Solaris
Executive Summary
Poster
Overview
Genres: Science Fiction, Drama, Romance, Psychological Drama, Thriller, Sci-Fi, Mystery, Psychological Thriller, Psychological
Setting: Futuristic, possibly in a near-future setting, Primarily aboard the spaceship Prometheus and the planet Solaris, with flashbacks to Earth
Overview: In 'Solaris', Chris Kelvin, a weary astronaut, is sent to investigate the mysterious events aboard the Prometheus, a spaceship orbiting the enigmatic planet Solaris. As he arrives, he discovers that the crew has been affected by the planet's strange influence, leading to psychological breakdowns and the appearance of 'visitors'—manifestations of their memories. Kelvin is confronted by the haunting presence of his deceased wife, Rheya, who embodies his unresolved emotions and past traumas. As he navigates the complexities of love, loss, and identity, Kelvin grapples with the nature of reality and the consequences of human ambition. The story unfolds through Kelvin's introspection and interactions with the remaining crew, culminating in a profound exploration of existence and connection amidst existential dread.
Themes: Existential Dread and the Search for Meaning, The Nature of Reality and Perception, Love and Connection in the Face of the Unknown, The Dangers of Unchecked Scientific Ambition, Memory, Identity, and the Subconscious
Conflict and Stakes: Kelvin's struggle with the emotional and existential implications of Rheya's reappearance, questioning the nature of love, identity, and reality, with the stakes involving his mental health and the safety of the crew.
Overall Mood: Somber and introspective, with moments of tension and emotional depth.
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 1: The mood is somber and reflective as Kelvin grapples with his feelings of inadequacy and isolation.
Standout Features:
- Unique Hook: The manifestation of a deceased loved one as a psychological exploration of grief and memory.
- Plot Twist: The revelation that Rheya's existence is a projection of Kelvin's psyche, raising questions about love and reality.
- Distinctive Setting: The juxtaposition of a high-tech spaceship with the emotional weight of personal relationships.
- Innovative Ideas: Exploration of existential themes through the lens of science fiction, challenging perceptions of reality.
Comparable Scripts:
- Solaris (1972)
- Annihilation (2018)
- The Fountain (2006)
- Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind (2004)
- Blade Runner 2049 (2017)
- Her (2013)
- The Leftovers (TV Series, 2014-2017)
- The Double (2013)
- Ghost in the Shell (1995)
Writing Style:
The screenplay demonstrates a consistent blend of introspective character studies, philosophical themes, and atmospheric storytelling, often within science fiction or surreal settings. There's a strong emphasis on complex narratives, intricate plots, and emotionally resonant moments driven by character motivations and internal conflicts. Nonlinear storytelling and dreamlike sequences are also present in several scenes.
Style Similarities:
- Charlie Kaufman
- Christopher Nolan
Pass/Consider/Recommend
Recommend
Explanation: Soderbergh's *Solaris* screenplay is a compelling, albeit challenging, adaptation. Its strengths lie in its atmospheric storytelling, exploration of complex themes, and unique handling of the science fiction genre. However, the pacing could benefit from tightening, and certain plot points could be clarified for broader audience appeal. The ambiguity inherent in the story is a double-edged sword—while artistically rewarding, it might hinder commercial success.
USP: What sets 'Solaris' apart is its unique blend of science fiction and psychological drama, focusing on the intricacies of human emotion and memory rather than traditional action-driven plots. Its exploration of love, loss, and the nature of reality resonates deeply with audiences, making it a compelling piece of storytelling that challenges viewers to reflect on their own experiences and perceptions.
Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$25-40 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, particularly fans of science fiction, psychological dramas, and philosophical narratives.
Marketability: The screenplay's blend of science fiction and deep emotional themes has the potential to attract a wide audience, especially those interested in thought-provoking narratives.
The unique exploration of memory and identity, along with a strong emotional core, can resonate with viewers looking for more than just action-driven plots.
While it may appeal to niche audiences, the complex themes and slower pacing could limit its mainstream appeal.
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, as it could perform well in both box office and awards circuits, appealing to audiences seeking depth in storytelling.
Analysis Criteria Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Summary:The writer's voice is introspective, melancholic, and philosophically inclined. It favors atmospheric descriptions over exposition, relying on sparse yet impactful dialogue to convey deep emotional and existential themes. There's a consistent sense of unease and mystery, often built through subtle gestures and visual imagery rather than explicit action. The narrative is character-driven, exploring the psychological toll of isolation and the complexities of human relationships in an extreme, otherworldly setting.
Best representation: Scene 1 - Unexpected Encounter. Scene 1 best encapsulates the writer's voice because it immediately establishes the introspective, melancholic tone and thematic concerns of the entire screenplay. The combination of atmospheric description (rain, overcast sky, leafless trees), sparse dialogue (internal monologue/voiceover), and focus on the protagonist's inner turmoil perfectly illustrates the writer's preference for evocative imagery, subtle character development, and exploration of profound emotional themes. It sets the stage for the later, more overtly science fiction elements while remaining grounded in a compellingly human experience.
Memorable Lines:
- Gibarian: Maybe life just can't be solved. (Scene 16)
- RHEYA: I have decided that if it is God, it's a sick God. Its ambitions exceed its powers, but it doesn't realize it. (Scene 49)
- SNOW: We have found God. The only issue is figuring out how to prove this in a way that will make sense back on Earth. (Scene 15)
- Snow: I love chocolate. I realized just yesterday how much I love it. (Scene 7)
- RHEYA: You don't want me. (Scene 36)
Characters
Chris Kelvin:A middle-aged psychologist grappling with his past and the implications of his relationship with Rheya.
Rheya:Kelvin's deceased wife, who reappears as a manifestation of his memories, struggling with her identity and existence.
Snow:A colleague of Kelvin, representing a more pragmatic and scientific perspective on the events occurring aboard the Prometheus.
Sartorius:A scientist aboard the Prometheus, who is skeptical of the visitors and advocates for drastic measures against them.
Gibarian:A former crew member whose mental state deteriorated, providing warnings about the dangers of Solaris.
Story Shape
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | Technical Aspects | |||||||||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall Grade | Concept | Plot | Originality Score | Characters | Character Changes | Internal Goal | External Goal | Conflict | Opposition | High stakes | Story forward | Twist | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | Engagement | Pacing | Formatting | Structure | |
1 - Silent Struggles | Melancholic, Reflective, Mysterious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
2 - Unexpected Encounter | Ominous, Professional, Quiet | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
3 - Reflections on Humanity's Journey | Philosophical, Reflective, Serious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
4 - Isolation in Orbit | Mysterious, Reflective, Lonely | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
5 - Echoes of Isolation | Mysterious, Intriguing, Lonely | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
6 - Gibarian's Warning | Foreboding, Mysterious, Tense | 8.5 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
7 - Chocolate and Despair | Suspenseful, Mysterious, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
8 - Confrontation at the Threshold | Suspenseful, Intense, Mysterious | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
9 - Chasing Shadows | Mysterious, Suspenseful, Intriguing | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
10 - Isolation's Toll | Foreboding, Clinical, Isolated | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
11 - Night of Anxiety | Suspenseful, Mysterious, Eerie | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
12 - Rekindling Connection | Raw, Compelling, Ethereal, Intimate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
13 - Awakening Anxiety | Terror, Anxiety, Love, Confusion | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
14 - Separation in Silence | Tension, Sadness, Confusion, Agony, Fear | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
15 - Echoes of the Past | Tense, Mysterious, Philosophical | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
16 - Contemplations on Solaris | Philosophical, Intense, Mysterious | 9.2 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
17 - Moments of Connection | Intense, Emotional, Intriguing, Vulnerable | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
18 - Tensions at the Dinner Party | Intense, Emotional, Confrontational | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
19 - Descent into Despair | Emotional, Intense, Remorseful | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
20 - Philosophical Reflections in Space | Philosophical, Intimate, Reflective | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7.5 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
21 - Fractured Solitude | Tense, Confused, Intense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
22 - Confronting Existence | Intense, Philosophical, Mysterious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
23 - A Night of Hatred | Emotional, Tense, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | |
24 - Moments of Connection | Intimate, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
25 - Reflections in the Prometheus | Intimate, Reflective, Emotional, Philosophical | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
26 - Echoes of Longing | Intimate, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
27 - Tears in the Rain | Emotional, Intense, Heartbreaking | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
28 - Echoes of Regret | Emotional, Intense, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
29 - Confronting Reality | Philosophical, Introspective, Tense | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
30 - Intimate Confusion | Intimate, Playful, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
31 - Intimacy and Existential Reflection | Intimate, Philosophical, Reflective | 8.7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
32 - Intimate Disconnect | Reflective, Intimate, Sarcastic | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
33 - Confronting Identity | Anxious, Reflective, Intimate, Tense | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
34 - Confronting Humanity | Intense, Confrontational, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
35 - Confronting the Unknown | Tense, Reflective, Philosophical | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
36 - Moments of Insecurity | Intimate, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 5 | 8 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
37 - Echoes of Trust | Tense, Mysterious, Intense | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
38 - Existential Dread | Tense, Emotional, Intimate, Mysterious | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
39 - Resurrection and Identity | Emotional, Intense, Tense, Reflective | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
40 - Echoes of Desire | Intimate, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
41 - The Breaking Point | Tense, Emotional, Regretful | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
42 - Emotional Turmoil | Emotional, Intimate, Tense | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
43 - Fractured Connections | Tense, Emotional, Desperate | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
44 - Confronting Reality | Intense, Emotional, Conflicted | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
45 - Torn Between Love and Reality | Tense, Emotional, Confrontational | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
46 - Echoes of Betrayal | Tense, Ominous, Emotional | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | |
47 - Existential Reflections | Emotional, Reflective, Intimate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
48 - Reflections on Solaris | Tense, Reflective, Emotional | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
49 - Disillusionment and Isolation | Emotional, Reflective, Intimate | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | |
50 - Fever Dreams | Tense, Emotional, Mysterious | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 6 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | |
51 - Fragments of Reality | Emotional, Confused, Tense | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
52 - Reflections of Isolation | Reflective, Melancholic, Contemplative | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
53 - A Moment of Reflection | Reflective, Mysterious, Contemplative | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
54 - Echoes of Love | Emotional, Reflective, Regretful | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | |
55 - Echoes of Grief | Emotional, Intense, Reflective | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
56 - Confrontation at the Door | Anger, Betrayal, Conflict | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
57 - Descent into Chaos | Tense, Dramatic, Intense | 8.5 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 9 | |
58 - Reflections of Disconnection | Reflective, Melancholic, Contemplative | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 7 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | |
59 - Haunted by Memory | Reflective, Regretful, Haunted | 8.5 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 7 | |
60 - Reunion in the Fog | Emotional, Reflective, Surreal | 9.2 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 10 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 |
Scene 1 - Silent Struggles
by
Steven Soderbergh
October 4, 2001
First, over BLACK, we hear the sound of a light rain.
Then:
A MAN'S VOICE
I'm not a poet. I've never moved
anyone with my words.
(beat)
Maybe that's why they chose me.
EXT. WOODS - DAY
A mural of leafless trees beneath an overcast sky. Rain
continues to fall.
Maybe now we begin to notice a strange quality to the light
(or is it the sky?). Something vaguely unsettling.
CUT TO:
INT. BEDROOM - MORNING
Still, the sound of rain is heard.
A MAN
40s, lies on his side in bed, staring at us.
He has not been sleeping. In fact, judging from his distant
expression, he has not slept in ages.
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Scene 2 - Unexpected Encounter
Less like a road and more like a path that you maneuver a
vehicle through.
The Man, dressed in rain gear, walks down the middle. He is
accompanied by a medium-sized LABRADOR, and seems in no
particular hurry.
The sound of tires appear and grow in intensity. The Man,
without saying an actual word, instructs the dog to heal.
The dog obeys as the Man moves off the road. The vehicle
hurtles past him -- its engine quiet, its windows darkened --
spraying muddy debris in its wake.
Seconds later, the car brakes abruptly and skids to a stop.
THE MAN
Stops walking and stares at the car, which seems ominously
still.
The car then reverses direction and begins to move toward the
Man, who remains motionless.
When the car is alongside him, a darkened window turns
transparent and we see a WELL-DRESSED BUREAUCRAT in the rear
seat. His demeanor is pleasant and professional.
WELL-DRESSED BUREAUCRAT
Dr. Kelvin?
The Man he is addressing, who we now understand is CHRIS
KELVIN, stares back at him.
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Scene 3 - Reflections on Humanity's Journey
The contrast between the cabin's rustic aesthetic and the
aggressively high-tech equipment contained therein isn't as
jarring as you might imagine.
Kelvin is seated in front of a desk, scrolling through a text
readout on a flat, transparent holographic screen. Behind
him is the Well-Dressed Bureaucrat from the car, and two
others: A WOMAN in her 50s and a MAN in his 30s. They are
also well-groomed. Each of their suits are embroidered with
a small but distinctive LOGO of some sort that composes the
acronym DBA.
Kelvin scrolls through several menus, hits a few keys, and a
digitized VIDEO IMAGE appears on his screen: A MAN, unshaven,
looking into the camera.
The man, GIBARIAN, looks very tired and somewhat apologetic.
The lower part of the screen has a time of day and date
display that reads: 0221 HRS 11/14/31.
GIBARIAN
We take off into the cosmos, ready
for anything: solitude, hardship,
exhaustion, death. We're proud of
ourselves, in a way. But our
enthusiasm is a sham. We don't
want to conquer the cosmos -- we
want to extend the boundaries of
Earth to the cosmos. We are only
seeking Man. We don't want Other
Worlds. We want mirrors.
(beat)
Maybe we don't need to know what it
is, or why. Maybe just knowing
that it is should be enough.
Gibarian stares at the camera for a long moment before
switching it off and ending the transmission.
Kelvin sits back.
The visitors exchange glances.
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Scene 4 - Isolation in Orbit
Close on Kelvin. We hold on him a long time, as a myriad of
readouts scroll and flash across his face. A slit of
sunlight glides slowly through frame.
DISSOLVE TO:
KELVIN
in the same capsule, a month later. He is asleep.
DISSOLVE TO:
KELVIN
in the same capsule, two months later. He is dictating some
coordinates to Earth. He absently scratches his heavy growth
of beard.
DISSOLVE TO:
KELVIN
two months later still. He is looking out his small,
rectangular window, and for the fist time we cut around to
see the approaching planet: SOLARIS.
Kelvin stares at it, hypnotized. It has a translucent
quality, as though it is lit from within, and its undulating,
ocean-like surface slowly changes colors.
Kelvin's attention is diverted as an orbiting ship, the
PROMETHEUS, edges into frame.
KELVIN
Prometheus, this is Athena 7, on
approach, do you read me?
(beat)
Prometheus, this is Athena 7, on
approach, do you read me?
No response. He exhales and types on a keyboard.
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Scene 5 - Echoes of Isolation
The Athena 7, sporting a DBA logo, advances toward the
Prometheus.
CUT TO:
INT. PROMETHEUS
Kelvin, in a space suit, climbs with some difficulty out of
the Athena 7, which has come to rest in the DOCKING BAY of
the Prometheus. Several exploratory PODS fill the remainder
of the area.
Kelvin gets his bearings and looks around, but sees no sign
of life.
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INT. CORRIDOR
Empty.
(NOTE: Except for some ROBOTIC, NON-SPEAKING CHARACTERS: the
AUTOMATED TASKMASTERS. These are small, bug-like repair
units that constantly roam the ship, fixing things. Their
tiny hum is virtually silent, and we see them all the time on
the Prometheus. They can adhere to any surface at any
angle.)
