The substance
Executive Summary
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Overview
Genres: Drama, Thriller, Sci-Fi, Horror, Psychological Thriller, Mystery, Psychological, Comedy, Romance, Satire, Fantasy
Setting: Contemporary, Primarily set in Los Angeles, California, including locations like the Hollywood Walk of Fame, a TV studio, and various apartments.
Overview: The story follows Elisabeth Sparkle, a once-celebrated TV personality grappling with the pressures of aging and the superficial demands of the entertainment industry. Initially basking in her fame, Elisabeth's world begins to unravel as she faces the harsh reality of being replaced by younger talent. In her desperation, she discovers a mysterious USB stick labeled 'THE SUBSTANCE,' which promises transformation. As she injects herself with a fluorescent serum, she undergoes a grotesque metamorphosis into a younger version of herself, named Sue. This transformation leads to a chaotic struggle for identity and self-acceptance, culminating in a violent confrontation between Elisabeth and Sue, ultimately revealing the destructive consequences of their pursuit of perfection.
Themes: The Destructive Pursuit of Perfection, The Corrosive Nature of the Entertainment Industry, Identity and Self-Acceptance, The Fleeting Nature of Fame and Beauty
Conflict and Stakes: Elisabeth's struggle against aging and the pressure of the entertainment industry, leading to a dark rivalry with Sue, who represents her lost youth and success.
Overall Mood: Dark and unsettling, with moments of introspection and horror.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: The mood is tense and surreal as Elisabeth undergoes a grotesque transformation, highlighting her internal struggle.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The transformation of Elisabeth into a younger version of herself through a dark and grotesque process.
- Plot Twist: The revelation that Sue's success is built on the destruction of Elisabeth's identity, leading to a violent confrontation.
- Innovative Ideas: The exploration of beauty standards and the psychological impact of fame through a horror lens.
- Distinctive Settings: The juxtaposition of glamorous Hollywood locations with dark, claustrophobic spaces representing internal struggles.
Comparable Scripts:
- Black Swan
- The Stepford Wives
- The Hunger Games
- The Devil Wears Prada
- Fight Club
- The Invisible Man
- The Others
- The Picture of Dorian Gray
- Requiem for a Dream
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a diverse and eclectic writing style, blending elements of surrealism, psychological drama, dark humor, and sharp dialogue. It seamlessly transitions between introspective character studies and high-stakes, plot-driven scenes, demonstrating a sophisticated understanding of narrative structure and tone.
Style Similarities:
- Charlie Kaufman
- David Lynch
- Darren Aronofsky
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: The Substance is a visually striking and conceptually ambitious screenplay with a unique premise. The script's strengths lie in its bold visuals, intriguing central concept, and strong performance opportunities for the lead. However, areas requiring improvement include pacing in certain sections and the need for clearer exposition to enhance audience understanding. Overall, the script's originality and potential for a visually captivating film make it a promising project with strong commercial potential.
USP: The screenplay uniquely blends body horror with social commentary, creating a narrative that not only entertains but also provokes thought about the lengths individuals go to for societal acceptance. Its exploration of duality through the characters of Elisabeth and Sue offers a fresh perspective on the pressures of beauty and youth in modern society, making it particularly relevant to today's audience.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$25-35 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-45, particularly those interested in psychological dramas, dark comedies, and stories about fame and identity.
Marketability: The screenplay explores relevant themes of aging and identity in the entertainment industry, appealing to a broad audience.
The unique blend of horror and dark comedy, along with strong character arcs, can attract both mainstream and indie film audiences.
While it has compelling characters and a gripping storyline, its darker themes may limit its appeal to more mainstream audiences.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, as it could attract attention at film festivals and potentially gain traction through awards season, appealing to both critics and audiences.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is darkly comedic, visually striking, and intensely focused on the internal struggles of their characters against a backdrop of superficiality and societal pressures. It blends poetic imagery with gritty realism, sharp dialogue with introspective moments, and a cynical wit with moments of genuine emotional vulnerability. The style often employs jarring juxtapositions – high glamour contrasted with physical decay, vibrant energy against profound exhaustion, and outward success pitted against internal turmoil.
Best representation: Scene 12 - Struggles of Identity. This scene best encapsulates the writer's voice because it perfectly blends several key stylistic elements. The stark visual imagery (dark bathroom, fluorescent serum) is powerfully evocative. The description of the physical transformation is visceral and disturbing, yet the underlying theme of self-acceptance adds a layer of emotional complexity. The juxtaposition of the painful transformation with the act of the younger self caring for the older self perfectly captures the central conflict of the story and the screenplay's overall tone of unsettling yet compelling drama. It exemplifies the blend of poetic, visually striking descriptions with a deep dive into a character's emotional turmoil, all hallmarks of the writer's distinctive style.
Memorable Lines:
- ELISABETH: GET OUT!! GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!!!! (Scene 50)
- HARVEY: I WANT YOU for this show. So we’ll organize around whatever mother, brother, fucking sick dog or rabbit you need to take care of. (Scene 15)
- ELISABETH: NOOOOOOO..... (Scene 43)
- MAN: It gets harder each time to remember that you still deserve to exist... (Scene 33)
- HARVEY: I don’t give a fuck what we promised her! This is TV, not a charity! So find me somebody NEW. NOW. (Scene 3)
Characters
Elisabeth Sparkle:A once-famous TV personality struggling with aging and the loss of her career.
Sue:Elisabeth's younger counterpart who embodies the idealized version of beauty and success, ultimately leading to a dark rivalry.
Harvey:The ambitious TV network director who represents the industry's harsh realities and ageism.
Fred:An old classmate of Elisabeth who awkwardly attempts to reconnect with her, symbolizing her past.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - The Rise and Fall of Elisabeth Sparkle | Mysterious, Reflective, Melancholic | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - Behind the Sparkle | Energetic, Motivational, Exhausted | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Reflections of Reality | Critical, Reflective, Sarcastic | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - Isolation in a Monologue | Sarcastic, Cynical, Unsettling | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Contract Termination | Tense, Confrontational, Awkward, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
6 - After the Crash | Intense, Emotional, Unsettling | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
7 - Awkward Reunion | Awkward, Embarrassing, Nostalgic, Humorous | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - The Weight of Transformation | Mysterious, Reflective, Intriguing | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Shattered Reflections | Dark, Melancholic, Intense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Morning After Uncertainty | Mysterious, Melancholic, Intriguing | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Unpacking Secrets | Mysterious, Intriguing, Dark | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - The Matrix Within | Terror, Anguish, Transformation, Mystery | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Struggles of Identity | Introspective, Mysterious, Suspenseful | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - Transformation of Sue | Mysterious, Intriguing, Surreal | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
15 - The Offer | Flirtatious, Ecstatic, Authoritative | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Embracing Transformation | Introspective, Mysterious, Transformational, Emotional | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - The Sacrifice | Intense, Reflective, Surreal | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Scars of Departure | Tense, Melancholic, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - Shifting Identities | Suspenseful, Intense, Intriguing, Mysterious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Awkward Introductions | Tension, Suspense, Dark Humor | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - Rivalry in Shadows | Dark, Mysterious, Intense, Surreal | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - From Shadows to Spotlight | Intense, Mysterious, Dynamic, Provocative | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
23 - Sue's Bold Choice | Intense, Exciting, Suspenseful | 8.7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - Transformation and Tension | Mysterious, Intense, Intriguing | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - Contrasts of Life and Stasis | Dark, Intense, Sensual, Mysterious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Desperate Choices | Intense, Suspenseful, Emotional | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - Intimacy and Horror | Dark, Intense, Mysterious | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - Aftermath of the Night | Shocking, Confused, Horror, Intrigued | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Unraveling Control | Tense, Mysterious, Anxious, Regretful | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Fleeting Hopes | Anxiety, Emotional, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - Reflections of Loss | Confusion, Overwhelmed, Disturbing, Fascination | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
32 - Silent Isolation | Suspenseful, Intense, Mysterious | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - Unwanted Connections | Confusion, Suspense, Introspective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
34 - Frantic Encounters | Frantic, Obsessive, Nervous | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - A Nervous Connection | Nervous, Hopeful, Awkward, Excited | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - Reflections of Insecurity | Introspective, Emotional, Tense, Gloomy, Aggressive | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - Reflections of Inadequacy | Dark, Intense, Disturbing | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
38 - The Mysterious Bulge | Tension, Anxiety, Confusion | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - Grotesque Reflection | Disturbing, Disgusting, Intense, Intriguing | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - Fractured Balance | Agitated, Perturbed, Panic, Shaken | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
41 - A New Opportunity | Tense, Emotional, Serious | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
42 - Seizing Opportunity | Tense, Disturbing, Mysterious, Anxious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
43 - Fractured Reflections | Terror, Disgust, Shock, Anxiety | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
44 - Fractured Time | Intense, Emotional, Disturbing, Anxious | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
45 - A Taste of Memory | Agonizing, Disturbing, Intense | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
46 - Kitchen Chaos: A Recipe for Rage | Intense, Disturbing, Revengeful, Mocking | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
47 - Reflections of Despair | Disturbing, Intense, Frantic | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
48 - The Secret Room | Disturbing, Grim, Intense | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
49 - A Dress Rehearsal of Despair | Tense, Dark, Suspenseful | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
50 - Descent into Despair | Disturbing, Intense, Terrifying, Emotional | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
51 - Desperate Choices | Intense, Emotional, Disturbing | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
52 - Descent into Chaos | Violent, Intense, Disturbing, Tragic | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
53 - Shattered Reflections | Tense, Suspenseful, Anxious, Grim | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
54 - The Cost of Perfection | Terror, Desperation, Compulsion, Horror | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
55 - Caught in the Spotlight | Tense, Suspenseful, Dark | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
56 - Behind the Smile | Anxiety, Fear, Desperation, Tension | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
57 - Fragmented Reflections | Horror, Desperation, Acceptance, Transformation | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
58 - Masquerade of Despair | Dark, Disturbing, Surreal, Intense | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
59 - New Year's Eve Nightmare | Terror, Chaos, Shock, Desperation, Violence | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
60 - The Agony of Triumph | Agony, Desperation, Dreamlike, Horror, Acceptance | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 |
Scene 1 - The Rise and Fall of Elisabeth Sparkle
Written by Coralie Fargeat
“EVERYTHING FLOWS, NOTHING REMAINS”
- HERACLITUS
“DON’T YOU KNOW PUMP IT UP
YOU’VE GOT TO PUMP IT UP”
- DANZEL
...sc
FADE IN ON A HIGH ANGLE TOP SHOT OF...
1 A RAW, UNCOOKED EGG LYING ON A FLAT SURFACE. 1
The round yolk stands proudly in the center of the
transparent and gelatinous egg white.
A syringe needle enters the frame and slowly approaches the
egg before planting itself in the middle of the yolk and very
slowly injects a fluorescent yellow product inside of it.
After a moment, the egg begins to shake and move as if
something were happening inside of it.
Little by little, a small growth begins to emerge on the side
of the yolk... which grows bigger... and bigger... until it
starts to form a second egg yolk which emerges out of the
side of the first one... before finally detaching itself to
become independent.
Both egg yolks now stand side by side.
The second yolk is rounder, shinier, fleshier.
In other words: more perfect.
Long beat on both egg yolks which stand side by side.
BLACK
The sounds of jackhammers, traffic jams, jigsaws, coming from
a construction site in the middle of the city...
We FADE IN on a STATIC TOP SHOT OF...
2 EXT. WALK OF FAME SIDEWALK - DAY 2
A SIDEWALK MADE UP OF LARGE GREY SLABS. Only one slab appears
to be missing like a big gaping hole right in the middle of
the pavement.
In the same static shot, WORKER’S HANDS appear within the
frame and start to carefully set in place thin sticks of
wood, nailing them to one another.
The linked sticks soon form a wooden frame shaped like a star
which stands out in the muddy hole of the pavement.
Little by little, the hands start to place various different
elements inside the star shaped frame: brass block letters
which begin to form a name: E…L…I…Z…A…B…E…T…H… S…P…A…R…K…L…E
Underneath, the small round crest containing the logo of a
camera appears.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 2 -
...sc 2
A pink marble slab slides into the golden edges of the wooden
frame... sealing the pink star into the terrazzo pavement
which we now understand to be the famous HOLLYWOOD WALK OF
FAME.
Still in the same static shot with the star in the center of
the frame, workers’ hands come in and out making final
tweaks, then remove the plastic protective film. A broom
sweeps back and forth shining up the now finished star - in
the middle of which the golden inscription proudly stands:
ELISABETH SPARKLE
After a moment, still in the same shot, a buzz of excitement
from the crowd and camera flashes start to multiply as the
feet of a YOUNG WOMAN enter the bottom of the frame. Wearing
vertiginously high heels and with a conquering walk, she
poses for the cameras before kneeling down and placing her
hands underneath the star.
More flashes and voices trying to attract the attention of
the lucky lady: "Elisabeth!" "Over here Elisabeth!""Right
here Elisabeth!".
The flurry of feet around the high heels and the way they
move tells a story of their own: flattery, fawning,
happiness, recognition, ambition, success etc.
Then the young woman's feet and those of the crowd gradually
disappear one by one, just like the camera flashes, which
also grow rare and finally disappear, leaving the static
frame empty and silent, with only the star and its name:
ELISABETH SPARKLE
After a long beat on the star and still in the same shot, a
leaf flies across the screen, the wind brushing it past.
Then the feet of passersby which enter and exit the frame,
walking across the star in a pace that quickens as the days
go by and life carries on.
More and more feet enter and exit. A few marks and scratches
appear on the star, the concrete aging little by little as
time goes by, to the pace of more walking, more pedestrians,
tourists, alternating rain and sun, changing fashions,
pigeons landing on the ground, shopping carts being pulled
over it in an uninterrupted flow of everyday foot traffic.
Some feet occasionally stop to look down at Elisabeth's star,
then less and less, then almost none at all as we notice new
stars appearing at the corners of the frame, which start
drawing people’s attention away.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 3 -
...sc 2
Finally, the white sneakers of a tourist wearing shorts that
walk lazily across the now worn and patinated star, clumsily
dropping a round burger bun, which falls on the ground,
smearing the star with a large ketchup stain.
The guy lowers his hand in a half-hearted attempt to clean up
the stain with a greasy piece of burger paper, then with the
big sole of his sneaker, thus leaving a large, disgusting red
trail across the star. The feet walk out of the frame,
helplessly, above all showing very little interest in
cleaning the whole thing up.
The star remains in the center, now aged and stained with the
red ketchup:
ELISABETH SPARKLE
Long beat over which we hear the aggressive and exhausting
cacophony of traffic then, little by little, music is heard
in the distance, stressed by the dynamic accents of a female
voice growing louder and clearer:
Keep moving! That’s great! YOU GOT IT!
Walk it back! Couple more! YOU GOT IT!
Again from the very top!
SMASH CUT TO:
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Scene 2 - Behind the Sparkle
PAIRS OF FEET WITH FLUORESCENT DANCE LEGGINGS stomping the
floor.
A BLINDING WHITE LIGHT.
A small blinking red dot indicates that this is being filmed
and recorded.
We're inside a TV Studio, in the very middle of an aerobics
class.
Lights full on and flashy-colored aerobic outfits.
Fluorescent leotards.
Muscles tightening under each step.
Ultra forced smiles.
Super happy music broadcasting ready-made happiness.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 4 -
...sc 3
In the foreground of this fluorescent group, high on
vitamins, ELISABETH SPARKLE, now close to fifty, leads the
class, with a wide, bright smile.
Her ultra-sculpted body strictly primed against the smallest
bit of flab or excess.
In the background, a large morning show title is visible:
SPARKLE YOUR LIFE
With Elisabeth
Keep moving! That’s great! You got it!
All the pairs of fluorescent leggings beat up and down in
rhythm like perfect soldiers and Elisabeth never stops
smiling as if her bright smile were etched to her jaw while
she motivates her audience with an energetic voice:
ELISABETH
I know it’s hard! Walk it back!
That’s great, couple more ladies!
Think about your bikini this
summer! You don’t want to look like
a giant jellyfish on the beach, do
you? So keep moving! Couple more...
we’re almost there... aaand...
The music ends on a final synchronized movement made by all
the dancers.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
... give yourselves a hand! That
was a GREAT workout!
The troupe applauds while Elisabeth faces the camera with a
great big smile:
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
I’ll see you next week to work more
on the lateral abs, those are the
hardest to sculpt. In the
meantime... Take care of yourself!
She blows a kiss to the camera.
The cameras stop rolling, and the soundstage lights fade.
Elisabeth's smile fades instantly as she relaxes her body.
She's covered in sweat. Out of breath.
Really out of breath. She winces briefly as she massages her
knee.
An assistant brings her a towel and a bottle of water.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 5 -
...sc 3
We follow her from behind...
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Scene 3 - Reflections of Reality
...as she walks down the long backstage corridor of the tv
station with an energetic stride.
EVERYONE she meets or bumps into wishes her a "Happy
Birthday" with a broad smile. Elisabeth smiles back and
cheerfully thanks them.
Walking down the corridor she passes by dozens of framed
posters displaying her smiling face and shapely body from
every season of the show:
SPARKLE YOUR LIFE
On the successive posters, Elisabeth displays the exact same
bright smile but the colors and looks change as her physical
appearance alters over time, the hairstyles becoming less and
less frizzed and her face more and more photoshopped.
Elisabeth walks to the ladies room at the end of the corridor
but it turns out to be closed for cleaning. She glances round
to check she’s alone and finally... walks into the men's room
next door.
5 TV STUDIO - MEN’S ROOM 5
Nobody inside.
She leans over the sink, splashes water over her face, making
the most of the moment to refresh herself after the physical
effort.
She then enters one of the toilet stalls.
Static shot of the row of sinks in the empty men’s room.
The neons cast a perfectly white and unchanging light.
Long, silent beat.
Soon to be broken by the sudden, loud arrival of A STOUT
MIDDLE-AGED MAN, his ear glued to a cellphone, face red with
anger:
MAN
I don’t care if we have to see
EVERY FUCKING YOUNG GIRL in town in
the next couple of weeks. We need
her YOUNG. We need her HOT. And we
need her NOW.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 6 -
...sc 5
This is HARVEY, the TV network director. Mid-50s, large belly
and wearing a loose suit, he comes to stand right in front of
the camera under which we guess is an out of frame urinal.
His phone wedged between his ear and shoulder he continues
his logorrhoea while unbuttoning his pants to take a piss:
HARVEY
I mean, how the old bitch has
managed to stay this long in the
first place is a fucking mystery!
(the person at the other
end of the line tries to
say something but is
immediately cut off)
Oscar winner my ass! When was that?
Back in the 30s for KING KONG?!
(he"shakes" himself off)
I don’t give a fuck what we
promised her! This is TV, not a
charity! So find me somebody NEW.
NOW.
He flushes the urinal and closes his fly.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Did you know that women’s fertility
starts to decrease from the age of
25?
He leaves without washing his hands....
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Yeah I know...(he chuckles)...How
old is Elisa?
His voice drifts away as the bathroom door slowly closes with
the automatic closing system.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
....Ha ha so hurry up!
His laughter trailing off in the distance until the room is
completely silent again.
A beat on the empty room.
The white sinks.
The neon lights casting the unchanging light.
Then, the sound of a toilet flushing.
The door to one of the stalls finally opens slowly and
Elisabeth walks out.
She remains still for a moment in the middle of the
immaculate room, her reflection infinitely repeating in the
mirrors in front and behind her.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 7 -
...sc 5
Her fluorescent leggings now seem ridiculously out of place.
She walks very calmly towards a sink, washes her hands slowly
and knowingly, her eyes focused on the water flowing out of
the tap... then she stops the water in one swift gesture.
She looks up slowly...
A beat, alone, facing her reflection in the mirror...
ELISABETH
The noise of plates and glasses that progressively grows
louder...
FADE IN:
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Scene 4 - Isolation in a Monologue
Greasy fingers that rip the head off of a shrimp: SHLACK!
The thick sweaty nape of a man’s neck, on which a fly
sporadically lands. A pudgy hand tries to flick it away.
It’s Harvey’s hand. Facing camera, he is in the midst of
another logorrheic monologue as he peels and shells the juicy
shrimp before stuffing them into his mouth...slurp...in
between two words...
HARVEY
...but it’s like when you’ve got
someone farting on screen...
slurp... People LOVE that! I’d
rather talk about RENOIR or GAUGUIN
but slurp... that’s how it is.
C’est la vie... People are just...
people. And I have to give people
what they want. slurp... That’s
what keeps the shareholders happy.
slurp... And let me tell you
something: people always ask for
something NEW. slurp... RENEWAL is
inevitable. It's nature’s way. You
either RENEW or you disappear.
"RENEW" seems to explode out of his mouth in a splutter of
shrimp.
He stares at a young waitress’ ass, which seems to RENEW his
appetite.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
At 50, it stops. And that's not me
saying so. That's biology.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 8 -
...sc 6
We finally discover Elisabeth, facing him.
ELISABETH
What stops?
A beat.
HARVEY
What?
ELISABETH
What stops?
HARVEY
...? The... you know the... the...
Suddenly really uncomfortable, he makes a circular gesture
with his hand...
Then he brushes it all aside with a sweeping gesture.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Anyway! Lots of wonderful things
await you afterwards, you'll
finally have time to enjoy your
private life. Kids, they put a big
smile on your face and you forget
about everything else!
ELISABETH
I don’t have kids.
A tiny, empty beat in Harvey's dull eyes.
He jumps to his feet grabbing his phone, looking terribly
busy, and calls out to a MAN (60) at the back of the room.
HARVEY
GEORGE!
(to Elisabeth)
I've gotta run.
He walks away, hitting on the young waitress as he passes her
by and opening his arms towards a man in his sixties at the
back of the room, grandiloquent:
HARVEY (CONT’D)
GEORGE!! These ratings are insane!
You’re a fucking genius!
Elisabeth is left alone sitting at the table.
Inside the wine glass, which she's barely touched, the fly is
drowning. It's wriggling all around desperately fighting to
escape this sweet, liquid trap...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 9 -
...sc 6
Elisabeth stares at the fly, which twitches as if having an
epileptic fit, its movements growing slower... and slower...
until finally it is completely immobilized.
Dead and disgusting.
DISSOLVE TO:
7 OMITTED 7
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Scene 5 - Contract Termination
A huge picture of Elisabeth with an ultra bright smile,
praising the merits of a whitening toothpaste:
WITH TOOTHBRITE (check clearance)
YOU GOT IT!
The smile is swallowed up as a hand closes the magazine
containing the ad.
CRAIG
TOOTHBRITE is ending your
ambassador’s contract.
CRAIG SILVER, 40, sits behind a big desk, facing Elisabeth.
ELISABETH
But we just renewed it a month ago!
CRAIG
I know. But they are within their
right to do so considering the
“significant change in your public
notoriety” with the end of your
show...
Elisabeth, speechless, her eyes glistening with the tears she
is trying to hold back.
ELISABETH
So what’s our next move? Maybe a
reality show? Or I was thinking
even a cooking show...or why not
a...
She stops when she sees Craig, visibly ill at ease, wiggling
about in his seat.
CRAIG
Listen... I know this is not the
best moment to tell you this but...
we are forced to cut back on the
number of clients we represent at
the agency and...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 10 -
...sc 8
...
ELISABETH
“We”? Who is “we”?
CRAIG
Well you know... CRAIG SILVER
MANAGEMENT.
ELISABETH
Sorry what’s your name again?
CRAIG
What?
ELISABETH
What’s your name?
CRAIG
C’mon...Lizzie
ELISABETH
What’s your fucking name?
CRAIG
Craig Silver-
A beat on his contrite face. We hear the door slam violently
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Scene 6 - After the Crash
Elisabeth is at the wheel of her car.
We can almost hear the billion thoughts firing through her
mind, knocking back and forth.
She's speeding along a road lined with palm trees.
The noise of the traffic seems to be getting louder and
louder.
She drives past a big billboard flaunting her photo:
WITH TOOTHBRITE
YOU GOT IT!
She turns her head, trying to see the new billboard that two
workers are putting up in her plac-
WHAM!!! A car hurtles right out of a crossroad and
SMASHES straight into her car. The window explode as the car
spins violently, tires screeching against the asphalt.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 11 -
...sc 10
10 INT. HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY 10
Elisabeth is in the ER.
She's sitting on the side of a bed wearing a disposable paper
hospital gown tied up in the back, with her legs dangling in
front of her. A slew of x-rays are on a backlit x-ray viewer.
A DOCTOR comes in accompanied by a YOUNG MALE NURSE.
DOCTOR
Well it’s your lucky day Ms.
Sparkle! We’ve X-rayed you from
head to toe and there’s not even as
much as a cracked molar. So you’re
good to go!
The young male nurse hands him a file. The nurse is wearing a
surgical mask that only allows us to see his piercing eyes of
an extreme azure blue.
He appears to be stunningly handsome.
Elisabeth is in her own distant and muted bubble while the
doctor goes over her file, checking everything for the last
time and signing off on the paperwork.
DOCTOR (CONT’D)
...vaccinations...ok... not
currently on any medication... By
the way my wife is a huge fan...
blood type... date of birth... oh,
it’s your birthday happy birthd-
He doesn’t have time to finish– Elisabeth bursts into tears.
Long beat on Elisabeth, hunched over and shaken by hiccups as
she sobs.
ELISABETH
(muttering to herself)
It’s over...
The doctor looks at her, uncomfortable.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
It’s all over...
A long awkward beat.
Beep beep - the doctor glances at his beeper clipped to his
belt.
DOCTOR
(relieved for the excuse
to get away)
An emergency, I have to run.
Have a good... euh ...bye.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 12 -
...sc 10
He leaves. Elisabeth remains sitting on the examination
table.
After a long moment, she wipes the tears from her face and is
about to stand u-
MALE NURSE (O.S.)
One moment.
She turns around, surprised to see that the nurse is still
there. His striking, piercing blue eyes looking out from
behind his mask.
MALE NURSE (CONT’D)
There’s just one last exam to
perform.
ELISABETH
Oh? Didn’t he say I was good to g-
He separates the open flaps of her paper hospital gown and
places his stethoscope on her back.
While he moves the stethoscope around her back, we notice
that he has a small strawberry birthmark on his forearm.
We hear noises coming from inside her body, amplified by the
instrument: Boom boom... boom boom...boom boom....
His hands start to palpate along her backbone, the fingers of
his latex gloves following the length of the prominent
vertebrae, stopping and palpating each vertebra with great
attention, as if his probing fingers were measuring the
resistance of her spinal column.
Elisabeth is taken aback by this unusual exam...
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
Is there a problem...?
MALE NURSE
(still focusing on her
spine)
No it’s perfect, you’re a good
candidate.
(catching himself)
I’m mean, you’re good to go.
He goes to the coat rack to take her coa- the coat rack sways
and falls to the floor. Oops, sorry let me get that... he
rummages among the coats and finally picks up her yellow coat
which he places on her lap.
MALE NURSE (CONT’D)
Have a good day. I wish you the
best.
He leaves and Elisabeth is left there, in silence.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 13 -
...sc 10
Confused by what just happened.
Just the noise of the swinging doors Thump-clomp, thump-
clomp, which finally come to a stop.
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Scene 7 - Awkward Reunion
Elisabeth walks out of the hospital. A beat to breathe in the
fresh air.
An ear-splitting chorus of car horns and traffic.
She puts her hands in her coat pockets as if to comfort
herself.
She frowns, feeling something inside her pocket.
She takes her hand out, holding... a folded paper packet with
something inside. She unfolds it and finds a USB stick, which
she is manifestly discovering for the very first time.
Written down on the back of the stick:
THE SUBSTANCE
Scribbled on the crumpled piece of paper: “It changed my
life.”
She takes a moment to look at the USB stick amidst the racket
caused by the traffic...
MAN’S VOICE (O.S.)
...Lizzie??... Lizzie Sparkle??
She looks up: A RATHER UNPREPOSSESSING-LOOKING MAN in his
fifties, with just a crown of hair left on his balding head,
is looking at her with a wide smile on his face as he adjusts
his glasses on his nose.
MAN
OMG I can’t believe it!
An embarrassed silence, she visibly doesn't recognize him.
MAN (CONT’D)
...Fred from 10th grade homeroom!
...
She widens her eyes, making us understand that time has not
been kind to him...
ELISABETH
...Oh... Fred...of course...
He passes his hand over his bald head.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 14 -
...sc 11
FRED
Yeah... baldness runs in the family
- no escaping it.
ELISABETH
Oh no, that’s not what I mea...
FRED
You, however, haven't changed!
You’re still the most beautiful
girl in the whole wide world! I’ve
followed your career, what a
success! Wow wow WOW!
She smiles without letting anything show.
FRED (CONT’D)
And the funny thing is my mom used
to buy your toothpaste. So every
time I went home for Christmas, I
would think about you when I
brushed my teeth.
ELISABETH
Oh, that’s...
FRED
She’s dead now.
...creepy.
A taxi pulls up in front of them.
FRED (CONT’D)
Oh that’s for me. Hey! Why don’t we
go out for a drink some time now
that we’ve “reconnected”?!
ELISABETH
Oh uh... I’m kind of...
FRED
Oh, I’m stupid... of course you’re
super busy...
ELISABETH
(being polite)
But why don’t you give me your
card... you never know!
FRED
Oh! I’m not a “card” type of guy
but...
He rummages through his pockets and takes out a pen and some
sheets of paper with what are visibly medical test results.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 15 -
...sc 11
FRED (CONT’D)
What do we have here... ok this
will do.
(he scribbles on one of
the sheets)
Please don’t look at my cholesterol
levels, they’re a disaster...
He rips off the end of the paper with his number written on
it... and it flies off and lands in a puddle of mirky water.
FRED (CONT’D)
Oh God...
(clumsily picking it up
and wiping it)
Programmer’s hands... Aren’t much
good away from the keyboard!
The taxi honks. He slaps the paper into Elisabeth’s hand.
FRED (CONT’D)
Now you’ve got it!
