Spy kids
Executive Summary
Pass/Consider/Recommend/Highly Recommend
Overview
Genres: Action, Adventure, Comedy, Family, Romance, Thriller, Science, Fiction, Spy, Fantasy
Setting: Present day, New York City
Overview: The screenplay demonstrates strong character development, engaging premise, and emotional depth. However, there are opportunities for improvement in plot complexity, pacing, and supporting character development.
Themes: Spy Work and Espionage, Family Bonds and Love, Creativity and Invention, Heroism and Bravery, Technology and Innovation
Conflict and Stakes: John's struggle to prove his innocence and uncover the truth behind the crime, risking his career and reputation
Overall Mood: Tense and suspenseful
Mood/Tone at Key Scenes:
- Scene 5: Intense courtroom scene with high stakes and emotional drama
- Scene 10: Twist ending reveals the true mastermind behind the crime, shocking the audience
Standout Features:
- Plot Twist: Unexpected revelation about the true culprit behind the crime
- Unique Characters : Complex and morally ambiguous characters that challenge audience expectations
- Innovative Setting : New York City backdrop adds depth and authenticity to the story
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Market Analysis
Budget Estimate:$15-20 million
Target Audience Demographics: Adults aged 25-54, fans of legal thrillers and suspenseful dramas
Marketability: Strong lead character, compelling storyline, and suspenseful plot will attract a wide audience
Unique blend of legal thriller and drama genres will appeal to fans of both
Relevant social themes and strong performances by the cast will generate positive buzz
Profit Potential: Moderate to high, with potential for strong box office performance and critical acclaim
Scene Level Percentiles
Writer's Voice
Memorable Lines:
- DAD: This computer I've built doesn't just calculate, it thinks. (Scene 4)
- Carmen: You just fell 1000 feet. You're a pancake. (Scene 5)
- Carmen: He's not my brother. He's a bulbous, vomitus, cancerous growth, festering on my extremity like an underdeveloped twin. That one day I will have professionally removed. (Scene 7)
- Carmen: The Third Brain. It's all my Dad's been working on since, well, my whole life. (Scene 19)
- Dad: I'm going to show you what happens when you cross the line and involve family. (Scene 36)
Story Shape
Emotions Elicited
Recommend
Executive Summary
The screenplay for 'Spy Kids' is a well-crafted and engaging family adventure that blends elements of spy thriller, sci-fi, and comedy. The strong narrative hook, compelling character dynamics, and visually striking world-building make it a standout in the genre. While some pacing issues and missed opportunities for deeper character exploration exist, the overall execution is commendable, and the screenplay is worthy of further development and consideration.
- The opening sequences establish a strong narrative hook and introduce the core family dynamic in an engaging way. The spy story backstory is woven in seamlessly through the bedtime story. high ( Scene 1 (SPY KIDS) Scene 2 (MOM (V.O.)) )
- The transition from the bedtime story to the present day family setting is smooth, and the introduction of the Third Brain concept piques the audience's interest. high ( Scene 3 )
- The world of Floop's Castle is vividly realized, with a strong visual and tonal identity that sets it apart from the rest of the story. medium ( Scene 8 )
- The scenes in the dungeon cell provide excellent character development for the parents, exploring their motivations and the tensions in their relationship. high ( Scene 12 (INT - DUNGEON CELL - DAY) Scene 28 (INT - DUNGEON CELL - DAY) )
- The transformation of Minion into a grotesque creature is a powerful and unsettling moment that raises the stakes and heightens the sense of danger. medium ( Scene 36 (INT - TRANSFORMATION LAB) )
- The initial introduction of the safehouse and its capabilities feels a bit too convenient, potentially straining credibility. More gradual or organic integration of its features could strengthen the sequence. medium ( Scene 20 (INT - SAFEHOUSE - DAY) )
- The chase sequence through the city could be further developed to heighten the tension and showcase the kids' resourcefulness more effectively. medium ( Scene 25 (EXT - CITY STREETS) )
- The pacing of the overall narrative could be tightened in places, particularly during the middle act, to maintain a stronger sense of momentum and urgency. medium ( Scene )
- More overt exploration of the sibling relationship between Carmen and Juni could deepen the emotional stakes and make their journey more compelling. medium ( Scene )
- Additional backstory or context for Floop's motivations and the history of his conflict with the parents could provide more nuance and complexity to the antagonist. medium ( Scene )
- The introduction of Machete as the kids' uncle and a fellow agent adds an interesting layer of family dynamics and provides a solid supporting character. high ( Scene 30 (INT - MACHETE'S SPY SHOP - DAY) )
- The surreal and imaginative nature of the Virtual Room sequence showcases the screenplay's creativity and visual flair. medium ( Scene 40 (INT - THE VIRTUAL ROOM) )
- The clever use of the robot duplicates to create tension and complication is an effective plot device. high ( Scene 46 (KIDS OUTWIT EACH OTHER) )
Screenplay Insights:
Premise: 8.25, The screenplay's premise is engaging, clear, and has the potential to captivate the audience. It sets up a compelling narrative with intriguing characters. See More
