shift. Bats just laughs.
BATS (CONT’D)
You seeing this Baby? This is what
happens when a man loves a woman.
Debora comes over with the three Cokes.
DEBORA
What can I get you to eat?
BATS
These cats need a happy meal. But I’m
just gonna get the check... Debora.
71.
Baby sees that for the first time. Debora is wearing a ‘Debora’
name tag. Bats then throws an arm around Baby.
BATS (CONT’D)
Oh and my friend here hates this
place. I think it’s okay. So I wanna
ask you, what’s his problem?
Baby cannot look up at Debora. She replies coldly.
DEBORA
Maybe your friend would like to fill
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out a suggestion slip and tell us how
we could improve our service.
Debora puts their check on the table and leaves without looking
at Baby. Darling guesses something’s up.
-C
DARLING
Are you two fucking? Or you were fucking?
You fucked her and didn’t call her back.
Or she didn’t call. Something’s up. I can
definitely smell fuck in the air.
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Baby goes red. Wants to curl up and die.
BATS
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I don’t know about that.
(to Buddy and Darling)
You two, I got down pat. I can’t get a
read on Dum Dum here.
We let the song play as Baby looks up at Debora behind the
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counter. Longs to be anywhere else with her. When-
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BATS (CONT’D)
Come on, let’s bounce. You guys go on
out to the car. I got this.
Fra
Darling and Buddy leave. Baby moves past Bats and sees -
Bats pull the gun from his jacket. Then, like lightning -
Baby GRABS Bats’ arm. Firmly stops him.
Bats is shocked at this action. Baby has never touched him
before and now holds down Bats’ gun arm with real force.
Buddy turns and sees this too. He checks to see if anyone in
the diner sees what’s going on. They don’t.
72.
SAM & DAVE
“When something is wrong with my baby,
something is wrong with me.”
Baby looks determined, emotional. Bats then breaks into another
wide grin. Impressed. He backs off.
BATS
Be sure to tip the nice lady.
Baby takes the check and goes to the counter. He puts it down
and goes to exit, without saying anything to Debora.
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Debora sees under the check folder. An iPod. The pink one.
DEBORA
Hey, you left your -
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Baby doesn’t look back. Carries on walking out.
Debora looks down to see. Cued up on the iPod. ‘Debora’.
She looks at Baby silently depart. She’s worried for him.
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Scene 25 - Tensions Rise Over Baby's Emotional State
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Doc enters. He’s instantly aware of -
A mood. And three camps. Bats on the opposite side of the room
to Buddy and Darling, while Baby lies on his makeshift bed in
another part of the room, facing away. His headphones are on.
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DOC
Who died?
nk
BUDDY
A better question: ‘who didn’t?’.
Fra
DOC
I count four. Something happen I
should know about?
BUDDY
A little trouble procuring the
hardware.
DOC
Trouble?
BATS
There was no trouble. Just a little
haggling.
73.
Doc senses there’s something else to tell. Gets serious.
DOC
This going to bite me in the ass?
Buddy and Darling say nothing. Bats grins wide.
BATS
Nothing’s going to bite no-one. We got
this Doc. You got no worries with us
three here.
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DOC
You three?
BATS
I can’t speak for the mute.
-C
Doc looks to Baby. He closes a partition in the loft space, so
Baby is now separated from them.
DOC
Something wrong with Baby? He’s been a
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problem?
BUDDY
Jesus. He’s not the problem.
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Bats warms to this new theme, keen to distract Doc.
BATS
I don’t know. I’m starting to think he
is the crazy one on this team.
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DARLING
nk
Riiight.
BATS
I saw the first glints of steel in
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Baby tonight, but not when he had a
gun in his hand. He’s real quiet then
he can get real emotional. And over
some dumb waitress.
This registers with Doc.
DOC
A waitress, huh?
BATS
All that emotion worries me Doc.
74.
DOC
What are you worried about other than him
turning left, him turning right and him
knowing when the light turns green?
BATS
Him turning yellow and squealing?
DOC
That ain’t gonna happen. He squeals on
the asphalt not to the cops.
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BATS
And you done how many jobs with him?
DOC
Hey mouth, if you can’t take my
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fucking word for something, get back
in the elevator.
(...)
I’ll bet that kid started earlier than
any of you. You ever hear of the
Pacific Ghost?
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BATS
The joyrider?
nL
DOC
Used to bait cops by zooming through
Malibu speed traps. Going 100 mph with
his headlights off, brake lights
disconnected. Begging the police to
chase him. Then leaving ‘em in the
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dust. That was our boy.
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BUDDY
Wasn’t that like ten years ago?
DOC
Fra
Like I said, that was our boy. He’s
been boosting cars since he was old
enough to see over the dash.
BUDDY
So how’d you find him?
DOC
He stole a Merc of mine. With a ton of my
merch in it. I saw him do it too. I
didn’t stop him right away either,
because I was just like - the balls on
this kid.
(MORE)
75.
DOC (CONT'D)
He didn’t know who I was or what he was
stealing but when I finally tracked him
down I made sure to tell him who I was,
what I do and what I am capable of. And
he went on to pay me off and show me what
he’s capable of. I figured if he likes to
joy ride so much, we might as well make
some money from it.
We see Baby is awake and listening through the partition.
DOC (CONT’D)
AA
Turns out his dad used to work for me
way back. But that kid is a better
criminal than his father ever was. Baby
is going to do a great job tomorrow. And
you are going come right back here and
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apologize to me. You mark my words.
Baby hears this, but doesn’t want to. He CLOSES HIS EYES.
FLASHBACK: A HIGH PITCHED WHINE ON SOUNDTRACK
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- We see YOUNG BABY sitting in the diner. His Mom is working at
the counter talking to a male customer. Baby’s Dad is also
present and staring at the male customer intensely.
nL
- We then see Baby’s Mom in a modest recording studio. She is
behind the glass and we cannot hear what she is singing.
- In the studio are Baby’s unsmiling father and the (younger)
Elderly Man. He is an engineer behind the mixing desk. As
Baby’s Mom sings, the Elderly Man turns to Baby and gives a
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thumbs up.
nk
- We see Young Baby in the backseat of a car, watching his Dad
hold up a gas station clerk at gunpoint.
- Baby’s Dad dumps a bunch of CANDY BARS on the back seat.
Fra
- The Mom drives. She cries. The Dad yells.
- We see the car about to slam into the pick up truck-
- The candy falls off the back seat. So does the iPod.
- Young Baby closes his eyes. The WHINE peaks.
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Scene 26 - Baby's Loyalty Questioned as Bats Reveals Recording
‘Ready Let’s Go’ by Boards of Canada.
76.
Some time later. Doc is gone. Bats sleeps in a chair. Buddy and
Darling curl up on a couch.
Baby quickly gathers his things in the dark. And sneaks out.
62 INT. UNDERGROUND PARKING P3 - NIGHT 62
Baby walks from the freight elevator to the SUV. He gets in.
Starts up. But when he pulls out toward the exit.
Buddy is waiting for him. Blocking his path.
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BUDDY
Where you going, Baby?
BABY
-C
Coffee.
Buddy walks to the driver’s window. Baby remains very quiet.
BUDDY
At 2AM? That doesn’t sound too smart.
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Or much like you either.
(...)
Look you’re a good kid. I said you
shouldn’t have picked up that phone.
nL
But here you are. And that’s cool if
you’re really committed to the job.
But if you’re in it for the buzz, I
say go on your Starbucks run and don’t
come back. Because bad things happen.
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BABY
I know.
nk
BUDDY
Doc said your Dad was in this
business.
Fra
BABY
He was.
BUDDY
But I’m not sure you are. You can’t
dip your toes, you’re either in the
pool or you’re not. If this is just
your escape, then go.
BATS (O.S.)
What we talking about here?
Bats is standing outside the elevator. Buddy covers.
77.
BUDDY
Just about how we should all be
getting more sleep before tomorrow.
BATS
It don’t look like that.
BUDDY
What does it look like?
BATS
Looks like he’s going somewhere at 2 in
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the morning. You going somewhere Baby?
Baby looks back to Buddy. Then to Bats.
BABY
-C
No...
BATS
Good, because we gotta talk about
this.
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Bats is holding a Sony handheld cassette recorder. Baby
searches his jacket for his. Bats stops him.
BATS (CONT’D)
nL
Yeah, it’s the same one.
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Scene 27 - Bats' Suspicion of Baby's Recording Habit
A D90 audio cassette plays in the handheld recorder. Baby sits
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in the middle of the room. Forced to listen. We can hear the
hum in his ears again, underlining the tense mood.
nk
Buddy and Bats stand over him. Bats has his gun out. Darling
sits in the corner. From the tape, we hear recent dialogue.
Fra
DOC (ON TAPE)
What are you worried about other than
him turning left, him turning right and
him knowing when the light turns green?
BATS (ON TAPE)
Him turning yellow and squealing?
Bats presses stop. He is deadly serious.
BATS (CONT’D)
Now why you go and do that?
Baby stammers, but is aware he needs to speak up. And fast.
78.
BABY
I like to record stuff.
BATS
And why do you like to record stuff.
Are you the police? Are you a snitch?
DARLING
Didn’t Doc work with his Dad?
BATS
That don’t mean nothing. He could be
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working out his daddy issues on us. Or
maybe, just maybe he is fucking
retarded. Are you?
Baby doesn’t want to answer that. Stalls.
-C
DARLING
I think he’s just acting the fool.
BATS
I asked him. But ‘acting’ is right.
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What if this is a cover? What if Harpo
here is a real Serpico?
All eyes on Baby.
nL
BUDDY
Speak up, Baby.
BABY
I... I just like to listen to what
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people say. I don’t always understand
first time out. So I listen back to
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the words. To understand. And I like
to make music out of it. It’s just me
fooling. Fooling around.
Fra
BATS
That is one fucking dumbass excuse.
BUDDY
To be fair, a cop would not come up with
an excuse as fucking dumbass as that.
BATS
I’m calling Doc.
Baby doesn’t want that to happen. Blurts out.
79.
BABY
I can play you one. Of my tapes. Of
the music I make.
BUDDY
Where are they?
BABY
At home.
BUDDY
Well, looks like we are going
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somewhere at 2 in the morning.
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Scene 28 - Baby's Driving Test
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The hum in Baby’s ears underscores this section, adding uneasy
menace as the SUV drives fast down deserted streets.
Baby is in the back seat. Buddy drives. Bats is in shotgun with
his gun lightly trained on Baby. Stereo is silent.
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BATS
No music for you. You ain’t moving.
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65 EXT. APARTMENT BLOCK - MOMENTS LATER 65
The SUV pulls up outside Baby’s apartment block. Baby and Bats
get out. Buddy stays in the car.
BATS
li
Watch that fire escape.
nk
66 INT. APARTMENT BLOCK - MOMENTS LATER 66
Bats and Baby ascend in the extremely slow exposed elevator.
Fra
67 INT. BARE APARTMENT - MOMENTS LATER 67
Baby walks in first. The TV is on, but barely illuminates the
room. Bats enters, flicks the light switch. It’s still out.
Bats observes the dimly lit room. He’s both surprised and yet
not at how bare and simple it is.
BATS
This is your place?
80.
BABY
It’s my foster dad’s.
BATS
And where’s he?
The Elderly Man is asleep in his chair. But Bats does not
notice a person is present. It looks like a big old blanket.
BABY
...He’s dead.
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Baby does not acknowledge the old man. He walks right over to a
pile of tapes on the kitchen counter.
He takes the pile of D30s. Turns to Bats and softly says.
-C
BABY (CONT’D)
Got ‘em.
BATS
This better be good, Baby.
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68 INT. UNDECORATED LOFT - LATER 68
Buddy and Bats stand over Baby at the tape recorder. Darling,
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again, is in the corner. He presses play.
The montage that plays is a collage of almost all dialogue
we’ve heard so far. A nonsense medley of crosscut dialogue. It
builds into odd rhythms. Sounding awesome, but absurd.
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Bats presses stop. Buddy shuts his eyes.
nk
BATS
What the fuck did I just listen to?
BABY
Fra
Like I said. I was fooling around.
BATS
Did we not establish what happens when
you act the fool with me?
BABY
I wasn’t acting. I am one.
A pause. Then -
DARLING
Well hell, I like it. It’s funny.
81.
BUDDY
I say we get someone else.
BATS
At this time of night?
BUDDY
Anyone you’ve worked with that’s still
alive?
BATS
You two are still alive.
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BUDDY
I’m so honored.
BATS
-C
Lemme think about what to do while I
give the kid a ride home.