He chuckles, proud of his joke and jumps into the taxi as he
mimes the telephoning gesture: “call me!”
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Scene 8 - The Weight of Transformation
Elisabeth is standing in front of an oversized picture window
with a magnificent view of the city in a spacious, elegantly
decorated living room.
Hanging on the wall opposite the window is a huge full-length
framed poster of her. She's sporting a sexy pose in a blue
leotard with a big conquering smile on her face.
A bouquet of flowers still wrapped in plastic sits on the
table. On the small card attached we read: "Thank you for all
these years with us. You were amazing!". The word "were"
seems to stand out like a punch in the face.
Elisabeth plugs the USB stick into her television screen and
sits on the couch.
AN ENTIRELY BLACK SCREEN
After a moment, a MALE VOICE : it is deep and slow.
Underneath a very slight, almost inaudible crackling sound.
Have you ever dreamt of a better version of yourself?
The screen remains completely black as the voice continues:
We are merely the expression of a genetic code that freezes
at a precise moment.
But your DNA conceals billions of other possibilities.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 16 -
...sc 12
Inside of you, there is another you. Or should I say,
billions of other “yous.”
One single injection unlocks your DNA, starting a new
cellular division, that will release another version of
yourself.
Younger. More beautiful. More perfect.
This is...
The title appears full screen at the same time as the voice
pronounces:
THE SUBSTANCE
A long silent beat over the title.
It then disappears. Silent beat on the BLACK screen.
And at long last, an image...
A yellow ball (like blu tack) upon a white surface
(high angle top shot like in a lab demonstration).
You are the matrix.
The ball is slightly dented and irregular.
Two male hands enter the frame and start slowly pulling on a
section of the blu tack ball.
Everything comes from YOU.
The hand pulls... and pulls... until the piece detaches
itself from the original ball.
And everything IS you.
THE HAND ROLLS THE NEW PIECE TO FORM A PERFECTLY ROUNDED
SECOND BALL WHICH NOW SITS NEXT TO THE ORIGINAL, THAT IN
CONTRAST SEEMS ALL THE MORE IMPERFECT.
This is simply... a better version of yourself.
Each hand presents one ball on its open palm:
You just have to share.
The left hand closes over the left ball making it disappear.
One week for one.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 17 -
...sc 12
Before re-opening while closing the other hand.
And one week for the other.
Both hands re-open. Silent beat on the two small balls side
by side.
A perfect balance of 7 days each.
The one and only thing not to forget...
YOU ARE ONE
BACK TO THE TWO BALLS.
YOU CAN’T ESCAPE FROM YOURSELF
The two hands slam the two balls together-SMACK!
THE VIDEO ENDS.
Elisabeth remains still for a moment, watching the screen in
silence.
She then removes the USB stick, heads into the kitchen... and
throws it into the trash can.
BLACK
A muffled, distorted noise as if we were underwater...
FADE IN:
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Scene 9 - Shattered Reflections
EXTREME CLOSE UP SHOT OF AN OLIVE FLOATING inside a
transparent liquid.
The olive is suddenly pierced by a wooden toothpick in a
muffled, distorted sound, like a heart pierced by a sword,
pieces of its slashed flesh floating in the liquid.
Back to a medium shot which shows the olive swimming inside a
Martini glass... Which Elisabeth brings to her lips... and
empties in one gulp... before putting the empty glass down...
next to the two others on the bar counter in front of her.
In a wide shot we discover that she is sitting at a bar, a
cosy speak-easy type cocktail lounge.
The mood is dark and classy, blanketed with black-velvet
surfaces and jazz music.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 18 -
...sc 13
She glances around, looking at the different couples hidden
in the alcoves on dark couches...
It’s late.
She’s alone.
She signals the barman to serve her another drink.
14A INT. APARTMENT / LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 14A
THE BIG FRAMED PHOTO OF ELISABETH SMILING in the living room
plunged in darkness.
The sound of somebody throwing up.
On the table, the roses are now wilted, asphyxiated in their
plastic prison.
14B INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT 14B
From the dark long corridor, we can see Elisabeth kneeling
over the toilet.
She stands up and goes to the sink. Splashes water on her
face, then carelessly wipes it with a towel making her makeup
run; she stares for a moment at her reflection in the mirror.
The black lines of mascara running down her cheeks make her
look even more like a sad clown.
14C INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 14C
Elisabeth stands in front of the big picture window. She
stays there looking at the city lights.
The lights continue to shine. The world continues to spin.
Without her.
Her eyes dart back and forth between different objects and
keepsakes lined up on the edge of the window sill. An Oscar
has pride of place among the other statues and awards, framed
photos and souvenirs where we see her smiling surrounded by
various people.
She picks up a snow globe with a small figurine version of
herself inside. The tiny figurine stands on a small pink
star, a replica of the Hollywood Walk of Fame.
She shakes the globe: golden confetti floats around inside
the liquid, creating a magical golden rain around Elisabeth's
figurine replica.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 19 -
...sc 14C
A suspended moment on the sparkling confetti lingering
weightlessly...
All of a sudden, Elisabeth turns around and hurls the globe
with all her strength against the wall: BAM!!! The globe
smashes and shatters into pieces against the framed poster,
splattering everything in the process.
The smiling face on the poster is now dribbling the slimy,
transparent liquid; the glass is cracked right over one of
her eyes, as if she had gotten punched in the face.
Elisabeth grabs the wilted flowers from the table, heads to
the kitchen and...
14D INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT 14D
... throws them in the trash can.
BLACK
A long silent beat.
CLACK - LOW ANGLE SHOT FROM INSIDE THE TRASH CAN WHICH OPENS
AGAIN- revealing Elisabeth’s face framed by the black can.
She leans over, sticks her hand inside the black bucket...
... and retrieves the USB stick, covered in sticky residue.
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Scene 10 - Morning After Uncertainty
Elisabeth sits on the side of her bed on the phone, lit only
by the small bedside lamp whose soft glow lights her face.
The sound of the line ringing. Slow. Regular. The line
crackles slightly.
After numerous rings, someone finally picks up the phone.
A moment of silence.
Then a masculine voice, deep and cavernous:
Yes?
The sound of heavy breathing on the other end of the line.
Elisabeth hesitates, then finally jumps in:
ELISABETH
I’d like to... order?
A beat. Then the deep, terse, deadpan voice:
Address?
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 20 -
...sc 15A
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
1057 North Beverly Drive.
Please note: 35 North Byron Alley.(TBD)
Caught unprepared, she grabs a pen and scribbles the address
on the palm of her hand.
The line goes dead.
Elisabeth remains for a moment without moving on her bed.
BLACK
15B INT. BEDROOM / CORRIDOR - DAY 15B
A steady whirring sound that grows louder and louder...
Bits of light appear and disappear... Elisabeth opens her
eyes with a start.
She realizes that she fell asleep on her bed still dressed.
She’s dazzled by the sunlight that floods her bedroom.
She sits up and swings her legs over the side of the bed...
ouch... a major hangover.
She walks down the hallway dragging her feet where A CLEANING
LADY IN HER FIFTIES is running the vacuum.
ELISABETH
Hello Maria.
MARIA
Hello Ma’am.
16 INT. SHOWER. DAY 16
HISSSSSSSSSSSS TOP SHOT OF THE POWERFUL JET OF WATER spraying
Elisabeth's head and back, flattening her hair, water
streaming down her numb body. She looks up and the jet slowly
washes away the traces of makeup on her face.
CUT TO:
17 INT. KITCHEN / LIVING ROOM - DAY 17
SISSSSSSSSS - AN EFFERVESCENT ASPIRIN TABLET drops into a
glass of water.
Elisabeth sits at the kitchen table, wearing a white terry
cloth bathrobe.
The bubbles rise to the surface of the glass.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 21 -
...sc 17
In the background in the living room, we see Maria vacuuming
slowly, crossing the frame in a straight line from left to
right.... then from right to left... like a small foosball
figurine moving straight in its axis.
Elisabeth picks up the newspaper that has been dropped on the
table with the mail, and quickly leafs through it.
She can’t help but take a quick look at the classified ads...
where she discovers the casting call to replace her.
A moment to regroup... then she throws the paper into the
wastepaper basket and sifts through the rest of her mail -
advertising fliers, a few bills... and stops on a white
envelope with her address written by hand. The envelope is
sealed with an “S” on the back. No stamp, no postmark, as if
someone had dropped it off there.
Elisabeth opens the envelope, and finds enclosed a white
plastic card that is simply marked: 503.
She looks at the back of the card: nothing.
She stares at the card for a moment... then at the palm of
her hand with the address almost entirely erased by her
shower.
In the background, the excruciatingly insistent noise of the
vacuum cleaner
18A EXT. STREET (ELISABETH AREA). DAY 18A
We follow Elisabeth from behind with a hand-held camera as
she walks down the street.
Her mustard yellow coat is a spot of color that keeps us
riveted to her and her gait.
18B EXT. STREET (LESS NICE STREET). DAY 18B
Still following Elisabeth from behind as she walks (her
surroundings are a little less pleasant)
19A EXT. AVENUE / DEPOSIT BUILDING (SKID ROW). DAY 19A
Elisabeth arrives at the given address: on the avenue, a
small seedy metal shutter door without any signs or
nameplates.
Just a small magnetic card reader on the side of the door.
She waves her card and the shutter starts to rise...then gets
stuck, halfway open. She waves her card at it again but the
shutter remains half shut. She looks around... before
crouching down to pass under the shutter...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 22 -
...sc 19B
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Scene 11 - Unpacking Secrets
She’s now in a long narrow decrepit hallway. On the other
side of the shutter door, a notification flyer from a pest
control company.
Nice...
She goes down the long corridor..., which leads to...
19C INT. DEPOSIT / LOBBY 19C
...a small, windowless lobby, harshly lit with neon lights,
with letter boxes, like post office boxes, on the wall.
Elisabeth scans the letter boxes... One at the bottom is
marked 207... and then another box, higher up, is marked 503.
She waves her card to unlock her letter box. BEEP.
CUT TO:
20 INT. APARTMENT / LIVING ROOM - END OF THE DAY 20
A CARDBOARD BOX MARKED 503 sits on the coffee table.
Everything is now tidy and silent in the apartment.
Elisabeth sits on the couch, looking at the parcel.
She finally opens the box and starts taking out what she
finds inside. She lays everything out on the table.
A small yellow fluorescent vial upon which is written:
ACTIVATOR
(single use/discard after use)
A plastic kit containing elements that look like needles and
syringes with the label:
STABILIZER
other self
Something which would appear to look like a sewing kit:
surgical scissors. Compresses. Surgical thread. Disinfectant.
A transparent perfusion pipe with a label marked SWITCH.
And two transparent perfusion bags filled with a thick yellow
liquid upon which are written:
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 23 -
...sc 20
FOOD FOOD
MATRIX OTHER SELF
----------- 7 ----------- 7
----------- 6 ----------- 6
----------- 5 ----------- 5
----------- 4 ----------- 4
----------- 3 ----------- 3
----------- 2 ----------- 2
----------- 1 ----------- 1
---SWITCH--- ---SWITCH---
At the bottom of the box, a small white note card with
instructions and icons:
«YOU ACTIVATE» - only once (intravenous)
«YOU STABILIZE» - everyday (intramuscular)
«YOU SWITCH» - every 7 days without exception. She turns the
card over and reads the inscription on it:
REMEMBER YOU ARE ONE
A moment on the equipment spread out on the coffee table.
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Scene 12 - The Matrix Within
Elisabeth, naked, faces her bathroom mirror.
She looks at the sight the mirror reflects back at her
without clothing and makeup.
Her breasts. Her belly. Her face.
She slides her hand over her beauty mark with its singular
shape next to her belly button.
She's still a very beautiful woman but doesn't seem happy by
what she sees. We can sense a hidden anguish. Generalized.
Immense.
Basically she's just aging... and everything and everyone
around her leads her to believe it is the end of the world.
The end of her world.
As she looks at her reflection in the mirror, we hear the
man’s deep resonating voice:
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 24 -
...sc 21A
You are the matrix.
On the side of the sink, the equipment is carefully placed
upon a small silver tray.
Everything comes from YOU.
And everything IS YOU.
She picks up the syringe and fills it with the fluorescent
yellow liquid from the small ACTIVATOR vial.
This is simply... a better version of yourself.
She looks at herself in the mirror again.
Then she takes the tourniquet strap provided with her kit.
She makes a tourniquet on her arm, which she tightens with
her teeth.
She disinfects her arm with a cotton pad soaked in alcohol.
She taps her forearm to find a vein.
We can sense she's nervous. She ends up taking a deep breath,
sinks the needle into the vein and slowly empties the
contents of the syringe.
She waits for a few moments, tensed.
Nothing happens.
A beat. She breathes in deeply.
Still nothing.
She sighs... This is bullshi-
She turns away from the mirror and everything suddenly starts
spinning. She falls...
21B BAM! head first against the floor tiles. 21B
She's folded in two on the floor, violent abdominal pains
shooting straight through her stomach. The pain is
excruciating.
Her skin seems to come alive all of a sudden. As if something
were growing and moving underneath it.
She starts to sweat. Her eyes fill with sheer terror.
The pain is now unbearable.
The growth under her skin.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 25 -
...sc 21A
Sounds grow muffled. As if she were hearing inside of
herself. There is something moving... evolving...
Extreme close up of her pupil dilating...
...Deforming...
...DIVIDING ITSELF INTO TWO inside her iris...
She curls up into a foetal position under the unbearable
pain.
Her eye rolls upwards and for a moment we fleetingly see... A
SECOND EYE INSIDE THE CAVITY before it disappears behind the
ocular globe...
On her back, her skin deforms itself and then starts rippling
like waves, as if something strange were moving inside of
her.
The skin covering her spine starts to crack... and split
open. Under the opening skin... we see a SECOND SPINE...
As if ANOTHER BODY were locked up inside her own body.
The skin parts in two and lets THE SECOND BODY APPEAR.
The sound is muffled, her pupil dilates like a black hole, a
ringing noise creeps up in her ears, growing more and more
deafening...
We enter her pupil, a tunnel of fluorescent light moving at
full speed towards a small white spot which grows bigger and
bigger with AMAZING SPEED...
BLACK
21C Silence. 21C
A long beat.
Very long beat.
Of silence.
And darkness.
And suddenly.
The subliminal shot of a heart on fire, blazing.
Boom BOOM... Boom BOOM... Boom BOOM...
The image returns, slowly but surely.
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...sc 21A
Flickering like the batting of eyelids...
Slowly coming back to life...
At first we only see white tiles.
We soon realize that this is Elisabeth's POV, waking up on
the bathroom floor. Her vision is blurry, she is trying to
focus...
She turns to the other side and sees...
Elisabeth... lying on her back, unconscious on the white
tiles.
... ?
If Elisabeth is lying down on the ground in front of her...
Who is she??
Her POV: She lifts up her hand into her field of vision. The
nerve network is still being constructed making its blue
veins bulge slightly. The edges of her fingernails perspire a
mixture of fluid and blood.
She heads towards the sink and faces the steamed up mirror.
She attempts to focus. She wipes the mirror with her hand to
take the condensation away and discovers... A MAGNIFICENT
YOUNG WOMAN IN HER TWENTIES... perfectly formed... incredibly
beautiful... and young.
Her features are different from Elisabeth’s, but there is a
distant family resemblance.
She looks completely dazed.
All the sounds are muffled as if she were in cotton wool. As
if she can hear the inside of her body.
She approaches the mirror to look at her eye. She pulls down
her lower eyelid: inside of her iris, traces of yellow
fluorescent pigment are resorbing and forming a few small,
irregular yellow stains.
She slides her hand over her face, her hard nipples, filled
with life... Super hard pointy nipples like when she was
twenty.
She notices that her singular beauty mark is now on her right
breast, while her tummy is unblemished.
She turns to one side, exaggerates the curve of her back upon
which her long hair cascades down... like a Venus emerging
from the water... a creature of almost supernatural beauty.
She looks down... and sees her old self lying on the floor.
The matrix.
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...sc 21A
She’s lying still, her eyes frozen, staring into emptiness...
...in a puddle of fluid and blood.
The matrix’s back along her spine shows the traces of a slot-
like opening, already half closed.
As if the shock of this vision were too violent for her,
everything spins and she throws up a yellow, fluorescent
liquid on the white tiled floor.
She then tries to get ahold of herself... the matrix is pale
and can’t seem to breathe anymore.
21D She opens up the sewing kit and forces herself to get it 21D
together. She starts sewing up the slit in Elisabeth's back.
The needle and thread start suturing the huge wound along her
spine...
Once the suturing is finished, she picks up the perfusion bag
upon which is written:"FOOD/MATRIX" and sticks the
intravenous needle into Elisabeth's arm.
A small bubble floats up through the perfusion pipe...
After a beat... the matrix starts breathing again and the
thick yellow liquid begins to empty very slowly along the
gradation of the plastic bag which indicates
FOOD
MATRIX
----------- 7
----------- 6
----------- 5
----------- 4
----------- 3
----------- 2
----------- 1
---SWITCH---
She sits down on the edge of the bathtub. She's shaking.
Gathering her thoughts.
The camera tracks back slowly and reveals them side by side
for the first time together.
The MATRIX is spread out on the tiled floor.
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...sc 21A
SHE, the "new she," is sitting on the side of the bathtub.
Now they will have to share...
She stays silent and immobile for a moment.
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Scene 13 - Struggles of Identity
NewElisabeth at the kitchen table in her bathrobe.
We see her sitting from behind, perfectly still.
Then we hear her start to make guttural sounds, which run up
and down the scale: bass / treble / bass hhh…hel…
Hiiii…heee…llo…oooo… which trigger a coughing fit.
She spits something into a napkin: fluorescent yellow mucus.
She tries again, this time her voice is clearer:
Hello...hello...hello
23 OMITTED 23
24 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 24
TOP SHOT on NewElisabeth lying in the large bed, staring at
the ceiling.
A million things are spinning inside her head.
She finally closes her eyes.
After a few moments, we see her turning over.
And over again.
After a while, she turns the light on and gets out of bed.
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25 INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT 25
The bathroom light switches back on, revealing the matrix in
stasis on the floor, who hasn't moved an inch.
NewElisabeth looks at her for a moment. She then kneels and
tilts her very carefully to lay her on her back.
She takes a terry towel which she folds in four and gently
places underneath the matrix’s head.
She readjusts her position to make her comfortable. Gently
puts her hair back in place and brings her ear close to her
face to check her breathing.
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...sc 25
Everything is fine. After a beat looking down at her... she
turns off the light again.
BLACK
FADE IN:
26 INT/EXT. BEDROOM WINDOW / PALM TREE - DAY 26
A SHINY-LEAVED PALM TREE standing out against the BLUE SKY.
27 INT. TOP SHOT SHOWER. DAY 27
HISSSSSSSSSSSSS - THE POWERFUL JET OF WATER sprays down the
small of NewElisabeth’s back, flattening her long blond hair.
She runs her hands along her waist ... her belly ... her
thighs ... as if to appreciate her new shapes and forms.
28A INT. BATHROOM. DAY 28A
POV FLOOR LEVEL - naked feet come out of the shower and walk
past her former body still in stasis on the bathroom floor; a
few drops of water land on the matrix.
She wraps her bathrobe around her and stands in front of the
mirror. Facing the mirror, her voice is now perfectly clear
and controlled:
NEW-ELISABETH
...HELLO.
Strange feeling discovering her new voice.
She starts drying her hair off with a towel. A slight
tinnitus starts buzzing in her ears.
Ping.
A drop of blood has just fallen onto the white sink.
NewElisabeth brings her hand to her nose and looks at the end
of her index finger, which is blood red.
She opens the little door to the cabinet over the sink and
takes out the kit marked:
STABILIZER
Other self
The little card reads:
you stabilise
EVERY DAY
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...sc 28A
She takes out of the kit: a long puncture needle... and a
sort of plastic tube containing individual, but interlocking,
mini-vials (clipped on the inside) numbered 1 to 7, making up
the whole of a compartmentalized syringe.
She looks at the instruction card... her eyebrows shoot up
when she sees the diagrams, a bit uneasy...
Ping, ping, ping, the drops of blood fall more quickly and
persistently forcing her to react.
She kneels down next to the matrix and gently turns her onto
her side.
She approaches the oversized needle... and starts lightly
jabbing the sutured skin... it resists... she pushes with a
bit more strength... it still resists... she pushes again
and... Swik!... it slides right in.
Extremely concentrated while trying to ignore the piercing
tinnitus that never stops, her eyes watch the long puncture
needle that progressively sinks into the spinal column.
The needle all the way in, she clips on the series of
compartmentalized vials (forming a barrel) and pulls lightly
on the plunger... progressively draining a transparent liquid
and filling the individual vials.
Once all the vials are filled, she carefully removes the
needle, unclips the first vial marked DAY 1 and Swik! Gives
herself an intramuscular injection in the thigh.
HER PUPIL DILATES - A beat while her body diffuses the
fluid.... the tinnitus diminishes in intensity... and finally
disappears.
The bleeding has stopped. Everything’s ok.
She breathes out to calm herself
But she’s distracted by a noise...
She strains her ears... is it the... sound... of...
A KEY IN THE LOCK??!!
After a suspended moment where everything freezes, her mind
processing the information...
28B ...she rushes down the hallway towards the opening door and 28B
throws all her weight against it, violently slamming it back
shut on the person who was trying to get in. She double locks
the door. CLICK- CLACK.
After a beat to collect her wits, she looks through the
peephole and discovers: MARIA, her bag toppled over on the
floor, not understanding what has just happened...
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...sc 28A
NewElisabeth’s thoughts are racing. NewElisabeth rummages
through her coat pocket, takes out her phone and writes a
text message.
28C She looks through the peephole. Ping. Maria takes out her 28C
cell phone and reads the message... frowns, looks surprised,
but finally picks up her things and leaves.
Relieved, NewElisabeth lets go of the peephole cover.
SHLICK...
28D INT. FRIDGE - DAY 28D
The fridge door opens. NewElisabeth puts in the tube
containing the six remaining doses of Stabilizer.
29 INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 29
NewElisabeth, in panties and t-shirt, faces the picture
window overlooking the city.
She turns around and looks at the big framed photo of
Elisabeth hanging on the wall, frozen in her blue leotard and
imperturbable smile.
She goes to stand in the middle of the room.
A beat standing completely still.
Then, perfectly straight on her central axis, she starts
sliding her two legs apart... her feet slowly sliding in
opposite directions on the hardwood floor... even more, until
she is in a full split with what seems to be disconcerting
ease.
Her knee no longer troubles her in the least.
She then turns into a straddle split position and leans her
torso forward, easily reaching the floor with her nose, arms
extended.
LOW ANGLE SHOT of the poster of Elisabeth on the wall... soon
to be blocked out by NewElisabeth’s upper body reappearing in
the frame while she straightens back up.
She leans her torso to one side, making Elisabeth’s smiling
face reappear behind her... then returns to her central axis,
masking Elisabeth’s face again, before leaning over to the
other side... like a metronome covering and uncovering
Elisabeth’s image to the rhythm of her stretching routine.
A beat. And the her eyes fall upon the wastepaper basket with
the newspaper thrown by Elisabeth before.
30 OMITTED 30
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...sc 31
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Scene 14 - Transformation of Sue
We follow NewElisabeth from behind, walking in the street.
Her mustard yellow coat pulled tightly around her waist, but
the coat is now too big for her new, thinner and slender
frame, giving her a shapeless silhouette.
Her step is unsteady, very much aware of all the surrounding
sensory stimuli. The air on her skin. The wind in her hair.
The sound of her steps on the pavement.
Everything seems sharper. Heightened.
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32 I/E. SHOP WINDOW / STREET - DAY 32
POV FROM INSIDE A STORE - NewElisabeth is standing in front
of a shop window and looking at something off screen.
We track back to gradually reveal ...
... THE PERFECT ASS OF A PLASTIC MANNEQUIN, molded in a
FLASHY PINK leotard and frozen in a sensual hip sway position
with its hand on its hip.
A moment on the mannequin’s perfect ass in the foreground...
then on NewElisabeth in the background who looks at her
plastic counterpart for a long moment... before disappearing
from the screen as she enters the shop.
33 EXT. STREET (SHOP EXIT) - DAY 33
We follow NewElisabeth again from behind as she walks down
the street, now wearing a pink and white varsity jacket, a
pleated miniskirt and white sneakers. A sports bag over her
shoulder.
Her long hair undulates in rhythm with her steps. Her walk is
now more assured, swaying.
And with this outfit, which highlights her new silhouette,
heads start to turn as she walks by...
34A EXT. STUDIO LOT - DAY 34A
Establishing shot.
34B OMITTED 34B
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...sc 35
35 INT. DANCE STUDIO / CASTING ROOM - DAY 35
The slender legs of a girl in the foreground through which we
see a small desk in the background, where the CASTING
DIRECTOR and his ASSISTANT are sitting next to a small camera
on a tripod.
CASTING DIRECTOR
We’ll let you know by next week.
GIRL
Thank you so much... I’m just DYING
to get the part...
The legs walk off screen.
A moment of silence - wide shot. The two men behind their
desk like two frozen points.
ASSISTANT CASTING DIRECTOR
Great dancer.
A beat.
CASTING DIRECTOR
Too bad her boobs aren’t in the
middle of her face instead of that
nose.
A beat. Then the other guy gives a grunt of approval.
ASSISTANT CASTING DIRECTOR
NEXT!
Still focused on them, we hear the door that opens and
closes, footsteps...
The two men look up:
A beat where their faces are frozen, as if something took
their breath away... and the camera slowly pulls back to
reveal...
AN ASS, frozen in the same sexy sway, hand on her hip and
wearing the same FLASHY PINK LEOTARD as the mannequin in the
store window... except this time it’s a human ass.
NewElisabeth’s perfectly formed ass.
CASTING DIRECTOR
Looks like everything sure is in
the right place this time...
ASSISTANT CASTING DIRECTOR
Please say your
name/age/measurements
NewElisabeth is caught by surprise. Her mind goes blank.
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...sc 35
ASSISTANT CASTING DIRECTOR (CONT’D)
(a little louder)
Name??
The camera travels up her long legs...
NEW-ELISABETH (O.S.)
I’m...
...spirals around her slender waist and keeps traveling along
the arch of her back...
CLOSE-UP ON THE ROUND, BLACK LENS OF THE SMALL DV CAMERA that
is staring right at her like a compound eye...
NEW-ELISABETH (O.S.) (CONT’D)
I’m...
(The little red dot flashes...)
...and the camera arrives on her face, her eyes sparkling as
she looks straight into the camera and says:
36 SUE 36
BACK TO THE DV IMAGE THAT FREEZES PAUSED ON SUE’S FACE
Something instantly happens on screen.
She has an incredible presence.
ZZZZZZZZZZ THE HANDICAM IMAGE REWINDS and PLAYS again in a
tighter shot on her magnetic face that pierces the screen.
SUE
I’m... SUE.
ZZZZZZZZZZ THE IMAGE REWINDS AGAIN AND GOES EVEN MORE TIGHT
ON HER SPARKLING EYES.
SUE (CONT’D)
...SUE.
ZZZZZZZZZZZ THE IMAGE REWINDS AND PLAYS EVEN CLOSER ON HER
LUSCIOUS, CURVED LIPS.
WHICH REPEAT - WITHOUT ANY SOUND THIS TIME
SUE (MUTE) (CONT’D)
...SUE...SUE...SUE...
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...sc 37
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Scene 15 - The Offer
The shot widens and we discover that we are now in a large
office where the CLOSE-UP IMAGE OF SUE’S LIPS is multiplied
on a wall of screens.
Sue is standing in the middle of the room while we hear a
thundering voice from afar:
HARVEY (O.S.)
WHERE IS SHE ??... WHERE IS SHE ??!
Harvey charges into the room, followed by THREE YOUNG MEN IN
SUITS, and stops dead in his tracks... his eyes bright...
ecstatic as if in front of a mystical revelation:
HARVEY (CONT’D)
WHAT...
He takes her hand and makes her spin slowly like a small
figurine.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
...A GORGEOUS...
Makes her sit facing his desk.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
...LITTLE ANGEL.
He flops into his huge leather armchair behind his desk.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Why on earth did nobody tell me
earlier about your existence? A lot
of people are going to get fired
for that believe me...
Sue, laughing flirtatiously... cheerfully soaks up the
compliments, savoring all this new flattering attention
surrounding her.
Harvey lights a cigarette. EXTREME CLOSE-UP on the flame
which sets the tobacco ablaze like a furnace.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
I’ll be brief.
He snaps his Zippo lighter shut - CLING!
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Primo: you’re hired.
A puff of smoke exhaled from his mouth.
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...sc 37
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Segundo: we want something in your
image: BEAUTIFUL and HAPPY. People
want to be happy.
The embers of his cigarette light up again.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Tertio : We’re airing in two weeks.
So let’s get to work. I’ll let you
organize everything else with my
assistant....
(he snaps his fingers
several times, as if
trying to remember her
name)
...
A voice echoes off screen.
FEMALE VOICE (O.S.)
Isabella.
The camera pans quickly towards ISABELLA (25/30) who is
totally silent...then quickly pans back towards Harvey
HARVEY
(frowning, as if suddenly
disturbed)
...?......? Huh? I don’t have time
for that! Let’s make it Cindy. It’s
shorter. Better. I’ll let you
organize everything else with
Cindy.
As he’s about to get up, Sue holds him back with a gesture.
SUE
Oh... before you go...
HARVEY
Yes princess?
SUE
I just have to mention... a small
scheduling issue.
Harvey's eyes change slightly...
SUE (CONT’D)
I will need to be out of town every
other week...
(a beat)
...to take care of my mother who’s
very sick.
Harvey looks at her fixedly:
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...sc 37
HARVEY
Listen to me very carefully ‘cause
I don’t think you’ve heard me.
He comes over right next to her face, speaking very slowly:
HARVEY (CONT’D)
I WANT YOU for this show. So we’ll
organize around whatever mother,
brother, fucking sick dog or rabbit
you need to take care of.
