Sherlock Holmes
Executive Summary
Overview
Genres: Mystery, Thriller, Action, Crime, Drama, Romance, Historical, Adventure
Setting: 1891, London, primarily in the streets, the Thames Embankment, the Tower of London, and various industrial sites.
Overview: In a dark and icy London, Dr. John Watson discovers a mysterious set of footprints leading to a sewer, where he and the brilliant detective Sherlock Holmes confront the sinister Lord Blackwood during a dark ritual. As the story unfolds, Holmes grapples with his emotional detachment while investigating Blackwood's occult practices and his ambitions for power. The narrative weaves through various encounters, including Watson's impending marriage and the complexities of his friendship with Holmes. The climax builds as Holmes and Watson race against time to thwart Blackwood's malevolent plans, culminating in a dramatic confrontation that tests their partnership and resolve.
Themes: The Nature of Good vs. Evil, The Importance of Reason and Logic vs. Superstition and the Occult, The Changing Landscape of Victorian London, The Dynamics of Friendship and Partnership, The Complexity of Human Nature, The Power of Deception and Manipulation
Conflict and Stakes: The primary conflict revolves around Holmes and Watson's efforts to stop Lord Blackwood from executing a sinister plan that threatens the Queen and the stability of London, with personal stakes involving Watson's safety and Holmes's moral dilemmas.
Overall Mood: Tense and suspenseful, with moments of dark humor and romance.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 3: The mood is tense and suspenseful as Holmes navigates the dark sewer tunnel, facing imminent danger.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The incorporation of supernatural elements and occult themes into the traditional detective narrative.
- Plot Twist: The revelation of Blackwood's escape from execution and his sinister plans involving a secret society.
- Distinctive Setting: The atmospheric depiction of Victorian London, with its dark streets, industrial sites, and iconic landmarks.
- Character Dynamics: The complex relationship between Holmes and Irene Adler, blending romance with tension.
Comparable Scripts:
- Sherlock Holmes (2009)
- The Prestige (2006)
- From Hell (2001)
- Penny Dreadful (TV Series)
- The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen (2003)
- The Woman in Black (2012)
- The Secret of Sherlock Holmes (1987)
- Sleepy Hollow (1999)
- The Illusionist (2006)
Writing Style:
The screenplay exhibits a versatile writing style, drawing inspiration from various sources, but with a strong core foundation in classic detective fiction and a penchant for suspenseful narratives. While exhibiting stylistic diversity across different scenes, a consistent thread of intrigue, complex character dynamics, and intellectual challenges permeates the entire work.
Style Similarities:
- Arthur Conan Doyle
- Agatha Christie
- Christopher Nolan
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: The screenplay for "Sherlock Holmes" is a well-crafted blend of action, mystery, and character development. It effectively balances the archetypical Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson dynamic with a compelling, high-stakes narrative involving the resurrection of the villainous Lord Blackwood. The screenplay showcases clever plot twists, rich historical context, and impressive production value. While it has a few areas for improvement, the overall narrative is engaging, the characters are well-developed, and the screenplay would make for an exciting and visually stunning feature film.
USP: This screenplay stands out in the detective genre by blending traditional elements of Sherlock Holmes with modern action and character dynamics. The unique portrayal of Holmes as both a brilliant detective and a flawed human being adds depth to the character, making him relatable to contemporary audiences. The incorporation of supernatural elements, while grounded in science, provides a fresh twist that keeps viewers engaged.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$30-50 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 18-54, fans of mystery, thriller, and historical dramas, particularly those interested in adaptations of classic literature.
Marketability: The screenplay features a well-known literary character, a blend of action, mystery, and romance, appealing to a broad audience.
The unique blend of historical context with supernatural elements and strong character dynamics can attract diverse viewers.
The film's themes of friendship and loyalty resonate with audiences, while the action-packed sequences can draw in younger viewers.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, given the established popularity of Sherlock Holmes and the potential for franchise development, along with merchandising opportunities.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is characterized by sharp, witty dialogue, vivid descriptions, and a blend of tension and humor that creates an engaging atmosphere. The narrative style is dynamic, often shifting between fast-paced action and introspective moments, allowing for a rich exploration of character emotions and motivations. The use of atmospheric details enhances the mood, immersing the audience in the dark and mysterious world of Victorian London.
Best representation: Scene 3 - Ritual in the Shadows. This scene is the best representation because it encapsulates the writer's unique voice through its dynamic action, vivid imagery, and sharp dialogue. The tension and urgency are palpable, showcasing the writer's ability to create an immersive atmosphere while highlighting the protagonist's character traits and motivations.
Memorable Lines:
- Holmes: The game is afoot. (Scene 27)
- Blackwood: London will be ours. And with it the Empire. A new Empire -- not this pallid, timid, partial thing we have now. (Scene 35)
- Watson: I can’t believe I’ve actually managed to surprise you. I thought you would’ve deduced it weeks ago. (Scene 6)
- Blackwood: We’ll meet again, my dear. I promise. (Scene 4)
- Blackwood: How does it feel to realize that everything you thought about the world is utterly wrong? To see your beloved reason and logic annihilated before your very eyes. (Scene 36)
Characters
Sherlock Holmes:A brilliant but disheveled detective known for his keen observational skills and logical reasoning.
Dr. John Watson:Holmes's loyal friend and confidant, a war veteran who provides a moral compass and emotional support.
Irene Adler:A clever and resourceful woman with a complicated relationship with Holmes, involved in a dangerous plot.
Lord William Blackwood:The main antagonist, a sinister figure with dark ambitions and ties to the occult.
Inspector Lestrade:A Scotland Yard inspector who often collaborates with Holmes but struggles with the complexities of the cases.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Midnight Arrival | Suspenseful, Dark, Intense | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 6 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
2 - Footprints in the Fog | Suspenseful, Intense, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Echoes in the Dark | Suspenseful, Intense, Dark | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - Ritual in the Shadows | Dark, Intense, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
5 - Recognition in the Fog | Suspenseful, Dark, Intense | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
6 - Clash of Worlds | Melancholic, Reflective, Surprised | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 8 | 4 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
7 - A Night of Awkward Encounters | Awkward, Observant, Intense, Emotional | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - The Fight for Solace | Intense, Gritty, Dark, Thrilling | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
9 - A Call to Action | Dark, Mysterious, Intense, Suspenseful | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Dawn of Reckoning | Dark, Intense, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Confrontation at Dawn | Tense, Dark, Foreboding, Intense | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
12 - The Execution at Tower Green | Tense, Dark, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - A Rainy Reunion at Baker Street | Suspenseful, Intense, Confrontational, Mysterious, Witty | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - Diverging Paths | Tense, Dark, Mysterious, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
15 - Unearthing the Dark Secrets | Suspenseful, Mysterious, Dark | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
16 - Murder at Blackwood Crypt | Mysterious, Suspenseful, Analytical, Dark, Witty | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - A Generous Interlude in the East End | Suspenseful, Dark, Intriguing, Gritty | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Daffodils and Deductions | Suspenseful, Cynical, Intriguing, Tense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - A Dangerous Discovery | Suspenseful, Intense, Mysterious, Action-packed | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
20 - Chaos in the Attic | Tense, Suspenseful, Violent, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - The Chaotic Pursuit | Intense, Suspenseful, Fast-paced, Dramatic | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
22 - Chase at the Ironworks | Intense, Suspenseful, Chaotic, Dangerous | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
23 - The Confrontation at the Fabrication Shed | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
24 - Chaos at the Launch | Tense, Chaotic, Suspenseful, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
25 - Narrow Escape at the Slipway | Tense, Chaotic, Dangerous, Intense, Suspenseful | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
26 - Clues from the Carriage Wreck | Investigative, Intense, Analytical, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - A Razor's Edge | Tense, Suspenseful, Chaotic, Dangerous, Intense | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
28 - The Disguised Intruder | Tense, Intriguing, Suspenseful, Mysterious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Tension and Temptation | Tense, Passionate, Confrontational, Seductive | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - A Handcuffed Affair | Intimate, Tense, Playful | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - A Fork in the Road | Tense, Suspenseful, Mysterious, Intense, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
32 - A Night of Decisions | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic, Dangerous | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - Midnight Convergence | Tense, Suspenseful, Intense, Dramatic, Humorous | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
34 - The Disguised Intrusion | Tense, Suspenseful, Dangerous, Intense, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - Chaos in the Warehouse | Eerie, Tense, Shocking, Awe-inspiring, Chaotic | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - The Labyrinth of Shadows | Tense, Eerie, Surreal, Chaotic, Intense | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - Tense Standoff at the Wharf | Tense, Eerie, Dangerous, Exciting | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
38 - Inferno at the Wharf | Tense, Eerie, Desperate, Vulnerable, Terrified | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
39 - A Tenuous Connection | Tense, Emotional, Mysterious, Regretful | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
40 - A Moment of Resolve | Tense, Anguished, Hopeful, Admiration | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
41 - Frustration at Scotland Yard | Tense, Frustrated, Disappointed, Serious | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
42 - A Desperate Plea and Unbreakable Bond | Tense, Desperate, Chaotic, Reflective, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
43 - The Distraction of Genius | Tense, Suspenseful, Melancholic, Hopeful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
44 - The Hidden Dock | Tense, Suspenseful, Determined, Intense | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
45 - Unexpected Alliances | Tense, Dangerous, Suspenseful, Mysterious, Intense | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
46 - Holmes's Urgent Search at Tower Bridge | Tense, Suspenseful, Chaotic, Desperate, Eerie | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
47 - The Vanishing Act | Tense, Desperate, Defeated, Chaos | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
48 - The Hidden Threat at Traitor's Gate | Tense, Eerie, Desperate, Chaotic, Melodious | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
49 - A Stealthy Intrusion | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
50 - The Rise of Darkness | Tense, Dark, Suspenseful, Menacing, Triumphant | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
51 - A Timely Rescue | Tense, Suspenseful, Dark, Exciting | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
52 - Race Against Time | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Intense | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
53 - Chaos at the White Tower | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
54 - Race Against Time at Tower Bridge | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
55 - Clash at Tower Bridge | Intense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Tense, Emotional | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
56 - Secrets on Tower Bridge | Tense, Romantic, Suspenseful | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
57 - The Thames Confrontation | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Romantic | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
58 - A Bittersweet Farewell on Tower Bridge | Tense, Dramatic, Romantic, Suspenseful | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | |
59 - The Great Escape Unveiled | Tense, Suspenseful, Dramatic, Mysterious, Intense | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
60 - A Night of Generosity and Connection | Tense, Romantic, Humorous | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 |
Scene 1 - Midnight Arrival
by
Mike Johnson
Story by
Lionel Wigram
Based on the books by
Sir Arthur Conan Doyle
Current Revisions by
Anthony Peckham
First Draft revisions March 14, 2008
"Sherlock Holmes"
OVER BLACK.
A furious clatter of hooves approaching.
EXT. STREETS OF LONDON - NIGHT
Dark, icy streets seen through the sooty glass of a GAS
STREET LAMP -- shadows within shadows.
Gas hisses audibly, the lamp ignites, casts a POOL OF
LIGHT ...
... through which a TWO-HORSE CARRIAGE hurtles ...
... moving fast enough to keep pace with the street lamps
as they ignite in sequence, as if the furious momentum of
the carriage causes London to light up in its wake.
SUPERIMPOSE: "London 1891"
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Scene 2 - Footprints in the Fog
Almost tipping over, the carriage turns onto the Thames
Embankment, hurtles through the writhing fog along the
icy river.
We catch a GLIMPSE OF A FACE scanning the embankment from
under the canvas roof of the carriage, and then the
carriage locks its brakes and fishtails to a hard stop.
The steaming horses -- one black, one bay -- whinny and
buck.
DR. JOHN WATSON leaps out, runs back through the snow
along the embankment. Late 20’s, early 30’s, he is a
wiry, sun-battered veteran of the Afghanistan campaigns,
with eyes that have seen plenty.
CUT TO:
DOWN RIVER, two ponderous POLICE CARRIAGES make the turn
onto the embankment, following Watson.
CUT TO:
Watson stops when he reaches a SINGLE SET OF FOOTPRINTS
in the snow, vanishing over the edge of the Embankment,
with no trace on the frozen snow-covered river ten feet
below.
Watson’s footprints partner the first set as he follows
them to the edge.
CUT TO:
ANGLE FROM THE RIVER: Watson stands over a GAPING SEWER
ENTRANCE in the Embankment wall.
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Scene 3 - Echoes in the Dark
Almost invisible in the gloom of the sewer we see the
whip-like silhouette of SHERLOCK HOLMES.
Holmes raises his hand until his pistol is pointing
straight up and fires a single shot; the instant he does,
he drops to the ground and rolls sideways. He is very
quick.
Two gunshots immediately ring out from the darkness up
ahead, both slamming into the brickwork where HOLMES was
standing; they are followed by six audible footsteps.
Holmes aims his gun towards the muzzle flash, counts six
beats, shoots. A groan, and someone collapses. Holmes
swarms his fallen target --
HOLMES
Where is he?
-- sees that the man is past answering. Then suddenly,
far down the tunnel, we hear white-hot screaming. A
woman. An ugly sound.
Holmes takes the man's bowler hat and places it on his
own head, significantly changing his silhouette ...
... which melts into the blackness of the tunnel as he
heads fast towards the sound of the scream.
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Scene 4 - Ritual in the Shadows
Catwalks meet above an island of stonework at the
junction of several sewers. A good place for bad things.
A YOUNG WOMAN lies on the stone island, a splash of white
lit by flaming torches. She isn’t screaming any more.
Her eyes are wide, perhaps in shock, perhaps drugged.
PULL BACK to reveal that she lies at the CENTER OF A
PENTANGLE painted crudely on the masonry. OCCULT SYMBOLS
encircle her body, and demarcate each corner of the
pentangle. Strange, disturbing, ancient shapes.
THE SHADOW OF A MAN (BLACKWOOD) kneels at the edge of the
pentangle. Lips moving as he murmurs incantations, he
moves to the next corner of the pentangle.
CUT TO:
ON THE CATWALKS ABOVE, THREE HARD MEN in bowler hats
stand guard over this ceremony. They turn fast when they
hear watery footsteps approaching from one of the
tunnels.
Man #1 cocks his gun ... sees a figure in the darkness,
bowler hat on head.
MAN #1
Dez?
A mumbled affirmative returns down the tunnel. Relaxing,
Man #1 uncocks his gun...
... and is felled by a clinical right cross from HOLMES
as he explodes into the junction.
Hard core hand-to-hand combat, one against three. The
bowler-hatted men fight with fanatic intensity.
Holmes fights with cold control, using a lethal -- and
very modern -- mix of martial arts, boxing and street
fighting.
CUT TO:
Except for one quick glance up at the fight on the
catwalk, Blackwood stays focused on his ritual, but
murmurs faster.
CUT TO:
Holmes is now fighting just two, then one -- not
realizing that there is a FOURTH BOWLER-HATTED HEAVY
creeping down the catwalk behind him.
THE HEAVY draws his gun, to shoot Holmes in the back.
CLICK! Sound like a billiard ball hitting a coconut.
Holmes whirls as the fourth heavy sags unconscious --
-- to reveal Watson behind him, brandishing a SHORT STICK
(18 inch hardwood club).
The men share a look. For the first time, we get a clear
look at Holmes’ face. Holmes is shining, magnificent,
wholly alive.
HOLMES
Excellent timing, as always.
CUT TO:
LORD BLACKWOOD rises from his knees. A few years older
than Holmes and Watson, Blackwood radiates wealth and
dark power. A formidable creature. His piercing eyes
shine with reptilian anticipation.
He steps into the pentangle, stands over the woman. It
looks as if this ritual is almost complete.
CUT TO:
As the final thug charges, Holmes swings off the catwalk,
and -- CLICK! -- the thug meets Watson’s short stick
instead.
CUT TO:
Blackwood reaches down. His RUBY RING sparkles as he
moves to caress her face --
-- and Holmes tackles Blackwood, driving him out of the
pentangle.
BLACKWOOD
You spoiled it.
Something horrible happens behind Blackwood’s eyes. A
psychotic flash that brings Holmes up short, for a
moment.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
No matter. The Dark One has the
others. You weren’t quick enough
to save any of them.
The girl has snapped out of her trance, and is backing
away from them as best she can.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
I wonder if you see their agony
when you close your eyes at night.
The cruel words seemingly have no effect on Holmes.
But Watson charges at Blackwood, lays into him with his
fists. Hammers him. Blackwood sags to his knees.
Holmes grabs Watson, pulls him off.
HOLMES
It’s over.
A bubbling, derisive laugh from Blackwood.
BLACKWOOD
Is it?
Holmes ignores him, sees something up on the catwalk.
HOLMES
Hello Inspector.
LONDON POLICEMAN swarm into the junction, lead by
INSPECTOR LESTRADE, a man who makes up for any
shortcomings with sheer doggedness.
LESTRADE
Thank you, Holmes. Thank you,
Doctor. I wish I’d come to you
sooner.
HOLMES
So do I.
Lestrade reddens and proceeds to handcuff Blackwood, to
cover up his annoyance.
Behind them, the girl is helped onto a stretcher by two
policemen, and carried away.
Blackwood watches the girl, eyes glittering.
BLACKWOOD
We’ll meet again, my dear. I
promise.
Watson lunges at Blackwood again. Holmes holds him back.
HOLMES
Turn your back on it.
WATSON
He killed at least seven women.
How can you be so detached?
HOLMES
Emotion is the enemy of reason.
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Scene 5 - Recognition in the Fog
Holmes and Watson walk along the freezing embankment
towards their carriage.
WATSON
We should charge Scotland Yard for
the help we give them.
(MORE)
WATSON (CONT'D)
Especially since they take the
credit half the time.
HOLMES
Yes, but we have all the fun.
Holmes opens the carriage door and climbs in. He’s done.
Watson joins him.
The carriage moves away slowly, disappears into the
winter fog.
DISSOLVE TO:
EXT. LONDON - ESTABLISHING - DAY
Winter has become spring in the greatest city on Earth.
Center of the Empire, birthplace of the Industrial
Revolution, London is rich, fast, dirty and exciting.
Raw materials -- coal, iron, rubber, lumber -- stream up
the crowded Thames and are transformed into luxuries and
necessities. Everywhere you look, something is being
built, or torn down to be re-built, bigger and better.
Houses, stadiums, palaces, bridges, boats, trains.
Along with this modernizing clamor, we see the rebirth of
spiritualism. Billboards for seances and mentalists,
upscale astrologer offices “By Appointment to Her Royal
Highness”, palm readers on the streets, fakirs on
soapboxes, shops selling Ouija boards, tarot cards and
black candles.
Superstition and self-confidence combine to make Holmes’
London the thundering city it is.
Everyone has something to do, somewhere to go, a fortune
to make or break. Energy and optimism are the name of
the game --
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Scene 6 - Clash of Worlds
-- except in 221B Baker St., a big, messy two-bedroom
apartment where Holmes languishes on a sofa, clothes a
wrinkled mess.
Holmes is unkempt, unshaven, dull-eyed. Evidence of a
long period of self-medication in the form of several
empty whisky bottles under the sofa.
Unpaid bills are impaled on a bowie knife, which has been
plunged into the wooden mantle over the fireplace.
Bullet holes in the wood panelling spell out “VR”, a
drunken commemoration of Queen Victoria’s birthday.
Art, animal skins and strange objects from the far
reaches of the Empire abound. This is a bohemian
bachelor pad, Victorian-style.
Holmes’ eyes hardly move as WATSON ENTERS, carrying an
exquisitely wrapped and tied SHIRT BOX.
WATSON
It’s time to get up.
Watson is happy, cheerful and determined. The contrast
between the two men couldn’t be greater.
HOLMES
(sighing)
What’s the point? Crime is
ordinary. Life is ordinary. This
world is ... ordinary. And I have
no place in it.
WATSON
Oh come on, we’ve been through
this before. You need another
case, that’s all.
(beat)
Blackwood dies tomorrow, by the
way.
Holmes couldn’t care less. Watson tosses the shirt box
onto Holmes.
WATSON (CONT’D)
New shirts.
Holmes shoves the box aside, peevishly. Watson goes to
the door, opens it, shouts downstairs.
WATSON (CONT’D)
(shouting)
A bath please, Mrs. Hudson. And
some coffee. Strong.
HOLMES
Don’t bother. Really.
WATSON
You promised to meet Mary tonight,
and I’m holding you to it.
Holmes levers himself upright.
HOLMES
You wouldn’t?!
WATSON
Oh yes I would. I’ve decided.
I’m going to marry her. I want
you to meet before I propose.
Holmes is quite literally stunned. This is the last
thing he was expecting.
WATSON (CONT’D)
(pleased with
himself)
I can’t believe I’ve actually
managed to surprise you. I
thought you would’ve deduced it
weeks ago.
Holmes shakes his head, no. As brilliant as he is, he’s
useless when it comes to everyday things like this.
HOLMES
But why get married?!
Now it’s Watson’s turn to be taken aback.
WATSON
Because it’s what people do.
Settle down.
HOLMES
Not necessarily.
WATSON
Ordinary people.
HOLMES
I’ve never thought of you as
ordinary.
WATSON
That’s exactly what I am. An
ordinary doctor. I’m going to set
up my practice and earn enough to
lead a nice, normal life with
Mary.
Now, Holmes almost looks angry.
WATSON (CONT’D)
Aren’t you going to congratulate
me?
Holmes levers himself to his feet --
HOLMES
Congratulations.
-- and stalks out.
WATSON
(calling after him)
Eight sharp, at The Royale.
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Scene 7 - A Night of Awkward Encounters
A romantic French restaurant in a fine hotel. Almost
every table is occupied by happy couples, or groups. The
kind of place you take the woman you want to marry to
meet a difficult friend. Unless the difficult friend
doesn’t show up.
We find Watson and MARY MORSTAN seated at a table made up
for three. Watson has run out of patience.
WATSON
We’ll just eat without him.
MARY
Let’s wait a little longer.
Mary is a pretty, well-turned-out woman in her mid-20’s.
Not spoiled, not silly, not ephemeral. A clear-eyed,
modern woman -- with whom Watson is very much in love.
MARY (CONT’D)
I think it’s important that I meet
him.
WATSON
So do I. Evidently Holmes
disagrees.
But a ripple through the room pulls their attention to
the entrance -- where Holmes stands, looking out over the
crowded room. He has shaved, he has dressed, his hair is
overlong, but clean and corralled.
ON HOLMES as he looks across a sea of happy faces. He
was more at home fighting in the sewer than he is in the
Royale.
He finds Watson and Mary, and crosses the restaurant
towards them, with the air of a wolf moving through a
flock of sheep. All eyes on him.
Mary suddenly looks a little nervous.
WATSON
We’d almost given up on you.
HOLMES
(clearly a lie)
I had trouble with my tie.
WATSON
May I present Miss Mary Morstan.
Mary extends her hand.
MARY
I’ve heard so much about you.
Holmes leans down, takes Mary’s hand, awkwardly.
HOLMES
And I ... um I ...
Holmes’ failed attempt at small-talk becomes not-such-
polite scrutiny. Still holding her hand, he examines
Mary with a prolonged, acute gaze.
Mary shifts, doesn’t know what to do.
Watson clears his throat. Holmes realizes what he’s
doing, releases Mary’s hand immediately.
HOLMES
Yes, well ... I’m glad to see that
you didn’t punish your student
today. It never worked on me.
Mary is stunned by Holmes’ insight. Watson sighs.
WATSON
Why don’t you sit.
But Holmes feels compelled to explain, not sit.
HOLMES
Watson told me you’re a governess.
MARY
Yes, I am.
HOLMES
Your student’s a boy of 8.
MARY
Charlie’s 7, actually.
HOLMES
Then he’s tall for his age. He
flicked ink at you today.
MARY
(horrified)
Is there ink on my face?
WATSON
No, your face is perfect.