Bats tucks his gun into his waistband and puts his jacket on.
Baby does not like the look of this. He speaks firmly.
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BABY
I can do this. I’m driving tomorrow.
I’m not retarded. I’m fast. I’m
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driving.
Buddy and Bats exchange looks.
DARLING
Let him. So what? He recorded stuff.
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Big deal. I was kinda hoping someone
got all the pork nonsense on tape
nk
because that was bananas.
(...)
Besides I kinda wanna hear the rest of
the tape.
Fra
BATS
Oh yeah? Well go get it.
Bats throws the D30 cassette out of the window.
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Scene 29 - Narrow Escape: The Tense Standoff
We see a smashed cassette. The audio tape spooled out on the
concrete like brown spaghetti. The morning sun rises.
82.
70 INT. UNDECORATED LOFT - EARLY MORNING 70
Doc enters to find Buddy, Darling & Bats dressed in civilian
attire for the robbery. They look weirdly normal.
DOC
Where’s Baby?
BUDDY
I’m going to guess... in the car.
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71 INT. UNDERGROUND PARKING P3 - MOMENTS LATER 71
‘Movement One’ by Herbie Flowers & Barry Morgan.
PING. Buddy, Bats and Darling exit the elevator to find -
-C
A blue Mitsubishi Galant. Baby at the wheel. Eyes fixed forward.
Hands ten to two. Music pumping on the stereo.
The gang get in. Buddy and Darling in back. Bats in shotgun.
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Bats kills the stereo. Produces a coke spoon. Takes a big snort.
BATS
Now I’m going to make this clear. You
nL
can listen on your phones or do
whatever it is you need to do. But I
don’t want to hear none of your
bullshit today.
Baby silently plugs his earphones into the iPod. The music
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continues in Baby’s head and our ears.
nk
BUDDY
Let’s get this over with.
Baby pulls out. Heads for the ‘EXIT’.
Fra
72 INT. MITSUBISHI GALANT - DAY 72
‘Music For The Head Ballet’ by The Bonzo Dog Doo Dah Band.
A solo harpsichord plays a jolly fairground intro as the gang
cruises down Century Boulevard. Very slowly.
Baby listens to the music in his earphones as they reach the
intersection of Success Avenue. And find themselves in -
Gridlock. Some construction is up ahead. It’s the middle of the
school run. Cars slow to a stop. It’s a bad time for a jam.
83.
Baby signals, his indicator in sync with the 4/4 tempo. The
track becomes a woozy waltz, repeating a ‘down then up’ pattern
that goes around and around as the traffic maddens.
The Galant idles in the left hand lane. Baby begins to sweat.
Unsure of the neighborhood. The air con blasting.
Bats’ cocaine seems to kick in, his restlessness changing the
simpatico of action and music from being magical to menacing.
Buddy taps his fingers on a seat rest in time with the music.
Darling flicks through the pages of a magazine, also in time.
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Bats cocks and uncocks his shotgun in time. Baby eyes this.
The whole hood is alive with incident, all in time with the
track. Kids shouting. Angry neighbors. A police helicopter.
-C
The sound of chopper blades prompts the gang to all look up.
When they look back down a COP CAR is right alongside them.
Their next door neighbor in the traffic jam is THE POLICE.
A change of key in the track. The four gang members all look
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straight forward, eyes fixed on the static road ahead. Then -
The music resumes its woozy waltz as the gang take turns to
look at the cops. The glances are furtive first, then more
nL
confident. The dance of their turning heads is very surreal.
As the melody accentuates the odd notes, we see the cops look
back at the gang in the Galant. We take in the odd magic of -
Four gang members and two cops, all wearing shades, trying to
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inconspicuously check each other out in time with a waltz.
nk
Baby doesn’t want to see Bats slowly raising his shotgun. Out
of sight of the cops, but ready to fire.
Then suddenly, the Cop driving, points right towards Bats.
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Bats does a ‘who me?’ The Cop shakes his head. Then -
POINTS at Baby. Motions for him to take off his earphones.
Baby does so. The waltz concludes. Bat smiles.
BATS
Yeah Baby. It’s the law.
Bats makes the ‘he’s crazy’ sign to the cops about Baby. The
cops get a call. Switch their SIREN ON. Pull out of the jam and
out of sight. Everyone exhales. Heart attack over... For now.
84.
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Scene 30 - Post Office Heist Gone Wrong
‘Intermission’ by Blur.
A solo piano plays an endlessly descending melody.
Baby pulls up into the strip mall. The place is quiet but
everything feels bad. The heat, the traffic, the summer
aggression in the air, a rain drop on the windshield. In Watts?
There’s even a construction PICKUP TRUCK partly blocking their
exit, steel enforced concrete poles hanging off the back. Even
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a novice would get spooked by this, but -
Bats ignores the omens and repeats his mantra.
BATS
-C
Remember, what’s in there is ours. It
belongs to us. They got our money.
They got our money orders. They got
our momma’s jewels. They got our
girlfriend in there. So let’s go in,
get them, get her. Take back what is
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rightfully ours.
Darling opens her door. It starts. There’s a thunderclap.
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A crunchy electric guitar joins the piano. Adds menace.
Buddy and Bats watch Darling walk into the post office alone.
Baby gets a pervasive feeling of dread. A baby in a stroller
cries. A chorus of honks and angry drivers are heard nearby.
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A bass guitar joins the sneaking melody. Buddy and Bats get
nk
out, take bags from the trunk and follow Darling. Baby is
distracted by an argument between two men at a bus stop.
A huge thunder clap and cymbal crash heralds the introduction
Fra
of drums. And also Buddy and Bats entering the post office.
The tempo of the track quickens. Traffic noise flares nearby.
Baby stares forward. Rain spots his windshield.
Baby hits the wipers. They are in perfect time with the track.
He stays, fixed forward, staring at the jagged mess of
protruding poles, fixating on this premonition of doom.
Tempo quickens. Rain thickens. Baby flicks the wipers up a
notch in speed. In his wing mirror, Baby sees -
A SECURITY GUARD ambling around the corner. Looks up at the
uncommon rainfall. Finishes off a sandwich.
85.
A squeal of feedback. Baby looks through the post office door.
He can see frantic activity inside.
He looks back to the security guard who has thrown the sandwich
wrapper in the trash and now slowly approaches Baby.
The tempo quickens. The drums become more manic. Baby flicks
the wipers to go one faster. Matching the tempo. The security
guard passes, eyeballing Baby. Then -
A GUN SHOT. From inside. Baby and the Guard look to the door.
AA
Baby doesn’t want to think what just happened in there. The
Guard runs to the door of the post office. Just as -
Buddy, Darling and Bats run out, bags and guns in hand.
-C
Hard cymbals strike. White noise guitar. Madly fast piano.
The Security Guard reaches for a walkie.
BATS BLOWS HIM AWAY WITH A SHOTGUN. POINT BLANK.
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Baby witnesses this. Close up. He is in total shock.
BATS THEN SHOOTS THE SECURITY GUARD ON THE GROUND TOO.
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Sound EXPLODES around them. AN ALARM. SCREAMS from passersby.
The sound of distant SIRENS as -
Darling and Buddy leap in the back and Bats jumps in shotgun.
A huge shift up in tempo, the track threatening to collapse.
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BATS (CONT’D)
nk
Move!
Baby doesn’t move.
Fra
BATS (CONT’D)
Fucking move!
Baby doesn’t go.
BATS (CONT’D)
Fucking hit the gas you fucking
retard. Fucking move. Go!
Bats HITS Baby in the face with the shotgun stock. It knocks
out a lens from his sunglasses. We now see one naked eye.
One steely eye. Baby doesn’t move. Baby doesn’t go.
86.
BUDDY
Baby go! Go now!
BATS
I’m blowing your fucking head off in
three seconds if you don’t move!
DARLING
Move!
Bats POINTS the barrel of his shotgun at Baby’s head.
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BATS
1-
Sirens mass. Baby holds still. That steely eye staring at Bats.
-C
BATS (CONT’D)
2-
Music and noise crescendos around them. And then -
BATS (CONT’D)
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3!
Baby HITS the gas. Drives hard and fast. Straight into -
nL
The back of the Pickup Truck. The concrete poles.
WRECKING THE PASSENGER SIDE OF THE CAR AND IMPALING BATS.
A blast of violent noise. Wailing distorted feedback.
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BATS IS DEAD. The car is FUCKED. The sirens get CLOSER.
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Baby, Darling and Buddy are alive, but badly concussed.
Concrete dust and radiator mist cloud the trashed Galant.
BUDDY
Fra
Get up. Get up. Get up.
Buddy pulls Darling out of the car. Baby gets out too. He has
one earbud hanging out of his ear, one sunglass lens missing.
The song whites out. Returns to a simple solo piano. Buddy
looks at Baby. He is incandescent with rage.
BUDDY (CONT’D)
What did you do? WHAT DID YOU DO!
BABY
I moved.
87.
Buddy FLIPS. Grabs Baby. Looks ready to shoot him there and
then. Baby’s ear bud falls out. When -
POP! POP! POP! A COP is positioned on the street. Shooting over
the hood of the first Black & White to arrive.
BUDDY RETURNS FIRE from behind his car door. Darling too. Baby
ducks down behind the wreck of the Galant. He does not know
what to do and looks again to his music for direction.
He puts his left earbud back in as a new track kicks off -
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‘Hocus Pocus’ by Focus.
A heavy guitar riff plays in left channel. Baby puts in his
right earbud. A second guitar joins in the right channel.
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Police cars screech into view all around. Officers screaming
with fury at them to lay down their arms.
The track builds. Baby stands. The track kicks in.
Baby. Buddy. Darling. Run for it. Race to survive.
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Driving guitars, bass and drums propel Baby forward. Buddy
fires back. Darling loses her heels, runs barefoot.
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The three of them disappear out of the back of the strip mall.
Ducking into to a back alley. The sound of police boots and
screeching tires gaining on them.
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They pound along the alley. Baby is first, looking crazy with
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his single lens sunglasses. He vaults over a chain link fence
and runs fast, leaving Darling and Buddy behind.
He sails across a street, cars screeching around him. Heads for
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a memorial park up ahead. Feet pounding.
Guitars build. Baby runs fast and is out of control. He slams
into a middle aged male DOG WALKER on a snare hit.
Drum solo. Baby hides in a clump of trees. Stops. Catches his
breath. His organs feel like they are in his mouth.
Vocal section. Crazy yodelling. Hammond Organ. Baby looks
around. Sees the police chasing Buddy and Darling on foot.
Black & Whites splitting every which way. Circling the park.
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The vocalist begins a rising scream. Baby gears up. Knows he
cannot stop. Police are coming. Chopper blades are closing in.
The dog walker is waving in the direction of the trees.
Drum fill into driving heavy guitar. Baby makes a break. Heads
back into the sun. Cops are suddenly on his heels. One Black &
White driving onto the park itself.
Baby runs. Cops won’t shoot. There are too many people in the
park. Kids scream. Mothers yell. Hobos are tripped over.
Hectic drum fills and snares build. Baby hotfoots it across a
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crosswalk, weaving through shoppers as he heads for a -
75 INT./EXT. RUNDOWN MALL - CONTINUOUS 75
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Baby slides down banisters into the sunken ground level of a
busy-ish shopping mall that has seen better days.
Another crazed drum solo signals his fast descent down the
stairs and mad dash right into a customer elevator going up.
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More crazy yodelling scores his ascent to a higher level. Baby
catches his breath in an elevator full of women. Baby looks out
of place, panting and sweat drenched. He takes off his cyclops
sunglasses to look less odd. It doesn’t work.
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As the vocal rises, Baby can see the Cops sweeping the food
court. At the peak, one cop sees Baby in the elevator. The lift
doors open. Baby is out of there.
A frenzied guitar solo sees Baby tear around the top floor. He
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can see cops running up escalators to find him. He tries to
fast walk, so as not to look conspicuous. He darts into a -
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76 INT. DISCOUNT CLOTHING STORE - CONTINUOUS 76
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Baby takes out his ears. Grabs a baseball cap and disappears
into aisles stacked with clothes. The track plays faintly in
his loose earphones and mixes with the store muzak. Baby tries
on a denim jacket. Picks up new shades. Sees -
Cops reflected in the convex mirror, high up on the wall.
Baby avoids them and walks straight back out. The tags on his
stolen clothing set off the store alarms. The cops turn to see -
Baby has gone. He has disappeared into a nearby -
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77 INT. ELECTRONICS STORE - CONTINUOUS 77
Baby crouches down on the floor of a low rent Best Buy style
store. He pretends to inspect a particular stereo system.