He stands and stares at her, his eyes sparkling.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Gorgeous and with a pure heart.
People are gonna LOVE that!
He crushes his cigarette out in the big crystal ashtray.
HISSSSSSS
MONTAGE SEQUENCE BEGINS to RUNAROUND SUE by Dion blasting at
top volume:
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Scene 16 - Embracing Transformation
SUE FROM BEHIND WALKING DOWN THE STREET - there is a full
assurance in her swaying gait, she exudes a newfound
confidence. Heads turn outright as she passes by.
39A INT. FRIDGE/KITCHEN - DAY 39A
VIEW FROM INSIDE THE FRIDGE - the door opens revealing the
puncture syringe and five vials - Sue’s hand grabs it.
39B INT. BATHROOM 39B
SUE’S HANDS UNCLIP A NEW VIAL from the syringe barrel and
SWIK! She gives herself an intramuscular injection in the
thigh.
CLACK the empty vial falls into the trash can where there are
now 4 other empty vials.
40 INT. LIVING ROOM 40
SUE’S HAND SIGNING “Elisabeth” on a note where we can read:
Had to go abroad unexpectedly... this will cover the rest of
the year... thank you for everything...”. Sitting at the
kitchen table, Sue puts the note and cash in an envelope on
which she writes: MARIA
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...sc 41A
41A INT. WALK-IN CLOSET - DAY 41A
POV FROM INSIDE A WALK-IN CLOSET/SHLACK! ELISABETH’S WHOLE
WARDROBE IS PUSHED TO EITHER SIDE OF THE CLOSET IN ONE SHARP
GESTURE, revealing Sue in the middle, who hangs up her new,
brightly colored clothing.
41B INT. BEDROOM. DAY 41B
SUE’S MANICURED HAND unwraps a new phone. She chooses LOUIS
PRIMA - When you’re smiling - for the ringtone, and puts the
PINK telephone down next to Elisabeth’s GOLD phone.
42 INT. APARTMENT CORRIDOR / LANDING. DAY 42
POV THROUGH THE PEEPHOLE looking out the front door: MARIA
reads the note and looks at the cash in the envelope.
SUE’S MANICURED FINGER lets the peephole cover fall back
down. SHLICK.
43 INT. BEDROOM. DAY 43
A BEDSHEET MADE OF POWDER PINK SATIN, flies above the bed,
replacing the previous white cotton sheet. The shimmering
fabric slowly falls back down towards the camera as Sue lets
herself fall back against the powder pink satin which looks
like the inside of a jewelry box.
TOP SHOT which tracks up Sue’s feet... legs... belly... in
OVERLAY THE GRADATIONS MARKED ON THE I.V BAG, which is slowly
emptying... while the music progressively fades until it is
no longer heard.
CUT TO:
44 INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 44
An ORANGE AND GOLDEN DRAGON BREATHES OUT a gigantic flame.
The frame widens and we discover it’s an embroidery on the
back of a silk dressing gown worn by Sue; we see her from
behind, facing the picture window looking at the city’s
lights.
In the middle of the room plunged in darkness, the dragon
seems to be glowing as if symbolizing her newfound strength
and soaring ascent.
A slight tinnitus starts buzzing in her ears...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 39 -
...sc 45
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Scene 17 - The Sacrifice
On the floor, the last drops of liquid are sucked from the
matrix’s perfusion bag.
On the bathroom cabinet shelf, the syringe’s
compartmentalized barrel is now empty, the seven vials have
been used.
Sue looks at herself in the mirror.
It’s time...
She takes the pipe marked SWITCH and looks at the card that
reads:
YOU SWITCH
every seven day no matter what
She takes off her bathrobe and kneels next to Elisabeth.
She looks at her for a while... She unclips the empty IV bag
from the intravenous tubing... clips on the end of the small
pipe instead... and sticks the needle at the other end of the
pipe into her own arm.
She’s a little nervous...
She waits... lightly twists and turns the needle inside her
arm... After a short moment, blood starts to run through the
transparent nozzle on one side, and then the other; blood
starts to circulate between the two bodies.
Little by little, her vision blurs. As if life were leaving
her body. As if she could feel the cold void of emptiness
invade and overwhelm her. As if the world were losing its
colors. And life its very spark.
All of a sudden, everything starts to distort HORRIBLY, her
vision blurs, a HIGH-PITCHED buzzing noise blasts her
eardrums and...
SMACK! THE TWO BLU TACK BALLS SLAMMED ONE AGAINST THE OTHER
WHAM! She collapses head first.
BLACK
46 MOTORCYCLE IMAGERY 46
A beat of silence over a black screen.
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...sc 46
Then THE BLACK STARTS SHAKING, BECOMING A DIRTY GRAINY AND
UNSTABLE IMAGE - where a tiny dot starts quivering in the far
background at the center of the screen while a very weak beat
starts echoing: Ba boom……ba boom……ba boom…
The small dot grows bigger and bigger... until it takes the
shape of a ghostly motorcycle, like a photographic negative,
which hurtles straight towards the camera lens... the only
audible sound is the heartbeat, growing louder... Ba boom...
ba boom... ba boom... the motorcycle hurtles DIRECTLY AT THE
CAMERA at full speed BaBoommBaBoom AND IS ON THE
VERGE OF EXPLODING AGAINST THE SCREE...
47 INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT 47
... and AHAAAAAAAAA! ELISABETH WAKES UP with a start, in her
old body, lying on the bathroom floor!
She starts coughing uncontrollably. Like a fish straight out
of the water whose gills have difficulty functioning.
Sue’s lifeless body has collapsed right on top of her, which
prevents Elisabeth from breathing. She tries several times
before finally being able to make her roll over. Elisabeth
stays in place for a moment, trying to catch her breath.
She removes the small pipe from her arm and gets up with
difficulty.
She staggers abruptly as if her muscles were weakened. She
regains her balance at the very last moment and leans against
the sink.
She looks at her reflection in the mirror. She looks like a
trainwreck. Her mouth is sticky and dry. Her eyelashes are
stuck together. She rubs her painful knee and just stands
there for a moment, head hanging down.
She twists and turns to look at the scar on her back. The
stitches outline a long gash going down her spinal column
from her neck all the way to her tailbone.
She puts on her bathrobe. Tightens the belt around her waist.
She's freezing. As if she were awakening from a heroin shot.
She looks down at Sue's body on the floor.
So young.
So perfect.
It's the first time that she sees her – that she sees
HERSELF... from the outside.
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...sc 47
She takes the second IV bag (FOOD / OTHER SELF) from the
small bathroom cabinet and sticks it into Sue’s arm.
She heads out towards the corridor.
CUT TO:
48 INT. KITCHEN - NIGHT 48
SIZZZZZZZZZZZZ - TWO raw eggs plopped into a frying pan.
Elisabeth makes something to eat. She’s super hungry.
The hot oil in the pan makes a deafening sound.
The two egg yolks sizzling next to one another feel like a
strange reminder.
The silent apartment is plunged in darkness.
FROM THE LONG DARK HALLWAY with the doorframe at the very end
leading to the bathroom - we see Sue’s body lying inertly on
the tile floor.
IN THE KITCHEN - Elisabeth eats avidly as if to restore an
energy balance.
Long silence. Only the small humming noise from the fridge.
In comparison to the energy she had before when she was Sue,
everything now seems very silent and surrounded by a sluggish
cloud.
BLACK
FADE IN:
49 INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 49
THE STILL LIVING ROOM BATHED IN SUNLIGHT, with the big poster
of Elisabeth in her blue leotard and imperturbable smile.
50 INT. SHOWER - DAY 50
HISSSSSSSSSSSSS THE POWERFUL JET OF WATER STREAMING DOWN THE
LARGE STITCHES like thorns along Elisabeth’s spinal column.
51 INT. KITCHEN - DAY 51
Elisabeth in her bathrobe at the kitchen table sifts through
the mail where she finds a new white envelope.
She opens it and takes out a big white note card on which is
written:
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...sc 51
We hope you are enjoying your experience with
THE SUBSTANCE
Your two week refill kit has been delivered
to your deposit box
CUT TO:
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Scene 18 - Scars of Departure
Facing the bathroom mirror, Elisabeth twists and turns to
look at the stitches on her back:
The scar tissue has healed. She picks up the surgical pliers
and starts to extract the sutures (slightly painful and
uncomfortable). She twists with difficulty and tries to grab
the stitches one by one.
In the white sink, the black thread looks like spider legs.
She gathers it all, and throws the threads in the trash can.
She puts scarring cream on the long pink scar.
A phone starts ringing. We follow Elisabeth as she walks
towards the bedroom.
53 INT. BEDROOM - DAY 53
A short beat as she sees the name of the person calling on
the phone: HARVEY. She sits down on the bed and picks up the
phone taking on a confident voice.
ELISABETH
Hel...
HARVEY (V.O.)
I need you to come back.
Elisabeth straightens slightly all of a sudden. A fleeting
glow appears in her eyes.
HARVEY (V.O.)
To empty your office. Whenever you
want, no rush. This afternoon?
(without waiting for her
to answer)
Great, See you then!
He hangs up.
A beat on Elisabeth who remains seated on the bed, the big,
pink scar covering her back.
54 OMITTED 54
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 43 -
...sc 55
55 EXT. STREET (ELISABETH AREA) - DAY 55
Clack clack clack The sound of heels clicking on the
pavement.
We follow Elisabeth from behind as she walks, wearing her
mustard yellow coat.
She pulls up her coat collar several times to make sure the
scar isn’t visible.
Everything seems more aggressive. The noise of the cars
higher pitched. People are even more in a hurry.
No one turns around as she walks by.
Lost in her thoughts.
56A EXT. STUDIO LOT - DAY 56A
Establishing shot.
56B OMITTED 56B
57 INT. STUDIO / BACKSTAGE CORRIDOR - DAY 57
Close up on Elisabeth staring fixedly at something off
screen.
From the reverse angle we see it’s the long backstage.
All her photos which once hung like trophies have since been
taken down.
A beat on the long corridor, which now seems stark naked.
Harvey appears at the other end, striding towards her,
carrying a big cardboard box in his hands.
HARVEY
Aaaaahh, there's she is!!! Where
have you been??! We wanted to all
have a drink for your departure -
something big to mark the occasion.
He dumps the box into her arms.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Anyway, I’ve gathered everything
for you, to save time. And we all
chipped in...
(proudly taking a wrapped
gift out of the box)
...we bought you just a little
something to keep you busy...
(MORE)
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 44 -
...sc 57
HARVEY (CONT’D)
You’ll open it at home. It’s
French. My wife swears by it!
(looking at his watch)
Oops! I’ve got to run! But come and
visit whenever you like! We’ll
always be happy to see you!
His excess of enthusiasm stresses the fact that he wants to
get rid of her as soon as possible.
And before she even has time to answer, he has already left
and disappeared down the hallway.
Elisabeth finds herself standing silently alone on the grey
rug that runs down the middle of the empty corridor.
Glug glug glug...
The water fountain right behind her gurgles... as if to
stress how pathetic the whole situation really is...
58A EXT. STREET (STUDIO AREA) - DAY 58A
Elisabeth walking with a slightly more stressed step.
58B EXT. STREET (LESS NICE STREET) - DAY 58B
Elisabeth, still walking, her surroundings are a lot less
pleasant.
58C OMITTED 58C
58D INT. DEPOSIT CORRIDOR - DAY 58D
Elisabeth goes down the long narrow corridor
59 INT. DEPOSIT LOBBY - DAY 59
She waves her card over box 503, BEEP.
60 INT. BATHROOM - DAY 60
Sue’s figure lying still on the tile in the darkness.
After a moment, Elisabeth walks into the bathroom and
switches on the light.
She steps over Sue and puts a new small cardboard box on the
sink. She opens it to find: two new IV bags and seven new
empty vials clipped together.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 45 -
...sc 60
She puts them away in the bathroom cabinet and closes the
mirrored door where she sees her reflection staring back at
her.
She looks at Sue lying on the floor.
And the IV bag indicating that there are still 4 more days to
go...
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Scene 19 - Shifting Identities
Elisabeth sits at the kitchen table crossing out days on a
monthly calendar in black.
She crosses out seven days in a row... then writes “SUE” in
each of the next seven days... then the same thing again
until she has covered the entire month.
She leans the calendar up against the wall, pensive.
She lightly taps the end of the pen against the table, bored.
She turns on the radio:
...at discount prices! It’s fish of the sea month at
COSTCO! SUPER COLOSSAL ALASKAN RED KING CRAB LEGS are
only $12.99 a pound, so come on down and reel in your
catch! HEY BUT WHO’S THIS?! WHO’S WHAT? WHO’S ON TOP
OF THIS? THE ASSURAN-
She switches off the exasperating commercials with a flick.
She remains seated in her chair for a moment.
Then she gets up and walks into the living room. She
disappears from the frame and after a little while we see the
TV turn on in the background.
Staying with the wide shot, the TV in the background,
spitting out its programs.
BLACK
The sound of a TV show in the distance slowly gets louder.
62 INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT 62
GROUND VIEW OF THE BATHROOM TILES - The door opens and a beam
of light comes through, shining on Sue lying on the floor.
We can see Elisabeth's feet and the hem of the white bathrobe
standing still in the foreground.
The I.V bag indicates two more notches.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 46 -
...sc 62
Two more days to get through...
Elisabeth’s feet leave the frame and the door closes again.
BLACK
The sound of the TV dies down...
...comes back on with a new show... and dies down again...
Then rhythmic music, soft and muffled at first, slowly grows
louder in the distance...
The volume increases, louder and louder ...
63 INT. KITCHEN / LIVING ROOM - DAY 63
...AND BURSTS FULL BLAST as a door opens letting the light...
into the fridge.
We realize that our POV IS FROM INSIDE THE REFRIGERATOR,
while now it’s SUE in underwear and a small tank top who
bends over to put away the compartmentalized syringe filled
with spinal liquid for the next seven days, the music
blasting behind her in the apartment.
She grabs a soda can.
CLOSE UP ON HER MANICURED HAND AND RED NAIL POLISH, pulling
off the can tab KSHHHHH...
HER FLAT, MUSCULAR BELLY as she thrusts her hip to close the
fridge door.
We follow Sue, stretching and drinking, swaying in rhythm to
the music and enjoying the sensations of being in her new
body.
While the time she spent as Elisabeth felt dull and
pointless, now it’s as though a bundle of irrepressible
energy has taken over the apartment.
Sue walks into the living room and sees that the TV is still
switched on. Her gaze falls upon the large armchair facing
the TV with a slight concave impression in the cushion...
A barely perceptible scolding look flashes across her face.
She grabs the remote control, turns off the TV, and glances
at the framed photo of Elisabeth on the wall as if
reprimanding her - Tsk, tsk.
She heads for the bathroom.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 47 -
...sc 64
64 INT. BATHROOM - DAY 64
She leans against the doorframe and looks down at Elisabeth’s
slumped body on the tiles.
A long moment as she looks down at the limp matrix, sprawled
on the ground like a rag doll.
CRRRRRUNCH - she crushes the can in one sharp gesture and
starts looking around, as if searching for something.
She knocks on various walls in the apartment: Tap tap tap
listening to the echo inside... Tap tap tap...
65A INT. BEDROOM - DAY 65A
...inside the bedroom: tap tap tap
65B INT. WALK-IN CLOSET - DAY 65B
She opens the walk-in closet.
Pushes the clothes aside. Knocks against the wall.
Tock tock tock...
It sounds hollow.
66 INT. BATHROOM - DAY 66
She goes into the bathroom, taps on the other side of the
wall.
Tock tock tock... Hollow too. There’s a hollow space between
the walk-in closet and the bathroom.
She remains still for a moment, staring at the wall, pensive.
BLACK
67 INT. SECRET ROOM IN CONSTRUCTION - DAY 67
BOOM!
The sound of a blow like a large sledgehammer in the
darkness. The blow makes the frame shake, and a trickle of
dust falls from above.
CUT TO:
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 48 -
...sc 68
68 INT. CASTING ROOM / DANCE STUDIO - DAY 68
BAM! GROUND-LEVEL VIEW of a dance studio rehearsal: a pair of
legs lands in the frame on the wooden floor doing a split,
followed by a dozen other pairs of legs doing the same thing.
CUT TO:
69 INT. SECRET ROOM IN CONSTRUCTION - DAY 69
BOOM! The sledgehammer hits the wall again, sprinkling
plaster around and letting a beam of light pierce through the
wall. In the hole that has appeared, we see Sue’s face,
wearing a dust mask and safety goggles.
CUT TO:
70 INT. CASTING ROOM / DANCE STUDIO - DAY 70
CLAP! CLAP! CLAP! Hands clapping together in rhythm. Sue, in
the foreground of the dance studio, leads the dancers who are
wearing comfortable workout outfits.
CUT TO:
71 INT. SECRET ROOM / BATHROOM - DAY 71
BAM! BAM! BAM! The hole widens as Sue keeps hitting the
bathroom wall with the sledgehammer, revealing a dark cavity
behind it; big clouds of dust fly into the bathroom.
72 INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 72
The matrix is lying in stasis in the middle of the living
room, sheltered from the construction work.
She lies motionless under her large framed poster while the
blows from the sledgehammer blare off screen.
CUT TO:
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Scene 20 - Awkward Introductions
PROFILE of Sue’s face in a photo studio.
SUE ON THE RIGHT! She turns her head towards the camera.
THE BLACK EYE OF A LARGE CAMERA
FLASH!
CUT TO:
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 49 -
...sc 74
74 INT. BATHROOM - EVENING 74
CRRRRRRRRR the crackling and dazzling light of a blowtorch
welding elements in the wall cavity.
CUT TO:
75A INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 75A
POV SHOT FROM INSIDE A CARDBOARD BOX - Elisabeth’s award
statues, knickknacks, and photo frames are stored bit by bit
by Sue, who then closes the flaps of the cardboard box: BLACK
CUT TO:
75B DTTTTTTT the needle of a sewing machine runs up a shiny 75B
fabric at full speed.
CUT TO:
76 INT. BATHROOM - DAY 76
BZZZZZZZZ A drill screws wall plugs into a wall.
BAM BAM BAM! BAM BAM BAM!
The drilling stops, and we hear someone banging on the front
door.
77A INT. LIVING ROOM / HALLWAY - DAY 77A
Sue appears and opens it, finding herself face to face with
her NEXT DOOR NEIGHBOR (old bachelor in his forties) who
yells at her immediately:
NEIGHBOR
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO STOP THIS
NOIS...
(seeing her)
Oh... I thought it was Ms. Spar...
SUE
(standing in her
doorframe, devastating
smile)
She moved out.
A beat where he stares at her, flustered.
SUE (CONT’D)
I’m the new tenant.
(she stretches her hand
out)
Sue.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 50 -
...sc 77A
He stands there stupidly. Then, as if snapping back to
reality, he wipes his sweaty palm against his pants and
stretches it out to her, trying not to appear overly excited.
NEIGHBOR
(stuttering)
Ovl...Olivr...Ovlir...
SUE
You wanted to complain about
something Oliver?
A long pregnant pause. And then, as if reconnecting his brain
to his mouth:
NEIGHBOR
Oh no! No no... absolutely not...
it’s euh... great to have stuff
going on in the building... I’m
quite handy, if I could help with
my tools... I have a big hammer and
euh... I mean you know... Anyway! I
live right next door, you know
where to find me...
(gesturing to appear
“cool”)
...anytime...Day or...night.
He suddenly turns around and goes away, closing his apartment
door behind him, completely at a loss.
Sue closes her door laughing to herself...
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Scene 21 - Rivalry in Shadows
...we follow her, swaying as she walks back down the hallway.
Entering the living room, we discover through the picture
window that a PUBLICITY BILLBOARD WITH A HUGE PHOTO OF HER
has been set up outside.
She’s sporting a sexy pose in her flashy pink leotard with a
wide smile and a hand on her hip:
NEW SHOW
coming soon
Sue walks towards the matrix lying in stasis on the floor,
props the I.V bag up on her belly, grabs her by both arms...
.. And slowly drags her down the hallway.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 51 -
...sc 77B
77C Inside the empty living room, Elisabeth’s large framed poster 77C
still hanging on the wall is now facing Sue’s publicity
billboard in a bizarre face off.
Almost as if the two versions of herself were staring at each
other like a static paper version of a cowboy standoff...
ELISABETH’S GLOWING EYES...
FACING SUE’S SPARKLING EYES...
78 INT. HALLWAY - DAY 78
Sue drags the matrix along the corridor. She noticeably
handles her with a little less consideration.
The matrix’s hip knocks against the corner of a piece of
furniture and one of her arms grips onto something which
slows her down. We can sense Sue can’t wait to get this over
with.
79A INT. BATHROOM - DAY 79A
She reaches the bathroom, opens the door to the secret
room...
79B INT. SECRET ROOM - DAY 79B
...and drags the matrix to a dark and somber secret room
created in the empty space behind the bathroom wall, which we
now discover finished.
The new secret wall slides perfectly into the real one,
invisible to outside eyes.
Only a small, almost imperceptible air vent allows the air to
circulate. Otherwise, the room is dark, cavernous and
completely pitch black inside.
80 INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 80
IN THE LIVING ROOM the face off continues in increasingly
tighter shots between Elisabeth and Sue’s pictures.
SUE’S SUPER PEARLY WHITE SMILE...
FACING ELISABETH’S LARGE SMIL... which swivels all of a
sudden and disappears out of the frame, leaving just the
plain white wall.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 52 -
...sc 81
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Scene 22 - From Shadows to Spotlight
Sue stores the large framed poster she took down next to
Elisabeth inside the little secret room.
A moment with Sue staring at the matrix lying on the ground,
before she starts to close the heavy secret wall.
We see the beam of light that slowly fades on the matrix’s
still body lying on the ground...
The beam fades... and fades...
...and then TOTAL DARKNESS sweeps over her in a deep,
guttural sound.
BLACK.
A long moment of silence.
Then, a humming noise that slowly grows louder...
Much like a roaring sound...
Getting louder and louder...
82 INT. TV STUDIO / SUE’S SHOW “PUMP IT UP” - DAY 82
...As a big spotlight turns on and throws its full beam on:
AN ASS, molded inside a flashy pink leotard (the famous pose
with the hand on the hip).
CUT TO:
A second ass, molded inside a blue leotard.
CUT TO:
A third ass in a yellow leotard.
The camera’s huge eye.
The small red recording dot.
We follow FEET walking ahead in rhythm... past a pink,
curved, glossy material, which we soon discover to be huge
letter balloons through which we pull back to reveal a series
of pink letters spelling out the title of the new show:
PUMP IT UP
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 53 -
...sc 82
With Sue
The shot continues to pull back revealing THE DANCERS
surrounding Sue.
SUE
Hi everybody! I’m Sue and it’s time
to PUMP IT UP! So here we go!
Her leg flies up in the air as the music starts, blasting
away at full volume.
Asses start to sway in rhythm to the dynamic and bewitching
music.
We track past the asses moving to the beat. To the left. To
the right. Heads bend upside down revealing blondes,
brunettes and redheads with long, abundant hair.
Thin WAISTS and PELVISES sway suggestively.
SUPER HIGH CUT flashy leotards, reveal perfectly waxed groins
underneath.
Firm and BOUNCY BOSOMS compressed inside the lycra.
A concentrate of energy and sexy girls swaying in rhythm with
provocative smiles inside the flashy and modernized scenery.
Everything now is younger, sexier and more dynamic.
Nothing in comparison with Elisabeth’s outdated show.
Sue’s face, enjoying the change in atmosphere.
It was clearly time for a makeover.
In the center of the action, she’s magnetically beautiful.
She lets herself bask in the spotlight as she tightens her
abs in rhythm.
Once.
Twice.
Ten times.
Thirty times.
Her gaze pierces the screen.
And every single pair of eyes is on her.
The cameramen.
The assistants.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 54 -
...sc 82
Her face MULTIPLIED on the control room screens.
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Scene 23 - Sue's Bold Choice
On the wall of screens in Harvey’s office.
84 INT. TV STUDIO / SUE’S SHOW “PUMP IT UP” - DAY 84
The group moves in rhythm, a constant crescendo, until the
music ends and in a final motion which freezes the group,
perfectly synched...
SUE
WOO!! THANK YOU EVERYBODY!
Sue’s chest rises up and down...
She’s covered in sweat and out of breath, but this time it's
because of the galvanizing effort she's just made with a body
full of hormones and adrenaline.
SUE (CONT’D)
I’ll see you all next week!
She is about to go but then suddenly she turns back to the
camera as if she’s forgotten something:
SUE (CONT’D)
Oh!
(eyes sparkling)
And in the mean time...
She winks and blows a kiss to the camera.
SUE (CONT’D)
... take care of yourself.
The lights switch off.
Silence returns on set.
A suspended beat, as if the air needed to cope with all the
sexual and bodily energy that has been stirred.
A voice echoes from the control room:
And that’s a wrap!
Everybody is suddenly bursting with happiness. WOOHOOHOO!!!
They hug each other, lie down or bend over to catch their
breath, in great relaxation and relief.
A thunderous and ecstatic voice rings out:
HARVEY (O.S.)
Where is she?? Where is she??
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 55 -
...sc 84
And Harvey charges in, opening his arms wide, grandiose,
singing her praises.
An assistant brings Sue a towel and a little bottle of water.
85 INT. TV STUDIO BACKSTAGE CORRIDOR - DAY 85
Sue steps into the backstage corridor with glistening eyes,
stops to drink her little bottle of water as she walks past a
big framed poster hanging on the wall advertising her new
show:
PUMP IT UP
with Sue
The first of many to come...
Eyes glistening, she sets off again....
CUT TO:
86 INT/EXT. TV STUDIO EXIT DOOR / STUDIO LOT ALLEY - DAY 86
SLAM! The building’s door opens out onto brilliant SUNLIGHT,
a BLUE SKY AND PALM TREES reflected in Sue’s sunglasses. Sue
comes out of the building wearing her varsity jacket and
sports bag over her shoulder. She walks towards the exit.
A voice echoes out from behind:
MAN'S VOICE (O.S.)
I’d be the happiest man on earth if
I had the chance to work with you..
Sue’s face freezes... as if challenged by this voice which
sounds familiar to her... she slowly turns and finds herself
facing... CRAIG. With a huge smile etched on his jaw, he
proudly stretches out a hand to her.
CRAIG
I’m Craig Silver, from Craig Silver
management.
(he hands her his card)
...You have so much potential, we
could make great things happen
together.
A different voice calls out as ANOTHER GUY steps into frame.
ALAN
And I’m Alan Weil from WEIL & CLARK
MANAGEMENT.
(he also hands her his
card)
(MORE)
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 56 -
...sc 86
ALAN (CONT’D)
WE’LL bring you all the way to the
top!
Then a THIRD ONE...
BOB
Bob HASWELL from H&H MANAGEMENT
(agency name TBC)
(new card)
How come you’ve never been on our
radar? We’d be the perfect reps for
you!
Sue looks at the three men who each hold out their card to
her... She ends up smiling at Craig... and takes his card.
Craig’s victorious smile... yes!... which immediately turns
into his jaw dropping when Sue tears his card into small
pieces before stuffing them into his shirt pocket and tapping
on it... She then arbitrarily chooses one of the other
business cards.
SUE
Nice to meet you....
(looking at the card)
...Alan!
She immediately turns her back on the three men, walking away
with a contented smile on her face.
BLACK
FADE IN:
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Scene 24 - Transformation and Tension
POV FROM INSIDE A BIG RECTANGULAR BOX whose cover is being
removed. Sue’s face is looking inside it with sparkling eyes.
It’s a leather catsuit that she slowly takes out from a big
white rectangular box lying on the bed.
HER LOVELY FOOT WITH POLISHED TOENAILS slides inside the
black and supple leather.
We film up her entire leg, the camera turns around her thigh
and does an EXTREME CLOSE UP on the black and shiny material
as she slips on the ultra tight suit, as if we are an
integral part of the leather – as if the leather was becoming
one with the body, allowing the body to express its full
physical potential.
She slowly closes the zipper... the two swaths of leather
uniting, swallowing up her spinal column in the aerodynamic
casing.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 57 -
...sc 87
She throws her blond mane of hair cascading down between her
shoulder blades; we follow down the length of her flowing
locks... then down her buttocks and leg, all the way to her
black stiletto heels which start walking across the white
carpet...
...then across the hardwood floor in the hallway...
... arriving on the tiled bathroom floor...
... and finally end their journey on the secret room’s bare
cement floor.
The high heels stand next to Elisabeth’s IV bag that is
almost empty. Just a few hours until it is time to switch.
88A INT. BATHROOM / SECRET ROOM - END OF DAY 88A
Sue looks at herself in the mirror, then we see IN EXTREME
CLOSE UP the stick of bright red lipstick coloring her plump
lips...
Her eyes glow from an inner fire...
An increasingly unbounded sensuality. Engulfing...
We hear horns honking outside...
Sue looks at herself for a moment in the mirror...
88B INT. SECRET ROOM - EVENING 88B
...then crouches down next to the matrix.
SUE
...I’m not coming back late... so
you just wait for me...
(she tries to spread out
the remaining food inside
the bag)
Don’t eat too fast...
She closes the heavy door and now the only thing visible is
the little square of light from the air duct, through which
we can see the high heels gradually walking away across the
bathroom tiles... then we hear the clack of the light switch,
which leaves us in DARKNESS
CUT TO:
89A EXT. STREET (ELISABETH BUILDING) - NIGHT 89A
Ground level on a tarmac road, close-up on a SMOKY EXHAUST
PIPE and THE BRIGHT RED TAIL LIGHT OF A CONVERTIBLE CAR.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 58 -
...sc 89A
The camera jibs up and reveals Sue getting into a convertible
car filled with male and female dancers who welcome her with
whistles and giggles. The car takes off in peals of laughter
and screams, like a shooting cannonball ready to enjoy the
pleasures of the night.
89B INT. APT / LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 89B
A moment on the silent and still living room.
