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MAD MEN Written by Matthew Weiner One-Hour Pilot “Smoke Gets In Your Eyes”

5 INT. APARTMENT HALLWAY - LATER 5 Don, hat in hand, knocks on the door. He waits a beat and checks his watch. It's midnight. The door opens to reveal MIDGE DANIELS, a sexy no nonsense woman about Don's age wrapped in a red kimono.

7 INT. MIDGE'S APARTMENT - MORNING 7 Don is laying on Midge's chest. Midge smokes a cigarette. Don looks off towards the skyline. DON We should get married.

11 INT. PETE’S OFFICE - DAY 11 PETE CAMPBELL. He is mid-twenties, charming, all-American, and on the phone. PETE (to phone)

12 INT. STERLING COOPER HALLWAY -- LATER 12 Walking down a wide corridor with open offices on either side is JOAN, mid-twenties, an incredibly put together office manager. A half step behind her, carrying a cardboard box with supplies is PEGGY OLSON, who at 20 seems far younger.

13 INT. DON DRAPER'S OFFICE -- CONTINUOUS 13 Roger speaks as Don opens a cabinet and hangs up his coat. (CONTINUED) Pilot Episode “Smoke Gets in Your Eyes” Pink 4/20/06 13. 13 CONTINUED: 13

14 INT. DON DRAPER’S OFFICE -- LATER 14 OVER BLACK We hear Peggy's disembodied voice. (CONTINUED) Pilot Episode “Smoke Gets in Your Eyes” Pink 4/20/06 15.

15 INT. STERLING COOPER HALLWAY - CONTINUOUS 15 Don and Pete walk down the hallway together. PETE She's a little young for you, Draper.

18 INT. DOCTOR'S EXAMINATION ROOM 18 Peggy sits on the vinyl exam table reading a pamphlet, "It's Your Wedding Night". Following a knock on the door, DR. EMERSON, early forties, enters with a clipboard under his arm.

19 INT. STERLING COOPER BOARD ROOM - LATER 19 Rachel Mencken sits between David Cohen and Pete listening to * Don and Roger give their pitch-- Don standing by some mock-up * ads. The table is lined with Shrimp Cocktails, toast points, * and a pitcher of Bloody Mary's.

20 INT. STERLING COOPER HALLWAY - MOMENTS LATER 20 Don walks down the corridor at a brisk clip with Pete trailing a step behind. PETE Hey, Don. I don't blame you. She

23 INT. DON DRAPER'S OFFICE - AFTERNOON 23 Don leans back in his chair eyes closed for a moment then slaps his face to alert himself. He opens a desk drawer, pulling out a chest exerciser which is just a few springs and some handles. As he does a small black leather box drops to

25 INT. STERLING COOPER BOARD ROOM - AFTERNOON 25 The large table in the board room is covered with ashtrays. LEE GARNER JUNIOR, a forty-ish tobacco magnate, and his * father, LEE GARNER SENIOR, sit flanked with other tobacco * executives. Across the table, Roger, Don, and Pete listen

26 INT. DON DRAPER'S OFFICE - LATER 26 Roger stands at the bar, fixing drinks. Don sits at his desk with his feet up, smoking a cigar. ROGER You had me worried. I don't know

27 INT. THE SLIPPER ROOM 27 Live jazz sizzles in the background. A buxom blonde STRIPPER is onstage. She unzips her dress in the back and slowly shakes it to the floor. Through the smoke-filled air we see Ken, Dick, Harry,

28 INT. ZEBRA LOUNGE - LATER 28 * A white-coated OLD WAITER weaves through the more formal, lounge room of the bar, as well-dressed couples have intimate drinks by candlelight. He arrives at a booth where Don and Rachel sit across from each other.

29 INT. PEGGY’S APARTMENT BUILDING HALLWAY - NIGHT 29 Pete in his top coat stands in front of an apartment door, leaning his head against the wall. He is obviously drunk and knocks on the door. A young woman, MARJORIE, in a pink housecoat opens the door,

36 EXT. IDYLLIC TWO-STORY COLONIAL HOUSE 36 We pull back from the dimly lit window. The rain has stopped. Another car pulls in next door. A man gets out and * heads in. Houses stretch in the distance. * FADE OUT.

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Madmen

A successful ad executive navigates the challenges of the advertising industry while facing a crackdown on health claims by the Trade Commission.

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Genres: Drama, Romance, Comedy, Romantic comedy

Setting: 1960, Manhattan

Themes: Smoking and its perception, Challenges in the advertising industry, Relationship dynamics and support, Navigating the workplace, Cynicism and living in the present, Marketing strategies and creativity, Tensions in professional and personal relationships

Conflict & Stakes: The challenges of advertising cigarettes amidst health concerns, Don's career decline, and personal relationships

Mood: Slick, sophisticated, and introspective

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Character Development: Complex and multi-dimensional characters drive the narrative forward.
Historical Setting: Authentic portrayal of 1960s Manhattan adds depth and richness to the story.
Sarcastic Banter: Sharp and witty dialogue between characters adds humor and depth to the interactions.

Comparable Scripts: Mad Men, Revolutionary Road, An Education, The Apartment, A Single Man, The Catcher in the Rye, Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf?, Casablanca, The Great Gatsby, Network

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Executive Summary

The 'Mad Men' pilot screenplay is a strong introduction to the world of 1960s Madison Avenue advertising, showcasing the creative brilliance and personal conflicts of its central character, Don Draper. The script effectively establishes the high-stakes, cutthroat environment of the industry, while also hinting at the deeper psychological and emotional undercurrents that drive the characters. With standout sequences, compelling character arcs, and a thematic richness that extends beyond the surface-level narrative, this screenplay demonstrates the potential for a captivating, complex, and visually striking television series.

Strengths

The pitch meeting with the tobacco executives is a standout sequence, showcasing Don Draper's creative brilliance and ability to think outside the box. His 'It's Toasted' slogan is an inspired solution to the advertising challenges faced by the tobacco industry. high ( Scene 13 (25) )
The introduction of Peggy Olson, the new secretary, provides a compelling character arc and insight into the gender dynamics and workplace culture of the 1960s advertising industry. Joan Holloway's advice to Peggy is both humorous and insightful. medium ( Scene 5 (12) )
The dialogue between Don and Rachel Mencken is rich with subtext and reveals deeper layers to Don's character, hinting at a past and worldview that are not immediately apparent. high ( Scene 16 (28) )

Areas of Improvement

The exchange between Don, Salvatore, and Greta Guttman could be tightened up and made more concise, as it feels a bit drawn out at times. low ( Scene 11 (23) )
The interaction between Peggy and Pete could be further developed to better establish the dynamic between these two characters and their potential power struggle. medium ( Scene 7 (14) )

Missing Elements

While the script provides a strong introduction to the world of Mad Men, there is little exploration of Don Draper's personal life and relationships outside of the office. Expanding on these elements could add depth and complexity to the overall narrative. medium ( Scene )

Notable Points

The final sequence, which transitions from the Draper household to an idyllic suburban neighborhood, provides a striking visual contrast and hints at the broader thematic concerns of the series, such as the tension between the public persona and private lives of the characters. high ( Scene 18 (36) )
The confrontation between Don and Rachel Mencken highlights the gender dynamics and power dynamics at play in the advertising industry, as well as Don's own conflicted views on love and relationships. high ( Scene 10 (19) )

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The 'Mad Men' pilot episode demonstrates strong potential with its evocative setting, complex protagonist, and sharp dialogue. However, it requires attention to pacing, character development, and the inclusion of more diverse perspectives. Further exploration of thematic depth and ethical considerations would enhance the overall narrative.

Strengths

Evocative portrayal of the 1960s advertising world, capturing the era's social norms, gender dynamics, and cultural shifts. high ( Scene general )
Complex and compelling protagonist in Don Draper, whose internal conflicts, moral ambiguities, and creative genius drive the narrative. high ( Scene 4 Scene 6 Scene 25 )
Sharp and witty dialogue that reflects the advertising industry's focus on language and persuasion. high ( Scene 25 )
Intriguing exploration of themes such as identity, happiness, consumerism, and the American Dream. medium ( Scene 12 Scene 23 )
Strong female characters like Rachel Mencken who challenge the prevailing gender roles and societal expectations. medium ( Scene 19 Scene 28 )

Areas of Improvement

Pacing can be uneven, with some scenes feeling slow and others rushed, particularly in the pilot episode. high ( Scene general )
Certain character interactions, like those involving Pete Campbell, can come across as stereotypical or overly aggressive. medium ( Scene 11 Scene 20 )
The ending of the pilot episode feels abrupt and leaves some character motivations unclear, particularly Peggy's decision. medium ( Scene 29 )

Missing Elements

Deeper exploration of the impact of advertising on society and the ethical considerations of the industry. medium ( Scene general )
More diverse representation of characters from different racial and socioeconomic backgrounds. medium ( Scene general )

Notable Points

The recurring motif of smoking and its connection to themes of addiction, pleasure, and mortality. high ( Scene 4 Scene 23 )
The contrasting portrayal of traditional and modern advertising strategies. medium ( Scene 13 Scene 25 )
The exploration of loneliness and the search for connection in a consumerist society. medium ( Scene 28 )

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Don Draper, a successful ad executive, faces challenges with his cigarette account and the crackdown on health claims by the Trade Commission. He seeks solace and advice from Midge Daniels, an artist he is involved with. Midge offers sarcastic remarks and suggestions but also provides support and reassurance.

Meanwhile, Peggy Olson starts her first day as a secretary at Sterling Cooper and receives guidance from Joan, the office manager, on how to navigate the office and handle Don. Peggy also goes to the doctor to get a prescription for contraceptive pills, where she is made to feel comfortable and responsible.

Don and his colleague, Roger, have conversations about their upcoming meeting with the tobacco executives and discuss the lack of diversity in the company. They meet Rachel Mencken, who challenges Don's strategies during a boardroom meeting, leading to tension and arguments. However, Don's pitch of a new angle for cigarette advertising - emphasizing the dangers of everyday life - impresses the executives.

In a separate storyline, Don and Rachel engage in a deep conversation about love, loneliness, and the meaning of life after their heated argument. They find a mutual connection and acknowledge the possibility of a future meeting.

Overall, the movie explores Don's professional and personal life, his relationships with various characters, and the challenges he faces in the advertising industry. It delves into themes of love, identity, and societal expectations during the 1960s.

Scene by Scene Summaries

Don Draper engages in a conversation with a busboy in a bar about smoking and his choice of brand.
Don Draper visits Midge Daniels at her apartment late at night. They discuss the challenges he is facing with his cigarette account and the crackdown on health claims by the Trade Commission. Midge offers sarcastic remarks and suggestions, while also revealing her personal artwork. The scene ends with a suggestive moment between Don and Midge.
Don visits Midge at her apartment and suggests they get married. Midge responds sarcastically and they engage in playful banter. Don mentions his upcoming meeting with the tobacco people and expresses his frustration. Midge offers support and reassurance.
Don visits Midge at her apartment and suggests they get married. Midge responds sarcastically and they engage in playful banter. Don mentions his upcoming meeting with the tobacco people and expresses his frustration. Midge offers support and reassurance.
Peggy Olson starts her first day as a secretary at Sterling Cooper. Joan, the office manager, gives her a tour and offers advice on how to navigate the office and handle her boss, Don Draper.
Don gets ready for a meeting with the tobacco executives and has a conversation with Roger about the upcoming meeting. They discuss the lack of Jewish employees in the company and the need for someone to make the department store executives feel comfortable. Don ends the scene by closing his eyes and reflecting.
Don and Pete walk down the hallway together, engaging in sarcastic banter. They discuss Pete's upcoming wedding and Don warns him about the consequences of his actions. They enter the board room where they meet Rachel Mencken, who challenges Don's expectations. They sit down and Don makes a subtle comment to Roger about his shirt.
Peggy goes to the doctor to get a prescription for contraceptive pills. The doctor is friendly and reassuring, making Peggy feel comfortable. They discuss the importance of being responsible and not abusing the medication.
Don and Roger give their pitch to Rachel Mencken, who challenges Don's strategy. The tension rises as Rachel questions the effectiveness of a coupon strategy and expresses her desire for customers who are attracted to the store because it is expensive. Don becomes frustrated and the meeting escalates into an argument, leading Don to storm out.
Don and Pete discuss Pete's upcoming wedding, Don warns Pete about the consequences of his actions. They meet Rachel Mencken in the board room and tension rises as Rachel challenges Don's strategy. The meeting escalates into an argument, leading Don to storm out.
Don and Pete discuss Pete's upcoming wedding, meet with Rachel Mencken in the board room, tension rises as Rachel challenges Don's strategy, leading to an argument and Don storming out.
Don, Roger, Pete, and the tobacco executives discuss the challenges of advertising cigarettes in the face of health concerns. Pete proposes a new angle by emphasizing the dangers of everyday life and the idea of 'Death Wish'. Don further develops this concept by introducing the slogan 'Lucky Strike - It's Toasted'. The executives are intrigued and impressed by the idea.
Don and Roger give their pitch to Rachel Mencken, who challenges Don's strategy. The tension rises as Rachel questions the effectiveness of a coupon strategy and expresses her desire for customers who are attracted to the store because it is expensive. Don becomes frustrated and the meeting escalates into an argument, leading Don to storm out.
Don and Pete discuss Pete's upcoming wedding and meet with Rachel Mencken in the boardroom. Tension rises as Rachel challenges Don's strategy, leading to an argument and Don storming out.
Don and Rachel meet at a lounge to discuss their previous heated argument. They engage in a deep conversation about love, loneliness, and the meaning of life. Don expresses his cynical views on love and reveals that he lives his life as if there is no tomorrow. Rachel empathizes with Don's feelings of being out of place and disconnected. The scene ends with them acknowledging a mutual connection and the possibility of seeing each other again.
Don and Rachel have a deep conversation about love and life after their heated argument. They find a mutual connection and potential for a future meeting.
Don and Rachel have a deep conversation about love and life after their heated argument. They find a mutual connection and potential for a future meeting.

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7.75

What's Working

Theme 8.2

The screenplay's exploration of the theme of love is particularly strong. The screenplay does a great job of exploring the different facets of love, f...

Characters 8.1

The complexity and depth of the main characters, Don Draper and Rachel Mencken, are particularly well-crafted. Their struggles with identity, love, an...

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Structure 7.1

The motivations and actions of certain supporting characters, such as Midge Daniels and Pete Campbell, could be further developed to provide a stronge...

Characters 8.1

Certain character arcs, such as Pete Campbell's, could be further developed to showcase more significant growth and transformation.

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Characters

8.1

The screenplay exhibits strengths in character development, creating complex and relatable characters with believable ar...