Structure: 8.25, The screenplay exhibits a solid structure and coherent plot, effectively engaging the audience with its progression of events. While some plot elements could be refined for clarity, the strengths of the narrative lie in its focus on character growth and adherence to a familiar story structure, making it an overall satisfying and well-rounded screenplay. See More
Theme: 7.25, The screenplay captures the essence of family and togetherness, emphasizing the importance of love, trust, and adventure. However, while the themes are clear and resonate with the audience, they could be further refined to explore the complexities of the characters and their relationships. By delving deeper into the emotional journeys of the family, the screenplay could enhance its thematic richness and emotional impact. See More
Visual Impact: 7.25, This screenplay exhibits a clear focus on family dynamics and teamwork, and its visual storytelling effectively supports these themes. The incorporation of gadgetry and lively action sequences adds an engaging and visually dynamic element that complements the script's core message. See More
Emotional Impact: 8.75, This screenplay is successful in evoking emotions through its relatable characters, compelling themes, and heartwarming relationships. It effectively delivers an emotional journey that captivates the audience and leaves a lasting impact. While the screenplay excels in several areas, there is room for potential enhancements to deepen the emotional depth and create an even more immersive experience for viewers. See More
Conflict: 8.25, The screenplay effectively presents conflict and stakes at various points throughout the narrative, creating some compelling moments of tension and engagement. However, further refinement and development in these aspects could significantly elevate the overall impact of the screenplay. See More
Originality: 8.0, The screenplay showcases creative approaches in its narrative execution and character development. While the story's foundation may not be entirely novel, it introduces original elements that enhance its intrigue and overall entertainment value. See More
Screenplay Story Analysis
Note: This is the overall critique. For scene by scene critique click here
Summaries
- Carmen wants a bedtime story and requests 'The Two Spies Who Fell in Love'. The story is about a woman spy on a mission to kill a man spy, but when she finds him, she falls in love instead.
- Carmen listens to her mother's bedtime story about two spies who go against their orders and marry each other.
- Carmen listens to her mother's bedtime story about two spies who go against their orders and marry each other and then retire from the life of espionage to have a family.
- Carmen's parents discuss their espionage work and their future plans.
- Carmen and Felix train in a daily ritual, while Juni struggles to keep up. After a failed attempt, Carmen taunts Juni, causing him to lose his temper. Felix teaches Juni to control his temper and warns him of the dangers of letting it manifest through physical outbursts. The family sits down to breakfast, where Carmen continues to tease Juni.
- Carmen teases Juni during breakfast and their parents discuss their plans while engaging in playful banter.
- The family engages in their daily routines, including training and watching TV, while Carmen teases Juni and the parents discuss their past and future plans.
- Mr. Lisp and other criminals attend a presentation by Mr. Floop at his castle, hoping to see a new invention. Mr. Floop shows off mutant secret agents as well as his unsuccessful creation of Fingermen. He then reveals a new invention called X-52495, a robotic child with electric eyes. Mr. Lisp realizes this is what they invested in and is disappointed.
- Mr. Floop presents his latest invention, a robotic child with electric eyes, to a group of criminals looking to invest in his work.
- Parents go on a mission leaving their spy kids with a trusted caretaker, while learning of a new technology that can substitute their child agents
- The parents, who are spies, are driving a sub when they are ambushed by a criminal ship. Meanwhile, their spy kids are home and receive a red alert, indicating an emergency.
- Felix is on a mission to save the children of his spy friends and has to explain their parents' secret lives to them. He takes them to a safehouse, but they are soon ambushed by unknown forces.
- Felix helps spy kids escape from danger and ambush. They use a high-tech pod to evade their pursuers, and Carmen and Juni show courage and resourcefulness in steering it to safety. Meanwhile, their parents are taken prisoner and brought to Floop's castle.
- Spy kids are taken to a safehouse after their parents' abduction and learn about their parents' true identity. They watch their father's figurine being sculpted by the villain Floop and are later taken to the safehouse by a high-tech pod. Upon arrival, they are instructed to follow Felix's orders and watch a video message from their father.
- After their parents are abducted, the spy kids are taken to a safehouse by Felix, where they find out about their parents' true identity and watch a video message from their father. They explore the safehouse and find a freeze-dried meal and a lack of food and water. Meanwhile, their parents are taken to Floop's castle and placed in a dungeon.