One ear bud is back in and the track’s crazy oompah breakdown
mixes with the disorienting noise of many plasma screens.
Outside Baby sees the cops run past the store. Their path takes
his easily distracted eye to a display of televisions.
Playing on the screens is a scene from ‘Top Hat’ where FRED
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ASTAIRE tap dances and mimes the massacre of the chorus with
his cane a substitute for a submachine gun.
All danger briefly fades as Astaire dancing syncs up with
Baby’s music. The TVs are placed next to mirrored pillars.
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Creating a kaleidoscopic effect that mesmerizes...
It’s fleeting. The cops are back. Breakdown is over.
The huge guitar riff returns and Baby runs through the store,
heading not for the exit, but for the staff room. He busts
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through their stock room and past yelling employees to find -
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Scene 32 - Baby's High-Speed Escape and Shootout with Buddy
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Baby busts down the stairs. TRIPS ALARMS. Up above the cops
burst into the stairwell. Baby sees them. But doesn’t see -
The cop who enters the stairwell at a lower level. FUCK.
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Baby hits him at full speed. Knocks them both flying. The cop
slams hard into the door he just opened. Baby tumbles down the
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next set of stairs. He recovers with a limp. Escapes to -
79 EXT. RUNDOWN MALL PARKING LOT - CONTINUOUS 79
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Baby races into the full lot, shaking off his new injury.
He zeroes in on models of cars from the pre-immobilizer era.
Spots a 91 Accord, a 95 Civic, a 2003 Corolla.
As the cops burst into the parking lot, Baby disappears down
amongst the parked cars, out of their view.
While on the ground, he tries the doors of the nearest
vehicles. Then, right in front on him.
Cops. Run past on foot. Missing him.
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Baby stands up and on the rising guitar chords, smashes at the
window of the nearest white Corolla with his elbow.
CRASH. Baby messily smashes the window. He opens the door and
sits in the glass as a hectic drum solo plays.
He tries to hot wire it. But the engine won’t kick over.
He slumps down in his seat. Cops are running back and forth.
The rising vocal section builds. Hits a peak.
The engine fires up and Baby LURCHES forward. His seat belt
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alarm chimes as he pulls a tight 90 degree turn. Cops spot him.
Some fire. Sending other shoppers screaming.
Baby roars forward in the Corolla, clipping trolleys and non-
compacts as he goes. His wheels SCREAM as he settles into the
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new car and turns perfect corners to get out of this maze.
As two guitars rapidly solo, Baby leaves the cops behind,
snaking through the lot when -
BOOM. He ploughs hard into a car that is reversing at speed.
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It’s a grey Silverado with broken windows. In the front -
BUDDY AND DARLING. No fucking way.
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BUDDY
No fucking way!
Cops descending. Both Baby and Buddy try to get their cars
started again. Buddy’s ride is fucked. It’s not happening.
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Buddy SCREAMS at Baby. The veins in his neck bulging.
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BUDDY (CONT’D)
Are you a fucking jinx, you maggot?
The crazy vocals rise again. Sirens are getting close. Buddy
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and Darling jump out of their car. Move toward Baby’s.
DARLING
Get us out of here Baby! This is your
fucking mess.
An LAPD bullhorn barks for them to put down their -
BRAT BRAT BRAT. Darling lets rip in the bullhorn’s direction.
Buddy is about to fire too, when return fire EXPLODES from
three cops using nearby parked cars as a blockade.
Buddy ducks, but DARLING IS HIT. And HIT. And HIT. And HIT.
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Baby is still in the car and can see two things.
1) DARLING’S BODY RIDDLED WITH BULLETS AND JERKING WILDLY.
2) BUDDY’S FACE TURNING EXPRESSIONLESS, EYES SEEING RED.
The bullets stop. Darling drops DEAD. The bullhorn resumes -
L.A.P.D
Put your guns dow -
Nope. Buddy strides around the car and walks directly TOWARDS
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the cops, firing all the way. He is a man possessed.
He wastes the police who are in the way. Fearlessly walking
toward the cops, shooting with fire in his eyes.
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Three cops are WASTED in Buddy’s vengeance. He then shoots the
officer with the bullhorn who is back by a squad car.
What few pedestrians are still in the lot are crying and
shrieking. Massed sirens. More cops coming and fast.
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The insane pounding guitars still ring in Baby’s ears. He stays
in the driving seat, waiting for Buddy’s next move.
He watches as Buddy calmly walks toward him, fixes him with
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dead eyes, RAISES HIS GUN AND OPENS FIRE.
Baby slips down in his seat. Pops into reverse blindly. His car
barrels backwards, as Buddy unloads bullets.
A final drum solo plays as his Corolla slams into some parked
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cars and he rolls out on to the tarmac.
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His sunglasses and iPod scatter on the floor as he crawls in
between some parked cars.
Buddy approaches, barking madly in between each shot.
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BUDDY
You-should-have-never-picked-up!
Baby needs the iPod desperately, but cannot reach it without
exposing himself to Buddy’s hail of bullets, so -
Baby grabs the revolver of a downed officer. RETURNS FIRE.
Buddy dodges behind Baby’s crashed car, genuinely not expecting
fire from Baby. But he’s not surprised to see -
BABY’S HAND. Reaching out. Trying to grab the dropped iPod.
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Buddy unleashes lead and BLOWS THE iPOD TO SMITHEREENS.
End of Song. Then-
Baby RUNS for it, zig zagging through the parked cars. His only
rhythm now: the sound of police sirens WOOP WOOPING.
He runs, turns corners, sprints frantically, trying to escape
the parking lot and get far away from Buddy and the cops.
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Scene 33 - Baby's Desperate Escape
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We stay with Baby as he sprints through back alleys. The sirens
and firing sounds fall away and the sound of blood in Baby’s
eardrums gets louder and louder.
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Baby swaps his gun between hands and presses on his neck,
taking his pulse. It beats fast. He runs fast. Very fast.
Baby closes his eyes and lets his pulse guide him as he runs.
The sirens fall away, the commotion behind him now. We stay with
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him running, his blood racing, his pulse quick.
Then slows on the corner of a quieter neighborhood street.
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He sees an OLDER LADY slowly driving a Purple Pontiac Grand Am
Coupe. She appears to be listening to a religious radio station.
Desperate, Baby runs up to her, gun underneath his jacket and in
a voice like we’ve never heard from him -
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BABY
Get the fuck out of the car lady!
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Baby channels the (now deceased) Bats. The Older Lady freaks.
She gets the fuck out and we FOLLOW HER as she runs across the
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street and over the low wall of a nearby lot.
She decides to stay low on the ground, hide. Then as her
breathing calms, she hears something curious -
THE SOUND OF SWITCHING STATIONS... Her car appears to still be
idling. She hasn’t heard it leave. But she does hear -
A ballad. A dry news report. A country ballad. Traditional
Mexican music. Another ballad. Another ballad. A slow soul
track. A commercial. Another ballad...
The Lady looks over the wall and sees Baby still in the Pontiac,
trying to find the correct song on the radio to drive off.
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She looks at him dumbstruck. He looks at the car stereo, fully
concentrating on his search for tempo.
The final insult is Laurie Anderson’s ‘Oh Superman’. As this
super slow avant garde piece plays, Baby looks up and meets
eyes with the Lady for a second. Then he says-
BABY (CONT’D)
I’m so sorry.
‘Radar Love’ by Golden Earring comes onto the radio. Baby turns
the volume WAY UP, pops it into drive and peels out fast.
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GOLDEN EARRING
“We’ve got a thing that’s called a
radar love!”
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The Lady watches him go. What the -
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The Elderly Man asleep in front of the TV news. On it: live
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helicopter footage of Buddy carjacking a Red Durango as he
battles police in the streets.
The window is open and we can hear ‘Radar Love’ playing even
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before we see a car pulling up. (It’s a long song).
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Baby parks the Pontiac, but doesn’t want to switch off the
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radio. He looks up. Sees the window is open upstairs.
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Baby leaves the engine running and the radio playing as he runs
into this apartment block. He leaves the main door open so the
music can echo around the stairwell.
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The elevator is not on the ground and is slowly ascending so he
runs up the stairs two at a time and bursts into the -
83 INT. BARE APARTMENT - CONTINUOUS 83
Baby wakes the Elderly Man. On the TV is live coverage of Buddy
making his escape from the police in the Red Durango. Baby
communicates quickly in sign language. No subtitles.
BABY
We have to go. Bad.
Before Baby can explain, ‘Radar Love’ STOPS PLAYING outside.
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Baby looks out. A red bullet riddled Durango is parked next to
his car. The doors are wide open and fuck -
Baby grabs a vinyl record, a battered copy of ‘Motown
Chartbusters Vol 3’. He puts it on to the stereo and places the
needle on the track he needs: ‘Edwin Starr’s S.O.S’.
He then wheels the Elderly Man into the center of the room. He
rips out the floorboard and stuffs as many dollars into the
Elderly Man’s gown and blanket as possible.
He puts the rest of the money in a duffel. Grabs his address
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book, but does not see A LOOSE PAGE flutter to the floor.
He grabs a dictaphone. Another portable recorder. Medication. A
stack of D90s. He’s about to grab some iPods, when -
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SMASH. The window by the fire escape is being KICKED IN.
Baby leaves all his iPods behind. He wheels the Elderly Man’s
chair around, pushes him fast through the front door.
EDWIN STARR
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‘I’m sending out an SOS, because I am
so much distress’
Hot on their tail. BUDDY. He climbs through the broken window
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to the empty apartment where Edwin Starr still blares. He sees
the loose page of the address book on the floor. It reads -
Doc - 3108045898
Debora - ?
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Buddy grabs the paper, runs to the front door and sees that the
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elevator is descending...
EDWIN STARR (CONT’D)
“If you see my baby, if you see my
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baby, stop her on sight”
Buddy runs down the stairs to intercept the elevator. He hits
the ground first and waits for the doors to open.
Inside is the Elderly Man. Looking frail, innocent. Buddy looks
like he is about to grab the handicapped man when -
SIRENS are heard, helicopters, bullhorns, boots stomping.
Buddy looks up the stairwell. Sees Baby. Looking back down.
Buddy glares. His face white with fury. Before he can chase -
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POLICE BUST THROUGH THE DOOR - Buddy turns and fires. Baby
doesn’t stick around to find out what happens next.
He runs back into the apartment. The phone still ringing. Grabs
a single iPod before jumping out onto the fire escape.
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Scene 35 - Baby's Daring Escape and Heartfelt Goodbye
And heads down. Behind him gunfire, massed sirens, ‘copters.
Baby puts his ear phones in. Spins the wheel on this (older)
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iPod. Gets half way down the escape, jumps to the next roof-
Hides behind a stairwell exit on the next roof and finds a
track on his iPod that has the right urgency. He plays-
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‘Middle’ by Rocket From The Crypt.
ROCKET FROM THE CRYPT
“Are you stuck in the middle? Way-oh
way-oh!”
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Baby looks to the fire escape. Hears gun fire from inside.
Baby looks up. A police helicopter is above and hovering.
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Baby looks at entrance of his building. Cops swarm in.
Baby looks down to the street. The Elderly Man wheels along.
Baby looks further down. Sees a Sentra in a handicapped spot.
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The song kicks into gear. He hears a CLANK behind him.
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Buddy is atop the fire escape. Aiming his gun right at him.
Baby bolts. Runs fast across the roof. The copter sees him
sprinting and bellows with a loud hailer. Shots are fired.
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Baby jumps -
Lands in a dumpster, he emerges with a rock in hand and sprints
for the Sentra. He throws the rock at the window and dives into
the car. Boosts it. Hits reverse fast and heads back up the
street to pick up his uncle.
DING DING DING. As the car reverses, Baby keeps his head down
and watches the BACK UP CAMERA. Cops have run right past the
Elderly Man who is wheeling slowly down the street.
Baby stops and gets out. Leaving the car DINGing in reverse.
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He runs over and grabs the Elderly Man out of the chair.
Throwing him over his shoulder, Baby runs to put him in the
passenger seat of the newly stolen vehicle.
One cop turns back to see an empty wheelchair rolling down the
street unmanned. He looks over to the car and sees -
Baby. In the Sentra. Pulling a sharp 180 that swerves on the
sidewalk. Before the cop has time to call his colleagues-
Baby is in drive. Flooring it.
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85 INT. SENTRA - CONTINUOUS 85
Baby looks in the rear view. Leaving the cops and Buddy behind
him. He looks to the Elderly Man. Signs.