On the wall, we can make out the outline where the old
picture frame has been taken down.
BLACK
FADE IN:
90 THE STILL LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 90
The living room is still.
The moon ray on the white wall has moved - time has passed...
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Scene 25 - Contrasts of Life and Stasis
Elisabeth's body in stasis lying on the floor, her inert,
empty and glazed eyes, staring into nothingness.
Attached to her arm, the nutrition bag is almost empty. The
yellow liquid is slowly reaching the SWITCH mark.
A very slight muffled echo rings out in the distance.
92A INT. STAIRWELL - NIGHT 92A
Top shot on stairwell.
It's Sue, walking up the stairs of her building, back from
her night out, accompanied by a MAN (25-30), wearing a
leather jacket and carrying a motorbike helmet.
They stop regularly to kiss each other passionately.
They stumble and laugh. We quickly understand that they're
both completely drunk.
92B INT. LANDING - NIGHT 92B
In front of her apartment, he pushes her against the door and
kisses her, grabbing hold of her ass with both hands. The
ultra-tight leather of her catsuit seems to increase the
sensations... Sue is overwhelmed with desire...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 59 -
...sc 92B
She finally frees herself gently from his embrace.
SUE
I have to go...
93 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 93
The last drops are sucked up from the I.V Bag. They go
through the perfusion pipe and up into Elisabeth's arm.
A beat.
We hear the sound of the front door opening and closing.
Footsteps amplifying, which start to run then slow down.
Sounds of chairs moving. Glasses chiming.
A low voice. A high pitched voice. The sound of laughter.
Suddenly, SMASH! The sound of broken glass.
CUT TO
94 INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 94
...A broken glass smashed into pieces at Sue's feet right in
the middle of the living room’s hardwood floor. The lights
are now on and Sue looks up at the man who's holding up a
whiskey bottle in one hand, as if frozen in his gesture...
She looks at him fixedly... before bursting into laughter.
They’re completely hammered.
They let themselves fall back on the sofa.
A slight tinnitus starts buzzing in Sue’s ears, but she
ignores it, sits astride the guy and they start kissing.(we
see the silhouette of them kissing in the mirrored visor of
the motorbike helmet nearby)
The sexual tension soars. The man caresses Sue’s crotch with
his hand, brushing his lips over her neck. His tongue slides
up the silky nape of her neck. Sue’s skin tingles with goose-
bumps aroused by all the new sensations bursting inside her.
95 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 95
A very slight plastic squeaking noise is heard. Crrrriiii...
It's the perfusion bag which is now empty and starting to
shrivel with nothing left to suck up.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 60 -
...sc 96
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Scene 26 - Desperate Choices
They kiss more and more greedily... plip ... a drop of blood
falls on the guy’s white t-shirt...
But Sue decides to ignore it; her eyes glowing more
feverishly every second, she takes off the guy’s t shirt...
Slides her hands down his naked chest...
97 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 97
CRRRRRiiiii The sound of plastic is increasingly high pitched
as the empty perfusion bag crumples up more and more.
98 INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 98
Sue’s hands reach for the man’s trousers... and unbuckle his
belt...
99 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 99
CRRRRRiiiiiiiiii the perfusion bag desperately tries to
suck something in...
100 INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 100
Sue unbuttons his trousers and slips her hand into his boxer
shor...
Plip plip plip plip the drops of blood fall on the man’s
chest at an escalating rhythm...
THE SOUND IS MUFFLED. THE IMAGE FLICKERS as if a black veil
were intermittently being thrown over the screen.
MAN
Are you alright?
Sue feels more and more overwhelmed... She starts hearing
noises from inside her own body... Boom BOOM... Boom BOOM...
her heartbeat accelerates.... BoomBOOMBoomBOOMBoomBOOM...
SUE
Give me a minute...
She gets up and we follow her as she hurries into the hallway
with a staggering step BoomBOOMBoomBOOMBoomBOOM
BoomBOOMBoomBOOMBoomBOOM
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...sc 101
101 INT. BATHROOM / SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 101
She locks herself in the bathroom, and opens the door
communicating with the secret room to discover what she
already knows...
The nutrition bag is empty. It is now only a plastic
compression shrivelled into itself as Elisabeth's body,
increasingly pale, attempts to mechanically suck up what
isn't there...
Sue hunches over the sink as the drops of blood grow more
frequent; her tinnitus blares loudly inside her head, the
pain is unbearable.
She HAS to switch.
FUCK! What shitty timing!
We can sense all her frustration explode, while she looks at
Elisabeth’s lifeless body on the ground.
This body that she has no desire to get back into...
MAN (O.S.)
Are you alright?
Sue looks at herself in the mirror... the camera slowly
tightens on her shining eyes... as if an idea was taking
shape in her mind...
SUE
YES I’LL BE RIGHT BACK!
She opens the small bathroom cabinet and looks at the
puncture needle...
...the second nutrition bag...
Her foot presses down on the pedal of the trash can - CLACK –
revealing the seven small empty vials at the bottom of the
bucket...
She looks down at them for a long moment, her eyes
shining...(she grabs the vial)
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102 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 102
SUE'S MANICURED HAND clips one of the empty vials onto the
puncture syringe...
She flips the matrix onto her side... AND SLOWLY LIFTS UP THE
BANDAGE on her back...
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...sc 102
After a short moment of hesitation during which she looks at
the puncture site, contemplating what she's about to do...
Sue casts aside her last doubts...
... AND SHE SLOWLY PUSHES THE LONG NEEDLE into Elisabeth’s
spinal column...
ELISABETH’S GLAZED EYE STARING INTO SPACE - her pupil
slightly trembles while Sue pulls slowly on the plunger and
the transparent fluid starts to trickle into the syringe...
SUE
Just a few more hours...
Once the vial is half full, Sue unclips it and SWIK! Jabs
herself in the thigh, as she does everyday, when it’s her
week.
HER PUPIL DILATES – She closes her eyes for a few moments, as
her body absorbs the shot... She can hear her heartbeat
slowing down, the ringing in her head abates...
She hurries to plug in the second perfusion bag, which was
normally meant for her, in Elisabeth's arm. A small gurgling
sound... then a bubble rises up inside the pipe... and the
thick liquid starts slowly making its way up the tubing...
Slowly but surely, Elisabeth’s breathing becomes normal
again.
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Scene 27 - Intimacy and Horror
The man opens his eyes and Sue is once again straddling him,
like an apparition, very close to his face.
MAN
Mmmm...
(needing a moment to
reconnect)
...what did you do? You seem even
more beautiful than befor-
She starts kissing him. More and more greedily.
THE MAN PLACES HIS HANDS ON HER THIGHS... kneading the
leather while making their way to her ass...
104 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 104
INSIDE THE DARK ROOM - Elisabeth's limp and heavy thigh lies
still on the cold tiles.
Her foot dangling.
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...sc 104
The second bag of food attached to her arm which slowly
empties...
105 INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 105
CROSS-DISSOLVE ON THE MAN’S HANDS as they work their way up
Sue’s ass to her waist...
106 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 106
IN THE DARK ROOM - The yellowish paste that makes it way up
the IV tube with a small gurgling noise.
107 INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 107
IN THE LIVING ROOM - THE MAN’S HANDS CLOSING AROUND SUE’S
WAIST, SLIDING UP HER BACK... arriving at her neck and slowly
pulling down the zipper of her catsuit.
The zipper slides slowly down Sue’s back...and we see...
...ALL SPEW OUT OF
OF HER INSIDE ORGANS
THE SUIT AS THE ZIPPER GOES DOWN AS
THOUGH IT WERE OPENING SUE’S BODY
IN TWO...
HER ORGANS SPLATTER ON THE FLOOR IN A BLOODY MAGMA-
LIKE MASS:
SPLOTCH!
108 INT. SECRET ROOM - DAY 108
AHAAAAAAAAAAA ... ELISABETH wakes up with a start inside
the secret room. She coughs, spits, clutches her throat... as
though she had been asphyxiated.
Sue’s body is lying next to her in stasis on the other side
of the switch pipe.
It takes a moment for the horrific nightmare to fade as
Elisabeth tries to gather her wits. Ouch... We can tell that
her whole body aches and that she is in a fog.
She looks confused when she discovers... the small empty vial
on the ground next to her... and the second perfusion bag
which has already been emptied half a notch’s worth.
She clips it onto Sue’s arm and she goes into the bathroom.
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...sc 109
109 INT. BATHROOM - DAY 109
She puts her bathrobe on. A glance in the mirror: she looks
dreadful... and she has an enormous hangover. She touches her
back, it’s a bit sore.
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Scene 28 - Aftermath of the Night
She walks down the hallway dragging her feet. It’s day now. A
beat as she discovers... Sue’s clothing strewn on the floor:
her boots... her leather catsuit... her lingerie... They make
a trail down the hallway all the way to the bed, which we see
from afar: unmade, rumpled sheets attesting to a night of
lovemaking.
We can see that Elisabeth is trying to connect with her
memories of the night before... but she doesn’t seem to
remember a thing.
She makes her way to the living room where she discovers the
aftermath of the evening’s festivities: half-empty glasses,
full ashtrays...
She walks towards the picture window - a post-it note is
stuck on it:
Too drunk to take the bike home,
keep an eye on her ;)
TROY (812 674 839!)
Elisabeth reaches out to grab the post-it note AND SHE
IMMEDIATELY RETRACTS HER HAND as if she’d seen something
awful, something frightening...
She slowly lifts her hand into her field of vision...and in
complete shock she sees...
...her finger.
Her index finger is crooked and swollen, deformed with
arthritis... her fingernail is yellow and the skin withered
like an old woman’s finger - while the rest of her hand is
normal.
WHAT THE F...!
111 OMITTED 111
112 INT. BATHROOM - DAY 112
She turns around and hurries into the bathroom, runs the cold
water in the sink and puts her index finger under the faucet.
She scrubs and scrubs her finger, but to no avail, the
deformation is still there.
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...sc 112
She stares at her index finger.
The horribly withered skin.
The protruding and swollen blue veins.
The deformed knuckles.
She closes her eyes, tensing her face...and her expression
hardens as what happened becomes progressively clear to her.
She looks at Sue’s body on the floor.
The stranded empty vial next to her.
She lowers the back of her bathrobe and twists around, trying
to see the reflection of her back in the mirror.
The puncture site is red, slightly swollen... and ouch...
painful to touch.
She closes her eyes a moment, her hand clinging to the sink’s
edge, with this deformed finger that stands out against the
white porcelain.
Fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck...
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Scene 29 - Unraveling Control
Elisabeth sits at the table, on the phone.
The insistent ringing tone...
Bri-ing...Bri-ing..
Through the picture window, Sue’s gigantic billboard staring
right back at her in silence.
Her bright, dazzling smile...
PUMP IT UP
Bri-ing...Bri-ing
Yes?
Elisabeth sits up straighter in her chair when the cavernous
voice answers.
ELISABETH
Yes hi...
She winces a little, her back slightly in pain.
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...sc 113
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
(clearing her throat.)
This is Elisabeth Sparkle.
Silence on the other end of the line.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
...on Beverly drive?
Still nothing.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
...I am uh...
(hesitant)
...503?
Yes.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
Yes... Hi...
An embarrassed pause. She’s gathering her courage as she
stares at her deformed finger.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
Listen... there has been a
slight...
She’s walking on eggshells, carefully choosing her words.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
...misuse... of The Substance...
She nervously rubs her index finger.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
A few extra hours were...
accidentally used...causing...
(a beat)
...an alteration.
Long silence at the other end of the line.
Nothing but the crackling.
Elisabeth wiggles, uneasy in her chair.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
So... what’s the procedure to
reverse it?
A long beat. The line crackles.
What has been used on one side is lost on the other side.
There is no going back.
A beat.
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...sc 113
Elisabeth’s shock and dismay.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
No, but, listen I don’t know what
she was thinking she was drunk
obviousl-
Remember there is no “she” and “you”, you are one.
Elisabeth closes her eyes, tensing her face to try and put
her thoughts in order.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
Right...
A beat.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
But I can’t even remember what
happened during the extra time! So
there should b-
The balance is perfect at seven days.
Respect the balance and you won’t have any more
inconveniences.
A beat. The line goes dead.
Elisabeth doesn’t move for a long moment, as if she were hit
by a ton of bricks.
Then she gets up abruptly and starts automatically cleaning
up after the prior evening’s festivities, so as to try and
channel her emotions.
She empties the glasses and the ashtrays.
Disgusting.
She goes to the picture window, rips off the post-it note.
She crumples the post-it into a ball, which she throws into
the garbage.
She takes the trash bag out of the can and triple knots the
ties.
She throws the motorbike helmet out on the landing.
VIEW FROM INSIDE THE TRASH CAN AS IT OPENS - she throws the
trash bag inside, covering the camera and thus creating
DARKNESS
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...sc 114
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Scene 30 - Fleeting Hopes
It’s night. Elisabeth, in her nightgown, looks at her
reflection in the mirror with a harsh expression, as she
brushes her teeth.
THE GNARLED FINGER ON THE TOOTHBRUSH brushing back and
forth... mixing saliva and toothpaste... brush up... brush
down... up... down. Elisabeth lost in her thoughts...
She gargles, spits and puts the toothbrush back in its glass.
She picks up her night cream in a well-rehearsed ritual.
She puts it on her face, still absorbed in her thoughts as
the white cream penetrates her skin;
She puts the cover back on the jar of cream and is about to
put it back in place on the shelf... when she stops... she
looks at the jar and focuses on the inscription:
ULTIMATE YOUTH
Intensive regenerating night cream
She slowly unscrews the jar top and stares at the glossy
white cream inside...
And then slowly, takes her crooked finger and progressively
dips it into the cream... She sticks her finger all the way
in until it is completely covered.
She waits for a moment... carefully turning her finger in the
white cream... and then slowly removing it; the finger now
entirely covered in glistening white cream as though it was a
poultice covering the skin.
With her other hand she searches through the small cabinet
and takes out a crepe bandage, which she wraps and knots
around the cream-covered finger.
Like a little doll in a cocoon at the end of her hand.
She presses lightly on the doll... which oozes cream.
Good. It’s soaking in.
She looks in the mirror and shuts off the light : BLACK
115 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 115
Elisabeth lying in bed staring at the ceiling.
HER BANDAGED HAND carefully resting palm down on the sheets.
Her figure is entirely still in the darkness.
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...sc 115
Dominated by the palm tree’s black shadow in the night, which
looks like a giant spider.
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116 I/E. BEDROOM / WINDOW PALM TREE - DAY 116
THE GREEN PALM TREE AGAINST THE BRIGHT BLUE SKY
IN THE BEDROOM, the sheets are bathed in sunlight; we can see
the outline of where Elisabeth was lying in the bed, and we
understand that she stayed perfectly still the entire night.
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117 INT. BATHROOM - DAY 117
THE HAND WITH THE BANDAGED FINGER spreads out over the sink.
Elisabeth stays still for a moment, then she starts
unwrapping the bandage... the anxiety in her eyes as she
unrolls slowly revealing her finger...
The dried out cream leaves a type of plaster-like crust
covering the skin.
She turns on the faucet and soaks her finger in the stream of
water to dissolve the white crust.
She delicately wipes her hand with a terry-cloth towel and
stretches her hand out over the sink to see the result...
Nothing has changed.
Her finger is still just as wrinkled and deformed by
arthritis; brownish age spots are scattered on her skin.
Elisabeth’s eyes fill with emotion which she does her best to
channel as she tries to wrap her mind around this excrescence
that is eating away at her hand.
Her hand starts shaking, betraying how upset she really is.
Her last hopes - that she knew were in vain - are swept away
for good.
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118 INT. KITCHEN - DAY 118
THE KITCHEN TABLE IN THE FOREGROUND where a new big white
note card is found:
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...sc 118
We hope you are enjoying your experience with
THE SUBSTANCE
Your two week refill kit has been delivered
to your deposit box
In the background, through the door that leads to the living
room, we see the TV on, but we can’t hear the sound, covered
by a humming noise that grows louder...and louder...
...and Elisabeth is crossing the frame in the background as
she’s pushing the vacuum cleaner from left to right... then
right to left... sweeping back and forth like a small
foosball figurine moving straight in its axis...
CUT TO:
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Scene 31 - Reflections of Loss
Elisabeth, concentrating on her vacuum cleaner sucking up the
carpet as though hunting for the smallest piece of dust would
help her avoid becoming overwhelmed by her thoughts.
She looks up, about to turn around in the opposite direction,
when something catches her attention from afar...
She slows down, approaches carefully, and finally stops...her
eyes engrossed, her pupils darting back and forth... the
vacuum cleaner still humming... until she turns it off and
pulsating music bursts out in its place:
DON’T YOU KNOW PUMP IT UP...
We discover that she is staring at the television screen...
...YOU’VE GOT TO PUMP IT UP...
Where SUE is energetically swaying her hips in her new show.
DON’T YOU KNOW PUMP IT UP...
Elisabeth has a moment of confusion. Befuddled.
YOU’VE GOT TO PUMP IT UP...
A disturbing vision of Sue in the place that used to be hers.
DON’T YOU KNOW PUMP IT UP...YOU’VE GOT TO PUMP IT
UP...
Elisabeth grabs the side of the armchair to balance herself,
slowly sitting down while watching Sue moving on the
screen...
DON’T YOU KNOW PUMP IT UP...
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...sc 119
Her dazzling smile.
Her firm and insolent breasts.
YOU’VE GOT TO PUMP I-
Elisabeth turns the sound off, but continues to watch the
show, as if fascinated by the details of Sue's body moving in
rhythm to the ghostly beat of the now muted music.
Her slender thighs.
Her suggestive hip movements...
Her abs tightening in a close up.
Once. Twice. Ten times. Thirty times...
On screen, with beaming and seductive eyes...
SUE
“In the meantime... Take care of
yourself!”
...Sue blows a kiss to the camera, disarming her viewers with
a devastating smile.
A suspended beat... as though the two women exchanged a look
through the screen...
Click Elisabeth switches off the TV.
She remains silent for a moment.
Overwhelmed.
Her gnarled, deformed finger on the TV remote.
Sprawled across the armchair in her bathrobe.
She looks up: behind the turned-off TV, the billboard of SUE
staring back at her through the glass window, smiling with
all her pearly-whites:
PUMP IT UP
It's as if she were cornered from all sides.
BZZZZ
She jumps at the sound of the front door buzzer.
Who the hell is that...
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...sc 119
BZZZZ BZZZZ
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Scene 32 - Silent Isolation
She approaches the door without making any noise.
HER GNARLED FINGER opens the peephole cover, and she looks
through it:
The neighbor.
Fuck. What does he want...
She doesn’t move; doesn’t make any noise.
BZZZZ BZZZZZZ
Go the fuck away, egg head...
BZZZZZZZZZZZ
OLIVER (O.S.)
Sue?
He starts softly scratching the door.
NEIGHBOR (O.S.)
It’s Oliver...
A beat.
NEIGHBOR (O.S.) (CONT’D)
I just saw you on TV... Holy moley
makes me want to join your class!
Do you give private lessons?
A long silence.
NEIGHBOR (O.S.) (CONT’D)
What about a drink at my place
tonight?
Elisabeth stands without moving or making noise, her gnarled
finger on the peephole.
NEIGHBOR (O.S.) (CONT’D)
I can see you standing behind
there... don’t be shy gorgeous!
(a long beat)
I’m into sports too, I can show you
my chess trophies!
A long beat. Elisabeth doesn’t move.
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...sc 120
NEIGHBOR (O.S.) (CONT’D)
Alright, no problem, take your
time... But it’s a date!
We see him finally waddling back inside his apartment,
humming along: don’t you know pump it up...
THE WRINKLED FINGER lets go of the peephole cover. SHLACK!
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121 INT. SHOWER - DAY 121
HISSSSSSSSSSSS THE STREAM OF WATER FROM THE SHOWER HEAD
PUMMELS ELISABETH’S BACK.
Her hand against the wall for support, letting the water flow
down her body, as she stares at the ground, lost in her
thoughts, as if she were trying to regain her footing.
122 INT. APARTMENT / ENTRANCE - DAY 122
Elisabeth finishes slipping her coat on, turns up the collar
and puts on leather gloves to hide her problem finger.
She looks through the peephole. The coast is clear.
123A EXT. STREET (ELISABETH AREA) - DAY 123A
We follow Elisabeth from behind, walking quickly.
123B EXT. STREET (LESS NICE STREET)- DAY 123B
Elisabeth, from behind, who is walking down another street.
Her gait is jittery. Everything seems more harsh and
aggressive.
123C OMITTED 123C
123D INT. DEPOSIT CORRIDOR - DAY 123D
Elisabeth walks down the corridor.
124 INT. DEPOSIT/LOBBY - DAY 124
A wave of her card opens her locker. Beep.
She thinks she hears a slight noise behind her. She turns
around. Scans the lobby. No one.
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...sc 124
She takes out the package and puts it in her bag.
125A EXT. STREET (LESS NICE STREET) - DAY 125A
Elisabeth walking in the opposite direction.
After a while, she has a strange feeling. As if she were
being followed. She turns around... still no one.
She picks up the pace.
125B EXT. STREE (DINER AREA) - DAY 125B
Still from behind Elisabeth’s back as she walks.
Turns around again. Still nothing.
She finally goes into a diner.
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Scene 33 - Unwanted Connections
She sits down in a booth. Moves to another. She’s hot. Takes
off her coat. Starts removing her glove... then decides
against it, readjusting the right glove in particular.
WAITRESS (O.S)
What can I get you?
Startled, she jumps and looks up: a SEXY WAITRESS with a name
tag that reads ALLISON is staring at her, notepad in hand.
ELISABETH
(random)
Uh...a...mocha latte.
The waitress leaves.
A beat: Elisabeth meticulously readjusts her glove.
MAN’S VOICE (O.S.)
It’s long, isn’t it?
Elisabeth turns her head. At the next table is a SWEATY,
OBESE MAN muffled up in a gray coat, staring right at her. He
has a big strawberry birthmark on his face, whose shape is
strangely familiar...
ELISABETH
Excuse me?
MAN
Seven days...
She stares directly at him... nonplussed...
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...sc 126
MAN (CONT’D)
I know what “these weeks” feel
like...
A beat. She is increasingly confused... she looks away from
him pretending she has no idea what he is referring to.
ALLISON (O.S.)
Whipped cream?
The waitress is in front of her again, a can of whipped cream
in hand, her coffee on the table.
ELISABETH
Uh...yes...
PZZZZZZZZZZT
Elisabeth stares at the whipped cream which slowly shrivels
up, melting into the coffee.
She takes a spoonful, as if to comfort herself.
She watches the man from the corner of her eye as he picks up
the menu to order. His wallet, which was on top of the menu,
falls to the ground. As he leans over to pick it up,
Elisabeth glimpses on the nape of his neck... the beginning
of a thick pink scar similar to her own, which disappears
under his shirt collar... He gathers up all the credit cards
that have scattered on the floor: among them is a white
plastic card with 207 on it. He puts it away in his wallet
and sits back up.
A long beat where they stare at each other.
Everything muddles up in Elisabeth's mind...
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
...Did you follow me here?
MAN
I was just curious to see how
things were going for you... And
actually I wouldn’t be against a
little bit of company... It’s just
good to... talk to someone... you
know. Each time you feel a little
more lonely... don’t you think?
A long beat where she stares right at him.
ELISABETH
I don’t know what you’re talking
about. I’m fine, thank you.
Everything is fine.
She turns her back to him and tries to make it look like she
is engrossed in her coffee.
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...sc 126
MAN (O.S.)
It gets harder each time to
remember that you still deserve to
exist...
The whipped cream that shrivels up more and more like a
deflated balloon...
MAN (O.S.) (CONT’D)
...That this part of yourself is
still worth something...
(a beat)
That you still matter...
The melted whipped cream now looks like yellowish puke.
MAN (CONT’D)
(muttering to himself)
He should-
(SMACK! He slaps himself,
almost like a tic)
I should never have given it to
you. But he’s so (SMACK!
Another)...shallow and
superficial!!
Elisabeth’s mind is a jumble of confusion. She searches in
her bag, pays the check with a $10 dollar bill to cut short
and heads for the exit.
MAN (O.S.) (CONT’D)
(loud, towards her)
Has she started yet?
Elisabeth turns around. A beat where they exchange a long
look.
MAN (CONT’D)
...eating away at you?
A suspended moment... staring fixedly into each other’s
eyes... until Elisabeth turns abruptly on her heels and
rushes for the door as fast as she can.
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Scene 34 - Frantic Encounters
Elisabeth returns home with a hurried step...
127B EXT. STREET (ELISABETH BUILDING) - DAY 127B
...looking over her shoulder several times to check that she
hasn’t been followed when- BAM!
She violently slams into someone coming from the opposite
direction. CLANG clang clang... A big biker's helmet falls to
the ground and rolls away.
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...sc 127B
MALE VOICE
Fuck! Watch out!
Elisabeth, dazed and frantic, looks at the leather-clad guy
who picks up his helmet and straightens up facing her: TROY.
She is so very stunned that she stays planted right there,
staring at him.
TROY
WHAT?... You wanna mug shot?!?
Royally pissed, he gets on his motorcycle parked in front of
her building, puts his helmet on and slams the visor shut:
SHLACK! Elisabeth's haggard face is reflected in the mirrored
visor.
He beeps his horn so she’ll get out of the way.
TROY (CONT’D)
HEY! MOVE!
She finally steps to the side and he roars off on his
motorcycle, revving its big engine: VROOOOOOOOOOOOOM
128 INT. APARTMENT / ENTRANCE - DAY 128
Slamming her door shut behind her, Elisabeth leans back
against it for a moment to gather her wits.
She stays for a long while this way, trying to channel all
the thoughts and feelings jostling in her brain...
We can tell that her mind is racing (obsessively).
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129 INT. WALK IN CLOSET - DAY 129
POV FROM INSIDE THE CLOSET - SHLACK Elisabeth abruptly pushes
all of Sue’s clothing aside to reach her belongings at the
very back in stacked-up boxes marked: ELISABETH’S OLD JUNK.
She opens different boxes and finally finds the one she is
looking for: a box filled with her handbags. She shakes the
bags upside down one after the other making the various
forgotten objects fall out... coins, parking tickets, chewing
gum... Ah! She finally finds what she is looking for: the
torn piece of crinkled paper with FRED’S number on it.
Fred’s smiling image appears superimposed:
FRED
You are still the most beautiful
girl in the whole wide world!
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...sc 129
She holds the paper tightly against her chest, as if suddenly
this was the most precious of her possessions.
130 INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 130
Elisabeth starts dialing the number, slightly nervous.
Behind the picture window, her eyes glance inadvertently at
the billboard.
PUMP IT UP
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Scene 35 - A Nervous Connection
Elisabeth has “isolated” herself in the bathroom, sitting on
the closed toilet lid.
She dials the number. We hear the sound of the line ringing
and after a beat someone picks up.
FRED (O.S.)
Hello?
ELISABETH
(forcing a cheerful tone)
Hi Fred, it’s Lizzie!
Silence.
Nothing. She is immediately shaken.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
...Lizzie from tenth grade
homeroom?
Silence again.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
...hello?
FRED
Sorry, I’m in shock... wow wow wow!
This reassures Elisabeth and makes her smile.
FRED (CONT’D)
I thought I would never hear from
you again after sharing my dumb
toothpaste story...
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...sc 131
ELISABETH
Oh no...not at all, it’s just that
I’ve been very... busy lately...
A beat.
FRED
I heard about your show... how are
you dealing? It must have been so
difficult...
ELISABETH
(faking confidence)
Oh no...You know, I kinda provoked
it in a way... I felt like.. I’d
seen and done it all... I needed to
move on.
FRED
Oh... that’s good to hear... so
what are you up to now?
A beat. Elisabeth is still sitting on the toilet lid.
ELISABETH
I... I’m traveling... A lot. It’s
great - there is so much to see!
One day here, the next there...
it’s a tad exhausting, though...
FRED
Oh wow...what an exciting life! I
envy you.
A beat.
ELISABETH
So... I happen to be in town for a
couple of days and... I thought
maybe we could...
(moves her arm in a
gesture of self-
encouragement)
... go out and grab a drink? Or for
a walk, or... you know, the little
things that make life matter.
A beat. Long silence.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
Hello?
FRED
Sorry I’m in shock again.
Another smile. A wider one this time.
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...sc 131
FRED (CONT’D)
Like...to-
ELISABETH
Tonight is perfect!
A beat.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
Oh...did you mean tomorrow?
Clearly.
FRED
Euh...Tonight is fine as well. I
can book Luigi’s at 8?
ELISABETH
8 at Luigi’s it is! See you
tonight!
She hangs up. Her eyes are shining, cheeks are flushed, like
a teenager who has been asked out on her first date.
CUT TO:
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Scene 36 - Reflections of Insecurity
Lots of activity in the apartment. All the boxes have been
taken out - clothing, shoes, accessories are scattered across
the bedroom floor.
CUT TO:
A zipper is pulled up following the pinkish scar on
Elisabeth’s back... the scar disappears as the zipper glides
up a beautiful moiré silk dress.
Elisabeth looks at her back reflected in the bedroom’s tall
mirror. Impossible to see the long scar underneath. Perfect.
From the front, the V-cut neckline flatters her pretty
cleavage.
She slips on long black satin gloves that hide her problem
finger and add a touch of glamour.
Thus prettily dressed, she looks at herself in the mirror...
and is moved by her reflection.
For the first time, in a very long time, she seems to like
herself again.
To once again feel that she’s worth it...
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...sc 133
133 INT. BATHROOM - END OF THE DAY 133
She finishes putting on her make-up and checks the clock. She
grows increasingly nervous as the time to meet her date
approaches.
A last touch of lipstick, and she looks at herself,
satisfied.
She tidies her hair and flashes a smile in the mirror - the
lipstick is becoming to her smile. Good.
Before leaving she goes to close the secret room’s door...
and catches sight of Sue lying on the floor in stasis.