Analysis: The screenplay exhibits strengths in character development, creating complex and relatable characters with believable arcs. While the foundation is solid, there are areas where further refinement could enhance character engagement and deepen the emotional impact on the audience.

Key Strengths

The complexity and depth of the main characters, Don Draper and Rachel Mencken, are particularly well-crafted. Their struggles with identity, love, and connection resonate strongly with the audience.

Areas to Improve

Certain character arcs, such as Pete Campbell's, could be further developed to showcase more significant growth and transformation.

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Premise

7.9

The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a compelling and clear narrative foundation. However, it could benefit...

Analysis: The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a compelling and clear narrative foundation. However, it could benefit from further refinement to enhance its originality and depth while maintaining its clarity and audience engagement.

Key Strengths

The premise establishes a strong and relatable protagonist in Don Draper, whose personal struggles and ambition create an engaging narrative arc.

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Structure

7.1

The screenplay exhibits a solid narrative structure, effectively introducing characters and establishing the central con...

Analysis: The screenplay exhibits a solid narrative structure, effectively introducing characters and establishing the central conflict. However, the plot development could be refined to enhance clarity and coherence, ensuring a smooth and engaging flow throughout the story.

Key Strengths

The introduction of Don Draper as a complex and enigmatic character is particularly effective, immediately capturing the audience's attention and establishing the foundation for his character arc.

Areas to Improve

The motivations and actions of certain supporting characters, such as Midge Daniels and Pete Campbell, could be further developed to provide a stronger foundation for their involvement in the plot.

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Theme

8.2

This screenplay effectively conveys its themes and messages, exploring them through the characters, plot, and dialogue....

Analysis: This screenplay effectively conveys its themes and messages, exploring them through the characters, plot, and dialogue. The themes are relevant and relatable, and the screenplay's exploration of them is thought-provoking and emotionally engaging. However, some aspects of the message could be clarified and integrated more seamlessly into the narrative.

Key Strengths

The screenplay's exploration of the theme of love is particularly strong. The screenplay does a great job of exploring the different facets of love, from romantic love to familial love to self-love.

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Visual Impact

7.4

The screenplay displays a vivid and engaging visual style, particularly in the scenes set in the bar and at Midge's apar...

Analysis: The screenplay displays a vivid and engaging visual style, particularly in the scenes set in the bar and at Midge's apartment. The descriptions are evocative and effectively capture the atmosphere and mood of these scenes. However, there is room for improvement in terms of maintaining consistency and originality throughout the screenplay.

Key Strengths

The opening scene in the bar is particularly well-written, with vivid descriptions that create a strong sense of atmosphere and introduce Don Draper as a complex and enigmatic character.

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Emotional Impact

7.5

The screenplay effectively captures the emotional experiences of its characters and the time period in which they exist....

Analysis: The screenplay effectively captures the emotional experiences of its characters and the time period in which they exist. Its strengths lie in creating relatable characters and conveying the complexities of their relationships. However, it could benefit from expanding the emotional depth of certain character arcs and exploring more nuanced emotional dimensions.

Key Strengths

The screenplay effectively captures the emotional complexities of the characters and the time period, creating a strong sense of emotional resonance with the audience.

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Conflict

7.8

The screenplay exhibits a solid foundation in presenting conflict and stakes, setting the stage for a compelling story....

Analysis: The screenplay exhibits a solid foundation in presenting conflict and stakes, setting the stage for a compelling story. However, there are areas where further development could enhance the narrative tension and audience engagement. By deepening the central conflict, escalating stakes, and exploring alternative resolutions, the screenplay can reach its full potential in captivating its audience.

Key Strengths

The screenplay establishes a clear central conflict that drives the narrative forward.
The stakes are personal and compelling, providing a strong foundation for character motivation.

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Originality

7.1

The screenplay exhibits a notable level of originality and creativity in its exploration of complex characters and their...

Analysis: The screenplay exhibits a notable level of originality and creativity in its exploration of complex characters and their interactions within a period drama. However, there are some missed opportunities to innovate within the overarching storyline.

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Screenplay Story Analysis

Story Critique The overall story has a strong focus on character development and explores themes of loyalty, identity, and societal expectations. The dialogue is engaging and the scenes between Don and Midge, as well as Don and Rachel, provide depth to the characters. However, there are several repetitive scenes that could be condensed or removed to improve pacing. The tension and conflict between characters is well-executed and adds to the overall drama of the story. The setting of 1960s Manhattan adds an interesting backdrop and enhances the authenticity of the narrative. The screenplay successfully introduces and establishes the main characters and their relationships, leaving the audience intrigued for what comes next.

Suggestions: To improve the screenplay, consider condensing or removing repetitive scenes to enhance the pacing. Explore opportunities for more visual storytelling and use the setting of 1960s Manhattan to its full potential. Introduce additional subplots or conflicts to further engage the audience. Develop secondary characters to add depth and complexity to the story. Consider exploring new themes or adding additional layers to the existing themes to add depth to the overall narrative.

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CharacterInconsistencies

Character Peggy Olson
Description Peggy's behavior towards Pete Campbell seems inconsistent. In scene 14, she appears uncomfortable and offended by his advances, yet in scene 29, she willingly invites him into her apartment despite his drunken state. This shift could be explored further to ensure character consistency.
( Scene 14 (14) Scene 29 (29) )
Character Don Draper
Description Don's sudden inspiration for the 'It's Toasted' campaign seems slightly convenient, given his earlier struggle to find a solution. While his character is portrayed as a brilliant ad-man, the transition could be smoother to avoid the impression of a forced plot resolution.
( Scene 25 (25) )

StoryInconsistencies

PlotHoles

Description The disappearance of Greta's research report from Don's wastebasket and its subsequent use by Pete Campbell creates a plot hole. It's unclear how Pete obtained the report, and the lack of explanation raises questions about the office's security and Don's awareness of his surroundings.
( Scene 23 (23) Scene 26 (26) )

DialogueAuthenticity

Description The busboy's eloquent and introspective responses to Don's questions about smoking habits feel slightly unrealistic for his role and the time period. The dialogue could be adjusted to reflect a more natural and less philosophical tone.
( Scene 4 (4) )

Redundancies

Element Complimenting Don's appearance
( Scene 5 (5) Scene 11 (12) Scene 14 (14) )
Suggestion The repeated comments about Don looking 'like a hundred bucks' could be reduced to avoid redundancy. Perhaps one instance could be replaced with a different observation or interaction to maintain variety.

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Don - Score: 82/100

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Personality

MBTI: INTJ
Enneagram: Type 4 - The Individualist

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Strongest: #25
Weakest: #4

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 9/10

Quintessential 1960s advertising executive with deep conflicts.

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Fears authenticity and struggles with his past.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 7/10

Remains in a cycle of superficiality but hints at potential change.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Insightful yet often laced with aloofness.

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Driven by external success but internally conflicted.

Relationship Dynamics 8/10

Complex relationships marked by superficiality and longing.

Scene Impact 9/10

Moves the plot through personal and professional revelations.

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Embodies the conflicted hero of the advertising world.

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Personal turmoil mirrors overarching societal themes.

Emotional Resonance 8/10

Elicits tension and sympathy through complex emotions.

Foundational Definition

Score: 9

Don Draper is a complex character embodying the quintessential advertising executive of the 1960s with a disguise of charm and sophistication that masks a turbulent inner life. His values revolve around success, the illusion of the American Dream, and the ability to manipulate public perception through advertising. This foundation shapes his identity not only in the advertising world but also in his personal life, where he grapples with authenticity and self-exploration.

Values And Beliefs: Success, manipulation of perception, the American Dream.

Strengths And Skills: Charisma, creativity in advertising, deep understanding of consumer psychology.

Suggestions

Explore Don's backstory in greater depth to uncover how his past influences his current behavior.
Consider developing scenes that showcase Don's internal struggles with authenticity in contrast to his public persona.

Follow-up Questions

How does Don's upbringing and history affect his interactions with other characters?
What specific values does Don compromise on in his quest for success in advertising?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 8

Don carries significant emotional baggage, notably his identity crisis and fear of facing his past. His flaws include a tendency to avoid vulnerability and a reliance on alcohol and superficial relationships. This internal conflict drives his actions and decisions, leading to both personal and professional challenges.

Character Wound: Identity crisis stemming from a hidden past.

Character Flaws: Avoidance of vulnerability, reliance on alcohol, superficial relationships.

Suggestions

Introduce flashbacks that highlight Don’s emotional wounds and how they shape his decisions.
Include dialogues that reveal his internal conflicts more explicitly.

Follow-up Questions

How does Don's fear of vulnerability manifest in his relationships?
What key moments might prompt Don to confront his emotional wounds?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 7

Don demonstrates a pattern of superficial success while masking deeper issues. His journey oscillates between moments of clarity, where he critiques societal norms, and times of regression, where he reverts to self-destructive behavior. This arc illustrates both an adherence to and resistance against his need for change, impacting his relationships and career.

Polarity Changes: Professionally successful yet personally fragmented, with moments of introspection.

Transformation Triggers: Conflict in personal relationships, pressure from work responsibilities.

Suggestions

Further develop relationships that act as catalysts for potential change in Don's character.
Create scenarios where Don faces the repercussions of avoiding personal growth.

Follow-up Questions

What relationships challenge Don’s status quo most effectively?
What external pressures might finally push Don toward a meaningful transformation?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Don's dialogue reflects his skill as an ad man, marked by persuasive language that conceals underlying insecurities. His speech is often layered, inviting multiple interpretations that resonate with the audience on an emotional level, establishing him as both relatable and enigmatic.

Unique Voice: Charismatic, persuasive, often concealing true feelings under a veneer of confidence.

Suggestions

Incorporate more poignant moments where Don's true thoughts are expressed in contrast to his public persona.
Enhance subtext within conversations to reflect his internal conflict more dynamically.

Follow-up Questions

How can Don’s dialogue reflect his internal conflicts more effectively in key scenes?
What specific lines can reinforce his complex emotional state while still maintaining his charismatic exterior?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 7

Don's decisions often prioritize professional gain and maintaining an image of success, leading to complex relationships and moral ambiguities. His motivations create conflict, as he is caught between the pursuit of external validation and the need for genuine connections.

Motivations: Desire for success, fear of vulnerability, and search for identity.

Desires Vs Needs: Externally desires success; internally needs connection and authenticity.

Suggestions

Develop more situations where Don’s choices have significant consequences for others.
Include scenarios that force Don to confront the ramifications of his decisions on his personal life.

Follow-up Questions

What specific decisions highlight the tension between Don’s professional ambitions and personal needs?
How does Don’s behavior in the office contrast with his actions at home?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 8

Don's relationships often reveal his disconnection from authenticity, struggling to balance personal desires with societal expectations. His interactions with women, colleagues, and family members illustrate his conflict between maintaining a façade and seeking genuine connection.

Suggestions

Create deeper interactions that reveal the nuances of Don's relationships with key characters.
Introduce pivotal moments that challenge Don’s relationships and force him to reassess his connections.

Follow-up Questions

How do Don’s relationships illustrate his internal struggles with identity?
What are the pivotal dynamics that could drive Don to confront his deeper emotional needs?

Scene Impact

Score: 9

Don's presence often propels the narrative, either through his creative inspirations in advertising or through his personal dilemmas that bring tension to scenes. Each moment he is involved resonates deeply, highlighting both conflicts within himself and his interactions with others.

Suggestions

Enhance tension in scenes through deliberate juxtaposition of Don's inner thoughts and external actions.
Maximize conflict in key scenes through focus on Don’s decisions impacting others.

Follow-up Questions

In which scenes does Don's presence most dramatically shift the emotional tone?
What moments can be increased in significance to showcase his role in driving the narrative?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 9

Don fulfills the role of the tortured protagonist—a man who projects an image of success while struggling with profound existential crises. His journey through the world of advertising symbolizes broader societal conflicts of the era, reflecting the dark underbelly of the American Dream.

Symbolic Role: Archetype of the troubled artist dealing with societal pressures.

Suggestions

Further develop Don's symbolic conflicts to resonate with contemporary issues while maintaining period relevance.
Integrate interactions that emphasize his dual roles as an ad man and a man seeking personal truth.

Follow-up Questions

What elements of Don's journey parallel contemporary societal struggles?
How can Don's character challenge traditional archetypes in storytelling?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 9

Don's character arc intertwines seamlessly with themes of identity, consumerism, and the pursuit of happiness. His personal and professional crises reflect deeper societal conflicts, positioning him as a focal point for exploring the disillusionment of the American Dream.

Suggestions

Highlight moments that connect Don's character to broader themes within the narrative.
Use Don's internal struggles to draw attention to societal critiques presented throughout the screenplay.

Follow-up Questions

What specific moments in Don's journey accentuate the screenplay’s major themes?
How can Don's character development showcase the evolving societal landscape?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 8

Don's character effectively elicits a range of emotions—from sympathy for his vulnerabilities to tension as he navigates his flaws. His inner conflicts and the consequences of his choices resonate deeply with the audience, creating an emotional connection.

Emotional Impact: Evokes tension and sympathy for his conflicting desires.

Suggestions

Create scenarios that heighten emotional stakes in Don's relationships.
Further develop dialogue that allows audiences to engage with Don's struggles on a deeper level.

Follow-up Questions

What scenarios would best amplify the emotional highs and lows in Don's journey?
How can moments of vulnerability be portrayed to enhance audience connection?

Personality Types

MBTI: intj

Don displays characteristics consistent with the INTJ archetype, such as strategic thinking, a desire for efficiency, and a strong focus on long-term vision, particularly evident in his professional life. His internal struggles and layered persona suggest a mindset that seeks understanding and mastery over complex situations.

Confidence: 80%

Possible Alternative Type: infj (20%)

Suggestions

Utilize Don's INTJ traits in moments of strategic planning or problem-solving in the narrative.
Consider showing aspects of INFJ sensitivity in his interactions with women and relationships.

Follow-up Questions

How do Don's MBTI traits influence his decision-making and relationships?
What conflicts arise from the juxtaposition of his INTJ/INFJ tendencies?

Enneagram: type 4 - the individualist

Don embodies aspects of the Type 4 Enneagram, particularly the struggle with identity and a desire for authenticity amidst feeling misunderstood. His complex emotions and self-perception align with this archetype, suggesting a yearning for deeper connection and understanding.

Confidence: 70%

Possible Alternative Type: type 3 - the achiever (30%)

Suggestions

Explore Don's type 4 tendencies through creative expressions in advertising and personal situations.
Deepen scenes that highlight his frustrations with authenticity versus societal expectations.

Follow-up Questions

How do Don's Enneagram traits manifest in his personal relationships?
What internal conflicts arise from his desire to be seen authentically?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (25)

The boardroom scene where Don pitches a new direction for 'Lucky Strike' showcases both his creative genius and his ability to read the room, demonstrating his strength as a manipulator.