HOLMES
There are two tiny drops on your
ear. Almost invisible.
(trying to soften the
blow)
India blue’s nearly impossible to
wash off, anyway.
WATSON
Please sit down.
MARY
How do you know I didn’t punish
him?
HOLMES
Well, because --
And then Holmes notices Watson glaring at him.
HOLMES
-- perhaps I should sit down.
Holmes sits.
MARY
I’d like to know. Really.
Holmes shoots Watson an apologetic look, but he’s in too
deep to stop.
HOLMES
Your necklace and bracelet are
matched South African diamonds
from Asprey’s, flawless. Not ...
(beat)
... not the jewels of a governess.
The lady you work for lent them to
you. She wouldn’t’ve done so if
you’d punished her son, not even
if he deserved it -- human nature
being what it is.
Mary is beet red with embarrassment.
WATSON
(angry)
Some human nature is
unaccountable. In my professional
opinion.
MARY
Well ... I did ask.
Holmes and Watson sit in silence. Watson’s anger brings
out the haughty worst in the detective. The awkwardness
is rescued when the WAITER arrives with three menus.
WAITER
Mam’selle, messieurs ...
Watson and Mary read their menus together. Holmes does
not. Instead, he looks at Watson and Mary deciding what
to eat. They look every inch the happy couple.
Holmes looks around at the room.
HOLMES POV: happy couples eating, laughing, talking.
Suddenly, Holmes hears no words. He just sees their
mouths moving. The sound of silverware clinking and
scraping on fine china rises to an orchestral roar.
WATSON
(sharply)
Holmes!
Holmes jerks back to reality.
WATSON (CONT’D)
Would you like to order?
The waiter stands, poised. Holmes discovers that he is
sweating.
HOLMES
Perhaps ... Excuse me. My
appetite ...
Holmes bolts, unable to stay in the Royale a second
longer. Mary is visibly concerned.
MARY
Was it something I said?
WATSON
No, it was something I said.
OVER, WE HEAR the roar of a BLOOD-THIRSTY MOB and the
MEATY THUD of a fist smashing into a face.
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Scene 8 - The Fight for Solace
Holmes staggers back from the blow. He tastes his own
blood from a split lip. It interests him.
This isn’t just a fight for Holmes, it’s an exorcism.
He is stripped to the waist, all sinew and gristle. His
opponent, McMURDO -- huge but flabby -- bangs his fists
together and moves in.
Bets rage back and forth through the pressing crowd, deep
in the flesh-pits of London.
Holmes' hawk-sharp gaze darts down from McMurdo's face to
his muscles as they flex, giving him just enough warning
to move his head so that a punch grazes him.
McMurdo throws a storm of punches, most of which Holmes
ducks or blocks. He throws nothing in return, sometimes
even drops his hand, just using his reflexes to protect
himself.
Frustrated, McMurdo steps on Holmes’ foot, traps him --
-- knocks Holmes down with a thunderous right.
GO IN ON HOLMES’ BATTERED FACE, pressed into the dirt.
He is smiling. This is just what he needed. This is his
therapy.
Holmes rolls over, sits up, shakes his head to clear the
cobwebs.
HOLMES
Thank you.
MCMURDO
For what?
Holmes gets up.
HOLMES
You won. Well done.
MCMURDO
Done? We’re not done. Not until
you can’t move, pretty boy.
McMurdo advances on Holmes -- who backs away.
HOLMES
You don’t want to do this.
MCMURDO
‘Course I do.
HOLMES
Trust me. You don’t.
MCMURDO
Shut your yap and fight.
His huge fist whistles past Holmes ear. Holmes sighs ...
... and DESTROYS MCMURDO with three blows, so quickly and
so emphatically, that for a moment, the crowd goes
silent.
Until Holmes gives them a shrug, as if to say “I tried”.
Then, the place goes wild.
EXT. BARE-KNUCKLE BOXING RING - NIGHT
Laughing, waving good night to fellow fighters and flirty
barmaids, Holmes strides out of the boxing hall, battered
outside, soothed inside. He has a BOTTLE OF BOOZE in his
hand.
A PALM READER reaches out to Holmes.
PALM READER
Read your palm, sir?
HOLMES
I’d rather not know.
Taking a huge swig, HOLMES smiles to himself and strides
off into the city -- his city, the place he's most
comfortable: here, at face-value, where no explanations
are necessary.
He passes a NEWSPAPER HEADLINE that shouts:
STEEL AND WEAPONS TYCOON LORD
BLACKWOOD TO DIE TOMORROW.
Blackwood Bridge contracts
cancelled.
Holmes doesn’t spare it a second glance.
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Scene 9 - A Call to Action
Light from a candle. Blackwood sits like a yogi on the
floor in the middle of the stone cell. His wrists are
manacled. He is naked from the waist up. His HEAD IS
SHAVED, his eyes are closed, his breath deep and steady.
Whether by tattoo or ink, he has OCCULT SYMBOLS all over
his body (but not his shaved head).
The occult symbols are repeated on every stone in the
cell. It is as if Blackwood and his cell are one.
Spooky. Powerful.
Something moans in the air. Wind? Or something else?
Suddenly, Blackwood’s eyes shoot open, his head raises.
He springs to his feet, grabs a tin mug and begins
banging it on the door.
The SOUND OF THE TIN CUP BANGING becomes the SOUND OF A
FIST KNOCKING on the door --
INT. 221 BAKER STREET - NIGHT
-- of 221B Baker Street. The fist belongs to Inspector
Lestrade.
LESTRADE
Open up! It’s urgent.
The door is opened by a sleepy Watson.
WATSON
He isn’t here.
Lestrade hands a PIECE OF PAPER to Watson. Whatever
Watson reads on the piece of paper shocks him.
WATSON
I’ll find him.
EXT. GREEN PARK - NIGHT
The SOUND OF DRUNKEN SINGING helps us locate Holmes. He
staggers and serenades grumpy geese and swans with a
POPULAR LOVE SONG of the time. The way he sings it, the
edge to his delivery, makes it clear that Holmes has a
very low opinion of love.
INT. BARE-KNUCKLE BOXING RING - NIGHT
The fighting is over. Only a few people cleaning up.
Watson enters fast, looks around, leaves faster.
EXT. GREEN PARK - NIGHT
Holmes yodels the last few bars of his song, staggers
backwards into a bush. He examines a leaf --
HOLMES
Ah Pyrus Rosaceae. So soft.
-- and goes to sleep. Watson shakes him awake.
HOLMES
Leave me alone.
WATSON
You’re wanted at the Tower.
HOLMES
Some other time.
WATSON
There is no other time. You’re
Blackwood’s last request. He says
he has information he’ll only give
to you.
That gets Holmes upright enough for Watson to try and
help him to his feet -- but Holmes brushes him off.
HOLMES
(staggering to his
feet)
I can do this myself.
Holmes gets his bearings, lurches away.
HOLMES
Tell me something --
WATSON
What?
HOLMES
Did you propose to her?
WATSON
Not yet. Not until my practice is
up and running.
ON HOLMES: the news that Watson hasn’t proposed cheers
him up enormously.
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Scene 10 - Dawn of Reckoning
The horizon around the Tower is changing forever as the
HALF-CONSTRUCTED MASS OF TOWER BRIDGE explodes out of the
Thames, its metal skeleton hacking jagged lines into the
sky.
Near ground level, workers untie and take down a
BLACKWOOD STEEL sign.
Watson looks at the bridge as he and Holmes head for the
Tower entrance.
WATSON
He’s going to die in sight of the
bridge he’s building.
HOLMES
But not alone.
Holmes indicates A LONG LINE OF EXCITED PEOPLE queue for
the execution. An equally LONG LINE OF FINE CARRIAGES
assemble opposite them. Holmes and Watson bypass them
all.
EXT. TOWER GREEN - DAWN
Inside the grounds of the Tower, on Tower Green, WORKMEN
add the final feature to the platform they are erecting --
an EXECUTION BLOCK.
Holmes and Watson stop.
HOLMES
Hanging’s not good enough for him?
WATSON
It’s his right, as a Lord of the
Realm.
If nothing else has sobered Holmes up, this grisly object
does the trick.
HOLMES
Come on. Let’s hear what he
wants.
WATSON
He asked for you.
(beat)
I’ll be here. I want to see this
one through.
Holmes nods, and continues on alone.
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Scene 11 - Confrontation at Dawn
DAWN
A pale and nervous GUARD leads Holmes down the corridor,
past a number of empty cells.
HOLMES
Where are all the other prisoners?
GUARD
They were moved. For their own
protection.
INT. TOWER OF LONDON - BLACKWOOD’S CELL - DAWN
Blackwood comes to the front of his cell as he hears
their approaching footsteps.
He looks hale, healthy and excited -- not like a man
about to have his head removed. He is dressed in his
best. Except for the wrist manacles, he could be going
to a party.
The guard backs away, crosses himself again.
BLACKWOOD
Sherlock Holmes, the great
detective ...
Two powerful men posturing. Except that Holmes is
battered and bruised, hung over, has a leaf caught in his
collar.
HOLMES
What do you want?
Blackwood stares at Holmes intensely. Not at him, into
him, doing to Holmes what Holmes has done to so many.
Hypnotic.
BLACKWOOD
Come closer.
Almost without knowing it, Holmes takes a step closer.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
... closer ...
HOLMES
That’s enough.
BLACKWOOD
I’ve been thinking about you.
HOLMES
I can’t say the same.
BLACKWOOD
I want you to know that I respect
you.
HOLMES
Again, I can’t say the same.
BLACKWOOD
Don’t take me lightly. Those who
do suffer.
HOLMES
Well, you’re about to pay for
that.
Blackwood thrusts forward so that his face presses
against the bars. He whispers:
BLACKWOOD
... Holmes ...
HOLMES
(getting annoyed)
What?
BLACKWOOD
Are you a patriot? Do you love
Britain?
Holmes has a headache coming on like a steam engine.
HOLMES
What are you talking about?
BLACKWOOD
Did you know that I’m related to
William the Conqueror, on my
mother’s side? He ruled London
from here. From the White Tower,
actually. And so will I.
(beat)
Our Empire has not reached its
full glory. I’m going to change
that. I have the necessary
courage. So do you. History will
reward us.
(beat)
Join me.
HOLMES
Join you? You’re about to die.
A knowing smile creeps across Blackwood’s face.
BLACKWOOD
Do you really think you could have
caught me if I hadn’t wanted it?
If it wasn’t pre-ordained? Yes,
I’m going to die. But when I
return, it will be with powers
granted me by the Dark One
himself.
HOLMES
Well, give him my best when you
see him.
BLACKWOOD
I’ll let you do that yourself.
You’ll be meeting him sooner than
you think.
Pity for such obvious insanity shows in Holmes’ eyes.
HOLMES
That’s enough, Blackwood. I
suggest you make your peace,
rapidly.
Blackwood lunges at the bars.
BLACKWOOD
I’m going to watch you die in
agony! You and everybody else!
Blackwood’s psychotic ferocity is chilling. Holmes turns
his back and walks away. If he weren’t about to have his
head chopped off, Blackwood would be a scary enemy.
INT. TOWER OF LONDON - MORNING
Holmes runs into Lestrade and a PRIEST, waiting to give
Blackwood his last rites.
HOLMES
Double the guard on Blackwood,
double the guard outside.
LESTRADE
Why?
HOLMES
Just a precaution.
(to the Priest)
I don’t think you’re needed,
Father. Not for this one.
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Scene 12 - The Execution at Tower Green
The Green is packed with people -- many of them RICH AND
ARISTOCRATIC. Excitement builds. NOTE the heavy
security.
IN PASSING, we catch a glimpse of a dark, stunningly
beautiful woman working her way towards the chopping
block. Wicked eyes, wicked clothes. Seeing a man’s head
chopped off will not bother her in the least. This is
IRENE ADLER.
ACROSS THE GREEN from Irene Adler, we find Holmes, just
as Watson gets to him through the throng.
WATSON
Fancy crowd.
HOLMES
(disgusted)
Friends in high places.
WATSON
What did he want?
HOLMES
Absolutely nothing.
And then all conversation ceases, as the HUBBUB SWELLS
from the direction of the Tower.
Blackwood emerges under heavy guard. Head held high, a
superior little smile playing on his lips, Blackwood is
led by TWO MEMORABLY POMPOUS OFFICIALS towards the
execution platform.
Again, he looks like the cat that ate the canary, rather
than a man about to be beheaded.
WATSON
He’s taking this well.
As Blackwood is brought up the steps, a HERALD turns to
address the crowd; Lestrade is near the front.
HERALD
Lord William Blackwood, for the
crimes of multiple murder and
human sacrifice in pursuit of
Satanic rituals ...
The HOODED EXECUTIONER raises his axe behind him for a
practice swing ...
HERALD (CONT'D)
...You have been sentenced to
death.
... and the blade slams down into the block.
HERALD (CONT'D)
Is there anything you wish to say
before sentence is carried out?
BLACKWOOD
Yes there is.
Flanked by edgy guards, Blackwood struts to the edge of
the platform, looks out over the crowd with blazing eyes.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
Death holds no sway over me. I
shall return.
The crowd shifts uneasily. The officials around
Blackwood urge him to kneel, but he ignores them.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
And when I do, I will bring the
powers of Hell with me.
The two officials try to get Blackwood to kneel before
the block but he is having none of it. One of them urges
the executioner to help, directing him to stand behind
Blackwood.
BLACKWOOD (CONT'D)
(struggling)
LONDON WILL BE MINE!
The officials finally force Blackwood onto his knees --
when a GUNSHOT RINGS OUT, the bullet thudding into the
execution block, inches from Blackwood’s head.
CUT TO:
Holmes and Watson turn towards the sound of the shot.
CUT TO:
A WOMAN emerges from the edge of the crowd waving a
pistol, screaming like a banshee.
WOMAN
God's fury take you for what you
did to my child!!
As the guards -- and Lestrade -- rush towards her, she
FIRES AGAIN. The bullet whistles over the crowd. People
hit the ground, screaming. (Holmes and Watson do not.)
A moment of chaos --
WOMAN (CONT'D)
May he rip the flesh from your
bones, and wrack you on the
wheel...!
-- which ends when Lestrade rugby-tackles her to the
ground.
CUT TO:
HOLMES
Now they can get this over with.
CUT TO:
THE EXECUTION PLATFORM. The executioner hefts his axe.
The officials hold Blackwood head-down on the block, his
shorn head spasming with fury.
The executioner raises the axe high above the block, and,
with Blackwood’s final scream echoing over the crowd, the
blade slams down and sigh of release goes over the crowd.
HOLMES
Let’s get out of here.
Somewhat disgusted by the whole affair, Holmes turns to
leave -- and sees something that stops him in his tracks.
Watson follows Holmes’ gaze in time to see IRENE ADLER
lift a challenging, provocative eyebrow at Holmes, across
the blood-thrilled heads of the throng. She mouths the
words “Hello, Sherlock.”
Watson whirls back to see the effect on Holmes.
Quite pointedly, Holmes turns his back on Irene and walks
away -- but there is turmoil in his eyes as he does.
OVER, the sound of a SINGLE VIOLIN -- a simple,
repetitive melody.
DISSOLVE TO:
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Scene 13 - A Rainy Reunion at Baker Street
The same turmoil in his eyes, Holmes stares out at the
rain from their second-story window and plays his VIOLIN.
WATSON (V.O.)
Instead of gazing out the window --
INT. 221B BAKER STREET - DAY
Watson circles an OFFICE FOR RENT notice in the
newspaper --
WATSON
-- maybe you could put your mind
to catching whoever’s stealing
horses.
-- then holds the front page up for Holmes to see.
ON NEWSPAPER HEADLINE: HORSE THEFT RAMPANT IN CITY
Holmes dismisses it, turns to watch the rain again.
Watson joins him at the window.
WATSON
Forget her.
Holmes shakes his head.
HOLMES
You know, she’s still the only
one.
WATSON
The only one?
HOLMES
The only adversary ever to best
me.
WATSON
That’s not what I remember -- she
tried to blackmail the King of
Bohemia with an incriminating
photograph, and you stopped her.
HOLMES
She stopped because she wanted to.
She was three steps ahead of me
all the way. Made a complete fool
of me.
A wry smile comes to Holmes’ face as he thinks about it.
WATSON
I hope you’re not going to try and
find her.
HOLMES
Now that would be a challenge --
she’s always in the last place
you’d expect.
IRENE (O.S.)
(European accent)
Good morning, gentlemen.
The both turn to towards the door ...
... and there she is, IRENE ADLER -- an exotic,
dangerous, electric presence in 221B Baker Street.
Holmes shakes his head.
IRENE
You’re looking older Sherlock. It
suits you.
HOLMES
Something I can do for you?
IRENE
Introduce me to your friend.
WATSON
(irritated)
We’ve met before.
HOLMES
Dr. John Watson. Mrs. Irene
Norton.
Irene extends her hand to Watson but looks at Holmes.
IRENE
It’s Irene Adler again.
Holmes looks at her ring finger. Empty. Interesting.
IRENE (CONT’D)
Poor Norton simply couldn’t keep
up with me.
(to Holmes,
pointedly)
But then, I’ve yet to meet someone
who can.
WATSON
What can we do for you, Miss
Adler?
IRENE
Please, it’s Irene ...
Holmes and Watson stand together at the window, unmoved.
Irene gives a European little shrug -- so this is the way
it’s going to be? Okay.
IRENE (CONT’D)
I want you to find a business
associate of mine. I pay well.
HOLMES
I’m not interested.
IRENE
His name is Frank O'Riordan. He's
five feet one inch tall. Red
hair. Missing two teeth in his
lower right jaw.
They wait for more, but...
WATSON
That's it?
(to Holmes)
Well, unless he smiles at you in
the street, it sounds like a waste
of time, anyway.
Holmes speaks to Watson without taking his eyes off
Irene.
HOLMES
She thinks she can tempt me by
withholding information, while at
the same time concealing her true
intent.
Irene gives Holmes a dismissive little smile: yes, she
can.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
She also thinks she can buy access
to something she hasn’t got -- the
London City Police Records.
ON IRENE: score one for Holmes, there.
WATSON
What do you mean?
HOLMES
A man that height with the temper
of a redhead is someone who starts
a lot of fights. Messy ones, in
public. Probably how he lost the
teeth. She’s betting that despite
the fact he’s in hiding, its a
habit he won’t be able to break.
IRENE
I never said he was in hiding.
HOLMES
You didn’t have to. He’s in
London, but he’s not where he’s
supposed to be.
(beat)
Who’s after him? Besides you.
The clatter of arriving hooves in the street takes Watson
to the window.
IRENE
Why ... you are, Sherlock.
Their gaze holds, aggressive, combative.
HOLMES
As I said --
DR. WATSON
(looking out the
window)
The police.
HOLMES
(walking to the
window)
-- I’m really not interested.
LOOKING DOWN ON STREET BELOW, they see a YOUNG CONSTABLE
leap out of a POLICE CARRIAGE into the driving rain; he
looks up, obviously heading for them.
HOLMES
(turning round)
Not after you already, are--?
But Irene is gone, leaving behind a SOFT LEATHER PURSE,
heavy with coins. Both men look at the purse, neither
touches it.
WATSON
She thinks you’ll take the job
anyway.
HOLMES
We’ll give it to a charity for
fallen women.
Before Watson can react to that, the YOUNG CONSTABLE
hammers on the door, flings it open, panting.
YOUNG CONSTABLE
Mister Holmes, sir? Inspector
Lestrade asks if you’ll come to
the Blackwood Estate, at once.
HOLMES
Tell him I’m busy.
YOUNG CONSTABLE
He ... he’s gone.
HOLMES
Who has? Lestrade?
YOUNG CONSTABLE
Lord Blackwood, sir.
(breathless)
He’s broken out of his tomb.
At last. The ennui, the irritability, the inner turmoil
drop away and, once more, HOLMES BECOMES FULLY ALIVE.
HOLMES
Oh, has he now?
Galvanized, Holmes walks across the room to get his coat
and a GUN, which he pockets. But Watson doesn’t move.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Come on.
WATSON
I can’t. I have an appointment to
see offices in Harley Street.
HOLMES
There are a thousand offices in
London! But only one Blackwood.
WATSON
And only one Mary.
Holmes looks at Watson, Watson looks back. This is a big
moment between them, and they know it. Watson tries to
make it easier.
WATSON
Why don’t we meet for lunch,
afterwards? You can tell me all
about it.
Holmes has no choice but to satisfied by that.
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Scene 14 - Diverging Paths
Holmes and Watson emerge from 221 Baker street together --
but Holmes gets into the police carriage, while Watson
opens his umbrella and heads in the other direction. Is
this the beginning of the end of a great partnership?
EXT. THE BLACKWOOD ESTATE - ESTABLISHING - DAY
Judging by the magnificent estate, Blackwood comes from
old money, and lots of it.
The estate is decorated with generations worth of
ARTILLERY GUNS, stuck in various decorative places as if
they were landscape art. Some are old enough to be
covered in ivy, a few look new and very menacing.
We find the police carriage hurrying Holmes through the
grounds towards --
EXT. THE BLACKWOOD CRYPT - DAY
Generations of wealth buried in a moss-covered marble
edifice the size of a small house, set amongst overgrown
landscaping.
Rain lashes against Holmes as the young Constable leads
him past a leering gargoyle and points him towards
Lestrade, sheltering in the open door of the crypt.
Holmes hurries eagerly towards a grim-faced Lestrade.
LESTRADE
Where’s Watson?
HOLMES
Being ordinary.
Lestrade doesn’t understand, but Holmes brushes past him,
not about to enlighten him.
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INT. HARLEY STREET OFFICES - DAY
A LANDLORD unlocks and opens the door to DOCTOR’S
OFFICES, ushers Watson in.
Watson enters the offices -- stops. The rooms are warm,
wood-panelled, with leather chairs and anatomy charts.
Ready to go, and nice with it.
Ordinary seems pretty do-able to Watson, right now.
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Scene 15 - Unearthing the Dark Secrets
Stairs lead UNDERGROUND, where the Blackwoods lie.
Ornate and grotesque carvings suggest that Blackwood’s
obsession with the occult was inherited.
Light from police lamps show ranks of MARBLE SARCOPHAGI,
with similar carvings.
The newest, whitest sarcophagus lies shattered on the
mouldy floor. The coffin that was inside it is similarly
torn apart. Lestrade stays close to Holmes.
LESTRADE
(whispering)
Blackwood's coffin --
HOLMES
No need to whisper. You won’t
disturb anyone.
LESTRADE
(a tiny bit louder)
-- it’s been smashed open from the
inside!
HOLMES
It looks that way.
Lestrade points up the stairs.
LESTRADE
The crypt door -- smashed open
from the inside!
HOLMES
What are you suggesting?
LESTRADE
(a bit embarrassed)
I’m just saying that in twenty
years of police work, I’ve never
seen anything like this.
Dead bodies are business as usual for Lestrade. What’s
down here isn’t. He’s more than a little spooked.
Holmes nods, all senses in hyper-drive. He climbs the
stairs. Lestrade stays with him.
LESTRADE (CONT’D)
You were at the execution. You
heard what Blackwood said.
HOLMES
It’s not possible. You know that
as well as I do.
LESTRADE
So, who did this? And why?
HOLMES
That is the question.
This is meat and drink to Holmes.
LESTRADE
We know Blackwood started some
kind of secret society --
HOLMES
The Order of the Golden Bough.
LESTRADE
-- with all sorts of top people
involved. Cabinet ministers, even
a Royal. Maybe some of them?
HOLMES
Maybe. These are superstitious
times. Easy to see how someone
could gain considerable power from
pretending Blackwood was still
alive.
Lestrade nods uncertainly, then stops at the crypt door,
looks outside.
LESTRADE
I hope you haven’t eaten recently.
Someone’s been busy with a razor.
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Scene 16 - Murder at Blackwood Crypt
In a small clearing next to the crypt, five or six
POLICEMEN circle something they can’t bear to look at ...