Her healthy complexion...
Her well-defined, plump lips...
Elisabeth turns to the mirror, her expression a little
gloomy...
She suddenly has the impression that her entire face has just
sagged.
But she forces herself to pull it together.
She adds a bit of lipstick, another stroke of blush to make
her cheekbones rosier.
A beat.
More blush.
She forces a smile as she looks at herself.
Good.
Takes a deep breath... And turns off the light.
CUT TO:
134 INT. HALLWAY / LIVING ROOM - EVENING 134
She walks down the hallway, grabs her coat and handbag...
searches for her keys... sees them on the table in the living
room. Walking over to the table she looks up and her eyes
fall upon... the huge billboard outside.
PUMP IT UP
A suspended moment standing face to face with Sue’s gigantic
overly-sexualized body:
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...sc 134
Her perfectly round, perky breasts.
Her luscious lips...
Her gorgeous shiny hair...
CUT TO:
135 INT. BATHROOM - EVENING 135
THE BATHROOM LIGHT TURNS ON - Elisabeth is back in front of
the mirror.
A harsh expression as she contemplates her face: this won’t
do at all.
She pulls up the fabric on her dress to hide her cleavage
which all of a sudden can’t even compare. She throws a wrap
over her shoulders to cover it.
And the lipstick is all wrong. She takes it off and puts on
another.
She adds more blush. Brush strokes to her cheekbones, in an
increasingly aggressive fashion.
She lets her hair down.
No, she puts her hair back up.
Ok.
More blush and a forced smile as she looks in the mirror.
She checks the clock, this time she really needs to get
going.
She takes a deep breath to boost herself...
Good...
And she turns off the light.
BLACK
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Scene 37 - Reflections of Inadequacy
Walking down the hallway, she forces herself not to look in
the living room... but just when she is about to open the
front door...
Her face tenses... she is struggling as she is about to grab
the big, round metal doorknob... where we discover that she
can see her reflection.
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...sc 136
She tries to disregard the distorted hamster face that is
reflected by the metallic sphere.
Behind her the billboard looms... as if she could sense it
even with her back turned: all that fresh collagen, that body
overflowing with perfection...
She tries to stay strong... her eyes shut tight to not see
her reflection as her hand approaches the doorknob...
CUT TO:
137 INT. BATHROOM - EVENING 137
Elisabeth in front of the bathroom mirror; a dour, accusatory
look in her eyes as she looks at her reflection:
Disgusting.
She uses a cotton pad to wipe the lipstick off her face with
a slow and harsh gesture, smearing it onto her cheek like a
bloody gash.
138 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 138
Elisabeth is sitting in her bathrobe on the bed, her make-up
removed and her hair down, her skin reddened from repeatedly
putting her make-up on and taking it off.
We see her from behind, slightly stooped, facing the window.
Outside, the HUGE palm tree.
Its CRUSHING VERTICALITY.
On the night table, her telephone lights up with a slew of
messages from “FRED” who has visibly been trying to reach her
for some time.
FADE IN:
139 INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 139
The living room plunged in darkness. A faint, flickering
light from the television.
From behind the big armchair, we see Elisabeth’s hand on the
armrest.
A long moment on the TV, with its endless babbling...
(off we hear the neighbor knocking at the front door t:
“Birdy? Birdy Sue?”)
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...sc 139
Then, after a long while, the bathrobed figure gets up and
crosses the living room, dragging her feet.
140 INT. FRIDGE / KITCHEN - NIGHT 140
POV FROM INSIDE THE REFRIGERATOR - THE DOOR OPENS: we see the
bathrobe standing in front of the shelves filled with food.
Not moving.
In the foreground, a roast chicken amongst other groceries.
The exasperating sound of the TV echoing from behind... Then
the bathrobe grabs a plate with leftover quiche and closes
the door, making everything go: BLACK.
FADE IN:
141A INT. CORRIDOR / BATHROOM - DAY 141A
HISSSSSSSSSSSS
FROM THE DARK LONG HALLWAY - through the bathroom doorframe
we see the shower filled with steam. We hear the water
running and can make out a figure inside the steamy shower.
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Scene 38 - The Mysterious Bulge
THE SHOWER HEAD SPITS OUT its powerful stream of water on...
SUE.
A long moment during which she revels in the gush of hot
water.
The pleasure she exudes being back inside her body, enjoying
her shapely self that awakens with the hot water.
While lathering, she seems to feel something on her
buttock...
She twists around to look at her butt cheek.... She lightly
presses on it with her hand... which reveals... a small bulge
under the epidermis surrounded by unsightly orange-peel
looking cellulite that mars the skin... what the f...? She
lets go... and the bulge disappears... Her skin is smooth and
immaculate once again. She presses on the spot... but it’s
gone...
She waits a moment... then runs her palm over her butt,
pressing on the area again... but everything is all right.
CUT TO:
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...sc 142
142 INT. BEDROOM - DAY 142
Wearing a towel, we follow her into the bedroom.
She grabs her clothes, sits on the bed - and SPRINGS BACK UP
immediately like a jack-in-the box. She felt something.
She brushes her fingers over her butt cheek and stands in
front of the bedroom mirror, contorting herself to look at
her buttock... but no, there is nothing. She stands in front
of the mirror for a long while to check. Everything is ok.
Her impeccably shaped backside.
143 EXT. STREET (GLAM & POP) - DAY 143
We follow Sue from behind, walking with a lively step.
Everything is hot. Colorful. Enhanced.
144A INT. TV STUDIO / SUE’S DRESSING ROOM - DAY 144A
Sue changes into her leotard.
She checks her ass in the mirror.
Impeccable.
144B INT. BACKSTAGE HALLWAY - DAY 144B
We follow her onto the soundstage.
145 INT. TV STUDIO / PUMP IT UP SHOW - DAY 145
She greets everybody, stretches to warm up.
A last glance at her ass to make sure she looks all right.
Perfect.
She places herself center stage among the dancers.
Everybody is ready to start taping the show.
The cameramen are in place.
The assistants.
The control room.
ASSISTANT DIRECTOR - PUMP IT UP SHOW
Ready Sue?
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...sc 145
SUE
(big smile)
Ready!
ASSISTANT DIRECTOR - PUMP IT UP SHOW
Ok, places everyone. Silence.
(counting down with her
fingers)
3... 2... 1...
Cameras on - recording.
Sue’s face IMMEDIATELY FLASHES HER GREAT BIG TOOTHY SMILE
SUE
Hi everybody! I’m Sue and it’s time
to pump it up! Are you ready? LET’S
GO!
The music starts.
Don’t you know pump it up...
you’ve got to pump it up...
She goes right into her routine, accompanied by the dancers
to the rhythm of the fast-paced music.
Cameras traveling behind the group catch their backsides
contracting to the music.
Endless smiles and aerobic routines one after the other.
SUE (CONT’D)
Come on now... STEP! STEP!
Sue seamlessly leads them through the choreographed sequence.
SUE (CONT’D)
NOW SQUEEZE THOSE BUTT MUSCLES and
SQUAT! SQUAT! SQUAT!
Sue runs her hand over her butt to show the movement.
SUE (CONT’D)
SQUA...
She stops short, losing the rhythm; she’s upset.
She felt something.
A pregnant pause. One by one, the dancers stop as well.
The cameras stop recording.
The music stops.
Everybody looks at her.
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...sc 145
SUE (CONT’D)
I... I thought that...
She slides her hand over her butt cheek and discreetly looks
at it.
There’s nothing.
SUE (CONT’D)
Sorry I... something distracted me.
CONTROL ROOM VOICE
Not a problem. Let’s get right back
to it.
Everyone gets back in place.
Sue anxiously slides her hand once again over her butt cheek -
everything is okay.
Everybody gets back in their places. The assistant mouths the
countdown:
3...2...1
Recording:
SUE
Hi everybody! I’m Sue and it’s time
to pump it up! Are you ready? Let’s
go!
The music starts.
Don’t you know pump it up...
The soldiers begin the choreography.
You’ve got to pump it up...
Still the same rhythm, over and over.
Don’t you know pump it up...
You’ve got to pump it up...
SUE (CONT’D)
Come on now, STEP... STEP! CONTRACT
THOSE BUTT MUSCLES!
Once again she puts her hand on her butt cheek to show the
muscle she is working.
SUE (CONT’D)
AND SQUAT! SQUAT! SQUAT! SQUAT!
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...sc 145
Everything goes smoothly this time. She goes through the
choreography of movements.
SUE (CONT’D)
Come on now, KEEP IT UP! KEEP IT
UP!
A long sequence where the series of movements are rolled out
one after the other.
Don’t you know pump it up… you’ve got to pump it up…
Don’t you know pump it up… you’ve got to pump it up…
SUE (CONT’D)
And bend over, head between your
legs!
She bends over and sticks her head between her legs...
Schlurrrp The bulge reappears, distorting her butt.
She abruptly straightens back up as if she’d been
electrocuted... Fuck!
She loses her balance, almost falling over. A dancer catches
her just in time. Everybody stops.
The music stops, again. The cameras stop.
This time everybody is a little bewildered.
Sue, dripping in sweat, discreetly checks herself out...
everything is okay. What the fuck is going on?
SUE (CONT’D)
(increasingly stressed
out)
I’m sorry... I... skipped a step.
CONTROL ROOM VOICE
Okay, everybody back in place, we
can’t afford to lose too much time,
there’s another show taping right
after us.
The crew for the next show is already waiting backstage.
FLOOR RUNNER
(to Sue)
Can I get you something? Water?
SUE
No, I’m fine, let’s get right back
to it!
(motivating the troops and
herself)
Ok, third time’s a charm, this is
it!
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...sc 145
Sue’s stress level is rising as she feels everyone’s eyes on
her, watching for the next trip up.
Everyone gets back in position. The cameras. The assistant
who gives the countdown. 3...2...1
Recording.
SUE (CONT’D)
Hi everybody! I’m Sue and it’s time
to pump it up! Are you ready? Let’s
go!
They start again from the beginning. The music is
increasingly unbearable.
Don’t you know pump it up...
You’ve got to pump it up...
Don’t you know pump it up...
You’ve got t-
The music stops.
Yet everything was going fine this time.
Sue gives a questioning glance: what’s going on?
She sees the crew bustling about... Someone is giving
instructions through a walkie-talkie. The info is passed from
person to person, walkie-talkie to walkie-talkie.
ASSISTANT DIRECTOR - PUMP IT UP SHOW
Sorry, it’s the control room now.
(listening to her ear
piece)
The director says he saw something
bizarre on the monitor. He has to
check it out.
(listening to her
earpiece)
Which one?
(to the stage hands)
Bring up the replay on camera 2!
Sue turns and sees that it’s the camera... that is just
behind her ass.
Her stress level is rising... she pulls down on her leotard
bottom to better cover her ass, but the cut of the fabric
just won’t allow for it.
Sue keeps her back close to the wall so that nobody can see
her ass in case the bulge returns.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 90 -
...sc 145
They have started the replay: on a giant screen at the back
of the scenery, images of the troop rewind at top speed,
making them look like ridiculous little marionettes shaking
their legs and asses.
SUE
Can I have my dressing gown?
SUE’S ASSISTANT
...sorry it’s in your dressing
room...
SUE
(in a burst of anger)
Well, then GO GET IT!!!
The video comes to a close up shot of Sue’s ass.
She’s increasingly nervous as the control room gives the time
code for the problematic frame while everyone is watching her
ass, frame by frame on the giant screen...
Sue’s assistant finally returns with her cover up, which she
throws on nervously before suddenly rushing down the hallway.
SUE (CONT’D)
I need a 5-minute break.
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Scene 39 - Grotesque Reflection
We follow her as she walks with a hurried step down the long
hallway.
147 INT. TV STUDIO / DRESSING ROOM - DAY 147
She comes to her dressing room, shuts herself inside and
looks in the mirror.
Slowly, she lifts the fabric of her leotard to discover...
the bulge which has returned to the same spot as in the
shower earlier... but bigger and uglier this time.
What the hell...
It’s like an internal growth that is deforming her butt
cheek... as though something were stuck under her skin.
She lightly presses on the bulge and realizes that she can...
move it... she pushes and palpates all around it... and with
a small suction noise the bulge starts slowly moving under
her skin - up her buttock and towards her waist.
FLOOR RUNNER (O.S.)
(softly knocking on the
door)
(MORE)
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...sc 147
FLOOR RUNNER (O.S.) (CONT'D)
Sue, do you want some coffee or
something?
She doesn’t even answer. She is completely obsessed with the
mass under her skin, which she pushes between her fingers
sliding it around.
...the fatty lump moves slowly under her skin towards her
waist...
she pushes it again, guiding it around to her stomach...
...leading the fatty lump to her belly button.
As the bulge approaches the skin under her belly button, she
starts to see something in the center of her belly button...
a sort of... like the end of a... she sticks her two fingers
into her belly button to try and grab... sticking her fingers
further in, she spreads apart the sides of her belly button
in order to dig deeper to try and grip the end of whatever it
is... she grabs the end and starts to pull it out...
discovering little by little... an oblong shape that she
slowly extricates... it’s a...
CHICKEN DRUMSTICK...
...ROASTED...
dripping with grease that she
slowly extracts from her belly
button with an icky slimy
sound:SLUUURPUH!!!!
AND HER BELLY BUTTON CLOSES BACK UP
LIKE AN ANUS WITH A SUCTION NOISE!!!
148 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 148
AHAAAAAAAAAA...AND SUE WAKES UP WITH A START!!!!!!!!
SWEATING BULLETS IN THE SECRET ROOM
FUCK!
The matrix in stasis is lying on the floor at the other end
of the switch pipe next to her.
Sue is bathed in sweat. She checks her stomach... her ass...
both are impeccable and perfect, trying to regain her wits as
this horrible nightmare fades.
WHAT A MINDFUCK... A goddamn mindfuck...
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...sc 148
She throws an accusatory look at Elisabeth who is on the
floor, and we follow her...
149 OMITTED 149
150 INT. HALLWAY / LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 150
...as she goes down the corridor.. Entering the living room
she stops... and stares at something that is right in front
of her.
Close up low angle shot that shows the anger rising in her
harsh eyes...
In reverse angle we see what she is staring at...
A BIG CHICKEN CARCASS entirely picked to pieces on the coffee
table. Chicken bones and potato leftovers smeared on a plate.
An empty pint of ice cream. Chocolate bars recklessly munched
down to the last square.
She looks at the deeper imprint left on the big armchair...
Traces of greasy fingerprints on the TV remote control.
Big slippers left on the carpet.
She totters a little and sits in the armchair to collect
herself.
Fuck, what a total lack of control...Revolting...
She nervously rubs her belly, thighs, hunching over, sticking
her head between her knees.
We can sense how much it disgusts her that she is
increasingly letting herself go as Elisabeth.
Sue abruptly grabs the plate and walks out of the living
room.
151 INT. GARBAGE - NIGHT 151
LOW ANGLE SHOT FROM INSIDE THE TRASH CAN WHICH OPENS
revealing Sue’s face. She throws all the leftovers down - the
chicken bones and the chicken rain down and cover the camera.
BLACK
CUT TO:
152 INT. SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 152
Sue tips the matrix over onto her side.
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...sc 152
As she sticks the long needle into her back to fill seven new
vials, her eyes focus on details of Elisabeth’s body...
Her gnarled and deformed finger, covered in grease.
The long scar that snakes up her spinal column.
She finds this body increasingly ugly.
Flabby.
Unattractive and USELESS.
CUT TO:
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Scene 40 - Fractured Balance
THE GREEN PALM TREES that pass by like KNIVES SKEWERING the
BLUE sky.
We follow Sue walking briskly while on the phone.
The piercing sound of the line Bri-iiiing Bri-iiiing
Yes?
SUE
THIS BALANCE IS NOT WORKING!
Her gait is agitated and she seems to be looking for
reassurance in the eyes of others as she passes them by.
SUE (CONT’D)
Why do we have to keep it even?! I
mean, we clearly don’t have the
same needs! I barely have the time
to enjoy myself while SHE wastes
seven days STUFFING HER FACE in
front of the TV!
Remember there is no she and y-
She hangs up on him. F..! And represses the impulse to bash
her phone against the pavement.
CUT TO:
154A INT. TV STUDIO / SUE’S DRESSING ROOM - DAY 154A
POV FROM INSIDE A LOCKER IN THE DRESSING ROOM. THE LOCKER
DOOR OPENS - Sue finishes getting into her leotard, appearing
increasingly pensive and perturbed.
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...sc 154B
154B INT. BACKSTAGE HALLWAY - DAY 154B
We follow her from behind walking towards the studio.
155 INT. TV STUDIO / PUMP IT UP - DAY 155
She opens the door energetically:
SUE
Hello everybod...
NO ONE IS THERE.
THE SET IS EMPTY. THE LIGHTS ARE OUT.
A wave of panic sweeps over her face.
She sees a STAGEHAND putting away the last cables.
SUE (CONT’D)
What’s happening? Where is
everybody?!
STAGEHAND
The taping has been cancelled.
SUE
What?! Why?
MAN’S VOICE (O.S.)
Sue?
Startled, she jumps and turns towards a FLOOR RUNNER standing
behind her with a serious look on his face.
FLOOR RUNNER
Harvey wants to see you in his
office - immediately.
Sue is increasingly shaken...
SUE
I... I’ll go change and-
FLOOR RUNNER
He said NOW.
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Scene 41 - A New Opportunity
Sue arrives in the office.
Harvey’s armchair is turned towards the plate-glass window;
we can only see the imposing back of his chair.
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...sc 156
The three men in suits are there, staring at her. One of them
is sitting on the couch. Another is leaning on the corner of
Harvey’s desk. The third stands by the plate-glass window.
Harvey swivels around to face her:
HARVEY
We’ve discovered your little
secret.
Dead silence.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
I couldn’t believe MY EARS!
(staring right into her
eyes)
ELISABETH SPARKLE?!!
SUE
Listen I-
HARVEY
You can’t actually be living in ...
(weird grin)
..ELISABETH SPARKLE’S APARTMENT??!
Sue’s face...
HARVEY (CONT’D)
It’s too much of a coincidence! I
sack her and BAM! Here she is again
trying to stick her foot right back
in the door!
(he chuckles)
An enormous burden is lifted from Sue’s shoulders, relieved
that it’s “only that...”
SUE
Uh...yes we...we briefly met when
she was moving out of town... she
asked me if I was looking for a
place to rent... which I was so...
there you have it.
Silence.
HARVEY
Oh she left town?... where did she
go?
A beat.
SUE
Uh... ... Costa Rica I think.
A long silence.
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...sc 156
One of the men in suits.
SUIT #1
It’s great for taxes.
Silence.
Harvey raises his eyebrows with a grunt of approval before
slamming his two hands down on his desk.
HARVEY
ANYWAY! That’s not why I wanted to
see you.
(suddenly very serious)
I’m going to get straight to the
point: we can’t keep you on the
morning show.
Dead silence. Sue can’t breathe.
SUE
But WHY?? I’ve j-
HARVEY
Ratings are through the roof.
A beat. Lost. Sue’s emotional roller coaster is palpable.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
We started at 42. We’re now at...
(he gestures to one of the
men)
SUIT #2
216.
HARVEY
That’s phe-no-me-nal. We’ve never
seen such figures in all the
network’s history! PEOPLE LOVE YOU!
THEY ADORE YOU!
Sue, suddenly overcome with emotion...
HARVEY (CONT’D)
That’s why we’ve decided we want
you to host... THE NEW YEAR’S EVE
SHOW.
A beat.
SUE
...you mean... The...
HARVEY
...network’s biggest show! 50
million viewers... LIVE. You can’t
get any higher ...
(MORE)
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...sc 156
HARVEY (CONT’D)
(a beat with a glassy look
in his eye)
Well, except if you die... then
you’d go...
(he gestures towards the
ceiling)
A beat, as if behind his glassy eyes he were suddenly engaged
in a deep metaphysical reflection... then he abruptly comes
back to the point:
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Anyway, I’m taking a huge gamble on
you and these men can tell you I
talked you up to the shareholders
‘til my last drop of saliva,
convincing them this is the way to
go. It’s going to be intense. We
have only a few months to pull it
off, but I know we can do it.
(to Sue)
So? What do you say?
A long beat on Sue.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Are you in?
Sue’s gleaming eyes...
BLACK
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Scene 42 - Seizing Opportunity
For a long moment.
Then a ray of light appears through the gap of a door that
slowly opens...
And Sue’s head appears in the gap.
We are inside the secret room looking towards the door.
A long moment on Sue who looks inside the room with shiny
eyes...
We can feel her inner dilemma...
Then she walks into the secret room and slowly kneels down
behind Elisabeth’s back.
A beat...AND HER MANICURED HAND clips one of the empty vials
onto the puncture syringe... AND LIFTS UP THE BANDAGE -
revealing the slightly swollen puncture site.
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...sc 157
SUE
If you don’t open the door when
opportunity knocks, you won’t get
another chance...
AND SHE SLOWLY PUSHES THE LONG NEEDLE into the puncture
site...
SUE (CONT’D)
You of all people know this...
Elisabeth’s pupil slightly flinches while the needle slowly
drains the liquid.
BLACK
158 INT. SECRET ROOM - DAY 158
A long silence.
And the ray of light appears again.
Sue, in a new outfit, once again appears in the half-opened
door.
We can see several empty vials strewn on the floor, next to
Elisabeth.
She hesitates before entering stealthily.
SUE
Just one more. Then I have a week
off, and we can switch.
THE MANICURED HAND lifts up the bandage - the skin has
visibly grown even more swollen at the puncture site.
We can tell that Sue feels increasingly uneasy. She
manipulates the Matrix with growing disgust.
Jabbing the needle into the swollen skin is a little more
difficult.
BLACK
A long beat...
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Scene 43 - Fractured Reflections
AND THE DOOR OPENS AGAIN...
and Sue walks into the room in a new outfit...
She takes off the bandage - there’s a little pus oozing from
the puncture site, which is now infected.
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...sc 159
(there are more and more empty vials strewn across the floor)
She clips on an empty vial.
We can tell that she is increasingly terrified by what she
sees and also feels guilty... but she can’t help it.
SUE
I’ve got some amazing news...
(kneeling behind her)
We are doing the cover of Vogue!
She fiddles with it, making circular movements to try and dig
a way through the inflamed flesh on Elisabeth’s back.
SUE (CONT’D)
It’s just one more day, it’s not a
big deal...
BLACK
FADE IN:
160A INT. BATHROOM - DAY 160A
THE EMPTY, STILL BATHROOM, where we can only see the door to
the secret room open ajar.
Nothing moves.
Then we hear a big breath being taken: AHAAAAAAAAAAAA
A long silence.
And a bloodcurdling scream tearing through the secret room:
ELISABETH (O.S.)
NOOOOOOO.....
160B INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 160B
...WHICH ECHOES IN THE STILL LIVING ROOM WITH A VIEW ON THE
SMILING BILLBOARD
ELISABETH VOICE (O.S.)
....NOO OOOOOOOOO
CUT TO:
161A INT. HALLWAY / BATHROOM - DAY 161A
HISSSSSSSSSSS THE ROAR OF THE WATER LIKE A BURST OF THUNDER
THE LONG DARK HALLWAY - at the end of which is the open
bathroom door - the shower is filled with steam from the hot
water.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 100 -
...sc 161B
161B INT. SHOWER - DAY 161B
THE SHOWER HEAD SPITS OUT its powerful stream of water on...
ELISABETH. A dazed look in her eyes as she stares at the
ground.
REVERSE ANGLE ON THE SHOWER FLOOR where we see the water
streaming over... ONE OF HER LEGS THAT HAS AGED TERRIBLY.
Varicose veins crisscross her leg, protruding under the
parchment-thin wrinkled skin reaching all the way to her
groin.
She brushes a lock of hair behind her ear, uncovering a swath
of atrociously aged skin around her right eye, like a black
eye made of wrinkles.
The water falls on her back where the swollen and infected
red area around the puncture site has grown larger, her spine
stooped by her vertebrae’s twisted alignment.
Leaning her palm on the wall for support, we discover that
her entire right hand has aged all the way up to her elbow.
ELISABETH
Not a big deal??....THIS IS NOT A
BIG DEAL?????!
The sound of the phone ringing which grows increasingly
louder as if it was going to FUCKING PIERCE OUR EARDRUMS.
Bri-ing, Bri-iiing...
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Scene 44 - Fractured Time
THE ATROCIOUSLY OLD FOOT WITH ITS HARDENED YELLOWED NAILS
paces back and forth.
Bri-ing Bri-iiing
On top of the table is the Vogue issue with SUE, ALL SMILES
ON THE COVER:
THE RISING STAR
Bri-ing Bri-iiing
Yes?
Elisabeth, ready to burst, stuttering in her haste:
ELISABETH
SH-SHE D-DID IT AGAIN!!!!
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 101 -
...sc 162
She winces from the violent pain shooting up her back.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
The...the...GROWTH... - cause if
I’m the matrix what came out of me
can only be called the GROWTH! THE
GROWTH didn’t respect the balance.
AGAIN. SHE’S STEALING MORE AND MORE
TIME FROM ME completely
disregarding the consequences. She
is irresponsible! She is totally
short sighted! Sh-SHHA-SHHA...
She angrily throws the magazine.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
...SHHHHALLOW AND SUPERFICIAL!!!!!
A beat.
If you don’t want extra time you simply have to stop taking
it.
Elisabeth makes a dreadful grimace, closing her eyes,
struggling against her impulse to implode.
ALL DECISIONS ARE YOUR DECISIONS. You’re simply making them
from different sides of yourself.
Everything is getting all too Kafkaesque...
Would you like to stop?
Elisabeth is taken aback.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
...Stop?
You are the Matrix. Your other side depends on you to survive
but you don’t. If you are not satisfied, you can put an end
to the experience whenever you want, and go back to being
just you on your own.
A moment of silence. Then again, like a mantra:
Would you like to stop? To go back to being just you on your
own?
Elisabeth seems lost...wrapping her bathrobe tighter around
herself.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
Will...will everything return to
what it was before? I mean... as I
was before?
We feel all of her vulnerability as she waits for the answer.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 102 -
...sc 162
The line crackles.
What has been transferred won’t come back.
We have made that clear already.
But you can stop the experience as of now.
A beat.
Would you like to stop? To go back to being just you on your
own?
Her eyes fall upon her horrifically aged leg... then look
beneath her bathrobe, towards what we imagine must be left of
her breasts...
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
NO!...no no no...I don’t want to
stop...
(she pulls the fabric of
her bathrobe tighter
around her body)
I can’t stop... I can’t stay LIKE
THIS... SHE has to- (She gives
herself a SMACK!)...“I” have to-
(SMACK! Another slap!) THE BALANCE
HAS TO BE RESPECTED!!
A long beat. The line crackles.
So respect it.
A beat.
We see her back droop.
Let us know if you need anything else. We will be happy to
answer any of your requests. We are at your disposal.
The line goes dead.
Elisabeth remains slumped over the table.
We can see her stooped back shaken by little hiccups as she
starts sobbing.
THEN: When you’re smiling, when you’re smiling...
It’s Sue’s telephone, the Louis Prima ring tone a glaring
reminder of how tragic things have become.
...the whole woooooorld smiles with y-
Her twisted finger pushes a button to send the call direct to
voice mail.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 103 -
...sc 162
She stands with difficulty and starts walking away...
ping!... she stops... a beat... she turns around and sees the
voice mail notification. She hesitates... and can’t stop
herself from going back to listen to it.
ALAN (V.O.)
SUE!! Holy fuck?! Are you sitting
down? Please go sit!
She lets herself fall back down into the chair like a sack of
potatoes.
ALAN (V.O.)
Are you ready to hear this? Ok this
is huge. TOM GRANT wants you in his
next movie! YES, YOU HEARD ME
RIGHT. TOM FUCKING GRANT. He saw
you on the Vogue cover this morning
and he’s DYING to meet you. CALL ME
AS SOON AS YOU GET BACK.
A beat.
And then suddenly she gives herself an enormous slap: SMACK!
ELISABETH
STOP IT!
SLAP! Another.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
YOU HAVE TO STOP IT!
SLAP!
SMACK!
SLAP!
SHE HITS HER HEAD REPEATEDLY WITH HER FISTS AS THOUGH THAT
WOULD MAKE THE MESSAGE ENTER HER BRAIN ONCE AND FOR ALL.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
STOP IT STOP IT STOP IT...
The small note “it changed my life,” hanging on the wall...
BLACK
FADE IN:
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Scene 45 - A Taste of Memory
The silent apartment plunged in darkness.
IN THE LIVING ROOM we see Elisabeth from behind huddled up in
the big armchair.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 104 -
...sc 163
The TV is on, but she isn’t even watching.
She sits silently for a long while, staring into space.
Then something changes in her expression... as though she has
seen something that caught her attention in the bookcase
facing her.
She tries to get up but her aged leg won’t straighten... she
is stuck in the big armchair.
A beat. She looks at her severely deformed knee.
Stiff and swollen with arthritis.
She remains in place, staring... tries again to unbend her
leg... we see the intense effort this requires... but her
knee, ravaged by arthritis is blocked in a bent position.
Elisabeth’s expression is increasingly harsh as she focuses
on trying to unbend her knee...
She grabs her leg with both hands, trying to force it
straight...but it won’t budge...
She pushes harder, harder... She grits her teeth... her
expression betrays increasing agony as she relentlessly tries
to force the knee to unbend...
CRAAAACK - Her kneecap dislocates finally unbending AAAAHHHHH-
a scream of victory and pain.
She does as best she can to push her deformed body to get up -
her dowager’s hump is larger and painful, and there’s a stain
made by the oozing pus on her bathrobe in the area of the
puncture site.
She limps all the way to the bookcase, leaning on the shelves
to catch her breath, as though she had just run a marathon.
Then her arthritic hand grabs something forgotten that is
stuck between two books: Harvey’s departure gift.
She looks at it. Harvey’s chubby smiling face appears
superimposed on the wrapping paper.