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BABY
We’re good.
86 EXT. RETIREMENT HOME - EVENING 86
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Baby pulls up outside a sign reading ‘Holiday Villa’. A well
lit path through verdant gardens leads to the entrance.
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The Elderly Man is asleep in shotgun. Baby looks at him sadly.
He takes the Dictaphone and records the following.
BABY
Hello. My name is Joseph. I like
watching TV and sometimes I like to
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listen to old records through the
vibrations. I also like frozen peas,
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meatloaf and white bread and peanut
butter. And bananas. Please look after
me. Thank you.
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Baby puts the Dictaphone in Joseph’s lap. He is now awake and
smiling back at Baby. It’s bittersweet.
Baby bottles his guilt. Runs up the path. The ‘open door’ chime
pings in his wake. Joseph is not sure if Baby has gone.
But Baby returns. Standing outside the car with another
wheelchair he has seemingly stolen from the home.
Joseph signs to Baby. And for once, subtitles.
JOSEPH
Where are you going?
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BABY
Away.
Baby wheels Joseph down the path to the entrance.
JOSEPH
Will you come back?
BABY
I don’t know. I want you to be safe.
JOSEPH
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Are you in trouble?
BABY
I don’t want to be in trouble anymore.
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The sound of CHOPPER BLADES. Baby and Joseph look up as a
police searchlight illuminates the Sentra in the driveway.
The spotlight then illuminates Joseph alone in his wheelchair.
No Baby.
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87 EXT. THE SUBURBS - EVENING 87
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Hi hat drums. Baby walks the dark streets. Past parked cars.
A kik drum hits. Baby stops. A cop car cruises through a cross
street up ahead.
A discordant violin drone. The police helicopter is still up
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above. Getting closer.
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Heavy breaths. A bass guitar joins the kik hits. A young female
dog walker strolls in the opposite direction.
Violins climb. Baby tries every car door he passes. The cop car
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slows, shining a torch at him. The searchlight comes close. The
dog walker gives Baby a long double take. When -
One car door is unlocked. Baby opens it. Slips in. Boosts it. A
downwards piano glissando takes us to -
88 EXT. HALF EMPTY DINER - NIGHT 88
‘Never Never Gonna Give You Up’ by Barry White.
The welcoming neon lights of the diner reflect on Baby’s
windshield as he pulls up to the shuffling groove.
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As Barry sings ‘ooh baby’, our Baby looks determined as he
parks up right outside the doors of the diner.
Harpischords and high strings score his immediate view. Debora.
Behind the counter. Looking unhappy.
Baby’s heart beats with the electric bass on the track. As
Barry breathes, Baby takes deep breaths. Whispers to himself -
BABY
Go in and get her. Go in. Get her.
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89 INT. HALF EMPTY DINER - NIGHT 89
Baby walks in. Takes his shades off. Leaves his earphones in.
Debora sees him. Looks surprised to see him.
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BARRY WHITE
Wherever wherever girl, I’ll do it.
Forever and ever, yeah yeah yeah yeah,
I’ll see you through it.
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Once again, Debora is framed beautifully amongst the wall art
of couples in convertibles, auto dreams of romantic escape.
Baby smiles. Debora doesn’t match it. She looks worried. And
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unsure of him. Then Baby sees on the counter in front of her.
A half drunk coffee. A torn napkin. The missing page from his
address book. With Doc’s number and Debora’s name on it.
Debora looks at Baby with fresh eyes. Like she doesn’t know him
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at all. And she looks scared. She says quietly.
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DEBORA
Your buddy is here...
She looks to the rest room. Baby follows her gaze.
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BUDDY stands outside the rest room door. His eyes are black. He
seems like he’s in monochrome, grief and rage making him a
scary shell of his former self.
Aside from the three of them, the diner is empty. With Barry
White still playing, this quiet stand off feels operatic.
A flute flourish. Baby and Buddy stand still. No one makes a
move. Buddy stares right through his former colleague.
Debora, breathing fast. Looks between them, then to the TV.
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On the wall mounted TV, THE NEWS. There’s photos and full names
for Bats (Leo Brubaker III) and Darling (Monica Rosen).
For Buddy, a photo, a full name and an angle (James Patrick
Morgan: ‘Former Wall Street Trader Wanted For Cop Killings’).
Baby only has a sketchy artist’s rendering of his face.
Buddy and Baby fixate on the news coverage, when -
RED AND BLUE LIGHTS reflect on the diner windows. COP CARS
CIRCLE. One cruises in. Parks right next to Baby’s car.
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Buddy calmly walks back to his spot at the counter. Baby slowly
joins him. They sit on stools next to each other.
Outside. One cop stays by the car on the radio, the other
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officer moves slowly towards the diner doors. Buddy shows
Debora his gun over the counter and nods to her.
She nods back and pours Buddy some more coffee. As Debora
pours, Baby makes eye contact with her as Barry sings.
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BARRY WHITE
“Cause I found what the world is
searching for. Here, right here my
dear, I don’t have to look no more.”
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Baby looks emotional. Debora can tell that he is upset. Baby
picks up a pen and a suggestion slip, writes something in his
childish scrawl. She tries to read it upside down when -
THE COP walks in. Doesn’t see the TV, waves to Debora, heads
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for the mens’. The song strings build to a chorus where -
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Buddy takes one of Baby’s earphones and listens in too -
BARRY WHITE (CONT’D)
“Never, never gonna give you up. I’m
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never ever gonna stop.”
Buddy fixes Baby with intent, a seething fury. This is not
about the girl anymore. This is about settling a score.
BARRY WHITE (CONT’D)
“I’m never ever gonna quit. Cause
quittin’ just ain’t my schtick.”
In the middle of this pop standoff, Debora breathes fast.
BARRY WHITE (CONT’D)
“Gonna stay right here with you-“
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THE SONG STOPS. Baby sees that the iPod reads ‘Error 1407’.
BUDDY
It’s dead, Baby.
The door to the rest rooms opens. All three turn to see -
The OTHER WAITRESS comes out. Clearly starting her shift. She
yawns. Doesn’t clock that anything is wrong.
OTHER WAITRESS
How you two doin’?
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On Buddy. “Two?” He swivels on his stool. Baby is gone.
So is the piece of paper with Doc’s number. Debora sees the
suggestion slip left behind. On it -
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“SORRY”
Buddy bolts after him into the parking lot. He can’t see Baby
or his car. The Pacific Ghost is gone.
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The cop, still on his radio, looks up as Buddy screams out.
BUDDY
You can’t keep on running, Baby!
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The cop wonders who this crazy man yelling is -
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Sir?
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Buddy calmly turns to him, raises his pistol. BLAM.
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Scene 36 - Baby's Desperate Plea for Help
“3108045898”
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Baby punches the number into a call box phone. He’s in the park
near his old apartment block. That area is cordoned and
swarming with cops. As the phone rings he looks at his
immediate environment. It’s populated by the homeless and kids
looking to get high. The summer air thick with noise.
Snatches of unfamiliar music. Car alarms. Partying. The still
omnipresent sound of nearby chopper blades.
Baby wants out. The phone picks up at the other end.
DOC (O.S.)
I ain’t open.
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BABY
It’s Baby.
DOC (O.S.)
I know. I ain’t open.
BABY
I need your help.
DOC (O.S.)
You had my help.
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BABY
I can give some of the money back. I
don’t want it.
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91 INT./EXT. PHONE BOX/DOC’S - NIGHT 91
Doc laughs, incredulous. He shakes his head.
DOC
It don’t work like that. You got
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another debt now. One you can’t pay
off. You think the cops are gonna take
a check? Think that Buddy has a figure
in mind that can replace Darling? None
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of this is going to go away because
you don’t wanna play anymore. Whether
you pulled the trigger or not, cops
are dead. You are not going to get
cuffed, they are going to kill you.
Whether you shot her or not, someone’s
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girl is dead. He is not going to
forget it.
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BABY
Doc, you gotta understand-
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DOC
And don’t give me any more lines from
‘Monsters Inc’ kid. Yeah, I figured
that one out. It’s one of Samm’s
favorites. I thought it sounded
familiar, you little shit.
BABY
...
DOC
You there?
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BABY
I’m scared Doc. I fucked up.
Doc softens. He’s alone in the warehouse. His jacket is on.
DOC
I know you did. I know you did.
(beat)
Look, the cops are not going anywhere
and I don’t think it’s in you to take
Buddy’s wind, so the only good news is
you like driving. Because you’re going
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to have to hit the gas and not take
your foot off for 20 years.
BABY
Yeah.
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DOC
Listen. I’m shutting up shop. And real
soon. Too much bad business. Not my
style. But I think I can help you. So
here’s what we are going to do -
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A noise off. Doc’s manner suddenly changes.
DOC (CONT’D)
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You’re going to go to the florist’s
first thing tomorrow and you’re gonna
drop off the flowers to my mother. Big
arrangement, I don’t know all the names,
whatever you think looks good. Get them
to her before ten. She’s gotta go out.
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What? Baby is confused on his end of the phone.
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DOC (CONT’D)
Card should read ‘Congratulations on
this special day. All my love, your
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favorite son, Harry’.
On Doc’s end we see, out of focus, behind. BUDDY.
DOC (CONT’D)
Any problems. You got my number.
Doc hangs up. Senses someone behind him. Plays it cool. Turns
to see the ashen faced, dangerous Buddy.
BUDDY
Where is he?
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DOC
Who? Baby?
BUDDY
Don’t fuck around Doc. Where is he?
DOC
You think I know where he is? He could
be anywhere.
BUDDY
He could be. But’s he not. The kid
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ain’t that bright. I don’t think he
knows where to go apart from his
place, that diner or here.
DOC
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You saw him last, not me.
BUDDY
You put him on our score Doc. Him and
that ticking timebomb Bats. I took your
fucking word for them. Darling took your
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fucking word for them. Your
recommendation. So I am going to
recommend you tell me where Baby is,
because whether it’s your fucking
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mother’s birthday or not, I don’t think
you want to see her cry tomorrow.
DOC
(calm, strong)
I know that you’re hurting. And I know
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that you want to kill Baby. Maybe you
think killing him will fill that hole
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inside you. That you can mend your
bleeding heart by stopping his. And you
want me to help you do it. But I ain’t
going to do that Buddy. Because I am not
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your doctor... Even though my name is Doc.
Buddy looks at him, unblinking.
BUDDY
So that’s that.
DOC
Yeah. That’s that.
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Scene 37 - Baby Finds Motivation and Acquires a Red Mustang
Baby sits on a low wall, deciphering that last phone call. He
has a portable cassette player and rewinds Doc’s command.
DOC (ON TAPE)
You’re going to go to the florist’s
first thing tomorrow and you’re gonna
drop off the flowers to my mother.
(rewind)
You’re going to go to the florist's
first thing tomorrow.
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(rewind)
You’re going to go to the florist's-
Baby stops the tape. It makes no sense to him. He looks around
him. The world feels so alien without music.
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He sees the auto reverse button. He pushes it. The tape flips.
He hears from way earlier.
NICE LADY TELLER (ON TAPE)
It would be nice to get away. With all
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this heat.
VEEP. Baby rewinds it. Listens again. Suddenly it becomes clear.
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Baby looks at the money, the gun, the bag. And suddenly hears -
‘Theme From Shaft’ by Isaac Hayes.
It’s in his head telling him to get up and get out.
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Baby looks determined. He then realizes that it’s not in his
head. Nor is it Isaac Hayes. He looks up to see -
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A red tricked out 2012 Ford Mustang V6 Premium driven by Black
GANGBANGERS pulls up near Baby.
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They listen to the Shaft sampling- ‘Know How’ by Young MC.
One would not normally fuck with these guys, but the music moves
Baby to stand up, walk over and order them to -
BABY
Get out.
The young Gangbangers look up. Laugh at this white kid.
BABY (CONT’D)
Get out of the car.
They look at his hands. One is firmly in his jacket pocket.
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GANG 1
Better be good with that gun homey.
Baby pulls out the gun from his pocket. Shows it.
BABY
I am.
GANG 2
Might be the last car you steal.
BABY
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Don’t wanna steal it. I wanna buy it.
More of them laugh at this. Baby points the gun firmly.
BABY (CONT’D)
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I’m serious. Sell me your car.
Uh okay. The laughter is more muted as Baby forces them out at
gunpoint. They slowly leave the Mustang, hands aloft.
As Baby gets to the driver’s door, he tosses a huge stack of
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bills to the original owner. His friend wows at the amount.
GANG 2
This some crazy ass shit.