... the BODY OF A SMALL, RED-HEADED MAN, who has had his
throat slit.
Holmes bends next to the body, a quizzical look on his
face.
HOLMES
Hm ... red hair. Lestrade, may I
borrow your pen --
Lestrade hands over a NICE FOUNTAIN PEN. Holmes shoves
it into the victim’s mouth, levers his cheek aside, to
reveal:
HOLMES (CONT’D)
-- two teeth missing from the
lower right jaw.
(to himself)
Didn’t think I’d find you so
quickly.
LESTRADE
What was that?
HOLMES
Nothing.
Holmes returns Lestrade’s fountain pen. Lestrade doesn’t
want to touch his pen.
LESTRADE
Did you see he has no
fingerprints? How can that be?
HOLMES
I’ve no idea.
LESTRADE
This is where Watson’s so useful.
A look of annoyance flashes across Holmes’ face.
Lestrade holds up a BATTERED POCKET WATCH, by the chain.
LESTRADE
This was in his pocket.
Holmes reaches into his own pocket, pulls out a
JEWELLER’S LOUP, screws it into his eye, grabs the watch,
flips it open and examines the lid obsessively for a
moment.
HOLMES
Hm. A drunk and a gambler.
Lestrade has no idea how Holmes deduced that. Holmes
shows him the watch.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Scratches around the keyhole.
Every drunk is the same. And
pawnbrokers scratch the ticket
number and their initials inside
the lid. This one has five, so
the owner made and lost money on a
regular basis.
Holmes shifts his gaze to the face of the watch.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Oh, and look!
LESTRADE
What?
Holmes looks up at Lestrade with the Loup still in his
eye -- an unnerving sight.
HOLMES
It’s time for lunch.
LESTRADE
How can you talk about food after
looking at this?
Holmes flips the watch closed, pockets it.
HOLMES
This? It brings my appetite back.
Holmes strides away, energized, focused.
Lestrade looks around -- shivers. From the cold.
Possibly.
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Scene 17 - A Generous Interlude in the East End
Holmes and Watson stride briskly along a busy East End
street, eating piping hot FISH AND CHIPS out of newspaper
cones.
WATSON
When I said lunch --
HOLMES
Come on, these are the best fish
and chips in London.
Lots of people on the street and sidewalks, ranging from
street merchants to low-lifes to out-and-out criminals.
A ONE-EYED WOMAN charges a penny a go on her OUIJA BOARD,
so that people can “Talk to the Other Side”. This is not
a safe neighborhood --
-- as evidenced by a RAG AND BONE MAN’S STOLEN HORSE.
Irate, he stands by his MAROONED CARRIAGE and waves the
CUT ENDS OF THE REINS as he shouts at a FLUSTERED YOUNG
POLICEMAN.
As all this plays out:
WATSON
You’re sure it was O’Riordan?
HOLMES
Absolutely.
WATSON
So Irene Adler’s mixed up in this
Blackwood thing.
Holmes nods, deep in thought, gives the rest of his fish
and chips to a cluster of STARVING URCHINS. One look at
their eyes and Watson follows suit. They walk on.
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Scene 18 - Daffodils and Deductions
Holmes and Watson turn onto Bow Street. EVERY SECOND
SHOP IS A PAWN SHOP.
WATSON
She’s even more untrustworthy than
I thought, if that’s possible.
HOLMES
Well, she’s a complication. Like
all women.
Watson turns, to argue -- then sees a pretty young
DAFFODIL SELLER, with yoked baskets of bright yellow
flowers.
WATSON
Over here.
Holmes looks on with forbearance, as Watson takes a big
bunch, pays and tips generously.
WATSON
(turning to Holmes)
They’re Mary’s favorite.
But Holmes does not want to talk about Mary. He has the
Loup back in his eye, O’Riordan’s watch open. He looks
at the inside of the lid.
HOLMES
“M.H.” is --
WATSON
Maddison and Haig?
Watson gestures, with a shake of his head. There was an
agenda behind the fish and chips after all. MADDISON &
HAIG, PAWNBROKERS, RESPECTABLE, DISCREET, are right
across Bow Street.
HOLMES
(pleased with
himself)
They should be able to give us an
address.
Holmes launches across Bow Street. Watson goes with him.
WATSON
I’m going back to Baker Street.
HOLMES
Look at that.
Holmes points at a sign in the Maddison & Haig window:
LARGE SELECTION OF ENGAGEMENT RINGS FOR EVERY WALLET.
That gets Watson in through the door.
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Scene 19 - A Dangerous Discovery
Seen through the dusty window, Holmes talks to the
PROPRIETOR, while Watson looks over a tray of INEXPENSIVE
DIAMOND ENGAGEMENT RINGS.
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EXT. STREET - CANNING TOWN - DAY
The streets in Canning Town are a cryptic tangle of cheap
lodgings for cheap labour -- unsafe, unsanitary and
unpoliced. Holmes and Watson move quickly through the
crowds, Watson shielding Mary’s daffodils from being
accidentally crushed.
WATSON
I have to get going.
HOLMES
It’s on the way home.
Holmes reads from the MADDISON & HAIG PAWNBROKER'S
TICKET, stops, looks up at a LODGING HOUSE.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
This won’t take long.
There’s just no stopping Holmes once he gets the scent.
And, if he’s being honest with himself, Watson is
intrigued.
INT. LODGING HOUSE - DAY
No-questions-asked, cash-up-front lodgings. Holmes and
Watson wind their way up a twisting flight of creaky
stairs --
WATSON
How do you account for O’Riordan’s
lack of fingerprints?
HOLMES
No idea.
-- and find two doors.
HOLMES
That’s his. Look at the scratches
on the keyhole.
Holmes takes out his knife, goes to work on the scratched
lock.
INT. O’RIORDAN’S ROOM - DAY
Holmes pushes open the door and looks into a dank, gloomy
room, CURTAINS DRAWN.
Watson sees an OIL LAMP on a rickety table -- lights it.
There is a NARROW DOOR on the far side of the room.
The room has been torn apart -- plaster and wood ripped
out of the walls, spread around. FLOORBOARDS have been
levered up or loosened. A BED FRAME leans crookedly
against the wall.
WATSON
Someone got here before us.
As they cross the floor, the loosened floorboards jump
under their feet. Holmes rocks a floorboard with his
foot, sees the other end flip upwards.
HOLMES
I wonder what they were looking
for?
WATSON
Holmes --
Watson points at a drawing on the wall -- an OCCULT
SYMBOL. One we recognize all too well.
Then they hear FOOTSTEPS ON THE STAIRS.
Holmes pulls out his gun, moves to the door, opens it a
crack, pokes his head out ...
INT. LODGING HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
... SEES FOUR ARMED MEN climbing towards them.
INT. O’RIORDAN’S ROOM - CONTINUOUS
Holmes ducks back in the room and locks the door.
HOLMES
It’s a trap.
Still holding Mary’s daffodils, Watson rips open the
curtains, tries to pull up the window --
-- and a BULLET SMASHES into the frame, fired from A
CARRIAGE IN THE ALLEYWAY.
A successful trap.
FOOTSTEPS THUMP TOWARDS THE DOOR, as Holmes crosses to
the narrow door, pulls it open, revealing a STEEP ATTIC
STAIRCASE.
WE HEAR A KEY IN THE LOCK.
Holmes darts up into the darkness, Watson close behind --
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Scene 20 - Chaos in the Attic
-- when a MASSIVE BLOW HITS the detective square in the
face, throwing him back onto Watson. The daffodils go
flying. They tumble backwards down the staircase --
INT. O’RIORDAN’S ROOM - CONTINUOUS
-- back into the room, in a heap on the floor --
-- where they are pinned by the FOUR MEN -- two on
Holmes' legs and chest, one on Watson’s legs, the fourth
behind Watson’s head, holding his arms.
Both are too stunned to struggle.
HEAVY FOOTSTEPS thump down the attic stairs.
A SQUAT COCKNEY BRUTE with piggy eyes and ham fists
squeezes himself through the narrow door, CRUSHES THE
DAFFODILS under one huge boot, stands over Holmes and
Watson. This is DREDGER.
DREDGER
Didn’t think you’d be this easy.
Dredger reaches down, tears open Watson’s shirt to expose
bare flesh. Then reaches into his pocket --
DREDGER (CONT'D)
(to Holmes)
Your friend is to proceed you into
Hell.
-- pulls out a STRAIGHT RAZOR, flips it open to reveal a
wicked blade still crusted with dried blood.
DREDGER (CONT’D)
And you are to watch him go.
As the razor descends, Watson thrashes futilely.
Holmes turns his head as far as he can from the sight, as
if he can’t bear to look.
MAN ON HOLMES' CHEST
Dredger -- he’s not watching.
The razor halts, hovering above Watson’s flesh.
DREDGER
He's to see everything. Make him!
The MAN ON HOLMES' CHEST puts his knees on Holmes’ arms,
lets go his wrists, grabs Holmes’ head to force it round--
-- exactly what Holmes was trying for.
Holmes twists his body convulsively, levers him sideways,
frees one arm --
-- jabs a crippling sword hand into the throat of the MAN
ON HIS LEGS --
-- FREES ONE LEG, KICKS the rickety table --
-- and KNOCKS THE LIT OIL LAMP into the air --
-- SPILLING HOT OIL onto the MAN ON TOP OF WATSON --
-- WHICH IGNITES when the lamp smashes into him.
SCREAMING, THE FLAMING MAN runs, thumps into Dredger --
-- who flings him off (putting out the flames), discovers
that he is beginning to smoulder and flicker with flame
himself. He beats it out with his huge hands.
Top half freed, Watson jackknifes upwards, smashes his
forehead into the face of the MAN ON HIS LEGS.
Holmes PULLS A DRAWER FROM A DESK, SMASHES IT INTO THE
FACE OF THE MAN ON TOP OF HIM, then finds his gun, whirls
on Dredger --
-- in time to see the brutal cockney dive head first out
of the window.
Holmes takes off out the door and down the stairs.
Watson goes to the broken window, looks out carefully
(half-expecting a bullet) --
-- SEES DREDGER roll out of the PILE OF COAL that broke
his fall and drag himself towards the alley behind the
lodging house.
Watson picks up a fallen gun, sprints out of the room,
leaving four men in various states of disrepair ...
... and one squashed bunch of daffodils.
Then, the SOUND OF FOOTSTEPS RETURNING and --
-- Watson darts back into the room, scoops up the
daffodils, sees that every single stem is broken. Angry,
Watson drops the bunch onto the floor --
-- and coldcocks a recovering assailant, as he sprints
out.
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Scene 21 - The Chaotic Pursuit
Dredger limps out of the yard, pulls himself onto the
waiting carriage.
DREDGER
GO.
The DRIVER grabs the reins and takes off, fast.
Holmes hurtles out of the yard. He raises his gun to
fire --
-- but has to dive for cover, thanks to a HAIL OF BULLETS
from Dredger, firing the driver’s gun.
Gun in one hand, Watson emerges from the yard in time to
see the racing carriage reach the end of the alley.
The carriage turns to the right, away from the row of
houses they have just left.
HOLMES
That’s helpful.
Holmes kicks open the gate into the yard opposite, runs
across it and throws his full shoulder-weight into the
back door of the house.
INT. HOUSE - CANNING TOWN - CONTINUOUS
Holmes crashes through into the kitchen, shocking the
WOMAN at the sink.
HOLMES
Excuse me.
EXT. ALLEYWAY BEHIND LODGING HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
The carriage is forced to take another right turn,
doubling back on itself, but on the NEXT STREET OVER.
EXT. NEXT STREET OVER - CONTINUOUS
Holmes bursts out of the house, next to a freshly
delivered PILE OF COAL --
-- just as the carriage bears down on him. Dredger draws
a bead on him.
Holmes ducks down into the yard, grabs the COAL SHOVEL
and digs it deep into the pile of coal.
The carriage thunders past the yard at full speed.
Dredger’s gun points right at Holmes’ face for a second.
Holmes arcs the shovel round, hurls coal right into the
face of the driver.
BOOM! Dredger fires, Holmes drops, the bullet almost
parts Holmes hair.
The carriage slews wildly across the narrow street, the
driver fights for control.
The carriage explodes against the opposite wall.
Dredger staggers out of the wreckage and limps away.
Holmes stands, goes after him. Dredger looks over his
shoulder, sees Holmes, accelerates.
EXT. HOUSE - CANNING TOWN - DAY
Watson runs into the street and sees Holmes disappearing
round the corner at the end of the road, at a dead
sprint.
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Scene 22 - Chase at the Ironworks
Holmes sees Dredger run through the gates into the huge
THAMES IRONWORKS SHIPYARDS.
EXT. THAMES IRONWORKS - CONTINUOUS
Sprinting, Holmes follows Dredger through the doors into
the nearest FABRICATION SHED --
INT. FABRICATION SHED - THAMES IRONWORKS - CONTINUOUS
-- into a wall of noise as TEAMS OF WORKERS panel-beat
the enormous sheets of hull-metal into shape.
HOLMES PURSUES DREDGER AT FULL SPEED through the
deafening chaos, weaving around gigantic metal panels
(suspended from runners in the roof), hurdling the skin-
ripping tangles of discarded metal on the floor, and
bouncing off unsuspecting WORKERS.
EXT. GATE. THAMES IRONWORKS - DAY
Watson continues past the entrance to the FABRICATION
SHED, runs along the outside of the building.
EXT. FABRICATION SHED - OTHER END - DAY
Dredger bursts out of the door and runs towards the FIRST
SLIPWAY, which holds the PARTIALLY BUILT HULL OF A BIG
SHIP.
But Holmes is right behind him, and Dredger’s moment of
hesitation -- trying to decide which way to run -- is
enough to allow the detective to tackle him, sending the
pair of them tumbling down the SLIPWAY.
EXT. FIRST SLIPWAY - DAY
Holmes and Dredger SLIDE TO A HALT at the bottom of the
slipway BENEATH THE TOWERING HULL. They exchange
scrambling punches as Dredger hauls himself backwards and
finally kicks Holmes in the face. Kick like a mule.
Dredger is ridiculously strong.
Dredger ducks under the framework supporting the ship;
Holmes staggers to his feet and follows, right under the
massive craft.
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Scene 23 - The Confrontation at the Fabrication Shed
Watson runs round the end of the building and looks down
into the FIRST SLIPWAY ...
... where he sees Holmes dart out from under the half-
built hull. He looks across and sees Dredger weaving his
way through the support towers BETWEEN THE FIRST AND
SECOND SLIPWAYS.
Watson’s sharp gaze continues across and up to the HEAD
OF THE SECOND SLIPWAY ...
... where he sees a DIGNITARY finishing his speech on the
CEREMONIAL PLATFORM FULL OF VIP’s, who have gathered to
launch a MASSIVE GREY BATTLESHIP.
Watson’s eyes widen as he puts two and two together, and
he sprints for the ceremonial platform at the head of the
second slipway.
EXT. SECOND SLIPWAY - THAMES IRONWORKS - CONTINUOUS
Dredger comes out of the support towers under the
battleship’s hull, reaches a sheer stone wall. He turns
back the way he came --
-- as Holmes launches himself at him. They tumble down
onto the massive runners on the floor of the slipway.
EXT. CEREMONIAL PLATFORM - THAMES IRONWORKS - DAY
The DIGNITARY smiles to all around.
DIGNITARY
... and all who sail in her ...
EXT. SECOND SLIPWAY - THAMES IRONWORKS - CONTINUOUS
Holmes wrestles Dredger’s head around onto the runner and
pins him down.
HOLMES
Why O'Riordan? Why murder him?
DREDGER
That's what happens to traitors.
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Scene 24 - Chaos at the Launch
A DIGNITARY’S WIFE -- A POUTER PIGEON OF A WOMAN --
RELEASES A MAGNUM OF CHAMPAGNE tied to a silken rope.
EXT. BELOW CEREMONIAL PLATFORM - THAMES IRONWORKS -
CONTINUOUS
Watson turns and screams down into the second slipway.
WATSON
Holmes!!
EXT. HULL
The CHAMPAGNE BOTTLE swings through the air and explodes
against the grey metal prow.
EXT. SECOND SLIPWAY - CONTINUOUS
Grappling frantically on the runners, both Holmes and
Dredger look up as the HUGE CHOCKS holding the battleship
in place EXPLODE BACKWARDS --
-- and the GIGANTIC PROPELLERS on the stern of the
battleship start sliding down towards them.
EXT. CEREMONIAL PLATFORM - DAY
A scream goes up from the DIGNITARY'S WIFE as she sees
what's happening on the slipway.
EXT. SECOND SLIPWAY - CONTINUOUS
VAST COILS OF CHAIN begin unwinding off the ship as it
gathers speed, exploding onto the ground like artillery.
Dredger looks up at the approach of the huge propellers --
-- Holmes charges into him again before he can run,
tripping him backwards across the runners. Dredger pulls
Holmes down with him.
HOLMES
Who are you working for?
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Scene 25 - Narrow Escape at the Slipway
WATSON sees the dwarfed, struggling figures of HOLMES and
DREDGER on the slipway, then the accelerating ship
obliterates them from view.
INT. SECOND SLIPWAY - CONTINUOUS
The noise is ear-ripping now as the keel gathers speed.
Dredger grabs Holmes by the collar and punches him
directly into the path of the ship.
Holmes lies semi-conscious, eyes rolled back into his
head, as the leviathan roars down towards him.
The ground beneath him shakes, bounces him, knocks his
head against the runner -- once, twice -- and he blinks
back into consciousness, sees the great shadow sweeping
over him.
Holmes rolls sideways as the massive propellers slice
through the air above his head and the gigantic hull
screams past him like the side of the world being torn
off --
-- and then the battleship's away, parting the Thames
with a vast, frothy explosion of water.
Holmes watches the ship drift gracefully out into the
river -- from the vortex to serenity in a matter of
seconds.
His head collapses back, great gulps of air disappearing
into his lungs. He tries to pull himself to his feet,
but Dredger’s bone-shaking punch has taken it out of him
and he sags back to the ground.
Only when Watson arrives, does Holmes get to his feet.
He staggers back to the slipway, to where Dredger was
standing.
Nothing. No blood or trace. Nothing. He’s gone.
Holmes and Watson exchange a long look -- this thing just
got a lot more complicated and dangerous.
FADE TO:
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Scene 26 - Clues from the Carriage Wreck
Holmes, Watson and various bystanders clear wreckage from
the smashed carriage, to reveal the DEAD BODY OF THE
DRIVER.
HOLMES
Now. Where’ve you come from?
Holmes kneels, begins examining the driver’s shoes,
slowly and carefully.
Watson gets to work searching the man’s pockets.
This is something they’ve done many times before. They
don’t need to talk about it.
Watson pulls a PIPE out of the man’s pocket, turns it
back and forth, examining it.
ON HOLMES, as pauses briefly to enjoy Watson’s
involvement ... then turns his attention to the hem of
the man's trousers.
HOLMES
Ah.
Holmes has found something in the man’s trouser hem -- a
small CLOD OF DRIED MUD. He breaks it into his fingers
and feels the texture; he smells it. Then, Holmes tastes
the dried mud like a connoisseur.
HOLMES
River silt mixed with industrial
slag. Sulfurous.
Holmes looks at the soles of the shoes again, takes out
his pocket-knife and picks something out of the tread,
rubs it between thumb and forefinger with the air of a
connoisseur.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
That, plus this fragment of ground
coal in his shoes puts him
squarely in Nine Elms, somewhere
between Battersea Gasworks and the
rail depot.
First generation CSI.
WATSON
An industrial area. That fits.
Look at this.
He holds out the pipe to Holmes -- one side of the wooden
bowl is blackened.
WATSON (CONT'D)
(mimes the action)
Lights it with a gas flame.
They examine it together -- it is really badly scorched.
WATSON (CONT’D)
But the only thing that burns gas
at that temperature is a Bunsen
burner.
HOLMES
Oh --
Something clicks for Holmes.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
-- a chemical laboratory. Or
factory.
Which then sparks Watson.
WATSON
O'Riordan's fingerprints. Day-to-
day handling of chemicals would
remove them.
They’re getting somewhere. This is what they live for.
Watson catches himself -- he’s not supposed to be doing
this any more.
WATSON
I really should be heading home.
HOLMES
I need the Irregulars. Would you
mind?
WATSON
Not at all.
HOLMES
Send them to Nine Elms --
Holmes turns to leave.
HOLMES
(over his shoulder)
-- they’re looking for a chemical
works that backs onto the river.
WATSON
Where are you going?
HOLMES
To work.
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Scene 27 - A Razor's Edge
A KNOT OF CAB DRIVERS react as Holmes strides up waving a
pound note. They are all pleased to see him.
CUT TO:
EXT. BAKER STREET - DAY
Watson summons the IRREGULARS with a loud whistle.
WIGGINS, the oldest at 15, is the first to appear.
(The Irregulars are street urchins ranging from eight to
mid-teens. They live short, dirty, unsupervised lives.)
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EXT. LONDON STREET - DAY
Holmes talks to an OYSTER MAN, who points Holmes down the
street.
CUT TO:
EXT. BAKER STREET - DAY
As the Irregulars tear off on their errand, Watson goes
inside.
CUT TO:
EXT. LONDON STREET - DAY
Holmes talks to a SHOP CLERK in the door of an EXPENSIVE
DRESS SHOP. She nods, goes inside to fetch something for
Holmes.
CUT TO:
INT. 221B BAKER STREET - DAY
IN THE BATHROOM, Watson washes his hands and face,
wearing just his under-vest. As he dries himself, he
sees something that makes him freeze --
-- an OPEN STRAIGHT RAZOR like Dredger’s. His, or
Holmes’s.
CUT TO:
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Scene 28 - The Disguised Intruder
Holmes bribes a SHORT BELLHOP and heads for the stairs in
the Victorian equivalent of a discrete, expensive,
BOUTIQUE HOTEL.
CUT TO:
INT. 221B BAKER STREET - DAY
Watson heads into the LIVING ROOM for a JOLT OF WHISKY.
He sits down, stares out the window -- a man caught
between two people and two worlds.
OVER, THE SOUND OF KNOCKING ON A DOOR.
INT. CORRIDOR IN IRENE’S HOTEL - DAY
Holmes knocks on the door, bends his knees to mimic the
height of the short bellhop.
IRENE (THROUGH DOOR)
Who is it?
HOLMES
(disguising his
voice)
Bell’op wiv a package, ma’am.
IRENE (THROUGH DOOR)
One moment.
A brief pause, then the door is opened to reveal Irene
Adler wearing a silk robe --
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Scene 29 - Tension and Temptation
-- and a two-shot Derringer held low behind her hip.
Holmes pushes in past her.
IRENE
No package? I’m disappointed.
Holmes is not in the mood for games.
HOLMES
What’s your business with
Blackwood?
IRENE
None of your concern.
Holmes looks around the room -- an explosion of perfumes
and expensive European clothing.
HOLMES
I found O’Riordan.
IRENE
I knew you would.
HOLMES
He’s dead.
Irene’s composure wavers for a second. Holmes notes it
with satisfaction.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Killed by Blackwood’s men, for
betraying him. Was he betraying
him to you?
Irene arches a cynical eyebrow at Holmes: it drives him
nuts.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
What did you want from him?
IRENE
You don't really expect me to tell
you that?
HOLMES
You'll tell me ...
(starts towards her)
... or you'll tell the police.
Which is when the Derringer comes out, aimed directly at
Holmes heart. Irene smiles, cocks it.
HOLMES (CONT'D)
You're not going to shoot me.
Without taking her eyes off Holmes, Irene points the
pistol at his foot --
IRENE
Oh yes?
-- and pulls the trigger. Crack!
Holmes leaps sideways, the bullet drills a hole in his
shoe millimeters from his toe.
Irene cocks the pistol again. Holmes moves incredibly
quickly, snatches it away with one hand, grabs her with
the other --
HOLMES
I’m taking you to Lestrade.