HARVEY
To keep you busy. It’s French. My
wife swears by it!
The gnarled fingers tear off the wrapping paper revealing a
thick book of recipes:
FRENCH CUISINE from A to Z
26 recipes from the greatest French chefs!
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 105 -
...sc 163
On the cover is a very hefty looking CHEF WITH RED CHEEKS and
a great big smile.
She has to get very, very close to the page to see it as her
vision has gotten much worse. She leafs through the pages of
recipes accompanied by full-size pictures of the dishes:
AUBRAC ALIGOT
BRISSAC BLOOD SAUSAGE WITH APPLES
CAEN STYLE TRIPES
CHRISTMAS BRESSE POULTRY STUFFED WITH FOIE GRAS
FADE IN:
164 INT. LIVING ROOM / TALK SHOW STUDIO - NIGHT 164
Dazzling white. As the camera pulls back, the white very
slowly becomes large white squares... pulling back further,
the white squares form a big toothy smile... we pull back
even more to reveal that the smile is Sue’s pearly-white
smile on a pixelated TV screen facing a zestful TV HOST:
TV HOST
...that’s right!...You popped up on
our screens out of nowhere like a
tornado. I think no one was really
prepared for this whirlwind...
SPLOTCH SPLOTCH SPLOTCH SPLOTCH
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Scene 46 - Kitchen Chaos: A Recipe for Rage
CHEESE BUBBLING IN A SAUCEPAN
Elisabeth’s DECREPIT FOOT shuffling back and forth across the
kitchen floor.
TV HOST
It all started with the morning
show... rumor has it that you are
up for Tom Grant’s next movie...
and ...just a minute... I’m just
being told that you have been
chosen to host the NEW YEAR’S EVE
SHOW!! Can you confirm this?
SUE
Yes that’s right.
The audience applauds.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 106 -
...sc 165
ELISABETH’S VOICE (O.S.)
(mimicking Sue’s nasal
voice)
“Yes that’s right”
EXTREME CLOSE UP on the thick, greasy melted cheese that is
slowly poured onto a plate like molten lava...
Elisabeth is pouring the aligot to look exactly like the
photo in the recipe book.
She is in the kitchen surrounded by piles of dirty dishes,
the cook book open on the stained and greasy counter, as she
navigates between different recipes that she is cooking at
the same time.
TV HOST
WOW WOW WOW THIS IS BIG NEWS! I
can’t wait to find out what you are
cooking up for us!
ELISABETH TURNS A PAGE SHLACK!
BRISSAC BLOOD SAUSAGE WITH APPLES
(he encourages the audience to applaud. Sue laughs,
flattered)
Elisabeth leans over the book getting as close as possible to
read the recipe.
TV HOST (CONT’D)
So tell us a little about yourself.
Where are you from? How did you get
discovered?! I want - WE want to
know EVERYTHING!!
HISSSSSSS TWO BLOOD SAUSAGES LAND IN A SAUTE PAN making the
hot oil jump and sizzle.
SUE
(playing demurely with the
audience)
Oh, there’s not very much to tell,
really... I’m just a girl from a
very small town in... Indiana.
As the oil gets hotter it pops and splatters in the pan.
Elisabeth wipes her brow on her forearm.
SUE (CONT’D)
I’m sure you’ve never heard of
it... in fact, it’s not even a
town... I’m not really sure you
could even call it a village... A
farm perhaps? (She laughs with the
public).
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 107 -
...sc 165
Elisabeth mocks Sue’s shrill laugh while she deglazes the pan
in a CLOUD OF SMOKE HISSSSSSSS
SUE (CONT’D)
...But for as long as I can
remember, it has always been my
dream to be on screen...
ELISABETH
MY dream!
SUE
...as a child I used to put on
shows for my family...
THE GNARLED FINGERS TURN A NEW PAGE SHLACK!
CHRISTMAS BRESSE POULTRY STUFFED WITH FOIE GRAS
Elisabeth opens the refrigerator door and grabs a large
uncooked turkey.
INSERT - the GNARLED FINGER follows across each line of
directions in the cook book: eviscerate the turkey.
TV HOST
How sweet... So everyone is aware
that you replaced Elisabeth Sparkle
and no doubt about it you stepped
in, turned up the volume and ROCKED
THEIR WORLD! (the audience cheers)
Were you a fan of her show?
Elisabeth puts the chicken on the table and pauses - she’s
attentively listening to Sue’s answer.
SUE
Well, I can’t really say I actually
watched her show because... well
you do know that we’re not exactly
the same generation... (everybody
laughs)
Utter disbelief on Elisabeth’s face. HER FINGERS TENSE AND
FREEZE ON THE TURKEY SKIN.
SUE (CONT’D)
...And you have to admit that it
was a bit old fashioned - Jurassic
Fitness really - it needed a
change...
ELISABETH VIOLENTLY SHOVES HER HAND INSIDE THE TURKEY’S
INNARDS IN RETALIATION.
ELISABETH
“Jurassic fitness”...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 108 -
...sc 165
She pokes around the turkey’s cavity...
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
I’ll fucking show you Jurassic
fitness.
Pushing and pulling, poking and thrusting, she finally pulls
out the giblets - SPLOTCH!
SUE
...But my mother was a huge fan of
hers. Every morning, rain or shine,
“Sparkle your life” was on TV.
She breaks a series of eggs on the rim of a big glass bowl.
They land at the bottom : all of these egg yolks side by side
as though they had multiplied themselves... making for a
strange reminiscence...
SUE (CONT’D)
So in a way I grew up with her -
whether I liked it or not!
(laughter from the audience)
I guess that’s why I can say we
have some sort of connection.
ELISABETH
“Some sort of connection?!”
ZZZZZZZZ She grabs the electric beater as though it were a
chain saw.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
Without ME YOU DON’T EVEN EXIST!!!
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ Elisabeth savagely destroys the egg yolks
which splatter her bathrobe.
TV HOST
Goodness yes, and WHAT A CHANGE!
Elisabeth shuts off the beater and catches her breath.
TV HOST (CONT’D)
...And now for our final question,
the one we ask each and every one
of our guests...Would you share one
of your little beauty secrets with
us?
All of a sudden, Elisabeth darts in a hurried limp over to
the TV, placing herself right in front of it.
TV HOST (CONT’D)
One little trick of yours that
helps you look so incredibly
stunning! I mean just look at you!
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 109 -
...sc 165
ELISABETH FACES THE SCREEN as if the TV Host was speaking
directly to her, in her dirty grease and egg yolk-stained
bathrobe. On the talk show, Sue pauses before answering him:
SUE
Oh... let me think...
Elisabeth points an accusatory finger towards Sue like a
preacher in a trance.
ELISABETH
SAY IT!
TV HOST
(as an aside)
We won’t tell anyone... (laughter
from the audience)
ELISABETH
SAY IT!!
(facing the tv, opening
her arms in a wide
exaggerated gesture,
waddling back and forth)
Go ahead, show them your little
secret!
We see Elisabeth’s face grow increasingly somber as she
listens...
SUE
I guess it’s that I just try... to
be myself... to be sincere and
grateful for all that I have and to
alway-
SPLAT! AN EGG HAS JUST BEEN THROWN AT THE SCREEN.
SPLAT! AND NOW A TOMATO!
THE VISCOUS YELLOW YOKE AND BLOOD RED PULP DRIP DOWN OVER
SUE’S PEARLY WHITES.
Elisabeth is looking at the billboard outside, she grabs a
newspaper, takes out a page and BAM! She slaps the paper on
the window, right over its wide-smile of a mouth.
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Scene 47 - Reflections of Despair
THE LONG DARK HALLWAY at the end of which we see the
bathroom. Elisabeth, wearing Sue’s silk bathrobe, paces back
and forth in front of the mirror, making faces and mocking
Sue’s nasal voice and affected mannerisms. She simpers and
gestures in an increasingly grotesque caricature:
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 110 -
...sc 166
ELISABETH
“I just try to be myseeeeelf... to
be sinceeeere and graaatefuuuuul
for all that I haaaaave...”
Facing the mirror, pointing her crooked fingers at her
reflection.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
YOU’RE TAKING IT FROM ME!! That’s
your secret!! YOU’RE TAKING IT ALL
FROM ME!!
SMACK! She gives herself a massive slap.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
STOP IT!
SMACK! Another
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
STOP IT!
She pummels her head with her fists, growing increasingly
violent.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
YOU HAVE TO STOP IT!!!
CUT TO:
167 INT. SHOWER - NIGHT 167
HISSSSSSSSSSSSS - Elisabeth is hunched up in a fetal
position on the shower floor. THE STREAM OF WATER IS LIKE A
MACHINE GUN pelting her deformed back. Her vertebrae are
increasingly prominent, like a dinosaur.
ELISABETH
(pleading, in a whisper,
over and over again)
Stop it stop it stop it you have
to...
CUT TO:
168 INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 168
SUE (O.S.)
(HOWLING)
...CONTROOOOOL YOURSELF!!!
SUE’s harrowing howl which echoes all the way to the over-
sized living room that we now discover in daylight.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 111 -
...sc 168
The picture window has been covered with newspapers to hide
the billboard outside.
So has the television.
Leftovers and poultry carcasses are everywhere, the walls are
smeared with grease and sauces, dirty dishes overflowing in
the sink... melted cheese on the floor...
A savage wreckage.
We see Sue, busy, nervously making her way through the
different rooms, muttering to herself.
SUE (CONT’D)
I can’t go back inside her...
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Scene 48 - The Secret Room
POV FROM INSIDE THE SECRET ROOM - Sue’s feet going back and
forth, carrying a variety of containers, glass jars and empty
bottles that she gathers in the room.
SUE (O.S.)
I just can’t...
She looks at Elisabeth’s decrepit body stranded on the floor
in her silk dressing gown.
The delicate silk material on that horribly old and
disgusting leg...
SUE (O.S.) (CONT’D)
She’s GROSS...
She brutally rips the dressing gown off her - Elisabeth’s
head falls back down heavily on the tiled floor: THUD!
SUE (CONT’D)
Fat...
With her foot, she pushes her over onto her side in order to
reveal the inflamed, swollen, pus-oozing puncture wound.
SUE (CONT’D)
Old...
SHE VIOLENTLY RIPS OFF the bandage from her back.
SUE (CONT’D)
Disgusting.
She violently stabs the needle into her back and starts
draining the fluid...
Draining...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 112 -
...sc 169
Draining...
She fills up the glass jars and bottles one after the
other...
The camera pulls back, towards the darkness as if the secret
room was getting bigger, damper and more isolated.
BLACK
A LONG MOMENT OF SILENCE
Then a soft, damp, distorted and cavernous noise that grows
louder.
As though marking the passage of time and decay in the dark
room which seems to have sunk into oblivion...
Then a faint music, slowly growing louder...
FADE IN ON
170 A TV COMMERCIAL FOR THE NEW YEAR’S EVE SHOW (6 MONTHS LATER) 170
Flashy colors and lively voices:
Tomorrow 9PM don’t miss Sue and her crew for an unforgettable
New Year's Eve Show!!
CUT TO:
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Scene 49 - A Dress Rehearsal of Despair
The camera pans up A MAGNIFICENT PRINCESS DRESS IN TAFFETA,
chiffon and rhinestones that sparkles gloriously.
Sue is in the fitting room.
Her hair is different, time has passed.
Her agent (Alan) is there, as well as Harvey and the whole
gang of suits. Everyone is bubbling with excitement.
The STYLIST finishes lacing the corset up Sue’s back.
STYLIST
...And there you go...I just have
to take it in a bit here and here,
otherwise we are all set for
tomorrow.
Sue’s emotion is tangible as she sees her reflection in the
mirror.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 113 -
...sc 171
HARVEY
The dress is WONDERFUL!! IT’S
PERFECT! A real princess!
He takes the stylist to the side in the foreground.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
And I was thinking... all the other
dancers could have feathers
sticking out of their asses.
Hesitation on the part of the stylist.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Well not "literally" in their
asses... You know more like just
above the... rump... like a tail...
you know. It's New Year's Eve!
People want to have fun. They want
joy. Happiness. Feathers are
joyful. They’re fun.
STYLIST
Otherwise I planned on using lemon-
colored short-shorts...
HARVEY
Feathers are more fun.
Discussion over. And Harvey starts to rally the troops.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Ok everybody out! Everybody needs
to rest up for tomorrow!
(to Sue)
And especially you! You get your
beauty sleep!
172 INT. LIVING ROOM REDECORATED - EVENING 172
We discover the redecorated living room, plunged in darkness.
Everything is clean, zen and organized.
On the table is a magnificent bouquet of blossoming red roses
in a large vase.
On the white note card placed next to it:
BREAK A LEG!
THEY’RE GOING TO LOVE YOU
Sue stands in front of the picture window facing a new
billboard, where she’s wearing her princess dress.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 114 -
...sc 172
NEW YEAR’S EVE SHOW
TOMORROW 9PM
We see the silhouette of A MAN (30) appear from behind in the
frame and wrap his arms around her.
BOYFRIEND
You coming to bed?
SUE
(smiles serenely at him)
Yes, I’ll be right there.
The man leaves.
After a moment, a slight tinnitus starts buzzing in her ears.
Sue glances one last time at the picture window and the
bouquet of roses.
173 INT. CORRIDOR / BATHROOM / SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 173
Then she calmly walks towards the bathroom (we can tell that
this is a well-rehearsed routine), starts taking off her
makeup as she enters the secret room (where we catch sight of
hundreds of shriveled up IV bags and empty vials littering
the floor like a junkie’s den).
After a while she comes out with the syringe in which there
is only a little thick brownish disgusting-looking fluid...
what the fuck?!
With the tinnitus growing increasingly louder, we follow
her...
174 INT. CORRIDOR / LIVING ROOM / KITCHEN - NIGHT 174
...hurrying back down the hallway in the opposite direction,
frantically searching through the drawers in the living room,
and finally finding the USB stick with the telephone number
on it.
She locks herself in the kitchen so no one can hear her
calling.
Bri-ing... Bri-ing...
Tap tap tap... her foot taps nervously on the floor...
Bri-ing... Bri-ing...
Pick up the fucking phone...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 115 -
...sc 174
Bri-ing... Bri-i...
Yes?
SUE
(whispering)
Yes! Oh my god, thanks! This is an
emergency... there is no more
stabilizer fluid!
Silence.
SUE (CONT’D)
Hello?!
Silence
SUE (CONT’D)
(in a screaming whisper)
...IT’S FUCKING 503!
Yes.
Ping... a drop of blood on the kitchen tile.
SUE (CONT’D)
I’m telling you this is urgent!!
There’s no more stabilizer fluid!
The phone line crackles.
It means you’ve reached the end.
A beat.
SUE (CONT’D)
What do you mean...“the end?”
The phone line crackles.
You’ve drained it all out. It’s dry.
A beat.
If you want more, you must let the fluid regenerate.
Ping, ping, ping... the bleeding gets worse.
SUE (CONT’D)
SO JUST TELL ME HOW TO DO IT!!!!
I NEED TO STABILIZE MYSELF RIGHT
NOW!!
You simply have to switch.
A beat. Total. Silence.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 116 -
...sc 174
Sue freezes. As if someone had just asked her to stick her
head in a bucket of shit.
SUE (CONT’D)
Ex-cu-se me?
The switch reboots the fluid secretion process. So you can
continue to enjoy the experience.
SUE (CONT’D)
No no no no, I can’t...
(disgusted)
...“switch”.
Outside, the billboard:
NEW YEAR’S EVE SHOW
TOMORROW 9PM
SUE (CONT’D)
AND ESPECIALLY NOT NOW!!
Ping, ping, ping, the bleeding is even worse, SUE’S POV : THE
IMAGE GROWS DARKER AND HER EYESIGHT BLURS... She tries to
regain her balance, reaching for a chair, but she misses and
falls heavily to the ground.
There is no other option.
She tries to get up on all fours while her vision
increasingly blurs.
SUE (CONT’D)
No no no... PLEASE I JUST NEED ONE
MORE DA-
The line goes dead.
On all fours on the kitchen tile, the piercing tinnitus
drilling through her brain, she no longer has the choice...
she gathers her last strength to get up but everything spins
like a loop-the-loop... and she collapses again a bit further
along in the living room.
She crawls, dragging herself through the hallway...
175 INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT 175
...all the way to the bathroom, using her last bit of
strength to hoist herself up, grabbing onto the sink to try
and reach the switch pipe on the shelf...which she grabs with
the tip of her fingers... and collapses to the ground making
all her beauty products crash to the floor in a loud SMASH!!
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 117 -
...sc 176
176 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 176
IN THE BEDROOM her boyfriend sits up in bed and puts the
light on.
BOYFRIEND
Sue?
CUT TO:
177 INT. BATHROOM / SECRET ROOM - NIGHT 177
THE EMPTY AND STILL BATHROOM.
The door to the secret room open ajar.
A beat. Nothing moves.
And suddenly
Rahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...a hoarse groan from beyond the grave
echoes out in the secret room.
CUT TO:
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Scene 50 - Descent into Despair
The man sits on the side of the bed, not sure what he has
just heard.
BOYFRIEND
Babe?
A beat.
The hollow echo of a phlegmy cough.
The man knits his eyebrows, increasingly perplexed...
He stands and we follow him stepping into the hallway.
BOYFRIEND (CONT’D)
Are you alright?
CUT TO:
179 INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT 179
POV FLOOR LEVEL ON THE BATHROOM TILES
A beat... AND A HORRIBLY DECREPIT FOOT WITH NECROSED TOES,
appears in the foreground, taking a first step on the
bathroom tiles like the first step on the moon...
CUT TO:
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...sc 180
180 INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT 180
THE MAN’S FEET WALK ALONG THE DEEP PILE CARPET...
CUT TO:
181 INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT 181
A second ravaged foot takes a second step.
We can feel how difficult it is for her to stand and move
forward...
CUT TO:
182 INT. HALLWAY - NIGHT 182
THE MAN’S FEET WALKING DOWN THE HALLWAY...
BOYFRIEND
Stressed out about tomorrow?
The man is about to reach the door and walk into the bathroo-
BAM! THE DOOR SHUTS VIOLENTLY RIGHT IN HIS FACE!
He is bare-assed facing the door.
BOYFRIEND (CONT’D)
Sue? Is something wrong?
(he sees a few drops of
blood on the carpet)
...a little cranky because of your
lady business?
183 INT. BATHROOM / CORRIDOR - NIGHT 183
ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE DOOR the shot pulls back along a
decrepit hand pushing against the door with all its
diminished strength... the camera pulls back further along a
bony and wizened arm... down a saggy breast that hangs like
an old washcloth... arriving at a big deformed dowager’s
hump, going down a flabby, wrinkled and MILDEWED buttock,
pulling out more to discover Elisabeth’s entire decrepit
hunchbacked figure like a Gollum, leaning back on the door
with all her might.
TWO NAKED ASSES SEPARATED BY THE BATHROOM DOOR.
BOYFRIEND
Sue?!
(knocking at the door)
Sue open the door - it’s not funny
I need to take a piss!
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...sc 183
Elisabeth, petrified and mortified on the other side.
She turns her head towards the mirrored cabinet over the
bathroom sink... it reflects a puny, wizened, dreadfully
wrinkled old woman...
SLOW ZOOM IN on her heavily wrinkled face ... thin, stringy
gray hair with bald spots... it takes her a moment to
understand that this horrible old wrinkled thing whose eyes
are reddened from conjunctivitis is...
HER.
BOYFRIEND (O.S.) (CONT’D)
(banging on the door)
Sue! Open the door!
Stark naked, he pounds on the door, louder and louder
BAM! BAM! BAM!
VERY SLOW ZOOM IN - WHICH SHAKES ON ELISABETH’S REFLECTION...
the knocking on the door emphasizes the horrific image she
sees reflected in the mirror... BAM BAM BAM!
And suddenly she starts screaming in a hoarse and cavernous
voice:
ELISABETH
GET OUT!! GET THE
FUCK OUT OF
HERE!!!!
(an enormous wet cough filled with phlegm)
184A INT. HALLWAY / BATHROOM - NIGHT 184A
IN THE HALLWAY - the man jumps back, almost toppling over in
surprise.
He pauses for a moment.
BOYFRIEND
WHAT THE FUCK....
Who’s this? Who the fuck is this?!
ELISABETH
(starts pounding on the
door, screaming)
LEAVE ME
ALONE!!!!!!!!
(MORE)
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...sc 184A
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
GET OUT OF MY
HOME!!!! LEAVE ME
THE FUCK
ALOOOONE!!!!!!!!
A horrible noisy phlegmy cough, she spits out mucous again.
BOYFRIEND
What the fuck!?
Finally, totally flipped out, the man rushes into the
bedroom, grabs his things and takes off without a word,
SLAMMING the door behind him. BAM!
184B INT. CORRIDOR / LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 184B
Elisabeth opens the bathroom door and hurries down the
hallway. She trips and falls like an old bag of bones. Gets
up and goes into the living room where she rushes to the
telephone.
Her gnarled and deformed fingers push on the phone buttons
with great difficulty.
The line rings.
Yes?
She can’t hear anything - and starts speaking super loudly
like the hearing impaired.
ELISABETH
THIS IS 503 I WANT TO
STOP!!
A beat.
Are you sure? Once you stop you can’t go ba...
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
I FUCKING WANT TO
STOO OOOOOOP !!!!!!!
The words are roared as though her guts were about to spill
out of her mouth.
A beat.
We’ll deliver.
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...sc 184C
184C INT. HALLWAY / LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 184C
Elisabeth has just pulled the huge framed photo of herself
into the living room - her blue leotard and happy smile on
her face, she props it back up against the wall. She looks at
it for while.
185 INT. LIVING ROOM - DAY 185
Daytime now. Elisabeth feverishly finishes getting dressed:
gloves, thick skin-colored tights, a shawl wrapped like a
turban around her head, and oversized sunglasses. Bundled up
in her yellow coat over her bathrobe, she wraps a blanket
around her neck like a scarf, although outside the sun is
shining brightly.
Sue's phone rings on the table. When you’re smiling...When y-
Elisabeth picks up.
ALAN (V.O.)
HEY HEY HEY! HOW IS MY STAR TODAY?
READY FOR THE BIG NIG...
ELISABETH
She’s not here. She’s gone. This is
over.
ALAN (V.O.)
What do you mean she’s gon...
ELISABETH
THIS IS OVER SHE’S NOT COMING
BACK!!!!
BAM! SHE HURLS THE PHONE ACROSS THE ROOM.
186A INT. APARTMENT CORRIDOR - DAY 186A
At the very moment that she steps into the hallway outside
her front door, her neighbor’s door opens as if half-stalking
her.
NEIGHBOR
How about we g-
ELISABETH
FUCK OFF!
186B INT. STAIRWAY - DAY 186B
She hurtles down the stairs like a lunatic while the neighbor
immediately scurries back inside his apartment, bolting his
door shut.
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...sc 187A
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Scene 51 - Desperate Choices
THE BLINDING LIGHT OUTSIDE. ALL THE EXTERIOR STIMULI ARE LIKE
A PHYSICAL AGGRESSION.
WE FOLLOW THE LIMPING YELLOW COAT IN EXTREME CLOSE UP.
187B OMITTED 187B
187C INT. CORRIDOR DEPOSIT - DAY 187C
The yellow coat goes along the corridor.
187D INT. DEPOSIT / LOBBY - DAY 187D
CLOSE UP ON THE CARD THAT OPENS THE DEPOSIT BOX. BEEP.
187E OMITTED 187E
188 INT. APARTMENT ENTRANCE - DAY 188
She makes it back home.
SLAMS THE DOOR SHUT.
HER GLOVED HAND DOUBLE LOCKING EACH BOLT.
(she takes off a few layers of clothing - scarf, blanket)
CUT TO:
189 INT. SECRET ROOM / BATHROOM - DAY 189
ELISABETH’S GLOVED HAND closes around Sue’s delicate ankle.
Elisabeth pulls her out of the secret room.
190A INT. HALLWAY / LIVING ROOM - DAY 190A
The camera follows Sue’s body at floor level as she is
quickly dragged down the hallway. Her head violently bumps
against a piece of furniture: BAM!
Elisabeth drags her into the living room right into the
picture window’s full light.
She brutally tears apart box 503 with her old, shaking hands
and takes out: A BIG WHITE NOTECARD which reads:
We are sorry you didn’t appreciate your experience
with The Substance
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...sc 190A
With the note card is a small vial filled with a black liquid
marked “TERMINATION” for an intra-cardiac injection.
She touches the spot where the needle needs to go into Sue’s
heart.
Holding the syringe, she lifts up her arms high above her and
is about to...
Are you sure ?
Elisabeth jumps and looks around...
... before realizing that the voice is inside her head...
...Once you stop you can’t go back...
Her eyes are more and more focused on Sue's chest going up
and down peacefully...
You will simply remain on your own...
She shakes her head in order to keep her concentration...
But the voice inside her skull rings out even louder...
JUST ON YOUR OWN...
ELISABETH
SHUT THE FUCK UP !!!!
JUST ON YOUR OWN…
BAM! Elisabeth jabs the needle right down into Sue's thorax!
Trying not to waver in her determination, she presses
slightly on the plunger to release a notch of the product.
CLOSE-UP ON THE SYRINGE AS IT SLOWLY BUT GRADUALLY EMPTIES.
Sue’s heartbeat slows down:
Ba boom………………………………………………ba boom…………………………………………………baboom…
AND SUDDENLY ELISABETH’S EYES FREEZE on something facing
her... her eyes mist over... shining with tears... as we
discover what she is looking at:
The note card sitting next to the bouquet of red roses:
“THEY’RE GOING TO LOVE YOU”
Tears well up in her eyes, they escape and roll down her
cheeks... And suddenly Elisabeth wavers... collapses to the
ground next to Sue, bursting into tears, letting all her pain
come out.
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...sc 190A
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
I can’t...I can’t...
I HATE myself...I need you..
(shaking her)
I need you!!!
She starts to panic, leans in very close to her face to try
and make out any sign of breathing. Nothing.
She starts CPR on Sue.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
(one two three four...)
Forgive me I was out of my mind...
(one two three four...)
YOU’re the only interesting part of
me. You’re the perfect one.
Blood starts to trickle then run out of Sue's nose.
No no no no...Elisabeth rushes into the bathroom to grab the
switch pipe, hurrying back... she kneels down next to Sue.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
WE HAVE TO GET YOU READY... THIS IS
OUR BIG NIGHT!
She hooks up the switch pipe. The blood starts circulating...
But nothing happens.
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
C’MON!!! THEY’RE GONNA LOVE YOU!!
She removes the needle from Sue’s arm... and BAM! She jabs it
right into Sue’s chest for an intra-cardiac injection,
screaming:
ELISABETH (CONT’D)
C’MON!!!
The blood circulates AND SUDDENLY Sue's rib cage heaves in a
spasm; she coughs blood up right on Elisabeth’s face.
Taken by surprise, Elisabeth is completely lost.
She takes several steps back, shocked.
Sue's eyes are... OPEN.
So are Elisabeth’s.
Completely rattled, Sue doesn't seem to understand what's
going on.
They look at each other for a short moment, both frozen in
disbelief.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 125 -
...sc 190A
Both of them are activated at the same time...
A long beat on the two women, staring at each other... they
both seem to be trying to fathom each other's soul...
Sue sees the “termination” vial on the floor.
A suspended beat...
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Scene 52 - Descent into Chaos
And all of a sudden Sue throws herself at Elisabeth... who
dodges her in the nick of time and runs away inside the
apartment. Elisabeth throws something right at Sue’s face
before running away from her again: fuck fuck fuck... she
stumbles and gets back up again as fast as she can... Sue
runs right after her.
Elisabeth grabs a trophy and tries hitting Sue on the head
with it... but Sue ducks at the last minute, avoiding the
object and violently disarms Elisabeth.
Suddenly, Sue runs right at Elisabeth, kneecapping her in the
plexus, which sends Elisabeth flying right against her huge
framed poster on the wall.
The fight between the two of them is UNBELIEVABLY VIOLENT.
Brutal. Carnal. Like a survival instinct pushed to its
fullest.
Creator versus creature...
Sue runs for Elisabeth and starts to strangle her... throttle
her...Elisabeth chokes... suffocates...
With her convulsing free hand, Elisabeth fumbles around,
desperately searching for something... anything... and grabs
a... lamp and BAM! She smashes it atop Sue’s head.
An electric shock shoots through Sue who lets go. Elisabeth
runs into the corridor... Sue runs right after her.
Everything speeds up.
Elisabeth rushes...
191 INT. BATHROOM - DAY 191
...into the bathroom to hide. Her hand trembling as she locks
the door. Sue tries to kick the door down.
Elisabeth searches for a weapon... something to block or
defend... anything... she tries to push a large piece of
furniture against the door to block it but too late... SUE
KICKS the door down... BAM!
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...sc 191
She punches Elisabeth who falls backwards – THUMP! Her head
bangs violently against the edge of the earthenware sink –
dizzy, she crashes down brutally to the floor...
She tries to come back to her senses but Sue is already upon
her... she grabs her by the hair... picks her up and holds
her in front of the mirror... they both look at each other’s
reflection for a moment before suddenly...THWACK! Sue smashes
Elisabeth's face against the mirror... the mirror cracks and
Elisabeth's eyebrow splits open... She doesn't have the time
to do or say anything before BAM! She's slammed once again
against the mirror.
Elisabeth tries to say something to her:
ELISABETH
Stop... we are o-
But BAM! Sue slams her again against the mirror!! Again! And
again! Soon, Elisabeth's mouth is so messed up that she can
no longer talk - nothing comprehensible comes out. Sue is in
a trance, entirely uncontrollable...
Elisabeth manages to free herself from Sue’s grasp...
192 INT. HALLWAY / LIVING ROOM - DAY 192
...she crawls down the hallway and into the living room.
Sue catches up with her and gives her a final blow which
sends Elisabeth flying through the room before landing on the
glass coffee table which smashes into pieces.