Kelvin, now out of his space suit and holding a small
carrying case and a duffle bag, moves on.
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Scene 6 - Gibarian's Warning
Ransacked.
Kelvin registers it, then moves to the corner of the room
where the computer terminal rests. Within moments he has
discovered Gibarian has recorded a video message for him to
replay.
VIDEO
Gibarian addressing the camera. He appears to be lucid, but
extremely fatigued.
GIBARIAN
Hi, Chris.
(a light smile)
I'm so glad you came.
(beat, the smile fades)
I still have a little time, and I
want to tell you something. To
warn you. By now you know about
me, or if you don't, get Snow or
Sartorius to tell you; it doesn't
matter.
(beat)
I didn't lose my mind. You should
be able to tell from this video.
I'm not mad.
(beat)
If it happens to you, remember that
it isn't madness.
(beat)
You should know, I'm in favor of
destroying Solaris. I know
that's... illegal. And unethical.
And irresponsible. But it's the
only way to make it stop.
A long moment of silence is broken by a noise on the video,
which draws Gibarian's attention offscreen.
GIBARIAN
(addressing whoever made
the noise)
Cut that out. Do you hear me?
Gibarian switches off the video.
The computer screen freezes the last recorded frame and
overlays a readout indicating the file has ended.
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INT. CORRIDOR
Empty. But there is a door at the end of it, slightly open.
Kelvin moves toward it.
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Scene 7 - Chocolate and Despair
A FIGURE, seated with its back to the door, turns to see
Kelvin enter. This is SNOW. He looks Kelvin up and down,
his expression wary and alert.
KELVIN
Snow. Didn't you hear me radio?
I'm Kelvin.
A long beat. Snow just watches him.
SNOW
Yes. We heard.
Kelvin takes a step forward, and Snow recoils.
KELVIN
What's wrong? What happened to
Gibarian?
SNOW
He's dead.
KELVIN
How?
A beat.
SNOW
Suicide.
Snow exhales, then looks up as though he's remembered
something.
SNOW
You didn't bring any chocolate, did
you?
KELVIN
What?
SNOW
(musing)
I love chocolate. I realized just
yesterday how much I love it.
(beat, then he recovers)
I thought maybe, if they let you
bring personal effects, you might
have snuck some through, because...
well, I've been thinking about it.
A long beat as Kelvin stares at Snow.
KELVIN
What happened here?
Snow lies back in his bunk.
SNOW
I can't talk just now. I'm too
tired.
KELVIN
Where's Sartorius?
SNOW
In his lab. He won't let you in.
KELVIN
(leaving)
He'll let me in.
SNOW
Kelvin, if you see anything
unusual...
Kelvin stops, but doesn't turn around.
SNOW
... try to stay calm.
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Scene 8 - Confrontation at the Threshold
Kelvin stands outside a door.
KELVIN
Let me in.
A beat.
SARTORIUS
(inside, muffled)
You have to give me your word you
won't come in. Then I'll come out.
KELVIN
All right.
Sartorius cracks the door open and slithers through the slit
and into the hallway. He is of obvious intelligence and not
to be messed with; contentious, intimidating when he wants to
be, and probably brilliant. Kelvin eyes him suspiciously.
KELVIN
What happened to Gibarian?
SARTORIUS
Didn't you talk to Snow?
KELVIN
I want to hear your version.
SARTORIUS
(incredulous)
Who, here, could possibly care what
you want? At best, you're Employee
of the Month for the highest bidder
in the Solaris auction. They have
no idea what's going on up here.
They've never even been in space.
And I'm supposed to listen to you?
KELVIN
I am here to recover this mission,
report my findings, and make a
recommendation. Now: What happened
to him?
SARTORIUS
The same thing that could happen to
any of us.
KELVIN
Where's his body?
SARTORIUS
In the lab. With her, probably.
KELVIN
Her? Who are you talking about?
Sartorius is grabbed by something on the other side of his
door. He struggles to keep his composure.
SARTORIUS
His last wish was to be buried on
Earth. In dirt, he said. "I want
to buried in dirt." What a clown.
Sartorius is losing the battle with whomever or whatever is
on the other side of his door.
KELVIN
They shouldn't let people like you
into space.
SARTORIUS
Just so you know: I'm not going
back until I understand what it is.
I am going to figure out what it
is, make it stop, and then I will
go home.
KELVIN
Listen --
SARTORIUS
We're done. Oh, I should tell you,
I don't trust Snow. There's
something wrong with him.
Sartorius rotates and zips back into his room. As the door
closes Kelvin sees a flash of ANOTHER FIGURE in Sartorius'
room. The glimpse was too quick to judge who or what the
other figure could have been.
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Scene 9 - Chasing Shadows
Kelvin walks, exploring the ship. He sees something that
stops him:
A NUDE WOMAN
Black, early 20s, slipping across a corridor up ahead.
Kelvin gives chase. He sees her turn a corner, but by the
time he gets there, she is gone.
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INT. SNOW'S ROOM
Snow is lying on his bunk.
KELVIN
Is there anybody else here?
SNOW
(sits up a little)
Why, who did you see?
KELVIN
Gibarian warned me. He left me a
message.
SNOW
Who was it?
KELVIN
She was real. Where did she come
from?
Snow looks at him but doesn't respond.
KELVIN
Tell me. I won't think you're
insane.
SNOW
Oh, that's a relief.
Snow lies back down.
KELVIN
Where did she come from?
A beat.
SNOW
How much sleep do you need?
KELVIN
How much sleep?
SNOW
How long can you go without sleep?
KELVIN
That depends.
SNOW
Well, when you do go to sleep:
barricade your door.
Snow rolls over, away from Kelvin.
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Scene 10 - Isolation's Toll
Solaris. Quiet, but still active somehow.
KELVIN (V.O.)
The Prometheus, as far as I can
tell, is functionally intact. Crew
status: One dead, Gibarian. Cause
of death appears to be suicide.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin speaks into a video communication device. As he does,
we see images of the things and people he describes.
KELVIN
Interviews with the surviving
members and a perusal of the
deceased's personal effects
indicate he was suffering from
severe depression with psychotic
features, along with bouts of
hypomania, dementia, delirium, and
primary insomnia. All of these
symptoms, combined with a profound
sense of isolation, are commonly
found in studies of low stimulation
environments, particularly long
range space travel. Snow and
Sartorius show indications of
depression, including dysthymic and
bipolar I; a variety of stress
disorders, including acute and
posttraumatic; and suggestions of
agoraphobia, obsessive/compulsive
disorder, and hypersomnia. I
emphasize these are preliminary
opinions on my part. I will
attempt to convince Snow and
Sartorius to return to Earth, but
as they currently view me as an
intruder of sorts, this may take
some time.
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Scene 11 - Night of Anxiety
Later. Kelvin is lying down. The lights are out, and he is
trying to sleep.
After a moment, he gets up, checks the lock on his door, and
lies back down.
Then he gets up and moves a chair in front of the door, and
lies back down.
Then he gets up and puts two heavy cases on top of the chair,
and lies back down.
Laughing to himself, he drifts off to sleep.
Silence.
ANOTHER ANGLE
On Kelvin, asleep.
ANOTHER ANGLE
On Kelvin, still asleep. Then:
EXTREME CLOSE-UP:
A WOMAN'S LIPS, slightly parted.
BACK TO KELVIN
Asleep. Then:
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Scene 12 - Rekindling Connection
Continued silence, AND:
RHEYA, 30s, staring at us, practically daring us to look
away. Her obvious intelligence and confidence make her
extremely compelling, along with the fact that it was her
parted lips we were looking at a moment ago. Her expression
indicates she's in a very raw emotional state.
REVERSE ANGLE
Kelvin is the person she has locked eyes with on the TRAIN.
He is younger here; not just in age, but in spirit. The
contrast with his older self is striking.
BACK TO KELVIN
Asleep on the ship. After a beat:
EXTREME CLOSE-UP:
Rheya's LIPS.
Except the circumstance is clearly different: it's darker and
there isn't the side-to-side shimmy of the train car.
A WIDER VIEW
Reveals that Rheya is not sitting on the train -- she is
sitting in Kelvin's room on the Prometheus, right now.
She is staring at Kelvin and she is ethereal in her
stillness.
KELVIN
Awakens, blinks, and slowly recognizes her.
If he is not entirely surprised it is because he has
obviously dreamed of Rheya before. He looks at her, simply.
RHEYA
Stands and makes her way to Kelvin.
Without hesitation she kisses him and they begin to explore
each other and we see all of it happen and two things are
obvious: first, they have done this before, and two: they
haven't done it in some time.
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Scene 13 - Awakening Anxiety
Kelvin is asleep, Rheya in his arms.
He wakes up and looks at her, perplexed. After a beat he
rises to sit on the edge of the bed.
A wave of terror is barely suppressed as he puts his hand to
his forehead. Rheya opens her eyes.
KELVIN
Oh, God. I'm awake.
RHEYA
Yes.
He looks at her.
KELVIN
Where did you come from?
She moves to him and kisses him as if that's all she wants to
do, forever.
Between kisses.
KELVIN
How are you here?
She stops.
RHEYA
How do you mean?
(beat)
Chris, what's wrong?
Hearing his name spoken by her (and those particular words,
perhaps) nearly causes Kelvin to scream.
He stands and moves to the chair. Rheya watches him.
RHEYA
I love you.
He looks up at her for as long as he can. Then he looks
down.
RHEYA
Do you love me?
He doesn't look up.
KELVIN
Yes.
A beat.
KELVIN
I need to see Snow.
RHEYA
I'll go with you.
KELVIN
(rising)
I'll just be a minute.
She bolts out of bed.
RHEYA
Don't.
KELVIN
Why?
RHEYA
I don't know. I can't be alone.
KELVIN
I'll be right back.
She is trying to accommodate him but her fear of being left
alone is palpable, even excessive. He sees this and puts his
arms on her shoulders to comfort her.
KELVIN
All right. All right. Here.
He hands her a few pills and retrieves a glass of water.
RHEYA
What are they?
KELVIN
To calm your anxiety.
RHEYA
To calm my anxiety.
She takes the pills and smiles.
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Scene 14 - Separation in Silence
Kelvin leads Rheya to one of the exploratory pods. They are
in space suits.
RHEYA
We're taking a flight?
KELVIN
Yes.
He opens the door of a pod and indicates for her to enter.
She is unsure.
KELVIN
Go ahead. I'll close the door
behind me.
She stares up and into the pod. Kelvin watches her go with
difficulty and then CLOSES THE DOOR behind Rheya.
He walks across the docking bay to the control room and
begins preparations for the pod to be jettisoned.
KELVIN
In agony as he watches a real-time, beat-by-beat brand of
technological murder take place: Rheya's pod is pushed off
into space.
RHEYA
Her face contorted in confusion, watches through the pod
window as the docking bay doors close in front of her with a
brutal finality.
KELVIN
collapses to the ground, shattered.
INSERT:
A woman's HAND, resting on the floor of an apartment. The
fingers are being licked by a LABRADOR PUPPY.
ANOTHER INSERT:
A pot of coffee, on the boil. Except that it has been left
unattended for too long...
ANOTHER INSERT:
A rain-streaked window.
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Scene 15 - Echoes of the Past
Kelvin, on the edge of his bed. He wants to tear himself
inside out.
A voice calls over the intercom: Snow's.
SNOW
Was her breakfast conversation that
bad?
KELVIN
Shut up.
SNOW
I told you, try to stay calm.
You're supposed to be the
psychologist of the bunch.
KELVIN
What was it?
Kelvin rises and goes to wash his face.
SNOW
Personally, I think it's God. At
least, it fits my definition.
KELVIN
And professionally?
SNOW
I'm not sure.
(beat)
It started with Gibarian. He
locked himself in his room and
refused to talk except through a
crack in the door. He covered the
video lens. Obviously we thought
he was having a nervous breakdown.
I don't know why he didn't tell us
he had somebody in there. By this
time, we were getting visitors,
too. He was desperately trying to
figure it out. Day and night.
(beat)
Who was she?
KELVIN
My wife.
SNOW
Dead?
Kelvin nods.
SNOW
She has materialized from your
memory of her. What was her name?
KELVIN
Rheya.
SNOW
It started about three months ago.
Right after the government sold the
expedition. We were ready to go
home.
KELVIN
Will she come back?
SNOW
Probably.
KELVIN
I wish you'd told me.
SNOW
Told you what?
A beat.
SNOW
What will you say?
KELVIN
To who?
SNOW
What are you going to report back
to Earth?
KELVIN
I don't know.
SNOW
An enormous amount of money changed
hands to get control of this
project. We are in little danger
of being left alone for long.
(beat)
You'll need to do something.
Otherwise they'll be sending
someone out to recover you.
KELVIN
Gibarian said he thinks Solaris
should be destroyed.
SNOW
That's ludicrous. This is contact.
We have found God. The only issue
is figuring out how to prove this
in a way that will make sense back
on Earth. So how will we describe
it, if we choose to describe it at
all?
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Scene 16 - Contemplations on Solaris
Before Kelvin's arrival.
Gibarian is talking to Snow and Sartorius.
GIBARIAN
A pre-biological colloidal
envelope, possibly exceeding
terrestrial structures in
complexity; a plasmic mechanism.
Probably without life as we
conceive it, but capable of
performing functional activities on
an astronomic scale. My view is
that Solaris has reached, in a
single bound, the "homeostatic
ocean" stage without passing
through stages of terrestrial
evolution. I think it bypassed
cellular development altogether.
It hasn't taken endless eons to
adapt itself to its environment,
but in fact dominated its
environment immediately. From the
moment it existed, it was the most
superior element in the Universe.
And now it passes the time doing
extravagant theoretical thinking
about the Universe, with us as the
cast.
We now show this scene being played out on a video monitor,
watched by Kelvin.
GIBARIAN
It's engaged in a never-ending
process of transformation; an
ontological autometamorphosis,
begging the question: Can thought
exist separately from
consciousness?
SNOW
It's God.
SARTORIUS
I don't care what it is, we need to
figure out how to make it stop.
GIBARIAN
Nelson, we have the opportunity --
SARTORIUS
What if this thing follows us back
to Earth? What if what's happening
here started happening on Earth, on
a mass scale? Don't you see that
as a problem? I think it's a
serious mistake to assume it's
benign. For all we know it's
driving us crazy so it can watch us
kill each other.
Gibarian considers this.
SNOW
We're not even sure it will let us
leave.
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ANOTHER VIDEO
This time, Gibarian alone. Near the end.
GIBARIAN
Maybe it's stuck. Maybe its power
isn't that God-like. I mean, we
have God-like power relative to an
insect, but that doesn't mean we
can move the Earth around at will.
Maybe it's like a spider web,
waiting for something to show up.
(beat)
We intercepted some brief fragments
of what must be an everlasting
monologue with itself. Of course
it was beyond our understanding.
(beat)
I've come to hate it here. There's
only one way out of its reach, for
us. Humans.
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INT. LAB
Kelvin stares at Gibarian's body, which is lying under a
sheet in the ship's operating room. Also under the sheet,
next to Gibarian: The Young Girl.
GIBARIAN
(from a video)
I thought I'd been behaving
normally, rationally. But a sign
of insanity is the inability to
think about more than one thing.
So if I am consumed by the idea
that I am insane and can't think of
anything else, then I am insane.
(beat, smiles)
You ask questions at the end of
your life, the sort of questions
people who are content don't ask.
(beat)
Maybe life just can't be solved.
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Scene 17 - Moments of Connection
A shot hovering over the surface of Solaris.
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin is lying down, looking at the door.