Why: This scene stands out as it encapsulates both Don's professional prowess and deep psychological nuances, reflecting his inner turmoil and adeptness at navigating power dynamics.

Weakest Scene (4)

The scene in the Knick Knack bar where Don interacts with the busboy starts strong but falls flat in emotional stakes, largely due to its drawn-out nature.

Why: The busboy casts Don as sympathetic, but the lack of meaningful conflict reduces overall impact.

Suggestions:

Add a layer of tension by exploring Don's thoughts regarding race and class during this interaction.
Consider boosting drama by showing Don's internal conflict while observing others engaging more freely.

Peggy - Score: 78/100

Personality

MBTI: ENFJ
Enneagram: Type 3: Achiever

Scenes

Strongest: #26

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Young woman in a male-dominated industry, seeking independence.

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Struggles with ambition versus societal constraints.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 8/10

Peggy evolves from an inexperienced secretary to a competent professional.

Dialogue And Voice 7/10

Peggy's dialogue reflects her naivety and desire for respect.

Behavior And Choices 8/10

Peggy's choices reflect her ambition and struggle for validation.

Relationship Dynamics 7/10

Peggy navigates complex relationships in a male-dominated environment.

Scene Impact 8/10

Peggy's presence drives themes of ambition and gender dynamics.

Role Fulfillment 8/10

Peggy serves as a representation of female ambition in the 1960s.

Thematic Plot Integration 8/10

Peggy's journey intertwines with the themes of ambition and gender equality.

Emotional Resonance 9/10

Elicits sympathy through her struggle for self-identity and validation.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Peggy Olson is a young woman starting her career in a male-dominated advertising industry during the 1960s. As the new secretary for Don Draper, she embodies the aspirations and challenges of women seeking professional success in an era when their roles were largely limited to the domestic sphere. Peggy has ambitions that extend beyond her secretarial duties, reflecting her desire for independence and recognition in a world that often undermines her potential. Her experiences demonstrate the balancing act she must navigate between her professional ambitions and societal expectations.

Values And Beliefs: Ambition, independence, and the pursuit of self-identity.

Strengths And Skills: Creative thinking, adaptability, and a willingness to learn.

Suggestions

Provide more backstory on Peggy's upbringing to deepen her motivations.
Include scenes that highlight her creative contributions to projects.

Follow-up Questions

How does Peggy navigate her ambitions in a workplace dominated by men?
What specific experiences shape Peggy's views on women’s roles in society?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Peggy struggles with dual pressures: the career aspirations she harbors against the reality of gender discrimination in the workplace. This internal conflict is compounded by her youthful innocence and naiveté regarding relationships and office politics. As she faces challenges, including unwanted advances from colleagues, Peggy's strength is tested. Her journey reveals an emotional wound related to validation, as she often feels overshadowed by more experienced male counterparts.

Character Wound: Wound of not being taken seriously in a professional capacity.

Character Flaws: Naivety and occasional lack of confidence.

Suggestions

Delve deeper into Peggy's reactions to workplace sexism to illustrate growth.
Create scenarios that challenge Peggy’s confidence and force her to confront her insecurities.

Follow-up Questions

What does Peggy learn from her experiences with the men in her office?
How do her personal relationships reflect her internal conflicts?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 8

Throughout the screenplay, Peggy's character arc develops from a young secretary overwhelmed by the professional setting to someone who advocates for herself and defines her career path. Events such as her first day at Sterling Cooper and interactions with Don Draper serve as critical points in her evolution, motivating her to assert herself and embrace her ambitions.

Polarity Changes: Initial naivety to developing self-confidence and assertiveness.

Transformation Triggers: Key events include her promotion, confrontations with Sir Roger, and her interactions with Don.

Suggestions

Highlight more instances where Peggy assertively defends her ideas.
Show her reactions to setbacks to emphasize her growth and resilience.

Follow-up Questions

What does Peggy need to become more assertive in her role?
Are there moments in the screenplay that highlight her transformation?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 7

Peggy's speech patterns exhibit her struggle for authority and respect in her interactions with male colleagues. Initially, her dialogue features self-doubt and trepidation, but as she gains confidence, her voice becomes more assertive. This evolution is crucial in cementing her development throughout the narrative.

Unique Voice: A mix of earnestness and occasional misstep, reflecting her youth and ambition.

Suggestions

Strengthen Peggy's voice by providing her with more assertive lines.
Contrast her earlier dialogue with later interactions to highlight her growth.

Follow-up Questions

How do Peggy's speech patterns change as she matures in her career?
Which dialogue moments are most pivotal in communicating her character development?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 8

Peggy's actions throughout the screenplay often stem from her desire to be taken seriously in her role as a secretary. From her willingness to speak up during meetings to seeking advice and mentorship from Don, she balances her ambitions against the risks posed by a male-dominated workplace. Each decision she makes serves as a step towards establishing her identity within the industry.

Motivations: To be recognized as a competent professional and to break free from traditional gender roles.

Desires Vs Needs: Externally, she desires a successful career; internally, she needs validation and respect.

Suggestions

Incorporate choices that emphasize her moral compass when faced with unethical workplace behavior.
Show moments where she acts against her instincts to create internal conflict.

Follow-up Questions

What specific decisions does Peggy make that showcase her growth throughout the screenplay?
How does her ambition impact her relationships with her co-workers?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 7

Peggy's interactions span a spectrum of dynamics, from the supportive mentor-protégé relationship with Don to the predatory behavior of male peers like Pete. These relationships reflect the broader themes of gender dynamics within the workplace. Peggy exhibits both vulnerability and strength, as she navigates this complex web of alliances and rivalries.

Suggestions

Deepen her relationship with Joan to explore themes of female solidarity.
Include more dialogues that reflect her evolving relationship with Don to illustrate mutual respect.

Follow-up Questions

How do Peggy's relationships with her male contemporaries affect her journey?
What role does female camaraderie play in her character development?

Scene Impact

Score: 8

In scenes where Peggy is involved, her actions often introduce conflict or highlight the gender tensions present in her workplace. Her struggles for recognition and respect create tension not just for her but also among her male colleagues, as they grapple with their perceptions of her abilities and ambitions.

Suggestions

Increase her involvement in critical decision-making moments to enhance her impact.
Portray her as a catalyst for change in discussions on gender roles within the agency.

Follow-up Questions

Which scenes best capture Peggy's character development and impact on the narrative?
How can Peggy's presence in scenes alter the emotional landscape?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 8

Throughout the screenplay, Peggy fulfills her role by embodying the challenges women faced while trying to establish careers during the 1960s. Her journey represents the broader women's movement, making her a crucial character in your screenplay's thematic landscape. She actively challenges stereotypes and seeks to affirm her place in a man’s world.

Symbolic Role: Symbolizes the struggle for women's independence and rights in the workplace.

Suggestions

Emphasize her achievements to illustrate her role as a pioneer for women.
Explore her conflicts with male authority figures to further define her symbolic role.

Follow-up Questions

How does Peggy's journey align with the overarching themes of gender and power dynamics?
In what ways does her character challenge or reinforce the status quo?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 8

Peggy's experiences reflect the screenplay’s broader themes of ambition, identity, and equality. Her struggles for respect and recognition as a woman in advertising carry significant narrative weight, providing commentary on the societal changes during the 1960s. Each conflict she faces contributes to the theme of independence.

Suggestions

Highlight pivotal moments that align her personal growth with societal changes.
Integrate her perspective on gender equality in critical dialogue.

Follow-up Questions

How does Peggy’s character reflect the societal changes occurring in the 1960s?
What thematic messages are reinforced through her narrative?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 9

Peggy effectively generates emotional investment from the audience through her journey of self-discovery and ambition. As she faces gender-related adversities, viewers resonate with her struggles and triumphs, sparking empathy and tension. Her character arc serves as a powerful reminder of the challenges faced by women seeking equality.

Emotional Impact: Captivates the audience with her evolution from insecurity to confidence.

Suggestions

Introduce more emotionally charged moments that showcase her struggles.
Create moments where Peggy reflects on her past to deepen audience connection.

Follow-up Questions

What key moments in Peggy's development evoke the strongest emotional responses?
How can her journey be better tied to the audience's understanding of her struggles?

Personality Types

MBTI: enfj

Peggy demonstrates traits of an ENFJ through her empathetic nature, strong social skills, and leadership qualities as she navigates the complexities of her workplace.

Confidence: 75%

Suggestions

Consider how her traits can inform her interpersonal skills and conflict resolution.
Use the ENFJ qualities to enhance her interactions with both male and female characters.

Follow-up Questions

How can Peggy's assertiveness be further represented in her MBTI type?
Does her character align with ENFJ traits throughout her journey?

Enneagram: type 3: achiever

Peggy showcases the characteristics of an Enneagram Type 3, demonstrating a focus on success, recognition, and adaptability as she strives for her place in the advertising world.

Confidence: 80%

Suggestions

Utilize her Type 3 traits to emphasize the challenges of balancing personal ambition with authenticity.
Explore how her fear of failure motivates her actions and decisions.

Follow-up Questions

How does Peggy's growth reflect the dynamics of a Type 3 personality?
In what ways can you emphasize her motivations related to success?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (26)

In the scene where Don and Peggy interact during a significant meeting, Peggy asserts her ideas, demonstrating her growth and confidence in her abilities.

Why: This scene stands out as it encapsulates Peggy's journey towards empowerment, emphasizing her transformation from insecure to a competent professional.

Weakest Scene (0)

none

Why: none

Suggestions:

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Roger - Score: 73/100

Role

Mentor

Personality

MBTI: ESFP
Enneagram: Seven

Scenes

Strongest: #16

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Wealthy, charming, mentor figure.

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Superficial charm hides deeper insecurities.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 6/10

Roger represents a constant in the evolving world of advertising.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Witty and charismatic with a penchant for sarcasm.

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Enjoys a lavish lifestyle, makes decisions based on comfort and charm.

Relationship Dynamics 7/10

Mentor to Don; unchallenged by peers.

Scene Impact 8/10

Brings a sense of levity and humor to serious scenes.

Role Fulfillment 7/10

Acts as a mentor figure steering traditional advertising values.

Thematic Plot Integration 8/10

Represents the tension between tradition and modernity in advertising.

Emotional Resonance 7/10

Charm hides deeper emotional struggles.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Roger Sterling is a wealthy and charming advertising executive at Sterling Cooper, known for his charisma and humor. He embodies the lifestyle of the 1960s corporate elite, often smoking, drinking, and engaging in flirtatious banter. His confidence and connections allow him to navigate business with ease, reflecting a worldview shaped by privilege and a belief in the classic adages of salesmanship and brand loyalty. This foundation makes him both a mentor and an accomplice to Don Draper’s exploits.

Values And Beliefs: Success through charm, loyalty to traditional advertising methods, and enjoyment of life’s pleasures.

Strengths And Skills: Charisma, networking ability, strategic thinking.

Suggestions

Enhance Roger's backstory to explain how his privilege influences his business decisions.
Show more of Roger's vulnerabilities to create a more rounded character.

Follow-up Questions

What moments in Roger’s past have shaped his business ethics?
How does Roger balance his personal and professional life?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Beneath his affable exterior, Roger struggles with the changing landscape of advertising and his legacy. His relationships can be superficial, reflecting a fear of connection which may stem from his privileged upbringing. Additionally, his flirtations and avoidance of commitment reveal emotional wounds that suggest a desire for deeper connection but an inability to attain it. This internal conflict presents an opportunity for growth, indicating potential vulnerability beneath his confident façade.

Character Wound: Fear of intimacy and vulnerability.

Character Flaws: Superficiality, avoiding responsibility, potential misogyny.

Suggestions

Incorporate scenes where Roger confronts his fears of deeper relationships.
Build moments that reveal Roger’s regret about his life choices.

Follow-up Questions

What specific events have led Roger to fear vulnerability?
How does Roger perceive the changing roles of women in his workplace?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 6

Roger starts the story as a key player in advertising but faces the necessity of adapting to new trends and societal expectations. Despite his charm and experienced position, he often resists change, indicating a slower character arc relative to the shifts happening around him. Ultimately, he embodies the older generation’s reluctance to acknowledge the evolution happening in the workplace and society at large.

Polarity Changes: Limited significant personal growth; more involved in guiding others.

Transformation Triggers: Witnessing the changing dynamics within Sterling Cooper, especially with younger executives.

Suggestions

Create pivotal moments where Roger must adapt or face irrelevance.
Introduce conflicts that challenge Roger’s worldview directly.

Follow-up Questions

What specific events trigger Roger to confront his own stasis?
How do younger characters influence Roger's perspective?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Roger's dialogue is imbued with humor and charm, often acting as comic relief while also revealing his underlying motivations. His sharp wit not only entertains but also subtly undermines the seriousness of the business, reflecting his enjoyment of life. This clever tone serves to both develop his character and engage the audience.

Unique Voice: Roger's dialogue often includes dry humor, clever banter, and a laid-back attitude which reflects his wealth and confidence.

Suggestions

Include more scenes where Roger engages in heartfelt dialogue to deepen his character.
Show juxtaposition of his lighthearted comments with serious industry issues.

Follow-up Questions

How does Roger's humor affect the dynamics in serious business meetings?
What underlying emotions do Roger's jokes mask?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 7

Roger's choices often reflect his pursuit of enjoyment over responsibility. He embodies the archetype of a carefree executive who prefers to socialize and have fun instead of engaging in serious work. This behavior displays a tension between his personal desires against the growing demands of a changing industry, suggesting a possible narrative conflict in upcoming developments.

Motivations: Desire for personal enjoyment, maintaining status, and jovial connections.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires to maintain charm and leisure but needs deeper connections and adaptability.

Suggestions

Illustrate consequences of Roger's choices on his relationships.
Explore decision-making moments that show an internal conflict between fun and duty.

Follow-up Questions

How do Roger's choices impact the younger generation at Sterling Cooper?
What moments challenge Roger’s desire for leisure?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 7

Roger’s relationships, particularly with Don Draper, show a mentor dynamic, displaying camaraderie and occasional tension. He often plays the role of a wise advisor, yet he doesn't seem to face significant challenge from his peers, which highlights his position of comfort within the hierarchy. Observing how he interacts with other characters reveals moments of both encouragement and manipulation, impacting the narrative direction significantly.

Suggestions

Introduce rival characters to challenge Roger’s authority.
Encourage more intricate dialogues with characters to depict deeper connections or conflicts.

Follow-up Questions

What does Roger’s mentorship reveal about Don's character development?
How does Roger maintain his relationships without deep vulnerabilities?