Lying in the middle of the shards of broken glass, Elisabeth
tries to wriggle to get up but her body no longer seems to
respond... Sue now starts kicking her repeatedly, more and
more furiously, each kick making Elisabeth jerk on the floor
and cough up blood. SUE CAN NO LONGER CONTROL HERSELF. SHE'S
KICKING HER MERCILESSLY... until a large pool of blood slowly
starts to form around her on the floor... and Elisabeth's
body finally stops moving: an irreversible stasis.
Sue looks down at the red liquid, as if hypnotized by it. She
brutally seems to come out of her state of trance...
And realizes what she's done...
EVERYTHING IS YOU
INSERT
THE PALM TREE LOSES ITS LEAVES.
She's just killed the matrix.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 127 -
...sc 192
She's just... killed... herself...
193 INT. INSERT 193
SMACK! THE TWO BLU TACK BALLS SLAMMED ONE AGAINST THE OTHER
YOU CAN’T ESCAPE FROM YOURSELF
194 EXT MOTORCYCLE IMAGERY 194
THE DIRTY GRAINY IMAGE of the MOTORCYCLE FROM THE BEGINNING
hurtling straight towards the camera... AND VIOLENTLY
CRASHING INTO IT STRAIGHT ON: the motorcycle smashes into
pieces and the body of the driver flies into the air like a
disarticulated puppet from the sheer ferocity of the impact.
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Scene 53 - Shattered Reflections
BACK TO THE SCENE INSIDE THE LIVING ROOM
Sue looks down fixedly at her bloody hands in the foreground
above a blurry Elisabeth in the middle of a pool of blood in
the background. (tinnitus starts up in her ear - it gets
louder and louder right up to the end)
All of a sudden, we see all the panic, all the VULNERABILITY
inside her eyes.
A long beat.
The phone rings. Like a robot Sue picks up the phone.
SUE
Yes?
ALAN (V.O.)
Sue? Is that you? I tried reaching
you earlier, what happened?...
SUE
Oh nothing.... some practical joker
or something...
ALAN (V.O.)
Oh, you’re reassuring me. This is
no time for nerves.
Through the picture window, the large billboard with her
image smiling brightly right back at her:
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...sc 195
NEW YEAR’S EVE SHOW
TONIGHT 9PM
ALAN (V.O.)
I’ll be in the front row to see you
shine. THEY’RE GONNA LOVE YOU!
She hangs up.
195B INT. SALLE DE BAIN - JOUR 195B
Sue calmly washes her hands. The blood disappears down the
dark sink hole.
She looks at her reflection shattered in dozens of pieces
inside the broken mirror.
196 INT. TV STUDIO / BACKSTAGE CORRIDOR - DAY 196
Sue arrives at the studio where EVERYONE is rushing around in
preparation for the last rehearsal before the live event.
She listens to everything attentively, her wide smile upon
her face, but we can sense she's acutely attuned to
everything happening inside her, checking for anything that
could potentially go wrong.
CUT TO:
197 INT. NYE FITTING ROOM - DAY 197
A MAGNIFICENT DIAMOND NECKLACE that is delicately placed
around Sue’s neck, as she’s slipped into a dress in the
fitting room.
Everyone drops by the lounge to encourage her.
As the stylist finishes lacing up the corset of her dress
from behind, Sue suddenly starts coughing slightly.
She drinks from a glass of water to try and calm down.
But after a short moment, she starts coughing again.
And again. She can't seem to stop coughing.
She apologizes and leaves for the bathroom.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 129 -
...sc 198
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Scene 54 - The Cost of Perfection
We follow her making her way down the hallway.
Walking past the soundstage, we see Harvey shouting at a
technician, pointing to a cable hanging from the ceiling.
HARVEY
...you nail it, you GLUE it or you
fucking EAT it! But EVERYTHING’S
GOTTA BE PERFECT!!
199 INT. NEW YEAR EVE BATHROOM - DAY 199
Sue reaches the restroom and double locks the door.
After a few seconds, she starts coughing again.
Once.
Twice. Ten times.
She's leaning over the sink; trying to make it stop.
Cling gling...
She catches something in the nick of time which has just
fallen into the sink before it slides down the black hole...
A silent beat.
She looks down at her closed fist... which is closed so
tightly it is almost about to break the cartilage.
She slowly opens up her fingers...
And looks down... in the middle of her palm...
... at a TOOTH...
... Its bloody root...
She looks down at it...
And looks back up at the mirror again...
Slowly... very slowly... she opens up her mouth...
And discovers... a black hole right in the middle of her
white teeth...
She stares for a long moment at her smile in the mirror’s
reflection...
And as if drawn by an irresistible urge to do so... she
slowly approaches her fingers towards her other front tooth.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 130 -
...sc 199
She pulls on it... and the tooth pulls away easily with a
small sticky noise...
Her eyes widen...as she holds this new tooth in between her
fingers...
And as if drawn by another compulsive urge, she touches a
third tooth... which also detaches itself very easily...
Her eyes grow increasingly crazed.
Her toothless smile gets bigger and bigger...
Like the black holes of a harmonica.
A black hole into hell.
She stares down at the three teeth in the palm of her hand.
The enormous and bloody roots... It's as if her hidden dark
side was suddenly coming to light.
Someone knocks at the door.
ASSISTANT DIRECTOR - NYE SHOW (O.S.)
Sue?! Are you there? They need to
see you on stage to set the lights
She looks down in terror at her teeth in her hand... then her
face in the mirror...
Her eyes increasingly crazed and terrified, she attempts to
articulate in a normal voice:
SUE
I’m coming just a sec!
Blood drips into the sink. She bends over to make sure none
of the blood stains her dress.
SUE (CONT’D)
I’ll meet you there!
She tries to calm herself down for a moment... thinks...
And suddenly... an idea sparks to life in her eyes...She
looks at her necklace and seems to have come up with an idea.
She rinses her hands and mouth, to get rid of all traces of
blood.
... keeps her mouth shut tight... closes her fingers around
the three teeth inside her hand...
A long beat on the tightly closed fist...
She takes a deep breath and...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 131 -
...sc 199
...opens the door.
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Scene 55 - Caught in the Spotlight
She walks quickly through the corridor with her head slightly
lowered and her fist closed along her thigh, trying not to be
noticed by anyone in the busy hallway.
HARVEY (O.S.)
HEY SUE! SUE!
SUE!!!
After a few moments she has no choice but to stop and turn
around slowly.
She finds herself facing... HARVEY.
Behind him, a SWARM OF WHITE MEN in their 60s and 70s wearing
suits.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Let me introduce you to the
shareholders! They’ve been dying to
meet you!
Sue stares at them... sweating...
Next to her thigh, her fist seems as if it's about to
explode, her fingers clasping down on the teeth so tightly...
Harvey looks at her, frowning:
HARVEY (CONT’D)
Everything ok?
Sue remains silent for a moment... Has he noticed anything?
She nods as if to say yes... her neck is drenched in sweat...
Harvey continues to stare at her for a long moment... until
his face finally lights up as he erupts:
HARVEY (CONT’D)
SO SMILE! THAT’S WHAT WE WANT
TONIGHT!
After a short moment as if frozen... Sue smiles, keeping her
mouth tightly shut.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
PRETTY GIRLS SHOULD ALWAYS SMILE!
A bunch of half naked, young dancing girls with big feathers
on their rumps come walking down the corridor, which is
enough to draw Harvey's attention away from her.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 132 -
...sc 200
He follows the movement of the cute, little butts bouncing up
and down towards the studio and prances about happily behind
them.
HARVEY (CONT’D)
OOOH... feathers feathers
feathers...
The shareholders turn and follow Harvey and the dancing rumps
as well.
Sue makes the most of this moment to turn away and strides
towards the dressing room.
She rushes over to the stylist’s desk, searches through her
work materials and takes out... a small tube of super glue.
She walks back to the bathroom.
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Scene 56 - Behind the Smile
Locks the door shut.
She puts her teeth down on the sink and exhales out deeply,
opening her mouth and letting a large quantity of blood gush
out and into the sink in the process...
She stands feverishly in front of the mirror...
She takes a tooth in between her two fingers... pours a few
drops of super glue on the root...
Shaky, she opens her mouth, lifts up her lip... approaches
her tooth to the naked gum... and pushes the root of the
tooth as deeply as she can into the gum... as deep as
possible... remains still for a few moments...
Takes her fingers away...
It sticks.
Outside, she can hear everyone excitedly looking for her.
ASSISTANT DIRECTOR - NYE SHOW (O.S.)
Sue? They’re waiting for you, we’re
running late!
She speeds up and does the same thing for the two other
teeth...and glues in her smile.
She rinses her mouth several times until all of the blood
disappears...
Smiles broadly in front of the mirror in order to make sure
we can't see any evidence of the carnage which just
occurred...
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...sc 201
Takes a deep breath...
202A INT. WINDING CORRIDORS - DAY 202A
... and opens the door with a big smile as if nothing
happened.
She follows the assistant director into the corridor.
Everyone she sees throws words of encouragement at her.
ENCOURAGEMENT PERSON #1
Break a leg for tonight!
A spider passes fleetingly in her field of vision.
...
A SPIDER PASSES FLEETINGLY IN HER FIELD OF VISION?
…
?
???
As she continues to follow the assistant on set, she rubs her
eyes discretely... Fuck... no it's still there... This shit
is preventing her from seeing properly (she rubs her eye
which makes the thing move but part of its legs are still
there)
She continues to smile and pretend that everything's ok,
while a whole portion of her field of vision is darkened. The
assistant’s face seems to disappear into the spider’s
darkness.
It's just a motionless black shape which remains still in the
middle of her line of vision, but it's absolutely TERRIFYING.
202B INT. NYE SET - DAY 202B
She arrives on set. THE DOP and THE CAMERAMAN show her where
to hit her marks on the floor. They tell her to “look here”
or “look there” but she can't see anything with this fucking
spider in the way.
The cameras film her smile but inside her head, it's a
complete nightmare...
202C INT. WINDING CORRIDORS - JOUR 202C
As soon as the fine-tuning is over, Sue runs off the set to
the corridor...
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 134 -
...sc 203
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Scene 57 - Fragmented Reflections
...and slips into the elevator.
Once inside, she hits the lobby button repeatedly... and the
more she pushes the button nervously, the more she notices
that... one of her fingernails is less and less lined up with
her finger... the door closes, she pulls slightly on the
fingernail which comes straight off and remains in her
hand...(same thing for her two other nails)
She hears a little... splotch!
She looks down at the floor and sees... an ear...
A short beat, her eyes frozen, in shock, while staring down
at the ear on the floor...
Her ear...
She's falling apart and into pieces...
The elevator grinds to a halt. Ding. Second floor.
As the door moves and starts to open, she barely has time to
put her dress over the ear to hide it, while swinging her
hair over her shoulder in order to cover the gaping hole.
MAN ENTERING ELEVATOR
Ready for tonight ?
With the spider in her field of vision, she's unable to make
out who's talking to her... Her hearing is affected. Sounds
grow muffled. She can't understand anything of what THE
PERSON is saying...
Ding. First floor. The person leaves muttering something
completely incomprehensible. Ding. The door closes again. She
hurries to pick up her ear and stuffs it inside her handbag.
Ding. Ground floor.
204 OMITTED 204
205A EXT. STUDIO LOT ALLEY - DAY 205A
She hurries out of the building...
205B EXT. STREETS (SPIDER DEAMBULATION) - DAY 205B
...and starts to head back home, walking as best she can
through the streets between the pedestrians. The spider and
macular degeneration have evolved and now hide 80% of her
vision.
THE SUBSTANCE - May 3rd 2022 - 135 -
...sc 205C
205C INT. STAIRWELL - DAY 205C
SUE’S POV rushing up the stairs.
206 INT. APARTMENT / HALLWAY - DAY 206
Once back at her apartment...
207A INT. BATHROOM - DAY 207A
...she hurries to the bathroom, searching through the closet
until she finds... the small vial marked ACTIVATOR / matrix -
where there is a little of the fluorescent yellow fluid left.
She takes off her dress.
CLOSE UP ON THE SYRINGE THAT FILLS UP WITH THE LIQUID...
SUE
(muttering to herself)
I just need a better version of
myself...
Activator / single use / discard after use
...FILLS UP...
SUE (CONT’D)
Please give me a better version of
myself...
Activator / single use / discard after use
She tightens the tourniquet around her arm.
She sticks the needle into her arm.
Shaking, she injects the contents of the syringe.
A beat.
Which goes on.
Nothing. (Subjective POV: her view in the mirror is still
blocked by the huge spider in her field of vision)
SUE (CONT’D)
C’MON!!!!!
She closes her eyes and starts muttering a prayer.
SUE (CONT’D)
Please please please please...
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...sc 207A
All of a sudden, FLUORESCENT YELLOW FILLS THE SCREEN AND THE
IMAGE SPLITS (as the camera drops to the floor)
She starts feeling the abdominal cramps.(she falls to the
floor)
Even more violent than the first time. Atrocious.
Excruciating. She feels like she’s dying. She screams.
Suction noises. The second pupil. The fluorescent tunnel.
Subliminal images of anarchic cellular division (everything
is stranger than before).
BLACK
207B A long silence. 207B
Then the sound starts to return, only muffled...
A slightly wheezy breath.
The image comes back gradually.
Flickering like the batting of eyelids...
AT LAST THE SPIDER HAS GONE.
Thank God...
Sue turns her head to one side and sees...
SUE lying on the floor unconscious on the white tiles.
Her translucent skin and her back split open.
It worked... Thank you God, thank you...
She approaches the sink... her vision is half blurry and it’s
difficult for her to focus...
And she then discovers in the mirror:
A MONSTROUS VISION... a being with a hybrid face, shapeless
and hideous... (chaotic cellular growth / body parts placed
haphazardly and in all the wrong places / teeth stuck in her
cheeks and in her cleavage)
The camera slowly tracks back... pulling behind her
shoulder... and discovering stuck on her back:
...AN OUTGROWTH OF ELISABETH’S FACE IN A FROZEN SCREAM, LIKE
EDWARD MUNCH'S PAINTING.
We hear the casting director’s voice that echoes in her head:
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...sc 207A
CASTING DIRECTOR (V.O.)
Looks like everything sure is in
the right place this time...
ASSISTANT CASTING DIRECTOR (V.O.)
Please state your name/ age /
measurements.
SUE (V.O.)
I’m... I’m...
SUE (V.O.)
I’m...
She vomits a green liquid while at the same time she says:
MONSTROELISASUE
She wipes her mouth and turns her head from right to left as
she looks at herself in the mirror.
She's strangely calm...
As if this monstrous vision didn't scare her.
Almost fascinating her.
As if it pleased her.
As if she was TRULY seeing herself for the very first time,
and finally, accepting herself.
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Scene 58 - Masquerade of Despair
Facing her, through the picture window is the huge billboard:
NEW YEAR’S EVE SHOW
TONIGHT 9PM
Elisabeth lies dead on the living room floor.
Sue lies dead on the bathroom floor.
It's time.
209 INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT 209
MonstroElisaSue starts preparing herself and putting on her
beautiful dress as if everything were completely fine.
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...sc 209
The zipper that she’s closing up covers Munch’s face on her
back that forms a hump under the fabric, the dress starts to
rip all over.
She slips her foot stumps into her shoes.
She wants to put her earrings on but... she doesn't have any
ears anymore.
She sticks the earrings directly into the sides of her head.
The few disheveled strands of hair that remain disintegrate
under the curling iron.
She has the exact same gestures of vanity as if everything
were normal which is even more weird and scary given her
completely monstrous appearance.
210 INT. LIVING ROOM - NIGHT 210
Back to Monstro who is standing, scissors in hand, facing the
huge frame with the photograph of her back in the days of her
old show: her blue leotard and dashing smile.
She gives it a kick to get rid of the last pieces of
remaining glass and cuts out the face on the poster...
211 INT. BATHROOM - NIGHT 211
...and sticks this paper face (with holes for the eyes) to
her monstrous face with super glue.
She then puts lipstick on top of it to emphasize her smile
while Harvey’s voice echoes in her head:
HARVEY (V.O.)
Pretty girls should always smile!
212A EXT. NIGHT STREET (GOING TO STUDIO) - NIGHT 212A
We follow her from behind as she crosses town like a ghostly
shadow, with her Elisabeth mask like a clown's mask covered
in red lipstick.
212B EXT. NIGHT STREET (GOING TO STUDIO) - NIGHT 212B
Still on Monstro’s back as she walks.
213A OMITTED 213A
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...sc 213B
213B EXT. STUDIO LOT ALLEY / STUDIO DOOR - NIGHT 213B
We follow her from behind as she arrives in front of the
studio door.
She swipes her badge over the screen that unlocks the door
and finds herself standing face to face with the assistant
director...
ASSISTANT DIRECTOR - NYE SHOW
Ah, at last! We were starting to
worry... hurry up, you're up in
five!
214A INT. NYE STUDIO / HALLWAY THAT LEADS TO THE SET - NIGHT 214A
He leads the way in towards the set as if nothing were
wrong...
MonstroElisaSue walks past the staff and CREW MEMBERS who
greet her with a broad smile: "AAAAAH THERE SHE IS! SO
BEAUTIFUL!", "We love you!", "This is where you belong and
you'll always belong here!", « We can’t do without you » We
could never do without you!» "You're irreplaceable!"
She smiles, dazed with her cut out face glued on and her
teeth stuck all over the place.
Her eyes are filled with tears, moved by so much love.
All of a sudden a loud BEEP rings out...
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Scene 59 - New Year's Eve Nightmare
...Bursting this completely fictitious bubble she just
invented.
She's still standing in front of the studio door. Her badge
has just opened the secure door.
In front of her: the long empty corridor that leads to the
set...
CUT TO:
215 INT. NEW YEAR EVE STAGE - NIGHT 215
ON STAGE - LAST MOMENTS BEFORE GOING ON AIR
The group of dancers is ready on stage, awaiting her.
Harvey and the shareholders in front row seats, their eyes
gleaming with excitement and expectation.
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...sc 215
HARVEY
(proud, to the men)
You won’t be disappointed. She’s my
most beautiful creation. I shaped
her for success!
Friendly pat on the shoulder in return: Atta boy...
The live countdown starts... 5....4...3...
A figure backlit by the violent stage lights walks onto the
soundstage.
2...
The figure comes to take her place in the middle of the sexy
dancers.
1...
A buzz of whispers rise up... and freeze...
LIGHTS. CAMERA/ON AIR.
LIVE.
Great silence.
Monstroelisasue on the stage in the middle of the dancers.
The sound of a fly buzzing through the room.
The cameramen remain completely still.
Just like the little red dot of light.
Just like the audience.
Just like Harvey and his clique.
The dancers with feathers sticking out of their asses placed
around Monstroelisasue haven’t moved an inch; they glance at
each other, not knowing what to do.
Monstroelisasue, her shapeless body, her cut out paper face
with the red lipstick smile drawn on top of it.
The mike lets out a feedback noise.
A silent wave of shudders passes through the room.
MonstroElisaSue tries not to let herself be disconcerted and
talks into the microphone as if everything were normal: (tap
tap on the microphone with her mush finger)
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...sc 215
MONSTROELISASUE
I AM FO HAPPFY TO BE WIFF YOU
TOFIGHT... I’FE MIFFED YOU FO
MUFCH...
Her ridiculous half stuck on mask detaches itself...
revealing her monstrous face.
A beat.
Thrrrup - a breast sticks out of the monster’s eye socket and
starts swinging at the end of the optic nerve...
...
The shrill, high-pitched scream of a WOMAN (WOMAN#1) suddenly
interrupts this suspended moment...and right then... ALL HELL
breaks loose.
COMPLETE PANIC INSIDE THE ROOM
MAN 1
THE MONSTER!!!
MAN 2
SHOOT THE MONSTER!!!
MAN 3
IT'S A FREAK!!!
A MOTHER hides her DAUGHTER’S eyes (she’s wearing the same
mini-dress as Monstro)
The music starts up automatically and the dancers look at
each other in panic, not knowing what to do... some start to
take a few steps... while others make the most of this moment
of confusion to run away, rushing off the set.
MonstroElisaSue looks around her and starts to panic as
people’s screams grow louder and louder in the room.
MONSTROELISASUE
FDON’T BE FCARED... LET ME
EXPFLAIN...
She tries to stop people from running but they break away
while insulting her:
WOMAN #3
FREAK!
MAN#4
YOU FREAK!
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...sc 215
MONSTROELISASUE
IT'F ME...IT'F FTILL ME... I'M FE
FSAME....(Elisabeth’s face,
embedded in the monster’s back is
speaking at the same time)
SOMEONE pushes past her and makes her fall over violently.
A spotlight turns on and shines down on her. She shades her
face and eyes with her hands to prevent the blinding light
from burning her eyes and dazzling her...
ELISABETH
IT'F ME! FUE! ELIFABEFF!…
IT'F ME!
ME !
She gets up and tries to pick up the microphone but her hand
remains glued to it and CRACK detaches itself from her wrist!
Everyone is sprayed with the blood now gushing out of her arm
stump, like a snow canon.
More horrified screams rise up.
She sprays blood in every direction, like a lawn hose, while
spinning around in her princess dress.
SPLASH ON HARVEY!
SPLASH ON THE SHAREHOLDERS!
SPLASH ON THE LITTLE GIRL!
New burst of terrified screams.
HARVEY
(to the infuriated
shareholders who mime
slitting their throats to
say:”you’re done”)
Let me explain!!
MONSTROELISASUE
(to the public)
LETF ME EFPLAI-
BAM! SOMEONE KNOCKS HER OVER THE HEAD WITH THE MIC STAND.
MonstroElisaSue’s head is half destroyed. A new head - a mix
of Sue and Elisabeth is sticking out of the gaping hole. She
leaves the set to escape the crowd’s fury.
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...sc 216
216 INT. BACKSTAGE CORRIDOR - NIGHT 216
She runs through the corridor, the famous corridor, where she
leaves an immense trail of blood, spraying the walls as she
passes.
Complete carnage.
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Scene 60 - The Agony of Triumph
She runs outside in agony...
218A EXT. NIGHT STREET 1 - NIGHT 218A
...wheezing more and more as she rushes into the street in a
panic.
She's scared and she wants to be left alone.
She's trying to get somewhere. We can tell she knows where
she's heading.
218B EXT. NIGHT STREET 2 - NIGHT 218B
She runs through the streets as fast as she can.
Her legs dislocate and collapse underneath her.
SPLASH ! The billboards get splattered with blood as she
crumples to the floor.
She tries to get up. But her body no longer really has a
human form and she has neither legs nor arms to get up as her
body dislocates more and more into a bloody magma mass:
MUSHOFMONSTROELIZASUE
She continues to drag herself along the sidewalk, desperately
wanting to get somewhere...
Her breathing is more and more wheezy, but she doesn't give
up; she continues to drag her bloody blob along the sidewalk
giving everything she has to give to keep on going...
CUT TO:
219 EXT. WALK OF FAME SIDEWALK - NIGHT AND DAY 219
STATIC HIGH ANGLE TOP SHOT on the pink star on top of the
grey slabs upon which we can read:
ELIZABETH SPARKLE
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...sc 219
A long silent beat on the star, which seems like a moment of
peace in comparison to the previous images of carnage.
We then see a piece of flesh crawling into the corner of the
frame trying to drag itself over to the star.
In agony, MushofMonstroElisaSue, puts her last efforts into
heaving what remains of her body onto the middle of the star.
She winds up in the middle of the star, looking up at the sky
which grows more and more dazzling as if spotlights were
shining right down on her.
Gold confetti starts to fall from the sky upon her like a
golden rain shower...
Noises of the street and cars muffled little by little, turn
into the sound of applause and grandiloquent music.
MushofMonstroElisaSue watches the confetti fall down on her
monstrous face like in a dream, as if everything were
disappearing around her and she were alone in the world
inside this golden rain.
We can sense that she is utterly happy, as though she were
thoroughly experiencing her moment of accomplishment and
glory as mush on the sidewalk...
The confetti continues to fall as she dissolves more and
more...
PUDDLEOFMONSTROELIZASUE
...is overwhelmed by the sound of applause... and dissolves
even more until there's now only a large, bloody stain...
Which looks a lot like the splattered ketchup from the
beginning.
A beat.
We hear a roaring sound, which grows louder and louder... as
day breaks...
And a large street cleaning machine with black rotary brushes
glides across the frame, its soapy mouth wiping clean the
traces of blood on the pavement...
BLACK - over which the music from THE TRASH VERSION OF THE
WORLD IS A VAMPIRE BLARES LOUDLY.