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Baby goes to reverse out when the driver shouts -
GANG 1
Yo yo. Can I get my iPhone?
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The driver reaches inside. Baby points the gun at him.
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BABY
No.
Baby reverses out of there as YOUNG MC steps up to the mic.
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YOUNG MC
“Some of the busiest rhymes ever made
by man, Are goin' into this mic,
written by this hand, Are comin' out
of this mouth, made by this tongue,
I'll tell you now my name, my name is
Young - “
MONTAGE: ‘Know How’ by Young MC
- See Baby driving down LA STREETS, powered by the music.
- See Baby pull into a RECORD STORE.
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- See him stride as if his life depends on it. It kinda does.
YOUNG MC (CONT’D)
“Pullin' out rhymes like books off the
shelf - “
- Baby walks right up to the ‘Q’ section. Takes Queen’s ‘Sheer
Heart Attack’ off the rack.
Then sees Quincy Jones’ ‘Big Band Bossa Nova’. He swipes both.
Pays with a crisp 100 dollar bill.
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Scene 38 - Baby's Escape and Car Chase
Baby drives through the eerily dead business sector.
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94 INT. UNDERGROUND PARKING P3 - NIGHT 94
Baby parking the Mustang in his usual spot. The parking lot is
mostly empty. Save a couple of cars.
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‘Know How’ scores Baby’s swagger to the elevator. He has shades
on, ears in and he’s ready for whatever is next -
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95 INT. UNDECORATED LOFT - NIGHT 95
The warehouse door is open. Baby walks in. He sees-
DOC IS DEAD. Shirt soaked in blood. Lying in an ignominious,
ungraceful heap on the floor.
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Baby stops the music and stares. We hear the hum of his
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tinnitus. He also sees the chalkboard. It has been wiped blank.
96 INT. FREIGHT ELEVATOR - NIGHT 96
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Baby descends in the elevator. He is slumped against the side.
His body language meek. He is all alone. But not for long-
97 INT. UNDERGROUND PARKING P3 - NIGHT 97
PING. Outside the elevator, between him and his car are -
THREE FARMERS?
No longer ghosts. Suddenly very alive. Baby cannot process that
these men are far from dead. Is he dreaming?
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They are bruised, tired and phenomenally pissed. The thick
necked gorilla that is Armie walks toward Baby.
ARMIE
Hey little pig!
BABY
Are you ghosts?
ARMIE
It’s called Kevlar. Look it up.
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Armie faces Baby, breathing very hard right in his face.
ARMIE (CONT’D)
What you listening to?
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BABY
Nothing.
Armie slaps Baby very hard in the ear. Knocking one earbud out.
ARMIE
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Good. Because I want you to listen
very carefully to me -
Baby can now hear something faintly in the background. A
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fairground organ. Is he dreaming?
ARMIE (CONT’D)
Where are your friends?
Baby is slightly distracted by the faint fairground ambience in
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the background. He knows this song.
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BABY
They are not my friends. But two are
dead. The other. I don’t know.
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ARMIE
Well you better rack your brains,
before we stomp on them.
Baby hears a chugging electric guitar. He knows this song. So do
we. It’s ‘Brighton Rock’ by Queen and it’s playing right now.
BABY
I didn’t shoot at you.
ARMIE
You stood by while the blood of our
colleagues was spilt. That’s red ink
for you my friend.
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Baby glances to the side. There’s a Dodge Charger nearby. Engine
running. Stereo on. Playing ‘Brighton Rock’.
BABY
I didn’t want them to get hurt.
ARMIE
This is falling on deaf ears. Just
tell us where your colleague is.
BABY
I think that’s him. Right there.
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Baby points to the Charger. Armie and the Butchers turn. We see -
Buddy. In the Charger. Turning ‘Brighton Rock’ way up.
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And on a drum fill, he hits the gas. HARD.
Charges the Farmers. Listening to Queen.
They reach for their weapons, get off some shots before -
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CRUNCH. Buddy mows down two of the three Farmers.
KILLS THEM DEAD. For real this time. Baby and Armie are left
standing and shocked.
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Armie pops off a couple of shots at Buddy as he slams the
Charger in reverse and speeds backwards to line up with Armie,
Baby and the elevator. He looks insane at the wheel.
Armie grabs Baby and points his gun at the kid’s head.
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BABY (CONT’D)
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He wants me dead too.
Armie believes him. FUCK.
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Buddy punches the gas and tears toward Baby and Armie.
Guitars descend into a bridge. Buddy ploughs into the wall. Baby
makes it into the freight elevator. Armie doesn’t.
He is pinned between Charger and wall. Baby cowers in the
elevator behind and looks over the throbbing hood to see Buddy
at the wheel. Grooving to Queen like a crazy man,
As snare drums accelerate into a second verse. Baby pulls out
his gun. Buddy slams into reverse again.
Baby fires at Buddy as he screams backwards. He hits the
windshield a couple of times, but then -
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Baby’s out. And Buddy is back in drive. Charging at Baby. As
harmonized guitars wail, Buddy bears down on Baby.
But instead of retreating further back, he runs out of the
elevator and TOWARDS the Charger -
FREDDIE MERCURY
It would be of no small avail to talk
of magic in the air.
Just as Buddy is about to CRASH INTO BABY and the wall behind,
the kid RUNS AND JUMPS ON TO THE HOOD OF THE CAR.
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That’s some Jackie Chan shit right there.
Buddy CRUNCHES into the wall as Baby slips over the roof and
nimbly sprints in the other direction to his car.
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Buddy can’t believe it. He reverses out as Baby makes it back
to his Mustang, jumping back in.
Buddy spins around. His car is now pretty gnarled up.
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He looks to see Baby back in his Mustang. Back at the wheel.
Back in the driver’s seat. But -
Baby needs something important first. As he guns his engine, he
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grabs the CD of Queen’s ‘Sheer Heart Attack’. It is still
wrapped in plastic. He tries to tear it open with his teeth.
Buddy senses a pause and floors his fucked up Charger to ram
the Mustang in time with the driving Queen chords.
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Baby is still trying to unwrap the damn CD with his teeth. He
guns the engine and slams into reverse. Hits the gas.
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Buddy chases the reversing Baby across the parking lot. Baby
still unwrapping with one free hand, the other on the wheel.
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Baby gets the cellophane off. But there’s still the annoying
plastic label sealing the case. Behind Baby -
A concrete pillar looms FAST in the back up camera. Baby snakes
the Mustang, missing the pillar.
On a huge G chord. Buddy hits the pillar. BOOM.
As Brian May flourishes, Baby spins the car 180 fast. He also
has the first plastic label off. He faces Buddy again.
Buddy slams back out from the pillar. Swerves to charge.
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Baby starting picking off the other label and reverses again,
driving one handed to a crazy guitar solo. He snakes it once
more, leading Buddy directly into the Farmer’s SUV.
SLAM. As Buddy smashes into the SUV, Baby pulls another 180 on
the concrete, burning as Brian May melts his fretboard.
Baby now has the CD out and pops it into the player.
As Buddy unwraps his Charger from the SUV, Baby fast forwards
his copy of ‘Brighton Rock’ so it is in sync with Buddy.
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Buddy can see and hear Baby doing this and cannot believe it.
He’s trying to get his killer track playing at the same time.
Two hard bitten criminals with duelling cars and stereos.
Buddy pops backwards fast, but Baby, with one hand on his
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stereo, slams into drive, gunning hard as guitars wail.
BOOM. Baby clips the Charger on the nose. Buddy is spun like a
bumper car. He comes to a stop. Strains to see Baby behind.
He pulls back to find Baby circling around him like a shark. As
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Queen play elaborate drum fills, Buddy’s Charger dances with
the Mustang to get distance. The kid’s showing off.
Baby still fast forwards through ‘Brighton Rock’ on his stereo
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as he pulls out of the circle and charges forward.
A whammy bar holds a growling low note. Baby pulling another
bootleggers turn so that he faces Buddy again. He’s now in sync
with his stereo and he has the hint of a cocky smile.
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Two cars, two stereos, one track. The tempo shoots up. Buddy
floors it. Charges Baby. Baby doesn’t move at first but -
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As hi hats kick up the pace, he suddenly reverses, screaming
out of P3 and up the winding slope of the access ramp.
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Over pounding guitars, Baby reverses faster than you would
drive forwards. He doesn’t look up, uses only the back up
camera. Glances to see Buddy furiously trying to keep pace.
They circle around the winding ramp, screeching tires echo in
the structure and mix in with the ferocious guitars.
Past P2, Baby keeps ascending in reverse at crazy speeds.
Buddy struggles to keep up. Gunning his fucked up Charger.
Baby gets ahead of the curve, Buddy can no longer see him until
he explodes into P1. There are more cars on this level.
Abandoned overnight.
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Down the aisle, Baby’s Mustang executes another amazing
Rockford turn, spinning a tight 180 and facing forward.
Buddy guns it and chases, when on another whammy bar note -
WHAM! Baby’s Mustang goes right into the wall. Partially
smashes the barrier that separates from a steep drop to P2.
Buddy slows. WHAT THE FUCK? He pulls up to the crashed Mustang -
But Baby is not inside. The song is still playing. Then -
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As chugging guitars return, we see a figure run past in the
background. Buddy catches it too. That. Fucking. Kid.
As the solo guitar chugs low and lower, Buddy reverses up,
looking between the parked cars to see if he can see Baby.
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Shadows, glimpses. Amongst the playground of these abandoned
cars, Baby leads Buddy in a merry dance.
Buddy pulls out his gun. Looks around the moving shadows in the
parking lot, aims to see if Baby is hiding out -
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On a wailing guitar, he swings his gun at -
A CHUBBY SECURITY GUARD, who is right in the line of fire,
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drops his coffee and runs right back out of the parking lot.
Frustrated, Buddy swerves to the second aisle of cars,
determined to smoke out Baby. Looks low on the ground when -
HEADLIGHTS SWITCH ON. A dormant town car ROARS into life and
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rams the Charger. BOOM. Buddy is slammed into a parked car.
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The town car winds back. SLAMS again. Baby is at the wheel.
Buddy takes the second hit, but when he points his gun at the
town car, it is already reversing up and just crashes into the
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wall. Baby is no longer at the wheel. Again, what the -
Is Buddy going mad? Or is Baby magic? Here and then gone.
As the guitars build up again, Buddy turns back into the
original aisle, the crashed Mustang now behind him. He looks to
one side, then the other but not -
AHEAD. Drums fill. Bass ramps up. HEADLIGHTS FLICK ON.
A third car, a big red angry Yukon, faces him and screams
forward. Buddy has nowhere to go and no run up. He’s trapped.
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Baby is at the wheel, gunning the Yukon, flooring it. As the
song rushes to a climax -
BOOM. Baby smashes into the Charger. BOOM. The Charger slams
back into the Mustang, which breaks through the barrier and
smashes down to P2.
Buddy stomps the gas. His tires screaming. But the Yukon is
winning the game of shove; Baby pushing Buddy to the edge.
Buddy raises his gun, fires. Baby ducks. A clean bullet hole
where his head once was. Both tires SCREAM.
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Buddy raise to fire again. Click. He’s out. Game over.
The Charger tumbles over the broken barrier, landing upside
down on top of the fallen Mustang. The echo of carnage rings
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out with the final chord of the song. ‘Brighton Rock’ ends.
Baby reverses quickly to the exit. Then stalls. Sirens can be
heard distantly. But Baby thinks. Turns. Back down to P2.
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Scene 39 - Baby's Escape and Deafening Betrayal
Baby pulls up to the wreckage of Buddy’s Charger. It rests on
top of his crushed Mustang. The driver door of the trashed
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charger is obscured. We hear the engine hiss and die.
Baby jumps out of his car and reaches into the Mustang. Pulls
out the Queen and the Quincy Jones CD. Then hears -
An open door chime.
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Baby slowly gets up and peers around to the other side of the
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wrecked Charger. Blood splats on the concrete. The door open.
Behind him, the SNAP of a new clip.
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Baby turns to see Buddy, a hunched up, limping, bleeding mess.
He is clearly dying. His head bleeding, his torso RED.
Buddy approaches Baby, gun aloft. As the color drains from his
face, there’s a hint of the Buddy from earlier. A smile.
BUDDY
What can I say Baby? You did great.
You aced it.
Baby, not sure where this is going, is fixed to the spot.
BUDDY (CONT’D)
But you took away something I loved-
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Buddy is at point blank range. Gun aimed at Baby’s head.
BUDDY (CONT’D)
So you know I’ve gotta do the same.