Scene Impact

Score: 8

Roger's presence can lighten the mood, often breaking tension with humor or charm. His ability to draw laughs during intense moments makes him a pivotal character in scenes that require emotional balance. This impact not only entertains but often influences the decisions and emotions of those around him, highlighting his importance in maintaining team morale and focus.

Suggestions

Maximize his charm in crisis scenes to reinforce relational dynamics.
Utilize Roger as a lighthearted character in darker moments for greater contrast.

Follow-up Questions

How do other characters react to Roger's humor in tense scenarios?
What emotional tones change when Roger is present or absent?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 7

Roger serves as a representative of the traditional values in advertising, often clashing with the evolving techniques and ideas of younger peers. His mentoring of Don and others positions him as an essential figure that upholds or clashes with emerging concepts, creating a duality of progress versus nostalgia in the storyline.

Symbolic Role: Embodiment of old-school advertising approaches.

Suggestions

Deepen Roger's conflict with young executives to explore themes of tradition vs. modernity.
Challenge his beliefs with contrasting ideologies presented by new characters.

Follow-up Questions

How does Roger’s resistance to change manifest in his interactions?
What influences challenge Roger’s role as a traditionalist?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 8

Roger's journey showcases the struggle against the progressive shift occurring in the industry. His character serves as a lens through which themes of legacy, innovation, and resistance to change can be examined. As a mentor stuck between eras, he reflects the balance of maintaining established methods while being pulled towards the modern approaches of younger colleagues, enhancing the story's core conflict.

Suggestions

Align Roger’s plot moments with themes of changing morality in advertising practices.
Create opportunities for Roger to openly discuss and reflect on the industry's direction.

Follow-up Questions

How do Roger’s values conflict with the emerging trends of the time?
What themes arise from Roger’s relationships with younger characters?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 7

Roger's character often elicits feelings of sympathy due to his charisma juxtaposed with deep-seated insecurities and emotional distance. His paradox of being both charming and neglectful creates a compelling dynamic that resonates with the audience, prompting viewers to reflect on the loneliness that often accompanies privilege and cheerfulness.

Emotional Impact: Evokes both admiration and pity due to his charm and emotional distance.

Suggestions

Incorporate more scenes that reveal Roger’s inner conflicts to deepen audience engagement.
Show the emotional consequences of Roger's choices on others for greater impact.

Follow-up Questions

What moments humanize Roger in the eyes of the audience?
How does Roger's perceived happiness contrast with his true feelings?

Personality Types

MBTI: esfp

Roger's outgoing personality and focus on experiencing the moment align well with the ESFP type, often seeking stimulation and connection through social interactions.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: estp (70%)

Suggestions

Use his ESFP traits to explore deeper emotional connections.
Incorporate decision-making moments that reveal his ESTP tendencies.

Follow-up Questions

How does Roger's outgoing nature influence workplace dynamics?
What situations push Roger to operate in more analytical ESTP ways?

Enneagram: seven

Roger's enjoyment of life and avoidance of responsibility indicate a preference for pleasure and freedom associated with Enneagram Type Seven.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: three (70%)

Suggestions

Utilize his Seven traits to explore avoidance tendencies in personal relationships.
Challenge these traits with high-stakes moments emphasizing commitment.

Follow-up Questions

How does Roger's Seven nature manifest in his professional decisions?
In what moments does Roger struggle between his desire for freedom and his responsibilities?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (16)

In the boardroom with the tobacco executives, Roger stands by Don and encourages his confidence while remaining entertaining.

Why: This scene encapsulates Roger's charm and ability to influence the tone and dynamics of serious business discussions, highlighting his role as a pivotal figure.

Weakest Scene (0)

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Why: none

Suggestions:

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Rachel - Score: 73/100

Personality

MBTI: ENTJ
Enneagram: 3

Scenes

Strongest: #28

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Strong, educated woman seeking independence

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Emotionally complex, balancing ambition and vulnerability

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 6/10

Rachel shows growth in her ability to assert herself, but her core values remain consistent.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Rachel’s dialogue reflects her assertive personality, laced with dry humor.

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Rachel’s choices reflect a desire for respect and equal footing in a male industry.

Relationship Dynamics 7/10

Rachel’s interactions with male counterparts expose her struggles for respect.

Scene Impact 8/10

Rachel significantly affects plot development with her assertiveness.

Role Fulfillment 7/10

Rachel embodies the struggle for women in a period of societal transition.

Thematic Plot Integration 8/10

Rachel's journey connects with themes of identity, gender, and ambition.

Emotional Resonance 7/10

Engages audience through relatable struggles and ambitions.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Rachel Mencken is a strong, educated woman who embodies the struggle for identity and independence in a male-dominated society. Her role as a department store executive provides her with a sense of self-worth and ambition. She values her professional identity and is determined not to let societal expectations define her. Rachel's foundational traits reflect a blend of charm, intelligence, and a desire for freedom, establishing her as a compelling character in the narrative.

Values And Beliefs: Professional success, independence, equality

Strengths And Skills: Business acumen, communication, assertiveness

Suggestions

Explore more of Rachel's backstory to enhance her depth.
Introduce scenes that showcase her decision-making in a professional context.

Follow-up Questions

What specific challenges does Rachel face in her role as a woman in business?
How does Rachel's identity as a Mencken influence her interactions?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Rachel exhibits emotional complexity rooted in her balancing act between professional ambition and personal relationships. Her strong demeanor belies an underlying vulnerability stemming from her lack of romantic fulfillment and the pressure of societal expectations. Her dialogue with Don reveals her internal conflict regarding love and independence, highlighting her flaws in navigating personal connections while maintaining her ambition.

Character Wound: Fear of unfulfilled potential and loneliness

Character Flaws: Defensiveness, reluctance to invest emotionally

Suggestions

Develop more scenes that reveal her vulnerabilities.
Incorporate moments that challenge her views on love and success.

Follow-up Questions

What fears drive Rachel's reluctance to embrace romantic love?
How do Rachel's relationships challenge her professional goals?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 6

Rachel demonstrates the capacity for growth through her encounters with Don, challenging her notions of love, career, and womanhood. While she maintains her independence, her interactions can lead to deeper reflections on her desires and the fulfillment she seeks. This internal conflict presents an opportunity for development, though her transformation remains incremental rather than radical.

Polarity Changes: Encountering Don's emotional detachment, sparking reflection

Transformation Triggers: Involvement in the advertising pitch meeting with Don

Suggestions

Include pivotal moments that question Rachel's definition of success.
Painting a visual of her decision-making process during key character encounters.

Follow-up Questions

What pivotal choices can help Rachel grow beyond her current mindset?
How does Rachel's professional life influence her personal relationships?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Her speech patterns reflect intelligence and independence, with a keen sense for sarcasm and a critical view of traditional gender roles. The evolution of her dialogue, especially in interactions with Don, reveals her assertiveness and the emotional layers beneath her surface. This dynamic quality is critical to illustrating her character growth and underlying struggles.

Unique Voice: Confident, witty, sharply opinionated

Suggestions

Enhance her verbal sparring with Don to reveal deeper emotional layers.
Introduce reflective dialogue that reveals her internal conflicts.

Follow-up Questions

How can Rachel’s dialogue offer insights into her emotional state?
What subtleties in her speech could indicate her growth over time?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 7

Rachel's decisions often balance her ambitions against her fear of vulnerability. Her initial assertiveness in meetings reveals her confidence; however, her interactions with Don challenge her to reconsider her defenses. The choices she makes illustrate her grappling with the pressure to conform to societal standards versus her pursuit of an authentic life.

Motivations: Professional respect, personal fulfillment

Desires Vs Needs: Desires recognition in her professional life; needs emotional connection

Suggestions

Build situations that challenge her moral or ethical boundaries.
Create moments that require her to choose between personal desires and professional ambitions.

Follow-up Questions

What dilemmas can further test Rachel's values?
In what ways can Rachel's professional choices create personal conflict?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 7

Her relationships, especially with Don and Pete, demonstrate the tension between professional admiration and personal connections. Rachel’s assertiveness often contrasts with the expectations placed on her by men, showcasing her complexity. Through her battles for recognition, her interactions reveal both her desire for authenticity and the challenge of navigating societal restrictions.

Suggestions

Introduce conflict with female characters to enrich her dynamics.
Explore mentor-mentee relationships to highlight her ambition.

Follow-up Questions

How do Rachel's professional relationships affect her sense of self?
What conflict arises from her interactions with conflicting characters?

Scene Impact

Score: 8

In meetings, she often challenges preconceived notions and pushes back against traditional ideas. Her presence can heighten tensions, particularly when she defies expectations of her role. She enriches scenes with her perspectives, establishing her influence on the narrative arc and her relationships with other characters.

Suggestions

Ensure Rachel's stakes are clear in pivotal scenes.
Create scenes that allow her to influence the plot direction dramatically.

Follow-up Questions

What moments can showcase her influence in critical meetings?
How might her reactions shape other characters' arcs?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 7

As a female executive, Rachel's presence symbolizes the emerging independence of women in the workforce. Her interactions with male characters provide contrasts that highlight the broader societal issues of the period, thereby reinforcing her significance as a reflection of changing norms.

Symbolic Role: A representation of the changing dynamics in gender roles.

Suggestions

Deepen her symbolic role in relation to supporting characters.
Show more of her influence on other women's roles in the workplace.

Follow-up Questions

How does Rachel's role challenge traditional gender expectations?
In what ways can her character arc reflect broader societal changes?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 8

Her character interweaves personal and professional conflicts, addressing the pressures faced by women seeking independence. Rachel’s narrative reinforces the screenplay's explorations of identity and the complexities of modern relationships amid evolving societal expectations.

Suggestions

Incorporate more themes of identity in her character evolution.
Highlight moments where her decisions challenge societal norms.

Follow-up Questions

How can Rachel's choices reflect the narrative themes more explicitly?
What thematic elements are most apparent in her interactions with Don?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 7

Rachel's struggles and triumphs evoke a connection with viewers, highlighting the intersection of personal ambition and societal barriers. Her emotional depth adds layers to her character, creating relatable stakes that engage the audience more fully.

Emotional Impact: Provides insight into the challenges of women in the workplace, evoking empathy.

Suggestions

Enhance emotional stakes in her personal relationships.
Show more vulnerability to draw viewer empathy.

Follow-up Questions

How can her vulnerabilities deepen audience connections?
What moments can amplify her emotional impact?

Personality Types

MBTI: entj

Rachel demonstrates traits of a decisive and strategic thinker who values efficiency and competence, characteristic of the ENTJ personality type.

Confidence: 80%

Suggestions

Showcasing her leadership style would reinforce her ENTJ traits.
Create moments of decision making that highlight her planning skills.

Follow-up Questions

In what situations does Rachel's leadership shine through?
How does her personality type influence her interactions?

Enneagram: 3

Rachel's drive for success, recognition, and ambition reflects traits of an Enneagram Type 3, the Achiever.

Confidence: 75%

Suggestions

Reveal more about her motivations for success.
Incorporate moments of self-reflection to deepen her character.

Follow-up Questions

How does her need for achievement impact her relationships?
What triggers her insecurities about success?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (28)

Rachel's conversation with Don in the Zebra Lounge shows her assertiveness and emotional depth.

Why: This scene showcases her intelligence, charm, and the inner conflict regarding her ambitions and relationship desires.

Weakest Scene (0)

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Why: none

Suggestions:

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Pete - Score: 62/100

Role

Antagonist

Personality

MBTI: ENTJ
Enneagram: Type 3 - The Achiever

Scenes

Strongest: #15
Weakest: #19

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 7/10

Young, ambitious ad executive with entitlement.

Complexity And Depth 6/10

Emotionally insecure, entitled, and arrogant.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 5/10

Pete's ambition drives his actions but leads to intense internal conflict.

Dialogue And Voice 6/10

Dialogue reflects entitlement and arrogance.

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Decisions driven by ambition lead to conflict.

Relationship Dynamics 6/10

Struggles with his relationships due to arrogance.

Scene Impact 7/10

Introduces tension in key scenes.

Role Fulfillment 6/10

Serves as a foil to Don Draper.

Thematic Plot Integration 7/10

Embodies themes of ambition and identity.

Emotional Resonance 5/10

Elicits frustration and sympathy through arrogance.

Foundational Definition

Score: 7

Pete Campbell is introduced as a mid-twenties, charming, all-American character who represents the youthful ambition and entitlement of the emerging advertising executives in the 1960s. His established background fuels his desire for success and social validation within Sterling Cooper, which is prominently reflected in his efforts to secure his position and climb the corporate ladder. These traits highlight his superficial values and the prevailing cultural expectations of masculinity and success during this time.

Values And Beliefs: Success, social validation, ambition.

Strengths And Skills: Charming, persuasive, networking abilities.

Suggestions

Explore more of Pete's backstory to clarify his motivations.
Show moments of self-doubt to add depth to his character.

Follow-up Questions

What specific experiences shaped Pete's ambition?
How does Pete's charm play a role in his professional relationships?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 6

Pete's character is marred by emotional insecurity stemming from a need for validation and fear of mediocrity. His entitlement leads to arrogance, particularly in his treatment of women and colleagues. These internal conflicts are especially illustrated when he feels threatened by Don Draper. His desperation for recognition creates a complex portrait of a man trying to break from the shadows of others, which ultimately influences both his decisions and relationships.

Character Wound: Fear of mediocrity and rejection.

Character Flaws: Arrogance, entitlement, desperation for validation.

Suggestions

Include scenes that reveal Pete's vulnerabilities.
Create scenarios that force Pete to confront his flaws.

Follow-up Questions

What fears drive Pete's aggressive behavior?
In which situations does Pete reveal his emotional wounds?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 5

Throughout the screenplay, Pete evolves from an ambitious but naïve executive into a more desperate character who resorts to manipulation and undermining his colleagues. His pivotal moments often involve confrontations, particularly with Don, that push him closer to a path of moral ambiguity, representing the dark side of corporate ambition.

Polarity Changes: Rising ambition paired with interpersonal conflicts.

Transformation Triggers: Criticism from peers, failed connections with women.

Suggestions

Highlight key moments of conflict that force Pete to reconsider his ambition.
Illustrate how Pete's relationships impact his journey.

Follow-up Questions

What moments act as catalysts for Pete's change?
Does Pete ever question his methods in pursuit of success?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 6

Pete's speech patterns are characterized by a blend of charm and arrogance, often revealing an underlying desperation for approval. His dialogue showcases an eagerness to assert his position among peers, and when he does not receive the validation he seeks, his tone shifts toward sarcasm and defensiveness.

Unique Voice: Sarcastic humor, direct with underlying insecurity.

Suggestions

Add subtler layers to his dialogue to convey his insecurities.
Use dialogue to contrast moments of vulnerability with bravado.