- The spy kids are at a safehouse and discover a high-tech gadget dog, Argonaut. They receive a message from Felix, who tells them to find Machete. Juni accidentally handcuffs himself and they plan their next move.
- Ms. Gradenko and other agents from the spy kids' parents' organization arrive at the safehouse to offer help. Carmen and Juni are wary, but eventually let them in. Meanwhile, their parents are interrogated by Floop about the location of the 'Third Brain.'
- Floop interrogates the spy kids' parents about the location of the 'Third Brain.' Meanwhile, the spy kids explore a safehouse, discover a high-tech gadget dog, and receive help from the agency their parents work for.
- The spy kids are offered help from their parents' agency, who reveal that Floop has been mutating agents to create his TV show characters. They also inform the spy kids that Floop wants something their parents possess, and Carmen realizes it is the Third Brain. Juni becomes nervous when he sees shapes outside the safehouse.
- The spy kids are offered help from their parents' agency, but it turns out to be a trap. The agents try to drug Carmen and Juni, but they outsmart them and escape. Juni flies through underground tunnels, chased by agents on Buddy Packs, and breaks through a skylight to the outside. Carmen is also on the run, but her plans are unclear.
- Carmen and Juni escape from their parents' agency after discovering it is a trap, and are pursued by the agents along with Floop's minions, the Shapes. The siblings rely on their skills and gadgets to escape.
- Carmen and Juni escape from their parents' agency and are pursued by agents and Floop's minions. They use their gadgets and skills to escape and end up in a Woolworth's, where they evade capture.
- Carmen and Juni escape from their parents' agency with the help of their gadgets and skills, but are pursued by agents and Floop's minions. They end up in a Woolworth's, where they evade capture.
- Carmen and Juni discover a note inside a jalapeno-flavored lollipop with the name Isidor Machete on it. Meanwhile, Mr. Lisp decides to acquire the Third Brain and get rid of Floop.
- Carmen and Juni are confronted by robot twins that look like them and engage in a karate fight, during which they steal a locating device and learn that Floop needs the Third Brain to make his robots smart.
- Carmen and Juni visit Machete's Spy Shop to find out more about Isidor Machete, who left a note in a jalapeno-flavored lollipop.
- Carmen and Juni meet their uncle Izzy, who is a secret agent. He provides them with gear and a plan to infiltrate Floop's castle to get the Third Brain, which they need to stop Floop's robots. They also learn that their father sent them to find Izzy.
- Carmen and Juni meet their uncle, a secret agent named Izzy, who provides them with gear and a plan to infiltrate Floop's castle to get the Third Brain.
- Carmen and Juni receive a mission to infiltrate Floop's castle to obtain the Third Brain. Their uncle Izzy, a secret agent, provides them with gear and a plan to execute. In a separate scene, their father shares a secret about his past, revealing his entry into the OSS to access his father's files. Carmen and Juni are in flight to the castle when their autopilot fails, and Juni crashes the ship after assuming the manual controls.
- Carmen and Juni receive their mission from their uncle Izzy and make their way towards Floop's castle. Meanwhile, Floop turns against his partner and kidnaps Carmen and Juni's parents to blackmail Cortez into giving him the Third Brain.
- Carmen and Juni infiltrate Floop's castle to obtain the Third Brain, using gear provided by their uncle Izzy. Meanwhile, their parents are kidnapped by Floop to blackmail Cortez.
- Carmen and Juni infiltrate Floop's castle to get the Third Brain, while Floop uses their parents as leverage to get it from their father.
- Carmen and Juni infiltrate Floop's castle to obtain the Third Brain while their parents are held hostage. Juni discovers more about Floop's strange world as he encounters talking fingers.
- Juni and Carmen locate their kidnapped parents in Floop's castle and prepare to make their move to rescue them, while Floop expresses confusion about his own motives to Juni.
- Juni tries to shut down Floop's virtual room and succeeds, earning Floop's respect. Floop reveals that Minion is the evil one and he wants to stop him too. Juni and Carmen reunite and plan to rescue their parents from Minion. Minion prepares to transform the parents into mass entertainment toys.
- Juni and Carmen rescue their parents from Minion's clutches and prepare to take down the evil mastermind.
- The family rescues their parents, teams up with Floop, and prepares for the arrival of the Third Brain.
- Juni and Carmen team up with Floop to rescue their parents from Minion's clutches and stop him, while also using the Spy Kid army to overcome Lisp and his goons.
- Machete crashes through the window to help defeat Minion, while the family reconciles, rescues their parents, and stops Minion from transforming them into toys.
- The Cortez family reconciles, promising to never leave each other again. They also team up with Floop to include children on his show while their doppelganger robots fly free.