-- which throws open her robe to reveal her underwear-
clad physique. Perfect dimensions, indeed.
IRENE
Lestrade wouldn’t know what to do
with me.
Holmes is momentarily stunned by the magnificent sight.
Irene punches him full in the face, knocking him
backwards.
She goes for the door, but Holmes grabs her and throws
her backwards onto the bed; he stands, poised for her
next move.
IRENE
You wouldn't hit a woman, would
you?
HOLMES
I'm a firm believer in equality.
Irene rolls over off the bed onto her feet.
IRENE
How did you find me?
HOLMES
Beauty can be a disadvantage.
Their eyes lock together over the compliment.
HOLMES (CONT'D)
What's it to be, Irene?
She reaches out her left hand to caress his cheek --
IRENE
My dear, Sherlock...
-- and swings with her right, but this time he's ready
for the punch, and he throws her back onto the bed again.
IRENE (CONT'D)
You seem to want me here.
HOLMES
You got the better of me before.
You'll not do it again.
IRENE
Maybe I want something different
this time.
She slides up the bed onto her knees, her face in front
of his.
IRENE (CONT'D)
Is it to be this?
She slaps him hard across the cheek, then grabs his face
with both hands --
IRENE (CONT'D)
Or this?
-- and kisses him passionately.
HOLMES
Ask me again.
She kisses him again, enjoying it more this time; they
break --
HOLMES (CONT'D)
I'm still not sure--
-- and she whacks him across the cheek again.
HOLMES (CONT'D)
-- which one's the more dangerous.
He looks at her, eyes blazing as she wipes her lower lip
with the back of her hand, and this time he kisses her,
their passions rising.
As they break, Irene opens her mouth to say something ...
... and Holmes gives her a ringing slap across the cheek.
HOLMES (CONT'D)
Both have their pleasures.
She turns and slaps him yet again, but this time --
before he can react -- she tears open his shirt and grabs
him to kiss him again, pulling him down onto the bed ...
SLOW FADE:
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Scene 30 - A Handcuffed Affair
Holmes and Irene lie semi-naked, sprawled across the bed.
Close, intimate, tender. Holmes is as relaxed as we’ve
ever seen him. Irene, too.
IRENE
I should have come back sooner ...
HOLMES
You’ve been much too busy.
IRENE
Hmm..?
HOLMES
Well ... the Tsar and his diamond.
And then embarrassing the Aga
Khan. And they’ll probably shoot
you on sight in Belgium, after
what you did to King Leopold.
IRENE
(amused)
My name was never in the papers.
HOLMES
It didn’t have to be.
IRENE
You’ve been busy, too. Your work
with the naval treaty last year --
that was impressive.
HOLMES
That was Top Secret.
IRENE
Was it? I lose track.
HOLMES
No you don’t.
Holmes rolls over.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
What did you want from O'Riordan?
Irene sighs: "Back to business".
IRENE
All right ...
She slides on top of him and sits on his chest.
IRENE (CONT'D)
... Since I like you.
She holds his wrists, pushing his arms up above his head
on the pillow, lowering her face down to his.
IRENE (CONT'D)
O'Riordan had access to something
my employer wants. He agreed to
get it for me -- at a price. His
death is a complication.
There is a sudden "click", and Irene leaps off the bed.
IRENE (CONT'D)
But that’s what I get paid for --
the complications.
Holmes looks up ... sees his wrist handcuffed to the
bedpost. Holmes pulls at the cuffs, then starts
laughing.
FADE TO:
INT. HOTEL CORRIDOR - NIGHT
Carrying an armful of laundry, a MAID slips a pass-key
into a lock and opens the door ...
... to be confronted by the half-naked, snoring form of
Holmes, still handcuffed to the bed.
Her shriek wakes him.
MAID
I'll -- I'll come back later!
HOLMES
Wait! Get me a screwdriver.
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Scene 31 - A Fork in the Road
Holmes enters, to find Watson PACKING HIS MEDICAL BOOKS
INTO CRATES. The sight brings him up short, for a
moment.
WATSON
I thought I’d get this done while
I had the chance.
Holmes says nothing, takes out his GUN and KNIFE, tosses
them onto the table.
Then, he KICKS OFF HIS SHOES, throws them in a waste
basket.
HOLMES
(going to get more
shoes)
Anything from the Irregulars?
WATSON
Not yet.
Watson crosses to the waste basket, puzzled by the shoes.
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When Holmes returns freshly shod, he sees Watson
examining his perforated shoe in a very Holmes-like way.
HOLMES
What are you doing?
WATSON
The last time I saw you, you
didn’t have a bullet hole in your
shoe.
Holmes finds this tiresome. He takes Irene’s handcuffs
out of his pocket, tosses them on a cluttered dresser.
Watson’s eyebrows raise theatrically when he sees them.
WATSON (CONT’D)
Small caliber gun. A Derringer,
I’d say. At any rate, a woman’s
gun.
(beat)
I know only one woman who’d
actually pull the trigger ...
Holmes doesn’t take well to embarrassment.
HOLMES
(grumpily)
I want you to know I got valuable
information.
WATSON
Oh?
HOLMES
Whoever she’s working for paid
O’Riordan to steal something from
Blackwood.
WATSON
Such as?
HOLMES
I don’t know. But Blackwood’s
principal business is munitions,
so --
A KNOCK ON THE DOOR interrupts.
HOLMES
Who is it?
WIGGINS
(through door)
Me, sir. Wiggins.
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WIGGINS is the oldest of the Irregulars.
WIGGINS
Stillwell Chemicals. It’s the
only one in Nine Elms. It’s on
the river. But they shut it down
this afternoon. On account of the
shindig they’re having tonight.
Big to-do. Bosses and toffs
coming out of yer ears, according
to one of the stokers. Some kind
of celebration.
Holmes and Watson exchange a long look. This sounds
promising.
HOLMES
Thank you, Wiggins. Good work.
Holmes picks up the PURSE FULL OF COINS IRENE LEFT,
tosses it to Wiggins.
WIGGINS
Blimey!
HOLMES
Be fair with it.
WIGGINS
Easy to be fair with this much
money.
Wiggins leaves before anyone changes their minds about
the money.
HOLMES
Bosses and toffs. We’ll have to
dress the part.
Watson shakes his head emphatically.
WATSON
Not we. You.
(beat)
I meant what I said before. I
need to get on with my life.
Holmes turns away so that Watson doesn’t see his
disappointment.
HOLMES
Suit yourself.
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Holmes strides down the hall, looking devastating in
evening wear.
As Holmes walks past, Watson looks up from a crate of
books.
WATSON
Good luck.
HOLMES
Luck has nothing to do with it.
Holmes crosses to the table to get his knife and gun. He
PICKS UP THE GUN first --
-- then, making sure Watson isn’t looking, PUTS THE GUN
BACK ON THE TABLE, leaves, with a sly twinkle in his
eyes.
ON WATSON as the front door clicks closed behind Holmes:
staying behind feels strange. He dusts off another book,
packs it.
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Scene 32 - A Night of Decisions
An industrial area on a torpid bend of the Thames. Work
doesn’t stop when the sun goes down.
We see a vast GASWORKS belching smoke, glowing with
furnace fire. Pyramids of coal and sulfur crowd the
wharf area.
Next, a TALLOWS glistening with rendered animal fat.
Then, a FILTHY BRICK WALL, 20 feet high, topped with
shards of glass. The wall goes on ... and on ... and on.
A block long, broken only by a huge gate, closed.
Anything could happen behind these walls, and nobody
would ever know.
This is the STILLWELL CHEMICAL WORKS. It says so on the
gate.
EXT. CHEMICAL WORKS - NIGHT
ACROSS THE ROAD, deep in the shadows of a claustrophobic
alley, we spot the movement, the shining eyes of two
restless horses.
They are hitched to a very nice CLOSED CARRIAGE.
INT. CLOSED CARRIAGE - NIGHT
Dark. Holmes pulls out his watch, flips it open, angles
it to catch whatever light there is.
Holmes settles in to wait.
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INT. 221B BAKER STREET - NIGHT
Face heavy with thought, Watson heads across the living
room with another arm load of books, then sees something
that stops him in his tracks --
-- HOLMES’ GUN AND KNIFE, on the table.
ON WATSON: Decision time.
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Scene 33 - Midnight Convergence
CLOCKS RING MIDNIGHT all over London. A glorious
cacophony ... but also the beginning of the witching
hour.
EXT. NINE ELMS - NIGHT
As the last chime echoes and dies, another sound fills
the night air. HOOVES AND WHEELS ON COBBLES, coming from
all directions. Lots and lots of them. The streets
echo.
INT. CLOSED CARRIAGE - NIGHT
Holmes sits up straight, pulls down the window and the
staccato sound echoes into the carriage.
EXT. CHEMICAL WORKS - NIGHT
CARRIAGES APPROACH from every angle, homing in on the
chemical works gate. Not just any carriages -- the
equivalent of Rolls Royces, Bentleys, Mercedes’.
(NOTE: these are the same fine carriages we saw at
Blackwood’s beheading.)
The CHEMICAL WORKS GATE rumbles open and the carriages
stream in.
INT. CLOSED CARRIAGE - NIGHT
A discreet rap on the door, it opens, WATSON PULLS
HIMSELF IN, tosses Holmes’ gun and knife onto the seat
next to him. Watson is wearing his EVENING CLOTHES.
WATSON
You left these.
HOLMES
That was careless of me.
Holmes grins, unable to conceal his pleasure.
WATSON
This is the last time.
(beat)
I told Wiggins to get Lestrade if
we weren’t out in an hour.
Holmes reaches down, retrieves a SMALL CASE from under
the seat.
HOLMES
We’ll need this.
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Scene 34 - The Disguised Intrusion
Holmes’ carriage joins the back of the line into the
chemical works, moving slowly.
Once they are through, the gate rumbles closed behind
them.
EXT. BEHIND THE CHEMICAL WORKS WALLS - NIGHT
Behind the brick walls are ACRES OF WAREHOUSES, and
enough outdoor space to hold all the carriages, plus
mounds, piles, barrels of RAW MATERIALS.
ARISTOCRATS, CAPTAINS OF INDUSTRY, MINOR ROYALS,
disembark from the carriages and head for a central
WAREHOUSE DOOR --
EXT. WAREHOUSE - CHEMICAL WORKS - NIGHT
-- guarded by TWO BOWLER-HATTED FOLLOWERS.
We recognize them -- they are two of Dredger’s crew from
earlier and bear the bruises to prove it. They
scrutinize the guests as they pass.
Backs to us, HOLMES AND WATSON JOIN THE LINE into the
door, wait their turn to run the gauntlet. They don’t
seem to realize the danger they are in.
Lambs to the slaughter.
ON THE FOLLOWERS as Holmes and Watson reach them. Sharp,
aggressive eyes rake them ...
... and move on.
REVERSE ANGLE as Holmes and Watson saunter into the
warehouse. We see their faces. They are HEAVILY
DISGUISED -- one of Holmes’ specialities. (Facial hair,
aging, eye glasses, etc.)
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Scene 35 - Chaos in the Warehouse
Torches gutter from the walls, casting unreal light. The
air is THICK WITH PALE SMOKE, which adds to the eeriness.
Music comes from a QUARTET OF BLINDFOLDED MUSICIANS.
People mill, quietly. The tension in the air seems
amplified. No smiles, no laughter. As they look around,
Holmes and Watson hear snippets of conversation -- every
single sentence referring to Blackwood.
WATSON
Isn’t that Sir--?
HOLMES
Yes.
WATSON
And that’s the Royal--?
HOLMES
The entire membership of the Order
of the Golden Bough, all in once
place. Quite the celebration.
WATSON
(coughing due to
smoke)
I’ve been to livelier funerals.
There is a focal point of people in the middle of the
space. Holmes and Watson make for it --
HOLMES
Fear will ruin a party every time.
-- and find themselves looking down at BLACKWOOD’S
FAVORITE OCCULT SYMBOL. Huge, slightly raised off the
floor, the symbol is made up of the raw materials of the
age: the black of coal, the white of lime, the red of
iron, the yellow of sulfur. Like a giant sand painting --
-- and also the SOURCE OF THE SMOKE, which seeps out
through it and billows around them. It is as if this
symbol is a direct doorway to the underworld.
Holmes glances to his right, then looks with full force
at IRENE, wearing an absolutely stunning evening gown.
She turns towards him, slips her arm through his.
IRENE
I enjoyed this afternoon
immensely, by the way.
HOLMES
At my expense. Again.
IRENE
You can afford it.
WATSON
What are you doing here?
IRENE
I never miss a good party.
Holmes laughs, then frowns, puzzled.
The OCCULT SYMBOL suddenly PULSATES, like a living thing.
THE MUSIC CHANGES TENOR, RISING SLOWLY AND RHYTHMICALLY
TOWARDS A CRESCENDO.
The occult symbol writhes, alive.
HOLMES
Did you ...?
He turns to Irene.
HOLMES
... did you see that?
Irene turns IN SLOW MOTION to Holmes.
IRENE
(low, slow)
See what?
THE MUSIC PICKS UP A NOTCH.
Shocked, Holmes turns towards Watson. It takes forever.
HOLMES
Watson ..?
Watson turns, his image strobing in the flickering
torchlight.
WATSON
(lower, slower)
... Whaaaaat?
Holmes opens his mouth to speak, but he can’t. His eyes
widen.
All around, movement and faces swim, whirl, strobe.
Holmes raises his hand to his mouth, bites down hard on
himself. The pain brings him back, for a moment.
HOLMES
... we’ve been drugged; it’s the
smoke ...
THE MUSIC IS REALLY LOUD.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
... fight it ...
He grabs Watson’s hand, Irene’s hand, squeezes hard,
hurting them.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
... fight it ...
SUDDENLY AN ECSTATIC SCREAM splits the air.
The music stops.
The silence is deafening.
It’s clear that something big is about to happen.
The occult symbol begins to hiss and crackle, giving off
clouds of acrid smoke that make everybody recoil.
Another otherworldly scream.
Fear verges into panic.
The entire symbol bursts into flames.
Everyone pushes backwards, chaotically. Women faint.
IRENE
(pointing)
Look.
Behind the flames, a form takes shape.
SOMEONE
He’s here!
The form of a man.
SOMEONE ELSE
He has returned!
BLACKWOOD STEPS OUT OF THE FIRE, smouldering.
He looks bigger, brighter, more alive than ever before.
ON HOLMES: An expression we’ve never seen on his face
before -- UTTER SHOCK.
BLACKWOOD
Kneel.
Everyone drops to one knee. Holmes, Watson and Irene
half a beat late.
Irene looks at Holmes, Watson looks at Holmes -- but
Holmes is still reeling. Bewildered.
WATSON
(whispering)
How can he be alive?
Holmes shakes his head. He doesn’t know.
Blackwood starts to prowl and strut through the kneeling
horde.
BLACKWOOD
Now. Are there any left among you
who do not believe?
Utter silence.
BLACKWOOD (CONT'D)
You!
He points to a kneeling man, who shakes his head.
Blackwood moves closer to Holmes, Watson and Irene.
BLACKWOOD (CONT'D)
(pointing to another)
You, perhaps?
Another petrified head shakes.
Blackwood takes a few more steps, stands right over
Holmes, who keeps his head down, in shadow.
Blackwood points, not at Holmes -- at a WOMAN wearing an
expensive gown just behind him.
BLACKWOOD (CONT'D)
Stand.
The woman rises in terror. Blackwood stalks between
Holmes and Irene, helps the woman to her feet.
BLACKWOOD (CONT'D)
Do you believe?
WOMAN
(voice trembling)
Yes, my Lord.
Blackwood stares into her eyes, puts his hand to her
face.
BLACKWOOD
No. You don’t.
His RUBY RING sparkles as he caresses his hand down the
side of the WOMAN'S face. Her eyes widen, suddenly and
she sinks to the ground --
-- right next to Watson, who watches her spasm, and die.
People recoil. Fear and awe wash the room. Blackwood
has them, every last one of them.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
The Dark One has returned me to
you --
Blackwood stalks away, moving through the kneeling
throng.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
-- with a great blessing.
Big VATS are brought into the kneeling throng by
Blackwood’s Followers. What looks like CEREMONIAL WINE
is ladled out of the vats into cups, which are passed out
into the crowd.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
Through His blood, I give you the
gift of life.
A cup is thrust under Holmes’ nose. He has no choice but
to drink from it -- as do Watson and Irene.
BLACKWOOD (CONT'D)
You are the faithful. You will be
spared. But they will not.
Blackwood stalks towards the corner of the room and
turns.
BLACKWOOD (CONT'D)
London will be ours. And with it
the Empire. A new Empire -- not
this pallid, timid, partial thing
we have now.
Blackwood pauses, radiant. The silence is profound. No
one even dares to breath.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
By the power of the Dark One
himself, I promise you this ...
(beat)
... today at noon the Queen will
open parliament and every one of
those decadent fools who call
themselves her government will be
in attendance. I will touch them
all.
(beat)
The old order will be sacrificed
to make way for the new.
(beat)
And we will demonstrate our new
power to the world in such a way
that they will tremble and fall to
their knees before the might of
the British Empire!
BOOOM! A LOUD EXPLOSION! A huge SEMI-CIRCLE OF FIRE
erupts between Blackwood and his followers. The flames
rush towards him, sweep in towards the wall ... and are
swallowed up by the darkness.
Blackwood is gone. Vanished.
Leaving shrieking, shocked, milling, growing chaos behind
him. People are trampled as the crowd floods towards the
door.
Watson is pushed into Irene. They stumble over the body
of the dead woman, look down at her.
IRENE
All he did was touch her.
Watson rips off his disguise.
WATSON
Where’s Holmes?
They can’t find him.
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Holmes is at the corner of the warehouse where Blackwood
disappeared.
He feels along the floor for a trapdoor. Nothing. Then
he lights a match, looks at the wood-panelled wall,
examining the grain. He sees something --
-- pulls out his pocket-knife and scratches the letter
"H" into a specific panel, then pushes on a KNOT IN THE
WOOD.
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Scene 36 - The Labyrinth of Shadows
A HIDDEN DOOR pops open and Holmes slips through; but the
top of the door hits a trip-switch as it opens, and the
second "click" makes Holmes look up.
He sees the wire of a SILENT ALARM running along the roof
of the corridor --
-- which means that he does not see Dredger standing
right behind him, COSH raised high.
The cosh drops viciously towards Holmes’ head.
SHOCK CUT TO
BLACK:
FADE IN:
INT. THE HORSE TANK - CHEMICAL WORKS - NIGHT
In a SEALED GLASS TANK the size of an Olympic pool --
-- we find ROWS OF DEAD HORSES, hanging upside down from
the roof, suspended by their hooves.
EVERY HORSE IS BLACK. BLACKWOOD’S OCCULT SYMBOL has been
painted in white onto the horses’ flanks. Their long
necks arch downwards, their tails and manes hang limp.
As if this were not surreal enough --
-- each horse has a CURVED GLASS TUBE protruding from its
swollen belly. The inside of these tubes is coated with
a fine, clear, powdery residue. They join a MUCH THICKER
GLASS PIPE, running between the rows of horses towards
DISTILLATION EQUIPMENT.
INT. LABORATORY - CHEMICAL WORKS - NIGHT
This horrible vision is what HOLMES SEES as his eyes
flutter open. He has been positioned to see it.
His disguise has been ripped off and tossed aside, his
knife and gun are on a nearby lab bench, his hands are
tied behind his back, and he has been propped on a lab
stool.
Dredger holds him upright. A FOLLOWER keeps a gun on
him, from behind.
The walls behind him are also thick glass, showing more
darkened laboratories beyond.`
BLACKWOOD
I have a question for you.
Blackwood is every inch the victor.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
How does it feel to realize that
everything you thought about the
world is utterly wrong? To see
your beloved reason and logic
annihilated before your very eyes.
Holmes shakes his head, groggy, tries to clear it.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
Dredger, cut off his head.
Dredger is surprised, but pulls out his razor.
DREDGER
Might take me a while.
Holmes is starting to look distinctly nervous.
BLACKWOOD
Be careful of his face. That I
may want to keep. Depending on
his expression.
Dredger moves in with his razor.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
In the end, you were a poor match,
Sherlock Holmes.
Suddenly, GUNSHOTS ECHO through the factory, over the
rising SHOUTS FROM THE GUESTS and the blasts of POLICE
WHISTLES.
Holmes smiles at Blackwood -- it’s not over yet.
Blackwood loses his easy air of triumph. He turns to the
follower.
BLACKWOOD
Load everything onto the boat.
The follower hurries down a staircase in the corner.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
Still enough time to enjoy you,
though.
Dredger grabs a fistful of Holmes’ hair, exposes his
throat.
DREDGER
Brace yourself.
Holmes struggles. Dredger brings the razor around in
front of Holmes’ face, slowly and sadistically -- then
lowers it to his throat.
CLOSE-UP: Holmes plants his feet firmly on the cross-
piece of the stool --
-- which is when THE GLASS WALL EXPLODES INWARDS, the
heavy BARREL that broke it flying into the room with the
broken glass.
Blackwood turns and dives down the staircase.
Holmes pistons himself upwards, his skull smashing into
Dredger’s face. The razor shaves a section of Holmes’
eyebrow as it jerks past his face.
Watson and Irene pick their way in through the glass,
Irene takes aim at Dredger.
CRACK! Irene fires her little gun, just missing Dredger.
Dredger takes a quick look at Watson and Irene, then at
LESTRADE AND THE POLICE POURING INTO the other end of the
factory -- and takes off as fast as he can.
ON WATSON AND IRENE as they react to the horses for a
moment.
HOLMES
Cut me loose!
Both Irene and Watson go to cut the ropes binding Holmes.
HOLMES
(to Watson)
Stop Blackwood. He’s got a boat
at the wharf.
Watson heads down the stairs after Blackwood and Dredger.
Irene saws at Holmes’ ropes with her knife. They’ll only
be half a beat behind Watson.
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Scene 37 - Tense Standoff at the Wharf
Dredger exits the chemical works, sprints across the
wharf towards a black and red STEAM LAUNCH (a military
prototype) where Blackwood and his core Followers wait.
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ANOTHER ANGLE
Watson exits, sees Dredger, and stops. The very sight of
him shakes Watson -- but that doesn’t stop him gathering
his courage and charging across the wharf towards the
steam launch.
EXT. BLACKWOOD’S LAUNCH - NIGHT
Dredger vaults into the launch. Blackwood covers him
with a gun.
Watson charges into danger.
INT. CORRIDOR - CHEMICAL WORKS
Holmes leads the charge down the corridor, followed by
Irene, Lestrade and half of the LONDON POLICE FORCE.
They pick up speed.
EXT. WHARF - CHEMICAL WORKS - NIGHT
Holmes bursts out onto the wharf -- just in time to see
Blackwood drawing a bead on Watson.
HOLMES
Watson!
Watson dives behind a pallet stacked with barrels.
EXT. BLACKWOOD’S LAUNCH - NIGHT
Blackwood’s gun barrel tracks past Watson and finds the
first of the GAS STORAGE TANKS.
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Scene 38 - Inferno at the Wharf
The crack of the shot is drowned by the almighty roar of
the GAS TANK EXPLODING. The wharf is engulfed in flames.
CUT TO:
As the gaseous fireball rises into the night sky,
Blackwood’s steam launch pulls away onto the dark Thames.
EXT. STEAM LAUNCH - NIGHT
Blackwood stands in the bow, not bothering to hide. He
truly seems invincible.
EXT. WHARF - CHEMICAL WORKS - NIGHT
Whether from the shock of the explosion, or the shock of
seeing Blackwood alive, not a single policeman makes any
kind of move to follow or stop him. They just watch him
disappear down the Thames.
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DOWN THE WHARF:
FOLLOWER
You see! There’s nothing you can
do! Everything he predicted has
come to pass! You cannot stop
him!