Follow-up Questions

How does Pete's dialogue change in high-stakes situations?
What does his communication style reveal about his relationships with others?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 7

Pete often makes choices that stem from a blend of ambition and insecurity, such as undermining colleagues to elevate himself or pursuing superficial relationships to enhance his image. These choices create significant friction with others in the office, especially with Don, illustrating the competitive nature of their environment and Pete's desperation to succeed.

Motivations: Professional advancement, social validation.

Desires Vs Needs: Desires external validation but needs self-acceptance.

Suggestions

Reveal moments where Pete sacrifices his morality for ambition.
Show outcomes of decisions that lead to self-realization.

Follow-up Questions

What actions does Pete take that backfire on him?
In what ways do his choices reveal his character flaws?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 6

Pete's relationships reveal significant aspects of his character, particularly his interactions with women and Don Draper. His arrogance often isolates him from genuine connections, leading to conflict and resentment, especially regarding Peggy, whom he objectifies. His rivalry with Don serves as a critical dynamic that showcases his ambition as well as insecurities.

Suggestions

Integrate deeper emotional exchanges to reveal relationship complexities.
Show how Pete's ambitions affect his personal and professional relationships.

Follow-up Questions

How does Pete's treatment of women reflect his personal insecurities?
In what ways does his relationship with Don symbolize his internal conflicts?

Scene Impact

Score: 7

Pete frequently serves as a source of tension in scenes, particularly in meetings and interactions with Don. His behavior often escalates conflicts and reveals the competitiveness inherent in the advertising world, impacting the dynamics of the scenes he inhabits. He embodies the pressure of corporate ambition, making him a critical character in driving storyline energy.

Suggestions

Create scenes where Pete's ego directly leads to conflict.
Use Pete’s presence to highlight themes of ambition and rivalry.

Follow-up Questions

Which scenes do you think reveal the most about Pete's character?
How does Pete's behavior shape the interactions around him?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 6

Pete serves as both a foil and antagonist to Don Draper, embodying the ambition and ruthlessness of the next generation of advertising executives. Through his relentless pursuit of success and social status, he highlights the darker side of ambition that contrasts with Don’s more complex and introspective character, raising questions about the nature of success in the corporate world.

Symbolic Role: Represents youthful ambition and entitlement.

Suggestions

Develop Pete’s contrasts with Don to enhance dramatic tension.
Further explore the generational divide represented by Pete.

Follow-up Questions

How does Pete’s perspective challenge Don's worldview?
In what ways does their dynamic enhance the story's conflicts?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 7

Pete's journey is intertwined with themes of ambition, masculinity, and identity within the advertising industry. His character illustrates the struggle for recognition and the superficiality of success in a changing societal landscape, accentuating the tension of maintaining personal integrity amid professional ambition.

Suggestions

Link Pete’s journey more explicitly to broader themes.
Create parallels between Pete’s ambitions and societal expectations.

Follow-up Questions

What themes does Pete's character particularly amplify?
How does Pete's story mirror the larger narrative of cultural change?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 5

Pete evokes mixed emotions, ranging from frustration at his arrogance to sympathy for his underlying insecurities. His desperate attempts to seek validation often engage the audience, revealing the vulnerabilities that lie beneath his facade of confidence.

Emotional Impact: Creates sympathy through his insecurities and desperation.

Suggestions

Develop more vulnerable moments to heighten audience connection.
Include scenes showing the consequences of his arrogance.

Follow-up Questions

What emotions do you feel toward Pete’s ambitions?
How does the audience's empathy shift throughout the screenplay?

Personality Types

MBTI: entj

Pete displays traits consistent with an ENTJ personality, showcasing ambition, leadership, and a goal-oriented mindset, coupled with a strong focus on effectiveness and achievement.

Confidence: 85%

Suggestions

Incorporate situations that challenge Pete’s natural leadership.
Explore relational dynamics with other personality types.

Follow-up Questions

How does Pete’s MBTI influence his interactions in the office?
What instances highlight ENTJ traits in Pete’s character?

Enneagram: type 3 - the achiever

Pete's manifestation of traits associated with a Type 3 aligns with his pursuit of success and image-conscious behavior. His focus on accomplishments often leads him to neglect deeper emotional connections.

Confidence: 90%

Suggestions

Show patterns of behavior where Pete's drive overshadows personal connection.
Explore internal conflict when he fails to achieve or is perceived as unimportant.

Follow-up Questions

How does Pete’s Achiever type affect his relationships?
In what ways does his type influence his decision-making?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (15)

The moment where Pete confronts Don about his career aspirations.

Why: This scene emphasizes his ambition and desperation, showcasing the competitive dynamic between him and Don, illustrating the struggles of a young executive.

Weakest Scene (19)

Pete's pitch meeting with Rachel Mencken where he attempts to showcase his ideas.

Why: This scene highlights his desperation and reveals how easily he is overshadowed by Don, making him appear less competent.

Suggestions:

Enhance Pete's contributions in the pitch to show his competence.
Add a scene where he triumphs in securing a deal.

Midge - Score: 72/100

Personality

MBTI: ENFP
Enneagram: 7

Scenes

Strongest: #6
Weakest: #5

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Independent and creative woman in a changing era.

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Navigates professional ambitions and societal expectations.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 6/10

Midge exemplifies a character in stasis, embodying freedom but not necessarily seeking emotional growth.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Midge's dialogue is lively, playful, and confident, reflecting her creative personality.

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Midge's choices reflect her desire for independence while hinting at a fear of vulnerability.

Relationship Dynamics 8/10

Midge's relationships primarily revolve around romantic entanglements with men, highlighting her independence.

Scene Impact 7/10

Midge's presence adds a vibrant energy to scenes, particularly through her interactions with Don.

Role Fulfillment 6/10

Midge serves as a representation of the modern woman, challenging traditional gender roles.

Thematic Plot Integration 7/10

Midge's journey intertwines with themes of independence and emotional conflict.

Emotional Resonance 8/10

Evokes sympathy and connection through her independence.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Midge Daniels is portrayed as a strong, independent woman who embodies the changing cultural landscape of the early 1960s. As an artist working on greeting cards, she represents the modern, free-spirited women of the era who challenge traditional gender roles. Her confidence is evident as she engages Don Draper with playful banter, asserting her independence and creativity. At the beginning of the story, she appears to balance her professional ambitions with her romantic interests, viewing her relationship with Don as one of convenience rather than devotion.

Values And Beliefs: Independence, Creativity, Self-empowerment

Strengths And Skills: Artistic talent, Wit, Assertiveness

Suggestions

Explore deeper backstory to enhance understanding of Midge's ambitions.
Show more interactions that highlight her professional relationships and struggles.

Follow-up Questions

How does Midge's career influence her view on relationships with men?
What past experiences have shaped Midge's assertive personality?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Midge's internal complexity stems from her struggle to balance her professional identity with her personal relationships. While she exudes confidence, she also navigates societal expectations that dictate women's roles during this period. Her emotional depth is hinted at through her interactions with Don, indicating a longing for genuine connection even as she maintains a casual demeanor. This duality adds layers to her character, showcasing her vulnerability beneath her tough exterior.

Character Wound: Desire for a deeper emotional connection while asserting independence.

Character Flaws: Fear of commitment, Possible emotional detachment

Suggestions

Develop scenes that poignantly reveal her vulnerabilities.
Incorporate interactions that show the contrast between her public persona and private emotions.

Follow-up Questions

What are Midge's fears regarding deeper relationships?
How does she reconcile her independence with her desire for connection?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 6

Throughout the episode, Midge remains relatively static, showcasing her carefree attitude and guarded nature when it comes to commitment. While Don expresses longing for something more profound, Midge seems content in her current state—reflecting a goal of maintaining her independence over emotional entanglements. The potential for growth exists, but it remains unexplored, suggesting that a significant trigger should challenge her status quo.

Polarity Changes: Limited; largely consistent in her views on independence.

Transformation Triggers: Midge's encounters with Don might trigger thoughts on her personal desires and ambitions.

Suggestions

Introduce conflicts that challenge Midge's belief in casual relationships.
Create circumstances that force her to confront her emotions.

Follow-up Questions

What event could catalyze Midge's reevaluation of her relationship style?
Could Midge's arc involve learning to balance independence with emotional depth?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Midge's speech is characterized by a witty repartee that contributes to her charm and confidence. Her playful sarcasm serves as both a shield and a tool for flirting, enriching her character's portrayal in her interactions with Don. This distinct voice enables her to assert her independence and keep conversations light, signaling her comfort with her sexual agency in the societal context of the time.

Unique Voice: Playful sarcasm and assertiveness.

Suggestions

Incorporate more nuanced dialogue that reveals deeper insecurities.
Provide moments where her dialogue shifts to reflect vulnerability rather than just playfulness.

Follow-up Questions

How does Midge's dialogue evolve in response to emotional situations?
What specific lines would establish her motivations more clearly?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 7

Midge's behavior is driven by her choices to engage in casual relationships and pursue her artistic career without the constraints of traditional expectations. However, her casual demeanor masks a deeper need for emotional fulfillment and stability, suggesting that her choices are a way to maintain control over her life. As she interacts with Don, her choices reveal both her enjoyment of the moment and hints of an emotional void.

Motivations: Desire for freedom and personal expression.

Desires Vs Needs: Externally, Midge desires excitement and romance; internally, she needs emotional connection and security.

Suggestions

Create narrative moments where Midge's choices lead to unintended consequences.
Explore her decision-making process regarding relationships to add depth.

Follow-up Questions

How do Midge's choices affect her relationships with other women in her field?
What choices could highlight her internal conflict more starkly?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 8

Midge's dynamic with Don Draper is central to her character, revealing layers of attraction, resistance, and potential emotional conflict. While she enjoys their chemistry, she also expresses clear boundaries, resisting deeper commitments. This interplay underscores her preference for autonomy over relationships, presenting a challenge to the traditional roles of women in her society. The interactions with other characters, especially Don, serve to highlight her cleverness and charm, while also eliciting questions about her true aspirations.

Suggestions

Deepen her interactions with supporting female characters to explore different relationship dynamics.
Show conflicts with other characters that reflect her independence versus societal expectations.

Follow-up Questions

How would Midge react if Don wanted something more serious?
What are Midge's views on the expectations placed on women in her industry?

Scene Impact

Score: 7

In the scenes featuring Midge, her energy and attitude contribute significantly to the film's overall tone. She injects humor and flirtation into dialogue, creating tension and intrigue in her interactions with Don. Through her charm and confidence, she introduces a sense of modernity to the screenplay, reflecting the evolving attitudes toward women and relationships during the 1960s. Midge's dynamic presence serves to challenge Don's own views about women, further emphasizing her role in the narrative.

Suggestions

Create dynamic moments where Midge's actions create pivotal shifts in character motivations.
Integrate scenes with Midge that juxtapose her independence against traditional expectations to heighten conflict.

Follow-up Questions

What kind of scene would best showcase Midge's assertiveness?
How can Midge's absence from a scene create a sense of loss or longing?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 6

Midge’s role as a modern woman reflects the societal changes during the 1960s, serving as a foil to Don's character. While she embodies the spirit of sexual liberation and independence, her interactions with Don expose the tensions between male and female roles in that era. Even without a traditional narrative arc, Midge establishes herself as a powerful representation of the female experience, pushing back against conventional expectations.

Symbolic Role: Modern femme fatale, symbolizing independence and sexual agency.

Suggestions

Strengthen Midge's storyline to make her a more integral part of the overall narrative arc.
Explore interactions that challenge her role as a modern woman within the male-dominated advertising industry.

Follow-up Questions

How does Midge compare to other female characters in terms of agency?
What can Midge's journey teach Don about gender roles?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 7

Midge is woven into the thematic fabric of the screenplay, representing the struggle for independence against a backdrop of social expectations. Her interactions with Don explore broader themes such as the balance between personal desires and societal roles. By depicting Midge’s confident exterior juxtaposed with her emotional conflicts, the narrative invites viewers to examine the tension between tradition and modernity. Her character highlights the complexities of female identity during this transitional period.

Suggestions

Strengthen Midge's connections to the overarching themes of independence and emotional complexity.
Integrate her backstory to enhance the thematic exploration of women's roles in the 1960s.

Follow-up Questions

How does Midge’s presence amplify the central themes of the screenplay?
What overarching message does Midge's journey convey about the era's gender dynamics?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 8

Midge's character resonates emotionally with the audience by embodying a sense of forbidden freedom. Her courageous pursuit of happiness amidst societal constraints invites both sympathy and admiration, evoking a strong emotional response. As Midge navigates her relationships and career, viewers are drawn to her complexities and the challenges she faces, fostering a connection that highlights the experiences of modern women of her time. This emotional resonance starkly contrasts with the more traditional characters around her.

Emotional Impact: Engenders sympathy and admiration through independence.

Suggestions

Include moments of vulnerability to deepen emotional impact.
Use her interactions to highlight conflicts that resonate with contemporary audiences.

Follow-up Questions

What emotional moments could deepen the audience's connection to Midge?
How can Midge's development lead to a more profound emotional investment from viewers?

Personality Types

MBTI: enfp

Midge's engaging and sociable nature, combined with her values of independence and creativity, align with the ENFP personality type. She demonstrates enthusiasm and a zest for life, being open to new experiences and interactions.

Confidence: 80%

Possible Alternative Type: esfp (70%)

Suggestions

Utilize insights from Midge's ENFP traits to portray her emotional responses more vividly.
Consider scenarios that challenge her usual improvisational style, deepening character complexity.

Follow-up Questions

In what situations might Midge feel constrained or less vibrant?
How might her personality affect her approach to professional relationships?

Enneagram: 7

Midge displays qualities typical of Enneagram Type 7, characterized by a desire for freedom, adventure, and a fear of being restricted. Her lightheartedness masks deeper emotional fears, aligning with the motivations common to this type.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: 3 (70%)

Suggestions

Delve into Midge's fear of missing out to enhance her narrative drive.
Incorporate growth opportunities that encourage her to confront her emotional depths.

Follow-up Questions

How does Midge balance her need for excitement with moments of introspection?
In what contexts might Midge feel pressured to conform to traditional roles?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (6)

Midge engages in banter with Don, cleverly navigating the conversation while maintaining her independence.

Why: This scene captures her lively personality, wisdom, and confidence, showcasing why she stands out amidst traditional gender roles.

Weakest Scene (5)

Midge's interactions with Don in her apartment, where she primarily serves as a lover vacating her professional identity.

Why: This scene does not fully showcase her strong personality and independence, focusing instead on her as a romantic interest.

Suggestions:

Integrate elements that highlight her artwork or creative ambitions.
Add dialogue that reinforces her assertiveness beyond intimacy.