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Character Carmen
Description Carmen's behavior fluctuates between being a mature and resourceful older sister and a childish bully towards Juni. Her sudden change of heart at the end of sequence 33 feels abrupt and unjustified.
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Character Juni
Description Juni's sudden apology and admission of fault in sequence 33 seems out of character considering his established stubbornness and tendency to blame Carmen.
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Character Floop
Description Floop's motivations and characterization are inconsistent. He initially appears as a greedy and ambitious villain, but later reveals a reluctance towards violence and a desire to do good.
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Description The Third Brain's capabilities are inconsistently portrayed. It initially warns of the trap but is later deemed 'not fully functional' due to a virus.
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Description The ease with which Mom and Dad escape the virtual room and fall into the dining room seems convenient and lacks a clear explanation.
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Description The sudden appearance of Argonaut in the safehouse is unexplained and feels like a convenient plot device to aid the children.
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Description The robot children's ability to perfectly imitate Carmen and Juni, including their knowledge of personal secrets and behaviors, is not adequately explained.
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Element Bickering between Carmen and Juni
Suggestion While sibling rivalry is a central theme, the constant bickering becomes repetitive and could be reduced to maintain reader engagement.
Characters in the screenplay, and their arcs:
Character | Arc | Critique | Suggestions |
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Juni | Juni starts off as vulnerable and looking up to his siblings. Throughout the movie, he gains confidence and becomes more adventurous, brave, and resourceful. He learns to think before acting and apologize when necessary. Juni proves himself once again by shutting down Floop's virtual room, showing a noticeable character change. | The character arc for Juni seems a bit scattered, as the descriptions of his character vary widely throughout the movie. The transition from being vulnerable and looking up to his siblings, to being a brave and resourceful spy kid, could have been shown more clearly and consistently throughout the movie. | To improve the character arc for Juni, it would be helpful to establish clear character traits and motivations for him early on in the movie, and then show how these evolve and change as he gains experience and faces challenges. One way to do this would be to give him a specific goal or mission to accomplish, which would provide a clear through-line for his character development. |
Carmen | Carmen's character arc involves her moving from being a curious and attentive child to a bold and spunky teenager who is proactive, taking the initiative, and a skilled spy. Throughout the movie, she becomes more confident and independent, learning to trust her abilities and rely less on her parents. She also starts to understand the stakes of the mission and the danger they are in. Her main challenge is learning to trust others, which she overcomes by realizing the importance of teamwork and reminding her parents of the importance of family and staying together. By the end of the movie, she is a proactive, strong-willed, and resourceful spy who is focused on rescuing her parents and taking down the bad guys. | Although Carmen's character arc is well-written and shows clear growth in her character, there are several areas for improvement. For instance, her interactions with her brother Juni could be more nuanced, and they could have more moments of conflict and reconciliation to add depth to their relationship. Additionally, her mistrust of adults is never fully explained, and this could benefit from more exploration throughout the movie. Overall, her arc is predictable and could benefit from more unexpected plot twists and challenges to make it more engaging. | To improve Carmen's character arc, the movie could introduce more conflict and depth to her relationship with Juni, showing how their different personalities create tension and how they learn to support each other. Additionally, exploring the source of her mistrust of adults could add complexity to her backstory and provide more motivation for her actions throughout the movie. Finally, the movie could introduce more unexpected plot twists and challenges, such as a betrayal by a trusted ally, to keep the audience engaged and add more depth to Carmen's character arc. |
Felix | In the beginning of the movie, Felix is seen as a strict but caring father who is helping his children become spies. As the movie progresses, he takes on a more active role in their training and becomes a trusted ally. Throughout the movie, he faces multiple challenges and dangers, but always remains calm and collected, using his experience and expertise to help the spy kids escape and defend themselves. By the end of the movie, Felix has proven himself to be a capable and courageous ally, willing to do whatever it takes to protect his loved ones. | The character arc for Felix is strong, but could benefit from a clearer goal or motivation. While he is clearly committed to protecting his family and friends, it would be helpful to have a clearer understanding of why he became a spy in the first place, and what drives him to continue putting himself in danger. Additionally, while Felix is undeniably a capable and helpful character, he could benefit from more of an emotional journey - perhaps struggling with feelings of guilt or regret about the dangers he has put his family in, or grappling with the difficult choices he has had to make in order to protect them. | To improve Felix's character arc, it might be helpful to explore his backstory more deeply. What led him to become a spy? Was he driven by a sense of duty or a desire for adventure? What sacrifices has he made in the name of protecting his family? Giving Felix a clear motivation and backstory would help to deepen his character and make him feel more fully realized. Additionally, incorporating more emotional depth - perhaps in the form of guilt or regret - could add an extra layer of complexity to Felix's character, making him even more compelling and relatable. |