CUT TO:
HORROR ON HOLMES’ FACE as he pulls his jacket up over his
head, and CHARGES INTO THE FLAMES, looking for Watson.
The wharf is a mess of flaming, smoking, smouldering
debris. Holmes whirls this way and that, looking
desperately for his friend ...
... but Watson is gone. Holmes stands there, fighting to
maintain himself.
LESTRADE
Up there!
Holmes looks.
Thirty feet above the wharf, A FIGURE LIES TANGLED in the
LOADING BASKET of a dock side CRANE.
Watson. He looks lifeless.
Holmes leaps for the CRANE CAB, works the controls to
lower the basket. The second it reaches the waiting arms
of Lestrade and his men, Holmes leaps out of the cab,
runs for them.
Holmes pushes through, to get to Watson.
Police STRETCHER BEARERS arrive.
Clothes burned, hair singed, skin dark with soot or
bloody with lacerations and punctures, Watson looks done
for, but he groans when the stretcher bearers roll him
roughly onto the stretcher.
The stretcher bearers move Watson down the wharf towards
a waiting carriage. Holmes moves with them down the
wharf.
They reach the waiting carriage. They load Watson.
Holmes is about to climb on, when Lestrade stops him.
LESTRADE
You’re needed here.
(to the driver)
Get him to hospital!
The carriage takes off, with the stretcher bearers
holding Watson down. Holmes watches them go. His face
is wracked with emotion.
LESTRADE (CONT’D)
(losing it, a little)
I watched him die! They cut off
his head! How is this possible?
Holmes turns, looks at Lestrade. His arrogance and
jaunty self-confidence have been blasted away and
replaced with guilt and anguish -- because he knows he
manipulated Watson into being there.
HOLMES
I don’t know.
Lestrade looks genuinely terrified.
LESTRADE
My men have been interrogating the
guests. They all say the same
thing -- Blackwood plans to kill
the Queen and her entire
government using his magic, and
there’s nothing we can do to stop
him.
(beat)
Does he have the power to do that?
Do you think it’s possible?
HOLMES
I don’t know.
LESTRADE
Well we’ve got until noon to stop
him. Or God help us.
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INT. CHEMICAL WORKS - VARIOUS - NIGHT
Holmes strides into the NOW-DESERTED WAREHOUSE, past one
of the VATS OF CEREMONIAL WINE, and towards THE BODY OF
THE WOMAN Blackwood killed.
Light is low. The woman’s body is just a shadow to us.
But not to Holmes. He looks down at her, lost.
He’s vulnerable and human in a way we’ve never seen
before.
A CLINK OF GLASS AGAINST GLASS jerks his head around.
Faint light and the shadow of movement comes from under a
door.
Holmes pulls his gun, stalks towards it.
At the door, he pauses. Hears another clink of glass --
-- rips open the door, ready to fire.
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Scene 39 - A Tenuous Connection
Irene puts down a THICK-WALLED GLASS SPHERE about the
size of a cannon ball.
IRENE
Hello, Sherlock.
Holmes is astounded. Light from Irene’s KEROSENE LAMP
shows a shelf of glass spheres.
They look at the glass spheres, clear and beautiful in
the abstract, obscure but disturbing as to their purpose.
Beyond her, a shattered wall gives us A GLIMPSE OF THE
HORSE TANK.
IRENE (CONT’D)
I’m sorry about Watson. I hope he
pulls through.
Holmes can’t bear to talk about Watson.
HOLMES
What are you here for? What do
you want with Blackwood?
IRENE
Now, Sherlock --
HOLMES
(harsh, rough)
No more games. If you know
anything that would help stop him,
this is the time to say so.
Holmes is ragged with emotion. His eyes are dangerous.
They pierce Irene. She nods.
IRENE
Blackwood’s family has
manufactured weapons for
generations. The kind of weapons
that build Empires, that kill and
maim on a grand scale.
(MORE)
IRENE (CONT'D)
There’ve been rumors in Europe of
something new from Blackwood.
Unconventional. Powerful.
(beat)
Magical.
She gestures at the HORSE TANK. The horses, the glass
tubes, the metal curlicues of the distillation equipment,
the clear powder. It’s a vision from Hell. Its very
existence makes Blackwood’s power seem more real.
IRENE (CONT’D)
It appears the rumors were true.
Irene moves towards the door.
IRENE (CONT’D)
Now, if you don’t mind --
Holmes gives her space. They are face to face in the
doorway. Lots of complicated, impossible stuff in the
air between, all of it overshadowed by Blackwood.
HOLMES
Where are you going?
IRENE
I don’t want to be here at noon.
Nor should you. Come with me.
(beat)
Or are you the kind of Englishman
who has to go down with his ship?
One look into Holmes’ eyes and Irene knows the answer.
IRENE (CONT’D)
Good luck, then.
HOLMES
Stay.
IRENE
Stay?
HOLMES
I --
(beat)
I find I work better with a
partner.
A moment of consideration, then a tiny, regretful shake
of her head.
IRENE
You need a partner you can trust.
We’d betray each other, for all
the right reasons.
Irene reaches up, kisses him. He is a statue.
IRENE
I’ll see you again. I hope.
Irene leaves, as tough as she is beautiful.
Holmes watches her go, something like despair in his
eyes.
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Scene 40 - A Moment of Resolve
Holmes hurries through the streets of his beloved city as
it comes awake. He has changed out of evening wear.
Unsuspecting Londoners launch themselves at yet another
day, full of hope and energy.
Holmes is agonizingly aware that, unless Blackwood can be
stopped, these people will live and die in terror.
INT. HOSPITAL - DAY
Holmes strides down the corridor, slows and lets his
footsteps soften as he approaches Watson’s room.
Holmes peeks in through the door --
-- and sees Mary sitting on a chair next to Watson’s bed.
Watson is asleep or unconscious. She holds his hand.
Her eyes are closed. She is there for the duration,
willing him better.
INT. WATSON’S HOSPITAL ROOM - DAY
Holmes looks on for a long moment. The sight pierces
him. He knows he is seeing something precious, that he
nearly destroyed.
Mary senses him, but as she looks up --
-- Holmes ducks back out of sight.
Then, we hear the SOUND OF HIS FOOTSTEPS RETREATING down
the corridor.
Mary gets to her feet, moves quickly to the door.
MARY
Sherlock.
INT. HOSPITAL CORRIDOR - DAY
Holmes stops, face anguished. He’d rather face Dredger
than Mary.
Mary catches up to him, and he turns to face her.
HOLMES
I ...
And that’s all he can manage.
Mary reaches out, takes one of Holmes’ hands in both of
hers, looks him in the eye.
MARY
Sherlock, there’s something I want
you to know.
(beat)
I want to marry him, not diminish
him.
(beat)
He has a generous heart. There’s
room in it for both of us. But
not if Blackwood has his way.
(beat)
Do you understand?
Holmes nods, yes. Mary releases Holmes’ hand.
MARY (CONT’D)
Stop him. Nothing else matters.
Strong words. Mary turns, marches back to Watson.
Holmes watches her go and is puzzled by a strange new
feeling -- admiration for an ordinary woman.
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Scene 41 - Frustration at Scotland Yard
Lestrade is at the center of a storm of bobby blue, as
POLICE RUNNERS enter and leave at high speed, underlings
carry out orders, markers are placed on a huge wall map
of London.
POLICE RUNNER
(out of breath)
Here, sir.
Lestrade takes the note, glances at it, hands it to the
MAN AT THE MAP.
LESTRADE
Mark it.
A marker goes onto the map. Lestrade turns back -- sees
Holmes approaching through the hubbub.
LESTRADE (CONT’D)
Any progress?
Holmes shakes his head, no. Disappointed, Lestrade looks
at a wall clock -- 8 AM. He takes Holmes over to the big
wall map.
LESTRADE (CONT’D)
We know he hasn’t passed our dock
at Limehouse Reach, to the east,
and we know he hasn’t passed
Canary Wharf to the west. The
boat has to be in this three mile
stretch of river in between.
Lestrade hammers on the map, frustrated.
LESTRADE (CONT’D)
We’ve searched every dock, jetty,
slip, ramp, hoist, berth -- twice.
I’ve got men on the river, I’ve
put everyone else onto the
streets. I’ve authorized a
reward.
(beat)
He’s simply disappeared. It’s
just not --
Holmes shoots Lestrade a look, and Lestrade stops.
LESTRADE (CONT’D)
Come. It’s impossible out here.
Lestrade leads Holmes to his own office, opens the door.
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Scene 42 - A Desperate Plea and Unbreakable Bond
Once inside, Lestrade shows the desperation he couldn’t
in front of his men.
LESTRADE
The Queen refuses to cancel the
opening of Parliament. She says
she won’t be intimidated by a
madman. She says she has absolute
faith in her guards -- and
Scotland Yard.
(beat)
(MORE)
LESTRADE (CONT'D)
I’ve searched every corner of
Parliament. I’ve doubled the
guards. I’ve done everything I
can. But I’m at a complete loss.
(beat)
We have less than four hours until
noon. I need one of your
miracles, Holmes. More than ever
before.
Pressure. Holmes says nothing.
LESTRADE (CONT’D)
You won’t be disturbed.
Lestrade leaves, closes the door. Holmes goes to the
window. Opens it, and the sounds of the city flood in.
Holmes stands at the window, looking out at London.
CUT TO:
HOLMES POV: teeming, busy streets.
CUT TO:
ON HOLMES as he tries to think his way through
Blackwood’s maze.
BEGIN FAST, IMPRESSIONISTIC IMAGES FLASHES (ALL FROM
HOLMES’ POV):
- Blackwood’s execution,
- Blackwood’s tomb,
- Blackwood’s resurrection,
- Blackwood killing the woman with his touch,
BOOM!
THE FLOW OF IMAGES INTERRUPTS on the gas tank explosion,
- on Watson hanging in the crane basket,
- on Watson carted off to hospital, more dead than alive.
BACK TO HOLMES, as he shakes his head, tries to make
order of chaos ... and fails.
TIME DISSOLVE TO:
Thunk!
Holmes walks to the knife, retrieves it from Lestrade’s
office door, walks back, turns, throws ... thunk!
As he pulls the knife out of the door, leaving a mark ...
TIME DISSOLVE TO:
... hundreds of marks in the door --
-- which is opened by Lestrade, whose eyes flare as he
sees the knife coming at him and closes the door --
Thunk!
-- just in time. The door stays closed. Holmes
retrieves the knife, walks back for another throw.
IMAGES FLASHES:
- the woman killed by Blackwood’s touch,
- the black horses,
- the glass spheres,
- the --
A LOUD KNOCK at the door rips Holmes out of his thought
process.
Irritated, Holmes strides across the room, jerks open the
door --
HOLMES
Lestrade! How am I supposed to --
-- and sees WATSON STANDING THERE, battered, bandaged,
barely upright. Just getting there has taken an enormous
effort.
Watson grins through the pain, holds HOLMES’ VIOLIN.
WATSON
You’ll need this.
They don’t say anything. They don’t need to.
Holmes takes his violin.
Watson leaves, closes the door.
Holmes scrapes the bow across the strings.
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Scene 43 - The Distraction of Genius
OVER, we hear the SOUND OF THE VIOLIN BEING TUNED.
Lestrade glares at Watson.
Suddenly, a STARTLINGLY HORRIBLE CASCADE OF VIOLIN SOUND
pours out from Lestrade’s office, bringing the whole
situation room to a halt.
Watson grins, pulls TWO WADS OF COTTON WOOL from his
pocket, stuffs them in his ears, as the VIOLIN IS PUSHED
BEYOND ITS LIMITS.
The violin is absolute torture for everyone but Watson.
A POLICE RUNNER BURSTS IN, spent, staggers as fast as he
can across to Lestrade.
POLICE RUNNER
(panting)
Blackwood’s launch. Heading up
river from his estate. We’re in
pursuit.
Lestrade springs into motion, begins giving orders.
CUT TO:
INT. LESTRADE’S OFFICE - DAY
The violin music is becomes melodious, almost listenable.
Holmes plays with his eyes closed.
WATSON
Holmes ...
Watson stands near Holmes.
WATSON
Holmes.
Holmes’ eyes open, but he doesn’t stop playing.
WATSON (CONT’D)
They’ve found Blackwood’s launch,
heading upriver.
Holmes shakes his head, closes his eyes and turns away,
still playing, sweetly now.
IMAGES FLASHES:
- Blackwood stands tall in his launch, heading down
river,
- Lestrade’s wall map of the Thames,
- the headline Blackwood Bridge contracts cancelled,
- the workmen at Tower Bridge take down the BLACKWOOD
STEEL SIGN ...
... repeat ...
- the workmen at Tower Bridge take down the BLACKWOOD
STEEL SIGN ...
CUT TO:
ON HOLMES as he blinks, begins to come out of his trance
a little, notes repeating on the violin.
THE BOW STOPS. Silence.
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Scene 44 - The Hidden Dock
Scotland Yard is almost deserted. Watson stands
painfully, in anticipation. Takes the cotton out of his
ears.
Lestrade’s door opens. Holmes emerges, drenched in
sweat, eyes wide with neural overload.
HOLMES
If every place a boat could be
moored has been searched by
Lestrade -- then the boat is
somewhere it could not be moored.
Watson smiles. He knows the signs. Holmes is firing on
all cylinders again.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
What place on the river that is
not a mooring does Blackwood have
access to? Special access.
Watson thinks, then --
WATSON
Oh. Tower Bridge.
Holmes grins.
WATSON (CONT’D)
The bridge footings are huge.
Easily big enough for a concealed
dock.
HOLMES
And Blackwood’s engineers helped
with the design.
Holmes pauses, looks around, finally in the present.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Where is everyone?
CUT TO:
EXT. POLICE DOCKS - DAY
A FLOTILLA OF POLICE LAUNCHES can just be seen taking the
bend at Waterloo Bridge, heading upstream at full speed.
CUT TO:
A small, fast POLICE LAUNCH waits for Holmes and Watson
as they stride fast down the dock.
Holmes leads Watson onto the launch past a YOUNG
POLICEMEN, who tends the gangway.
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Scene 45 - Unexpected Alliances
As Holmes and Watson board, (the latter with a visible
wince) the young policeman uncleats the bow line.
LAUNCH CAPTAIN
We’ll need to hurry to catch
Inspector Lestrade.
HOLMES
No, we won’t. We’re heading in
the other direction.
LAUNCH CAPTAIN
But, Detective --
Holmes shoves the launch away from the dock.
HOLMES
(looking up at the
sun)
As fast as you can, please.
The young policeman hops on board with the lines as the
launch captain ramps up the engine.
Holmes and Watson head for the bow. It is a relief to
both of them to have a clear direction. A solution.
They allow themselves to drink in the magnificent view of
London, for a moment.
The young policeman coils the bow line, just behind them.
Then, back to business:
HOLMES
Irene said Blackwood had a magical
new weapon. Is it possible it’s
some kind of poison?
WATSON
You mean, the way he killed that
woman?
(with a shudder)
I’ve never seen anything that fast-
acting or vicious.
HOLMES
And, if instead of one person, you
wanted to kill many ..?
Watson looks at Holmes with growing horror.
WATSON
Somehow, put it in the water. Or
the air.
HOLMES
So, you see Irene --
Holmes lunges backwards fast as a snake, hooks the young
policeman by the collar, yanks him towards them --
-- and blocks a punch he knew was coming. The young
policeman’s hat falls off to REVEAL IRENE, IN DISGUISE.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
-- it’s science, not magic.
Irene pulls herself free, looks at Holmes coolly.
IRENE
How does science explain the fact
that we saw Blackwood die a couple
of days ago, and yet now he’s more
alive than ever?
Irene and Watson look at Holmes for an answer. He
doesn’t have one.
HOLMES
Your employer must be paying you a
lot of money to find out.
IRENE
I’m insulted. I came to help you.
WATSON
In disguise?
IRENE
Does it matter? We all want the
same thing.
HOLMES
Is that so?
IRENE
Yes, to stop Blackwood.
(at Holmes)
You said you needed a partner,
Sherlock.
A look passes between Watson and Holmes. Did he really
say that?
WATSON
She’s too dangerous.
Holmes beckons the launch Captain.
HOLMES
Handcuffs.
The Captain approaches, hands Holmes some cuffs.
IRENE
You don’t need those --
Irene reaches out, pats Watson lightly on the side --
IRENE (CONT’D)
-- you need me.
-- which just about doubles Watson over with pain, from
his broken ribs. Point made by Irene.
IRENE (CONT’D)
Use me. I’m very good at what I
do.
ON HOLMES: decision time.
WATSON
She tried to shoot you yesterday.
IRENE
And helped save your life today.
Holmes looks at the cuffs -- then puts them in his
pocket.
WATSON
This is crazy. You cannot trust
her.
Holmes looks Irene in the eye with harsh amusement.
HOLMES
Oh, I don’t --
Holmes points at the high sun.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
-- but sometimes you work with
what’s available.
Irene smiles back dangerously.
IRENE
Don’t worry Doctor -- it’ll only
be temporary.
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Scene 46 - Holmes's Urgent Search at Tower Bridge
Establishing. Tower Bridge is a COMBINATION SUSPENSION
AND LEAF BRIDGE, one of the marvels of Victorian
engineering.
TWO MASSIVE STEEL SKELETONS face each other across the
Thames, poised on top of huge CONCRETE PILINGS. These
are the bridge uprights, or STANCHIONS.
A CONSTRUCTION CRANE perches on top of each stanchion,
and reaches out across the river.
The stanchions are in the process of being linked across
the top by a HORIZONTAL NETWORK OF STEEL GIRDERS,
starting from either side of the river. At present, the
GIRDERS ONLY REACH PARTWAY across the Thames.
The GAP BETWEEN THEM is SPANNED BY a seemingly chaotic
tangle of ropes and RICKETY SCAFFOLDING, supported by the
CONSTRUCTION CRANES FROM EITHER SIDE. Beneath them --
-- the middle section has TWO HUGE LEAVES that can be
lifted with hydraulic pumps and MASSIVE COUNTERWEIGHTS
inside the stanchions, to allow shipping to pass through.
Right now, the LEAVES ARE IN THE UP POSITION, almost
perpendicular to the Thames.
Right BENEATH THE TOWER-SIDE LEAF, WE FIND THE POLICE
LAUNCH, nosed up against the piling.
HOLMES IS IN THE BOW, banging on the concrete with a BOAT
HOOK. He hasn’t found anything.
HOLMES
It must be in the other one.
The launch takes off across the river.
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Scene 47 - The Vanishing Act
Holmes hammers ON THE OTHER PILING, faster and faster,
trying without success to find anything other than solid
concrete.
Desperation time.
LAUNCH CAPTAIN
That’s it, sir. Twice around both
sides.
Holmes lowers the boat hook.
HOLMES
He can’t have vanished into thin
air. It’s not possible.
Irene shakes her head -- so much for Holmes’s idea --
LOOKS UP AT THE BRIDGE SPECULATIVELY.
WATSON
The Queen opens parliament in half
an hour.
Holmes nods, lowers his head, the very picture of defeat.
CUT TO:
EXT. BLACKWOOD’S LAUNCH - DAY
We find Lestrade in a similar defeated pose, on board
Blackwood’s red and black launch --
-- where two of Blackwood’s bowler-hatted Followers are
under arrest. But no Blackwood.
Lestrade smells something pungent, sticks out his finger,
touches it to the side of the cabin. Wet paint. This
whole chase was a decoy -- and it worked. Half of
Scotland Yard are on launches surrounding the decoy.
Lestrade pulls his watch, looks at it, looks up at the
sun, as if trying to will time to stand still.
CUT TO:
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Scene 48 - The Hidden Threat at Traitor's Gate
Flanked by her mounted guards, THE QUEEN’S COACH
approaches the Houses of Parliament. Magnificent ... and
completely vulnerable.
CUT TO:
EXT. POLICE LAUNCH - DAY
Sun high over the Thames. Clouds moving in, wind picking
up, weather turning English fast.
Holmes hasn’t moved. If anything, his head is even
lower, his eyes on the water lapping against the side of
the launch.
LAUNCH CAPTAIN
I’ll take us back to Scotland
Yard.
Holmes doesn’t reply. Watson nods.
The captain gooses the engine, throws them into a turn
and accelerates.
As they pick up speed the launch rises out of the water,
revealing the vertical measuring lines on the hull, below
the plimsol line. (Lines which help gauge how heavily
loaded the vessel is.)
ON HOLMES as he really focusses on the revealed lines on
the hull ... and a brain-based electrical charge
energizes him.
HOLMES
Wait.
Holmes raises his head, looks across the water --
-- turns to the launch Captain, points.
HOLMES
Take us there.
He’s pointing at the TOWER OF LONDON.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Now.
The Launch Captain red-lines the engine. Holmes whirls
towards Watson and Irene.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Over twenty feet of tide at this
time of year.
They’re right under the TOWER EMBANKMENT.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Hide tide now, but not this early
this morning.
Watson and Irene don’t get it.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
(to captain)
Stop the boat.
As the engine howls into reverse and the launch settles
hard:
HOLMES (CONT’D)
No better place to hide a boat
than somewhere with an entrance
that simply disappears.
As the boat stops, Watson and Irene see it --
-- the top of the arch of TRAITOR’S GATE, just visible
above the rolling waterline, the bulk of the opening
hidden under water.
WATSON
Traitor’s Gate.
HOLMES
Yes.
IRENE
How appropriate.
Watson looks at the water -- and sighs. He knows exactly
what Holmes has in mind.
CUT TO:
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Scene 49 - A Stealthy Intrusion
Big Ben shows that it is ten minutes to noon.
INT. HOUSES OF PARLIAMENT - DAY
A JEWEL-ENCRUSTED MACE KNOCKS THREE TIMES on a huge door.
The huge door is opened from inside.
A CHAMBER FULL OF AUGUST MEN RISES TO THEIR FEET, to
welcome their Queen.
As Lestrade pointed out -- the entire government of
England is here, in one place.
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INT. TRAITOR’S GATE - DAY
Murky water laps the stone stairs down to the flooded
gate.
Holmes, Watson and Irene appear from underwater.
Stealthy, no splashes.
Deep in the corner, tight to the wall, BLACKWOOD’S
LAUNCH. The real one.
Confirmation. Brief satisfaction.
Then they see the silhouettes of TWO BOWLER-HATTED
GUARDS, upstairs and outside.
EXT. TOWER OF LONDON - DAY
The two guards don’t stand a chance. Holmes takes out
one, Irene the other.
Watson joins them. He’s having trouble keeping up.
Holmes sees something that makes him smile grimly.
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Scene 50 - The Rise of Darkness
Blackwood’s Followers have their foreheads pressed to the
grass.
Dredger watches them, a hyper-alert slab of malevolence.
Around the perimeter, several BOWLER-HATTED THUGS stand
guard.
Blackwood kneels at the apex of the arc, lips moving
soundlessly as he summons the Dark One.
Something moans in the air. Wind? Or not.
Blackwood’s eyes shoot open, his head snaps up and he
rises to his feet as if some unseen power pulled him
upright.
Blackwood glitters with cruel power and triumph. He is
terrifying.
BLACKWOOD
The Duke of Devon, stand.
A FEEBLE, MINOR ROYAL staggers to his feet, shaking with
fear.
Blackwood surges towards him, stops, fixes him with his
reptilian eyes and places his right hand on his cheek.
The Duke of Devon almost faints.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
You will give the new Empire a
royal face.
(beat)
Lord Cholmondely, stand.
An AUGUST NOBLE stands, terrified. Blackwood caresses
his cheek.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
You will be Prime Minister.
(to the others)
The rest of you will be named to
my Cabinet as needed.
CUT TO:
FROM CONCEALMENT, Holmes, Watson and Irene look on.
BACK TO:
BLACKWOOD
And I? What will I be? What does
the Dark One want of me? King?
Emperor? No, nothing so grand.