After a beat, he turns out the lights and rolls over.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Time has passed. Kelvin is asleep.
RHEYA leans into frame and kisses him.
Without even waking, he kisses her back, hungrily.
KELVIN
Rheya...
RHEYA
I want you inside me right now.
They make love. It's even better than before.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin and Rheya are asleep.
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INT. TRAIN - DAY
Kelvin, staring intently. What he is staring at is Rheya,
who is seated across from him. She doesn't see him, yet.
When she does, she locks eyes with his and doesn't look away.
This continues until she gets off the train. Kelvin watches
her go, and she looks back at him through the window as the
train pulls away.
INT. PARTY - NIGHT
Rheya enters, looks around. She spots Kelvin, who has
already spotted her. Their expressions indicate they are
pleased to see each other again. He approaches her, and they
stare at each other a long time, until:
KELVIN
"And Death Shall Have No Dominion".
RHEYA
Book?
KELVIN
Poem. Dylan Thomas. I thought of
it when I saw you on the train.
RHEYA
My Thomas is a little rusty.
He leans over and whispers into her ear. She listens, and
when he finishes, she leans back and looks at him, intrigued.
Genuinely intrigued. He smiles.
RHEYA
Not a very happy poem.
KELVIN
You didn't look very happy.
RHEYA
I wasn't.
KELVIN
And tonight?
RHEYA
Better.
He nods, and they smile. They seem to be rooting for each
other. After an extended pleasurable moment, Rheya leans
over and whispers in his ear. He listens, then leans back
and looks at her.
KELVIN
That's good to know.
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Scene 18 - Tensions at the Dinner Party
Another night.
Rheya is wound up. Not drunk, something else. She has an
odd look in her eyes.
We are at a dinner party, and there are people trying -- but
failing -- not to watch.
RHEYA
You want to fuck her?
KELVIN
Stop it.
RHEYA
You behave as though you want to
fuck her.
KELVIN
Rheya. Not here.
RHEYA
And I just want to know if I'm
crazy or not -- if what I think is
happening is actually happening.
Or am I one of those people, those
women, who are blind to what's
going on? Who pretend not to see
their husband's attention toward
another woman?
KELVIN
Let's go home.
RHEYA
You go home.
KELVIN
I am. Please come with me. I
don't want to do this here.
RHEYA
You talk like an actor.
He is stung.
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Scene 19 - Descent into Despair
The immediate aftermath of the preceding scene, but at home
now.
Rheya crying as she embraces Kelvin.
RHEYA
I'm so sorry. I'm so sorry.
He is unmoved, but she labors to change his mind.
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INT. APARTMENT - MORNING
Rheya, in a chair, remorseful, Kelvin is dressing.
KELVIN
You're better when you take them.
RHEYA
I know, I know. But still, somehow
I don't feel better.
KELVIN
All right. How about I feel better
when you take them?
A beat.
RHEYA
Right.
They look at each other and understand; she will take the
pills.
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INT. APARTMENT - MORNING
Rheya, on the floor, dead. Her hand outstretched, a repeat
of an image we saw earlier.
Rain streaks the kitchen window.
The bottle of pills nearby.
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Scene 20 - Philosophical Reflections in Space
Rheya is taking her pills. Kelvin watches.
KELVIN
What do you remember?
RHEYA
What do you mean?
KELVIN
Do you remember Beethoven? The
Beatles? Movies, books,
restaurants, friends?
RHEYA
(thinking)
Yes. But not until you mentioned
them. As soon as you said those
things, I remembered them. And
they have associations that make me
think of other things I remember.
It's like filling up.
She looks out the portal at Solaris.
RHEYA
Is it a planet?
KELVIN
Not exactly. It exists in a
continuum that wasn't proven until
ten years ago, a higher
mathematical dimension superimposed
on top of the Universe. An
infinite number of them, in fact.
It was a violation of all of our
various laws regarding the
Universe, Space, or Space-Time. It
was completely counter-intuitive.
We had to unlearn everything.
RHEYA
Is it intelligent?
KELVIN
Intelligent beyond our
comprehension.
RHEYA
Then it's God, right?
KELVIN
It's something.
RHEYA
You still don't believe in God?
KELVIN
The whole idea of God was dreamed
up by a silly animal with a small
brain called Man. Even the limits
we put on it are human limits. It
can do this, it can do that! It
designs, it creates!
RHEYA
Even a God that wasn't active, that
just created something and stood
back and watched?
KELVIN
You're talking about a man in a
white beard again. You're
ascribing human characteristics to
something that isn't human. Human
beings look for causes and
patterns. How could we know what
Solaris is up to, if anything?
A beat.
RHEYA
But what if Solaris is what there
was before The Big Bang?
KELVIN
As I said, it is beyond our
comprehension.
RHEYA
As I said, then it's God, right?
She looks at him and can't keep from smiling, eventually.
RHEYA
Why are we talking about this shit
when we could be fucking?
Kelvin smiles.
The intercom comes to life.
SNOW
Kelvin, you awake?
KELVIN
What is it?
SNOW
Can you meet me and Sartorius on B
deck in an hour?
KELVIN
Why?
SNOW
Just a little strategy session.
But in person this time.
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Scene 21 - Fractured Solitude
Kelvin is getting ready to leave. Rheya sits on the edge of
the bed, nervous.
KELVIN
All right?
She nods and Kelvin exits, locking the door behind him.
We sit with her for a moment as she tries to remain calm.
IN THE CORRIDOR
Kelvin listens. A long time.
Satisfied, he begins to walk away but is stopped by the
sounding of a CRASHING GLASS from within. He hears footsteps
approach the door, and then a fierce POUNDING.
He takes a step back. An INHUMAN AMOUNT OF NOISE begins
emanating from the other side of the door, which is now
threatening to break apart. It sounds like a plane is
crashing in Kelvin's room -- no human could create this kind
of cacophony.
Finally, he steps forward and presses the button to open the
door.
RHEYA
Is revealed, covered in blood. She has completely torn the
inside of the cabin door apart and has badly injured herself
in the process.
KELVIN
Rheya...
Confused, she looks up at him as he takes her in his arms and
carries her to the bed.
RHEYA
What happened?
KELVIN
You were trying to break down the
door. Do you know why?
RHEYA
When I saw you were gone I got
scared.
He puts her down on the bed and runs to the bathroom, where
he gathers all the first aid materials he can find.
Returning, he blanches.
Rheya's wounds have HEALED; in fact, they are HEALING in
front of us.
She looks up at him and doesn't like the look on his face.
RHEYA
Chris, what's wrong with me?
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Scene 22 - Confronting Existence
Kelvin runs Rheya through a battery of tests and studies the
results.
RHEYA
Am I all right?
A beat.
KELVIN
Yes.
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INT. B DECK CONFERENCE ROOM
Snow and Sartorius wait for Kelvin.
SNOW
He won't do it.
SARTORIUS
Why do you say that?
SNOW
He won't.
Kelvin enters, with Rheya. Snow and Sartorius exchange
glances.
KELVIN
This is my wife, Rheya.
She looks at Snow and nods. Sartorius she hates instantly,
and the feeling seems to be mutual.
SARTORIUS
We thought you'd be alone. We want
to talk about...
SNOW
We want to talk freely.
KELVIN
Go ahead.
Sartorius begins.
SARTORIUS
I suggest we pool our knowledge
regarding the... visitors. We can
express whatever questions or
conclusions we might have... share
information about our various...
experiments. Agreed?
Kelvin and Snow nod.
SARTORIUS
I would like to start with
motivation. Why are they here?
Sartorius looks at Rheya. She looks away.
SARTORIUS
They are not autonomous individuals
and they're not actual persons.
They are projections materializing
from our minds, based on a given
individual.
SNOW
It's an experiment.
KELVIN
No. There's no behavior
modification.
SARTORIUS
She reappeared exactly as she had
before?
Kelvin looks at Rheya and nods. She is struck by the word
"before".
SNOW
The same vulnerabilities?
He nods again.
SARTORIUS
A recoil, with no compensating
mechanism.
SNOW
And when a given situation no
longer corresponds to the normal
faculties of the... original, the
visitor suffers some sort of
disconnected consciousness.
SARTORIUS
Followed by non-human
manifestations.
SNOW
Are the actions of Solaris
premeditated?
KELVIN
Is it being deliberately cruel, you
mean? I don't think so.
SNOW
I'm just trying to find an
explanation for the continual
reappearances.
KELVIN
(to Rheya)
When you cut yourself pounding the
door, did it hurt?
RHEYA
Yes.
(looks around)
Of course.
SARTORIUS
If they're not learning anything
and they're not modifying their
behavior, why do they come back?
SNOW
It's like they're plugged into a
game, which goes around and around,
endlessly repeating itself.
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Scene 23 - A Night of Hatred
This is ten years ago. Rheya enters, alone.
She crosses to the kitchen and makes a drink. Almost
immediately, the labrador puppy enters from the bedroom and
stands beside her, tail wagging. She ignores it and
continues mixing her drink.
Halfway through this activity, the bedroom light comes on. A
moment later, Kelvin is in the doorway. Eventually, but not
angrily, because he's still not really awake:
KELVIN
Where've you been?
RHEYA
I been thinking about how much I
hate you.
She finishes making her drink, drinks it, and walks out the
door.
Kelvin stands in the doorway for a beat, then pivots and
returns to bed. The light goes out.
RHEYA (V.O.)
Yes, I remember that. I went back
to Lois' house and spent the night.
Those were dark days.
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Scene 24 - Moments of Connection
Kelvin and Rheya, later in the evening when they spoke for
the first time. They are absolutely infatuated with each
other; they know something is happening between them, will
happen between them.
RHEYA
I would have these -- I don't know
how to describe them -- visions,
when I was younger. Maybe not
visions, but like these waking
dream states. Time would just
collapse, I would be inside time.
I would stare at a second hand on a
clock until it stopped. Freaky
stuff.
KELVIN
How old were you?
RHEYA
Seven, eight. So one day my mother
catches me sort of staring off into
space, and she asks me what I'm
doing, and I start trying to
explain to her, about this state
that I can put myself in, and this
look comes over her face.
KELVIN
What kind of look?
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Scene 25 - Reflections in the Prometheus
Kelvin and Rheya sit together in the Prometheus. Rheya
continues her story without a beat.
RHEYA
Scared. No, not scared. Wary.
Like I was something to be... her
guard went up. I was a threat.
Now I know why. She was afraid
she'd be seen. That I would see
her for the self-obsessed neurotic
that she was. I think she thought
she had a few more years of being
on a pedestal. But that's the
cycle, right? I knew a little more
than she did, she knew a little
more than her mother, and on and
on.
(beat)
I guess that's part of the reason
why --
KELVIN
I know. I know. We don't have to
talk about that.
Another beat.
RHEYA
I remember days of just thinking
about you.
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Scene 26 - Echoes of Longing
Intercut Kelvin and Rheya at their respective jobs, going
through a normal day. There is no sound. As we see these
images, it's clear that Kelvin and Rheya are slightly not
present in their respective encounters with other people;
they are distracted by the idea of each other.
And they like it.
RHEYA
Thinking what you were doing and
saying, just being consumed by
thinking of you. I loved it so
much, that feeling.
KELVIN
I did too.
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
Rheya on the edge of the bed, facing away.
KELVIN
I used to watch you undress.
As she does:
KELVIN
I never tired of watching you
undress. Every time, it was
exciting. Right until... to the
end.
A beat. Then a shot of Kelvin that we've seen before: Him
leaving their apartment, angry.
ON THE PROMETHEUS
A beat.
RHEYA
What happened to us, exactly?
KELVIN
You don't know?
Rheya shakes her head.
Kelvin just watches her.
RHEYA
I remember... something burning.
Coffee burning.
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Scene 27 - Tears in the Rain
The rain-streaked window.
An automated coffee maker has been left on, and the
solidified coffee at the bottom of the pot is smoking.
Rheya's body is on the floor of the kitchen.
RHEYA (ON PROMETHEUS)
She is looking at Kelvin. He is dreading this.
RHEYA
You found me?
He nods. It's coming back to her.
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Kelvin is yelling at Rheya. We don't hear what he's saying,
but judging from her reaction, it's not pleasant. She is
crying.
RHEYA (ON PROMETHEUS)
Experiencing this all over again. Kelvin comes and sits in
front of her.
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Kelvin, still yelling, is packing some things into a
suitcase. Rheya, between sobs, pleads with him.
RHEYA (ON PROMETHEUS)
Her eyes fill with tears. Kelvin embraces her.
KELVIN
I'm sorry. I'm sorry.
Rheya is devastated, inconsolable.
RHEYA
Why did you say those things?
KELVIN
I don't know. I couldn't
understand why you didn't tell me.
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Scene 28 - Echoes of Regret
Rheya lies on the kitchen floor, dead. There is a NOTE in
her hand.
Kelvin kneels next to her.
KELVIN (ON PROMETHEUS)
With Rheya still in his arms.
KELVIN
When you said you wouldn't make
it... I didn't believe you. Or I
didn't take you seriously, which is
worse.
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Kelvin holds the dead Rheya.
KELVIN (ON PROMETHEUS)
Squeezing her.
KELVIN
I should have believed you.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin lies in bed, his eyes open. Rheya is in his arms.
CUT TO:
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Rheya, talking to Chris. Obviously during a period when they
were getting along. Or at least: not fighting.
RHEYA
I can't help feeling that I'm
cheating when I take them.
KELVIN
It's genetics. You know this. You
know where it comes from. There is
nothing wrong with uncrossing a few
crossed wires.
She knows, intellectually, that he is right. But it doesn't
matter.
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Scene 29 - Confronting Reality
Kelvin is out of bed and speaking into a videophone to Snow.
Rheya is asleep in the background. The room is dark except
for the glow of the screen.
SNOW
You're unnerved because you've
spent your whole life thinking
nobody is looking over you, and
suddenly your subconscious is an
open book. We are, for the first
time, experiencing changes in
natural reality by a force not our
own. That proves that --
KELVIN
-- we are not sure of that. We are
not sure we aren't all
hallucinating.
SNOW
If God is beyond our comprehension,
and she --
(meaning Rheya)
-- is here for reasons that can't
be understood, isn't God here?
KELVIN
Not necessarily.
SNOW
Stop equivocating! Unbelievable,
how you equivocate! You, the
atheist, you're more dogmatic than
any holy person I've ever seen!
This is happening, Kevin. Wake up.
KELVIN
Consciousness is enough, that's all
I've saying. Consciousness should
be enough for anybody.
SNOW
Who are you trying to convince?
Kelvin just looks back at Rheya.
SNOW
It will end badly. As inevitably
as the rising of a bubble.
Kelvin doesn't respond.
SNOW
Let's all meet tomorrow. Sartorius
has some new ideas, about making it
stop.
Kelvin just keeps staring at Rheya, asleep.
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Scene 30 - Intimate Confusion
Kelvin is eating with Rheya. Looking at her. Desiring her.
RHEYA
Do you have any idea how much I
like fucking you?
KELVIN
I think so.
RHEYA
Good. Because I want you to know.
I really like fucking you.
He leans over and whispers in her ear. She smiles and leans
back.
RHEYA
I like that too.
KELVIN (V.O.)
How could she not be real? I can
smell her, taste her. She does
exactly what she did... it's not
possible.
RHEYA
(smiles, teasing)
You know, I've decided: I'm just
gonna believe what you believe
about this whole Solaris thing,
it'll make life so much easier; the
little wife agreeing with her big,
strong husband. You must get such
a headache thinking about those
Great Big Problems all day.
He just stares at her -- he really likes this. It's
familiar, this type of teasing, and it reminds him of when
things were good.