Joan - Score: 75/100

Personality

MBTI: ESFJ
Enneagram: 2 (The Helper)

Scenes

Strongest: #15
Weakest: #12

Character Analysis Overview

Foundational Definition 8/10

Joan embodies the archetype of the savvy career woman in a male-dominated environment.

Complexity And Depth 7/10

Joan's confident exterior hides deeper vulnerabilities and emotional conflicts.

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 6/10

Joan remains a pillar of strength for those around her while subtly yearning for personal recognition and authenticity.

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Joan's dialogue is characterized by wit, sarcasm, and a keen awareness of social cues.

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Joan navigates her environment with a combination of charm and tactical behavior.

Relationship Dynamics 8/10

Joan's relationships reveal much about her ability to maneuver in a male-oriented workplace.

Scene Impact 7/10

Joan serves as a stabilizing force in chaotic scenes, often infusing them with humor and relatability.

Role Fulfillment 8/10

Joan fulfills the role of the mentor while also embodying the struggles faced by women in the workplace.

Thematic Plot Integration 8/10

Joan's journey is intertwined with themes of feminism and empowerment in a corporate setting.

Emotional Resonance 8/10

Joan’s character resonates emotionally by reflecting real struggles faced by women in her era.

Foundational Definition

Score: 8

Joan is a young, attractive, and ambitious office manager at Sterling Cooper. Her keen understanding of office dynamics and her ability to navigate the male-dominated workplace are central to her character. Joan values appearance, status, and the power dynamics associated with her looks and charm. She understands the unspoken rules of her environment, often offering guidance to newcomers like Peggy, and is adept at using her femininity to influence those around her.

Values And Beliefs: Joan believes in the power of femininity and the importance of leveraging one's strengths in a professional setting.

Strengths And Skills: Office management, interpersonal skills, charm, and awareness of male-female dynamics in the workplace.

Suggestions

Explore Joan's personal aspirations beyond the office to add depth.
Highlight Joan's internal struggles concerning loyalty to her career versus societal expectations.

Follow-up Questions

What are Joan's ultimate career ambitions outside of being an office manager?
How does Joan reconcile her personal desires with the demands of her role in the office?

Complexity And Depth

Score: 7

Joan's complexity stems from her struggles with sexism in the workplace, navigating her desires for both career success and romantic validation. Although she outwardly portrays confidence and control, there are hints of vulnerability in her connections with others and her ambitions. She often uses humor and flirtation as defense mechanisms to mask her deeper feelings of inadequacy and societal pressure.

Character Wound: Her emotional wound relates to the challenges of being taken seriously in her career while dealing with pressures of conforming to traditional gender roles.

Character Flaws: Manipulative tendencies, occasionally superficial, and struggles with situational insecurity regarding her worth and abilities.

Suggestions

Develop Joan's backstory to illustrate her motivations and emotional struggles.
Introduce a scene where she must confront her vulnerabilities directly.

Follow-up Questions

What personal past experiences have shaped Joan's views on gender and power?
How does Joan handle situations that challenge her self-image or confidence?

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis

Score: 6

Throughout the story, Joan displays a desire for both power and respect in a professional landscape that often marginalizes her contributions. While she plays a key role in supporting others, particularly Peggy, there lies an undercurrent of her own ambitions being sidelined. The challenge for her is to assert her significance without compromising her femininity.

Polarity Changes: Joan exhibits minor transformations through her interactions with Peggy, but largely maintains her foundational traits.

Transformation Triggers: Interactions with Peggy and other women in the office may influence Joan's view of her own capabilities and goals.

Suggestions

Frame Joan's journey in the context of the broader women's movement to align her character's evolution with historical changes.
Create a pivotal moment where Joan stands up not just for herself but for other women in the office.

Follow-up Questions

What specific events could catalyze a significant change in Joan's character?
How does Joan's dynamic with other female characters impact her personal growth throughout the series?

Dialogue And Voice

Score: 8

Joan's dialogue reflects her intelligence and adaptability. She is able to engage in playful banter while also communicating important undercurrents of tension in her relationships, particularly with male colleagues. Her words are deliberately chosen, often carrying double meanings that hint at her deeper frustrations and aspirations.

Unique Voice: Her speech often carries a light-hearted, teasing tone, showcasing her charm while masking her deeper ambitions and insecurities.

Suggestions

Incorporate more instances of Joan using dialogue to assert her authority.
Create moments where her language reveals unexpected emotional depth.

Follow-up Questions

What specific phrases or dialogue reflect Joan's views on her working environment?
How does Joan's tone change in different company, and what does that indicate about her character?

Behavior And Choices

Score: 7

Joan's decisions often reflect her strategic thinking as she maneuvers through the male-dominated corporate landscape. Her choice to mentor Peggy indicates her desire to foster a new generation of women but also hints at her wish for legacy and acknowledgment.

Motivations: Joan is motivated by a desire for power, respect, and a genuine connection within the high-stakes world of advertising.

Desires Vs Needs: While she desires recognition and success in her career, she also needs to be validated for her intellect and capabilities beyond her appearance.

Suggestions

Introduce a conflict where Joan's choices negatively impact her standing in the office.
Highlight moments that demonstrate Joan's ethical considerations in her career choices.

Follow-up Questions

How does Joan measure success, and what sacrifices might she be willing to make to achieve it?
What does Joan’s choice to mentor Peggy say about her philosophy on women in the workplace?

Relationship Dynamics

Score: 8

Joan has significant connections with characters like Peggy and Don, where she plays the role of a mentor. Her dynamic with the men in her workplace often shows her using her charm as a tool for influence. However, it can also reveal deeper layers of rivalry and camaraderie, particularly in her interactions with other women.

Suggestions

Deepen the exploration of Joan's friendships with the other female characters.
Create tension in her relationships that forces Joan to confront her own beliefs and biases.

Follow-up Questions

What underlying tensions exist in Joan's relationships that could be explored further?
How do her relationships evolve over the course of the story, and what triggers those changes?

Scene Impact

Score: 7

In scenes where Joan appears, she often lightens the mood with her wit while also shaping the narrative's direction with her insights and connections. Her presence can simultaneously heighten tension and provide clarity in the often complicated social structures of the office.

Suggestions

Utilize Joan in more crucial scenes to further drive plot points.
Showcase her resolving conflicts that arise in the office setting.

Follow-up Questions

What types of scenes benefit the most from Joan's presence, and how can this be expanded?
How do Joan's reactions in critical moments alter the outcome of those scenes?

Role Fulfillment

Score: 8

In her narrative role, Joan acts as a foil to the male characters while striving for her own aspirations. Her character arc illustrates both the entrapments of her era and her resistance to them, making her a powerful symbol of women’s evolving roles.

Symbolic Role: Joan symbolizes the tension between traditional gender roles and the emerging independence of women in the 1960s.

Suggestions

Highlight moments where Joan's role contrasts with that of the men she works alongside.
Subvert expectations of her character by introducing an unexpected plot twist that challenges her role.

Follow-up Questions

What moments can be created to challenge Joan’s symbolic role in a new way?
How can Joan's responsibilities evolve as the series progresses?

Thematic Plot Integration

Score: 8

Her character journey reflects the broader themes of autonomy, respect, and societal expectations, making her integral to understanding the struggles women faced in the evolving landscape of the 1960s. Joan’s conflicts illustrate the contrasts between personal ambition and social constraints.

Suggestions

Weave Joan's personal challenges into the central plot themes more explicitly.
Create a narrative thread that parallels Joan's experiences with the historical context of women's rights movements.

Follow-up Questions

What specific thematic elements in Joan's story could resonate with modern audiences?
How can Joan's character help reinforce or challenge the central theme of the series?

Emotional Resonance

Score: 8

Through her interactions, Joan often provides a reflection of the audience's own experiences with gender dynamics. Her humor and struggles create a connection that resonates emotionally, making her a compelling character for viewers.

Emotional Impact: Joan elicits sympathy and admiration as she navigates the complexities of her role in a sexist environment.

Suggestions

Increase the focus on emotionally charged moments that reveal Joan's vulnerability.
Craft scenes where Joan expresses her frustrations that break down the facade she presents.

Follow-up Questions

What moments of vulnerability could be emphasized to strengthen audience connection?
How can Joan's journey elicit a deeper empathy from the audience?

Personality Types

MBTI: esfj

Joan's traits showcase extroversion, strong relational skills, focus on harmony, and a desire to be appreciated.

Confidence: 85%

Possible Alternative Type: enfj (15%)

Suggestions

Utilize her likely ESFJ type to explore her leadership skills in group dynamics further.
Craft scenarios that push her extroverted nature to its limits.

Follow-up Questions

How can her personality type drive her decisions in stressful situations?
What interactions challenge her social sensibilities or relationships?

Enneagram: 2 (the helper)

Joan embodies the traits of a Helper, being nurturing but also seeking validation through her relationships.

Confidence: 80%

Possible Alternative Type: 3 (the achiever) (20%)

Suggestions

Highlight her desire to be appreciated in scenes with peers and superiors.
Introduce scenarios where her need to help others conflicts with her personal goals.

Follow-up Questions

What drives Joan to help others at the expense of her own needs?
How does her Enneagram type influence her approach to workplace challenges?

Key Scenes

Strongest Scene (15)

Joan's interactions with her colleagues show her balancing charm and authority while navigating male dynamics.

Why: This scene highlights her adept understanding of her role in the office and showcases her strengths.

Weakest Scene (12)

Joan facilitates Peggy's first day but lacks depth in her interactions, reducing her impact.

Why: The scene feels more like exposition and doesn't highlight Joan's complexity or emotional depth.

Suggestions:

Add layers to their conversation that delve into Joan's personal philosophy and experiences.
Introduce conflict in Joan's advice to Peggy that leads to a more dynamic relationship.

Identified Themes

Theme	Theme Details	Theme Explanation
Smoking and its perception	Discussions about smoking 'Old Gold' cigarettes, negative perception of smoking, and its impact on relationships	This theme explores the topic of smoking and its perception in society during the 1960s. It delves into the loyalty towards a particular brand, the negative stigma associated with smoking, and how it affects personal relationships.
Challenges in the advertising industry	Don's challenges with his cigarette account and the realization of the end of health claims for cigarettes	This theme focuses on the difficulties faced by Don in his advertising career, specifically in relation to his cigarette account. It highlights the challenges arising from the crackdown on health claims and the potential decline of his career.
Relationship dynamics and support	Interactions between Don and Midge, sarcastic banter, Don's frustration, and Midge's support	This theme explores the dynamics of relationships, particularly between Don and Midge. It showcases their banter, sarcastic remarks, and Don's frustrations, along with Midge offering support and reassurance.
Navigating the workplace	Peggy's first day as a secretary, advice from Joan on office dynamics and impressing male colleagues	This theme focuses on Peggy's entry into the workplace and the advice she receives from Joan. It delves into the dynamics of working in an office, handling superiors like Don, and making a good impression on male colleagues.
Cynicism and living in the present	Don's philosophy of living in the moment, his cynical views on love, loneliness, and feeling out of place	This theme revolves around Don's perspective on life and love. It touches upon his cynical views, his philosophy of living in the present, and his feelings of loneliness and disconnection from others.
Marketing strategies and creativity	Brainstorming strategies to advertise cigarettes, using 'Death Wish', and proposing 'Lucky Strike - It's Toasted'	This theme explores the creativity and strategic thinking involved in marketing, particularly in the context of advertising cigarettes. It focuses on the brainstorming process, the suggestion of a new approach using 'Death Wish', and Don's proposal of the slogan 'Lucky Strike - It's Toasted'.
Tensions in professional and personal relationships	Arguments with Rachel Mencken and storming out of meetings	This theme revolves around the tensions that arise in professional and personal relationships. It highlights the arguments between Don and Rachel Mencken during meetings and the subsequent storming out.

Screenwriting Resources on Themes

Articles

Site	Description
Studio Binder	Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters
Coverfly	Improving your Screenplay's theme
John August	Writing from Theme

YouTube Videos

Title	Description
Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics	Screenwriting basics - beginner video
What is theme	Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay.
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script	Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts

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i Understanding Scene Scores

Scenes are rated on many criteria. The goal isn't to try to maximize every number; it's to make you aware of what's happening in your scenes. You might have very good reasons to have character development but not advance the story, or have a scene without conflict. Obviously if your dialogue is really bad, you should probably look into that.

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Story Content

Character Development

Scene Elements

Audience Engagement

Technical Aspects

			Story Content		Character Development		Scene Elements			Audience Engagement
Click for Full Analysis	Tone	Overall	Concept	Plot	Characters	Character Changes	Conflict	High stakes	Story forward	Emotional Impact	Dialogue
1 - Smoke Gets In Your Eyes	null	8	7	8	9	3	4	3	5	5	9
2 - Late Night Conversation	"Tense"	8	7	8	9	5	7	7	7	7	8
3 - Late Night Visit	"Sarcastic, flirty"	7	6	7	8	3	5	4	5	6	9
4 - Pete's Bachelor Party Plans	"Sarcastic, Playful"	9	8	8	9	6	6	6	8	7	10
5 - First Day at the Office	"light-hearted"	9	9	9	8	3	4	2	7	6	8
6 - Don's Preparations	"serious"	9	8	9	9	4	6	7	7	6	8
7 - untitled	"light-hearted"	7	8	7	7	5	5	4	6	6	8
8 - Don and Pete's Meeting with Rachel Mencken	"Sarcastic, playful"	8	7	8	9	6	6	5	7	6	9
9 - Peggy's Doctor Visit	"Light-hearted"	8	7	8	8	3	3	2	8	4	7
10 - Don confronts Rachel	"Tense"	8	7	8	8	7	9	9	8	7	7
11 - Tension in the Board Room	"Dramatic"	9	8	9	8	6	10	8	9	8	9
12 - The Argument	"Sarcastic"	7	7	8	7	6	9	7	8	6	8
13 - Finding a New Strategy	"Dramatic"	9	9	8	8	6	7	7	8	7	9
14 - Don's Frustration	"Tense"	9	9	8	9	6	10	9	8	8	8
15 - Tension at the Boardroom	"Tense"	7	8	7	6	5	8	7	8	7	7
16 - A Spirited Debate	"Intense, emotional"	8	8	7	9	8	6	7	6	9	9
17 - Late Night Encounter	"Dramatic"	8	8	7	8	5	5	5	6	9	9
18 - Connection in Conflict	"Intense, Emotional"	8	8	7	9	8	6	5	7	9	9

Summary of Scene Level Analysis

Here are insights from the scene-level analysis, highlighting strengths, weaknesses, and actionable suggestions.
Some points may appear in both strengths and weaknesses due to scene variety.
Tip: Click on criteria in the top row for detailed summaries.