I’m to be what I was born for, no
more and no less.
(beat)
In our new Empire ... I am the
Minister of War.
Blackwood stops dead.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
My first act is a necessary one,
for without death, there can be no
rebirth.
Blackwood turns slowly.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
Let us now open the Gates of Hell
and begin our new world ... with
the death of the old.
Blackwood faces the White Tower, eyes tilting up towards
the top floor.
SMASH CUT TO:
Holmes and Watson share an urgent look.
BACK TO:
Blackwood raises his hands, and begins a chant in an
ancient language.
The Followers look on in increasing terror.
Dredger’s eyes dance with anticipation.
CUT TO:
Keeping cover between them and Blackwood, Holmes, Watson
and Irene make for the White Tower.
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Scene 51 - A Timely Rescue
The White Tower is a square tower, four stories high.
TWO STAIRCASES in opposite corners lead to the top floor;
one is made of STONE, one is made of WOOD.
Neither staircase can be seen from the other.
TWO BOWLER-HATTED THUGS GUARD THE WOODEN STAIR CASE --
-- HOLMES AND WATSON drop them from behind.
THEY HEAD UPSTAIRS, FAST.
Or, in Watson’s case, not so fast. He falls behind.
When Irene turns to look back, he waves her on, pauses to
rest.
Which is when A BOWLER-HATTED THUG JUMPS HIM FROM BEHIND.
This isn’t a fight. Watson is no match. He quickly
finds himself staring down the barrel of a gun, about to
die --
-- but the THUG JERKS, GASPS, sinks to the ground with
IRENE’S WICKED LITTLE KNIFE sticking out of his back.
Irene swarms back down the stairs, retrieves her knife,
and gives Watson a saucy shrug; aren’t you glad I’m here
now?
Watson acknowledges her point, stepping over the dead
Follower --
-- which DISLODGES HIS BOWLER HAT and sends it rolling
down the stairs.
CUT TO:
EXT. TOWER GREEN - DAY
Sun, minutes from noon. Blackwood’s countdown increases
in intensity. Dredger looks around, sees movement as --
-- THE BOWLER HAT TUMBLES OUT OF THE DOOR AT THE BASE OF
THE WHITE TOWER.
Dredger frowns -- then heads for the White Tower, fast.
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Scene 52 - Race Against Time
AT THE TOP FLOOR OF WHITE TOWER, Holmes, Irene and Watson
look at --
BARREL AFTER BARREL OF EXPLOSIVE, clustered together in a
circle, each labelled:
BLACKWOOD MUNITIONS
HIGH EXPLOSIVE
BY ORDER OF THE QUEEN
Enough explosive to vaporize the top of White Tower.
There’s a THICK GLASS CYLINDER about a two feet in
diameter and four feet long, base wedged into the center
of the barrels. It is sealed with a STAINLESS STEEL LID
LOCKED to the glass.
They move closer. Light from a nearby window illuminates
the glass cylinder so that the contents can be seen
clearly.
At the top of the glass cylinder: cogs, springs,
flywheels, all in motion. Whirring movement, ominous
ticking. A CLOCK-FACE WITH A RED SWEEP reads THREE
MINUTES TO NOON.
Beneath the applied watchmaking, half of the cylinder is
packed with a soft, grey, ugly paste. Cordite detonator.
Below the cordite, is THICK GLASS SPHERE like those we
saw at Blackwood’s factory. It is full of THE CLEAR
POWDER FROM THE HORSE TANK.
HOLMES
Blackwood’s weapon.
WATSON
It was incubated in the bodies of
the horses. It’s biological.
They’re beginning to understand the horror of what
they’re looking at.
IRENE
How does it work?
WATSON
The blast will spread the
particles into the atmosphere for
miles around. Anyone breathing
them in will end up like the woman
at the factory.
IRENE
Everyone in the Parliament
building --
WATSON
(grim)
And everyone else within the
radius of the blast.
Their faces show how staggered they are.
WATSON (CONT’D)
Thousands of innocent people.
Two and half minutes.
THE SOUND OF HEAVY FOOTSTEPS clatters up towards them UP
BOTH STAIRWAYS.
HOLMES
(to Irene)
Can you pick the lock?
In response, Irene reaches up to her hair, pulls out TWO
LONG, THIN HAIR PINS and starts to climb ONTO THE BARRELS
OF HIGH EXPLOSIVE. Watson grabs her arm.
WATSON
Wait! See those two springs.
That’s a motion sensor. Any sharp
movement...
IRENE nods, takes a deep breath, slides onto the barrels
of explosive and steps gingerly towards the glass sphere.
A gut-clenching perch.
HOLMES LOCKS THE THICK DOOR at the top of the wooden
stairs.
The stone stairs have no door. Holmes joins Watson.
They pull their revolvers, take shelter on either side of
the doorway.
WATSON (CONT’D)
I’ve only got six shots.
HOLMES
(with a grin)
Then we’re in trouble if there are
more than twelve.
THE FIRST OF THE BOWLER-HATTED THUGS CHARGE up at them.
Holmes and Watson fire down with disciplined shots.
FOLLOW THE FIRST SHOT THUG AS HE TUMBLES DOWNSTAIRS --
-- to find AT LEAST TWENTY MORE waiting to take his
place, with Dredger commanding them.
DREDGER
Keep going!
DREDGER RUNS for the wooden stairs, bounds up them until
he reaches the locked door.
He raises his huge foot, kicks at the door. No go.
It’ll take a siege engine.
He pivots, kicks out the window, squeezes himself out of
it and swings sideways.
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Irene leans right over the glass cylinder and starts to
pick the lock.
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A brief pause as the thugs pull the dead and wounded out
of the way.
HOLMES
How many shots left?
WATSON
Three.
Both men look around the top floor. Nothing but a couple
of SUITS OF ARMOR and a SMALL CEREMONIAL CANNON, on
wheels, that hasn’t been fired in at least a century.
HOLMES
Irene?
Last sun streaming in helps. Irene works her hair pins
deftly. Click!
IRENE
Got it.
Then the sunlight is eclipsed --
-- by Dredger’s body, as he CRASHES IN THROUGH THE
WINDOW, rolls to his feet, opens his RAZOR and HEADS
STRAIGHT FOR IRENE.
Holmes tosses his gun to Watson, launches himself across
the room at Dredger --
HOLMES
(to Irene)
Don’t stop!
-- and hits the huge Cockney with the THREE-PUNCH
SEQUENCE THAT DROPPED MCMURDO in his tracks earlier.
DREDGER GRINS, LUNGES AT HOLMES with the razor. Holmes
dances back out of reach.
THE CHARGE FROM BELOW RESUMES. Watson fires both guns,
husbanding his bullets.
IRENE OPENS THE STAINLESS STEEL LID, and stares in at a
maze of cogs, springs and flywheels -- which keep
ticking.
A RED SWEEP ON THE TIMER GIVES THEM ABOUT A MINUTE.
Holmes vs. Dredger. This is a brutal, visceral fight.
Dredger is stronger, Holmes is more skilled. Dredger has
his beloved razor. Every time we look at Holmes, he has
another ruby stripe from a near-miss. After Holmes ducks
under a razor-slash and thuds a side-kick against
Dredger’s ribs:
HOLMES (CONT’D)
(panting)
Irene?
Irene doesn’t answer -- she has most of the timer out of
the cylinder ... and sees that ANY FURTHER MOVEMENT WILL
TRIGGER THE DETONATOR.
Then, CLICK! CLICK! Both of Watson’s guns are empty.
FOOTSTEPS KEEP COMING. Grunting with pain, Watson picks
up the NEAREST SUIT OF ARMOR, HURLS IT down the stairs,
buys a little time.
A STEEL GAUNTLET falls off the armor in passing. Holmes
scoops it up and --
CLANG!
-- uses the armor to KNOCK THE RAZOR OUT of Dredger’s
hand.
Dredger grabs Holmes and hurls him through the air.
HOLMES HAMMERS INTO THE BARRELS OF EXPLOSIVE, shifting
them -- and the glass cylinder.
IRENE
Please don’t do that.
Dredger rushes Holmes. Holmes dives at his feet,
tripping him. DREDGER HAMMERS INTO THE EXPLOSIVES --
-- nearly knocking Irene over.
But also dislodging the glass cylinder.
Irene braces for the explosion -- heaves a huge sigh of
relief when it doesn’t come.
She starts to gently coax the timer and cordite out of
the cylinder. Delicacy amidst mayhem.
Watson tosses the LAST SUIT OF ARMOR DOWN the stairs.
HOLMES AND DREDGER GRAPPLE AND ROLL on the floor.
Dredger gets on top of Holmes, hammers him with
thunderous blows -- once, twice, bouncing Holmes’ head
off the stone floor, viciously -- but not a third time as
Holmes times it, twists, sends Dredger over sideways --
CLOSE UP: onto his own razor, with all his weight.
DREDGER HOWLS, thrusts himself up to his feet, looks down
at the RAZOR THRUST TO THE HILT into his gut.
He reaches down, pulls it out, stands, gushing blood,
takes one step towards Holmes, drops to his knees, drops
the razor, looks at Holmes with shock and outrage --
-- and dies.
In the distance the BELLS OF ST. PAUL’S CATHEDRAL BEGIN
TO CHIME NOON.
BONG! One.
WATSON
(in pain)
I need help.
WATSON PUSHES THE CEREMONIAL CANNON across the room
towards the stairs --
-- where MORE THUGS are almost at the top of the stairs.
BONG! Two.
HOLMES JOINS WATSON AT THE CANNON. They launch it down
the stairs --
-- where it BOWLS OVER THE REMAINING THUGS.
BONG! Three.
HOLMES
Irene?
He turns.
But IRENE IS GONE. WITH THE GLASS SPHERE.
BONG! Four.
The door to the wooden stairs is open.
The detonator lies on its side, on the barrels of
explosive, trailing metal linkages to the timer.
BONG! Five.
THE DETONATOR -- whirring movement, ominous ticking -- is
still armed.
BONG! Six.
Holmes and Watson step backwards, look at the door.
BONG! Seven.
Watson shakes his head.
WATSON
Not enough time.
They look back at the DETONATOR --
BONG! Eight.
-- then at the WINDOW Dredger burst in through.
No communication necessary. They lunge for the
detonator, scoop it up and run for the broken window on --
BONG! Nine.
-- but the DETONATOR WON’T FIT through the jagged hole.
Holmes kicks at the debris, clearing out the window as --
BONG! Ten. BONG! Eleven. The bells are one strike
from noon.
They jam the detonator through the window. It just
scrapes through on --
BONG! Twelve.
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Scene 53 - Chaos at the White Tower
IN SLO MO, THE GLASS CYLINDER FALLS towards the ground.
In mid-air --
BOOOOOOOOOOOM!
The explosion hammers the White Tower --
-- and SCATTERS BLACKWOOD AND HIS FOLLOWERS like autumn
leaves.
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INT. WHITE TOWER - DAY
The top floor sways impressively. Holmes and Watson lie
collapsed on the floor next to Dredger’s razor. They
look at it.
WATSON
I think I’m going to grow a beard.
HOLMES
I’ll join you.
Holmes leaps up and charges down the stairs. Watson
tries. He can’t. He’s done.
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EXT. WHITE TOWER - DAY
Smoke, burning debris, the scattered, moaning bodies of
Blackwood’s followers.
Irene charges out of the White Tower with the glass
sphere under her arm. She runs for Tower Bridge.
Blast-seared but very much alive, Blackwood sees her,
goes after her immediately.
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EXT. THE THAMES RIVER - DAY
A FLOTILLA OF POLICE LAUNCHES approaches the Tower.
Lestrade stands at the bow of the lead launch, eyes wide
as he watches a CLOUD OF DUST AND DEBRIS roil into the
air around the Tower.
LESTRADE
Faster!
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Scene 54 - Race Against Time at Tower Bridge
Irene sprints into the CONSTRUCTION SITE. She darts
between piles of planks, steel, coils of rope, heads for
the BRIDGE STANCHION, and a self-propelled CONSTRUCTION
LIFT.
Irene hauls herself upwards, BLACKWOOD’S WEAPON nestled
in her lap.
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EXT. TOWER OF LONDON - DAY
Holmes tries to decide where Irene went. His eyes sweep
towards the river, then the bridge.
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EXT. TOP OF TOWER BRIDGE - DAY
Irene steps onto the top of the stanchion. She pulls out
a waterproof FLARE and LIGHTS IT.
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EXT. TOWER OF LONDON - DAY
Seen through the dust from the explosion, IRENE’S FLARE
GLOWS RED at the top of the stanchion.
HOLMES SPRINTS towards Tower Bridge.
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EXT. THE THAMES RIVER - DAY
On the horizon in the distance, the GLOW OF THE FLARE can
be seen above the dust surrounding the bridge.
VOICE (V.O.)
She’s got it.
An IDLING ENGINE THROTTLES UP and a POWERFUL BOAT
accelerates through the frame.
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EXT. TOWER BRIDGE - DAY
Holmes reaches the CONSTRUCTION SITE, runs for the
STANCHION. He could climb -- there are LADDERS
EVERYWHERE -- but that would be slow.
Holmes sees the HUGE COUNTERWEIGHT, clearly visible at
ground level inside the as-yet unclad structure of the
stanchion.
Holmes grabs a pick axe, darts to the BIG LEVER that
frees the leaf, HAMMERS THE LOCK off it with one decisive
blow, PUSHES THE LEVER all the way over --
-- sprints, jumps, lands on top of the COUNTERWEIGHT.
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THE MIGHTY LEAF BEGINS TO LOWER towards the Thames --
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-- and the COUNTERWEIGHT, WITH HOLMES ON TOP OF IT, RISES
up INSIDE THE STANCHION.
Smooth, stylish, radical -- quintessential Holmes.
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Scene 55 - Clash at Tower Bridge
As the counterweight comes to a stop at the top, HOLMES
pulls himself into the steelwork and climbs onto the TOP
OF THE STANCHION.
The light is sultry. Wind gusts strong. Weather coming
in.
The top of the stanchion is not a solid surface. Massive
steel girders are crisscrossed with planks and ladders.
Even though roped down, planks shudder in the wind.
Precarious, exposed terrain.
Further out, precarious becomes out-and-out dangerous.
Nothing but A HUNDRED FEET OF TEMPORARY SCAFFOLDING --
PLANKS ACROSS THICK ROPE -- spans the gap between the
steel, SUPPORTED from either end by the CRANES.
Which is where Holmes sees a FAMILIAR FIGURE SILHOUETTED
at the swaying, shuddering middle of the bridge.
Irene.
Angry, Holmes leaps along planks and girders towards her.
And then Holmes freezes at the edge of the temporary
scaffolding.
Because the shape of the silhouette has changed, grown --
-- to reveal that BLACKWOOD HAS IRENE.
He holds her from behind, his gun to her head. Blood
trickles from a gash in her forehead. She looks dazed,
concussed, almost unable to take her own weight.
BLACKWOOD’S WEAPON GLEAMS precariously at their feet in a
nest of coiled rope.
This is an insane place to be but Blackwood doesn’t seem
to notice. All he wants is revenge, no matter what it
costs him.
BLACKWOOD
You’re just in time, detective.
Irene starts to sag. Blackwood twists her arm up her
back and she gasps in pain, stands up.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
We can share her agony.
Blackwood cocks the gun.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
Ready?
HOLMES
Go ahead. You’ll still be nothing
more than a cheap faker with a
second-rate magic act. I know how
you did it.
Blackwood hesitates.
As he talks, HOLMES INCHES CLOSER and closer along the
temporary scaffolding. BALANCE IS AN ISSUE for all of
them, especially when the wind gusts.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
It was all trickery. The gunshot,
the executioner’s mask,
everything. You never died.
(beat)
And you’ve got no more magic in
your touch than I have.
Blackwood smirks.
BLACKWOOD
You’re a blind man, stumbling
through the darkness of your own
fear.
(beat)
You can see Him too. Just open
your eyes.
HOLMES
My eyes are open, Blackwood. And
I see a fraud. The woman in the
factory -- you had a syringe full
of your weapon, hidden in your
hand. You injected her.
(mocking)
You’re a fraud.
BLACKWOOD
Am I?
Blackwood transfers his gun to his left hand, the gun
barrel never leaving Irene’s head, his eyes never leaving
Holmes.
He opens his right hand, shows it like a magician.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
No syringe.
Alarm in Holmes’ eyes as Blackwood‘s CARESSES Irene’s
face, RUBY RING SPARKLING.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
See my touch for yourself.
IRENE gasps, her knees buckle, she COLLAPSES --
-- and BLACKWOOD KICKS HER OVER THE EDGE, almost
dismissively.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
She’s nothing.
Timing the movement of the scaffolding, Holmes leaps at
Blackwood.
BLACKWOOD gets the gun up, FIRES, but it's in the wrong
hand and the scaffolding shifts under them --
-- and the SHOT GRAZES HOLMES' SIDE, knocks him sprawling
onto the planking.
He has to grab on desperately to stop himself from
following Irene.
As he does, BLACKWOOD SLAMS DOWN ONTO HIM knees-first,
thudding any remaining breath out of him.
Winded, bleeding, shot, HOLMES IS AT BLACKWOOD’S MERCY.
Blackwood straddles him. Pushes Holmes’ head down
against the planking with the barrel of his gun.
BLACKWOOD
It’s just you and me. As it
should be. With the death you
deserve.
BLACKWOOD LIFTS HIS RIGHT HAND, flexes the finger with
the ruby ring, and --
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EXTRA CLOSE UP, a short HOLLOW NEEDLE DARTS out of the
ring.
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BLACKWOOD reaches down and PUTS HIS RIGHT HAND on Holmes’
battered cheek.
Holmes tries to buck Blackwood off.
Blackwood gun-whips him, subdues him, puts the gun back
against his temple.
BLACKWOOD
He’s looking forward to meeting
you. He told me so himself.
Blackwood caresses Holmes’ cheek.
BLACKWOOD (CONT’D)
Feel my touch.
Holmes’ eyes flare in pain. He spasms under Blackwood.
Incredibly fast, his eyes roll back and stare sightlessly
at the darkening sky.
Holmes is dead.
Blackwood exhales shakily. An intense, but satisfying,
moment.
He puts his gun away, turns his head to locate his weapon
in its nest of rope --
-- POW! --
Gets Holmes’ hard fist across his chin.
Holmes grabs Blackwood’s head, jerks his face down to
meet Holmes’ forehead whipping up.
-- CRUNCH --
Blackwood reels back, keening through his pulverized
nose. He looks at his ring in bloody disbelief.
BLACKWOOD
Not ... possible.
HOLMES
Not possible to poison London
without killing yourself and your
followers -- unless you had an
antidote.
(beat)
(MORE)
HOLMES (CONT'D)
You gave it to us yourself, back
in the factory. We drank the
sacrament with everyone else.
ON BLACKWOOD, as the lightning of defeat flashes in his
eyes.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
All I had to do was trick you into
using your ring instead of your
gun.
Blackwood snatches for his gun --
-- but Holmes gets to it first. They both have their
hands on the gun, when --
-- BAM!--
-- HOLMES SHOOTS BLACKWOOD point-blank through the chest,
blowing him backwards onto the swaying planking, the
force taking the gun with him.
Holmes rolls over, to fight his way to his feet, when --
IRENE
(from below)
Sherlock!
Still on hands and knees, Holmes looks over the edge.
HOLMES’ POV: IRENE SWINGS twenty feet below at the end of
a scaffolding rope.
IRENE (CONT’D)
I’m not going to able to hang on
for much longer.
Biting down on the pain, HOLMES reaches down, HAULS IRENE
UP. He’s out of gas by the time she gets to the
underside of the scaffolding. She reaches out to him.
Their hands join.
Holmes swings Irene onto the scaffolding. She tumbles
onto him.
They lie there, faces close together, gasping for breath.
IRENE
Thank you.
Click!
Irene looks down to see that HOLMES HAS HANDCUFFED HER to
him.
HOLMES
You’re not running away this time.
Before Irene can reply, A SHOT RINGS OUT and the entire
SCAFFOLDING JERKS, HARD.
They look up.
A WIDE TRAIL OF BLOOD leads along the scaffolding to
Blackwood.
He lies on his back. His GLASS SPHERE is cradled under
one arm. The other is raised, holding the gun. He
shoots at the sky. Insane.
BAM!
AGAIN, and worse this time, the SCAFFOLD JERKS.
Which is when they realize that Blackwood isn’t shooting
at the sky -- he’s shooting at the TOOTHED BRAKE ON THE
CRANE BLOCK, through which runs the cable that holds up
one end of the scaffolding.
BAM!
The CRANE BLOCK IS HIT AGAIN, the brake loses another
tooth. The steel CABLE BEGINS TO SLIP, unreeling slowly.
The Tower side of the SCAFFOLDING BEGINS TO TILT
downwards.
Blackwood’s on the scaffold. This means his death, too.
He doesn’t care. He raises the gun to shoot again.
HOLMES
Run.
Holmes jerks Irene to her feet and THEY RUN along the
scaffold towards the other side of the bridge. (Running
“uphill”.)
BAM! One last shot and the CRANE BLOCK CRUMBLES.
The CABLE SCREAMS OUT.
ONE SIDE OF THE SCAFFOLDING PLUMMETS DOWNWARDS --
-- JERKING THE OTHER SIDE LOOSE from the bridge steel.
An EVER-WIDENING GAP between Holmes and Irene and safety.
Sprinting, balancing, Holmes and Irene share a quick
glance, a nod --
-- and GO FOR IT.
As the entire scaffolding swings down over the Thames,
THEY LEAP THE GAP ...
... fly through the air, handcuffed together ...
... LAND ON SOLID STEEL with a very welcome thud.
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As it swings down, the SCAFFOLDING FLIPS over.
BLACKWOOD’S WEAPON DROPS out of his arm, falls towards
the lowered leaf of the Bridge below.
Blackwood reaches for it --
-- and JERKS TO A STOP, choked by the ROPE TANGLED AROUND
HIS NECK.
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FOLLOW THE WEAPON down ... down ...
... down to lethal impact on the bridge leaf ...
... which it just misses, plunging instead into the
Thames with a neat splash.
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Scene 56 - Secrets on Tower Bridge
After a long moment, the GLASS SPHERE BOBS UP and begins
floating towards the sea.
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EXT. TOWER BRIDGE - DAY
An ARMY OF BOBBIES scales the stanchion across the river
from the Tower of London.
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EXT. TOP OF TOWER BRIDGE - DAY
ON THE TOP, Holmes and Irene only manage to stay upright
by leaning against each other. It looks quite romantic,
with London spread out beneath them.
HOLMES
Beautiful day.
IRENE
In a beautiful city.
Homes nods dreamily.
IRENE (CONT’D)
Sherlock, let me go.
They’re STILL HANDCUFFED TOGETHER. Holmes looks at the
cuffs for a moment, then at Irene.
HOLMES
Who are you working for?
IRENE
He’s called the Professor. That’s
all I know -- except that he pays
well.
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Scene 57 - The Thames Confrontation
The GLASS SPHERE drifts down river, glinting in the
sunlight. Beyond it, we see the bow wave of an
APPROACHING LAUNCH.
EXT. LAUNCH - DAY
On the prow of the launch stands a man dressed in black,
with cane and top hat. (MORIARTY.)
MORIARTY
Close as you can.
HELMSMAN
Yes, Professor.
They close in on the glass sphere --
-- but are CUT OFF BY A SPEEDING POLICE LAUNCH.
EXT. POLICE LAUNCH - DAY
Lestrade looks on as WATSON LEANS OVER WITH A DIP NET --
scoops up the sphere (with a wince) brings it on board.
They examine it. The SURFACE IS FILIGREED WITH CRACKS,
some quite alarming --
-- but the clear powder is still safely inside.
Watson and Lestrade share a look of relief -- that was
close.
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EXT. LAUNCH - DAY
Disgusted, Moriarty turns away from the railing.