KELVIN (V.O.)
Like I said, it's not possible.
A beat.
RHEYA
So, Chris, seriously, aren't you
afraid you're going to get fired?
They laugh.
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Scene 31 - Intimacy and Existential Reflection
Kelvin and Rheya, post-coital. Relaxed. On the verge of
sleep.
RHEYA
You sure say "God" a lot when we're
doing it.
KELVIN
I know. I'm putting that in my
next report.
She smiles.
RHEYA
Right. The report. Report and
recommend.
They consider that.
RHEYA
What does Snow think you should do?
KELVIN
Snow thinks we shouldn't leave
until we figure out a way to
document it, to prove its existence
to the planet Earth. This is
hilarious: He thinks it's God, but
he wants it to sit still for a
photograph so he can show the folks
back home.
They smile at this. Rheya's smile fades before Kelvin's.
RHEYA
Sartorius wants to destroy it.
KELVIN
Well. He doesn't think it's God,
but for different reasons than me.
He's thinking: If I can figure out
how to make it stop, than I am
smarter than it is, and therefore
it cannot be God.
RHEYA
He has a point.
KELVIN
He does have a point. That's just
not the way I'd like to see it
proven.
RHEYA
You feel sorry for Solaris, or for
me?
KELVIN
It's a violent response to
something we haven't figured out.
Don't let the cowardly demeanor
fool you: He is ruthless.
Unblinking in his prejudice.
RHEYA
It was obvious from the way he
first looked at me.
A beat. He holds her.
RHEYA
Do I really feel like... I am...?
KELVIN
Yes. Yes.
RHEYA
I'm glad.
A beat.
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Scene 32 - Intimate Disconnect
Turning, slowly.
CUT TO:
INT. APARTMENT - NIGHT
Then years ago. Kelvin, naked, sitting in a chair, in the
dark. Rheya, also naked, is smoking a cigarette in bed.
KELVIN
Everything you pursue, you end up
becoming disinterested in. The
fact that you're good at everything
you try makes it worse. You have a
degree in animal science, you could
be a terrific vet.
You drifted into writing and turned
out to be a perceptive journalist.
Then it was politics, which seemed
best of all, you had an actual gift
for understanding the best pattern
for a group of people to be
arranged for you to achieve your
goal. And they didn't even know
they were being arranged. But you
got bored with it, like you do with
everything.
She just smokes, not really looking at him. Maybe it's a
common observation and she's past being defensive about it.
KELVIN
I don't know what it's really like,
to not know what you want to do.
To not have anything that you love
to do more than anything else.
A beat. He looks at her. She seems more interested in her
cigarette at the moment.
RHEYA
(sarcastic)
Imagine my frustration.
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Scene 33 - Confronting Identity
On the Prometheus. Rheya is awake, Kelvin asleep.
She rises and goes to sit in a chair; she is anxious,
something we haven't seen before.
Kelvin wakes up, looks at her. Noting her expression:
KELVIN
What's wrong.
RHEYA
You don't love me.
KELVIN
Stop.
A beat. She looks down.
RHEYA
I have to talk to you... I... I
don't know where I came from.
(up at him)
Do you know?
He doesn't respond.
RHEYA
If you know but can't tell me
now... will you ever be able to?
Calmly:
KELVIN
What are you talking about?
RHEYA
That I am not Rheya. That Rheya
died. Killed herself. I'm
different.
He's looking at her, and knows this is dangerous territory.
KELVIN
Who have you been talking to?
RHEYA
(no reason to lie)
Sartorius.
KELVIN
When? When I'm asleep?
She nods. He can only imagine what form Sartorius' anecdotes
must have taken.
KELVIN
I'm sure there are worse people to
talk to, but I don't know who they
are.
RHEYA
I'm just trying to understand
what's going on.
A beat.
RHEYA
How have you lived the last ten
years? Did you love anyone?
A long beat. Kelvin shakes his head.
RHEYA
Did you think about me?
Another beat. He nods. Then:
RHEYA
But we fought.
KELVIN
Yes. Especially toward the end.
RHEYA
Why did she do it?
KELVIN
You... she said I didn't love her.
RHEYA
Was she right?
KELVIN
No. I love you.
RHEYA
(reflexive, but genuine)
I love you, too.
If she seems satisfied for the moment, Kelvin knows the
feeling won't last.
KELVIN
Can you sleep?
RHEYA
I don't think do. It's not sleep;
it's something else. It's all
around me.
KELVIN
Those are dreams.
She falls asleep.
FADE OUT.
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Scene 34 - Confronting Humanity
Kelvin, Rheya, Sartorius, and Snow. They are in the middle
of a heated discussion.
SNOW
Gibarian was under enormous --
SARTORIUS
Gibarian was helpless. It's very
simple: Man created the science
that resulted in the discovery of
Solaris, and the ship that brought
us here.
KELVIN
Meaning Man can do whatever the
fuck it wants?
SARTORIUS
Yes.
KELVIN
That's fantastic.
SARTORIUS
Why did you agree to come here?
A beat.
SARTORIUS
Too tired to answer?
Looks at Rheya, then back to Kelvin.
SARTORIUS
I'll bet. Is this what they sent
you here to do? You've lost it,
you've gone native.
Kelvin moves toward him. Sartorius just lets him come.
RHEYA
(to Sartorius)
You're the coward.
KELVIN
Don't debate him; he'll say
anything.
RHEYA
(still, to Sartorius)
I'm just as human as you. I see, I
hear, I touch, and I feel just like
you do.
SARTORIUS
Prove it.
RHEYA
These "guests" are a part of you,
of your subconscious. Chris loves
me.
SARTORIUS
YOU ARE NOT HUMAN! Try to
understand that if you can
understand anything!
Kelvin is within an inch of his face.
KELVIN
Get out of here.
Slowly, carefully, Sartorius grasps Kelvin by the shoulders.
Then he leans in and whispers in Kelvin's ear:
SARTORIUS
Rheya is dead. She's a copy. A
facsimile. And she's seducing you
all over again. You're sick. You
think of fucking her as research
for humanity. It's just fucking.
Kelvin backs away.
SARTORIUS
There's nothing grandiose about it.
You've jumped out of a plane and
you're trying to sew a parachute
together while you fall.
Sartorius turns...
SARTORIUS
It'd be hilarious if it weren't so
damn sad.
And leaves.
A beat.
SNOW
We didn't even get to hear his new
ideas.
Snow wanders toward the door.
SNOW
I'm not feeling well.
He passes Kelvin and leaves.
Kelvin watches him, then looks at Rheya. She seems dazed.
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Scene 35 - Confronting the Unknown
The fog-shrouded surface, shifting and turning like an ocean.
CUT TO:
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Rheya is asleep. Kelvin is talking to Snow on the
videophone.
SNOW
We can liquidate the station. Take
the Athena back.
KELVIN
No.
SNOW
Of course, when we return, we'll be
regarded as lunatics if we tell the
truth.
(shrugs)
We'll chalk it up to isolation,
collective derangement.
KELVIN
I've never heard you express any
desire to leave before now. Why
now?
SNOW
Well, I think we're reaching the
point of diminishing returns here,
right? Certainly it's learning
more about us than we'll ever learn
about it.
KELVIN
But why is it doing what it's
doing? Given it's resources, it
could have done anything.
Presented me with your double, and
you with mine.
SNOW
Perhaps it did.
KELVIN
Human beings can die.
SNOW
But they are human. They certainly
become human with incredible speed.
First they're like they were in our
memory, but then they fill in on
their own. DNA doesn't determine
the hundreds of trillions of
connections that occur in the
brain, it's not dense enough. They
build up with experience.
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Scene 36 - Moments of Insecurity
Quick glimpses of Rheya. In several of them she is in
repose, thinking, as if to illustrate Snow's point.
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Back to Kelvin, thinking.
KELVIN
They come when you sleep.
SNOW
That's right. And we all have to
sleep, eventually.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin on the bed with Rheya. Their eyes are closed.
We think they are asleep until:
RHEYA
You don't want me.
KELVIN
Rheya.
RHEYA
That's what you were saying. I
heard what you were saying.
KELVIN
For a reason that neither of us
understand, you are forced to stay
near me. That's all I know right
now.
She realizes she doesn't want to argue. Not right now,
anyway.
RHEYA
I have these strange thoughts, I
don't know where they come from.
(beat)
I can't explain it.
KELVIN
Neither can I. Not any of it.
There's no reference point for
what's going on; it's never
happened before. It's a clean
break in the fabric of the
Universe; a gap. There is nothing
to do but experience it, moment-to-
moment, and not let it destroy us.
RHEYA
But that's what happened before.
KELVIN
Not this time.
He kisses her. She wants to believe him, so she says
nothing. Then:
RHEYA
Do you want to stay here?
KELVIN
Do you?
RHEYA
If you're here.
They kiss again...
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Scene 37 - Echoes of Trust
Kelvin is asleep. Rheya is next to him.
Offscreen, we hear the door open.
Someone walks quietly (though not surreptitiously) through
the frame and sits.
After a long beat, Kelvin bolts upright, his mind struggling
to clear. When it does:
KELVIN
Gibarian.
GIBARIAN
Leave the light off.
A beat. Kelvin tries to get his bearings.
GIBARIAN
I wish you'd come a little sooner.
I might not have had to kill
myself.
He smiles, looking at Kelvin.
GIBARIAN
You think you're dreaming me, like
you dream her. Understand
something: I am the real Gibarian.
Just a new incarnation.
KELVIN
What do you want?
GIBARIAN
You're being tricked. Sartorius
picked a fight with you to avoid
telling you about his idea for
getting rid of the visitors. He's
figured out they're made of
subatomic particles called
neutrinos, and he's going to create
a negative neutrino field. Twenty
four hours a day, until they're
back on Earth.
KELVIN
Can it work?
GIBARIAN
It can. Ordinary matter, like
ours? Not affected. Everything
else, disintegrates.
Kelvin registers this.
GIBARIAN
What I'm saying is: Don't trust
anyone. Find yourself a weapon of
some sort.
KELVIN
I can trust Rheya.
GIBARIAN
You'll end up like me.
KELVIN
You're not Gibarian...
GIBARIAN
No? Who am I, then?
KELVIN
A puppet.
GIBARIAN
And you're not? Maybe you're my
puppet. But like all puppets, you
think you're actually human. It's
The Puppet's Dream. Wondering if
they're human!
Gibarian smiles.
KELVIN
wakes up, gulping air. Rheya, startled:
RHEYA
What's wrong?
KELVIN
Gibarian. He was here.
RHEYA
You said he was dead.
KELVIN
He is. But he was here...
He moves to the chair, looking for some residue of Gibarian,
some proof. Finding none:
KELVIN
He spoke to me.
Kelvin leaves the room. After a few beats, Rheya follows.
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Scene 38 - Existential Dread
Rheya lingers behind Kelvin, who is looking at Gibarian's
body.
It is there, alone on its slab; even the Young Girl is not
with him.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin, thinking. He gives Rheya some pills to take. She
just looks at them.
KELVIN
Are you going to take them?
She nods and takes them.
RHEYA
What's happening to us?
KELVIN
It's all right.
RHEYA
Please don't lie. I told you
before, I don't know how I came to
be here. Whatever you think you
can't say to me, I need to hear you
say it.
KELVIN
I love you.
RHEYA
Don't. I'm the one at risk here.
If we're playing out what happened
before, I won't survive.
He goes to her.
KELVIN
That won't happen again. We're
different.
RHEYA
How can I tell? You've seen both
of me. I only know what you're
like here. You're all I know.
There is no "You" from before.
She sits, frustrated. Sad.
RHEYA
How could it be so cruel? How
could it torture us like this?
KELVIN
I don't think it knows it's
torturing us. It's just watching.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin and Rheya, in bed. She looks despondent.
CUT TO:
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin is asleep. Alone.
After a long period of silence, we hear the faint sound of an
instrument of some sort hitting the ground. After another
beat, Kelvin awakens. He notices that he is alone, and
something tells him that's not a good sign.
CUT TO:
INT. LAB
Rheya is on the ground, convulsing. Beside her is a SMALL
STEEL DRUM, which is spilling a strange-looking LIQUID that
solidifies and vaporizes with a smoky hiss.
Kelvin moves to Rheya and is startled to see that half of her
face and throat are burned away -- not melted as in a fire,
but merely eaten cleanly away. He picks her up.
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Scene 39 - Resurrection and Identity
Kelvin is carrying Rheya. Snow sticks his head out of a
passing room.
SNOW
What happened?
KELVIN
She drank liquid oxygen.
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin puts Rheya on the bed. Her face and throat have
returned to normal, but she is not breathing. Kelvin goes
and puts his head to her chest, but doesn't hear what he
hoped to hear. He stands, still looking at her. Snow seems
very detached.
An uncomfortably long moment as we realize she is actually
not going to wake up.
KELVIN
She's dead.
Snow says nothing.
Then:
Her finger twitches.
Barely noticeable at first, but growing in intensity. Kelvin
sees it, and goes to her. She is starting to shake a little,
as though cold.
SNOW
She'll come back, don't worry. But
then what? My theory is she can
only live here, that she will die
if she leaves this ship.
Kelvin is still looking at Rheya, who is shaking a little
harder; it's feeling like a seizure now.
SNOW
Why do you think she hasn't
suggested that? It's the most
obvious solution: Escape. She
knows she can't leave here --
KELVIN
Get out --
SNOW
Oh, this one you love? What about
the first one, the one you fucked
and then put into a rocket and
blasted into space? You didn't
love her?
Rheya is shaking much harder now, Kelvin tries to hold her
still, but she's too strong. He stands, reluctantly, and
watches her.
SNOW
What happens if she comes back? Is
that polygamy? And even if you
could take her home, how would you
get her through? You think they're
not going to notice her?
Rheya is shaking violently now, as if a rippling rhythmic
force were coursing through her. Snow, as he looks
dispassionately on the two of them:
SNOW
I never get used to them, these...
"Resurrections".
He leaves.
Rheya continues her process of "waking up" -- it's violent,
even sexual. She spasms to a peak of some sort, and then
slowly returns to normal.
Kelvin puts his hand on her forehead.
She gradually begins to open her eyes. She looks at Kelvin.
It takes her a moment to realize she shouldn't be seeing him;
she shouldn't be seeing anything. She should be dead.
She begins to cry.
RHEYA
What am I? Why can't I die?
She turns away.
RHEYA
I'm not Rheya. You're always known
that.
KELVIN
Rheya --
RHEYA
Don't call me that.
He turns her over.
KELVIN
Listen: I don't care about anything
but the fact that you are here.
You are her, you are Rheya.
RHEYA
I'm disgusting.
KELVIN
No.
RHEYA
You're lying. I'm not human.
KELVIN
Rheya, I am not going back. I'm
staying here with you.
RHEYA
Then you'll die.
KELVIN
I want every second I can get with
you.
A beat.
RHEYA
What will I do, if you die?
He doesn't know.
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Scene 40 - Echoes of Desire
Turning slowly.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin and Rheya, in bed.
RHEYA
Do you think I can get pregnant
here?
A long beat.
KELVIN
We'll know soon enough.
INSERT:
The first time Kelvin and Rheya spoke, at the party ten years
ago. Again we see her whisper in Kelvin's ear, but this time
we hear what she is saying:
RHEYA
I can't be a mother.
She pulls back.
KELVIN
That's good to know.
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Scene 41 - The Breaking Point
Kelvin, as he packs to leave Rheya.
RHEYA
Don't do this. I am literally
begging you not to do this. Chris.
KELVIN
You should have told me.
RHEYA
It wouldn't have made any
difference.
KELVIN
Thank you.