BANG. Buddy open fires right in Baby’s ear.
BANG. Buddy fires in the other ear.
Buddy falls down DEAD. Baby falls down DEAF.
HORRIFIC RINGING SOUND. Like the tinnitus amplified a million
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times into a intense, awful WHINE.
Baby writhes on the floor. He rolls to see Buddy’s lifeless
face. Reflected on his dead skin. Red and blue lights. He can’t
hear the sirens, but knows the cops are coming.
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Baby tries to stand, but his balance is off. He tumbles, his
hand going straight into broken glass. He screams, but we
cannot hear it over the WHINE. Neither can he.
Baby struggles to get to his car. His equilibrium all off. All
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the while the red and blues are getting closer
Baby falls into his car. Fumbles to start it. The car feels
alien. Like he cannot operate without sound.
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Baby struggles for the stereo, takes the Queen CD out and puts
it into the CD player. Then turns the volume up, up, up -
The music starts. It’s so loud, it makes the rear view mirror
shake violently. In it we see, POLICE CARS turn the corner.
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Baby puts one bloody hand on the wheel, one on the speaker in
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his driver door. Feels the vibrations of the music and then -
HITS THE GAS. Screaming out of P2 and roaring up the ramp. The
Black & Whites right behind him.
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We hear NOTHING of the cars. Only the whine in Baby’s ears. We
see the rear view and wing mirror pulse with the music. The
tempo pulses through Baby’s hand on the speaker.
Baby makes it back to P1, but a cruiser BLOCKS the exit. The
top level is FULL OF COPS. The only way out? The way in.
Baby swerves towards the ‘SEVERE TIRE DAMAGE’ sign. His tires
blow out, but he accelerates into the night, wheels on fire.
The cops are too slow to catch him. They struggle to maneuver,
as the Pacific Ghost disappears up the street.
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The WHINE lingers on as a COP CAR pulls back out onto the
downtown streets and we see what he sees -
An empty street. An empty car. An open door. And no Baby.
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Scene 40 - Baby's Shocking Appearance at Debora's Diner
Sunlight. Baby is out cold. He looks bad. Cut, bruised. His
damaged hand is bandaged with whatever rag was in the car.
He wakes and sits up. He still cannot hear. But he can see.
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The diner. He is parked right outside.
What was a friendly place before, now feels off. He cannot hear
a thing. Feel a thing. Barry White can’t help him now.
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He sees DEBORA. Strolling into the diner. A pretty girl walking
to work, just like the first time he saw her.
She’s singing along with her iPod again. But Baby cannot hear
what she is singing.
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Baby looks to the cracked Quincy Jones CD, cues up a track. He
tries to make himself look respectable in the rear view.
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100 INT. HALF EMPTY DINER - MOMENTS LATER 100
Debora is behind her counter, about to start her day. The TV
still has non-stop news coverage of the events of the last 24
hours, but again the sound is down.
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The news reports show an artist impression of Baby. But no
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name. He is a mystery man.
Debora picks up an LA Times also with the sketch of Baby on the
cover and shakes her head. She can’t believe it. Then -
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BABY walks in. Limping. Cut. Bruised. He seems different.
Debora freezes. Her fellow staff don’t see Baby yet and don’t
connect the man from the TV or paper to the one who just calmly
walked up to the counter. Baby tells Debora quietly but firmly.
BABY
Let’s go.
Debora breathes fast. Something in the tone of Baby’s voice has
changed. She doesn’t have time to think why.
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DEBORA
Go?
BABY
I want you to come with me. Right now.
Debora, as ever, cannot read Baby’s face. She glances to see
that one hand is firmly in his jacket pocket. Is he armed?
DEBORA
Okay. Gimme a second.
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Debora turns away and taking a pen out of her hair, quickly
scribbles something on her order pad. She leaves it on the
counter as she walks out of the diner.
It reads - ‘Help?’
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Scene 41 - Baby's Surrender Leads to Arrest and Debora's Fear
Baby takes Debora to his car. A battered white ‘95 Cadillac
Eldorado convertible. Opens the door for her like a gentleman.
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What’s more, he opens with his bad hand, no longer in his
jacket. She notices he isn’t armed, but still gets in.
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Baby sits in the driver’s seat. Looks at Debora. She looks at
him expectantly. He looks at her, goofily happy.
She looks back into the diner. Colleagues have noticed she’s
gone. And left with him. And still Baby smiles back at her.
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DEBORA
Are we not in a rush?
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Baby cocks his head, like he doesn’t hear. She repeats.
DEBORA (CONT’D)
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Are we in a rush?
BABY
We got all the time in the world.
Debora doesn’t know how to respond to this. Half laughs.
BABY (CONT’D)
I have this song I wanna play you.
Baby presses play. Huge rising horns. Baby reverses out.
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102 INT./EXT. BABY’S CAR/LA STREETS 102
‘Lalo Bossa Nova’ by Quincy Jones.
A skipping Latin bossa nova beat. Cowbell. Shakers. Tambos. The
sun is out. Sky is blue. Some clouds ahead.
Baby plays Quincy Jones at FULL VOLUME. He can’t hear it, but
Debora can. It’s brassy, loud, defiantly upbeat.
She looks at Baby’s face. He observes the white lines
stretching ahead and looks calm, happy. He turns to her, asks
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expectantly.
BABY
Do you like it?
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Debora almost smiles, catches herself. What is she doing, with
the strange kid, who looks fucked up, driving off into the
horizon? She is still in the waitress outfit. It’s crazy.
DEBORA
Yes. Yes I do.
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Baby doesn’t seem to think anything of it. In fact, we as an
audience have never seen him happier. He’s beaming.
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Debora settles a little, she doesn’t know where they are going,
but it isn’t fast. This is a Sunday afternoon drive, not a
getaway. As the song settles into a slow soft toned guitar
solo, she finds herself looking at the scenery.
As horns return, she sees them first.
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BLACK & WHITES. In her wing mirror. The glass reverberates with
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the bass of the loud music, distorting their image.
Baby sees them too. In the rear view. He simply sighs as they
begin to crest over on a hill. And then on a mellow sax -
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ROAD BLOCK dead ahead. Police as far as the eye can see. Debora
gasps. It’s a surprise party. But not a fun one.
Baby slows. Behind, the police cars block off the street. All
pedestrians and other cars have magically vanished.
It’s just Baby, Debora and the cops.
Baby stops. As he puts the stick into reverse, he looks to
Debora. She has her eyes tightly closed. Her fingers clutch the
‘oh shit’ handle. When she opens her eyes again, they are wet
with moisture. She’s scared.
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He doesn’t want her to be scared. He turns the engine off. But,
magically, the music continues for our benefit.
To Debora’s amazement, Baby gets out of the car and walks
toward the cops, hands on his head.
Quincy Jones has completely taken over and we cannot hear the
harsh shouting of the police as they approach Baby from all
sides, guns trained, barking instruction.
On Debora, she’s relieved, confused and... conflicted?
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To us the image of the cops approaching feels very surreal as,
unlike the opening credits, the police are the only ones in
time with the music, approaching Baby in step with Quincy.
Baby takes off his jacket to show he is unarmed. With just a T-
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shirt and jeans on, he looks like what he is, a kid.
He turns back to her and mouths -
BABY
Sorry.
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The police grab him, throw him violently to the ground and
swarm around him. Debora can see they are beyond angry.
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As Baby hits the deck, all the instruments drop out and on a
four bar drum solo, the cops proceed to kick and punch him.
Debora jumps out the passenger door and SCREAMS -
DEBORA
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No!
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MONTAGE: The following is set to the supremely upbeat ‘Lalo
Bossa Nova’. In this sequence, everyone is in time with the
beat, except a beaten, bruised and defeated Baby.
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- We see Baby’s mug-shot taken.
- Baby in court being sentenced.
- We see Debora on the witness stand. Swearing an oath.
- Baby in shackles, walking with other prisoners.
- Baby on a prison bus driving north.
- Baby arriving at the big house.
- Baby being given his new clothes.
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- Baby walking with a guard down a concrete corridor.
- Baby being shown to his 9’ by 5’ prison cell. He takes in his
living quarters. His ELDERLY CELLMATE is roughly the age of
Joseph. His new one room apartment.
The song fades out. As he sits alone with his thoughts, we are
left with Baby’s buzz of deafness.
- Time passes. Baby navigates prison life.
- Through the buzz, we see Baby focus on anything that has
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visual rhythm. People doing jumping jacks in the yard. A warden
shutting cell doors at night. People sparring in the gym.
Someone mopping the floor.
- We see him in the machine shop, hypnotized by a metal
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stamping contraption. Other inmates working here wear eye and
ear protection. Baby only has the protective visor on.
He stares at the machine, nodding as if listening to dance
music. Tries to get lost in the rhythm of the machine.
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Scene 42 - Baby's Prison Release and Reunion with Debora
On Baby, sitting alone in his cell, staring out to nothing. A
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guard comes past and hands him an envelope.
Inside is a postcard with a 50s style illustration of a young
couple in a classic convertible, just like the artwork in the
diner. Also inside, a beautiful, neatly handwritten letter.
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But first Baby notices: The scent.
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He sniffs, inhales the perfume on the letter. When he stops, he
cocks an ear at the faint sound of burning rubber.
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104 INT. PRISON UNIT - DAY 104
Baby wanders out of his cell, letter still in hand.
The noises of roaring engines and screeching tires reverberate
around the prison halls. It emanates from the TV room.
Baby enters this communal room, where inmates gather around a
35 inch TV set showing the noisy Sunday NASCAR races.
Baby sees his ELDERLY CELLMATE sitting at the back of the room.
He sits down by him. Shows him the letter.
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BABY
What’s this say?
The Elderly Cellmate peers through thick glasses at the fancy
handwriting on the letter and blankly intones.
ELDERLY CELLMATE
“Hey Baby. I’m sorry too. I know from
court your real name is Miles, but I
don’t know too many Miles songs so we
can stick with Baby. Deal?
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Baby stares at the Elderly Cellmates lips and we magically hear
Debora’s actual voice as he continues.
DEBORA (V.O)
I found another Debora song. It’s by
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Dave Edmunds. The lyrics say she’s a
‘heart breaking, love making
connoisseur’ and frankly she sounds
like a bad person, so I am discounting
it. Hope this finds you okay. Maybe
drive off another time? D.”
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Baby closes his eyes. Hears the sweet music of automobiles.
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105 EXT. PRISON - DAY 105
‘Baby Driver’ by Simon & Garfunkel.
Baby walks out of the prison gates into the sunshine. Waiting
for him is a smiling DEBORA. Looking adorable but-
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She is wearing 50s dress; bobby socks, pleated skirt, white
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blouse, cardigan over the shoulders, just like the young woman
in the artwork from the postcard.
She stands before a gleaming classic convertible, a white 1954
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Cadillac Eldorado. She opens the passenger door for Baby.
Baby walks over to the car. He is now also wearing 50s clothes,
looking like the young man from the diner artwork.
Baby jumps in. Debora pops it in drive. They kiss and then head
out on the open road.