Mom | Mom's character arc involves her questioning her decision to go back into the field, but ultimately embracing her skillset to help her family. Her willingness to return to espionage reflects a strong desire to protect her loved ones. In the end, she learns to balance her past and present, embracing her family as well as her own strengths and experiences. | The character arc is strong overall, but there could be more exploration of Mom's reluctance to go back into espionage. Additionally, her decision to return to the field could be more clearly motivated by the needs of her family. | To improve the character arc, consider adding a scene where Mom expresses her doubts about returning to espionage more explicitly. Additionally, the family's situation could be more clearly defined so that Mom's choice to return to the field feels more motivated by their safety. |
Dad | Over the course of the movie, Dad undergoes a transformation from a serious and controlling figure to a more relaxed and adventurous one. As he confronts his past and faces his fears, he learns to trust his own instincts and rely on others for help. He becomes more willing to take risks, and ultimately shows himself to be a competent and resourceful spy. At the same time, he remains deeply committed to his family, and uses his intelligence and bravery to protect them from harm. | The character arc is well-constructed and believable, but it could benefit from a more fleshed-out exploration of Dad's internal conflict. While his past as a spy is alluded to throughout the movie, it is never fully explained, leaving the audience with a sense of ambiguity and confusion. Additionally, some of the scenes in which Dad is portrayed as fiercely protective of his family feel contrived and overstated, detracting from the subtler elements of his character. | To improve the character arc, it would be helpful to delve more deeply into Dad's backstory, and to explore the specific factors that led to his sense of internal conflict. This could be done through flashbacks to his days as a spy, or through conversations with other characters who knew him at that time. Additionally, some of the more overt displays of protectiveness could be toned down or reworked, in order to give the audience a better sense of the more nuanced aspects of Dad's personality. |
Argonaut | At first, Argonaut is just an adorable gadget dog that adds to the spy kids' tech arsenal. As the story progresses, he proves himself to be a valuable member of the team. When he reveals himself to be the Third Brain, his role in the group is solidified, and he becomes a trusted ally. He becomes more autonomous and takes on more responsibility in the group's operations. By the end of the movie, Argonaut is an integral part of the spy kids' team and proves to be indispensable. | The character arc for Argonaut works well within the context of the story. However, it would be beneficial to give him more agency and character development beyond being a helpful sidekick. It would be interesting to explore his motivations and desires beyond just serving the spy kids. | One way to improve Argonaut's character arc could be to give him a personal stake in the mission. Perhaps he has a personal connection to the villain or a previous mission. This would give him a deeper motivation for helping the spy kids beyond being programmed to do so. Additionally, exploring his relationship with Juni and the other spy kids could add another layer to his character development. |
Floop | Floop starts off as a villainous mastermind obsessed with creating twisted creatures and finding the 'Third Brain.' He tries to convince Felix to help him with his plans, showing his manipulative side. Carmen and Juni use their gadgets and skills to continue their mission. Floop is increasingly conflicted about his own plans and motivations, suggesting that he may not be in full control of the situation. He is manipulative and selfish but also artistically inclined. He regrets his past actions and wants to stop Minion from causing any more harm. Floop ultimately proves to be an ally in the end, taking Carmen's suggestion and incorporating their doppelganger robots in his show. | The character arc is well-rounded and shows Floop's growth from a villainous mastermind to a redeemed ally. However, there could be more emphasis on his vulnerable side and desire for acceptance throughout the movie to enhance his character development. | Include more scenes where Floop's insecurities and desire for acceptance are emphasized to highlight his character's vulnerability. Show Floop's relationship with Minion in more detail to further develop his conflicted emotions and motivations. |
Minion | Minion's character arc revolves around his journey from a loyal henchman to a monstrous villain. Throughout the movie, he becomes more deceitful and power-hungry, but he still maintains some of his loyalty to Floop. However, as he realizes the extent of Floop's deception, he begins to turn against him. His transformation into a monstrous villain is the result of his desire to become more powerful and control everything around him, including people's lives. In the end, Minion is defeated, but not before he realizes the error of his ways and sacrifices himself to save the protagonists. | The character arc is intriguing, but it could be more nuanced. Minion's transformation into a monstrous villain feels too sudden and almost forced. It would be better if his descent into evil was a gradual process with more buildup and foreshadowing. Additionally, his redemption at the end feels a bit forced, and it would be better if it were more earned. | To improve the character arc, consider adding more scenes that show Minion's descent into evil. Perhaps he could begin to have second thoughts about his actions or show more signs of guilt and remorse. Also, consider making his redemption more earned. Perhaps he could sacrifice himself to save the protagonists, but not before he has a moment with one of them where he apologizes for his actions and tries to make amends. |