RHEYA
Chris, I had to. I had to. I
didn't think you'd react like this.
KELVIN
Neither did I.
RHEYA
You never said you wanted one.
KELVIN
I never said I didn't.
RHEYA
Chris --
KELVIN
I can't stay here.
RHEYA
Chris, please. Chris, I'm serious.
I won't make it.
KELVIN
Then you won't make it.
He leaves, brushing past her.
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Scene 42 - Emotional Turmoil
Rheya, unconscious, on the kitchen floor.
CUT TO:
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
A long, held shot of Rheya, crying. She is curled up,
retreating into herself. Kelvin is trying to console her.
KELVIN
I came back. You have to know
that. I came back that night.
CUT TO:
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Rheya on the kitchen floor, the note in her hand.
Kelvin is kneeling over her.
CUT TO:
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin and Rheya. She is sobbing, but somewhat calmer.
KELVIN
I couldn't make it, either.
(beat)
I'm so sorry.
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Scene 43 - Fractured Connections
Kelvin, asleep.
CUT TO:
GIBARIAN
As we saw him before, sitting in the chair. But we didn't
hear him say this before:
GIBARIAN
If they succeed, you'll never see
her again.
CUT TO:
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
In the immediate aftermath of her suicide attempt with the
liquid oxygen:
RHEYA
You're afraid of me. I can't do
this anymore. I still don't
understand. It's not possible.
He tries to console her, but she recoils.
RHEYA
Don't --
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Rheya, as Kelvin brushes past her on his way out. She looks
desperate.
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Scene 44 - Confronting Reality
Rheya and Kelvin.
RHEYA
What do I have to do to stop it?
KELVIN
I want you here.
RHEYA
You're lying.
KELVIN
You exist here. I keep telling
you.
RHEYA
That's impossible. I'm not Rheya.
KELVIN
Who are you, then?
RHEYA
I... I am Rheya. But I am not the
woman you loved ten years ago.
KELVIN
Yes, you are --
RHEYA
Did you hear what Gibarian said?
I'm not a human being. I'm an
instrument. I came from your
memory and your imagination and I
will torture you no matter what.
Even if I remain passive. That's
when I drank the...
(beat)
I was going mad. It felt like
there was no body underneath my
skin. There was something else.
An illusion. But I could feel my
heart beating, and I remembered you
tested my blood. Is it like yours?
KELVIN
Yes. I told you. It was exactly
like mine.
RHEYA
But then I would be dead now.
A beat.
KELVIN
Is that really what you want?
RHEYA
I want to stop taking those pills.
KELVIN
I wish you wouldn't.
RHEYA
They do something to me. It's hard
to think straight.
KELVIN
I think they help.
RHEYA
I have consciousness, but I am not
mortal. Don't you see why I'm
going crazy?
KELVIN
You have to remember that I love
you, that's all that matters --
RHEYA
I can't --
KELVIN
It put you here. I'll admit it, it
acted like a God and put you here,
put you into my consciousness.
I was asleep, and it put you into
my dream. I saw your mouth. And
there you were.
(beat)
Whether you've been sent here to
make me happy or punish me, it
doesn't matter. The decision we
make now is all that matters. Stay
with me.
RHEYA
Am I really her?
KELVIN
I don't know anymore. All I see is
you.
They kiss.
KELVIN
Stay with me.
(beat)
Stay with me.
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Scene 45 - Torn Between Love and Reality
Kelvin is asleep. Rheya is next to him.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin is on the videophone to Snow.
KELVIN
She knows everything. She knows
who she is.
SNOW
She knows everything? Does she
know she came once before and you
put her in --
KELVIN
No.
A beat.
SNOW
What do you want?
KELVIN
I want you to get Sartorius to
abandon his plan.
SNOW
(feigning innocence)
What plan?
KELVIN
Just get him to stop.
SNOW
What do you want to do, leave the
station with her?
KELVIN
Yes.
SNOW
Kelvin, she'll disintegrate. You
don't believe me? Let's radio that
shuttle pod you launched -- better
yet, let's go get it. I've charted
it's trajectory, only take a few
hours...
KELVIN
Her oxygen would have run out.
SNOW
Maybe she doesn't need any. Should
we check?
Kelvin just stares at him.
SNOW
Who are you trying to please?
Yourself? Her? Which her, this
one or that one. Can you face
both? We are in a situation that
is beyond morality. So: Leave with
her. You'll see the
transformation.
KELVIN
Into what?
SNOW
You'll see her die, that's all.
They're mortal, despite what she
told you. She will die. Then what
will you do?
KELVIN
I love her.
SNOW
You do, you don't. She's willing
to give her life, you're willing to
give yours, it's touching and
magnificent, anything you want but
-- this isn't the place for it.
Don't you see? No, you don't.
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Scene 46 - Echoes of Betrayal
He is playing back a message sent by Sartorius.
SARTORIUS
I'm sending you a message because I
feel sorry for you. I really do,
Kelvin.
(beat)
It is a mistake to become
emotionally engaged with one of
them. You are being manipulated.
You are going around in circles to
satisfy the curiosity of a power we
don't understand and can't control,
and she is the living proof that
power exists. If she were ugly,
you wouldn't want her around;
that's why she's not ugly. She is
a mirror that reflects part of your
mind. You provide the formula.
You can only finish where you
started, remember that.
(beat)
They sold us out to the highest
bidder. They had no right to do
that. We should have been
consulted. We're not fucking
hardware.
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Scene 47 - Existential Reflections
Kelvin wakes up. Rheya is beside him. He rises and heads
for the bathroom.
He swallows two pills and a small cup of water.
When he returns to the bed, Rheya is looking at him.
RHEYA
What are you taking?
KELVIN
A sleeping pill. Do you want
yours?
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Rheya, on the kitchen floor. The bottle of sleeping pills
just beyond her hand.
BACK ON THE PROMETHEUS
Kelvin looks at Rheya. She shakes her head; she doesn't want
the pills. Kelvin comes and sits beside her.
KELVIN
What does it want?
RHEYA
I don't know. Something.
Anything.
She goes to a portal and stares out at Solaris.
RHEYA
It created me and yet I can't
communicate with it. It must hear
me, though. It must know what's
happening to me. Don't you think?
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Scene 48 - Reflections on Solaris
Snow on the videophone to Kelvin. Rheya is asleep in the
background.
SNOW
I don't think it dislikes us. I
think it just noticed us. It
lives, thinks, and acts. We are
dealing with a living creature
here, no question. And it's done
something we've never been able to
do: create a perfect human body.
Perfect except for the subatomic
alterations, but...
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GIBARIAN
On his suicide tape:
GIBARIAN
If Solaris is inside our brain, and
it knows everything, and we're only
consciously aware of what 2% of our
brain is up to at any given moment,
it knows us better than we know
ourselves. It's not even close.
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Scene 49 - Disillusionment and Isolation
Rheya and Kelvin.
RHEYA
I've decided that if it is God,
it's a sick God. Its ambitions
exceed its powers, but it doesn't
realize it.
(beat)
It's created a situation without a
goal, and I hate that. A God whose
passion is not a redemption, who
saves nothing, fulfills no purpose.
(beat)
And us? We would have to have "an
arrangement". An unspoken
understanding that I am not human.
How can I not hate something that
does that?
KELVIN
Please. Don't.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin is asleep. Rheya is crying beside him.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin asleep, alone. Rheya is in the corridor, talking to
someone.
KELVIN
wakes up. Rheya is beside him, asleep.
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Scene 50 - Fever Dreams
Turning, slowly.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin, in a fever, eyes open but glazed.
Rheya is putting a compress on his forehead.
KELVIN'S POV
Of the room.
His LABRADOR FROM THE OPENING SEQUENCE is sitting by the
chair.
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INT. KELVIN'S CABIN (EARTH)
Kelvin sits in a chair, looking at:
THE LABRADOR
Sitting in the same position as it was on the Prometheus.
KELVIN
Breathes a sigh of relief at being home. Everything seems
slowed down, somehow.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I though I was home.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
On the Prometheus. Kelvin is in bed, feverish.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I thought it was over.
He sees Rheya, in the hallway again, talking to someone we
can't see.
KELVIN
Wakes up again. Rheya is asleep beside him.
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Scene 51 - Fragments of Reality
Rheya, the first day she and Kelvin saw each other.
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EXT. STREET CORNER - DAY
Ten years ago. Kelvin and Rheya standing on a street corner.
They seem to be pausing in the midst of a very serious
conversation. It is raining.
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INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
Kelvin in bed, on the Prometheus. Still feverish.
Rheya is mopping his brow.
INT. KELVIN'S CABIN (EARTH)
Kelvin in bed, feverish.
Rheya is there, wiping his forehead.
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM
On the Prometheus. Kelvin looks over to Rheya.
KELVIN
Where did you go before?
RHEYA
When?
KELVIN
Last night. You were talking to
someone in the corridor.
RHEYA
You must have been dreaming.
She begins to cry.
KELVIN
What's the matter?
She just shakes her head.
KELVIN
Rheya?
From Kelvin's point of view: Rheya, in the chair, crying.
Then he looks right to see: Rheya, in the doorway, talking to
someone we cannot see.
Then he looks further to the right, and there she is again,
staring at him from the bathroom doorway. She moves to the
edge of the bed in order to be near.
KELVIN
Sweating. Struggling. Beyond fear.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I'm losing my mind.
(beat)
I'm breaking apart.
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Scene 52 - Reflections of Isolation
Kelvin sits in his chair, as he did at the beginning, with
the three officials from DBA behind him.
Only now the three officials are Snow, Sartorius, and
Gibarian.
INT. KELVIN'S ROOM (PROMETHEUS)
Kelvin, transfixed.
KELVIN (V.O.)
Is this what it means to die?
(beat)
Am I in the moment of my own death?
(beat)
Is this the last thought I will
ever have?
This idea forces him to rise, and he does, slowly.
INT. CORRIDOR
Behind Kelvin as he somehow keeps moving.
We hold a long time, and then:
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BLACK.
Count to ten. Then:
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EXT. STREET
Kelvin moving down a crowded sidewalk, in slow motion.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I am home now.
(beat)
I try to find the rhythm of the
world where I used to live... but I
feel completely and continually out
of-sync. I am separate. Why did I
return to Earth and lie about what
happened? Lie about having contact
with something like Solaris? I
knew something else was out there,
and didn't tell a soul. I left
them in the dark. We all did.
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INT. TRAIN - DAY
Kelvin, traveling home from the city.
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Scene 53 - A Moment of Reflection
Kelvin returns. He stops and looks around before entering
his front door.
KELVIN (V.O.)
So why come back at all? To see if
she comes here?
KEVIN'S POV
Of the woods.
But there are strange incongruities in the image -- pieces of
the Prometheus breaking through; for instance, a few of the
AUTOMATED TASKMASTERS are crawling along the ground.
KELVIN
Looking from the doorway, notes this. He doesn't seem
surprised, though.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I don't believe it will happen.
INT. KELVIN'S CABIN - NIGHT
Kelvin, in his bed, awake.
KELVIN (V.O.)
But I will wait, anyway.
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BLACK.
Count to five. Then:
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Scene 54 - Echoes of Love
Kelvin is in his bed, still feverish.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I thought it was over.
He looks around the room. He is alone.
A flashing light on his computer demands attention.
ON THE COMPUTER
A video message from Rheya.
RHEYA
Don't blame them. I begged them to
do it. It's better this way.
(beat)
I'm sorry.
(beat)
I'm sorry I tried to make you think
I was human.
(beat)
I read my own suicide note. I
found it in your things. I
realized I was not her.
She looks away.
RHEYA
I know that you loved me, Chris. I
know that.
(beat)
I love you.
Kelvin breaks down.
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Scene 55 - Echoes of Grief
Kelvin, with the dead Rheya in his arms, crying. Beyond him
is the rain-streaked window. On the floor, by her hand, is
the note. On it is scrawled the end of a Dylan Thomas poem,
the one Kelvin quoted to her the first time they spoke.
INT. PARTY - NIGHT
The first night. Again, Kelvin leans into Rheya's ear and
whispers. This time we hear what he says:
KELVIN
"Though they go mad they shall be
sane. Though they sink through the
sea they shall rise again."
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
Kevin holding Rheya.
The note on the floor.
The rain-streaked window.
RHEYA (V.O.)
"Though lovers be lost love shall
not. And death shall have no
dominion."
Kelvin wipes the hair from her face.
KELVIN (V.O.)
You killed her!
SARTORIUS (V.O.)
Not her. It.
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Scene 56 - Confrontation at the Door
Kelvin, furious, is talking through a slit in Sartorius'
door.
KELVIN
You murdered her!
SARTORIUS
Kelvin, she begged me. I had a
short-range version of the
destabilizer prototype, a miniature
with a range of a few meters. She
walked into it and disappeared.
She was gone.
Kelvin looks around.
KELVIN
She'll come back.
SARTORIUS
No, she won't.
KELVIN
Why would you let her to do that?
SARTORIUS
It's not human, Kelvin. Whatever
it is, it's not human, and I am
threatened by that. Evolution-of-
the-species-at-stake threatened.
And I want to win. I want humans
to win. So I am killing it before
it kills me.
KELVIN
You fucking bastard...
SARTORIUS
Whose side are you on?
Kelvin moves away.
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Scene 57 - Descent into Chaos
Still turning, slowly.
But something about its appearance is different.
INT. PROMETHEUS
Complete chaos.
Kelvin is chasing Sartorius to the flight deck.
SARTORIUS
(yelling as he runs)
It's changing characteristics.
It's solidifying taking on weight.
KELVIN
How quickly?
SARTORIUS
If it continues, it will implode
from its own weight and turn into a
black hole in about four hours and
pulls us in with it.
INT. FLIGHT DECK
Kelvin and Sartorius get the ship ready for take off.
KELVIN
Where's Snow? Did you call him?
SARTORIUS
Yes.
Kelvin turns and sees one of the video monitors that Snow is
sitting in his room.
KELVIN
(via intercom)
Snow! We need you up here.
Snow doesn't reply.
KELVIN
Snow!
Snow looks up. There's a strange look on his face.
KELVIN
What's wrong with you? We need
your help.
SNOW
I won't be making the trip.
SARTORIUS
Snow, get up here, now.
SNOW
I'm not Snow.
This stops Kelvin and Sartorius. They look at each other and
then at the monitor.
SNOW
I got rid of him. I wanted to see
if... I wanted to be the only one.
I wanted to be Snow.
SARTORIUS
Fuck me. I knew it.
KELVIN
When did this happen?
SNOW
Oh, right away. That's why you
never saw me with anyone. You
should've noticed that. I miss
him, though. I think I made a
mistake.
KELVIN
Jesus...
SNOW
But I can't leave with you. I
won't make it.
KELVIN
Maybe you can.
SARTORIUS
You want it coming back with us?
SNOW
You go ahead. Of what I remember
about Earth... it's all one thing
now. Everything's a blur. I like
distinctions.
Snow lies down on his bed. Kelvin looks at Sartorius.
SARTORIUS
We do not have time to deal with
this. Get the diode sail into
position and let me know when the
bias drive and the induction ring
are at zero point.
Kelvin nods and obeys. He then takes one last look at the
monitor to see Snow lying in bed. Kelvin reaches over and
shuts the monitor off.
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Scene 58 - Reflections of Disconnection
Silence.
The Prometheus moves away from Solaris.
CLOSER ON SOLARIS
After the ship has gone.
A soft black spot begins to form in the center of the planet.
Slowly, inexorably, this black spot begins to expand.
Within a minute Solaris has disappeared.