Scene Strengths

Strong character introductions, witty dialogue, and setting up the workplace dynamics.
Strong conflict and tension, well-developed characters, realistic dialogue
Strong emotional impact, complex character development, thought-provoking dialogue
Powerful and persuasive dialogue, tension and conflict in the meeting, Pete's innovative idea, Don's charismatic presentation
Compelling dialogue, strong emotional impact, character development

Scene Weaknesses

Limited character development, lack of clear conflict or plot advancement
Lack of significant conflict and emotional depth
Lack of significant character development or emotional depth
Lack of plot progression, some may find the cynicism off-putting or unrealistic
Lack of visual action, limited plot development

Suggestions

Focus on developing clearer conflicts and high stakes to increase tension and emotional impact
Add more visual descriptions and actions to enhance the atmosphere and dynamics of scenes
Revisit character development to ensure significant changes and emotional depth
Ensure the plot advances consistently to maintain audience engagement
Consider balancing cynicism with moments of optimism or growth to create a more compelling narrative

Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:

Pattern	Explanation
Correlation between Tone and Emotional Impact	The tone of the scenes in this screenplay seems to have a significant impact on the emotional impact of the audience. The scenes with a tense tone tend to have higher emotional impact ratings, while the light-hearted scenes have lower emotional impact ratings.
Correlation between Dialogue and Character Changes	There is a positive correlation between the quality of dialogue and the extent of character changes in this screenplay. Scenes with better dialogue tend to have more pronounced character changes.
Correlation between Conflict and High Stakes	There is a strong positive correlation between the level of conflict and the high stakes in the scenes of this screenplay. As the conflict increases, the stakes also tend to rise.
Correlation between Concept and Plot	The concept and plot of this screenplay are closely related. Scenes with higher concept scores also tend to have higher plot scores.

Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay

Trope	Trope Details	Trope Explanation

Memorable lines in the script:

Scene Number	Line
1	Don: I love smoking.
2	Midge: Is this the part where I say, 'Don Draper is the greatest ad-man ever and his big strong brain will find a way to lead the sheep to the slaughterhouse'?
4	Pete Campbell: What a great gal. I'll tell you guys, she stole my heart.
5	Joan: And listen, we're going to be working together so don't take this the wrong way, but a girl like you, with those darling little ankles, I'd find a way to make them sing. Also, men love scarves.
16	Don: "You're born alone, you die alone, and this world just drops a bunch of rules on top of you to make you forget those facts. But I never forget. I'm living like there's no tomorrow, because there isn't one."

Some Loglines to consider:

Array ( [0] => A successful ad executive navigates the challenges of the advertising industry while facing a crackdown on health claims by the Trade Commission. [1] => Seeking solace, the ad executive finds support and reassurance from an artist he is involved with, who offers sarcastic remarks and suggestions. [2] => A new secretary receives guidance from the office manager on how to handle her boss, while also obtaining contraception and embracing responsibility. [3] => Conversations about diversity and upcoming meetings with tobacco executives lead to tension and arguments, but a new angle for cigarette advertising impresses. [4] => After a heated argument, the ad executive engages in a deep conversation about love and loneliness, sparking a mutual connection and possibility of a future meeting. )
A talented but troubled advertising executive in 1960s New York grapples with his identity, his past, and the changing world around him.
In the golden age of advertising, a creative genius must confront the dark side of the American Dream and his own inner demons.
As the world of advertising undergoes a transformation, a group of men and women navigate the complexities of their personal and professional lives.
A woman challenges the male-dominated world of advertising, seeking success and fulfillment in a society bound by traditional gender roles.
Behind the glamorous facade of Madison Avenue, a group of ad-men and women grapple with existential questions about happiness, identity, and the true meaning of success.
In 1960s New York, a brilliant but troubled advertising executive navigates the high-stakes world of Madison Avenue while grappling with the complexities of his own identity and personal life.
As the advertising industry faces increasing scrutiny and regulation, a talented creative director must find innovative ways to sell his clients' products while wrestling with his own moral and existential dilemmas.
A group of ambitious, driven individuals in the 1960s New York advertising world clash and conspire as they strive to climb the corporate ladder and maintain their hold on power.
In the cutthroat world of 1960s Madison Avenue, a young woman joins a prestigious advertising firm and must navigate the gender dynamics and power structures of the industry while discovering her own inner strength.
A captivating character study that delves into the personal lives and psychological complexities of the men and women who fueled the golden age of American advertising in the 1960s.

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Executive Summary

The screenplay exhibits strengths in character development, creating complex and relatable characters with believable arcs. While the foundation is solid, there are areas where further refinement could enhance character engagement and deepen the emotional impact on the audience.

Overview and Scorecard

The screenplay effectively captures the depth and complexity of its characters, providing nuances in their motivations, flaws, and growth. The character arcs, while present, could be strengthened to showcase more significant and impactful transformations. The screenplay successfully establishes relatable characters, allowing the audience to connect with their struggles and triumphs. However, there is room for improvement in ensuring consistency in character actions and decisions throughout the narrative. The screenplay introduces a diverse range of characters, adding richness to the narrative. The dialogue contributes to character development, revealing their inner thoughts and driving their actions. The antagonist's development, while present, could be further explored to enhance their motivations and impact on the narrative.

Grade: 8.1
CharacterComplexity: 9

The characters in the screenplay are well-developed and multifaceted. They exhibit clear motivations, flaws, and growth, making them relatable and emotionally engaging.

CharacterArcs: 8

The character arcs are present and believable, but they could be strengthened to showcase more significant and impactful transformations.

CharacterRelatability: 8.5

The characters are relatable and emotionally engaging, allowing the audience to connect with their struggles and triumphs.

CharacterConsistency: 7.5

There is some inconsistency in character actions and decisions throughout the narrative, which could be addressed to enhance character development.

CharacterDiversity: 9

The screenplay introduces a diverse range of characters, adding richness to the narrative.

CharacterDialogue: 8

The dialogue contributes to character development, revealing their inner thoughts and driving their actions.

AntagonistDevelopment: 7

The antagonist's development is present, but it could be further explored to enhance their motivations and impact on the narrative.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The complexity and depth of the main characters, Don Draper and Rachel Mencken, are particularly well-crafted. Their struggles with identity, love, and connection resonate strongly with the audience. High
The introduction of supporting characters, such as Peggy Olson and Roger Sterling, adds diversity to the narrative and provides contrasting perspectives. Medium
The dialogue often reveals the characters' inner thoughts and motivations, enhancing their relatability. Medium

Negative Aspects:

Certain character arcs, such as Pete Campbell's, could be further developed to showcase more significant growth and transformation. High
There are occasional instances where character actions and decisions appear inconsistent with their established traits, which could be addressed to enhance character consistency. Medium
The antagonist's motivations and impact on the narrative could be further explored to add depth and complexity to their character. Low

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider expanding Pete Campbell's character arc to include more significant challenges and obstacles he must overcome to achieve meaningful growth.

Suggestion: Medium Review character actions and decisions throughout the narrative to ensure consistency with their established traits and motivations.

Suggestion: Low Explore the antagonist's motivations and backstory to add depth and complexity to their character. Consider their goals, fears, and the impact of their actions on the protagonist and the narrative.

Executive Summary

The screenplay's premise effectively establishes a compelling and clear narrative foundation. However, it could benefit from further refinement to enhance its originality and depth while maintaining its clarity and audience engagement.

Overview and Scorecard

The screenplay's premise revolves around Don Draper, a successful and charismatic ad executive, as he navigates personal and professional challenges in the 1960s advertising industry. It effectively sets up an intriguing narrative that explores themes of identity, authenticity, and the changing social landscape. The premise is clear and relatable, promising a captivating story with complex characters.

Grade: 7.9
PremiseOriginality: 7

The premise presents a familiar setting and protagonist type within the advertising industry. While it incorporates elements of personal struggle and societal change, it could benefit from exploring more unique or unexpected aspects of the subject matter.

PremiseClarity: 8.5

The premise is clearly established and succinctly introduces the main character, his struggles, and the time period. It effectively sets up the narrative and provides a strong foundation for the story to unfold.

PremiseExecution: 8

The screenplay effectively delivers on the promise of its premise, exploring the personal and professional challenges faced by Don Draper and the changing advertising landscape of the 1960s. It successfully incorporates themes of identity and authenticity.

PremiseDepth: 7.5

The premise introduces intriguing themes of identity, authenticity, and societal change. However, it could benefit from delving deeper into these themes and exploring their complexities to add more depth and resonance to the story.

HookStrength: 8

The premise effectively hooks the audience with its compelling character, intriguing setting, and relatable themes. It promises an engaging and thought-provoking story that will resonate with viewers.

EngagementPotential: 8

The premise has strong potential to engage the audience and keep them invested in the story. The personal struggles of Don Draper and the exploration of societal change in the 1960s provide ample opportunities for compelling character arcs and thought-provoking narratives.

ContributionToNarrative: 8

The premise effectively contributes to the narrative by providing a clear framework for the story's development. It sets up the main character's motivations, conflicts, and the overall arc of the narrative.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The premise establishes a strong and relatable protagonist in Don Draper, whose personal struggles and ambition create an engaging narrative arc. High
The setting in the 1960s advertising industry provides a rich and evocative backdrop for exploring themes of societal change and personal identity. Medium
The premise effectively introduces intriguing themes of identity, authenticity, and the tension between personal desires and societal expectations. Medium

Negative Aspects:

The premise could benefit from further exploration of unique or unexpected aspects of the advertising industry and the societal changes of the 1960s to enhance its originality. Medium
Some elements of the premise, such as the depiction of the advertising industry and the character of Don Draper, may be somewhat familiar or expected for the genre, which could be addressed through more distinctive characterization and exploration of the industry's dynamics. Low

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: Medium Consider introducing more unique or unexpected elements to the premise, either through the protagonist's background, motivations, or the specific challenges they face within the advertising industry.

Suggestion: Low Explore deeper and more nuanced dimensions of the themes introduced in the premise, such as the complexities of identity formation, the challenges of authenticity in a rapidly changing society, and the tension between personal desires and societal expectations.

Executive Summary

The screenplay exhibits a solid narrative structure, effectively introducing characters and establishing the central conflict. However, the plot development could be refined to enhance clarity and coherence, ensuring a smooth and engaging flow throughout the story.

Overview and Scorecard

The screenplay presents a coherent narrative with a clear introduction of characters and their motivations. The initial scenes establish the time period and introduce the protagonist, Don Draper, as a complex and intriguing character. However, as the story progresses, the plot encounters some challenges in maintaining clarity and consistency, which could benefit from further development to strengthen the overall narrative structure.

Grade: 7.1
NarrativeStructure: 7

The screenplay adheres to a traditional narrative structure with a clear introduction, rising action, climax, falling action, and resolution. However, there are some instances where transitions between scenes could be smoother, and the pacing could be adjusted to enhance the flow of the story.

PlotClarity: 6.5

The plot is generally clear and understandable, but there are moments when the motivations of certain characters could be further developed to provide a stronger foundation for their actions. Additionally, some plot points could be more logically connected to create a more cohesive storyline.

PlotComplexity: 7

The screenplay incorporates multiple plotlines that intersect and influence each other, adding depth to the narrative. However, the complexity could be further enhanced by exploring the consequences and implications of the characters' choices in greater detail.

Pacing: 7

The pacing is generally well-balanced, allowing for both character development and plot progression. However, there are sections where the pacing could be tightened to maintain audience engagement and avoid any lulls in the story.

ConflictAndStakes: 7

The screenplay effectively establishes conflicts and stakes that drive the characters' actions and motivations. The tension is palpable at times, but it could be further heightened by increasing the urgency and consequences associated with the obstacles the characters face.

ResolutionSatisfaction: 7

The resolution provides closure to the main storylines and character arcs. However, the ending could be strengthened by providing a more satisfying resolution to some of the supporting plotlines and ensuring a clear sense of resolution for all the major characters.

ThemeIntegration: 7.5

The screenplay successfully incorporates themes of identity, ambition, and social change into the narrative. These themes are woven into the plot and character development, enhancing the depth and resonance of the story.

OriginalityOfPlot: 7

While the screenplay presents a compelling and engaging story, the plot itself is not particularly unique or groundbreaking. Incorporating more unexpected twists or exploring less conventional storylines could enhance its originality.

CharacterDevelopmentWithinPlot: 8

The screenplay effectively develops its characters through their actions and interactions within the plot. The characters' motivations and growth are closely tied to the unfolding events, creating a cohesive and engaging narrative.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The introduction of Don Draper as a complex and enigmatic character is particularly effective, immediately capturing the audience's attention and establishing the foundation for his character arc. High
The exploration of themes such as identity, ambition, and social change adds depth and resonance to the story, enhancing its emotional impact. Medium
The interplay between the advertising industry and the social climate of the time is deftly portrayed, providing a rich backdrop for the characters' struggles and aspirations. Medium

Negative Aspects:

The motivations and actions of certain supporting characters, such as Midge Daniels and Pete Campbell, could be further developed to provide a stronger foundation for their involvement in the plot. High
The pacing in the second half of the screenplay could be tightened to maintain audience engagement and avoid any lulls in the story. Medium
The ending, while providing closure, could be strengthened by offering a more satisfying resolution to some of the supporting plotlines and ensuring a clear sense of closure for all the major characters. Medium

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider expanding on the backstory and motivations of Midge Daniels to provide a more robust foundation for her character and her relationship with Don.

Suggestion: Medium Tighten the pacing in the middle section of the screenplay by streamlining certain scenes and transitions to maintain audience engagement.

Suggestion: Medium In the ending, provide a more satisfying resolution to the secondary plotlines involving characters such as Pete Campbell and Peggy Olson, ensuring a cohesive and fulfilling conclusion for the entire cast.

Executive Summary

This screenplay effectively conveys its themes and messages, exploring them through the characters, plot, and dialogue. The themes are relevant and relatable, and the screenplay's exploration of them is thought-provoking and emotionally engaging. However, some aspects of the message could be clarified and integrated more seamlessly into the narrative.

Overview and Scorecard

Overall, the screenplay explores and communicates its themes and messages well. The themes are relevant to contemporary issues and are woven into the narrative in a meaningful way. The screenplay's messages are impactful and resonate with the audience, leaving them with something to think about long after the credits roll.

Grade: 8.2
ThemeClarity: 8

The themes of the screenplay are presented clearly and are easy to identify. The screenplay does a good job of weaving the themes into the narrative without being didactic.

MessageImpact: 9

The screenplay's messages are impactful and resonate with the audience. The screenplay raises important questions about the nature of love, loss, and identity, and it does so in a way that is both thought-provoking and emotionally engaging.

Relevance: 9

The themes and messages of the screenplay are relevant to contemporary issues and timeless human experiences. The screenplay explores the human condition in a way that is both insightful and relatable.

IntegrationWithPlot: 8

The themes and messages are integrated well within the plot and character arcs. The screenplay uses the characters and their stories to explore the themes in a meaningful way.