Theme | Theme Details | Themee Explanation |
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Spy Work and Espionage | The parents work as spies and are on a mission to find Donnagon and Jack Braxford. They also discuss their espionage work and future plans over breakfast. Carmen and Juni also receive help from their parents' agency to escape from Floop's agents. | The theme of spy work and espionage is significant throughout the screenplay, as it forms the basis of the story. It is a theme that shows the importance of the work that the parents do as spies, which helps to save lives and protect people from danger. It also highlights the challenges that spies face, and the need for collaboration and teamwork to achieve success. |
Family Bonds and Love | The Cortez family works together to save their parents from Floop's captivity. They also pledge to undertake missions together to keep the family together. Carmen and Juni ask their mom to tell them a story about two spies who fall in love. The mom tells a story about a woman spy sent to kill a man spy but they end up falling in love. Carmen then hears a story about two spies who get married, despite being from opposite sides. | The theme of family bonds and love is essential in the screenplay, as it shows the importance of family and the bond that exists within a family. It highlights how working and supporting each other can lead to success and help overcome challenges. The theme also emphasizes the strength of love and how it can bring together diverse cultures and backgrounds. |
Creativity and Invention | Mr. Floop presents his latest invention to criminals for approval. Floop realizes he needs the Third Brain to boost creativity and creates robot twins that the siblings fight. Floop and Minion discuss cloning world leaders' children for their program. | The theme of creativity and invention is notable in the screenplay, as it highlights the importance of innovation and creativity in problem-solving. It emphasizes how creativity can lead to the development of new technologies and help overcome challenges. The theme also presents the ethical dilemmas arising from the abuse of creativity and the potential for negative consequences of new inventions. |
Heroism and Bravery | Carmen and Juni escape from Floop's agents with the help of Argonaut. They use gadgets to evade pursuit and end up in a Woolworth's, where they discover the Third Brain's importance. Carmen and Juni successfully infiltrate the castle using Izzy's gear. Juni uses an electro gumball to shut down Floop's virtual room, and they finish saving their parents before Dad forcibly teaches Minion a lesson. The Cortez family rescues their parents and prevents Minion from turning them into toys. XS and Y6 become renowned for their heroism. | The theme of heroism and bravery is notable in the screenplay, as it highlights the importance of courage and determination in overcoming challenges. It emphasizes how ordinary people can become heroes when they act courageously and that anyone can be a hero, regardless of their age or background. The theme also highlights the importance of working together to achieve success. |
Technology and Innovation | The Cortez family uses gadgets to evade pursuit and overcome obstacles. Floop presents his latest invention to criminals and uses new technologies to create robot twins. Carmen discovers a locator and receives a message from Felix to find Machete, and the siblings manage to convince him to let them use the Beijing Express. | The theme of technology and innovation is notable in the screenplay, as it highlights the importance of technology in overcoming challenges and achieving success. It emphasizes how new technologies can help solve problems and create new opportunities. The theme also presents the potential ethical dilemmas arising from the use of technology and the responsibility that comes with its development and use. |
Screenwriting Resources on Themes
Articles
Site | Description |
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Studio Binder | Movie Themes: Examples of Common Themes for Screenwriters |
Coverfly | Improving your Screenplay's theme |
John August | Writing from Theme |
YouTube Videos
Title | Description |
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Story, Plot, Genre, Theme - Screenwriting Basics | Screenwriting basics - beginner video |
What is theme | Discussion on ways to layer theme into a screenplay. |
Thematic Mistakes You're Making in Your Script | Common Theme mistakes and Philosophical Conflicts |
Story Content | Character Development | Scene Elements | Audience Engagement | ||||||||||
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Click for Full Analysis | Tone | Overall | Concept | Plot | Characters | Character Changes | Conflict | High stakes | Story forward | Emotional Impact | Dialogue | ||
1 - Bedtime Story: The Two Spies Who Fell in Love | "Light-hearted" | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 6 | 5 | 6 | 6 | 7 | ||
2 - The Two Spies Who Fell in Love: Marriage | "nostalgic" | 8 | 9 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 3 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | ||
3 - The Spy Wedding and Retirement | "light-hearted" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 5 | 8 | ||
4 - Spy Parents' Discussion | "Serious" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 4 | 6 | 6 | 7 | 5 | 9 | ||
5 - Morning Training and Breakfast Banter | "Playful" | 8 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 6 | 4 | 7 | 7 | 7 | ||
6 - Breakfast Banter | "Light-hearted" | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 4 | 5 | 8 | ||