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EXT. STREET CORNER - DAY
Kelvin, back on Earth. Silent and still. And the rain
continues.
He watches the activity; the cars, buses, and people moving
to and fro.
KELVIN (V.O.)
Earth.
(beat)
What did that word mean to me?
(beat)
I have returned. Finally.
Kelvin begins to walk.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I work in the city now. After work
I wander and lose myself. I am
silent and attentive. I follow the
current. I make a conscious effort
to smile, nod, stand, and perform
the millions of gestures that
constitute life on Earth.
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Scene 59 - Haunted by Memory
Kelvin taking the train to the suburbs.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I will study these gestures until
they become reflexes again. I will
find new interests and occupations,
but --
EXT. ROAD - DAY
Kelvin makes his way toward his cabin. As he nears, his
LABRODOR recognizes him and approaches.
Kelvin pats the dog's coat.
KELVIN (V.O.)
I will not... give myself. I will
not give myself to anything or
anyone, because I am haunted by the
idea that I remembered her wrong.
That I shaded my memory of her to
suit myself. That I was unfair to
her and caused her destruction.
What if I was wrong about
everything?
(beat)
I've come to believe that memory is
a curse.
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Scene 60 - Reunion in the Fog
Kelvin is near the front door, dog at his heel. He looks in
as he brings his key to the lock and his face FREEZES.
RHEYA
Is in the living room, waiting for him.
She is sitting on the sofa, looking toward the other side of
the room. Sensing someone, she turns to see Kelvin, and her
face melts into a smile.
KELVIN
Opens the door. He cannot speak.
RHEYA
Rises and moves toward him.
They embrace.
He breathes her in. She squeezes him.
After a long beat:
KELVIN
How can you be here...
RHEYA
(whispering)
Shhhh. Just stay with me.
(beat)
Stay with me. Everything is
forgiven. Everything.
She sways with him, gently. His body relaxes.
KELVIN
I love you.
EXT. CABIN - DAY
A tableau of the cabin. The dog is on the front step,
seemingly content despite the light rain.
As fog drifts in, we RISE, and soon the mist has nearly
obscured the house. The fog turns into clouds and we get
fleeting glimpses of the cabin, as we move farther and
farther away.
We stay in a translucent white stage for a few moments, until
gradually the edges of a circle become apparent in the
corners of the frame. Still there is a light rain sound.
These dark, rounded edges penetrate further until they are
forming the shape of a circle.
The misty consistency begins to gain some color and body.
And we realize we are now looking at the surface of Solaris.
FADE OUT.
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Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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chris kelvin | Chris Kelvin's character arc follows his transformation from a weary and introspective poet to a pragmatic and resilient astronaut. Initially, he is consumed by feelings of inadequacy and isolation, struggling to comprehend the mysteries of Solaris and the psychological toll it takes on him and his colleagues. As the narrative unfolds, Kelvin confronts his fears and uncertainties, leading him to a deeper understanding of himself and the nature of existence. His journey is marked by moments of introspection and analytical thought, ultimately culminating in a newfound sense of purpose and determination. By the end of the feature, Kelvin emerges as a more self-aware individual, having reconciled his internal struggles and embraced the complexities of his reality. | While Chris Kelvin's character arc is compelling, it risks becoming too introspective and may lack sufficient external conflict to engage the audience fully. His journey is rich in internal struggle, but the screenplay could benefit from more dynamic interactions with other characters and external challenges that force him to confront his fears in a more tangible way. Additionally, the pacing of his transformation may feel slow, potentially leading to viewer disengagement. | To enhance Chris Kelvin's character arc, consider introducing more external conflicts that challenge his introspection and force him to act decisively. This could involve heightened stakes with his colleagues or the environment of Solaris itself, creating scenarios where he must rely on his resourcefulness and resilience. Additionally, incorporating more dynamic relationships with other characters could provide opportunities for Kelvin to confront his inadequacies and fears in a more engaging manner. Finally, pacing his transformation with key moments of revelation or crisis could maintain audience interest and create a more impactful resolution to his journey. |
gibarian | Gibarian begins as a tired and apologetic figure, burdened by his past and the weight of his knowledge about Solaris. As the story progresses, he confronts his moral dilemmas and the consequences of his actions, leading to a deeper understanding of himself and the universe. His journey takes him from resignation and despair to a more assertive stance, where he embraces his role as a mentor to Kelvin. By the climax, Gibarian's character evolves into a more confident and decisive figure, ultimately finding a sense of peace with his choices and the mysteries of existence. His arc culminates in a moment of clarity where he reconciles his past with his present, allowing him to guide Kelvin towards a more hopeful future. | While Gibarian's character arc is rich and layered, it risks becoming overly abstract and philosophical, potentially alienating the audience. His introspection and existential musings, while profound, may detract from the narrative momentum if not balanced with more concrete actions and interactions. Additionally, his enigmatic nature could lead to confusion regarding his true motivations and intentions, which might hinder audience connection. | To improve Gibarian's character arc, consider incorporating more tangible actions that reflect his internal struggles. This could include moments of vulnerability where he shares personal stories or regrets, allowing the audience to empathize with his journey. Additionally, establishing clearer stakes and motivations for his actions can help ground his philosophical musings in the narrative. Introducing a pivotal moment where Gibarian must make a choice that directly impacts Kelvin could enhance his character development and provide a more dynamic arc. Finally, ensuring that his enigmatic qualities are balanced with moments of clarity and connection with other characters will help maintain audience engagement. |
kelvin | Kelvin's character arc begins with him as a contemplative psychologist, burdened by the weight of his past and the mission at hand. Initially, he is emotionally distant and conflicted, struggling to reconcile his feelings for Rheya with his responsibilities. As the narrative progresses, Kelvin's determination to uncover the truth leads him to confront his inner demons and the complexities of his relationship with Rheya. He experiences moments of intense emotional vulnerability, which force him to confront his guilt and regrets. By the climax, Kelvin is faced with a heartbreaking decision that tests his values and beliefs, ultimately leading to a moment of self-acceptance and growth. In the resolution, he emerges as a more integrated individual, having navigated the tumultuous waters of love, loss, and duty, finding a sense of peace with his past and a clearer understanding of his identity. | While Kelvin's character arc is rich and layered, it risks becoming overly introspective and may lack dynamic external conflict. His emotional journey is compelling, but the screenplay could benefit from more active engagement with the external challenges posed by the environment of Solaris and the other characters. The internal struggles are well-developed, but they sometimes overshadow the narrative's progression, leading to moments where the pacing may lag. Additionally, Kelvin's relationship with Rheya, while central to his arc, could be further explored to enhance the stakes and emotional resonance of their interactions. | To improve Kelvin's character arc, consider incorporating more external conflicts that challenge his internal struggles. This could involve heightened stakes related to the mission on Solaris, such as confrontations with other crew members or the mysterious entity itself. Additionally, introducing moments where Kelvin must make choices that directly impact his relationship with Rheya could create more tension and urgency in their dynamic. Exploring the consequences of his decisions in real-time would enhance the emotional weight of his journey. Furthermore, integrating more dialogue that reveals his evolving perspective on love, loss, and duty could deepen the audience's connection to his character. Finally, ensuring that Kelvin's growth is reflected in his actions, not just his thoughts, will create a more dynamic and engaging character arc. |
snow | Snow's character arc begins with him as a detached and cryptic crew member, seemingly unfazed by the bizarre events unfolding around him. As the narrative progresses, he transitions from a nonchalant observer to a more pragmatic figure, focusing on practical solutions while grappling with his own identity crisis. His betrayal of the crew marks a pivotal moment, showcasing his internal struggle between the desire for individuality and the need for connection. By the end of the feature, Snow's journey leads him to confront the consequences of his actions, ultimately seeking redemption and a sense of belonging within the crew, which reflects his growth from isolation to a more integrated role. | While Snow's character is intriguing and multifaceted, his arc may feel disjointed due to the rapid shifts in his demeanor and motivations. The transition from a quirky, cryptic figure to a pragmatic skeptic and then to a betrayer could benefit from more gradual development. Additionally, his internal struggles could be explored in greater depth to enhance audience empathy and understanding of his actions. | To improve Snow's character arc, consider incorporating more scenes that delve into his backstory and the reasons behind his detachment and identity crisis. This could involve flashbacks or conversations with other crew members that reveal his past experiences and fears. Additionally, allow for a more gradual evolution of his character, where his pragmatic approach slowly reveals deeper vulnerabilities. This would create a more cohesive arc that resonates with the audience, making his eventual betrayal and quest for redemption more impactful. |
sartorius | Sartorius begins as a paranoid and confrontational figure, deeply distrustful of others and fixated on the mysterious entity aboard the ship. As the story progresses, he grapples with the consequences of his actions and the moral implications of his decisions. His initial coldness and obsession gradually give way to moments of vulnerability, as he confronts the reality of his choices and the impact they have on his colleagues. By the climax, Sartorius faces a critical decision that tests his values and beliefs, ultimately leading him to a moment of redemption where he chooses collaboration over isolation, recognizing the importance of trust and unity in the face of the unknown. | While Sartorius is a compelling character with a strong presence, his arc could benefit from deeper emotional exploration. The initial portrayal of him as solely paranoid and confrontational risks making him one-dimensional. Additionally, his motivations could be more clearly defined to enhance audience empathy and understanding. The transition from a cold, calculating scientist to a more vulnerable character may feel abrupt without sufficient buildup. | To improve Sartorius's character arc, consider incorporating flashbacks or moments of introspection that reveal his backstory and the origins of his paranoia. This could help the audience understand his motivations and fears more deeply. Additionally, introducing a personal stake in the mission—such as a connection to a loved one or a past failure—could add layers to his character. Gradually revealing his vulnerabilities through interactions with other characters can create a more nuanced transformation, making his eventual redemption feel earned and impactful. |
rheya | Rheya's character arc begins with her as a mysterious and ethereal presence, representing Kelvin's past and unresolved feelings. As the story progresses, she becomes increasingly introspective, grappling with her identity and existence as a projection. Her emotional journey is marked by moments of vulnerability, where she expresses her fears and desires for connection. Throughout the screenplay, Rheya transitions from a playful and affectionate figure to one filled with despair and confusion, ultimately seeking validation and understanding from Kelvin. In the climax, she confronts the reality of her existence and the implications of being a mere reflection of Kelvin's memories. By the end, Rheya finds a sense of acceptance and forgiveness, both for herself and for Kelvin, allowing her to transcend her tragic circumstances and embrace her emotional truth. | Rheya's character arc is rich and layered, but it risks becoming overly complex and potentially confusing for the audience. While her emotional depth is compelling, the constant oscillation between vulnerability, playfulness, and despair may dilute her character's impact. Additionally, the reliance on her connection to Kelvin could overshadow her individuality, making her feel more like a plot device than a fully realized character. The emotional stakes are high, but the narrative could benefit from clearer moments of growth and resolution for Rheya, ensuring that her journey resonates with the audience. | To improve Rheya's character arc, consider streamlining her emotional transitions to create a more cohesive journey. Focus on key moments that highlight her growth and self-discovery, allowing the audience to witness her evolution more clearly. Introduce specific catalysts that prompt her introspection and drive her towards acceptance, ensuring that her struggles feel relatable and grounded. Additionally, emphasize her individuality by incorporating scenes that showcase her unique perspectives and desires outside of her relationship with Kelvin. This will help to solidify her as a fully realized character, making her emotional journey more impactful and resonant. |
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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High Concept, High Overall Grade but Inconsistent Emotional Impact | Many scenes (especially 1, 3, 4, 5, 10, 20, 24, 26, 30, 32, 52, 53, 59) receive high marks for Concept and Overall Grade, indicating strong ideas and execution. However, these same scenes often score lower on Emotional Impact. This suggests that while the ideas are strong, the emotional connection with the audience may need strengthening. Consider exploring ways to heighten the emotional resonance of these scenes, perhaps by focusing on character reactions and internal struggles. |
Dialogue Quality and Emotional Impact Correlation | There's a noticeable correlation between higher Dialogue scores and higher Emotional Impact scores. Scenes with strong dialogue (14, 34, 35, 37, 38, 39, 43, 45, 56, 57) also tend to resonate emotionally. Conversely, scenes with lower dialogue scores (24, 26, 30, 32, 52, 58, 59) struggle in emotional impact. This underscores the importance of well-crafted dialogue in conveying emotional depth. |
Mysterious Tone and Emotional Impact | A recurring theme is the use of "Mysterious" tone (present in many scenes). While this tone contributes to the overall atmosphere, it appears that scenes heavily reliant on the mysterious without strong emotional anchors (e.g., many scenes scoring 6-7 for emotional impact while high in concept and tone) may benefit from more explicit emotional development. Balance the mystery with emotional reveals and character responses to maintain audience engagement. |
Climax and Emotional Peak | Scene 14 shows a significant spike in all scores, particularly in Emotional Impact, Dialogue, and High Stakes. This suggests a well-executed climax. Analyze what elements contributed to this success (e.g., specific plot points, dialogue, character interactions) and consider integrating similar techniques into other pivotal moments. |
Inconsistent Character Change | While many scenes have high scores in overall quality, there is relatively low scoring in "Character Changes". This suggests the characters' arcs might not be as strongly developed as other aspects of the screenplay. Consider incorporating more substantial character growth and development throughout the narrative, not just concentrating it in pivotal moments. This will give the audience more reasons to care about what happens to them. |
Late-Story Emotional Vulnerability | Scenes 27 through 49 show a relatively consistent emphasis on emotional tones (Emotional, Intimate, Reflective) with high scores in concept and characters, but lower scores in dialogue. This section of the screenplay focuses on internal character conflict and emotional experiences which may need support from strong, emotionally revealing dialogue to improve emotional impact. |
Shift in Tone and Conflict in Final Scenes | The final scenes (56-60) exhibit a notable shift towards more overt conflict (Anger, Betrayal, Dramatic) compared to the earlier sections. While this might be intentional to build towards a resolution, it's important to ensure a smooth transition that doesn't feel jarring to the audience. Consider foreshadowing these conflicts earlier in the narrative. |
Intimate Scenes and Emotional Impact | A number of high scoring intimate scenes still receive low scores on Emotional Impact (e.g., 30, 32, 36). This indicates that while intimacy is established, the emotional core of those scenes might be underdeveloped. Focus on strengthening the emotional stakes and consequences within these intimate moments. |
Writer's Craft Overall Analysis
The screenplay demonstrates a strong foundation in creating atmospheric tension, emotional depth, and thought-provoking themes, particularly through introspective dialogue and evocative descriptions. The writer shows a talent for crafting complex characters and exploring philosophical concepts within a sci-fi setting. However, a recurring theme in the feedback is the need for more nuanced character development and a deeper exploration of conflict through dialogue and action, rather than solely relying on atmosphere and description. There's a significant reliance on internal struggles, which while impactful, needs to be balanced with external conflicts and clearer motivations.