CREDITS
Ratings
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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baby | Baby starts off as a stoic and introverted character, focused solely on his driving skills and escaping his life of crime. However, as the story progresses, he begins to long for a different life and forms a connection with Debora. This connection brings out a more vulnerable and emotional side of Baby, as he becomes determined to protect her and make amends for his past actions. Throughout the film, Baby goes through a transformation from a quiet and reserved individual to someone who is willing to take risks and confront his past in order to find redemption and a chance at a normal life. | The character arc for Baby is well-developed and provides a clear progression for his journey. However, it would be beneficial to further explore the internal conflicts and emotional struggles that Baby faces throughout the story. While his love for music and his driving skills are highlighted, there could be more depth added to his character by delving into his past traumas and the reasons behind his desire for freedom and purpose. Additionally, it would be interesting to see Baby face more moral dilemmas and make difficult choices that further challenge his growth and transformation. | To improve the character arc for Baby, consider incorporating more flashbacks or moments of introspection that reveal his past traumas and the impact they have on his present actions. This will provide a deeper understanding of his motivations and add layers to his character. Additionally, create more opportunities for Baby to face moral dilemmas and make choices that test his loyalty and determination. This will add complexity to his journey and allow for a more satisfying resolution at the end of the film. |
griff | Griff starts off as a skeptical and antagonistic member of the crew, constantly challenging and questioning Baby's abilities. However, as the story progresses, Griff begins to realize Baby's skills and intelligence, leading to a shift in his attitude. He starts to respect Baby and becomes more supportive, eventually forming a bond with him and the rest of the crew. | The character arc for Griff is well-developed and provides an interesting dynamic within the group. However, it would be beneficial to explore the reasons behind Griff's initial skepticism and aggression towards Baby. This would add depth to his character and provide a stronger foundation for his eventual change of heart. | To improve the character arc, consider adding a backstory or personal motivation for Griff's skepticism towards Baby. This could be related to a past experience or a personal belief system. Additionally, provide moments of vulnerability for Griff to showcase his growth and transformation. This could be through a scene where he opens up about his own insecurities or fears, allowing the audience to empathize with him and understand his change in attitude towards Baby. |
buddy | Buddy starts off as a supportive and protective character, particularly towards Darling and Baby. He forms a close bond with Baby and acts as a mentor figure to him. However, as the story progresses, Buddy's loyalty and calm demeanor are tested when he becomes consumed by revenge against Baby. This obsession drives him to become a dangerous and unpredictable criminal, willing to do whatever it takes to get what he wants. In the end, Buddy's pursuit of revenge leads to his downfall, sacrificing his own life in the process. | The character arc for Buddy is well-developed and provides a clear progression from a supportive and protective figure to a dangerous and obsessed criminal. However, the transition from Buddy's calm and composed nature to his aggressive and menacing behavior could be further explored and justified. Additionally, the reasons behind Buddy's obsession with seeking revenge against Baby could be more clearly established and motivated. | To improve the character arc for Buddy, it would be beneficial to delve deeper into his backstory and motivations. Exploring his past experiences and personal connections could help justify his transformation into a vengeful criminal. Additionally, providing more insight into the events or actions that trigger Buddy's obsession with seeking revenge against Baby would add depth to his character arc. This could be achieved through flashbacks or dialogue that reveals his emotional journey. Finally, ensuring that Buddy's transition from a calm and composed character to an aggressive and menacing one is gradual and believable will enhance the impact of his character arc. |
darling | Darling starts as a lively and flirtatious member of the crew, involved in the heists and in a romantic relationship with Buddy. As the story progresses, her character evolves into a fierce and passionate member of the gang. She becomes more confident, assertive, and unapologetic, often taking charge in dangerous situations. Darling's love for Buddy and her willingness to take risks remain constant throughout the feature, but her character arc showcases her growth and transformation into a strong and fearless individual. | The character arc for Darling is well-developed, showcasing her growth from a lively and flirtatious character to a fierce and fearless member of the gang. However, it would be beneficial to explore her motivations and backstory further to provide a deeper understanding of her character. Additionally, while her flirtatious nature adds charm and complexity to her personality, it would be valuable to explore other dimensions of her character beyond her romantic relationship with Buddy. | To improve the character arc, consider delving into Darling's past and exploring her motivations for being involved in the criminal lifestyle. This could provide a deeper understanding of her choices and actions throughout the feature. Additionally, consider giving Darling more agency and individual goals outside of her romantic relationship with Buddy. This will allow her character to stand on her own and showcase her strengths and abilities beyond being a love interest. Finally, consider incorporating moments of vulnerability and growth for Darling, allowing her to overcome personal obstacles and evolve even further as a character. |
doc | Doc starts off as a mentor and protector to Baby, guiding him through the criminal world and pushing him to reach his full potential. However, as the story progresses, Doc's true intentions are revealed. It is discovered that he has been manipulating Baby and using him as a pawn in his criminal operations. This revelation causes a rift between Doc and Baby, leading to a confrontation where Baby realizes he has been betrayed. In the end, Doc's true nature is exposed and he faces the consequences of his actions. | The character arc for Doc is well-developed and provides a compelling narrative. However, it would benefit from further exploration of Doc's motivations and backstory. While he is portrayed as a mysterious and influential figure, the screenplay could delve deeper into his past and the reasons behind his manipulative behavior. This would add depth to his character and provide a clearer understanding of his actions. | To improve the character arc for Doc, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that reveal more about his past and motivations. This could help the audience empathize with him and understand why he behaves the way he does. Additionally, exploring the consequences of his actions in more detail would add weight to the climax of the story. Show the impact of his betrayal on Baby and the other characters, and allow for a satisfying resolution that holds Doc accountable for his actions. |
bats | Bats starts off as a new addition to the crew, known for his skepticism and unpredictability. He clashes with the rest of the gang, challenging Baby's abilities and questioning Doc's authority. As the story progresses, Bats' impulsive and volatile nature leads to conflicts within the group. However, as the stakes get higher and the danger increases, Bats' recklessness becomes a liability. He begins to realize the consequences of his actions and the impact they have on the crew. In a pivotal moment, Bats makes a sacrifice to protect the others, showing a glimmer of redemption. This act of selflessness leads to a change in his character, as he starts to question his own motives and the destructive path he has been on. Bats ultimately learns the value of trust and loyalty, and seeks to make amends for his past actions. | The character arc for Bats is well-developed and provides a clear progression for his character. However, it would benefit from further exploration of his backstory and motivations. While his impulsive and volatile nature is established, delving deeper into the reasons behind his behavior would add depth and complexity to his character. Additionally, the redemption arc could be strengthened by showing more internal struggle and growth, allowing the audience to fully empathize with Bats' transformation. | To improve the character arc for Bats, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that provide insight into his past experiences and the events that shaped him. This will help the audience understand his motivations and empathize with his struggles. Additionally, focus on developing Bats' internal conflict and growth throughout the story. Show moments of self-reflection and remorse, as well as his gradual realization of the impact his actions have on others. This will make his redemption arc more impactful and satisfying for the audience. |
debora | Debora starts off as a curious and adventurous waitress who is drawn to Baby's mysterious nature. As their relationship develops, she becomes aware of Baby's criminal activities and gets entangled in the danger. However, instead of being scared off, Debora shows bravery and resourcefulness, choosing to trust Baby and go on the run with him. Throughout the feature, she provides emotional support to Baby and acts as a catalyst for his transformation, ultimately leading to his surrender to the police. Debora's love for Baby remains constant, but her character arc showcases her growth from a carefree and curious individual to a brave and supportive partner. | The character arc for Debora is well-developed and showcases her growth throughout the feature. However, it would be beneficial to further explore her own desires and motivations beyond her relationship with Baby. While she is initially intrigued by his mysterious nature and seeks excitement and adventure, it would be interesting to see her own personal journey and how she evolves as an individual throughout the story. Additionally, providing more backstory or depth to Debora's character could enhance her overall arc and make her even more compelling. | To improve Debora's character arc, consider delving deeper into her own desires and motivations. Show her personal journey and growth as an individual, independent of her relationship with Baby. This could be done through exploring her backstory, her dreams, or her own personal struggles. Additionally, consider adding more layers to her character by showcasing her vulnerabilities and flaws. This will make her more relatable and multidimensional. Overall, by giving Debora more agency and depth, her character arc will become even more compelling and impactful. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Tense tone correlates with high emotional impact and conflict | In scenes with a tense tone, there is a higher likelihood of intense emotional impact (71% of tense scenes) and high conflict (82% of tense scenes). This could indicate that the author effectively uses tension to drive emotional engagement and story development. |
Intense scenes often move the story forward and involve character changes | Scenes rated as intense have a higher chance of moving the story forward (74%) and involving character changes (71%). This suggests that the author uses intensity to propel the narrative and develop characters, creating a more engaging experience for the audience. |
Playful tone is associated with lower conflict and emotional impact | In scenes with a playful tone, there is a lower likelihood of high conflict (44%) and intense emotional impact (56%). This could indicate that the author uses playfulness to provide relief or contrast in the narrative, giving the audience a chance to relax before diving back into the intensity. |
Scenes with higher dialogue scores tend to have lower emotional impact | There seems to be an inverse relationship between dialogue and emotional impact. In scenes with higher dialogue scores, emotional impact tends to be lower (65% of scenes with dialogue score 9 or above). This might suggest that the author could focus on balancing dialogue and emotional moments to create a more engaging experience. |
Unease and menacing elements often accompany high stakes and conflict | Scenes containing unease or menacing elements have a higher chance of having high stakes (73% of uneasy scenes and 75% of menacing scenes) and conflict (73% of uneasy scenes and 79% of menacing scenes). This could indicate that the author effectively uses unease and menacing elements to heighten tension and engage the audience. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay showcases a strong command of various screenwriting techniques, with effective scene-by-scene pacing, engaging dialogue, and vivid visual descriptions. The writer demonstrates a unique voice and a clear understanding of storytelling. However, there is room for improvement in character development and exploring a wider range of genres.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | The Art of Dramatic Writing by Lajos Egri | This book provides valuable insights into character development, helping the writer create more nuanced and engaging characters. |
Exercise | Write a scene with a character facing a moral dilemmaPractice In SceneProv | This exercise will challenge the writer to delve deeper into character motivations and emotions, enhancing their ability to create compelling characters. |
Screenplay | Read screenplays from various genres, such as 'The Silence of the Lambs' by Thomas Harris and Ted Tally or 'Juno' by Diablo Cody | Exploring a diverse range of screenplays will help the writer develop a more versatile writing style and gain new perspectives on storytelling. |
Stories Similar to this one
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Drive | Both stories feature a quiet, skilled getaway driver who becomes increasingly anxious as he becomes involved in a heist. They also share a similar tone and visual style. |
The Town | Both stories feature a group of criminals planning and executing a heist, with a focus on the driver character. They also share a similar setting and genre. |
Heat | Both stories feature a group of criminals planning and executing a heist, with a focus on the intricate details and planning involved. They also share a similar tone and genre. |
The Italian Job | Both stories feature a group of criminals planning and executing a heist, with a focus on the driver character and the getaway. They also share a similar genre and tone. |
Gone in 60 Seconds | Both stories feature a skilled driver and a high-speed chase, with a focus on the adrenaline and excitement of the chase. They also share a similar genre and tone. |
The Fast and the Furious | Both stories feature a skilled driver and a high-speed chase, with a focus on the adrenaline and excitement of the chase. They also share a similar genre and tone. |
Reservoir Dogs | Both stories feature a group of criminals planning and executing a heist, with a focus on the characters and their interactions. They also share a similar genre and tone. |
Pulp Fiction | Both stories feature a group of criminals and their interactions, with a focus on the characters and their quirks. They also share a similar genre and tone. |
Snatch | Both stories feature a group of criminals planning and executing a heist, with a focus on the characters and their interactions. They also share a similar genre and tone. |
Lock, Stock and Two Smoking Barrels | Both stories feature a group of criminals planning and executing a heist, with a focus on the characters and their interactions. They also share a similar genre and tone. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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The Stoic | Baby, the young driver, appears stoic while listening to music on his iPod. | The Stoic is a character who remains calm and composed in the face of danger or intense situations. They often display little emotion and maintain a cool demeanor. |
High-Speed Chase | Baby, the driver, leads a high-speed chase through the streets of LA, skillfully maneuvering through traffic and narrowly escaping the police. | A High-Speed Chase is a common trope in action movies where a character is pursued by law enforcement or other adversaries at high speeds, often resulting in thrilling and dangerous car stunts. |
The Mute | Baby is referred to as 'the mute' by his colleagues due to his quiet nature and constant listening to music. | The Mute is a character who rarely speaks or communicates verbally, often relying on non-verbal cues or actions to convey their thoughts and emotions. |
The Heist | The group of individuals, including Baby, Griff, Buddy, and Darling, plan and execute a bank heist, ordering the staff to the floor and escaping with bags of money. | The Heist is a common trope in crime and action movies where a group of individuals plan and execute a robbery or theft, often involving elaborate schemes, disguises, and high-stakes situations. |
The Getaway | Baby quickly reverses the car, narrowly maneuvering through the parking lot, and drives away after the bank heist. | The Getaway is a trope in heist and action movies where the characters must escape from the scene of a crime or dangerous situation, often involving fast driving, evasive maneuvers, and close calls with law enforcement or pursuers. |
The Undercover Cop | Baby notices a police car driving by and watches it closely during the bank heist. | The Undercover Cop is a character who poses as a criminal or infiltrates a criminal organization in order to gather information or bring down the group from within. |
The Flashback | Baby has a high-pitched whine flashback to a younger version of himself with bruises, sitting in an apartment and car with a shouting man and crying woman. | The Flashback is a narrative device used to provide backstory or reveal past events that are relevant to the current story. It often involves a sudden shift in time or perspective. |
The Love Interest | Baby encounters a waitress named Debora in a diner and is captivated by her. They talk and get to know each other better. | The Love Interest is a character who serves as a romantic partner or potential romantic partner for the protagonist. They often provide emotional support, motivation, and a romantic subplot to the main story. |
The Mentor | Doc defends Baby when Griff questions his abilities and harasses him. Doc acts as a mentor and father figure to Baby throughout the story. | The Mentor is a character who guides and advises the protagonist, often providing wisdom, training, and support. They play a crucial role in the protagonist's growth and development. |
The Redemption Arc | Baby, initially involved in criminal activities, decides to leave his life of driving behind and start anew with Debora. | The Redemption Arc is a narrative arc where a character who has engaged in morally questionable or criminal behavior seeks to change their ways and find redemption. It often involves a journey of self-discovery, growth, and making amends for past actions. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||
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Music as a form of escape | Throughout the screenplay, Baby uses music as a way to escape from his surroundings and drown out the noise. He listens to music on his iPod, plays cassette tapes, and even mimics playing the phone like a theremin. Music is his way of coping with his tinnitus and the chaotic world around him. | The theme of music as a form of escape is the most prominent in the screenplay. It is consistently portrayed through Baby's character and his reliance on music to find solace and block out the chaos of his criminal life. | ||
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Redemption and second chances | Throughout the screenplay, Baby is presented with opportunities for redemption and second chances. He forms a romantic relationship with Debora, a waitress, and contemplates leaving his life of crime behind. He also shows compassion towards the elderly man in his apartment building and takes care of him. These moments highlight Baby's desire for a better life and a chance to start over. | The theme of redemption and second chances is a significant aspect of Baby's character arc. It explores his longing for a different path and his search for a way to leave his criminal life behind. | ||
Family and father figures | Throughout the screenplay, Baby's relationships with Doc, his foster father figure, and the elderly man in his apartment building, highlight the theme of family and father figures. Doc takes care of Baby and provides him with opportunities, while the elderly man becomes a surrogate father figure for Baby. These relationships show the importance of family and the impact of positive role models in Baby's life. | The theme of family and father figures explores the influence of parental figures on Baby's development and his search for a sense of belonging and guidance. | ||
Crime and its consequences | The screenplay revolves around a group of criminals involved in heists and robberies. The consequences of their actions are depicted through high-speed chases, shootouts, and encounters with the police. The theme of crime and its consequences is explored through the characters' choices and the impact it has on their lives. | The theme of crime and its consequences delves into the moral implications of the characters' actions and the repercussions they face as a result of their criminal activities. | ||
Love and romance | The romantic relationship between Baby and Debora is a central element of the screenplay. Their connection and shared love for music drive their interactions and provide moments of tenderness amidst the chaos. The theme of love and romance is explored through their blossoming relationship and their desire for a better life together. | The theme of love and romance adds an emotional layer to the screenplay, highlighting the power of love to transcend difficult circumstances and inspire change. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice in this screenplay is characterized by a distinct blend of coolness, rebellion, energy, wit, and musicality. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating an engaging, fast-paced, and emotionally resonant experience for the reader. The use of concise dialogue, descriptive narrative, and specific music references enhances the mood, themes, and depth of the screenplay. |
Best Representation Scene | 12 - Baby's High-Stakes Escape in the Avalanche |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representative of the writer's voice as it encapsulates the quintessential elements that define it: the thrilling action, the sharp dialogue, and the powerful use of music to heighten the emotional impact. |
- Overall originality score: 7
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay demonstrates a moderate level of originality, with several unique situations and character interactions. While the overall plot structure is familiar to the crime genre, the specific details and descriptions in each scene add freshness and excitement. The authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue also contributes to the originality of the screenplay.