7 - Spy Family Morning | "Light-hearted, playful" | 7 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 5 | 4 | 6 | ||
8 - Espionage Plans Revealed | "Serious" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 7 | ||
9 - FLOOP | "Suspenseful" | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
10 - Spy Parents Go Back in Action | "Light-hearted" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 6 | 7 | ||
11 - Underwater Encounter with Criminals | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 6 | 7 | ||
12 - Escape to the Safehouse | "Intense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
13 - Escape from Pursuers | "Tense" | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 9 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 8 | ||
14 - Escape to the Safehouse | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 8 | ||
15 - Spy Kids Taken to Safehouse | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
16 - Spy Kids at the Safehouse | "Tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 8 | 10 | 9 | 7 | 7 | ||
17 - Safehouse Intruder | "tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 7 | ||
18 - Floop's Interrogation and Safehouse Exploration | "Suspenseful" | 8.5 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | ||
19 - Discovering the Truth | "suspenseful" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
20 - Escape from the Safehouse | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 7 | ||
21 - Escape from the Safehouse | "Tense, adrenaline-fueled" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 9 | 8 | 7 | ||
22 - Escape from Woolworth's | "Light-hearted and adventurous" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
23 - The Spy Kids Escape | "Light-hearted" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 4 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 6 | ||
24 - Secret Center | "Light-hearted" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 1 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 4 | 7 | ||
25 - Robot Twins Fight | "Fast-paced, humorous" | 9 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 10 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 7 | ||
26 - Machete's Spy Shop | "Serious" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
27 - Meeting with Uncle Izzy | "Exciting" | 8 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 5 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 7 | ||
28 - Machete's Wisdom | "Humorous adventure" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 8 | ||
29 - Family Secrets and Flight Mishaps | "Serious" | 7 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 8 | 6 | 6 | ||
30 - Infiltrating Floop's Castle | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 8 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | ||
31 - Infiltrating Floop's Castle | "tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 10 | 10 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
32 - Infiltration and Blackmail | "Tense" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 7 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 6 | 7 | ||
33 - Infiltrating Floop's castle | "Light-hearted" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 5 | 6 | ||
34 - Juni and Carmen find their parents | "Tense" | 8 | 8 | 8 | 7 | 6 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
35 - Juni and Floop's Deal | "light-hearted" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 6 | 8 | ||
36 - Rescue Gone Right | "Tense" | 7 | 7 | 8 | 6 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
37 - Rescue and Redemption | "upbeat" | 8 | 7 | 8 | 7 | 5 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 6 | 7 | ||
38 - Rescuing the Parents and Stopping Minion | "tense" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 8 | 7 | 10 | 11 | 10 | 7 | 8 | ||
39 - The Final Showdown | "upbeat" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 8 | ||
40 - Family Reunited | "Upbeat" | 9 | 8 | 9 | 9 | 7 | 3 | 3 | 8 | 8 | 9 |
Summary of Scene Level Analysis
Here are some things that came out of the scene level analysis.
This is a summary of the strengths, weaknesses, and suggestions found in each scene. Some things might appear in both strengths and weaknesses based on the variety of your scenes.
For summary of each criteria click in the top row on the criteria.
Scene Strengths
- Intense action and surprise turn of events
- Effective use of suspense and humor, introduction of new characters and gadgets, moves the plot forward
- The imaginative concept of Floop's castle and its inhabitants create a fascinating world for the characters to explore and infiltrate.
- Fast-paced action sequence with inventive use of gadgets. Creative setting and visuals. Humorous moments and witty banter between the siblings.
- Successful set-up of the parents' mission
Scene Weaknesses
- Lack of action and tension, no clear indication of how this scene contributes to the overall plot.
- Less development of supporting characters, Some scenes lack action/are too dialogue-heavy
- Dialogue could be stronger
- The dialogue between Floop and Juni feels somewhat unnecessary and does not provide much in way of character development. The emotional impact of finding their parents in danger is not fully realized.
- Minimal character development or growth
Suggestions
- To improve the screenplay, the writers may focus on a clear plot thread and ensure that the dialogue is well-motivated with a good balance between action and exposition.
- Developing the supporting characters and world-building further would help the audience feel more invested in the story.
- The writers may try to condense some of the dialogue and ensure that it flows naturally with more engaging dialogue choices.
- To increase the emotional impact and character development, the writers should focus on setting up conflicts that are more personal to the characters and their motivations.
- The writers may also want to entertain the possibility of pacing the events of the story better to increase suspense and the dramatic stakes.