THE END
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Ratings
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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elisabeth | Elisabeth's character arc begins with her as a confident TV personality, masking her insecurities and doubts about her future. As the story progresses, she faces the harsh realities of aging and the pressures of the entertainment industry, leading to a breakdown that reveals her vulnerability. This pivotal moment prompts her to confront her identity and the consequences of her past actions. Throughout her journey, Elisabeth grapples with feelings of confusion, desperation, and ultimately acceptance as she navigates her transformation into Sue. Her arc culminates in a moment of self-realization, where she embraces her true self and the complexities of her existence, ultimately seeking redemption and connection. | Elisabeth's character arc is rich and layered, showcasing her emotional depth and internal struggles. However, the arc could benefit from clearer motivations and stakes that drive her transformation. While her journey is compelling, there are moments where her internal conflicts could be more explicitly tied to her external circumstances, enhancing the narrative tension. Additionally, the transition from her initial confident persona to her vulnerable state could be more gradual, allowing the audience to witness her descent and the factors contributing to her emotional turmoil. | To improve Elisabeth's character arc, consider incorporating more specific external challenges that directly impact her internal struggles. This could include conflicts with industry peers, personal relationships, or societal pressures that force her to confront her insecurities. Additionally, providing more moments of reflection and dialogue that reveal her thought process can deepen the audience's understanding of her motivations. Gradually escalating her emotional turmoil through smaller setbacks before her breakdown can create a more impactful transformation. Finally, ensuring that her journey towards self-acceptance is mirrored by tangible changes in her relationships and career can enhance the overall narrative and provide a satisfying resolution. |
harvey | Throughout the screenplay, Harvey's character arc evolves from a cynical and manipulative figure focused solely on ratings and control to a more nuanced individual who begins to recognize the impact of his actions on others. Initially, he is portrayed as a domineering presence, using his authority to shape MonstroElisaSue for success while disregarding her emotional well-being. As the story progresses, he faces challenges that force him to confront the consequences of his superficial values. A pivotal moment occurs when he witnesses the toll his demands take on Sue, leading him to question his priorities. By the climax, Harvey experiences a moment of self-reflection, realizing that true success is not just about ratings but also about the people behind the screen. In the resolution, he takes steps to support Sue in a more genuine way, acknowledging her talent without the need for objectification, thus completing his transformation from a callous director to a more empathetic mentor. | While Harvey's character arc presents an interesting journey from cynicism to empathy, it risks falling into the trope of the 'redeemed antagonist' without sufficient depth. His initial portrayal as a one-dimensional villain may alienate the audience, making it difficult for them to connect with his eventual transformation. Additionally, the moments of vulnerability and care for others could be more pronounced to create a stronger foundation for his character development. The screenplay may benefit from exploring Harvey's backstory or motivations that led him to become the person he is at the beginning, providing context for his actions and making his eventual change more impactful. | To improve Harvey's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that reveal his past experiences with ageism and objectification, perhaps showcasing a mentor who influenced his current mindset. This would add depth to his character and create a more relatable antagonist. Additionally, introduce moments where Harvey's decisions directly impact the lives of those around him, allowing the audience to witness the consequences of his actions firsthand. This could create a stronger emotional connection and make his eventual change feel more earned. Finally, ensure that his moments of support for Sue are not just superficial but demonstrate a genuine understanding of her struggles, reinforcing his growth and making his transformation resonate with the audience. |
sue | Sue's character arc begins with her as a vulnerable yet determined individual, initially seeking validation and success in a high-stakes environment. As she transforms into a more confident and assertive version of herself, she grapples with the duality of her identity and the consequences of her choices. Her journey is marked by a series of emotional highs and lows, including moments of desperation, anxiety, and self-disgust. Ultimately, Sue faces a life-threatening dilemma that forces her to confront her past and the darker aspects of her personality. By the end of the screenplay, she emerges as a more self-aware individual, having navigated her internal conflicts and made a critical decision that reflects her growth and acceptance of her true self. | While Sue's character arc is rich and multifaceted, it risks becoming convoluted due to the sheer number of emotional states and transformations she undergoes. The rapid shifts between confidence, vulnerability, and manipulation may leave the audience struggling to connect with her on a deeper level. Additionally, her motivations can sometimes appear unclear, making it difficult to fully understand her actions and decisions throughout the screenplay. | To improve Sue's character arc, consider streamlining her emotional journey by focusing on a few key transformations that align with her central conflict. Establish clearer motivations for her actions, allowing the audience to empathize with her struggles and decisions. Incorporate moments of reflection where Sue confronts her internal conflicts, providing insight into her thought process and emotional state. This could enhance her relatability and depth, making her eventual growth more impactful. Additionally, consider emphasizing her relationships with other characters, particularly Elisabeth, to create a more cohesive narrative that highlights the themes of rivalry and self-discovery. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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High Overall Grade Predicts Strong Dialogue and Concept | Scenes with an overall grade of 9 consistently score highly in Dialogue and Concept. This suggests a strong foundation in both narrative structure and compelling conversation, contributing to the high overall quality. Explore if slightly lowering the focus on concept in favour of strengthening other elements might create a more balanced narrative. |
Emotional Impact and Conflict: A Complex Relationship | While many high-scoring scenes have strong emotional impact, there's no consistent correlation between the intensity of conflict and emotional impact. Scenes 30 and 37, for example, are high in tone but low in emotional impact. Investigate if building stronger conflict could amplify the emotional impact in these scenes, or if the emotional resonance is being achieved through other means. |
Mysterious Tones Often Score Highly, But Impact Varies | The use of 'Mysterious' in the tone description frequently appears in high-scoring scenes. However, the emotional impact, conflict, and plot advancement vary. This suggests the 'Mysterious' tone is effective in creating an engaging atmosphere, but needs more narrative structure to drive the plot and emotional impact in several instances. Consider diversifying tones and structuring them more strategically for maximum impact. |
Character Changes and Climax Scenes | Scenes with significant character changes (scores of 8 or 9) tend to correlate with higher overall grades and intense tones like 'Terror,' 'Transformation,' and 'Horror'. This reinforces the importance of using impactful scenes to drive character arcs. However, scenes 30 and 35 have low emotional impact despite significant character changes which deserves further consideration. |
Intense Tones and High Stakes | Scenes categorized as 'Intense' frequently show a strong correlation with high stakes and a high overall grade. This is a positive aspect; however, ensuring the high stakes are clearly communicated in the narrative to increase reader engagement is recommended. Also review the scenes with intense tones for optimal clarity. |
Dialogue and Emotional Impact: A Potential Disparity | While dialogue consistently scores highly, it doesn't always translate to equally high scores in Emotional Impact. Scenes with excellent dialogue could benefit from further refinement to ensure the words directly connect with the intended emotional response. Consider techniques such as subtext and carefully chosen vocabulary to bridge this gap. |
Late-Story Intensification | There is a clear trend toward higher scores across multiple metrics (Emotional Impact, Conflict, High Stakes) in the later half of the screenplay (scenes 40 onwards). This indicates a possible increase in narrative intensity towards the climax, which is generally desirable. However, consider whether the earlier scenes could benefit from similar levels of intensity to maintain audience engagement and avoid a slow start. |
Consistent High Concept Scores | The Concept score remains consistently high throughout the screenplay. While this is positive, it suggests the core premise is strong, it is possible the focus might shift to other aspects like plot development and emotional resonance to create even greater depth. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in creating atmospheric scenes with vivid imagery and emotional depth. The writer excels at conveying internal conflicts and building tension, particularly through descriptions and intense emotional moments. However, there's a recurring need for improvement in structuring scenes for maximum impact, strengthening dialogue to reveal more subtext and character motivations, and deepening character arcs beyond initial emotional presentations.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder | This book addresses scene structure, pacing, and character development—three key areas needing improvement, as identified in multiple scene analyses. |
Book | 'The Screenwriter's Bible' by David Trottier | Provides comprehensive guidance on screenplay structure, formatting, and overall craft, directly addressing the recurring need for improved scene construction and pacing. |
Screenplay | Screenplays by Aaron Sorkin (e.g., 'The Social Network') and Charlie Kaufman (e.g., 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind', 'Adaptation') | Sorkin's work showcases masterful dialogue, while Kaufman's explores complex themes and characters through unique storytelling approaches. Studying these contrasting styles can help the writer refine dialogue and character depth. |
Book | 'The Anatomy of Story' by John Truby | This provides deeper insights into character development and narrative structure, complementing the advice to develop more fully realized characters and improved scene structure. |
Video | Behind-the-scenes footage and interviews with directors known for strong visual storytelling and unique stylistic choices (e.g., David Lynch, Sofia Coppola, Pedro Almodóvar) | This can offer valuable insight into the visual techniques employed in creating compelling and atmospheric scenes, which the writer already demonstrates some aptitude for. |
Stories Similar to this one
Story | Explanation |
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Black Swan | Both stories explore the theme of transformation and the psychological toll of striving for perfection. The protagonist, like Elisabeth, grapples with her identity and the pressures of performance, leading to a dark and surreal journey of self-destruction. |
The Stepford Wives | This story shares themes of societal expectations and the pressure to conform to an idealized version of femininity. Both narratives involve characters who undergo transformations that highlight the dark side of beauty and perfection. |
The Hunger Games | Similar to Elisabeth's struggle for relevance and survival in a competitive environment, Katniss Everdeen faces the harsh realities of fame and the sacrifices required to maintain her status. Both stories critique the entertainment industry and societal values. |
The Devil Wears Prada | Both narratives feature a protagonist navigating the cutthroat world of fashion and media, dealing with the pressures of appearance and the sacrifices made for success. The contrast between public persona and private struggles is a central theme in both stories. |
Fight Club | Both stories delve into themes of identity, self-destruction, and the quest for authenticity in a superficial world. The transformation of the protagonist reflects a deeper commentary on societal expectations and personal conflict. |
The Invisible Man | This story explores themes of isolation, identity, and the consequences of transformation. Both protagonists experience a loss of self and struggle with the repercussions of their choices, leading to a dark and unsettling narrative. |
The Others | Both narratives involve characters grappling with their identities and the haunting consequences of their past actions. The psychological tension and themes of duality resonate throughout both stories. |
The Picture of Dorian Gray | Similar to Elisabeth's transformation and obsession with youth and beauty, Dorian Gray's story revolves around the consequences of vanity and the moral decay that accompanies the pursuit of eternal youth. |
Requiem for a Dream | Both stories depict the destructive nature of obsession and the pursuit of an idealized self. The characters' journeys highlight the psychological and physical toll of their choices, leading to tragic outcomes. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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The Price of Beauty | Elisabeth undergoes physical transformations and experiences pain in her pursuit of youth and beauty, ultimately leading to her downfall. | This trope explores the extreme lengths characters go to in order to achieve societal standards of beauty, often resulting in negative consequences. An example is in 'Black Swan,' where Nina's obsession with perfection leads to her mental and physical deterioration. |
Dual Identity | Elisabeth and Sue represent two sides of the same character, with Elisabeth embodying the past and Sue representing a new, idealized version. | This trope involves a character having two distinct identities, often leading to conflict. A classic example is 'Fight Club,' where the protagonist creates an alter ego to escape his mundane life. |
Body Horror | The transformation of Elisabeth and Sue involves grotesque physical changes, symbolizing their internal struggles. | Body horror focuses on the grotesque and disturbing changes to the human body, often reflecting psychological trauma. An example is 'The Fly,' where the protagonist's transformation into a fly symbolizes his loss of humanity. |
The Mentor's Downfall | Harvey, who represents the industry and its pressures, ultimately contributes to Elisabeth's decline. | This trope involves a mentor figure whose guidance leads to the protagonist's downfall. An example is in 'Whiplash,' where the mentor's extreme methods push the student to the brink. |
The Fall from Grace | Elisabeth's journey from a celebrated star to a neglected figure symbolizes the fleeting nature of fame. | This trope illustrates a character's decline from a position of power or respect to one of shame or failure. An example is 'The Wrestler,' where the protagonist struggles with the consequences of his past fame. |
The Unreliable Narrator | Elisabeth's perception of reality becomes distorted as she grapples with her identity and self-worth. | This trope involves a narrator whose credibility is compromised, leading to a skewed understanding of events. An example is 'Fight Club,' where the protagonist's mental state affects the narrative's reliability. |
The Mentor's Betrayal | Harvey's actions towards Elisabeth reveal a betrayal of trust, highlighting the cutthroat nature of the entertainment industry. | This trope involves a mentor figure betraying the protagonist, often leading to conflict. An example is in 'The Hunger Games,' where Haymitch's initial indifference contrasts with his eventual support. |
The Love Interest | The handsome male nurse serves as a brief romantic interest, adding complexity to Elisabeth's emotional state. | This trope involves a character who serves as a romantic interest, often influencing the protagonist's journey. An example is in '10 Things I Hate About You,' where the love interest helps the protagonist grow. |
The Tragic Flaw | Elisabeth's obsession with youth and beauty leads to her tragic downfall. | This trope involves a character's inherent flaw that leads to their demise. An example is in 'Macbeth,' where ambition drives the protagonist to ruin. |
The Dark Reflection | Sue serves as a dark reflection of Elisabeth, embodying her insecurities and desires. | This trope involves a character that mirrors the protagonist's flaws or fears, often leading to conflict. An example is in 'The Double,' where the protagonist confronts his doppelgänger. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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The Destructive Pursuit of Perfection | Elisabeth's relentless pursuit of youth and beauty, fueled by the pressures of the entertainment industry and her own insecurities, leads her down a path of self-destruction. This is symbolized by the 'Substance,' the artificial enhancement of her physical form, and her ultimate transformation into a monstrous being. | This theme explores the dangers of striving for an idealized image of perfection, particularly in a society obsessed with outward appearances. It highlights the emotional and physical toll of constantly chasing an unattainable goal. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening The Destructive Pursuit of Perfection:
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The Corrosive Nature of the Entertainment Industry | The screenplay portrays the entertainment industry as a ruthless machine that prioritizes youth, beauty, and profit over individual well-being. Elisabeth's declining fame and subsequent replacement showcase the industry's disposability and its impact on its performers. | This theme critiques the industry's superficiality, its pressure to conform to specific beauty standards, and its tendency to exploit and discard individuals when they are no longer considered valuable. | ||||||||||||
Identity and Self-Acceptance | Elisabeth grapples with her changing identity throughout the film, struggling to reconcile her public persona with her inner self. Her transformations highlight her continuous search for a sense of self-worth and belonging. | The theme explores the complexities of identity in relation to external pressures and the journey towards self-acceptance. The multiple iterations of Elisabeth—the original, Sue, and the final monstrous form—represent different facets of her identity and her struggle to find authentic self-expression. | ||||||||||||
The Fleeting Nature of Fame and Beauty | The film uses the decay of Elisabeth's Walk of Fame star as a visual metaphor for the ephemeral nature of fame and beauty. Her initial rise to stardom contrasts with her eventual decline, highlighting the transient nature of public admiration. | This theme emphasizes the impermanence of external validation and the need to find sources of self-worth beyond public perception. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is darkly comedic, visually striking, and intensely focused on the internal struggles of their characters against a backdrop of superficiality and societal pressures. It blends poetic imagery with gritty realism, sharp dialogue with introspective moments, and a cynical wit with moments of genuine emotional vulnerability. The style often employs jarring juxtapositions – high glamour contrasted with physical decay, vibrant energy against profound exhaustion, and outward success pitted against internal turmoil. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by establishing a unique atmosphere of unsettling tension and darkly humorous observation. This tone enhances the exploration of themes like the fleeting nature of fame, the anxieties of aging, the pressures of maintaining a public persona, and the complexities of identity and transformation. The distinctive style adds depth and complexity, making the characters relatable despite their extreme circumstances and pushing the narrative beyond a simple surface-level exploration of these themes. |
Best Representation Scene | 12 - The Matrix Within |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene best encapsulates the writer's voice because it perfectly blends several key stylistic elements. The stark visual imagery (dark bathroom, fluorescent serum) is powerfully evocative. The description of the physical transformation is visceral and disturbing, yet the underlying theme of self-acceptance adds a layer of emotional complexity. The juxtaposition of the painful transformation with the act of the younger self caring for the older self perfectly captures the central conflict of the story and the screenplay's overall tone of unsettling yet compelling drama. It exemplifies the blend of poetic, visually striking descriptions with a deep dive into a character's emotional turmoil, all hallmarks of the writer's distinctive style. |
- Overall originality score: 9
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay exhibits a high level of originality through its innovative exploration of themes such as fame, identity, and transformation. The use of grotesque imagery, body horror, and surreal elements, such as the character's physical disintegration and the metaphorical representations of self-image, contribute to a unique narrative that challenges conventional storytelling. The juxtaposition of characters like Elisabeth and Sue, along with their evolving identities, creates a rich tapestry of conflict and emotional depth that feels fresh and thought-provoking.
- Most unique situations: The most unique situations in the screenplay are the grotesque transformation of characters, such as Sue's physical breakdown and the surreal moment where MushofMonstroElisaSue achieves her goal only to dissolve into a bloody stain. Additionally, the use of medical imagery and the concept of 'switching' identities through injections and bodily manipulation present a novel take on self-acceptance and societal pressures.
- Overall unpredictability score: 8.5
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay maintains a strong sense of unpredictability through its unexpected character arcs and shocking visual elements. The transitions between moments of triumph and horror, particularly in the climactic scenes involving violence and transformation, keep the audience engaged and guessing. The surreal and often grotesque nature of the narrative, combined with the characters' internal struggles, leads to outcomes that defy typical genre conventions, enhancing the overall unpredictability of the story.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | Throughout the script, the protagonist, Elisabeth, evolves from a desire for external validation and perfection in the entertainment industry to an acceptance of her vulnerabilities and self-worth beyond societal standards. Initially, she seeks to maintain her fame and a façade of success, but as she confronts ageism, personal trauma, and identity crises, her internal goals shift towards self-acceptance, authenticity, and finding meaning in her existence. |
External Goals | Elisabeth's external goals transition from navigating the superficial demands of fame and fulfilling career expectations to seeking genuine connections and reclaiming her narrative in a world that often overlooks her. Initially focused on hosting successful shows and impressing industry figures, she later emphasizes her independence and personal fulfillment amidst tumultuous circumstances. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict is the tension between shallow fame and deeper self-awareness, represented by Elisabeth's battle between societal expectations of beauty and authenticity versus the acceptance of her true self and mortality. |
Character Development Contribution: The evolution of internal and external goals frames Elisabeth's development from a superficial quest for approval to a profound journey of self-discovery, highlighting her resilience as she confronts her trauma and the inevitable passage of time.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The interplay of goals and conflicts propels the narrative structure as Elisabeth's experiences and choices create a rich tapestry of tension, leading to pivotal plot points that ultimately define her character arc and resolution.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The outlined conflicts and goals deepen the screenplay’s themes of identity, perception, and the societal pressures women face, transcending mere narrative to engage in broader discussions about self-worth, aging, and the illusion of perfection.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay depicts a modern, possibly slightly futuristic, urban environment. Locations include a bustling city with the Hollywood Walk of Fame, television studios, a restaurant, various apartments (including one with a hidden room), a hospital, a cocktail lounge, a diner, and a decrepit hallway. The environments range from glamorous and high-tech to run-down and decaying, reflecting the characters' shifting states and the duality of the world.
- Culture: The dominant culture revolves around the entertainment industry, particularly television. Fame, beauty, youth, and the relentless pursuit of self-improvement are highly valued. There's a strong emphasis on appearance, with characters constantly judging and being judged based on their physical attributes. Ageism and sexism are prevalent. The importance of ratings and public perception underscores the superficiality and pressure within the industry. Elements of loneliness and the fleeting nature of fame are explored.
- Society: The societal structure is hierarchical, with power concentrated in the hands of network executives like Harvey and talent agents like Craig. The entertainment industry is presented as a competitive and cutthroat environment where success is temporary and replacement is constant. Social interactions are often superficial, marked by a lack of genuine connection. There's a subtle hint of a dystopian undercurrent with the introduction of 'The Substance' and the underlying pressure to maintain a perfect, youthful image, even resorting to extreme measures.
- Technology: Technological elements range from the ubiquitous cell phones and television production equipment to advanced medical technology, including syringes filled with experimental substances like 'The Substance' and 'Stabilizer,' DNA manipulation, and perfusion bags. These technologies facilitate both the characters' efforts at self-improvement and transformation, as well as their potential downfall. The contrast between advanced technology and the decay of certain environments highlights the uneven distribution and application of progress.
- Characters influence: The world's emphasis on youth and beauty directly impacts Elisabeth's actions and anxieties. She struggles with aging and the pressures to maintain her image, leading to her desperate pursuit of 'The Substance.' Harvey's actions are driven by the industry's demand for novelty and youth. Sue, as a result of her transformation, navigates a changed landscape with newfound confidence and ambition. The world's superficiality and competitiveness shape the characters' relationships, often marked by manipulation and self-preservation.
- Narrative contribution: The contrasting environments and technological advancements drive the narrative forward. Elisabeth's journey from fame to despair and her subsequent transformation serve as the central plot. The introduction of 'The Substance' creates suspense and mystery, leading to unexpected twists and escalating conflicts. The shifting locations reflect the characters' emotional and physical states, creating a dynamic and engaging narrative structure.
- Thematic depth contribution: The screenplay explores themes of aging, beauty, fame, identity, the price of success, and the nature of self-improvement. The contrast between the glamorous facade and the underlying darkness reveals the moral ambiguities and human cost of societal pressures. The use of 'The Substance' as a catalyst for transformation introduces philosophical questions about authenticity and the pursuit of perfection. The ultimately tragic journey of Elisabeth and Sue underscores the ephemeral nature of fame and the devastating consequences of sacrificing one's identity for external validation.
central conflict
The central conflict revolves around Elisabeth's struggle with aging, identity, and the desire for relevance in a superficial entertainment industry, leading to her drastic actions to reclaim her youth and beauty.
primary motivations
- Elisabeth's desire to maintain her fame and relevance in the entertainment industry.
- The pursuit of physical perfection and youthfulness.
- Sue's ambition to succeed and overshadow Elisabeth.
catalysts
- The injection of 'THE SUBSTANCE' that allows for transformation.
- Elisabeth's contract termination and the realization of her declining fame.
- The violent confrontation between Elisabeth and Sue that leads to drastic changes.
barriers
- Elisabeth's physical deterioration and emotional turmoil.
- Societal beauty standards and the pressure to conform.
- The internal conflict between Elisabeth and Sue for control over their shared body.
themes
- The superficiality of fame and beauty.
- The consequences of identity loss and transformation.
- The struggle for self-acceptance in a judgmental society.
stakes
The stakes include Elisabeth's identity, physical integrity, and mental health, as well as Sue's ambition and survival in the entertainment industry.
uniqueness factor
The story uniquely blends elements of body horror with a critique of celebrity culture, exploring the extremes individuals go to for acceptance and success.
audience hook
The transformation and duality of Elisabeth and Sue, along with the horror elements, create a compelling narrative that keeps viewers engaged.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradox lies in the pursuit of beauty leading to self-destruction, where the desire for perfection results in grotesque transformations and loss of identity.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
The concept of bisociation is evident in the juxtaposition of Elisabeth's former self and Sue's new identity, highlighting the conflict between authenticity and the facade of beauty.
Engine: Gemini
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Executive Summary
The Substance is a visually striking and conceptually ambitious screenplay with a unique premise. The script's strengths lie in its bold visuals, intriguing central concept, and strong performance opportunities for the lead. However, areas requiring improvement include pacing in certain sections and the need for clearer exposition to enhance audience understanding. Overall, the script's originality and potential for a visually captivating film make it a promising project with strong commercial potential.
- The screenplay's visual language is consistently strong, utilizing striking imagery and symbolic shots (e.g., the opening egg sequence, the Hollywood Walk of Fame star's deterioration, the dual-ball imagery) to create a distinct atmosphere and convey the film's themes. high ( Scene 1 (1) Scene 1 (2) Scene 12 (12) Scene 21 (21) )
- The central concept of the 'Substance' and its consequences for Elisabeth's identity and aging is unique and intriguing, providing a strong foundation for a compelling narrative. high ( Scene 1 )
- The screenplay offers rich opportunities for both visual effects and strong acting performances, particularly in the scenes depicting the physical and psychological transformation of the protagonist. high ( Scene 1 Scene 21 )
- The character arc of Elisabeth is complex and well-developed, exploring themes of aging, identity, and the relentless pursuit of youth. The duality of Elisabeth and Sue, and their conflicting desires and motivations, keeps the audience engaged. medium ( Scene 21 (21) Scene 21 (28) Scene 21 (37) )
- The script effectively uses juxtapositions – the fast-paced world of Hollywood against Elisabeth's aging, the vibrant 'Pump It Up' show against the decrepit secret room – to create compelling tension and underscore the film's themes. medium ( Scene 1 )
- The screenplay features several scenes marked as 'omitted.' These gaps disrupt the narrative flow and require filling with concrete plot points and scenes to fully realize the story and character arcs. high ( Scene 7 (7) Scene 23 (23) Scene 30 (30) Scene 34 (34) Scene 54 (54) Scene 58 (58) Scene 111 (111) Scene 149 (149) Scene 187 (187) Scene 213 (213) )
- The pacing feels uneven. Some scenes, particularly the exposition of the 'Substance' via the USB, could benefit from a more gradual reveal rather than an info-dump. The long stretches of dialogue in some scenes may also impede momentum. medium ( Scene 12 (12) Scene 120 (120) )
- While the visual storytelling is strong, the precise mechanics of the 'Substance' and the nature of the transformation need clearer explanation. The audience may struggle to fully grasp the biological and metaphysical implications if the details remain unclear. medium ( Scene 1 Scene 21 )
- Further development of the organization or individual behind the creation and distribution of the 'Substance' would enrich the narrative and provide a clearer antagonist. medium ( Scene 1 )
- The screenplay could benefit from more emotional depth in supporting characters. Giving Harvey and Craig more nuanced motivations and backstories would strengthen their roles and make them more compelling. low ( Scene 1 )
- The screenplay's use of symbolism is effective. The repeated use of imagery, like the dual egg yolks and the deteriorating Hollywood star, strengthens the thematic resonance. high ( Scene 1 )
- The body horror aspects are effectively integrated into the narrative, serving to both enhance the visual impact and deepen the exploration of the protagonist's physical and psychological transformation. high ( Scene 21 )
- The introduction of Fred provides a poignant contrast to Elisabeth's Hollywood life, emphasizing the passage of time and the ephemeral nature of fame. medium ( Scene 11 (11) )
- Pacing and Exposition The writer struggles with pacing and exposition. Important plot points and character motivations are introduced abruptly or unclearly. Several scenes are omitted, creating narrative gaps. The script would benefit from a thorough re-evaluation of pacing and clearer explanation of the 'Substance's' mechanics and its impact on the protagonist's body and mind. high
- Omitted Scenes The numerous 'omitted' scenes are a significant flaw, indicating a lack of fully developed plot points and scenes to flesh out the story. high
Engine: Claude
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Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'The Substance' is a visually striking, thematically complex, and tonally ambitious work that delves into the dark side of the entertainment industry and societal obsession with beauty and youth. The story's unique premise, blending elements of body horror and psychological drama, creates a compelling and unsettling narrative that explores themes of identity, ownership, and the consequences of unrestrained ambition. While the screenplay has some areas for improvement, its strong characterization, stylistic flourishes, and exploration of timely issues make it a compelling and noteworthy work that would be of interest to discerning audiences.
- The opening sequence, which establishes the film's unique visual style and thematic motifs through the symbolic imagery of the egg and yolks, is a striking and memorable introduction to the screenplay's exploration of duality, transformation, and the inherent tension between the 'perfect' and the 'imperfect'. high ( Scene 1 (2) )
- The introduction of the central conflict and power dynamics through the conversation between Elisabeth and the network director Harvey is a strong character-driven moment that effectively sets up the stakes and central tensions of the story. high ( Scene 3 (5) )
- The body horror sequences, where Elisabeth undergoes the physical transformation into Sue, are visceral, unsettling, and effectively convey the character's psychological and emotional turmoil through striking visual metaphors. high ( Scene 12 (21A) Scene 21 (21B) Scene 21 (21C) )
- The scenes exploring the deteriorating relationship between Elisabeth and Sue, including the escalating conflict and eventual violent confrontation, are well-executed and build to a climactic and thematically resonant conclusion. high ( Scene 25 (94) Scene 26 (96) )
- The screenplay's stylistic flourishes, such as the transitions between static shots in the opening sequence and the energetic, fast-paced editing of the 'Pump It Up' show scenes, effectively establish the film's distinct visual identity and heighten the underlying themes. medium ( Scene 1 (2) Scene 22 (82) )
- The hospital scene where Elisabeth breaks down after the car accident feels slightly rushed and could benefit from additional character development to fully convey the emotional impact of her situation. medium ( Scene 7 (10) )
- Some of the transitions between Elisabeth and Sue's storylines could be strengthened to maintain narrative flow and ensure the audience's investment in both character arcs. medium ( Scene 14 (31) Scene 16 (38) )
- The third act could be further developed to provide a more satisfying resolution to the central conflict and the character arcs, particularly in relation to Elisabeth's decision-making process and ultimate fate. medium ( Scene 43 (159) Scene 44 (162) )
- Certain plot points, such as Elisabeth's reaction to the news of her show's cancellation and her initial encounter with the mysterious USB stick, could be further explored to provide a stronger foundation for the subsequent narrative developments. medium ( Scene 7 (10) Scene 8 (11) )
- The screenplay could benefit from additional scenes or moments that delve deeper into Elisabeth's internal experience and psychological state as she grapples with the consequences of her decisions and the deterioration of her physical self. medium ( Scene 29 (113) Scene 30 (114) )
- The opening sequence's use of symbolic imagery, such as the egg yolks and the visual metaphor of duplication and transformation, is a strong and thematically relevant storytelling device that sets the tone for the screenplay. high ( Scene 1 (2) )
- The depiction of the 'Pump It Up' show, with its energetic dance sequences and stylized visual presentation, effectively captures the over-the-top, hyper-sexualized nature of the entertainment industry and its impact on the characters. high ( Scene 22 (82) Scene 23 (83) )
- The screenplay's use of the motorcycle imagery and sound design as a recurring motif to represent the characters' psychological and emotional states is a compelling narrative device that adds depth and resonance to the story. medium ( Scene 47 (194) )
- Characterization While the screenplay provides strong, well-defined character arcs for both Elisabeth and Sue, there may be opportunities to further develop the supporting characters, such as Harvey and the other industry figures, to create a more fully realized and nuanced portrayal of the entertainment world and its power structures. medium
- Pacing The screenplay's pacing can feel uneven at times, with some sequences (such as the hospital scene) feeling slightly rushed, while others (such as the body horror transformations) are drawn out to great effect. A more consistent and purposeful approach to pacing could help maintain audience engagement throughout the entire narrative. medium
- Dialogue Tags The screenplay occasionally includes unnecessary dialogue tags, such as 'she said' or 'he replied', which can disrupt the flow of the dialogue and appear amateurish. Minimizing the use of these tags, except when absolutely necessary for clarity, would improve the readability and professionalism of the script. low
- Formatting While the overall formatting of the screenplay is clean and consistent, there are a few instances where the formatting could be improved, such as the use of consistent indentation for character names and the proper formatting of action lines. Ensuring the script adheres to industry standards would further enhance its professional presentation. low
Engine: GPT4
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Executive Summary
The screenplay 'The Substance' presents a compelling narrative that explores themes of identity, beauty, and the consequences of societal pressures through the lens of a woman who undergoes a drastic transformation. The character arcs are well-developed, particularly the duality of Elisabeth and Sue, which creates a rich tapestry of conflict and resolution. However, there are areas that could benefit from tightening, particularly in pacing and clarity of certain plot points. Overall, it is a thought-provoking piece that resonates with contemporary issues.
- The opening scenes effectively set the tone and establish the central themes of transformation and societal expectations through vivid imagery and symbolism. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (1) Scene Sequence number 2 (3) )
- The character development of Elisabeth is compelling, showcasing her internal struggles and the impact of external pressures on her identity. high ( Scene Sequence number 3 (10) )
- The screenplay's ability to intertwine horror elements with emotional depth creates a gripping narrative that keeps the audience engaged. high ( Scene Sequence number 4 (12) )
- The climax effectively heightens the tension and stakes, leading to a powerful resolution that leaves a lasting impact. high ( Scene Sequence number 5 (47) )
- The use of visual metaphors and symbolism throughout the screenplay enhances the thematic depth and emotional resonance. medium ( Scene Sequence number 6 (165) )
- Some scenes feel rushed, particularly in the transition between key plot points, which can disrupt the overall pacing. high ( Scene Sequence number 7 (8) )
- Certain character motivations could be more clearly defined to enhance audience understanding and connection. medium ( Scene Sequence number 8 (10) )
- The dialogue occasionally lacks natural flow, which can detract from character authenticity. medium ( Scene Sequence number 9 (12) )
- Some plot threads, particularly regarding secondary characters, feel underdeveloped and could benefit from further exploration. medium ( Scene Sequence number 10 (47) )
- The ending, while impactful, could be more cohesive to ensure that all thematic elements are resolved satisfactorily. high ( Scene Sequence number 11 (165) )
- A deeper exploration of the consequences of the transformation on Elisabeth's relationships would add emotional weight. high ( Scene Sequence number 12 (47) )
- More background on the societal pressures faced by the characters could enhance the narrative's relevance. medium ( Scene Sequence number 13 (165) )
- The screenplay could benefit from a clearer exposition of the rules surrounding 'The Substance' to avoid confusion. medium ( Scene Sequence number 14 (47) )
- A more defined antagonist or opposing force could heighten the stakes and conflict throughout the story. medium ( Scene Sequence number 15 (165) )
- The emotional resolution for Elisabeth could be more pronounced to provide a satisfying conclusion to her arc. high ( Scene Sequence number 16 (165) )
- The screenplay's commentary on beauty standards and the lengths individuals go to achieve them is both timely and relevant. high ( Scene Sequence number 17 (165) )
- The visual storytelling, particularly the use of metaphors and symbolism, is a standout feature that enhances the narrative. high ( Scene Sequence number 18 (165) )
- The duality of the main character's identity creates a rich narrative layer that invites audience reflection. high ( Scene Sequence number 19 (165) )
- The screenplay's ability to blend horror with emotional depth creates a unique viewing experience. medium ( Scene Sequence number 20 (165) )
- The climax effectively raises the stakes and leads to a powerful resolution that resonates with the audience. high ( Scene Sequence number 21 (165) )
- Character Motivation The motivations of secondary characters are often unclear, which can detract from the overall narrative. For example, the motivations behind Harvey's actions could be more fleshed out to enhance the conflict. medium
- Dialogue Naturalness Some dialogue feels forced or unnatural, particularly in moments of high tension. For instance, certain exchanges between Elisabeth and Sue could benefit from more organic flow. medium
Memorable lines in the script:
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50 | ELISABETH: GET OUT!! GET THE FUCK OUT OF HERE!!!! |
15 | HARVEY: I WANT YOU for this show. So we’ll organize around whatever mother, brother, fucking sick dog or rabbit you need to take care of. |
43 | ELISABETH: NOOOOOOO..... |
33 | MAN: It gets harder each time to remember that you still deserve to exist... |
3 | HARVEY: I don’t give a fuck what we promised her! This is TV, not a charity! So find me somebody NEW. NOW. |