MORIARTY
(to helmsman)
Take us away.
The launch turns hard and heads down river.
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Scene 58 - A Bittersweet Farewell on Tower Bridge
Irene rattles the cuffs.
IRENE (CONT’D)
Sherlock, I saved your life.
HOLMES
I’d say we’re more than even on
that score.
Holmes looks over Irene’s shoulder.
BOBBIES swarm onto the top of the stanchion, lead by a
BEEFY SERGEANT.
IRENE
Look into your heart. Is this
really what you want?
HOLMES
Probably not.
Holmes finds the key, UNLOCKS THE CUFF around his own
wrist. Irene gives him a triumphant little smile,
waiting for him to unlock her cuff.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Look me up when you get out.
He hands his cuff over to the beefy sergeant.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
She’s tricky, treacherous and
dangerous. Be careful.
BEEFY SERGEANT
My middle name, sir.
Click! The open cuff closes over the beefy sergeant’s
wrist.
Irene gives Holmes a look that promises lots and lots of
future trouble.
Holmes grins, welcoming it --
HOLMES
Goodbye, Irene.
-- and turns his back to look out at London as Irene is
lead away.
As he is bandaged by a POLICE MEDIC, Holmes drinks in the
city he just saved, in all its glory.
PULL BACK, to show Holmes standing tall and proud in the
wind at the top of Tower Bridge --
-- as, below, BLACKWOOD SWINGS over the Thames at the end
of a tangle of rope, dangling from the collapsed
scaffold.
Hanged like a common man after all, with Tower Bridge as
his gibbet.
PULL BACK FROM THIS GRUESOME SIGHT --
-- PULL AWAY UP RIVER, faster and faster, until we --
-- ZERO IN ON THE HOUSES OF PARLIAMENT, WHERE --
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Scene 59 - The Great Escape Unveiled
-- THE QUEEN’S COACH AND ESCORT head safely away from
Parliament, back to Buckingham Palace.
Crisis over.
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EXT. SCOTLAND YARD - END OF THE DAY
Gunshot wound bandaged, cuts cleaned, Holmes walks out
through Scotland Yard with Lestrade and Watson, holding
his violin.
LESTRADE
I still don’t understand how
Blackwood faked his own execution.
HOLMES
I had trouble with that one
myself. The two officials at his
execution were members of the
Order of the Golden Bough ...
IMAGE FLASHES -- the two POMPOUS-LOOKING OFFICIALS push
Blackwood’s head onto the block...
HOLMES
... were part of his cult. They
helped him change places ...
-- the first Official grabs the top of the EXECUTIONER'S
SLEEVELESS MASK/TUNIC --
HOLMES (V.O.) (CONT'D)
... with the only man there
wearing a mask ...
-- BLACKWOOD'S RING scrapes the ankle of the EXECUTIONER,
his legs buckling --
HOLMES (V.O.) (CONT'D)
... While we ...
-- A GUNSHOT RINGS OUT; the sounds of panic --
HOLMES (V.O.) (CONT'D)
... were looking somewhere else.
-- Blackwood stands as the Executioner falls, his head
rising smoothly into the suspended mask/tunic...
Lestrade is still having trouble absorbing it.
LESTRADE
I was looking straight at him.
HOLMES
No you weren't. Instinct,
Lestrade. When a gun fires, you
look to see where the danger is.
And that's what everyone in the
crowd did. Including me and
Watson.
Lestrade shakes his head -- then sees something across
the room that brings him up short. The BEEFY SERGEANT
approaches, puce with shame.
LESTRADE
What is it, Sergeant?
BEEFY SERGEANT
Begging your pardon, Inspector --
it’s the woman.
ON HOLMES AND WATSON, as they exchange a wry and
unsurprised look.
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HOLMES
Have you got the ring?
WATSON
Of course.
Both men sport a COUPLE OF DAYS WORTH OF STUBBLE.
Neither of them has been anywhere near a razor.
HOLMES
Show me.
Watson gives Holmes a sheepish look, fumbles a small box
out of his pocket, flips it open to reveal a ring with a
microscopic diamond.
WATSON
It’s all I can afford, until --
HOLMES
-- until your practice is up and
running. May I?
Holmes reaches for the ring. Watson lets him take it out
of the box. Then, Holmes replaces it with another. This
is a STUNNING RING WITH A HUGE, FLAWLESS PINK DIAMOND.
HOLMES
The King of Bohemia gave it to me.
WATSON
I couldn’t possibly.
HOLMES
Watson -- I’ll never use it.
Ever. We both know that.
Before Watson can argue any further, there is a knock at
the door.
HOLMES
Here she is.
WATSON
(still on the ring)
Holmes --
Holmes closes the ring box emphatically.
HOLMES
She deserves it.
(leaving)
I’ll let her in on my way out.
Holmes opens the door. Mary, looking stunning, holds a
green HARROD’S PACKET.
MARY
(entering)
I have something for you.
(at Holmes)
Both of you.
Mary pulls two identical wrapped boxes from the Harrod’s
packet, hands them to each man.
WATSON
What is it?
HOLMES
Wait. I’ll tell you --
Holmes begins the process of deducing what’s in the box.
Watson clears his throat. Holmes looks up -- realizes
that this is not the time and place.
So, for once, Holmes opens the box like a normal human
being -- and pulls out a small metal and ivory device
shaped something like a T. Neither he nor Watson have
any idea what it is.
MARY
It’s from America. A new
invention.
(beat)
It’s called a safety razor. You
can shave without seeing a blade.
Both men rub their itchy stubble.
HOLMES
Thank you, Mary.
Holmes puts the razor aside. He’ll use it if he feels
like it. He shoots Watson a sly nod -- welcome to
domesticity.
HOLMES (CONT’D)
Let me know how it feels. The
safety razor, that is.
Holmes leaves. The moment the door clicks closed, Watson
and Mary look into each other’s eyes.
WATSON
Mary ...
MARY
Yes?
EXT. 221 BAKER STREET - NIGHT
Holmes emerges from his home, pauses at the bottom of the
steps. Looks left, looks right, deciding which way to
go. The night is alive, London is alive.
His London.
Holmes turns right, and strides off alone down Baker
Street in search of entertainment, or trouble, or both.
FADE TO BLACK.
THE END
Ratings
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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sherlock holmes | Throughout the screenplay, Sherlock Holmes embarks on a journey of self-discovery that challenges his emotional detachment and cynicism. Initially, he is portrayed as a solitary figure, focused solely on solving mysteries and proving his intellectual superiority. However, as he encounters various characters who challenge his worldview, he begins to confront his own vulnerabilities and the consequences of his actions. By the climax, Holmes learns the value of human connection and empathy, ultimately leading him to make a personal sacrifice for the greater good. This transformation culminates in a more balanced character who embraces both his intellect and his emotional depth, allowing him to solve the final mystery not just with logic, but with a newfound understanding of humanity. | While the character arc of Sherlock Holmes is compelling, it risks falling into the trope of the 'emotionally detached genius' without fully exploring the nuances of his emotional struggles. The screenplay may benefit from deeper interactions with supporting characters that highlight his vulnerabilities and the impact of his choices on those around him. Additionally, the resolution of his arc could feel rushed if not given adequate buildup throughout the narrative. | To improve the character arc, consider introducing a mentor or a close companion who challenges Holmes's worldview and encourages him to confront his emotional barriers. This character could serve as a foil, highlighting Holmes's flaws and pushing him toward growth. Additionally, incorporating flashbacks or moments of introspection could provide insight into Holmes's past traumas, making his transformation more relatable. Finally, ensure that the climax allows for a gradual realization of his emotional depth, rather than a sudden change, to create a more satisfying and believable character evolution. |
dr. john watson | Throughout the screenplay, Dr. John Watson undergoes a significant character arc. Initially, he is portrayed as a steadfast companion, primarily serving as a support system for Sherlock Holmes. As the story progresses, Watson faces personal challenges that test his courage and resourcefulness. He evolves from being a passive observer to taking a more active role in investigations, showcasing his own skills and insights. By the climax, Watson confronts a critical moment that forces him to step out of Holmes' shadow, asserting his own identity and capabilities. Ultimately, he emerges as a more confident and independent character, solidifying his role not just as Holmes' companion but as an equal partner in their adventures. | While Dr. John Watson's character is well-developed as a loyal companion, his arc could benefit from deeper exploration of his personal struggles and motivations. The screenplay tends to focus heavily on his relationship with Holmes, which, while important, can overshadow Watson's individual journey. Additionally, the emotional stakes for Watson could be heightened to create a more compelling narrative. His bravery and resourcefulness are evident, but the screenplay could delve into his internal conflicts and how they shape his decisions throughout the story. | To improve Dr. John Watson's character arc, consider incorporating subplots that highlight his personal challenges, such as dealing with the trauma of war or grappling with his identity outside of Holmes' shadow. This could involve introducing a personal antagonist or a situation that forces Watson to confront his past. Additionally, allow moments where Watson's decisions have significant consequences, showcasing his growth and independence. By giving Watson more agency in the narrative and exploring his emotional depth, the character can evolve into a more rounded and relatable figure, enhancing the overall impact of the story. |
holmes | Throughout the screenplay, Sherlock Holmes undergoes a significant character arc that sees him evolve from a disillusioned and detached detective into a more emotionally aware and connected individual. Initially, he is portrayed as aloof and cynical, focused solely on solving mysteries and driven by logic. However, as he confronts the supernatural elements of the case and faces personal demons, he begins to grapple with his vulnerabilities and the emotional consequences of his actions. His relationships with Irene and Watson serve as catalysts for this transformation, pushing him to confront his feelings and the impact of his choices. By the end of the feature, Holmes emerges as a more rounded character, capable of empathy and connection, while still retaining his sharp intellect and dedication to justice. | While Holmes's character arc is compelling, it risks becoming predictable if not executed with nuance. The transition from a detached detective to a more emotionally aware individual can feel clichéd if not grounded in authentic experiences and interactions. Additionally, the screenplay may benefit from deeper exploration of Holmes's internal conflicts, particularly regarding his relationships and the emotional toll of his work. The balance between his analytical nature and emotional growth needs careful handling to avoid undermining his established character traits. | To improve the character arc, consider incorporating more moments of vulnerability that challenge Holmes's worldview and force him to confront his emotional barriers. This could involve deeper interactions with supporting characters that reveal his fears and insecurities. Additionally, introducing a pivotal event that directly impacts his sense of justice or personal relationships could serve as a turning point in his development. Allowing Holmes to make mistakes and learn from them can add depth to his character and make his eventual growth feel earned. Finally, integrating themes of trust and connection throughout the narrative can enhance the emotional stakes and provide a more satisfying resolution to his arc. |
watson | Watson's character arc begins with him as a loyal and practical companion to Holmes, deeply invested in their partnership and seeking a sense of normalcy in his life. As the story progresses, he faces challenges that test his loyalty and bravery, particularly in dangerous situations involving Holmes and Mary. His internal conflict about his future as a detective and his feelings for Mary leads him to a pivotal decision point where he must choose between his duty to Holmes and his desire for a stable life. By the end of the screenplay, Watson emerges as a more self-assured individual, having reconciled his feelings and solidified his role as both a supportive friend and a capable partner in their investigations. This growth allows him to embrace a new chapter in his life, balancing his loyalty to Holmes with his personal aspirations. | While Watson's character arc is compelling, it could benefit from more explicit moments of internal conflict and resolution. The screenplay should delve deeper into his emotional struggles, particularly regarding his relationship with Mary and his commitment to Holmes. Additionally, there are opportunities to showcase Watson's growth through specific challenges that force him to confront his fears and insecurities. The arc could also explore how his experiences with Holmes shape his identity beyond being just a companion, allowing for a more nuanced portrayal of his character. | To improve Watson's character arc, consider incorporating key scenes that highlight his internal struggles, such as moments of doubt about his partnership with Holmes or his feelings for Mary. Introduce a significant turning point where Watson must make a choice that reflects his growth, such as prioritizing his own happiness over his loyalty to Holmes. Additionally, include interactions with other characters that challenge his worldview and force him to reevaluate his role in the partnership. This could lead to a more dynamic and relatable character who evolves throughout the feature, ultimately finding a balance between his loyalty to Holmes and his personal aspirations. |
blackwood | Throughout the screenplay, Lord Blackwood's character arc follows a trajectory from a seemingly invincible villain with grand ambitions for a new Empire to a more vulnerable figure as his plans unravel. Initially, he is portrayed as a master manipulator, instilling fear and awe in those around him. However, as the story progresses, his delusions of grandeur lead to increasingly reckless decisions, causing his followers to question his authority. In the climax, Blackwood's hubris blinds him to the consequences of his actions, ultimately leading to his downfall. By the end, he is stripped of his power and forced to confront the reality of his failures, revealing a glimpse of the man behind the monster. | While Lord Blackwood is a compelling villain, his character arc could benefit from deeper emotional layers and motivations. Currently, he is portrayed primarily as a power-hungry antagonist without much exploration of his backstory or the reasons behind his ruthless ambition. This lack of depth may make it difficult for the audience to fully engage with his character beyond the surface-level menace. Additionally, his descent into madness could be more gradual and nuanced, allowing for moments of vulnerability that could evoke sympathy or understanding from the audience. | To improve Lord Blackwood's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that reveal his past experiences and traumas, providing context for his ruthless ambition and delusions of grandeur. This could help the audience understand his motivations and create a more complex character. Additionally, introducing moments of doubt or internal conflict could humanize him, making his eventual downfall more impactful. Finally, allowing for interactions with other characters that challenge his worldview could create opportunities for growth or regression, adding depth to his character development. |
lestrade | Throughout the screenplay, Inspector Lestrade undergoes a significant character arc. Initially, he is portrayed as a skeptical and practical officer, relying heavily on evidence and traditional investigative methods. As the supernatural elements of the Blackwood case unfold, Lestrade experiences frustration and doubt, leading him to question his own beliefs and the efficacy of his methods. By the climax, he learns to embrace a more open-minded approach, recognizing the value of intuition and collaboration with Holmes. This transformation culminates in a pivotal moment where he takes a bold step, trusting his instincts to solve the case, ultimately solidifying his growth from a rigid enforcer of the law to a more adaptable and insightful investigator. | While Lestrade's character arc is compelling, it risks becoming predictable if not executed with sufficient depth. His initial skepticism and subsequent transformation could benefit from more nuanced internal conflict. The screenplay should explore the emotional toll that the supernatural elements take on him, as well as the impact of his evolving relationship with Holmes. Additionally, the arc could be strengthened by incorporating moments of vulnerability that reveal his fears and insecurities, making his eventual acceptance of the unknown more impactful. | To improve Lestrade's character arc, consider adding scenes that delve into his backstory, perhaps revealing a past experience that shapes his skepticism towards the supernatural. Incorporating moments where he faces personal stakes in the investigation could heighten the emotional resonance of his journey. Additionally, allowing for more dialogue that showcases his internal struggle—such as conversations with Holmes that challenge his beliefs—would enrich his character development. Finally, a climactic moment where he must choose between his ingrained skepticism and the need to adapt could serve as a powerful turning point, reinforcing the theme of growth and collaboration. |
dredger | Dredger begins as a loyal enforcer for Blackwood, fully committed to using violence and intimidation to maintain control and power. As the story progresses, he faces increasing challenges from Holmes, which forces him to confront his own motivations and the consequences of his actions. In the climax, Dredger experiences a moment of vulnerability when he realizes that his blind loyalty to Blackwood may lead to his downfall. This moment of introspection leads him to make a pivotal choice: either continue down the path of violence or seek redemption by turning against Blackwood. Ultimately, Dredger's arc concludes with him choosing to defy Blackwood, showcasing a complex character who grapples with his identity and the impact of his choices. | While Dredger is established as a menacing and formidable antagonist, his character arc could benefit from deeper exploration of his motivations and internal conflicts. Currently, he appears primarily as a one-dimensional enforcer without much backstory or emotional depth. This lack of complexity may make it difficult for the audience to fully engage with his character or understand his eventual choices. | To improve Dredger's character arc, consider providing a backstory that reveals his past experiences and the reasons behind his loyalty to Blackwood. Introducing moments of doubt or conflict within Dredger could add layers to his character, allowing the audience to empathize with him. Additionally, incorporating interactions with other characters that challenge his worldview could create opportunities for growth and transformation. By the end of the screenplay, Dredger's choice to defy Blackwood should feel earned and impactful, making his character arc resonate more strongly with the audience. |
irene | Irene begins as a mysterious figure with her own agenda, initially appearing to be an antagonist to Holmes and Watson. As the story progresses, her motivations become more complex, revealing her internal conflict between loyalty to Blackwood and her growing connection to Holmes. Throughout the screenplay, Irene evolves from a self-serving manipulator to a resourceful ally, willing to take risks for the greater good. By the climax, she confronts her past and makes a pivotal choice to side with Holmes, showcasing her bravery and depth. In the resolution, Irene finds a sense of redemption and purpose, having reconciled her conflicting loyalties and established a new path forward, potentially hinting at a future partnership with Holmes. | While Irene's character is rich and multifaceted, her arc could benefit from clearer motivations and a more defined transformation. At times, her actions may seem inconsistent, as her loyalties shift without sufficient buildup. The screenplay could explore her internal struggles more deeply, allowing the audience to understand her choices and the stakes involved. Additionally, her relationship with Holmes could be developed further, emphasizing the emotional connection that drives her decisions. | To improve Irene's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or dialogue that reveal her backstory and the reasons behind her conflicting loyalties. This would provide context for her actions and deepen her character. Additionally, create pivotal moments where Irene must confront her past and make choices that reflect her growth, allowing the audience to witness her transformation. Strengthening her relationship with Holmes through shared experiences and mutual respect can also enhance the emotional weight of her decisions, making her eventual alliance with him more impactful. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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High Stakes and Emotional Impact | Scenes with higher stakes (scores of 9) tend to correlate with greater emotional impact. For instance, scenes 20, 34, and 35 all have high stakes and also score high on emotional impact, suggesting that increasing the stakes can enhance the emotional resonance of the scenes. |
Tone Consistency | The screenplay maintains a consistent tone throughout, primarily leaning towards 'Tense' and 'Suspenseful'. This consistency helps in building a cohesive narrative, but there are moments (like scene 6) where a shift to a more 'Melancholic' tone occurs, which may disrupt the overall flow. Consider balancing tonal shifts to maintain engagement. |
Character Changes and Dialogue Quality | Scenes that feature significant character changes (scores of 9) often coincide with higher dialogue scores. For example, scenes 13 and 55 show strong character development alongside high-quality dialogue, indicating that character evolution is effectively supported by well-crafted dialogue. |
Conflict and Story Progression | Scenes that effectively move the story forward (scores of 9) also tend to have higher conflict scores. This is evident in scenes like 19 and 24, where the narrative progression is tightly linked to the conflicts presented, suggesting that enhancing conflict can further propel the story. |
Emotional Tone and Character Development | Scenes that evoke strong emotional tones (like 'Desperate' or 'Vulnerable') often coincide with significant character development. For instance, scenes 38 and 42 showcase characters in emotionally charged situations that lead to pivotal changes, indicating that emotional depth can enhance character arcs. |
Dialogue and Emotional Engagement | Higher dialogue scores are often associated with scenes that have a strong emotional impact. For example, scenes 39 and 55 feature both high dialogue and emotional scores, suggesting that engaging dialogue can significantly enhance the emotional engagement of the audience. |
Suspense and Scene Grades | Scenes labeled as 'Suspenseful' consistently receive higher overall grades. This pattern indicates that maintaining suspense is a key factor in achieving higher quality ratings for scenes, suggesting that the author should prioritize suspenseful elements in scene construction. |
Dramatic Elements and Audience Engagement | Scenes that incorporate dramatic elements (like 'Dramatic' or 'Intense') tend to score higher in overall grades and emotional impact. For instance, scenes 52 and 58 exemplify this correlation, indicating that integrating dramatic elements can enhance audience engagement. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in storytelling, with consistent praise for engaging narratives, suspenseful scenes, and well-developed characters. The writer shows proficiency in creating atmosphere, pacing action, and crafting sharp dialogue. However, there's room for growth in consistently deepening character dynamics, exploring subtext, and refining pacing and structure across all scenes. The feedback suggests a tendency toward relying on action and mystery elements without always fully exploring the emotional depth and motivations of the characters.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | 'Save the Cat!' by Blake Snyder | This book is repeatedly recommended for its insights into screenplay structure, character arcs, and crafting engaging scenes, addressing multiple key improvement areas simultaneously. |
Book | 'The Art of Dramatic Writing' by Lajos Egri | This classic text enhances understanding of character development and conflict, directly addressing the need for deeper character exploration and motivation. |
Screenplay | Screenplays by Alfred Hitchcock, Quentin Tarantino, Aaron Sorkin, Christopher Nolan, and David Fincher | These writers represent diverse styles within the genres frequently mentioned (mystery, thriller, action, detective). Studying their work provides a wide range of approaches to pacing, dialogue, character development, and suspense creation. |
Video | Behind-the-scenes footage of action movie productions, and video essays analyzing pacing and tension in screenwriting. | These resources provide valuable visual learning experiences, supplementing textual analysis and offering practical insights into creating visually dynamic and suspenseful scenes. |
Course | A screenwriting course focused on developing plot, character, and dialogue in detective stories (or relevant genre). | Structured learning environment offers focused feedback and guidance, enhancing the writer’s skills across multiple key areas, especially helpful for refining a specific genre. |
Stories Similar to this one
Story | Explanation |
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Sherlock Holmes (2009) | This film features a similar tone and structure, focusing on the iconic detective Sherlock Holmes and his partner Dr. John Watson as they navigate a dark and mysterious London. The film incorporates elements of action, suspense, and the supernatural, paralleling the screenplay's themes of occult rituals and a looming threat. |
The Prestige (2006) | Both stories delve into themes of obsession, rivalry, and the pursuit of knowledge at any cost. The dark atmosphere and the presence of a mysterious antagonist with grand ambitions resonate with the character of Lord Blackwood in the screenplay. |
From Hell (2001) | This film explores the darker aspects of Victorian London, including themes of murder, conspiracy, and the occult. The visual style and the focus on a detective unraveling a complex mystery align closely with the screenplay's narrative. |
Penny Dreadful (TV Series) | This series combines classic literary characters in a dark, gothic setting, similar to the screenplay's blend of Sherlock Holmes with supernatural elements. The tone, atmosphere, and exploration of Victorian themes create a parallel experience. |
The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen (2003) | This film features a team of literary characters, including a detective, who confronts supernatural threats. The blend of action, adventure, and the Victorian setting mirrors the screenplay's narrative style and character dynamics. |
The Woman in Black (2012) | This film captures a similar dark and eerie atmosphere, focusing on supernatural elements and a protagonist facing a malevolent force. The tension and suspense in both stories create a comparable viewing experience. |
The Secret of Sherlock Holmes (1987) | This adaptation emphasizes the relationship between Holmes and Watson while exploring darker themes and mysteries. The character dynamics and the focus on Holmes's intellect and emotional struggles resonate with the screenplay. |
Sleepy Hollow (1999) | This film combines gothic horror with detective elements, featuring a protagonist who investigates a series of mysterious deaths. The dark tone and supernatural themes align closely with the screenplay's narrative. |
The Illusionist (2006) | Both stories involve themes of magic, deception, and the blurred lines between reality and illusion. The intricate plotting and character motivations in 'The Illusionist' parallel the complexities found in the screenplay. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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The Mentor and the Protégé | Holmes serves as a mentor to Watson, guiding him through the complexities of their investigations and the darker aspects of their world. | This trope involves a more experienced character guiding a less experienced one, often leading to growth and development. An example is Mr. Miyagi mentoring Daniel in 'The Karate Kid'. |
The Chosen One | Holmes is often seen as the only one capable of solving the mystery and stopping Blackwood's plans. | This trope features a character who is uniquely qualified to face a particular challenge. An example is Neo in 'The Matrix', who is the only one who can save humanity. |
The Dark and Stormy Night | The screenplay opens with a dark, icy night in London, setting a foreboding atmosphere. | This trope uses weather to reflect the mood of the story. An example is the opening of 'The Shining', where a stormy night sets a tense atmosphere. |
Occult Rituals | Blackwood is shown performing a dark ritual surrounded by occult symbols. | This trope involves characters engaging in mysterious or supernatural practices. An example is the rituals in 'The Witch'. |
The Love Triangle | Watson is torn between his feelings for Mary and his friendship with Holmes, while Irene Adler complicates matters. | This trope involves three characters in a romantic entanglement. An example is the triangle between Katniss, Peeta, and Gale in 'The Hunger Games'. |
The Final Showdown | Holmes confronts Blackwood in a climactic battle at Tower Bridge. | This trope features a decisive confrontation between the protagonist and antagonist. An example is the final battle between Harry Potter and Voldemort in 'Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows'. |
The Reluctant Hero | Holmes often shows reluctance to engage with the emotional aspects of his life and the dangers he faces. | This trope features a hero who is hesitant to take on their role. An example is Frodo in 'The Lord of the Rings', who is reluctant to carry the ring. |
The Sidekick | Watson serves as Holmes's loyal companion, assisting him in investigations and providing emotional support. | This trope features a secondary character who supports the main character. An example is Robin to Batman. |
The Evil Overlord | Blackwood embodies the archetype of a villain with grand ambitions and dark powers. | This trope features a powerful antagonist with plans for domination. An example is Sauron in 'The Lord of the Rings'. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||
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The Nature of Good vs. Evil | The central conflict revolves around Sherlock Holmes' battle against Lord Blackwood, a villain driven by occult beliefs and a desire for power. Blackwood's actions, including ritualistic murders and attempts to overthrow the government, represent pure evil. Holmes, despite his flaws, represents a force for good, fighting to maintain order and justice. | This theme explores the classic struggle between opposing forces. It's not a simplistic portrayal, as Holmes himself exhibits complexities, but the core narrative centers on the fight against Blackwood's malevolent plan. | ||
Strengthening The Nature of Good vs. Evil:
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The Importance of Reason and Logic vs. Superstition and the Occult | Holmes's reliance on reason and deduction contrasts sharply with Blackwood's embrace of the occult and supernatural. The narrative showcases the clash between scientific method and blind faith, ultimately highlighting the superiority of rational thought in solving mysteries and overcoming evil. | The screenplay uses the conflict to demonstrate the power of rational thought in a world increasingly fascinated by spiritualism. Blackwood's reliance on the occult serves to underscore Holmes' intellectual superiority. | ||
The Changing Landscape of Victorian London | The screenplay depicts the rapid industrial growth of London alongside the rising popularity of spiritualism and occult practices. This juxtaposition highlights the social and cultural shifts occurring during the Victorian era, influencing the story's setting and characters' motivations. | The backdrop of industrialization and spiritualism creates a compelling setting that influences the plot and underscores the anxieties of a rapidly changing society. | ||
The Dynamics of Friendship and Partnership | The relationship between Holmes and Watson is a crucial element. Their contrasting personalities – Holmes's detached intellect versus Watson's emotional engagement – create tension and complement each other throughout the investigation. Watson's impending marriage further complicates their partnership, leading to moments of both support and potential separation. | The evolving partnership between Holmes and Watson highlights the importance of different perspectives and the challenges faced in maintaining close bonds amid personal changes. | ||
The Complexity of Human Nature | Characters are not simply good or evil; they exhibit a range of motivations and flaws. Holmes is flawed yet dedicated, Watson is compassionate but sometimes naive, and even Irene Adler possesses moral ambiguities despite her questionable actions. | This theme adds depth to the narrative by showcasing the shades of gray in human behavior, rendering the characters more realistic and relatable. | ||
The Power of Deception and Manipulation | Blackwood's ability to manipulate people and events, as well as Irene Adler's deceptive tactics, highlight the importance of critical thinking and observation in uncovering the truth. The many instances of disguise and misdirection demonstrate the pervasive nature of deception in the story. | This theme reinforces the importance of Holmes's skills in penetrating falsehoods and seeing through the manipulations of his opponents. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is characterized by sharp, witty dialogue, vivid descriptions, and a blend of tension and humor that creates an engaging atmosphere. The narrative style is dynamic, often shifting between fast-paced action and introspective moments, allowing for a rich exploration of character emotions and motivations. The use of atmospheric details enhances the mood, immersing the audience in the dark and mysterious world of Victorian London. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by establishing a compelling tone that balances suspense and intrigue with moments of levity and character depth. This multifaceted approach allows for a nuanced exploration of themes such as friendship, loyalty, and the struggle between reason and emotion, ultimately enriching the narrative and engaging the audience on multiple levels. |
Best Representation Scene | 3 - Echoes in the Dark |
Best Scene Explanation | This scene is the best representation because it encapsulates the writer's unique voice through its dynamic action, vivid imagery, and sharp dialogue. The tension and urgency are palpable, showcasing the writer's ability to create an immersive atmosphere while highlighting the protagonist's character traits and motivations. |
- Overall originality score: 8.5
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay demonstrates a high level of originality through its inventive blend of classic detective elements with supernatural and occult themes, as well as its unique character dynamics. The incorporation of historical settings, fresh character interactions, and unexpected plot twists contributes to a narrative that feels both familiar and refreshingly new. The screenplay effectively reimagines the Sherlock Holmes mythos, introducing complex moral dilemmas and emotional depth, particularly in the relationships between Holmes, Watson, and Irene Adler.