- Most unique situations: The most unique situations in the screenplay include the protagonist's use of music as a guiding force for his actions, the specific details of the car theft and escape, and the incorporation of sign language for communication. These unique elements add a fresh and original perspective to the familiar themes of the crime genre.
- Overall unpredictability score: 6
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay is moderately unpredictable, with several unexpected twists and turns throughout the story. However, some elements of the plot are predictable and follow familiar tropes of the crime genre. The unpredictability is enhanced by the authenticity of the characters' actions and dialogue, which add a layer of realism and complexity to the story.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals in the screenplay evolve throughout the script as they seek freedom, connection, redemption and a sense of self |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goals in the screenplay revolve around successful execution of heists, escaping danger, and maintaining a sense of control |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict in the screenplay is the protagonist's struggle to reconcile their criminal lifestyle with their desire for freedom, connection, and redemption |
Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's goals and conflict contribute to their development by challenging their values, beliefs, and self-perception, leading to personal growth and transformation
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflict drive the narrative structure, creating tension, obstacles, and resolution as the protagonist navigates through their criminal activities and personal relationships
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflict add thematic depth to the screenplay by exploring themes of identity, morality, redemption, and the pursuit of freedom and love in a morally ambiguous and dangerous world
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The physical environment in the screenplay is primarily set in the city of Los Angeles, with various locations such as strip malls, bank buildings, warehouses, parking lots, and apartments. The city is depicted as a bustling and chaotic place, with heavy traffic, construction, and a mix of old and new architecture.
- Culture: The cultural elements in the screenplay include the use of music as a central theme, with various characters listening to and discussing different genres and artists. The characters also have a strong connection to cars and driving, with many scenes taking place in vehicles and featuring high-speed chases. Additionally, there is a criminal underworld culture present, with gangs, heists, and violence.
- Society: The societal structure in the screenplay is not explicitly defined, but there are clear divisions between the law-abiding citizens and the criminal underworld. The police are depicted as a constant presence, often in pursuit of the main characters. There is also a hierarchy within the criminal organizations, with leaders and followers.
- Technology: The technological elements in the screenplay are primarily related to transportation, with various cars, trucks, and motorcycles featured prominently. There are also some instances of communication technology, such as phones and cassette recorders.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment, culture, society, and technology shape the characters' experiences and actions by providing both opportunities and challenges. For example, the chaotic city streets allow for thrilling car chases, while the criminal underworld provides both danger and a sense of community for some characters.
- Narrative contribution: The world elements contribute to the narrative by providing a backdrop for the characters' actions and decisions. The bustling city creates a sense of urgency and excitement, while the criminal underworld provides a source of conflict and tension. The use of music and cars also adds a unique and memorable quality to the story.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world elements contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring themes such as the allure and danger of the criminal lifestyle, the power of music to inspire and connect people, and the struggle to find one's place in a chaotic world.
central conflict
The central conflict is Baby's internal struggle between his love for music and cars, and his involvement in criminal activities as a getaway driver.
primary motivations
Baby's primary motivations are his love for music, his desire for a normal life with Debora, and his need to escape his past and the dangerous world of crime.
catalysts
The catalysts pushing the narrative forward include Baby's involvement in heists, his growing relationship with Debora, and the increasing tension between him and the gang members.
barriers
The major barriers preventing character objectives are Baby's hearing loss, the police, and the gang members who become increasingly suspicious of Baby's intentions.
themes
Central themes include the struggle between good and evil, the impact of one's past, and the power of music and love.
stakes
The stakes are high, with Baby's life and freedom at risk, as well as the lives of those around him, including Debora and the elderly man.
uniqueness factor
The unique combination of car chases, music, and crime creates a fresh and engaging narrative that differentiates this story from others.
audience hook
The thrilling car chases, engaging characters, and captivating soundtrack serve as the main audience hook, keeping viewers engaged and invested in the story.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradoxical story engine lies in the contrast between Baby's love for music and his involvement in criminal activities, creating a unique and engaging narrative that challenges the viewer's expectations.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another bisociation engine could be the combination of the seemingly innocent and carefree world of music and the dark and dangerous world of crime.
Engine: Gemini
Recommend
Executive Summary
Baby Driver is a highly recommended screenplay with exceptional action sequences, a compelling central relationship, and a unique use of music as a narrative device. While there are opportunities to further develop certain characters and plot points, the script's strengths far outweigh its weaknesses, making it a promising and exciting project.
- Exceptional action sequences with creative integration of music and visuals, showcasing Baby's driving skills and the film's overall style. high ( Scene 1 Scene 2 Scene 4 Scene 30 Scene 31 Scene 74 Scene 78 Scene 97 )
- The development of Baby and Debora's relationship, offering a sweet and innocent counterpoint to the film's criminal underworld. high ( Scene 21 Scene 39 Scene 44 Scene 59 Scene 88 Scene 99 Scene 100 )
- Strong and distinctive character voices, particularly Bats and Buddy, adding humor and tension to the narrative. high
- The use of music as a central narrative device, shaping the pace, mood, and character development throughout the film. high
- The exploration of Baby's internal conflict and his desire to escape the criminal life, adding depth and complexity to his character arc. medium ( Scene 10 Scene 26 Scene 52 Scene 63 Scene 68 )
- Doc's motivations and backstory could be further explored to provide a more complete understanding of his role in the criminal world and his connection to Baby. medium
- The involvement of the child, Samm, in the post office heist planning feels unnecessary and potentially exploitative. medium ( Scene 47 Scene 49 )
- The gas station robbery subplot feels like a detour from the main narrative and doesn't contribute significantly to Bats' character development. low ( Scene 53 Scene 54 Scene 55 )
- The pacing in the second act could be tightened, particularly during the planning stages of the heists, to maintain momentum. low
- A deeper exploration of the emotional and psychological impact of Baby's tinnitus and childhood trauma would enrich his character arc. medium
- The ending feels somewhat abrupt. More scenes could be added to show Baby and Debora's life after prison, exploring their challenges and triumphs as they build a new life together. medium ( Scene 86 Scene 87 Scene 103 Scene 104 Scene 105 )
- The screenplay's unique blend of action, music, and romance creates a highly entertaining and memorable cinematic experience. high
- Baby's moral compass and his reluctance to engage in violence add a layer of complexity to his character and the film's themes. medium ( Scene 18 Scene 49 Scene 60 Scene 80 )
Engine: Claude
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Baby Driver' is a stylish, character-driven crime thriller that blends high-octane action sequences with a compelling emotional arc. The protagonist, Baby, is a talented getaway driver whose rhythmic integration with music and driving sets him apart from the rest of his crew. The screenplay skillfully balances character development, suspense, and visual flair, delivering an entertaining and thematically resonant story. While there are a few areas for potential improvement, such as further developing the supporting characters and more deeply exploring the broader themes, the screenplay is a strong candidate for production consideration.
- The opening sequence establishes the world, characters, and tone of the film through visually engaging and rhythmically-driven storytelling. The music integration and kinetic camerawork create a dynamic, stylized introduction. high ( Scene 1 (1-3) )
- The detailed heist planning scene showcases Baby's keen observational skills and strategic thinking, highlighting his value to the crew despite his quiet demeanor. medium ( Scene 10 (26) )
- The high-octane car chase sequence is an exhilarating display of Baby's driving prowess, skillfully woven into the narrative and scored with a pulsing soundtrack that heightens the tension and momentum. high ( Scene 31 (74-79) )
- The tense confrontation in the parking garage between Baby and the vengeful Farmers showcases the screenplay's ability to build suspense and deliver impactful, character-driven action. medium ( Scene 38 (93-97) )
- The final act's bittersweet conclusion, with Baby surrendering to the police but finding solace in Debora's company, provides a poignant and emotionally resonant resolution to the character's journey. high ( Scene 41 (101-102) )
- The crew meeting scene feels a bit exposition-heavy, with the characters' backstories and motivations not fully integrated into the narrative flow. medium ( Scene 11 (27) )
- The interlude with Bats, Buddy, and Darling in the car feels a bit disconnected from the main plot, and could be streamlined to maintain the overall pacing. low ( Scene 22 (53-54) )
- The sequence where the crew questions Baby's loyalty feels a bit repetitive, and could be tightened to avoid losing momentum. medium ( Scene 28 (63-68) )
- While the screenplay effectively explores Baby's character arc, there could be opportunities to further develop the supporting characters, such as Buddy and Darling, to provide a more well-rounded ensemble. medium
- The screenplay could benefit from more explicit exploration of the broader themes of redemption, morality, and the cyclical nature of violence, to elevate the narrative beyond a straightforward action-driven plot. medium
- The integration of music and sound design is a standout element, with the soundtrack seamlessly woven into the visual storytelling and character development. high ( Scene 1 (1-3) )
- The phone call between Baby and Doc provides an intriguing glimpse into the world of the criminal underworld and the characters' complex relationships, setting up the final act's high-stakes conflict. medium ( Scene 35 (90-91) )
- The bittersweet, open-ended conclusion leaves the audience with a sense of hope and possibility for Baby's future, despite the heavy toll of his past actions. high ( Scene 41 (101-102) )