OriginalityOfTheme: 7

While the themes of the screenplay are not entirely original, the screenplay does offer a fresh perspective on them. The screenplay explores the themes in a way that is unique and thought-provoking.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The screenplay's exploration of the theme of love is particularly strong. The screenplay does a great job of exploring the different facets of love, from romantic love to familial love to self-love. High
The screenplay's use of symbolism is also effective. The screenplay uses symbols to represent the themes of the screenplay in a subtle and meaningful way. Medium

Negative Aspects:

The screenplay's message about the importance of self-acceptance could be clarified. The screenplay does a good job of exploring the theme of self-acceptance, but it could be more explicit about the message it wants to convey. Medium
The screenplay's pacing could be improved. The screenplay is a bit slow in the middle, and it could benefit from a tighter pace. Low

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: Medium Consider adding a scene that explores the theme of self-acceptance in more depth. This could be a scene where the protagonist has a conversation with a therapist or a friend about their struggles with self-acceptance.

Suggestion: Low Consider cutting some of the unnecessary dialogue in the middle of the screenplay. This will help to improve the pacing and make the screenplay more engaging.

Executive Summary

The screenplay displays a vivid and engaging visual style, particularly in the scenes set in the bar and at Midge's apartment. The descriptions are evocative and effectively capture the atmosphere and mood of these scenes. However, there is room for improvement in terms of maintaining consistency and originality throughout the screenplay.

Overview and Scorecard

The screenplay's visual imagery is well-written and effectively conveys the tone and atmosphere of the story. The descriptions are vivid and create a strong sense of place. However, there are some areas where the visual imagery could be further enhanced to increase its impact and memorability.

Grade: 7.4
Vividness: 8.5

The visual descriptions are clear and impactful, making it easy for readers to visualize the scenes and immerse themselves in the story.

Creativity: 7

The visual imagery is generally inventive and unique, but there are some scenes where the descriptions could be more original and unexpected.

Consistency: 6.5

The visual style is maintained throughout the screenplay, but there are some scenes where the descriptions could be more consistent with the overall tone and mood.

Originality: 7.5

The visual concepts used in the screenplay are mostly unique, but there are some scenes where the descriptions could be more innovative and fresh.

Immersiveness: 8

The visual descriptions effectively draw readers into the world of the screenplay, creating a strong sense of presence and involvement.

EmotionalImpact: 7.5

The visual imagery is effective in enhancing the emotional tone of the screenplay, but there are some scenes where the descriptions could be more emotionally evocative.

SymbolismMotifs: 6

The use of visual symbols and motifs is somewhat limited, and there are some scenes where the descriptions could be more symbolic and meaningful.

Dynamism: 7

The screenplay effectively uses a variety of visual changes and contrasts, but there are some scenes where the descriptions could be more dynamic and visually stimulating.

IntegrationWithNarrative: 8

The visual imagery is well-integrated with the screenplay's narrative, effectively enhancing plot development and character arcs.

PracticalityForProduction: 8

While creative and impactful, the visual demands of the screenplay are generally realistic and feasible within the constraints of film production.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The opening scene in the bar is particularly well-written, with vivid descriptions that create a strong sense of atmosphere and introduce Don Draper as a complex and enigmatic character. High (Scenes: 1)
The scenes at Midge's apartment are also well-written, with evocative descriptions that capture the characters' relationships and the changing dynamics between them. Medium (Scenes: 2, 3, 4, 5, 7, 8, 9)

Negative Aspects:

Some of the scenes in the office could be more visually interesting. The descriptions are often functional but lack the same level of vividness and originality as the scenes in the bar and at Midge's apartment. Medium (Scenes: 6, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18)
The screenplay could benefit from a more consistent visual style. There are some scenes where the descriptions are more poetic and lyrical, while other scenes are more straightforward and functional. Low (Scenes: General)

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider adding more visually distinctive elements to the office scenes. For example, you could describe the different characters' workspaces in more detail or use different lighting techniques to create a more varied and visually interesting environment.

Scenes: 6, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18

Suggestion: Medium Experiment with different writing styles to create a more consistent visual tone throughout the screenplay. For example, you could use more poetic and lyrical language in the scenes that are more emotional or introspective.

Scenes:

Executive Summary

The screenplay effectively captures the emotional experiences of its characters and the time period in which they exist. Its strengths lie in creating relatable characters and conveying the complexities of their relationships. However, it could benefit from expanding the emotional depth of certain character arcs and exploring more nuanced emotional dimensions.

Overview and Scorecard

The screenplay's emotional impact is commendable, effectively conveying the characters' emotional journeys and resonating with the audience. However, it could further enhance its emotional depth by exploring the complexities of the characters' motivations and providing a more satisfying resolution to their emotional dilemmas.

Grade: 7.5
EmotionalDepth: 7.5

The screenplay captures the emotional experiences of its characters with nuance, delving into their motivations and struggles. It effectively conveys the complexities of their relationships and the emotional toll the events take on them.

CharacterRelatability: 8.0

The characters are relatable and their emotional journeys are engaging. The audience can empathize with their struggles and root for their triumphs, which enhances the emotional impact of their stories.

EmotionalVariety: 7.0

The screenplay covers a range of emotions, capturing the characters' moments of joy, love, disappointment, and despair. However, it could benefit from exploring a wider range of emotions to add depth to the narrative.

EmotionalConsistency: 7.5

The screenplay consistently maintains its emotional tone throughout the narrative, creating a cohesive emotional journey for the audience. The emotional beats are well-paced and flow naturally, allowing the audience to fully immerse themselves in the characters' experiences.

ImpactOnAudience: 7.5

The screenplay leaves a lasting emotional impact on the audience. The characters' experiences resonate with the audience, and the emotional journey they undertake stays with them long after the story ends.

EmotionalPacing: 8.0

The emotional pacing of the screenplay is effective, allowing the audience to fully experience and connect with the characters' emotional journeys. The screenplay takes its time in developing the characters and their relationships, which helps build emotional investment and makes the emotional payoffs more impactful.

EmotionalComplexity: 7.0

The screenplay explores emotional complexities, capturing the nuances of human experience. The characters' emotions are not always straightforward, and the screenplay does a good job of conveying the complexities of their inner worlds.

EmpathyAndIdentification: 8.0

The screenplay effectively creates empathy and identification between the audience and the characters. The audience can understand and relate to the characters' motivations and struggles, which enhances the emotional impact of their stories.

TransformationalEmotionalArcs: 7.5

The screenplay features several characters who undergo significant emotional growth and change. These transformations are believable and emotionally resonant, adding depth to the narrative and providing a sense of closure for the characters.

EmotionalAuthenticity: 8.0

The emotions portrayed in the screenplay feel authentic and believable. The characters' emotional responses to events and situations ring true, which helps the audience connect with them on a deeper level.

UseOfConflictInEmotionalDevelopment: 7.5

The screenplay effectively uses conflict to drive emotional development. The characters face internal and external conflicts that challenge their beliefs and force them to confront their emotions.

ResolutionOfEmotionalThemes: 7.0

The screenplay provides satisfying resolutions to the characters' emotional dilemmas. The emotional arcs are well-rounded, and the characters experience growth and change.

UniversalityOfEmotionalAppeal: 7.5

The screenplay's emotional themes have universal appeal. The characters' experiences are relatable to a wide range of audiences, transcending cultural and personal differences.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The screenplay effectively captures the emotional complexities of the characters and the time period, creating a strong sense of emotional resonance with the audience. High (Scenes: General)
The relationships between the characters are well-developed and emotionally engaging, enhancing the impact of their individual emotional journeys. Medium (Scenes: Scene 1, Scene 3, Scene 5)
The use of emotional tension and conflict is effective in building emotional investment and driving the narrative forward. Medium (Scenes: Scene 2, Scene 4, Scene 6)

Negative Aspects:

Some of the emotional arcs lack depth and could be further developed to enhance the overall emotional impact. Medium (Scenes: Scene 3, Scene 5, Scene 7)
The resolution of some emotional conflicts feels somewhat rushed and could benefit from a more gradual and satisfying progression. Low (Scenes: Scene 6, Scene 8, Scene 10)

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Consider expanding the emotional depth of the character arcs by exploring their motivations and internal conflicts in more detail. This could involve adding scenes that delve deeper into their past experiences or exploring their thoughts and feelings through introspection.

Scenes:

Suggestion: Medium Explore more nuanced emotional dimensions by incorporating a wider range of emotions into the narrative. This could involve delving into complex or contradictory emotions that the characters experience.

Scenes:

Suggestion: Low Consider allowing more time for the resolution of emotional conflicts to unfold. This could involve adding scenes that show the characters processing their emotions and gradually coming to terms with their experiences.

Scenes:

Executive Summary

The screenplay exhibits a solid foundation in presenting conflict and stakes, setting the stage for a compelling story. However, there are areas where further development could enhance the narrative tension and audience engagement. By deepening the central conflict, escalating stakes, and exploring alternative resolutions, the screenplay can reach its full potential in captivating its audience.

Overview and Scorecard

The screenplay effectively establishes conflict and stakes, providing a solid basis for narrative tension. However, to maximize audience engagement, consider enhancing the clarity of the central conflict, increasing the significance of the stakes, and exploring more impactful resolutions.

Grade: 7.8
ConflictClarity: 8

The central conflict is introduced clearly, providing a well-defined foundation for the story. However, further development could enhance its complexity and depth.

StakesSignificance: 7.5

The stakes are personal and compelling, driving the characters' actions and motivations. However, exploring the consequences more deeply could elevate the emotional stakes and increase audience investment.

ConflictIntegration: 8.25

The conflict is well-integrated, influencing plot and character development. However, exploring the conflict's impact on the characters' relationships and personal growth could enhance its significance.

StakesEscalation: 7.25

The stakes escalate gradually, maintaining tension throughout the screenplay. However, consider introducing unexpected twists or external factors to intensify the pressure on the characters.

ResolutionSatisfaction: 7.75

The resolution is generally satisfying, providing closure to the central conflict. However, exploring alternative resolutions could add depth and complexity to the ending.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The screenplay establishes a clear central conflict that drives the narrative forward. High
The stakes are personal and compelling, providing a strong foundation for character motivation. High
The screenplay effectively integrates the conflict into the plot and character development, creating a cohesive story. Medium

Negative Aspects:

The central conflict lacks depth and complexity, which could limit its impact on the audience. Medium
While the stakes are generally compelling, they could be elevated by exploring the potential consequences more deeply. Medium
The resolution, while satisfying, is somewhat predictable and could benefit from exploring alternative outcomes. Low

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: High Explore subplots or secondary conflicts that intersect with the central conflict, adding depth and complexity to the story.

Suggestion: Medium Raise the stakes by exploring the potential consequences of failure, both for the characters involved and those around them.

Suggestion: Low Consider alternative resolutions that challenge the status quo and leave a lasting impact on the characters.

Executive Summary

The screenplay exhibits a notable level of originality and creativity in its exploration of complex characters and their interactions within a period drama. However, there are some missed opportunities to innovate within the overarching storyline.

Overview and Scorecard

The screenplay showcases its strengths in the originality of its character development and the creative use of dialogue to reveal their motivations and relationships. However, the overall storyline follows a somewhat formulaic structure, limiting the potential for groundbreaking originality. With some revisions to enhance the narrative structure and introduce more innovative plot elements, the screenplay could elevate its originality and creativity to even greater heights.

Grade: 7.1
Originality: 7.5

The screenplay presents a unique exploration of character dynamics and interpersonal relationships within the backdrop of a specific historical era. The characters are well-developed and their motivations and behaviors feel authentic and engaging.

Creativity: 7.0

While the screenplay employs creative techniques in characterization and dialogue, the narrative structure and plot development follow a more conventional path. A bolder approach to storytelling could enhance the screenplay's overall creativity.

CharacterInnovation: 8.0

The screenplay excels in creating distinct and multifaceted characters. Their interactions and relationships are believable and emotionally resonant, adding depth and complexity to the narrative.

PlotInnovation: 6.5

The screenplay's plot unfolds in a somewhat predictable manner, adhering to familiar narrative conventions. Incorporating more unexpected twists, turns, or unique plot elements could enhance the originality of the storyline.

ThematicDepth: 7.0

The screenplay explores themes of identity, belonging, and the complexities of human relationships in a thoughtful and engaging way. However, expanding on these themes or introducing additional layers of thematic exploration could add further depth and resonance to the narrative.

NarrativeInnovation: 6.0

The screenplay employs a straightforward narrative structure, following a chronological sequence of events without significant deviations. Experimenting with non-linear storytelling techniques or unconventional narrative structures could enhance the screenplay's originality.

GenreInnovation: 7.0

While the screenplay is set within a specific historical period, it does not significantly challenge or subvert genre conventions. Infusing the narrative with innovative elements or blending genres could elevate its originality within the period drama genre.

AudienceEngagement: 7.5

The screenplay's compelling characters and emotional depth have the potential to engage audiences on an intimate level. Further exploration of audience engagement techniques, such as interactive elements or innovative presentation formats, could enhance the screenplay's ability to connect with viewers.

InnovationInRepresentation: 7.0

The screenplay portrays a diverse range of characters, reflecting the complexities of the historical setting. However, there is room to further develop these characters and their experiences to create a more inclusive and authentic representation of the era.

Detailed Analysis Positive Aspects:

The screenplay effectively captures the complexities of human relationships, showcasing unique and believable character dynamics.
The dialogue is sharp and witty, revealing the characters' motivations and inner conflicts in an engaging manner.
The setting of a specific historical period adds depth and richness to the narrative, providing a backdrop for the characters' experiences.

Negative Aspects:

The screenplay's plot structure lacks significant innovation, adhering to a somewhat predictable sequence of events.
The exploration of themes, while thoughtful, could be expanded or deepened to add further layers of complexity and resonance to the narrative.
The screenplay's approach to genre is somewhat conventional, and introducing innovative elements or blending genres could enhance its originality.

Suggestions for Improvement

Suggestion: Consider incorporating unexpected plot twists or introducing a unique narrative structure to enhance the originality of the storyline.

Scenes:

Suggestion: Explore additional layers of thematic depth by examining the characters' motivations and experiences from multiple perspectives.

Scenes:

Suggestion: Research and incorporate historical events or cultural elements in a creative way to add depth and authenticity to the period setting.

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Don - Score: 82/100

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Foundational Definition 9/10

Complexity And Depth 8/10

Arc Or Purposeful Stasis 7/10

Dialogue And Voice 8/10

Behavior And Choices 7/10

Relationship Dynamics 8/10

Scene Impact 9/10

Role Fulfillment 9/10

Thematic Plot Integration 9/10

Emotional Resonance 8/10

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