- Most unique situations: The most unique situations in the screenplay are the incorporation of occult rituals and supernatural elements into the detective genre, such as Blackwood's dark rituals and the use of a biological weapon. Additionally, the dynamic between Holmes and Irene, particularly their flirtatious yet adversarial relationship, adds a layer of complexity that is not typically explored in traditional adaptations.
- Overall unpredictability score: 7.5
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay maintains a solid level of unpredictability through its intricate plot twists and character motivations. While it follows some conventions of the detective genre, the introduction of supernatural elements and the evolving relationships between characters keep the audience guessing. The unexpected alliances, such as Holmes's collaboration with Irene despite their complicated history, and the various twists in Blackwood's plans contribute to a narrative that defies easy predictions, enhancing the overall suspense.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | The protagonist's internal goals evolve from a quest for intellectual validation and problem-solving to a deeper confrontation with personal relationships and emotional connections, particularly regarding justice, loyalty, and the complexities of love. |
External Goals | The protagonist's external goals shift from merely solving cases and capturing criminals to thwarting a larger, systematic threat posed by Blackwood, while also balancing the immediate urgency of saving lives during the impending execution and supernatural chaos. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict is rooted in the struggle between rationality and chaos, represented by Holmes' logical, deductive approach to solving mysteries versus Blackwood's dark, superstitious beliefs and manipulation of power. This conflict intertwines with Holmes' journey as he grapples with issues of morality, duty, and his own emotional resilience. |
Character Development Contribution: The protagonist's internal and external goals drive significant character development, showcasing Holmes' transformation from a detached, analytical figure to a more emotionally complex individual capable of forming genuine connections and confronting his vulnerabilities.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The progression of the protagonist's goals establishes the screenplay's narrative structure, creating escalating tensions that lead to pivotal confrontations and resolutions, ultimately guiding the pacing and drama toward the climactic showdown with Blackwood.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflicts contribute to the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring motifs of justice, the nature of power, the importance of human connections, and the balance between reason and chaos in a rapidly changing world, enriching the story's complexity.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay depicts a gritty, industrial, and historically accurate Victorian-era London (1891) with a strong emphasis on contrasting environments. We see the bustling Thames, crowded streets, elegant restaurants, dark and icy streets, sewer systems, the imposing Tower of London, Blackwood's estate, and its crypt, industrial areas like Nine Elms and the Thames Ironworks shipyard. The setting frequently shifts between the opulent and the squalid, the high society and the criminal underworld. Nighttime scenes are frequent, often shrouded in fog or darkness, further enhancing the atmosphere of mystery and danger.
- Culture: Victorian London culture is central, encompassing class divisions, spiritualism (with billboards and séances), public executions, bare-knuckle boxing, secret societies (Order of the Golden Bough), and a blend of superstition and emerging scientific thought. The occult plays a significant role, with rituals and symbols appearing throughout the narrative. The Cockney dialect is also subtly represented through some characters.
- Society: The societal structure is highly hierarchical, reflecting Victorian England's class system. We see the aristocracy (Blackwood, dignitaries), the upper-class intelligentsia (Holmes, Watson), the middle class (police, shopkeepers), and the lower class (street urchins, criminals). The screenplay highlights the stark contrasts between these classes and their interactions, often within the context of crime and investigation. Power dynamics are explored through the interactions between the police force, criminals, and aristocratic figures. The societal structure is a key driver of the plot.
- Technology: Technology is a blend of the era's advancements and limitations. Horse-drawn carriages and trains are prevalent, alongside gas lighting. Modern elements such as firearms and forensic techniques (examining mud, pipe residue) are present alongside more archaic methods. The construction of Tower Bridge is a prominent backdrop, symbolizing both technological progress and potential vulnerability. The introduction of a military prototype steam launch adds a unique technological element, blurring the lines between established forces and Blackwood's innovative and dangerous weaponry. The mention of new technology at the end (the safety razor) serves as a subtle marker of progress and change.
- Characters influence: The unique physical environment shapes characters' actions by forcing them to navigate treacherous conditions (sewers, rooftops, chases). The cultural elements influence the characters' choices and conflicts, with Holmes's cynicism clashing with Watson's optimism. Societal structures determine the characters' roles and interactions, with the class system determining alliances and conflicts. The technological aspects directly impact the plot, with weapons and tools used in confrontations and investigations, shaping the characters' strategies and fates.
- Narrative contribution: The world-building elements strongly contribute to the narrative by providing a rich backdrop for the mystery. The contrasting settings create tension and suspense, while the cultural and societal elements drive the plot forward, exposing the conflicts between different social groups and their motivations. The technological elements add layers of intrigue and suspense through the tools and weapons used, providing obstacles and opportunities for the characters.
- Thematic depth contribution: The contrasting environments and societal structures highlight themes of class conflict, the clash between reason and superstition, and the fragility of societal order. The occult elements explore themes of darkness and evil, while the technological advancements showcase both progress and the dangers that accompany innovation. The characters’ reactions to the environment and events they encounter create a powerful exploration of human nature, loyalty, and the pursuit of justice in a complex world.
central conflict
The central conflict revolves around Sherlock Holmes and Dr. John Watson's battle against Lord Blackwood, who seeks to unleash chaos and destruction through dark rituals and a biological weapon.
primary motivations
- Holmes is motivated by a desire to uphold justice and protect the innocent from Blackwood's malevolent plans.
- Watson is driven by his loyalty to Holmes and his commitment to his fiancée, Mary, as well as a desire for a normal life.
- Blackwood is motivated by a thirst for power and a belief in his own resurrection and dominion over others.
catalysts
- The arrival of Inspector Lestrade at Baker Street, seeking Holmes's help regarding Blackwood.
- The discovery of O'Riordan's murder and the connection to Blackwood's occult activities.
- Irene Adler's reappearance and her request for Holmes's assistance, which complicates his focus.
barriers
- Holmes's personal struggles with addiction and emotional detachment hinder his effectiveness.
- Watson's desire for a conventional life creates tension in his partnership with Holmes.
- Blackwood's cunning and the involvement of a secret society complicate their investigation.
themes
- The duality of good and evil, as represented by Holmes and Blackwood.
- The struggle between rationality and the supernatural.
- The complexities of relationships and loyalty, particularly between Holmes, Watson, and Irene.
stakes
The stakes include the potential loss of innocent lives due to Blackwood's biological weapon and the threat to the Queen and the stability of the British government.
uniqueness factor
The story uniquely blends elements of classic detective fiction with supernatural and occult themes, creating a fresh take on the Sherlock Holmes narrative.
audience hook
The tension between Holmes's intellectual prowess and Blackwood's dark, supernatural abilities keeps the audience engaged.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradoxical engine lies in Holmes's reliance on logic and reason while facing an adversary who embodies chaos and the supernatural, challenging his worldview.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another aspect of bisociation is the interplay between Holmes's analytical mind and Watson's emotional intelligence, highlighting the balance between intellect and empathy in their partnership.
Engine: Claude
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for "Sherlock Holmes" is a well-crafted blend of action, mystery, and character development. It effectively balances the archetypical Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson dynamic with a compelling, high-stakes narrative involving the resurrection of the villainous Lord Blackwood. The screenplay showcases clever plot twists, rich historical context, and impressive production value. While it has a few areas for improvement, the overall narrative is engaging, the characters are well-developed, and the screenplay would make for an exciting and visually stunning feature film.
- The sequence in the sewer junction is a thrilling action set piece that expertly introduces the key characters and establishes the high-stakes nature of the conflict. The choreographed fight between Holmes, Watson, and Blackwood's henchmen is well-executed and propels the story forward. high ( Scene 4 (Sewer Junction) )
- The scene at 221B Baker Street effectively establishes the central character dynamic between Holmes and Watson, while also introducing the central conflict of Watson's impending marriage. The dialogue is sharp, the characters are well-defined, and the scene sets up the emotional stakes and journey for the two protagonists. high ( Scene 6 (221B Baker Street) )
- The sequence in the warehouse is a visually striking and suspenseful set piece that builds a sense of dread and mystery around Blackwood's occult ritual. The effective use of lighting, smoke, and unsettling occult imagery creates a strong atmospheric tone that heightens the tension. high ( Scene 35 (Warehouse - Chemical Works) )
- The transition between Holmes and Watson's emotional arcs could be handled with more nuance. The sudden shift in Watson's willingness to assist Holmes feels abrupt and could benefit from more gradual character development. medium ( Scene 31 (221B Baker Street) )
- The exposition dump provided by Irene Adler feels a bit heavy-handed and could be integrated more organically into the dialogue or action. Finding ways to convey the key information about Blackwood's weapon without relying on a monologue would strengthen the narrative flow. medium ( Scene 39 (Lab Room) )
- While the screenplay effectively depicts Holmes and Watson's investigation, there could be more moments that showcase their detective work and intellectual problem-solving. Expanding on their deductive process and analysis of clues would further highlight their unique skills and the core appeal of the Sherlock Holmes stories. medium ( Scene 27 (Various) )
- The scene in Blackwood's cell effectively establishes the supernatural and occult elements of the story, while also hinting at the larger conflict and power dynamics at play. Blackwood's unsettling presence and cryptic dialogue add an intriguing layer of mystery to the narrative. high ( Scene 9 (Blackwood's Cell) )
- The intimate and charged encounter between Holmes and Irene Adler is a standout moment that showcases the complex and adversarial nature of their relationship. The scene is well-executed, with the dialogue and physical interaction adding depth to their characters and the overall narrative. high ( Scene 30 (Irene's Room) )
- The climactic sequence on top of Tower Bridge is a visually striking and thrilling set piece that brings the story to a dramatic conclusion. The high-stakes confrontation between Holmes, Irene, and Blackwood, combined with the precarious physical setting, creates an engaging and memorable finale. high ( Scene 52 (Top of Tower Bridge) )
- Characterization of Secondary Characters While the screenplay excels in developing the central characters of Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson, some of the secondary characters, such as Irene Adler and Lestrade, could benefit from more nuanced and well-rounded characterization. Irene Adler, in particular, feels somewhat one-dimensional at times, with her motivations and backstory not fully explored. Providing more depth and complexity to these supporting characters would strengthen the overall narrative and character dynamics. medium
- Uneven Pacing There are a few instances where the pacing of the screenplay feels uneven, with certain sequences either dragging or feeling rushed. For example, the transition between Watson's decision to marry and his willingness to assist Holmes feels abrupt, lacking the necessary character development and emotional beats to make the shift feel organic. Ensuring a more consistent and well-paced narrative would enhance the overall cinematic experience. medium
Engine: Gemini
Recommend
Executive Summary
This Sherlock Holmes screenplay offers a thrilling and action-packed adaptation, successfully blending classic elements with modern sensibilities. The strong character dynamics between Holmes and Watson, coupled with the exciting plot, create a compelling narrative. However, some areas of character development and pacing could be refined to enhance the overall impact. The unique blend of Victorian London with occult elements provides a strong USP.
- The screenplay excels in crafting thrilling and dynamic action sequences. The fight scenes in the sewers, boxing ring, and Thames Ironworks are visceral and well-described, enhancing the suspense and excitement. high ( Scene 3 Scene 4 Scene 8 Scene 21 Scene 22 )
- The relationship between Holmes and Watson is realistically portrayed, showcasing their contrasting personalities and evolving bond. Watson's impending marriage acts as a catalyst for Holmes's character arc. high ( Scene 6 Scene 7 )
- The screenplay effectively establishes the setting of Victorian London, highlighting the contrast between modernization and superstition, creating a rich and atmospheric backdrop. medium ( Scene 5 Scene 32 )
- The introduction and development of Irene Adler as a complex and intriguing character add depth to the narrative and provide a strong counterpoint to Holmes's intellect and personality. medium ( Scene 29 Scene 39 Scene 56 )
- The screenplay masterfully uses occult elements and supernatural suspense to heighten the stakes and create a unique twist on the classic Sherlock Holmes formula. medium ( Scene 12 Scene 35 Scene 50 )
- Holmes's emotional arc feels somewhat abrupt. While his initial disillusionment is established, the transition to his renewed engagement could be smoother, allowing for more gradual character development. medium ( Scene 6 Scene 31 )
- The pacing in certain sections feels uneven. Some scenes, particularly those focusing on exposition or character interaction, could benefit from tighter editing to maintain the momentum. medium ( Scene 5 Scene 27 Scene 40 )
- The climax could be more impactful. The resolution of Blackwood's plan feels slightly rushed. A more sustained build-up to the confrontation at Tower Bridge would increase tension and emotional investment. medium ( Scene 41 Scene 42 )
- More depth to the motivations of secondary characters (beyond Blackwood and Adler) would enhance the overall complexity and intrigue of the narrative. low
- A more detailed explanation of Blackwood's occult rituals and their connection to his plan would enrich the mystical aspects of the story. low
- The twist regarding Blackwood's faked death is cleverly executed and adds a layer of unexpected suspense. high ( Scene 59 )
- The action scene on Tower Bridge, balancing suspense, action, and wit, provides a thrilling and innovative climax. high ( Scene 54 )
- The use of shocking imagery, like the horse tank, creates a memorable and disturbing visual that enhances the film's atmosphere. medium ( Scene 36 )
- Character motivations While Blackwood's evil is clearly established, the motivations of some secondary characters, particularly within the Order of the Golden Bough, remain somewhat underdeveloped. More internal conflict and distinct goals for these characters would add depth and complexity. medium
- Pacing inconsistencies Several scenes could be tightened to improve pacing. Some dialogue-heavy sections feel slow, particularly during Watson's emotional arc, while several chase sequences feel somewhat abbreviated and could benefit from a more detailed description of the environment and the thrill of the chase. medium
Engine: GPT4
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Sherlock Holmes' presents a compelling narrative that intertwines mystery, action, and character development. It effectively captures the essence of the iconic detective while introducing fresh elements that appeal to modern audiences. The character arcs, particularly those of Holmes and Watson, are well-developed, showcasing their contrasting personalities and deepening their bond throughout the story. However, there are areas for improvement, particularly in pacing and the resolution of certain plot threads.
- The action sequences are well-crafted, maintaining tension and excitement while showcasing Holmes' deductive skills and physical prowess. high ( Scene Sequence number 4 (INT. SEWER JUNCTION) Scene Sequence number 60 (INT. 221 BAKER STREET) )
- The character development of Holmes and Watson is strong, highlighting their contrasting personalities and deepening their friendship. high ( Scene Sequence number 6 (INT. 221B BAKER STREET) )
- The screenplay effectively builds suspense leading up to key moments, particularly during the execution scene, which heightens the stakes. medium ( Scene Sequence number 12 (EXT. TOWER GREEN - TOWER OF LONDON) )
- The dialogue is sharp and witty, capturing the essence of the characters while providing humor and insight into their relationships. high ( Scene Sequence number 7 (INT. THE ROYALE) )
- The incorporation of historical elements and settings adds authenticity and richness to the narrative, enhancing the overall experience. medium ( Scene Sequence number 57 (EXT. HOUSES OF PARLIAMENT - DAY) )
- Some action sequences feel rushed, particularly towards the climax, which may leave audiences feeling disoriented. high ( Scene Sequence number 38 (EXT. WHARF - CHEMICAL WORKS - NIGHT) )
- Certain plot threads, such as the fate of Blackwood's followers, are left unresolved, which could detract from the overall narrative satisfaction. medium ( Scene Sequence number 50 (EXT. TOWER GREEN - DAY) )
- The pacing in the first act could be improved to better establish the stakes and character motivations before diving into the action. medium ( Scene Sequence number 14 (EXT. 221 BAKER STREET - DAY) )
- The motivations of secondary characters, such as Blackwood's followers, could be more clearly defined to enhance their roles in the story. low ( Scene Sequence number 9 (INT. TOWER OF LONDON - BLACKWOOD’S CELL - DAWN) )
- The resolution of Watson's character arc feels somewhat abrupt, and could benefit from a more gradual development. medium ( Scene Sequence number 31 (INT. 221B BAKER STREET - NIGHT) )
- A deeper exploration of the emotional stakes for Watson regarding his impending marriage could enhance the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 5 (EXT. THAMES EMBANKMENT - NIGHT) )
- More background on Blackwood's motivations and his past could provide a richer context for his actions. medium ( Scene Sequence number 19 (EXT. MADDISON & HAIG, PAWNBROKERS - DAY) )
- The screenplay could benefit from additional scenes that showcase the impact of Blackwood's actions on the general populace. low ( Scene Sequence number 22 (EXT. STREET - CANNING TOWN - DAY) )
- A more thorough examination of the police's perspective and their challenges could add depth to the narrative. low ( Scene Sequence number 41 (INT. SCOTLAND YARD - DAY) )
- The relationship dynamics between Holmes and Watson could be further developed to enhance emotional resonance. medium ( Scene Sequence number 44 (INT. SCOTLAND YARD - DAY) )
- The opening scene sets a dark and atmospheric tone that effectively draws the audience into the world of Sherlock Holmes. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (OVER BLACK.) )
- The use of visual storytelling in action sequences is particularly strong, enhancing the overall cinematic experience. high ( Scene Sequence number 3 (INT. SEWER TUNNEL - NIGHT) )
- The clever use of dialogue to convey character relationships and humor is a standout feature of the screenplay. high ( Scene Sequence number 13 (INT. 221B BAKER STREET - DAY) )
- The climax effectively ties together the various plot threads, providing a satisfying resolution to the overarching conflict. high ( Scene Sequence number 57 (EXT. HOUSES OF PARLIAMENT - DAY) )
- The final scenes provide a strong sense of closure while leaving room for potential future adventures. medium ( Scene Sequence number 59 (EXT. HOUSES OF PARLIAMENT - DAY) )
- Character motivations The motivations of some secondary characters, particularly Blackwood's followers, are not fully explored, which can lead to a lack of emotional investment in their fates. medium
- Pacing issues Certain action sequences feel rushed, particularly towards the climax, which may leave audiences feeling disoriented and detracts from the overall impact of the story. high
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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27 | Holmes: The game is afoot. |
35 | Blackwood: London will be ours. And with it the Empire. A new Empire -- not this pallid, timid, partial thing we have now. |
6 | Watson: I can’t believe I’ve actually managed to surprise you. I thought you would’ve deduced it weeks ago. |
4 | Blackwood: We’ll meet again, my dear. I promise. |
36 | Blackwood: How does it feel to realize that everything you thought about the world is utterly wrong? To see your beloved reason and logic annihilated before your very eyes. |