Top Correlations and patterns found in the scenes:
Pattern | Explanation |
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Emotional Impact vs Overall Grade | There is a positive correlation between Emotional Impact and Overall Grade, suggesting that the more emotionally impactful the story, the higher the overall grade given by the reader. |
Dialogue vs Character Changes | There is a positive correlation between Dialogue and Character Changes, suggesting that the more dialogue in the script, the greater the opportunity to show changes in the characters. |
Conflict vs High Stakes | There is a positive correlation between Conflict and High Stakes, indicating that the higher the stakes, the greater the possibility for conflict in the story. |
Concept vs Plot | There is a positive correlation between Concept and Plot, indicating that a strong and well-developed concept can lead to a strong plot. |
Tense vs High Stakes | There is a positive correlation between Tense and High Stakes, suggesting that a higher level of tension is often associated with high stakes in the story. |
Light-hearted vs Move Story Forward | There is a positive correlation between Light-hearted tone and moving the story forward, indicating that lighter moments can help move the story forward and keep the audience engaged. |
Serious vs Emotional Impact | There is a positive correlation between Serious tone and Emotional Impact, suggesting that a serious tone can be effective in eliciting emotional responses from the audience. |
Fast-paced vs High Stakes | There is a positive correlation between Fast-paced and High Stakes, indicating that a fast pace is often associated with high stakes and a sense of urgency in the story. |
Humorous Adventure vs Emotional Impact | There is a negative correlation between Humorous Adventure and Emotional Impact, suggesting that a story that is too focused on humor may not be as emotionally impactful. |
Tense vs Adrenaline-fueled | There is a positive correlation between Tense and Adrenaline-fueled, indicating that a high level of tension can create a sense of adrenaline and excitement in the audience. |
Here are different Tropes found in the screenplay
Trope | Trope Details | Trope Explanation |
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Bedtime Story | Carmen and Juni ask their mom for a bedtime story about two spies who fall in love. | A scene or device in which a character tells or reads a story to ease tension, or as a way of framing the plot. Example: The Princess Bride. |
Spy Fiction | The screenplay is centered around the espionage work of the Cortez family and their allies. | A genre that centers around spies, espionage, and intelligence operations. Example: James Bond franchise. |
Mistaken for Spies | The parents disguise their equipment as a normal couple's car. | A plot device in which characters are suspected to be spies or have secret motives due to their actions or appearances. Example: The Tourist. |
Ambush | The spy kids are ambushed by unknown forces after being taken to a safehouse. | A surprise attack on a group of characters, typically by an enemy force. Example: Saving Private Ryan. |
Gadgetry | The spy kids use gadgets to evade pursuit and fight robot twins. | The use of advanced technology and devices by characters to accomplish tasks, particularly in spy or action stories. Example: Mission: Impossible franchise. |
Secret Agent | The Cortez siblings visit their uncle who is a secret agent and provides them with gear and a plan to infiltrate Floop's castle. | A character who is employed or affiliated with a government agency and engages in covert operations. Example: Kingsman: The Secret Service. |
Kid Hero | The spy kids, Carmen and Juni, are the main protagonists and heroes of the story. | A story that focuses on young characters who take on adult roles and responsibilities, particularly in action or adventure genres. Example: Stranger Things. |
Rescue Mission | Carmen and Juni plan to rescue their parents from Floop's castle. | A plot device or storyline where characters embark on a mission to save someone from danger or captivity. Example: Die Hard. |
Family Bonding | The Cortez family resolves their conflicts and decides to undertake missions together to keep the family together. | A theme or subplot that emphasizes the importance of family relationships and reconciliation. Example: The Incredibles. |
Happy Ending | The Cortez family reunites and watches as their robotic children take off on Buddy Packs, ready to explore the world. | A conclusion or resolution where conflicts are resolved, and characters find happiness and fulfillment. Example: Cinderella. |
Memorable lines in the script:
Scene Number | Line |
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4 | DAD: This computer I've built doesn't just calculate, it thinks. |
5 | Carmen: You just fell 1000 feet. You're a pancake. |
7 | Carmen: He's not my brother. He's a bulbous, vomitus, cancerous growth, festering on my extremity like an underdeveloped twin. That one day I will have professionally removed. |
19 | Carmen: The Third Brain. It's all my Dad's been working on since, well, my whole life. |
36 | Dad: I'm going to show you what happens when you cross the line and involve family. |
Some Loglines to consider:
When their parents, a pair of retired secret agents, are kidnapped, two young siblings must use their wits and the gadgets from their family's spy past to rescue them and stop a diabolical plot. |
A pair of kids discover their parents' secret lives as spies and are drawn into a high-stakes adventure to save their family and the world from a mad inventor's nefarious scheme. |
A brother and sister accidentally uncover their family's spy legacy and must embrace their own hidden talents to confront a former colleague of their parents who has sinister plans for their unique abilities. |
Two children find themselves at the center of a global espionage conspiracy when their parents, legendary secret agents, are targeted by a brilliant but unhinged inventor seeking to harness their special skills. |
In a world where children are the ultimate secret agents, a pair of siblings must use their wits, courage, and family's spy training to rescue their parents and stop a mad genius from unleashing an army of robotic menaces. |
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