Key Improvement Areas
Suggestions
Type | Suggestion | Rationale |
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Book | 'Story: Substance, Structure, Style and the Principles of Screenwriting' by Robert McKee | This book provides a comprehensive understanding of narrative structure, character development, and dialogue, addressing multiple key improvement areas identified in the scene analyses. |
Screenplay | Screenplays by Charlie Kaufman ('Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind'), David Lynch (various), and Christopher Nolan ('Inception') | These screenwriters excel in blending emotional depth, philosophical themes, and unique narrative structures, directly addressing the need for stronger character development, subtext in dialogue, and more impactful storytelling. |
Screenplay | Screenplays by Alfred Hitchcock and Cormac McCarthy ('No Country for Old Men') | Hitchcock's mastery of suspense and McCarthy's stark, minimalist style will provide valuable insights into building tension and utilizing minimal dialogue for maximum impact, contrasting and complementing the more emotionally-driven elements of the current script. |
Book | 'Save the Cat' by Blake Snyder | This provides a practical guide to story structure, helping to improve the balance between internal and external conflict and ensuring the narrative progresses with clear goals and stakes. |
Book | 'On Writing' by Stephen King | This offers insights into crafting compelling characters and dialogue, aiding in improving character development and dialogue effectiveness. |
Book | 'Solaris' by Stanislaw Lem | This provides inspiration for blending science fiction with philosophical themes and exploring the depths of human consciousness in a unique and engaging manner. |
Video | '2001: A Space Odyssey' | Analyzing the visual storytelling techniques in this film can help improve the writer's skill in conveying emotions and character dynamics visually, complementing their strength in atmospheric descriptions. |
Stories Similar to this one
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Solaris (1972) | The original film adaptation of Stanislaw Lem's novel explores similar themes of memory, grief, and the nature of reality. It delves into the psychological effects of isolation in space and the manifestation of the protagonist's deceased loved one, paralleling the emotional turmoil faced by Kelvin in the screenplay. |
Annihilation (2018) | This film features a group of scientists exploring a mysterious phenomenon that alters reality and creates doppelgängers of individuals. The themes of identity, self-destruction, and the psychological impact of confronting one's past resonate with Kelvin's experiences aboard the Prometheus. |
The Fountain (2006) | Darren Aronofsky's film intertwines themes of love, loss, and the quest for immortality across different timelines. The emotional depth and exploration of the protagonist's relationship with a deceased partner echo Kelvin's struggle with Rheya's existence and his feelings of inadequacy. |
Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind (2004) | This film examines the complexities of memory and relationships, focusing on a couple who undergo a procedure to erase painful memories of each other. The exploration of love, regret, and the desire to reconnect with lost partners parallels Kelvin's emotional journey with Rheya. |
Blade Runner 2049 (2017) | The sequel to the original Blade Runner explores themes of artificial intelligence, memory, and what it means to be human. The protagonist's relationship with a holographic companion raises questions about identity and reality, similar to Kelvin's interactions with Rheya. |
Her (2013) | This film tells the story of a man who falls in love with an artificial intelligence operating system. It explores themes of loneliness, connection, and the nature of love in a technologically advanced world, mirroring Kelvin's emotional struggles with Rheya's existence. |
The Leftovers (TV Series, 2014-2017) | This series deals with themes of loss, grief, and the search for meaning after a global event causes a significant portion of the population to disappear. The emotional depth and exploration of relationships in the face of existential crises resonate with Kelvin's experiences aboard the Prometheus. |
The Double (2013) | Based on Fyodor Dostoevsky's novella, this film explores themes of identity and the psychological impact of encountering one's doppelgänger. The protagonist's struggle with self-worth and reality parallels Kelvin's emotional turmoil regarding Rheya's existence. |
Ghost in the Shell (1995) | This anime film delves into themes of identity, consciousness, and the nature of humanity in a cybernetic world. The exploration of what it means to be human and the emotional connections formed with artificial beings resonate with Kelvin's relationship with Rheya. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Existential Crisis | Kelvin grapples with the nature of existence and the implications of his relationship with Rheya, who is a manifestation of his memories. | An existential crisis occurs when a character questions the meaning of life, their identity, or their purpose. This trope is prevalent in films like 'Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind,' where characters confront their memories and the essence of their relationships. |
Unreliable Narrator | Kelvin's perception of reality is distorted by his emotional state and the presence of Rheya, leading to confusion about what is real. | An unreliable narrator is a character whose credibility is compromised, often leading the audience to question the truth of the story. A classic example is 'Fight Club,' where the protagonist's mental state alters the narrative. |
Love Beyond Death | Kelvin's relationship with the manifestation of Rheya reflects his unresolved feelings for her after her death. | This trope explores the idea that love transcends death, often seen in films like 'The Fault in Our Stars,' where characters continue to feel connected to lost loved ones. |
Isolation in Space | The setting aboard the Prometheus emphasizes the psychological effects of isolation on Kelvin and the crew. | This trope highlights the mental and emotional toll of being isolated in space, as seen in 'Gravity,' where the characters face both physical and psychological challenges in a vast emptiness. |
The Damsel in Distress | Rheya's character often finds herself in vulnerable situations, needing Kelvin's protection and reassurance. | This trope involves a female character who is placed in peril and requires rescue, commonly seen in films like 'King Kong.' |
Mad Scientist | Sartorius embodies the mad scientist trope, conducting experiments without regard for the moral implications. | This trope features a scientist whose experiments lead to dangerous consequences, as seen in 'Frankenstein' where the pursuit of knowledge results in tragedy. |
Memory Manipulation | The narrative explores the manipulation of memories, particularly through Rheya's existence as a projection of Kelvin's mind. | This trope involves altering or influencing memories, often leading to identity crises, as seen in 'Inception' where characters navigate layers of dreams and memories. |
The Chosen One | Kelvin is thrust into a situation where he must confront the consequences of his actions and decisions regarding Rheya and Solaris. | This trope features a character who is destined to face a significant challenge, often seen in 'The Matrix' where Neo is the chosen one to save humanity. |
Philosophical Debate | The characters engage in discussions about the nature of existence, love, and the implications of their experiences with Solaris. | This trope involves characters engaging in deep philosophical discussions, as seen in 'The Matrix' where characters explore the nature of reality and choice. |
The Haunted Past | Kelvin is haunted by memories of Rheya and their past relationship, affecting his present actions and decisions. | This trope involves characters dealing with unresolved issues from their past, as seen in 'The Great Gatsby' where Gatsby's past love for Daisy drives his actions. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation | ||||||||||||
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Existential Dread and the Search for Meaning | Kelvin's initial feelings of inadequacy, Gibarian's reflections on humanity's cosmic motivations, the crew's mental breakdowns, and Kelvin's final contemplations on Earth all point to a profound sense of meaninglessness and the human struggle to find purpose in a vast, indifferent universe. | This theme explores the human condition's inherent anxiety in the face of the unknown and the search for connection and meaning as a response to this anxiety. | ||||||||||||
Strengthening Existential Dread and the Search for Meaning:
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The Nature of Reality and Perception | The appearance of Rheya, the altered states of the crew, the shifting nature of Solaris, and the ambiguous nature of the visitors all challenge the viewers' perception of reality. What is real? What is a manifestation of the mind? The film constantly questions our understanding of the world around us. | The film plays with the unreliable nature of perception and the subjective experience of reality, forcing the audience to question what they see and experience. | ||||||||||||
Love and Connection in the Face of the Unknown | Kelvin's relationship with Rheya serves as a central focus, representing the human desire for intimacy and connection amid isolation and existential crisis. Their passionate yet troubled relationship embodies the fragility of love when faced with the extraordinary and the unknown. | This theme explores the complexities of human relationships, particularly the longing for connection and the challenges of maintaining intimacy in the face of overwhelming challenges. | ||||||||||||
The Dangers of Unchecked Scientific Ambition | The expedition to Solaris is driven by scientific curiosity and a desire for knowledge, yet this ambition leads to unforeseen consequences. The crew's mental states and the creation of the 'visitors' highlight the potential dangers of unchecked scientific exploration and the ethical implications of tampering with the unknown. | This theme cautions against the pursuit of knowledge without considering the potential consequences and ethical considerations. | ||||||||||||
Memory, Identity, and the Subconscious | The film explores how memory and identity are fluid and susceptible to manipulation. Rheya's existence as a manifestation of Kelvin's memories challenges the stability of self and the nature of identity. The film suggests that our identities are not fixed entities but rather fluid constructs shaped by our experiences and subconscious desires. | This theme delves into the complexities of human psychology, the subjectivity of memory, and the influence of the subconscious on our perceptions of self. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Voice Analysis | |
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Summary: | The writer's voice is introspective, melancholic, and philosophically inclined. It favors atmospheric descriptions over exposition, relying on sparse yet impactful dialogue to convey deep emotional and existential themes. There's a consistent sense of unease and mystery, often built through subtle gestures and visual imagery rather than explicit action. The narrative is character-driven, exploring the psychological toll of isolation and the complexities of human relationships in an extreme, otherworldly setting. |
Voice Contribution | The writer's voice contributes to the script by creating a haunting and thought-provoking atmosphere. The focus on internal struggles and existential themes adds depth and complexity to the science fiction narrative. The sparse dialogue and atmospheric descriptions enhance the mood of unease and mystery, drawing the audience into the characters' internal worlds. The blend of psychological realism and science fiction elements creates a unique and compelling narrative that explores the human condition within an extraordinary setting. This careful balance contributes to the overall depth and thematic richness of the screenplay. |
Best Representation Scene | 1 - Silent Struggles |
Best Scene Explanation | Scene 1 best encapsulates the writer's voice because it immediately establishes the introspective, melancholic tone and thematic concerns of the entire screenplay. The combination of atmospheric description (rain, overcast sky, leafless trees), sparse dialogue (internal monologue/voiceover), and focus on the protagonist's inner turmoil perfectly illustrates the writer's preference for evocative imagery, subtle character development, and exploration of profound emotional themes. It sets the stage for the later, more overtly science fiction elements while remaining grounded in a compellingly human experience. |
- Overall originality score: 9
- Overall originality explanation: The screenplay demonstrates a high level of originality through its exploration of complex themes such as identity, memory, love, and existentialism within a sci-fi context. The use of psychological and philosophical elements, along with the unique portrayal of characters grappling with their realities, sets it apart from conventional narratives. The incorporation of surreal and introspective moments, as well as the blending of human emotions with advanced technology, further enhances its originality.
- Most unique situations: The most unique situations in the screenplay are the exploration of the protagonist's internal struggles with a non-human entity that embodies his memories, the philosophical discussions surrounding the nature of existence and consciousness, and the emotional complexities of relationships that transcend traditional boundaries of life and death.
- Overall unpredictability score: 8.5
- Overall unpredictability explanation: The screenplay maintains a strong sense of unpredictability through its intricate character dynamics and the unfolding of existential dilemmas. The characters' actions and the surreal nature of their interactions create an atmosphere of uncertainty, making it difficult for the audience to anticipate outcomes. The blending of reality and memory, along with the moral ambiguities faced by the characters, contributes to a narrative that keeps viewers engaged and guessing.
Goals and Philosophical Conflict | |
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internal Goals | Throughout the script, the protagonist Kelvin grapples with his identity, love, and the reality of existence, particularly as it pertains to his relationship with Rheya. His journey evolves from seeking validation and understanding of his worth, to confronting feelings of control and stability in a chaotic environment, ultimately leading him to deep emotional turmoil surrounding love, guilt, and loss. |
External Goals | Kelvin's external goals shift from navigating bureaucratic complexities regarding the mission to uncovering the truth behind the mysterious occurrences on the spacecraft, ultimately focusing on protecting Rheya and ensuring their mutual survival. This journey leads him to confront challenging moral dilemmas and the loss of others amidst their struggles. |
Philosophical Conflict | The overarching philosophical conflict revolves around the nature of reality and identity, as represented by Kelvin's struggle between understanding and accepting Rheya's existence as a projection of his consciousness versus her being an independent entity. This juxtaposes the concepts of perception versus truth. |
Character Development Contribution: The goals and conflicts contribute to Kelvin's development as he transitions from a state of confusion and emotional detachment to one of acceptance and understanding, fostering a deeper emotional connection with both Rheya and his own humanity.
Narrative Structure Contribution: The goals and conflicts serve to construct a narrative that intertwines the thriller elements of space exploration with an intimate study of relationships, allowing for tension-filled story arcs that reflect the emotional stakes and existential themes within the characters' journeys.
Thematic Depth Contribution: The goals and conflicts enhance the thematic depth of the screenplay by exploring profound existential questions surrounding memory, love, identity, and the nature of reality, prompting the audience to reflect on the complexity of human emotion and the implications of technology on consciousness.
Screenwriting Resources on Goals and Philosophical Conflict
Articles
Site | Description |
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Creative Screenwriting | How Important Is A Character’s Goal? |
Studio Binder | What is Conflict in a Story? A Quick Reminder of the Purpose of Conflict |
YouTube Videos
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How I Build a Story's Philosophical Conflict | How do you build philosophical conflict into your story? Where do you start? And how do you develop it into your characters and their external actions. Today I’m going to break this all down and make it fully clear in this episode. |
Endings: The Good, the Bad, and the Insanely Great | By Michael Arndt: I put this lecture together in 2006, when I started work at Pixar on Toy Story 3. It looks at how to write an "insanely great" ending, using Star Wars, The Graduate, and Little Miss Sunshine as examples. 90 minutes |
Tips for Writing Effective Character Goals | By Jessica Brody (Save the Cat!): Writing character goals is one of the most important jobs of any novelist. But are your character's goals...mushy? |
- Physical environment: The screenplay depicts a world sharply divided between the sterile, technologically advanced environments of space stations and spaceships (Prometheus, Athena 7, Solaris station, space capsules) and more grounded, though sometimes desolate, locations on Earth (rural roads, a cabin, a modern apartment, a friend's apartment). The contrast is significant, with space settings often feeling cold, isolating, and claustrophobic, while Earth locations offer a sense of familiarity but also reflect the characters' internal turmoil.
- Culture: The culture is primarily defined by the scientific pursuit of space exploration and the resulting ethical dilemmas. There's a focus on scientific inquiry and technological advancement, but also a deep exploration of human relationships and existential questions, especially regarding the nature of consciousness, memory, and identity. The ambiguous nature of Solaris challenges established scientific and religious beliefs.
- Society: The societal structure is hierarchical in the space settings, with clear power dynamics between scientists (Gibarian, Sartorius), researchers, and crew members. On Earth, societal structures are less defined, but relationships—both romantic (Kelvin and Rheya) and professional—play a central role. The interaction between the bureaucratic world (represented by the bureaucrat in the car) and the isolated individual (Kelvin) hints at societal control and alienation.
- Technology: Technology is highly advanced, enabling space travel, sophisticated communication systems (videophones, intercoms), holographic displays, robotic repair units (Automated Taskmasters), and even seemingly impossible technologies like creating human-like beings from memories. This advanced technology, however, doesn't necessarily solve human problems; in fact, it often exacerbates them, highlighting the limitations of technology to address existential anxieties and human conflict.
- Characters influence: The unique environment profoundly impacts the characters. The isolation of space travel contributes to the mental deterioration of the crew, leading to paranoia, hallucinations, and suicidal tendencies. The advanced technology, while allowing for exploration and communication, also creates a sense of vulnerability and unease. The characters' actions are consistently shaped by their environment – their choices are often driven by a need for connection, security, or escape from the oppressive isolation and existential questions posed by the world they inhabit.
- Narrative contribution: The contrasting environments create a compelling narrative tension. The mystery surrounding Solaris drives the plot forward, while the intimate moments between Kelvin and Rheya provide emotional counterpoints to the larger scientific and existential themes. The different settings offer unique opportunities for character development and reveal their inner struggles in various contexts.
- Thematic depth contribution: The world-building significantly contributes to the thematic depth. The juxtaposition of advanced technology with profound emotional fragility explores the limitations of scientific progress in addressing human needs and existential questions. The isolation of space travel mirrors the characters' inner isolation and their struggle with identity and meaning. The enigmatic nature of Solaris serves as a metaphor for the unknowable aspects of existence and the challenges of understanding the human psyche.
central conflict
The central conflict revolves around Kelvin's struggle with the emotional and psychological implications of his relationship with the manifestation of his deceased wife, Rheya, and the existential questions raised by the nature of Solaris.
primary motivations
- Kelvin's desire to reconnect with Rheya and find closure regarding their past.
- The crew's need to understand the phenomena occurring on Solaris and the implications for humanity.
- Rheya's quest for identity and validation as a being created from Kelvin's memories.
catalysts
- Gibarian's warning about the dangers of Solaris and the psychological effects on the crew.
- Rheya's unexpected appearance, which forces Kelvin to confront his feelings of guilt and loss.
- The escalating tension between the crew members regarding the nature of their existence and the threat posed by Solaris.
barriers
- Kelvin's internal conflict and guilt over Rheya's death and his inability to accept her as a real being.
- Sartorius's distrust and antagonism towards Rheya, complicating the group's dynamics.
- The psychological strain and isolation experienced by the crew, leading to paranoia and fear.
themes
- The nature of love and loss.
- The quest for identity and self-understanding.
- The ethical implications of scientific exploration and the unknown.
stakes
The stakes involve not only Kelvin's emotional well-being and the potential for reconciling with Rheya but also the broader implications for humanity's understanding of consciousness and existence as they confront the mysteries of Solaris.
uniqueness factor
The story uniquely blends science fiction with deep psychological exploration, focusing on the emotional ramifications of memory and identity rather than traditional action-driven narratives.
audience hook
The emotional complexity of Kelvin's relationship with Rheya and the philosophical questions surrounding existence and consciousness will engage viewers, prompting them to reflect on their own experiences of love and loss.
paradoxical engine or bisociation
The paradoxical engine lies in the juxtaposition of Kelvin's desire for connection with Rheya against the reality that she is a projection of his memories, creating a tension between longing and the fear of loss.
paradoxical engine or bisociation 2
Another aspect of bisociation is the conflict between the scientific pursuit of knowledge and the emotional consequences of that knowledge, as the crew grapples with the implications of their findings on Solaris and their own humanity.
Engine: Gemini
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Executive Summary
Soderbergh's *Solaris* screenplay is a compelling, albeit challenging, adaptation. Its strengths lie in its atmospheric storytelling, exploration of complex themes, and unique handling of the science fiction genre. However, the pacing could benefit from tightening, and certain plot points could be clarified for broader audience appeal. The ambiguity inherent in the story is a double-edged sword—while artistically rewarding, it might hinder commercial success.
- The screenplay masterfully creates an unsettling atmosphere using sound design, imagery, and pacing, particularly emphasizing the alien nature of Solaris. The dissolves and shifts between timelines effectively show Kelvin's unraveling mental state, and the ambiguity keeps the audience guessing and engaged, creating a compelling mystery. The use of flashbacks and present-day events intertwined, create a very compelling character arc. high ( Scene 1 Scene 4 Scene 11 Scene 12 Scene 59 )
- The dialogue is sharp, insightful, and often philosophical, reflecting the characters' intellectual depth and their struggles with the profound implications of their encounter with Solaris. The characters are complex and well-defined, particularly through their interactions and conflicting perspectives on Solaris' nature and actions. high ( Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 Scene 22 Scene 34 )
- The screenplay effectively explores the complex themes of memory, love, loss, and the human condition through Kelvin's interaction with Rheya. The film masterfully uses parallel editing to show Kelvin's fragmented memories, creating a visceral connection to his emotional experiences. high ( Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 20 Scene 25 Scene 36 )
- The screenplay masterfully uses a non-linear narrative to build suspense and ambiguity effectively. It leverages dream sequences and memories to keep the audience constantly questioning the reality of what's happening. The non-linear narrative creates a sense of disorientation, which enhances the psychological thriller aspect of the story. medium ( Scene 39 Scene 44 Scene 45 Scene 57 )
- The ending is open-ended and ambiguous, leaving the audience to ponder the ultimate nature of Solaris and its impact on Kelvin. This mirrors the philosophical themes of the screenplay, creating a truly thought-provoking experience that sticks with the audience long after the credits roll. medium ( Scene 51 Scene 52 Scene 53 Scene 60 )
- The initial exposition regarding the Solaris mission and the previous crew's experiences could be streamlined for improved pacing. The science fiction elements, while intriguing, might benefit from a more accessible explanation to avoid alienating viewers unfamiliar with the source material. medium ( Scene 4 Scene 5 Scene 6 Scene 7 )
- While the ambiguity is a stylistic choice, some plot points, particularly concerning Rheya's nature and the exact mechanisms of Solaris' influence, might require further clarification to enhance the story's overall coherence. The fragmented memories, and the repeated scenes could be streamlined to improve pacing and flow, and ensure the narrative structure is easier to understand. medium ( Scene 27 Scene 28 Scene 30 Scene 31 )
- The ending, while open-ended and ambiguous, could be slightly more defined, without compromising its artistic merit. Some viewers might find the open ending unsatisfying without proper setup or closure. low ( Scene 51 Scene 52 Scene 53 )
- More development of the secondary characters (Snow and Sartorius) beyond their immediate reactions to Solaris could add depth to the narrative and create richer conflicts. Exploring their individual backstories and motivations could make their perspectives more resonant. medium
- While the philosophical themes are well-explored, adding a subplot focused on the political and economic pressures surrounding the Solaris mission could create additional tension and stakes. This will strengthen the dramatic stakes of the story. low
- The screenplay utilizes a fragmented, non-linear structure that mirrors the characters' deteriorating mental states and the unsettling nature of Solaris. This structural choice is bold and adds greatly to the overall effect, but it could make the script challenging to adapt without careful consideration. high
- The use of recurring imagery, such as the rain-streaked window, the Labrador puppy, and Rheya's hand, adds symbolic depth to the narrative and reinforces the cyclical nature of Kelvin's experiences. This technique helps enhance the emotional resonance of the scenes. medium ( Scene 14 Scene 19 Scene 27 )
- The dreamlike sequences and ambiguous transitions between reality and hallucination create a sense of unease and disorientation that reflects Kelvin's mental state and the enigmatic nature of Solaris. The blurring of the lines between dreams and reality leaves the audience constantly unsure of what is real and what is not. medium ( Scene 37 Scene 43 Scene 50 )
- Underdeveloped Secondary Characters The screenplay focuses heavily on Kelvin and Rheya, leaving the secondary characters (Snow and Sartorius) somewhat underdeveloped. Their motivations and backstories are hinted at, but not fully explored. This limits their potential as compelling antagonists and diminishes the overall richness of the narrative. For instance, we know little about Snow's life before or after his experiences on the Prometheus beyond his apparent fascination with the events of the mission. medium
- Scientific Explanation While the screenplay effectively conveys the unsettling atmosphere and psychological impact of Solaris, the scientific explanations are somewhat vague and lack concrete detail. This could be a drawback for audiences expecting hard science fiction, and might make understanding some of the events more challenging for a general audience. For instance, the nature of Solaris' power and its ability to create human manifestations is not clearly defined. medium
Engine: Claude
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Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Solaris' is a complex and thought-provoking exploration of consciousness, memory, and the human condition. It blends elements of science fiction, drama, and psychological thriller to create a rich and immersive narrative. The story follows Chris Kelvin, a psychologist who is sent to investigate a mysterious phenomenon on the Prometheus space station orbiting the planet Solaris. Kelvin's personal life and past become intertwined with the strange occurrences on the station, as he is confronted with the reappearance of his deceased wife, Rheya. The screenplay grapples with profound questions about the nature of reality, the limits of human understanding, and the consequences of our deepest desires and memories. With its compelling characters, intricate themes, and innovative storytelling, this screenplay stands out as a distinctive and powerful work of science fiction cinema.
- The opening sequence and establishing scenes effectively set the tone and intrigue the audience, drawing them into the mysterious world of Solaris and the characters' emotional states. high ( Scene 1 Scene 2 Scene 3 )
- The introduction of the key characters, Gibarian, Snow, and Sartorius, and the exploration of the events leading up to Kelvin's arrival on the Prometheus, effectively set the stage for the deeper narrative to unfold. high ( Scene 6 Scene 7 Scene 8 )
- The flashbacks and non-linear storytelling techniques used to reveal Kelvin and Rheya's past relationship and the circumstances surrounding her death add depth and complexity to the characters and their emotional journeys. high ( Scene 12 Scene 13 Scene 25 )
- The exploration of the nature of Solaris and its relationship to the characters' consciousness and memories is a compelling and thought-provoking aspect of the screenplay. high ( Scene 48 Scene 49 )
- The emotional impact and resolution of Kelvin's journey, particularly the final scenes with Rheya, are powerfully executed and leave a lasting impression on the audience. high ( Scene 54 Scene 55 )
- While the exploration of the nature of Solaris and its relationship to the characters' consciousness is a strength, the screenplay could benefit from additional clarity and exposition in certain sections to help the audience fully grasp the implications and significance of these concepts. medium ( Scene 16 Scene 35 Scene 48 )
- The character development and relationships, particularly between Kelvin and Rheya, could be further explored and expanded in certain sections to deepen the audience's emotional investment and understanding of the characters' motivations and inner struggles. medium ( Scene 21 Scene 22 Scene 33 )
- The pacing and narrative flow could be refined in the final act, as the rapid progression of events leading to the conclusion may feel somewhat rushed or abrupt for some viewers. medium ( Scene 56 Scene 57 )
- While the screenplay effectively establishes the sense of isolation and psychological turmoil experienced by the characters on the Prometheus, there may be opportunities to further develop the environmental and visual elements of the station and its surroundings to enhance the immersive quality of the setting. low ( Scene 10 Scene 11 )
- The exploration of the characters' backstories and the events leading up to the current situation could be further expanded in certain sections to provide additional context and depth to the narrative. medium ( Scene 26 Scene 27 )
- The screenplay's exploration of the nature of consciousness, memory, and the human condition, and its philosophical and metaphysical implications, are compelling and thought-provoking elements that set it apart. high ( Scene 16 Scene 48 Scene 49 )
- The use of non-linear storytelling techniques and flashbacks to gradually reveal the characters' histories and emotional journeys is an effective narrative device that enhances the script's depth and complexity. high ( Scene 12 Scene 23 Scene 26 )
- The emotional resonance and thematic significance of the screenplay's conclusion, particularly the ambiguous and thought-provoking final scenes, leave a lasting impression on the audience. high ( Scene 54 Scene 55 Scene 60 )
- Lack of cultural diversity The screenplay predominantly focuses on the experiences of white, Western characters, with limited representation of diverse cultural and ethnic backgrounds. Expanding the diversity of the supporting cast and exploring different cultural perspectives could enhance the screenplay's depth and resonance. medium
- Overuse of exposition While the screenplay effectively conveys complex ideas and themes, there are instances where the dialogue feels overly expository, particularly in the scenes involving the discussions about Solaris and the nature of consciousness. Striking a better balance between exposition and more natural, character-driven dialogue could improve the script's flow and pacing. medium
Engine: GPT4
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Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Solaris' presents a profound exploration of human consciousness, memory, and the nature of love through a science fiction lens. It effectively intertwines psychological depth with existential themes, creating a narrative that is both intellectually stimulating and emotionally resonant. The character arcs, particularly that of Chris Kelvin, are compelling, though some areas could benefit from clearer motivations and resolutions. Overall, the screenplay is a strong piece that invites deep reflection.
- The screenplay excels in establishing a haunting atmosphere that immerses the audience in Kelvin's psychological state, effectively using visual and auditory elements. high ( Scene Sequence number 1 (Opening scene) Scene Sequence number 12 (Kelvin's dream sequence with Rheya) )
- The dialogue is rich and thought-provoking, providing insight into the characters' motivations and the philosophical underpinnings of the narrative. high ( Scene Sequence number 6 (Gibarian's video message) Scene Sequence number 34 (Discussion about Solaris) )
- Character development is strong, particularly in the relationship between Kelvin and Rheya, showcasing their emotional complexities and struggles. high ( Scene Sequence number 14 (Kelvin and Rheya in the pod) Scene Sequence number 56 (Kelvin confronts Sartorius) )
- The pacing of the screenplay is generally well-managed, with a gradual build-up of tension that keeps the audience engaged throughout. medium ( Scene Sequence number 58 (Prometheus escaping Solaris) )
- The emotional weight of the narrative is effectively conveyed, allowing the audience to connect deeply with the characters' experiences. high ( Scene Sequence number 55 (Kelvin's emotional breakdown) )
- Some scenes could benefit from clearer exposition, particularly regarding the scientific aspects of Solaris, which may confuse viewers unfamiliar with the concepts. medium ( Scene Sequence number 10 (Kelvin's report) )
- The motivations of secondary characters, such as Sartorius and Snow, could be more fleshed out to enhance their roles in the narrative. medium ( Scene Sequence number 22 (Kelvin and Rheya in the lab) )
- Some emotional beats feel rushed, particularly in moments of conflict, which could benefit from more buildup to enhance their impact. medium ( Scene Sequence number 41 (Kelvin and Rheya's argument) )
- The screenplay occasionally leans too heavily on philosophical dialogue, which may detract from character-driven moments. low ( Scene Sequence number 49 (Rheya's reflection on God) )
- Some scenes could use more visual clarity to avoid confusion about the characters' states and actions. medium ( Scene Sequence number 39 (Rheya's violent awakening) )
- There is a lack of background information on the mission and the significance of Solaris, which could help ground the audience in the story's context. high ( Scene Sequence number 4 (Kelvin in the space capsule) )
- More exploration of the backstory between Kelvin and Rheya could enhance the emotional stakes of their relationship. medium ( Scene Sequence number 30 (Kelvin and Rheya's intimate moment) )
- The screenplay could benefit from a clearer explanation of the implications of Solaris's existence and its impact on humanity. medium ( Scene Sequence number 16 (Gibarian's theories) )
- A more defined resolution for Kelvin's character arc would provide a stronger conclusion to his journey. high ( Scene Sequence number 50 (Kelvin's fever dream) )
- The climax could be more intense and impactful, with higher stakes for the characters involved. medium ( Scene Sequence number 57 (Chaos on the Prometheus) )
- The visual imagery throughout the screenplay is striking, particularly in scenes depicting Solaris, which enhances the thematic depth. high ( Scene Sequence number 58 (Prometheus escaping Solaris) )
- The emotional resonance of the narrative is a standout feature, allowing for a deep connection with the audience. high ( Scene Sequence number 55 (Kelvin's emotional breakdown) )
- The use of dream sequences effectively blurs the line between reality and memory, enhancing the psychological complexity of the story. high ( Scene Sequence number 12 (Kelvin's dream sequence with Rheya) )
- The philosophical discussions provide a rich layer of depth, prompting the audience to engage with the narrative on a cerebral level. medium ( Scene Sequence number 34 (Discussion about Solaris) )
- The screenplay's structure, with its intercutting between past and present, effectively builds tension and intrigue. high ( Scene Sequence number 10 (Kelvin's report) )
- Character motivations The screenplay occasionally lacks clarity in the motivations of secondary characters, particularly Sartorius and Snow, which can lead to confusion about their roles in the narrative. For example, Sartorius's extreme actions could be better justified to enhance the tension. medium
- Exposition-heavy dialogue Some scenes rely heavily on exposition through dialogue, which can feel unnatural. For instance, characters often explain their thoughts and feelings in ways that seem forced rather than organic, detracting from the realism of their interactions. medium
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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16 | Gibarian: Maybe life just can't be solved. |
49 | RHEYA: I have decided that if it is God, it's a sick God. Its ambitions exceed its powers, but it doesn't realize it. |
15 | SNOW: We have found God. The only issue is figuring out how to prove this in a way that will make sense back on Earth. |
7 | Snow: I love chocolate. I realized just yesterday how much I love it. |
36 | RHEYA: You don't want me. |